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Talk:Concurrence

message: This is vague and confusing due to the use of 'apparent' and 'in theory'. I have no expertise in this field but if in law concurrency needs to be proven, then it is not an apparent need, just a need.  If on the other hand the article is referring to some wider theoretical discussion rather than what the law is, it should say so; for example, "Concurrence is the concept that both actus reus and mens rea must occur simultaneously to constitute a crime". Tomcrocker (talk) 10:24, 10 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  opening paragraph 

message: Answers please 105.52.124.229 (talk) 01:08, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Conclusion of concurrence as an element of crime
Talk:Annie Wood

message: I need help adding this page.  I am not an experienced Wikipedia user. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by LawsonArtistManagement (talk • contribs).
First things first, this page, to be kept, BADLY needs cleanup. Right now it reads as a promo pice for Annie Wood, rather than a encyclopediac article. Check out WP:BIO on how this article can be re-done. Wildthing61476 16:25, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Edward F. Boyd

message: was he african american? if so, we should say that
--Zimbricchio 21:13, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: RACE!
Talk:Scottish National Gallery

message: Just wondered if this bequest to the National Gallery was notable enough for a mention? Helen Guiterman appears to have been instrumental in promoting David Roberts to modern prominence: "Roberts... was popular and critically acclaimed during his lifetime, but tended to be overlooked until the extensive research of artist and enthusiast Ms Guiterman."
* 'Missing' fraud art goes on show, BBC News Scotland, 10 April 2008
--Mais oui! (talk) 10:38, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Bequest: 6 oil paintings and 51 watercolours by David Roberts

message: In an effort to get this article on to a higher footing, a good, comprehensive Infobox would be a nice start. Mais oui! (talk) 07:26, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lacks infobox  

message: Odd that there is no mention of the Orleans Collection, arguably the core of the museum's collection.Mais oui! (talk) 09:28, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  No mention of the [[Orleans Collection]]?
Talk:Bridgetown Vocational College

message: While I'm not in a position to improve this article I might like to point out that the article was in fact created by the creator of the official school website and shows clear bias. Also I replaced commas in the JC subject list with semicolons as "Art, craft and design" appeared to be more than one subject with it's use of commas Happysmileman 16:27, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:National Trust for Scotland

message: Hello all,
I'm currently volunteering with the National Trust for Scotland, and I'd like to put some more information on this page, aiming to get it up to about the length and quality of National_Trust_for_Places_of_Historic_Interest_or_Natural_Beauty. While I genuinely don't want to put anything biased on here, I understand I may end up writing something that's unconsciously so due to my position. As such I'd like to declare possible conflict of interest and that I am aware of WP:SCOIC. Cheers, and let me know if I have the go ahead to make any changes. --Vegetable bounce (talk) 09:39, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Wikipedia is the "encyclopedia that anyone can edit". You don't need a go-ahead from anyone. As long as you draw on reliable sources and be objective there should not be a problem. Happy editing, Jonathan Oldenbuck (talk) 11:51, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request to Update 

message: Criticism of NTS's management of the assets in its care has been given voice by a members' group In Trust For Scotland (ITFS). Spurred on by a round of redundancies and property closures in Spring 2009, ITFS is campaigning for an Extraordinary General Meeting of members to force the Trust to discuss the business case and future strategy Farci1 (talk) 13:00, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Please feel free to add anything relevant to the article, bearing in mind Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. Regards, Jonathan Oldenbuck (talk) 16:08, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  In Trust for Scotland 
Talk:Mrs. Butterworth's

message: And the result of the bottle shape review was ... ???  74.104.189.176 (talk) 04:13, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Nothing. Not racist. Everybody knew that, but the world was going insane that summer. 71.184.87.187 (talk) 01:44, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Review? 

message: Sams club now Carrie’s pearl milling?  Why? 2600:1702:1700:3270:2C1A:D085:D25A:9852 (talk) 15:45, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mrs butterworths syrup availo 

message: I’m sure they meant to cite Oscar winner Hattie McDaniel as the pro type for Mrs Butterworth ….. not Butterfly McQueen. 23.245.115.49 (talk) 13:44, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ref to Mrs Butterworth
Talk:National Museum of Flight

message: :Still not quite up to Start-Class, because there are still substantial issues needing to be dealt with, including adequate referencing.
Statements like "The museum collections have expanded into one of the most important in the UK" and "The museum is significant in that it is the only UK national museum still collecting the history of commercial aviation" need to be properly qualified - eg: who says so and why? - and referenced, preferably with an external source so it does not sound like advertising on behalf of the museum.
Avoid statements like "Of these, the Cygnet and Provost flew into the museum", " the de Havilland Comet also flew into the museum..." implying either some clever flying or a nasty accident, particularly with the Comet; Surely the Cygnet, Provost and Comet were flown to the museum?
The "History" section jumps from the 1920s to 1968, leaving readers wondering what happened during the intervening forty years.
As yet there is no bibliography; it is preferable to note a published reference in an inline citation (eg: Strorer 1983, p. 8) and show the book in a bibliography, eg:
*Benzies, AR (1975). Scotland Scanned 75, Central Scotland Aviation Group.
- better still-
* Benzies, A R (ed.) Scotland Scanned 75. Edinburgh: Central Scotland Aviation Group, 1975. 
rather than using inline citations as the bibliography. Although there are some inline citations none of them show page numbers.
The museum website can be a useful source of information, but excessive use of the website can be construed as Wikipedia:Spam: I would recommend using the main link once, but find other, if possible published information rather than relying almost exclusively on the Museum's site for information.
I hope these comments may be of some help. Minorhistorian (talk) 00:00, 28 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Still a Stub-Class article:
Talk:Filippoi

message: Seriously now. This article is totally lacking without a few pictures of the ruins of the city and the theatre. Kalambaki2 17:40, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:The Island Packet

message: Note:  "Island Packet" also refers to a boat building company in Largo, Florida.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.218.235.21 (talk) 20:46, 7 November 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Scottish Sports Hall of Fame

message: * "A double Olympic Games gold medallist wants to quit the Scottish Sports Hall of Fame – because he is English... he now regrets being persuaded to join as he can’t convince people of his true nationality. Pattisson, 68, whose parents were English, was only born in Scotland because his airman dad was posted there in World War II. The family left a couple of months later and Pattisson has spent his entire life down south. He said last night: “When somebody from the hall of fame rang me up, I told them I wasn’t Scottish. They convinced me that it didn’t matter. They said being born in Campbeltown was good enough. I gathered they were pretty short of Olympic gold medallists and they were scraping the barrel. I didn’t realise the consequences – but I would certainly have turned it down if I’d known. It has proved an embarrassment to me to always have to tell people I’m not Scottish. You can Google me and they’ll say I’m Scottish. I’m not anti-Scottish, but I want the facts to be correct. I’ve tried to change things on Google and Wikipedia but it’s well nigh impossible.” ... A spokeswoman for sportscotland said: “The selection panel for the Scottish Sport Hall of Fame is an independent body. We understand they will be discussing the possibility of removing Mr Pattisson as an inductee.” Pattisson, who lives in Poole, Dorset, said: “Most people would not like to be labelled with the wrong nationality and have to read it again and again.”
--Mais oui! (talk) 14:19, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I've readded Pattisson's name as a former member and stated the removal date, just so the numbers add up (99 total inductees at time of writing) CiphriusKane (talk) 14:27, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pattisson has asked for his name to be removed as he is English
Talk:Marc Maiffret

message: Phrases like "via a Greyhound Bus and some creepy old men" really jarred me as I was reading this.  Definitely needs some work. --Randal L. Schwartz 16:38, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tone 
Talk:List of New Testament uncials

message: As requested at the GOCE request page.
In the Classification of uncials, the last paragraph in particular might be a little too "advanced" for a general level of knowledge. It might be worthwhile if some of the editors here more familiar with this subject re-wrote that and sort of "dumbed it down" a little. It would certainly make it easier to read.
Also, I'm confused by the text, it may be contradictory, in that section, it says that Aland ended up with 299 uncials by 1989, but the last sentence of the next paragraph says that Dobschutz had expanded it to 0208 by 1933, is 0208 less than 299? I thought the text says that the preceding 0's were added after they ran out of letters, if that's right, it could be written more clearly, how many uncials is 0208? --  Despayre  tête-à-tête 00:45, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested copyedit 

message: I am wishing to bring this page up to date with some substantial changes including:
1) Verify the accuracy of the data
2) Include a new column for number of pages, and this would be per institution when a Manuscript is split up.
3) In the table design, put in proper row separations when a single manuscript is housed at multiple institutions. 
4) Include a new column for referenced links directly to the web pages where digital images of the manuscripts can be viewed.
I will wait a little bit before beginning to allow time for anyone who follows this page to respond with questions, suggestions, and so forth. ChickDaniels (talk) 20:51, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Upgrade to this page 
Talk:Romanian Armed Forces ranks and insignia

message: The "maistri militari" don't even come close to the concept of a warrant officer. They are simply technical NCOs. They do not receive any sort of warrant, they are trained in the same schools as NCOs, and they do not outrank NCOs (i.e., they are not officers) in any way. Their ranks are equivalent to those of NCOs (maistru militar clasa V is equivalent to sergent, maistru militar clasa IV is equivalent to sergent major, and so on, up until maistru militar principal, which is equivalent to plutonier adjutant principal). This is a common misconception, but it does not make it less wrong. Rimush (talk) 21:29, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Totally agree, as you can see here  they absolutely are not warrant officers! They must be integrated within the NCOs template, as sourced. --Nicola Romani (talk) 12:51, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Maistri militari 

message: Here are the new ranks (and insignia) for the ranks below sergeant: http://www.mapn.ro/fotodb/Grade-militare/MOD_1 If someone could integrate them into the article, that would be great. 109.99.71.97 (talk) 20:48, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  New ranks for enlisted personnel
Talk:1st Field Artillery Regiment (Mountain)

message: Alpini are infantry only, they dont belong to the artillery. This lemma is wrong. It is the 1st mountain artillery regiment (1 reggimento artiglieria da montagna).66.201.183.66 16:48, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:The Norman Transcript

message: I just redirected Norman Transcript to this article.
This text was on the Norman Transcript article, but was uncited, so I have not transferred it:
The Norman Transcript owns a printing press that prints for numerous Oklahoma City metropolitan area newspapers, both independently and CNHI-owned. The Transcript is known as CNHI's flagship newspaper.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kiddo27 (talk • contribs) 23:49, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Merged articles
Talk:Superstation

message: The section on Canada is helpful, but the page doesn't explain the situation with regard to Superstations in the rest of the world. Are there superstations in Belgium?
The article previously stated that DISH Network sells the superstations in "many small markets'  I revised it to more accurately reflect whatt causes DISH to not offer one or more of these stations in some markets.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.20.221.71 (talk) 14:26, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: 2007 discussion

message: This paragraph needs revision.  
In addition to WGN-TV, the five remaining true superstations, WSBK-TV in Boston, Massachusetts and WWOR-TV in Secaucus, New Jersey (part of the New York City area), and CW Television Network affiliates WPIX-TV in New York, KWGN-TV in Denver, Colorado, and KTLA-TV in Los Angeles, California, are carried on some rural cable systems, and on the DISH Network direct broadcast satellite system has also managed to keep customers happy by keeping the superstations. But syndicated exclusivity blackout requests have led DISH Network to stop selling one or more stations in some markets. As of 2006, Superstation WGN boasted over 68 million households on cable and satellite.[citation needed]
Ia am unsure what it is trying to say about DISH Network and the reference to WGN does not seem to belong.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.20.221.71 (talk) 16:36, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: 2008 discussion

message: Someone please provide a source for the statement that satellite superstations were Ted Turner's personal innovation.
Keith Ellington (talk) 13:29, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Source the Turner "Idea"?
Talk:Midland Railway branches around Walsall

message: There are three separate articles on short Midland Railway lines around Walsall; two of them had very short independent lives and became Midland branches, and one was built as such. I think it would be better to have a single article that sweeps them all up; it would still be fairly brief, but would certainly be more informative. If this article were renamed Midland Railway branches around Walsall it could be the basis of that. The Midland never had its own passenger station in Wolverhampton, of course. Afterbrunel (talk) 05:58, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
replies: text:  done Afterbrunel (talk) 06:13, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rename?
Talk:Liberalia

message: Uh, Essenes were Jewish, so they were probably not worshipping Liber Pater or celebrating the Liberalia. From where is this info coming?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.111.193.219 (talk) 20:24, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I had the same comment/question.  Even if the Essenes were not in the Pharisaic tradition, on which modern practice is based, there is absolutely no basis even for speculating that the Essenes were so heterodox that they could have countenanced participation in this sort of bacchanal.  -- Bob  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.156.104.54 (talk) 15:58, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: In addition, the paragraph following the one with references to the Essenes appears to include a lot of what is either incorrect information or original research.  (The remedy for both is citation.)  For example, there is no tradition of Pelasgians founding Rome.  The tradition was that Rome was founded by Aeneas and a remnant of Troy.  Any connection drawn between Troy and the Pelasgians (the pre-Hellenic inhabitants of the Greek peninsula) is pure speculation.  The only demonstrable simililarity is that we can't reliably connect either the Trojans or the Pelasgians to any better-known historical groups.  (Even if one accepts Trojans < Tyrrhenians and Tyrrhenians > Etruscans, which can't be proven, there is nothing to show Pelasgians > Tyrrhenians.)  Nor is there any basis for seeing a connection to the Greek "Argos" simply on the basis of the similarity of the sounds of words.  The reality is that Latin is no more closely related to Greek than it is to English or German, and it is only the later Roman religious traditions that show borrowing from Greek traditions.  -- Bob  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.156.104.54 (talk) 16:16, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Essenes? 

message: This page is filled with factual and conceptual errors. It lacks proper citations and attributions which would make it possible to distinguish facts from opinions. The page should simply direct back to Liber (Pater) until the facts that have to do exclusively with Liberalia are attributed and cited properly.Jasmith.sdsu (talk) 16:34, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Editing-source attribution badly needed 

message: This article was assigned to a student editor (see above), and should not have been published without prior scrutiny from the course supervisor, or else from WikEd. Somehow or other, a second article on the same topic was generated: Roman Festival Liberalia. Neither article is well-written or well-sourced. I'm willing to rewrite. For consistency across the Roman Festival articles, the title should be "Liberalia". I have problems using Wikipedia templates, so haven't used the recommended "merge" templates. Haploidavey (talk) 07:20, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Duplicated topic, needs merging. Help?
Talk:Kedarnath (mountain)

message: Note:  Project Banner with Uttarakhand workgroup parameters was added to this article talk page because the article  falls under :Category:Uttarakhand or its subcategories. Should you feel this addition is inappropriate , please undo my changes and update/remove the relavent categories to the article  --  TinuCherian     (Wanna Talk?)   - 13:42, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: [[WP:INDIA]] Banner/Uttarakhand workgroup Addition
Talk:The 5′11″ Record

message: :The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The result of the move request was: moved. Moved as an uncontested technical request. Any objection within a reasonable time frame should see the move reverted. (closed by non-admin page mover) BilledMammal (talk) 06:20, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested move 30 December 2023
Talk:Upwey railway station (England)

message: I have suggested merging the Upwey Junction article into this one as they refer to the same railway station at different times in its history. Britmax 17:13, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Merge?

message: Good question. The article is biased toward the "mighty" GWR to the point where it would cause an edit war were it a more "trendy" subject. Work needed here I think. Britmax (talk) 10:12, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Didn't the [[LSWR]] stop here then??

message: The 2018-2019 ORR rail usage stats suggest that this station had 37,839 interchange passengers in the year. As there is little indication what they might have interchanged from/to, I'm inclined to disbelieve and have omitted from the usage stats update. Johnlp (talk) 18:43, 16 January 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Interchange stats
Talk:Qatra

message: Hütteroth p145, 46 families and 15 bachelors (all Muslim).  Zerotalk 02:14, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Yepp, noted, Huldra (talk) 23:05, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  1596 

message: Khalidi, p. 404 cites Robinson, 1856, p. 143, describing Qatra as being of a "considerable size".
Now, according to Khalidis Bibliography, he used a 1977 reprint of one of the many 1856  Robinson versions. Which one I don't know. But the present Robinson, 1856,  p.143, does not refer to Qatra  at all, instead it refers to  a Kubab as "a considerable village". And that is Al-Qubab, on SWP map 17, with Robinson on his way from Lydda  to  Yalo.
However, Robinson and Smith, 1856, vol 2, p 227, mentions  a Kutra, sighted from Aqir. Now to me, that sound like "our" Qatra.
Will anyone protest if I cut that 1856, p. 143, out from this article, and moves it to Al-Qubab? Huldra (talk) 23:04, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text:  Looks right to me. Zerotalk 20:07, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Eh, what look right, my opinion or Khalidi?  Huldra (talk) 22:51, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text:  Your opinion looks right (as usual). Zerotalk 07:28, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I like a check....actually, I quite often find that I make mistakes, and insert wrong info. In 95-99% of the cases I am the one who discovers it, though... Huldra (talk) 22:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Khalidi mistake?
Talk:Faxian

message: 佛國記 Foguoji (Liu-Song) 法顯 Faxian 
大唐西域記 Datang xiyuji (Tang) 玄奘 Xuanzang — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.56.57.202 (talk • contribs) 17:18, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Perhaps the name Sri Lanka should be used instead of Ceylon.  The name "Ceylon" was a European name first used much later than Faxian's time.  The name Lanka has been used since ancient times.  -Tropicalsundae (talk) 04:41, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sri Lanka/Ceylon 

message: Wonder if the excerpt within section "Legge's biographical notes on Faxian" should be paraphrased and changed to non-quoted text since almost the whole of the section appears as quoted text, spanning several paragraphs. Rasnaboy (talk) 11:44, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Paraphrasing a major chunk of quoted text
Talk:Bear Island (Antarctica)

message: I can't seem to locate it on any map, even the most detailed ones of the Antarctic Peninsula. It's supposed to be quite a large island, being 3500 square kilometres in size. Does Bear Island actually exist? 
Edit: The area statistic is taken from list of islands by area. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 202.166.19.25 (talk) 11:11, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: 5 years later and I just came across the same thing. Hestoriboi (talk) 04:12, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Does Bear Island actually exist?
Talk:Mount St. Mary High School (Oklahoma)

message: Would it be appropriate to list rewards the school has earned? For anything, although I would probably note their robotics awards and band, as well as any sports. Would posting a curriculum guide containing all of the classes be appropriate? Linking to their website(s)? Noting their chromebook program (every student gets a chromebook, which has been spreading around the nation (at least that I know of))? Write about it's long and varied history (it used to be a convent, the 4th floor is haunted and (supposedly) has been visited by some ghost-hunting tv shows)? Write some kind of description of it? Maybe a general layout of the school (at least the number of floors, special rooms (auditorium, robotics, gymnasium, etc.)? Noting recent continuing construction of it's new football field? An arial shot of the school (using google Earth/Maps)? Update student-teacher ratio and current enrollment? Firestarforever (talk) 01:04, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Questions