Complex sentence: Mrs. Herring is thrilled by the prize of ₤25, but Albert balks at being paraded in swan-white and mother and son quarrel to the mocking commentary of the village children.
Split into simpler sentences: Mrs. Herring is thrilled by the prize of ₤25, Albert balks at being paraded in swan-white. Mother and son quarrel, to the mocking commentary of the village children.