Talk:Treasure Planet

message: someone review this article please? Possibly improve it a step up, closer to being a featured article? It won't be too difficult, considering a movie like Treasure Planet isn't hard to elaborate on.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 9spaceking (talk • contribs) 00:32, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Making this a Featured Article

message: The 3D vs 2D argument is so superficial. Does the fact that Pixar's films actually had a better story count for anything?67.150.209.17 05:42, 7 August 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the argument is not that the film was awful, simply underwhelming, especially compared to the very high quality of Pixar's films and (some of) Disney's earlier stuff.  It didn't get very many bad reviews, for instance, but most of the good ones were pretty marginal in their praise. --Misterwindupbird 18:42, 22 September 2005 (UTC)

text: If you have sourced information about that (a quote or interview, even), it would be really useful.  The whole "reasons for flop" section is mostly unsourced opinions and needs serious work.  Though personally I have a major problem with the "fantasy is not hot" argument -- by that logic pretty much no Disney movie should have succeeded.  It's not like we were in the midst of a talking-animals-in-Africa fad when The Lion King hit the market, and Hans Christian Anderson wasn't exactly sweeping the nation when The Little Mermaid came out.  Frankly, in my opinion, it was a desperate and transparent attempt by a past-its-prime company to cash in on "cool" computer animation, and that's why it flopped.  24.81.13.220 19:24, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  3D vs 2D 

message: The article claims that TP resulted in a loss of about 125 million. Can this be explained a little better? If the film grossed 109 million but cost about 180 million (40 for advertising and 140 for production costs), then isn't that losing about 70 million? Also, does the gross include DVD sales and merchandise? From the numbers I can see how the studio lost quite a bit of money but losing 125 million? This really needs to be explained better. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 216.221.96.202 (talk) 22:58, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Loss?

message: Do we reaaaaallly need the credits here?  I haven't seen them in any other Wikipedia articles.  Should that section be deleated?  ...oh, i changed "arternate" to "alternate" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.86.126.40 (talk • contribs) 13:05, 2 August 2007
: Yes, cast and crew information should be included in the article, though there is a preference for having it written in prose format. See Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines for details. -- SilentAria talk 08:10, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Credits?

message: I have reviewed this article on behalf of WP:FILMS Assessment department. I have reassessed it as B-class, but it will need a few more things before advancing to GA. I see it has already been nominated, but there is a delay for it to be reviewed, so you should have time to make these changes.
#The lead needs to be formatted better. Right now it is split up into several brief paragraphs with one or two sentences each. Consolidate these paragraphs and make sure that all of the main sections are briefly mentioned in the lead. Look to other GA/FAs for examples on how to write the lead and see WP:LEAD for other guidelines.
#The flag needs to be removed from the infobox.
#There should be a cast section illustrating the roles voiced by each actor.
#The box office section should be expanded a bit more. Mention its performance in other countries, the number of theaters it was released in, how long it was in theaters for, etc.
#Expand on the sentences in the other media section, single sentences shouldn't stand alone.
I would also recommend having somebody give it a quick copyedit. The article is well-sourced and covers many aspects of the film. Good work so far and keep up the good work. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 04:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you so much for the tips! I'll try to do what I can to improve the article. Thanks again! :) --SilentAria talk 06:55, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: WP:FILMS Reassessment

message: This article list Brian Murray as the voice of Silver, but I am fairly certain it is actually Brian Doyle-Murray who is the voice actor.  Does anyone know if this is correct?
Eluthi (talk) 01:37, 9 January 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Nope, it was definitely not Brian Doyle-Murray, as this article on Box Office Prophets points out. The film's closing credits also list "Brian Murray", and not "Brian Doyle-Murray". :) --SilentAria talk 09:27, 16 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Incorrect Credits? 

message: Disney is known for producing movie adaptations of classic stories and books. However, since their movies are also targeted towards children and families, they frequently heavily edit and modify the story into a form that may not resemble the source material. Adding a section to the article that addresses similarities and alterations to the original material would improve the article.
Commenting on the movie as a stand-alone product, any such deviations are not important. However, given that the story is an adaption, understanding the relationship(s) between the movie and the source can improve one's understanding of the movie. In particular, knowing which characters were kept, deleted or altered; scenes added and deleted; etc.; all contribute to understanding the artistic intent of the film. I am sure there are interviews where the movie contributors (director, writers, etc.) have commented on their decision-making processes. If so, quotes from these can be added and referenced. 65.112.42.83 (talk) 19:29, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comparison to book 

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thread_title: Pending changes

message: What the heck is the 70/30 Law that is mentioned (but not explained) in the Music and sound section? Exit2DOS  • Ctrl • Alt • Del 05:08, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The section just above the Music and Sound section explains the 70/30 law. --SilentAria talk 13:58, 8 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  please explain ... 

message: The section "Music and Sound" should be renamed to simply "Audio".
New Living Wiki Editor (talk) 23:40, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request on 24 February 2012 

message: The critical consensus for the film on Rotten Tomatoes is "Though its characterizations are weaker than usual, Treasure Planet offers a fast-paced, beautifully rendered vision of outer space."
Gamergrant (talk) 03:21, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Also, please provide the specific wording changes you'd like to have made so that we can add it (for example, change the lead sentence in the "Reception" section to new sentence).  --McDoobAU93 13:30, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

text: Note: I've wrapped that section of the text with the  template which should automatically update any information from that source via bot.  There is nothing else that needs to be done here.  Please let me know if this doesn't happen in the next week and I'll poke the bot owner to poke the bot.  :) —  (e • t • c) 14:29, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 16 June 2014 

message: Tate Donovan did not provited the voice for Jim Hawkins, he provited the voice for a title character as Hercules in Disney thirty-fifth animated feature film of the same name.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.147.198.171 (talk) 17:50, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tate Donovan is Jim Hawkins 

message: No cast list? This is unlike most if not all other film articles. Is there a reason there isn't one except in the info box on the side? Charlr6 (talk) 20:45, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: The Manual of Style for film articles provides for two options. The more common one, as you describe, is to include a cast listing following the plot summary. Equally valid, and what's in use here, is a listing of the actor's name adjacent to their character's name the first time it appears in the plot summary. If you'd like to use the first format, I don't think there will be a problem, but it should be one or the other to avoid redundancy.  --McDoobAU93 20:53, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  No Cast? 

message: "...cook John Silver (Brian Murray), whom Jim suspects is the cyborg...". This should not be "whom". What we have here is a cook who is the cyborg, Jim suspects, but with the Jim suspects moved parenthetically into the middle. (On the other hand, it would be correct in a clause like "the cook whom Jim loves".) Can someone fix this, since the article is locked? Thanks. 31.50.70.172 (talk) 13:39, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: . In the future you can use the  template, which will get the attention of editors, giving you a better chance of having your edit request quickly answered. Pishcal — ♣ 21:05, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Misuse of "whom"; should be "who" 

message: 86.160.231.24 (talk) 19:49, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. Pishcal — ♣ 20:59, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 17 May 2015 

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thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 12 October 2015 

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message: "David Hyde Pierce as Delbert Doppler, an anthropomorphic dog and medicinal doctor." is incorrect. His character was an Astronomer. However because of his doctorate degree and limited knowledge of medicine, he was referred to as a medical doctor.
Change "and medicinal doctor" to "and astronomer, mistaken as a medical doctor" 41.210.10.75 (talk) 09:11, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 17:38, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 18 March 2018 

message: Please change the description of Jim Hawkins as "a teenage adolescent" to just "an adolescent". "teenage adolescent" is surely rather redundant. 81.96.15.89 (talk) 22:53, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Done – Thjarkur (talk) 23:10, 25 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 25 November 2019 

message: Please change “a” to “an” where it says “a adolescent pining for adventure”. 2A01:4C8:C39:F448:90B0:AAD6:4259:2113 (talk) 22:51, 12 December 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: MadGuy7023 (talk) 23:09, 12 December 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 12 December 2019 

message: Note to reviewers: Please refer to this diff for this SPER.  Can I Log In's  (talk) page 22:25, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: Can you add a summary for you edit request? DarthFlappy (talk) 16:58, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

text: Partly done: I don't understand the reason for the removal of some text. I only did the text relocation and addition of the animation section.  Can I Log In's  (talk) page 22:25, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 23 March 2020