Talk:Game brain

message: I just removed the following sentences from the lead of the "summary" section:
*"Mori is neither a neuroscientist nor a psychologist. He is a PhD physiologist and his thesis concerns muscle."
It's pretty clear that these unsourced sentences are designed to undermine Mori's theories on the basis that he lacks the credentials to make neuroscience claims. If these facts have been used by reliable sources as part of the criticism of Mori's theories then they should be sourced and placed in the "criticism" section. They should not be used as blatant rhetoric in an article that claims to be neutral. -Thibbs (talk) 12:02, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
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message: Hello, 
After reading this article I realized that this article only explains the negative aspects of video games. I think that by adding positive effects of the use of video games could help improve this article. 
I also think that the article could go more into depth when explaining about the arguments against video games being detrimental to the brain. Caher80 (talk) 00:17, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: That sounds like a good idea provided that the positive effects you are intending to add to the article are drawn from either professor Mori's writings or from reliable secondary sources covering Mori's "Game Brain" concept, and that the positive effects are added in a manner that is due. We should keep in mind that Wikipedia articles aren't intended to be a place for us to "set the record straight" per se, but rather to report what others have said about the topic of the article—in this case what others have said specifically about Akio Mori's concept of "Game Brain". -Thibbs (talk) 03:14, 1 February 2017 (UTC)
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