Talk:Mohammad al-Shirazi

message: Good day,
Please help me clean up this article. Most of it is copy from a brochure published by the estate of this personality. I removed some redundant information and added some up to date material. many thanks 68.165.19.176 06:21, 1 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Comment

message: The rewriting of this article is ridiculous.  You don't need to add "his followers believe" five times, every time the article says something positive about the man.  Clean it up by letting one "his followers believe" cover all.
Tafama (talk) 13:30, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Cleanup

message: In the section discussing the "bad things" that happened to his followers, there is clear bais; What are the reasons of holding the followers in jail? what was the misconduct that was done by the followers? were the authorties arresting for no reason? that would not make sense and thus a clear reason should be stated as well the other sides p.o.v since the p.o.v of the followers is clearly stated (note: "unpleasentness") i.e the Authorities' reasons should also be mentioned and the reader should be allowed to come to a conclusion whether it was justified or not.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 168.187.206.209 (talk) 06:43, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The tag has been removed. There is nothing POV about quoting a reputible NGO. Refering to "beaten during arrest and tortured in detention" as "unpleasantness" is NOT POV.   If you can find the "other side" go ahead and add it to the article. --BoogaLouie (talk) 16:42, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: POV

message: The general tone and the absence of any humanizing facts about Mohammad Shirazi suggest that the article has a definite pro-Mohammad Shirazi slant.  The name of the article is not in accord with naming guidelines (see below), because titles are not normally included.  The inclusion of the title "Grand Ayatollah" further suggests a pro-Mohammad Shirazi slant.  Who were his opponents?  What challenges did he fail? Putting the weasel words "his followers believe" in periodically does not make an article NPOV. At a bare minimum the lead should not discuss his belivers except in passing, it should focus on facts and what he did. --Bejnar (talk) 18:53, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: POV check

message: Wikipedia:Naming conventions (people) says: Similarly, "King", "Queen", "Blessed", "Mother", "Father", "Doctor", "Mister", or any other type of qualifier is generally avoided as first word for a page name of a page on a single person, unless for disambiguation or redirect purposes. On that basis this article should be renamed (moved to) :Mohammad Shirazi, a name which does not require disambiguation. --Bejnar (talk) 18:53, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Proposed move

message: I am going to turn this section into a bibliography section because it does not currently conform to the rules of wikipedia. The section has been tagged since 2012 but no action has been taken.
Golden apples of the sun (talk) 11:51, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Writing philosophy 

message: Regarding Wikipedia's guidelines: should Al-Shirazi be described as "Imam" Al-Shirazi in the text? 
Golden apples of the sun (talk) 09:57, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Imam" Al-Shirazi 

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