Talk:20,000 Leagues Under the Sea: Submarine Voyage

message: Gave the 20,000 Leagues Under The Sea article the overhaul and updating it deserves. Hope this one's better. --UD75 01:42, 14 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Complete Overhaul 

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Other than, I suppose, the description of the attraction itself, what needs cleaning up? --UD75 18:00, 31 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article Cleanup Co-Ordination Point 

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Other than, I suppose, the description of the attraction itself, what needs cleaning up? --UD75 18:00, 31 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Discussion

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message: This seems a basically good article, but it needs a careful copy-edit - "At 11.5 million US gallons (44,000 m3) of water throughout, it was one of the biggest and most expensive Disney attractions ever conceived." for example makes no sense, even if it hung together grammatically.  Size and expense aren't measured in gallons of water. Rich Farmbrough, 18:20, 21 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyediting needed

message: Article has been tagged for needing sources since 2009. Please feel free to re-add the below material with appropriate citations. DonIago (talk) 12:34, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Unsourced Material 

message: It seems very odd to me that these two attractions share a page. Despite sharing source material, they're very different ride experiences and stories, and the TDS version is certainly not a clone of the MK version. They also do not share a name; the TDS does not append 'Submarine Voyage' to the end. I suspect that maybe someone unfamiliar with the Tokyo attraction has grouped them together based solely on the name and IP.
At the very least, this page needs two sections, one for each version of the attraction. I would personally argue they need separate pages.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.147.249.151 (talk) 15:35, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Magic Kingdom version vs. Tokyo DisneySea version 

message: What does this mean? Just wondering.
204.48.46.11 (talk) 18:24, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: I've removed the wording given that Grey doesn't mention the Cold War and no sourcing was provided. DonIago (talk) 18:59, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Cold War-friendly grey"