Talk:Intelligence-led policing

message: I'm citing some sources here for use later.Tthompson70381 (talk) 14:57, 3 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Bibliography

message: This is an outline of changes on the article we are going to make, feel free to add/change anything you would like on this outline.
Increased History reference intelligence-led policing beyond 1990's and 9/11. (Dunham and Alpert book)
→Use of intelligence during the 1960's and 1970's in which records were not empirical but intuitive. (Carter, D. L., & Carter, J. G. (2009). Intelligence-Led Policing: Conceptual and Functional Considerations for Public Policy. Criminal Justice Policy Review, 20(3), 310-32) (1)
→Civil rights lawsuits that came from records(1)
Expansion of issues and potential of current listed issues having been resolved or near resolved.
→Current issue of suspicion by American public (1)
Possible of Expansion of Canada section.
Work on sources
Expansion of British model in the U.S. Tthompson70381 (talk) 14:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Outline

message: 1.From the part you added to Wikipedia, it is all neutral point of view to include the outline portion, so good job on that. You used the textbook as your reference for the edit so that is obviously a reliable source, but try to find another few sources for your next edits. 2.In your sentence, “One of the differences between the British model and the U.S. model is that of balancing American constitutional rights, and the act of gathering intelligence.” You should change it to “… rights with the act of gathering intelligence.” Other than this, try to keep adding more info based off your outline. You have a nice outline, but you haven’t really added much to the page itself. 3. Looking at the outline for planned revisions I liked how there were specific citations included in the list of things to be adjusted in the article, such as increased intelligence-led policing beyond 1990's and 9/11 with the citation of carter and carter. An area that could be worked on is the vagueness of what is going to be done regarding certain things such as the "Possible of Expansion of Canada section". Maybe you could write some specific things that you would want to add or change. The "Expansion of issues and potential of current listed issues having been resolved or near resolved" part of the outline is kind of confusing and I'm not sure what is trying to be said or done to the article. A little clarification about this might be good. 4. In the next few weeks, things to focus on might be adding information to the article that are cited in the outline such as the possible expansion of sections.Oksoha (talk) 18:35, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: 1 This is a good page and has alot of information that is regarding the topic. I like how there are specific citation What you can improve on is adding more information. Ashton22 (talk) 19:21, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
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