Complex sentence: Commanded by City Editor Dewey Knydson and later Bryant Steele the paper was unyielding and unapologetic in its reporting, earning the ire of many of the FOFOMS or Fine Old Families of Macon but many awards for good journalism.
Split into simpler sentences: Commanded by City Editor Dewey Knudson and later Bryant Steele, the paper was unyielding and unapologetic in its reporting. This earned the ire of many of the FOFOMS or Fine Old Families of Macon but also many awards for good journalism.