Talk:Plantago lanceolata

message: The article has a lot of good content! However, I think it would help to get a bit more specific on certain genes that have been found to confer resistance or discuss which strains of P. lanceolata display resistant phenotypes. It would also be helpful to mention the specific pathogen to which the plant is resistant to in that section. Some of the section also need a bit of clarification as well. While reading, I noticed a lot of crossover and did my best to rearrange. The sources that have been used for this article seem to be reputable and varied making the article more credible. Salenrs (talk)
Overall, the article is very well-structured, especially noting that it was built from scratch. I think one important thing to note is the fact that while there mention of the sixteen different phenotypes that are present in the population, which phenotypes are the most common resistance phenotypes. In addition, there should be additional information listed about the genotypes at the molecular level which would allow for a better understanding of the resistance pathway to any pathogen. You can take a look at this website to provide some references that relate to the Plantago lanceolata: http://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00442-004-1603-6.
I think there should also be some clarification for the Environment subheading, as the sentences do not flow well together. The ideas seem jumbled together, leading to confusion for the reader. It would be beneficial if all of the sentences flowed well and moved from one point to the next. However, the entire article seems very well put together! Fireblade7869 (talk)Fireblade7869  —Preceding undated comment added 02:17, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Article Adjustments

message: After reading other comments that classmates have made, I realized that this article was created from nothing!  Since that is the case, this article has done fairly well!  The information under "Reproduction" ties well into our classroom discussion with reproduction, so good job!  The information under the last two sections is where I think the article could use the most work.  I changed some of it for grammatical errors, but there were some sentences that I didn't understand, and there was one sentence that was repeated in the post-infection section.  I think you did a good job following the comments about narrowing down the phenotypes.  Good job! Anon330 (talk) 20:50, 15 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  2nd edits 

message: Hi, I found this article during my research on Melitaea cinxia (a butterfly) for an ecology class, and added a section here on insect predation since this plant is a food source for the caterpillars. I moved the powdery mildew sections under a larger heading titled "Enemies." I also added "Insect Predation" section under that heading since the three sections seemed to fit well together. I added some information about butterflies/moths that lay their eggs on this plant as a food source for when they hatch as caterpillars. Here I linked my article on the Glanville fritillary (Melitaea cinxia) and added two new sources to support the information I added. Cool article!
Mullenm05 (talk) 19:37, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Added Subsection 

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message: The first paragraph of the In Popular Culture section contains two sources, at least one of which is easily WP:SELFPUB as it is a post on a personal blog. I'm not sure about the Dave's Garden source so I won't touch it. UltrasonicMadness (talk) 20:15, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Self-published source