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Talk:Bel Canto (novel)

message: While this article is a good start, it is not yet of GA quality. I am failing it for the following reasons:
Lead:
*The lead needs to be a standalone summary of the article per WP:LEAD. Also, the first paragraph should give the reader a better sense of what the book is about or what its importance is. The details about its publication and awards are a bit irrelevant at that point. Also, do not rely on the link to the "Lima Crisis" to explain the historical context for the novel - readers will more than likely not know what it is and not necessarily click. Give a few phrases for context. For an example of a novel page lead, see Maria: or, The Wrongs of Woman.
Infobox:
*One of the problems with infoboxes is that some of their fields are subjective. Why are you calling the novel a "thriller"? I wouldn't classify it that way, but perhaps the critics do?
Sections to delete or integrate:
*I would delete the "Characters" section - any important information there should be contained in the "Plot summary" or integrated into a discussion of the "Themes". 
*I would also eliminate the "Setting" section (wikipedia articles are not book reports). Again, any crucial information can be integrated into the "Plot summary".
Sources:
*SparkNotes is not a reliable source. It is a commercial product published to help students cheat. That is not what wikipedia articles are supposed to be based on. See WP:RS.
*The "Community" theme is sourced only to the novel itself - that is original research. Because this novel is relatively new, I don't know if literary scholars have written on it yet, but you need to check. If they haven't, you can use reviews of the novel to flesh out the "Themes" section. See here for an explanation of how to research a novel article.
Comprehensiveness:
*It would be nice to have a section on the style of the novel. You briefly allude to this when you discuss "first-person narration" but more on this topic is necessary, since this is a work of literature. Again, critics' reviews and literary scholars would talk about this topic.
*A "Reception" section is a necessity for this book. How was it received by critics? How well did it sell? 
*You might even consider a separate section on the "Lima Crisis". 
If you have any questions about this review, please drop me a line at my talk page. Awadewit | talk 04:04, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA fail

message: I removed the spoiler tag in the article, because, according to WP:NCD disclaimers should not be used in articles that contain the plot of a book. Z1720 (talk) 05:27, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Spoiler Tag in Plot

message: I propose that there be more. Quickly, before the editors find out and revert the page. Ryan7113 (talk) 04:19, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article doesn't have enough references to the PSAT
Talk:John F. Kennedy High School (Oregon)

message: : Please help, all you Trojans and Warriors of Mount Angel! Mount Angel Middle School needs significant assistance in growing! VigilancePrime 02:22, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Mount Angel Schools 
Talk:Roman Catholic Diocese of Achonry

message: :The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion. 
The result of the move request was: No consensus to move. Among the arguments raised against is the benefit of consistency with the rest of the category tree.   (t · c) buidhe 03:28, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Note: the Cork page redirects to the Cork and Ross article already in this name request. I've altered the request to reflect this. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 20 February 2021 (UTC)

text: . Over 3,729 bishoprics in Wikipedia have their article name as “Roman Catholic (Arch)diocese of […]”. This is to maintain consistency with the other churches in the Catholic communion such as the Greek Catholic Eparchies, Ukrainian Catholic Eparchies, etc. Note that these churches also exist in the West, such as the Ukrainian Catholic Archeparchy of Curitiba co-existing with the Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Curitiba. ―Eduardogobi (talk) 00:00, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  thanks for your insight on this. I'd observe though that Eastern Catholics are part of the Roman Catholic Church; the Greek in their forename distinguishes their rite from Latin Rite Catholicism in most of the West, rather than from Roman, as they are also within the overall ambit of the See of Rome. However, I do agree that consistency with the other 3729 is something to bear in mind here. There is some inconsistency in the use of RCC or CC, which doesn't seem to be because of Eastern Catholicism. My own preference here is for a shorter form as long as it is generally not ambiguous, and would maintain this request to move, but if there's a view that this should be done at a global level rather than Ireland-level, I can respect this decision in seeking a consensus here. —Iveagh Gardens (talk) 18:05, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

text: On the Church of Ireland, which I referred to, I don't think referring to a diocese as the Catholic Diocese in its title creates a significant POV issue, even as the Church of Ireland is also a Catholic church in the wider sense, at least in no more so than we have the article titled Catholic Church in Ireland. —Iveagh Gardens (talk) 18:05, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: If the extensive RC tree did not exist, then Diocese of Clogher (Church of Ireland) would probably be the model of how to disambiguate (e.g. Diocese of Clogher (Roman Catholic). Laurel Lodged (talk) 10:56, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Requested move 20 February 2021
Talk:La Sagouine

message: Is it accurate to say that la sagouine speaks in chiac?  It's more like vieux francais acadien... Observer31 (talk) 03:19, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Chiac 

message: The article says a play, but the category at the bottom says novel.  I have seen it as a novel.  ps for those interested, Chiac --Richardson mcphillips (talk) 15:55, 10 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  play or novel?
Talk:Hearst Communications

message: Yeah but why did people read Hearst papers? What big stories did they break or invent? This should be in a Significant Events section. Did they run any big promotions or contests that originated techniques used today? 
100.15.127.199 (talk) 22:25, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I never claim to write anything significant so if you want to come kill me then come kill me. 2607:FB91:1A7A:11EA:2D97:991D:1660:874F (talk) 03:31, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  boring 

message: Please don't take Days of our Life's off of NBC I've been watching it for years 162.247.202.219 (talk) 15:04, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Days of our Lives 

message: Hearst owns the website https://puzzmo.com, which should probably be mentioned in the page (or possibly split into it's own page). 98.117.240.132 (talk) 03:59, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: I added it under the list of Internet assets. It might deserve its own page as well though. 136.62.158.195 (talk) 04:06, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Puzzmo
Talk:Prime Time (radio program)

message: The show actually ran until 1993: 
* Mondo Canuck blurb giving Pevere's tenure as 1989–1993
* Bibliography entry citing a 1993 Prime Time item
Proving empirically that the show was running in the 1990s, the CBC Archives carries a Prime Time item from 1991 about the Gulf War.
—Eric S. Smith 19:27, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  The show's run
Talk:Major characters in The Smurfs

message: It doesn't appear to be addressed, specifically in the description of Gargamel, that his physiology is not conventional with childrens cartoon charactures, or with any other characters within 'The Smurfs'.  Most childrens cartoon characters are drawn with only three fingers or appendages for paws, hands, feet et al.  Garagmel has all five fingers on each hand, breaking common convention.  Not sure if the reason why he has all five fingers is known.
:Probably because he is human? All humans in the Smurfs, Johan and Peewit, and basically most European comics, have five fingers. The Smurfs only have four (not three), but then again, they aren't human. Fram 20:08, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
Talk:Cuca (band)

message: I'll see what else I can add as soon as I have time to track down some reliable sources. José Fors (vocalist) has a side project called Forseps, he's a very close friend of Mexican film director Guillermo del Toro, he recorded (as Forseps) a song for Hellboy (film) (that was included in the credits of the extended edition DVD) and even made some conceptual art (as can be seen in a book of the movie).Vicco Lizcano 19:29, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: do you have a link to that Hellboy credit? I looked a bit but didn't find it. There seem to be multiple versions also (?) Elinruby (talk) 04:03, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: several of the links redirect back to this article, which is silly. Still doing it as an ILL also because the article exists in English (the redirect). Note to self or whoever wants to jump in: this can be fixd by fiddling with the ILL parameters -- it does have an article in es.wikipedia. I personal am doing a drive-by and don't want to look up syntax; but you can specify the target for the link. Elinruby (talk) 04:01, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  redirects suggestion
Talk:Ektomorf

message: I can't read whatever language the second source is in, but I'm pretty sure the band is not not "neo Nazi" since they play music with self described gypsy folk influence, and at least two of the members are clearly not even white...  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.126.230.65 (talk) 00:25, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I've added references to the background information box and scrapped unreferenced genres. It's not much, but hopefully it's something. There isn't exactly loads of information about this band scattered around the internet. Anyway, thoughts? --Broadbandmink 12:07, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

text: It seems even allmusic have rejected the Trash metal brand, so I've changed the music genre to the decidely more neutral Heavy Metal. Regarding other issues with this article, I'm at a loss of where to find informative and reliable sources about this band. Suggestions? --Broadbandmink (talk) 18:18, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Contemporary Learning Center

message: I think you will need to add TEXAS or something to your title to differentiate it from the concept of a contemporary learning center, but in time ... no rushVictuallers 15:34, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: http://www.houstonisd.org/Page/73477 says the Spanish name is "Centro Contemporáneo de Enseñanza"
WhisperToMe (talk) 05:09, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Spanish name 

message: The school building, originally Miller Junior High, is indicated on the James S. Holman Survey. See the index map here: http://books.tax.hctx.net/v019/AE1997_19-20_0001.jpg and http://books.tax.hctx.net/BlockBooksPDF/v019/AE1997_19-20_0001.PDF
* The school is on page 67
WhisperToMe (talk) 09:43, 25 July 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Position on block book maps
Talk:NZR RM class (Wairarapa)

message: The article has been amended to include details of RM 10, a member of this class of railcars. Even after all this time there are still new books being published that claim there were only six railcars in this class. PatrickDunfordNZ (talk) 11:10, 29 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Seventh railcar RM 10

message: Since when did the NZ railways have Buffers and chain couplers? don't they have Norwegian couplings? Peter Horn User talk 04:09, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clarification required
Talk:Dichloramine

message: A discussion is taking place to address the redirect :Chlorimide. The discussion will occur at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2020 October 11#Chlorimide until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion.  –LaundryPizza03 (dc̄) 06:40, 11 October 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Chlorimide" listed at [[Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion|Redirects for discussion]]
Talk:Ryan Middle School (Houston)

message: *Emery, Mike. "Houston's Historic Ryan Middle School Celebrated in New Exhibition Created by UH Art, Architecture Students." University of Houston. March 7, 2011.
*"Exhibition at Ryan Middle School Chronicles the History of the Third Ward Community." African American News and Issues. April 11, 2011.
*Mellon, Ericka. "HISD proposes closing historic Ryan school." Houston Chronicle. Thursday May 3, 2012.
*"Exhibition at Ryan Middle School Chronicles the History of Third Ward." April 6, 2011 - http://www.webcitation.org/67RY5VSmJ
* http://dig.abclocal.go.com/ktrk/Ryan%20Letter%20English.pdf - http://www.webcitation.org/67UXvdHv2
* http://dept.houstonisd.org/policyadministration/boardagenda.pdf - http://www.webcitation.org/67UyhrKTG
* Archive of Ryan population trend: http://www.webcitation.org/67Vw7qgn3
* "Principal Problem." Houston Press. Wednesday February 16, 2011.
* Dance's resume: http://www.houstonisd.org/HISDConnectEnglish/Images/ReusedImages/DallaDance.pdf - http://www.webcitation.org/67WUFGP94
WhisperToMe (talk) 22:46, 5 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: More documents

message: I don't know if/when somebody will make a bio of William S. Holland, but in case:
* "Mr. & Ms." Jet. Johnson Publishing Company, September 7, 1961. Vol. 20, No. 20. ISSN 0021-5996. p. 21.
His wife, Mattie J. Holland, a businessperson, filed for divorce by September 7, 1961. It's definitely him because the guy was the principal of Ryan Junior High School.
WhisperToMe (talk) 04:37, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  William S. Holland divorce
Talk:Henry Wadsworth Longfellow Elementary School (Houston, Texas)

message: Some of the sentences in this article use the present tense (for example, "is") when referring to facts as of 2007, or events occurring circa 2007.  Shouldn't those sentences be changed to use the past tense?  ("was")?  
Example:  
I suggest to change 
The building is scheduled for completion in spring 2007. 
to 
The building was scheduled for completion in spring 2007. 
and to change 
The lead architect is YLS, and Heery International, Incorporated is the lead project manager. 
to 
The lead architect was YLS, and Heery International, Incorporated was the lead project manager. 
Just my 0.02.  If no comments / questions within a reasonable time, I reserve the right to go ahead and "be bold".  --Mike Schwartz (talk) 20:00, 4 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Past Tense Needed
Talk:Walter Hunt (inventor)

message: Seriously? 
99.231.34.220 (talk) 02:14, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  'Cause of death: Ageing' 

message: According to the "Velocipede" page, Karl Drais invented it.ChamSampian (talk) 15:55, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: - I took it out. It was User:Jdcooper (a Londoner) who initially put in "velocipedes" on creating the article back in 2006, however he has not edited for over a year.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:27, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Walter Hunt invented the velocipede?

message: Looks like an interesting well written article. I'd recommend, however, not having two sections, one at the beginning, one at the end, about his family and personal life respectively, since both sections cover aspects about his personal life. Seems these things should go into one section, perhaps with the name of Early life and family, following the lede. The contents of the Education section, two sentences, could also go into the section covering his early life, since it only involves two brief statements about his average education. Also, couldn't more be said about Hunt's legacy other than his invention of the safety pin? Though Hunt was inducted into the inventor's hall of fame for this, it seems more could  be said about his legacy, given the many inventions he's responsible for. -- Gwillhickers (talk) 20:27, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Section structure

message: Hey  In your last edit, you added a cite template with a duplicate  parameter. I don't have the source, so I wanted to ask you which value is correct. Happy Editing--IAmChaos 15:01, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: * Good catches. Thanks. Fixed duplicate volume. Submitted GAN. Do you do reviews?--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:15, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

text: *:I do not, sorry, I just came across this page by the error message I posted about. Happy Editing--IAmChaos 15:18, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  {{tl|Cite Journal}} 

message: The lede mentions that the subject invented the gongs in use in street cars today... Street cars are not in use today? Was this article written in 1910? 99.33.184.99 (talk) 21:26, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA status?
Talk:Mark Twain Elementary School (Houston)

message: do you have any thing on halleys comet
thanks so much if you do i am ahston el. shcool teacher —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.20.187.30 (talk) 00:00, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  halleys comet
Talk:Family Values Tour

message: The article needs help. Are there any volunteers in order to improve it? I basically built Family Values Tour 1998 article from scratch, so I can help and contribute as well... Broken soul 20:00, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I'm not too sure about the rest of the bands even playing, but I know for sure Slipknot won't be, as Stone Sour is touring through all of 2007, and Joey Jordison is still drumming for Ministry. I took Slipknot out because of this.AnthonyG 20:11, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slipknot? 

message: What's the point of having a banner at the bottom of the screen? If people want to learn about the band, that's what the link's for. [User:Jinksy] 22:29, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why the Korn ad? 

message: Need a source of 2008 Line up Post up source here
APWFAN69 11:40 19 March 2008 (PST)
:I think there should also be a source for the 2008 tour itself. I thought they were going to work on a new album this summer? Fezmar9 (talk) 23:44, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: 2008 line up

message: If this started out as a Rock/Hip-hop concert why did the last year's concert not have any hip-hop? From what it looked like it was just a weeker version of Ozzfest  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.140.84.160 (talk) 18:22, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hip Hop
Wikipedia talk:Requests for checkuser/Case/Light current

message: I would suggest that further inquiry along these lines is unhelpful.  We're only helping him play his "you can't catch me!" game.  Friday (talk) 20:01, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I believe the most recent request was to address a claim by LC that these people were impersonators. HighInBC (Need help? Ask me) 20:04, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is this helpful?
Talk:Campanus of Novara

message: In a section titled "The eastern origins of the Campanus (Prime Vertical) method. Evidence from al-Bīrūnī" it is given: "Where did the method originate? I can only say that it was known in Europe before Campanus, and that when it was mentioned yet earlier by al-Bīrūnī in the Masudic Canon, there was no claim to originality implied."  Given that the method is attested to some two centuries before the time of Campanus, it would seem that he could not have invented the horoscope house system that is named for him. --mikeu talk 02:29, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The above has been worked into the article. --mikeu talk 20:29, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Horoscope house system 

message: I've removed the following from the page, as I can not find any reliable sources to back up this statement. --mikeu talk 20:29, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clocks
Talk:Johannes Virdung

message: The following posting to the page may well be of interest, but suffers from being in German, and possibly original research. Charles Matthews 16:37, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:František Fuka

message: I believe that text is suppressing true importance of Fratisek Fuka. His influence on Czech internet scene is far more wide-reaching.  Ross.Hedvicek 20:10, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Direct Democracy Party of New Zealand

message: The fourth paragraph of this article reflects a lack of neutrality and needs to be rewritten.Ncox 20:10, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:John A. Scali

message: I deleted a rather awkward addition without citations. If what was added is contained within the referenced article, cite it within this article. I would also suggest reformatting the article structure to include the added information, not just squeezing it in.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.228.225.62 (talk) 20:34, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Would an interview with John Scali from 1986 be useful here as an external link? Focus of conversation is nuclear weapons policy. http://openvault.wgbh.org/catalog/V_9F236717EB2649008E00E863CAAF296A (I have a conflict of interest; otherwise I would add it myself.) Mccallucc (talk) 20:10, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  External link to interview on nuclear policy?
Talk:John Birch (musician)

message: It is currently unclear whether this musician is notable enough for an article on Wikipedia, since no secondary sources are cited. By the notability criteria for biographies, independent reliable sources are required to make sure that the subject is notable. These sources might be, for example, significant press coverage about the person, or an independent biography. 
Judging by the current article, it may well be possible that such sources exist. However, currently no such sources are  cited in the article. Please add such sources to establish notability.
For the time being, I am replacing the “importance” tag with “notability”. Sorted as part of the Notability wikiproject. --B. Wolterding 14:27, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Notability / Sources 
Talk:John Callan O'Laughlin

message: This text was copied from O'Laughlin's page on the Truman Library site. I've put it here in case someone wants to paraphrase and properly cite it: "He began his career as a journalist writing for the Washington bureau of the New York Herald from 1893 to 1902. After a short stint on the AP European staff, O'Laughlin worked for the Chicago Tribune and later the Chicago Herald until the outbreak of World War I. In January 1918 he was commissioned a major in the United States Army, serving as aide to Major General George Washington Goethals. During these years, O'Laughlin wrote his first book, From the Jungle through Europe with Roosevelt. In 1925, O'Laughlin bought and became editor of the Army and Navy Journal, a weekly covering the American military and world affairs. O'Laughlin's political connections extended from Theodore Roosevelt to Harry S. Truman and covered the philosophical spectrum from Herbert Hoover to Eleanor Roosevelt. He served as United States Assistant Secretary of State in the beginning of 1909, was a delegate at Roosevelt's Bull Moose convention in 1912 and later served on the Republican National Committee. After World War II, Hoover hoped to influence the European Recovery Program using O'Laughlin as his agent. These hopes went largely unfulfilled as Marshall and Truman went their own way in shaping post-war Europe. O'Laughlin died on March 14, 1949. He is buried in Arlington National Cemetery with his wife, Mabel Hudson O'Laughlin. An extensive collection of his papers is held by the Library of Congress." PRRfan (talk) 19:06, 26 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Text copied from the Truman Library site