Complex sentence: Later the same year the school was reviewed by Expert Review Group appointed by the Department of Education, the director of the group commented on the "dramatic improvements at the school" in the areas of uniform, behavior and moble phone policy.
Split into simpler sentences: Later the same year the school was reviewed by Expert Review Group appointed by the Department of Education. The director of the group commented on the "dramatic improvements at the school" in the areas of uniform, behaviour and mobile phone policy.