Complex sentence: Civilians and the media blamed the Pakistani armed forces for being unable to locate bin Laden's whereabouts and further criticized them for letting the United States conduct a unilateral operation on Pakistani soil, thereby prompting a furor over violation of Pakistani sovereignty by the United States.
Split into simpler sentences: Civilians and the media blamed the Pakistani armed forces for being unable to located bin Laden's whereabouts. Following the raid, the military was further criticized for letting the United States conduct a unilateral operation on Pakistani soil, thereby prompting a furor over violation of Pakistani sovereignty by the United States.