Talk:Miracle on the Han River

message: The image at the entre of the article, depicts the Gross Domestic product of North and South Korea, as opposed to GDP growth, or GDP percent growth. The graph makes it look like growth was quickest after South Korea became a democracy, it was fastest according to the world bank, during the 17 year reign of Park Chung Hee. See here:
google.com/publicdata/explore?ds=d5bncppjof8f9_#!ctype=l&strail=false&bcs=d&nselm=h&met_y=ny_gdp_mktp_kd_zg&scale_y=lin&ind_y=false&rdim=world&idim=world:Earth&idim=country:KOR:PRK&ifdim=world&hl=en_US&dl=en_US&ind=false  Hong kuslauski (talk) 21:03, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: The image could potentially be misleading

message: I am not sure where is best to put this.
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replies: text: Seeing as how this article was originally intended as nothing more than a (very short) article about a catchphrase rather than a fork of the Economy of South Korea article (which would be inappropriate anyhow), I wouldn't mind if we just took out all of the 'background information' and just left a link to the economy article.  I'm going to go ahead and revert the article to the state it was in a few days ago, and add the link to the economy article.  --ZonathYak 18:23, 26 January 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: South Korea a part of the [[Four Asian Tigers]]?

message: Is it me, or half the article is a panegiric of Korea's various military juntas?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.152.131.101 (talk) 15:27, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: It's not you. And it goes on to praise the economic growth in dubious tone as well. Might've come from an undergraduate research paper. This article is definitely less-than-neutral. It needs some work. Who wants to overhaul it?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.96.72.85 (talk) 21:34, 3 July 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: I'd be happy to revise much of the grammar and include [needs citations] notifications in the coming weeks.--BBAmp (talk) 18:09, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Could someone revise this article? 

message: This article does not mention and completely ignores a multitude of other factors that helped propel South Korea to a major economic power. For instance, the massive compensation paid by the government of Japan to South Korea after the signing of the Treaty on Basic Relations between Japan and the ROK. Instead the article makes it look as if the ROK managed this on its own - which is entirely false. 96.55.113.54 (talk) 03:35, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
replies: text: Let's be polite here.  If you wish to remove false information, please do so at your leisure.  Someone clearly took the time to write this article and calling it "terrible" is really unnecessary.  You have the power to fix these mistakes yourself.--BBAmp (talk) 18:11, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Terrible Article

message: This paragraph: He led South Korea to the first economic boom, thanks to the implementation of an important land reform. This provided for the redistribution of land, thus removing a potentially problematic social issue. is very unclear.  What did this land reform do? How did the land reform remove a problematic social issue? What are the potential problematic social issues that arise from land reform? If anyone can answer these questions I can finish editing that paragraph.
This other paragraph is also ambiguous: However, this 5-year plan did not bring about an immediate self-reliant economy. There was a rapid period of growth out of this policy. The ambitious plan had simply looked for better policies in modernizing and preparing for long-term economic success. The government's efforts were designed to bring about policy reform.[6]
The paragraph is disjointed.  Specifically, it's not clear to me what the government's plans have anything to do with the 5-year plan.  The paragraph starts by talking about how the economy did not become self reliant, then ends with talking about policies.  If anyone can point out a connection between the government's plans and the initial success of the 5-year plan, I can also finish writing this paragraph
If any original author(s) are reading this, please take this as constructive criticism.  I am here to improve the article to the best of my abilities.  Kind regardsBBAmp (talk) 10:02, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
thread_title: Several Ambiguous Paragraphs

message: I am currently working on organisation and copy editing of this article, focusing on merging many of the sections, removing independent synthesis of research, and working on grammar. There were a few sections where meaning was unclear, and rather than removing them completely, I have put them here so that anyone who can elucidate can put them back in the article:
*"Private funds generated here flowed on disposal of vested firms left by Japanese, so vested firms became large firms. According to a Korean study, out of 89 of South Korea's large company in 1950's, 40 were from vested firms. A total of seventy five percent of the cotton textile companies hailed from vested firms,  and a total of eighty percent of the metal and machine large companies hailed from vested firms." -Ref: 1950년대 한국의 자본가 연구,공제욱, 백산서당, 1993
:This is removed from the First Republic section. I am not sure what "vested firms" are, so unsure of what the relevance is to the article.
*"In second republic, the Korean won-US dollar exchange official rate raised from 65 to 130, supporting plan for an export industry was introduced, Public Utility Rate was rationalized by raising. Siting of Mega-Project over 45,000,000 man-days began to reduce unemployment rates by government. at the same time ministers prompt to acquire a loan briskly for basic industries such as construct oil refinery, the greatest chemical fertilize factory. plantrefinery it was obstructed by General Park Chung Hee who staged a military coup however he succumbed shortly."
:Removed from Second Republic section. It seems to be an automated translation and although it has sources it is not at all clear what it is saying. Perhaps someone who knows more about economics/Korean history could clarify and return this to the article w/ citations?
*"Although The plan was announced by a general Park Chung-Hee it was built by ‘Council for the Development of Industry(Mar. 1958. - May. 1961.)’ under the ‘Ministry of Revival(Feb. 1955 ~ May. 1961.)’ which was formerly the ‘Ministry of Work’ with Dr. Caharles Jr Wol follow Chang Myon’s instructions on constructive criticism of the 3-year Industry Development, That is a part of 7-year plan made by Rhee administration.[7]
:Removed from Second Republic section.
:[7]: Ch'oe, Yong-ho, Peter H. Lee, and Wm. Theodore de Bary "Politics and Economy in South Korea" Sources of Korean Tradition Volume II: From the Sixteenth to the Twentieth Centuries. Columbia University Press, 2006. Pages 370–373.
Yannaynay (talk) 03:53, 31 May 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Overhaul 

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message: Is it known who first coined the phrase? From what I've seen in a few sources, the phrase "Miracle on the Rhein" is largely a Korean thing; most other use "Wirtschaftswunder", so the origin is likely Korean. toobigtokale (talk) 00:10, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Origin of the phrase