Complex sentence: A wise editor once told me to let the reader enjoy the series for themselves, we don't need un-sourced loads of BS that tells detailed information down to what Rick Hunter had for breakfast in episode such and such.
Split into simpler sentences: A wise editor once told me to let the reader enjoy the series for themselves. We don't need un-sourced loads of BS that tells detailed information down to what Rick Hunter had for breakfast in episode such and such.