Source: Make the text coherent: Montgomery to Memphis Jr. Montgomery to Memphis is an account of the public career of the Rev. Dr. Martin Luther King.

Target: Montgomery to Memphis, an account of the public career of the Rev. Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Emarginula imella is a species of sea snail the keyhole limpets and slit limpets. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Fissurellidae.

Target: Emarginula imella is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Fissurellidae, the keyhole limpets and slit limpets.


Source: Make the text more logical: Embleton is an inner city suburb of Perth and is located 7 kilometres (4.3496 mi) northeast of Perth's central business district (CBD) between the suburbs of Morley and Bayswater. An inner city suburb of Perth is the capital city of Western Australia.

Target: Embleton is an inner city suburb of Perth, the capital city of Western Australia, and is located 7 kilometres (4.3496 mi) northeast of Perth's central business district (CBD) between the suburbs of Morley and Bayswater.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Emergency lights are used in commercial buildings as a safety precaution to power outages. People will be able to find their way out of a building.

Target: Emergency lights are used in commercial buildings as a safety precaution to power outages, so that people will be able to find their way out of a building.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Emily withdrew more and more from the outside world. Emily began in the summer of 1858 what would be her lasting legacy.

Target: Withdrawing more and more from the outside world, Emily began in the summer of 1858 what would be her lasting legacy.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: She dismisses the Doctor and the soldiers. She asks Bill for her opinion, as a fellow woman.

Target: Dismissing the Doctor and the soldiers, she asks Bill for her opinion, as a fellow woman.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Shearsmith initially wore an inflatable sumo suit. Air in the suit produced sounds that interfered with music.

Target: Shearsmith initially wore an inflatable sumo suit, but air in the suit produced sounds that interfered with music.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: There is only one teacher at his school. Teacher is also the only teacher.

Target: There is only one teacher at his school and he is also the only student.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Current natural reproduction of wood does not cover the annual use of 37 million tonnes of wood, 50 % of the Ethiopian wood reserves of 1,120 million tonnes are exploited. Deforestation is a common problem in Ethiopian with all of Ethiopian's negative implications.

Target: Current natural reproduction of wood does not cover the annual use of 37 million tonnes of wood, 50 % of the Ethiopian wood reserves of 1,120 million tonnes are exploited. Consequently, deforestation is a common problem in Ethiopia with all of its negative implications.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: During the summer wet season, the wet monsoon dominates in Western Ethiopia with plenty of water available. Winds are rather weak over most of Ethiopia.

Target: During the summer wet season, the wet monsoon dominates in Western Ethiopia with plenty of water available, while winds are rather weak over most of Ethiopia.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Urban households were experiencing frequent outages lasting over days. Companies were affected by energy rationing.

Target: Urban households were experiencing frequent outages lasting over days. Companies on the other hand were affected by energy rationing.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The reforms were fiercely attacked by members of the EGAT, Metropolitan Energy Authority (MEA), and Provincial Electricity Authority (PEA) unions. No significant changes in industry structure or ownership occurred during Chuan's term.

Target: The reforms were fiercely attacked by members of the EGAT, Metropolitan Energy Authority (MEA), and Provincial Electricity Authority (PEA) unions. As a result, no significant changes in industry structure or ownership occurred during Chuan's term.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In the 1640s, his works appeared in England and English Behmenists developed. Some of these merged with the Quakers of the time.

Target: In the 1640s, his works appeared in England and English Behmenists developed. Eventually, some of these merged with the Quakers of the time.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Members of this religious group were devout followers of a Dutch mystic named Hendrik Niclaes. The Familists believed that Hendrik Niclaes was the only Hendrik Niclaes who truly knew how to achieve a state of perfection, and Hendrik Niclaes' texts attracted followers in Germany, France, and England.

Target: Members of this religious group were devout followers of a Dutch mystic named Hendrik Niclaes. The Familists believed that Niclaes was the only person who truly knew how to achieve a state of perfection, and his texts attracted followers in Germany, France, and England.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Shakespeare produced fewer than 40 solo plays in a career that spanned more than two decades: he was financially successful. Shakespeare was an Shakespeare and.

Target: Shakespeare produced fewer than 40 solo plays in a career that spanned more than two decades: he was financially successful because he was an actor and.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Shakespeare's The Comedy of Errors and Twelfth Night were also performed here. Written for commercial theater.

Target: Shakespeare's The Comedy of Errors and Twelfth Night were also performed here, although written for commercial theater.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Later renovations to the building altered some aspects of the structure. Many steel elements were replaced and wood beams were replaced with steel.

Target: Later renovations to the building altered some aspects of the structure. For example, many steel elements were replaced and wood beams were replaced with steel.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The conservatory is a major resource in the international study of horticulture as well as a center for learning for the public. Every year hundreds of scientists travel to the conservatory to study the rare palm and cacti exhibits.

Target: The conservatory is a major resource in the international study of horticulture as well as a center for learning for the public. For example, every year hundreds of scientists travel to the conservatory to study the rare palm and cacti exhibits.


Source: Fix coherence: Enoch was established by members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints with Samuel O. Bennion's organization of the Enoch Branch in 1911. The first The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints settlers had arrived in 1906.

Target: Enoch was established by members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints with Samuel O. Bennion's organization of the Enoch Branch in 1911. The first Latter-day Saint settlers had arrived in 1906.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It is considered to be Late Jurassic-Early Cretaceous in age. More thorough dating needs to be undertaken.

Target: It is considered to be Late Jurassic-Early Cretaceous in age although more thorough dating needs to be undertaken.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It has diurnal habits and it is frugivorous and attracted by tree exudates. Larvae are root borers.

Target: It has diurnal habits and it is frugivorous and attracted by tree exudates, while larvae are root borers.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Additionally, ETAP has been working in Syria with German-based Preussag to develop small oil fields and has signed an oil cooperation agreement with Iraq. In December 2004, the Syria and Tunisian governments signed exploration agreements for areas in northeastern Syria.

Target: Additionally, ETAP has been working in Syria with German-based Preussag to develop small oil fields and has signed an oil cooperation agreement with Iraq. In December 2004, the Syrian and Tunisian governments signed exploration agreements for areas in northeastern Syria.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Many sewage treatment plants have no sterilisation final stage and therefore discharge an effluent which. Having a clean appearance.

Target: Many sewage treatment plants have no sterilisation final stage and therefore discharge an effluent which, although having a clean appearance.


Source: Make the text coherent: Today their major industry is tourism. Kerkyra with its magnificent harbour, splendid scenery and wealth of picturesque ruins and castles, is a favourite stopping place for cruise liners.

Target: Today their major industry is tourism. Kerkyra in particular, with its magnificent harbour, splendid scenery and wealth of picturesque ruins and castles, is a favourite stopping place for cruise liners.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: An epistemic commitment of some kind, on the part of the participants, underlies most arguments. Each participant in an argument would have a position that they are expressing, and an underlying epistemic commitment fundamental to their reasoning.

Target: An epistemic commitment of some kind, on the part of the participants, underlies most arguments. For instance, each participant in an argument would have a position that they are expressing, and an underlying epistemic commitment fundamental to their reasoning.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Epsychology interventions are considered a supplement to existing treatments rather than a substitute. Such interventions can be used as a stand-alone treatment given that they are more cost-effective than standard treatment.

Target: Epsychology interventions are considered a supplement to existing treatments rather than a substitute, although such interventions can be used as a stand-alone treatment given that they are more cost-effective than standard treatment.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Additionally, there were already some stabling sites for horses within Hong Kong,. Less construction was needed to facilitate the equestrian sports required by the Olympics.

Target: Additionally, there were already some stabling sites for horses within Hong Kong, hence less construction was needed to facilitate the equestrian sports required by the Olympics.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Eremophila cuneifolia, commonly known as pinyuru is a flowering plant in the figwort family, Scrophulariaceae and is endemic to the north-west of Western Australia. Eremophila cuneifolia is a spreading, sticky Eremophila cuneifolia with wedge-shaped leaves, coloured sepals and usually deep purple flowers.

Target: Eremophila cuneifolia, commonly known as pinyuru is a flowering plant in the figwort family, Scrophulariaceae and is endemic to the north-west of Western Australia. It is a spreading, sticky shrub with wedge-shaped leaves, coloured sepals and usually deep purple flowers.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Schaeder was a leading advocate of theocentric theology. Through Schaeder's criticism of 19th-century theological anthropocentrism, Schaeder advocate one of the founders of dialectical theology.

Target: Schaeder was a leading advocate of theocentric theology. Through his criticism of 19th-century theological anthropocentrism, he was one of the founders of dialectical theology.


Source: Make the text coherent: Baron was also a proponent of scientific and technological advances in the Philippines. To attest to this, Baron was the proponent of the so-called DC Super Antenna or Baron Super Antenna, a sophisticated yet reasonably-priced outdoor TV antenna.

Target: Baron was also a proponent of scientific and technological advances in the Philippines. To attest to this, he was the inventor of the so-called DC Super Antenna or Baron Super Antenna, a sophisticated yet reasonably-priced outdoor TV antenna.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Irvan drove a Firebird. Irvan won two races his first year and seven races the next year.

Target: Driving a Firebird, Irvan won two races his first year and seven races the next year.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Knowing about sexual overperception, females may flirt with males to fulfill certain wants without possessing any sexual desires for the male. Women are not the only sex to twist the overperception bias in their favour.

Target: Knowing about sexual overperception, females may flirt with males to fulfill certain wants without possessing any sexual desires for the male. However, women are not the only sex to twist the overperception bias in their favour.


Source: Make the text coherent: That is to say, both circles are the same size. Each person may interpret the information presented differently depending on which bias they rely on to make the decision.

Target: That is to say, both circles are the same size but each person may interpret the information presented differently depending on which bias they rely on to make the decision.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Erythritol is 60 -- 70 % as sweet as sucrose (table sugar). It is almost noncaloric, does not affect blood sugar, does not cause tooth decay, and is partially absorbed by the body, excreted in urine and feces.

Target: Erythritol is 60 -- 70 % as sweet as sucrose (table sugar) yet it is almost noncaloric, does not affect blood sugar, does not cause tooth decay, and is partially absorbed by the body, excreted in urine and feces.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Books that are translated to Esperanto are not usually internationally famous books. Everyone can already read those in another language that they know.

Target: Books that are translated to Esperanto are not usually internationally famous books, because everyone can already read those in another language that they know.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It was baptized with the name George Capwell in honor if the soccer club's president and. George Capwell also motorized the construction of the stadium and because George Capwell was the George Capwell of the soccer club.

Target: It was baptized with the name George Capwell in honor if the soccer club's president and because he also motorized the construction of the stadium and because he was the founder of the soccer club.


Source: Make the text clearer: When Brodman was told that she could never become the head librarian at Columbia. Brodman was a Brodman.

Target: When Brodman was told that she could never become the head librarian at Columbia because she was a woman.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Brodman earned an undergraduate degree in histology and embryology from Cornell University. Brodman was hoping to go to medical school, but she was not accepted.

Target: Earning an undergraduate degree in histology and embryology from Cornell University, Brodman was hoping to go to medical school, but she was not accepted.


Source: Make the text clearer: The villain is eventually defeated when Eternity merges with Infinity. Together they strip the Magus of villain's newfound power.

Target: The villain is eventually defeated when Eternity merges with Infinity and together they strip the Magus of his newfound power.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They were rescued by Galactus The Lifebringer much to the former Devourer's gratitude. Galactus The Lifebringer the Ultimates had earlier cured of his hunger and transformed into a positive cosmic force.

Target: They were rescued by Galactus The Lifebringer, whom the Ultimates had earlier cured of his hunger and transformed into a positive cosmic force, much to the former Devourer's gratitude.


Source: Fix sentence transition: She enrolled once more at SAIC. She earned her master's degree.

Target: Enrolling once more at SAIC, she earned her master's degree.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: On leaving the burrow, the male passes its long antennae through a notch on the tarsus (first leg segment), by which means any adhering membranes are scraped off. Some individuals may pass the winter in the adult state.

Target: On leaving the burrow, the male passes its long antennae through a notch on the tarsus (first leg segment), by which means any adhering membranes are scraped off. However some individuals may pass the winter in the adult state.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: However, Eustathius found his doctrine unsound and refused him. When Eustathius was deposed, the Arians or Eusebians had everything their own way and admitted Eudoxius to orders and made him bishop of Germanicia, on the confines of Syria, Cilicia, and Cappadocia.

Target: However, Eustathius found his doctrine unsound and refused him. Nevertheless, when Eustathius was deposed, the Arians or Eusebians had everything their own way and admitted Eudoxius to orders and made him bishop of Germanicia, on the confines of Syria, Cilicia, and Cappadocia.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Eugenie lived there. Eugenie showed herself to be an accomplished horsewoman.

Target: Living there, Eugenie showed herself to be an accomplished horsewoman.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 1960 Alois Handler died. Alois Handler is the last of the three original founders.

Target: In 1960 Alois Handler, the last of the three original founders, died.


Source: Fix coherence: The EuroFloorball Cup is a floorball competition in Europe. competition is awarded to the team which wins in the finals of that year's competition.

Target: The EuroFloorball Cup is a floorball competition in Europe. Cup is awarded to the team which wins in the finals of that year's EuroFloorball Cup.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Among the nasal bones of Europasaurus, several are known. Few are complete or undistorted.

Target: Among the nasal bones of Europasaurus, several are known, but few are complete or undistorted.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The phylogeny resolved the most true brachiosaurids to date. Several potential brachiosaurids were instead determined to belong to Somphospondyli.

Target: The phylogeny resolved the most true brachiosaurids to date, although several potential brachiosaurids were instead determined to belong to Somphospondyli.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: ECETOC counts as its members the leading companies in the manufacture and use of chemicals. ECETOC facilitates the networking of suitably qualified scientists from its member companies and academia and co-operates in a scientific context with international agencies, governmental authorities and professional societies.

Target: Counting as its members the leading companies in the manufacture and use of chemicals, ECETOC facilitates the networking of suitably qualified scientists from its member companies and academia and co-operates in a scientific context with international agencies, governmental authorities and professional societies.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In Wales, the Conservative Party topped the poll with the nationalist Plaid Cymru coming a close third. UKIP took the fourth Wales seat, the first time Wales had elected a UKIP MEP.

Target: In Wales, the Conservative Party topped the poll with the nationalist Plaid Cymru coming a close third. UKIP took the fourth Welsh seat, the first time Wales had elected a UKIP MEP.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Her work appears on their first EP Tremulant. She did not perform on the recording of Deloused in the Comatorium.

Target: Her work appears on their first EP Tremulant and although she did not perform on the recording of Deloused in the Comatorium.


Source: Make the text more logical: The treaty did not require Finland to empty the ceded territory. Almost nobody was willing to stay, and almost 100 % of the affected population chose to relocate, taking their belongings with them.

Target: The treaty did not require Finland to empty the ceded territory, but almost nobody was willing to stay, and almost 100 % of the affected population chose to relocate, taking their belongings with them.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: At the 2009 Anime Expo, FUNimation Entertainment premiered the English dub of the film. Once the credits rolled, the film received a standing ovation from its audience.

Target: At the 2009 Anime Expo, FUNimation Entertainment premiered the English dub of the film and once the credits rolled, the film received a standing ovation from its audience.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As a result, she applied for work in the psychology department at the University of California, Los Angeles. The chair of the psychology department at University of California at the time was Knight Dunlap, Evelyn's mentor from Johns Hopkins.

Target: As a result, she applied for work in the psychology department at the University of California, Los Angeles. The chair of the psychology department at UCLA at the time was Knight Dunlap, Evelyn's mentor from Johns Hopkins.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Evelyn's mother, Jessie Bethel, who had a third grade education, told her to pursue an education. That was the only education that could not be taken away from Evelyn.

Target: Evelyn's mother, Jessie Bethel, who had a third grade education, told her to pursue an education because that was the only thing that could not be taken away from her.


Source: Make the text clearer: She and several other staff were let go because they were suspected of subversive behavior. She applied for work in the psychology department at the University of California, Los Angeles.

Target: She and several other staff were let go because they were suspected of subversive behavior. As a result, she applied for work in the psychology department at the University of California, Los Angeles.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Evelyn wanted to go to a teachers college. Evelyn's instructors Evelyn's her potential Evelyn encouraged her to go to the University of Colorado.

Target: Evelyn wanted to go to a teachers college, but her instructors saw her potential and encouraged her to go to the University of Colorado.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Everett Peter Greenberg (born November 7, 1948) is an American microbiologist. Everett Peter Greenberg has been microbiologist of Microbiology in the Department of Microbiology, University of Washington in Seattle since 2005.

Target: Everett Peter Greenberg (born November 7, 1948) is an American microbiologist. He has been Professor of Microbiology in the Department of Microbiology, University of Washington in Seattle since 2005.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He is credited with designing Texas Tech's Double T logo. Had Texas Tech put on the sweaters of football players.

Target: He is credited with designing Texas Tech's Double T logo and had it put on the sweaters of football players.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The following example shows a way to avoid this problem (see (1) ). At the cost of not being able to use return values :

Target: The following example shows a way to avoid this problem (see (1) ). But at the cost of not being able to use return values :


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Females do not need to detect the males. They have simpler antennae.

Target: Since females do not need to detect the males, they have simpler antennae.


Source: Fix sentence transition: George tells him he doesn't know where Bobby is. Cissy leaves Bobby's number and Bobby him to call if Bobby George him.

Target: George tells him he doesn't know where Bobby is, so Cissy leaves his number and tells him to call if Bobby contacts him.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Izzet, tired of waiting, slotted the ball in the bottom corner. Referee Andy D'Urso made him retake the penalty, this time with Barthez in goal.

Target: Izzet, tired of waiting, slotted the ball in the bottom corner, but referee Andy D'Urso made him retake the penalty, this time with Barthez in goal.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In an unusual move, the federal council of the FFF appealed the suspension, arguing that the punishment should have been for a minimum of six full months. His suspension was extended to six full months due to political pressures.

Target: In an unusual move, the federal council of the FFF appealed the suspension, arguing that the punishment should have been for a minimum of six full months. Eventually, his suspension was extended to six full months due to political pressures.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: There was no musical underscoring. Any music played, except as radio background during a scene at an Air Force base in Alaska.

Target: There was no musical underscoring or any music played, except as radio background during a scene at an Air Force base in Alaska.


Source: Fix coherence errors: However, fully armed blackshirts occupied the yard, the escalade and the antechamber. Since Mussolini wanted no stenographer, no minutes of the meeting were taken.

Target: However, fully armed blackshirts occupied the yard, the escalade and the antechamber. Moreover, since Mussolini wanted no stenographer, no minutes of the meeting were taken.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The content of the conversation is unknown. According to Badoglio, it is possible that Mussolini calmed down the King's fears, promising him to disengage Italy from the war by September 15.

Target: The content of the conversation is unknown, but according to Badoglio, it is possible that Mussolini calmed down the King's fears, promising him to disengage Italy from the war by September 15.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Unlike Leonid, Vicka (a former diver) managed to let go of Deeptown and rarely ventures there. An upgraded deep-program includes a built-in mandatory 24-hour timer.

Target: Unlike Leonid, Vicka (a former diver) managed to let go of Deeptown and rarely ventures there. Additionally, an upgraded deep-program includes a built-in mandatory 24-hour timer.


Source: Make the text clearer: Director Alan Parker received the script after the release of his previous film Midnight Express (1978). Alan Parker met with De Silva in Manhattan, New York, where the two agreed that Director would draft Alan Parker's own script, with Gore receiving sole screenwriting credit.

Target: Director Alan Parker received the script after the release of his previous film Midnight Express (1978). He met with De Silva in Manhattan, New York, where the two agreed that Parker would draft his own script, with Gore receiving sole screenwriting credit.


Source: Fix coherence: She says she can not write him the letter, because she believes he is not talented enough to become a professional dancer. As they talk, Alice is dancing to (' Black and Gold ') practicing her jazz piece.

Target: She says she can not write him the letter, because she believes he is not talented enough to become a professional dancer. Meanwhile, as they talk, Alice is dancing to (' Black and Gold ') practicing her jazz piece.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: After numerous suicide attempts which fail. Everything he touches turns into Williams.

Target: After numerous suicide attempts which fail because everything he touches turns into Williams.


Source: Fix coherence: Pina promises to pay all its debts betting on horses. Pina convinces Silvani to spend a Christmas holiday with Fantozzi to Cortina d'Ampezzo then satisfy in bed.

Target: Promising to pay all its debts betting on horses, Pina convinces Silvani to spend a Christmas holiday with Fantozzi to Cortina d'Ampezzo then satisfy in bed.


Source: Fix coherence: Each input variable combination results in a particular response value. It follows that the probability of obtaining a given response is equal to the probability of obtaining the corresponding input combination.

Target: Since each input variable combination results in a particular response value, it follows that the probability of obtaining a given response is equal to the probability of obtaining the corresponding input combination.


Source: Fix coherence: The phase velocity of an electromagnetic wave, when traveling through a medium, can routinely exceed c, the vacuum velocity of light. This occurs in most glasses at X-ray frequencies.

Target: The phase velocity of an electromagnetic wave, when traveling through a medium, can routinely exceed c, the vacuum velocity of light. For example, this occurs in most glasses at X-ray frequencies.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: On 17 November 2011, a second follow-up experiment by OPERA scientists confirmed their initial results. Scientists were skeptical about the results of these experiments, the significance of which was disputed.

Target: On 17 November 2011, a second follow-up experiment by OPERA scientists confirmed their initial results. However, scientists were skeptical about the results of these experiments, the significance of which was disputed.


Source: Make the text coherent: She seems to be allied to the American organization behind the False Holy Grail War. Even so, Orlando Reeve refers to her as an outsider.

Target: She seems to be allied to the American organization behind the False Holy Grail War, but even so, Orlando Reeve refers to her as an outsider.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He viewed it as a trifle because there were none who would lay a hand upon his treasures. He threw it away.

Target: Viewing it as a trifle because there were none who would lay a hand upon his treasures, he threw it away.


Source: Make the text coherent: Bab capitalizes on his friendship with a man of the cloth. Bab assumes that he could get away with petty familiarity with Father Marty.

Target: Capitalizing on his friendship with a man of the cloth, Bab assumes that he could get away with petty familiarity with Father Marty.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Some time later, her mother sent a request to President Anwar El-Sadat to retrieve their Egyptian passports, which he granted. Some days before them two going back to Egyptian, Fathia was killed by her husband, as explained below.

Target: Some time later, her mother sent a request to President Anwar El-Sadat to retrieve their Egyptian passports, which he granted. However, some days before them two going back to Egypt, Fathia was killed by her husband, as explained below.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: After another loan, now back in the Netherlands with Roda, Sonkaya was released in June 2008 and joined Bursaspor. Midway through the season, Sonkaya moved to Azerbaijan's FK Khazar Lankaran.

Target: After another loan, now back in the Netherlands with Roda, Sonkaya was released in June 2008 and joined Bursaspor. However, midway through the season, he moved to Azerbaijan's FK Khazar Lankaran.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Data formats may also be designed to degrade gracefully. HTML is designed to be forward compatible, allowing new HTML entities to be ignored by Web browsers that do not understand them without causing the document to be unusable.

Target: Data formats may also be designed to degrade gracefully. HTML for example, is designed to be forward compatible, allowing new HTML entities to be ignored by Web browsers that do not understand them without causing the document to be unusable.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The latter was perhaps shown in the Roman cameo glass Portland Vase. Such depictions rarely show the wedding feast, preferring the ceremony or processions to it.

Target: The latter was perhaps shown in the Roman cameo glass Portland Vase. However such depictions rarely show the wedding feast, preferring the ceremony or processions to it.


Source: Make the text clearer: Temple claimed that he had suffered a back injury from lifting boxes, Temple. Temple admitted submitting fraudulent medical travel refund requests to the Department of Labor from December 2007 through August 2008.

Target: Claiming that he had suffered a back injury from lifting boxes, Temple, Temple admitted submitting fraudulent medical travel refund requests to the Department of Labor from December 2007 through August 2008.


Source: Make the text coherent: Some older sources give his birth year as 1797. Research published in 2006 by Lodi historian Maria Moretti gives his birth date as 26 October 1793.

Target: Although some older sources give his birth year as 1797, research published in 2006 by Lodi historian Maria Moretti gives his birth date as 26 October 1793.


Source: Make the text more logical: Jump up ^ Most English-language media refer to the king as Felipe VI. A few sources have rendered king's name as Felipe VI.

Target: Jump up ^ Most English-language media refer to the king as Felipe VI, although a few sources have rendered his name as Philip VI.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Felipe has welcomed as many public and private audiences as possible to maintain Crown interaction in national and international affairs. Felipe has held meetings with people of Felipe's generation who have built successful careers in political, economic, cultural and media circles.

Target: Felipe has welcomed as many public and private audiences as possible to maintain Crown interaction in national and international affairs. In particular, he has held meetings with people of his generation who have built successful careers in political, economic, cultural and media circles.


Source: Make the text more consistent: With the continuing decline of Christianity in Britain, the FoR has lost influence. Active Christianity in the Britain are now probably further to the left politically.

Target: With the continuing decline of Christianity in Britain, the FoR has lost influence, although active Christians in the UK are now probably further to the left politically.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: ' Skills' come as a skill bonus to be added to the appropriate secondary attribute. After character creation only the final Action Value is important.

Target: ' Skills' come as a skill bonus to be added to the appropriate secondary attribute, although after character creation only the final Action Value is important.


Source: Fix coherence: Pigeons are often found in pairs during the breeding season. Usually the pigeons are gregarious, living in flocks of 50 to 500 birds (dependent on the food supply).

Target: Pigeons are often found in pairs during the breeding season, but usually the pigeons are gregarious, living in flocks of 50 to 500 birds (dependent on the food supply).


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The leaders of Fernandina did not want a new community to grow and prosper to surpass their town. The leaders of Fernandina decided to move the town up to the railroad where the present-day Fernandina stands.

Target: The leaders of Fernandina did not want a new community to grow and prosper to surpass their town. The leaders of Fernandina decided to move the town up to the railroad where the present-day Fernandina Beach stands.


Source: Fix coherence: They considered it a new species and named it Euphorbia elastica. Now species also known as Euphorbia fulva.

Target: They considered it a new species and named it Euphorbia elastica, although now it also known as Euphorbia fulva.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Fiat 8V got its name. At the time of Fiat 8V's making Ford had a copyright on the term V8.

Target: The Fiat 8V got its name because at the time of its making Ford had a copyright on the term V8.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This competition was won by Dunedin in November 2014. As of October 2016 gigabit services are available across all of Chorus' nationwide UFB network.

Target: This competition was won by Dunedin in November 2014, although as of October 2016 gigabit services are available across all of Chorus' nationwide UFB network.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Some fiction contains advanced themes like morality, or the value of life,. Other stories have no theme.

Target: Some fiction contains advanced themes like morality, or the value of life, whereas other stories have no theme.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Rogue planets in fiction usually originate outside the solar system. Planets' erratic paths planets them to within detectable range of Earth.

Target: Rogue planets in fiction usually originate outside the solar system, but their erratic paths lead them to within detectable range of Earth.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He has the luck to be involved in a startling discovery: not only is the Belt proven to be what is left of an exploded planet Lucifer. Also remains are found of that planet's inhabitants, who had been responsible for Belt's destruction.

Target: He has the luck to be involved in a startling discovery: not only is the Belt proven to be what is left of an exploded planet Lucifer, but also remains are found of that planet's inhabitants, who had been responsible for its destruction.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Monster Zero (1965), the 6th Godzilla film: Aliens from Planet X (located between Jupiter and Saturn) try to conquer the Earth using Godzilla, Rodan, and King Ghidorah to take its water supply. Water is scarce on their planet.

Target: Monster Zero (1965), the 6th Godzilla film: Aliens from Planet X (located between Jupiter and Saturn) try to conquer the Earth using Godzilla, Rodan, and King Ghidorah to take its water supply because water is scarce on their planet.


Source: Fix coherence: The fight descends into chaos after interference from some of Harvey's crew when the opponent nearly chokes Shawn, and the woman who owns the store pulls out a gun. One of the guys spills woman's drink.

Target: The fight descends into chaos after interference from some of Harvey's crew when the opponent nearly chokes Shawn, and the woman who owns the store pulls out a gun because one of the guys spills her drink.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It is not copywritted. I made it myself

Target: It is not copywritted because i made it myself


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: All digital images must be destroyed. Otherwise agreed in writing.

Target: All digital images must be destroyed unless otherwise agreed in writing.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Based on the original logo. This is my own work!

Target: Although based on the original logo, this is my own work!


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: That rule seems not to apply to the user who pointed this out (he appears himself to have created a userbox with copyrighted works within it). I have decided to simply create my own original work.

Target: Although that rule seems not to apply to the user who pointed this out (he appears himself to have created a userbox with copyrighted works within it), I have decided to simply create my own original work.


Source: Make the text more logical: The galaxy is similar to our Milky Way. Our favorable view provides a better picture of the typical architecture of spiral galaxies.

Target: The galaxy is similar to our Milky Way, but our favorable view provides a better picture of the typical architecture of spiral galaxies.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Please take note, if you want to go to the river, EXIT FROM EXIT E instead of EXIT C,. You want to slim down your fats ^ ^

Target: Please take note, if you want to go to the river, EXIT FROM EXIT E instead of EXIT C, unless you want to slim down your fats ^ ^


Source: Make the text more consistent: It's publication and copyright were owned by the former Imperial Government of Russia, which fell in 1917. In public domain by virtue of age.

Target: It's publication and copyright were owned by the former Imperial Government of Russia, which fell in 1917. Hence in public domain by virtue of age.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In the first days of January 1942 in Kharkiv, 12,000 Jews were murdered. Smaller massacres continued in this period on daily basis in countless other locations.

Target: In the first days of January 1942 in Kharkiv, 12,000 Jews were murdered, but smaller massacres continued in this period on daily basis in countless other locations.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Nowadays, extensive rural areas are also located in the area of many municipal districts. Some urban areas in rural districts can be bigger in terms of population than the actual administrative centre.

Target: Nowadays, extensive rural areas are also located in the area of many municipal districts. On the other hand, some urban areas in rural districts can be bigger in terms of population than the actual administrative centre.


Source: Fix coherence: Others transfer because it is an alternative way to climb the promotional ladder or. Way is an way to experience another aspect of the fire service's role.

Target: Others transfer because it is an alternative way to climb the promotional ladder or because it is an opportunity to experience another aspect of the fire service's role.


Source: Make the text more logical: When the 2nd Division was formed in July 1915 it did so without its complement of artillery. In December 1915 when the government offered to form another division it did so on the basis that its artillery would be provided by Britain.

Target: When the 2nd Division was formed in July 1915 it did so without its complement of artillery. Meanwhile, in December 1915 when the government offered to form another division it did so on the basis that its artillery would be provided by Britain.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In terms of officers, the situation was better. Within the 1st Division, of its initial 631 officers, 607 had had previous military experience.

Target: In terms of officers, the situation was better. For example, within the 1st Division, of its initial 631 officers, 607 had had previous military experience.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Junior officers in the AIF were also paid at a rate higher than those in the British Army. Senior officers were paid considerably less than their counterparts.

Target: Junior officers in the AIF were also paid at a rate higher than those in the British Army, although senior officers were paid considerably less than their counterparts.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Light horse units underwent a similar process. Were issued Hotchkiss guns to replace Light horse units' Lewis guns in early 1917.

Target: Light horse units underwent a similar process, although were issued Hotchkiss guns to replace their Lewis guns in early 1917.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Other than small numbers of Duntroon graduates, from January 1915 the only means to be commissioned into the AIF was from the ranks of enlisted personnel. By 1918 the majority of company and battalion commanders had risen from the ranks.

Target: Other than small numbers of Duntroon graduates, from January 1915 the only means to be commissioned into the AIF was from the ranks of enlisted personnel. As a result, by 1918 the majority of company and battalion commanders had risen from the ranks.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Following the merger the company was renamed Bank One Corporation, headquartered in Chicago. The Chicago and NBD names were retired in 1999.

Target: Following the merger the company was renamed Bank One Corporation, headquartered in Chicago. The First Chicago and NBD names were retired in 1999.


Source: Make the text more logical: First Chicago began to expand for the first time into the northwest suburbs of Chicago with the acquisition of the Arlington Heights-based First United Financial Services in 1987. The Arlington Heights-based First United Financial Services are a bank holding company with five banks.

Target: First Chicago began to expand for the first time into the northwest suburbs of Chicago with the acquisition of the Arlington Heights-based First United Financial Services, a bank holding company with five banks, in 1987.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: There are distinct First Nations in Canada, originating across the country. Indian reserves, established in Canada law by treaties such as Treaty 7, are the very limited contemporary lands of First Nations recognized by the non-indigenous governments.

Target: There are distinct First Nations in Canada, originating across the country. Indian reserves, established in Canadian law by treaties such as Treaty 7, are the very limited contemporary lands of First Nations recognized by the non-indigenous governments.


Source: Fix sentence transition: These factors combine to create a world where First Nations individuals feel they can not identify completely as Aboriginal. They individuals not fully identify as mainstream Canadians.

Target: These factors combine to create a world where First Nations individuals feel they can not identify completely as Aboriginal, nor can they fully identify as mainstream Canadians.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The demonstrations were largely peaceful. Groups disrupted transportation with blockades or bonfires.

Target: The demonstrations were largely peaceful, although groups disrupted transportation with blockades or bonfires.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Fried fish as a culinary trend may have begun in Sheffield. Trend may have come from London's Western Sephardic Jews.

Target: Fried fish as a culinary trend may have begun in Sheffield or it may have come from London's Western Sephardic Jews.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Palmer purchased the Fairman Estate in 1729 and laid out his town and sold parcels to the local fishermen and shipbuilders. Palmer eventually became active in the provincial council and became acting Governor of Pennsylvania in 1747-1748.

Target: Palmer purchased the Fairman Estate in 1729 and laid out his town and sold parcels to the local fishermen and shipbuilders. Anthony Palmer eventually became active in the provincial council and became acting Governor of Pennsylvania in 1747-1748.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Zeng's students are initially dismissive of a Japanese martial artist. Zeng defeats Zeng's opponent, Zeng he goads into committing suicide.

Target: Zeng's students are initially dismissive of a Japanese martial artist, but he defeats his opponent, whom he goads into committing suicide.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: If you take a lighted candle and set it in a room, you may expect it to light up the entire interior,. Something should hinder.

Target: If you take a lighted candle and set it in a room, you may expect it to light up the entire interior, unless something should hinder.


Source: Make the text coherent: She repeated Rowbotham's experiments, generating some interesting counter-experiments. Interest declined after the First World War.

Target: She repeated Rowbotham's experiments, generating some interesting counter-experiments, but interest declined after the First World War.


Source: Make the text more consistent: However, this did not happen. After the 2007 elections a right-wing coalition was formed which stated its will to keep the flat tax in existence.

Target: However, this did not happen, because after the 2007 elections a right-wing coalition was formed which stated its will to keep the flat tax in existence.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: However, this did not happen, because after the 2007 elections a right-wing coalition was formed which stated its will to keep the flat tax in existence. Critics argue that the tax rates these countries have are actually more progressive than flat.

Target: However, this did not happen, because after the 2007 elections a right-wing coalition was formed which stated its will to keep the flat tax in existence. However, critics argue that the tax rates these countries have are actually more progressive than flat.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It could require 10,000 hp (7.5 MW) to achieve similar performance. Modern jet engines can provide considerable power with the equivalent of 50,000 hp (37 MW) not being atypical.

Target: It could require 10,000 hp (7.5 MW) to achieve similar performance. However modern jet engines can provide considerable power with the equivalent of 50,000 hp (37 MW) not being atypical.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The C150 is normally equipped with a 100 hp (75 kW) engine. In this particular case the plane has 40 hp (30 kW) of extra power.

Target: The C150 is normally equipped with a 100 hp (75 kW) engine, so in this particular case the plane has 40 hp (30 kW) of extra power.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Florian Heller (born 10 March 1982 in Rosenheim) is a German football coach and former footballer. Florian Heller is currently the football coach of SpVgg Unterhaching U17.

Target: Florian Heller (born 10 March 1982 in Rosenheim) is a German football coach and former footballer. He is currently the manager of SpVgg Unterhaching U17.


Source: Fix coherence: Business continues to be brisk. Then Jay begins to feel convicted in his conscience about his dishonesty during the prior two years that he had been in business, and with his wife's encouragement decides to make restitution to all the customers he had overcharged.

Target: Business continues to be brisk, and then Jay begins to feel convicted in his conscience about his dishonesty during the prior two years that he had been in business, and with his wife's encouragement decides to make restitution to all the customers he had overcharged.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In its natural state, the land is poorly drained. Humans have added an extensive network of tiles to move water from the potholes to local tributaries.

Target: In its natural state, the land is poorly drained, although humans have added an extensive network of tiles to move water from the potholes to local tributaries.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The artist will also be showcased in a small presentation, invited to dine with the members of the Fontana Community and presented to City Council. Each artist selected will be awarded a nominal stipend from the local Fontana business community.

Target: The artist will also be showcased in a small presentation, invited to dine with the members of the Fontana Community and presented to City Council. Additionally, each artist selected will be awarded a nominal stipend from the local Fontana business community.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Members of higher castes remained spiritually proud. Members of the lower castes remained devoid of hope and felt they were fated to their lives of poverty and subordination.

Target: Members of higher castes remained spiritually proud, while members of the lower castes remained devoid of hope and felt they were fated to their lives of poverty and subordination.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He traveled smoothly throughout the race. He pulled clear over the final two fences to beat Very Promising by eight lengths.

Target: Travelling smoothly throughout the race, he pulled clear over the final two fences to beat Very Promising by eight lengths.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: 2007 saw the season visit Kimbolton, Shenington, Larkhall, Llandow, Genk and Three Sisters. For the first time in series history a round had to be abandoned due to torrential rain at Shenington.

Target: 2007 saw the season visit Kimbolton, Shenington, Larkhall, Llandow, Genk and Three Sisters although for the first time in series history a round had to be abandoned due to torrential rain at Shenington.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Although a lot of controversy followed as Christodolou was banned from the sport for illegal engines during the 2004 series. Too much time had passed to strip the title for the second time.

Target: Although a lot of controversy followed as Christodolou was banned from the sport for illegal engines during the 2004 series, although too much time had passed to strip the title for the second time.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Because of the fact that it was only 400 yards (370 m) away from Fort Cumberland. Separated by the river.

Target: Because of the fact that it was only 400 yards (370 m) away from Fort Cumberland, although separated by the river.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This game is breathtaking in every sense of the word. You'll be hard pressed to find a more complete game in any genre.

Target: This game is breathtaking in every sense of the word and you'll be hard pressed to find a more complete game in any genre.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: FMEP also has a speakers' program to introduce Israeli, Palestinian, and other experts to U.S. audiences and its own officers also engage in public speaking. The organization also has a small grant program to support groups that contribute to peace between Israeli and Palestinian.

Target: FMEP also has a speakers' program to introduce Israeli, Palestinian, and other experts to U.S. audiences and its own officers also engage in public speaking. The organization also has a small grant program to support groups that contribute to peace between Israel and Palestine.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Some Arabian breeders today specialize in horses descended only from this breeding program. In the Standardbred, the Clay Trotting Horses constitute a distinct foundation line within that breed.

Target: Some Arabian breeders today specialize in horses descended only from this breeding program. Similarly, in the Standardbred, the Clay Trotting Horses constitute a distinct foundation line within that breed.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: They bear the witness to history. Others might learn.

Target: They bear the witness to history, so that others might learn.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: No one will know where you were. Where it is if you do.

Target: No one will know where you were, or where it is if you do.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The comprehensive system always had its critics. During the 1960s the school demonstrated considerable academic, sporting and artistic success.

Target: The comprehensive system always had its critics but during the 1960s the school demonstrated considerable academic, sporting and artistic success.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Both are curves with topological dimension of 1. One might hope to be able to measure curves ''s length or slope, as with ordinary lines.

Target: Both are curves with topological dimension of 1, so one might hope to be able to measure their length or slope, as with ordinary lines.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: She remained friends with Swan. Neither was in a hurry to be married.

Target: Although she remained friends with Swan, neither was in a hurry to be married.


Source: Make the text coherent: Swan took his own apartment and ceased to live with Burnett. After a period of two years Swan could plead desertion as a reason for the divorce.

Target: Swan took his own apartment and ceased to live with Burnett, so that after a period of two years she could plead desertion as a reason for the divorce.


Source: Make the text more logical: Truth triumphing over errour and heresie. A relation of a publike disputation at Oxford in S. Maries Church on Munday last, Jan. 11.

Target: Truth triumphing over errour and heresie. Or, A relation of a publike disputation at Oxford in S. Maries Church on Munday last, Jan. 11.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: But the genius of Brindley, his engineer, proved superior to all obstacles. At one period the duke's financial resources were almost exhausted.

Target: But the genius of Brindley, his engineer, proved superior to all obstacles although at one period the duke's financial resources were almost exhausted.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Sir Robert Cecil, however, obtained a remission of the fine. Thus the affair cost little either to Sir or Sir's 's brother George.

Target: Sir Robert Cecil, however, obtained a remission of the fine, and thus the affair cost little either to him or his brother George.


Source: Make the text more logical: They adapt to the needs of the time. They have developed into an active religious institute, but still maintain elements of the contemplative life.

Target: Adapting to the needs of the time, they have developed into an active religious institute, but still maintain elements of the contemplative life.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: An agreement giving UFW jurisdiction over field workers and the Teamsters jurisdiction over packing and warehouse workers was reached on September 27, 1973. Fitzsimmons reneged on the agreement within a month and moved ahead with forming a farm workers regional union in California.

Target: Although an agreement giving UFW jurisdiction over field workers and the Teamsters jurisdiction over packing and warehouse workers was reached on September 27, 1973, Fitzsimmons reneged on the agreement within a month and moved ahead with forming a farm workers regional union in California.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Later, he was a member of the Assembly during the 1921 session. Member was District Attorney of Juneau County, Wisconsin from 1909 to 1914 and, member of Mauston.

Target: Later, he was a member of the Assembly during the 1921 session. Additionally, he was District Attorney of Juneau County, Wisconsin from 1909 to 1914 and, Mayor of Mauston.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Hewlett departed Corrigedor before it fell at the instruction of Douglas MacArthur. Hewlett followed Frank Merrill, in the China-Burma-India theater ; then coined the term Angels of Bataan.

Target: Departing Corrigedor before it fell at the instruction of Douglas MacArthur, Hewlett followed Frank Merrill, in the China-Burma-India theater ; then coined the term Angels of Bataan.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A sequel called Cavern was released in 2005. Cavern's title is often mistakenly considered as referring to the Liverpool club made famous in the 1960s by The Beatles and other Merseyside performers but is actually a reference to the title track.

Target: A sequel called Cavern, whose title is often mistakenly considered as referring to the Liverpool club made famous in the 1960s by The Beatles and other Merseyside performers but is actually a reference to the title track, was released in 2005.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The matter did not end after the match, as Pitcher's district club, Collingwood, pursued an inquiry with the Victorian Cricket Association. An executive committee of the Victorian Cricket Association found that the complaints of the club were spurious.

Target: The matter did not end after the match, as Pitcher's district club, Collingwood, pursued an inquiry with the Victorian Cricket Association although an executive committee of the VCA found that the complaints of the club were spurious.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The project was scheduled for completion by 2014. Nothing was done until after the 2014 state election.

Target: The project was scheduled for completion by 2014, but nothing was done until after the 2014 state election.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Historically, Frasera has sometimes been considered part of Swertia. Molecular analysis of a number of Frasera species has shown them to form a monophyletic clade separate from the rest of Swertia.

Target: Historically, Frasera has sometimes been considered part of Swertia, but molecular analysis of a number of Frasera species has shown them to form a monophyletic clade separate from the rest of Swertia.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Venerable Frederick George Ackerley (1871 -- 1954) was an eminent Anglican priest in the Church of England, at different times the Archdeacon of Bradford then Craven. Venerable Frederick George Ackerley was also an acknowledged priest of Romany language and culture.

Target: The Venerable Frederick George Ackerley (1871 -- 1954) was an eminent Anglican priest in the Church of England, at different times the Archdeacon of Bradford then Craven. He was also an acknowledged scholar of Romany language and culture.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Jennings batted in the lower order. Jennings scored a duck in his first innings and seven runs in his second.

Target: Batting in the lower order, Jennings scored a duck in his first innings and seven runs in his second.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In it, Wijnberg and Mayer are reconnected for a discussion via webcam chat. Wijnberg died the day after Mayer's interview for the production.

Target: In it, Wijnberg and Mayer are reconnected for a discussion via webcam chat. Hans Wijnberg died the day after his interview for the production.


Source: Make the text more logical: Herds on Indian Reservations such as those on the Pyramid Lake Paiute, the Uintah and Ouray Ute and the Ute Mountain Ute Reservations. Horses from the Ute Mountain Reservation are migrating into the Mesa Verde National Park causing a management dilemma for the Park.

Target: Herds on Indian Reservations such as those on the Pyramid Lake Paiute, the Uintah and Ouray Ute and the Ute Mountain Ute Reservations. However, horses from the Ute Mountain Reservation are migrating into the Mesa Verde National Park causing a management dilemma for the Park.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They also advocated local trade unions being networked by delegates rather than ruled centrally. Were wary of bureaucratic structures.

Target: They also advocated local trade unions being networked by delegates rather than ruled centrally, and were wary of bureaucratic structures.


Source: Fix sentence transition: USAR also disappeared in his Light Heart superpressure balloon. On 17 August 1978, three Americans-Ben Abruzzo, Maxie Anderson, and Larry Newman crossed the Atlantic by balloon, in the Double Eagle II.

Target: USAR also disappeared in his Light Heart superpressure balloon. Finally, on 17 August 1978, three Americans-Ben Abruzzo, Maxie Anderson, and Larry Newman crossed the Atlantic by balloon, in the Double Eagle II.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Leaders of all major religious groups provided prayer and counseling. Generally only Christian sermons were given on GDF bases.

Target: Leaders of all major religious groups provided prayer and counseling, although generally only Christian sermons were given on GDF bases.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In other states, such as Tyrol, Lower Austria, and Burgenland, no explicit right to roam exists. Land owners reserve the right to deny access.

Target: In other states, such as Tyrol, Lower Austria, and Burgenland, no explicit right to roam exists and land owners reserve the right to deny access.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It is permitted to drive a car on a private road. Explicitly signposted otherwise.

Target: It is permitted to drive a car on a private road unless explicitly signposted otherwise.


Source: Make the text more logical: Neither do bodies of water protected as sources of drinking water. Which are in use by aquaculture or are in other special use have a shore path.

Target: Neither do bodies of water protected as sources of drinking water or which are in use by aquaculture or are in other special use have a shore path.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Formerly a British colony. Australians only have limited access to the land, according to The Sydney Morning Herald.

Target: Although formerly a British colony, Australians only have limited access to the land, according to The Sydney Morning Herald.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It should also be noted that this is a partial list, and a full list would never be possible. New tricks and new combinations are always being created.

Target: It should also be noted that this is a partial list, and a full list would never be possible, because new tricks and new combinations are always being created.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Can be done both ways. Both start on the nose (or on the tail while rolling fakie).

Target: Can be done both ways but both start on the nose (or on the tail while rolling fakie).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The move boosted the school. By the middle of the 19th century, under the headship of Totton, the schools' reputation suffered, and ultimately lost so many pupils that it was forced to close in 1861.

Target: The move boosted the school. But by the middle of the 19th century, under the headship of Totton, the schools' reputation suffered, and ultimately lost so many pupils that it was forced to close in 1861.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: As the debate went on, the Pythons found it harder to be polite, especially. Pythons' opponents barely Pythons them get a word in.

Target: As the debate went on, the Pythons found it harder to be polite, especially because their opponents barely let them get a word in.


Source: Fix coherence: Most slaves were unable to raise expensive meats, but generally allowed to keep chickens. Frying chicken on special occasions continued in the African American communities of the South.

Target: Since most slaves were unable to raise expensive meats, but generally allowed to keep chickens, frying chicken on special occasions continued in the African American communities of the South.


Source: Make the text more logical: The knowledge that African-Americans brought served them very well. White plantation owners for the most part didn't care much about chicken.

Target: The knowledge that African-Americans brought served them very well, because white plantation owners for the most part didn't care much about chicken.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: This result was so surprising to the researchers that it was not published. Work continued at the University of Rochester, New York from 1922, where the researchers compared the efficacy of different substances in treatment of anaemia.

Target: This result was so surprising to the researchers that it was not published. However, work continued at the University of Rochester, New York from 1922, where the researchers compared the efficacy of different substances in treatment of anaemia.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Tokugawa Ieyasu made a large donation after his victory at the Battle of Sekigahara. Subsequent generations of the Tokugawa shogunate kept the shrine in good repair.

Target: Tokugawa Ieyasu made a large donation after his victory at the Battle of Sekigahara, and subsequent generations of the Tokugawa shogunate kept the shrine in good repair.


Source: Make the text coherent: Pilgrimages to Mount Fuji became common in the ninth century. Women were forbidden from climbing.

Target: Pilgrimages to Mount Fuji became common in the ninth century, although women were forbidden from climbing.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Sidney and Greville arranged to sail with Sir Francis Drake in 1585 in his expedition against the Spanish West Indies. Elizabeth forbade Sir to take them with Greville, and also refused Greville's request to be allowed to join Robert Dudley's army in the Netherlands.

Target: Sidney and Greville arranged to sail with Sir Francis Drake in 1585 in his expedition against the Spanish West Indies, but Elizabeth forbade Drake to take them with him, and also refused Greville's request to be allowed to join Robert Dudley's army in the Netherlands.


Source: Make the text more coherent: We will leave nothing undone that is possible to do. We may fulfill your good pleasure.

Target: We will leave nothing undone that is possible to do, so that we may fulfill your good pleasure.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Arjie's father foresees the difficulties of being a minority Tamil and enrolls his sons in Sinhalese language classes at school. Future opportunities are not limited to sons.

Target: Arjie's father foresees the difficulties of being a minority Tamil and enrolls his sons in Sinhalese language classes at school, so that future opportunities are not limited to them.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Futura Volley Busto Arsizio is an Italian women's volleyball club based in Busto Arsizio, in the province of Varese. The team currently plays in the Serie A1, Italian's highest professional league.

Target: Futura Volley Busto Arsizio is an Italian women's volleyball club based in Busto Arsizio, in the province of Varese. The team currently plays in the Serie A1, Italy's highest professional league.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the aftermath of the aggression problem of lack of vehicle traffic and still remains present. During the year the average traffic was only 428 vehicles.

Target: In the aftermath of the aggression problem of lack of vehicle traffic and still remains present, so that during the year the average traffic was only 428 vehicles.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He worked to maintain a strong network of contacts among anti-fascist intellectuals throughout Italy. Much of the Italy academic world bowed to the regime.

Target: He worked to maintain a strong network of contacts among anti-fascist intellectuals throughout Italy, while much of the Italian academic world bowed to the regime.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The gaiwan is considered to be particularly good for brewing teas with delicate flavors and aromas, such as green tea and white tea. Without the lid in these cases.

Target: The gaiwan is considered to be particularly good for brewing teas with delicate flavors and aromas, such as green tea and white tea, although without the lid in these cases.


Source: Make the text clearer: Furious, Darkel tries to coax Pandora out of Braxiatel's head. All that remains of Pandora is a mindless, instinctual, non-corporeal monster that has an insatiable hunger for the ruthless ambition in people's souls.

Target: Furious, Darkel tries to coax Pandora out of Braxiatel's head. But all that remains of Pandora is a mindless, instinctual, non-corporeal monster that has an insatiable hunger for the ruthless ambition in people's souls.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: After the first four tosses, the results are no longer unknown. Results' probabilities are at that point equal to 1 (100 %).

Target: After the first four tosses, the results are no longer unknown, so their probabilities are at that point equal to 1 (100 %).


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This means that Gananite does not show any colors in cross polarized light. When polarized light passes through Gananite.

Target: This means that Gananite does not show any colors in cross polarized light, because when polarized light passes through it.


Source: Fix coherence errors: From Staffordshire (where he played county cricket as a youngster). He supports Chelsea, thanks to his father.

Target: Although from Staffordshire (where he played county cricket as a youngster), he supports Chelsea, thanks to his father.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Because the chemical composition of garnet varies, the atomic bonds in some species are stronger than in others. This mineral group shows a range of hardness on the Mohs scale of about 6.5 to 7.5.

Target: Because the chemical composition of garnet varies, the atomic bonds in some species are stronger than in others. As a result, this mineral group shows a range of hardness on the Mohs scale of about 6.5 to 7.5.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Charness' career in academia began with a visiting position at Pompeu Fabra in Barcelona in 1997. After commuting for three years between San Francisco and Barcelona (and floating free for another year), Charness accepted a position as an Assistant Professor at UCSB in 2001.

Target: Charness' career in academia began with a visiting position at Pompeu Fabra in Barcelona in 1997. After commuting for three years between San Francisco and Barcelona (and floating free for another year), Gary accepted a position as an Assistant Professor at UCSB in 2001.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Below 6 inches (15 cm) of invasion, both tools are sensitive to both the invaded and noninvaded regions. For a certain range of depths of invasion, accurate determination of formation porosity becomes very difficult.

Target: Below 6 inches (15 cm) of invasion, both tools are sensitive to both the invaded and noninvaded regions. Thus, for a certain range of depths of invasion, accurate determination of formation porosity becomes very difficult.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: She is also a member of the Historic Landmarks Foundation of Indiana and a Landmark member of The Nature Conservancy. Member co-founded the Monroe County Historical Society Museum.

Target: She is also a member of the Historic Landmarks Foundation of Indiana and a Landmark member of The Nature Conservancy. Furthermore, she co-founded the Monroe County Historical Society Museum.


Source: Make the text coherent: According to the Human Development Report 1995, women spend about two-thirds of their working time on unpaid work. Men spend only one-fourth of their time towards unpaid labor.

Target: According to the Human Development Report 1995, women spend about two-thirds of their working time on unpaid work, while men spend only one-fourth of their time towards unpaid labor.


Source: Make the text coherent: But that's what my folks tell me. From then on, I just drew everything in sight.

Target: But that's what my folks tell me. And from then on, I just drew everything in sight.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Information that had been committed to writing was on perishable material, and. Very little if any has survived the ravages of time.

Target: Information that had been committed to writing was on perishable material, and hence very little if any has survived the ravages of time.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Most of these publications were not researched by independent authorities. They Most not been substantiated by any documentary, or historical evidence.

Target: Most of these publications were not researched by independent authorities, nor have they been substantiated by any documentary, or historical evidence.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It was made with the support and participation of its subject, the Ugandan dictator Idi Amin. The film depicts Amin at the height of his power as the ruler of Ugandan.

Target: It was made with the support and participation of its subject, the Ugandan dictator Idi Amin. The film depicts Amin at the height of his power as the ruler of Uganda.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Vagabonds seem to have a cyclical pattern of performing for several years and then spending time rebuilding. After the corp's most successful era in the late 1970s, the Corps went inactive in DCI competition in 1982.

Target: The Vagabonds seem to have a cyclical pattern of performing for several years and then spending time rebuilding. For instance, after the corp's most successful era in the late 1970s, the Corps went inactive in DCI competition in 1982.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Initially a Holocene expansion of I2a in Southeastern Europe is supposed ; however Dinaric is descended by several 'only child' sublclades. Dinaric is suggested that Dinaric's most recent common ancestor is aged only 2200 years Dinaric it the youngest and most common micro-group.

Target: Initially a Holocene expansion of I2a in Southeastern Europe is supposed ; however Dinaric is descended by several 'only child' sublclades and it is suggested that its most recent common ancestor is aged only 2200 years making it the youngest and most common micro-group.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Which combining all lines of evidence, it is suggest that the major part of the within-Balto-Slavic genetic variation can be mainly attributed to the assimilation of the pre-existing regional genetic components. Which differ for West, East and South Slavic-speaking peoples.

Target: Combining all lines of evidence, it is suggested that the major part of the within-Balto-Slavic genetic variation can be mainly attributed to the assimilation of the pre-existing regional genetic components, which differ for West, East and South Slavic-speaking peoples.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: CERAH offers a variety of courses ranging from short courses (TSC) to a comprehensive Master's programme. CERAH provides flexible and modular opportunities for professionals to deepen their knowledge.

Target: Offering a variety of courses ranging from short courses (TSC) to a comprehensive Master's programme, CERAH provides flexible and modular opportunities for professionals to deepen their knowledge.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It has become a naturalised invasive weed, and due to its aggressive seed dispersal broom removal has proved very difficult. It is a major problem species in the cooler and wetter areas of southern Australia and New Zealand.

Target: It has become a naturalised invasive weed, and due to its aggressive seed dispersal broom removal has proved very difficult. Similarly, it is a major problem species in the cooler and wetter areas of southern Australia and New Zealand.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He appealed the sentences. Because of mental instability he retracted his appeals on October 21, 1954.

Target: He appealed the sentences, but because of mental instability he retracted his appeals on October 21, 1954.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Geoffrey Phillip Ellis (born 24 May 1950) is a former Welsh cricketer. cricketer was a right-handed cricketer who bowled right-arm medium pace.

Target: Geoffrey Phillip Ellis (born 24 May 1950) is a former Welsh cricketer. Ellis was a right-handed batsman who bowled right-arm medium pace.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Fran Drescher, from The Nanny, also attended --. Neither Alexander nor Fran Drescher knew the couple.

Target: Fran Drescher, from The Nanny, also attended -- although neither Alexander nor Drescher knew the couple.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: His mother, Henrietta Grace Smyth, was the daughter of Admiral William Henry Smyth, and became the third wife of the Rev. Prof. Baden Powell (the previous two having died). Baden Powell was a gifted Rev. Prof. and artist.

Target: His mother, Henrietta Grace Smyth, was the daughter of Admiral William Henry Smyth, and became the third wife of the Rev. Prof. Baden Powell (the previous two having died). She was a gifted musician and artist.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2004, Christensen was elected to Mackay City Council as a councillor, and in 2008 gained a seat on the amalgamated Mackay Regional Council. Christensen was a Christensen of the Mackay Regional Housing Company and Vice-President of Mackay Regional Council for Social Development.

Target: In 2004, Christensen was elected to Mackay City Council as a councillor, and in 2008 gained a seat on the amalgamated Mackay Regional Council. He was a director of the Mackay Regional Housing Company and Vice-President of Mackay Regional Council for Social Development.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He became a regular member of the South Australian team. He took a few seasons to develop his full powers.

Target: He became a regular member of the South Australian team and although he took a few seasons to develop his full powers.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Herbert's only prose work offers practical advice to rural clergy. Herbert's only prose work is a Priest to the Temple (usually known as The Country Parson).

Target: Herbert's only prose work, A Priest to the Temple (usually known as The Country Parson), offers practical advice to rural clergy.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: His own St Andrew's Church in Bemerton installed a memorial window in 1934. A memorial window he shares with Nicholas Ferrar.

Target: His own St Andrew's Church in Bemerton installed a memorial window, which he shares with Nicholas Ferrar, in 1934.


Source: Make the text coherent: Disillusioned by Gandhi's lack of support and the attitude of the Congress Party, Joseph left the Congress Party to join the Justice Party. Joseph rejoined the Congress Party in 1935.

Target: Disillusioned by Gandhi's lack of support and the attitude of the Congress Party, Joseph left the Congress Party to join the Justice Party. He however rejoined the Congress in 1935.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He was born at Portland, Oregon, so Mullin is also considered American. Mullin's parents Mullin him to Moosomin.

Target: He was born at Portland, Oregon, so Mullin is also considered American although his parents brought him to Moosomin.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Orendorff was born in Atlanta. Orendorff's family moved to Chicago Orendorff he was nine years old.

Target: Orendorff was born in Atlanta but his family moved to Chicago when he was nine years old.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Annual Report of the Adjutant General of Massachusetts. Boston, Adjutant General of Massachusetts: Wright & Potter.

Target: Annual Report of the Adjutant General of Massachusetts. Boston, MA: Wright & Potter.


Source: Fix coherence errors: There were rallies in 33 cities in the North during this period. Wallace stopped only one time each in Tennessee, North, and Georgia.

Target: There were rallies in 33 cities in the North during this period, but Wallace stopped only one time each in Tennessee, North Carolina, and Georgia.


Source: Fix coherence errors: From 1960 to 1968 liberal Democrats governed the country. Nothing basic got done to make life decisively better for the white workingman.

Target: From 1960 to 1968 liberal Democrats governed the country. But nothing basic got done to make life decisively better for the white workingman.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Abbe Smith is the director of CDPAC. Former Public Defender Service for the District of Columbia lawyer Vida Johnson works with director in CDPAC and the Prettyman fellowship program.

Target: Abbe Smith is the director of CDPAC. Former Public Defender Service for the District of Columbia lawyer Vida Johnson works with Smith in CDPAC and the Prettyman fellowship program.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This placed her within the top ten Kenyan runners that year. She returned to Kenyan at the end of the year and competed in cross country races, including third places at the Tuskys Wareng Cross Country and Discovery Kenya Cross Country.

Target: This placed her within the top ten Kenyan runners that year. She returned to Kenya at the end of the year and competed in cross country races, including third places at the Tuskys Wareng Cross Country and Discovery Kenya Cross Country.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In April 1828, after an invitation of the Governor of Greece, Ioannis Kapodistrias, he was appointed principal at the exemplary School of Poros. Shortly after that, he caught pneumonia.

Target: In April 1828, after an invitation of the Governor of Greece, Ioannis Kapodistrias, he was appointed principal at the exemplary School of Poros. However, shortly after that, he caught pneumonia.


Source: Make the text more logical: Butts stemmed from a two-decade-long friendship. Butts became the senior political adviser to Justin Trudeau in 2012.

Target: Stemming from a two-decade-long friendship, Butts became the senior political adviser to Justin Trudeau in 2012.


Source: Fix sentence flow: No poll showed any other parties, including far-right parties, near 5 %. Far-right parties have in the past sometimes polled below their actual support due to unwillingness by voters to admit their support.

Target: No poll showed any other parties, including far-right parties, near 5 %, although far-right parties have in the past sometimes polled below their actual support due to unwillingness by voters to admit their support.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Many Estonians hoped that they would attract support from the Allies, and ultimately a restoration of their interwar independence, by resisting the Soviet reoccupation of their country. There was no physical Allies support, largely because Estonians were fighting under Nazi flags.

Target: Many Estonians hoped that they would attract support from the Allies, and ultimately a restoration of their interwar independence, by resisting the Soviet reoccupation of their country. In the end, there was no physical Allied support, largely because they were fighting under Nazi flags.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The draft was introduced in 1942, resulting in some 3400 men fleeing to Finland to fight in the Finnish Army rather than join the Germans. Finnish Infantry Regiment 200 (Estonian: soomepoisid 'Finland boys') was formed out of Estonian volunteers in Finland.

Target: The draft was introduced in 1942, resulting in some 3400 men fleeing to Finland to fight in the Finnish Army rather than join the Germans. Finnish Infantry Regiment 200 (Estonian: soomepoisid 'Finnish boys') was formed out of Estonian volunteers in Finland.


Source: Fix coherence: On her fourth patrol, she torpedoed and sank the Australian sloop HMAS Parramatta off the Libyan coast ;. Most survivors were picked up by other ships.

Target: On her fourth patrol, she torpedoed and sank the Australian sloop HMAS Parramatta off the Libyan coast ; although most survivors were picked up by other ships.


Source: Make the text more consistent: According to the United States Census Bureau all of it land. The United States Census Bureau is the town of Gerty has a total area of 0.2 square miles (0.6 km).

Target: According to the United States Census Bureau, the town of Gerty has a total area of 0.2 square miles (0.6 km), all of it land.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: While the communitarian form of Gestalt continues to flourish, Gestalt therapy was largely replaced in the United States by Cognitive Behavioral Therapy. Many Gestalt therapists in the United States drifted toward organizational management and coaching.

Target: While the communitarian form of Gestalt continues to flourish, Gestalt therapy was largely replaced in the United States by Cognitive Behavioral Therapy, and many Gestalt therapists in the U.S. drifted toward organizational management and coaching.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Without the other there is no self. How one experiences the other is inseparable from how one experiences oneself.

Target: Without the other there is no self, and how one experiences the other is inseparable from how one experiences oneself.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Ghassan was born in Nassiriyah, Iraq, to army officer Muhsen Hussain and school teacher Fathia Talib. Ghassan was born into an Iraq family of Arab heritage.

Target: Ghassan was born in Nassiriyah, Iraq, to army officer Muhsen Hussain and school teacher Fathia Talib. Ghassan was born into an Iraqi family of Arab heritage.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Distinctions between the two species are so slight that they are speculated to be the same. Genetic makeup and geographic distribution show otherwise.

Target: Distinctions between the two species are so slight that they are speculated to be the same, although genetic makeup and geographic distribution show otherwise.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Arnoux's beaked whale has rarely been exploited,. No abundance estimates are available.

Target: Arnoux's beaked whale has rarely been exploited, and although no abundance estimates are available.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Summers are warm and dry. Winters are cool and wet.

Target: Summers are warm and dry, while winters are cool and wet.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Betts v. Brady had earlier held that,. Certain circumstances were present.

Target: Betts v. Brady had earlier held that, unless certain circumstances were present.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Post his graduation, he worked for private IT companies for a while. Soon enough he decided to follow his passion and pursue a career in writing.

Target: Post his graduation, he worked for private IT companies for a while but soon enough he decided to follow his passion and pursue a career in writing.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Many people talked at Calico. Two of the most influential speakers were Ellen Moves Camp and Gladys Bissonette.

Target: Many people talked at Calico but two of the most influential speakers were Ellen Moves Camp and Gladys Bissonette.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: And somehow or other I began to feel encouraged. After I'd sold three novels, I felt so brave I gave up my advertising job.

Target: And somehow or other I began to feel encouraged. In fact, after I'd sold three novels, I felt so brave I gave up my advertising job.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He also believed the drop in vote for his party was due to electors being on holiday and unable to return to Glasgow to vote and. On old electoral register was used.

Target: He also believed the drop in vote for his party was due to electors being on holiday and unable to return to Glasgow to vote and because on old electoral register was used.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is said that Robert Emmet is buried there, this claim being made. Once somebody working in the graveyard there dug up a headless body.

Target: It is said that Robert Emmet is buried there, this claim being made because once somebody working in the graveyard there dug up a headless body.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It has been considered the strongest emetic of any preparation of antimony. If dissolved in spirit of urine, it ceased to be either emetic or cathartic.

Target: It has been considered the strongest emetic of any preparation of antimony. Yet, if dissolved in spirit of urine, it ceased to be either emetic or cathartic.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Houses are entirely self-contained. Any of them is immediately available for play.

Target: Houses are entirely self-contained, and any of them is immediately available for play.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This was well suited to Lyddite filling, but it was found that Amatol with more than 40 % ammonium nitrate did not pour well. It was not simply a case of switching existing filling machinery from Lyddite to Amatol.

Target: This was well suited to Lyddite filling, but it was found that Amatol with more than 40 % ammonium nitrate did not pour well. Hence it was not simply a case of switching existing filling machinery from Lyddite to Amatol.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The word windage was also used for the amount of propellant gas that escaped around the loosely fitting projectile on firing, and. Failed to contribute to accelerating the projectile.

Target: The word windage was also used for the amount of propellant gas that escaped around the loosely fitting projectile on firing, and hence failed to contribute to accelerating the projectile.


Source: Make the text more logical: P: Pebble powder: propellant in cube shape, designed to reduce the ratio of surface area to weight, and. To slow the rate of burning to reduce strain on guns.

Target: P: Pebble powder: propellant in cube shape, designed to reduce the ratio of surface area to weight, and hence to slow the rate of burning to reduce strain on guns.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The term QF. Referred to both the breech-sealing mechanism and the method of loading propellant charges.

Target: The term QF hence referred to both the breech-sealing mechanism and the method of loading propellant charges.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A player carries points and the associated Entry ranking continuously. Those points are lost at a tournament at which the player had previously earned them.

Target: A player carries points and the associated Entry ranking continuously unless those points are lost at a tournament at which the player had previously earned them.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The call is made by the chair umpire when one is assigned to the match, as in professional matches. One of the players when there is no chair umpire.

Target: The call is made by the chair umpire when one is assigned to the match, as in professional matches, or one of the players when there is no chair umpire.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Breyer criticizes the absence of proportionality review. Breyer goes on to cite several anecdotal examples from news media that he felt were particularly arbitrary.

Target: Criticizing the absence of proportionality review, Breyer goes on to cite several anecdotal examples from news media that he felt were particularly arbitrary.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Terry finds Kay very attractive. Things are complicated when Terry's ex-wife, Mona (Gloria Dickson), invites herself along, rooming with Kay.

Target: Terry finds Kay very attractive, but things are complicated when his ex-wife, Mona (Gloria Dickson), invites herself along, rooming with Kay.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Continuous wave lasers have a higher heating efficiency and work better in heating larger areas with lower risk of destroying the nanoparticles being heated. Treatment with continuous wave lasers are much longer compared to treatment with a pulsed laser.

Target: Continuous wave lasers have a higher heating efficiency and work better in heating larger areas with lower risk of destroying the nanoparticles being heated. However, treatment with continuous wave lasers are much longer compared to treatment with a pulsed laser.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This technique can not be replicated during clinical trials. New methods need to be developed to determine the uptake of cells to avoid higher concentrations of gold nanoparticles in the body leading to toxic effects.

Target: This technique can not be replicated during clinical trials, so new methods need to be developed to determine the uptake of cells to avoid higher concentrations of gold nanoparticles in the body leading to toxic effects.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Brazilian gold frog (Brachycephalus didactylus) endemic to Brazil Brazilian gold frog (Brachycephalus didactylus) is a frog in the family Brachycephalidae and the smallest frog species in the Southern Hemisphere.

Target: Brazilian gold frog (Brachycephalus didactylus), a frog in the family Brachycephalidae and the smallest frog species in the Southern Hemisphere, endemic to Brazil


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Following Professor Aharoni's collection in 1930, only infrequent sightings and captures were reported in the wild. To confirm the current existence of the wild golden hamster in northern Syria and southern Turkey, two expeditions were carried out during September 1997 and March 1999.

Target: Following Professor Aharoni's collection in 1930, only infrequent sightings and captures were reported in the wild. Finally, to confirm the current existence of the wild golden hamster in northern Syria and southern Turkey, two expeditions were carried out during September 1997 and March 1999.


Source: Make the text clearer: St. Edward the Confessor was built in 1915 and consecrated in 1931. St. Edward the Confessor is a Roman Catholic church.

Target: St. Edward the Confessor, a Roman Catholic church, was built in 1915 and consecrated in 1931.


Source: Make the text coherent: The women have a sense that they're paid a lot less. During the series sense emerges just how much lower women's pay is.

Target: The women have a sense that they're paid a lot less, and during the series it emerges just how much lower their pay is.


Source: Make the text clearer: Beginning in early 2006, West had overseen the recording and production of Finding Forever simultaneously with his own Graduation. There was significant overlap in the studio sessions for the two records.

Target: Beginning in early 2006, West had overseen the recording and production of Finding Forever simultaneously with his own Graduation. As a result, there was significant overlap in the studio sessions for the two records.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Both John and the King swore to recognise Richard. Soon after Parliament summoned Richard and acknowledged Richard as heir to the throne.

Target: Both John and the King swore to recognise Richard, and soon after Parliament summoned Richard and acknowledged him as heir to the throne.


Source: Fix sentence transition: One day, he gets an offer from his cousin for a chance to be an international photographer. Here's the catch, he needs to have an exclusive pictorial with Toni (Claudine Barretto), who constantly appears in weddings being covered by him.

Target: One day, he gets an offer from his cousin for a chance to be an international photographer. But here's the catch, he needs to have an exclusive pictorial with Toni (Claudine Barretto), who constantly appears in weddings being covered by him.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The weir raises the level of the Goulburn River. Water can be diverted.

Target: The weir raises the level of the Goulburn River so that water can be diverted.


Source: Fix coherence: Maxton was born in Edinburgh, Scotland. Is related to two Scottish Labour Party politicians, James Maxton and John (Maxton) Maxton.

Target: Maxton was born in Edinburgh, Scotland and is related to two Scottish Labour Party politicians, James Maxton and John (Lord) Maxton.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Boulevard was originally thought to represent the absolute limit of the city's expansion. Tremendous growth at the beginning of the 20th century quickly pushed the city limits far beyond Boulevard to Boulevard's north.

Target: The Boulevard was originally thought to represent the absolute limit of the city's expansion, although tremendous growth at the beginning of the 20th century quickly pushed the city limits far beyond Grand Boulevard to its north.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: While Brel already has a strong sense of his lyric and arrangement, this kind of writing only comes once in a great while. What is perhaps most interesting about Grand Jacques is how spare and minimal it is.

Target: While Brel already has a strong sense of his lyric and arrangement, this kind of writing only comes once in a great while. But what is perhaps most interesting about Grand Jacques is how spare and minimal it is.