Talk:Grayling (butterfly)

message: This is a UK Biodiversity Action Plan (2007) species—GRM 15:14, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Importance rating 

message: Grayling seems to be the correct spelling in either US or UK English. That is based on Grayling at the UK organization Butterfly Conservation, Grayling at UK Butterflies and Grayling at British Butterflies.  SchreiberBike | ⌨  22:52, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Spelling note 

message: Hi, below are some areas and points in the article that I believe need expansion. These are all open the debate, but I feel that they would strengthen the article.
*Split the Behavior section into sub-sections like Defense mechanisms and mating rituals. 
*Add more information and clarification to the above sections to justify separation
*Add migration/movement tendencies under behavior section.
Slzeng (talk) 00:45, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Behavioral Ecology Student - WikiProject review 

message: Hello! I added the following sections and subsections to the article to add more information to the Hipparachia semele, and wrote the majority of the information for each section. I added the Lead section, Geographic Range, Habitat, Food Resources, Parental Care (Oviposition), most of Life History, Migration, Protective Coloration and Behavior, Mating (Mate Searching Behavior, Male-Male Behaviors including Lekking and Displaying, Female-Male Interactions including Pheromones, Mate Choice, and Courting), Physiology (Flight and Thermoregulation), Conservation (Habitat Loss). I also added 8 new references. I also deleted the Description section and moved that information under the Life Cycle Section. I renamed the Distribution section with Geographic Range and added more information under it. I also deleted the generic Behavior and Biology sections and instead replaced it with more specific subsections. Thanks!
Pranita.kaginele (talk) 05:14, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for your contribution! I really like that you split up the behavior section into specific subsections; it's definitely easier to navigate. I edited your conservation information slightly to clarify that it's a priority species in the UK. The wording before suggested that this species is considered globally important for conservation efforts, but according to the IUCN Red List, it's considered "least threatened." I checked your sources and it looks like the populations are declining in the UK specifically, so I just adjusted wording to make that more clear. Also, if it's now a "priority" butterfly, there could more information about what people are doing to conserve this butterfly.
 Ericapryu (talk) 04:31, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Behavioral Ecology Student - WikiProject 

message: Hi- I am peer reviewing this page for Behavioral Ecology. I think it is really well done and neutral, with very comprehensive categories and information. I made minor edits in sentence structure to make some of the paragraphs less repetitive (I noticed some paragraphs where every sentence started with 'The grayling', so I wanted to help make those sections flow a little better). I also have one question- in the oviposition category, you mention that egg laying on host plant is not crucial to adult survival. In the next section - life history I believe- you mention 'eggs are laid singly on food plants'. I am not entirely clear if those two things are contradictory, but they are a bit confusing when read together. KmarcusBC (talk) 02:02, 5 October 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Behavioral Ecology Student- WikiProkect

message: Hey, great article! Lots of good information here and it is well categorized. I did some more wording edits to increase clarity and reduce repetitiveness, but other than that it seems like everything looks good. I would like to see more detail regarding specialist versus generalist feeding preference, as multiple plants are mentioned as food but no relationship is discussed, nor is butterfly preference of these plants discussed (if there is any). 
Alexander Mahmoud (talk) 04:04, 5 October 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Behavioral Ecology Student- WikiProkect