Talk:Charles Sobhraj

message: The article in the Prison section mentions Cell Phones in India in the 80's perhaps that should be a shoe phone, I am a little skeptical. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Mokgen (talk • contribs) 09:11, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Cell Phone 

message: Is a classic case of an over 1 year untouched (apart from vandalism) biography - which looks as though it has lifts from neville's books which have not been cited - considering the subject and the controversy and the issues arising from travel by westerners in south and south east asia 30 years ago (and all through to now as well) - some more attention to detail and very careful editing and re-writing of this article is warranted - regardless SatuSuro 07:50, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Articles

message: I am the sister of one of Charles Sobhraj's victims. Her name is Teresa Knowlton, not Jennie Bolliver. Jennie Bollivar is the fictitious name referring to her by the author Thomas Thompson who wrote the book entitled "Serpentine". He (Thomas Thompson) interviewed my grandmother and some of Teresa's friends. He grossly misrepresented our family, especially our mother. Yturner 04:22, 13 February 2007 (UTC)
replies: text: My sincere condolences to Teresa's family. The term outrageous can be dropped, just say that his sustained bribery of prison guards allowed him to live a life of luxury; this will strike and reasonable reader as outrageous (and I doubt that the reader who says "good for him" will be swayed by the use of this word). I would say that he exploited his notoriety by giving interviews etc., as revelling implies an enjoyment on his part which again the reasonable reader will infer but which we cannot know for sure. Sadly, a habit of talking incessantly about these horrific deeds in a prideful and arrogant way, whilst skirting the question of actual guilt, is a pattern we have seen in many other serial killers.2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:29BC:604A:5C06:B1FE (talk) 08:55, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Charles Sobhraj 

message: I tagged the article with a POV template because I feel the article (Especially the second, opening paragraph) has periods of POV writing, IE, the use of weasel words, over-descriptive text etc, which does not just deliver the facts but interprets them also. This coupled with the fact the article has almost no references means that this article may need a major rewrite. Cheers, Spawn Man (talk) 22:14, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
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message: The article currently reads that the subject was called "'the Serpent' and 'the Bikini killer' for his skill at deception and evasion."
He might have been called "The Serpent" for his skill at deception and evasion, but I doubt he was called "The Bikini Killer" for his skill at deception and evasion.  I suggest changing this non sequitur.  --Skb8721 (talk) 20:40, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: In fact, the bikinis became a signature that made it easier to connect the cases, so worse than a non sequitur, the bikinis attested to his lack of skill at deception and evasion! 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:29BC:604A:5C06:B1FE (talk) 08:47, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: "Bikini Killer" nickname

message: Is this a spelling mistake or am I not correctly informed? His name appears as "Hatchand Bhaonani Gurumukh Charles Sobhraj". I'm quite sure 'Hatchand' should be 'Hotchand' because his father's name was 'Hotchand' (not 'Hatchand'). In any case, this would be the wrong way to display his name. How can his father's name appear first? In my view, his name should appear as "Charles Gurumukh Hotchand Bhaonani Sobhraj". Correct me if I'm wrong. Centaur81 (talk) 07:55, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Background info: Name mis-spelt? 

message: The first line in the first para reads:
: "Sobhraj was born as Gurmukh Sobhraj to an unwed Vietnamese mother and an Indian father in Saigon."
I remember reading in "The Life and Crimes of Charles Sobhraj" that his father, Hotchand Sobhraj, was a Sindhi businessman based in Hong Kong and that his mother, Noi (often referred to as Madam Sobhraj) was Hotchand Sobhraj's Vietnamese keep. This should be added if a reliable citation can be found.
Also,
:"As a teenager he developed personality problems and turned to petty crime."
[Possible reason] Charles was sent from Saigon to Paris for education. He developed most of his personality problems there because he was like a fish out of water. When he reached Paris, he only knew Vietnamese. He somehow learnt French a completely alien language to him and his life in school was not very pleasant. After a few years when his mother visited him, he was devastated because he could no longer converse with her in his mother tongue. This had quite a negative impact on him. I remember reading this in "The Life and Crimes of Charles Sobhraj". This info should be added if reliable citations are found. Centaur81 (talk) 07:55, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Early years 

message: "After his release, he retired as a celebrity in Paris; he unexpectedly returned to Nepal, where he was arrested, tried and sentenced to life imprisonment on August 12, 2004. The Supreme Court of Nepal has finally convicted him and ordered the life imprisonment, this decision was made on 30 July 2010"
Was he convicted on the former date, or the latter? It can't be both. TheMadBaron (talk) 22:47, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Contradiction 

message: I've removed an old neutrality tag from this page that appears to have no active discussion per the instructions at Template:POV:
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message: The article refers to Knippenberg's "then-wife Angela Kane". But I believe his then-wife was not Angela Kane. If I understand correctly, his then-wife did not have the surname "Kane" until after divorcing Knippenberg, so it is anachronistic to say he was married to Angela Kane at that time. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 08:34, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: It would have to be his then-wife currently Angela Kane, which is still not elegant. Best to drop a surname here and perhaps add that she later married Kane (if that is what it is)? If Kane is her maiden name, then a case could be made that she was always that. 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:29BC:604A:5C06:B1FE (talk) 08:46, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Knippenberg's "then-wife Angela Kane" 

message: That is an unfortunate and not quite idiomatic way of putting things; one's infamy is usually "promoted" (i.e. promulgated) by others. It could mean promoting himself (self-promotion), and given the circumstances, I guess he was doing so exploiting his notoriety - that is, riding a wave of publicity. To promote one's infamy does not really mean anything, the closest possible interpretation would be offering via public channels his services as a ruthless killer, which would be absurd. 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:29BC:604A:5C06:B1FE (talk) 08:44, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  promoting his infamy in Paris 

message: These would be Leclerc and the two western women recently befriended? Could we just have the three names here? I think purple journo prose is inappropriate given the facts that are being related here. 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:29BC:604A:5C06:B1FE (talk) 09:05, 31 August 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  his three-woman criminal clan 

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thread_title:  Charles Shobraj to be released from Nepali jail 

message: It's obvious he is not French. Her parents are not French and he was not born in France. Marcia Bia (talk) 12:09, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: What do you mean by "her parents"? See this source which is referenced in the article. It says . Jay 💬 12:45, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Added to the article. Jay 💬 09:20, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  French? 

message: I find his sculpture offensive. We should not glorify vile cruelty. His image for me is similar to hitler. I don’t understand women who support this psychopathic behavior 2001:8003:2233:8900:6068:C909:4374:43CB (talk) 08:40, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sculptor