Complex sentence: Elizabeth's influence on the Queen, together with her colourful past, made many enemies: like her husband she seems to have been proud, although Dartmouth called her "the best bred as well as the best born person in England".
Split into simpler sentences: Elizabeth's influence on the Queen, together with her colourful past, made many enemies. Like her husband she seems to have been proud, although Dartmouth called her "the best bred as well as the best born person in England".