Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Department is the lead agency for economic development in the state. The agency is led by and under the control of a Director appointed by the Governor of Oklahoma, with the approval of the Oklahoma Senate, to serve at the pleasure of the Governor.

Target: The Department is the lead agency for economic development in the state. The Department is led by and under the control of a Director appointed by the Governor of Oklahoma, with the approval of the Oklahoma Senate, to serve at the pleasure of the Governor.


Source: Make the text clearer: Oksana Potdykova (born 20 January 1979) is a Russian former competitive ice dancer. With former partner Denis Petukhov, Oksana Potdykova is a two-time World Junior Oksana Potdykova and the 2000 Russian national bronze medalist.

Target: Oksana Potdykova (born 20 January 1979) is a Russian former competitive ice dancer. With former partner Denis Petukhov, she is a two-time World Junior medalist and the 2000 Russian national bronze medalist.


Source: Fix coherence: This coarse filter approach to biodiversity conservation recognizes ecological processes and provides for a dynamic distribution of old growth across the landscape. All seral stages -- young, medium and old -- support forest biodiversity.

Target: This coarse filter approach to biodiversity conservation recognizes ecological processes and provides for a dynamic distribution of old growth across the landscape. And all seral stages -- young, medium and old -- support forest biodiversity.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Furthermore, the amount of light that reaches each understory tree depends on its position relative to the gap. Each understory tree grows at a different rate.

Target: Furthermore, the amount of light that reaches each understory tree depends on its position relative to the gap. Thus, each understory tree grows at a different rate.


Source: Fix sentence flow: OPG purchased 9 million shares (1.5 %) of former Crown corporation Hydro One in April 2016. Former Crown corporation Hydro One is another Ontario Hydro successor company.

Target: OPG purchased 9 million shares (1.5 %) of former Crown corporation Hydro One, another Ontario Hydro successor company, in April 2016.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In some cases, equipment may appear to have low or no operating cost. Either the cost is not recognized or is being absorbed in whole or part by the cost of something else.

Target: In some cases, equipment may appear to have low or no operating cost because either the cost is not recognized or is being absorbed in whole or part by the cost of something else.


Source: Make the text coherent: Many of these were recorded after the production itself had closed. Original cast members were frequently recruited to reprise their roles on the album.

Target: Many of these were recorded after the production itself had closed, although original cast members were frequently recruited to reprise their roles on the album.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He was a board member of the Norwegian Press Association from 1936. From 1939 board member was a board member in Den Nationale Scene.

Target: He was a board member of the Norwegian Press Association from 1936, and from 1939 he was a deputy board member in Den Nationale Scene.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The eastern portion of the Territory of Minnesota is admitted to the Union as the State of Minnesota (the 32nd state) on May 11, 1858. The remainder of the Territory of Minnesota becomes unorganized.

Target: The eastern portion of the Territory of Minnesota is admitted to the Union as the State of Minnesota (the 32nd state) on May 11, 1858. The remainder of the Minnesota Territory becomes unorganized.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Throughout his career, Phelan made 42 championship appearances for Kilkenny. Phelan's retirement came Kilkenny Kilkenny's defeat in the 1942 championship.

Target: Throughout his career, Phelan made 42 championship appearances for Kilkenny. His retirement came following Kilkenny's defeat in the 1942 championship.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The largest religion practiced in Pakistan is Islam. Islam is main Islam of Pakistan Other religious group are Hinduism Sikhism and Christianity. 95 % people are Muslims, 2 % people are Hindus, 2 % people are Christians and 1 % people are Sikhs.

Target: The largest religion practiced in Pakistan is Islam. Islam is main religion of Pakistan. Other religious group are Hinduism Sikhism and Christianity. 95 % people are Muslims, 2 % people are Hindus, 2 % people are Christians and 1 % people are Sikhs.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The majority of the population is identified as Scheduled Caste with a population of 27,110,. Those identified as Scheduled Caste number 1,218.

Target: The majority of the population is identified as Scheduled Caste with a population of 27,110, whereas those identified as Scheduled Tribe number 1,218.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: As of 1999 the organization claimed to have 200 fighters in South Lebanon. That fighters had been put on reserve in 1993.

Target: As of 1999 the organization claimed to have 200 fighters in South Lebanon, but that they had been put on reserve in 1993.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Southeast across Mosley Creek, the main west fork of the Homathko River, is the Niut Range. South of it across the Homathko River is the Homathko Icefield and west fork's 's attendant ranges.

Target: Southeast across Mosley Creek, the main west fork of the Homathko River, is the Niut Range, while south of it across the Homathko River is the Homathko Icefield and its attendant ranges.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Some war memorial parades are run by Protestant organisations such as the Orange Order. Those on Remembrance Sunday (the Sunday closest to 11 November) are organised by local councils or the British Legion and commemorate war dead of all religious backgrounds.

Target: Some war memorial parades are run by Protestant organisations such as the Orange Order. However those on Remembrance Sunday (the Sunday closest to 11 November) are organised by local councils or the British Legion and commemorate war dead of all religious backgrounds.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Pat tries to turn their fortunes around by starting a cab firm, PatCabs. Disaster strikes on Christmas Eve that year, when Pat -- doing a short run for a regular customer -- hits a teenage girl who later dies from Pat's injuries.

Target: Pat tries to turn their fortunes around by starting a cab firm, PatCabs. However, disaster strikes on Christmas Eve that year, when Pat -- doing a short run for a regular customer -- hits a teenage girl who later dies from her injuries.


Source: Make the text clearer: Kessler succeeded in reaching the edge of their position, killed the gunners, and captured 13 Germans. Despite continuous shelling, Kessler started to the rear.

Target: Kessler succeeded in reaching the edge of their position, killed the gunners, and captured 13 Germans. Then, despite continuous shelling, he started to the rear.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Franklin was an undergraduate external examiner at Bournemouth University for 4 or 5 years and also gave visiting practitioner lectures at BU's Media School. In 2012, examiner received an honorary degree from Bournemouth.

Target: Franklin was an undergraduate external examiner at Bournemouth University for 4 or 5 years and also gave visiting practitioner lectures at BU's Media School. In 2012, Franklin received an honorary degree from Bournemouth.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: After lecturing at Birkbeck College, University of London, he is now a Professor in the School of Law at The University of Warwick. In 2009, Professor became a Fellow of the Higher Education Academy and was awarded a National Teaching Fellowship.

Target: After lecturing at Birkbeck College, University of London, he is now a Professor in the School of Law at The University of Warwick. In 2009, Paul became a Fellow of the Higher Education Academy and was awarded a National Teaching Fellowship.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Paul Wallace (born 22 October 1958) was a British Touring Car Championship driver. Paul Wallace was also a driver in several other prominent motorsport competitions.

Target: Paul Wallace (born 22 October 1958) was a British Touring Car Championship driver. He was also a competitor in several other prominent motorsport competitions.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: P. Chobanyan's academic interests were also linked with the history of Armenian communities of India, Italy and Jerusalem. He discovered and published new ratifications of 17th-18th centuries about the history of Armenian, Armenian Church and Artsakh.

Target: P. Chobanyan's academic interests were also linked with the history of Armenian communities of India, Italy and Jerusalem. He discovered and published new ratifications of 17th-18th centuries about the history of Armenia, Armenian Church and Artsakh.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The emphasis on relics in this particular instance is crucial to understanding the development of the Peace of God movement overall. Popular participation in this movement across Europe stems from the popularity of relics and the penitential practices linked to the cult of the saints.

Target: The emphasis on relics in this particular instance is crucial to understanding the development of the Peace of God movement overall because popular participation in this movement across Europe stems from the popularity of relics and the penitential practices linked to the cult of the saints.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Humans have many uses for peat. It presents severe problems at times.

Target: Although humans have many uses for peat, it presents severe problems at times.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He was defeated for the first time (L 15). Observers say he deserved the decision against Ambers.

Target: Although he was defeated for the first time (L 15), observers say he deserved the decision against Ambers.


Source: Fix coherence: Personopsis trigonaperta is a species of medium-sized sea snail the Distortio snails. Medium-sized sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Personidae.

Target: Personopsis trigonaperta is a species of medium-sized sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Personidae, the Distortio snails.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Unless this question is addressed any debate about healthcare will be vague and unbounded. What exactly is a health care intervention?

Target: Unless this question is addressed any debate about healthcare will be vague and unbounded. For example, what exactly is a health care intervention?


Source: Make the text more logical: Proponents of euthanasia claim that it is particularly necessary for patients suffering from a terminal illness. Opponents of a self-chosen death purport that it is not only immoral, but wholly against the pillars of reason.

Target: Proponents of euthanasia claim that it is particularly necessary for patients suffering from a terminal illness. However, opponents of a self-chosen death purport that it is not only immoral, but wholly against the pillars of reason.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In the United States, annual vinyl sales increased by 85.8 % between 2006 and 2007, albeit off a low base, and by 89 % between 2007 and 2008. Sales increases have moderated over recent years falling to less than 10 % during 2017.

Target: In the United States, annual vinyl sales increased by 85.8 % between 2006 and 2007, albeit off a low base, and by 89 % between 2007 and 2008. However, sales increases have moderated over recent years falling to less than 10 % during 2017.


Source: Fix coherence errors: For that approximately 200 years, Strabo would have us believe, the scholars of the Lyceum were a simple folk, unable to understand, repeat, or reconstruct the work of Aristotle. They scholars not add to any of the previous investigations Aristotle's his guidance.

Target: For that approximately 200 years, Strabo would have us believe, the scholars of the Lyceum were a simple folk, unable to understand, repeat, or reconstruct the work of Aristotle, nor could they add to any of the previous investigations without his guidance.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Choosing this moment to return to Athens, Apellicon was welcomed as an old comrade. Athenion sent Apellicon to Delos in command of a force with instructions to recapture the Athens national treasury there and bring the money to Athens.

Target: Choosing this moment to return to Athens, Apellicon was welcomed as an old comrade. Athenion sent him to Delos in command of a force with instructions to recapture the Athenian national treasury there and bring the money to Athens.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Aristotle's definition of motion. Any sort of a change.

Target: Aristotle's definition of motion, meaning any sort of a change.


Source: Fix coherence: ELISA tests can process large numbers of samples at once. Researchers often use it to screen out likely positive samples from those that are not when the total number of samples is very large.

Target: ELISA tests can process large numbers of samples at once, so researchers often use it to screen out likely positive samples from those that are not when the total number of samples is very large.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It has been reputedly the source of a nasty smell which affects both Pitsea and Canvey Island. Scientific evidence completed on behalf of the landfill operator Vieola proved inconclusive.

Target: It has been reputedly the source of a nasty smell which affects both Pitsea and Canvey Island, although scientific evidence completed on behalf of the landfill operator Vieola proved inconclusive.


Source: Fix coherence: The closest approach to its star is called its periastron (perihelion in the Solar System),. Solar System's farthest separation from the star is Solar System's its apastron.

Target: The closest approach to its star is called its periastron (perihelion in the Solar System), whereas its farthest separation from the star is called its apastron.


Source: Make the text coherent: Using 2 drugs at the same time can sometimes affect each other's fraction unbound. Assume that Drug A and Drug B are both protein-bound drugs.

Target: Using 2 drugs at the same time can sometimes affect each other's fraction unbound. For example, assume that Drug A and Drug B are both protein-bound drugs.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Changes in the levels of free drug change the volume of distribution. Free drug may distribute into the tissues leading to a decrease in plasma concentration profile.

Target: Changes in the levels of free drug change the volume of distribution because free drug may distribute into the tissues leading to a decrease in plasma concentration profile.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The site of the Abbey is a Scheduled Ancient Monument. Apart from the church and the gatehouse and the restored ruins of the cloister very little remains visible.

Target: The site of the Abbey is a Scheduled Ancient Monument, although apart from the church and the gatehouse and the restored ruins of the cloister very little remains visible.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Let us be pure, confident, humorous, and joyful. Our lives will shine positive light every day.

Target: Let us be pure, confident, humorous, and joyful, so that our lives will shine positive light every day.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Arnold, who had received flying instructions from Orville Wright in 1911, was the Commanding General of the U.S. Army Air Force in WW II. Commanding General retired in 1946 and died near Sonoma, CA on January 15, 1950.

Target: Arnold, who had received flying instructions from Orville Wright in 1911, was the Commanding General of the U.S. Army Air Force in WW II. Arnold retired in 1946 and died near Sonoma, CA on January 15, 1950.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Defining life is difficult -- in part --. Life is a process.

Target: Defining life is difficult -- in part -- because life is a process.


Source: Fix coherence errors: More precisely, there is agreement that ecology emerged as a distinct discipline at the turn of the 20th century. That agreement gained public prominence in the 1960s, due to widespread concern for the state of the environment.

Target: More precisely, there is agreement that ecology emerged as a distinct discipline at the turn of the 20th century, and that it gained public prominence in the 1960s, due to widespread concern for the state of the environment.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: King Charles and the remaining dancer survived. The remaining dancer is the noble knight Ogier de Nantouillet.

Target: King Charles and the remaining dancer, the noble knight Ogier de Nantouillet, survived.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Their father had him torn apart by dogs. Before father died father prophesied father's sister would give birth to an abomination that would make the same sounds as the pack of dogs that father him.

Target: Their father had him torn apart by dogs, but before he died he prophesied his sister would give birth to an abomination that would make the same sounds as the pack of dogs that killed him.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Storm Creek fire expands into the park, then merges with dozens of other drought-inspired fires. Over 750,000 acres (3,000 km) of Yellowstone -- 36 % of the park's area -- burns before firefighters gain control in late September.

Target: The Storm Creek fire expands into the park, then merges with dozens of other drought-inspired fires. Eventually, over 750,000 acres (3,000 km) of Yellowstone -- 36 % of the park's area -- burns before firefighters gain control in late September.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Little known fact (at least to me, found in Britannica) that Peter formally liberated them from serfdom as well as their children,. These schools, hence the article.

Target: Little known fact (at least to me, found in Britannica) that Peter formally liberated them from serfdom as well as their children, hence these schools, hence the article.


Source: Make the text coherent: The age of legal capacity under Scots law is 16,. Under English law it is 18.

Target: The age of legal capacity under Scots law is 16, whereas under English law it is 18.


Source: Fix coherence: His Principal Private Secretary Bernard Woolley, played by Derek Fowlds is usually caught between the two. Heavily influenced by Sir Humphrey.

Target: His Principal Private Secretary Bernard Woolley, played by Derek Fowlds is usually caught between the two, although heavily influenced by Sir Humphrey.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This vaccine is a more potent version of the chickenpox vaccine. Evidence shows that it reduces the incidence of postherpetic neuralgia.

Target: This vaccine is a more potent version of the chickenpox vaccine, and evidence shows that it reduces the incidence of postherpetic neuralgia.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The romantic leads from Townies and Hayseeds, Gordon Collingridge and Lotus Thompson, returned here. Playing different roles.

Target: The romantic leads from Townies and Hayseeds, Gordon Collingridge and Lotus Thompson, returned here, although playing different roles.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: A request (or reference) for a preliminary ruling is made by submitting questions to the ECJ for resolution. Questions are not answered in abstraction, but rather are submitted together with the circumstances leading up to their being asked.

Target: A request (or reference) for a preliminary ruling is made by submitting questions to the ECJ for resolution. However, questions are not answered in abstraction, but rather are submitted together with the circumstances leading up to their being asked.


Source: Make the text clearer: Peters raised $638,000 on Kickstarter through the creation and release of Prelude to Axanar. Peters went into pre-production for the feature film Star Trek: Axanar, with production slated to begin in October 2015, for an early 2016 release.

Target: Raising $638,000 on Kickstarter through the creation and release of Prelude to Axanar, Peters went into pre-production for the feature film Star Trek: Axanar, with production slated to begin in October 2015, for an early 2016 release.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Premios 40 Principales for Best America International Song is an honor presented annually at the Los 40 Principaless creates a greater awareness of cultural diversity and contributions of Latino artists in the international scene. The Los 40 Principaless is a ceremony that recognizes excellence.

Target: The Premios 40 Principales for Best America International Song is an honor presented annually at the Los 40 Principaless, a ceremony that recognizes excellence, creates a greater awareness of cultural diversity and contributions of Latino artists in the international scene.


Source: Fix coherence: State patronage systems and numerous federal positions were unaffected by the law. Karabell argues that the Pendleton Act was instrumental in the creation of a professional civil service and the rise of the modern bureaucratic state.

Target: Although state patronage systems and numerous federal positions were unaffected by the law, Karabell argues that the Pendleton Act was instrumental in the creation of a professional civil service and the rise of the modern bureaucratic state.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: MEDI only requires a single angle acquisition. MEDI is a more practical MEDI to QSM.

Target: MEDI only requires a single angle acquisition, so it is a more practical solution to QSM.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Lints became a hairdresser and married Mabel Daisy Armstrong in 1902. Mabel Daisy Armstrong is the daughter of William and Sarah Armstrong.

Target: Lints became a hairdresser and married Mabel Daisy Armstrong, the daughter of William and Sarah Armstrong, in 1902.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He was the younger brother of Jim Donald, who also played for the All Blacks. brother was educated at Wellington College, where brother was a brother of the 1st XV rugby team in 1917.

Target: He was the younger brother of Jim Donald, who also played for the All Blacks. Donald was educated at Wellington College, where he was a member of the 1st XV rugby team in 1917.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Brandenstein and Godchaux organized the San Bernardo and Salinas Valley Canal and Irrigation Company in 1884. Salinas Valley Canal and Irrigation Company is a large scale irrigation project in Southern Monterey County.

Target: Brandenstein and Godchaux organized the San Bernardo and Salinas Valley Canal and Irrigation Company, a large scale irrigation project in Southern Monterey County, in 1884.


Source: Make the text more logical: Natives of Rann, known as Rannians, are for all intents and purposes the same as Earth-based humans. Years of reclusive living and apathy brought on by reliance upon Natives' technologically advanced machinery resulted in a society which had stagnated.

Target: Natives of Rann, known as Rannians, are for all intents and purposes the same as Earth-based humans. However, years of reclusive living and apathy brought on by reliance upon their technologically advanced machinery resulted in a society which had stagnated.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He grasped the situation. He rushed forward some 200 yards ahead of the platoon, tackled the machine-gun emplacement, killed the officer and operator of the gun, and dispersed the crew.

Target: Grasping the situation, he rushed forward some 200 yards ahead of the platoon, tackled the machine-gun emplacement, killed the officer and operator of the gun, and dispersed the crew.


Source: Make the text clearer: Members of the United States Congress pushed for the United States to place sanctions on Venezuela due to human rights violations during the protests. President Obama only concentrated on imposing individual sanctions on Venezuela officials.

Target: Members of the United States Congress pushed for the United States to place sanctions on Venezuela due to human rights violations during the protests. However, President Obama only concentrated on imposing individual sanctions on Venezuelan officials.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Real Love is a 1985 Dolly Parton album. Real Love was Dolly Parton's 27th solo album.

Target: Real Love is a 1985 Dolly Parton album. It was her 27th solo studio album.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: From 1840, P&O had occupied, rent-free, the offices of Willcox & Anderson. Business east of the Gulf of Suez increased in the late 1840s, so they needed larger offices.

Target: From 1840, P&O had occupied, rent-free, the offices of Willcox & Anderson. However, business east of the Gulf of Suez increased in the late 1840s, so they needed larger offices.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: 1757 BC: Zimrilim dies. Zimrilim is the King of Mari.

Target: 1757 BC: Zimrilim, the King of Mari, dies.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It was the third consecutive victory for the Fighting Illini over the Wolverines. Michigan dominated the game statistically with 237 total yards to 66 for Fighting Illini and 13 first downs to two for Fighting Illini.

Target: It was the third consecutive victory for the Fighting Illini over the Wolverines. Michigan dominated the game statistically with 237 total yards to 66 for Illinois and 13 first downs to two for Illinois.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The game was originally scheduled for the evening of Tuesday, July 22. Heavy rains forced game's postponement to the following afternoon.

Target: The game was originally scheduled for the evening of Tuesday, July 22, but heavy rains forced its postponement to the following afternoon.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Corporal James Edward Henning Territorial Army. Corporal James Edward Henning is the Royal Welch Fusiliers.

Target: Corporal James Edward Henning, The Royal Welch Fusiliers, Territorial Army.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Several players came limping into the game. Perhaps the most concerning injury was that of Eric Allen, whose ankle had been injured a few weeks prior.

Target: Several players came limping into the game, but perhaps the most concerning injury was that of Eric Allen, whose ankle had been injured a few weeks prior.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This was criticised in South Africa as the Springboks had not played full international rugby for 11 years and it was felt it would not be competitive however New Zealand were invited. Springboks was felt appropriate after the events around the 1981 Springboks rugby union tour.

Target: This was criticised in South Africa as the Springboks had not played full international rugby for 11 years and it was felt it would not be competitive however New Zealand were invited because it was felt appropriate after the events around the 1981 South Africa rugby union tour.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: I got lucky on my last lap and had no traffic so I was able to put in a perfect lap. Being fastest on one day doesn't mean you're going to win the weekend.

Target: I got lucky on my last lap and had no traffic so I was able to put in a perfect lap. But being fastest on one day doesn't mean you're going to win the weekend.


Source: Make the text coherent: June -- the first phase of the Arklow Bank Wind Park was commissioned. The first phase of the Arklow Bank Wind Park is ireland's first offshore wind farm.

Target: June -- the first phase of the Arklow Bank Wind Park, Ireland's first offshore wind farm, was commissioned.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Before the start of the 2008-09 season, The Iraq Football Association announced that they are no longer able to afford financing the Iraqi clubs and. Each club had to get an official sponsor.

Target: Before the start of the 2008-09 season, The Iraq Football Association announced that they are no longer able to afford financing the Iraqi clubs and hence each club had to get an official sponsor.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The final game of the season was a Thanksgiving renewal of the rivalry with Rice, with the two teams playing for the Bayou Bucket. Houston came into the game with a 27-9 record versus the crosstown Rice.

Target: The final game of the season was a Thanksgiving renewal of the rivalry with Rice, with the two teams playing for the Bayou Bucket. Houston came into the game with a 27-9 record versus the crosstown Owls.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Originally, the field officials had ruled that UCLA had no time left. The challenge gave the UCLA one more second left to set up the field goal try.

Target: Originally, the field officials had ruled that UCLA had no time left, but the challenge gave the Bruins one more second left to set up the field goal try.


Source: Make the text more consistent: For statistical purposes, the Blue Jays serve as the home team and use the designated hitter rule in this interleague series. This marks the first time the Phillies have played the Blue Jays in Blue Jays since the 1993 World Series.

Target: For statistical purposes, the Blue Jays serve as the home team and use the designated hitter rule in this interleague series. This marks the first time the Phillies have played the Blue Jays in Toronto since the 1993 World Series.


Source: Fix sentence transition: More snow days would inevitably be used during the upcoming winter. They predicted that vacation periods planned for later in the year would have to be shortened or canceled, or the school year would have to be extended.

Target: Since more snow days would inevitably be used during the upcoming winter, they predicted that vacation periods planned for later in the year would have to be shortened or canceled, or the school year would have to be extended.


Source: Fix coherence: Proposals in some communities to hold Halloween the following weekend. Whenever conditions returned to normal, met with protest from some parents.

Target: Proposals in some communities to hold Halloween the following weekend, or whenever conditions returned to normal, met with protest from some parents.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Rain moved for its return trip to Pocono. Rain plagued the race all day, wreaking havoc on championship contenders.

Target: Moving for its return trip to Pocono, rain plagued the race all day, wreaking havoc on championship contenders.


Source: Make the text coherent: Deep convection continued to develop over the center and the depression intensified into Tropical Storm Erin six hours after its initial designation. Dry air quickly became entrained into the circulation and convection waned.

Target: Deep convection continued to develop over the center and the depression intensified into Tropical Storm Erin six hours after its initial designation. However, dry air quickly became entrained into the circulation and convection waned.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Everybody saw as the first session was partly wet. Everybody set their fastest time in session two.

Target: Seeing as the first session was partly wet, everybody set their fastest time in session two.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Kansas City jumped to 13 -- 0 lead. By end of the third quarter, the Kansas City were trailing 17 -- 13.

Target: Kansas City jumped to 13 -- 0 lead but by end of the third quarter, the Chiefs were trailing 17 -- 13.


Source: Make the text clearer: The season featured several long-tracking and powerful storms. Land impact was often minimal.

Target: The season featured several long-tracking and powerful storms, although land impact was often minimal.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Decreasing sea surface temperatures and vertical wind shear finally began to weaken the storm for good,. An eye could still be made out on satellite until October 25.

Target: Decreasing sea surface temperatures and vertical wind shear finally began to weaken the storm for good, and although an eye could still be made out on satellite until October 25.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Jimena succumbed to the strong shear. Jimena degenerated into a remnant low and dissipated soon after.

Target: Succumbing to the strong shear, Jimena degenerated into a remnant low and dissipated soon after.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It was the Terrapins 'third season as a member of the Big Ten Conference, and a member of the East Division. Terrapins played Terrapins' home games at Maryland Stadium in College Park Terrapins Maryland.

Target: It was the Terrapins' third season as a member of the Big Ten Conference, and a member of the East Division. Maryland played its home games at Maryland Stadium in College Park, Maryland.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The sequence has remained mostly the same throughout the series. Changes have been made to the images of most of the actors.

Target: The sequence has remained mostly the same throughout the series, although changes have been made to the images of most of the actors.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Wilson had devoted considerable effort in preparing his cavalry for the mission. Effort was a superbly trained and disciplined effort that left Tennessee, led by the 4th Cavalry.

Target: Wilson had devoted considerable effort in preparing his cavalry for the mission, and it was a superbly trained and disciplined force that left Tennessee, led by the 4th Cavalry.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The dentition of Abdalodon helps distinguish it from Procynosuchus, the genus to which it was originally attributed. Charassognathus bears a similar dental formula to Abdalodon, which has been the Abdalodon behind grouping them into the clade Charassognathidae.

Target: The dentition of Abdalodon helps distinguish it from Procynosuchus, the genus to which it was originally attributed. Charassognathus however bears a similar dental formula to Abdalodon, which has been the basis behind grouping them into the clade Charassognathidae.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: So may the king provide for archers and send the archers against men that commit crimes against the king, my lord. If this year there are archers, then the lands and the hazzanu (client kings) will belong to the king, my king.

Target: So may the king provide for archers and send the archers against men that commit crimes against the king, my lord. If this year there are archers, then the lands and the hazzanu (client kings) will belong to the king, my lord.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The company, which had 626 stores in 1985, was reduced to 262 stores by 1992. Family conflicts threatened the company.

Target: The company, which had 626 stores in 1985, was reduced to 262 stores by 1992. However, family conflicts threatened the company.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He claims that another polar shift is only a couple of hours away and the new ice age is inevitable. Nobody believes him.

Target: He claims that another polar shift is only a couple of hours away and the new ice age is inevitable. However, nobody believes him.


Source: Make the text more logical: For example, in 2006, a mean grade of A corresponded with 76 and upwards percentage points, while in 2007 it changed to 81 and upwards points. Generally, the grading system is as follows :

Target: For example, in 2006, a mean grade of A corresponded with 76 and upwards percentage points, while in 2007 it changed to 81 and upwards points. However, generally, the grading system is as follows :


Source: Make the text clearer: The term arose as a correction to the term sharing economy. Major players in the sharing economy.

Target: The term arose as a correction to the term sharing economy because major players in the sharing economy.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Many drowned, and more were killed when Jason opened fire on the swimmers. Exact losses in the water are unknown.

Target: Many drowned, and more were killed when Jason opened fire on the swimmers, although exact losses in the water are unknown.


Source: Make the text coherent: Bonaparte paused at Malta on 9 June. Bonaparte landed soldiers and seized the island leaving a sizeable French garrison at Valletta under General Claude-Henri Belgrand de Vaubois while the rest of the fleet continued on to Alexandria.

Target: Pausing at Malta on 9 June, Bonaparte landed soldiers and seized the island leaving a sizeable French garrison at Valletta under General Claude-Henri Belgrand de Vaubois while the rest of the fleet continued on to Alexandria.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Lion shot ahead of the now sluggish Guillaume Tell. Lion crossed its opponent's bows and shot away the jib boom, allowing Dixon to maintain a position across the bow, raking the French ship from one end while Penelope did the same to the other.

Target: Shooting ahead of the now sluggish Guillaume Tell, Lion crossed its opponent's bows and shot away the jib boom, allowing Dixon to maintain a position across the bow, raking the French ship from one end while Penelope did the same to the other.


Source: Make the text more logical: The area of Adjungbilly was originally referred to as Nadjongbilla, from the Wiradjuri word nadjong. Water and billa meaning creek.

Target: The area of Adjungbilly was originally referred to as Nadjongbilla, from the Wiradjuri word nadjong meaning water and billa meaning creek.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The other 39 districts (around 40 % of all district courts) extend admission to certain lawyers admitted in other states. Conditions vary from court to court.

Target: The other 39 districts (around 40 % of all district courts) extend admission to certain lawyers admitted in other states, although conditions vary from court to court.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Back in the 1980s, the City of San Francisco did not officially recognize alleyways as city streets. Nothing was done to maintain them, leading to excessive amounts of graffiti and trash in those areas.

Target: Back in the 1980s, the City of San Francisco did not officially recognize alleyways as city streets, so nothing was done to maintain them, leading to excessive amounts of graffiti and trash in those areas.


Source: Make the text coherent: The action-adventure genre is broad, spanning many different subgenres. Typically these games utilize strong storytelling and puzzle-solving mechanics of adventure games among the action-oriented gameplay concepts.

Target: The action-adventure genre is broad, spanning many different subgenres, but typically these games utilize strong storytelling and puzzle-solving mechanics of adventure games among the action-oriented gameplay concepts.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Aeolian Hall (Manhattan) New York City Aeolian Hall (Manhattan) is a concert hall near Times Square in Midtown Manhattan.

Target: Aeolian Hall (Manhattan), a concert hall near Times Square in Midtown Manhattan, New York City


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Income is commonly used to measure affluence. This is a relative Income.

Target: Income is commonly used to measure affluence, although this is a relative indicator.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Titans failed to equal the sales success of Age of Mythology. Critics rated sales success highly.

Target: The Titans failed to equal the sales success of Age of Mythology, although critics rated it highly.


Source: Make the text coherent: How the majority of the population of citizen male Spartans became literate. Whether Spartans were literate at all, is not well known.

Target: How the majority of the population of citizen male Spartans became literate, or whether they were literate at all, is not well known.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The Ahafo mine is one of the largest gold mines in the Ghana and in the world. The mine is located in the center of the country in Ahafo.

Target: The Ahafo mine is one of the largest gold mines in the Ghana and in the world. The mine is located in the center of the country in Brong-Ahafo Region.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Richardson married renowned oboist Janet Craxton in 1961. Renowned oboist Janet Craxton is the daughter of his teacher Harold Craxton.

Target: Richardson married renowned oboist Janet Craxton, the daughter of his teacher Harold Craxton, in 1961.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The following is a list of ridings that were narrowly lost by the indicated party in the 2004 election. Under the Liberal column are the nine seats in which they came closest to winning but did not.

Target: The following is a list of ridings that were narrowly lost by the indicated party in the 2004 election. For instance, under the Liberal column are the nine seats in which they came closest to winning but did not.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He received the United States military's highest decoration for his actions at the Second Battle of Fredericksburg. The United States military's highest decoration is the Medal of Honor.

Target: He received the United States military's highest decoration, the Medal of Honor, for his actions at the Second Battle of Fredericksburg.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Also, meter readers and collectors received an incentive equal to up to 30 % of their salary for exceeding monthly targets. Water quality monitoring was improved and internal performance benchmarking as well as a financial forecasting tool were introduced.

Target: Also, meter readers and collectors received an incentive equal to up to 30 % of their salary for exceeding monthly targets. Furthermore, water quality monitoring was improved and internal performance benchmarking as well as a financial forecasting tool were introduced.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: By the end of 2007 -- 08 season Tziolis was close to his exit from Panathinaikos. New manager Henk Ten Cate chose to keep Tziolis.

Target: By the end of 2007 -- 08 season Tziolis was close to his exit from Panathinaikos but new manager Henk Ten Cate chose to keep him.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: I fell out with Alf. Alf felt like that.

Target: I fell out with Alf because I felt like that.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Their woefully banal instrumental accompaniment doesn't smother Moyet's voice. Neither does voice provide any support for Moyet's gutty warbling.

Target: Their woefully banal instrumental accompaniment doesn't smother Moyet's voice but neither does it provide any support for her gutty warbling.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There are currently eight playable factions in the game of allegiance: GigaCorp, a conglomerate that keeps costs down through lowered quality, which. Has the weakest ships.

Target: There are currently eight playable factions in the game of allegiance: GigaCorp, a conglomerate that keeps costs down through lowered quality, which although has the weakest ships.


Source: Fix coherence: A typical game lasts between thirty and forty-five minutes. Games of more than two hours in length are not uncommon.

Target: A typical game lasts between thirty and forty-five minutes, although games of more than two hours in length are not uncommon.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Constructors are vulnerable until the base is built. Teams frequently focus on protecting Constructors' constructors and destroying hostile ones.

Target: Constructors are vulnerable until the base is built, so teams frequently focus on protecting their constructors and destroying hostile ones.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the late 1970s, the Grand Maison Dam project was launched, it was an economic windfall for the commune and the whole region. The windfall lasted 10 years and brought in hundreds of workers.

Target: In the late 1970s, the Grand Maison Dam project was launched, it was an economic windfall for the commune and the whole region. The project lasted 10 years and brought in hundreds of workers.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: This option also delays or eliminates the need for more professional and costly levels of care. Two-thirds of nursing home residents have dementias.

Target: This option also delays or eliminates the need for more professional and costly levels of care. Nevertheless, two-thirds of nursing home residents have dementias.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Amazon has already begun collecting sales tax as of February 1, 2017. At least 3 bills have been introduced into the state legislature to require remote retailers to pay sales tax.

Target: Amazon has already begun collecting sales tax as of February 1, 2017. Furthermore, at least 3 bills have been introduced into the state legislature to require remote retailers to pay sales tax.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Illinois estimates that it loses $153 million in sales taxes every year. Out-of-state retailers do not remit sales tax on purchases made by Illinois residents.

Target: Illinois estimates that it loses $153 million in sales taxes every year because out-of-state retailers do not remit sales tax on purchases made by Illinois residents.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Similarly, certain weapons are more often carried on one side. Most weapons in ancient China were wielded primarily with the right hand and on the right side ; this habit has carried on to the practice of those weapons in modern times.

Target: Similarly, certain weapons are more often carried on one side. For instance, most weapons in ancient China were wielded primarily with the right hand and on the right side ; this habit has carried on to the practice of those weapons in modern times.


Source: Make the text more logical: The change eliminates the floor. More workers who pay no federal income taxes could receive checks.

Target: The change eliminates the floor, meaning more workers who pay no federal income taxes could receive checks.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Priyanka, the twenty something girl whose mother passed when she was a child. Here father is mostly out of India for work purposes.

Target: Priyanka, the twenty something girl whose mother passed when she was a child and here father is mostly out of India for work purposes.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The new method was successful. Short-lived.

Target: The new method was successful, although short-lived.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Anand -- Milind continued to write music throughout the 1990s for various directors. Of all directors' works, directors are best remembered for their association with director David Dhawan and actor Govinda.

Target: Anand -- Milind continued to write music throughout the 1990s for various directors. However of all their works, they are best remembered for their association with director David Dhawan and actor Govinda.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: During his long career, he was instrumental in bringing Eastern art to the West. While at the Museum of Fine Arts, he built the first substantial collection of Indian art in the United States.

Target: During his long career, he was instrumental in bringing Eastern art to the West. In fact, while at the Museum of Fine Arts, he built the first substantial collection of Indian art in the United States.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Then-Portsmouth manager Harry Redknapp was secretly filmed discussing the possibility of buying Todd with agent Peter Harrison, which is illegal under FA rules. The programme merely showed agent approaching manager and asking direct questions which manager answered.

Target: Then-Portsmouth manager Harry Redknapp was secretly filmed discussing the possibility of buying Todd with agent Peter Harrison, which is illegal under FA rules. However, the programme merely showed Harrison approaching Redknapp and asking direct questions which Redknapp answered.


Source: Make the text more logical: It is set in Los Angeles. There are a lot of demons in Los Angeles and a wealth of stories to be told.

Target: It is set in Los Angeles because there are a lot of demons in L.A. and a wealth of stories to be told.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Angus Reid (born September 23, 1976, in Richmond, British Columbia) is a former offensive lineman who played in the Canadian Football League. lineman went to Simon Fraser University and played for the Simon Fraser Clan.

Target: Angus Reid (born September 23, 1976, in Richmond, British Columbia) is a former offensive lineman who played in the Canadian Football League. Reid went to Simon Fraser University and played for the Simon Fraser Clan.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Our mission is a profoundly human one at its heart. We know that we have caused pain.

Target: Our mission is a profoundly human one at its heart, yet we know that we have caused pain.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It displayed text entirely in uppercase, but case could be toggled by pressing the ESC key ; characters that the user signified as uppercase appeared in inverse (black-on-white) capitals. Characters in lowercase appeared as standard capitals.

Target: It displayed text entirely in uppercase, but case could be toggled by pressing the ESC key ; characters that the user signified as uppercase appeared in inverse (black-on-white) capitals, while characters in lowercase appeared as standard capitals.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Sandor and Ida eventually fall in love with each other. Everything goes wrong when Sandor decides to visit Ida in Stockholm.

Target: Sandor and Ida eventually fall in love with each other. However, everything goes wrong when Sandor decides to visit Ida in Stockholm.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The boundary was drawn in such a way. Several towns were split between area codes.

Target: The boundary was drawn in such a way so that several towns were split between area codes.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A very small national force was maintained to man the frontier forts and to protect against Native American attacks. Each of the states had an army (or militia), and 11 of them had navies.

Target: A very small national force was maintained to man the frontier forts and to protect against Native American attacks. Meanwhile, each of the states had an army (or militia), and 11 of them had navies.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: By 1783, with the end of the British blockade, the new nation was regaining its prosperity. Trade opportunities were restricted by the mercantilism of the British and French empires.

Target: By 1783, with the end of the British blockade, the new nation was regaining its prosperity. However, trade opportunities were restricted by the mercantilism of the British and French empires.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Also, manufacturers wanted a high tariff as a barrier to foreign goods. Competition among states made this impossible without a central government.

Target: Also, manufacturers wanted a high tariff as a barrier to foreign goods, but competition among states made this impossible without a central government.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Historians generally agree that the Articles were too weak to hold the fast-growing nation together. They do give credit to the settlement of the western issue, as the states voluntarily turned over their lands to national control.

Target: Although historians generally agree that the Articles were too weak to hold the fast-growing nation together, they do give credit to the settlement of the western issue, as the states voluntarily turned over their lands to national control.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Common with cattle and swine. AI is not as widely practised in the breeding of horses.

Target: Although common with cattle and swine, AI is not as widely practised in the breeding of horses.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Society published Arts and Crafts Essays in 1893. Arts and Crafts Essays are an influential collection of essays on the decorative arts by its members.

Target: The Society published Arts and Crafts Essays, an influential collection of essays on the decorative arts by its members, in 1893.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: They are not found in the eastern Pacific because they replaced by another species, Chloroscombrus orqueta, or the Pacific bumper. Little is known about how these two species relate to each other, and they may represent only one species.

Target: They are not found in the eastern Pacific because they replaced by another species, Chloroscombrus orqueta, or the Pacific bumper. However little is known about how these two species relate to each other, and they may represent only one species.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Germans held off French troops from entering the town. Successful attacks on right guard forced some of the units to fall back.

Target: The Germans held off French troops from entering the town although successful attacks on right guard forced some of the units to fall back.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In the United States, azodicarbonamide has a generally recognized as safe (GRAS) status and is allowed to be added to flour at levels up to 45 ppm. Use in products intended for human consumption is in decline under pressure of the public opinion.

Target: In the United States, azodicarbonamide has a generally recognized as safe (GRAS) status and is allowed to be added to flour at levels up to 45 ppm. However, use in products intended for human consumption is in decline under pressure of the public opinion.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: For example, if a given animal knows that its predator has qualities A, B and C, it will escape all creatures that have those qualities. Thus waste much of its energy and resources on non-existent danger.

Target: For example, if a given animal knows that its predator has qualities A, B and C, it will escape all creatures that have those qualities. And thus waste much of its energy and resources on non-existent danger.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In 1865, Mir Jahandar Shah sent his ambassador Syed Muhammad to the British Commissioner in Peshawar to establish friendly relations. Peace would not last long as Dost Muhammad Khan died and his sons began to fight for the throne.

Target: In 1865, Mir Jahandar Shah sent his ambassador Syed Muhammad to the British Commissioner in Peshawar to establish friendly relations. However, peace would not last long as Dost Muhammad Khan died and his sons began to fight for the throne.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Luckily Spencer soon cheers her up. Will PC Plum manage to find a new kitten for Edie's friend?

Target: Luckily Spencer soon cheers her up. But will PC Plum manage to find a new kitten for Edie's friend?


Source: Fix sentence flow: Scott feared that the limitation on private banknotes proposed with the Bankers (Scotland) Act 1826 would have adverse economic consequences if enacted in Scotland. Gold and silver were scarce and Scotland commerce relied on small notes as the principal medium of circulating money.

Target: Scott feared that the limitation on private banknotes proposed with the Bankers (Scotland) Act 1826 would have adverse economic consequences if enacted in Scotland because gold and silver were scarce and Scottish commerce relied on small notes as the principal medium of circulating money.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Early models posited that the early speakers were both iron-using and agricultural. Archaeology has shown that they did not use iron until as late as 400 BC, though they were agricultural.

Target: Although early models posited that the early speakers were both iron-using and agricultural, archaeology has shown that they did not use iron until as late as 400 BC, though they were agricultural.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Hungary is predominantly a Roman Catholic country. With Romania, country has one of the stronger Baptist communities in southeastern Europe.

Target: Hungary is predominantly a Roman Catholic country. Nevertheless, with Romania, Hungary has one of the stronger Baptist communities in southeastern Europe.


Source: Make the text more logical: Mandrell is now a confirmed seat belt advocate, especially. Prior to the crash.

Target: Mandrell is now a confirmed seat belt advocate, especially because prior to the crash.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Researchers have discovered 15 recessive and 3 dominant genes that are resistant to the virus, but none of them are completely resistant. New virulent strains of the virus are constantly emerging.

Target: Researchers have discovered 15 recessive and 3 dominant genes that are resistant to the virus, but none of them are completely resistant. Furthermore, new virulent strains of the virus are constantly emerging.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: On November 9, 2008, a contingent from Bash Back!'s Lansing chapter picketed outside Mount Hope Church, because the church promoted traditional biblical strictures concerning homosexuality. Several Bash Back!!

Target: On November 9, 2008, a contingent from Bash Back!'s Lansing chapter picketed outside Mount Hope Church, because the church promoted traditional biblical strictures concerning homosexuality. Meanwhile, several Bash Back!


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cist burials, surely related to Iberian customs, have been found at La Hoya. Many young children have been found bruied inside homes.

Target: Cist burials, surely related to Iberian customs, have been found at La Hoya. Additionally many young children have been found bruied inside homes.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Less traffic was available to sustain economic growth. Batesville nevertheless continued to grow due in part to the general prosperity of Albemarle County as a whole and the construction of the nearby Miller School.

Target: Although less traffic was available to sustain economic growth, Batesville nevertheless continued to grow due in part to the general prosperity of Albemarle County as a whole and the construction of the nearby Miller School.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It was decided they would surprise the Earl. Having been forewarned, the Earl captured and imprisoned their leader, Donald Garbh MacIver in the castle of Dingwall.

Target: It was decided they would surprise the Earl, but having been forewarned, the Earl captured and imprisoned their leader, Donald Garbh MacIver in the castle of Dingwall.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It is commonly used to measure the effectiveness of antidepressants. Significant criticisms of its interpretation have been made.

Target: It is commonly used to measure the effectiveness of antidepressants, although significant criticisms of its interpretation have been made.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: His second album for Decca was released in 2014. His second album for Decca is a recording of Prokofiev's Piano Concerto No. 3 and Tchaikovsky's Piano Concerto No. 1 with the Orchestra Sinfonica Nazionale della RAI conducted by Juraj Valcuha.

Target: His second album for Decca, a recording of Prokofiev's Piano Concerto No. 3 and Tchaikovsky's Piano Concerto No. 1 with the Orchestra Sinfonica Nazionale della RAI conducted by Juraj Valcuha, was released in 2014.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Playing 8-a-side rules for the first season. It was clear that their talent and drive were a great base to improve on and achieve playing in the 11-a-side league.

Target: Although playing 8-a-side rules for the first season, it was clear that their talent and drive were a great base to improve on and achieve playing in the 11-a-side league.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This can establish a sense of uniqueness within an individual. Most individuals keep positive assessments of themselves and still conform to valued groups.

Target: This can establish a sense of uniqueness within an individual. Yet, most individuals keep positive assessments of themselves and still conform to valued groups.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Parental relationships are a representation of belonging for adolescents. Parents may be particularly important for providing the stable and caring relationships that are a fundamental component of belonging.

Target: Parental relationships are a representation of belonging for adolescents because parents may be particularly important for providing the stable and caring relationships that are a fundamental component of belonging.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Berthar (also Bertharius or Berchar) was the mayor of the palace of Neustria and Burgundy from 686 to 687. Berthar was the Berchar of Waratton, whose daughter Anstrude Berthar had married.

Target: Berthar (also Bertharius or Berchar) was the mayor of the palace of Neustria and Burgundy from 686 to 687. He was the successor of Waratton, whose daughter Anstrude he had married.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Kerr remained involved with Bohemians, throughout the remainder of his life serving as both a committee member and as a club vice president. Kerr captained the club in 1942, twenty-three years after Kerr's older brother had the honour.

Target: Kerr remained involved with Bohemians, throughout the remainder of his life serving as both a committee member and as a club vice president. Kevin Kerr captained the club in 1942, twenty-three years after his older brother had the honour.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Chandran replied to a query during the 'Meet the Directors' programme at the 17th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK). Chandran described how difficult it was to get a tortoise look right or left as the script required.

Target: Replying to a query during the 'Meet the Directors' programme at the 17th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK), Chandran described how difficult it was to get a tortoise look right or left as the script required.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The major orders of Buddhism in Bhutan are the Drukpa Lineage and the Nyingma. The former is a branch of the Kagyu school and is known for paintings documenting the lineage of Buddhism masters and the 70 Je Khenpo (leaders of the Bhutan monastic establishment).

Target: The major orders of Buddhism in Bhutan are the Drukpa Lineage and the Nyingma. The former is a branch of the Kagyu school and is known for paintings documenting the lineage of Buddhist masters and the 70 Je Khenpo (leaders of the Bhutanese monastic establishment).


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The soldiers on guard answered their fire. Being a dark night, all either side could see were the flashes of gunfire.

Target: The soldiers on guard answered their fire, but being a dark night, all either side could see were the flashes of gunfire.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Obie and Johnnie Red arrive at the youth center where Scam was placed. With Johnnie Red passing himself off as Scam's father the center releases Johnnie Red.

Target: Obie and Johnnie Red arrive at the youth center where Scam was placed. And with Johnnie Red passing himself off as Scam's father the center releases him.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Suggests they should do a drag race. Whoever loses has to leave the beach forever alongside their company.

Target: suggests they should do a drag race and whoever loses has to leave the beach forever alongside their company.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Colombia Illegal with exceptions (such as religion). Although bigamy no longer exists as a lone figure in the Colombia judicial code marrying someone new without dissolving an earlier marriage may yield to other felonies such as civil status forgery or suppression of information.

Target: Colombia Illegal with exceptions (such as religion). Although bigamy no longer exists as a lone figure in the Colombian judicial code marrying someone new without dissolving an earlier marriage may yield to other felonies such as civil status forgery or suppression of information.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Billed only as music director. McClain probably created and directed the show, which carries forward elements of much of his earlier work, particularly his script Before and After the War.

Target: Although billed only as music director, McClain probably created and directed the show, which carries forward elements of much of his earlier work, particularly his script Before and After the War.


Source: Fix coherence: William Alexander Stewart (3 August 1884 -- 16 April 1968) was an Australian rules footballer who played with St Kilda in the Victorian Football League (VFL). rules footballer also played for the Victorian team at the 1908 Melbourne Carnival, replacing an injured player.

Target: William Alexander Stewart (3 August 1884 -- 16 April 1968) was an Australian rules footballer who played with St Kilda in the Victorian Football League (VFL). Stewart also played for the Victorian team at the 1908 Melbourne Carnival, replacing an injured player.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The interior is accessible through a door at the base. Visitors are currently not allowed inside the statue.

Target: The interior is accessible through a door at the base, although visitors are currently not allowed inside the statue.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Helen was a macaque monkey that had been decorticated ; specifically, her primary visual cortex (V1) was completely removed, blinding her. Under certain specific situations, Helen exhibited sighted behavior.

Target: Helen was a macaque monkey that had been decorticated ; specifically, her primary visual cortex (V1) was completely removed, blinding her. Nevertheless, under certain specific situations, Helen exhibited sighted behavior.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Clarissa (1881 -- 1971) mentioned above, made a career for herself during the 1930s as an impressionist painter in Florence and Rome. Clarissa was a Roman Catholic Clarissa.

Target: Clarissa (1881 -- 1971) mentioned above, made a career for herself during the 1930s as an impressionist painter in Florence and Rome. She was a Roman Catholic convert.


Source: Make the text more logical: Conferences are organized yearly in Tel Aviv with some 6,000 attendees, including local cultural and political dignitaries. Three cabinet members from the Likud party attended the 2016 conference.

Target: Conferences are organized yearly in Tel Aviv with some 6,000 attendees, including local cultural and political dignitaries. For example, three cabinet members from the Likud party attended the 2016 conference.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Visiting Senior Research Fellow 2007 -- 2010 Visiting Senior Research Fellow is king's College London.

Target: Visiting Senior Research Fellow, King's College London, 2007 -- 2010


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: National Geographic magazine named Bosnia and Herzegovina as the best mountain biking adventure destination for 2012. The central Bosnia and Herzegovina Dinaric Alps are favored by hikers and mountaineers, containing both Mediterranean and Alpine climates.

Target: National Geographic magazine named Bosnia and Herzegovina as the best mountain biking adventure destination for 2012. The central Bosnian Dinaric Alps are favored by hikers and mountaineers, containing both Mediterranean and Alpine climates.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This makes Croatia both the largest importer and exporter of Bosnia and Herzegovina. Bosnia and Herzegovina is the second largest buyer of Croatia goods.

Target: This makes Croatia both the largest importer and exporter of Bosnia and Herzegovina, while Bosnia and Herzegovina is the second largest buyer of Croatian goods.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Infection may also cause ocular or generalised signs and may contribute to enzootic pneumonia, depending on the serotype of the virus. Infection may not always result in disease as the virus can be isolated in healthy cattle.

Target: Infection may also cause ocular or generalised signs and may contribute to enzootic pneumonia, depending on the serotype of the virus. However, infection may not always result in disease as the virus can be isolated in healthy cattle.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: A second example occurred in 1926 when he met Major-General Emmet Dalton in London. Major-General Emmet Dalton is a former senior commander in the new Irish Army.

Target: A second example occurred in 1926 when he met Major-General Emmet Dalton, a former senior commander in the new Irish Army, in London.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Stowell published Contoyryssyn Ealish ayns Cheer ny Yindyssyn in 1990. Contoyryssyn Ealish ayns Cheer ny Yindyssyn is a Manx translation of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland.

Target: Stowell published Contoyryssyn Ealish ayns Cheer ny Yindyssyn, a Manx translation of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, in 1990.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Bright parted ways with Jay and Paul. Bright recorded Full Negative (or) Breaks in 1999.

Target: Parting ways with Jay and Paul, Bright recorded Full Negative (or) Breaks in 1999.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The history of television coverage of the BBL has been sporadic. Previously the BBL enjoyed coverage from Channel 4 in the 1980s and Sky Sports from 1995 to 2001, where audiences peaked at around 150,000 viewers.

Target: The history of television coverage of the BBL has been sporadic. Previously the League enjoyed coverage from Channel 4 in the 1980s and Sky Sports from 1995 to 2001, where audiences peaked at around 150,000 viewers.


Source: Fix coherence: Preoperative planning and preparation should prevent or lessen the likelihood of most complications. Aside from the general complications that encompass any reconstructive surgery, specific complications are associated with the sacroiliac joint.

Target: Preoperative planning and preparation should prevent or lessen the likelihood of most complications. However, aside from the general complications that encompass any reconstructive surgery, specific complications are associated with the sacroiliac joint.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Guilbeau and Gene Parsons had released a few early country-rock singles in the late 1960s, as well as an album which was released in 1970. Recorded in 1968.

Target: Guilbeau and Gene Parsons had released a few early country-rock singles in the late 1960s, as well as an album which was released in 1970, although recorded in 1968.


Source: Make the text coherent: Syed Ishtiaq Ahmed (16 January 1932 -- 12 July 2003) was a Bangladeshi lawyer and constitutionalist. Syed Ishtiaq Ahmed was a former lawyer of Bangladeshi.

Target: Syed Ishtiaq Ahmed (16 January 1932 -- 12 July 2003) was a Bangladeshi lawyer and constitutionalist. He was a former attorney general of Bangladesh.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Plants and sessile (attached) animals such as sea anemones often have radial or rotational symmetry, which suits them. Food or threats may arrive from any direction.

Target: Plants and sessile (attached) animals such as sea anemones often have radial or rotational symmetry, which suits them because food or threats may arrive from any direction.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: We generalize from geometrical symmetry in the previous section. We say that a mathematical object is symmetric with respect to a given mathematical operation, if, when applied to the object, this operation preserves some property of the object.

Target: Generalizing from geometrical symmetry in the previous section, we say that a mathematical object is symmetric with respect to a given mathematical operation, if, when applied to the object, this operation preserves some property of the object.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Her marriage itself gets called off when the groom and his family insult Machakanni's family and her romance with Maayan continues. When Maayan's brother finds out about him, all hell breaks loose.

Target: Her marriage itself gets called off when the groom and his family insult Machakanni's family and her romance with Maayan continues. But when her brother finds out about him, all hell breaks loose.


Source: Make the text coherent: In 2017 the Indian Air Force proposed to lengthen the runway. Larger aircraft could land to assist with natural disasters.

Target: In 2017 the Indian Air Force proposed to lengthen the runway so that larger aircraft could land to assist with natural disasters.


Source: Make the text more logical: Sultan an-Nasir Muhammad had a special affinity for the Bedouin and maintained strong relations with the tribes of Syria and Egypt. Following an-Nasir Muhammad's death, the state's relations with Bedouin Bedouin deteriorated.

Target: Sultan an-Nasir Muhammad had a special affinity for the Bedouin and maintained strong relations with the tribes of Syria and Egypt. However, following his death, the state's relations with the Bedouin deteriorated.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: If TDMS is not stable enough. When TDMS is exposed to hacker and virus attacks, the organisation's data flow might shut down completely, affecting the work in an organisation-wide scale and leading to a lower stability as results.

Target: If TDMS is not stable enough or when it is exposed to hacker and virus attacks, the organisation's data flow might shut down completely, affecting the work in an organisation-wide scale and leading to a lower stability as results.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Ngoy also involved himself in American politics, joining the Republican Party and hosting fundraisers for George H.W. Bush and encouraged fellow Cambodian immigrants to support the Republican Party.

Target: Ngoy also involved himself in American politics, joining the Republican Party and hosting fundraisers for George H.W. Bush and encouraged fellow Cambodian immigrants to support the GOP.


Source: Make the text clearer: The uplift of the TVF sequesters carbon. Soil production is faster atop mountain ranges where soil removes carbon dioxide from the atmosphere by trapping atmospheric carbon dioxide in limestone.

Target: The uplift of the TVF sequesters carbon because soil production is faster atop mountain ranges where soil removes carbon dioxide from the atmosphere by trapping atmospheric carbon dioxide in limestone.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Starting with the 2007 season, the regulations were changed to their current form. While a team could run a third driver during Friday practice.

Target: Starting with the 2007 season, the regulations were changed to their current form, so that while a team could run a third driver during Friday practice.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Newman does not get the transfer to Hawaii, as the post office finds out that Newman wasn't delivering the mail himself. Too many people got their mail.

Target: Newman does not get the transfer to Hawaii, as the post office finds out that Newman wasn't delivering the mail himself, because too many people got their mail.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He deducing the road the robber may have takes over the border with Mexico. He goes along to intercept him.

Target: Deducing the road the robber may have taken over the border with Mexico, he goes along to intercept him.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Fifth Doctor, Erimem and Peri travel to the city of Nicaea in 325 AD, to witness the First Council of Nicaea. Religious fervour is running high, and theological disputes threaten to spill over into actual violence.

Target: The Fifth Doctor, Erimem and Peri travel to the city of Nicaea in 325 AD, to witness the First Council of Nicaea. However, religious fervour is running high, and theological disputes threaten to spill over into actual violence.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He consulted the Description. He found that it included impossible transcription errors that had been introduced to editions of Tacitus by Venetian printers in the 15th century.

Target: Consulting the Description, he found that it included impossible transcription errors that had been introduced to editions of Tacitus by Venetian printers in the 15th century.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Chu leaks details of the case to a reporter at the Los Angeles times in a misguided attempt to impress her, enraging Bosch and making him question Chu's integrity. Additional investigation reveals that George killed himself.

Target: Chu leaks details of the case to a reporter at the Los Angeles times in a misguided attempt to impress her, enraging Bosch and making him question Chu's integrity. However, additional investigation reveals that George killed himself.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He undertakes the perilous journey into the Sudan alone. He strikes up an alliance with Abou Fatma, a mercenary warrior.

Target: Undertaking the perilous journey into the Sudan alone, he strikes up an alliance with Abou Fatma, a mercenary warrior.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Huck recruits a projectionist and showgirl Rusty Nails. Huck plans to use special effects to pose as a ghost and scare the Daltons away.

Target: Recruiting a projectionist and showgirl Rusty Nails, Huck plans to use special effects to pose as a ghost and scare the Daltons away.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A play titled The Great Duke was licensed for performance by Sir Henry Herbert on 5 July 1627 ; the scholarly consensus interprets this as referring to Massinger's play. Sir Henry Herbert is the Master of the Revels.

Target: A play titled The Great Duke was licensed for performance by Sir Henry Herbert, the Master of the Revels, on 5 July 1627 ; the scholarly consensus interprets this as referring to Massinger's play.


Source: Fix coherence: Their original identities before the revolution are suppressed. While being reeducated as handmaids.

Target: Their original identities before the revolution are suppressed, although while being reeducated as handmaids.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A Civilian Conservation Corps camp (The Pocket Camp, F-16, Company 3435) was founded in the Pocket in 1938. By 1941, as the problem of unemployment diminished, funding for the Civilian Conservation Corps was discontinued and the The Pocket Camp was closed.

Target: A Civilian Conservation Corps camp (The Pocket Camp, F-16, Company 3435) was founded in the Pocket in 1938. By 1941, as the problem of unemployment diminished, funding for the CCC was discontinued and the Pocket Camp was closed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The property is located on a 9.5 acre plot which includes 600 feet of oceanfront access. The property opened in 2012.

Target: The property, which opened in 2012, is located on a 9.5 acre plot which includes 600 feet of oceanfront access.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: When he goes in the dungeon, he meets Gregory, the jailer, who saves him. Despereaux tells jailer a story.

Target: When he goes in the dungeon, he meets Gregory, the jailer, who saves him because Despereaux tells Gregory a story.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They had captured the third line. Part of this captured territory had to be abandoned because it was exposed to hostile fire, so they consolidated their position along the second line.

Target: Although they had captured the third line, part of this captured territory had to be abandoned because it was exposed to hostile fire, so they consolidated their position along the second line.


Source: Make the text clearer: Ice Cube, Snoop Dogg, will.i.am, Common, Macy Gray, and Lenny Kravitz reportedly attended the open-mic. Artists such as The Pharcyde.

Target: Ice Cube, Snoop Dogg, will.i.am, Common, Macy Gray, and Lenny Kravitz reportedly attended the open-mic, while artists such as The Pharcyde.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Heavily criticised by reviewers. It was much in evidence on the prosecution benches when the case came to court.

Target: Although heavily criticised by reviewers, it was much in evidence on the prosecution benches when the case came to court.


Source: Fix sentence transition: After saltpetre has been dried, it may become moist again if left over a period of time. When used in large cannons it is usually carried separately, and the gunpowder prepared and mixed on the spot.

Target: After saltpetre has been dried, it may become moist again if left over a period of time. Hence when used in large cannons it is usually carried separately, and the gunpowder prepared and mixed on the spot.


Source: Make the text more logical: This mechanism had 20 throttle notches and 17 braking notches. Starting from the 15th car, made in 1974, to reduce costs, it was decided to switch to locally made Eltim-made throttle and brake equipments instead.

Target: This mechanism had 20 throttle notches and 17 braking notches. However starting from the 15th car, made in 1974, to reduce costs, it was decided to switch to locally made Eltim-made throttle and brake equipments instead.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Steel could no longer be imported from other countries. Local made steel had to be used.

Target: Steel could no longer be imported from other countries, and local made steel had to be used.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It serves the neighbourhood of Tiruvottiyur and is located 9 km north of Chennai Central railway station. Tiruvottiyur is a suburb of Chennai.

Target: It serves the neighbourhood of Tiruvottiyur, a suburb of Chennai, and is located 9 km north of Chennai Central railway station.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Toccata in E-flat minor is a piece for solo piano written in 1932 by Aram Khachaturian. Toccata is a piece of piano students, and has been recorded many times.

Target: The Toccata in E-flat minor is a piece for solo piano written in 1932 by Aram Khachaturian. It is a favorite of piano students, and has been recorded many times.


Source: Make the text coherent: Tom and Margo got married in 1983. Unlike many other couples on soap operas, their marriage has survived for over 25 years despite adultery on both sides.

Target: Tom and Margo got married in 1983, and unlike many other couples on soap operas, their marriage has survived for over 25 years despite adultery on both sides.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Through 1982 and 1983 Keating rallied, however,. In fragile health.

Target: Through 1982 and 1983 Keating rallied, however, and although in fragile health.


Source: Fix coherence: A $10,000 prize lures Tom into competing at a local aviation meet at Eagle Park. Tom is determined to build the fastest plane around, but Tom's plans mysteriously disappear, which Tom Tom must redesign his new airplane from the beginning.

Target: A $10,000 prize lures Tom into competing at a local aviation meet at Eagle Park. Tom is determined to build the fastest plane around, but his plans mysteriously disappear, which means Tom must redesign his new airplane from the beginning.


Source: Make the text clearer: The park is named for its elevation of about 1,000 ft (300 m) above sea level. Visitors can see most of Orange County from the park on a particularly clear day.

Target: The park is named for its elevation of about 1,000 ft (300 m) above sea level, and visitors can see most of Orange County from the park on a particularly clear day.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Torpor can be employed during reproduction, a strategy of animals with unpredictable food supplies. High-latitude living rodents use torpor seasonally when not reproducing.

Target: Torpor can be employed during reproduction, a strategy of animals with unpredictable food supplies. For example, high-latitude living rodents use torpor seasonally when not reproducing.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: States relinquished responsibility of the highway to the counties so little. No maintenance was performed on the road.

Target: States relinquished responsibility of the highway to the counties so little or no maintenance was performed on the road.


Source: Fix coherence errors: On November 10, 2008, UBB. threads developer Rick Baker began a survey on whether the next major release should include blogs. Whether UBB. should include a GUI redesign (2).

Target: On November 10, 2008, UBB. threads developer Rick Baker began a survey on whether the next major release should include blogs, or whether it should include a GUI redesign (2).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Barb maneuvered in dangerously shallow waters. Barb launched her torpedoes into the enemy group and then retired at high speed on the surface in a full hour's run through uncharted, heavily mined, and rock-obstructed waters.

Target: Maneuvering in dangerously shallow waters, Barb launched her torpedoes into the enemy group and then retired at high speed on the surface in a full hour's run through uncharted, heavily mined, and rock-obstructed waters.


Source: Fix coherence errors: USS Barb (SS-220) was the first ship of the United States Navy to be named for the barbus. USS Barb (SS-220) is a Gato-class submarine.

Target: USS Barb (SS-220), a Gato-class submarine, was the first ship of the United States Navy to be named for the barbus.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: She transited the Panama Canal on 8 March. She arrived in San Diego on the 16th.

Target: Transiting the Panama Canal on 8 March, she arrived in San Diego on the 16th.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The American planes then returned to their carriers, landing with difficulty in the darkness after the task force turned on its deck and search lights. Two Yorktown planes landed on Bataan, the second of which crashed and fouled the deck.

Target: The American planes then returned to their carriers, landing with difficulty in the darkness after the task force turned on its deck and search lights. Eventually, two Yorktown planes landed on Bataan, the second of which crashed and fouled the deck.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: USS Case (DD-285) commissioned in 1919 and decommissioned in 1930. USS Case (DD-285) is a Clemson-class destroyer.

Target: USS Case (DD-285), a Clemson-class destroyer, commissioned in 1919 and decommissioned in 1930.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: USS Eberle (DD-430) which was launched in 1940 and served until the end of World War II. USS Eberle (DD-430) is a Gleaves-class destroyer.

Target: USS Eberle (DD-430), a Gleaves-class destroyer, which was launched in 1940 and served until the end of World War II.


Source: Fix coherence: USS Kimberly (DD-521) was the second ship of the United States Navy to be named after Rear Admiral Lewis A. Kimberly (1838 -- 1902). USS Kimberly (DD-521) is a Fletcher-class destroyer.

Target: USS Kimberly (DD-521), a Fletcher-class destroyer, was the second ship of the United States Navy to be named after Rear Admiral Lewis A. Kimberly (1838 -- 1902).


Source: Fix coherence: She collected hydrographic data as she progressed. She reached T-3 on 17 February.

Target: Collecting hydrographic data as she progressed, she reached T-3 on 17 February.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Wilhelmina emerged from World War I unscathed. Near-missed by a torpedo on 1 September 1918.

Target: Wilhelmina emerged from World War I unscathed, although near-missed by a torpedo on 1 September 1918.


Source: Make the text clearer: He was an opponent of the rhetoritician Libanius. During opponent's tenure as Proconsul opponent supported the accusations rhetoritician Libanius' rivals, opponent him with practicing magic and treason, thereby rhetoritician Libanius to leave Constantinople.

Target: He was an opponent of the rhetoritician Libanius, and during his tenure as Proconsul he supported the accusations of Libanius' rivals, charging him with practicing magic and treason, thereby forcing Libanius to leave Constantinople.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Muhammad Umer Chapra (born in Pakistan 1933) is a Saudi Arabian economist. As of November 1999, Muhammad Umer Chapra serves as Advisor at the Islamic Research and Training Institute (IRTI) of the Islamic Development Bank (IDB), Jeddah, Saudi Arabian.

Target: Muhammad Umer Chapra (born in Pakistan 1933) is a Saudi Arabian economist. As of November 1999, he serves as Advisor at the Islamic Research and Training Institute (IRTI) of the Islamic Development Bank (IDB), Jeddah, Saudi Arabia.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Carlitos makes his way to a local train station and attempts to buy a ticket but is not allowed. Carlitos is a Carlitos.

Target: Carlitos makes his way to a local train station and attempts to buy a ticket but is not allowed because he is a minor.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Hugh doubts his choice. Hugh attempts to escape his journey to sea but is thwarted by the Consul, who wires words of support for Hugh's choice to their aunt.

Target: Doubting his choice, Hugh attempts to escape his journey to sea but is thwarted by the Consul, who wires words of support for Hugh's choice to their aunt.


Source: Fix coherence: Abu Dhabi nationals were brought under the scheme from 1 June 2008 and Dubai followed for its government employees. Under federal law, every Emirati and expatriate in the country will be covered by compulsory health insurance under a unified mandatory scheme.

Target: Abu Dhabi nationals were brought under the scheme from 1 June 2008 and Dubai followed for its government employees. Eventually, under federal law, every Emirati and expatriate in the country will be covered by compulsory health insurance under a unified mandatory scheme.


Source: Fix sentence transition: ( e) ban river traffic from entering ports under control by Bosnian Serb forces,. Authorised on a case-by-case basis.

Target: ( e) ban river traffic from entering ports under control by Bosnian Serb forces, unless authorised on a case-by-case basis.


Source: Make the text coherent: Probst also serves on the IOC's International Relations Commission 2011. The IOC's International Relations Commission is a post he assumed by IOC appointment on March 10.

Target: Probst also serves on the IOC's International Relations Commission, a post he assumed by IOC appointment on March 10, 2011.


Source: Fix sentence flow: By 2005 all manufacturing of VAX computers had ceased. Old systems remain in widespread use.

Target: By 2005 all manufacturing of VAX computers had ceased, but old systems remain in widespread use.


Source: Fix sentence flow: This includes refusal of social intercourse, and even organized persuasion or argument. Free from any threat of violence.

Target: This includes refusal of social intercourse, and even organized persuasion or argument, although free from any threat of violence.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The people who lived in Hinsdale, Vermont wanted a separate name, and in 1802 the Vermont legislature changed the town's name to Vernon. The name is said to have been chosen after President George Washington's plantation home, Vernon.

Target: The people who lived in Hinsdale, Vermont wanted a separate name, and in 1802 the Vermont legislature changed the town's name to Vernon. The name is said to have been chosen after President George Washington's plantation home, Mount Vernon.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: So the owner sells the goods at the same time that the employee takes the money. Only the holder of rights can grant a licence to another or permit another to do something that would otherwise have been unlawful.

Target: So the owner sells the goods at the same time that the employee takes the money. Similarly, only the holder of rights can grant a licence to another or permit another to do something that would otherwise have been unlawful.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Welby had a direct effect on the Significs group, most of whose members were Dutch, including Gerrit Mannoury and Frederik van Eeden. Welby indirectly influenced L.E.J.

Target: Welby had a direct effect on the Significs group, most of whose members were Dutch, including Gerrit Mannoury and Frederik van Eeden. Hence she indirectly influenced L.E.J.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jessie stops taking Karthik's calls. So Karthik goes back one night to check on Jessie.

Target: Jessie stops taking Karthik's calls and so he goes back one night to check on Jessie.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Nearly equal in number. Mammoth was according to the excavation data not actively hunted, but collected from natural death sites.

Target: Although nearly equal in number, mammoth was according to the excavation data not actively hunted, but collected from natural death sites.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Prior to his chairmanship at Emory he was Chairman of Surgery at the University of Miami. Chairman was a pioneer in surgery for portal hypertension and developed the distal splenorenal shunt.

Target: Prior to his chairmanship at Emory he was Chairman of Surgery at the University of Miami. Warren was a pioneer in surgery for portal hypertension and developed the distal splenorenal shunt.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: William Richard Pybus married Annie Emma Sweet (21 Jan 1857 -- 30 May 1950) in 1880. Annie Emma Sweet (21 Jan 1857 -- 30 May 1950) is a fine singer and daughter of Captain Sweet.

Target: William Richard Pybus married Annie Emma Sweet (21 Jan 1857 -- 30 May 1950), a fine singer and daughter of Captain Sweet, in 1880.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Dodd said he believed that Martin's failure to serve may have been a reason that he did not attempt to run earlier for governor. Dodd is a World War II veteran.

Target: Dodd, a World War II veteran, said he believed that Martin's failure to serve may have been a reason that he did not attempt to run earlier for governor.


Source: Fix coherence: Cox was another ex-Stoke player who stepped into the manager's seat vacated by Thomas Slaney in 1883. player's reign was a comparatively short one, and Cox was replaced by Harry Lockett after less than a year in charge.

Target: Cox was another ex-Stoke player who stepped into the manager's seat vacated by Thomas Slaney in 1883. Cox's reign however was a comparatively short one, and he was replaced by Harry Lockett after less than a year in charge.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The townscale is visually dominated by the grain silos near the railway station. Mining for coal and gas are growing industries, increasing the population and facilities in Wandoan.

Target: The townscale is visually dominated by the grain silos near the railway station. However, mining for coal and gas are growing industries, increasing the population and facilities in Wandoan.


Source: Fix coherence: Ost was a bellhop at the Old Faithful Inn in 1945. The Old Faithful Inn is a hotel in Yellowstone National Park.

Target: Ost was a bellhop at the Old Faithful Inn, a hotel in Yellowstone National Park, in 1945.


Source: Make the text more logical: Water demand in 2011 was 380 million imperial gallons (1,700,000 m) per day. Singapore could actually already have been water self-sufficient in 2011 except in years of very low rainfall.

Target: Since water demand in 2011 was 380 million imperial gallons (1,700,000 m) per day, Singapore could actually already have been water self-sufficient in 2011 except in years of very low rainfall.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Between the James River and Bon Air, Gregory controlled large land areas along the proposed rail line which he hoped to develop. Despite Gregory's plans, aside from grading of right-of-way, Gregory's planned streetcar line did not materialize.

Target: Between the James River and Bon Air, Gregory controlled large land areas along the proposed rail line which he hoped to develop. However, despite his plans, aside from grading of right-of-way, Gregory's planned streetcar line did not materialize.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Ore Mountains had a nearly 700-year-old mining history when uranium mining started after World War II. Mining had nearly ceased in the area.

Target: Although the Ore Mountains had a nearly 700-year-old mining history when uranium mining started after World War II, mining had nearly ceased in the area.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Above that unit there are three aquifers supplying water to the cities of Pirna and Dresden. Large amounts of water had to be treated before the mine could finally be flooded.

Target: Above that unit there are three aquifers supplying water to the cities of Pirna and Dresden. Therefore, large amounts of water had to be treated before the mine could finally be flooded.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Who returning to the castle, Edmund is confronts by the Witchsmeller. Who invites Edmund to undergo a test to determine if he is a witch.

Target: Returning to the castle, Edmund is confronted by the Witchsmeller, who invites Edmund to undergo a test to determine if he is a witch.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The main office of Quiller Publishing (1) is also located here. Quiller Publishing (1) is the UK's largest Country Sports publisher.

Target: The main office of Quiller Publishing (1), the UK's largest Country Sports publisher, is also located here.


Source: Make the text coherent: On 31 December 2009 Amtsbezirk Trachselwald was dissolved. Amtsbezirk Trachselwald is the municipality's former district.

Target: On 31 December 2009 Amtsbezirk Trachselwald, the municipality's former district, was dissolved.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The Statutes of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland (1807 -- 1865) 1824. The Statutes of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland (1807 -- 1865) are his Majesty's statute and law printers.

Target: The Statutes of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland (1807 -- 1865), His Majesty's statute and law printers, 1824.