Talk:Hugh Hickling

message: Pass The article is short, but clear, concise, and direct, with adequate citions and good grammar and writing style. Overall it's sufficient for GA, in my opinion.  The citation style seems a bit inconsistent, and the article is in need of a picture.  These will hold it back from FA status down the road, but are not enough of a problem to hold it back from GA status. Bradford44 19:58, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA pass 

message: This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, Ruslik 08:29, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA Sweeps (kept) 

message: -- AGK [•] 14:28, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Peer review now archived at Wikipedia:Peer review/Hugh Hickling/archive1. AGK [•] 19:41, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer review 

message: : (Clerical note) I've tweaked the formatting of this review, for my benefit when working on the improvements. No actual content of the review has been changed. AGK [•] 19:46, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Just a comment from someone who worked on the first version of this article: in order to comply with Article 149 of the Malaysian Constitution, the Internal Security Act "recites" or states that "whereas action has been taken or threatened by a substantial body of persons ...", and so on. — Cheers, JackLee –talk– 08:33, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

text: * Agreed and done. AGK [•] 19:53, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

text: * Agreed; I've removed the section. AGK [•] 23:10, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer review improvements 

message: *"It is authorized by Article 149 of the Malaysian Constitution, which stipulates that if an Act recites that action has been taken or threatened by any substantial body of persons, whether inside or outside the Federation in respect of certain situations – including organized violence against persons or property, the excitement of disaffection against the Yang di-Pertuan Agong or the government, or the promotion of feelings of ill-will and hostility between different races or classes of the population likely to cause violence – then any provision of that law designed to stop or prevent that action is valid notwithstanding that it is inconsistent with certain articles of the Constitution guaranteeing fundamental liberties." - Could this be re-stated in more ordinary English? It's not clear to me how an Act "recites", for example.
::Just a comment from someone who worked on the first version of this article: in order to comply with Article 149 of the Malaysian Constitution, the Internal Security Act "recites" or states that "whereas action has been taken or threatened by a substantial body of persons ...", and so on. — Cheers, JackLee –talk– 08:33, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Crown colony 

message: *It might be better to eliminate this section. The obit from The Star does not seem to add anything not already covered in the main text. The link to the International Herald Tribune no longer links directly to the cited article but to a kind of redirect page. If the Tribune story contains fresh material, it would be better to use it in the main text and cite it there if you can track down the article's new URL.
:* Agreed and done. AGK [•] 19:53, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Further reading 

message: *The "See also" section usually appears above the "Reference" section in Wikipedia articles. However, in this case, I would just eliminate the "See also" section since it only repeats links that already appear in the main text.  
:* Agreed; I've removed the section. AGK [•] 23:10, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  See also 

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