Source: Fix sentence flow: Marr is a keen runner, and completed the 2010 New York Marathon in a time of 3: 54: 18. Marr is a runner of Manchester City football club and has been seen attending games.

Target: Marr is a keen runner, and completed the 2010 New York Marathon in a time of 3: 54: 18. He is a supporter of Manchester City football club and has been seen attending games.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Such surveys do not result in a random sample. Participants are a self-selected group.

Target: Such surveys do not result in a random sample because participants are a self-selected group.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Which relocating from Hampstead in the latter part of 2006, Myles-Lea took an apartment in Wyndham Place, Marylebone. Which was his principal residence and studio until October 2011.

Target: Relocating from Hampstead in the latter part of 2006, Myles-Lea took an apartment in Wyndham Place, Marylebone, which was his principal residence and studio until October 2011.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Jonsson is a surname of Nordic origin. Son of Jon.

Target: Jonsson is a surname of Nordic origin, meaning son of Jon.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Originally opened in 1928, it was privately built by an organization led by South Norfolk businessmen Wallace and Carl Jordan. It was later renamed the Jordan Bridge, principally to honor long-standing Carl Jordan Carl Jordan.

Target: Originally opened in 1928, it was privately built by an organization led by South Norfolk businessmen Wallace and Carl Jordan. It was later renamed the Jordan Bridge, principally to honor long-standing manager Carl M. Jordan.


Source: Make the text more logical: For example, he spearheaded the efforts of the booksellers of London and Westminster to appeal a new copyright law in 1808. Although Johnson did not publish controversial political works after his imprisonment, he still undertook important publishing ventures.

Target: For example, he spearheaded the efforts of the booksellers of London and Westminster to appeal a new copyright law in 1808. Moreover, although Johnson did not publish controversial political works after his imprisonment, he still undertook important publishing ventures.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Next was Pieter Bruegel, whose religious and mythological depictions expanded the viewer's perspective of reality. Finally muralist Frank Brangwyn, an avante-garde artist-craftsman notable for his boldly-coloured murals.

Target: Next was Pieter Bruegel, whose religious and mythological depictions expanded the viewer's perspective of reality. And finally muralist Frank Brangwyn, an avante-garde artist-craftsman notable for his boldly-coloured murals.


Source: Make the text more consistent: McGuire is eligible for Australia through his father who is Australian, and New Zealand through his mother, who comes from the Schmidt Family of the village of Safotu, Savai'i. Originally from Auckland, New Zealand.

Target: McGuire is eligible for Australia through his father who is Australian, and New Zealand through his mother, who comes from the Schmidt Family of the village of Safotu, Savai'i, although originally from Auckland, New Zealand.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: JOEM was established in 1959 as the Journal of Occupational Medicine and obtained its current name in 1995. The JOEM Impact Factor is 1.861, up from 1.627 for 2015 (Journal Citation Reports Science Edition, Clarivate Analytics 2017).

Target: JOEM was established in 1959 as the Journal of Occupational Medicine and obtained its current name in 1995. The JOEM 2016 Impact Factor is 1.861, up from 1.627 for 2015 (Journal Citation Reports Science Edition, Clarivate Analytics 2017).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The railway station at Bira on the Sealdah-Bangaon line is located nearby. The Sealdah-Bangaon line is part the Kolkata Suburban Railway railway system.

Target: The railway station at Bira on the Sealdah-Bangaon line, which is part the Kolkata Suburban Railway railway system, is located nearby.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Joyriders or other car thieves often gain access to a locked car with just a flathead screwdriver. Modern cars have systems to prevent a screwdriver from opening locks.

Target: Joyriders or other car thieves often gain access to a locked car with just a flathead screwdriver, although modern cars have systems to prevent a screwdriver from opening locks.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He was also the mastermind of Operation Rosario, the Argentine invasion of the Falklands. In 2010 he was put under house arrest for crimes against humanity (lesa humanidad) committed in Argentine during the 1976-1980 dictatorship.

Target: He was also the mastermind of Operation Rosario, the Argentine invasion of the Falklands. In 2010 he was put under house arrest for crimes against humanity (lesa humanidad) committed in Argentina during the 1976-1980 dictatorship.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In the following year Al-Hussan Modern Girls School was opened. Al-Hussan Modern Girls School is the first girls' school in the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia.

Target: In the following year Al-Hussan Modern Girls School, the first girls' school in the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, was opened.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Averill's Union cavalry. Half the size of the Confederate cavalry.

Target: Averill's Union cavalry, although half the size of the Confederate cavalry.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Quastel elected to study chemistry. Quastel received a baccalaureate from Imperial College London in 1921.

Target: Electing to study chemistry, Quastel received a baccalaureate from Imperial College London in 1921.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The center is one of few facilities in the United States making use of aversives, and the only using the GED, in its treatment to punish undesirable behaviors. Existing protections in place include :

Target: The center is one of few facilities in the United States making use of aversives, and the only using the GED, in its treatment to punish undesirable behaviors. However, existing protections in place include :


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There is a 3 month time limit on seeking judicial review, (see Courts Reform (Scotland) Act 2014). If proper administration is prejudiced by delay on the part of the pursuer.

Target: There is a 3 month time limit on seeking judicial review, (see Courts Reform (Scotland) Act 2014) although if proper administration is prejudiced by delay on the part of the pursuer.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jump up ^ Thomas Sowell 2007. Thomas Sowell is the Education of Minority Children Retrieved December 12.

Target: Jump up ^ Thomas Sowell, The Education of Minority Children Retrieved December 12, 2007.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He sometimes implied that he did not write it. Modern scholarship generally overrides this with internal evidence, lack of a credible alternative author, and several cautious statements in a later correspondence.

Target: He sometimes implied that he did not write it, but modern scholarship generally overrides this with internal evidence, lack of a credible alternative author, and several cautious statements in a later correspondence.


Source: Make the text clearer: However things don't go to plan when Bear finds the pain of having a tattoo too much to cope with, will he ditch the tattoo. Will Bear go through with it.

Target: However things don't go to plan when Bear finds the pain of having a tattoo too much to cope with, will he ditch the tattoo or will he go through with it.


Source: Fix coherence: During his educational tenure at Kings' College, Oxford, in the early 1920s, where he did his Ph. D. in history, Sitaram married an English lady Ms. Ethel. They had a son Sitaram, born in May 1925.

Target: During his educational tenure at Kings' College, Oxford, in the early 1920s, where he did his Ph. D. in history, Sitaram married an English lady Ms. Ethel. They had a son Krishna Sitaram, born in May 1925.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This proliferation of mais resulted in numerous claimants to the throne and led to a series of internecine wars. Around 1380 the Bulala forced Mai Umar Idrismi to abandon Njimi and move the Kanembu people to Bornu on the western edge of Lake Chad.

Target: This proliferation of mais resulted in numerous claimants to the throne and led to a series of internecine wars. Finally, around 1380 the Bulala forced Mai Umar Idrismi to abandon Njimi and move the Kanembu people to Bornu on the western edge of Lake Chad.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The high school baseball team in Kagi (modern-day Chiayi) qualified to represent the island at Koshien in 1931. The island at Koshien is japan's long-running nationwide high school baseball tournament.

Target: The high school baseball team in Kagi (modern-day Chiayi) qualified to represent the island at Koshien, Japan's long-running nationwide high school baseball tournament, in 1931.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Sony Music Japan International recognized her talents. Together Sony Music Japan International released her first single (KISEKI Song of Love) in October 2004.

Target: Sony Music Japan International recognized her talents and together they released her first single (KISEKI Song of Love) in October 2004.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Proclamations asking the workers to return to their jobs, promises of new elections. Even the threat of capital punishment for strikers remained without results and the putsch collapsed on 17 March, four days after it had begun.

Target: Proclamations asking the workers to return to their jobs, promises of new elections and even the threat of capital punishment for strikers remained without results and the putsch collapsed on 17 March, four days after it had begun.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Doctor Abhay is very fond of Neha and proposes to marry her in exchange for her mother's operation for free. Doctors are able to provide free services to their relatives.

Target: Doctor Abhay is very fond of Neha and proposes to marry her in exchange for her mother's operation for free because doctors are able to provide free services to their relatives.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Mars escorted her to the airport in handcuffs. Mars briefed local security officers on Kate's fugitive past and revealed his locked carry-on case containing four firearms (and a fifth in an ankle holster).

Target: Escorting her to the airport in handcuffs, Mars briefed local security officers on Kate's fugitive past and revealed his locked carry-on case containing four firearms (and a fifth in an ankle holster).


Source: Make the text more consistent: In addition, she is the president of the International Monetary Fund Administrative Tribunal and a member of the World Bank Sanctions Board. president was the inaugural president, from 2008 to 2012, of the United Nations Internal Justice Council.

Target: In addition, she is the president of the International Monetary Fund Administrative Tribunal and a member of the World Bank Sanctions Board. She was the inaugural chairperson, from 2008 to 2012, of the United Nations Internal Justice Council.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Wallis received an honorable mention for her sculpture at the Exposition Universalle. Wallis was not only and exceptional Wallis, but a painter and a poet.

Target: Wallis received an honorable mention for her sculpture at the Exposition Universalle. She was not only and exceptional sculptor, but a painter and a poet.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Another contribution was made by the Almaty Metro construction brigade from Kazakhstan. By the late 2004, a total of eight tunnel boring mechanisms were in operation.

Target: Another contribution was made by the Almaty Metro construction brigade from Kazakhstan. Thus, by the late 2004, a total of eight tunnel boring mechanisms were in operation.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: East Keilor Football Club competes in the Essendon District Football League. East Keilor Football Club is an Australian Rules football team.

Target: East Keilor Football Club, an Australian Rules football team, competes in the Essendon District Football League.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He carried the high weight of 122 pounds. He turned back a strong early challenge from Richter Scale and won by three lengths from Trafalgar.

Target: Carrying the high weight of 122 pounds, he turned back a strong early challenge from Richter Scale and won by three lengths from Trafalgar.


Source: Fix coherence: If an element was missing. An idea seemed unfeasible, the panel let students know.

Target: If an element was missing or an idea seemed unfeasible, the panel let students know.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Credited by fellow legislators for showing brains and hard work in his first term in office. Ambler exhibited an independent streak that rubbed some conservatives the wrong way.

Target: Although credited by fellow legislators for showing brains and hard work in his first term in office, Ambler exhibited an independent streak that rubbed some conservatives the wrong way.


Source: Make the text coherent: Keyence is fabless (fabrication-less) -. Keyence is a Keyence.

Target: Keyence is fabless (fabrication-less)-although it is a manufacturer.


Source: Make the text more logical: These items were specifically targeted at women in the Soviet Union with the idea that they relieved women of their domestic burden. An interest in changing the western image of a dowdy Russian woman led to the cultural acceptance of beauty products.

Target: These items were specifically targeted at women in the Soviet Union with the idea that they relieved women of their domestic burden. Additionally an interest in changing the western image of a dowdy Russian woman led to the cultural acceptance of beauty products.


Source: Make the text clearer: KiKAR (also known as Kikeya) is. Was, a Swahili pidgin spoken among the King's African Rifles (KAR) of British colonial East Africa (Kenya, Uganda, Malawi).

Target: KiKAR (also known as Kikeya) is, or was, a Swahili pidgin spoken among the King's African Rifles (KAR) of British colonial East Africa (Kenya, Uganda, Malawi).


Source: Make the text coherent: It concerned section 41 of the Australian Constitution. Whether that section gave a person who had the right to vote in elections in South Australia the right to vote in elections at a federal level.

Target: It concerned section 41 of the Australian Constitution, and whether that section gave a person who had the right to vote in elections in South Australia the right to vote in elections at a federal level.


Source: Fix coherence: Kirinyaga -- Koriba kills a newborn child. Traditional beliefs dictate that Kirinyaga is a Kirinyaga.

Target: Kirinyaga -- Koriba kills a newborn child because traditional beliefs dictate that it is a demon.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This moorland area mostly bounds Saddleworth Greater Manchester. Saddleworth is a traditional part of Yorkshire but now locally governed from Oldham.

Target: This moorland area mostly bounds Saddleworth, a traditional part of Yorkshire but now locally governed from Oldham, Greater Manchester.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Kishore Lulla is the Chairman of Eros International plc Los Angeles. Eros International plc is the first Indian Media & entertainment company listed on New York stock exchange and a board member for the School of Film at the University of California.

Target: Kishore Lulla is the Chairman of Eros International plc, the first Indian Media & entertainment company listed on New York stock exchange and a board member for the School of Film at the University of California, Los Angeles.


Source: Make the text more logical: In the 1920s, the relations between Lithuania and Germany under Foreign Minister Gustav Stresemann were rather normal. Tensions began to rise after Adolf Hitler came to power.

Target: In the 1920s, the relations between Lithuania and Germany under Foreign Minister Gustav Stresemann were rather normal. However, tensions began to rise after Adolf Hitler came to power.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: First formally articulated in 1970. Tichenor, Donohue, and Olien note that the knowledge gap hypothesis has been implicit throughout the mass communication literature.

Target: Although first formally articulated in 1970, Tichenor, Donohue, and Olien note that the knowledge gap hypothesis has been implicit throughout the mass communication literature.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The City of Knox in Victoria, Australia. (Also known as the City of Knox )

Target: The City of Knox in Victoria, Australia. (Also known as the Knox City Council )


Source: Make the text more consistent: Its new owner, Ranjit Singh, willed the diamond to the East India Company administered Hindu Jagannath Temple in Puri, in modern-day Odisha, India. After Ranjit Singh's death in 1839, Ranjit Singh's will was not executed.

Target: Its new owner, Ranjit Singh, willed the diamond to the East India Company administered Hindu Jagannath Temple in Puri, in modern-day Odisha, India. However, after his death in 1839, his will was not executed.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It was a 250-kilogram (550 lb) spacecraft and was used to conduct tests involving atomic clocks. A 250-kilogram (550 lb) spacecraft was built by the Yuzhnoye Design Bureau.

Target: It was a 250-kilogram (550 lb) spacecraft, which was built by the Yuzhnoye Design Bureau, and was used to conduct tests involving atomic clocks.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: His preferred grip on his opponent's mawashi was migi-yotsu right hand inside position. Migi-yotsu is a left hand outside.

Target: His preferred grip on his opponent's mawashi was migi-yotsu, a left hand outside, right hand inside position.


Source: Make the text clearer: But fossil clades based solely on teeth often lead to difficulties (Ausktribosphenidae are a good example), and it is not possible to draw significant conclusions about mammalian evolution from the Kuehneotheriidae. Some more complete skeletons are found.

Target: But fossil clades based solely on teeth often lead to difficulties (Ausktribosphenidae are a good example), and it is not possible to draw significant conclusions about mammalian evolution from the Kuehneotheriidae unless some more complete skeletons are found.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: These workers are badged and have limited access to the island like their counterparts on Kwajalein. Access is granted for islanders who need to use the air terminal to fly to Kwajalein.

Target: These workers are badged and have limited access to the island like their counterparts on Kwajalein, although access is granted for islanders who need to use the air terminal to fly to Kwajalein.


Source: Make the text more logical: The primary advantage of a kytoon is that it remains in a reasonably stable position above the tether point, irrespective of the strength of wind,. Ordinary balloons and kites are less stable.

Target: The primary advantage of a kytoon is that it remains in a reasonably stable position above the tether point, irrespective of the strength of wind, whereas ordinary balloons and kites are less stable.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Those in the Serbian LGBT community feared for their lives, due to severe cruelty by people with homophobic mindsets. Risks of violence continued to be high in Serbian against the LGBT community.

Target: Those in the Serbian LGBT community feared for their lives, due to severe cruelty by people with homophobic mindsets. Risks of violence continued to be high in Serbia against the LGBT community.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: These fossils were packaged in boxes at the construction site and moved to a compound behind Pit 91, on Page Museum property. Construction could continue.

Target: These fossils were packaged in boxes at the construction site and moved to a compound behind Pit 91, on Page Museum property so that construction could continue.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: La Salle has sent 16 athletes to the Olympic a total of 22 times. La Salle athletes have won a total of six Olympic medals (four gold, and two bronze) and have appeared in eleven Olympic.

Target: La Salle has sent 16 athletes to the Olympic a total of 22 times. La Salle athletes have won a total of six Olympic medals (four gold, and two bronze) and have appeared in eleven Olympic Games.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Lathrop's father, William Lathrop of Illinois, had helped found the Republican Party in 1854. Lathrop herself was a Lathrop of Vassar College.

Target: Lathrop's father, William Lathrop of Illinois, had helped found the Republican Party in 1854, while she herself was a graduate of Vassar College.


Source: Fix coherence: Traditionally, Japan has had strict laws regarding the employment of foreigners. Exceptions were made for certain occupational categories.

Target: Traditionally, Japan has had strict laws regarding the employment of foreigners, although exceptions were made for certain occupational categories.


Source: Make the text more logical: 45,000 members were given a vote in the leadership election. Any Dutch citizen was able to purchase a temporary membership for 2 euros and gain access to the election within days of their registration.

Target: 45,000 members were given a vote in the leadership election. Additionally, any Dutch citizen was able to purchase a temporary membership for 2 euros and gain access to the election within days of their registration.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The frustratingly minimal surviving documentation of her life make this difficult to assert with confidence. One can make logical connections that the 'close union' she shared with Kendall, and with Astell, were not entirely platonic.

Target: The frustratingly minimal surviving documentation of her life make this difficult to assert with confidence. Nevertheless, one can make logical connections that the 'close union' she shared with Kendall, and with Astell, were not entirely platonic.


Source: Make the text clearer: This was ostensibly to create better habitat for trout habitat up to 40 miles downtsream. Residents near Lake Almanor became concerned that the curtain would help the trout downstream at the cost of raising the water temperatures of shallow Lake Almanor and harming its fish population.

Target: This was ostensibly to create better habitat for trout habitat up to 40 miles downtsream. However, residents near Lake Almanor became concerned that the curtain would help the trout downstream at the cost of raising the water temperatures of shallow Lake Almanor and harming its fish population.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This is exactly what would appear if a large lake had slowly evaporated. Because some layers contained gypsum, a sulfate which forms in relatively fresh water, life could have formed in the crater.

Target: This is exactly what would appear if a large lake had slowly evaporated. Moreover, because some layers contained gypsum, a sulfate which forms in relatively fresh water, life could have formed in the crater.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The total volume of the basins is equivalent to a depth of 1.2 meters spread evenly over the Martian surface. This amount is a small fraction of the current water ice stores on Martian.

Target: The total volume of the basins is equivalent to a depth of 1.2 meters spread evenly over the Martian surface. However, this amount is a small fraction of the current water ice stores on Mars.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It has not yet been conclusively determined to be a pre-Clovis site. Continued excavation may find pre-Clovis tools and evidence that more conclusively finds that the mammoth died as a result of hunting.

Target: It has not yet been conclusively determined to be a pre-Clovis site, but continued excavation may find pre-Clovis tools and evidence that more conclusively finds that the mammoth died as a result of hunting.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The main station consists of five platform tracks: tracks 1, 2 and 5 are served by trains on the Queich Valley Railway. Tracks 1 and 5 are rarely used.

Target: The main station consists of five platform tracks: tracks 1, 2 and 5 are served by trains on the Queich Valley Railway, although tracks 1 and 5 are rarely used.


Source: Make the text more coherent: However, photoperiod only predicts overwintering in areas where day length effects the maturation of milkweeds. No overwintering occurs in tropical regions as it does not supply an adaptive advantage.

Target: However, photoperiod only predicts overwintering in areas where day length effects the maturation of milkweeds. Therefore, no overwintering occurs in tropical regions as it does not supply an adaptive advantage.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A key component in lateral force transmission in skeletal muscle is the extracellular matrix (ECM). Skeletal muscle is a complex biological muscle that is composed of muscle fibers and an ECM consisting of the epimysium, perimysium, and endomysium.

Target: A key component in lateral force transmission in skeletal muscle is the extracellular matrix (ECM). Skeletal muscle is a complex biological material that is composed of muscle fibers and an ECM consisting of the epimysium, perimysium, and endomysium.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He proceeded to Rome. He entered the Society of Jesus in 1604, and became a very distinguished member of the English province.

Target: Proceeding to Rome, he entered the Society of Jesus in 1604, and became a very distinguished member of the English province.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: While Woods called himself an architect he never received a degree in architecture. He Woods not ever licensed to practice architecture.

Target: While Woods called himself an architect he never received a degree in architecture nor was he ever licensed to practice architecture.


Source: Make the text clearer: Leinster trailed at half time. Leinster scored 27 unanswered points in the second half to beat Northampton 33 -- 22 and claim their second European crown with the biggest comeback in European Cup final history.

Target: Trailing at half time, Leinster scored 27 unanswered points in the second half to beat Northampton 33 -- 22 and claim their second European crown with the biggest comeback in European Cup final history.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Leptaxis vetusa is a species of air-breathing land snail the typical snails. Air-breathing land snail is a terrestrial pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Helicidae.

Target: Leptaxis vetusa is a species of air-breathing land snail, a terrestrial pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Helicidae, the typical snails.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bats, such as Rhinolophus ferrumequinum, can hear this sound. Both the male's high-frequency calling and its stationary position leave it vulnerable to attacks by bats.

Target: Bats, such as Rhinolophus ferrumequinum, can hear this sound. Thus, both the male's high-frequency calling and its stationary position leave it vulnerable to attacks by bats.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: However, bees are immune to the insecticide's harmful effects. Even if the bees ingest the wax.

Target: However, bees are immune to the insecticide's harmful effects because even if the bees ingest the wax.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: On February 24, 1874 Lewis County officials appropriated $10,000 for construction of the current courthouse. Proponents of relocating the county seat from Monticello seized the opportunity to press their case.

Target: On February 24, 1874 Lewis County officials appropriated $10,000 for construction of the current courthouse. However, proponents of relocating the county seat from Monticello seized the opportunity to press their case.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Liemar was one of many bishops who was irked by Gregory VII's encroachment of episcopal autonomy. In a letter to Bishop Hezilo of Hildesheim, one complained that Gregory VII Gregory VII was ordering Gregory VII's bishops about 'as though they were his baliffs'.

Target: Liemar was one of many bishops who was irked by Gregory VII's encroachment of episcopal autonomy. In a letter to Bishop Hezilo of Hildesheim, Liemar complained that Pope Gregory VII was ordering his bishops about 'as though they were his baliffs'.


Source: Make the text more logical: Lihirians follow traditional belief systems. Official census records indicate that 99 % of the PNG population are Christians.

Target: Lihirians follow traditional belief systems, although official census records indicate that 99 % of the PNG population are Christians.


Source: Fix coherence errors: LCGs are not intended, and must not be used, for cryptographic applications ; use a cryptographically secure pseudo-random number generator for such applications. For some applications LCGs may be a good option.

Target: LCGs are not intended, and must not be used, for cryptographic applications ; use a cryptographically secure pseudo-random number generator for such applications. Nevertheless, for some applications LCGs may be a good option.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is 26 miles 23 chains (42.31 km) from London Bridge. Off peak trains run to and from London Victoria.

Target: It is 26 miles 23 chains (42.31 km) from London Bridge, although off peak trains run to and from London Victoria.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Other Wenders' films featuring Kreuzer include Alice in the Cities (1974) and Kings of the Road (1976). Kreuzer features in Christopher Petit's Wenders-influenced Radio On (1979) which was shot in the UK and is predominantly in English.

Target: Other Wenders' films featuring Kreuzer include Alice in the Cities (1974) and Kings of the Road (1976). She additionally features in Christopher Petit's Wenders-influenced Radio On (1979) which was shot in the UK and is predominantly in English.


Source: Fix coherence errors: She led the U.S. team in scoring during the 2004 Olympic Games. During her third Olympic completion, she became the U.S.'s all-time leading scorer, rebounder, and shot blocker in Olympic competition.

Target: She led the U.S. team in scoring during the 2004 Olympic Games. During her third Olympic completion, she became the USA's all-time leading scorer, rebounder, and shot blocker in Olympic competition.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Judge Willem Knutsen and the court viewed Lisbet as more guilty of witchcraft than Ole. She was sentenced to be burned alive at the stake, while her husband was sentenced to be beheaded.

Target: Judge Willem Knutsen and the court viewed Lisbet as more guilty of witchcraft than Ole. Therefore, she was sentenced to be burned alive at the stake, while her husband was sentenced to be beheaded.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It owing to the large number of similarly-named cities, howevered. It was necessary to specify where this one was located.

Target: Owing to the large number of similarly-named cities, however, it was necessary to specify where this one was located.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Over its sixty-year history, Lisp has spawned many variations on the core theme of an S-expression language. Each given dialect may have several implementations -- for instance, there are more than a dozen implementations of Lisp.

Target: Over its sixty-year history, Lisp has spawned many variations on the core theme of an S-expression language. Moreover, each given dialect may have several implementations -- for instance, there are more than a dozen implementations of Common Lisp.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Two atoms that appeared in different places in source code but were written in exactly the same way represented the same object,. Each list was a separate object that could be altered independently of other lists and could be distinguished from other lists by comparison operators.

Target: Two atoms that appeared in different places in source code but were written in exactly the same way represented the same object, whereas each list was a separate object that could be altered independently of other lists and could be distinguished from other lists by comparison operators.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: While various regulatory agencies were responsible for overseeing components of AIG, there was no agency in charge of their most risky activities --. So it was said by some -- despite primary Office of Thrift Supervision oversight, which was hampered by other issues.

Target: While various regulatory agencies were responsible for overseeing components of AIG, there was no agency in charge of their most risky activities -- or so it was said by some -- despite primary Office of Thrift Supervision oversight, which was hampered by other issues.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Used by up to 300 investor-owned utilities world-wide from 1926. Use declined in the 1970s and few remain.

Target: Used by up to 300 investor-owned utilities world-wide from 1926, although use declined in the 1970s and few remain.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: When the order came down, he liquidated his entire business, paid off his depositors, and joined Galt's strike. Galt is the legal Galt of the land where Galt is located.

Target: When the order came down, he liquidated his entire business, paid off his depositors, and joined Galt's strike. He is the legal owner of the land where Galt's Gulch is located.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The British Army's Brigade of Gurkhas, a group of units composed of Nepalese soldiers --. Originally including British officers.

Target: The British Army's Brigade of Gurkhas, a group of units composed of Nepalese soldiers -- although originally including British officers.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He is captain of the basketball team. Captain is the tallest captain at school and on the cross country team though it is clear captain lacks athleticism.

Target: He is captain of the basketball team because he is the tallest guy at school and on the cross country team though it is clear he lacks athleticism.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This makes a deliveryman sign off a bunch of packages to him thinking he is the doorman. doorman opens all of the packages, which contain autographed balls, thinking they are all from doorman.

Target: This makes a deliveryman sign off a bunch of packages to him thinking he is the doorman. George opens all of the packages, which contain autographed balls, thinking they are all from him.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Man signs himself and her up for a marathon to support a trip to Oman. Although she doesn't want to, the professor has 'anonymous donors' forcing her to run in the marathon.

Target: The Man signs himself and her up for a marathon to support a trip to Oman. But although she doesn't want to, the professor has 'anonymous donors' forcing her to run in the marathon.


Source: Make the text more logical: But, as it turns out, there are lots of rules about what you can and can't do and George is a bad follower. Things change when follower and Allie decide to build a castle in the classroom based on a book they read.

Target: But, as it turns out, there are lots of rules about what you can and can't do and George is a bad follower. But things change when George and Allie decide to build a castle in the classroom based on a book they read.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: George does not have enough clay, shaving cream is too runny, and peanut butter is too sticky. With the recent rain, they try to make a statue out of mud.

Target: George does not have enough clay, shaving cream is too runny, and peanut butter is too sticky. Eventually, with the recent rain, they try to make a statue out of mud.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Our own world, where superheroes exist only in fiction. Its sole superhero only exists in the form of a comic book.

Target: Our own world, where superheroes exist only in fiction. Thus, its sole superhero only exists in the form of a comic book.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: An old friend, Neville, turns up informing everyone is now a detective. Someone gives Neville Neville's 's first case to solve by vandalising the shop friend Neville works out it is one of the regulars in the shop, but who did it?

Target: An old friend, Neville, turns up informing everyone is now a detective, but someone gives him his first case to solve by vandalising the shop and Neville works out it is one of the regulars in the shop, but who did it?


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is revealed in one episode that Rex was left at Max's house. Max's father Max him to be near a real family.

Target: It is revealed in one episode that Rex was left at Max's house because his father wanted him to be near a real family.


Source: Fix coherence: There are 28 divisional secretariats divided in Sabaragamuwa Province by district. Sabaragamuwa Province are listed below.

Target: There are 28 divisional secretariats divided in Sabaragamuwa Province, which are listed below, by district.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Imogen subsequently chooses to stay with Kingsley, wanting to be his only girlfriend. Imogen's plan backfires, as she Kingsley Kingsley in bed with a man, but he tells her that she can join them.

Target: Imogen subsequently chooses to stay with Kingsley, wanting to be his only girlfriend. However her plan backfires, as she finds Kingsley in bed with a man, but he tells her that she can join them.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Dalziel made a cameo appearance, therefore his character was not named. He Dalziel not credited Dalziel's his role.

Target: Dalziel made a cameo appearance, therefore his character was not named, nor was he credited for his role.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: May, who is unable to have children, never quite got over it especially as during her pregnancy, Dawn agreed that May could adopt Summer. Dawn changed Dawn's mind and refused to let May Summer Summer.

Target: May, who is unable to have children, never quite got over it especially as during her pregnancy, Dawn agreed that May could adopt Summer. However, Dawn changed her mind and refused to let May take Summer.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: When Ronnie finds a dress she likes, Olive returns with them to The Queen Victoria pub to make adjustments. Whilst Olive is making the adjustments, Ronnie tears the dress off and runs out of the Vic when the conversation turns to her father.

Target: When Ronnie finds a dress she likes, Olive returns with them to The Queen Victoria pub to make adjustments. However, whilst Olive is making the adjustments, Ronnie tears the dress off and runs out of the Vic when the conversation turns to her father.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Natsu and Gajeel are pit in a two-on-two battle against Sting and Rogue, whom they completely overpower. Determined to fulfill Natsu's promise to his Exceed friend Lector to Natsu Natsu, Sting activates Dragon Force and fights both him Gajeel Gajeel alone.

Target: Natsu and Gajeel are pit in a two-on-two battle against Sting and Rogue, whom they completely overpower. Determined to fulfill his promise to his Exceed friend Lector to defeat Natsu, Sting activates Dragon Force and fights both him and Gajeel alone.


Source: Make the text clearer: Lucy and Yukino summon the twelve spirits of the Zodiac, who successfully close Eclipse. Seven dragons are able to come through.

Target: Lucy and Yukino summon the twelve spirits of the Zodiac, who successfully close Eclipse. However, seven dragons are able to come through.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Wendy absorbs the residual magic energy around Face. Wendy achieves Dragon Force and defeats Ezel, destroying Face in the process.

Target: Absorbing the residual magic energy around Face, Wendy achieves Dragon Force and defeats Ezel, destroying Face in the process.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Ma Cipriani only referred to Dan Sucho as Sucho. His tombstone at the Liberty City cemetery reads Sucho.

Target: Ma Cipriani only referred to Dan Sucho as Sucho, although his tombstone at the Liberty City cemetery reads Dan Sucho.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Samuel Sullivan was an Irish immigrant in the early 20th century, instantly embracing the United States as the land of opportunity. Samuel Sullivan witnessed the Sportsmaster defeat Green Lantern with a wooden baseball bat, and lost all faith when Sportsmaster destroyed immigrant's store.

Target: Samuel Sullivan was an Irish immigrant in the early 20th century, instantly embracing the United States as the land of opportunity. He witnessed the Sportsmaster defeat Green Lantern with a wooden baseball bat, and lost all faith when Sportsmaster destroyed Sullivan's store.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Traitor joined the criminal Bloody Joe Tuscano until he could replenish his powers. Sur arrived, and alongside Marshall Henry Lee Jordan, defeated Bloody and Traitor, destroying Bloody's weapons and imprisoning Traitor in a pocket dimension in the ring.

Target: Traitor joined the criminal Bloody Joe Tuscano until he could replenish his powers. Eventually, Sur arrived, and alongside Marshall Henry Lee Jordan, defeated Joe and Traitor, destroying Joe's weapons and imprisoning Traitor in a pocket dimension in the ring.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Before anyone else gets there, he's reunited with Sasaki. Why is she flanked by the culprit who led the kidnapping of Mikuru and another mysterious girl whose presence is weird?!

Target: Before anyone else gets there, he's reunited with Sasaki. But why is she flanked by the culprit who led the kidnapping of Mikuru and another mysterious girl whose presence is weird?!


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Cameron later finishes with Celine completely. Celine is now a senior Celine after blackmailing Dr. S'avage.

Target: Cameron later finishes with Celine completely. Celine is now a senior nurse after blackmailing Dr. S'avage.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He and Nicks are childhood friends,. At 16 he is older than Nicks by three years.

Target: He and Nicks are childhood friends, and although at 16 he is older than Nicks by three years.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Initially, Chic seems to be bossy and cold. Towards the end of the series, Chic expresses Chic's feelings for Carabona.

Target: Initially, Chic seems to be bossy and cold. However, towards the end of the series, he expresses his feelings for Carabona.


Source: Make the text more logical: It is soon apparent that Aoi harbours feelings for both the Aiba brothers. Building on her relationships with the boys was impeded by her lack of will to deal with her feelings.

Target: It is soon apparent that Aoi harbours feelings for both the Aiba brothers. However, building on her relationships with the boys was impeded by her lack of will to deal with her feelings.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Lou Todd is Andy Pipkin's caregiver but is often taken advantage of by Andy in various ways. Deep down Andy Pipkin loves Andy Pipkin.

Target: Lou Todd is Andy Pipkin's caregiver but is often taken advantage of by Andy in various ways, although deep down Andy loves Lou.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Iris Robinson -- (Strangford, Democratic Unionist Party) had announced on 28 December 2009 that she would not seek re-election. Subsequent events led Iris Robinson to resign Iris Robinson's seat on 13 January 2010.

Target: Iris Robinson -- (Strangford, Democratic Unionist Party) had announced on 28 December 2009 that she would not seek re-election. However subsequent events led her to resign her seat on 13 January 2010.


Source: Make the text clearer: Ayesha realizes that Abdul Qadir has fallen in love with Zareen and tries to ask him if he does but he ignores that. When Abdul Qadir is alone, AQ realizes that Abdul Qadir loves Zareen.

Target: Ayesha realizes that Abdul Qadir has fallen in love with Zareen and tries to ask him if he does but he ignores that. However, when he is alone, AQ realizes that he loves Zareen.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Iguana tries to hypnotize Spider-Man but his special lenses don't allow it. He then tackles Spider-Man out of the reptile house and Spider-Man gets a call from Spider-Man's Aunt May.

Target: Iguana tries to hypnotize Spider-Man but his special lenses don't allow it. He then tackles Spider-Man out of the reptile house and Peter gets a call from his Aunt May.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: When they do locate the Obelisk, Isabelle touches it, despite Coulson warning her not to. Isabelle's arm begins to solidify in stone Isabelle's her pain.

Target: When they do locate the Obelisk, Isabelle touches it, despite Coulson warning her not to, and her arm begins to solidify in stone causing her pain.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Eventually, Cissy and her father, Professor Daniel Ironwood, were kidnapped by the Crimson Dynamo due to her father having invented an anti-matter bomb. Professor was forced to recreate the bomb for the Russians, or else Cissy would be killed.

Target: Eventually, Cissy and her father, Professor Daniel Ironwood, were kidnapped by the Crimson Dynamo due to her father having invented an anti-matter bomb. Daniel was forced to recreate the bomb for the Russians, or else Cissy would be killed.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Because of this, her arms and legs can be detached from her body and still move, which she has used several times to help her friends. Sometimes her limbs can still fly off suddenly when she is tense, scared or angry.

Target: Because of this, her arms and legs can be detached from her body and still move, which she has used several times to help her friends. However, sometimes her limbs can still fly off suddenly when she is tense, scared or angry.


Source: Fix sentence flow: After recovering from his injuries, Izuku attempts to cheer him up, to the point of sharing with him parts of his secret. News that All Might is teaching at U.A.

Target: After recovering from his injuries, Izuku attempts to cheer him up, to the point of sharing with him parts of his secret. Meanwhile, news that All Might is teaching at U.A.


Source: Make the text more coherent: As the end of the Cavalry Battle approaches, Izuku's team have a heated confrontation with the team led by Todoroki. Despite losing the first place to them, team earn a place in the next round by working together.

Target: As the end of the Cavalry Battle approaches, Izuku's team have a heated confrontation with the team led by Todoroki and despite losing the first place to them, they earn a place in the next round by working together.


Source: Make the text clearer: They assume he is a business student. Owen reveals business student is the business student.

Target: They assume he is a business student, but Owen reveals he is the lecturer.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Meanwhile, Jack is feeling ill and is hospitalised with some unknown ailment, maybe it is connected to his new friendship with James Farlow. As an apology for his lack of support, Gerry gets Brian a new dog.

Target: Meanwhile, Jack is feeling ill and is hospitalised with some unknown ailment, maybe it is connected to his new friendship with James Farlow. In the end, as an apology for his lack of support, Gerry gets Brian a new dog.


Source: Fix coherence: As Lane comes to terms with life after UCOS, Esther asks him to help one of her book club friends find her missing brother --. Will his nose for the truth get him into further trouble?

Target: As Lane comes to terms with life after UCOS, Esther asks him to help one of her book club friends find her missing brother -- but will his nose for the truth get him into further trouble?


Source: Fix coherence errors: His death was originally thought to be the result of a burglary gone wrong. New evidence suggests Baxter was a police informant while conducting underhanded deals.

Target: His death was originally thought to be the result of a burglary gone wrong, but new evidence suggests Baxter was a police informant while conducting underhanded deals.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Is the story pure fantasy. Does her squeaky clean public image mask a terrible secret?

Target: Is the story pure fantasy or does her squeaky clean public image mask a terrible secret?


Source: Fix sentence flow: Reona is put into class 1-A. Everyone admires how cute Reona is but is confused as to Reona's gender.

Target: Reona is put into class 1-A and everyone admires how cute he is but is confused as to his gender.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Meanwhile NonSugar still have no idea what to do for a making drama, fortunately after a mishap with a dessert trolley Non comes up with an idea. Without any time to rehearse it NonSugar take to the stage and decide to perform it on the spot.

Target: Meanwhile NonSugar still have no idea what to do for a making drama, fortunately after a mishap with a dessert trolley Non comes up with an idea. But without any time to rehearse it NonSugar take to the stage and decide to perform it on the spot.


Source: Fix coherence: Dorothy and the others pursue the crow to the play park, where it drops the Priticket. Just as Anko is about to give her mitten to Miruku the crow steals it and flies to its nest on top of a church.

Target: Dorothy and the others pursue the crow to the play park, where it drops the Priticket. However just as Anko is about to give her mitten to Miruku the crow steals it and flies to its nest on top of a church.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: When Laala wakes up she finds the old Pripara has come back. Something is different about the place.

Target: When Laala wakes up she finds the old Pripara has come back, but something is different about the place.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Ham was able to follow the trail and lead everyone to Laala and the Genius. Before they can apprehend the Genius they get distracted by the pile of sunflower seeds and he escapes.

Target: Ham was able to follow the trail and lead everyone to Laala and the Genius. However before they can apprehend the Genius they get distracted by the pile of sunflower seeds and he escapes.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Jump up ^ The current federation source lists the 200 backstroke record as 2: 12.63 by Suriano from the 2014 World Championships. Results from the meet show that Suriano went a 2: 04.58

Target: Jump up ^ The current federation source lists the 200 backstroke record as 2: 12.63 by Suriano from the 2014 World Championships. However, results from the meet show that Suriano went a 2: 04.58


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Tekla regained herself. Tekla became a valuable member of the Alliance thanks to her broad knowledge.

Target: Regaining herself, Tekla became a valuable member of the Alliance thanks to her broad knowledge.


Source: Make the text clearer: Claire is a med school classmate of both Jack and Cody, but also a high school friend of Becky. high school friend and Jack are in the study group, and Becky wants to turn Jack straight, so Becky can have a relationship with Jack.

Target: Claire is a med school classmate of both Jack and Cody, but also a high school friend of Becky. Claire and Jack are in the study group, and she wants to turn Jack straight, so she can have a relationship with him.


Source: Fix sentence flow: They likely make love. That is never shown.

Target: They likely make love although that is never shown.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She owes a debt of honor to Dwight for saving her life. Dwight is the only Dwight she interacts with on a friendly basis.

Target: She owes a debt of honor to Dwight for saving her life, and he is the only male she interacts with on a friendly basis.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mark locates the balloon. Mark climbs down the ladder with a grappling hook but that fails.

Target: Locating the balloon, Mark climbs down the ladder with a grappling hook but that fails.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The man is a professional axeman, and two koalas, a mother and baby, are in the tree. Since the park needs a new helipad for the chopper, man is given permission to cut down the required area of trees for the helipad.

Target: The man is a professional axeman, and two koalas, a mother and baby, are in the tree. However since the park needs a new helipad for the chopper, he is given permission to cut down the required area of trees for the helipad.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Sonny finds a man chopping down trees in the Park. When Sonny tells him Park is illegal, the man says Sonny owns the land.

Target: Sonny finds a man chopping down trees in the Park and when he tells him it is illegal, the man says he owns the land.


Source: Make the text more logical: Sonny asks Clancy's advice. Sonny types out an answer and sends in Matt's Photograph.

Target: Asking Clancy's advice, Sonny types out an answer and sends in Matt's Photograph.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She misses her family and friends. She returns to a very worried Marco and turns herself in to the police who have her wash the other squad cars as part of her police-supervised community service.

Target: Missing her family and friends, she returns to a very worried Marco and turns herself in to the police who have her wash the other squad cars as part of her police-supervised community service.


Source: Fix sentence flow: After returning to the Athabasca District in 1905, Constantine was responsible for building a trail from Fort St. John, British Columbia to Teslin Lake in the Yukon. Work on the trail was abandoned in 1908.

Target: After returning to the Athabasca District in 1905, Constantine was responsible for building a trail from Fort St. John, British Columbia to Teslin Lake in the Yukon, although work on the trail was abandoned in 1908.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Grant has said that he was neither an instigator nor a participant in the fight. instigator was arraigned on August 15, 2008.

Target: Grant has said that he was neither an instigator nor a participant in the fight. Grant was arraigned on August 15, 2008.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lynch served for several years as the clerk of the meeting and as trustee of the group's meeting house. Lynch was also a Lynch to the Quaker Assembly in Virginia.

Target: Lynch served for several years as the clerk of the meeting and as trustee of the group's meeting house. He was also a delegate to the Quaker Assembly in Virginia.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Largely lost to historians until recently. Torrey pushed the abolitionist movement to more political and aggressive strategies, including setting up one of the first highly organized lines for the Underground Railroad and personally freeing approximately 400 slaves.

Target: Although largely lost to historians until recently, Torrey pushed the abolitionist movement to more political and aggressive strategies, including setting up one of the first highly organized lines for the Underground Railroad and personally freeing approximately 400 slaves.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: McClain preferred to spend more time with her husband Wayne and their families. McClain retired completely from touring, public appearances, and performances in the early 1990s.

Target: Preferring to spend more time with her husband Wayne and their families, McClain retired completely from touring, public appearances, and performances in the early 1990s.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Commission selected the suspension bridge design. Work began in 1851 on the new bridge, to be called the Victoria Bridge.

Target: The Commission selected the suspension bridge design, and work began in 1851 on the new bridge, to be called the Victoria Bridge.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Chen commented on the criticism on the slow evacuation during the discovery of explosive device inside Taiwan High Speed Rail on 12 April 2013, speaking at Legislative Yuan in mid April 2013. Chen responded that the MOTC will review evacuation measures for Taiwan railways systems.

Target: Commenting on the criticism on the slow evacuation during the discovery of explosive device inside Taiwan High Speed Rail on 12 April 2013, speaking at Legislative Yuan in mid April 2013, Chen responded that the MOTC will review evacuation measures for Taiwan railways systems.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The introduction of the broadened curriculum. Results have improved from 55 % to 65 % for the science core and 72 % for Additional Science.

Target: Since the introduction of the broadened curriculum, results have improved from 55 % to 65 % for the science core and 72 % for Additional Science.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Chet is one of the most popular characters in The Hardy Boys. By the mid-1960s, Chet had become so popular that in 1965 the Stratemeyer Syndicate was planning to develop a series about Chet and Chet's hobbies.

Target: Chet is one of the most popular characters in The Hardy Boys. In fact, by the mid-1960s, Chet had become so popular that in 1965 the Stratemeyer Syndicate was planning to develop a series about him and his hobbies.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The franchise was nicknamed the Cubs by the Chicago Daily News in 1902. Not officially becoming the Cubs until the 1907 season.

Target: The franchise was nicknamed the Cubs by the Chicago Daily News in 1902, although not officially becoming the Chicago Cubs until the 1907 season.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: When Pulpo's wife's fake ID comes onto their radar, The Intelligence Unit finds her and her son at a gas station. There is no sign of Pulpo.

Target: When Pulpo's wife's fake ID comes onto their radar, The Intelligence Unit finds her and her son at a gas station. But, there is no sign of Pulpo.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Steele-Perkins became an associate of the French agency Viva in 1976. Three years after this, Steele-Perkins published Steele-Perkins' first book, The Teds, an examination of teddy boys that is now considered a classic of documentary and even fashion photography.

Target: Steele-Perkins became an associate of the French agency Viva in 1976, and three years after this, he published his first book, The Teds, an examination of teddy boys that is now considered a classic of documentary and even fashion photography.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He is a Democrat. City council positions are officially nonpartisan per California state law.

Target: He is a Democrat, although city council positions are officially nonpartisan per California state law.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It campaigned on a platform of strengthening anti-corruption laws, establishing programs to eradicate poverty, and reinforcing the family unit. It took 19 percent of the indigenous Fijian vote, mostly at the expense of the SVT, which lost the election.

Target: Campaigning on a platform of strengthening anti-corruption laws, establishing programs to eradicate poverty, and reinforcing the family unit, it took 19 percent of the indigenous Fijian vote, mostly at the expense of the SVT, which lost the election.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He was born on Staten Island in New York, the eldest of eight children born to Thomas and Sarah Farmar Billopp. His father Thomas was the son of Anne Billopp who married Thomas Thomas in 1705.

Target: He was born on Staten Island in New York, the eldest of eight children born to Thomas and Sarah Farmar Billopp. His father Thomas was the son of Anne Billopp who married Colonel Thomas Farmar in 1705.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Few had heard of such a trend in 2003. Jones predicted and found that medical tourism and more particularly reproductive tourism away from the United Kingdom, along with an epidemic of multiple births, would be the likely results of fertility regulation.

Target: Although few had heard of such a trend in 2003, Jones predicted and found that medical tourism and more particularly reproductive tourism away from the United Kingdom, along with an epidemic of multiple births, would be the likely results of fertility regulation.


Source: Fix coherence: Maltby reverted to his permanent rank of colonel. Maltby retired on 10 June 1946.

Target: Reverting to his permanent rank of colonel, Maltby retired on 10 June 1946.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Gaby insists this isn't true, but Luke says it is, and. Luke's Gaby Luke Luke he Gaby her to Luke him.

Target: Gaby insists this isn't true, but Luke says it is, and because he's her friend he encouraged her to marry him.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Angie wants to take Danny back, but her mother wants Danny to stay with them. Angie tells Angie's Patrick Logan will find them and Danny Danny, Mrs. DeLuca says if there was anyone Patrick would want to hurt it would Angie Angie, Danny Danny.

Target: Angie wants to take Danny back, but her mother wants Danny to stay with them. Angie tells her Patrick Logan will find them and hurt Danny, Mrs. DeLuca says if there was anyone Patrick would want to hurt it would be Angie, not Danny.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Bree demands an explanation. Bree learns that Sam is Rex's son.

Target: Demanding an explanation, Bree learns that Sam is Rex's son.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Medical specialty professional organizations recommend that physicians do not perform routine cancer screening in patients with limited life expectancies due to ESKD. Evidence does not show that such tests lead to improved patient outcomes.

Target: Medical specialty professional organizations recommend that physicians do not perform routine cancer screening in patients with limited life expectancies due to ESKD because evidence does not show that such tests lead to improved patient outcomes.


Source: Make the text coherent: Once a piece has been touched, then that piece must be moved. If the piece is also moved to a square, it must remain on that square without exception.

Target: Once a piece has been touched, then that piece must be moved. Furthermore, if the piece is also moved to a square, it must remain on that square without exception.


Source: Make the text more coherent: None of the available drugs can clear the infection. They can stop the virus from replicating, thus minimizing liver damage.

Target: Although none of the available drugs can clear the infection, they can stop the virus from replicating, thus minimizing liver damage.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It was also found that some ancient hepatitis viral strains still infect humans. Other became extinct.

Target: It was also found that some ancient hepatitis viral strains still infect humans, while other became extinct.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It sold 433,000 copies domestically in its first week of release. It was the second highest selling US debut of the year at the time, behind Mariah Carey's E = MC.

Target: Selling 433,000 copies domestically in its first week of release, it was the second highest selling US debut of the year at the time, behind Mariah Carey's E = MC.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Hervey was a native of Brittany, and some sources state a chaplain of King William II of England. Others are less certain that native was a native for the king.

Target: Hervey was a native of Brittany, and some sources state a chaplain of King William II of England, while others are less certain that he was a chaplain for the king.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In 1853, he returned to Bedford, and became a merchant. He was Supervisor of the Bedford in 1855, from 1858 to 1861, and from 1865 to 1870.

Target: In 1853, he returned to Bedford, and became a merchant. He was Supervisor of the Town of Bedford in 1855, from 1858 to 1861, and from 1865 to 1870.


Source: Fix coherence: Third, the severity and scale of possible consequences from errors or mistakes precludes learning through experimentation. These organizations all use complex processes to manage complex technologies and complex work to avoid failure.

Target: Third, the severity and scale of possible consequences from errors or mistakes precludes learning through experimentation. Finally, these organizations all use complex processes to manage complex technologies and complex work to avoid failure.


Source: Fix coherence: In 2007, Hispanics accounted for 45 % of all newborns whereas non-Hispanic whites accounted for 41 % of all births. By 2011 those trends reversed.

Target: In 2007, Hispanics accounted for 45 % of all newborns whereas non-Hispanic whites accounted for 41 % of all births. However by 2011 those trends reversed.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: New South Wales thus attained its present borders. What is now the Northern Territory remained part of the colony until 1863.

Target: New South Wales thus attained its present borders, although what is now the Northern Territory remained part of the colony until 1863.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The gold rushes occurred hard on the heels of a major worldwide economic depression. About two per cent of the population of Britain and Ireland immigrated to NSW and Victoria during the 1850s.

Target: The gold rushes occurred hard on the heels of a major worldwide economic depression. As a result, about two per cent of the population of Britain and Ireland immigrated to NSW and Victoria during the 1850s.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The 1948 -- 49 season saw Blackpool attain a sixteenth-placed League finish. Injuries to both Mortensen and the supplying Matthews meant a lack of firepower up front.

Target: The 1948 -- 49 season saw Blackpool attain a sixteenth-placed League finish, although injuries to both Mortensen and the supplying Matthews meant a lack of firepower up front.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: As there were no concrete plans for producing a new series, BBCi announced Shalka as the official continuation of the programme, and that Grant was the official Ninth Doctor. Events were soon to overtake that.

Target: As there were no concrete plans for producing a new series, BBCi announced Shalka as the official continuation of the programme, and that Grant was the official Ninth Doctor. However, events were soon to overtake that.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: From the Iron age, perhaps the most prominent remains are of the Law Hill Fort. Domestic remains are also well represented.

Target: From the Iron age, perhaps the most prominent remains are of the Law Hill Fort, although domestic remains are also well represented.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The profits were seldom invested locally, apart from the linen trade. Low wages limited local consumption.

Target: The profits were seldom invested locally, apart from the linen trade, because low wages limited local consumption.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: From a peak of over 130 mills, many have since been demolished. Around sixty have been redeveloped for residential or other commercial use.

Target: From a peak of over 130 mills, many have since been demolished, although around sixty have been redeveloped for residential or other commercial use.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cotton requiring little cultivation, most efficiently grew on large plantations by large (slave) workforces, and easy to transport. Cotton proved ideally suited to the inland frontier.

Target: Requiring little cultivation, most efficiently grown on large plantations by large (slave) workforces, and easy to transport, cotton proved ideally suited to the inland frontier.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Georgia legislature unanimously passed a resolution in 1842 declaring that free blacks were not U.S. citizens. National citizenship is defined by federal statute.

Target: The Georgia legislature unanimously passed a resolution in 1842 declaring that free blacks were not U.S. citizens. However, national citizenship is defined by federal statute.


Source: Make the text coherent: Talmadge appealed to his white conservative base. Talmadge denounced New Deal programs that paid black workers wages equal to whites, and attacked what he described as the communist tendencies of the New Deal.

Target: Appealing to his white conservative base, Talmadge denounced New Deal programs that paid black workers wages equal to whites, and attacked what he described as the communist tendencies of the New Deal.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: You are made to hate each other. Upon that hatred is rested the keystone of the arch of financial despotism which enslaves you both.

Target: You are made to hate each other because upon that hatred is rested the keystone of the arch of financial despotism which enslaves you both.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Subsequently, the governor had no authority to intervene in civil and political matters. Authorized to do so by the Cabinet.

Target: Subsequently, the governor had no authority to intervene in civil and political matters unless authorized to do so by the Cabinet.


Source: Make the text more logical: Mehmed demanded that he disband his troops and pledge his loyalty to the Ottomans. Jassim bin Mohammed remained adamant in his refusal to comply with Ottomans authority.

Target: Mehmed demanded that he disband his troops and pledge his loyalty to the Ottomans. However, Jassim bin Mohammed remained adamant in his refusal to comply with Ottoman authority.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: A few settlers established homesteads near the palisade. Growth was very slow due to difficult pioneer conditions and the constant fear of attack from the Seminole population, some of whom lived nearby in an uneasy truce.

Target: A few settlers established homesteads near the palisade, but growth was very slow due to difficult pioneer conditions and the constant fear of attack from the Seminole population, some of whom lived nearby in an uneasy truce.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: By the end of the 1950s most COMECON countries had developed experimental computer designs. None of them had managed to create a stable computer industry.

Target: By the end of the 1950s most COMECON countries had developed experimental computer designs, yet none of them had managed to create a stable computer industry.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This brief war was a military success. International pressure, especially from the US government, soon forced the British government to withdraw all their military forces soon afterwards.

Target: This brief war was a military success. However, international pressure, especially from the US government, soon forced the British government to withdraw all their military forces soon afterwards.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The only blemish in Miami's Super Bowl victory over Washington came from their placekicker, Garo Yepremian. Late in the 4th quarter, with the Miami leading 14 -- 0, Garo Yepremian attempted a 42-yard field goal, which was blocked.

Target: The only blemish in Miami's Super Bowl victory over Washington came from their placekicker, Garo Yepremian. Late in the 4th quarter, with the Dolphins leading 14 -- 0, Yepremian attempted a 42-yard field goal, which was blocked.


Source: Make the text coherent: The introduction of the salary cap in 2005 encouraged parity in the NHL, making it harder for teams to compete for the Stanley Cup every year. Three franchises emerged to win Stanley Cup each during this period.

Target: The introduction of the salary cap in 2005 encouraged parity in the NHL, making it harder for teams to compete for the Stanley Cup every year. Nevertheless, three franchises emerged to win Stanley Cups each during this period.


Source: Fix coherence errors: New pilots and other personnel had been trained. Manpower was still lacking.

Target: Although new pilots and other personnel had been trained, manpower was still lacking.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It became extremely well used, primarily for coal. Traffic fell off with the later construction of railways and the advance of the coalfield northwards.

Target: It became extremely well used, primarily for coal, although traffic fell off with the later construction of railways and the advance of the coalfield northwards.


Source: Fix coherence: Pryor, along with many representatives from the listed organizations, traveled to St. Louis, Missouri to negotiate with the Hobbs estate trustees. All 22 banks in Benton, Carroll, Madison, and Washington Counties were involved in the purchase.

Target: Pryor, along with many representatives from the listed organizations, traveled to St. Louis, Missouri to negotiate with the Hobbs estate trustees. Eventually, all 22 banks in Benton, Carroll, Madison, and Washington Counties were involved in the purchase.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Fermentation of honey usually occurs after crystallization. Without the glucose.

Target: Fermentation of honey usually occurs after crystallization, because without the glucose.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In Whorf's analysis, by using the reportive form the speaker claims that the event has in fact occurred or is still occurring,. By using the expective form the speaker describes an expectation of a future event.

Target: In Whorf's analysis, by using the reportive form the speaker claims that the event has in fact occurred or is still occurring, whereas by using the expective form the speaker describes an expectation of a future event.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This article is about the British magazine Horizon (1940-1949). For the U.S. magazine Horizon (1958-1989), see Horizon (U.S. Horizon).

Target: This article is about the British magazine Horizon (1940-1949). For the U.S. magazine Horizon (1958-1989), see Horizon (U.S. magazine).


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: HornetQ is an open source asynchronous messaging project from JBoss. HornetQ is an messaging project of Message-oriented middleware.

Target: HornetQ is an open source asynchronous messaging project from JBoss. It is an example of Message-oriented middleware.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: A secondary purpose is to cool the engine. Higher power settings may be used without causing an engine overheat.

Target: A secondary purpose is to cool the engine so that higher power settings may be used without causing an engine overheat.


Source: Make the text clearer: Burdon tells Kathy that her home is to be auctioned off. Burdon feels sympathy for her, helps her move out and advises her to seek legal assistance to regain her house.

Target: Telling Kathy that her home is to be auctioned off, Burdon feels sympathy for her, helps her move out and advises her to seek legal assistance to regain her house.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Seen as slightly crazy by co-workers and the public alike. Grant initiated UNICEF's core strategy: GOBI-FFF.

Target: Although seen as slightly crazy by co-workers and the public alike, Grant initiated UNICEF's core strategy: GOBI-FFF.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Nonant had a brother Sylvester, who was treasurer of Lisieux. Nonant was a Nonant in Nonant's uncle Arnulf's cathedral chapter before serving as an archdeacon of the diocese Lisieux Lisieux from 1167 until 1184.

Target: Nonant had a brother Sylvester, who was treasurer of Lisieux. Hugh Nonant was a canon in his uncle Arnulf's cathedral chapter before serving as an archdeacon of the diocese of Lisieux from 1167 until 1184.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Investigators started in 1932. Investigators recruited 399 impoverished African-American sharecroppers with syphilis for research related to the natural progression of the untreated disease, in hopes of justifying treatment programs for blacks.

Target: Starting in 1932, investigators recruited 399 impoverished African-American sharecroppers with syphilis for research related to the natural progression of the untreated disease, in hopes of justifying treatment programs for blacks.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They did not consider the types of humour, or humour styles. Self-defeating or aggressive humour.

Target: They did not consider the types of humour, or humour styles. For example, self-defeating or aggressive humour.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The two men exchanged insults on the House floor and would have commenced a physical altercation if not for Riffe's intervention. On January 4, 1809, Clay challenged Marshall to a duel, which he quickly accepted.

Target: The two men exchanged insults on the House floor and would have commenced a physical altercation if not for Riffe's intervention. Instead, on January 4, 1809, Clay challenged Marshall to a duel, which he quickly accepted.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The factory was served by its own station, Uralite Halt, which opened in 1906 and. Open to the public.

Target: The factory was served by its own station, Uralite Halt, which opened in 1906 and, although open to the public.


Source: Make the text more logical: Armand Blanchard -- French director, born in Huningue. Armand Blanchard was director of Mulhouse from 1825 to 1830.

Target: Armand Blanchard -- French director, born in Huningue. He was mayor of Mulhouse from 1825 to 1830.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Damages in the Caymans amounted to $154.4 million (USD). Damage in Cuba totaled to $300 million, and $100,000 in damage to Jamaica, for a total of $454.5 million, with one fatality.

Target: Damages in the Caymans amounted to $154.4 million (USD), and damage in Cuba totaled to $300 million, and $100,000 in damage to Jamaica, for a total of $454.5 million, with one fatality.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He underwent Promethium experiments voluntarily. He gained super-strength and denser-than-human skin.

Target: Undergoing Promethium experiments voluntarily, he gained super-strength and denser-than-human skin.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Regular, membrane-backed concrete can cost around US $5 per square foot. Prices can vary based on the application.

Target: Regular, membrane-backed concrete can cost around US $5 per square foot, although prices can vary based on the application.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This terminal setup is inefficient, and combined with the Rogers Avenue Junction's also-inefficient design (see below), this limits capacity on the line. Some rush hour 2 and 5 trains run via the IRT New Lots Line.

Target: This terminal setup is inefficient, and combined with the Rogers Avenue Junction's also-inefficient design (see below), this limits capacity on the line. Therefore, some rush hour 2 and 5 trains run via the IRT New Lots Line.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: At the 1924 Australasian championships, McInnes caused a huge upset by beating two-time Wimbledon champion Gerald Patterson. champion twisted Gerald Patterson's ankle in the first set and, because of this, his game was affected and he played mainly from the baseline.

Target: At the 1924 Australasian championships, McInnes caused a huge upset by beating two-time Wimbledon champion Gerald Patterson. Patterson twisted his ankle in the first set and, because of this, his game was affected and he played mainly from the baseline.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Imagination involves many different brain functions, such as emotions, memory, thoughts, etc.. Portions of the brain where multiple functions occur -- such as the thalamus and neocortex -- are the main regions where imaginative processing has been documented.

Target: Since imagination involves many different brain functions, such as emotions, memory, thoughts, etc., portions of the brain where multiple functions occur -- such as the thalamus and neocortex -- are the main regions where imaginative processing has been documented.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the Mary Valley, maize and potatoes were the dominant early crops. Experimental plantings of tobacco.

Target: In the Mary Valley, maize and potatoes were the dominant early crops, although experimental plantings of tobacco.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In many cases, the space requirements for an algorithm can be drastically cut by using a randomized algorithm. Say we wish to know if two vertices in a graph of n vertices are in the same connected component of the graph.

Target: In many cases, the space requirements for an algorithm can be drastically cut by using a randomized algorithm. For example, say we wish to know if two vertices in a graph of n vertices are in the same connected component of the graph.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Jeffrey Cole (Epps) is a recent graduate of the Cincinnati police academy who dreams of working undercover. graduate manages to get an undercover assignment the day of graduation and earns the praise of Jeffrey Cole's superiors.

Target: Jeffrey Cole (Epps) is a recent graduate of the Cincinnati police academy who dreams of working undercover. Cole manages to get an undercover assignment the day of graduation and earns the praise of his superiors.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Jewelry may have been common among the Inca people, however it did not hold as much value to them. Labor was the main way people paid each other.

Target: Jewelry may have been common among the Inca people, however it did not hold as much value to them because labor was the main way people paid each other.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: President Ricardo Lagos, who had just sworn in on 11 March, said the retired general's televised arrival had damaged the image of Chile. Thousands demonstrated against him.

Target: President Ricardo Lagos, who had just sworn in on 11 March, said the retired general's televised arrival had damaged the image of Chile, while thousands demonstrated against him.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This variety could have significant implications on its role in an actual perennial polyculture. Different flowering morphologies could be artificially selected for in varying directions in order to better fit in different environmental conditions and with different populations of other plants.

Target: This variety could have significant implications on its role in an actual perennial polyculture. For example, different flowering morphologies could be artificially selected for in varying directions in order to better fit in different environmental conditions and with different populations of other plants.


Source: Make the text more consistent: There is very little scientific evidence to support significant inter-species interactions and groupings. Rare observations have noted interactions.

Target: There is very little scientific evidence to support significant inter-species interactions and groupings, although rare observations have noted interactions.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: For example, China has launched the largest Inso-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphin sanctuary on Taiwanese coasts. Recent investigative studies have revealed that the United Arab Emirates houses one of the world's largest populations.

Target: For example, China has launched the largest Inso-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphin sanctuary on Taiwanese coasts. Additionally, recent investigative studies have revealed that the United Arab Emirates houses one of the world's largest populations.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Very little is known on the specific species that compose the Indo-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphin's diet. Multiple studies have confirmed that a majority of their diet is composed of sciaenid fishes.

Target: Very little is known on the specific species that compose the Indo-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphin's diet, although multiple studies have confirmed that a majority of their diet is composed of sciaenid fishes.


Source: Make the text more logical: Indo-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphins are social delphinids that live in groups averaging 12 individuals. Group size can be highly variable.

Target: Indo-Pacific Humpbacked Dolphins are social delphinids that live in groups averaging 12 individuals, although group size can be highly variable.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Different varieties have different coloration. Young dolphins are generally gray.

Target: Different varieties have different coloration, although young dolphins are generally gray.


Source: Fix coherence errors: But these projects. Have the objectives to help people in their everyday life.

Target: But these projects, although have the objectives to help people in their everyday life.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It's exactly. Teachers are absent or poorly trained that low-cost technology is a good alternative.

Target: It's exactly because teachers are absent or poorly trained that low-cost technology is a good alternative.


Source: Make the text coherent: Questions have been raised about whether projects that have been implemented at enormous cost are actually designed to be scalable. Whether these projects make enough of an impact to produce noticeable change.

Target: Questions have been raised about whether projects that have been implemented at enormous cost are actually designed to be scalable, or whether these projects make enough of an impact to produce noticeable change.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Things such as upper class capacity and new technology over old technology (e.g. mobile phones over landline phones). Human capacity is developing slowly and the role of technology in education is poorly understood.

Target: Things such as upper class capacity and new technology over old technology (e.g. mobile phones over landline phones). However, human capacity is developing slowly and the role of technology in education is poorly understood.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Injury prevention is a component of safety and public health, and its goal is to improve the health of the population by preventing injuries and. Improving quality of life.

Target: Injury prevention is a component of safety and public health, and its goal is to improve the health of the population by preventing injuries and hence improving quality of life.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The inner loop moves element A (i) to its correct place. After the loop.

Target: The inner loop moves element A (i) to its correct place so that after the loop.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Common IC processes of 2015 have more than 500 rules. Since the manufacturing process itself is not completely predictable, designers must account for its statistical nature.

Target: Common IC processes of 2015 have more than 500 rules. Furthermore, since the manufacturing process itself is not completely predictable, designers must account for its statistical nature.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Advocates of factory farming claim that factory farming has led to the betterment of housing, nutrition, and disease control over the last twenty years. Opponents claim that factory farming claim harms wildlife and the environment.

Target: Advocates of factory farming claim that factory farming has led to the betterment of housing, nutrition, and disease control over the last twenty years, while opponents claim that it harms wildlife and the environment.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The practice of aquaculture gained prevalence in Europe during the Middle Ages, since fish were scarce and thus expensive. Improvements in transportation during the 19th century made fish easily available and inexpensive, even in inland areas, causing a decline in the practice.

Target: The practice of aquaculture gained prevalence in Europe during the Middle Ages, since fish were scarce and thus expensive. However, improvements in transportation during the 19th century made fish easily available and inexpensive, even in inland areas, causing a decline in the practice.


Source: Make the text clearer: Several multi-user commercial packages (e.g. sales and purchase ledger systems) were developed and trialled with customers. This was not commercially successful, and the service was soon withdrawn.

Target: Although several multi-user commercial packages (e.g. sales and purchase ledger systems) were developed and trialled with customers, this was not commercially successful, and the service was soon withdrawn.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The lack of US dollars due to the Venezuelan governments currency controls has also damaged Internet services. Technological equipment must be imported into Venezuelan.

Target: The lack of US dollars due to the Venezuelan governments currency controls has also damaged Internet services because technological equipment must be imported into Venezuela.


Source: Fix coherence: Many Internet radio services are associated with a corresponding traditional (terrestrial) radio station or radio network. Low start-up and ongoing costs have allowed a substantial proliferation of independent Internet-only radio stations.

Target: Many Internet radio services are associated with a corresponding traditional (terrestrial) radio station or radio network, although low start-up and ongoing costs have allowed a substantial proliferation of independent Internet-only radio stations.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Unfortunately, they published fake information of themselves and their properties and collected deposit and rent for a property which they had no ownership of. Using the web to deal with real estate increases the chances of data being encrypted or retrieved.

Target: Unfortunately, they published fake information of themselves and their properties and collected deposit and rent for a property which they had no ownership of. Furthermore, using the web to deal with real estate increases the chances of data being encrypted or retrieved.


Source: Make the text clearer: This required the actors to hang upside down for 30 minutes. The blood would rush to actors 'heads and actors' their veins to protrude.

Target: This required the actors to hang upside down for 30 minutes, so that the blood would rush to their heads and cause their veins to protrude.


Source: Make the text more logical: She gives as an example that Francis provides his readers with a list of meditations they may undertake while attending Mass. In Francis' day the liturgy was said in Latin and people were usually not familiar with the language.

Target: She gives as an example that Francis provides his readers with a list of meditations they may undertake while attending Mass, because in his day the liturgy was said in Latin and people were usually not familiar with the language.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The teams were shuffled after every round. Every team played one round against every other team.

Target: The teams were shuffled after every round so that every team played one round against every other team.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Founder Jahanshah Javid started the website. Journalists and the media are assiduously censored in website.

Target: Founder Jahanshah Javid started the website because journalists and the media are assiduously censored in Iran.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The Irish showband, unlike the big band, played standing. Members would often step, dip and bop in the manner of Bill Haley & His Comets or a black soul band, which brought more energy to the performance.

Target: The Irish showband, unlike the big band, played standing, and members would often step, dip and bop in the manner of Bill Haley & His Comets or a black soul band, which brought more energy to the performance.


Source: Make the text coherent: Coggs had a friendly relationship with President John F. Kennedy. President told Coggs that a picture of Coggs hung in Coggs' office.

Target: Coggs had a friendly relationship with President John F. Kennedy. Kennedy told Coggs that a picture of him hung in his office.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The color red was chosen. Traditionally Togolese women made and sold red garments at markets.

Target: The color red was chosen because traditionally Togolese women made and sold red garments at markets.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Kadare asserted that Albania's future lay with Europe due to its ancient European roots and Christian traditions. Qosja contended that Albania identity was both a blend of Western.

Target: Kadare asserted that Albania's future lay with Europe due to its ancient European roots and Christian traditions, while Qosja contended that Albanian identity was both a blend of Western.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: As the number of protons increases, so does the ratio of neutrons to protons necessary to ensure a stable nucleus (see graph at right). Although the neutron: proton ratio of

Target: As the number of protons increases, so does the ratio of neutrons to protons necessary to ensure a stable nucleus (see graph at right). For example, although the neutron: proton ratio of


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: There are also 22 primordial long-lived even-even nuclides. Each of the 41 even-numbered elements from 2 to 82 has at least one stable isotope, and most of these elements have several primordial isotopes.

Target: There are also 22 primordial long-lived even-even nuclides. As a result, each of the 41 even-numbered elements from 2 to 82 has at least one stable isotope, and most of these elements have several primordial isotopes.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Very committed to his native Aosta Valley. Mus spent short periods in 1913 working on fresco and restoration projects: first in Lyon and then in Lausanne and in Friesch near Brig in the Swiss the canton of Valais.

Target: Although very committed to his native Aosta Valley, Mus spent short periods in 1913 working on fresco and restoration projects: first in Lyon and then in Lausanne and in Friesch near Brig in the Swiss the canton of Valais.


Source: Make the text coherent: PHP's foreach loop was introduced in version 4.0 and made compatible with objects as values in 4.0 Beta 4. Support for iterators was added in PHP 5 through the introduction of the internal Traversable interface.

Target: PHP's foreach loop was introduced in version 4.0 and made compatible with objects as values in 4.0 Beta 4. However, support for iterators was added in PHP 5 through the introduction of the internal Traversable interface.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Such nomina were used by pharaohs only when their fathers were also pharaohs and since Iufni reigned in their midst. Ryholt argues that Iufni must have been part of the family including Sekhemkare Amenmhat V, Ameny Qemau, Siharnedjheritef and Amenemhat VI.

Target: Since such nomina were used by pharaohs only when their fathers were also pharaohs and since Iufni reigned in their midst, Ryholt argues that Iufni must have been part of the family including Sekhemkare Amenmhat V, Ameny Qemau, Siharnedjheritef and Amenemhat VI.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It was originally surrounded by lagoons and marshes before major irrigation work was undertaken in the late 19th and early 20th century. People have been coming to the area since the Edo period to bathe in naturally-created geothermal waters.

Target: It was originally surrounded by lagoons and marshes before major irrigation work was undertaken in the late 19th and early 20th century. Nevertheless, people have been coming to the area since the Edo period to bathe in naturally-created geothermal waters.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Rav Moshe Chaim relocated to the city of Reivitz,. Being known as the Reivitzer Rebbe.

Target: Rav Moshe Chaim relocated to the city of Reivitz, hence being known as the Reivitzer Rebbe.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Julius Wayne Reitz (December 31, 1908 -- December 24, 1993) was an American agricultural economist, professor and university president. economist was a economist of Kansas, and earned bachelor's, master's and doctorate degrees in Julius Wayne Reitz's chosen field.

Target: Julius Wayne Reitz (December 31, 1908 -- December 24, 1993) was an American agricultural economist, professor and university president. Reitz was a native of Kansas, and earned bachelor's, master's and doctorate degrees in his chosen field.


Source: Make the text clearer: Celina mixed her lack of experience with her penchant for opulent spending. Celina drove the plantation into near bankruptcy.

Target: Mixing her lack of experience with her penchant for opulent spending, Celina drove the plantation into near bankruptcy.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: His work has won numerous scholarly awards including a Spencer Fellowship from the National Academy of Education Inc. A Spencer Fellowship from the National Academy of Education is the Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages.

Target: His work has won numerous scholarly awards including a Spencer Fellowship from the National Academy of Education, the Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages, Inc.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A newspaperman, Barnhill was the managing editor of the Kenosha News in southeastern Wisconsin, and its former sports editor. Barnhill was the editor in the 1965 AFL championship game and died less than eleven weeks later.

Target: A newspaperman, Barnhill was the managing editor of the Kenosha News in southeastern Wisconsin, and its former sports editor. He was the referee in the 1965 AFL championship game and died less than eleven weeks later.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Lucas caught Capone at work in the prison laundry. Lucas plunged a pair of scissors into his back.

Target: Catching Capone at work in the prison laundry, Lucas plunged a pair of scissors into his back.