Complex sentence: Sir John Soane, renowned Regency Architect, visted the completed castle, on his way from another project, he darfted plans, proposing a potential Neo-Classical Remodelling of the structure.
Split into simpler sentences: Sir John Soane, renowned Regency Architect, visted the completed castle on his way from another project. He drafted plans, proposing a potential Neo-Classical remodelling of the structure.