Complex sentence: Italian Montreal Impact striker Marco Di Vaio made the cut, joining the 10 other fan XI players and those voted for by other MLS players and those chosen by Peter Vermes and MLS Commissioner Don Garber.
Split into simpler sentences: Italian Montreal Impact striker Marco Di Vaio made the cut. Joining the 10 other fan XI players along with those voted for by other MLS players and those chosen by Peter Vermes and MLS Commissioner Don Garber.