Talk:Esther Williams

message: WikiProject Biography Assessment
The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Yamara 19:48, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
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message: Do we have a WP:Citeation for this?  Yeah yeah, I know "it's obvious", what with her being in films in her swimsuit and all.  But someone thought Connie Chung was obvious, too.  So, if we have a reference per Wikipedia:Reliable source that names her as a sex symbol, we've satisfied WP:V. - brenneman(t)(c) 21:53, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cat:Sex symbols 

message: The current revision says: "She currently resides in Beverly Hills with actor husband Edward Bell, whom she married on October 24, 1994." (Personal Life) The name "Edward Bell" wikilinks to an article which indicates Mr. Bell died in 1879. Now either Ms. Williams has rather off beat romantic predilections, or the link is wrong. Itayb 05:32, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Williams' current husband has been dead for more than a century 

message: A citation or two would help.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.127.59.221 (talk) 01:29, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  No evidence to back up Personal section 

message: A request was made for this article to be reassessed. I think it is very close to B-class and just needs a few more fixes:
*The lead should be a max of four paragraphs. Either trim the lead or combine the smaller paragraphs together. See WP:LEAD for guidelines.
*There's a few spacing issues with some of the inline citations. To stay consistent, make sure they directly follow the punctuation.
*Throughout the article are a few single-sentence paragraphs. Either expand on these or incorporate them into another paragraph to improve the article's flow.
*In the filmography table, the year in film doesn't need to be linked, and there are also some redundant links for the co-stars.
*A few of the citations have only the title. Go through and make sure they include all available details such as author, date, work, accessdate, etc.
Good job so far and it's great to see so many free images available for her (thank goodness for public domain trailer images). Once these minor issues are resolved, feel free to upgrade to B-class. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 01:24, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Woohoo! Thank you so much! Wool Mintons (talk) 02:49, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: WP:FILMBIO assessment

message: The article reads too much as a story and not encyclopedic. It needs more hard dates in many places.  
"She then married former lover, Argentine actor/director, Fernando Lamas on December 31, 1969. For 22 years, she lived in total submission to him, where she had to stop being "Esther Williams" and could not have her children live with her. In return, he would be faithful.[46][81] They were married until his death from pancreatic cancer on October 8, 1982.[82]"
If this is true, and, as the NYTimes article in fn 46 says, Lamas "controlled her every move and made her wait on him hand and foot" then the "22 years" period of total submission began in 1982-22=1960, which 1960 date is 9 years before their marriage. At the very least, the mention of marriage needs to follow the reference that she had been "totally submissive" for 9 years by then.  Otherwise, the 1960s are a total blank in this article. Is this is what is intended by the reference to "former lover"? If so, then "former" is not the right word. If not, then the "22 year" reference is not correct. And daughter Susan was 6 years old in 1960; did she abandon her infants? 
One problem is that Ms. Williams, like most actresses, has always been "highly selective" in her facts when giving interviews and writing - so WP must be very clear.
75.83.32.158 (talk) 20:21, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Timelines? 

message: One - we've received an email message via OTRS thanking us for this wonderful article. I replied with 'our' thanks, but the credit goes to all of you who have worked on it. Second, this needs to go into GA review ASAP! §FreeRangeFrogcroak 21:45, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: I am sure you can say from whom? μηδείς (talk) 21:56, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: No, it was just a reader. Via email possibly because the feedback tool has been glitchy the last couple of days, but the message was very effusive and warm. §FreeRangeFrogcroak 20:24, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
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