Talk:Origin (band)

message: The text reads more like an advertisment than an encyclopedic article. - Quirk 12:29, 30 December 2005 (UTC)
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message: I'll try to rework this page sometime. I've just added in pages for all 3 albums, trying to put in a little more than just bare bones info Dace59 16:08, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
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message: The link to the supposed homepage of the band is misleading. --89.245.127.218 (talk) 16:55, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
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thread_title: [[Origin (band)]]

message: ;Interviews
* Interview with Paul Ryan (MetalSucks – May 23, 2008)
* Interview with Jeremy Turner and Paul Ryan (Archaic-Magazine.com – May 14, 2008)
* Interview with Paul Ryan (Global Domination – October 19, 2007)
* Interview with Paul Ryan (Teeth of the Divine – July 12, 2005)
* Interview with Paul Ryan (MetalReview.com – December 23, 2002)
Cannibaloki 20:33, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
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