Source: Make the text more coherent: Stronghold Legends has been made using a similar graphics engine as Stronghold 2-the game appeared to be a minor rehash of the previous game on the first inspection. Playing it revealed that the graphics were considerably improved and new music tracks had been added.

Target: Stronghold Legends has been made using a similar graphics engine as Stronghold 2-the game appeared to be a minor rehash of the previous game on the first inspection. However, playing it revealed that the graphics were considerably improved and new music tracks had been added.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This campaign includes various new special units for Vlad. Few appear on the enemies side.

Target: This campaign includes various new special units for Vlad but few appear on the enemies side.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The European and British versions were installed with standard headlight washers and rear fog lights. Other drivers could see European in inclement weather and at night.

Target: The European and British versions were installed with standard headlight washers and rear fog lights, so that other drivers could see them in inclement weather and at night.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: An estimated 8.8 million homeowners (nearly 10.8 % of the total) have zero or negative equity as of March 2008. Homeowners 'homes are worth less homeowners' their mortgage.

Target: An estimated 8.8 million homeowners (nearly 10.8 % of the total) have zero or negative equity as of March 2008, meaning their homes are worth less than their mortgage.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She beat Junri Namigata before losing to Ekaterina Bychkova. At the Copa Colsanitas, she lost to Edina Gallovits in the first round.

Target: She beat Junri Namigata before losing to Ekaterina Bychkova. Then, at the Copa Colsanitas, she lost to Edina Gallovits in the first round.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Still, many thought that the inexperienced Cowboys might panic under the pressure of playing in their first Super Bowl, and thus make a number of mistakes. Also, some thought Buffalo's no-huddle offense could eventually wear down and dominate Cowboys' young defense.

Target: Still, many thought that the inexperienced Cowboys might panic under the pressure of playing in their first Super Bowl, and thus make a number of mistakes. Also, some thought Buffalo's no-huddle offense could eventually wear down and dominate Dallas' young defense.


Source: Fix coherence errors: To make matters worse, Kelly also suffered strained knee ligaments during the loss to the Oilers and had to miss the first two playoff games. Their first opponent in the playoffs ended up being the Oilers.

Target: To make matters worse, Kelly also suffered strained knee ligaments during the loss to the Oilers and had to miss the first two playoff games. Furthermore, their first opponent in the playoffs ended up being the Oilers.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Dolphins were coming off a 31 -- 0 blowout playoff win over the San Diego Chargers. Buffalo's defense dominated the Dolphins' offense, intercepting quarterback Dan Marino twice, recovering three fumbles, and limiting Dolphins to just 33 rushing yards.

Target: The Dolphins were coming off a 31 -- 0 blowout playoff win over the San Diego Chargers. But Buffalo's defense dominated the Dolphins' offense, intercepting quarterback Dan Marino twice, recovering three fumbles, and limiting Miami to just 33 rushing yards.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Super Conflict is a turn-based strategy video game that was released for the Super NES. Super Conflict is the strategy video game to Conflict for the NES.

Target: Super Conflict is a turn-based strategy video game that was released for the Super NES. It is the sequel to Conflict for the NES.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Chef Leo witnesses this and captures Sam. Chef Chef has been trying to find a way to cure Sam's cancer by gaining the abilities of different animals, and now he hopes to Sam Sam's healing power by eating him.

Target: Chef Leo witnesses this and captures Sam. Chef Leo has been trying to find a way to cure his cancer by gaining the abilities of different animals, and now he hopes to acquire Sam's healing power by eating him.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Surabaya Muda (en: Young Surabaya) is an Indonesian football club based in Surabaya, East Java. Club played in Liga 3 (Indonesian).

Target: Surabaya Muda (en: Young Surabaya) is an Indonesian football club based in Surabaya, East Java. Club played in Liga 3 (Indonesia).


Source: Fix sentence flow: When Tabinshwehti and his Burmese army arrived at the walled town of Kanchanaburi, they found it deserted. The King of Burmese then continued his march eastward, capturing the villages of Ban Thuan, Kaphan Tru and Chorakhe Sam Phan.

Target: When Tabinshwehti and his Burmese army arrived at the walled town of Kanchanaburi, they found it deserted. The King of Burma then continued his march eastward, capturing the villages of Ban Thuan, Kaphan Tru and Chorakhe Sam Phan.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: After a lesson about responsibility around the campsite, they pulled together and won the Reward Challenge for bathroom and supplies, and chose to exile Terry. They believed Terry to be Terry's team's Terry.

Target: After a lesson about responsibility around the campsite, they pulled together and won the Reward Challenge for bathroom and supplies, and chose to exile Terry, because they believed him to be his team's leader.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Cheap natural gas has also led to Ethanol fuel produced with a net EROEI of less than 1. Figures in this area are controversial because methods to measure EROEI are in debate.

Target: Cheap natural gas has also led to Ethanol fuel produced with a net EROEI of less than 1, although figures in this area are controversial because methods to measure EROEI are in debate.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Whole earth impacts are beginning to be considered. Growth in goods and services is consistently outpacing gains in efficiency.

Target: Whole earth impacts are beginning to be considered because growth in goods and services is consistently outpacing gains in efficiency.


Source: Make the text more logical: Out of medal contention. Sweden beat both Germany and Great Britain to finish in fifth place, the highest placed European team and Sweden's best Paralympic placing to date.

Target: Although out of medal contention, Sweden beat both Germany and Great Britain to finish in fifth place, the highest placed European team and Sweden's best Paralympic placing to date.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: How is believed to derive from the Old Norse word haugr. Hill or mound.

Target: How is believed to derive from the Old Norse word haugr meaning hill or mound.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Stephen McNally was originally supposed to play the American pilot, while Paul Christian was to play an Israeli leader. Paul Christian had to drop out due to an eye infection, Stephen McNally took over Stephen McNally's role, and Dana Andrews Stephen McNally McNally's part.

Target: Stephen McNally was originally supposed to play the American pilot, while Paul Christian was to play an Israeli leader. However Christian had to drop out due to an eye infection, McNally took over his role, and Dana Andrews played McNally's part.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He gained a commission in the Royal Indian Navy. He participated as a naval officer during World War II with the British and later decided to become a Pakistani citizen following the partition of India by the United Kingdom in 1947.

Target: Gaining a commission in the Royal Indian Navy, he participated as a naval officer during World War II with the British and later decided to become a Pakistani citizen following the partition of India by the United Kingdom in 1947.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In most Germanic languages, lax vowels can occur only in closed syllables. These vowels are also called checked vowels, as opposed to the tense vowels that are called free vowels because they can occur even in open syllables.

Target: In most Germanic languages, lax vowels can occur only in closed syllables. Therefore, these vowels are also called checked vowels, as opposed to the tense vowels that are called free vowels because they can occur even in open syllables.


Source: Make the text clearer: After making a deal with Myer, T.M. Lewin opened T.M.'s first store on Australian soil on January 30, 2012 and now operates as a brand within Myer MYER department stores across Australia.

Target: After making a deal with Myer, T.M. Lewin opened its first store on Australian soil on January 30, 2012 and now operates as a brand within several MYER department stores across Australia.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Which premiering on February 1, 1992, the two-hour comedy block of I Loved Saturday Night coincided with The Young Riders. Which had been airing Saturdays in the 9: 00 p.m. Eastern hour, going on a three-month hiatus.

Target: Premiering on February 1, 1992, the two-hour comedy block of I Love Saturday Night coincided with The Young Riders, which had been airing Saturdays in the 9: 00 p.m. Eastern hour, going on a three-month hiatus.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In many physics textbooks, the event is presented as an example of elementary forced resonance ; the bridge collapsed. Normal speed winds produced aeroelastic flutter that matched the bridge's natural frequency.

Target: In many physics textbooks, the event is presented as an example of elementary forced resonance ; the bridge collapsed because normal speed winds produced aeroelastic flutter that matched the bridge's natural frequency.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Othmar Ammann wrote: Othmar Ammann is a leading bridge designer and member of the Federal Works Agency Commission investigating the collapse of the Tacoma Narrows Bridge.

Target: Othmar Ammann, a leading bridge designer and member of the Federal Works Agency Commission investigating the collapse of the Tacoma Narrows Bridge, wrote :


Source: Make the text more consistent: Tacpac uses specially composed music that matches the texture of the object for each activity. Those who are receiving Tacpac have an aligned experience.

Target: Tacpac uses specially composed music that matches the texture of the object for each activity so that those who are receiving Tacpac have an aligned experience.


Source: Make the text clearer: Federal Baseball Club v. National League (1922): In a unanimous decision written by Justice Holmes, the court held that Major League Baseball operations did not qualify as interstate commerce and. That the league was exempt from the Sherman Antitrust Act.

Target: Federal Baseball Club v. National League (1922): In a unanimous decision written by Justice Holmes, the court held that Major League Baseball operations did not qualify as interstate commerce and hence that the league was exempt from the Sherman Antitrust Act.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: After the round-robin section was finished, the top team qualified straight to the final match. Teams placed second and third were put in a semifinal match to determine the other finalist.

Target: After the round-robin section was finished, the top team qualified straight to the final match, while teams placed second and third were put in a semifinal match to determine the other finalist.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: This was formerly the Consulate-General of the Republic of China. Owing to financial considerations and the city's proximity to Pretoria, it was closed in 2009.

Target: This was formerly the Consulate-General of the Republic of China. However, owing to financial considerations and the city's proximity to Pretoria, it was closed in 2009.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The system carried its first 100 million passengers by August 2010. Over 200 million passengers had taken the system by December 2012., followed by 400 million by December 2016.

Target: The system carried its first 100 million passengers by August 2010 and over 200 million passengers had taken the system by December 2012., followed by 400 million by December 2016.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: When the first syllable is reduplicated, the vowel is omitted, forming an initial geminate consonant. Among older speakers, the syllable reduplication is retained.

Target: When the first syllable is reduplicated, the vowel is omitted, forming an initial geminate consonant. However, among older speakers, the syllable reduplication is retained.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Alternatively, philosophical Taoism regards the Tao as a non-religious concept ; it is not a deity to be worshiped. It Taoism not a mystical Absolute in the religious sense of the Hindu Brahman.

Target: Alternatively, philosophical Taoism regards the Tao as a non-religious concept ; it is not a deity to be worshiped, nor is it a mystical Absolute in the religious sense of the Hindu Brahman.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Jump up ^ Zata's horoscope section (Zata 1960: 69) says he died in his 47th year. Horoscope section is a typographical horoscope section.

Target: Jump up ^ Zata's horoscope section (Zata 1960: 69) says he died in his 47th year but it is a typographical error.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Taurine is involved in a number of crucial physiological processes. Taurine's role in processes processes is not clearly understood and the influence of high taurine doses on processes processes is uncertain.

Target: Taurine is involved in a number of crucial physiological processes. However, its role in these processes is not clearly understood and the influence of high taurine doses on these processes is uncertain.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The tax amounts to 0.15 or 0.3 percent depending on whether Swiss or foreign securities are traded. An insurance premiums tax of 5 or 2.5 percent is levied on certain insurance premiums.

Target: The tax amounts to 0.15 or 0.3 percent depending on whether Swiss or foreign securities are traded. Finally, an insurance premiums tax of 5 or 2.5 percent is levied on certain insurance premiums.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Past research has shown that the range extended north to Delaware. Researchers have found a natural forest on the Cape May Peninsula in Southeastern New Jersey.

Target: Past research has shown that the range extended north to Delaware, but researchers have found a natural forest on the Cape May Peninsula in Southeastern New Jersey.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: However, Peru subsequently lost to Brazil, Poland, and Argentina. Cubillas played in all six Peru matches in the tournament.

Target: However, Peru subsequently lost to Brazil, Poland, and Argentina, although Cubillas played in all six Peruvian matches in the tournament.


Source: Fix coherence errors: None of the Nesser brothers attended college. In 1909, Texas A&M coach Charley Moran, fearing a loss to Texas, offered to pay Nesser for Nesser's help.

Target: None of the Nesser brothers attended college. However, in 1909, Texas A&M coach Charley Moran, fearing a loss to Texas, offered to pay Ted for his help.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He stepped down as chairman in 1996. He remained president until his death in 2005.

Target: Stepping down as chairman in 1996, he remained president until his death in 2005.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Some mothers and fathers attempt to let their children to choose their potential loved ones. About 70 % of decisions regarding marriage of children are made by mothers' parents.

Target: Some mothers and fathers attempt to let their children to choose their potential loved ones. However, about 70 % of decisions regarding marriage of children are made by their parents.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: She transitioned into music. She did A&R and publicist work for Virgin Records, and worked for MerchDirect.

Target: Transitioning into music, she did A&R and publicist work for Virgin Records, and worked for MerchDirect.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They found entering the long distance market much more appealing than promoting interactive TV. Only Pacific Bell successfully launched a service, with Bell Atlantic and NYNEX (who had merged) not having established systems outside test markets.

Target: They found entering the long distance market much more appealing than promoting interactive TV. In the end, only Pacific Bell successfully launched a service, with Bell Atlantic and NYNEX (who had merged) not having established systems outside test markets.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This was permitted. Until the end of 1956 the Saarland was not part of the Federal Republic of Germany and therefore not subject to German broadcast laws.

Target: This was permitted, because until the end of 1956 the Saarland was not part of the Federal Republic of Germany and therefore not subject to German broadcast laws.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: When tepetates lie under the soil, they present a risk for erosion and landslides. Water runs off laterally.

Target: When tepetates lie under the soil, they present a risk for erosion and landslides, because water runs off laterally.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The attacks generally targeted and successfully wounded people,. Earlier bombings targeted buildings.

Target: The attacks generally targeted and successfully wounded people, whereas earlier bombings targeted buildings.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Four major attacks were acknowledged. Unofficial sources reported more.

Target: Four major attacks were acknowledged, although unofficial sources reported more.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Touch mode has no timer. Tetriminoes do not fall from the top.

Target: Touch mode has no timer, nor do Tetriminoes fall from the top.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Samuel Wilberforce, Bishop of Oxford also opposed Peers' proposal. Peers demolished the old church, and in 1855 the new one was completed and Bishop consecrated it.

Target: Samuel Wilberforce, Bishop of Oxford also opposed Peers' proposal. Nevertheless Peers demolished the old church, and in 1855 the new one was completed and Bishop Wilberforce consecrated it.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: There are however several cases where more than one district shares the same third digit. Some muban have the postcode of a neighboring subdistrict.

Target: There are however several cases where more than one district shares the same third digit, or some muban have the postcode of a neighboring subdistrict.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is believed that there was one branch separately grew from the pot, was planted at that village to remember the incident. Some believe that this may be the first Sri Maha Bhodi plant in Sri Lanka.

Target: It is believed that there was one branch separately grew from the pot, was planted at that village to remember the incident. Hence, some believe that this may be the first Sri Maha Bhodi plant in Sri Lanka.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: They are the chaotic forces that are unleashed when one of the Sephirot is not in balance with the others. Although Keter is concerned with unity, implicit in its existence is the concept of duality.

Target: They are the chaotic forces that are unleashed when one of the Sephirot is not in balance with the others. Therefore, although Keter is concerned with unity, implicit in its existence is the concept of duality.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Ego does not know how he came to the house. Why, he only knows that there is a reason for him to be there that he hasn't figured out yet.

Target: Ego does not know how he came to the house, or why, he only knows that there is a reason for him to be there that he hasn't figured out yet.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Wilson published a sequel in 1936. A sequel is the Law and the McLaughlins.

Target: Wilson published a sequel, The Law and the McLaughlins, in 1936.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The episode also differs in that rather than remembering what she is and accepting her fate as Marsha did in the original, the other mannequins force Marsha back into her true form. Another mannequin can take Marsha's 's place.

Target: The episode also differs in that rather than remembering what she is and accepting her fate as Marsha did in the original, the other mannequins force Marsha back into her true form so that another mannequin can take her place.


Source: Make the text clearer: The two artists have collaborated in the past. The video mentions artists' previous work and artists they met personally.

Target: The two artists have collaborated in the past, and the video mentions their previous work and how they met personally.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Lutz dons a gas mask. Lutz attempts to kill the creature with poison gas but it seems unfazed by the poisonous fumes and tosses Lutz around like a ragdoll.

Target: Donning a gas mask, Lutz attempts to kill the creature with poison gas but it seems unfazed by the poisonous fumes and tosses Lutz around like a ragdoll.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Their intelligence attracts admiration, but in all practical matters they need helping out. Each group admires the qualities of the other.

Target: Their intelligence attracts admiration, but in all practical matters they need helping out. Nevertheless, each group admires the qualities of the other.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Blackburns had not committed a Canadian crime. Slavery had just been made illegal by the Slavery Abolition Act of 1833.

Target: The Blackburns had not committed a Canadian crime because slavery had just been made illegal by the Slavery Abolition Act of 1833.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He was once a member of a wild west gang ; now he is just a childlike drunk residing outside of town. Even though Scratchy is a symbol of a bygone era, member has been changed.

Target: He was once a member of a wild west gang ; now he is just a childlike drunk residing outside of town. Moreover, even though Scratchy is a symbol of a bygone era, he has been changed.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The novel has been described as an allegory, where Solon is the figure of a saint. It has been suggested that Solon was informed by Theodore Dreiser's own father, John Paul Dreiser.

Target: The novel has been described as an allegory, where Solon is the figure of a saint. Moreover, it has been suggested that Solon Barnes was informed by Theodore Dreiser's own father, John Paul Dreiser.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In the LDS faith, a temple differs from an ordinary church meetinghouse as it is used for special forms of worship. On February 18, 1981, LDS president Spencer W. Kimball broke ground and dedicated the land for the new temple.

Target: In the LDS faith, a temple differs from an ordinary church meetinghouse as it is used for special forms of worship. On February 18, 1981, LDS Church president Spencer W. Kimball broke ground and dedicated the land for the new temple.


Source: Make the text more consistent: As most Mormons foreign to Tonga were American, they were perceived as possible tools of international leverage in these struggles. The Queen and Tungi also had connections to the other major churches in Tonga at the time, which were opposed to the Mormons presence.

Target: As most Mormons foreign to Tonga were American, they were perceived as possible tools of international leverage in these struggles. The Queen and Tungi also had connections to the other major churches in Tonga at the time, which were opposed to the Mormon presence.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In early 1967, the band brought in Kim Gardner as their new bassist. Former bassist Bob Garner moved into the lead vocal slot in February 1967, leaving Kenny Pickett out of the group, at least for the time being.

Target: In early 1967, the band brought in Kim Gardner as their new bassist, and former bassist Bob Garner moved into the lead vocal slot in February 1967, leaving Kenny Pickett out of the group, at least for the time being.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: During the night, the Professor managed to escape the ship with a lifeboat. Ship is a ship to Olrik, who pulled out the oars and the food.

Target: During the night, the Professor managed to escape the ship with a lifeboat, but it is a trap to Olrik, who pulled out the oars and the food.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A Turkish smuggler agrees to take them on his old boat. Once at sea, they have the unpleasant surprise to find Olrik.

Target: A Turkish smuggler agrees to take them on his old boat but once at sea, they have the unpleasant surprise to find Olrik.


Source: Make the text more logical: You're the one that started the Internet. one're the one that got me on the Internet.

Target: You're the one that started the Internet. You're the one that got me on the Internet.


Source: Make the text more coherent: She forgets about Hong. She starts liking Jung Yoon-do but again feels inferior to Hye Jung due to Yoon-do's attraction towards Hye-jung.

Target: Forgetting about Hong, she starts liking Jung Yoon-do but again feels inferior to Hye Jung due to Yoon-do's attraction towards Hye-jung.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Gaius reads a letter from Merlin's mother. Gaius realises that the boy was sent to Camelot for protection.

Target: Reading a letter from Merlin's mother, Gaius realises that the boy was sent to Camelot for protection.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Appleton-Century-Crofts published The Floating Opera in 1956. Sales were not strong enough to encourage the publisher to pick up Barth's next offering, which was felt to be too similar to the first book.

Target: Appleton-Century-Crofts published The Floating Opera in 1956, but sales were not strong enough to encourage the publisher to pick up Barth's next offering, which was felt to be too similar to the first book.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The novel was generally very well received by critics. Questions were raised regarding the historical accuracy of some details.

Target: The novel was generally very well received by critics, although questions were raised regarding the historical accuracy of some details.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In 1994 -- 95, Earl Poole Ball was away quite a lot. At time, the band was a three-piece band, bringing back the old Tennessee Three days.

Target: In 1994 -- 95, Earl Poole Ball was away quite a lot, so at time, the band was a three-piece band, bringing back the old Tennessee Three days.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Thus, 19 of the 25 songs feature the Dwight Twilley Band. Six are solo Dwight Twilley numbers.

Target: Thus, 19 of the 25 songs feature the Dwight Twilley Band, while six are solo Dwight Twilley numbers.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The film was intended to be released theatrically on September 5, 2014, by Open Road Films. Financial difficulties with the production company Worldview Entertainment caused Open Road Films to pull it from its original release.

Target: The film was intended to be released theatrically on September 5, 2014, by Open Road Films. However, financial difficulties with the production company Worldview Entertainment caused Open Road to pull it from its original release.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Maturin waits for the launch. Maturin meets the other British agent, Professor Graham, who has shot himself in the foot.

Target: Waiting for the launch, Maturin meets the other British agent, Professor Graham, who has shot himself in the foot.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He was prisoner of war with Aubrey and Maturin in Paris, and is now good friends with them in England. Aubrey is a frequent Aubrey at the house on Half Moon Street, where Diana Villiers hosts social events ; introduced in The Surgeon's Mate.

Target: He was prisoner of war with Aubrey and Maturin in Paris, and is now good friends with them in England. He is a frequent guest at the house on Half Moon Street, where Diana Villiers hosts social events ; introduced in The Surgeon's Mate.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jack falls asleep in a deck chair. Jack dreams the heavyset woman (Maxine Gates) beside him is Marilyn Monroe and that she finds him irresistible.

Target: Falling asleep in a deck chair, Jack dreams the heavyset woman (Maxine Gates) beside him is Marilyn Monroe and that she finds him irresistible.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This company then attempt to stop Guy by using characters from jokes (e.g. an Englishman, Irishman and Scotsman), and stereotypes of character groups. Company frame Guy for Guy's neighbor's murder, at which Guy Guy goes into hiding.

Target: This company then attempt to stop Guy by using characters from jokes (e.g. an Englishman, Irishman and Scotsman), and stereotypes of character groups. Eventually, they frame him for his neighbor's murder, at which point Guy goes into hiding.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Joan takes charge of the group and leads them out to abduct and surgically castrate various men whom have committed rape and got away with it. Each of the ladies personal problems soon get in the way.

Target: Joan takes charge of the group and leads them out to abduct and surgically castrate various men whom have committed rape and got away with it. But each of the ladies personal problems soon get in the way.


Source: Fix sentence flow: For God loved the world so much that He gave his only Son. Anyone who believes in God shall not perish but have eternal life.

Target: For God loved the world so much that He gave his only Son so that anyone who believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Chandos often feels he is on the brink of recovery as thoughts begin to form in his mind. Like the epiphanies Chandos are soon lost in his inability to write.

Target: Chandos often feels he is on the brink of recovery as thoughts begin to form in his mind. But like the epiphanies they are soon lost in his inability to write.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Hero recovers a long, dormant love and sorrow at the sight of the fair girl. Hero sets out to war against the demon.

Target: Recovering a long, dormant love and sorrow at the sight of the fair girl, Hero sets out to war against the demon.


Source: Make the text coherent: They have an extremely heightened libido. Their bodies continually blunt drugs that give humans pleasure.

Target: They have an extremely heightened libido. Moreover, their bodies continually blunt drugs that give humans pleasure.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: June opens up Daniel's closet. June finds Ellie's ring and photos, realizing that he is her photographer and thus her killer.

Target: Opening up Daniel's closet, June finds Ellie's ring and photos, realizing that he is her photographer and thus her killer.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: But did not sell well enough to get Melville out of his financial straits, probably. Short fiction for magazines had little appeal to bookbuyers.

Target: But did not sell well enough to get Melville out of his financial straits, probably because short fiction for magazines had little appeal to bookbuyers.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: While trying to rescue Duke as he follows the Animal Control van, Max is attacked by Snowball who tries to kill him. When Max's gang is captured Snowball Snowball realizes that he Max Max must work together to rescue them.

Target: While trying to rescue Duke as he follows the Animal Control van, Max is attacked by Snowball who tries to kill him. However, when his gang is captured, Snowball realizes that he and Max must work together to rescue them.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Hazlitt differs with Cobbett. Hazlitt does not believe that Wilberforce is a true hypocrite.

Target: Differing with Cobbett, Hazlitt does not believe that Wilberforce is a true hypocrite.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He married a second time. More than ever in need of money, he was forced to churn out article after article for the periodical press.

Target: He married a second time. Consequently, more than ever in need of money, he was forced to churn out article after article for the periodical press.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It marks the final directorial effort of Lewis Seiler. It dramatizes the true story of a young Santa Ana, California, housewife who became a volunteer undercover narcotics agent in the 1950s.

Target: Marking the final directorial effort of Lewis Seiler, it dramatizes the true story of a young Santa Ana, California, housewife who became a volunteer undercover narcotics agent in the 1950s.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: With all paths in front of them, there are just a few major roadblocks: The Armory's magically sealed shut wherein Yvette could be wandering anywhere. Someone has to go get inside the Armory to get The Everlasting's body out.

Target: With all paths in front of them, there are just a few major roadblocks: The Armory's magically sealed shut wherein Yvette could be wandering anywhere and someone has to go get inside the Armory to get The Everlasting's body out.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He developed as a talented painter. Suffering from mental instability.

Target: He developed as a talented painter although suffering from mental instability.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: When the fins stand too close together, the air in between can become almost the same temperature as the fins, so that thermal transmission will not occur. More fins do not necessarily lead to better cooling performance.

Target: When the fins stand too close together, the air in between can become almost the same temperature as the fins, so that thermal transmission will not occur. Therefore, more fins do not necessarily lead to better cooling performance.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Alphonse Persico was convicted in 2007 of ordering Cutolo's murder. Prosecutors had lacked sufficient evidence then to indict Gioeli.

Target: Although Alphonse Persico was convicted in 2007 of ordering Cutolo's murder, prosecutors had lacked sufficient evidence then to indict Gioeli.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Shortly after arrival in Japan, he completed on-the-job training for flight engineer duties. Due to low unit manning, he performed both flight engineer and hydraulic specialist duties.

Target: Shortly after arrival in Japan, he completed on-the-job training for flight engineer duties. Then, due to low unit manning, he performed both flight engineer and hydraulic specialist duties.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Tilling and TBAT continued to trade successfully. Internal disagreements resulted in TBAT being wound up in 1942.

Target: Tilling and TBAT continued to trade successfully, but internal disagreements resulted in TBAT being wound up in 1942.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Capper urged his men into a final assault. Capper stayed behind to view the field and was struck by a sniper's bullet fired from houses along the line of advance which were thought to have been abandoned.

Target: Urging his men into a final assault, Capper stayed behind to view the field and was struck by a sniper's bullet fired from houses along the line of advance which were thought to have been abandoned.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints believe in this commandment as written in Exodus 20. This commandment has been repeated in the The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints Scriptures such as the Book of Mormon and in Doctrine and Covenants.

Target: Members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints believe in this commandment as written in Exodus 20. This commandment has been repeated in the LDS Scriptures such as the Book of Mormon and in Doctrine and Covenants.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: DeNora moved to Exeter in 1992. DeNora was DeNora of the European Sociological Association Network on Sociology of the Arts from 1999 -- 2001 and is a Vice President of the International Sociological Association Research Committee on Sociology of the Arts.

Target: DeNora moved to Exeter in 1992. DeNora was Chair of the European Sociological Association Network on Sociology of the Arts from 1999 -- 2001 and is a Vice President of the International Sociological Association Research Committee on Sociology of the Arts.


Source: Make the text more logical: She flew away in the Avengers 'Quinjet, intending to report back to headquarters on the Overlords' plans. Severe loss of blood caused her to lose consciousness and crash land in Arnhem Land, an Aboriginal territory in northern Australia.

Target: She flew away in the Avengers 'Quinjet, intending to report back to headquarters on the Overlords' plans, but severe loss of blood caused her to lose consciousness and crash land in Arnhem Land, an Aboriginal territory in northern Australia.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: According to authorities from the self-styled Luhansk People's Republic, the Ukrainian military shelled the village of Lomuvatka, in the outskirts of Brianka during the morning. Three houses were heavily damaged and the area was left without power.

Target: According to authorities from the self-styled Luhansk People's Republic, the Ukrainian military shelled the village of Lomuvatka, in the outskirts of Brianka during the morning. As a result, three houses were heavily damaged and the area was left without power.


Source: Make the text clearer: In the region of Mariupol, the separatists fired rocket launchers and 82 mm mortars at Vodiane. One Ukrainian serviceman was wounded and another injured.

Target: In the region of Mariupol, the separatists fired rocket launchers and 82 mm mortars at Vodiane. As a result, one Ukrainian serviceman was wounded and another injured.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Krishnadevaraya accused Timmarusu for this crime. Krishnadevaraya had the entire family of the ministers blinded.

Target: Accusing Timmarusu for this crime, Krishnadevaraya had the entire family of the ministers blinded.


Source: Make the text clearer: Plus, a mere click on an icon. You're connected to TinyTIM itself!

Target: Plus, a mere click on an icon, and you're connected to TinyTIM itself!


Source: Fix coherence: To improve the stalling behaviour, it had a strengthened wing with washout at the tips. This part of the wing should not stall first.

Target: To improve the stalling behaviour, it had a strengthened wing with washout at the tips, so that this part of the wing should not stall first.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Near-circular, highly inclined orbits can thus become very eccentric in exchange for lower inclination. Such a mechanism can produce sungrazing comets, because a large eccentricity with a constant semimajor axis results in a small perihelion.

Target: Near-circular, highly inclined orbits can thus become very eccentric in exchange for lower inclination. For example, such a mechanism can produce sungrazing comets, because a large eccentricity with a constant semimajor axis results in a small perihelion.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: When the series started the ending was already planned. It was not until the Tokyo Tower chapter that Clamp set the general atmosphere with the pilot being perceived as a comedy.

Target: Although when the series started the ending was already planned, it was not until the Tokyo Tower chapter that Clamp set the general atmosphere with the pilot being perceived as a comedy.


Source: Fix coherence: He passed a medical in Sheffield. History repeated itself and the papers arrived the day after his departure for his team's training camp in Narbonne in southern France.

Target: He passed a medical in Sheffield, but history repeated itself and the papers arrived the day after his departure for his team's training camp in Narbonne in southern France.


Source: Make the text coherent: Roberts based his company in England to take advantage of the Formula 1 industry. Roberts enlisted Tom Walkinshaw Racing to help develop a three-cylinder two-stroke engine.

Target: Basing his company in England to take advantage of the Formula 1 industry, Roberts enlisted Tom Walkinshaw Racing to help develop a three-cylinder two-stroke engine.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: According to Badauni, he was able to capture the fort. Historian Kishori Saran Lal believes this to be inaccurate, as historical evidence suggests that the fort remained under Tomara rule in the later years.

Target: According to Badauni, he was able to capture the fort. However, historian Kishori Saran Lal believes this to be inaccurate, as historical evidence suggests that the fort remained under Tomara rule in the later years.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: His successor Virama had become the ruler of Gwalior by 1402. According to Syed Fazl Ali, Uddharana ruled Gwalior for 5 years.

Target: His successor Virama had become the ruler of Gwalior by 1402, and according to Syed Fazl Ali, Uddharana ruled Gwalior for 5 years.


Source: Make the text clearer: Nathan fulfilled a promise he made to Bear Bryant in 1979. Nathan returned to finish his degree at Alabama in 2015.

Target: Fulfilling a promise he made to Bear Bryant in 1979, Nathan returned to finish his degree at Alabama in 2015.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Robinson is honorary president of the Young Archaeologists' Club of the Council for British Archaeology. president has shown Robinson's support for the Burma Campaign UK, an NGO that aims to highlight human rights violations in Myanmar under the State Peace and Development Council.

Target: Robinson is honorary president of the Young Archaeologists' Club of the Council for British Archaeology. Robinson has shown his support for the Burma Campaign UK, an NGO that aims to highlight human rights violations in Myanmar under the State Peace and Development Council.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Locals buried him at the site of his death. Traces of the grave no longer remain.

Target: Locals buried him at the site of his death, although traces of the grave no longer remain.


Source: Make the text clearer: Sometimes caries may be directly visible. Other methods of detection such as X-rays are used for less visible areas of teeth and to judge the extent of destruction.

Target: Sometimes caries may be directly visible. However other methods of detection such as X-rays are used for less visible areas of teeth and to judge the extent of destruction.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Diastereotopic groups also arise in achiral molecules. Any one pair of CH hydrogens in 3-pentanol (Figure 1) are diastereotopic, as the two CH carbons are enantiotopic.

Target: Diastereotopic groups also arise in achiral molecules. For instance, any one pair of CH hydrogens in 3-pentanol (Figure 1) are diastereotopic, as the two CH carbons are enantiotopic.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The toponym Torello most likely derives from the Latin words Turellum or Taurellus, respectively. Small tower and small bull.

Target: The toponym Torello most likely derives from the Latin words Turellum or Taurellus, respectively meaning small tower and small bull.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This loop is not currently used by buses. Up to the mid-1980s.

Target: This loop is not currently used by buses, although up to the mid-1980s.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: For example, a self-employed U.S. citizen living in Sweden will be covered by the Swedish social security system. Exceptions do exist with regards to this part of the system.

Target: For example, a self-employed U.S. citizen living in Sweden will be covered by the Swedish social security system. However, exceptions do exist with regards to this part of the system.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Trabecular meshwork is the main site of resistance for aqueous outflow. Most glaucoma surgeries work by either removing the site or bypassing that.

Target: Trabecular meshwork is the main site of resistance for aqueous outflow. Hence most glaucoma surgeries work by either removing the trabecular meshwork or bypassing that.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 1991-TradeStation is launched. TradeStation is the company's flagship product.

Target: 1991-TradeStation, the company's flagship product, is launched.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It comes with a large number of pre-defined indicators, strategy components, and analysis tools. Individuals can modify and customize existing indicators and strategies, as well as create their own indicators and strategies using TradeStation's proprietary object-oriented EasyLanguage programming language.

Target: Although it comes with a large number of pre-defined indicators, strategy components, and analysis tools, individuals can modify and customize existing indicators and strategies, as well as create their own indicators and strategies using TradeStation's proprietary object-oriented EasyLanguage programming language.


Source: Make the text coherent: He twice went over open ground under heavy artillery and machine-gun fire to obtain ammunition and. Suffering from loss of blood.

Target: He twice went over open ground under heavy artillery and machine-gun fire to obtain ammunition and, although suffering from loss of blood.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Vaughan married Grace Seeley in 1914. Grace Seeley is a civic leader and public health worker.

Target: Vaughan married Grace Seeley, a civic leader and public health worker, in 1914.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This is seen by writers Christopher Knight and Robert Lomas as being compelling evidence for the theory that Sinclair had sailed to America. Scholars have said the plants are simply stylised depictions of common European plants.

Target: This is seen by writers Christopher Knight and Robert Lomas as being compelling evidence for the theory that Sinclair had sailed to America, although scholars have said the plants are simply stylised depictions of common European plants.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The formation of Herald began with the founding of The Korea Herald in 1953. The Korea Herald is a daily English-language newspaper.

Target: The formation of Herald began with the founding of The Korea Herald, a daily English-language newspaper, in 1953.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Successful in Spanish Fort. Joe knew that the business environment in Nocona would be more promising due to the newly constructed Missouri-Kansas-Texas railway and expanded market capacity.

Target: Although successful in Spanish Fort, Joe knew that the business environment in Nocona would be more promising due to the newly constructed Missouri-Kansas-Texas railway and expanded market capacity.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: A female can be identified from male by her six abdominal segments,. Males have eight.

Target: A female can be identified from male by her six abdominal segments, whereas males have eight.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Willow Creek and Hillsboro transit centers (TC) are the main hubs of the public transit system. Seven other MAX stations provide varying degrees of bus interconnection.

Target: The Willow Creek and Hillsboro transit centers (TC) are the main hubs of the public transit system, although seven other MAX stations provide varying degrees of bus interconnection.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Sheikha Hind is the paternal granddaughter of Juma bin Maktoum Al Maktoum, brother of Emir Saeed II of Dubai, grandfather of the current Sheikh. granddaughter is also the granddaughter of Sheikh Sheikha Hind who died in 2009.

Target: Sheikha Hind is the paternal granddaughter of Juma bin Maktoum Al Maktoum, brother of Emir Saeed II of Dubai, grandfather of the current Sheikh. She is also the niece of Sheikh Ahmad Bin Juma Al Maktoum who died in 2009.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: France was soon integrated into the reactionary international situation. Much of the Napoleonic liberalization of Western Europe, including Italy, and Germany, and adjacent areas became permanent.

Target: France was soon integrated into the reactionary international situation. However much of the Napoleonic liberalization of Western Europe, including Italy, and Germany, and adjacent areas became permanent.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Indianapolis voters approved taxes to support free public schools in 1847. Operations were suspended after the Indiana Supreme Court declared the local taxes were unconstitutional in 1857 ; the city's public schools did not reopen until 1861.

Target: Indianapolis voters approved taxes to support free public schools in 1847, but operations were suspended after the Indiana Supreme Court declared the local taxes were unconstitutional in 1857 ; the city's public schools did not reopen until 1861.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Gestapo notified the two members of Gemeinderrabbiner, Goldschimdt and David Ochs, that Leipzig had too many synagogues and advised that they be shut down before then were closed by force. Even youth meetings were banned.

Target: The Gestapo notified the two members of Gemeinderrabbiner, Goldschimdt and David Ochs, that Leipzig had too many synagogues and advised that they be shut down before then were closed by force. Eventually, even youth meetings were banned.


Source: Fix coherence: Lange adopts the Kantian standpoint that we can know nothing but phenomena. Lange maintains that neither materialism nor any other metaphysical system has a valid claim to ultimate truth.

Target: Adopting the Kantian standpoint that we can know nothing but phenomena, Lange maintains that neither materialism nor any other metaphysical system has a valid claim to ultimate truth.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Investors realized that this situation was unsustainable. Investors continued to flee Russia despite the IMF bailout.

Target: Realizing that this situation was unsustainable, investors continued to flee Russia despite the IMF bailout.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Eyewitnesses estimated that some 13,000 died under enemy fire on the airfield alone. One of the few planes that ever used it was that of the fleeing Gauleiter Hanke.

Target: Eyewitnesses estimated that some 13,000 died under enemy fire on the airfield alone. In the end, one of the few planes that ever used it was that of the fleeing Gauleiter Hanke.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The earliest crossbow-like weapons in Europe probably emerged around the late 5th century BC when the gastraphetes appeared. The gastraphetes are an ancient Greek crossbow.

Target: The earliest crossbow-like weapons in Europe probably emerged around the late 5th century BC when the gastraphetes, an ancient Greek crossbow, appeared.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Thus the sound of the crossbows is incessant and the enemy can hardly even flee. We have the following drill-shooting rank, advancing rank, loading rank.

Target: Thus the sound of the crossbows is incessant and the enemy can hardly even flee. Therefore we have the following drill-shooting rank, advancing rank, loading rank.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It's clear from surviving inventory lists in Gansu and Xinjiang that the crossbow was greatly favored by the Han dynasty. In one batch of slips there are only two mentions of bows, but thirty mentions of crossbows.

Target: It's clear from surviving inventory lists in Gansu and Xinjiang that the crossbow was greatly favored by the Han dynasty. For example in one batch of slips there are only two mentions of bows, but thirty mentions of crossbows.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Further, Edison had a three wire system. Either 110 V or 220 V could be supplied to power some motors.

Target: Further, Edison had a three wire system so that either 110 V or 220 V could be supplied to power some motors.


Source: Make the text coherent: In this view, randomness is the opposite of determinism in a stochastic process. If a stochastic system has entropy zero it has no randomness and any increase in entropy increases randomness.

Target: In this view, randomness is the opposite of determinism in a stochastic process. Hence if a stochastic system has entropy zero it has no randomness and any increase in entropy increases randomness.


Source: Make the text more logical: He also suggested practicing hitbodedut in the middle of the night, when the desires and lusts of this world are at rest. Doing it during the day is just as effective.

Target: He also suggested practicing hitbodedut in the middle of the night, when the desires and lusts of this world are at rest, although doing it during the day is just as effective.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Abraham Brigg owned the manor about this time. According to one historian Abraham Brigg is unlikely to have built it.

Target: Abraham Brigg owned the manor about this time but according to one historian he is unlikely to have built it.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Kenny disguises his voice. Kenny makes a call to Peter Goltman, the school official who cancelled the holiday to get him to search the Internet for Randy's past photos, but Goltman refuses, as he believes everything on the Internet is fake news.

Target: Disguising his voice, Kenny makes a call to Peter Goltman, the school official who cancelled the holiday to get him to search the Internet for Randy's past photos, but Goltman refuses, as he believes everything on the Internet is fake news.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Afterward, Evelyn realizes that Muller is an imposter and that he must have killed the psychoanalyst. Though Muller admits to Evelyn Muller did, Evelyn does not turn Muller in to the police ; instead Evelyn purchases a ticket to sail to Honolulu.

Target: Afterward, Evelyn realizes that Muller is an imposter and that he must have killed the psychoanalyst. Though he admits to her he did, she does not turn him in to the police ; instead she purchases a ticket to sail to Honolulu.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The 7th Annual HSFF will take place August 11-18th in Hollywood. HSFF will be unveiling many other important upcoming celebrity and sponsorship participation as the HSFF approaches.

Target: The 7th Annual HSFF will take place August 11-18th in Hollywood. HSFF will be unveiling many other important upcoming celebrity and sponsorship participation as the Festival approaches.


Source: Make the text coherent: Honorees may request a specific location for their star. Final decisions remain with the Chamber.

Target: Honorees may request a specific location for their star, although final decisions remain with the Chamber.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Holocaust denial propaganda in all forms has been shown to influence the audiences that it reaches. Even the well-educated -- that is, college graduates and current university students alike -- are susceptible to such propaganda when it is presented before them.

Target: Holocaust denial propaganda in all forms has been shown to influence the audiences that it reaches. In fact, even the well-educated -- that is, college graduates and current university students alike -- are susceptible to such propaganda when it is presented before them.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Varela was arrested, and place on provisional liberty awaiting the trial. With the new law, it is possible to curb the activities of racist groups.

Target: Varela was arrested, and place on provisional liberty awaiting the trial. Thus, with the new law, it is possible to curb the activities of racist groups.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Christian service is an integral part of a Holy Cross education. Because of the importance of Christian part, Holy Cross students are required to serve the community through charitable acts as a requirement for graduation.

Target: Christian service is an integral part of a Holy Cross education. Because of the importance of Christian service, Holy Cross students are required to serve the community through charitable acts as a requirement for graduation.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Apis mellifera is not native to the Americas. Was not present upon the arrival of the European explorers and colonists.

Target: Apis mellifera is not native to the Americas, so was not present upon the arrival of the European explorers and colonists.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In the same year, the Honeybourne to Cheltenham local service was withdrawn. Through express trains such as the Cornishman continued to use the line until 9 September 1962 after when they were worked via Bromsgrove.

Target: In the same year, the Honeybourne to Cheltenham local service was withdrawn, although through express trains such as the Cornishman continued to use the line until 9 September 1962 after when they were worked via Bromsgrove.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Charles remonstrated with her and cut off her pension. Within a couple of days Charles repented and restarted the payments.

Target: Charles remonstrated with her and cut off her pension, although within a couple of days he repented and restarted the payments.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The source of the noises is never revealed, leaving the reader to wonder who. What has taken over the house and forced the sister and brother out.

Target: The source of the noises is never revealed, leaving the reader to wonder who or what has taken over the house and forced the sister and brother out.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This is the council responsible for the billing of Council Tax. Local authorities in Great Britain, but not Northern Ireland, may contract out the administration of housing benefit to other local authorities, or to private companies.

Target: This is the council responsible for the billing of Council Tax. Additionally, local authorities in Great Britain, but not Northern Ireland, may contract out the administration of housing benefit to other local authorities, or to private companies.


Source: Make the text more logical: Either on application by the Local Authority on an annual basis. If the tenant had taken out a Pre Tenancy Determination.

Target: Either on application by the Local Authority on an annual basis or if the tenant had taken out a Pre Tenancy Determination.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Howard Norton Cook (1901 -- 1980) was an American artist, particularly known for his wood engravings and murals. artist spent much of the 1920s in Europe and returned to live in Taos, New Mexico.

Target: Howard Norton Cook (1901 -- 1980) was an American artist, particularly known for his wood engravings and murals. Cook spent much of the 1920s in Europe and returned to live in Taos, New Mexico.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It's like you got a tree dying in the backyard. You're kind of used to the idea that it's dying.

Target: It's like you got a tree dying in the backyard. And you're kind of used to the idea that it's dying.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In this new life, his dispositions for business and his literary talents were soon to bear fruit,. At the time, setting up a publishing house in the south of France constituted an unprecedented audacity, all large French publishing houses being Parisian.

Target: In this new life, his dispositions for business and his literary talents were soon to bear fruit, whereas at the time, setting up a publishing house in the south of France constituted an unprecedented audacity, all large French publishing houses being Parisian.


Source: Fix coherence: In Grotius 'understanding, nature was not an entity in itself, but God's creation. Grotius' concept of natural law had a theological foundation.

Target: In Grotius' understanding, nature was not an entity in itself, but God's creation. Therefore, his concept of natural law had a theological foundation.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Ulrich died at the age of 45 (after Mendel-Reissmann) on 23 March 1872. Other sources indicate May 23, 1872, as Ulrich's date of death.

Target: Ulrich died at the age of 45 (after Mendel-Reissmann) on 23 March 1872. On the other hand, other sources indicate May 23, 1872, as his date of death.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: On Friday 3 July 2015, Shane Smith, a 43-year-old Rotherham-based businessman, held a press day at the Hull Arena to announce the formation of the Hull Pirates. That Hull Pirates had been accepted into the EPIHL.

Target: On Friday 3 July 2015, Shane Smith, a 43-year-old Rotherham-based businessman, held a press day at the Hull Arena to announce the formation of the Hull Pirates and that they had been accepted into the EPIHL.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Hundred of Stone is one of the 40 historical Hundreds in the ceremonial county of Somerset, England, dating from before the Norman conquest during the Anglo-Saxon era. Exact dates are unknown.

Target: The Hundred of Stone is one of the 40 historical Hundreds in the ceremonial county of Somerset, England, dating from before the Norman conquest during the Anglo-Saxon era although exact dates are unknown.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The first such occasion was in 1911 when the Liberal Party won fewer seats than the opposition Reform Party despite tallying the most votes. A vote of no confidence was placed by Reform Party and the Liberal Party survived by just one vote.

Target: The first such occasion was in 1911 when the Liberal Party won fewer seats than the opposition Reform Party despite tallying the most votes. A vote of no confidence was placed by Reform and the Liberals survived by just one vote.


Source: Make the text coherent: Bites from sparassids usually do not require hospital treatment. Some isolated cases of necrosis have been reported.

Target: Bites from sparassids usually do not require hospital treatment. In particular, some isolated cases of necrosis have been reported.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The eyesight of these spiders is not nearly as good as that of the Salticidae (jumping spiders). Their vision is quite sufficient to detect approaching humans or other large animals from some distance.

Target: The eyesight of these spiders is not nearly as good as that of the Salticidae (jumping spiders). Nevertheless, their vision is quite sufficient to detect approaching humans or other large animals from some distance.


Source: Make the text more coherent: FEMA's relief efforts in Puerto Rico post Maria engaged a smaller work force and budget than the agency's efforts in Florida and Texas in the wake of Hurricane Harvey. Damage to those communities was less severe.

Target: FEMA's relief efforts in Puerto Rico post Maria engaged a smaller work force and budget than the agency's efforts in Florida and Texas in the wake of Hurricane Harvey, although damage to those communities was less severe.


Source: Make the text coherent: Schools in Dare County closed on September 26 and 27. Schools in Carteret and Tyrrell counties.

Target: Schools in Dare County closed on September 26 and 27, while schools in Carteret and Tyrrell counties.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Al-Houthi had wide religious and tribal backing in northern Yemen's mountainous regions. Al-Houthi was a one-time rising political aspirant in Yemen.

Target: al-Houthi, who was a one-time rising political aspirant in Yemen, had wide religious and tribal backing in northern Yemen's mountainous regions.


Source: Make the text clearer: He was instrumental in the Houthi insurgency against the Yemeni government, which began in 2004. al-Houthi, who was a one-time rising political aspirant in Yemeni, had wide religious and tribal backing in northern Yemeni's mountainous regions.

Target: He was instrumental in the Houthi insurgency against the Yemeni government, which began in 2004. al-Houthi, who was a one-time rising political aspirant in Yemen, had wide religious and tribal backing in northern Yemen's mountainous regions.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: However, there is no innocent celebration of an Asian cultural identity in this song. Rather celebration explores the internal opposition of an Asian cultural formation existing within a hostile and racially violent Britain.

Target: However, there is no innocent celebration of an Asian cultural identity in this song, but rather it explores the internal opposition of an Asian cultural formation existing within a hostile and racially violent Britain.


Source: Make the text more logical: He was in favour of a Welsh Parliament but initially did not support the Parliament for Wales campaign in the early 1950s. Later he did join the campaign.

Target: He was in favour of a Welsh Parliament but initially did not support the Parliament for Wales campaign in the early 1950s although later he did join the campaign.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In the Upwind scheme we replace the value at the face with the value at the adjacent upstream node. For the flow to the right (Pe > 0) as shown in the diagram, we replace the values as follows ;

Target: In the Upwind scheme we replace the value at the face with the value at the adjacent upstream node. For example, for the flow to the right (Pe > 0) as shown in the diagram, we replace the values as follows ;


Source: Make the text more logical: In addition, a machine may be divided into Logical Partitions (LPARs), each with its own system memory. Multiple operating systems may run concurrently on one machine.

Target: In addition, a machine may be divided into Logical Partitions (LPARs), each with its own system memory so that multiple operating systems may run concurrently on one machine.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: By the end of October 2007, four IC4 units had entered regional service in Jutland. Service was suspended at the end of February 2008 because of problems with exhaust fumes.

Target: By the end of October 2007, four IC4 units had entered regional service in Jutland. However, service was suspended at the end of February 2008 because of problems with exhaust fumes.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It was a sequence of chords that grew. Every verse had more chords added to it, and sequence had a fantastically simple chorus, a chant, 'IEYA'.

Target: It was a sequence of chords that grew, so every verse had more chords added to it, and it had a fantastically simple chorus, a chant, 'IEYA'.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The building was originally intended to exclusively house condominiums, and construction began in 1961. When the project encountered difficulties, Ho assumed complete control of the $27 million effort, and eventually re-imagined it as a complex with 509 condominium units and 504 hotel rooms.

Target: The building was originally intended to exclusively house condominiums, and construction began in 1961. However when the project encountered difficulties, Ho assumed complete control of the $27 million effort, and eventually re-imagined it as a complex with 509 condominium units and 504 hotel rooms.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Which attracting many important international literary figures, its two-week programme, starting at the end of September, now feature more than 250 events. Which take place in a variety of venues in Ilkley and surrounding towns and villages.

Target: Attracting many important international literary figures, its two-week programme, starting at the end of September, now features more than 250 events, which take place in a variety of venues in Ilkley and surrounding towns and villages.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This is a function of the adaptive immune system. By exposing an animal to an immunogen in a controlled way, its body can learn to protect itself: this is called active immunization.

Target: This is a function of the adaptive immune system. Therefore, by exposing an animal to an immunogen in a controlled way, its body can learn to protect itself: this is called active immunization.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: After the reign of Tiberius, the act of being proclaimed imperator was transformed into the act of imperial accession. If a general was acclaimed by his troops as imperator, it would be tantamount to a declaration of rebellion against the ruling emperor.

Target: After the reign of Tiberius, the act of being proclaimed imperator was transformed into the act of imperial accession. In fact, if a general was acclaimed by his troops as imperator, it would be tantamount to a declaration of rebellion against the ruling emperor.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Khan co-starred with Pankaj Kapur, Anushka Sharma and Shabana Azmi. Khan played Hukum Singh Matru, an educated community activist and Kapur's right-hand man.

Target: Co-starring with Pankaj Kapur, Anushka Sharma and Shabana Azmi, Khan played Hukum Singh Matru, an educated community activist and Kapur's right-hand man.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The LPGA dry spell ended in October 2016 when Kim won Reignwood LPGA Classic held in China. In 2017 Kim won three times on the LPGA, including Kim's first major title at the Women's British Open.

Target: The LPGA dry spell ended in October 2016 when Kim won Reignwood LPGA Classic held in China. In 2017 Kim won three times on the LPGA Tour, including her first major title at the Women's British Open.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Measurement of ambulation was recorded in 10-minute bins. For cocaine, locomotor activity (LMA) was already apparent at 10 min, at least 20 minutes were needed before the NMe analogs even started to increase locomotor activity.

Target: Measurement of ambulation was recorded in 10-minute bins. Whereas for cocaine, locomotor activity (LMA) was already apparent at 10 min, at least 20 minutes were needed before the NMe analogs even started to increase locomotor activity.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Hence someone's may also mean someone is. Someone has, as well as serving as a possessive.

Target: Hence someone's may also mean someone is or someone has, as well as serving as a possessive.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The pirates took the dhow onshore into the central Galmudug state of Somalia. Somalia security forces raided the dhow which led to the pirates fleeing to the hilly areas between El-Hur and Hardheere with nine crew members as hostages.

Target: The pirates took the dhow onshore into the central Galmudug state of Somalia. Somali security forces raided the dhow which led to the pirates fleeing to the hilly areas between El-Hur and Hardheere with nine crew members as hostages.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: IU surged out to an early seven-point lead before UK rallied to tie it at 44 by halftime. Despite IU's Kent Benson scoring 33 points (on 13-of-18 shooting) and grabbing 23 rebounds, UK won 92-90.

Target: IU surged out to an early seven-point lead before UK rallied to tie it at 44 by halftime. Despite Indiana's Kent Benson scoring 33 points (on 13-of-18 shooting) and grabbing 23 rebounds, Kentucky won 92-90.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Seetharam tapped her singing skills. Seetharam gave her first singing offer in his feature film, Meera Madhava Raghava (2007) which had the music scored by Hamsalekha.

Target: Tapping her singing skills, Seetharam gave her first singing offer in his feature film, Meera Madhava Raghava (2007) which had the music scored by Hamsalekha.


Source: Make the text more logical: In information retrieval a query does not uniquely identify a single object in the collection. Several objects may match the query, perhaps with different degrees of relevancy.

Target: In information retrieval a query does not uniquely identify a single object in the collection. Instead, several objects may match the query, perhaps with different degrees of relevancy.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Mostly known for his book releases (see below). Niermann earlier contributed to German newspapers Sueddeutsche Zeitung and Frankfurter Allgemeine Zeitung.

Target: Although mostly known for his book releases (see below), Niermann earlier contributed to German newspapers Sueddeutsche Zeitung and Frankfurter Allgemeine Zeitung.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Cephalon and Chiron conducted two pivotal clinical studies of IGF-1 for ALS,. One study demonstrated efficacy.

Target: Cephalon and Chiron conducted two pivotal clinical studies of IGF-1 for ALS, and although one study demonstrated efficacy.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This requires an assessment of which substances will alter the quality of the grey water. Not all household appliances should be used for grey water recycling.

Target: This requires an assessment of which substances will alter the quality of the grey water. Additionally, not all household appliances should be used for grey water recycling.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The type of carrier scattered will depend on the materials governing the interfaces. At a metal-metal interface, electron scattering effects will dominate thermal boundary resistance, as electrons are the primary thermal energy carriers in metals.

Target: The type of carrier scattered will depend on the materials governing the interfaces. For example, at a metal-metal interface, electron scattering effects will dominate thermal boundary resistance, as electrons are the primary thermal energy carriers in metals.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Similarly, phonons are also capable of producing evanescent waves in a total internal reflection geometry. When these waves are scattered in the solid, additional heat is transferred from the helium beyond the prediction of the acoustic mismatch theory.

Target: Similarly, phonons are also capable of producing evanescent waves in a total internal reflection geometry. As a result, when these waves are scattered in the solid, additional heat is transferred from the helium beyond the prediction of the acoustic mismatch theory.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Shafique Ahmed said: Shafique Ahmed is the Minister of Law and Justice.

Target: Shafique Ahmed, the Minister of Law and Justice, said :


Source: Make the text more logical: The US 2012 -- 2022 International Men's Day Ten Year Plan Committee has been established. Members who are regional coordinators for International Men's Day in the US are working on developing and implementing the plan.

Target: The US 2012 -- 2022 International Men's Day Ten Year Plan Committee has been established and members who are regional coordinators for International Men's Day in the United States are working on developing and implementing the plan.


Source: Make the text more logical: Reissuing the caricatures will cause widely spread agitation. Things that Muslims hold sacred have been insulted.

Target: Reissuing the caricatures will cause widely spread agitation because things that Muslims hold sacred have been insulted.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Results indicated a strong effect of exposure on attraction that was mediated by the effect of exposure on familiarity. Exposure does not always increase attraction.

Target: Results indicated a strong effect of exposure on attraction that was mediated by the effect of exposure on familiarity. However, exposure does not always increase attraction.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The collapse of the wavefunction is therefore not a physical change to the system, just a change in our knowledge of it due to the second measurement. They explain entanglement as not being a true physical state but just an illusion created by ignoring retrocausality.

Target: The collapse of the wavefunction is therefore not a physical change to the system, just a change in our knowledge of it due to the second measurement. Similarly, they explain entanglement as not being a true physical state but just an illusion created by ignoring retrocausality.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the stochastic interpretation is not possible to define velocities for particles, i.e. the paths are not smooth. To know the motion of the particles at any moment, you have to know what the Markov process is.

Target: In the stochastic interpretation is not possible to define velocities for particles, i.e. the paths are not smooth. Moreover, to know the motion of the particles at any moment, you have to know what the Markov process is.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In the meantime, Richard had returned from Ireland, landing in Milford Haven in South Wales. Fearing a plot, Richard abandoned Richard's army and fled to North Wales, where he had stronger support.

Target: In the meantime, Richard had returned from Ireland, landing in Milford Haven in South Wales. However, fearing a plot, he abandoned his army and fled to North Wales, where he had stronger support.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Prodan experienced problems with females. Prodan began to take revenge on women and men.

Target: Experiencing problems with females, Prodan began to take revenge on women and men.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Akasbashi visited the Festival of Flowers in Belgium. Akasbashi turned the cinematograph toward the flower-adorned carriages, making him the first Iranian to ever film anything.

Target: Visiting the Festival of Flowers in Belgium, Akasbashi turned the cinematograph toward the flower-adorned carriages, making him the first Iranian to ever film anything.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Self-identification among the Nones is also diverse. According to Pew study in 2009, only 5 % of the total US population did not have a belief in a god.

Target: Self-identification among the Nones is also diverse. For instance, according to Pew study in 2009, only 5 % of the total US population did not have a belief in a god.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Isabel Flick was always known for making trouble as a child. Isabel Flick was a shy Isabel Flick.

Target: Isabel Flick was always known for making trouble as a child, although she was a shy girl.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Despite this, several groups of al-Shabaab members found ISIL's ideology attractive or saw this new Jihadist organization as a way to challenge al-Shabaab's leadership at the time. Several small ISIL groups emerged in southern Somalia.

Target: Despite this, several groups of al-Shabaab members found ISIL's ideology attractive or saw this new Jihadist organization as a way to challenge al-Shabaab's leadership at the time. Thus, several small pro-ISIL groups emerged in southern Somalia.


Source: Make the text coherent: This Quranic verse indicates that khati'ah is considered an ithm, a grave sin. The word khati'ah is associated with some of the most heinous religious sins in the Quranic.

Target: This Quranic verse indicates that khati'ah is considered an ithm, a grave sin. In fact, the word khati'ah is associated with some of the most heinous religious sins in the Quran.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Since 1956 the isle has been dedicated as a National Nature Reserve and managed by the Nature Conservancy Council, now Scottish Natural Heritage. Until 1989 isle was actually owned by the Northern Lighthouse Board.

Target: Since 1956 the isle has been dedicated as a National Nature Reserve and managed by the Nature Conservancy Council, now Scottish Natural Heritage, although until 1989 it was actually owned by the Northern Lighthouse Board.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Although the commons of each channel are isolated from power ground by the input-to-output isolation barrier, they are not isolated from each other. A common mode voltage on one will attempt to float all the others, sometimes with disastrous results.

Target: Although the commons of each channel are isolated from power ground by the input-to-output isolation barrier, they are not isolated from each other. Therefore a common mode voltage on one will attempt to float all the others, sometimes with disastrous results.


Source: Make the text coherent: Many Catholics support the pro-life stance which is backed by Republicans, but strongly oppose the death penalty, which the Republican Party also supports. Extreme party polarization might cause Catholic voters to feel uncomfortable about both Republicans and Democratic presidential candidates.

Target: Many Catholics support the pro-life stance which is backed by Republicans, but strongly oppose the death penalty, which the Republican Party also supports. Extreme party polarization might cause Catholic voters to feel uncomfortable about both Republican and Democratic presidential candidates.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Despite these changes, all fifteen councils confirmed their respective political administrations. Numbers in Northern Italy were too close to allow stable leaderships, and a period of fragmentation was opened in those regions.

Target: Despite these changes, all fifteen councils confirmed their respective political administrations. However, numbers in Northern Italy were too close to allow stable leaderships, and a period of fragmentation was opened in those regions.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Near Porte d'Italie: the Tour Super-Italie and the tour Chambord built on the boulevard Kellermann. The Tour Super-Italie is the only cylindrical tower in the district.

Target: near Porte d'Italie: the Tour Super-Italie, the only cylindrical tower in the district, and the tour Chambord built on the boulevard Kellermann.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In 1798 the officials of the Helvetic Republic forbade the acceptance of novices and declared the monastery's assets the property of the state. The charterhouse survived until 1848, when it was finally dissolved.

Target: In 1798 the officials of the Helvetic Republic forbade the acceptance of novices and declared the monastery's assets the property of the state. Nevertheless the charterhouse survived until 1848, when it was finally dissolved.


Source: Make the text clearer: He is the current metropolitan archbishop of Sorocaba. archbishop is the first Japanese Brazilian named archbishop in Brazil.

Target: He is the current metropolitan archbishop of Sorocaba. Akamine is the first Japanese Brazilian named bishop in Brazil.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: NOTE 2: Ellis does not indicate that Williams, Williams and Jones possessed episcopal consecration from the Methodist Episcopal Church. He Ellis not cite any episcopal apostolic lineage Methodist Episcopal Church's their status as bishops of the Church of God in Christ.

Target: NOTE 2: Ellis does not indicate that Williams, Williams and Jones possessed episcopal consecration from the Methodist Episcopal Church, nor does he cite any episcopal apostolic lineage for their status as bishops of the Church of God in Christ.


Source: Make the text more logical: Had Morgan deferred to Davis as the Democratic gubernatorial nominee, Long would have. Been slated for the general election ballot as the Democratic nominee for lieutenant governor.

Target: Had Morgan deferred to Davis as the Democratic gubernatorial nominee, Long would have hence been slated for the general election ballot as the Democratic nominee for lieutenant governor.


Source: Fix coherence: I created JAG. JAG's the JAG of television I like to watch.

Target: I created JAG because it's the kind of television I like to watch.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The film was started way back in 1976. Production got delayed and film was released in 1983.

Target: The film was started way back in 1976 but production got delayed and film was released in 1983.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He died in Brookfield, Massachusetts, November 8, 1811. He was interred in New Cemetery, Brookfield, Massachusetts.

Target: He died in Brookfield, Massachusetts, November 8, 1811. He was interred in New Cemetery, West Brookfield, Massachusetts.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: She was appointed a Continental Counselor in 1988. A Continental Counselor is the highest office of individual standing in the religion.

Target: She was appointed a Continental Counselor, the highest office of individual standing in the religion, in 1988.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Beyond the Old City and tourist sites, many neighborhoods of Jaffa are poor and underdeveloped. Real-estate prices have risen sharply due to gentrification projects in Ajami, Noga, and Lev Yafo.

Target: Beyond the Old City and tourist sites, many neighborhoods of Jaffa are poor and underdeveloped. However, real-estate prices have risen sharply due to gentrification projects in Ajami, Noga, and Lev Yafo.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Eventually the bilateral orange-picking and exporting of both sides continued. Without a formal agreement.

Target: Eventually the bilateral orange-picking and exporting of both sides continued although without a formal agreement.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It can be seen as many regional varieties of gong-chime performance found through much of Indonesia. As also an urban dance form, it is based primarily on the village forms of ketuk tilu and on the Indonesia martial arts, pencak silat.

Target: It can be seen as many regional varieties of gong-chime performance found through much of Indonesia. As also an urban dance form, it is based primarily on the village forms of ketuk tilu and on the Indonesian martial arts, pencak silat.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Camp Bondsteel is named in his honor. Camp Bondsteel is the main U.S. Army base in Kosovo.

Target: Camp Bondsteel, the main U.S. Army base in Kosovo, is named in his honor.


Source: Fix coherence: MacLachlan was not academically talented. MacLachlan did excel at poetry and attracted trouble from MacLachlan's school masters by forming libellous rhymes MacLachlan's his contemporaries and members of staff.

Target: MacLachlan was not academically talented although he did excel at poetry and attracted trouble from his school masters by forming libellous rhymes about his contemporaries and members of staff.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The report being favourable, Stirling looked no further. On 18 June Stirling went ashore with Stirling's officers to take possession of Raffles Bay and the surrounding territory in His Majesty's name.

Target: The report being favourable, Stirling looked no further and on 18 June he went ashore with his officers to take possession of Raffles Bay and the surrounding territory in His Majesty's name.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He maintains that the naked body is still a controversial subject. He is most famous for his ten paneled wall sculpture The Great Wall of Vagina, comprising plaster casts taken from 400 volunteers' genitals.

Target: Maintaining that the naked body is still a controversial subject, he is most famous for his ten paneled wall sculpture The Great Wall of Vagina, comprising plaster casts taken from 400 volunteers' genitals.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Jannali is located 28 kilometres south of the Sydney central business district in the local government area of the Sutherland Shire. The majority of land use in Jannali is residential and bushland reserve, while the Jannali is bisected by the north-south railway line.

Target: Jannali is located 28 kilometres south of the Sydney central business district in the local government area of the Sutherland Shire. The majority of land use in Jannali is residential and bushland reserve, while the suburb is bisected by the north-south railway line.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Access to the platform for city-bound trains and the railway ticket office is off Janalli Avenue. Access to platform for south-bound trains is off Railway Crescent.

Target: Access to the platform for city-bound trains and the railway ticket office is off Janalli Avenue, while access to platform for south-bound trains is off Railway Crescent.


Source: Fix coherence errors: 1960 -- The Reserve Bank of Australia is established. The Reserve Bank of Australia is the country's central bank and banknote issuing authority.

Target: 1960 -- The Reserve Bank of Australia, the country's central bank and banknote issuing authority, is established.


Source: Make the text clearer: Okinawan fishermen regularly provided support for their mixed-race children and mistresses. Most returned to Okinawan fishermen's homelands after a few years and left Okinawan fishermen's their mixed-race families.

Target: Okinawan fishermen regularly provided support for their mixed-race children and mistresses, although most returned to their homelands after a few years and left behind their mixed-race families.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Who assuring the judges that she would be back for the next cycle's audition, Gonzalez's determination caught the eyes of producers. Who thought she had potential.

Target: Assuring the judges that she would be back for the next cycle's audition, Gonzalez's determination caught the eyes of producers, who thought she had potential.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Who honored Davis's war service, Governor Brown of Mississippi appointed him to the vacant position of United States Senator Jesse Speight, a Democrat. Who had died on May 1, 1847.

Target: Honoring Davis's war service, Governor Brown of Mississippi appointed him to the vacant position of United States Senator Jesse Speight, a Democrat, who had died on May 1, 1847.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Davis also introduced general usage of the rifles that he had used successfully during the Mexican -- American War. Both the morale and capability of the army was improved.

Target: Davis also introduced general usage of the rifles that he had used successfully during the Mexican -- American War. As a result, both the morale and capability of the army was improved.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: More expensive than outsourcing to China and India. Ouellette has expressed appreciation for the Dominicans' fine hand-sewing.

Target: Although more expensive than outsourcing to China and India, Ouellette has expressed appreciation for the Dominicans' fine hand-sewing.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Rizzotti was honored by The University of Hartford in 2010, as Commencement speaker. Rizzotti received an Honorary Doctorate Degree from the University.

Target: Rizzotti was honored by The University of Hartford in 2010, as Commencement speaker. Additionally she received an Honorary Doctorate Degree from the University.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He finds out about her affair with Ansgar and in his twisted way, sees that as a chance to be together with her again. For him it finally proves that Lydia's love for Sebastian is not that strong.

Target: He finds out about her affair with Ansgar and in his twisted way, sees that as a chance to be together with her again, because for him it finally proves that Lydia's love for Sebastian is not that strong.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jens threatens Lydia to tell Sebastian about the affair and even gives him photos that prove him right. Sebastian trusts Jens' wife and Jens Jens manipulated them in order to destroy his marriage.

Target: Jens threatens Lydia to tell Sebastian about the affair and even gives him photos that prove him right. But Sebastian trusts his wife and believes Jens manipulated them in order to destroy his marriage.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He boarded the ship SS Cuba. He left for the United States with his friend John Devoy and three other exiles.

Target: Boarding the ship SS Cuba, he left for the United States with his friend John Devoy and three other exiles.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: After one season with Marian, Turner joined Tolka Rovers for the 2003 -- 04 season. The team did not receive the required funding for the season from Tolka Rovers.

Target: After one season with Marian, Turner joined Tolka Rovers for the 2003 -- 04 season. However, the team did not receive the required funding for the season from Tolka Rovers F.C..


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Rosholt transferred to NBC News Computers. Rosholt finished his career rising to the level of director and retiring in 1988.

Target: Transferring to NBC News Computers, Rosholt finished his career rising to the level of director and retiring in 1988.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The first route to be served was between Tokyo and Fukuoka. Services between Tokyo and Sapporo.

Target: The first route to be served was between Tokyo and Fukuoka, while services between Tokyo and Sapporo.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: His father, Billy McNeece, was a professional boxer in the 1950s. His brother Tom McNeece boxed as a professional in the 1970s and the 1980s.

Target: His father, Billy McNeece, was a professional boxer in the 1950s. Additionally, his brother Tom McNeece boxed as a professional in the 1970s and the 1980s.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She won the Federal Women's Award in 1971. The Federal Women's Award is an honor limited to five women per year.

Target: She won the Federal Women's Award, an honor limited to five women per year, in 1971.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Around 11: 00, the intensity of the shooting from the opposition side subsided and the soldiers believed the rebels were retreating. An improvised explosive device detonated with a low noise about 10 meters from them.

Target: Around 11: 00, the intensity of the shooting from the opposition side subsided and the soldiers believed the rebels were retreating. Then, an improvised explosive device detonated with a low noise about 10 meters from them.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Joe Queenan Article archive 2014. Joe Queenan Article archive is the Guardian website ; accessed September 5.

Target: Joe Queenan Article archive, The Guardian website ; accessed September 5, 2014.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Snyder received his Bachelor and Master of Science degrees in electrical engineering from the Polytechnic Institute of Brooklyn. Snyder has also taught at Polytechnic Institute of Brooklyn in Brooklyn, N.Y. ; the New York Institute of Technology ; and Long Island University.

Target: Snyder received his Bachelor and Master of Science degrees in electrical engineering from the Polytechnic Institute of Brooklyn. He has also taught at Polytechnic University in Brooklyn, N.Y. ; the New York Institute of Technology ; and Long Island University.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Out of it, he was commonly regarded as the representative of all that was most unscrupulous and self-seeking in the methods of the Austrian government. He had inherited from his master Prince Kaunitz the firm conviction that Prussia was the worst enemy of Austrian.

Target: Out of it, he was commonly regarded as the representative of all that was most unscrupulous and self-seeking in the methods of the Austrian government. He had inherited from his master Prince Kaunitz the firm conviction that Prussia was the worst enemy of Austria.


Source: Fix coherence: Thugut became acquainted with many of the leaders in the French Revolution. From 1787 to 1789 Thugut was Thugut at Naples, and showed great tact in managing the queen, Maria Carolina, a daughter of Maria Theresa.

Target: Thugut became acquainted with many of the leaders in the French Revolution. From 1787 to 1789 he was minister at Naples, and showed great tact in managing the queen, Maria Carolina, a daughter of Maria Theresa.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The filing deadline in Wyoming was May 30, 2008. Ultimately Barrasso did not face a primary opponent.

Target: The filing deadline in Wyoming was May 30, 2008, and ultimately Barrasso did not face a primary opponent.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Tempted to follow up on this story. Kennedy decided against it.

Target: Although tempted to follow up on this story, Kennedy decided against it.


Source: Fix coherence: Hannah joined the Patriots in 1973 as the 4th overall pick in the 1973 NFL Draft. He played his entire professional career in Patriots.

Target: Hannah joined the Patriots in 1973 as the 4th overall pick in the 1973 NFL Draft. He played his entire professional career in New England.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Dummies featured large features. Audiences would be packed into large theaters and the enlarged features allowed audiences from as far back as the balcony to enjoy the show.

Target: Dummies featured large features because audiences would be packed into large theaters and the enlarged features allowed audiences from as far back as the balcony to enjoy the show.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Stukely also failed to see the significance of recording the stones in such detail. Using Wood's original dimensions it has been possible to re-draw his work on a computer and compare the record with the modern plan of Stonehenge.

Target: Stukely also failed to see the significance of recording the stones in such detail. However, using Wood's original dimensions it has been possible to re-draw his work on a computer and compare the record with the modern plan of Stonehenge.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: By the late 1960s Nounes had lost both of his legs due to diabetes. On Nounes' worst day Nounes could still beat the mess out anybody.

Target: By the late 1960s Nounes had lost both of his legs due to diabetes. However, on his worst day he could still beat the mess out anybody.