Talk:Maburaho

message: I believe that the elements in the plot which spoil the actual events in the story should be removed.  Someone removed an addition I made which spoiled nothing in the story but described an important feature which I found to be the very reason I started watching this show.  I strongly believe that if you want to trim the article, you should trim things which spoil the story arcs and instead describe what kind of a story the user can expect to be told.  This would make for a shorter article which doesnt have spoilers in it. 24.84.108.255 (talk) 06:54, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Something to consider removing 

message: I think there is more to add to this page, there are a few more characters not mentioned, the character descriptions can be exapaned, the VA's and seiyu can be added and I really think we need to add some to the summary to give it a more proper ending, right now it is a more a general summary then a plot summary, so I would hope to have help expanding that plot summary, can someone help me?
I've made some fairly large changes to the plot section. I've mainly just been correcting some mistakes and clarifying a few points. However, I did also take out the two references to Kazuki's death/Yuuna's illness. I know we're using the spoiler tag, but don't you feel that's a bit too much spoiler? It would rather ruin the anime for anyone who hadn't seen it already. Story Weaver 20:01, 23 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I haven't been able to independently conferm this. But ANN does have Eeji Komatsu listed as the Character Conceptual Designer for the anime series and Miki Miyashita is the original illistrator. I'm also not very trusting of information found in AnimeNfo without double-checking. --TheFarix (Talk) 20:28, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  More to add 

message: There's a fourth girl that loves Shikimori, but I can't remember her name right now... she's got short brown hair, and has that "cute" look. She should be added to the character summary bit. Disavian 00:27, 28 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Fourth Girl 

message: Various links to review sites to help constructed a "review" section:
* Meta Anime Review Project (MARP)
* Kei's Anime Reviews
* Anime on DVD reviews (not linked MARP):
** Being a Brief Discussion of Anime Dubs: Maburaho, Volume One
** Being a Brief Discussion of Anime Dubs: Maburaho, Volume Two
--TheFarix (Talk) 12:24, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Working space for reviews 

message: I'm a bit perplexed as to which Class 2-B characters to include descriptions for, if any. I can only think of one character that is worth mentioning, Nakamaru, but it would be unfair to just list him. One approach would be to have the whole class, including Nakamaru, listed as a "character" since they pretty much act that way. --TheFarix (Talk) 02:26, 20 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think, in the end, it is better to describe them as a whole class. With only a couple of exceptions, the entire class acts in unison through the entire series. Nakamaru, Morisaki and Matsuda are about the only ones that act semi-independently of the others. --TheFarix (Talk) 13:03, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Which Class 2-B characters to list 

message: That should be it for character images. I don't think Ms Iba nor any of the members of Class 2-B are significant enough to have images on the article. --TheFarix (Talk) 18:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Character images 

message: Instead of expanding the plot section to include the entire series maybe we could just add short summaries to each episode title? --Squilibob 03:30, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: That's one possibility. Another would be to completely merge the existing plot section into the lead, since all it does now is establish the premise of the series but provides no actual plot details. In fact, I think it is merely restating the premise that is already included in the lead. --TheFarix (Talk) 03:54, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes that's true. The fact that Kazuki only has an initial spellcount of eight does not need to be mentioned three times - as it is now in that plot section as well as the lead and the Kazuki Shikimori character description. --Squilibob 06:32, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Ok, I've removed the plot section since all it was doing was restating the what was already in the lead. That should cut out that redundancy in information. --TheFarix (Talk) 02:25, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plot 

message: I feel that the characters section is getting a bit messy.
 
I will suggest moving the charcters into another page to cut the article size and rearranging the characters in alphabetical orders. 
Ms Iba and some members in Class 2-B have more storyline in the novel than in the anime, so will it be better if I expand out class 2-B, give something like a main supporting class member. 
--Chainzkai 05:59, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Suggestions on the Characters 

message: I posted a new picture representing the Anime characters better than the previous one. But, if it does not suit the articles needs then the change may be reverted.
Smile Lee 07:41, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think that's pretty good. --Squilibob 12:57, 22 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: New Pic

message: I'm thinking of reediting the character section by moving most of the plot details into a plot section. I'm also going to reconsider most of the character images used in the article. I can only justify two images for critical commentary, Yuna and Maiho. The remaining images, while identifying the characters, are not actually being commented on by the article. --Farix (Talk) 12:42, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. I've written a basic plot synopsis and removed most of the plot details from the character section. More work should be done to the character section to slim them down. I also think the plot synopsis should be watched in order to avoid excessive detail. Even though it covers all of the major plot points, it leaves many details out and some editors will attempt to add them in. --Farix (Talk) 15:33, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Plot and character section

message: why did u guysome to a conclusing that this anime would be over why? i wana see more of there its cool and romantic  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Chadss (talk • contribs) 07:47, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  why 

message: under the supporting characters, for Maiho, I don't think she appeared (or at least, introduced) in the manga--which I've recently read. maybe you guys mean the light novels? Shiya387 (talk) 05:03, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I'll have to recheck to see what the source, Newtype USA to see to which the article credited Maiho's first appearance in. --Farix (Talk) 14:37, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: That appears to be correct, the article did state that she was introduced in the original novel. --Farix (Talk) 15:25, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  wait 

message: I have updated all images to include fair use rationals. I even replaced the individual character shots of the four main characters with one that includes all of them. I can probably consolidate some of the other character shots as well if I go hunting through my DVDs. --Farix (Talk) 15:16, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Image update 

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