Talk:Young Modern

message: What is the source of the tracklisting? --Mdhowe 03:45, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tracklisting 

message: I have added the new tracks they have played at their latest shows. Doo Doo 03:10, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Tracks

message: What is the source of the album title? I can't find any info about it on Google. --Mdhowe 22:06, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Album title 

message: This is the first time that i see this website listed in any album on wikipedia as a pro review source. That is a very brief, amateur and almost fanatic point of view. I believe it should be removed. (silvi)
David Botrill (Tool, King Crimson, He Dreams Awake) Did Editing On Young Modern & Diorama.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.187.99.176 (talk) 02:12, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Pro Reviews

message: :Image:Youngmodernltded.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot 11:47, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Youngmodernltded.jpg

message: :Image:Ymcover.gif is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot 12:00, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Ymcover.gif

message: sounds like this was written before the album came out:
" The album will feature various guest appearances from other Australian (and possibly international) musicians such as Luke Steele, Julian Hamilton and Paul Mac (who previously collaborated with Johns in The Dissociatives and enlisted both Joannou and Gillies for his solo album 3000 Feet High)."
its like in future tense with that "will".124.183.66.45 08:16, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  wrong tense 

message: what does the asterisk mean next to three of the tracks in the track listing table?
Kayno 13:23, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  asterisk on some tracks in track listing? 

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thread_title: PR

message: This is my assessment of the (current revision) article. I only had to make on susbsequent change which was for the punctuation. And, below the assessment are some tips that will help the page even further. 
:GA review (see here for criteria)
#It is reasonably well written.
#:a (prose):  b (MoS): 
#It is factually accurate and verifiable.
#:a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
#It is broad in its coverage.
#:a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
#It follows the neutral point of view policy.
#:a (fair representation):  b (all significant views): 
#It is stable.
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#It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
#:a (tagged and captioned):  b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA):  c (non-free images have fair use rationales): 
#Overall: 
#:a Pass/Fail: 
Further anaylsis on findings:
*The album image was correctly tagged, used appropriately and a fair-use rationale was applied.  
*I can find no original research. 
*Grammar, prose and spelling is excellent.
*Everything is reliably sourced and is verifiable. 
*Everything is readable, and doesn't incorporate words that a beginning editor or reader wouldn't understand.
*It is yet another example of Dihydrogen Monoxide music dedication, and avoids POV-style content, something important for an GA nominee.
*The article is focused and addresses a broad range of information without going into unnecessary detail. 
I am therefore willing to  pass this article. Well done to DHMO! — Rudget speak.work 13:25, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Good Article Assessment

message: https://nostalgiacentral.com/music/artists-l-to-z/artists-y/young-modern/
As per link above, there was an Australian band called Young Modern from Adelaide in the 1970s, which doesn't seem to have a Wikipedia page but has some significance. Singer John Dowler was part of The Zimmermen, so I think this meets notability by association. Please discuss!  Electricmaster (talk) 15:43, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  The band/magazine called Young Modern