Complex sentence: Young people from the nearest city to the temple volunteering for the people would come from long distance to be blessed by the Deity; with a great concentration, eagerness to the worship of the Deity and often bowing by shouting "Oom Dhaka eswari".
Split into simpler sentences: Young people from the nearest city to the temple volunteering for the people come from long distance to be blessed by the Deity. With a great concentration, eagerness to the worship of the Deity and often bowing by shouting "Oom Dhaka eswari".