Talk:W. H. Grattan Flood

message: I don't know a great deal about Grattan Flood's career in general, but his book "The Story of the Bagpipe" is generally considered by most historians of the subject to be utterly unreliable.  As for the article itself, it seems pretty adulatory in tone, but as I know little about him, I think it's best left to others to clean up. Calum 17:04, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
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message: 1.  i do not know the proper protocols required to respond to Calum 
2.  i have played in a pipe band for 59 years, and know the turf.
3.  i collect books on the bagpipes, and from a technical point of view, the history of the pipes leaves a lot to be desired; mostly a lot of wishful thinking. 
4.  i am not aware of any historian who has criticized chevalier flood.
5.  in any event, the article is not about the efficacy of the great highland pipe vs. the great irish warpipe, or about bagpipes at all.
6.  i am a student of irish history, inter alia, and i do know that chevalier flood received numerous accolades from the highest offices
7.  i re-checked the article for adulatory comments.  none are really my words but the words of others.  i see words like "renowned, major figure, works much praised, prolific, and so forth.  these words represent less than 1/10th of 1% of chevaliers story.  if editor wants to remove them to make the article less adulatory  then so be it. it does not take away from the accomplishments of chevalier flood.
joe 02:36, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  comments by the author of this page 

message: While I agree that the adulatory form is not necessarily a violation of WP:NPOV, we have the more serious issue of WP:C -- this page is extremely similar to the following article: http://www.waterfordcountylibrary.ie/library/web/Display/article/96/ which is copyrighted by the Waterford County Library, a part of Waterford County Council. The text needs to be completely rewritten, in truth, I really need to blank it out per . The information in that site may be used, if properlty referenced, but it must be re-written enough to be a new work. -- Avi 18:36, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It seems that only the beginning is an issue, and if that could be re-written to not sound as if complete phrases or sentences were lifted from the above link, I think it would be fine. -- Avi 20:54, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:   Copyvio?! 

message: i have made some modifications to the article and placed some of the material closer together so they could be sourced properly.
it amounts to a handful of words.
by the way.  when i go over my notes from lots of sources over the years, i could argue that everyone is violating everyone else, since they all use the same words to describe grattan flood. using words like works of enduring value, proflic writing, pivotal works, etc.
the article as it stands now is mostly facts.  
i have read some of his works on music and i have a lot to say about his works. and will add it to the article when i have time. 
i also plan to go back to wexford ireland, and get better pictures for this article.  i also need to find where his papers are being stored.  he has corresponded with some of the giants of his time, and some of that needs to be revealed.
i think the way i have presented the article after rewrite is more neutral.  although everyone praises him as "renowned"
please give me some ideas on how i can conform this article to the highest standards of wiki.
joe 05:23, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:   Rewrite