Talk:Cognitive retention therapy

message: I am searching for more supporting studies, please add summaries or requests for summarization and I will be happy to do the work.-Chris Ashby | Talk 21:18, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: One way to restructure this is to use the review article as a primary source - something along the lines of "cognitive therapies for neurological disorders"  and include the details on the Cognitive Retention strategy.  Then, add more content on some of the other therapies mentioned so that it is a neutral point of view.  --Chrispounds (talk) 17:44, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: OK good suggestions, i will work on doing that tomorrow afternoon. Please feel free to help me re-structure it so that i am not the only main contributor. --Chris Ashby | Talk 00:38, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

text: See wikipedia:citing sources. From my point of view the article still sounds much like propaganda, begining by mentioning that is a trade mark (no need for that).To cite peer-review journals is a good idea to use diberris tool. See: . You just have to add the pubmed number and it gives the citation template.--Garrondo (talk) 13:58, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: More Studies

message: Some of this info may be better new sections. When the prose refers to 'many examples of' etc, more than one citation has to be found (I would say 3 when the language refers to an abundance). Facts are always better than hyperbole. --Matt Lewis (talk) 22:03, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Introduction 

message: I think it would be a good idea to merge the Cognitive therapies for dementia article with 
Rehabilitation (neuropsychology). In this article it talks about rehabilitation on ADHD and concusion, but nothing on dementia. I don´t know how to merge; but if you believe its a good idea maybe somebody may be able to help you. 
:This is not a bad idea, may be just as simple as moving my article into Rehabilitation (neuropsychology). I don’t know how to do redirects and that sort of thing, a bit more discussion about this would be good.
Apart from that please provide a citation for the sentence "reverts alzheimer two years". It´s a really strong sentences and to be sincere I don´t really believe it (and I am a neuropsychologist, so I know what I´m talking about). If you don´t provide a citation I will eliminate that sentence.
--Garrondo (talk) 09:15, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  I wonder if we could include CBT in this section as well. CBT is Cognitive Behavioral Therapy and google scholar does have some articles regarding dementia and CBT. It could be good to add!Brandilandy (talk) 16:54, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Merge

message: Here is the data supporting that statement Garrondo, it is not online anywhere yet, it will be on the Crtcare website soon but not yet. This only shows 1 year with a maximum improvement in MMSE of 5 points, which is almost 2 years of "normal" decline not including what they did NOT go down... There is a formal clinical study underway, there should be preliminary results by August. The statement may be too strong without the formal study, i will change it to 1 year as that is the data we have (it is now over 2 years since the start of this internal study, the patient #1 with a starting score of 17 still has a score of 18 on his last MMSE, which is still higher then when he started but i have no external verification for that) Or what about this sentence "CRT has been able to demonstrate resistance to further cognitive decline but more importantly, display a measurable cognitive improvement" or something like that.
Collected MMSE Scoring Baseline to 12 Months (Multi-site collected data)						
						
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[[Image:CRTGraph.jpg|thumb|250px|Click for source of Data.]
:The thing is that until that research is not published in a scientific journal you can not name it at all as it clearly original research See: Wikipedia:No original research. Sorry but you will have to wait to make that kind of staments. --Garrondo (talk) 13:12, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Help Formating Data

message: Cognitive Retention Therapy has been featured in Grandparent magazine with a fantastic article about Adam Connor.
* Grandparent Magazine -- Current Issue  -Chris Ashby | Talk 19:03, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: From my point of view there has to be an equilibrium between the deepness of an article and the quality and quantity of the refs given. First quality refs in medical articles are mostly peer-review journals. You dont provide any of this so I dont believe there is much more you can say on CRT whitout looking like propaganda. Its true you have provided some articles but they seem to be commercial pre-paid articles. You can simply add that article to the positeve feedback line as a reference but nothing more. If you really want to collaborate with wikipedia edit other related articles (alzheimer, neuropsychology...) and do not only edit your product article. --Garrondo (talk) 09:52, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
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