Talk:New Kingdom of Egypt

message: I changed: "He claimed that he incorporated them" to "He he incorporated them". Weasel Words: either he did or he didn't. MrSativa (talk) 00:25, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Weasel Words

message: none of this is useful cause none of it answers my  question!!
The page views are really low for the New Kingdom article.  The New Kingdom produced some of the greatest works of architecture in human history.  I think this page needs a lot more pictures.  Pictures of Abu Simbel, Hatshepsut's temple, etc, would make this article come to life.  I will volunteer to add them.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dailey78 (talk • contribs) 02:12, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
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message: The lead section can be improved by providing a sentence summary for each of the sections. The main thing I wanted to see in the lead section was the rise of the New Kingdom, what happened during the New Kingdom, and the fall of the New Kingdom. I enjoyed the way the article is split into time sections, but it is possible to go more in depth on each section. Though I understand it is important to stay on topic, there are many points throughout the article where I want a brief explanation of a word without having to click on it to read about it in another article. For example, when Aten is mentioned in the Eighteenth Dynasty, it could be restated, "...who changed his name to Akhenaten in honor of the Aten, a representation of the Egyptian god, Ra."  
In the Twentieth Dynasty section, I would reword "Something in the air prevented much sunlight from reaching the ground and also arrested global tree growth for almost two full decades until 1140 BC." to say Air pollution prevented. Pollution can refer to any thing in the air that is not originally there. It would sound more professional than to say something in the air. 
Over all, I think there was a lot of information left out of the article. Though a gallery provides some evidence of culture, I think that culture, methods of warfare, architecture, agriculture, religion, and hierarchy would be beneficial to include when informing about the New Kingdom of Egypt.
In the first section of the article there is a mention of the Ramesside Period. I have found a great deal of information about this period and I will add a bit of more information to slightly expand on this without losing focus of the New Kingdom. Adbrow26 (talk) 00:26, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
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