Complex sentence: In this introductory note, Dr. Rahbar explains that much of the controversy was due to the necessarily short statements within the paper were not subject to much qualification and hoped that the expanded amendments would help to clarify those objections raised at the Colloquium.
Split into simpler sentences: In this introductory note, Dr. Rahbar explains that much of the controversy was due to the inherent brevity of the statements, within the paper. Therefore, he hoped that the expanded amendments would help to clarify those objections raised at the Colloquium.