Talk:Stephen M. Kohn

message: I think this article needs to be properly sourced and it also seems to be written with uncommon knowledge of Stephen M Kohn's autobiographical details. Tagging to reflect this. Saganaki- 13:17, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sources, autobiography

message: The guy happens to be one of the top whistleblowing experts in the country, whose book I am reading currently.--Audie Holmes 22:01, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: This is not an autobiography

message: Information to be added or removed: 
Add Info Box to page (it's appearing on the right side): 
In the biography section, please add a new heading called Major Whistleblowing Cases. Under this new heading, please add text from the previous biography section so that the entire section reads as follows: 
In addition to defending whistleblowers, Kohn, Kohn & Colapinto has filed numerous qui tam suits linked to the disclosure of government fraud. 
Kohn personally has represented whistleblowers in the O. J. Simpson murder case, the World Trade Center bombing cases, and the Oklahoma City bombing case. 
Kohn represented Linda Tripp in the Linda Tripp-Privacy Act case. He also represented Bradley Birkenfeld in the Bradley Birkenfeld-UBS AG tax evasion case; in 2012, Birkenfeld received the largest whistleblower award in history for his disclosures of illegal offshore accounts at UBS. 
Another notable client of the firm was Dr. Frederic Whitehurst, a supervisor at the FBI Crime Lab, who blew the whistle on the Bureau and its tainting of forensic evidence for use by prosecutors. Kohn introduced Whitehurst's 1995 testimony before the House Subcommittee on Crime.
In 2006, Kohn was the Daynard Public Interest Visiting Fellow at his law alma mater, Northeastern Law. He is the Executive Director of the National Whistleblower Center and Attorney-Trustee for the National Whistleblower Legal Defense and Education Fund.
Explanation of issue: This updated text contains more updated, specific information, as well as an Info Box, which is a concise way of conveying the information. I also want to propose a new section, which more accurately divides up the information and text. Please let me know if I need to tweak anything or any of the wording!
I would also like to disclose that I am serving as a paid editor: I am employed by Kohn, Kohn, and Colapinto, LLP. I am receiving compensation in the form of payment for hourly work on article edits. I've used the Connected Contributor template for this reason. This information is also disclosed on my user page and my user talk page.
References supporting change: Not only has Kohn continued to advocate and work for whistleblowers, he has also been contacted to speak out in the wake of the recent whistleblower news in the American government. Linked below are a couple of articles that include his opinion on the matters. 
Chicago Tribune article from 12/29/2019
Washington Post Article from 12/28/2019
BBC News Article from 12/29/2019
MSN Article from 12/29/2019
Financial Review Article from 12/30/2019
Hindustan Times article from 12/30/2019
Hamilton Spectator Article from 12/29/2019
Below is an article on Kohn's take on the proposed SEC rules to limit whistleblower awards.
Wall Street Journal Article from 6/28/2018
And more currently, articles featuring Kohn's work on whistleblower awards, the Danske bank money laundering scheme, and the wildlife whistleblowing work Kohn is involved with. 
Law.com Article on Merit Systems Protection Board decision from 8/7/2019
CBS News Article on Danske Bank Disclosure from 5/19/2019
Business Insider Article on Danske Bank disclosure from 10/13/2018
Inverse Article about wildlife whistleblowing work from 5/13/2018
Newsweek Article about wildlife whistleblowing from 4/10/18
I've gathered all of these articles here to basically make the point that all of these issues are relevant and recent- please let me know if you have any questions or comments, thanks!
Sa 3003 (talk) 04:41, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Some proposed changes: adding relevant, updated information

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.
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The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]
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^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2020, p. 1.
^ Harinath, Prisha. (2020). "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.
^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2020, p. 2.
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Regards,  Spintendo  04:52, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 17-JAN-2020

message: Information to be added or removed: 
Addition of Info Box to page (appearing on right side of page):
*I am not sure if I need ref tags for the proposed infobox addition: please let me know if I do!
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In the biography section, please add a new heading called Major Whistleblowing Cases. Under this new heading, please add text from the previous biography section so that the entire section reads as follows: 
"In addition to defending whistleblowers, Kohn, Kohn & Colapinto has filed numerous qui tam suits linked to the disclosure of government fraud. 
Kohn personally has represented whistleblowers in the O. J. Simpson murder case, the World Trade Center bombing cases, and the Oklahoma City bombing case.
Kohn represented Linda Tripp in the Linda Tripp-Privacy Act case. He also represented Bradley Birkenfeld in the Bradley Birkenfeld-UBS AG tax evasion case; in 2012, Birkenfeld received the largest whistleblower award in history for his disclosures of illegal offshore accounts at UBS.
Another notable client of the firm was Dr. Frederic Whitehurst, a supervisor at the FBI Crime Lab, who blew the whistle on the Bureau and its tainting of forensic evidence for use by prosecutors. Kohn introduced Whitehurst's 1995 testimony before the House Subcommittee on Crime.
In 2006, Kohn was the Daynard Public Interest Visiting Fellow at his law alma mater, Northeastern Law. He is the Executive Director of the National Whistleblower Center and Attorney-Trustee for the National Whistleblower Legal Defense and Education Fund."
Explanation of issue: This updated text contains more updated, specific information, as well as an Info Box, which is a concise way of conveying the information. I also want to propose a new section, which more accurately divides up the information and text. I've added ref tags to this version of the edit, but please let me know if I need to tweak anything or any of the wording, and thank you so much for your patience and support! 
I would also like to disclose that I am serving as a paid editor: I am employed by Kohn, Kohn, and Colapinto, LLP. I am receiving compensation in the form of payment for hourly work on article edits. I've used the Connected Contributor template for this reason. This information is also disclosed on my user page and my user talk page.
References supporting change: Not only has Kohn continued to advocate and work for whistleblowers, he has also been contacted to speak out in the wake of the recent whistleblower news in the American government. Linked below are a couple of articles that include his opinion on the matters. 
Chicago Tribune article from 12/29/2019
Washington Post Article from 12/28/2019
BBC News Article from 12/29/2019
MSN Article from 12/29/2019
Financial Review Article from 12/30/2019
Hindustan Times article from 12/30/2019
Hamilton Spectator Article from 12/29/2019
Below is an article on Kohn's take on the proposed SEC rules to limit whistleblower awards.
Wall Street Journal Article from 6/28/2018
And more currently, articles featuring Kohn's work on whistleblower awards, the Danske bank money laundering scheme, and the wildlife whistleblowing work Kohn is involved with. 
Law.com Article on Merit Systems Protection Board decision from 8/7/2019
CBS News Article on Danske Bank Disclosure from 5/19/2019
Business Insider Article on Danske Bank disclosure from 10/13/2018
Inverse Article about wildlife whistleblowing work from 5/13/2018
Newsweek Article about wildlife whistleblowing from 4/10/18
I've gathered all of these articles here to basically make the point that all of these issues are relevant and recent- please let me know if you have any questions or comments, thanks!
Sa 3003 (talk) 21:22, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: The infobox was added, but I would say that the other information promotes the subject's work as a whistleblower, a topic which is already sufficiently covered in the article. Some of the sources that you want to use are for multiple claims when only one is verified in the article (i.e., the Linda Tripp reference placed at the back of multiple claims involving OJ Simpson, WTC, etc.) Other references have not been placed using ref tags, so that it's not clear which reference goes where. Please note that new requests should be placed at the bottom of the talk page. Regards,  Spintendo  00:25, 27 January 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Revised version of proposed changes from Jan. 18th