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Talk:American Society of Health-System Pharmacists

message: Flagged the article as currently written as needing some clean-up.  It looks and reads like it was cut and pasted from the organization's promotional material. For example, in the first paragraph it mentions "ASHP strives to ensure high-quality professional pharmacy practice in hospitals and health systems so that pharmacists can make the best and safest use of medications for their patients."  But the latter part of that sentence is somewhat redundant in the sense that ALL pharmaceutical organizations and companies would make the same claim of wanting the "best and safest use of medications" (who wouldn't?).  Another brief example is where the article mentions "Health-system Pharmacy 2015 ... is ASHP’s landmark initiative," without a independently cited justification why it should be labelled "landmark".  The style format of the article also is slightly off, as if the text was done in another application and pasted here, including some extraneous lines and spaces.  And finally note that (from what I can tell) all the external links in the article are directly operated by the ASHSP.  It would be useful to include a secondary reference that is independent of the article's subject to verify information.
So basically the article could use a clean up to remove "weasel words", standardize the text formatting and to add some external references that are not directly owned by the ASHSP. Dugwiki 22:09, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: As they are the only US organisation in the field, it may be hard to find something on the subject that they don't publish, but  there should be multiple sources referring to the publication  which are standard references. I'll take a try at it..  But there's no reason for the tag. DGG 02:47, 18 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article reads like advert 

message: article which sent me here rendered them as "AHFS", and one of ASHP's publications seems to use that as well.  what IS it?  specific division?  old name?  alternate name?
and what's it stand for?!
neither mentioned anywhere in article!  66.30.47.138 (talk) 01:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  AHFS? 

message: I is there known side effects to capsule 2604:2D80:A314:D000:9472:DA0F:B416:3F92 (talk) 13:47, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Benzonata
Talk:Kerr-McGee

message: I currently am employed with Kerr-McGee, and was informed of the update's information at a general meeting on July 26, 2006. I just thought I'd put this down in case anyone couldn't find the information on the official websites of either company. This information should be posted in those places relatively soon. Schnabeltier Angriff 22:10, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Takeover Dates 

message: Why doesn't the "controversy" section mention anything about Karen Silkwood (even just a link to the wiki entry)? Why is it only in the trivia section? rom65536, Aug 03, 2006
:Maybe no one realised its importance. You might like to rectify that.Tyrenius 05:46, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Big Question 

message: Kerr-McGee acquired by Anadarko. Oryx92 02:58, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merger with Anadarko 

message: This article meets the requirements for Class C. I have made this change for WP:Oklahoma. Bruin2 (talk) 04:04, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Article classification
Talk:The Elms (band)

message: the band are clearly a christian band, for example
"And when you get past our egos,
there’s a heart that wants to be just like…
Jesus. The man of all men.
The only One who makes hearts whole again."
"When you can’t impress, there’s your real test…
are you just like… Jesus?
so could the anonymous user stop deleting the word Christian!!!!! Adamshappy 22:11, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Christian band 

message: Someone should add in former members; at least Keith, the former bassist. 
Their live DVD should go under discography, yes? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 142.46.203.100 (talk) 10:05, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: other stuff
Talk:Browser Helper Object

message: IE8 disables BHO that are not 'verified' (such as roxi/hp/ibm/veritas dla) does anyone know what verification means?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 218.214.18.240 (talk) 09:49, 5 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  ie8 

message: the link "C# example code for a BHO" does not work anymore  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.0.159.184 (talk) 07:09, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  dead link 

message: This phrase is used in more than one Wikipedia article. Is it just a repeated typo? What does the phrase mean? 71.179.241.250 (talk) 06:55, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  What does "as of Windows 10, though Internet Explorer 11" mean? 

message: Would Service Workers be considered the eventual evolution of the Browser Helpers? Mozilla docs describe Service Workers as javascript written toward controlling App Caching with replaced many Native Applications. They access localhost and may act as a proxy server within an App -- "modifying requests and responses with "items" from it's own cache"? 
Sounds somewhat like CDN's might but only using secure origins, HTTPS, rather than HTTP, FTP, or something.. ~~~ ``` Polypsychosis (talk) 20:17, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  BHO equivalent on Chrome?
Talk:Cotentin Peninsula

message: The opening paragraph states for the Cotentin Peninsula
"its northern coastline was the site of the famed World War II invasion of Hitler's Fortress Europa by the Allies on D-Day,"
This would appear to be factually incorrect.  The D-day beaches were on the north-facing coast of Normandy to the east of the Cotentin peninsula.Eregli bob (talk) 14:26, 28 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. Have edited to reflect that only Utah Beach was located on the Cotentin coast. Man vyi (talk) 15:08, 28 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Erroneous statement

message: How is this pronounced in English?  The same as in French?  75.142.253.243 (talk) 05:41, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pronunciation? 
Talk:Tillakaratne Dilshan

message: Please note that on WP, generally conversion to buddhism=conversion to hinduism is a controversial statement. please ustify your cat. Hornplease 22:26, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Not that it matters, but your edits to Andre Beteille, which I created, Solomon Bandaranaike and Robert Vadra all showed up on my watchlist. Given that two of them were wrong, I naturally followed the category links to see where else you've been adding the category. Note, in addition, people will tend to check in on what you've been doing from time to time, on WP, particularly if you start developing a history on of doubtful edits made without discussion. Hornplease 06:18, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It should be obvious, even in the absence of that category, you cannot put misleading categories on the page. Please remove it. Hornplease 08:34, 29 July 2006 (UTC)

text: Adding anything you want to a page is not a replacement for adding something accurate. PLease remove the category. Hornplease 15:56, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Category

message: The template is acting funny. Someone needs to edit the second template so that all the stats (ODI, Test, 1st class, and List-A) show up Bakaman%% 06:11, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  1st class 

message: Englightment Rahela Daevesh (talk) 17:20, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bhuddha 

message: Introduction of the cricketer sounds very much exaggerated. Lucman aly (talk) 14:13, 17 September 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Exaggeration
Talk:Sausage Software

message: The "Products" section has many red links. As the company is no longer running as it was, and all the products are discontinued, the likely hood that these links will "plausibly be created in the future" is very low. I'm planning on removing these red links in a few days, if there's no objections. peterl (talk) 09:08, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. peterl (talk) 09:41, 27 November 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removing red links 

message: The URL leads to a company producing (surprise) sausages. Should the links be removed here, maybe replaced by links pointing to the wayback-machine?
--HAZET (talk) 13:28, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  sausage.com no longer owned by Sausage Software
Talk:Together Live

message: I removed the information that this album was recorded at a stadium. The information for the inlay card  included later in the article clearly indicates that it was recorded at The Church on the Way.
I've also removed the attempt at redirect links to the individual members of 2nd Chapter of Acts.
I've removed references to original research and references to the inlay card.
I'm not sure why this album needs its own article, but if it is going to be here, it should at least be accurate. Holford 22:31, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Cleanup
Talk:Deplorable Word

message: The Magician’a Nephew is the first not the sixth book in the chronicles of narnia 91.110.143.83 (talk) 14:07, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: It was the 6th to be published, and Lewis scholars agree that it was Lewis's intention that the books be read in the order published. See The Chronicles of Narnia#Reading order. -- Elphion (talk) 14:29, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Magicians Nephew
Talk:The Other Ones

message: Should there be an other article for The Dead (band)?
Or directed to herein?
And why are the other The Other Ones here?
Should not they be in The Other Ones (other) or somesame?
205.188.117.5 22:33, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Eh. oTHErONE (Contribs) 07:24, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  ... 

message: I've split out the material about "the other Other Ones" into its own article, The Other Ones (Australian-German band). -- Mudwater 01:20, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  The other "Other Ones" is now a separate article
Talk:Democracy: The God That Failed

message: :The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section. 
The result of the debate was no move. -- tariqabjotu (joturner) 00:28, 14 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: An edit today added the word "controversial" to the opening sentence of this article. Some would describe the book as "rigorously reasoned" rather than "controversial." Does this description belong? --RayBirks (talk) 03:03, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Not POV as long as it's referenced, as it refers to the reception rather than the content. I'd be interested to learn more about how this book was received, though. Leushenko (talk) 22:22, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is "controversial" an injection of POV? 

message: The book is notable, perhaps even enough for its own page (though it was the remarks about gays, rather than the more substantive theoretical stuff about monarchy, that got most of the RS reaction). But I think the merits of a merge to the Hans-Hermann Hoppe page should be discussed. Steeletrap (talk) 05:11, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, the DTGTF material we see in H-H H would be better presented in this article. E.g., this venue could present more of the controversial debate stuff and (perhaps) avoid balance problems in the main BLP.  – S. Rich (talk) 05:27, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Oppose I'm sure all the neutral info would be purged if it was merged. CM-DC  talk  16:46, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

text: Support It should be merged per WP:GNG unless more independent reliable sources are found and cited. Llll5032 (talk) 02:03, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Merge?

message: For editors who have interest in H-H H, I invite you to look at this TFD.  – S. Rich (talk) 08:13, 31 January 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  TFD re H-H H book invite
Talk:The Companions of the Avatar

message: Hey, at an initial 27 DEX, Sherry could become a veritable archer.  And she was only level 1, so a maximum of 21 attribute points were still left to distribute after she had been given suitable training...  The first strength upgrade at the Shrine of Valor would enable her to carry a magic bow and a few dozen arrows, after the next she could carry some armor too, no later than after the third one, IIRC, she could wear an entire suit of magic armor.  And she would have the regular 30 times level hitpoints.  For example, at level 8 she could have 18 STR, 30 DEX, 240 HP, wear full magic armor and carry a magic bow plus at least 10 dozen arrows.  At this time, she would be quite a force to be reckoned with, certainly the deadliest rodent in all of Britannia!  And yet, despite carrying all that stuff, she'd still get through the tiniest mousehole.  It's funny because it's true. Aragorn2 22:36, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

message: Mentioning this key aspect to a notable work of fiction, is valid in its own right.  The fact that many characters in the series, were also based on real people, and that this has gotten third party coverage, will provide additional reasons to keep it.  Dream Focus 01:34, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: A bunch of primary sources is one thing, but there's nothing to signify any actual significance form a real-world perspective for any of the content on this page. This is wikipedia, not a wikia.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 03:26, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: List of characters is perfectly valid.  The information is too large to fit in the main List of Ultima characters, which does not have all the characters the player can have join their party.  Having all companions of the Avatar on their own article, thus makes more sense.  Dream Focus 03:47, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: It really looks fine on the List of Ultima characters article, the sources do need to be ported over where appropriate though.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 04:07, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: It looks fine even though its missing half of the information?  I found bits like  interesting to read, and don't want to see them lost.  I see plenty of game articles out there, listing all the characters from just one game.  Instead of having a list for every single Ultima, listing all of the major characters in that game, might as well put them together here.  There is no way to combine it all into one article.  I'm reverting your redirect.  Please stop trying to destroy the work of others.  Wikipedia does not have a shortage of space, and you gain nothing by destroying content which others will want to read.  Dream Focus 08:05, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  I undid the redirect since I see this article is well referenced and valid
Talk:Ricky ("Weird Al" Yankovic song)

message: it starts off wen weird al comes home he starts to play the bongos then his wife lucy starts to sing then it becomes a argumentabout bongos and wineing.
7/10 song classic
— Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.44.8.60 (talk) 22:36, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Music video plot
Talk:Allison Cameron (composer)

message: Oppose moving the House character here, real people are obviously more important than fictional characters. A disambig might work-- repropose it. Ashibaka tock 22:38, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Real people may be more important than fictional characters, but she's definitely not more notable than this fictional character.  I'm sure there are plenty of real life "Harry Potters" but that doesn't mean the main page for "Harry Potter" should be devoted to them with a dab to the books/character.  Chad Hennings 05:26, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:MOPP (protective gear)

message: Can anyone please cite a reference to this existing? My AFMAN 10-100 doesn't mention it and we don't use it in the US Air Force. MichaelBlankley (talk) 18:44, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: MOPP Level Alpha

message: MOPP is an acronym that's only used by the US military; the article doesn't make that clear, but I'm not really sure what the best way to add the information would be.--InfiniteBratwurst (talk) 12:20, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Very US-Centric 

message: Is there any info that could be added to the article about how long it takes to dress in MOPP? Are there speed trials and any records for how long it takes to suit up? Ranze (talk) 21:35, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Donning speed

message: "No protective masks filter out gases such as carbon monoxide, and in situations requiring that level of protection, external breathing apparatus is employed."
This is unsourced, and the :Gas mask article states that many masks do provide protection from both gaseous and particulate materials. How should we precisely describe their limitations against gases? –dlthewave ☎ 17:07, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Protection against gases
Talk:1995 Chicago heat wave

message: This article only cites one source.
The "Politics of Disaster" section just gratuitously points to one source, without any real data, and should be deleted.
Dschultz 17:55, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Problems with this article 

message: It's hard to "blame" any single event on climate change, but I found this article talking about how heat waves will probably get worse in the Chicago area. 
More Intense, More Frequent, and Longer Lasting Heat Waves in the 21st Century
Gerald A. Meehl* and Claudia Tebaldi
A global coupled climate model shows that there is a distinct geographic pattern to future changes in heat waves. Model results for areas of Europe and North America, associated with the severe heat waves in Chicago in 1995 and Paris in 2003, show that future heat waves in these areas will become more intense, more frequent, and longer lasting in the second half of the 21st century. Observations and the model show that present-day heat waves over Europe and North America coincide with a specific atmospheric circulation pattern that is intensified by ongoing increases in greenhouse gases, indicating that it will produce more severe heat waves in those regions in the future.
    
http://www.sciencemag.org/cgi/content/abstract/305/5686/994
Can we add something about climate change to this article? How should it be worded if we do? futurebird 14:43, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  climate change 

message: There is only one book that is exclusively about the chicago heat wave, It's a really good book and was well receive in both academic and popular non-fiction circles.  I have added a number of journal articles that support the claims in the book and I have not found ANYTHING that disputes it. At present I think this article is well sourced enough, and I don't know why we need the tag. If there are specific part of the article that still could use a source please use the "citation needed" inline tag to indicate where they are. 
futurebird 14:43, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: thanks for your efforts in improving the article. that's all i was really looking for - the article as previously formulated simply took the POV of the author of the book and rubber-stamped it. which naturally fails NPOV. Anastrophe 15:10, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  sources 
Talk:Wu-Tang: Shaolin Style

message: Well I'll tell ya what, I own this game and the WU Tang controler on the ps1 and I can tell you it is DEFINTLY usable. mcjakeqcool Mcjakeqcool (talk) 17:00, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Controler is ususable?!
Talk:Tom Harrell

message: I was checking all of Tom Harrell albums, "Mind's Ear" is the only one i can't get any info, not even on discogs.
Does this LP really exist?109.13.1.76 (talk) 11:54, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Where can we get info on "Mind's Ear" album? 

message: This page is a complete embarassment... it looks like someone took an undergrad term paper and pasted it in here.
What in the world happened to this page, it's a total mess. 24.5.188.169 (talk) 01:52, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Happy to see Tom Harrell has an entry. Sad to see that 50% of the article refers to his medical condition rather than his musicianship. Tom Harrell's creativity and musicianship are what distinguishes him as an individual. The description of the side-effects of his medical treatment could apply to any patient suffering form this particular disorder.  I will try to add more information on Tom Harrell's art when I have the info and the time.
Sluzzelin 22:43, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Schizophrenia

message: The "Biography" section had been replaced with a copy & paste from allaboutjazz.com.  This is a copyright violation (not to mention PoV text). I've reverted the section to its earlier version.  Also, the "Schizophrenia" section didn't really need a separate section from "Biography." -- Gyrofrog  (talk) 20:49, 19 March 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyvio 

message: This is passive stigmatization of people with mental illnesses. Harrell's accomplishments should be a testament to the contrary.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.239.2.158 (talk) 07:18, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  No mention of his mental illness whatsoever? 

message: I propose that Tom Harrell Quintet be merged into Tom Harrell. The quantity of information about the quintets is about the same on each page, but the quintets don't warrant a separate article. EddieHugh (talk) 18:05, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Now done. EddieHugh (talk) 17:47, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merger proposal
Talk:Hot Boys

message: This page should be reverted to edit #132493375
KingJFS 14:40, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Revert

message: I edited the shit out of the page, re-added the discography and took most of the crap out of the bibliography. If someone more knowledgeable with their feud wants to fill out that section that's cool, otherwise I'll work on fixing up the discography some more on the weekend. (RomanZayus 12:21, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Awful page
Talk:Peter Dawson (bass-baritone)

message: I have no idea how to propose or perform a move, but while this is, I think, the most famous peter dawson, the disambig page I just made lists a whole bunch more. I think this page should be moved to peter smith dawson (his birth name, according to imdb) and the disambig put here. -- Akb4 06:27, 19 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: move?

message: article is mainly his career also it was hard for him in Australia as an artist  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 110.33.234.245 (talk) 23:32, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Personal life 

message: The lede content was mostly reproduced without attribution in a series of 2007 edits culminating in this one. The almost word-for-word source is opera arias.com, which appears to predate the WP version. The offending editor, User:Dr Steven Plunkett appears not to have been active for a good many years. As a first step I've restored the content which immediately preceded the WP:copyvio. Bjenks (talk) 15:43, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Perceived copyvio
Talk:Black Kiss

message: Plenty of 'serious' comic fans in the 1980s dismissed Black Kiss as pornography. Given that pornography means visual depiction of prostitutes they were correct in their terminology but not their dismissal. SmokeyTheFatCat 22:52, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pornography? 

message: I am currently working on a separate article for BK2 as it seems to have the sources to stand on its' own, and seeing as they have quite separate production, publication and reception histories combining them would result in two articles stacked on top of each other. Sidenote: had forgotten just how unpleasant Chaykin is in interviews. BoomboxTestarossa (talk) 16:38, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Black Kiss 2
Talk:Abel (hominid)

message: i beg to differ on Abel being the ONLY specimen of Australopithecus. what about Lucy? 69.236.48.173 (talk) 04:18, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: This article has less number of citations kindly provide proper citations and try to improve article according to Wikipedia policies and kind expand it and if you allow my self I can certainly help you in expanding it. Thanks.--Faizanalivarya (talk) 14:28, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Expanding and citations required