Complex sentence: This story would have re-introduced the Cral Travis character first seen in the pilot script, now with a mechanical arm and an eyepatch, ordered by his superior "Commander Shervalan" to recapture Blake.
Split into simpler sentences: This story would have re-introduced the character Cral Travis, first seen in the pilot script, now with a mechanical arm and an eyepatch. Travis would be ordered by his superior officer, "Commander Shervalan", to recapture Blake.