Complex sentence: The film is narrated by young bugler Tim Ryan (Michael Anderson, Jr.), whose diary is meant to serve as an ironic counterpoint to the action, though in the cut version, this intention by Peckinpah/Fink does not come across very well.
Split into simpler sentences: The film is narrated by young bugler Tim Ryan (Michael Anderson, Jr.), whose diary is meant to serve as an ironic counterpoint to the action. In the cut version, this intention by Peckinpah/Fink does not come across very well.