Complex sentence: The following month saw the premiere of her first feature, "Bon Voyage", receiving positive notices following its October debut on ITV, the television film won the Golden Nymph award at the June 2007 Monte Carlo Television Festival.
Split into simpler sentences: The following month saw the premiere of her first feature film, "Bon Voyage", receiving positive notices following its October debut on ITV. It won the Golden Nymph award at the June 2007 Monte Carlo Television Festival.