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Talk:Steven Grossman (politician)

message: I just went through this page and there was a lot of un-encyclopedic info and a lot of information missing that could be seen by a political candidate as "negative". I'm worried since most of the linked references were accessed on the same day Steve Grossman declared his candidacy for governor. Let's make sure we keep this page as honest and neutral as possible! Pbruce1110 (talk) 19:23, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Keeping it neutral
Talk:Thomas Richard Williams

message: created from red link.  stub quality. C. Williams (talk) 18:18, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled

message: Replace the copyright text with your own work. Note that simply modified or rephrased text is still an infringement — to remove the copyrighted contents you will need to completely remove them and then write totally new text to replace it.
I removed these tags because I took the requested action and rewrote the article based upon the referenced material instead of cut and paste. C. Williams (talk) 18:30, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  speedy deletion and copyright removed 

message: I have looked up several more sites and put them under external references so that I can research them more in detail at home later and expand the article and reword it and change it around. Thanks Orange Man for your help.  This is the first article like this that I am doing to get rid of a red link and expand wiki. C. Williams (talk) 20:00, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Expansion
Talk:Steven Libutti

message: I have made some edits with respect to formatting of the references and external links.  I have also performed some minor clean-up.
AlexC907 (talk) 14:49, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Thank you Alex for very constructive edits on this page.  It is nice to see.  Do you know what else needs to be cleaned up to make this page better conform to Wikipedia standards as is requested in the Clean-up tag at the top?  I want to try to help edit this page so the tag can be removed.  Any advice would be appreciated.-Mike MFC8290 (talk) 22:38, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed Clean-up tag as I believe the page now meets Wikipedia standards.  If other editors believe additional clean-up is required, please point out what needs to be done in the discussion.
Thanks
AlexC907 (talk) 14:53, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Clean-up
Talk:Stewart Baker

message: In the last revision I edited, I found duplicate named references, i.e. references sharing the same name, but not having the same content. Please check them, as I am not able to fix them automatically :) 
* "Steptoe" :
** Steptoe
** Steptoe & Johnson LLP: An International Law Firm
DumZiBoT (talk) 09:10, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Bot report : Found duplicate references !
Talk:Time transfer

message: Barely a Start class.
Want to help write or improve articles about Time? Join WikiProject Time or visit the Time Portal for a list of articles that need improving. -- Yamara 18:22, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Time/Assessment|WikiProject Time assessment rating]] comment 

message: Another drawback is that the source of reference needs to be actively measuring slaves
The above need not be true of time transfer by Internet. Slave PCs can "ping" the source to determine their own round-trip delay and no activity is needed by the source which has only to be present
on the Internet. Cuddlyable3 (talk) 12:32, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Untrue assertion about 2-way transfer
Talk:Roman Catholic Diocese of Fort Wayne–South Bend

message: As of July 2021, this article was modified to eliminate the nondescript term "Roman Catholic" in favor of the more precise distinction of "Latin Church" (the sui iuris church) and "Catholic Church" (the denomination). If you believe this edit to be in error or improper, please make the relevant reversion and open discussion on this talk page or my personal talk page. Thank you. ~ Pbritti (talk) 15:43, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
thread_title: July 2021 Latin Church revision
Talk:MusicVR

message: I believe that this is a notable article, as it is two fully released video games, from a notable musican, which appeared on a notable television show. This article is as notable as any of Oldfield's albums and cannot be incorperated into other articles, without loosing a lot of information. The concept has also been the inspiration for a number of his albums. TubularWorld (talk) 18:22, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Why can't it just be incorporated into the article about him? --Orange Mike  | Talk 18:25, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Notability is not inherited. This subject in and of itself is not notable. It belongs in Oldfield's article instead, condensed somewhat. - Realkyhick (Talk to me) 18:28, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

text: I know notability is not inherited and it would make Oldfield's article have a large amount of information which isn't strictly about him (the subject of the article) In my view, it's the same as you don't go listing hundreds of track listings on the artist's page, it just makes it too messy.TubularWorld (talk) 18:37, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Speedy deletion contest
Talk:Two-way satellite time and frequency transfer

message: Want to help write or improve articles about Time? Join WikiProject Time or visit the Time Portal for a list of articles that need improving. -- Yamara 18:24, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Wikipedia:WikiProject_Time/Assessment|WikiProject Time assessment rating]] comment 
Talk:Rap dogba

message: Article created from a red link of the Ivorian Music template: listed as a major style of Music in Cote d'Ivoire.  See Music of Côte d'Ivoire. T L Miles (talk) 18:27, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Looks to me like all we really need is a redirect to :Ivoirian hip hop, and maybe an extra paragraph in the latter. --Orange Mike  | Talk 18:56, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Trying to save server space? :) It's the most popular style of Hip Hop in  a hip hop mad nation for almost 10 years (see the Angelo & les Dogbas record being released in the US last year), and followed by millions of people, both in West Africa and France.  I'm not sure you can say that for many things on wikipedia.  It also has several independent sources, if you'd like to  take a look. T L Miles (talk) 19:03, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Went and looked at the link you gave, and the wording is "received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject." I think this meets that criteria.T L Miles (talk) 19:12, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Notability
Talk:Suren Arakelov

message: I don't think it's right that the initial proof of Faltings's theorem used Arakelov theory. Charles Matthews (talk) 08:50, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: It didn't.  But he was working on both proofs at the same time and the other one was completed first.John Z (talk) 21:05, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

message: I have removed the assertion and categorisation that Arakelov suffers from a particular disease in line with WP:BLP policy as being unsupported by any reliable source.  Deltahedron (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Illness 

message: The article currently describes him as a Soviet-Ukrainian mathematician of Armenian descent.  An IP has just removed "Ukrainian" without explanation and I have restored it on the grounds that it seems correct if he was born in Kharkiv.  But there seems to be no reference for any of the personal data.  Per WP:BLP perhaps we should simply remove it all if it is contentious?  Deltahedron (talk) 08:49, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Nationality 

message: The article has no sources for Arakelov's biography : the book by Lang appears to contain no information about the person as opposed to the theory.  Deltahedron (talk) 20:39, 27 January 2014 (UTC)
replies: text: Three months on, no sources have been found, and none of the other language articles have them either, except that the Rusian-language version links to this.  I think this article might need to be removed per WP:BLP.  Deltahedron (talk) 06:41, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Sources
Talk:Haggar Clothing

message: hi!
haggar was the company that invented the word "slacks", among other important "firsts" in the apparel industry. thanks!Tiffanyyeager (talk) 18:28, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Haggar Clothing is a notable company, but the current article is written like marketing copy. Wikipedia articles must be written from a neutral point of view. Also, this article cannot be based just on what Haggar says about itself. It should cite independent reliable sources. Therefore, I am rewriting the article as a stub. • Gene93k (talk) 15:54, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

text: Noted. I'll see about working it in. I'm looking for high quality references to use for citations. • Gene93k (talk) 21:25, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
Talk:Susan Fletcher (British author)

message: I found mention of "Shadow Spinner" on another article. This entry probably needs expanding. - Mgm|(talk) 12:50, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: There are two Susan Fletcher's who write yougn adult fiction. The author of Shadow Spinner is different from this one, also, more famous but without an article, I guess. Noloop (talk) 04:35, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Susan Howson (mathematician)

message: 1988 and 1998 are both given for the same event, it  seems.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by LeverrierGlass (talk • contribs) 16:08, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
replies: text: The age of 15 is rather young for a Ph.D. thesis. I will improve the article.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.32.239.112 (talk) 12:01, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Date 

message: Vandalism.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.66.37.151 (talk) 16:14, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  Note
Talk:Susan Jacoby

message: There are way too many. Killiondude (talk) 07:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: External Links

message: The dates given for her birth and graduation from college show that she was only 19 when she graduated? That's unusual. I tried to find a source to verify this but can't find one. Can anyone provide a source for these dates?
Pseudovector (talk) 22:08, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
replies: text: I have received personal correspondence from Ms. Jacoby and she reports her graduation date as 1965 (age 20). Still impressive! I've made the change in the article. Pseudovector (talk) 17:35, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  Dates 

message: This article needs more about its subject's life aside from her career.--Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 19:12, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
replies: text: I concur. In particular, the statement about her atheism and secularism sits in the opening paragraph like a billboard in the middle of a clear open space. It is ugly, not in and of itself, but because it stands out. Let us relocate it to a section in the article body, where it will be in better harmony with its surroundings. Tualha (Talk) 23:54, 28 October 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  Life 

message: In addition to her books, should there also be a section concerning online articles she's written? Heather Chait (talk) 19:44, 25 July 2011 (UTC)
thread_title:  Online Articles 

message: In the article it says that "Jacoby has argued that the idea of anti-Catholicism being a significant force in American life today is a canard," but do you have a citation for the definition of "canard" meaning "hoax"?  Wiktionary does indeed say that a "canard" is something that is deliberately misleading, but it is not clear from the cited source whether, by using that word, Jacoby really intended to accuse her opponents of lying deliberately.  Bwrs (talk) 20:37, 5 February 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Canard = hoax? 

message: I want more detail about her early works, such as "Moscow Conversations".  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.117.79.25 (talk) 14:18, 26 July 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Detail  

message: There is an RfC on the question of using "Religion: None" vs. "Religion: None (atheist)" in the infobox on this and other similar pages. 
The RfC is at Template talk:Infobox person#RfC: Religion infobox entries for individuals that have no religion. 
Please help us determine consensus on this issue. --Guy Macon (talk) 05:11, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
thread_title:  [[Template talk:Infobox person#RfC: Religion infobox entries for individuals that have no religion|Request for Comments]] 

message: There is also Susan Jacoby, actress. Maybe most well known from Columbo An Exercise in Fatality,
https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-7yo6o2uZK84/VYLcjUPotSI/AAAAAAAABCQ/X5WSMmfyJXw/s640/2sssxCapture.JPG
Middle More Rider (talk) 14:01, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Actress of the same name
Talk:Susan Palwick

message: I have commenced a tidy-up of the Bibliography section using cite templates for books and articles, as well as tables for organising short stories, poems and/or book reviews. Capitalization and punctuation follow standard cataloguing rules in AACR2 and RDA, as much as Wikipedia templates allow it. ISBNs and other persistent identifiers, where available, are commented out, but still available for reference. This is a work in progress; feel free to continue. Sunwin1960 (talk) 08:30, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Bibliography
Template talk:Db-redirmisnomer

message: on the speedy deletion page, it suggests we add a comment onto the talk page.  Many other templates include this in the speedy deletion notice as a line that can be copied and pasted.  However, this is not included in this template.  Could it be added, please? StephenBuxton (talk) 18:30, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Request
Talk:He who does not work, neither shall he eat

message: "Leon Trotsky wrote that: "The old principle: who does not work shall not eat, has been replaced with a new one: who does not obey shall not eat."[9][10]"
This could do with more context, as of now its presented as is, with no further info in article.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.40.248.67 (talk) 09:55, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
replies: text: True, it should be mentioned that Trotsky referred to Stalinism. --MrBurns (talk) 22:10, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  Trotsky quote without explanation, further info, or context for it
Talk:Itek

message: Nice job with the referencing in this article.  I appreciate how the text copied from PD source is set aside in block quotes, as it should be.  Not sure whether the general disclaimer "incorporates text from" the one source, generated by use of the "USGovernment" template, is needed or helpful.  In my view, that suggests that text written by the editor(s), anything that is outside of quotes, may well have just been copied, too.  It appears, instead, that any use of the PD source is completely documented already, so the general disclaimer does not add.  
Use of the "USGovernment" template is in fact what called this article to my attention, I have been going through many other articles in the "Category:Wikipedia articles incorporating text from public domain works of the United States Government".  This article is better than most of the others, many of which are just careless paste-jobs with the general disclaimer as an apology.  I am not sure you want to associate with them.  Anyhow, keep up the good work! doncram (talk) 18:31, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: I like it. It is straight forward and clean. Also, such wording helps to educate those who do a direct copy/paste that there are ways to put the information into Wikipedia in a neat format  that avoids any semblance of plagiarism. Mattisse 23:58, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Referencing well-done 

message: I worked in Corporate Finance at Itek HQ in Lexington from 1980-1983.  I'd like to set the record straight about the Litton acquistion.  Itek was under significant financial pressure in the fall of 1982.  We had suspended payments to suppliers and had inadequate cash to make it through 1983.  Itek had few options by the time Litton came along.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Str8-Razr (talk • contribs) 14:21, 26 February 2010 (UTC)
thread_title:  The Litton Acquisition 

message: The ″Hughes, Raytheon, and Goodrich purchase″ section contained text that was apparently meant to be a comment in Talk, namely: ″Itek was not the maker of the Hubble Mirror.  It was Perkin—Elmer in Danbury, CT.  The comments above referencing that are not correct.  I should know as I worked in management there but if you want a citation, try this: http://quest.nasa.gov/hst/about/history.html″.
I've removed it. --HH 89.27.253.230 (talk) 11:39, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Misplaced Comment in Article 

message: Galileo (spacecraft) says "The Galileo Attitude and Articulation Control System (AACSE) was controlled by two Itek Advanced Technology Airborne Computers (ATAC), built using radiation-hardened 2901s. ...[5] 
* [5]  Large PDF, 400p  ! (See p186-201)
* Ref says also used on Shuttle. - Rod57 (talk) 21:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Added mention of Itek Advanced Technology Airborne Computers (ATAC)
Talk:The Russian Stories (C. J. Cherryh)

message: Types of mythological or fantastic beings in contemporary fiction is a page of, well, fantasy works (movie, TV, written, whatever) and the assorted mythological and/or fantastic critters they contain.  This series might qualify.  Anyone care to add it? Tamtrible (talk) 10:40, 26 August 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Anyone familiar with this series care to add it to this list?
Talk:Sven Erik Jørgensen

message: How did this get tagged as a physicist?  The article clearly states that he is an ecologist and chemist, and his work reflects this.  I think some bots have gone haywire.  Cazort (talk) 22:31, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: Fixed. Cazort (talk) 22:33, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
thread_title: Untitled
Talk:Sven Melander

message: As I am still pretty new to the ways of Wikipedia, I just wanted to note that I am currently fulfilling a request to copy edit this page. I've dealt with style guides and editing in general before, so I'm not too worried about introducing horrifying errors or anything. But if there are any concerns with any changes I make, just let me know. -- MaggieAtKryton (talk) 16:30, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Forgot to add an update here a while back, but due to scheduling complications, I had to abandon this page. -- MaggieAtKryton (talk) 18:11, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: Fulfilling a copy editing request
Talk:Avula Parthasarathy

message: Wikipedia is not a free advertisement space, but an encyclopedia. Artciles need to be sourced, per [[W{:RS]], and to be neutral, per WP:NPOV. So I trimmed down the hagiographic elements, and removed unsourced info. There's still a problem: the remaining info depends solely on his website, which is self-published, which is not WP:RS. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 17:17, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hagiographic, unsourced, self-published 

message: Mr Parthasarathy is called Swamiji by his followers. Alright, but he is a married man. Usually the term Swami refers to a Hindu monk.  A note as to why the term is applied to him would be appropriate, or at least a note explaining that he is married. Devadaru (talk) 12:44, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
thread_title:  "Swami" 

message: This page reads like an Advertising with unreferenced claims such as training the Indian cricket team (where, when? For how long?). It should be deleted 亮HH (talk) 08:00, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Advetisijg
Talk:Sylvia Jones

message: How can Sylvia Jones actually say they are proactively dealing with the nursing crisis, if there was anything proactive about this situation there would not be a nursing crisis, and the College of Nurses would not be slacking off -blaming their delays on covid,-- not valid. This is a problem that has escalated for years and covid brought it to a breaking point. 70.49.138.50 (talk) 11:17, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
thread_title:  Nursing crisis 

message: What exactly makes her qualified to speak about provincial healthcare? 184.148.51.90 (talk) 20:48, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
replies: text: Good question. Turner.john60 (talk) 15:50, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Diploma in radio broadcasting?
Talk:Syukuro Manabe

message: Much of the content in this article was added by the single-purpose , who signed many of their edit summaries as 'Syukuro Manabe'. That IP geo-locates to Princeton, NJ, where he works. Later edits used the (again single-purpose) account . It appears highly likely that both users have a serious conflict of interest. I've tagged the article, which probably needs a major rewrite. Modest Genius talk 17:04, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: I think the article complies with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Grimes2 (talk) 17:54, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
replies: text: I don't think anyone can maintain NPOV while writing about themselves, see WP:AUTOBIO. Even if the prose was entirely neutral, it creates the impression of a POV. Although the article has been substantially revised in the last 24 hours, the 'scientific achievements' and 'selected publications' sections were mostly written by those potential-COI users. Modest Genius talk 14:14, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

text:  I looked at the sci ach section and it is fine, although one might change the section name and/or fold it into "career". Sel pub is always a bit difficult, "selected by who" being the obvious question, but they too seem reasonable William M. Connolley (talk) 14:50, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
thread_title:  Apparent conflict of interest
Talk:T. V. Raman

message: The sentence "Raman succumbed to blindness at the age of 14 brought about from glaucoma,[1][4][5] being [previously?] partially sighted[3] and able to see with his left eye.[6]"
is unclear (I added the [previously?], which I hope wasn't a wiki no-no). I skimmed reference [6], but it didn't really clear it up. 70.240.200.92 (talk) 20:17, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
thread_title:  totally blind or partially sighted? 

message: The subject of the article seems to be unrelated to Pakistan, despite claims by a few articles to the contrary.  It is not clear then why this article is on Wikiproject Pakistan.  Piyush (talk) 08:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
replies: text:  Removed WP:PAK template based on discussion here.  Piyush (talk) 22:37, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
thread_title:  Why is this article in Wikiproject Pakistan?
Talk:TB Joshua

message: He's dead, but the article barely mentions it. How did he die? Where did he die? How many people attended his funeral?
 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.31.226.4 (talk) 16:28, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  Is he dead? 

message: He has committed Hundreds of sexual assault acts. This includes rape and harassment. He has done it to Hundreds of women who still live in fear and cry because of him. He committed adultery on his wife while pretending to be a priest. The woman he cheated on his wife on had a baby girl named Ajoke. This baby was and biggest threat to his reputation and was punished for being born. He would constantly beat her, whip her, antagonize her. He would film women giving birth in his church and claimed to love children. He would think that women were only made or lust. He indicated in his service one time that if a woman got raped, it would be her fault because all women were built out of lust. It is all shown on BBC nigeria's documentary about TB Joshua. The image being given off that this is a holy man of gad is completely wrong!!! please talk about how he was a terrible thing 67.81.171.123 (talk) 00:23, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
thread_title:  The devil
Talk:Tornado (Särkänniemi)

message: Hi User:VSA72, I see that you've created this article, but at the moment it doesn't pass the GNG at all. You need to have multiple independent reliable sources that discuss the topic in depth. Neither the park's website, nor database entries rise to this standard. --Slashme (talk) 12:06, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  Independent sources?