Talk:Dennis H. Holtschneider

message: Hello. I work at DePaul. The subject of this bio is our current president. He is stepping down in June. He will become COO of Ascension Health. With your permission, I would like to add this sentence to the end of the opening paragraph.
On June 30, 2017, he will step down as president of DePaul. On July 1, 2017, he will become executive vice president andchief operating officer of Ascension. He will step down from the Ascension board on that date. 
Could a neutral editor please make this addition or give me permission to proceed?
Kris (talk) 17:58, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Want to revise bio; COI

message: I propose to add the following fact.
In fall of 2010, 19.5 percent of DePaul's full-time faculty members were people of color. 
Kris (talk) 14:45, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Proposed addition of fact

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message: Updating job information and adding sources. I have a conflict. Two jobs ago, this person worked at my institution and now holds title of honor here. Can a neutral editor review and publish these revisions?
Revised opening paragraph:
 
Dennis Henry Holtschneider[1] (born January 14, 1962) is president-elect of the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities.  Previously, he served as Executive Vice President and Chief Operations Officer for Ascension, the nation's largest Catholic health system, with oversight responsibility for the Ascension Solutions Division subsidiaries of Ascension Technologies and the Ascension Ministry Service Center, as well as Ascension’s national Strategy and Advocacy functions.  From 2004 through 2017, he was the president of DePaul University in Chicago, where he continues to hold the honorific position of chancellor.
Under the Governance section -- Revised opening paragraph
Holtschneider chairs the boards of Niagara University and the Institute of Advanced Catholic Studies at the University of Southern California.  He has served in leadership roles on several national advocacy boards for higher education, including the American Council on Education’s Board of Directors in 2013, the National Association of Independent Colleges and Universities in 2012-13,  and was a trustee for the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities from 2009 to 2015, including serving as chair of that board from 2010-2012. He spent five years as a member of the school board for Chicago Catholic Schools (2009-14) and nine years as a trustee of the Chicago History Museum (2007-2016).
Regarding the citation request in the Careers section: The Vincentian College Seminary in Ozone Park closed many years ago and no longer has a web page. 
Under the Honors and affiliations Section – here are five of the cites requested: 4 for honorary degrees and one for an ACE award.
Denise Mattson (talk) 21:46, 28 February 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Job change update and added sources

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