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At the end of April 2007, 411 companies had already adopted the scheme. | #At the end of April 2007, 411 companies have already adopted the scheme. | #At the end of April 2007, 411 companies have already adopted the scheme. | #At the end of April 2007, 411 companies have already adopted the scheme. | 3 | 3 | 3 |
Therefore, one can hardly see how the policies do not help to ease the aging process. | #Therefore, one could hardly see how the policies do not help to ease the aging process. | #Therefore, one could hardly see how the policies do not help to ease the aging process. | The policies do not help to ease the aging process. | 5 | 5 | 34 |
With the sharp decline in birth rates that we are facing now, the majority of Singaporeans will be faced with a harder task- taking care of elderly family members. | #With the sharp decline in birth rates that we are facing now, the majority of Singaporeans will be faced with a harder task- in taking care of elderly family members. | #With the sharp decline in birth rates that we are facing now, the majority of Singaporeans will be faced with a harder task- in taking care of elderly family members. | #With the sharp decline in birth rates that we are facing now, the majority of Singaporeans will be faced with a harder task- in taking care of elderly family members. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
If not for the elderly members of Singapore who contributed in helping to mold Singapore into a highly developed country today, many would not be enjoying the fruits of the labor. | # If not for the elderly members of Singapore who contributed to helping to mold Singapore into a highly developed country today, many will not be enjoying the fruits of the labor. | # If not for the elderly members of Singapore who contributed in helping to mold Singapore into a highly developed country today, many will not be enjoying the fruits of the labor. | # If not for the elderly members of Singapore who contributed in helping to mold Singapore into a highly developed country today, many will not be enjoying the fruits of the labor. | 7 | 5 | 5 |
Aging is viewed as an inevitable phase of life that we are compelled to live through. | # Ageing is viewed as an inevitable phase of life that we are compelled to live. | # Ageing is viewed as an inevitable phase of life that we are compelled to live. | # Ageing is viewed as an inevitable phase of life that we are compelled to live. | 11 | 11 | 11 |
Despite the challenges surrounding an aging society, it is still depicted as the best part of our lives-' the golden years. ' | # Despite the challenges surrounding the aging society, it is still depicted as the best part of our lives-' the golden years '. | # Despite the challenges surrounding the aging society, it is still depicted as the best part of our lives-' the golden years '. | #Despite the challenges surrounding the aging society, it is still depicted as the best part of our lives-' the golden years '. | 7 | 7 | 6 |
As a solution, the government also invests a considerable amount of resources in health promotion and disease prevention. | # As a solution, the government also invests a considerable amount of resources in health promotion and disease prevention. | # As a solution, the government also invests a considerable amount of resources in health promotion and disease prevention. | #As a solution, the government also invests a considerable amount of resources in health promotion and disease prevention. | 2 | 2 | 1 |
It is regrettable that when we think of old age, what automatically comes to mind are visions of loneliness and neglect. | # It is regrettable that when we think of old age, what automatically comes to mind are visions of loneliness and neglect. | # It is regrettable that when we think of old age, what automatically comes to mind are visions of loneliness and neglect. | The regrettable thing is that when we think of old age, what automatically comes to mind are visions of loneliness and neglect. | 2 | 2 | 14 |
With this, elderly people who have difficulty walking can get help by holding on to the railing and at the same time exercising their leg muscles. | #With this, the elderly who have difficulty walking can get help by holding on to the railing and at the same time, they can exercise their leg muscles. | # With this, the elderly who have difficulty walking can get help by holding on to the railing and at the same time exercise their leg muscles. | #With this, the elderly who have difficulty walking can get help by holding on to the railing and at the same time exercise their leg muscles. | 25 | 16 | 15 |
Children may not find the need to visit as they assume that the elderly already have the proper care. | # Children may not find the need to visit as they assume that the elderly have already had proper care. | The children may not find the need to visit as they assume that the elderly have already had proper care. | # Children may not find the need to visit as they assume that the elderly have already had proper care. | 13 | 16 | 13 |
Earlier, those who had reached a ripe old age held an enviable place in society, but now they are only seen as senile, frail, and useless old people. | # Earlier, those who have reached a ripe old age held an enviable place in society, but now they are only seen as senile, frail, and useless old people. | The earlier those who have reached a ripe old age held an enviable place in society, but now they are only seen as senile, frail, and useless old people. | The earlier those who have reached a ripe old age held an enviable place in society, but now they are only seen as senile, frail, and useless old people. | 4 | 8 | 8 |
This will not only make them feel worthy, but the continued employment will also enhance their financial security. | # This will not only make them feel worthy, but it will also enhance their financial security. | The continued employment will not only make them feel worthy, but it will also enhance their financial security. | #This will not only make them feel worthy, but it will also enhance their financial security. | 24 | 43 | 23 |
Firstly, by having more funds, Singapore can build and develop new infrastructure. | #Firstly, by having more funds, Singapore can build and develop new infrastructures. | #Firstly, by having more funds, Singapore can build and develop new infrastructures. | #Firstly, by having more funds, Singapore can build and develop new infrastructures. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
Public transportation systems, including the light rail system, mass rapid transit system, as well as the current new railway network, Circle line, are well advanced to make the public access to any location in Singapore. | # Public transportation systems, including the light rail system, mass rapid transit system, as well as the current new railway network, Circle line, are well advanced to make the public accessible to any location in Singapore. | The public transportation systems, including the light rail system, mass rapid transit system, as well as the current new railway network, Circle line, are well advanced to make the public accessible to any location in Singapore. | # Public transportation systems, including the light rail system, mass rapid transit system, as well as the current new railway network, Circle line, are well advanced to make the public accessible to any location in Singapore. | 6 | 9 | 6 |
As these people need to be hired, and they can contribute to society and sustain the economy. | #Thus, these people need to be hired, and they can contribute to society and sustain the economy. | #Thus, these people need to be hired, and they can contribute to society and sustain the economy. | #Thus, these people need to be hired and they can contribute to society and sustain the economy. | 5 | 5 | 6 |
When people have an improved standard of living, they will be able to contribute to and sustain the economy. | # When people have an improved standard of living, they will be able to contribute and sustain the economy. | # When people have an improved standard of living, they will be able to contribute and sustain the economy. | # When people have an improved standard of living, they will be able to contribute and sustain the economy. | 5 | 5 | 5 |
With the rising cost of basic necessities and medical costs due to inflation in the future, those with no or low income will suffer as these factors will result in the elderly not having enough savings or income to overcome the current economic climate. | #With the rising cost of basic necessities and medical costs due to inflation in the future, those with no or low income aged group will suffer as these factors will cause the elderly not having enough savings or income to overcome the current economic climate. | # With the rising cost of basic necessities and medical costs due to inflation in the future, those with no or low income aged group will suffer as these factors will cause the elderly not having enough savings or income to overcome the current economic climate. | #With the rising cost of basic necessities and medical costs due to inflation in the future, those with no or low income aged group will suffer as these factors will cause the elderly not having enough savings or income to overcome the current economic climate. | 20 | 21 | 20 |
Another point is that the elderly, in their younger age, may have contributed to society and the economy. | #Another point is that the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy. | #Another point is that the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy. | #Another point is that the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy. | 3 | 3 | 3 |
However, since the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy, we should spend a certain amount of money on their needs if they have problems dealing with money issues. | #However, since the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy, we should spend a certain amount of money for their needs if they have problems dealing with money issues. | #However, since the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy, we should spend a certain amount of money for their needs if they have problems dealing with money issues. | #However, since the elderly in their younger age may have contributed to society and the economy, we should spend a certain amount of money for their needs if they have problems dealing with money issues. | 3 | 3 | 3 |
Hence, it can be clearly seen that with limitations to public spending on the aged, the money diverted to other areas can help in boosting the economic condition of the country. | #Hence, it can be clearly seen that with limitations to public spending on the aged, the money diverse to other areas can help in boosting the economy condition of the country. | #Hence, it can be clearly seen that with limitations to public spending on the aged, the money diverse to other areas can help in boosting the economy condition of the country. | #Hence, it can be clearly seen that with limitations to public spending on the aged, the money diverse to other areas can help in boosting the economy condition of the country. | 5 | 5 | 5 |
People may make use of charity opportunities to obtain money from the public and use it for their own personal benefit | # People may make use of charity opportunities to obtain money from the public and use for their own personal benefits. | The people may make use of charity opportunities to obtain money from the public and use for their own personal benefits. | # People may make use of charity opportunities to obtain money from the public and use for their own personal benefit. | 7 | 10 | 6 |
It was reported that he was supposed to loan an amount to Mandala Buddhist Cultural Centre, but it ended up with his former personal aide. | # It was reported that the ex-director was supposed to loan an amount to Mandala Buddhist Cultural Centre, but it ended up with his former personal aide. | # It was reported that the ex-director was supposed to loan an amount to Mandala Buddhist Cultural Centre, but it ended up with his former personal aide. | The report was reported that the ex-director was supposed to loan an amount to Mandala Buddhist Cultural Centre, but it ended up with his former personal aide. | 15 | 15 | 22 |
This incident led to the distrust of the public towards charity organizations. | #This incident led to the distrust of the public towards charity organizations. | The incident led to the distrust of the public towards charity organizations. | #This incident led to the distrust of the public towards charity organizations. | 1 | 2 | 1 |
As the aged are able to take care of themselves, public spending can be limited so that it can be invested in other areas for enhanced development. | # For this reason, the aged population is able to take care of themselves, public spending can be limited so that it can be invested in other areas for enhanced development. | # For this reason, the aged population is able to take care of themselves, public spending can be limited so that it can be invested in other areas for enhanced development. | # For this reason, the aged population is able to take care of themselves, public spending can be limited so that it can be invested in other areas for enhanced development. | 29 | 29 | 29 |
Apparently, some people will try to abuse the public spending policy. | #Apparently, some aged will try to abuse public spending policy. | #Apparently, some aged will try to abuse the public spending policy. | #Apparently, some aged people will try to abuse public spending policy. | 11 | 7 | 10 |
The aged population will also be encouraged to take care of themselves instead of over-relying on public spending. | #Aged population will also be encouraged to take care of themselves instead of over-relying on public spending. | The aged population will also be encouraged to take care of themselves instead of over-relying on public spending. | #Aged population will also be encouraged to take care of themselves instead of over-relying on public spending. | 5 | 0 | 5 |
This essay will give some reasons that support this idea. | # This essay will give some reasons that support the idea. | The essay will give some reasons that support the idea. | The essay will give some reasons that support the idea. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
To begin with, it cannot be denied that the youth are the most important part of the citizens in every country, not the elderly. | # To begin with, it cannot be denied that the youth is the most important part of the citizens in every country, not the elderly. | # To begin with, it cannot be denied that the youth is the most important part of the citizens in every country, not the elderly. | # To begin with, it cannot be denied that the youth is the most important part of the citizens in every country, not the elderly. | 5 | 5 | 5 |
The young people are the workers who can contribute directly to the country. | # Young people are the workers who can develop directly to the country. | The young people are the workers who can develop directly to the country. | # Young people are the workers who can develop directly to the country. | 14 | 10 | 14 |
The Internet today is the most powerful tool that can bring a lot of information, and the youth can use it easily. | # Internet today is the most powerful tool that can bring a lot of information and the youth can use it easily. | The Internet today is the most powerful tool that can bring a lot of information and the youth can use it easily. | # Internet today is the most powerful tool that can bring a lot of information and the youth can use it easily. | 4 | 1 | 4 |
All in all, there are many reasons which support the idea that spending on the aged should be limited. | #All in all, there are many reasons which support the idea that the spending fee on the aged should be limited. | #All in all, there are many reasons which support the idea that the spending fee on the aged should be limited. | #All in all, there are many reasons which support the idea that the spending fee on the aged should be limited. | 9 | 9 | 9 |
Aging, a biological process that every single normal human in this world must experience every day, has become quite a serious problem for some countries in recent decades. | #Aging, a biological process which every single normal human in this world must experience every day, has become a quite serious problem for some countries in recent decades. | #Aging, a biological process which every single normal human in this world must experience every day, has become a quite serious problem for some countries in the recent decades. | #Aging, a biological process which every single normal human in this world must experience every day, has become a quite serious problem for some countries in recent decades. | 9 | 13 | 9 |
This, however, has been taken too seriously by some countries. | #This, however, has been taken too seriously by some countries. | The over, however, has been taken too seriously by some countries. | #This, however, has been taken too seriously by some countries. | 1 | 6 | 1 |
Although this problem is quite serious, over-emphasizing and spending too much on this problem is not a good idea. | #Although this problem is quite serious, over-emphasizing and spending too much on this problem is not a good idea. | #Although this problem is quite serious, over-emphasizing and spending too much on this problem is not a good idea. | #Although this problem is quite serious, over-emphasizing and spending too much in this problem is not a good idea. | 1 | 1 | 2 |
There exist many other aspects of a country that needs more funding, and, in some cases, spending more on these other aspects can actually help a country's aging population problem. | # There exist many other aspects of a country that need more funding and, in some cases, spending more in these other aspects can actually help a country's aging population problem. | The existence of many other aspects of a country that needs more funding and, in some cases, spending more in these other aspects can actually help a country's aging population problem. | #There exist many other aspects of a country that need more funding, and in some cases, spending more in these other aspects can actually help a country's aging population problem. | 5 | 11 | 4 |
Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development of a country. | #Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development aspect in a country. | #Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development aspect in a country. | # Another aspect that can help in easing the problem is the industrial development aspect in a country. | 10 | 10 | 11 |
The aging population problem can practically stop the turning wheels of the economy as the ones who turn the wheel are the industrial and commercial sectors of a country, which needs youths as its workforce. | #The aging population problem can practically stop the turning wheels of the economy as the ones who turn the wheel are the industrial and commercial sectors of a country, which needs youths as a workforce. | The aging population problem can practically stop the turning wheels of the economy as the ones who turn the wheel are the industrial and commercial sector of a country, which needs youths as a workforce. | The aging population problem can practically stop the turning wheels of the economy as the ones who turn the wheel are the industrial and commercial sectors of a country, which needs youths as workforce. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
With the industrial sector well-developed, Japan can still maintain its economy from falling despite its average population age of 42 and proved that funding the industrial development sector can really help in easing the aging problem by reducing its impact. | With the industrial sector well-developed, Japan can still maintain its economy from falling despite its average population age of 42 and proved that funding the industrial development sector can really help in easing the aging problem by reducing the impact. | With the industrial sector well-developed, Japan can still maintain its economy from falling despite its average population age of 42 and proved that funding the industrial development sector can really help in easing the aging problem by reducing the impact. | With the industrial sector well-developed, Japan can still maintain its economy from falling despite its average population age of 42 and proved that funding the industrial development sector can really help in easing the aging problem by reducing the impact. | 3 | 3 | 3 |
Taking care of the aging population and spending some for them is indeed the government's obligation and responsibility, but one can already see that there are some alternative and better ways to solve and take care of this population problem, just as shown above. | #Taking care of the old age population and spending some for them is indeed the government's obligation and responsibility, but one can already see that there are some alternative and better ways to solve and to take care of this population problem just as shown above. | #Taking care of the old age population and spending some for them is indeed the government's obligation and responsibility, but one can already see that there are some alternative and better ways to solve and to take care of this population problem just as shown above. | The government's obligation and responsibility is to take care of the old age population and spending some for them is indeed the government's obligation and responsibility, but one can already see that there are some alternative and better ways to solve and to take care of this population problem just as shown above. | 11 | 11 | 63 |
Spending too much on the aging population will not benefit the country at all, as spending too much will only waste the funds and will not bring any development or solution for the problem. | #spending too much on the old age population will not benefit the country at all as spending too much will only waste the funds and will not bring any development or solution for the problem. | The spending too much on the old age population will not benefit the country at all as spending too much will only waste the funds and will not bring any development or solution for the problem. | #spending too much on the old age population will not benefit the country at all as spending too much will only waste the funds and will not bring any development or solution for the problem. | 9 | 12 | 9 |
These examples, with the fact that spending on the aged population will not bring any benefit, have proven that it is better to limit and reallocate the spending for old age. | # These examples with the fact that spending for the old age population will not bring any benefit have proven that it is better to limit and reallocate spending for the old age. | The examples with the fact that spending for the elderly population will not bring any benefit have proven that it is better to limit and reallocate spending for the elderly. | # These examples with the fact that spending for the old age population will not bring any benefit have proven that it is better to limit and reallocate spending for the old age. | 19 | 25 | 19 |
On the other hand, spending on old age should not be too little either, as spending too little will cause the population to be upset and therefore decrease the government stability. | # On the other hand, spending on the old age should not be too little, either as spending too little will cause the population to be upset and therefore decrease the government stability. | # On the other hand, spending on the old age should not be too little either, as spending too little will cause the population to be upset and therefore decrease the government stability. | #On the other hand, spending on the old age should not be too little, either as spending too little will cause the population to be upset and therefore decrease the government stability. | 8 | 6 | 7 |
The better alternative, however, is spending more on the other aspects rather than spending on the aging population. | #The better, however, is spending more on the other aspects rather than spending on the old population. | The better, however, is spending more on the other aspects rather than spending on the old population. | #1, however, is spending more on the other aspects rather than spending on the old population. | 18 | 17 | 27 |
If one can solve the aging problem and develop the country at the same time by spending more on other sectors in the country, as mentioned above, why would one choose not to spend more on the aged population? | # If one can solve the aging problem and develop the country at the same time by spending more on other sectors in the country, why would one choose not to and spend more on the aged population? | # If one can solve the aging problem and develop the country at the same time by spending more on other sectors in the country, why would one choose not to and spend more on the aged population? | # If one can solve the aging problem and develop the country at the same time by spending more on other sectors in the country, why would one choose not to and spend more on the aged population? | 26 | 26 | 26 |
Now that humans can age at a slower speed with the help of technology, people no longer wake up to the horror that the reflection in the mirror looks so old that it does not correspond with the memory. | # Now that humans can age at a slower speed with the help of technology, people no longer wake up to the horror that the reflection in the mirror looks so old that it does not correspond with the memory. | # Now that humans can age at a slower speed with the help of technology, people no longer wake up to the horror that the reflection in the mirror looks so old that it does not correspond with the memory. | #Now that humans can age at a slower speed with the help of technology, people no longer wake up to the horror that the reflection in the mirror looks so old that it does not correspond with the memory. | 2 | 2 | 1 |
It is most likely that technology will continue to play an essential role in almost all our lives. | # It is most likely that technology will continue to play an essential role in almost all men's lives. | # It is most likely that technology will continue to play an essential role in almost all men's lives. | # It is most likely that technology will continue to play an essential role in almost all men's lives. | 7 | 7 | 7 |
To a great extent, medical and technological developments help tackle such changes hence helping ease the process of aging. | #To a great extent, medical and technological developments help tackle such changes, hence help ease the process of aging. | #To a great extent, medical and technological developments help tackle such changes, hence help ease the process of aging. | # To a great extent, medical and technological developments help tackle such changes, hence help ease the process of aging. | 5 | 5 | 6 |
There are various non-profitable organizations all over the world seeking cures for common illnesses among the elderly an example will be Parkinson's Disease. There is the Parkinson's Institute and Clinical Center in America. | # There are various non-profitable organizations all over the world seeking cure for common illnesses among the elderly, an example would be the Parkinson's Institute and Clinical Center in America. | The various non-profitable organizations all over the world seeking cure for common illnesses among the elderly an example will be the Parkinson's Institute and the Clinical Center in America. | #There are various non-profitable organizations all over the world seeking cure for common illnesses among the elderly, an example would be the Parkinson's Institute and Clinical Center in America. | 37 | 41 | 36 |
Lastly, the sociological change that the elderly experienced was the desire to be closer to their family members. | #Lastly, the sociological change that the elderly experienced is the desire to be closer to their family members. | The sociological change that the elderly experienced is the desire to be closer to their family members. | #Lastly, the sociological change that the elderly experienced is the desire to be closer to their family members. | 3 | 11 | 3 |
Working children can also use web cameras to keep a lookout for their elderly parents at home, and should any mishaps happen, they can go to their aid immediately. | # Working children can also use a web camera to keep a lookout for their elderly parents at home and should any mishaps happen, they can go to their aid immediately. | The working children can also use a web camera to keep a lookout for their elderly parents at home and should any mishaps happen, they can go to their aid immediately. | # Working children can also use a web camera to keep a lookout for their elderly parents at home and should any mishaps happen, they can go to their aid immediately. | 6 | 9 | 6 |
However, the critics of this argument feel that the current technology does not help to ease the aging process, instead, it infringes on the privacy of the elderly. | #However, critics of this argument feel that the current technology does not help to ease the aging process, but instead, it infringes on the privacy of the elderly. | #However, the critics of this argument feel that the current technology does not help to ease the aging process, but instead, it infringes on the privacy of the elderly. | #However, the critics of this argument feel that the current technology does not help to ease the aging process, but it infringes on the privacy of the elderly. | 9 | 5 | 8 |
It is true that technological inventions tend to infringe on the privacy of the elderly, but they still help to ease the aging process as the monitoring of the elderly through various electronic ways is done for a good cause. | # It is true that technological inventions tend to infringe on the privacy of the elderly, but it still helps to ease the aging process as the monitoring of elderly through various electronic ways is done at a good cause. | # It is true that technological inventions tend to infringe on the privacy of the elderly, but it still helps to ease the aging process as the monitoring of elderly through various electronic ways is done at a good cause. | # It is true that technological inventions tend to infringe on the privacy of the elderly, but it still helps to ease the aging process as the monitoring of the elderly through various electronic means is done at a good cause. | 14 | 14 | 13 |
The elderly can wear this comfortable Hip Protector for the whole day in comfort. | # Elderly can wear this comfortable Hip Protector for the whole day in comfort. | The elderly can wear this comfortable Hip Protector for the whole day in comfort. | # Elderly can wear this comfortable Hip Protector for the whole day in comfort. | 4 | 0 | 4 |
The elderly could use the joystick to select their desired food on the food tray. | # Elderly would use the joystick to select their desired food on the food tray. | The elderly would use the joystick to select their desired food on the food tray. | # Elderly would use the joystick to select their desired food on the food tray. | 5 | 1 | 5 |
With such technologies at hand, the elderly will be confident to live alone, knowing that their safety is well taken care of. | #With such technologies at hand, the elderly will be confident to live alone knowing that their safety is well taken care of. | #With such technologies at hand, the elderly will be confident to live alone knowing that their safety is well taken care of. | This technology at hand, the elderly will be confident to live alone knowing that their safety is well taken care of. | 2 | 2 | 11 |
In contemporary society, the elderly are well taken care of in many countries. | # In contemporary society, the elderly are well taken care of in many countries. | #In the contemporary society, the elderly are well taken care of in many countries. | #In contemporary society, the elderly are well taken care of in many countries. | 2 | 5 | 1 |
As for healthcare services, it is not reasonable that the elderly can have free or low-priced treatment for all kinds of sickness. | #As for healthcare services, it is not reasonable that the elderly can have free or low-priced treatment for all kinds of sickness. | The healthcare service is not reasonable that the elderly can have free or low-priced treatment for all kinds of sickness. | # As for healthcare services, it is not reasonable that the elderly can have free or low-priced treatment for all kinds of sickness. | 1 | 11 | 2 |
As a result, they can support themselves more effectively not only when they are young but also during their old age | #As a result, they can support themselves more effectively not only when they are young but also during their old ages. | The result is that they can support themselves more effectively not only when they are young but also during their old ages. | # As a result, they can support themselves more effectively not only when they are young, but also during their old ages. | 3 | 14 | 5 |
This economic growth is important because it allows the country to have the power to improve its citizens' quality of life. | # This economic growth is important because it allows the country to have the power to improve its citizens' quality of life. | The economic growth is important because it allows the country to have the power to improve its citizens' quality of life. | The economic growth is important because it allows the country to have the power to improve its citizens' quality of life. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
Through education, working adults are able to deal with highly complicated equipment that enables them to bring revenue back to the country. | #Through education, working adults are able to deal with highly complicated equipment that enables them to bring revenue back to the country. | #Through education, working adults are able to deal with highly complicated equipments that enable them to bring revenue back to the country. | #Through education, working adults are able to deal with highly complicated equipment that enables them to bring revenue back to the country. | 1 | 3 | 1 |
The elderly who wish to continue working are able to do so by attending upgrading courses to facilitate them in finding jobs. | # Elderly who wish to continue working are able to do so by attending upgrading courses to facilitate them in finding jobs. | The elderly who wish to continue working are able to do so by attending upgrading courses to facilitate them in finding jobs. | # Elderly who wish to continue working are able to do so by attending upgrading courses to facilitate them in finding jobs. | 4 | 0 | 4 |
Following this, an appropriate amount of help is given equally to them so as to fully utilize the limited resources. | # Following which, appropriate amounts of help are given equally to them so as to fully utilize the limited resources. | The following, appropriate amount of help is given equally to them, so as to fully utilize the limited resources. | # Following which, appropriate amount of help is given equally to them so as to fully utilize the limited resources. | 12 | 14 | 8 |
However, some people might think that if they suffer from those prolonged diseases, it can quickly drain their MediSave balance. | #However, some people might think that if they suffer from those prolonged diseases, it can quickly drain their MediSave balance. | #However, some people might think that if they suffer from those prolonged diseases, it can quickly drain their MediSave balance. | #However, some people might think that if they suffer from prolonged diseases, it can quickly drain their MediSave balance. | 1 | 1 | 7 |
However, some children might think that living with their parents is a nuisance because they need a lot of care and attention. | The children might think that living with their parents is very nuisance because they need a lot of care and attention. | #However, some children might think that living with their parents is a very nuisance because they need a lot of care and attention. | #However, some children might think that living with their parents is very nuisance because they need a lot of care and attention. | 16 | 6 | 5 |
Firstly, as a country usually allocates its budget to various areas, any increase in spending on a particular area will mean reduced spending on other areas. | #Firstly, as a country usually allocates its budget to various areas, any increase in spending on a particular area will mean less spending on other areas. | #Firstly, as a country usually allocates its budget to various areas, any increase in spending on a particular area will mean less spending on other areas. | The first thing that a country usually does is allocates its budget to various areas, any increase in spending on a particular area will mean less spending on other areas. | 7 | 7 | 28 |
Thus, a country's budget cannot be adjusted without much consideration and thought, or it can cause instabilities to the supporting pillars of the country. | #Thus, a country's budget cannot be adjusted without much consideration and thought or else it can cause instabilities to the supporting pillars of a country. | #Thus, a country's budget cannot be adjusted without much consideration and thought or else it can cause instabilities to the supporting pillars of a country. | #Thus, a country's budget cannot be adjusted without much consideration and thought, or else it can cause instabilities in the supporting pillars of a country. | 10 | 10 | 11 |
For example, the CPF scheme in Singapore states that the account holder must have a certain amount of money, which was saved up automatically since the start of his working years before he can withdraw the entire amount at the maturity age. | For example, the CPF scheme in Singapore states that the account holder must have a certain amount of money, which was saved up automatically since the start of his working years before he can withdraw the entire amount during the maturity age. | For example, the CPF scheme in Singapore states that the account holder must have a certain amount of money, which was saved up automatically since the start of his working years before he can withdraw the entire amount during the maturity age. | For example, the CPF scheme in Singapore states that the account holder must have a certain amount of money, which was saved up automatically since the start of his working years before he can withdraw the entire amount during the maturity age. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
Having the children support their own parents will mean less dependency on the government. | #Having children support their own parents will mean less dependency on the government. | The having children support their own parents will mean less dependency on the government. | # Having children support their own parents will mean less dependency on the government. | 5 | 9 | 6 |
One of the primary reasons why the government should not set limits on public spending on older people is the aim to create a higher quality of life for almost everyone. | # One of the primary reasons why the government should not set limits on public spending on older people is the aim to create a higher quality of life for almost everyone. | # One of the primary reasons why the government should not set limits on public spending on older people is the aim to create a higher quality of life for almost everyone. | # One of the primary reasons why the government should not set limits on public spending on older people is the aim to create a higher quality of life for almost everyone. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
The government should not consider the rising expenditure related to programs to support a growing elderly population without mentioning their contribution in the past. | #Government should not consider the rising expenditure related to programs to support a growing elderly population without mentioning their contribution in the past. | The government should not consider the rising expenditure related to programs to support a growing elderly population without mentioning their contribution in the past. | #Government should not consider the rising expenditure related to programs to support a growing elderly population without mentioning their contribution in the past. | 5 | 0 | 5 |
When taking into account all the above factors, I can safely conclude that public spending on the aged should not be limited even though the amount of money can be used to invest in some areas like education, infrastructure, and development projects. | #When taking into account all the above factors, I can safely conclude that public spending on the aged should not be limited even though the amount of money can be used to invest in some areas like education, infrastructure, and development projects. | #When taking into account all the above factors, I can safely conclude that public spending on the aged should not be limited even though the amount of money can be used to invest in some areas like education, infrastructure, and development projects. | #When taking into account all the above factors, I can safely conclude that public spending on the aged should not be limited even though the amount of money can be used to invest in some areas like education, infrastructure, and development projects. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Through current research and development, some of those problems have been eased significantly, providing a better aging experience. | #Through current research and development, some of those problems have been eased significantly, providing a better aging experience. | #Through current research and development, some of those problems have been eased significantly, providing a better aging experience. | The current research and development have been eased significantly, providing a better aging experience. | 1 | 1 | 29 |
In this essay, we will discuss how current research and development has helped to ease some of the issues raised by immobility, health conditions, and resource management that the aged face. | # In this essay, we will discuss how current research and development have helped to ease some of the issues raised by immobility, health conditions, and resource management that the aged face. | # In this essay, we will discuss how current research and development have helped to ease some of the issues raised by immobility, health conditions, and resource management that the aged face. | The essay will discuss how current research and development have helped to ease some of the issues raised by immobility, health conditions, and resource management that the aged face. | 4 | 4 | 12 |
Alerts can then be sent to family members who are not at home if the user is not within a designated area or has experienced a falling motion. | # Alerts can then be sent to family members who are not at home if the user is not within a designated area or has experienced a falling motion. | # Alerts can then be sent to family members who are not at home if the user is not within a designated area or has experienced a falling motion. | #Alerts can then be sent to family members who are not at home if the user is not within a designated area or has experienced a falling motion. | 2 | 2 | 1 |
A growing number of families have faced a common problem in elderly care, and that is resource management. | #A growing number of families have faced a common problem in elderly care, and that is resource management. | #A growing number of families have faced a common problem in elderly care, and that is resource management. | #A growing number of families have faced a common problem in elderly care, and that is resource management. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Research and development in Information Technology allowed resource management to be simplified. | # Research and development in Information Technology has allowed resource management to be simplified. | # Research and development in Information Technology has allowed resource management to be simplified. | The research and development in Information Technology has allowed resource management to be simplified. | 6 | 6 | 9 |
If research and development ceased to exist, it would be much harder to take care of the elderly as the world's aging population is expected to increase from now till 2050. | # If research and development were ceased to exist, it would be much tougher to take care of the elderly as the world's aging population is expected to increase from now till 2050. | # If research and development were ceased to exist, it would be much tougher to take care of the elderly as the world's aging population is expected to increase from now till 2050. | # If research and development were ceased to exist, it would be much harder to take care of the elderly as the world's aging population is expected to increase from now till 2050. | 12 | 12 | 7 |
This measure will help to ease the burden of the younger generation, allow the healthy elderly to still contribute to society, and at the same time help to generate more wealth for the elderly, which they can use for themselves. | # This measure will help to ease the burden of the younger generation, allowing the healthy elders to still contribute to society and at the same time, help to generate more wealth for the elderly, which they can use for themselves. | The measure will help to ease the burden of the younger generation, allow the healthy elders to still contribute to society, and at the same time, help to generate more wealth for the elderly, which they can use for themselves. | # This measure will help to ease the burden of the younger generation, allowing the healthy elders to still contribute to society and at the same time, help to generate more wealth for the elderly, which they can use for themselves. | 9 | 5 | 9 |
Although some are prejudiced towards older workers due to their work efficiency and high salary cost, there are more benefits to employing them. | #Although some are prejudiced towards older workers due to their work efficiency and high salary cost, there are more benefits of employing them. | #Although some are prejudiced towards older workers due to their work efficiency and high salary cost, there are more benefits of employing them. | #Although some are prejudiced towards older workers due to their work efficiency and high salary cost, there are more benefits to employing them. | 3 | 3 | 1 |
It is the duty of the younger generations to display more filial piety towards their aged parents as they are the ones who took care of us during our growing up days. | # It is the duty of the younger generations to display more filial piety towards their aged parents as they are the ones who took care of us during our growing up days. | # It is the duty of the younger generations to display more filial piety towards their aged parents as they are the ones who took care of us during our growing up days. | # It is the duty of the younger generations to display more filial piety towards their aged parents as they are the ones who took care of us during our growing up days. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
A society in which the children will take care of their parents will help to ease the government spending on aging and divert the spending on other areas of the country. | #A society that the children will take care of their parents will help to ease the government spending on the aging and divert the spending on other areas of the country. | The society that the children will take care of their parents will help to ease the government spending on the aging and divert the spending on other areas of the country. | #A society that the children will take care of their parents will help to ease the government spending on the aging and divert the spending on other areas of the country. | 12 | 14 | 12 |
In Asian culture and belief, it is the responsibility of the children to take care of their parents when they are financially stable. | # In Asian culture and belief, it is the responsibility of the children to take care of their parents when they are financially stable. | The Asian's culture and belief is that it is the responsibility of the children to take care of their parents when they are financially stable. | # In the Asian's culture and belief, it is the responsibility of the children to take care of their parents when they are financially stable. | 2 | 13 | 8 |
In Asian countries such as Japan and South Korea, most of the elderly still live with their adult children and can even help to cook, do housework and take care of the grandchildren. | # Asia countries such as Japan and South Korea, most of the elderly still live with their adult children, and can even help to cook, do housework, and take care of the grandchildren. | # Asia countries such as Japan and South Korea, most of the elderly still live with their adult children, and can even help to cook, do housework, and take care of the grandchildren. | In Asia, most of the elderly still live with their adult children, and can even help to cook, do housework, and take care of the grandchildren. | 5 | 5 | 43 |
Living with their elderly parents will not just limit their social life but also causes their freedom to be taken away. | #Living with their elderly parents will not just limit their social life but also cause their freedom to be taken away. | The living with their elderly parents will not only limit their social life but also cause their freedom to be taken away. | The living with their elder parents will not only limit their social life but also cause their freedom to be taken away. | 2 | 10 | 12 |
This way, specialized and better care can be provided for the elderly. | # This way, specialize and better care can be provided for the elderly. | The way this way, specialize and better care can be provided for the elderly. | # This way, specialized and better care can be provided for the elderly. | 3 | 9 | 2 |
Increasing the awareness of filial obligation will result in more adult children living with and taking care of their elderly parents. | #Increasing the awareness of filial obligation will result in more adult children living and taking care of their elderly parents. | #Increasing the awareness of filial obligation will result in more adult children living and taking care of their elderly parents. | #Increasing the awareness of filial obligation will result in more adult children living and taking care of their elderly parents. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
The society, it can support old people by building charity. | # For society, it can support the old people by building charity. | # For society, it can support the old people by building charity. | #For society, it can support the old people by building charity. | 9 | 9 | 8 |
Thus the government should decide on what is essential and should therefore be supported by the public sector and what should be left to individuals. | #Thus, the government should decide on what is essential and should therefore be supported by the public sector, and what should be left to individuals. | The government should decide on what is essential and should therefore be supported by the public sector, and what should be left to individuals. | #Thus, the government should decide on what is essential and should therefore be supported by the public sector, and what should be left to individuals. | 3 | 6 | 3 |
Every country has its own features. | # Every country has its own features. | # Every country has its own features. | # Every country has its own features. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
On the other hand, critics of this notion have argued that with reduced government spending, less educated old folks and those who did not save enough would be at a severe disadvantage as compared to the rest of the population. | # On the other hand, critics of this notion have argued that with reduced government spending, less educated old folks and those who did not save enough would be at a severe disadvantage as compared to the rest of the population. | # On the other hand, critics of this notion have argued that with reduced government spending, less educated old folks and those who did not save enough would be at a severe disadvantage as compared to the rest of the population. | # On the other hand, critics of this notion have argued that with reduced government spending, less educated old folks and those who did not save enough would be at a severe disadvantage as compared to the rest of the population. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
In the end, the main idea is that with more funds from economic growth, governments can do so much more to help these elderly people. | #In the end, the main idea is that with more funds from economic growth, governments can do so much more to help these elderly folks. | #In the end, the main idea is that with more funds from economic growth, governments can do so much more to help these elderly folks. | #In the end, the main idea is that with more funds from economic growth, governments can do so much more to help these elderly folks. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
In the end, it is still very taxing on the working population, who now not only have to support themselves and their children but also their parents as well. | #In the end, it is still very taxing on the working population, who now not only have to support themselves and their children but also their parents as well. | #In the end, it is still very taxing on the working population, who now not only have to support themselves and their children but also their parents as well. | #In the end, it is still very taxing on the working population, who now not only have to support themselves and their children but also their parents as well. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Hence, governments should encourage their normal working population to bear responsibility for taking care of their elderly parents through social awareness campaigns. | #Hence, governments should encourage their normal working population to take responsibility for taking care of their elderly parents through social awareness campaigns. | #Hence, governments should encourage their normal working population to take responsibility for taking care of their elderly parents through social awareness campaigns. | #Hence, governments should encourage their normal working population to take responsibility for taking care of their elderly parents through social awareness campaigns. | 5 | 5 | 5 |
Instead of priming the spending on the aged as one of the key focuses of our annual budgeting regularly, I strongly feel that the Singapore government should redefine its focus and divert its focus to other key areas such as military, urban development, and education spending. | Instead of priming the spending on the aged as one of the key focus on our annual budget regularly, I strongly feel that the Singapore government should remedy its focus and divert its focus to other key areas such as military, urban development, and education spending. | Instead of priming the spending on the aged as one of the key focus on our annual budget regularly, I strongly feel that the Singapore government should remedy its focus and divert its focus to other key areas such as military, urban development, and education spending. | Instead of priming the spending on the aged as one of the key focus of our annual budget regularly, I strongly feel that the Singapore government should rectify its focus and divert its focus to other key areas such as military, urban development, and education spending. | 11 | 11 | 10 |
The adequate spending on the military aspect not only conveys a strong deterrence message to our potential aggressors but will also instill confidence in our business partners. | #The adequate spending on the military aspect does not only convey a strong deterrence message to our potential aggressors, but it will also instill confidence in our business partners. | The adequate spending on the military aspect does not only convey a strong deterrence message to our potential aggressors, but it will also instill confidence in our business partners. | # adequate spending on the military aspect does not only convey a strong deterrence message to our potential aggressors but it will also instill confidence in our business partners. | 11 | 10 | 12 |
In addition, many more foreign investors may be attracted to this safe haven with the aim of expanding their dynamic business empire. | # In addition, plenty more foreign investors may be attracted to this safe haven with the aim of expanding their dynamic business empire. | # In addition, plenty more foreign investors may be attracted to this safe haven with the aim of expanding their dynamic business empire. | # In addition, plenty more foreign investors may be attracted to this safe haven with the aim of expanding their dynamic business empire. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
Urban development in the sense of creating a better living environment for our fellow country mates. | # Urban development in the sense of creating a better living environment for our fellow country mates! | # Urban development in the sense of creating a better living environment for our fellow country mates! | # Urban development in the sense of creating a better living environment for our fellow country mates! | 3 | 3 | 3 |
Basically, the essence of that is to conceptualize a Singapore in which we can work, live and have fun. | #Basically, the essence of that is to conceptualize Singapore in which we can work, live, and have fun! | #Basically, the essence of that is to conceptualize Singapore in which we can work, live, and have fun! | #Basically, the essence of that is to conceptualize Singapore in which we can work, live, and have fun at! | 5 | 5 | 8 |
Also, Spending on education should be put on the top of the government's priorities list. | # Also, spending on education should be put on the top of the government's priorities list! | # Also, spending on education should be put on the top of the government's priorities list! | # Also, spending on education should be put on the top of the government's priorities list! | 4 | 4 | 4 |
Now, we can see in a better light how diverse spending can aid our country. | # Now, we can see in a better light how diverse spending can aid our country. | # Now, we can see in a better light how diverse spending can aid our country. | # Now, we can see in a better light how diverse spending can aid our country. | 2 | 2 | 2 |