Talk:Asiatic cheetah/Archive 1

message: This is no littreary attempt by me, the idea is to save this almost extinct cheetah subspecie.
Atulsnischal 11:20, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Asiatic Cheetah]] Please note: Any Copied material is under "[[Fair use]]" and is properly cited in the reference

message: Another example:
* PLEASE NOTE: Actual usable Asiatic Cheetah image has to be downloaded from one of the sources or Links in my Article on Asiatic Cheetah meantime just using a regular Cheetah image as it looks almost the same. Scientific sources etc. may be also required for classification.
Thanks
Atul Singh Nischal
Thanks for adding the image on my page, when you get time later try and use a full bodied image of an adult with its sleek body. This is a cub in winter coat, possibly it is Marita, the last Asiatic cheetah in captivity (tehran zoo). A sleek hunting houndlike picture of an adult might be better.
When you get the time.
Thanks Atul Atulsnischal 10:24, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks Atul. I'll help make the tax box for the cleaned-up article. Just a note, by the way: you shouldn't put links every time the word occurs, you're only supposed to put it on the first time it occurs, unless there's good reason to use it again, and there shouldn't be any links to the article that you're reading on the article that you're reading - links should be to other pages. Thanks. Ben 22:22, 10 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Taxbox based on the following one from the [[Cheetah]] and [[Asiatic Lion]] page:

message: This article is a complete mess, and needs a total sorting. I'm slowly trying to rewrite it, see my userpage: User:BenPhil/Asiatic_cheetah. Ben 10:41, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Rewriting

message: This is no littreary attempt by me, the idea is to save this almost extinct cheetah subspecie.
Atulsnischal 11:19, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Asiatic Cheetah]] Please note: Any Copied material is under "[[Fair use]]" and is properly cited in the reference

message: Hi Atul,
Nice to see your work on the Asiatic Cheetah page. I can understand your passion, but note that you may have to change your style of writing to match the general encyclopaedic content style. So for instance it not generally accepted practise to publicise websites, projects or authors on the article pages. The current content is not in line with general practice of articles so do note that if you do not edit it to the desired expectations, someone else will. Let me know if you need help. best wishes Shyamal 05:14, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I did. Ben 22:27, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Welcome 

message: This page is just not about the Asiatic Cheetah description, it is more importantly about what is being done to save it and what need to be done to save it. I spent non stop 3 days making it and 2 years researching it, please just dont go in and delete the whole thing. You can make your own version and link it.
Thanks
Atul Singh Nischal 04:58, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: [[Asiatic Cheetah]]

message: Okay, here's the cold, hard truth. I rewrote the article. I know you, Atul, have a great passion for the Asiatic cheetah but this is an encyclopedia and you are welcome to set up your own website for the Asiatic cheetah. I've tried to keep as many links as possible but some just had to be deleted.
The text you had said was "Fair Use" in my opinion was not even though you had cited the source I believe it was still copyright infringment, see WP:FU for more information. Ben 22:34, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks Ben. Shyamal 08:51, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Rewritten