Talk:I Don't Remember/Archive 1

message: The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
*This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
*This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
*The script has spotted the following contractions: Don't, Don't, haven't, doesn't, Don't, Don't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen Monoxide (H2O) 06:02, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer review

message: I've reviewed the article, fixed a number of minor problems with obvious solutions, and will pass the article as a Good Article shortly.  As of the automated suggestions cited above; most of them are not applicable for this kind of article, and those that are appear to have been taken care of.  For example, the three distinct remarks about the "Don't" contraction all refer to the title of the single.
For future, it might be useful to attach a screenshot from the actual music video.  Unfortunately, such screenshot would probably by necessity be fair use, not free. 泥紅蓮凸凹箱 03:49, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I believe I've completed the procedure of passing the article as a Good Article.  If I missed anything, please let me know. 泥紅蓮凸凹箱 03:59, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA review

message: Given the evidence of abuse of the GA process for the above review, I believe this article should be de-listed from GA status until the issue can be resolved or another uninvolved reviewer performs GA on it. Ronnotel 21:18, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Abuse of GA process?

message: Have been watching this article and did see the dispute about that GA review, and I do agree that the GA pass was not done with good intentions that this article does indeed pass the GA criteria. After a short read, this article does not meet Criterion #2 in WP:WIAGA: "It is factually accurate and verifiable". The parodies listed in the music video section is completely unsourced; the reference used in the section does not mention any of these people listed in the parodies. I have failed this GA nomination based on that the section violates Wikipedia:No original research. Consider revising this section to make sure it is verifiable.
The lead paragraph is somewhat misleading because it says that the song was rated highly by reviewers when there are reviewers who rated negatively. Also, the sentence "The music video also received some acclaim" was not elaborated further in the article's prose. Reply back to me if you have questions about the GA review. RaNdOm26 15:53, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, well I'll work on what you suggested, and take it back to GAC some time soon. Dihydrogen Monoxide (H2O) 01:24, 30 September 2007 (UTC)

text: You renominated while a GAR was going on. Please see the links above for further comments, and nominate again when you feel they are addressed. Geometry guy 20:50, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Review again

message: Why didn't you look for this? Fifty Fifty Films. The absence of commas throughout the article needs to be improved. Only trying to help... :) --andreasegde 17:40, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: References