Complex sentence: Macquarie Law School is home to approximately 2,500 students, almost 100 academic teaching staff, and an average intake of 500 students per year, a lot of whom do not progress into second-year due to the high demand of work ethic and study required.
Split into simpler sentences: Macquarie Law School is home to approximately 2,500 students, almost 100 academic teaching staff, and an average intake of 500 students per year. A number of these students do not progress into second-year due to the high demand of work ethic and study required.