Writing Believable Dialogue
By: J.D. Williams
Tags: Character, Fiction, Conversation

One of the key elements of a good story is the dialogue

between characters. Any story that has people interacting will show their

conversations, and that is an important aspect in conveying an engaging, believable

story. People can reveal a lot about themselves and their world through their

dialogue. With good dialogue you can establish everything from character traits

to plot elements to setting. You can tell the reader the what, why, how and

where using just dialogue, and you can also use it to point out key details in

the plot that you want readers to know. It is a versatile tool you have at your

disposal that can convey a lot about your story when used well.

Writing good dialogue can be tricky. You want the

conversation to flow naturally and sound authentic. You don’t want “talking

heads” where it’s just two disembodied voices talking back and forth with

nothing else happening (or do you? I’ve read some compelling stories that were

nothing but two talking heads. I think this is the exception and not the rule,

though). You want your people to sound like actual people with real

personalities and quirks. So how can you do this?

I’ve been told that writing dialogue is one of my strengths.

These are some of the techniques I use to handle it.

REAL LIFE INFLUENCE

Always listen to how people talk and converse. You will be

surprised at how much you learn about how people talk just by listening to how

people talk. Follow the ebb and flow of their conversation. Every dialogue has

a rhythm and a poetry to it, regardless of who is talking or how they talk. Pay

attention to that. You might also hear some cool antec dotes you can use in

future stories. Some of the coolest dialogue from supporting characters in my

book The Hand You’re Dealt came directly from people I was standing near

while waiting to sell my blood plasma (Yes, that aspect of the story is quite

autobiographical.)

BODY LANGUAGE

Body language and facial expression is also an important

part of writing believable dialogue. People are twitchy, and nobody is just

sitting perfectly still while talking. Take time to mention what their bodies

and faces are doing while they are talking. You can convey a lot about what a

character is thinking or feeling as they talk this way. Oftentimes, I will

describe a character’s small action before they say something instead of using

“he said.” Because it does a dual job of indicating who is talking while also

giving some of that movement to the character. This also applies to giving a

brief description of what is going through the POV character’s mind as they

speak.

GRAMMAR

People don’t use proper grammar when they talk, not even

English teachers. People talk in fragments, have unfinished thoughts, stumble

over words, use incorrect phraseology, use filler words like um and uh, cut

each other off and try to finish each other’s sentences. When writing dialogue,

you want to utilize those quirks to make the conversation, and the characters,

more believable. Save the soliloquies for Shakespeare.

SLANG

Pay attention to slang and local colloquialisms. If you’re writing a character from New York, that person is going to sound and talk quite differently than a person from Atlanta. Slang words and different pronunciations can be a great teller of where they are from and what their culture is, and in that instance you can be forgiven for intentional misspellings. I got into quite a few arguments with my Beta readers and editors over a New Yorker I put in The Hand You’re Dealt. They thought I misspelled one of his colloquialisms, and I had to repeatedly explain that he comes from a culture where People call each other “sun” (as in shining like the sun) instead of “son.” I got so tired of the fight I just switched to a different slang word.

Incorporating other languages can also be a key element in

establishing a character. If a character comes from a unique culture, including

a word or two from their native language will drive that point home. Just don’t

overdo it: sprinkling in too many foreign words will make it blatant to the

reader that you’re trying to make the character seem more ethnic.

THE WORD ‘SAID’

When writing dialogue, you tread a fine line when using the word “said.” You don’t want to overuse it, but at the same time, it can become quite obvious to readers when you are trying too hard to not use it. If you find yourself trying to come up with a new verb for talking every time you have somebody speak, then you are doing it too much, and you need to use “said” to give the reader a break. “Said” is usually an invisible word: the reader will read that and know what it means intrinsically without it interrupting the flow of the story. The key is to not use it ALL of the time lest you appear unimaginative. You also want to keep a lid on the flowery adjectives (which usually come right after you use the word “said”). Whatever you’re using that adjective to describe in what that character said should be self evident in whatever that character said and the actions and details around it. If you do that well, then the adjective becomes redundant.

TESTING IT OUT

Once you’ve written your dialogue, the next thing is to test it out. Don’t be afraid to read your dialogue out loud to see if everything sounds smooth and believable. Sometimes words and phrases that look good on paper (or your screen) won’t sound right when actually spoken, and that can be problematic if you want you dialogue to sound authentic.

These are some of the techniques I use when writing conversations. Give them a try and hopefully it will make your dialogue more memorable.

D’ya know who else excels at writing dialogue? Chuck Palahniuk! Check out this book from the creator of Fight Club and see for yourself.