Hiya!  I'm here from's comment tag with the word "Cloak".  I'm not sure if Ruby's outfit has more of a cape or a cloak, but I think it fits the theme either way. The first thing that caught my attention after the cloak was the corset looking piece.  Without knowing how she looks in the show/the style it might have, I can say the bottom looks really well proportioned here, but the top seems to go big really fast and looses it's definition, a bit like it's just a random bulge. The skirt/belt/leggings look good, the skirt in specific looks like you've added a leathery texture that goes well for it.  I didn't find a lot of other pieces in your gallery with a full bodies, but they seem like a strong suit for you. The shoe for the swung out foot looks a little off with the red heel section.  The way it comes down along the front is a little too straight and comes across to me like it's a pointed toe shoe, while the other shoe comes across as a curved edge like wedge shoes.  I think you were going for the curved look, but the left shoe does throw that off a little. I don't have any advice on how you might change this section (Someone with more landscape practice might be able to help here).  But where she's sitting on the ledge, she looks a lot like she's about to fall off, likely due to how close she is to the edge, and the angle she's sitting on. This turned out a little long, but I'm hoping it was helpful to you.  Your word for's galley is "Hidden"!