Complex sentence: Several journalist and media-persons have commented on the lack-of-will in regard to a strong bill by the government, for a county with a large democracy this a dark blot of Land acquisition on the promising record of India.
Split into simpler sentences: Several journalist and media-persons have stated for a lack-of-will in regard with a strong bill by the government. A county with a large democracy has a dark blot of Land acquisition on the promising record of India.