Talk:The Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism

message: (moved some chatter to another section JoeHenzi (talk) 02:44, 18 November 2010 (UTC)

message: I added this section in here but I think the style might contrast a bit with the main article. I think the points are valid, especially the comparison with Igantius. I welcome anyone else here adding to or clarifying my edit. 
::Another theory is that O'Brian is sociopathic in nature. The average moral person holds great store in the idea of the truth and the idea that there is an objective reality. O'Brian, if he is a sociopath, has no special affection for "truth" since what is important to him is his place and position within the Party. The idea of an objective reality would be no more important to him than the preservation of works of art from the prior society. This makes the character all the more horrific to the reader since one assumes there is an intrinsic value in truth and O'Brian, as an intellectual, should appreciate it. No doublethink occurs with O'Brian since there is never the internal conflict between those opposing ideas in the first place. [Ignatius_of_Loyola], founder of the [Jesuits], was a Catholic proponent of doublethink. In his own words: "I will believe that the white that I see is black if the hierarchical Church so defines it."
--72.144.27.94 21:29, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: O'Brian, maybe a sociopath?

message: It should be noted that the year is repeatedly stated to be 1984 in the Newspeak Appendix as well, and this appendix clearly reflects the omniscience of the author rather than the limited perspective of his protagonist.
::"since the present is supposed to be 1984, the implication is that the war began at the end of the fifties -- and to make room for the "decade of confused fighting", Oceania and Eurasia must have come into being virtually immediately after Orwell published his novel in 1949"
:::But it's also mentioned that the date may or may not actually be 1984. It's 1984 according to the Party story, but that's all we know.
::::Since Winston has memories of a revolution during the the late fifties, and is apparently middle-aged, the date seems within the realm of credibility. -Peter
(Moved these here from top of talk page JoeHenzi (talk) 02:44, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Present = 1984? 

message: Although a valid and interesting section, this appears to be original research, along with other bits and pieces throughout the article. Can anybody come up with some reputable sources? Failing that I may do some pruning...Tellkel 17:41, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: War & Peace: an interesting sidenote

message: Is indeed The Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism, stated with the story.  The page should be moved and name adjusted so as to denotate that title. --Chr.K. 20:08, 28 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed.  If we have a title, the article should be located there. -Elmer Clark 02:19, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Book's name... 

message: We really need sources for any analysis of the text or inferences drawn from it; otherwise, we are carrying out original research. Johnleemk | Talk 09:05, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Referencing 

message: Could it be that O'brien was merely lying and that Goldstein, the Brotherhood, and the Book are both real (within the story, of course). The Inner Party might have set up a psuedo-Brotherhood to ensnare potential recruits for the actual Brotherhood. When he told Winston Smith that he was part of a commitee that wrote the book, he could just be taking credit for the book to break Smith's hope.70.172.198.145 06:25, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: If so, then Winston will never know.  In any case, the "Goldstein" seen in the Two-Minute's Hate videos is definitely not the real Goldstein... AnonMoos (talk) 14:50, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Alternative Theory on the Origin of the book 

message: This article was a pleasure to read. Thanks all for the great work. wilymage 22:55, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Funny, because I came to this talk page, against my better judgement, to say just that - and this is three years later. Wikipedia, this is one of your/our finer articles. Most importantly because it simply states the ideas behind the book-in-the-book and some of the book's ideas in a manner which doesn't dispute them, but uses the language it should (i.e.; it's not stating that any of the political theory therein is sound or not - it just states it). JoeHenzi (talk) 02:49, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fantastic article 

message: It is interesting to note that the external link at the end of the page leads to a site which expands on some of the missing chapters originally cited by Orwell's [i]Nineteen Eighty-Four[/i] to have been written by Goldstein in his book. This expansion is however not the work of Orwell himself, but the creative construct of another author in much the same style. These expansions include the written analysis of the party slogan "Freedom is Slavery" as well as the addition of 2 other chapters not originally in [i]Nineteen Eighty-Four[/i]. It is a very interesting read and a fruitful effort on the analysis and expansion of The Party's theories and Orwell's ideas.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.79.41.152 (talk) 03:54, 2 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It's a good read though.  Let's keep it around, even if not in the article. --John Moser (talk) 03:10, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Later Chapters 

message: No citations, tons of speculation, much better than most wikipedia articles because of it.P4k (talk) 04:38, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  this article is a masterpiece of OR 

message: I've removed speculation to the effect that the title of this fictional book might be based on the similar title of a book on bolshevism by Bertrand Russell.  While that isn't implausible, the speculation is unsourced and as such, has the appearance of original research. --Anticipation of a New Lover's Arrival, The 08:39, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Russell

message: i'm removing the link to the "chapters 1-5" of the "book". it doesn't seem that fanfic belongs in the article, and particularly not in this case where the substance of the additions are in such stark contrast with the work which it is building over. and it's amateurishly written. it's just not worth including.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.178.66.32 (talk) 04:05, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not a "fanfic," it doesn't contain the author as another Sayajin with SSJ38 who was offworld when Frieza blew up the planet. --John Moser (talk) 03:11, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Uh, yes, what John says. Not Bored! is a notable Situationist publication, not some random website, and there is no problem linking to it as long as we do not misrepresent the link as the actual book. the skomorokh 03:21, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  fanfic? 

message: Although it's natural to see three groups in The Book and three groups in Oceania's society and link them, there's no reason to assume the Outer Party is analogous to Goldstein's "Middle".  As Goldstein describes it, the Middle is engaged in a perpetual struggle to displace the High, even occasionally recruiting the Low to that end,  The Outer Party, in contrast, consists of stooges doing the bureaucratic gruntwork of Ingsoc.  Any sufficiently ambitious member of the Outer Party is promoted, neutralizing them, and the occasional Prole who could prove troublesome is quietly eliminated.  The practice of the Inner Party is not to allow the formation of a new Middle. 24.202.251.225 (talk) 04:17, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Outer Party = Middle? 

message: It seems to me that nearly all of the section "The True Authorship" is original research. Unless someone has an objection, I'm going to remove the section. Mr. Granger (talk) 02:55, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Original Research? 

message: I've noticed that notably, the description of Chapter 3 does not mention Orville's view of war as a sanity device. The chapter itself describes how under normal circumstances, war prevents a society from completely detaching itself from reality -- delusions that impair military efficiency will inevitably lead to military defeat and a harsh end to such delusions -- and how eternal war eliminates the need for military efficiency and therefore the need for any attachment or perception of reality. This article's description of the chapter fails to mention such stuff. The omission is understandable, however -- the description is quite lengthy, and much of it is quoted verbatim from the source material, so it would make sense to leave such a point out for the sake of brevity. 68.48.239.52 (talk) 23:15, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Chapter 3 description doesn't mention war as sanity device 

message: I introduced a few secondary sources to the article, but it's still lacking.  Honestly, I wasn't even intending on editing this page, but I found enough promising results from a few casual searches that it seemed like an easy enough undertaking.  Well, it wasn't.  It's time consuming to read through literary analysis, paraphrase and convert it to the plain language of an encyclopedia, and try to maintain the same amount of coverage such that I'm no longer worried that someone will revert my edits with an edit summary like "the old version was more informative".  Yes, it was rather informative, but it was original research.
Once I've had a bit of a rest and edited a few mindless pop culture articles, I may return and try to add more sources.  I'm aware that the article is rather heavily biased toward a single source right now (the Ian Slater book).  However, rather generous sections of the book are available on Google Books, and it's well written.  I suggest doing a Google Books search on "oligarchical collectivism", which is how I found the sources that I added. NinjaRobotPirate (talk) 14:25, 12 February 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: "Once I've had a bit of a rest and edited a few mindless pop culture articles" so I'm not the only person who does this to relax Btljs (talk) 20:39, 3 September 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Secondary sources 

message: I recently spotted the existing of a 334 pages old French book printed in 1948 and titled "Theorie et pratique du collectivisme oligarchique" (Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism), which would be the translation of a Russian book by "J. B. E. Goldstein" published in 1944. Does this ring a bell, anyone? LouisFarget (talk) 01:16, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: The whole thing reeks 'fake' to me. It's way too neat - written by the same author and published in 1948? It even has the 'Ignorance is Strength' slogan. Can someone confirm? Btljs (talk) 07:12, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: "The recent discovery of a copy in French of this book, bearing the date 1944, in Belgium, seems to have proved them right. For it bears the title Theory and Practice of Oligarchic Collectivism , and its edition is dated 1944, that is to say a few short years before George Orwell began to write on paper the first lines of 1984 . And in addition, it is signed JBE Goldstein." (Google translation of the promotional text)  That said I agree that it feels like one of those "gag" books (like the copies of the Necronomicon that are floating around]).--2606:A000:7D44:100:3C20:A360:4BFB:96FC (talk) 14:07, 26 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Who is "J. B. E. Goldstein"? 

message: ; Dear Colleague Coretheapple
Please, be specific and give examples (section, subsection, paragraph, line) of where my editorial contributions constitute original research. The encyclopaedic presentation is according to the facts already in the article.
If you might, let me know, in the article's talk page.
;Regards
Chas. Caltrop (talk) 23:33, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: The entire article is a dense word stew. Is that specific enough for you? It requires a complete rewrite to bring to Wikipedia standards. Coretheapple (talk) 23:37, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: To be frank, original research is probably the least of this article's sins. If an article is otherwise written decently and has OR that is not a terrible thing. It can be tagged or fixed. The  primary fault of this article is that its writing is horrible. So please forgive me if I can't be more helpful on the point you wish me to address, dear colleague. Coretheapple (talk) 00:18, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

text: The article was pretty well-sourced before Chas Caltrop's edits. NinjaRobotPirate (talk) 05:01, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: NinjaRobotPirate Yep, you're right. I didn't check the history. Then I would suggest rolling back to a prior version may be the best solution. Also I see that the previous versions cure the stylistic and writing issues I am seeing currently.  Coretheapple (talk) 16:13, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

text: Str1977 I see you're actively working to improve this dog's breakfast of an article. Do you concur that a rollback to a prior version  may be a good way of commencing a cleanup of the article? Coretheapple (talk) 16:17, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Let's put it that way: I would not object but the rolled-back version would need a lot of work. Frankly, the opening paragraph in the earlier of these two versions reads terrible. Str1977 (talk) 16:25, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree. Is this any better?  Perhaps the solution is to roll back to some earlier version (I am not sure which one) and take it from there. Coretheapple (talk) 16:34, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: It varies. Some passages read better but the changes are full of unnecessary, circumstantial wordings and the apparent wish to pack as much information as possible in every single sentence (even if that means e.g. we get more than enough info about Trotsky, sometimes over and over again). Str1977 (talk) 16:41, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: PS. I misunderstood your reference to "this". In the version you linked to the first paragraph is an improvement while the second has POV issues. Goldstein's depiction by the Party as well as the Book's description by rumours are portrayed as facts. Str1977 (talk) 16:47, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: The bottom line is that this article is a gawdawful mess and needs a total rewrite. Whatever is necessary I will support. Coretheapple (talk) 17:18, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

text: I  stumbled upon this article after editing the one on a film adaptation, and was appalled by the opacity of the writing. I am not a subject matter expert but I know mush when I see it. As a reader I found this article totally unhelpful. Coretheapple (talk) 17:21, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  OR in the article The Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism