Complex sentence: The manner of her first death was received with mostly negative reviews, with one critic saying it was typical of the death of a "Star Trek" security officer, while it was also included in a list of stupid sci-fi deaths.
Split into simpler sentences: The manner of her first death was received with mostly negative reviews. One critic called it typical of the death of a "Star Trek" security officer, and the scene was also included in a list of stupid sci-fi deaths.