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Talk:Cavalry saber

message: Almost every statement on this page appears to be incorrect.  Cavalry saber blades are not necessarily curved, because there are plenty of straight-bladed cavalry sabers that prove otherwise.  The length and shape of cavalry blades do not necessarily imply mounted use, since even relatively short, straight, and light-bladed sabers have historically been used as cavalry weapons. Furthermore, they are not necessarily designed for use against an opponent's throat, because cavalrymen usually had the option of slashing or thrusting. And finally the comment about sliding off rifles is either badly written or sounds like nonsense. Since this page adds almost nothing useful to the subject of sabers, it is recommended that it be rewritten or deleted.  Anyone have further thoughts on this subject?    Jack Bethune 15:51, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Faulty content

message: Although I wrote this article believing the information was accurate and correct, I take full repsonsibility for all errors. Sorry about that. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by MKnight9989 (talk • contribs) 12:17, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Oops
Talk:EPC

message: I have removed the following red links. Feel free to reinsert them when the article is created, if the subject is considered to be notable enough:
* Earnings per click (in online advertising)
* Egg PC (Egg Phosphocholine)
* Electronic Parts Catalogue
* Electronic Poetry Center 
* Electronic Power Control
* Entrepreneur and Private Client
* EPC - Irish Consultancy Firm
* Euro Photo Club
* European Payments Council (www.europeanpaymentscouncil.eu)
* European Principal Company
Thanks. --Edcolins 15:54, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Red links 

message: is it something to do with braking ??  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.144.121.196 (talk) 09:14, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  EPC dash light on modern cars
Talk:Codicil (will)

message: I rewrote this article in response to a request to globalize. I have set it up to provide a platform for a global discussion. The modern development section can be expanded with information from other jurisdictions. I'm an American and so have included that jurisdiction. While a lawyer, I am not a t&e expert, and so feel free to correct any errors you see. Ado2102 (talk) 07:49, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Globalize
Talk:Rollin' and Tumblin'

message: According to http://www.originals.be/eng/main.cfm?c=t_upd_show&id=4184,
this song has an earlier source than the 1929 Hambone Willie Newbern version:
Gus Cannon's Jug Stompers - Minglewood Blues (Victor, 1928)
Their member Noah Lewis allegedly is the original author. Newbern just retitled the song one year later and maybe changed some lyrics, like others would do later, most notably Robert Johnson, Muddy Waters and Bob Dylan.
Rewrote to include this, but I am not really an expert. Apparently there are 4 things that you can change in a song: its title, the words, the tune and the chords. How long could anyone claim that it is till the same song?
The AMG lists some 200 versions with the title Rollin' and tumblin'  but we can guess that there are many others.al (talk) 09:56, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Song's origins

message: Is this the origin of the Grateful Dead song "New, New Minglwood Blues"? J04n (talk) 17:00, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Grateful Dead 

message: Gus Cannon was not the first person to record "Rollin'". Looking at a musical and textural transcription of "Minglewood Blues", and comparing it to Hambone Willie Newbern's "Roll and Tumble Blues", I see no similarities. The words are completely different; not a single stanza has any relation to "Roll and Tumble". The tune is utterly dissimilar; and there is not the distinctive slide guitar accompaniment you find with almost every single version of the song, including Newbern's. I'm going to change the allegation that the first recorded version was Gus's. BootleggerWill (talk) 01:40, 8 March 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed for the most part.  While there's a hint of the classic IV-I change in "Minglewood" you have to really want to hear the similarities for them to be there. I suspect this story came about because "New Minglewood Blues" much more clearly resembles R&T. Short Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 02:20, 8 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Minglewood Blues 

message: Are Neil Young's “Are You Ready for the Country“ and Motörhead's “Whorehouse Blues” influenced by this one, too?--Einar Moses Wohltun (talk) 07:18, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Many songs were inspired or share a similar structure.  The problem is, are they noteworthy for an encyclopedic article?  Most of the subsequent versions don't appear to meet the requirements of WP:SONGCOVER, that is "Only cover versions/renditions important enough to have gained attention in their own right should be added to song articles" as discussed by a WP:RELIABLESOURCE.  The current "Rock" section has been tagged "unreferenced" for 17+ months and should be removed.  Also, care should be taken when linking to youtube videos – many are not properly authorized and are copyright violations (see WP:ELNEVER).  Links to Vevo are a better choice. —Ojorojo (talk) 14:32, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Two more versions of this song
Category talk:Oil and gas companies of the Faroe Islands

message: Oil companies in the country x will generally be in Companies of the country in x as well as Oil companies by country, which works as multiple hierarchies for categorisation. So even only one oil company per country becomes part of a series. Using categories to place these in multiple other categories. Same system is used for oil companies of all other countries.Beagel 16:00, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
Talk:Frustration of purpose

message: This article, like so many litigants, previously confused frustration of purpose with the related doctrines of impossibility/impracticably (depending on what legal tradition one comes from).  A quick look at Chapter 11 of the Second Restatement (§§ 261-272) should clear up any misconceptions. Danculley 03:01, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Complete Revision
Talk:Prepulse inhibition

message: Maybe later I'll find this review and put it to the text:
In addition to animal models, PPI has also been explored in humans, supporting the validity of these procedures in studying schizophrenia (for review, see Braff et al. 2002).
CopperKettle 16:01, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cut a phrase from previous edit 

message: * More information on PPI disruption in numerous diseases;
* An outline of brain circuitry underlying the startle response and its inhibition and computer models of such circuits;
* More images: screenshots of registering software, printouts, photos of people tested, mice tested, other species tested;
* Examples of startle sounds also could be added;
* Would be great if the article was reviewed by a specialist of the field, for example, Neal Swerdlow;
* Table of influence of different chemical compounds on PPI in different species, with different reactions across species highlighted; 
CopperKettle 18:12, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  What is necessary to improve this article 

message: There are no references supporting that antipsychotics improves PPI in schizophrenic.
As far as I can see Swerdlow 2007 does not have information about this.
Also references would be needed for schizophrenics that never have been recieving antipsychotics since
the impaired PPI may be a temporary condition (like in panic disorder) or an impairment from antipsychotics.
--Nopedia (talk) 02:07, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  PPI and antipsychotics 
Talk:The Hook (newspaper)

message: I have placed an  tag on the article. At the moment, the article is burdened by severe problems of tone and language inappropriate to the neutral, sombre tone of an encylopaedia:
* "the weekly's gone on to win the hearts of eager readers" Informal contraction and POV phrasing
* "and trounce its competition" more POV wording
* "More importantly, it has shown that a small-size city really can support..." More important to whom?
Some work needed here, preferably by someone familiar with the journal. — BillC  talk 13:58, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Now done. — BillC  talk 21:06, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Advertisement tone

message: *https://www.msn.com/en-us/news/us/a-newspaper-vanished-from-the-internet-did-someone-pay-to-kill-it/ar-AA15h0UC
The reason is the recent purging of its archives by unknown actors.
The Internet Archive has past articles
*https://web.archive.org/web/20220101004514/http://readthehook.com/
but with 20,000 articles in this it would be nice to have proper archiving.
 Bluerasberry (talk) 18:57, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Quite detailed journalism for a newspaper gone for 10 years
Talk:LGBT student center

message: Hi all! I am currently editing this page for a course at Bowling Green State University. I have added a note in the 'Naming Centers' section that references BGSU as an institution with a center that has expanded the acronym (LGBT to LGBTQ+). I am using this as an example of an institution that has recently done this but because it is a personal example I am familiar with, I realize there is a bias there. If anybody wants to change that out for another example of a similar name expansion at another institution, feel free! I just put that there for the example. I only ask that you keep an example there because I believe this is a reoccurring expansion that would be important to discuss with a less biased example.
Thanks all! -- Jowilson510 (talk) 18:53, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edits to 'Naming Centers'
Talk:Rescission (contract law)

message: You mis-spelled recision!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 161.203.19.1 (talk) 13:09, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
Talk:Jazz club

message: In the '20s, jazz clubs and speakeasies had a very close relationshio. Add?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.188.131.228 (talk) 22:50, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Relationship to speakeasies? 

message: I would like to assess this article on jazz clubs based on Wikipedia’s standards, and believe I have moved the article up a class. Before my edit, the page merely had the intro section explaining what a jazz club might look like. I have added a short history of jazz clubs, including information about their emergence dealing with race and Prohibition. I uploaded and included a photo of the Cotton Club, which is arguably the most famous jazz club from the Jazz Age. I also listed some of the big cities in which famous jazz clubs have emerged, and some of the most well known jazz clubs in the United States. I am a newbie to wiki, so I would be grateful for any outside input on assessment and improvement. Hobbitgrrrl92 (talk) 00:17, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  major edit 

message: This article currently starts as such:
However, there are also jazz clubs who's primary activity is not the performance of live jazz music. For the Belgian context, see e.g. the Antwerp Jazz Club (AJC), who's purpose is:
I have, just now, edited the mentioned first sentence of the article according to this information. (Verheyen Vincent (talk) 14:19, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  A jazz club is (not always) a venue where the primary entertainment is the performance of live jazz music 
Talk:David Neiwert

message: This person is notable how?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.132.203.214 (talk) 01:34, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: * http://www.worldcat.org/title/eliminationists-how-hate-talk-radicalized-the-american-right/oclc/268787704
99.181.147.59 (talk) 04:22, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[WorldCat]] resource 

message: * http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/53073758 
99.181.147.59 (talk) 04:23, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Goodreads]] resource
Talk:Annenkov Island

message: It does not make sense that it is named after https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mikhail_Annenkov who is important figure in the history of the Russian conquest of Turkestan, but he is not an explorer. Russian version of the page links to Анненков, Михаил Дмитриевич who was a lieutenant on the Mirny (sloop-of-war), not Анненков, Михаил Николаевич (different middle name). Elendal (talk) 04:05, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Named after
Category talk:Guildford Grammar School

message: This is one of a  number of Australian schools that have sufficient articles and related items that can justify a category within the wider Australian education scene SatuSuro 14:39, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Take it to cfd - the earlier cfd was some time back. There are also several siblings in :Category:Public Schools Association. Occuli (talk) 14:54, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Australian school categories
Talk:Grassholm, South Georgia

message: For two reasons. Firstly, two initials (DI and SGS) are neither explained nor linked, and secondly, "the indefinite form of the name has been approved" is odd. What does "indefinite" mean here, and what does "approved" mean - how, by whom, when etc? Both these points need addressing in the article, even for a stub. 86.132.139.75 02:48, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: In answer to your question, a lot of the South Georgian articles are cut and pasted from an American copyright free gazetteer. SGS here stands for South Georgia Survey, I believe. --MacRusgail 12:32, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Added "confusing" tag
Talk:Jill Jones (poet)

message: I have commenced a tidy-up of the Bibliography section:
* Cite templates will be used where possible.
* Tables may be used to organise short stories, poems and/or book reviews. 
* While I would prefer capitalization and punctuation to follow the standard cataloguing rules in AACR2 and RDA, the Wikipedia Manual of Style at WP:MOS requires "title case".
* ISBNs and other persistent identifiers, where available, are commented out, but still available for reference.
* Links to potentially unreliable digitised copies may be removed. 
This is a work in progress; feel free to continue. Sunwin1960 (talk) 09:56, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bibliography
Talk:Object Module Format (Intel)

message: Intel didn't even have a processor when Relocatable Object Module was being generated in JCL decks on early IBM's using core memory.  Heck, they may be older than that.. Any way the idea was that the ROM could be linked into a calling module - adding a base address to its relocatable address.  Do the research ... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 143.115.155.56 (talk • contribs) 
:Based on this discussion(2006) of JCL card formats for IBM systems, I'm pretty sure the format you're talking about is a different one that happened to be called by the same name. JulesH 08:45, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Intel didn't even have a processor when Relocatable Object Module was being generated
Talk:Mayhem (crime)

message: * It's pronounced "maim".  I know no-one has asked yet, but someone will eventually. --Legis (talk - contributions) 16:16, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It was definitely still pronounced "Maim" when I read medical ethics and the law at University (in Britain) in 1995.  Can't find a reliable source as most legal dictionaries in the UK don't provide guidance to pronunciation. --Legis (talk - contribs) 21:01, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the pronunciation corresponds directly to the spelling.  "Mayhem" = /mej(h)em/, "maim" = /mejm/.  But the verb 'mayhem' and the noun 'maim' are listed as archaic, obsolete, or rare; so in common use, "mayhem" is a noun pronounced /mej(h)em/ and "maim" is a verb pronounced /mejm/. Do we have any reliable sources for anything else? --Macrakis (talk) 20:35, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Pronunciation

message: The article states that "in 1998 the Home Office proposed to abolish it, in the course of codifying the law relating to offences against the person." Was this actually done? If so, can we have chapter and verse from the statute book? If it wasn't abolished, why not? Is there anything from parliamentary debates of the time, or from commentators in the legal profession weighing in? When was the last prosecution for mayhem in England and Wales, and does it (or did it) exist in jurisdictions which derive their legal systems in part from English law, e.g. Australia, Canada, New Zealand. Beorhtwulf (talk) 19:52, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Could you look into this and edit the article?  Thanks, --Macrakis (talk) 20:20, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Unfortunately I don't have time for that! I came here as a reader of the encyclopaedia making an enquiry and a suggestion, should any editor who might feel so inclined want to add some useful information to the article. Sorry to disappoint if you were looking for someone to pitch in! Beorhtwulf (talk) 00:37, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Abolition in England and Wales 
Talk:Harringay Stadium

message: As far as I'm aware and according to Mike Ticher's "Story of Harringay Stadium and Arena", the two venues were only ever known by their common names. Would welcome a citation to show otherwise. Is it possible that the author of this comment is taking a lead from the station which served the venues? When it opened in 1880, Harringay Green Lanes railway station was originally named Harringay Park, Green Lanes. In June 1951 the station was renamed Harringay Park. It was renamed again in October 1958 to Harringay Stadium. In May 1990 the name of the station was again changed to reflect the closure of the stadium; the name chosen this time was Harringay East. The station got its present name a year later in May 1991. But the "park" in the name was after a large house & grounds which occupied a large part of the area. As far as I'm aware it was never associated with either venue.hjuk 23:30, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm reasonably sure that "Harringay Park" was occasionally used as a reference on publicity material for the Arena/Stadium site... not for the stock car racing or circus's which were mentioned as at the Stadium & Arena respectively. But there were other events outside (1950s equivalents of Fleamarkets) and I think the term Harringay Park was then used. --IsarSteve 23:44, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Original Name

message: Ale jrb please look again at the link you've removed and are proposing fro blacklisting. It's an amateur website with stacks of useful info. I have zero link with it, but am the principal author of the article and I think the links adds significant value. hjuk (talk) 22:09, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Discussion about blacklisting here - you are welcome to take part. I'm currently tempted to leave this one be, in which case it can be restored to the article, but no final decision yet. Ale_Jrbtalk 23:29, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: speedwayresearcher.org.uk

message: Same issue as speedwayresearcher.org.uk/. I don't get what the issue is with either site. Both are non-commercial sites that someone has worked hard to build up. They have lots of useful pics / info on and so should stay. hjuk (talk) 20:17, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: oldstox.com
Talk:Lesser included offense

message: "just as battery is necessarily a lesser included offense to murder, and false imprisonment is usually a lesser included offense to kidnapping."  Isn't this confusing criminal and civil law?  No person would be charged by a public prosecutor for battery and murder, niether false imprisonment and kidnapping.  The two former are civil offenses and the two latter are criminal.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by DGGenuine (talk • contribs) 00:51, 24 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  2009 comments 

message: "if the jury acquits the defendant of the more serious offense but is otherwise unable to reach a verdict (i.e., is hung) on the lesser included offense, the defendant may be retried if the prosecutor chooses to do so, but only for the lesser included offense" This would seem to be contradicted by Blueford v. Arkansas 198.145.220.69 (talk) 02:37, 26 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: In some jurisdictions, if the jury acquits the defendant of the more serious offense but is otherwise unable to reach a verdict (i.e., is hung) on the lesser included offense, the defendant may only be retried if the prosecutor chooses, but only for the lesser included offense. In others, a jury is not permitted to render such a "partial verdict".  If the jury finds the defendant not guilty of the lesser included offense, there would be no need to make a determination on the more serious offense, as acquittal of a lesser included offense automatically constitutes acquittal of the more serious offense.
There are several cases, including Blueford v. Arkansas which was decided by the Supreme Court, which completely contradict this paragraph. Since it has no citations, I just removed it. I couldn't find an adequate source to cite to replace the paragraph but I hope somebody can. neilk (talk) 21:53, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hung jury

message: The third paragraph of the lead includes, "However, if the person charged proves to the court their actions were not as serious to constitute recklessness, may in some jurisdictions qualify as the lesser-included offense of improper driving, which is not a crime and is only punishable by a fine.
# - This is not referenced.
# - The content, "some jurisdictions" is vague.
# - I am not sure where the content, "may in some jurisdictions qualify as the lesser-included offense of improper driving, which is not a crime and is only punishable by a fine.", comes from. If a court or a district attorney amends or reduces a charge of a traffic violation to a lesser charge, that is not the same as being convicted of a lesser-included offense, which seems to be an assertion of the merger doctrine. Also, the vague use of "some" extends not only to which jurisdictions concerning the lesser-included offense but which jurisdictions might classify improper driving as a civil offense. -- Otr500 (talk) 03:33, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Issues
Talk:Loyola Sacred Heart High School

message: This article is a good start, but I feel a lot more could be written about this notable school. (Full disclosure: I'm personally invested as an alum, but I feel it's prominent enough to merit a better article regardless of my biases) Here are my suggestions:
# Expand History section, maybe including things such as a list of principals.
# Add a list of offered activities at the school, not just the ones that have won state championships.
# Quotes from the school's actual mission statement might be useful.
# Pictures.
# Possible expansion of the Speech and Debate section, as it's pretty notable, and was even read into the Senate records. (Again, disclaimer, I was involved)
# More up-to-date info on enrollment and other fluctuating stats. I know even the school's website is outdated, but any additional info would be helpful.
I'll try to work on this in bits and pieces, but I don't know how much I'll get done on my own. Also, I'm new to editing, so I apologize in advance for the mistakes I'll most likely make (or have already made). Thanks for any support! Narissara (talk) 01:55, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Expansion?

message: Are there any photos available for the the "L" hillside letter for this school? See also List of Hillside Letters in Montana for more details. -- 208.81.184.4 (talk) 21:28, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: "L" hillside letter
Talk:List of equipment of the Romanian Land Forces

message: I've already post a note on User:Carlosarzu talk page (the user which added all that new info in the article), but unfortunately he didn't reply yet. --Eurocopter tigre (talk) 18:28, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Sources

message: The MG in the photo is definitely not a Vektor SS-77. Roger (talk) 20:41, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Vektor SS-77 photo