Talk:Tōru Takemitsu

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2.1: Influence of Traditional Japanese Music
Example 2: Opening of Toru Takemitsu - Litany - In Memory of Michael Vyner
It says: Opening bars of Litany—In Memory of Michael Vyner, i Adagio, for solo piano (1950/1989). Another early example of Takemitsu's incorporation of traditional Japanese music in his writing, shown here in the use of the Japanese in scale in the upper melodic line of the right hand part. 
However, C - Db - F - G - Bb is not a mode of the In scale. If it were, it would be C - Db - F - Gb (!) - Bb. The description needs to be changed, as well as the image... unfortunately this means the entire analysis is incorrect, so a different example needs to be found altogether.
Thanks!  — Preceding unsigned comment added by LucasOickle (talk • contribs) 22:14, 27 August 2014 (UTC)
thread_title:  Error in 2.1 "Influence of Traditional Japanese Music" 

message: In "He composed several hundred independent works of music" what does the word "independent" mean? 31.48.245.8 (talk) 11:37, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
thread_title:  Independent? 

message: This article has a few MOS:LAYOUT problems (that were there in the FA-approved version):
* The "Listening" section with external links. Should be removed or moved under External links per WP:EL.
* The "Further reading" section that includes subsections "General references" and "Other references". If these works are not used as references for information contained in the article, don't call them references. WP:FURTHER: "This section is not intended as a repository for general references that were used to create the article content."
* MOS:PSEUDOHEAD semicolon markup in the "Further reading" and "Notable compositions" sections.
– Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 21:16, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
thread_title:  Layout cleanup 

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