Complex sentence: She attended the University of California, Los Angeles, where she received a bachelor of science in biology in 1990, planning to be a dentist; she was accepted to New York University Dental School, but had reservations about going to dental school.
Split into simpler sentences: She attended the University of California, Los Angeles, where she received a bachelor of science in biology in 1990, planning to be a dentist. She was accepted to New York University Dental School but had reservations about going to dental school.