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Genetic risk does carry its consequences and should not be taken lightly within the family circle . Afterall , what affects one family may or may not affect another although the families has a common genetic make up , shared by either of the parents . In cases where an individual has gotten to know of a genetic disorder , disclosing or otherwise , to his or her relative is solely a matter of preference within the indivdial moral system .
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Sometimes some family structure and cultural beliefs can influence the pattern of communication . Depending on whom the genetic risk was discovered from : the son or daughter for example , the parents who knows about this would decide who gets told and whom takes the precedence in being ' allowed ' to tell . For example , within a family , regardless of who had first received genetic information , parents were seen as having the primary responsibility to pass on information to any offspring , either adult at risk . In addition , a woman testing positive for BRCA1 would be expected to allow her brother or sister to disclose such information to a niece or nephew rather than do it herself , although this may be further complicated by an individual 's response to risk information as they not want to know . Hence , there were also tensions if participants felt that they could neither pass on information to relatives who needed to know ( such as nieces and nephews ) nor persuade those with authority ( the parents ) to do so .
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The notion of authority also extended ' vertically ' . For example , a grandmother may have more authority to pass on information than an aunt , even when she is not at genetic risk herself while the aunt is . From a practitioner 's perspective these findings are important because if lay constructs of the family and kinship are a social construct they may not be in line with geneticists ' views of family relationships , or about which blood ( or non - blood ) relatives should be informed and by whom ; this is also likely to be dependent on the cultural and ethnic context .
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Focus on the negative side of the annouance of genetic risk first . Large numbers of patients with the genetic risk would want to keep it as a secret as the genetic risk may indicates their high chance to carry certain disease . Especially for the young people without marrige , if he / she is known to have some genetic risk , it may have certain chance that his / her child would carry the same disease , but not in certain . Therefore , to keep the information as secret to his / her future spouce would help the relationship . Secondly , annouance the potential risk would cause the family member to be scared of this certain issue , although the factor would not be that serious , people would still fear that they would have some potential disease in the future thus go to hospital and do additional check or take more medicine in order to prevent the disease , and this creats unnecessary costs to the family . Furthermore , the annouance of genetic risk would affect the relationship with the relatives as sometimes others may think not to stay too close to the carrier so that they have less chance to get the potential disease .
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We ca n't make a law to push a carrier of a known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives about his genetic problem . It is immoral and impractical . Firstly , someone having what kinds of disease belongs to his or her privacy . Privicy protection belongs to one 's human rights . If a law requires someone to tell others ' his or her privacy especially when the one is not willing to do so . It is againt his or her human rights and it is against the law 's spirit . The law 's spirit also include the fairness . What is the basic difference between genetic disorder and other disorders . It is unfair to release a law only point to the genetic disorder . In addition , it is impractical to make such a law . A good law should be clear and easy to execute . However , there are many problems againt the execution of asking a carrier to tell his or her ralatives the cause of his or her diseases . Firstly , what is the range of the relatives ? For example , does the carrier only need to tell his or her direct relatives like parents and brothers and sisters or does he also need to tell relatives like his grandmother 's sister 's son 's daughter 's nephew ? If you say only need to tell direct relatives , it will be against the fairness of law . Other relatives may have the same possibilities to have such kind of disease . How can a law made by government exempt such a group of people from preparing to face their potetial disease ?
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However , from the ethical point of view . To the carrier himself of herself , he of she should have a feeling of resposiblity to tell his or her relatives their genetic disorder . By doing this , they may be able to save some lives of their relatives . It is because a carrier with bad gene may not necessary have those genetic disease , if they can have coresponding healthy lifestyle before the age that the gene 's function become stronger . A typical example is genetic caused hypertension . Hypertension can be caused by genetic problems which make the carrier harder to digest the fat and salt in blood which can cause hypertension . People usually get this kind of hypertesion after they become adult . However , if they already know they have a gene that may make them have higher possibilities to get hypertention . They can build a daily habit to eat less salt and fat and thus to avoid hypertension .
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As it is a genetic risk , the patient next - of - skin might have a high chance of carrying the risk , hence the need to inform their relatives is important so that necessary prevention actions could be taken before unforeseen circumstances might occur . For example , if you are the only child in a family and unfortunately , you are suffering from a genetic disease that the genetic trait might be passed on to your next generation if you have a child , hence by letting your family members aware of the situation , it would lessen family stresses and suffering on forcing you to settle down and have children . However , social ethic issues like discrimination and privacy are biggest concerns and potential barriers to enforce patients or doctors to disclose information to patients relatives . It challenges the confidentiality and privacy principles . Currently , under the Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act of 1996(HIPAA ) in the United States , there is no legal obligation requirement to disclose information to relatives , it is up to the patient 's wish to disclose to their family members . Early disclosement to family members brings in positive reaction and prevention , as in the case of Angelina Jolie , she chose to disclose information and underwent treatment to reduce the risk of breast cancer significantly to under five percent . I still can recall her reason for disclosing her own story was that she does not want to live under the shadow of cancer .
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Furthermore , you are also being responsible for your next generations by telling the truth that you are a carrier of a genetic risk . If your wife is not aware of the truth and give birth to the baby , it will be possible for your child to carry the same genetic risk as well . Being the parent , you are not responsible to you next generations , since you allow the genetic risk to be passed on by generation and generation and being aware of it . However , if you tell the truth to your wife and relatives , you offer a chance about whether to have child or not . And if you still decide to have the baby , since the technology has been developed so advanced , it might be possible in the future that the application of altering gene is perfected and widely used , you can then choose to give birth to babies by giving them a brighter future . This is the responsibility of being a parent . And in my opinion , this seems to be the main purpose of undergoing that genetic testing at the first place .
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Personally I feel that we still should take our responsibility to tell them the situation . Since this will really affect their lives , what we should do is to try to make it in a positive way . We can not let it go . We should know that although we may affect their lives , we can still let them make correct choices in the future . It is only after we tell them will they start paying attention to their health . They will consider whether to give a birth to a new baby because of this genetic problem and they will start finding ways to try to avoid their baby to carry this genetic risk as well . They always have a choice about whether to undergo the genetic test or not . Maybe after we tell them , they will go for it and know more about themselves . I know it will have a huge impact on them , but we should know that they are our loved ones , we need to tell them and help them .
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Firstly , the information concerning to the genetic is something personally which is also a privacy like people 's bank card key . Other people should not be told without the person 's permission even though they are his or her family or relatives . The government should set the law to protect this kind of privacy . Once people 's genetic information is told to other people . They may know the person 's potential disabled disease or other bad things naturally . They may set a bias on this person even abandon his or her . People do not have the ability to choose their gene , they should not be thought badly because of bad gene . So I think whatever the genetic is or whether the gene is match with their parents , it should not be told to anyone even his or her family or relatives .
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People may feel angry , depressed , or even guilty about their results . In some cases , a carrier can suffer tension within a family because the result is also related to the others ' risk somehow . However , I believe it is just a usual reaction to this situation . In addition , though it can be possible in some cases that he or she and the family can undergo specific discrimination in employment and their social life , how people can face more dramatic tragedy such as sickness or death if they can not even overcome this harsh situation . Life is hard but people can not blame it on being unfair . It is just because that you do not become strong enough to overcome the hard time .
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Secondly , although social network takes time for people to chat online but not face to face , they may still decide a time online to meet others face to face in the daily life . In this case , the social network helps people to increase the frequency of talk . For example , if social network does not exist , the business people need to meet each other face to face and it is other time consuming , even sometimes with business that is not so important , it still takes a lot time on travel which is a wastage . However , social network helps people to meet and chat much more easier , they can even use video chat and create group chat to chat with multiple parties at the same time . Nowadays , even some companies conduct online video interview with their applicants as it saves time and cost .
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The social network may also creat some negative impacts for the people . The largest negative impact is that due to the online network , some people start to use and rely on internet every minute . They take too much time of using online social network and thus do not have time to have their daily meeting with people in their real life . It not only affect the interpersonal skills but also bad for people 's health if the ones spend to much time on the social media . Secondly , social network may leak certain personal informations to the public , as the cyber environment is not perfect and not safe , people may not protect their privacy online effectively and sometimes , some people may use others personal information to deceive .
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First , with the function of social media sites that connects the people , everyone is able to interact and communicate with friends and families , or even strangers without any time and place constraints . Through the social media sites , we can chat with our friends who stay in Europe and New Zealand . There are over thousand miles between Singapore and these two countries . However , we are able to chat with our friends without travel to the countries . It saves a lot of money and time as well as strengthen our relationship although we stay at different places around the world .
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Twitter , Facebook and Skype are some social media sites which enable us to keep in touch with our friends or family who are in other cities or countries . Through those sites we are able to talk to them , to know what their activities are and who their friends are , etc . From the surface point of view it is no doubt that these sites help us to have a better relationship with our relatives despite of the distance . The sharing of information can be done faster through social media as well , that is why nowadays many news publishers make their own social media account , for example Channel News Asia has a twitter account and will update its follower with headline news . That shows how actually news and information can be shared easily through social media . Furthermore , since many teenagers and young adults are fans of social media , these information can reach them easily without them need to watch or listen to the news reports . Due to the popularity of social media , many people start to do their business via these sites . More and more advertisements can be found on Facebook , whether it is our friends who sell their products or professional brands selling their products online , we can get to buy and contact the sellers through those sites , which can be considered as an advantage for us , the buyers .
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Social media has reshaped the way of communication . In real life , we communicate with one another as equal participants . We share ideas , stories and forge friendship based on mutual respect . However , communication on social media is largely based on " broadcasting and listening " . When we use facebook and post pictures and statuses . We are actively " presenting " façades of our lifes in front of others . We tend to post pictures with the best looks , status that are funny . We broadcast these facades of us to others . The images we choose to present are tentatively considered . The audience is not some specific person , but everyone we might know , or even the entire world . There is an element of seeking out for attention rather than expressing one 's true opinion on social networks . On the other hand , the viewers , are not the listeners . They are just scrolling down pages of pages of pictures and statuses and see one of them which they might think it funny . It is not the broadcasters themselves they care about , but the content . This type of communication does not help forging interpersonal relationships . In real life , establishing friendship requires the all - rounded understanding in one another and the caring for one another . The latter requires face to face interaction where we can show our emotions to the other . One can not truly understand a person with only stalking his / her facebook page where he / she carefully chooses what to present . One can not truly show their emotions by another by texting some =) signs .
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The broadcasting and viewing model is not good for forging relationships . However , it is good for sharing information . On social media , everyone is a broadcaster and a viewer . With my social network account , I seldom read newspapers or go to news websites anymore ; because I can easily read them from the status of my friends . If I am interested in politics , I can just follow some politics newspapers or public figures . I get news for sales , clothes and cosmetics from my friends . If some of my friends have horrible taste on clothes and he / she posts them often , I can simply block him / her off . Information got circulated . The most popular information get circulated the most so I can seldom miss it . Social network plays a role in providing and also filtering information . This saves a lot of time for me in reading newspapers and watching TV .
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Social media enables people from different parts of the world to communicate with one another . People used to write letters and send post cards to keep in touch with ones live far away from them in the past . It can take a few days or weeks for those to receive the messages . Nowadays , what people need to do is just typing in front of the computer in their own rooms . And people on the other side will only need a second to receive the message . Distance and time are no longer the problems , which is convenient especially when instant chat is needed . However , when people become more and more addicted to this convenience and fail to communicate with people who are close to them , their face - to - face interpersonal skills are lost . Social media provides people a way of talking and chatting which can never be considered as a way of communication . When ones chat on those media sites , there is no eye connection , no emotion delivery and even the expressions are typed in by using some combinations of punctuations . For more convenience , sentences are shortened to simply three or four words such as lol ( which means laugh intensively ) and " asap " ( which means as soon as possible ) . People indeed go to great length to make their words as shorter as they can . While , once they are communicating with people in their face , expressing themselves appropriately become really a big problem .
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Firstly of all , social media can make it more convenient for people to make friends and contact each other . Years ago when these modern products have not been popular , the way for people to communicate or contact people far way are still restricted in making phone calls , sending emails or writing letters . Some will take long time and some are not efficient enough for people to get their response . However , social media solves these problems well . People can contact their friends on the internet and get their reply very fast . The communication is also not limited in words . People can express themselves through pictures or emotions . People can also get to know their friends ' state and mood by looking at their posts on line . Moreover , people can be aware of what is going on in social situation and see the comments online and share their opinions on these websites . These social media makes people 's life much more colorful and provide a lot of fun .
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However , social media may do some harm to people 's life . It will make people spend more time on chatting on the internet rather than communicate face to face such that the interpersonal skill will be badly affected . Some people spend a lot of time in it and forget their real life . Actually , I have seen some people are very funny and interesting when I am chatting with them online . However , they behave quite boring when I talk to them in real life . Teenagers are developing their interpersonal skills and social skills when they are growing up . If they spend too much time on these social media , it may cause some problems to their mental development . They may feel uncomfortable when they communicate with people face to face . Some may share fewer and fewer time with their family and not knowing how to express themselves . Moreover , some wrong values on the websites will affect teenagers and confuse them . Some may even do something wrong .
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In conclusion , the showing up of social media sites is a double edged sword . It can make our life simpler . People can promote their friendship and relationship through these social media . Whereas , it can also make people forget to communicate to their family and friends in the real life and affect negatively to their interpersonal skills . But overall , the advantages far outweigh its disadvantage . So we need to make best use of these social media and make it a fun way of adding some excitement when life is boring . And try to bypass the shortcomings . Remember to send greetings to our friends and family frequently .
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First and foremost , we should realize that social media world is not trustworthy and real . Everyone can easily make up the personality and characteristics they want . They can become anyone . Though social media do create relationships , relationships and friendships are only firm and real if people have gone through experiences and communication in face - to - face interaction . There is a story of a girl who lives in social media world every night in eight years . In the chat room , she created a close relationship with eight people . She talked with them every night , trust them and share her life with them . Then eventually , she discovered that eight people became one as he was using eight different identities to chat with her all the time .
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My favourite sport is volleyball because I love plays with my friends . Volleyball is a sport play every place , when I travel on the beach I like plays with my sister in the sand and after we are going to the sea . It is very funny . when I was young I like plays with the ball in the playground and my friend and I played using the soccer goals as a network of volleyball .
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In my opinion I think that public transport in future is going to continue to be used because there are a lot of people that does n't have enough money to pay for a car even if it is used , so public transport continue to have future but people are going to use more the cars then bus or underground . If we think about it the car is better because we do n't need to wait for them has we are waiting for the bus or underground but in another way car cust more money than the public transport . By car we can just stay with ourselves which can be good because we can listen to the music that we like and we do n't need to be around people that are unkwoned but if we chose public transport we can meet friends or family so both trasnportations are good and the cars do n't need necessarialy to end up with the public transport . If I had it to choose between both transportation I think I probably chose car because it is better for me to go by car then to go by bus .
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Public transportation is an important invention in human history , it brings amount of benefits in our life . For instance , we take subway in order to avoid stocking in traffic . It is true that moving by car is more convenient than take public transportation , however , it would cause more damage to our life and harm our environment . Therefore , we need to think more about our future , our offsprings . Giving them a safe , clean and comfortable place to live . If there is no public transportation , traffic jam will be serious than before . In my country , taipei , we always stock in traffic for about one hour in the morning . I can not imagine if there is no bus or MRT , how long I will take for school . Car is convenient for human , but it brings damage for human also . For example , carbon dioxide which is created by car . It cause global warming which threats our environment and harms our daily life . we can see that there are lots of serious and frequently weather disaster happened in decades , such as typhoon , hurricane , wild fire and mud slide .
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The pleasure of traveling People go , people come . Every day lots of people are travelling abroad but , what 's the best way to do an international travel ? The most important option to travel is , by far , the plane . But , even when it 's true that it 's the faster option , you must be very carefuly at time to get off a plane . If you are looking for confort and relax , obviously , you have to take a boat . There are a wide variety of things to do and enjoy the trip . Although , the better option , is pick out a train . There is n't comparation on watching the changes in the landscape through a window , enjoying the way that you are doing and , the best part , the cheapest way to get away some days and take the routine off some days . Anyway , no matter how you go , no matter where you go . The pleasure of travelling is travel at all .
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In modern societies , there are lots of friends around our daily lives . Big project could not be finished without co - operations . Friends could be communicated and exchanged the ideas , feelings and funny things happened around ourselves . More importantly , the parents give our lives and they touch us knowledge and skills or abilities to live in this world . In this case , the families played important roles in daily lives . The reasons are as follows . First of all , we could learn lots of skills from parents according to their own experience . For example , we could learn how to communicate with others in a friendly way , and we could also learn how to make a meal from parents . Secondly , the families could give you some advice about how to deal with the things which will cause trouble . If difficulties was told to the families , the ideas would come up to your families and communicate with you about how to solve this situation . All in all , in this case , the families are the most important friends in our lives .
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Everybody has his favourite sport . My favourite sport is football game . On our school or villiage football stadium i spend a lot of time every day . Usually i play football with my classmates . Before training i ran 1 - 2 kilometres and my legs get a power and my body gets an energy . Our team has a hard - working coach and he gives professional advice to us , how to improve football skills . His main words:"You must work and work very hard , if you want to get high results " . I can say , that coach is experienced person . Not so long ago , we are had competition . The first place was gotting by us . We have achieved this result , because we are friendly and organised . I believe , that in the future I will be a famous football player in teams such as Skhatar or Dynamo . Football is my life . I want to give advice to someone who starts this sport:"You must believe in yorself " .
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Dear Paul , I have seen your notice in the academy newspaper and I 'm quite interested . I have no plans for this summer so I think it is a good idea to spend it . I was born in the UK so I can be a very good teacher of English . Although I came to Spain ten years later so I can speak with them in Spanish if it was necessary . Also , I assisted to a ballet course for 4 years when I was young . It was a lot of time ago , however , I still keep the rhthym in my body ! By the way , I remember I had to create a dynamic training to do with the other ballet - course members . I had to be the teacher for one day and I did n't forget it because I felt wonderful . All members congratulated me , as well . On the other hand , I had taken care of my brothers and cousins for many hours when they were very young . You must know that I 'm a very responsible , kind and funny person . That makes me a good candidate to achieve the job , or the hobby for me ! I hope you keep in mind my candidature because I 'm not going to disappoint you . Best wishes , Julia .
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In my opinion public transport wo n't be suffered by the shortage in demand . Because not everyone afford to buy their own car . Besides there are lots of low income people who ca n't buy their own car . So I think public transport 's future is bright .
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When I was a child , I had a lot friends and they were very important for me . We ever played in the park or we talked about our tastes , music , boys , we laugh a lot of ... But when I was a teenager I began to live situations that I did not like it , for instance , the girls said to me bad things or they talked bad about me . In those years I lived the worst moments in my life . I remember when I celebreted my 15th birthday , only one schoolmate wanted to come to my party ; I think that this day was one of the worst day of my life . There night I cried because I felt that I have not got any friends . However , my parents tried that my party was the best and they prepared for me a special birthday and they invited all my cousins and together went to eat pizza and gave me a lot of presents . In there moment , I thought that my best friends was my parents and sister . I knew that they never talk bad about me . Now , my husband is my best friend . He is the most important people of my life . He has ever been with me . Also , he is very funny and I laugh a lot with him . Both like to travel around the world and to practise some sports , for example , tennis , running or trekking . We like watching TV series and cooking several desserts too . To sum up , my best friends are my family , especially , David , my husband .
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Hello Alex , how are you . Are you free for weckend , have you any plans . Me and my friends go to the cinema , and I invite you to go with us . If you are interesedt , find me at 8 clock near the cinema entrance .
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Run for your life My favourite sport is run . I like to running fast so fast in fact that it feel me as if I run on air and the feet do not hardly touch the ground between the strides . My favourite place to run is in the forest but I like to run sportive too . I am likeing to feel the ground under my feet is soft so soft not the hard concrete of the footpaths in the city of the streets . The bestest advice I can giving to someone who is starting the running is to starting slowly and not to try to run too fast but then to eventually build up the running week by week so that every week you are running a little more further and a little more faster and then after 20 years you will be an Olympic champion maybe .
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Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake . He was at Sarah 's house when suddenly he left all the bathroom dirty and went to his house . so he went back to Sarah 's house and clean all the bathroom , but Sarah already knew that he left the bathroom like this so before Michael entered to the bathroon she said : " I know what you leave there " and Michael went running to the bathroom .
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we think that in the future the planet will be in bad conditions and the trees will be dissappearing , after that we will be having wars . In 30 years we will have changed our anatomy , also we will be eating fast food , on the other hand , the north pole will have melted totally . The temperature will have become crazy by global warming , so some people will have died because the natural disasters will be more aggressive . The Technology will have advanced and maybe the cars will be flying by streets and computers will have totally changed . Because of this , we have to raise awareness of what is happening and we help the planet .
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Good day , My name is Fouad and I would like to talk about my favorite sport , Volleyball one of the most beautiful sports ever and I used to practise this sport 3 times a week since 1980 , the reasons for my enjoyment with this sport are as follows : 1- make me fit and healthy 2- classy game no friction between players 3- it exercise all muscles of your body Regarding the above I advice all rookies to start practise this sport and they will get many benefits . However , the adults they can practise it as well and they will get the same .
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As citizens of village , we totally care about environment of our village . Every sunday , we do a mutual cooporation where anyone can treat rubbish as good as they treat themselves . We clean the dirty ditch , sweep rubbish then we bury rubbish . Whilst , we recyling inorganic rubbish too . From inorganic , we can make bag , hat and other stuffs . Then they can sell them and get income of it .
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Transportation is the heart of any city whether it is public or private . Nowadays people prefer own vehicles rather than public transportation . day by day folk are more crazy about own vehicles which leads dark future of public transportation firstly . i agree with given statement that there would be tough time for public transportation in near future.because people wamnts privacy as well as freedom which is quite impossible in public transportation . secondly these mode of transportation covers as much as possible of city area or town which mismanaged routine who travelled by public transportation.as a consquence generally people avoid travelling by public transportation finally i can say that there are various mode of transporotation avaliable to competition with public transportation . nowadays people have numerous option fro travelling like many private company which play an important role to give tough competition to government . as a result of this consumer gets more benefit like lower faire , privacy , freedom and safe travelling.in addition many automobile company launcing new car with affordable price which insiost people to use more and more private vechile .
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I go for a walk to a park every day with my lovely two Corgi dogs . I met many people in the park . I never thought about , people got so many pet . In the peak time in the park is very busy even thought the park is huge ! Some people are very friendly the same as their dog . But some people are very rude and their dogs are aggressive to other dogs .
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Last year , My friend Michael was at school when he heard about a short story competition , he liked the idea so he decided to enter the competition . but there was a fees in order to join the competition , he had no money . fortunately he have a lot of friends they can lent him . he phoned me and asked me to lent him some money to register the competition . he took the money the second day , he finished the registration and started in writing the story after long time spending in writing and did good job he went to give his story to the international student magazine office , he found out there are a notice on the door say that the competition has canceled , he came back vey sad and told me what happened .Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had a mistake .
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All around the world pupils are waiting for finishing school . They are eager to begin a new life as adults . But when they reach in - between period , confused feelings cross their minds . As a rule after last exams they do n't know what university to choose . What they will do in future they see , like in a fogg . In this way , idea of a year off between leaving school and starting next education is very reasonable . Firstly it 'll allow young people to have a rest after the first hard - work studying period . Ten or eleven years at school make them tired , in spite of pupils do n't notice it . But choosing the second education is very important step , which need serious attitude . Secondly such year off would give to future students a chance to try themselves in new professional sphears . Also they would have an opprtunity being involved in volontier activity . And thirdly they might work for earning own money or travel . This year holiday would be really helpful for relaxation and gettin new power for future education . One year is not long period . But benefits after year off will be obvious .
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bea
78
Peter looked at his watch and knew that he had to do something immediately , after listening conversations of his new neighbours . They are planning to rob a very precious thing from Museum tonight . He does n't have much time to prove their plan and he could not wait to let it happen . It is his town and it is his duty too to save town 's history . He called the police and informed about his neighbours robbery plan . Police reached Museum and caught robbers red handed .
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bea
79
I am beleving that there is no future for the public transpot , using trains is mor convient and low expenses also to decrease the carpon gases which affecting the ozone , people should be aware about the effect of using the public transpotation on the econmics and enviroment , goverements shall encarge the people to use the other ways for transport , this subject shall be issuesd in all media to learn and encrage the people to use he wrigth way for transpot .
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bea
82
I was , last month , in a fantastic restaurant , Woolypools . It is small but comfortable and famous for his big burguers . Woolypools is a speciallist of meal , it 's a meal restaurant . In my opinion the restaurant can be better , respect to meat , but it is perfect to have dinner with your friends . I have expects to be more famous , better and biggest . The problem of the restaurant is the place , it is far from the people and cities , and the space , that is very small for lots of people .
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bea
84
In my town we create a small organization for more healthy environment , beauty touch and to be attractive . the citizens in the town must participate in this , the citizen will take the responsibility for specific day to clean the town and put the rubbish into correct place and clean tree and plant more of it .
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bea
85
I 'm agree with the opinion that the famous people , such as politicians and film stars deserve to have a private life without journalists following them all the time . is horrible have a person behind you all the time , you not have a life , not peace , not a happy . In adition all pearsons have the right to privacy and to be free . Nevertheless the journalists stay all the time having a photo , all the time , when they eaten , drinking , happy , sad , how is your love life and with whoever stay , if stay with something important our what buy . This is terrible , you do not have privacy authought the society have a blame , because if they do not take a photo our follows the life of the famous the people bored . So that , politicians and film stars will have support it , because then they will have to bear it , because they then have the reward with what they earn . This is all .
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Once upon a time was one little ant called Penny , he was really small in compared with the others . He hated to be like that because most of the ants made fun of him until one day something horrible and inevitable happen . It was a dark night it was raining until a big active volcano explosion buried them into the underground . All of them tried to find a way out ! , but no one ca n't find one ... They started to get panicked ! People just started to evacuated rapidly until it began a big earthquake ... Penny was too sad , the only thing that he can do is to wait and keep calm . Until the dawn all of them go out , so they sacred until they find a refuge . Everyone wanted to witness the queen , but no one find something . Like they were very religious ants they prey for her sacred ancestors so they can help them in the big deal . Something that they don know was that the whole thing was a movie ! So all was planned ... The actors had monitors that watch the ants all the time . One day Penny discovered it and it go to tell it to his queen , the queen at knowing that she get very confused but at the same time she get mad and she wanted revenge . So they make a plan to display all ... The next day when they were about to start filming they ere non ants there so they search for them , but they ca n't find them ... In that moment the ants and Penny attack them in their backs , making them to leave the place . The ants win the war and they expand their habitat to the studio . No one attack them again and they live happily ever after !
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I have many favorite sports . One of them I 'm keen on playing basketball the best . I always spend more time on playing it . I usually play basketball everyday around at least thirty minutes per day . After a hard day at University I go home and then I go to the stadium to play it . One thing makes sure that I already finished all of my work before I play my favorite sport . Basketball has many benefits not to me but also everyone . It makes me feel relaxed and unwind . Besides , it also helps me keep fit and have a good body shape . I really cra zy about playing it . When I have spare time , I often gather my friends to watch basketball match on television . I often play basketball at the stadium in the morning . Sometimes , I play it near sports centre . I go back home and have a sleep deeply when I finished it . basketball is an outdoor activity . That 's reason why basketball is my favorite sport .
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With the sweeping progress of development and the booming of population , many agricultueal land , forest and ocesn had been used to destroyed to build more constructure and transport networks . From my own perspective , I believe that it will bring many drawbacks to the environment or even human and animals . To start with , there are a wide range of troublesome it maybe leadding to this phenomeon . Convincing arguments can support that the root cause is that almost all the persent day cities are already packed with places of residence , commerce and recreation and the land available for new housing developments is increasingly scarce . Additionally , people now continues destroyed more agricultures and forest in order to satisfy all their need , which will distory the ecosystem diversity and biodiversity especially the endangered species . According to the problems above mentioned , various approaches that governmentshould be adopted to deal with this problem.first of all , reducing building constructure from now on , planting more trees instead . Sustainadle development should be awaness to all human and start to porteat the environment and preserve the animals . To sum up , this unpleasant phenmenon and problems should be worked out to resolve before thing get worse ang the governments have to take the responsibility for that .
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Nowadays the languages are very important , and more English . This is not my first time that I study English . I have been studying English since I was child and I never speak and learn so well since I decided to go to London one course to learn this language . I have taken that decision because I was tired to try to learn English and I did not have the level that I want , so when I heard about that ooportunity I said yes .
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The car is n't the best way for for the transport , because it produce much pollution , however the public transport is better to do a journey . It can carry many people without problems . Nowadays in the cities developed there are many possibilities for public transport , like bus , train , subway , tram etc.these options it 's more economical than the car , the problem of the car is that normally the car is occupied for a person , when the car is prepared for to carry four or five people . this situation to create many pollution for environment so we have more conscience for the planet health
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I love to play cricket . I am enthusiastic towards this game . My favourite team is India because I belongs to this country . In India , 85 percent people follow cricket . In 1993 , Indian cricket team won his first world cup and that 's change the direction of air in favour of cricket and everyone start to follow this game . I love this game because my favourite sport man belong to this game . His name is Mr. Sachin Ramesh Tendulakar know as little master . Whenever I play this game , I always follow this person . His stance , Style , shots , running between the wicket , everything which is most required in this game is up to the mark . Not only me but also every Indian always follow Sachin for cricket . When he was 18 , he played first game for India . He is the first player who played 200 test in cricket . He has many achievement like first 200 in one day etc . I love the way he was played . For a nuance first they have to decide what they con do better , batting or bowling . If the person want to become bowler then concentrate on running , action , stance and for batsmen need concentration on lag and bat coordination , eye and bat coordination , discover some shots which became key factor in batting . Also watch videos of some best player like Sachin , Rahul , Sir Don breadman , Hayden , Wasim Akaram , Brett Lee etc . As health is important factor in every sport so also need to improve health , stamina .
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Dear Jo , It 's glad to hear you are going to visit to my country . I am looking forward for this . I can give you any advice on traveling and working in my country . l wish you will have a impressed time . The weather is neither hot nor cold all year , you need n't bring too many clothes because you can buy in here . If you want to travel this city . I can be your guide as I have a year free before university too . This is a modern city . People usually went here for shopping or eating . There are many local foods very popular . You may like this . I also want to introduce my friends to you , we can have fun together . when you have played enough in this city , and you want to find a job here . I can recommed you to my uncle 's company to do a job . Because it is difficult to get a job here if you are foreign and have n't finished college . It may take very long time to find a job and you have not much time here . You may consider my advice .
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My favorite sport is swims . It 's because swim is really fun . Also I think swim can keep our body fit and it can make the people who swim feel cool when it is in a hot day . The advice that I give to someone who want to start swimming . It is not be afraid of water , otherwise they may not learn swim and also when the age become older it will be more difficult to learn than the little . So these are the advice that I give to them .
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Dear Camp director , My name is Eider and I am 21 years old . I had read your advertisement in the newspaper ! And I am really sure that I am the person that you are finding . I am monitor in the free time , and I am looking for a temporal job to improve my English . Neither I have problems for working in a kitchen , will be clear if I told you that my parents have a bar . According to my age , evening activities are not a problem for me , and I played many sports during my life , such as socker , bolleyball , ... Waiting for your answer , Eider
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The city where I live is a small village . All residents take great care of the environment . Organized shares , where everyone clean up the village . All residents segregate garbage thrown into suitable containers . Thus helping to protect our environment to make it clean , safe , in order to not jeopardize our various diseases . In my village there are trash cans , so that no one threw debris on the ground . There are spcejalne place where you can organize bonfires , but everyone has to clean up after themselves and throw out all garbage . We have the ability to use renewable energy sources , because it is close to a wind power plant . Recently , also on the roof of the primary school were set the batteries and the whole school uses solar energy instead of electricity . They organize monthly meetings on the environment , residents participate in them . Wszysycy residents of my village , they try to , so that our village was clear that pollute the environment as little as possible .
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Travelling in their own car is way more comfortable than taking a ride in public transportation.there are several reason to consider . Firstly , the bus is always drop by to get a passenger that take a more time than expected to time of travel . Secondly , the public vehicle route are more far than usual route . Thirdly , it is also crowded and no privacy . Finally , there is a chance to become a victim of theft and pocket picker . However , public transportation is much cheaper than to buy a new car and for the adventurer who want to have an exciting travel for then to see more action . Like watching outside or sight seeing , to mingle and meet different people . In addition to this I also admire the bullet train in japan which u consider fast and safe public vehicle Ive'd known . To sum it up I still consider having their own car is way more safe and convinient . Public future unless they have project to at least lessen the time of travel and prioritize the safety of their passenger .
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As far as I 'm concerned , I tend to disagree with the decision of mineral extraction . More details and reasons will be elaborated in the following paragraphs to support my opinion . To begin with , extract the mineral will be harmful to our environment . There are breathtaking sights on the outskirts of my hometown . In my childhood , I went there to spend my summer every year . However , it will probably be disappeared if the developing equipment were being set . Next to go will be , the extraction of the valuable mineral will definitely leads to air pollution . There has been an example that the other town is polluted by the process of developing the mineral . No one can deny that the pollution issue is one of the utmost important thing which should be prevented . Last but not the least , the mineral extraction will turn out to be profound influence , especially , to our offspring . To take my friend , Taylor , as an example , her homeland were over - developed and become an arid place when she was a child . After she grows up , she decides to leave and never go back to her hometown . In addition , she has no blithe memory in her childhood . One problem is that some people will consider the job opportunity that it might bring to us . Due to the mineral development , many people in our hometown can probably earn much more money than before . It seems like a sought - after chance . Nevertheless , they do not give us any promise of the vacancy . In addition , money is no more crucial when it comes to health and environmental conservation . In a nutshell , Based on the reasons and instances above , the disadvantages of extract the valuable mineral are outweigh the advantage . Therefore , I do not subscribe to this decision .
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The sports days were held on Kwai Chung Sports Ground in 12th and 13 th November . That weather was partly cloudy . I got there by MTR . I arrived the sports ground at 7:40 a.m. This year I 've join the 100 - metre race . On the first day before the sports day begin , we have the opening ceremony . The athletic representative pasted the torch and we sang the anthem . After that , the sports day began formally . At 10:45 a.m. , the girl 's grade C 100 - metre race started . There was a funny thing when I went to the marshal . The teacher call my name for twice and he told me to stand different place . So I know that there was someone whose name pronounce same as me . Near the race , I was very nervous . When I was running , I heard my housemates cheering and the wind passing my face . That feel was very comfortable and made me felt relax . At last , I got number 10 out of 27 people . Although it is not a great result , I 've already try my best . At last of the day , our school announced the mark the four houses have got . My house which got number two temporarily . I felt hopeful and wanted my house will get the champion . On the second day , my classmates called me to take part the Inter - class relay race . I felt very afraid because I was not good at running . Finally , our class got the first runner up . We have a difference of 0.5 seconds is the first of the race . I implicated my class from winning the champion . At last , my house got the second runner up . I hope my house will get the champion in the next year .
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One upon a time there was a tiger who lives in a beautiful landscape with her boyfriend and her 3 daughters . The tiger was the mom names Amanda of 25 years old , the herders kill her parents , because the herders were poor and do n't have enough food to survive , so they kill them . The tiger 's boyfriend was a lion names John of 27 years old , his dad die because in a conflict with other animals , he got an infection . Her mom die because some things or someone drag her of the leg and drop it in a cave were other animals eat her . They die when John was too little to remember and he never know what happened so he went to all the parts for saw them even he walked and walked even at reverse but he never found them . The 3 daughters where so different each other . The first one names Amanda junior like her mom but she is a cheetah .She have 9 years old she loves to run and she is the fastest of the family and have a lot of spots . She is of the ones that trend to make something enforcing . The second daughter names Elizabeth is a leopard is the intelligent of the family and the oldest of the daughters . Had 12 years old . Another animals give them rewards or bonus because she discover that water was liquid . The last daughter was Ana who was the youngest of the family is a jaguar . She stay sleeping in the bed and doing nothing all day . Their parents were angry because she was the only one that never work . One they animals went with Ana and give her an incentive for being an athlete or make something else than stay sleeping . The end .
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Hello Riley , about the question you made me in your letter , it has been hard to give you an answer because I know how much you love both . Last night I made a decision . I think that you should give up from your music classes . You have classes since you were nine years old and you already know how to play piano , so I think that you should continue doing sports because it is important for your health and in your free times you could still play piano without going to the classes . This is my opinion but the decision is yours , so when you decide it please send me a letter telling me about it . Love , Ines .
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The most exciting day of my life was the 3rd of June , last year . I had an exam . That day I woke up early because I was nervous . Then I revise Maths as at home , before to go at school , as at school , before to begin the exam . When I started to read the tracks I fell agitated and I thought that I was n't able to finish and pass that test . But when I finished before the time I was happy and relaxed . I always said that I passed that test and I was sure of that . And this is true . I passed that test !
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Everything was dark . She open her eyes and the first thing that she saw was the black sky . A dark sky without stars . She got up and look around . She was in a part of the woods where she used to go to think and relax . She started to take consciousness although she could n't remember how she arrived there . She had to walk at least 15 minutes to go from her house to this place . The problem is the last thing she remember is that she has been sleeping and then suddenly woke up when the window opened with the wind . She fell sleep again , didn't she ? If she did , how she managed to walk until there in her sleep ? If she was n't awake , why she could n't remember anything after that ? This situation it was really fustrating not to mention that now she had to walk for almost 20 minutes to get home and back to sleep . She started to walk to clear her mind . She knows her way even in the dark ; she had gone to this spot a lot of time , specially the last few weeks .
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The development of human kind in technology is seen everywhere . In case of transportation technology , in this twenty first century we have various option like Plan that can fly with the cloud , train that fast and big enough that carry hundreds of people and travel hundreds of mile an hour and boat that much bigger and faster than ancient time . Although compared to ancient time we are lucky enough that we have all these option . However , if I have given option to choose between all of three , I will say plane . There are three reason to choose this . First reason is its speed , compare to both other means of transportation it can travel faster . It can travel thousand of miles in a couple of hours . As a result people can save their time . Second is safety , compared to other the chances of accident is less . That makes it safer to travel by plane rather than the train or boat . Third one is comfort level . Plan is much more more comfortable than both train and boat . In conclusion , I will say that plan will be my first choice in all of three means of transportation . The reason behind my choice is speed , safety and comfort level that make plan as my first choice .
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I had a wonderful day yesterday because I was in the beach all the afternoon . I went with my parents and my sister . The beach is located in A Guarda and its name is O Muiño . There are a lot of people in the beach . The water was very cold and I could n't swim , then I played football in the sand of the beach . I took the sun a very long time and then I go to a cafe and and I drank a refreshment . It was a nice day because I spent a good time with my family .
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No future for a public transpotr ? is this claim or no ? will we see on our roads the public transport afer 5 or eve 10 years yet ? that is really so interesting question/ i think that it all depands from the development . now we can see that more and more people prefer travelling by car . yes , i agree , if you planed the travelling for a long distation and for a long time you would prefer to do it on car , couse firstly you;ll spend less time , you travelling will be comfortable , you 'll have a possibility to stop every where and for a long time , as you need . but if we are talking abot travelling across you city , would you prefer public transport or car ? i think that this is the guestion for every one , and the answer ca n't be one for all , cause , someone can use public transport , and economy by this not only money , but and the environment , but some people do n't like to use p.t . , cause they spend more time for travelling or they simple do n't like to travell with another people . so , on my opinion , even after 10 years the public transport will be crossing on our street with enough amount of passangers
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I 'd like to tell you about my favorite restaurant its name is " Lemon " I go there every week it has different food from any restaurants I 'd like chicken crispy with garlic sauce It 's Excellent choice for me and My favorite appitizer is susage and in order that desert I 'd rather " Vadge " cake with chocolate sauce I feel I;m at ease when I go there I enjoy classical music over having a lunch about the service It 's very good and all staff are respectable I ca n't imagine one week without going there that drives me nuts I advise any one to go there and enjoy a time there , also this restaurant has a relative advantage in hygiene really It 's excellent This strikingly thing for anyone despite all of these advantages prices are not expensive .
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Michael wake up at the morning and he read the newspaper . He read in the newspaper an interesting noticie . The noticie was about a competition . The competition is about write stories . Michael was excited because he is great writer and he decided to compete . First , he found an idea for the story and he decided to make the story about pirates looking for treasure . He began to write . The story was very good but Michae did not know how to end the story . Finally , Michael ended the story and he went to the post office . Michael sent the story but Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake , he did n't put his name and address .
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My favourite season of the year is summer . Why am I making this choice you clearly can ask , I love sun and good weather . Yes it is true that during summer the temperature is very hot and you can rarely stay near the sun because you finish t be burn by the sun . In spite of this , summer is a very good moment to enjoy little things life gives us and have fun with them . During summer I love to go to the beach and having sunbathing with my friends other than getting fun with them playing volleyball or run inside the water of the sea ! I think those activities are very regenerating and they make you forget about all the warmness of summer . Furthermore you can sleep more than the other days of the year and this make you feel relaxed . I really like to explore nature during summer too . The wonderful colours of flowers with the sunshine are fabulous .
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Dear USA SUMMER CAMPS , I saw your advertisement in the USA and I 'm very interested in the position of childminder you are advertising . I 'm eighteen years old and I 'm doing a languages translation degree at university at the moment , that 's why I need to work in order to pay my fee . I have some experience working with children from all ages , besides I do n't mind hard work and I learn quickly . Also I 've just got my FCE certificate this year but it would help me a lot if I practised my English in a native country . I consider myself really active , sociable , well - organized and above all patient , therefore I think I 'm suitable for this job as I can adapt myself easily at any kind of situation or environment , especially working overseas plus it would be a nice experience because I would meet new people and a different culture . I 'm looking forward to hearing from you soon . Yours faithfully , Teresa Wysocki
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It had been a very long and tiring day , but Tom felt he had achieved something really good . He finally , after 5 years , won swimming competition . It was really importatnt for him because he was training for 5 long years since he was 15 and he have n't got any achievements . He was very happy and he decided to celebrate . He invited all his friends from team and made a party . Tom wanted Mel , his girlfriend , to come too . She was really proud of him . She was dreaming about being his wife . She wanted to be his wife so bad . But he did n't love her enough . He wanted to break up with her at that party . He was waiting 2 hours for her . He hated that she is always late . That was the main reason he wanted to end it up . When Mel came she looked gorgeous . And when he saw her , his heart started to beating faster and faster . But time 's up . He got closer to her and told her everything . Mel looked sadly at Tom , then said : " I 'm pregnant ... " and got out of his home . He followed and apoligized her . He said he was drunk and did n't know what he was saying . Then he hugged her . He said he loved her and kissed her forehead . He had to stay with her because of ... the baby . He could n't just leave her carrying his baby ! No ! He has never acted like this . He knew that he had to stay with her the rest of his life and raise the baby . He decided to give swimming up and started to taking care of Mel . One day Mel was feeling really bad so Tom took her to the hospital . He felt that something bad was going to happen . And he was right . Mel has lost the baby . Tom had to make a hard decision . His life was going to change . Mel was crying all day and Tom could n't stand it . He has broken up with Mel and it made her much more sad . He did n't care . He thought it was her fault that she has lost their little human .
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· Introduction This report will examine the different activities we can do in our leisure time in Castelldefels . · Activities to kill time As our town is well - known for our magnificul beaches along the Mediterranean coast and for the Olympic Canal of Castelldefels , many foreign or local people come here to do activities like kitesurfing and windsurfing on the beah or canoening and aquatic skiing on the Olympic Canal . These activities are the most popular and the most expensive too . However , I fully recommend them , especially for sporty , adventurous and young people . · Others ideas to have fun In Castelldefels , there are other activities less popular , but cheaper , for instance : free zumba masterclass , yoga beach , running ... as sports activities , and as social activities there are library group , theatre ... As I said , these activities are not as popular as the activities of the Olympic Canal and the beach , but their success is increasing more and more . · Recommendation So , finally I suggest that it would be a great idea to combine the different types of activities , both popular and the newest . If you tried all the activities , you would spend a great time here , in Castelldefels !
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Nowadays there are many people that are learning foreign language , for me is a good thing that more people learn this , but is it worth learning a foreign language ? Firstly , there are more multinational companies that need people to speak other languages , so that means that the people who know to speak foreign language have more opportunities to get a job in important companies , or will have more chances of being promoted . On the other hand , are more benefits , for example , if you want to travel to another a country is very useful to know a different language , because you can understand all without complications . Finally , learning another language gives the learner the ability to step inside the mind and context of that other culture . Today globalization is bringing the world more close , that means that there are more possibilities to have contact with the other cultures , for example in literature , poetry , films , TV programs , music or some other aspect of the culture . On balance , learning foreign languages is very positive on different aspect , so if you have the positivity of learning a new language do it , because it will bring you many benefits .
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Given is a diagram introducing the procedures of making bank notes . Desgin the bank notes are the first and indispensable step . Peple should decide the background colour and thw artwork while they have to consider the security issues . Then , skilled machinists would prepare the metal plates in order to go to the next step . The third section is to print the prepared bank notes . Usually there will be 50 ban notes per sheet . The colour will print on the both sides and every notes has their unique ink also the images will be slightly raised . After that , it comes to the most significant stage , that is inspect the quality of the printed sheets . People usually divided the quality into three parts : Good quality , Partially damaged , and bad sheets . As for good quality sheets and partially damaged sheets but still good , people will cut them separately and pack them together in order to dispacting and distributing the bank notes . If the partially damaged sheets are bad , they will be treated as bad sheets , which will be securely distoryed . In conclusion , the diagram gives a quite explicit process of making bank notes . Eventhough it seems to be easy to make them , but every steps needs people to be very careful in order to produce the perfect bank notes for everyone .
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A BETTER PLACE TO LIVE Beginings Everything began a few years before , when Alfred , The Major , read an article about the importance of the surroundings in health and happinness of people . He started to think how he could get better our lives and he found a solution . A concerned population While youngsters use their time trying to get concerned the oldest people from de village about the importance of the care of our surroundings , middle - aged people planted many trees around the village and cleaned the floor of our public places making a more attractive place to live than we used to have . Easy recycling Local authorities helped this initiative creating some places for people to leave their rubbish in order to be taken to the recycling center with the purpose of giving a new life to our waste . The results As a result of this attitude , since Alfred had this great idea , we enjoy one of the cleanest villages in the area . People now is worried about the future of our planet and an association has been created in order to promote the care of our planet , Green Planet is called . We want a happy Earth .
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Dear Paul , What 's up ? Do you remember when I told you I had been helped at a concert ? It was really exciting and unforgettable experience and I enjoy that very much . You probably wo n't believe me but I met all members of Dżem band , I talked to them and we had lunch together , they 're very nice men . Because of helping them I had the best place during the concert and I have their authographs on the newest record . I did n't have many duties and none of them were unpleasant . In general I had only one duty that is checking quest list , above that I had to help in cleaning area after the concert . But that concert was worth of my work , so I hope I will be invited to their next event . Working for them was a real pleasure . I suppose we 'll see each other soon and I 'll be capable of talking to you about this experience . Love , Dominika
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Report : The aim of this report is to give you my personal point of view of the course I did in your branch in Madrid last month . In addition , I would like to give you some suggestions I think it would be worth it to take it into account for the next course it will take place next year . First , I would like to stand out the outstanding classmates there were in class . They were not only really clever people but also excellent co - workers . Working collaboratively is , in fact , the most interesting way of learning any subject even English . Second , the teachers were really good skills to teach . They managed to encourage all of us every day . This way we made the most of us and never gave up improving our English level . Third , phonetic classes scheduled on Fridays came really in handy . They helped me to pronounce words better than before starting the course . However , in my opinion there should have been at least one native teacher in the teacher 's team . This way we had been able to hear a native speaker and I think it would have been worth practising . To wrap up the report just say that on the whole the course was fantastic and I am looking forward to signing it again next year . Yours sincerely , Juan Orozco
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My name is Mohamed El - Shamoun . I am 20 years old , living in Port - Said , Egypt . I am a student in the 3rd year of the faculty of medicine Port - Said University . My father works as a teacher and so does my mother . I have one brother and one sister . I have been doing Judo for the past 11 years with a lot of prizes . My hobbies are travelling , reading stories and writing my thoughts . I am interested in scientific research and analyzing information so I am taking a lot of courses and training in this field as I want to be one of the greatest researchers in the world in addition to becoming a member in World Health Organization ( WHO ) . It is n't just a dream in my mind but I work hard to make this dream come true . Last two years , I worked in many places such as a pharmacy , a restaurant and the water purification company . I believe that work is everything and experience can make miracles in our life so I chose this program as I want to learn and study , I want to know more and more . In my childhood , my dream was to become an engineer but when I changed my career to medicine , I realized that Allah chose the best for me and for my personality . When I work anything I feel that I have the world in my hand so I can do anything for people . One of my goals in the life is to invent an effective drug for one the incurable like cancer , AIDS and hepatitis . I asked myself many times what is the aim of our life ? And what are the benefits of work and study ? But if you see your world and realize it well , it will be deserved from everyone to work so hard and achieve their hopes . I learnt from Research that you can do everything in anytime in addition a little tired can change the life for the better . I like travelling and visiting new places in my country and my dream is travelling to all the countries in the world also , I attended a lot of conferences in my field so I think this program is a chance for experience which will help and inspire me for the community services and development my society as I hope to come back and teach others what I learn .
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Is there a future for Privately owned cars ? To be honest , I am not sure . Although privately oned cars are more and more popular , and they are increasingly becoming a common asset even in developing countries , it is not likely that this means of transport can be the means of transport of the future . Most people today realize that in our cities and in our planet there ia an increasing problem of space and pollution . Carbon based fuels will not last forever . I would say that most probably private care are not " sustainables " in the long term , and it will be necessary to revert to some sort of public transport . The population growth forecast tells us that in the next 35 years the world population will grow of a staggering 3 billions human beings . I know that it is nice to dream a future of technological people flying around , each of them with its own private small helicopter . But it is not going to happen . I guess that in our future there are no helicopters , and not even cars . States and local authorities will have to tackle the problem and provide the public with a better alternative . T he price for independent transport will grow dramatically . I reckon that that will change the habits of the public . Even though we will have to read the timetable and to learn again to be on time , the nice old train could become important again .
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Imagine this picture : the first class of this semester , students are yawning and do not pay attention on the teacher ; while the teacher ask for the answer , students can not answer because they totally can not remember what they have studied in last semester . Students could receive a better , more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying partly because of after the long vacation , students will not remember the knowledge they have learned , partly because of long vacation will let students used to have fun instead of study , and partly because of some difficult courses should be continually studying . Therefore , I agree with the statement that students could receive a better , more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying . More reasons and detail will be shed light on in the following paragraphs . To begin with , there is a general consensus , students will forget the knowledge they have learned after a long break time . For example , on history class , history teacher have to repeat teaching the history of North America before he start to teach the history of South America in the beginning of the semester . It is very wasting time and not efficient . Next to go would be , students get used to relax by having no study and homework in the long vacation . For example , when the semester start , students can not get away from the sunshine , beach , and travelling . In the class , students will recall the joyful time they had instead paying attention on the teacher . Last but not least , some difficult courses should be continually studying rather than having long a break time . For instance , learning English should be a daily education , if you have a long time without learning English , you could forget the vocabulary or the grammar . In a nutshell , based on aforementioned , I totally I agree with the statement that students could receive a better , more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying .
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My favourite sport is the soccer . I enjoy this sport since I was a child , I always remember when my father and my brother teach me to play it . My father was a professional soccer player so I think that I inherited this love for the soccer . I played soccer in different teams in my neighborhood , school or university . I always enjoy playing soccer because when I am in the playing field I forget all problems . I like to speak with my team partners . Together we analyze the rival team and we choose a strategy to win the match . when I play bad I feel nervous but my parters give me their unconditional support . that is priceless . I know the health is very important so if you practise this sport there is a big probability that you are healthy . So if you are starting this sport you have to do it because you really like it . if you do n't like it there are many options to practise whatever sports . The soccer is not a violent sport but sometimes it becomes . In this way you have to be prepared for anything problem . Finally I advise that you enjoy playing this awesome sport .
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On my vacation I went to New York . I also went to the amazing Niagara Falls . Something that made me happy was to see my family . On september 12th,2014 I went to New York city . In the fly I was very happy because I received a lot of food . The flight was approximatly five hours where I watch beautiful movies . When I arrived my uncle was waiting for me and I gave him a big hug . We went to long island because there he lives . He have a really nice house and I was happy to see my little cousin " Angel " who looks just like me . In New York I eat so much , I also went to the city thay never sleeps , Manhattan . My uncle had the awesome idea of going to Niagara Falls . We went in car and it was about 8 hours long . Finally we arrived to Niagara Falls city that looks like a ghost place . It does not have too much to do but there were the falls . I was amazed of how huge were the falls . They were incredible amazing and beautiful . I take too much photos because you do nt visit places like that everyday . Something that made me very happy was to visit my family . My uncle Juan lives in United States of America and I was very to hug him because I miss him a lot . My cousin Angel was very happy to see me and me too , we are like siblings . My aunt gave me a lot of presents because she say they do not see me frecuently and many other part of my family . In conclusion I have a perfect vacation where I saw new things , visit awesome places as Niagara Falls and Time Square , recieving a lot of presents and soecially eat a lot delicious food .
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Most attending students to Universities are out of the city where they used to live , so , they need an accommodation to live through their study years . Most universities provide cheap accommodations such as , shared rooms and dormitories to their students to lower the living costs , where most students have low income . Other students who may have family financial support prefer to hire an apartments to live independently Sharing houses or rooms have many advantages such as , cheap , safe , close to the university , and learn how to share everything with others . saving money and time will be more Obvious in university dormitories because monthly payments will be less than four times than hiring an apartment , and because it will be closer to the university , saving money and time is more efficient by reducing transportation 's costs In spite all these benefits , I prefer- if I can - to live in an apartment where the personality is very important for me . Many years ago , I shared a friend in a room for few months during a course outside my country , these days where I worst during my life , he was dirty , speaking loudly all time and did not share the budget of eating . living alone will grant me the freedom to live by the way that I choose and still friendly with all the others without exceed the privacy of my friends . this matter will not achieved when living in shared rooms . they annoying me Although The federal government which is decided as a role of USA has many benefits according to reading passage , the lecturer believes that there is no perfect government . The powerful of the federalism which has more liberty for the states to have their own policies according to their needs , is not always good for the lecture where it may create some conflicts between the states . An example of that is the marriage of homosexual where some state admit this marriage , others do n't . Also , the reading passage declares that even the federal government let each state function independently , it still control on the main decisions . this case causes some problems where the lecturer mentioned the failure of federal government to stop illegal immigration to USA through Nevada desert . also the control of the federal government is the reason why each of the state and the federal blame each other in the increase of the unemployment in some states In conclusion , federal government which give freedom and powerful , cause many problems such as no single policy and confusion in the responsibility .
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Travelling to a different country can be both exciting and frustrating at the same time . I think that any type of trip is exciting but also have their frustrating moments . In order to enjoy travelling to Mexico I would give two important advice ; first try to get alone with travel companion and enjoy Mexican food instead to critic about spicy savor . People say that in every voyage the people suffer to different moments of the trip : arrived , get away to the frustration of an unknown place , get alone with your trip companion , success as a traveler and arrived home triumphal . In order to enjoy a trip to Mexico I suggest that the traveler find a manner to get alone with his or her companion . This minimal chance would make a big difference when you visit other city . As an example , if you are able to get alone with your travel companion could enjoy each moment of the trip , exchange some pictures , eat together , and visit places with common interest such as museums or malls . Other advice that I would give to people coming to Mexico is that enjoy for Mexican food . Mexican food has a lot of tasting dishes from different states of the country . For example , there are a lot of American people that does n't like spicy food and also most of the times could get angry with the excess of pepper that the Mexican people used to use to prepare their food . As advice I would suggest you to ask for sauces with lower pepper . In this way the visitors would be able to enjoy Mexican food with less pepper and the same delicious savor that is so characteristic of our country . In conclusion , I offered two important advice for visitors that coming to my country : Try to get alone with their companion in order to have fun and try to enjoy Mexican food because it is delicious !
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After the Internet was invented and revealed first time in August 29th 1969 , Social Media Site ( SMS ) is the next most significant innovation that has partly replaced for face to face communication . SMS such as Facebook send out 700.000 messages , and 170.000 Tweets are publicized on Twitter each 60 seconds . Unsurprisingly , social consequences of Facebook and Twitter plays an important role in communication , regardless of distance or time . However , people who use Facebook , Twitter or SMS in general , are not likely to have their own personal privacy that there is a possibility of cycle of bullying . This essay will force on benefits and disadvantages of Facebook and Twitter , and also comments potential future of these implications . Communicating can be achieved , regardless of distance , through Facebook and Twitter . The benefit of being from being connected globally to Facebook and Twitter is that messages can be transmitted almost instantly to viewers . Firstly , Facebook and Twitter can be used when their users are in an unpleasant mood , and in where their negative feelings are expressed . Secondly , Facebook provides the opportunity to remain in touch with daily activities from friends , making observations of relationships , maintaining one 's own feeling within the network ( through wall posts , pokes , messages , etc ) ( Oldmeadow , Quinn , & Kowert , 2013 ) . That is to say , human behaviour on Facebook are interacted we with others by sharing their mood , and receiving responses . Thirdly , Facebook can be used as an organizational communication tool in business . Knowledge about the members increases continually , and moreover , maintaining relations with other existing members , and also sharing their same interests by the social network . ( Emerald Group Publishing , 2013 ) . Finally , people are allowed to follow anyone who they find enjoyable through Twitter . For instance , by following famous celebrities , people can easily see every daily activities which are posted by them . However , due to this , people who are being followed , or users in general , may have less personal privacy , and also there is a high potential of being purposely aggressive toward someone . However , information which is appeared on Facebook or Twitter are easily accessible , therefore everybody can easily response as a public opinion . However , information which is appeared on Facebook or Twitter are easily accessible , therefore everybody can easily response as a public opinion . Mostly Facebook users expect their friend to respond or pay attention on what they are doing . In fact , along with agreeable and pleasant comments , there are also small amounts of aggressive and even racist comment . First of all , people can post any racist comments which target a specific group or person . For example , after the premier of The Hunger Game was released , a fan posted an onset racist tweet that saying that they were unhappy because one of the main actresses was performed by Black person ( Rauch and Schanz , 2013 ) . Because of the accessible information through SMS , it has led to many problems involve with cycle - bullying , cycle - badgering , cycle - stalking behaviour ( Krishna , as cited in Williams & Merten , 2008 ) . For example , Krishna et al.(2013 ) reports a case of continuous disturbing a woman from a man called Mr. X " admitted to a state psychiatric hospital after being found not competent to stand trial on charges of stalking harassment , trespassing and telephone harassment " ( pp . 576.e1 - 576.e2 ) . Potentially , Facebook and Twitter , and SMS in general , may replace face to face communication and improve their functions , because people feel more freedom or enjoy using Facebook or Twitter without have to view each other appearances . Therefore , it would be easier to be connected and keep in touch with friends within a second , rather than have to call them . The possibly outcomes might be the more time people spend on SMS , the less communicate skills that they have . In addition , to decrease the risk of negative comments or posts , Facebook and Twitter would improve their futures to solve the less personal privacy problem . For example , controlling what posts should be sent by adding more privacy options . However , despite the useful of these implications , people should pay attention that Facebook and Twitter could affect their social life by avoid using it most of the time . In conclusion , the benefits from using Facebook and Twitter is that people can communicate and being connected to their friends frequently . Also people can easily reduce their negative mood by sharing and expressing how they feel . In contrast , because Facebook and Twitter have been connected worldwide , which means protecting personal privacy is probably impossible . Possibly , users might express aggressive toward each other , because of lack of privacy .
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Hockey as a life style Although all sports help you to have a healthy life , hockey provides you more than just being healthy or fit . What are you thinking of whenever you choose a sport ? You think that your life style will improve ? Well you are mistaken . For doing different kind of sports you need to be skilled or willing to try new things . What if you do n't have none of those requierments ? Then you know hockey is the aswner . hockey is a sport I have played for many years and it turned out to be my favorite . It 's a good way of learning how to communicate and work with people . in simple words , it 's a team sport . However it 's not always as simple as it sounds . You have to train five days a week and you need to concentrate a lot . On the other hand I enjoy every second of it . Through all my life I have been willing to improve in this sport and since 2010 it has became a life style to me . Why will I recommend this to you ? It would definitely help you to grow and improve as a person . Hockey will change the way you see the world and you are going to start seen it with other eyes . So stop searching for the right sport , this one is for you !
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As far as I 'm concerned , public transportation is the best transport media for environmental care . In spite of some people make enough money to buy their own car , electric and hybrid cars are more expensive than traditional ones ( the ones who use gas or diesel ) so , people choose this ones and that 's because pollution is several issue that we have to deal with . The environmental care is taking strength every day , from kids too ancient people . The government and many companies are measuring the CO2 emissions which are being produced by industrial or service processes that are necessary for producing goods for the social consume . If people do n't use public transportation , they could walk , ride a bike or buy a traditional car , and that will probably take place when the destiny is far from the place where you live . From my point of view , public transportation will be very important in the future , especially in developed countries . I think the government will slow down the fee in public transportation , that could make people to use public transportation and caring the environment from CO2 emissions and prevent the global heating .
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In Coslada City Council , people are well informed about taking care environment . The city council has developed several campaigns to improve the awareness of its citizens , for example , the children learn at school how to separate the waste . There are many ecological islands . Each of them has three or four kinds of bins and they are not as far as two hundred meters . There have been several planting campaigns to plant trees and to clean the river Jarama side . Nevertheness it is never enough , because dog 's owners that they have most of the blame . Since 2008 , there are many bike paths across the city , so the citizens will be able to avoid the car and they will emit less air pollution . The organic waste is picked up every day and plastic and paper waste is picked up every other day . The most important thing in the environment care is the education of children .
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Sometime I think that Taipei is too crowded . There is no denying that the MRT in this city is such a convenient metropolitan system . However , during the rush hour , there are always have such a ruin person who has no public awareness at all . They occupy too many seats , inclouding priority seats . Furthermore , most of them are students . They do n't respect other passengers , just keep laughing and teasing each other , despite the fact that some people have told them not to do this . Moreover , I think that provide the seat to elders is also a problem . Priority seats , are preserved to those who need , not only elders but also some adult need it . Somehow , not all of them can you identify whether their bodies feel uncomfortable merely from their appearance , which lead to Some misunderstanding between them . Some people even blame them for they occupy the seats instead of offer the seat . Moreover , some old people would take this considerative action for granted and they would even command young adults or students offer their seat without manners ! In my opinion , the transportation in our city have nothing to criticize expect that . Everyone should develop the awareness of public manner .
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How many language do you speak ? Did you ever think of learning another foreign language ? Or do you want to be a polyglot ? Today it is miles time important to learn a foreign language than before . there are few reasons whcih show you why it is important to learn a foreign language today . First , if you are planning to travel to another country , it is absolutely useful to speak local language , it makes your trip more easy and comfortable . Second , for finding a good job opportunity , the business exchange is increasing in the intrenational level , if you speak a foreign language , certainly it adds some value on your profile and you can get a higher salary . Third , through learning a foreign language , you do n't only learn a language , at the time you are also getting know its culture , get to know a different culture and society different than yours 's , it enriches your knowledge .
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Over these years , there are more and more miserable accidents happened around the world . From newspapers , magazines , even foreign medium , we can easily figure out that our environment is changing severely . Many scientists infer that people 's lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years because of humans ' greedy . Humans always desire to have a more convenient and comfortable life , but forget to protect and cherish the Earth at the same time . High - technological countries have developed a great number of forests and lands to build high buildings . Various factories emit excessive carbon dioxide into the air . All the examples above will enhance the temperature and make the Earth hotter and hotter . The higher temperature enhance , the worst the living quality is . If people around the world could n't put more emphasis on our living places , we must have a dark and hopeless future . Due to the climate change , the weather is so hot that people could even have a water shortage . Losing enough water supply , people 's body will become weak and rough . In this living situation , instead of laughter and happiness , there will be more fight , hatred and sadness . Everyone lives in despair , but can not find the entrance to brightness . The terrible consequences , are caused by the humans ' unsatisfied heart . Friends , from now , let us be the members to protect and take care of our Earth !
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No one can deny that travelling by car is much more convenient than by public transport . For example , people taking car do not need to spend time waiting for the bus or subway . And this undesirable time might be not so short during holidays , due to less frequent schedule . Also , we can drive a car to any place where the public transport perhaps is not able not reach . When the bus is crowded , we have to stand , making us more exhausting especially for a long distance . Even though cars could provide us with so many advantages mentioned above , advantages of travelling by public transport should not be neglected . First , public transport is good for the environment compared to private car . As we all know , the more public transport passengers use , the less car exhausts are emitted per person . Recently , several studies have shown evidences that there is a strong relation between car exhausts and lung cancers . In other words , public transport plays an important role in protecting human beings from suffering of diseases and saving life . Second , public transport saves city spaces . As more and more people choose to live in cities , nowadays our cities become larger and more crowded . Correspondingly , the space for each person becomes more limited than before . Provided that every citizen owns a car and use it rather than public transport for every travelling chance , I suppose that our streets would become a parking place and everyone would spend more time in congesting . Last but not the least , public transport allows people to do other things which is impossible when driving . The drivers have to continuously pay attention to surroundings , resulting in a tense spirit . For a passenger , however , travelling is a complete relax . People can listen to music , take a phone call with a friend , read a fascinating book or just loot at outside . Though there are many advantages for public transport , it does not mean that public transport is the best choice for every situation . E.g. , it offers less flexibility than cars , and is less environment friendly than bicycles . Therefore , it is unreasonable to conclude that one transport can replace others . It is better that people are aware of their pros and cons and choose a fit one .
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rua francisco xavier nº3 óbidos , 25 - 4 - 2014 Dear Usa Summer Camps , I am writing in response to your advertisement for a job . I had a part - time job as babby - sitter and I take care of my 11 years old brother very often . I worked in an Easter camp too and I have already prepared lot of ativities , like " rappel " , paintball ... That is for these reasons I think I have the skills for the job . I can be contacted for a meeting in the above address . I hope you considerate me for the job , rodrigo
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Hello Paul , I enjoyed helping at the concert which was in Antaya on October . I had a great time with people who are working as a helper for the concert . I got a lot of experience from them . In the concert time all people can enjoy but nobody think about how they are preparing to concert . I saw so many interesting things during the preparetion time . For example they know everything about each helper 's jobs but on the same time they just concern own subjects . I want explain to you some interesting part from my experience . In the concert morning were excited and thinking about the concert and we decided do not think about the concert just do your job which would be given . When we were arranging concert plan we made work sharing for all of us . Some of them started design the stage , some of them checking songs volume and lights . My job was checking songs list which singers would perform . I think it was the most difficult part of the concert because of singers . They were always wanted to change some songs which was on the list . On the concert time I was really worried that something would appear suddenly . Actually everybody can be worried because they gave time and effort for it . Finally concert started and all the lights were shining like stars . It is difficult to explain that feeling . When the concert finished I felt like a bird which flying freely . Of course I had some pain in my legs because all the time I was standing . However , I like to be a volunteer on enjoyable projects . I want to invite you to our next concert which will be next month if you have any time please come and see how we are preparing for the concert . I am waiting for your email . See you !
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If I could change one thing in my life , I would like to change my house . I 'd like to have a big detached house in sububs of Artem or Vladivostok . So that I could live more freely and independently . If I had this house , I would decorat it in modern stayl . I would build there fitness gym , wardrobe -room , swimming pool . If I had such house , I would like to equip a barbecue area in my garden . I could invite my friends and relativs . Together we could spend time in pleasant atmosphere .
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Do we have better television than a few decades ago ? Do we have enough choices in the screen ? Can you imagine having only two channels and not playing the whole day ? That was only 30 years ago . An explosion of channels arrived to our houses in the eighties . In this report we will see some characteristics of today 's television . Number of Channels are gradually reducing In our country one decade ago when digital TV arrived , a lot of new channels flourished . All tv tried to get several licences to distribute their shows . In order to resolve some deficits budgets , today there are mainly two TV groups . Less channels means less choices . Internet TV is increasing It costs less money and you can choose exactly the moment , where and with who watching this or that televison program . You just follow a suggestion made bay someone . You just click on it . They have to reduce their budget Despite of changing channels we see the same news . Big Broadcast groups are used by all of them . It is expensive to keep journalists and camera all around the world . It is cheaper to buy it . Summary TV is dying . It is hard to compete with the Internet . Nowadays only national or international broadcast groups can be in the match . Perhaps political reasons help to maintain such a budget deficit . However the fact is that there is a countdown on them .
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Dear Steve , It was good to hear from you . Basically my idea is to use this trip to learn as much as possible , I mean , not only the English language but also to know more about your culture and visit nice places of your country as well . As I told you before I ca n't afford to pay this trip alone , so my father will put up some money to help me . But I wanna find a job to help him with the bills . Can you give me a hand on it ? You can also help me to find a cheap place to rent . It will be helpful if you find a small apartment near the Cambridge University where I 'll study English for 5 months . Thanks for all your help and I look forward to hearing from you . Best wishes João Matos
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In my opinion we should go to the restaurant because all people need a relaxing moment for doing work better than before . Firstly , we can discuss type of food we want to eat . Actually , students eat a lot fast food while they are studying at university , because they do n't have time to do food , for these reasons I think that the best restaurant is somowhere when they do home - made food , and a good idea is for mains course : baked potatoes , steamed vegetables and for dessert apple cake . On the other hand , we are studying architecture maybe we should choose a special restaurant , I like a charming and comfortable restaurant with a lot of windows , with a white chair , table and wall , more or less a relaxing environment but the atmosphere is very important for dinner and I think that we must vote this , because we will have a good night or not depending the type of atmosphere we choose . In conclusion , I think that this type of food and atmosphere is very for us , because normally we had spoken about book , work and studies , while with this type of environment we can speak about us , our family , our hobbies and all people get to know new something about other mates .
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Nowadays people have different views about reading books and watching movies . Some of them think that books are more interesting than them film versions . I agree with this point of view . I tend to think that there is nothing better than reading a book . Firstly , reading helps to become a well Educated Person and give a chance to develop knowledge . That 's why while you are reading you are getting a piece of information . Furthermore , books develops imagination of reader . When you are reading a picture of what is happening appears in your mind . You can imagine how heroes look Like , you can imagine different views , where the action takes place . And finally , I think it 's very important that you can easily take your book with you and start reading anytime you want . On the other hand , if you like being in company the best way for you is movies . Because you can watch it with your friends . Also many people choose movies because they like soundtracks and special effects . It 's so exciting . but all these factors are not important for me . I suppose that books are better than them film version . To sum up , I 'd like to say reading is really great thing .
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Tennis is an individual sport . Just you have to deal with the game . You can choose lots of places to play . You need a good pair of shoes , a tennis racket and some balls and person who play with . Although you should be good at playing backhand or forehand , you can lose finally . This sport is not just about a physical power . You supposed to use your brain as well . It is combination of a physical power , a technique and a mental power . As the other sports , tennis is getting more modern , fast and commercial . I mean professional tennis . Some children wanted to play tennis because of money or glory . Some of them practise tennis because of their parents . It is not fair enough . Children should play games , not just tennis , because it is fun , it develops their skills , helps to physical health and so on . You can start if you are grown up anyway . It is never too late . Either you can find a professional coach or just join your friends . Enjoy !
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