Talk:Lost Boys of Sudan

message: Sources needed for many sections. Specifically, the last section of the "Lost Girls" section. Perhaps that info can be inferred but a source would be adequate. 75.177.11.11 (talk) 20:27, 30 July 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Sources needed

message: The article doesn't explicitly state any age range for the Lost Boys. i checked the UNICEF website and it stated that the age range for the Boys was between 7 and 17 years of age. I'm going to edit the article to include this.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Luwam2020 (talk • contribs) 21:35, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Age 

message: An anon vandal keeps deleting the Books and Film section. It went unnoticed for 4 months, after the second deletion. I suspect it's someone unhappy about other Lost Boys getting attention, it will need to be watched. Green Cardamom (talk) 16:41, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Books and Film section 

message: For some reason I can't edit the article. I wanted to change the number to 20,000 and update the IRC link (source 1), which right now mistakenly points to a documentary film. The 20,000 number is from the official IRC website.
http://www.rescue.org/lost-boys-sudan  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.113.162.138 (talk) 15:41, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Maybe the article is protected from anonymous editors due to recent vandalism. If you sign in with an account you may be able to edit (recommend in general). I have gone ahead and made the changes you suggested, thank you for catching that. Green Cardamom (talk) 16:12, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Editing this article 

message: I am contributing to this page as a part of a classroom project. I've started gathering some articles to help me add to the page, let me know what you think about the sources, or if there's anything in particular you think should be added to the page.
* Tempany, Madeleine. "What research tells us about the mental health and psychosocial wellbeing of Sudanese refugees: A literature review." Transcultural Psychiatry 46.2 (2009): 300-315.
* Luster, Tom, et al. "The Lost Boys of Sudan: Ambiguous Loss, Search for Family, and Reestablishing Relationships With Family Members*." Family Relations 57.4 (2008): 444-456.
* Schomerus, Mareike, and Tim Allen. "Southern Sudan at odds with itself: Dynamics of conflict and predicaments of peace." (2010).
* Cobham, Alex. "Causes of conflict in Sudan: Testing the black book." The European Journal of Development Research 17.3 (2005): 462-480.
* Geltman, Paul L., et al. "The “lost boys of Sudan”: Functional and behavioral health of unaccompanied refugee minors resettled in the United States." Archives of Pediatrics & Adolescent Medicine 1
Emily.johnson135 (talk) 21:52, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Adding content

message: Emily, after peer reviewing this article, I have several suggestions. The main things I would edit are citing your sources more frequently and adding illustrations to support the information given. Additionally, I suggest adding more subsections to make skimming of the article easier for readers. I have emailed you a full description of my suggested edits. Overall, a great article! Athomas1995 (talk) 19:16, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Hi! Great job with the work you have contributed so far to the article. My first suggestion is to consider redesigning the content in the "Books, films and plays" section to be a table rather than a list. This would make the content more readable and clear with links to resources for learning more about each material. As for content, I suggest adding more about the long-term stays of the Lost Boys in refugee camps and how their lives were effected beyond just the initial displacement. I know the article is in the initial stages of revision, but I would also elaborate on the Lost Girls to keep the argument neutral and recognize that women were also affected during the civil war, too. Lastly, I recommend adding visuals of the camps the boys lived in and some of the Lost Boys themselves to humanize the article and provide viewers a visual to associate the article with. Overall, I think you have made great progress! Reillybrooks (talk) 22:38, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer reviews

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