Talk:Selma Fraiberg

message: One part of the article that needs to be expanded on is the importance of Selma Fraiberg's work. My plan is to explain her studies and what they added to the field of psychology. One of the important areas to expand is the details of her child blindness studies, since that was where a large amount of her research was focused on. Explaining her studies and how they contributed to the field of psychology would add depth of her importance to the article.     
Ahellmann10 (talk) 02:17, 5 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Expanding the article 

message: # Find information on Selma's work using articles that include the importance of her work. These can be used to explain her findings and how her contributions added to the field of psychology.  
# Add a publications list of her books.
# Expand the introduction paragraph to include everything that is added to the article. Ahellmann10 (talk) 13:38, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  To-Do List 

message: * Introduction 
*Picture with short overviewLbednarz11 (talk) 16:48, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article Outline 

message: *Broberg AG. A review of interventions in the parent–child relationship informed by attachment
theory. Acta Pædiatr 2000; 89 Suppl 434: 37–42. Stockholm. ISSN 0803–5326
*Hopkins, Juliet (2008) Infant-parent psychotherapy. Selma Fraiberg's contribution to understanding the past in the present. In: "What Can the Matter Be?" Therapeutic Interventions with Parents, Infants and Young Children. The Tavistock Clinic Series . Karnac Books, London, pp. 54-66. 
* Deborah J. Weatherston PhD (2001) Infant Mental Health,
Psychoanalytic Social Work, 8:1, 43-74, DOI:
10.1300/J032v08n01_04
*Shapiro, Vivian (16 October 2007). "Reflections on the Work of Professor Selma Fraiberg". Clinical Social Work Journal 37 (1): 45–55. doi:10.1007/s10615-007-0120-6
*Fraiberg, Selma (1968). "Parallel and Divergent Patterns in Blind and Sighted Infants". The Psychoanalytic Study of the Child 23: 264-300 Ahellmann10 (talk) 14:03, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  References to be used 

message: I will research the personal life of Selma Fraiberg, including her education. Allison.j.morse (talk) 19:29, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Division of Tasks 

message: General comments: You’ve already done some great work to improve this article. There’s still a little bit to go, but you are well on your way to final wrap-up. Ideas and information on Talk page are quite good. It’s time to start putting more of this into the main article.
:See the brochure, Editing Wikipedia Articles on Psychology, 2nd page, Organizing your article/An article on a psychologist.
*Would be nice to add her picture.  Look at other Wikipedia biographical articles (e.g., James J. Gibson )to see how a picture can be added to the infobox. 
Comments on specific sections of the main article follow:
1. Lead-in
*this is good
2. Personal life
*could add more info here
3. Education
*good, but title ‘Academic career’ 
*was the masters degree in SW as far as she went? 
*indicate professional positions that she held after earning Ph.D.
*move publications to Publications
*move last sentence up to Personal life. 
4. Last three sections are empty
*change title of Work/Career Findings to Contributions
*change title of Lasting Contributions/Legacy to Legacy
**make this the final section
J.R. Council (talk) 22:58, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Feedback for Assignment 9 

message: The only part of the article that was plagiarized were parts of the references and a few of the headings. Since the references are in a particular format this can not be changed. As for the headings, since there are only so many ways to write a particular heading I do not think this is something that needs to be changed. Ahellmann10 (talk) 19:38, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Assignment 10 Feedback