Talk:Gibb River Road

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thread_title:  External links modified 

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*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080611224906/http://www.thewest.com.au:80/default.aspx?MenuID=85 to http://www.thewest.com.au/default.aspx?MenuID=85&ContentID=69528
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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: This edit adds the statement that "A native title claim ...  known as the Dambimangari claim, the Wilinggin claim was the first to be determined".
Is there one claim or two? Is it the Dambimangari claim or the Wilinggin claim?
I started to rewrite that sentence as:
but I got stuck because of the two different claim names.
Mitch Ames (talk) 12:47, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Hi , yes, it took me ages to work out the whole tangle of that native title claim and who and what all of the terms referred to (which I started because of one article, and ended up digging it all up for a number of related articles). I thought that I'd pop a bit in this article as the Gibb RR is mentioned in one of the claims, but evidently didn't finish it off in a way that made it clear. I have now added more detail in the article as well as a footnote - let me know if you find this comprehensible at first reading. (The sources supply further detail, of course.) Laterthanyouthink (talk) 00:15, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , it's the name of an entity. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 12:40, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: OK. Mitch Ames (talk) 12:47, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

text: So now we still have  
which still doesn't parse correctly. 
Should it be "... originally known as Dambimangari claim..." (then subsequently renamed - and/or split into three, the first of which to settle was Wilinggin)? Would it make more sense if the sentence was split into two shorter sentences? Mitch Ames (talk) 12:54, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, it should have at least had an "In" at the beginning of the sentence to parse correctly... Anyway, I've broken it up and reshuffled a bit. See if you think it makes sense, but feel free to change as you think fit. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 03:40, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Native title claim