Talk:Toyota War

message: The article Technical (fighting vehicle) seems related, but I couldn't find a decent place to link to it. Recury 18:13, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: I have assessed the article according to the GA criteria. Please fix the following suggestions and I'll pass the article:
#Inline citations go directly after the punctuation, be sure to fix them all.
:#Done. - Francis Tyers · 08:49, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Should be all done now.--Aldux 18:03, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

text: Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

text: Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

text: Isn't it linked? Hope it's OK now.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

text: I'm not sure I've understood exactly what you mean here. Anyways, I've rewritten it. The inline citation is there, number 25.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA on hold

message: #"Hassan Djamous, the thirty-year-old FANT commander-in-chief, pitched against the Libyan garison 4,000–5,000 troops." Garison is misspelled (garrison), and add "of" right after it.
:Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Done.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

text: Isn't it linked? Hope it's OK now.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

text: I'm not sure I've understood exactly what you mean here. Anyways, I've rewritten it. The inline citation is there, number 25.--Aldux 16:36, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: A few more things

message: I have passed this article according to the GA criteria. You have addressed all of the above suggestions, but please continue to look over the article and determine how the article can continue to be expanded with sourced information. Keep up the good work and consider a peer review and then taking it to FAC. If you have the time, please review an article or two at GAC to help eliminate the backlog. --Nehrams2020 23:22, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: That's great. Congrats Aldux. Picaroon 23:35, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Thanks Picaroon for all your help. Without BT, Fran and your's help this article would never had done it!--Aldux 16:08, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA passed

message: It says that Libya "lost one tenth of its army, with 7,500 troops killed and 1.5 billion dollars worth of military equipment destroyed or captured.[5]" which means Libya has a 75,000 army, yet it's strength is put at 90,000. Umm, how can that be, exactly? MB
:It's Simons that writes "lost one tenth of its army". This may apparently seem contradictory with 90,000, but if you add the PoW (at least 1,000) you're not far from the 90,000 spoken of by the LOC country study.--Aldux 14:02, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  problem with statistics 

message: Living in Japan for a year (1990) and reading The Japan Times regularly, I became aware that lots of used cars in Japan are moved by ship to Africa; I suppose there are specific companies working in this industry, and a particular name for this ongoing trade.  I don't know more than this. --McTrixie/Mr Accountable 02:43, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  In re: Toyotas: some hearsay 

message: As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Conflicts, battles and military exercises" articles. It looks like I already passed this article in the past, so this review didn't take too long since I'm familiar with the article. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. Keep improving the article, and see if there are any other relevant categories and sources you can include. You should also consider taking this to WP:FAC eventually after having a peer review and copyedit from a few outside editors. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have edited the article history to reflect this review. Regards, Nehrams2020 20:15, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA Sweeps Review: Pass