Complex sentence: As a keen fan of The Rolling Stones and The Who, he frequented many live music venues of the time and followed other bands such as The Move, The Iveys and Pink Floyd and became a keen reader of Melody Maker.
Split into simpler sentences: As a keen fan of The Rolling Stones and The Who, he frequented many live music venues of the time. Wraner followed other bands such as The Move, The Iveys and Pink Floyd and became a keen reader of Melody Maker.