Complex sentence: Former E15 director, Robert Walker of the Half Moon Theatre in London's East End was immediately interested in two school scenes in the first draft where the kids were so far beyond control the teachers refused to teach them.
Split into simpler sentences: Former E15 director, Robert Walker of the Half Moon Theatre in London's East End was immediately interested. There were two school scenes in the first draft where the kids were so far beyond control the teachers refused to teach them.