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Talk:Spherical Objects (band)

message: Some sentences in this entry sound they we're uttered by a self-sufficient record shop employee. 
Examples:
"However, this twisted voice adds even more to the idiosyncratic character of the music."
- There's a lot of personal opinion in deciding if the singer has a twisted voice.
", which sounds more diy than everything they did afterwards."
- This is hardly an encyclopedic tone, "everything" seems like a generalization. It would help if the characteristics of the record were described instead of referring to DIY aesthetique as whole.
There are several other examples. Someone with a thorough knowledge of the discography should rewrite the article in a more formal style.
William  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.238.113.244 (talk) 15:15, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Generally speaking, I think you are right. Due to the lack of reliable resources, there is much of subjective material in the article (although it conforms to the general impression from reading various personal web pages and blogs and on Trouser Press link which is listed in External Links section). An upgrade via a rewrite that would also include properly referenced material is definitely needed. I'll see what I can do for the latter but I will leave copy editing to more fluent english speakers. Dipa1965 (talk) 23:58, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

text: Already made a few changes, I think it seems a bit better now Dipa1965 (talk) 00:39, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Uncyclopedic remarks 

message: I still have some reservations for the last entity (about Solamar changing genders). Although that info comes from a rather reliable source, I 'm not sure whether it might be offensive. Please feel free to erase that paragraph if needed.
User:Dipa1965 12:14, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  author's reservations 

message: Whoever has anything to contribute to this article, particularly band photos or news about Solamar, please do so by directly contributing or posting here (btw, Patrick, thanx a lot!) Dipa1965 16:41, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  images and text wanted (desperately) 
Talk:Mechanism (sociology)

message: I'm not exactly a sociologist per se, but being very familiar with the social sciences I can clearly tell that whoever made this article gave it an incorrect definition. A mechanism is indeed a  rule (or a set of rules), but a mechanism does not itself imply that actors are utility-maximizing agents. My proposition is that this article be renamed Mechanism (social science) and that a correct, referenced definition be given. --m3taphysical (talk) 00:18, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree with M3taphysical that a mechanism does not necessarily implies that actors are utility-maximizing agents. In rational-choice theory, that might be the case, but not in a broad, sociological sense. So I simply removed that part of the sentence.  However, the article does need more body then it currently has. Cypers (talk) 09:34, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Can you provide a reference for how "mechanism" is used in sociology? That's the first thing this stub is lacking. CRETOG8(t/c) 09:54, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Wrong definition

message: Most of this article has been taken from "What is anaylitical sociology all about? An introductory essay" in The Oxford Handbook of Analytical Sociology (Peter Hedström and Peter Bearman 2009). The chapter makes it clear that the concepts mechanism and mechanism-based explanation "have more to do with philosophy of science than with sociology proper". Then is it possible to talk about "mechanism" as a sociological concept? The accuracy of the article's title seems disputable to me. --Pablo.ea.92 (talk) 02:41, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: The mechanism (sociology)article is in need of improvement.  I've tagged it as having multiple issues, removed some unsourced statements, and linked it to Mechanism_(philosophy).  Previous editors the article seem unaware of the 'mechanistic'|'organic' analytic distinction that dates back to at least Aristotle and is a major underpinning of several sociological theories.  The article is categorized as 'sociological terminology', so may warrant existence, though I would not object were it to be tagged AfD.  Meclee (talk) 16:34, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Mechanism as sociological concept
Talk:Wentworth Estate

message: I hope there is consensus that this sentence in the lead is extraordinarily long and confusing:
Most of its invariably large plots have homes built from scratch or rebuilt after 1930 in a range of styles from the ornate multi-chimneyed Arts and Crafts movement of the earliest properties through Neo-Georgian and colonial revival to the postmodern simple style as in the recording studios at John Lennon's Tittenhurst Park (1971) in the adjoining parish of Sunninghill and Ascot, the north of which, with parts of Windsor, Winkfield and Virginia Water is the main piece of Crown Estate in South-East England, Windsor Great Park.
PeepleLikeYou (talk) 14:45, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: We have a new RS and I source today which I have added. I have removed the incredible sentence- and replace it with stuff an 8 year old could understand. Not elegant I know- I assess this article as Start/C but as I am not a member of either project I am just de-assessing.--ClemRutter (talk) 11:08, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Extraordinarily long and confusing sentence in lead section
Talk:Korangal Valley

message: I have tidied up this article but my knowledge of Afghanistan is very limited so, if I have made mistakes, please correct them. Biscuittin 11:29, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Tidied up

message: I haven't looked at this article in a long time.
Someone made some changes to the galleries that made the pictures disappear.
The images in a gallery are one image per line.
If there is a pipe symbol on the image entry everything following the pipe is the caption
It looks like someone wanted to change the captions, but changed the names of the images at the same time.
That doesn't work.
So I changed the gallery entries, to keep the original names of the pictures, while using the new captions.
Cheers!  Geo Swan (talk) 22:07, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fixed the galleries... 

message: Can latitude & longitude be obtained so this area can be mapped?--Atikokan (talk) 01:09, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Map co-ordinates 

message: [sigh] -- 2 months later, still no co-ords?  Surely this can be mapped.  You can't tell me that the U.S. Army does not have lat/long for this place, surely.
--Atikokan (talk) 00:31, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  2 months later, still no co-ords 

message: Is there a printed map that could be referred to for coordinates?  Is there even a name of a village in the Korengal?  Does anyone know where we can get this information?  Ortcutt (talk) 03:52, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dec. 2010, No Coordinates 

message: Are the valley and it's inhabitants any better off than before?
74.103.28.206 (talk) 13:37, 7 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Conditions before and after the American Presence? 

message: diff
--dab (𒁳) 17:04, 20 July 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Unreferenced list of casualties
Talk:Addlestone

message: Why is the post town shown as Weybridge? If you go to the Royal Mail address finder, and enter a known Addlestone postcode (such as the railway station), it shows this address:
:Southwest Trains Ltd
:Addlestone Railway Station
:Station Road
:ADDLESTONE
:KT15 2PB 
So, I would say that the post town is Addlestone, not Weybridge. --Redrose64 (talk) 18:26, 20 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Post Town 

message: I don't think that photo represents the houses of Row Hill. I was recently berated by a life long local for describing an area near Ongar Hill as Row Hill. The houses on Row Hill don't have those kinds of frontages at all. 84.71.45.82 (talk) 20:59, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Row Hill
Talk:Thorpe, Surrey

message: There is no geology section in this article (or the article about the theme park).   I'd like to know about the source of the gravel (was it brought by glaciation?).   The article could be improved either by adding a section about this, or by providing a link to an article that does cover it.  FreeFlow99 (talk) 11:24, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Geology
Talk:Saint-Gingolph

message: As "original research" can't be included it would seem inappropriate for me to cite to conversations with the locals. All but one of those who lived through the Nazi occupation are dead, and the one survivor, Mme Dérobert, seems not to want to discuss the past, at least in front of her family. But the stories -- some quite heroic -- of the War period are recorded in monuments on the French side, and in the Zénoni book (which I hope to scan and post elsewhere on the net, assuming there is no objection from the rigfhts holders). The Tourist office in St Gingolph (Switzerland), the museum in St Gingolph (Switzerland) and the two city halls as well as the customs offices are repositories of local lore. But these were working class people; the area did not attract much attention from scholars or anybody else until recent gentrification of the area (especially Le Bouveret, Switzerland, the next town) as a retirement site, resort and marina.
For what it is worth, I think the existing references satisfy the demanded citation criteria. (Amended 10 July 2008)
Andygx 11:42, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
Talk:List of comedy films of the 1940s

message: I think I screwed up adding One Touch of Venus under 1948. It linked itself to a Mary Martin 50's version when it should be directed here. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0040669/
I don't know how to fix the error. My apologies. 
Iyfrnet (talk) 17:52, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  I screwed up
Talk:Locations of executions conducted by Albert Pierrepoint

message: Ive just seen the film which states that he carried out 608 hangings?
Yeah and what about all his german executions? the figure of 608 isn't far off!
I suggest a little more research chum! (Olfski 00:52, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The German executions are included here, and the figures are taken from the most thorough biography of the Pierrepoints which has been published so far. We would need to know what the sources used by the film were. -- Arwel (talk) 06:36, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

text: The figures in Appendix 2 of Steve Fielding's book, Pierrepoint: A Family of Executions, lists all the 435 executions that Albert Pierrepoint carried out between 1932 to 1955, either as Assistant or Chief Executioner. HLE (talk) 01:21, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Number of hangings
Talk:5 * Stunna

message: This album has been out for a while, and it says it's 'suspected' that Lil wayne will produce most beats??? What the heck?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.247.165.195 (talk) 00:13, 2 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  ??? 
Talk:Numonyx

message: Numonyx is a newly established international company with 8000 employees. This already justifies a Wikipedia article. There are Wikipedia articles about other companies with a similar number of (or even fewer) employees. To name a few examples: Boston Consulting Group, Spansion, KLA-Tencor, or Novellus Systems. In addition, Numonyx has been established by Intel, the world's largest semiconductor company. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Thewriter23 (talk • contribs) 
:WP:OTHERCRAPEXISTS is not a valid argument against speedy deletion. However, if you can come up with some citations from reliable sources, chances are pretty good you can avoid deletion. Realkyhick 23:56, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Justification

message: While working on the AXFS article, it seems apparent that a number of employees were transferred from Intel to Numonyx. A technology start-up almost never grows to thousands of employees in just two years. It appears Intel has spun off entire divisions or so. Perhaps someone knowledgeable can clarify this in the article, with sources, or course. Pcap ping 08:54, 17 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Employees transferred from Intel?
Talk:Are You Blind?

message: This would be the reason for the article's incorrect original naming. - Dudesleeper ·  Talk 12:16, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Are you Blue? as opposed to Are You Blind?
Talk:Caldera (Caldera album)

message: The "ABOUT" section previously incorporated into this article exceeds fair use allowance, duplicating in its entirety the text here. Please do not restore this section for legal reasons. If you wish to incorporate material from that source, please rewrite it in your own words. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 11:47, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plagiarism
Talk:Finding Beauty in Negative Spaces

message: Is there any evidence that the South African release was the source of the internet leak of the album?
Also the album was released in South Africa on Monday 22nd October 2007 according to the Muskereer Records website.
(IAmTheWaffle 09:20, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Album leak details
Talk:Genki o Dashite

message: I think it is more appropriate to write "を" in English for "wo" in "元気を出して". So the title of this song should be moved to "Genki wo Dashite". Please refer Wo (kana). --みしまるもも (talk) 08:10, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  In the title, "o" should be exactly "wo"
Talk:In Black and White (Mustard Plug album)

message: Barbara Mandrell, + In Black and White (Jenny Burton album) and others. In ictu oculi (talk) 03:17, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Other albums
Talk:Kontinuum (album)

message: This is a very notable musician in the genre so all of his albums are notable by default. Do not redirect again, please. Instead, if necessary, help find more or better sources. Jmj713 (talk) 21:00, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Notability is not inherited. (CC) Tbhotch™ 02:00, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
replies: text:  Schulze is notable but that does not mean that all his albums are automatically notable. See WP:NALBUM:  Nobody has been able to find any good sources for this record in 15 years (the ones currently in the article do not pass WP:RS), so asking people to do it won't work – if the sources existed, they would have been added by now. I've had a good look online, and the only other things I've found are user reviews on Progarchives.com, which fail WP:USERG and the website also fails WP:RS, so these are no good either. This article should definitely be redirected. Richard3120 (talk) 13:05, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Do not redirect
Talk:Obligatory Villagers

message: I wouldn't call the critical response "mixed." Allmusic gave the album 4/5, Robert Christgau gave the album an "A-" and Rolling Stone gave the album 3.5/5. Even the most negative review listed, Pitchfork's, is the equivalent of 69/100, which is still considered "positive" by MetaCritic. Does anyone agree that the critical reception section should be changed to say the album was met with generally positive reviews? -Anotheronewiki (talk) 15:56, 28 January 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm going to change the critical reception section to read "generally positive." If anyone disagrees with my change, please reply to my post here. -Anotheronewiki (talk) 15:24, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Critical Response
Talk:Rufous-collared sparrow

message: Hello! I wonder about that expression "ecologically catholic", that appears at the beginning of the "Vocal dialects" section. What does that mean? I have tried to find a meaning to "catholic" in biology and cannot locate any.
--Angelusgutmann (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Ecologically catholic"? 

message: Hello! This is to let editors know that :File:Rufous-collared sparrow (Zonotrichia capensis costaricensis) 2.jpg, a featured picture used in this article, has been selected as the English Wikipedia's picture of the day (POTD) for March 11, 2022. A preview of the POTD is displayed below and can be edited at Template:POTD/2022-03-11. For the greater benefit of readers, any potential improvements or maintenance that could benefit the quality of this article should be done before its scheduled appearance on the Main Page.  If you have any concerns, please place a message at Wikipedia talk:Picture of the day. Thank you! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:25, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Featured picture scheduled for POTD
Talk:Sixteen Tons (album)

message: My Mom owns a LP album called Sixteen Tones, all sung by Tennessee Ernie Ford.  In the future, this might need to be disambiguated.--Bedford Pray 23:39, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tennessee Ernie Ford
Talk:Sky Islands (Caldera album)

message: I removed the date of release and recording. It mentioned a release January 1st in 1977, while the recordingdates were mentioned as December 1976 and January 1977. The cd-release (and probably the LP-release]] did not mention a recording date exactly. The release should be somewhere in autumn 1977. It reached it's peak 159 in the Billboard Top 200 in october 1977, in it's 4th week of being there. See the dutch article.Ceescamel (talk) 13:08, 2 August 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Release against recording
Talk:The Renaissance (Q-Tip album)

message: track #1, 'Johnny Is Dead', sounds to contain a piano sample (I think from FourTet..) I'm looking for the song
Cars1 (talk) 13:29, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I've re-rated the album to a C-class. Remember to include songwriter credits when creating album articles. Andrzejbanas (talk) 20:36, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Rating

message: Why does the song "Work It Out" link to this album when it was not included?2606:A000:D983:5700:211D:C636:E7F9:9B40 (talk) 20:36, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tracklist/Linkage 

message: Feva also produced by J. Dilla  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.145.145.188 (talk) 09:17, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Bonus Track
Talk:Turn This Mutha Out

message: I plan to add a new section to cover the remixes and reissues of Could Heaven Ever be like this. I't's not clear it needs its own entry, but does deserve inclusion here. The latest remix I know of was from 2022 done NYC electric music producers  by Walker & Royce with Chris Lorenzo. Cathcam (talk) 16:13, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Remixes and Reissues
Talk:The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (video game)

message: Excuse me if I am doing this incorrectly. I just rewatched Prince Caspian after playing the video game, and I can pretty much swear that the scene with Prince Caspian falling into the hole before dueling Glozelle is in the movie - as such, I deleted that particular item. feel free to edit it if I somehow made a mistake. I just wanted to let whoever watches this page know. Thyr56 (talk) 09:06, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  exclusive scene edit
Talk:Buccinator muscle

message: May I suggest that for every anatomical article with a Latin/Greek name that the etymology of the term is explained? 213.121.241.210 (talk) 02:34, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I removed the supposedly other latin forms of m buccinator, since those are not used anymore. I saw these forms were introduced by User:Wimpus, I warn you for his edits on latin anatomical nomenclature. He has great knowledge of the etymology of anatomical latin nomenclature, but the problem is that he introduces outdated latin forms of the words that are no longer used anymore. On dutch wikipedia, with just a small numberof medically equipped users, he managed to wrongfully change the anatomical nomenclature of hundreds of pages. He is very persisting in his POV and even now we discovered his vandalism, he still persists in being right. It is sad. I also question the etymology part of the page: I wouldn't trust it completely. Regards, Maxwvb (talk) 06:15, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you for noting this, . If you want to notify other editors, WT:ANATOMY (talk page for WP:ANATOMY) is a useful place to put this message. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:38, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  User:Wimpus
Talk:Orbicularis oris muscle

message: Several lines of text in this article are garbled, even though the code text is perfectly fine. I don't know why! For example, in the third paragraph, the text reads "...and closes the mouth when it dies" but the code says "...and puckers the lips when it contracts."  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.185.18.207 (talk) 10:17, 17 September 2013 (UTC)
Talk:Ditwits

message: I've cleaned up this article, and have made it objective and cited where possible.  It is definitely deserving of its Wikipedia presence, as it is widely read in South Africa, even though not much has been written about it.
Crowlike 13:36, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Section header

message: Is there a reason why this article is flagged as "inappropriate"?  It seems objective enough to me.
Also, it seems to have enough sources.
41.240.23.159 (talk) 21:45, 24 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tone and references.
Talk:The Botanic Garden

message: This is a comprehensive article that is well-referenced, has a good lead that complies with WP:LEAD, has a good, strong amount of content, makes good use of several images, flows well, and has good prose and balance of text. Good job Awadewit.  GA pass. -- Anonymous DissidentTalk 10:12, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pass 

message: I'd like to remove much of the material on this page that is about Carl Sagan's "Cosmos". The beauty of hyperlinks is that such material can be placed on its own page, but still accessible from here. Technology advances. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 12:32, 28 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is this page about Carl Sagan's Cosmos or about Erasmus Darwin's book?
Talk:Smock Windproof DPM

message: I have changed 'epaulette' in one or two places on this page to 'rank tab', since this is more correct when describing the small flap for the bearing of rank slides attached to front and/or back of the smock. An epaulette is etymologically a French word meaning "little shoulder" (from épaule, meaning "shoulder").--Dom Damian 13:45, 22 July 2007 (UTC)

message: I am no expert, but it seems to me that the Smock Windproof DPM is a kind of windproof smock. Maybe it could have its own section on the Windproof smock page?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by KTReynolds (talk • contribs) 21:09, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge with Windproof smock?
Talk:Levator veli palatini

message: The velum palati is the soft ("veil") of the palate. The muscle Levator veli palati raises it.  Palatinus means "of the palatium, a social structure rather than an anatomical one.  An explication of how the widespread (standard?) substitution of palatial for palatal has come about would make an interesting paragraph in an article discussing Levator veli palati.--Wetman (talk) 18:02, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Levator veli palati   

message: The titles of other articles for similar muscles in the same area include the word "muscle", but this one does not. Should it, or should the others not? Examples:
* tensor tympani muscle
* stapedius muscle
* tensor veli palatini muscle
—[AlanM1(talk)]— 02:55, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why not muscle?
Talk:Serbia national under-19 football team

message: Serbia national under-18 football team redirects here. Is that an appropriate redirect? If they're not the same team, I'd say it's a confusing redirect. Either we should have an U18 article, or it should be a more general redirect. MIDI (talk) 21:25, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  U18
Talk:Thyroarytenoid muscle

message: This page is wrong.  The vocal folds have three layers: the epithelium (outer cover), the lamina propria (middle layer), and the vocalis muscle, or the body of the vocal folds.  The vocalis muscle does not lie parallel to the vocal folds- it is part of the vocal folds. The vocalis muscle provides mass and stability.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blueeyedmaiden (talk • contribs) 08:11, 14 December 2013 (UTC)