Talk:Michael Jones (entrepreneur)

message: I work for Rubenstein and MySpace is a client of ours. Per BLP standards, I edited the entry to include the correct job title. If there are any questions/concerns to my actions, please discuss on my talk page. //Brycetom (talk) 22:22, 19 February 2010 (UTC)
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message: Add “Companies Founded” section
Years   	Company                	Role
–2000   	PBJ Digital            	Co-founder / CEOhttps://csq.com/2017/01/mike-jones-and-the-science-behind-startup-success/#.XRQtlJNKjq1
–2008   	Userplane (sold to AOL)	Co-founder / CEOhttps://money.cnn.com/interactive/technology/15-questions-with-mike-jones/index.html
–2009   	Tsavo Media Inc.       	Co-founder / CEO / board memberhttps://techcrunch.com/2012/02/06/tsavo-media-to-pay-yahoo-4-8m-for-sending-low-quality-traffic-president-quits/
–present	Science Inc.           	Co-founder / CEOhttps://techcrunch.com/2018/02/01/science-the-l-a-based-incubator-just-closed-on-75-million-for-its-first-real-venture-fund/
Add “Advisory Roles, Boards & Affiliations” section
Years   	Company                     	Role
–2009   	People Media                	Board memberhttps://www.socaltech.com/interview_with_michael_jones_tsavo/s-0017301.html
–2015   	GumGum                      	Advisorhttps://www.entrepreneur.com/article/220222
–present	Docstoc                     	Advisorhttps://www.smartcompany.com.au/startupsmart/advice/startupsmart-growth/ex-myspace-ceo-mike-jones-launches-start-up-incubator-science/
–2016   	HelloSociety                	Board memberhttps://www.builtinla.com/2016/10/17/science-ceo-mike-jones-talks-tech
–present	Scopely                     	Advisor
–present	Two Bit Circus              	Advisor
–2016   	DogVacay (acquired by Rover)	Board memberhttps://www.latimes.com/science/la-fi-science-inc-20150730-story.html
–2016   	Dollar Shave Club           	Board memberhttps://www.socaltech.com/mike_jones_of_science_inc_on_exits_and_finding_the_right_entrepreneurs/s-0067624.html
–present	PlayHaven                   	Advisorhttps://www.businessinsider.com/tech-guru-explains-the-philosophy-behind-the-startup-studio-science-2015-5
–present	SpringRole Inc.             	Board memberhttps://www.livemint.com/Companies/jMcnvbPFaCUodWb3uEso1L/Science-Inc-to-enter-India-with-SpringRole.html
–present	Mammoth Media               	Board memberhttps://www.pehub.com/2018/01/greylock-partners-leads-series-round-mammoth-media/
–present	Pray.com                    	Board memberhttps://techcrunch.com/2017/06/29/pray-com-a-community-building-app-for-faith-organizations-raises-2m-in-seed-funding/
–present	CarBlip                     	Board memberhttps://www.bizjournals.com/losangeles/news/2018/06/26/new-car-buying-app-blips-onto-southern-california.html
–present	Coozie                      	Board member
–present	Liquid Death                	Board memberhttps://www.socaltech.com/science_inc_backs_liquid_death_s_punk_water_brand/s-0078044.html
Updated the formatting, thank you!<BR>
Wikidelrey (talk) 02:54, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit request 

message: Your edit request could not be reviewed because the request is not formatted correctly.
# The citation style predominantly used by the Michael Jones article appears to utilize ref tags. The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, the use of ref tags.  
# These ref tags have not been placed within the requested text indicating which portions of the text the source is referencing. (See WP:INTEGRITY.)
In the collapsed section below titled Request edit examples, I have illustrated two: The first shows how the edit request was submitted; the second shows how requests should be submitted in the future. 
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.
 
 
In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using ref tags, which is the style predominantly used by the Michael Jones article. Additionally, the ref tags have not been placed within the text at the exact positions where the information they reference resides. Using the correct style and the correct positioning of the ref tags, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.[3]
References
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^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2018, p. 1.
^ Harinath, Paramjit. , Science, 51(78):46.
^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2018, p. 2.
In the example above the references have been formatted using ref tags, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc. Also, the ref tags are placed in the exact location where the text which they reference resides. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. 
Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo  18:44, 25 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 25-JUN-2019

message: The larger issues here are the use of Companies founded when not all of the information under Companies founded are actually companies that the subject founded. A large portion of them are ones where he effected an advisory role, a phrase which itself is non-descriptive. Better context should be provided as to what the subject did in each instance, and how their role was pivotal to these companies being both founded and "advised" by the subject. Without that information, this is simply a recounting of the subject's work history, which would fall under WP:NOTRESUME. Regards,  Spintendo  06:02, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: 27-JUN-2019

message: Hello! A few edit requests below, if possible:
* In the upfront introduction, please change “Michael Jones (born August 13, 1975) is an American entrepreneur and investor.” to “Michael Jones (born August 13, 1975) is an American entrepreneur and investor and the former CEO of Myspace.” https://techcrunch.com/2011/11/16/mike-jones-launches-betaworks-like-technology-studio-science-in-la-with-10m-from-eric-schmidt-and-others/https://www.usatoday.com/story/tech/2015/07/14/mike-jones-science-los-angeles/30137129
* In the Science Inc section, please change “In 2011, Jones launched technology startup studio Science Inc.” to “In 2011, Jones launched technology startup studio Science Inc with $10 million in backing from investors including Rustic Canyon and Eric Schmidt’s Tomorrow Ventures.” https://techcrunch.com/2011/11/16/mike-jones-launches-betaworks-like-technology-studio-science-in-la-with-10m-from-eric-schmidt-and-others
* In the Science Inc section, please insert “Science has also invested in Cladwell, Gallant, Arrive Outdoors, and Lambs.” https://www.americaninno.com/cincy/news-archive/los-angeles-incubator-adds-cladwell-to-portfoliohttp://www.techcrunch.com/2019/10/24/newly-launched-pet-health-startup-gallant-wants-you-to-bank-your-dogs-stem-cells-for-990https://chainstoreage.com/technology/the-great-outdoors-online-and-for-renthttps://www.forbes.com/sites/josephdeacetis/2019/05/31/lambs-is-protecting-men-with-space-grade-technology
* In the Science Inc section, please move the sentences “In February 2018, Science Inc. closed on $75 million for its venture fund with traditional limited partners, including a fund of funds, sovereign wealth funds, foundations, and other institutional investors. The capital will be used to back breakaway companies coming out of Science's incubators, co-invest in deals that were not seeded by Science, and will be used to co-invest alongside other venture investors.[25]” to the Science Blockchain section, after the sentence “The ICO offering is being managed by The Argon Group, via its subsidiary Argon Investment Management LLC, under the Regulation D Section 506(c) exemption from registration issued by the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission.”
* In the Science Blockchain section, please change “In September 2017, Science Inc. announced Science Blockchain, an incubator focused on blockchain-based companies, funded through an Initial Coin Offering (ICO)” to “In September 2017, Science Inc. was the first incubator to announce its initial coin offering for its blockchain focused incubator Science Blockchain, funded through an Initial Coin Offering (ICO)." https://techcrunch.com/2017/08/04/why-science-is-turning-to-icos-for-its-incubator/ https://www.wsj.com/articles/science-incubator-to-fund-new-blockchain-program-with-ico-1501710000/
 
* In the Science Blockchain section, please insert “In February 2018, Science Inc. closed on $75 million for its venture fund with traditional limited partners, including a fund of funds, sovereign wealth funds, foundations, and other institutional investors." https://techcrunch.com/2018/02/01/science-the-l-a-based-incubator-just-closed-on-75-million-for-its-first-real-venture-fund/
* In the Science Blockchain section, please insert “The capital will be used to back breakaway companies coming out of Science's incubators, co-invest in deals that were not seeded by Science, and will be used to co-invest alongside other venture investors." https://techcrunch.com/2018/02/01/science-the-l-a-based-incubator-just-closed-on-75-million-for-its-first-real-venture-fund/.
Thank you!
Wikidelrey (talk) 03:42, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Edit requests 

message: * Thank you for providing clarification, it is much appreciated.
* Unfortunately however, although the added clarifications state developments which occurred within each respective organization during the time the subject worked there, those clarifications do not state specifically what it was about the subject's role in those organizations which merits the information being placed in this article. Please elaborate by stating how and in what way their role in those organizations either led to those developments or enabled those developments to take place.
* Additionally, the claim regading Myspace could not be added to the article because a specific timeframe was not described in the suggested prose.
* Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with the requested clarifications. Thank you!
Regards,  Spintendo  17:09, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 22-NOV-2019

message: Hi there, is it possible to make a couple of edits?
# Add Liquid Death to this sentence in the Business Career --> Science Inc. section? Other startups that have come from Science include Liquid Death, DogVacay, Hello Society, HomeHero, FameBit, Delicious, Playhaven, Kyoku, and Quarterly.
# Remove the maintenance template about bare URLs because I think the bare URLs have been removed?
Thank you so much!
Wikidelrey (talk) 06:18, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: added a citation for the Liquid Death inclusion. Thanks, Ptrnext (talk) 01:23, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
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