Talk:The Picture of Dorian Gray/Archive 1

message: As it stands now, this article is merely a short summary of the novel, followed by an enormous list of all the characters. It would be very useful to have some analysis of the novel, which I found quite deep.
--thomas9987 21:24, 22 May 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: That is true with most works of fiction on Wikipedia, after 5 years, much less one. Critical reception is similar to historiography in history articles, it's specialized knowledge most people are not aware of or readily have access to; but which is a foundation for an encyclopedia article. --Stbalbach 13:18, 13 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  More critical article 

message: If anyone ever gets a picture, that Wikipedia would be allowed to use, of an edition of the book, please replace the picture of the dvd cover of the movie version that is currently attached to this article. It is not the worst thing in the world to have it there but a book cover or a Lippincott's would be better. MarnetteD | Talk 21:41, 6 May 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  A Request 

message: :In the fall of 1889 J. M. Stoddart was in London to solicit short novels for one of his enterprises, Lippincott's Monthly Magazine. To one dinner he invited Arthur Conan Doyle and Oscar Wilde. They both agreed to write for him and Doyle submitted his second Sherlock Holmes novel The Sign of Four.
Anybody know more about this incident? Fancying Wilde and Doyle at the same table is extremely fascinating. -- Syzygy 15:06, 30 November 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Doyle & Wilde? 

message: Anyone else think this article could use some good editing? Right now much of it is taken up trying to be some sort of Cliff's Notes. The section listing every single person mentioned in the novel makes the article much longer without making it any better. It could also use a better introduction, explaining the significance of the portrait right away. The Dorian Gray article is also in need of attention (though a major revret I just did improved it substantially). -R. fiend 16:31, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the list is harmless; I'd never have gone to that kind of effort myself, but it's obvious what it is, and easy to skip past if that's not what you are looking for. -- Jmabel | Talk 07:12, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Editing 

message: This article is a complete farce as it stands. Even the Dorian Gray article contains more plot information than all this "historical characters referenced" and "mythological characters referenced" and "newspapers referenced" rubbish. For the sake of all that is good: almost every single Victorian-era novel mentioned Shakespeare plays, mythological characters, and other such things. And nobody is interested in a list of trivial and minor characters.
This is an article, not some sort of detail catalogue. This looks practically like a Nihilartikel, or the work of a 12-year-old. It must be urgently cleaned up, even if at the cost of merging in the Dorian Gray article. 140.142.168.184 07:45, 29 April 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Inappropriate use of the "cleanup" tag which is for more mundane syntax issues -- missing article content or quality is another matter entirely. There are very few articles on Wikipedia that could not be expanded and improved upon greatly -- I just don't see this article as being that much worse than any other literature article. Wikipedia is "only" about five years old, it takes a long time for someone to come along and really work an article up the way it should be. If you want to discuss moving the cultural references to a new article that is fine (it was done for the Divine Comedy), or work on some plan and contribute, but tagging an article and ranting on talk pages and walking away isn't constructive. -- Stbalbach 14:37, 29 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hideously dull and egregious 

message: People often call the novel "The Portrait of..." rather than "The Picture of...". To satisfy my curiousity, to what is this attributable? I'm wondering if its The Seven Year Itch, given that its rather old and a few times "The Portrait of Dorian Gray" is mentioned. Thanks to anyone who can help! :) Carl.bunderson 19:06, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title Confusion 

message: A modernized play version appeared in Scholastic Scope's September 6, 1991 issue, written by Deborah Sussman.
23:42, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Modernized play version 

message: I stumbled across the article for Sybil Vane (sic) if anyone is interested. --Gadget850 ( Ed) 13:54, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Vane 

message: I've cleaned up the formatting of the text of the Preface and have added some historical information noting the influence of Wilde's contemporaneous exposure to Daoism over the Preface. I'm not sure if this runs afoul of the "no original research" dictum of Wikipedia, but if it does, blame the Inaction of Wilde's scholars (of whom I have been among the most inactive) and revert at your leisure.
I would submit that the Preface is significant enough in and of itself to merit its own entry. As I myself am a partial adherent to that "great creed of Inaction," I'll leave the task, if worthy, to more industrious angels than myself.
Tatwell 20:45, 19 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  On the Preface 

message: There was a concerted effort a few months back, using bots, to de-link excessive date linking in articles across Wikipedia. According to the manual of style on dates it says:
:There is consensus among editors that bare month and day names should not be linked unless there is a specific reason that the link will help the reader to understand the article.
Just because there is a date in an article doesn't mean it should be linked. Only when there is a good reason to do so, when clicking on the date link will lead to a better understanding. -- Stbalbach 23:38, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I thought that bare month and day names like wednesday and October should not be linked. But 21 October should since that way it will, according to one's date preferences, either show 21 October or October 21. Garion96 (talk) 23:52, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I see. -- Stbalbach 14:17, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Pardon me if it sounds flippant, but--so? Linking to dates is annoying, and almost never adds any additional meaning to the article. I think people can bear to have the date written in a European or American format that runs contrary to their own personal taste. -216.145.255.2 21:58, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Linking dates 

message: At the outset, the ages of the characters are:
Dorian, 20
Lord Henry, 30
Sybil, 17
James, 16
We are also told that Basil is a 'young man.'
'18 years later' we find Dorian, 38; Lord Henry, 48; and James, 44.  Basil is murdered and Sybil committed suicide at 17.
The point is, some people want to make the homosexual relationship 'pederasty.'  While there is a degree of older man/younger man influence, it is clear by Wilde's references to Henry and Basil also as 'young men' that the idea was more of experience/rookie; it was still on an adult theme (Dorian being 20 years old at the start).
→ R Young {yakłtalk} 07:39, 19 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ages of the characters 

message: "deference of aging"? Who is deferring to whom? Perhaps "deferral"? Or "postponement"? - Jmabel | Talk 03:47, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I did actually intend to use the word "deferral", but I think I used "deference" by mistake. Well spotted; I will amend it now. -Adasta- 12:27, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  "deference of aging" 

message: The opening paragraphs of this article call 'Picture' a Western classic--a basically unanimous view--but it supports this claim by saying that the novel is one of the most popular novels:
"However, in modern times, the book has been referred to as "one of the modern classics of Western literature."[4]The BBC placed it at #118 in its "Big Read" list, a list of the 200 most popular novels."
If books like Fight Club manage to become among the most popular 200 books, will this be a sufficient basis for saying that such pulp fiction books are 'classics'? I should hope not. I don't object to noting 'Picture' as a popular novel; rather, my complaint is that its popularity is not evidence of its being a classic. We need a reference from a publisher, critic, et cetera, that lists it as such. -216.145.255.2 21:50, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: This is a general problem with Wikipedia. We are not allowed (per NPOV) to make obvious and common sense value judgments (such as calling a book a classic) without a source, even if there is no disagreement and it is common knowledge. When you attribute it to a single person or source it opens a can of worms, as you have noted – usually though we get away with it because most people are not sophisticated enough to challenge the source as having a bias.  I once had an editor suggest The Divine Comedy was not a classic because he had "never heard of it".  Anyway, I removed the BBC sentence, it is original research to suggest it is a classic because of that, and being on a list of popular books isn't that notable. -- Stbalbach 15:23, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  'Picture' as a Classic 

message: The etext http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/4078 verifies Miss Vane's Christian name as being spelled 'Sibyl', not the more common 'Sybil'. 84.136.31.42 17:34, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sibyl, not Sybil 

message: http://www.marvel.com/news/comicstories.1393.WW_Chicago_2007:_Marvel_Illus~dot~_-_Dorian_Gray
I think this deserves a mention somewhere in this article, but I'm not sure where.
Kitaro53085 (talk) 18:46, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Maybe a one-two sentence mention under "Film, television and theatrical adaptations", and maybe change the header to just "Adaptations". Carl.bunderson (talk) 03:06, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Marvel Illustrated – The Picture of Dorian Gray 

message: In one section of the article it refers to the novel's homoerotic/homosexual "overtones", while in another it is "undertones". Could someone fix this? TheListUpdater (talk) 16:31, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Overtones or undertones 

message: The connection of Dorian Gray to the Dorian Greeks is a reach, especially if it's simply been done to intimate homosexuality.   When I first read the name Dorian, I immediately thought of dôron (τό δῶρον), "the gift"; thus Dorian would be "the gifted one" (consider Pandora, Isidore, Theodore, Dorothy).  Especially considering Dorian's virtues, this seems to be a far more reasonable etymology. Mfryc (talk) 11:30, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Etymology of Dorian: Gift? 

message: No offense, but the section is currently nothing but a huge list of trivia which is against wiki policies (WP:TRIV), especially considering two articles currently exist about Adaptations of The Picture of Dorian Gray and Music based on the works of Oscar Wilde. Most of that section should be either deleted or relocated, and the section should be changed to HOW the work has influenced popular culture and listing a few notable examples. The current length is unacceptable, especially compared to the length of the rest of the article.24.190.34.219 (talk) 05:01, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I have removed all the duplicated information and replaced it with a link.  I left several of the allusions that have nowhere else to go, but they may ultimately need to be deleted since they are not particularly notable (IMO, don't know if there's a policy for that). --Jieagles (talk) 01:43, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  The bloated "popular culture" section 

message: Is it appropriate to use the "Fictional Immortal" category in classifying Dorian Gray?  He is not actually made immortal in the novel; rather he simply does not show the effects of age and vice.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.244.143.84 (talk) 00:28, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Interesting, I think he would've been immortal if he hadn't killed the portrait at the end of the book. In my opinion, someone who doesn't age is an immortal, so the category is valid. The fact that he dies in the end is irrelevant, because after all vampires die if they're staked, garlic, silver etc yet they're still thought of as immortals.VenomousConcept (talk) 23:39, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fictional Immortal 

message: I believe the painting is a demonstration of the harm he has done to his soul and also protection from the harm hedonism does to one's body, rather than a part of his conscience. Destroying the last part of his conscience would only make him sin more cause he wouldn't have any conscience to compel him not to. Destroying the painting because it allowed his hedonistic lifestyle without punishment makes more sense.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sdmitch16 (talk • contribs) 20:23, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Destroying the last vestige of his conscious will absolve him 

message: The cover photo shows the cover's text continuing over parts of the cover page that are torn off.  This is physically impossible. 108.7.208.4 (talk) 00:54, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cover photo is fake 

message: In the Allusions to other works section there is no specific reference to say that Wilde explicitly used the same device as Socrates. Is it actuAlly mentioned in the novel or is it an inference? 86.128.240.4 (talk) 00:21, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plato's Republic 

message: The following sentence, from the "Characters" section, fails to clearly communicate its message:
* "He indulges in every pleasure (moral and immoral) which life eventually leads to death."
The sentence's "which" demands being offset by comma, but everything following the parenthetical interjection fails to communicate (as well as grammatically). Is the intended meaning "every pleasure... in life that will eventually lead to death"? "every pleasure... in life, a course which will eventually lead to his death"? Le Prof  71.201.62.200 (talk) 08:27, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sentence fails to communicate 

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message: The U2 song "The Ocean" refers to--and was inspired by--TPoDG. As a reference for this fact has been demanded (even after I pointed out that the SONG ITSELF is the reference), I was wondering if there was any particular lyrics site (of the dozens and dozens available) that is seen as a better source than others? While I view demanding such a reference as a bit trivial, I will provide one.  Hallward's Ghost (Kevin) (My talkpage) 22:31, 22 January 2016 (UTC)
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thread_title:  External links modified 

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replies: text: I have converted the prod to an AfD: Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/List of cultural references in The Picture of Dorian Gray. LadyofShalott 21:41, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
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