Complex sentence: While not recommending Federal dissolution, the Monckton report was strongly critical; it advocated a wide range of reforms, rejected any further advance towards dominion status until these were implemented, and called for the territories to be permitted to secede if opposition continued.
Split into simpler sentences: While not recommending Federal dissolution, the Monckton report was strongly critical. It advocated a wide range of reforms, rejected any further advance towards dominion status until these were implemented, and called for the territories to be permitted to secede if opposition continued.