Talk:Diary of a Camper

message: I searched google for "Diary of a Camper" and turned up some potentially useful links. I picked out the ones that were from more professional sources (IE, not forums, etc.). I haven't really read through them yet (I'll probably do that later), but here they are for anyone else who wants to contribute. Some of them, like the first one, only really make passing mention of the film.
*Boston Globe - Inspired animation tools from an uninspired sitcom
*Dallas Observer - Lights, Camera, Play!
*IGN - Machinima 101
*ars technica - Machinima hits the mainstream media
*O'Reilly - Machinima: Filmmaking's Destiny
*BusinessWeek - Video Games Go to the Movies
*Wired News - Machinima: Games Act Like Films
--Drat (Talk) 08:31, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Just noting for posterity: Most of these don't mention Diary of a Camper in any more detail than do the sources that I ended up using in the article (Kelland, Lowood). Lowood is an excellent source for the origins of machinima. — TKD::Talk 14:12, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Resources

message: seems to imply that United Ranger Films wasn't yet a separate entity when Diary was released. — TKD::Talk 04:26, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Good point. Although URF OFFICIALLY broke away from the Rangers clan a good while after their early movies, the people involved were part of the Rangers, and were the same as those who would later form URF. In the .zip for the Ranger Gone Bad 3 preview, the main man behind the Ranger films explains the whole story, which is a vital reference. I think I'll host it on my site and link to it, but machinima.com has the .zip here: http://www.machinima.com/films.php?id=102 It's tricky to decide what to do in this situation though, as I believe most of the early films were released under the banner of United Ranger Films, even if they were not separate. I suggest labelling them all as URF movies, but explaining on the URF page - as I've tried to - that URF was part of the Rangers clan when they were made. Sound good? --Psyklax 08:58, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think that's reasonable, and, given the sequence of events as stated in the docs accompanying RGB3, URF would be unambiguous and complete. Thanks. — TKD::Talk 09:15, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: This film, Diary, also begins with 'United Ranger Films presents...', as I watched it yesterday, so that clears up the idea that URF always existed in some form or another, whether as part of the Rangers clan or not. --Psyklax 18:18, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  URF or the Rangers? 

message: I am currently translating this excellent article to Spanish. I am not able to figure out what Real name established in Salen (note 15) means. ¿What is Salen? Thanks (and congratulations, this is good stuff). Chabacano 05:20, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Ah, that means that the real name (as opposed to the online pseudonym, which is more common) of the person mentioned in the text is established in the reference material by Salen (Katie Salen, that is), listed in the full "References" section below. It's footnoting shorthand; sorry for the confusion. Thanks for the translation work and the compliments. — TKD::Talk 10:35, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: By the way, I just took a look at the article in Spanish. Not sure what the conventions are there, but don't forget to translate the full "References" section over; that's what all of the notes refer to for full citation info. — TKD::Talk 10:45, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request for help 

message: This article states that DoaC was released on Oct 26, 1996, approximately 1 month after the "full commercial release of Quake".  However, Quake's article states that the game was released on June 22, 1996, over 4 months before the release of DoaC... I don't know what's right, but it sure doesn't look like that is.Hezekiah957 05:49, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for bringing up the discrepancy. I double-checked my sources; Lowood did indeed say both "barely a month after the commercial release of the game" and "October 1996". Given that the October 26, 1996 date has been corroborated by other soutrces, and that I can't determine which release Lowood was in fact referring to, I've decided to remove that clause forom the article ;it wasn't that important of a matter to begin with. Quake was indeed released in stages — the shareware release preceded the first full version — but, unless Lowood is referring to something even later, I, upon review, don't see the dates matching up either. Thanks again for pointing this out. — TKD::Talk 06:07, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Release descrepancy 

message: 14-Oct-2008: I have added subheaders above as "Topics from 2006" (etc.) to emphasize the dates of topics in the talk-page. Older topics might still apply, but using the year headers helps to focus on more current issues as well.  -Wikid77 (talk) 12:52, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I removed them. Most talk pages don't have them, and people can read timestamps, usually. :) — TKD::Talk 08:25, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

text: Since the turnover of discussion here is so low, I've marked non-current items  so that it's easier to tell whether anything is outstanding. — TKD::Talk 14:12, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Retrofit topic year headers

message: 14-Oct-2008: The article is a featured article, so I figured I should discuss having changed the references (which is not a simple text change).  I corrected the URL for source "Playing the movies" (which had pointed to the same URL as "Machinima jukebox" also at ACMI). I then added the date to source "Machinima jukebox" as "2006-04-28" as stated within the webpage's HTML ("View Source" in MSIE) from the meta-tag named "DC.Date.modified" (near line 22) in the HTML:
* "Machinima jukebox" - http://www.acmi.net.au/6b278ca85aab4253bb9706d441d01522.htm
Note that many webpages have internal modification dates (in meta-tags), even though those webpages might not display a date, in a manner similar to photo meta-data which records the date/time stamp "behind" the photographic images. Inside the webpages, a meta-tag date is typically auto-generated by some webpage editor-tool, although I have hand-edited webpage dates when developing my own websites. In general, the webpage meta-tags are a good source of such information. -Wikid77 (talk) 12:52, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: A belated thank-you. — TKD::Talk 14:12, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Revised references

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Hey, as part of the Unreviewed featured article sweeps, I've taken another look at this article in checking it meets modern FA criteria. Notes as follows:
*The lead outright states DOAC is the first machinima film, while the actual prose a) doesn't cite all the same sources as the lead, and b) couches that claim in much less bold terms. This should be harmonized.
*Likewise the lead contextualizes that the "plot" all happens within a multiplayer match, but that's not mentioned in the plot section below. (Also, the lead says the film "centers" on the camper, but the plot section gives the impression he's the antagonist and the focus is on the Rangers.
*The point of recording gameplay and playing it back natively is the small file size, which was crucial in the dial-up era. It's an odd omission this explanation for the game-recording features is not included.
*There's also more information about the actual nuts-and-bolts of creating the video in the third paragraph should be earlier. The German dissertation exploring the possibilities of the Quake demo format, for instance, feels like it should be included as an introduction for readers to the context, and then the bits about creating the video should come before the quotes that feel more like reception. 
*I've [ mades some tweaks] to the prose to make what I thought were improvements.
*Additional prose thoughts:
**—is there a reason the "confirmation" line is here? Can't we just be punchier and say "kills them both." and be done?
***Silly since the deaths are shown on-screen, I agree. Removed MSG17 (talk) 18:13, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[WP:URFA/2020]] notes