Talk:Valis: The Fantasm Soldier

message: I removed non-NPOV text from the introduction:
:Because of the first two ports limitations, it had a lousy gameplay. The Famicom version had better controls, but an equally poor level design.
and from the Game Design section:
:Valis' jerky animation, bad hit detection, awkward scrolling and each boss fight suffered from slowdown. Also, the level designs were simple, and the main character moved quite slowly.
If anyone can source these comments appropriately, feel free to do so, and add them back in with improved grammar.  I also removed the caption text regarding Japanese publisher Riot's logo appearing on the building in the background from the screenshot; I don't think it's needed.Landauer 16:02, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyediting Cleanup

message: :Image:Valis riot.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot (talk) 12:51, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Valis riot.jpg

message: :Image:Valis1.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot (talk) 12:53, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Valis1.jpg