Talk:Mark Roosevelt

message: I've noticed an inordinate number of instances where the language is promoting Mark Roosevelt, or claims are made about his career that are either not sourced at all or sourced by a point-of-view (eg, Antioch College newspaper talking about their achievements).  I've removed some, but not all, of these instances. 209.6.199.62 (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: It's blatantly self-promotional and is filled with buzzwords. I did some editing in the lead, but there's a lot more to be done. The entire career section needs to be set on fire and then rebuilt, but I am unsure of where to even start there. This article reads exactly like one of those things people hire PR companies to make. Jtrainor (talk) 08:19, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Confirmed. This article was turned into (pretty much) it's current form by User:Jjolls, an employee in Antioch's PR department. All edits since then have consisted of minor copyedits for the most part with no real content changes. Jtrainor (talk) 08:34, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Let's be blunt here: this article needs a complete rewrite. 

message: I have edited this article in response to another editor's comments. I ask that editor to remove the flags.
Scout46 (talk) 19:27, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: The tags stay until this article no longer looks like a press released. Jtrainor (talk) 14:56, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  I would like the flags about neutrality, etc., to be removed by the user who put them there 

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message: Can someone update Roosevelt's head shot with a more current one from Wikicommons?   //  https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Mark_Roosevelt_St._John%27s_College.jpg
Thank you! Johnnie Stringfellow (talk) 18:48, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Heavy Water (talk) 17:01, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  More recent head shot