Complex sentence: The artistic team at South Coast Repertory worked with Edson to condense her two-act play into one long, emotionally draining act; the revised "Wit" enjoyed a successful run and won several Los Angeles Drama Critics Circle Awards.
Split into simpler sentences: The artistic team at South Coast Repertory worked with Edson to condense her two-act play into one long, emotionally draining act. The revised "Wit" enjoyed a successful run and won several Los Angeles Drama Critics Circle Awards.