Talk:Sunshine (2007 film)/Archive 1

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:Citations to use to expand the article. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 00:22, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: All citations, except for the IGN citation, have been worked into the article. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 22:14, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Citations for use 

message: If so why is the stated production in dollars? thanks/Fenton, Matthew Lexic Dark 52278 Alpha 771 00:57, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Filmed in Britain, funded by Hollywood. 91.109.129.16 17:18, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

text: It's standard practice in the film industry to state all budgetary figures in US Dollars. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 75.84.93.130 (talk) 05:52, 5 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  British film? 

message: According to http://www.comingsoon.net/films.php?id=10612 and http://www.cinematical.com/2007/03/01/nerd-fury-sunshine-bumped-to-december/ the release date has been pushed back from March to December.  Nothing official has been posted yet, I believe, but when it is, someone might want to adjust the article accordingly. 70.66.238.119 05:24, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Release Date Delay 

message: Is it really a slasher film? Anchoress 21:38, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: wouldn't really call it that, tho there are some body counts and gory death scenes. Think of it like 2001 meets Event Horizon.--sin-man 15:19, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slasher? 

message: I added it because the plot summary is too long. It shouldn't be a blow-by-blow account of each scene. Anchoress 21:51, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I second this -- Wikipedia is not a substitute for watching the film.  Especially per Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines#Plot, "The plot section is made self-contained (and is a totally separate section designated by ==Plot==), so plot details and actor names already mentioned in the lead section are repeated here. Plot summaries should be between 400 and 700 words (about 600 words), but should not exceed 900 words unless there is a specific reasons such as a complicated plot." —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 22:03, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't see any guideline/policy tag on that, the onus is on you to get a consensus that it is too long, I dispute it. Television articles (such as Pilot (House) [FA])) are ~500 words. I've reverted you again until you have a consensus for such an action per WP:CONSENSUS. Matthew 22:06, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Please don't continue to try to work this issue out through competing edit summaries. This is not only an issue of length. A plot summary is not meant to be a scene-by-scene re-creation of the media; this plot summary is not appropriate in its current form, and the good-faith tag, added with a discussion topic on the talkpage, should not be removed without discussion. Anchoress 22:07, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text:  How's this: "It should _not_ be added without discussion due to it being disputed"? Also, I get the feeling "somebody" doesn't understand that these tags shouldn't be substituted, laudable.. I know! The onus is still on you to prove to me it's too long, if you can't do that.. obviously it isn't. As somebody who has not yet seen this film I personally do not find this too long at all. Matthew 22:15, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Sorry for substing it, I always get the tags mixed up, which should and shouldn't be. I'll go fix it. I believe the tag should stay. I get that you don't. Not all information (though verifiable) is encyclopedic. Anchoress 22:19, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text:  Ran (film) is on par with this article, you're going to need to do better then your opinion. "Not all information (though verifiable) is encyclopedic" - Indeed. Plots are perfectly encyclopaedic though :-)! Matthew 22:23, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Listen, we obviously got off on the wrong foot here. I am really sorry if anything I said or did, or the way I express myself, rubs you the wrong way or hurts your feelings. I want you to know that my only goal is to improve the encyclopedia. It is my belief, based upon analysis of WP's policies and experience with other articles, that the tag I added is justified, and I've added it in a good-faith attempt to make WP a better encyclopedia. But it's not just my opinion that not all information is encyclopedic. Erikster, above, linked to the relevant section of WP:NOT, Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information. For inclusion in WP, information must be verifiable and relevant to the topic. I sincerely hope we can all work together to make this well-written, but overly detailed, plot summary better, thereby improving the article and WP as a whole. Please tell me how I can do a better job with that. Best wishes! :-)) Anchoress 22:38, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

text: Also important to note, at the last Support vote for Ran as an FA, it was just over 800 words.  Now it's over 1,100 words, so time has taken its toll on that article. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 22:36, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

text: I haven't seen it yet, so I can't help out yet.  I'll see if someone from WikiProject Films can give this a decent rewrite, but it may be best to hold off on that until the film's hype dies down.  If someone write something decent and succinct, it might be replaced by unnecessarily long-winded passages the next day. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 12:43, 11 April 2007 (UTC)

text: I don't remember exactly what Capa said about space and time, but it's still debatable as to whether what we were shown onscreen is what was really happening, or just what he was subjectively experiencing (sidenote: the surface gravity of the sun is "only" 28g). David 11:24, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plot summary tag 

message: * The name of the spaceship, Icarus, is a reference to the Greek hero who, according to the legend, fell into the sea when he flew too close to the sun, melting the wax holding his artificial wings together.
Above is the trivia section that I've removed from the article per WP:AVTRIV.  Feel free to re-add the information elsewhere in the article with citation. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 13:05, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, one of them was a personal attack, so I've removed that one. Laïka 19:17, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks.  I haven't focused too much on this article since the film's release date is still a long way off.  With that out of the way, I can't say the Icarus bit is too relevant. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 19:23, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: can't we make it the "Icarus" in the plot synopsis a hyperlink to the Greek myth?--sin-man 15:21, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't believe that it would be an accurate wiki-link.  If I saw it linked like that, I would think that there would be an article about the ship from the film.  I think it would be better to find a citation that explains why the filmmakers called the ship Icarus (though it's pretty obvious to people familiar with the lore, we can't make that synthesis), then we could link to the story of Icarus. —Erik (talk • contrib • review) - 15:26, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Trivia 

message: I rewrote the following sentence by removing the highlighted words:
:Sunshine placed just 4th at the UK box office, barely achieving one million pounds on its first weekend in the UK.
Firstly, they feel a little non-NPOV - particularly "barely". They imply that the film didn't do well - and perhaps it didn't, but there's no justification, and it sounds very strange to say it placed "just 4th" to me. Maybe it should be pointed out that two of the other films above it weren't in their first week, or something David 08:42, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. One editor has been doing this persistently.  Wikipedia doesn't have opinions (see Neutral point of view) but it does report other significant opinions, so I've asked that editor to find a reliable source that has an opinion about the commercial performance of the film and report that.  --Tony Sidaway 13:09, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

text: Later: I've tracked an industry commentary at Box Office Mojo and added that.  The words "disappointing" and "poor debuts" which I quote are sourced to that report.  --Tony Sidaway 16:37, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removal of the words "just" and "barely" from performance figures 

message: The article had this statement:
* Although the film was noted for an air of scientific plausability, the film's scientific content has been criticised by specialists.Another View, Dr. Chris Lintott, The Guardian, accessed 31 April 2007.
An embedded HTML comment said of the "air of scientific plausibility": The BBCi Text movie review comments on this, but the version on the BBC website is heavily abridged and omits it. I'll see if I can track it down. 3/March/07
I think we can wait until we have the source before including it into the article.
I'm leaving it as follows:
* The film's scientific content has been criticised by one specialist.Another View, Dr. Chris Lintott, The Guardian, accessed 31 April 2007.
Note the change to the singular. --Tony Sidaway 05:15, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Fair enough. My reasoning was that by leaving it in but uncited someone might come up with another review which fitted the job while I looked for mine, but in retrospect there doesn't seem to be enough "churn" in editors looking in to justify that. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 80.193.211.68 (talk) 21:09, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: "An air of scientific plausability"

message: Problems to be fixed;
;Images
*:Image:Sunshine_2007.jpg – expand the caption to say who the cast members pictured are.
*:Image:SunshinePic.jpg is superfluous since all the cast are in the image mentioned in the point above. It would be hard to justify under fair use – remove from article and put up for deletion.
;Lead
*Lead section needs to be expanded per WP:LEAD so that it provides a succinct summary of the main article.
;Plot
*Too long – I'd say you could cut it by a third.
*Why do two of the lines in the plot summary contain inline citations? You don't usually see citations in plot summaries.
;Cast
*This section should be text, not a list. 
*You should briefly cover previous roles the cast are notable are. Try also to find some interviews with the actors – how they were cast, any good quotes about how they approached their roles etc.
:I think this point has been adequately addressed, though I can't pull up the version you originally critiqued. I think every actor that was cast due to a previous performce has been mentioned. The few actors who weren't pulled specifically for past performances still have filmographies on their respective pages.Brinlong (talk) 21:55, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Considering the plot, I don't think it needs to be cut, as current Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines suggest that plot summaries be between 400 and 700 words. I put this in Word and got about 700, so it could be trimmed a little. I don't know if the plot can be trimmed or needs to be copyedited since I didn't read it (haven't seen the film yet). But for now, it is within the proper range of a plot, but do look and determine if a copyedit of the plot is needed. I do agree that the inline citations should also be removed from the plot. The soundtrack section should also be expanded upon, as it's only one sentence. Look to other passed GA/FAs for examples on what else to include. --Nehrams2020 19:50, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The problem is that the plot section is disproportionately long relative to the rest of the article. If (as I suggested above) a bit more meat was put onto the other sections it probably wouldn't look so bad. That said, if the film articles style guide recommends 400-700 words and the summary as it stands is 700 words then it's already at the upper limits of what is recommended. At 107 minutes, by modern standards, it's not a long film and has a linear plot. I still maintain it's possible to shave 100-150 words of what's there. The last paragraph could be trimmed to a single short sentence, for example. Joe King 21:26, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've been accumulating news headlines for this film with the intent to provide encyclopedic content, but the film isn't out in my area yet.  I'll try to see what headlines I could dump here for usage in the article. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 21:29, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: For the plot, I just wanted to point out the guideline, just in case you weren't aware of it (for future reference if you want to review other film articles). If the plot should be trimmed down based on your recommendations then that's valid. Again, I can't say too much about it, since I don't want to read the plot until I see the film. It won't reach the U.S. for months, and I'm sure that this review will pass/fail before then. Keep up the good work, this was an excellent review. --Nehrams2020 22:11, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Review – GA on Hold

message: Now that the requisite seven days have passed, I've marked the items above where I feel the editors have addressed the points raised. Unfortunately, I feel that the bulk of my recommendations - including several that would be quick to fix - have not been acted on. The Production section has been improved but I feel is not broad enough in its coverage to warrant GA e.g. it's a very visually striking production but no reference to effects, production design etc. Accordingly, I have decided to fail this article. Erik has provided a lot of useful material for future improvements and I suggest the editors get to work on it. I like this film a lot and I want to see a good article on it on Wikipedia. Joe King 22:26, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA failed

message: *Danny Boyle's 'Sunshine' Might Be 'Alien'-Like Sci-Fi Breakthrough
*Exclusive Video Interview: Cillian Murphy on Barley, Sunshine and The Dark Knight!
*'Sunshine,' 'Disturbia' to bow at Fantastic fest
* Cillian Murphy Talks Sunshine
*'Sunshine' sprouts at Brussels fest
*News from the Sunshine Q&A in Sydney (may not be attributable, skipped for now)
*How to make science really shine
*Interview: Danny Boyle
*Science fiction movie review: Sunshine Reviewed from a scientific perspective
*Interview : Danny Boyle (Doesn't show, but headline is from March 19, 2007)
*The sun is the star
*2007: a scorching new space odyssey
*Danny Boyle Discusses New Film Sunshine
*Space riders of the apocalypse
*Murphy Turns Atheist After Work on Sci-Fi Thriller
*Manchester scientist helps bring Sunshine to the big screen
*Flying into the sun
*'Sunshine' set visit
*Brian' dream job on £23m film
*DANNY'S NEW GOLDEN BOY
* Murphy's lore: Meet the action hero who looks on the verge of tears (dead, try to track down)
*Lost in space
*Shining star
*Starship trouper
*Production Diary Videos at the official site (skipped)
* 'Sunshine' director Danny Boyle
*Sunshine's out of Boyle's moviecraft
*Little Mister Sunshine
*Scientist set to make big bang in city
*Set the controls for the heart of the sun
*Finding new forms of life beyond planet Hollywood
*Byrne Bright
*Scientist has perfect formula for Sunshine movie
*In the beginning there was God AND the Big Bang (well, maybe, says top scientist)
*Cillian's a man for all roles
*SUNSHINE Waiting For The Sun
*The Danny Boyle Webchat Transcript (Posted April 12, 2007)
*To infinity and beyond
*On the boyle
*Cliff Curtis lets the Sunshine in
*Political drama fires up Italy
*Sunshine wilts European box office
*The Virus Returns
*Interview : Chris Evans
There is more than enough information about the film, especially its production, to create a superb article, if anyone has the time and the skills to draw it all together into an encyclopedic presentation. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 22:04, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Potentially usable headlines 

message: *Sunshine's Sun Voyage Is New
*Sunshine Echoes Past SF Films
*Sunshine Contains Homages
*Sunshine's Danny Boyle Answers Questions
*Of The Storm
*Trainspotting Director: No Sci-Fi Sex
*Danny Boyle feels the heat with 'Sunshine'
*Danny Boyle Interview, Sunshine (2007)
*PURSUING A VISION
*The Space Odyssey of Danny Boyle (backup)
*Exclusive: Danny Boyle on Sunshine!
*Sunshine's Byrne Lost In Space
*Danny Boyle talks about his upcoming metaphysical science-fiction saga “Sunshine”
*Q&A: Danny Boyle's Sunshine Makes Sci-Fi Smart Again
*Sunshine Superman
*Danny Boyle Talks Sunshine
*Sunshine: Danny Boyle's Hot Sci-Fi
*"Danny Boyle" Interview
*Taking Flight
*Danny Boyle On Sunshine Effects
*Not Just A Pretty Boy: Chris Evans Lights Up The Screen
*Danny Boyle's Space Odyssey, By Kurt Loder
*'Sunshine': A Thriller Of A Space Odyssey (multiple video interviews)
*Sunshine: Danny Boyle Fashions the Future
*INTERVIEW - 'Sunshine' director Boyle vows no return to space
Headlines. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 23:36, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Part two

message: *Memoirs of a sensation
*ROCKET MAN
*Danny Boyle’s sun salutation
*Boyle Begins Anew On the Final Frontier
*Danny Boyle Basks in the 'Sunshine'
*Q&A: Cillian Murphy
*Shooting for the sun
*Missing Out on a Coogan Trilogy
*Evans Flames On In Sunshine
*Danny Boyle’s Sunshine North American Release Bumped Up to July
*A chat with Director Danny Boyle
*Hiroyuki Sanada Gets His Day in the Sun
*More articles/photos from Japan (possibly not attributable)
*Rose's rays of sunshine
*Shining star sets big screen alight
*Scientist 'inspiration' behind film
*Benedict Wong Q&A
*Cliff Curtis shining in new role
*Master of the cool change
*Here comes the Sunshine band
*Hiro's MAINICHI SHIMBUN Interview
*An urbane spaceman
*Sunshine - Rose Byrne interview
*Sunshine - Chris Evans interview
*Sunshine - Cillian Murphy interview
*GOOD MORNING SUNSHINE: the world is about to end
*A star is reborn
*Killing time with Cillian Murphy
*The sun worshipper
*Danny Boyle
*No business like Yeoh business
*Danny Boyle (Part Two)
*Another bright idea from Mr Sunshine
*Cillian Murphy
*Danny Boyle, Sunshine Interview
*Interview: Danny Boyle
*Boyle Talks Sunshine On Video
*Interview: Danny Boyle
Headlines. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 00:33, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Part three

message: *Video interviews at IGN
*Sunshine: 2057 -- A VFX Odyssey
*Suttirat Anne Larlarb, costume designer
*Tom Wood, VFX supervisor
*Chris Gill, editor
*Anita Dhillon, graphic designer
*Handmade VFX warms Boyle's 'Sunshine' pic
*An Interview with Danny Boyle
*Danny Boyle can't find room for love in outer space
*Director Boyle is basking in Sunshine
*DANNY BOYLE'S NEXT STOP -- SPACE
*The Terrifying Science Behind Danny Boyle's Sunshine
Headlines. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 21:42, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Part four

message: The section currently headed "Cast" is really all about the characters. When adding information about casting, should it be integrated alongside these small summaries of the fictional characters? Or should there be two sections- one for the cast the other for characters? I had a look at the V for Vendetta film page (it's a featured article) and in its cast section half the names are followed by descriptions of the fictional characters and the other half have descriptions of how the actors got the job. I think the best thing to do would be to have the short summary of the fictional character first, then add actor info, eg: "Rose Byrne as Cassie: Pilot. Cassidy was originally a pilot in the US Airforce. Rose Byrne was offered the role after Danny Boyle was impressed by her work in Troy. She loved making the film, particularly because it involved no location work... la di da." Iscaria 11:56, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cast or Characters? 

message: The paragraph states that Mercury is orbiting in the wrong direction, but that is only from Earth's perspective. If the ship was 'upside-down' then the planet would be revolving in the opposite direction. In the space there is no up or down left or right, as it is 3D space with no gravity, therefore it can be any direction you want. Dr dozzy 14:20, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Inaccuracies? 

message: Sorry for the "link spam." I am new to Wikipedia and wasn't sure why the fansite link kept disappearing without a reason why. I feel that Sunshine Fan Online should be listed under the Sunshine 2007 film page because it is a fansite of all aspects of the film and was made for everyone who is a fan of the film, notably the American fanbase. We offer exclusive material and a fan forum in which the people from SunshineDNA are very much a part of. This fansite (along with its fan forum) is even listed there. Please reconsider the link.
Thanks in advance,
Sunshinefan07 15:06, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Link to Fansite 

message: Doesn’t appear that this film is opening up ANYWHERE in the U.S. tomorrow. I searched for articles to cite this but haven’t found any yet. We should change the release date when someone finds info on this. I am certainly confused but am looking for an articleGwynand 17:27, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I found this at the official-seeming supplementary site.  It says, "Sunshine will be released on the 20th of July in LA, NY, Chicago, San Francisco, Boston, Toronto and everywhere else on 27th of July." —Erik (talk • contrib) - 17:35, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text:  OK, that looks good. I thought I did a decent search showing no showtimes in NY, LA or Chi, but since have found a site that is showing lots of those showtimes for tomorrow. The advertising has certainly been confusing concerning a wide release...Gwynand 17:39, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Might be something worth mentioning if it's covered, especially with the film being released last April and having its US release date moved at least twice. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 17:43, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Change Release Date? 

message: I've been revising the article based on the headlines found on the talk page, so some items may be redundant or out of order.  These will be fixed in the long run, so I'm just making others aware of the slight mess. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 21:01, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Revision

message: *On a Mission to Replace the Sun, Fighting Demons From Inner Space
*Sunshine by Roger Ebert
American reviews to use. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 16:19, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: OK. I'd say the article needs to lose all but one brief lines on the  scientific criticism. It can certainly leave the line about criticism towards the slasher film aspect of the movie. What certainly needs to be added is praise for cinematography and possibly the psychological aspect of the film. The current line in the article doesn't seem to properly reflect reviews.Gwynand 16:34, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: What about a subsection focused on the science of the film, either praise or negativity?  And we can have a more generic Critical reaction subsection focus on the film's elements -- characters, story pacing, visual effects, et cetera. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 18:09, 23 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reviews 

message: Responding to a request to have a look at this article by User:Erik, I must say that it's much improved over the version that was nominated for GA a few months ago. The cast and production sections look pretty good to me and, on first impressions, are up to GA standard. A few observations:
*The lead section is far too short - see WP:LEAD for guidance.
*I think the caption with the cast photo should be changed to give the names of the cast and characters.
*I still think the plot summary is too long.
*The critical reaction section needs a lot of work; it's too short relative to the size of the other sections of the article. Also, I think you should make use of choice quotes from the reviews you are citing. I have no problem with the section on the criticisms of the scientific content since the film was marketed as having drawn from scientific advice.
*Soundtrack section - is this needed? It seems to be just duplicating most of the information in the musical score section. I think you should consider merging the two.
Hope this is of some help. As I said, you've done a lot of good work with the article. Best of luck with improving the artice further!
- Joe King 13:20, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I have yet to see the film, so I haven't been able to look at the plot summary (as I don't want to spoil myself).  If anyone else is willing to rewrite it, that would be great.  It's the same case for Critical reaction; I want to avoid spoiling myself, and I may not do a good job regardless if I haven't seen the film to understand specific critiques.  There are a lot of people in the cast photo to identify; do you really think it's necessary?  The caption helps tie the image to the context better, per fair use criteria.  I will also see about expanding the lead section; it won't be exhaustive due to the lack of a complete Critical reaction section.  I'll also see about the Soundtrack section; that was just there before, and I left it alone for the time being. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 01:45, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

text: So what do you want to do?  I'm not sure if I understand.  Also, the word count in the Plot section is over 1,200 words, so it should be reduced per WP:MOSFILMS#Plot. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 17:20, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments

message: It would be best to merge the soundtrack article to the film article until there is sufficient content for the soundtrack article to be larger than a stub.  I have sought more information about the film's musical score, but it is not very widely-reported and should belong here until that is no longer the case. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 16:04, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Musical score 

message: The plot summary currently contains this:
:The quantum effects local to the star combined with the massive force of the explosion, which Capa speculated could exist beforehand, slow local time long enough for Capa to reach out and touch the star's surface.
I don't remember any "quantum effects" being mentioned, nor the slowing of local time. My feeling was that the whole scene was metaphorical, but I don't remember anything on screen to support or detract from either opinion. David 08:50, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: If he could reach out to the surface, then certainly the heat radiation from the sun's surface could reach him. I was wondering why he wasn't carbonized (or worse, even) by the sun at that point. Sybaronde 13:29, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  The ending 

message: I think the length of the plot section is appropriate.  It may be longer than recommended, but the movie is somewhat confusing, and many readers (including me) will appreciate this level of detail. --345Kai 08:19, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Plot summaries of films should follow the guidelines seen at WP:MOSFILMS#Plot.  It's not necessary to give a blow-by-blow account of the film, just enough to provide background for the real-world context (Production, Reception, etc). —Erik (talk • contrib) - 13:03, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It's down to 894 words now, so the tag can go. Neil ム 22:47, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Is the plot really that complicated to warrant the maximum limit?  I haven't seen the film myself, unfortunately, despite working on so much of this article.  I can't really analyze it, lest I spoil myself too much... :) —Erik (talk • contrib) - 00:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

text: Okay, trimmed it and worked on it a bit.  We can probably knock nother hudnred or so off it as it is, or totally re-write it if we feel the need to bring it down much more.  Geoff B 13:24, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Any way to make the paragraphs fuller?  There's ten separate paragraphs now -- can any of the content be combined for bigger paragraphs? —Erik (talk • contrib) - 15:50, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not much, but it's a bit better.  623 words. Geoff B 20:10, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good to me.  All we need is a more comprehensive Critical reaction section, and I think article could be a Good Article. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 23:00, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  length of plot section 

message: "Activation of artificial gravity is, in fact, displayed on screen after the death of communications officer Harvey."
This is irrelevant, in that the criticism is "on the lack of source of artificial gravity onboard the spacecraft".
Star Trek and Star Wars both have artificial gravity through similar technobabble. I highly doubt that solar physicist cares at all about technobabble, be it explicit or implicit, in a science criticism.
This statement implies that the criticism has been refuted, when nothing of the sort has happened. The statement should be removed.209.161.220.5 06:17, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Feel free to do so yourself. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 13:39, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Science 

message: Capa's name is that of an influential photographer (see Robert Capa). Is this worth mentioning? It's a bit trivia-ish, but thought I'd put it out there.Vanityjunkie 18:27, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm not familiar with any kind of direct connection between the real-life figure and this fictional character.  I wrote a lot of production detail into the article, and I didn't come across any mention of the photographer.  I think it would be best to have an independent, secondary source in order to verify and signify this connection.  Maybe the upcoming DVD release will make a mention of this? —Erik (talk • contrib) - 20:05, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Robert Capa 

message: Regarding:
"However, Dr. Brian Cox of CERN, science adviser to the film, has described it thusly:"
No, no he hasn't. He came up with the background, I wrote that description of the background for the IMDB entry, and Ebert then quoted my description of Cox's background for the film. The sentence quoted there was never uttered by Cox, and neither Ebert nor the IMDB entry he quotes claim so. Therefore, I'm changing the description. 86.139.121.127 16:37, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: That's fine.  Good work. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 16:48, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Brian Cox's description of the scientific background

message: I noticed a couple single frames in the movie. You can't see them very clearly if you are watching the movie, but only if you are stepping trough the movie frame by frame. One moment i noticed them was when the crew entered icarus 1. Especially when the flashlights met directly with the camera. The look like photos of some people having fun. Anybody else noticed that? Any ideas of who these people could be?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.122.169.8 (talk) 14:31, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Single Frames

message: I added a comment in the introduction about 2001 a space odyssey, as many scene from the movie are directly comming from it (slow motion, dying computer, passages in the vacuum 1 and 2 without space suit, explosion of the air-lock door, etc ...). Rephrasing maybe needed, if possible from people that at least have seen 2001 and know what they are speaking about... I could not phrase that it is mostly an inspiration of the realisation, and not the script./pyc 01:42, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: OR, POV, no sources.  I removed it.  Perhaps now you have time to look up how Wikipedia works?  Geoff B 00:18, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, the lead section needs to be expanded to two or three paragraphs, providing a concise overview of the article.  The film is in part visually inspired by 2001, according to the citations in the Design section.  The relevant passage: "Boyle also cited inevitable visual influences from science fiction films in space by Andrei Tarkovsky (Solaris in 1972), Stanley Kubrick (2001: A Space Odyssey in 1968), and Ridley Scott (Alien in 1979).[39] Influences from other science fiction films also included Paul W. S. Anderson's Event Horizon (1997), John Carpenter's Dark Star (1974), and Douglas Trumbull's Silent Running (1971).[24]"  I haven't written a full lead section yet since I like to do so when the article is "complete", which it is not with the underdeveloped Critical reaction section.  If either of you wants to write out the section per WP:LEAD criteria, feel free to do so. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 00:50, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  2001 comment 

message: Our Sun is white, only perceived yellow from Earth because of Rayleigh scattering - Just wanted to point this out. I disliked the movie completely and this was also one of the things that bugged me the most. In the movie, the sun never seemed to be portrayed as white, instead, it's always shown as a yellowish light. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ofunniku (talk • contribs) 12:57, November 17, 2007
:I understand what you're saying.  I'll see if I can find a reliable source that includes that error about the sunlight.  (Perhaps the filmmakers wanted to have a spectrum of color to work with for the sake of creativity.)  If you can find a source to address the error, that'd be great. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 17:02, 17 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: And while I have no sourcing for this, it's possible that the "death" of the sun has had a further impact on the spectrum of light it emits?  Just playing devil's advocate, I really enjoyed the movie.  —  pd_THOR | =/\= | 09:16, 27 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Another reason for a yellow sun would be for commercial appeal.  Most people aren't aware of Rayleigh scattering.  Fllmtlchcb (talk) 14:17, 3 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It's probably likely.  The director wanted to avoid presenting a star field, but he found that it was necessary to use one to show that the spacecraft was in motion.  Conventional licensing, I guess.  If there are sources analyzing the scientific accuracies or inaccuracies of the film, they'd be welcome. —Erik (talk • contrib) - 06:05, 5 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Our sun is white 

message: Stating what is or is not in the movie is not POV or opinion.
If the film makers make claims that are not supported by the finished
film it is perfectly acceptable to point out the discrepancy.
Removing the balance makes the page nothing more than a commercial
for the film and that is NOT acceptable.
comment added by Cyclades  —Preceding comment was added at 07:46, 27 December 2007
: Both  and I (twice) have now removed the same uncited, personally interpreted original research from this article.  Please do not re-introduce to the article without reliable sourcing and a neutral point-of-view.  —  pd_THOR | =/\= | 09:14, 27 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Cyclades, what you are offering isn't a NPOV addition.  Although if you see the movie you can interpret the scenes to not be claustrophobia inducing, that is your personal opinion on the matter.  And your statement about the Q-ball does not belong.  The plot section is for what is included in the movie, not what is left out (regardless of it being the motivation behind the movie). Fllmtlchcb (talk) 19:29, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  POV