Talk:Diving helmet

message: This is not a place to put them.
Also, this article is in desperate need of cleanup.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Deman Risu (talk • contribs) 00:14, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree. I requested sources to show that the helmet was worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia, but following your comment, I've removed the text and the "holiday photos", since it reads like an advert. If a good third-party source is available, some text can always be re-introduced then. If you feel able to do some cleanup on the article, I'd be happy to help - good sources would be particularly welcome. --RexxS (talk) 23:28, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Holiday Photos 

message: There are a number of manufacturers of Recreational Helmets, the largest being Sub Sea Systems, which is the producer of the Sea Trek helmet diving system. Sea Trek helmets are designed to provide a continuous flow of air to guests who are being guided on a tourism related experience to depths from between 9 to 30 feet in depth. The weight of the helmet displaces the buoyancy of the air within the helmet and provides approximately 15 pounds of negative weight to allow the user to lightly walk on the sea floor.

:Commons:File:Sea Trek Recreational Helmet.jpg
The file looks like a copyvio as the uploader "Jimmayfield, president of" would appear not to be the author of the image as claimed. The copyright holder seems to be "Karen W. Doody All rights reserved" and I see no evidence of any permissions. --RexxS (talk) 16:07, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Recreational Helmets

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message: The article is suitably referenced, with inline citations. It has reliable sources, and any important or controversial material which is likely to be challenged is cited. Any format of inline citation is acceptable: the use of <ref> tags and citation templates such as  is optional. More citation needed. 
The article reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies. It contains a large proportion of the material necessary for , although some sections may need expansion, and some less important topics may be missing.A bit thin on content. Needs more detailed information on all types of helmet. 
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Not yet, several issues. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 18:46, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
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