Complex sentence: Studying under photographers Jerome Liebling and Elaine Mayes and others, Burns earned his Bachelor of Arts degree in film studies and design in 1975, and at 22, upon graduation co-founded with two college friends Florentine Films in Walpole, New Hampshire.
Split into simpler sentences: Studying under photographers Jerome Liebling and Elaine Mayes and others, Burns earned his Bachelor of Arts degree in film studies and design in 1975. At 22, upon graduation, he co-founded with two college friends Florentine Films in Walpole, New Hampshire.