Complex sentence: In 2004, she received her first purchase order from a major department store, called The Bay and her designs have appeared at other fashion events such as the Catwalk for the Cure and the first Canadian Country Music Awards in 2010.
Split into simpler sentences: In 2004, she received her first purchase order from a major department store, called The Bay. Her designs have appeared at other fashion events such as the Catwalk for the Cure and the first Canadian Country Music Awards in 2010.