Talk:Toronto Croatia

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*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080412202040/http://www.hljnt.com:80/index.htm to http://www.hljnt.com/index.htm
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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Nice article, just a few notes:
*I understand that editors tried to state things in an interesting way, but encyclopedic tone should be neutral and succinct.  Let the facts speak for themselves.
*It'd be great if someone could find more reliable secondary sources.  The primary sources (the club and various league websites) may be a little biased/promotional, and secondary sources also demonstrate notability.
*I noticed that some of the linked articles call the team "Mississauga Croatia".  If the team was known by this name at some period, should it get more-prominent mention in this article?  (Such as a brief inclusion of the alternative or former name in the lead?)  I created a redirect for Mississauga Croatia → Toronto Croatia.
*The copy edit tag had listed "excessive detail" but I didn't find this to be a problem. I'm not a football fan but I found the article interesting and engaging. I made the prose more concise so hopefully it doesn't seem as drawn-out.
*The last two, short paragraphs (from 2016) were a bit confusing to me, maybe they could be clarified or a translation given.
If you have any questions or comments, please add them below and .  Thanks! – Reidgreg (talk) 19:25, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: March 2018 copy edit

message: A WP:3O has been requested regarding the inclusion of non-breaking spaces in dates. – Reidgreg (talk) 22:28, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text:  The talk page for the MoS would be the best place to start. Walter Görlitz (talk) 15:45, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: 3O request

message: Response to third opinion request:
This discussion seems like it would be better served at WP:VPT. Consider opening a thread there instead. Erpert blah, blah, blah... 20:15, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text:  The talk page for the MoS would be the best place to start. Walter Görlitz (talk) 15:45, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Third opinion