Talk:The Naked Ape

message: This sentence is problematic to me, both logically and from a WP:NPOV perspective:
# The "Morris made a number of claims ..." opening leads us to expect some kind of  "... and [public and critical response here]" closure.  But there's nothing. No indication whether the claims have been accepted or rejected, by whom.
# Without this closure, it isn't just jarring, but appears intended to fallaciously cast a pall of vague, pejorative doubt on his work, purely through insinuation and manipulative use of language.  "They're just ." This sort of use of the word "claim" is specifically discouraged for NPOV reasons at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch#Synonyms for said.
# This use of "claims" also strongly implies that Morris was the originator of all the ideas outlined there, but this is extremely unlikely, and we certainly have no source for it. (For one thing, virtually everyone over the age of puberty, since the dawn of humanity, has been well aware that the earlobes are an erogenous zone.  A more peculiar idea Morris advances is that our lower, external nose flesh is as well, and this may well be an idea he did originate. I'm not aware of any culture in which something like tongue-probing the nose is a common human mating ritual.)
# Ultimately, the sentence contruction makes no sense at all, because every non-fiction book ever published "makes claims". Singling Morris out for "making claims" is just weird, suspicious, and confusing to the reader.
 — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  22:53, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Now  - this should be consistent with WP:SAY and with the language on Earlobe. The conjecture on earlobes is probably wrong (based on consensus today) but the penis size ratio is discussed on Sexual selection in human evolution.  -- Callinus (talk) 16:07, 12 July 2015 (UTC)
replies: text:  Good show.  What's the earlobe material, out of curiosity? What's the current thinking on that?  I'd thought Morris actually claimed it was a development from our frequent face-to-face rather than "doggy-style" typical-primate intercourse position; I don't recall him relating it to pair-bonding, though I haven't read the book in over a decade so I could be misremembering.  — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  16:34, 12 July 2015 (UTC)
replies: text:  language is from the article Earlobe - pair-bonding and monogamy is argued to be an evolutionary adaptation. The whole thing seems an awful lot like speculation and conjecture, the nerve endings on the fleshy part could be for other things (wind - motion?).-- Callinus (talk) 16:59, 12 July 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Ah, OK, I thought maybe you had some fresh research at had I hadn't seen.  I agree it's conjectural.  It may always be, since we can't travel back in time, then speed it up to watch evolution happen.  I think the best we can do at Earlobe (which needs a lot of work) is find more journal sources, and report what the sources are telling us, of course.  There's so much to work on and the topic is comparatively obscure, as human anatomy subjects go, so it may take a while for that article to see much improvement. As for this one, I guess I should try to find my copy of this book and re-review it. I seem to be the only one asking questions about what our article is saying about the book and the claims made in it (though thanks again for the copyediting; I thought of approaching it myself, but I must have been sleepy or something, and then forgot to come back to see if there'd been any response).  — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  17:19, 12 July 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Weird, POV-pushing sentence 

message: I haven't read the book in years, but I'm not sure that the "can cause orgasm in both males and females" claim about what he wrote about the ears is actually correct.  Even he did say something about this, it surely would have been observation of a rare reaction. Mainstream psychology is well aware of individuals who can orgasm without genital contact, but it's not common, and Morris would not have been the first to write about it, nor would he dwell on it, so it's probably WP:UNDUE weight to devote coverage here to him perhaps having mentioned it.  I'm pretty sure Masters and Johnson wrote about it a decade earlier, and they may not have been the first either, in the West. (Various Eastern mystic disciplines have known about this for centuries.)  If it's kept for some reason, it needs to be verified, and it should only be kept if there's a reliably sourceable reason to do so, e.g. due to verifiable controversy arising from his having reported on it.  — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  22:53, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Undue weight? 

message: Third-party reviewers should probably be quoted to support the notion that many readers and reviewers focused on the sexual aspects of his book. It's true (especially of his zoological approach to describing what happens on a hot date; I've read a detailed review of this somewhere, ca. 1999, though I don't recall when the review was actually published, but I surely saw it on the Web). It just needs to be sourced.  
There can also probably be found sources for the fact (not mentioned in the article) that the book had a marked positive effect on the rise of anthropology as a popular university subject, despite not being a strictly anthropological work, but more sociobiological.  — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  22:53, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some things to source