Talk:Murder of Wendy Sewell

message: Although obvious to UK denizens, non-UK readers may need to be told that in the UK the word tart, as well as referring to a round, open-topped pastry case with a (usually) sweet filling, is also a slang term for a prostitute or promiscuous person (usually female), and that a Bakewell tart is a particular type of the former originating from Bakewell. 87.81.230.195 (talk) 16:44, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Explanation of "Bakewell Tart" reference 

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message: Is it just me, or is the contents of this page slightly POV-heavy? The article seems to me to be overly-focussed on impugning Stephen Downing and trying to imply at every turn that he's guilty rather than giving an objective summary of the facts. For example, the section about Downing's trial says that he "willingly" signed a confession, which is a highly questionable statement given that the police assaulted him and questioned him for nine hours without a lawyer present, context that is not fully given until several paragraphs later. Relatedly, any mention of Downing's lack of a solicitor is always followed by a statement that his parents had told him he did not need a solicitor. As this has little bearing on whether he should have had a solicitor with him, it's probably something that should just be mentioned once rather than repeatedly stressed to legitimise the police's interrogation tactics. I also question whether Downing needs to be referred to as "the prime and only suspect" in the section on double jeopardy, as if readers of the article need to be constantly reminded that police consider him the only suspect. Some of the section headings, such as "Downing found to be the only suspect" and "Discounted 'Yorkshire Ripper' claim", are also quite concerning. In the former case, surely "Police reinvestigation" should be the heading for this subsection rather than the section as a whole, given that this is the only part of the article to deal with the police's reinvestigation. In the latter case, describing the Yorkshire Ripper theory as 'discounted' implies that it has been conclusively disproven, which is decidedly not the case. This seems to me to point to the article being riddled with bias in favour of the police's highly disputed version of events. TRCRF22 (talk) 10:55, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Does anyone else notice the issues with this page?