Talk:Large Animal Games

message: Heya. This article uses a lot of un-neutral (POV) language that needs to be removed. Descriptors like "talented, lucky enough, hard-working..." are not encyclopedic, and show a Point of View. Wikipedia entries are written from a neutral perspective. Please read Wikipedia:Neutral point of view carefully. Also, it has a lot of red links. If there are more red links than blue links, I'd remove them until some article stubs are written, or determine which links should lead to a quality article. Also, it uses first-person which is not encyclopedic. It should avoid words like "we've". If you are part of this venture, please read the policy regarding conflict of interest at WP:COI. - superβεεcat  18:34, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've made changes. The POV stuff occurred because I copied parts of the description from the company's own page. I think now it looks like more like "just the facts." As a user, I wouldn't fall inline with the COI policy. ~saldb — Preceding unsigned comment added by Saldb (talk • contribs) 19:06, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: anytime! Lemmie know if you need help. Also, please sign your posts with four tildes (~~~~) Also, please don't remove previous talk comments, it helps if the history is intact! - superβεεcat  19:07, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

text: Also, you never should copy anything directly, but use resources to form an article (citing your sources). A webpage by the company isn't usually a reliable resource, it's best to research reliable secondary sources and cite them (see WP:N). Cheers! - superβεεcat  19:09, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for the help. I'll make a change Saldb 19:13, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  COI, Cleanup 

message: Can someone help me move this page over to its redirect large animal games? Saldb 21:15, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Move 

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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Largeanimal logo.jpg