Talk:Robert Parker (wine critic)

message: Ending DOT in the name causes problems in interwiki links.  Why not "%2E" —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gerdami (talk • contribs) 2007-07-10
:If you want, create a redirect page with the name you prefer. -Amatulic (talk) 20:06, 26 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Article name

message: I found the article here to be too much of a list of medals and awards. That part would better be presented as a list, and not "fake prose"
Agree. Justinc 16:44, 30 Mar 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: POV

message: I attended a Burgundy wine tasting recently and the vintner from France was fuming at various points about Robert Parker and I think he said there had been lawsuits. I searched and found this, but would be interested in more info if anybody has it:
"http://www.datamantic.com/joedressner/pageforward/9/
The Burgundy market has become confused since Robert Parker stopped visiting Burgundy. No one knows if they should believe Pierre Rovani, no one really believes Steve Tanzer other than crazy Burgundy geeks and me, who is Clive Coates anyhow(?), and the Wine Spectator will no doubt review the vintage either 3 months before they are available or 3 to 6 months after they are available. This leaves everyone bewildered. Distributors and merchants will actually have to make decisions unaided by enthusiastic publicity."
and in a Slate article 
"http://slate.msn.com/id/2067055/
Parker's grip on the wine world may be starting to loosen, however. It used to be that only the Burgundians, who make minute quantities of highly coveted wines and therefore have little need to placate the press, had the courage not to kowtow to Parker (indeed, he is now a persona non grata in Burgundy and recently handed over coverage of the region to an assistant). But other winemakers are beginning to speak up. Last year, for instance, Parker was publicly slammed by the Mondavis, the first family of American wine. He had alleged, in print, that the Mondavi winery was slipping because it was not fashioning the kind of blockbuster Cabernets that are currently Napa Valley's stock in trade (and that Parker loves). The Mondavis pointedly replied that their aim is to craft elegant, food-friendly wines, not critic bait. More interestingly, the buzz at this year's annual Bordeaux barrel tastings was that several prominent winemakers known for turning out turbocharged wines have now renounced that approach and are embracing a more traditional style that emphasizes finesse over power."
also, information to be found here http://www.lrb.co.uk/v27/n03/shap01_.html
There have been more attacks recently (although the Burgundy stuff has been going on for a while). A lot of it came to a head after the release of Mondovino. Will try to write something up. Justinc 16:44, 30 Mar 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Possible additions

message: I removed the notice of copywrite infringement and replaced it with a stub page.
I received permision from Mark Braunstein of eRobertParker.com to copy the page http://www.erobertparker.com/info/rparker.html for Wikipedia.
This is actually a pretty good biography, and very neutral for something from his own site. However, do we  have permission to modify it? The influence of Parker's scores on the wine world is perhaps his most important impact, and it is not discussed at all. I would rather have a small article discussing Parker and the effect of scores than a large biography that overlooks that point. Also, the ad at the bottom for erobertparker.com (a fine site that I myself visit a few times a week) seems slighly inappropriate, although as a newbie I don't know what the rules are on that. Wnissen 19:32 11 Jul 2003 (UTC)
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The acknowledgment on the page read:
"The above text was generously provided courtesy of eRobertParker.com, Robert Parker's website.  Visit it for online access to a searchable database of wine tastings dating back over  a decade."
This really shouldn't be part of the page contents, as it discourages people from updating it, and sounds like an advertisement. --Eloquence 19:18 19 Jul 2003 (UTC)
: I altered a similar comment in the source code to reflect that, while the article may have originated with such text, it is no longer solely composed of such text. Macwhiz (talk) 23:08, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Biography source

message: The section on his ranking system for wines implies that this is a universally accepted standard - living in the UK I've never heard of him until reading this article, let alone his points system for wines.  It certainly is not used on store shelves in this country or anywhere else in Europe as far as I know - I don't know enough background to make the edit myself, but strongly suspect this should all be qualified with 'in the USA...'
--195.212.29.83 12:54, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Guys, you can edit wikipedia pages you know!  I have removed the 'impossible to miss' phrase and inserted 'in North America' as you suggest. Paul Matthews 17:21, 20 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text:  Yep, well aware I can edit, but if I know that I don't know enough about a subject (I came here, surprisingly enough, because I wanted to know who this 'Parker' guy was, rather than because I'm a domain expert...) then I'll just politely suggest the article may be flawed and move on.  And I'm not a big 'wikipedian' - I came back to see how well the 'discussion' process works and I'm impressed, other than by the attitude :)  Anyway, cheers for the good work.  Maybe some day I'll sign up for a user account...--195.212.29.83 14:18, 10 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Points system 

message: I cleared up the publcity section into a more readable and useful list.  If anyone can be bothered to add ISBN's please do! WineDrinkerMe 21:08, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Books

message: In this paragraph:
Because of his powerful influence, his experiences have ranged from having two chateau owners offer him the sexual favours of their daughters to receiving death threats. On one occasion the manager of Chateau Cheval Blanc, Jacques Hebrard, was outraged at Parker's evaluation of his 81 vintage barrel samples and asked Parker to retaste. Upon arriving, Parker was attacked by Hebrard's dog as the manager stood idly by and watched. When Parker asked for a bandage to stop the bleeding from his leg, Parker says Hebrard instead gave him a copy of the offending newsletter. Hebrard denies that Parker was bleeding. (McCoy, pages 159-160)
I can't figure out if the number 81 refers to the year 1981, a wine with a rating of 81, or maybe even (though I doubt it) 81 samples of the said wine. Could someone more knowledgeable than myself clarify this and edit the page accordingly? Thanks.Brian8710 10:06, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  81? 

message: "81 vintage" refers to the year the wine was made, 1981
RR-  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.101.252.61 (talk) 01:32, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: =================

message: *Support the merge. I really can't see that article becoming more then a stub and Robert Parker is obviously the only context that one would would use the phrase Wine Parkerization. AgneCheese/Wine 02:47, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: [[Wine Parkerization]]

message: I see Fmh1964's edit of 30 May 2007 tries to imply that British wine writers use points in a similar way to Parker, just out of 20.  I'd disagree.  The "20-pointers' seem to use points more for internal use just within a particular tasting, or at most within a particular class of wine, rather than as an absolute scale that stands for all time.  Clive Coates has a good article on his website about this, how he could give 20 out of 20 to a Beaujolais or house claret or Midi Chardonnary, even though the latter was in no way as good as a 17/20 Montrachet. And in his books he avoids the use of points, he just talks about 'good', 'very fine' etc. From what I can work out, Jancis uses a similar system - you don't see point scores on her mainstream articles in the Financial Times (eg [here http://www.jancisrobinson.com/articles/20070604] or [here http://www.jancisrobinson.com/articles/20070530_2]), it tends to be only in fairly specialist tastings.  I think there are some major philosophical differences on the use of points on either side of the Atlantic, but I'm not quite sure how to fit them into the article - perhaps someone with more experience of marketing on both sides of the Atlantic could contribute to the article? FlagSteward 19:16, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Points systems outside North America

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thread_title:  WikiProject class rating

message: I added the two awards Parker received in 2002 and 2005.
Alex Zivoder (talk) 19:25, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Awards and Recognitions 

message: The purpose of this section is not very clear. An introduction and/or a conclusion is missing.
Alex Zivoder (talk) 19:30, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Chateau Pavie 2003 

message: OK, before making some comments let me state that I am (a) partially involved in the wine industry and (b) more or less despise Parker and everything he stands for. So with that negative bias acknowledged, let me make some observations of my own before making any changes to the article. Basically I feel that the article is too positive and too kind. He is without a doubt the most important wine critic in the world, but he is far more controversial than this article seems to imply.
*The article repeatedly insists that Parker is "pro-consumer", whereas many in the wine industry feel he is completely beholden to his pet wineries, as evidenced by his frequent refusal to do blind tastings. (This latter point is one I have heard many Australian winemakers complain bitterly about, and I shall endeavour to find an independent resource for it. Parker's website claims the contrary, so I can't write otherwise until I have something more than anecdotal evidence).
* The subheading "the first independent and impartial pro-consumer wine critic" has no place in Wikipedia as it constitutes a highly controversial statement and one that is unverified.
*The subheading "2.2 A new tool for the consumer: Parker's 100-point rating system" seems to imply that rating systems only came about with Parker, which is completely untrue. Parker has popularised the 100 point system, but the European 20 point system has been around for a LONG time (I am investigating the actual details of this).
Any comments? I don't want to start editing without some form of consensus, partticularly given my obvious dislike of the subject.Manning (talk) 01:50, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I can chip in some form of consensus. Quite a bit of work is needed for this article to achieve NPOV. MURGH disc. 03:44, 19 January 2008 (UTC)

text: I agree that the article does not seem neutral enough. Would be great if you found some good solid sources and edit. Xtothel (talk) 10:33, 19 January 2008 (UTC)

text: I agree with the 3 of you. However the only serious sources I found to-date are McCoy (2005) and Agostini and Guichard (2007, in French), the latter being very critical of Parker. I have tried to take the best pieces of Agostini and Guichard to make this article closer to a NPOV but as I can see a lot still needs to be done.
Btw I have nothing to do with wine: I am just a consumer.
Alex Zivoder (talk) 21:58, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks like there may be a new source: Wine Politics by Tyler Colman.  See reference 1.  I admit I cheated and went from the "Search inside this book" feature on Amazon when adding that link... Macwhiz (talk) 23:35, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

text: Well, I agree that some of the parts you quote seem like pro-Parker POV. But the section "Parker's flexible ethical standards" on the other hand contains fairly anti-Parker POV, and we're writing an encyclopedia rather than a review of, or discussion board on, Parker or Parkerized wines. In general, at all editing Wikipedia articles about people you claim to "more or less despise" including "everything [they] stand[s] for" must be discouraged in strong terms! Please remember that articles about living people are much more sensitive to edit than other articles! Tomas e (talk) 22:43, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Well, feel free to cut down the article's length to 1/3 or 1/4 of what it is now. The problem with the article isn't just that it lacks sources for some statements, it's that much of it is unencyclopedic and the article gives a "schizo-POV" impression: some parts celebrate him, other are likely on the border of being libelous. Adding more sources wouldn't solve this basic problem. I would very much prefer a significantly shorter article written in dry, academic prose. Tomas e (talk) 15:34, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  How does the POV look now? Macwhiz (talk) 23:08, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some thoughts 

message: I'm sure many agree with the above. Until someone (preferably armed with the sources) is motivated to seize this problem, I'll point to some specifics:
 I don't know what the McCoy source states specifically, but the above phrase contradicts other sources that state Parker purchased the customer list and not gave as WP here states. Business Week (a Parker statement, but certainly this can be independently verified)
 Here it could be mentioned that aside from the regular disclaimer, when this situation arose "Parker informed his Advocate readers and promised never to review any wines produced there." Time
Tempted to begin boldly hacking away at some things, but I don't have the necessary resources and the job seems a bit too big for my plate right now. MURGH disc. 13:21, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, feel free to cut down the article's length to 1/3 or 1/4 of what it is now. The problem with the article isn't just that it lacks sources for some statements, it's that much of it is unencyclopedic and the article gives a "schizo-POV" impression: some parts celebrate him, other are likely on the border of being libelous. Adding more sources wouldn't solve this basic problem. I would very much prefer a significantly shorter article written in dry, academic prose. Tomas e (talk) 15:34, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  How does the POV look now? Macwhiz (talk) 23:08, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Specifics

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message: The article currently states:
"Parker has stated very clearly...the high ethical standards on which his advice stands...By abiding by them, Parker seeks to guarantee that his valuations..."
To my reading, this paragraph simply parrots the definition of ethical standards, and seems to suggest that Parker abides by them, but provides no basis for that belief. All conmen seek to convince their victims that they abide by ethical standards; I'm not suggesting that Parker is a conman, simply that the article should not pretend to know whether Parker abides by ethical standards or not. Since it is a controversial topic, for now I'm making my suggestion here rather than changing the article directly. 71.190.66.244 (talk) 20:01, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I've rephrased this somewhat in copy-edit, in an attempt to address your concerns. Macwhiz (talk) 23:08, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  POV 

message: Completed a major copy edit.  Wow, that was a tough one.  Updated a lot of the references, bringing them up to date with the style guide, and chasing down refs that were broken or incorrect.  I added a bunch of new ones as I found them, too.  Deleted one or two insupportable statements that have lacked references for years, or that were written in editorial language.  As someone who occasionally buys wine for cooking, but doesn't drink the stuff, it was an interesting topic, and I hope I was able to bring a neutral outside viewpoint to the article. Macwhiz (talk) 23:08, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: By the way, for some of the existing references, I was able to add relevant quotations that appear in the References section.  I think this helps address any POV issues—it makes it easier to see what the main article is paraphrasing.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Macwhiz (talk • contribs) 23:11, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

text: Thanks for digging in where many of us others are too terrified. Cheers. MURGH talk 23:18, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copy edit 

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message: Firstly this is a great article; a lot of really good work here. But it is clear to me that most of it has been written/edited by a millennial or someone hostage to their habits of putting, commas EVERYWHERE. Take, for example, this sentence:
In other words, Parker accused Faiveley of cheating.
How in god's name does the comma add anything? Just let sentences run. With minimal stoppage. That is what sentences are for. Trying to read an entire article like this is the literary equivalent of trying to do John Cleece's Silly Walk. You are constantly stopping and jerking, interrupting your natural momentum.
Imagine a whole novel! I hate to think what an unedited novel by a 25 year old must read like. Crikey.
122.58.219.76 (talk) 10:09, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: The punctuation in your example is correct. The comma is necessary to separate the introductory clause from the main clause (Example). The corrections you actually made, on the other hand, were fine. ~Anachronist (talk) 16:43, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Commas, oh my GOD THE COMMAS!