Talk:Freedom of movement

message: What about the Caribbean Community?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2606:6000:C30D:3500:3DD7:8311:A78B:34A8 (talk) 08:20, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

message: Great progress on the article so far and I believe that the plans for further improvement will truly improve the quality of the article. Overall the additions do a great job of clarifying and expanding on certain points that were vague. The content is written from a neutral point of view and is, for the most part, backed up by reputable sources. I recommend adding a citation after every line to clearly indicate where each statement was found. Going forward, I think that restructuring the article by arranging the regional sections geographically and making the history section more coherent are a good plan. Perhaps you could also add a section on dialogue and viewpoints surround freedom of movement if there is any. Looking forward to your future edits! 
GHumphrey97 (talk) 03:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
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message: I believe this article could be improved in a few ways:
- Some restructuring: Section names are somewhat awkward, and I feel that the regional sections should be organized geographically, not alphabetically as some are not single countries.
- The regional sections need to be expanded significantly and I feel some have some NPOV issues, I will seek to address as many of these as possible. 
- The history section seems disconnected from the rest of the article, I will attempt to make it more coherent.
Some sources I intend to use for this include:
Lia Karsten, & Willem van Vliet—. (2006). Increasing Children's Freedom of Movement: Introduction. Children, Youth and Environments, 16(1), 69-73. Retrieved from http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.7721/chilyoutenvi.16.1.0069
Eileen, D. (2016). Freedom of Movement. Diplomatic Law. doi:10.1093/law/9780198703969.003.0024
Dowty, Alan. Closed Borders: the Contemporary Assault on Freedom of Movement. Yale University Press, 1989.
Bauböck, R. (2009). Global Justice, Freedom of Movement and Democratic Citizenship. European Journal of Sociology,50(01), 1. doi:10.1017/s000397560900040x
Ugur, M. (1995). Freedom of Movement vs. Exclusion: A Reinterpretation of the `Insider- `Outsider Divide in the European Union. International Migration Review,29(4), 964. doi:10.2307/2547734
Anghel, R. G. (2008). Changing Statuses: Freedom of Movement, Locality and Transnationality of Irregular Romanian Migrants in Milan. Journal of Ethnic and Migration Studies,34(5), 787-802. doi:10.1080/13691830802106069
Towards Schengen: the Abolition of Internal Border Controls in Europe. (n.d.). Digital Borders and Real Rights,11-46. doi:10.1163/ej.9789004165038.i-568.13
I welcome any comments or suggestions on the issue!
Arcendeight (talk) 00:32, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Improvement Project 

message: Is there any difference between freedom of movement and freedom of travel? CanadianCaesar The Republic Restored 10:55, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: None whatsoever - I'm all for the merge, under this title - I note that "freedom of movement" gets some 5 million Google hits, while "freedom of travel gets a paltry 68k (and "right to travel" gets 337k).  bd2412 T 13:43, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge proposal 

message: Some material on this page was merged here from Freedom of travel; the edit history for such content can be found in the edit history of that page. bd2412 T 13:46, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Never mind, I've merged the edit histories - which creates the illusion of a terrible edit war! bd2412 T 13:52, 20 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Attribution 

message: New sections on Burma and Syria added. They're cited to the appropriate laws, however, since these nations are highly criticized for repressive regimes, they're also necessarily critical of restrictions on freedom of movement in said countries. All claims are referenced AFAICT. Anyone have any problems with the way the are? I could probably write a whole new page on the Syria freedom of movement laws, but decided to restrict it to the most relevant topics. ⇒ SWATJester Ready  Aim  Fire! 08:12, 22 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  new sections 

message: It should probably go back to by country. The EU section would apply to all EU member states. ⇒ SWATJester Ready  Aim  Fire! 07:51, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  by country/by region 

message: I came here looking for information on The Free Movement, a rock band of the early '70s. A disambiguation page would be useful. Thanks! 66.17.118.195 14:46, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Disambiguation 

message: Should West Bank be a sub-heading under Israel? The area is technically Israel's territory.Rivkid007 (talk) 04:43, 24 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: West Bank/Israel

message: The minorities in Kosovo mostly do not enjoy the freedom of movement.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.110.240.38 (talk) 16:18, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Kosovo

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message: The topic of this article is very vague and it needs to be clarified. The lead states that it is about Article 13 of the UN Declaration of Human Rights, but the rest of the article has elements ranging from Emepror Augustus to "Scholars Argued". Is anyone still watching this article? I am rather tempted to quickly stub it into something coherent.  Heptor  talk 10:20, 12 September 2015 (UTC)
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message: Hello there! I have been taking a look at this article and am considering working to expand it as a part one of my university classes (the course page is viewable on my user page). I am thinking of expanding some of the broader sections, citing sources, and eliminating superflous content as well as expanding some of the less developed regional sections. If anyone has any thoughts or advice on how to edit this article moving forward I would greatly appreciate them!
Arcendeight (talk) 04:44, 24 January 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Sounds good, thanks! bd2412 T 04:04, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Expansion Plans