Talk:Butylparaben

message: Anthonna, I thought this was a great article! Super informative and organized. These are a couple suggestions I have:
1) Maybe add some new research pertaining to the toxicity and carcinogenicity of butylparaben. Here are some articles I found on PubMed:
    - http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25435060 - Associations between urinary phenol and paraben concentrations and markers of oxidative stress and inflammation among pregnant women in         Puerto Rico.
    - http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25461396 - investigates link between butyl paraben concentrations and autism in rats 
    - http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/24481588 - investigates link between butyl parabens and function of apoptotic gene expression as related to breast cancer
2) Maybe explain the Danish sewage study more because it was hard to understand the point of the study
Environdisruptersbad (talk) 21:24, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
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thread_title:  BI 513 Editing Comments 

message: Great job on the article! Very well written and the information is presented in clear manner. Here are just a few suggestions:
* In the Introduction, I would reword the first sentence to clarify that C4H9(C6H4(OH)COO is the formula for butylparaben and not all members of the paraben family. There is also a parentheses right after C4H9(C6H4(OH)COO that should be deleted.
* In Uses and Reactions, I would remove the word “probably” after you write "Butylparaben is one of the most common bactericidal/fungicidal additives in cosmetics.”
* In Regulation, I would expand on the minimum amount necessary to achieve its intended effect. What is this minimum? What is the intended effect
Overall though fantastic job the article. Well done.
Itoconnor7 (talk) 17:45, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some Suggestions 

message: :Before you act on the advice of your fellow undergraduates, please feel free to ask for advice from experienced editors.   If you are required to edit this article by your teacher, try to adhere to these guidelines: WP:SECONDARY and WP:MEDRS. Wikipedia does NOT seek news stories, it seeks citations to published reviews and textbooks.   --Smokefoot (talk) 13:22, 4 February 2015 (UTC)
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