Talk:EverQuest II: Rise of Kunark

message: There's a change which removes the discussion about the difficulty in obtaining Epics in EQ1. I think this information is relevant, as it provides a comparison which some players may desire. Methulah 12:22, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Epics

message: I've done a lot of work getting this up to scratch. I think it's one of the better articles for an Everquest expansion yet, so I'm working on making it even better, and hopefully go back and work on some of the others. Methulah 03:41, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Redone

message: Well, this is definitely Start-class. The usual problems which Stub/Start articles have (fair use rationales, reference formatting etc) aren't there, which is great! Nevertheless, there's still some way to go to get this to B-class, but this can easily be attributed to the fact that the game's only been out for a week. Here are some ideas to improve the article:
*You have some good screenshots, but one showing the actual gameplay (interface et al) would be useful.
*The gameplay will be largely the same as EQ2, but it's still a good idea to include a brief overview and a link to EverQuest II#Gameplay. Information on new features could also be merged to this section.
*Try converting the list of zones to paragraphed text, which is nicer to read.
*To make the article easier to navigate, you might want to rename the History of Kunark section to Story and include any other plot details.
*Lead needs expansion per WP:LS: summarise the entire article in three or four paragraphs.
*Per WP:MOS, in-line citation thingies should go after punctuation rather than before. Example: Thus, the remainder of these engineered Sarnak were hidden, believe destroyed by the Iksar and have only just began to emerge[2]. should be ...and have only just began to emerge.[2]
*Any information on the development of the expansion? When was it announced? Was it on show at any big game shows? Were there any slippages in release dates?
*When enough reviews of the game have been released, create a Critical Reception section.
For ideas on the last two points, have a look at some articles at WP:VG#Featured content. Don't hesitate to ask if you have any further questions. Hope this helps, Una LagunaTalk 21:33, 22 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: [[WP:VG]] assessment

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