Complex sentence: Hoffman, pages 45--46 While losing his position in the colonial government and the ₤50 annual salary it entailed was a blow to Carroll, his support of Calvert earned him various positions in the private Calvert family organization which would benefit him throughout his life.
Split into simpler sentences: Hoffman, pages 45--46 Losing his position in the colonial government and the ₤50 annual salary it entailed was a blow to Carroll. However, his support of Calvert earned him various positions in the private Calvert family organization which would benefit him throughout his life.