Complex sentence: Fairbank and Teng Ssu-yu then edited the influential "China's Response to the West" (1953), although this was attacked for ascribing the change in China to outside forces.
Split into simpler sentences: Fairbank and Teng Ssu-yu then edited the influential volume, "China's Response to the West" (1953). This approach was attacked for ascribing the change in China to outside forces.