Complex sentence: His debut Edinburgh show in 2008 was titled "I'm Struggling to see how thats helping" but it was his second hour long show, "An Open Return letter to Richard Branson" in 2009 that bought him critical acclaim.
Split into simpler sentences: His debut Edinburgh show in 2008 was titled "I'm Struggling to see how thats helping". But it was in 2009 that his second hour long show, "An Open Return letter to Richard Branson", bought him critical acclaim.