Talk:Rudy Giuliani 2008 presidential campaign

message: A passage on Giuliani's name recognition and on comparisons of voter assessments of negative and positive qualities of candidates was referenced as "recent."  Given that this and many election seasons are fast-evolving, it is necessary to precisely say what "recent" means.  Actually, the reference from the passage was a July 21, 2006 page.  
A great deal has changed in the Republican race since the poll and the article which developed from it.  It is for this reason, that I have removed this notably dated passage. Dogru144 03:55, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Need for truly recent references

message: This article is really bad and is just a constant bashing of Giuliani, I will rewrite it tomorrow.--Southern Texas 05:39, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I have reverted your edits. You nearly cut the article in half, and that information was sourced. Also, I object to your reorganization strongly. "Strengths" and "Weaknesses" is complete political commentary and should be kept out of the article. His views are found at Political positions of Rudy Giuliani, where they belong. If you feel the article is slanted against him (and I admit having controversies before development seems shaky to me), add facts that are absent and remove any commentary, for or against Giuliani. Also, see wikipedia's policies on verifiability, neutrality, and original research. Atropos 00:21, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

text: Also, the supporter's arguments should be renamed and become a section on different commentary on why he can or cannot win, rather than an argument for his ability to win. I encourage you to improve this article, just remember to keep anything you add neutral and verified. Atropos 00:24, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Putting the "campaign development" section further up wouldn't make much difference, since most of its items are slanted against Giuliani too.  Wasted Time R 02:08, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: If you want to write about criticisms put it on the criticisms page. This page is about the campaign, it doesn't matter if it was sourced because it had nothing to do with what this page is about. I am not adding commentary but putting the strengths and weaknesses of his campaign and not talking about stuff like some opinion of somebody that nobody has even heard of. I removed the bogus stuff and added some stuff so that if somebody wants to read this article they can see the pro and cons and strengths and weaknesses of the campaign. I just wrote an article about Joe Biden and I used the exact same format.--Southern Texas 04:58, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Just because you've used it before doesn't mean it isn't wrong. Defining certain political views as strengths or weaknesses is obviously commentary. Atropos 08:50, 6 July 2007 (UTC)

text: You don't understand the problem. You're taking certain qualities and defining them as strengths or weaknesses. To make that call on a certain trait of the candidate is to provide original commentary and can't be included. Atropos 18:12, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thats because they should be defined as strengths or weaknesses. All campaigns have attributes that help them and attributes that hurt them, strengths and weaknesses. Its not commentary is just mainstream political facts about the campaign, the strengths help the candidate and the weaknesses hurt them, I am not stating my opinions on the matter its all understood, Giuliani's campaign is helped by the quality of leadership, position on terrorism(to republicans), and lowering of the crime rate in NYC, these are all things that will help the campaign, things that will hurt the campaign(to republicans) are his divorces and his pro-choice stand, its all understood I am not saying he is right or he is wrong but just stating facts about what could lead to a victory for the campaign and what could lead to a defeat. If you would like to add something I encourage it, but please try to tone down the POV, this article was a POV nightmare until I reorganized and erased sourced bits that had nothing at all to do with the campaign, Thank you--Southern Texas 18:22, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The article is better than it was before after I reinstated some of the previous information.  I added a "Supporters' arguments" and "Detractors' arguments" which is similar to the style of Hillary Clinton's presidential campaign page.  The bits on the Iowa family and the South Carolina Confederate flag are directly related to the campaign, yet your edit description said that they should be placed in the general criticism section of Giuliani's main article.  That's not the case, they belong here and I have reinstated most of them, leaving out the ones that are included in the main article.--Gloriamarie 00:13, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Please give a reason for such a major edit and don't just say that you did it because it is on the Hillary page, its all confusing now, unorganized and hard to read, if you want to add the stuff you added add to the weaknesses, I'll be fine with that, just don't restructure it so much that it scares people away and it becomes too confusing for any resonable person to want to read.--Southern Texas 04:25, 9 July 2007 (UTC)

text: Thank you for that much needed comment when in fact the strengths and weaknesses categories are no longer in this article or the Joe Biden article, I'll admit that I was wrong, but I wasn't wrong when I said that this was in fact a Giuliani attack page, I believe that I fixed the article and also fixed my somewhat biased tone. The article is great now and I am proud of it.--Southern Texas 21:00, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: This article is bad

message: I am proud to say that after a few changes the article is now good and ceases to be an attack page. It now represents the facts in an NPOV manner.--Southern Texas 23:48, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: This article is good

message: Someone should note that the particular fire fighter group that has criticized Rudy's performance tends to be a partisan group, or rather that's what the Campaign said.Arnabdas 17:08, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll try to find it, but I think it was a press release. The AP article actually said it too I think.Arnabdas 14:39, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fire Fighter Controversy 

message: The Associated Press ran an article a few months back about how Rudy is out of touch with voters by incorrectly noting the pricing of bread and milk. The AP quoted prices of D'Agostino's, a high end mini market that caters to elite Manhanttanites (and therefore marks up prices). Most people don't buy bread and milk from ultra high end places like that. The prices he actually quoted werent too far off. Not sure if it is noteworthy or not. Arnabdas 17:12, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  AP Bias 

message: When one compares the size of the lead photo of the first and second tier Republican candidates for the presidency in 2008, it is apparent that the image for Giuliani is much larger than other than the lead image of the other candidates. Dogru144 12:36, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I made the image smaller.--Southern Texas 17:34, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: [[WP:POV]] in image size

message: I know that it isn't common to include a section on campaign staff/advisors, but I think that in the light of recent developments (ie: Carl Rove, Harriet Miers, Michael Brown etc.) there is a growing concern over a candidate's ability to choose staffmembers.  Some of these advisors are potential cabinet members should the candidate be elected.   I am proposing the inclusion of prominent staff/advisors (and a short bio) to all candidates' campaign entries in order to help voters better understand each candidates' ability to judge character.  I believe that attention is inordinately focussed on individual candidates, when in fact, the major influence on any new administration will be in the advisors surrounding the new president.  Your input would be greatly appreciated.  ----Rawkcuf.    (In the interest of uniformity, this is the same 'form letter' I've sent to other candidates' entries.  I'm impressed that you are on the ball, and already have two entries referring to staff appointments. Might I suggest combining them into one  entry, and adding more as necessary. Thanks, -R.)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rawkcuf (talk • contribs) 04:20, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Makes sense.  See Hillary_Rodham_Clinton_presidential_campaign%2C_2008#Campaign_staff for existing case.  Wasted Time R 16:27, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Re: Campaign Advisors 

message: I took out the part that says he would be the first atheist president.  Just because some poll says something doesn't make it absolute truth. 75.67.142.56 15:16, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Atheist?

message: I revereted something that said he was "pro-abortion".  As far as I know, he doesn't actually support abortion, but supports people being allowed to choose.  Would someone comment on this? 75.67.142.56 19:09, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Pro-choice vs. Pro-abortion

message: I noticed these on Romney's articles as well. As far as I know normal articles don't present these many graphs in excess. You don't write scientific articles this way. You refer to images in the text. These images are just pasted blatanly filling more than half the article. It is very annoying, disruptive for reading and actually not very informative either in the context and layout they are presented. Lord Metroid 21:09, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I understand your concerns so I moved the charts to the end of the article so that all of the textual information is at the beginning of the article to be read.--Southern Texas 17:25, 20 October 2007 (UTC)

text: Johnpseudo has now nuked all the graphs.  That seems a little excessive to me; they constitute useful, objective data, something articles like this need all they can get of.  What if the graphs are restored but wrapped inside a colored "show" bar, the same way Endorsements are handled?  Wasted Time R 00:41, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Graphs, Diagrams, polls, I am getting dizzy

message: We shouldn't be copying an entire 1.5 page section directly from his campaign website to the article.  The source is not neutral, and the weight is not balanced. johnpseudo 00:46, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: That the source is not neutral is irrelevant — we're describing Giuliani's campaign platform, of course that platform is not a neutral document.  The weighting is okay for me, for taken as a group the Giuliani articles are skewed badly to the anti-Giuliani side.  However, the issue is one of appropriateness of encyclopedic content.  We shouldn't be including a verbatim document like this, no matter what its neutrality or weighting.  Contract with America doesn't include the text of the Contract, and that's a lot more famous a campaign platform than this is.  Wasted Time R 01:05, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Okay, I agree.  That's a better reason to get rid of it or summarize it. johnpseudo 17:07, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, you got rid of it completely, which isn't right.  I've put in a 'Campaign developments' section that mentions it, but the summarization needs a little expansion.  Wasted Time R 22:38, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: "Twelve Commitments to the American People"

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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Giuliani ad.jpg

message: 1 link commented out - Footage a speech - Is uploader the originator of the footage? It wasn't clear from the clip information or uploader profile.. Sfan00 IMG (talk) 12:19, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Commented You Tube link (1) 

message: 1 link commented out -  Footage of a political rally. Is uploader the originator of the footage? It wasn't clear from the clip information/uploader profile. Sfan00 IMG (talk) 12:23, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Commented You Tube link (2) 

message: The significance the event in this section needs to be expanded more. Right now it's just an exchange between him and another candidate, with little significance noted. Quanticles (talk) 14:35, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  May 15 GOP South Carolina debate 

message: An editor is repeatedly erasing details that provide support to the claim as to secuity details for Judith Giuliani.  
For the record, the gutted details follow:
" A neighborhood witness, Lee Degenstein, claimed [in a published December 7, 2007 Daily News report] that the security began at some unspecified time earlier in 2000.  His statement placed the security detail as beginning earlier than the previously stated May 2000 date. Furthermore, Degenstein provided details of the security protection: "The windows were all blacked out, it [the car] had several antennas affixed to the trunk and of course had the orange E-ZPass stuck in the front windshield," in reference to the colored toll devices stuck to municipal cars.  Michael Saul, Heidi Evans, and David Saltonstall, "Mayor's Gal Got Security Earlier than We Knew" "New York Daily News" p. 7 December 7, 2007 http://www.nydailynews.com/news/politics/2007/12/07/2007-12-07_judith_nathan_got_security_earlier.html " Dogru144 (talk) 19:34, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I removed your earlier edit here not because I doubted the Daily News story, but because you were confused on it on two points:  one, the Giuliani-Nathan relationship began in May 1999, not early 2000; two, the security detail in this article is different from the one in the Politico article.  Politico refers to legitimate security (but billed oddly to obscure city agencies) for Giuliani while visiting Nathan, while the Daily News story reveals possibly bogus security (more like chauffering) for Nathan before her relationship with Giuliani was even public.  Any addition we make here has to reflect that.  Wasted Time R (talk) 01:16, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Erasure of details regarding testimony regarding the security detail

message: The information expands on previously reported information.  The information is more precise that the generalizations in the politico.com article.  The information is backed by an identified reference.  For the sake of context, what follows is the text from opening of the New York Daily News report of December 7, 2007:
"Mayor's Gal Got Security Earlier than We Knew" -title.  "Judith Nathan got taxpayer-funded chauffeur services from the NYPD earlier than previously disclosed --even before her affair with then-Mayor Rudy Giuliani was revealed, witnesses and sources tell the Daily News.
"It went on for months before the affair went public," said Lee Degenstein, 52, a retired Smith Barney vice president who formerly lived at 200 E. 94th St., Nathan's old building.
"It was going on longer than anybody though," added Degenstein, who, along with others in the neighborhood, said they often saw Nathan hopping into unmarked NYPD cars in early 2000 before the affair was revealed that May." Michael Saul, Heidi Evans, and David Saltonstall, "Mayor's Gal Got Security Earlier than We Knew" "New York Daily News" p. 7 December 7, 2007 http://www.nydailynews.com/news/politics/2007/12/07/2007-12-07_judith_nathan_got_security_earlier.html Dogru144 (talk) 00:09, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I removed your earlier edit here not because I doubted the Daily News story, but because you were confused on it on two points:  one, the Giuliani-Nathan relationship began in May 1999, not early 2000; two, the security detail in this article is different from the one in the Politico article.  Politico refers to legitimate security (but billed oddly to obscure city agencies) for Giuliani while visiting Nathan, while the Daily News story reveals possibly bogus security (more like chauffering) for Nathan before her relationship with Giuliani was even public.  Any addition we make here has to reflect that.  Wasted Time R (talk) 01:16, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Context as to relevance of the added reference

message: User Southern Texas has blanked out the material on Giuliani's professional association with the Abdullah Bin Khalid Al-Thani minister of the Interior (Qatar).  This is completely relevant material.
Giuliani has based his entire campaign around September 11.  It is controversial and POV to remove a multi-reference contribution that validly documents his professional association with a Qatari minsiter (and royal house member) that sheltered an al Qaeda associate that was being pursued by the FBI.  Let wikipedia editors and administrators judge for themselves the validity and pertinence of said material to the discussion:  Here is what Tex gutted out:
===Giuliani Partners ties to Chavez and Al Thani===
Giuliani's consultancy firm, Giuliani Partners, attracted controversy over its associations with Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez and Qatar Minister of the Interior Abdullah Bin Khalid Al-Thani. (The latter was disclosed in an investigative journalism piece in the Village Voice.) Chavez has aroused controversy for his consolidation of power and his anti-capitalist rhetoric. Al Thani has aroused controversy because he sheltered September 11 mastermind Khalid Sheikh Mohammed from the FBI. Russ Buettner, "New York Times," March 15, 2007 http://www.nytimes.com/2007/03/15/us/politics/15rudy.html?ref=politics&pagewanted=all  Giuliani had already stepped down as CEO and Chairman of Giuliani Partners in June 2007, although this action was not disclosed publicly. On December 4, 2007, in the wake of the latest attention to the firm's client base, Giuliani Partners announced the stepping down, with Giuliani defending his work there, saying, "Everything I did at Giuliani Partners was totally legal, totally ethical. There's nothing for me to explain about. We acted honorably, decently." Giuliani maintained his equity interest in the firm.
Dogru144 (talk) 01:37, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It is, but the connection needs to be better cited.  I'll do it a bit later after the edit warring has died down; being whipsawed between you and Dogru is not what I'm here for.  Wasted Time R (talk) 01:50, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll step aside and let you fix it.--STX 01:51, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

text: The Chavez bit was old news and not a factor in the recent campaign, so I removed it.  The discussion of Al-Thani was slanted because it left the impression that he sheltered KSM after 9/11, when in fact that happened five years before in 1996.  I've reworked the rest of it, added the NYT Ethopian story re B&G, and given a couple of cites saying these client-base stories have contributed to Giuliani's recent decline in the polls.  As with everything in this article, the importance of these developments may increase or decrease in retrospect.  Wasted Time R (talk) 22:05, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Erasure of Al Thani association

message: Giuliani's consultancy firm, Giuliani Partners, attracted controversy over its associations with Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez and Qatar Minister of the Interior Abdullah Bin Khalid Al-Thani. (The latter was disclosed in an investigative journalism piece in the Village Voice.) Chavez has aroused controversy for his consolidation of power and his anti-capitalist rhetoric. Al Thani has aroused controversy because he sheltered September 11 mastermind Khalid Sheikh Mohammed from the FBI. Russ Buettner, "New York Times," March 15, 2007 http://www.nytimes.com/2007/03/15/us/politics/15rudy.html?ref=politics&pagewanted=all  Giuliani had already stepped down as CEO and Chairman of Giuliani Partners in June 2007, although this action was not disclosed publicly. On December 4, 2007, in the wake of the latest attention to the firm's client base, Giuliani Partners announced the stepping down, with Giuliani defending his work there, saying, "Everything I did at Giuliani Partners was totally legal, totally ethical. There's nothing for me to explain about. We acted honorably, decently." Giuliani maintained his equity interest in the firm.
Dogru144 (talk) 01:37, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It is, but the connection needs to be better cited.  I'll do it a bit later after the edit warring has died down; being whipsawed between you and Dogru is not what I'm here for.  Wasted Time R (talk) 01:50, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll step aside and let you fix it.--STX 01:51, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

text: The Chavez bit was old news and not a factor in the recent campaign, so I removed it.  The discussion of Al-Thani was slanted because it left the impression that he sheltered KSM after 9/11, when in fact that happened five years before in 1996.  I've reworked the rest of it, added the NYT Ethopian story re B&G, and given a couple of cites saying these client-base stories have contributed to Giuliani's recent decline in the polls.  As with everything in this article, the importance of these developments may increase or decrease in retrospect.  Wasted Time R (talk) 22:05, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Giuliani Partners ties to Chavez and Al Thani

message: 150px	Editors of this article are invited to join Wikipedia: WikiProject United States presidential elections.--STX 04:02, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: [[Wikipedia: WikiProject United States presidential elections]]

message: I dont want this to be POV, I coppoed what I wrote originally on Rudy's page:
Anyone seen the fuss over Giuliani's racist campaign add? It states 'a people perverted' in refrence to all muslims, not to mention one of Rudy's subodinates told Muslims to 'get back into their caves'. The video is on youtube but I got it off the islamophobia watch site, a POV site I know, but as it directly quiotes it is reliable.86.138.116.141 (talk) 16:56, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Methods

message: Does hosting a fundraiser for Rudy qualify as an endorsement under this article? Can it be mere support? Or does the endorser have to say "I endorse Rudy"? How far down the elected food chain should the endorsements list go? 
He's got some important state reps hosting fundraisers for him in PA. Are these worth mentioning? Here's a link.  Also, what about placing Bob Asher on the endorsement list? He's mentioned in the controversies section, but he still is PA's national committeeman, which makes him a big deal.--RedShiftPA (talk) 17:18, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Endorsements 

message: Wasted, why would an image of Rudia within the marriage/family section of this campaign article be inappropriate? Never mind...it's all just nostalgia now....doesn't matter. However, if you really think that early and widespread circulation of photos of Rudia didn't play a big role in how the campaign has played out I would suggest you talk to a few more of his heartland defectors.  Veritas23 (talk) 20:32, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The Rudia stuff was out there from the moment he began running, and was available all during the many months he held the national lead in polls.  As the article explains, Rudy's decline began in November, and was due to the Kerik news, the Shag Fund story, and the relevations about unappetizing GP and B&G business partners.  Another cause was the dynamics of the other Republican contenders, e.g. McCain's resurgence hurt Rudy, since they were competing for some of the same national security hawk, domestic moderate voters.  Then there was Rudy's skip-the-early-states strategy, which failed miserably.  I haven't seen any evidence that the Rudia pictures had anything to do with Giuliani's collapse.  Wasted Time R (talk) 20:38, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes because this sort of thing is too sleazy for more than passing media mention, and - perhaps like voters answering questions re ethnic prejudice, people didn't always volunteer how much Rudia turned them off in public. As regards the time frame - most Rudy supporters in early polls had no idea whatsoever who he was, so many didn't see the evidence of his interesting personal life until much later. But in any case, your point is well taken: as potential voters learned more and more about Giuliani they abandoned him in droves.Veritas23 (talk) 21:14, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Removal of Drag Photo

message: Shouldn't there be some mention of the controversy over the alleged skewing of statisitcs in a  campaign advertisement deriding the NHS. there are hundreds of links on this, a minister (alan johnson)commented on it, how did you lot miss this? 62.30.172.14 (talk) 19:50, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Go ahead and add it, if you think it's that important.  Wasted Time R (talk) 02:38, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  NHS controversy 

message: I added this section a long time ago, I think it would be best if the material was cut out and added to a new article, Public image of Rudy Giuliani. I am going to be bold and go ahead and do this, if anybody objects then it can be undone. --William S. Saturn (talk) 20:58, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Okay, it's been created. I don't think it will be necessary to remove the whole section, but I'll work on this. --William S. Saturn (talk) 23:05, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I haven't looked much at the new article, but I think the "Public reaction" section in this article is kind of confused.  Some of it is things that happened during the campaign, and some of it is things that happened before the campaign.  I think the 'before' things should really go first in the article, as a "Leading up to the announcement" type section.  Because any presidential campaign article needs to first answer the question, why was this person running for the office?  What made him/her presidential material?  What were his/her assets and liabilities going into the campaign?  See Joe Biden presidential campaign, 1988#Leading up to the announcement for an example that I tried to do.  In this case, it's especially relevant; why was this pro-choice, socially liberal/moderate East Coast mayor trying to run for the Republican nomination?  It would seem crazy unless one knew about 9/11, his reputation as a crime fighter, etc etc.  The central questions this article needs to address are (1) what made Giuliani attractive to the GOP electorate? (2) how did he manage to keep the polling lead for so long during 2007? (3) when it went bad, what caused it and why did it go bad so quickly? and (4) was his wait-until-Florida strategy fatal or was he doomed no matter what he did by that point?  The answer to (1) and partly to (2) requires, I think, much of the public reaction section to get moved to the top of the article.  Wasted Time R (talk) 02:36, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Public perceptions section 

message: Since this article is getting an overhaul, I have a question.  Why are the fundraising and polling sections separate from the campaign chronology?  This has never made much sense to me.  Fundraising and polling are the two most important things that happen during the pre-primaries year (2007, in this case) and continue to be quite important into the primaries year.  Everything that happens is in reaction to them, and their numbers dictate what happens next.  When I reworked the Mike Gravel campaign article recent, I folded these two sections into the main campaign chronology.  I would suggest doing that here; otherwise, the reader has to understand them completely out of the context in which they occur.  Wasted Time R (talk) 01:06, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree that there definitely needs to be a "background" section at the beginning, and alot of the material from "Public reactions" could be moved there, but I don't know if the public reaction section should go before the campaign events. Maybe I could fit all the material from public reactions into the campaign events and background, and avoid the problem altogether. The financial section is on a quarter by quarter basis and that could be easily fitted into the article. It would also make alot of sense to create an "aftermath" section and add the information about campaign debt and what Giuliani did for the rest of the election. --William S. Saturn (talk) 04:32, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Structural questions 

message: A question has arisen about the relevance of specific crime statistics.
 
The article has long included a statement, sourced to a Giuliani spokesperson, about the murder rate, using statistics to bolster Giuliani's reputation as a crimefighter who reversed a rising tide of lawlessness in New York City.  I left in the flack's statement but made this edit, also giving specifics about the murder rate (cited to a neutral source, the Bureau of Justice Statistics), that undercut Giuliani's claim.  William S. Saturn then deleted the latter information as "irrelevant" while leaving in the former.  I restored it, noting the discrepancy, but he again reverted (along with a request that I not edit war!).
 
We could omit this subject entirely, as not relevant to the campaign but more properly left to the Giuliani bio or mayoralty articles; or we could limit it to a presentation of Giuliani's image as a crimefighter, without trying to argue that the image was an accurate one; or we could simply note the contention of each side, without including any specific statistical supporting data; or we could make a slightly fuller presentation of the competing views, including the statistics relied on by each.  Any of these approaches would be neutral.  To give one side's supporting information but not the other's, however, would be blatantly POV.  There’s no basis for William S. Saturn’s position that one statement (“By being tough on crime and enforcing the laws on the books, New York City’s murder rate [under Giuliani] was cut by 66 percent.") should stay in but that the other (“For example, the per capita murder rate had peaked and then begun to decline under Dinkins, and rapes decreased in each year of his term.”) should be removed.
Therefore, I am restoring the information. JamesMLane t c 21:36, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: The information was not removed. All that was removed was the statement "For example, the per capita murder rate had peaked and then begun to decline under Dinkins, and rapes decreased in each year of his term.[11]" This was removed because it is excessive detail about Dinkins. --William S. Saturn (talk) 21:43, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

text: This article shouldn't try to make a statement on what Giuliani's affect on the crime rate actually was – that's a hard enough task for Rudy Giuliani and Mayoralty of Rudy Giuliani to do and has been the subject of many discussions.  This article should merely state that Giuliani's image as a crime fighter was responsible for much of his reputation as a successful mayor and for his appeal to the Republican electorate.  It should state this in a way that does not imply the image was true nor suggest the image was false.   Wasted Time R (talk) 23:49, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm done working on this article. It's become a waste of time, much like most of wikipedia. --William S. Saturn (talk) 23:56, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

text: I was wrong. --William S. Saturn (talk) 06:25, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: POV editing by giving only Giuliani's side