Complex sentence: Julia highlighted the need for facilities and services for children with life-limiting and life-threatening illnesses in the Dorset area, and she particularly wanted to raise awareness for the need for more respite for the families of these children.
Split into simpler sentences: Julia highlighted the need for facilities and services for children with life-limiting and life-threatening illnesses in the Dorset area. She particularly wanted to raise awareness for the need for more respite for the families of these children.