Talk:Mordechai Elon

message: MOS:INTRO: "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article..." - Should we be repeating such details "in response to revelations by Takana, a religious forum that was set up to deal with allegations of sexual harassment in the religious Zionist community" etc, which are contained in the main article? Chesdovi (talk) 15:29, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Seams important enough to me, not as important as the fact that Elon is an outspoken opponent of homosexuality convicted of having had same sex sexual contact with a minor - though. But admittedly, the "sexual misconduct" section could be more concise. Cheers, Ajnem (talk) 17:24, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Why is there more space given in the lead to his conviction than to why he is notable in the first place? The notability of this issue can only be secondary to why he is notable in the first place! That’s why it’s so notable! Trimming is in order. Chesdovi (talk) 17:30, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: This article should resemble Yitzhak Mordechai. There is too much detail about Elon's criminal activites. Chesdovi (talk) 11:43, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Disagree (with the latter sentence).  Perhaps there should be more detail about Mordechai's criminal activities.  Nomoskedasticity (talk) 15:17, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, maybe a little, but not so it tilts the overall bio, as it does in this article. Chesdovi (talk) 16:01, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

text: He is also now notable for being convicted of sexual offences.  Nomoskedasticity (talk) 18:26, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Indeed, that's why we mention it there. But we need not write about Takana. That is dealt with below. (If this had happened to any odd-bod, there would be no article at all. It is precisely due to his prominence that this is such a cause célèbre. Yet most the article is about this? How odd.) Chesdovi (talk) 22:39, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
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