Complex sentence: Yvonne disliked most of the entertainment staff, Ted Bovis and Mr Partridge in particular, and referred to Ted's money-making schemes as "petty", although she and Barry ran their own scheme selling cheap dancing shoes to campers for high prices.
Split into simpler sentences: Yvonne disliked most of the entertainment staff, Ted Bovis and Mr Partridge in particular. She referred to Ted's money-making schemes as "petty", although she and Barry ran their own scheme selling cheap dancing shoes to campers for high prices.