Talk:Peruvian Paso

message: This article needs cleanup badly, as it appears to be a machine translation from Spanish. Brighterorange 20:02, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)
thread_title: Cleanup

message: The below text is needlessly techincal and not very clear. I'm not sure how relavent this is, so I've  reduced the section in the main article and transcluded the text to the talk page. If someone else can make this more understandable and put it back in the article. --Kerowyn  Leave a note  22:07, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Finishing cleanup

message: I placed that "Citations needed" on your page.   Your article is really nice and the 
pictures of the horses are beautiful.  My issue is that you have several phrases in
the article such as: 
 "  The always tractable Peruvian Paso presents a noble, arrogant appearance that makes him a preferred entry for shows and parades."  
 " The Peruvian Paso was refined exclusively in Peru and has even been called that country's "national horse"   and 
 " Hence, this is a favored mount for riders with back trouble " . 
I'm definetly no horse expert, I know just enough to know which end is the front
on the  horse ;), so I'm definetly not arguing about the validity of  those statements,
however, I suggest that you place a footnote or something similar to indicate
what source provided that information to you. Otherwise it may be considered as
original research .  Thanks  
KoshVorlon  <B> ".. We are ALL Kosh..." </B></BR> 18:49, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cite 

message: " The first Horses to arrive in Peru landed in 1531 with Governor Don Francisco Pizarro. The Spaniards knew that horses were prerequisite to the conquest. Horses in Peru came from Spain, Jamaica, Panama and other areas of Central America. From among them were selected prototypes brought by the viceroys of Spain." page 340 of International Encyclopedia of Horse Breeds
 By Bonnie L. Hendricks, Anthony A. Dent  book link
Arsdelicata (talk) 12:43, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks.  Now watch it go into the article!  Montanabw(talk) 04:51, 9 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: The First Horses in Peru

message: Look for more info on these conditions:  DSLD: Degenerative Suspensory Ligament Desmitis/ ESPA: Equine Systemic Proteoglycan Accumulation. Montanabw(talk) 23:22, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Genetic stuff 

message: Article says at start of a paragraph:  "This characteristic gait was utilized for the purpose of covering long distances over a short period of time without tiring the horse or rider."  The antecedent of the demonstrative "This" is unclear.  Please edit by adding a noun or phrase to read like, " This paso llano gait" or "This sobreandando gait. . . "  so that one knows which gait the paragraph is talking about.  The preceding paragraph spoke of 2 distinct gates.  Which one does "This" refer to?  The closest antecedent is the sobreandando gait, but the content of the paragraph favors the paso llano gait interpretation.  [Emphasis above mine.] (EnochBethany (talk) 15:17, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Feel free to review the sources and make an edit.  Montanabw(talk) 20:27, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: "This" Lacks a Clear Antecedent