Talk:Manifold

message: To start, I believe the four paragraphs of Motivational should be elsewhere. I propose the following:
: The first should be worked into section 5, regarding construction.
: The second should go in section 3.
: The third may be addressed in either the intro, or some sort of prerequisite mathematics entry;
: The fourth should either be in the introduction, when the concept's importance is mentioned, or in a new section towards the end, in an "applications" entry;
I will begin drafting these changes. If there are objections or better suggestions, let's discuss here. Horsesizedduck (talk) 22:46, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Please be more accurate. Which are the "Motivational" paragraphs you are talking of? The paragraphs of the lead, or the subsections of the section "Motivating example"? In any case, the paragraphs of the lead must be keep, even if some could be (and must be) shortened and made less technical. In particular, "embedded", "immersed", and "compactness" do not belong to the lead and the example of the sphere should be either replaced by that of the circle, and/or the proof of non-homeomorphism must be skipped. D.Lazard (talk) 07:31, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  I apologize, I meant the "motivational examples" section, right before the circle is introduced. Again, I'm sorry. I agree that the lead's second paragraph should not use the terms "immersed", "compactness"; the sphere should also not be appearing in the motivational examples. Horsesizedduck (talk) 11:36, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: Proposed changes

message: The assertion is made that the origin and positive x-axis are special under polar coordinates.
This is bizarre and needs explanation or correction (perhaps via deletion).  Is the word "minus" being used in some unclear fashion?
::Charts, atlases, and transition maps
::. . .
:::Charts
:::. . .
:::In the case of a differentiable manifold, a set of charts called an atlas allows us to do calculus on manifolds. Polar coordinates, for example, form a chart for the plane R 2 {\displaystyle \mathbb {R} ^{2}} \R^2 minus the positive x-axis and the origin. Another example of a chart is the map χtop mentioned above, a chart for the circle.
2601:1C1:C100:F420:1CAC:3F44:5927:BCE (talk) 02:17, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Please explain/correct/delete claim that the non-negative x-axis, in 2D, "special" under polar coordinates? 

message: In the section "Manifold with boundary", there is an (as i think) misleading link: It reads "(See also Boundary (topology))." In that Article, the set-theoretic topology notion of "boundary" is explained, i.e. for a subset S of a topological space X, the set-theoretic boundary of S is the intersection of the closure of S and the closure of X\S. This is totally misleading here, at most we could say "(Do not confuse with Boundary (topology))." Any comments? Thanks in advance. --Himbeerbläuling (talk) 12:54, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wiki-link to [[Boundary (topology)]] 

message: The lead picture of the projective plane seems uniquely bad to me. The self-intersections in the picture give the wrong impression- the thing in the picture, interpreted at a glance, is not a manifold. Reading the caption we see that OK, yes, it really is a manifold, but it happens to be one for which no picture in R3 can be quite accurate. So why is this the lead-off example? The concept of "manifold" is not intuitively complicated, so we don't need a picture that makes it seem wild.
I think any of the pictures currently in Surface (topology) could work. Maybe there are others that would be better. Staecker (talk) 18:13, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: I see that User:D.Lazard swapped out the immersed projective plane for an immersed Klein bottle. That misses the point. It is the immersion that makes these examples confusing. Why not a nice double torus or something like that, for which an embedding is possible? That way it would be more obvious from the image that all points have disk neighborhoods. In the immersed images, it looks like the points of self-intersection have non-disk neighborhoods — they do have non-disk neighborhoods in the image of the immersion, and the preimage, where their neighborhoods are disks, is not actually shown. —David Eppstein (talk) 20:03, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

text: I agree. Moreover, only expert can easily understand the relationship between the image and the projective plane. So, I have exchanged this image with that of the Klein bottle. D.Lazard (talk) D.Lazard (talk) 20:05, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: See above comment. I think your change made zero difference to the actual problem identified in the original comment. —David Eppstein (talk) 20:07, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Sure, but I did not have the time to search in Commons. My edit was only an understandability improvement before a better choice resulting from a consensus. Also, I have not removed the image of the Boy's surface, although I think it is not a good choice for illustrating the projective plane D.Lazard (talk) 07:11, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lead picture?