Complex sentence: In this version much of the magical material in the original is eliminated, making Edn Jahia more of a scientist than sorcerer, and a new character, Robert, Duke of Burgundy, is introduced to replace Geoffrey.
Split into simpler sentences: In this version much of the magical material in the original is eliminated, making Edn Jahia more of a scientist than sorcerer. A new character, Robert, Duke of Burgundy, is introduced to replace Geoffrey.