Talk:United Launch Alliance

message: Hello! I'm back with a request to update this page. For the end of the Delta II section (after " These parts will be assembled to create a nearly-complete Delta II, for exhibition in its 7420-10 configuration"), I propose adding mention of the Delta II opening and adjusting text to state it has happened.  
* On March 23, 2021, United Launch Alliance’s Delta II rocket joined the Kennedy Space Center Visitor Complex (KSCVC) Rocket Garden to preserve the legacy of the rocket that launched 155 times over nearly 30 years for NASA, the Department of Defense and commercial customers.
I've used a Florida Today source here, but here are ULA links as well, if helpful. 
* https://blog.ulalaunch.com/blog/delta-ii-public-exhibit-honors-legendary-rocket
*https://www.ulalaunch.com/about/news/2021/03/23/united-launch-alliance-delta-ii-rocket-honored-at-grand-opening-ceremony
I've taken a first stab at proposing specific text for consideration, but I'm open to editors' preferred wording and sourcing. Help updating the page on my behalf is appreciated. Thanks! ULA Megan (talk) 14:11, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Sorry , what you've proposed simply isn't appropriate for Wikipedia. The tone was already questionable and this compounds it. Please keep the tone of your proposals encyclopedic and remember that this isn't ULA's corporate website. Seddon talk 22:54, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

text: I've updated the sentence to reflect the rockets installation as KSC. Seddon talk 22:55, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Delta II Ribbon Cutting   

message: Recently a change to the article was made an IP recently located from near Greenwood Village, Colorado - home to ULA. Could you please ensure that no employees edit the Wikipedia article and that changes continue to be proposed through this page. Undeclared conflict of interest editing is a source of major concern for the Wikipedia communities and we have a zero tolerance policy. Preventative action will be require to be undertaken should this occur again. Seddon talk 02:58, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: Cautionary and only warning to United Launch Alliance

message: Hello! I’d like to request an edit that reverts the addition of the “retiring” section and changes the “retiring” language to “operational.” As shown on multiple NASA resources, rockets are categorized as “operational” if they have an active manifest, not “retiring.” See where Kathy Lueders, associate administrator of NASA’s human spaceflight directorate, referenced the Dragon spacecraft’s “operational phase”: https://spaceflightnow.com/2020/11/10/nasa-formally-certifies-spacexs-crew-dragon-for-operational-astronaut-flights/ [spaceflightnow.com]
This is relevant as Atlas V has 17 flights remaining and ICPS has two missions remaining, as noted in their respective sections. We recommend that the “retiring” section be changed to “operational,” and include Vulcan Centaur following its successful first launch, or the “retiring” designation be removed entirely. 
See language on NASA’s Launch Services Program Rockets webpage that refers to the Falcon Heavy as an “operational rocket”: https://www.nasa.gov/launch-services-program-rockets/ [nasa.gov]
NASA’s “Basics of Spaceflight” guide only uses “retired,” not “retiring,” and “in operational service” to describe launch vehicles in Chapter 14: https://science.nasa.gov/learn/basics-of-space-flight/chapter14-1/ [science.nasa.gov]
Lastly, NASA’s Space Shuttle was not considered “retired” until its final mission was complete: “In January 2004, President George W. Bush announced his Vision for Space Exploration. Among other goals, the Vision called for the retirement of the space shuttle after completion of the assembly of the International Space Station. In July 2011, the STS-135 mission with NASA astronauts Christopher J. Ferguson, Douglas G. Hurley, Sandra H. Magnus, and Rex J. Walheim aboard, completed that objective. During this final space shuttle mission, the last flight of the orbiter Atlantis, they delivered payloads and supplies to support the International Space Station for more than one year. The successful completion of the 12-day mission to the station brought an end to the 30-year space shuttle program.” (https://www.nasa.gov/history/10-years-ago-sts-135-the-space-shuttles-grand-finale/ [nasa.gov]) ULA Megan (talk) 13:08, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: We are not required to use the same language that ULA uses or that NASA uses. We are supposed to use our editorial judgement, based on what secondary sources say to describe the situation. Customers can no longer book new Atlas flights and ULA has announced EOL. In my opinion the word "retiring" most accurately describes this situation. "Retiring" does not preclude "operational", just as a "retiring" employee is still employed. -Arch dude (talk) 15:30, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

text: Separately, thank you for the care you are taking as a paid editor. Not all paid editors are as scrupulous as you are. -Arch dude (talk) 16:12, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Classify products as “operational” or “retired” 

message: My changes were reverted by @Arch dude. I propose cleaning up the infobox by:
* Adding a comma to the 2,500 in the number of employees
* Not listing prior numbers of employees in the infobox. This could be better displayed as a table, if proper references can be provided.
* Trim down the products list by grouping into Retiring: and Retired:  lines
* Use Template:US$ for the financial figures.
Any objections? -- RickyCourtney (talk) 21:48, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: No objections to this approach. The prior employee count table could go in a footnote. My objections was mostly because it looked like an attempt to sanitize the article. -Arch dude (talk) 22:40, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Any citations for the 2009 and 2014 employment figures? RickyCourtney (talk) 22:45, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Infobox cleanup