Complex sentence: When Diane tries to eliminate Elaine from the competition for Demonlover, things begin to take a dramatic turn and soon everybody's alterior motives and secret desires come rushing to the surface, and Diane finds herself lost in a web of intrigue.
Split into simpler sentences: When Diane tries to eliminate Elaine from the competition for Demonlover, things begin to take a dramatic turn. Soon everybody's alterior motives and secret desires come rushing to the surface, and Diane finds herself lost in a web of intrigue.