Talk:Some Enchanted Evening

message: I trimmed the list of "Recordings" as follows: I trimmed the redlinks; the instrumentals; and the TV and movie performances which aren't actual recordings. Namely:
I also trimmed this bit of trivia in the body text: "The song is sung by an itinerant chanteuse in a pivotal scene in the movie Crossing Delancey."
Also, the existing list of notable recordings could use more dates and then it should be put in chronological order. EDIT: I've put the recordings in chronological order, with the exception of the two which do not have dates. Softlavender (talk) 00:46, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I would put back in a brief paragraph about the instances where the song is performed in feature films and on TV, including the Ally McBeal, Muppet Show, American Graffiti and Crossing Delancey references (obviously this should be sourced).  It is of interest, I think, that the song is used in films and TV episodes that are unrelated to South Pacific.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:14, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm not going to replace or source that info, but if someone wants to, here are some more (not exhaustive, people input these things only sporadically) from IMDB:  Plus the other uses of the title that are on the dab page should perhaps be mentioned. Softlavender (talk) 00:19, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks!  I'm going to be mostly offline for the next week, but I'll try to get to this asap.  All the best!  -- Ssilvers (talk) 03:57, 24 June 2011 (UTC)

text: Do you have a source that shows that it was a hit recording or otherwise particularly noteworthy?  -- Ssilvers (talk) 06:33, 8 May 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Trimmed list of so-called "recordings" 

message: Re: "According to the running commentary on the DVD release of South Pacific, this song provides an example of Oscar Hammerstein II's use of verbs in a song. The DVD commentary mentions that Lehman Engel remembered how Hammerstein wanted to write a song based around verbs, but waited ten years to do so before he wrote this song.":
Don't all sentences, and thus virtually all lyrics have verbs? Isn't it generally agreed that since verbs show action, virtually all sentences except "to be" sentences are "based around verbs"? The verbs in "Some Enchanted Evening" are pretty ordinary and not especially emphasized. I really haven't a clue what the above paragraph in italics is trying to say. TheScotch (talk) 09:33, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Probably best to get the DVD and listen to the commentary and see what exactly it says. (I don't personally have the DVD and have never listened to the commentary.) To me, though, if that's what the commentary says, it makes as much sense as anything, because there's not a lot else in this article. UPDATE: The info, which was added by Yip1982, also included this sentence: "The song is rich with verbs, such as 'see', 'hear' and 'find.'" -- but someone deleted that part. It might be worth re-adding. Softlavender (talk) 09:41, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I know that the story has been told on the DVD and other places, and I added the verbs into the text, but the article needs more references.  Somebody needs to dip into a real book about South Pacific or R&H to get some refs for this article.  As for the list of recordings, that should be available on the internet, if someone searches for each one.  For example, here is one for Bryn Terfel: http://www.allmusic.com/album/something-wonderful-bryn-terfel-sings-rodgers-hammerstein-r309313  -- Ssilvers (talk) 02:39, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

text: Is that a threat?  :) Softlavender (talk) 06:53, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The passage in question is "threatened", if you like, because it is nonsensical as it currently stands. The obvious way to support it is to provide the verbatim transcription. If Ssilvers hasn't got and never had the transcription, he shouldn't have added the passage. We can't just go sticking things into an article that we vaguely remember maybe having heard on some DVD commentary or other. TheScotch (talk) 07:13, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Ssilvers didn't add the passage. The editor who did, whom I mentioned in my first reply in this section, has responded to my query by saying "I'm referring to the 2006 Fox DVD release of the 1958 film version of South Pacific with Gaynor and Brazzi. This is part of the running commentary of the film on the first disc by Ted Chapin and Gerard Alessondrini. Gerard Alessondrini mentions that Hammerstein told Lehman Engel that he wanted to write a 'verb' lyric ten years before he wrote South Pacific. This is part of the 2006 Fox DVD release and also part of the recent 2008 Blu-Ray version of the film." By the way, if you edit your comment considerably after someone has replied to it, please note your edits/updates as such, or create a new comment down below the last one posted. Softlavender (talk) 07:28, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I've posted a query on Yip's talk page just now. It would obviously take some time for a verbatim transcript of the comment(s). Meanwhile, we now have the exact source, which is checkable by any editor or reader. Also, I've found a similar but not identical quote from a Lehman Engel book: . He also makes the following comment about SEE two paragraphs above that: "In this song the words and music are so inseparable that (as Hammerstein once wrote, speaking generally) you can scarcely think of one without the other." [I can't make the Google-snippets show that directly]. One more request: Please remember to use colons to correctly indent your post so that it's indented more than the post you are replying to. Softlavender (talk) 07:59, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

text: Please see: Help:Using talk pages#Indentation. Softlavender (talk) 09:13, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Verbs? 

message: It seems that everything that really needs to be is referenced, except possibly for the precise DVD in question (so that can be tagged inline if desired, instead of up top). Softlavender (talk) 03:48, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed tag at the top and instead inserted cn tags were references are needed inline.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 06:50, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  OK to remove refimprove tag? 

message: Here is some material I've found relating to the Lehman Engel comments about the song.
* Yip1982 says, regarding the source of the commentary he paraphrased:
I'm referring to the 2006 Fox DVD release of the 1958 film version of South Pacific with Gaynor and Brazzi. This is part of the running commentary of the film on the first disc by Ted Chapin and Gerard Alessandrini. Gerard Alessandrini mentions that Hammerstein told Lehman Engel that he wanted to write a 'verb' lyric ten years before he wrote South Pacific. This is part of the 2006 Fox DVD release and also part of the recent 2008 Blu-Ray version of the film.
* Yip1982 posted a transcription of the commentary:
Gerard Alessandrini: 
:Lehman Engel, the great conductor and teacher of musical theatre, used to tell his class that – you can confirm this or deny it – that Hammerstein had told him that for about ten years prior to writing the song, he was searching for a song that he wanted to write – a lyric that was a "verb" lyric that was all about seeing, hearing, doing, feeling – taking action, and then he finally found it with this character. And indeed if you listen to the lyric, "you may see a stranger", "you may hear her laughing", and then take action and do it. And then Rodgers just scored it with the emphasis on the verbs. So it's the "verb" song."
* I've found a similar but not identical quote from a Lehman Engel book: . He also makes the following comment about the song two paragraphs above that: "In this song the words and music are so inseparable that (as Hammerstein once wrote, speaking generally) you can scarcely think of one without the other." [I can't make the Google-snippets show that directly].
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Softlavender (talk) 09:27, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I've put in a ref to the correct DVD.  I think that Alessandrini's statement backs up the text.  Unless someone is trying to take this article to GA or FA any time soon, I don't see why this start article is the focus of so much attention.  There are no controversial statements being made here.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 06:54, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Lehman Engel]] material 

message: Unfortunately, IMDB is not a WP:Reliable source.  See WP:IMDB.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 23:18, 6 April 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: What sort of citations are you wanting for the 4 TV/film uses, the 2 acting awards, and the #1 Billboard hit? (And what about the 4 TV episode titles, and the 20 recording artists?) As you stated above, "I don't see why this start article is the focus of so much attention. There are no controversial statements being made here." The awards are not cited on either South Pacific or the List of awards and nominations for the musical South Pacific nor on most any article on any musical I've seen, except for the tiny handful of FA musical articles. Same with #1 Billboard hits. The succession navbox is even at the bottom of this article. IMDB is not a reliable source for trivia, biographies, and other textual observations and opinions, but it is the source of record for cast and crew listings, and for some other listings. I'd rather delete the film and TV uses, as I did previously, than spend days finding other mentions of the uses. You personally re-added the TV/film uses and promised to source them before re-adding them. Could you please do that yourself, then? And are you willing to find the original Billboard listings? (And do you want to tag the various other South Pacific articles, and every Wikipedia article on acting awards and Billboard listings?) These are all non-controversial statements that are a matter of public record. In my personal opinion you are over-tagging this article. If you really want to help, could you please find sources, rather than tagging things that are not tagged in any other WP article and then leaving the article full of unsightly tags (making it very hard to read) and leaving it up to others to find sources for those elsewhere-untagged items? (And/or could you please remove the tags for the items which are not tagged in any other WP article anywhere on the subjects?) If so, thanks, and thanks for helping with the article. Softlavender (talk) 04:57, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: IMDB

message: Someone tried to expand the popular culture section into a long bullet-point list that looks like WP:TRIVIA.  The more compact narrative paragraph is, I believe, more appropriate for an encyclopedia article. Also, there is no reason to subdivide the relatively short sections of this article further.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 17:10, 1 October 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: In popular culture

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message: Ezio Pinza was a Baritone ( mid range ) male singer : not a Bass ( lowest voice ) If you listen to the recording of him singing Some Enchanted Evening you will clearly hear him singing Baritone. A quick Google search reveals his vocal range ( in scientific pitch notation) to be from A2 to D4 Baritone : definitely not Bass. -- 49.181.206.109
:Well, Pinza's article says he was a bass. You should bring this up on his Talk page if you have sources that state he was a baritone, not a bass. -- Ssilvers (talk) 15:16, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
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