Talk:Neighborhood Internet service provider

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The Wikipedia is not a soapbox.  Stick to discussions of noteworthy firms, and stop with the self-promotion.  MrZaiustalk 14:07, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

message: To start, I clicked on view history and compared some of the article before your edits and after and you guys really made a lot of useful and effective edits. Your lead section is very strong and understandable because you do a great job of clearly defining and explaining what exactly the Neighborhood Internet Service Provider is. You also use citations in the lead section so that is helpful for the readers because they are able to view the link and confirm that it is from a reliable source. The lead is also strong because it summarizes the article’s key points but does not go into to much detail.  	One suggestion I have is that after the lead section, instead of going directly into advantages and disadvantages, you may want to talk a little about its history and evolution. Wikipedia pages are stronger when they follow a sense of chronology and it helps the reader understand more about the page if he or she knows how this entity has grown and evolved. The structure seems to be pretty clear but you could use some more headings and sub-headings to help guide the readers through the wikipedia page. The article seems to be nicely balanced between the different sections also, so good job there! It seems like advantages and disadvantages are more important than alternate options so it is good that you spent a little more time on those sections. I do think some expansion on each of those topics could create a stronger article. If you find a couple more external sources to reference and use to strengthen and deepen the article, I think you could make this already great article even better. Wikipedia articles with more references tend to be stronger and more informative so a couple more sources could definitely help. All your coverage about the Neighborhood Internet Service Provider seems to be neutral! It can sometimes be hard to hold a completely neutral point of view when writing about a certain topic so great job maintaining your unbiased point of view was impressive.
	I also looked through your sources. The first source I clicked on seems a bit weird. It is a five sentence article with no comments or anything so I am not totally convinced it is the most reliable source. However, I do trust that you did your research and confirmed what was said on this source so I think it is fine. Your other sources seem very reliable!
	Overall, great job! I think you could use a couple more citations, but you guys definitely helped create a stronger and more informative article that will help spread information about the Neighborhood Internet Service Provider. 
Mreiss9 (talk) 15:49, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
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