Talk:Beer garden

message: To me it sounds as if the introduction ("A beer garden is an open-air area where alcohol is legally served...") implies that serving alcohol in public is otherwise illegal, which is not true. If however this part means that a permit for serving beer is required then it would be redundant or at least too specific.
I am not sure if it is just me or if some rewording may be required here. Any thoughts? 
Furthermore, I would like to suggest that the introduction explains the origin of the name, namely that it is derieved from "Biergarten". I think that this piece of information is important enough to be incorporated into the introduction.
PhalphalakTalk 20:17, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. Good catch of yours. --Floridianed (talk) 20:54, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Introduction 

message: This article is in dire need of a grammar check ! Could someone please take a look at it ? I have tried to fix quite a lot, but I fear that I couldn't fix everything, especially since several elements of the brewing process are unclear to me. Alrik Fassbauer (talk) 14:52, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Grammar 

message: Regarding the sentence: The kettle was heated to the extreme during the brewing process, which resulted in the 16th Century to an accumulation of fires in breweries.
I find the phrase, "an accumulation of fires," to be somewhat awkward, and offer up these alternatives:  
*The kettle was heated to the extreme during the brewing process, which resulted in there being numerous fires in breweries during the 16th Century.
* The brewing process involved heating the kettle to the extreme, which was the proximate cause of many fires in 16th Century breweries.
* The brewing process involved heating the kettle to the extreme, which resulted in there being too many fires in 16th Century breweries.
My elderly grandfather used to say he was "going to the beer garden" rather, very likely, "going to the biergarten" in the 1960's when I was a kid.  Grandparents did not allow German to be spoken in the house when my parents grew up, because of Germany's wrong-way involvement in two world wars, therefore I do not know much of the native language of my ancestors. 
Larry (talk) 23:09, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  History section 

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Why is the spelling beer garden and not Biergarten? I reckon, Biergarten would be the right spelling for English Wikipedia.
--Tecumseh*1301 (talk) 01:56, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Biergarten vs beer garden