Complex sentence: The brothers arrived at Ellis Island in New York after a ten-day trip, traveling by steerage, a young Patrick who had never left his country was awed by the glamor of the well off Irish people who were in the leisure cabins above deck.
Split into simpler sentences: The brothers arrived in New York after a 10-day trip, traveling by steerage. A young Patrick who had never left his country was awed by the glamour of the well-off Irish people who were in the leisure cabins above deck.