Talk:Nemesis Reborn

message: I began work at the beginning of this article with a few minor revisions, hoping that standards would improve as the page progressed. I still have not made it to the end of the page yet, but I think it's safe to assume my hopes were in vain..?! 
The harder I look, the more problems I encounter, mainly with syntactical inaccuracies and grammatical gremlins. After making a few necessary changes to maintain the illusion that the piece was written by adults(!), I found it too difficult to fit it all together again without substantial re-writing.
I hate having to be so fundamentally ruthless with articles that other people have spent so much time and effort creating (I specialise in the small, quick spelling corrections these days B-p) - and additionally I understand that the majority of contributors to this particular page are likely to be young people, who I would hate to discourage from future edits - so I have left well alone for now!
If anyone else wishes to take it on (anyone?!) I offer you thanks and good luck. If, however, it's going to be left to me to make the changes, could I please have some reassurance that there is a consensus of opinion here, and that I'm doing the right thing?
Many thanks.
Codeye (talk) 04:20, 23 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: There are a heap of problems with the article. I'd be in support of any changes made to the article and will be happy to offer some assistance in a couple of days. Themeparkgc  Talk  08:59, 23 August 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Large-scale revision needed? 

message: I've just reverted several edits. It looks like user 86.131.147.168 added a note to say the ride was closing (with no source, and I can't find any mention of it on the internet anywhere), and the page was subsequently blanked by user 31.54.153.79. User 86.131.147.168 then re-added the infobox and the first section, which has since been cleaned up slightly by a few bots. I've reverted to the version before all this vandalism. 128.243.2.33 (talk) 12:38, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  30 October 2014 vandalism 

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message: @GoneIn60 The part about Nemesis Sub-Terra reopening belongs in the retracking section because Merlin used Sub-Terra to build hype for Nemesis' reopening. WikiHmmmm... (talk) 22:53, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: – That's a good point. I went ahead and added a statement about the platform to that section. Feel free to further modify as needed. However, I kept a majority of the details regarding Sub-Terra in the section that was already covering it. I think the split works, but open to other ideas if that doesn't work for you. --GoneIn60 (talk) 23:21, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sub-Terra 

message: Hi all,
please correct me if I’m wrong but I thought John Wardley designed the layout and Werner merely consulted on the technical side? HiddenHerobrine (talk) 14:48, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: RCDB only has Werner Stengel listed as the designer, as do other reliable sources. Wardley is typically responsible for creating basic concepts for the rides he has consulted or led production on, but he is not the engineer that designs the actual coaster layout. See Talk:Wicker Man (roller coaster)#Design for a similar discussion that covers this in more detail. --GoneIn60 (talk) 06:17, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Designer 

message: Hello. 
I wondered if it should say Designer(s) John Wardley (Creative Lead) & Werner Stengel (Layout) instead of just Werner Stengel. LukeK93 (talk) 14:57, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
replies: text:  No, it should not. See the previous discussion above –  --GoneIn60 (talk) 19:51, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Designer section.