Talk:Hopscotch (Cortázar novel)

message: According to the first paragraph, "Hopscotch by Julio Cortázar (translated to English by Gregory Rabassa) is by far, the most significant contribution to humanity by a single artist."  That, as well as the rest of the paragraph, seems pretty POV to me!  Bunnyhugger 17:20, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV 

message: I added the new factual infobox to Julio Cortázar's Hopscotch Article. This is the new version. (Webb Traverse 09:31, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Complete Infobox Incorporation 

message: It was about time, Hopscotch is one of the true great books of postmodern literature. (Evendeeper 11:00, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Great Article 

message: The article is full of incorrect information. It seems whoever wrote the synopsis of the "part II" of the novel did not read the book or wasn't paying much attention to it. 
That whole section should be rewritten.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 18.74.7.85 (talk) 02:26, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Full of incorrect details 

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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Low res hopscotch.jpg

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message: I read in a textbook that this book was based upon Borges' story, "Garden of the Forking Paths," but I don't see that mentioned in the article. Does anyone have other sources that could verify or refute this claim? It seems like it should be included if it's true....  Aristophanes68 (talk) 00:05, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Borges' "Garden"? 

message: Why is this page categorized under "Christianity articles with comments"? Aristophanes68 (talk) 00:08, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Christian article? 

message: Added a "citation needed" template to the claim that the novel was influenced by Miller's writings. Cortázar didn't mention him or his writings either in the novel itself or on interviews, and i can't remember any critical work relating them. Although some of Miller's books talk about Paris and the "search for truth" there, there are many works of fiction that deal with the subject, and he was writing about a different time. Yaco (talk) 12:49, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Henry Miller influence 

message: This articles does not cite any sources and appears to contain a great deal of original research. Even if some of the material is supported by information in the external links, it needs to be properly incorporated into the article via a references section. Added an "unreferenced" tag. cF  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Chrisfjordson (talk • contribs) 02:59, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  No Sources 

message: Under the Horacio vs Society bullet point, it is stated that he fights Traveler and Talita's life. This is incorrect -- he wishes to enter into their lives, not come into conflict with them. This motive is discussed in chapter 78: "I would like to enter into the intimacy of the Travelers under the pretext of knowing them better, of really getting to be the friend, although what I really want is to seize Manu's manna, Talita's elf, their ways of seeing things, their presents and their futures, different from mine."
Jlionheart (talk) 06:40, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Horacio vs Society section inaccuracy 

message: The main themes section is biased, containing many subjective conclusions, like La Maga leading a failed life because she is supposedly unable to deal with the abuse she suffered in the past. That is wholly an opinion -- there is no evidence in the book to support that. Although the points themselves (for example, The Definition of Failure can be said to be one of the novel's themes) may not be inaccurate, the section itself still needs to be rewritten.
Jlionheart (talk) 06:58, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  The main themes section has issues 

message: I am going to remove the entire "Isolation and loneliness" section, as it makes absolutely no sense. Specifically:
Cortázar uses a quick, succinct, vignette-chapter style that paints brief images for the reader without relying too much on plot. [this has nothing to do with isolation and loneliness] At one point in the novel Horacio witnesses a car accident. It is said of the victim that "he doesn't have any family, he's a writer." Horacio is stunned by the way violence brings the community together. [what does "violence" have to do with "a car accident"?] Medics rush to the scene in an ambulance and speak "friendly, comforting words to him." [to whom? the car accident victim?] Violence and conflict continually bring characters together in Hopscotch. For instance, Talita's crossing of the bridge and Horacio's stunt at the novel's conclusion. [neither of which would seem to fit any definition of "violence"].
As far as I can see, this entire article is well below Wikipedia standards, especially given the importance of the book. Most of it should simply be tossed and replaced afresh. 850 C (talk) 16:30, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Isolation and loneliness" 

message: I am removing the current intro, which read as follows:
:The book is highly influenced by Henry Miller’s reckless and relentless search for truth in post-decadent Paris and Daisetz Teitaro Suzuki’s modal teachings on Zen Buddhism.[citation needed]
:Cortázar's employment of interior monologue, punning, slang, and his use of different languages is reminiscent of Modernist writers like Joyce, although his main influences were Surrealism[citation needed] and the French New Novel -as Composition nº 1 (1962), by Marc Saporta (1923-2009)-, as well as the "riffing" aesthetic of jazz and New Wave Cinema.
:Since Cortázar’s death in 1984, there has been a great deal of ambiguity regarding the classification of the ‘novel without genre.’[citation needed] Works such as William S. Burroughs' 1962 novel, The Ticket That Exploded, and Thomas Pynchon's V., published the same year as Hopscotch, have earned similar reputations.[citation needed]
Virtually every statement there is either unsourced, implausible, or meaningless. The reference to Joyce might be added back in if properly sourced, as he was undoubtedly an influence, both directly and via Leopoldo Marechal. 850 C (talk) 17:01, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removing intro  

message: This article remains a mess. There's no mention of Maga's baby and its death, and the statement that "Babs... attacks Horacio for what he did to La Maga" leaves open the question of exactly what Horacio did to la Maga. One also wouldn't know that Maga as a character is present in much of the first section, since it states that she already "has disappeared" at the beginning (which may indeed be true, given the book's circular treatment of time, but is not the whole story). 
There are also several paragraphs of the plot summary of chapters 1-36 that don't take place in Paris and belong in the following section (parts of which they duplicate). I'll try to improve it as time allows but it really needs to be stripped down and redone entirely. 850 C (talk) 20:25, 15 January 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Still a mess 

message: Substituted at 18:15, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Assessment comment

message: The Spanish-language entry is in a better state. If folks agree, I'd be inclined to start translating and porting the better parts to the English-language entry.
--Kangaru99 (talk) 05:18, 13 January 2017 (UTC)
replies: text:  Please do, thanks. 850 C (talk) 16:50, 13 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Translating from the Spanish article