Talk:Precinct of Amun-Re

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message: Please provide direct access under the title "Avenue of the Sphinxes" which seems to be the title instead of Corridor.
See this article by Ann Wuyts:  
www.independent.co.uk/news/science/archaeology/news/excavation-and-restoration-on-the-avenue-of-sphinxes-1888212.html
Thanks for a fine artcle, Rumjal rumjal 08:25, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
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message: In the second paragraph it mentions "...and could accommodate 10 average European cathedrals.", does not make sense, how do you compute average size for cathedrals, is there any such thing as an average sized European cathedral, if so what is the size of such a thing? This part should be removed.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moughera (talk • contribs) 11:54, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. Thank you for pointing this out, . A. Parrot (talk) 14:03, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
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