Complex sentence: Amarjeet Sohi's first attempt at entering municipal politics came in the 2004 Edmonton municipal election, where he finished a distant fourth place behind incumbents Dave Thiele and Terry Cavanagh, along with Chinwe Okelu.
Split into simpler sentences: Amarjeet Sohi's first attempt at entering Edmonton municipal politics he chose to run in the 2004 Edmonton municipal election. Amarjeet finished fourth behind incumbents Dave Thiele and Terry Cavanagh, along with Chinwe Okelu.