Source: Fix coherence errors: This choice of direction is preferred partly. Snow typically melts earlier in the year on the eastern portion of the trail than on the higher western portion.

Target: This choice of direction is preferred partly because snow typically melts earlier in the year on the eastern portion of the trail than on the higher western portion.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: CBTC technology is evolving, making use of the latest techniques and components to offer more compact systems and simpler architectures. With the advent of modern electronics CBTC has been possible to build in redundancy so that single failures do not adversely impact operational availability.

Target: CBTC technology is evolving, making use of the latest techniques and components to offer more compact systems and simpler architectures. For instance, with the advent of modern electronics it has been possible to build in redundancy so that single failures do not adversely impact operational availability.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Terrestrial vegetation of California, new expanded edition. California Native Plant Society, Special Publication Number 9, Sacramento, California.

Target: Terrestrial vegetation of California, new expanded edition. California Native Plant Society, Special Publication Number 9, Sacramento, CA.


Source: Make the text coherent: After Eight regularly performs contemporary repertoire arranged for a cappella by current members and alumnae of the group. members perform selections from the Chorus repertoire on occasion, as well as traditional Cornell songs.

Target: After Eight regularly performs contemporary repertoire arranged for a cappella by current members and alumnae of the group. They additionally perform selections from the Chorus repertoire on occasion, as well as traditional Cornell songs.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Cortinarius maculobulga has a sequestrate fruit body. That Cortinarius maculobulga's spores are not forcibly discharged from the basidia.

Target: Cortinarius maculobulga has a sequestrate fruit body, meaning that its spores are not forcibly discharged from the basidia.


Source: Make the text clearer: At the end, Freemon argues that if one were forced to make a diagnosis psychomotor seizures of temporal lobe epilepsy would be the most tenable one. Our lack of scientific as well as historical knowledge makes unequivocal decision impossible.

Target: At the end, Freemon argues that if one were forced to make a diagnosis psychomotor seizures of temporal lobe epilepsy would be the most tenable one, although our lack of scientific as well as historical knowledge makes unequivocal decision impossible.


Source: Fix coherence: There was speculation that she was considering a run as the Green Party's nominee for the 2004 presidential election. Wanting her congressional seat back, she turned down the Green Party nomination.

Target: There was speculation that she was considering a run as the Green Party's nominee for the 2004 presidential election. However, wanting her congressional seat back, she turned down the Green Party nomination.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Digital Video Broadcasting -- Satellite (DVB-S) is the original DVB standard for Satellite Television and dates from 1995, in its first release. Development lasted from 1993 to 1997.

Target: Digital Video Broadcasting -- Satellite (DVB-S) is the original DVB standard for Satellite Television and dates from 1995, in its first release, while development lasted from 1993 to 1997.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: For 2004, the closure of Fuji Speedway as part of a Hermann Tilke redesign of the circuit forced the series to move. Four races were held at the road course of Twin Ring Motegi, as well as one at Sportsland Sugo.

Target: For 2004, the closure of Fuji Speedway as part of a Hermann Tilke redesign of the circuit forced the series to move. As a result, four races were held at the road course of Twin Ring Motegi, as well as one at Sportsland Sugo.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Bugenhagen confides to his friend Michael Morgan (Ian Hendry) that Damien is the Antichrist. Bugenhagen attempts to convince him to give Damien's guardian a box containing the means to kill Damien.

Target: Confiding to his friend Michael Morgan (Ian Hendry) that Damien is the Antichrist, Bugenhagen attempts to convince him to give Damien's guardian a box containing the means to kill Damien.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Baltimore crowd was dead. Crowd had been drinking a few beers when crowd's friends crowd him to dance.

Target: The Baltimore crowd was dead, and he had been drinking a few beers when his friends convinced him to dance.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Leavitt took out his patent less than a year after Samuel Colt had obtained a patent on his seminal revolver. Before Samuel Colt had a chance to bring Leavitt's new weapon to market.

Target: Leavitt took out his patent less than a year after Samuel Colt had obtained a patent on his seminal revolver, and before Colt had a chance to bring his new weapon to market.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: During his administration, Auburn Prison made a profit of $16,000,. During the first year of his successor the prison had a deficit of $40,000.

Target: During his administration, Auburn Prison made a profit of $16,000, whereas during the first year of his successor the prison had a deficit of $40,000.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Axis defended the trailer. Axis said that their depiction fit the overarching narrative.

Target: Defending the trailer, Axis said that their depiction fit the overarching narrative.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This is partially. Death puts a cessation to the possibility of fulfilling any commandments.

Target: This is partially because death puts a cessation to the possibility of fulfilling any commandments.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In Japan, for example, ending a life with honor by seppuku was considered a desirable death,. According to traditional Christian and Islamic cultures.

Target: In Japan, for example, ending a life with honor by seppuku was considered a desirable death, whereas according to traditional Christian and Islamic cultures.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The NASA Solar Technology Application Readiness (NSTAR) electrostatic ion thruster, developed at NASA Glenn, achieves a specific impulse of 1000 -- 3000 seconds. This is an NASA Solar Technology Application Readiness of magnitude higher than traditional space propulsion methods, resulting in a mass savings of approximately half.

Target: The NASA Solar Technology Application Readiness (NSTAR) electrostatic ion thruster, developed at NASA Glenn, achieves a specific impulse of 1000 -- 3000 seconds. This is an order of magnitude higher than traditional space propulsion methods, resulting in a mass savings of approximately half.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Chinese are by far the largest visible minority group. Ethnic Germans are the largest non-British group and.

Target: Chinese are by far the largest visible minority group, although ethnic Germans are the largest non-British group and.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Compared to a reflective surface, which will cause most of the energy to be reflected off at an angle equal to the angle of incidence, a diffusor will cause the sound energy to be radiated in many directions,. Leading to a more diffusive acoustic space.

Target: Compared to a reflective surface, which will cause most of the energy to be reflected off at an angle equal to the angle of incidence, a diffusor will cause the sound energy to be radiated in many directions, hence leading to a more diffusive acoustic space.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Shortly thereafter, the name Weekly Dig was dropped. The organization was re-branded as Weekly Dig, featuring a completely overhauled Weekly Dig, Weekly Dig.

Target: Shortly thereafter, the name Weekly Dig was dropped, and the organization was re-branded as DigBoston, featuring a completely overhauled website, DigBoston.com.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Mintoff said that he would not be ready to govern in such conditions and hinted that he would call for fresh elections within six months. Pressure from party members forced Mintoff to do otherwise: Mintoff eventually accepted the President's invitation to form a government.

Target: Mintoff said that he would not be ready to govern in such conditions and hinted that he would call for fresh elections within six months. However, pressure from party members forced Mintoff to do otherwise: Mintoff eventually accepted the President's invitation to form a government.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The second Anglo Sikh war reawakened Dost Muhammad ` s ambition to seize Peshawar and the trans Indus territories. Overtly Dost Muhammad sympathized with the Sikh and even hired out an irregular Afghan contingent of 1500 horse to Chatar Singh.

Target: The second Anglo Sikh war reawakened Dost Muhammad ` s ambition to seize Peshawar and the trans Indus territories, although overtly he sympathized with the Sikhs and even hired out an irregular Afghan contingent of 1500 horse to Chatar Singh.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Union Carbide became a subsidiary of Dow Chemical in 2001. The Bhopal disaster of 1984 occurred at a pesticide plant owned by Union Carbide India Ltd., a subsidiary of Union Carbide, 17 years before Dow Chemical's acquisition.

Target: Union Carbide became a subsidiary of Dow Chemical in 2001. The Bhopal disaster of 1984 occurred at a pesticide plant owned by Union Carbide India Ltd., a subsidiary of Union Carbide, 17 years before Dow Chemical Co.'s acquisition.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Rood and Christ are one in the portrayal of the Passion -- they are both pierced with nails, mocked and tortured. Just as with Christ, the Cross is resurrected, and adorned with gold and silver.

Target: The Rood and Christ are one in the portrayal of the Passion -- they are both pierced with nails, mocked and tortured. Then, just as with Christ, the Cross is resurrected, and adorned with gold and silver.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In 2010 it was reported that EPA had not finalized the proposal due to concerns raised by some utilities about high costs for controlling radon. Nine states had issued their own radon guidelines.

Target: In 2010 it was reported that EPA had not finalized the proposal due to concerns raised by some utilities about high costs for controlling radon. However, nine states had issued their own radon guidelines.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Once they were married, Charles would not allow Anne to use the title Duchess of Brittany. Upon Charles' death, Anne returned to Brittany and took steps to return the Duchy to independent rule under herself as Duchess.

Target: Once they were married, Charles would not allow Anne to use the title Duchess of Brittany. However, upon his death, Anne returned to Brittany and took steps to return the Duchy to independent rule under herself as Duchess.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Dundalk GNR were located at the Athletic Grounds and competed in the Dundalk and District League from 1905 until 1914. Media coverage remained patchy.

Target: The Dundalk GNR were located at the Athletic Grounds and competed in the Dundalk and District League from 1905 until 1914, although media coverage remained patchy.


Source: Make the text more logical: The results also show a good quantitative agreement. We see the directional dependence of the energy flow, which is predominantly in the horizontal direction as plotted.

Target: The results also show a good quantitative agreement. In particular, we see the directional dependence of the energy flow, which is predominantly in the horizontal direction as plotted.


Source: Make the text more logical: It has been stated that there is no significant difference in prevalence or incidence between races. A study of Hispanic adolescent females indicated a high prevalence and impact in this group.

Target: It has been stated that there is no significant difference in prevalence or incidence between races. Yet, a study of Hispanic adolescent females indicated a high prevalence and impact in this group.


Source: Fix sentence flow: These beetles are rarely collected. Adults are sometimes attracted to light at night.

Target: These beetles are rarely collected, although adults are sometimes attracted to light at night.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The East Zone cricket team is a first class cricket team that represents eastern Bangladesh in the Bangladesh Cricket League (BCL). cricket team is a composite cricket team of two Bangladesh first-class teams: Chittagong Division and Sylhet Division.

Target: The East Zone cricket team is a first class cricket team that represents eastern Bangladesh in the Bangladesh Cricket League (BCL). It is a composite team of two Bangladeshi first-class teams: Chittagong Division and Sylhet Division.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: There is no voice acting. Instead the words appear at the bottom of the screen as subtitles.

Target: There is no voice acting, and instead the words appear at the bottom of the screen as subtitles.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Uruguay has a partially dollarized economy. As of August 2008 almost 60 % of bank loans use United States dollars, but most transactions use the Uruguay peso.

Target: Uruguay has a partially dollarized economy. As of August 2008 almost 60 % of bank loans use United States dollars, but most transactions use the Uruguayan peso.


Source: Make the text coherent: He helped George Moreland form the Interstate League in 1894. The Interstate League is a Class-C minor league.

Target: He helped George Moreland form the Interstate League, a Class-C minor league, in 1894.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Appointed as the Freedom Party's Campaign Director. Butler subsequently returned to the BNP in 2003, again as its National Elections Officer, played a part in the party's campaigns in the 2006 local elections.

Target: Although appointed as the Freedom Party's Campaign Director, Butler subsequently returned to the BNP in 2003, again as its National Elections Officer, played a part in the party's campaigns in the 2006 local elections.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Beth is born. Beth is his second child and first daughter.

Target: Beth, his second child and first daughter, is born.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Well-executed evacuations and warnings limited the death toll to six. Damage amounted to $305.8 million.

Target: Well-executed evacuations and warnings limited the death toll to six, while damage amounted to $305.8 million.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Late on September 23, Georges made landfall about 30 mi (48 km) south of Guantanamo Bay. Georges maintained minimal Category 1 status for the following two days as it tracked over the northern coastline of Cuba.

Target: Late on September 23, Georges made landfall about 30 mi (48 km) south of Guantanamo Bay. Hurricane Georges maintained minimal Category 1 status for the following two days as it tracked over the northern coastline of Cuba.


Source: Fix coherence errors: We recognize the imperative need for this development. We must not fail to comprehend its grave implications.

Target: We recognize the imperative need for this development. Yet, we must not fail to comprehend its grave implications.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: On 27 July, the acknowledgement extended to further ninety four elected candidates. Now and the number acknowledged sufficed to constitute the House.

Target: On 27 July, the acknowledgement extended to further ninety four elected candidates. Now and eventually, the number acknowledged sufficed to constitute the House.


Source: Make the text clearer: It accused the commission of placing voting booths. Voters' backs were to the public.

Target: It accused the commission of placing voting booths so that voters' backs were to the public.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The civil war ended in 2002 following Savimbi's death. Elections were delayed until 2008.

Target: The civil war ended in 2002 following Savimbi's death. However, elections were delayed until 2008.


Source: Make the text more logical: Electrodes are round in section, and typically in segments with threaded couplings. As the electrodes wear.

Target: Electrodes are round in section, and typically in segments with threaded couplings, so that as the electrodes wear.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The rebuilding of the cathedral took many years ;. Much of it has since crumbled away due to the inferior quality of the stone made available to the 15th and 16th-century masons, while the 13th-century construction still remains.

Target: The rebuilding of the cathedral took many years ; but much of it has since crumbled away due to the inferior quality of the stone made available to the 15th and 16th-century masons, while the 13th-century construction still remains.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: An elliptical trainer or cross-trainer (also called an X-trainer) is a stationary exercise machine used to simulate stair climbing, walking, or running without causing excessive pressure to the joints,. Decreasing the risk of impact injuries.

Target: An elliptical trainer or cross-trainer (also called an X-trainer) is a stationary exercise machine used to simulate stair climbing, walking, or running without causing excessive pressure to the joints, hence decreasing the risk of impact injuries.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: At the beginning of the third season, she. At the beginning of the third season, will are living together ; they become engaged shortly after New Years, and consummate their relationship near the end of the school year.

Target: At the beginning of the third season, she and Will are living together ; they become engaged shortly after New Years, and consummate their relationship near the end of the school year.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Classified as a yellow label (highly toxic) pesticide by the Central Insecticides Board. India is one of the largest producers and the largest consumer of endosulfan in the world.

Target: Although classified as a yellow label (highly toxic) pesticide by the Central Insecticides Board, India is one of the largest producers and the largest consumer of endosulfan in the world.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Their phylogenetic position was originally unclear, because they appeared to have both prokaryote-like traits, such as binary fission, and eukaryote-like traits, such as intracellular membranes. Molecular phylogenetics showed that they are actually bacteria from the phylum Verrucomicrobia.

Target: Their phylogenetic position was originally unclear, because they appeared to have both prokaryote-like traits, such as binary fission, and eukaryote-like traits, such as intracellular membranes. However, molecular phylogenetics showed that they are actually bacteria from the phylum Verrucomicrobia.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: They combined the orchestra's performance with a lecture about one aspect or another of the orchestra or the music itself with a picture or demonstration. Children were exposed to a variety of stimuli.

Target: They combined the orchestra's performance with a lecture about one aspect or another of the orchestra or the music itself with a picture or demonstration, so that children were exposed to a variety of stimuli.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Sacchi abandoned increasingly left-wing ideologies, switching the PR into a more moderate party. After the assassination of King Umberto I, Sacchi exalted him and for this was accused of monarchism, by the socialists.

Target: Sacchi abandoned increasingly left-wing ideologies, switching the PR into a more moderate party. Moreover, after the assassination of King Umberto I, Sacchi exalted him and for this was accused of monarchism, by the socialists.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The project's ambition to represent all three levels of the Change of Perspective in the Lab. s was successfully implemented by almost all participants. During the partners' Lab.

Target: The project's ambition to represent all three levels of the Change of Perspective in the Lab. s was successfully implemented by almost all participants. Furthermore, during the partners' Lab.


Source: Make the text more logical: The decision to end the issuing of Eurocheques was taken. Increasing numbers of retailers and banks started to decline payment by Eurocheques and because the use of cash machines and credit cards by international travellers grew within Europe.

Target: The decision to end the issuing of Eurocheques was taken because increasing numbers of retailers and banks started to decline payment by Eurocheque and because the use of cash machines and credit cards by international travellers grew within Europe.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Despite a campaign by some pilots, the Royal Flying Corps declined to introduce parachutes during World War I. Air forces of most other nations did so.

Target: Despite a campaign by some pilots, the Royal Flying Corps declined to introduce parachutes during World War I, although air forces of most other nations did so.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This means the engraver has just five minutes to perform a task which would take 20 under normal conditions. Time is saved by engraving the year on during the match.

Target: This means the engraver has just five minutes to perform a task which would take 20 under normal conditions, although time is saved by engraving the year on during the match.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: By 1971, after nearly a decade with RCA, Nelson had no major success. Nelson's latest album Yesterday's Wine failed to chart and to RCA RCA expectations.

Target: By 1971, after nearly a decade with RCA, Nelson had no major success. Meanwhile, his latest album Yesterday's Wine failed to chart and to meet RCA expectations.


Source: Fix sentence flow: These are usually benign. Multiple tumors can persist even after removal.

Target: These are usually benign, but multiple tumors can persist even after removal.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He avoided political infighting. He was a skillful and energetic administrator and organizer.

Target: Avoiding political infighting, he was a skillful and energetic administrator and organizer.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: FIV and HIV are both lentiviruses. Humans can not be infected by FIV, nor can cats be infected by HIV.

Target: FIV and HIV are both lentiviruses. However, humans can not be infected by FIV, nor can cats be infected by HIV.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Oyama dresses in his weathered gi once again. Oyama treks out to the countryside location where Kato is waiting for him.

Target: Dressing in his weathered gi once again, Oyama treks out to the countryside location where Kato is waiting for him.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In times of natural disasters or turmoil the League directly helps Muslims whose homes and lives are disrupted. League's charity keeps Muslims Muslim families clothed, fed and housed, and helps them send their children to school.

Target: In times of natural disasters or turmoil the League directly helps Muslims whose homes and lives are disrupted. Its charity keeps many Muslim families clothed, fed and housed, and helps them send their children to school.


Source: Fix sentence transition: It is possible to play chords without any arpeggiation. Up to five strings can be plucked simultaneously.

Target: It is possible to play chords without any arpeggiation, because up to five strings can be plucked simultaneously.


Source: Make the text coherent: Spanish shawls are hermaphrodites, which means they have both male and female reproductive organs. Self-fertilisation very rarely occurs.

Target: Spanish shawls are hermaphrodites, which means they have both male and female reproductive organs. However, self-fertilisation very rarely occurs.


Source: Make the text coherent: They met at a midtown Manhattan club called Bentley's, and Sabrina helped her get control of her life. Sabrina was a homeless Sabrina.

Target: They met at a midtown Manhattan club called Bentley's, and Sabrina helped her get control of her life, while she was a homeless teenager.


Source: Fix coherence errors: France had few dissenters. War-weariness was a major factor by 1917, even reaching the army.

Target: France had few dissenters. However, war-weariness was a major factor by 1917, even reaching the army.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In September 1982, Wallkill Valley Regional High School opened its doors. Franklin High School closed doors, making the class of 1982 the final class to graduate from Franklin High School.

Target: In September 1982, Wallkill Valley Regional High School opened its doors, and Franklin High School closed theirs, making the class of 1982 the final class to graduate from Franklin High School.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The reason it was founded was to provide young people with knowledge of trade and economy worked, and a knowledge of the language. Business abroad could be.

Target: The reason it was founded was to provide young people with knowledge of trade and economy worked, and a knowledge of the language so that business abroad could be.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Mr. Allen, who is a native of Boston, has lived in New-York for some years, but has never occupied a very prominent position in society. Popular among native's 's's friends.

Target: Mr. Allen, who is a native of Boston, has lived in New-York for some years, but has never occupied a very prominent position in society, although popular among his friends.


Source: Make the text more logical: He graduated from the Kelvin School in 1910. The Kelvin School is a preparatory school for boys in Manhattan.

Target: He graduated from the Kelvin School, a preparatory school for boys in Manhattan, in 1910.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Sometimes a player can pull the string toward the bridge or nut, thus lowering or raising the string tension and pitch. Except for instruments that accommodate extensive string pulling, like the sitar, much less influence on intonation is possible than on unfretted instruments.

Target: Sometimes a player can pull the string toward the bridge or nut, thus lowering or raising the string tension and pitch. However, except for instruments that accommodate extensive string pulling, like the sitar, much less influence on intonation is possible than on unfretted instruments.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: It resembles the Casimir invariants for Lie algebra irreducible representations. Since any representation of G can be thought of as a module for C (G) and vice versa, we can look at the center of C (G).

Target: It resembles the Casimir invariants for Lie algebra irreducible representations. In fact, since any representation of G can be thought of as a module for C (G) and vice versa, we can look at the center of C (G).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He struggled to adapt to the system, along with the introduction of a salary cap in 1994. He signed several players to overvalued contracts while losing much of the Giants core talent to other franchises following free agency's inception.

Target: He struggled to adapt to the system, along with the introduction of a salary cap in 1994. He as a result, signed several players to overvalued contracts while losing much of the Giants core talent to other franchises following free agency's inception.


Source: Make the text coherent: Since 1992, the Dawgs and Vols have both been in the SEC's Eastern Division and have met annually on the football field. The largest margin of victory overall was Vols by 46 points in 1936 at Sanford Stadium in Athens in their 46 -- 0 victory.

Target: Since 1992, the Dawgs and Vols have both been in the SEC's Eastern Division and have met annually on the football field. The largest margin of victory overall was Tennessee by 46 points in 1936 at Sanford Stadium in Athens in their 46 -- 0 victory.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Brooks was the litigant in case that created the GAAAA. Brooks became active in the Southern Christian Leadership Conference as a volunteer, and by 1967 Brooks was a full-time litigant.

Target: Brooks was the litigant in case that created the GAAAA. He became active in the Southern Christian Leadership Conference as a volunteer, and by 1967 he was a full-time employee.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Weinberg was born in Hanover, Germany, and resided there the first ten years of his life. As Jews living in Germany, Weinberg and Weinberg's family suffered increasing persecution.

Target: Weinberg was born in Hanover, Germany, and resided there the first ten years of his life. As Jews living in Nazi Germany, he and his family suffered increasing persecution.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The episode follows high school student Chris Griffin, as he attempts to find a new hobby. Chris Griffin soon comes across a puppeteer named Franz, who befriends high school student and introduces Chris Griffin to Chris Griffin's vast collection of puppets.

Target: The episode follows high school student Chris Griffin, as he attempts to find a new hobby. He soon comes across a puppeteer named Franz, who befriends Chris and introduces him to his vast collection of puppets.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: However, glass-ceramic cooktops can be scratched very easily. Care must be taken not to slide the cooking pans over the surface.

Target: However, glass-ceramic cooktops can be scratched very easily, so care must be taken not to slide the cooking pans over the surface.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He shouted to police hiding behind various types of cover on the north side of the street. He learned that it was Lt. Jones.

Target: Shouting to police hiding behind various types of cover on the north side of the street, he learned that it was Lt. Jones.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This is seldom used for normal hits since it is harder to execute,. Necessary because a guard prevents using the other turn

Target: This is seldom used for normal hits since it is harder to execute, unless necessary because a guard prevents using the other turn


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Some have claimed that the reason for this is a flaw whereby the doors are designed to open inwards ; thus, if it is filled to its maximum capacity, then the doors will not open. Visitors have found that the doors open outwards.

Target: Some have claimed that the reason for this is a flaw whereby the doors are designed to open inwards ; thus, if it is filled to its maximum capacity, then the doors will not open. However, visitors have found that the doors open outwards.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Eventually he was asked if he was Graham Webb. If Graham Webb was.

Target: Eventually he was asked if he was Graham Webb, because if he was.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: By 1875 it was obvious that growing population of the city would need even more water. Plans were drawn up to construct a reservoir in the Lake District.

Target: By 1875 it was obvious that growing population of the city would need even more water, so plans were drawn up to construct a reservoir in the Lake District.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Grand Island was a long wooded island near Grand Island, Nebraska. The Grand Island was known by French traders as La Grande Isle.

Target: Grand Island was a long wooded island near Grand Island, Nebraska. The island was known by French traders as La Grande Isle.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Most of the building remains as the regiment's headquarters. Part now houses the Castle and Regimental Museum, established in 1989, which is open in the afternoon in summer.

Target: Most of the building remains as the regiment's headquarters, but part now houses the Castle and Regimental Museum, established in 1989, which is open in the afternoon in summer.


Source: Make the text clearer: Obviously, this means that failing the Condorcet criterion automatically implies the non-compliance with the Smith criterion as well. Such sets comply with the criterion.

Target: Obviously, this means that failing the Condorcet criterion automatically implies the non-compliance with the Smith criterion as well. Additionally, such sets comply with the Condorcet loser criterion.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It killed 114,300 pigs a day. It was the top pig-slaughter operation in the United States in 2007 ; along with three other companies, it also slaughtered 56 percent of the cattle processed there until it sold its beef group in 2008.

Target: Killing 114,300 pigs a day, it was the top pig-slaughter operation in the United States in 2007 ; along with three other companies, it also slaughtered 56 percent of the cattle processed there until it sold its beef group in 2008.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: SolarWorld was founded in 1988 as individual company by engineer and chief executive officer Frank Asbeck, and engaged in projects to produce renewable energy. In 1998, these activities were transferred to the newly founded SolarWorld, which went public on 11 August 1999.

Target: SolarWorld was founded in 1988 as individual company by engineer and chief executive officer Frank Asbeck, and engaged in projects to produce renewable energy. In 1998, these activities were transferred to the newly founded SolarWorld AG, which went public on 11 August 1999.


Source: Make the text clearer: Widely known for its analogue technology. SSL was one of the digital audio pioneers and put together an impressive team of digital engineers under the leadership of Peter Eastty.

Target: Although widely known for its analogue technology, SSL was one of the digital audio pioneers and put together an impressive team of digital engineers under the leadership of Peter Eastty.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Generally speaking, the most common version is Solveig. Alternative versions are used in Norway, Sweden, Denmark, Iceland, Germany, Latvia and on the Faroe Islands and to some extent in France.

Target: Generally speaking, the most common version is Solveig. However, alternative versions are used in Norway, Sweden, Denmark, Iceland, Germany, Latvia and on the Faroe Islands and to some extent in France.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The game was reconstructed completely. Maintaining the original three-round system.

Target: The game was reconstructed completely, although maintaining the original three-round system.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In this manner practically all the air can be removed from the bulb B, and. From any vessel R.

Target: In this manner practically all the air can be removed from the bulb B, and hence from any vessel R.


Source: Make the text more logical: Edward Sternaman was a running back for the Chicago Bears. From 1920 -- 32 Edward Sternaman was the running back of the Chicago Bears with George Halas.

Target: Edward Sternaman was a running back for the Chicago Bears. From 1920 -- 32 he was the co-owner of the Bears with George Halas.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The launch was planned for 20 April. Technical delays meant that several more days were needed.

Target: The launch was planned for 20 April, but technical delays meant that several more days were needed.


Source: Make the text clearer: Chicago continued to do so until NHL sponsorship ended in 1968. From 1968 until 1972, the Chicago were owned by Fred Muller and Ken Campbell.

Target: Chicago continued to do so until NHL sponsorship ended in 1968. From 1968 until 1972, the Hawks were owned by Fred Muller and Ken Campbell.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Although he promoted non-compliance with Japanese demands considered damaging to the church, Soegijapranata also endorsed some collaboration. On 28 February 1944 a Latin-language Mass was delivered at Gedangan by Paul Aijiro Yamaguchi (ja), bishop of Nagasaki.

Target: Although he promoted non-compliance with Japanese demands considered damaging to the church, Soegijapranata also endorsed some collaboration. For instance, on 28 February 1944 a Latin-language Mass was delivered at Gedangan by Paul Aijiro Yamaguchi (ja), bishop of Nagasaki.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This method gives precise estimation of battery SoC, but they are protracted, costly, and interrupt main battery performance. Researchers are looking for some online techniques.

Target: This method gives precise estimation of battery SoC, but they are protracted, costly, and interrupt main battery performance. Therefore, researchers are looking for some online techniques.


Source: Fix coherence: Following Christopher's early death in 931, and given Constantine VII's de facto sidelining, Stephen and Constantine assumed an increased prominence. Formally they still ranked after their brother-in-law in the college of emperors.

Target: Following Christopher's early death in 931, and given Constantine VII's de facto sidelining, Stephen and Constantine assumed an increased prominence, although formally they still ranked after their brother-in-law in the college of emperors.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In 1939 all rural districts in Germany were uniformly termed as Landkreis (i.e. rural district),. Before in Prussia the term Landkreis prevailed.

Target: In 1939 all rural districts in Germany were uniformly termed as Landkreis (i.e. rural district), whereas before in Prussia the term Kreis prevailed.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is sometimes referred to as a public school. Strictly speaking this only applies to the public schools covered by the Public Schools Acts.

Target: It is sometimes referred to as a public school, although strictly speaking this only applies to the public schools covered by the Public Schools Acts.


Source: Make the text more coherent: During stress testing, if transactions are selectively stressed, the database may not experience much load, but the transactions are heavily stressed. During load testing the database experiences a heavy load, while some transactions may not be stressed.

Target: During stress testing, if transactions are selectively stressed, the database may not experience much load, but the transactions are heavily stressed. On the other hand, during load testing the database experiences a heavy load, while some transactions may not be stressed.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Amanda is desperately in love with the handsome customer Horace Greensmith (Albert Austin). None of Amanda's colleague Amanda she stands a chance of Horace Greensmith's 's his sweetheart.

Target: Amanda is desperately in love with the handsome customer Horace Greensmith (Albert Austin), but none of her colleague think she stands a chance of being his sweetheart.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Provincial editions are published for residents of Pampanga and Pangasinan. City editions may also carry content relevant to the provinces where they are located.

Target: Provincial editions are published for residents of Pampanga and Pangasinan. However, city editions may also carry content relevant to the provinces where they are located.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Luigi offers to order the Koopalings a pizza, and then calls up Yoshi and Toad, who show up dressed as pizza delivery boys. Out of the boxes come Peach and Floyd, bearing a pack of bombs that Floyd had with him.

Target: Luigi offers to order the Koopalings a pizza, and then calls up Yoshi and Toad, who show up dressed as pizza delivery boys. But out of the boxes come Peach and Floyd, bearing a pack of bombs that Floyd had with him.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: One difficulty has been slightly dirty water after a long period of no rain in which dust settles on the roofs. That first rainwater is a bit darker, and almost every time complaints are made.

Target: One difficulty has been slightly dirty water after a long period of no rain in which dust settles on the roofs. Then, that first rainwater is a bit darker, and almost every time complaints are made.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The destination is accessible via road. Tourists are prohibited to go close to the waterfall due the poor route and treacherous nature of the fall.

Target: The destination is accessible via road. However, tourists are prohibited to go close to the waterfall due the poor route and treacherous nature of the fall.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The Switzerland national futsal team is controlled by the Swiss Football Association such as the World Cup and the European Championships. The Swiss Football Association is the governing body for futsal in Switzerland and represents the country in international futsal competitions.

Target: The Switzerland national futsal team is controlled by the Swiss Football Association, the governing body for futsal in Switzerland and represents the country in international futsal competitions, such as the World Cup and the European Championships.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It is also influenced by historical fiction, for instance that of Sir Walter Scott which was influenced by Scottish folklore and ballads. Very few of Sir's stories contain fantastic elements ; in most, the appearance of such is explained away.

Target: It is also influenced by historical fiction, for instance that of Sir Walter Scott which was influenced by Scottish folklore and ballads. However, very few of Scott's stories contain fantastic elements ; in most, the appearance of such is explained away.


Source: Make the text more logical: And B never paid more than a tiny sum for the land. Part of the judgment was a formality.

Target: And B never paid more than a tiny sum for the land so that part of the judgment was a formality.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Humphrey afterwards died, without leaving heirs of his body ;. The question was, whether Richard, the brother of Humphrey, who was Humphrey in tail to those lands, should be barred by this recovery?

Target: Humphrey afterwards died, without leaving heirs of his body ; and the question was, whether Richard, the brother of Humphrey, who was heir in tail to those lands, should be barred by this recovery?


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It turns out that for various syntactic properties (such as being a formula, being a sentence, etc.), these sets are computable. Any computable set of numbers can be defined by some arithmetical formula.

Target: It turns out that for various syntactic properties (such as being a formula, being a sentence, etc.), these sets are computable. Moreover, any computable set of numbers can be defined by some arithmetical formula.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: English translation of Tarski's 1936 article. In Tarski, ed.

Target: English translation of Tarski's 1936 article. In A. Tarski, ed.


Source: Fix sentence transition: We went back a few times over the next couple of days but again there was no response. Another friend of ours went round and forced the door.

Target: We went back a few times over the next couple of days but again there was no response. Eventually, another friend of ours went round and forced the door.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They tend to supplement the snare part. Often the tenor parts are rudimentally identical to the snare parts.

Target: They tend to supplement the snare part, and often the tenor parts are rudimentally identical to the snare parts.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Most major English-language kennel clubs include a Terrier Group. Different kennel clubs may not include the same breeds in their Terrier Group.

Target: Most major English-language kennel clubs include a Terrier Group although different kennel clubs may not include the same breeds in their Terrier Group.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Beginning with the Lithuanian Grand Duke Jogaila, the Jagiellon dynasty (1385 -- 1569) ruled the Polish -- Lithuanian union. The Lublin Union of 1569 established the Polish -- Lithuanian as an influential player in European politics and a vital cultural entity.

Target: Beginning with the Lithuanian Grand Duke Jogaila, the Jagiellon dynasty (1385 -- 1569) ruled the Polish -- Lithuanian union. The Lublin Union of 1569 established the Polish -- Lithuanian Commonwealth as an influential player in European politics and a vital cultural entity.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ritter and his sons spent a great deal of time raising money and public awareness to help others with the illness. Ritter is also the Ritter of actors, Jason and Tyler Ritter.

Target: Ritter and his sons spent a great deal of time raising money and public awareness to help others with the illness. He is also the grandfather of actors, Jason and Tyler Ritter.


Source: Fix coherence errors: She deals with her grief. She blames Colvin and serves her with a notice.

Target: Dealing with her grief, she blames Colvin and serves her with a notice.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Devin Kelley as Vonda Wysocki -- Jarek's niece and a rookie police officer. Vonda Wysocki's father was killed in the line of duty when she was a Vonda Wysocki child, and her uncle helped raise her and supported her through the police academy.

Target: Devin Kelley as Vonda Wysocki -- Jarek's niece and a rookie police officer. Her father was killed in the line of duty when she was a young child, and her uncle helped raise her and supported her through the police academy.


Source: Make the text coherent: Christy soon realizes that sometimes you have to stand back and let people make their own decisions, even when they're headed for a fall. Although life is never perfect, this is definitely a time to cherish.

Target: Christy soon realizes that sometimes you have to stand back and let people make their own decisions, even when they're headed for a fall. And although life is never perfect, this is definitely a time to cherish.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They befriend the base personnel. They learn that the base, run by Commander Millington, is being used as a listening post to intercept and translate German coded messages using the Ultima supercomputer and to stockpile a supply of a lethal nerve gas.

Target: Befriending the base personnel, they learn that the base, run by Commander Millington, is being used as a listening post to intercept and translate German coded messages using the Ultima supercomputer and to stockpile a supply of a lethal nerve gas.


Source: Make the text clearer: Kira is shocked and saddened when Latha Mabrin is murdered. Latha Mabrin is a fellow member of the Shakaar Resistance Cell-turned Vedek.

Target: Kira is shocked and saddened when Latha Mabrin, a fellow member of the Shakaar Resistance Cell-turned Vedek, is murdered.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He enduring issues with his family. He has also separated himself from his wife Selina (Jenna Lyng) and daughter Chloe (Ava Acres).

Target: Enduring issues with his family, he has also separated himself from his wife Selina (Jenna Lyng) and daughter Chloe (Ava Acres).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Christian Gonzalez appeared on the second season of La Banda, finished in the Top 57. Christian Gonzalez was also a Christian Gonzalez on Idol Kids Puerto Rico, but was cut in the semi-finals.

Target: Christian Gonzalez appeared on the second season of La Banda, finished in the Top 57. Gonzalez was also a contestant on Idol Kids Puerto Rico, but was cut in the semi-finals.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: McKenna delves into Luther's past. McKenna has discovered that he is running from the deadly altercation in Tulsa.

Target: Delving into Luther's past, McKenna has discovered that he is running from the deadly altercation in Tulsa.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The first season of The Hills consists of 10 episodes and was broadcast on MTV. The Hills are an American reality television series.

Target: The first season of The Hills, an American reality television series, consists of 10 episodes and was broadcast on MTV.


Source: Make the text coherent: The biography was written by John Pearson in 1966. John Pearson is fleming's assistant at the London Sunday Times.

Target: The biography was written by John Pearson, Fleming's assistant at the London Sunday Times, in 1966.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The final game is timed to end when the flames engulf the castle where the event takes place, symbolically renewing the Empire by fire. Faced with defeat, the Emperor orders his men to kill all the spectators and attempts to kill Gurgeh.

Target: The final game is timed to end when the flames engulf the castle where the event takes place, symbolically renewing the Empire by fire. However, faced with defeat, the Emperor orders his men to kill all the spectators and attempts to kill Gurgeh.


Source: Fix coherence: She travels to Australia in an attempt to meet Henry Lewin. Attempt is a attempt with unforeseen consequences.

Target: She travels to Australia in an attempt to meet Henry Lewin, but it is a meeting with unforeseen consequences.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Heritage Edition of The Saint John's Bible is the full-size fine art reproduction of the original. Measuring two feet tall by three feet wide when open, Heritage Edition is the exact fine art reproduction of the original manuscript.

Target: The Heritage Edition of The Saint John's Bible is the full-size fine art reproduction of the original. Measuring two feet tall by three feet wide when open, it is the exact size of the original manuscript.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Julie Walsh is in love with Eddie, but her father disapproves of the Quaid family, particularly the boy's father, so he makes Julie stay away. Quaid, once a promising prizefighter, urges Quaid's son to give it a try professionally.

Target: Julie Walsh is in love with Eddie, but her father disapproves of the Quaid family, particularly the boy's father, so he makes Julie stay away. Pat Quaid, once a promising prizefighter, urges his son to give it a try professionally.


Source: Make the text clearer: Manto was a well known film writer of the Indian cinema and was making good money. Manto chose to abandon Manto's lucrative career and migrated to Pakistan.

Target: Manto was a well known film writer of the Indian cinema and was making good money. He however, chose to abandon his lucrative career and migrated to Pakistan.


Source: Make the text coherent: Theodoxus jordani is a species of freshwater snail with an operculum the nerites. An operculum is an aquatic gastropod mollusk in the family Neritidae.

Target: Theodoxus jordani is a species of freshwater snail with an operculum, an aquatic gastropod mollusk in the family Neritidae, the nerites.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The two primary relationships that Veblen had were with his first two wives respectively. Veblen was known for Veblen's tendency to engage in extramarital affairs Veblen's his life.

Target: The two primary relationships that Veblen had were with his first two wives respectively, although he was known for his tendency to engage in extramarital affairs throughout his life.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: They starting in the early 1980s, howevered. They became desirable again as older streetcar suburbs began to gentrify, often by buyers looking for homes where they could live in one unit and rent the other two, thus helping them pay their mortgage.

Target: Starting in the early 1980s, however, they became desirable again as older streetcar suburbs began to gentrify, often by buyers looking for homes where they could live in one unit and rent the other two, thus helping them pay their mortgage.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Primary tillage such as ploughing tends to produce a rough surface finish,. Secondary tillage tends to produce a smoother surface finish.

Target: Primary tillage such as ploughing tends to produce a rough surface finish, whereas secondary tillage tends to produce a smoother surface finish.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The General Services Administration. Whoever approved this, this goes beyond the realm of stupidity.

Target: The General Services Administration, or whoever approved this, this goes beyond the realm of stupidity.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Their own lives are their business. My life is not their business.

Target: Their own lives are their business, but my life is not their business.


Source: Fix sentence transition: As with the original, the goal is to defeat all Slashers (bosses of roads) to win the game. Some new tweaks have been made.

Target: As with the original, the goal is to defeat all Slashers (bosses of roads) to win the game. Although, some new tweaks have been made.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: As blood sugar testing for diagnosis of diabetes became more widespread, a curious side effect occurred:. Blood sugar testing is not absolutely definitive in diagnoses of diabetes.

Target: As blood sugar testing for diagnosis of diabetes became more widespread, a curious side effect occurred: because blood sugar testing is not absolutely definitive in diagnoses of diabetes.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: During the late Ottoman period, the tribe of Toplana was exclusively Catholic. Toplana was a famous Albanian Toplana.

Target: During the late Ottoman period, the tribe of Toplana was exclusively Catholic and it was a famous Albanian tribe.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A study done regarding their website found that though they have removed gender labels from their costumes, the toys online reflect more stereotypical gender identities. Males were associated with physicality and females were associated with beauty, housing, and caring.

Target: A study done regarding their website found that though they have removed gender labels from their costumes, the toys online reflect more stereotypical gender identities. For example, males were associated with physicality and females were associated with beauty, housing, and caring.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In the celibacy age boys wore tirqe (which were always white), plis and vests. Children clothing in general is characterized by its simplicity.

Target: In the celibacy age boys wore tirqe (which were always white), plis and vests. However, children clothing in general is characterized by its simplicity.


Source: Fix coherence: Roller coasters that have inversions usually have this type of restraint. Almost all Inverted roller coasters and Floorless roller coasters have this type of restraint, since it is difficult to mount a lapbar restraint.

Target: Roller coasters that have inversions usually have this type of restraint. Additionally, almost all Inverted roller coasters and Floorless roller coasters have this type of restraint, since it is difficult to mount a lapbar restraint.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In the 2013 election there will be 136 seats in 14 areas. Under the Municipal Corporations Amendment Act 2013, there will now be 4 aldermen in each of the 14 areas.

Target: In the 2013 election there will be 136 seats in 14 areas. Additionally, under the Municipal Corporations Amendment Act 2013, there will now be 4 aldermen in each of the 14 areas.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: They are primarily a subsistence agriculture culture. Hunting and fishing contribute significantly to many of the settlements' food supply.

Target: They are primarily a subsistence agriculture culture, although hunting and fishing contribute significantly to many of the settlements' food supply.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He was also an executive producer and television journalist for 17 years with the BBC and ITV. In 2013 executive producer served as an independent expert reviewing the communications capability of the Cabinet Office and No. 10 Downing Street.

Target: He was also an executive producer and television journalist for 17 years with the BBC and ITV. In 2013 Hudson served as an independent expert reviewing the communications capability of the Cabinet Office and No. 10 Downing Street.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Thus the Cnossians, in short time, not only lost most of their allies, but also their hegemony over the island. Cnossians were still able to assist the Aetolian allies with 1000 archers in Cnossians' war on the continent.

Target: Thus the Cnossians, in short time, not only lost most of their allies, but also their hegemony over the island. Nevertheless they were still able to assist the Aetolian allies with 1000 archers in their war on the continent.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Dina signed first world champion in its history -- spanish Marcelo. Next season Dina's result was even worse -- 10th place (last but one in the table).

Target: Dina signed first world champion in its history -- spanish Marcelo. However, next season Dina's result was even worse -- 10th place (last but one in the table).


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Recognizing those mismatches and repairing them is important for cells. Failure to do so results in microsatellite instability.

Target: Recognizing those mismatches and repairing them is important for cells because failure to do so results in microsatellite instability.


Source: Make the text more consistent: which are computed from the binomial theorem. We can compute the determinant explicitly :

Target: which are computed from the binomial theorem. On the other hand, we can compute the determinant explicitly :


Source: Make the text coherent: Takimoto was expected to participate in ASTRA, the farewell event for Hidehiko Yoshida on April 25, 2010. Takimoto pulled out of the event and announced Takimoto's retirement Hidehiko Yoshida Yoshida.

Target: Takimoto was expected to participate in ASTRA, the farewell event for Hidehiko Yoshida on April 25, 2010. However, he pulled out of the event and announced his retirement alongside Yoshida.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Even though supplies were in transit from the Malheur agency, the Paiute people were forced to leave Camp Harney under-equipped. Five children, one woman, and an elderly man died along the way and were left unburied as they traveled.

Target: Even though supplies were in transit from the Malheur agency, the Paiute people were forced to leave Camp Harney under-equipped. As a result, five children, one woman, and an elderly man died along the way and were left unburied as they traveled.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: But eventually it was determined that despite a superficial similarity, M. eupselias is not a member of the Acentropinae, and. By grass moth standards not at all closely related to Aulacodes.

Target: But eventually it was determined that despite a superficial similarity, M. eupselias is not a member of the Acentropinae, and hence by grass moth standards not at all closely related to Aulacodes.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: 1918 flu pandemic -- U.S. Army mess cook Private Albert Gitchell of Fort Riley, Kansas became the first documented case of the Spanish Flu. Cases of the flu were observed as early as January in Haskell County, Kansas.

Target: 1918 flu pandemic -- U.S. Army mess cook Private Albert Gitchell of Fort Riley, Kansas became the first documented case of the Spanish Flu. However, cases of the flu were observed as early as January in Haskell County, Kansas.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In 1982, Hsia began fund-raising for political candidates in state and local races. In 1988, Hsia's work for then California Lt. Gov. Leo McCarthy's Senate campaign Hsia Hsia to national politics.

Target: In 1982, Hsia began fund-raising for political candidates in state and local races. In 1988, her work for then California Lt. Gov. Leo McCarthy's Senate campaign introduced Hsia to national politics.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Marines Memorial was opened as a club for veterans of the Marines. Membership is open to all United States servicemen and servicewomen.

Target: The Marines Memorial was opened as a club for veterans of the Marines, although membership is open to all United States servicemen and servicewomen.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: His work can be found in magazines such as Cosmopolitan, Marie Claire, and Grazia. His work can be found in various technical magazines such as Engineering news, SA Franchise Warehouse, Dive and Productivity.

Target: His work can be found in magazines such as Cosmopolitan, Marie Claire, and Grazia. Similarly, his work can be found in various technical magazines such as Engineering news, SA Franchise Warehouse, Dive and Productivity.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The mantle must have been unusually long. Seven pieces of cloth.

Target: The mantle must have been unusually long because seven pieces of cloth.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Most of its territory was in Anne Arundel County. Portions were in Howard County.

Target: Most of its territory was in Anne Arundel County, while portions were in Howard County.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This mode of operation meant that the missile had a minimum intercept altitude of 30 m which in theory left it unable to intercept sea skimming anti-ship missiles and low flying aircraft. Even blind the 100 kg warhead meant that some result would have been achieved.

Target: This mode of operation meant that the missile had a minimum intercept altitude of 30 m which in theory left it unable to intercept sea skimming anti-ship missiles and low flying aircraft. However even blind the 100 kg warhead meant that some result would have been achieved.


Source: Make the text more coherent: According to research by The Center for Rural Pennsylvania the poverty rate for McKean County was 16.6 % in 2014. Rural Pennsylvania is a legislative agency of the Pennsylvania General Assembly.

Target: According to research by The Center for Rural Pennsylvania, which is a legislative agency of the Pennsylvania General Assembly, the poverty rate for McKean County was 16.6 % in 2014.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Their output is also dependent on the volume of the chamber (coupling volume). Differences in shape and load volume between different models of microphone will have an influence on the resulting SPL, requiring the pistonphone to be calibrated accordingly.

Target: Since their output is also dependent on the volume of the chamber (coupling volume), differences in shape and load volume between different models of microphone will have an influence on the resulting SPL, requiring the pistonphone to be calibrated accordingly.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The standard of living in the cities grew: it went from contributing to 42 % of the national GDP to 60 % by 1940. Social inequality remained.

Target: The standard of living in the cities grew: it went from contributing to 42 % of the national GDP to 60 % by 1940. However, social inequality remained.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Nominal wages were sustained. Real wages fell by 25-35 % over the same year.

Target: Nominal wages were sustained, but real wages fell by 25-35 % over the same year.


Source: Make the text coherent: Bair produced most of his Marvel work during the early 1990s. Bair provided the art for a story in the 1990 Daredevil Annual.

Target: Producing most of his Marvel work during the early 1990s, Bair provided the art for a story in the 1990 Daredevil Annual.


Source: Make the text clearer: Nixon married Gregory D. Smith in 1995. Gregory D. Smith is a direct descendant of Stephen A. Douglas.

Target: Nixon married Gregory D. Smith, a direct descendant of Stephen A. Douglas, in 1995.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He was also a visiting professor at a number of foreign institutions in US and Canada. visiting professor was also a visiting visiting professor at Moscow State University, Charles University, Prague, Warsaw University, Denmark and various institutions in India.

Target: He was also a visiting professor at a number of foreign institutions in US and Canada. He was also a visiting researcher at Moscow State University, Charles University, Prague, Warsaw University, Denmark and various institutions in India.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Kilbourn had been trying to isolate Juneautown to make it more dependent on Kilbourntown. When Kilbourn laid out Kilbourn's street grid in 1835, Kilbourn paid no attention to the existing street layout of Juneautown.

Target: Kilbourn had been trying to isolate Juneautown to make it more dependent on Kilbourntown. For example, when he laid out his street grid in 1835, he paid no attention to the existing street layout of Juneautown.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Building C is in a public access area of the airport. Visitors are not required to undergo security checks to access it.

Target: Building C is in a public access area of the airport, so visitors are not required to undergo security checks to access it.


Source: Make the text clearer: Roberts was the first to be cast. Very early on Tarsem Singh wanted an Evil Queen with whom audiences could relate.

Target: Roberts was the first to be cast, because very early on Tarsem Singh wanted an Evil Queen with whom audiences could relate.


Source: Make the text coherent: The first issue of Miscellanea Entomologica was published in a larger format (24 x 36 cm). Immediately the following ones were smaller (18 x 24 cm).

Target: The first issue of Miscellanea Entomologica was published in a larger format (24 x 36 cm), but immediately the following ones were smaller (18 x 24 cm).


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Adult frogs are light grey in colour with brown or black banding. Juveniles will exhibit stronger contrasts.

Target: Adult frogs are light grey in colour with brown or black banding, while juveniles will exhibit stronger contrasts.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Members of the MC family are functional and structural monomers. Early reports indicated that Members are dimers.

Target: Members of the MC family are functional and structural monomers although early reports indicated that they are dimers.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ozzie and Lethal soon joined up with their friend Seani B, who was a DJ on Amy FM. More Fire's third prospective member Neeko met Ozzie in a sound engineering training programme.

Target: Ozzie and Lethal soon joined up with their friend Seani B, who was a DJ on Amy FM. Meanwhile, More Fire's third prospective member Neeko met Ozzie B in a sound engineering training programme.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The comic, with black-and-white pages and a color cover and designed to be distributed to children in movies theaters, was never published. Samples were printed to show theater-owners.

Target: The comic, with black-and-white pages and a color cover and designed to be distributed to children in movies theaters, was never published, although samples were printed to show theater-owners.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Supported with airplay from BBC Radio 1's John Peel amongst others. It was their first album to go unreleased in the U.S.

Target: Although supported with airplay from BBC Radio 1's John Peel amongst others, it was their first album to go unreleased in the U.S.


Source: Make the text coherent: The tower is 407 ft (124 m) tall and contains 37 floors. The tower opened in 2003.

Target: The tower, which opened in 2003, is 407 ft (124 m) tall and contains 37 floors.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Muro Muruni (possibly from in the Aymara spelling Muru Muruni) is a mountain in the Carabaya mountain range in the Andes of Peru, about 5,200 metres (17,060 ft) high. It is in the Puno Region, Carabaya, Coasa District.

Target: Muro Muruni (possibly from in the Aymara spelling Muru Muruni) is a mountain in the Carabaya mountain range in the Andes of Peru, about 5,200 metres (17,060 ft) high. It is in the Puno Region, Carabaya Province, Coasa District.


Source: Make the text coherent: Most of the paintings on the floor had been moved for the construction. Large paintings including the Monet were left.

Target: Most of the paintings on the floor had been moved for the construction although large paintings including the Monet were left.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It features a cantilever low-wing fixed tricycle landing gear and a single engine in tractor configuration. A cantilever low-wing is a two-seats-in-tandem enclosed cockpit under a bubble canopy.

Target: It features a cantilever low-wing, a two-seats-in-tandem enclosed cockpit under a bubble canopy, fixed tricycle landing gear and a single engine in tractor configuration.


Source: Make the text clearer: She married Jazep Sznarkiewicz in 1926. Jazep Sznarkiewicz is a political activist and teacher.

Target: She married Jazep Sznarkiewicz, a political activist and teacher, in 1926.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It was claimed that many of the crew members of the armored units in the Azerbaijani Army launched assault were Russians from the 104th Guards Airborne Division, based out of Ganja and, ironically enough. Were the units that eventually stopped them.

Target: It was claimed that many of the crew members of the armored units in the Azerbaijani Army launched assault were Russians from the 104th Guards Airborne Division, based out of Ganja and, ironically enough, so were the units that eventually stopped them.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Admission is free. Donations are welcomed.

Target: Admission is free, although donations are welcomed.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: While returning from the launch party of Tulsi, Rajat's car breaks down due to heavy rains and Tulsi decides to change her dress in the house of Rajat. Seeing Tulsi in dress of Rajat's wife, Rajat gets excited and sleeps with her.

Target: While returning from the launch party of Tulsi, Rajat's car breaks down due to heavy rains and Tulsi decides to change her dress in the house of Rajat. However, seeing Tulsi in dress of his wife, he gets excited and sleeps with her.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Necklines can be grouped into categories according to their shape. Where Necklines cut across the body :

Target: Necklines can be grouped into categories according to their shape and where they cut across the body :


Source: Make the text more logical: Following in his father's footsteps, Nenad also studied Orientalism at the same school where his father taught. As Nenad's music and TV career took off, the studies were no longer a priority and he never finished them.

Target: Following in his father's footsteps, Nenad also studied Orientalism at the same school where his father taught. However, as his music and TV career took off, the studies were no longer a priority and he never finished them.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: But that is not the point. Though we each have the right to receive his grace.

Target: But that is not the point, because though we each have the right to receive his grace.


Source: Make the text clearer: Some argue that political neuromarketing will cause voters to make rash decisions while others argue that these messages are beneficial because they depict what the politicians can do. Control over political decisions could make voters not see the reality of things.

Target: Some argue that political neuromarketing will cause voters to make rash decisions while others argue that these messages are beneficial because they depict what the politicians can do. However, control over political decisions could make voters not see the reality of things.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This is particularly difficult in the field of neurology. Damage to the brain is often permanent and will change a patient's way of life forever.

Target: This is particularly difficult in the field of neurology because damage to the brain is often permanent and will change a patient's way of life forever.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Originally, propranolol was reserved for hypertension patients. Doctors are permitted to use the drug for off-label purposes -- leading to the question of whether they actually should.

Target: Originally, propranolol was reserved for hypertension patients. However, doctors are permitted to use the drug for off-label purposes -- leading to the question of whether they actually should.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Constitutionally, justice courts are part of the state legal system. State law generally makes justice courts independent of the New York State Office of Court Administration (OCA) and instead makes justice courts the responsibility of justice courts' sponsoring localities.

Target: Constitutionally, justice courts are part of the state legal system, but state law generally makes them independent of the New York State Office of Court Administration (OCA) and instead makes them the responsibility of their sponsoring localities.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Davis obeyed the officer's orders. Davis exited the driver's seat and walked to the front of the vehicle, where Gore proceeded to search him.

Target: Obeying the officer's orders, Davis exited the driver's seat and walked to the front of the vehicle, where Gore proceeded to search him.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Having made six appearance for the club so far, Law had loan extended with Yeovil Town for another month. Ten days later, Law was recalled by Law's parent club.

Target: Having made six appearance for the club so far, Law had loan extended with Yeovil Town for another month. However, ten days later, Law was recalled by his parent club.


Source: Fix sentence flow: On 31 July 2014 he signed for Greek club Veria. Making one appearance, Hasselbaink was released by the club on 2 February 2015.

Target: On 31 July 2014 he signed for Greek club Veria. However, making one appearance, Hasselbaink was released by the club on 2 February 2015.


Source: Make the text more logical: After an impressive first half of the 2003 -- 04 season, he signed for West Ham in January 2004. After the move, Reo-Coker stated that he joined West Ham, believing the club can bounce back to the Premier League.

Target: After an impressive first half of the 2003 -- 04 season, he signed for West Ham in January 2004. After the move, Reo-Coker stated that he joined West Ham United, believing the club can bounce back to the Premier League.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Theoretical explanations for these types of effects have been explained in myriad theories including social cognitive theory, excitation transfer theory, priming effect and the General Aggression Model. Recent scholarship has suggested that social cognitive theories of aggression are outdated and should be retired.

Target: Theoretical explanations for these types of effects have been explained in myriad theories including social cognitive theory, excitation transfer theory, priming effect and the General Aggression Model. However recent scholarship has suggested that social cognitive theories of aggression are outdated and should be retired.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Hiking Colorado: Holy Cross Wilderness provides a description of Notch Mountain Trail. Holy Cross Wilderness is a hiking guide by Kim Fenske.

Target: Hiking Colorado: Holy Cross Wilderness, a hiking guide by Kim Fenske, provides a description of Notch Mountain Trail.


Source: Fix coherence errors: According to William Wellman Jr., Janet Gaynor had originally been cast as Hazel Flagg to follow on the success of A Star is Born (1937). After William Wellman Jr. met Carole Lombard, he convinced Selznick to cast Hazel Flagg.

Target: According to William Wellman Jr., Janet Gaynor had originally been cast as Hazel Flagg to follow on the success of A Star is Born (1937). However, after William Wellman Sr. met Carole Lombard, he convinced Selznick to cast her.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Incoming students walk through the arch toward the school to mark their entrance into the Notre Dame Prep community. On graduation day, seniors walk under the arch toward Hampton Lane, symbolizing the end of their journey at NDP.

Target: Incoming students walk through the arch toward the school to mark their entrance into the Notre Dame Prep community. Similarly, on graduation day, seniors walk under the arch toward Hampton Lane, symbolizing the end of their journey at NDP.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The idea being to create a network of agricultural cooperatives. Farmers can get a fair price for their crop.

Target: The idea being to create a network of agricultural cooperatives so that farmers can get a fair price for their crop.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The only recognized group in America that is in communion with the UU is the Episcopal Church. Independent Old Catholic groups with recognized apostolic succession have attempted to seek recognition from the UU.

Target: The only recognized group in America that is in communion with the UU is the Episcopal Church. However, independent Old Catholic groups with recognized apostolic succession have attempted to seek recognition from the UU.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: One of the Hrekov's first remarkable subordinates on the side of the Ukrainian People's Army was a colonel Petro Bolbochan. At one time the Russian prime-minister Vladimir Lenin was offering 50,000 rubles in silver for the head of Petro Bolbochan Petro Bolbochan.

Target: One of the Hrekov's first remarkable subordinates on the side of the Ukrainian People's Army was a colonel Petro Bolbochan. At one time the Russian prime-minister Vladimir Lenin was offering 50,000 rubles in silver for the head of colonel Bolbochan.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Glading then visited the flat on April 21, 1937, with a man whom he referred to as 'Mr. Peters'.' Mr. 'was really Theodore Maly, a Soviet spy and a principal agent in Britain.

Target: Glading then visited the flat on April 21, 1937, with a man whom he referred to as 'Mr. Peters'.' Peters 'was really Theodore Maly, a Soviet spy and a principal agent in Britain.


Source: Fix coherence: Ooni Lajodoogun was the 9th Ooni of Ife the ancestral home of the Yorubas. The 9th Ooni of Ife is a paramount traditional ruler of Ile Ife.

Target: Ooni Lajodoogun was the 9th Ooni of Ife, a paramount traditional ruler of Ile Ife, the ancestral home of the Yorubas.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The OWK was supposedly ruled by Queen Patricia I 1997. Queen Patricia I is an absolute monarch whose coronation took place on May 30 and 31.

Target: The OWK was supposedly ruled by Queen Patricia I, an absolute monarch whose coronation took place on May 30 and 31, 1997.


Source: Fix coherence: The whorls are crossed by thick, rounded ribs, making the lirae slightly beaded, 9 in number on penultimate whorl, faint on last one, which has a very strong rib behind the peristome. The shell is crossed by conspicuous growth lines.

Target: The whorls are crossed by thick, rounded ribs, making the lirae slightly beaded, 9 in number on penultimate whorl, faint on last one, which has a very strong rib behind the peristome. Moreover the shell is crossed by conspicuous growth lines.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Version 3 was released in November 2008 and added reporting capability. Customers could track and see usage.

Target: Version 3 was released in November 2008 and added reporting capability so that customers could track and see usage.


Source: Make the text clearer: This is the only Automatic Dlamini material to feature Harvey, but remains unreleased. Bootleg versions of the album are in circulation.

Target: This is the only Automatic Dlamini material to feature Harvey, but remains unreleased, although bootleg versions of the album are in circulation.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: While a part-time sportswriter and student, she was assigned to cover a Southview High School football game at George Daniel Field in Lorain but barred from using the pressbox. Female sportswriters were not permitted.

Target: While a part-time sportswriter and student, she was assigned to cover a Southview High School football game at George Daniel Field in Lorain but barred from using the pressbox because female sportswriters were not permitted.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The plane was nearly full. Passengers sat down in the aisles, galleys and door exits.

Target: Since the plane was nearly full, passengers sat down in the aisles, galleys and door exits.


Source: Fix sentence flow: There was destruction of the existing state, loss of neighboring territories and ruin of the Paraguayan economy. Even decades later.

Target: There was destruction of the existing state, loss of neighboring territories and ruin of the Paraguayan economy, so that even decades later.


Source: Make the text clearer: Wilson won a few points by signing a mutual defense treaty with France. Back in Washington Wilson did not present defense treaty to the Senate for ratification and defense treaty never took effect.

Target: Wilson won a few points by signing a mutual defense treaty with France, but back in Washington he did not present it to the Senate for ratification and it never took effect.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Flook's method was identical to previous systems except for the mathematical algorithm. Although the patent examiner and the Supreme Court opinions assumed that Flook had originated the mathematical technique, someone else had published it a number of years earlier.

Target: Flook's method was identical to previous systems except for the mathematical algorithm. In fact, although the patent examiner and the Supreme Court opinions assumed that Flook had originated the mathematical technique, someone else had published it a number of years earlier.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Paul Amador is a Republican Idaho State Representative since 2016 representing District 4 in the B seat. Paul Amador is an Paul Amador for the University of Idaho.

Target: Paul Amador is a Republican Idaho State Representative since 2016 representing District 4 in the B seat. Paul is an administrator for the University of Idaho.


Source: Make the text coherent: When Neil Warnock became the Manager of Burton Albion in January 1981, Evans was his goalkeeper. Was part of the Northern Premier League Challenge Cup winning team of the 1982 -- 83 season, this is the first time that goalkeeper worked for Neil Warnock.

Target: When Neil Warnock became the Manager of Burton Albion in January 1981, Evans was his goalkeeper and was part of the Northern Premier League Challenge Cup winning team of the 1982 -- 83 season, this is the first time that Evans worked for Warnock.


Source: Fix sentence flow: However they did eventually make up. To this day Mick Jones is still Warnock's assistant manager now at Queens Park Rangers.

Target: However they did eventually make up and to this day Mick Jones is still Warnock's assistant manager now at Queens Park Rangers.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Combining data from men and women as if they were a single population may yield results that are applicable to neither sex. Research has resulted in recommendations that women take doses of the sleeping pill Ambien that are half the dosage recommended for men.

Target: Combining data from men and women as if they were a single population may yield results that are applicable to neither sex. For example, research has resulted in recommendations that women take doses of the sleeping pill Ambien that are half the dosage recommended for men.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Perception management is also important in the movie industry in terms of celebrity image. Much of the controversy over the 2010 Oscar-winning Black Swan centers around the fact that Natalie Portman is said to have danced for most of the movie.

Target: Perception management is also important in the movie industry in terms of celebrity image. For example, much of the controversy over the 2010 Oscar-winning Black Swan centers around the fact that Natalie Portman is said to have danced for most of the movie.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: During the early 20th century, some bands, such as the Golden Rule Band, were barred from appearing at Perseverance Hall, apparently. Management considered them too undignified for the place.

Target: During the early 20th century, some bands, such as the Golden Rule Band, were barred from appearing at Perseverance Hall, apparently because management considered them too undignified for the place.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Nuytten results from his contributions to marine diving technologies. Nuytten has appeared in the media numerous times, including: National Geographic Magazine, Time, Newsweek, Popular Science, Discovery, Fortune, Scientific American and Business Week.

Target: Resulting from his contributions to marine diving technologies, Nuytten has appeared in the media numerous times, including: National Geographic Magazine, Time, Newsweek, Popular Science, Discovery, Fortune, Scientific American and Business Week.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Philip Doyle (born March 20, 1969) is a former American football placekicker. After a standout high school career at Huffman High School in Birmingham, football placekicker played college football at the University of Alabama from 1987 through 1989.

Target: Philip Doyle (born March 20, 1969) is a former American football placekicker. After a standout high school career at Huffman High School in Birmingham, Doyle played college football at the University of Alabama from 1987 through 1989.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Sky Harbor Airport's unique name was conceived by J. Parker Van Zandt in 1928. J. Parker Van Zandt is the owner of Scenic Airways.

Target: Sky Harbor Airport's unique name was conceived by J. Parker Van Zandt, the owner of Scenic Airways, in 1928.


Source: Make the text more logical: He was born in Moncalieri northern Italy. Moncalieri is a town in the Province of Turin.

Target: He was born in Moncalieri, a town in the Province of Turin, northern Italy.


Source: Make the text coherent: The Stanthorpe Shire was one such area selected for settlement and around 17,000 acres was set aside in the parishes of Pikedale and Marsh. More than seven hundred returned soldiers were allocated blocks in what became known as the Pikedale Soldier Settlement.

Target: The Stanthorpe Shire was one such area selected for settlement and around 17,000 acres was set aside in the parishes of Pikedale and Marsh. Eventually, more than seven hundred returned soldiers were allocated blocks in what became known as the Pikedale Soldier Settlement.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Filming commenced in Monterey, California, in September 1970,. This was Eastwood's Filming as film director.

Target: Filming commenced in Monterey, California, in September 1970, and although this was Eastwood's debut as film director.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It was originally planned to limit Gaia's observations to stars fainter than magnitude 5.7. Tests carried out during the commissioning phase indicated that Gaia could autonomously identify stars as bright as magnitude 3.

Target: Although it was originally planned to limit Gaia's observations to stars fainter than magnitude 5.7, tests carried out during the commissioning phase indicated that Gaia could autonomously identify stars as bright as magnitude 3.


Source: Fix coherence: When the courts make a decision that changes a previous line of thinking, that idea immediately is on the political agenda. Laws and public administration must change accordingly.

Target: When the courts make a decision that changes a previous line of thinking, that idea immediately is on the political agenda because laws and public administration must change accordingly.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Political parties were not permitted. It was possible to identify candidates as having an Islamist orientation, a liberal agenda or reliant on tribal status.

Target: Although political parties were not permitted, it was possible to identify candidates as having an Islamist orientation, a liberal agenda or reliant on tribal status.


Source: Make the text more logical: The first seabirds evolved in the Cretaceous. Modern seabird families emerged in the Paleogene.

Target: The first seabirds evolved in the Cretaceous, and modern seabird families emerged in the Paleogene.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Express trains stopping only at West Falmouth, Gray, New Gloucester, Upper Gloucester and Danville made the trip in 80 minutes. Trains making other local stops upon request required 20 minutes more.

Target: Express trains stopping only at West Falmouth, Gray, New Gloucester, Upper Gloucester and Danville made the trip in 80 minutes, while trains making other local stops upon request required 20 minutes more.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: All polls published showed an advantage for the YES side. Official results showed a 51 % to 49 % win for the NO side.

Target: All polls published showed an advantage for the YES side, but official results showed a 51 % to 49 % win for the NO side.


Source: Make the text clearer: Pre-orders allow consumers to guarantee immediate shipment on release, manufacturers can gauge how much demand there will be and thus the size of initial production runs, and sellers can be assured of minimum sales. High pre-order rates can be used to increase sales further

Target: Pre-orders allow consumers to guarantee immediate shipment on release, manufacturers can gauge how much demand there will be and thus the size of initial production runs, and sellers can be assured of minimum sales. Additionally, high pre-order rates can be used to increase sales further


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Elite opinion in Britain tended to favor the Confederacy. Public opinion tended to favor the United States.

Target: Elite opinion in Britain tended to favor the Confederacy, but public opinion tended to favor the United States.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Her father married again in 1737 to Elisabeth Therese of Lorraine Holy Roman Emperor. Elisabeth Therese of Lorraine is the youngest sister of Francis I.

Target: Her father married again in 1737 to Elisabeth Therese of Lorraine, the youngest sister of Francis I, Holy Roman Emperor.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Of these, about 400 were bombs, 48 were Ground Launched Cruise Missiles. Approximately 100 were B57 nuclear depth bombs.

Target: Of these, about 400 were bombs, 48 were Ground Launched Cruise Missiles, and approximately 100 were B57 nuclear depth bombs.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Each qashmal vanishes after carrying out its task. If qashmal failed in the attempt, and they never try again.

Target: Each qashmal vanishes after carrying out its task or if it failed in the attempt, and they never try again.


Source: Make the text coherent: Tibetan protesters often make demands for greater political autonomy, independence, and the right to practice their religion free of interference. Several protests in Tibetan have been suppressed with force, sometimes ending with the imprisonment of activists and the killing of civilians.

Target: Tibetan protesters often make demands for greater political autonomy, independence, and the right to practice their religion free of interference. Several protests in Tibet have been suppressed with force, sometimes ending with the imprisonment of activists and the killing of civilians.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: 20 November 1934 -- 1945: The Evangelical Church of the old-Prussian Union, restored by verdict of the Landgericht I Berlin court. Two church bodies -- one Nazi-recognised and one gradually driven underground -- each claimed to represent the true church.

Target: 20 November 1934 -- 1945: The Evangelical Church of the old-Prussian Union, restored by verdict of the Landgericht I Berlin court. Thus, two church bodies -- one Nazi-recognised and one gradually driven underground -- each claimed to represent the true church.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Pune Academy then played their first ever foreign tournament in January 2012 when they participated in the Aaha Rara Gold Cup. Pune Academy only made the semi-finals after losing to Samsung Jawalakhel 4 -- 0.

Target: The Pune Academy then played their first ever foreign tournament in January 2012 when they participated in the Aaha Rara Gold Cup. They however only made the semi-finals after losing to Samsung Jawalakhel 4 -- 0.


Source: Fix coherence errors: At the time the main function of colonial botanic gardens was usually to facilitate the introduction of suitable economic plants. Native plants would be collected as well.

Target: At the time the main function of colonial botanic gardens was usually to facilitate the introduction of suitable economic plants, although native plants would be collected as well.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: While questionnaires are inexpensive, quick, and easy to analyze, often the questionnaire can have more problems than benefits. Unlike interviews, the people conducting the research may never know if the respondent understood the question that was being asked.

Target: While questionnaires are inexpensive, quick, and easy to analyze, often the questionnaire can have more problems than benefits. For example, unlike interviews, the people conducting the research may never know if the respondent understood the question that was being asked.


Source: Make the text clearer: Classification, or demographic question should be at the end. Typically they can feel like personal questions which will make respondents uncomfortable and not willing to finish survey.

Target: Classification, or demographic question should be at the end because typically they can feel like personal questions which will make respondents uncomfortable and not willing to finish survey.


Source: Fix sentence transition: International support is common in both technical help and donations. It is not comprehensive.

Target: Although international support is common in both technical help and donations, it is not comprehensive.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Railroad retirement tier I payroll taxes are coordinated with social security taxes. Employees and employers pay tier I taxes at the same rate as social security taxes.

Target: Railroad retirement tier I payroll taxes are coordinated with social security taxes so that employees and employers pay tier I taxes at the same rate as social security taxes.


Source: Fix coherence errors: However a Pittsburgh Courier story on November 14, 1933 claimed that Kemp was placed on the reserve list and quit. Fans had rated Kemp highly.

Target: However a Pittsburgh Courier story on November 14, 1933 claimed that Kemp was placed on the reserve list and quit, although fans had rated him highly.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In 1997, Congress passed the Taxpayer Relief Act of 1997 which was a reconciliation bill that reduced taxes and. Increased the deficit.

Target: In 1997, Congress passed the Taxpayer Relief Act of 1997 which was a reconciliation bill that reduced taxes and hence increased the deficit.


Source: Make the text coherent: John Gee Mormon apologetics. John Gee is some Notes on the Anthon Transcript.

Target: John Gee, Some Notes on the Anthon Transcript, Mormon apologetics.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A pycnometer is usually made of glass, with a close-fitting ground glass stopper with a capillary tube through it. Air bubbles may escape from the apparatus.

Target: A pycnometer is usually made of glass, with a close-fitting ground glass stopper with a capillary tube through it, so that air bubbles may escape from the apparatus.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Adoration of a mascot by a school or company can be seen as religiously significant. Economic factors also come into play, as both schools and sports-franchise owners want to make money.

Target: Adoration of a mascot by a school or company can be seen as religiously significant. However, economic factors also come into play, as both schools and sports-franchise owners want to make money.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The US won with minimal losses while inflicting heavy losses on the Iraqi Army. Elements of the Republican Guard divisions were able to withdraw back into Iraq, shooting down three US warplanes and a rescue helicopter in the process.

Target: The US won with minimal losses while inflicting heavy losses on the Iraqi Army, but elements of the Republican Guard divisions were able to withdraw back into Iraq, shooting down three US warplanes and a rescue helicopter in the process.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: At noon, JTWC upgraded Damrey to a tropical storm based on consolidation within the LLCC. Overall convection has slightly decreased.

Target: At noon, JTWC upgraded Damrey to a tropical storm based on consolidation within the LLCC, although overall convection has slightly decreased.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She cruised the East China and Yellow Seas. She attacked a convoy emerging from the fog 1 July and quickly sank a small coastal defense vessel and cargo ship, Taiun Maru No. 1.

Target: Cruising the East China and Yellow Seas, she attacked a convoy emerging from the fog 1 July and quickly sank a small coastal defense vessel and cargo ship, Taiun Maru No. 1.