Complex sentence: While some commentators have remarked upon the dearth of Jewish sentiment in Bruch's concert-hall version of the Kol Nidre, Bruch never presumed to write Jewish music and only wished to incorporate Jewish inspirations into his own compositions.
Split into simpler sentences: While some commentators have remarked upon the dearth of Jewish sentiment in Bruch's concert-hall version of the Kol Nidre, Bruch never presumed to write Jewish music. He only wished to incorporate Jewish inspirations into his own compositions.