Complex sentence: For example, the internal/external locus seems to be closely related to feelings of self esteem, while stability relates to expectations about the future and controllability is connected to emotions such as anger, pity or shame.
Split into simpler sentences: For example, The internal/external locus seems to be closely related to feelings of self esteem. While stability relates to expectations about the future and controllability is connected to emotions such as, anger, pity, or shame.