Talk:Vocal cord paresis

message: Please see above links guidelines regarding reliable source use on Wikipedia. Reliable sources are generally review articles that have been published recently. Single study articles and anecdotal evidence are insufficient for the purposes of providing unbiased evidence on Wikipedia.   — Preceding unsigned comment added by KevintheSLP (talk • contribs) 19:04, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Reliable Sources

message: The final two paragraphs are missing citations to support the information provided. The wording could probably be simplified to ensure better understanding for the target audience. More concise sentences and organized paragraphs could help avoid confusion. May need to clarify the difference, if any, between vocal fold paresis/paralysis and recurrent laryngeal nerve paralysis.Chloe.93 (talk) 02:22, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Introduction

message: The reference that was used to cite the symptoms of unilateral vocal fold paresis does not specify that such symptoms are specific to the unilateral form of vocal fold paresis, but to vocal fold paresis in general.Chloe.93 (talk) 02:22, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Symptoms

message: The intervention section appears to be lacking sufficient representation of what voice therapy an look like for patients beyond describing them as "Special Exercises." In addition, the entire article could benefit from general reduction of repetitious content. Broadly across the article, there are at least three instances when the various names for Vocal Cord Paresis are introduced, and definition of the term is inconsistent throughout the article. Sources could afford to be updated, as many are 10+ years old at this point. KevintheSLP (talk) 20:03, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Intervention

message: Are they the same thing? in case could be created a redirect?
Thanks--Dia^ 08:34, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: [[Vocal Cord Dysfunction]]

message: Agree with Tsuguya below. Including this in the opening line seems like fluff. Spiffulent (talk) 22:27, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Impact

message: The table in this section is distracting to the reader, not very useful, and seems to disrupt the overall flow of the article. It would be better to provide a synopsis of the relevant information in a more digestible format (paragraph), with links to the sources for the reader to find more information. Also the written portion of this section seems very disorganized and does not highlight the main points in a clear, concise way. Slpintraining (talk) 23:58, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Causes 

message: This section has almost no information (or references) about what is meant by "Voice diagnostics". Also, the information in this section was drawn mostly from 2 articles: it would be good to have other references to present a more well-balanced perspective on the different diagnostic procedures. Slpintraining (talk) 00:13, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Diagnosis 

message: Listed are some possible references to incorporate into the article.
Rubin, A. D., & Sataloff, R. T. (2007). Vocal fold paresis and paralysis. Otolaryngologic Clinics of North America, 40(5), 1109-1131.
Stager, S. V. (2014). Vocal fold paresis: etiology, clinical diagnosis and clinical management. Current opinion in otolaryngology & head and neck surgery, 22(6), 444-449.
Sulica, L., & Blitzer, A. (2007). Vocal fold paresis: evidence and controversies. Current opinion in otolaryngology & head and neck surgery, 15(3), 159-162. Chloe.93 (talk) 16:28, 3 October 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: References

message: All citations from primary sources have been removed along with claims without citations in this section. More generalized information from secondary sources has been included in accordance with Wikipedia's guidelines on reliable sources for medical articles. Daniellelp (talk) 17:20, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Epidemiology 

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thread_title:  Move discussion in progress 

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thread_title:  Move discussion in progress 

message: Hello! As a Speech-Language Pathology (S-LP) student tasked with improving this article, here are some of the changes I might like to implement:
* Expanding the "Treatment" section to include methods other than voice therapy and surgery
* Adding a description of stroke as one of the causes of vocal fold paralysis 
* Adding a "prognosis" section to the article
If anyone has any questions or concerns about my proposed changes, feel free to reply to this post! – Lavinia Patrick (talk) 19:54, 3 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Potential Article Improvements 

message: As a Speech-Pathology student having a task of adding to or editing an existing Wikipedia article, I would like to add information to the Vocal cord paresis article under "Causes". More specifically I am interested in expanding the "Systemic neurologic diseases"  section by:
* Including definitions of the neurologic diseases.
* Including basic information about the physiology or the manifistation of the diseases.
Hadeelshesha (talk) 03:15, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article Expansion 

message: SLP student looking to help improve this article in the following area:
Congenital Causes of VFP
Expand on the following conditions: "hydrocephalus, Arnold-Chiari malformation, tracheoesophageal fistula, vascular anomalies (e.g., vascular ring), dysmorphic syndromes (e.g. Mobius, Goldenhaar), syndromes affecting brainstem function, and neuromuscular disorders such as Charcot-Marie-Tooth." Add info on prevalence, frequency, and severities.
See articles:
Bilateral Congenital Vocal Cord Paralysis: A 16-year Institutional Review[2]
Congenital Vocal Cord Paralysis (p. 13)[3]
Bengaunce (talk) 16:12, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article Expansion 

message: I am researching treatment procedures for VF paralysis and arytenoid adduction keeps coming up. I thought that it was worth to mention that it can be an option that can be performed alone or in addition to medicalization implant. Slpsandra (talk) 21:45, 10 October 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: I will also clarify types of substances that will be injectedSlpsandra (talk) 17:50, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Student SLP adding information on surgical treatments