Complex sentence: Lewisham College Football Academy was Max Gradel's first stop after coming from Paris, France in 2004,under the tutelage of Head Coach Aaron Jacob, who was one of his early mentors.
Split into simpler sentences: Lewisham College Football Academy was Max Gradel's first stop after coming from Paris, France in 2004. Under the tutelage of Head Coach Aaron Jacob, who was one of his early mentors.