Complex sentence: The award was made for his actions during the attack on the "Wills feature", he was a Bren gunner with 1 section, 16 platoon, D Company 2/24th when his section commander was killed.
Split into simpler sentences: The award was made for his actions during the attack on the "Wills feature". He was a Bren gunner with 1 section, 16 platoon, D Company 2/24th when his section commander was killed.