Talk:Genetics and the Origin of Species

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In his book, Genetics and the Origin of Species, Dobzhansky explains the biological theory of evolution. Through his experiments, Dobzhansky discovers that mutations of genes lead to evolution within a specific species. Adaptations play a large role in genetic drift, and it is known that genes and mutations influence this genetic drift in a particular environment. Specific genes and alleles are therefore passed on to future generations to continue the trend of modern evolution. 
Polyploid cells have a chromosome number that is more than twice the haploid number. In Genetics and the Origin of Species, polyploidy is considered as a type of mutation. The effects of polyploidy between two different species causes hybridization and even greater evolution. These small chromosomal changes have large effects overall, and this emphasizes the importance of maintenance of species and populations. 
Natural selection in an environment produces reproductive success, which benefits the species. Speciation is an process of evolution through which new biological species are formed. Adaptive evolution occurs through the dominance and survival of competing genes within a species. This is caused by increasing the frequency of those alleles whose phenotypic effects selfishly promote their own reproduction. Reproductive isolation slows gene flow and reduces the process of evolution. 
In Genetics and the Origin of Species, Dobzhansky’s theory of modern evolutionary synthesis states that mutations of genes led to evolution within a species. Dobzhansky explains that all life, including humans, evolved through natural selection. This is critical knowledge not only for scientific progress, but for humanity as a whole. His theories became widely accepted and were eventually considered universal to the public eye. Dobzhansky's work was aimed at studying the process of evolution in action. His results support the theory of evolution, and lead to the enhanced way of thinking that genetics is studied today.
Jcf028 (talk) 02:19, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Jcf028: This outline is alright as a starting point for covering the actual content of the book, which should make up a significant part of the article, but it doesn't do much to put the book into historical context, and I would say it is too general in its discussion of the scientific content, without clarifying what was and was not novel at the time it was published. Ultimately, I'd suggest that the outline (and the article itself) should cover the background (of Dobzhanky's prior work, in particular, and a bit about the relationship between evolutionary thought and genetics, and a bit about the emerging field of population genetics) of the book, its writing and publication, its actual content (with an emphasis on the aspects that were novel at the time), and its reception and influence.--ragesoss (talk) 13:39, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Well put, . The section "Article structure" at WikiProject Books also has a nice summary of what should be in an article on a book. RockMagnetist (talk) 00:03, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Genetics and the Origin of Species - Outline 

message: After reading the article, there is not much I would suggest to improve the article. I believe the article currently meets all five elements of a high quality Wikipedia article. The lead section is clear and gives a good summary of the rest of the article; but, I think there could be more details on the contents of the book. The articles structure makes sense in its progression, and I wouldn't change a thing. The article also is neutral, and critics opinions are brought up routinely throughout the article. One addition that could be made, is ecologists beliefs on genetics and evolution prior to Dobzhansky's studies. But overall, the article is well written with balanced opinions and a clear structure, and I believe it is a great example of a "high-quality" Wikipedia article.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.82.164.34 (talk) 01:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article Review 

message: This is a very important article to understanding evolution and the history of ecology; thank you for your work and well done. First, I thought the lead section provided a great summary of the article, and it was well written. I believe, however, that it would strengthen the lead section if it were slightly longer and included a sentence prefacing the discussion on mutations and natural section and speciation. 
I thought the structure of the article was clear and understandable. The historical impact section is fitting and very helpful. Additionally, the headings and subheadings are placed correctly. I believe that the addition of picture of the book and Dobzhansky will improve the visual appeal of the article. 
Next, I do not see a problem with the balance of this article as it touches on the important content of the book in addition to the effects the book. My only suggestion would be to explore sections of the book in addition to mutations and natural section and speciation. 
I thought you did a great job of presenting the facts that were presented in the book. The article makes the main points of the book very understandable. Although this was a very well received book, I believe it would strengthen the article if you could find opposition or alternate opinions to the facts presented in the book. 
Finally, you presented a variety of great references that make for a strong article. I did notice that there were points in the article that would benefit from a reference. For example, I found it peculiar that the first sentence of the article did not have a reference. Additionally, the opening to the “experiments” section would be strengthened with a reference.   
Overall I thought this is a very well done article. Great work and thank you for contributing to Wikipedia.   — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gtn001 (talk • contribs) 03:43, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer Review

message: Great job on your article! It is overall very informative and well organized, here are a few suggestions that I think would help you improve your article: 
The lead section could be a few sentences longer by adding a quick summary saying what the book talked about such as mutations, and natural selection and speciation. The structure of the article looks great since you have headings and subheadings that are clear to the reader. I would suggest that in order to make the article more appealing you could add a picture of the book or of an experiment that was explained in the book. One good characteristic of your article is that it is well balanced, you do not spend too much time talking on one specific subject and each section receives an appropriate amount of attention. The coverage of the article does seem to be neutral, however the opposing views of other authors are not clearly exposed, therefore adding this to your article can make it even stronger. You also did a good job with adding references to your article. Overall you did a great job, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. Aoc001 (talk) 06:32, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer Review

message: My attention was drawn to this article by the DYK submission, and I find myself with two conflicting aims. First, I realize that the work by  is for a school project, and I want to welcome this student to Wikipedia and encourage them to contribute. However, this is also a hugely important book that deserves to appear on the DYK, and I think the article needs substantial revision before it can meet the criteria. So I will replace the content in the section Genetics and the Origin of Species#Historical impact – but first I will explain why in the hope it has some pedagogical value. Below are the contents of the section:
:In Genetics and the Origin of Species, Dobzhansky’s theory of modern evolutionary synthesis states that mutations of genes led to evolution within a species, which was not widely accepted by society at the time. This is fine, but should have been said earlier.
:By the mid-twentieth century genetics was a mature science with three major areas of concentration: molecular genetics, transmission genetics, and modern genetics. Doesn't connect with anything else.
:At this time, mutationism was opposed by many naturalists, who defended Darwin's theories of natural selection. Critics thought Darwinian natural selection was the major cause of evolution through the cumulative effects of slow and continuous variations. Belongs in the background section.
:In his book, Dobzhansky laid out an advanced account of the evolutionary process in genetic terms, and he backed up his work with experimental evidence supporting the theoretical arguments. O.k., if followed by a discussion about how this led to the field of experimental population and evolutionary genetics.
:This had a powerful impact on naturalists and experimental biologists, who quickly embraced this new understanding of the evolutionary process as one of genetic change in populations. This caused interest in evolutionary studies to be greatly stimulated, and contributions to the theory soon began to follow. Dobzhansky explains that all life, including humans, evolved through natural selection. This is critical knowledge not only for scientific progress, but for humanity as a whole. His theories became widely accepted and were eventually considered universal to the public eye. Dobzhansky's work was aimed at studying the process of evolution in action. His results support the theory of evolution, and lead to the enhanced way of thinking that genetics is studied today. This discussion rambles, mixing a discussion of Dobzhansky's later book, The Present Evolution of Man, with some sweeping statements about the book's influence.
Jcf028, you have chosen a good subject. For sources, there is an embarrassment of riches. I think the key to making this a good article is to follow the structure recommended in WikiProject Books, with (at a minimum) sections on background, contents, publication and reception (historical impact is fine). I think there is also some potential for a section on analysis, as Dobzhansky did not get it perfect on his first try. RockMagnetist (talk) 18:25, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
replies: text:  you're welcome. The text you put in looks good. There is still an important issue that needs sorting out, however. From what I have read, Dobzhansky did his most important work on Drosophila after the first edition of his book. I have added a section describing the contents of that first edition (I found a couple of excellent third-party sources for that), and eventually a lot of your text will need to be folded into a discussion of later editions. RockMagnetist (talk) 03:28, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

text: I'm glad you're working on those sections. I ran out of time. RockMagnetist (talk) 21:53, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

text: BTW, I strongly recommend you look at the Gould and Eldridge references when you are doing this part of the article. You can see quite a lot of each book using Look Inside! on Amazon (Google Books turns out to be less useful). RockMagnetist (talk) 21:56, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Historical impact 

message: The discussion of DNA in this article is an anachronism. DNA is not mentioned once in Genetics and the Origin of Species, and for good reason - its role in heredity was not confirmed until 1952. RockMagnetist (talk) 15:21, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
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