Complex sentence: Then his editor suggested that he should make three girls and a guy as the main characters and that they are demon hunters for hire and to make it something similar to Charlie's Angels which in August 2005 was named Yozakura Falsetto.
Split into simpler sentences: Then his editor suggested that he should make three girls and a guy as the main characters and that they are demon hunters for hire. His editor commented that he wannted to make something similar to Charlie's Angels which in August 2005 was named Yozakura Falsetto.