Complex sentence: In mid- 1972 Redfern toured the US with his mentor, Liberace, he was described by Australian Women's Weekly "s Dita Cobb as" a lovely contrast to the local product of his age.
Split into simpler sentences: In mid- 1972 Redfern toured the US with his mentor, Liberace. He was described by Australian Women's Weekly "s Dita Cobb as" a lovely contrast to the local product of his age.