Talk:Andhra Pradesh

message: I am starting to address  recent peer review feedback from User:Z1720  at Wikipedia:Peer review/Andhra Pradesh/archive2, copied below for tracking. Request others to collaborate, or give feedback on the same.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Word count for post independence section reduced to 688 from 1056 (-36%). Addressed. Arjunaraoc (talk) 11:00, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

text: Removed the section headings to address the issue, as there is less content on religion demographics. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:09, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

text: Removed the section heading  to address the issue. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:16, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

text: Merged the text into districts, as these are important administrative  divisons in the state. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:21, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

text: Removed the headings for now to avoid MOS:OVERSECTION. The question regarding needs update addressed already. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:34, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

text: Expanded with details about Sankranthi and Ugadi. Arjunaraoc (talk) 13:12, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Addressing Peer review feedback 

message: The History section devotes a lot more space to recent events than it does to older events. I suggest summarising the information more effectively and moving prose to the History of Andhra Pradesh article, which can go into more detail.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Word count for post independence section reduced to 688 from 1056 (-36%). Addressed. Arjunaraoc (talk) 11:00, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: History

message: Religion section needs expansion.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed the section headings to address the issue, as there is less content on religion demographics. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:09, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Religion

message: The "Family health" section doesn't really talk about family health, with demographic statistics listed instead. I think this should be moved to the general Demographics section.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed the section heading  to address the issue. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:16, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Family Health

message: "Revenue divisions" and "Mandals and village panchayats" need expansion. As someone who does not know about India, I do not know why any of this is important.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Merged the text into districts, as these are important administrative  divisons in the state. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:21, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Administrative Divisions

message: Expand the two paragraphs of the "Services" section and remove the headings as they are not needed and cause MOS:OVERSECTION
"Meanwhile, Jagan Mohan Reddy announced that Visakhapatnam would become the new capital when he addressed a meeting on 31 January 2023, relating to an upcoming investment summit." has a "needs update" tag that should be resolved.
In general, be aware of MOS:OVERSECTION. Sections with a short paragraph should be merged.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Removed the headings for now to avoid MOS:OVERSECTION. The question regarding needs update addressed already. Arjunaraoc (talk) 00:34, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Services

message: "Festivals" should be expanded or merged with another section.--Arjunaraoc (talk) 10:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: Expanded with details about Sankranthi and Ugadi. Arjunaraoc (talk) 13:12, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title: Festivals

message: I think ఆంధ్ర ప్రదేశ్ should be added as a native name but there's no space in infobox for this and idk how to do that Helloisgone (talk) 04:10, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
replies: text: @Helloisgone, as per WP:INDICSCRIPT, name in Telugu is not allowed. Arjunaraoc (talk) 09:17, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
thread_title:  Native name