Complex sentence: Joe Fielder, game reviewer for Mindscape, didn't give it a glowing review on their website, however a second showing of the work-in-progress game, this time boasting more playable levels game in July, at the 1996 San Diego Comicon.
Split into simpler sentences: Joe Fielder, game reviewer for Mindscape, didn't give it a glowing review on their website, however. A second showing of the work-in-progress game, this time boasting more playable levels game in July, at the 1996 San Diego Comicon.