Talk:Newark Academy

message: This article appears to be written in the manner of promotional literature, rather than from an unbiased perspective. Sonicwav 15:16, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: By all means, edit, but I think there are problems with other sections as well, and so would disagree with removing the advertisement tag until the whole article can be revamped. For example, in the Campus section, there is currently phrasing like "a state-of-the-art computer facility" and "the wooded reaches of the Passaic River." I have a feeling that much of this text was copied straight out of Newark Academy's own language, or at least written by someone promoting the school. Unsupported statistics and countries of international students are listed in the Student Body section. There is too much specific information in here without citations. Even if the POV bias is fixed, this article is still going to need external links to back up that information. However, I would be against deleting the article outright, because it can provide a starting point for more neutral and supported text. --Sonicwav 20:04, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
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message: @Alansohn This article suffers from several issues with due weight and contains multiple instances of boosterism for a secondary school. There is also issues with promotional tone, in combination with a significant lack of citations. Here are some examples:
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Until these are fixed, I've added the booster tag to reflect the problematic content. GuardianH (talk) 07:50, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Also, I forgot to mention, the lede needs to conform to WP:DUE weight. There is a whole lede section that houses rankings for the school, but none such section in the body — same issue with the history section. These need to be moved down into the body. GuardianH (talk) 07:52, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Also, the WP:COI editing  doesn't help the article either. GuardianH (talk) 07:53, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[WP:UNDUE]] and boosterism issues