Complex sentence: In "A History Of Modern Chinese Fiction", Hsia praised the works of several less-known and established Chinese authors then, including Qian Zhongshu, Eileen Chang and Shen Congwen.
Split into simpler sentences: In "A History Of Modern Chinese Fiction" Hsia praised the works of several lesser-known Chinese writers of that time. These included Qian Zhongshu, Eileen Chang and Shen Congwen.