Complex sentence: Upon her return to the Jaspers, Teia is aggressively recruited by the Order of the Broken Eye, a group of assassins with their roots in ancient, forbidden magics, who are particularly interested in paryl drafters.
Split into simpler sentences: Upon her return to the Jaspers, Teia is aggressively recruited by the Order of the Broken Eye. The Order of the Broken Eye are a group of assassins with their roots in ancient, forbidden magics, who are particularly interested in paryl drafters.