Talk:Ancient Greek cuisine

message: * Aristophane's Frogs 1032, cited in the original does not discuss the subject matter the fr: version says it does (the spilling of blood) I have thuis left it out unless/until I can clarify this (possibly an error in page number or something...)
*The fr: version gives a quote by Aelianus (I, 28) which comments on Rhodes inhabitants being great gourmets; when reading the original, all this says is that in Rhodes they prefer fish where others prefer meat, so I have left this out also. Bridesmill 01:35, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Concerning Frogs, 1032 does talk about the spilling of blood:   ("for Orpheus taught us rites and to refrain from killing"). Jastrow 10:58, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: My mistake - must have been asleep first time I looked on Perseus...fixed, thanks.Bridesmill 19:14, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Translator's notes

message: What an incredible article!  Well done, Bridesmill.  WP:FAC? -- ALoan (Talk) 15:47, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I am but a humble translator (well, ok, I added maybe 2% if that). the Fr wiki Greek history guys deserve the credit on this one (User:Jastrow here seems to be part of that crew)Bridesmill 00:15, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: Indeed - well done them too.  I was only looking at WP:FAOL the other day, and noticed that, for example, the French versions of Édouard Manet, Sparta, trebuchet and trireme were miles better that ours... -- ALoan (Talk) 11:04, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
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message: Many sections in the article might benefit from more general naming. The Food and Drink Project has a template that is useful for sorting information under standardized headings.
Peter Isotalo 12:25, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Standard sections 

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*Lead section is insufficient - per WP:LEAD, this section should summarize the most important points covered in an article.
*Numerous grammar errors – most prevalent is the use of colons as full stops and commas needed to separate independent clauses and parenthetical phrases, among others.
*Numerous use of words to be avoided, peacock words, weasel words and phrasing not appropriate to encyclopedia articles  – e.g. “was evidently water”, “in general opinion”, “great cooks such as…”, “apparently accompanied”, “was apparently proverbial” “some chefs”, “more and more Greeks”, “which gives us a good idea”, etc.
*Tense issues – inconsistent use of past and present tense in the same paragraph (e.g. Wine section)
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*The only inline citations provided are to attribute quotes to ancient literature.  Article is, in regard to inline citations, essentially unreferenced.
*It appears no effort was made to provide reasonable English-language references. WP:RSUE states, “English-language sources should be used in preference to foreign-language sources assuming the availability of an English-language source of equal quality”.  Given that Greek cuisine is decidedly not French cuisine, I find it difficult to assume that no additional English sources could be provided.
*Numerous NOR violations – e.g. “but this may be a matter of genre rather than real evidence of changes in farming and food customs”, “the Greeks would classify water as…”, “The phrase "Meal of Iccus" was apparently proverbial”, etc.
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*Prima Facie complete topic-wise
*Ideas not completed – e.g. article states onions “were symbolic of military life”, but does not elaborate as to why.  Article states a particular food item was “important”, but does not elaborate as to why.  Article states “meat was expensive, except for pork”; why wasn’t pork expensive?  There are many other instances of incomplete ideas/topics.
*Nonsequitors and unclear phrasing – e.g. “Larger fish, particularly prized by gourmets, were very expensive, such as tuna and eels from lake Copais in Boeotia, whose absence from Athens during the Peloponnesian War is alluded to in The Acharnians”.  “The Greeks ate while seated, the use of benches being reserved for banquets”.  Did they then sit on the ground? On chairs?
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* NPOV violations – e.g. “the famous black gruel”
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*This article is actually a quick-fail, given the presence of a clean-up banner.  Article appears to be a direct translation of the featured French version (French article, however, retains appropriate footnoting).  It would appear French and English wikis have vastly different requirements, as substantial work is needed on this article.  Please feel free to contact me if help or elaboration is needed. Ɛƚƈơƅƅơƚɑ talk 14:48, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA assessment

message: Some of the Phocaeans of Spain? Or Milesians of the Black Sea?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.89.144.86 (talk) 02:01, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: A valid remark. If you ask the question, you probably already know that most sources are Athenian. Locations have been precised as much as possible. I think Dalby's Siren Feasts provides more info on the subject. Jastrow (Λέγετε) 16:34, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  What Greeks you're talking about? 

message: Where is the food for their supper!!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.118.97.83 (talk) 19:20, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Supper 

message: Where is the food for supper 174.118.97.83 (talk) 19:22, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Supper 

message: Someone some time ago changed "wine" to "milk shakes" (for dipping their bread). I'm not logged in, nor do I have my pw at hand. If someone can fix this, that would be great. Otherwise, I'll try to remember to come back and correct it later on. Thanks. H-ko  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.125.56.24 (talk) 00:11, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Breakfast 

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: The reference to Apicius is both confusing and misleading, as it links to Apicius the cookbook not Apicius the general for whom the set of recipes was retrospectively named. It is not really clear to me which is meant by this ref., and unfortunately i have neither the time nor the wherewithal decide. Anyone who can rewrite and reconfigure this, please do! Actio (talk) 16:51, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cultural beliefs about the role of food