Complex sentence: However when Denise survives a bus that crashes into the market and viaduct, Kim realises to regret what she has done; she tries to embrace Denise for support and comfort but Denise flinches away.
Split into simpler sentences: However when Denise survives a bus that crashes into the market and viaduct, Kim realises to regret what she has done. When she tries to embrace Denise for support and comfort, Denise flinches away.