Talk:Kidada Jones

message: I've endeavored to clean this article up a bit. It's not perfect but I've attempted to remove some things which might be construed as biased and less encyclopedic. Any suggestions, tips, further improvements are welcome.
She was married and divorced in the same year? Whoever wrote this biography needs to take classes on grammar.
It might be interesting to work in a little information about her relationship with Tupac Shakur prior to his death.  unak1978 16:58, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
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message: There were various categories referring to Kidada Jones as Jewish, as well as categories averring Russian and Welsh descent, none of which were sourced or even present in the text. I know her mother is Jewish, but that does not make her Jewish necessarily, and I am not an anti-Semite or self-hating Jew. I just like accuracy and precision. Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk) 00:00, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
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message: Hi there I reverted you for two reasons; the citation - its a bit messed up in several ways. I could fix the formatting, but I think the date may be off as  well. Vanity Fair is published monthly, so you wouldnt put a day date on a print magazine citation- it would be just (September 2013). However, I think that may be wrong - Vanity Fair had a big 100 years celebration issue that was published that month, in which they seem to have republished a lot of old stories. Although "die like a gangsta" isnt listed on the index webpage, I assume thats where you got the September 2013 date from. They clearly state the original story was published in the March 1997 issue here .
Which brings me to the second point- the text "Jones was waiting for Shakur in their Las Vegas hotel room when she was notified he was shot.  She rushed to the hospital and remained with him until he died six days later" isnt altogether supported by that citation. The article doesnt mention who or how or when she was notified. You might be better to write "Jones was waiting for Shakur in their Las Vegas hotel room when he was shot." but not really the rest. Then the article skips to describing Jones playing a CD for Shakur in hospital; it doesnt mention her rushing anywhere, and while it specifically mentions one visit, it makes no mention of duration and doesnt say she stayed with him night and day until his death. Quite possibly she she did, however the article doesnt say that, so you cannot use it to say that it does. I can help with the cite formatting if you need it. Curdle (talk) 15:11, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  re personal life section