Complex sentence: The occupational structure for men and women in Ramsden Crays in 1881 illustrates that for men, agriculture was the dominant employer making up around 2/3 of employment with 33, of these, 24 were working as farm labourers.
Split into simpler sentences: The occupational structure for men and women in Ramsden Crays in 1881 illustrates that for men, agriculture was the dominant employer. Agriculture made up around 2/3 of employment with 33, of these 24 were working as farm labourers.