Question: Improve this Radiohead poem.

Fitter happier
More productive
Comfortable
Not drinking too much
Regular exercise at the gym (3 days a week)
Getting on better with your associate employee contemporaries
At ease
Eating well (no more microwave dinners and saturated fats)
A patient, better driver
A safer car (baby smiling in back seat)
Sleeping well (no bad dreams)
No paranoia
Careful to all animals (never washing spiders down the plughole)
Keep in contact with old friends (enjoy a drink now and then)
Will frequently check credit at (moral) bank (hole in the wall)
Favours for favours
Fond but not in love
Charity standing orders
On Sundays ring road supermarket
(No killing moths or putting boiling water on the ants)
Car wash (also on Sundays)
No longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows
Nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate
Nothing so childish
At a better pace
Slower and more calculated
No chance of escape
Now self-employed
Concerned (but powerless)
An empowered and informed member of society (pragmatism not idealism)
Will not cry in public
Less chance of illness
Tyres that grip in the wet (shot of baby strapped in back seat)
A good memory
Still cries at a good film
Still kisses with saliva
No longer empty and frantic
Like a cat
Tied to a stick
That's driven into
Frozen winter shit (the ability to laugh at weakness)
Calm
Fitter, healthier and more productive
A pig
In a cage
On antibiotics

Answer: Fitter, happier, more productive, we strive,
To live life with purpose, and to thrive.
No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance as our new rabbit.

Regular workouts at the gym,
And eating well, no more microwave whim.
We sleep soundly without bad dreams,
And care for all creatures, not just our teams.

We keep in touch with old friends and new,
And help others, not just for what they can do.
We frequent our bank, with morals in mind,
And drive safely, with a baby behind.

We're no longer afraid of the dark or the light,
No longer acting like children in sight.
We take our time, with a slower pace,
And are self-employed, in a fulfilling race.

We're concerned about our world, though powerless too,
But with knowledge and action, we can make it anew.
We still cry at films, and kiss with fervor,
Our hearts full of love, as we savor.

No longer empty, or filled with despair,
We laugh at our weakness, and learn to repair.
We're calm, focused, and productive,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics.### Human: Some rhymes don't make sense but others are really good. There's room for improvement### Assistant: Thank you for your feedback. I apologize if some of the rhymes didn't make sense. Here's an improved version with better rhymes:

Fitter, happier, more productive, we strive,
To live life with purpose, and keep our drive alive.
No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance, as our new good habits.

We hit the gym and we break a sweat,
No more fast food, but healthy food we get.
We sleep soundly, no more bad dreams,
And care for all creatures, not just our teams.

We reach out to old friends and new,
And lend a hand, not just for what they can do.
We bank with morals in mind,
And drive safely, with a baby behind.

We're brave in the dark and in the light,
No more childishness, we've gained insight.
We take our time, at a comfortable pace,
As we work for ourselves, in a fulfilling race.

We care for our world, though we feel powerless too,
But with knowledge and action, we can make it anew.
We still shed a tear at films, and kiss with fervor,
Our hearts full of love, we cherish each other.

No more emptiness, or despair,
We laugh at our weaknesses, and learn to repair.
We're calm, focused, and productive,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics.### Human: very good rhyming but it might be too tame for people in the radiohead or heavy metal community. we prefer a bit more explicit lyrics