Talk:Ismet Horo

message: I've made some grammatical changes to this page, but would like some clarification on the needfulness and meaning of certain sentences and phrases.  Consider the following:
* "There rumors that . . . he was a street janitor."
First of all, are there rumors or were there rumors?  Is a rumor encyclopedic?  Perhaps if it is widespread enough it should be included, but, to me, anyway, we need a linking verb here.
* "He started his professional career around 1995/6, but he got interested in comedy when he was still in high school."
When was he in high school?  There is some undefinable space of time here that seems worth mentioning, but we don't even know how old this guy is.  Can we get his birth date up here?
* "Videos and DVD's"
I've changed this to "Videos and Albums," seeing as how DVD's are videos, and the information given talks about musical albums as well.
* "Ismet Horo has also released a 2 vhs videos "
I've changed this to "released two VHS tapes."  I think it might be important to realize that VHS tapes are often converted into DVD's.  So, are some exclusively on VHS?
* "dvd telling jokes"
I changed this to "DVD of his jokes."  I am assuming they are, in fact, Ismet's jokes and not someone else's.  Additionally, I believe the reader will understand that, given his occupation as comedian and the media format, Ismet's DVD will have him telling jokes on it rather than through some other means. Beanland (talk) 02:33, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
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