Talk:Make It Happen (film)

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message: "Another main criticism was that, except for a few scenes where Lauryn appears with a bare midriff, the film did not contain enough skin." Seriously? Does this sound like a legitimate criticism to anyone who's not a 12-year-old boy? Kumagoro-42 04:01, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: I see that, five years later, this still hasn't been addressed, and it's becoming more and more embarrassing. I'll just go ahead and remove that sentence, let's see if someone can come up with a good argument for establishing "not enough skin" as one of the failings of a film that's not sexploitation or a porn. --Kumagoro-42 (talk) 20:41, 24 May 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  I'm fairly sure I looked at this before and then left it as it was. It is crass but they were likely trying to make the point that most dance films are inherently sexy almost without trying, and unlike other dance films such as Flashdance or Step Up (film) or even Honey (2003 film) which might tempt a wider audience to take a look, there is nothing for anyone other than the primary target audience to watch it. Dance films are primarily aspirational films for teenage girls but others end up watching them too (boyfriends, brothers, fathers, etc.) and sometimes they are worth a look if there's nothing else (Save the Last Dance). MSN would not be be my top choice for notable film critics in any case. The Rotten Tomatoes summary makes a similarly crass comparison already so it's redundant anyway. It is fair enough that you removed it, but I looked it again anyway, just in case maybe I could rephrase it into something meaningful or salvage something from the review but the Archive copy of the review was dead too (I checked several archive versions, all permanently dead links). So it's dead and gone, good riddance. -- 109.79.161.25 (talk) 03:02, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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