Complex sentence: Familiar Crimes (comprising This Awful Fire and Too Many Accidents) was turned into Wildside, accepted and revision was completed at the end of August 2016 with a final galley check turned in at the start of November.
Split into simpler sentences: Familiar Crimes (comprising This Awful Fire and Too Many Accidents) was turned into Wildside early in 2016. The book was accepted and revision was completed at the end of August 2016 with a final galley check turned in at the start of November.