Source: Make the text more cohesive: Migration accounted for 22.8 %. Births and deaths accounted for 6.1 %.

Target: Migration accounted for 22.8 %, while births and deaths accounted for 6.1 %.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Bradshaw produced a long list of inventions and designs. Very few achieved commercial success.

Target: Bradshaw produced a long list of inventions and designs, although very few achieved commercial success.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He also designed motorcycle engines where the cylinder barrels were oil cooled. These were made under licence by J Walmsley & Co (Preston) Ltd.

Target: He also designed motorcycle engines where the cylinder barrels were oil cooled, and these were made under licence by J Walmsley & Co (Preston) Ltd.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: With continued similar demand, these countries would continue to trade back and forth in differentiated but similar goods since both demand and produce similar products. Both Germany and the United States are industrialized countries with a high preference for automobiles.

Target: With continued similar demand, these countries would continue to trade back and forth in differentiated but similar goods since both demand and produce similar products. For instance, both Germany and the United States are industrialized countries with a high preference for automobiles.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Equipped with three pairs of mammae. Females have been observed to give birth about once a year to only a small number of young, commonly as few as one or two.

Target: Although equipped with three pairs of mammae, females have been observed to give birth about once a year to only a small number of young, commonly as few as one or two.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Prynne's Animadversions 316. Then there ought to be express words ; for where by the prerogative a special act is done, there ought to be express words, and it shall not be taken by implication.

Target: Prynne's Animadversions 316. but then there ought to be express words ; for where by the prerogative a special act is done, there ought to be express words, and it shall not be taken by implication.


Source: Make the text coherent: An exceptionally large glaucous gull was found to outweigh any known great black-backed gull. Usually that species is slightly smaller.

Target: An exceptionally large glaucous gull was found to outweigh any known great black-backed gull, although usually that species is slightly smaller.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In a sample of 2009 adults from the North Atlantic, males were found to average 1,830 g (4.03 lb). Females were found to average 1,488 g (3.280 lb).

Target: In a sample of 2009 adults from the North Atlantic, males were found to average 1,830 g (4.03 lb) and females were found to average 1,488 g (3.280 lb).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It takes around one week for the female to produce the three eggs, and the incubation doesn't begin until all three eggs are laid. All three chicks are hatched the same day.

Target: It takes around one week for the female to produce the three eggs, and the incubation doesn't begin until all three eggs are laid. Hence all three chicks are hatched the same day.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In addition to the 92 councillors, there were sixteen Aldermen who divided 9 Labour and 6 Conservative. Labour actually had 67 seats to 38 for the Conservative following the election.

Target: In addition to the 92 councillors, there were sixteen Aldermen who divided 9 Labour and 6 Conservative, so that Labour actually had 67 seats to 38 for the Conservatives following the election.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: After manipulation,. Their numbers are slightly more conservative.

Target: After manipulation, although their numbers are slightly more conservative.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The application of production-based emissions accounting is currently favoured in policy terms. Much of the literature favours consumption-based accounting.

Target: The application of production-based emissions accounting is currently favoured in policy terms, although much of the literature favours consumption-based accounting.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Good pockets of ore were found in some places. Production actually remained higher than in the mid-19th century.

Target: Good pockets of ore were found in some places and production actually remained higher than in the mid-19th century.


Source: Make the text coherent: Gregoriana has released eight CDs, including two in collaboration with the Egidius Kwartet. Gregoriana has published five books, including Calculemus et Cantemus about the lost Mozarabic tradition.

Target: Gregoriana has released eight CDs, including two in collaboration with the Egidius Kwartet. Additionally Gregoriana has published five books, including Calculemus et Cantemus about the lost Mozarabic tradition.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Teddy watches the wedding happening at the hospital on a tablet, in the ICU with the bride's mother. Teddy reveals she's pregnant.

Target: Watching the wedding happening at the hospital on a tablet, in the ICU with the bride's mother, Teddy reveals she's pregnant.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As the temperature drops the bins start to shiver. When the sun shines the bins and benches break into song, singing in tight barbershop harmonies.

Target: As the temperature drops the bins start to shiver and when the sun shines the bins and benches break into song, singing in tight barbershop harmonies.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Of the 40 Gristede's Sloan's stores in 1998, 35 were in Manhattan, one was in Brooklyn, three were in Westchester County. One was on Long Island.

Target: Of the 40 Gristede's Sloan's stores in 1998, 35 were in Manhattan, one was in Brooklyn, three were in Westchester County, and one was on Long Island.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It has no major pests. Though there were cases of illegal trade in 2008, this is no longer a major threat to the species.

Target: It has no major pests and though there were cases of illegal trade in 2008, this is no longer a major threat to the species.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They may achieve a reasonably high viscosity, but will take longer to achieve. They will disperse better than fine-mesh, all conditions being equal.

Target: They may achieve a reasonably high viscosity, but will take longer to achieve. On the other hand, they will disperse better than fine-mesh, all conditions being equal.


Source: Make the text clearer: Unlike locust bean gum, it is not self-gelling. Either borax or calcium can cross-link guar gum, causing it to gel.

Target: Unlike locust bean gum, it is not self-gelling. However, either borax or calcium can cross-link guar gum, causing it to gel.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is a thermogenic substance. Its low digestibility lends its use in recipes as a filler, which can help to provide satiety, or slow the digestion of a meal, thus lowering the glycemic index of that meal.

Target: It is a thermogenic substance. Moreover, its low digestibility lends its use in recipes as a filler, which can help to provide satiety, or slow the digestion of a meal, thus lowering the glycemic index of that meal.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This type of Wilayah can not be applied to a society. None of mentioned conditions hold for the majority of a society.

Target: This type of Wilayah can not be applied to a society because none of mentioned conditions hold for the majority of a society.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Units B and C together generate a total of approximately 21,000,000,000 kWh of electricity annually. They are calculated to supply approximately 30 % of Bavaria's electricity.

Target: Units B and C together generate a total of approximately 21,000,000,000 kWh of electricity annually. Hence they are calculated to supply approximately 30 % of Bavaria's electricity.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: I could never resist a plum role like a lady marshal in a genre that would never have considered such a gender reversal like that before. Working with Roger was always an adventure and this film was no exception.

Target: I could never resist a plum role like a lady marshal in a genre that would never have considered such a gender reversal like that before. However, working with Roger was always an adventure and this film was no exception.


Source: Make the text clearer: The women fight. Eventually Erica, who loses the fight, closes for the night.

Target: The women fight, but eventually Erica, who loses the fight, closes for the night.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The first of Bivona's bands under his own name showed up in 1940. Work as a sideman in more established bands seemed to be more what Bivona was after.

Target: The first of Bivona's bands under his own name showed up in 1940, but work as a sideman in more established bands seemed to be more what he was after.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He made his first appearance at Leipzig in 1869. Two years later played at the Wallnertheater in Berlin.

Target: He made his first appearance at Leipzig in 1869, and two years later played at the Wallnertheater in Berlin.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Construction and development took ten years, in part. Interest in submarines in the French Navy came and went with the changing policies of different ministers of marine.

Target: Construction and development took ten years, in part because interest in submarines in the French Navy came and went with the changing policies of different ministers of marine.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Bush started 22 of his 36 games, including a marathon on May 14, 1927, in which Bush and Boston Braves starter Charlie Robertson duelled for eighteen innings. Bush won the game after starter tired, surrendering five runs in the 18th inning.

Target: Bush started 22 of his 36 games, including a marathon on May 14, 1927, in which Bush and Boston Braves starter Charlie Robertson duelled for eighteen innings. Bush won the game after Robertson tired, surrendering five runs in the 18th inning.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Another definition is: Another definition is mathematically identical but gives an alternative calculation method.

Target: Another definition, which is mathematically identical but gives an alternative calculation method, is :


Source: Make the text more coherent: Gyraulus riparius is a species of small freshwater snail the ram's horn snails. A species of small freshwater snail is an aquatic pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Planorbidae.

Target: Gyraulus riparius is a species of small freshwater snail, an aquatic pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Planorbidae, the ram's horn snails.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Who starting with the 2009 -- 10 season, the head coach position was took by Andrei Tarasenko, a former Novosibirsk forward and a father of the club's young winger Vladimir Tarasenko. Who led Sibir to its first Gagarin Cup playoffs in 2011.

Target: Starting with the 2009 -- 10 season, the head coach position was taken by Andrei Tarasenko, a former Novosibirsk forward and a father of the club's young winger Vladimir Tarasenko, who led Sibir to its first Gagarin Cup playoffs in 2011.


Source: Make the text coherent: The stated reason was that she had attended an AIDS conference without his permission. Critics argued this was merely an excuse for Mbeki to rid himself of a politician who was willing to criticize his policies.

Target: The stated reason was that she had attended an AIDS conference without his permission, but critics argued this was merely an excuse for Mbeki to rid himself of a politician who was willing to criticize his policies.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: HMCS Tecumseh is properly referred to as a ship, as it has been officially christened as Her Majesty's Canadian ship. Since the ship is ship of the reserves ship does not operate on a full-time basis, except for the museum.

Target: HMCS Tecumseh is properly referred to as a ship, as it has been officially christened as Her Majesty's Canadian ship. However, since the ship is part of the reserves it does not operate on a full-time basis, except for the museum.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Eurydice was paid off between 1782 and 1783 but recommissioned in April 1783. An 18-year-old Fletcher Christian, later to be the instigator of the mutiny on the Bounty, signed on aboard Eurydice on 25 April 1783 at Spithead.

Target: Eurydice was paid off between 1782 and 1783 but recommissioned in April 1783. An 18-year-old Fletcher Christian, later to be the instigator of the mutiny on the Bounty, signed on aboard HMS Eurydice on 25 April 1783 at Spithead.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In addition Somerville's ships were within easy range of shore based enemy aircraft. His object was to get the convoy safely to Malta, so he charged ahead at the Italians.

Target: In addition Somerville's ships were within easy range of shore based enemy aircraft. But, his object was to get the convoy safely to Malta, so he charged ahead at the Italians.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Essentially, HaZore'a still operates as a socialistic society, providing uniform living conditions to kibbutz members. Several changes of individualistic nature have already taken place, such as privatization of services like the dining room and the electricity utility.

Target: Essentially, HaZore'a still operates as a socialistic society, providing uniform living conditions to kibbutz members. Nevertheless, several changes of individualistic nature have already taken place, such as privatization of services like the dining room and the electricity utility.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Boxing Day match against Sri Lanka marked New Zealand's first Test in Christchurch since the city was hit by a major earthquake in 2011. Nearly 10 years since Lancaster Park held what became the final match in Christchurch in 2006.

Target: The Boxing Day match against Sri Lanka marked New Zealand's first Test in Christchurch since the city was hit by a major earthquake in 2011, but nearly 10 years since Lancaster Park held what became the final match in Christchurch in 2006.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He was sometimes unjust. These flaws in him merely prove his humanity.

Target: He was sometimes unjust. But these flaws in him merely prove his humanity.


Source: Fix sentence flow: She overhears her husband's confession of her failure as a wife to him as he makes it to his employer. She considers suicide.

Target: Overhearing her husband's confession of her failure as a wife to him as he makes it to his employer, she considers suicide.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Each country was allowed to designate one additional airline. Four airlines from each country were allowed to fly between the two countries.

Target: Each country was allowed to designate one additional airline so that four airlines from each country were allowed to fly between the two countries.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Akhiok (Kasukuak in Alutiiq) is a second-class city in Kodiak Island Borough, Alaska, United States. city is Kodiak Island Borough's southernmost city.

Target: Akhiok (Kasukuak in Alutiiq) is a second-class city in Kodiak Island Borough, Alaska, United States. Akhiok is Kodiak's southernmost village.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Such a concept of life has enabled her to live a rich sentimental life. According to her own words she has been able to find love in other past lives.

Target: Such a concept of life has enabled her to live a rich sentimental life, because according to her own words she has been able to find love in other past lives.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Her drawings attracted the attention of adults. Despite her young age.

Target: Her drawings attracted the attention of adults, because despite her young age.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Al Sadd Futsal Team is part of the Al Sadd Sports Club in Qatar. Al Sadd Futsal Team is a futsal Al Sadd Sports Club based in Doha, Qatar and Al Sadd Futsal Team plays Al Sadd Futsal Team's home matches in the Jassim bin Hamad Indoor Hall.

Target: Al Sadd Futsal Team is part of the Al Sadd Sports Club in Qatar. It is a futsal team based in Doha, Qatar and it plays its home matches in the Jassim bin Hamad Indoor Hall.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Sharpton also threatened that Hawkins's three companions would not cooperate with prosecutor Elizabeth Holtzman. Prosecutor's 's office agreed to hire more black attorneys.

Target: Sharpton also threatened that Hawkins's three companions would not cooperate with prosecutor Elizabeth Holtzman unless her office agreed to hire more black attorneys.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: I don't assume that just. Somebody's my color.

Target: I don't assume that just because somebody's my color.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There is no record of likely use by pre-Roman cultures. Perhaps the first ones to use alabaster in Aragon were the Romans, who produced vessels from alabaster following the Greek and Egyptian models.

Target: There is no record of likely use by pre-Roman cultures, so perhaps the first ones to use alabaster in Aragon were the Romans, who produced vessels from alabaster following the Greek and Egyptian models.


Source: Fix sentence flow: According to a brochure published by the Aragon government, alabaster has elsewhere either been depleted. Government's extraction is so difficult that it has almost been abandoned or is carried out at a very high cost.

Target: According to a brochure published by the Aragon government, alabaster has elsewhere either been depleted, or its extraction is so difficult that it has almost been abandoned or is carried out at a very high cost.


Source: Fix coherence: During this time, a private firm, the Pagan Society, owned by a German and a Japanese partner, developed more coconut plantations. Severe typhoons in September 1905, September 1907 and December 1913 destroyed the plantations and bankrupted the company.

Target: During this time, a private firm, the Pagan Society, owned by a German and a Japanese partner, developed more coconut plantations. However, severe typhoons in September 1905, September 1907 and December 1913 destroyed the plantations and bankrupted the company.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: De Lastic founded. De Lastic became president of the United Christians Forum for Human Rights, an interdenominational group.

Target: de Lastic founded and became president of the United Christians Forum for Human Rights, an interdenominational group.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It spanned 22 years. It resulted in a collection of 72,000 colour photographs and 183,000 meters of film.

Target: Spanning 22 years, it resulted in a collection of 72,000 colour photographs and 183,000 meters of film.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: On most contemporary concept albums, the performers or bands sing as themselves,. On an album musical the performers are playing characters in a story.

Target: On most contemporary concept albums, the performers or bands sing as themselves, whereas on an album musical the performers are playing characters in a story.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The Warthin-Starry stain is named for him. The Warthin-Starry stain is a silver-based stain for spirochetes.

Target: The Warthin-Starry stain, a silver-based stain for spirochetes, is named for him.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: His coach was at first skeptical about a big but powerless boy, yet he accepted Karelin and motivated him for hard training, both in wrestling technique and physical strength. Over the years Karelin progressed from 0 to 42 pull-ups.

Target: His coach was at first skeptical about a big but powerless boy, yet he accepted Karelin and motivated him for hard training, both in wrestling technique and physical strength. As a result, over the years Karelin progressed from 0 to 42 pull-ups.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Owumi went against his family's wishes. Owumi chose to follow his coach's advice, because he did not want his relatives to see his poor physical and mental state ; he felt that he could recover by playing basketball.

Target: Going against his family's wishes, Owumi chose to follow his coach's advice, because he did not want his relatives to see his poor physical and mental state ; he felt that he could recover by playing basketball.


Source: Make the text clearer: He wanted to join the Scorchers. Head coach Creon Raftopoulos would give him more freedom to bring in players he knew to the team.

Target: He wanted to join the Scorchers because head coach Creon Raftopoulos would give him more freedom to bring in players he knew to the team.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Additionally, he was a member of the Milwaukee School Board and a Milwaukee supervisor. In 1906, member was an unsuccessful member for Treasurer of Milwaukee.

Target: Additionally, he was a member of the Milwaukee School Board and a Milwaukee supervisor. In 1906, Martin was an unsuccessful candidate for Treasurer of Milwaukee.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He put his fighting years behind him. He made amends with all his former opponents and even visited The Netherlands several times for reunions with KNIL pensioners before his death in 2000.

Target: Putting his fighting years behind him, he made amends with all his former opponents and even visited The Netherlands several times for reunions with KNIL pensioners before his death in 2000.


Source: Make the text more logical: Jump up ^ Wagner, Richard ; Elli, William Ashton (1911). Family Letters of Wagner, Richard.

Target: Jump up ^ Wagner, Richard ; Elli, William Ashton (1911). Family Letters of Richard Wagner.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: There, her performed one of the Red Square's concerts with Russian National Orchestra after which he returned to Russia. When he returned, he continued collaboration among Russia ballet and theatres such as the Yekaterinburg Opera and Ballet Theatre and Kyiv Opera.

Target: There, her performed one of the Red Square's concerts with Russian National Orchestra after which he returned to Russia. When he returned, he continued collaboration among Russian ballet and theatres such as the Yekaterinburg Opera and Ballet Theatre and Kyiv Opera.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It emerged originally in ancient Greece. It emerged and evolved in Western Europe and spread around the world.

Target: Emerging originally in ancient Greece, it emerged and evolved in Western Europe and spread around the world.


Source: Fix coherence: For this concession he was taken to task, but he defended himself by examples of other permissions of the same kind given even to Origen himself elsewhere. Then quite young.

Target: For this concession he was taken to task, but he defended himself by examples of other permissions of the same kind given even to Origen himself elsewhere, although then quite young.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: AliHealth was launched in 2014 when Alibaba and Yunfeng Capital bought a 54 % stake in Citic 21CN. Yunfeng Capital is a private equity firm.

Target: AliHealth was launched in 2014 when Alibaba and Yunfeng Capital, a private equity firm, bought a 54 % stake in Citic 21CN.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He meets Alice in a not-so-nice way but later build a strong friendship with her. Their friendship will be tested when Don Zaldy, Ace's grandfather dies and Alice will be the one accused of causing this incident.

Target: He meets Alice in a not-so-nice way but later build a strong friendship with her. But their friendship will be tested when Don Zaldy, Ace's grandfather dies and Alice will be the one accused of causing this incident.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: As she reaches her tween stage, the oppression intensifies making her feel that the only people who love her are Ipeng and few kids in the institution. Things will change when she meets Ace, the guy who will give her hope and encouragement.

Target: As she reaches her tween stage, the oppression intensifies making her feel that the only people who love her are Ipeng and few kids in the institution. However, things will change when she meets Ace, the guy who will give her hope and encouragement.


Source: Make the text more logical: Allen commenced her professional career in 1936. Allen worked as a geological engineer for U.S. government in Washington, D.C., undertaking work at the U.S Geological Survey (USGS).

Target: Commencing her professional career in 1936, Allen worked as a geological engineer for U.S. government in Washington, D.C., undertaking work at the U.S Geological Survey (USGS).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He gave a red card to the North Korean defender in the 32nd minute. North Korean went on to defeat Turkmenistan in penalties.

Target: He gave a red card to the North Korean defender in the 32nd minute but North Korea went on to defeat Turkmenistan in penalties.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: City Gates Church, a congregation with roots in the British New Church Movement, currently holds their Sunday services in All Hallows. City Gates Church is the first City Gates Church to hold their Sunday services there since 1941 and builds on All Hallows' previous traditions.

Target: City Gates Church, a congregation with roots in the British New Church Movement, currently holds their Sunday services in All Hallows. It is the first group to hold their Sunday services there since 1941 and builds on All Hallows' previous traditions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: For reasons unknown, Season 1 was not the first to air on The' 90s Are All That. It Season not been confirmed Season it will even air in the future.

Target: For reasons unknown, Season 1 was not the first to air on The' 90s Are All That, nor has it been confirmed whether it will even air in the future.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Streams also are affected. People should limit stream contact as well.

Target: Since streams also are affected, people should limit stream contact as well.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This hurdle was cleared when Alcosan secured a four-year loan of $100 million in 1955. A four-year loan of $100 million is the largest for sewage treatment in American history.

Target: This hurdle was cleared when Alcosan secured a four-year loan of $100 million, the largest for sewage treatment in American history, in 1955.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Each costing $18,000, the murals consisting of five triptychs. Each showing a different aspect of native life.

Target: Costing $18,000, the murals consisted of five triptychs, each showing a different aspect of native life.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This created a legal problem for the Allies. Although the German military forces had surrendered unconditionally.

Target: This created a legal problem for the Allies, because although the German military forces had surrendered unconditionally.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He declared that art existed only to communicate a spiritual message, and nothing more ;. His frustration at the fame he gained by his commercial art.

Target: He declared that art existed only to communicate a spiritual message, and nothing more ; hence his frustration at the fame he gained by his commercial art.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Each regiment consisted of one of the brigades Alpini battalions and an additional support company. In 1993 the Tridentina Command and Signal Battalion was merged with the Engineer Company into the newly formed Tridentina Command and Tactical Support Battalion.

Target: Each regiment consisted of one of the brigades Alpini battalions and an additional support company. Furthermore, in 1993 the Tridentina Command and Signal Battalion was merged with the Engineer Company into the newly formed Tridentina Command and Tactical Support Battalion.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Only having one Senior Division, Altona joined the strong Metropolitan Football League with 1 Senior side. Only having one Senior Division, Altona had its Reserves and Juniors in the Werribee Football League.

Target: only having one Senior Division, Altona joined the strong Metropolitan Football League with 1 Senior side and had its Reserves and Juniors in the Werribee Football League.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: On the football team he was the backup quarterback to Doc Kuhn. At Vanderbilt, backup quarterback was a backup quarterback of the Sigma Alpha Epsilon fraternity.

Target: On the football team he was the backup quarterback to Doc Kuhn. At Vanderbilt, Bell was a member of the Sigma Alpha Epsilon fraternity.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Shrub to four metres with many alternate branches. Lower ones may be sparse.

Target: Shrub to four metres with many alternate branches, although lower ones may be sparse.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The API has become a popular method for object storage. More and more applications have been built to natively support the S3 API.

Target: The API has become a popular method for object storage. As a result, more and more applications have been built to natively support the S3 API.


Source: Fix sentence flow: While high, Ryan proposes to Amelia. Amelia accepts, giving Ryan Amelia's father's watch.

Target: While high, Ryan proposes to Amelia and she accepts, giving him her father's watch.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: She soon begins a relationship with Owen Hunt (Kevin McKidd), her boss, and admits to Derek that she is falling in love with him. She later tells boss that it was a mistake to mix their personal and professional lives.

Target: She soon begins a relationship with Owen Hunt (Kevin McKidd), her boss, and admits to Derek that she is falling in love with him. However, she later tells Owen that it was a mistake to mix their personal and professional lives.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: From 2001 to 2011, the midtown space served as the museum's main branch. Facing increasingly high bond payments, the museum sold the midtown branch to the nearby Museum of Modern Art.

Target: From 2001 to 2011, the midtown space served as the museum's main branch. However, facing increasingly high bond payments, the museum sold the midtown branch to the nearby Museum of Modern Art.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Although the description doesn't mention a hook, as in Ancyloceras or Acrioceras, Ammonitoceras is included in the Ancyloceratidae. Neither do Australiceras or Tropaeum, which are also included.

Target: Although the description doesn't mention a hook, as in Ancyloceras or Acrioceras, Ammonitoceras is included in the Ancyloceratidae. However neither do Australiceras or Tropaeum, which are also included.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Post-competition examinations revealed a bone bruise in her left ankle. She withdrew from all her fall events.

Target: Post-competition examinations revealed a bone bruise in her left ankle. Consequently, she withdrew from all her fall events.


Source: Fix sentence transition: If we have a universal understanding of a concept like sweetness, it is not. This is an innate understanding.

Target: If we have a universal understanding of a concept like sweetness, it is not because this is an innate idea.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Robert Adams is Technical Fellow and manager of audio development at Analog Devices Inc. Fellow holds many patents related to the audio and electronic field.

Target: Robert Adams is Technical Fellow and manager of audio development at Analog Devices Inc. Adams holds many patents related to the audio and electronic field.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Ktorov's stuttering was noticeable only in his real life off-stage, but he never stuttered on-stage. Director Komissarzhevsky did not believe in Ktorov, and Ktorov's career seemed to be limited to cameo roles.

Target: Ktorov's stuttering was noticeable only in his real life off-stage, but he never stuttered on-stage. However, director Komissarzhevsky did not believe in Ktorov, and his career seemed to be limited to cameo roles.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Knights were coached by Bill Klucas, who won the 1980 CBA Coach of the Year award. Dick Lobdell, who was the voice of the Alaska Baseball League, served as the Knights play-by-play commentator.

Target: The Knights were coached by Bill Klucas, who won the 1980 CBA Coach of the Year award. Dick Lobdell, who was the voice of the Alaska Baseball League, served as the Northern Knights play-by-play commentator.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The rules are also divided into hands. For example one foot is given as three hands and fifteen fingers and also as four palms and sixteen fingers.

Target: The rules are also divided into hands so that for example one foot is given as three hands and fifteen fingers and also as four palms and sixteen fingers.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This underlying unity (substratum, arche) could not be any of the classical elements, since they were one extreme or another. Water is wet, the opposite of dry, while fire is dry, the opposite of wet.

Target: This underlying unity (substratum, arche) could not be any of the classical elements, since they were one extreme or another. For example, water is wet, the opposite of dry, while fire is dry, the opposite of wet.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He began from the observation that the world seems to consist of opposites (e.g., hot and cold). A thing can become its opposite (e.g., a hot thing cold).

Target: He began from the observation that the world seems to consist of opposites (e.g., hot and cold), yet a thing can become its opposite (e.g., a hot thing cold).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He then taught theology for six years in the Dominican College of Graz. Was theology's prior from 1872 to 1875, and then prior of the house in Vienna from 1876 to 1880.

Target: He then taught theology for six years in the Dominican College of Graz and was its prior from 1872 to 1875, and then prior of the house in Vienna from 1876 to 1880.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Wright's efforts to improve the social and economic situations were stifled by a lack of funds. During Wright's time the first direct election to the Legislative Council, in 1947, was organised, which saw Edward Francis Small elected.

Target: Wright's efforts to improve the social and economic situations were stifled by a lack of funds. However, during his time the first direct election to the Legislative Council, in 1947, was organised, which saw Edward Francis Small elected.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Parliamentary video of part of the incident appeared to show that Bartlett was drunk in the chamber. Did not show Bartlett grabbing Ferris's arm.

Target: Parliamentary video of part of the incident appeared to show that Bartlett was drunk in the chamber, although did not show him grabbing Ferris's arm.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Bolon heeded Shumaway's warning. Bolon turned back and began the ride home.

Target: Heeding Shumaway's warning, Bolon turned back and began the ride home.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Michelmore won a Rhodes Scholarship in 1976 and stroked the Oxford University Boat Club to consecutive Boat Race victories in 1977 and 1978. Michelmore was Michelmore of the Oxford University Boat Club in both those years.

Target: Michelmore won a Rhodes Scholarship in 1976 and stroked the Oxford University Boat Club to consecutive Boat Race victories in 1977 and 1978. He was President of the Oxford Rowing Club in both those years.


Source: Fix coherence: Tisch testified under oath before Congress in 1994. Tisch said that there was little evidence to support exactly who or which demographic was more likely to become addicted to nicotine.

Target: Testifying under oath before Congress in 1994, Tisch said that there was little evidence to support exactly who or which demographic was more likely to become addicted to nicotine.


Source: Fix sentence transition: They desired to bring frozen custard to Missouri. They dedicated themselves to creating a frozen custard brand of their own.

Target: Desiring to bring frozen custard to Missouri, they dedicated themselves to creating a frozen custard brand of their own.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He appeared in 43 games. He was the second-leading scorer on the team, registering 15 goals and 29 assists, finishing above a point-per-game pace with 44 points.

Target: Appearing in 43 games, he was the second-leading scorer on the team, registering 15 goals and 29 assists, finishing above a point-per-game pace with 44 points.


Source: Make the text coherent: She starred in Cadenas de amor at the age of 37. Other telenovelas in the 1960s with the second to last one in 1970.

Target: She starred in Cadenas de amor at the age of 37, and other telenovelas in the 1960s with the second to last one in 1970.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Local freight services ceased, and the electric staff system was withdrawn. Only one train could be on the branch at a time.

Target: Local freight services ceased, and the electric staff system was withdrawn, so that only one train could be on the branch at a time.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Anglican High School was founded in 1956 by the Chinese-speaking congregations of the Anglican Diocese of Singapore. Anglican High School was the only Anglican Anglican High School in Anglican Diocese of Singapore with Chinese as Anglican High School's medium of instruction.

Target: Anglican High School was founded in 1956 by the Chinese-speaking congregations of the Anglican Diocese of Singapore. It was the only Anglican school in Singapore with Chinese as its medium of instruction.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moore included: Sir Ralph Moore is the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate.

Target: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moore, the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate, included :


Source: Fix sentence flow: Anglo-Indian Canadians are Canadian citizens of Anglo-Indian heritage. Many Anglo-Indian Canadian have roots in the Indian Subcontinent.

Target: Anglo-Indian Canadians are Canadian citizens of Anglo-Indian heritage. Many Anglo-Indian Canadians have roots in the Indian Subcontinent.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The LNG project is presented as environmentally friendly by its designers. Most of LNG project's feedstock will consist of associated gas produced in association with crude oil in offshore field.

Target: The LNG project is presented as environmentally friendly by its designers, because most of its feedstock will consist of associated gas produced in association with crude oil in offshore field.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Second, a special bond is created between animal and child during pet therapy. If the animal in question does not belong to the child, there may be some negative side effects when the child discontinues therapy.

Target: Second, a special bond is created between animal and child during pet therapy. Therefore, if the animal in question does not belong to the child, there may be some negative side effects when the child discontinues therapy.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: These experiences seem so common and simple, but elderly dementia patients do not typically have these interactions with people. Dementia patients' loved ones have passed or no one comes to dementia patients them.

Target: These experiences seem so common and simple, but elderly dementia patients do not typically have these interactions with people because their loved ones have passed or no one comes to visit them.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Aged 14 she also learned to play piano. This is the piano to study violin at musical schools in Germany.

Target: Aged 14 she also learned to play piano because this is the requirement to study violin at musical schools in Germany.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In Springtime Two: An Anthology of Current Trends, edited by Peter Owen & Wendy Owen. Peter Owen, 1958.

Target: In Springtime Two: An Anthology of Current Trends, edited by Peter Owen & Wendy Owen. London: Peter Owen Ltd., 1958.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Jump up ^ Brian Aldiss 1995. Brian Aldiss is the Detached Retina: aspects of SF and Fantasy published Syracuse University Press.

Target: Jump up ^ Brian Aldiss, The Detached Retina: aspects of SF and Fantasy published Syracuse University Press, 1995.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Her books were never popular in Ireland, as she saw in each party much to praise and much to blame. She failed to please either the Orangemen or the Roman Catholics.

Target: Her books were never popular in Ireland, as she saw in each party much to praise and much to blame, so that she failed to please either the Orangemen or the Roman Catholics.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This story came to light. Former Superintendent Chuck Weis was attempting to walk away from a penthouse apartment he purchased with the loan but which lost considerable value.

Target: This story came to light because former Superintendent Chuck Weis was attempting to walk away from a penthouse apartment he purchased with the loan but which lost considerable value.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Trained from an early age to kill, Anna's only close bond is with Moe. Anna's main purpose in life is to Anna's her father.

Target: Trained from an early age to kill, Anna's only close bond is with Moe, and her main purpose in life is to kill her father.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In 2017 Fulenwider was named to the New York State Council on Women and Girls by Governor Andrew Cuomo. Fulenwider is also an Fulenwider to the UN Foundation's Girl Up and a member of the Corporation for Public Broadcasting's ITVS Women & Girls Leadership Council.

Target: In 2017 Fulenwider was named to the New York State Council on Women and Girls by Governor Andrew Cuomo. She is also an advisor to the UN Foundation's Girl Up and a member of the Corporation for Public Broadcasting's ITVS Women & Girls Leadership Council.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Gunter was baptised in 1584 in Hungerford. She was the daughter of Anne and Gunter.

Target: Gunter was baptised in 1584 in Hungerford. She was the daughter of Anne and Brian Gunter.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Many of them are living it. Many have been living it for decades-Many just didn't know it.

Target: Many of them are living it. In fact, they have been living it for decades-they just didn't know it.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Several key publications on using AAO for bottom-up templated nanofabrication appeared by the mid-1990s. AAO became widely recognized and very popular platform for design and synthesis of high density arrays of nanostructures (nanowires, nanotubes) and functional nanocomposites.

Target: Since several key publications on using AAO for bottom-up templated nanofabrication appeared by the mid-1990s, AAO became widely recognized and very popular platform for design and synthesis of high density arrays of nanostructures (nanowires, nanotubes) and functional nanocomposites.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Critical of Harold Wilson. Crosland was angry with Wilson for challenging Gaitskell in 1960 for the party leadership, Crosland respected him as a political operator.

Target: Although critical of Harold Wilson, Crosland was angry with Wilson for challenging Gaitskell in 1960 for the party leadership, Crosland respected him as a political operator.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jeselnik earned a bachelor's degree in English literature with a business minor from Tulane University in 2001. During Jeselnik's senior year Tulane University Tulane, Jeselnik's girlfriend accidentally burned down his apartment, which he would later use as early standup material.

Target: Jeselnik earned a bachelor's degree in English literature with a business minor from Tulane University in 2001. During his senior year at Tulane, his girlfriend accidentally burned down his apartment, which he would later use as early standup material.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Jump up ^ Not to be confused with the German Steinkohle or Dutch steenkool which are broader terms. All varieties of coal of a stonelike hardness and appearance.

Target: Jump up ^ Not to be confused with the German Steinkohle or Dutch steenkool which are broader terms meaning all varieties of coal of a stonelike hardness and appearance.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Increased demand in China has made that country into a net importer of the fuel, mostly from Vietnam, another major producer of anthracite for power generation. Increasing domestic consumption in Vietnam means that exports may be scaled back.

Target: Increased demand in China has made that country into a net importer of the fuel, mostly from Vietnam, another major producer of anthracite for power generation, although increasing domestic consumption in Vietnam means that exports may be scaled back.


Source: Make the text coherent: After capturing Barry. Barry's ability to traverse the multiverse unaided Barry him a dangerous variable.

Target: After capturing Barry because his ability to traverse the multiverse unaided made him a dangerous variable.


Source: Make the text more coherent: During the Blackest Night, the Anti-Monitor was resurrected as a Black Lantern. Nekron was unable to fully control him and thus was only able to subdue the Anti-Monitor to be used as power source for the Black Lantern' Central Battery.

Target: During the Blackest Night, the Anti-Monitor was resurrected as a Black Lantern. However, Nekron was unable to fully control him and thus was only able to subdue the Anti-Monitor to be used as power source for the Black Lantern Corps' Central Battery.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Factors that determine the behavior include the particle species involved, the electromagnetic, gravitational, and nuclear fields controlling the system. For any Earth-bound experiment, the rotational and orbital motion of the Earth is important, leading to sidereal and seasonal signals.

Target: Factors that determine the behavior include the particle species involved, the electromagnetic, gravitational, and nuclear fields controlling the system. Furthermore, for any Earth-bound experiment, the rotational and orbital motion of the Earth is important, leading to sidereal and seasonal signals.


Source: Make the text more logical: Some chemotherapies are alkylating agents. Agents attach an alkyl group to DNA to stop it from being read.

Target: Some chemotherapies are alkylating agents meaning they attach an alkyl group to DNA to stop it from being read.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The attempt failed. The attempt involved a bazooka.

Target: The attempt, which involved a bazooka, failed.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He was converted to Buddhism by the Buddha ; this is one of the most popular legends in Buddhist lore and art. The tale is often told to children of Buddhism parents for them to learn their happiness lies in the Buddhism faith.

Target: He was converted to Buddhism by the Buddha ; this is one of the most popular legends in Buddhist lore and art. The tale is often told to children of Buddhist parents for them to learn their happiness lies in the Buddhist faith.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Apollodorus assumed from this that the two artists were contemporary. Apollodorus flourished about 324 BCE.

Target: Assuming from this that the two artists were contemporary, Apollodorus flourished about 324 BCE.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Because of its Reyes heritage, Aqsis lacks some advanced global illumination features like ray tracing. Active efforts are underway to support some such features.

Target: Because of its Reyes heritage, Aqsis lacks some advanced global illumination features like ray tracing, although active efforts are underway to support some such features.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The endings are actually mostly regular. Some endings are irregular in the non-past, in boldface :

Target: The endings are actually mostly regular. But some endings are irregular in the non-past, in boldface :


Source: Make the text clearer: A tiny minority of more recent scholars are backers of the Peshitta-original theory today, whereas the overwhelming majority of scholars consider the Peshitta New Testament to be a translation from a Greek original. The noted Assyriologist Sebastian Brock wrote :

Target: A tiny minority of more recent scholars are backers of the Peshitta-original theory today, whereas the overwhelming majority of scholars consider the Peshitta New Testament to be a translation from a Greek original. For instance the noted Assyriologist Sebastian Brock wrote :


Source: Make the text more coherent: Technicalities prevented all the legal requirements being finalised by the due date. For practical purposes the transfer took place.

Target: Technicalities prevented all the legal requirements being finalised by the due date, although for practical purposes the transfer took place.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It is a huge black snake, that is given. Are there other snakes in the dream?

Target: It is a huge black snake, that is given. But are there other snakes in the dream?


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This building has been substantially altered in more recent times. Fortunately Edward Pugh published a fine coloured lithograph of the building in 1816.

Target: This building has been substantially altered in more recent times, but fortunately Edward Pugh published a fine coloured lithograph of the building in 1816.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This act was in implemented in each Welsh county by the Court of Great Sessions. Which led to the building of many new prisons across Welsh.

Target: This act was in implemented in each Welsh county by the Court of Great Sessions and which led to the building of many new prisons across Wales.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Higher temperatures increase soil decomposition. If soil decomposition becomes higher than net primary production, global atmospheric carbon dioxide will in turn increase.

Target: Higher temperatures increase soil decomposition and if soil decomposition becomes higher than net primary production, global atmospheric carbon dioxide will in turn increase.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: These options might seem to be easy solutions to the difficulties of surviving an extreme environment. Both are very expensive in terms of energy and risk of predation.

Target: Although these options might seem to be easy solutions to the difficulties of surviving an extreme environment, both are very expensive in terms of energy and risk of predation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Roth is a former professor and chairman of Biology at Emmanuel Missionary College, now Andrews University. At Loma Linda University.

Target: Roth is a former professor and chairman of Biology at Emmanuel Missionary College, now Andrews University. and at Loma Linda University.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Physics introduces matter and form and the four causes -- material, formal, efficient and final. To explain a statue, one can offer :

Target: The Physics introduces matter and form and the four causes -- material, formal, efficient and final. For example, to explain a statue, one can offer :


Source: Make the text coherent: Many medieval philosophers made use of the idea of approaching a knowledge of God through negative attributes. We should not say that God exists in the usual sense of the term, all we can safely say is that God is not nonexistent.

Target: Many medieval philosophers made use of the idea of approaching a knowledge of God through negative attributes. For example, we should not say that God exists in the usual sense of the term, all we can safely say is that God is not nonexistent.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In this distinction, there is a particular apple and a universal form of an apple. We can place an apple next to a book, so that we can speak of both the book and apple as being next to each other.

Target: In this distinction, there is a particular apple and a universal form of an apple. Moreover, we can place an apple next to a book, so that we can speak of both the book and apple as being next to each other.


Source: Fix coherence: Little information about Aristotle's childhood has survived. He probably spent some time within the Macedonian palace, making his first connections with the Macedonian monarchy.

Target: Although little information about Aristotle's childhood has survived, he probably spent some time within the Macedonian palace, making his first connections with the Macedonian monarchy.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Brood size decreases with (adult) body mass. An elephant has fewer young.

Target: Brood size decreases with (adult) body mass, so that an elephant has fewer young.


Source: Fix sentence flow: And it belongs to this sort of philosophy to study being as being, both what it is. What belongs to it just by virtue of being.

Target: And it belongs to this sort of philosophy to study being as being, both what it is and what belongs to it just by virtue of being.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This refers to potentiality. This is what a thing is capable of doing, or being acted upon, if the conditions are right and it is not prevented by something else.

Target: Referring to potentiality, this is what a thing is capable of doing, or being acted upon, if the conditions are right and it is not prevented by something else.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Aristotle's ontology places the universal (katholou) in particulars (kath' hekaston), things in the world,. For Plato the universal is a separately existing form which actual things imitate.

Target: Aristotle's ontology places the universal (katholou) in particulars (kath' hekaston), things in the world, whereas for Plato the universal is a separately existing form which actual things imitate.


Source: Make the text coherent: Narihira was once widely considered the author of the work. Scholars have come to reject this attribution.

Target: Narihira was once widely considered the author of the work, but scholars have come to reject this attribution.


Source: Make the text more logical: Mayer argues that Adolf Hitler ordered the Final Solution in December 1941 in response to the realisation that the Wehrmacht could not take Moscow,. Ensuring Nazi Germany's defeat at the hands of the Soviet Union.

Target: Mayer argues that Adolf Hitler ordered the Final Solution in December 1941 in response to the realisation that the Wehrmacht could not take Moscow, hence ensuring Nazi Germany's defeat at the hands of the Soviet Union.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Early music scholar Willi Apel writes: Early music scholar Willi Apel authored the earliest comprehensive analysis of Schlick's keyboard music.

Target: Early music scholar Willi Apel, who authored the earliest comprehensive analysis of Schlick's keyboard music, writes :


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He held seniority over newer umpires in the American League. He regained his umpiring job, which he held until his resignation in 1953.

Target: Holding seniority over newer umpires in the American League, he regained his umpiring job, which he held until his resignation in 1953.


Source: Make the text coherent: On one hand the Sacchi acted as a concept of incorporating aspects of everyday life into art. It was thought to be associated with the body.

Target: On one hand the Sacchi acted as a concept of incorporating aspects of everyday life into art. On the other hand it was thought to be associated with the body.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Brown returned to Mackay alone to pick up the car. Police speculate that if the couple had taken an early train, Brown could have been passing Eimeo at the time that Wallman disappeared.

Target: Brown returned to Mackay alone to pick up the car and police speculate that if the couple had taken an early train, Brown could have been passing Eimeo at the time that Wallman disappeared.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A subsequent dream, in which he imagines himself walking. Where New Directions failed to get off the ground without his presence, makes him realize his importance to the club.

Target: A subsequent dream, in which he imagines himself walking, but where New Directions failed to get off the ground without his presence, makes him realize his importance to the club.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Kyros mentioned by Ashurbanipal did not have vassal status, but gave voluntary gifts to Assyria to ensure friendly relations with the new neighbor. These gifts were recorded in the Assyria king's lists as a tribute.

Target: The Kyros mentioned by Ashurbanipal did not have vassal status, but gave voluntary gifts to Assyria to ensure friendly relations with the new neighbor. However, these gifts were recorded in the Assyrian king's lists as a tribute.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Wah accepts that Fly is not cut out for mob work. Wah gets him a legitimate job selling fishballs from a food cart.

Target: Accepting that Fly is not cut out for mob work, Wah gets him a legitimate job selling fishballs from a food cart.


Source: Make the text coherent: Asa is typically understood as the son of Abijam. Scholars have found the biblical accounts of Asa's family to be contradictory.

Target: Asa is typically understood as the son of Abijam. However, scholars have found the biblical accounts of Asa's family to be contradictory.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Asad's advance caught the khagan and Harith off guard ; Asad came upon them near Kharistan, where they were accompanied by only 4,000 men, the rest having scattered to plunder and forage. In the ensuing Kharistan, Asad routed the Turgesh.

Target: Asad's advance caught the khagan and Harith off guard ; Asad came upon them near Kharistan, where they were accompanied by only 4,000 men, the rest having scattered to plunder and forage. In the ensuing Battle of Kharistan, Asad routed the Turgesh.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Ashland was originally called Uniontown, but in 1822 the city was compelled to adopt a new name. Another city in Ohio was already named Uniontown.

Target: Ashland was originally called Uniontown, but in 1822 the city was compelled to adopt a new name because another city in Ohio was already named Uniontown.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The music video was another hit with MTV. In 1986 this Asia lineup folded, bringing the group to an end for the time being.

Target: The music video was another hit with MTV but in 1986 this Asia lineup folded, bringing the group to an end for the time being.


Source: Make the text coherent: A video was planned but scrapped. Various problems hampered the single's chance at the Top 40.

Target: A video was planned but scrapped because various problems hampered the single's chance at the Top 40.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In addition, he was trained during his time at the Indian Institute of Technology in telekinesis. Despite being told he could not use his powers in front of the ungifted, he has used it for personal gain or for defense on occasion.

Target: In addition, he was trained during his time at the Indian Institute of Technology in telekinesis, and despite being told he could not use his powers in front of the ungifted, he has used it for personal gain or for defense on occasion.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A. aethiopicus has been confused with A. densiflorus, now regarded as a separate species. Information about A. aethiopicus will often be found under the A. densiflorus A. densiflorus.

Target: A. aethiopicus has been confused with A. densiflorus, now regarded as a separate species, so that information about A. aethiopicus will often be found under the name A. densiflorus.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: All Swedish clubs named IFK are members of IFK's central organisation. Clubs named IFK in Finland are not.

Target: All Swedish clubs named IFK are members of IFK's central organisation, while clubs named IFK in Finland are not.


Source: Make the text more logical: John ruled over Asti until 1372. Seven years later the city council submitted to Galeazzo II Visconti's authority.

Target: John ruled over Asti until 1372, but seven years later the city council submitted to Galeazzo II Visconti's authority.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In the 1290s, after William VII had also been defeated, Asti was the most powerful city in Piedmont. Internal struggles for the control of trading and banking enterprises soon divided the city into factions.

Target: In the 1290s, after William VII had also been defeated, Asti was the most powerful city in Piedmont. However, internal struggles for the control of trading and banking enterprises soon divided the city into factions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He misunderstands the instructions he is given and not yet in control of his amazing power. He commits one mistake after another, drawing Hamegg's fury.

Target: Misunderstanding the instructions he is given and not yet in control of his amazing power, he commits one mistake after another, drawing Hamegg's fury.


Source: Make the text clearer: Moreover, such methods are completely blind to molecules that have no dipole. By far the most common molecule in the universe is H (hydrogen gas), but it does not have a dipole moment, so it is invisible to radio telescopes.

Target: Moreover, such methods are completely blind to molecules that have no dipole. For example, by far the most common molecule in the universe is H (hydrogen gas), but it does not have a dipole moment, so it is invisible to radio telescopes.


Source: Make the text more logical: Since the middle of the 20th century, most countries have claimed to be a democracy, regardless of the actual makeup of its government. After the demise of Athenian democracy, few looked upon it as a good form of government.

Target: Since the middle of the 20th century, most countries have claimed to be a democracy, regardless of the actual makeup of its government. Yet, after the demise of Athenian democracy, few looked upon it as a good form of government.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: An unknown proportion of citizens were also subject to disenfranchisement (atimia), excluding some of them permanently and others temporarily (depending on the type). All citizens selected were reviewed before taking up office (dokimasia) at which they might be disqualified.

Target: An unknown proportion of citizens were also subject to disenfranchisement (atimia), excluding some of them permanently and others temporarily (depending on the type). Furthermore, all citizens selected were reviewed before taking up office (dokimasia) at which they might be disqualified.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In the case of a scrutiny going to trial, there was the risk for the former officeholder of suffering severe penalties. Even during his period of office, any officeholder could be impeached and removed from office by the assembly.

Target: In the case of a scrutiny going to trial, there was the risk for the former officeholder of suffering severe penalties. Finally, even during his period of office, any officeholder could be impeached and removed from office by the assembly.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: No judges presided over the courts. Anyone did not give legal direction to the jurors ; magistrates had only an administrative function and were laymen.

Target: No judges presided over the courts nor did anyone give legal direction to the jurors ; magistrates had only an administrative function and were laymen.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Which blaming Madman for their deformity, the Mutant Street Beatniks remained bitter enemies until they discovered that their deformation was simply the first stage of their mutation. Which gave them super powers such as elasticity.

Target: Blaming Madman for their deformity, the Mutant Street Beatniks remained bitter enemies until they discovered that their deformation was simply the first stage of their mutation, which gave them super powers such as elasticity.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is an uncommon plant, chiefly. Much of plant's native habitat has been drastically altered.

Target: It is an uncommon plant, chiefly because much of its native habitat has been drastically altered.


Source: Fix coherence: All remaining caches were opened. Both civilians and military could take what they could.

Target: All remaining caches were opened, so that both civilians and military could take what they could.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: When there is uddhacca there is forgetfulness of kusala,. When there is mindfulness.

Target: When there is uddhacca there is forgetfulness of kusala, whereas when there is mindfulness.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Ogbeh talking to reporters, howevered. Ogbeh claimed that he resigned only to avoid conflict within the party, and due to a desire to return to farming.

Target: Talking to reporters, however, Ogbeh claimed that he resigned only to avoid conflict within the party, and due to a desire to return to farming.


Source: Make the text more logical: Although aristocrats with sufficient leisure sometimes practiced aulos-playing as they did the lyre, after the later fifth century the aulos became chiefly associated with professional musicians, often slaves. Such musicians could achieve fame.

Target: Although aristocrats with sufficient leisure sometimes practiced aulos-playing as they did the lyre, after the later fifth century the aulos became chiefly associated with professional musicians, often slaves. Nevertheless, such musicians could achieve fame.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: One such theory is that a live cockerel was placed on the stick. People would throw sticks at it.

Target: One such theory is that a live cockerel was placed on the stick, and people would throw sticks at it.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: For a few days, Montero ignores the posting, assuming someone will have already taken the job. Every day Montero returns to the newspaper, eventually unable to avoid it anymore.

Target: For a few days, Montero ignores the posting, assuming someone will have already taken the job, but every day Montero returns to the newspaper, eventually unable to avoid it anymore.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The SASR is based at Campbell Barracks Swanbourne Western Australia. Campbell Barracks Swanbourne is a suburb of Perth.

Target: The SASR is based at Campbell Barracks Swanbourne, a suburb of Perth, Western Australia.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The nasal sounds create changes in preceding vowels. Air can flow into the nose during the vowel.

Target: The nasal sounds create changes in preceding vowels because air can flow into the nose during the vowel.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The ANMF is federally-registered (1). Most branches also have a state-registered union, operating as the union in the state industrial relations system.

Target: The ANMF is federally-registered (1) and most branches also have a state-registered union, operating as the union in the state industrial relations system.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The specific objective of this project was the development of additional automation mechanisms that improve inspection efficiency, operational flexibility, and operational reliability. High quality spatial information can be delivered in a timely and cost effective manner.

Target: The specific objective of this project was the development of additional automation mechanisms that improve inspection efficiency, operational flexibility, and operational reliability so that high quality spatial information can be delivered in a timely and cost effective manner.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Western Australia is the most successful cricketing state behind New South Wales. The state team only debuted in the interstate Sheffield Shield in 1947, 55 years after the other colonies started.

Target: Western Australia is the most successful cricketing state behind New South Wales yet the state team only debuted in the interstate Sheffield Shield in 1947, 55 years after the other colonies started.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Ballarat has remained slightly ahead in population terms. Growth rates between the two cities have fluctuated.

Target: Ballarat has remained slightly ahead in population terms, although growth rates between the two cities have fluctuated.


Source: Fix sentence transition: It consists of fifty questions. It aims to investigate whether adults of average intelligence have symptoms of autism or one of the other autism spectrum conditions.

Target: Consisting of fifty questions, it aims to investigate whether adults of average intelligence have symptoms of autism or one of the other autism spectrum conditions.


Source: Make the text coherent: The North Korean automobile industry had its origins during the Soviet era. The North Korean began motor-vehicle production with licenses obtained from the Soviet.

Target: The North Korean automobile industry had its origins during the Soviet era, and the DPRK began motor-vehicle production with licenses obtained from the USSR.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It produced its first vehicle in 1958. Its first vehicle is a Sungri-58 truck.

Target: It produced its first vehicle, a Sungri-58 truck, in 1958.


Source: Fix coherence: Pyeonghwa has the exclusive rights to car production, purchase, and sale of used cars in North Korea. Most North Korea are unable to drive a car.

Target: Pyeonghwa has the exclusive rights to car production, purchase, and sale of used cars in North Korea. However, most North Koreans are unable to drive a car.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Thus the Batavi. Just 0.05 % of the total population of the empire of c. 70 million in 23 AD.

Target: Thus the Batavi, although just 0.05 % of the total population of the empire of c. 70 million in 23 AD.


Source: Fix coherence: It took them three years of hard fighting to quell the revolt, which was described by the Roman historian Suetonius, writing in c. AD 100, as the most difficult conflict faced by Roman since the Punic Wars over two centuries earlier.

Target: It took them three years of hard fighting to quell the revolt, which was described by the Roman historian Suetonius, writing in c. AD 100, as the most difficult conflict faced by Rome since the Punic Wars over two centuries earlier.


Source: Fix coherence: Even as late as 395, units with the Batavi name. Long since composed of recruits from all over the empire.

Target: Even as late as 395, units with the Batavi name, although long since composed of recruits from all over the empire.


Source: Fix sentence transition: They depended on the type of regiment they belonged to. They held the official ranks of pedes (foot soldier in a cohors), eques (cavalryman in a cohors equitata) and gregalis (ala cavalryman).

Target: Depending on the type of regiment they belonged to, they held the official ranks of pedes (foot soldier in a cohors), eques (cavalryman in a cohors equitata) and gregalis (ala cavalryman).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This tends to be less on systems that have CBM. Users can begin with the list of items connected to the indicator used to notify users about the fault.

Target: This tends to be less on systems that have CBM because users can begin with the list of items connected to the indicator used to notify users about the fault.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Systems with spare parts that are energized but that lack automatic fault bypass are not actually redundant. Human action is required to restore operation after every failure.

Target: Systems with spare parts that are energized but that lack automatic fault bypass are not actually redundant because human action is required to restore operation after every failure.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Tensions arise between both groups,. Both parties try to stop a battle between She-Hulk and Frenzy.

Target: Tensions arise between both groups, and although both parties try to stop a battle between She-Hulk and Frenzy.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: There is no real story. Both writers find a way to make this work to their advantage.

Target: There is no real story and both writers find a way to make this work to their advantage.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: After the Purifiers are taken down and other Avengers arrive at the scene, Cage calls Jessica Jones. Daredevil explains that Cage has just quit the Avengers.

Target: After the Purifiers are taken down and other Avengers arrive at the scene, Cage calls Jessica Jones, while Daredevil explains that Luke has just quit the Avengers.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Both men discuss their stances regarding the Phoenix's incoming arrival and Wolverine refuses to join Scott's X-Men. Some of Wolverine's staff members and Angel decide to Scott Scott in the battle against the Avengers.

Target: Both men discuss their stances regarding the Phoenix's incoming arrival and Wolverine refuses to join Scott's X-Men. However, some of his staff members and Angel decide to join Scott in the battle against the Avengers.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Sam Alexander, a member of the Nova Corps, arrives on Terrax's home planet with a warning. Before member can deliver it, Terrax engages member in battle.

Target: Sam Alexander, a member of the Nova Corps, arrives on Terrax's home planet with a warning, but before he can deliver it, Terrax engages him in battle.


Source: Make the text clearer: Aviano F-16's again returned to the skies over Libya in June 2014. Due to significant fighting in Tripoli during the 2014 Libya conflict the U.S Embassy was evacuated.

Target: Aviano F-16's again returned to the skies over Libya in June 2014. Due to significant fighting in Tripoli during the 2014 Libyan conflict the U.S Embassy was evacuated.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The German Mensa board did this also in reaction to talks with Mensa International. It was not possible for Mensa International members to vote for Snowden.

Target: The German Mensa board did this also in reaction to talks with Mensa International. Consequently, it was not possible for Mensa members to vote for Snowden.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Some axons are on the order of meters long. Neurons can not rely on diffusion to carry products of the nucleus and organelles to the end of their axons.

Target: Since some axons are on the order of meters long, neurons can not rely on diffusion to carry products of the nucleus and organelles to the end of their axons.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1865, a Spanish priest, Father Martin, arrived in the place and was welcomed by the Datu with hospitality. The Father Martin told the villagers that priest came from a place in Spain called Ayala and suggested the same be named of their place.

Target: In 1865, a Spanish priest, Father Martin, arrived in the place and was welcomed by the Datu with hospitality. The priest told the villagers that he came from a place in Spain called Ayala and suggested the same be named of their place.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The town does not have a secondary school. Students attend Southwood Secondary School or Monsignor Doyle Catholic Secondary School in Cambridge.

Target: The town does not have a secondary school, so students attend Southwood Secondary School or Monsignor Doyle Catholic Secondary School in Cambridge.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Hisamasa became the head of the clan in 1542 after his father died. Unlike his father, he was never a strong leader.

Target: Hisamasa became the head of the clan in 1542 after his father died, but unlike his father, he was never a strong leader.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Hisamasa hated Nobunaga for his personality. Hisamasa demanded that the Azai clan pay back the support of Asakura clan and forced a war by breaking the alliance.

Target: Hating Nobunaga for his personality, Hisamasa demanded that the Azai clan pay back the support of Asakura clan and forced a war by breaking the alliance.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Other sports like tennis and cricket are also played. Interest and participation in these sports are limited.

Target: Other sports like tennis and cricket are also played, although interest and participation in these sports are limited.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Before the political changes of 1989, the Polish Army planned to replace its BWP-1s with BWP-2s. Financial problems resulted in just 62 vehicles being purchased.

Target: Before the political changes of 1989, the Polish Army planned to replace its BWP-1s with BWP-2s but financial problems resulted in just 62 vehicles being purchased.


Source: Fix coherence: The hall could be built no higher than the old awning. All the seats in the auditorium are on one level.

Target: The hall could be built no higher than the old awning, so all the seats in the auditorium are on one level.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Bachtrack's database of forthcoming performances covers events world-wide. Coverage varies by country.

Target: Bachtrack's database of forthcoming performances covers events world-wide, although coverage varies by country.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Breast support may be an issue for many women when wearing a backless dress. Nevertheless most women choosing this style of top prefer to go braless.

Target: Breast support may be an issue for many women when wearing a backless dress, but nevertheless most women choosing this style of top prefer to go braless.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, there is not always a precise distinction between them and bactericidal antibiotics ; high concentrations of some bacteriostatic agents are also bactericidal,. Low concentrations of some bactericidal agents are bacteriostatic.

Target: However, there is not always a precise distinction between them and bactericidal antibiotics ; high concentrations of some bacteriostatic agents are also bactericidal, whereas low concentrations of some bactericidal agents are bacteriostatic.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Eddie does not realize that his wife, Angelina, was Roger's mother. Roger does not know that Angelina was Eddie Angelina wife.

Target: Eddie does not realize that his wife, Angelina, was Roger's mother, nor does Roger know that Angelina was Eddie's wife.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Also, tells are rendered moot. Players are incapable of reading clues such as body language in aid of deriving the strength of an opponent's hand.

Target: Also, tells are rendered moot, so players are incapable of reading clues such as body language in aid of deriving the strength of an opponent's hand.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Festspielhaus Baden-Baden opened in 1998. The Festspielhaus Baden-Baden is germany's largest opera and concert house.

Target: The Festspielhaus Baden-Baden, Germany's largest opera and concert house, opened in 1998.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Much of the music is based on playing parallel octaves. On the amadinda, two musicians play parallel octaves in an interlocking fashion, i.e. the tones played by one musician fall exactly between those played by the other musicians.

Target: Much of the music is based on playing parallel octaves. For example, on the amadinda, two musicians play parallel octaves in an interlocking fashion, i.e. the tones played by one musician fall exactly between those played by the other musicians.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In its heyday, the name of Bagansiapiapi was more famous than Pekanbaru and Riau Province.. Now the business is dead and suspended because of the limitations of wood raw materials and a series of Act About Forestry.

Target: In its heyday, the name of Bagansiapiapi was more famous than Pekanbaru and Riau Province.. But now the business is dead and suspended because of the limitations of wood raw materials and a series of Act About Forestry.


Source: Fix coherence: Queen and worker wasps have similar morphologies. Workers are covered by small hairs while the queen remains hairless.

Target: Queen and worker wasps have similar morphologies. However, workers are covered by small hairs while the queen remains hairless.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Vhaidra relies on unarmed combat. Vhaidra's feats tend to focus on Vhaidra's her speed and combos, as well Vhaidra's granting her close-range abilities, such as pushing Vhaidra away from her.

Target: Vhaidra relies on unarmed combat, so her feats tend to focus on increasing her speed and combos, as well as granting her close-range abilities, such as pushing enemies away from her.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Battle of Greece ended with the German entry into Athens and the capture of the Peloponnese. About 40,000 Allied soldiers were evacuated to Crete.

Target: The Battle of Greece ended with the German entry into Athens and the capture of the Peloponnese, although about 40,000 Allied soldiers were evacuated to Crete.


Source: Fix coherence: Italian forces invaded Greece and made limited gains. Soon the Greeks counter-attacked and the Italian were repulsed and driven back at the borders with Albania.

Target: Italian forces invaded Greece and made limited gains. But soon the Greeks counter-attacked and the Italians were repulsed and driven back at the borders with Albania.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: By the end of 2008, shipping times had been already increased by reduced speeds to save fuel consumption. Lack of credit meant the reduction of letters of credit, historically required to load cargoes for departure at ports.

Target: By the end of 2008, shipping times had been already increased by reduced speeds to save fuel consumption, but lack of credit meant the reduction of letters of credit, historically required to load cargoes for departure at ports.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The game was not in 3D like most other games at the time. Critics felt the 2D graphics were satisfactory enough.

Target: Although the game was not in 3D like most other games at the time, critics felt the 2D graphics were satisfactory enough.


Source: Make the text clearer: Banikhet also possesses a number of tourist attractions that attract tourists from the different parts of the world. With the establishment of the NHPC ltd's Chamera Hydro-Electric Project, residential and official buildings, Banikhet has attained prominence.

Target: Banikhet also possesses a number of tourist attractions that attract tourists from the different parts of the world. Moreover, with the establishment of the NHPC ltd's Chamera Hydro-Electric Project, residential and official buildings, it has attained prominence.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Initially most of the Nadir, except Huyayy ibn Akhtab, were inclined to accept Muhammad's request. Ibn Ubayy communicated to Huyayy ibn Akhtab of Muhammad's intent, along with allied nomads, to Muhammad Muhammad.

Target: Initially most of the Nadir, except Huyayy ibn Akhtab, were inclined to accept Muhammad's request. However, Ibn Ubayy communicated to ibn Akhtab of his intent, along with allied nomads, to attack Muhammad.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The distance from Baramulla to Watergam is 15 km. From Baramulla to Handwara is 29 km.

Target: The distance from Baramulla to Watergam is 15 km whereas from Baramulla to Handwara is 29 km.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Retrieved 2008-06-01. There have been reports that Yuldash was sighted in the Afghan region of Barmal, where he is believed to have grouped dozens of guerrilla fighters of Chinese, Pakistani, Afghan, Uzbek, Chechen and Arab origin.

Target: Retrieved 2008-06-01. Meanwhile, there have been reports that Yuldash was sighted in the Afghan region of Barmal, where he is believed to have grouped dozens of guerrilla fighters of Chinese, Pakistani, Afghan, Uzbek, Chechen and Arab origin.


Source: Fix sentence flow: While Joseph Ghanima and al-Jawaliqy believe it is from Bart Tilla meaning Daughter of Dew, the priest Putros Saba al-Bartelly believes it comes from Beth Rattly. House of Weights.

Target: While Joseph Ghanima and al-Jawaliqy believe it is from Bart Tilla meaning Daughter of Dew, the priest Putros Saba al-Bartelly believes it comes from Beth Rattly meaning House of Weights.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Mossad collaborated with the American mafia. Once Oswald had killed Kennedy, the Mossad sent a Jew called (Jack) Ruby to kill him.

Target: The Mossad collaborated with the American mafia, and once Oswald had killed Kennedy, the Mossad sent a Jew called (Jack) Ruby to kill him.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Especially in Britain, men and women were usually segregated. Nobody of the opposite sex might catch sight of women in women's bathing suits, which (although extremely modest by modern standards) were not considered proper clothing in which to be seen.

Target: Especially in Britain, men and women were usually segregated, so nobody of the opposite sex might catch sight of them in their bathing suits, which (although extremely modest by modern standards) were not considered proper clothing in which to be seen.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Batman sneaks into Two-Face's cell in Arkham. Batman detects a triangular imprint consisting of a strange, plasmatic substance on the wall and retrieves a sample.

Target: Sneaking into Two-Face's cell in Arkham, Batman detects a triangular imprint consisting of a strange, plasmatic substance on the wall and retrieves a sample.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Clear Gator and Sunburst Lion could be obtained by purchasing a Japanese 10-pack set that contained either one figure or the other. You couldn't tell until you opened the package.

Target: The Clear Gator and Sunburst Lion could be obtained by purchasing a Japanese 10-pack set that contained either one figure or the other although you couldn't tell until you opened the package.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He was well aware that Norway was officially neutral. That the government was inclined to side with the British in case of direct Norway involvement in the war.

Target: He was well aware that Norway was officially neutral, but that the government was inclined to side with the British in case of direct Norwegian involvement in the war.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Her rudder chains were parted so that she could not steer. Some of the shutters on her gun ports were jammed, rendering the guns behind them useless.

Target: Her rudder chains were parted so that she could not steer. Furthermore, some of the shutters on her gun ports were jammed, rendering the guns behind them useless.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Williams was convinced that resistance was futile. Williams spiked Williams 'guns and blew Williams' his magazines Williams then Williams 'and his garrison waded to the mainland and made their way to Mobile.

Target: Williams was convinced that resistance was futile, so he spiked his guns and blew up his magazines ; then he and his garrison waded to the mainland and made their way to Mobile.


Source: Fix sentence flow: When they engaged the Scottish rearguard the Scots took flight, apparently following those who already had an understanding with the Protector Somerset. The rest of the Scottish army then attempted to flee the field.

Target: When they engaged the Scottish rearguard the Scots took flight, apparently following those who already had an understanding with the Protector Somerset. The rest of the Scots army then attempted to flee the field.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Battle of Rajgad (1703-1704) was fought on between the Mughal Empire and the Maratha Empire. Mughal Empire, Aurangzeb, ordered for Hamiduddin Khan and Tarbiyat Khan to attack the Rajgad fortress once again, which was being held by Santaji Silimkar.

Target: The Battle of Rajgad (1703-1704) was fought on between the Mughal Empire and the Maratha Empire. Mughal Emperor, Aurangzeb, ordered for Hamiduddin Khan and Tarbiyat Khan to attack the Rajgad fortress once again, which was being held by Santaji Silimkar.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He disagreed with the strategy of Louis XIV. He saw the Alsace as a strategically important location and wanted to avoid the danger of an invasion at any price.

Target: Disagreeing with the strategy of Louis XIV, he saw the Alsace as a strategically important location and wanted to avoid the danger of an invasion at any price.


Source: Make the text more consistent: During 11 -- 12 May 1945, German troops, trying to surrender to nearby American troops, defended themselves against local partisans and the Soviet Army. The German eventually capitulated during early hours of May 12.

Target: During 11 -- 12 May 1945, German troops, trying to surrender to nearby American troops, defended themselves against local partisans and the Soviet Army. The Germans eventually capitulated during early hours of May 12.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Fifty included the Continental Army losses on June 7, which were twelve killed. Fifty wounded and thirteen missing, the combined American casualties for June 7 and June 23 were 35 killed, 139 wounded, ten prisoners and 22 missing.

Target: Including the Continental Army losses on June 7, which were twelve killed, fifty wounded and thirteen missing, the combined American casualties for June 7 and June 23 were 35 killed, 139 wounded, ten prisoners and 22 missing.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Polish defenders delayed the Soviet advance, particularly by holding the bridges. Later that day the poorly coordinated Polish defence collapsed and the Soviet took control of the city.

Target: The Polish defenders delayed the Soviet advance, particularly by holding the bridges, but later that day the poorly coordinated Polish defence collapsed and the Soviets took control of the city.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Eumenes invited the defeated Macedonians to join him. Eumenes agreed, but took off by night to rejoin Antipater, the regent of Greece and Macedonians.

Target: Eumenes invited the defeated Macedonians to join him. They agreed, but took off by night to rejoin Antipater, the regent of Greece and Macedonia.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Female battle rappers such as Mis Led and Drizz Mami existed in other leagues. They were significantly less prevalent in the scene.

Target: Although female battle rappers such as Mis Led and Drizz Mami existed in other leagues, they were significantly less prevalent in the scene.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Subsequently, five others died. Only six of the original group of scientists and artists would complete the journey home.

Target: Subsequently, five others died. In fact, only six of the original group of scientists and artists would complete the journey home.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He was fortunate that the charismatic guerrilla leader Setthathirath died. His military might alone could not bring lasting peace.

Target: He was fortunate that the charismatic guerrilla leader Setthathirath died. In the end, his military might alone could not bring lasting peace.


Source: Make the text coherent: Sawhtut discovered that Bayinnaung's target was not Pegu. Sawhtut did not engage them.

Target: Discovering that Bayinnaung's target was not Pegu, Sawhtut did not engage them.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It eliminated the threat of Shan raids into Upper Burma, an overhanging concern to Upper Burma since the late 13th century. Shan's Shan policy was followed by Upper Burma kings right up to the final fall of the kingdom to the British in 1885.

Target: It eliminated the threat of Shan raids into Upper Burma, an overhanging concern to Upper Burma since the late 13th century. His Shan policy was followed by Burmese kings right up to the final fall of the kingdom to the British in 1885.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He needed an overwhelming advantage in manpower over Siam. Unlike interior Shan states.

Target: He needed an overwhelming advantage in manpower over Siam because unlike interior Shan states.


Source: Fix sentence transition: BMC serves as the tertiary care referral center for the region. That BMC has a full complement of medical services and facilities.

Target: BMC serves as the tertiary care referral center for the region, meaning that it has a full complement of medical services and facilities.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It flows from south to north. It is 40 kilometres (25 mi) long from its headwaters to its discharge into the Annapolis Basin, some 6 kilometres (3.7 mi) east of Digby.

Target: Flowing from south to north, it is 40 kilometres (25 mi) long from its headwaters to its discharge into the Annapolis Basin, some 6 kilometres (3.7 mi) east of Digby.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Artists are bing adjacent to Woodstock. Artists recording at Bearsville would frequently perform, often under a pseudonym, at local venues such as the Joyous Lake.

Target: Being adjacent to Woodstock, artists recording at Bearsville would frequently perform, often under a pseudonym, at local venues such as the Joyous Lake.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Milhazes drawing Influence from the optical reactions provoked by artists like Bridget Riley and Tarsila does Amaral. Milhazes believes that art is an essential way for people to aestheticize an exteriorize their thoughts and feelings.

Target: Drawing Influence from the optical reactions provoked by artists like Bridget Riley and Tarsila do Amaral, Milhazes believes that art is an essential way for people to aestheticize an exteriorize their thoughts and feelings.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A Protestant boarding school moved into the monastery. It was no longer used primarily as a place of prayer but as a place of learning and recruitment of future Protestant.

Target: A Protestant boarding school moved into the monastery. As a result, it was no longer used primarily as a place of prayer but as a place of learning and recruitment of future Protestants.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He uncovers genocide in the midst of the Bosnian War. His commanding officer is struggling to gain approval to launch a search and rescue mission to save Burnett.

Target: He uncovers genocide in the midst of the Bosnian War. Meanwhile, his commanding officer is struggling to gain approval to launch a search and rescue mission to save Burnett.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In 1964, the Tupolev Tu-124 aircraft received Belarusian registration. In 1973, the then new Tupolev Tu-134 A began operating in Belarusian.

Target: In 1964, the Tupolev Tu-124 aircraft received Belarusian registration. In 1973, the then new Tupolev Tu-134 A began operating in Belarus.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He says he only knows how to coach one way. He addresses his girls with the same discipline and determination he would with a boys' team, but is bewildered at times by their rigid interpretation of his direction.

Target: Saying he only knows how to coach one way, he addresses his girls with the same discipline and determination he would with a boys' team, but is bewildered at times by their rigid interpretation of his direction.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The gardens were allowed to re-open on 15 September 1939, and remained open throughout the rest of war. Parts of the site were requisitioned by Manchester Corporation and converted into allotments.

Target: The gardens were allowed to re-open on 15 September 1939, and remained open throughout the rest of war, although parts of the site were requisitioned by Manchester Corporation and converted into allotments.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Open-air dancing continued until the 1940s. By then the attraction had lost its appeal, and the platform was converted to a roller skating rink.

Target: Open-air dancing continued until the 1940s, but by then the attraction had lost its appeal, and the platform was converted to a roller skating rink.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He stumbles out the club. He manages to evade police.

Target: Stumbling out the club, he manages to evade police.


Source: Make the text more logical: This is done in order to avoid skipping of the belt while in use. High belt tensions can reduce the life expectancy of the bearings in the bottom bracket, as well as in the rear hub.

Target: This is done in order to avoid skipping of the belt while in use. However, high belt tensions can reduce the life expectancy of the bearings in the bottom bracket, as well as in the rear hub.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Rowen pitched for the Hickory Crawdads in 2011. Rowen had a 1.98 ERA and 43 strikeouts in 59 innings.

Target: Pitching for the Hickory Crawdads in 2011, Rowen had a 1.98 ERA and 43 strikeouts in 59 innings.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: God Himself never came in contact with men. He did not speak to Israel on Mt.

Target: God Himself never came in contact with men, nor did He speak to Israel on Mt.