Talk:War of the First Coalition

message: "This is like a United Nations peacekeeping effort to stop a civil war." what the hell???
: yeah, this look a lot to me like vandalism ;-) I removed it ...--Galahaad 15:40, 30 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Old talk page post

message: We say 1792, but e also say afer the execution of Louis XVI (1793). Someone care to sort this out? - Jmabel | Talk 00:37, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The problem is that the war started in 1792 when France declared war, but the coalition did not form until 1793.  By consistancy with the other 'war of the Xth coalition' pages, we have a bit of a problem either saying that the war began before the coalition formed, or that there were a bunch of battle in the same campaigns but not part of the same war.  Perhaps we need to rename the page to be the same as the other coalition pages?  -Gomm 02:53, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Starting date 

message: This article was automatically  assessed because at least one article was rated and this bot brought all the other ratings up to at least that level. BetacommandBot 03:17, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject class rating

message: According to the article, Dumouriez presented "a long list of grievances".  I'd like to know what those grievances are.  According to my 1993 Collier's Encyclopedia article on the French Revolution, 
The dominant ministers, Comte Louis de Narbonne (an illegitimate son of Louis XV), and after him Charles Dumouriez (formerly a diplomat under Louis XV), held to anti-Austrian policies and favored war as a means of checking revolution and restoring order and the monarchy by means of the army.  Their diplomacy was as feeble and unsuccessful as their policy was futile -- for war was more likely to bring the extremists to power than to save the crown.
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Collier's puts much of the blame on Jacques Pierre Brissot.
Initially, however, [the Girondins] were known as the "Brissotins", since they adopted the war policy advocated by their leader in the Legislative Assembly, J. P. Brissot.  In the spring of 1792 several Girondins in the Legislative Assembly were successful in obtaining ministerial positions in place of the more moderate Feuillant ministers -- Charles Dumouriez as foreign minister, Étienne Clavière as finance minister, and J.M. Roland as minister of the interior.  It was this administration which, by declaring war on Austria on Apr. 20, 1792, helped to produce the national emergency that resulted in the overthrow of the French monarchy the following August.
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[ Brissot ] favored the declaration of war against Austria and Prussia in 1792 as a means of securing the downfall of the monarchy.
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However, there seems to be a contradiction here.  The first quote indicates that war was seen -- by Dumouriez -- as a way of checking revolution and preserving the monarchy.  The second quote indicates that war was seen -- by Brissot and the Girondins -- as a way of forcing the overthrow of the monarchy.   Is this a case of a right-left alliance, both parties seeking war, but for exactly opposite reasons?
This view is supported by Paul Halsall, editor of the 'Internet History Sourcebooks Project':
In retaliation to Dec. of Pillnitz the French Deputies (in Assembly) declare war on Austria - 20th Apr 1792 
* There was pressure from democratic exiles from other countries 
* Radicals thought a successful War would bring them support. 
* Louis XVI supported the war - he hoped a loss would restore his position - as did many monarchist members of the Leg Assembly. 
* (Robespierre opposed the war as he saw danger of defeat)
-- Halsall, Paul, "Class 11 : The Liberal Revolution", Fordham Rose Hill/ HSRU 1000, Jan 1998
NonZionist (talk) 00:49, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why did France make war? 

message: On the map of the war situation in 1796, someone added both the location of Mainz and "Neutral Serbian observers" with a large circle and in an obnoxious colour. I don't think these observers are of a great enough importance to the war to add them to the map, and would suggest that the old version of the map without these editions be used.
Bahamut Star (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 20:05, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for pointing it out. On further inspection of the map, the choice of markings and accompanying text does seem strange in places, and since the commons description only links to a dead file as source, it does not seem to be a reliable depiction for Wikipeda. I have been bold and removed the map. --Saddhiyama (talk) 20:17, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I did one better and reverted to the original untampered version on Commons. I have reinserted the image in the article on account of this. --Saddhiyama (talk) 20:21, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Neutral Serbian Observers?

message: French Revolutionary Wars has been nominated by WP:TAFI. All contributions improving this article welcome! Cheers, walk victor falk talk 04:02, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: This Week's Article for Improvement: [[French Revolutionary Wars]]

message: I never saw anything related about the turks in the first coalition. I think someone confused this with the second coalition. Ruddah (talk) 01:03, 29 May 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Ottoman Empire as a belligerent

message: I'd suggest to alter this sentence: 
... an invasion of Spain across the Pyrenees took San Sebastián...
Because you don't cross the Pyrenees or any mountains at all (the lower Basque Mountains are South of San Sebastian), only the Bidasoa river marks the border in that area. Also San Sebastian is barely a few kilometers away from the border, so talking of "invasion of Spain" sounds a bit exaggerated, rather an "expedition" maybe?
A possible revision could read:
... an expedition against Spain captured San Sebastián... 
--85.84.224.120 (talk) 08:43, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Great catch! I made the change for you, although I dropped San Sebastián because there were actually two prongs of attack. Thank you, SteveStrummer (talk) 23:14, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  No Pyrenees to reach San Sebastian from France 

message: The descriptions of those wars between France and other powers seem - at first glance - quite all right. But I can't find any reference or indication in the article of those other countries/forces being allied. We don't want to have misleading titles on our articles, do we? So: a correct title for the article would seem to me, for example: 'French Revolutionary Wars|French Revolutionary Wars (1792–1797)'. --Corriebertus (talk) 12:22, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: The title "War of the First Coalition" (and Second Coalition, etc.) is entirely conventional. It's standard terminology in all histories of the Revolution, while "French Revolutionary Wars" is a broad, collective title. You may not find the word allied used in abundance in source materials, but that's simply because the unity of anti-French forces was fragile at best – particularly in the First Coalition.  SteveStrummer (talk) 20:25, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Sorry Steve: I think, (central) statements in Wikipedia need to be sourced. It's not enough that SteveStrummer believes the countries fighting France in 1792-1797 were allied, we need sources saying so. Presently the article contains not even one statement(!) (with or without source) saying so. Whether titles like "War of the First Coalition" are conventional - they may or may not be - is not the point; the point is: were those countries allied? 'Convention' is: what a lot of people are used to do (or say). First of all, 'conventions' are always hard to prove or disprove. Secondly: its not our job to present any--supposed--convention uncritically as truth. In every field of human activity--including the science of history--'conventions' can sometimes live for quite a while and then for whatever reason become obsolete. It is acceptable to write in Wikipedia that this or that convention (seems to) exist, but basically we try to  present sourced facts, truths. --Corriebertus (talk) 09:39, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title change or sourcing/corroboration needed 

message: "After seizing the Low Countries in a surprise winter attack"
This statement is erroneous since, as the 'Low Countries' link makes clear, that term indicates a region comprising  the modern states of the Netherlands, Belgium & Luxembourg.
In addition,'seizing' is probably not the correct word as there was at least the fiction of fraternal assistance in setting up a republic.
This sentence would better amended to:  "After occupying the Netherlands.... " or "After occupying the United Provinces.... " 
JF42 (talk) 07:11, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  "the Low Countries"