Complex sentence: Miss Fury, the alter ego of Marla Drake, a character based loosely on Mills'own appearance, the artwork was created in a glamorous style with considerable attention placed on the heroine's outfits.
Split into simpler sentences: Miss Fury, the alter ego of Marla Drake, was a character based loosely on Mills'own appearance. The artwork was created in a glamorous style with considerable attention placed on the heroine's outfits.