Talk:Angiogenesis inhibitor

message: Cediranib (Recentin) since it's a VEGF inhibitor should be somewhere in the Exogenous table ? Rod57 (talk) 00:56, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cediranib 

message: Are there any unwanted side effects or toxicity in reducing angiogenesis in mature mammals ? Rod57 (talk) 01:05, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Side-effects 

message: Rglastet (talk) 06:11, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Article Improvements

message: This article was heavily modified on March 18th, 2014. Are there any problems with what we've added/subtracted? Please see the page history for details.
Curtis Bixenstine (talk) 02:34, 19 March 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Any Suggestions/Objections? 

message: * The section on the Mechanism of Action could use more information. In an article like this, I believe you could go into cellular detail.
Done Curtis Bixenstine (talk) 22:19, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: * The first two sentences also need citations, but only once if it is the same one. Biolprof (talk) 22:00, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

text: * Correct - just once in any article, the first time it is used in the body of the text (not in a header).Biolprof (talk) 22:00, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from [[User: Ecapelle]] 

message: *There are a few scientific terms that need to either be explained, or linked to their own article if possible, eg-"monoclonal antibodies" under exogenous regulation
Added more links. Rglastet (talk) 05:23, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from Jtrivedi92 for 2nd peer review 

message: This article is being reviewed for this class. I began these notes before your peer reviews were posted, so some may be redundant.
* In the lead, add wikilinks to endogenous (and/or define) and drugs (pharmaceutical drugs). Other wikilink suggestions: extracellular matrix, basement membrane, genes, and others…
Wikilinks added Rglastet (talk) 05:54, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from [[User:Biolprof|Biolprof]] 

message: These comments are apart of this assignment.
* I think the article could benefit from some external links especially in the side effects section. Such as for hand-foot syndrome and bowel perforation. 
* If you think you added a significant amount of information, you can consider changing the class of the article. To be on the safe side I would change it to a C class. You would go into the template and change to Class=C. Rraju2 (talk) 17:08, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from Rraju2 for Final contribution 

message: *a picture would greatly improve this article, maybe even just a simple one of the process of angiogenesis, or of blood vessels
*paragraph: VEG pathway inhibition. You have two paragraphs but the second paragraph is only one phrase. It could be presented in a better way.
*consider changing the class of the article to something higher than start-class
Jfriend2 (talk) 18:08, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from [[User: Jfriend2]] 

message: *Under the Mechanism of Action section you say, "Before we describe... Perhaps this is just a stylistic opinion, but I think it is best to avoid using the first (and second) person in formal and didactic writing (such as that found in an encyclopedia). Consider rewording this to keep it (and the rest of the article) in the third person.
**The same for using "our body" later in that same sentence. 
** both deleted Biolprof (talk) 18:13, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments from Estephe9

message: *you should add some pictures from your class presentation that clarify the process of angiogenesis or angiogenesis inhibition.
*the process of angiogenesis induced by tumors or inhibition thereof could be explained in more molecular detail. Maybe add more links to relevant molecules  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtrivedi92 (talk • contribs) 20:52, 10 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from Jtrivedi92 

message: *It looks like you have an improperly added source #6 at the end of VEGF pathway inhibition.
**fixed Biolprof (talk) 20:11, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from iamwillthinnes 

message: google for {garlic angiogenesis inhibitor} and {cinnamon angiogenesis inhibitor} returns lots of claims for that. 76.119.30.87 (talk) 19:21, 19 November 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  garlic and cinnamon not listed; maybe diet section seriously incomplete? 

message: doi:10.1016/S0140-6736(15)01088-0 JFW | T@lk 23:51, 30 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lancet review re oncology