Complex sentence: An Unauthorised Review of Star Trek, Mark Jones and Lance Parkin described "Tin Man" as "a good episode" and described Elbrun as becoming "annoying very quickly", while Gomtuu wasn't as unusual as the script suggested.
Split into simpler sentences: An Unauthorised Review of Star Trek, described "Tin Man" as "a good episode". But described Elbrun as becoming "annoying very quickly" and that Gomtuu wasn't as unusual as the script suggested.