Complex sentence: A portrait of Field Marshal Lord Milne was Boden's first large scale commission in 1954, future portraits of notable dignitaries included three Lord Mayors of London, George Pinker, and Margaret Thatcher.
Split into simpler sentences: A portrait of Field Marshal Lord Milne was Boden's first large-scale commission in 1954. Later portraits of dignitaries included three Lord Mayors of London, George Pinker, and Margaret Thatcher.