Talk:The Freeze

message: Currently the this page is being re-vamped by myself. I know it is currently incomplete, I just need a few more days to finish the work and add citations, please do not change and just bear with me till it is done. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.109.0.209 (talk • contribs)   10:42, 21 September 2006
I am still very aware that they are errors and when I am done I will post so, so come can carefully point out the errors. Please bare with me this means alot to me and I would love to finish it on my own. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.109.0.209 (talk • contribs)  12:59, 22 September 2006
*I'm glad you are taking the time to improve the article, but don't forget the most important thing:  the article must provide citations to "credible, third-party sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy" per WP:Verifiability and WP:Reliable sources. I would hate for the article to be deleted and all your hard work to be for naught, which could happen if the article is not properly cited. Thanks and good luck. --Satori Son 01:19, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Hi. I'm from Cape Cod and it's nice that this article is up, but to make it fit in with wikipedia, it should really follow the Neutral Point of View guidelines. Much of this reads like a press release or promotional material. Not sure if anyone's still working on it, but I think there's a danger of articles getting deleted that don't comply: the goal is for wikipedia to read like a encyclopedia, not just random info.  Good luck! Jrgsf (talk) 17:36, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  NPOV problems 

message: Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: liner notes, official site. Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you.  Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:04, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyright problem removed 

message: I did some major clean-up, formatting, and added information based on what I know. Other things to do incluse:
*Band history: Who were the original members? Where were their first shows? When did they start touring? What was response like to their records? How did the band change over time?
*Band members: What years were various members active?
*Discography: What labels released these records? Also, check dates and formats.
*References: Many more needed to make this more than a start-class article.
Morganfitzp (talk) 17:05, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  How to improve this article