Source: Make the text clearer: One point of criticism on Wikifood has been that it is no Wiki in the original sense as only registered users can edit content. Even registered users are not allowed to change content which has been provided by food producers themselves.

Target: One point of criticism on Wikifood has been that it is no Wiki in the original sense as only registered users can edit content. Furthermore, even registered users are not allowed to change content which has been provided by food producers themselves.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Cowie was born on 19 January 1979 in Bow in the East End of London. Cowie's father, Cowie was a reggae artist during Cowie's youth in the 1980s and introduced Cowie to early hip-hop such as The Sugarhill Gang.

Target: Cowie was born on 19 January 1979 in Bow in the East End of London. Cowie's father, Richard Cowie Senior was a reggae artist during Cowie's youth in the 1980s and introduced Cowie to early hip-hop such as The Sugarhill Gang.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A strange man named Malcolm pretends to be interested in Will's writing. Really, it's all just a mysterious ploy to get Will to be a Will again.

Target: A strange man named Malcolm pretends to be interested in Will's writing, but really, it's all just a mysterious ploy to get Will to be a lawyer again.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The truth, however, is that Vince finally screwed up too many times as a cop, and was fired from the force. He's not doing a very good job of keeping his new job at the grocery store either.

Target: The truth, however, is that Vince finally screwed up too many times as a cop, and was fired from the force. And he's not doing a very good job of keeping his new job at the grocery store either.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Adams was killed. Adams was 31 at the time.

Target: Adams, who was 31 at the time, was killed.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: As a result of this fraud, Gardner refused to recommend Jordan. Because Jordan believed Jordan would still have won without the fraudulent ballots, Jordan refused to recommend Dennen as well.

Target: As a result of this fraud, Gardner refused to recommend Jordan. However, because he believed Jordan would still have won without the fraudulent ballots, he refused to recommend Dennen as well.


Source: Fix sentence flow: William John Cooper was the son of William James Cooper, who immigrated to the US from Sydney, Australia, and Belle Stanley (Leary) Cooper. Leary Leary was from San Francisco.

Target: William John Cooper was the son of William James Cooper, who immigrated to the US from Sydney, Australia, and Belle Stanley (Leary) Cooper. Miss Leary was from San Francisco.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Marshall accompanied Lieutenant George Wheeler's Wheeler Survey expedition (1872 -- 76). Marshall covered thousands of miles on foot and horseback and discovered Marshall Pass in central Colorado.

Target: Accompanying Lieutenant George Wheeler's Wheeler Survey expedition (1872 -- 76), Marshall covered thousands of miles on foot and horseback and discovered Marshall Pass in central Colorado.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The station was closed for IRT service on April 14, 1924, when a connecting pedestrian bridge was opened between the nearby Third Avenue El station at 133rd Street. The Third Avenue El continued to cross the Harlem River until 1955.

Target: The station was closed for IRT service on April 14, 1924, when a connecting pedestrian bridge was opened between the nearby Third Avenue El station at 133rd Street, although the Third Avenue Line continued to cross the Harlem River until 1955.


Source: Make the text clearer: Satellite photos proved that in 2004 the plantations were on sea shore peat rain forests, the depth of the peat being four meters,. Such land is actually protected under Indonesian law.

Target: Satellite photos proved that in 2004 the plantations were on sea shore peat rain forests, the depth of the peat being four meters, whereas such land is actually protected under Indonesian law.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Commercial wind farms generally are sited in areas with resource of Class 3 or higher. Isolated points in an otherwise Class 1 area may be practical to exploit.

Target: Commercial wind farms generally are sited in areas with resource of Class 3 or higher, although isolated points in an otherwise Class 1 area may be practical to exploit.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Systems that use magnetic direct drive turbines require higher amounts of rare metals. An increase in wind production would increase the demand for these resources.

Target: Systems that use magnetic direct drive turbines require higher amounts of rare metals. Therefore, an increase in wind production would increase the demand for these resources.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Modern turbines usually have a small onboard crane for hoisting maintenance tools and minor components. Large heavy components like generator, gearbox, blades and so on are rarely replaced and a heavy lift external crane is needed in those cases.

Target: Modern turbines usually have a small onboard crane for hoisting maintenance tools and minor components. However, large heavy components like generator, gearbox, blades and so on are rarely replaced and a heavy lift external crane is needed in those cases.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In RODC mode, credentials are not cached by default. Only the replication partner of the RODC needs to run Windows Server 2008.

Target: In RODC mode, credentials are not cached by default. Moreover, only the replication partner of the RODC needs to run Windows Server 2008.


Source: Fix sentence flow: After Carl's mum embarrasses him at the school bake sale, he wishes that he was no longer her son for a short time only. As usual Porter's magic goes awry and son ends up in an overlapping alternate reality.

Target: After Carl's mum embarrasses him at the school bake sale, he wishes that he was no longer her son for a short time only. But as usual Porter's magic goes awry and Carl ends up in an overlapping alternate reality.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Denise quickly becomes Porter's female counterpart -- like Porter, she is a trouble maker who has a tendency to misuse her magic, and is very good at getting into trouble. trouble maker is also a good trouble maker.

Target: Denise quickly becomes Porter's female counterpart -- like Porter, she is a trouble maker who has a tendency to misuse her magic, and is very good at getting into trouble. Denise is also a good singer.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Kellogg obtained success with the bottle-nosed dolphin echolocation research. Kellogg wondered whether humans also use echolocation to distinguish objects in their surrounding environment.

Target: Obtaining success with the bottle-nosed dolphin echolocation research, Kellogg wondered whether humans also use echolocation to distinguish objects in their surrounding environment.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The race is named in honor of George W. Strawbridge With Anticipation. George W. Strawbridge is jr.'s outstanding turf runner.

Target: The race is named in honor of George W. Strawbridge, Jr.'s outstanding turf runner, With Anticipation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Most likely, customs varied not only by time and place, but by facility. Women could choose to segregate themselves by gender or not.

Target: Most likely, customs varied not only by time and place, but by facility, so that women could choose to segregate themselves by gender or not.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Many contemporary commentators (and Article 231 of the Treaty of Versailles) had blamed the outbreak of the First World War on the war guilt of Germany. Historians writing in the 1930s began to emphasize the fast-paced arms race preceding 1914.

Target: Although many contemporary commentators (and Article 231 of the Treaty of Versailles) had blamed the outbreak of the First World War on the war guilt of Germany, historians writing in the 1930s began to emphasize the fast-paced arms race preceding 1914.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Opening in 1994. WOGA has had a number of successes unprecedented in US gymnastics history, including placing more than 30 National Gymnastics Team members.

Target: Since opening in 1994, WOGA has had a number of successes unprecedented in US gymnastics history, including placing more than 30 National Gymnastics Team members.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Gibson had injured himself in the NLCS and was expected to miss the entire World Series. Despite not being able to walk without a noticeable limp, Gibson surprised all in attendance at Dodger Stadium (and all watching on TV) by pinch-hitting.

Target: Gibson had injured himself in the NLCS and was expected to miss the entire World Series. Yet, despite not being able to walk without a noticeable limp, Gibson surprised all in attendance at Dodger Stadium (and all watching on TV) by pinch-hitting.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is currently operated by Arriva Trains Wales. Services are also provided by Virgin Trains who operate a service to London Euston.

Target: It is currently operated by Arriva Trains Wales, but services are also provided by Virgin Trains who operate a service to London Euston.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Usually, the subject of the satire is a contemporary issue such as ineffective political decisions or politicians. Human vices such as greed are also a common and universal subject.

Target: Usually, the subject of the satire is a contemporary issue such as ineffective political decisions or politicians, although human vices such as greed are also a common and universal subject.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: After some consideration, Emperor Shun declined such action and continued to treat her with the honors due an empress dowager. Perhaps in fear and in mourning for her family, she died in early 126 and was buried with her husband Emperor An.

Target: After some consideration, Emperor Shun declined such action and continued to treat her with the honors due an empress dowager. However, perhaps in fear and in mourning for her family, she died in early 126 and was buried with her husband Emperor An.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The soldiers under the other generals often had their contributions denied by the civilian officials and not rewarded. Even though Yang Su was cruel, his soldiers were willing to follow him.

Target: The soldiers under the other generals often had their contributions denied by the civilian officials and not rewarded. Therefore, even though Yang Su was cruel, his soldiers were willing to follow him.


Source: Make the text clearer: First announcing his plans for a television series. Progress has slowed, reportedly due to the 2007 -- 2008 Writer's Guild strike.

Target: Since first announcing his plans for a television series, progress has slowed, reportedly due to the 2007 -- 2008 Writer's Guild strike.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A base spokesman said that The Cove was banned. Using a base venue to display the film could be seen as an endorsement of the film.

Target: A base spokesman said that The Cove was banned because using a base venue to display the film could be seen as an endorsement of the film.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Experiences and exposures across different sectors of agriculture vary greatly. Children who worked on tobacco farms experienced a number of negative health effects including nausea, heat exhaustion, and burning eyes.

Target: Experiences and exposures across different sectors of agriculture vary greatly. For example, children who worked on tobacco farms experienced a number of negative health effects including nausea, heat exhaustion, and burning eyes.


Source: Make the text more coherent: His generally awkward personality, in addition to his strange looks, makes Makishima seem unapproachable or even frightening. Throughout the series, he offers wise advice to his mentee, Onoda, about cycling.

Target: His generally awkward personality, in addition to his strange looks, makes Makishima seem unapproachable or even frightening. However, throughout the series, he offers wise advice to his mentee, Onoda, about cycling.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Several other Kenyan runners who took Bahraini citizenship have also left Bahrain and are vying to compete for Kenya. He returned to the track in July 2009 at the Athletissima meeting, still representing Bahraini.

Target: Several other Kenyan runners who took Bahraini citizenship have also left Bahrain and are vying to compete for Kenya. However, he returned to the track in July 2009 at the Athletissima meeting, still representing Bahrain.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: These processors do not contain microcode or hardware features that accelerate their designated workloads. By relieving the general CP of particular workloads, they often lead to a higher workload throughput at reduced license fees.

Target: These processors do not contain microcode or hardware features that accelerate their designated workloads. Instead, by relieving the general CP of particular workloads, they often lead to a higher workload throughput at reduced license fees.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: On 5 November, the Electoral Commission said that only a verification exercise, not a recount, would be conducted. Electoral Commission said that the verification exercise was a verification exercise of standard procedure, but that a recount would require a court order.

Target: On 5 November, the Electoral Commission said that only a verification exercise, not a recount, would be conducted. It said that the verification exercise was a matter of standard procedure, but that a recount would require a court order.


Source: Fix coherence: After all these misfortunes, the town never recovered. After the Partitions of Poland Zawichost was located near Russian-Austrian border, which hampered its development.

Target: After all these misfortunes, the town never recovered. Furthermore, after the Partitions of Poland Zawichost was located near Russian-Austrian border, which hampered its development.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This was not the whole question. It question not indeed the principal question, viz. to determine whether an episcopal ordination, performed without the pope's consent, was admissible.

Target: This was not the whole question, nor was it indeed the principal question, viz. to determine whether an episcopal ordination, performed without the pope's consent, was admissible.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: When Ma Zhou (a chancellor during the reign of Emperor Xuanzong's great-grandfather Emperor Taizong) was poor and met the emperor, he was still young and strong. Emperor Emperor retained him and used his abilities, and yet lost Ma at age 50.

Target: When Ma Zhou (a chancellor during the reign of Emperor Xuanzong's great-grandfather Emperor Taizong) was poor and met the emperor, he was still young and strong. Emperor Taizong retained him and used his abilities, and yet lost Ma at age 50.


Source: Make the text more logical: On February 18, 2015 few days after the heavy defeat from Atromitos F.C., Zisis Vryzas was made available by Ivan Savvides his resignation from the post of technical director of PAOK. Formal notice to terminate the cooperation did not exist.

Target: On February 18, 2015 few days after the heavy defeat from Atromitos F.C., Zisis Vryzas was made available by Ivan Savvides his resignation from the post of technical director of PAOK. However, formal notice to terminate the cooperation did not exist.


Source: Fix coherence: Allenes are reduced to the more highly substituted alkene in the presence of diimide. Yields are low.

Target: Allenes are reduced to the more highly substituted alkene in the presence of diimide, although yields are low.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Roe graduated B.A. (1875) and M.A. (1876). Roe was a private Roe at Oxford for a short period.

Target: Roe graduated B.A. (1875) and M.A. (1876). He was a private tutor at Oxford for a short period.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Regional rail normally operates with an even service load throughout the day. Slightly increased services may be provided during rush-hour.

Target: Regional rail normally operates with an even service load throughout the day, although slightly increased services may be provided during rush-hour.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Religion in Colombia is an expression of the different cultural heritages in the Colombian culture including the Spanish colonization among others. The Spanish colonization is the Native Amerindian and the Afro-Colombian.

Target: Religion in Colombia is an expression of the different cultural heritages in the Colombian culture including the Spanish colonization, the Native Amerindian and the Afro-Colombian, among others.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He was elected for a six-year term in 2003,. That term expired in 2009 he remains in office for the duration of the trial of Thomas Lubanga.

Target: He was elected for a six-year term in 2003, and although that term expired in 2009 he remains in office for the duration of the trial of Thomas Lubanga.


Source: Make the text more logical: After booksellers began hiring authors and sponsoring specific translations, the shops filled quickly with poetry from hirelings. As periodical literature began to assert itself as a political force, a number of now anonymous poets produced topical, specifically occasional verse.

Target: After booksellers began hiring authors and sponsoring specific translations, the shops filled quickly with poetry from hirelings. Similarly, as periodical literature began to assert itself as a political force, a number of now anonymous poets produced topical, specifically occasional verse.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Wonderland-bound 110 and 117 buses stop on Beach Street one block west of the station. Buses operating towards Wellington and Maverick stop further away.

Target: Wonderland-bound 110 and 117 buses stop on Beach Street one block west of the station, while buses operating towards Wellington and Maverick stop further away.


Source: Make the text coherent: Semler clashed with his father, Antonio Semler, who supported a traditional autocratic style of management. Young Semler favoured a decentralised.

Target: Semler clashed with his father, Antonio Semler, who supported a traditional autocratic style of management whereas young Semler favoured a decentralised.


Source: Make the text clearer: Gone to a Good Home-To solve the problem of unwanted Christmas gifts the idea of this slot is to leave an unwanted gift on your doorstep. Someone else may take gift away.

Target: Gone to a Good Home-To solve the problem of unwanted Christmas gifts the idea of this slot is to leave an unwanted gift on your doorstep so that someone else may take it away.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Shrewsbury was still held by the stalwart Parliamentarian Colonel Thomas Hunt, who carried out a review of military resources and preparedness during April and arranged a muster of his forces for 1 May. Events were moving too quickly for Colonel's measures to take effect.

Target: Shrewsbury was still held by the stalwart Parliamentarian Colonel Thomas Hunt, who carried out a review of military resources and preparedness during April and arranged a muster of his forces for 1 May. However events were moving too quickly for Hunt's measures to take effect.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It is part of the Mu Koh Surin marine park. Being about 18 km east of Mu Koh Surin.

Target: It is part of the Mu Koh Surin marine park although being about 18 km east of Surin Island.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The batter's eye in center field is able to retract. Spectators can view the Manhattan skyline.

Target: The batter's eye in center field is able to retract so that spectators can view the Manhattan skyline.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: 20th Century Fox cut it from the completed film. Director William Richert put it back into place for his director's cut some years later.

Target: 20th Century Fox cut it from the completed film, but director William Richert put it back into place for his director's cut some years later.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He feuded with CJ O'Doyle. He traded victories with him at Till We Meet Again on October 16, 2004, and For the Gold on November 20.

Target: Feuding with CJ O'Doyle, he traded victories with him at Till We Meet Again on October 16, 2004, and For the Gold on November 20.


Source: Make the text more coherent: 1995 when Snohomish County acquired the first phase of Robe Canyon. Volunteers have maintained the Old Robe Trail.

Target: Since 1995 when Snohomish County acquired the first phase of Robe Canyon, volunteers have maintained the Old Robe Trail.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Craig charged into the answering fire. Craig reached the machine gun and killed its three crewmen.

Target: Charging into the answering fire, Craig reached the machine gun and killed its three crewmen.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The senior Mann died in Fredericksburg, Virginia, the place of residence of their son, Paul Edward Mann. Mann, who was also born in Beaumont, has a sister, Sarah Elizabeth Luker of Seabrook, near Houston, Texas.

Target: The senior Mann died in Fredericksburg, Virginia, the place of residence of their son, Paul Edward Mann. Bob Mann, who was also born in Beaumont, has a sister, Sarah Elizabeth Luker of Seabrook, near Houston, Texas.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 1992, White was inducted into the Aerospace Walk of Honor. White White was inducted into the National Aviation Hall of Fame in Dayton, Ohio, on 15 July 2006.

Target: In 1992, White was inducted into the Aerospace Walk of Honor. General White was inducted into the National Aviation Hall of Fame in Dayton, Ohio, on 15 July 2006.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: When he learned of Forrest's contest, he entered. In 1828, Bird's play Pelopidas won a $1000 prize offered by the actor Edwin Forrest, but was never produced because Forrest found the play unsuitable to highlight his strengths as a performer.

Target: When he learned of Forrest's contest, he entered. And, in 1828, Bird's play Pelopidas won a $1000 prize offered by the actor Edwin Forrest, but was never produced because Forrest found the play unsuitable to highlight his strengths as a performer.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He published Orkney Shore in 1960. Orkney Shore is a work on the seashore life of Orkney.

Target: He published Orkney Shore, a work on the seashore life of Orkney, in 1960.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He rushed to the officer's assistance. He found that the officer had been killed.

Target: Rushing to the officer's assistance, he found that the officer had been killed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Limitations with respect to maximum size and weight are in place. Teams are completely free to design both hardware and software.

Target: Although limitations with respect to maximum size and weight are in place, teams are completely free to design both hardware and software.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Star Wars: Rogue Squadron (series) consisting of: Rogue Squadron (series) is a video game series.

Target: Star Wars: Rogue Squadron (series), a video game series, consisting of :


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Thus, humans could live on such a star-less planet. Food sources would be limited.

Target: Thus, humans could live on such a star-less planet, although food sources would be limited.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: However the government would not fix a purchase price for the assets until the situation became clearer. Without a continuing business many of them might be worthless.

Target: However the government would not fix a purchase price for the assets until the situation became clearer because without a continuing business many of them might be worthless.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The number of employees is classified. Rumors about the number of employees exists.

Target: The number of employees is classified. However, rumors about the number of employees exists.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Moore ran back from Pittsburg State University and member of Alpha Phi Alpha. Moore played in six NFL seasons from 1993 to 1998.

Target: running back from Pittsburg State University and member of Alpha Phi Alpha, Moore played in six NFL seasons from 1993 to 1998.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: They are also popular among traditional climbers, and particularly in the UK, due to the ability to clip each rope into alternating pieces of protection ; allowing the ropes to stay straighter and. Reduce rope drag.

Target: They are also popular among traditional climbers, and particularly in the UK, due to the ability to clip each rope into alternating pieces of protection ; allowing the ropes to stay straighter and hence reduce rope drag.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Wilkins, Maurice (2005). The Third Man of the Double Helix: the autobiography of Wilkins, Maurice.

Target: Wilkins, Maurice (2005). The Third Man of the Double Helix: the autobiography of Maurice Wilkins.


Source: Fix coherence: Photographs of her Birkbeck work table show that she routinely used small molecular models. Certainly not ones on the grand scale successfully used at Cambridge for DNA.

Target: Photographs of her Birkbeck work table show that she routinely used small molecular models, although certainly not ones on the grand scale successfully used at Cambridge for DNA.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Before his musical career, he was also one of the country's leading cyclists. As a member of SK Rye, one was Oslo one in 1937 in the 1000 metres track cycling and 20 km road cycling.

Target: Before his musical career, he was also one of the country's leading cyclists. As a member of SK Rye, he was Oslo champion in 1937 in the 1000 metres track cycling and 20 km road cycling.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Rolland retired to Rhyl in Denbighshire where he lived with his male partner, a former supermarket manager. Rolland died there in August 1997, aged 76.

Target: Rolland retired to Rhyl in Denbighshire where he lived with his male partner, a former supermarket manager. Roy Rolland died there in August 1997, aged 76.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In 1868, 100 years after the Academy's foundation, it moved to Burlington House, Piccadilly, where it remains. Burlington House is owned by the British Government, and used rent-free by the Academy.

Target: In 1868, 100 years after the Academy's foundation, it moved to Burlington House, Piccadilly, where it remains. Burlington House is owned by the British Government, and used rent-free by the Royal Academy.


Source: Fix coherence: The rubber can be turned into a fine powder, which can then be used as a toughening agent for polystyrene. Poor miscibility between the waste rubber and polystyrene will weaken the material.

Target: The rubber can be turned into a fine powder, which can then be used as a toughening agent for polystyrene. However, poor miscibility between the waste rubber and polystyrene will weaken the material.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is designed to read or write by hand. In most cases, end-users read it after it has been converted into man pages or HTML pages.

Target: It is designed to read or write by hand. But, in most cases, end-users read it after it has been converted into man pages or HTML pages.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Radio technology existed, but was generally regarded as too insecure for frontline use. Most armies still made extensive use of runners.

Target: Radio technology existed, but was generally regarded as too insecure for frontline use. Hence, most armies still made extensive use of runners.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Each section can be crossed over without killing anyone. Complete pacifism doesn't work and the player is required to destroy a minimum amount of them on the screen.

Target: Each section can be crossed over without killing anyone. However, complete pacifism doesn't work and the player is required to destroy a minimum amount of them on the screen.


Source: Fix coherence: On January 8, 2008, he announced that he would skip his senior year of college to enter the 2008 NFL Draft. Unfortunately for him he was not actually drafted.

Target: On January 8, 2008, he announced that he would skip his senior year of college to enter the 2008 NFL Draft, although unfortunately for him he was not actually drafted.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It has been used in animal studies into the behavioural effects of the different 5-HT subtypes. How effects influence the effects of other drugs such as cocaine.

Target: It has been used in animal studies into the behavioural effects of the different 5-HT subtypes, and how they influence the effects of other drugs such as cocaine.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: However, Harvey is unaware Sabrina is a witch. Often sees the results of the magic himself.

Target: However, Harvey is unaware Sabrina is a witch although often sees the results of the magic himself.


Source: Make the text clearer: Sabrina runs against Gem for Student Body President. When Sabrina's down in the polls, Salem presents Sabrina with a devious magic trinket.

Target: Sabrina runs against Gem for Student Body President. But when she's down in the polls, Salem presents Sabrina with a devious magic trinket.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: There is an inner and outer shield. Air can not blow directly on the gauze but must first find its way through a slim chamber.

Target: There is an inner and outer shield so that air can not blow directly on the gauze but must first find its way through a slim chamber.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Sahiyo advocates its views against female genital cutting. Sahiyo uses online media to present stories of women who undergone mutilation to spread awareness of female circumcision, often drawing special attention to survivor stories.

Target: Advocating its views against female genital cutting, Sahiyo uses online media to present stories of women who undergone mutilation to spread awareness of female circumcision, often drawing special attention to survivor stories.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Winters are cool but rarely very cold. Minor frosts are common.

Target: Winters are cool but rarely very cold, although minor frosts are common.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Saitpur is a village in Bhulath Tehsil in Kapurthala district of Punjab State, India. Saitpur is located 25 kilometres (16 mi) from Bhulath Tehsil, 25 kilometres (16 mi) away from Kapurthala Kapurthala.

Target: Saitpur is a village in Bhulath Tehsil in Kapurthala district of Punjab State, India. It is located 25 kilometres (16 mi) from Bhulath, 25 kilometres (16 mi) away from district headquarter Kapurthala.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Margaret Goyder Kerr, in The Surveyors presumed Gulnare to have been named for the SA town. Margaret Goyder Kerr served in Victoria under that name some five years before Margaret Goyder Kerr's service in SA.

Target: Margaret Goyder Kerr, in The Surveyors presumed Gulnare to have been named for the SA town, yet she served in Victoria under that name some five years before her service in South Australia.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Sanam music is a suite that ranged from six to thirteen songs played usually for dancing. music may also be played as purely instrumental version by naghra-sunay bands.

Target: Sanam music is a suite that ranged from six to thirteen songs played usually for dancing. It however may also be played as purely instrumental version by naghra-sunay bands.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Saracen (Muzzafar Lambert) is a fictional character, a supervillain appearing in American comic books published by Marvel Comics. Created by Mike Baron and Erik Larsen, the supervillain made character's first appearance in The Punisher Vol. 2, # 22 (August 1989).

Target: Saracen (Muzzafar Lambert) is a fictional character, a supervillain appearing in American comic books published by Marvel Comics. Created by Mike Baron and Erik Larsen, the character made his first appearance in The Punisher Vol. 2, # 22 (August 1989).


Source: Fix sentence flow: In this view, in contrast to Calvin, Christ does not specifically bear the penalty for humanity's sins ;. He Christ not pay for individual sins.

Target: In this view, in contrast to Calvin, Christ does not specifically bear the penalty for humanity's sins ; nor does he pay for individual sins.


Source: Fix coherence: Additionally, there are ground-source residential AC units with SEER ratings up to 75. Ground source heat pump effective efficiency is reliant on the temperature of the ground or water source used.

Target: Additionally, there are ground-source residential AC units with SEER ratings up to 75. However, ground source heat pump effective efficiency is reliant on the temperature of the ground or water source used.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Since this was not a vote of no confidence in the sense of Article 54 of the constitution, there was no legal obligation for the cabinet to resign. Due to the parliamentary realities, the second Stresemann cabinet resigned that day.

Target: Since this was not a vote of no confidence in the sense of Article 54 of the constitution, there was no legal obligation for the cabinet to resign. Nevertheless, due to the parliamentary realities, the second Stresemann cabinet resigned that day.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Which teaching around 150 BC, he is knew to have been a follower of the heliocentric theory of Aristarchus of Samos. Which stated that the Earth rotated around its own axis which in turn revolved around the Sun.

Target: Teaching around 150 BC, he is known to have been a follower of the heliocentric theory of Aristarchus of Samos, which stated that the Earth rotated around its own axis which in turn revolved around the Sun.


Source: Fix coherence: In March 2011 the STP8X100 series was launched. The STP8X100 series is sepura's first Intrinsically Safe radio.

Target: In March 2011 the STP8X100 series, Sepura's first Intrinsically Safe radio, was launched.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The plot follows Scilla and Jake who are enjoying the pleasures and the comforts of the upper class. The story climaxes when Jake turns up murdered during the first few scenes due to Jake's underground trading.

Target: The plot follows Scilla and Jake who are enjoying the pleasures and the comforts of the upper class. But the story climaxes when Jake Todd turns up murdered during the first few scenes due to his underground trading.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: If the benefits of perception to one sex or the other are different, sex differences in sensory systems can arise. Female production of signals used to attract mates can put selective pressure on males to improve their ability to detect those signals.

Target: If the benefits of perception to one sex or the other are different, sex differences in sensory systems can arise. For example, female production of signals used to attract mates can put selective pressure on males to improve their ability to detect those signals.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It is more commonly seen within invertebrate species. Sexual mimicry is also seen among vertebrates such as spotted hyenas.

Target: It is more commonly seen within invertebrate species, although sexual mimicry is also seen among vertebrates such as spotted hyenas.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Testosterone, in this case, expresses sex-limited characteristics by acting on the single autosomal gene. While it has not yet been tested, it is likely that the lack of testosterone is the cause for the faeder ruffs' similarity to females.

Target: Testosterone, in this case, expresses sex-limited characteristics by acting on the single autosomal gene. Similarly, while it has not yet been tested, it is likely that the lack of testosterone is the cause for the faeder ruffs' similarity to females.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Overall, African Americans appear to be the most open to interracial relationships. Are the least preferred mate by other racial groups.

Target: Overall, African Americans appear to be the most open to interracial relationships, yet are the least preferred mate by other racial groups.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The fake Shanee lands in the thick of it upon his arrival. When Shanee refuses to marry her as everyone expected.

Target: The fake Shanee lands in the thick of it upon his arrival because when he refuses to marry her as everyone expected.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: She retired from active college teaching in 1975. She remained involved as a Visiting Professor in various universities and colleges.

Target: She retired from active college teaching in 1975 yet she remained involved as a Visiting Professor in various universities and colleges.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Logo has pulled the episode from all of our platforms and that challenge will not appear again. We are removing the 'You've got she-mail' intro from new episodes of the series.

Target: Logo has pulled the episode from all of our platforms and that challenge will not appear again. Furthermore, we are removing the 'You've got she-mail' intro from new episodes of the series.


Source: Make the text more logical: This act arose from a period of intense conflict at Syracuse between the pro-Roman aristocratic faction and the pro-Carthaginian democratic faction. Hannibal himself had sent two brothers of Syracuse descent, Hippocrates and Epicydes, in order to rouse the people against the pro-Roman.

Target: This act arose from a period of intense conflict at Syracuse between the pro-Roman aristocratic faction and the pro-Carthaginian democratic faction. Hannibal himself had sent two brothers of Syracusan descent, Hippocrates and Epicydes, in order to rouse the people against the Romans.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Already fully recognized by the Spanish Regime as a municipal district town in the 1800s. It was only in 1960 that Sigay emerged as a fully-fledged municipality, that which the residents called the New Era of Sigay.

Target: Although already fully recognized by the Spanish Regime as a municipal district town in the 1800s, it was only in 1960 that Sigay emerged as a fully-fledged municipality, that which the residents called the New Era of Sigay.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Most of the families. Agriculture is their main source of income not only in this municipality.

Target: Since most of the families, agriculture is their main source of income not only in this municipality.


Source: Make the text clearer: His short reign must have taken place in 626 BC. Before that year Kandalanu reigned over his attested cities and after that Nabopolassar and Sinsharishkun did so.

Target: His short reign must have taken place in 626 BC because before that year Kandalanu reigned over his attested cities and after that Nabopolassar and Sinsharishkun did so.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In November 1640, Potts was elected Member of Parliament for Norfolk in the Long Parliament. Potts was knighted on 9 August 1641 and created baronet of Mannington in the Norfolk, on 14 August 1641.

Target: In November 1640, Potts was elected Member of Parliament for Norfolk in the Long Parliament. He was knighted on 9 August 1641 and created baronet of Mannington in the County of Norfolk, on 14 August 1641.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: After two months of advances, pro-government forces took control of ISIL's Sirte headquarters on 10 August 2016. Pockets of ISIL resistance continued to prolong fighting through the end of the year.

Target: After two months of advances, pro-government forces took control of ISIL's Sirte headquarters on 10 August 2016, although pockets of ISIL resistance continued to prolong fighting through the end of the year.


Source: Make the text more logical: After these releases, Sixty Watt embarked on a US tour, from Maine to Texas, with California band Nebula. Band supported band's 's recently released Let It Burn band's Nebula's band's first Nebula's following their departure from Fu Manchu in 1997.

Target: After these releases, Sixty Watt embarked on a US tour, from Maine to Texas, with California band Nebula, while Nebula supported their recently released Let It Burn EP as their first release following their departure from Fu Manchu in 1997.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Niger's main argument was that the case was inadmissible to the ECOWAS court. Domestic options had not been exhausted for remedying the situation.

Target: Niger's main argument was that the case was inadmissible to the ECOWAS court because domestic options had not been exhausted for remedying the situation.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: When the French took over the region in the early 1900s they had a policy banning the existence of slavery. Local French administrators usually resisted pressure to abolish slavery from the colonial and metropolitan governments.

Target: When the French took over the region in the early 1900s they had a policy banning the existence of slavery. However local French administrators usually resisted pressure to abolish slavery from the colonial and metropolitan governments.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Gargamel observes that Bigmouth will eat anything (even candles). Gargamel decides to use him as a tool in his vengeance against the Smurfs, offering to get him some to make a soup.

Target: Observing that Bigmouth will eat anything (even candles), Gargamel decides to use him as a tool in his vengeance against the Smurfs, offering to get him some to make a soup.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The information from the registers shows that this assumption is incorrect. On 15 February 1811, Lloyd's List reported the names and tons (bm) of the vessels taken at Port Louis after the invasion.

Target: The information from the registers shows that this assumption is incorrect. Furthermore, on 15 February 1811, Lloyd's List reported the names and tons (bm) of the vessels taken at Port Louis after the invasion.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The cubs are blind and helpless at birth. Already with a thick coat of fur.

Target: The cubs are blind and helpless at birth, although already with a thick coat of fur.


Source: Make the text coherent: Ultimately, the social classes remain stagnant. Nothing is changing within each social construct and education is at the forefront in terms of its contribution to the future issues.

Target: Ultimately, the social classes remain stagnant because nothing is changing within each social construct and education is at the forefront in terms of its contribution to the future issues.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Social network advertising is not necessarily the same as social media targeting. Social media targeting is a social media targeting of optimizing social media advertising by using profile data to deliver advertisements directly to individual users.

Target: Social network advertising is not necessarily the same as social media targeting. Social media targeting is a method of optimizing social media advertising by using profile data to deliver advertisements directly to individual users.


Source: Make the text clearer: Neal was educated in local public schools., upon outbreak of the American Civil War in 1861, the 15-year-old Neal attempted to enlist in the Union Army but Neal's father refused to Neal's his permission.

Target: Neal was educated in local public schools and, upon outbreak of the American Civil War in 1861, the 15-year-old Neal attempted to enlist in the Union Army but his father refused to give his permission.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: An SEP is something we can't see, or don't see, or our brain doesn't let us see. We think that something's somebody else's something.

Target: An SEP is something we can't see, or don't see, or our brain doesn't let us see, because we think that it's somebody else's problem.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Soren Anders (born John T. Fischer) is an American composer, singer, record producer and instrumentalist from southern Illinois. Soren Anders is the John T. Fischer of the multi-award winning band Shimmerplanet.

Target: Soren Anders (born John T. Fischer) is an American composer, singer, record producer and instrumentalist from southern Illinois. He is the creator of the multi-award winning band Shimmerplanet.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Improper encoding causes source amnesia. Witnesses who are stressed or distracted during the event and fail to pay attention are susceptible to encoding wrong details into their memory, claiming to have seen things they only imagined.

Target: Since improper encoding causes source amnesia, witnesses who are stressed or distracted during the event and fail to pay attention are susceptible to encoding wrong details into their memory, claiming to have seen things they only imagined.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Cockburn Harbour is known for having the best natural harbour in the Turks and Caicos Islands. Until the 1960s Cockburn Harbour was an important Cockburn Harbour of regional trade and a major exporter of salt.

Target: Cockburn Harbour is known for having the best natural harbour in the Turks and Caicos Islands. Until the 1960s it was an important centre of regional trade and a major exporter of salt.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 155 passengers were estimated to ride to San Francisco, and ridership between SSF and San Leandro was estimated at 50 to 150 passengers per day. Neither city had a strong history of transit ridership.

Target: 155 passengers were estimated to ride to San Francisco, and ridership between SSF and San Leandro was estimated at 50 to 150 passengers per day, because neither city had a strong history of transit ridership.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It skirts the eastern boundary of Fiordland National Park. It passes Manapouri and Tuatapere.

Target: Skirting the eastern boundary of Fiordland National Park, it passes Manapouri and Tuatapere.


Source: Make the text coherent: 90 % of the buildings along its coast have been destroyed. Nobody perished in the five-meter-high walls of water that followed.

Target: Although 90 % of the buildings along its coast have been destroyed, nobody perished in the five-meter-high walls of water that followed.


Source: Make the text more logical: Using the Hubble Space Telescope Santa Barbara. The Hubble Space Telescope is a double ring has been found by Raphael Gavazzi of the STScI and Tommaso Treu of the University of California.

Target: Using the Hubble Space Telescope, a double ring has been found by Raphael Gavazzi of the STScI and Tommaso Treu of the University of California, Santa Barbara.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Elias Tcherikower, Eliahu Tcherikower, Elias Tscherikower, I.M. Elias Tscherikower (1881-1943), was a Russian-born Jewish Elias Tscherikower of Judaism or the Jewish people.

Target: Elias Tcherikower, Eliahu Tcherikower, Elias Tscherikower, I.M. Cherikover (1881-1943), was a Russian-born Jewish historian of Judaism or the Jewish people.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This she later fulfilled when she gave birth to a male heir named Archduke Leopold John in 1716. At age 7 months the Archduke Leopold John Archduke Leopold John died.

Target: This she later fulfilled when she gave birth to a male heir named Archduke Leopold John in 1716. However, at age 7 months the infant Leopold died.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Elisabeth Christine was later rumored to be a crypto-Protestant, likely. Elisabeth Christine was a Elisabeth Christine of Jansenists such as Johann Christoph Bartenstein.

Target: Elisabeth Christine was later rumored to be a crypto-Protestant, likely because she was a patron of Jansenists such as Johann Christoph Bartenstein.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Women were responsible for the home and family nutrition at the time. Richards felt that all women should be educated in the sciences.

Target: Since women were responsible for the home and family nutrition at the time, Richards felt that all women should be educated in the sciences.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: But chromium formed at these temperatures reacts with carbon to form its carbide, which gives undesirable properties to the chromium metal obtained. For high temperature reduction of chromic oxide, carbon can not be used.

Target: But chromium formed at these temperatures reacts with carbon to form its carbide, which gives undesirable properties to the chromium metal obtained. Hence, for high temperature reduction of chromic oxide, carbon can not be used.


Source: Make the text more logical: Her quick thinking saved baby Sarah's life and Emily decided to stick around. Life at the Dingles was difficult for Emily.

Target: Her quick thinking saved baby Sarah's life and Emily decided to stick around. However, life at the Dingles was difficult for Emily.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It kicks off with a simple guitar riff that could almost pass for The Feeling. It's only when the beats drop around the minute mark that this becomes an identifiably Chase & Status affair.

Target: Kicking off with a simple guitar riff that could almost pass for The Feeling, it's only when the beats drop around the minute mark that this becomes an identifiably Chase & Status affair.


Source: Fix coherence: It falls upon the policymakers to make the optimal decision, if there is any risk, even without any credible scientific evidence. Taking precautionary action also means that there is an element of cost involved, either social or economic.

Target: It falls upon the policymakers to make the optimal decision, if there is any risk, even without any credible scientific evidence. However, taking precautionary action also means that there is an element of cost involved, either social or economic.


Source: Make the text more consistent: As of 1 July 2004, approximately one-third of the Great Barrier Reef Marine Park is protected from species removal of any kind, including fishing, without written permission. Illegal poaching is not unknown in these no-take zones.

Target: As of 1 July 2004, approximately one-third of the Great Barrier Reef Marine Park is protected from species removal of any kind, including fishing, without written permission. However, illegal poaching is not unknown in these no-take zones.


Source: Fix coherence errors: People can and do transfer this virus via their hands and clothing. People need to take sanitary precautions when handling a sick horse.

Target: Since people can and do transfer this virus via their hands and clothing, people need to take sanitary precautions when handling a sick horse.


Source: Fix sentence transition: with an analogous proof for a right-Euclidean relation. An equivalence relation is a relation that is Euclidean and reflexive.

Target: with an analogous proof for a right-Euclidean relation. Hence an equivalence relation is a relation that is Euclidean and reflexive.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Indeed, since the relation is serial, every element is in the relation. Using symmetry, reflexivity can be concluded from transitivity by identifying the first and third variables in the transitive axiom.

Target: Indeed, since the relation is serial, every element is in the relation. Then, using symmetry, reflexivity can be concluded from transitivity by identifying the first and third variables in the transitive axiom.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Erato voluta is a species of small sea snail the false cowries or trivias. A species of small sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Triviidae.

Target: Erato voluta is a species of small sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Triviidae, the false cowries or trivias.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: DeLamarter aided Sowerby in his becoming an accomplished organist. In 1915 DeLamarter was DeLamarter at the Fourth Presbyterian Church in Chicago, IL.

Target: DeLamarter aided Sowerby in his becoming an accomplished organist. In 1915 he was organist at the Fourth Presbyterian Church in Chicago, IL.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: As of 2009, General Shinseki was the highest-ranked Asian American in the history of the United States. As of 2004, Shinseki is the highest-ranked Japanese United States to have served in the United States Armed Forces.

Target: As of 2009, General Shinseki was the highest-ranked Asian American in the history of the United States. Additionally, as of 2004, he is the highest-ranked Japanese American to have served in the United States Armed Forces.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He landed on his head. He suffered a fracture to the C-7 vertebrae and bruising to his spine.

Target: Landing on his head, he suffered a fracture to the C-7 vertebrae and bruising to his spine.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Two owned three to four restaurants in Singapore. Two went bankrupt in 2015 and he had to reduce one restaurants staff to four full-timers in 2016 following the hookah ban.

Target: Owning three to four restaurants in Singapore, two went bankrupt in 2015 and he had to reduce one restaurants staff to four full-timers in 2016 following the hookah ban.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The copies were prepared and preserved. These would serve as security copies of analogous materials.

Target: The copies were prepared and preserved so that these would serve as security copies of analogous materials.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The time of former Yugoslavia. Relations between the two nations have been warm.

Target: Since the time of former Yugoslavia, relations between the two nations have been warm.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Individual identities might change throughout the years. Strong emotional issues can lead to a desire to fulfill those needs above all other concerns.

Target: Individual identities might change throughout the years, but strong emotional issues can lead to a desire to fulfill those needs above all other concerns.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Global population trends have not been analysed. Numbers seem to be stable, so it has been classified as being of Least Concern by IUCN.

Target: Although global population trends have not been analysed, numbers seem to be stable, so it has been classified as being of Least Concern by IUCN.


Source: Make the text coherent: Russian and British troops were quickly alerted. The two powers reached a compromise ; Russian was in possession of the oasis, and British believed British could keep the Russian from advancing any farther.

Target: Russian and British troops were quickly alerted, but the two powers reached a compromise ; Russia was in possession of the oasis, and Britain believed it could keep the Russians from advancing any farther.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Juveniles feed on zooplankton, bottom invertebrate fauna and other perch fry. Adults feed on both invertebrates and fish.

Target: Juveniles feed on zooplankton, bottom invertebrate fauna and other perch fry, while adults feed on both invertebrates and fish.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Dahlbeck married Sven Lampell in 1944. Sven Lampell is an air force officer.

Target: Dahlbeck married Sven Lampell, an air force officer, in 1944.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The lineup, however, would not last long. Again Seheon would be the only official member left to command Eve (with Seungjoo and Yuhwa from the Planet Eve era occasionally supporting him during live performances).

Target: The lineup, however, would not last long, and again Seheon would be the only official member left to command Eve (with Seungjoo and Yuhwa from the Planet Eve era occasionally supporting him during live performances).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The rest of the friends not knowing where Wo has got to, make an exit down the back of the apartment. Whilst escaping across the back courtyard, Boss Fay throws Wo from a high window and pins down Wo's friends preventing any rescue attempt.

Target: The rest of the friends not knowing where Wo has got to, make an exit down the back of the apartment. However whilst escaping across the back courtyard, Boss Fay throws Wo from a high window and pins down Wo's friends preventing any rescue attempt.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She hands Wo's body over to his wife, Jin. She demands to know what has happened and in her grief opens fire on Blaze and Tai who run away.

Target: Handing Wo's body over to his wife, Jin, she demands to know what has happened and in her grief opens fire on Blaze and Tai who run away.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This prohibition was further extended by Pope Boniface VIII. During the Middle Ages expectative graces were customarily conferred upon applicants to canonical prebends in the cathedral and collegiate chapters.

Target: This prohibition was further extended by Pope Boniface VIII. Nevertheless, during the Middle Ages expectative graces were customarily conferred upon applicants to canonical prebends in the cathedral and collegiate chapters.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Children focuse on a city in Europe where the pollution is so bad. Children struggle to breathe, DNA is damaged, and the vulnerable are forced indoors.

Target: Focusing on a city in Europe where the pollution is so bad, children struggle to breathe, DNA is damaged, and the vulnerable are forced indoors.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: TC requires greater strategy and skill than other game modes. Players can get frustrated when novice players fail to stay in designated locations, leaving the aerogates unguarded, resulting in the loss of the aerogate to the other team.

Target: TC requires greater strategy and skill than other game modes. As a result, players can get frustrated when novice players fail to stay in designated locations, leaving the aerogates unguarded, resulting in the loss of the aerogate to the other team.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: F-Zero has a total of fifteen tracks divided into three leagues ordered by increasing difficulty: Knight, Queen, and King. Each league has four selectable difficulty levels: beginner, standard, expert, and master.

Target: F-Zero has a total of fifteen tracks divided into three leagues ordered by increasing difficulty: Knight, Queen, and King. Furthermore, each league has four selectable difficulty levels: beginner, standard, expert, and master.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Who trying to hide in a motel, the trio are find by the police. Who kill Clem and Joe during a shootout, while Scarlett manages to escape.

Target: Trying to hide in a motel, the trio are found by the police, who kill Clem and Joe during a shootout, while Scarlett manages to escape.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Its completion was the result of a concerted effort successfully led by the Peruvian architect Fernando Belaunde who was chief of the Departement at that time. The construction was finished in 1955 and the building became one of the finest examples of modern architecture in Peruvian.

Target: Its completion was the result of a concerted effort successfully led by the Peruvian architect Fernando Belaunde who was chief of the Departement at that time. The construction was finished in 1955 and the building became one of the finest examples of modern architecture in Peru.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: FASTAR automatically reroutes circuits over a spare protection capacity when a fiber-optic cable failure is detected,. Increasing service availability and reducing the impact of the outages in the network.

Target: FASTAR automatically reroutes circuits over a spare protection capacity when a fiber-optic cable failure is detected, hence increasing service availability and reducing the impact of the outages in the network.


Source: Make the text coherent: We solve RSD. We are in the opposite situation as when hashing.

Target: Solving RSD, we are in the opposite situation as when hashing.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Prior to her appointment to the Saudi Embassy, Baeshen was a director of the Arabia Foundation, a Washington, D.C.-based think tank founded in 2017. Baeshen has also been an economic director to the World Bank, Islamic Development Bank, and Emirates Foundation.

Target: Prior to her appointment to the Saudi Embassy, Baeshen was a director of the Arabia Foundation, a Washington, D.C.-based think tank founded in 2017. She has also been an economic consultant to the World Bank, Islamic Development Bank, and Emirates Foundation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: We slip into the waters off the coast of California. We have the California sea lion, which can grow up to seven feet long and hangs out in shallow ocean water, beaches and rocks.

Target: Slipping into the waters off the coast of California, we have the California sea lion, which can grow up to seven feet long and hangs out in shallow ocean water, beaches and rocks.


Source: Fix sentence flow: State medical boards also adopt policies and guidelines related to the practice of medicine. Medical boards sometimes engage in the unethical practice of sham peer review.

Target: State medical boards also adopt policies and guidelines related to the practice of medicine. However, medical boards sometimes engage in the unethical practice of sham peer review.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The President of the Federation has the competence of representing the organization alone,. Two Vice-Presidents bear the right to representation together with General Secretary and Accountant.

Target: The President of the Federation has the competence of representing the organization alone, whereas two Vice-Presidents bear the right to representation together with General Secretary and Accountant.


Source: Make the text coherent: This is the same organization that has run WhoFest since 2013. WhoFest is a Doctor Who-focused media-oriented science fiction convention.

Target: This is the same organization that has run WhoFest, a Doctor Who-focused media-oriented science fiction convention, since 2013.


Source: Make the text coherent: This file is in the public domain. File is a file.

Target: This file is in the public domain, because It is a logo.


Source: Make the text more logical: Tsar Ivan Alexander ca. Tsar Ivan Alexander is an illustration from the Four Gospels of Tsar Ivan Alexander (the London Gospel).

Target: Tsar Ivan Alexander, an illustration from the Four Gospels of Tsar Ivan Alexander (the London Gospel), ca.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Description = Photo of the Mourning Angel covered with candles etc. after the 2007 bus bombing The Mourning Angel is a memorial statue in the Russian city of Tolyatti.

Target: description = Photo of the Mourning Angel, a memorial statue in the Russian city of Tolyatti, covered with candles etc. after the 2007 bus bombing


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As a child Bolavucu grew up amongst his extended family and being from a big family, the love for rugby was nurtured, as is in every Fijian family. Bolavucu's father was a professional amateur boxer child Bolavucu redirected his love for sports rugby rugby.

Target: As a child Bolavucu grew up amongst his extended family and being from a big family, the love for rugby was nurtured, as is in every Fijian family. Although, his father was a professional amateur boxer, Bolavucu redirected his love for sports towards rugby.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The event was renamed in memory of Sir Charles Clore in 1980. Sir Charles Clore is a successful racehorse owner.

Target: The event was renamed in memory of Sir Charles Clore, a successful racehorse owner, in 1980.


Source: Fix coherence: Conversely, on a uniform space every convergent filter is a Cauchy filter. Every cluster point of a Cauchy filter is a limit point.

Target: Conversely, on a uniform space every convergent filter is a Cauchy filter. Moreover, every cluster point of a Cauchy filter is a limit point.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cecil casts aside the darkness within himself. Cecil becomes a Paladin, while Tellah learns the secret of Meteor.

Target: Casting aside the darkness within himself, Cecil becomes a Paladin, while Tellah learns the secret of Meteor.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Empire that Augustus established would last in Western Europe until the fall of Rome in the 5th century AD. The Eastern part of the Empire would also survive as the Byzantine Empire until the fall of Constantinople in AD 1453.

Target: The Empire that Augustus established would last in Western Europe until the fall of Rome in the 5th century AD. The Eastern part of the Roman Empire would also survive as the Byzantine Empire until the fall of Constantinople in AD 1453.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Conifers are often early successional species, while broad leaf trees frequently replace them in the absence of fire. Many conifer forests are themselves dependent upon recurring fire.

Target: Conifers are often early successional species, while broad leaf trees frequently replace them in the absence of fire. Hence, many conifer forests are themselves dependent upon recurring fire.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Management of these wet tropical forests is important. Species like Eucalyptus grandis rely on fire to survive.

Target: Management of these wet tropical forests is important because species like Eucalyptus grandis rely on fire to survive.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The French government website states that the white field was the colour of the king. Blue and red were the colours of Paris.

Target: The French government website states that the white field was the colour of the king, while blue and red were the colours of Paris.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The word flamingant remains a loaded term. See the song Les Flamingants by Jacques Brel criticizing the flamingants.

Target: The word flamingant remains a loaded term. For example, see the song Les Flamingants by Jacques Brel criticizing the flamingants.


Source: Make the text coherent: As there is no clear way of defining ownership, one who discovers flotsam is allowed to claim it,. Someone claims ownership to the items in question.

Target: As there is no clear way of defining ownership, one who discovers flotsam is allowed to claim it, unless someone claims ownership to the items in question.


Source: Make the text clearer: Mabou Mines presented the world premiere of a theatrical adaptation of Flow My Tears 1985. The world premiere of a theatrical adaptation of Flow My Tears is the Policeman Said at the Boston Shakespeare Theatre from June 18 -- 30.

Target: Mabou Mines presented the world premiere of a theatrical adaptation of Flow My Tears, the Policeman Said at the Boston Shakespeare Theatre from June 18 -- 30, 1985.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This was an important find. Very little remains of the original fort exist.

Target: This was an important find because very little remains of the original fort exist.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Fort Worth Bike Sharing is a nonprofit organization that controls Fort Worth B-Cycle 2013. Fort Worth B-Cycle is a bike-sharing program introduced to the area on April 22.

Target: The Fort Worth Bike Sharing is a nonprofit organization that controls Fort Worth B-Cycle, a bike-sharing program introduced to the area on April 22, 2013.


Source: Fix coherence: Fear of an attack was not the only reason for closing the gates at night. For extended periods, especially in the late 18th century, there was little likelihood of being attacked.

Target: Fear of an attack was not the only reason for closing the gates at night. In fact, for extended periods, especially in the late 18th century, there was little likelihood of being attacked.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: A head-to-head study with lopinavir showed the two drugs to have comparable potency. Patients on fosamprenavir tended to have a higher serum cholesterol.

Target: A head-to-head study with lopinavir showed the two drugs to have comparable potency, but patients on fosamprenavir tended to have a higher serum cholesterol.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Treaty of Ankara did not resolve the problems in connection with the sanjak of Alexandretta. Positive Franco-Turkish relations were maintained.

Target: The Treaty of Ankara did not resolve the problems in connection with the sanjak of Alexandretta. However, positive Franco-Turkish relations were maintained.


Source: Make the text coherent: In July 1950, he assumed command of the Destroyer Force, U.S. Atlantic Fleet. From January 1952 to his retirement on 1 May 1956, he served as the Commander Amphibious Force, U.S. Atlantic Fleet.

Target: In July 1950, he assumed command of the Destroyer Force, U.S. Atlantic Fleet. Finally, from January 1952 to his retirement on 1 May 1956, he served as the Commander Amphibious Force, U.S. Atlantic Fleet.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Shotton's pioneering Quaternary research resulted in his election as a Fellow of the Royal Society. Shotton was Shotton of the Geology Department at the University of Birmingham from 1949 until Shotton's retirement in 1974.

Target: Shotton's pioneering Quaternary research resulted in his election as a Fellow of the Royal Society. Shotton was Head of the Geology Department at the University of Birmingham from 1949 until his retirement in 1974.


Source: Make the text more logical: Formally assigned to the Tunisian Squadron on 13 January 1913. Bruix remained in the Levant.

Target: Although formally assigned to the Tunisian Squadron on 13 January 1913, Bruix remained in the Levant.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: With Barrett's departure, fundraising slowed, and the museum's board floundered in hiring a new director. Without any art leadership, Cremean became frustrated.

Target: With Barrett's departure, fundraising slowed, and the museum's board floundered in hiring a new director. Thus, without any art leadership, Cremean became frustrated.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: After the opening of the Tierpark Friedrichsfelde in 1955, Tierpark (zoo) was added to the name of the station. Passengers had to walk about 1.2 km.

Target: After the opening of the Tierpark Friedrichsfelde in 1955, Tierpark (zoo) was added to the name of the station, although passengers had to walk about 1.2 km.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The inscription is however wrong, Thomas lived on 59, Kornhamnstorg. Thomas 'son Johan Funck lived in this building and, having made a fortune on copper production, bought many other buildings in the city, just like Thomas' his widow.

Target: The inscription is however wrong, Thomas lived on 59, Kornhamnstorg, but his son Johan Funck lived in this building and, having made a fortune on copper production, bought many other buildings in the city, just like did his widow.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Critics of basic research are concerned that research funding for the sake of knowledge itself does not contribute to a great return. Scientific innovations often foreshadow or inspire further ideas unintentionally.

Target: Critics of basic research are concerned that research funding for the sake of knowledge itself does not contribute to a great return. However, scientific innovations often foreshadow or inspire further ideas unintentionally.


Source: Fix coherence errors: An additional distinction of government-sponsored research is that the government does not make a claim to the intellectual property,. Private research-funding bodies sometimes claim ownership of the intellectual property that government are paying to have developed.

Target: An additional distinction of government-sponsored research is that the government does not make a claim to the intellectual property, whereas private research-funding bodies sometimes claim ownership of the intellectual property that they are paying to have developed.


Source: Make the text clearer: Erik shifts one last time to the all-powerful Erika body. Erik is able to put Jimmy in contact with Natasha Irons before dying.

Target: Shifting one last time to the all-powerful Erika body, Erik is able to put Jimmy in contact with Natasha Irons before dying.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This encouraged Krugers to make Karnadi Anemer Bangkong (Karnadi the Frog Contractor) in 1930. Karnadi Anemer Bangkong (Karnadi the Frog Contractor) is an adaptation of the book by Yuhana.

Target: This encouraged Krugers to make Karnadi Anemer Bangkong (Karnadi the Frog Contractor), an adaptation of the book by Yuhana, in 1930.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This proves to be an annoyance for her neighbor, a demon named Vignette April Tsukinose. Another demon named Satanichia Kurumizawa McDowell tries to do demonic deeds, only to discover the acts of indecency by Gabriel outweigh her own.

Target: This proves to be an annoyance for her neighbor, a demon named Vignette April Tsukinose. Meanwhile, another demon named Satanichia Kurumizawa McDowell tries to do demonic deeds, only to discover the acts of indecency by Gabriel outweigh her own.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Gabriel manages to get away with light punishments for her actions. Gabriel is relieved to see the girl return to having a normal life.

Target: Managing to get away with light punishments for her actions, Gabriel is relieved to see the girl return to having a normal life.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The skit that took over Minsang Debate 2. Director Jo Jun Hui left.

Target: The skit that took over Minsang Debate 2 because director Jo Jun Hui left.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In a nuclear power plant, shielding can be provided by steel and concrete in the pressure and particle containment vessel. Water provides a radiation shielding of fuel rods during storage or transport into the reactor core.

Target: In a nuclear power plant, shielding can be provided by steel and concrete in the pressure and particle containment vessel, while water provides a radiation shielding of fuel rods during storage or transport into the reactor core.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The area is one of the naval and civilian locality in the City.. The area falls under the local administrative limits of Greater Visakhapatnam Municipal Corporation.

Target: The area, which falls under the local administrative limits of Greater Visakhapatnam Municipal Corporation, is one of the naval and civilian locality in the City..


Source: Make the text clearer: Robert E. Lee, the best known CSA general. CSA general is shown with the insignia of a Confederate colonel, which Robert E. Lee chose to wear throughout the war.

Target: Robert E. Lee, the best known CSA general. Lee is shown with the insignia of a Confederate colonel, which he chose to wear throughout the war.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Vermue appears in a cameo role in the 2006 John Cameron Mitchell film Shortbus. Vermue is openly gay.

Target: Vermue, who is openly gay, appears in a cameo role in the 2006 John Cameron Mitchell film Shortbus.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: A Republican, he unsuccessfully ran for the Vermont House of Representatives in 1922. Eight years later, Republican won election to the Vermont House of Representatives, where Republican served from 1931 to 1935.

Target: A Republican, he unsuccessfully ran for the Vermont House of Representatives in 1922. However, eight years later, he won election to the Vermont House, where he served from 1931 to 1935.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He removed his rank insignia. He pretended to be a medical orderly.

Target: Removing his rank insignia, he pretended to be a medical orderly.


Source: Fix sentence flow: His assistant Joe Thomas Corley took over. Joe Thomas Corley started with Germain-Robin in 2000 after a career in wine.

Target: His assistant Joe Thomas Corley, who started with Germain-Robin in 2000 after a career in wine, took over.


Source: Fix coherence: The battleship Warspite and nine destroyers duly appeared on 13 April. Earlier than Commander Bey had expected.

Target: The battleship Warspite and nine destroyers duly appeared on 13 April, although earlier than Commander Bey had expected.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Prior to this match, Germany had set a world football record with 15 consecutive wins in competitive matches, which included all matches of Euro 2012 up to that point and the qualifiers. Also this record was to be broken by Italy on that day.

Target: Prior to this match, Germany had set a world football record with 15 consecutive wins in competitive matches, which included all matches of Euro 2012 up to that point and the qualifiers. However, also this record was to be broken by Italy on that day.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jump up ^ Exercised command of the right wing of the army during a part of the battle. See Slocum to Meade, December 30, 1863 and Meade to Slocum, February 25, 1864

Target: Jump up ^ Exercised command of the right wing of the army during a part of the battle. But see Slocum to Meade, December 30, 1863 and Meade to Slocum, February 25, 1864


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Giovanni Laurentini (also called Arrigoni, active around 1600) was an Italian painter. Giovanni Laurentini was a Arrigoni of Federigo Barocci.

Target: Giovanni Laurentini (also called Arrigoni, active around 1600) was an Italian painter. He was a pupil of Federigo Barocci.


Source: Make the text clearer: Using the building for new power generation capacity was deemed unfeasible. Modern generation equipment was incompatible with the building design.

Target: Using the building for new power generation capacity was deemed unfeasible because modern generation equipment was incompatible with the building design.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is a global good. Even if a large nation decreases good, that nation will only enjoy a small fraction of the benefit of doing so.

Target: It is a global good, so even if a large nation decreases it, that nation will only enjoy a small fraction of the benefit of doing so.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Amb Igali believes strongly in private sector led development and entrepreneurship development as the paradigm for Bayelsa's forward match. Amb Igali was appointed recently by the Bayelsa Governor Seriake Dickson as a member of the Bayelsa Business Council.

Target: Amb Igali believes strongly in private sector led development and entrepreneurship development as the paradigm for Bayelsa's forward match. He was appointed recently by the Bayelsa State Governor Seriake Dickson as a member of the Bayelsa Business Council.


Source: Make the text clearer: Originally opened in 2002 as Ardmore Gaming, the facility has grown steadily. Today features more than 300 gaming machines.

Target: Originally opened in 2002 as Ardmore Gaming, the facility has grown steadily and today features more than 300 gaming machines.


Source: Make the text clearer: In primate research. Male-male competition for mates and female mate choice are the common causes of sexual selection.

Target: In primate research, although male-male competition for mates and female mate choice are the common causes of sexual selection.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The protocol is open. Anyone can become a wave provider and share waves with others.

Target: Since the protocol is open, anyone can become a wave provider and share waves with others.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Zahid Afridi proves to be a very good all-rounder and. After a series of events.

Target: Zahid Afridi proves to be a very good all-rounder and hence after a series of events.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The general habitat in the area would have been heathland,. The habitat of the nearby village of West Moor and the nearby track called Heathery Lane.

Target: The general habitat in the area would have been heathland, hence the name of the nearby village of West Moor and the nearby track called Heathery Lane.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The origins of the name Gouget noir is not known. Some wine experts, such as Master of Wine Jancis Robinson, speculate that it may have been named after a vineyard owner and propagator of vine cuttings since name is a common name.

Target: The origins of the name Gouget noir is not known. Some wine experts, such as Master of Wine Jancis Robinson, speculate that it may have been named after a vineyard owner and propagator of vine cuttings since Gouget is a common family name.


Source: Fix coherence errors: GLS lawyers are mostly employed by the Government Legal Department. Based in other government departments.

Target: GLS lawyers are mostly employed by the Government Legal Department, although based in other government departments.


Source: Fix sentence transition: During 2004, he collaborated with James Fox. None of the work was released.

Target: During 2004, he collaborated with James Fox although none of the work was released.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 1984, she was painted as CB&Q 4070 for filming in the movie The Natural. After the The Natural, 4070 continued to run trains on the Cuyahoga until in 1990 movie was found that she needed repairs.

Target: In 1984, she was painted as CB&Q 4070 for filming in the movie The Natural. After the movie, 4070 continued to run trains on the Cuyahoga until in 1990 it was found that she needed repairs.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: When the 2004 scheme launched, Bristol was the only city in Britain to have such a project. Plans were underway for London to introduce one.

Target: When the 2004 scheme launched, Bristol was the only city in Britain to have such a project, but plans were underway for London to introduce one.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They also risked losing the right to unemployment benefits. Foreign employment did not contribute to entitlements in their home state.

Target: They also risked losing the right to unemployment benefits because foreign employment did not contribute to entitlements in their home state.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The 207th division assaults over the Grebbeberg itself had been successful too. Severe losses were absorbed.

Target: The 207th division assaults over the Grebbeberg itself had been successful too, although severe losses were absorbed.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Its economy mainly comprises the service sector (85.0 %) and industry (12.0 %). Agriculture makes up 3.0 % of the national economic output.

Target: Its economy mainly comprises the service sector (85.0 %) and industry (12.0 %), while agriculture makes up 3.0 % of the national economic output.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In the green belt there is a general presumption against inappropriate development,. Very special circumstances can be demonstrated to show that the benefits of the development will outweigh the harm caused to the green belt.

Target: In the green belt there is a general presumption against inappropriate development, unless very special circumstances can be demonstrated to show that the benefits of the development will outweigh the harm caused to the green belt.


Source: Make the text coherent: Greenpeace has stated that Watson was an influential early member, but not one of the founders of Greenpeace. member has since criticized Greenpeace of rewriting founders' history.

Target: Greenpeace has stated that Watson was an influential early member, but not one of the founders of Greenpeace. Watson has since criticized Greenpeace of rewriting their history.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Groothuis sided with VonCross in his ongoing feud with Williams. Groothuis was in his corner when he faced Williams for the IZW Heavyweight title on May 8.

Target: Siding with VonCross in his ongoing feud with Williams, Groothuis was in his corner when he faced Williams for the IZW Heavyweight title on May 8.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: During his tenure, Bentley reached multiple milestones and added numerous programs. Bentley began granting bachelor of science degrees in all business disciplines as well as a bachelor of arts degree in 1971 when Bentley became Bentley.

Target: During his tenure, Bentley reached multiple milestones and added numerous programs. Bentley began granting bachelor of science degrees in all business disciplines as well as a bachelor of arts degree in 1971 when it became Bentley College.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Gregory began as a monk in the monastery of the Byzantines in Jerusalem. So we learn from Evagrius Scholasticus.

Target: Gregory began as a monk in the monastery of the Byzantines in Jerusalem, or so we learn from Evagrius Scholasticus.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Because of sanctions arising from the Ukrainian conflict, deliveries of MTU diesels beyond the first two units were stopped, resulting in the cancellation of further units. New units of the preceding Steregushchiy-class corvette are being ordered.

Target: Because of sanctions arising from the Ukrainian conflict, deliveries of MTU diesels beyond the first two units were stopped, resulting in the cancellation of further units. Instead, new units of the preceding Steregushchiy-class corvette are being ordered.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In 1808, Waldhilbersheim counted 29 Jewish inhabitants. Living here about 1858 were 50 Jewish in Waldhilbersheim and another 40 in Heddesheim, but thereafter the numbers began to shrink with emigration and depopulation.

Target: In 1808, Waldhilbersheim counted 29 Jewish inhabitants. Living here about 1858 were 50 Jews in Waldhilbersheim and another 40 in Heddesheim, but thereafter the numbers began to shrink with emigration and depopulation.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The middle Ming period saw the arrival of European guns in China. As early as 1518 Portuguese breech-loading swivel gun known as folangji could be purchased in the Ming.

Target: The middle Ming period saw the arrival of European guns in China. As early as 1518 Portuguese breech-loading swivel gun known as folangji could be purchased in the Ming dynasty.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Arabs warned the British if they tried to help the Jews they would be attacked. British HQ in Jerusalem arranged a truce with Arabs leaders.

Target: The Arabs warned the British if they tried to help the Jews they would be attacked. Meanwhile, British HQ in Jerusalem arranged a truce with Arab leaders.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Arabs had blocked the road with piles of rocks at short intervals, and also laid extensive minefields. Hundreds of guerrillas lay in wait on the steep hillsides.

Target: The Arabs had blocked the road with piles of rocks at short intervals, and also laid extensive minefields, while hundreds of guerrillas lay in wait on the steep hillsides.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Finally, though not necessarily a favorite for an all-around medal, Dong Fangxiao was found in 2010 to have been underaged at the Sydney Olympics. All of Dong Fangxiao's results from the competition-including her all-around results-were cancelled.

Target: Finally, though not necessarily a favorite for an all-around medal, Dong Fangxiao was found in 2010 to have been underaged at the Sydney Olympics. Consequently, all of her results from the competition-including her all-around results-were cancelled.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Jump up ^ Sources disagree on the number of each model of gun mounted on the ship. Everyone agrees that most of the guns fitted were Mk VI guns.

Target: Jump up ^ Sources disagree on the number of each model of gun mounted on the ship, although everyone agrees that most of the guns fitted were Mk VI guns.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Ha was born in Seoul and studied creative writing at the Seoul Institute of the Arts. Ha was the Ha of three children and this position resulted in her often taking on the role of a son.

Target: Ha was born in Seoul and studied creative writing at the Seoul Institute of the Arts. Ha was the oldest of three children and this position resulted in her often taking on the role of a son.


Source: Make the text more logical: This is because they produce endorphins giving them a feeling which is similar to that of a head massage, laughter, or caress. Many people feel some level of anxiety when their head hair is being cut.

Target: This is because they produce endorphins giving them a feeling which is similar to that of a head massage, laughter, or caress. On the other hand, many people feel some level of anxiety when their head hair is being cut.


Source: Fix sentence transition: While still in college, he was Baker's head writer. Getting into Baker's employ had required persistence and some chicanery.

Target: While still in college, he was Baker's head writer. However, getting into Baker's employ had required persistence and some chicanery.


Source: Fix coherence: Cerf, Bennett (2002). At Random: the reminiscences of Cerf, Bennett.

Target: Cerf, Bennett (2002). At Random: the reminiscences of Bennett Cerf.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The dough undergoes the same hallaca wrap and cooking preparation. Typically smaller in size and much fewer in number.

Target: The dough undergoes the same hallaca wrap and cooking preparation, although typically smaller in size and much fewer in number.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: At the end of 2007 the Faculties of Business & Public Management and Social Work & Nursing were joined to form one faculty. Today the university reflects a new structure with four faculties at four different campus locations in Hamburg.

Target: At the end of 2007 the Faculties of Business & Public Management and Social Work & Nursing were joined to form one faculty, so that today the university reflects a new structure with four faculties at four different campus locations in Hamburg.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Virginia Beach Division was located at 222 Central Park Avenue, Suite 1010 in Virginia Beach (757-664-2575). Has since been relocated to the Hampton Roads Chamber's headquarters in Downtown Norfolk.

Target: The Virginia Beach Division was located at 222 Central Park Avenue, Suite 1010 in Virginia Beach (757-664-2575). but has since been relocated to the Hampton Roads Chamber's headquarters in Downtown Norfolk.


Source: Fix sentence transition: These have origins in the pre Hispanic period. Various techniques have since been added.

Target: These have origins in the pre Hispanic period although various techniques have since been added.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It was between the two World Wars and up to the 1950s that Handsworth Wood was developed largely with private housing. Handsworth Wood is an Handsworth Wood that has maintained Handsworth Wood's middle-class status to the present.

Target: It was between the two World Wars and up to the 1950s that Handsworth Wood was developed largely with private housing. It is an area that has maintained its middle-class status to the present.


Source: Make the text clearer: Jump up ^ It is not clear that P-40Fs, assigned to the 57th FG at the time, were involved ; the unit was not officially operational until 6 October. Individual USAAF personnel had been attached to DAF units since July.

Target: Jump up ^ It is not clear that P-40Fs, assigned to the 57th FG at the time, were involved ; the unit was not officially operational until 6 October. However, individual USAAF personnel had been attached to DAF units since July.


Source: Make the text clearer: Merkatz received his doctorate at the University of Jena in 1934 and his approbation as a lawyer in 1935. The same year, Merkatz started lecturing foreign and international law at the Kaiser Wilhelm Society in Berlin.

Target: Merkatz received his doctorate at the University of Jena in 1934 and his approbation as a lawyer in 1935. The same year, von Merkatz started lecturing foreign and international law at the Kaiser Wilhelm Society in Berlin.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It is therefore also mistaken to assume that there is a single common good at which all politics aims. We must forgo the belief that there is a best form of government (as, e.g., democracy).

Target: It is therefore also mistaken to assume that there is a single common good at which all politics aims. Similarly, we must forgo the belief that there is a best form of government (as, e.g., democracy).


Source: Fix sentence transition: These Kuwaiti shelters were built by the French and used by Iraqi forces during the conflict. Picture is of Ahmad al-Jaber Air Base-Kuwaiti.

Target: These Kuwaiti shelters were built by the French and used by Iraqi forces during the conflict. Picture is of Ahmad al-Jaber Air Base-Kuwait.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Either way the effect of airfield defences would take a heavy toll on the aggressor. Like HAS, dispersal can be expensive, requiring massive construction of hardstanding.

Target: Either way the effect of airfield defences would take a heavy toll on the aggressor. However like HAS, dispersal can be expensive, requiring massive construction of hardstanding.


Source: Fix coherence: Who produced two other Classic winners: Iroquois plus the colt Panique by Alarm who won the 1884 Belmont Stakes. Iroquois is a full brother to Harold who became the first American-bred horse to ever win England's renowned Epsom Derby.

Target: who produced two other Classic winners: Iroquois, a full brother to Harold who became the first American-bred horse to ever win England's renowned Epsom Derby, plus the colt Panique by Alarm who won the 1884 Belmont Stakes.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He switched his focus to comedy. He worked as a researcher for BBC2's Not the Nine O'Clock News and for various comedy shows on BBC Radio, including BBC Radio 4's The Mary Whitehouse Experience.

Target: Switching his focus to comedy, he worked as a researcher for BBC2's Not the Nine O'Clock News and for various comedy shows on BBC Radio, including BBC Radio 4's The Mary Whitehouse Experience.


Source: Make the text more logical: He was a multiple sport star at Port Huron High School. Bad grades temporarily derailed sport star's college plans sport star he entered a private school, earning letters in football, basketball, and baseball at St. John's Military Academy in Delafield, Wisconsin.

Target: He was a multiple sport star at Port Huron High School, but bad grades temporarily derailed his college plans and he entered a private school, earning letters in football, basketball, and baseball at St. John's Military Academy in Delafield, Wisconsin.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He states that. Family plays a significant role in traditional Japanese literature.

Target: He states that because family plays a significant role in traditional Japanese literature.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Widespread advice that salt intake be restricted below this range is not supported by evidence from randomized controlled trials. It advice not supported by evidence from prospective observational studies.

Target: Widespread advice that salt intake be restricted below this range is not supported by evidence from randomized controlled trials nor is it supported by evidence from prospective observational studies.


Source: Make the text clearer: Whether he may have suffered from depression as a genetic predilection, as a reaction to multiple emotional traumas in his life. A combination thereof is the subject of much current conjecture.

Target: Whether he may have suffered from depression as a genetic predilection, as a reaction to multiple emotional traumas in his life, or a combination thereof is the subject of much current conjecture.


Source: Fix coherence errors: At the time of its design Terminal 5's proposed height was so tall that it would have blocked runway views from Heathrow Airport's then control tower. Before construction began on the terminal building, a new taller air traffic control tower was constructed.

Target: At the time of its design Terminal 5's proposed height was so tall that it would have blocked runway views from Heathrow Airport's then control tower. Therefore, before construction began on the terminal building, a new taller air traffic control tower was constructed.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Lewis embarked on a succession of impressive wins. Lewis improved his record to 40-3.

Target: Embarking on a succession of impressive wins, Lewis improved his record to 40-3.


Source: Fix coherence: Lewis raced through the early part of his career. Lewis was victorious in his first 22 fights.

Target: Racing through the early part of his career, Lewis was victorious in his first 22 fights.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It may also appear suspect. Similar events are not observed in other ice ages.

Target: It may also appear suspect because similar events are not observed in other ice ages.