Talk:Honda Aircraft Company

message: Hello,
My name is Craig Carter and I would like to request a few edits on behalf of Honda Aircraft Company.
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Change this paragraph...
On October 10, 2011, Honda announced on the campus of Guilford Technical Community College that the company would construct an 80,000 square foot facility near the world headquarters of Honda Aircraft Company in Greensboro, North Carolina and add over 400 jobs to the city.
to this...
On October 10, 2011, Honda announced at the National Business Aviation Association Convention and Exhibition in Orlando, Fla., on the campus of Guilford Technical Community College that the company would construct an 80,000-square-foot customer service facility near the world headquarters as an expansion of Honda Aircraft Company’s world headquarters in Greensboro, North Carolina. The $80 million expansion is expected to and add over 400 jobs to the city.http://www.midwestflyer.com/?p=3608
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Delete this from the Products section: "Honda MH02"
The Honda MH02 was a product produced by Honda R&D, not Honda Aircraft Company.
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Next to "Employees," it should read:
1200+ (2014)http://www.bizjournals.com/triad/blog/2014/10/honda-aircraft-co-begins-construction-on-19m.html?page=all
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If you have any questions or concerns, please reach out to me on my talk page.
Thank you,
CraigCarterPace (talk) 18:30, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Requested edits look good and have been made. Wilipino (talk) 03:58, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Request from Honda Aircraft Company

message: Hello,
My name is Craig Carter and I would like to request another edit on behalf of Honda Aircraft Company.
"on the campus of Guilford Technical Community College" should be removed from the section below. That college campus is located in Greensboro, not Orlando.
On October 10, 2011, Honda announced at the National Business Aviation Association Convention and Exhibition in Orlando, Fla., on the campus of Guilford Technical Community College that the company would construct an 80,000-square-foot customer service facility near the world headquarters as an expansion of Honda Aircraft Company’s world headquarters in Greensboro, North Carolina. The $80 million expansion is expected to and add over 400 jobs to the city.
Thank you for your help.
CraigCarterPace (talk) 19:36, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Request from Honda Aircraft Company - January 2015

message: Hello Fellow Wikipedians,
I recently made some substantial edits to this page, and would greatly appreciate outside peer review. The previous version was out of date, had no sections, and largely consisted of lists of various dates rather than prose. I made sure to include summaries in all of my edits, but broadly speaking, these are the changes I made:
* Added sections (Intro, History, Products).
* Brought the page content up to date (as of summer, 2020)
* Added content to the introduction to explain why the subject is noteworthy (awards and contributions to the aviation industry)
* Used the “History” section to describe the subject, rather than to list different dates/milestones.
* Used professional, academic sources as much as possible. The history section is based on a synthesis of the content of these sources, though I have also included citations from journalistic outlets.
I hope these changes can be reviewed by another editor. I look forward to learning more through your feedback. Thank you! Yosoemon (talk) 00:42, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Page Edits_August 2020