Complex sentence: Author David McIntee ("Delta Quadrant") felt that Tuvix expressed more of Neelix's mannerisms than Tuvok's; he also noted that Tuvix adopted Neelix's right-handedness as opposed to Tuvok's left-handedness.
Split into simpler sentences: Author David McIntee ("Delta Quadrant") felt that Tuvix expressed more of Neelix's mannerisms than Tuvok's. He also noted that Tuvix adopted Neelix's right-handedness as opposed to Tuvok's left-handedness.