Talk:Carrizo Plain

message: The link associated with Soda Lake is incorrect.  There are at least 4 saline flats or lakes in California (San Luis Obispo Co. (this feature), Shasta Co., Santa Cruz Co., and San Bernardino Co.).   The Soda Lake connected to the link is the one in San Bernardino Co., not the lake that is the sink for drainage in the Carrizo Plain.  Sodalake 18:32, 31 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Wrong Soda Lake 

message: I think the manager suicide section is inappropriate. There is not much connection to the Carrizo Plain other than saying she was "making great strides in protecting native species", and it seems odd to have such a thing in an encyclopedia article about a landform. I removed a link in the section to the Workplace Bullying Institute because it is not a reliable source according to Wikipedia guidelines and it has a link to another page on the site with anonymous negative comments about Huntsinger, not that the non-anonymous comments are okay. The link to the report is a sufficient source for saying that she committed suicide, which is how the link to the bullying site was used. -- Kjkolb 03:46, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I remember reading a long article about this in (I think) the LA Times a couple of years ago.  While I think it could be worthy of a writeup or at least a mention, this article isn't the place to do it.  Perhaps an article on Marlene Braun, with careful adherence to sourcing guidelines.  You're right--this is an article on a landform; it seems like the section belongs elsewhere.  Antandrus  (talk) 04:01, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I agree that it does not seem to belong here. Basar 19:38, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Manager suicide 

message: The article should make itself clear whether it is about the Carrizo Plain or the Carrizo Plain National Monument. While the two things obviously overlap a great deal, they are not exactly the same. For example, parts of the Carrizo Plain are not inside the monument. The infobox is the most prominent example of how they are used interchangeably. -- Kjkolb 03:46, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Do you think we should have two articles? Basar 19:39, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Carrizo Plain vs. Carrizo Plain National Monument

message: I dont see why the management section last seen here--http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Carrizo_Plain&oldid=192395710
was deleted.  This is important information that anyone interested in the place should know about.  I recommend that it be restored.
Rudolph2007 (talk) 04:38, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Management section 

message: Fauna belongs before management
What about Flora? 
Where are your references?  This wont pass without footnotes to the relevant sources for each piece of information
beds lay 475 and 400 --look up and learn to use lie and lay correctly
shortly afterwards about 11,000 years ago.--delete unnecessary words
that had been offset --verb tense
most widely known, and best studied.--already stated
February 2008 (UTC)--what's this doing here?
The Parent materials --capitalization? 
Thus making is the largest concentration of endangered species in California.--proofread
he Le Conte's Thrasher of the Southwestern United States has a disjunct north range in the Carrizo Plain because of its hotter climate and ecology.--needs explaining or clearer terms
2001, President William J. Clinton approved a bill to make Carrizo Plain a National Monument. Since then, the area of protected land has increased to 250,000 acres.
[edit] Carrizo Plain National Monument
The CPNM management partners in 1996 created a joint plan called the Carrizo Plain Natural Area Plan. The goal of this plan was to “a. [establish] long-term mission and vision statements that reflect the long-term objectives of the CPNA--confusing.  what's relation between Area and Monument? CPNA and CPNM? Chronology in this section moves backwards.
Current Developments and Future Developments are vague headings
Success with the wells at Russell Ranch and Morales Canyon Oil fields have been unsuccessful for the past 10 years--read this
Opposition of this nomination voiced many concerns on--proofread
Access information belongs with Geography
Oil drilling section needs to be brought up to date with the article I sent from today's paper.
Good information here, but this remains rough throughout in organization and expression.  The absence of references lowers the grade to D. 
Rudolph2007 (talk) 04:26, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  march 2 draft 

message: NRHP infobox not appropriate, as this NM is not NRHP-listed.  See Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Protected areas#Cleanup to use Geobox rather than NRHP infobox for many U.S. National Monument articles. doncram (talk) 00:13, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: The Carrizo Plain Archeological District was designated a National Historic Landmark on March 2, 2012, so an NRHP infobox is now appropriate. --‖ Ebyabe talk - General Health ‖ 01:08, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: It has a  now which is sort of generic. I thought about using  but I think that the article is too general to use that infobox. You might start a section about The Carrizo Plain Archeological District and put the NRHP box in that section. The geobox fans can get upset if you change it but you might think about  which can have data on National Monument as well as NRHP. –droll [chat] 01:51, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I switched infoboxes. It might work. –droll [chat] 02:21, 24 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: infobox update needed

message: The information in the solar energy heading is outdated, referring to 2008 plans. At least one major solar energy development is complete: California Valley Solar Ranch
Gerald H -oldeststudent2004- (talk) 23:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Solar Energy Section Outdated 

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