Talk:Bud Browne

message: Hi! I peer edited your article. I think you should add to the introduction paragraph, maybe including Browne's significant films. I think you should also move the sentences about his surfing into the Early Life section. If you need more to talk about you can add information on his family life. I also think you should include more reference links to Wikipedia pages and in text citations. And I made a few grammar/comma fixes on the page.
I hope I could be of help!
PSankaran (talk) 00:39, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Over the next 11 years Bud Browne would produce a movie a year, which all abided by the same basic structure: a montage of surfing action in either California or Hawaii followed by a few on the road moments between excursions. The entire process of Bud’s film making protocol was relatively cheap, costing around five thousand dollars to film, edit, and produce. Bud Browne, along with filming all of the footage, also functioned as his one man production and editing crew. After piecing many shots together to create a fluid film he would promote his films by driving the coast of California and setting up tents where he would show his films for little cost. As Browne started to gain publicity and profit in the early 1960s, he was able to hire DJs to ship his films to the east coast of the United States and even further out to parts of Europe and Australia. Browne's strong swimming skills provided useful in being able to shoot a steady shot while in the water. As much as his shots were taken in the water, Browne developed his own waterproof camera and waterproof wetsuit. These innovations allowed Browne to stay in the water and film for hours at a time. Among Browne's accomplishments is the famous pipeline shot that views a wave as it is crashing over top of the surfer, creating water tunnel. Browne was the first of many film makers that followed in similar fashions such as Jon Severson and Greg Noll. Although Bud Browne never made much money off of the films that he created, it caused no hinderance on his projects: "It was always worthwhile for me because I got such a big hoot out of everyone enjoying the films”.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nrs51 (talk • contribs) 23:15, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Career

message: I also am peer editing your page. I was thinking you don't need to mention the death date in the Early Life section. Also I made some changes to wording in the paragraphs, and also maybe you could put a source after the quote in the career section, thanksDamcn174 (talk) 04:16, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer Edit 

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