Complex sentence: David Taylor was soon to become a young minister but when tragedy strikes, the loss of his mother, he eventually turns away from God and his father's church, whom later becomes a top of the billboards pop star.
Split into simpler sentences: David Taylor was soon to become a young minister but when tragedy strikes, the loss of his mother, he eventually turns away from God and his father's church. Whom later becomes a top of the billboards pop star.