Talk:Harland & Wolff

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message: Several Southampton Football Club players worked for Harland and Wolff in the city; e.g. George Reader and Jim McAlpine, although the article doesn't appear to mention that the company operated from anywhere other than Belfast. Can anyone shed any light on this?  --Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 13:28, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: The article mention the yard's Glasgow facility, but not Southampton or Liverpool. This gives some information. Stu ’Bout ye! 14:25, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Southampton 

message: Shouldn't there be mention that H&W was the scene of bitter sectarian conflict from at least 1912, in the 1920s and again in the 1970s? That thousands of people were driven from their jobs there and sometimes worse during times of political strife? I can appreciate that people don't want every NI article to be about the Troubles, but not mentioning it at all is too much.Jdorney (talk) 23:49, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Be bold, add it in! JonCTalk 21:55, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Conflict history 

message: What's with the entry "RMMV Arlanza, launched on 13 April 1960, maiden voyage 7 Octobe 2233 Joyce Ave"? Looks like the date of the voyage has been overwritten by a street address here. -- Khazar2 (talk) 17:14, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
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