Complex sentence: Devesh Sharma was critical of the film's scattered plot in his review for "Filmfare"; he wrote that it "skips and jumps from one plot point to the other", leaving the viewer unsatisfied.
Split into simpler sentences: Devesh Sharma was critical of the film's scattered plot in his review for "Filmfare". He wrote that it "skips and jumps from one plot point to the other", leaving the viewer unsatisfied.