Talk:Mission San Luis Obispo de Tolosa

message: We are a group of students at Cal Poly doing a project for our english class. If you have any input that you would like to add please feel free to contribute any information that you may have. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Polymustang (talk • contribs) 20:16, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Untitled 

message: This adds lots of material to the original article, but it still need a good deal of editing. 
Dont use terms without defining them--e.g.Neophytes
What's meant by the "Discovery of San Luis Obispo"?  It wasnt there yet.  How can "many years" signify just three? 
Dont use the term friendly for Indians or natives.  How friendly if they burned the place down.  There are three of you; you need to edit and proofread to make sure mistakes are eliminated and everything makes sense.  
Why does History stop at 1819?
The section on Native Tribes isnt consistent with the previous section. The first paragraphs have nothing to do with the subject of the article and the last paragraph overlaps the subject of the previous section.  You need to be working together to create a single article.
The same comment applies to "Goals of the Mission." 
Citations: Study the guidelines on the citing sources page, with special attention to web sources.  
The material in each of the sections must be provided with citations to provide crediblity and to assure that you are not copying or simply lifting material from a source.
Fix your reference section at the end.   
This article is not ready to be graded, but in its present form would receive D+
Rudolph2007 14:10, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  instructor's comments 

message: The picture of the article depicts the once New England style of the building.  Yet, originally and today, the building is a Spanish style and the picture on the article should resemble that.  --68.4.73.34 02:23, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Picture 

message: This discussion has been moved to Talk:Spanish missions in California. Mdhennessey (talk) 06:20, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why the prehistory of the native American peoples? 

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