Talk:Mark Goudeau

message: Phoenix police get possible break in case
Useful in improving/updating the article. Thanks. --129.130.38.93 17:31, 7 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: FYI: Possible break in case

message: The first line was incorrect.  The correct information is that the Baseline killer or rapist is believed to be captured, moving it to passive tense is "was believed".  The man arrested has not admited or convicted of the crime.  There might be proof of the crime but we don't have conclusive proof on the site nor a link explaining why it MUST be him, so for now I changed it to "believed to be captured".Kinglink 21:34, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: "believed to be captured"  not  "captured"

message: I have added a clean up tag because I spotted two careless typographical errors in the first paragraph alone; and the other text I have examined in the article appears to be in need of proofreading and correcting.  There seems to be a recurring problem with verb tense, as well as awkward phrasing.  Just to pick one example, "On 4 September 2006, Phoenix police announced they've arrested a suspect. . . ."  The word "they've" should not be used in a Wikipedia article; it is too informal.  And, actually, the sentence would sound much better if rendered "On 4 September 2006, Phoenix police announced the arrest of a suspect. . . ."  --Skb8721 21:51, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Clean Up Tag

message: The article doesn't answer the basic question.  Why is he called the Baseline KillerKinglink (talk) 20:09, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The killings happened off of Baseline Road from what I can remember. - Stephoswalk (talk) 19:15, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: That is correct, but I think we need this cited in the article.  I can't find a solid link but someone who is more familiar with this case probably has something.  It's just annoying as this is a great "first look" site, and this is something I feel should be on this site.Kinglink (talk) 22:48, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've added an explanation of the name to the opening sentence, although it might be worded a bit awkwardly. - Stephoswalk (talk) 02:21, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Meaning of the name 

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thread_title: Image copyright problem with Image:Mark Goudeau.jpg

message: The article has a detailed attack on the state's DNA expert and testimony at trial.  All of that needs sourcing.  It appears to be accurate, but needs transcript page numbers, or cites from newspaper articles.  As is, it is completely unsourced and original research, right or not.  Pv86 (talk) 10:34, 15 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Sourcing needed on the DNA matters

message: He was sentenced to death: http://www.cnn.com/2011/11/30/justice/arizona-baseline-killer/?iref=obnetwork. 174.109.163.170 (talk) 13:10, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Sentencing

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