Talk:Diana Oughton

message: There was a very careless mistake in this article that said that her father was a state senator. Her father was a restaurateur.  --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) 07:45, 26 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Senator 

message: Comment:  It's helpful to have the external link taking readers to the FBI files for this individual.  Would it be possible to repair the link-- it doesn't appear to be working as it should.--Historytrain (talk) 19:14, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  FBI Files 

message: OSSU - Personally, I think this is an outstanding article.  Written with considerable care and obviously well researched, I applaud your hard work.  While it reads with ease and a nice flow, I think some would say that it needs more of an encyclopedic tone.  For example:  in the Townhouse explosion section, you paint a very realistic picture of the scene, but in an emotional sense more than a factual one.  Consider going through the article and see where is should focus on the facts rather than descriptions.
Also, it does not appear that you have any citations in the "peanut" or opening paragraph?
69.19.14.28 (talk) 07:22, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  A more encyclopedic tone 

message: I'm putting a tag on this article because of the style of citations. They are not in accordance with wikipedia styly. Something like "Time Magazine" is not a sufficient citation at all. Murderbike 22:22, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Citations 

message: Are you certain about the term VISA? (Your link did not seem to have any connection to information.) I was around in the sixties and I only remember VISTA (Volunteers in Service to America). 68.127.169.130 (talk) 02:24, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It actually didn't need to be linked since it's linked about three sentences before that. Murderbike (talk) 03:32, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text:  I just tried it again, the very first reference to the Weathermen in the opening sentence, and the link doesn't work.  I click on the one that is linked, but it doesn't take me to the proper site.--Lalalajane (talk) 00:19, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed, sorry about that. Murderbike (talk) 00:22, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: think we fixed it at the same time... haha--Lalalajane (talk) 00:23, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Links

message: The Townhouse Explosion was the tragic and dramatic culmination of the grim political direction in which Weatherman had been headed.
Why was the explosion "tragic"?  They were killed in the midst of illegally fabricating devices to murder others.  If anything, it was karmic. Shawn D. (talk) 17:15, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Tragic? 

message: In quoting two stanzas/verses from the lyrics of a song within the "Diana After Death" section, does a violation of copyright occur?--Historytrain (talk) 23:36, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyrighted Material?

message: In the second and third paragraphs, there are sentences which need citations. (Sherlockhemlock (talk) 15:21, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't have a citation problem for this section, but, it does seem very poorly written and kind of mixed up. It's like the sentences are out of order in some parts. Phlox1301 (talk) 10:06, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: This is the end product of at least one instructor's annual freshmen assignment of applying a fresh coat of whitewash to Weatherman articles.  Collective writing never turns out well.  Feel free to improve it, but there's a new class coming this fall.  --CliffC (talk) 12:20, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Guatamala

message: Grageo (talk) 21:31, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ending 

message: I've read in several articles that her body was burnt, disfigured, dismembered, and that her shit was generally all fucked up.  In cases like this you can usually find "death photos" pretty easily, but I've had no luck finding any on the web.  Does anyone know where I can see her corpse?  I'm morbidly fascinated by the descriptions and want to see for myself. Childe Roland of Gilead (talk) 15:11, 12 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Any pictures of her body?