Complex sentence: So he collaborated with Sumit Batheja and wrote a completely Punjabi version of Luv Shuv Tey Chicken Khurana and pitched it to Rakeysh Omprakash Mehra.Though Rakesh liked it, Sameer and Sumit felt that there was something missing so they went back to the script and reworked some portions.
Split into simpler sentences: So he collaborated with Sumit Batheja and wrote a completely Punjabi version of "Luv Shuv Tey Chicken Khurana" and pitched it to Rakeysh Omprakash Mehra. Though Mehra liked it, Sharma and Batheja felt that there was something missing, so they went back to the script and reworked some portions.