Complex sentence: For most modern viewers the score, script, and narration by Leonard Graves retain their appeal, but some knowledgeable viewers criticize the editing for anachronistic sequences-for example, 1943-45 ships and aircraft in 1941-42 segments.
Split into simpler sentences: For most modern viewers the score, script, and narration by Leonard Graves retain their appeal, but some knowledgeable viewers criticize the editing for anachronistic sequences. As an example, 1943-45 ships and aircraft in 1941-42 segments.