Talk:Observational comedy

message: This article would be enhanced by placing "observational comedy" alongside other kinds of comedy, particularly other kinds of stand-up comedy. Really, are there any other kinds? Ccoll 01:49, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Agree; accordingly I've added a prod. Dlabtot (talk) 23:36, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Category

message: towards the U.S. (a shock, I know) in this article. - Dudesleeper 12:55, 20 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slight bias... 

message: The "quotes" section completely escapes me. The quotes are not examples of observational comedy, nor are they stated to be such. They should be removed but I'm afraid if I erase them somebody will get mad and undo it and yell at me. But seriously, not encyclopedic at all. --Springreturning (talk) 03:12, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Quotes

message: i noticed that this article only gives a list of the comidians performing this type of shows and gives very little information about the art itself. i propose narrowing the examples and start giving more information about its history, present, etc.--camr nag 23:09, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  wikify template 

message: For what the article claims is the most common sort of comedy used by stand-up comedians, it's a terribly short article. Surely there's much more to say. Where to start? What's lacking? What's the most essential missing material? Deluno (talk) 17:43, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  What's lacking here? 

message: Totally dreadful. That's the best way I can describe this article (which is about comedy, I might add). I can't even break each section down because all of them have the same problems throughout, namely:
- Too many direct quotes. A shocking amount of text in this article is cribbed directly from an outside source with little to input or explanation given by an editor. This intro and overview sections are notable offenders for this.
- Poor paraphrasing and overall stilted language. A large portion of the history section is comprised of a run-on paraphrased sentence, and a confusing one at that. This section is also written heavily in the passive voice, and at times it is nearly impossible to understand what is going on. The information itself is valid but it simply must be reformatted. 
- Vagueness. With all the passive voice, confusing sentences, and massive unsourced lists of "notable" comedians, this article obfuscates observational comedy more than it explains it. It needs serious edits on all fronts.  OzyXCV (talk) 08:29, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rewrite template discussion 

message: Wow what a sentence this is!
"One of them, who became outstandingly successful in America and mixed it like Twain's personal gab of common man's as perspective, with his own personal trademark as embodyment of America's quintessential folky hero as a plainsman, by noticing and pointing to Public as his accomplice in the observations, using their old country folk common sense as deadpan or jolly neutral denominator for the comic revelation punch unfolding which departed from the hitherto satirical, was Will Rogers."
I will have a go at rewriting it but I thought it was important to keep it here for posterity!Graemec2 (talk) 11:55, 5 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: LOL

message: The history section needs to be fixed.
Schoolbus777 (talk) 01:14, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: , what part of it needs to be fixed?LakesideMinersMy Talk Page  02:24, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  History