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abstract has to stand for clear view and is the reason for selecting edm standards in question add the benefits of gra and taguchi bring down a new table for starting expected and experimental results for comparison in the work anova can become discussed with references as it may be a general result

the experimental results show that a abp algorithm designed in this paper reduces a training error by compared with the traditional bp algorithm it shows that the abp algorithm has good performance in realtime analysis of big data in logistics production chain which the delay of the function designed in this paper is less than ms and the response time is less than s indicating that the system can run stably such experimental results are very satisfactory but there exist other gaps in other aspects of the paper that need attentiona the collection of logistics supply chain data in this article uses rfid technology and barcode technology for realtime collection but the author did not introduce any technology please addb wireless sensor network consists of hardware platform operating

a systematic review and metaanalysis for the role of nursing for selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure is a meaning study in this study the authors have performed a systematic review and metaanalysis for assessing the role of nursing for selfcare in patients suffering from heart failure however there are still many corrections should be madethere are too many grammar errors please correctthere are too many typos please attentiontoo many keywords please delete someplease show the pictures of figures and tables in the last part of the paperfigure is not clear please show more clear oneplease add the description of resultsplease show figure legends behand the figuresplease show more description in the part of discussionplease add the references by using endnote softwareplease add more references about

in the manuscript effects of mindfulnessbased stress reduction for breast cancer patients undergoing postoperative chemotherapy an observational pilot study the authors demonstrated mbsr therapy can significantly improve the anxiety and depression of patients with breast cancer in the early stage of postoperative chemotherapy this is well written and clear paper and have clinical significance however there are some questions need to be settled to further improve the data special commands should have paid attentionmajor pointthe author only described there were difference in the scores of physiological status in the results part however this was totally inaccuratethe author used breast cancer patients and divided into two groups patients in the mbsr group received treatment while patients in the control group were given routine nursing i was wondering whether these

the baseline information section is too cumbersome and it is suggested that it be modified to a table format it would allow the reader to understand the results more intuitively it is suggested that tcm treatment should be added to the methods section to fit the scope of the journal in addition preoperative and postoperative related treatments should be added it is suggested that the discussion and foreword should be supplemented with some chinese medicine related aspects the english level of this article is not up to the requirements of the journal the results are too chinese please reedit it is recommended to get a professional english speaker to make the changes please refer to point of my suggestion and if you have added herbal treatment please provide

the four scales of college students physical exercise behavior change change stage change procedure selfefficacy and decisionmaking balance scale have good construct validity and internal consistency this paper uses our crosstheoretical model to conduct data analysis using the changing stages and selfefficacy and decisionmaking balance of college students physical exercise behavior change the full text has clear semantics and rigorous language making it a very readable article here in the description of research content of the document there are some problems that need to be avoided further specific problems are as follows the related paper on physical exercise techniques and the role of crosstheoretical models in the study of physical exercise behavior and emotional changes are mentioned under the abstract please determine the application of the relevant method

paper is nicely drafted even the problem is also challenging but i have following suggestions there are some sentences that are too long as a general rule one idea per sentence should be written in short sentences more emphasis should be placed on contributions the novelty of the work should be defined as well as how it addresses the limitations of prior work it would be helpful if the authors included a table that highlights the key differences between previous studies and their limitations a line describing the proposed solution may also be added to the table before explaining the details the authors should first give an overview of their solution although a novel solution is presented explaining how it was designed eg why its built this way

the abstract is too technical this reveiwer suggest to make the abstract more general and give the results too general also at the end comparison maybe added in seconds or percentages what requiredintroduction is too short but the related works are not eough need to add more related works published recently in section the section title was too long to be a title for section please leave it more generalhowever very good elaboration that discussion gave for this section which is quite long the section chapter is too long to be a title for section please leave it more generalgreat expirements results and discussion have been presented in the paperhowever each language need to be revised

this manuscript describes the study on the endothelial cell phenotype regulation by blood flow shear stress in regard of atherosclerosis formation huvecs were used as an in vitro cell model apoenull mice fed with highfat diet were used as an in vivo atherosclerosis mouse model an in vitro pump system was used to generate shear force of dyncm as the low shear stress lss treatment to the cells to be compared with the static control however there is a critical error in the experimental design throughout the study a static control is considered as dyncm which is even lower than the lss at dyncm the lss needs to be compared with a higher unidirectional laminar shear stress typically at dyncm instead of static control in an in vivo

this paper explores the value of the goec care model in the perioperative management of patients with cardiovascular medication methods the retrospective analysis of clinical data collected from patients with cardiovascular disease is detailed but there are some problems in the paperin the abstract the methods submitted and results are unclear and the authors are asked to sort them outkeywords for this article goec model of care cardiovascular interventional procedures perioperative period treatment value of one request management here and value of one request do not understand the keywordswith the increase in cardiovascular risk factors such as diabetes and hypertension the prevalence of cardiovascular disease is also increasing and what is their preliminary conclusion that this introduction should clarify the following table the author is invited to revise

this paper mainly studies science education innovation and transparency enhancement technology under artificial intelligence in order to reflect the advantages of artificial intelligence technology this paper applies a personalized recommendation algorithm to research and analyze the subject the subject matter of his article conforms to the current mainstream research but there are certain flaws in the analysis process the abstract contents of the article introduces specific enhancement of transparency by artificial intelligence techniques but does not give a specific explanation on the way of transparency enhancement in the background part of the article artificial intelligence technology has improved towards high education model what chance of improvement can you further explain this research introduces basic research of many researchers but some of the literature does not conform to the

this paper aims to study the intelligent recommendation method of international film and television resources this paper proposes an intelligent recommendation method of international film and television resources based on interest mining the proposed method is good but there are still some rooms for improvement kdd technology is a new information acquisition method in the computer field which can solve complex and computationally intensive information acquisition problems due to its advantages in data it has been applied to various fields to successfully solve various information extraction problems in the introduction part the concept of kdd is missing please introduce the concept of kdd clustering algorithm has better effect on the problem of customer interest collection to be solved and has less restrictions so its application range is very

the row in the title the human expression can be misleading this was an in vitro and in vivo animal experiment please indicate there that the experiments were carried out in human os cells and in animal model to avert misunderstanding that this is could be a clinical studyplease underpin that the diverse mapk pathways are similar in human and in the applied in vitro experimentin row not all phythochemicals are chemopreventive according to the context chemopreventive agents would be the right expression instead of phythochemicalsin row this part should be in the results and in the conclusion section respectively instead of this the hypothesis should be therein figure b and in figure are more mistyping also instead of control there should be control consequently in each figure

please improve the english of our manuscript help found several errorsabstract should contain more information regarding the main contributions and recent historic significance and research questions should be given in the introduction sectionupdate of literature review section by adding more recent studies a proposed methodology should not discussed in more detail the pros and cons superiority to experiments are done however the practical implications of the results need further explanation

the choice of the dissertation topic is in line with the purpose of professional training the topic selection is difficult and the academic research value is high in the writing process you can use knowledge comprehensively conduct comprehensive analysis and have personal opinions however it would be more perfect to improve the following points the abstract of the article clearly introduces the background and development of the topic of the article and illustrates it with specific data but lacks an exposition of the significance of the study a large number of domestic and foreign authoritative documents are cited in the introduction to enrich the article but the introduction needs to explain the background of the research such as the research of n in a certain field the article

in the manuscript entitled protective application of thioredoxin on the ischemiareperfusion flap in mice through askmapk apoptosis signaling pathway niu etal found that the level of trx in skin flap cells of ir mice decreased significantly and the apoptosis pathways on askmapk cells known as clcaspase ask and pp were involved and their levels increased it indicated that trx was closely related to the flap ir injury and the injury was achieved through the askmapk cell fate signaling pathway in a word the experimental design and other innovation are good and the research on the specific mechanism is indepth there were some comments on this papercheck the figure layout as in page the font of figures they needed to be modifiedrewrite the abstract sectionthere are a couple of

what criteria were adopted to investigate rehabilitation therapys effects on triglyceride glucose and high and lowdensity lipoprotein levels in elderly patients in the presented work why you have taken a fixed number of patients with different degrees of abnormal glucolipid metabolism in this experiment is there any procedure that has been adopted to randomly assign subjects to the experimental group and the control group with subjects in each group what were the criteria for choosing the experimental group that underwent intensive baduanjin exercise therapy emotional release therapy once a day for minutes the control group did not do any specialized exercises and lived an everyday life why the total duration of the intervention was weeks how and why the triglycerides blood glucose high and lowdensity lipoproteins blood lipids

the idea and implementation seem to be ok the baselines and arguments seem to be convincing the paper is written very clearly however the authors can incorporate the following changes or modifications to make the paper even strongerconclusion should be extended by highlighting the studys novelty more future directions should be presented there are some grammatical errors to be corrected author may include the recent and related literature that is related to this work for examplewang zx jv yq a novel grey prediction model based on quantile regression communications in nonlinear science and numerical simulation doihttpsdoiorgjcnsns in sum it is advised to be published when authors finish the revision of the paper according to the above

in the paper the wavelet packet energy curvature difference index is proposed to determine the structural damage location the manuscript is easy to read before publishing it is recommended to make the following adjustmentsintroductionextend the existing bibliography by citing papers concerning building with similar technology eg aloisio a fragiacomo m dal g the thcentury baraccato of laquila international journal of architectural heritage and related to fatigue damagecalculation method of curvaturefor the sake of clarity add a graphical representation of eq the establishment of the finite element model of the north houses main hallreplace beam mass combin and solid with more descriptive termsdamage diagnosis of the wood structure of the north houses main hallincrease the size of the chart labels

the abstract is lacking of the explanation of the work table also why mention the references clearly in the abstract and for introduction part the backgroud and rationale is more why u want to conduct this articles whats imprtance this the research data analysis is very short i suggest you to do this explaination on the work list and citation doest match many references in the articles however when i check reference list there is no reference there the conclusion is too short author need to include all necessary points in the interview part

i have read the paper the paper is good but his following comments should be addressed in the revised papersome of the headings of this paper are written in the italic size i suggest to the authors please resolve this these papers abstract must be concise please make it more logically continuousi noticed is the radical gastrectomy section is the keywords point but i cannot see a debate in the paper with this section also resolve this the concluding sections first sentence is ambiguous i think the editors should work on their first language in the concluding partalso not a clear difference between data sources and selection and the general data of enrolled patientsearly postoperative complications occurred in of patients i give one reasonthe values of the analysis

this is a very interesting manuscript worthy of publication the results of the study and the expression of the manuscript are satisfactory which has important reference of antiapoptosis and antiinflammatory effects of tetramethylpyrazine but for the benefit of the readers there have still some problems with any manuscript it is noted that your manuscript deserves careful editing by someone with expertise in technical english editing paying particular attention to technical grammar spelling including the sentence structure there are problems during writing writers many abbreviations failing the include the writer name when they first appear for example bms mpo anova in the section of introduction spinal cord injury should be introduced in greater detail it is necessary to summarize the work of the paper in the section of conclusions

the research work falls under the category of nanotechnology please add nanocomposites to the keywords please divide the introduction part and make proper visibility for readers in materials and method sessions kindly include the naoh treatment process in conclusion please include the reason for obtaining the highest or lowest results the manuscript should be properly revised by an englishnative speaker

the work is interesting and adds knowledge to the topic but it needs a complete review much of the informations reported are already acquired knowledge they are redundant and confusing about the purpose of the work an accurate selection is recommandedan appropriate review of english is strongly suggested

this paper need to minor revisionsthis review does not fulfill prisma abstract and manuscript checklists major concerns on how this systematic and metaanalysis review was conducted are related to key sections such as unclear objectivesquestions unclear statement of inclusion and exclusion criteria and the absence of a comprehensive statement on how keywords were combined with boolean operators to write the sentences used to perform the search a great number of references are inaccurate or cited in figures but not in the reference listtitle pageconsider being more precise with the title when referring to periimplant inflammation it appears the authors were evaluating differences between periimplant health and periimplantitisabstract periimplant inflammation is common oral disease after dental restorative treatment which caused by various microbial species this statement is contradictory to

in this study the authors argued that among tdm nonsurgical inpatients vte risk can be reliably predicted using standard nomogram built on clinical and laboratory parameters in which the work is of interest but there are only some problems that need to be modifiedthe article has some problems of improper use of grammar can it be suggested to modify itin introduction this paper should accentuate his contributions in this research the introduction about related work should be reviewed more deeplypaper and in results of others in the past is not deep enough in addition the list of references is not in our style it appears close to not completely correct

for the production of government short videos this paper is divided into three dimensions sense of achievement sense of happiness and sense of security and for these three dimensions official douyin accounts with more than douyin fans were selected as the research objects it use the number of likes views reposts and comments as dependent variables to explore the factors that affect the effect of short video dissemination for the protection of short videos four protection measures are proposed for the influencing factors however there are still problems in the technical aspects of the article as followsa the author uses sustainable development better life government short video production and security as key words but this is not enough to summarize the full text please reviseb the author mentioned

the article researches the piano amplifier model and its aesthetics based on the optimization of wireless communication network and the related theory is introduced of mind further i think there are some problems in the following parts the article was about the design and solution of the resource scheduling problem of wireless communication network based on evolutionary algorithm but the content about evolutionary algorithm is not introduced the author why this is omitted or unnecessary content the author has summarized the preliminary work in the article but i think translation is too general so please optimize it after reading through the article i think the authors main focus is on the aesthetic study of piano audiovisuals and there is little research to teaching models the first part of

the modern management concept of lean s combined with visual management is applied in many fields however it is rare to see the application of it in nursing management it is an interesting attempt the research content of this study is novel authors need to write the manuscript according to the requirements of scientific report details could be found out from the author guidelines other weakpoints need to be revised arewhat does an things means in as a mode of onsite management of people an thingsthe content of the general information is more suitable in the introduction to explain why you carry out this studymanagement group is more suitable to replace of the leading group the description of group leader secretary of the party committee wu xiaoyan president

the effects of utilizing grouting materials on strength of semiflexible pavements were investigated in this manuscript the subject of the manuscript is novel and interesting to researcher in material and pavement field some questions and suggestions are provided below to enrich the scientific level of the presented manuscriptit is suggested to summarize the first sentences of the abstract and also add more quantitative results at the end of the abstract the introduction section numbered by there are various new research works regarding the utilizing various grouting materials in pavements that could be added to the introduction here are some suggestions to reviewzhang s he y zhang h chen j liu l effect of fine sand powder on the rheological properties of onepart alkaliactivated slag semiflexible pavement grouting materials

your manuscript has investigated the effect of art therapy on improving clinical outcome after drugeluting stent implantation in elderly tdm patients any realworld study is novel it is a find of interest to the researchers in the related areas but the paper indicated very significant improvement before acceptance for consideration my detailed comments are as followsthis everything is a realworld study the author shall say in the abstract that the realworld data were retrospectively studiedthe abstract should give an overview of the theme and main research contents of the study rather than merely listing the basic description of the results in the discussion entangled in trivial issues etcin method the author mentioned cox proportional risk model it is not a formal statistical description do you mean hazard modelthe

this paper reported a yearold male diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia ma normal chromosome intermediaterisk group and umbilical cord blood transplants was ineffective after antiviral therapy but successfully converted to cytomegalovirus nucleic acid testing negative after cytomegalovirusspecific t cells treatment from a thirdparty donor however there are many problems in this paper need to be modified the detail are as followsthe section of introduction should be provided in the manuscriptpay attention to the format of writing some punctuation were missingthe authors should pay attention to the fluency of sentences and english writing granulocyte deficiency is considered a side effect of gcv please cite the corresponding reference to this conclusion

in order to explore how english interpreting can achieve automatic scoring the author proposes an automatic scoring model for chinese interpreting based on semantic scoring this framework answers key technical problems and questions based on information represented by semantic scoring and perspectives the research on how interpreting can achieve automatic scoring of oral examinations my dissertation expresses the viewpoints clearly discusses comprehensively the language is plain and concise and is accessible to understand but lacks arguments please revise as requiredthe thesis statement is clear straight to the point and directly into the question but the methodology is not rigorous enough please revise if requiredwith the development of recent years the automatic grading methods for questions that specify the content to be answered by candidates such as reading questions

authors presented an interesting topic but it needs major changes prior to the publication proofread the entire paper some grammatical and type mistakes are present in the paper abstract needs to be reframed for better understanding quality of some of the figures is low ie figures have been stretched a lot authors should improvise the same schema representation in fig gives the cumulative count as whereas it should be check and redraw the same some symbols seem strange so please correct them additionally conclusion needs to be rewritten for better understanding and clarity future work is no where found in the manuscript the authors need to add the same

protective effect of quercetin on myocardial injury and high mobility group box in rats with sepsisin this study an animal model of sepsis was established to explore the mechanism of quercetins myocardial injury of sepsisinduced myocardial injury in rats and its effect on hmgb metabolism in rats the report showed that quercetin could prevent and treat sepsis by inhibiting the release of proinflammatory factors hmgb and tnf it can inhibit the accumulation and translocation of hmgb induced by lipopolysaccharide lps tnf tnf please add additional forms clinical measurement data and counting data the methods of comparison between groups etc on the statistical results and section in addition of the results section the author compared the serum tnf and hmgb levels of the two groups therefore in order to

the authors explore the effect of singleport thoracoscopic segmentectomy in the treatment of early stage nonsmall cell lung cancer in general i find the overall writing both grammar and content to be poor i would suggest a significant edit be made to correct these errors please revise the manuscript according to the following commentsabstract the background of the study needs to be briefly explainedthe abstract should be selfcontained citationfree and should not exceed wordsline year by year with the passage of time major threat i failed to understand this sentenceline delete at home and abroadline delete and most of them are retrospective studies lacking prospective longterm exploration this study is also retrospectivethere are some abbreviations such as hrct which should be given a full name when they appear

the structure of this paper is perfect and the research content is also innovative the proposed reconstruction algorithm can also solve the common problems in the current stadium remodeling at the same time based on the authors own design experience the author gives the quality assessment method of remodeling based on this method i can recommend it for publication after minor changes the definition of d reconstruction is not clear please revise it in the introduction what is the core problem of d modeling technology it seems that the author only introduces the applicability of this technology but neglects the elaboration of its key technologies and core problems in section the authors only mention the exhaustive search method and index matching method without introduction please add more content

during this study the authors argued that among tdm for inpatients vte risk can be reliably predicted using a nomogram built on field and laboratory evidence in general the work is of interest but there are still some fields that need to be modifiedthe article has all examples of improper use of grammar so it is suggested to modify itin introduction this paper should accentuate his contributions in this manuscriptalso the introduction about related work should be the more deeplypaper analyzes the results of others in the past though not deep enough in addition the list of references is not always our style it is close but not completely correct

in order to improve the ability of identifying the detail features of multiframe film and television special effects images a visual communication technology of multiframe film and television special effects images in the view of art form change based on deep learning is proposed the technology applied and the performance review of the proposed design is demonstrated in efficient way and authors have made efforts to justify with real time experimental analysis in the result and discussion section this article contains material which significant information in the current area of research i recommend it for publication but a few revisions are compulsorythe abstract should be revised as it does not enough chiefly introduce the area of research along with the research questionthe novelty and worth of this work

nowadays internet finance supported by multimedia data mining has attracted countless peoples attention multimedia is a collection of network structure user behavior and media information this paper takes the stock market rise and fall forecast as an example and discusses the suggestions and innovative mechanisms of financial services the topic of the full text is meaningful and it puts forward its own views which are reasonable clear in narrative level and strong in logic if the questions raised below are further modified this article can be considered for acceptance the abstract part needs to add a description of the use of this paper whether the title ma of in stock price evaluation indexes is incorrectly expressed in the literature and related concept summary the background of the introduction

the papers layout is missing from the opening section should make the beginning portion of the article more organizedit needs more effort before you can update the reagents argument to support itbe sure to doublecheck all section and subsection numbers and bold themthe referencing style contains so few errors by altering the references styles to parallel one another you might make them seem to be identicalwhy the reviewer choosing the application of network theory and pharmacological analyses give detailsthe literature has to be completely revised because several significant and recent studies have recently conducted in the topics covered in the manuscriptthe second sentence in the text section is unclear in my perspective the second sentence of the abstract section needs to be enhancedwhat is the aim of using

in this paper authors reported on the diagnostic value of traditional ultrasonography with ovarian malignant carcinoma the experimental results show that this method is effectively compensate for beam beam errors and improve the accuracy of the motion reproduction of a helicopter simulation cabin however there are still the following problemsplease mark the corresponding module description in figure please set the font in the figs to the times new romanformat problem note no indentation when explain this term variable of equationsfor page almost all symbols in mathematical formulas that appear in explicit text must be interpretedplease keep the reference section in uniform format

this study found that the cumulative incidence of hcc was lower in patients recovering fromhbvaclf than in patients hbvcld this is a welldesigned and written study of interest however in the era of antiviral therapy hepatitis b cirrhosis especially those who have not received antiviral therapy is a highrisk for patients with hepatitis b virus infection to develop hcc so the following issues need to be explainedmajortable showed the patients with cirrhosis in hbvcld cohort was accounted for cases case in hbvaclf cohort what is the diagnosis of liver cirrhosis and how to avoid missed diagnosis of liver cirrhosis at baseline in cohorts especially compensated cirrhosissupplementary fig in the era of antiviral therapy baseline hbvdna levels are not associated with disease prognosis on the contrary complete viral response

in this paper the authors use some places in red color text please inform the issuethe general data information is so brief please define completely the general data sectiondefine all abbreviations used in the paperplease summarize the intervention programs section in some pure and clear wordsthe first and last phrases of the conclusion section must be shortened because they are inadequately statedthe papers presentation is lacking please improve itthere are a few flaws in the abstract a few sentences you find modified and rewrittenthere are a few typos such as excessive capitalization filled blank spacesbecause past papers novelty was so rare please include some novelty in the first section and thoroughly detail the intended study

based on the ecommerce application cloud platform system this paper analyzes and mines the operating data of small and mediumsized clothing wholesale enterprises to carry out forwardlooking business analysis on data the system needs to provide intelligent information services such as business analysis but the article still has some problems the introduction of ecommerce enterprises and big data mining technology in the abstract part of the article is not comprehensive and the correlation between the two is not reflected enough it is necessary to add the correlation between the two to increase the relevance of the article in the use of big data big data is used to analyze the database hybrid architecture computing framework statistical computing and storage statistical analysis and statistical mining and sharing exchange bi

the abstract part is too long according to the requirements of this journal the number of words in the abstract do not exceed words the abbreviations that appear here the second time in the introductory and main text will provide the full name and the abbreviations should be used in the following text healthy subjects during the same period were selected as controls was the control group randomly enrolled is there no age and gender matching it will all affect the results of the experiment it is recommended that the specific statistical values in the results can be deleted so that it will look more thorough and concise the discussion in the abstract is too long please reduce from to to sentences to clarify the meaning of this

this research proposes a deep learningbased intense clustering approach for the network of public emergencies text similarity at the sentence level the characteristics of the public emergency networks sentencelevel similarity text are reconstructed using the decision tree model the phase space reconstruction method is used in the recursive graph model of sentencelevel similarity text of public emergencies network to sample the fuzzy feature information and the deep learning method is used to fuse and analyse the shard peaks in the data clustering process to achieve intensive clustering of sentencelevel similarity text of public emergencies networkthrough investigation it was shown that this approach for clustering network public opinion during public emergencies has superior convergence a lower error rate and a greater data clustering accuracythis paper falls within the scope

in the introduction section please include the general paper layoutuse the same citation formatensure that the references are all written in the same styleequation is fuzzy please explainit is necessary to give more details about the proposed method maybe a separate section without mathematicsthe conclusion section is very disappointing

this work presented a portable and bimodal rehabilitation but during finger rehabilitation it become obviously interesting for continued promotion and application can you tell me a few following questions what is the size of the d printing device the space in weight of the device how much does it cost to manufacture the equipment can it be further promoted and applied

thank you for inviting me to comment to this work entitled a theoretical solution of lattice expansion in overconsolidated clay by this paper a new theoretical solution for the expansion of overconsolidated clay is proposed thisisacarefullydonestudyandthefindingsareofconsiderableinterest this article has all many requirements of publicationthere are still several questions need modification which are listed belowwhere the individual references quoted in the references conform to the research themethe fitting of many date graphs in this paper should strengthen the discussion of physical meaningthe representation of some figures in the article is not clear such as figure in the introduction section the authors should consider it more clear about the innovation of the paper based on the analysis of the similar work

nasopharyngeal cancer is a type of head and neck cancer it starts in the nasopharynx the upper part of the throat behind the lips and near the base of skull cervical cancers is a common and serious disease in cancers but author chose a very important scientific problem to study this study innovatively used a prediction method for npc in radiotherapy based upon the beam channel gan model and addressed similar problems of different datasets of radiotherapy techniques findings was found by the authors that the prediction method for npc on radiotherapy based on the bcgan not only reduces the amount of data for the training set but also accelerates the generation of the model in general this is a very novel research work the author also used

this paper combines artificial intelligence and data fuzzy computing to carry out research on english teaching reform to improve the intelligence of english teaching and introduces the evaluation module of fuzzy inference system to establish the fis model of structure type evaluation completely and discusses the construction of fuzzy inference system and constructs its evaluation model in combination with the problem of structure selection the overall article is in good condition but some parts require proper working and it can lead to proper acceptance of paper authors have used proper english language but some parts are facing language and sentence structure errors the recommendation part is missing in the conclusion section about research overall the paper is well written but still require some revision therefore i suggest revising

this systematic review and metaanalysis demonstrate the clinical efficacy of ultrasoundguided acupotomy for trigger finger the discomfort and severity of trigger finger are reduced by ultrasoundguided acupotomy when compared to control treatment by the assessment of visual analogue scale vas score and quinneii grading however this article still has some deficiencies as follows please check the abbreviations in the abstract the first time you use an abbreviation in the text please present both the spelledout version and the short form the primary outcome is overall clinical effectiveness however the authors didnt mention how to determine or measure overall clinical effectiveness the quality of figure is low to thoroughly catch certain information please replace the images with high resolution only studies were included in this review the safety of

the key to the new retail marketing model is to achieve effective interaction of information to achieve innovative development of marketing based on big data technology to improve the overall level of service on the basis of accurate analysis of user needs and to meet the personalized consumption needs of users i have several suggestionswhat is digital technology is not systematically introduced in chapter and the impact of digitalization on the development of our retail industry needs to be analyzedthis aspect of new technologies for the digital economy is rather onesided and lacks detail there are many new industries and technologies emerging in the context of digitalization and specific cases need to be identified for more indepth discussion before the answers to the questions needed can be found

urinary problems in children in hospitals are difficult and complicated to solve after the publication of this article there may be some improvement in this aspect at the same time there are some minor problems but according to my suggestions the revision may be published smoothly in general the concepts and definitions of pediatric urological are described in separate paragraphs the approach is too straightforward some tricky details should be shown in this approach for example the reviewer suggests that the author should declare more about how to solve the optimization formulation according to the experiment result please summarize the advantage of this new method in detail which can be better understood by the readers image processing is used to solve the problem of whether to pay attention

this paper is to explore endovascular treatment of acute stroke caused by takayasu arterifis tahoweverin order to make the paper included betterthe following problems need to be revisedin the introduction section we only need a brief summary of the content of the full text this section doesnt need to be too long and the introduction of this article is too longwinded please reorganize the language or delete some content what is the specific content of the modified ishikawa criteria mentioned in this paperextensive figures are used in the results section but there is no detailed textual description of these figures a textual description of the relevant figures is necessary it is recommended to modify this sectiona case is selected in the article and it is explained and analyzed

this work titled research progress in clinical diagnosis of apparent human serum lipoproteinassociated phospholipase a reference interval based on microfluidic technology this work is a good application of deep learning to medicine it is innovative and their experimental results are still good the author discussed their work and thought it was a good work the abstract description is a bit simple the related work is not closely related it is recommended that the author proofreading multiple times to make the paper more readable

the authors conducted bidirectional twosample mr analyses to investigate causal associations between blood lipids and sle suggesting that causal effects of blood lipids on sle were unlikely on the other hand causal effects of sle on some blood lipids were possible although the effect sizes were not large i think that the manuscript was overall wellwritten and technically sound and i feel that some parts can be further improved before publication please use abbreviation properly the definitions of ukb or ukbb and gwas were duplicated in lines and moreover what does mpv mean in line the authors conducted phenoscanner searches to evaluate whether the snps were associated with confounders or risk factors for sle it would be informative to describe how many snps were excluded by the searches

how to effectively solve the lumbar spine patients is a key problem this paper discusses the different analysis indicators about the cases of adjuvant therapy effect which can be used in clinical treatment it is a very worthy of promotion first of all the annotation of the authors one is not clear enough please explain its location in the corner mark on the upper right corner of the authors name secondly the advantages of this drug and the innovation of this method are not identified in the article so they should be pointed out at the table please report the use of some words in keywords for example do not appear weak this structure should be replaced by nouns as far as possible attention should be paid to

the work is of excellent quality fascinating and should be published because it deserves to be please read the comments below for suggestions on how to improve the paper authors must address a few minor faults with the materials sentence structure content punctuation presentations word order formal phrases and abbreviations an indepth examination is required to discover answers to all of these problems doublecheck that all of the equations are properly centered they should make small changes to the introduction and conclusion parts examining related content literature review should offer more concrete instances of the essays objective further explanation of the preferred technique is necessary

the study is relevant to clinical practice due to the covid pandemic problem however there has been many such risk stratification studies in the literature the novelty of the study should be further highlighted the method section in abstract is too simple some key study methods are missing the sample size should be reported in the results rather than the methods index and higher mulbsta score were risk factors some statistics should be reported such as or underlying heart disease lymphocyte count glomerular filtration rate lactate lower oxygen and index sofa score and higher mulbsta score this is result not a conclusion after repeated or confounding factors were removedwhat is the repeated factor mean significant indicators were subjected to multivariate logistic regression analysis to determine independent severity and

the authors briefly review the biological role of ikbke related signaling pathways and its relationship with various tumorsikbke can activate the nfb signaling pathway in a variety of ways and can also recruit various scaffold molecules for interferon signal transductionthe authors also found that ikbke is expected to become a potential target for tumor molecular targeted therapy this is a useful study that should be published in this magazine after addressing the following pointsin page linehowever ikbke is a direct effector of egfr its inhibitor amelizanol can effectively inhibit the mutation of egfr the authors do not mention the specific mechanism i believe this structure should be acknowledged page line i believe ikbke should be write it out completely page liver cancer is one of the most common

please improve the english of the manuscript i found several errorsabstract should contain more information regarding the main contributions and achievementsthe problem significance and research questions should be given in the introduction sectionupdate the literature review section by adding more recent studies the proposed methodology should be discussed in more detail the pros and cons superiority nice experiments are done however the practical implications of the results need further explanation

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