Talk:Brodie Croyle

message: I removed this line "He declared for the 2006 NFL Draft with high hopes of an early selection. ".  Every player entering the draft hopes for an early selection so it's not needed. 05:45, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  NFL career 

message: I went ahead and put his full name at the top as just his middle and last didnt seem sufficient, not everyone realizes he and his father share first names.Timeran 18:25, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Full Name 

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thread_title:  WikiProject class rating

message: I just nominated this article. Hopefully I cleaned up enough of it. Plenty of references, but yes, no picture. There previously was a picture, but it was deleted. conman33 (. . .talk) 20:11, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Found picture.conman33 (. . .talk) 20:14, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Cool. I would review it but it'd look weird cuz I'm part of the chiefs wikiproject. RC-0722 communicator/kills 16:52, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, we need somebody from outside the WikiProject to review the article. conman33 (. . .talk) 05:31, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Unfortunately... RC-0722 communicator/kills 16:39, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  GA nominee 

message: This is not a Good Article review, as I wouldn't be able to guarantee that I would have time to complete the review. I did look it over quickly today, though, and I saw a few things that would come up as problems during a GA review. In order to help speed up the process, I thought I'd mention them now so that you can get a start on them:
#The lead is too short. For an article that is approximately 30 KB, the lead should be at least two decent paragraphs. In addition, the lead should summarize all of the key points of the article. It currently does not mention anything about Croyle's NFL career. See Wikipedia:Lead section for more information.
#References must be placed after punctuation. There are several placed in the article in which references are included in the middle of the sentence without punctuation (it is okay if it comes after a comma, but these do not). References should also come immediately after punctuation with no space in between. For an example of what I mean, if you look at the second paragraph of the "Early career" section, there is a space between the period at the end of the first sentence, and there is a reference in the middle of the second sentence.
#If two or more references are used in the same location, they should be in numerical order. For example, the references at the end of the "Early career" section should be switched so that 4 comes before 6.
#The article is lacking references in quite a few locations. In the "Collegiate career" section, there are no references in the third, fourth or fifth paragraphs. In other paragraphs, some sentences need references added (eg. the end of the "2006" paragraph, the score of the December 9, 2007 game, etc.).
#Two of the references don't have access dates listed (Croyle's biography at KCChiefs.com and Croyle's biography at NFL.com).
#For the quotation in the box, there should not be an apostrophe at the end of Chiefs, and the reference number should probably not be italicized (in fact, perhaps only the quotation itself should be italicized...I don't honestly know what the guideline is).
#This one isn't a big deal, but there are a few redirects in the "Professional career" statistic box. For example, Wonderlic redirects to Wonderlic Test. It makes for a nicer article if the wikilinks are correct.
#Where it says "Career Statistics at Alabama" (just before the "Professional career" section), the title of the table ("Career Statistics at Alabama") should stand out more. Perhaps the words should be bold, and I would recommend a colon after "Alabama.")
I hope this helps. Best wishes for your GA review. GaryColemanFan (talk) 21:01, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  A few suggestions... 

message: [Image:Broncos-Chiefs2007.jpg] is a mistake. I uploaded this photo thinking that it was mine. I have files on my computer including Chiefs photos, and obviously my camera is not that high tech. On my computer, I have a mixed file folder full of photos from each game (from myself and various Fox Sports, SI, ESPN, etc websites), but I did not intend to put this on the internet saying "self made." We need to delete this photo because I think you're right about the NFL and copyrights, and I sure don't want to get slapped with a lawsuit. conman33 (. . .talk) 04:17, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, technically they can't sue you cuz they can't find you unless your IP is static (non-changing) If you have dial-up or DSL, they can't find you. RC-0722 communicator/kills 04:20, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, but I also don't want to take credit for something that's obviously not mine. It's a hell of a picture, but we should at least look into it more. conman33 (. . .talk) 05:38, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Picture

message: I know he's southern, but does his last name really have 3 syllables?
--UnicornTapestry (talk) 03:40, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I have never heard it pronounced with three syllables. Every time I've heard it in my life (following the NFL, living in Georgia and watching SEC football) it's been two syllables, "kroy-uhl."►Chris NelsonHolla! 03:49, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah you're right. I'm terrible with those pronunciation tool-helper things for WP. I'll change it. Here in KC (we do talk funny in the midwest) it is two syllables (KROY-uhl). It isn't like "kuh-roy-uhl" like it looks. conman33 (. . .talk) 04:27, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Surname 

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thread_title: Assessment comment

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