Talk:Jak and Daxter: The Precursor Legacy

message: I added cleanup tags because the section 'Cast of Characters' needs a more encyclopedic tone. Alex 21:00, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Untitled 

message: I'll clean this up as best as I can. And to the person who tried to make this exciting, I'm assuming Good faith], but remember, this is an encyclopedia. I'm also taking off the "tone" tag. Abby724 23:31, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I have followed through with the changes I prescribed. The Overview section has been returned to its previous form, the formatting glitches and minor errors in other parts have been removed, and the former Overview section has been polished and moved to a new 'Plot' section. RedZionX 12:11, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Being bold... 

message: This article is in desperate need of a proper cleanup and I've done a fair amount. I've added reception and development sections plus a  few references. I'm not liking the gameplay section at all, I'll work on it but I'm giving someone else the chance if they want to. It's mostly just lists and a lot of the information is contained in other main articles. All that is needed is a brief overview of the gameplay, the way it plays etc. Moved the section around as well so it flows more.
To do:
*More references
*Middle paragraph of story is a little large, could probably be split into 2
*Sort out the gameplay section (Urgent)
*Expand LS
*Expand Reception
*Screenshots
Probably a bit more that could be done but I'll leave it at that for now. I'll be working on this as well so please comment.
Crimsonfox 23:51, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cleanup 

message: People, it's called White Eco in TPL. The term Light Eco only came into use during Jak 3. Please stop changing it. RedZionX (talk) 22:09, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  White Eco 

message: Alright, I'm seeing some good work here, so I'm bumping the class up to B. Some pointers for further improvement:
* Make sure the lead section effectively summarises the information. See WP:LS for an overview, and the last VG newletter gives you a more specific run down of how to approach this in relation to game articles. -- Sabre (talk) 12:42, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: [[WP:VG]] assessment

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message: i can't find where the last dark crystal is. i got the one in the water and the one goin to the robot. where is the other at??????  ty :)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.8.36.69 (talk) 00:40, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It's been a while since I played the game, but if memory serves, you need to hit it with a fireball. However, this is the wrong place to be asking these kinds of questions. The talk page is for discussing inprovements to the article, not for seeking gameplay help. Larrythefunkyferret (talk) 04:44, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  ???? 

message: Considering how the game utilizes a racing segment between each of the worlds, I'm surprised it wasn't mentioned in the gameplay section. There are also a couple of sections that revolve on using vehicles to get around. Personally I didn't care much for them, and was wondering if anyone had criticized the game for them, but not this article doesn't even speak of them in general.--68.6.182.39 (talk) 10:42, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: It is actually briefly mentioned in a few different parts. It isn't very substantial, but it is there, noting that Jak uses Keira's zoomer to traverse certain valleys and tunnels, and has to collect the power cells to upgrade it. Blake (Talk·Edits) 15:36, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Racing/Vehicle Segments 

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