Complex sentence: Carmichael, who had been working at a brokerage firm and was considering a switch in careers, composed and recorded "Georgia on My Mind" (lyrics by Stuart Gorrell) in 1930, but perhaps the most famous is the Ray Charles rendition recorded in 1960.
Split into simpler sentences: Carmichael, who had been working at a brokerage firm and was considering a switch in careers, composed and recorded "Georgia on My Mind" (lyrics by Stuart Gorrell) in 1930. Perhaps the most famous is the Ray Charles rendition recorded in 1960.