Talk:The Halo Graphic Novel

message: Many of the links of the artists lead to non-corresponding people, many of whom are deceased sport stars.
211.26.110.142 13:50, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
thread_title: Artist Links

message: I'd say having a little more to explain wahat happens throughout the novels is perfectly fine, as long as we don't get all crazy and overboard. Dåvid Fuchs (talk / frog blast the vent core!) 16:14, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Story Summaries 

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thread_title:  Automated Peer-Review 

message: * Prose is comprehensible (could be better), grammar is correct, and the structure is clear at first reading. The structure is logical, contains a good lead section summarising the topic, text is organised. Does not violate standards in Wikipedia Manual of style. Links to specific terms present - SPARTAN II MJOLNIR Mark VI battle armor etc. 
::*Article should be named, Halo (graphic novel) as in accordance with other graphic novels. 
* It is factually accurate and verifiable. However, different sections use same source repeatedly meaning most material is derived from minimum sources and little cross-checking. No OR apparent. 
* Broad in coverage? Do not know. Do not know of the Halo Universe. However, "takes place during" comments seem to indicate that entire Halo chronology is considered and hence broad coverage is given.
* NPOV. Reception indicates both criticisms and praise. Rest of article is written in an unbiased perspective. 
* Doesn't appear to change significantly. The following comparison within one month doesn't show significant differences. 
* Could use more images in my opinion. 
Please fix the minor requirements for completeness sake. Also, once you're done do rate the other articles on the good articles nomination page after comparing with WP:WIAGA. Zuracech lordum 15:04, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Comments on good article nomination

message: There are some things that have to be done- proper lead and refs, for instance, plus some info updating- but this could conceivably be a FA. Anyone gonna help? David Fuchs (talk) 00:42, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Drop a note into the Comics Project talk page. It is looking pretty solid at the moment so getting a few more eyes on this and see how it goes. (Emperor 00:53, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  FA? 

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thread_title: Fair use rationale for Image:Halocomicbook.jpg

message: This Featured Article has four dead external links, which can be found here. Please fix them as soon as possible. Thanks! --haha169 (talk) 23:08, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Resolved Thank you! --haha169 (talk) 00:40, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: No link issues at this point but you should use either accessyear + accessmonth or accessdate.  And update those accessdates.  — Dispenser 01:05, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
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