Complex sentence: It received generally negative reviews from critics, who called the plot "awkwardly jammed together" and noted it as a disappointment given the talent involved, and was a box office bomb, making just $5 million against its $25 million budget.
Split into simpler sentences: It received generally negative reviews from critics, who called the plot "awkwardly jammed together" and noted it as a disappointment given the talent involved. The film was a box office bomb, making just $5 million against its $25 million budget.