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Talk:Michael Edelstein

message: My name is Jonathan, and I work for the Public Relations company (Freud Communications) that represents NBCUniversal. I would like the community to consider a number of factual additions to the biography of Michael Edelstein. Please find below these additions alongside source material:
* Michael joined NBCUniversal International in June 2010 as President of International TV Production and relocated to London.http://www.variety.com/article/VR1118020008; http://www.screendaily.com/news/production/michael-edelstein-takes-international-tv-post-at-nbc-universal/5014514.articleMichael Edelstein also serves as a board member of WTTV, NBCUniversal’s joint TV production venture with Working Titlehttp://www.broadcastnow.co.uk/news/international/europe/nbcu-replaces-odonoghue/5014520.articleEdelstein also helped launch the CSI drama franchise when he was Director, Current Programs at CBS Entertainment.http://www.broadcastnow.co.uk/news/international/europe/nbcu-replaces-odonoghue/5014520.article
* Michael won two Golden Globes for best comedy series, for 'Desperate Housewives'http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0410975/awards
* NBCUniversal International’s in-house production labels include Carnival, creators of Emmy and Golden Globe winning Downton Abbey,http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/nbcu-international-tv-production-takes-191051;http://www.televisual.com/blog-detail/Flexing-NBCUs-studio-muscle_bid-221.htmlalongside the entertainment label Monkey Kingdom which produces Made in Chelsea,http://www.broadcastnow.co.uk/news/indies/nbcu-acquires-monkey-kingdom/5020605.articleChocolate Media a factual/entertainment labelhttp://www.variety.com/article/VR1118054714and Lucky Giant Productions which specialises in comedy.http://www.deadline.com/2011/09/nbcu-international-integrates-tv-divisions/
* Outside of the UK, NBCU International has deals with LARK Productions in Canada, producers of Real Housewives of Vancouverhttp://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/nbc-universal-backs-canuck-tv-55201and an equity investment in Matchbox Pictures (Australia), producers of The Slaphttp://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/nbcu-international-tv-production-takes-191051; http://www.theaustralian.com/au/media/the-slap-gets-bafta-nomination/story-e6frg996-1226337795419; http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0249047/news
For an image of Michael Edelstein, please see the image on this website: http://images1.variety.com/graphics/photos/_muge/edelstein_michael.jpg as this has been cleared for use, rights wise etc.
If an original copy of the image is required for upload, then please leave a comment on this post and this can be arranged.
Many Thanks
Jonathan
JonathanatFreud (talk) 13:38, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Additions to the Wikipedia Biography of Michael Edelstein
Talk:Caifanes

message: means alchemy in Spanish, and has its own disambiguation page, several titles/bands. None Mexican. Needs research. Elinruby (talk) 08:45, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Alquima Comment 

message: The recently added section on their 2019 tour does not seem notable enough to include (see WP:NCONCERT). Is this information that will remain relevant? Won't we likely delete that section in a year or two? —johndburger 19:01, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  2019 Concert Tour Section
Talk:Tartesso

message: The page is not blatant advertising but instead information on the largest planned community in Buckeye, the second fastest growing city in the nation. There is no difference between this page than the page on Verrado (not blatant advertising)
Seoi-ologycom (talk) 23:49, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not blatant advertising, and therefore not subject to speedy-deletion. But that's not what I poted. I put up the regular  tag, which merely indicate that it reads like an ad, but isn't quite blatant enough for speedy-delete. You need to tone down the promotional tone of the article, and provide some links to independent, reliable sources that indicate how thi subject might be notable. I have removed the  tag, becaue it did not apply, and restore the  tag. It may wel be that the subject is notable, but article text just needs help. - Realkyhick (Talk to me) 00:20, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
Talk:Michael F. Feldkamp

message: I point out that user "Mff" is Martin F. Feldkamp himself. He also edits his articles in the German, Portuguese and Italian WP (let's not forget also the insertion in the Russian WP). I consider this to be decidedly non-transparent. Furthermore, I question the encyclopedic relevance of his awards.
The painted portrait is not encyclopedic (without any indication to the artist). I have therefore deleted it. The article contains massive self-advertisement. Mr. bobby (talk) 20:30, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Critique of the article
Talk:Dueto Voces del Rancho

message: QUIUBULE CAMARADAS ,ESPERAMOS Y LA ESTEN PASANDO BIEN Y SOLO LES ESCRIBIMOS PARA RECORDARLES LOS MOMENTOS EN QUE DISFRUTAMOS GRABANDO Y LLEVANDO A CABO LOS DESEOS QUE UNO TIENE EN CUANTO AL GENERO MUSICAL, YO SIGO ESCRIBIENDO NUEVOS TEMAS . ESPERO PRONTO PODER HECHARLES UN VISTAZO. 
HASTA JUEGO, SU COMPA  EL YAQUI DE SONORA.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.183.66.210 (talk) 19:15, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  EL YAQUI DE SONORA
Talk:Flans

message: What the hell?  I’ve been a Flans fan since 1987!  I know they had to drop the name but who the hell is this other techno group with that name and how dare they?  Plus, isn’t that some kind of copyright infringement? Solri89 (talk) 17:34, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Some other group named Flans
Talk:Michael Gerber (non-fiction writer)

message: This article is basically a list of some of the books he published.
It has less information about his life and career than we can read in most of his books or on his website. 
Plus, the e-myth page redirects here. The e-myth page should have substantial review and analysis of the e-myth principles, like the "turnkey operation" and the difference between technician, manager, and entrepreneur. This has nothing to say whatsoever about the content of his work.
This is a major oversight since the e-myth was in fact a major contribution and deserves coverage on its merits - both of his positive contributions, and their critical reception.
I don't think anyone is rating this page yet, but personally I'd give this article around 2 out of 10 on the basis of massive incompleteness.
Some articles you / people could look to before updating the Wikipedia article:
* https://www.emyth.com/about-us (describes the history of the e-myth, from the author's perspective)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lauchlanmack (talk • contribs) 04:57, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  This article is VERY incomplete ...
Talk:Michael Henderson (writer)

message: Can we have this semi-protected?  It's obvious that it attracts vandalism, and for many reasons I can see why, but that is still no excuse. RobinCarmody (talk) 21:47, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Henderson has disputed some of the facts of this article  and they need citation if they are to survive. I'd also question the claims of controversy; all blogs and comment sections attract crankiness, and unless RS observation that he is controversial is produced, those statements will have to go. Mangoe (talk) 01:43, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Disputed by subject

message: I have removed material from  that does not comply with our policy on the biographies of living persons. Biographical material must always be referenced from reliable sources, especially negative material. Negative material that does not comply with that must be immediately removed. Note that the removal does not imply that the information is either true or false.
Please do not reinsert this material unless you can provide reliable citations, and can ensure it is written in a neutral tone. Please review the relevant policies before editing in this regard. Editors should note that failure to follow this policy may result in the removal of editing privileges.--Docg 15:47, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Warning - violators will be blocked
Talk:La Gusana Ciega

message: I am not sure if the things I typed are factually accurate, but they are more faithful translations of the Spanish version of this Wikipedia article. Just one example from the first sentence: The Spanish says "un grupo formado por (nombre, nombre), y (nombre)". The English version said "a group formed by (name, name), and name". This is a direct calque, and "to form" is cognate with "formar", but in English it strongly suggests that those three people are the founding members, the original members. I changed it to "composed of" or similar.
The spelling was mostly US-style, but there was one instance of Oxford spelling. I "fixed it", in scare quotes because the Oxford Dictionary and Merriam-Webster are both valid dictionaries. Wikipedia generally recommends consistency above all else, but choosing between British and American spelling based on the topic of the article. This was only one word and only one land border from US, so let's do US spelling the whole time.
That said, I added Oxford commas. That's a joke, I call them serial commas and they are in many American style guides. Once again, my goal was consistency. Some other commas were also missing, in my opinion. Including the pair of commas around an album name, example, which is not really an opinion. I forgot the album name, wrapping it in commas was necessary and I don't know why.
I replaced "LP" with "full-length album" once and "studio album" once. LP is correct, but the first instance came right after discussing CDs, DVDs, and digital downloads, which makes me think "LP means vinyl", which I doubt is the case. Whether or not it was released on vinyl, I can see it refers to a full-length album. So that sentence is now definitely true, even if it was true before.
I added last names after first names in many cases, but the best thing in Wikipedia style is to use just last names (apellidos) if it is not the first mention. I didn't remove the first names for multiple reasons, one being that I don't want the Page History so show names being "swapped", they are being made more specific. Fluoborate (talk) 06:02, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Regarding my edits on 2019-12-10
Talk:Michael J. Daly

message: But don’t know how?  Bartman47 (talk) 06:26, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  I would like to upload Mike’s photo receiving MOH from President Truman
Talk:Michael J. Bransfield

message: Roman Catholic High School for Boys #Notable alumni says Bp. Bransfield attended Roman High. Eagle4000 (talk) 03:57, 11 March 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  which high school? 

message: Subject is in the news (Witness implicates a bishop in sex abuse scandal) , watch BLP vios.Tstrobaugh (talk) 19:16, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: More  Montco reviewing case against cleric first reported in 2007. Tstrobaugh (talk) 16:35, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: Alleged victims deny allegations
What's this about Archbishop Lori, tapped as apostolic administrator today, heading an investigation of Bransfield? Carlm0404 (talk) 14:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)

text: Pope Orders Investigation of West Virginia Bishop Over Sex AllegationsTstrobaugh (talk) 18:51, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: BLP

message: The fact that he was first ever rector in the main Washington D.C cathedral should be included with other details.2601:447:4101:41F9:15CA:DEC4:B21A:738A (talk) 18:22, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
thread_title: Interesting Background He Had

message: That's part of the current restrictions, but was also mentioned back when his resignation from this see was quickly accepted. Carlm0404 (talk) 21:33, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  When ordered to live outside West Virginia? 

message: OK, but do you notice from other sources that one of them is Msgr. Kevin Quirk, mentioned earlier in this Wikipedia article as sending whistle-blowing letter? I see that all 3 transferred to parish work, continuing as priests of this diocese. Carlm0404 (talk) 21:37, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  3 top aides resigned 

message: This language in the lede, which has been reinserted, remains problematic. (1) Since Bransfield still holds the rank of bishop, he remains a prelate, so that "former" is not correct. (2) "Disgraced" is vague and sounds opinionated. There is no clear definition of which prelates are "disgraced". Better to do what the lede already does: it states the accusations against Bransfield, the outcome of the investigation, and the restrictions imposed by Pope Francis. --Bistropha (talk) 09:01, 24 January 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  "former disgraced prelate"
Talk:OV7

message: I have checked this article and found it truthful, well organised, and not libelleous in any way. 
The tag : "This article does not cite any references or sources. Please help improve this article by adding citations to reliable sources. Unsourced material may be challenged and removed. (December 2006)" should stay but there is no reason to delete the article.
If you speak both spanish and english you can compare it to http://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/OV7 and you will find a more developed version but the basic facts are the same. This music and dance group consisted of members from both Mexico and USA and they were, and still is, famous in the whole spanish-speaking world as well as in the southwest part of USA during the 14 years the group existed and also after they were dissolved in 2003. Several of the members are now actors and singers in both USA and the latin world. So this musical group is by far famous enough to be included in wikipedia, but the article should be sourced and referenced, of course. If you look up La Onda Vaselina or Onda Vaselina or OV7 on youtube you will find hundreds of videos with this group. If you search for Onda Vaselina or OV7 on google you will find around 3 500 000 hits. So my advice is: let it stay and wait for a bi-lingual fan of the group to make it better and give it references from the article in spanish. Roger491127 (talk) 03:49, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Michael Machado

message: Mike Machado is not the Senator for the 5th District anymore. The pages acknowledges this at the end, but not in the intro. Promontoriumispromontorium (talk) 00:21, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: You can fix it :-) Be bold! Killiondude (talk) 00:45, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Old Info
Talk:Michael O'Donnell (physician)

message: The biography of Michael O'Donnell in the Zombie Planet information is incorrect.  Michael not onlyacted  in the the movie but was the fight coordinator as well.  He  is currently part of Four Seasons Mixed Martial Academy & has developed pro fighters such as Junie Browning, Josh Clark & Justin Moore.
]]  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lavancieb (talk • contribs) 19:23, 1 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Bid rent theory

message: It would be worth noting some of the more general problems with the model. For instance, not accounting for externalities (environmental), planning constraints etc. An accessible example would be the 'Green Belt'. Most importantly that such models are based on an underlying assumption that urban areas are monocentric. Chris.suckling (talk) 10:42, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Should include criticisms/critiques

message: Could also separate von Thunen's model under a different heading and elaborate on the explanation. Von Thunen's model is a development of Ricardo's, but has little to do with an 'Agricultural Analogy'. Chris.suckling (talk) 10:42, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Layout

message: The section talking about people relocating to the edge of the city seems out of date. In the developed world for the last 20 years only the poorest home buyers have gone to the urban fringe in numbers (less a few on hobby farms) as the rich have moved back into urban centres, in effect paying more for housing in order to pay less on travel. Those buying at the urban fringe have traded lower house costs for higher commute costs, and are extremely vulnerable to changes in oil prices. Indeed, some have suggested  that the last economic crash was caused by a spike in oil prices bankrupting families whose choice of location required each member over 16 to own a car.77.89.190.90 (talk) 11:15, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: Update
Talk:Unique Forms of Continuity in Space

message: There is a cast in the Mannheim Art Museum in Germany. Nicely displayed by itself in the center of the rotunda in the original Jugendstil museum which is now an attached wing of the new building.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stillworthy (talk • contribs) 23:38, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Casts 
Draft talk:Michael Phillips (historian)

message: Here are the sources I alluded to: ; ; ; ; . I'll look into these and either redirect the page to an article about the book or fill out this article to establish WP:NAUTHOR/WP:BASIC. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 00:37, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: , OK, but the current article is written as if by his PR. Guy (help! - typo?) 12:13, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sources
Talk:Michal Heiman

message: moved unsourced CV laundry list off main space WomenArtistUpdates (talk) 02:12, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  moved unsourced CV laundry list off main space
Talk:Shasta of the Wolves

message: :Image:Olaf baker shasta uk cover art 1921.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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— Save_Us † 00:10, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Olaf baker shasta uk cover art 1921.jpg
Talk:Michelle Goh

message: There is a current RFC on certain content in Singapore artistes BLP articles that editors watching/editing/passing through this article may be interested in weighing in: Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Content in Notes column of filmography tables in Singapore artistes BLPs. This article may be affected due to the inclusion of :Category:Singaporean actors‎ and/or one of its subcategories in the article. RobertskySemi (talk) 23:58, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: RfC on content in Notes column of filmography tables in Singapore artistes BLPs
Talk:Michiel Braam

message: This article makes assertions that really ought to be sourced, e.g., The orchestra Bik Bent Braam is considered to be one of the main bigger orchestras in the field of improvisation-music and performs worldwide, as does the trio BraamDeJoodeVatcher.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rick lightburn (talk • contribs) 03:20, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  No sources/references.
Talk:Trans-Cyclooctene

message: The reaction as drawn appears to be balls. The hydrogens must be coplanar and the double bond shown is definitely cis. Any other thoughts? OcelotIIX (talk) 21:17, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Changed it to right structure (same as in literature) Chemiker88 (talk) 21:34, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks good! The alkene really is a bit twisted (there are actually two enantiomers, represented in the paper using wedge/dot bonds for the H off the alkene) but it really does need to start out looking trans. DMacks (talk) 21:46, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
replies: text:  Yeah i know that. In this case i looked it up and in  doi:10.1021/ja8001919 it's just like i draw it (wdge/dot bonds are only drawn if it's a trans-cycloocetnol), there are also other possibilities to draw this, but in this case i trust in Prof. Fox, as he is an expert in this. Chemiker88 (talk) 20:56, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Alkene geometry 

message: The physical properties of cis vs trans isomers need clarification.
The figures in the chem box are for cis.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 175.38.163.188 (talk) 19:29, 23 August 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: I have updated ids only. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:49, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Physical properties
Talk:Mickey Byrne

message: As a result of a campaign by an editor, Laurel Lodged, who has moved dozens of GAA articles without discussion or consensus, this Tipperary hurler is no longer listed in the category Tipperary hurlers, which has been deleted. A new category, "Tipperary GAA hurlers", has been created exclusively for Tipperary, out of line with every other GAA county which is listed in the format "county hurlers". Brocach (talk) 00:30, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Change of category
Talk:Midi Onodera

message: The article was using a QR Code as a portrait, see this version. If the artist made the image as a self-portrait, that should be stated. If would probably need to be licensed freely. I edited the article to put the web link the place of the image, which was a 2D barcode of the web address anyway.
I don't like removing stuff from Wikipedia, so just clearly describe it and add it back if you want.
I posted a some more stuff about Wikipedia QR Codes in general at Wikipedia:Village pump (policy)/Archive 71#QR Codes as illustrations (2D barcodes), but that will soon be archived, so also search for it here: Wikipedia:Village pump (policy). --Colfer2 (talk) 17:46, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  QR Code Portrait 

message: Canadian Film Center
*Experimental documentary style film The Displaced View
*3 sections and uses split screen Ten Cents a Dance
*The Queening of America: Gay Culture in Straight Society
Miffedmess (talk) 14:27, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Adding
Talk:Corona (footballer)

message: Is there a particular reason why this page is titled Corona (footballer) while the Spanish equivalent is titled Miguel Ángel Corona? If the player is so well known by just one name, wouldn't the Spanish page reflect this?
Edgar (talk) 21:41, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Player's Name 
Talk:Mihir Bose

message: Does anyone know how much the BBC pays him?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Manormadman (talk • contribs) 14:18, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: No, but why is it relevant? – ukexpat (talk) 16:24, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

message: Well, no doubt that list is all true, but how may items on it are noteworthy? For example, a 'highly commended' (ie not even a runner-up or finalist) in sports news story of the year or sports diarist of the year sounds a touch thin as accolades go. At the very least, I would have thought that the intro copy stating that these are 'awards' that he has 'won' should be toned down somewhat. There are very few wins on the list. Grubstreet (talk) 15:12, 19 December 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I am going to edit the list to deal just with the wins. – ukexpat (talk) 16:22, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Awards