lflage/wiki-talks huggingface dataset:
Talk:Hurricane Dean (1989)

message: It's a high start, but there's still a little to be done for B class. First, the whole thing needs another look through. In a lot of places, the wording doesn't make sense. The unit of knots should not be used; the Imperial and Metric equivalents should be. The storm history jumps a bit. Write it as if you're drawing a line. For example.
:Dean's forward speed increased to 15 kts as the trough to the west of the storm deepened. The eastern half of the eyewall brushed Bermuda as Dean reached a category 2 status.
That could probably be smoother. The sentence after that is a fragment. Throughout the storm history, dates and locations would be good. The first paragraph of the preparations should be trimmed a bit, or split into two paragraphs. The impact should be in a clear order; one paragraph for Carib, one for Bermuda, and maybe one for North America (lumping US and Canada). Be sure add the rest of the categories and the button bar. All in all, not a bad start. Hurricanehink (talk) 14:50, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I changed the storms foward speed into Imparial and metric eq and fixed the fragement in the storm history. Storm05 14:56, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: And i split the first half of the preparations into two paragraphs and the US/Canadian impacts are already lumped togeather. Storm05 14:58, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

text: The tcr and the newspaper archive doesnt mention any more effects in the Lesser Antilles or mentions when it made its closest approach to the Lesser antillies. Storm05 14:38, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: There's other sources than the tcr and the newspaper. Hurricanehink (talk) 20:19, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, but most of the other sources have info that is already in the article. Storm05 13:18, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Try Reliefweb, they have some Caribbean info on Dean, and enough to justify its own section. Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Todo
Talk:Eastwood Guitars

message: Seems a bit like an advertisement, no?
It does to me, no surprise there since all of their youtube videos have obvious fake comments talking about how awesome their guitars are.  Not saying they aren't awesome, the comments are all just incredibly scripted. 71.212.109.95 (talk) 06:35, 24 December 2009 (UTC)

message: * Created corporate box
* Created columns for various models
* Removed external advertisment links + radio player link
  This isn't a promotional page, this is a wiki article. Completely agree with other users.
--Fortlansing (talk) 17:04, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  8/10/2012 
Talk:Cubatão

message: Piaçaguera is a very short article and it's not entirely clear what part of Cubatão it is about. The little content there could probably be fitted in the present article. Pichpich (talk) 15:52, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge [[Piaçaguera]] here
Talk:Oswald Thompson Allis

message: On the web, I find mention of an article by Allis, "Is a Pronominal Revision of the
Authorised Version Desirable?" I find the text of this document, but cannot find a clue as to where & when it was published? Is this real? Pete unseth (talk) 21:55, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Seeking source on obscure publication by Allis
Talk:Maritime Line

message: The spelling of the junction at Truro has at least three variations.  The "Penwithers" version is used in this article as that corresponds with Network Rail's documentation:
*“will be united with the West Cornwall Railway, at Penwithers...” – West Briton, May 1859
*“The Narrow Gauge will have to be laid between Penwithers & Carvedras...” – Cornwall Railway Board Minutes, December 1858
*“laid down rails on the narrow guage between Penwethers and the Truro Station...” – Cornwall Station Agreement, 1861
*“Penwithers Junction ... Penweathers Lane ... Penwethers” – Ordnance Survey
*“Penwithers Jn to Penryn One train working” – Network Rail, Rules of the Route 2009
Geof Sheppard (talk) 12:52, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Penwithers Junction

message: There are some questionable facts in this article taken from .
I have removed this sentence as D821 has always carried the name Greyhound in service and in preservation:
:An unusual working in 2000 was a visit to Falmouth docks by preserved Warship Class locomotive number D821 which was renamed Cornwall alongside the Royal Navy ship HMS Cornwall. (Pages 110-111)
I have heavily edited the following paragraph as (1) other sources say that Truro was the first signal box in 1876, 13 years after the line opened, and (2) the West Cornwall Railway opened before the Maritime Line so the signal box would not have been built after the others.
:When opened there were 4 Signal boxes on the line, these being Turo West, Perranwell, Penryn and Falmouth. When the connection to the West Cornwall Railway was completed, a further signal box was installed at Penwithers Junction. (Pages 19 and 66-72)
::Hi Geof Sheppard. Actually D821 did take parrt in a naming ceremony at Falmouth Docks as the photographs in Heginbotham show, and another source also confirms. I have thus reinstated this but have added a footnote indicating that the name did revert to Greyhound two years later.
::As to the existence of only 4 signal boxes, the lines to Falmouth and Penzance from Truro ran as two parallel single-track lines when opened, so the signal box at Penwithers Junction was only constructed when the junction as constructed in 1893.
::I always have the intention of using information that is available in reliable sources, so if you suspect information from different sources may be in conflict I would encourage you to follow the Wikipedia advice on conflicting sources rather than just deleting. Romfordian (talk) 10:30, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: I think you have misunderstood Penwithers Junction. The junction was created in 1859 to connect the West Cornwall's Penzance to Newham line to the new Cornwall railway. In 1863 the Falmouth extension crossed the Newham branch on the level and signals were provided. The signal box was built before 1879 and then rebuilt when the junctions were changed in 1893. Geof Sheppard (talk) 16:28, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: Questionable facts
Talk:Doctest

message: --Ctheune 13:38, 2 November 2006 (UTC)

message: I don't think there are any doctest equivalents outside of Python in regular use, so Non Python programmers may not have come across the idea. The article tries to explain its use through example but is not a tutorial. Please explain in much more detail what is wrong with the article before slapping the  'big i' on it --Paddy 03:29, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Not a tutorial

message: I have noticed that there are now doctest-like utilities for Javascript and Ruby. I would ask you not to add them to the main article before they are established within their languages community by, for example, being added to the languages standard library, or being documented, (not necessarily wiki'd), on the languages home site.
From experience on other articles, it keeps the page focused. --Paddy 05:12, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: On the other hand, the existence of doctest.js, cram (for the shell) and other doctest libraries in many languages contradicts the statement that doctest makes use of unique Python features, so maybe mentioning those other libs would help correcting the article. Leafcat (talk) 16:31, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
replies: text:  Hi Leafcat, there is an example unique_words.py, but the article text uses 'innovative' to describe Pythons implermentation of doctest rather than unique. --Paddy (talk) 23:24, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

text: Sorry, I don't understand your motivation.  Whether something is ever mentioned on a programming languages homepage (or included in a standard library) really depends on how a programming community works.  Some programming languages do not even have an official homepage, other than a wiki.  Looking at QuickCheck, it is an innovative idea from the Haskell community, and there are re-implementations for many languages.  The article on QuickCheck mentions them.  According to your "standards" we would have to remove them all.  I'm explicitly asking to mention other implementations, so that the article is more objective, balanced and useful. --217.81.172.130 (talk) 08:56, 9 September 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Are you advocating no filter on the trite, experimental, or both? --Paddy (talk) 19:50, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Doctest in other languages
Talk:Highland High School (Indiana)

message: This school article is currently in a very bad state, for several reasons:
* It does not establish notability of the subject. That is, it is not clear from the article why this school fulfills Wikipedia's inclusion criteria for organizations.
* The article contains a lot of unencyclopedic content; in fact it comes quite close to what is described in this essay. For example, the sections "Daily Schedule", "Rivals", "Student body" largely contain too much detail or unverifiable claims.
* The article does not cite sources. All content inserted here should be verifiable against reliable sources. This is also a good test to identify unencyclopedic content: If no reliable source has written about a certain fact, then it is probably not suited for an encyclopedia. 
Please improve the article, addressing these issues. Otherwise the article might get deleted from Wikipedia. 
For the time being, I am replacing the “importance” warning tag with “notability”. Sorted as part of the Notability wikiproject. --B. Wolterding 09:30, 23 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Notability, encyclopedic content, etc. 

message: For those who know, is there anything which makes HHS truly unusual, special, or unique? Does HHS offer an unusual class, perhaps an uncommon foreign language, or an unexpected breadth of math subjects? Does anyone have special information on the history of the school? Did Highland high school students (lower case used intentionally) use to attend Hammond High School (as was the case with Munster, for example) before Highland High School was built? Xenophon777 (talk) 01:04, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggestions
Talk:Ashdown Engineering

message: Ashdown is certainly worthy of a wikipedia article, but the current version needs a lot of attention:
*Written like an advert
*Few references, none of any of the claimed notable artistes
*No inline citations
*We don't on principle keep details on individual products, so removed the details
Ideally this needs some expert attention. Lots of refs available, but my amateur knowledge would not do this article justice. Rgds, --Trident13 (talk) 22:47, 2 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Advert/References
Talk:Carrot Ironfoundersson

message: There is a quote by Vimes when he reads a letter of Carrot and says something liked "boldly placing commas where no man has placed them before". Anyone knows where to find it? (tessarakt) 13:40, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Quote about Carrot's letter

message: "And in The Fifth Elephant, when faced with the defection of most members of the Watch, Carrot puts his royal sword on a desk in plain sight and reminds Watch members that they had taken an oath to the King, and that the King had not relieved them of it."
I have recently read The Fifth Elephant, the earlier section twice now where Carrot resigns from the Watch and this event did not happen. The Watch fell apart after Carrot left Anhk-Morpork.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.71.123.91 (talk) 22:45, 25 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: A Mistake
Talk:Caprolactam

message: The Nylon-6 Promotional Group (NPG-6) is an international group of companies that are active in the Nylon-6 industry, ranging from raw materials to fibres, textiles, engineering plastics, film and dedicated equipment. Nylon-6 is a dynamic, exciting and incredibly versatile material. This high performance polymer is unrivalled in its number of applications, including textiles, carpets, industrial fibres, engineering plastics and film.  NPG-6 provides information about the value and performance of Nylon-6 in its many uses. 
 
The activities of NPG-6: 
*	Promotion of Nylon-6 
*	Provide a global networking platform 
*	Conduct market surveys & application studies 
*	Stimulate business chain cooperation and developments 
*	Increase knowledge 
That sums it up, I really think that the NPG-6 site has added value for the visitors of the wikipedia-Nylon-6 page. Could you please put the link back?—Preceding unsigned comment added by Mcsys (talk • contribs) 
:I have read your request, I will wait for some more responses.  My opinion: an external link to the page about nylon 6 on nylon-6 and caprolactam could be useful.  Not to the homepage of NPG-6.  (Copied from the talk page of user:Mcsys).  --Dirk Beetstra T C 13:41, 2 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Request adding an external link

message: Would it be correct to state that caprolactam is a "Cyclic amide of caproic acid"? e.g. per 
http://pubchem.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/summary/summary.cgi?cid=7768
(this is presumed to be another way of saying that it is a 
lactam of 6-aminohexanoic acid (ε-aminohexanoic acid))—Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.149.178.232 (talk • contribs) 
:I'd prefer the latter (the lactam of 6-aminohexanoic acid), caproic acid is hexanoic acid, which to me sounds odd/misleading to call that the 'open form' of caprolactam.  --Dirk Beetstra T C 10:52, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Relationship to caproic acid

message: Cyclohexanone oxime is not caprolactam - why is cyclohexanone oxime redirected to this page?  Can this be remedied?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 144.118.158.164 (talk) 01:19, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Cyclohexanone oxime redirection?

message: At the bottom is Carcinogen state=collapsed, but it is classified in group 4, not 3, 2b, 2a, or 1. This could mislead readers into thinking it is probably carcinogenic when it is probably not. Talib1101 (talk) 17:43, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Probably not a carcinogen
Talk:Avivim

message: Avivim is a small village ( which is today in northern Israel. A lebanese village ( which has been under occupation, since the first Arab israeli war) Today around 500 Zionists/Jews live in Avivim, the abandoned Shiite village of Salha was usurped from its real location at the south of Lebanon with several other villages ( namely, Hounine, Terbihka, Malkiye, Qaddas, and Nabi Yusha. 
Salha and six other Lebanese villages have all been occupied by “Israel” since 1948
In September 1948, when the first Arab-Israeli war was at its height, around 120 Lebanese civilians from the village of Salha were herded into the village square and machine gunned to death by members of the Haganah Jewish militia, the forerunner to the Israeli army. The population left thier village and intered the village, that laid next to it, Which still today lays on the southern side of Lebanon ( Maroun El ras ) 
Salha and the six other villages remains under occupation, and still today they have not been freed.
Most of the population registred themselves as palestenian, to gain unrwa ( support) They registered themselves as palestinians for economical circumstances, even though they were lebanese. In 1994 ( the lebanese parliament( gave them back the original citizenship ( The lebanese one back) 
Today ( Hezbollah want to restore the villages by ressisting the state of Israel)
Lebanon is 10452 Km2, without these villages ( Lebanons geography would´nt be right)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.89.66.19 (talk) 23:57, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: 2009 comments
Talk:Alexandre Lagoya

message: I removed the bit about the technique being destructive to the wrist over time, as that is not necessarily the case. Is there a reference showing that either Lagoya or Presti have wrist troubles due to their technique? Wbajzek (talk) 23:27, 4 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Alfred Gwynne Vanderbilt Jr.

message: Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just modified 2 external links on Alfred Gwynne Vanderbilt II. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080218020317/http://nyra.com/Saratoga/Stakes/Vanderbilt.shtml to http://www.nyra.com/Saratoga/stakes/Vanderbilt.shtml
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080218020317/http://nyra.com/Saratoga/Stakes/Vanderbilt.shtml to http://www.nyra.com/Saratoga/stakes/Vanderbilt.shtml
Hello - I updated the year Alfred Gwynne Vanderbilt III was born (1950 not 1943).  You can verify in the NY times article on his 1971 marriage.   — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2604:2000:14C3:535:D4CE:3758:39CD:262E (talk) 00:10, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified
Talk:Alfred Janes

message: The three current sources seem to give the year of birth as 1911, but I am unable to see 30 June in any of them. The relevant [[FreeBMD] entry is this one, which also strongly suggests that his name was Alfred G. A. Janes. Martinevans123 (talk) 13:18, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Date of birth
Talk:Alfredo Kraus

message: I have re-written and referenced the lead paragraph. The mini edit war and point-scoring in the lead paragraph is detrimental to this article and to Wikipedia. The listing of virtually every great or 'legendary' tenor in the 20th century is highly inappropriate in the lead paragraph.  Similarly, unreferenced descriptive terms like 'legendary' invite that sort of thing, and are also inappropriate. It is debatable whether "Pourquoi me réveiller?" could be classified as his signature song (in any case the term 'aria' is more appropriate). If a verifiable reference supporting this can be provided, then it can  be added. But until then, it is sufficient to say that he was a distinguished interpreter of the aria, which can be referenced. As to the "extreme popularity" of the aria. That is also highly debatable, although it's is a famous aria.
This article needs a lot of work and expansion. The article also needs a "Selected recordings" section. There is plenty of worthwhile work to be done here, and I have provided further reliable references which will allow future editors (including me) to so. Please do not engage in further lazy and unconstructive point-scoring, and instead put in the work to make this a more complete and accurately referenced article. If you are not prepared to do that, then find another article to work on. Thanks, Voceditenore (talk) 08:56, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Unconstructive point-scoring
Talk:Systems and Information Engineering (University of Virginia)

message: This article appears not to be about Systems or Information Engineering per se but about the department at the U of V. Shouldn't its name reflect that? Avalon 06:09, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Does such an article belong in Wikipedia at all?  —Tamfang 23:48, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Name Change

message: I think this page is very short and is unlikely to be expanded within a reasonable amount of time, so it makes sense to merge it with the parent School page for this Department at UVA.
I also think the faculty list should be removed as it it likely to change frequently and has no live links.  ComputerGeezer (talk) 16:24, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed, or at the least rename to reflect that this is at UVa and not about SIE generally. B.S. Lawrence (talk) 19:31, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merger proposal
Talk:Eugene Rabinowitch

message: Was Rabinowitch born in 1898, like it is said here? --62.227.141.21 (talk) 11:35, 2 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Birth date
Talk:Caspase

message: Hello, The External link "The caspase gallery" pointed to the http://www.enzim.hu/~gaspar/caspase.html is no longer working. Tho owner of this file removed this file from our web server.
Regards, Webmaster —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 193.6.29.254 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 2 November 2006  (UTC)
Deleted Caspase 14 entry about it's involvement in skin cell development because it's function is as yet unknown.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.109.0.124 (talk) 04:22, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Caspases 46.251.208.232 (talk) 08:49, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Path anatomy
Talk:Felix Bloch

message: Can anyone verify/confirm that the picture was taken in 1952? There is literally no way that the picture shows a 47 year old man (caption "Bloch in 1952" was added 06:39, 30 April 2022‎) --88.152.187.55 (talk) 13:02, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  1952 picture?
Talk:Object Management Group

message: Business Process Management Initiative redirects to Object Management Group, but neither BPMI nor Business Process Management Initiative is mentioned in the article.
(useful infos at http://www.bpmi.org/)
--Riedel (talk) 08:37, 19 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Business Process Management Initiative (BPMI) 

message: The OMG does provide / define implementations - it specifies and provides implementations of other standards as UML profiles i.e. implementations in the UML
Wikitect (talk) 15:51, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Overview
Talk:Frank Aydelotte

message: Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: http://www.swarthmore.edu/news/time/. Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you.   ascidian | talk-to-me 16:00, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyright problem removed 

message: Though I really do not have the time to bring this article upd to standard, I added an infobox, deleted many passive constructions, and organized the article using information supplied by an archivist. However, I don't know whether the archivist is at Swarthmore or the Institute of Advanced Study, since Aydelotte served as President at both. I hope someone can finish this task.Jweaver28 (talk) 15:58, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  more work needed 
Talk:Camus (musician)

message: I am dubious about the main claim to notability here, which is to say the top 40 hit -  Billboard and other sources don't seem to think U Who charted. Several lists of one hit wonders that I found online did not include Camus. TV.com does say that Camus had one song on the soundtrack of the Baywatch episode "Out of the Blue", but IMDB doesn't list the music for that episode. I'm not sure TV.com qualifies as a good source. Brianyoumans (talk) 18:32, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Needs references
Talk:Tom Dowd

message: I don't really understand why even have that section if it's only going to list one of his projects. Is that the only recording that he produced (and worked as an engineer on the other recordings of his career)? 4and3and2and1 (talk) 16:53, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  It's kind of strange that the only record listed in his discography section is Layla by Derek and the Dominoes