Talk:Where No Man Has Gone Before

message: Is visible on the edit page, but not in the text?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.241.209.203 (talk) 11:54, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Section on continuity

message: Although it could certainly be rewritten, I think that the original version of this page which accurately described how this episode was formatted for viewing by the network executives vs. how it was formatted for television airing is certainly a "valuable" piece of Trek lore and should not have been edited out.
It really wasn't all that confusing.  And no, I'm not the poster who posted it, so other than for the sake of enjoying interesting trivia, I have no dog in this fight.  Sir Rhosis 21:49, 15 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: The primary reason was because there was far too much detail into a different episode in the lead of this article; not only was it potentially confusing in that a casual reader could think WNMHGB was the ep split into The Menagerie, but anything beyond the barest details required to establish this article fails relevancy standards anywhere but in that episode's own article. :) RadioKirk (u|t|c) 23:26, 15 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: If we could get a source for this information it would be great: this is talking about the re-edit of this second pilot for the network/vs for broadcast - not the Cage/Menagerie thing.    However, I would really like to see a source first, since most of what is here now is sourced.  Morwen - Talk 22:42, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

text: Ace.  I will see about putting this in the 'production' section.  Morwen - Talk 09:32, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Rewrite

message: Per the work being done by a number of editors on and off the Cleanup task force, please do not place "trivia" into articles; this makes them, yes, trivial. For those of you who work on other articles, please make sure they conform to this ideal as well. Write notable facts into prose, and please make sure there is a purpose for each fact within the article, not just "Actor A later became famous in Role B." Thanks. :) RadioKirk (u|t|c) 13:23, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Trivia

message: So, um, how does this look to other folks now?  it seems reaonably balanced in terms of plot/production/continuity notes.  the obvious thing that is missing is a "critical reaction" section, which may be pretty impossible to source, unless someone has access to 1960s TV review columns.  Maybe there are some fan polls we could source?  Morwen - Talk 22:37, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh, and what do people think of the screenshot we have?  I am pondering trying to get one with glowy-eyes Mitchell instead - would that be better?  Morwen - Talk 22:39, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I'd say it needs a better cap. thanks/Fenton, Matthew Lexic Dark 52278 Alpha 771 17:18, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Status

message: An early version of this pilot, which I saw aired once on CKCO Kitchener Ontario in the 1970s, blended the opening titles (cast, director, writer, etc.) into assorted scenes, and labeled each quarter hour of the program similar to how Quinn Martin did shows like "The Fugitive" and "The F.B.I.". GBC 18:39, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: A videotape of the original pilot (with the acts, differing opening credit sequence, etc.) was widely available for sale with a 1989 copyright notice on the outside box, from Video Rarities. Should this be noted within the article itself? Drgitlow (talk) 05:58, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't know--I'm sure it was an unlicensed, illegal copy. . . Sir Rhosis (talk) 08:11, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Act I-II-III-IV

message: i've realised the repeat date is here.  some random AOL ip address added this a year ago, I considered leaving a note but this seems unlikely to reach the desired person.  i couldn't find a source for this in my books, I shall try again, but any suggestions as to how I could find a source for this without having actual TV guide back-issues would be welcome. Morwen - Talk 17:33, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  repeat date 

message: what that bit means is that the name was established in the episode, but that it hadn't been decided at script/pre-casting phase.  Morwen - Talk 15:42, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Okay (I haven't seen the ep in several years). The phrasing suggested that it wasn't yet chosen. :) RadioKirk (u|t|c) 16:26, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Perhaps it could be clearer.  Morwen - Talk 17:10, 14 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  the name "Scotty" 

message: I've passed this article as a GA, since as far as I can tell, it looks like it fulfills all the criteria. Its more or less well-written, (I couldn't find anything worth commenting on in terms of bad writing) neutral which is nice for these sorts of articles, (You'd be surprised how many look like they've been written by television critics or something.) I think its fairly well-referenced, the one image has a fair use rationale, and really, everything looks all right to me. For a little improvement though, it looks like a few lines could still be cited yet in the production section, but not knowing the exact content of the references I can't be sure. To really get it up to as good as it can get, finding and listing the page numbers of each reference would probably be pretty nice. Homestarmy 19:36, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks.  I think at one point some ref tags which were the same on the paragraph after the one which had them first were removed by someone on grounds of redundancy.  I can certainly find page numbers :  (although then we have the problem that cite book really can't do "ibid page x" type things)  Morwen - Talk 02:46, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Good Article

message: This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, MASEM 03:43, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Sweeps (Pass)

message: I take it the article means that they were introduced as their characters Scotty and Sulu respectively, the previous wording was a little vague. Alastairward (talk) 11:48, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm a little unclear why it claims Sulu's first appearance, given that "The Man Trap" aired before it. Shouldn't the actual episode sequence should take precedence over the production schedule and in-universe timeline? Ibadibam (talk) 22:13, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I've modified the sentence to say first produced episode. Happy to discuss if that doesn't address your concerns. DonIago (talk) 16:48, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Introducing Doohan and Takei 

message: Re: "Dehner's powers grow at a slower rate than Mitchell's, but she eventually develops the silver glow as well, and later develops powers that are almost as powerful as Mitchell's."
Dehner's powers don't appear to grow at all until Mitchell gives her the silver eyes near the end of the episode.  It's a minor point, but isn't this more accurate?   Genesis 1:3 (talk) 10:09, 1 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  A question. 

message: Just a note that the article currently says "The episode contains the first stardate (1313.8)". However, Kirk's headstone shows his birth and death dates as 1277.1 and 1313.7 respectively, in scenes prior to Kirk recording his Captain's log. --AussieLegend (talk) 16:43, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  First stardate 

message: There are factual inaccuracies in the plot.   Spock does not "hint" that Kirk should kill Mitchell "SPOCK: Then you have one other choice. Kill Mitchell while you still can."  Does that seem like a subtle hint?    The idea that Hot lips attacks to Mitchell "to weaken him" is silly, she tried to kick his ass and only weakened him.  Her goal was not "to" weaken him even if that was the effect.   Lastly, "but before he can recharge, Kirk creates a rock slide, killing Mitchell."  Mitchell had recharged, ( I seem to recall that it happened just when Kirk was about to smash mitchells head in with a rock.  Mitchell knocks him around a bit and then Kirk kills him via rock slide.  This is all minor, but the page is inaccurate. 75.177.36.154 (talk) 04:24, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plot 

message: The article is promoted a "Good Article", yet two sections are tagged as insufficiently sourced. What to do with the tags? --George Ho (talk) 21:24, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I would say the issue is what to do with the insufficiently sourced material (source or remove it), not what to do with the tags, which seem appropriate. DonIago (talk) 20:13, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
replies: text:  Some cleanup and referencing definately needed here. Will look at opening a reassessment soon, but will give a chance to fix issues first. AIRcorn (talk) 00:21, 24 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Issues affecting GA status? 

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