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Talk:Catamenial pneumothorax

message: Hello, fellow Wikipedians. I am a 4th-year medical student and I am performing a peer evaluation on another 4th-year medical student's edits to this page.
=== Lead ===
You made significant contributions to the lead, expanding it. The part defining catamenial pneumothorax ("Catamenial pneumothorax is defined as at least two episodes...) is very helpful however I think it may be a but over detailed when you get into the definition of endometriosis- I suggest linking to the relevant pages if possible.
=== Context ===
Briefly mentioned before, but linking to other pages on Wikipedia may be helpful for the reader trying to gain more insight into the other terminology used in the article. 
=== Tone and Balance ===
Your writing remains neutral and unbiased.
=== Sources and References ===
There are some lapses where citations can be added. If you are using the same citation, then just cite it. Your articles on review seem to come from peer-reviewed journals, which is great.
=== Overall Impressions ===
Your article is coming along nicely. I would suggest expanding your medical info box on the right of the page with some subheaders such as "symptoms," "risk factors," "diagnostic methods," "differential diagnosis," and "treatment." 
Teyofi (talk) 17:12, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Peer Review 

message: Your article is coming along nicely. I would suggest expanding your medical info box on the right of the page with some subheaders such as "symptoms," "risk factors," "diagnostic methods," "differential diagnosis," and "treatment." 
Teyofi (talk) 17:12, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Overall Impressions 

message: This paper https://doi.org/10.1007/s12109-020-09750-0 (full paper with paywall https://link.springer.com/epdf/10.1007/s12109-020-09750-0?sharing_token=-Kdjc4Vwp59b3KZ6uHgDave4RwlQNchNByi7wbcMAY4zL2q_VjfJmW6twqPCXJPXlqW5_aE7qZ7HWX3KWOmI1rC75-j9MEV2tAZ8OTJF9lboVHukkDv5VdfLmO0zcnoLBg8bHnV0lkHKl54JJc8mrfhI3-WubEpLDKrsjp-W8dg%3D) mentioned plagiarism in this article,
It was confirmed with this tool: https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Catamenial+pneumothorax&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0LaMèreVeille (talk) 14:32, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  copyvio
Talk:Chronic bronchitis

message: Which form of bronchitis is fatal, and what is the manner of death? I ask as a result of the recently created category :Category:Deaths from bronchitis. Delicious carbuncle (talk) 20:52, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: This is it? The whole article? It sucks...which is what people comuing here can't do.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.240.240.5 (talk) 10:12, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  Aren't they all potentially fatal? 109.158.139.223 (talk) 13:56, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bronchitis as cause of death 

message: I seem to remember that there is a stong corelation between wheather somebody has been diagnosed with Chronic Bronchitis and whether they have been diagnosed with the predisposition named "Asthma". I think this was known about even before the concept of C.O.P.D. was invented. If a diagnosis of Chronic Bronchitis can lead to Asthma being concidered this is important.(87.80.103.44 (talk) 23:11, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Co-morbitity with asthmatics
Talk:Anthimos Kapsis

message: Wiki Phantis is licensed under GFDL--KaragouniS 21:33, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Hamman's syndrome

message: I've removed the "this needs attention from an expert" and "more refs required" tags as I've added some more info, another reference, and it's a rare condition that I don't think needs much more info aside from perhaps minor additions.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mat8989 (talk • contribs) 17:54, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: removing tags
Talk:Charis Grammos

message: Wiki Phantis is licensed under GFDL--KaragouniS 21:33, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: – Please remember to link to the original article as follows in order to give attribution to its contributors.  This is required when using GFDL materials.  — madman bum and angel 21:44, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Photo will be removed, as there was an obvious mix-up between Grammos and Aristides Kamaras (please, see File talk:Aristides Kamaras Panathinaikos.jpg). --Στέλιος Πετρουλάκης (talk) 04:05, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Photo removal 
Talk:Hemothorax

message: ::: What more is needed to return to a decent FAC? Best regards, 4thfile4thrank {talk} :? 13:18, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: * Not done, websites DO require accessdates:   Could you please thread your "done" checkmarks below my original comments?  SandyGeorgia (Talk)  19:33, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
replies: text:  What is the difference between websites and articles? 4thfile4thrank (talk) 19:15, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

text: Equine sources is 
I hope this gives you enough to work on for a while, and will be happy to re-review once all of this is addressed.  SandyGeorgia (Talk)  17:19, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pre-FAC list
Talk:John Waterhouse (headmaster)

message: The result of Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/John Waterhouse (headmaster) was keep. Bearian 21:34, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:List of National Historic Landmarks in New Hampshire

message: This article is currently rated "class=stub".  Per recent discussion of quality ratings for lists on the Talk page of WP:NRHP, I think the article merits "Start" quality rating in the WP:NRHP as:
#It is a "useful" list in the sense required in WP:WIAFL
#It is factually accurate as far as it goes. Support for all facts about NHLs within are supported by the corresponding articles, I think.
#It is comprehensive, listing all the NHLs in NH.
#There should not be controversy about its scope, it is a factual matter what sites are NHLs and which are not.
#It displays photos of some of its items
#There is an article of at least Stub class for every item on the list.
#Reference supporting completeness (first External link) is provided.
Comments/suggestions welcome.  I think it is best if someone else gives it the rating. doncram 01:04, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the entries ought to have quite a bit more than "a house".  "Start class" is OK, because there is much more here than a stub, but it needs a lot of work.--Appraiser 16:10, 6 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks Ebyabe and Appraiser for your consideration and giving it the "Start" rating.  Yes, it needs work to be rated any higher, especially per discussion on ratings of lists at WP:NRHP.  It is not my best work yet, and I do hope that some New Hampshirians(?) will step in to improve it. :)  doncram 23:07, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  WP:NRHP quality rating 

message: Are the geographic coordinates taken straight from an NHL database?  I don't want to go messing with them too much if they are, but I did change the latitude degree value for the Daniel Webster Family Home, so the point would be in Franklin, not in Quebec... --Ken Gallager (talk) 15:27, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I think they were orginally from the National Register Information System (NRIS) system, but there are no guarantees for that data.  It has been incorrect before.  If you have better information for any specific one, please share.  Do you mean Quebec, the town in New Hampshire, or do u mean Quebec, the one in Ontario?  :)  Just kidding.  Thanks for helping! doncram (talk) 15:44, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  coordinates
Talk:Hypersensitivity pneumonitis

message: In this dif User:Tmbirkhead added the following to the caption of the file: "be distinguished on pulmonary function testing--asthma typically shows an obstructive pattern while hypersensitivity pneumonitis will show a pattern of restriction.o"  I reverted as this had no source at all, and no source per WP:MEDRS.
Said here that this article should differentiate from Asthma in the acute setting.  I'll see if I can find any MEDRS sources that discuss this. Jytdog (talk) 23:03, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: That is not a reliable source per WP:MEDRS.  As I said I will see if I can find support for this in a MEDRS source. Jytdog (talk) 20:32, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Radiological findings 
Talk:Top-down proteomics

message: I think it would be good to change this page to include 2D PAGE as a top-down method, and also to talk about quantitation in regards to top-down proteomics. I have some experience in this field  Electrophoresis 2017 38(6) 906-913. https://doi.org/10.1002/elps.201600433   Stuart Christopher Brown (talk) 04:39, 14 June 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Dehler Park

message: Does anyone else not like this image? I respect the work someone put into making it, but it doesn't add anything informational. I am thinking of removing it, but in case anyone is watching this page, I am asking first. --Ten Thousand Bullets (talk) 18:28, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  First pitch video 
Talk:Area code 406

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thread_title:  External links modified
Talk:List of cities of the ancient Near East

message: I decided a place was needed to remind me of places that might need articles at some point. Might as well be here.Ploversegg (talk) 15:33, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: These coords seem to be way off. With a site this large, it should be possible to get correct ones, I would say. Zoeperkoe (talk) 06:42, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed the coords in WD. Zoeperkoe (talk) 08:25, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

text: Note that there's already an article on Taite, which is what Hamidiye is sometimes identified with. Best, Zoeperkoe (talk) 05:50, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Possible new site articles 

message: The following passage;
"The KI 𒆠 determinative was the Sumerian term for a city or city state." claims that KI 𒆠 means city or city state in Sumerian but the source referenced has it defined as "place; ground, earth, land; toward; underworld; land, country; lower, down below".
Granted, I'm not familiar with Sumerian so could anyone correct me if I'm wrong? Duchy2 (talk) 23:29, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  meaning of KI 𒆠
Talk:First Internet Bancorp

message: First Internet Bank of Indiana does NOT HAVE REAL-TIME TRANSFERS BETWEEN ACCOUNTS. As of July 27, 2007 the bank had a "computer system upgrade" and its once offered real-time transfers went by the wayside. Source: Kerry Lloyd, First IB customer. -- 18:34 27 August 2007 (UTC)
:Just to clarify, real-time transfers do not currently exist between Visa Credit Card accounts and other First IB transaction accounts.  Real-time transfers between transaction accounts remains intact. -- 15:01, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Real-time transfers
Talk:Media in Billings, Montana

message: Perhaps the Major in Major Cities and Communities is a tad of an overstatement. Dsetay (talk) 19:54, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Major Cities and Communities? 
Talk:Intrauterine hypoxia

message: * Updating the section on "Diagnosis" to include the most current methods of diagnosis of intrauterine hypoxia
* Updating the section on "treatments" to include the different medications and methods used to treat intrauterine hypoxia and update with most recent articles. 
* Add a section on the causes & prevention of intrauterine hypoxia 
* Add a section on fetal consequences
W.chang UCSF (talk) 21:02, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Foundations II 2020 Group [26] proposed edits
Talk:Sognsvann line

message: There's NO such thing as "Sognsvannbanen"! The article refers to Line 3 of the Oslo metro system but it's also called "Mortensrud" since the metro goes two ways. When one of them reaches the end station it switches name to the other and goes back the same way it came. Meaning if there is such a thing as "Sognsvannbanen" it would have more than 10 stations, in fact it would have just as many stations as "Mortensrudbanen" since it is the same line... Get rid of this ridiculous article!!!--The REAL Teol 22:13, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Name
Talk:Lucy Burrows

message: I feel that this page should not be deleted because Lucy Burrows is an important character in the career of the famous Lillian Gish. I find Lucy to be a particularly complex character. In one of my film classes we had to conduct a study of one of the characters of the film, and there was very little information of Lucy Burrows in Wikipedia.
::It does not fit the criteria for speedy deletion, which applies to real people only, not fictional. 
But the article needs some references to establish the importance. You took the class. do you know of any published discussions? DGG (talk) 02:14, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
Talk:Orthopnea

message: Article is all wrong! Orhopnea is when you sit with your arms extended, to make breathing easier! Not as the article says!  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 153.19.98.56 (talk) 11:04, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Orthopnea is any breathing difficulty with posture, not any specific posture. Pulmonological (talk) 08:00, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Ground conductor

message: Where it says: "Some contactors are green or green with a yellow stripe or even bare copper to signify that it is conducting ground electricity.", it should say "Some conductors..."
Pablo Badano
pbadano@adinet.com.uy
200.40.68.38 22:09, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: You could have done that! Be Bold!. --Wtshymanski 18:12, 12 October 2007 (UTC)

message: This article wants to talk about grounding in general but should only confine itself to the wires. Should be merged to a more capable article; there's not enough special to say about a conductor used for grounding to warrant a whole article on it.  --Wtshymanski 18:12, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Merge in order
Talk:STS-119

message: Does anyone really think all shuttles & related facilities will be decomm'd after the 'final' shuttle flight as authorized by the government to make way for the new program?  I would be very surprised if the DoD doesn't have plans to keep a shuttle in some state of readiness in case a manned launch is needed.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.56.100.129 (talk) 22:11, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Shuttle decommissioning 

message: I know it's not exactly in keeping with the tone of the article but should there not be some mention of Spacebat? possibly in the media section? Splateagle (talk) 15:31, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: It is already mentioned in the launch day summary: "The most interesting thing in the countdown was a fruit bat that was seen to be resting on the external tank." While amusing, it is not anything worthy of undue weight, as birds and bats are often been seen around shuttle launches. Ariel♥Gold 16:02, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I think its media attention merits a quick note, and added something.  And the summary was incorrect, it was a free-tailed bat, not a fruit bat.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aapold (talk • contribs) 04:02, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Spacebat? 

message: Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that :File:ISS March 2009.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on November 20, 2010. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2010-11-20. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page so Wikipedia doesn't look bad. :) Thanks! howcheng  {chat} 21:53, 19 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[:File:ISS March 2009.jpg]] to appear as POTD soon 
Talk:Loeb's (department store)

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if requested in good faith and provided that the only substantial content to the page and to the associated talk page was added by its author. (For redirects created as a result of a pagemove, the mover must also have been the only substantive contributor to the pages prior to the move.) If the sole author blanks a page other than a userspace page or category page, this can be taken as a deletion request.
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Text pages that contain copyrighted material with no credible assertion of public domain, fair use, or a free license, where there is no non-infringing content on the page worth saving. Only if the history is unsalvageably corrupted should it be deleted in its entirety; earlier versions without infringement should be retained. For equivocal cases (such as where there is a dubious assertion of permission, or where free-content edits overlie the infringement)
—Preceding unsigned comment added by Willwl123 (talk • contribs) 13:11, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I still don't understand exactly what parts of the article infringe on copyright.  Can those parts be deleted without deleting the article?  By the way, it is helpful to 'sign' your comments here by adding 4 tildes (~~~~ at the end!  :)  Wikipelli Talk 13:15, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: How are these photos infringing on copyright? I'm the one that took them.. I assure you they are not. They were taken from a public street. If you have a problem with the name of the page, it is possible to rename it. As far as I can tell, the page is sourced and notable. The store is a big part of downtown Meridian, so it's historically important. Maybe if you explained some of the problems you have with the article in more detail, we could help you out more? Please don't blank the page anymore as you have done twice now. Wait until this discussion is settled.--Dudemanfellabra (talk) 15:20, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Concerning the privacy issues you have stated, but unable to place here, you could place them privately by using a WP:OTRS request by clicking here. Exchanges are private and not viewable by anyone other than the volunteers handling the request. Calmer Waters 15:49, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  owner requests deletion
Talk:Positive end-expiratory pressure valve

message: this should maybe be included as its own section in Modes of mechanical ventilation or expanded upon to be about PEEP and not about a PEEP valve.  Je.rrt (talk) 16:40, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  move? 

message: I moved this article to Positive end-expiratory pressure Pulmonological (talk) 03:53, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: moved
Talk:Roman Catholic Diocese of Bayeux and Lisieux

message: The following statement is made in the article:
The Bishop of Bayeux was senior among the Norman bishops,
The word 'senior' may be the problem. The bishop of Bayeux was not senior in his ecclesiastical province; the Archbishop of Rouen was the Metropolitan. seniority in church councils was by way of seniority in terms of a bishop's consecration date. The diocese of Bayeux was not the oldest in the area or the province; again, Rouen was older. The statement seems like boasting of some sort, and with the vagueness of the claim, I think it might better be deleted.
--Vicedomino (talk) 03:15, 27 June 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Senior among Norman bishops 

message: The article makes the following statement:
With Lyons Bayeux was one of the French dioceses which did not abandon its 'Gallican' rite in favour of Roman use in the years following the First Vatican Council (1870).
The statement is unreferenced. It appears to apply to the 19th century. Does the statement take into account the revisions in the liturgy made in the light of Vatican Council II, or the restoration of the 'Extraordinary rite' by Benedict XVI?
--Vicedomino (talk) 03:59, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Gallican rite 

message: I removed the French Republic flag icon from the Infobox, in accordance with several sections of WP:ICON; specifically (quoting),
* "Generally, flag icons should not be used in infoboxes, even when there is a "country", "nationality" or equivalent field: they are unnecessarily distracting and give undue prominence to one field among many...."
* "Flags make simple, blunt statements about nationality, while words can express the facts with more complexity." [Saint-Brieuc was for many centuries part of the independent Duchy of Brittany and of the Kingdom of England. The flag of the kings of France was quite different from the tricolor.]....
* "Do not rewrite history. Flags should not be used to misrepresent the nationality of a historical figure [including some bishops], event, object, etc. Political boundaries change, often over the span of a biographical article subject's lifetime. Where ambiguity or confusion could result, it is better not to use a flag at all, and where one is genuinely needed, use the historically accurate flag."
--Vicedomino (talk) 15:35, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Removed flag of French Republic from Infobox
Talk:Pulmonary aspiration

message: What is this referring to? what does fasting or surgery have to do with the article, and why would it belong in the risk factors section?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.89.21.24 (talk) 02:04, 14 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: fasting is a known and established method for ensuring that stomachs are empty before starting surgery and preventing food from refluxing back to the airways. Markbenjamin (talk) 02:53, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  mention of fasting before surgery? 

message: I've worked in operating theatres for twenty years and this is the first time i've even heard of "vomitoria" in ORs let alone seen one. I'm pretty sure this is nonsense. In addition the concept of "vomitoria" is a myth relating to Roman times, vomitoria was the name for exits from public places, unrelated to the English word "vomit" related to food. I'd like to delete this sentence. Markbenjamin (talk) 02:52, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  vomitoria
Talk:List of anarchist poets

message: I suppose "Paint 'er Red" and "Hey Polly" can be understood in anarchist and non-anarchist ways, but "Red November, Black November" and "Joe Hill (High head and back unbending...)" can't.
In The General Strike for Industrial Freedom, Chaplin avoids confusing his political positions with the union's. He states that "the future society will be organized on the basis of industrial administration rather than political government." He also distinguishes Wobbly Industrial Unionism from anarcho-syndicalism strictu sensu. Still looking here. Jacob Haller 22:27, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I looked pretty hard, even before you added him to the list.  If you find something, that'd be great.  He was one of the good guys, and I'd like to his name here.--Cast 22:31, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I can't find a direct citation, which is awkward. Jacob Haller 23:41, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: It's possible that he was never quoted as self-identifying as an anarchist; never did so because he was a socialist first and an anarchist sympathizer second; an essay in which he self-identified has been lost to history; or perhaps because he never considered self-identifying himself important.  Whatever the case may be, we cannot add him without that source.  It wouldn't be appropriate to "claim" him for anarchists now that he can't speak for his own opinion.  Don't worry about it.  If a citation exists, someone is bound to find it someday.--Cast 00:08, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Ralph Chaplin