Talk:Winchester Model 1897

message: While I appreciate the contributions, the Model 12 did not replace the model 1897.  There were lots of them, but many 97's were also used years after you state.  There were also a few Ithacas, a few Remingtons, lots of Stevens of various models, and probably others.  The Model 12 never replaced the model 1897.--Asams10 17:21, 23 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Trench Guns

message: That would be what the following sentence is talking about:
Unlike most modern pump-action shotguns, the Winchester Model 1897 (versions of which were type classified as the Model 97 or M97 for short) fired each time the action closed with the trigger depressed (that is, it lacks a trigger disconnector). 
"Slamfire" is not a feature so much as a manufacturing shortcut (or in the case of this early gun, the lack of a refinement).  The Ithaca Model 37 also lacks a disconnect.  Some say it's useful in combat, but you can argue pretty convincingly that the disconnect adds reliability, another feature to be desired on a combat gun.
MisterFitz 06:06, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Re: "Slam fire"

message: Is it worth mentioning that use of this trench gun was considered a warcrime by the Germans, until resolved after the war that it wasn't because they law they were citing (from the Geneva Convention or something older from like the 1800s, maybe the first Hague, forgot which, actually here looking for it) said something about how a weapon was illegal if used to cause prolonged pain and injury without a great likely hood of death (at least not in the immediate future, basically no guns that just torture people, they have to kill em). Shotguns passed thru on the understanding that they were meant to cause death, instances of extreme injury from buckshot all over without immediate death were flukes.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.137.207.191 (talk) 07:28, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Warcrime 

message: Okay, guys, this is a good start.  It needs some serious copy editing to reach greater clarity in the prose.  As it is now, someone reading it would end up scratching their heads.  You've also got to deal with the citations.  If you make a claim, it has to be cited (for example, if it was the first truly successful of whatever). 
*Here are some examples of problems.  These are consistent throughout.
**The Model 1897 was an evolution of the Winchester Model 1893 designed by John Browning. The Model 97 is a hammered shotgun lacking a trigger disconnect giving it the ability to slam fire. This means that the user can hold the trigger down while pumping the shotgun and once the pump is returned to the forward position the gun fires.[3] 
***These sentences could have some sentence variety, and a bit more sophistication in the writing. It isn't clear which model Browning designed (or both).  Something is not an "evolution" of something else.  Something evolves from something else. The 1897 is a variation of the 1893 (but it probably isn't, because that would mean it was much like the 1893).   The Model 1897 evolved from the Winchester Model 1893, designed by John Browning.... did Browning design the 1893 or the 1897?  Or both?  If both: Browning's design of the Model 1897 evolved from his previously (un?)successful Winchester 1893.  Then explain what was successful about the 1893 (or not) and what changed.
:The 1897 itself is classified (by whom?) as a slide action pump shotgun (huh?). It was the first truly successful pump-action shotgun produced. From 1893 until it was discontinued by Winchester in 1957, over a million of the type were produced in various grades and barrel lengths. The model 1897 came in two different chambering. One was the 12 gauge and the other was the 16 gauge.[3]
*Variety in sentence structure will make your article more interesting to read.
*slide action pump shotgun -- there should be some wikilinks here, or else an explanation of what these terms mean.  Not This means it does xyz.
*It was the first truly successful ....etc. The first successful pump action shotgun produced....what about ones that were not truly successful? Untruly successful? Failures? Goofs?  This is a paragraph or two or three unto itself.  What made this one successful? What was wrong with the other ones?  And what is a pump action shot gun, (see my first comment).
*Was the 1897 produced in 1893?  When was the 1893 produced?  (I'm confused.  and this sence should also be clearer:  In its years of production, 1893  1897, Winchester produced over a million in various grades (of what) and barrel lengths, and with either the 12 and 16 gauge chambers.  I don't get how they come up with the models (I initially thought it was by year).
*What on earth does it mean, came in two different chambering?  (should be chamberings, plural).  I figured this out.
;Miscellanea
Famous American? Is that like Famous Amos?  Famous does not need a capital.  Spencer?  This needs explanation.
*After sitting back and “observing the war for the first three years they realized how brutal trench warfare was and how much you needed close range fire power when you were in a trench”  Surely you can paraphrase this comment more elegantly than whoever said it.
*What made it ideal for close warfare?
;Reliable sources
*What makes the Sangamon County Rifle Association a reliable source?
*What makes Anglefire a reliable source? (and you should spell it right, too)
*Generally, web aggregate sources are not considered reliable by wikipedia standards. This means that "Never Yet Melted" is not a reliable source, nor is it, for other reasons, an unbiased source. See its own self description: Another Right-Wing Web Aggregator and Purveyor of Unpopular Opinions.  If you are using this source as a way of highlighting the controversy over the weapon, I'd suggest finding more reliable publications (Time Magazine, NYT, etc.).  I'd suggest you follow the link that the author included in his discussion of the problems of the shotgun in WWI, to see what the source is.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 21:28, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Initial comments 

message: Okay, guys, this is a good start.  It needs some serious copy editing to reach greater clarity in the prose.  As it is now, someone reading it would end up scratching their heads.  You've also got to deal with the citations.  If you make a claim, it has to be cited (for example, if it was the first truly successful of whatever). 
*Here are some examples of problems.  These are consistent throughout.
**The Model 1897 was an evolution of the Winchester Model 1893 designed by John Browning. The Model 97 is a hammered shotgun lacking a trigger disconnect giving it the ability to slam fire. This means that the user can hold the trigger down while pumping the shotgun and once the pump is returned to the forward position the gun fires.[3] 
***These sentences could have some sentence variety, and a bit more sophistication in the writing. It isn't clear which model Browning designed (or both).  Something is not an "evolution" of something else.  Something evolves from something else. The 1897 is a variation of the 1893 (but it probably isn't, because that would mean it was much like the 1893).   The Model 1897 evolved from the Winchester Model 1893, designed by John Browning.... did Browning design the 1893 or the 1897?  Or both?  If both: Browning's design of the Model 1897 evolved from his previously (un?)successful Winchester 1893.  Then explain what was successful about the 1893 (or not) and what changed.
:The 1897 itself is classified (by whom?) as a slide action pump shotgun (huh?). It was the first truly successful pump-action shotgun produced. From 1893 until it was discontinued by Winchester in 1957, over a million of the type were produced in various grades and barrel lengths. The model 1897 came in two different chambering. One was the 12 gauge and the other was the 16 gauge.[3]
*Variety in sentence structure will make your article more interesting to read.
*slide action pump shotgun -- there should be some wikilinks here, or else an explanation of what these terms mean.  Not This means it does xyz.
*It was the first truly successful ....etc. The first successful pump action shotgun produced....what about ones that were not truly successful? Untruly successful? Failures? Goofs?  This is a paragraph or two or three unto itself.  What made this one successful? What was wrong with the other ones?  And what is a pump action shot gun, (see my first comment).
*Was the 1897 produced in 1893?  When was the 1893 produced?  (I'm confused.  and this sence should also be clearer:  In its years of production, 1893  1897, Winchester produced over a million in various grades (of what) and barrel lengths, and with either the 12 and 16 gauge chambers.  I don't get how they come up with the models (I initially thought it was by year).
*What on earth does it mean, came in two different chambering?  (should be chamberings, plural).  I figured this out.
;Miscellanea
Famous American? Is that like Famous Amos?  Famous does not need a capital.  Spencer?  This needs explanation.
*After sitting back and “observing the war for the first three years they realized how brutal trench warfare was and how much you needed close range fire power when you were in a trench”  Surely you can paraphrase this comment more elegantly than whoever said it.
*What made it ideal for close warfare?
;Reliable sources
*What makes the Sangamon County Rifle Association a reliable source?
*What makes Anglefire a reliable source? (and you should spell it right, too)
*Generally, web aggregate sources are not considered reliable by wikipedia standards. This means that "Never Yet Melted" is not a reliable source, nor is it, for other reasons, an unbiased source. See its own self description: Another Right-Wing Web Aggregator and Purveyor of Unpopular Opinions.  If you are using this source as a way of highlighting the controversy over the weapon, I'd suggest finding more reliable publications (Time Magazine, NYT, etc.).  I'd suggest you follow the link that the author included in his discussion of the problems of the shotgun in WWI, to see what the source is.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 21:28, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Initial comments 

message: I will give my input, as the editor may not understand what a collaboratrive effort is meant to be.
# RubyT made some much-needed improvement over the original article.
# The prose is very poorly written, it is non-encyclopedic and not summary-style.  Sentences and paragraphs overrun.  At least the 2nd person usage has been remedied and not reintroduced by thie editor.
# The article is rampant with unnecesarry repetition; history and description repeat much of each other as does the "slam-fire" in the Military section.
# Inconsistent nomenclature and capitalization errors, Call it Model 1897 or Model 97, but be consistent.  In these instances Model is a proper noun and should not appear as lowercase.
# The citations are raggedey as hell and inconsistent.  Too much weight is placed on online sources as opposed to published books.
# Excessive unnecesarry quotations that could be summarized in prose.
# Never yet melted is a dubious source as it is a Blog; the Angelfire source is a personal webpage and like the Blog it should not be used as this information can be found in plenty of reliable sources.  I have left several on your talk page, Ruby.
# I understand this is supposed to be a School project of some sort, but that does not mean you own the article.  Wikipedia is a collaborative effort, please work with other editors rather than reverting to prior versions full of weak pose and uncited sources.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 22:40, 12 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: My input

message: "American soldiers who were skilled at trap shooting were armed with these guns and stationed where they could fire at enemy hand grenades in midair."
This seems rather far-fetched, i dont know how reliable the source is but quick googling doesnt give anything on the subject. 84.251.1.46 (talk) 21:59, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: The idea of soldiers firing at grenades seems more plausible than official assignment of individuals to such duty. There would be limited possibility of seeing grenades at night or during attacks covered by smoke screens; and soldiers stationed for good visibility would be vulnerable to enemy fire. The relatively few pellets in a buckshot cartridge and the absence of barrel choke would make hit probability on a grenade-sized target unlikely at anything but the closest range. The results of a hit would be problematical at such close range. Random deflection of the grenade by buckshot might cause the grenade to land in a more or less damaging location than its original trajectory. The buckshot would be unlikely to detonate the grenade, but causing air detonation of the grenade at close range would probably increase the effectiveness of the grenade.Thewellman (talk) 21:43, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Shooting grenades from air 

message: I check pages listed in :Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of :Winchester Model 1897's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
Reference named "Czech":
From Hotchkiss Mle 1914 machine gun: 
From Chauchat: 
Reference named "Bishop":
From M1 Garand: 
From Winchester Model 1895: Bishop, Chris: The Encyclopedia of Weapons of World War II, p. 239. Sterling Publishing, 2002.
Reference named "Congo":
From Vickers machine gun: 
From M3 submachine gun: 
Reference named "Capie":
From Vickers machine gun: 
From Winchester Model 1895: 
Reference named "Jones":
From Pakistan: 
From M1911 pistol: 
From Malta: 
From M1918 Browning Automatic Rifle: 
From .38 Special: 
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 07:40, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Orphaned references in [[:Winchester Model 1897]]