Complex sentence: An Egyptian medical journal, "Al Doktor", and a women's magazine, "Hawwaa", criticized the practice in 1951 and 1957, and in 1958 it became illegal to perform FGM in any of Egypt's state-run health facilities.
Split into simpler sentences: An Egyptian medical journal, "Al Doktor", criticized it in 1951, as did an Egyptian women's magazine, "Hawwaa", in 1957. In 1958 it became illegal to perform FGM in any of Egypt's state-run health facilities.