Complex sentence: The draft constitution ends Egypt's all-powerful presidency, institutes a stronger parliament, contains provisions against torture or detention without trial, but it would also give Egypt's generals much of the power and privilege they had during the Hosni Mubarak era.
Split into simpler sentences: The draft constitution ends Egypt's all-powerful presidency, institutes a stronger parliament, and contains provisions against torture or detention without trial. But it would also give Egypt's generals much of the power and privilege they had during the Hosni Mubarak era.