Complex sentence: Two minutes later the bow listed to 90 degrees, rose vertically and rapidly sank in 54 fathoms (99 m) of water, suffering 24 killed in addition to 24 more men who were survivors from "Long" and "Brooks".
Split into simpler sentences: Two minutes later the bow listed to 90 degrees, rose vertically and rapidly sank in 54 fathoms (99 m) of water. Twenty four men were killed in addition to 24 more men who were survivors from "Long" and "Brooks".