Complex sentence: After receiving a day off, training camp resumed on October 4, Rose's birthday, when he was cited for having his best practice of the season, and Dunleavy helped rookie McDermott fix issues of staying inbounds for corner 3-pointers.
Split into simpler sentences: After receiving a day off, training camp resumed on October 4, Rose's birthday, when he was cited for having his best practice of the season. Meanwhile, Dunleavy helped rookie McDermott fix issues of staying inbounds for corner 3-pointers.