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Fix coherence in the text: He starred in Devil's Carnival 2012. Devil's Carnival is a short film which was screened on tour beginning in April. | He starred in Devil's Carnival, a short film which was screened on tour beginning in April, 2012. | Fix coherence in the text |
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Over the years it has been expanded at both ends, with each expansion being of a different design from the rest. Today's stand has a rather disjointed look about it. | Over the years it has been expanded at both ends, with each expansion being of a different design from the rest. As a result, today's stand has a rather disjointed look about it. | Improve the cohesiveness of the text |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: These products are produced only after long and complicated designing process. | These products are produced only after a long and complicated design process. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Developing countries should also invest in the development of VHTR as satisfying their energy demand is essential for their economic growth. | Developing countries should also invest in the development of the VHTR, as satisfying their energy demand is essential for their economic growth. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text |
Make the text more logical: You're the one that started the Internet. one're the one that got me on the Internet. | You're the one that started the Internet. You're the one that got me on the Internet. | Make the text more logical |
Clarify this text: Several industry experts such as Wilfred Kwan (Chief Technology Officer of AsiaNetCom), Chung-laung Liu (ISOC Taiwan Chapter Chair ), and Maemura Akinori (EC Chair of APNIC) will give several speeches related to the Internet industry at the conference. | Several industry experts such as Wilfred Kwan (Chief Technology Officer of AsiaNetCom), Chung-laung Liu (Taiwan Chapter Chair ), and Maemura Akinori (EC Chair of APNIC) will give several speeches related to the Internet industry at the conference. | Clarify this text |
Simplify: Children have to be 10 or older and be under the supervision of a parent to shoot at the indoor range at all, Yeandle said. | Children have to be at least 10 to shoot at the range and a parent has to be watching at all times. | Simplify |
Fix errors in this text: On the contrary, We need more public traffice to improve our traffic system and find the better way to maintain the environment. | On the contrary, we need more public transport to improve our traffic system and find a better way to protect the environment. | Fix errors in this text |
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Charness' career in academia began with a visiting position at Pompeu Fabra in Barcelona in 1997. After commuting for three years between San Francisco and Barcelona (and floating free for another year), Charness accepted a position as an Assistant Professor at UCSB in 2001. | Charness' career in academia began with a visiting position at Pompeu Fabra in Barcelona in 1997. After commuting for three years between San Francisco and Barcelona (and floating free for another year), Gary accepted a position as an Assistant Professor at UCSB in 2001. | Improve the cohesiveness of the text |
Fix grammatical errors: The issue of ageing population is a great challenge faced by many developed countries in the 21st century. | The issue of an aging population is a great challenge faced by many developed countries in the 21st century. | Fix grammatical errors |
Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: a different color trash bags were distributed to citizens to be used at home to separate the trash according to each material. | Different color trash bags were distributed to citizens to be used at home to separate the trash according to each material. | Fix grammatical errors in this sentence |
Fix coherence: Though he was unsuccessful at stopping them, he did manage however to collect relief funds for the deportees. He also received assurances that the Catholic and Protestant Armenians would not be deported, as written by Alice Shepard Riggs | Though he was unsuccessful at stopping them, he did manage however to collect relief funds for the deportees. Meanwhile, he also received assurances that the Catholic and Protestant Armenians would not be deported, as written by Alice Shepard Riggs : | Fix coherence |
Remove grammar mistakes: With my parents I argue about school, how I use my mobile phone, how I speak with them.. | With my parents, I argue about the school, how I use my mobile phone, and how I speak to them. | Remove grammar mistakes |
Fix disfluencies in the sentence: One popular example is penicillin, where it turned out to be the first antibiotic because of its property of killing biological materials when it was left in Petri dishes containing biological organisms. | One popular example is penicillin, which turned out to be the first antibiotic because of its property of killing biological materials when it was left in Petri dishes containing biological organisms. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence |
Fix errors in this text: - But are you sure | - But are you sure? | Fix errors in this text |
Improve the consistency of the text: The Dolphins were coming off a 31 -- 0 blowout playoff win over the San Diego Chargers. Buffalo's defense dominated the Dolphins' offense, intercepting quarterback Dan Marino twice, recovering three fumbles, and limiting Dolphins to just 33 rushing yards. | The Dolphins were coming off a 31 -- 0 blowout playoff win over the San Diego Chargers. But Buffalo's defense dominated the Dolphins' offense, intercepting quarterback Dan Marino twice, recovering three fumbles, and limiting Miami to just 33 rushing yards. | Improve the consistency of the text |
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Camp Bondsteel is named in his honor. Camp Bondsteel is the main U.S. Army base in Kosovo. | Camp Bondsteel, the main U.S. Army base in Kosovo, is named in his honor. | Fix coherence errors in this sentence |
Rewrite the sentence to be simpler: Since 1500, we have killed off at least 322 types of animals, including the passenger pigeon, the Tasmanian tiger and, most recently, the baiji, a freshwater dolphin in China. | Since the year 1500, we have killed off at least 322 types of animals. | Rewrite the sentence to be simpler |
Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In addition, construction industry is momentous as it will determine how a country will be developed. | In addition, the construction industry is momentous as it will determine how a country will be developed. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence |
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: According to evolutionary theory, this competition within and between species for resources is important in natural selection. Competition may play less of a role than expansion among larger clades ; this is termed the 'Room to Roam' hypothesis. | According to evolutionary theory, this competition within and between species for resources is important in natural selection. However, competition may play less of a role than expansion among larger clades ; this is termed the 'Room to Roam' hypothesis. | Fix lack of coherence in the sentence |
Simplify: Autopsies are either performed for legal or medical purposes. | They are usually done either for medical reasons, or for legal ones. | Simplify |
Improve the coherence of the text: The 1956 Thunderbird had its spare tire mounted outside. Adding weight behind the rear wheels was said to adversely affect steering and handling. | The 1956 Thunderbird had its spare tire mounted outside. However, adding weight behind the rear wheels was said to adversely affect steering and handling. | Improve the coherence of the text |
Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Although I know I may get a good result of my consistent learning someday, I still feel a little disappointed with my situation. | Although I know I may get a good result through my consistent learning someday, I still feel a little disappointed with my situation. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence |
Make the text coherent: The women have a sense that they're paid a lot less. During the series sense emerges just how much lower women's pay is. | The women have a sense that they're paid a lot less, and during the series it emerges just how much lower their pay is. | Make the text coherent |
Fix grammar in this sentence: I have made a fool completely becasue it was just ants. | I have made a fool completely because it was just ants. | Fix grammar in this sentence |
Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This will decrease the suffering of the elderly, making them less susceptible to diseases and thus helping to abate the ageing process. | This will decrease the suffering of the elderly, making them less susceptible to diseases, thus helping to abate the aging process. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence |
Grammar improvements: The products of skunkworks are more practical, and people are in need of those product. | The products of skunkworks are more practical, and people are in need of those products. | Grammar improvements |
Improve the grammaticality of this text: Or sometimes you see during the day horror movies which should not be. | Or sometimes during the day, you see horror movies which should not be on. | Improve the grammaticality of this text |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In about 20 minutes all cleaning and buying food was done, then came first friend, ready to boast of her new scooter and hungry as a beast. | In about 20 minutes, all the cleaning and buying of food was done, and then the first friend showed up, ready to boast of her new scooter and hungry as a beast. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Xerocrassa nyeli is a species of air-breathing land snail the hairy snails and their allies. A species of air-breathing land snail is a pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Hygromiidae. | Xerocrassa nyeli is a species of air-breathing land snail, a pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Hygromiidae, the hairy snails and their allies. | Improve the cohesiveness of the text |
Fix coherence in this text: A one-year truce had been negotiated in 574, interrupting the ongoing war (since 572) between Persia and the East Roman (Byzantine) Empire. Negotiations were taking place to conclude an even longer truce. | A one-year truce had been negotiated in 574, interrupting the ongoing war (since 572) between Persia and the East Roman (Byzantine) Empire, while negotiations were taking place to conclude an even longer truce. | Fix coherence in this text |
Fix coherence in the sentence: In its Bulgarian section the cable system crosses directly between the cities of Russe and Svilengrad, using the shortest possible route. It connects three borders of Bulgarian-Romania to the north and Turkey and Greece to the south. | In its Bulgarian section the cable system crosses directly between the cities of Russe and Svilengrad, using the shortest possible route. It connects three borders of Bulgaria-Romania to the north and Turkey and Greece to the south. | Fix coherence in the sentence |
Fix errors in this text: I'm impressed her story. | I'm impressed by her story. | Fix errors in this text |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: With regard to the next problem, the protection of law and the raise of public awareness must come into play. | With regard to the next problem, the protection of the law and raising public awareness must come into play. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Also, use of psychology could counter the underestimation of the number of errors that will form inevitably. | Also, the use of psychology could counter the underestimation of the number of errors that will form inevitably. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: United States President Barack Obama was endorsed or supported by some members of the Republican Party and by some political figures holding conservative views in the 2008 election. United States President Barack Obama is a member of the Democratic Party. | United States President Barack Obama, a member of the Democratic Party, was endorsed or supported by some members of the Republican Party and by some political figures holding conservative views in the 2008 election. | Fix lack of coherence in the sentence |
Make the sentence simpler: I'd do anything to keep my family safe, And those men have given me clarity about What I can or can't do. | I will do whatever I have to do to keep my family safe and these men made it very clear what I could and couldn't do. | Make the sentence simpler |
Make the sentence simple: After publication of " The Energy Crisis ", Rocks authored the chemistry textbook " Developing Your Chemistry Fundamentals " (The Petroleum Publishing Company) in 1979. | Rocks has written other books, such as Developing Your Chemistry Fundamentals (The Petroleum Publishing Company) in 1979. | Make the sentence simple |
Make the sentence clear: He also reaffirmed his stance on participation of Serbs in Kosovo's institutions | Kotunica also reaffirmed his stance on participation of Serbs in Kosovo's institutions: "For now, there is no room for Serbian representatives in institutions of Kosovo." | Make the sentence clear |
Make the sentence grammatical: How many times in the last ten years have we given up GPS and used a common paper map for a trip? | How many times in the last ten years have we given up GPS and used an ordinary paper map for a trip? | Make the sentence grammatical |
Make the text clearer: For socialist parties the appearance of soviets was unexpected. Each made an effort to delegate to them their representatives. | For socialist parties the appearance of soviets was unexpected, yet each made an effort to delegate to them their representatives. | Make the text clearer |
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The House of Lords held that. Civil rights were affected and there should be independent oversight. | The House of Lords held that, although civil rights were affected and there should be independent oversight. | Fix coherence errors in this sentence |
Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Also, having the elderly joining into the workforce can increase the total productivity and reduce the burden piled on family members. | Also, having the elderly join the workforce can increase total productivity and reduce the burden piled on family members. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text |
Fix sentence transition: More snow days would inevitably be used during the upcoming winter. They predicted that vacation periods planned for later in the year would have to be shortened or canceled, or the school year would have to be extended. | Since more snow days would inevitably be used during the upcoming winter, they predicted that vacation periods planned for later in the year would have to be shortened or canceled, or the school year would have to be extended. | Fix sentence transition |
Write a simpler version for the sentence: Thyme is a basic ingredient in British, French, Greek, Italian, Albanian, Lebanese, Persian, Portuguese, Libyan, Spanish, Syrian, and Turkish cuisines, and in those derived from them. | Thyme is a basic ingredient in French and Italian cuisines, and in those derived from them. | Write a simpler version for the sentence |
Fix errors in this text: One such technology that is closely related to this debate is the invention of the automobiles. | One such technology that is closely related to this debate is the invention of the automobile. | Fix errors in this text |
Simplification: I borrowed that from work about fifteen years ago. | About 15 years ago, I brought it from work. | Simplification |
Simplify the sentence: I'm interested in the holes people don't fill in the street. | I care about the holes that people aren't filling in our streets. | Simplify the sentence |
Make this text less complex: The infrared data, for example, revealed that interstellar space is filled with patches of polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon gas. | For example, it shows that space is filled with patches of gas. | Make this text less complex |
Change to simpler wording: The current building was opened in 2001. | It was opened in 2001. | Change to simpler wording |
Make the sentence simpler: I'm sure he's just worried about Cordelia. | He was just concerned for Cordelia, I'm sure. | Make the sentence simpler |
Make the sentence simple: I don't feel well, I'm going home. | I'm not well, I will go home. | Make the sentence simple |
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: A head-to-head study with lopinavir showed the two drugs to have comparable potency. Patients on fosamprenavir tended to have a higher serum cholesterol. | A head-to-head study with lopinavir showed the two drugs to have comparable potency, but patients on fosamprenavir tended to have a higher serum cholesterol. | Fix lack of coherence in the sentence |
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The victims in such cases may be either people who chose to suffer obsession to purge their guilt for being obsessors in previous incarnations or people who accepted to suffer for altruism. More people could find evidence of the existence of spirits. | The victims in such cases may be either people who chose to suffer obsession to purge their guilt for being obsessors in previous incarnations or people who accepted to suffer for altruism, so that more people could find evidence of the existence of spirits. | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole |
Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The next morning the war began. | The next morning, the war began. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text |
Improve the grammaticality of this text: I stayed with a local family, which happens to be the family of the person that stayed with me when he took part in the same programme. | I stayed with a local family, which happened to be the family of the person that stayed with me when he took part in the same program. | Improve the grammaticality of this text |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Divergent approaches are used on routine basis for development of latent fingermarks. | Divergent approaches are used on a routine basis for the development of latent fingerprints. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Rewrite the sentence to be simpler: The faster we figure out what the Klingons saw in here, the sooner we're out. | Keep me informed. The sooner we know what the Klingons saw, the sooner we can get out of here. | Rewrite the sentence to be simpler |
Fix grammaticality in this sentence: I and wife always stop him. | My wife and I always stop him. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence |
Rewrite this with simpler wording: In the context of State aid, however, targeting a market failure is insufficient. | However, it is not enough for state aid to target a market failure. | Rewrite this with simpler wording |
Fix all grammatical errors: To conclude, surveillance technology should not be used as it not only cannot help in solving crime and maintain order, it poses a health threat to the people using it and around it as well. | To conclude, surveillance technology should not be used as it not only cannot help solve crimes and maintain order, but it also poses a health threat to the people using it and around it as well. | Fix all grammatical errors |
Simplification: I've never met somebody like you in my entire life. | Throughout my life, never I met someone like you. | Simplification |
Fix sentence flow: After returning to the Athabasca District in 1905, Constantine was responsible for building a trail from Fort St. John, British Columbia to Teslin Lake in the Yukon. Work on the trail was abandoned in 1908. | After returning to the Athabasca District in 1905, Constantine was responsible for building a trail from Fort St. John, British Columbia to Teslin Lake in the Yukon, although work on the trail was abandoned in 1908. | Fix sentence flow |
Simplify the sentence: Clark was a pioneer in the field of scuba diving for research purposes. | She was also one of the first people to scuba dive for research purposes. | Simplify the sentence |
Fix errors in this text: As much as the policies being implemented currently are able to attract foreign talents to become citizens of Singapore, native Singaporeans still seem to be unsatisfied. | As much as the policies being implemented currently are able to attract foreign talent to become citizens of Singapore, native Singaporeans still seem to be unsatisfied. | Fix errors in this text |
Rewrite this with simpler wording: His parents, like many Latino parents at the time, saw the widespread prejudice against Spanish speakers. | Like many Latino parents at the time, they saw how hard it was for Spanish speakers. | Rewrite this with simpler wording |
Remove grammatical mistakes: As it is known, it is used to produce crops that are more resistant to insects and diseases. | As is known, it is used to produce crops that are more resistant to insects and diseases. | Remove grammatical mistakes |
Fix grammaticality: I just don't understand why all the words don't stay at my brain when I do conversation and listen to the radio, people and TV. | I just don't understand why all the words won't stay in my brain when I do converse and listen to the radio, people, and TV. | Fix grammaticality |
Write a simpler version for the sentence: There was a picture of a gentleman. | A photograph of one master was there. | Write a simpler version for the sentence |
Make the text coherent: Because Bislett was an outdoor arena, the organizing committee chose Tryvann Stadion and Hamar Stadion as secondary alternative skating venues to be used the case of bad weather. In 1994 Hamar became the arena for the speed skating events at the 1994 Winter Olympics in Lillehammer. | Because Bislett was an outdoor arena, the organizing committee chose Tryvann Stadion and Hamar Stadion as secondary alternative skating venues to be used the case of bad weather. In 1994 Hamar became the venue for the speed skating events at the 1994 Winter Olympics in Lillehammer. | Make the text coherent |
Improve the grammaticality: All in all, I think those tips help you and I hope you will | All in all, I think those tips will help you, and I hope you will | Improve the grammaticality |
Simplify the sentence: These amendments should be introduced gradually to ensure a smooth migration. | To ensure a smooth transition these changes should be introduced over time. | Simplify the sentence |
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Conversely, for intra-abdominal fibromatosis without evidence of FAP. Extensive surgery may still be required for local symptoms. | Conversely, for intra-abdominal fibromatosis without evidence of FAP, although extensive surgery may still be required for local symptoms. | Fix coherence errors in this sentence |
Make this text less complex: When you're talking to them, they seem like perfectly nice boys. | They look like normal boys when you talk to them. | Make this text less complex |
Fix coherence in this sentence: The Adelaide hills region is close enough to commute to the city. Is the gateway to the country, so residents enjoy the best of both worlds -- the country community life and the convenience of the city. | The Adelaide hills region is close enough to commute to the city, yet is the gateway to the country, so residents enjoy the best of both worlds -- the country community life and the convenience of the city. | Fix coherence in this sentence |
Make the text more logical: Formally assigned to the Tunisian Squadron on 13 January 1913. Bruix remained in the Levant. | Although formally assigned to the Tunisian Squadron on 13 January 1913, Bruix remained in the Levant. | Make the text more logical |
Simplify this sentence: Gayla Colin, a bus driver for 13 years in the district, says she '' absolutely '' sees her time on the bus with kids as an extension of the school day. | She says she sees her time on the bus with kids as part of the school day. | Simplify this sentence |
Fix disfluencies in the sentence: For example, the cars used in Formula One are much more heavily equipped with safety features since the death of driver, Ayrton Senna da Silva in 1994, where his car was already very much equipped with safety precautions during his accident. | For example, the cars used in Formula One are much more heavily equipped with safety features since the death of the driver Ayrton Senna da Silva in 1994, though his car was already very much equipped with safety precautions during his accident. | Fix disfluencies in the sentence |
Fix errors in this text: Here are some tips about the Egyptian people | Here are some tips about the Egyptian people. | Fix errors in this text |
Use simpler wording: We've got to bury the bodies first. | First we need to bury these bodies. | Use simpler wording |
Make the sentence grammatical: In other words, even though I can get temporary happiness from accomplishing a work task or gaining a compliment from my co-workers, personally I think I obtain more permanent enjoyment and satisfaction from engaging and interacting with the people that I love. | In other words, even though I can get temporary happiness from accomplishing a work task or gaining a compliment from my co-workers, personally, I think I obtain more permanent enjoyment and satisfaction from engaging and interacting with the people that I love. | Make the sentence grammatical |
Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Therefore, public pensions and government incentives will be a vital source of money to support these elderly that are among those without savings. | Therefore, public pensions and government incentives will be a vital source of money to support the elderly that are among those without savings. | Fix grammaticality in this sentence |
Simplification: If my money can't make a difference, I'm moving to Monaco. | I am moving to Monaco if my money changes nothing. | Simplification |
Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: So the food I made by my own hands is safer than any other food that is made in restaurants. | So the food I make with my own hands is safer than any other food that is made in restaurants. | Improve the grammaticality of this sentence |
Fix the grammar mistakes: The environmental damage done, though not measurable in dollars and cents, should also be taken into account as the cost. | The environmental damage is done, though not measurable in dollars and cents, should also be taken into account as cost. | Fix the grammar mistakes |
Fix coherence in the sentence: That band needed a new bassist and recruited future Low bassist John Nichols. At that time, bassist was a bassist at Superior Senior High School, and bassist in the band Lorenzo's Tractor. | That band needed a new bassist and recruited future Low bassist John Nichols. At that time, Nichols was a senior at Superior Senior High School, and bassist in the band Lorenzo's Tractor. | Fix coherence in the sentence |
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: However the government would not fix a purchase price for the assets until the situation became clearer. Without a continuing business many of them might be worthless. | However the government would not fix a purchase price for the assets until the situation became clearer because without a continuing business many of them might be worthless. | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole |
Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Drivers drive the cars with full throttle for over 75% of the lap, longer than the other circuits. | Drivers drive the cars at full throttle for over 75% of the lap, longer than other circuits. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text |
Remove grammar mistakes: Hence, VHTR will not be able to operate in the absence of helium. | Hence, VHTR will not be able to function in the absence of helium. | Remove grammar mistakes |
Fix grammaticality of the sentence: By the way, I think my office and my house are considerably far. | By the way, I think my office and my house are considerably far apart. | Fix grammaticality of the sentence |
Improve the coherence of the text: The substantial extra expenses involved did not deter him. Anything was not likely to, for the Hermitage, in addition to having a majestic pastoral setting, had a connection with Robert Emmet, an Irish martyr and hero of Pearse's. | The substantial extra expenses involved did not deter him, nor was anything likely to, for the Hermitage, in addition to having a majestic pastoral setting, had a connection with Robert Emmet, an Irish martyr and hero of Pearse's. | Improve the coherence of the text |
Rewrite this sentence in a simpler manner: To boost performance, the OS had to determine the order of the requests based on its own possibly incorrect perspective of the hard drive activity (otherwise known as I/O scheduling). | In order to boost performance, it had to decide the order of the requests based on its own, possibly incorrect, idea of what the hard drive was doing. | Rewrite this sentence in a simpler manner |
Fix grammatical errors: This tomato variety could be harvested by machine, which was a big success. | This tomato variety could be harvested by machines, which was a big success. | Fix grammatical errors |
Fix coherence in the text: They are also somewhat more reliable because of the lower level of dry firing due to the higher number of rounds that can be shot off without having to even touch the magazine,. High-cap magazines need winding after a few dozen shots. | They are also somewhat more reliable because of the lower level of dry firing due to the higher number of rounds that can be shot off without having to even touch the magazine, whereas high-cap magazines need winding after a few dozen shots. | Fix coherence in the text |
Remove all grammatical errors from this text: More developed and enhanced functions will be added and improve people's life better and better. | More developed and enhanced functions will be added to improve people's lives better and better. | Remove all grammatical errors from this text |
Rewrite this with simpler wording: We must conduct military exercises once a year in Switzerland. | In Switzerland we have to do military service once a year. | Rewrite this with simpler wording |
Update to remove grammar errors: This would put on even more pressure on the government financially in terms of funding medical and social expenses of the elderly. | This would put even more pressure on the government financially in terms of funding the medical and social expenses of the elderly. | Update to remove grammar errors |
Fix the grammar mistakes: The aim is to attract more visitors to the country and create benefits to the economy of the country. | The aim is to attract more visitors to the country and create benefits for the economy of the country. | Fix the grammar mistakes |
Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: However I felt his performance was excellent and very moving. | However, I felt his performance was excellent and very moving. | Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence |
Rewrite this with simpler wording: You'il be almost invisible in his company. | In his company you ought to be nearly invisible. | Rewrite this with simpler wording |