Talk:Artificial kidney

message: Here's some ideas for this article to make it more reliable. 
# more sources. DailyMail.com is not a reliable source. I would suggest looking through a more reliable database to find more relevant and peer reviewed articles. Your other article is from 2008. That is not reliable anymore. Any scientific article will soon be out of date unless it is something concrete like the theory of gravity. 
# Add more links that relate to other articles. You want people to be able to find out what they do not know through other wikipedia articles. 
# Be careful adding highly scientific words without adding definitions or links to the article that explains it. For example, people reading this article may not know what hypertension, pertoneal, and cardiovascular disease are or what they are related to and why. 
CharlotteHayden (talk) 16:47, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
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message: It would appear several groups have created a wikipresence by making encyclopedia pages that refer to their own work, possibly to the exclusion of others. the Gura Group, the Fissell group -ie me-, another group at UCLA....
I would concur that the pages (automated) wearable artificial kidney and artificial kidney should be merged. The work of leonard's group, Humes' group, Saito's group, Nissensons (now defunct) project others should probably all sit together until one breaks free from the peleton. Whf4 (talk) 03:14, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
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message: The "Artificial Kidney" section of this article is plagiarized directly from http://www.hindustantimes.com/First-implantable-artificial-kidney-created-by-Shuvo-Roy/Article1-634201.aspx. I had a tough time finding the correct template to use to tag this, so I went with Template:Close_paraphrasing. Additionally, I have added Template:Cleanup to the article as a whole. Chrisbrl88 (talk) 13:54, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
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message: Isn't Wearable artificial kidney just a subset of Artificial kidney? I propose to merge the two articles. -- P 1 9 9 • TALK 13:25, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, add Wearable artificial kidney as a section to Artificial kidney. Aditya (talk) 14:47, 1 April 2011 (UTC)

text: I have completed this merge. As this article appears to be copied in whole from http://allaboutroboticsurgery.com/artificialkidneydevices.html, I have only preserved the lede. LT90001 (talk) 06:31, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
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message: We have a backlog in copyright cleanup and this is out of my usual area, so I'm hoping that somebody else can update the article to include information (that isn't a copyvio!) on the articial kidney prototype. , . --Moonriddengirl (talk) 17:14, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
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message: New data about bioengineered kidneys:
Nature Medicine: Bioengineered kidney makes urine after transplantation
Nature Medicine: Regeneration and experimental orthotopic transplantation of a bioengineered kidney
The Independent:Scientists close in on pioneering transplant of synthetic kidney
Shcha (talk) 00:04, 15 April 2013 (UTC)
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