Complex sentence: Another novel, The Factory, was begun in 2000 and finished in 2002.Discourage over the rejections of his first work, he immediately began another adventure, called Full Disclosure, a novel detailing a skirmish in Vietnam.
Split into simpler sentences: Another novel, The Factory, was begun in 2000 and finished in 2002. Discouraged over the rejections of his first work, he immediately began another adventure, called Full Disclosure, a novel detailing a skirmish in Vietnam.