Complex sentence: Carr was the top try-scorer for Connacht during the Magners League 2008/09 campaign, scoring more tries than the rest of the squad put together making him joint top try-scorer in the league that year.
Split into simpler sentences: Carr was the top try-scorer for Connacht during the Magners League 2008/09 campaign, scoring more tries than the rest of the squad put together. He was also the joint top try-scorer in the league that year.