Q: do you like my limerick?

bill works on the video all day,
but his fans just question and say.
hotweig is so cool,
just release it you fool!
and all he can say is not yet.
A: it is ok except for the last line. you are not making it clear that the reason it is not released yet is because it is not finished, and i am working to finish it as fast as humanly possible. from the way you wrote it, it could possibly be misconstrewed to look like i am somehow 'choosing' to 'wait' before releasing it, which would be irresponsible and insane, especially after having been stuck working on it for such a long time and people asking me every day if i'm 'dead' or 'why' i 'stopped making videos.' if there is any way you could re-write the last line to more accurately reflect the situation, i think i would be more comfortable with it