Talk:Moriah College

message: The quality of this article suggests it has been written by junior students who should have spent more time in class, rather than on Wikipedia. For example: "In 2005 it was found that a knife culture was present among students of Moriah College. This news sent shockwaves around the Sydney Jewish community.[5] The culprit involved was since asked to leave the school, to which he complied."
One "culprit" (sic) represents a "culture"?
Or another example: "In 2007 Moriah made headlines". Sorry, "headlines" in the local Jewish newspaper, is hardly "making headlines". It seems to be little more than scuttlebutt.
Don't even get me started on "Notably, Moriah controversially does not accept students who are not Jewish", which is neither notable, nor well written.
This whole piece needs a rework.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.206.174.152 (talk) 00:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Lousy quality

message: The information in the opening paragraph of the article as well as some information in other sections appears to be directly copied from Moriah's official page on their core values. The History section is also astonishingly similar to Moriah's page on its history. Blatant copyvio here. I don't want to put the copyvio tag in though, because I'd ruin the article, and I don't want to do that, it promotes the school well :) . I'll see if I can rewrite it, but I'll speak to User:Barkochbar about it first. -- Daverocks (talk) 07:15, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, so he got permission from the president of the College to use it. Sounds strange, I know, but trust me, it's true. -- Daverocks (talk) 13:09, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Just chiming in again, the above information is completely irrelevant now because it referred to the old article, which was deleted for copyvio. -- Daverocks (talk) 13:16, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyvio?

message: Unfortunately the school is very unhappy with this article. Can it be deleted ASAP? -- Barkochbar 22:54, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Deletion 

message: a famous person who went to moriah college which needs to be updated is Jessika Allen (Feldheim)  she is the designer of Jets Swimwear 
Guskug975 (talk) 11:27, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. GaneshBhakt (talk) 12:13, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request from Guskug975, 3 June 2011 

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