Talk:List of battlecruisers of the Royal Navy

message: Well, I say areas, the main issue that would prevent going to ACR/FLC for the moment is a lack of citations in the lead. You need to make sure that you cite everything in the introductory paragraph. For lists, these tend to make up the majority of text though I do understand that most of the information is covered already by citations in the individual sections. A little gripe though, excellent work so far. Regards, Woody (talk) 18:45, 15 September 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Areas for improvement 

message: Is there any reason why HMAS Australia is in this list? She was always a unit of the Royal Australian Navy and was under the ultimate control of the Australian Government. I think that she should be removed as she was in no meaningful sense a "battlecruiser of the Royal Navy". Nick-D (talk) 09:47, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Very good point. Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:44, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for that. I've just tweaked the text so that Australia is specified as 'HMAS' and New Zealand as HMS. Nick-D (talk) 23:50, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  HMAS ''Australia'' 

message: With regard to my comment at FLC here is why I feel there is a problem:
;Current tables
Ship             	Main guns	Armour	Displacement	Propulsion               	Service                   	Service                   	Service
Ship             	Main guns	Armour	Displacement	Propulsion               	Laid down                 	Commissioned              	Fate
HMS Indefatigable	8 ×      	      	            	4 screws, steam turbines,	23 February 1909	24 February 1911	Exploded at the Battle of Jutland, 1916
HMS New Zealand  	8 ×      	      	            	4 screws, steam turbines,	20 June 1910    	19 November 1912	Sold for scrap, 19 December 1922Roberts, p. 123
Ship          	Main guns	Armour	Displacement  	Propulsion               	Service               	Service                   	Service
Ship          	Main guns	Armour	Displacement  	Propulsion               	Laid down             	Commissioned              	Fate
HMS Queen Mary	8 ×      	      	Roberts, p. 45	4 screws, steam turbines,	6 March 1911	4 September 1913	Exploded at the Battle of Jutland, 1916
;Wrapping without convert and with a few  
Ship             	Main guns              	Armour            	Displacement                    	Propulsion                                                 	Service                   	Service                   	Service
Ship             	Main guns              	Armour            	Displacement                    	Propulsion                                                 	Laid down                 	Commissioned              	Fate
HMS Indefatigable	8 × 12 in (305 mm)	6 in (152 mm)	22,430 long tons (22,790 t)	4 screws, steam turbines, 25 kn (46 km/h; 29 mph)	23 February 1909	24 February 1911	Exploded at the Battle of Jutland, 1916
HMS New Zealand  	8 × 12 in (305 mm)	6 in (152 mm)	22,430 long tons (22,790 t)	4 screws, steam turbines, 25 kn (46 km/h; 29 mph)	20 June 1910    	19 November 1912	Sold for scrap, 19 December 1922Roberts, p. 123
Ship          	Main guns                	Armour            	Displacement                                  	Propulsion                                                 	Service               	Service                   	Service
Ship          	Main guns                	Armour            	Displacement                                  	Propulsion                                                 	Laid down             	Commissioned              	Fate
HMS Queen Mary	8 × 13.5 in (343 mm)	9 in (229 mm)	31,844 long tons (32,355 t)Roberts, p. 45	4 screws, steam turbines, 28 kn (52 km/h; 32 mph)	6 March 1911	4 September 1913	Exploded at the Battle of Jutland, 1916
See the difference when you change the width of the screen. The second set of tables is much more readable. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 09:56, 12 October 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: This was resolved after discussion here and can be solved by using abbr=mos instead of abbr=on. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:49, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Table wrapping