Talk:Three Californias Trilogy

message: The sentence:
:"Jim McPherson, who finds himself in the middle between terrorism against the weapons industry; drugs, parties and casual sex; as well as literary and academic interests."
doesn't parse very clearly. "in the middle between terrorism against" really doesn't make sense. -- Finlay McWalter |  Talk 18:58, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
replies: text: I think (I hope) it's fixed now.  — Athaenara  ✉  07:40, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text:  I just re-read this a year ago, so I went ahead and changed it up slightly; in the novel, Jim is just being pulled in a lot of different directions as he struggles with adulthood, I don't think the "in the middle" was really necessary. AlbinoFlea (talk) 04:31, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Can't parse (and can't fix) sentence

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message: This article needs a major cleanup and some areas need a rewrite (as the sentence structure is broken to the extent that the content is unparseable). I'll submit what corrections I can. 174.78.9.244 (talk) 20:09, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Several minor spelling/grammar mistakes. Some major.