Talk:Gopal Khanna

message: State achievement:
Developed E-Gov program for the state with a new IT governance structure and, in the process, redefined the delivery of IT services to state entities into a working "federated" model that encompasses agency-unique, shared, and utility IT service delivery; within the governance process, refined an enterprise strategic planning process and project portfolio program for the state; established an advisory board from agency and private sector leadership; delivered to the legislature the state’s first-ever Master Plan for Information Technology.[5]
These activities required hiring many staff positions who do not directly deliver IT services. This did not improve the service delivery. Previously OET provided shared and utility services, this is not a new delivery model. 
# Negotiated unprecedented agreements with an assortment of large, medium, and small agencies to implement and model the federated governance model through the merging of appropriate shared and utility services - including networking, data centers, storage, etc. - into the central IT shared services organization.[citation needed]
Citations as to specific agreements is needed. Previously OET provided shared and utility services, this is not a new delivery model.
Joesren (talk) 17:07, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  balance of achievements 

message: Only 1 reference given where many forums are described. • 
Joesren Joesren (talk) 21:42, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  'frequently' writes, speaks, etc. 

message: Citation covers appointment only. No evidence/cite for the statement as a whole.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Joesren (talk • contribs) 21:40, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  'Khanna has engineered the functioning and structure of a new cabinet-level agency and developed strategic, technical and operational plans for the organization.' 

message: "His broad-based background[dubious – discuss] in corporate America and as an entrepreneur includes positions" 
Needs clarification on how 2 corporate positions, at the level they are stated.
constitute a broad based background. Also needs definition of the consulting company
as to clients and relevance.Rpathore (talk) 03:39, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  dubious section 

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message: Very insignificant government employee someone got a wiki page? Come on.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.205.231.170 (talk) 17:17, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  this page is a resume