Complex sentence: The network was notorious for heavily editing footage so it could be more suitable for younger audiences; for example, J. Jonah Jameson's right hand, which usually held the cigar he puffed on, had to be manipulated--and removed altogether in some cases.
Split into simpler sentences: The network was notorious for heavily editing footage so it could be more suitable for younger audiences. For example, J. Jonah Jameson's right hand, which usually held the cigar he puffed on, had to be manipulated--and removed altogether in some cases.