Complex sentence: The editorial is a challengely academic in approach, top heavy with jargon and insider perspective, and is further confounded by a dense writing style, but Meneley and several other artist-researchers are the topic of the editorial, receiving conceptual attention to their methodological approaches.
Split into simpler sentences: The editorial is challengely academic, as it is top heavy with jargon and insider perspective, further confounded by a dense writing style. However, Meneley and several other artist-researchers are the topic of the editorial, receiving conceptual attention to their methodological approaches.