Talk:Bradenstoke Priory

message: The majority of the text here is a copyright violation of  and needs to be rewritten or removed. Jfire (talk) 00:44, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyvio

message: The article needs to elaborate on the phrase "and was well-run". The average reader isn't going to understand what that would have entailed. PSWG1920 (talk) 00:51, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: Not sure where that came from, but it seems unduly vague and largely unsupportable considering there is no generally applicable metric for such things; so I've removed it. The preceding sentence sets out their holdings and influence, and that is probably enough. --Rodhullandemu 01:00, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  "and was well-run" 

message: Although the source cited, Tudor Place, shows Walter and Edward as d'Evreux, they were not.  Tudor Place, unfortunately does not cite their source(s).  A better genealogical source is 
Foundation for Medieval Genealogy, Medieval Lands Project, online \\fmg.ac/Projects/MedLands\\, England, Earls Created 1138-1143 (EN2) v3.1; Salisbury, Earls of Salisbury 1143-1261 (de Salisbury) (Chap 11A); Edward de Salisbury  []
, listing Walter son of Edward as Walter FitzEdward de Salisbury.  Cawley cites his, usually primary, sources.  For Walter, Cawley cites:
[1711] Annals of Lacock Abbey, Appendix I, Book of Lacock, p. i. 
[1712] Complete Peerage XI:374. 
[1713] Red Book Exchequer, Part I, Certificationes factæ de feodis militum, p. 222. 
Another source, 
Bowles, M.A., M.R.S.L.; Rev. W. L.; Nichols; John Gough, Annals and Antiquities of Lacock Abbey (25 Parliament Street; London, England: John Bowyer Nichols and Son, 1835), pg 20, [] 
lists Walter as the founder of Bradenstoke Priory.  
I am going to change Walter and Edward's names from 
"Walter FitzEdward (otherwise D'Everaux), was the son of Edward De Evreux of Salisbury"
to "Walter FitzEdward de Salisbury, was the son of Edward de Salisbury"
and I'll replace the Tudor Place citation with a citation for 
Bowles, M.A., M.R.S.L.; Rev. W. L.; Nichols; John Gough, Annals and Antiquities of Lacock Abbey (25 Parliament Street; London, England: John Bowyer Nichols and Son, 1835), pg 20  []
and
Foundation for Medieval Genealogy, Medieval Lands Project, online \\fmg.ac/Projects/MedLands\\, England, Earls Created 1138-1143 (EN2) v3.1; Salisbury, Earls of Salisbury 1143-1261 (de Salisbury) (Chap 11A); Edward de Salisbury  []
Annals and Antiquities of Lacock Abbey has a section that specifically states that Walter and Edward were not related to the Counts of d'Evreux, in Chapter III, pgs 39-45.  Cawley supports this assertion in
 
Foundation for Medieval Genealogy, Medieval Lands Project, online \\fmg.ac/Projects/MedLands\\, England, Earls Created 1138-1143 (EN2) v3.1; Salisbury, Earls of Salisbury 1143-1261 (de Salisbury) (Chap 11A); Edward de Salisbury  []
and 
Normandy Nobility v3.2 Evreux, Comtes d'Evreux, family of Dukes of Normandy (Chap 9A); Robert Comte d'Evreux  []
162.246.101.252 (talk) 21:13, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Walter FitzEdward de Salisbury and his father Edward de Salisbury - not d'Evreux 

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