Talk:Onchocerciasis

message: It would be nice if pages like this had some non-technical description and information in them. It is wonderful that detailed technical information is included, but an introduction and explenation in lay terms would be good for those readers with no medical/biological background.
38.96.176.66 15:54, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: It

message: It appears that Filarioidea is the superfamily, not the family name.  Can that be added to the infobox?  WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:04, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Family

message: "the world's second leading infectious cause of blindness.". This is a teaser. It needs a footnote idetifying the world's number one infectious cause of blindness. Is it trachoma? Why are we guessing?--Wetman (talk) 22:10, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: What's the first?

message: I believe that it would be more appropriate to put all the stuff on the separate article pages that are linked to in the "Classification" section, in this article. I looked at those articles and they are barely one sentence each and not very informative. They are all manifestations of onchocerciasis so IMHO it would be best to put them all in here. 119.73.182.210 (talk) 05:59, 3 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Classification of symptoms 

message: Introduction Section
“The parasite is transmitted to humans through the bite of a blackfly of the genus Simulium. The worms spread throughout the body and, when they die, cause intense itching and a strong immune system response that can destroy nearby tissue, such as the eye.[2]“ Citation 2 in this instance is not a specific reference.  A better citation would be: http://www.sightsavers.org/learn_more/causes_of_blindness/river_blindness/default.html
“Evidence suggests that it is not the nematode but its endosymbiont, Wolbachia pipientis, that causes the severe inflammatory response that leaves many blind.”[4]  A more accessible source for citation 4 might be citation 5 (http://emedicine.medscape.com/article/1109409-overview#section~treatment).
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“Dying microfilariae have been recently discovered to release Wolbachia-derived antigens, triggering innate immune responses and producing the inflammation and its associated morbidity.”  This information is currently not cited but a possible citation for it might be: http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19335425.  This might also be used for other uncited information in this section.Kcandando (talk) 11:27, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Citation Verification 

message: Lizard skin, Elephant skin, and Leopard skin were all formerly one-sentence stub articles and are now redirects to this article.  No information has been lost— Æµ§œš¹ [ãːɱ ˈfɹ̠ˤʷɪ̃ə̃nlɪ] 03:46, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Merged articles

message: Wouldn't a section 'control and elimination' be better than 'prevention' since prevention is pretty much a single sentence: there is no vaccine and not much hope for one. ~ juanTamad (talk) 09:09, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: If one eliminates the disease or controls the disease it is prevented. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 09:46, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: ok ~ juanTamad (talk) 10:07, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Control and Elimination?

message: — Assignment last updated by Brownwahlee (talk) 08:04, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: Epidemiology ENPH 450

message: — Assignment last updated by MadelineMartin7302 (talk) 19:58, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: Epidemiology ENPH 450

message: As a group, we edited much of this article to hopefully make it more cohesive and added and improved citations where we could. There are still citations needed in the "Epidemiology" portion of this wiki page, as well as information that we could not properly site in the "Diagnosis" section. Amrae43 (talk) 23:31, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  New Additions