Complex sentence: Brought up at the Lyndons, Milton Road, Hoyland, Derek was one among the first intake when Kirk Balk School became Comprehensive, along with Geoffrey Howse qv and Steven Hickman qv.
Split into simpler sentences: Brought up at the Lyndons, Milton Road, Hoyland. Was one among the first intake when Kirk Balk Scholl became Comprehensive, along with Geoffrey Howse qv and Steven Hickman qv.