Talk:For Tomorrow (song)

message: I am delisting this from the GA nominees for the following reasons:
* This is not well written. It contains a number of grammar errors, and some awkward sentences. Song titles are not properly formatted (double quotes, no italics).
* It's got a fair bit of journalistic prose, especially in the "Single Background" section. Words like "massively" and "outclassed" should not be used unless heavily supported.
* Statements such as that their US tour was "greatly detested" and that Damon Albarn found the house "romantic" are not properly sourced.
* It is not well organized; there are too many small sections for such a short article, and they're only a few sentences each. Some of them should be combined - the Lyrics section certainly doesn't need to be in two parts.
* It should be further wikified.
Chubbles 06:03, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Failed GA

message: Originally posted these on a talk page, but might as well paste them here for anyone working on the article:
*I really think "massively" is just a bad word to use there; something more balanced, like "considerably" would be better.
*saying someone was outclassed is an opinion. You could state neutrally that a number of sources saw it that way (and it's good that you've got a source to back it up), but using "outclassed" as if it were a fact is POV. 
*The whole first section is badly worded. It's opinionated, not well sourced, has an ungainly phrase "as a sense of Britishness", and needs apostrophes. 
*Increase in Stature and Critical Reception could probably be combined into a single, better-flowing section. 
*Why is black and white "classic"? At very least, this should be wikilinked to some article about film noir or something. 
*It would be worth giving more context for the pro-British/anti-Americanism on display here. Is this something Albarn/the band talk about in interviews? Is there a political context outside of the poor reception on the tour? is this a consistent theme in their work? 
*Reference 2 is blank. 
 Chubbles 01:32, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: Additional comments

message: Also, all inline citations go directly after punctuation. --Nehrams2020 06:06, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
thread_title: GA comment

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