Complex sentence: Chloe breezed into Emmerdale as a waitress at Marlon Dingle's restaurant, Chez Marlon, and became an instant hit, especially amongst the men of the village and in particularly Scott Windsor.
Split into simpler sentences: Chloe breezed into Emmerdale as a waitress at Marlon Dingle's restaurant, Chez Marlon. She became an instant hit amongst the men of the village, in particular Scott Windsor.