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Talk:Shark Trust

message: I am the WikiProject Shark founder, I have built up this stub to almost triple its size. I hope its better and more informative now. Lenny 08:30, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Bigger and better

message: this is a really badly written article - i am assuming the author's english is not up to scratch?
there are several sentences that do not make sense, and far too many spelling mistakes
when i have the time i may attempt a clean up of this article, however, it would be good if the author was to do this himself
--jpk 22:34, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I haved gone through the article and done a bit of editing, although i didn't have time to do a great deal. A lot of the former text were just statements (The trust is... The Trust does... etc.) that appeared to be from the website so i tried to put them into sentences a bit more. More work is needed though. chris_huh 23:41, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  confusion 

message: Previously the article mentioned that 100 million sharks are killed by humans each year.  I replaced this with "the populations of some shark species have been reduced to 2% of their original levels".  Both statements come from the Shark Trust website.  I think the latter option is better because it's relative, not absolute—it's not immediately intuitive to me whether 100 million shark kills across the globe per year would be sustainable.  --Adrian J. Hunter 08:40, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reason sharks need conserving
Talk:Agnes Grey

message: I nominated the article for DYK on expansion, if anyone wants to an offer an alternate hook, please do so at Template_talk:Did_you_know#Articles_created.2Fexpanded_on_October_8,Sadads (talk) 05:18, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: DYK nom

message: Amandajm! Fancy seeing you here.  I have a few more minor comments - not really a review, since I added rather substantially to the article here, but I do hope they'll make the article better. This article is nicely written, but...
* There are words such as doesn't and isn't in the article, such as ...but representing a character who in fact doesn't gain in virtue, which is usually discouraged. It should be does not. 
* Agnes Grey has a very "perfect" and simple prose style which moves forward gently but does not produce a sense of monotony. "Perfect"? As it's a quote, I believe it needs a reference.
* Critics such as George Moore, suggest that Agnes Grey represents a style that "had all the qualities of Jane Austen and other qualities". Same here.
* Cates Baldridge describes Agnes Grey as a novel which "takes great pains to announce itself as a bildungsroman" but in fact never allows its character to grow up or transform for ideological reasons. Direct quote needs a direct reference, once more. I'm also not sure about the fact that Agnes Grey represents ...a character who in fact doesn't gain in virtue. Agnes does seem to have learned more at the end. Hmm...
::, I think. It was a little more radical position as far as I could tell, so I tried to make sure that the attribution was in the sentence and the ref at the end of the paragraph 
* However, Agnes stalls in her development because of the corrupted nature of the household in which she is employed and the ineffectiveness of the moral transformation, become a static member of the bourgeois, ambivalent to the Victorian value of moral transformation in virtue.[7] This sentence sounds slightly awkward. Is the moral transformation about her or about the people she is trying to help? And "becoming a static member..." might be better if the subject becoming a static member is Agnes.
* The "Critical reception" section could be largely expanded, I think. If I can, I'll try to help. :) 
::There isn't a whole lot of surveys of the criticism, but I will certainly relook, make sure we are not missing anything. I didn't want to go off into the OR direction and the couple of works I read didn't give Agnes Grey an explicit verdict on Agnes Grey, instead they almost assumed it's relevance and then moved on to their point, commenting on the extreme position of Moore. Also, we didn't try ILLing anything, so if anyone has easy access to sources that would expand on what we already have, go ahead and give it a shotSadads (talk) 14:42, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some more comments
Talk:Devean George

message: This is an encyclopedia, not a newspaper.  Until the situation has worked itself out, the trade issue should not be included.  Arzel (talk) 14:31, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  This is not a newspaper. 
Talk:Devery Henderson

message: Check his NFL page.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.231.122.124 (talk) 06:25, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  He born in Lafayette, stop changing it. 

message: Does anyone know the meaning and origin of the name Devery? And the correct pronunciation? I will be grateful for any help. 91.61.221.2 (talk) 19:01, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Devery
Talk:Devi Sri Prasad

message: Dokayya (talk) 01:07, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. DRAGON BOOSTER  ★ 05:56, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 18 March 2018 

message: Give importance to back benchers also like first benchers 2405:201:C404:7840:F918:C979:19F:F754 (talk) 15:25, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Equality in Education 

message: and  - I have created this section so you can discuss the recent edits on the page which are very close to WP:Edit Warring. Please use this space to discuss the change and to avoid a potential WP:3RR violation. Goldenarrow9 (talk) 17:28, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Honestly, not worrying about it at this point.  Ideally, IP would copy the simple article over here. Ravensfire (talk) 17:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit war
Talk:Devin DeVasquez

message: file::c:File:Devin Devasquez taking a selfie.jpg Reason:No permission indicated subpage: 
Message automatically deposited by a robot on 08:55, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  File nominated for deletion on commons
Talk:Trinity College Chapel

message: Since
#There is no major article for a Trinity College Chapel in Cambridge
#The link for the Trinity College Chapel in Cambridge takes you simply to the Trinity College, Cambridge article
#There isn't even a mention of a chapel in the Trinity College, Cambridge article (which probably means, no offence to anyone but, no one considered it significant enough to mention it)
#Before I created the article Trinity College Chapel, there was no previous article with the same name (which as per above probably means, again no offence to anyone but, no one considered it significant enough to create an aricle about the Trinity College Chapel in Cambridge)
#The only link to this page is from the Trinity College Kandy page.
#As stated in the article, the Trinity College Chapel "is unique among churches in Sri Lanka", "was the first open chapel in the world" etc. and is therfore quite significant in comparision and
#The fact that it is in Sri Lanka and belongs to a school doesn't diminish its significance
as per wikipedia guidelines, I'm reinstating the text on the Chapel in Kandy to the article Trinity College Chapel, and creating a link on top,
:Trinity College Chapel redirects here. For other users, see Trinity College Chapel (Disambiguation).   --snowolfD4(  talk /  @ ) 08:29, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: DAB changes
Talk:Dika Newlin

message: The celery comment was introduced in https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dika_Newlin&diff=406924178&oldid=406721702  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.21.153.31 (talk) 16:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Celery? 

message: The comment at the bottom says that All Things Considered broadcast a correction on August 3, 2006 stating that the song "Murder Kitty" sung by Dika Newlin was in fact "Cat Duet" by Gioacchino Rossini.
Corrections:
1. Rossini didn't write Cat Duet. See Duetto buffo di due gatti.
2. There's no mention of Cat Duet at Gioacchino Rossini.  Probably should be.
--Joe Wiki 20:45, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Murder Kitty vs Cat Duet
Talk:Devon White (baseball)

message: According to a May 10, 2011 column in the Toronto Sun by Bob Elliott, Devon White is now legally known as "Devon Whyte", which is also his name at birth.  Do we change the title of this article, & ensuing references to him in this article, as Devon W-H-I-T-E OR W-H-Y-T-E? Amchow78 (talk) 03:36, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: It looks like the lead paragraph has been adjusted for this - quite appropriately, IMO.  PKT(alk) 00:29, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: Devon White vs. Devon Whyte
Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/RemoteAccess

message: This entire conversation shouldn't even be happening...RA as well as ALOT of other BBS softwares are VERY important! There are still some people who run/use BBS's even now.. The BBS came before, AND led up to the internet. I feel as though people who don't know what a BBS is, what it is all about, should not even have a comment about this..— Preceding unsigned comment added by DarknessBBS (talk • contribs) 
:Oh dear god, please don't accuse me of that sort of thing, it's really unkind.  I do know about BBS systems, one of my college professors created what was possibly the very first ones as part of a distance education program in the 60s.  I was just doing a new-article patrol when I came accross this RemoteAccess.  At the time, the page didn't assert anything notable about it(there have been lots of BBS systems, and lots and lots of software for DOS).  I added a prod template noting my concern, and it was removed without much explanation, thus I sent it to the community for consensus on the issue. i kan reed 14:10, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Talk:Dexter Fletcher

message: What about his role in Band of Brothers? He had a large part.
yep... also watching a flick right now, "baseline" in which he acts & is credited as director. 
is it the wp policy on imdb that's keeping these things out?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.164.77.33 (talk) 00:12, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Band of Brothers

message: Terrible, terrible biography. Complete overplay of his work on "Gamesmaster" which is a minor piece of tv work done well over a decade ago. More should be put in about his acting work, especially film and US tv work such as Band of Brothers.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.40.24.189 (talk) 10:30, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Improvements needed

message: Dexter Fletcher also had a small part in the movie "the Patriot" when he had to clothe General Cornwallis. —Primusinterparem (talk) 19:39, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Patriot 

message: Fletcher also had a moderate role in Kick-Ass, so I've put it in. Zolstijers, innit brah!?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zolstijers (talk • contribs) 12:30, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Kick-Ass 

message: Might be worth adding music video appearances to his filmography. For instance, he appeared in Kylie Minogue's Some Kind of Bliss video. SecretName101 (talk) 09:07, 13 January 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Music videos in filmography
Talk:Dez Cadena

message: Does anybody know anything of his ancestral origins or ethnicity? He has an interesting last name.--70.178.134.51 (talk) 04:37, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Heritage
Talk:Dez Fafara

message: Anybody know the origin of his nickname? Always assumed it was short for Desmond or similar.--MartinUK (talk) 18:53, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
Talk:Leilani Kai

message: I came across this page from the hatnote at Pat Schroeder's page, but don't see "Schroeder" mentioned anywhere. At the 2012 book Legends of Pro Wrestling, her name is listed as "Patricia Schroeder Seymour". The page's current source showing "Patty Seymour" is from 2013.  Not sure which one is more accurate. Could Schroeder be her maiden name? Could she have made her maiden name her middle name? I'll leave this for others, if interested. (Incidentally, the book also has a different birthyear than the WP page.)—Bagumba (talk) 11:45, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: According to page 178 in the Biographical Dictionary of Professional Wrestling (2nd ed.), she is the daughter of professional wrestler Hans Schroeder. GaryColemanFan (talk) 05:52, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Real name 

message: I noticed, in contrast with most other biographies on Wikipedia, that Leilani Kai's biography page is missing a section about her birth and childhood. 
—WikiHelper0830 (talk) 20:41, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Early life 

message: Daughter 
Aria kai
Son in law 
Prince Samrat Walia 103.142.107.96 (talk) 21:30, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Family
Talk:Di Brandt

message: I deleted the following:
"Di Brandt came under criticism at the end of 2008 over a conflict-of-interest controversy involving the Governor General's Award jury that she sat on. Brandt was one of three jurors who awarded the annual poetry prize to poet Jacob Scheier. In the acknowledgements for his winning book, More to Keep Us Warm, he had thanked by name two of the three jurors. Brandt had helped him with some translating and some editing, and juror Pier Giorgia De Cicco had provided a blurb for the cover.[1]"
And here is why: Firstly, as with Azwells attempt to put this information on my wikipedia page, it distorts the issue. Di Brandt was accused, by some, of wrong doing, not convicted in any manner. The Canada Council for the Arts stood by the jury's decision. This information distorts more than it informs the reader about who Di Brandt is. Some (though not all - see second point) of the information belongs on the 'controversy' section of the '2008 Governor General's Award' page. Secondly, some of the information is inaccurate. The accusation that Di Brandt helped with "some editing" is unsubstantiated speculation based on an interpretation of my acknowledgments page. Thirdly, saying "some translating" is misleading; it leads one to believe she had more of an involvement in my book than is the case. In truth she helped translate three words from German. As with the edit war on my own page, I cannot claim to be uninterested in this page, but if I did not correct what I see as improper editing, I fear it would remain and this would be quite unfair to Di Brandt, as well as myself.
I would welcome an impartial third party from the wikipedia community to weigh in on this, as I suspect Azwells will not agree with my edits or comments.Helpssome (talk) 05:19, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Dian Bachar

message: Matt Stone did the voice of Mysterion  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Guinea pig warrior (talk • contribs) 15:23, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Coon 

message: It was informed to Dian, since he's in the Screen Actors Guild, he is not allowed to do voice overs on South Park because it is a non-union show. According to Dian, Trey promised him a voice spot on his film, Team America, but in his own words he said, "When Parmount was ready to pull the plug on Team America, Trey decided to give himself a few extra paychecks and do most of the male voices in the film." Their last film together was BASEketball, 1998.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.197.44.4 (talk) 04:17, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  South Park And Team America 
Talk:Diana Abu-Jaber

message: This article does not demonstrate notability through reliable third party sources, and as such is subject to deletion. Aboutmovies 20:44, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Eek! Abu-Jaber is considered one of the most important figures in Arab American Literature -- the first "big" Arab American author... I'll find some sources.... Aristophanes68 (talk) 02:44, 7 March 2008 (UTC)

text: Done.... Is that enough material to keep her safe?  Aristophanes68 (talk) 03:03, 7 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Notable?

message: The 3rd reference in the article, to Diana's profile, is broken. The new profile, https://www.pdx.edu/profile/diana-abu-jaber, does not contain the information referenced about her academic background. A new reference is needed.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by VAbikecommuter (talk • contribs) 17:46, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Broken link
Talk:Diana Coupland

message: 'In 1959, she was unexpectedly cast by Joan Littlewood as Sally in the Theatre Workshop musical Make Me An Offer...'
:What was so unexpected about this casting? Valetude (talk) 19:23, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Unexpected? 

message: Is not going to be a ballroom in Tottenham, which the article links to. 2A02:C7F:EC82:9800:48A0:1149:6C39:46B6 (talk) 02:32, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tottenham Court Road Ballroom
Talk:Diana Karazon

message: originally palestinian? what a silly statement, im changing it to 
"of palestinian orign".  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Miss-simworld (talk • contribs) 20:48, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Diana L. Eck

message: The redirect Diana Eck on Noahidism has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at  until a consensus is reached.   Headbomb {t · c · p · b} 23:50, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  "[[:Diana Eck on Noahidism]]" listed at [[Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion|Redirects for discussion]]
Talk:Diana Scarwid

message: This article describes "Brenda Starr" as "never-released," then paradoxically gives a release year for it of 1993. In fact, the movie was released, but in 1992.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.23.157.102 (talk) 23:39, 27 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Inaccuracy
Talk:Diana Williams

message: Lawrence § t/e 16:20, 11 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  material to expand upon 
Talk:Diane-Louise Jordan

message: The categorisation at the end puts her as a 1959 birth, yet elsewhere, this article gives her date of birth as February 28, 1960. Which is correct? ACEOREVIVED (talk) 23:01, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Year of birth
Talk:Diane Cilento

message: There's a number of sources (reliable?) that report her being born on 2 April 1933 or 1934; or in Rabaul, Papua New Guinea.  Here's a source that has both of those things.  Any ideas where these alternative histories come from?  --  Jack of Oz  ... speak! ...  20:49, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: But we're saying she was born in Mooloolaba, quite some distance from Brisbane.  --  Jack of Oz [your turn] 12:00, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Birth data

message: Her parents were medical specialists in Rabaul, at the time. The mother may have travelled to Brisbane for the birth. 220.244.238.166 (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 01:44, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: But we're saying she was born in Mooloolaba, quite some distance from Brisbane.  --  Jack of Oz [your turn] 12:00, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Rabaul

message: Wasn't "The Angel who pawned her harp" the last film Diane Cilento made before having a nose job?
Souldn't the photographic section read Actress and Authoress?AT Kunene (talk) 15:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Trivia 

message: Seriously? Remove this crap. I was confused and thought she was kept on life support by the whim of her children. "Survived by her children" is sentimental, not literal, and doesn't belong on Wikipedia.
121.222.33.32 (talk) 20:18, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: When someone dies, it's a perfectly standard thing to mention who in their family is left.  This could include: one or both parents; the current spouse and/or any number of ex-spouses; one or more of their children; grandchildren etc.  I don't see how you could possibly read life support into this.  --  Jack of Oz [pleasantries] 20:53, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: She is survived by her children

message: Without citing a source, the article currently states: "However, there is a video interview with Barbara Walters where Connery said he has not changed his opinion and if it is merited, it's okay to slap a woman."
Googling turns up potential sources such as Newsweek and news.com.au articles. Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources states that, post-2013, Newsweek should not be considered generally reliable. I don't have any personal familiarity with news.com.au on which to base a judgement of its reliability.
    ←   ZScarpia   10:56, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sean Connery: Barbara Walters interview.
Talk:Diane Delano

message: It's great that there's so much about her career here, but there is zero about her personal life. 
Doubledragons (talk) 04:09, 29 September 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: , I think that's a feature, not a bug. ―Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 09:23, 7 September 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Personal Life
Talk:Diane Franklin

message: Diane Franklin's latest movie is "Punchcard Player," a movie about a guy working six jobs at the same time.
Go to http://www.punchcardplayer.com
A Punchcard Player is someone who works more than one job at the same time. This person, in a sense, plays the time clock, punching in and out of his or her jobs several times during the day.
Her official fan site is here http://dianefranklinfan.blogspot.com/ for all the lastest info.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kriton01 (talk • contribs) 14:33, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Franklin's latest movie 

message: , claiming to be Franklin/DeLaurentis] changed the order in the lead from "American producer, fashion model and actress", putting actress first, producer last. As it stands, the article has no information on her work as a producer or model, so I see no problem with that much.
More to the point, this article is in bad shape, mostly due to the lack of sources.
Currently, we have a movie review for her first film. While it is a reliable source, it doesn't provide any meaningful info about Franklin. Next is the NYT/AMG film list. Again, this is a reliable source, but only to confirm the films, which we do not need a source for anyway.
Next is a bit of trivia on a role she auditioned for, but did not get, citing a DVD commentary by Elizabeth Berridge. Were this a meaningful piece of info, it would certainly be found in independent reliable sources.
Finally, we have publication info on an autobiography Franklin had published, cited to show it exists.
We do not need sources for credited roles in released films, other than in the rare instances where a film is lost. Both of the first two sources have no value. The trivia is minor, relative to the subject, so that's no help. Finally, the autobiography -- based on the assumption that it is authentic -- is not an independent source. Essentially, be have an unsourced biography of a living person, a major no-no.
Franklin is undoubtedly notable, as anyone my age will tell you, from her 80s credits alone. Deletion is not an option. I will, however, clear out the lousy sources and unsourced BLP details for starters (birthdate and location and such; I've already removed the kids' info, per WP:BLPPRIVACY).
Next we'll need independent reliable sources. I'll see what I can find. - SummerPhDv2.0 17:00, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Yikes. First pass on sources turns up the simple fact that pretty much everyone on the planet is named "Diane Franklin". I know there is material out there, it's just a matter of weeding out all of the false positives. If anyone comes up with anything, have at it. Otherwise, I'll be back in a while when I feel like digging. - SummerPhDv2.0 17:28, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  cleanup
Talk:Diane Middlebrook

message: 'Work as a biographer' and 'Writings' might need to be harmonized. For example, Her Husband is mentioned in the first of the two sections but it's not explained what the book is about. Later, in 'Writings', it is described fully. Perhaps the answer is a single section that is appropriately organized. Some hints for doing that might be reached from studying the Stanford News article. For example, it says she switched over to doing only biographies in 2002. EdJohnston (talk) 17:19, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Two sections overlap