Talk:Jaime King

message: I didn't know she was addicted to heroin?
:She has got to be the hottest addict ever.
::Think about that statement a little.
::98.230.60.95 (talk) 04:12, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Heroin

message: Why does she have no filmography on IMDB.com? — Miles←☎ 03:55, 22 January 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Filmography

message: The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
*Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
**Character Count no spaces 7, 946 and Character count with spaces 9, 513 not including table.
** 1. Context - see :Template:Biography
** 2. Characterization - appearance, age, gender, educational level, vocation or occupation, financial status, marital status, social status, cultural background, hobbies, sexual orientation, religious beliefs, ambitions, motivations, personality, what the term refers to as used in the given context.
** 3. Explanation - deeper meaning and background.
** 4. Compare (similarities amongst models/actresses) and contrast (differences amongst herself and other models/actresses)- how she relates to other topics, if appropriate. 
** 5. Criticism - include criticism if there has been significant, notable criticism. need to compare to other models, actresses, if appropriate.
**On Social Sciences and Society - Films - Actors, models, performers and celebrities compare this lead to those on passed articles.  If the article is a feature article in the future or listed on a portal, only the lead is used to summarize the article and induce the reader to read further sections.  
*If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]  The image should be included in the infobox, with perhaps others added if they are available.
*If this article is about a person, please add :Template:Infobox actor  along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?] There is an infobox, however it should contain much more information.
*Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
**While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 11 additive terms, a bit too much.
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
**Grammar "King in Sin City, the film adaptation of Frank Miller's graphic novel series. "  This is not a sentence, but rather a sentence fragment.  
**Grammar:  Should this sentence  "2005 saw King in a the independent black comedy Pretty Persuasion."  use an a or the word the"
**Changed grammar:  Try not to use contractions such as it's for it is.  However this instance was changed to its for the proper form.  Changed a to an before a word beginning with a vowel in two instances.
**Spelling: several spelling mistakes corrected.
**Family life should contain more information - parents names for instance.  Schooling, siblings.  
**Check out the What links here specialty page for wikipedia articles which link to Jaime King.  In a section named See also list appropriate intneral wiki links in the Jaime King article to other articles for more information.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, SriMesh | talk 05:50, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've gone and removed quite a bit of the redundant wording, and fixed the grammar problems you have listed. I also added the names of the parents, information about their separation, her sibblings names and the schools King attended. There has been a See Also section added, and more information in general that has been fixed. I created a Kyle Newman article to make less of the red links, and am currently in the process of trying to create more articles for that purpose. I'm attempting to gain a picture with permission from the author on flickr currently as well. -Lindsey8417 12:25, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggestions per Semi auto peer reviewer

message: :GA review (see here for criteria)
#It is reasonably well written.
#:a (prose):  b (MoS):   See the above notes for this point.
#It is factually accurate and verifiable.
#:a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
#It is broad in its coverage.
#:a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
#It follows the neutral point of view policy.
#:a (fair representation):  b (all significant views): 
#It is stable.
#:
#It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
#:a (tagged and captioned):  b lack of images (does not in itself exclude GA):  c (non-free images have fair use rationales): 
#Overall: 
#:a Pass/Fail: 
SriMesh | talk 02:34, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Reworded as fact according to her interview. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Rephrased: "In 1997, her boyfriend, twenty one year old fashion photographer Davide Sorrenti, had died from what was thought be a kidney ailment brought on by excessive heroin use.[7] Following his death, King became sober,[8] and went to rehabilitation at age nineteen for her addictions to both heroin and alcohol.[25]" -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed rumors entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Shortened. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: There isn't an article, but should it be wikilinked regardless? -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Linked and will create articles soon. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Typo fixed. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Changed to "Both films had negative critical and box office reception." -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Added reference to IMDB page, and perhaps references to the actual videos themselves (would an official youtube video work?) -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: I had previously messaged a user at flickr, however, I got no response. Today I messaged a different one who will hopefully send a response. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Good article review

message: This is confusing - it's new on WP:GAN as of Nov 13, but this page is only tagged with the failed review.
Anyway,
* King's parents split amicably - divorced or merely separated?
* "One of the world's top fashion models", is puffery, and needs a better quality source than IMDB.com. If the NYTimes had said that, or Vogue, it would be OK. An anonymous IMDB editor, no.
: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Reworded as fact according to her interview. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Rephrased: "In 1997, her boyfriend, twenty one year old fashion photographer Davide Sorrenti, had died from what was thought be a kidney ailment brought on by excessive heroin use.[7] Following his death, King became sober,[8] and went to rehabilitation at age nineteen for her addictions to both heroin and alcohol.[25]" -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed rumors entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Removed entirely. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Shortened. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: There isn't an article, but should it be wikilinked regardless? -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Linked and will create articles soon. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Typo fixed. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Changed to "Both films had negative critical and box office reception." -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: Added reference to IMDB page, and perhaps references to the actual videos themselves (would an official youtube video work?) -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

text: I had previously messaged a user at flickr, however, I got no response. Today I messaged a different one who will hopefully send a response. -Lindsey8417 (talk) 02:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Another GA review 

message: Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just added archive links to  on Jaime King. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add  after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add  to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20060505223234/http://movies.yahoo.com:80/movie/contributor/1800157425/bio to http://movies.yahoo.com/movie/contributor/1800157425/bio
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080914031842/http://www.askmen.com:80/celebs/women/models/41_james_king.html to http://www.askmen.com/celebs/women/models/41_james_king.html
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20090731143353/http://www.joblo.com:80/index.php?id=1509 to http://www.joblo.com/index.php?id=1509
When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.
Cheers.—cyberbot IITalk to my owner:Online 02:34, 8 January 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just added archive links to  on Jaime King. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add  after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add  to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20090416033450/http://www.inkedmag.com:80/articles/detail/133/hail-to-the-king-/ to http://www.inkedmag.com/articles/detail/133/hail-to-the-king-/
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/20090111072852/http://www.monstersandcritics.com:80/people/news/article_1376421.php/Jaime_King_ties_the_knot to http://www.monstersandcritics.com/people/news/article_1376421.php/Jaime_King_ties_the_knot
When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.
Cheers.—cyberbot IITalk to my owner:Online 05:49, 10 February 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Substituted at 19:22, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Assessment comment

message: Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just modified one external link on Jaime King. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20071005003049/http://www.theforce.net/latestnews/story/Fanboys_Pushed_Back_To_January_2008_105913.asp to http://www.theforce.net/latestnews/story/Fanboys_Pushed_Back_To_January_2008_105913.asp
When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.
Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 13:15, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Hello fellow Wikipedians,
I have just modified 5 external links on Jaime King. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080318164847/http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0EIN/is_2004_April_2/ai_114871761 to http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0EIN/is_2004_April_2/ai_114871761
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20090212163402/http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m3374/is_6_26/ai_n6007348 to http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m3374/is_6_26/ai_n6007348
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20070921111851/http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/news/9379 to http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/news/9379
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20071011010947/http://iesb.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=3423&Itemid=99 to http://www.iesb.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=3423&Itemid=99
*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20140923120339/http://www.cwtv.com/shows/hart-of-dixie/about to http://www.cwtv.com/shows/hart-of-dixie/about
When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.
Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 08:10, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links modified