Talk:Daisy von Scherler Mayer

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# The citation style predominantly used by the Daisy von Scherler Mayer article appears to be Citation Style 1. The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.)  
# Citation ref tags have not been placed within the requested text indicating which portions of the text the source is referencing. (See WP:INTEGRITY.)
In the collapsed section below titled Request edit examples, I have illustrated two: The first shows how the edit request was submitted; the second shows how requests should be submitted in the future. 
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.
 
 
In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Daisy von Scherler Mayer article. Additionally, ref tags have not been placed within the text at the exact positions where the information they reference resides. Using the correct style and the correct positioning of the ref tags, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.
The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]
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^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 1.
^ Harinath, Prisha. , Science, 51(78):46. 2020.
^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 2.
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc. Also, the ref tags are placed in the exact location where the text which they reference resides. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. 
Kindly submit an edit request below this reply post that aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo  01:21, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Hello everyone, I received a notification that I was mentioned on this Talk page. I see that User:MNW2009 linked to my User page in their initial post above. It appears that you may have used my previous requests as a template (thanks for the shout-out, GRuban!). I want to clarify that I am not associated with this user or their requests, and kindly ask that you update your post to remove the link to my User page. You can link to your own page by using user page. Thanks very much, and good luck with your edit requests! Kt2011 (Talk · COI:Walton family) 17:07, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

text: Quite. MNW, I did say on your talk page that you could do worse than use Kt2011's requests as a model, but - don't sign his name to them!  --GRuban (talk) 17:12, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Not sure what you're referring to, but must've been an accident. This all is very above my head, so going to step away and wait for @GRuban to handle the Daisy changes when possible. Thank you! 207.34.41.62 (talk) 18:20, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't know why that commented with me signed out - anyway, that was me ^ MNW2009 (talk) 18:22, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
replies: text:  I looked at your requested edits, and did most of the first sentence, because that one is cited by IndieWire. I can't find the other parts of your requested backed by the Vogue or IndieWire sources. Can you find third-party reliable sources that say what you want said? Then, ideally, format them the way User:Spintendo says in that collapsed box. Thank you. --GRuban (talk) 19:26, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Reply 26-SEP-2023