Complex sentence: In a letter from Moore to Michael Ayrton the following year, Moore commented Lambert's sculpture looked' awful'from photographs but that he never saw it in person--though he notes that the casting must have been' alright'.
Split into simpler sentences: In a letter from Moore to Michael Ayrton the following year, Moore commented Lambert's sculpture looked' awful'from photographs but that he never saw it in person. He notes that the casting must have been' alright'.