Talk:World War I/Archive 8

message: Is a very poor example to be referenced on a Wikipedia page. Upon inspecting the blog I found it to have very little information and was not done in 1st person. It's basically a clumsy high school assignment, and I think it needs to be removed.   —Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.49.55.36 (talk) 01:02, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: The Soldier's Blog

message: This headline is too emotive, as this is revisionist history this phrase is too allied-centric  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.195.86.40 (talk) 00:23, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: What would be more appropriate? "Massacre"? S71elements 05:12, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text:  I believe the title suits how the Allies described it in their propaganda but as it is about the war crimes it would be good to point out that the "Rape of Belgium" was a row of individual incidents/atrocities performed in reaction to perceived partisan activity or as brutalities by individual units/commanders, not some organized policy or military tactic. The title infers that it was a singular event when it actually were various incidents above the general invasion of Belgium.
Don't suppose you could fix the template so that it actually shows the American flag instead of linking to it?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.151.71.18 (talk) 13:32, 17 September 2007 (UTC)

text: It's the commonly used term for the events that took place in Belgium, just like the Rape of Nanking. For that reason, it's perfectly legitimate to use the term in this article. Parsecboy 15:59, 29 September 2007 (UTC)

text: Your argument about Belgium being a good route for the German army to take is irrelevant. We're not talking about the violation of Belgian neutrality, we're talking about war crimes committed by Germans once they invaded. Basically, unless you can provide reliable sources that prove the war crimes never took place, the header and section will remain, without mention of any kind of propaganda attempts by the Allies. Parsecboy (talk) 14:44, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The phrase "Rape of Belgium" however is the propaganda term. A neutral pov would point out the attested war crimes commited by the German army and point out that a series of those were summarized in Allied propaganda with this term to sway opinion of the public firmly against germany. Compared to the Armenian genocide the massacres of 1000-3000 civilians are out of scope. They certainly shouldn't be overlooked but kept in perspective. Mangalore  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.13.80.111 (talk) 22:54, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: If the headline is kept, it should certainly be followed by an explanation that it was the propaganda headline used in the western Allies press. LeadSongDog (talk) 23:01, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Headline" Rape of Beligium 

message: I just wanted to point out that the statements regarding the "creation of new countries in Eastern and Central Europe" as well as the ones that state "many countries have gained independence" aren't exactly accurate. Some of those countries have existed well before the end of WWI. They were not "created" they were "reestablished", they also did not "gain independence" they "regained independence". I think this should be corrected but give that this is the lead and the infobox I await any comments on this subject. JRWalko 17:53, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Suggest you start by improving the applicable section.  Lead should synopsize the body.  It's questionable whether the lead should get into which countries gained or lost independence.LeadSongDog 19:56, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Creation and independence

message: Hi! I have just been uploading and doctoring the image to the right. Does this have a place in this article? This picture (originally a handout) was certainly very helpful for my remembering of the causes of the Great War. --Harris Morgan 23:19, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: This Image

message: I deleted 
:"The infantry was armed mostly with magazine-fed bolt-action rifles,"
as irrelevant and
:"but the machine gun, with the ability to fire hundreds of rounds per minute, blunted most infantry attacks."
as incorrect. Artillery was, contrary to myth, the bigger threat. (I also wonder at the need to link rate of fire...) I question
:"There was chemical warfare and small-scale strategic bombing, both of which were outlawed by the 1907 Hague Conventions. Both were of limited tactical effectiveness."
In the first place, strategic bombing isn't tactical... In the second, the 1907 Hague Convention (can't speak to the 1899) prohibited bombing undefended cities, & given AA & fighters, cities weren't strictly undefended. Also, it didn't prohibit attacks on military targets or collateral damage in attacking them... Also, I question
:"Fixed-wing aircraft were first used militarily during the First World War."
I've read they were used in the Mexican Revolution of 1911, & in Ethiopia in 1912-3.  Trekphiler 12:28, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed.  1911-10-23 in Libya by the Italians against Turkey.LeadSongDog 03:04, 1 October 2007 (UTC)

text: Not in context of the trench stalemate, in which smallarms (infantry weapons generally) were of trivial importance, & why I removed it.  Trekphiler (talk) 23:08, 18 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The first time magazine-fed rifles were widely used was the Russo-Japanese war of 1904-1905. With respect, Ko Soi IX (talk) 09:50, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

text: "How exactly do you know the effect of magazine-fed rifles during WWI"? I'm relying on Dupuy & Dyer, mainly. Infantry weapons are generally far less lethal (& since the War of Southern Rebellion have made up a tiny fraction of total casualties) compared to artillery, which was the important factor in the trench war; even MGs, usually cited, were significantly less important overall, & even they were more important than smallarms.  Trekphiler (talk)  19:05, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: At some point it's nitpicking.  You can argue the guns are far less lethal until you add binoculars and field telephones, so maybe its them that are the real weapons.  Fact is they all form part of a system, they aren't used independently.LeadSongDog (talk) 20:37, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Is that a fact?

message: Reading down through the article, the Allied Powers morph into the Central Powers and the Entente becomes the Allied Powers.  When does this change in titles occur?  It is confusing because Allied Powers is used to refer to both sides in the conflict.  I noticed this change in titles soon after the Russian Revolution section.  I propose changing the article one of two ways:
1.  Remove "Allied Powers" from describing members of the Triple Entente, and states that aligned themselves with them, and keep the consistency with Entente Powers.  This will keep Allied Powers correctly describing the Germany/Austria-Hungary Alliance as the Allied Powers from beginning to end.
2.  Create a section detailing how, when, and why the name change occurred.
--Gregarious greg 03:06, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It is confusing, but "Allied" to refer to the Entente and "Central" to refer to the Triple-Alliance are widely used. I think it would be better to state explicitly that the Entente Cordiale was the name of the treaty, while they were commonly referred to as the Allies, and the Triple-Alliance was commonly known as the Central Powers. Parsecboy 12:35, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Certainly we shouldn't use "Allies" to refer to the Central Powers.  I think probably it is best to use "Entente powers" and "Central powers" to avoid confusion.  Certainly the Triple Alliance, so far as I am aware, is never referred to as the  "Allied powers".  That one of the Triple Alliance powers, Italy, actually fought on the other side might have something t o do with this, but it's also certainly true that the Entente powers are frequently called "the Allies". john k 13:50, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Triple Entente changes to Allied Powers? 

message: It is stated that Britain entered the war regardless of alliances because they had no alliances with France or Russia. This is false because Britain was in an allaince with France and then Russia called the Triple Entente  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.135.209.85 (talk) 13:35, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Triple Entente  

message: The Second Battle of the Somme began on 21 August. The Third and Fourth British Armies and the American II Corps pushed the Second German Army back over a 55 kilometer (34 mile) front. By 2 September, the Germans were back to the Hindenburg Line, their starting point in 1914.
I see that there has been a slight improvement in the previous paragraph from saying that “130,000 US troops took part along with some British and French soldiers.” As I have said before there is no mention of US troops in this battle. During the Second battle of the Somme the American II Corps were attached to the Second British Army which was still north of the First British Army which was north of the Third and Fourth British Armies. The American II Corps didn’t join the Third British Army until September 7 well after the Allied advance at the Somme and north and south of it. If there are no objections I will add the Australian and Canadian Corps in place of the American II Corps along with the First British Army and French Armies that were employed to bring the length of front to 75 miles in which the Germans were pushed back.Brocky44 17:14, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: American Bias in WW1 articles

message: Was U.S. trade regulaion sufficiently protectionist to characterize its position for most of the war as isolationist? It seems that neutral or non-interventionist is more accurate. (Ugh. I don't know how to link to the seciton, "Entry of the United States," where this caught my attention.)Entry of United States(Tried to add a link there. Didn't seem to work...)CsCran 23:05, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: You seem to be giving isolationism its modern reading which is almost synonymous with protectionism whilst then it was taken to mean (and still can mean) non-interventionism. Isolationism was the term use at the time and so is correct in this context, though it might need clarification to remove any confusion. --LiamE 10:16, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  U.S. "isolationism" 

message: Woodrow Wilson claimed to be neutral in thought as well as deed, but his actions cleared showed that he favored the British position from the beginning.  While criticizing Germany, Wilson did nothing to protest the hunger blockade imposed by the British on the civilians of Germany.
Further, Wilson had a very odd view of neutrality.  He believed that a citizen of a neutral country (e.g. the United States) had the right to travel, through a war zone, on an armed ship flying the flag of a beligerent nation, without being molested.  No other nation in the world had ever asserted such an outlandish view of neutrality, let alone gone to war to defend it.
Wilson failed to identify any legitimate interest of the United States justifying its entry into the European conflict that came to be known as the First World War.  His Fourteen Points are dangerously simplistic and naive, and they were largely ignored at the Versailles peace conference.  For example, he advocated open peace agreements, openly arrived at.  The newspapers read that and asked to be invited into the Versailles conference.  When Wilson had to tell them they would not be permitted to enter, the newspapers replied that he was not only a hypocrite, but a naive one at that.
Wilson would have surrendered the sovereignty of the United States to the League of Nations, and the United States Senate wisely rejected that effort.
All in all, Woodrow Wilson was, by far, the absolutely worst U.S. President of all time. 
130.13.3.95 15:45, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Basically, both World Wars served the United States greatly. Without them, the USA wouldn't emerge as the hegemon of the modern world. American "neutrality" and role in starting both wars (especially WW2) awaits a comprehensive study. WIth respect, Ko Soi IX (talk) 15:51, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Woodrow Wilson's Professed Neutrality Was a Sham

message: I have noticed several errata or misleading statements in the article, but do not feel qualified myself to edit and correct:
i) In the Balance of Power section it states: "Britain had no treaties with France or Russia", yet britain had certainly entered into the Entente Cordiale with France by this point, and while this may not be regarded as a treaty per se, certainly deserves a mention. re: the talk below, as it stands it makes it seem that Britain had no ties to either nation, yet this is surely false and so deserves a re-wording even if it is the case that neither alliance Britain made explicitly stated any obligation in a future Euroean war
ii) In the July Crisis section it states: "On July 23, 1914, an ultimatum was sent to Serbia with demands so extreme that it was rejected.", yet Serbia accepted 9 of the 10 demands, and didn't "reject" this outright, but this is not at all referenced in the original sentence.
Hannaphrael 22:47, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: First, as a side note, new talk sections go at the bottom of the page, not the top. I don't know enough about the treaties before the war to comment on this, however, in regards to the second issue you raised, I believe I read once that the demands issued by Austro-Hungary were intended to be too extreme, but were surprised that Serbia accepted almost all of them. I don't recall where I read it, or I'd alter the sentence accordingly, with a source. Perhaps someone else can help here. Parsecboy 22:56, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: First, sorry, I assumed the opposite. Second, I too believe I have read the same thing, viz. the July Ultimatum, though have forgotten the source so felt it inappropriate to mention. I maintain that the two sections do not accurately convey the reality and should be "tidied". Hannaphrael 00:01, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: No problem about putting it at the top, just a friendly reminder. The introduction to the July Ultimatum states as much in regards to the demands, but it is, unfortunately, not sourced. Also, the article Powder Keg of Europe says the same thing, and is, again, not sourced either. Perhaps this weekend I'll see what I can find as far as a source for it. I'll likely be too busy during the remainder of this week to get to it. Parsecboy 01:15, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Re the Ultimatum. I've read it too, but no idea where...  Trekphiler 16:25, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Errata 

message: Entry of the United States Section. "Germany Complied" is just too vague. In America: A narrative History (seventh edition, volume 2), it states more depth. I think more should be added with the situation. As stated in the book: 
:"Secretary of State [William Jennings] Bryan reluctantly signed a note demanding that the Germans abandon unrestricted submarine warfare, disavow sinking, and pay preparations. The Germans responded that the ship was armed, which it was not, and secretly carried a cargo of rifles and ammunition, which it did. A second note on July 9 repeated American demands in stronger terms. Bryan... resigned his post. Robert Lansing, signed the note to the Germans. In response to the uproar over the Lusitania, the German government had secretly ordered U-Boat captains to avoid sinking large passenger vessels... When, despite the order, teo American lives were lsot in the sinking of the New York-bound British liner Arabic, the Germans paid an indemnity and offered a public assurance on September 1, 1915 [stating]: "Liners will not be sunk by our submarines without warning and without safety of the lives of non-combatants, provided the liners do not try to escape or offer resistance."" 
There is more about why Bryan resigned his post and such, but that is irrelevent. Anyways, I just thought more should be added, and an edition like this meant discussing it first anyways. IronCrow 16:37, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Germany's Compliance to stopping unrestricted sub. warfare 

message: "World War I marked the end of the world order which had existed after the Napoleonic Wars" (at end of intro)
...stated as if (implies that) Napoleon I of France was directly implicated in the causes of the 1st WW. There'd been Otto von Bismarck since, you know? Of course one thing led to another (and this too is easy to say), but that sentence bugs me. Yeah i'm french (although no fan of Napoleon). --Jerome Potts 19:16, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bonaparte 

message: The Christmas Truce was a highlighted event in the war, it should be mentioned. This truce shows the difference in points of views of the entrenched soldiers from the officers (governments) that wanted the war to cease by defeat. The fact that the propaganda machine filled soldiers' mind with negative things about the opposing force and for them to find out they were all human with things in common like playing sports, drinking and smoking really had a lot to say about the governments' lies said throughout the war. Bvazq 16:47, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Christmas Truce is not mentioned 

message: I've (re-?)introduced the B class checklist above under WPMilHist (click Show).  As has been recently pointed out to me, the article, while extensively referenced as a whole, does not consistently reference the statements made in each section.  For a VITAL article, this is just not acceptable.  This should be one of the very best articles in WP, yet it's nowhere near meeting WP:Cite.  Lets get at it folks! LeadSongDog 16:38, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: If you think a statement is false, just flag it as .  If it can't be supported by cites, it will get removed.  Some words here on the talk page explaining the issue may also help. LeadSongDog 00:03, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  B class checklist 

message: Canada was HUGE factor in the win for the Triple Entente, and was the deciding factor in battles like Ypres, Vimy Ridge, and Passhendaele.
At the start of the article, it lists all the countries involved in the war and Canada is not mentioned, I think this is an insult to the over 60,000 Canadian soldiers who died and over Canadian 600,000 soldiers who fought in this war. 
This must be changed immeadiately.
—Preceding unsigned comment added by Cantdance (talk • contribs) 01:28, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Sorry Cantdance, but what are you talking about...Canada is mentioned in this article. nat Alo! Salut! Sunt eu, un haiduc?!?! 02:51, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Do you really think Canada's war effort is somehow grander, or at least compatible to that of Russia by the simple virtue of Canada being longer in the war? Think again. Btw, we don't have neither Serbia, nor Belgium on the list, and those nations contributed at least as much as Canada did. Bitch all you want. With respect, Ko Soi IX (talk) 10:09, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  How come Canada is not Mentioned at all?