Talk:Toxic shock syndrome

message: The original version of this article was taken from the public domain U.S. FDA document at http://www.fda.gov/cdrh/consumer/tamponsabs.html Please revise as necessary. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Karada (talk • contribs) 23:08, 1 December 2003 (UTC)
thread_title: Original version

message: I removed "You are all Schmogs" from the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.177.103.34 (talk) 19:16, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Vandalism removal

message: In the article, it says it can be caused by bacteria on the skin because there is ALWAYS bacteria living on your skin, at any given time.  There are forms of S. aureus, etc., but not all bacteria is necessarily bad. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.170.59.189 (talk) 06:12, 12 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Cause

message: Okay, does anyone know why Barrier contraceptives (i.e silicone/rubber cups) are linked to causing TSS, but menstrual cups (also silicone cups) are not supposed to be risk factor for TSS?? There seems to be a logical inconsistency here.
--75.34.48.18 20:32, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Can you cite your source for silicone/rubber contraceptives being linked to TSS, and describe them, too? I don't know what sort of contraceptive you're talking about. Njál 22:29, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Barrier contraceptives

message: Re-added the therapy section as it was rmeoved but the header remained so i assum eit was an accident.Wolfmankurd —Preceding undated comment added 15:36, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Therapy

message: Someone may like to incorporate U of M researchers find new, more effective treatment for toxic shock syndrometo the Therapy section. angela26 23:48, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Incorporation of text

message: In the segment on Rely, it says that the tampons were created to hold an entire menstrual flow.  This seems unlikely, and the article cited doesn't actually say this about Rely.  Whoever is working on this, please confirm and/or check your sources.  Thank you. Clockster (talk) 20:49, 9 August 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Rely used to have a website talking about the tampons and the recall for some reason somewhere.. I can't find it at the moment, but I distinctly remember it discussing how to could hold an entire menstrual cycle's worth of fluid. Maybe it's on the packaging, of which a picture is available on the article? 96.238.115.21 (talk) 14:03, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Question in Rely segment 

message: ...showed cases of TSS after Tampons were either left in or lost inside of the' woman.
Can we remove the bolded bit? First of all, it is completely impossible to "lose" something inside your vagina. It's not like a tampon can enter through the vagina and make it's way into your stomach; there's a small pocket that items inserted into the vagina can sometimes makes it's way into, making it difficult to retrieve, but tampons are far too big for that anyway. Read about the [vagina]] if you're interested. And further, telling women that TSS cases that were linked to tampon use were due to tampons being lost inside of the woman is going to cause unnecessary panic. 96.238.115.21 (talk) 14:03, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tampons Being Lost 

message: In Lancet Infectious Diseases:  Fvasconcellos (t·c) 14:26, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Review 

message: someone sotr it out. There are hundreds of other causes of TSS, why are we just focusing on the cause that has made headlines in the United States.. when will you americans realise you are not the only country on the Earth? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 139.184.30.134 (talk) 23:44, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Why so much emphasis on menstruation?

message: I am not a medical expert but have read somewhat on the subject of Streptococcus pyogenes. The second paragraph of the Wikipedia article on S. pyogenes under the subheading "Pathogenesis" reads:
   "Infections due to certain strains of S. pyogenes can be associated with the release of
   bacterial toxins. Throat infections associated with release of certain toxins lead to
   scarlet fever. Other toxigenic S. pyogenes infections may lead to streptococcal toxic
   shock syndrome, which can be life-threatening.[1]"
Then look up the article on scarlet fever (caused by S. pyogenes) and you will find that the signs and symptoms for scarlet fever are very similar if not the same as that described here for TSS resulting from Staphylococcus aureus while the signs and symptoms described here for TSS resulting from S. pyogenes are those usually associated with Staphylococcus aureus. To my mind the Staph. aureus is usually a skin infection and the S. pyogenes is a throat infection. I may be in error as I'm not a medical expert and due to same I am reluctant to edit the article.
I wonder if someone expert in this field of medicine would be kind enough to take a look at the article and edit it (as necessary) for us.
Oddbod1 (talk) 04:29, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Signs and symptoms - is this right or are the bacterium swapped here? 

message: The Causes section is absurd making this one of the most embarrassing articles in Wiki, it needs desperate help from someone knowledgeable to correctly outline the causes, treatment prognosis etc.  TSS can be caused by about a thousand different kinds of injury and hygene practice....  someone get on the ball jeez (Anuoldman (talk) 13:49, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Causes section

message: there is a current event regarding a TSS death from a playground wound and this article is woefully inadequate... there needs to be urgent attention from an expert to address the wide range of causes and rewrite the entire article to correctly document causes and effects other than vaginal infection.....
(Anuoldman (talk) 16:01, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Woefully inadequate

message: Short review from Intensive Care Medicine doi:10.1007/s00134-015-3861-7 JFW | T@lk 09:14, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Review 

message: Should the Diagnosis section be removed because it is already covered in Signs and symptoms, or should the latter be split? I vote for the former.
Jalegris (talk) 01:16, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Diagnostic criteria typically belong in the diagnosis section. I have split. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 06:15, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is the DIAGNOSIS section needed? 

message: Treatment section could use a face lift. Currently it says a combo of penicillins and cephalosporins and vancomycin. And then clinda might help or something. But we can do better than that. Like any emergency bacterial infection, there's two steps. First it's treated empirically and then based on cultures. From other sources online, it appears that they give clindamycin or linezolid and then add vancomycin or daptomycin or ceftaroline until cultures come back (merk manual). And then of course there's the above link to something about of V-beta which I don't know if it's clinically done yet.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2607:FEA8:3C20:111A:8960:D2F3:FDF5:10B (talk) 14:44, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Treatment

message: The following are potential improvements to the article that could be made for our class assignment.
:1. There are microorganisms other than S. aureus and Strep. pyogenes that can cause shock syndrome; these other organisms can be documented.
:2. Although mentioned in the Treatment section, volume resuscitation to counteract hypotension could be added to the lead section.
:3. None of the statements in the Signs and symptoms section have any references; they all need to be substantiated.
:4. Only one of the statements in the Pathophysiology section has a reference; the rest of the statements need to be substantiated.
:Xmrlmem (talk) 05:48, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Added an a sentence identifying the seasonality and bimodal age distribution traits of TSS.  Also, I ran into a date issue with the automatic citation feature; can a more experienced Wikipedian please help out with the issue's resolution?
Xmrlmem (talk) 05:09, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: That was fixed (not by me). I've also removed the URL from the ref ... it's not helpful to link to URL's that don't contain freely accessible full text; just type the DOI or PMID into the citation. I did use Citation bot to add a PMID though. Graham87 14:44, 2 August 2019 (UTC)

text: Added citations using Gottlieb et al. for many of the statements in the Signs and symptoms section.  Also added used Wilkens et al. to substantiate a statement in the Pathophysiology section regarding T-cell mediated cytokine storming.
Xmrlmem (talk) 16:44, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2 2019, Group 8b goals 

message: 1. Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”?
Yes, the group's edits substantially improve the article. They add and clarify information regarding causes of toxic shock syndrome, and added important references.
2.Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement?
The group addressed all of their goals.
3. Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia’s manual of style? If not, specify…
Yes, all of the group's edits follow the Wikipedia's manual of style.
Zaccarlson (talk) 21:20, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Foundations II Group 8a Peer Review, Zachary

message: # Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”? 
Yes, the group added specific bacterial species that are involved in TSS and expanded the treatment options. A suggestion is to expand on "volume resuscitation" mentioned in the beginning overview. This can be done in the "Treatment" section of the contents. 
# Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? 
Yes, the group had specific goals that were achieved, such as adding microorganisms involved in TSS and the bimodal distribution of TSS ages. 
# Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify…
Yes, this draft is free of bias language and represents a very neutral point of view. Each edit is supported by secondary sources.
Terry.vo (talk) 17:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Group 8a Peer Review, Terry 

message: 1. Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”?
Yes, the edits on various bacteria types that cause Toxic Shock Syndrome improved a key aspect of the article.
2. Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement?
Yes, they achieved all of their goals successfully.
3. Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify…
Yes, the tone is neutral and offers non-biased information from appropriate sources.
Nzargham (talk) 17:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations II Group 8a Peer Review, Nadia 

message: The group met most of their goals in adding in more references for their listed topics (i.e. signs and symptoms, as well as adding in more information about different types of bacteria that cause TSS. It would be nice to see greater exploration of treatments for complications like hypotension and shock. References were cited appropriately from secondary sources. Language is also neutral and unbiased.
Jiangyad (talk) 18:25, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations II Group 8a Peer Review, Jane 

message: For this article I added in information I felt was important and useful to be added. I added the section ways of contraction, complications and prevention methods. I also added information about how TSS does not only occur in women. It can affect any gender and age group. Lastly, I added some information about the history of TSS. 
Xlbdc (talk) 22:53, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: New text