Talk:Tetra Pak

message: Hello, ! Thanks for your patience while I worked on this. I've revised the Community projects section for you to review. Here are some of the bigger changes:
*Removed the following content that seemed unnecessary and was sourced directly to Tetra Pak: "Tetra Pak was early in engaging in community projects and the company has supported school milk and school feeding programmes for 45 years."
*Consolidated and revised the Food for Development and School Milk details and added new sources. In reworking this, I focused on removing promotional language, improving sourcing, and on infrastructure as you mentioned.
*Removed the following content about donations made by Tetra Laval, which came from primary sources: "Tetra Pak has supported disaster relief—e.g., after the Haiti earthquake, Pakistan floods, and Russian wildfires in 2010, and Japan's Tōhoku earthquake and tsunami and Thailand floods in 2011, and during the 2010 Pakistan floods and Thailand in 2011."
*Revised content on the Chinese melamine scandal for neutrality, updated the Financial Times citation since the link was broken, and linked to the article about the incident.
*Removed sub-sections because they seemed unneeded after revisions.  
Thank you for your continued collaboration here. Let me know if you think further changes are needed before updating the article. Best regards, Victor at TetraPak (talk) 08:33, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm tagging you here since you previously weighed in on this plan. If you'd like to review or provide any feedback on my revisions to Community projects, you're most welcome. Thanks, Victor at TetraPak (talk) 06:46, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: , looks good to me, have made the changes. KyloRen3 (talk) 20:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  Thank you! Is there anything else you see in the article we should change before you think it's appropriate to remove the Advert tag? , you're of course welcome to weigh in as well. Again, thank you both so much for your time and collaboration here, I deeply appreciate it. Best, Victor at TetraPak (talk) 07:51, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Revised language for '''Community projects''' 

message: Hello again, I'd like to make another request for some updates and possible additions to the Packages section, which has some outdated information and content that appears misplaced. 
*Move or Remove "Tetra Pak has a lot of partnerships in different areas in the world. In Egypt they are in partnership with, Fargalla Arab Dairy, Juhayna and Lamar Egypt."
:*This content doesn't really fit with the rest of this section. It could perhaps fit better elsewhere, such as Business and markets if editors think it is worth keeping.
*Change or remove "The Tetra Evero Aseptic is the latest of the Tetra Pak packages, launched in 2011 and marketed as the world's first aseptic carton bottle for ambient milk."
:*This is now outdated information, the Tetra Evero Aseptic is not the latest product. It has actually been discontinued. Could it be changed to remove the "latest" language and possibly mention that it's discontinued? The only source I have for this is Tetra Pak's website, which I understand is not ideal.
*Add "Tetra Rex plant-based packaging was launched in 2020" per this Packaging News source. 
 I'm flagging you here since we've been collaborating on changes to this article. If you have time to consider another request, I'd appreciate it. 
As always, I am open to feedback and suggestions. Thanks, Victor at TetraPak (talk) 09:47, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done:  Not enough sources. Quetstar (talk) 14:57, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Packages updates