Talk:Fatima Jinnah

message: "It is thought that the publication of Hector Bolitho's "Jinnah Creator of Pakistan" in 1954 prompted Miss Fatima Jinnah of doing a biography of her illustrious brother."
Come on... this is obviously written by a fan of Jinnah (probably a Pakistani nationalist).  If someone has time, could you review this article and delete the POV phrases?
: I quite agree. I've cleaned it up and deleted the POV stuff, which was not only contentious but repetitious. Article could still do with more detail, though, and some better references. -- TinaSparkle 20:08, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
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message: :Her birth and death anniversaries are national holidays in Pakistan, especially in Karachi.
Above statement in the article is not entirely true. I am not sure about Karachi or Sindh (in general) but in Punjab and Sarhad, her birth and death anniversaries are not holidays and technicaly they cannot be considered national holidays. Karachites can help. Szhaider 09:06, 30 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Holidays? - Help Required... 

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message: Could she speak Urdu? Her brother MA Jinnah spoke Gujarati and English and I think Sindhi, but his Urdu was non-existent. What about her?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ahassan05 (talk • contribs) 20:37, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
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message: The cited source in the article says: "So only the Quaid and Fatima Jinnah had abandoned the Ismaili faith. Both carefully avoided a sectarian label. Both said they were neither Shia nor Sunni, but `Mussalman'. The Quaid was at pains to gather the Muslims of India under the banner ofa general Muslim faith and not under a divisive sectarian identity." Why is an editor repeatedly adding "shia" to the infobox? Gimmetrow 16:21, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Furthermore, two of our sources don't deal with Fatima Jinnah's religion at all, instead discussing her brother's. I thus removed them. Huon (talk) 15:38, 16 September 2009 (UTC)

text: That source is an editorial, not the best of sources. Furthermore, it doesn't say much about Fatima Jinnah's denomination. It says she signed an affidavit about her brother's denomination (which incidentally would insure her inheritance), and it says that after her death the last rites were performed in a specific way. The Friday Times similarly does not unambiguously claim Fatima Jinnah was a Shia. When the issue is contentious and sources vague, it's better to have the infobox state what they all agree on and to have the article itself explain the details. Therefore I've reverted the infobox entry back to just "Islam". Huon (talk) 11:50, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
replies: text:  As far as Muhamamd Ali Jinnah is concerned, he was not a religiously observant leader, He was neither a Shia, nor a Sunni. Faizan (talk) 12:23, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
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message: Please see the referenced lead of Mumbai article which says the city was renamed to "Mumbai" in 1996. The city name was "Bombay" at that time and this should be stated as such here (The title redirects to the same city though). --lTopGunl (talk) 13:08, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: It was changed per WP:COMMONNAME it is always best practice to avoid redirects. Darkness Shines (talk) 13:21, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: This is a relevant case... Mumbai did not exist at that time. It was Bombay, other wise we'll have to say "the city currently known as Mumbai" or "the modern Mumbai city" or something which would be redundant. Get the point? --lTopGunl (talk) 13:30, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Not really. What does it matter what it was called at the time? Darkness Shines (talk) 13:33, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Here's an example from Muhammad Ali Jinnah, "Born: 25 December 1876 Karachi, British India" (not Pakistan, because it did not exist then). It matters in context and history. --lTopGunl (talk) 13:35, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Okay. Darkness Shines (talk) 13:41, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mumbay/Bombay 

message: I don't know about improvement, but there are certain things that got removed along with the infobox edits... care to explain those? --lTopGunl (talk) 14:53, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Infobox 

message: I see TG has again decided he is immune from WP:V. Please explain why the content which was tagged as cn 7 days ago has been reverted in against policy? Darkness Shines (talk) 16:44, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Why do you think article blanking is the solution to improving the article when the same content could be referenced very easily from the linked articles from the internal links. Infact, a reference that you added after removing that content fairly well sources parts of that content too.. that would be self inconsistent and disruptive. --lTopGunl (talk) 16:55, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Because it is better to work from a blank slate. Your appreciation of policy does not go unheeded. I will remove the content again in 24hrs if still unsourced. Darkness Shines (talk) 17:11, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: If you do so, I will report you for wiki-lawyering your 1RR sanction. You need to discuss what should be done with the content and what citations should be added to which parts. Indiscriminate blanking of content is not the policy that you claim. Common sense is something that comes first. --lTopGunl (talk) 17:23, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: WP:V is quite specific. As is WP:BURDEN You are more than welcome to report me for following policy, but beware the boomerang. Darkness Shines (talk) 17:26, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Don't think I will not. There's no deadline for working on a wikipedia article, and this isn't even a controversial or a BLP article. As I've stated, citations are already there, just not inline. Simply ignoring that fact and removing content is disruptive. The only way to go through this is discussion on content. If you are willing to discuss on how to sort that out, you are welcome. --lTopGunl (talk) 17:31, 12 February 2012 (UTC)
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message: Hello All,
I noticed that Jinnah is listed under the "July 30" birthdays when her birthday is July 31. This should be moved ASAP from the "July 30" birthday list.
- Kyle C. 2600:8802:1300:3D3:D91B:3C06:2CDC:6374 (talk) 02:58, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wrongly placed on "July 30" birthdays 

message: Hello! As requested by  via the June 2024 Women in Green editathon event page, here is a quick 20-minute assessment of the article to help suggest what key improvements might be needed before any formal attempt at submitting the article as a Good Article (GA) nomination: 
* All "citation needed" and "failed verification" tags should be addressed. The Earwig Copy-Vio Detector tool suggests that large portions of the "Presidential election of 1965" section have been directly copied from this site, and I would urgently recommend re-writing the whole section and ensuring that all content has a citation to back it up.
* Some photo licensing issues: 
::* The images Fatima jinnah1.jpg, Jinnah Poonjha.jpg, Quaidportrait.jpg, and Maryam Jinnah portrait.jpg all need additional licensing tags to confirm whether they are public domain in the United States as well as their country of origin (because Wikipedia uses servers based in the US, US copyright law also applies to photos used in Wikipedia articles).
::* The banknote image (75 PKR note.jpg) will likely raise copyright issues and should be removed -- this Wiki Commons page states that Pakistan considers its currency protected under government copyright.
* One of the GA criteria states that the article should be reasonably neutral (i.e., fairly explores different perceptions of the article subject, is not unnecessarily negative or positive), and this article definitely leans hard toward the overly positive. There is a large focus on Jinnah's popularity and the unfairness of her political opponents. A GA reviewer might flag the language as needing more neutrality, so this is something you should consider closely during your edits.
* I think a GA reviewer would also likely want to see some expansion of the parts of Jinnah's biography before and after the presidential election of 1965. What were her motivations for getting involved in politics? Were there any global responses to her career and death (was she well-known outside of India)? The end of the article says she was "a source of the awakening of women's rights", but it doesn't discuss that very much elsewhere in the article. What exactly was her involvement with women's rights and civil rights in India? These are just a few questions to explore in order to help ensure the article is broad enough in coverage for GA.
I hope these suggestions are helpful -- let me know if you have any questions about them.
All the best, Alanna the Brave (talk) 14:26, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: @Alanna the Brave Thank you for your assessment. I believe I can handle all the textual issues. However, I am not very confident with photo licensing matters and do not want this to hinder achieving GA status. Could you recommend any Wikipedia forums that can assist with sorting out photo licensing issues, so I can focus on rectifying the text? Sheriff | ☎ 911 | 18:32, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: @SheriffIsInTown: Absolutely -- I recommend posting questions to the WikiCommons Village Pump for Copyright, which is a good forum for sourcing advice/answers for image copyright issues. Just make sure you provide links to the image files you want to discuss. Good luck! Alanna the Brave (talk) 20:42, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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