Complex sentence: While two of her returns were brief, her 2002 return was a longer stint, but as Andrea Black noted in "Home and Away Official Collector's Edition", her visit "started well but later fared no better".
Split into simpler sentences: While two of her returns were brief, her 2002 return was a longer stint. As Andrea Black noted in "Home and Away Official Collector's Edition", her visit "started well but later fared no better".