Talk:Whitney Joins the JAMs

message: I think I've done all I can to this article now.  Can you make any recommendations for change/improvement?  Should we submit it for GA yet?
:Now the sample's uploaded, I'm ready to pack this one off to GA camp if you are. --Vinoir 22:19, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Unfortunately I don't have that video, and I doubt if I've ever even seen it. (I didn't hear of The KLF until the 3am/IGUN era). --kingboyk 10:50, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: No sign of it accessible anywhere on the web either, so far as I can see.  Oh well.  If you can think of a relevant image to add, please do.  In other news, I found a relevant "Magnificent" quote in 45, so I've put that in. --Vinoir 01:55, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, nice one. How annoying we could have had a new JAMs track, if only the fat dancer wasn't going on holiday! :P --kingboyk 09:02, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Next steps 

message: I think this article is pretty much complete now. There's no edit warring on any of our articles, and given the current long delay in the GA system it will probably be a while before it gets a review, so stability won't be an issue. Therefore, I see no reason not to nom it now, given the aforementioned backlog. Revert if you think it's premature. --kingboyk 12:02, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Good good, I think it stands a healthy chance. --Vinoir 14:26, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA nom 

message: Congratulations! The Good article nomination for  has passed. Many thanks to all who were involved in the creation of this article. My only complaint is that the first sentence of the origins section is rather awkwardly phrased ("Bill Drummond and Jimmy Cauty formed The Justified Ancients of Mu Mu (The JAMs) early in 1987, busily producing music made from plagiarised samples of popular music, grafted together and juxtaposed to form new songs, with beatbox rhythms and Drummond's often political raps."). You might want to split that up. --SomeStranger(t|c) 11:25, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks very much for taking the time reviewing the article and for your suggestion. I'll add it to the todo list and we'll get it fixed. --kingboyk 11:31, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Excellent, thanks for the review.  Your suggestion has been acted upon.  Does the new version meet with your approval, kingboyk? --Vinoir 16:34, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes. I rather liked the word "busily", but the new wording reads well so it's no loss! :) --kingboyk 17:15, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Wikipedia:Good articles|Good Article]] [[Wikipedia:Good articles/Nominations|nomination]] has passed 

message: *"Thanks to studio technology she "joins The JAMs". I like this. I want to keep the 'she "joins The JAMs" bit', but have no attachment to "thanks to..." Any more suggestions?
*"Busily produced". Gone. Replacement may need tweaking.
*ABBA: Cited.
*Images: Screencap wanted but not available. Very rare video.
*Themes/Composition: TODO
*Reviews: I've bled The Library of Mu and Google dry, and not found anything else other than AMG. Proquest would be no use here I'm pretty sure.
*Sleevenotes: There weren't any.
*About the vinyl. Beefed up. No source I found mentioned the RPM and I think it's trainspotter level info anyway. Overruled. :)
--kingboyk 13:36, 2 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Worklist