Talk:Santiago Martínez Delgado

message: Great start on this article, but I think it comes up short in several ways.  I would love to see it nominated again in the future after correcting these concerns.
===General===
*There is a lot of use of the pronoun "he" when it is not immediately obvious whom the passage is referring to.  Please make use of proper names especially at the beginning of paragraphs so the reader understands the subject.
*Mixture of citation styles (some external links and some footnotes).  Please consolidate.  Footnotes preferred.
*The articles needs to be copyedited by a native English speaker; there are many instances of inappropriate comma use, incorrect grammar, and what appear to be awkward translations from Spanish.
:I went through the article and fixed the punctuation and grammatical errors that I found. There are still quite a few unclear statements that I didn't want to change because I don't know enough about the subject. GaryColemanFan 20:02, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Failed [[WP:GA|GA]] 

message: *There is a lot of use of the pronoun "he" when it is not immediately obvious whom the passage is referring to.  Please make use of proper names especially at the beginning of paragraphs so the reader understands the subject.
*Mixture of citation styles (some external links and some footnotes).  Please consolidate.  Footnotes preferred.
*The articles needs to be copyedited by a native English speaker; there are many instances of inappropriate comma use, incorrect grammar, and what appear to be awkward translations from Spanish.
:I went through the article and fixed the punctuation and grammatical errors that I found. There are still quite a few unclear statements that I didn't want to change because I don't know enough about the subject. GaryColemanFan 20:02, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: General

message: *Do you mean "published" articles? "...including a large number of books and publish articles..."
*Check capitalization and style for all names of works - some have title caps, some do not, some are in quotes, some are not, etc.
*The list of books really needs to be in a table with headings for Title and Author; the current format is difficult to read.
--Bloodzombie 15:14, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Listing of selected works

message: What's the dilemma? All the experts cited agree the piece is authentic.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 23.243.1.164 (talk) 04:40, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Madonna dilemma 2 

message: There is no proof that Santiago Martinez Delgado was an employee, apprentice, or associate of Frank Lloyd Wright's, or ever lived at Wright's home, Taliesin, or lived on the architect's estate. This is known by looking at all of Wright's correspondence for records of Martinez, and all known articles of Wright's at the time (of which there are none). 
In addition, Frank Lloyd Wright did not design stained glass in the years noted in the article, and never worked with anything that used figural works like that shown on the Wikipedia page on Martinez. Most of the references to Martinez and Wright are self-referential articles that have been showing up in Wikipedia for about 5 years. The only place Martinez independently shows up with Wright is a reference in this article that is to something in this Martinez article that notes something in the Tafel collection, and if that's so, more proof is needed before putting this into any article. []
But other than that, all of the "evidence" is coming through here.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marykeiran (talk • contribs) 21:41, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Problem with Martinez linked to Taliesin 

message: Substituted at 05:27, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Assessment comment