Complex sentence: She was a pharmaceutical representative for Eli Lilly, and used to hold transvestite sessions wherever she was on a business trip, Nick and two partners check into Cortez, and he asks a bottle of champagne, while the duo prepare to go to a party.
Split into simpler sentences: She was a pharmaceutical representative for Eli Lilly, and used to hold transvestite sessions wherever she was. In a business trip, Nick and two partners check into Cortez, and he asks a bottle of champagne, while the duo prepare to go to a party.