Talk:Kashima Shinden Jikishinkage-ryū

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message: As requested by SvGeloven, I have read through the article and made a few changes. I believe this article is worthy of at least 'Good Article' status with the following improvements:
* Better referencing - at present, there are no references for this article. I've added a reference section at the bottom (with a link to a referencing guide), as well as marking what I believe to be key points for this article. Citation of densho or their translations (if extant for Jikishinkage-ryū)
* Proof-read for language and grammar - there are sections which have a few grammatical flaws. They are not major, but enough to moderately disrupt the fluency of the article.
* Translations - some terms have incomplete or unstable translations. Translations should be verified and provide appropriate characters.
The article can also be checked against the Good Article criteria, but I believe these are the areas requiring the greatest attention.
-- Sasuke Sarutobi 02:23, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Article quality 

message: The article has been sent for peer review with the comments being found here.  I made several and think that once they and other comments are addressed the article can bu submitted for GA status.  The total lack of citations is enough by the way to demote this article to Start class but since that is most easily fixed I will leave it as B-class.  By way of example I've just submitted Shinto Muso-ryu for GA review.Peter Rehse 02:52, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Peer Review

message: Yamada Jirokichi 山田次朗吉 was born in 1863 and passed away in 1930, according to the initial data in this article. However, the following article states that he passed away in 1931. KATEIGAHO International Edition (KIE), JAPAN'S ARTS & CULTURE, 2008 WINTER ISSUE VOL. 18, Mastering Budo, pages 70 - 73. . What is the exact year that he passed away? Also more information on Yamada Jirokichi is very welcome for a separate article. SvGeloven (talk) 22:32, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Year Yamada Jirokichi passed away 

message: Matsumoto Bizen-no-Kami 松本備前守 was born in 1467, according to the book Koryu Bujutsu: Classical Warrior Traditions of Japan. However the book Kashima Shinden Jikishinkage-ryu by Masaru Iwasa 2005 states that he as born in 1468. What is the exact year that he was born? SvGeloven (talk) 17:08, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Year Matsumoto Bizen-no-Kami was born 

message: I would like to propose to split off the detailed information regarding Shinbukan to a separate article to make this article less technical and more to the point. Please let me know here if you are in favour or not. SvGeloven (talk) 12:00, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Separate article for Shinbukan 

message: Good morning. I am currently translating this article to french, and as usual, I am checking in the same time the references bringed for the text. It seems that, for a large part, the history section was pasted from an external site (which was under copyright from 2005 to 2008) as this part seems having been added in 2007. Can someone check it again ? Thanks a lot, Grimlock (talk) 09:27, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Please contact the author that made the contribution a personal message and contact the maintainer of the jikishinkageryu.eu website. Especially regarding the comments found on this page I am also curious to what is incorrect or not applicable. I have already moved some parts that were specific for that group/style to the discussion page. If that group/style wants, they can create separate article with the differences applicable for them. Nevertheless, what 'they' have contributes and is applicable to all groups or simply a part of history and lineage, that should be corrected for possible errors and remain in the main article, I think. In any case, the particular passages can be editted so tehy are 'derived' work with proper reference. SanshinkaiAikidoUtrecht (talk) 15:04, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
replies: text:  I have sent a mail to the webmaster. We must now wait a while. Grimlock (talk) 18:33, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Copyvio ? 

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