Talk:Ballyclare High School

message: Nice. Missing History, References, Pictures. Welcome Victuallers 09:00, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: assess

message: Although I've been out of the school for a few years now, I'm still very interested in seeing the advances they are making in terms of the computer facilities and learning centre.  I think they would merit larger mentions at some point, but I don't have the knowledge to write a decent section on that yet. Stuhacking 17:33, 22 March 2006 (UTC)
thread_title:  Computer Network and Learning Centre 

message: The whole article is extremely unreferenced. There is a load of fluff in the article about reputation for this and that, but there are no sources. It needs to be de-POVed with the help of some independent references. At the minute some sections read more like an advert than an encyclopedia article. The article as a whole is too wordy. This is not getting at this particular school. It is a common problem in most NI school articles.
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message: Hey Guys,  I replaced the Past Pupils section with a table presenting the same information - trimmed in places because a lot of it seemed very POV-esque.  If you need to get any of the original text then you can find it on my todo page User:Stuhacking/todo.
I would like this replacement to mark the start of a vast upgrade to the Ballyclare High article - as you can see other wikipedians have flagged it grossly uncited, and untidy.  If possible can others try and fill in the dates of attendance for the remaing notable alumni - I have restructred the section but not added any further info yet. Stu Hacking talk 14:16, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
thread_title:  Past Pupils 

message: Should this page not have something surrounding the hair contaversy, this may have been on it for a while and then removed but this is still an important topic of debate with in and outside the school.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.71.155.163 (talk) 21:27, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
thread_title:  Hair Rule 

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message: (Anything welcome) JiyanKnowsFacts (talk) 17:07, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
thread_title:  PUPILS