Complex sentence: Kennedy criticized the decision to retract his story over since-corrected errors; the retraction was further condemned by Salon.com founder David Talbot, who believes Salon.com's editors caved to external pressure.
Split into simpler sentences: Kennedy criticized the decision to retract his story over since-corrected errors. The retraction was further condemned by Salon.com founder David Talbot, who believes Salon.com's editors caved to external pressure.