Complex sentence: Other teachers were Jack Myers, Richard Hugo, and later, Lorna Crozier, and Patrick Lane, and soon after earning her MFA she was awarded a scholarship to attend the Bread Loaf Writer's Conference in Vermont.
Split into simpler sentences: Other teachers were Jack Myers, Richard Hugo, and later Lorna Crozier, and Patrick Lane. Soon after earning her MFA she was awarded a scholarship to attend the Bread Loaf Writer's Conference in Vermont.