Talk:Monique D. Davis

message: We don't quote the entire content of a copyrighted article on Wikipedia. Summary good, adding the whole thing, not so good. I'm removing that immediately. Jtrainor (talk) 16:33, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The problem is that it's giving undue weight to this one incident.  There's no way the whole transcript needs to be up there.  It can easilly be cut down to one or two quotes as Zorn did in his shorter version. - Maximusveritas (talk) 04:05, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

text: I think copyright's a red herring here. Let's just focus on making a good article. Which, in my view, needs only enough of an excerpt to convey the flavor of the incident. As with anything here, anybody who needs the full details can click through. William Pietri (talk) 04:16, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

text: FWIW, copyright is not technically an issue here, as the contents of government proceedings are normally considered public domain, and not subject to copyright. I do agree that it can probably be shortened, though. Samer (talk) 16:38, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: This article needs major work

message: Is "Council of Secular Humanism" supposed to be "Council for Secular Humanism"? I suspect, but don't feel very bold since there's nothing on their homepage about it. Swooch (talk) 12:39, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I've fixed it, it was mentioned in the blog entry referenced.  --George100 (talk) 15:17, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Council ''for'' Secular Humanism? 

message: The term "2008 incident" is too general and broad.  We should change this to reflect the nature of the event.  Incident is a catch-all term, and we should refine the article to reflect the situation.
Im not sure what it should be called, but "incident" seems unncessarily vague.
Wageslave (talk) 19:18, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  "2008 incident" 

message: Someone from an unregistered IP added: "You can fax her here to ask for her resignation . . . ." etc.
I think we can all agree this does not belong on Wikipedia. Samer (talk) 15:49, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Commentary 

message: This was a small article until Davis' "comments on atheism" in legislature.  Adding additional information on Davis is worthwhile for certain, but that event is clearly the most notable and deserves to be treated in the way it was prior to this influx of material.
Please refrain from making significant alterations to that section without reviewing the discussion that was undertaken to produce it.
Wageslave (talk) 18:58, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: New "Comments on Atheism" section in the "2008" area

message: Please replace the current External links with these (current standard format):
*Representative Monique D. Davis (D) 27th District at the Illinois General Assembly
**By session: 98th, 97th, 96th, 95th, 94th, 93th
*
*Monique Davis at Illinois House Democrats
184.78.81.245 (talk) 15:34, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: - most of these links were added. -- Diannaa (talk) 01:31, 10 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request on 8 September 2013 

message: Please add this in External links after Illinois General Assembly:
**By session: 98th, 97th, 96th, 95th, 94th, 93rd
Note: THERE IS NO EASY WAY TO NAVIGATE FROM ONE SESSION TO ANOTHER WHICH IS WHY I TOOK THE TIME TO LOOK EACH OF THESE UP. TWICE.
184.78.81.245 (talk) 21:01, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request on 15 September 2013 

message: In the first sentence, please change
 
"Monique Dionne Davis (née McKay; born August 19, 1936) is a American educator and Democratic member of the Illinois House of Representatives, representing the 27th District since 1987 (elected on November 4, 1986)." 
to
"Monique Dionne Davis (née McKay; born August 19, 1936) is an American educator and Democratic member of the Illinois House of Representatives, representing the 27th District since 1987 (elected on November 4, 1986)." 
("a" to "an")
Thank you.
12.180.133.18 (talk) 03:53, 24 July 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Done Stickee (talk) 04:49, 24 July 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 24 July 2015: minor grammar edit in first sentence 

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