Complex sentence: The standard of the work Finbow and his students produced so excited professional film makers due to its quality and freshness that, after several of the films received critical acclaim, it was suggested that more children should benefit from this unique experience.
Split into simpler sentences: The standard of the work Finbow and his students produced excited professional film makers due to its quality and freshness. After several of their films received critical acclaim it was suggested that more children should benefit from this unique experience.