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Talk:Scout Network

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thread_title: Peer Review

message: I have started to clean up this article. It still reads like a puff piece to recruit members. It is too verbose. It has no references. Please help. --Bduke  (Discussion) 21:43, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Improve this article
Talk:List of national capitals in East, South, and Southeast Asia

message: The image featured is a conceptual design of the "Lotus Tower"-which is still under/construction at the moment. Is this okay?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Popthepuff (talk • contribs) 13:47, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Feel free to replace it with a better picture if you have another preference. CMD (talk) 17:14, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Image for Colombo 
Talk:The Wolfe Tones

message: The Discography seems to be missing a lot - nothing from 1964 and 1986 and then it contradicts what has been written in the article. Either correct it or lose it I say.--Tuzapicabit (talk) 19:19, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Discography 

message: Removed a large amount of material as it was copied from their (now defunct) site, see Google cache) or [http://electricscotland.allcelticmusic.com/artists/Wolfe%20Tones.html Electric Scotland. CambridgeBayWeather Have a gorilla 10:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyright violation

message: An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect Go on home British soldiers. Please participate in the redirect discussion if you wish to do so.  PamD 17:00, 21 May 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Go on home British soldiers listed at [[Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion|Redirects for discussion]] 

message: This song has become notable. Anyone any insights? Bogger (talk) 18:08, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: [[Draft:Celtic Symphony (Wolfe Tones song)]]
Talk:Cronulla-Sutherland Sharks

message: "...but they have won the club challenge in 1981." Is this referring to the World Club Challenge? It needs to be clarified. Because it doesn't appear as though they've won that.--Jeff79 19:39, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Introduction 

message: Who is this person? Is it vandalism? He is not mentioned anywhere on this page, but someone keeps putting him as the club's founder in the infobox.--Jeff79 00:33, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sir Tom Patterson 

message: Moved to 2007 page. Londo06 20:12, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Run-on side

message: needs to be summarised as it has its own entry. Michellecrisp 02:28, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: History section

message: There is one missing. There was a design in the nineties before s.l. which was similar to the current design except the white strip was diagonal, and there was grey with the black. I think the sponsor at the time was Reebok.   —Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.124.145.73 (talk) 06:38, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Team Jerseys

message: The club's name on its logo is Cronulla Sutherland Sharks, surely we should move it to a similarly named article? Bongomanrae (talk) 05:17, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Move page 
Talk:New Zealand Warriors

message: There are two key issues with this article, as I see it. The first, is that it's significantly under-cited. Almost 2/3 of the article does not have appropriate or adequate resources. 
The second, is that through naming of each season, there is a large amount of bias/editorialism put into these titles. 
I don't have the time (or knowledge-base), to go through an add references. However, I wonder if it would be appropriate to put the overview of the seasons as a seperate article, and just leave season summaries on the mainspace. Nauseous Man (talk) 10:53, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Structural Issues
Talk:Willesley

message: Anyone who is a fan of DH Lawrence is likely to register the similarities between Willesley estate and the estates in DHL work with a combination of mining and estate management - look at the Chatterley estate in Lady C. for a view of life in such a place post first world war as they struggle to combine the industrial world with the old fashioned Downton Abbey style of life. (Peteyates (talk) 12:06, 20 October 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  history of the estate 

message: Footnote 7. Letters to my Father, Abney family history, accessed 11 July 2008, and published online is now a dead link. --Oldontarian (talk) 08:31, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dead  Link
Talk:Woggle

message: For those of us who have been in Scouting, we know what a woggle is and how it is used. For those who have not been, it is good this page has a couple of photos of woggles. I suggest it would be improved if someone adds a full-chest photo which shows a woggle on a scarf. (I don't have the resources to do so.) Andrew8 08:16, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article addition suggestion 

message: There are no citations for this article; can anyone contribute?Mavigogun (talk) 05:39, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Citation Needed

message: :Category:Scouting uniform is itself a category within :Category:Scouting. — Robert Greer (talk) 02:39, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[:Category:Scouting]] ''vs.'' [[:Category:Scouting uniform]]  

message: I have added information where known and several citations to the references. Sources differ on the age of the term boon doggle. An image of a woggle on a scarf would be useful, a selection of modern woggles (international if possible) and more on the significance of the Gilwell Woggle.
Msbagheera (talk) 14:51, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Rewrite

message: The only current external link is completely inappropriate and shouldn't be here. It's a link to a private company and is in no way official and is not notable in any way  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.12.89.88 (talk) 21:07, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: * Nope. It's not suitable to include an unofficial, not notable retail site to this article. Please stop adding it  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.12.89.88 (talk) 12:36, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: *Is there a policy you would like to cite? --evrik (talk) 16:43, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: * Wikipedia:External_links#Links_normally_to_be_avoided— Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.12.89.88 (talk) 15:52, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links 

message: I have filled out two references in this article with links to the actual archived page images in Scouting for April 1917 and August 1923.
There is also a reference to page 62 in the October 1923 magazine:
:
I cannot find this issue in the archives, and am wondering whether the page number (62) can possibly be correct. In 1923, the June, July, August, September, November and December magazines all had 8 pages each, so 62 seems out of keeping with this. Might this be a typo? — Hebrides (talk) 14:43, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is this reference correct?
Talk:Adelaide Rams

message: I undid a number of edits that were causing problems with the info box. Apologies to any one whose edits I may have deleted. The box works now. Ozdaren (talk) 12:24, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Info Box

message: The GA review has been archived and can be accessed here. Dr. Cash (talk) 17:20, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Review

message: why is this in the main article? shouldn't it be in the relevant season article? LibStar (talk) 06:59, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: season results
Talk:Balmain Tigers

message: Can someone explain why in all of the lists/graphics Balmain is represented by a red and black diagonally split square? Balmain never wore Orange, let alone red. It was more or less gold (dark yellow) similar to the colour represented by RGB (255,180,0). I'd change it myself, but don't know how. Any help would be greatly appriciated from an old Tigers Fan. Weststigersbob 12:33, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks like vandalism to me.--Jeff79 (talk) 02:56, 12 October 2010 (UTC)

message: A player named Jack Dawson played for Hull  between 1932 and 1942, is this the same person as the Australian player Jack Dawson (Eastern Suburbs, and Balmain)?. Best regards DynamoDegsy (talk) 16:12, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Eastern Suburbs, Balmain, and… Hull?
Talk:Selinunte

message: For people understanding Italian or German:
*:it:Selinunte
*:de:Selinunte
have lots of information that only needs to be translated
--Bjs-en 19:59, 27 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Sources for Article Expansion

message: The destruction section does not mention earthquakes or tsunamis as possible causes. I suppose that could be added, at least for some buildings. Both the Italian and German pages mention this. For earthquakes, I found this source, but the tsunami theory seems less well founded. --Mlewan (talk) 15:40, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Earthquake, tsunami
Talk:Concord Prison Experiment

message: It is possible that the necessary references are already present, but each of the assertions and descriptions made in the article need to be specifically linked to a citation.  For example, who listed the members of Leary's team?  Where does the figure 32 for group therapy come from?  What is the specific source (author, title, page) of the recidivism baseline? These are examples, and may not be the only parts of the article that need specific citations. 
Regards Peter S Strempel | Talk  15:37, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: References
Talk:Turkish folklore

message: Why is there only folklore of Black Sea region of Turkey in this article? Turkey is very rich in folklore from every part of the country.Isatay 02:40, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Comments 

message: See Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Breaking vine. Johnleemk | Talk 08:53, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Articles merged here
Talk:Delivery point

message: You say "delivery point (also abbreviated DPB)". Say where the B comes from.  --jidanni
It stands for Delivery Point Barcode. Since these digit generally do not appear in human-readable form in the address, they are almost exclusively associated with the POSTNET barcode in the US. Froese 18:51, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  DP vs. DPB 

message: Does every address in the country have a zip+4?Audejoos 22:33, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Delivery points 

message: Neat article, very interesting. Thanks to those who worked on it! Lhimec (talk) 18:23, 14 January 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Neat!
Talk:Stilbenoid

message: Disagree,   it could be come a good Wikipedia article, this is just a stub to launch it.  Give it time to grow. ping 09:36, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Disagree

message: Given the double bond on the bridge these will have cis/trans stereoisomers. For some such as the Combretastatins this affects their properties. We could say if it does for others ? - Rod57 (talk) 13:15, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Cis-trans isomers
Talk:Tejon Ranch

message: I have just reverted the following edits by 67.121.47.3 from August 18, and subsequent minor edits, because:
* It looks like a press release.
* The anonymous user removed all text regarding the controversy, without explanation.
* A WHOIS lookup on the IP reveals ... you've probably already guessed!
--AT2663 09:37, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Deleted text

message: Hello Wikipedia - 
Great resource, great idea!!
I am Wade Biery, President of the <http://www.tcwdogs.org>Tri-County Watchdogs, and I have a problem that I need to work on with you.
Here's my problem - in our area of California (the Grapevine /Frazier Park area app. 60 miles north of Los Angeles on the Interstate 5 corridor) we have a problem with a local corporation and their planned development projects.
This in itself is not a Wikipedia problem, but here's what is.....
Over the past 6-8 months, representatives of the <http://www.tejonranch.com/>Tejon Ranch Corporation have been editing the <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tejon_Ranch>Tejon Ranch Wikipedia entry to reflect their point of view on the proposed developments on the ranch, while simultaneously deleting other entries, website links and opinions that do not reflect their corporate philosophy and propaganda that they would like the public to see. (<http://www.telstra.net/cgi-bin/trace?67.121.47.3>Traceroutes run on the editing IP confirm the edits are coming from Tejon Ranch IP's.)
While of course everyone has a right to put their point of view out there, we feel strongly that Tejon Ranch representatives do NOT have the right to <http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Contributions&target=67.121.47.3>delete opposing viewpoints and research links, which could be used by an outside party to do related research and make up their own mind based on the available information, and not simply one side's pure propaganda. We do not believe that is the function nor the intention of the Wikipedia.
We have no problem with opposing viewpoints being represented, in fact we welcome it, but we feel it is an improper and unethical use of the Wikipedia to use it solely as a extension of a Tejon Ranch brochure,  while at the same time deleting other entity's information and links.
I have just today (Tuesday April 25th) returned the entry to a previous version, but this version mainly reflects our point of view, and will not be acceptable to the Tejon Ranch Corporation.
We are willing to share the entry with the Tejon Ranch Corporation, but we cannot continue to allow their unethical editing to continue unchallenged, and we hope that editors at the Wikipedia will intercede and allow other viewpoints and facts to see the light of day in your excellent resource.
Thank you for your attention, please get in touch with any thoughts, questions or information you feel would be useful!
-- 
Wade Biery
Tri-County Watchdogs President
P.O. Box 2458
Frazier Park, CA 93225
http://www.tcwdogs.org
president@tcwdogs.org
:Anybody can edit any article in Wikipedia, providing the standards are followed. BeenAroundAWhile (talk) 05:04, 23 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: April 2006
Talk:Gujarat Freedom of Religion Act

message: This article is in horrible shape. It looks more like a discussion page than an actual, legitimate article. It needs major attention. RobertM525 09:44, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It's a personal essay. I'm unsure if there's anything here worth keeping. — goethean ॐ 16:28, 27 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: This article was at Jainism and Hinduism, but was moved here (see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Jainism and Hinduism). The resulting redirect was deleted. Proto::type 11:36, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Moved

message: What it leaves out is any mention of the consequences associated with being considered a "religious minority" rather than "part of Hinduism" within India. Is this just legislation over labels or are there practical, real world consequences to this designation? That should be mentioned in the article.75.133.90.126 (talk) 02:57, 26 December 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Consequences? 
Talk:Wolf & Cub

message: I have two issues with this last sentence. Fistly, this tour is not, obviously, permanent. Is it really necessary to have it up here given that, in just a few months, it will not be true?
Additionally, the phrase "Aussie Rockers" smells like slang to me. I would rather we didn't use slang at all. Nervousbreakdance 04:54, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Re: "Aussie Rockers"
Talk:Noongar kin systems

message: Drew
Regarding Noongar classifications, a fine map of differences between Noongar groups is in the "Western Australia Atlas of Human 
Endeavour: 1829-1979"
Basically it divides Noongar classiciation systems into four types:
"Perth" type
* Matrilineal moieties and matrilineal clains
* Includes Amangu, Yued, Wadjuk, Pinjareb, Wilmen, Ganeang, and Wardandi.
These groups were split between the (White Cockatoo) Manitjmat and (Australian Raven) Wardungmat moieties with the moietie determined by one's mother.
"Bibelmen" type 
* Patrileanl moieties and patrilineal local descent groups
* Includes Bibelmen and Mineng
These groups used the same Manitjmat and Wardunmat moieties but descent here was determined patrilineally. 
"Nyakinyaki" type
* They had alternate generation levels similar to the Western Desert types, woth patrilineal local descent groups
* Includes Balardong and Nyakinyaki
These groups used (Beeeater) Birranga and (Sacred Kingfisher) Djuak as the "skin" groups.
"Wudjari" Type
* Like the Nyakinyaki, but they had named patrilineal "totemic" descent units.
* Includes Goreng and Wudjari
local descent groups are generally patrilineal in type, in which members are linked by both descent and through mythological ties to a named ancestor.  Local descent groups are always exogamous, and are associated with specific territories held collectively in trust in perpetuity.
totemic descent groups are similar although the mythical significance of the species after whom the descent group is namesd is much stronger, and figures much more significantly in the myths of the people involved.  Members in this case may not be genealogically related, and these groups are almost always exogamous.
* in patrilineal totemic descent clans: territory is always important
* in matrilineal totemic descent groups: territory is less important as women frequently shift from their matrilieal areas.
"moieties" classify everyone in the world into two mutually exclusive categories, which are always exogamous.  Moieties may be either patrilineal or matrilineal (determined by the moiety of the father or the mother).
alternate generation levels classify a person in the same generation level with grandparents and grandchildren.  Parents and children would also share the same generation level.  In alternate generation levels, marriage is endogamous.
"sectional" systems (often called skin) are usually where a person belongs to one of four named groups always from birth (although "skin' may be confirred to outsiders as adults).  These groups are always exogamous.
I have attached these notes and the reference to your section on Noongar classification
Regards
John
John D. Croft 10:21, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments
Talk:Erik Bloodaxe (hacker)

message: Aren't we missing something on this page? Goggans was arrested, as I recall, and gained some notoriety in Masters of Deception. Is anyone going to cover this? Grimhim 10:22, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Hi Netw1z, If you have more information, by all means let me know. With the amount of detail the AFP had on Phoenix I don't think they needed anything from Goggans, but if you know otherwise -- and can point me to the "government record" you speak of, I'd be happy to look into it.Grimhim 22:42, 27 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Mikhail Kuzmin

message: From the article: "was a Russian reincarnation of Andre Gide."
What is that supposed to mean? Dart evader 10:29, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Untitled comment 
Talk:United States congressional delegations from South Carolina

message: Jimbo Wales has requested that we try to improve Joe Wilson (U.S. politician) for the reasons he stated on Talk:Joe Wilson (U.S. politician).  I put in a few hours but can't think of anything else, except a photo or two which we are unlikely to get permissions for over the weekend.  Please see if you can improve the article any further. --James S. 10:46, 28 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Please review [[Joe Wilson (U.S. politician)]] 

message: We have to put in party designations.  Color-blind readers can't necessarily see them.  See Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Formatting issues.  Color can be left in, but we need to have also the (D) and (R) for the parties.—Mark Adler (markles) 21:15, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Colors

message: The chart shows Alva Lumpkin and Roger peace as splitting the 77th Congress, and Burnet Maybank as serving in the 78th through 82nd Congresses. In fact, Burnet Maybank served in part of the 77th Congress as well as the 78th through 82nd. The 77th should be split 3 ways, with the third part (Maybank's) extending down. I'm not sure how to fix the HTML though, since the table code in rather complex. Any help would be appreciated. – Quadell (talk) (bounties) 18:35, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Minor error on page 

message: Paul G. McCorkle is missing. --Appraiser 21:38, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: MIA

message: This page makes it appear that rice replaced Clyburn as the representative from the 6th district, however, it seems that south carolina actually has 7 districts, and clyburn is still in office.  What is the actual composition of the south carolina's current congressional delegation?
24.220.190.225 (talk) 06:24, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  6th/7th districts 
Talk:Rain sensor

message: how can i to make a rain alarm. give me some components of the circuit diagram.
: I added a link to the Hunter Mini-Clik.  This is a common type of rain sensor, now widely duplicated. H2O 23:26, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

message: Hi 160.238.75.114 (talk) 01:18, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rain dectcetor
Talk:Ich töte mich...

message: I've edited the grammer of ...Ich töte mich..., and I have added some chronological additions at the bottom of the page. Also, I have created a redirect page to ...Ich töte mich... when one types in, "Ich tote mich," being that some don't know how to put an umlaut above their letters.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Soporaeternus (talk • contribs) 02:16, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Grammer edit, Article Addition, & Redirection

message: I'm requesting either the image of or the name of the image for the cover of the 1999 re-release of this album.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.151.76.149 (talk) 01:06, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Requesting Image

message: Shouldn't the name of this article be changed to Ich töte mich or something similar? To comply with WP:NAMING the article should not begin with a periods.  I'm happy to do the work if there is consensus.     7   talk | Δ |   00:51, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: This page doesn't seem to be very active anymore. If you cite the paragraph in the WP that says why the current title does not comply with WP:NAMING, I think no one will protest against renaming. Pim Rijkee (talk) 18:00, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Naming 

message: An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect "...Ich tœte mich jedesmal aufs Neue, doch ich bin unsterblich, und ich erstehe wieder auf; in einer Vision der Untergangs...". Please participate in the redirect discussion if you wish to do so.  PamD 10:54, 17 February 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  ""...Ich tœte mich jedesmal aufs Neue, doch ich bin unsterblich, und ich erstehe wieder auf; in einer Vision der Untergangs..."" listed at [[Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion|Redirects for discussion]]