Talk:Erlkönig

message: There's a duplicate of this article at Erlking.
::Actually, not.
Redirect to Erlking page undone as it was incorrect. Bkesselman (talk) 18:54, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Duplicate 

message: Why was Schubert's Erlkonig merged with this article?  Schubert's Erlkonig definitely needs its own page.  This would be like merging Beethoven's 9th with the poem upon which its 4th movement's text is based.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.163.7.131 (talk) 20:18, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Reorganization needed 

message: This is possibly the worst translation ever.  Every line translates differently than what is written.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.127.3.249 (talk) 12:10, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I second this. Hof can even mean a Royal Court! But home is most accurate.
I am native german speaker aswell and my english is far from beeing perfect, but i think the translation is really awfull, sorry.
I just found an english translation (which is not so literal but keeps the sense and reflects the tension much better) by  Sir Walter Scott (e.g. here http://ingeb.org/Lieder/werreite.html). As this honorable man has died far over 100 years ago, his translation should no longer be copyright protected (or is it? i am no lawyer..). I would propose to use his translation instead. 217.230.251.113 (talk) 13:19, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

text: I've copied the translation in Wikisource into this article.  It's somewhat better than the previous version, but I think it also has some issues. Magicpiano (talk) 14:01, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Der Erlkonig/translation 

message: I'm not familiar with this particular work, but if it is true that Herder was inspired by a Danish work, then the Danish title should be included. The text makes it look like "Erlkönigs Tochter" is Danish, when it in fact is German. In old Danish, "Erlkönig" would be "Ellekonge" / "Elverkonge" so I guess that the work must have to do with "Elverskud" / "Elleskud" or something closely related. "Erlkönigs Tochter" would be "Ellekongens Datter" in Danish, but I'm not sure if the title was translated directly. Valentinian (talk) / (contribs) 21:43, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Danish work Herder based his poem on 

message: Can anyone point me to a source for the drawing "The Earlking" shown in this article? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 128.187.0.178 (talk) 01:09, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Albert Sterner drawing 

message: should this not somehow be linked into a section on romanticism? although Goethe didnt like to admit it ("i call the classic the healthy, the romantic the sickly"), this poem is the epitomy of romantic literature
:I think the poem belongs to Goethe's youthfully romantic period, the Sturm und Drang years. His later classicism had an element of reaction against his unbridled youth, in life and writing. - The article really needs some reorganizing and a more orderly structure.83.254.151.33 (talk) 11:17, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Romanticism 

message: It seems possible to me, I mean it's not a big jump from Erl to Earl.Cameron Nedland 19:52, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: No, the German for "Earl" is "Graf". Hairy Dude 21:57, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm pretty sure it's something like Elf King.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.163.7.131 (talk) 20:16, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
replies: text: Absolutely not, learn some Danish. Earl and King are and always have been two completely different ranks, it's only the US which has reduced the title to a name, so that translation is not only lazy, it's nonsense. In addition, a long list of similar works catgorises the poor relationship between elves and men, such as True Thomas, False Knight...  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.196.29.117 (talk) 08:23, 19 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Erlkönig = '''Earl''' King? 

message: Lots of dubious claims are made in the article  with no citations to back them up. Appropriate tag inserted!
:Well, yes; some of the analysis crosses the line on original research as well, or is that what you meant?   You can tag individual instances  by placing  after them (as I just did in your first sentence :-)).  And you can sign your posts by typing four tildas thus: ~~~~  Sparafucil (talk) 00:55, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  No References 

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thread_title:  WikiProject class rating

message: i would suggest the note on the potentially hurtful/malicious father to be deleated. i know there are people somewhere out there who actually read this into the poem (often enough combined with a homosexual father), but really, there is NO WAY a sober mind can come up with this idea...it's like putting a note on the neil armstrong page about the possibility he's never actually set foot on the moon...
good argument! did you see him setting foot? and on what? or do you believe in every stunt from hollywood? and is a father who loves his son a pedophile? Scyriacus (talk) 15:00, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  'father's control of his son is malicious' 

message: The image of the score does not transcribe the music accurately. The quavers are in triplets in the original. In the score image they are eight in a bar which is incorrect as most performances are concerned. --Farzaneh (talk) 11:58, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I suggest you take that up with the guy who penned that score. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 13:41, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: I'm afraid his help might raise reliability issues :-/   This is what Mandyczewski calls the 3rd version (the 4th being that published as Opus 1) and there is another autograph at the IMSLP external link.   I think that the caption could explain at least a little of this! Sparafucil (talk) 04:31, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
replies: text: There seems to be several pre-publication manuscripts. The one on the article differs from the final published version in the use of triplets. Here is another manuscripts by the composer, perhaps newer, which has triplets everywhere. This one has a date on it, but I couldn't find a date for the other one. It could be helpful to add a description in the caption, but we need to find a reliable source that has compared the two versions to quote. --Farzaneh (talk) 11:17, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
thread_title: The Music Score Image

message: Per WP:PRESERVE  and a discussion underway at this time at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/The ErlKing (film), I've taken the content blanked here and created a list of adapted works, which has been pruned a bit by me but certainly needs more work. I'll add it to this main article as a See also. It may also alleviate the need for so many hatnote links. Shawn in Montreal (talk) 15:19, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title: List of adapted works

message: I wonder why the article is Der Erlkönig, while the German article is Erlkönig, and our lead says the same. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:51, 19 September 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Too lazy to move and to think of an appropriate disambiguator (Erlkönig is already taken and has incoming links). Erlkönig (Goethe) or Erlkönig (poem) don't quite cover the scope of this article. But you're are correct; be bold. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2014 (UTC)
replies: text:  Thank you ;) - Magnificat in my sandbox, more important at present, in memory. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:44, 20 September 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Title 

message: Paragraph after paragraph with no cites.  Not good.  A casual read-through shows the article not to be bad, but without the Reliable Sources referencing, it could be OR.  There are a couple of non-encyclopedic POV comments that need to be adjusted. HammerFilmFan (talk) 12:55, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  please add references to this article to bring it up to par 

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thread_title:  External links modified 

message: Is it worth mentioning that in Isaac Asimov's Second Foundation, a fourteen-year-old schoolgirl (Arkady Darell) has a schoolteacher (whom she dislikes) named (hilariously) Miss Erlking?  HandsomeMrToad (talk) 09:01, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: Is there any indication Asimov named the character with reference to Goethe's poem? -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 12:15, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
replies: text: No documentable indication that I know of, sadly.  But he was well educated and literate--besides his sci fi he also wrote about Shakespeare and classical history and philosophy and lots of other culture-related subjects, plus the fact that it was the kind of joke he loved.  I have zero doubt it was an intentional reference, but no, I can't prove it, so probably no good for the article. Pity!  HandsomeMrToad (talk) 02:43, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Maybe too trivial for Wikipedia, but.... 

message: Shouldn't we change "...Schubert, whose version Loewe did not then know" to "...Schubert, whose version Loewe claimed to not then know" (since musicologists generally assume, based on the numerous similarities with Schubert's setting, that Schubert's version did in fact inspire Loewe)? 173.88.246.138 (talk) 05:12, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: The phrase, as written in the article, should be removed as unsourced. Adding any scholarly sources regarding the relationship would be a welcome improvement. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 06:49, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
replies: text: I'd say amend (it in the absence of WP:reliable sources for Loewe making such a claim):  "…composed in 1817–18, in the lifetime of the poem's author and also of Schubert, whose version Loewe did not then know was not published until 1821." WP:de says that Loewe meant to perform it during a visit to Goethe, whose furniture however did not include a piano. Sparafucil (talk) 06:55, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
thread_title: Loewe setting

message: I propose splitting Schubert's composition into Erlkönig (Schubert), which is currently a redirect. I'd like to expand on the subject, starting with a translation of the German article. intforce (talk) 00:40, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: Well, I suppose the text could also be included in Erlkönig (Schubert), similar to Der Tod und das Mädchen. Actually, Schubert made some slight modifications to Goethe's text (e.g. an extra "sie wiegen und tanzen und singen dich ein"), which could be reflected there. My main argument comes down to article length. I'd like to add the compositional background, a detailed musical analysis, and an overview on contemporary and modern critical reception. That would make the subsection in this article way too long. I suppose Loewe's adaption could theoretically be a separate article too if its length warrants it. Cheers, intforce (talk) 11:55, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  Understand, then. Still think a simple Erlkönig should go to this article, not a detour to Erl King. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:09, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  I agree, but that is a different discussion :) intforce (talk) 12:12, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:  (ec) I agree with Intforce's extended proposal. The edit history of  shows several iterations, and it has a few incoming links some of which refer to Schubert, some to Goethe, and some indeed to Erlking. Once Erlkönig (Schubert) exists, those incoming links can be examined and refined. Then we can request a move of Erlkönig (Goethe) to . -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 12:28, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:    I have requested a move to Erlkönig at WP:RM/TR. Once the move is done, I will go through the pages that link to Erlkönig (Goethe) and Erlkönig and correct the links, if necessary. intforce (talk) 21:36, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
replies: text:   intforce (talk) 22:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Splitting Schubert's composition into a separate article 

message: The article mentions that this ballad was originally part of a Singspiel titled Die Fischerin. Only German Wikipedia says anything about it, and very little at that. Does anyone know where the libretto can be found, and what context the song appears in therein? I’m asking because just today I came across an argument as to whether the Erlkönig actually did kill the boy, or maybe he was just sick and hallucinating and his father was trying to placate him until he could get help—I figured such context could help clarify such unclarities regarding the intention here. 147.235.200.0 (talk) 12:38, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  The ''Singspiel'' mentioned