Complex sentence: She went on to work for the counties of East Sussex and Hampshire, working on public buildings that included sheltered housing, schools and fire services, while also working in private practice with her life-partner and fellow architect, George Finch.
Split into simpler sentences: She went on to work for the counties of East Sussex and Hampshire, working on public buildings that included sheltered housing, schools and fire services. She also worked in private practice with her life-partner and fellow architect, George Finch.