Talk:Gaza Strip

message: I saw that `One source section` was added to the section "Israeli policies during the Israeli military occupation (1967 - mid-1990s)", the section does in fact reference multiple sources and authorities. What is expected to remove this flag? DMH223344 (talk) 23:50, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  What is expected to remove One source section template? 

message: Propose to rename the section title "Israeli policies during the Israeli military occupation (1967 - mid-1990s)" to: "Impact of Israeli Policies".
The reasons:
# The current title suggests that Gaza is no longer occupied
# The section discusses issues that extend beyond the mid-1990s. For example the blockade and attacks on Gaza. Also the section describes the narrative of Roy: "Roy explains that the framework for Israeli policy established between 1967 and 1973 would not change, even with the limited self-rule introduced by the Oslo Accords in the 1990s, but would grow dramatically more draconian in the early 2000s."
DMH223344 (talk) 00:03, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Renaming to Israeli policies following Israeli military occupation. nableezy -  00:37, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Rename section "Israeli policies during the Israeli military occupation (1967 - mid-1990s)" 

message: Atlas source doesn't support the cited claim, please remove both. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Literacy 

message: he isn't a a diplomat. change it please. 84.110.218.178 (talk) 08:35, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed. Seems to be a fragment left over from this revision. Sean.hoyland (talk) 08:49, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  former Israeli diplomat Gideon Levy,[227] 

message: The article mentions that the open air prison characterization began when the 2007 blockade started, but this is not true. See for example Amira Haas' 1995 book with a whole chapter called "Gaza Prison" discussing the permit system and restrictions on movement which go back to at least 1991.
Additionally, as early as 2004 Giora Eiland referred to it as a "huge concentration camp" https://www.makan.org.uk/glossary/the-gaza-strip/
Even in 2008 (just a year after the beginning of the blockade), Adalah described the conditions: "The metaphor of the Gaza Strip as the world’s largest prison is unfortunately outdated. Israel now treats the Strip more like a zoo." DMH223344 (talk) 16:46, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: If we have the sources, then I would support the characterization of a "prison" (effectively) from whenever. Selfstudier (talk) 17:38, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

text: Without Egypt blockading it's part of the border it wouldn't be a blockade. HudecEmil (talk) 18:00, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Open air prison characterization 

message: In the intro, next to polity please add in West Asia. 2600:100C:A219:7127:1469:5428:B808:466 (talk) 11:04, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Shadow311 (talk) 13:56, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Semi-protected edit request 

message: The introductory paragraph should include a statement about the population density in Gaza such as "The region has a considerably larger population density than the rest of Palestine." Calling the region "small" is a tad misleading without this clarification. 
2600:1700:AC00:A390:4CA8:F6CC:54C9:372C (talk) 01:42, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: dont use undefined terms like small. Use actual figures and direct comparsons and let the reader decide if it is small. 2604:3D09:1583:7700:34D3:7E7:A71:757F (talk) 14:39, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Introductory Paragraph 

message: The number killed on October 7 2023 has been revised to 1,163, including 767 civilians. Source: https://www.lemonde.fr/en/opinion/article/2024/02/04/israel-s-iraqi-moment_6492786_23.html Sustnabili Thuy (talk) 08:24, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
replies: text: Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. thetechie@enwiki: ~/talk/ $ 03:05, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 14 May 2024 

message: Article has become outdated, as there is minimum mention of how the ongoing Israeli invasion ravaged the strip. Needs addressing. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:31, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Updates