Complex sentence: Another critism of EMA is that as students can receive bonus payments of up to £500 over two years for meeting predicted grades and passing exams, this makes it appealing to study subjects which have been labelled as "easier", rather than more stretching A-levels.
Split into simpler sentences: Another critism of EMA is that as students can receive bonus payments of up to £500 over two years for meeting predicted grades and passing exams. This makes it appealing to study subjects which have been labelled as "easier", rather than more stretching A-levels.