Complex sentence: In early 1975, Lisa Robinson, an editor of "Hit Parader" and "Rock Scene", saw the fledgling Ramones performing at CBGB and subsequently wrote about the band in several magazine issues.
Split into simpler sentences: In early 1975, Lisa Robinson, an editor of "Hit Parader" and "Rock Scene", saw the fledgling Ramones performing at CBGB. Subsequently, she wrote about the band in several magazine issues.