Talk:Cycle of poverty

message: Hmmm.  This is a bit of a mess.
I removed the mention and link to Proudhon from the part on right-wing welfare-dependency criticisms: the Proudhon linked to was the painter  Pierre Proudhon, rather than the anarchist Pierre-Joseph Proudhon, which can't be right.  I don't know what P-J Proudhon thought about welfare dependency, but mentioning him in the same breath as right-wingers is rather misleading.
Hmm, thanks for checking. I don't know why I didn't check it earlier. However, we're left stuck with weasel words - where we say "some" and "critics", without clearly identifying them. Better than wrongly identifying them, I suppose. Do you know of a solution? Thanks for contributing! -- Natalinasmpf 18:54, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree, Gibby, which is why I went ahead and took the initiative to discharge this page from the ICU. CopaceticThought (talk) 22:35, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Notes

message: What exactly do you mean "extralegal" and "legal" markets in terms of excessive intervention by the state? I assume when the state overregulates the market as you say, it becomes extralegal becomes it effectively becomes unfair for the poor, if I get the grammar? It wasn't explicitly elaborated so this is rather ambiguous. Elle vécut heureuse à jamais (Be eudaimonic!) 05:56, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Fine, I will elaborate. Elle vécut heureuse à jamais (Be eudaimonic!) 06:08, 6 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  extralegal versus legal 

message: KDRGibby has recently gone around adding large chunks of text of criticising any alternative to market economics and labelling them one and the same, ie. it's the same as planned economics, it's the same as Marxism/communism in a new form (despite the fact that implementations of communism in itself, never mind socialism or progressive reform varies widely with many different schools), etc. This has happened on participatory economics as well as gift economy. I think that such generalised criticism against all market alternatives is not relevant in this article (it may be so in another article) and should be removed, as it is not concise nor does it deal with the point directly, and violates NPOV for undue weight (it's already on his biography, and we can link a paragraph about his views, and only for alternatives in general, not every alternative economy). I therefore think KDRGibby's recent additions should be removed. Please note that he has a current RFAr concerning his behaviour.Elle vécut heureuse à jamais (Be eudaimonic!) 00:46, 7 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  removal of Hayek and Friedman's critique 

message: I just wonder why the blame isn't put on the individual?  The individual if they are making less then x amount of dollars and are so poor then they should have no problem relocating to an area in which can they create more oppotunities for themselves?  Does anyone believe in self motivation or ownership of one's life? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 12.152.97.130 (talk • contribs) .
: The cycle of poverty is just one of many factors in the environment. The individual may or may not be the cause of the entire thing - but note that a bad attitude can also be more common in property purely because of bad educational environments. John Riemann Soong 03:59, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Who believes this? 

message: At present, there are zero sources for this article.  Mdbrownmsw 20:11, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  sources 

message: What a mess.
I just noted the complete lack of sources. From the bias in this article, it would seem the only sources that have anything to say about the "Cycle of poverty" are "the Left" (who are wrong), Milton Friedman and the anarchists.
In the brief discussion of "Solutions", we are told, point blank, what is needed, but is not being done: "In many places the rule of law also needs to be strengthened, by creating efficient legal systems that protect the acquired capital of the poor."
Then we get two paragraph starting "The famous Hills v. Gautreaux case in Chicago..." and "More radical theorists, like anarchist..." presenting socio-anarchist arguments for the only way to solve the Cycle of poverty.
The section titled "Implication and criticism of solutions" is as long as the section "Solutions" and contains such gems as "Anarchists recognize the problem..." (meaning "Anarchists see what others do not..."). There's also the section arguing for revolutionary socialism, currently semi-disguised as a conter-argument to an unpresented view from "those on the political Left".
The section "Advocation of privatization" presents the longest single section of the article, telling us a whole lot about Milton Friedman and his views on public education, in this article on... uh, wait, oh, yeah, the cycle of poverty.
Throughout, the pattern is as follows:
1) "The Left" is responsible for all current attempts. All current attempts are failing.
2) Milton Friedman can tell us why all current attempts are failing: too much government intervention.
3) There is only one possible alternative: Anarchist's deregulized approach.
Theoretically, a political "Left" implies a political "Right". At present, the "Right" seems to be wholly uninvolved in this topic ("paging Mr. Reagan, Mr. Ronald Reagan..."). There are two choices: "the Left" (i.e. failure) and anarchism.  Mdbrownmsw 20:37, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  POV 

message: Eight months later, and still no sources. This "article" is an unbalanced mess. 
"There are many different and distinct political camps..." Apparently, those many different camps are: 1) the neoliberals."Left wing" (I've just renamed them "liberal") and 2) free-market/libertarians.
As there are no sources, we get such inclusions such as:
- "has been described" (by whom?)
- "it occurs because" (says who?)
- numerous cases of probable improper synthesis: A leads to B leads to C leads to D leads to... (example: "This effect leads to a technology shortage, which can in turn lead to low production, and thus...")
- "More liberal politicians tend to argue..."
- "Free market proponents such as libertarians may argue"
- "is thought by many"
And so on. Essentially, this article reads like a mid-term essay: Here's a synthesis of what I think I know about the subject, with a few names credited for general theories. (Usually, the source is Friedman, obliquely cited 6 times, the only two others are mentioned once each.) There is nothing verifiable here.
The article has several examples of beliefs stated as facts:
- "In many places the rule of law also needs to be strengthened..."
- "Left to themselves, the poor cannot get out of poverty; they are trapped in the cycle."
- "reformists forget that keeping people in poverty may be a deliberate policy of the ruling class or elite, and that "do-gooder" interventions aiming to improve the lot of the poor might actually have the effect of making their problems, or those of other people, worse, not better." (Yes, the beginning gives weak attribution, but it's quickly lost.)
- "It is argued that the poor must show the will to fight poverty, and improve their lot, through becoming aware and controlling their future."
- "From their own unskilled labor, persons may spend or save as they wish and along the way build wealth. Whether or not they use this wealth to purchase an education and or build skills to improve income is their own business."
- The whole "Further reading" (ha!) section, starting with "A useful starter to the modern debates is:" Gee, maybe they are, but that's not verifiable. Notable that the three books are not cited in the article. In fact, the authors of those books aren't cited or even mentioned. Are Jeffrey Sachs and William Easterly just authors of broad surveys on poverty, with no real theories of their own?
For the moment, I'm not changing much here. Unless I can find some reasonably reliable sources, I'm going to start hacking away all of the unsourced and one-sided stuff, leaving a stub or a redirect to Poverty Reduction.
Mdbrownmsw 17:12, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Totally disputed 

message: I added a life shocks section. I was surpised it wasn't included, considering how obvious it is. In any case, there's research to support it, and criticism of how obvious the research is, and it's all included in the new section.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.219.115.168 (talk) 06:29, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  life shocks 

message: this is crazy!!
when they say that divorce levels are high or whatever it doesn't mean that because a child is living with only one guardian or has a single parent that they will be living in poverty.
children can be living in perfectly capable homes that don't have any issues with poverty and they can have solo parents or guardians.
the wording in that section wasn't good for the context.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 125.236.185.84 (talk) 03:05, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: ?? single parent=impoverished ??

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: I will be making some edits on this page in the upcoming week. I am wondering your thoughts on adding information from these sources:
Public Education Funding Inequity in an Era of Increasing Concentration of Poverty and Resegregation by The United States Commission on Civil Rights https://www.usccr.gov/pubs/2018/2018-01-10-Education-Inequity.pdf
Gorski, Paul. Reaching and Teaching Students in Poverty : Strategies for Erasing the Opportunity Gap. Teachers College Press, 2013. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=cat04202a&AN=ucb.b20762039&site=eds-liv  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1Mehayla (talk • contribs) 23:09, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hello All 

message: Hello all, 
Reading your concerns regarding this page it seems that there is a consensus that this is a mess of an article. I am hoping to help in the organization of the article as well as to fill in missing sources for the education sections. 
Firstly, I am wondering what are your thoughts are on possibly renaming the 'family background' section to something like 'systemic perpetuation'. That way it could lead to future development on healthcare, policies that contribute, and more that are not included in this article as of now. I also think the causes of the cycle could be changed as there are particular causes for each cycle. 
I think how these sections have been named is what has lead to a lot of the article's disorganization.
Second, I notice a large concern is providing less biased sources on these issues. If anyone has more right-wing authors that are speaking of the poverty cycle and education please feel free to reach out to me. Otherwise, I will try my best to seek them.
I look forward to working with you all. 1Mehayla (talk) 18:59, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Education 

message: — Assignment last updated by Ehudson9 (talk) 21:11, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: JMC 440 Research Methods in Public Relations

message: Why migration as reason of the povery is not mentioned? IMO its impact substential on wellbeing of individuals (behind lack of access to resources of course) that may give a start to the poverty cycle. I suggest we highlight this issue. There are papers on that, e.g. Migration and Poverty (Linkages, Knowledge Gaps and Policy Implications),  etc. AXONOV (talk) ⚑ 09:32, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Immigration history as a major cause 

message: I also would like to see more substantial discussion of a single parent. Fatherless familes are more likely to force children into extremel poverty. AXONOV (talk) ⚑ 09:35, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Single parent