Complex sentence: The first section so framed describes the dead as hovering in every direction, shuddering, and deserted (""), and describes them, if nurtured by love, enjoying one last moment in their final glow of life.
Split into simpler sentences: The first section so framed describes the dead as hovering in every direction, shuddering, and deserted (""). If nurtured by love, they are seen as enjoying one last moment in their final glow of life.