Complex sentence: Heavily noted for their Concert Choir under the direction of M.L. Boynes, the choir has traveled to various places including New York City, San Diego, California, Salt Lake City, Utah and Indianapolis, In.
Split into simpler sentences: Heavily noted for their Concert Choir under the direction of M.L. Boynes. The choir has traveled to various places including New York City, San Diego, California, Salt Lake City, Utah and Indianapolis, In.