Talk:Anti-LGBT rhetoric

message: This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 12 January 2022 and 22 April 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jiayimeng.
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Anti-LGBT rhetoric
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The LGBT group are constantly under attacked by the social prejudice, their experiences sometimes are beyond others comprehensions. The LGBT group was never fully supported or accepted by the society, but this article may acknowledge others to consider things differently, and recognize that understanding others from their perspectives could make a difference on their life.
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This article has a good lead section on briefly explaining what the topic is focused on, but it is also slightly lacking details on providing backgrounds of the anti-LGBT group. Details could help guiding the readers' interests. The article also appears lending too many quotations in each section, readers may have difficulty reading the content. The word choice and paraphrasing of some sections are not consisted enough, which could transmit false information, or lead to false understandings. Articles that are being published should be cautious with the wording and tone as Wikipedia states to have a neutral point of view of all.
Overall, besides what has been discussed above, the article has given liberal quantity of details, and well organized.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jiayimeng (talk • contribs) 17:37, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

message: The content in "Anti-gay themes" should probably be separated. I have suggested Anti-LGBT trope as analogous to Antisemitic trope, but I don't know if this is the best article title. But the current article seems to have too much of a detailed list on specific anti-gay tropes/themes/rhetoric, rather than a broad overview of the topic, and I think would benefit from a split. I'll inform WP:LGBT of the proposal for further eyes on this article. GnocchiFan (talk) 15:38, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't like "trope" singular at all. These are multiple themes/tropes here. (I think the same mistake has been made with Antisemitic trope.) Splitting out that whole section would leave the article with little coverage of specific anti-gay rhetoric and would make the coverage of anti-trans rhetoric look disproportionate, which is isn't at all. For that reason I'm not keen on a split. It is not like the article is huge at the moment. What the article could do with is more coverage of anti-bi/pan rhetoric and possibly also sections on the hate that asexual and aromantic people get, which is truly a bizarre phenomenon. Maybe also the anti-gay stuff should do more to cover specific rhetoric aimed at lesbians and at gay men. We don't want to lose the common threads here but the rhetoric is adapted for each target group and that needs to be covered, preferably all in one place. DanielRigal (talk) 18:11, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

text: I am leaning agree with split, but it should be split into "Anti-gay rhetoric" or "Anti-gay arguments" or something similar. Zenomonoz (talk) 03:45, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Split proposal 

message: This section just repeats what has already been said and is not expanded in a way that adds any usefulness to the article. 
Its contents also doesn't seem to justify the use of the word censorship in the heading title. PitterPatter533 (talk) 00:42, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Legality and censorship section