Complex sentence: Crispin of "Electronic Gaming Monthly" ("EGM ") wrote that"Blast Corps " best feature was its"palpable sense of suspense" as the carrier advanced on resistant buildings.
Split into simpler sentences: Crispin of "Electronic Gaming Monthly" ("EGM ") was struck by the intense premise of"Blast Corps ". Its best feature, he wrote, was"the palpable sense of suspense" as the carrier advanced on resistant buildings.