Complex sentence: Some critics have argued that there was too much focus on battle-related'direct' deaths in the Report, however an entire section discusses the large number of'indirect' deaths caused by war-exacerbated malnutrition and disease.
Split into simpler sentences: Some critics have argued that there was too much focus on battle-related "direct" deaths in the "Report". However, an entire section discusses the large number of "indirect" deaths caused by war-exacerbated malnutrition and disease.