Complex sentence: Both systems placed emphasis on record keeping, with Cicero's on Verres demonstrating documented taxation, it is further evident this occurred in Egypt as well, with signed copies of agreements being held by all parties to an exchange.
Split into simpler sentences: Both systems placed emphasis on record keeping, with Cicero's "In Verrem" demonstrating documented taxation. It is further evident this occurred in Egypt as well, with signed copies of agreements being held by all parties to an exchange.