Talk:Atonality

message: I've added a  template feel free to add new articles to it. Stirling Newberry 00:29, 3 Jan 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Modernism template 

message: Why does 'Pantonal' redirect to 'Atonal'.... they are not the same thing. 'Pantonal' needs its own article.
:"Pantonal, pantonality. The free use of all twelve pitch classes, as distinct from their restricted use according to the principles of tonality; hence, synonymous with atonal, atonality." The Harvard Concise Dictionary of Music (2002) and Musicians by Don Michael Randel, .
:"pantonality, pantonal. Term preferred to 'atonality' or 'atonal' by Schoenberg and used by the music analyst Rudolph Reti with reference to 20th-century music that is tonal but where the key is constantly fluctuating or compromised (that of Bartok or Stravinsky, for instance)." The Penguin Companion to Classical Music (2005) by Paul Griffiths, .
:Reti's use would be called "nonfunctional tonality" or pandiatonic. I'll make pantonal a disambiguation page. Hyacinth 10:37, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pantonal redirects <i>here</i>? 

message: I just removed a paragraph fromt the criticism section about hte Postive Music Group.
There is a http://www.dovesong.com/positive_music/movement.asp which may oppose atonal music and promote tonal music, but their website doesn't seem to mention either term. Hyacinth 12:45, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Contact them by mail, they will tell you about it if you don't understand their page's statements which are clearly directed against atonality.80.138.172.139 01:20, 4 February 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I also forgot that they appear non-notable. Hyacinth 08:13, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

text: I guess if they added to the discussion or if we had a list or discussion of groups against atonality their inclusion may be more appropriate. Hyacinth 09:19, 4 February 2006 (UTC)

text: Okay, then I dispute that. I would argue that there are many composers and theorists far better known than the PMM. Hyacinth 10:38, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Positive Music Movement

message: "Not only does it not conform to the common practice of this particular
  period, but it is noticeably divorced from the acoustical underpinnings of
  music going back as far as the scale systems of ancient Greece."
I would consider it as an extension of the use of the acoustical base. That was the vision of Schoenberg and other composers.
: That sentence was probably put in here by a well-known troll. I thought all of his POV statements here had been revised already. Oh well, I've made some updates. Feel free to make more, it's your right as an editor, you don't have to wait for anyone else to do it for you. CRCulver 23:12, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Please revise this 

message: I don't think the definition is narrow enough: Atonality describes music that does not conform to the system of tonal hierarchies, which characterizes the sound of classical European music between the seventeenth and nineteenth centuries.
It looks like the modal music of earlier periods and non-western cultures is included in this definition, which it shouldn't be. Why not: Atonality describes music without tonal center or where all pitches are considered of equal importance.Apus 11:54, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Definition 

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thread_title:  GA Re-Review and In-line citations 

message: What do people think about linking to this site? They are audio recordings of lectures given by a (late) Music professor from Antioch College, John Ronsheim. Ronsheim was a Dallapiccola student, set up the University of Iowa's 20th century music program and was a very dynamic/popular teacher at Antioch. I put the link on here and it was immediately taken off by user CRCulver as "spam". I don't agree. Friends and students of Prof Ronsheim started a not-for-profit after his death-- one of our aims is to promote the understanding of 20th century music. The lectures were prepared for non-music majors. They include many musical excerpts and could be very useful for those wanting to understand atonality who are new to it and/or don't read music. Pulpy 15:43, 6 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I've only made a very cursory examination of the site and listened to about 20 minutes of one of the lectures, but I have to agree that the "spam" lable seems unwarranted. From the little I have heard so far, however, I also find Prof. Ronsheim's lecturing style falls a bit short of "dynamic". Nevertheless, I can see that they might well be of interest to the motivated listener. --Jerome Kohl 16:13, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

text: WP's guidelines for external links prohibit editors from linking to sites they are in any way affiliated with. It is for that reason, and the editor's placing the site on multiple pages, that I have duly removed the links. The editor had already been warned before, too. CRCulver 21:05, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

text: You continue to pitch a site you are affiliated with, seeking to disseminate it as widely as possible. That's linkspam, regardless of whether you think you're trying to be helpful. If you want your page mentioned here, you must abandon the matter until the link is forgotten about and then wait for some unaffiliated person to randomly stumble upon your site and think to add it here. CRCulver 15:42, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

text: I've been rooting out linkspam for three years now, and have succesfully reported many people for linkspam bans based on just as little as you are doing now. Furthermore, by placing a link to the page here on the Talk page "for discussion", you would still be drawing traffic to the site, and as this is a favourite tactic of linkspammers, it gets the same penalty usually. If you were really sincere about not being a linkspammer, you would have given up already. CRCulver 16:42, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

text: I should add that no one will stop you from adding content to the article body based on those lectures. That would be admirable, and it would make Atonality more informative on its own. External links are intended for very rare cases when information cannot be integrated into the article, and that is not the case here. CRCulver 16:47, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text:  So you're saying that the user is disallowed to even discuss the site - which to me seems relevant and would add to the page. You even suggest that they add things from the "disallowed" site into the page without attribution. Seriously, its dumb stuff like this turns a lot of people off of messing with Wikipedia. 173.22.123.35 (talk) 06:03, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Uh, I don't see where CRCulver said "without attribution". Besides, this discussion is now over two years old.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 20:57, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Link to Lectures about Atonality 

message: This article's GA status has been revoked because it fails criterion 2. b. of 'What is a Good Article?', which states;
::(b) the citation of its sources using inline citations is required (this criterion is disputed by editors on Physics and Mathematics pages who have proposed a subject-specific guideline on citation, as well as some other editors — see talk page).
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thread_title:  Reasons for GA Delisting 

message: Partly related to the discussion above; "a sample song may be worth a thousand words". I think the best way to tell a "layman" what atonality is to provide examples, thus avoiding a more or less technical discussion. Also, is the caprice by Paul Sprimont a proper example of atonal music? (I'm really asking) Ozkaplan 00:01, 25 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't think that piece is actually atonal. The harmony is fairly well defined, even if it isn't the harmony of western tonality, it's far from "atonal". Furthermore it returns several times to the same key. It just seems like linkspam to me, really. As for an appropriate example, well, there's not a whole lot of media of this lying around on Wikipedia... there's a midi at Sechs Kleine Klavierstücke, which is mostly atonal, but not entirely. There are a lot of atonal works out there, but a lot of them are still under copyright, but more than that atonality doesn't have quite the fanbase that regular classical music has. It might be difficult to track down decent free media of it. - Rainwarrior 04:35, 25 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Atonality is really not a well defined concept isn't it? It's deviating from tonality in some way but the way how is open to debate (roughly :).. correct me where needed) 85.99.161.82 18:39, 25 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: There are several possible meanings for atonal, which can be confusing, but each of them I think is fairly well defined in theoretical writing. The major ones might be close to "without the harmony of tonality" (sometimes this refers to the interval makeup of the chords, sometimes this refers to the chord function), and "without a tonal centre" (a return to some focal-pitch). In some cases the world "atonal" is used to indicate a work that lacks tonality but is also not dodecaphonic. The only meaning that doesn't have a real definition is the colloquial "stuff that sounds bad". - Rainwarrior 19:11, 25 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  More Samples? 

message: I was just wondering, why is there no mention of the Pentatonic scale? I have always been taught this was a type of chromatic scale that was atonal. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.83.131.213 (talk) 17:55, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Where were you taught this? Although a pentatonic scale can be any five-note scale, the usual assumption is the so-called "anhemitonic" pentatonic—that is, a scale including no semitones. Since the semitone is often (informally) defined as "the chromatic interval", how is an anhemitonic pentatonic scale to be construed as chromatic? As to the issue of atonality, it is a question of compositional strategy more than of choice of scale, though I suppose that equal-stepped scales make it easier to avoid a sense of gravitational attraction between some pairs of notes within the scale.--Jerome Kohl 17:11, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

text: Even diatonic scales lack a tonal center, until the musical context establishes one. Given, for example, the white keys of the piano, what determinies whether you are in C major, A minor, D Dorian, E Phrygian, etc.? As I indicated before, it may be more difficult to write atonally when using diatonic scales (as opposed to whole-tone, chromatic, octatonic, or other symmetrical or equal-step scales), but it is certainly possible to do so. It does not seem to me, either, that pentatony is inherently "atonal," if by that word you mean music lacking a hierarchical pitch structure and tonal center. It is of course true that a polarity based on the relationship of a major dominant triad to a tonic is impossible with an anhemitonic scale of any sort, since that dominant triad's third must be a semitone away from the tonic.--Jerome Kohl 17:30, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pentatonic scale? 

message: I deleted this recent imput:
:"I realize that my comments may not necessarily be accepted immediately, but it is important to note that the term atonal is not accurate in describing serialist composition. Music including that of Schoenberg's has tones and also has tonality. All music with pitches has tonality. Serialism is allowing the chromatic tones to have equality within the piece. But the tones themselves are still within the laws of sound and therefore the term atonal is a blatant misunderstanding."
because
*1. It's a POV
*2. It's worded in a non-neutral perspective.
*3. Because there's an obvious confusion in his comprehension of the notion of "tonality".
Some may use the terms of "tones" or "tonality" in some other meaning, but in the general musical vocabulary, "the notion of "tonality" refers to a system in which certain hierarchical pitch relationships are based on a key "center" or tonic."In other words, a piece is tonal when  you can tell the key of that piece (A minor, E minor or C major and so on...) 
It has nothing to do with the fact the pieces use pitches. Actually you seem to confuse the notion of "tonality" with the notion of "pitch" itself. That's a common use in the popular language but not in the strict musical vocabulary.
So the definition of atonality here is clear. that's any music which doesn't have any key center. I can assure you there's no key in the schoenberg's "atonal" works no matter he uses pitches.Alpha Ursae Minoris 11:18, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Atonality is tonal?

message: I don't mind if you remove this reference but at least do it for justified reasons:
*1. the Ircam center is an international reference concerning modern and contemporary music. 
*2. You say that the Ircam's reference doesn't support the claim concerning Webern, but if you read french take a look to this quote:
:"Son oeuvre sera redécouverte très rapidement par les musiciens de la génération de 1925 : Boulez, Maderna, Nono, Stockhausen, Pousseur... qui fonderont l'«Ecole de Darmstadt» et le «sérialisme intégral» sur les techniques de composition mise au point par Webern pendant l'entre deux guerres (organisation des différents paramètres du son par la série (et pas seulement sérialisation des hauteurs des notes) ; utilisation de séries dont les différentes sections sont elles-mêmes dérivées par transposition, renversement ou rétrogadation d'une petite cellule initiale de 3 ou 4 notes, etc). Le pointillisme, et la concision, caractéristiques de l'écriture webernienne, seront également systématiquement imités par les jeunes compositeurs des années 1950, qui ont longtemps tenu Webern pour le plus important des trois viennois."
It's clear and explicit.Alpha Ursae Minoris 17:36, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: What does this have to do with atonality? Hyacinth 02:49, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Good point. If this belongs anywhere, it would be in the Serialism article, wouldn't it?--Jerome Kohl 17:51, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It depends  which sense we are refering to by "atonality". If we refer to the strict "restricted" sense (that is to say the original "free" atonality) then indeed serialism has nothing to do here, however it seems like the article actually deals with the "extended" sense of the word (that is to say any music without any tonal center)in this regard then dodecaphonism and serialism could be included in my opinion. Anyway in both cases, I'm ok, as long as the article remains coherent.Alpha Ursae Minoris 17:58, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Don't forget, though, that there is a lot of serial music does have a tonal center, or centers. Obvious examples are Berg's Violin Concerto and Stockhausen's Stimmung, but it has been argued that most of Schoenberg's later twelve-tone music has clear tonal centers (though not, obviously, a tonic-dominant axis). The categories "serial" and "atonal" do substantially overlap, so that mention of twelve-tone and serial techniques is doubtless appropriate here, but it is misleading to say all music using these techniques is necessarily atonal.--Jerome Kohl 18:16, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree and the examples you provided are extremely relevant. Berg is btw one of the most striking example of that. But basically the role of the series was meant to organize atonality with lawfull means. While one can indeed reintegrate tonal centers in series, the principle of the non-repetition lying at the core of dodcaphonic technique was basically meant to avoid tonal centers as far as I know. But anyway  I agree it might be misleading to say that serialism is necessarily atonal, but serialism by principle favours atonality.Alpha Ursae Minoris 18:55, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

text: While it is not the main concern of this article. If we include serialism as being relevant in the subject, then it is not wrong to mention the issue either...(well at least if he really did) Alpha Ursae Minoris 16:33, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Other musical parameters as rows in Webern's music 

message: Concerning the last paragraph of the introduction, I'm almost certain that no works of Prokofiev, Hindemith, Bartók or Scriabin are considered strictly atonal. As far as I am aware, all of these composers used musical languages that, despite an extremely free treatment of dissonance and chromaticism, always retained a tonal center in one way or another. Of course, I might be wrong, but even so it's probably a good idea to find some citations for the claims.
EdwardTattsyrup (talk) 19:11, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The key word here may be "strictly", and there are few works by any composer that truly may be described as "strictly atonal". (It may be equally true to say there are few works that are "strictly tonal".) There are certainly works by Bartók that do not retain a single tonal center, and if memory serves, several of the Prokofiev's early piano works also qualify. In fact, many of Debussy's works also fail to adhere to a single center (La Mer comes immediately to mind), even though a succession of local centers occur. Hindemith and Scriabin may well be different cases but, in any event, you are quite right to demand sources. I shall see what I can find.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 19:25, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It was a lot easier than I expected, but the big surprise is that I could not verify the claim for Varèse. New items have been added to the References list, and the relevant references inserted at the end of the sentence. I suppose more details could be given (e.g., Debussy Etude pour les degrés chromatiques, Bartók "Études", op. 18, Prokofiev opp. 2no. 1, 12 no. 1, 35-bis no. 2, First Violin Concerto, etc.) but this would belong in the body of the article, rather than in the lede.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 20:28, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Composers of atonal music 

message: I'm tempted to put a  or  tag on this article but I won't because although it doesn't really meet Wikipedia's style guidelines on citations, they ARE there, just not "wikified", and putting a  tag on it would give editors the wrong idea. It's a big job but someone needs to go through this article and create footnotes by converting all the bare inline citations into wikilinks to the full references. A guide with a good explanation on how to do this can be found here and here. I'd do it myself if I wasn't already bogged down with work. OlEnglish (talk) 21:09, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: What is your rationale for changing from Chicago-style author-date in-text citations to footnotes? The Wikipedia MoS does not take sides on this issue, but does say that changing formats needs first to be discussed and editorial consensus reached before such changes are made. I personally prefer in-text citations, but if you can come up with sound reasons for making a change in this case, I am prepared to listen.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 02:27, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't mean changing formats really.. just providing wikilinked citations for ease of navigation, and to be consistent with the style of citation presentation used for any article that wants to make it to FA status. It doesn't even have to be in a footnotes section.. just have the in-text, short-note citations point to the full reference via the  tag as shown in the example at Wikipedia:Citing sources/Further considerations#Wikilinks to full references. But of course consensus is needed before changing anything. OlEnglish (talk) 04:36, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

text: Yes, I have been pointed to this before. I still don't see any example there of how to do this with Chicago- or MLA-style in-text references (which is to say, how to avoid footnotes altogether).—Jerome Kohl (talk) 07:00, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Suggestion for article improvement 

message: The article states "Twelve-tone technique, combined with the parameterization of Olivier Messiaen, would be taken as the inspiration for serialism (du Noyer 2003, 272)." What does the "parameterization of Olivier Messiaen" refer to? thegoddamnbatman (talk) 21:46, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Parameterization Clarification

message: I have restored the Chicago-style citation formats, which were changed without the discussion and consensus required by Wikipedia:Citing_sources. In fact, the discussion from February of this year appears to indicate consensus that Chicago format is preferred here. The flag placed a few days ago, alleging unclear citations, was not explained. The citations were perfectly clear, so far as I can see. Perhaps the motivation was simply personal preference for a different style—not an adequate reason for wholesale change. A few calls for page numbers were also added, some with justice, but most either to citations referring to entire books or articles (which do not require the inclusive page numbers of those books or articles), or to dictionary or encyclopedia articles, which in citations ordinarily do not require page numbers, either. If an argument is to be made to change from the elegant and efficient Chicago format to what seems to me an awkward footnote format, which is also vulnerable to confusion in online publications, then let that argument be put forward here.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 04:21, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Consensus defined as everyone involved in the discussion. Hyacinth (talk) 01:08, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Citation formats

message: I would like to see more of an exposition on the left-wing culturally Marxist influences on atonal music. Ie, how it fits in with other left-wing facets of postmodern cultural Marxism. Any ideas? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.134.160.174 (talk) 19:05, 12 April 2010
: The left-wing culturally Marxist influences on atonal music? I'm not sure to understand what you're exactly asking for. Perhaps I missed your question. (sorry english is not my mother tongue). Do you imply something like cultural Marxism had incidences in the emergence of atonality or something? Perhaps yes, but well, the issue is a bit more complicated as Schoenberg was a conservative (more exactly a monarchist). He wasn't influenced by marxism, in his music. Sure we got Adorno and Eisler who had marxist views, ok. Adorno tends to view atonal music developpement in a marxist perspective because of its transgressive nature. But basically Schoenberg was conservative and traditionnalist. Alpha Ursae Minoris (talk) 08:58, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I remember reading about an interpretation of the "shedding of the shackles" of tonality, and the abolition of a tonal centre, especially in the form serialism, where all pitches occur equally frequently within an unit, as a "democratisation" and the abolition of hierarchy among the notes of music, corresponding in an abstract way to the changes advocated by Marxists within society. At least these ideas have been connected along those lines. Sorry for not expressing myself well; but perhaps you get the general idea. --Florian Blaschke (talk) 00:51, 31 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Marxist

message: As seen in the text below the picture, describing Scriabin's oeuvre as atonal is at least questionable. So I'm removing it. Scriabin himself said that his works were tonal, it was just another kind of tonlity.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.184.13.19 (talk) 09:25, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Another kind of tonality = atonality. -- Kausalitaet (talk) 13:57, 29 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: If by "tonality" you mean exclusively the major/minor system of functional triadic harmony, yes, but that is a very narrow definition considering the number of composers (Bartok, neoclassic Stravinsky, Copland, Debussy, etc.) whose music clearly exhibits tonal centricity yet often eschews traditional harmonic functions. Besides, the main problem with using the "Mystic Chord" as an example of atonality is that a single chord, divorced from its musical context, cannot be either tonal of atonal (especially when that chord can be considered an altered dominant 13th). —Mahlerlover1(converse) 08:40, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Does "Scriabin's oeuvre" really amount to nothing but a single chord?—Jerome Kohl (talk) 16:02, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Of course not. —Mahlerlover1(converse) 14:45, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: ...but the point the IP raises is that Scriabin's music, radical as it may be, is not fully atonal, at least not in the same way or same sense as Schoenberg's is.  Something else to consider is that this article focuses mostly on the Second Viennese School, barely mentioning Scriabin at all. What should really be here is a real musical excerpt—a few measures from Schoenberg's Opp. 11 or 19, perhaps. —Mahlerlover1(converse) 16:41, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Trying to characterise Scriabin's musical language with a single chord is, of course, ludicrous. The serious side of this problem, however, is the definition of "atonality", which is a lot trickier than saying "whatever is not tonal", since that in turn requires defining what tonality is. While an example from Schoenberg's opp. 11 or 19 might be useful, pointing to it would explain atonality as little as the mystic chord explains the presence or absence of tonality in Scriabin's music. Schoenberg's music is seldom "strictly atonal", especially after he got past the radical stage represented by those two pieces. Even there, it takes a considerable amount of explaining to show exactly how he manages to avoid tonal implications at every turn—almost as difficult as demonstrating that, say, Haydn in the Largo of op. 76, no. 5 manages never to deviate from strict tonality.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 22:40, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removed Scriabin's mystic chord. 

message: Why is the mystic chord found in the lead of this article? Isn't atonality related mainly to the issue of relationships between sounds, as opposed to combinations of them? A 12-tone row would make much more sense there. Toccata quarta (talk) 16:21, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Isn't that what I just said, in the immediately preceding section of this discussion page?—Jerome Kohl (talk) 17:42, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Indeed—I just happened to contribute to this talk page without looking at almost any of its content. Shall we remove it, then? Toccata quarta (talk) 17:53, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I have done away with it. Toccata quarta (talk) 05:41, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Prometheus chord 

message: How many separate headers are needed for the same subject? Hyacinth (talk) 07:55, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Do you propose digging out discussions from all talk page archives and merging them with ongoing related ones? A separate discussion is a separate one. Toccata quarta (talk) 08:29, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: One could say, "And the same discussion is the same discussion." Hyacinth (talk) 09:18, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: So you propose abolishing archives. Take it to WP:VPR, if you have sufficiently strong faith in the necessity of such a change. Toccata quarta (talk) 11:26, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Mystic chord

message: Hi, I've seen that User:Jerome Kohl reverted my edits concerning the replacement of parenthetical references for sfn footnotes. While he has his point (mentioning WP:CITEVAR), was it really necessary? I mean it took me a while, and it makes the article more readable. That's a dense and somewhat "controversial" article, so it will be expanded a lot in the future, and it will need extensive sourcing. Keeping with the current style makes reading the article more tedious. Just check out the last sentence of the header, it's excessive! IMHO the sentence "if you believe it is inappropriate for the needs of the article, seek consensus for a change on the talk page" applies here. Thanks!!--Fauban 09:45, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: We had this discussion in April 2010 (see above) and there was no consensus for change at that time. I have not changed my opinion, and vehemently oppose cluttering up this article with footnote numbers, and requiring the reader to bounce back and forth from text to footnotes, just in order to see the name of the author being cited. I cannot think of an article that better illustrates the disadvantages of footnotes than this one. If you will have a look at the end of the third paragraph in your recent edit, you will see eleven consecutive footnote numbers (this is precisely the spot that you are invoking as evidence of the advantage of footnotes!!!). How is this supposed to be less tedious for the reader?! There is a reason why style manuals discourage multiple footnote numbers at the same point, and this is that reason. The template is part of the problem, since it does not permit consolidating multiple references in a single note. However, parenthetical referencing is inherently more elegant and less intrusive, not only for this reason. There are of course templates designed for use with parenthetical referencing but, as far as I am aware, none of them are compatible with the format used in this article. Perhaps one day soon, someone will design such a template. Until then, I see not reason to tamper with perfection.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 21:59, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Changing citation style 

message: Would traditional music such as this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWEa_xqKxsA&list=TLsdUrk7uB6ku4XymzGuojBcsNudoGoLse or this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgWeVPIrXwQ be considered atonal? 153.188.121.94 (talk) 05:29, 16 December 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: It might be. Do you have a reliable source saying that it is?—Jerome Kohl (talk) 16:55, 16 December 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: I can't find much about atonality in non-Western music via Google search. I did find this: "Music from non-Western cultures does not always contain a tonal center, which is one of the reasons some foreign music will sound so strange to Western listeners. Some twentieth century composers also experimented with twelve-tone music or atonal music, intentionally trying to eliminate the inherent musical hierarchy in Western tonal music." http://www.netplaces.com/piano/basic-music-theory/tonal-center.htm I don't know anything about this topic, but it seems as if a lot of non-Western traditional music might be considered atonal, and that would be worth mentioning in the article. Maybe someone who knows more about this knows where to look? Ghostofnemo (talk) 06:46, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: I had in mind sources describing those particular examples (or the repertoires to which they belong) as atonal. Certainly what you found is true generally but, as it says, atonality is usually construed as an intentional attempt to "eliminate the inherent musical hierarchy in Western tonal music". Therefore music from outside that tradition, although lacking the essential features of tonality, does not deliberately seek to avoid those features, and may well employ one or two of them, by pure coincidence. There is a huge difference between music which is simply "not tonal" and "atonality". This is a difficult subject to disentangle and even respected authorities differ on just what constitutes atonality—or even what tonality is exactly, which should be necessary before anyone can say what its complete absence might be.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 16:52, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

text: I don't think I am wrong, and I am astonishged that you think I might be.—Jerome Kohl (talk) 01:13, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
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message: Hi,
It would be really useful to cite a few well-known atonal pieces to explain what atonality is. An example is worth a thousand words.
thanks
Tad115.70.130.5 (talk) 02:38, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: August 2018

message: Tonal music with many scales (usually non-classical like: mode A: do, do#, re#, mi, fa#, sol, la, la#, mode B [same; shifted one semitione - up or down is same]: do, re, re#, fa, fa#, sol#, la, si) and many exceptions. Modernism (music)
Why False-atonality = pseudoatonality needs a different page from modernism (music)?
because:
# false-atonality is esthetically close to atonality
# it is a hyponym of modernism; modernism has many subgenres (sometimes they even have separate fans) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2a02:587:4121:b500:4491:a17c:5d1b:1d5b (talk) 10:17, 9 May 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  ''make page'': [[False-atonality]] = [[pseudoatonality]] 

message: * false atonality, pseudoatonality: modernist music that sounds like atonal; false-atonal: atonal in mood but not randomized
**Greek: ψευδοατονισμός — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2a02:587:410d:42b3:10c5:1e38:c29:39a7 (talk) 06:19, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Horrorish modernism]] but not pure atonality 

message: In 2020 atonality has been used 50% more in music according to studies.many different artist used them trippy red,xxx tentaction,yyyoungcut,kanye west and more ..but the reality is that sound can be bent which can give it a 3d effect.
artist that has almost created a subgenre using atonality
.YYYOUNGCUT
 .DRAKE
  .XXX TENTACION
 .KANYE WEST
173.16.234.201 (talk) 05:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  atonality