Talk:Benedictine Military School

message: Hey this is Brian Abbott, Class of 2006. I just wanted to leave something on the talk page. I will probably be in the news in the future and I felt like I should come on here to explain my history in the talk page. I have Schizophrenia and there was a medical interaction between alcohol and my Schizophrenic brain. I'm going to speak to the cadets when I have achieved a level of success for it to be noteworthy. Any cadet who gets Schizophrenia will have my phone number and email address. :) Sorry about my history, I was a mess. I'm sober now and you can visit my website to see what I am up to - https://brianabbott.com. Burnedfaceless (talk) 16:11, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Hiya. Wikipedia has policies on what kind of information is permitted in articles. We are building an encyclopedia, not a web journal. For a taste of what wikipedia is and is not, please read WP:NOT, WP:OWN, and WP:NOR. Articles here on the wikipedia aren't owned by any individual or group of individuals. It is freely edited by anyone. I reviewed the removal of information, and it was justified. So please take some time to read the official policies. Thanks. --BWD (talk) 20:40, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

message: I am assessing this article based on a request made at the Schools project.
This article, as it stands, is a little messy.  First, the JROTC section is entirely too long.  I am going to fix that in a moment.  Generally, staff members are never noted in an article with the exceptions of:  the current principal and superintendent in the infobox (or equivalent), a list of principals/headmasters/equivalent, or if a staff member meets the general notability requirements.  For more information on this, see WP:WPSCH/AG#WNTI.  Also, see WP:WEIGHT regarding how the Wikipedia community feels that sections of all articles relative lengths should be in proportion to the relevance to the topic.  While it certainly appears as a mandatory part of the school that the section on JROTC here should be longer than for most schools, I think it still violates WP:WEIGHT.
The lyrics for the fight song have to go (see the previous link).
There are two references for this article.  The lack of referencing means that this article cannot be ranked above a "Start" level of progress.  Given that the school is over 100 years old, I would hope the history section could be substantially expanded.
At this time, there is a lack of referencing to confirm that this school should be raised above "Low" importance in the schools project.  With expansion and referencing, it may be eligible for that higher ranking.  With the lack of referencing, it cannot go beyond Start, since the primary requirement for "C" level articles is substantial reliable referencing. 
I strongly urge editors interested in improving this article to review other good articles (WP:WikiProject Schools#Featured articles), and the guidelines for writing school articles.  Best of luck to all editors! LonelyBeacon (talk) 05:07, 26 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I have made some edits to this article.  I am not sure, but the JROTC section is still likely too long.  I also went through and removed some of the more flowery descriptions per WP:NPOV, WP:PEACOCK, and WP:PRESTIGE.  I may not have gotten it all. LonelyBeacon (talk) 05:57, 26 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Assessment

message: I've removed an old neutrality tag from this page that appears to have no active discussion per the instructions at Template:POV:
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Since there's no evidence of ongoing discussion, I'm removing the tag for now. If discussion is continuing and I've failed to see it, however, please feel free to restore the template and continue to address the issues. Thanks to everybody working on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:01, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
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