Talk:Controlled combustion engine

message: This page is riddled with information about the Revetec company itself. I think the content would be clearer and sound less bias if much of this information was moved to the Revetec topic and the redirection removed. Thoughts?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by War (talk • contribs) 09:22, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Proposal moving Revetec info to [[Revetec]] 

message: This article reads like an advertisement. I hope that it can be cleaned up so that it contains as much verifiable facts as possible. I added the POV tag to hopefully bring this to peoples attention so that they can help improve this article.War 22:02, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: That's called a red herring. The above has no bearing on this article. Please put comments about Harley Davidson article bias on the Harley Davidson talk page.War (talk) 15:49, 24 November 2007 (UTC)

text: According to Wikipedia:Reliable sources a citation to the company website doesn't cut it. It needs to be third part at the very least. Since these have been around awhile and no citation that stands up the standard has materialized...I will remove the items from the list.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by War (talk • contribs) 00:05, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Neutrality 

message: I've put most of the claimed advantages back in. They don't need cites as such, there is no doubt that Revetec claim the advantages, what they need is some proof that the claim is reasonable or works for the stated reasons. Another approach would be to start a technical critique section, but that veers very close to OR. It might be worth rewriting the claims into a form that is more easily referneced in this fashion. eg "The Revetec engine has a Blodwyn interchanger. This is claimed to improve the efficiency of the gargle extractor by 7%, and so result in increased puffledom". Sentence 1 is the claim , and does not need a ref beyond the marketing page. The second sentence needs a technical ref affirming that Blodywn interchangers do increase the efficiency of the gargle extractor, and that this does result in increased puffledom.
Greg Locock (talk) 01:52, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Claimed advantages

message: Couldn't the sentence in the article
"Efficiency - Recent tests gave good results, for a gasoline engine, when running lean."
be written as
"Lean - Recent tests gave good results, for a gasoline engine, when running efficient.".
To me lean is just a more abiguous way of saying efficient.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Duke sandpaper (talk • contribs) 04:23, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is the word lean of any significant meaning? 

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