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 # Sathariel
 
-Sathariel - a latent diffusion model for weebs. Like other anime-styled Stable Diffusion models, it also supports danbooru tags to generate images.
+Sathariel is a latent diffusion model tailored for anime enthusiasts. Similar to other anime-styled Stable Diffusion models, it supports danbooru tags to generate images.
 
-To create this model, I made two finetunes based on the merge of [MidnightMixerV2](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142/Mix-Models/blob/main/Midnight%20Mixer%20V2%20.safetensors) and [MidnightMapleV1](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142/Midnight_Mixes/blob/main/Midnight%20Maple.safetensors) and then mixed these finetunes together.
+To develop this model, I conducted two finetunes based on the merge of [MidnightMixerV2](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142/Mix-Models/blob/main/Midnight%20Mixer%20V2%20.safetensors) and [MidnightMapleV1](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142/Midnight_Mixes/blob/main/Midnight%20Maple.safetensors), then blended these finetunes together.
 
-*At the moment there are several versions of the model in the repository, there is the usual SatharielV1 and there is SatharielV1A, SatharielV1B or SatharielV1C, the difference between them is minimal, so they were released as alternative models.*
+At present, the repository contains several versions of the model. These include SatharielV1 as well as alternative versions like SatharielV1A, SatharielV1B, or SatharielV1C. The differences among them are minimal, hence they were released as alternatives.
 
-*SatharielV1C_DX is a merge of SatharielV1C and the model by DutchaAlex, it has better colors.*
+SatharielV1C_DX is a merge of SatharielV1C with a model by DutchaAlex, offering enhanced color rendering.
 
-Tbh this model was an attempt to copy the style of artist Mito Nagishiro, but the attempt failed, i guess, use NAIV3 instead, with "by nagishiro mito" tag, it will be better anyway.
+Although originally intended to emulate the style of artist Mito Nagishiro, the attempt fell short. For a better outcome, I recommend using NAIV3 instead, accompanied by the "by nagishiro mito" tag.
 
-Directory "other" contains old mixes/models/experiments/etc. 
+The "other" directory houses older mixes, models, experiments, etc.
 
 ## Big Thanks to
-- [DrBob2142](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142) for his mixes, which were used as a base for this model
-- [Neggles](https://huggingface.co/neggles) for testing, merging and something else.
-- DutchaAlex for his great model that was used to create SatharielV1C_DX.
+- [DrBob2142](https://huggingface.co/DrBob2142) for providing the foundational mixes for this model
+- [Neggles](https://huggingface.co/neggles) for their invaluable testing, merging, and contributions
+- DutchaAlex for their outstanding model, which greatly contributed to the development of SatharielV1C_DX.
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