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Talk:Enrique Santos Discépolo

message: I have just finished an edit that was quite large, in the attempt to improve the article's grammar and style.
The changes were as follows:
*Consistency in using double apostrophes for film names
*Changing vocabulary to make the article easier to read
*Changing literal Spanish phrases which were not translated well
St.Corp. (talk) 19:52, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Big edit
Talk:Common carotid artery

message: Minor typo in caption near the end of article:
"The thymus of a full-time fetus, exposed in situ."
should probably say "full term."
very best regards
banjosmitty in New Orleans
Sgsmith, nola 01:16, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Minor

message: I heard somewhere that if either cariotid artery is severed that one can lose enough blood to die within four seconds. This may seem like trivia for some, but I think, assuming it's true, it is also indicative of the pressure prevalent in the artery. TinyMark 20:13, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Injury to carotid artery 
Talk:Eric Byler

message: There is supoosed to be  conflict of interest tag...
and where's the part that says "utter bias?"  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.54.22.188 (talk) 11:06, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I edited it... removed the bias, etc.  Ya know, things on here aren't static.  Qb | your 2 cents 19:43, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

text: Because it was overlooked.  Screenshots are useless when there is a history that any and all are free to access.  Stupid vandalism is hardly something to get worked up about, isnt it?  Qb | your 2 cents 06:27, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  where's the tag??
Talk:Eric Coates

message: Hoping people will add some more comprehensive data - only Chappell / Boosey atm.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lawrence18uk (talk • contribs) 12:43, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Publisher Information
Talk:Maybach 62S

message: I would like someone help me create this page, because this is my first creation. I'm not sure how to do a lot. Thanks. HaLoGuY007 01:20, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

message: Is a history title needed? There is one for some other Maybach cars, but lengthy history information can be found on the Maybach page. Should I put a link to the Maybach page and say that history of Maybach can be found there? HaLoGuY007 00:36, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: History
Talk:Cobweb Strange

message: The article on Cobweb Strange is my first post to Wikipedia.  The majority of the current Progressive Rock bands that I have looked up over the years are missing from this website.  Echolyn is the only one I have found.  At the advice of this website, I have done the research elsewhere and tried to start a page myself for the content that I was unable to find here.  Prior to this posting, I read page after page of policies regarding the inclusion of new information.  I understand that it is not acceptable for smaller bands to be included here, so I selected the largest of the bands I had searched for but could not find (Cobweb Strange).  I don't know everything about them.  My hope is that others will fill in whatever additional information is required for inclusion.  If I need to include specific additional information, please let me know what that information is...not only for this article, but also for future articles.  This process is overwhelming enough without being instantly told that my work isn't good enough. Wikipedi4321 01:21, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

message: I have removed the speedy deletion tag as the article asserts sufficient notability for mine. However, it needs sources as well as wikification. If sources are not provided, it may well be deleted in the future. Capitalistroadster 05:12, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Speedy deletion
Portal talk:Genocide/Selected biography

message: I have added a bio on Gregory H. Stanton to this section.
I will be adding summaries of other people in the next few days.
2.  Ghandi 
3.  Adolf Hitler
4.  Confucious? (May be not)
5.  Martin Luther King 
6.  Pol Plot
7.  Sadam Husein
8.  ?
9.  ?
10. ?
Love to hear your suggestions. Write them below with a #... ie- 1, 2, 3, etc.
--EricSRodrigues154 01:22, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: A Work in Progress
Talk:Erich Pommer

message: This article is a mess!  It seems to be a translation from a German web page which used an online translator.  The result is a chaotic jumble of somewhat incoherent English — largely in the wrong tense.
I tried to correct it but then realized that it needs someone fluent in both English and German.  Hopefully, that someone can find the original text and do a proper translation. Jimknut (talk) 03:33, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Needs cleanup &mdash; badly!
Talk:Erik Jendresen

message: Indexing? Why is this article linked to Majestic-12?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 63.229.44.216 (talk) 04:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Ernest B. Schoedsack

message: One or more portions of this article duplicated other source(s).  Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you.  156.34.212.23 (talk) 20:56, 26 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyright problem removed 

message: In the Bibliography the name of Mario Gerosa, author of a book about Schoedsack, links to the page of a person with the same name, who is not the writer.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.33.101.89 (talk) 06:07, 26 January 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bibliography
Talk:Ernest K. Gann

message: The article as written is fine. It is right out of Ernie's autobiography "Fate Is the Hunter."  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.54.196.168 (talk) 01:08, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I am taking on the task as advertised by the Header-Banner to improve the in-line citations. I have Gann's autobiography and am checking the article to cite the pages, as well as adding on-line references. I removed the UC Berkeley Honorary degree since I could not find that and there had been an in-line reference stating Berkeley had ceased that practice by the supposed date.  If a reference is found for the Berkeley degree, I will gladly add it back. Thanks all KlausVonVilver (talk) 00:30, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Adding References
Talk:Jean Sasson

message: This article reads like a press-release. "She is best known for her ability to bring her readers into the story"? Encyclopedic articles don't gush like this for even the great authors. DParvaz (talk) 22:15, 2 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I don't know Jean Sasson and have never heard the name until today, so I came to Wikipedia to find out more.  Unfortunately, I still know little to nothing of Jean Sasson having read the entire Wikipedia entry.  PLEASE check out other biographies of people (Faulkner, Steinbeck, Capote...almost anyone)and see how to write a biography.  This entry reads like the personal webpage of the subject.  In the meantime, could anyone provide any real information about the subject:  Who are her parents?  Where has she lived from birth to now?  Where did she receive her education?  What were her early interests and accomplishments?   Just, basically, answer the question WHO IS JEAN SASSON?  After answering that question you can list her books/movies/inventions, etc.  But we don't need book reviews in the main entry about her life.  
I use Wikipedia constantly and find most entries to be sterling, so I rarely feel the need to write anything negative.  This entry is just so sub-standard that I'm hopeful someone can gin it up to the gold standard that is Wikipedia.
N0w8st8s (talk) 04:22, 12 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Highly Unprofessional, Substandard Biography 

message: I was surprised to discover how sanitised this article is. Sasson's book, The Rape of Iraq has long since been shown to be a work of black propaganda funded by the Kuwaiti government: apart from the 200,000 copies paid for by the Kuwaitis to be issued to troops, they also funded the production of an additional million copies for general publication. But more seriously, not one of the accounts of atrocities in it has ever been corroborated; Doug Kellner of UCLA went so far as to call the book "One of the biggest lies in history."
QuipQuotch (talk) 15:43, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Whitewashing 

message: This biography is one of the most uninformative biographies I have read on Wiki. It just promotes the works of the author rather than giving details of the biography. The biography doesn't even give the date of birth or other information of the person. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 182.71.126.10 (talk) 04:50, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Very Uninformative Biography
Talk:Ernö Rapée

message: I've categorised him as being Estonian as well, given his birth in Narva. BigHaz - Schreit mich an 05:06, 19 July 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Additional categories 

message: Hello. In his naturalization documents, Ernö Rapée (born Ernö or Ernest Rappaport) said he was born in "Nagy Maros, Hungary", probably Nagymaros: see his Declaration of Intention (1913) and Petition for Naturalisation (1917), or his WWI Registration Card (previous links are on FamilySearch website, and require a free registration, sorry). Later, in other documents (WWII Registration Card, passport), he said he was born in Budapest. Regards, Xavier 90.40.188.183 (talk) 15:13, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Birth location
Talk:Jean Ure

message: Article still needs a lot of work but at least it now carries some references.  With over 170 children's published, this author certainly meets notability guidelines. --Plad2 (talk) 19:10, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Added Lead Section, some Background and references.  Deleted "no citations" tag 

message: For interest, a Jean Ure (presumably the subject) is credited as the translator into English of six volumes in the long-running Bob Morane series of adventure novels by Belgian author "Henri Vernes".
According to the Morane article and The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction (see here), Ure's translations are:
:The Dinosaur Hunters (London: Corgi Books, 1966; orig. Les Chasseurs de dinosaures, Verviers, Belgium, 1957),
:The White Gorilla (London: Corgi Books, 1967; orig. Le gorille blanc, Verviers, Belgium, 1959),
:Treasure of the Golcondas (London: Corgi Books, 1967; orig. La Couronne de Golconde, Verviers, Belgium, 1959),
:The Yellow Shadow (London: Corgi Books, 1966; orig. L'ombre jaune, Verviers, Belgium, 1959),
:City of a Thousand Drums (London: Corgi Books, 1966; orig. Trafic aux Caraïbes, Verviers, Belgium, 1961),
:Operation Parrot (London: Corgi Books, 1968; orig. La voix du mainate, Verviers, Belgium, 1962).
{The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 2.221.80.201 (talk) 06:28, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Other translation work
Talk:Jeanne Birdsall

message: As User:p64de I changed the publication date format (1 seven-year-old instance) from yyyy-mm-dd to mdy. Revert that if you care.
We have cited her website "About Jeanne" since 2006 with publication date 2005. She now displays no date. It is evident that the site has been revised and I deleted the publ for "About Jeanne" altho no new content is evident to me in that page. 
(We cite two of her webpages. Perhaps, and certainly if the number increases, we should switch to one full citation of her website with short citations of its pages.) --P64 (talk) 01:59, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Dates
Talk:Jeff Danziger

message: I included two references that show that Jeff Danziger's cartoons are still widely distributed in Vermont newspapers (as in fact they are internationally).  This is a fact that can be verified just by a simple search engine query. Shava23 (talk) 03:08, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  JD's status in Vermont Newspapers 

message: I question this section -- I can't find any information on this controversy in a search on terms in Google at all.  I suspect that the quote given is from a letter to the editor, although I haven't found it in the Barre-Montpelier Times-Argus archives on the web.  I deleted the one line I knew to be false, which was about JD's cartoons not being carried in Vermont newspapers, implying that he'd lost respect on the editorial page due to this controversy.  I'll leave it to a senior editorial type to judge the rest of that section. Shava23 (talk) 03:08, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Casino controversy 
Talk:Select or special committee (United States Congress)

message: Hi. this article needs to be renamed to Select or special committee of the United States Congress. will wait in order to allow others to comment.--Sm8900 (talk) 13:45, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: — Tartan357  (Talk) 21:51, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  article rename 
Talk:Eugene Twombly

message: dam, he died of a broken heart.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.95.23.187 (talk) 09:32, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Actually, the final episode of the series is the ONLY episode in which I remember Twombly appearing.  There had been a similar character in the early 40's, named Virgil Rhymer (played by Frank Nelson).  And in 1940-1941, there had been an unnamed "Sound Man" on the Burns & Allen Show, whose schtick was that he was Harvard educated, and bitterly resented having to do such a menial job, even though he was a lot better off financially than all the others in his class, who had become scientists.
But as far as I remember, Twombly was strictly a one-shot character.
75.103.13.52 (talk) 16:46, 16 April 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Recurring Character?
Talk:Carol P. Christ

message: *"...Womanspirit Rising (1979/1989) which revolutionized the teaching and study of religion in North America." This overstatement is enthusiastic but uninformative. Can anyone express in a focused way the effect this book did actually have? --Wetman 01:31, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: *The essay "Why Women Need the Goddess" does not argue in favor of a hypothesis about historical goddess worship, though she may do that elsewhere in her book. The essay's focus is the argument for the re-appropriation of Goddess symbols in a feminist context132.205.236.27 (talk) 18:36, 28 November 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Incorrect Summary of "Why Women Need the Goddess"
Talk:Jeffrey A. Krames

message: I've added a further reading section for citations that I personally cannot get to the content for.  If someone can reach the content and transform the further reading item into a proper citation/source, please do so and drop the section if it becomes empty.  Thanks. --User:Ceyockey (talk to me) 14:46, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Further reading section
Talk:F. R. Crawley

message: https://archive.org/search.php?query=creator%3A%22Crawley+Films%22 Victor Grigas (talk) 05:25, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bunch of his films here, marked public domain too
Talk:Pregnancy discrimination

message: I changed "expectant people" to "expectant women"  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.177.232.89 (talk) 18:11, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: The Scotsman has a whole section on this general topic. Including an article here on particular topic. Khirad 01:33, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: The Scotsman

message: It's a bit superfluous to have "Pregnancy Discrimination Act" redirect to "Pregnancy discrimination".  The articles should be split in effort to bring less attention to the non-worldwide POV, since an article on the United States' PDA would obviously focus only in the United States. -myrmidon (talk) 04:40, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Split

message: Hello! I would potentially like to add a section about pregnancy discrimination specifically in the work place. Pregnancy discrimination in the workplace is a big issue that has a serious impact on women's careers and career choices.  While women don't always face "formal" discrimination in the workplace, there is research that suggests there is interpersonal, or more discrete discrimination that takes place. Any feedback is appreciated. Check out my user page to see my sources! Courtwang (talk) 04:07, 29 January 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proposed Edits 

message: The line "The Equal Rights Amendment could ensure more robust sex equality ensuring that women and men could both work and have children at the same time" in the first paragraph doesn't seem very necessary for a summary of the article. It's also very biased. I think it should be removed. VampireLenin (talk) 20:36, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  ERA 

message: — Assignment last updated by Catherineaston (talk) 04:13, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education assignment: Gender and the Law
Talk:Jeffrey Sweet

message: One sentence in the article may be an error: 
"The script, officially credited to the pseudonym Ralph Gallup, was nominated for an Emmy, and the show won a Peabody Award."
In his book The Dramatist's Toolkit, Sweet says "I once did a (...) rewrite (...) only to see the writer who had quit the project be nominated for an Emmy".
71.167.239.159 (talk) 21:04, 15 November 2012 (UTC)

message: Is this the same Jeff Sweet who wrote a musical, the name of which I forget, which was produced by the interns at Milwaukee Repertory Theatre circa 1971?  I was an intern there from Grinnell College at the time, and I sang his song, “The Day Before Today“ in that production. I still have the original score somewhere. I loved that song! —NM 76.104.169.140 (talk) 06:09, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Another Jeff Sweet musical?
Talk:Swarley

message: in keeping with the episode, Barney is referred to as Swarley throughout this episode page. DO NOT CHANGE SWARLEY TO BARNEY! Eldude611 01:33, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: On the DVD commentary track, the show's creators said that the opening scene's reference to hanging out in a bar being more fun than hanging out in a coffee shop was NOT a Friends dis.  They needed the show to start in a coffee shop and that was the dialogue they came up with.  Later, people pointed out that it could be taken as a reference to Friends.  71.62.226.167 (talk) 04:06, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Friends]] 

message: JERK NAILS. As mentioned in the show by Robin (as a kind of equivalent for the crazy eyes) could be a reference to Barney since he is known for having a thing for manicure and he is considered to be a jerk  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.119.5.237 (talk) 10:01, 20 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled 2

message: Don't have time to fix the article, looks like many standard sections are missing (possibly due to over zealous misinterpretation WP:TRIVIA as an excuse to delete instead of clean up or improve). If you have time you may be able to recover them from the article history. Adding Barney's blog about Swarley and will try to fix up article properly later. -- Horkana (talk) 16:19, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Barney's blog
Talk:Jennifer Greene

message: Is she related to the Canadian Pro Wrestling Hart Family? I see she's from Michigan which should answer the question...however, this page is linked to Martha Hart's (Owen Hart's widow) page. 65.43.96.3 (talk) 15:32, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Relation to the Hart family

message: Sex 41.150.248.42 (talk) 16:10, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sex in mind
Talk:Felix Adler (screenwriter)

message: Updated the page based on personal information I have on Felix as he is my great Uncle. Added fact he was a vaudeville actor.  Removed reference to his "hoping for work that never came".  That seems somewhat defamatory and the source should be referenced. Also changed "Hollywoodlan" to Holleywood Hills.  I'm not sure about this one, but Hollywoodlan is not a place. I was able to find a "Beachwood Apartments" in Hollywood Hills which would make sense.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tlbernstein (talk • contribs) 07:11, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Changes made by tlbernstein
Talk:Jennifer Toth

message: The primary thing this person is known for only gets a short paragraph, and other than a weaselly "allegedly" there's no mention that the content of this book is considered to have been almost wholly fabricated. There are links at the bottom to two articles talking about the controversy, but there's no mention of it whatsoever here. DreamGuy (talk) 17:58, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I added a "Controversy" section. Hope that helps.--Auric (talk) 18:51, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Works for me. DreamGuy (talk) 19:33, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV problems 
Talk:Jeremy Wilson

message: The article was drafted some years ago by, I believe, someone who has since died. Consequently the most recent references are to events in 2007.
A few points:
1) I have almost completely retired from business copywriting and editing - although that was my main career. Maybe "He was formerly...."
2) " as well as other works about Lawrence's life" - What does this refer to? Since 1997 my wife and I have been editing an (ongoing) scholarly edition of Lawrence's works and correspondence. We haven't jointly edited or published anything about Lawrence.
2) "He is acknowledged as the leading authority on T.E. Lawrence [1]" - Despite the reference there is no source (though I think Malcolm Brown once said something like that in a book review). Is such a statement really necessary? 
3) "Wilson's first published work on Lawrence was an edition of Lawrence's commonplace book, Minorities; Good Poems by Small Poets and Small Poems by Good Poets, published in 1971. After considerable research, he was able to compose an introduction to the collection that gives readers an understanding of how the poems reflected Lawrence's life and thoughts.
"In 1975, as a result of the success of Minorities, A. W. Lawrence appointed Wilson to be the authorised biographer of T. E. Lawrence. Wilson spent years of research, accumulating considerably more information about Lawrence than had been published before." - Is all that detail necessary? If the whole article went to these lengths, it would be very long. 
4) "Through Castle Hill Press he and his wife edit and publish scholarly editions of Lawrence's works and correspondence." - this has already been said, more or less, in the first para.
5) "Wilson has given numerous papers on Lawrence, including..."  I try to keep up-to-date a page on the T.E. Lawrence Studies website that lists my publications about T.E.Lawrence, public lectures, etc. Here is a link. The problem of attempting even a selective list here is that somebody would have to update it from time to time. If the external link is acceptable, I'd leave it at that. 
5) "Wilson developed and manages a comprehensive T.E. Lawrence web site. This includes the texts of many of Lawrence's writings." - the web site has been discussed earlier.
Jeremy M Wilson (talk) 19:30, 27 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments (this article is about me)