Talk:Lew Carpenter

message: If anyone has information on his coaching career, please add it or leave me a message.  Thanks.  Jrcrin001 (talk) 00:40, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Coaching

message: I am now requesting a peer review to move forward. Jrcrin001 (talk) 02:19, 10 December 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: This is still a painfully troubled article.  It's not remotely close to getting to B class.  It has problems on just about every level: bad formatting, poorly constructed prose, claims and subjective statements that are not supported by citations, way too much focus on the people around Carpenter and not Carpenter himself.  Jrcrin001, please take a look at my most recent series of edits as I address some of the simpler problems.  The other thing I would suggest is taking a look at some other high-quality, well-rated football biography articles to get a sense of their style, organization, and focus.  A good example is John Maulbetsch, who played and coached in the early part of the 20th century.  See more examples here: :Category:GA-Class college football articles.  Jweiss11 (talk) 06:27, 10 December 2010 (UTC)
thread_title: Pre-peer review

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