Complex sentence: Bernard Cartwright He quickly became a regular customer at the local Ann Arbor vinyl stores, where he began to network with many of the local DJ's, this led to the release of his first mix CD collaborated with D.J. Marquis.
Split into simpler sentences: Bernard Cartwright He quickly became a regular customer at the local Ann Arbor vinyl stores, where he began to network with many of the local DJ's. This led to the release of his first mix CD collaborated with D.J. Marquis.