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Talk:Trinity Dam

message: I didn't want to do anything until after Eric finished his class. He introduced an environmentalist perspective to the article that is a biased perspective. The second person writing is amateurish. 
TotalFailure (talk) 03:03, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Environmentalist perspective

message: EricB925 (talk) 02:07, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Environmental Effects 

message: EricB925 (talk) 19:56, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Effects on Native People/Towns 

message: EricB925 (talk) 21:34, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hydrology 

message: EricB925 (talk) 19:28, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Drought Effects on Dam 

message: EricB925 (talk) 02:29, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Benefits of the Dam 

message: Introduction: The article's existing introduction looks fine. You might consider editing it to include some of the topics you are adding to the article. The intro also mentions impacts on salmon. This should be more directly addressed in your sections on environmental impacts and native species. Salmon info is currently spread out though many of your sections.
Topics: Topics look like good additions to the existing article. Again, the salmon info is spread thin among your sections. Maybe make "native people" and "native species" subsections under "environmental impacts." This could be integrated with the existing page's information on salmon. 
Native species could also include some information on vegetation, rather than just animals.
Consider adding more information about the surrounding watershed. Was there anything in the area flooded by the dam? What are the soils/ vegetation/ land uses in the area? Does any of this impact water quality? Some of this is covered already in the existing page but it could be expanded.
Tone/word choice: Mostly good. I realize that most of the text isn't ready to be transferred to the main page so it isn't perfect. In some places you lapse into a more conversational tone. E.g.: "Yes the dam limits the spawning of salmon but it also has negative effects on the Native American Tribe because then they are unable to eat the same foods that they once relied upon. Having a shortened food supply can be disastrous for anyone living on just a few specialized food items." could be rephrased to sound more like Wikipedia language, stating facts.
References: Everything looks well referenced. The "British Dams" reference seems strange for dams in CA, but maybe some of the info is useful. It seems like you could get similar info from the bureau of reclamation that is more specific to western dams.
Taylorjones770 (talk) 00:57, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer Review Comments 

message: I would like to thank Taylorjones770 for peer reviewing my wikipedia assignment on the Trinity Dam. His input is valuable to me and that I hope to make the needed changes before the page goes into the main space. I hope to make my assignment stronger in terms of the amount of facts that I say. I would like to thank him for his time and valuable review of my first draft so far.
EricB925 (talk) 17:58, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Thanks
Talk:Trinity Lake

message: The referencing isn't done properly here. The numbers do not automatically link to the references at the bottom, and the numbers will be inaccurate if more references are added. When I get time I might fix this, but in the mean time someone else is welcome to fix it. -- Brangifer (talk) 06:53, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed. -- Brangifer (talk) 03:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reference formats
Talk:Trinity Law School

message: Pupluv 07:55, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: 2007 comment

message: The notation about Shannon Verleur being the dean of the law school during the transition from Simon Greenleaf to Trinity is incorrect.  The dean at that time was Winston L. Frost. I do not believe Ms. Verleur ever served as law school dean. Iamdpunisher (talk) 23:08, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Re: Shannon Verleur 

message: Good day, Christopher M. Naghibi is the COO of First Foundation Inc. Kindly verify his claims, should he be added among notable people? DahSound (talk) 13:15, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: To be considered notable for this purpose, he'd need to have a Wikipedia article about him. That article would need to be written by someone who's not connected to him, and who doesn't therefore have a conflict of interest. Criteria for notability are here. BubbaJoe123456 (talk) 17:36, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Verify Authenticity
Talk:Tommy Trojan

message: Does anyone have a better picture?  It is ridiculous that this article has a picture of the statue wrapped in duct tape, but doesn't have a picture of it normally.  Nerrolken 20:41, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Picture 
Talk:Tujunga Wash

message: I removed this sentence from the lede: " The watershed includes Angeles National Forest and highly urbanized land in the northern portion of the Greater Los Angeles Area." The Angeles Forest stretches all the way to the San Gabriel Valley, and it includes other watersheds. Also The Tujunga drains only the San Gabriel Mountains, and the Greater Los Angeles area is not well defined, even in the Wikipedia article on the subject. GeorgeLouis (talk) 06:09, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Very doubtful. No source. 

message: The following reference discuss some aspects of Tujunga Wash.  I've added a short summary. 
Bull, W. B. and K. M. Scott (1974). "Impact of mining gravel from urban stream beds in the Southwestern United States." Geology 2: 171-174.
There is also this article...(I haven't used)
Scott, K. M., 1973, Scour and fill in Tujunga Wash—Fanhead Valley in urban southern California—1969: U.S. Geol. Survey Prof. Paper 732-B, 29 p.  (Tony.ladson (talk) 05:19, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Additional sources
Talk:Turlock High School

message: Just because you graduated and you "hope" one day to do something important does not make you notable. Nobody cares that you wrote rap lyrics in high school.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.58.234.20 (talk) 11:20, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Notable Alumni? 

message: Do you think it would be ok to add a section about the rivalry between Turlock and Pitman? 68.186.63.18 (talk) 06:40, 10 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pitman Rivalry
Talk:Twain Harte, California

message: there is a band from Livermore California who is rocking your name.
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and they're doing it honest.
<P>24.4.12.186 07:13, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: twain harte band

message: The reference appears to be advertising, strictly verboten. I'm going to delete it, if the editor who added it is willing to produce a reference and explain why it is notable please do so if you add it again. Batvette (talk) 04:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reverb Communications 

message: Here's a link to an interesting source of information about the town including statistics. I'm sure the article could be expanded significantly with this. --Scalhotrod - Just your average banjo playing, drag racing, cowboy... (talk) 15:45, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Interesting source
Talk:Twenty-mule team

message: I'm going to suggest that the statement be reconsidered; there is plenty of evidence that mules have been and continue to be excellent riding animals (see the wikipedia article on mules (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mule) for more information on their uses as riding animals ;))
There may have been a cultural bias against mules being ridden at the time of using horses as the 'wheelers' for the 20 mule teams, but perhaps more research should be done before the statement is made that horses were always used. It's possible that the only evidence of the horses being used in a 20 mule team comes from one or two photographs. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Thatcaptjim (talk • contribs) 21:18, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The museum - linked at the bottom of the article - says the teams were 2 horses and 18 mules, but doesn't say why horses were used. - DavidWBrooks 22:24, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mules cannot be ridden? 

message: This term needs to be defined. Too Old (talk) 11:28, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Good point - it is, now. -DavidWBrooks (talk) 14:09, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  What's a 'jerk line'? 

message: I added this link which I thought relevant https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S_Thvbp0rPo but a bot deleted it. I do not know the reason or policies here. Maybe someone more experience can have a look at it.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.25.168.131 (talk) 02:10, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Youtube video link deleted
Talk:Dunk Island

message: This article needs quite a bit of work, particularly the inclusion of references. A general re-organisation would be most welcome.
Toytown Mafia (talk) 19:23, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Added a proper history section. Will do the other half of the other article in the next few days. Toytown Mafia (talk) 22:23, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Major work done. The Land use could use a bit of extra work, but otherwise it's much better than it was. Toytown Mafia (talk) 14:48, 13 June 2008 (UTC)

text: User:Banfield1, self-described marketing director for Dunk and Bebarra Islands, who wants to add a whole gallery of pictures of the tourist attractions. --Orange Mike  |  Talk 14:31, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I understand that Wikipedia is after more pictures generally but the Dunk Island page already has pictures. Need to be careful not to compromise Wikipedia page design standards - there can be too many pictures. The page has a broad range of topics but more text is needed. Factrules (talk) 22:39, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clean-up needed 

message: Looking for work please 2001:8003:276F:A100:7C4B:5958:9873:3F59 (talk) 09:06, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Work
Talk:Twin Peaks (San Francisco)

message: I removed the following because I could not satisfy myself that it is true. Also it is confusing and unnecessary.
(formerly named San Miguel HillsWinaker, Pearl & Winn, C. Bernard."History of Islais Creek", islaiscreek.org. because of the San Miguel land grant, Los Picos Gemelos in SpanishSoutheastern Natural Areas, Natural Area Program, San Francisco Recreation & Park.)
*The "islaiscreek.org" citation can be found at Wayback.
A good indication that this information is questionable is that the Geographic Names Information System (GNIS) page for Twin Peaks lists six variant names for the location none of which are mentioned in the removed material. The "islaiscreek.org" citation can be found on the  Wayback Machine. The GNIS data for San Miguel Hills cited above gives coordinates south of Twin Peaks and east of Twin Peaks West. --DRoll (talk) 00:05, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removed material 

message: Were they also called Las Papas? Steaming in through San Francisco's Golden Gate, last week, came the President McKinley, bearing a petite, blue-eyed German Fraulein of twenty-two. [...] she gazed at Las Papas, those twin, majestic mountains called "The Breasts."Time, 1928-06-11--87.162.38.138 (talk) 21:13, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Las Papas?
Talk:UC Berkeley College of Chemistry

message: An editor has identified a potential problem with the redirect :Phillip Geissler and has thus listed it for discussion. This discussion will occur at  until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion.  Rusalkii (talk) 23:56, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Phillip Geissler" listed at [[Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion|Redirects for discussion]]
Talk:UC Berkeley College of Environmental Design

message: Wurster Hall makes it onto ugliest buildings lists pretty regularly. Perhaps worth at least a mention in the article?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:C434:1A30:CDF:5B2C:79A6:E725 (talk) 07:25, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Aesthetics of Wurster Hall
Talk:UC Davis Medical Center

message: Several editors are organizing a WikiProject to better organize articles related to the University of California. A preliminary draft is available UCD=yes|UCD-importance=|here. You are invited to participate in the discussion at Talk:University of California#Developing Wikiproject University of California. szyslak 21:41, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject University of California 

message: Is there any reason why the subject of a graveyard being destroyed and the anonymous deceased being moved to a county cemetery needs to be mentioned in the very first paragraph?  It's a little depressing, and seemingly irrelevant.  There's no reason why that information can't be moved elsewhere.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 165.196.101.141 (talk) 00:17, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  graveyard of indigent patients 

message: Join the discussion about all 5 UC Medical Centers here:
* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:University_of_California,_Irvine_Medical_Center#Title_.26_Focus:_Hospital_or_Regional_Health_Care_System
Velocipedus (talk) 00:19, 22 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title & Focus: Hospital or Regional Health Care System
Talk:Carnarvon National Park

message: If anyone can provide a reliable citation to the origin of the name, please add that info and citation. And please remember WP:BRD.  16:32, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  What was Carnarvon National Park named after? 
Talk:UC Davis School of Medicine

message: Whoever changed the NIH funding, stop screwing around. 
Chyu83 03:44, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: NIH funding

message: I'll put it to those interested in editing this article, but considering the importance of Regents of UC v. Bakke in American constitutional jurisprudence, shouldn't it get at least a brief mention in the article on the school that was the center of the landmark case? I was thinking something to the effect of: "The school gained national attention when an applicant challenged the school's affirmative action admissions policy.  The Supreme Court of the United States, in Regents of the University of California v. Bakke, 438 U.S. 265 (1978), ruled that the applicant had unconstitutionally been denied admission." Just a thought. Bruin03 05:17, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree - I'll add it into the article. Pyrofork 18:35, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Affirmative Action lawsuit

message: It is very unclear the way you have it worded ("about half matriculate").  That would make the acceptance rate even lower.  Please clarify -- until then it will be left at the regular, calculated rate.Pyrofork (talk) 01:24, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Matriculation 
Talk:UC Davis School of Veterinary Medicine

message: This article says UC Davis is "consistently" the number 1 vet medicine school in the USA. But the Cornell vet medicine school says the same thing. I'm not a subject matter expert. Anyone care to comment?
Polihale (talk) 23:21, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Number 1 school? 

message: I have never used this talking page, but here it goes.
I have a 16 week old Maltese with a continuous heart murmer or P.A.D..  I have been to two vets and a canine cardiologist and it looks like it will cost around 3,500 for the surgery.  She is the most beautiful little girl one could ever hope see, and I have seen a lot of Maltese in my day.  
If she does not have the surgery she will die in 2-8 months.  I am on Social Security and have no money for this.
Does anyone know if there is any way to get this surgery through the college?  I was told that there was a chance that the Veterinary School might want to perform the surgery for a reduced fee.  
Can someone please help me.  Don't let Munchkin die.  
Patti  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Patti Simon (talk • contribs) 01:41, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Continuous heart murmer = PAD
Talk:UC Riverside Student Recreation Center

message: This article has undergone a significant expansion, beginning on 5 October 2017, and continuing today (10 October 2017) (see this diff).  has added a vast amount of material that I feel is unduly promotional and which uses first person pronouns ("our") extensively. The material would be appropriate for a brochure or website about the facility written by the university itself, but such material has no place at Wikipedia. I have reverted the addition once, but Tsam has restored it, so I bring the discussion here. Tsam, please comment on why you feel this is appropriate material for Wikipedia, despite the fact that it is overtly promotional, written in the first person (see WP:FIRSTPERSON) and largely unsourced. WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 18:44, 10 October 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Given the lack of participation in this discussion by , I have again reverted the changes. WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 13:49, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Recent expansion 

message: Does this article still need an image? I notice there's still the request template. Benjamin (talk) 11:31, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  image
Talk:Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center

message: Several editors are organizing a WikiProject to better organize articles related to the University of California. A preliminary draft is available UCLA=yes|UCLA-importance=|here. You are invited to participate in the discussion at Talk:University of California#Developing Wikiproject University of California. szyslak 21:55, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject University of California 

message: i made some additions to the end of the section about celebrities, and it was deleted, how do i make it stop being deleted?
:Hello, you nee to provide a reliable source. othgerwise, it will be deleted. If you do not know how to include a source, just list it here and somebody will help you. --McSly (talk) 01:15, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  changes 

message: The criticism section should contain information on how Americans on the liver transplant list were essentially sentenced to death in order to make room for Japanese gangster Tadamasa Goto, in return for a $100K bribe that he paid to UCLA. Several Americans died because UCLA decided to ignore all list protocols and give a liver to an infamous Japanese gangster. In addition to the following articles, there was also a 60 Minutes report on this crime by UCLA. http://articles.latimes.com/2008/may/30/local/me-ucla30 http://www.latimes.com/local/la-me-ucla31-2008may31-story.html http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2009/11/02/tadamasa-gotos-liver-tran_n_341751.html --Westwind273 (talk) 03:17, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  UCLA Med Center murdered Americans on the liver transplant list 
Talk:UCSF Medical Center

message: Several editors are organizing a WikiProject to better organize articles related to the University of California. A preliminary draft is available here. You are invited to participate in the discussion at Talk:University of California#Developing Wikiproject University of California. szyslak 21:56, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject University of California 

message: Join the discussion about all 5 UC Medical Centers here:
* https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:University_of_California,_Irvine_Medical_Center#Title_.26_Focus:_Hospital_or_Regional_Health_Care_System
Velocipedus (talk) 00:19, 22 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title & Focus: Hospital or Regional Health Care System 

message: WP:LEAD says that the lead should summarize the body of the article. This does not mean that you should put all possible accolades in the lead. Natureium (talk) 01:03, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  WP:LEAD
Talk:Rolleston, Queensland

message: What is the connection between the Kenniff brothers and Rollestone? There is the start of a sentence about them but not the ending. Kerry (talk) 06:22, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Kenniff brothers
Talk:Union Iron Works

message: Why do you use a picture from Washington to illustrate a famous shipbuilding facility in San Francisco? Hank chapot 01:28, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Picture

message: Added ferries built, from "Mains'l Haul" magazine - Fall 1998, the only peer-reviewed North American journal devoted to the Pacific’s maritime heritage.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.254.53.90 (talk) 17:47, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: More ships

message: The lengths of some of the slipways are supported by the statement, "Based upon measurements made with Google Earth of slipway remains." This is a textbook case of WP:OR. If a secondary source hasn't made the interpretation for us, these values do not belong in Wikipedia. From Hill To Shore (talk) 17:38, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slipway lengths are original research
Talk:Mitsunari Kanai

message: Doesn't the external links section have too many? I think we should limit it to the dojo where sensei was in residence, not just any dojo where he taught. 61.253.186.166 (talk) 04:00, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  No more links 

message: I removed :Category:American aikidoka until we have a source that says he had naturalized as a US citizen.  Heroeswithmetaphors (talk) 02:43, 28 August 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Category:American aikidoka 
Talk:United Air Lines Flight 266

message: The No. 2 and 3 engines suffered severe rotational damage from high RPM speeds at impact...
:But No.3 engine had been out of service. Valetude (talk) 12:18, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: The No. 3 generator was inoperative, not the No. 3 engine. AustinEng (talk) 18:18, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  No.3 engine 

message: The word "attitude" has been repeatedly and erroneously changed to "altitude." If you don't know what these two words mean within the context of aviation, you shouldn't be changing them. AustinEng (talk) 18:43, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: "Altitude" means height over a surface (water, ground), "attitude" defines the spatial orientation of an airplane (nose up, nose down, banking or yawing left or right, in extreme cases being inverted). Regards, Grand-Duc (talk) 07:03, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Attitude vs. Altitude
Talk:United Air Lines Flight 615

message: I am moving this text from the main article, as it is really too much primary source information for the article, but it's hard to find so I don't want it to disappear entirely.  --BlueMoonlet (t/c) 20:56, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  NYT report 
Talk:Deran Sarafian

message: Deran Sarafian is no longer married to Laurie Fortier.
He has a younger sister named Ani Saragian 
He was not an actor in Creatures from the Abyss or Professor Clarke 
He produced and Directed CSI: NY 
Lost and Hell on Wheels should be added to his list of director credits on his biography. 
216.208.221.132 (talk) 14:50, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request 22-JAN-2018 

message: Some of these requests were rendered moot by subsequent edits. Others are unreferenced. Spintendo ᔦᔭ 00:33, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 25-JAN-2018
Talk:United States Penitentiary, Atwater

message: If anyone's interested, I've proposed a new wikiproject for the creation and improvement of articles regarding specific prisons, internment camps, and detention centers here. --Cdogsimmons (talk) 02:04, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wikiproject Prisons 

message: Arena, Kelli and Kevin Bohn. "Guard survives Iraq, dies on job at U.S. prison." CNN. Tuesday August 26, 2008. WhisperToMe (talk) 13:05, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Another source