Complex sentence: Roger Ebert, for example, called Paul Rudnick's screenplay "rich with zingers", and gave the film three stars, visitors to his website were less charitable, affording it an average of only two stars.
Split into simpler sentences: Roger Ebert, for example, called Paul Rudnick's screenplay "rich with zingers", and gave the film three stars. Visitors to his website were less charitable, affording it an average of only two stars.