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Talk:Hazel Green High School

message: Wow. What a terrible article! Organization! We need organization! And grammar! We need grammar (and so do I!)!  -DTK 21:17, 11 August 2006 (UTC)

message: Kolle and Holly, I would appreciate if you would help the HGHS page and not hurt it. If the format is off, correct it how you feel it should be. Please do not just delete it. I would appreciate any HELP you can offer.
Hey--sorry to seem insulting.  I didn't mean to.  The thing is, what was on the page was not appropriate Wiki content.  What does need to be there are general statistics--number of students, perhaps racial/economic breakdown (that stuff's in the school report card if anyone's got one), principal's name (but probably leave out vice principals and such, that's not a vital thing), and that sort of thing.  When you get into school rules and organizations and such, it gets way out of the focus that Wiki is supposed to have.  Those sorts of things can easily be found on the website, which is linked.  Also, it's a Wiki rule that everyone sign their posts with four tildes so we can get the timestamp and all.Thathollygirl 21:27, 27 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Do not delete, help 

message: Would anyone like to try and find some additional information to use as sources? The original sources used were materials provided by the high school and a historical publication of Hazel Green. Let me know if you come up with anything. HGHSTROJAN (talk) 11:02, 7 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  3rd party sources
Talk:David Tyree

message: This content had a TON of neutrality issues, some of which I have fixed. I think others might want to read it over.►Chris NelsonHolla! 01:20, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Section on "The Catch"

message: I concur with Cityofangels418's request for clarification on NOM.  Mr Tyree's may consider himself a devout Christian, but there is no proof regarding this claim.  Likewise, whilst there is reference to his past as a crack cocaine abuser and alcoholic, there is no proof offered regarding his continued abstinence.  Drcrathie (talk) 23:24, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: So should he take public sobriety and drug tests to satisfy your disbelief? Reliable sources are what we operate on. NYyankees51 (talk) 23:48, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  This article is full of inaccuracies and unsubstantiated claims. 

message: I don't see anything in that article implying that Tyree suffered from "marijuana addiction." It mentions his use of pot, but says nothing to imply that he had an addiction to it like he did alcohol.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 152.10.252.15 (talk) 15:20, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I have clarified the sentence. Eagles 24/7 (C) 17:46, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Good, sorry for the revert, should've looked more closely. NYyankees51 (talk) 20:35, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Marijuana addiction 
Talk:David Urie

message: The information in this article was originally from a press release put out by Rocketplane Limited, Inc., in 2005.  I will need to dig hard to find the press release after so many years, and may not be able to find it.  -- Joseph Huwaldt (talk) 19:30, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Source for Information 

message: Can someone in the know determine of there is a misspelling in mach/march "Urie was also Program Manager of the Trans Atmospheric Vehicle (TAV) at Lockheed. His team built and successfully tested a large-scale cross section Mach 25 structure."Srednuas Lenoroc (talk) 09:18, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Why would it be March? The sentence wouldn't make any sense. The quote is referring to the McDonnell-Douglas TAV, which was a project to create a spaceplane that was designed to reach the velocity required for low earth orbit, which is approximately Mach 25.  See Mach number. Thus the prototype Urie worked on was a "Mach 25 structure".  ChiZeroOne (talk) 15:41, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree. "Mach" is correct. JohnCD (talk) 15:45, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  mach or march
Talk:David Usher

message: Whilst these things are subjective, and whilst I don't live in Canada so am maybe not the best judge, I would have thought that the article came closer to being of medium importance rather than low.  In a country not exactly blessed with rock stars who are not Brian Adams, Moist and its figurehead David Usher are the best you've got.  The criteria for medium importance are below - it's very difficult to fit everything in something so general but that's my view for what it's worth...
"The article covers a topic that has a strong but not vital role in Canada. Many readers will be familiar with the topic being discussed, but a larger majority of readers may have only cursory knowledge of the overall subject Articles at this level will cover subjects that are well known but not necessarily vital to understand Canada. Due to the topics covered at this level, Mid-importance articles will generally have more technical terms used in the article text. Minister of Transport (Canada), Rick Mercer, Jasper National Park"
--WeAreSilver 20:13, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Importance of article 
Talk:David Vincent (musician)

message: ==Untitled==
I changed "Goth-Metal" to "Industrial Metal", as their sound has more to do with Industrial music than Gothic Rock or the so called "Goth" Metal.
== Satanist? ==
I've never heard anything outside of wikipedia to suggest David Vincent is a satanist. If so, one might have to specify whether it is Theistic Satanism or Philosophical Satanism, as the two are very different.  Cronos12390 13:55, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Genitorturers

message: I've never heard anything outside of wikipedia to suggest David Vincent is a satanist. If so, one might have to specify whether it is Theistic Satanism or Philosophical Satanism, as the two are very different.  Cronos12390 13:55, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Satanist? 

message: David Alexander Vincent? Or David Justin Vincent? Also, I think his real surname is "Stupping"  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.1.229.15 (talk) 22:42, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Alexander or Justin? 
Talk:David Vine

message: I've changed his date of death from 12th Jan to 11th Jan.  Although it was reported today(the 12th), the BBC website says he died on Sunday night (ie 11th Jan)—Preceding unsigned comment added by 147.188.213.146 (talk • contribs) 
:I have updated January 11#Deaths and January 12#Deaths accordingly. – ukexpat (talk) 15:49, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  David Vine's Death 

message: Very odd to record this here, I think. Everyone dies of something and it's not an important detail of their life. I've removed it. --OhNoPeedyPeebles (talk) 11:43, 21 December 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cause of Death 
Talk:David Waddington

message: Nigel Evans, current Ribble Valley MP, is reporting Waddington's death but I've not yet found a news source. Timrollpickering 13:03, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: Evans's tweet: https://twitter.com/nigelmp/status/835111273029337088 Timrollpickering 13:05, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Died
Talk:David Waisman

message: Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: here, here, and here. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you.  Diannaa (talk) 22:13, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyright problem removed
Talk:David Walker (racing driver)

message: I have downgraded the quality rating on this article to class=C today, because there is far too much unreferenced text.  I've also added a 'more citations' maintenance tag to for the same reason.  PKT(alk) 13:36, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title: Quality rating
Talk:David Watkin (cinematographer)

message: I see the "Unsourced Cat" warning was removed.  In the edit history it says "alluded to in "camp name" section and explicitly mentioned in his autobiography".  Per WP:BLP, that's not enough - a specific citation needs to be included in the article.  If someone could add that, it'd be great - I don't have access to his autobiography to do so.  Thanks -- SatyrTN (talk | contribs) 21:55, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  LGBT? 

message: I have not been able to find a single reference regarding his supposed death on Feb 19.  Please provide a reference if you add the material again. -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 23:07, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I found confirmation at his official site - www.davidwatkin.co.uk - very sad to hear... Girolamo Savonarola (talk) 23:15, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you for pointing that out - it wasn't there when I visited the site this morning.  Sad indeed. -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 23:38, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reports of his death...
Talk:David Weeks (politician)

message: This article needs a complete rewrite as it does not appear to be NPV. Too little coverage has been given to the Homes for Votes scandal and too much to other minor events. Philafrenzy (talk) 23:09, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed. I have added the  template also - this article reads like a bluffer's CV, with plenty of airy claims of "influence" etc. but not a single reliable source that agrees. Apart from Homes for Votes, there is also no mention of the Mill Hill/East Finchley/Hanwell fiasco. As Peter Bradley put it: "Shirley Porter will go down in history as the woman who sold three council cemeteries for 5 pence each, and David Weeks will go down in history as the man who bought them back for £4.25 million." Not if this article in its present state is all that future students of local politics have to go by, Peter. BlackberrySorbet 22:43, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Rewrite required

message: Congratulations to whoever added the sentence that Weeks was not buried in a Westminster cemetery. It made me laugh out loud. 89.243.154.85 (talk) 20:44, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cemetery
Talk:David Weiss Halivni

message: a biography should have a date of birth (and death, but not applicable in this case)
His memoirs have most of the personal history section. Look at the bibliography in NEJ for the rest.Wolf2191 (talk) 23:34, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: The section Chate'u Yisrael contains a quote from Halivni's book "Revelation Restored" without cititng the relevant pages. Please add the relevant pages from the book if you have access. Leglotus (talk) 17:45, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Source needed in Chate'u Yisrael section
Talk:David Westin

message: David Westin has been criticised for failing to ensure that CBS News provides unbiased coverage of political events, as well as the Iraq war and other foreign policy issues. He has been concerned with only caring about his own ego and turning his back on his country by failing to straighten out widespread Left-biased reporting at CBS.
65.101.251.116 (talk) 03:14, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Controversy

message: I'm having trouble parsing this bit: 
:Westin is married to Sherrie Rollins Westin. He has two daughters, Victoria and Elizabeth, and a son, Matthew, from a previous marriage. She has a daughter, Lily, from a previous marriage to political strategist Ed Rollins. They have a son, David Palmer from their union.
Whose child is David Palmer? · rodii · 14:36, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Children 
Talk:David Westwood

message: The BPL read like a fan mail.  BPL does not prevent criticism and there is plenty that can be directed at Westwood.
http://www.bichardinquiry.org.uk - Justice Bichard Inquiry.
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/3840065.stm - Home Office Inquiry.
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/england/2205457.stm - His Police car was stolen.
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/uk/6079944.stm - Humberside worst Police force in country 
http://www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/news/uk/crime/article611395.ece and got worse under his leadership.
:This is not discussion, this is an anonymous rant.  Please sign it, or remove it.  --Wally Tharg (talk) 00:01, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Inclusion of criticism

message: Another Wiki article implies that David Westwood has a PhD. Does he? (I can find no independent evidence.) If yes, this article should include it, with a reference to the awarding institution. If not, I shall remove the 'Dr.' from the other article.  --Wally Tharg (talk) 00:01, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Academic qualifications?
Talk:David White (officer of arms)

message: The sentence: "White is the younger son of Peter Vines White and Sheila (née Chatterton (widow of Lt Cdr (E) J.W.W. Baker RN[1])." is not quite right. "White is the only son of Peter Vines White and the younger son of Sheila ..."
I personally know this to be correct. I'm the older son of Sheila and only son of JWW Baker. However I don't know of any quotable sources. Tango Mike Bravo (talk) 08:30, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
Talk:David Wiesner

message: Evidently they co-wrote his first book as a writer (first trial or first success?) and have not collaborated again (no trial or no success?).
WorldCat lists no other publications for her. One of its libraries catalogs The loathsome dragon as "retold", perhaps a Chinese folktale?
--P64 (talk) 01:20, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Kim Kahng
Talk:David Wiggins

message: Added a sentence on his 2006 book, Ethics.  Also deleted the claim that he is often confused with an Iowa judge by the same name.  I would be very surprised if either moral philosophers or Iowa jurists really get confused.
KD Nov 30
He's listed as a verificationist - perhaps someone could add a few sentences about this? Thomas Ash 11:58, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Minor changes 
Talk:David Winnick

message: Saying he increased his majority despite huge Labour losses across the country is misleading. In terms of national shares of the vote there was in fact a very small net swing from Conservative to Labour  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 144.173.223.47 (talk) 16:38, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  2015 general election 

message: I am not sure it is fair to say that "At the 2010 general election, Walsall North was one of the most closely contested seats at the election". Firstly closely contested would imply that there was a big effort put in by two or more parties to win the seat. This may be the case, but the cited source only gives the figures for the vote, and the seat was not seen as one which would determine the outcome of the election, not least as the swing required for it to change hands meant it was low on the Conservative target list at about traget 195 - considerably more seats than the Conservatives required to win the election on an even national swing (though in the end higher swing to the Conservatives than the national average). Secondly if it is being implied it was a particularly close result it should be noted that the 990 majority was higher than several other seats including Telford, Great Grimsby, Norwich South, Dudley North, Thurrock - majority 92 - and North Warwickshire  - majority 52. Dunarc (talk) 23:49, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  2010 "closely contested" wording
Talk:David Wm. Sims

message: Guys I've always seen him play his entry-level bass made by Memphis and nothing else, ever. Since he has such a 'holy grail' kind of sound, it would be nice if we could expand on it cuz when people call The Jesus Lizard an "influence", all 4 of them have a sound other people emulate - as well as the sound of the band as a whole. Anyone know any details of his rig? I've seen him live twice, and it looked like he kept the brains of the rig behind the speaker cabinets so I could never tell what he was using. I found unreliable info years ago about the speaker cabs hand built in Austin buy some guy at Heart o' Texas Music. We should shine a light on this, yeah? Hanz ofbyotch (talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Memphis" Bass
Talk:David Wolf (astronaut)

message: Wine was David wolf  was born ? DustinN242 (talk) 19:28, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
replies: text: It's in the article, right at the top. TJRC (talk) 23:37, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  David wolf  

message: Can you please Sind me sum in  formation for my  Report on David Wolf 
 DustinN242 (talk) 15:22, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  My  Report  

message: Any further information please 174.88.106.248 (talk) 23:08, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Scroopnaut project
Talk:David Wurmser

message: Some or all of the points from the sources cited in this blog post would be useful in the article. 75.35.115.68 23:52, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hawk advocacy 
Talk:David Yallop

message: David is said to be British. I am not sure that this is true.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.164.124.253 (talk) 12:58, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  British 

message: Was a Thames TV production and not from the BBC 2A02:C7C:362A:E200:8C6F:F362:1E20:2B9F (talk) 12:10, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Minder
Talk:David Yassky

message: :No doubt we'll have to do this again pretty soon, if recent history is any guide. 
:*sigh* Ruthfulbarbarity 02:04, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Reversion To Previous Page

message: and politically biased at that, has been commented out. That two of the people who spoke against him arent from his district is not exactly relevant. DGG 03:00, 25 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: irrelevant material

message: I have been trying to clean up some non-neutral language and unsourced comments that I encountered on this page, and see that not only mine but other Wikipedians' edits are being removed and constructive changes being reverted. I see that the subject announced a new campaign in February 2022, and so I expect that unconstructive edits will be more common. Please keep in mind that Biographies of Living Persons have strict requirements and all edits should be from a neutral point of view, should be verifiable and should not contain original research. If pointed language is going to be used, ensure that it is attributed and well-sourced. Otherwise it will continue to be deleted, per the rules on biographies of living persons. Chaonautical (talk) 04:22, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  2022 New York State Senate Campaign and Edits that Don't Conform to WP:BLP
Talk:David Yelland (journalist)

message: This is really messy and needs lots. Secretlondon 04:27, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
Talk:David Z (producer)

message: David Z. and David Rivkin seem to be the same person, but it's strange that Lipps and Funkytown are mentioned in the stub at David Rivkin but not in the much longer article at David Z., so someone more knowledgeable should perhaps look into this. Joriki (talk) 14:08, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: P.S.: This also suggests that the information in David Rivkin is about David Z.. Joriki (talk) 14:28, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge proposal 
Talk:David Zinczenko

message: Right now this article reads strongly like promotion. There should be more biographical info and less salesy talk ("fastest-growing magazine"/"landed the biggest get ever"/etc.). Any assertions such as those mentioned should be cited (e.g., what third-party organization says the mag is the fastest-growing?).
If you have any questions about how to make this article encyclopedic, ask or start with Wikipedia:Wikipedia in brief.
(Note: I'm granting that the subject is notable; others may disagree.) HelpnWP (talk) 00:37, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Tracking edits to Men's Health-related articles, it looks like someone with a vested interest is "maintaining" the pages. It may be time to recommend speedy deletion. HelpnWP (talk) 19:58, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree with both of the above as well as HelpnWP's observation that the subject is notable enough to warrant an article. The possibility of a conflict of interest is troubling, though many WP articles originate with similar flaws, for example, WP:Copyright. It's our job then to clean up and police the page, which I'll do and hope others will help. In the interest of readers and WP standards, a template alluding to these concerns appears to be in order. Allreet (talk) 01:41, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Promotional Tone/Possible Conflict of Interest

message: What credentials does this man have that makes him a fitness expert?Dumaka (talk) 17:55, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Zincenko is a "fitness expert" because he plays the game of "Media Darling" very well. He's written books and is the editor of a widely circulated magazine with high sales numbers and healthy financials.  He is a recognized authority on national broadcast television shows.  One doesn't need a degree in science, nutrition or P.E., a masters, or even a PhD, or certification by a board, to attain this level of media stardom for the recognition. Now if he was out there promoting fad diets, questionable practices or other forms of Quackery, then you would have a valid point. But no one is claiming he has puffed up his qualifications, or called to questions his methods or findings. 68.252.62.180 (talk) 13:12, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: lol I was reading some of this guy's stuff. He is not a fitness expert at all. 71.255.94.205 (talk) 05:05, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: And he blatantly ripped off Martin Berkhan!!!!!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.40.120.38 (talk) 09:54, 20 July 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Fitness expert?

message: Is he single? Married? With a Life Partner?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.159.111.98 (talk) 05:42, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Personal Life Section? 

message: I added this:
:Beginning in January 2013, he is no longer editor-in-chief at Men's Health.Men’s Health editor Zinczenko out with a link to NTY article. Can someone clean it up for me?
Thanks Kassorlae 08:50, 9 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  No longer editor-in-chief
Talk:David Zinman

message: While I am sure that the comments concerning his performance with the Swiss orchestra in London are ture, they seem way too POV to be acceptable.
"His 2 performances with it in the BBC Promenade Concert series, most recently in 2005, were enthusiastically received and the more recent one was nationally televised in Britain, revealing his command of the music, the versatility of his interpretation and his subtle but impressive control over every aspect of the orchestra and its performance."
Suggestions for rewriting? --Wspencer11 (talk to me...) 12:25, 21 August 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Have done the rewriting, rather belatedly. Prior text such as that was definitely much too POV. DJRafe (talk) 06:59, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Current revision is too POV? 
Talk:David Zucker

message: Anybody have a problem with these? --Tom 16:10, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Youtube citations

message: I don't know how to add citations, so where the "citation needed" is for the fact that Scary Movie 5 is due out in 2008: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0795461/ (Internet Movie Database).  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.99.238.21 (talk) 01:03, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Unfortunatly, imdb is not a reliable source. - Mdsummermsw (talk) 12:10, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Citation