Talk:Dartmouth College fraternities and sororities

message: The sections on every active house seem very much like they are written by members of said house, active or otherwise, with varying degrees of information provided about each house. I do not understand the relevance of including updates to the status of the bathroom renovations in Bones Gate, nor does it seem verifiable that the sisters of Kappa Delta have “one of the strongest sisterhoods on Dartmouth College campus.” 129.170.195.216 (talk) 21:58, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV 

message: Large portions of this article featured double spaces after periods (.). This has been changed. 
A sentence in the section on Bones Gate read “The brothers of Bones Gate strive to live by their credo of welcoming friends to their house.” Given that this claim is more or less impossible to substantiate, it has been removed. 
A paragraph in the section on Sigma Phi Epsilon that was, almost in its entirety, a summary of the national organisation’s “Balanced Man Program,” has been removed (probably WP:NPOV). 
Clunky wording vis-à-vis David Benioff’s “now [when?] producing Lovecraft [what does this mean] has been removed.
The introductory sentence for Zeta Psi seems to be trying to draw a link between the house’s “central location” on frat row and its status as the fifth house founded on campus. Given that the oldest house on campus, Psi U, is decidedly not on Webster Ave (nor were Phi Gamma Delta or Delta Kappa Epsilon, two long-defunct fraternities predating Zeta Psi) this analysis is tendentious at best (WP:NOR), and has thus been revised. An unsubstantiated (and likely outdated) paragraph about Zete’s philanthropic endeavours has also been removed. 
Alpha Kappa Alpha is active as of 2023, and a citation has been added to reflect this. 
Kappa Delta could very well have “one of the strongest sisterhoods on Dartmouth College campus,” but this statement has been removed (WP:NPOV). 
Large portions of the section on Kappa Kappa Gamma are attributed to one citation which houses a dead link. Thankfully, the citation includes an archived version of the website, but said archived version contains none of the information present in the sentences citing it. These sentences have been removed. 
References to “coeducational fraternities” in the introduction to the section on gender-inclusive Greek houses have been replaced with “gender inclusive (Greek) house.” 
More to come...
CongealedBox (talk) 23:15, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rationale for edits 30 Nov 2023 

message: :The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The result of the move request was: not moved. (non-admin closure) Kiwiz1338 (talk) 05:45, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Dartmouth College fraternities and sororities →  – This is technically a request for a reversion. I recognise that  gave this page its current name as (I'm assuming) part of the fraternities and sororities WikiProject, but this new name does sort of obscure the fact that Dartmouth houses three gender-inclusive Greek houses that do not refer to themselves as fraternities and sororities. The article itself uses "Greek organization" as an umbrella term quite liberally, anyway. CongealedBox (talk) 03:05, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested move 1 December 2023