Talk:Harvest Moon: Friends of Mineral Town

message: Meh. Improper or not, I've never cared for having to conform to overly stiff and proper standards. Write in a way that feels natural.
Moved to talk page from article.--Konstable 22:54, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Improper or not

message: I, too, edited quite a bit on the "you" and "your" inclusions.  I changed most of them to "the player" or "the character" and followed up with subsequent subject-verb agreements.  I also worked a bit with some phrasing that was hard to follow.  If there is a serious problem with any of that, by all means, correct it.
This is entirely opinion, but it seems to me as if some of this was copied directly from some sort of how-to game guide.  The overall tone of large chunks of it is not appropriate for an encyclopedia article, and I wonder if it belongs here.  Someone who is more well-versed on the Wiki end might want to review and revise this, for integrity's sake.
--dootsie 09:34, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I revised it, and will check back on it later. --Gray Porpoise 22:45, 19 September 2006 (UTC)

text: Somebody needs to add Manna and the other housewife to the characters section. --Anonymouse 11:33, 10 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Article Revision

message: As anyone who looked at the history knows, I've done quite a bit of revision to this article, mostly because I saw that it didn't read like a real encyclopedia article might. So I have taken out the "you" references and replaced them with "the player", "the character", or "your character" (The latter, I was a bit iffy about, so I might change that too at another time.)
I also rewrote a few sections, mostly just rewording them. I added a few bits of information to some of the girls' sections. 
If anyone is for some reason displeased, talk to me about it and we can fix it.
--Frid 21:29, 25 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Article Revision

message: All right, it seems as if this thing is turning more into a guide than an actual article concerning the game. One does not really need to know the amount of hearts required to get a large wool. If Maplestory gets a tag stating that Wikipedia is not a guide, then so should this article. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by James Delgado (talk • contribs) 03:58, 12 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  MAJOR Clean up needed 

message: Are the X-items relevant enough to be included here? Kiko-Chan-64 03:52, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  X-Products? 

message: Natsume has always chosen to call him Pete. Here's picture proof from the official Natsume website:
From the official Harvest Moon FoMT website: http://www.natsume.com/games/HM_fom/graphics/ss1.jpg
From the DS game Puzzle de Harvest Moon: http://www.natsume.com/games/PuzzledeHM/graphics/ss2.jpg
He was also called Pete in Harvest Moon 3: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:HM3intro.png
Please stop changing his name to Jack in the article. That is just a name that fans like to use, but it was never his real name. --- Akadewboy (talk) 07:46, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  His name is Pete, NOT Jack 

message: Did anybody notice on the cover art, it almost looks like he's kicking the dog!  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.193.42.50 (talk) 21:43, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cover art 

message: Hello, I was reading the article and I think it should be mentioned that more friends is a sequel to the original.  The evidence is this:  In more friends of mineral town the mayor mentions the last owner moving away and NOT dying.  This means that the owner of the farm in the original game failed and so he moved away thus leading into more friends of mineral town.  Should I add this to the article?  --Master1001 (talk) 21:55, 8 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  MFOMT is a sequel to FOMT 

message: what and when are the black heart events for the kappa in more friends of mineral town.--RIVERBabble at my brooks 21:05, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  kappa 

message: I believe this article, while no-where near perfect, is sufficiently cleaned up to warrent removal of the 'Clean-up' tag. I am going to remove it; if there is any criticism, please add it here. HMman (talk) 17:46, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clean-up Tag