Talk:Kroger Babb

message: Please do not archive
Most of the news clippings that are not web resources came from the archives at the Academy of Motion Pictures Arts and Sciences Library.  Because of that, some clippings lack the entire information that may otherwise be expected to be seen on a source.  All should be available there upon request. --badlydrawnjeff talk 00:33, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: General Note

message: I added this category to Kroger Babb for a few reasons.  1) He wrote fictional letters to advertise his movies.  2) He traveled from town to town faster than word of mouth could spread.  3) He employed numerous stand-ins to portray what he purported to be the same individual, including impersonating an Olympic Athlete. Banaticus 19:02, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Actually, it really was Jesse Owens, that's well-established.  But as for the category, I do understand why it's there, although I feel it's a little misleading.  Babb never sold anything as a hoax, things were often as they were described, simply sold amazingly well, and done over the top in a modern context.  I'm not going to remove it, because I don't feel that strongly about it, but I'm not sure it's the best category, especially since he's the only one populating it. --badlydrawnjeff talk 23:42, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

text: On longer thought, I think I'm going to remove this.  It seemingly doesn't fit here, not in the typical idea at least. --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:05, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Category: Snake Oil Seller

message: Wow!  That's really the only word in my apparently limited vocabulary used to describe this article.  While learning about Mr. Babb was great, I was truly amazed by the easily-accessible tone, the great pictures (all tagged appropriately), and meticulous references.  This is the sort of article to which all others should aspire.  Great work! hoopydinkConas tá tú? 01:32, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Hey, thanks! --badlydrawnjeff talk 10:38, 24 October 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Good Article

message: So I did reverse a few for accuracy, but left many alone.  I don't agree with all of them, but I'm not interested in fighting small semantic battles when they don't change the tone of anything.  I don't know much about what you changed in the middle, however, because your inline breaks messed up the history formatting, so I'm not sure there.  --badlydrawnjeff talk 16:11, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, sorry about these inline breaks. But once these SGML comments are removed, it should be easy to compare "before" and "after". It's likely that, after further reflection, even I would think that some of my "corrections" are mistaken: no need to take them all so seriously. -- Hoary 05:01, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I am a complete idiot and never thought of doing that.  God, I'm dumb.  Thanks. --badlydrawnjeff talk 13:49, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Hoary fixes

message: After redoing some of my research, I'm not convinced that it should be changed much.  I'm not sure where it originated from, except that it was in Europe, so I'm going to change "Italian" to "European" barring anything that turns up in the future.  The actors were verifiably speaking Italian, which is where I think I got the note from. --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:08, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Italian v. German in ''Uncle Tom's Cabin''

message: And now for style 'n' such. Tony and Sandy are demanding the best. OK, let's give it to them. Here's a list of things that I know I can't quickly fix. It will not be comforting reading.
*Introduction: "sexual education–style dramas". The meaning isn't entirely clear; can we say "dramas purporting to be for sex education"?
**We could, but that seems even more hokey than anything else.  
*Youth (which till I changed it just now was History):  "Babb held a number of jobs.... He started out with jobs in sportswriting at a local newspaper in his 20s...." We learn nothing about his childhood or (coffee preference aside) his parents, but I guess he didn't go to university. Why didn't he have a job in his late teens? Or do you mean that he had a lot of short-term jobs at the very start and that the first job that he held for a significant period was in the local newspaper?
**Unknown.  What you see is what's available.
***Then how about Babb held a number of jobs when young, at one point gaining a mention in Ripley's Believe It Or Not for refereeing a record number of youth sports matches. In his twenties he was sportswriting and reporting for a local newspaper, but....
****I'm fine with that, honestly.  I don't quite understand the difference, but it's more of a curiousity than anything else.
*Youth: Did he devise the "stunts" for execution by others in the company, or did he do them himself? If the former (which I tentatively infer), why did "he" give bags of groceries?
**In the Chakres-Warners, it's believed that he came up with and executed the stunts himself while working for the theaters.
***Then perhaps devise and perform rather than create, though I'd sympathize with a claim that this "improvement" is just more wordy.
****Up to you, then.  If you feel the more wordy change is an improvement, I won't protest it.
*Youth: Understanding this properly requires an understanding of medical reels. That's a redlink that needs to be blued.
**Yeah, I don't know the proper target, though, I know we must have an article for it somewhere.
***Then let's look for it, and fast. I'll try to do this a few hours from now, unless I see you've beaten me to it. ¶ Social guidance films "covered topics including ... drug use..." Are these what's meant? (If "medical reels" are instead for nursing school, etc., then they're not "social guidance" films.)
****No, they're the latter, for medical training.  I think I've found a useful workaround.
*Film promotion: There's a problem in the organization of this long section. A paragraph within it that starts "Following the showing" is a bit confusing: is it still about Mom and Dad or is it instead about Babb's films in general? Actually it seems to be a transitional paragraph, but a rather awkward one. Suggestion: rewrite this paragraph (perhaps dividing it into two) and rearrange what are now the sections "Film promotion" and "Later films" into a single section, "Film production" with subsections on "Mom and Dad", "Other early films", and "Later films".
**Well, that specifically is about Mom and Dad, but it became true of many of his later features.  
***Yes, agreed, but the organization could be bettered. This would not be a simple change and it's not one that I'm keen to make; I just have a gut feeling that it's necessary. Perhaps a third person could chime in here.
****I'll take a second look in any case, but I'm not sure how to fix it.  I'll have someone look at it.
*Film promotion: Can "per-dollar returns" be rephrased?
**I'm not opposed to it, but I'm not sure how.  That's the proper term for it.
***Then let's leave it. I know that I don't know this stuff (it's when friends talk of such delights of capitalism that I start to yawn and look at my wristwatch). 
*Later films: "made more money than any other film being played at the same theater would earn over a full run" is not so informative to dumbos like me who don't know what a "full run" would have meant. A tad more information, please.
**Okay, that I can do.
***Looking forward to it.
****Boom goes the dynamite.
Hoary 13:49, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Style and content too

message: On the correction and recorrection: Babb is best known for his presentation of exploitation lurid exploitation films.
I understand how "lurid" was wrong. But for me "exploitation" isn't good here because of the jingle of "tation, tation", because of the overuse of the word in this area of the article, and because it's a term that isn't yet explained. (It's particularly odd that it appears here without quotation marks shortly before it appears with quotation marks.) 
By the end of the article, I'm still a bit puzzled over "exploitation films". I understand that they're usually new edits of pre-existing junky elements, or (less commonly) freshly made junk, and that they're desperately advertised for any sensational (and often salacious) appeal. Yes, "lurid" was wrong, but "presentation of exploitation films" suggests to me that these are films of the genre or class "exploitation" just waiting to be presented, whereas I thought that it was primarily the presentation itself that turned the (often anodyne) raw material into exploitation flicks.
Sorry, I'm sleepy now; the above may make even less sense than usual. -- Hoary 21:44, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I may simply be too close to it at this point to understand where you're coming from on this.  You're not wrong - the presentation is often what put a bad film over the edge into exploitation territory, but Mom and Dad also ushered in an era where films were made specifically with this in mind.  Now, the "jingle," as you put it, it still necessary - they are what they are, and I'm not sure how we can cut down on it much further.  I did take a look at the part that was quoted in one place, however, and that was because the original was a direct quote, and it isn't any longer, so I've fixed that completely.  Hopefully this helps a bit. --badlydrawnjeff talk 00:51, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: "Exploitation films"

message: She Shoulda Said No? She Shoulda Said "No!"? -- Hoary 11:41, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Still working on the proper of the latter, the former claims 1970s in books. --badlydrawnjeff talk 12:38, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Ah, do you mean "1970"? -- Hoary 12:50, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Right, sorry.  Early morning. --badlydrawnjeff talk 14:37, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

text: I hear you. Late night here. I'm about to turn in. Good night, and when I look at this again twelve or so hours from now I want to see perfection! -- Hoary 14:53, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: ''She Shoulda Said'' what?

message: The article currently states that he was born in Lees Creek and says that this is near Centerville, Montgomery County, Ohio. Lees Creek is not close to that Centerville at all . The article also states that he was buried in Centerville, Ohio, but does not say which one. --- RockMFR 01:34, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Ahh, hmmm... Google Maps is showing another Centerville (possibly an old village) at that location.... researching now... --- RockMFR 01:41, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yes, it's the latter. I believe we have the other one linked later in the article. Lees Creek is certainly his place of birth, i'll try to dig up something on the Centerville and get that reference for you right-quick. The burial at Lees Creek is absolutely correct, though, also from the gravestone photo. I'll be removing that tag, but leaving the birth one, as the grave reference at the end of that sentence is for the whole line. --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:04, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

text: Well, without a decent atlas on-hand, it's really difficult to figure out the geography properly. As far as I can tell, the article is refering to a "Centerville Cemetery"  which may or may not be named after a hamlet in that particular area. --- RockMFR 02:03, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Yup, I'm triple checking right now. --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:04, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Alright, I'll leave this up to you. The first mention of Centerville in the Youth section was definitely incorrect. The burial location is really confusing. The engraving on the tombstone confuses me even more, as it says his life began in Centerville and ended in Lees Creek. --- RockMFR 02:08, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: The gravestone is confusing, yes, I agree.  Perhaps the problem, however, is the "near" word?  Because it's less than an hour away, both in Montgomery County? --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:09, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm very familar with the geography of the region. It is definitely not refering to the Centerville in Montgomery County. Wilmington, Lees Creek, and this "Centerville Cemetery" are all in Clinton County. Also, Google Maps is showing a Centerville (in place of Lees Creek) at certain zoom levels. --- RockMFR 02:10, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm from Massachusetts - an hour is half the state for me, haha.  It's certainly the one near Wilmington, per two books - the Friedman and the Schaefer, and Lees Creek is at least in the Briggs and Turan pieces.  --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:15, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Birth and burial locations 

message: If im not mistaken, that photo has him wereing black face. Either that or its a really crappy photo.  69.250.130.215 14:45, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Black Face 

message: It's over there, it didn't leave.  It's simply in the prose, the German language section.  --badlydrawnjeff talk 02:40, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Uncle Tom's Cabin redux 

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