Talk:Darcy Burner

message: Adding the AFD tag is highly POV. This is a super close race and there is no reason to delete it now.--8bitJake 03:36, 23 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Not POV? I disagree. I live in Missouri. I think anything to do with Maryland has "no interest" for me. If I decide to go after all of the minor articles about Maryland and its politics and politicians, as being of "no interest" to me, I would be rightfully castigated. That being said, this is becoming one of those WP:BLP things that I've learned to avoid like the plague. Partisan sockpuppets have at it! --Quartermaster (talk) 15:31, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

text: With all due respect, there was an AfD vote, which resulted in the article NOT being deleted, so further discussion here is somewhat academic.  Those who want to discuss this further are encouraged to comment on the proposed policy for such matters: Wikipedia:Candidates and elections.  John Broughton 12:26, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Adding the AFD tag is highly POV 

message: 24.18.145.253 posted the following in the article... I have no comment on its content -- but I do feel obligated to move it to the discussion page:
:It's not factual to say as in the introduction that "She worked for a dozen years in high technology including five years at Microsoft as a Lead Product Manager, working on the .NET Framework. Burner left Microsoft in 2004 to enter politics." Darcy worked less than 4 years at Microsoft as a marketing program manager, not as lead nor as a product manager. See Darcy's MSDN blog. She did not enter politics until 2006, after dropping out of law school, which she pursued after leaving Microsoft, at other times Darcy claims she left to raise her newborn son.
Doubleplusjeff 21:50, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Definitely doesn't belong in the article until/unless it is properly sourced per Wikipedia:Verifiability, and of course would need to be reworded to conform to Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.  John Broughton  |  Talk 00:32, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

text: It's a good suggestion; I've changed the article.  In general, articles on Congressfolk (that's the biographies I'm most familiar with) have a section called "Personal", covering marriage, children, religion, and other things that don't really fit well into the chronological stream of events.  I've combined them since the "Family" section was miniscule.  John Broughton  |  Talk 13:49, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Early Life and Education 

message: Would it not be more typical for a biography to combine the information in /*Early Life*/ with that in /*Family*/ ? Marriage and birth both preceed the 2006 political campaign and so should not be split by it. I see that the same issue exists on her election opponent's page. This split might be appropriate for campaign materials but not in an encyclopedia ... but I hestitate to make such a change w/o discussion. rewinn 06:42, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It's a good suggestion; I've changed the article.  In general, articles on Congressfolk (that's the biographies I'm most familiar with) have a section called "Personal", covering marriage, children, religion, and other things that don't really fit well into the chronological stream of events.  I've combined them since the "Family" section was miniscule.  John Broughton  |  Talk 13:49, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Combine with Family?

message: I have removed this section because the article is about Burner.  Her campaign didn't pay for the ad, the DCCC did.  Nothing in the cited story says that she or her campaign had any influence in creating the ad.  Yes, the campaign paid for a COPY of the event in which Reichert made the statements quoted in the ad; and it's quite possible that the campaign sent a copy of that to the DCCC.  But attacking Burner when the DCCC is (possibly) at fault is not appropriate for wikipedia articles; Burner would need to be shown to be MUCH more involved in this before it passes the necessary threshold.
The section WOULD be appropriate for Reichart's article, however - he was attacked by the DCCC, he thinks it's unfair, etc.  I do think it should be slightly shorter - this is one ad in the campaign, not the entire campaign.  The purpose of providing the link (which, by the way, should be immediately after the text that is added, not put in the external links list) is to allow the reader to go to the article and find out more.   John Broughton  |  Talk 13:03, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: The paragraph was put back somewhere, sometime (I traced it back for a while, then gave up). It obviously has nothing to do with this article and I deleted it again. The unsigned comment above is mystifying. What is the relevance about who bought what tapes? And if TVW wants their copyrighted material removed, asking Ms. Burner, who had nothing to do with the ad to remove it, would be pretty stupid on the part of TVW. Also, when the supporting source is an editorial on an opinion page, we're skating on pretty thin wikipedia ground. -- Quartermaster (talk) 19:28, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Anti-Reichert ad by the DCCC 

message: Pre-election polls change too quickly to be encyclopediac. They will be meaningless after Nov 7 anyway. I suggest deleting them. I made same suggestion on Dave Reichert. rewinn 05:22, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think polls are among the more interesting things in such articles.  Yes, they do change, and yes they'll be meaningless after Nov 7, but for the meantime, they are relevant.   John Broughton  |  Talk 13:50, 29 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Pre-election polling: delete?

message: The paragraph: "Although Reichert is defending a seat...issues on which he and the president disagree" was lifted verbatim from CQPolitics.com, so it's a copyvio. If you remove CQP's unsourced opinions, there's nothing left that isn't otherwise covered in the article. David Brooks 06:26, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It's gone (I think; this is quite a moving target here).  I do agree that quoting an entire paragraph is problematical; a sentence or two is (in my opinion) acceptable as fair use, and of course minor rewording for clarity is also helpful to avoid copyvio.   John Broughton  |  Talk 13:53, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  copyvio? 

message: Serious question: are the sections titled "endoresements", "views", and "affiliations" relevant in the least to an article?  Yes, it may be relevant to a resume and/or campaign brochure, but an article like this?  I think not.  Anyone else?  -- Sholom 13:23, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Perhaps a short paragraph:  "Burner has been endorsed by numerous labor and political (other? ?) groups, including [list four or five of the most notable).  The paragraph wouldn't have a section of its own, of course.  For views, I'm pretty comfortable with the five two-sentence items.  As for memberships and affiliations, I'm taking those out now.   John Broughton  |  Talk 13:56, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Most likely the motivation for the original addition of endorsements was an attempt to balance the list under Dave Reichert#2006 Campaign for Re-Election. David Brooks 15:45, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Maybe the Reichert entry should be changed rather than this entry becoming a puff piece on a challenger.  I don't see many extensive entries on challengers that lose.  I am assuming at some point after the election, this entry will be reduced to what Darcy will indeed become - a footnote.  Supersonicfan 03:53, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is this a resume or campaign brochure? 

message: All should be transformed into specific references within the entry not listed as they are.--Davidwiz 18:51, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: External Links

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replies: text: BetacommandBot s an automated bot, so probably won't respond, but the best way to handle this would be to release the image under GFDL so it doesn't require a fair use rationale.  Barring that, putting  on the images page and populating the fields would resolve the issue of it lacking a FUR. Since Darcy is a living person there are some on Wikipedia that feel there is never a valid rationale for using a non-free image. --Bobblehead (rants) 16:47, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Dburner wiki portrait.jpg

message: Wow. Silly little edit war going on here.  Both "outside Redmond" and "outside Carnation" are correct. Just have dueling sources here. The PI says Burner's address is "outside Carnation" and the Times is saying it is "outside Redmond".  If you take a look at google maps you'll see that the address is outside both cities (and Sammamish for that matter), but it is closer to Carnation than Redmond. However, according to USPS, the address is a Redmond address, which generally just means the post office for the zip code is in Redmond. You'll have to look that up on your own here, alas, USPS.com doesn't do direct links to address searches. Perhaps just saying the house is in unincorporated King County is better? --Bobblehead (rants) 21:46, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  What's wrong with just saying "Ames Lake".  After all, that's where it is! Dankirkd (talk) 05:38, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: As long as you don't wikilink to Ames Lake, that's probably fine. The article for Ames Lake is for a CDP that is only used for Census purposes and isn't an actual location so wikilinking to it is likely going to cause confusion as people are going to be expecting to find an article about a lake and end up at a CDP. However, without the wikilink a description of where Ames Lake is located is necessary, so it'd still require saying it was outside Sammamish, Redmond, or Carnation. --Bobblehead (rants) 15:13, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Bobblehead, it seems strange to me not to link Ames Lake, Washington, but I'm not familiar with the area…I suppose if it's not a name in common usage, maybe it shouldn't be linked. But maybe there should be an article on the lake -- is it notable? Certainly turns up in a fair amount of news coverage. -Pete (talk) 17:24, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Ames Lake, Washington is a Census-designated place that is only used by the United States Census for statistical purposes within the census only and therefore doesn't really exist. The US Census gives every concentration of people a CDP and the boundaries of that CDP are arbitrary and assigned differently each time a census is conducted. It's also unlikely that someone is ever going to say "I live in Ames Lake, Washington", since in common usage Ames Lake only refers to the lake itself and saying such a thing would give the impression that they lived in the lake, rather than beside it. If a person is talking to a local (someone that lives in the immediate area), they more likely to say "I live by Ames Lake", while talking to a non-local they'd probably say "I live near Redmond/Carnation/Sammamish, Washington." --Bobblehead (rants) 17:49, 2 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Hmmmm... I don't know.  I live not far from Ames Lake.  We refer to it as we do any other place or destination.  It is a large enough lake that quite a few people can say they live at Ames Lake.  I think the best approach might be to say Ames Lake near Redmond, Washington. Dankirkd (talk) 03:57, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: *Yea, it doesn't matter. I apologize for making a big deal out of this. Carnation would be fine or Redmond, whichever. Cumulus Clouds (talk) 06:25, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  The city Burner's home is located outside of 

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message: The citation, "Leadership, Responsibility, and Integrity: Darcy Burner and the Civil Air Patrol" (Hominid Views (2006-09-26). Retrieved on 2007-11-22) should be a perfectly acceptable citation given the detail in the article surpasses most "news" items used for many other citations at Wikipedia.  Removing it simply because it is from a "blog" in this case is not reason enough IMO.  Another source that could be used is one from the National Women's Political Caucus, but it provides less detail and is less specific to the fact. Dankirkd (talk) 04:57, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: A Seattle PI article covers this fact and provides a traditional media reference that can replace the one to Hominid Views. Dankirkd (talk) 02:55, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Civil Air Patrol National Cadet of the Year citation 

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