Complex sentence: Other writers like Tee Max of the same magazine who's article on the 16th May 1998, on page 12 showed particular interest in digging deeper highlighting on Sure Shot's settling into the London life and becoming a proud father.
Split into simpler sentences: Other writers like Tee Max of the same magazine submitted an article on the 16th May 1998. On page 12 he took much interest in digging deeper, highlighting on Sure Shot's settling into the London life and becoming a proud father.