Talk:Airline deregulation

message: And by that I'm assuming there aren't enough positive things being written about deregulation?? The benefit of ticket price reduction has been mentioned on multiple occasions and even defended in quotes and data. That is the ONLY positive effect of deregulation. There are far, far more dimensions to a healthy airline industry than simply what a passenger pays for a ticket. Safety, ecological impact, employee pay, reduction of choices, diminishing service quality, on-time reliability, fleet age, ect., etc., etc. If someone tries to say this article reads like an advertisement then they might as well post the same tag at the top of the article on the Methicillin-resistant Staphylococcus aureus (MRSA) article because there isn't enough good being written about the virus in the article. I'm moving to have the tag stripped from the article. --50.128.155.168 (talk) 19:31, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: This Article Reads Like an Advertisement

message: This data point. "while ignoring that they (the labor unions) have imposed seat mile costs on those airlines which end up in bankruptcy court, that are 30 to 50% higher than those costs at the profitable low cost carriers." I find hard to believe. 30 - 50% more? Page number please. jetBlue pilots are non-union. They are paid, equal to their "pilot peers" minus what they'd be paying their unions if they had one. Although things have been changing of late (getting worse). There is no way their peer pilots (an amalgam of pilot pay from Delta, US Airways, Air Tran and American Airlines) is 30 - 50% more. What's more, SouthWest is a profitable, low cost carrier with unionized pilots making the most, by far, of any US pilot on the 737. SouthWest routinely fields ticket prices just as low as their competition. Thus my inability to see Kaps writing this in his book. Even in 1997. --50.128.155.168 (talk) 03:38, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Questionable Data from Air Transport Labor Relations

message: In the Problems and Controversy section, the Cleveland & Price Study quote is from 1999. That's nearly 15 years ago when there was actually a belief that the airlines woes were over, yet the worst was yet to come. Even the data on employment is expired these days with over 100,000 jobs shed in the first few years of the new millennium. Anyone want to find a quote defending dereg to replace it? It's a little long in the tooth as is.--50.128.155.168 (talk) 21:57, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: This invitation to debate the striking of the antiquated quote has been up for two and a half months now. I think it's fair to say its importance to the article is no longer. I'll be removing it, but if anyone wants to debate it back in, I'm open to a friendly conversation on it. --50.128.155.168 (talk) 04:27, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Expired Quote

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replies: text: It appears this image is no longer in the article. Sorry took the wrong tag out from before. My bad! --173.11.49.60 (talk) 04:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Pyat rublei 1997.jpg

message: The article deals primarily with the USA. Further details on other parts of the world would be good, or perhaps a separate article per country moving this one to"...In the US"? Just a thoughtHJ Mitchell (talk) 23:48, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Globalisation?

message: Even if we Americans were the only people that mattered, I would still question the conflation with any one piece of legislation with deregulation in general.--GregoryCJohnson (talk) 00:28, 25 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merging Deregulation and US Deregulation Act 

message: Three of the citations are direct links to the front page of Brookings and George Mason websites, along with the DOT website.  Links to the actual studies would be appreciated, otherwise the citations are useless and the facts not verifiable.  Most of the article's citations come from policy papers published by the Cato Institute, the Heritage Foundation, the Competitive Enterprise Institute, and the Liberty Fund - all think-tanks supporting deregulation as part of a political or economic philosophy, not primary sources.  Many of the policy papers listed don't even cite sources or cite them in such a manner as to be unverifiable.  Using these as the sole basis for the article is neither NPOV or scholarly.  Large parts of the article also read as if they were directly lifted from these policy papers, making no distinction between quote and fact.  Several rather bold statements are made without sourcing - I have added citation-needed tags accordingly.  69.196.143.146 (talk) 18:41, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Excellent observations I added balance added to article.--XB70Valyrie (talk) 19:11, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  References and citations 

message: Introduction
- "After more than 20 years of airline deregulation, air travel is again at the head of public policy" - this statement isn't clear as to when this statement applies nor is it clear what "air travel is again at the head of public policy" means
- "Airline deregulation has provided and continues to provide enormous benefits to the average traveler" - This is written from a biased point of view.  Perhaps "It has been claimed that airline deregulation has provided and continues to provide enormous benefits to the average traveler."  This would also change the next statement about support for this statement into a clarification as opposed to an argument.
Airline Deregulation Act
- "The Airline Deregulation Act of 1978 removed many of these controls, thus changing the face of civil aviation in the US" - If "thus changing the face of civil aviation in the US" this article would appear more professional and no instruct the reader in his or her conclusions.
- "It also dismantled the notion of a flag carrier." - The act did no such thing.  As the linked to article indicates there is still a notion of flag carriers in the US (if not formally recognized) and foreign flag carriers still serve the US in significant amounts.
- The rest of the section is confusing as to the claims being made and the impact of these practices
Open Skies
- "A global industry would work better with a globally minded set of rules that would allow airlines from one country to establish airlines in another country and to operate domestic services in the territory of another country." - this is an opinion and should either be removed or restated to reflect that while serving a professional purpose.
- "These agreements still fail to approximate the freedoms that most industries have when competing in other global markets" - This isn't explained, isn't made appropriate, and may be disputable.
The Need for Deregulation
- "The airline industry's darkest days did not come until turbojet-driven planes entered commercial use in the late '50s and early 1960s" - it is unclear what this statement means and the use of "darkest days" may not be appropriate
- "This steady increase in air travel began placing serious strains on the ability of federal regulators to cope with the increasingly complex nature of air travel." - this statement is unjustified and disputable
Hub and Spoke Networks
- There are contradictions in this section.  It is claimed that both the hub and spoke network and point to point are cheaper then the other.
- Balanced discussion of customer service and benefit is missing from this section.
Impact
- The price discussion omits other factors present in the industry that also drive down price
- The safety section implies that the increase in safety is due to deregulation omitting other factors like increases in safety technology.  It has been claimed (frontline) that deregulation has put pressures to decrease safety.
- "On the vast majority of these counts, the overall quality of airline service has improved since deregulation" - this is missing a great deal of discussion.  The claim that service has decreased since deregulation is a viable claim.  The rest of the section seams to back up this conflicting claim.  Perhaps instead of claiming that service has improved the discussion could be presented as claims.
Problems
- "Although the gains of economic liberalization have been substantial," -  this isn't clear and it's disputable
- The problems section only talks about claims regulation hasn't fixed yet.
- "For example, the airlines unionised workforce, established and strengthened under regulation and held in place by the Railway Labor Act (RLA), gained generous salaries and inefficient work rules compared with what would be expected in a competitive market" - the costs of the unionized work force vs. the benefits are disputable from the perspective given.  Claims that unionized work practices are inefficient are also disputable.
Others
The above is not an exhaustive list.
From a GAO report link the fallowing points of information are found contradicting the bias shown in the article:
- It cannot be determined with certainty the reasons for the dropping fairs.
- "Passengers are making more connections to reach their destinations." - This indicates and area of decreased service
- The report suggests decreases in on-time arrival and increases in lost luggage both measures of customer service
- The report notices the "loss of service to some communities."
- The report points out a loss of pensions amongst airline employees that cannot be attributed to or not to deregulation
Summery
This article presents a bias that is almost uniformly that deregulation has produced nothing but positive results.  This is a disputable position and an opinion.  Perhaps the article would be best be structured by stating the facts of deregulation and then giving space to both the opinions that deregulation has been positive, that deregulation has been negative, and that deregulation has made trade offs but it is imposable to determine whether or not the overall result is positive or negative
BS20 5 (talk) 04:54, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I've made some substantial changes to the Problems section, just to get the ball rolling. Please feel free to revert, modify and or change what you like, but expect debate from an industry expert in return. Just giving you fair and friendly warning. --XB70Valyrie (talk) 08:50, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I've now updated, modified, edited and added text and a photo for neutrality to this article. Please consider removing the bias warning. Thanks.--XB70Valyrie (talk) 19:09, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I see the user that tagged this as Bias and added the POV tag has ceased to exist. I will be removing the POV tag and letting those who disagree, come to me. We can put it back up if debate so dictates. But the champion of deregulation that this article once was, I think, has been neutralized. Let me know. --XB70Valyrie (talk) 06:20, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bias and other issues in Whole Article 

message: Both of these citations which support the quote in the Problems and Controversy secion are links ONLY to the splash pages of the institution. The citations don't cite the quote. I like the quote, and want to keep it in there for article neutrality, but they need to go to the quote. Don't ya think? --XB70Valyrie (talk) 05:48, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: George Mason University and Brookings Institute Citations

message: This whole section is biased, right down to the name.  It reads like a puff piece, and the entire thing only has one citation.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.40.195.76 (talk) 01:16, 29 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: It also seems to (partially) to be a copyvio. I've added the relevant amboxes. David1217 What I've done 03:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Successful Airline deregulation in Europe 

message: I give up! Why should any of us keep trying fix what is unfixable in this article?  So much of it is just duplicating the same subject and issues that are found in the Airline Deregulation Act article. [] What is the advantage of having TWO articles on essentially the same subject?  If anyone thinks that is a good idea, then you can have them both.  I am not wasting any more of my time on these. EditorASC (talk) 00:26, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merger proposal 

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message: Here are some links i found with regard to airline deregulation outside of the US:
* Airport regulation in the United Kingdom
* Deregulation and globalization of airlines
* The Effects of Airline Deregulation: A Comparative Analysis
Bonewah (talk) 13:31, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Internationalization resources 

message: This section is dependent mostly on the Forbes article Why American Airlines Employees Loathe Management. As the name suggests it's an article written in 2013 which mostly complains about labor management disputes around 2011 American Airlines bankruptcy. It's written in a clearly biased manner. The author was afraid that the then pending merger of US Airways and American Airlines would lead to drastically increasing prices. The wikipedia article misleadingly takes this as proof of increased prices following deregulation. However, prices didn't increase drastically. As the wikipedia article mentions elsewhere, decreasing prices was the major effect of deregulation. This whole section needs to be rewritten, especially the false claim of increasing prices. Czar-peter-123 (talk) 09:52, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  The section "Industry consolidation and reduction in competition between carriers" is dubious.