Talk:Al Ries

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: It may be helpful to read the section before for some context. The short version is that I have conflict of interest and I would like to suggest the following changes. I will break them up into small digestible chunks for ease of reviewing.
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#*Add "American": "Al Ries is an American marketing professional and author.
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#*Replace with: "Along with Jack Trout, Ries is credited with resurrecting the idea of "positioning" in the field of marketing,"
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#*Delete last clause and add: "in 1981."
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#*Replace with: "Ries graduated from DePauw University in 1950. He accepted a position with the advertising department of General Electric before founding his own advertising agency in New York City, Ries Cappiello Colwell."
#*Add: "Jack Trout joined the agency in 1967 beginning a business and writing partnership with Ries that lasted several decades."
Thank you any help you can provide. JasmineBrock (talk) 07:20, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you very much. JasmineBrock (talk) 12:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request 1 

message: Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Also note additional changes which were made to the article, including:
# The removal of unsourced information. 
# The removal of the bibliography section, which was unsourced.
 Spintendo  10:15, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you very much. JasmineBrock (talk) 12:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 9-MAR-2019

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* Also, please remove the tag at the top of the page. If not the problem is resolved, please tell me what information I can provide to fix the underlying issue. Thank you! --JasmineBrock (talk) 12:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you! JasmineBrock (talk) 07:59, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bibliography 

message: Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  14:15, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you! JasmineBrock (talk) 07:59, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 14-MAR-2019

message: Please add the three sentences in green in the collapsed section below. Please remove the last sentence in the first paragraph so that Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind is not mentioned twice. Also please remove the "Al" in the last sentence.
Al Ries is an American marketing professional and author. He is the cofounder and chairman of the Atlanta-based consulting firm Ries & Ries with his partner and daughter, Laura Ries. Along with Jack Trout, Ries is credited with resurrecting the idea of "positioning" in the field of marketing. Ries is the author of Positioning: The Battle For Your Mind, published in 1981.
Ries graduated from DePauw University as a mathematics major in 1950. He accepted a position with the advertising department of General Electric before founding his own advertising agency in New York City, Ries Cappiello Colwell, in 1961. Jack Trout joined the agency in 1967.
The American Marketing Association, NY Chapter announced Al Ries as one of the 2016 inductees to the Marketing Hall of Fame.
Ries and Trout wrote a three-part series of articles for Advertising Age in 1972. In 1981, they published Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind. This was followed by Marketing Warfare (1986), Bottom-up Marketing (1989), and The 22 Immutable Laws of Marketing (1993).
Thank you in advance.--JasmineBrock (talk) 07:59, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request 3 

message: *  The first name was removed from the AMA inductee claim.
*  With regards to mentioning the Advertising Age series of pieces, the Christian source states  The Washington Post also cites Positioning as the "landmark" text here, rather than the pieces which preceeded it. If the claims within Ries and Trout's publications in Advertising Age are to be mentioned singularly, that mention ought to include what it was which was significant about that publication as a concept separate from the ones brought up in Positioning. Otherwise these are the same claims already covered by the mentioning of Positioning. If they are to be included, these claims should be cited by the Advertising Age publication itself, which has not been included in the list of references of the present edit request.
*  The mentionings of Marketing Warfare, Bottom-up Marketing and The 22 Immutable Laws of Marketing (and Branding) are already covered by the embedded Bibliography list. 
Regards,   Spintendo  20:44, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 17-MAR-2019

message: Please add the two sentences in green in the collapsed section below. I have add a citation for the article in Advertising Age per your advise: . Please remove the last sentence in the first paragraph if you would like Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind not to be mentioned twice.
Al Ries is an American marketing professional and author. He is the cofounder and chairman of the Atlanta-based consulting firm Ries & Ries with his partner and daughter, Laura Ries. Along with Jack Trout, Ries is credited with resurrecting the idea of "positioning" in the field of marketing. Ries is the author of Positioning: The Battle For Your Mind, published in 1981.
Ries graduated from DePauw University as a mathematics major in 1950. He accepted a position with the advertising department of General Electric before founding his own advertising agency in New York City, Ries Cappiello Colwell, in 1961. Jack Trout joined the agency in 1967.
The American Marketing Association, NY Chapter announced Ries as one of the 2016 inductees to the Marketing Hall of Fame.
Ries and Trout wrote a three-part series of articles for Advertising Age in 1972. The themes discussed in that series of articles inspired their later book, Positioning: The Battle for Your Mind, published in 1981.
Thank you in advance. JasmineBrock (talk) 20:40, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request 4 

message: Spintendo  02:07, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply to request #4 20-MAR-2019

message: Please add this photo to the infobox. JasmineBrock (talk) 19:44, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request 5