Talk:Cynomya mortuorum

message: The page is well written, and flows smoothly, but I suggest adding an identification section. Also, making three sections in the lifecycle section. Pyrothansia (talk) 19:07, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you so much for your feedback. Did you mean three subheadings as in egg, larvae, and adult? Sorry, this is probably an obvious answer, but I just wanted to clarify. Mereharton (talk) 01:29, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Also, we will get started on that identification section as soon as possible. Mereharton (talk) 16:11, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
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message: This article is good. I feel like I am now more familiar with this species. There are a few words that I think could have been linked to there definitions because some might not be familiar with them. The words were mainly in the first paragraph of the General Characteristics and Lifecycle section. I think the words dorsal, anterior, and posterior could all be linked to a page that shows exactly where these sides are. Maybe yall could even use the slides from class that showed all the sides of the human. I thought the word chorion found in this same section could be linked to a website that shows what the chorion is. I especially like that sections about Uses in Forensic Entomology and Forensic Case studies. Good job on this article.
Ac22 (Ac22) 15:07, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks those are really good ideas, and we will work on making some of those words linked to other pages this week.Kctaylor (talk) 23:35, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your suggestions. We are currently in the process of adding an identification section. Also, we will get to fixing those grammatical and spelling errors. Thanks again! Mereharton (talk) 23:02, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your ideas! We were unable to find any Wikimedia pictures that looked different than the one shown, and we felt the others would be repetitive. However, we are in the process of adding an identification section, and many words have now been linked to other pages. Thanks for reading our article! Mereharton (talk) 21:27, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your input! We are working on linking more words currently, but we will also work on linking more things to our page. Thanks for pointing out that scientific name error. Mereharton (talk) 20:39, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for all your suggestions, we are currently working on sentence structure and will consider your input.  The sentence about the stages does include that it follows through to the adult stage but we might add the imago information. Your input is under consideration, Thanks Kctaylor (talk) 18:57, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your input. We will work on the sentence flow at the end of the first paragraph and in the larval section. Kctaylor (talk) 18:54, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for the suggestions! We will look at rephrasing that sentence, and at linking that page. Mereharton (talk) 19:31, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you so much for your compliments! They are greatly appreciated. Mereharton (talk) 19:31, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your input. I think we are going to leave the two paragraphs separate because the Forensic Case study has already happened, and the Current Research is ongoing. Also, if someone is skimming the article for current research it is easier to find this way. Thank you though! Mereharton (talk) 15:09, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
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message: First, very well written article! The fluidity of the writing made this an easy, interesting read. I only have a couple minor editting suggestions that might improve it a bit. First, as I was reading I noticed that the full name, Cynomya mortuorum, was used throughout the article. Once the name has been mentioned in a paragraph, from there on out you can abbreviate it as C. mortuorum. This just adds to the overall appeal -- just an idea. Then, in the "Uses in forensic entomology" section the first sentence could be revised. Instead of saying, "The use of Cynomya mortuorum in the judicial system is most often applied to the medicocriminal area of forensic entomology," why don't you reword it to say, "The use of Cynomya mortuorum in the judicial system is most commonly applied to the medicocriminal branch of forensic entomology." These are just a few ideas, other than that it was great work! Hope this helps! Alexandra.anzaldua (talk) 21:05, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: thanks for the input. We will definitely look into abbreviating the name so as to allow for more fluidity. We will also address the sentence you suggested to us. thanks again Undercover agent (talk) 22:29, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you for your suggestions. There was not a lot of information describing the pupae, which is why that section is so brief. However, we will look at the ecology section. Thanks again! Mereharton (talk) 14:49, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

text: Thank you so much for your input! We will get to linking those words. Mereharton (talk) 14:49, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: minor edits/suggestions