Complex sentence: On her travels, she meets two men who will change her life forever: a handsome young Andrey Tolstoy with whom she shares a fondness of opera, and the powerful General Radlov who is entranced by her beauty and wants to marry her.
Split into simpler sentences: On her travels, she meets two men who will change her life forever. A handsome young Andrey Tolstoy with whom she shares a fondness of opera, and the powerful General Radlov who is entranced by her beauty and wants to marry her.