Complex sentence: She felt that it was "a novel concept that starts off well but unravels fairly quickly", whereas Jamie Mcloughlin of "Liverpool Echo" gave an overwhelmingly positive review, giving it five stars, calling it a "masterclass".
Split into simpler sentences: She felt that it was "a novel concept that starts off well but unravels fairly quickly". Whereas Jamie Mcloughlin of "Liverpool Echo" gave an overwhelmingly positive review, giving it five stars, calling it a "masterclass".