Complex sentence: In the setting of research writing, authors' editors may include developmental editing as part of their services when working with novice authors; in such cases, they must be mindful to avoid meeting authorship criteria if they will not be named as author.
Split into simpler sentences: In the setting of research writing, authors' editors may include developmental editing as part of their services when working with novice authors. In such cases, however, they must be mindful to avoid meeting authorship criteria if they will not be named as author.