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If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find the best solution for different problems. | # If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find the best solution for the problems. | # If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find the best solution for the problems. | # If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find the best solution for the problems. | 10 | 10 | 10 |
As a result, the field of engineering design is slow in progress, and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved. | #As a result, the engineering design would be slow progress, and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved. | #As a result, the engineering design would be in slow progress, and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved. | #As a result, the engineering design would be in slow progress, and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved. | 21 | 23 | 23 |
Out of 10 dollars made, this factory only has 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9. | # Of dollars made, this factory only has 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9. | The out of 10 dollars made, this factory only has 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9. | #10 dollars made, this factory only has 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9. | 7 | 5 | 7 |
The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to a Japanese company. | # The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to that Japanese company. | The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to that Japanese company. | # The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to that Japanese company. | 5 | 3 | 5 |
Therefore, very little money is devoted to the design process for innovation, and these companies only reproduce this low-end production circle. | #Therefore, very little money is devoted to the design process for innovation, and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle. | #Therefore, very little money is devoted to the design process for innovation, and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle. | The very little money is devoted to the design process for innovation, and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle. | 7 | 7 | 13 |
In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad state of intellectual property protection also hampers the innovational engineering process. | # In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad situation of intellectual property protection also hampers the engineering innovation process. | # In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad situation of intellectual property protection also hampers the engineering innovation process. | # In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad situation of intellectual property protection also hampers the engineering innovation process. | 26 | 26 | 26 |
Therefore, innovation is discouraged because of the lack of protection for intellectual property in society. | #Therefore, innovation is discouraged by the lack of protection for intellectual property in society. | #Therefore, innovation is discouraged by the lack of protection for intellectual property in society. | The result is that innovation is discouraged by the lack of protection for intellectual property in society. | 10 | 10 | 22 |
To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad state of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper the engineering design process in China. | #To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad situation of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper the engineering design process in China. | #To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad situation of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper the engineering design process in China. | #To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad situation of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper the engineering design process in China. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
Nowadays, it is common to see a person carry a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago. | #Nowadays, it is common to see a person carrying a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago. | #Nowadays, it is common to see a person carrying a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago. | #Nowadays, it is common to see a person carrying a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
Until now, a laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily life. | # Till now, the laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily lives. | # Till now, the laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily lives. | # Till now, the laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily lives. | 9 | 9 | 9 |
One of the reasons for its success was that laptops greatly catered to people's needs. | # One of the reasons for its success was that the laptop catered to people's needs greatly. | The one of the reasons for its success was that the laptop catered to people's needs greatly. | # One of the reasons for its success was that the laptop catered to people's needs greatly. | 22 | 25 | 22 |
From the examples above, we can conclude that, generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors. | # From the examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors. | The examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors. | The examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors. | 18 | 22 | 22 |
This is undoubtedly true because inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated the development of new technologies. | #This is undoubtedly true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated the development of new technologies. | #This is undoubtedly true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated the development of new technologies. | The fact is, this is undoubtedly true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated development of new technologies. | 6 | 6 | 22 |
In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems, have emerged, such as environmental pollution, bionics, exploration of outer space, and so on. | In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems, have emerged, such as environment pollution, bionics, exploration of outer-space, and so on. | In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems, have emerged, such as environment pollution, bionics, exploration of outer-space, and so on. | In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems, have emerged, such as environment pollution, the exploration of outer-space, and so on. | 3 | 3 | 11 |
Among all of these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be the ones that deal with the effect of global warming. | # Among all of these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be those that cope with the effect of global warming. | # Among all of these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be those that cope with the effect of global warming. | # Among all of these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be the ones that cope with the effect of global warming. | 10 | 10 | 6 |
It is stated that a significant part of carbon dioxide emission is due to the burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases. | # It is stated that a significant amount of carbon dioxide emission is due to the burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases. | # It is stated that a significant amount of carbon dioxide emission is due to the burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases. | # It is stated that a significant percentage of carbon dioxide emission is due to the burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases. | 7 | 7 | 9 |
In conclusion, replacing traditional cars with solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of these cars. | # In conclusion, replacing traditional cars by solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars. | The conclusion is that replacing traditional cars by solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars. | The conclusion is that replacing traditional cars by solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars. | 11 | 20 | 20 |
However, results have proven otherwise. | #However, results have proven otherwise. | #However, results have proven otherwise. | #However, results have proven otherwise. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Health issues caused by air pollution affect not only the individual but also the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work. | # Health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work. | The health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work. | #Health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work. | 19 | 22 | 18 |
In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we need to improve the current battery technology and come up with better control devices. | # In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we got to improve the current battery technology and come up with better control devices. | # In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we got to improve the current battery technology and come up with better control devices. | # In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we got to improve the current battery technology and come up with better control devices. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has improved a lot, there still remain several factors that significantly hamper the innovation process. | # For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has been improved a lot, there still remain several factors which hamper the innovation process significantly. | # For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has been improved a lot, there still remain several factors which hamper the innovation process significantly. | #For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has been improved a lot, there still remain several factors which hamper the innovation process significantly. | 36 | 36 | 35 |
Based on this observation, this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages. | #Based on this idea, this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages. | #Based on this idea, this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages. | The two factors that will be discussed in this essay will be based on this idea, and this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages. | 10 | 10 | 66 |
Firstly, the directors and managers of state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests. | # First, the directors and managers of state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests. | # First, the directors and managers of state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests. | # First, the directors and managers of state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
Thus, the money which goes into operation is largely reduced. | #Thus, the money which goes into operation is largely reduced. | #Thus, the money which goes into operation is largely reduced. | #Thus, the money which goes into operation is reduced largely. | 1 | 1 | 15 |
As a consequence, most managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility. | #As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility. | #As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility. | # As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility. | 8 | 8 | 9 |
Even if employees discover some good ideas by chance, they may not want to put some effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production. | #Even if employees encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production. | The even if employees encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production. | The even if employees encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production. | 19 | 23 | 23 |
They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankruptcy. | # They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankruptcy. | # They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankruptcy. | # They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankrupt. | 2 | 2 | 4 |
Poor equipment in private companies may lead to much uncertainty in the design stage. | # The poor equipment in private companies may lead to a large uncertainty in the design stage. | The poor equipment in private companies may lead to a large uncertainty in the design stage. | #The poor equipment in private companies may lead to large uncertainty in the design stage. | 14 | 12 | 11 |
By contrast, the discovery of vaccines involved a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to the development. | # By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to development. | # By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to development. | # By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to development. | 30 | 30 | 30 |
Low technological standard is one of the significant factors which hamper engineering design processes. | #The low technological standard is one of the significant factors which hamper the engineering design process. | The low technological standard is one of the significant factors which hamper the engineering design process. | #The low technological standard is one of the significant factors that hamper the engineering design process. | 12 | 11 | 16 |
For those who manage to enter the design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited | # For those who manage to enter the design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited. | # For those who manage to enter the design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited. | #For those who manage to enter the design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited. | 3 | 3 | 2 |
Another problem hampering engineering design processes is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China. | #Another problem hampering the engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China. | #Another problem hampering the engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China. | #Another problem hampering the engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China. | 7 | 7 | 7 |
The government believes that this will improve the engineering design processes for innovation in the near future. | #The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future. | The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future. | #The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future. | 3 | 2 | 3 |
Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovation. | # Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovations. | # Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovations. | #Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovations. | 3 | 3 | 2 |
Besides, it also costs a large amount of money to dispense with spent fuel and radioactive waste. | #Besides, it also costs a large amount of money to deal with spent fuel and radioactive waste. | #Besides, it also costs a large amount of money to deal with spent fuel and radioactive waste. | #Besides, it also costs a large amount of money to deal with spent fuel and radioactive waste. | 7 | 7 | 7 |
In a sentence, when dealing with the energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance. | # In a sentence, when dealing with the energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance. | # In a sentence, when dealing with the energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance. | # In a sentence, when dealing with the energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
Therefore, only a carefully and wisely done engineering design can meet the needs of reducing energy consumption while being environmentally friendly at the same time. | #1) Only a carefully and wisely done engineering design can finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and being environmentally friendly at the same time. | The only carefully and wisely done engineering design can finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and being environmentally friendly at the same time. | The only carefully and wisely done engineering design can finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and being environmentally friendly at the same time. | 24 | 22 | 22 |
Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent. | #Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent. | #Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent. | #Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
The users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play important roles in improving the bar code. | # Users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play important roles in improving the bar code. | The users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play an important role in improving the bar code. | #Users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play important roles in improving the bar code. | 4 | 4 | 5 |
First and foremost, the bar code emerged and developed as the times required. | # First and foremost, the bar code emerged and developed as the times required. | # First and foremost, the bar code emerged and developed as the times required. | # First and foremost, the bar code emerged and developed as the times required. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
However, the first application area of the bar code was not the supermarket or grocery but railroads. | #However, the first application area of the bar code was not the supermarket or grocery but railroads. | #However, the first application area of the bar code was not the supermarket or grocery but railroads. | #However, the first application area of the bar code was not the supermarket or grocery but railroads. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
On the other hand, retailers then were just in need of a system like a bar code. | # On the other hand, retailers were just in need of a system like a bar code. | # On the other hand, retailers were just in need of a system like a bar code. | # On the other hand, retailers were just in need of a system like a bar code. | 7 | 7 | 7 |
Today, the demands of users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and the post industry. | #Today, the demands of users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and the post industry. | The demands of users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and the post industry. | #Today, the demands of users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and the post industry. | 1 | 7 | 1 |
Another factor that affects the bar code's development is economic concerns. | #Another factor that affects the development of the bar code's is the economic concerns. | #Another factor that affects the bar code's development is the economic concerns. | #Another factor that affects the development of the bar code's is the economic concerns. | 29 | 5 | 29 |
Besides, users have to buy devices that read bar codes as well. | #Besides, users have to buy devices that read bar codes as well. | #Besides, users have to buy devices that read the bar code as well. | #Besides, users have to buy devices that read bar code as well. | 1 | 6 | 2 |
Due to this reason, the bar code was not broadly implemented as soon as it was invented. | # Due to this reason, the bar code was not broadly implemented as soon as it was invented. | # Due to this reason, the bar code was not broadly implemented as soon as it was invented. | # Due to this reason, the bar code was not broadly implemented as soon as it was invented. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
In addition to demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code. | # In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code. | # In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code. | # In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
It promotes the bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly readable system. | # It promotes the bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly readable system. | The promotion of the bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly readable system. | # It promotes the bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly readable system. | 2 | 9 | 2 |
Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to be an easily used technology. | #Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to an easily implemented technology. | The various kinds of users shape it to an easily implemented technology. | #Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to an easily implemented technology. | 13 | 36 | 13 |
To sum up, the bar code is an important technology. | # To sum up, the bar code is an important technology. | # To sum up, the bar code is an important technology. | # To sum up, the bar code is an important technology. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
The shortage of natural resources means that all raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovations would have to come from imports. | # The shortage of natural resources means that all raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovations would have to come from import. | The shortage of natural resources means that all the raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovations would have to come from import. | The shortage of natural resources means that all raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovations would have to come from import. | 3 | 5 | 1 |
This by itself poses problems such as greater costs incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in the design process. | # This by itself poses problems such as greater cost incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in the engineering design process. | The by itself poses problems such as greater cost incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in the engineering design process. | # This by itself poses problems such as greater cost incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in the engineering design process. | 15 | 15 | 15 |
Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in large quantities. | #Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in large quantities. | #Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in large quantities. | #Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in large quantities. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
Water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by the Singapore government. | # Water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by the Singapore government. | The water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by the Singapore government. | # Water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by the Singapore government. | 2 | 5 | 2 |
Hence when the idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore. | #Hence, when the idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore. | #Hence, when the idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore. | #Hence, when the idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase its market share of Toshiba. | #Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase the market share of Toshiba. | #Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase the market share of Toshiba. | #Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase the market share of Toshiba. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
If there had been no changes in the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market. | # If there had been no changes in the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market. | # If there had been no changes in the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market. | # If there have been no changes in the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market. | 2 | 2 | 4 |
At that time, the offices were cramped, and there was no space available for workers to place their desktops. | #At that time, the offices were cramped, and there were no space available for workers to place their desktop. | #At that time, the offices were cramped, and there were no space available for workers to place their desktop. | #At that time, the offices were cramped, and there was no space available for workers to place their desktop. | 5 | 5 | 2 |
This convenience efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area. | #This convenience increases efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area. | #This convenience increases efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area. | #This convenience increases efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area. | 11 | 11 | 11 |
But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a serendipitous result of normal research, which always had some interesting stories behind them. | But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of serendipitous results, which always had some interesting stories behind them. | But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of serendipitous results, which always had some interesting stories behind them. | But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of serendipitous results, which always had some interesting stories behind them. | 28 | 28 | 28 |
Although these two types of discoveries could both influence society, there are two interesting differences between them in the process. | #Although these two types of discoveries could both influence society, there are two interesting differences between them in the design process. | #Although these two types of discoveries could both influence society, there are two interesting differences between them in the design process. | #Although these two types of discoveries could both influence society, there are two interesting differences between them in the design process. | 8 | 8 | 8 |
In contrast, there is always no specific need for serendipitous discovery, and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purposes, and serendipitous discovery is usually due to the unexpected results of normal research. | # In contrast, there is always no specific need for serendipitous discovery and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purposes, and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected results of normal research. | # In contrast, there is always no specific need for the serendipitous discovery and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purposes, and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected results of normal research. | # In contrast, there is always no specific need for serendipitous discovery and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purposes, and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected results of normal research. | 11 | 15 | 11 |
But fortunately, we had very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them. | #But fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them. | #But fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them. | The latter, fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them. | 4 | 4 | 13 |
Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them. | #Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them. | #Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them. | #Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
A majority of these limitations would increase the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design. | #A majority of these limitations would increase the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design. | #A majority of these limitations would increase the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design. | #A majority of these limitations would increase the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design. | 1 | 1 | 1 |
One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space which would affect the structural design of the innovation, particularly if it was on a large scale. | # One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space, which would affect the structural design of the innovation, particularly if it was on a large scale. | # One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space, which would affect the structural design of the innovation, particularly if it was on a large scale. | # One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space, which would affect the structural design of the innovation, especially if it was on a large scale. | 3 | 3 | 11 |
This increase in cost will hence affect the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process. | # This increase in cost will hence hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process. | The increase in cost will hence hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process. | #This increase in cost will hence hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process. | 8 | 8 | 7 |
In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements for the piling process, and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete, should be used in piling. | In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements on the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete should be used in piling. | In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements on the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete should be used in piling. | In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements on the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete should be used in piling. | 4 | 4 | 4 |
Contrary to its limited land area, as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people. | #Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people. | #Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people. | #Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people. | 7 | 7 | 7 |
All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this stage. | #All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this portion. | #All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this portion. | #All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this portion. | 7 | 7 | 8 |
Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities to the success of the application. | # Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities leads to the success of the application. | # Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities leads to the success of the application. | # Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities leads to the success of the application. | 8 | 8 | 8 |
The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton is quite an interesting story. | #The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton was quite an interesting story. | The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton was quite an interesting story. | #The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton was quite an interesting story. | 3 | 2 | 3 |
After he had finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him after she saw what he had done. | # After he finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him after she saw what he had done. | # After he finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him after she saw what he had done. | # After he finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him after she saw what he had done. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and left ashes. | #When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and ashes left. | #When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and ashes left. | #When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and ashes left. | 11 | 11 | 11 |
But without the prudential attitude towards science, he may have missed his good luck and did not go on finding how this phenomenon can occur. | #But without the prudential attitude towards science, he may miss his good luck and did not go on finding how this phenomenon occurs. | #But without the prudential attitude towards science, he may miss his good luck and did not go on finding how this phenomenon occurs. | #But without the prudential attitude towards science, he may miss his good luck and did not go on finding how this phenomenon occurs. | 13 | 13 | 13 |
As both of them are explosives, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments. | #As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings, and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments. | #As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings, and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments. | # As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings, and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments. | 3 | 3 | 4 |
As unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities. | # As it was unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities. | # As it was unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities. | #As it was unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities. | 9 | 9 | 8 |
In the current stage, the political environment and people's mindsets are two of the problems that may hamper the engineering design process for innovation. | #In the current stage, the political environment and people's mindset are two of the problems that may hamper the engineering design process for innovation. | #In the current stage, the political environment and people's mindset are two of the problems that may hamper the engineering design process for innovation. | #In the current stage, the political environment and people's mindset are two of the problems that may hamper the engineering design process for innovation. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
While it can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different. | # Both can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different. | # Both can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different. | # Both can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different. | 8 | 8 | 8 |
The next stage of research was to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target. | #The next stage research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target. | The next stage research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target. | The next stage research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target. | 6 | 5 | 5 |
In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turned out to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidentally created a totally different product instead. | # In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turns to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidently created a totally different product instead. | # In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turns to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidently created a totally different product instead. | # In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turns to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor, but accidently created a totally different product instead. | 10 | 10 | 11 |
One was low adhesive but re-adherable, so it is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely. | # One is low adhesive, but re-adhesive so is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely. | The one is low adhesive, but re-adhesive so is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely. | # One is low adhesive, but re-adhesive so is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely. | 13 | 16 | 13 |
The other one was high adhesive and functioned quickly, so it can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength. | #The other one is high adhesive, and functions quickly so can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength. | #The other one is high adhesive, and functions quickly so can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength. | #The other one is high adhesive, and functions quickly so can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength. | 10 | 10 | 10 |
So it is not surprising that the two products both become very popular among consumers as soon as they come out. | #So it is no more surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they come out. | #So it is no more surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they come out. | #So it is no more surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they are out. | 10 | 10 | 13 |
The technical factor is one of the four elements that have determined the development of the electric vehicle. | # Technical factors are one of the four elements that determine the development of electric vehicles. | The technical factor is one of the four elements that determine the development of an electric vehicle. | # Technical factors are one of the four elements that determine the development of an electric vehicle. | 19 | 9 | 17 |
Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, the electric vehicle has a similar structure but different components. | # Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, an electric vehicle has a similar structure, but different components. | # Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, an electric vehicle has a similar structure, but different components. | # Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, an electric vehicle has a similar structure, but different components. | 6 | 6 | 6 |
In addition, the electric vehicle is safe to drive as it uses solely electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable. | #In addition, electric vehicles are safe to drive around as they are solely using electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable. | #In addition, electric vehicles are safe to drive around as they are solely using electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable. | #In addition, electric vehicles are safe to drive around as they solely use electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable. | 29 | 29 | 23 |
On the other hand, the electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy from batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free, and quiet. | # On the other hand, an electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy by using batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free, and quiet. | # On the other hand, an electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy by using batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free, and quiet. | # On the other hand, an electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy by using batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free, and quiet. | 13 | 13 | 13 |
In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in the market. | #In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in the market. | # In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in the market. | The end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in the market. | 1 | 2 | 4 |
They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars | # They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars, too. | # They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars, too. | # They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars, too. | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions have come into being, and many new words have come with them as well. | #Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words come with them as well. | #Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words come with them as well. | #Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words are created as well. | 11 | 11 | 18 |
It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact, shares some common points with conventional research. | # It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact shares some common points with conventional research. | # It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact shares some common points with conventional research. | # It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact shares some common points with conventional research. | 3 | 3 | 3 |
Although there are similarities, they differ from each other in several respects. | #Although there are similarities existing, they differ from each other in several respects. | #Although there are similarities existing, they differ from each other in several respects. | The similarities are existing, but they differ from each other in several respects. | 10 | 10 | 28 |
However, both of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world! | #However, both of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world! | #However, both of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world! | The two of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world! | 1 | 1 | 11 |
In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors. | # In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors. | # In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors. | # In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors. | 2 | 2 | 2 |
Military priority during World War II was an important factor in propelling the design and use of the engine. | # Military priority during World War II was an important factor in the design and use of the jet engine. | The military priority during World War II was an important factor in the design and use of the jet engine. | # Military priority during World War II was an important factor in the design and use of the jet engine. | 17 | 20 | 17 |
As we can see, if there was no threat of war, the British Government may not have provided any funding at all. | #As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding at all. | #As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding at all. | #As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding at all. | 9 | 9 | 9 |
The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of the jet engine. | # The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of the jet engine. | The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of the jet engine. | #The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of the jet engine. | 2 | 0 | 1 |
Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has enjoyed a booming development in economy and technology. | #Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has enjoyed a booming development in economics and technology. | The reform and open policy was established in 1978, and China has enjoyed a booming development in economics and technology. | #Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has enjoyed a booming development in economics and technology. | 4 | 14 | 4 |
As a result, a lot of factories are built to provide the whole world with cheap and quality products. | #As a result, a lot of factories have been built to provide the whole world with cheap and qualified products. | #As a result, a lot of factories have been built to provide the whole world with cheap and qualified products. | #As a result, a lot of factories have been built to provide the whole world with cheap and qualified products. | 12 | 12 | 12 |