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Talk:Type 091 submarine

message: Discussing the inability of the sub to launch missiles while submerged, someone wrote, "This is a huge tactical drawback and makes a missile launch suicidal against most enemies."  This is obviously strong, non-encyclopedic wording. The source cited states things very differently, saying the shortcomings "compromise [the subs'] operational effectiveness and their wartime utility against ASW-competent adversaries."  I've changed the wording in the article to match this.67.68.47.206 (talk) 16:51, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Non-encyclopedic wording 

message: Sounds like another Han-class sub may have been decommissioned, although it's not clear which one:  Cfmdobbie (talk) 19:25, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Another one decommissioned? 

message: [ The submarine is also inhibited by an inability to launch missiles while submerged. ]
its a SSN, when do SSN "launch missiles"?
it appears the article is using dated and incorrect information, does 091 have this capability?
or is it a mere experiment which none of the active 091 submarines have this capability.
Akinkhoo (talk) 07:32, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I suspect this is in reference to the C-801 anti-ship missile it carries. Cfmdobbie (talk) 12:05, 3 June 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  missiles? 

message: *Oppose for now. This move should at least await the discussion at WT:AT, see below. Andrewa (talk) 09:57, 26 July 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Survey

message: Better and clearer sources are required.
Erickson et. al does not support the claim that Peng was the chief designer of the submarine, and claims that Huang Xuhua was the chief designer.
The Chinese-language source, as far as I can tell, supports the claim that Peng as the chief designer of the submarines, and that Huang Xuhua was one of the deputy chief designers, but does not support the claim that Huang succeeded Peng in 1983; a cursory look shows that "黄旭华" only shows up once in the article, and 1983 doesn't show up at all.
User:Lvhis, try not to break WP:INTEGRITY. - RovingPersonalityConstruct (talk, contribs) 06:07, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: New source was added. --Lvhis (talk) 07:01, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Chief designers

message: The article states that the Type 901 is "he first indigenously-produced nuclear attack submarine in Asia.",
I am still learning the ropes of wikipedia, but geographically Russia is also in Asia,
Are we going by where the actual submarine was built? (due to the Soviet Union's love of building their ships in euro-balkan docks)
If not, should it be changed to South-Asia or East-Asia?
Please let me know. Nir Koren (talk) 17:24, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Continental Location of Russia
Talk:2nd Assault Amphibian Battalion

message: Cpl. Teddy Brown Delta Co. Maint. Courthouse Bay. I run the R-7 in the early 80s. Up to 1983. Would like to get in touch with anyone left around from those days. E-mail      tteddyrbrown@aol.com       YAT-YAS  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.191.34.48 (talk) 02:05, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  COURTHOUSE BAY
Talk:Scolari's Food and Drug

message: I just created the page but there are some areas I have no info about:
1) I'm not sure if Reno is still there headquaters.
2) No clue which city the first store was opened in.
3) I know they sold a number of stores to Lucky's way back when but I don't know what year or which cities they were in. This was kinda big at the time and should be covered in their history.
4) I also don't know much generial history of the company other then the founders name; old store locations, their anchor store, other merdgers and so on need to be added.
If anyone knows this stuff please fill in whats missing.
Lando242 23:52, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
Talk:Type 054 frigate

message: I'd like to propose we add a separate entry/page for 054A Frigate.  -- Adeptitus 20:48, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Separate page for 054A 

message: "Today many systems utilized on the Type 054 Frigate are based on French systems that were used on the La Fayette in 1980s."
Sounds quite bizarre to me, given the La Fayette, lead ship of the class, was commissioned in 1996. Rama 09:01, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  La Fayette in 1980s 
Talk:NHS foundation trust

message: "The older existing NHS system was praised in 2007 by the documentary maker Michael Moore in his film Sicko."
It's almost entirely irrelevant what an American film-maker thinks of the NHS in an article about foundation hospitals.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.111.10.223 (talk) 13:50, 21 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removed 

message: This article seemed off to a good start but has stalled. Remaining rich in rhetoric, lacking facts and citations, it is very poor as it stands. At this  moment in time,  it reads not even like  a Public Relations pitch, but more like  spin ,  rather that an encyclopaedic article . 
I'll do some writing for the enemy research in the hope of being able to provide material to neutralise  the POV.  --Aspro 10:18, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Stalled 

message: Please take this article back to its proper name, as laid out in legislation.  There is no such thing as an NHS England foundation trust, and there are no foundation trusts in other parts of the UK. Rathfelder (talk) 20:48, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Name of article
Talk:Vendace

message: This should probably be a disambiguation page. Some of the incoming links, such as the one at Lake District, seem to refer to Coregonus vandesius. The Oxford English Dictionary (2nd ed., 1989) defines "vendace" as "a. A species of small freshwater fish (Coregonus vandesius) belonging to the same genus as the pollan and powan or gwyniad, found in the lake of Lochmaben in Scotland.    b. A closely-allied species (Coregonus gracilior) found in Derwentwater, formerly identified with the preceding." It looks like there are three different uses, then (although C. gracilior is called a synonym of C. vandesius by FishBase). Ardric47 00:33, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, the one at the Lake District is C. albula, the common species: vandesius is restricted to a few lochs in Scotland. For this reason I changed this to vendace (dab) and redirected vendace to albula. Don't use the OED for biology article info. innotata (Talk | Contribs) 20:08, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I was wrong about Derwent innotata (Talk | Contribs) 20:13, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Disambiguation
Talk:Green Party of Oklahoma

message: I added some additional citations. --Jmbranum (talk) 02:57, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I ran re-fill and filled in a number of references, some of which may have been yours. :-) Me-123567-Me (talk) 03:01, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Additional references
Talk:List of Oklahoma counties by per capita income

message: I don't know where to find updates to the per capita income by location figures. They are based on statistics from 2000, but Oklahoma's average per capita income has doubled since then (Oklahoma has the third fastest-growing per capita income in the country). So these numbers are not even close anymore. I did, however, update the overall per capita income figure based on the ref. That number jumped from an average of about $17,000 in 2000 to about $32,000 in 2006. Okiefromokla's sockpuppet/talk 19:57, 17 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: This article is out of date by far
Talk:Bek Ohmsford

message: I think someone should say at what point another book starts, in his life.  For instance, where Ilse Witch ends and Antrax begins.  Also, I don't see why this article is nominated for deletion.  This is a character in more than one book of a well-known published fantasy author.  For notability, try looking at reviews on Amazon.com and such (each book is bound to have several, probably which mention this character, and this is not to mention magazine reviews). Shoreu (talk) 07:32, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Distinction between books; Notability of the article
Talk:Red-headed woodpecker

message: Do male and female differ in appearance? Either way, this should be mentioned.  Also, how about a description of the young?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by SlowJog (talk • contribs) 00:43, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 00:58, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Gender and age differences?
Talk:Eiji Shinjo

message: it's big enough--Dangerous-Boy 10:43, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text:  Too big and too much detail is my opinion. Needs to be trimmed down and then merged (but you already knew that from the Afd of course) -- Hirudo 13:24, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, it does need to be trimmed down and put in with the other characters. Those character "lists" really, really need to be turned into prose.  I do think that this character MAY have the potential to become a seperate article, but.. the current state of the article, he's just another character in a list.  I may be bold later on with this article. --Kunzite 15:28, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  don't merge
Talk:Tom Cole

message: I added this subcategory with references. Mwltruffaut (talk) 09:07, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Native American Heritage 

message: Who does representative Cole s 2600:1700:BCF1:1E00:5526:4B7E:6D80:2A05 (talk) 22:50, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  2024 election
Talk:Al Adl Wa Al Ihssane

message: The transformation into a political party of tha association has never been forbidden by the Moroccan governement. It's the choice of its rulers...I'm Not giving a reference of what i am saying but it's a complicated subject and as a Moroccan i know better about it, just check it.
I will do the right changes in this page when i will have more time. It will be nice if you can help me out
: Dear Fellow Wikipedia editor: 
:I added, on 10 January 2013, a reference based on an English language article. I moved the discussion and reorganized the article due to the death of the former leader. Please sign your talk using four ~. Geraldshields11 (talk) 21:03, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: This article lacks references

message: This article's title (Al Adl Wa Al Ihssane) differs from the lede (Al Adl wal Ihsane). I have no idea which is proper or if both are. Someone more knowledgeable please correct or add clarity. Thank you.  R/ the JMOprof ©¿©¬ 14:02, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: Title disagreement with the lede
Talk:The Warning (Hot Chip album)

message: I just added another disambiguation link to the top of this page.  As per WP:DAB, perhaps this should be made a disambiguation page and the article here should be renamed.  Discussion?  Ensign beedrill (talk) 02:43, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Disambiguation 
Talk:Oklahoma City Baseball Club

message: In Spring 2008 they changed the name to Oklahoma City RedHawks. Moonraker0022 (talk) 20:56, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: No, the new name went into effect after the 2008 season. -NatureBoyMD (talk) 21:20, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Oklahoma ''City'' name change
Talk:San Antonio Talons

message: This team has moved to Texas and no longer has an Oklahoma connection. I am delinking it from that project and will leave linking it to another project to others. Bruin2 (talk) 20:53, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Removal from WP:Oklahoma
Talk:Woman tone

message: i always imagined cream- era eric clapton using a Gibson SG as his main guitar, not the LP. is it verifiable that he used this model? Joeyramoney 00:49, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: les paul?

message: shouldn't it explain how to get the tone?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Surgerytimes (talk • contribs) 07:59, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: how?

message: I think one of the obvious questions this article should answer is how Clapton came up with the name "woman tone" for this guitar technique. Peter G Werner (talk) 18:05, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  The term
Talk:2/18th Battalion (Australia)

message: :Some members of the 2/18th were sent on the Sandakan Death Marches and also to the Thai-Burma Railway.
I assume this means that some members were sent to the death marches and others to the railway, not that the same members were sent to both the death marches and the railway?  Will update the article accordingly.  Regards, Ben Aveling 11:09, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Unclear 
Talk:Thomas J. McHugh

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks - Weaklandjr (talk) 20:31, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Herbert J. Sweet

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks -Weaklandjr (talk) 21:13, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]] 

message: A fairly short article, but probably close to full length for such a figure - not everything can have as involved an article as, say, French and Indian Wars. I only question the use of the term "Korean conflict" instead of "Korean War". This may be a result of my ethnocentric public school education, but I do believe that nearly every American of any level of education would know and recognize the event as Korean War. "Korean conflict" smells like some failed attempt at being more PC. LordAmeth 09:24, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Assessment 

message: Since he was SMMC during most of the hottest time for USMC forces in the Vietnam war, it is odd that there is nothing at all about Vietnam mentioned in this biography. HenryLarsen (talk) 10:45, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Vietnam
Talk:Joseph W. Dailey

message: Family and Personal Information
The first wife of Sgt Maj Joseph W Dailey, the former Leone Paul, whom he married on 18 Jun 1942, predeceased him on 5 November 1987.  She is buried at the Pleasant Grove City Cem at Pleasant Grove, Salt Lake, Utah.  A photograph of the companion g.s. in the cemetery (accessed 11 Feb 2010 at www.findagrave.com) indicates his grave site was reserved next to her at the time of setting of the marker.  Whether he was actually buried there is a matter for further investigation.  Joseph W Dailey and Leone Paul Dailey were active members of the LDS church at the time of their deaths according to the Deceased Member Records of the church, available at www.familysearch.org (within the IGI).  Leone was an accomplished family historian.  He was probably one of the highest profile Mormons in the US military; further investigation of this phase of his biography during the Vietnam era, plus links to the LDS biographical wikis, might be merited. Genehisthome (talk) 02:43, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks - Weaklandjr (talk) 21:03, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Clinton A. Puckett

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks -Weaklandjr (talk) 21:14, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Henry H. Black

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks -Weaklandjr (talk) 21:11, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:John R. Massaro

message: John R Massaro is my great grandfather. His death is listed at 1979. This is wrong considering we just had his 85th birthday party this last weekend. 1979 is when he retired from the military.
TaLeah
TaLeahAnn (talk) 01:32, 24 May 2015 (UTC)

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks - Weaklandjr (talk) 21:30, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Subsequent Nuremberg trials

message: Some expansion is needed to get to B class, plus some footnotes. But a great start. Aboutmovies 19:20, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Start class

message: As part of the Western NC's 3rd Annual Holocaust preservation Edit-A-Thon (https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/campaigns/westernncs3rdannualholocaustpreservationeditathon/overview), I am adding some additional content to this page. Any improvements, revisions or suggestions are welcome! Jnwest (talk) 17:36, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Adding Some Extra Content 

message: Compare Ngram result or google scholar  shows that the name "Nuremberg Military Tribunals" is much more common. (t · c) buidhe 03:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Move
Talk:Leland D. Crawford

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks - Weaklandjr (talk) 21:33, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Robert E. Cleary

message: Should we add the Korean War Service Medal to the page? Information about the award can be found at https://www.afpc.af.mil/About/Fact-Sheets/Display/Article/421898/republic-of-korea-korean-war-service-medal/
Thanks - Weaklandjr (talk) 21:36, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Awards, [[Korean War Service Medal]]
Talk:Edward H. Ahrens

message: the Article text states Ahrens killed 15 japanese.  if you read the actual citation it says
" Although mortally wounded, he succeeded in killing the officer in command of the hostile unit and two other Japanese, thereby breaking up the attack"
I believe the actions of Private Ahrens are glorious enough without any significant 'embellishment'.  I'd suggest
a rewrite to ' Private Ahrens engaged a small unit of Japanese soldiers Killing the Officer in charge and two others, breaking up the attack and allowing his unit to hold their position.  Private Ahrens was mortally wounded but stood his station until
relieved"...
--Patbahn (talk) 00:19, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  I believe the article is incorrect...
Talk:2/3rd Battalion (Australia)

message: In the 2/3rd Battalion's January 1940 War Diary, it is shown that that Battalion departed several days earlier than the article states. https://www.awm.gov.au/collection/C1367735  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 49.182.52.76 (talk) 12:29, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: G'day, the War Diary seems to state embarkation on 9 January and movement to midstream anchor around midday that day. Added this as a range to take into account the other ref, too. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:52, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Incorrect dates of troop convoy on HMS Orcades
Talk:9th Battalion, Royal Queensland Regiment

message: This article has a lot of great information, but I believe it could be improved. Some suggestions include:
* references (there are currently no in-text references at all)
* a list of commanding officers of the battalion, perhaps
* some more recent pictures (if any are available that do not breach copyright)
* more information on the current structure of the battalion if possible
I have made some changes, mainly minor formating, but not being from the unit myself I do not have much more than a general idea. Perhaps a current '9' person could help, or if you've got some of the books listed on the site, please feel free to add in some citations as it would make the site more credible.
Cheers.AustralianRupert (talk) 03:04, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggestions for improvement

message: Question: is the line infantry combat role of the battalion Formally or Formerly. The latter would indicate that it no longer serves that function, whereas the Former means it is used in formal circumstances. Does anyone know which it is? IronBattalion (talk) 08:25, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: G'day, "formerly" would be my assessment as it is no longer performing the role. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 08:40, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks, and you've already edited it, so... Thanks IronBattalion (talk) 20:00, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Formally of Formerly?
Talk:Ricky Carmichael

message: This page needs big time editing. It's very sloppy and unorganized.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.3.33.80 (talk) 05:52, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  CLEANUP 2 

message: This page needs a large cleanup - too colloquial.  Any chance someone can tag this appropriately? borandi (talk) 02:42, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cleanup 

message: Maybe mention his nickname? THE GOAT (greatest of All Time) might be relevent to how he is regarded in the supercross/motocross community.....  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.171.174.139 (talk) 23:45, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GOAT 

message: "Ricky likes cake" Really? is that relevant to that part of the article?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.173.148.85 (talk) 19:47, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 11:09, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  cake?
Talk:Long Yun

message: from "whoos who in china"
 
LUNG YUN, Government official; 
born at Chaotung, Yunnan in 1888 ; 
attended the Yunnan Chiang Wu Tang 
< Military Institute), from which he 
was graduated in 1912 ; joined army 
service and participated in the 
campaign against Yuan Shih-kai ; 
Commander of 3rd Chien Kuo Chun 
(National Establishment Army) in 
1921 ; Commander-in-Chief of 5th Chien 
Kuo Allied Army in 1925 ; Defense 
Commissioner of Kunming, 1926 ; joined 
the Northern Expeditionary Army in 
spring of 1927 ; made a member of 
Military Council ; Commander-in-Chief 
of the 13th Route Army of the National 
Revolutionary Army ; Commander of 
the 38th Army, since 1927 ; Commander- 
in-Chief of the 10th Route Army of 
the Anti-rebel Expeditionary Army ; 
Chairman of the Yunnan Provincial 
Government, since 1928, and now con- 
currently Commander-in-Chief of the 
2nd Route Army of the Communist- 
suppression Forces ; address : Yunnan 
Provincial Government, Kunming, Yun- 
nan. 
06:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  account of long yun from book 
Talk:Witold Rudziński

message: Okay... quoted from a references page, and will rewrite/redo later. Is this ok, or copyright infringement? Ben Tibbetts 01:15, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Rewrote a quick stub - check temp page. Ben Tibbetts 01:20, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: got permission to use temp page as article from MZMcBride. Issue resolved. Ben Tibbetts 01:32, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled