Talk:Janet Murray

message: Going through your article I found a few minor literary errors.  First of all, you stated in the introduction that the "New Media Reader" is "...an anthology of articles on the new media which Janet was the first of the two introduction in the book..."  I believe what you meant to state is "...Janet was the first of the two introduction[s] in the book..."  Also, towards the end of this section you revealed, "...Murray also has an active role in developing two new degree programs at Georgia Tech which was launched in 2004."  I feel that the proper phrasing reads, "...two new degree programs at Georgia Tech which [were] launched in 2004."
RazorXX8 (talk) 03:59, 28 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Grammatical Errors

message: In the second paragraph of the "work and contributions" section, there are numerous claims without any references or citations. As it is unclear to the normal wikipedia audience just which bits of writing were edited by Dr. Murray, it would be best for whoever originally contributed that content to go back and cite to avoid confusion and false or questionable claims of facts. I will be adding an infobox momentarily, feel free to assist in filling out the details.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xmarkmanx (talk • contribs) 10:04, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Citations

message: A bio photo is needed. Accosta2, are you out there?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Xmarkmanx (talk • contribs) 10:15, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Photo

message: I believe it is important to clarify some information about Murray's four properties (procedural, participatory, encyclopedic, and spatial).
Currently, regarding these properties, the article only elaborates on the encyclopedic property, saying that it has "the most significance in influence" among the four.
From the same reference (page 6 of The New Media Reader), I found that:
- The encyclopedic property is the most "obvious".
- The procedural and participatory properties are the most "fundamental".
Additionally, in another reference (page 274 of Murray's book, Hamlet on he Holodeck), it says that:
- The procedural property is the most "important".
(Full quote: "The most important element the new medium adds to our repertoire of representational powers is its procedural nature, its ability to capture experience as systems of interrelated actions.")
I think the article should reflect this fundamental information.
(This is the first time I contribute to an article on wikipedia. I wasn't sure if I should suggest the edit directly on the article, so I decided to propose this here in the Talk page instead. I made my best to follow the guidelines and keep a clear formatting. If I made any mistakes, please let me know.)
Maquinacriadora (talk) 10:02, 8 April 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Clarification About The Four Properties

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