Talk:Tomoyo After: It's a Wonderful Life

message: The story revolves around Tomoya and Tomoyo's life in the summer vacation after the events in Clannad, together with her half-sister, brother, and his ex-girlfriend.
I'd like to clarify this, but I'm not too certain of the subject matter. Anyone willing to help?--Sqrfrk 19:24, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Uh...what? 

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Also changed the tildes to a colon spacing. It's a more logical way of writing out subtitles in English. The original Japanese format is still mentioned. --SeizureDog 20:05, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article title 

message: "The goal ... was for the player to enable viewing of h scene." is entirely misleading (in fact the only player "win-able" h scene in this particular game punishes the player into the bad end), and shouldn't be emphasis like it is a reward or an achievement for playing the game. The goal and thus gameplay of Visual Novels, similiar to choose your own adventure books, is to reach the "best ending", the h scenes are bonus.  The fact the title is mentioned to contain sex scenes should be sufficent. 6:37, 26 April 2007
:Fair enough, but I still want to include a note about the H-scenes; I'll reword it to comply with your reasoning.--十八 00:08, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Gameplay 

message: #Well written?: The prose is well written.
#Factually accurate?: The content is properly cited with first and third party sources
#Broad in coverage?: The content covers the major aspects of a video game.
#Neutral point of view?: Does a good job of remaining neutral and unbiased.
#Article stability? Does not seem to be any edit wars of any kind or debates to split or merge content.
#Images?: Image use is fine, the fair use rationales are a bare bones but still acceptable.
:GA Pass 
The major issues were addressed and the article has been further expanded past what was requested.Additional suggestions to further improve article
#The more you source, the harder it is for people to dispute content. The more reliable sources in an article the more credibility it carries and it never hurts to source anything.
#Expand the "Reception" section.
#Beef up the fair use rationales
#Maybe include an image of an album cover or manga cover (after it's released).
All in all this is a good article. Good job to the editors, keep up the good work. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. (Guyinblack25 talk 15:57, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Pass

message: Should it be mentioned in the "Media" section, that Clannad's OVA, or episode 24, is based after this eroge? AngelicMasterMind (talk) 20:58, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not actually. The OVA was an adaptation of Tomoyo's arc from Clannad, not Tomoyo After.--十八 00:27, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Clannad, Episode 24. (''[[Kyoto Animation]]'') 

message: The article currently states "A version of the CS Edition for the Xbox 360 will be published by Prototype and released in 2009." but it's not listed at Prototype's website. Has it been canceled? The sentence should at least be reworded since 2009 is now a thing of the past. --Remy Suen (talk) 22:46, 31 December 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: As far as I know, it hasn't been canceled. Prototype is known for their delays, so it's not surprising it's not out yet. And they usually don't update their site until a given game is very close to being released.--十八 01:20, 1 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  360 version cancelled? 

message: As it seems, ITMedia reviewed the PS2 port back in 2007; hopefully it'll come in handy.  -- クラウド６６８ 08:34, 2 February 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  ITMedia Review 

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