Complex sentence: It was highly acclaimed by the leading literal figures who translated novels from Enblish, including Morita Shiken and Tsubouchi Shōyō, and her translation remained a classic for juvenile readers long after its original publication.
Split into simpler sentences: It was highly acclaimed by the leading literal figures who translated novels from Enblish, incl-uding Morita Shiken and Tsubouchi Shōyō. Her translation remained a classic for juvenile readers long after its original publication.