Talk:Battle of Moon Sound

message: How about a merge of Battle of Moon Sound into Operation Albion? --Yuriy Lapitskiy 21:20, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Probably, "No". Moon Sound battle is important enough because of "Slava" sinking. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 21:17, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: merge?

message: About "Tsesarevich was not Grazhdanin yet that time" I can say that AFAIK it was renamed AFTER October Revolution. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 20:48, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Tsesarevich vs. Grazhdanin in the Battle of Moon Sound

message: I think that Moonsund is used more frequently. Even Wilkipedia's geography section refers to Saarema and adjacent islands as Moonsund archipelago. It's also known in German and Russian military histories as the battle of Moonsund. Vitoldus44 05:06, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It's really unimportant. "Sound" is easier for English-speaking reader. In Russian it will be "zoond". Just create redirect and add an alternative spelling to the top of the article. --Yuriy Lapitskiy 05:34, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Moon Sound or [[Moonsund]]?

message: Good information leading into the article.  I would suggest looking at your work though, I found a grammatical error in the sentence: Bolshevik’s leader was Vladimir Lenin, Which needs the word the in front of so that it flows and makes sense.  If at all possible I would see if you could potentially add more details into the battle sequence.  I am a war enthusiast so I would like to learn even more if possible.
Gives great decision by decision action with the times they were executed showing that they are well informed with what they have read so far.  Also use good citations keeping them to a minimum and not overusing them. Reference list is also uniform with the rest of the resources found a way to shrink the space taken up by excess sources. Allleague1 (talk) 21:16, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  peer review 

message: Overall it is very well done and very interesting. I quite like that the description of the battle is done as a play by play. One thing I would say though is that there are a few grammatical mistakes throughout the article, such as in the sentence "Ji
ust after midnight on October 18th, the S64 shaken by a mine detonation..." you may want to add a was between 'S64' and 'shaken', so I would recommend re-reading it. Also at the beginning of the description of the battle the author mentions that the Russians had changed their battle strategy, perhaps it could be said what was it before the change and why did they change it exactly.Michaela.constant (talk) 06:48, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer Review

message: There appear to be a number of problems with the article but it is dificult to edit it as there are few mentions of the action in generalist sources. I'm not an expert in naval warfare or the Eastern Front in the First World War and I don't have much in the way of specialist sources on those subjects. I found a mention in the Times in the regular 100 years ago feature and have added something from this. I have access to 3 histories of the war. Two of them are rather old (one of these very old) and are of course by British historians who perhaps have less of an interest in the Eastern Front than the fronts in which Britain took more of an active part and they may have had difficulty in examining Russian (Soviet) material. None of them mention the Battle of Moon Sound or Operation Albion. Liddell Hart writing in 1930 and revising in 1934 deals very briefly with the capture of Riga and in the next sentence moves onto the "October Revolution." AJP Taylor in what is a very brief and witty popular history entitled "The First World War: an illustrated history" first published in 1963 calls the capture of Riga on 1st September 1917 "the last engagement between the Germans and the old Russian army." he then deals with Kornilov's attempted coup and the October revolution. John Keegan in 1998 likewise does not mention Moon Sound or Albion but does mention at Page 234 (in my edition) that the Russians were wary generally of sending their Dreadnoughts far from port because of German mines which had badly damaged their state-of-the-art-cruiser Rurik in 1916 and Russian mines were a major feature of the Battle of Moon Sound.{{cite book|last1=Hart|first1=Liddell|title=History of the World War 1914-1918|date=1934|publisher=Faber & Faber Lmt|location=London|edition=2nd}(original title of First Edtion of 1930 The Real War} 
(originally published in hardback by Hamish Hamilton 1963Originally published in Hardback by Hutchinson 1998
The questions that need to be answered to improve this article are I think
1) The main Russian fleet was in or near Petrograd and Finland. Dreadnoughts and other modern ships could have been sent to Estonia which was not all that far away. Were they not sent because of the fear of mines,because the Kerensky Government had no control over the navy,because the admirals had no control of the navy,for lack of reconnaisance or what other reasons?
2)The article mentions three submarines were involved on the Allied side (all British) and mentions them by number. It also says one was lost but the wikipedia pages for those boats make it clear they all survived until at least 1918- I think 2 survived the war. Was there a Russian submarine or submarines also present, one of which was sunk?
3) The German victory enabled the completion of the German invasion of the archipelago and this could be added to the article. It also allowed a landing on the Estonian mainland but nothing appears to have much happened afterwards. Why? The Russians sued for peace after the October Revolution but that did not happen until November. Why did the German army not advance towards Petrograd or Talinn? Did they expect the revolution or was it the advance of winter or pre-ooccupation with Passchendaele which prevented them? Spinney Hill (talk) 16:41, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Re: 3): You do know that the Armistice between Russia and the Central Powers was signed immediately after the Battle of Moon Sound? --Jaan Pärn (talk) 14:02, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Improving the Article