Talk:Concierge medicine

message: 9/12/2014 - I spent a long time trying to determine the validity of source#11 which links to a paid PR release website: http://www.prweb.com/releases/2013/5/prweb10734184.htm
My investigation yielded a long and suspect trail of front-ends seemingly solely owned an operated by Michale Tetreault. I can't find any actual, credible information about this alleged "Three Year Analysis of Concierge and Direct Care Medicine Shows Encouraging Signs For Boosting Primary Care In U.S. Economy". The author of the paper clearly has an agenda. I recommend removal of the reference. (I'm new to editing Wikipedia, not really sure what the process is, so I thought I should leave a message here). IdleChris (talk) 23:36, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Advertising Spam

message: I have been reverting edits that discuss Michael Jackson's doctor. These comments tend to reference tabloids, which are not valid sources and approach being libelous. Ref WP:NN. Please don't continue to post these here unless you can provide real evidence (and even then, the discussion really doesn't belong here, it belongs on the doctor's page). --Mpdelbuono (talk) 03:16, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Michael Jackson's Doctor 

message: http://www.doublex.com/section/health-science/ill-stick-long-waits might be a useful source for this article.  It at least has current US numbers in it.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:10, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Possible source

message: This section needs a major cleanup in grammar and punctuation. There are many instances of improper use of single quotes, and random words are in quotes for no particular reason. Some parts should probably be paraphrased instead. There are also some statements that make it sound like original work, such as: "A surprising finding in this study..." and "Surprisingly, concierge physicians..." Surprising to whom?
Adrian (talk) 01:26, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: The entire article could use a rewrite from scratch. A major problem is that most of it was written by persons who seem to be trumpeting their own interests rather than writing a neutral encyclopedic article. It's a shame because the topic is notable and growing. Sbowers3 (talk) 17:29, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
replies: text:  Concur.  I smoothed out a few wrinkles.  But the need for a re-write remains.  75.208.46.40 (talk) 11:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Business Model - Cleanup 

message: Was this written by Qliance, by any chance? It reads like a press release. Rkaufman13 (talk) 21:34, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
replies: text:  The Qliance quote did not materially contribute to the article.  I removed it.  75.208.46.40 (talk) 12:32, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Concierge vs Direct Primary Care 

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message: Concierge medicine plays a role in season 4 of Veronica Mars, where Keith Mars is provided access to it by Clyde Pickett at the expense of Richard Casablancas, presumably in an attempt to bribe Mars.
2A01:4B00:848B:7B00:3285:A9FF:FEF6:24CD (talk) 15:13, 17 October 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  In popular culture: Veronica Mars