Talk:Amniocentesis

message: I've added a general cleanup template to this section. I don't question the intentions of the author of this section, but it should probably be worded more carefully and subtly, so as to avoid potential POV or factual problems. Thanks. Naptastic (talk) 17:36, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Amniocentesis and stem cells section

message: The entire risk section needs to be cited from something. Who knows if anything there is valid?
The PROCEDURE section seems to be casually worded, especially in the last sentence (...You or your doctor...)Derekbd 00:57, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
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message: Regarding the risks of amniocentesis. I am not an expert but I have read a note at the gynecologist's where the management of the hospital asked doctors
to inform patients about the 2% risk of miscarriage after amniocentesis. Before that the official number was 1%. They even stated they did 200 tests last year and had 3 miscarriages as a direct result and 1 as a more complicated but related reason.
Please somebody get this right and include the sources. I think it is important. Thanks.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Drevokocur (talk • contribs) 11:16, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
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message: Get rid of the Pain section, its 2 short sentences, and the information isn't cited and pretty dubious in any case.
Pstanton 00:00, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Delete the Pain section 

message: The article does not mention the use of amniocentesis to test for lung maturity when there is a possibility of preterm delivery. This should be added.Milliemchi (talk) 20:22, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Amniocentesis for lung maturity 

message: In the Encyclopedia of International Development (ed Tim Forsyth Routledge 2005) there is an entry on Amniocentesis (sex-selection). The entry argues that Amniocentesis has become prevalent in some cultures (China and India are mentioned). The results of the test are then used as the basis for decisions about abortion. Using Amniocentesis to aid sex-selection is then a major contributor to there being millions of missing women. Would there be any problems with me adding something about this? (Msrasnw (talk) 10:46, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Amniocentesis (sex-selection) 

message: There is a request at Requested articles for a page on post procedure care after Amnio. I think that should redirect here, but there isn't any discussion of that. It is needed.   BakerStMD T|C 20:11, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Post procedure care section requested 

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message: Our goals include:
* Revising the introduction paragraph to make defining the procedure read more smoothly
* Creating a history section to flesh out the origin and development of amniocentesis
* Validate the risk section with sources and include recent additions
* Elaborate on the "Procedure" section to include more in depth description of the procedure as well as pre and post considerations when electing to have an amniocentesis performed
* Reformat the "Medical Uses" section to categorize uses based on condition
Mvirk422 (talk) 20:45, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2, Group 8c Goals 

message: 1. Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”? 
- Yes.
2, Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? 
- Yes, their overall goals for improvement have been met. This group has exceeded their overall goals for improving this article. 
3. Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify… 
- Yes, their submissions are neutral.
Mquindoy (talk) 21:33, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2 2019, Peer review 

message: Great work on updating this Wiki Page! I thought the additions that you all made were very valuable and relevant. 
In terms of feedback, I agree that the use of gender-inclusive language could be improved. 
Additionally, I think there could be improved caution with using medical jargon or including more hyperlinks to other articles. For example, readers might not know the terms "Rh" and "indication" (medical indication - I didn't know what this was until starting school)." 
Overall, great job!! Nzahid (talk) 21:57, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2 Peer Review, 2022 

message: Hello everyone! I am so excited to collaborate on the amniocentesis wiki article as part of my WikiProject Course. Below is my work plan for the duration of my course!
Work plan
* Edit article to follow the recommended structure and order for medical procedures, per the Wikipedia: Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles 
** Lead Section 
** Medical Uses
** Contraindications 
** Risks/Complications
** Procedure/Technique 
** Recovery 
** History 
** Society and Culture
** Special Populations
** Other Animals 
* Lead Section
** Edit for conciseness and grammar
** Evaluate for a neutral point of view
** Briefly make clear why amniocentesis is the gold standard for chromosome testing
*** Find an appropriate reference for this point 
** Look for big-picture statistics on amniocentesis such as how many are performed per year in the United States 
** Make sure major points of the article are included in the lead section
* Medical Uses Section
** Edit for conciseness and grammar
** Assess and edit for use of medical jargon 
** Research current literature for any potential new subsection additions 
** Consider converting the “stem cells” section to a subsection of the medical uses section 
*** Stem Cells:
**** Research this topic
**** Verify that this subsection has been adequately “cleaned up” and that it “avoids potential POV or factual problems,” per previous talk page posts
**** Assess all references and evaluate if they meet Wiki criteria
** Current Subsections:
*** Genetic diagnosis
**** Expand on indications for amniocentesis for genetic diagnosis purposes
**** Elaborate on who the procedure is offered to and why and the different scenarios a pregnant person may receive the procedure 
**** Compare and contrast alternatives to amniocentesis for genetic diagnosis and pros/cons of each in relation to amniocentesis 
*** Lung development
**** Research this topic, including any new relevant research
**** Elaborate on what surfactant is and how it is relevant to fetal lung development 
**** Verify fetal lung development test explanations and find citations for these
*** Infection
**** Expand on/further explain how amniocentesis can detect infections 
**** Clarify medical jargon 
**** Implications/benefits of detecting infections, particularly via amniocentesis 
**** Look into including alternatives to amniocentesis for infection detection
*** Rh incompatibility
**** Elaborate on Rh incompatibility and implications
**** Clarify medical jargon 
**** Explain how amniocentesis is used to diagnose Rh incompatibility
*** Decompression of polyhydramnios
**** Elaborate on polyhydramnios and its implications/risks
**** Explain process of decompression via amniocentesis 
**** Clarify medical jargon, such as “decompression”
*** Preterm rupture of membranes
**** Research current literature on amniocentesis in the management of preterm rupture of membranes 
***** Use findings from this research to expand on this section 
***** How is amniocentesis useful in management of preterm rupture of membranes?
***** How does IL-6 elevation indicate that the fetus is at “high risk” and what is the fetus at “high risk” for? 
* Contraindications 
** Research this topic 
** Add this section to article 
* Risks/Complications
** Edit for conciseness, grammar, and neutral tone 
** Add explanation for mechanism of miscarriage due to amniocentesis 
** Add a section on ACOG guidelines for physician approach to patient counseling 
** Assess references and evaluate if they meet Wiki criteria
** New paragraph on social and psychological risks instead of a “social implications” section
*** Rewrite to be more concise and have a more neutral tone
** Verify all statistical claims and edit if more current data exists 
* Procedure/Technique 
** Edit for conciseness and grammar
** Add what medical professionals are trained in the ability to perform these procedures 
** Initial paragraph and “needle insertion” subsection have redundancies - edit for conciseness 
** Keep the “Post procedure recommendations and analysis” section but move second paragraph to the new “recovery” section.
** Consider adding statistics on % of amniocenteses performed that will find the most common abnormalities 
* Recovery 
** Research this topic 
** Add this section to article if substantial literature is found 
** Some info in the “procedures” section that could be moved to this section
* History 
** Move this section so that it comes after the procedure or recovery section (depending on if the recovery section is added) in order to follow the recommended structure and order for medical procures, per the Wikipedia: Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles 
** Edit for conciseness and grammar
** Research the history of amniocentesis in order to fill in any missing gaps in this section
** Read and assess references 5 and 6 
* Society and Culture
** Add this section 
** This section could incorporate the” current prenatal sex discernment and sex-selective abortion” section
* Special Populations
** Research this topic 
** Add this section to article if substantial literature is found 
* Other Animals 
** Research this topic 
** Add this section to article if substantial literature is found
* General Goals:
** Go through each reference and assess if it is open access and whether it meets Wiki criteria 
** If not open access, look for alternative open access resources if possible
Medabloom (talk) 17:57, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  UCF COM WikiProject Course-- October/November 2022 

message: — Assignment last updated by DrDexterN (talk) 20:28, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: WikiProject Medicine Fall 2022 UCF COM

message: This article is so well written! I like how it begins with an overarching paragraph to describe amniocentesis but does not use too much medical jargon. Any medical terms used also have good descriptions in layman's words to assist readers with better grasping the concept. The article does a great job explaining the various diagnostic indications for amniocentesis, and I especially liked how detailed yet easy to read these sections were! The contraindications and risks/complications sections were also very well developed and gave a comprehensive look into this subject matter. Overall I think you did an amazing job writing this article, and your hard work really shows! Rasika ucf (talk) 20:47, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer Review