Talk:Ryusuke Taguchi

message: I've reviewed the article, here is a quick overview of my findings.
:1. Well written?: no
:2. Factually accurate?: yes
:3. Broad in coverage?: no
:4. Neutral point of view?: no
:5. Article stability? yes
:6. Images?: no
A few comments from someone who’s going through the GA process myself to help you improve the article. 
* Watch out for peacock words such as: famous, notoriously, shockingly, historic. Their specific use should be sourced or removed
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*“by wrestling to 20- minute time limit draws” Do you mean “by wrestling two 20-minute time limit draws”?
** "Wrestling to a draw" is a common phrase.
***Yes but "wrestling to draws" is gramatically wrong it should either be "wrestling two draws" or "to two draws"
*YLC is used without being defined first – first time the “Young Lion’s Cup” is mentioned it should be “Young Lion’s Cup (YLC)” or it should be spelled out. Same with other abbriviations such as NJPW, CMLL, CTU etc.
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* Taguchi continued to compete in CMLL throughout much of 2005, often teaming with fellow New Japan expeditioners Shinsuke Nakamura and Hiroshi Tanahashi, before returning to Japan on October 7, 2005 and wrestling his official return match on October 22, 2005, teaming with Masahito Kakihara to defeat Sangre Azteca & Hirooki Goto. – it’s a rather long, clunky sentence that combines his time in Mexico, his return to Japan and his Japanese debut – should be at least 2 separate sentences.
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* The mention of what title defence it was for the defending challenger to me is a bit irrelevant in this article – it belongs in their articles sure but here it should really only be mentioned if it adds something to the article, as it stands now it’s almost like trivia. 
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* shot at the Junior Heavyweight title on July 6, 2007, again defeating the four-time champion to win his first singles championship. – by “again defeating” do you mean he beat the champion?? That Milano Collection AT was the champion? Unclear what the article is trying to say here
** Clarified.
* A general concern that 29 out of 31 sources are from Strong Style Spirit and that they’re mainly match results, no coverage on Taguchi specifically only mentioned in results. It’d benefit greatly from more varied sources that also talk about the person and not the results.
**I've added his official profile as a general source, but I don't really see the issue if everything in the article is reliable.
***The thing is that's a reliable source for match results yes - but they're not about Taguchi as such, they're about the shows he's been on. I've seen articles that have been deleted for lack of notability because they did not have any secondary sources that were about the subject (the NJPW profile is a primary source since he works for them). Haven't there been any writing about Taguchi himself? Nothing beyond what matches he was in?? Nowhere??
* The article is written almost entirely “in universe”, by wrestling fans, for wrestling fans – for it to be a GA article readers need to be able to read the article without a very deep knowledge of wrestling. It presents everything “in kayfabe” basically. It’s not a Neutral Point of View in that regard.
**I'm unclear as to how this should be done; could you be a bit more specific?
***Well I guess to boil it down this article presents professional wrestling as 100% competitive, it's a "wrestling fan" profile, not an encylopedic entry.
*Since the article is about a person, please add  along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?]
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* There are no pictures, it’s not an automatic reason for not granting GA but it’d be great if one could be found.
* The article only covers his professional career once he turned professional and before that just what sports he played. Are there no personal information on the guy? As it stands it’s not “Broad in coverage” as it’s really only about “Taguchi the wrestler” if you know what I mean?
**I haven't found any notable information about him outside of his career.
***When all your sources are match results I can understand that - but one of the criterias is "broad in coverage" and it's not right now unfortunately. MPJ-DK 18:46, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Good article nomination on hold

message: NIPW seems to have been treating Taguchi Japan as an actual stable lately as opposed to an unofficial partnership. Should there be an article for it?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by The Kip (talk • contribs) 16:20, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Taguchi Japan article?