Talk:One Wales

message: Mainly for me, or anyone swell person who comes along and wants to help:
*A More clear references section. done (thank you, GiollaUidir!)
*Copyediting of my writing, grammar, and phrasing. Eternally ongoing.
*A well-sourced, NPOV Analysis section. done for the most part. Can't say much more right now.
I'll start work on these to-morrow.-- Thesocialistesq/M.lesocialiste 06:13, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  To-do list 

message: "who himself claimed" - I appreciate the correction of Kim Howells' sex, but I do think this use of "himself" does not seem right  as it follows the names of three people. That's why I changed it. I know it's not that much better my way either, but I do not want to create a messy sentence. What about:
This last section has come under scrutiny from members of the Labour party, including Welsh MPs Paul Murphy, Don Touhig and also Kim Howells, Minister of State at the Foreign and Commonwealth Office, who claimed it will lead "nationalists to the gates of independence."
Tozznok 22:14, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Understood. I've gone through the sentence again, and I agree. I'll put yours in. -- Thesocialistesq/M.lesocialiste 01:15, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

text: Done. -- Thesocialistesq/M.lesocialiste 21:01, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sentence concerning Kim Howells 

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