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Talk:Cleveland

message: This 2006 FA, last reviewed in 2007, has fallen away from FA standards. A very large number of the citations date to the early 2000s, with outdated text throughout.  An issue is raised above about the #Climate section.  There are short stubby sections. There is MOS:SANDWICHing and layout issues. Citations are incomplete and inconsistent. There is repetitive prose (ctrl-f on "home to" for example). There is some bias/boosterism evident (eg, no mention in the article of blight or urban decay, which plagues Cleveland). The article is bloated, at 12,000 words, with large sections that could be carved out to a notable list page. Listing at WP:FARGIVEN. A top-to-bottom rewrite is overdue. SandyGeorgia (Talk)  14:42, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: @SandyGeorgia, thank you for your helpful comments! Me and the other editors have been working to improve the article since May but we need time to continue our work. Everything should be much improved in the next few months.) SashaFromSolon (talk) 18:22, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Thx!  I do not have the article watchlisted, so pls ping me when your work has advanced and if you need additional feedback.  As long as work is progressing, FAR is extremely lenient and forgiving. SandyGeorgia (Talk)  12:35, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: @SandyGeorgia, thank you! You will be notified when the work has advanced! SashaFromSolon (talk) 17:25, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Featured article review and update needed 

message: In general, it seems that single-sentenced paragraphs and short sections should be avoided to keep the Featured status of the article. Anyway, this is my observation.) SashaFromSolon (talk) 20:29, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Can you give some examples from the article? Magnolia677 (talk) 21:20, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: , yes, a good example was the 'Media' section, which had several single-sentence paragraphs and even single-sentence sections. This has now been fixed. SashaFromSolon (talk) 07:53, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comment
Talk:List of Nintendo GameCube network games

message: *If you look at Metroid Prime 2's Deathmatch you'll see a LAN option.
**The official Timesplitters 2 website says there is no LAN for the gamecube version only PS2 and XBox.  Also IGN, THe Metroid Wikipedia Page, and the official website all say there is no LAN for Metroid Prime 2.  Remember LAN is different than multiplayer-Jedi6
*Mario Party 7 is not a LAN game. It uses four controllers for eight people. Dynendal 09:36, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Additional LAN GAmes
Talk:Cost-of-production theory of value

message: The Polish economist Michał Kalecki [1] distinguished between sectors with "cost-determined prices" (such as manufacturing and services) and those with "demand-determined prices" (such as agriculture and raw material extraction.
I don't get it. Aren't all prices demand-determined? --Gbleem 12:32, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Michał Kalecki

message: "Marx's theory is not a true cost-of-production theory since the value of a commodity contains a component of surplus value unrelated to the physical cost of producing it."
Is this saying that his theory isn't a true cost-of-production theory because it does not explain the component of surplus value or because his theory  includes it and thus exceeds the bounds of a cost of production theory? The former would seem to me to be a very "wrong" arguement and the latter would need the sentance to be rephrased for clarity... --MatthewKarlsen 23:16, 23 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ambiguity 

message: I find the part about Smith a bit wierd. I am not aware of Smith speaking about factors of production at all. He is big time labour theory of value, just the diffrence with Marx is that price=value, cuz he didnt have the idea of the surplus.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 139.184.30.132 (talk) 11:39, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Smith
Talk:People's Liberation Army (disambiguation)

message: I suggest that all the "people's liberation" armies be given article titles which do NOT give the impression that Wikipedia endorses them as:
*being "of the people" - as opposed to being imposed by force "on the people"
*working for liberation - as opposed to enforcing tyranny
These armies are controversial; therefore, Wikipedia should avoid endorsing them or condemning them. Uncle Ed 12:31, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: The comment is very much unnecessary. Wikipedia as such does not endorse any political faction at all, and no article carries any warning text to the reader. Whether these groups would be particularily controversial could be debated. Personally, I believe more people in the world have antagonistic feelings towards George W. Bush than any of the groups mentioned on this list. --Soman 17:05, 23 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Hambleton, Rutland

message: According to the maps on the http://election-maps.co.uk website, the parish boundaries have not been realigned to fit with Rutland Water.  Hambleton CP occupies nearly all of the peninsula, but a small section of forest in the north-east is part of Exton CP.  The parish also contains segments apparently disconnected from the main part (except by water), east of Egleton CP (including [[Lax Hill]), and between Manton and Edith Weston CP.  Not sure if appropriate to mention this.  Morwen - Talk 12:36, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments
Talk:Dynamical billiards

message: It might be nice to have interactive billiard simulations. Anyone know how to do that? --MarSch 12:48, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Simulation 

message: Does this cover the same topic as Lorenz gas, or is that something different? (Lorentz gas redirects to this page.) Mike Peel 11:26, 11 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: A Lorentz gas is a  model for an electron moving through a lattice of atoms.  Lorentz introduced this model in 1904 to study the heat and electrical conductivity of metals.  Experimentally, Lorentz's model was not as good as Drude's model, but it provided the first example of a solution (although perturbative) to the transport equation when there are interactions. An often studied example of the Lorentz gas is a billiard, made famous by Sinai, where a fixed set of disks scatter a single point particle.  The collisions are specular and the disks are usually arranged to form a periodic lattice.   I am not aware of a Lorenz gas.  XaosBits 13:53, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Lorenz gas]]? 

message: The addition of information about "pump fields" seems to dangle.  the "pump" field is not
defined anywhere else (and I assume means the fiber coupling source of energy).  This should be stated explicitly (but I'm reluctant to do so since this is not my primary area).  Nonetheless, I tried to fix up the language associated with that part of the article. Chris 03:59, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Pump Field]]? 
Talk:Love Israel

message: Not very well written. I'm changing it, but the opening statement was "The Love Israel cult was a cult" which seems a tad redundant. I don't see any sources either.--T. Anthony 12:49, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I'm pretty sure that they were never a proper member of the Church Council of Greater Seattle. They had some sort of observer status. - Jmabel | Talk 08:10, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Church Council 

message: I'm a little concerned that much of the criticism and "cult" information in the earlier edit has been removed. The current page makes it seem like Love Israel was nothing more than a happy-go-lucky commune, and reflects nothing of the rather significant public controversies the that make up the group's history. I suggest that what can be verified from previous versions be placed in a "Controversy" section.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.147.53.153 (talk) 16:12, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Glossing over
Talk:Client-to-client protocol

message: A NOTICE is used to reply to a PRIVMSG, but what is used to reply to a NOTICE? The dcc resume protocol consists of a send offer, a resume reply, and then an acknowlegement. Would this be PRIVMSG, NOTICE, NOTICE, or PRIVMSG, NOTICE, PRIVMSG, or something else? Amaurea 12:52, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: You are never supposed to have anything automatically reply to a NOTICE.  Also, you want to know about the "DCC resume protocol", not the CTCP protocol, so check that out instead.  Oddity- 07:19, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

text: It can definitely be expanded.  It could include a list of conforming clients, what is most commonly implemented out of the spec (i.e. ACTION is the most common, escapes are (unfortunately) very uncommon, and sound is even less common).  It can describe what the standard CTCP character is, it can describe the typical PRIVMSG/NOTICE pattern, it can go into standard uses (i.e. Lag pings, are-you-really-there pings, VERSION pings, etc).  Yes, this is still a stub. — EtherealFlaim 09:40, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

message: "Since a PRIVMSG as a rule should not generate another PRIVMSG as a reply," Why not?
This page has no cited sources at all. 200.68.94.105 (talk) 14:18, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: For the PRIVMSG/NOTICE thing, per RFC1459This article is a stub, feel free to expand it.We lack (or at least last I checked) a citation template for internet RFCs. I've been working on other articles in these categories and hopefully by the time I make it to this one someone will have already made a RFC citation template. Also, see The Client-To-Client Protocol (CTCP).--Tothwolf (talk) 15:00, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  PRIVMSG rule
Talk:Jardin de Tivoli, Paris

message: The article Jardin de Tivoli, Paris sounds like strange to me.
It was a good idea to create such an article: there were Tivoli gardens in the past in Paris (1766-1826).
However the explanations in the article are either wrong or they have to be developed.
I don't know the streets: Rue des Orangers, Rue de Tivoli, and the Rue des Oliviers????
A children's library is located at this site: interest???
I give you a French site URL about Tivoli in Paris:
http://www.faget-benard.com/petit%20bout%20du%20monde/textes/chap2/tivoli.htm
Regards
Jpm2112 12:58, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: [Untitled]

message: I read the link in French supplied by JPM2112.  The Tivoli Gardens in Paris existed up to the mid-nineteenth century.  They no longer do.  The French link discusses their fascinating history.  I'm new to this process, and I'm finding the whole Wikipedia editing process cumbersome.  The best thing to do with this article is to delete it.  None of the information it contains is accurate.
You can look :fr:Tivoli (Paris). It is a stub I have just created. Jpm2112 08:45, 13 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Delete? 

message: Now it is clear: there are no Tivoli gardens in Paris at the moment. But.... the article Jardin de Tivoli, Paris is related to gardens, what are located in Le Cannet (mairie de Le Cannet. Now, I think you could change with right information. Regards Jpm2112 09:36, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tivoli gardens, Paris 

message: I did not want to leave this page in this state. Thus I translated (?) my French text. Please 1) check the text 2) this is a stub. If it's possible, look for some additional information. Good luck. Jpm2112 11:59, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Check 
Talk:Dick Emery

message: This is Dick Emery: http://www.bbcshop.com/content/ebiz/bbc/invt/bbcdvd1668/DICK-EMERY_CMYKlrg.gif
I have no idea who that picture is of - looks like an American bloke from the sixties, judging by the hair and glasses. 85.189.91.42 07:19, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: The image isn't of Dick Emery

message: The article contains references to several films in which he appeared; however the “Selected Filmography” contains links to only two films, which are not otherwise mentioned at all. If the films are notable to his career, they should surely have been noted in the article. If they aren’t notable enough to be mentioned in the course of his career, why have they been selected for mention in the filmography? Jock123 (talk) 13:49, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Selected filmography 

message: Surname of Mr Emery's first wife? Seems some confusion as both variants are mentioned. 81.159.205.146 (talk) 07:22, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Salisbury or Sainsbury 

message: Dick Emery’s first wife was Joan Sainsbury—not Joan Salisbury .
    Reference Ray Sainsbury ( nephew) 79.67.186.187 (talk) 00:27, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dick Emory’s first wife
Talk:Ten Indian commandments

message: A quick google search came up with some alternate sources that quote the same Ten Indian Commandments.     These links don't provide an origin to the Commandments, but it proves that it wasn't merely made up for Wikipedia and perhaps might aid a more exhaustive search. (209.33.234.20 13:08, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: "The exact origin of these commandments, which started circulating many years ago is unknown and therefore begs questions. There are posters published by Joe Vlesti [sic. should read Viesti?] in 1989 and 1993. There is a version attributed to Chief White Cloud, a docile Ioway Indian Chief after whom the town of White Cloud was renamed from its original Morgantown on March 26, 1877 for saving Minnie, the daughter of Colonel Morgan from outlaws. (White Cloud Area Chamber of Commerce, 2002)
The oldest verifiable reference I can find on google books refers to the poster and dates to 1999. It is questionable whether this really predates 1989 by "many years". The lack of variation points to recent origin. This is probably something that was just made up for the 1989(?) or 1993 poster production. --dab (𒁳) 14:19, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
Talk:Hemu

message: There are no contemporary sources which call Hemu as a Brahmin while contemporary sources call him a trader. Hemu's identity is a matter of debate among historians and only in 20th century the theory of Hemu being a Brahmin was proposed. Ministerofunderworld (talk) 04:54, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hemu being a Brahmin is debatable among historians. 

message: He was a Jain Emperor and not Gaur Brahmin. We have Jain inscription of his history Malay9909m9 (talk) 13:46, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Can you please share me that inscription, Hemu is described as Baniya by many history books and also been written as Baniya in few contemporary sources and all the claims of him being a Gaur Brahmin are recent, but I don't think if there are any claims of him being a Jain. Can you show? Claude verceti (talk) 08:45, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  History is incorrectly portrayed for Hemu 

message: Recently there has been a lot of controversy regarding the lineage of Hemchandra Vikramaditya, although no Great men who had sacrificed for the nation shall be viewed from the angles of caste, lineage and birth, but this makes us jump to another question, Hemu was a Dhusar Bhargav which is clear, now who are the Dhusar Bhargavs, are they Baniyas who claim to be Gaur Brahmins? or are there both Gaur Brahmin Dhusar Bhargavs and Baniya Dhusar Bhargavs?Claude verceti (talk) 08:48, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Who are Dhusar Bhargavs: Gaur Brahmins or Baniyas?
Talk:2005 MTV Europe Music Awards

message: i didn't really like the old format of the previous two pages about the ema nominees and winners. so i propose what i saw on other pages on wiki with such information, put all nominees in the list and make the winner bold once that information is known. a smaller reminder on top saying the winner was the bold line seems smart then. Boneyard 13:17, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: well i think i got all region awards now, just have to connect all the sites and it's about done i think. Boneyard 12:49, 27 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  format for nominees / winners 

message: as im from the netherlands i only saw the dutch winner, ill dig in soon to find out the other ones, but if you know the one for your location be sure to add it. making text bold is done by three time the '. Boneyard 22:56, 3 November 2005 (UTC)
thread_title:  Location Awards winners 

message: We have the following articles:
* MTV Europe Music Awards 2003
* MTV Europe Music Awards 2004
* 2005 MTV Europe Music Awards
* MTV Europe Music Awards 2006
I think we should rename this article to MTV Europe Music Awards 2005 to be consistent with the naming of the other articles. It was named this way until 2 January 2006, when User:Revolución changed it. Razvan Socol 13:56, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article name
Talk:Williamsburgh

message: Should Williamsburgh, New York be Williamsburg, New York ? Morwen - Talk 13:20, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes! I only just realised that myself. I had actually only just done the redirect when I noticed your comment here. Ta. (actually Williamsburg, Brooklyn is the title used at Wikipedia.)--Mais oui! 13:49, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Jan Ravens

message: Is she Jewish?
On another point, any proof to the claim currently on the page that she is a Communist?88.107.111.135 20:38, 25 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Is she the same Jan Ravens who narrated a BBC Two series called A Vicar's Life in 2018? If so, it could go in the article. Vorbee (talk) 21:03, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: A Vicar's Life
Talk:Stronghold (1993 video game)

message: 10/20/05
Removed incorrect description of Stronghold as a "Dungeons and Dragons" game, as it has nothing to do with dungeons and dragons whatsoever O_o  I let it remain in the quote...
--BrknPhoenix
We may have game confision here.  I'm looking at the box right now and it says "Dungeons and Dragons (next line) Stronghold". Coll7 19:04, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: D&D?
Talk:Gemtuzumab ozogamicin

message: Thank you, Andrew, for writing up mylotarg. Perhaps some references, especially on the role in causing VOD, would improve the article. JFW | T@lk 13:25, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: Done!  Andrew73 15:55, 20 October 2005 (UTC)

message: With results from the ALFA-0701 CT Pfizer are resubmitting (for marketing approval) to US FDA and EU.Feb 2017. Possibly for slightly different indication ? - Rod57 (talk) 14:17, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Sept 2017  says "The new FDA approval is for a lower recommended dosage range and a different administration schedule than the previous approval, and includes uses alone or in combination with chemotherapy.  Additionally, the new FDA approval is for a different patient population than before, including adults with newly diagnosed CD33-positive AML, as well as certain younger patients who had experienced a relapse or had not responded to initial treatment. " - Rod57 (talk) 16:18, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Resubmission in 2017 

message: Was it ever approved by the EU ? When was it approved by Japan ? any others ? Was it withdrawn from all markets at the same time in 2010 ? - Rod57 (talk) 14:29, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Outside USA 

message: Has any study reported on or even estimated overall survival with GO ? Perhaps the trial that was stopped early was designed to do this ? - Rod57 (talk) 14:43, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  What results on overall survival
Talk:The Hound of Heaven

message: Snoopy as "The Hound of Heaven" 
Ileanadu (talk) 17:54, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Influence 

message: I think there might be some confusion regarding what a secondary source is. For example, if you say that HoH was referenced in The Gospel According to Peanuts and cite The Gospel According to Peanuts, that's a primary source. IPC/influence/legacy content should use secondary sources that indicate the significance of references. Of the current Influence section, points 5, 7, and 9 are unsourced while 4, 6, 8, and 10 cite primary sources. Nikkimaria (talk) 06:00, 11 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: *But what makes a blog a reliable source? See WP:SPS. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:21, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

text: **What I am saying is you were wiping out a whole section because the citations need improving but I see the section as helpful to wikipedians. By your own count 1-3 were ok but you deleted them anyway.  I think Wikipedia is better having this in it and it is our duty to find improved citations or leave as it is.Red Rose 13 (talk) 15:05, 11 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: *If you can find improved citations, that's great, but WP:V makes clear that unsourced and poorly sourced material can be removed until such time as reliable citations are found. It is our "duty" to source what we can and leave out what we cannot. See also WP:IPC.  Nikkimaria (talk) 16:57, 11 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: *Give me time - I am quite busy at the time. Feel free to contribute as well. Red Rose 13 (talk) 17:06, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

text: I vote with Red Rose to leave it in and work on improving the sources as well as the content of the article.... cheers to all... Risk Engineer (talk) 16:08, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Some of us are busy with working and I just got back from a trip - months are needed to complete the discovery of third party citations.  Please stop deleting the posts until we can correct them, Nikkimaria. Thank you Risk Engineer for your support in this. Red Rose 13 (talk) 15:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Please see WP:BURDEN: as appropriate sources are added, the content can be shown, but it shouldn't remain in the article indefinitely while unsourced or poorly sourced. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:25, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sourcing 

message: Jack is reading HoH as part of his breakfast routine in episode 1 minute 13.....
I propose editing that into the article
Risk Engineer (talk) 16:05, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  HoH in Jack Taylor Detective series
Talk:Duncott, Pennsylvania

message: I placed the folwloing on User:Scottfisher's talk page today, but he deleted it without comment:
:I have again removed :Image:The-Marion-Shovel.jpg from Duncott, Pennsylvania. Please do not re-add it, until you have addressed the question of that image's disputed provenance. Thank you. 
Andy Mabbett 13:40, 20 October 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: User:Scottfisher and the Marion Shovel image
Talk:Air-Walker

message: As the article points out, Gabriel Lan was replaced by an android. Therefore, Air-Walker could not be under the category of "Fictional cyborgs", since a cyborg is some DNA and some technology (like TNG onward's Borg, hence the moniker).
:You'll find this error A LOT, as many people will describe any machine that looks - or could pass was human - as a "cyborg". A good way to think of a cyborg is to think of a man with a wooden leg. You wouldn't call a man with a wood leg a tree would you? Of course not. Now change the wooden leg to a robotic one, he's not suddenly a robot anymore then he was a tree. A cyborg is some who is physically half human half robot (doesn't have to literally be half and half), a android with "the last spark of soul" is still has a completely mechanical body. Therefore is a robot and not a cyborg. 173.209.109.236 (talk) 15:21, 31 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Terminology 

message: Listicle crap from the usual suspects but probably juuuust about enough to keep this one standalone for the time being. BoomboxTestarossa (talk) 21:37, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sources