Complex sentence: While his memoirs focused mostly on his life story, Yap pointed out that there is a more vocal and tech-savvy electorate in Singapore today; one that responds actively to the media, and has become more attuned to world affairs over the years.
Split into simpler sentences: While his memoirs focused mostly on his life story, Yap expressed his views on local politics. He pointed out that there is a more vocal and tech-savvy electorate in Singapore today; one that responds actively to the media, and has become more attuned to world affairs over the years.