Complex sentence: Bobby worked in a take-away cafe on the Harbour in Portsmouth, he was tolerated at best by those from his native city, although as said many despised him for his part in the only thing the'enemy' ever won.
Split into simpler sentences: Bobby worked in a take-away cafe on the Harbour in Portsmouth. He was tolerated at best by those from his native city, although, as said, many despised him for his part in the only thing the'enemy' ever won.