Talk:Hasso Plattner

message: This article seems properly documented but still reads like a hagiography. Can someone who knows something, describe his career and, possibly, cut down on the adulation? Tapered (talk) 23:55, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Hagiography

message: Can we please add the missing citations in this article? 
Under Philanthropy: Plattner donated six million euros towards the prevention of HIV/AIDS. Founder of SAP AG : Hasso Plattner , Technologers, 26 April 2014
Under Philanthropy: Plattner signed The Giving Pledge in February 2013.The Giving Pledge Goes Global -- Warren Buffett Details America's Latest 'Export' , Forbes, 18 February 2013
Under Commitment to Education: The same university named him an honorary senator in 1998. Verleihung der Würde eines Ehrensenators , Saarland University, January, 1999
Under Commitment to Education: It might be more clear if the term “lion’s share” were omitted. Instead, please consider the following:
Starting in 2015, Hasso Plattner Ventures became the “umbrella brand” for all direct investments made by Hasso Plattner. About Us , Hasso Plattner Ventures
Harper70 (talk) 21:49, 3 November 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: I have added the reference #3 to the university site, thank you. But I agree with the teahouse advice here, regarding the other sources. Even if some of the claims are not that controversial, it would be better to look for more independent or more in-depth sources for them (imo). GermanJoe (talk) 14:18, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Addition of Citations

message: In 2015, Hasso Plattner published a book, co-written with Bernd Leukert, member of the Executive Board of SAP SE, called “The In-Memory Revolution: How SAP HANA Enables Business of the Future,” which describes the capabilities of the SAP HANA technology.SAPPHIRE 2015: Hasso Hails Applications Explosion on HANA , ComputerWeekly 8 May 2015
Harper70 (talk) 14:56, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Hello, , I've taken a look at your proposed edit. At this time though, I can't really support adding it as the book doesn't seem particularly notable. You might request that other users weigh in by visiting Wikipedia:Requests for comment (be sure to read the instructions before editing). --Non-Dropframe talk 17:05, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Agree with the above, marking this as . ---- Patar knight - chat/contributions 02:48, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Book

message: Since this article requires better sources and citations, I’ve provided the below:
Under Philanthropy, could we please add these citations in regards to his work for HIV/AIDS charities: Hasso Plattner Förderstiftung gGmbH , Museum Barberini Potsdam and Forbes Profile on Hasso Plattner , Forbes, 21 December 2015
Also under Philanthropy, could we please add this citation regarding The Giving Pledge: Eye on the Giving Pledge: Profiles: Hasso Plattner , GlassPockets
Under Commitment to Education, in reference to the HPV Africa Fund, please consider either or both of these citations: The Philosophy of a Venture Capitalist , Ulrike Reinhard and SponsorPay raises $5M from Hasso Plattner Ventures and Team Europe Ventures , Develop, 9 June 2010
Thank you. Harper70 (talk) 19:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Adding Stronger Citations 

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