Talk:Jens Voigt

message: I did a preliminary and found some issues. I will provide a complete review at a point but found the general structure to be sound, no image problems, and the article was very readable. 
:None of the issues are what I consider really serious. There are several (some really minor), and I was going to flag the article for 7 days, but if there is availability for immediate response I would prefer to go that route, with some updates, and some discussions at first. Please place any discussions (or mark as done) under each.
*The lead: Considering the size of the article (well over 30,000 characters) I think the lead could be expanded for better summary coverage. NPOV is an important aspect of Wikipedia and the article appears alright in that area *BUT*: I think the last paragraph should touch on the referenced drug allegations or questioning aspect. The lead is one of my lessor of concerns but important.
*Sentence structure: There is an excessive use of comma's, especially in the middle of simple sentences, and a couple of places where a semi-colon might be more appropriate. If someone would look at this I would appreciate it.
**I've started working on that, you are right, some sentences have too many commas. Mattsnow81 (Talk) 19:33, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Dead reference links:
*  #11 (code 500)
**-Done :Took care of that one with a CNN article implying he his Basso's helper. Mattsnow81 (Talk) 07:05, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

text: Note: time frame extended for holidays without placing on hold. Also listed at Talk:Jens Voigt/GA1. Otr500 (talk) 02:16, 30 December 2014 (UTC)
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