Talk:Golden toad

message: Sorry if I'm being very stupid. I know absolutely nothing about toads, and was just drawn to read the article from the lovely picture. I'm struggling to understand this sentence:
:From their discovery in 1966 for about 17 years, and from April to July in 1987, over 1500 adult toads were seen.
Does that mean that from 1966 to about 1983 (about seventeen years) over 1,500 toads were seen, and that from April 1987 to July 1987, another 1,500 toads were seen, totalling over 3,000 toads between 1966 and 1987, with an unexplained gap in counting between (around) 1983 and April 1987? Or does it refer simply to a total of something more than 1,500 toads that were seen between 1966 and 1987, again with an unexplained gap between (around) 1983 and April 1987?
I don't know if this is some previously unnoticed mistake that was made when the information was being added, or whether this is something that's quite obvious but that I'm too dense to follow! ElinorD (talk) 23:47, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I didn't write that particular sentence, but I read it as population tracking by herpetologists -- for the periods of observation given, the population observed was greater than 1,500.  I can go through the references I was using when writing this article and see if I'm right about that.  Jkelly 00:05, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I saw you had reverted vandalism recently, but I didn't realise you had added so much of the content. It's a very nice article. If the sentence means more than 1,500 for the first observation period, and also more than 1,500 for the second period, I think it should say "and again from April to July" (or something like that). It seems odd that only 1,500 would be seen over seventeen years, and then the same number in a period of just a few months. But to report a number over an observation period that has a completely unexplained gap in it would seem odder. ElinorD (talk) 00:32, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Can't understand what this means 

message: One other thing. I know that there are some rules about capital letters in articles about animals; editors at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Mammals told me that stubs I was creating should be called Typical Striped Grass Mouse but Striped grass mouse. They directed me to some explanation, but I can't remember where it was. This article has "Golden Toad(s)" all the way through except for one occurrence of "golden toad" in the "Biology" section (second sentence, looking a bit odd after the upper case letters in the first sentence) and one occurrence in Footnote 7, which gives the title of an article from an academic journal, and is presumably accurate. I don't want to tamper with something I don't understand (and don't waste time giving me a long explanation, because I'll just forget it later!), but if the "golden toad" in the "Biology" section is meant to be "Golden Toad", perhaps someone could fix it? ElinorD (talk) 19:10, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I doubt that I was paying any attention to any style guide when I was working on this article.  If we can find the Mammal MoS (is there an Amphibian MoS?), we should just fix it to comply.  Jkelly 20:09, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll see if I can find out. I think the WikiProject Mammals people directed me to something about birds to find out about capitalisation. I'll look up the reference. ElinorD (talk) 20:19, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Golden Toads or golden toads? 

message: The text below has been in need of a citation since feb 09, i have looked online and can find no sources supporting this claim of an invasive species so i have removed the section. If somone finds a source to support it then please post here, thanks mark nutley (talk) 11:13, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removal of content 

message: Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that :File:Bufo periglenes2.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on August 16, 2012. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2012-08-16. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page so Wikipedia doesn't look bad. :) Thanks! —howcheng  {chat} 16:57, 15 August 2012 (UTC)
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message: Citation 30 is "ANewGoldenToad2012". I cannot find anything suggesting this is a real source despite searching. I feel it should be removed or elaborated on.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.121.36.32 (talk) 00:47, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  False Citation 

message: This article reads a bit too much like science journalism rather than a straightforward encyclopedia article. The large blocks of text and overly expansive narration make it more difficult to glean the important info. I believe a good deal of slimming down is in order, e.g. rather than padded, wordy phrases like "Joe Scientist traveled to Costa Rica and studied the toads and wrote a paper called "The Study of Golden Toads" that found that the toads are golden", it's much simpler to say "the toads were golden(Citation)". This should not read like a class report and there is no minimum word count.  Additionally, the Extinction section needs revision for cohesion and flow, perhaps with subheadings. --Animalparty-- (talk) 06:52, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article needs work. 

message: Correction to my original comments: After looking at the article again, I see that "Description" is a main section and the text I describe below is an introduction in that section. 
I'm a new Wikipedian, and am still familiarizing myself with all of the variations in editing requirements.
Is this section required? I ask because it seems that the information in this section could be moved to other sections and this section deleted entirely.
The second sentence in this section expands slightly on the first sentence in the introduction, and could possibly be incorporated in the introduction. Since both sentences are footnoted, I hesitate to simply combine them since I don't have access to either of the cited sources.
I don't quite understand the third and fourth sentences in this section:
:These toads lived in areas where the land decreased in size with increasing elevation. Because of this, golden toads were less likely to be found as the elevation increased. 
Considering the small size of the golden toad, a decrease in the amount of land at higher elevations wouldn't seem to automatically result in a decrease in the likelihood of finding golden toads. A decrease in habitat would seem to be a more relevant factor. It's possible that suitable golden toad habitat might actually increase at higher elevations. I don't have access to the source document cited, so I'm not sure how the information was presented there.
Also, might this information be included in the "Extinction" section?
Could the last sentence in the "Description" section regarding lifespan be incorporated in the "Reproduction" section with the title of the "Reproduction" section changed to "Reproduction and Lifespan" or "Lifecycle"? //Blaise Mitsutamatalk 16:56, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Description section 

message: I would like to take some time over the next couple of days to edit this article. As noted by --Animalparty--, at a minimum some of the existing sections need to be organized into smaller pieces with subheadings. I will use particular care when editing text that includes a citation since I don't have access to many of the cited sources. I will focus mainly on copy editing and cleaning up the organization of the article.
If I have significant edits to text, should I present my proposed changes on this Talk page before editing the actual article? //Blaise Mitsutamatalk 17:18, 26 February 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: If making substantial radical changes, it might be better to produce a draft in your sandbox. For a concise account written by experts (which you may want to use as an outline), see the AmphibiaWeb page. --Animalparty-- (talk) 20:00, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plans for editing this article 

message: I've noted discrepancies in the way species names are handled in this article. In the first sentence of the article, the primary species name is shown as Bufo periglenes with Cranopsis periglenes and Incilius periglenes shown as synonyms. In the speciesbox, the binomial name is shown as Incilius periglenes with synonyms Bufo periglenes, Cranopsis periglenes, and Ollotis periglenes. 
*In Savage (1966), the scientific name is given as Bufo periglenes. So it would seem that should be the binomial name in the speciesbox.
*In the first sentence of the article, it would seem that if any species name synonyms are included, all species name synonyms should be included. Since this is the first biology article that I'm editing, I wasn't sure whether to add Ollotis periglenes or to delete the existing species name synonyms.
If someone can advise what is acceptable, I'll make the appropriate edits. //Blaise Mitsutamatalk 16:19, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Scientific names 

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