Talk:Like a Rolling Stone/Archive 1

message: This talk page is simply a huge, old flame war. someone should archive it, it is a disgrace to the song. 129.173.194.66 17:03, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Someone should ....

message: I don't want to get into a revert-the-reversion wikipedia battle, so I'm going to revert it one more time (pending your rebuttal to the below), but if you really, really want this version, that's fine.  I would say the following in response to your comments:
1) You didn't wait for my responses. -- I waited nearly a full day for your responses.
::8 hours is not a "full day."
2) your account that the song ia (sic) adapted from a short story Dylan wrote, which contradicts Marcus, Heylin, and Shelton, as well as the 1966 Dylan interview I quoted  -- The quotation you quoted: "I found myself writing this song, this story, this long piece of vomit, 20 pages long, and out of it I took Like A Rolling Stone and made it as a single."  My "account" that it was adapted from a short story consists of one sentence which began: "Dylan once stated...."  Did he or did he not, given the above quotation, once make that statement?
::He made that statement, which is not what you say in your text.  You say "Dylan once stated that he based the lyrics on a short story he had written about a debutante who becomes a loner after dropping out of high school" and that's what needs to be sourced.
3) your comment that Dylan invited Kooper to the LARS session, which contradicts Marcus, Heylin, and, I believe, Kooper -- When did I comment that Dylan invited Kooper to the session?  The sentence begins: Kooper had been invited to the session as a guitarist...  Dylan is not mentioned, nor is anyone, as the agent of the action.  That is why I chose to use the passive voice, as the agent is unimportant and better left out.  The important thing is WHY he was invited, not who invited him.  I think your comment evinces a hard-and-fast adherence to a "people, places and times" philosophy.  Sometimes, though, it's good to have some motivations, character development and something somebody might actually enjoy reading, instead of a card catalog entry.  Regardless, though, the fact remains that I never mention Dylan or anyone else as having done the inviting, so your complaint here is unfounded.  
::I fouled that up; the error is that Kooper was not invited to the sessions as a guitarist, but as a spectator.  Tom Wilson invited him, and Dylan picked his own guitarists.
4) your comment that Dylan was said to intensely dislike Warhol in the spring of 1965     -- This is according to popular myth, and to the previous version of this article which you had left unchanged.  Thus, I endeavored to include it in the new version in an attempt to merge my version, the original version and your version.  It doesn't need to stay.
with regard to specific text:
5) Presenting a preferred interpretation of a set of lyrics and dismissing other interpretations with significant support is plainly an NPOV violation.  -- The new paragraph about the interpretation of the lyrics is entirely taken from YOUR previous version (except for the additional comment about Dylan's purported feelings for Warhol).  WTF?  Oh, and I changed a bad semicolon.  WTF?
::That's a response to your general comments, not to specific text, and is more applicable to your previous version of the article. 
6) I don't think it's appropriate for the bulk of the text of an entry about a song to be a single editor's interpretation/commentary on the lyrics. The history of the page shows that you wiped out previous editors' lyrics comments, in particular the opinion that the lyrics bordered on the misogynistic -- an opinion that is neither better nor worse than the one you express.  Opinion is not "information." -- I agree, and I again respond that the paragraph about the interpretation of the lyrics is almost entirely YOURS.  Thus, I remain confused.  If you are referring to the paragraph that SUMMARIZES the thrust of the lyrics, how in the heck does that qualify as opinion?  It's just summarizing what the lyrics mean, including a quotation from the lyrics.  If you are unhappy with my suggestion that the lyrics are sardonic or sarcastic, my recommendation is that you actually listen to LARS.
::My comment about the interpretation of the lyrics sets out the most common speculation, which isn't necessarily mine. It's mentioned in the major bios, in books about Sedgwick, etc. I mention it not because I agree with it, but because it is the most prominent speculation (by a wide mark). I left it in as a compromise, since you were insistent that some reference to lyric interpretation was vital.
7) The covers section was unsourced, unverifiable, and had as much to do with one editor's opinions of the merits of particular covers as anything else.  If you want, for example, to say that B.B. King's cover of LARS is one of the more famous ones, you should be able to cite a survey, or at least an appropriate source discussion. I'm going to add links to a pair of cover lists instead. -- The sentence reads: These artists include such luminaries as...  Where do I state that the below versions are the most famous covers?  I just state that these are some famous artists who have done covers of the song (either live or on studio albums).  I would say that the burden is on you to prove that the below artists do not qualify as "luminaries," and not on me to prove that they do.  At any rate, this info is easily verifiable and is not so crucial to the factual integrity of the article that many reasonable people would seriously consider requiring citations for these.  I suppose I could list the albums on which each of these covers appear...  Again, though, please read the sentence before you comment on it, as this is the second time that you have accused me of saying something that I didn't say because you failed to do a close read.  
::I would say the burden of proof is on the person who adds the text.
8) I didn't see any substance in the instrumentation section; listing some but not all of the instruments used, with a subjective comment about Kooper, doesn't strike me as appropriate.  There are a lot of people out there who think Mike Bloomfield's guitar parts are more "famous," and more important to the song, than Kooper's keyboards. -- Every instrument used was listed, except electric piano.  It strikes me as more sensical to add one instrument and keep the information about who played what (which does, for some crazy reason, strike me as "substance"), than to delete everything and leave people guessing.  One portion of the comment about Kooper may, indeed be subjective (the rest, about his rarely playing organ, etc., is not).  It is nevertheless an opinion held by many people, which is all I stated in that section.  I would also rejoinder that while Bloomfield's guitar parts are undoubtably famous, the use of a guitar in a folk-rock song is far from uncommon, whereas the use of an organ is.  Remember, we're theoretically writing this article for someone who has NOT HEARD the song, so we want to give it as much texture and life as we can.  Plus, again, this is an anecdote-rich subject, and I think the information about Kooper rarely playing organ and yet rocking the house is very interesting and worth knowing.  
::And that argument rests on your characterization of the song as a folk-rock song; which is mostly subjective and, in terms of Dylan's intentions, probably inaccurate.
And I would make a few other comments (I'm not trying to needle you, but to point some things out, if you choose to revert back to your version again after my revision):
1)  You consistently misuse the semicolon.  The semicolon should generally only be used as a replacement for a direct coordinating conjunction.  Using it as a subordinating conjunction is not standard.  It should not be used simply as a long comma, and it should NEVER be used to replace a period.  On the other hand, if you're taking some literary license in your usage, that's cool, but then why castigate me for doing much the same thing with the content?
::Write back when you learn how "privilege" is spelled.
2) Slavish adherence to the wikipedia "rules", such as NPOV, etc., makes for pretty piss-poor reading.  I would posit that while it is unarguably crucial to have factually accurate information, it is equally as important to create something that someone would enjoy reading.  This is especially true when discussing such anecdote-rich subjects as LARS, Dylan and 60's-era rock music.  Your version is fine, but it reads like a book report.  I think LARS deserves a bit more soul.  That's my two-cents, anyway.
::I would say it reads like an encyclopedia entry, which is, I would think, the goal.  I would not trade off factual accuracy for more pleasant prose.
3) You seem to remove things just because I wrote them.  Why take out which instruments were played by the session musicians?  Does that need a footnote or something?  Giving people less information just to preserve a version that you like the look of strikes me as egotistical.  Why remove the section headings?  Even if you want less text, they still make the article easier to navigate...  Please understand, I'm not trying to turn this into a contest of the wills, I just want to create an article that is worthy of Wikipedia, LARS, and that people will read.
::Why did you take out my reference to the late Paul Griffin, a well-known studio keyboardist who provided the piano intro and riffs that are an integral part of the track?Monicasdude 21:32, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Further Comments 

message: Deleted text, my comments in italics:
"Like a Rolling Stone" is a song written and performed by Bob Dylan. It first appeared on Dylan's 1965 release Highway 61 Revisited. Aside from being one of Dylan's longer songs (about 6 minutes), it is perhaps Dylan's most popular song, and has influenced countless later artists and, indeed, entire subgenres of rock and roll.
::First appeared as a single, about two months before H61R was released.  Not even the longest song on the album, and not in the same league as "Desolation Row," "Brownsville Girl," "Sad-Eyed Lady Of The Lowlands," "Highlands," . . . .
In 2004, Rolling Stone Magazine ranked Like a Rolling Stone as the #1 "greatest song of all time." While the ranking was subject to the inevitable criticisms and detractions (one being that the magazine chose Dylan's song as the best merely because of its title), it is nevertheless indicative of the hugely iconic status that Like a Rolling Stone still holds in popular culture to this day.
::The Rolling Stone list was compiled by polling 172 (the magazine's count) voters; I've never seen any criticism that RS "fixed" the poll to put this song at the top.
Lyrics & Interpretation
Dylan is among the most successful songwriters in the, for lack of a better term, "screw-you" subgenre of songs. But while some of his other screw-you songs have been very successful (notably Positively_4th_Street and Don't_Think_Twice_(It's_All_Right)), Like a Rolling Stone, is generally regarded as the best of them. It is certainly the most popular, receiving more consistent radio airplay than any of his other songs, regardless of type.
::I believe the vernacular term has been "putdown" songs, not that it's a hard-and-fast technical term. I don't know of any source supporting the claim about radio airplay. 
In part, this popularity may due to the ease with which many people can identify with the song's vitriolic attack on its object, presumably a former lover of Dylan's, for her arrogance and stupidity. The lyrics in large part consist of a sardonic description of the formerly priveleged lifestyle of its object, and how the object squandered that privelege through ignorance, naivete, and pride. The lyrics also clearly demonstrate Dylan's (somewhat sadistic) pleasure in the fall that the object has taken.
The most famous section of the lyrics drips with sarcasm when it asks:
        How does it feel?
    To be on your own,
    With no direction home,
    Like a complete unknown,
    Like a rolling stone?
While many listeners believe the song to be directed at a specific former lover of Dylan's (which would place it in the same vein as Positively 4th Street, for example), some have commented that Dylan may, in fact, be castigating himself. However, while it is indubitable that Dylan engaged in some wild behavior in his lifetime, it seems unlikely that he would launch an attack at himself for having fallen into obscurity and malaise at a time when he was at his most famous and productive.
::Given that Dylan himself has said something like this (the quote very roughly goes "When I look back at some of those song, when I said 'you' I really meant "me"), this heavily non-NPOV segment ends rather badly.''
An alternative interpretation would have it that the subject of the song is Andy Warhol, whom Dylan supposedly disliked intensely. This, again, does not seem to be borne out by the lyrics, as Warhol was neither obscure nor destitute at the time at which the song was written. A more likely suggestion is that the song is based (at least in part) on socialite Edie Sedgwick who was part of Warhol's entourage, and who was the subject of a tug-of-war of sorts between Warhol's crowd and Dylan's.
::I don't know of anybody who's seriously/solidly suggested the song is about Warhol; but there is a good argument that the diplomat/Siamese cat lines allude to him, strenghening the Sedgwick theory.''
For his part, Dylan stated that he based the lyrics on a short story he had written about a debutante who becomes a loner after dropping out of high school.
::This really needs a primary source if it's going to be mentioned at all; the standard origin, taken from a Dylan interview in 1966, is: "I found myself writing this song, this story, this long piece of vomit, 20 pages long, and out of it I took Like A Rolling Stone and made it as a single."
The title of the song and it's refrain, are not, as some have suggested, a reference to The Rolling Stones. Instead, they refer to the aphorism "A rolling stone gathers no moss," and suggest that the object of the song is forced by her indigent lifestyle to continually move from place to place, never finding time to "gather moss" or put down roots. Dylan said that he got the idea for the song from the Hank Williams number Lost Highway, which contains the lyric: "I'm a rolling stone, I'm alone and lost."
Music & Performance
Like a Rolling Stone, produced by Tom Wilson, contains some compelling instrumentation. Apart from Dylan's standard harmonica and guitar, as well as drums and bass guitar, the song is famous for (and instantly recognizable because of) its striking organ part, played by Al Kooper. So integral is this organ part, that it is considered de rigueur for any covers of the song.
::Given that Dylan played the song on tour for 13 years without a keyboardist of any kind, and only his own electric piano for the last 4, this doesn't pan out. 
Some music critics have noted the disconnect between the rather mean-spirited, sarcastic lyrics and the more-or-less upbeat music. This, however, is not uncommon for Dylan: a similar example can be found in Don't Think Twice (It's All Right). It can be said to increase the ironic force of the lyrics to some degree.
Covers & Miscellany
Like a Rolling Stone has been covered many, many times and is a very popular choice for bands to cover at live shows, if not on their recordings. 
::Source/backup?
Some of the more famous (live and otherwise) cover versions include those by:
    The Black Crowes
    Jimi Hendrix (well known for his Dylan covers)
    Nancy Sinatra (almost universally panned, and deservingly so)
    B.B. King
    and, appropriately
    The Rolling Stones (who took 30 years to finally cover it in 1995)
It has been said by some critics that Like a Rolling Stone "raised the bar for future songwriters," in terms of its musical and lyrical quality, as well as in terms of its sheer length. Interestingly, following the #1 ranking by Rolling Stone, Columbia Records reported that Like a Rolling Stone was almost "canned" because of its length and the company's attachment to the then mainstream genres of jazz and pop.
::Columbia didn't report this; an ex-publicist for the label wrote it in the New York Times.  Associating a specific quote with "some critics" is generally not appropriate.
:Aside from this decidedly non-exhaustive list of relatively factual issues, the article seems to have devolved into a run of duelling lyrics interpretations, most of which fail the NPOV test (as do a few other comments). I've done a cleanup job on it, but what I've left is nowhere near a finished product, but, I hope, a base people can build up from. Monicasdude 18:33, 16 Jun 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Monicasdude Comments 

message: This could be a lapse into hyperbole I suggest. For those of us who heard it at the time, we knew it was good and a significant change of genre for Dylan - but 'most influential ever recorded'? not really. And of my two sons (20 & 17), the younger one has never heard of it and the older one probably views it  as a piece of black & white newsreel! Linuxlad 13:22, 18 August 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: It sounds hyperbolic to me, too, but it's not very different from what the Rolling Stone top 500 songs piece says, and the impact on mass-market popular music -- on what would and wouldn't be played on AM radio in particular -- can't be denied. I've toned it down a notch; what do you think of the revision? Monicasdude 05:04, 19 August 2005 (UTC)

text: I'm pretty much in agreement with all of that -- but I do think that the universe of "pop music singles" (as opposed to "all recorded music") is sufficiently well-defined as to be meaningful; that there is a well-developed body of commentary on that universe; and that in the commentary there is a consensus that the LARS single had a substantial impact on mass-audience music than few other singles made.  That's what I think should be reported in some form, without the unqualified superlatives presented as facts (to which you quite correctly object). Monicasdude 14:34, 23 August 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: 'One of the most influential ever recorded'?

message: I included a comment on a scene from the recent Scorsese film, 'no direction home', which appears to show Dylan rather upset after a mixed reception to one of his concerts c 1966. Someone has deleted, but I've reverted for the time being. I don't wish to get into a flame war over this - life is too short - but ask those who disagree with the comment to give an alternative interpretation (the clip IS publically available on CD I believe). Linuxlad
:Whether one agrees or disagrees, or has an alternative, isn't the point.  Editors' individual interpretations aren't appropriate for inclusion. Violate both "no original research" and verifiability guidelines. Monicasdude 00:00, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: As rewritten, it's your interpretation of Scorsese's unstated motives in editing the video, which would violate NOR and verifiability, since we can't verify what Scorsese's motives are. And what does this have to do with the song, anyway? It's a gloss of commentary about commentary about the song, which is far too tenuous a connection. Monicasdude 16:09, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: no direction home

message: I understand that there was quite the flame war above, and frankly I don't care to read through it all, but the topic of cover versions came up. This currently doesn't appear on the page. Why not? This seems to be fairly standard practice with articles like I Want To Hold Your Hand (former featured article), or Yesterday (a song, like this one, which has many very famous covers). It doesn't have to be prolonged (it isn't in either of those articles) but there have been some notable covers of this song (B.B. King, Jimi Hendrix, etc.) that should be mentioned in any article about this song. The Disco King 05:02, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, cover versions are addressed via the external links section, which cites both a comprehensive list and a selective list. The problem is that Dylan's original version is pretty clearly definitive; most of the memorable covers are generally seen as memorably awful. Monicasdude 05:46, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Cover Versions?

message: There seems to be an edit war in this part... a analysis of the song that has been deleted, then reverted, several times. I think it should be kept deleted, as it is quite POV and original research. Besides, the style is completely unencyclopedic. This analysis should not be here. Do you agree?--Ryusenshi 15:16, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes. Personal essays don't belong on Wikipedia. I'm keeping this article on my watchlist and if 158.223.61.27 continues to ignore their warnings, then I will be referring him/her to Wikipedia:Administrator intervention against vandalism. --  Netsnipe  CVU (Talk)  17:30, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Further readings part

message: Should Masterpieces be removed, seeing as how it is not part of the "official" Dylan cannon? And, if it isn't removed, because I know I'll have my critics, shouldn't all the other greatest hits-style albums, like the recent The Very Best of Bob Dylan, that contain the song be added? Maybe it would be better to list the major releases and then make a mention like "it has also been released on a number of Dylan's greatest hits collections." Dlmccaslin 05:25, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Versions on Dylan albums

message: I have moved this page back to Like a Rolling Stone as per Wikipedia:Naming conventions#Album titles and band names. Regards -- Ianblair23 (talk) 00:09, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Page move

message: I was looking at the list, thinking that there were a lot more influential/ epitomizing rock songs than Dylan's scratchy-voiced tune.  But wait- Rolling Stone Magazine (not panning the publication, it's all good) is named after the song, thus the #1 spot. No matter how "convention- challenging" the song is, there are many other songs more worthy of the #1 spot. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.253.103.173 (talk) 07:41, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Song title vs. Magazine title and the song's placement 

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*Talk:Like a Rolling Stone/Archive 1 Created 14 April 2007 
Please start any new topics below, if you want to continue archived topics, please "pull" the material to this page and start it with a new heading.--Mikerussell 16:17, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Archives 

message: Since March someone has asked for an attrubution for "It is regarded by many as one of the greatest popular music songs of all time". This gets to be a sign of the tagger's own lack of trust and ability to put 2 + 2 together, to be asking for a fact check on this assesment. What sourced could confirm this to the satisifaction of the requestor; after all, common sense suggests there is no entity of board of judges to make these matters of opinion acceptable to all. If they read the article and had a sense for the sources cited, they could deduce the work is regarded by many as "one of the greatest popular music songs of all time". That's all the article needs to say. Thus I took out the tag.--Mikerussell 16:24, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've heard Greil Marcus say it is his single favorite song, but I'm not sure he's said that anywhere citable. Speaking of Marcus, has someone working on this actually read his book on the song? I would imagine that the article could be greatly expanded using material from that book. It's mentioned here as "further reading", but not cited. - Jmabel | talk 23:22, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Attribution tag 

message: It would be good to see some reference for any "misogynist" accusations the song may have received.  Reading the lyrics, it is not very comprehensible to interpret it as misogynistic when the lyrics only criticize (even if it is in a somewhat scathing manner)a sheltered rich girl's naivity to the trauma of life on the streets--is it because he refers to her as a "babe" once?  Or is it simply because the subject of criticism is a girl and not a boy?  It would be helpful to see the line of argument that justifies the accusations of misogyny. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.137.100.126 (talk) 19:38, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Misogyny? 

message: I think this song is about popular high school kids about to face the real world. Come on "Princess...all the pretty people thinking that they got it made...Napoleon in rags(Jocks in dirty uniforms)", theres more messages I found in the song but I dont know all the lyrics by heart.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by The Blizzard King (talk • contribs) 02:29, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Real Meaning 

message: *Lead need rewritting, its just an overview of article remember, remove quote from lead, its too specific.
**Presume you mean Springsteen's. Don't see that quotes in the lead is a problem, as long as it flows, but not hugely fussed if it went into the body along with other assessments (in the 'Legacy' section, since it's not a contemporary appreciation which would generally come under a 'Reviews' or 'Reaction' section. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 23:29, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Improvements 

message: Do we really need the last paragraph of Recording? I don't think it's relevant to the article that he recorded "Sounds of Silence" in the same studio. Cheers, Kodster (You talkin' to me?)  (Stuff I messed up) 20:29, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Remove - pointless.Realist2 ('Come Speak To Me') 20:49, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Sounds of Silence

message: Best of luck, it should go well. --Realist2 ('Come Speak To Me') 01:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA 

message: Shouldn't it be mentioned that the title is taken from "A rolling stone gathers no moss," with a brief explanation...? :)  A nod to the proverb, Muddy Waters using it, The Rolling Stones getting their name from it, Dylan using it, and Rolling Stone magazine taking its name from it would be interesting. Rolling Stone magazine placing the song at #1 on their list is a bit biased, but that's their problem :)) BTWW, the "References in other songs" section is weak.--andreasegde (talk) 08:10, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, but we'll need a source for that. I got a book that explains the meaning, I'll use it when I get back. And that book also contains material for the "References in other songs" section, so I'll work on that too when I get back. Thanks for the suggestions. Cheers, Kodster (You talkin' to me?) (Stuff I messed up) 11:38, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Hi guys...

message: OK guys, for future reference. I will not fix the lead until the rest of the article is completed. It just makes more sense that way. Thanks. Cheers, Kodster (You talkin' to me?)  (Stuff I messed up) 11:43, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Makes sense.  --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 11:51, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lead 

message: I'm sorry to say I have failed this article's GA nomination. The reasons:
*The article is already sparse on content, but once you remove stuff that isn't supposed to be there at all, you're left with barely anything. Stuff like Covers should not just be a list, "He covered it and so did she. And they mentioned the song in this song of theirs, and he performed it live once.") Info like that constitutes trivia per WP:TRIVIA, and I generally remove such "information" from articles with extreme prejudice. The correct way to write about covers is to mention their significance too, explain how a certain cover was important and how it shows the original song is so great in the first place. For example: Hendrix's live cover at Monterey Pop was really revolutionary. Apart from doing it in his own explosive way, Hendrix was very daring in that the song had such an ominous aura around it (even back then), that most artists were afraid to covering "Rolling Stone" for fear of disrespecting it. A list will simply not do.
**Okay, I changed this section so that all of the covers by Johnny Thunders, Cher, etc. are not listed one by one, but consolidated into one sentence. Here's the sentence:
Many artists have covered "Like a Rolling Stone", among them Johnny Thunders, The Four Seasons, The Rascals, Cher, Judy Collins, The Rolling Stones, and Jimi Hendrix, who played a version live at the Monterey Pop Festival.
**And then I go on to explain the importance of Hendrix's and Articuolo 31's versions.
*This is the greatest pop song ever. So theoretically, more has been written and said about this song than any other; just a routine google books search will give you loads of references. Apart from that reflecting rather poorly on this article's sparseness of useful content, it also makes me wonder why the author(s) of this article would want to use so many dubious online sources:
:* Herb Bowie is not notable enough to have his own Wikipedia article, so what makes him a reliable source on any thing? His website seems to be a self-published one too.
:**removed
:*What is a Warhol fansite doing here?
:**removed
:*IF you do not have the book, that does not mean you can use a review as a substitute. Note: the reviewing site doesn't seem reliable either.
:**removed
:*Again, a less than satisfactory source. Why are book reviews being used to source information about the greatest song ever? What's next, a blog to reference Macbeth?
:**removed
*Wow, "Like a Rolling Stone"'s legacy is Rolling Stone declaring it the greatest song ever and Bob saying, "that's not a big deal". And that's it. (were you going for a minimalist angle?)
**Response: I added some more info. It was absolutely horrid as it was, so I added some substantial "meat" to it. 
*The lead is... well, you can see for yourself. (Acclaimed Music? Really?)
**Still working on it, I'll save it to the end (making more sense considering that it has to accomodate the whole article).
*"Martin Scorsese's recent movie about Dylan, No Direction Home, appears to show, in footage filmed backstage in 1966, that Dylan was deeply affected by the mixed audience reception at that time." - OR, anyone, anyone?
**removed
*Then, of course the usual suspects: incoherent prose ("The song was originally written in 3/4 (waltz) time, and with a length of 1:36, was much shorter than the 4/4 version; it was later changed to 4/4."), references formatted incorrectly etc.. The Recording section is written in some weird tense that makes it read like play-by-play commentary more than anything else.
**I'm going to work on this next.
I see the WP:songs banner at the top of this talk page rating this article at start class. That's what this is, a start, nothing more. If you want to know what an "important" song's article is supposed to be like, look no farther than "Smells Like Teen Spirit". Hopefully, after a few months' hard work, using academic print sources, you can bring this article up to snuff, for that, good luck, indopug (talk) 18:17, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Indopug, just a note...  I think you may have been a touch harsh on this article.  I'm often thought to be a tough reviewer (there's a long discussion about that at a current RfA!), and I agree with all your criticisms, but I'd have thought that this article had potential still, and could perhaps be rectified if it were put on hold for a week, given that there's an active editor working on it.  (I don't mean myself, btw; I just popped in to help out with some formatting and copy-editing.)  Anyhow, I just thought I'd encourage the editors who've been working on this.  It's not a bad article although, yes, given that the song is so significant it could certainly be better sourced and more comprehensive.  --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 18:25, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh, it's quite alright. (I'm saying that b/c I'm the "main" (quote unquote) author of the article. Everything indopug had to say was completely true. There's no need to water it down by saying, "Oh, it's a good start" when that's all it is...a start. I completely see now that this article is, if no one minds me saying, nowhere near GA status. So, thank you for the harsh truth. I don't think this would have been worth "on hold" either. There's definitely more info out there, and considering that I do have the Like a Rolling Stone: Bob Dylan at the Crossroads book, there's no excuse IMO. That's all. --Cheers, Kodster (You talkin' to me?)  (Stuff I messed up) 19:16, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Phew, I had just drawn up a long argument defending myself, and then, edit conflict ... so thanks Kodster, for understanding, indopug (talk) 19:30, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, no big deal.  Just a suggestion.  --jbmurray (talk • contribs) 19:39, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I worked on a lot of these suggestions as well as Ruhrfisch's PR. I think it's a lot better, but it still needs some work. Help would be appreciated. Thanks. Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 00:12, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA fail 

message: Hey Is there anything I can do to help? Ill do anything I can. --Realist2 (Come Speak To Me) 03:02, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, what the article needs right now is more information. Could you expand on the "Legacy" section a bit more, because this song has an enormous legacy. If you could, please explain its influence on music and pop culture. Thanks. I'll be working on it a bit too. Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 21:30, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Sure ill give it a go. ;-) --Realist2 (Come Speak To Me) 21:32, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  How can help 

message: I added more info to "Cover Versions". Could someone please check it out? Thanks. Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 19:42, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cover Versions 

message: * - doesnt look professional/reliable
**done rm, got BBC site Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 18:54, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Dubious sources

message: *Notes, take a look at the notes, some have a full stop at the end of the page number yet some dont. Need consistancy in formatting. I would remove all full stops after the page number. — Realist2 (Come Speak To Me) 20:19, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: *"p" means one page, "pp" means more than one page (pages). Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 22:49, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Source formatting

message: Needs bulking up, you know what your article looks like now, make it an overview of your article, mention the most important aspects of each of your sections.
:done, it covers just about all the main parts. Cheers, Kodster (heLLo) (Me did that) 19:05, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Lead