Complex sentence: This studio album marked a return to commercial success for Jimmy Page since his days with Led Zeppelin, however subsequent sluggish tickets sales for a world tour after concerts in Japan, resulted in the partnership being shelved.
Split into simpler sentences: This studio album marked a return to commercial success for Jimmy Page since his days with Led Zeppelin. However, subsequent sluggish tickets sales for a world tour after concerts in Japan resulted in the partnership being shelved.