Complex sentence: In 2012, Deric Shannon wrote that while he agreed with Carson's criticism of the state violence used to enforce capitalism, he felt that Carson's solution-to eliminate the state-would not bring about a society free of all forms of oppression.
Split into simpler sentences: In 2012, Deric Shannon wrote that he agreed with Carson's criticism of the state violence used to enforce Capitalism. However, he felt that Carson's solution, to eliminate the state, would not bring about a society free of all forms of oppression.