Talk:Steeles, Toronto

message: In order to be proactive and prevent a possible edit war, I wanted to start a discussion about this template, specifically regarding its placement in this article. The template is not yet on every single Toronto neighbourhood article (something I'm working on, slowly), but all the articles it does appear in has it at a uniform location, below the final section on the page (usually External links) (see Bathurst Manor, Bedford Park, Toronto or Garden District, Toronto for examples). I originally moved the template to appear in the same location on this article, but it has now been moved back to it's previous location, in the middle of the article. My suggestion would be to move it back, to be uniform with the other articles. Thoughts? –Dvandersluis 22:22, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Toronto Neighbourhood Geography template

message: I just added two citations to the "Economy" section, but I accidentally published my changes before I added an edit summary. Here's the diff: . I am just notifying anyone who thinks my edit is confusing since it doesn't have an edit summary here. I provided the diff so that you can see what I did. Thank you. Friend505 12:54, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , under Preferences > Editing there's a setting that will prompt you if you don't enter an edit summary. I keep it turned on. —valereee (talk) 12:58, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  Thank you so much, Valereee! I have already enabled the setting. Thanks! I just tested it when I was posting this reply to you, and it works. Now that I've already tested it, I am going to reply to you. Thanks! Friend505 13:02, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  Hi, Valereee! I just want to make a comment. I think the "History" section of the article used to be a copyright violation of the toronto.com source, since I find in this edit,  removed content that was basically just a copy of content from the toronto.com source that I found. So I think that we were plagiarizing toronto.com, instead of toronto.com plagiarizing us. Friend505 14:24, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, I'm sure it was copied from the Adler article, parts of which are currently being used on Toronto.com. —valereee (talk) 15:50, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sorry, I accidentally didn't add an edit summary 

message: Hi, Valereee! I have already finished sprucing up the article by adding citations. Please review my citations. Note: I have already removed the "Unreferenced section" templates for the sections that I have worked on, and I have removed the unreferenced template for the entire article. Thank you. Friend505 23:02, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I changed Kennedy Road to a redirect because redirects can be useful -- for instance, if you install User:Anomie/linkclassifier#Legend, it lets you see more than just redlinks and blue links. When I see a link is green, I know it's a redirect, and I can check to see if it's notable enough that it might need to have an article written. (Linkclassifier would also have let you see immediately that you'd added a link to a disambiguation page, as it puts a yellow highlight behind links to dab pages.) —valereee (talk) 14:05, 16 August 2020 (UTC)

text: I guess you're talking about the age distribution of the neighbourhood of Steeles. I actually think that that's the most important part of "demographics". The major focus of demographics, according to my view, is not the distribution of ethnic groups; it's about age group distribution. I think we need to include this information. I would like to hear your opinion. Thank you. Friend505 17:53, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: However, I'm not opposing the inclusion of the ethnicity information. In fact, I think that both the ethnicity information and the age distribution information. Friend505 17:58, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm not sure ethnicity is important, either. I think we need to include population and number of households, and I think it might be important to include things that are very different from the rest of Toronto, such as the number of people for whom English is not their native language and which those first languages are. This is a neighborhood where many, many people are immigrants or first-generation, and that is IMO an important detail that is not evident from this article. Why don't you rewrite that section based on what you think is probably important for people who don't know the area need to know about it? —valereee (talk) 18:03, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  But you need to admit that in the neighbourhood of Steeles, 91% are ethnic minorities, compared with the City of Toronto 51%. So, I think we should simply summarize the ethnicity stuff by saying that "Ethnic minorities represent 91% of the population of Steeles." in the demographics section. P.S. Thanks for your speedy response. From the "Revision history", you can see that I was removing the sectional link when you had already replied to me. Thanks! Friend505 18:21, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , I think we could say that, plus the fact the vast majority are from China or Hong Kong. I don't think it probably matters that x% are East Indian. —valereee (talk) 19:36, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Finished 

message: Friend505, nd here's a puzzle for you: I accidentally introduced an error with this edit. Can you spot it? It has to do with me being from the US. —valereee (talk) 15:21, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I spotted it. I just went on a car ride so I couldn't see your messages. Anyways, I'll help you to spell it in the Canadian spelling. Thanks! Friend505 17:38, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I spotted 4 more places where the American spelling was put in. I changed them to the Canadian spelling. Friend505 17:41, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Well spotted. :) Notice that it always is going to depend on two things: the article itself, and the creator of that article. If the article subject is inherently Canadian (which of course this one is), we go with Canadian English throughout. If there's no inherent country connection, the spelling chosen by the original creator is the one we use. Policy is at MOS:ENGVAR. —valereee (talk) 17:58, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  I agree with you, Valereee. P.S. Please take a look at the "Finished" section above. Thank you. Friend505 18:03, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  error 

message: Hi, Valereee! I've made the Demographics section better. Please take a look. Also, the citation at the end of the paragraph is supposed to apply to the entire paragraph, so I put it at the end of the last sentence. Is that appropriate, or do I need to put that same citation there for each sentence in the paragraph section? Thanks! Friend505 14:55, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , I think it's starting to look pretty good! So, based on your knowledge of the area, are there any glaring omissions? Is there anything about the area that isn't mentioned but should be? —valereee (talk) 17:11, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  Do you think we need to include information about the Toronto Public Libray Steeles branch, located at 375 Bamburgh Circle, in the Bamburgh Gardens Shopping Plaza? I think we can mention it as a local library in the area. We can provide a link for List of Toronto Public Library branches. Do you think we need to include it? If you want to learn more information about it, you can take a look at the table provided in my article link, where there is a table entry for "Steeles". You can also visit the website of the TPL here: . Thanks! Friend505 18:19, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , you could add it. —valereee (talk) 18:32, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  Then where should I add it? In the part before the History section? Thanks! Friend505 14:57, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I think I'd add it in either education or recreation —valereee (talk) 22:38, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  Well, I was considering adding it as a sub-section in the Education section but you didn't leave a reply at the time when I added the information, so I created a new section here. Do you think it is appropriate? If not, feel free to move it as a sub-section into the "Education" section. If you had used the user mentioning template, I probably would have saw it on time and put it directly into the "Education" section. However, I don't think putting it into the Recreation section would be good. Thanks! Friend505 22:53, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I have moved the Public library system section to the Education section, where I have placed it as a sub-section. Friend505 00:36, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: That's fine. I think you may have done as much as you can. This article will now appear on your watchlist. Your watchlist is something you should check every day to see if any of the articles you're most familiar with have been edited. You can check those edits to make sure they're not vandalism. If you find clear vandalism on one of the pages you're watchlisting, revert it with an edit summary explaining that you feel the edit represented vandalism, and ping me to come take a look. If you find what you think might be vandalism but you aren't sure, ping me and I'll come take a look. —valereee (talk) 12:52, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  OK, thanks, Valereee! The article is in my watchlist. I will move on to other articles that need improvement. Thanks! Friend505 14:04, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Demographics" section