Talk:Emery Molyneux

message: Help would be much appreciated in translating the following book titles, passages and terms appearing in the article that are not in English:
===Dutch===
*"Tractaet Ofte Hendelinge van het gebruijck der Hemelscher ende Aertscher Globe. Gheaccommodeert naer die Bollen, die eerst ghesneden zijn in Enghelandt door Io. Hondium, Anno 1693 [sic: 1593] ende nu gants door den selven vernieut, met alle de nieuwe ontdeckinghen van Landen, tot den daghe van heden geschiet, ende daerenboven van voorgaende fauten verbetert. In't Latijn beschreven, door Robertum Hues, Mathematicum, nu in Nederduijtsch overgheset, ende met diveersche nieuwe verclaringhe ende figueren vermeerdert en verciert. Door I. Hondium".
*"Tractaet ofte handelinge van het gebruyck der hemelscher ende aertscher globe. ... Michiel Colijn, boeck-vercooper, woonende op't water, in't Huys-boeck, by de Oude Brugghe".
:* Treatise or instructions for the use of the globe of the sky and the earth globe.  Tailored for the globes which were first made in England by J. Hondius, in the year 1693, and have now been complete revised by him, with all new discoveries of countries up to the present day, and furthermore with previous errors corrected.  Described in Latin by Robert Hues, mathematician, and now translated into Dutch, and enhanced and ornamented with several new explanations and figures, by J. Hondius.
:* Treatise or instructions for the use of the globe of the sky and the earth globe. ... Michiel Colijn, book seller, who lives at the water's edge, in Huys-boeck, near the old bridge.
: Paul Koning (talk) 15:41, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: In English: "A Treatise on Globes and their use, translated by Haurion" (and the Publisher's name and address). Dickie (talk) 12:55, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: "First volume of navigation and travels which include the description of Africa: and of the Prete Ianni's country, with several travels, from Red Sea to Kozhikode and finally to Maluku Islands... and the navigation around the World." SalomonCeb (talk) 08:53, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The old name Calicut would be a more appropriate translation than Kozhikode, and "the Moluccas" would be the normal English name for what are now called the Maluku Islands - arguably the equivalent English traveller would have called them the Spice Islands for added exoticism, although that's an ambiguous name (see the article). Oh, and Prete would get translated, probably as "Father". FlagSteward (talk) 23:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, I was wondering whether to use the old names. I think I will do so as it looks more authentic. Thanks for the suggestions and additional information about "Prete". Don't suppose you have any idea what "Father Ianni's country" is? — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 01:31, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Scrub that about Father - a bit more research reveals that it is the Italian equivalent of Prester John, a legendary figure who supposedly ruled a Christian kingdom somewhere in the Middle East, which came to be identified with Ethiopia. So leave it as "the lands of Prester John" or some such. FlagSteward (talk) 23:09, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Now that's intriguing. Will update the article. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 23:37, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Hi, thanks very much for your help with translating the French and Italian book titles. By the way, I forgot to ask this: how would you translate "Gli Heredi di Lucantonio Giunti Venetia"? This is the imprint (publication) information of the Italian book. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 14:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It should be: "The Heirs of Lucantonio Giunti (in) Veneto", (Lucantonio Giunti was a publisher in Venice in the XVIth Century). SalomonCeb (talk) 15:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)

text: This contains a few spelling mistakes: odnodum might be admodum, maturi probably is maiori and latitud is an abbreviation for latitudine, but probably more needs to be checked, because as it stands it would translate as Thomas Cavendish presented (?) this land to our eyes first on 18 December 1587, at 47 degrees lat., whose or rather healthy (?) inhabitants are mostly tall giants and of huge size--194.126.21.5 (talk) 18:40, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. Will check the spelling in the source. — Cheers, <span
style="color:#ce2029">Jack</span>Lee –talk–</span> 19:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Have checked the source. You are right, odnodum should be admodum, but maturi is correct. Would appreciate your help in adjusting the English translation. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 00:47, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Are there other mistakes? "Haec terra" seems like it should be "hanc terram". Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: sumptibus means at the expense of (= published by); descripsit means described or wrote--84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: "Theater of the globe, a work now collected anew by the same author and corrected in many places, and enlarged with many new tables and commentaries." Assuming that "mustisque" is "multisque" and "novis" refers to the tables and commentaries (otherwise, with the comma it looks like the less elegant "new things"). I'm not sure what "theatrum" means in this case but it's probably a style of book. Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: *Treatise on globes and their use: adapted to those which have been published in London in the year 1593, by publisher G. Sanderson, a resident of London, written by Robert Hues" Paul Koning (talk) 20:12, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: *Thanks very much. Forgot to ask: what does "In ædibus" mean? — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 23:06, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It literally means in the house (of) = published by.--84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use, written by Robert Hues, second enlarged and corrected edition --84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks very much! I've updated the article. If you are able to help translate the other Latin phrases and book titles, that would be great. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 17:33, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use. First written and published by Robert Hues, Englishman, and in the first and second editions drawn by Jude Hond (?), and now enlarged by elegant pictures and drawings, and again revised and fittingly illustrated by mani observations, and throughout enlarged by the work and effort of John Isaac Pontanus ... Prints by H. Hond (the Latin should read coelestis and terrestris and ac). --194.126.21.5 (talk) 18:40, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks very much – I've updated the article. It would be great if you could also help with the remaining untranslated book titles and phrases above and below. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 19:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Same as above, published in Frankfurt-am-Main, with a bunch of names. By the Wechelians, at the printing house of Daniel and David Aubrios and Clement Schleich, I guess. Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: "Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use, collected anew and suitably illustrated with many observations, and enlarged throughout, by the effort and devotion of John Isaac Pontanus...a brief account of the whole globe is added by Peter Bertius...printed by W.H., at the expense of Edward Forrest." Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: In this context, it seems like descubrio takes both the meanings of "discovered" and "claimed". You might want to split it into a few sentences since it sounds a bit awkward. (Are you sure it says aurque and not aunque? Aunque would make sense in context...) Personally, I'd translate it like: "Pedro Sarmiento de Gamboa discovered these islands and claimed them for the crown of Castile and Leon. From 1568 onward, the islands were named the Islas de Jesus, though they are more commonly known as the Solomon Islands." Your translation, though, is sound. It is accurate, just maybe a bit confusing. Cheers --Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû 07:46, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Translation of non-English terms 

message: *"Tractaet Ofte Hendelinge van het gebruijck der Hemelscher ende Aertscher Globe. Gheaccommodeert naer die Bollen, die eerst ghesneden zijn in Enghelandt door Io. Hondium, Anno 1693 [sic: 1593] ende nu gants door den selven vernieut, met alle de nieuwe ontdeckinghen van Landen, tot den daghe van heden geschiet, ende daerenboven van voorgaende fauten verbetert. In't Latijn beschreven, door Robertum Hues, Mathematicum, nu in Nederduijtsch overgheset, ende met diveersche nieuwe verclaringhe ende figueren vermeerdert en verciert. Door I. Hondium".
*"Tractaet ofte handelinge van het gebruyck der hemelscher ende aertscher globe. ... Michiel Colijn, boeck-vercooper, woonende op't water, in't Huys-boeck, by de Oude Brugghe".
:* Treatise or instructions for the use of the globe of the sky and the earth globe.  Tailored for the globes which were first made in England by J. Hondius, in the year 1693, and have now been complete revised by him, with all new discoveries of countries up to the present day, and furthermore with previous errors corrected.  Described in Latin by Robert Hues, mathematician, and now translated into Dutch, and enhanced and ornamented with several new explanations and figures, by J. Hondius.
:* Treatise or instructions for the use of the globe of the sky and the earth globe. ... Michiel Colijn, book seller, who lives at the water's edge, in Huys-boeck, near the old bridge.
: Paul Koning (talk) 15:41, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Dutch

message: *"Traicté des globes, et de leur usage, traduit per Haurion. ... Chez Abraham Pacard, ruë sainct Iacques, au sacrifice d'Abraham".
**In English: "Globes' treatise and their use" you may add the . SalomonCeb (talk) 08:43, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: In English: "A Treatise on Globes and their use, translated by Haurion" (and the Publisher's name and address). Dickie (talk) 12:55, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: French

message: *"Primo Volume delle Navigationi et Viaggi nel qual si contiene la descrittione dell'Africa: e del Paese del Prete Ianni, con varii viaggi, dal Mar Rosso à Calicut, et infin all'Isole Molucche... et la Navigatione attorno il Mondo".
::"First volume of navigation and travels which include the description of Africa: and of the Prete Ianni's country, with several travels, from Red Sea to Kozhikode and finally to Maluku Islands... and the navigation around the World." SalomonCeb (talk) 08:53, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: The old name Calicut would be a more appropriate translation than Kozhikode, and "the Moluccas" would be the normal English name for what are now called the Maluku Islands - arguably the equivalent English traveller would have called them the Spice Islands for added exoticism, although that's an ambiguous name (see the article). Oh, and Prete would get translated, probably as "Father". FlagSteward (talk) 23:44, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, I was wondering whether to use the old names. I think I will do so as it looks more authentic. Thanks for the suggestions and additional information about "Prete". Don't suppose you have any idea what "Father Ianni's country" is? — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 01:31, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Scrub that about Father - a bit more research reveals that it is the Italian equivalent of Prester John, a legendary figure who supposedly ruled a Christian kingdom somewhere in the Middle East, which came to be identified with Ethiopia. So leave it as "the lands of Prester John" or some such. FlagSteward (talk) 23:09, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Now that's intriguing. Will update the article. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 23:37, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Hi, thanks very much for your help with translating the French and Italian book titles. By the way, I forgot to ask this: how would you translate "Gli Heredi di Lucantonio Giunti Venetia"? This is the imprint (publication) information of the Italian book. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 14:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It should be: "The Heirs of Lucantonio Giunti (in) Veneto", (Lucantonio Giunti was a publisher in Venice in the XVIth Century). SalomonCeb (talk) 15:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Italian

message: *"Thomas Cavendish 18 Dec. 1587 hæc terra sub nostris oculis primum obtulit sub latitud 47 cujus seu odnodum admodum salubris Incolæ maturi ex parte proceri sunt gigantes et vasti magnitudinis".
::This contains a few spelling mistakes: odnodum might be admodum, maturi probably is maiori and latitud is an abbreviation for latitudine, but probably more needs to be checked, because as it stands it would translate as Thomas Cavendish presented (?) this land to our eyes first on 18 December 1587, at 47 degrees lat., whose or rather healthy (?) inhabitants are mostly tall giants and of huge size--194.126.21.5 (talk) 18:40, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. Will check the spelling in the source. — Cheers, <span
style="color:#ce2029">Jack</span>Lee –talk–</span> 19:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Have checked the source. You are right, odnodum should be admodum, but maturi is correct. Would appreciate your help in adjusting the English translation. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 00:47, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Are there other mistakes? "Haec terra" seems like it should be "hanc terram". Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: sumptibus means at the expense of (= published by); descripsit means described or wrote--84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: "Theater of the globe, a work now collected anew by the same author and corrected in many places, and enlarged with many new tables and commentaries." Assuming that "mustisque" is "multisque" and "novis" refers to the tables and commentaries (otherwise, with the comma it looks like the less elegant "new things"). I'm not sure what "theatrum" means in this case but it's probably a style of book. Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: *Treatise on globes and their use: adapted to those which have been published in London in the year 1593, by publisher G. Sanderson, a resident of London, written by Robert Hues" Paul Koning (talk) 20:12, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: *Thanks very much. Forgot to ask: what does "In ædibus" mean? — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 23:06, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It literally means in the house (of) = published by.--84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use, written by Robert Hues, second enlarged and corrected edition --84.190.34.50 (talk) 07:14, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks very much! I've updated the article. If you are able to help translate the other Latin phrases and book titles, that would be great. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 17:33, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use. First written and published by Robert Hues, Englishman, and in the first and second editions drawn by Jude Hond (?), and now enlarged by elegant pictures and drawings, and again revised and fittingly illustrated by mani observations, and throughout enlarged by the work and effort of John Isaac Pontanus ... Prints by H. Hond (the Latin should read coelestis and terrestris and ac). --194.126.21.5 (talk) 18:40, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks very much – I've updated the article. It would be great if you could also help with the remaining untranslated book titles and phrases above and below. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 19:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

text: Same as above, published in Frankfurt-am-Main, with a bunch of names. By the Wechelians, at the printing house of Daniel and David Aubrios and Clement Schleich, I guess. Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

text: "Treatise on sky and earth globes and their use, collected anew and suitably illustrated with many observations, and enlarged throughout, by the effort and devotion of John Isaac Pontanus...a brief account of the whole globe is added by Peter Bertius...printed by W.H., at the expense of Edward Forrest." Adam Bishop (talk) 09:04, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Latin

message: *"Islas estas descubrio Pedro Sarmiento de Gamboa por la corona de Castilla y Leon desde el año 1568 llamolas Islas de Jesus aurque vulgarmente las llaman Islas de Salomon". Is "These islands claimed by Pedro Sarmiento de Gamboa for the crown of Castile and León from the year 1568 are the Jesus Islands, commonly called the Solomon Islands" an accurate translation?
— Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 04:07, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: In this context, it seems like descubrio takes both the meanings of "discovered" and "claimed". You might want to split it into a few sentences since it sounds a bit awkward. (Are you sure it says aurque and not aunque? Aunque would make sense in context...) Personally, I'd translate it like: "Pedro Sarmiento de Gamboa discovered these islands and claimed them for the crown of Castile and Leon. From 1568 onward, the islands were named the Islas de Jesus, though they are more commonly known as the Solomon Islands." Your translation, though, is sound. It is accurate, just maybe a bit confusing. Cheers --Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû 07:46, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Spanish

message: Guiana needs a disambig. Randomblue (talk) 18:33, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Don't think we can, unfortunately. I think Raleigh was using the term "Guiana" in the sense of the group of three countries on the northeast coast of South America, that is, Guyana, Suriname and French Guiana. There's no article about the three countries as a whole, though, only the disambiguation page. — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 22:53, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Disambig 

message: What is 1000 pounds in today's pounds (I guess a fortune)? (Sanderson readily agreed to bear the manufacturing costs, and financed initial production of the globes with a capital investment of £1,000.) Randomblue (talk) 18:40, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  equivalence of currency 

message: Hi, Qp10qp, at "Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Emery Molyneux" you mentioned that the National Maritime Museum exhibition catalogue:
I had a look at the articles I consulted when compiling the Wikipedia article. One of Helen Wallis's articles, "Globes in England up to 1660" (1962), stated that William Sanderson's arms were on the terrestrial globe (a photograph shows that it is a shield, with a terrestrial globe affixed to a blazing sun above, and the motto "Opera Mundi" below), but I wasn't able to find any reference to the royal arms being on the globe. Does the catalogue say anything more about why the royal arms were on the globe, and how this relates to mercantile imperialism? — Cheers, JackLee –talk–</span> 22:22, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: No, it just says "The globes, with the royal arms emblazoned across North America on the terrestrial globe, were first presented to Elizabeth at Greenwich" (p. 128). Earlier (p. 127) it says "Elizabeth's reaction to English 'imperial' achievements, such as Drake's circumnavigation, can be perceived when she received a pair of impressive globes . . ." and then it goes on about Frobisher and Cavendish. I can confirm that the royal arms are definitely on the globe (present-day Canada) because there is a full-page photograph of that part of the terrestrial globe in the book. Sanderson's arms may be round the other side, I don't know. qp10qp (talk) 23:40, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Royal arms on the globe? 

message: I am wondering about the pronunciations given for this man's name.  I have already corrected one thing in the IPA Emery part that is pretty much impossible, but would like to help fix the rest too if necessary.  Generally, in my experience, Molyneux is generally pronounced in British English something like Molly new.  The current IPA version given suggests that it is pronounced something more like Mahler know. If you can let me know what the correct pronunciation is, then I would be happy to do the IPA. Also the non-IPA version links to the IPA key, which isn't very helpful! Slp1 (talk) 02:49, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Pronunciation of this name

message: Jack, since a request for a thorough copyedit is outstanding at FAC, I have carried one out, and I will shortly ask Tony to have another look. This is not to criticise your prose, which I think is very good, but just to try and wring that full support out of Tony. Please check my edits carefully, because it is quite possible that in changing wordings, etc. I have infringed the precise boundaries of the information. Please change anything back, where necessary.
Perhaps you could help with one or two difficulties that I had:
*I sense that there is a detail missing about the flour casting. I cannot see from the text how this process made the globes immune to humidity, flour paste being intrinsically soluble.
*"he produced in Amsterdam a Dutch translation of Hues' Tractatus de Globis". I cannot quite work out what this means. Did he translate it, commission a translation, publish a translation ...?
*In 1889, Sir Clements Markham, an English explorer, author and geographer, pointed out that a Latin legend on the terrestrial globe, placed off the Patagonian coast, states: "Thomas Caundish 18 Dec. 1587 hæc terra sub nostris oculis primum obtulit sub latitud 47 cujus seu admodum salubris Incolæ maturi ex parte proceri sunt gigantes et vasti magnitudinis".[20] However, Helen Wallis, former Map Curator of the British Library, observed in 1951 that this was unlikely, because Molyneux incorrectly plotted Cavendish's course in the East Indian Archipelago.
:Two points here: the Latin needs a translation (if one is not available, a paraphrase would do—in fact one doesn't even need to give the Latin there, just an idea of what it says). (And it almost seems as if Markham suddenly noticed this legend, but it was there for anyone to see all along.) The way this is worded, it appears as if Wallis is saying that it is likely that Markham is wrong in pointing out that the legend says this, whereas I think you mean she is suggesting that what the legend itself says is unlikely (but I'm not totally sure). Whether she is criticising Markham's theory or the content of the legend should be made clear. The other thing is that whether Molyneux was on the voyage himself or not is not necessarily anything to do with the course in the East Indian Archipelago, for two reasons: he may have been in one of Cavendish's ships that returned before Cavendish went through the Straits of Magellan; and if Cavendish himself was helping Molyneux with the mapping, he had been to the East Indian Archipelago and seen it with his own oculi, so either way the mistake cannot depend on whether its source had actually been there.
*Is it necessary to have the large blockquote in both Latin and English? Would it perhaps be better to place the Latin in the footnote?
I don't really understand why one or two of the reviewers felt there was a serious need for copyediting. My guess, though, is that the very dense, lengthy notes, and the presence of tags at unpunctuated points in sentences, might make access to the information feel knotty. In future I would suggest short-note form, no lengthy captions, abbreviated titles for the long-name books, a separate page containing full book details (List of works by Joseph Priestley is an excellent example of how to write out details of old books in scholarly detail, in my opinion), and footnote tags placed only after punctuation points (the minuscule loss of exactitude here will not be a problem for anyone wishing to check specific citations). I appreciate your very precise, thorough way of providing information, but I am trying to think of ways to avoid anything that might put off reviewers or readers.
I must say that in copyediting, I found the long notes very difficult to edit round, and I briefly downloaded wik.ed, which colours notes in, to help me get a sense of the rhythm of the prose. Of course, this is just an editor's rather than a reader's issue, but again, it might put reviewers off from getting stuck in. qp10qp (talk) 22:36, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyedit

message: In this article, I see the navigation diaries referred to as "ruttiers". All of my experience and research has shown this spelling - rutters.
Comments?
Sources for the spelling in the article?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.7.215.46 (talk) 22:46, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I followed the usage given in the Oxford English Dictionary. As indicated in the footnote, the Dictionary spells the word ruttier and, perhaps unusually, does not even state rutter as a variant spelling. Perhaps if you have some published examples of the word being spelled rutter, we can submit those to the OED so they can update their entries. — Cheers, JackLee –talk– 07:04, 19 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rutter/ruttier