Complex sentence: She complimented the confrontation between Oscar and Angela and the Pam subplot for marking some "development" in her character, but criticized the Jim-Stanley-Phyllis subplot for being "over the top".
Split into simpler sentences: She complimented the confrontation between Oscar and Angela and the Pam subplot for marking some "development" in her character. Despite this, she criticized the Jim-Stanley-Phyllis subplot for being "over the top".