Talk:L.A.M.B.

message: I've cleaned up the article so far, although I think that it needs more background information. Therefore, I've added an expand tag. FMB 00:51, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I have tripled the article in size. I have not paid much attention to the language now, as i am collecting material. Luxurious.gaurav 10:17, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I corrected a lot of information and tried to cite sources as much as possible (FancyPantsCity 17:33, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, thanks for that, i will be starting a mega clean-up on the 15th of October. Before that i might only add info and revert wrong things. It has to get to GA by the end of October. Luxurious.gaurav 07:42, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clean-up 

message: I saw your message on WP:FASHION and did an overhaul of the article.  A few remaining concerns: the fashion shows section was kind of weird, and was kind of doing two separate things.  In one sense, fashion shows are a spectacle and a publicity stunt (e.g. bouncing cars, and the comments from the NYFW organizer).  In another, they're just examples of the line's collections and evolving aesthetic.  I might split that up into two sections, with what the clothes look like going into the aesthetics section (which would benefit from an overview of what the clothes look like in general, not just during one specific show) and the cars and that sort of thing going into the promotions section.  I also think you need to work on picking better facts to put in the lead so it flows as a summary.  I cut it down too short but wasn't finished and was going to add more back later.  I think as is it's a bit long considering the article isn't too long to begin with.  I need to get to doing more productive things in real life but good luck finishing cleaning this up! Calliopejen1 15:54, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you so much for you efforts. But i have some questions:-
*I dont think merging "Promotion and Success" and "Critical Reception" is a great idea. They are two different things and need sepreate mention.
*The latest link to Style.com is not a proper link. It's a page which changes everyday. It's completely odd source.
*The lead has to be a proper summary of the article. The lead should not depend on the SIZE of the article. The number of PARAGRAPHS depend on the size of article.
Indianescence 16:09, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  comments after cleanup 

message: Passed, with some suggestions.
*With the external links, you need to give each one a title, explaining what it is (eg. official L.A.M.B. website, etc.)
*There are 2 refs in the lead - these should be moved to elsewhere in the article.
*In the History section, the ref must come directly after the full stop/period, no space in between.  Eg "head designer. [5] Goco later"
*"The bottle of the fragrance." - Could do with a better caption
 Dihydrogen Monoxide 03:55, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA passed 

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message: Some of this article is in past tense with no mention of the business closing. Mystery6666 (talk) 05:35, 19 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mixed tense