Talk:Rani Mukerji/Archive 5

message: Xc, the phrase "landed up in college all over again" in Early Work doesn't make sense since college is no longer mentioned in the whole paragraph. Her college and school-related concerns are in Personal Life. What to do? Please either change Early life to Background and add all the college and school mention there. I just don't think Early work implies to Rani's Career since it's so brief. Or if you have any other idea, do the changes yourself since I don't want to interfere with your fabulous job! - shez_15
:My mistake - I was going to decide about that, but in looking for images and refs, forgot all about it :P
:No, the reason I hadn't removed it that time itself was that sentence is needed to show that Biyar Phool was done while she was still in school, while Raja Ki Aayegi Baraat was done in college. That entire paragraph is needed to show that she did some film related work early on, but her career really took off only post-Ghulam.
:I agree Early work as a section is pretty short, but so are several other sections. I'm working on it... content addition and rewriting is time-consuming, so changes will take a while to turn up on her page...
:Right now I'm trying to figure out the best way to integrate In the media and Famous commitments into a coherent form.
:None of us own this page, its our collective effort that's turned it out this well. Whatever changes you'd like to make, please do! Be bold! If theres anything that needs to be changed, that can always be worked out later on the talk page.
:Happy editing!xC | ☎  06:01, 29 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slight problem 

message: Xc, the phrase "landed up in college all over again" in Early Work doesn't make sense since college is no longer mentioned in the whole paragraph. Her college and school-related concerns are in Personal Life. What to do? Please either change Early life to Background and add all the college and school mention there. I just don't think Early work implies to Rani's Career since it's so brief. Or if you have any other idea, do the changes yourself since I don't want to interfere with your fabulous job! - shez_15
:My mistake - I was going to decide about that, but in looking for images and refs, forgot all about it :P
:No, the reason I hadn't removed it that time itself was that sentence is needed to show that Biyar Phool was done while she was still in school, while Raja Ki Aayegi Baraat was done in college. That entire paragraph is needed to show that she did some film related work early on, but her career really took off only post-Ghulam.
:I agree Early work as a section is pretty short, but so are several other sections. I'm working on it... content addition and rewriting is time-consuming, so changes will take a while to turn up on her page...
:Right now I'm trying to figure out the best way to integrate In the media and Famous commitments into a coherent form.
:None of us own this page, its our collective effort that's turned it out this well. Whatever changes you'd like to make, please do! Be bold! If theres anything that needs to be changed, that can always be worked out later on the talk page.
:Happy editing!xC | ☎  06:01, 29 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Slight problem