Complex sentence: The story revolves around an old man who lives in a cave in the cliffs surrounding the corrie loch under the Lochnagar, a mountain which overlooks the royal estate at Balmoral in Scotland where the Royal Family spend much of their summer holidays.
Split into simpler sentences: The story revolves around an old man who lives in a cave in the cliffs surrounding the corrie loch under the mountain of Lochnagar. Lochnagar is a mountain overlooking the royal estate at Balmoral in Scotland where the Royal Family spend much of their summer holidays.