Talk:2005 ACC Championship Game

message: Congratulations; this article meets the requirements of a good article! My goal for this review is to be a thorough as possible, and I’ve broken the review into three sections; initial comments, assessment, and suggestions.
Initial comments:
*Extremely well-written and engaging prose; everything you could possible want to know about the game is probably in the article; bravo!
*The most important part, the references, are detailed and spot-on
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#It is broad in its coverage.
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While there aren’t any issues that prevent this article from meeting GA requirements, there are several minor issues or ideas that could help enhance the article.
Suggestions for future improvement:
*In the second paragraph of the introduction, it says, “Against fifth-ranked Miami on Thursday night, however, Tech suffered its first defeat….” Instead of listing the day of the week that the game was played on, it makes more sense to include the Month and number day (like March 25, for example).
*Concerning the included photo of Marcus Vick, please consider changing the caption to note the picture was not actually taken during the 2005 ACC Championship, as done in the caption for the Drew Weatherford picture
*The second sentence of the third introduction paragraph uses the word “game” three times; consider replacing one of those instantces with a word like “contest” to decrease the repetition.
*Wikilinks to North Carolina State and Clemson in the third paragraph of the intro might be useful to the reader, as would wikilinks to the Atlantic and Coastal Divisions mentioned even earlier in the intro
*Under the “Defensive Matchups” section, the part about Florida State seems short on info compared to the Virginia Tech section. If you could find it, it would be cool to include Florida State’s national rank in pass defense or another related stat, and it would be an easy opportunity to compare their rankings in similar categories.
*With so many great references, maybe you could pull out a quote from one of the players or coaches and incorporate it into the article using a quote box
*Wikilink the first mention of Marcus Vick in the article, which occurs in the Virginia Tech part of the “Selection Process” section. In general, it’s not a bad idea to wikilink the first mention of a person/place/thing of interest in the article, as the reader coming across it for the first time might want more info on the subject when they first encounter it. Wikilinking a subject after the first instance it’s mention is much less important.
*To begin the fourth paragraph of the “Fourth Quarter" section, it says, “By this point in the game, Florida State was fully committed to running down the , executing….” It appears the word “clock” needs to be inserted before the comma.
For anyone else reading this review, please consider reviewing an article or two at GAN to help with our current backlog of nominations. Thanks for your contribution to Wikipedia thus far, and good luck with this article in the future! Monowi Monowi (talk) 06:32, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA Review 

message: I have been asked to review this article by JKBrooks85 because I know nothing at all about American Football. My brief is to check for clarity to a complete outsider.
*Lead:
**I had to click the link to discover that Miami were the Hurricanes. I suggest changing the Miami link to read Miami Hurricanes.
***Changed.
**The meanwhile isn't needed here, nor later on.
***Removed.
**The link to Atlantic division schedule doesn't help me to understand, is there a better one?
***Unfortunately not. The best thing I can do is emphasize the next sentence, which discusses one of those "tough" games.
**I would delete heading into the game.
***Deleted.
**Offence means the offence?
***Yes. Clarified.
**Run out the clock. This is the biggest problem for me in understanding the article. The term renders the subsequent Game summary section very difficult to follow. Could do with have a footnote or a link about the clock rule.?
***Rewrote running out the clock and wikilinked.
*Selection process
**The first occurrence of NCAA is not linked, but the second occurrence is. And could the first occurrence be spelled out?
***Done.
**Heading into means at the start?
***Replaced.
**just 35 total yards it's the total that is lost on me.
***Wikilinked.
**beating the Yellow Jackets same problem as with Miami in the Lead. I didn't know that Georgia Tech and the Yellow Jackets are the same team. I had to look it up. (And, I see that Miami is linked better here).
***Fixed ... I think.
**Does stumbled have a precise meaning in this sport?
***Rewrote to eliminate "stumbled."
**were picked as pre-season favorites to win their division - is picking a favourite a formal part of the game, or were they just the favourites?
***Clarified.
*Pre-game buildup
**the key, means key player?
***Rewrote.
**There is some unhelpful linking here:ranking and an offense that tallied 610 rushing yards -the rushing link helps with understanding offense more than rushing yards.
***Hmm... what would you suggest? I've expanded the link to include rushing yards, not just rushing, but I'm open to suggestions.
**Winningest I had to look this up. A new word from 1972 I see, do you want to cite Webster on-line.?
***Were you able to deduct the meaning, or did you have to refer to the dictionary to understand the sentence? If the former, I'm inclined to leave it in. If the latter, I'd be willing to rewrite the sentence.
*Offensive matchups
This is where all the big problems for me start. More links would help idiots like me: Touchdown, Interception(s), Yardage, Threw for, Ran for, for example. (Oh, I see interception is linked further down). I can't help you very much with this or the next section, because of my ignorance. But I can tell that it would be exciting to read by a reader who knows the game, just by the good prose style.
**Well, thanks for the compliment, at least. I've added a flurry of new links, but if you've got any other ideas, I'd be willing to hear them out. 
*Game summary
Here my problem is with the clock as I noted above: run down the clock, run off the clock. Again, a footnote or link(s) might help.
**Linked down here, too.
*Final stats
**Is fumble a technical term?
*Post game effects
What's a traffic stop?
**Linked.
That's it. 
Please remember that these are suggestions. I am sure that when you were reading the above you were thinking what's wrong with this idiot. :-) Best of luck with the article and best wishes, Graham. --GrahamColmTalk 14:26, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested review 

message: Those links are very helpful, I hope an expert doesn't complain about over-linking, if so I will take all the links out of one of my virus articles and test them. My "problem" now, having spent so much time reading the article, is that I am becoming familiar with  the terminology and  I'm finding it harder to spot the jargon. I see the article was a FAC, but did not garner much interest. Should it return, it will have my support for what it is worth, given my ignorance. Well done. Graham. --GrahamColmTalk 11:58, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Second look-over 

message: Note that these are merely thoughts/suggestions from someone who knows nothing about American football.
*Lead:
**“The game was the concluding contest of the regular season for each team” seems obvious/redundant – of course a championship game is going to be the final game of the season.  At the least, the “for each team” is not necessary.
***It's the final game of the regular season, but each team has a bowl game following the conference championship game, so I can't say that the game is their final one of the season. I've clarified that and removed the "for each team." JKBrooks85 (talk) 09:03, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Preliminary thoughts - Elcobbola 

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*Looks like a very good article but I do have some suggestions:
:#I would suggest the first sentence link to college football rather than American football.  College football is more specific and I think it would be easier for people to navigate from that article to "American football" rather than the opposite. 
**Done.
:#I am concerned about sentences that state what "characterized" the game.  This term is used twice in the lead and neither is referenced.  The second usage is "The first two quarters of the game were characterized by defense and penalties that stifled both teams' offenses." I know references our style guide does not require references in the lead.  However, I continue to think they are good practice because it makes it much easier on the reader to check out a fact.  So, I searched the article to see if a WP:RS was given to back up these being major elements of the first half.  It seems as though the reference for this is the play-by-play reference.  The play-by-play reference, of course, merely reports what happened in a dry, factual way.  It reports the penalties but does not explain whether they are more or less than average.  It reports the scoring (or lack thereof) but does not give a clear indication if a low score is a result of good defense or poor offense, etc.  I think it would be stronger to cite a second source that draws this conclusion about what characterized the game.  This would avoid any argument about the claim being WP:OR.  
:#I suggest refocusing the lead.  Currently, there is a lot of information about the selection process and how the teams ended up facing each other.  I think it could be confusing for a reader unfamiliar with these things.  It is important information for the article, certainly, but I wonder if it could be trimmed in the lead.  Conversely, the Vick story might be of interest to a casual reader and it is not mentioned in the lead at all.
**Done. The lede covers the different portions of the article. I've added the Vick thing to the end and changed a few things.
:#It looks like you have done a good job at linking football terms on first usage but I think a couple have slipped through:  Running back is linked on its 3rd usage, but not its first.  punt return is linked but punt is not.
**Linked.
:#In Final Statistics, there is a "didn't" that should be a "did not" per the WP:MOS. 
**Fixed.
:#I can't find references for the game MVP, attendance, TV station, announcers, or TV rankings.
**Referenced.
:That is from my first read-through.  I think there is enough here to Oppose [for FA] for now.  I'm happy to discuss any of these or to give it a new read if you feel these have been addressed. Johntex\talk 22:17, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
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