Complex sentence: Editor of "The New York Times", Jon Pareles, gave "The Emancipation of Mimi" a favorable review, complimenting the fact that Carey wrote all of the album's material, and felt the record's new sound was fresh and innovative.
Split into simpler sentences: Editor of "The New York Times", Jon Pareles, gave "The Emancipation of Mimi" a favorable review. Pareles complimented the fact that Carey wrote all of the album's material, and felt the record's new sound was fresh and innovative.