Talk:Clara Rockmore

message: Too much bias. --Eldarion 23:52, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
replies: text: I removed several gushing adjectives but I don't think the article is especially biased -- there really were no challengers to Rockmore through the Theremin's early years. RomaC 01:59, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

text: I think it's OK to say that she was a virtuoso performer when you source it. A virtuoso is an individual who possesses outstanding technical ability at singing or playing a musical instrument so she fits this definition. The problem is the "she's considered". Please visit Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words. Maybe you could just say "she was a virtuso (...) performer". Cheers --Karljoos (talk) 19:15, 10 September 2009 (UTC)
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message: It would be nice to find a pic of Clara to post on this article.
I found this on google.  http://www.thestraniero.com/stranierovision/images/Clara-Rockmore.jpg
: We may be able to get one under fair use. — Edward Z. Yang(Talk) 01:38, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
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message: Freebird55 (talk) 17:18, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
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message: There is a grammatical error: the word 'she' before the word 'tendenitis' is incorrect.
81.101.75.102 (talk) 18:54, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text:  Corrected (talk) 19:14, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

text: Already done EvergreenFir (talk) Please  20:22, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request on 9 March 2016 

message: , could you explain why you object to my edit? I made some minor changes to the text, which I thought improved the tone and readability, and added some information about why the family left Europe. Zacwill (talk) 18:13, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: I feel your edit added unsourced information and was worse in tone and diction than what had been there, e.g. you wrote "born to a family of Jews" omitted the migration to America and other issues.  SPECIFICO talk  19:47, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: 'Born to a family of Lithuanian Jews' is better than 'the daughter of a Lithuanian-Jewish family' in my opinion, but that's personal preference. I don't see that I omitted the migration to America: '...before leaving for the United States in 1922.' Zacwill (talk) 22:05, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: Let's wait and see what others think.  SPECIFICO talk  22:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text:  She couldn't have been "the daughter" if she had a sister. How about "born to a Jewish-Lithuanian family"? The additional details on movement are potentially valuable, but they should be sourced. Eperoton (talk) 22:56, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: I find User:Zacwill's version slightly better flowing, especially the section around "meeting fellow immigrant Léon Theremin" and omitting the repeated date of birth details. I also agree with User:Eperoton about the slightly confusing use of "the daughter". Further, Zacwill gives more details about the family's movements, and omits unnecessary historial geographical detail. On balance, I prefer Zacwill's. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 23:13, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

text: Here's a source, with a lot of other valuable information that could be incorporated into the article. Zacwill (talk) 23:25, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
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