Talk:Marc Holtzman

message: Not only does this article read like it was written by a teenager, but it also has major problems with neutrality, with sentences such as this one: "The lawsuit was brought by Holtzman's primary opponent Bob Beauprez who hid cowardly behind the pro C & D RINOs like Governor Owens, Bruce Benson, and Pete Coors." I really don't know where to begin without scrapping the entire article, and I don't know enough about Holtzman to do that.
Bridge Partner 01:40, 30 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV problems 

message: I took the opinionated junk out (hey, I vote DEM too, and that was just plain stupid. Grow up, wouldja?) but left the content pretty much intact, except for a few minor spelling edits and one or two replacements.
I think this is a somewhat more Nuetral POV.  My personal opinions probably run in line with the first editor above, but that was a ludicrous entry.
- jglide 01:31, 5 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Nue. POV issues edited 

message: Marc Holtzman appears to meet Wikipedia's criteria for notability, but most of this article is unsourced, promotional, or copied from other sources. I intend to trim it down to the bare essentials - namely, what can be verified and makes him notable. I was tempted to nominate it for AfD - in Wikipedia parlance, to blow it up and start over - but I think reducing it to a stub and possibly rebuilding it from there is a better option. Any future additions will have to be neutral, sourced, encyclopedic, and not copied from any other source. --MelanieN (talk) 23:12, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Stubifying 

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