Complex sentence: Koedt breaks societal barriers of what is considered acceptable to discuss and her article played a vital role in the feminist sexual revolution, and draws on research done by Alfred Kinsey, among others, about human sexuality to support her claims.
Split into simpler sentences: Koedt breaks societal barriers of what is considered acceptable to discuss and her article played a vital role in the feminist sexual revolution. Koedt also draws on research done by Alfred Kinsey about human sexuality to support her claims.