Talk:Jaffa riots

message: Thinking of adding the clean up tag for this article, thoughts? Red1 08:09, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It doesn't really need it, although a minor copyedit should take care of any problems. —Viriditas | Talk 08:44, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Clean up tag?

message: I am failing this article this time, unfortunately, because of several, very important issues:
# The article refers to only three sources, onyl one of which is an inline source. This is a major problem, and I do not feel confident that the article will pass GA without at least 5 more references.
# The lead is much too short for an article of this size, and needs to be expanded to summarise the whole article properly. 
# I think a general cleanup and improvement of prose might be required. Please not that this is a minor problem, and it is bordering in this regard. I'm not surprised however, that a cleanup tag is on this article.
# While not an official criteria, it would be nice if this article had a couple of images. Not imperative, but would perhaps even tidy the text up a little.
Good luck in regards to improvements to this article. Any questions regarding my decision should be forwarded to my talk page. Thanks, and best of luck! Anonymous DissidentTalk 13:52, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA Review 

message: The first paragraph describe 'Riots' and 'Killing' in Palestine, as it was regular civil war. However, the article itself give report of Arabs attack Jews, when Jews with the British police use self-defence against the attackers, so 49 Arab attakers were killed. It is POV to describe the riots as just riots without mentioning that there was one side of attackers, and one side who use only self-defence. Netanel h (talk) 12:24, 8 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: POV

message: Why on earth are the Jaffa riots placed under the "Anti-Jewish pogroms by Muslims" section? All official bodies of investigation agreed that the riots were a spontaneous affair—the result of a volatile political situation, not a desire to kill Jews. The word "pogrom" is far too loaded to be used with such a nuanced topic. Same for "ethnic cleansing."  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.228.59.220 (talk) 16:10, 1 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sections? 

message: Report of the Jaffa district governor, 9/5/1921, 7:15 pm:
:41 dead Jews: 38 in Jaffa, 3 in Petach Tikva
:42 dead Arabs Muslims: 11 in Jaffa, 14 in Petach Tikva, 14 in Yahoudieh, 3 in Rehovoth
:2 dead Arab Christians: 2 in Jaffa
:243 wounded Jews
:130 wounded Arabs
Report on women and children:
:1 Jewish woman and 1 Arab woman killed. 10 Jewish women and 2 Arab women wounded. 1 Jewish child and 1 Arab child killed. No Jewish child and 2 Arab children wounded.
Summary on the night of May 3rd:
:30 Jews brought in dead, 4 died in hospital, 143 wounded and hospitalized, 77 wounded, treated and discharged (total: 34 dead, 220 wounded)
:14 Arabs brought in dead, 2 died in hospital, 42 wounded and hospitalized, 47 wounded, treated and discharged (total 16 dead, 89 wounded)
Of the 47 Jewish victims:
* 42 were commemorated in the mass grave in the Trumpeldor Cemetery: 38 identified bodies, 1 unidentified body and 3 missing persons (2 of whom are also commemorated in the Garden of the Missing in Action). Another 3 casualties who were killed in separate attacks in June and July were laid to rest in the same grave
* 4 were buried in Segula cemetery.
* 1 was buried in Mount Scopus.
The man buried in Jerusalem, as well as one of those in Tel Aviv, died in hospital a few weeks after the attack. --ארינמל (talk) 09:55, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Casualties