Talk:Bionicle 2: Legends of Metru Nui

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message: The entire section is unsourced, and has some issues with the prose. For example, take the following sentence, "The Toa gathered and used the power of Unity, and sealed Makuta in a prison of crystallized protodermis." This illustrates a wider problem I see with this section: It's a bit too in-universe for GA standards.  What is "the power of Unity?"  What is "protodermis?" I can read the latter after some Googling, but these things shouldn't be presented as they are.—DMCer™ 20:32, 4 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Yikes! I can't believe I missed those! I'll adjust those in a moment.--Twilight Helryx 02:06, 8 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: One question: why would a plot summary need sources? If you look at the plot summary for Titanic, an article that passed GAN, the only citation there was for the last sentence about whether or not a character had died in the end. I understand the need for citations for the protodermis thing, but since I've already adjusted that, the rest in the summary are things that one can see simply by watching the movie.--Twilight Helryx 17:32, 10 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Good fixes for the issues I mentioned. It appears, many FA's don't source the plot summaries, so I suppose it's OK here too. Carry on.—DMCer™ 03:48, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
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