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### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec76bda9e86d for prompt 3b9047: 'How different social classed were involved in the government were how since there were different classes/bases it had to deeal with what they were involved with and what they had to deal with.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec772eee81b8 for prompt 3b9047: 'In the ancient Eygptian system of government thier were different social classes. On the very top of the social class was the Pharoh, you might be asking your self how they became a Pharoh.Pharohs were belived to be gods in human form.So they took most of the responsibilities(4).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.472653417250568 and the wording score is -0.0052242590109083.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec78b3af9495 for prompt ebad26: 'They would rub chemicals or add some pickle in the meat to make it smell better. They wouldn't remove rats or anything that fell in so they would just label the meat "special" and charge it 2 cents per pound more. They would use practically every part of the animal and make it appear as if it were normal meat, This can be seen where the article mentiona "boneless hams".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec866e20d1fe for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian government is made from the scribes, vizors, noble aims. These different classes are involved with the government because they help the government in their ways. Scribes kept the government records. "The vizier ensured that taxes were collected. "Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions, they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods." '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec8901729f4e for prompt ebad26: 'Whenever the meat had gone bad or smelled bad what they would do is rub soda on it to get rid of the smell and then once it didn't smell as bad they would resell it to other people'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.842281449092654 and the wording score is -0.58125886755727.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec927f7d47bd for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy described by Aristotle are that a tragedy should incite pity and fear in its audience, a tragedy should not include the downfall of the story's villain, and that the main character of a tragedy should be balanced in a way that they are not entirely good, but their downfall is not the cause of their evil actions. Evoking pity and fear from an audience are staples to a basic tragedy because such strong emotions practically entice the audience into the story; the audience may be able to see themselves in the story presented. The downfall of the story's villain in a tragedy should not be included because such event would only satisfy the audience and their moral sense. Pity and fear would not come from a villain's downfall because the evil had been defeated for the sake of what is "good" in the story. The main character of a tragedy should be balanced because their grey morality in views has the audience wonder if theiractions were deserving of such misfortune. It incites pity for the main character due to the main character not being wholly bad, just that their errors in judgement sadly brought them to misfortune.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.83495109138843 and the wording score is 3.14321133114365.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ec9d700e3bf9 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tradegy, as described by Aristotle would consist of "being arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan", "it should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic immitation", and "it neither satisfies the moral sense nor calls forth pity or fear", '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eca54c00c4bd for prompt ebad26: 'They would use pickles to get rid of the spoiled meat smell, and they would also use the spoiled meat again but in forms of sausage or canned meat,'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.681768575941824 and the wording score is -1.67219550872199.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecafc64f734b for prompt 814d6b: 'Conformity was possibly a key factor in many students joining the Third Wave. Students were receiving better academic grades, and had better attitudes towards authoritative figures. The Third Wave ended because, afterall, it was only an experiment, and Mr. Jones explained how it was set in place for one week to show the willingness of the human mind to make up a sense of superiority. Jones ended the experiment because he did not want the project to slip out of his control and accidentally form a movement where students believed they were superior to others and justified doing the wrong thing. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.8671801118777 and the wording score is 2.77159162794206.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecb0581e5c11 for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian society was structured like a primid. at the top were the gods. The Eyptain beliveid that the god controlled the world. So it was important to keep them happy. Some of the humans elevated some of the humans to god. "The Egyptians also elevated4 some human beings to gods."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecb6d9acc26c for prompt ebad26: 'the meat would be taken out of the pickle and would often be sour, and they would rub it with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters. a machine consisting of a hollow needle attached to a pump; by plunging this needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a ham with pickle in a few seconds. in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. whenever meat was spoiled they would can it or shop it into sausage. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecdc3d443553 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use cover up like covering the meat with sour pickle and soda to get rid of the smell of the meat. Jonas had told them it Excerpt From The Jungle by Upton Sinclair Paragraph 2 " sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose". '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.296443085954169 and the wording score is -1.13345281520838.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecdd85431eb7 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use borax and glycerin. the text states, "it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." This is how they would cover spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.819248357761036 and the wording score is -0.63104096568684.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecf1482063ef for prompt 3b9047: 'The ancient egyptian system of goverment has many levels much like the egyptian pyramids. The highest tier was for gods like Osiris, Ra, and Isis. Pharohs and vizier were also in the top tier. Pharohs took care of taxes they also protected the citizens by controling the army and viziers helped pharohs with ruling. To back this up the author stated, "Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict." The second tier was for nobles and priests. Priests pleased the gods and nobles gained donations from the gods. The authos said , " Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods." Soldiers were middle middle class. They also supervised the farmers, peasants, and slaves. The author stated this in paragraph 9, "During long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves who were involved in building such structures as pyramids and palaces." Last at the bottom of the system was slaves and farmers. Slaves worked on building projects and farmers tended to farms and raised live stock to pay for taxes towards the pharohs. The author said, "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.17293236566335 and the wording score is 0.239216658363737.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ecf581e90412 for prompt 814d6b: 'It started out as a plan that Ron Jones had in mind then he later put it into action. At first things were going ok but he made some changes which led more students to join. At the end it madeall the students more disiplined and more loyal.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed02ba3d650e for prompt 39c16e: 'its the perfect imitation of an action, it's serious and effects the catharsis of pity and fear, and lastly it has a proper beginning, middle and end.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed05a30b0135 for prompt 39c16e: 'A good tragedy must have a complicated plot with a tragic ending. The main protagonist must be a flawed character in which the reader can relate to. The plot must not be simple, but complex. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.328150986113429 and the wording score is -0.248892428406657.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed123039bfb9 for prompt 3b9047: 'They had absolute power over their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramids.Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed13ea1e5785 for prompt 3b9047: 'The vizier is first in chain of command who collected the taxes. He work with the scribes who kept government records. Nobles and priests were next. The Priest prayed and pleased the Gods. The Nobles gathered gifts from the Egyptians and gave gifts to the Gods. The soldiers fought in the wars and supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves. Slaves and farmers were below the class. Slaves were captived from the war. The farmers grew crops and raised animals. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed14a6d5164d for prompt 39c16e: 'Firstly, Aristotle claims that a tragic plot should only have one primary challenge, this is shown in paragraph three, " A well-constructed plot should, therefore, be single in its issue, rather than double as some maintain." Secondly, he claims that the main character of a tragedy should not be overwhelmingly good or bad so that they can appeal to the audience. Laslty, he states that a tragedy should cause fear and pity in the audience. He says this in paragraph two, " It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation." '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.985008295285594 and the wording score is 0.62324473711734.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed1e0d611a57 for prompt 3b9047: 'the social classes involed in the government is at the top is the pharaohs secod preast 3rd scrbies at the bottom are slaves the text shows that in ph 2 "Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaohdirected the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0129571897677794 and the wording score is -0.409479638166746.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed1fb161de1f for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should come from a plot that changes from good to bad in which the main character makes an irreversible mistake that causes the tragedy. Furthermore, a tragedy should create both feelings of fear and pity and come from a character that is neither extremely good nor bad, but rather somewhat in the middle. This is because a tragedy facing a virtuous character is only shocking but does not release any pity or fear and a tragedy facing an evil character is not tragic retrospect.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.17345348599337 and the wording score is 0.752157341963876.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed1ff7f1c109 for prompt 39c16e: 'The first element of an ideal tragedy is that the main character must be an average person, not too good and not too bad evil. Another one of the elements is that there must be some misfortune of this character brought on by a misunderstanding. Another element listed is that the fortune should be from good to bad. Where things spiral out of control. He said that these few elements can help in an ideal tragedy that may produce fear and pity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.20516138615263 and the wording score is -0.132403044837851.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed231bced248 for prompt 3b9047: 'the lower stucture of egypt was the boys that worked on a farm. but in the text it states that you can work youre way up the ranks. the middle class in the text it states were crafstmen/women. And in the high ranks were parophs or high preists.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.210613934166593 and the wording score is -0.471414826967448.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed34b98dc591 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Social Structure of Egypt was made by slaves. The Social Structure of Egypt resembled its famous stone pieces. The stone pieces resembled the past of the Pharaoh, artisian, vizier, and the slaves.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.739905110427988 and the wording score is 0.0013115215410194.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed35bbd6cd5c for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle listed many elements of an ideal tradgedy. He made clear that the tradgedy should evoke pity and fear. It should also presnt a character that is not evil or good , but ordinary, and that charcter will have a mistake and a tragic ending. A tragedy should also have a single issue that the change of fortune goes from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed36bbc0a29b for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of an ideal tragedy as described by Aristotle is it should include a man that is neither good nor bad but makes a mistake just like any other, the tragedy should provoke fear and pity, and the best strategy includes a character who suffers from something terrible as it ends in an unhappy ending from good to bad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.223585743075648 and the wording score is -0.530785828993602.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed39157f72ca for prompt 39c16e: 'At least three elements of an ideal tragedy, as decribed by Aristotle is tragedies should follow a "complex plan," should " imitate actions which excite pity and fear," and should feature a character who "is not eminently good and just" and whose misfortune is brought about by "some error of judgement or frailty."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0725974074839821 and the wording score is -0.744768497376273.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed57ca5af092 for prompt 39c16e: 'There should be a single plot, rather thang it havinfmultiple layers. The tragedy should happen to a good person who undergoes a lot of bad luck, and the tradegy should be something that the audience/reader can relate to.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed5b81d93d27 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should excite feelings of pity and fear, which are caused by the unmerited misfortune of a relatable character. An ideal tragedy should also happen to an average man, the character must be "between these two extremes [of good and bad]." The third element of an ideal tragedy is that the downfall of the character should happen because of "some error of judgment or frailty" and not because of "vice or depravity," meaning they made a mistake. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.985008295285594 and the wording score is 0.62324473711734.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed7195ec6526 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed over a short period of time because rules were installed for the students to follow. As the students began more adapted to the habits of the organization, Mr.Jones made a salute for the class members to salute each other outside of class, and he instructed the students on how to initiate new members. These rules allowed for the children to become more engaged and interested in the experiment. The students had become attached to the organization, their discipline and loyalty was excellent which made the teacher feel it was getting out of control. The experiment ended when Mr.Jones announced that the third wave was part of a nationwide movement. The students later learned that they had been part of an experiment to show how people willingly create a sense of superiority over others. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.95277927479632 and the wording score is 0.994864440318928.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed75092c66c1 for prompt ebad26: 'The factories would use many ways to cover up the spoiled meat. One of the ways they covered it up was to rub it with soda to cover up the smell (Sinclair 2). They then go on and sell the meat as well despite it being spoiled. Another way they used spoiled meat was that theycut it up and put it into a can or sausage.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed84486551d6 for prompt 3b9047: ' The structure of the acient Egyptian system of government is placed like a pyramid stated by this, "Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid." According to the passage, it shows that there was different parts since it says that there are gods at the top of the pyramid stated here, "At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis." There were leaders called phraohs and were believed to be gods in human form, when they died, they were buried in a pyramid that was built as their tombs stated right here, "Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramids." In the middle class, there were Physicians and Craftsmen/women, the Craftsmen made jewelry, pottery, papyrus product, tools, and other useful things stated on this sentence, "Skilled workers such as physicians and craftsmen/women made up the middle class. Craftsmen made and sold jewelry, pottery, papyrus products, tools, and other useful things." Then, at the bottom of the whole class, there were Slaves and Farmers, slavery was the fate of people who captured as prisoners of war. Farmers tended fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments stated in these two sentences, "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles. Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.24147738107615 and the wording score is 2.17849240476518.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed8e758bb2b1 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tragedy is the plot of the story. Another element is the character of the story and how the character develops through the story. A final element of an ideal tragedy is the thought and that it must be thorough enough to be tragic. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ed9cba4128e5 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory uses many different way to cover up the spoiled meat that they produce one example of this is on paragraph 5 it states, "they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it borwn." the reason they did this is to make the spoiled meat that they produce presentable to the people that pay for there meat. another example of this is on paragraph 2 where it states "they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters;". '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eda635896743 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was a very sucessful experiment, however it got to the point where it was becoming to intense. The Third Wave was a way to see how people follow a group blindly. Students felt as if they were important to the group which got more people into the group. It just kept on growing to the point where it could do some real damage than good. Mr. Jones knew he needed to end it before it got out of hand. It was a great learning lesson for the students.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.65903189155308 and the wording score is 2.34561539507719.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edb63919385f for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristole believed tragidies should follow a complex plan. Tragedies should show a character who is pitied and feared. They should also include someone whos misfortune is brought out in judgement error. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.365607841229535 and the wording score is -0.591787701635864.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edc68334fcd5 for prompt ebad26: 'The meat factory industry was very unsaintary and had various ways covering up spoiled meat. One particular way was usuing the spoiled meat for sasuage. The spoiled could mean could not be " used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into saugase"( Sinclair 1). Sinclair made it clear they still used spoiled meat to sell. HE also admitted that the meat had an "awful odor". Soon enough they found that "Pumping into these te packers had a second and more stronger pickle which destroyed the odor"(Sinclair 2). THese are some of the ways they used the spoiled meats still.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edc839bd8ec8 for prompt ebad26: 'The meat packing factories did many different things to cover up spoiled meat. One way they did that was by choping it up and puting it in sausage. "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edd16f76539e for prompt ebad26: 'The varus ways the factorys would use or cover up bad meat was not a good way or a good idea they were putting variety of various unsafe spoiled meat wich could harm someone very badly it says in the text, "It was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat." This shows they were using spoiled meat distrubuting it between diffrent varitys of meat and then selling it to people.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edd8ab9a6a20 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed over such a short period of time because Jones easily brainwashed them into thinking they would eliminate democracy. Because of the salute jones told them too do they thought it had power so they thought they had power and it spread fast. The experiment ended because the students increased on the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was outstanding. Jones felt that it was getting out of hand because of how quick it happened so he stopped it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.782609029917822 and the wording score is 1.42472416428341.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eddc3d9f11f7 for prompt ebad26: 'they would put a pickle in them whichwould take away the smell and even put chemicals on them to take away the bad color they had on them they also would mix it up with good meat and make it seem like it wasnt spoiled but good.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.372093745684063 and the wording score is -0.621473202648942.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eddff470c975 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed so fast over such a short period of time because the students saw an inclusive group of people who were considered superior, and they wanted to part of it. The inititation ritual, salute, and motto all reinforced the idea of the Third Wave being a group that students wanted to be apart of. The experiment ended when their loyalty and discipline to the movement was so outstanding that Mr. Jones felt that it was slipping from his control. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.01816844746937 and the wording score is 2.55760895955939.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ede8a76c8a3b for prompt 3b9047: 'different social classes had different apprechiation and got treated differently, king didnt even have to walk on the growned he got lifted when going on tricks, then preists got apprechiated to and there were slaves that didnt get treated fair so it was a way to work up the ladder.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.35556218334036 and the wording score is -0.955800990817773.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student edf1089e5917 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up the spoiled meat. For examples, in the article, it says "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor the chose." (Sinclair 2) The factory should not do that because they are feeding it to people and could get sick. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0661115030294547 and the wording score is -0.715082996363196.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee0e53296105 for prompt ebad26: 'they would turn it into sausage ", whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. " '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee112d709731 for prompt ebad26: 'They would rub it with soda in order to cover up the smell as said in the first sentence of the second paragraph. They put a second, stronger pickle into the packers, "To pump into these packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor" (paragraph 2). They extracted the bone by using a new machine and put in a white-hot iron. "They would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron" (paragraph 2) They would also mix it into a ton of other meat to digyuise the smell. "Mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference" (Paragraph 3) They would dose it with with borax and glycerin. "It would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption" (paragraph 3)'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee1ecd1c01bc for prompt ebad26: 'The meat packing factories used spoiled meat and also all parts of animals to maximize profit. This was successful as in getting more profit, yet caught attention of many consumers as there product was not edible. The '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee299e014ec4 for prompt 814d6b: 'On the fourth day of the experiment, Jones decided to terminate the movement because it was slipping out of his control. The students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was outstanding.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee2ebca3a49b for prompt 39c16e: '1.be arranged on the simple but not on the complex plan. 2. it should moreover imitate actions which excite pity and fear. 3. it must move neither fear nor pity but merley shock us.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee346bf896c7 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle. Would be firstly that the sequel should not be on a simple but on the complex plan. Secondly, it should have actions that which excite pity and fear. Lastly, it should have a languange easily understood by the audience and where everyone can understand it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee3ac9833ec4 for prompt 39c16e: ' In an ideal tragedy, Aristotle believes that the plot is one of the more important pieces. believes it must follow a certain plot. He also seems it to be important that tragedy should arouse the emotions of fear and pity. He also believes that the best of tragedies aren't meant to have happy endings and have a very tragic effect on the audience.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee419005c7cf for prompt ebad26: 'Meat factory workers would prepare rotten and diseated meat with better meats. "There would be meat that had tumbled out on the floor, in the dirt and sawdust, where the workers had tramped and spit uncounted billions of consumption germs." the left over scaps would be put together to make new meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.237390406641902 and the wording score is -0.504022748039439.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee48f4ddcd26 for prompt 39c16e: 'he states that tragedy should be easily understood. Meaning that everyone sees the reason why no matter how mature minded one can be. Another element is that tragedy should be in honor or imitation of an action or being not an imitation. Meaning that tragedy should represent an action from or related to the character not the literal character. The final element is being able to feel or give emotion from the tragedy. We can and should be emotional from whatever tragedy occurs.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.54745434824894 and the wording score is 0.464579669438644.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee49145aa624 for prompt 39c16e: 'The Greek philosopher Aristotle described an ideal tragedy in literature in many defining aspects. One of these is that a tragedy is complicated and heightens emotions such as remorse and fright as in the reader as the plot moves along. Aristotle concludes, "A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation." Due to this, Aristotle indicates how tragedies should be deeply thought out to provide an emotional experience in a reader. Furthermore, a second aspect is how the changes throughout the plot will lead to a downfall of a character or event. He demonstrates that the change should be "not from bad to good, but, reversely, from good to bad." Moreover, a third aspect of a tragedy is that the plot and storyline should follow one strict and sole storyline that will lead to the eventual negative outcome. Aristotle suggests, "A well-constructed plot should, therefore, be single in its issue, rather than double as some maintain." To summarize, 3 elements of a tragedy from Aristotle are strong emotions stirring in a reader, the defeat of a major character or events in the plot, and one plotline that strictly follows the issue of this story until the tragic ending.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.83495109138843 and the wording score is 3.14321133114365.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee58f31432c6 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle, is actions which move pity or fear. Another element can be the change of a character's fortune from good to bad caused by a mistake or great error. Finally, an element of an ideal tragedy can also be when the character has done or suffered something terrible.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee6bbc6b2445 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle should be on the complex side, as in have actions of fear. Next a tragedy should have a single plot , typically going from good to bad. Lastly, a tragedy can also have an opposite catastrophe.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.493563085489582 and the wording score is -0.427587131382763.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee6c3729c521 for prompt ebad26: 'Ways the factories would cover up spoiled meat was they would often rub the spoiled meat with soda to remove the smell and sell the product, inject chemicals into the meat so they can save time and have larger amount of capacity, they would remove the bones to replace it with a white horn iron because the bone is usually the contaminated part, and they would add borax and color to make meat brown to give a smoked sausage affect then sell it for a higher price. As stated in the text it says " Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown. All of their sausage came out of the same bowl, but when they came to wrap it they would stamp some of it "special," and for this they would charge two cents more a pound. " This shows they would do all these disgusting things to their meat and even sell it for a higher profit.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.26880717534011 and the wording score is 0.537241357422765.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee714b1d2b2a for prompt 3b9047: 'In this artical it talks about slaves and diffrent jobs. The better the job you had the better you were treated. Like if you were a farmer you could be a slave and npt treated good. But if you were a god like Isis or Ra, osiris you would be treated like a king.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.676259321240509 and the wording score is 0.670955923801635.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee79917c0633 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy would have a complex structure, express pity and fear, and bring the downfall of the main character in a way that shocks the audience.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee838694cd6f for prompt 39c16e: 'well for a start he does try to wrap up the tragedy and he did explain how the plot istself was more character based than more story based so it made sense there was an abrupt end to the story. He kept it simple and understandable yet complicating enough to confuse the reader and force them to make a personal decision. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.51923089923094 and the wording score is -0.241395576814033.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee83993004b8 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle says thst the perfect tragedy should be arranged "on the complex plan." It should "excite pity and fear." In these two quotes he describes that any tragedy should be well thought out. It should be shocking and unexpected.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.548304076980462 and the wording score is 0.506755353548534.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ee83dff90f46 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave develpoed over such a short time period because it was very experimental to the students in California. Ron Jones helped the students understand more about what was talking place and how it was going. The Germany population could have accepted the Nazi's remige during the second war. The Wave gave them Strengh, the right discipline.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.531756890103371 and the wording score is 0.427287754405887.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eebda5a317a7 for prompt ebad26: 'The various ways the factory would use is chop it into sausage if meat was spoiled . They would run it up with sods to take away the smell.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.03388248254018 and the wording score is -1.08670269956478.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eec36a6be6f1 for prompt 3b9047: 'Slaves and farmers was the worst spot to be in because of the hard work they had to do. Farmes got taxed heavely and slaves were forced to work all day everyday. Moving up the scribes they had it better but it was tough to learn all of the pictures. Moving up again government officials and pries were all wealthy and lived reletively good lives. Finnaly, the Pharoh is treated like a god and is worshiped with power over nearly everything. And that is the social classes of the pyrimid.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.765704933150084 and the wording score is 1.33671683496264.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eecd3a13586d for prompt ebad26: 'They would use soda to take away the smell. They would rub the soda on them. They would also use a machine with a hollow needle and fill them up with pickles.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.611100137436418 and the wording score is -0.205064732821972.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eedaf3955aa0 for prompt 39c16e: 'You must have a good plot not one that makes the reader feel pity for the main character but one that makes the reader relate to him. You must also have a good main character that is respected and highly renowned in the story to make his eminent demise have more of an effect on the reader. You must also have a good story that imerses the reader and makes them relate to the characters fall more.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eee20cb203f6 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory covered up spoiled meat by rubbing it with soda to mitigate odors, and creating machinery to remove odors and purposefully dwindle down the "grade" of a certain ham (paragraph 2). The author states that "... after the hams had been smoked, there would be found some that had gone to the bad .. but later on some ingenious person had hit upon a new device, and now they would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eee309485c8f for prompt 3b9047: 'Differenet social classes are involed in this goverment. Preist are involed by getting blessing and donation from the people. I know this because "Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods."Also Vizers colldcted taxes for the pharaoh. I know ths because "The pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizier as a supervisor.The vizier ensured that taxes were collected." There was also scribes who wrote down and kept goverment records. I know this beacuse " Working with the vizier were scribes who kept government records." There was there was,solders who helped fight any problems. I know this because " soldiers fought in wars or quelled domestic uprisings." There was Farmers who kept animals in good care and gotgrains what was there tax. I know this because "Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments.". This is how all of the differnet social class are involed in the goverment.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.50380799562119 and the wording score is -0.213522655455293.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eee587ce20b3 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Pharoah owned everything. The Virizer would involved in anything the Pharoah did. The priest made rules and did religous needs. Noble s could also control the goverment. Soldiers serverd the army and protected thier civilization.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eee813825f8c for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would do many things to try and make the meat seems edible. Some of the things they would do is rub different chemicals on the meat to get ride f the rotting oder. They would also "extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron." They would do anything they could to make the consumers unaware of the quality of the meat they were buying.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eee84eb2af80 for prompt 39c16e: 'A good tragedy instead of going from bad to good, go good to bad. They need to have the dramatic effect from the story, you want the audience to feel as though nothing bad is going to happen until it does. The reader needs to be able to connect with the feeling of bad as well. It should be a good and well-constructed plot. If it is not a good plot, the readers will not be able to understand the reason why the tragedy is so bad. The people need to be able to feel why the tragedy for the person is bad, through a plot that is not that well constructed. It should also not be a comedy or not be that dramatic or sad. The people that came to see the tragedy because of the fact they wanted a tragedy, not a comedy that will have nothing that bad in it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.0821053681179 and the wording score is 1.30142886955607.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eeeced3e9586 for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of a tragedy that Aristotle describes is when the plot is arranged in a complex plan, it excites the emotions of pity and fear, and the main character is neither a very good or bad person.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eef9a5764bbc for prompt ebad26: 'They would cover up spoiled meet by canning it or chopping it up into sausage. The factory would also rub it up with soda to take away the smell.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.706990571646558 and the wording score is -0.757949620907184.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student eefd78fae36d for prompt 3b9047: 'Their system of government was like if you are lower class you were slaves or framers so you have to work a lot. If you were middle class you would have to make and sell jewelry pottery or papyrus. Finally, if you were upper class you were like a god and you were wealthy and people gave gifts to them.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef01b6b512be for prompt ebad26: 'They would use chemicals to put in the meat to preserve it and cut the rotting scent down. Industry in these times would also take the spoiled meat and just turn it into sausage for a easy solution to the rotting meat. In the excerpt from The Jungle it says "it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." These sausages where pumped with chemicals to hide scnets of odor and sold to the public. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.670351243803345 and the wording score is 1.55163281950375.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef042a830a6c for prompt 3b9047: 'All of the social classes helped in many different ways. One way the farmers and slaves helped is they made it so just incase of famine they stored wheat in the pharoahs warehouse. One way the middle class helped is by making pottery and other products and tools. Also the vizier helped make sure taxes were being paid. That is how some of the social classes helped.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef0ebe6bef68 for prompt 3b9047: 'in the text they have a goverment structure and evey one in the socal class has a roll The Egyptians also elevated some human beings to gods. Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramids.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0030532522459118 and the wording score is -1.25674810993572.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef15f3f9ede1 for prompt 39c16e: 'The elements needed for a true tragedy would be the downfall of a man caused by some miscalculation, should focus on one somewhat relatable storyline, and should have a definitive, shocking ending that leaves the audience stunned and in dispair. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.356083303670371 and the wording score is -1.46874167441791.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef17d8c11122 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy must have a complex plan. It must also have actions that impose pity and fear. An ideal tragedy should also shock the reader greatly.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef2ed180af7f for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal Tragedy should include a complex plot, it should include a sense of pity and fear from the audience, and it should have the characters fortune go from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.921624696425702 and the wording score is -1.21361135478513.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef31ec70f4bc for prompt 814d6b: 'the thrid wave ended because there was more 200 students participanting in the activtiy and loyalty to the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control so'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef34650066b7 for prompt 39c16e: 'In the second rank comes the kind of tragedy which some place first. Like the Odyssey, it has a double thread of plot, and also an opposite catastrophe'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef465b945133 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element is it has a good plot, it possesses no single tragic quality, and it neither satisfies the moral sense nor calls forth pity of fear. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef475e65f746 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top were pharohs, which were queens and kings, behind them was nobles and priests, after that ws scribes and vizier. then soldiers then craftsman, than farmers and then slaves and peasents.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.04957994068575 and the wording score is -1.04941078453203.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef4fe3188b4e for prompt ebad26: 'There would be meat stored in great piles in rooms; and the water from leaky roofs would drip over it, and thousands of rats would race about on it . '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef519856da61 for prompt ebad26: 'They would take the bone out where the bad meat would be and insert a white hot iron in the hole."And yet, in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor—a process known to the workers as “giving them thirty per cent.” Also, after the hams had been smoked, there would be found some that had gone to the bad. Formerly these had been sold as “Number Three Grade,” but later on some ingenious person had hit upon a new device, and now they would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron" (paragraph 2)'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef5c9aacef77 for prompt ebad26: 'they would use cemicals to get the smell out of the meat then soak it in other chemicals to make it look good "it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.579392237277158 and the wording score is -1.0896251196237.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef5d0ed33afa for prompt 3b9047: 'On the top of the social structure is the pharohs, goverments officals, nobles, kings, slaves and peasants. "The Egyptians also elevated some human beings to gods. Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. " "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.173744617454423 and the wording score is -1.17366715030006.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef5da4321b1b for prompt 39c16e: 'One of Aristotle's elements is that the moves of the character are not based on piti nor fear, but rather shocks the reader. Another element is that the plot contains no single tragedy, but rather evokes fear. Finally, Aristotle says that the tragedy should be rather moderate rather than pitiful or terrible. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef6c7b4dcfef for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian system of system of government since the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods. "Social mobility was not impossible. A small number of peasants and farmers moved up the economic ladder. Families saved money to send their sons to village schools to learn trades. These schools were run by priests or by artisans. Boys who learned to read and write could become scribes, then go on to gain employment in the government. It was possible for a boy born on a farm to work his way up into the higher ranks of the government. Bureaucracy proved lucrative."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.34414485120188 and the wording score is 0.835238301599536.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student ef7474c21eb1 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of ideal tragedy would be subject to a good nor bad person, excites fear and pity, and the subject may be brought tragety not by vice but by mistake. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efa29ae44521 for prompt 814d6b: 'the third wave was an experiment by Ron Jones. He made the experiment to teach students the german mentality, he made a bunch of rules to resemble the nazi schools. On the 4th day, he had to stop the experiment because the students were getting too into it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efa685b2af13 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up the spoiled smell by pouring soda and would get rid of the way it looked with chemicals to make it all look good.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efa6a74412b1 for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle is that is shoould be arranged on a complex plan, it should moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation, and it should follow plainly, in the first place, that the change of fortune presented must not be the spectacle of a virtuous man brought from prosperity to adversity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0408895073247213 and the wording score is -1.629328884178.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efaa5fc0fb1e for prompt 3b9047: ' Different social classes were involved by giving you roles of what you do. One example is that the Pharahos were the leaders and the gods.In the text it says "Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects." This proves that the pharahos were the leaders and considered gods. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efabc14fb0ad for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure is like a pyrimad because at the top you have the Pharoh and then the priests and then the artisans and farmers and at the bottom slaves.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.35556218334036 and the wording score is -0.955800990817773.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efafffeba613 for prompt 814d6b: 'the only reson the experment ended is because the expiorment could have became a cult or basicy the nazis the felt supiorior and they would do stuff for the states honor'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.07261303201737 and the wording score is -0.999628686402458.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efb2883029d0 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third wave had developed or such a short period of time becuase people were catching on and "By the fourth day of the experiment, the students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control(Staff3). The experiemnet was ended becuase of the fact Jones could tell it was getting out of control and something had to be done.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.328150986113429 and the wording score is -0.248892428406657.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student efb32a165d63 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptians social structure was built like a pyramid as said in paragraph 1. At the top of the pyramids there were the pharaohs or kings of egypt. Somewhat with the pharaohs were the viziers or supervisors. Below the pharoahs and viziers were the nobles as said in paragraph 6. Below the nobles were the soldiers. To end at the bottom of the structure were the farmers and slaves as said in paragraph 11. All of these social classes played a role in the government, like slaves were forced to build things in the pharohs discretion. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.985008295285594 and the wording score is 0.62324473711734.