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Talk:Gray baby syndrome

message: Please add mechanism also.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 115.240.20.69 (talk) 18:41, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Note

message: Hi UCSF folks. Welcome! I'm glad to see new editors interested in medicine-related articles! Just a couple of quick notes to help guide your research and thinking.
#Over the years, we've hammered out a list of suggested sections for articles on diseases/syndromes. You can find them here. I often find the list helpful to organize my research and writing.
#Per Wikipedia is not a manual and  Wikipedia is not a medical primary resource, we typically avoid giving recommendations in Wikipedia's voice. I.e. we wouldn't say "X should be treated with Y" (thus recommending something in Wikipedia's voice). Instead, we'd be more precise in describing the recommendation, e.g. "The American College of Obstetricians recommends treating X with Y." There are a few such mis-recommendations in the article. If you could add fixing them to your to-do list, that would be great.
Other than that, happy editing! I'll try to keep an eye on this talk page, so if you have questions as you get started feel free to ask here. For broader questions about medical editing, feel free to post at WT:MED to get more opinions. Best, Ajpolino (talk) 22:56, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: A couple of notes as you're getting started

message: Plan to strengthen the treatment section to add papers and guidelines. 
Expand on what the antibiotic chloramphenicol is used for. 
Plan to elaborate on the diagnosis section per the previous comment. 
Citing the articles referenced. 
C.Hancock, Future UCSF PharmD (talk) 20:11, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2 2021, Group 7 Goals & Proposed Edits 

message: 1. I believe the group edits have substantially improved the article. I especially like how although the pathophysiology section has a lot of medical terms that might not be known by someone who doesn't have a medical background, the mechanism of development of gray baby syndrome is easily understood and explained well so that anyone can understand.
2. Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia's manual of style?
The edit's contributed to the article are consistent with Wikipedia's manual of style for medical articles. The article has has an overview of what gray baby syndrome is and sections correlating to signs and symptoms, pathophysiology, diagnosis, prevention, and treatment. Appropriate guidelines for prevention and treatment were referenced and all of the edits made were written in lay-language so that anyone can understand what is being said.
S. de Jesus, Future UCSF Pharm.D. (talk) 21:30, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Foundations 2 2021, Group 25 Peer Review
Talk:Perrysburg, Ohio

message: Removed Tyson Geib and Jessica Geib from 'notable people' appears to be spam. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.60.133.235 (talk) 03:18, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Perrysburg is one of only two cities in the United States planned by the federal government (Washington, DC is the other).
I've removed this statement because the city website is quite wrong. All three "Greenbelt Communities" were federally designed and built: see Greenhills, Ohio, Greendale, Wisconsin, and Greenbelt, Maryland. Nyttend (talk) 14:03, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Planned by the federal government 

message: The article states that "Early settlers in the area fled to Huron during the War of 1812."  What is Huron? Is it the lake between Michigan and Canada, or is it something else? Jnmwiki (talk) 19:55, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  What is Huron?
Talk:Syringe driver

message: The new, large image shows the fanciest syringe drivers I've ever seen, and has a copyright license restriction that requires mentioning the company's website.  Should we fall back to the slightly less restricted previous image?  WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:33, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Image 

message: The history states (without citation) that the syringe driver was invented by Harvard Apparatus. Contradicting this are references in Martin Wright (bioengineer). If I receive no complaints, will remove statement about Harvard Apparatus. Passingtramp (talk) 14:31, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, maybe those references don't contradict it, but as there's no citation I've deleted all the same. Passingtramp (talk) 00:23, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: History

message: The second image in the article labeled "A patient of an intensive care unit in a hospital in Germany in 2015, with two staples of four syringe drivers each on the right behind him" does not show syringe drivers. Instead, what is depicted are B Braun Infusomat Space IV pumps (specifically loaded into a "Space Station" for multiple drips in critical care applications).
B Braun makes a similar-looking product called the Perfusor Space Syringe Pump, but it is a completely different device from what this picture depicts. It should be replaced with a more accurate image and relabeled on Wikimedia so that it is more accurately used in the future. 104.14.135.38 (talk) 22:17, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Syringe Driver Picture
Talk:La Loche

message: The shooting suspect is a minor and I've removed a comment which might have identified the suspect as his identity is subject to a publication ban. Though you may think he's a jerk, and the information was being discussed on broadcast media prior to charges being pressed the law is still the law and should be respected.
The information was also an unverified rumour, and thus not well suited for Wikipedia's goal of being encyclopaedic in nature. (174.7.78.215 (talk) 17:05, 24 January 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Shooting Suspect & Legalities

message: Regarding newspaper clippings
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I am wondering if this history should include news clips such as the Sept.30, 2011 entry. 
I would like to remove it (eventually) if there are no objections.Kayoty (talk) 15:25, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Newspaper Headlines
Talk:Different Fur

message: This article still reads more like an advert for local bands and the studio rather than a description of the studio and its history. At the very least it is very far removed from what might be considered in the style of an encyclopedia entry, which is what wikipedia strives for.
I'm going to trim the article to try and make it more in-keeping with the style required.
ahpook (talk) 18:37, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Hardly an encyclopedia entry...
Talk:Zenker's diverticulum

message: The introduction states that the diverticulum occurs above the cricopharyngeus, but "Mechanisms and manifestations" states that it occurs in Killian's dehiscence (which is below cricopharyngeus). Both areas are zones of sparse muscle fibers in the pharynx. Can Zenker's diverticula occur at both areas, or is it a specific out pocketing at a specific zone?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.47.20.121 (talk) 21:23, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Above or below cricopharyngeus

message: The rights in the image are not clear. Apparently, only the copyright in the image was granted, however, it appears that the patient depicted in the image was never asked for permission, which might violate his or her privacy and/or personality rights.
==Tom
This image appears to show an oesophageal diverticulum, rather than a pharyngeal pouch.
≈≈≈≈Eric  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.176.105.147 (talk) 10:05, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Right in Image not Clear 

message: Pharyngeal pouch has been changed so it redirects here, but none of old article  has been merged.  There is an explanation in the history of this article: "nothing to merge there - the other article was very poor".
 
At the very least there should now be a note: "also known as pharyngeal pouch".  Other things that have been lost include: the hat note about "Pharyngeal pouch (embryology)", a tendency to progress to the left-hand side, male sex as a risk factor, ease of swallowing the first mouthful of food, increased coughing at night, recurrent chest infection as a symptom, delay in normal feeding after surgery, use of a linear cutting staple gun to divide the septum, the section on Complications, Randy Sandke as a notable example, the two references, and a different navbox.  The infobox in the old article had different classification numbers for ICD-10, ICD-9 and DiseasesDB.
 
I also note that in ICD-10 the name for Q38.7 is "Pharyngeal pouch", so perhaps the articles should have been merged under that name. JonH (talk) 20:19, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Some info from this article might be good to integrate: http://www.reflux1.com/care/condition20.cfm/21 -- SpareSimian (talk) 20:57, 11 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge of Phyrangeal pouch 

message: Some information has been added under "diagnosis" and "treatment" that may be accurate and instructive but was very poorly edited -- even sentences without capitals at the beginning and some html code (citation of reference?) that was not done correctly. I don't know enough about either the medical side or the html side to fix it.Lisapaloma (talk) 00:42, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Needs editing! 

message: No information exists on wikipedia about the other esophageal diverticula, neither about the symptoms, nor about their treatment, which can vary importantly from Zenker's diverticulum. Wouldn't it be relevant to change the article name and detail those ? Fhuberla (talk) 13:58, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  What about the other esophageal diverticula
Talk:John W. Scherer

message: This section is in the Video Professor article, so I do not see the reason to add that on here as well, especially when we there are a few links to the Video Professor article. Wikifan111 21:55, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Javaroast, I see your point. I looked at the Video Professor article, and I feel that having Lawsuit info vs. criticism would be more appropriate.  Please see new version and discuss.Wikifan111 18:27, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Lawsuit

message: I added his new company Product in the News, changed the year in the metadata to him being born in the 40s (it was 50s), added charity and added his website. I spoke with Flyer22 prior to making edits on his talk and will have him review to avoid conflict of interest as I personally know John. Thanks! - Adrian 70.166.103.117 (talk) 19:45, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edits 2/18
Talk:Giant Springs

message: According to materials at the springs, the water takes something like 3 years to go from the mountains to the river.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Russellkanning (talk • contribs) 16:26, 11 June 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Um, more like about 50 years. Montanabw(talk) 02:13, 14 June 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  How long the water takes to get to springs. 

message: Would it be possible to add a section or make a linked page describing the state park itself? This page focuses only on a single feature of the Giant Springs State Park (the springs), yet there are a lot more things to do (fishing, hiking, biking, etc) and  to see (wildlife, birds, the overlooks, the falls, 4200 acres of land to explore, etc)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Giantspringsstatepark (talk • contribs) 16:45, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: I think that the park has so much more going on that it would benefit from a separate article. The title currently redirects here, but you can go here and remove the redirect and make it a stand-alone article.  You can use First Peoples Buffalo Jump State Park as a model if you want and I'd be glad to lend a hand.  One caveat, be careful not to copy and paste directly from the FWP web site, as WP takes copyright violations quite seriously and Montana State Government materials are NOT in the public domain.  And FYI, there are more photos of the park at this link. Montanabw(talk) 20:59, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Add a section or make a page on the state park? 
Talk:HMS Polyphemus

message: I have added some info from a reputable book about a planned class of semi-submerged torpedo cruisers from just before WW1. I know a bit about battleships from building models when I was a boy but almost nothing about ships of this size. I'm sure somebody knows more than me. Paulturtle (talk) 05:38, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pre WW1
Talk:Wiesbaden-class cruiser

message: I suggest to add in the caption that the Frankfurt is shown as target ship, just before being sink (in particular because I counted 7 guns, in conflict with the description) pietro151.29.189.70 (talk) 09:56, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: That's a good idea. Parsecboy (talk) 13:25, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  photo 

message: Seeing articles like this—about merely one of the prodigious number of ships, planes, tanks, Jules Verne-esque artillery pieces, and other massive machines of war furiously cranked out by Germany during their foiled attempts at world domination—I can't help wondering: Has anyone else even approached their volume of pointless heavy construction? It seems to merit some kind of recognition, if only to imply the unfathomable amount of steel involved. I mean, that's a LOT of steel to bother mining, smelting, forming, cutting, hammering, riveting, and so on, just to have it go right back to the ol' scrap yard. It's got to be a record, right? Historically? – AndyFielding (talk) 03:56, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Germany—#1 in futile industry?
Talk:Ibex (disambiguation)

message: Why is the principal page on Ibex about goats rather instead of the stock index?  Google has 117 million results for stocks and only 15 million for goats.
:Ibex is an article about a type of goat. IBEX is about NASA's Interstellar Boundary Explorer, which I do not think is the primary topic; I think the Madrid stock exchange index is the primary topic. Jim Michael (talk) 11:50, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Talk:HMS Pylades

message: There's no ship of that vintaage listed on this page so far; it happens to be mentioend in Hugh Talbot Burgoyne but will also turn up over time in various Royal Navy in the Pacific Northwest-related articles.  I don't know it's construction date or anything else about it so can't start a stub; please link it to the Burgoyne article if you make it, whoever you might be. YhanksSkookum1 (talk) 02:38, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Request for ''Pylades'' in BC, 1859
Talk:HMS Ranger

message: Is the first HMS Ranger mentioned the one that is connected to the downfall of the pirate Edward Teach, known as Blackbeard in 1718?
Is there any evidence available?--Ginness (talk) 00:22, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: No, that Ranger did not enter service until 1747.  J. J. Colledge does not list any ships of the Royal Navy bearing the name HMS Ranger that could have taken part, and his work is regarded as the definitive account of Royal Navy ships.  It is more likely that the Ranger involved in capturing Blackbeard was a private ship, hired for the purpose of hunting him, and never actually formally commissioned into the Navy. Benea (talk) 03:59, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I've clarified this situation in the article. Benea (talk) 04:04, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Blackbeard
Template talk:Köln class light cruiser

message: I wonder if calling the template "Template:Köln class light cruiser" with the K-spelling is appropriate given that the main article is Cöln-class cruiser and the title is "Cöln-class cruisers"? would the C spelling be better for consistency? Dunarc (talk) 22:54, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Name of template
Talk:People's Power Party (Thailand)

message: This section fails to discuss the PPP's policies and should be named "Corruption Charges".  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.162.66.184 (talk) 14:24, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Policy Section

message: with 's or not ?
(source please)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.131.217.16 (talk) 11:02, 3 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  "People's Power Party" or "People Power Party" ? 

message: I do not see any information as to when and how the PPP formed a government. It seems to me that it would be a vital bit of the story.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sreed888 (talk • contribs) 05:04, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Info on forming a govenrment
Talk:Exotropia

message: Mention if it is indeed normal for one's eyes to not maintain perfect alignment if one is daydreaming etc. Jidanni 22:16, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: All adult daydreamers?

message: The image in the Signs and Symptoms section is supremely unhelpful. The image doesn't clearly demonstrate an exotropia; why is it still there?
Nonagonal Spider (talk) 08:12, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  More helpful images 

message: That picture does not show an exotropia, she is simply looking to the right. Notice that the corneal light reflex (white reflection) is located at the same place in both her eyes.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.252.248.130 (talk) 21:29, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Misleading image 
Talk:Joseph de Torre

message: Mga kondisyon sa pagkamit ng kabutihang panlahat 175.176.85.185 (talk) 06:57, 1 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  ESP
Talk:Herillus

message: As I specified in a footnote to the article, there is just as much manuscript evidence to make Herillus a native of the Greek town of Chalcedon as of the Phoenician colony of Chartage. The most recent editor of Diogenes Laertius prefers the former, and wisely so, I think. If Herillus had really been a Carthaginian, and not a Greek, one would have expected Diogenes to make more of the fact, as he does with Clitomachus of Carthage (iv. 67 ): as for the latter we are informed that his original - Carthaginian - name was Hasdrubal, and that he used to lecture on philosophy in his native language, but nothing of the sort is found in Diogenes' account of Herillus. It is also revealing that Cicero does allude to Clitomachus' Carthaginian background (Ac. 2, 31, 98), but says nothing about Herillus' origins, although he mentions him several times. --Fabullus (talk) 09:41, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  From Carthage or Chalcedon?
Talk:Gesta Francorum

message: Current scholarship is divided on who wrote the Gesta, the three possibilies as presented in Nirmal Dass' recent translation are thate like Steven Runciman suggests in the passage in the article, that it was written by a italian norman aristocrct who participated in the crusade.  The second possibility is that it was compiled soon after the events of the crusade by a scriptorium of monks.  The third is that it is more a literary endevour and that it relies more on the importance of tradition in the writing of history in the middle ages.  the wikipedia article on the gesta should be edited to reflect these, although I dont feel qualified to do so myself. Voron10 (talk) 08:06, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Authorship
Talk:HMS Sheffield

message: The information on this page is incorrect.
HMS Sheffield sunk on the 4th May 1982 after being hit on the 2nd May 1982 at 11.09AM GMT. This information that I have given is from personnel(my husband) that was in the Falkands at the time. He relives this incident every day since being back as do all the service personnel that was there! Winniewotknot (talk) 11:27, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: That must be truly terrible for him, and for you. I can only imagine how awful it is, and you have my genuine sympathy. However, extensive coverage by sources such as BBC News and The Telegraph state that the Sheffield was struck on 4 May and sank under tow on 10 May. The General Belgrano was sunk on 2 May: is there any possibility that your husband is mistaking these two dates? ~dom Kaos~ (talk) 17:47, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  HMS SHEFFIELD
Talk:HMAT Supply (1759)

message: About a month ago, an IP editor (now blocked) replaced all instances of "HMS Supply" in this article with "HMAT Supply", with the edit summary "Correction of name to HMAT Supply, as it was only the renamed New Brunswick of 1793 that was HMS Supply". I reverted these changes, on the basis that they were unsourced, broke the hatnote and made the article contents inconsistent with the article title. However, I do note that some sources (e.g. , , ) do refer to this ship as "HMAT Supply", while others (e.g. , , ) refer to her as "HMS Supply". Can anyone provide clarity on this? Thanks. DH85868993 (talk) 06:55, 7 September 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  HMS/HMAT
Talk:HMS Swiftsure

message: There was a Swiftsure that took part in the capture of Le Foudroyant in 1758; does anyone know any details of her? Xyl 54 (talk) 23:27, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, found it. Xyl 54 (talk) 17:48, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Query
Talk:List of North Korean missile tests

message: Next month`s test here or separate page?andycjp (talk) 23:46, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: The 1998 missile test mentioned on the page was North Korea's first satellite launch attempt, Kwangmyongsong-1. While the launch failed to reach orbit, the successful launch of Kwangmyongsong-3 Unit 2 makes clear that North Korea was telling the truth about the nature of the launches of Kwangmyongsong-1 and Kwangmyongsong-2. 68.4.28.33 (talk) 21:31, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Satellite launches 

message: I've removed the 1998, 2009, and 2012 missile launches from both the list and the timeline as these launches were merely intended to put satellites into orbit. For the military analyst, the only way to determine whether a rocket launch is an orbital one is if its trajectory is not arched as in an ICBM. 68.4.28.33 (talk) 23:20, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Changes to page 

message: The 2 timelines overlap and are confusing.  Removed formatted timeline and pasted below.  
--George100 (talk) 09:56, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Redundant timeline 

message: "Post-boost vehicle" should link to the article on Multiple independently targetable reentry vehicle (MIRV). The diagram in the MIRV article (in the "Mode of operation" section) refers to a post-boost vehicle. Also, the "Purpose" section refers to a "post-boost (or bus) stage". Since there is no main article on Post-Boost Vehicle, the MIRV article is the most relevant article to link to. —KinkyLipids (talk) 02:47, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Sorry, self-reverted.―― Phoenix7777 (talk) 03:50, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Post-boost vehicle and MIRV 

message: The current events said that North Korea has tested a new missle.
Wert is wr for you will not be a 5 to your life and you rt ew4 is the r of 445 50.40.162.249 (talk) 18:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  2021 Missles
Talk:Death of the New Gods

message: 1) Can someone turn the references into inline citations? I can never get it right.
2) anyone know the tie-in issues that people like knock-out and the like died in? --Fredrick day 22:48, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  references  + tie-in issues 

message: Goth died in JSA #9, and Chroma died in JSA #10. --69.141.206.123 00:11, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: So Goth and Chroma were New Gods? Btw shouldn't there be a list of casualties like the one used during Infinite Crisis?--84.55.118.43 12:23, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Maybe, though the answer to "Who Dies" is likely to be "all the new gods" so we could just link to the list of them instead of reproducing that list here.
—Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.189.197.62 (talk) 05:38, 16 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  The deaths of these folks in JSA is unrelated to the New Gods killings. Goth, Chroma and the New Olympians are being killed because they proport themselves to be gods (taking their names - acting like they're gods) but are in fact not gods. The perpetrator in this case has been revealed to be Gog. --SLWalsh (talk) 19:26, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Goth & Chroma
Talk:Loyalsock Township High School

message: I've reverted you twice. Please discuss. Chris Troutman (talk) 17:25, 13 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Taylor Swift's dad 