Complex sentence: Playing to the G.I. crowd secondary plotlines follow soldier shenanigans including a successful scheme to trade off a pack of Luckies for twelve additional demobilization points and adding "a sprinkling of anti-VD crusading to the performance".
Split into simpler sentences: Playing to the G.I. crowd secondary plotlines follow soldier shenanigans including a successful scheme to trade off a pack of Luckies for twelve additional demobilization points. One reviewer noted a running theme adding "a sprinkling of anti-VD crusading to the performance".