Talk:Jos LeDuc

message: :GA review (see here for criteria)
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===Specific comments===
*expand the WP:LEAD to answer the question: why was he a notable wrestler? It doesn't "stand alone as a concise overview of the article". The article has the beginning and the end but it is missing the best part: the middle. Important championships should be noted.GaryColemanFan (talk) 03:02, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I believe these have all been addressed aside from the Hall of Fame. The SLAM! Wrestling Canadian Hall of Fame isn't an actual hall of fame in the usual sense. It is a central site from which SLAM! links their articles on Canadian wrestlers. There are no inductions and the only real requirement seems to be having some connection to Canada (citizenship, extended stay, or wrestling for a significant Canadian promotion for a while). GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:08, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Good call about not doing the "Hall of Fame" since it's not legit. I marked it as not done. I'll read through the article again plus review the changes. Royalbroil 13:11, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA review

message: *expand the WP:LEAD to answer the question: why was he a notable wrestler? It doesn't "stand alone as a concise overview of the article". The article has the beginning and the end but it is missing the best part: the middle. Important championships should be noted.GaryColemanFan (talk) 03:02, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I believe these have all been addressed aside from the Hall of Fame. The SLAM! Wrestling Canadian Hall of Fame isn't an actual hall of fame in the usual sense. It is a central site from which SLAM! links their articles on Canadian wrestlers. There are no inductions and the only real requirement seems to be having some connection to Canada (citizenship, extended stay, or wrestling for a significant Canadian promotion for a while). GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:08, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Good call about not doing the "Hall of Fame" since it's not legit. I marked it as not done. I'll read through the article again plus review the changes. Royalbroil 13:11, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Specific comments

message: *(optional) The Yukon Lumberjacks - that article talks about them being wrestlers from 1978, so how could the LeDuc's be inspired from them in the late 1960s? It's not required for GA since you are not required to improve other articles. You probably should do it if you want to obtain FA.
*"but they were booked to lose it later that year". I'm unclear - were they booked to "lose" and they quit before the storyline played out or did they quit after they "lost"?
*"were involved in an angle" still not addressed (or there were 2 instances). How about replacing "in which" with "where"
*"he wrestled as The Headbanger during an episode" Do you mean that he wrestled under the name "The Headbanger"?
The Japanese media's description of LeDuc as "maniacal" and "demented" is excellent! I added a link to his Internet Movie Database page. Royalbroil 13:58, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Second reading

message: You have addressed by concerns, and I believe the article passes the Good Article criteria! The reviewer is asked to provide some suggestions about how to improve the article. Suggestions that I have for improving it to Featured Article status would be to work a little on expanding the the flow between the different series. You could add some fluff between the meaty facts in the article. A little more context would be helpful: some explanation about the state of wrestling during his career since it's a lot different than things are now. Royalbroil 17:03, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Good Article criteria met

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