Complex sentence: Discussions about individual suggestions also appear on the DYK template talk page, such as suggested improvements of the proposed DYK text, or comments about the eligibility of the article under the requirements listed on this page.
Split into simpler sentences: Discussions about individual suggestions also take place on the DYK template talk page. These may include suggested improvements to the proposed hook, and comments about the eligibility of the article under the requirements listed on this page.