Complex sentence: Mottram was educated at King Edward VI Camp Hill School, Birmingham, he entered the central government civil service in 1968 aged 22 with a first class degree in international relations from Keele University.
Split into simpler sentences: Mottram was educated at King Edward VI Camp Hill school in Birmingham. He entered the central government civil service in 1968 aged 22 with a first class degree in international relations from Keele University.