Talk:Michigan Defense Force

message: Article reassessed and graded as start class. --dashiellx (talk) 01:40, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Tag & Assess 2008 

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thread_title:  External links modified (January 2018) 

message: Hello Der Puppenspieler hat gesprochen, twice you have replaced the majority of this article without substantial change.  This is edit warring, and is unproductive.  Continue this and steps will be taken to limit your WP:SPA account's ability to edit. If you want to propose big changes to the article, please do so on this page. Rhadow (talk) 15:47, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you very much for your comments.  An edit war is not my intent, only showing accurate information about this organization.  What options would your recommend if others continue to revert my changes or post inaccurate information?  Der Puppenspieler hat gesprochen (talk) 16:27, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: If others make edits contrary to truth, first mark with , then start a discussion here. When you have more experience, you may edit WP:BOLDLY, including deletion of not-so-useful material. As to reversion of changes, the other editor had a reason.  Talk about it. An edit war is the WP version of "Did so ... Did not ..Did so."  Rhadow (talk) 16:46, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Truth in all things is relative.  Here it means what you can verify with reliable secondary sources.  Please do not use terms like "untrue", "false", "lies", etc.  Instead, provide sources verifying the truth of your version. John from Idegon (talk) 18:46, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit warring 

message: Hello Der Puppenspieler hat gesprochen, it is the policy of Wikipedia to rely on reliable, independent sources.  Part of that requirement is that most of the sources are secondary or tertiary sources.  Pointing to the subject's website or Michigan statute doesn't count. Policy: Wikipedia articles usually rely on material from reliable secondary sources. Articles may make an analytic, evaluative, interpretive, or synthetic claim only if that has been published by a reliable secondary source.  The subject is free to format its website as it sees fit.  The current construction of the article is not encyclopedic. There is no press to support the majority of the text. It sounds like advertising for the organization. Rhadow (talk) 16:02, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Your advice is most appreciated.  There is not much third party material on this organization.  Would newspaper articles and references from the occasional book be acceptable?  Der Puppenspieler hat gesprochen (talk) 16:30, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: The purpose of an encyclopedia article is not to disseminate information about the subject of the article. It is, instead, to summarize what has been written about the subject in reliable secondary sources. John from Idegon (talk) 16:37, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: It appears the last external link could possibly be used as a source for something.  John from Idegon (talk) 18:44, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: "There is not much third party material on this organization." If that is the case, then the subject is not WP:NOTABLE and doesn't need an article. Rhadow (talk) 20:23, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Primary sources

message: The page currently states:
The MIVDF is one of the three components of the military establishment of Michigan; the Army National Guard, the Air National Guard, and the Michigan Volunteer Defense Force.[1]. The MIVDF is equal in legal status, per Michigan law, to the Army and Air National Guard.
This is only true when activated by the Governor through the TAG.
To make the statement more correct, it should be revised to "Upon activation by the Governor, the MIVDF is equal in legal status..." but I cannot comment on if the "equal in legal status" is correct. Army and National Guard are federalized, reporting to the President through the Department of Defense.  MIVDF will only ever report to the Governor of the State. 
I propose to strike the sentence "The MIVDF is equal in legal status..." in its entirety.
Full disclosure - I am the Brigade Staff Operations and Training Officer for the organization (unpaid volunteer.)
Rmesic (talk) 00:44, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: Done. Et0048 (talk) 22:07, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proposed correction