Complex sentence: Burn Season went to work recording its debut album with renowned producers Bob Marlette and Tim Palmer--yet before it was even released, the band was dropped, and its Elektra debut never saw the light of day.
Split into simpler sentences: Burn Season went to work recording its debut album with renowned producers Bob Marlette and Tim Palmer. However, before it was even released, the band was dropped, and its Elektra debut never saw the light of day.