Talk:San Sebastian Church (Manila)

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* Generally, galleries are discouraged. It won't fail the article at GA, but if you plan on going on to FAC, it might cause concerns there.
::Ok, I'll keep that in mind. Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The sentence containing the statement was intended as an introductory lead for the rest of the paragraph, with the succeeding sentences (with their respective references) specifically designed to support the assertion that the church was "internationally famous for its architectural features". That statement was meant as a precis of the succeeding factual statements in the paragraph, and not as a stand-alone assertion. I'm open to revising the sentence, but I'm interested in hearing reactions to my justification of that statement. Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:56, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Generally, such a statement needs some sort of direct citation. A couple of tourism sites or a travel review from a book would help satisfy that. The statement "internationally famous" is very definitely opinion, and needs something to back it up, even with the supporting statements later. I won't fail the article for GA on this, but it would not pass muster at FAC as it stands. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll keep that in mind. In any case, pending a direct citation, I substituted "internationally famous" with the less contentious "noted". --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: How about "...Don Bernardino Castillo, a generous patron and a devotee of the Christian martyr Saint Sebastian, donated..." I don't think the saint's patronage of archers is relevant to the article. And I suspect the editor who wrote that passage might have been referring to a college sports team. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Works fine. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Changed as agreed. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: I've got a citation, will be adding it once I've found the book.Added a citation. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Based on the reference, the fonts were there as of 1919, which is the date of the source material. The only way I could think of to confirm that fact is to actually make a visual check of the church itself, which is not implausible for me or other Manila residents. But maybe this might be satisfactory, "Six holy water fonts were constructed for the church, each crafted from marble obtained from Romblon". --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  That works fine. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Changed as agreed. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Changed as suggested. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

text: Agree about the awkwardness, but I think it is worth alluding that the steel structure of the church is relevant to the particular problems facing the church. How about "The steel church has been beset by rust and corrosion, which the sea breezes from nearby Manila Bay contribute to." Anyo Niminus (talk) 17:38, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  That works. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Changed as agreed. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

text: The only quantitative proof I can offer is that the Artes de la Filipinas website has been linked to by a website maintained by the De La Salle University, which is among the top three or four universities in the Philippines. That the site has been deemed credible by one of the leading academic institutions of the Philippines should be a positive. I'll admit though that it would be better to bolster the statements relying on that reference with other sources. There are local encyclopedias or books that I'll try to check out, though I don't know if the seven days will be enough as I'll be on vacation for the next few days and will be able to attend to this around five days into the holding period. If other editors want to look into this, that would be great. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 18:15, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  How about this, it's marginally reliable, and certainly good enough for GA status. Just try to get it changed out before FAC, and that'll be good. No need to rush yourself to death over it. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks, will keep that in mind. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

text: I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:28, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Speaking of FAC, if you're intending to take it there, I strongly suggest digging up some more information, if possible. A bit more on the history, etc. wouldn't go amiss. I'm not an architectural historian by any means, so take this with a grain of salt, but the article felt skimpy in some places, at least in terms of a FA article. It's certainly well within GA parameters, and I have no qualms about passing it, with the citations on the construction section, but for FAC, I'd suggest looking at a few of the architecture FAs out there, and seeing what more might be added to this article to flesh it out. Ealdgyth - Talk 18:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for all the comments, and for the smooth handling of this evaluation. When I expanded the article, having it elevated to GA was far from my mind, and I nominated it only after another editor suggested that I do so. I agree it will take much more work before the article can even receive consideration for FAC, but its a goal worth aspiring for. --Anyo Niminus (talk) 03:38, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Looks like we're all done here. Promoting now. Ealdgyth - Talk 03:46, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
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