Talk:Paola Antonelli

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*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20111007023722/http://press.moma.org/images/press/news/Paola_Antonelli_SeniorCurator_FINALLETTER.pdf to http://press.moma.org/images/press/news/Paola_Antonelli_SeniorCurator_FINALLETTER.pdf
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*Added  tag to https://www.designresearchnetwork.org/drn/content/interview-paola-antonelli%3A-%2526quot%3Bthinking-and-problem-making%2526quot%3B
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20081023171710/http://www.charlierose.com/shows/2008/05/07/1/design-and-the-elastic-mind to http://www.charlierose.com/shows/2008/05/07/1/design-and-the-elastic-mind
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replies: text: The citation on Italian WP (http://vittoriozincone.it/2010/10/14/paola-antonelli-sette-ottobre-2010/) does not confirm birth date. Cheers Cl3phact0 (talk) 17:53, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified 

message: I'm giving this article a bit of much needed attention. Please bear with me and do check that I haven't inadvertently deleted any salient bits. I'm simply trying to tidy-up the language and flow, not change the content. Cheers, Cl3phact0 (talk) 17:39, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  ce WP:GOCE 

message: I am not sure this needs the basic copyediting template - the text reads fine to me, except possibly the rather subjective 'Design Philosophy' section Xcia0069 (talk) 07:50, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Hello , thank you for your note. I have substantially edited much of the article, rearranged the content and sections for flow, cleaned-up the bare URLs, and am in the process of reviewing the "External links" section. I think it's better than it was, but still needs more fine-tuning. I wholly agree that the "Design philosophy" section needs to be improved (or removed) – I have been pondering what should be done with it. Any help you are able to give would be much appreciated. Also, feel free to rm the  tag from the article if you think it's now in good-enough shape! (Please do leave the GOCE tag here on the Talk page, as I am still actively working on the article.) Cheers, Cl3phact0 (talk) 08:30, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: PS: Re: "External links", there is a lot of interesting material here, however, I propose that some of it would be better as supporting references to the text (perhaps by expanding the "Work and career" or "Publications" section to include Antonelli's public speaking, etc.) rather than in what seems like a somewhat jumbled link farm. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 08:38, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

text: Thank you, . Removing ce tag per above and comments on User Talk. -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 14:51, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
replies: text:  [NB: "Design Philosophy" section still in need of attention.] -- Cl3phact0 (talk) 14:53, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Basic Copyediting looks fine