Talk:Battle of Remagen

message: I applaud the work being done to improve this article, but be aware it's getting rather long per WP:SIZERULE, at 'Prose size (text only): 72 kB (12209 words) "readable prose size"'. (Hohum @) 17:25, 1 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: I think we can shorten the article by deleting unneccessary details where standard weapon systems are listed. Where unusual or special weaponry was employed, we could keep that but mentioning that the bridge was attacked and defended by standard equipment doesn't add much information. Mentioning the units involved is enough imho. AadaamS (talk) 18:43, 1 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text:  I tend to write for the uninitiated, those who are unfamiliar with military systems, organizations, and jargon, thus I've added what some might view as unneeded details. Your call though. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 11:44, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Careful with the article size 

message: The text says "General George C. Marshall commented, "The bridgehead provided a serious threat to the heart of Germany, a diversion of incalculable value. It became a springboard for the final offensive to come..."  (my emphasis)
"Diversion" seems an interesting word. Is he meaning it as a change in their original direction (like a road diversion), or a move that draws the enemy away (like a feint)? Does it need clarification. GraemeLeggett (talk) 12:36, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Since the capture of Ludendorff Bridge pulled sizable numbers of forces from among those facing Monty, I believe he meant drawing the enemy away. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 11:38, 10 December 2014 (UTC)

text: I have removed the unequivocal assertion that it shortened the war from the start of the lead. The lead itself handles this with more nuance later on, and the article has a whole sourced section on the subject. (Hohum @) 15:02, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

text: The article reflects what reliable sources say. That is what wikipedia does. In fact, the opinions of Friedrich von Mellenthin are unsourced, and need to be. Perhaps you have some reliable sources to use, rather than complaining. (Hohum @) 23:27, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  A question arising from "shortened war" 

message: Anyone want to have a go at reassessing the article quality class now? — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 11:47, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article assessment

message: @GraemeLeggett, while you may feel otherwise, the initial sentence DOES NOT need to "state what the topic of article is." Per WP guidelines, "The lead should establish significance, include mention of consequential or significant criticism or controversies, and be written in a way that makes readers want to know more." The key here is 'makes readers want to know more." The specific guidance for the initial sentence states:
: ..."use the first sentence to introduce the topic, and then spread the relevant information out over the entire lead."
Further, the guidance states:
: "For topics notable for only one reason, this reason should usually be given in the first sentence."
While the battle is notable for more than one reason, the most interesting and compelling fact (which surprised me when I discovered it) is that both the Germans and Americans agreed that taking the bridge shortened the war. I had read some reports by various writers who stated that capturing the bridge shortened the word, but I didn't expect to find corroborating statements by prominent military authorities. 
Given the above guidance, and the lack of direct statements supporting your suggestion that the initial sentence needs to "state what the topic of article is", I am revising the lead to restablish this distinctive notability and help pique the reader's interest in finding out why the Battle of Remagen shortened the war.  — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 19:01, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Did it shorten the war as a whole, or the war in the Europe? The A-bombs shortened the war in the east. GraemeLeggett (talk) 23:27, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text:  I think the quotes and citations are referring to the war in Europe of course. None of them specifically say as much but I believe its a reasonable inferrance. Should i make it more obvious? — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 00:28, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lead's initial sentence 

message: I like it when editors take into account the air contribution for once. Would the nominee mind Dapi89 expanding ever so slightly on the details here? Dapi89 (talk) 17:40, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Please add "de Zeng, H.L; Stanket, D.G; Creek, E.J. Bomber Units of the Luftwaffe 1933-1945; A Reference Source, Volume 1. Ian Allan Publishing, 2007.  p. 149" to the information I added re: Me 262 jets used as escort fighters on the 7 March. It only happened once. Dapi89 (talk) 17:58, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text:  John Weal's Luftwaffe Schlachtgruppen, Osprey p. 100 contains the information pertaining to the 8 March attack and the Ju 87 disaster. Dapi89 (talk) 18:32, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: For information added pertaining to KG 200 the source is Geoffrey Thomas & Barry Ketley's KG 200: The Luftwaffe's most secret unit, p. 157. Dapi89 (talk) 16:21, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Luftwaffe 

message: The lead states that the Remagen Bridge was the last bridge over the Rhine still standing when found by the Allies. That is true of the bridges north of Ludwigshafen, but after 19 March 1945, 3 bridges over the Rhine further upstream were still intact: the bridge at Maximiliansau was not blown until 21 March, at Speyer on 23 March and Gamersheim was intact until blown on 24 March. So when the Bridge at Remagen was found by Allied forces, it was not the last bridge over the Rhine. Perhaps this can be clarified. Source: Victory in Europe, 1945: The Last Offensive of World War II by Charles B. MacDonald, p. 263-4. Thanks. NotaBene 鹰百利  Talk 14:40, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll have a look at the source and see what it says, thanks. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 23:42, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Here's the link to Google books: https://books.google.com/books?id=C-zNqL1yfg0C&pg=PA263&lpg=PA263&dq=12th+Armored+division+Speyer&source=bl&ots=_PTNTwD6iq&sig=r9aNv5T93Ptin9TNITjcdKi1aR0&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjb_JWCjKLLAhXEVT4KHahxAB8Q6AEILzAE#v=onepage&q=12th%20Armored%20division%20Speyer&f=falseThanks. NotaBene 鹰百利  Talk 03:28, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Same book from the CMH: http://www.history.army.mil/html/books/007/7-9-1/index.html NotaBene 鹰百利  Talk 07:46, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Last bridge over the Rhine?

message: The statement "Before Napoleon, only Julius Caesar had crossed the Rhine" is incorrect. Just off the top of my head: French armies crossed the Rhine many times under Louis XIV and XV, capturing many cities including Heidelburg and Freiburg and fighting battles such as Blenheim; just apart from Drusus the Romans had a whole province on the eastern side of the Rhine  (Agri Decumates) which necessarily means they were crossing the Rhine for a long time after Julius Caesar...  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.245.219.245 (talk) 14:33, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Only Julius Caesar had crossed the Rhine? 

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: The article says Engeman 3 times, Engemen 6 times and Engemann once, and it's apparently the same person. Art LaPella (talk) 16:16, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: As far as I can tell they are meant to refer to the same person/task force. Of some of the sources supporting Engeman/Engemen related text, Zaloga and  refer to both task force and person exclusively as 'Engeman',  refers Engemann (for the person), one cite didn't support the exact line it was placed with or mention Engeman, and I couldn't access . Alcherin (talk) 20:29, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Engeman 

message: Some form of short notation for military units seems to have been used in the article - while AIB for Armored Infantry Battalion is explained, what 14/27 AIB, A/27/9 AIB, A/14/9 AIB, A/27 AIB and C/9th AIB, and the differences between them, is not explained in the article. , could you possibly replace these with less technical names for the units in question, given your substantial contributions to the article? Alcherin (talk) 20:37, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Ah, it's an attempt to mention all of the units involved in short form. I'll expand them out so it's actually clear what is meant by these abbreviations. Alcherin (talk) 17:22, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some unclear jargon 

message: Thanks to you and others working for your recent work on this article.  Would you [and anyone who sees this] please look at the section Ludendorff Bridge#Capture during World War II, which summarizes this lengthy article.  I had been working on it and did not realize this article covers so much more that is absent in the summary.  I'm guessing you all know the subject better and could make much better improvements and use the best sources available.  Thanks.  --David Tornheim (talk) 23:37, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for the invite. The Ludendorff Bridge article should only quite briefly describe the battle, since it's well covered in another article. As to summarizing the battle in the Ludendorff Bridge article, my practice is to take the lede of the other (main) article and reduce and summarize it further. Then call it done. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 00:02, 3 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ludendorff Bridge--needs work! 

message: Was the article was trying to use "Roer" for the river when it is in France and Belgium and "Rur" for the same river in Germany?  If so I may have messed up that intent.  But I don't think both names should be used without explanation, since it looks like two different rivers.  GeorgeofOrange (talk) 01:27, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Roer River to Rur River 

message: My english is too poor to do the necessary revision of the few line starting this paragraph.151.29.59.56 (talk) 10:04, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  battle west of the Rhine