Talk:Dragonet

message: Does "western Indo-Pacific" mean the Indian Ocean, or what?  —162.119.64.112 23:07, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  range 

message: 1) Reproduction section
→The section contains different elements of reproduction/mating, and it definitely can be divided in to subsections (courtship, spawning, etc.)
→Part about sexual dimorphism should be located in a different section, or be placed properly in within the other text in the Reproduction section in order to fit appropriately.
2) Citing problems
→Citation needs to be made after each sentence in which claims are made, not all at the end of the paragraph
3) Clarifications
→Reproduction: "Both male and female dragonets have been observed in displaying..." Displaying what?
→Reproduction: What exactly is a water column?
→Reproduction: What do you mean by "one reproductive day"?
Jyn0309 (talk) 04:39, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  General Comments 

message: General edits:
*Hyperlinks are needed
*The organization of sections is lacking
*Paragraphs get somewhat large; it would serve to cut them up
*Citations should go at the end of specific sentences, not all at the end of a paragraph. 
Specific edits:
*Summary paragraph
::*Insufficient. Add information inline with what is in the article below it. 
*Description
::*Types of fins and whatnot really need to be defined or at least hyperlinked. 
::*There is a dearth of citations. Fix that. 
*Reproduction
::*This section is too clumsy in structure. Cut it into 3-4 smaller paragraphs. 
::*Citations should be strewn throughout the text at the end of relative sentences, not all clumped at the end. 
*Aggression
::*Fix the title
::*Consider expanding
::*Hyperlinks!
::*Fix citations
*Feeding
::*Hyperlinks!
::*Fix citations
*Locomotion
::*Is this sections strictly necessary?
::*Hyperlinks!
::*Fix citations
*Aquariums
::*The image screws up this section completely. 
Bakerb4379 (talk) 00:29, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Suggested edits 

message: Should have some information on what kind of habitats they prefer 
Reproduction: uses some terms that aren’t defined (water column), maybe should consider defining it or linking it to a page about water 
columns if there is one
Reproduction: what does “one productive day” mean?
Reproduction section seems to run on, maybe consider making it more concise or splitting it up into three or so paragraphs
All sections: shouldn’t have all the citations at the end of the paragraph, they should be at the end of each sentence to which they correspond  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gopara (talk • contribs) 04:39, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Suggested Edits 

message: Great job!! To raise to a Good article status, I recommend:
* Add "Distribution and habitat" section. It will be better if you can add a picture showing their distribution.
* Add "Taxonomy" section.
Hami910311 (talk) 20:39, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Recommended edits 

message: Very good article! Contains lots of descriptive information but here are a few suggestions to help
*Physical Description: Second paragraph of this section has no references for all the information presented there
*Reproduction: Some of the information presented here are a little bit too in-depth, especially the numerical values.  Maybe shorten it a bit and reduce unnecessary information
*Feeding: Likewise, some information such as expelling food after eating are a bit too in depth or unrelated to the topic at hand
*The later sections could maybe be combined with former sections, or expanded upon
::*Locomotion: This section seems unnecessary and too detailed for wikipedia
::*Defense: perhaps move this section up to the competition/aggression section? It could fit pretty well in there
*In the aquarium section, the picture seems unnecessary and throws off the flow of the article. Perhaps removing it might be best
MLiu19 (talk) 21:28, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: General Comments

message: * Try to add more sections/information to give a more comprehensive view of the fish.
* Try to add more images.
* Defense section is a little short.  Try to incorporate elsewhere or include more information.
* If possible, try to break up the Reproduction section.  It's a lot of text.
VAleles (talk) 17:37, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggested Edits