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Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/Paul J Moss

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- 	I have refactored some of the extended comments to Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/Paul J Moss to improve readability. This is not an assertion that those comments are somehow less valuable, simply that there are readability issues. Please add new comments and votes to the bottom of this page. Stifle 11:36, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: almost impossible to track now but here is th edeleted stuff
Talk:The Letter People

message: #Mr. Q's new keyword/attribute (after 1990) is simply "questions" with no adjective; I have a PDF file from Abrams & Company to prove it.
#Miss U's former keyword/attribute was "upsy-daisy umbrella" (as heard on the television show, at least; the other 1970's teaching material may not have included an adjective before "umbrella").
#Mr. W's former keyword/attribute was "wonderful wink"; the 1970's teaching materials, albums, and television show all used that phrase consistently.
--ISNorden 20:11, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Keyword corrections

message: The List of The Letter People characters article duplicates content here and should either be deleted or merged into this article, if there's anything in it worth saving. Mathglot (talk) 20:15, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Merge

message: Should we make another section for the 1980s revamp of the Letter People characters? The revamp was only available though the "World Book-Childcraft Reading Awareness Program" box set, though it may have also been used in other programs too. The revamp featured redesigns of the Letter People characters making them have more of a "child friendly" cartoonish look. The Childcraft set also featured the original songs for the Letter People, but changed the songs for Miss I and Miss 0 to reflect their new personas. 
Some info about it on the Discogs site and my Archive.org page I linked below.
https://www.discogs.com/release/2767649-The-Letter-People-The-Letter-People
https://archive.org/details/theletterpeoplesing_20210327 LetterPeopleArchive (talk) 00:12, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  1980s Revamp
Talk:Madih nabawi

message: The following was removed:
*"The majority of Islamic scholars consider most forms of music to be forbidden. However, some scholars are of the opinion that madih nabawi is permissible in Islam (Touma 1996, p.158)."
However, I reverted the article so as to readd it, as it was cited. However, the citation was made up on Mawlid (somewhere between two of my edits ) and then moved here. So I removed it again. Hyacinth 11:48, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Removed

message: www.alsunna.org/madih —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Sayfullah (talk • contribs) 19:02, 14 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Anashid
Talk:Women Unite

message: Are Women Unite really to small for wikipedia? I suppose if you say so... But just to clarify:
-- Women Unite is not a hobby band
-- They tour the world extensively
-- I (article creator) am not affiliated to the band in any way. I just went to a concert.
-- There is an article on the band at http://www.music.org.za/artist.asp?id=71
Oh, and please link to WP:MUSIC when referring to it?
I remove the delete request for now, since when looking at the notability criteria I see
"Has gone on an international concert tour, or a national concert tour in at least one large or medium-sized country[1], reported in notable and verifiable sources."
Which applies. (I am in Norway, not in South Africa). I'll look for media references.
Vintermann 11:49, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Othello (owarai)

message: The link to their official profile no longer works. Please rectify Tiwaking (talk) 21:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dead Links 
Talk:A. O. Neville

message: Which government department was Mr Neville working for when he was the Chief Protector of Aboriginies? DarthVader 11:54, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Possibly the Aborigines Department. This article is not clear on the title of the department at any particular time though, so I haven't added it to the article. This article seems a little clearer. --Scott Davis Talk 03:49, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: earlier comments

message: This article is quite a good start, but reads like a synopsis of the Dictionary of Biography Article here: http://www.adb.online.anu.edu.au/biogs/A110005b.htm?hilite=neville, especially the first line.
All the block quotes really need references-- they simply seem to have been lifted from the web site here: http://www.hyperhistory.org/index.php?option=displaypage&Itemid=455&op=page
There is a great body of work on this man and it would be better to include proper references to this secondary material-- at the moment it has the feel of original research.
Finally, there is still the controversy over Neville's intentions which should really be included.
If pople ae happy I'll try and dig up some proper source material and add it. Dave Earl (talk) 05:18, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Needs Work 

message: I just deleted a sentence that claimed that the amount of money spent by the government on Aboriginal policy was 1/6 of that spent on convicts. This is just a ridiculous statement, and in all likelihood totally made up. Convict transportation ceased in the 1860s in WA. Furthermore, comparing the two is apples and oranges. I could say that the amount of money spent by the government on road signs is 1/10000 of what it spends on health policy; what exactly does that demonstrate?
115.64.9.69 (talk) 08:47, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Money

message: Hi, Excuse my ignorance, but can someone explain the sentence: "Neville immigrated to Victoria, Australia as a Karthus"?  I am unable to get a definition outside of Gaming! Thanks Nelson50T 14:15, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Meaning of Karthus 

message: There's an issue with the article where a single phrase has been inserted many times throughout the article, sometimes in the middle of another sentence or even word where it doesn't make sense. The phrase is as follows: "appointed as the secretary of a new department organising immigration and tourism, and assisted in fostering the migration of 40,000 people to Western Australia over the next few years." Right now I count 8 places where it appears. Deleting it is one thing, but in some cases it seems to have covered over earlier text and information. Acire93 (talk) 12:26, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for the note; it was due to vandalism by 209.39.26.145 that lasted for nearly a month. I've gone and fixed it. Graham87 12:32, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Issue with article
Talk:Federal Express Flight 705

message: You know that was 13 years ago, are they still alive?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.19.170.157 (talk) 22:18, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Crew is alive and well. They're good friends of my father (MD-11 Capt), and I hear from them semi-regularly.MHaz1701 (talk) 21:06, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  How is the crew doing now? 

message: Initially, the summary is linked to only the 'Aircraft Hijacking' article. I updated the summary so that it links to both 'Suicide by pilot' and 'Aircraft Hijacking' articles.
If this change needs to be reverted then please leave the reason for doing so on my talk page.
--TransportFan2014 (talk) 23:43, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Updated summary 

message: I don't think that the disabling of the FDR and CVR aboard SilkAir Flight 185 is really comparable to what happened in this incident, because the FedEx FDR and CVR are known to have been deliberately disabled by someone other than the flight crew, and the disabled FDR and CVR were discovered and reactivated. The reason that the SilkAir FDR and CVR were disabled was not and cannot be conclusively determined. Carguychris (talk) 17:31, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  SilkAir Flight 185 

message: This article significantly plaigiarizes the script of the Smithsonian Air Disasters episode.  Some parts are word for word. 74.69.12.159 (talk) 16:00, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Plaigiarism 

message: Submitting a reference on the case: United States vs Calloway.  KyuuA4 (Talk:キュウ) 11:31, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Legal reference
Talk:Camille Winbush

message: Whoever had the previous birth info on this page was wrong. The correct info is there now.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Runesage106 (talk • contribs) 22:44, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Wrong Birth info
Talk:Modified atmosphere

message: There is a controversy about using Carbon Monoxide in meat packaging.
http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20060222/ap_on_he_me/meat_carbon_monoxide_3
Accountable Government 12:04, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Interesting. Something to mention in the article? feydey 13:49, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Do they gas it once (like bananas) or actually pack it in CO (like the other stuff on this page)? Ewlyahoocom 17:38, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Carbon Monoxide Controversy 

message: The gist of the "fruits and vegetables" part of the second paragraph (reproduced below) under this MAP heading is essentially meaningless to one not already familiar with the subject.  What does "the interaction of the packaging material with the product is important" mean?  What, precisely, is it that you are trying to do with these "low barrier" films?  What happens if you don't do it?  In other words, what is the cause of the reduced shelf life if you don't do it?
"Meat and fish and cheese are non-respiring products needing very low gas permeability films and so-called high barrier films are used. The initial flushed gas-mixture will be maintained inside the MA package. Conversely, fruits and vegetables are respiring products where the interaction of the packaging material with the product is important and so low barrier or so-called high permeability films are used for these. So long as the permeability (for O2 and CO2) of the packaging film is adapted to the product's level of respiration, an equilibrium modified atmosphere will be established in the package and the shelf-life of the product will increase."
Wikifan2744 (talk) 00:22, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Modified Atmosphere Packaging (MAP) 
Talk:TAC-2

message: "The joystick came in two colours, black and white, latter being a more rare collectors' edition." - Is there any sales figures that validates this? My collection of random TAC-2 sticks includes 5 white and 1 black, and my friends seem to have a similar distribution. // pipe
: I only have a black, but as far as I remember the white was only made for a short period rather late. I don't know if it can be called a "rare collectors' edition", but I have a recollection that it was sold as such. Of all TAC-2s sold the most were black. // Liftarn
: I also remember when the white model appeared, around 1990 or 1991. Many people had them and I wouldn't call them rare, and in the early 1990's I actually remember only the white one being sold. Antti Salonen (talk) 19:44, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Black or white?
Talk:Rossiya Hotel

message: Who wrote this? Did the author havea a bad experience at this hotel?
:I don't know, but it doesn't seem terribly encyclopedic. It doesn't matter much now since it's being demolished soon anyway, I guess. I'm going to take it out because it reads too travel guide-y but something probably should be written about it's poor reputation, since everything I read about it mentions how awful staying at the place was. Recury 20:16, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Discussion 

message: As far as I know, Nikita Khrushchyov was removed from power as General Secretary of the CPSU Central Committee and Chairman of the Council of Ministers of the USSR in 1964, and replaced (as General Secretary of the CPSU CC) by Leonid Brezhnev. As such, I don't understand how could Khrushchyov have ordered the construction of the Rossiya in 1967. What you probably mean is that Khrushchyov ordered its construction before that (either in the late 50's or early 60's) and the hotel was FINISHED in 1967. Nonetheless, I think that someone ought to make this issue clear for everyone. The russian leader (talk) 15:43, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Nikita Sergeyevich Khrushchyov]]
Talk:Josiah Tattnall III

message: According to the Tattnall County Website, Georgia Josiah Tattnall 
died in Nassau, New Providence, British West Indies, June 6, 1803,
*For the records, that is his eponymous father Josiah Tattnall (politician). ...GELongstreet (talk) 00:40, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Josiah Tattnall Death 

message: Article reassessed and graded as start class.  Referencing and appropriate inline citation guidelines not met.    --dashiellx (talk) 16:50, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Tag & Assess 2008
Talk:Commonwealth War Graves Commission

message: This report ("Report of the Special Committee to Review Historical Inequalities in Commemoration") has been published, see here. It is being widely reported and something on this should be added to the article (I don't have time to do it justice right now other than adding an external link and maybe a single setence). See this BBC report for an example. The governor mentioned from 1923 ("F G Guggisberg") seems to be Gordon Guggisberg (Brigadier-General Sir Frederick Gordon Guggisberg). Carcharoth (talk) 18:43, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Report of the Special Committee to Review Historical Inequalities in Commemoration 

message: (Comment relates to now archived talkpoint.)
I have found the answer to the question I raised; I have today discovered that southern Ireland's civilian war dead caused by German action are commemorated by the CWGC under the heading of "Eire Civilian War Dead". There are currently 51 commemorated, the two largest groups of civilian casualties being the victims of the North Strand Road air raid on Dublin and those of the explosion of a sea mine at Ballymanus, Co Donegal. So there was no opt-out by the authorities of the Eire/Irish Free State occasioned by their neutrality stance within the British Commonwealth.Cloptonson (talk) 18:15, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Irish Civilian War Dead

message: Dropping a note here to point out the recent (September 2023) UNESCO designation, and the article that has been started: Funerary and memory sites of the First World War (Western Front). That UNESCO designation covers more than just the CWGC sites, but will be of interest to those editing those topics (who may be able to assist with the right links as well). Something could be added to this article as well, along with something on the Belgian, French and German memorials and cemeteries (we lack articles on many of these, but some exist on other wikis). Pinging those who have edited that article so far: User:Nthep, User:Onel5969 and User:Mbkv717. Carcharoth (talk) 13:14, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  UNESCO designation
Talk:Offshore radio

message: Please see Talk:Radio_Caroline#Radio_Rainbow --kingboyk 13:08, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Radio Rainbow 

message: this entry should be clubbed together in one with:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pirate_radio
after this a forwarding link for the search word "offshore radio"
:Actually, given that 'pirate radio' was just a name coined by the British press, I think they should be clubbed together under the 'Offshore radio' banner with a forwarding link to 'Pirate radio'.  'Pirate' has connotations of illegality, which most of the pirates actually weren't. --Deke42 (talk) 01:33, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Redundance
Talk:Wastebasket taxon

message: Are these generally paraphyletic? - Samsara contrib talk 13:52, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Indeed "paraphyletic" is a good hint for expanding this somewhat crabbed and ungenerous stub. "Examples of wastebin taxa include Simia, Rhynchocephalia, Carnosauria, Megalosaurus and Thecodontia." If each of these were expanded upon, showing the process by which such taxa were originally arrived at, that would be a start. Simia for one thing may not immediately bring "simians" to mind. --Wetman 07:21, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Paraphyletic?

message: I don't see how the concept of a form taxon is a type of wastebasket taxon -- and I don't think it should redirect here. It's conflating the issue. — John.Conway 15:15, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Form taxon 

message: The comment on invertebrates contradicts Invertebrates, which classifies non-vertebrate chordates as invertebrates (as one'd expect from the etymology). Also, saying that they share no distinctive ancestry suggests that they're polyphyletic, which is incorrect - the last common ancestor of all invertebrates was an invertebrate. 85.8.12.78 (talk) 11:27, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Smith609 Talk 12:36, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Invertebrates 

message: What about linguistics? Nilo-Saharan and Austroasiatic are notorious cases. Sagotreespirit (talk) 18:47, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Linguistics
Talk:Herbert Kelleher

message: There were 2 identical articles, one at Herb_Kelleher, one here.  I wasn't sure which one to make the redirect and which to make the main article.  I chose Herb_Kelleher as the main article, since it was the one which all the other wikipedia articles mentioning him were pointing to.  --Xyzzyplugh 14:01, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: There we go :-) Jude(talk,contribs) 14:13, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
Talk:TRU

message: The addition of that section appears to be something along the lines of vanity or advertising. The group doesn't appear to be notable enough to merit its own article so there's no need to include it in the disambiguation page. Furthermore the added formatting was non-standard for disambiguation pages. GT 14:20, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Root Underground 

message: One of the first results I get on Google for "TRU" is Thompson Rivers University. See WP:CITE and WP:V. Ardenn 18:56, 16 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Google 

message: I tried to cleanup this three entries from this disambiguation page per MOS:DAB, meaning I removed three entries and tweaked two more. The removed entries are:
* TRU Group Inc, Industry Consultants. - no link, notability not asserted, no incoming links if I link it. Seems nonnotable.
* Texas Rugby Union - has incoming links, but neither link uses the acronym "TRU", and neither really tells me what it is. If someone wants to add this entry back, please make sure to at least say what it is.
* TRU ia a word used to convey agreement - Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not a dictionary, especially for made-up slang like this.
– sgeureka t•c 12:50, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cleanup
Talk:Oregon missionaries

message: I came to this article hoping to find teh name/link for Father Blanchet; to my surprise only American/Protestant missionaries are mentioned; why none of those already active, namely the Oblates and teh few Jesuits in the region, and/or the Anglican and other British missionaries?Skookum1 (talk) 19:08, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you for your suggestion. When you feel an article needs improvement, please feel free to make those changes.  Wikipedia is a wiki, so anyone can edit almost any article by simply following the  link at the top. The Wikipedia community encourages you to be bold in updating pages. Don't worry too much about making honest mistakes — they're likely to be found and corrected quickly. If you're not sure how editing works, check out how to edit a page, or use the sandbox to try out your editing skills.  New contributors are always welcome. You don't even need to log in (although there are many reasons why you might want to). Katr67 (talk) 04:53, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, for one thing I'm in Nova Scotia these days and just don't have the resources - libraries, used bookstores, browsing in used bookstores etc.  For another it was just an observation about this article's content vs its title; but even if it were Missionary activity in the early Pacific Northwest I'd still be stuck with not knowing enough directly about the priests and their various acts of clerical derring-do and what I do know of them is from their activities in BC after Oregon become unwelcome turf.  Like I said, I was just dropping by looking for info here to add re another aritcle elsewhere.  There's bits on DeSmet and Fouquet and Blanchet and LeJeune and the otehrs out there but most of what I come across about them - because I'm reading BC-side histories - ahs to do with BC.  At this piont I can't even venture to insert a brief sentence listing those who worked in Oregon - actually I don't know their first names in some cases, knowing htem as Father this and Father that.  IMO in any case a wider regional article makes more sense in the long run - and don't tell me to write it, it's just an idea! - and that Oregon-only topics which actually involve the rest of the region are inherently limiting; but if you're going to have an "Oregon missionaries" article it seems odd to only start in 1843.Skookum1 (talk) 14:34, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Oblates and Jesuits?
Talk:List of hospitals in Barbados

message: I believe that there are only two hospitals in all of Barbados. Thus this list is going to remain pretty short, unless we add clinics in. Kukini 14:29, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Only 2
Talk:Shan Ratnam

message: Shan Ratnam describes the same person and do so in a much better way.I cannot figure out what was the necessity to create this article while a much better discourse on the person concerned exists in Shan Ratnam !!
This article should be merged ,if not deleted, ASAP.--Dwaipayanc 14:33, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Merging with the original article
Talk:Barbecue Bob

message: Im going to update this page with more info and create a new "Career" section  —Preceding unsigned comment added by CoolJack2 (talk • contribs) 13:20, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Revamp 
Talk:Indonesian Aerospace

message: I am surprised that this page never exist before. So, I decide to made it. Please help to make this article better. And if anyone ask why I don't include many Jusuf Habibie here as many other article, I don't see any relevance within many aspect his personal life (eg. Seminar in German) and the Aerospace Industry. IMHO, I feel his actions are often over-exagerateed. Draconins 14:35, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Initialization 
Talk:List of United States senators from Alabama

message: Reply to Carl Moore carlm0404@gmail.com
On my mobile device, I do not see the history of the Class 3 seat.  The other seat, in Class 2, is the one affected by Roy Moore controversy.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1002:B11E:C9E4:5564:5059:CC2B:8B51 (talk) 19:24, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
Talk:Yeshivah Centre, Sydney

message: SMH isn't being so nice. If anyone can find links to media coverage could you please add them? There have been many articles and I have seen many of them; the most famous one being the close-to-front page article about the shofar factory last year. ems 14:40, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Hi! want to reiterate the need for reliable sources. This can include general media coverage, history books, and the like, but it can also include Jewish-related sources as long as they are independent of Yeshivah Centre and Chabad-Lubavitch, and are considered reliable in Judaism circles for identifying notable yeshivahs. Wikipedia's WP:Deletion policy requires sources that establish a subject's notability and you should be aware that articles can be deleted if they do not have them. Best, --Shirahadasha (talk) 22:46, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Sufficient refs if any want to add from any reasonable search engine - notability tag is almost irrelevent in view of the media coverage SatuSuro 14:12, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Media coverage