Talk:Strawberry Alarm Clock

message: The group originally consisted of Ed King (lead guitar), Mark Weitz (keyboards), Lee Freeman (rhythm guitar), Gary Lovetro (bass), and Randy Seol (drums). On their first and most famous single, "Incense and Peppermints", none of the band wanted to sing Carter's lyrics, so lead vocals were sung by Greg Munford, a 16-year-old friend of the band...Ed King was denied songwriting credit by the band's producer because he did not write the melody line or the lyrics, which were by John Carter and did not appeal to the band.
John Carter is reffered to as "Carter" before "John Carter". Later on in the paragraph, you can kind of gather that he was some guy who wrote the lyrics, but the first sentence assumes the reader already knows this.  And it is never mentioned what Ed King's claims to the lyrics were (again, its assumed the reader knows this)  Brentt 08:30, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
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message: The two links to the official site do not match; the first one is down.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.226.73.187 (talk) 14:11, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
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message: The Strawberry Alarm Clock did not make bubblegum pop music. The citation to Rhapsody cannot be verified, and would be wrong in any case. I'm not sure how to characterize their music however; though I'm not sure it's necessary to do so in a simple phrase.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Manumoka (talk • contribs) 15:27, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Bubblegum pop" 

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