Talk:Rainham, London/Archive 1

message: I think this is a nice, concise, and interesting article.  The only issue I see for GA, is that the Lead paragraph could be longer.  See Wikipedia:Lead section for suggestions.  Is it possible to photograph one of the pre-historic sites?  It's not necessary, but given the amount of text devoted to that topic, a picture would be a nice addition (assuming of course there's anything to photograph.)  Appraiser 20:33, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I expanded the introduction slightly, I don't know if anyone wants to refine it further or if it'll do for good article status. Oh, and to be honest I don't think there's much prehistory to photograph. The book I used to source the info had some photos but they weren't good quality and I don't think it would be fair use to use them. Max naylor 11:22, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

text: Need a source for the 30,000. MRSC • Talk 12:19, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: The 30,000 was made up some time ago. I added it when I first came to Wikipedia, I was told it in a geography lesson. Using the National Statistics from to 2001 census, I found out the actual population of Rainham and Wennington and added to the article with a reference. Max naylor 12:33, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: That's great. MRSC • Talk 16:42, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

text: Could the references have a last access date? It would neaten it up a bit. RHB 16:39, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Good Article Status Discussion

message: #Well-written: Neutral
#Factually accurate: Pass 
#Broad: Fail 
#Neutrally written: Pass
#Stable: Pass 
#Well-referenced: Neutral
#Images: Fail
Images- we start off with a dot next to a splotch in the infobox, I suppose that the splotch is London, but it's hard to tell.  From there we go to a gallery(!) of broken images.
Well-referenced- the history section has no references besides the name references until the 20th century, with statements such as "hinted at" and "it is now believed".
Broad- other than the history, there is very little about Rainham.  You have some discussion of the various railways and subways that go there, but not much else.  What is in Rainham?  A few offices and 12000 people, and that's all?
Overall, this article is B-class, but needs some work to get to GA.  I see that it's now up for peer review, so I hope that goes well for you.  --PresN 04:23, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: As of 20/02/07, I have renominated the article for GA status as I have improved the article with a gallery of self-taken photographs, a 'demographics' and 'future' section. Please reconsider the prior decision. Max Naylor 14:41, 20 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GAC

message: Who keeps changing the headings to non-standard Wikipedia headings? What is the reason? Please refer to the style guide before making further changes. Max Naylor 21:03, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Headings

message: Third time lucky! I’ve now increased the amount of references in the history section after a short trip to the library, and the article is now punctuated with images. Hopefully it will pass this time! Max Naylor 15:33, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Third GAC nomination

message: All inline citations go directly after the punctuation. --Nehrams2020 07:03, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA comment

message: The article is well written and will pass once the following have been fixed:
*Please provide a Fair Use Rationale for the Rainham Casino image.  Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: All sources of history information have been exhausted, unfortunately. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Any suggestions? Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

text: I’m not sure about this; the information in the future section is not really relevant to Rainham’s economy. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

text: Unfortunately there aren’t really any sports teams, and the closest thing to a museum is Rainham Library. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

text: Just the citations, lists and overlinking to sort out. Epbr123 13:26, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I have to fail the article. The seven days have now passed and not all the problems have been fixed. Epbr123 19:00, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA review

message: In other areas the education section has been combined on the borough article (an example is Barking). Perhaps that could be done for Rainham/Havering. This will eliminate the lists from this article. MRSC • Talk 22:46, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I've created a full list on the boro' article (from the Havering education site). I tend to prefer to see it under one place, but if there are notable local schools, then they should perhaps also be mentioned in this article. If they are notable, then more important to create articles for them. Kbthompson 10:39, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Education

message: I saw a report on BBC London News where the local councillor said he felt Rainham was getting a bad deal from the London Riverside plans. I think the 'dumping ground' comment is more to do with Frog Island, London and a plan to build a site at Rainham that would process waste from a possible terrorist attack. The 'terror tip' as James Brokenshire MP calls it.  MRSC • Talk 22:55, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Dumping ground

message: “High profile retailer Ambience”? I don’t think this is correct. I’m removing this bit from the article unless a verifiable source is found. Max Naylor 13:34, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Economy section

message: One last go through to check the references, then I believe this could go forward for GA again. That would cover all the issues from the previous one. GA can be a bit of a moving target, but should pass. Kbthompson (talk) 11:14, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: GA review (again)