Talk:Mount Barker, South Australia

message: The schools are currently linked as references. Should the links be
* Left as references
:Mount Barker has four high schools: Mount Barker High School (public)Mount Barker High School, Cornerstone College (Lutheran)Cornerstone College, Saint Francis de Sales (Catholic)Saint Francis de Sales, and Mount Barker Waldorf School (Waldorf)Mount Barker Waldorf School.
* Be turned into proper links
:Mount Barker has four high schools: Mount Barker High School (public, ), Cornerstone College (Lutheran, ), Saint Francis de Sales (Catholic, ), and Mount Barker Waldorf School (Waldorf , ).
* Be removed
:Mount Barker has four high schools: Mount Barker High School (public), Cornerstone College (Lutheran), Saint Francis de Sales (Catholic), and Mount Barker Waldorf School (Waldorf).
*Replace with wikilinks
:Mount Barker has four high schools: Mount Barker High School (public), Cornerstone College (Lutheran), Saint Francis de Sales School (Catholic), and Mount Barker Waldorf School (Waldorf).
Opinions please
* Remove Links --TheJosh 12:44, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  School links 

message: What should the keynote picture be? see Mount Barker, South Australia (Gallery)
None of them are probably appropriate though... --TheJosh 01:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Since the above page was deleted, see the Commons Gallery here. Also, I would say that no image on that page would be appropriate for a keynote. When in doubt, use a government building if possible. Raime 13:14, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Keynote picture 

message: An Adelaidean here. Although this article is quite good in content in some places, it is also a bit messy and policy violating in other places
*Some parts are tagged with 
*Contractions are used in the article
*Many parts of the article don't have a source. Some of the things about the existence of a school or a police station or a shopping centre should be sourced simply be referring to a page of the street directory. However, things like the internals of the shopping centre might not be feasible. Are there any possible local newspapers? Because using personal obervation is not allowed per WP:NOR even if it is trivial.
*comment about school zoning needs a source, preferably, but it might be hard, since they don't normally publish high school zoning distrcits in public.
*The refs that are there need to be filled out with date, publisher, accessdate.
*In the public services section, the one line sentences need to be merged.
*Personally, I don't think it's necessary to mention that the library has internet, that seems to veer into advertising a bit.
*The indepth description of the disable ramp at the cinema and the product prices of certain locations need to be culled.
*The prose is too informal and needs to be more disciplined. Phrases like "footy" "up the hill" are not appropriate and you should not use contractions
*"The Woolworths Complex is not really a shopping centre as such, but is just a Woolworths and a few small shops nearby." ORish statements like this should not be included. You chould just say what is in there.
*Should wikilink the census stuff like UK, NZ, Afrikaans etc
*In general there are quite a few awkward sentences and the whole article needs a copyedit "Mount Barker has since developed into a large urban centre, which is developing very rapidly" -> "Mount Barker is rapidly developing into a large urban centre"
Regards, Blnguyen  (bananabucket) 02:13, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA failed 

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