Talk:Femicides in Ciudad Juárez

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message: I have restored the longstanding "multiple issues" tag which was removed recently. Yes, the article includes the research of Molly Molloy and others, but it still continues to present a highly misleading picture. Female deaths make up as low as 10% of homicides. But this doesn't stop the article containing such comments as: "This patriarchal backlash may indeed be the result of lack of employment opportunities for men and more women entering the workforce which has altered traditional gender dynamics and created a situation of conflict between the sexes." What patriarchal backlash? And there are stupid statements, such as: "Most of the victims are young women who come from impoverished backgrounds and work in maquiladoras, as factory workers, in other sectors of the informal economy, or are students. In addition, many victims share common physical attributes, including dark skin, slender physique, and dark, shoulder-length hair." Well, most young women in Mexico share those physical attributes. The article is a land that logic forgot. Bizarrely, the article also suggests that the men convicted of the murders were innocent! And (of course) it also points to "perceived government inaction in preventing violence against women and girls and bringing perpetrators to justice". The article contains a lot of emotional quotes, but very little facts. For example, "Amnesty International reports, 'Inadequate official data on the crimes committed in Chihuahua, particularly accurate figures on the exact number of murders and abductions of girls and women, has led to disputes around the issues that obscure the quest for justice'". OK, so we can have a quest for justice, even if we don't know anyone died??? The death toll is estimated as of 2005. Sorry, that's a long time ago, people. Almost all of the sources used are from 10 years ago, yet the article presents the situation as ongoing. How is that factual accurate? Clearly it's not. I think Molly Molloy exposed this as a myth a long time ago. Weirdly, people keep on adding to the article without adding to the sources (only 26). I think this article is an candidate for major editing, if not deletion.--Jack Upland (talk) 09:09, 16 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: These criticisms remain current, and the tag remains justified. I have started major editing to the article as a result. These issues have been flagged for five years, and the problem has been apparent for a decade, so I don't think I'm being premature.--Jack Upland (talk) 11:12, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: the Maquila section still reads like an editorial, not an encyclopedia entry MurMiles (talk) 04:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  POV and factual accuracy 

message: An article I am interested in is this article about femicides in Cd. JuarezT. he article has a lot of issues and warnings at the top about questions over its neutrality, factual accuracy, lends undue weight to ideas, and needs an update. I think it would be a really good fix up project.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alecprofit (talk • contribs) 02:34, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  I want to try and work on this article as a student editor