Complex sentence: Bianca received positive reports, as her business plan, to make hosieries, was felt to be good, although she was deemed inexperienced in manufacturing, while the interviewers felt that she had little personality, as she had constantly mentioned professionalism in her CV.
Split into simpler sentences: Bianca received positive reports, as her business plan was felt to be good, although she was deemed inexperienced in manufacturing. One problem was that the interviewers felt she had little personality, as she had constantly mentioned professionalism in her CV.