Complex sentence: A visit to the maze was positively reviewed by Roadside America, and although its writer Kara S. McCoy did not recommend the maze for children, it was recommended by Family Days Out as a place for children.
Split into simpler sentences: A visit to the maze was positively reviewed by Roadside America. While Roadside America writer Kara S. McCoy did not recommend the maze for children, it was recommended by Family Days Out as a place for children.