Talk:Tomb Kings (Warhammer)

message: I personally think that the latter part of this article is a bit non-neutral. Especially the last two paragraphs seem too biased. --Anzuhan 20:44, 30 November 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Then fix it, silly. ^_^ Adam Marx Squared 00:38, 1 December 2005 (UTC)

text: Proably the scarabs. --Secruss (talk) 23:10, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The scarabs weren't "stolen" from The Mummy. They're a VERY common part of Egyptian mythology, and the Tomb Kings are based largely off of the Egyptians. Groundlord (talk) 17:54, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
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message: As it stands (11 January 2007), there appears to be an excess of fluff for the units section and worse still its in an encyclopedic tone and as such smacks of being lifted directly form the Warhammer Army book. Which might mean copyvio issues.GraemeLeggett 11:08, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Too much fluff? 

message: I think it is cool that this article is slowly being transformed from pure  in-universe plot-telling (pure WP:NOT kind of stuff), into a gameplay-centric article about a real-world game. That's the ticket! [[User:scbomber (only bombs in netrek]] 04:53, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hurrah for context 

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message: Hey guys - I used to play Warhammer Fantasy Battle when I was young, and I plan to take it up again.  I want one of the newer armies, so this page was very helpful.  But...  a worrying amount of it isn't very suitable for Wikipedia.  It's not properly cited, and there are some clear examples of original research.  To put that in layman's terms, instead of reading like an encyclopaedia article, it reads more like the notes of a Games Workshop enthusiast who wants to share his personal experience of the Tomb Kings army.
E.g., speculation about stuff being inspired by the Mummy franchise doesn't belong here unless you can quote a reliable source, and I laughed out loud at the bit which suggests that the use of magic is "basic military technique" (basic Warhammer strategy, maybe!).  Either way, Wikipedia isn't a place for people to share their knowledge and original research.  It's a place for people to collate the exisiting body of knowledge that can be cited in a scholarly fashion.  I recommend a complete overhaul of the page (but maybe you should think about getting a wordpress account or setting up a fan page or something, so the material that's on here doesn't get lost).Señor Service (talk) 19:33, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Non-encyclopaedic