Complex sentence: Noah Ackerman finally overcomes the discrimination of his fellows in the army only to be nearly undone by the horror of the camps, while Michael Whitacre, still without meaning in his life, survives them both.
Split into simpler sentences: Noah Ackerman finally overcomes the discrimination of his fellows in the army only to be nearly undone by the horror of the camps. While Michael Whitacre, still without meaning in his life, survives them both.