Talk:Jordan River (Utah)

message: Excellent section with a lot of information.  An FA review (or a peer review by someone with more FA experience) might suggest that you trim down some of the numbers to make it more of a summary style.  In any case, overall this part was really well done, and I didn't change much beside some working on the prose a bit.  Well done Jhfortier (talk) 05:11, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Watershed

message: Great section.  I made a few prose changes to break up repeated sentence structure, but overall this part was great; to-the-point, detailed enough, and interesting.  Nicely done. Jhfortier (talk) 03:38, 11 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Ecology

message: Ok, finished this section as well.  Similar to the rest of the article, I changed a bit of prose to avoid repeated phrasing, but again, the summary style is well utilized here.  Excellent, please see final comments below. Jhfortier (talk) 04:51, 11 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Pollution

message: Skipped over a couple of sections to finish this bit off (I'll go back to the others tomorrow, hopefully).  This section is short but important; great information on how the river is being used today.  Some minor changes only, as this section was really well done.  Jhfortier (talk) 06:12, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Jordan River Parkway

message: Overall, this article was really well done!  I think it covers the topic well, and has just enough detail (and excellent use of wikilinks) to introduce the reader to a number of new topics, which is what good Wikis do!  I would suggest, before going to FA review, perhaps soliciting another quick once-over by someone with a bit more experience in FAs, particularly ones on similar topics, simply because I don't have any experience bringing anything to FA.  Overall, really well done Bgwhite, I hope you get this to FA!  If you need another peer review done, please don't ever hesitate to ask!  Jhfortier (talk) 04:59, 11 May 2010 (UTC)
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