Complex sentence: In 2001 Ivor Noël Hume published a much shorter and less literary version of the Strachey text based on a manuscript discovered in Bermuda in 1983 which he suggests is a copy of a rough draft later revised by Strachey and published by Purchas.
Split into simpler sentences: In 2001 Ivor Noël Hume published a much shorter and less literary version of the Strachey text published by Purchas, based on a manuscript discovered in Bermuda in 1983. The manuscript is thought to be a rough draft of the document later revised by Strachey and published by Purchas.