Talk:Murder of Robert McCartney

message: This article touches the heart of many of the political issues involved in The Troubles - there is a real danger of issues concerning neutral point of view with it.  I've not marked it with NPOV but have instead tried to balance it and posted this comment to highlight this is about a family and their campaign for justice - it is not about the politics of the area though they form an element of it like they do in almost everything in Northern Ireland.
--Flaweddiamond 01:37, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: While I agree that much of what you took out is POV, I think it would be worthwhile to keep in information about the traditionally strained relationship between the Catholic/Nationalist community as a whole -- not just Sinn Fein and the IRA -- and the RUC.  It's that suspicious relationshp that makes the McCartney sisters' insistence that the police be involved in the investigation all the more newsworthy in this case. --Jfruh 06:52, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC)

text: The disturbing thing about this is that it apparently wasn't even a punishment that could be "justified" as a punishment beating even in the eyes of the IRA.  It was just a bunch of guys behaving like thugs.  
He was referring to the offer of killing the perpetrators by the IRA as being a "punishment" killing to those who murdered her husband. He was not referring to the original murder.   —Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.142.204.47 (talk) 18:53, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
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message: Err.. whats a Wag?--195.7.55.146 11:04, 9 Mar 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Wits, jokers. -- Arwel 11:08, 9 Mar 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Wag ?

message: Removed request for citation: What better proof for the "dip in Sinn Féin's support" than the loss of the Short Strand seat, which is already stated in the article ? The Gnome 09:59, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Support for Sinn Féin dipped" 

message: Please forgive my ignorance if i am wrong, but it hardly seems objective to state that the murder was carried out by IRA members while there hasn't yet been a verdict in this case. Right?
:Nope the provos admitted volenteers committed the murder, they then offered to kill the (now) ex-volenteers. SCVirus 19:10, 17 September 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  no verdict 

message: This is an entirely incorrect and misguided statement, Being a member from the Short Strand I can account that there was no such level of intimidation towards the McCartney's but rather left of their own free will 'claiming' intimidation. In particular few of the McCartney sisters actually remained in the short strand at the time of the murder and significantly Paula McCartney had all ready intended to leave the short strand prior to the murder having already placed her house on sale. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Fitzpatrick1 (talk • contribs) .
:To what end would they do this?  Here was a nationalist family who, it would seem, would previously would have had no axe to grind with Sinn Fein.  The act carried out has no frame of reference within any political struggle by those who claim to be "soldiers" of  a cause, it was a trivial pub argument followed by an undisciplinned and thuggish reaction.  Those who were involved in the clear up and cover up were as bad as the purpetrators.  I hope they get AIDS. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 86.134.46.231 (talk) 12:26, 16 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Robert McCartney's partner, Ms Hagans, along with her children, decided to leave the neighborhood (which, she states, has been home to her family for "a hundred years") on account of "intimidation" by locals. And Ms Hagans can rightfully be considered a member of the McCartney family. Among other incidents, it was reported at the time (see link to The Guardian report, in References) that a crowd of protesters chanted outside her home "Out! Out!" Subsequently to the episodes of harassment and beatings, Sinn Féin party member Gerry Kelly condemned (somewhat mildly) the "intimidation", saying that it "is wrong and should not be happening." In so many words, intimidation occured, it was serious, and forced members of the McCartney family to leave the area. The Gnome 09:34, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Incorrect 

message: Without expressing opinion on the facts, there are a number of uncited claims in the piece. I fixed some, but have not been able to go through all of them. Whether true or otherwise, or even "obvious", claims about Sinn Fein support etc. need some explanation or they're not appropriate. Supporters should want to buttress the claims (at least by explaining the logic more directly in the piece) and opponents, well, they know what they want to do, too. The wording of the piece in general also seems sufficiently POV that I tagged it. Perhaps with more attention to sources, that tone will go away.Czrisher 13:39, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clean-up and NPOV 

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thread_title:  WikiProject class rating

message: His killing by IRA members has had extensive political repercussions for Sinn Féin as many people have expressed revulsion to the crime in a way not seen before. Opinion polls, all over the island of Ireland, showed a dip in support for Sinn Féin after the murder,[citation needed] and Sinn Féin lost their council seat in the Short Strand in the local elections in March 2005. The murder of Mr. McCartney particularly impacted on Sinn Féin's support in the Republic of Ireland where the party has been consistently unable to break the 8% barrier in opinion polls."
"island of Ireland seems odd in this sentence".  Is there another non island Ireland?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 158.234.250.71 (talk) 10:18, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: And all of the unreferenced material has been removed. BigDuncTalk 16:27, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  island Ireland 

message: I've added information on the start of the current trial. Starviking (talk) 06:25, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Current Trial 

message: The opening paragraph states this man was allegedly killed by the Provisional IRA, yet the category "People killed by the Provisional Irish Republican Army" has been added to this article as if that is an accepted fact. Should this category remain in place? Wouldn't it be more accurate to add a category "People allegedly killed by the Provisional Irish Republican Army? Freikorp (talk) 12:28, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: As much as it's blatantly clear to most right-thinking people that the PIRA did murder McCartney, it hasn't even been proven so I don't think the category is appropriate. To be honest, I think an "alleged" category is a bit redundant – I'd rather just remove it outright. — Jon C.ॐ 12:36, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for your reply, will act accordingly. Freikorp (talk) 12:43, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Category "People killed by the Provisional Irish Republican Army" 

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message: The section entitled "Fight" doesn't introduce Brendan Devine until halfway down first paragraph and does not give context for the relationship between the men or why he was involved in fight. It also doesn't give his full name. As his involvement is important for this section of the event, it might be worth bulking this section out a bit? Merytonetc (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: The entire article fails to explain at any point who "Devine" is 88.105.167.65 (talk) 07:25, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clarification for "Fight" section 

message: The first sentences (including formatting, etc.):
:The murder of Robert McCartney (1971 – 31 January 2005) occurred in Belfast, Northern Ireland, and was carried out by members of the Provisional Irish Republican Army. McCartney was a Roman Catholic and lived in the predominantly nationalist Short Strand area of east Belfast, and was said by his family to have been a supporter of Sinn Féin
The bold phrase is the article title, in keeping with MOS:LEADSENTENCE. The date-range refers to the person named there, and it's not uncommon to list a person's lifespan when a person is first mentioned in an article. But this layout unifies the bold concept (the murder event of the person) so the date-range seems like it's referring to that event rather than just the last few words of it. Again per MOS, the first sentence would reasonably be expected to provide the timeframe of the article's topic.
I assume this date-range here, and indeed the overwhelming focus here on the person (victim) rather than the event (the article's title), is a remnant of when this article was a bio article rather than event article. Given it's now an event article, I've re-jiggered the date positioning so it's clear what's when and referring to what. I'm not well versed in the article's topic itself, so I don't know how to rewrite the lede so that, per MOS, it is a better summary of the article itself. DMacks (talk) 13:21, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lifespan in first sentence