Talk:Shirley Dean

message: I made a number of significant changes in the revision:
* Structured the article that had become an uncontrolled ramble.
* Added additional sourcing
* Added the SFBA Project template to this page.
Hopefully this comes much closer to NPOV.
--Oskibear2008 (talk) 14:28, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Major Revisions

message: I've made the beginnings of my attempt balance this article and bring it back to NPOV.  In doing so, I've found that the article is very scattered in its organization.  In the next few days I'm going spend some time trying to reorganize the material, elimate some the redundancy, and update the template.
--Oskibear2008 (talk) 02:11, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Attempting to balance this article

message: 24.7.67.79 20:41, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  'Beyond absurd?'  Less is more - the temptations of bias in political biography 

message: In the next few days, I'll spend a few minutes to improve the sourcing and references which is so bad right know that much of the biography could be deleted.  I removed the Worthington comment and some of the word usage that had POV issues.  While I have enjoyed reading this article as a joke from time to time, I find my own sense of wikipedia ethic preventing me from allowing this page to remain the way it was.  If anyone wants to have a good laugh, just look back on the page history. User:calbear22 18:18, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Removing comedy, requesting better sourcing

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thread_title:  External links modified 

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