Complex sentence: Later he decided to re-publish the story, with a few tweaks, due to Dahl did a friendship with a busy and hard worker married Gordon Butcher father of several children, the first version shows too much the Dahl's indignation against Sidney Ford.
Split into simpler sentences: Later he decided to re-publish the story, with a few tweaks, due to Dahl's friendship with a busy and hard working married man, Gordon Butcher, father of several children. The first version shows too much the Dahl's indignation against Sidney Ford.