Complex sentence: A second Sir Vincent Lone CD, "When The Bridegroom Comes (Songs For Women)", was recorded a year later: initially sold only at live shows, it proved so successful that it eventually saw commercial release by his record company, Cooking Vinyl.
Split into simpler sentences: A second Sir Vincent Lone CD, "When The Bridegroom Comes (Songs For Women)", was recorded a year later. Initially sold only at live shows, it proved so successful that it eventually saw commercial release by his record company, Cooking Vinyl.