Talk:Henry Clinton (British Army officer, born 1730)

message: Both the ODNB,  and the Nottingham University webpage in external links give his year of birth as 1730, not 1738.  The oDNB further states that his father obtained him a Lieutenant's commission in the New York militia in 1745 - even with his position as Governor, I think that a 7 year old is alittle young for that.  Is there a source for the later date?  David Underdown (talk) 15:26, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I think it was possible to buy a commission for such a young boy in those days - he would not actually serve, but he would gain years of seniority. DuncanHill (talk) 01:32, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The original 1887 DNB article had his date of birth as "around 1738" - I think we are right in going with the current edition. DuncanHill (talk) 01:46, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Year of birth 

message: Search results for Henry Clinton from the London Gazette.  David Underdown (talk) 15:27, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  London Gazette search hits 

message: You've made some progress during the past eight days, but there's still a lot to do to make this article into a GA-Class one. Here are some of my concerns:
*The lead is still too short and doesn't summarise the article completely
*A picture is still without a suitable caption
*The Later Life section is still far too short and needs expansion
*Legacy section stil only has one citation and needs one for each quotation
*Still not enough citations in some sections, especially the latter part of Commander In Chief. See my previous comments for more details.
*References either all need ISBN numbers or none should have them - several still have them.
*References also need to be properly cited using the templates.
I think that's enough for now. There has been work done on the article, but I feel it may be better to fail the article and allow you to work on it, then re-nom it at a later time. Skinny87 (talk) 20:07, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reviewer Comments 

message: Two of Henry Clinton descendants were actress Angela Baddeley and her sister Hermione Baddeley {Herminoe was married to a son of Edward Tennant, 1st Baron Glenconner and was a sister-in-law to Prime Minister H. H. Asquith}  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.53.145.204 (talk) 12:57, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  His descendants familiar to Americans! 

message: In "Later career" we find the phrase "he was re-elected to Parliament in 1790 for a riding in Launceston." - now, we do not have ridings in this sense in Britain (I believe it is a Canadian term). Launceston had two associated constituencies, Launceston (UK Parliament constituency) and Newport (Cornwall) (UK Parliament constituency) - I suspect the former is intended, but this does need to be checked. DuncanHill (talk) 01:21, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, it seems to have been Launceston (UK Parliament constituency), I will amend the article accordingly. DuncanHill (talk) 01:22, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Member of Parliament 

message: I have amended the place of death from Gibraltar to Portland Place, per the ODNB article. DuncanHill (talk) 01:33, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Place of death 

message: I suspect that Clinton was born in England - his father did not become Governor of Newfoundland until 1731 (the year after our subject's birth), and the ODNB article does not give a place of birth (the 1887 article gives Newfoundland, but this has him born about 1738). DuncanHill (talk) 01:50, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Place of birth 

message: Nelson was on the way back to England from India in 1776. It's unlikely that he involved in the attack on Fort Sullivan, which happened in America. I've therefore removed the entry. --Clithering (talk) 16:15, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Horatio Nelson 

message: Who else thinks that the title of this article is atrocious?  Might I suggest "Henry Clinton (British soldier)" or "Henry Clinton (British commander)" or some-such.  TuckerResearch (talk) 15:23, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: He's not the only Henry Clinton to have been a British soldier. DuncanHill (talk) 15:51, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: They were not a very imaginative lot when it came to names see William Henry Clinton the other son and brother. -- PBS (talk) 22:57, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: It is a bit unwieldly, but its probably the best way of disambiguating by linking him to the event by which he is best known. Lord Cornwallis (talk) 14:23, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I just stumbled upon this article and noticed this same problem. While I don't support removing the parenthetical, it is excessively long. Considering that, shouldn't we rename the many "Henry Clinton" articles with something shorter? I will make a new section below, since it has been six years. DaltonCastle (talk) 01:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title of this article 

message: I have made adjustments to this element based on the Unit History and the Army Rolls of the period.  The unit history shows that his unit, 2nd Battalion, 1st Foot Guards deployed in July 1760 which is why he wasn't in Germany before. There is no involvement of the 2nd Battalion, 1st Foot Guards (or any of that Regiment) at the Battles of Corpach (which was before they arrived) and Kloster Kampen. The same unit history is quite specific about where Clinton was wounded and it was not the battle of Freiberg.  The campaign history of the Seven Years War suggests that Prince Ferdinand was no where near the Battle of Freiberg and it was fought by the Prussian Army. The date of his promotion is in the Army Rolls but he was still held to Establishment of 1st Foot Guards in 1763. The units of the Regiment returned via Holland in January 1763 but it is not stated whether Clinton was with them but it seems unlikely.
He purchased Colonel in Chief (which is not command) of the 12th Regiment of Foot (the Suffolk Regiment) on 28 November 1766 but this is not chronologically in sequence and beyond the Seven Years War. The unit was commanded by Lieutenant Colonel William Picton. The discussion regarding friendships is not my expertise and I have left it. I hope this helps clarify this part of his history. Family locator (talk) 03:07, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Seven Years War 

message: Its been several years since the discussion, but what are everyone's thoughts about moving this page, as well as the pages for the other "Henry Clintons" to shorter, less cumbersome titles? Thoughts? DaltonCastle (talk) 01:41, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Both the men who would otherwise have their biographies at Henry Clinton were British Army officers, so including "British Army officer" in their disambiguations seems pointless to me, since it all it does it result in a five-word disambiguation where the first four words are identical.  It's also arguably a violation of WP:PARENDIS, which mandates that article title disambiguation should have "only as much additional detail as necessary".  So I would advocate at least dropping that, in favour of Henry Clinton (born 1730) and Henry Clinton (born 1771), though personally I think Henry Clinton (1730–1795) and Henry Clinton (1771–1829) would be much better and is more encyclopaedic.  But the titles I think would be best, and would be most useful to our readers, would be Henry Clinton (American Revolutionary War) and Henry Clinton (Napoleonic Wars), since I think there are far more people who, when typing "Henry Clinton" into the search box and seeing their list of options drop down, would be able to tell instantly which general they're looking for from that general's most notable war than from sets of dates that are rather close together. Binabik80 (talk) 20:00, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Trouble with that is that they were British and we call the contretemps in North America the American War of Independence, not the American Revolutionary War. DuncanHill (talk) 20:37, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, I know what we call the American Revolutionary War, but luckily Wikipedia has a mechanism to overcome exactly this sort of problem. An argument could be made for either term in his disambiguation, since he was indeed British but is notable for an overwhelmingly American topic.  I mean, I would be very surprised if British page views of both Sir Henry Clintons combined add up to the same number as American page views of this Sir Henry Clinton alone.  (He is, for instance, currently a recurring character on an American network television programme, though other characters have repeatedly referred to him as "Sir Clinton".)  I'd prefer "American Revolutionary War" as the main title, but that's because I've always preferred that as being much more natural English than "American War of Independence"; I wouldn't object to it going the other way. Or there's always the inferior option of the birth and death dates.  Binabik80 (talk) 22:05, 21 September 2016 (UTC)

text: This article was at Henry Clinton (American War of Independence) for a very long time; it was moved, apparently without discussion, in November 2015.  I further note that "born 1730" is IMHO a misstatement, because his exact year of birth is not currently known with precision (see article's first non-lede paragraph). Magic♪piano 22:34, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Potential title move

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