Talk:Crash Nitro Kart

message: This is in regards to the request for assessment from the CVG Assessment page.  I am rating this article as Stub-class, despite it's length.  A quick overview, from the top.
*Lead- rather short, but passable.
*Gameplay- What?  "It's like this other game, but different."  Right.  You need to actually describe the gameplay, and what the heck is going on.  Who's Velo, who's Oxide, and what is a CNK token?  Write the article as if the reader has no clue what Crash Bandicoot is, has never played this game, or any other game.
*Story- I'll be blunt.  Don't rewrite this section.  Delete it, and start again.  I'm not sure if this is just ripped out of the game manual, or if you worte this yourself, but it's completely unusable.  Wikipedia is written in a 3rd-person perspective- not second, and certainly not first!
*Everything after that- delete it.  Have a section on the characters, written in paragraph form, describing who they are and the cart they race in.  No poses!  No lists!  Same with the tracks- a short paragraph on the various types of tracks in the game.  Not a list of gameguide material!  And take out the trivia section- if its' trivial, it doesn't need to be in the article.
If I seem a little snippy, it's because reading the story section really made me angry.  This is the first time that I've actually lowered an article's rating when assessing.  This article needs a lot of work to get back to Start-class, much less higher.  --PresN 02:07, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: CVG Assessment

message: This is an official notice of an RfC opened 15:17, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request For Comment: IP actions 

message: Can't we at least revert back to the version BEFORE the tag was introduced? That way, it's neutral. And I'd also like to tell Mr Speculator to stop vandalising threads, starting arguments and blaming them on other people. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by CBFan (talk • contribs) 17:35, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Can't we at LEAST revert back? 

message: I and 86 (insert real IP number here) have now managed to resolve our differences. I believe that the article can be unblocked now safely without fear of more problems. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 212.219.92.36 (talk) 11:32, 2 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Good, but you should have also removed it from the RFC page so people wouldn't waste time coming here when they could have been helping other disputes that aren't yet resolved. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Petershank (talk • contribs) 21:23, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Resolution. 

message: He became king of Terra —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Sonicrules (talk • contribs) 16:13, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Did Tiny became king of the galaxy  

message: I found this webpage on the graphics of Crash Nitro Kart (). Perhaps it could be of use. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 22:41, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Useful web page 

message: I dunno, but it hardly looks like a stub. Should this be Start/C class? YOWUZA Talk 2 me! 13:44, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reassment 

message: Unfortunately the PR was closed before I had time to return to the article, but here are some additional comments on the present state of the article:
*The paragraphs are exceptionally dense, and could use some condensing, or reorganization into more manageable, smaller paragraphs. Unnecessary words can be cut. In particular, some of the examples of how items are activated, etc. come off as game guidish. One example and a summary is all we really need, ex.:
**"Boosting is a crucial part of winning a race in Crash Nitro Kart. Every time the player boosts, their kart will momentarily go slightly faster than its normal top speed. There are numerous ways to get a speed boost in Crash Nitro Kart. The easiest way to get a boost is to drive over the green-and-black-colored "boost pads" scattered throughout the tracks. The player can get a boost off the starting line by pumping the gas during the countdown. When the player is being reset onto the track after driving off the edge, a boost can be obtained by pressing and holding the gas button at the right time. Another simple way to get a speed boost is to obtain a turbo boost canister from an Item Crate and activating it. If the player hits one of the shoulder buttons while going over a ramp, the player's kart will fly into the air. The higher the kart goes, the bigger the boost will be upon landing. Another technique used for boosting is the "power slide". To execute a power slide, the player must hold down one of the shoulder buttons to perform a hop and steer left or right before the kart lands. While sliding, a curved "boost gauge" will appear next to the player's kart. When the gauge goes from green to red, the player must press the opposite shoulder button to obtain a boost. After the initial boost, the player can obtain another boost by pressing the opposite shoulder button when the gauge turns red again. The higher the boost gauge goes, the more powerful the boost will be." change to:
**"Boosting is an important part of Crash Nitro Karts gameplay. When the player boosts, their kart will momentarily go slightly faster than its normal top speed. oosts are acheived by driving over boost pads scattered across the tracks, pumping the gas at the starting line, and holding the gas button at the right time when being reset on the track. Another technique used for boosting is the "power slide". To execute a power slide, the player ho;ds down one of the shoulder buttons to perform a hop and steer before the kart lands. While sliding, a curved "boost gauge" appears next to the player's kart. When the gauge goes from green to red, the player must press the opposite shoulder button to obtain a boost. The higher the boost gauge goes, the more powerful the boost will be."
*:File:CNKCutscene.JPG should be removed, as there's already a screenshot that shows the cutscene and also shows the main characters (WP:NFCC).
*The reception section plods along. Ideally, since the majority of the reception is about the console reviews, the massive paragraph should be split into smaller ones that describe how critics responded to each feature or facet of the gameplay, rather than providing a laundry list of quotes. See Halo Wars, for example.
I hope these comments are useful. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 19:19, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Okay, I think I've fixed most of those problems you've addressed. I'd like to get an opinion on if things have improved before I take a crack at that GA nomination. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 05:05, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article comments 

message: We need to add the GBA only stuff on there.
Because the GBA verson has some nice featers  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Savelijah (talk • contribs) 16:46, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Only if there's reliable online sources describing them. If none can be found, forget it. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 17:26, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  GBA only featurs 

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