Talk:Brentwood School (Los Angeles)

message: Is this any more encyclopedia-worthy than any large US public high school? --Wetman 17:52, 14 Nov 2004 (UTC)
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message: The "Famous speakers" speakers section is disproportionately large. Can we cut it down to just a list of names? These people have virtually nothing to do with the school. -Will Beback 02:06, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Famous speakers 

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message: This whole entry reads like the School wrote it. It sounds like a press release or brochure. 
Sajita (talk) 02:32, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tone of entry