Talk:Albert Carnesale

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message: I have a conflict of interest, but would a filmed interview with Albert Carnesale from 1987 be useful here as an external link? Focus of conversation is nuclear weapons policy. Transcript is available. http://openvault.wgbh.org/catalog/V_5D757C411E9B4E119342873BFE553765 and http://openvault.wgbh.org/catalog/V_B302D178332C449A911D6BA5DB93F621 Mccallucc (talk) 21:30, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, definitely. The interview is certainly of interest to viewers and expounds in depth on his views, but we cannot upload the video itself to Wikipedia due to copyright restrictions. Under those conditions, an external link to the resource is encouraged by policy. Thanks, Altamel (talk) 04:00, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  OK to add external link? 

message: COI disclosure: I am requesting several changes that I cannot make because I have a professional affiliation with the subject. 
Please replace outdated last sentence of intro section -- "Through March 2011, Carnesale taught undergraduate and graduate courses at UCLA on topics relating to U.S. national security with Professor Amy Zegart." -- with this: "His research and teaching focus on U.S. national security and on public policy issues having substantial technological dimensions." Source: http://luskin.ucla.edu/sites/default/files/download-pdfs/Albert%20Carnesale%20Curriculum%20Vitae.pdf
Please add bolded portion to fourth sentence of first section: "He served as a member of the NC State faculty from 1962 to 1969 and from 1972 to 1974, and has also worked as a senior engineer at Martin Marietta." (Source: http://luskin.ucla.edu/sites/default/files/download-pdfs/Albert%20Carnesale%20Curriculum%20Vitae.pdf.)
Please add new third section in contents box: "3. Public service" or "3. Honors/affiliations/awards" or "3. Commissions"
Please add content for new third section: "As a member of the National Academy of Engineering, Carnesale chaired National Academies studies on Conventional Prompt Global Strike Capability (2007 - 2009), Nuclear Forensics (2008 - 2010), America’s Climate Choices (2008 - 2011), and NASA’s Strategic Direction (2012 - 2013). He served as Presidential Obama’s Blue Ribbon Commission on America’s Nuclear Future (2010 - 2012), and chaired the Secretary of Energy Advisory Board’s Task Force on Nuclear Nonproliferation (2013 - 2015)." Sources: http://www.nap.edu/read/12061/chapter/1; http://www.nap.edu/read/12966/chapter/1; http://www.nap.edu/read/12781/chapter/1; http://www.nap.edu/read/18248/chapter/1; http://www.energy.gov/ne/downloads/blue-ribbon-commission-americas-nuclear-future-report-secretary-energy; http://www.energy.gov/seab/downloads/report-task-force-nuclear-nonproliferation-0
Please add new references:
Albert Carnesale's Curriculum Vitae
National Research Council Committee on Conventional Prompt Global Strike Capability, 2009
National Research Council Committee on Sustaining and Improving the Nation’s Nuclear Forensics Capabilities, 2010
National Research Council Committee on America’s Climate Choices, 2011
National Research Council Committee on NASA’s Strategic Direction, 2013
U.S. Secretary of Energy’s Blue Ribbon Commission on America's Nuclear Future, 2012
U.S. Department of Energy, Secretary of Energy Advisory Board (SEAB), Report of the Task Force on Nuclear Nonproliferation, 2015
SunkenCondos (talk) 18:52, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: I have reviewed the edit request, and have decided to decline it - the first 2 proposed changes no longer fit into the updated article, and can't be implemented. Adding the last part with the awards will just add to the confusion of the person who will be fixing the references and making inline citations in the article, which should be avoided, else the article might get "skipped over". Regards, VB00 (talk) 06:00, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
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message: Potential COI/UPE. The editing pattern of  is clearly single purpose account, a common practice of account compartmentalization in public relations and promotional editing industry. Graywalls (talk) 06:21, 10 July 2023 (UTC)
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