Talk:Otomat

message: Funnily enough, seen that OTOMAT comes from a parithetic joint venture of OTO Melara and Matra, the missiles could have been called differently, ex. MAT-OTO, but this resembled too much the italian word MATTO, that means Mad, crazy.--Stefanomencarelli 09:53, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: OTOMAT

message: I'm going to take a guess that this was converted from a French or Italian version of the same page in that language.  Dotation is an obsolete word in the English language and I had to look it up as a native English speaker.  Installation is what you are looking for there.  While not incorrect many of the phrases here are very strange.  I'd like to look at copy editing this article if it would not offend. Tirronan 14:59, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I think we should stick to info directly related to the Otomat program instead of wandering off into interesting but unrelated matters such as the true date of the Eilat's sinking. --Victor12 19:15, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Copyedit needed

message: This missile born with a first program of development started in 1967, when the world was taken of surprise by the sinking of Eilat, due the impact of three P-15 Termit anti-ship missiles, fired by two Komar gunships. This happened in October, and not in June during the Six day war, as often reported[1]. In every case, it's not known if the contract for the OTOMAT was made before the Eilat sinking, but the year was the same when many navies discovered how dangerous were the anti-ship weapons like Styx, already operative by nine years. Tirronan 18:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I think we should stick to info directly related to the Otomat program instead of wandering off into interesting but unrelated matters such as the true date of the Eilat's sinking. --Victor12 19:15, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: 1st correction

message: The Otomat missle program began in 1967 when the world was taken by suprise by the sinking of the Israeli Destroyer Eilat by the impact of 3 P-15 Termit anit-ship missiles fired by two Komar Patrol Missile boats.  This happened in October of of 1967 (not in June as often reported).  While it is unknown if the Otomat program was started before the Eilat event, every country became aware of just how dangerous the 9 year old P-15 Termit (NATO Designation STYX) missile was. Tirronan 18:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggested rewrite

message: The Otomat missile program started in 1967, the same year of the sinking of the Israeli destroyer Eilat by three P-15 Termit anti-ship missiles. Although it is not known whether the program began before or after the Eilat sinking, this event created worldwide awareness about the capabilities of such missiles. 
:I think we should stick to info directly related to the Otomat program instead of wandering off into interesting but unrelated matters such as the true date of the Eilat's sinking. --Victor12 19:15, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Alternative rewrite

message: While Aerospatiale developed the indigenous Exocet, even if based on a German design , taht was also the anchestor of MBB Kormoran, Oto-Melara started a cooperation with Matra, the other big French missile builder. The full development started in 1969. Already in these early years Matra was paritetic involved, and both MMI and MN were interested on this new weapon, different respect Exocet for a more capable and costly turbine-jet instead of a full rocket propulsion system. The trials started in 1971 with some experimental launches, but soon a missile was launched and hit a naval target on 28 February 1972. The missile's development was officially ended in 1974Lanzara. 
suggested rewrites?  Tirronan 19:39, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: 2nd paragraph

message: Oto-Melara Corporation (Italy) started the Otomat program in cooperation with the Matra Corporation (France)drawing interest from European countries as it was quite different than the  developing Exocet Aerospatiale (France) and AS34 KormoranMBB (Germany) having a more expensive and more capable tubrofan engine giving greater range and allowing a heavier warhead over the solid propellent Exocet and Kormoran. The Otomat's development was officially ended in 1974 Lanzara
Now what the heck does autarchic mean? Tirronan 20:38, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Suggested rewrite

message: Well Victor(from Key Publishing forum?), 
1967 was a very interesting year for anti-ship missiles, so i don't rate unrelated at all the eventually born of OTOMAT as 'effect' given by Eilat sinking. It' unclear if the born of Exocet and Otomat was related or not to this battle, but this surely boosted the interest for these programs, and the next yers no less than five different missiles: Exocet, OTOMAT, Harpoon, Gabriel and Kormoran were put in service. While it's unclear if the 'start' was due to this event (surely not for Kormoran), there is no doubt that Styx acted a strong 'dimostration' about the power of anti-ship missiles. 
Noticeable that already several of them were availables, but nobody cared: They were either SS-12 mini-missiles, fair but a bit weak, or URSS powerful but mysterious weapons.  After this 'display' western world navies raised a lot their interest on this costly weapons.
So the whole history of anti-ship missiles, included OTOMAT, could had been a lot different without Eilat sinking, this is why i included this event in the description about OTOMAT origins.
Moreover, there is another reason. Eilat sinking was often dated during Six day war. While there is no problem either to rely this to the heavy 'cold war' between Israel and arabs, Six day war happened in June, while Eilat was sunk in October. Definitively, not in Six day war. 
I have hoverauled the article, expecially reorganized the stuff in a more related manner. Now that i done my best i'll wait for eventual further suggestions.
--Stefanomencarelli 19:52, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: Nope, not from Key publishing. As for the sinking, the event in itself is important and my rewrite proposal acknowledges that. However sentences such as This happened in October, and not in June during the Six day war, as often reported. are not relevant to the Otomat article, you could just mention that it was in October 1967 and link to the relevant article, in this case HMS Zealous (R39). As for improvements, the article needs massive copyediting to improve its prose. Also, could you add page numbers to inline citations? --Victor12 20:05, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Eilat sinking

message: Ok I did my best to try and make this into a more readable format. Please read it over carefully as I might have changed something beyond your intent.  It still needs a decent spell check.  I hope this was helpful. Tirronan 01:23, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I have put a  template on the Notes section, because currently inline citations on this article lack page numbers (check WP:CITE). Please don't remove it until all inline citations have page numbers. --Victor12 13:40, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

text: Sorry, but you haven't. You have added page numbers to the "References" section but you also need to add specific pages to the "Notes" section. Other readers need to be able to know from what part of these articles does your info come. --Victor12 16:11, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

text: Please do, it's necessary for verifiability purposes. --Victor12 17:40, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

text: One more thing, could you provide full references for the articles used?  For instance, could you spell out abbreviations? IDR seems to be the Italian version of International Defense Review magazine, could you put its full name? If that's the case what's the original (Italian) name of the "Special coastal defences" issue? Also, please provide the volume and number of each issue. As for War machines encyclopedia, is it a book in English or in Italian? Could you provide an author or editor. --Victor12 22:07, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

text: OK, thanks. I've updated the reference section with info from the RID website. I've assumed 1982 = vol.1, 1983 = vol.2 and so on. I've also removed the War machines encyclopedia as it is not currently used in the article and added  to all of the others. BTW what's the Italian name for the "RID News" section? --Victor12 23:31, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Finished copy edit

message: I got curious and went to the MBDA website to find out that they are still marketing the block IV version of the missile and it is in active service with 12 courtries.  OTOMAT really never had much chance in with the US Navy as US ships normally operate under air cover and failing that can get sub support and satilite, or UAV, support in targeting information making the harpoon system ideal for the set of circumstances they work under. However it looks to me as if MBDA is still trying to sell OTOMAT and for countries with out huge budgets OTOMAT is probably a good answer.  The US is at this time very close to deploying a very inexpesive cruise missile for land attack in conjuction with the US Navy's Littoral warfare thrust. Tirronan 15:15, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: MBDA Website

message: The surviving Kenya Navy ships that used to be fitted with this missile have been converted to OPV configuration without the missile launchers, thus Kenya is no longer an operator - both the table and map need to be updated. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 13:41, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Kenya no longer an operator 

message: Do you have another source to support this. That looks very much like a news aggregator or a WP:SPS to me on the lines of IDR, IDRW and so on. Thanks. Adamgerber80 (talk) 18:50, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: You are providing a link from the same source where I have clearly stated that the source itself does not meet WP:RS. Do you have an alternate source which clearly states that this missile has been modified as a land attack missile. Thanks. Adamgerber80 (talk) 18:57, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: This is the defence newspaper.Outliner73 (talk) 19:00, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text:  What is a defense news paper? Please take this to WP:RSN if you think that this meets WP:RS requirements. Do not add this back until this issue is resolved. Adamgerber80 (talk) 19:01, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: https://www.trasporti-italia.com/focus/mbda-al-via-lo-sviluppo-del-nuovo-teseo/33323 do you want more?Outliner73 (talk) 19:02, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text:  That source you provided does not make any mention of land-attack. (I used google translate) Do you have one which does? Adamgerber80 (talk) 19:06, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: i can look for more sorurces but  yoiu are becoming boring.First one is more than good.Outliner73 (talk) 19:08, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

text: https://www.airpressonline.it/33516/33516/Outliner73 (talk) 19:10, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

text: if you've nothing to add i i update.i can't set here 100 references.Outliner73 (talk) 19:14, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
replies: text:  Again, the source makes no mention of land attack. Please provide a WP:RS which clearly states land attack capability and mention the quote here since you do not seem to understand this concept. And this is not "boring". If you wish to add content, WP:PROVEIT or don't add it. It is very simple and please be patient. This will take time. Adamgerber80 (talk) 19:15, 17 July 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Land attack missile