Talk:Henry II of England

message: The lead is bloated and rambling. Much is a re-hash of what appears in the main body. It needs to be much tighter. I submit the following alternative: 
Henry II (5 March 1133 – 6 July 1189), also known as Henry Curtmantle, Henry FitzEmpress or Henry Plantagenet, was King of England from October 1154 until his death, Lord of Ireland (1171–1189), Duke of Normandy (1150-1189), Duke of Aquitaine  (1152–89, in right of his wife), Count of Anjou (1151–1189), Count of Maine (1151–1189), Count of Nantes (1158 – 1189). At various times, he exercised control over large parts of Wales and the Duchy of Brittany. Henry was born in Le Mans, France, the son of Geoffrey Plantagenet, Count of Anjou and the Empress Matilda, who was the daughter of King Henry I of England. By the age of 14, Henry was actively involved by in his mother's efforts to claim the throne of England. With his marriage in 1151 to the wealthy heiress, Eleanor of Aquitaine, he got control of vast estates in south-west France.  Henry and Eleanor had eight children. As they grew up, tensions over the future inheritance of the empire began to emerge. He led a military expedition to England in 1153 to further the claims of the Empress. By the terms of the Treaty of Wallingford, he inherited the throne of England following the death of Stephen, King of England a year later. Henry's legal changes are generally considered to have laid the basis for the English Common Law, while his intervention in Brittany, Wales and Scotland shaped the development of their societies and governmental systems. By 1172, he controlled England, large parts of Wales, the eastern half of Ireland and the western half of France, an area that would later come to be called the Angevin Empire. During his reign, the powers of the monarchy increased at the expense of the great barons. His achievements were impaired, however, by disputes with the Church, led by the Archbishop of Canterbury, Thomas Becket and by revolts within his own family. Henry suppressed rebellions by his sons in 1173 and 1183. Following a further rebellion in 1189, he died at Chinon leaving the throne to his son Richard. Henry's empire quickly collapsed during the reign of his youngest son John.  Laurel Lodged (talk) 15:13, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: The current text appears to comply with WP:LEAD - were there particular points of concern? Hchc2009 (talk) 15:19, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: See section 31 above from a few years back.Laurel Lodged (talk) 16:36, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

text: The lead is supposed to repeat information in the body of the article. It's a summary of the entire article, and for an article this size, three or four paragraphs are recommended. I'll note that this lead (with minor copyedits) passed through the featured article process and no one there had issues with the size being "bloated". I find it about right, quite honestly. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:20, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not supposed to be a complete re-hash. It should contain the essentials and no more. Laurel Lodged (talk) 09:02, 8 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: The lead contains too much detail for some topics. It largely reproduces what appears later in the main body. That's not what's supposed to happen. Laurel Lodged (talk) 12:29, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text:  The lead, again, is supposed to reproduce the stuff in the main body. It is NOT, per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section#Comparison to the news-style lead, a newspaper style lead. The lead "provides far more information, as its purpose is to summarize the article, not just introduce it." Ealdgyth - Talk 12:57, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: There's a big difference between avoiding newspaper-style headline brevity and outright duplication. "Each word, phrase, and sentence in a lead should be covered by equivalent content in the body of the article, preferably in the same order they appear in the article. The content in the body of the article will usually be longer and more detailed." The current lead violates this guideline. Laurel Lodged (talk) 10:43, 15 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Examples? Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 10:54, 15 May 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proposed trimmed lead 

message: You took it upon yourself to revert my contribution to the page on Henry II, commenting that there was "no evidence it was notable". What evidence do you have that it wasn't notable? It seems to me that a series of three full-length plays describing in well-researched detail an interesting period of English history is indeed notable. I doubt that you have seen or read the plays so while notability is a matter of opinion, not fact, I suggest your opinion is less valid than mine. If our aim was to remove all non-notable entries from Wikipedia we could spend a lifetime doing so! I'd rather spend my time adding information, not removing it. Mikedt10 (talk) 14:41, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: This has been discussed and disputed by editors many times. Notability is not a matter of personal opionion. The criterion is that it has been discussed by a reliable secondary source such as an academic text. A web page by the theatre does not show notability. Dudley Miles (talk) 14:55, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Here is a reliable secondary source. https://www.thestage.co.uk/reviews/2018/henry-ii-review-reading-minster/ I should perhaps have used this rather than just the theatre's website. Given discussion at WP:ROWN you could have altered my edit to provide this source rather than removing my contribution without alerting me prior to doing so. Would you be happy if I now alter the Henry II page to restore my edit with the new reference?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikedt10 (talk • contribs) 15:50, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: I do not think that a theatre review is a reliable source for an article on Henry II but if you restore I will leave it to other editors to decide whether they are happy with it. In principle, I think that cultural depictions of a historical character are a different subject from the life of the person and are better in a separate article such as Cultural depictions of Stephen, King of England with a link from Stephen, King of England#Popular representations. Dudley Miles (talk) 16:28, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

text:  If I may – I've had a look at the material Dudley reverted, and I think it's heavily WP:UNDUE. Just to be clear, this is at Henry II of England, not Henry II. I mention this because, if I came across it, I'd be minded to revert it myself, as WP:UNDUE. Nortonius (talk) 17:05, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

text: I agree that the cultural depictions of monarchs are best placed on a separate page, and indeed I've contributed to some, for example Cultural depictions of the Empress Matilda. As yet, Henry II of England (sic) doesn't have such a separate page and may not yet justify one given the relatively sparse material currently under that heading. For the moment, I'll restore / update my contribution. If you are still unhappy, the talk page of the main article might be the best place to comment Mikedt10 (talk) 17:19, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: I think there is enough to start Cultural depictions of King Henry II of England which can be added to later. The "sparse material" may be because contributions have been reverted as not relevant to the historical Henry. Dudley Miles (talk) 17:30, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

text: Fine, go ahead! I've updated my contribution. Mikedt10 (talk) 18:03, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: I have no interest in cultural depictions. My suggestion  was for editors who are interested. Dudley Miles (talk) 18:13, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Criteria for notability 

message: According to Henry II of England#Early reign (1150–1162), Henry's marriage to Eleanor "ran counter to feudal practice". What does this mean? Surtsicna (talk) 12:53, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Marriage contrary to feudal practice 

message: Hi there. These days I've translated into Russian an enwiki article Angevin kings of England. Immediately a was kicked around and the translation was nominated for deletion. The core of disagreement is: a) Angevin kings are simply another name for Plantagenets and as such do not deserve separate article; b) Angevin kings of England are a separate historical entity and the article is valid.
 
In this respect I would like to know the basis of calling Henry II of England a Plantagenet keeping in mind that the Angevin kings of England reads (NB: the article is marked as Good)
Historians use the period of Prince Louis's invasion to mark the end of the Angevin period and the beginning of the Plantagenet dynasty. 
and
Richard of York adopted "Plantagenet" as a family name for himself and his descendants during the 15th century. Plantegenest
 
So: where actually had Angevins ended and Plantagenets started, if ever? Pls advise. From Russia with love. Ashec (talk) 12:55, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Angevin kings of England 

message: Third paragraph of the lead begins:
:"Henry and Eleanor had eight children—three daughters and five sons. Three of his sons would be king, though Henry the Young King was named his father's co-ruler rather than a stand-alone king."
Earlier in the lead, we read, 
:"Henry became Count of Anjou and Maine upon the death of his father, Count Geoffrey V, in 1151. His marriage in 1152 to Eleanor of Aquitaine, whose marriage to Louis VII had recently been annulled, made him Duke of Aquitaine."
So, Henry II's father was not a king.  And therefore not king of England.  He was Geoffrey Plantagenet, Count of Anjou.  
The statement about Henry's co-rulership, therefore, in my opinion, needs re-wording to explain exactly what it means.  Was Henry named co-ruler of Anjou or co-ruler (co-king) of England in Matilda's place (for whom, according to the text above, Henry II, her son, had agreed "a peace treaty [with Stephen of Blois] after Henry[II]'s military expedition to England in 1153, and Henry inherited the kingdom on Stephen's death a year later") and, if so, with whom as the other co-monarch of England?
Was this "inheritance" the co-rulership spoken of later or was it co-rulership of Anjou, while Henry [II] inherited full title as king of England upon Stephen's death? Hedles (talk) 01:36, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Co-ruler of what, exactly, and with whom? 

message: Hi. Help:Introduction to the Manual of Style/linking quiz in "Donnchadh, Earl of Carrick" example, it says 'King', with upper-case K, is part of the title "King Henry II of England": it is awkward to see part of the title black and part of it blue. So I have searched all "King" words and found three. (King) David I of Scotland in Early years (1133–1149) section. (King) Malcolm of Scotland in "Reconstruction of royal government" section. (King) William of Scotland in Great Revolt (1173–1174) section. Jeournat (talk) 21:12, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Including King in Wikilinks, Manual of Style 

message: Why is he called Curtmantle? DuncanHill (talk) 14:13, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Nickname, presumably based on his fashion tastes; 'Henry Shortcloak'. Cf. Robert Curthose, son of William the Conqueror. Also, e.g., curtlof (shortbread). Same etymological root, from Old French as the modern English curt (to be curt with smn...), brief or terse. etc. HTH!  SN54129 14:38, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: I see that this nickname was removed in the 19 May 2023 change -- why? SorghumBean (talk) 03:35, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok, I added it SorghumBean (talk) 05:48, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why Curtmantle? 

message: As his reign is linked to the concept of 'Time immemorial perhaps a mention here? Jackiespeel (talk) 18:12, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Time immemorial 

message: Hello . OK, "my" source is not reliable. But since this information is worth knowing for any visitor to the fortress (plaque not very visible, nor signposted), I leave it to you to find a source in English that complies with WP:RS. (For your information, a low quality photo can be found on Wikimedia Commons ; the name of the file is : Chateau de Chinon. Site chapelle St Melaine.✝Henry II Plantagenet.jpg). Boncoincoin Boncoincoin (talk) 16:18, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Location of death