Complex sentence: While the Everleigh sisters are fine with the brothel for being closed and closed it without much protest, their impact on the girls have changed these girls' lives forever and the clientele lives are also affected by the Everleigh Club for its pleasurable and sometimes dangerous experience.
Split into simpler sentences: While the Everleigh sisters were fine with the decision to close the brothel, and closed it without much protest, their impact on the girls changed the girls'lives forever. The clienteles' lives were also affected by the Everleigh Club and its pleasurable and sometimes dangerous experience.