Complex sentence: McNicholas used to write for the dance press and edited Muzik until its closure this background in dance culture and rather uninspired approach to music has lead to McNicholas and others such as Alex Petridis to be labelled as "bleeding glow sticks" by some more waspish commentators.
Split into simpler sentences: McNicholas used to write for the dance press and edited Muzik until its closure. This background in dance culture and rather uninspired approach to music has lead to McNicholas and others such as Alex Petridis to be labelled as "bleeding glow sticks" by some more waspish commentators.