Talk:Line in the Sand (Stargate SG-1)

message: This page needs a real copy edit. -- SFH 02:34, 17 January 2007 (UTC)

message: a notes section exists on every non-stub Stargate SG-1 episode summary page.  The information contained typically  connects pieces of enformation from one episode to the information in another.  For example, food references and specific dialogue are often noteworthy for their bridging of characters, plots, themes, etc.  Character absenses are often mentioned as well-without speculation as to why a character was not in the episode, despite say michael shanks (plays daniel jackson) stating in interviews his reasons (information is available through external links if one looks for it)
The episode itself verifies that the world SG-1 visits resembles Earth.  This is noteworthy as alien worlds are not often shown from space, nor do they when shown resemble Earth. Mwhope 20:27, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Notes

message: Episode Style Sheet  
Following the plot summary, several (optional) sections may follow. These include:
    * "Quotes" section
    * "Trivia" section
          o Significance, discussing the episode's overall contribution to the Stargate mythology (character developments, shifts of power)
          o Trivia, adding some interesting facts about the episode that would not be appropriate for the introduction or summary
          o Controversy, if the episode is particularly divisive among fans or introduces an element that has met with a harsh fan reaction or that violates continuity (this could apply to Sam's boyfriend Pete Shanahan, for example).
          o This would also be a good place to mention if fans generally loved or hated the episode (use GEOS or Gateworld for this, don't decide yourself!) and why.''
This policy applies to other tv shows as well, so please stop deleting trivia or note sections.  And if you personally believe information to be trivial, unverifiable, or indiscriminate information then say so and ask the information be removed or integrated into the article if possible.  Mwhope 03:48, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Stargate SG-1 Episode Style Sheet

message: The grammer and written components of this article is terrible; spelling misakes (reviel as opposed to reveal), improper use of commas (Tomin seeing this, walks.... as opposed to Tomin, seeing this, walks....). This really needs a massive edit. 
:this comment was made shotly after the episode aired and subsequent summaries were first added.  as a 'new' article the page obviously needed work, this comment was unnecessary to begin with; and work has been done to correct the grammer, to expand, and clarify.  there is little sense in the comment taking up space now 17:21, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree with last poster, completely useless comment. the spirit of Wikipedia is that if you see something you don't like (spelling, grammar structure, missing info, wrong info, etc.) and you have the knowledge to improve it, you FIX it, not complain about it. otherwise, you can add a tag to the article, (cleanup, stub, npov, and so on).--Edgjerp 12:33, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Poorly Written 

message: the quotes listed belong at wikiquote, not here, and should be moved there (not simply deleted).  A link to the SG-1 episode page at wikiquote should be put into external links.  Mwhope 17:12, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Quotes Section 

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