Talk:Lawrence Ytzhak Braithwaite

message: The entry should be rewritten with a comprehensive bibliography and overview of LYB's life in writing (including his signficant online contributions), audio recordings and a more robust account of the critical reactions. At this point the coroner's file is still open and a report will probably not be issued until early 2009. -Aaavidaver  —Preceding undated comment was added at 23:37, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Complete Rewrite 

message: Wikipedia:Copyright_problems/2006_September_14/Articles
* Lawrence Ytzhak Braithwaite ([ history] · [ last edit]) from . 24.68.155.61 04:03, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyright isses

message: I cleaned up the article but it still needs plenty of work. It was full of grammar and spelling errors, as well as unclear writing. One major problem was capitalization. I'm not sure if I got all the names of the titles right in the bibliography and works sections. They were a terrible mess, and I did what I thought looked right.Spylab 16:07, 29 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Cleanup

message: A few notes on my recent edits:
1) All references have been replaced with citation requests as none of the sources provided backed up the associated information and claims.
2) I have removed all but one link under "See also" as the article fails to indicate their relevance.
3) I have removed two sentences I assume to be vandalism.
4) Formatting and incorrect hyperlink aside, I have left the bibliography alone. However, I have not been able to determine whether More at 7:30 has been published (Speed, thrash, death: Alamo, B. C. appears to be a self-publshed chapbook).
While I've left the "Works also appear in:" subsection alone, I would argue that it be scrubbed. One vanity page aside, I have yet to see a listing of periodical and anthology contributions for any specific author. I would argue that bibliographies should be limited to books the author has written or edited (as an anthologist), otherwise any bibliography runs the risk of becoming overly long and trivial. I welcome discussion on this point. As it is, the subsection is a bit of a mess, appearing to have no organization. The same might be said about the "Recordings" section, which also appears quite trivial in nature.
The remainder of my edits concerned clean-up and an attempt to meet various Wikipedia guidelines concerning format. More is required.Victoriagirl 01:22, 20 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Citations, irrelevant links, bibliography

message: what did he die of?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.71.111.158 (talk) 01:32, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cause of death? 

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