Talk:Greece–Turkey relations

message: Here's the leftover parts.
===Small uncited parts===
*Positive relations: end of Paragraph 1 starting at "whose replacement was with a cheer squad" Response: citation added and adjectives downplayed Elias (talk) 04:26, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Some more uncited parts at "In 1999, violent earthquakes" at Positive relations and "This instability over the status" at Energy pipelines. MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:12, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text:  Apologies, missed this. Earthquake relations section now improved; energy pipeline was reworded in a different edit and on longer an issue. Elias (talk) 23:42, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  To-do list Part 2 

message: *Positive relations: end of Paragraph 1 starting at "whose replacement was with a cheer squad" Response: citation added and adjectives downplayed Elias (talk) 04:26, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Some more uncited parts at "In 1999, violent earthquakes" at Positive relations and "This instability over the status" at Energy pipelines. MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:12, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text:  Apologies, missed this. Earthquake relations section now improved; energy pipeline was reworded in a different edit and on longer an issue. Elias (talk) 23:42, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Small uncited parts

message: *Per above in To-do list Part 1, there is a [better source needed] tag with the Kathimerini source in the Migrants section. If you believe only this source needs to be replaced here, then it should be swapped out. This statement I created, like with others on the article, to aggregate several news items that were on the page before. I have removed the [better source needed] tag because I did a look on JSTOR for sources and could not find better. Elias (talk) 04:26, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Sources

message: *I suggest that this article is read from all sections (Lead to Timeline) before renomination and fixed for neturality issues. Non-netural wording include "More significantly, Greece lifted its opposition" and "Yet despite the change in relations" in Positive relations that need fixing per MOS:EDITORIAL. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:17, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Neutrality

message: Is it necessary to keep Abdullah Ocalan’s picture on the “Positive relations” section? I suggest removing his picture. He is the head of an illegal and banned terrorist organization after all. It does not add any value to the section but seems like a mockery of the issue. 176.55.17.225 (talk) 10:31, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, we can remove it. Can you suggest several images instead to take its place? Elias (talk) 17:58, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: How about pictures to do with the 1999 Izmit and Athens earthquakes? It is a good example of humanitarian cooperation. 46.31.112.214 (talk) 12:32, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: I like the direction But I would like to see a picture that can add more meaning to the article. As this is an article about Greece-Turkey relations,  a picture of Israel helping Greece and that also appears on the twice-linked earthquake diplomacy page is not as useful as others. I picked the Ocalan picture because (a) it was a major event that affected relations (b) there's a lot more to learn about the issue for the reader if they are interested why it matters . A generic picture of rubble that could look like any earthquake does not add anything to the readers knowledge. Elias (talk) 20:58, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

text: Good call. Agreed. 46.31.112.214 (talk) 11:24, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Abdullah Ocalan’s picture 

message: I would suggest a different wording than of current version. The people moving across are not the cause of incidents. Cinadon36 13:54, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed. That is an example of me trying to consolidate multiple news reports on the page into one sentence. Ideally, a secondary source is used. As for how this is written, what do you suggest? Elias (talk) 17:45, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: I am not sure, I cant tell. It is not easy.  Cinadon36 04:49, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  "People moving across the border of both nations are a common sight and frequent cause of incidents"