Complex sentence: In 2014 Anderson submitted manuscript Shooting Range into the New York Foundation for the Arts (NYFA) competition and out of 520 applicants her manuscript made it to the final round of judging receiving a 3.6 out of a 4.8.
Split into simpler sentences: In 2014 Anderson submitted manuscript Shooting Range into the New York Foundation for the Arts (NYFA) competition. Out of 520 applicants her manuscript made it to the final round of judging receiving a 3.6 out of a 4.8.