Talk:Nicholas Hoult/Archive 1

message: I've noticed alot of vandalism and disruptive editing on this page, something that urgently needs to be rectified. We should leave the page as it is at present, and consider the possibility of it being locked. Who agrees?—Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.5.196.238 (talk • contribs) 
:Well, I agree that you should stop the disruptive editing.  Your last edit was not exactly helpful to the article. -FisherQueen (Talk) 12:08, 22 May 2007 (UTC)
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message: Just to preempt anyone who has seen the same video, Nick gave an interview ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Opisjb5mMs4 ) where he alleged that he had had a four month relationship with co-star Joseph Dempsie. I can't find any reference to such a relationship other than that interview, and based on their banter on Soccer AM ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPK2M_-12xE ) I would presume the interview was a case of Nick trying to wind up Joseph. See also 4:30 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HTQDZtx99n8 where the presenter in the first video says "I was looking for a story there James, you could have lied for us". — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thelem (talk • contribs) 00:16, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sexuality 

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message: What does "The director noticed and suggested that he should try out for one" mean?  "Try out" for one what?203.184.41.226 (talk) 06:39, 7 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Career 

message: Please note that it's the consensus at WP:FILM that films in pre-production should not be included in an actor's filmography. Doniago (talk) 12:36, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pre-Production doesn't go in Filmography 

message: Wikipedia has been going around a lot with edits and undo edits regarding Nicholas Hoult's personal life.  I find it ironic that there have been many edits undone based on "conjecture" that Nicholas Hoult is dating Jennifer Lawrence again in 2013. This is ironic, because Wikipedia is using as a reference a Perez Hilton site to "factually" state that Nicholas Hoult and Jennifer Lawrence broke up early 2013 - how much more conjecture can that be, with no primary source (i.e., person) referenced? Currently, this is what Wikipedia says:
Personal life
Hoult dated American actress Jennifer Lawrence, whom he met on the set of the movie X-Men: First Class, since 2010. They split in early 2013.[18].
Would it be fair to simply state that "Hoult dated American actress Jennifer Lawrence, whom he met while making X-Men: First Class in 2010." Then we wouldn't have to get into the nit-picking of when this ended. Either that, or take it out all together. Jennifer has acknowledged that she dated him publicly, but neither she nor Hoult have publicly acknowledged that they have broken up. A reference to their dating can be found many places, one at
http://www.entertainmentwise.com/photos/71629/1/PHOTOS-The-Hunger-Games-Fever-Hits-London-For-European-Premiere-  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 107.2.68.255 (talk) 16:09, 8 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request to edit September 8, 2013 

message: Why say that "it was revealed that Hoult's middle name of Caradoc is pronounced /ka.rɑː'dɔk". That is not a revelation, this is the normal pronunciation of the word.Royalcourtier (talk) 00:16, 26 July 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Caradoc 

message: *"He was drawn to acting from a young age and appeared in theatre productions as a child" - I'd tweak the structure of this sentence... "Drawn to acting from a young age, he appeared..." and I'd clarify whether it was local or national or regional theater productions
*"Hoult wanted to study English, but chose to pursue a career in acting and made his screen debut at the age of seven in the 1996 film Intimate Relations," - these content don't make much sense together; I doubt he knew he wanted to study English at age 7. I'd split these into two sentences that contain the same content you're trying to convey: ie. one about english/deciding to choose acting and one about when he made his debut
*"and appeared in the television programmes Magic Grandad and Waking the Dead. " - when?
*"Although dismissive of his character, his performance" - these don't match so the sentence's takeaway message gets lost and garbled
*"Hoult's continued associations with big-budget productions have yielded varying results" - what does "continued" add here?
*"He played Jack in the 2013 film Jack the Giant Slayer, which was a box office bomb, while the 2015 film Mad Max: Fury Road in which he played Nux was a blockbuster." - cut dow the verbiage here
*"Hoult is best-known for his supporting roles but he has turned to starring roles—mostly in independent films—including three of his 2017 roles; the romantic drama Newness and the biographical films Rebel in the Rye and The Current War, in which he played J. D. Salinger and Nikola Tesla, respectively. " - again, separate into multiple sentences
*" Outside film, he voiced Elliot in Lionhead Studios' 2010 action role-playing game Fable III, appeared in theatrical productions including the 2009 West End play New Boy, and is involved in philanthropy, supporting numerous charitable organisations." - I'd keep the first two in the same sentence and move his philanthropy to its own sentence and then specify some of the major organizations
Here are my comments on the lead alone. Overall, I think this needs a good amount of copyediting. I think a peer review would be a good move before an FAC. It's good, but definitely needs some fine-tuning. ceranthor 16:49, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Noted, . I'll start one soon. VedantTalk 05:29, 6 April 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments from Ceranthor 

message: Page is missing a data box  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2605:8D80:5E0:2489:2C0C:E6A:DDA:972C (talk) 03:42, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Data box