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Talk:Johnny and the Dead

message: This is a call to arms to make the Terry Pratchett article a Featured Article. It will greatly help the cause if all the side articles that link from it are of a reasonable standard. Terry Pratchett has around 40 side articles (ie the ones relating to his work) - I don't think they are all expected to be GA (Good Article) standard for TP to become featured, but certain basic elements will be looked at for sure. 
A full list of the sub articles is here on the TP talk page: I'm posting this comment on the talk pages of each article on the list. Editors reading may also like to help with the TP article too? 
The main issue, especially with smaller articles, is often a finding reasonable amount of citations, and prose can sometimes be a little  POV too. Coverage of the topic is probably less important, but of course it needs to be reasonably good. --Matt Lewis (talk) 15:12, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Making [[Terry Pratchett]] a Featured Article
Category talk:Seismic faults

message: The name Seismic faults is more accurate and descriptive than just faults. they are also duplicative and redundant of each other. Bdelisle 18:09, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: No. Fault is a valid geologic term which would include seismically active faults as well old or inactive faults. The current categorization is more accurate, with :Category:Seismic faults a proper sub cat of :Category:Faults. In addition, the term seismic fault appears to be a synonym for active fault and as far as I know is not much used. Vsmith 19:25, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Undersdood. Agreed. Bdelisle 02:00, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: earlier comments
Talk:Star Reach

message: Something about this phrase seems wrong to me, 'the first mainstream independent comic book'.  I'm not sure exactly what this is supposed to mean.  It what sense was Star Reach mainstream?  I don't think that it sold through mainstream outlets, such as newstands.  I don't think that the intended audience was the same as for other mainstream comic books.
I also not sure that it is correct to say that Star Reach was an important forerunner of the modern graphic novel.  How so?  Certainly not in the sense of long-form works of comics - most stories in Star Reach were less than 15 pages.  ike9898 18:10, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I'm not sure a laundry list of contributors is the most Wiki way of noting them. I'd like to try to write some prose background to put particular creators into context, and also address some of the good points ike9898 made in ... whoa ... 2005!!! Anyone have additional thoughts on this? -- Tenebrae (talk) 23:10, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Laundry list

message: Were they in california, and were they in the Bay Area. FRiedrich was running Wondercon around that time, must have been the bay area. ok, confirmed they existed for at least some time in hayward.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 08:21, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: location
Template talk:Morning Musume/discussionclosed

message: == Evil Morning ==
Evil Morning does not belong on this template.  For further discussion about this, please see User talk:Cjmarsicano#Evil Morning on MM template (edit: has since been blanked, so please check the history of that page) and User_talk:Sanchny#Evil Morning on MoMusu template. --Sanchny 18:11, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Discussion closed -- Cjmarsicano 18:30, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text:  Discussion is not closed.  You have not provided an adequate argument as to why Evil Morning should be on that template. --Sanchny 18:39, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
Talk:Western Goals Institute

message: Hi all - 
I came across this and I'm not comfortable with the balance of the article - it reads very uncritically of the Institute and seems to be making a case for its mission and goals rather than being descriptive or factual. I'm referring to biased phrasing, like "The institute was reaching out to a variety of robustly conservative associations which were also opposed to communism." Also the use of unsourced, specific details, like the names of obscure committee members are included which is a bit of a red flag and implied it could have been written by someone belonging to or close to the organisation. 
Could we look at more balanced language and if possible trimming the content to remove some of the superlatives that are contributing to the one-sidedness? I'm happy to help Leela0808 (talk) 15:45, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV tag 

message: One citation simply says "Irish Press, 3 July 1990". Looking at WP:CITEHOW, newspaper articles typically include authors' byline (if any) and title of the article within quotation marks. Does anybody know the article name and byline (if latter is available)? Autarch (talk) 14:22, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  More detail required in citation
Talk:Size changing

message: I started this page and I have intentions so develoup it. I plan to add a seperate page on Human Size Changing and Fans of Size Changing and put bigger summeries in this page. I will also include more links and external sources. Feel free to add anything. I will return to this page soon, so bear with me. --SRIL
:Please explain what a theroy is. -- RHaworth 06:55, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
Talk:Soldier of The Salvation Army

message: Here's a list of things I think this page needs (or doesn't need), and I'm going to have a crack at fixing them as time permits. Anyone else feeling the need is more than welcome to put fingers to keyboard as well. I have suggested a few sections that need writing --- it may be more appropiate to break these out into their own pages.
* Explain what the Pastoral Care Council is and that each Corps has one. Currently, the article seems to suggests that there is only one PCC.
* Figure out what to do with the word 'Salvationist' in the first sentence. It currently redirects to The Salvation Army, which doesn't seem wrong, but not right, either.
* The term 'articles of war' links to the article covenant. Again, this isn't wrong, but it doesn't seem entirely appropriate. I would suggest we need a section on the articles of war.
* It seems strange that 'boy' and 'girl' are linked to the relevant articles, but 'covenant community' isn't.
* Actually, I think we need a section on uniform here. Hmm, I see a flamewar approaching!
* Do we need a link to 'Warriors'?
* There is some language inappropriate to an encyclopedia --- for example, 'Salvationist Soldiers are considered by their peers to be covenanted warriors exercising 'holy passion' to win the world for Jesus.' I think we need to tone the jingoism down a bit.
* More links to be excised: 'Orders' and 'Regulations' aren't need, IMHO. Again, a section ' the O&Rs wouldn't go astray. 
* The Year Book reference can be updated. Actually, YB 2008 should be out in the next month or two.
CammoBlammo (talk) 19:47, 28 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: To do
Talk:Trans-Amazonian Highway

message: Everything from the page Trans-Amazonian highway is from this website (http://www.mongabay.com/08highway.htm) and should be deleted or permission should be obtained for word-for-word reprint. - (Posted by 71.246.94.183 on December 8, 2005)
:Removing existing text per 71.246.94.183's copyvio warning, and replacing with a stub based on the Portuguese Wikipedia article Rodovia Transamazônica -- Writtenonsand 02:17, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

message: Please fill in how much of the Highway is paved!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.229.46.9 (talk) 09:24, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Road section completion

message: Hello Wikipedians, 
I am planning to update the Deforestation and conservation section with new information on the environmental impact of BR-230. 
Here are a few sources I have tracked down to back this information up.
New Frontier of Expansion and Protected Areas in the State of Amazonas
Distribution of trace metals in stream sediments along the Trans-Amazonian Federal Highway, Pará State, Brazil
Potentially toxic elements (PTEs) in soils from the surroundings of the Trans-Amazonian Highway, Brazil
The “New Transamazonian Highway”: BR-319 and Its Current Environmental Degradation   *This is about a similar highway, but not BR-230 exactly.
Remote Sensing of Deforestation Along the Trans-Amazonian Highway Woosterbrazil (talk) 22:34, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Updating "Deforestation and conservation" section. 

message: — Assignment last updated by Charlieh1234 (talk) 05:47, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: Modern Brazil
Talk:Children's Ward

message: A 'murderer'? Was it really? ASB16v (talk) 17:49, 7 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: BAFTA winning episode

message: a cast list would be good if anybody knows actors who've been in it
:I have added a link to the show's IMDb page, which should have all this info. Angmering 07:39, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Cast list

message: So they are not sure about that. According to Amazon it's on the 3rd March.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Anonynonymous (talk • contribs) 20:52, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: DVD Release
Talk:Rhine Research Center

message: I'm going to undertake a re-write of this entry. If you have anything to suggest, please feel free.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by LibraryLady623 (talk • contribs) 18:05, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: The current version states that "It is the successor to the Parapsychology Laboratory at Duke University". And also that "The current research center is a successor to this organization, and it is no longer affiliated with Duke University".
Both the statements are sourced. However, it's unclear what is the real degree of independency of the Rhine Research Center from the Duke University. At 2006 the Rhine Research Center has its seat at Durham, which is a middle-level city. According to , "its offices are located just off West Campus on Campus Walk Avenue". Are they so geographically distant?
Furthermore, there are 3 pages of results on the duke.edu domain belonging to the Rhine Center: 
* collaborators, 
* citations academic bibliographies, 
* reference on archive materials, 
*student magazine interviews which now can be  fully viewed here. Hope it helps to improve the article futher. Best regards.Micheledisaveriosp (talk) 21:35, 16 October 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Current seat and former dependency/affiliations 

message: You are invited to join the discussion at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard § Just making sure.  Ca talk to me! 16:21, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Discussion at [[:Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#Just making sure|Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard §&nbsp;Just making sure]]
Talk:Shannon stopover

message: One line makes it sound like the Irish government made planes going to other countries stop at Shannon even if they weren't going to Ireland.  Could this be clarified?  How could this be enforced if they weren't overflying Ireland?  Rlevse 18:39, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I think this article could benefit from a (small) map- does anyone agree?
I'd be happy to create one if needed to.
EvocativeIntrigue 18:22, 6 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Map? 

message: Merge Subject is too narrow to justify a separate article.  It fits naturally in the Shannon airport article. --Red King 19:15, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Support I agree with Red King, un-notable Cocoaguy ここがいいcontribstalk   Review Me! 17:22, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request to merge
Talk:Dakshina Kannada

message: :The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion. 
The result of the move request was: No consensus. (non-admin closure) Adumbrativus (talk) 03:25, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Dakshina Kannada →  – standard naming of districts in India. Eg: Bangalore Urban district, Bellary district, Kodagu district Dhruv edits (talk) 20:52, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

text: This is a contested technical request (permalink). DanCherek (talk) 18:24, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested move 21 June 2022 

message: ‎Demographics section of this article is highly biased, filled with propaganda and definitely violates the "Neutral Point of View" pillar guideline of Wikipedia. DO NOT remove the Neutral Point of View violation banner from this section until complete Neutrality is achieved and only unbiased statements are placed there. Kindly requesting the Administrators to increase protection for this article immediately. Aviator423 (talk) 18:52, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Demographics section violates the Neutral Point of View
Talk:Ten Wheel Drive

message: I had been prepared by a statement, that I got from the web-master of the Fillmore East web-site. Now a short exchange on YouTube (in the presence of Aram Shefrin), produced the dates 5. and 6. February 1971 for the Fillmore East concert. The German version honors this new information, but opposing Genya's own memory, here in the English Wikipedia, I do not dare.--Psycho Chicken (talk) 08:59, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fillmore East 1969/1971 

message: PSE correct my English, if you can. This article is more or less based on my own German Version at Ten Wheel Drive. 
TIA--Psycho Chicken 18:49, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks all. The way you keep my text all in all intact is quite reassuring; I had expected a much different treatment... ;-)--Psycho Chicken 21:44, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Needs major de-hyping, don't have time right now, but it's survived here a long time... :) --Technopat (talk) 22:37, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Far from perfect
Talk:Mitzvah tank

message: Can we get a picture of a pickup truck WITH a sukkah on it, rather than just an ordinary pickup truck? Also, does anyone have a picture of a "Mitzvah Tank" RV? Daykart 07:32, 27 December 2005 (UTC)

message: I have heard of it being refered to as the "Mitzvah Mobile".
("The Mitzvah Mobile tried to stop my brother from going into Macy's last Friday night, and he ain't even Jewish.")
68.197.17.3 (talk) 03:51, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mitzvah Mobile
Talk:Jean van Heijenoort

message: hey wasts up my name is jean van i was born yesterday in the hospital u was born and i luv u —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 170.235.222.10 (talk) 13:17, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  jean van h 

message: reviewed here.  Looks interesting.  Maybe something from the review can be worked into the article.  The book should also be referenced.  Modern Logic 2/3 (1992) also has a lot of material.    Actually more stuff is easy to find, so the article can be expanded some.  I don't know if I'll attempt this.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.241.238.233 (talk) 03:58, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Book about JVH's work 

message: What does the word mean in "Van Heijenoort came of age in straitened family circumstances"?  I think it should be replaced, but not knowing what the intention is... Jd2718 (talk) 17:11, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: "straitened circumstances" means that they didn't have much money. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:56, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text:  Jd2718 will find a definition here https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/straitened_circumstances. 109.158.118.141 (talk) 16:47, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  straitened 

message: The anthology  'From Frege to Gödel: A Source Book in Mathematical Logic, 1879-1931' does not end with Gödel's paper, it ends with Herbrand's 'On the consistency of arithmetic'. 109.158.118.141 (talk) 16:46, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Minor factual error
Talk:Hypokalemic periodic paralysis

message: I almost didn't find Hypokalemic Sensory Overstimulation, but once I did I wondered why it pointed here with no point back. So I added one in a See Also. Also tried to add a link to Section In Humans on HYPP page, but couldn't get the format right (see that page for discussion re: spinoff). VulpineLady (talk) 17:20, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: note
Talk:Circle Takes the Square

message: CTTS is NOT Screamo. Look at the labels that sign them. The other bands they play with at shows. The type of people that GO to their shows, have you been? Most people that listen to them would be insulted to hear them classified as such and I believe they themselves would be. Experimental, Hardcore, post-hardcore, Grindcore, DIY , even simply Eccentric would be a better label for them. NOT Screamo, emo, hipster shit.
They are very much a screamo (which is a sub genre of post-hardcore) + progressive metal band. Not grindcore or experimental or post-rock or anything else. I put progressive metal in the genre section and it was removed. Screamo + progressive metal is the most accurate and concise description of their sound.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.175.120.76 (talk) 20:08, 26 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Correction

message: Is this name from Tic-Tac-Dough or Hollywood Squares? --Damian Yerrick 19:13, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Name? 

message: Looking at the entry for Mathcore, I would say that skilful drumming and technichal bass/guitar riffs do not distinguish the band from others in its genre; rather, they typify it.
They aren't Mathcore so I don't know why you're refering to that article and please sign your comments using ~~~~. --Xdiabolicalx 19:19, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Bias

message: Kathy Coppola is actually Kathleen Coppola and I'm pretty sure Drew Speziale is really Andrew Speziale.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.59.175.169 (talk) 09:25, 16 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Band Members' Names
Talk:Harvest Crusade

message: * Linking the Catholic Crusades where people were killed isn't appropriate. They have nothing to do with these Protestant events. I'm removing the controversial link until you can explain why it should be included and how it is relevant. --Jason Gastrich 19:29, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: How is this pertinent to the entry? It is like using the word extermination, when talking about cockroaches, and having a link to the extermination of the Jews. There is no relation, so link should be removed. --Jason Gastrich 21:09, 8 December 2005 (UTC)

text: By the way, I asked you on your talk page why you have removed "Christ" from several entries that contained Jesus Christ. Please reply here. --Jason Gastrich 21:11, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Because the article is at "Jesus" and adding "Christ" asserts a POV. Wikipedia has a  NPOV policy. CDThieme 21:14, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text:  Christ was his title. It distinguishes him from other people named Jesus. --Jason Gastrich 21:15, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Jesus goes directly to the article about the person meant, who is obviously the most famous person with that name. Yes, "Christ" is a title, a highly POV title. CDThieme 21:17, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text:  Thanks for your POV. We'll see how that plays out. --Jason Gastrich 21:20, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: CDThieme's proposal is more impartial that yours Jason, isn't it? Jesus is not Christ to everyone. In fact he is not Christ to 3/4 of the earth's population. Izehar (talk) 21:23, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Izehar, for now, I'll concede the point about Christ. I'm interested in the input of others, though. This discussion was started to discuss the issue of the crusades link; which hasn't been done, yet. --Jason Gastrich 21:31, 8 December 2005 (UTC)

text: However, CDThieme, it is clearly NPOV that among Christians this Jesus is known by the title "Christ". It doesn't seem to me to be POV to refer to Jesus Christ using that title in an article about an explicitly Christian topic. BTW I agree that the Crusade link was inappropriate.--Srleffler 06:56, 11 December 2005 (UTC)

text: Thanks for your input and contributions, Daniel! --Jason Gastrich 23:01, 10 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  CDThieme's Link
Talk:Omega (Doctor Who)

message: Is it me or is the picture a bit blurry?--GingerM 13:17, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: A bit low-res, I agree Tim! (talk) 14:27, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed. --Paul A 09:05, 12 May 2006 (UTC)

text: OK, so it's not brilliant prose.  But which bit in particular confused you? —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 03:24, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

message: The article states that he got the name Omega from the Time Lord academy - but surely this academy would not have existed before Omega and Rassilon invented time travel? David 15:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Time Lord academy 

message: There is a large blank space at the start of the article- can this be removed?
Also, there is no need for the "Omega is rumoured to return..." this is an encyclopedia, not a forum, and rumours do not belong here. SCIAG (talk) 16:06, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Two issues: blank space and unsubstaniated rumours
Talk:Sabbath (Doctor Who)

message: My copy of the Book is packed away atm, but isn't it Mujun, not Murun?  Is this some sort of "do a better transliteration than the source material of the entirely fictional film title"?  Which seems appropriate, given it's the Faction but ... (I'm loathe to just fix it as I can't check myself right now.) --Bth 08:20, 12 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Ghost Kingdom
Talk:Out of Eden

message: I like Out of Eden, but this article reads more like a press release than an encyclopedic article. Jpers36 22:38, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree -- thank you for your observation.  I will delete the biography -- it's still available through the external link -- if someone objects, then please enter the discussion.
1diot 19:11, 24 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Press release