Talk:Smoke on the Water

message: This article--especially the first paragraph--needs fixing to conform to W:NPOV.  Phrases like "immediately recognizable", "the single most famous riff in heavy metal music history", and "Ian Gillan's expressive vocal" are all personal opinions, and need to be reworded in a way that they can more easily be defended--possibly by quoting someone prominent in the music industry using similar descriptions. --Jwanders 18:43, 8 Mar 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: I just went over the article in detail, and changed a couple of words, but I really don't think it was that bad to begin with (not surprising since I wrote much of it originally).  It is undeniably a famous riff, and the word "perhaps" is in there (though you did not quote it above).  The adjective "expressive" may be non-NPOV but in the mildest way, it's not like it says "fantastic vocal".  Any adjective can be considered POV to this extent -- prose without adjectives is deadly (especially in an article about music or some other art form where you are trying to *describe* something), and I think "expressive" is a pretty neutral and non-controversial one.  Please take a look at the current article, remove "expressive" if you must, and re-consider the POV tag which needlessly undercuts the usefulness of the article. Thanks Jgm 14:16, 26 Mar 2005 (UTC)

text: "Despite the heaviness of the guitar part, constant movement and interplay within the supporting parts keeps the feel of the song from becoming leaden.  The song's structure takes a contrasting verse-chorus form, with the driving verse sections building musical tension while the soaring chorus releases it."
This seems like an opinion to me, but maybe such description is necessary in art article.  At the moment, however, the article seems to imply that everyone would describe this way, when I doubt most people have ever heard the song.  As I said, it's better than I'd thought before and I'll take off the POV tag, but I'd be happier if the description could be attributed to the person or group that holds it. --Jwanders 19:43, 26 Mar 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: POV

message: Anybody know if a policy has been defined regarding including tabulature in articles?  On one hand, there may be a precedent as some articles (for instance, Riff) have included illustrative quotations of standard musical notation.  On the other hand, tab is somewhat less standardized than regular notation and is of interest only to guitarists, muddying up the article for others.  Thoughts?  Jgm 11:05, 19 September 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Tabulature

message: Wouldn't it be more correct to play the riff on the D and G strings, instead of the A and D strings? Bengt 12:12, 24 September 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: it was played by the band on the a and d, as you can fret the fourths with one finger that way (b to g is a third). Joeyramoney 03:05, 10 June 2006 (UTC)

text: My point exactly. Blackmore himself has explained it several times. Bengt 16:59, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Which strings 

message: This article needs to be cleaned up.
:Point taken.SoothingR 19:55, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Clean up

message: I had read the fan who launched the fireworks was Swedish, not Swiss as mentionned in the article (the document I read even mentionned his nameI was probably asleep.. Dake 18:35, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Do you mean that the guys name was Iirc? That is not a swedish name, not even close to one.Zoeds 21:23, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text:  iirc (or IIRC) stands for If I Recall Correctly - they weren't saying that was the fan's name. ;) 136.186.1.197 05:52, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text:  hehe, that explains a lot LOL --Zoeds 08:45, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Swiss or Swedish fan ? 

message: Did Led Zeppelin ever record this song? I've seen it credited to both LZ and Deep Purple, and I've heard two distinctly different versions of it. PennyGWoods 07:53, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Zepp cover?

message: The article says they recorded a bit at the Pavillion, got kicked out, then found the Grand Hotel.  Then it says SOTW was recorded at the Pavillion.  Impossible:  The song talks about the Grand Hotel. Barticus88 02:13, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It was not the song with lyrics, it were backing tracks what was recorded at the Pavillion. The anniversary CD booklet says so. --Yms 22:35, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Impossible Timeline

message: I'm no guitar player, but if guitar is like any other instrument, wouldn't a song "noted for its extreme difficulty" not be "the first song learned by many beginner guitarists"?  I assume the beginner guitarists are playing a simplified version. Also, young brass players also learn an arrangement of it as one of their first 'real' songs.
: - Probably a bit of both, I wouldn't have said it's notable for "extreme" difficulty at all. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 84.92.60.187 (talk • contribs).
: - I'm inclined to agree with the above - it's not a song with a complex structure or any truly difficult parts (from a guitar player of 2 years). The possible exception is Blackmore's instantly recognizable guitar solo, which is quite a challenge to play but not something I would call extremely difficult, or expect an encyclopedia to do such a thing.
The outro-solo is performed on Jon Lord's organ. I guess that one is challenging as well. —69.136.244.218 01:35, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Difficulty for beginners? 

message: This song has been covered many many times. I think the wiki should contain a list of (well known) covers.
Edwin Smulders 18:02, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  List of covers 

message: Correct me if I'm mistaken, but didn't IBM use this riff for a series of commercials a few years back? I seem to recall it being used for a technology-related ad around 2000. MalikCarr 06:52, 1 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  IBM commercial 

message: Since the song is in G minor, the sheet music ought to have the proper key signature.  And then the accidental B-flats can be dropped. — Lawrence King (talk) 07:29, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proposed correction to sheet music 

message: :Image:Deeppurple-SotW.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in Wikipedia articles constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Deeppurple-SotW.jpg

message: :Image:Smoke on the Water.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Smoke on the Water.jpg

message: It is mentioned that a shop in Denmark Street has or had a singn that ask potential buyers NOT to play Smoke on t Water. Was that before or after it was used in Wayne's World or after. And was the joke in Wayne's World based on real live events?
:Could well have been without any trigger from the media or the movies, especially if it was a musical instruments store. SOTW has long been one of the most widely recognized chunks of rock music ever, the riff is as universally known as the Marseillaise or Jingle Bells.
:I can well imagine some guitar shop owners who felt they couldn't stand hearing the tune plonked out one more time.Strausszek (talk) 06:34, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Impact

message: Should the lyrics be here?  Isn't putting them up here copyright infingement? soldierx40k 04:23, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Fair use allows copyrighted material to be used for academic use or for reviews; both can arguably apply to an article discussing the song and its lyrics.  There's no infringement issue here.  75.71.42.157 (talk) 05:50, 16 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Lyrics?

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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Smoke on the Water.jpg

message: Deleted ranking statements.  These are opinion (even if I agree) and not appropriate for the factual introduction of an article.  This is what gives Wikipedia a bad name.  I checked and the statements are in the body of the article, so no content has been deleted from the article.
Hdnsb (talk) 03:16, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Changed Intro 

message: that it's just a description of what happen to the band at the time..  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.172.5.218 (talk) 13:40, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  is it worth mentioning the lyrics meaning? 

message: Is it this concert, or am I thinking of another one, where there was only one door for the audience to get out of the stadium and only one door for the band, and Zappa himself had to evacuate everybody?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.29.243.13 (talk) 16:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Zappa's involvement 

message: I just want an answer here - is everyone removing that line because they disagree with what it's stating? or because they don't want to find any sources? Luminifer (talk) 03:51, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  First learned/most played

message: There was an unsourced statement that the song was also well known for its one note thumping bass line.  Only a musician or bass player would know this, which would make it difficult for the song to be well known for it.  The song is known for the simple guitar riff.  If the initial asssertion is to remain in the article, it needs a source. Thanks. HM211980 (talk) 03:16, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bass Line 

message: Ritchie claims the riff is the fifth symphony backwards source: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cn1sUIs5yeE&feature=related this should definately be mentioned.Rockgenre (talk)Rockgenre 00:36, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Youtube can't be used as a source because it is against the rules to knowing link to any site which hosts copyvio content. Most music interviews, concerts and videos hosted by Youtube have been uploaded to that site without the knowledge or consent of the proper owners. So Youtube can't be used. Wether B (talk) 00:47, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I suppose I should remove the edit I did on the "Message in a Bottle" page, than which used a youtube video interview with Eric Bloom right? Rockgenre (talk)Rockgenre 00:51, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

text: Well OK, Youtube can't be used as a source, but surely the interview itself can be, right?  Just find where it came from and use that.  Youtube didn't create the interview; just find the original source for the interview and use that instead.
BTW the policy Wther B refers to is that it's against the tules to link to any site that hosts material that violates copyright.  Um, that has nothing to do with using it as a source.  Just don't link to it.  75.71.42.157 (talk) 05:56, 16 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Beethoven origins 

message: brass band version  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.158.98.12 (talk) 06:41, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  see this 

message: Discussion over deleting mention of this incident, over at Flare gun Andy Dingley (talk) 19:24, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some stupid at [[Flare gun]] 

message: Why, what, where, and how does this article need additional citations for verification? Hyacinth (talk) 17:13, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Additional citations

message: This was one of the very first singles I owned, so I played it to death. My version (I'm in the UK) had "Child in Time" on the B side. Was this an unusual pressing, as it isn't mentioned in the text?86.152.240.56 (talk) 11:48, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Single B side 

message: The main riff sounds more Dorian than blues. Even the vocals tune sounds Dorian. If it is Dorian - is that deliberate or did the band do it cause it 'sounded right?' Lgh (talk) 09:14, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Jon Lord at least was classically trained and he would have been familiar with these church modes. J.S. Bach employed Dorian in a few of his organ pieces too, and the impact of Bach's music on Purple over the years is well attested.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.254.151.33 (talk) 19:18, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dorian mode? 

message: So the song charts everywhere in the world in 1973 except their native UK, which catches up four years later. There must be a story there. Does anybody know what it is? — Labalius (talk) 17:40, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why enter the UK chart in 1977? 

message: There's not much detail here about the release of this as a single: what was the B side (in various territories)? when was it released as a single in the UK? didn't it chart in the UK in 1973 when it was first released? If not, why not? 81.154.143.3 (talk) 22:38, 9 January 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Single release details 

message: Sorry, although I'm not a smoker, but why Deep Purple wrote "Smoke on the Water"? Wisnu Aji (talk) 07:50, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Er, this is explained clearly in the article! Mezigue (talk) 08:02, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title song 

message: The 'Composition' section contains the following:
"A performance by the original Mark II lineup was filmed in 1973 in colour during a US concert in New York City for Live in Concert 1972/73. Blackmore played the intro on the 3rd and 5th fret"
Three points:
* It makes no sense to say he played it on the 3rd and fifth frets, unless he played the same chord over and over
* The person who wrote that seems to believe he played it, still in G minor, by playing something like this, *starting* with 3 and 5:
    e|--------
    B|--------
    G|--------
    D|---3-5--
    A|-5-1-3--
    E|-3------
But I've just watched a video on YouTube which appears to be the concert in question, see YouTube video cF9eVTUSklA?t=28 and clearly what he's playing is the same riff, with the same fingering pattern, but in D minor, a fifth (or one string) below. When the rest of the band comes in, he plays in G minor as usual. He does wander about on stage a bit and there isn't a clear shot, but anyone who can hear the music can tell that it's D not G, and there's no doubt that 'on the 3rd and fifth frets' is wrong.
So, regular riff:
    e|--------
    B|--------
    G|---3-5--
    D|-5-3-5--
    A|-5------
    E|--------
What he played at the very start of this song:
    e|--------
    B|--------
    G|--------
    D|---3-5--
    A|-5-3-5--
    E|-5------
Any guitarists care to ratify what I'm saying? I'll give it a couple of days then make an edit if it's OK.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ambrosechapel (talk • contribs) 02:20, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Each approach is correct. Ritchie is known not to have performed songs in the same manner. — Voxamarkin (talk) 20:53, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Composition section has incorrect/meaningless information 

message: I know this may be too speculative for Wikipedia, but considering that "Smoke on the Water" is one of THE iconic guitar riffs of all time, it's fascinating that apparently Tom Jobim wrote it:
http://www.similarrock.com/deep-purple-carlos-lyra/
http://musicallinkssite.weebly.com/links.html
https://bdeeppurplefanforum.runboard.com/t3320
https://www.reddit.com/r/musictheory/comments/pw5as2/did_deep_purple_plagiarize_late_brazilian/
https://web.archive.org/web/20041026174611/http://www.gardenal.org/marcadiabo/materias08.htm
https://whiplash.net/materias/news_758/297671-deeppurple.html
It already made it into the Portuguese Wikipedia page: https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smoke_on_the_Water
I'm not going to decide whether it's well-sourced enough to include on the article, but I thought I should leave it here. Jules TH 16 (talk) 16:42, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: It bears some similarity to the Brazilian song "Maria Moita". No mention of this in the article. 2A00:23EE:14F8:11AD:307C:84FF:FED7:4822 (talk) 09:08, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Inspiration for the riff