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Talk:Fender Marauder

message: This article is a mess. I’ve done my best with the material provided as far as editing the voice of the article while avoiding any substantial changes to the content itself - while the vast majority of the content is presented without citations, the subject itself is not without merit, and the meaning has essentially been kept, if not exactly the original message.
This is all to say that while I presently do not have the time to source the claims made in this article by myriad other editors, I believe a good first step toward raising the overall quality of the article is to rewrite the current content in a unified editorial voice, as opposed the disjointed presentation as it existed until now.
The Fender Marauder is unquestionably a notable and historic instrument, but aside from the paltry references provided (only one includes a page number!), the information this article presents appears to be sourced primarily from online guitar forum discussions, which in turn reference other forum discussions, and so on etcetera, forming an ouroboros of sub-par source material. Hearsay, for all intents and purposes.
I have added copious flags throughout in order to highlight just how insufficiently sourced this article is. As time allows, I will do what I can to turn these flags into citations wherever and whenever possible, but I can’t be the only editor doing this. Without concerted group effort, this article could easily tumble over the quality line to a point implicitly demanding of a request for deletion. A less kind reader would say this entire thing is little more than rumor and conjecture, but I’m not that mean.
It’s a cool guitar, let’s work together to make this article worthy of its subject. 🆃🆁🆂™ 14:29, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  In regards to the composition and quality of content in this article 
Talk:Easton, Maryland

message: Someone put '(redacted WP:BLP issue), reknowned Coke and Crack dealer'
It seems a bit out of place to me.
198.246.246.8 16:15, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  In the 'Notable Residents' section???? 

message: Easton is home to the Easton Ice Hawks. They play in the CBHL (Chesapeake Beltway Hockey League). Easton Ice Hawk home games are played at the Talbot County Community Center in Easton MD.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.2.185.246 (talk) 05:38, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sports 

message: Matthewstown Run
Mulberry Station
Crofton  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.2.185.246 (talk) 05:39, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Neighborhoods 

message: I took the liberty of removing Harold Baines as a notable resident. While his Wikipedia page does list his birthplace as Easton, it states that he lived in Saint Michaels, Maryland, graduating from high school there. It should be understood that everybody in Talbot County, Maryland born in a hospital within the past couple of centuries was born in Easton, since it has the only hospital in the county (or that was true through 1998, the last time I visited up there). --Joe Sewell (talk) 22:19, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Harold Baines]] is notable, but not a resident 
Talk:Praeses

message: There should be a note also about the use of 'praeses' to mean the examiner presiding at the defence of a dissertation or disputation in mediaeval universities, as opposed to the 'respondent' and 'defendant'. Omassey 16:48, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: There should also be a note that praeses is the modern term used for people defending dissertations in Danish Universities. --NuclearWarhead (talk) 17:18, 7 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Travis Smith (musician)

message: http://www.trivium.org/images/media/fanart/TravisSmith.jpg
"Travis proved he has the fastest feet of the Ozzfest 2005 drummers by competing amongst them all and he was proven to be the fastest."
^ Really think that needs to be re-written
Travis' cymbal set up was in an issue of DRUM! magazine in late 2008 early 2009 aand it accompanied a play along with down from the sky so if anyone has that issue please edit 86.47.14.124 (talk) 16:18, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Mike Keith (mathematician)

message: I looked at that USPTO search, and it looks as if for some of the inventions, e.g. #17 in the list, there is more than one inventor shown in the "Inventors:" line lower down, but the "Inventor" field (which is searched on) simply reads "Keith, Michael et al". Does this imply that Keith might be listed as a non-primary co-inventor on other Intel patents?  Should we then call him "primary inventor" in this article? Rpresser 16:51, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Studying the list further, some of the 100 hits have him as a co-inventor but not the first inventor listed, and the "IN" field seems to be always the first inventor alphabetically, so there's no "primary inventor" as there is a primary author on scholarly papers. Therefore I'm editing the article to say "inventor or co-inventor." Rpresser 16:55, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Mm, interesting. Thank you very much for doing the patent search. PrimeFan 22:29, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  inventions
Talk:Dalocha (woreda)

message: According to the article, there is also a town named Dalocha, located within this region; when the article on it is made, the necessary disambiguation should be added to both pages.  DGG ( talk ) 03:03, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  disambiguation 
Talk:Covenantal nomism

message: I've added links to this page, from the E. P. Sanders article and from the Salvation article (Judaism section).  Is this ienough to remove the linkless notice?TheDean 17:03, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

message: I removed the link to the blog post by Murray. According to Wiki standards on Wikipedia:External links, links that should be avoided include, "links to blogs and personal web pages, except those written by a recognized authority." Now, I may be wrong, but some guy named "Murray" (I couldn't find a last name) is not considered a recognized authority on covenantal nomism. Nor is the blog post written in an academic tone. This isn't to say that it is not a good and thoughtful post, but I just don't think it meets Wiki's guidelines. I've retained the link here for discussion. Brandonwason 13:01, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Linking to a Blog
Talk:The Cat Who Walks Through Walls

message: This article needs a synopsis. --Ortzinator 17:07, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: She does, in fact, and I'm changing that right now.    Ravenswing  19:01, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: The article says the Time Corps uses time-travel to alter the past, but in Time Enough for Love Lazarus Long (who is a character in this book too and a member of the Time Corps) says that "there are no paradoxes", and that if someone goes back in time he had already been there (Predestination paradox). I haven't read The Cat Who Walks Through Walls, so I don't know exactly how it's related to Time Enough For Love. Are they set in different universes, with Lazarus being just a common character? -- Idiota Invisível 02:05, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Time travel

message: What? Schrödinger's cat does have an "an inexplicable tendency" if you will, but it's nothing to do with where he is located. 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:956C:1C35:22BF:46F1 (talk) 09:06, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  "an inexplicable tendency to be wherever the narrator happens to be (see Schrödinger's cat)"
Talk:Area bombardment during World War II

message: This article started out as a cut and past from Area bombardment#World War II by User:Jackyboy's Mum
See the initial entry in the history of the article 19:08, 24 April 2006. 
The on the very next edit Revision as of 19:16, 24 April 2006 User:Jackyboy's Mum cut and pasted in the article Strategic bombing during World War II. (S)he did not even bother to removed the original article that (s)he cut and pasted into this article or to merge in the text, instead the original cut an past has been loitering at the bottom of this article as a sort of carbuncle. 
After being here for more six months there has been little to no development of this article Revision as of 19:16, 24 April 2006--Revision16:43, 23 October 2006. No one has even bothered to merge the text of the two original articles together! So I am going to redirect it to the area bombardment article. If in the future the section on "World War II" in the "Area bombardment" article gets too large then this article can be redeveloped and the section in the area bombardment article can become a summary. --Philip Baird Shearer 17:15, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Redirect
Talk:Fender Stringmaster

message: I'm a bit surprised to see this stub on AfD, see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Fender Stringmaster, but don't think there's a lot of chance of the proposal succeeding. As I noted at the AfD, I get 22,400 ghits unrelated to Wikipedia for Fender Stringmaster.
I also note on ebay currently at least two of interest...
http://cgi.ebay.com/1964-FENDER-STRINGMASTER-TRIPLE-NECK-8-STRING-BLOND-/160405534445
1964 FENDER STRINGMASTER TRIPLE NECK 8 STRING 
Price: US $2,399.00
UP FOR SALE A 1 OWNER , HOME KEPT STRINGMASTER IN BLOND FINISH WITH ALL LOGOS INTACT INE VERY NICE CONDITION BUT NOT MINT A COUPLE WEAR SPOTS ON CORNERS  . 100% ORIGINAL WITH A SLIDER SWITCH AND SWITCH FOR THE PICKUPS . YES 2 PICKUPS PER NECK  8 STRINGS EACH . THIS IS A CONSIGNMENT SALE SO NO RETURNS ON THIS ONE . ALL 4 LEGS INCLUDED BUT CASE GOT LOST SOMEWHERE ALONG THE WAY . THIS RARE INSTRUMENT WILL BE A COOL ADDITION TO ANY STUDIO OR HOME MUSIC ROOM
http://cgi.ebay.com/FENDER-LAP-STEEL-STRINGMASTER-DOUBLE-8-/140407985316?cmd=ViewItem&pt=UK_Musical_Instruments_Guitars_CV&hash=item20b0f7d4a4
FENDER LAP STEEL STRINGMASTER DOUBLE 8
Starting bid: GBP 799.00  
Approximately US $1,153.60
Up for auction is this 1952/3 (Serial No. 0417) Fender Stringmaster Double 8 Steel Guitar. The Rolls Royce of Steel Consoles this has a lovely sound provided by twin Telecaster style pick ups on each neck. Volume and tone knobs and two switches for single neck or twin neck playing. The electrics are fine, the body has a few nicks and the colouring varys from light to dark on parts of the guitar. The legs work fine but are a bit pitted in places. There is no case, but will be well packed in solid guitar box. This is a weighty item and collection would be the better option. No reserve and low starting price on this much sought after and now quite scarce Fender model.
The quad eight in mint would sell for a lot more than either of these of course. Interesting? Andrewa (talk) 11:05, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: How notable?

message: * History at an enthusiast's site
Seems to be offline, link removed from article. Pity. Andrewa (talk) 14:37, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: External link
Talk:Fender Swinger

message: I have yet to see a picture of a Swinger WITH "Swinger" on the head. All the pictures I have seen just say "Fender". NickS 14:27, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Name on head

message: I hate that 'this article states no sources or references' thing at the top of the Swinger page. Any place or book we can go to so that we can verify this data?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wanderingjew (talk • contribs) 09:30, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, a Google Books search turns up a few interesting books. One is Guitar History: Guitars Made by the Fender Company which mentions the Swinger label being applied over the varnish but mistakenly identifies the body as from the Electric 12 stock. Two others are both by Tony Bacon but only one has any preview permitted: 50 Years of Fender: Half a Century of the Greatest Electric Guitars. I've put that into the article as a reference. NickS (talk) 15:47, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Any place for references? 

message: Are we certain about the colors available? I know that musicmasters only came in red, white, and blue for a time in the '60's. I have seen somewhere that Fender sort of let up on this patriotic scheme for the Swinger just to get them out of the door. On shortscale.org, there's even a purple-burst swinger. We just need to get this color thing straightened out. 68.80.140.212 (talk) 22:26, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, mine was originally Candy Apple Red. Barry Richman's site http://www.barryrichman.com/collection_3.html shows Daphne Blue, Olympic White, CAR and Lake Placid Blue (lacquer aged so it looks green). Ben Kweller's appear to be Daphne, LPB and black (a low-res picture on WIkimedia appears to show that the surviving "Swinger" decal is on the LPB.  NickS (talk) 11:43, 10 September 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Colors available 

message: The Fender Swinger has become a vintage guitar and a collector's item.
This cannot stand without reference to some credible objective source. And pasting it blithely at the end of Development and design makes no sane sense. Weeb Dingle (talk) 01:56, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
thread_title: I removed...

message: Between 300 and 600 Swingers were producedonly 250 to 300 Swingers were ever produced
If both statements are true, then EXACTLY 300 Swingers were produced!! I am inclined to simply flip a coin & make the loser disappear. 
I should also note that "number produced" is going to be larger than "number sold at retail." Can anyone prove that Fender didn't simply strip a few for parts and destroy the carcases? Weeb Dingle (talk) 02:01, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Resolve the production claims!!
Talk:Fender Telecaster Thinline

message: How does the sound compare to a normal Telecaster? I think this is an important piece of information to include in the article 203.206.92.154 08:04, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Sound

message: The idea that having the f-hole was to increase sustain is surely wrong. The f-hole is associated with the hollow part of the body which would, if anything, decrease sustain surely. Mutt Lunker (talk) 22:37, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sustain
Talk:Fender Toronado

message: "Reverse L" ... like a "J" ???!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.84.176.219 (talk) 21:53, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: LOLWUT

message: Sorry for the silly question, but how is it pronounced? Is it: "tor-on-ado"? Myke251 19:56, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Pronouncement
Talk:Turmoil

message: Why does turmoil redirect to a naruto page? --71.9.57.98 (talk) 15:30, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I have converted it into a disambiguation page.--  JediLofty User ¦ Talk 12:52, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Naruto
Talk:Yong tau foo

message: Is it true that people eat stuffed tofu in clear soup in Hong Kong?Wai Hong 17:29, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Hong Kong?

message: Would anyone happen to know if this is the same as 鱼豆腐? I've seen these characters more often on Chinese menus and the dish looks similar to 酿豆腐, but I really don't know. Thumbtax (talk) 13:24, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Same as 鱼豆腐?
Talk:Sylvester Junior

message: *There was a cartoon where Sylvester Jr and his mother have to take refuge in a bomb Shelter after Sylvester Sr tries a "experiment" to catch a mouse. What was the name?
It was Goldimouse and the Three Cats  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.149.158.144 (talk) 17:47, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: What Cartoon?
Talk:The Ruff and Reddy Show

message: The article states that "Hanna wrote the series' theme music, in his first foray into theme music composition, which would become a staple of Hanna-Barbera for nearly 30 years", but then goes on to say, "he penned the lyrics one morning while storyboarding, handing off the sheet music to musical director Hoyt Curtin, who composed the melody". 
Surely, this suggests that Curtin wrote the music - which is in agreement with the quote that appears in his own WP article: "About two weeks later they [Hanna and Barbera] called and had a lyric they read over the phone. Could I write a tune for it? I called back in 5 minutes and sang it to them ... silence ... uh oh, I bombed out ... the next thing I heard was a deal to record it! Ruff & Reddy. At that moment they had quit at MGM and started their own company. All of our first main titles were done in that fashion. Huckleberry Hound, Quick Draw McGraw, etc.".Gary Karpinski - email interview with Hoyt Curtin, 1999 JezGrove (talk) 22:14, 2 May 2019 (UTC)
thread_title:  Theme music
Talk:Victor Buono

message: It says he has an uncredited appearance in this film, which I believe is just copied from IMDb, but I watched this film actively looking for him and I am quite positive he's not in it. You can see here someone who agrees with me, including stills: https://victorbuono.tumblr.com/post/150902207702/imdb-currently-lists-victor-buono-in-an-uncredited 121.200.5.4 (talk) 04:54, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Someone removed the reference. IMDb sometimes has unique information from crew members, but there is no check on its reliability. WP is required to be based on reliable references, not consensus or opinion. David Spector (talk) 13:33, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Yeah, that's why I'm leaving a comment on the talk page, in the thought that someone might provide other references. Sometimes people visit these pages and they're knowledgeable and well-versed on a subject and are just a general all-around help. It's really delightful when you see it. I'm thinking that if you and I wait long enough a person like that might show up. --121.200.5.4 (talk) 03:00, 4 July 2022 (UTC)

text: That is the right thing to do. We're not allowed to edit WP based on personal evidence, knowledge, or research. If someone finds a reliable reference that he was indeed in the movie, then an edit can be done. Doing a Web search, I found a brief reference at https://www.cinemaclock.com/movies/judgement-at-nuremberg-1961 and some other places, but none of these are reliable sources; they could have copied from IMDb or even from WP.  It think WP prefers erring on the side of being trustworthy, leaving other sources to provide less reliable but perhaps more detailed information. I think this policy helps WP to be able to welcome everyone to edit its pages, and not just experts. David Spector (talk) 11:34, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  He isn't in Judgement at Nuremberg
Talk:Tom Puss

message: I wonder whether the names "Tom Puss" and "Oliver B. Bumble" really are the most well-known in English. They are the names used in the Swedish translation, but I'm not sure if they have appeared in any official English translation. Could they be OR? 惑乱 分からん * \)/ (\ (< \) (2 /) /)/ * (talk) 13:30, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Both names were used in the English language translations. gidonb (talk) 21:06, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
thread_title: Name?
Talk:Varjak Paw

message: Hi to read of this video is not working properly now from this video call me he was not working for me he was not working for you sir and i will be there for you sir and i will come back soon 92.13.56.189 (talk) 21:55, 7 November 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Varjak paw was so good at football so we choose Varjak paw
Talk:Nocaster

message: In the revision of the article of 20:42, January 18, 2009, the line "This fact is irrelevant and confusing." was added, probably commenting on a previous editing. Is there a tag or template that would serve this purpose better than having this comment mid-article? De Moriarty (talk) 22:27, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Editing paux pas?

message: Also fender custom shop made a 20 piece special series of thinline nocasters in 2010. Although originally there was no thinline, these are called nocaster thinline and I think apart from the semi-hollow body are the same.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.72.8.198 (talk) 20:41, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  thinline nocaster 

message: Wouldn't this stub of information be more appropriately merged with the Telecaster article?  The Telecaster is a major part of modern guitar history; the Nocaster is a chapter in the story of the Telecaster (along with eg. teh Squier Telecaster, a once-separate article which has been merged with Telecaster.) Frank Mottley (talk) 21:56, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Absolutely. Do the merge. The sooner the better. Be bold. BellwetherToday (talk) 04:37, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Merge?
Talk:Brian Doerksen

message: I think this article needs to be more detailed and to be re-written, I'm working on it. Wattylfc 17:42, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: CCLI lists the date as © 1989 Mercy / Vineyard Publishing - long before the date listed in the article. 69.165.158.110 (talk) 09:28, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Date of “Faithful One”
Talk:Sideroblastic anemia

message: merge them
I completely agree Darthfader77 15:35, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Some previous merge

message: The TIBC is listed as normal to decreased on one line, then listed as elevated in the lab findings.  Which is correct?
24.19.51.221 (talk) 03:42, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  error 

message: 1. pictures.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tkjazzer (talk • contribs) 23:28, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I added a picture of what I think was a sideroblast from the larger image below. It would be appreciated if someone could confirm that it really is a sideroblast. Mikael Häggström (talk) 18:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  how can this article be improved? 

message: Normally, sideroblasts are present in the bone marrow, and enter the circulation after maturing into a normal erythrocyte.81.11.218.243 (talk) 17:27, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  itjusaidABnormal?! 

message: In the section called causes there are three bullet points and one addresses acquired forms of this disease. It seems to avoid the actual underlying causes and is more diagnostic in nature. At least compared to the other ones in the bullet point section under causes. 
For example, treatment of tuberculosis has been linked to this form of anemia. Which seems to fit within the scope that section. Note the tuberculosis treatment is just one example for illustration. Others can be found on PubMed.
I am probably not qualified to make those changes. I did want to point this out. Below is a link to a Harvard paper that might express better better though its subsections I’m talking about.
http://sickle.bwh.harvard.edu/sideroblastic.html  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Middleground1 (talk • contribs) 18:59, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cause v. Diagnosis
Category talk:Blood sports

message: It has been much discussed that the inclusion of all hunting (rather than trophy hunting or sport hunting perhaps) is over-inclusive.  The fact that "assistance dogs" is included on the blood sports page, if one opens the menus, makes this argument perhaps better than any text on this talk page.  I am going to leave it as it is, but even the most ardent anti-hunting advocate would agree that traditional subsistence hunting is not properly a blood sport.  If it is, then the term looses much of its original meaning.  Perhaps a more careful selection of pages would avoid some of the absurdities like linking to seeing eye dogs on the blood sports page.--Counsel 17:42, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Assistance Dogs = Blood Sport?