Complex sentence: The Second Edition of the NLT (also called the NLTse) was released in 2004 which resulted in a translation less dynamic than the first edition in many places, yet still retaining natural contemporary English.
Split into simpler sentences: The Second Edition of the NLT (also called the NLTse) was released in 2004. It reflects a translation style that is slightly less dynamic than the first edition in many places, yet it still retains natural contemporary English.