Complex sentence: A notable minority of Patton's officers were unimpressed or displeased with their commander's use of obscenities, viewing it as unprofessional conduct for a military officer.
Split into simpler sentences: A notable minority of Patton's officers indicated displeasure with Patton's use of obscenities. Several of the officers under Patton's command were unimpressed by the heavy use of profanity, viewing it as unprofessional conduct for a military officer.