Complex sentence: The candy-apple-red jacket, with black strips, was noted for its many zips and its "M" logo and its inspiration drawn from Star Trek, with the angular, rigid shoulder work, protruding out over the tops of the arms.
Split into simpler sentences: The candy-apple-red jacket, with black strips. The jacket was noted for its many zips and its "M" logo and its inspiration drawn from Star Trek, with the angular shoulder work, overlapping the arms.