Complex sentence: She felt that the Klingon should receive more prominent attention of the two, especially when Torres struggles with that side of her identity throughout the series, and wanted the episode to capture the Klingon's respect for the Human and their relationship.
Split into simpler sentences: She felt that the Klingon should receive more prominent attention of the two, especially when Torres struggles with that side of her identity throughout the series. She wanted the episode to capture the Klingon's respect for the Human and their relationship.