Talk:Chill Out (KLF album)/Archive 1

message: Vinoir: "Removed </references> call from this section." Sorry about that, I added it because I was editing a section only and needed to preview. Must have forgotten to remove it - doh! --kingboyk 16:45, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: -) Easily done! I once again forgot to put the "nomination" tag up, for example...! --Vinoir 16:47, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Whoops! 

message: Almost there, but fannish prose like the legendary monthly Land of Oz club, He's given a songwriting credit, and references to 'evil' Graham Lee need fixing.  I'd also suggest converting the list of samples into prose and removing the see also section - if the links there can't be incorporated into the general text it implies the topics are too tangential to be mentioned.  Worldtraveller 20:59, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks for your feedback.  I agree with your comments and have revised the article accordingly. --Vinoir 10:49, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

text: Thanks from me too. I agreed, except with regards to the samples list. However, looks like I might have been wrong on that as well as Vinoir appears to have successfully converted into prose :) --kingboyk 10:56, 3 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Good work!  I just listed it as good, but then noticed a slight issue - the first sentence of 'origins' contradicts what follows - can't have been a single live take if they kept on having to redo it.  Also, where actually is the land of oz club?  This should be mentioned.  Worldtraveller 23:42, 4 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: By "single live take" it means that the album as released was (they claim) recorded from start to finish in one go. There would have been aborted takes, and they just started again with a blank sheet. I'm not sure how to reword it to make that clear... The 'Land Of Oz' was at London's Heaven nightclub, which I've now added. Thanks again. --kingboyk 08:40, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: GA feedback

message: I've rearranged the structure of the article, and I think it's better now. We need a Context section; see that section for some HTML comments including a quotation from Eno about what ambient music is and a mention of Cauty and Paterson (written by David Toop in The Times). --kingboyk 17:10, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Excellent suggestions and rearrangement. I've got Drummond saying "the weep of a pedal steel guitar is the sound of heartstrings being torn", to fit in somewhere too. --Vinoir 08:11, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: It's amazing what a little refactoring can do, isn't it? I think with a Context section it'll be looking like an FAC. I'm liking the quote you found too, look forward to seeing it worked into the text :) --kingboyk 10:59, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  To-do list 

message: It seems almost all I write gets quickly removed. Is all of it unimportant and uninteresting?--SavX 13:40, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Please read the talk pages and WP:KLF and see what we're trying to achieve. We only want additions which have sources, and only information which is of interest to the general reader (not fancruft, not secondhand info and speculation from the KLF Mailing List). Unfortunately a lot of what you've added hasn't been up to par - not all of it, and not all of it got reverted. The edits on Chill Out earlier by me were a mistake; Firefox has a bug and it caused me to wripe out about half the article - not just your work. --kingboyk 13:52, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Seems theres ALOT to read on all those learnlinks you pasted. Why isn't The KLF's influence on other bands of any interest for the general reader? None of those three mentioned, especially The Chilluminati Remixes and Sabotage Chill Out werent unaware of Chill Out. I dont know if you saw it before you removed it all, but I edited my own write later. I corrected the "(?)", found out its not Beastie Boys, but a v/a compilation released on Sabotage record.--SavX 15:15, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: OK, I'll take a look at that again. I have heard of Sabotage but I'm not sure how important it is. That said, I didn't wipe out your corrected version on purpose: it was a mistake due to a browser bug, so apologies for that! Please do stick around and don't be offended, I'm sure you can help us improve articles and have some fun at the same time. It's simply that we want to make the best articles we can - The KLF will be perhaps the best documented band on Wikipedia and I'm sure you'll agree that's a good thing :) --kingboyk 08:28, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Contribute to what?