Talk:Strawberry Panic!/Archive 4

message: I'm thinking of moving the Etoile section to be a subheading of schools, what do you think? Kyaa the Catlord 17:51, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I think it's a good idea. Just let me edit the section a bit and I'll do it.--Juhachi 18:16, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Ooops. I'll self-revert. Kyaa the Catlord 18:18, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Move Etoile section?

message: I removed the trivia section, mainly because it's lack of enclyopedic worth. If anyone disagrees, feel free to add it back in. Highway Return to Oz... 11:57, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Trivia

message: The anime section starts off with a "main article" link to the list of episodes. This is misleading to readers as the list does not exactly discuss the anime. A little hard to articulate what I'm trying to say here, but what I mean is that a fitting use of the "main article" template would be if we had one dedicated article for the animated series (which may detail differences from other media and things specific to the anime), in which it may be named something like "Strawberry Panic! (anime)". The link should either be incorporated in the anime section differently or remain at the top but with a different template. --Remy Suen 14:53, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Anime Section

message: Shall we? Kyaa the Catlord 14:15, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Well...I suppose we can try. We still haven't resolved much of what was left with the last one as the Media section's subsections of Light Novel, Manga and Video Game are still sub-par in information. But I don't know where else to get the info from because I don't have access to those media types other than the first volume of the manga which I've downloaded. -- (十八|talk) 03:39, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Another GA try

message: Quoting the current content:
"Major differences between the anime and manga mostly centers around the plot and character interaction. The manga investigates the physical aspects of the lesbian themes further than the anime, which focuses mostly on their relationships together."
Are there more? KyuuA4 20:41, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: From what I've seen from the manga, it seems that the plot progresses much more quickly and we find out about Kaori rather soon. Character designs are a bit different, but that's like most manga to anime conversions so it's not a major thing to list. I've only read about 8 of the manga chapters, and another thing was that the Etoile Election process is a major plot point from the first or second chapter on while the anime waits until the later part of the series to touch on it for the dramatic effect. However, there are still the Amane/Hikari and Nagisa/Shizuma pairings though Nagisa and Shizuma are participating in the election process, unlike in the anime where it was with Nagisa and Tamao. Other than all that, I can't think of anything else. --(十八|talk) 02:01, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Anime to Manga Differences

message: Per the official Seven Sea's Entertainment SP! website it is shown that they have chosen to translate the name as Astrea instead of the more correct Astraea. I have changed the name in the article to reflect this.--(十八) 19:58, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Astraea Hill name change 

message: After improving this article some, I have re-nominated this article for Good Article status. --(十八) 07:30, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA re-nomination 

message: This article has been put on hold as this article could use a reactions and criticisms section and possibly other sections that are indirectly related to the anime to help show a more out-of-universe perspective in the article. This article is otherwise very good and is GA worthy. If you feel that this review is in error feel free to take it to WP:GA/R. Tarret 22:51, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA On Hold

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replies: text: Now that this article is GA, I propose we archive everything from this approval and before for a 'fresh start'. --Remy Suen 13:00, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree with this since I'm going to try for an FA soon.--十八 13:06, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Ga Passed

message: The article does not contain any information on things like the anime related sound tracks that were produced, nor what the OP/ED songs were. This is fairly standard info for anime series articles. Question2 12:55, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: You must have overlooked it, because that information is provided in the Audio CDs section in the first paragraph.--十八 12:57, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Yea, who care? Because the girls in the ending sequence really blow the anime. Just kidding. I love Yuri. Kannazuki no Miko, My Hime and stuffs =D Shrine Maiden 16:39, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Massive oversight

message: where was this obtained from? I'd like to have the site to use as a citation for another article.   THROUGH FIRE, JUSTICE IS SERVED! 01:42, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: There wasn't any source attributed to it. In the anime, they explain the grading system, and mention how 4th grade at Astrea is like the first year of high school in regular Japanese schools, and the equivalent there in America is 10th grade, so it was just matching up the equivalents of the three school system's grades.--十八 01:46, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Grade system table 

message: Seen at this official MediaWorks website, it can plainly be seen that Lulim is the official romanization of the third school, so if you please, stop changing it.--十八 19:46, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Lulim is the offical spelling 

message: The sentences in the Sales section under Reception seem to be rather repetitive, which kills readability.  The info. can be better arranged as a table. KyuuA4 19:10, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sales 

message: What demographic is this aimed at? It seems a little too feminine to be a seinen, but the lesbanism means strainght girls might be put off. Kung Foo 23:42, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't think it's really that feminine, not like shōjo series, and keep in mind that this is a Japanese series, and the Japanese may mix elements together, but in the end there is usually only one demographic. As such, it's rather simple to see if a series is shōjo, shōnen, or seinen by the content of the series and how the plot and characters are depicted. Not to mention that the series began as serialized stories in Dengeki G's Magazine, which is a seinen bishōjo game magazine, and the manga for the series was serialized in the same magazine. So I would definitely put this series under seinen.--十八 02:08, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for clearing that up! I have to say, I like how it does seem to be a guy's version of certain Shojo/Josei manga; girls can watch any kinda anime, because being tomboyish isn't exactly frowned upon, but us guys have a large genre of anime/manga (the more light hearted romancy stuff) closed off. Thank god that thanks to this we get some experience in a major manga genre.   Plus it's a nice diversion from the more combat-heavy/complexity-laden stuff I usually watch.     Kung Foo 19:57, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Demographic 

message: The Japanese Wikipedia says that the manga ended 04/2007.  However, I can't really read Japanese that well, so I can't tell if the page says anything in detail about the manga's cancellation or a third volume.  So, could anyone who can read Japanese take a look at the Japanese wiki?  MayumiTsuji 20:09, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've known about this for some time. The manga version had it's last appearance in the April 2007 issue of Dengeki G's Magazine, but the story was not finished. They might restart it some day, but for now the manga is unfinished and is officially on "indefinite hiatus"; in other words, MediaWorks has not officially announced that the manga has been canecelled.--十八 01:17, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: To avoid confusion and maintain consistency with the Japanese wikipedia article, the stop date of April 2007 (4/2007) has been added to the main infobox, with a "halted before conclusion" indicator. Animeresearcher (talk) 03:23, 12 June 2008 (UTC)

text: Thanks Juhachi, for correcting the stop date. However, shouldn't it be made somewhat more clear that the manga was stopped before the conclusion of the story? "Discontinued" may seem ambiguous to readers. Animeresearcher (talk) 19:37, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: We don't need to say everything in the infobox. A quick read of the manga section will tell the reader that the story was unfinished. I just thought that "discontinued" carried the same meaning as "halted before conclusion", but with less wording.--十八 21:12, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Manga last run date 

message: ===ANN DVDs review===
*http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/review/strawberry-panic/sub.dvd-1
Anime News Network has reviewed the first DVD of Strawberry Panic. -Malkinann (talk) 00:02, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: All incorporated.--十八 01:27, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Cheers. :) -Malkinann (talk) 01:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Reviews

message: *http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/review/strawberry-panic/sub.dvd-1
Anime News Network has reviewed the first DVD of Strawberry Panic. -Malkinann (talk) 00:02, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: All incorporated.--十八 01:27, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Cheers. :) -Malkinann (talk) 01:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: ANN DVDs review

message: ANN manga omnibus
--KrebMarkt (talk) 19:27, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Mange reviews