Talk:Miami Showband killings

message: Weggie has removed my addition of 'British Security Forces' as perpetrators, without explanation. I can see this leading to further debate. There is a question of consistency to be established. If the British security forces are not to be included here, but only their subordinates, the UVF, are (this fact of security force direction is well documented at this stage), then the Kinsgmill page needs to be amended also. In addition, why is it the Miami Showband 'killings', but the Kingsmill 'massacre'? There is inconsistency here also - either both should be described as 'killings' or both as a 'massacre'. The usual parlance is 'Miami Showband massacre'.
Nomath 11:43, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Equating the UVF as a 'subordinate' to the British security services' is a biased statement and entirely POV. No ones disputes that the UDR was infiltrated by the UVF but to try and say this was a sanctioned attack is unproven and seriously POV. The systemic bias that is being shown here is wholly against the principles of Wikipedia.  Weggie 11:54, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Stepthen Travers has just written a book about that tragic night. In it he insists that there was a British officer present overseeing the entire operation. He assumes the officer to have been Nairac.--jeanne (talk) 06:33, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

text: Travers claims in his book that the checkpoint was not bogus, but a regular roadblock with uniformed UDR soldiers. He claims that when told to get out of the minibus, the soldiers were in a jocular humour, having a bit of craic with the band members. But suddenly a car pulled up, a very fit-looking man appeared on the scene who spoke with a crisp English accent. By his stance and authorative demeanor, Travers immediatly assumed he was a British Army officer. In fact, upon his arrival, the whole atmosphere boleyn|talk]]) 06:14, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Perpetrators, and other matters 

message: The perpetrators were specifically from the Mid-Ulster brigade of the UVF, run at the time by Robin Jackson, who allegedly had links with British Intelligence and Robert Nairac. The article needs to state this.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:05, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: If there are reliable sources to support it, go ahead. I've been meaning to add more sources myself. ~Asarlaí 16:14, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Just did. How does it look? I included an external link which gives the information on Jackson having been the Mid-Ulster brigade's commander at the time.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:19, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Good job. I just tweaked a few things. ~Asarlaí 16:37, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. I felt the info needed to be added.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:42, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: UVF is too vague

message: :::::Stephen Travers has never claimed that the British officer in charge on the night was Robert Nairac. He has makes it clear that he does not know who the officer was. Others have assumed that it was Nairac but Stephen makes it clear that he does not know the identity of the British officer. A subsequent newspaper article stated incorrectly that he identified the officer as Nairac. He simply states that the operation was commanded by a British officer. Three members of The Miami Showband, Brian McCoy, Stephen Travers and Des Lee felt more at ease when the English officer arrived and took charge. Brian McCoy reassured the new bass player that everything was ok now that the British army had taken charge charge.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Galyuta (talk • contribs) 20:28, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Brian McCoy had presumed (falsely) from the start that the patrol was regular Army and not the UDR. The article makes it clear that Travers was unsure about Nairac having been present.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 21:18, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Galyuta, please do not remove sourced information from the article. It took me an hour to fix the page this morning, as refs were also messed up. Another thing, don't sign your name to the article. Last night I had assumed you were a vandal-now I realise you were acting in good faith. I do happen to agree with you about Brian McCoy as he could not have presumed they were regular Army when seeing the red torch, especially as the soldiers would have been wearing their distinctive Maid of Erin UDR berets. McCoy had just presumed it was a legitimate checkpoint when he pulled over. I have, therefore moved up the text which details the arrival of the soldier with the "crisp English accent" to the Bogus checkpoint section, and I also added that Brian McCoy reassured Travers that the soldiers were British Army and not the UDR after the arrival of the mysterious Englishman. Of course, the UDR was a regiment of the British Army. We can only presume that what McCoy had been implying to Travers was that the patrol was under the auspices of the regular Army and not the UDR, although it would be Original Research to extrapolate this presumption in the article. I also need to point out that not ALL the UVF gunmen at the scene were UDR. Robin Jackson who has been implicated as the main perpetrator was no longer a member of the UDR, therefore it would be incorrect to state that all of them were UDR. Next time you wish to remove sourced information discuss it here on the talk page before taking it out of the article. Remember when adding information to articles, you need to cite a reliable source to back up your addition.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:31, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: British Army officer

message: ===Main image caption===
The image is perfect for the article, however, the caption needs to specify on which side of the road the killings took place. Seeing as one member was blown into a ditch, I take it the massacre occurred just behind the roadsign.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:42, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Going by these pictures it seems the minibus was parked on the layby (behind the roadsign), although in the second pic it looks like its on the road (or maybe that's just me). ~Asarlaí 16:58, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Half was on the layby, and the other half on the road. The van was probably originally fully parked on the layby, but the force of the blast moved part of it onto the road. The second photo was shot from a different angle than the first. I think we can safely say in the caption that the killings took place on the left hand side of the road.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:31, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

text: I'm sure we could. What picture have you got in mind? ~Asarlaí 10:28, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I like the one taken in 1975, which was one of their last.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:39, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Here it is: --Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:47, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good. Go for it. ~Asarlaí 11:04, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I just did it. If you think it should be moved to another section, go ahead.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 11:17, 18 January 2011 (UTC)

text: Good idea. Here is a documentary from YouTube that shows the type of minibus: . I hope this links up.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:06, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Ach I should've thought of checking YouTube. I even watched that program when it was on. Anyway, I've added a picture now. ~Asarlaí 17:45, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good. I just reduced the size so it matches that of the group. Oh, I wonder if the minibus depicted in that programme was the actual colour?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:54, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: They used the same registration plates, so it might well be. ~Asarlaí 18:02, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The reason I ask is that I don't want readers to think a white minibus was used. How would you describe the colour of the van in the film? Mustard yellow?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:17, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The same colour as this one. I chose the picture of the white minibus because it gives a good view of the back and side, but if you'd rather use another I'm fine with that  ~Asarlaí 18:26, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: No, the image you chose is fine. It looks more vintage than the yellow one. I'll try to find out what colour their bus was and I'll just add it to the article.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:47, 19 January 2011 (UTC)

text: I'd thought about doing that. I doubt we'd be able to find pictures of the actual guns, but there are pictures of the same types of guns here and here. What do you think? ~Asarlaí 12:48, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Perfect. It's highly unlikely that any photos exist of the actual Luger that was used seeing as the RUC destroyed it in 1978.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 12:51, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Images

message: The image is perfect for the article, however, the caption needs to specify on which side of the road the killings took place. Seeing as one member was blown into a ditch, I take it the massacre occurred just behind the roadsign.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:42, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Going by these pictures it seems the minibus was parked on the layby (behind the roadsign), although in the second pic it looks like its on the road (or maybe that's just me). ~Asarlaí 16:58, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Half was on the layby, and the other half on the road. The van was probably originally fully parked on the layby, but the force of the blast moved part of it onto the road. The second photo was shot from a different angle than the first. I think we can safely say in the caption that the killings took place on the left hand side of the road.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:31, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Main image caption

message: Can we upload a non-free image of the group and claim fair use? I believe we can meet all the requirements.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:43, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm sure we could. What picture have you got in mind? ~Asarlaí 10:28, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I like the one taken in 1975, which was one of their last.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:39, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Here it is: --Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:47, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good. Go for it. ~Asarlaí 11:04, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I just did it. If you think it should be moved to another section, go ahead.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 11:17, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Image of band

message: Could we add a picture of the type of minibus they were traveling in? I assume it's one of these, but I'll need more info before I start hunting for a picture. ~Asarlaí 16:47, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Good idea. Here is a documentary from YouTube that shows the type of minibus: . I hope this links up.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:06, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Ach I should've thought of checking YouTube. I even watched that program when it was on. Anyway, I've added a picture now. ~Asarlaí 17:45, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good. I just reduced the size so it matches that of the group. Oh, I wonder if the minibus depicted in that programme was the actual colour?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:54, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: They used the same registration plates, so it might well be. ~Asarlaí 18:02, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The reason I ask is that I don't want readers to think a white minibus was used. How would you describe the colour of the van in the film? Mustard yellow?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:17, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The same colour as this one. I chose the picture of the white minibus because it gives a good view of the back and side, but if you'd rather use another I'm fine with that  ~Asarlaí 18:26, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: No, the image you chose is fine. It looks more vintage than the yellow one. I'll try to find out what colour their bus was and I'll just add it to the article.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:47, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Image of the minibus

message: Asarlaí, do you think you could locate an image of the 9mm Luger and the Stering subs used in the attack? I think they'd look well in the Shootings section. Thanks.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 12:36, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I'd thought about doing that. I doubt we'd be able to find pictures of the actual guns, but there are pictures of the same types of guns here and here. What do you think? ~Asarlaí 12:48, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Perfect. It's highly unlikely that any photos exist of the actual Luger that was used seeing as the RUC destroyed it in 1978.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 12:51, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Images of the weapons

message: This sounds odd. I think the wording should be changed to loyalist paramilitaries as loyalist forces implies that all the security forces of Northern Ireland were part of the plot.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:38, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: ~Asarlaí 02:51, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Great. It looks much better now. Loyalist forces implied that all the members of the RUC, UDR, etc were implicated in the killings which is patently contradicted by the fact of Des McAlea having allerted the RUC at Newry who immediately went to the site and brought Travers to hospital.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:16, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: On a side-note, could we write more about what the loyalists hoped to achieve (aside from "killing a few taigs")? Had their plan worked, it would've certainly been a blow to the Irish showband scene, but I'm not sure how it would've embarassed the Irish government. ~Asarlaí 09:40, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the plan was more Byzantine than that. I think the Glenanne gang not only wished to embarass the Irish government, but to use the transportation of bombs by the band as justification for their attacks against the Nationalist community as well as further attacks in the south, with this "piece of evidence" that all "Irish Catholics (north and south) supported the IRA". Had the plan come to fruition, I am convinced there would have been more UVF/Glenanne gang bombs planted in the south. I also find it a coincidence that Brian McCoy, a Protestant from Tyrone was the first band member killed (by a Luger, possibly fired by Jackson, himself a Protestant originally from Tyrone).--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:49, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Loyalist forces?

message: I think the article should point out that Nairac, had he been present at the scene, would have most likely adopted a fake Irish accent as had been his wont, rather than his own "crisp, English accent". The English accent could have belonged to someone else in the 14th Intelligence with whom Jackson and the Mid-Uster UVF had links.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:59, 9 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: That may be true but we shouldn't speculate. ~Asarlaí 02:51, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: This is not my speculation. Martin Dillon dismisses the suggestion that Nairac was at the scene of the Miami killings. I agree, however, that it should remain in the article as Travers himself believes the man to have been Nairac. It should be added that Travers was present when the attack occured, whereas Dillon was not. Dillon was basing his assumption on the mistaken identity of the Star pistol. The Barron REport established that Mc Coy was shot by a Luger-the same which was used in the Green and O'Dowd shootings. Officer John Weir named Robin Jackson as having been the gunman in both those killings. It's possible Nairac was at Buskhill directing the operation, but Jackson could very well have been the man who shot Brian McCoy with the Luger.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:23, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Nairac

message: We need to find a good source to establish the number of UVF gunmen involved. I have seen the number given as anywhere from 7 to 10. Let's see this includes Harris Boyle and Wesley Somerville, plus Crozier, McDowell,  Somerville, the mysterious Englishman, Robin Jackson. I think we should say at least 7 men were present. It's highly unlikely more than ten were involved. I'd say 6 were initially at the checkpoint with the Englishman (Nairac?) arriving to make it 7. What do you think?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:29, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Agreed. ~Asarlaí 09:40, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Unfortunately I cannot find the source. I was reading about the number of gunmen just the other day, but I haven't been able to locate it again.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:32, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: Eureka!--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 13:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Number of gunmen involved

message: This part does not fall into place. How could the security forces possibly convince people the IRA would transport a device to blow up in the Republic? It's more likely the bomb was meant to explode in Newry. The Englishman's plan behind taking down the bandmembers' names and DOBs was obviously to put them on a list of suspected terrorists.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:26, 18 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I have found a source which says the bomb was meant to go off in Newry. I have added it to the article with ref.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:51, 18 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Bomb to explode in Irish Republic?

message: Considering their long-time popularity in Ireland for many years prior to their killing, I feel they deserve their own article, showing all the different line-ups.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:52, 19 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: They now have their own article!--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 14:40, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Miami Showband's own article?

message: Stephen Travers has related how he had gone to the back of the minibus when Somerville and Boyle were planting the bomb as he feared they'd damage his guitar. He recalled how one of them had punched him in the back and roughly pushed him back into the lineup. Should this be included in the article?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:19, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The more detail the merrier. ~Asarlaí 19:26, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Stephen Travers pushed back into line

message: What troubles me by all the accounts of the massacre is how Brian McCoy was convinced that the soldiers were regular British Army and not the UDR? When the mysterious Englishman arrived on the scene, his view appeared to have been reinforced. The only thing I can conclude is that when he pulled over and the soldier approached the bus, McCoy (being from the North and familiar with the UDR) immediately looked for the special UDR insignia on the beret and possibly found it lacking. Perhaps it was this that convinced him, in spite of the men having spoken in Northern Irish accents. The photos of Somerville and Boyle certainly do not resemble regular British Army personnel.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:32, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: After perusing the Ulster Defence Regiment article, it appears that they had a special regimental cap badge which was a gold Maid of Erin surmounted by a crown. Had they been wearing these on their berets that night surely McCoy would have recognised them as UDR. Travers never said anything about whether or not they had this badge on their caps.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 13:22, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: This has been resolved by reading Stephen Travers personal account of events (Shared Troubles) that night. Brian McCoy had been convinced it was a legitimate checkpoint when he pulled over; however, he presumed the patrol was under the auspices of the regular British Army only after the officer arrived on the scene. The soldiers had indeed been wearing their UDR berets and all had Northern accents. McCoy could not have believed them to be anything other than UDR until that Englishman in his light-coloured beret appeared and took charge.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 13:04, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Brian McCoy

message: Does anyone know the ages of McAlea and Millar at the time of the massacre?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Ages of McAlea and Millar

message: All sources say that McCoy was shot nine times by a Luger pistol in the initial gunfire; the Barron Report confirms that a Luger was used to kill him. However, Travers has stated that while he was lying on the ground he heard the gunman who was approaching him kick and then fired a shot at the body of McCoy. A Luger can fire 8 rounds before having to be reloaded so I presume McCoy was hit 8 times in the initial firing and the ninth bullet was received when he was already dead. This alas is OR so we need a source to back this up. Robin Jackson has been linked to that Luger, so it's presumed that Jackson was the gunman who shot McCoy; he would also have been the man Travers said had kicked the bodies  and was approaching him to finish him off seeing as McCoy was shot 9 times by the same Luger. Any thoughts or comments? Hopefully Travers book elaborates on this.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:26, 27 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Brian McCoy shot 9 times

message: * In general, I favour no in-line citations in the Lead section. This is because the Lead is/should be a summary of information contained in the rest of the article, which should (of course) be sufficiently referenced.
*Comment: three of the citations are needed as they source quotations and a description of the attack as a massacre.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:07, 4 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Intro

message: *No need for the pipelink in the first sentence. “... from their fans on both sides of the Irish border” is unambiguous. Sorry, didn't realise there was no article of that name. So: change the pipelink in the first sentence from “... from their fans on both sides of the Irish border” to “... from their fans on both sides of the Irish border”
* Change “In late 1974, the Miami Showband's song Clap Your Hands and Stomp Your Feet (featuring O'Toole on lead vocals) was a big hit in Ireland, reaching #8 in the charts.” to “In late 1974, the Miami Showband's song Clap Your Hands and Stomp Your Feet (featuring O'Toole on lead) which reached number eight in the Irish chart. Does Irish charts have a page?
. I'm not sure if there's an article on Irish charts, I'll have to check
::See Irish Singles Chart.  Ghmyrtle (talk) 07:58, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text:  Thanks, Daicaregos (talk) 13:33, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: The Miami Showband

message: *“In 1968, the conflict known as "The Troubles" had begun in Northern Ireland.” Not sure of the tense implied here, but it should be saying “The conflict in Northern Ireland, known as "The Troubles", began in 1968.”
* Re: "On 4 April 1974, the proscription against the UVF had been lifted by Merlyn Rees,Secretary of State for Northern Ireland." Do you know of the relevant article that the "proscription" against the UVF could be pipelinked?
 I've pipelinked it to the Ulster Volunteer Force article.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 06:24, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I have changed it to lower case.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 06:24, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Political situation in Northern Ireland

message: * "southern Irish-based"? Of course it is difficult to please everyone and to be NPOV. How about "Five members of the Dublin-based band were travelling home after a gig ... "? (btw, "Dublin" should be Wikilinked once, and on first use)
--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 06:50, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Bogus checkpoint

message: * "attempted to justify" implies that they didn't. How about just saying something like "Immediately after the attack the UVF leadership issued a statement, under the heading ... "?
* Some thoughts on William McCrea: that he was a politician does not convey his power and influence – he could have been third or fourth in a local community council election and still be considered a politician. Noting that he was, or became, an MP and an AM shows the depth of support for him (or his platform) in the community/electorate. Could you expand that a little. It may also be interesting to note who succeeded him in his constituency (maybe).
 I really don't think we need to elaborate too much on McCrea, as he has his own article. I did add that he was MP for Mid-Ulster but lost his seat in the 1997 general election to Martin McGuiness as you suggested.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:21, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Aftermath

message: * Re "... Portadown's Killycomain estate ..." I refer you to false possessives and the BBC style guide above. Also, would estate form part of the name of Killycomain Estate, thereby needing a capital 'E' ?
--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 13:03, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks. You have a really fine article here. Review ends. Daicaregos (talk) 14:31, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you. Your review was thorough, but relatively painless. Thanks a million for your patient assistance, sage advice, astute observations, and wonderful encouragement!! Cheers, Dai.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 14:37, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: My pleasure. Daicaregos (talk) 14:49, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Memorials

message: I think this subsection is too long. Does anybody else agree with me that it should be broken up with another subsection added: Explosion?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:08, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Agree. As each paragraph in that section deals with separate topics, a subsection "Explosion" could be introduced at the paragraph beginning "Out of sight of the band members ...". Another subsection could be set up for the paragraph beginning "Almost all of the gunmen were indeed British soldiers ... ". Not sure what to call it though. Daicaregos (talk) 09:19, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh, that one's easy: Robin Jackson as it focuses entirely upon him.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:23, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Sure. Why not. We'll have to re-site the images. Daicaregos (talk) 09:26, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I just added Robin Jackson and the Mid-Ulster UVF. What do you think?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:30, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Sums up the subsection well. Daicaregos (talk) 09:33, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the image of the UDR soldier should stay where it is. Your thoughts?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:48, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree. Daicaregos (talk) 12:04, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: The article now looks more focused. Don't you agree?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 12:08, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: It certainly does. Daicaregos (talk) 12:38, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bogus checkpoint 

message: I think the lead pretty much summarises all the key points unless I have missed something. It descibes the band, highlights the dynamics of the incident, the perps, the allegations including Nairac, the convictions, Glenanne gang/Robin Jackson links, plus at the end the quoted summaries by journalists. What do others think?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:45, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Overall the lead is good. I read it then read it again, also skimming a few times. I understand the peer review discussion touched on the third paragraph with the quoted summaries, and you made some changes. I am not sure that paragraph should be quite so long though; it is engaging and kept my interest, but I found myself briefly wondering what had happened to the article about the showband killings, "this is not the same article I started reading." If it would be possible to either keep the incident in closer focus in that part of the lead or else revise to shorten the paragraph by a dozen or two words, I would recommend trying to tighten it up. I see how the atmospheric overview relates, but something about the way it develops at that point had me unsure for a moment. Don't worry if you feel such a copy edit unnecessary, it is however a comment I thought I should make. Other than that insight, I again think it is good and agree with the peer review, a well presented piece overall; in fact outstanding. Sswonk (talk) 04:34, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you for your insights. I see where you're coming from but considering the massacre was political, the background is needed in the lead. I'm not sure where the paragraph should be tightened up, without it losing the explanation regarding loyalists fears following the IRA/MI6 talks. I  think I'll leave the article as it now stands and wait for the comments of the GA reviewer. It's easier to remove text than add it back in. Thanks again for your input and praise, Sswonk. It's a tragic story that needed to be fully, reliably, and truthfully told in an encyclopedia.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 07:48, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Lead

message: === Comments from Malleus Fatuorum ===
;Lead
*The opening sentence just doesn't work for me. It seems to be cramming in just a tad too much information, and I find that "The ... Miami Showband Massacre ... were a bombing and shooting attack" to be especially jarring.
 I have since fixed the sentence.
;Political situation in Northern Ireland
*What relevance does the May 1974 strike have?
: It has much significance. Following the strike, loyalist paramilitary groups began with attacks specifically-directed against southern Irish targets, including the Dublin and Monaghan bombings and the Dublin-based Miami Showband.
;Bogus checkpoint
*"As McCoy rolled down the window and produced his driving licence, soldiers came up to the minibus ...". The attackers are called soldiers in this section, yet they were called gunmen in the lead. My understanding is that they weren't all soldiers as in members of the British Army.
 I changed soldiers to gunmen
*"At no time did the Englishman speak to any of the band members ...". Do we know that he was an Englishman? All we seem to know is that he had an English accent.
;Robin Jackson and the Mid-Ulster UVF
*A report in the Irish Times implicated Jackson in the 1974 Dublin car bombings; among more than 100 killings attributed to him, according to the Pat Finucane Centre, the Derry-based civil rights group." The punctuation needs fixing here. Whatever follows a semicolon must be a complete sentence.
*"Jackson had assumed command of the Mid-Ulster UVF just a few days before the Miami Showband attack ...". This is a little repetitious, as we were told just a few sentences higher up that Jackson was in command at the time of the attack. The material needs to be coalesced.
*"Journalist Joe Tiernan claims that Hanna was shot for refusing to participate in the Miami Showband attack. He also alleged that Hanna became an informer ...". Why do the tenses not match here?
;UVF reaction
*"Within twelve hours of the attack the UVF's Brigade Staff (Belfast leadership) issued a statement." We've already been told this at the end of the Explosion section.
 I mentioned the statement in one sentence at the end of Explosions to explain how the bodies were identified. The full statement is in UVF reaction
;Convictions
*"A third person, former UDR soldier John James Somerville (aged 37, a lorry-helper ...". What on Earth is a "lorry-helper"?
: I haven't a clue. That's what the source says. It's possible Somerville described himself as such.
;Allegations
*"... close to the Irish Republic border". Is that a correct name for the country? I thought that in English it was the Republic of Ireland?
;References
*Something's gone wrong with citation #45.
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===Comments from Hchc2009===
A couple of thoughts on what is an interesting article:
* Early on, the article says: "Although some of the gunmen were members of the British Army". Later on, it notes that "Almost all of the gunmen were indeed British soldiers". This probably needs to be consistent, and we should probably give a number for how many gunmen were British soldiers (if the article says this somewhere, I couldn't see it).
. All we know is Crozier, McDowell, Wesley Somerville, and Boyle were UDR/UVF. JJ Somerville was ex UDR and Robin Jackson, who was allegedly there, ex UDR. So a total of four serving UDR members as far as we know seeing as the others were never identified by their comrades.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:00, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I mention his looks in the Shootings section because he was shot 22 times in the face so felt it belonged there. If it looks out of place, I'll move it up to the Miami Showband section.
*NB: In the south, when I was younger, a lorry helper was someone who'd go along with the lorry driver to help load and unload the lorry along the route (you don't see them so much any more, because of the small fork-lift vehicles that most of the larger vehicles have). Don't know if that helps at all?
Hchc2009 (talk) 17:31, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

text: The bit about lorry helper is dead on, especially as UVF leader Robin Jackson drove a chicken lorry for a living. So it makes perfect sense.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:43, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

text: For the information of all, the principal editors chose to work directly from my notes in my sandbox.  I will post the comments and responses to a sub-page for archival purposes in due course and will do a re-read and give more comments tomorrow.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:17, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: My comments are here; I am still adding to them but I see no reason why this article shouldn't take a shot at FAC.  I can't guarantee a pass but it will not be shot at sight.--Wehwalt (talk) 01:00, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Pre-FAC check 

message: A couple of thoughts on what is an interesting article:
* Early on, the article says: "Although some of the gunmen were members of the British Army". Later on, it notes that "Almost all of the gunmen were indeed British soldiers". This probably needs to be consistent, and we should probably give a number for how many gunmen were British soldiers (if the article says this somewhere, I couldn't see it).
. All we know is Crozier, McDowell, Wesley Somerville, and Boyle were UDR/UVF. JJ Somerville was ex UDR and Robin Jackson, who was allegedly there, ex UDR. So a total of four serving UDR members as far as we know seeing as the others were never identified by their comrades.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:00, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I mention his looks in the Shootings section because he was shot 22 times in the face so felt it belonged there. If it looks out of place, I'll move it up to the Miami Showband section.
*NB: In the south, when I was younger, a lorry helper was someone who'd go along with the lorry driver to help load and unload the lorry along the route (you don't see them so much any more, because of the small fork-lift vehicles that most of the larger vehicles have). Don't know if that helps at all?
Hchc2009 (talk) 17:31, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

text: The bit about lorry helper is dead on, especially as UVF leader Robin Jackson drove a chicken lorry for a living. So it makes perfect sense.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:43, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments from Hchc2009

message: Working on it, will have comments during the course of today.  Very thorough article.--Wehwalt (talk) 10:23, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: For the information of all, the principal editors chose to work directly from my notes in my sandbox.  I will post the comments and responses to a sub-page for archival purposes in due course and will do a re-read and give more comments tomorrow.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:17, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: My comments are here; I am still adding to them but I see no reason why this article shouldn't take a shot at FAC.  I can't guarantee a pass but it will not be shot at sight.--Wehwalt (talk) 01:00, 18 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments from Wehwalt

message: I think the article should say that one of the convicted killers, John James Somerville is now an evangelical minister in Belfast. Should it be put at the end of the Convictions section?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 15:04, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Why not have the last paragraph in the aftermath section devoted to the long-term fate of those involved?--Wehwalt (talk) 15:16, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I added a new subsection instead.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 15:42, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: J.J. Somerville

message: Fran O'Toole, Brian McCoy & Tony Geraghty have their ages shown here as 29, 33 & 23 respectively, but they were actually 28, 32, & 24 respectively. This can be verified within this article if you zoom up on the photograph of the memorial plaque, where the ages are shown in brackets under the names.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bournville225 (talk • contribs) 10:13, 16 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I obtained their ages from impeccable sources, namely Peter Taylor, CAIN, the Barron Report. Surely they couldn't all be mistaken? I'm afraid you'll have to produce a RS which contradicts the ages given by Taylor, CAIN and Henry Barron.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:44, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

text: The Pat Finucane Centre is reliable enough so I'll change the ages right away. Thanks for pointing out my error.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 07:11, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks like the additional reference I added also has the wrong ages! Bjmullan (talk) 11:38, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Ages of Victims 

message: The refs I linked to the Sunday Business Post article by Tom McGurk can only be read now through subscription only. However, the same article was published by the Pat Finucane Centre. Should I change the refs to link to this page instead?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:35, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I went ahead and linked it as there were so many dead refs which shouldn't be so on a GA article and it's the same article as appeared in the Sunday Business Post. This way readers can verify the citations for free rather than pay a subscription to do so!--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 08:46, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: Sunday Business Post ref

message: I'd like to bring into question the relevance of Colin Wills' (Sunday Mirror) commentary that the attack was "one of the worst atrocities in the 30-year history of the Troubles". First of all, it just wasn't. Second of all, nobody in Ireland (North or South) affected by the troubles knows/cares who Colin Wills is or, about, what he has to say. I'd like to suggest that it be removed as it makes absolutely no sense, insults everyone who died during The Troubles, and was written from a comfortable chair in Dublin far far away that trauma. 
If anyone would like an example, contact the HET and ask them about the countless innocent lives that were taken as well as the ferocious fire fights that took place in the heart of Belfast.
What an embarrassment. 
93.89.252.130 (talk) 20:44, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Relevance of Colin Wills' Commentary 

message: The article lead now says that the massacre “was an attack by the Ulster Volunteer Force ... and the British Army's Ulster Defence Regiment” This is an inaccurate and misleading summary of the article. This was not an attack by the UDR. The attack was carried out by the UDA UVF. While some of the attackers were members of the UDR, not all were, which the lead already noted correctly. Please self-revert. Daicaregos (talk) 13:06, 26 October 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: User Mownberry is a persistently disruptive account that is currently blocked for vandalism and edit-warring. I doubt you will receive any rationale response, if any response, from this user in regards to this discussion. Mabuska (talk) 19:22, 28 October 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for reverting Dai. It was a UVF attack using UDR members but to say it was a UDR attack as well implies the regiment had sanctioned the ambush which it clearly DID NOT.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 07:21, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Not a UDR attack 

message: I've reverted this edit. The link to the cited reference does not work. Please add back with a working link, although the related text should make clear what the sympathy note was for i.e. did it express sympathy for members of the band, for members of the UDR or for everyone killed. Also, the 'G' in British Government, should correctly be upper case (i.e. British government is incorrect). I checked the Government of Ireland article and have amended Irish Government to Government of Ireland and have reinstated copy edits improving the text. Daicaregos (talk) 08:26, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Although I have no doubt that Combat did issue a sympathy note, given that Boyle and Somerville were such high-ranking UVF members, Dai was correct in removing the allegation until there is a working link and a more detailed explanation as to the contents of the note and for whom it was intended. It's extremely unlikely it was for the deceased bandmembers but we must remember that we write for Wikipedia readers and many do not understand how strongly the battle lines were drawn in 1975. Thanks Dai.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:53, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  14 February edit 

message: When your edit is reverted, per WP:BRD you should justify that on the talk page rather than simply reverting.   I gave clear reasons for that reversion in the edit summary and I will revert in 24 hours if you don't gain agreement to the changes here.  Further, this habit of using your 1 revert to impose a contested edit is becoming disruptive and it happens again I will take to to Arbitration Enforcement for clarification ----Snowded TALK 10:07, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: A look at both our edit histories makes it quite plain who's being disruptive here, and your fondness for only two thirds of BRD has been noted elsewhere. I thought we were agreed about capitalisation. Gob Lofa (talk) 10:13, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Interesting thought that, you are the one proposing changes, but reverting you is to be considered disruptive?  You haven't addressed all the points made in the edit summary here so it is a little difficult to discuss.  In respect of the capitalisation I favour The over the and I think that is the norm in common reference.   If you want to make the change on a range of articles (as you do) then you should start by getting agreement at IMOS or similar.  That way there will be a standard agreed by the community.   If you respond to the other reasons given for my revert then I will happily deal with them.  Otherwise without agreement here you will be reverted and the extent of your gaming means that if it continues it will have to go to enforcement for clarification.   ----Snowded TALK 10:20, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Once again; I thought we were agreed. Gob Lofa (talk) 10:24, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Please provide diff for agreement.  You keep resisting taking general changes to community fora which seems strange.  Trying to make policy by multiple small edits is far less effective than working with the community as a whole.   Otherwise please provide response to arguments given in edit summary for reverting your change ----Snowded TALK 10:33, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: At this community forum (Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Ireland#Capitalising_.27the.27), where I was happily working with the community as a whole to make policy, and you were happy with the majority view. What's changed? Gob Lofa (talk) 11:00, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: That was not resolved, there were two opinions I responded and no one came back.  I said I thought the use of the capital was better, but I would abide by a community decision.  Neither you or the editor responded so the discussion is open. ----Snowded TALK 11:14, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: That's an interesting take from someone who doesn't have a strong tradition of responding to points made on talk page discussions. Another way of looking at it would be that three opinions were expressed, two of which disagreed with yours, and you said you'd go with the majority. I'm also not happy with how your edit implies that the ROI's influence in NI wouldn't be reciprocal. Gob Lofa (talk) 11:37, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree with the revert as regards "which would have given the Government of Ireland a voice in running Northern Ireland." The strike of May 1974 was in protest against the Irish government being given a voice in running Northern Ireland, not against any "reciprocal" arrangement. I've given my views on "the/The Troubles" at WT:IE. I do, however, think that labelling edits as "disruptive" just because they represent the view of one person in a two-person dispute is overdoing it. A content dispute is just a content dispute, and an edit that is contested does not have more of an advantage under 1RR than under 3RR. Additionally, BRD – besides not being policy – does not put the onus on the person making the bold edit to initiate the discussion. There was a month in which to initiate a discussion on this page; the opportunity was not availed of. A read of Wikipedia:BOLD, revert, discuss cycle#Discuss may be in order. Note in particular the sentence, "If your reversion was reverted, then do not re-revert to your version."  Scolaire (talk) 12:54, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Gaming the 1RR rule by Gob Lofa 

message: Could somebody please revert this article to the stable version prior to 15 November 2015? A hell of a lot of painstaking work by Daicaragos and myself has been pulled apart by edit warring and unnecessary rewording. We both got it up to GA status which means if it ain't broke don't fix it. Additional information is another matter but just taking out sentences and words is a bit frustrating to say the least. It is the reason why I rarely edit at Wikipedia anymore. I hear the clock ticking away on my life and spending time and effort only to see it swiped away with a touch of the keyboard makes me want to totally abandon Wikipedia.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:40, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Nothing to stop you doing that Jeanne other than the capitalisation of "The" which has been agreed elsewhere should be "the".  If I reverted every small change Gob Lofa makes I would have a job for life so I confine myself to those which change the meaning of the article (which I did here) letting anything else go.  But if you want a full revert to 15 November I'm happy to support you in that.  ----Snowded TALK 09:44, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: I cannot do the reversion. I tried. We could revert it then add "the" which I also support.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:47, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: worked for me ----Snowded TALK 09:50, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks Snowded. Truth is I forgot how to do it. I'm rarely on Wikipedia anymore.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:52, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Well stay around if you want to defend it ----Snowded TALK 09:52, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Oh I shall. This aricle represents a lot of hard work by Daicaregos and me.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:12, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: "His leadership was endorsed by the UVF's leader Gusty Spence." What's the point of including this? Were there many brigade leaders whose leadership Spence opposed? Gob Lofa (talk) 11:24, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

text: Great. Would you like to discuss the questions I asked? Gob Lofa (talk) 18:00, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

text: Dai/Jeanne I do think it behoves you to answer Gob Lofa's question ----Snowded TALK 18:02, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: @ Gob Lofa. Glad you have chosen the discussion route. With respect to mentioning Gusty Spence, the preceding sentence says that Hanna set up the Mid-Ulster Brigade and that he was its self-appointed leader. Noting that the UVF's overall leader approved of this shows he was working within the UVF not operating alone, thereby adding context. Please explain what you mean by “Great”. Daicaregos (talk) 10:48, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: It's great that you're choosing the discussion route. I disagree; it's needless detail that's covered in more relevant articles. Unless there were brigade leaders who weren't endorsed by the leadership, it's not notable. Gob Lofa (talk) 15:44, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Astonishing how we not only had the same view, but independently arrived at exactly the same choice of wording to express it … incredible, actually. Of course, you are entitled to disagree with me. As I am entitled to disagree with you. Let's see what other editors think. Daicaregos (talk) 16:12, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: Gob Lofa it was I who included the information about Spence endorsing Hanna's leadership. I am surprised that you fail to see the significance of this. During the four months Spence was on the run from jail he structured the UVF into  battalions, platoons and companies; it was during this period that Hanna formed the Mid-Ulster Brigade and appointed himself its leader with Spence's full approval. At the time Spence wielded much power as leader of the UVF so it is important for readers to know Hanna had Spence's backing. It gave Hanna much autonomy as the Brigade, with its power base located in Lurgan and Portadown, was a remove from the Shankill Road-led mainstream UVF. When Billy Wright set up a rival organisation the UVF threatened him and ordered his expulsion from NI. Bearing this in mind, I think it needs to be mentioned here that Hanna's brigade and leadership were both fully sanctioned by Spence who was still overall head of the UVF although Sammy McClelland was Chief of Staff.  This article received careful scrutiny when it was reviewed for GA status and the inclusion of Spence passed muster. I think it should remain.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 15:16, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: It's fully relevant for the articles about Hanna and the Brigade; here it just comes across as filler. Unless Hanna's endorsement from Spence was an aberration in the usual leadership-brigade leader relationships, there's no reason to include it here. Gob Lofa (talk) 15:35, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Stable version 

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message: Tried to solve a reference error but only managed to change its nature. Apols, could someone take a look? RegardsKeith-264 (talk) 10:11, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
replies: text: No worries. Thanks for noting it here. Looks OK now. Daicaregos (talk) 11:56, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
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"The letter says that MI5 also supplied the UVF with detonators "which they had set to explode prematurely," as happened during the attack on the Miami Showband near Banbridge in 1975."
Not sure where to fold this into the article yet.
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thread_title: State Papers 1987

message: FWIW: Netflix has a new documentary called: "Remastered: the Miami Showband Massacre.  https://www.netflix.com/title/80191046  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bharshaw (talk • contribs) 19:27, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
thread_title: Netflix Documentary

message: In the article in the aftermath section it should be noted that the information has been proven to be untrue and full of presumed and false information.
Blaming victims is classic defense when the truth demonstrates the guilt of the government and those working with them. Interesting that none of the band members were ever prosecuted for anything yet the attackers were conficted of murder. Tahester (talk) 01:08, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Which specific information is untrue and where does it imply that the band members were guilty of anything? Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 17:53, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Erroneous Information