Talk:Touch Me I'm Sick

message: Try to avoid abusing the word "it" and "its" in the lead. Thank you and good luck. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 01:13, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments

message: I haven't reviewed a whole lot of articles thus far, so bare with me.
*You don't need to link "single" in the lead, it looks kinda dumb and is linked in the infobox.
: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:34, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:36, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, it is backed by that source; I'm adding it back in. indopug (talk) 05:23, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:39, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:39, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:43, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. --Thamusemeantfan (talk) 00:41, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Other than those minor things, this looks pretty good. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 23:36, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

text: left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. linked it twice in the article. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Its fine as long as you do not link the same word in the same section or the succeeding one. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Removed as many as I could; many are in quotations though.  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yah. I was talking about "it" outside the quoted material. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: The above reviewer said not link single as it is already in the infobox. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Why use a dash here? which one? By "/" I mean that those two song structures are pretty mcuh the same. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Actually, removed the "/"; the way it is in the source.  Done. indopug (talk) 10:40, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 10:49, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh. Sorry. What I mean is wikilink "distortion pedal" or any of the two related to the context. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Done. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: lef two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: No, Its a band indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok. No worries. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 15:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 10:37, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 10:59, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Mostly removed it.  Done. indopug (talk) 15:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: I prefer to be there; as prose it would be a mess of which publication ranked it at what. Should I add it as a sub-section to the legacy section? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? Enclose what in brackets? indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Good work. Lets fatten the piles in Wikipedia:WikiProject Songs. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Passed. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 04:14, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA nom on hold 

message: Touch Me I’m Sick – GAN Comments
*“Would” is prevalent in the article.
:left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. linked it twice in the article. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Its fine as long as you do not link the same word in the same section or the succeeding one. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Removed as many as I could; many are in quotations though.  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yah. I was talking about "it" outside the quoted material. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: The above reviewer said not link single as it is already in the infobox. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: left two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Why use a dash here? which one? By "/" I mean that those two song structures are pretty mcuh the same. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Actually, removed the "/"; the way it is in the source.  Done. indopug (talk) 10:40, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 10:49, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh. Sorry. What I mean is wikilink "distortion pedal" or any of the two related to the context. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Done. indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: lef two of them  Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: No, Its a band indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok. No worries. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 15:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 10:37, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 10:59, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Mostly removed it.  Done. indopug (talk) 15:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: I prefer to be there; as prose it would be a mess of which publication ranked it at what. Should I add it as a sub-section to the legacy section? indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Done. indopug (talk) 06:48, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: What? Enclose what in brackets? indopug (talk) 09:29, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Good work. Lets fatten the piles in Wikipedia:WikiProject Songs. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 07:32, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Passed. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 04:14, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Furthermore

message: One thing you are got to fix is that Touch Me I'm Sick wasn't the first single released by Sub Pop. The first single was Hunted Down by Soundgarden. --Freedom (song) (talk) 17:44, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wrong 

message: To @Indopug, I was really considerate on what you reverted. I agree with the removal of the sample of Sonic Youth's cover; that was an experimental edit and I guess I'm not entirely experienced with samples yet. But most of these reversions are not good. You returned an outdated external link, a capitalization error, removed non-breaking spaces (something koavf noted) and added confusion in the Sonic Youth subsection on who covered what.
Another thing I'd like to note is the inconsistency in stating the length of "Touch Me I'm Sick". There's two sources that make a 10-second difference, the time stated in a pressing of the original single, and the one seen on streaming services. I went with the former. Carlinal (talk) 13:40, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: All of the useful changes you made are in the article now. Thank you.—indopug (talk) 14:44, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proper formatting