Complex sentence: The article mentioned above (BBC Charlie Gard: A case that changed everything? I) sets out some of the issues that I think The article needs and am pleased that some of those points are now gradually getting in.
Split into simpler sentences: The article mentioned above (BBC Charlie Gard: A case that changed everything?) sets out some of the issues that I think the article needs. I am pleased that some of those points are now gradually getting in.