Complex sentence: His début album, "Far Beyond These Castle Walls", was a folk-tinged stab at fantasy in the tradition of the Moody Blues that failed to chart upon its release in February 1975.
Split into simpler sentences: His début album, "Far Beyond These Castle Walls", was a folk-tinged stab at fantasy in the tradition of the Moody Blues. It failed to chart upon its release in February 1975.