Complex sentence: Wright also rejected Lovercraft's "Through the Gates of the Silver Key" in mid- 1933, but changed his mind after discussing the story with Price, who had revised it before passing it to Wright, and bought it in November of that year.
Split into simpler sentences: Wright also rejected Lovecraft's "Through the Gates of the Silver Key" in mid- 1933. Price had revised the story before passing it to Wright, and after Wright and Price discussed the story, Wright bought it, in November of that year.