Complex sentence: In January of 1982, on a docked schooner in the Virgin Islands, Peart presented his lyrics for "The Analog Kid" to Lee and they both agreed that it would make a great up-tempo rocker, with a soft chorus.
Split into simpler sentences: In January of 1982, on a docked schooner in the Virgin Islands, Peart presented his lyrics for "The Analog Kid" to Lee. They both agreed that it would make a great up-tempo rocker, with a soft chorus.