Complex sentence: Harold Jordan and R.O.T.C. drill team leader James "Spunk" Gales, the "Raiders" placed first in the State of Georgia in 1967 as the leading high school R.O.T.C. drill team.
Split into simpler sentences: Harold Jordan and R.O.T.C. drill team leader James "Spunk" Gales. The "Raiders" placed first in the State of Georgia in 1967 as the leading high school R.O.T.C. drill team.