Talk:Cyclogenesis

message: I've put the GA nomination on hold based on the GA criteria.
* Well written - Fail. Some parts could use a bit more explaining for the non-technical person. For example, in the intro, "cyclogenesis is driven by upper level divergence over a portion of the density contrast between warm and cold air masses in environments with high vertical wind shear." This is a bit confusing. For such a complex topic, it might be difficult to explain it in layman's terms, though you should try. 
* Factually accurate - Fail. Seven paragraphs don't have any sources at their end. For example, is there a source for September being the month with the most waterspouts? Some of those seven can probably be sourced by other sources in the article.
* Broad in its coverage - Pass. It seems to be a good overview of the different types of cyclogenesis. 
* Non POV - Pass
* Stable - Pass
* Images - Weak pass. Per the MOS, the article needs to start with a right-aligned image. Additionally, the first image is unclear in its usage status. 
The GA nomination will be on hold for seven days. Hurricanehink (talk) 05:26, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: An attempt has been made to satisfy conditions one, the example in two, and number six.  Will get on adding more references Sunday or Monday.  Thegreatdr 06:34, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Looking better. Once you add those sources, it should be able to pass GA. Hurricanehink (talk) 16:30, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think we're up to two references a paragraph now.  There were only one or two paragraphs missing a reference.  Thegreatdr 06:29, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, it looks good enough. Pass. Hurricanehink (talk) 23:56, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

text: Nevermind, I read up more on the website and it appears to be a NOAA collaberation. -Runningonbrains 01:56, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA nom On Hold 

message: As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Meteorology and atmospheric sciences" articles. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. I have made several minor corrections throughout the article. Altogether the article is well-written and is still in great shape after its passing in 2006, especially at it is currently an A-class article. Continue to improve the article making sure all new information is properly sourced and neutral. It would also be beneficial to go through the article and update all of the access dates of the inline citations and fix any dead links. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 07:54, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Sweeps Review: Pass

message: This is wikipedia, and the section is too techinically written for the lay reader.  Recent additions have made matters worse, not better.  If not fixed in a week, I will be tempted to revert the most recent edits.  Thegreatdr (talk) 21:19, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Vertical motion affecting development - too much jargon

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