Talk:Money Inc.

message: The team's full name was Money Incorporated and that's what they were called most of the time back in 1992-1993. That should be the article's name, with Money Inc, Money Inc., Money, Inc, and Money, Inc. as redirects.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.23.218.242 (talk) 19:18, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Suggested article rename and redirects 

message: ===Article name===
I was wondering about the WP:COMMONNAME for this article: should it be Money Inc. or Money Incorporated. As I start the Good Article review, please start a discussion at WikiProject Professional wrestling to determine consensus for the article's name. It has been the subject of some reverts on the article. Royalbroil 12:49, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: That discussion has already been had. The page was moved without consensus and moved back with consensus. While the full name is Money Incorporated, they were most commonly known as Money Inc. Money Incorporated has 512 Google hits. Money Inc has 19,700 hits. Nikki311 15:51, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Would you please wikilink to the discussion? I looked through several pages of archives for the WikiProject and didn't find it. Royalbroil 20:43, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It can be found here. GaryColemanFan (talk) 21:12, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 02:26, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Only point could be the name of the article, but consensus at WikiProject Professional wrestling supports the name Money Inc. Royalbroil 02:26, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Only image is on topic, contains fair use rationale, and is appropriately small size (for a fair use image). Royalbroil 21:12, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Good article review

message: I was wondering about the WP:COMMONNAME for this article: should it be Money Inc. or Money Incorporated. As I start the Good Article review, please start a discussion at WikiProject Professional wrestling to determine consensus for the article's name. It has been the subject of some reverts on the article. Royalbroil 12:49, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: That discussion has already been had. The page was moved without consensus and moved back with consensus. While the full name is Money Incorporated, they were most commonly known as Money Inc. Money Incorporated has 512 Google hits. Money Inc has 19,700 hits. Nikki311 15:51, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Would you please wikilink to the discussion? I looked through several pages of archives for the WikiProject and didn't find it. Royalbroil 20:43, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It can be found here. GaryColemanFan (talk) 21:12, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Article name

message: Reviewed against the GA criteria by Royalbroil
1) It is well written. In this respect: 
(a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and 
(b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.
: Royalbroil 02:26, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Royalbroil 04:36, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

text: Only point could be the name of the article, but consensus at WikiProject Professional wrestling supports the name Money Inc. Royalbroil 02:26, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Only image is on topic, contains fair use rationale, and is appropriately small size (for a fair use image). Royalbroil 21:12, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Criteria

message: *"Money Inc. was a heel professional wrestling tag team in the World Wrestling Federation from February 1992 to August 1993 which consisted of the "Million Dollar Man" Ted DiBiase and Irwin R. Schyster (I.R.S.)." It seems like 2 thoughts to me. I think it reads better if it's broken into 2 sentences after the word 1993.
*"The Steiner Brothers for the belts" A non-wrestling fan won't know that the belt signifies the champion. How about "...championship belts", although it's weak to have the word championship twice in the sentence. I hope that you can find a better wording than my suggestion.
*"Natural Disasters finally defeated Money Inc". Finally is POV.
*The Nasty Boys is wikilinked on the second instance, it should be on the first.
*"the Million Dollar Dream". It would be clearer to the non-fan if you added the word "hold" after "Dream".
*"At the end of Beefcake's first match since the injury to his face over three years prior" is awkward and passive. You'd be better of starting with something more active in the effect of "Beefcake was participating in his first match in over three years..."
*More to follow when I have more time...
**I believe that I have addressed all of these concerns. Please feel free to look over my changes to see if they have solved the problems. Thanks, GaryColemanFan (talk) 00:13, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Specific comments

message: I am satisfied that all criteria for GA have been met. Congratulations! I have no additional suggestions to improve the article to FA status. The article does a great job of explaining the events without speaking within the wrestling universe. Royalbroil 02:26, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA passed