Complex sentence: After many tryouts with NFL teams, including the Tampa Bay Buccaneers, Carmody failing miserably, joined a NFL squad, so he signed with the Bossier-Shreveport Battle Wings, the af2 football team in his hometown of Shreveport, Louisiana.
Split into simpler sentences: After many tryouts with NFL teams, including the Tampa Bay Buccaneers, Carmody was unable to make a squad. He signed with the Bossier-Shreveport Battle Wings, the af2 football team in his hometown of Shreveport, Louisiana.