Complex sentence: In May 2011, Melbourne Heart FC visited Geelong Baptist College to run a soccer clinic to the whole school this was organised by Nick Salcombe and Daniel Gibson for their year 10 Victorian Certificate of Attempted learning.
Split into simpler sentences: In May 2011, Melbourne Heart FC visited Geelong Baptist College to run a soccer clinic to the whole school. This was organised by Nick Salcombe and Daniel Gibson for their year 10 Victorian Certificate of Attempted learning.