Talk:Richard Hofstadter

message: Why is George Will the only critic mentioned in the "criticism" section?  Will is a pundit, not a historian and it is pretty clear that he does not understand, and possibly has not read, "The Paranoid Style".  Is a separate section for criticism really even necessary?  There are various critiques of Hofstadters works throughout the body of the article. (OBC)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.181.44.229 (talk) 05:04, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It means that people like Washington and Jefferson were very much afraid of political parties as basically evil or dangerous. Hofstadter shows how the election of 1800 helped reduce this fear and establish the idea that two parties were good and should rotate. Rjensen 19:00, 18 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Will? 

message: Here's why I changed the dates regarding Hofstadter's Social Darwinism: I found that Dissertation Abstracts lists the date of Hofstadter's dissertation as 1945.  The two academic libraries I've checked, as well as Fetchbook, show that it was first published in 1955.  And if he didn't complete the diss until 1945, joining the faculty of Columbia in 1946 would not be "two years later" as the article said. --RedJ 17 16:40, 23 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, Thanks RJensen, I just now found that the UPenn publication was reviewed by Morton White in 1945.  I still don't understand why Dissertation Abstracts lists 1945 as his degree date.  Thanks for making the correction. --RedJ 17 01:47, 24 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Social Darwinism Publication Dates 

message: I am unfamiliar with this gentleman's work, only visiting this page because of a casual mention of him in an article critical Wikipedia.  However, reading this page, I can't help but feel that it is written in a fashion to subtly mock the man's ideas.  For instance:
Beard's Civil War was a transfer of political power from Southern plantation elite to Northeastern capitalists. Slavery was not especially important as a cause.
Also:
Like his other books it was light on original research, for he did rarely worked in archives or newspaper files, preferring to read and sythesize secondary sources.
And:
Later critics undercut his thesis, showing that very few businessmen were Social Darwinists and instead took very different positions in favor of philanthropy, for example.
Pardon me if all of these items are factually accurate, and I'm just reading the derision in to it.  The last item actually contains a link to a note which appears to be presently non-existent, but is probably meant to refer to a reference which justifies the statement. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by OldMiner (talk • contribs) .
::Hofstadter was fond of irony, so he would enjoy this little debate. But H's weaknesses are not really in dispute. The Brown book and Foner article covers all the points in question (also Bannister on Social Darwinism). (Brown is on the right and Foner is on the left, by the way.) Hofstadter's greatest weakness is he did very little research into sources and relied heavily on secondary sources. He overcame this in his best book The Progressive Historians where he DID read the sources closely. Rjensen 11:59, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not so much a matter of whether Hofstadter's weaknesses are "in dispute"; you're clearly more knowledgeable about the topic than I, so I'll take your word for it. The concern that the above author raised, and that I attempted to address in my edit, was the tone of the language and taking a point of view. The way things like this are often handled on Wikipedia is to create a "Criticism" subsection, in which the criticisms of Hofstadter (reliance on secondary sources, misstatements about Social Darwinism, etc) are detailed, with citations. Would you be willing to give this a shot, since you're up on the topic? MastCell 17:31, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Subtle Pro-Capitalist Bias? 

message: Hello - Rjensen, if you're making significant content changes to the article, could you please leave a more detailed edit summary than "tweaks" or "details"? It will help everyone who works on the article. Thanks. MastCell 22:27, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit Summaries 

message: The education section mentions State University of New York at Buffalo, in the 1930s.  Wouldn't that institution have been The University of Buffalo at that time, and not incorporated into the SUNY system until the late 1960s?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.22.203.137 (talk) 02:37, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  SUNY? 

message: Without an explanation of what a "consensus historian" is and an accompanying comment with respect to how few there are, what view point they attempted to impose on history, when they arose, and when their view point waned in historiography, I see only confusion from the use of the term to describe Hofstadter. I had to knock about the net for a while before I got some idea of what one was. ```` CorlyssD FurnaldHall (talk) 23:26, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Consensus Historian 

message: I added the POV tag based on the above criticisms - this article does seem to need an overhaul.PJtP (talk) 03:15, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The POV tag is used when there are alternative interpretations in the Reliable Sources that have been left out.  Just which RS does PJtP have in mind? Rjensen (talk) 03:32, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: No, the POV tag is used when an editor has pushed a POV outside of what the sources say and has introduced bias into an encyclopedia article.  Rjensen, you cannot reverse the burden here.  There is a glaring POV issue here, and according to the edit history, you appear to be responsible for it. Viriditas (talk) 04:23, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The POV tag means there are important alternative viewpoints that are missing. Exactly what viewpoints are those?? Please cite the RS  so we can move on. The rule is wp:POV Editing from a neutral point of view (NPOV) means representing fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without bias, all significant views that have been published by reliable sources. Rjensen (talk) 04:30, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: No, Rjensen.  I've added the  tag.  I've just taken a look at the tertiary literature on this subject, and it does not resemble the hatchet job you've created here.  That's the first concern.  The fact that your version of "history" isn't supported by the history books is a huge red flag. Viriditas (talk) 04:31, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: you might read the biography by Brown.  As yet no examples have been provided--that makes it hard to figure out the complaint. Rjensen (talk) 04:46, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: You've got the burden to show that the article is supported, Rjensen.  Let's start with the sources.  Do the sources support the current article?  Yes or no?  Simple question. Viriditas (talk) 04:47, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: yes and I just added couple more sources. Which source is problematic? Rjensen (talk) 04:52, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Let's see, where should I begin?  Let's start with your massive violations of WP:UNDUE throughout the article beginning with section two.  The contribution history shows that you took a biographical section about his graduate school experience and turned it into a severely unbalanced portrayal of Hofstadter as a Marxist and a communist, even though no known reliable source on the subject portrays him that way, and he only joined the communist party for one year because he was interested in the radical issues they discussed during the 1930s, when membership was probably quite common.  Brown, which is the source you used, titles this period in his life as "Education, 1916-1950", and provides a chapter about his "Radical roots".  He does not call it "Early Communism" because, as the source points out, Hofstadter wasn't really a communist and, upon finding out what communists were really about, he repudiated the movement.  However, these facts do not stop you from claiming "Richard Hofstadter was a Communist and a member of the Young Communist League at university, and later progressed to Communist Party membership."  Please explain this glaring discrepancy between what the sources say about Hofstadter and how you have deliberately portrayed him. Viriditas (talk) 05:01, 30 May 2012 (UTC)

text: The text is quite accurate, and revolve around H's quotes. Geary says: "To Hofstadter, radicalism always offered more of a critical intellectual stance than a commitment to political activism. Although Hofstadter quickly became disillusioned with the Communist Party, he retained an independent left-wing standpoint well into the 1940s. Both his first book, Social Darwinism in American Thought (1944), and The American Political Tradition (1948) were written from a radical point of view." (p 428)" Rjensen (talk) 05:23, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Rjensen, your notion of "accuracy" is at odds with NPOV, namely WP:UNDUE, and the appropriate use of sources on Wikipedia.  We don't cherry pick quotes or citations out of their biographical context to push a POV, nor do we generate unique perspectives on subjects that aren't reflected first by the secondary and tertiary literature.  In situations like this, I start off by using the tertiary literature as a baseline.  There are probably around a dozen or so biographical and encyclopedic entries on Hofstadter in print and online.  None of them call him a Marxist or a Communist nor do they refer to his early educational period as "Early Communism" or "Marxist stage". Is this making sense yet? Viriditas (talk) 08:16, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text:  As for research: My draft was subhead: "Marxist stage" (which I believe is uncontroversial and I have re-added it. See my edit 13 Oct 2006 at http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Richard_Hofstadter&diff=next&oldid=81255092  Someone else (Mhazard9) three years later in 2009 changed that to "The Communist" see http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Richard_Hofstadter&diff=322509939&oldid=322486386  As for his radicalism, better read Geary (quoted) and especially Wiener who argues that H was much more of a leftist radical than Brown says.  As for secondary sources I don't believe Viriditras has read many of the cited secondary sources or indeed many of the Hofstadter's own articles and books. I  was the one who added most or all of them and I read them all first.  As for the totally false statement that " None of them call him a Marxist"  Viriditas apparently has not seen the full length book on H in the 1930s by Susan Baker, Radical Beginnings: Richard Hofstadter and the 1930s (1985)--RADICAL beginnings, she says; the article says "radical stage". Baker writes, "Two aspects of Richard Hofstadter's career point to the conclusion that he was profoundly influenced by the political Left of the 1930's." ... "The philosophical impact of Marxism was so intense and direct during Hofstadter's formative years that it formed a major part of his identity crisis.... The impact of these years created his orientation to the American past, accompanied as it was by marriage, establishment of life-style, and choice of profession."  And in any academic library Viriditas can find The Am Ntl Biog -- a leading tertiary source; it says H saw his role as "bringing Marxist categories and a left political commitment into a broader historiographical outlook."  Rjensen (talk) 09:59, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: For the second time, please stop quote mining and cherry picking to push a POV and start finding me a reliable source—any reliable source—that presents Hofstadter as a Marxist or as a Communist in the way that you do.  Considering how young Hofstadter was at the time and the incredibly short length of time between the time he joined the Communist party and the time he left the party, you are quite obviously violating WP:UNDUE in a most egregious manner.  The preponderance of sources do not present Hofstadter in this light; It is your own invention and you are misusing sources to push this POV.  They do not describe him as either a Marxist or a Communist, but rather someone who may have explored those ideas at some point.  None of the sources I've examined call this part of his life a "Marxist stage" as you have done.  You're clearly pushing this POV for a reason.  Many of the quotes you cite above are opinions, which you are then combining with his own quotes while at the same time, stitching them together in a narrative that connects it to his critique of capitalism.  Quote mining and cherry picking isn't acceptable. Viriditas (talk) 10:36, 30 May 2012 (UTC)

text: I've started making a few changes, beginning with the undue weight of the section heading, followed by the removal of the quotes, which you are welcome to move to wikiquote. Viriditas (talk) 11:01, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Viriditas can add the graduation date from college anytime, if he thinks its important (the text says he entered in 1933 and went to grad school in 1936--which seems clear enough).  As for his MA thesis it was written from a far-left anti-New Deal viewpoint. (says Wiener). Viriditas says "Hofstadter isn't known for being a Communist" -- that's because he kept it a deep secret until historians discovered it in the 1980s; his dissertation advisor did not know he was in the Party. We have two full length biographies: Brown's bio uses the heading "Radical Roots" for a 25 page section covering the 1930s. Baker titles her bio Radical beginnings. Geary says his "left-wing standpoint' and "radicalism' lasted until the late 1940s. Wiener says he headed a Communist controlled student group while an undergraduate and wrote the Am Pol Tradition from a left wing perspective. Bender says H "saw his role as "bringing Marxist categories and a left political commitment into a broader historiographical outlook." Baker says, "he was profoundly influenced by the political Left of the 1930's." ... "The philosophical impact of Marxism was so intense and direct during Hofstadter's formative years that it formed a major part of his identity crisis.... The impact of these years created his orientation to the American past."   Hofstadter himself wrote, "I hate capitalism and everything that goes with it". Viriditas is completely unaware of any of this -- he thinks all these scholars are all wrong while his unnamed sources undoubtedly support his own viewpoint--which is what? Viriditas never tells us what Hofstadter was "really" like. I suggest he go away, cool off, try practicing good faith, and read some RS. removing material violate NPOV rulesRjensen (talk) 11:07, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I am aware of your quote mining and cherry picking to push a POV, Rjensen.  Hofstadter taught at the University of Maryland for four years yet was a member-in-name-only of the Communist Party for what, a year?  You priorities here are obvious, Rjensen.  You don't seem to have any interest in writing a biography based on the sources, but on quote mining and cherry picking unweighted material about a single year in his life when he joined the Communist party, even thought the majority of sources say he wasn't a Communist.  What does that tell you, Rjensen? Viriditas (talk) 11:11, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Rjensen, how is this edit by yourself in any way shape or form "NPOV"?  Are you using a different definition of NPOV than Wikipedia?  I ask, because it seems like you are. Viriditas (talk) 11:14, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I never stressed his Communism. Instead what most RS stress is his radicalism down to about 1948. After that he became a liberal. Rjensen (talk) 11:18, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Rjensen, is it true that most sources stress his radicalism? The Encyclopedia of World Biography stresses the fact that his work criticized both liberals and conservatives, as it should.  Do we find this kind of balance in this article? Viriditas (talk) 11:30, 30 May 2012 (UTC)

text: Indeed in his radical days (1933-48) he was hostile to both capitalism and the New Deal, as the article says. Rjensen (talk) 11:41, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I was referring to his criticism of the left and the right in his work, as represented (according to the EWB) by John Higham and Norman Pollack, not any "hostility" to an economic system. This is the kind of actual criticism needed in the article not George Will criticizing Obama. Viriditas (talk) 11:48, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The EWB essay focuses on the 1950s-- but it's not a RS by a scholar (it's not even signed and no sources are given--compare that with serious books and long essays signed by scholars like Brown, Baker, Foner, Wiener, Pole, Howe   etc ). George Will says Hofstadter has a major influence on liberals in the 21st century--that's a major point. Does anyone think Will is wrong?Rjensen (talk) 11:55, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The EWB entry is signed by its author—Gerald W. McFarland, Professor Emeritus, Department of History, University of Massachusetts - Amherst. I would like to see better sources than an op/ed by Will about Obama. Viriditas (talk) 12:04, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: my apologies to professor McFarland. But it's a tertiary source and not recommended by Wiki rules. Use a reliable secondary source written by specialists--over a dozen are given.  Will has been a leading oberver of political ideas for decades, and he's a good source on the topic he wrote about. Do you disagree with his assertion that Hofstadter influenced Obama? Rjensen (talk) 12:54, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Please read closer for comprehension.  I previously explained to you that I use tertiary sources as a baseline to gauge importance and notability. Clearly, McFarland is a specialist, so your objection is dismissed.  As for secondary sources, your own use of Brown shows that Hofstadter disliked the Communists and the Communist party, yet you've purposefully cherry picked quotes in an undue manner to show otherwise. Viriditas (talk) 22:23, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: POV tag

message: This section is ridiculous.  To begin with, this is a relic from the mid-2000s when Wikipedia still had criticism sections, which we rarely use anymore, preferring to merge related content into related sections.  The quote by George Will is from an outdated opinion piece on Obama's 2008 candidacy; it is not about Hofstadter at all, but mentions him in passing.  We generally do not quote mine sources for criticisms when they aren't relevant to the subject, so this is yet again another poorly composed section with even poorer sources indicating heavy POV pushing once again. Viriditas (talk) 11:07, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: George Will has a Princeton PhD in political theory and is well positioned to comment on Hofstadter's intellectual influence on American thought. Obama is not at issue. Rjensen (talk) 11:18, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The problem here isn't with George Will, it is with how the source is used.  This source is about the 2008 election, not Hofstadter.  Please stick to sources about Hofstadter in an article about Hofstadter.  George Will is criticizing Obama, and he's using Hofstadter to do it.  That really isn't appropriate for a biographical article. Viriditas (talk) 11:26, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: it's about the long-term influence of liberal intellectuals such as Hofstadter, Stevenson, the Lynds and Galbraith. Will's argument is that Obama's mind & other liberals are shaped by those folks, which is certainly an important legacy for Hofstadter. Rjensen (talk) 11:39, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: That's chronologically inaccurate since it is a criticism of Obama, not Hofstadter.  Further, the source isn't relevant to a biography of Hofstadter.  Seriously, this is Reliable Sources 101.  I shouldn't have to tell you this, but you can't do this. Viriditas (talk) 11:45, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: try again: Will argues that Hofstadter has influenced Obama. That surely is an important point--do you think it's not true??? Rjensen (talk) 11:56, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Which explains why you are trying to make Hofstadter into a Marxist/Communist.  Will's argument isn't relevant here, however, if there were a source /about/ Hofstadter that mentioned Obama, then yes, it might work. Viriditas (talk) 12:00, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, Hofstadter was a Communist, although he left the part in disillusionment in the late 1930s. All of which we cover. I don't see how a passing mention in an op-ed piece from a partisan columnist really fits into a serious discussion of scholarly responses and critiques of Hofstadter's work, though. MastCell Talk 19:11, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't agree.  The tertiary sources don't mention it because it isn't important, and historically, Hofstadter attacked the left and the right.  Secondary sources like Brown (2006) note his "half-hearted commitment to the Communist Party" during his entire four months as a member, from October 1938-February 1939,  after which he cultivated a "private rejection of both organized communism and the masses who filled the party's ranks."  According to Brown, Hofstadter understood that Communists "would not think twice about stamping out critical thought if it furthered their agenda" and he "became increasingly convinced that labor radicalism constituted a serious threat to intellectual freedom".  This is not a Communist at all, and the undue weight being given to his four months in the college version of the party at Columbia at age 32, a time he spent probably to keep his wife company, is absurd. According to Brown, "Hofstadter's radicalism was of a more cerebral, critical, and pessimistic kind."  A fellow peer said that Hofstadter "was not a real hands on radical".  Brown goes on for page after page explaining how Hofstadter disliked Communists and the Communist party, and there are many sources showing how Hofstadter attacked both the left and the right for their shortcomings. Viriditas (talk) 22:32, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Criticism section 

message: I propose changing this section to two different neutrally-worded and standard sections comprising "Early life" and "Education". Viriditas (talk) 22:36, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: no, the RS say it was his radical period. You have to follow the RS -- like the two major biographies and numerous articles--instead of hiding the facts about Hofstadter. I checked on the Ency World Biog and it was written years before the Brown book appeared.  Rjensen (talk) 22:51, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The Brown book uses the subsection for a select group of years that the author terms "radical roots", but this is a sensationalistic chapter title listed under the parent heading of "Education".  I haven't tried to hide any facts about Hofstadter, but rather to present them in proportion to their appearance in reliable sources, which you have twisted beyond what is necessary and allowed. Viriditas (talk) 22:55, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: you are trying to hide his radicalism and make him out as much more  conservative than the RS say. That is a fringe view since the discovery of his far-left affiliations (which were hidden until recently). Rjensen (talk) 23:14, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: No, I am trying to fix a poorly written biography which you have slanted in an undue manner to push your personal conspiracy theory that Obama is a Communist.  Hofstadter was a member of his college Communist Party for four months at the age of 32.  He spent the rest of his time repudiating them.  Clearly, the man had an informed opinion about Communists, so his writings have more weight informed by experience.  However, his four months as a member of college Communist group that he disagreed with should not be given undue weight in this article, such as your continued dismissal of the four years he spent teaching.  The problem here isn't Hofstadter or the sources, it's your obsession with making him out to be something he wasn't. Viriditas (talk) 23:36, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Hofstadter was on the far left throughout his formative years until the mid or late 1940s is what the RS say. It strongly influenced his first two books they say. For only a short while was he a member of the CPUSA but for 14 years he was intellectually on the far left. He certainly had to be to even consider joining the Party. He left because it started to support Hitler in 1939. Rjensen (talk) 00:34, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Please describe what you mean by the "far left" in the context of Hofstadter's life at the time.  I ask, because the term "far left" is used quite differently by the radical right, to mean something other than what it actually means or how it is normally used.  Surely, you must have examples of his "far left" beliefs and even actions he took to express them.  For an example of this discrepancy, look no farther than the concept of national health insurance, which is considered a basic human right in the majority of countries on the planet.  However, in the United States, for whatever reasons, it is often described by the radical right as a "far left" belief.  One of many, many examples showing the disconnect between how words are used and how the public discourse has been hijacked by fringe groups. Viriditas (talk) 00:44, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: the far left denounced the New Deal as too capitalistic;  -- as H did in his MA thesis.   "I hate capitalism" said Hofstadter, Read the RS for the details -- Wiener is quite explicit. Rjensen (talk) 01:12, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: So, anyone who criticizes the economic system of capitalism is part of the "far left"?  Can we find people in the center, on the right, and on the far right who also criticize what they hate about capitalism, and can we safely say that they are still in the center, on the right, and on the far right while maintaining this criticism?  Going further, can we point to things about capitalism from the time of Hofstadter that people in good conscience can all agree to hate, such as child labor (two million children working in factories in 1919), unsafe working conditions, and low wages?  Does one become part of the "far left" for hating what is inhuman and for demanding that which is more human?  Or can we agree that the majority of rational people on all sides of the ideological spectrum, will agree to a standard of basic human working conditions?  Is everyone now on the "far left" for agreeing to this? Viriditas (talk) 01:32, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

text: I hope Viriditas sooner or later will read up in the RS. Let us know when that happens.  As for child labor, Hofstadter ridiculed the Progressive reformers who tried to end it, saying they suffered from status anxiety. Rjensen (talk) 01:38, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I've read Wiener's book review, and it states what I've already said up above: "The Spanish Civil War was raging during his graduate school days, and in October 1938 he responded, as many of his peers did, by joining the Communist Party...at Columbia."  In other words, nothing special here at all.  Wiener calls him a "mainstream liberal", neither a Communist nor a member of the "far left".  So, once again, the sources do not support your position.  Wiener also notes that he wasn't subpoenaed as an alleged Communist, which pretty much tells you everything you need to know. Viriditas (talk) 01:55, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Wiener says H " became president of his university’s chapter of the National Student League, a Communist-led antiwar organization". That's far left as an undergraduate. Wiener: "His 1938 master’s thesis at Columbia was a fierce indictment of the New Deal’s Agricultural Adjustment Act for supporting Southern planters rather than poor farmers." that's far left.  H wrote "My fundamental reason for joining,” the CP “is that I don’t like capitalism and want to get rid of it." that's far left. After he quit, he wrote "“I hate capitalism and everything that goes with it.” That's far left. Wiener: in 1944 "Hofstadter published his first book, a blistering exposé of capitalist ideology" that's far left. Weiner says re 'The American Political Tradition':
"Hofstadter wrote the book from a vantage point on the left." That's left in 1948.  Bottom line: he was far left or leftist from 1933 to 1948. Rjensen (talk) 02:01, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

text: Still having difficulty understanding how we use sources, eh?  You, the editor, do not get to categorize him as "far left".  You need to find sources that do, and you need to stop cherry picking and quote mining.  The Wiener source you are using explicitly describes Hofstadter as a "mainstream liberal", not as part of the "far left". Viriditas (talk) 02:05, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: "Radical" and "Marxist" is what his biographers say, noting he was far enough left to want to join the Communist Party. He left it when it supported Hitler in 1939. Baker says "The philosophical impact of Marxism was so intense and direct during Hofstadter's formative years that it formed a major part of his identity crisis.... The impact of these years created his orientation to the American past."   Rjensen (talk) 02:19, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: First of all, the section you've titled "Radical roots" is properly and neutrally titled "Early life and education".  Second of all, you have given massive undue weight to the four months he spent as a "half-hearted" (Brown 2006) member of the Communist party, by adding three large paragraphs about it, while at the same time, ignoring the four years he spent teaching at the University of Maryland. So, right away, your treatment of this subject isn't supported by policy nor is it supported by the sources.  Third of all, he didn't leave the CP because they supported Hitler; he left as I explained above, because he never was a Communist, he didn't like Communists, and he didn't believe in embracing an uncritical ideology. To quote Brown, Hofstadter's "first skirmishes with anti-intellectualism, in other words, were fought against the Left."  Fourth, you are quote mining Baker to push your POV.  Please look up the word "balance" and embrace it.  Viriditas (talk) 02:41, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

text: Hoftsadter spent his formative years as a college student and as a PhD student as a member of groups controlled by the Communist Party and for a year or so was a formal party member. Biographers agree that is needed to understand his political values.  Note that his role was kept secret until 1980s (his PhD dissertation advisor Curti say he never knew at the time). Rjensen (talk) 01:07, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Radical roots 

message: I think Wiki must be using a Robo editor to count the number of quotation marks used.  Referring to:
Political views [heading] "...  This article contains too many or too-lengthy quotations for an encyclopedic entry. Please help improve the article by editing it to take facts from excessively quoted material and rewrite them as sourced original prose. Consider transferring direct quotations to Wikiquote. (May 2012) 
In this case the call out comes right after a section ... with a number of "words" in quotations .. these are not reference-able quotations but words. The call out is incorrect. Someone remove it. Danleywolfe (talk) 16:02, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wiki call out for too many quotations ? 

message: The original section title, "Early life and education", is correct according to Wikipedia best practices, and our goal of keeping section headings neutral.  Once again, Rjensen feels differently. Instead of using the talk page to explain why he keeps changing this section to the non-neutral title "Early life and radical views", he has once again used the edit summary instead, this time to argue (and I'm paraphrasing because he refuses to use the talk page properly) "Reliable sources call him a radical; see Baker biography entitled Radical Beginnings: Richard Hofstadter and the 1930s".  Unfortunately, that in no way, shape, or form addresses my point about neutral section headings.  This particular section is about his early life in  Buffalo, New York, ("Early life") and his studies at Columbia University ("Education").  Rjensen has shoehorned a single paragraph about his political views into this section that is primarily about his early life and education, and misrepresents cited sources to argue that the section should be called "Early life and radical views".  To do this, Rjensen first misrepresents Baker (1985), whose primary argument (according to a review of the work) shows that his undergraduate and graduate studies contributed to his political viewpoint.  Finally, Rjensen cites  Eric Foner, who just like Baker, shows how Hofstadter formed and developed his views in the university system.  Rjensen's argument, therefore, actually supports the opposite of what he claims, as the sources he cites in the shoehorned paragraph about his early life and education, describe how his political views arose out of his educational milieu.  I suspect Rjensen isn't stupid, and knows this is true, but insists on adding bias to this article. Viriditas (talk) 01:02, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Update: I've removed the paragraph in its entirety, as the content already appears in the political views section.  Either Rjensen is aware of this duplication or he isn't; if he is, then he should know that we don't repeat the same content twice in a biography.  If he isn't aware, then he is now. Viriditas (talk) 01:07, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Early life and education