Complex sentence: This was a finalist in the section "Works on Paper" and was judged Highly Commended and was then taken to Canberra where it was exhibited in the National Archives of Australia along with the other prize winning entries.
Split into simpler sentences: This was a finalist in the section "Works on Paper" and judged "Highly Commended". The piece was then taken to Canberra where it was exhibited in the National Archives of Australia along with the other prize winning entries.