Complex sentence: As much as he is career minded he is also down to earth, recently the new Detective Chief Inspector Scott Vaughan who replaced corrupt Harry Hutchinson as head of the department made it clear to Luke that he will make Detective Inspector.
Split into simpler sentences: As much as he is career minded he is also down to earth. Recently the new Detective Chief Inspector Scott Vaughan who replaced corrupt Harry Hutchinson as head of the department made it clear to Luke that he will make Detective Inspector.