Complex sentence: The L34 Zeppelin caught fire and, engulfed in flames it fell into the sea in Tees Bay with the loss of all crew while the other Zeppelins made their escape--flames were seen as far away as places like Melton Mobray.
Split into simpler sentences: The L34 Zeppelin caught fire and, engulfed in flames it fell into the sea in Tees Bay with the loss of all crew while the other Zeppelins made their escape. The flames were seen as far away as places like Melton Mobray.