Source: Fix coherence: Outside the town, 6 tourists were reported killed. Official documents indicate that at least 255 local residents were killed, with a further 29 never found.

Target: Outside the town, 6 tourists were reported killed. However, official documents indicate that at least 255 local residents were killed, with a further 29 never found.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Whereas at some times (and in some places) a Corps of two divisions was sufficient, at other times 5 or 6 divisions were necessary. Under the Hindenburg regime (from summer 1916), new Corps headquarters were created without organic divisions.

Target: Whereas at some times (and in some places) a Corps of two divisions was sufficient, at other times 5 or 6 divisions were necessary. Therefore, under the Hindenburg regime (from summer 1916), new Corps headquarters were created without organic divisions.


Source: Fix sentence transition: An estimate in 2009 gave three million for Latin America and three million for Brazil, mostly illegal. Legal abortion is difficult to impossible to obtain.

Target: An estimate in 2009 gave three million for Latin America and three million for Brazil, mostly illegal because legal abortion is difficult to impossible to obtain.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Filming used mostly local talent. Filming began on January 28 in Savannah, Georgia.

Target: Using mostly local talent, filming began on January 28 in Savannah, Georgia.


Source: Make the text more logical: Edelman treated his mission as one of critical importance. Edelman trained non-stop, watching World Cup videos during his rest time to create neuropathways that would develop his driving skill.

Target: Treating his mission as one of critical importance, Edelman trained non-stop, watching World Cup videos during his rest time to create neuropathways that would develop his driving skill.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Carter infiltrates the club in disguise. Carter learns that the formula has been weaponized.

Target: Infiltrating the club in disguise, Carter learns that the formula has been weaponized.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This proved very unpopular, and in 1975 Canadian aviation units were reorganized under a single organization (Air Command) with a single commander. In 2011 the Air Command reverted to organization's pre-1960s name, Air Command.

Target: This proved very unpopular, and in 1975 Canadian aviation units were reorganized under a single organization (Air Command) with a single commander. In 2011 the Canadian Forces Air Command reverted to its pre-1960s name, the Royal Canadian Air Force.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He stays at Jimmy Kudo's house with Conan's permission after his apartment had burned down. Jimmy Kudo states Jimmy Kudo is a Jimmy Kudo concentrating on engineering and is revealed to have high deduction skills, being a fan of Sherlock Holmes.

Target: He stays at Jimmy Kudo's house with Conan's permission after his apartment had burned down. He states he is a graduate student concentrating on engineering and is revealed to have high deduction skills, being a fan of Sherlock Holmes.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This world comes to interact with the modern Fantastic Four. Time has become corrupted there.

Target: This world comes to interact with the modern Fantastic Four because time has become corrupted there.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Lanfranc professed to fear his own bias. Lanfranc sent him to Maurilius, the archbishop of Rouen, who convinced him to enter the abbey as a novice at the age of 27.

Target: Professing to fear his own bias, Lanfranc sent him to Maurilius, the archbishop of Rouen, who convinced him to enter the abbey as a novice at the age of 27.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The regiment was allocated to the Organized Reserve Corps and re-activated on 1 March 1952 and its headquarters located at Beaumont, Texas. The Organized Reserve Corps was re-designated on 9 July 1952 as the Organized Reserve Corps.

Target: The regiment was allocated to the Organized Reserve Corps and re-activated on 1 March 1952 and its headquarters located at Beaumont, Texas. The Organized Reserve Corps was re-designated on 9 July 1952 as the Army Reserve.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Civilians are herded into safe rooms. Despite the precautions, Don breaks into a room full of people and starts a domino effect of rapid infection.

Target: Civilians are herded into safe rooms but despite the precautions, Don breaks into a room full of people and starts a domino effect of rapid infection.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: However, most scientists today are working on the theories themselves than asking such philosophical questions. These physical theories are so mathematical and technical that philosophers are not discussing them like they used to do, let alone ordinary people.

Target: However, most scientists today are working on the theories themselves than asking such philosophical questions. On the other hand, these physical theories are so mathematical and technical that philosophers are not discussing them like they used to do, let alone ordinary people.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: As a result. Older people are more likely to have health concerns and issues.

Target: As a result, because older people are more likely to have health concerns and issues.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Farmers could only export whiskey. Transportation costs were too high for grain.

Target: Farmers could only export whiskey because transportation costs were too high for grain.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Receiving acceptance to the United States Military Academy. Nancherla decided to attend Amherst College where she studied psychology.

Target: Although receiving acceptance to the United States Military Academy, Nancherla decided to attend Amherst College where she studied psychology.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Maine, in the United States, has a tradition of having a large fishing and lobster industry. Today some of that industry has switched to salmon farming or aquaculture.

Target: Maine, in the United States, has a tradition of having a large fishing and lobster industry. However today some of that industry has switched to salmon farming or aquaculture.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It is open only to clubs from the regional winter competitions-NZFC sides are not eligible to compete. Wellington is not Phoenix FC.

Target: It is open only to clubs from the regional winter competitions-NZFC sides are not eligible to compete, nor is Wellington Phoenix FC.


Source: Make the text more logical: The narrator reflects on the emptiness that can engulf one during nighttime. At the same time, where each person sleeps there has been a rich history.

Target: The narrator reflects on the emptiness that can engulf one during nighttime. Yet, at the same time, where each person sleeps there has been a rich history.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In 2003, former Latvian President Vaira Vike-Freiberga termed education sector as one of the first areas of interest to Bangladesh. Bangladesh has proposed to sign an MoU with Latvian for the cooperation on higher education putting major emphasize on science and technology.

Target: In 2003, former Latvian President Vaira Vike-Freiberga termed education sector as one of the first areas of interest to Bangladesh. Bangladesh has proposed to sign an MoU with Latvia for the cooperation on higher education putting major emphasize on science and technology.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Brown in 1863. Brown is a British administrator in colonial south India.

Target: Brown, a British administrator in colonial south India, in 1863.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: From this time she sometimes went by the name Bella Woolf Southorn, and occasionally used Bella Sidney Southorn. She continued to publish as Bella Woolf Southorn.

Target: From this time she sometimes went by the name Bella Woolf Southorn, and occasionally used Bella Sidney Southorn. But she continued to publish as Bella Sidney Woolf.


Source: Fix coherence: He was awarded the Shanti Swarup Bhatnagar Prize for science and technology for the year 2013 in engineering science category. The Shanti Swarup Bhatnagar Prize for science and technology is the highest science award in India.

Target: He was awarded the Shanti Swarup Bhatnagar Prize for science and technology, the highest science award in India, for the year 2013 in engineering science category.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, late learners who achieve full proficiency in their second language tend to show similar patterns of activation during auditory tasks regardless of which language is being used,. Early learners tend to activate different brain areas depending upon which language is being used.

Target: However, late learners who achieve full proficiency in their second language tend to show similar patterns of activation during auditory tasks regardless of which language is being used, whereas early learners tend to activate different brain areas depending upon which language is being used.


Source: Fix coherence: Bonner Springs High School is the public secondary school in Bonner Springs, Kansas, USA. Bonner Springs High School is the only school operated by Unified School District 204.

Target: Bonner Springs High School is the public secondary school in Bonner Springs, Kansas, USA. It is the only high school operated by Unified School District 204.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The original school was designed to educate a maximum of 300 students. Numbers rose to 450 before any extensions where added.

Target: The original school was designed to educate a maximum of 300 students, but numbers rose to 450 before any extensions where added.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Keynesian models do not necessarily imply periodic business cycles. Simple Keynesian models involving the interaction of the Keynesian multiplier and accelerator give rise to cyclical responses to initial shocks.

Target: Keynesian models do not necessarily imply periodic business cycles. However, simple Keynesian models involving the interaction of the Keynesian multiplier and accelerator give rise to cyclical responses to initial shocks.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: About 200,000 attendees were expected at the street festival the next day. Organizers put actual attendance at about 250,000.

Target: Although about 200,000 attendees were expected at the street festival the next day, organizers put actual attendance at about 250,000.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Their rivalry continues. Music halls are under increasing threat from the government.

Target: Their rivalry continues, although music halls are under increasing threat from the government.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Research has also been directed towards studying the surface chemistry of these arrays to determine which surface chemistries control cell adhesion. Concerns have been raised as to the influence of the substrate on measurements and the questionable statistical interpretation of results.

Target: Research has also been directed towards studying the surface chemistry of these arrays to determine which surface chemistries control cell adhesion, although concerns have been raised as to the influence of the substrate on measurements and the questionable statistical interpretation of results.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Renzia is a Mars-crossing asteroid crossing the orbit of Mars at 1.666 AU. A Mars-crossing asteroid is a dynamically unstable group between the main belt and the near-Earth populations.

Target: Renzia is a Mars-crossing asteroid, a dynamically unstable group between the main belt and the near-Earth populations, crossing the orbit of Mars at 1.666 AU.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Oasis topped the albums chart for the fourth time. Oasis hit the top with their new album, Heathen Chemistry.

Target: Topping the albums chart for the fourth time, Oasis hit the top with their new album, Heathen Chemistry.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: BC Quarterback Dave Dickenson continued his slow start to the CFL season, Friday. Quarterback's 's only touchdown pass secured a 29 -- 9, BC home opener win over the Edmonton Eskimos.

Target: BC Quarterback Dave Dickenson continued his slow start to the CFL season, Friday but his only touchdown pass secured a 29 -- 9, BC Lions home opener win over the Edmonton Eskimos.


Source: Make the text clearer: An investigation by the Rhode Island State Police did not come up with sufficient evidence to file criminal charges against the studio. Civil litigation continued, ultimately leading to gross settlements with Schilling and other defendants of approximately $61 million.

Target: An investigation by the Rhode Island State Police did not come up with sufficient evidence to file criminal charges against the studio. However, civil litigation continued, ultimately leading to gross settlements with Schilling and other defendants of approximately $61 million.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: At a rate of 10,000 sample points per second, low resolution scans can take less than a second. High resolution scans, requiring millions of samples, can take minutes for some time-of-flight scanners.

Target: At a rate of 10,000 sample points per second, low resolution scans can take less than a second, but high resolution scans, requiring millions of samples, can take minutes for some time-of-flight scanners.


Source: Make the text more logical: Using Jung as a hostage, Hyuk and Young-choon take the money to a pier, intending to escape in the boat. Having followed Hyuk's brother, Chul arrives on the scene but is captured Jung Jung's men.

Target: Using Jung as a hostage, Hyuk and Young-choon take the money to a pier, intending to escape in the boat. Meanwhile, having followed his brother, Chul arrives on the scene but is captured by Jung's men.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Aaron is embarrassed and tells Adam that he misunderstood the situation. Aaron sleeps with Holly and Adam tells Aaron's family that he Aaron Aaron is gay.

Target: Aaron is embarrassed and tells Adam that he misunderstood the situation. Aaron sleeps with Holly and Adam tells his family that he thinks Aaron is gay.


Source: Make the text more consistent: On August 4, Aaron threw a perfect 8th inning in a 12 -- 1 loss to the Washington Nationals. Of Aaron' nine pitches, six were for strikes.

Target: On August 4, Aaron threw a perfect 8th inning in a 12 -- 1 loss to the Washington Nationals. Of Miles' nine pitches, six were for strikes.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Jump up ^ Begum Abida Parveen sings dil se TNN 17 June 2003. Dil se TNN is the Times of India.

Target: Jump up ^ Begum Abida Parveen sings dil se TNN, The Times of India, 17 June 2003.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: 29 helicopters and 500 vehicles were also deployed to join the opeartion. Bad weather still hampered the search and rescue effort.

Target: 29 helicopters and 500 vehicles were also deployed to join the opeartion. However, bad weather still hampered the search and rescue effort.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Ray Metcalfe also ran. Ray Metcalfe is a defecting Republican who had founded the Republican Moderate Party of Alaska.

Target: Ray Metcalfe, a defecting Republican who had founded the Republican Moderate Party of Alaska, also ran.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dat ole Huus Lower Saxony Dat ole Huus is a museum in Wilsede.

Target: Dat ole Huus, a museum in Wilsede, Lower Saxony


Source: Fix sentence transition: In 2017, Miller was selected to play in the All-Star Game, his second career selection. Miller struck out Cody Bellinger swinging to end the game and earn Miller's first All-Star Game Star save.

Target: In 2017, Miller was selected to play in the All-Star Game, his second career selection. He struck out Cody Bellinger swinging to end the game and earn his first career All-Star save.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: His early works. Containing figurations instructive of the formal teachings of NAFA.

Target: His early works, although containing figurations instructive of the formal teachings of NAFA.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Delmarva Power provides electricity and natural gas to Ardencroft. Delmarva Power is a subsidiary of Exelon.

Target: Delmarva Power, a subsidiary of Exelon, provides electricity and natural gas to Ardencroft.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It is essentially a civil rights issue, because what we're talking about here is the repression of a religious sensibility. Not a religious sensibility, the religious sensibility.

Target: It is essentially a civil rights issue, because what we're talking about here is the repression of a religious sensibility. In fact, not a religious sensibility, the religious sensibility.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He won election to a second term. Before election began he resigned to accept the position of Deputy Clerk for Kane County.

Target: He won election to a second term, but before it began he resigned to accept the position of Deputy Clerk for Kane County.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Ashantihene (King of all Ashanti) reigned over all and was King of the division of Kumasi and the Ashanti Kingdom. Kumasi is the nation's capital.

Target: The Ashantihene (King of all Ashanti) reigned over all and was King of the division of Kumasi, the nation's capital, and the Ashanti Kingdom.


Source: Make the text coherent: The capital of the administrative post is Aidabaleten too. Aidabaleten is sometimes wrongly named Atabae.

Target: The capital of the administrative post is Aidabaleten, which is sometimes wrongly named Atabae, too.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Because all of these, including ATIS, are all audio, they can all be tuned by an analog TVRO receiver. Digital TV has overtaken analog because multiple channels can be transmitted on one transponder.

Target: Because all of these, including ATIS, are all audio, they can all be tuned by an analog TVRO receiver. However, digital TV has overtaken analog because multiple channels can be transmitted on one transponder.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the UK, following the Human Tissue Act 2004 all organs and tissue must be returned to the body. Permission is given by the family to retain any tissue for further investigation.

Target: In the UK, following the Human Tissue Act 2004 all organs and tissue must be returned to the body unless permission is given by the family to retain any tissue for further investigation.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Doc agrees to leave 1885, but. Commercial gasoline is not yet available.

Target: Doc agrees to leave 1885, but because commercial gasoline is not yet available.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Backbreaker does not use teams from the National Football League (NFL). Electronic Arts has an exclusive license to produce National Football League games in NFL's 's Madden series.

Target: Backbreaker does not use teams from the National Football League (NFL) because Electronic Arts has an exclusive license to produce NFL games in its Madden series.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It is usually mistaken to be located in Shah Alam. Previously there were no roads linking it directly to Subang Jaya.

Target: It is usually mistaken to be located in Shah Alam because previously there were no roads linking it directly to Subang Jaya.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Jump up ^ Carr, Nick (2008). Master of the Pulps: The Collected Essays of Carr, Nick.

Target: Jump up ^ Carr, Nick (2008). Master of the Pulps: The Collected Essays of Nick Carr.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Black lights produce light in the UV range, their spectrum is mostly confined to the longwave UVA region. That is, UV radiation nearest in wavelength to visible light, with low frequency and therefore relatively low energy.

Target: Although black lights produce light in the UV range, their spectrum is mostly confined to the longwave UVA region, that is, UV radiation nearest in wavelength to visible light, with low frequency and therefore relatively low energy.


Source: Fix sentence transition: During the 1940s, Canales 'active political participation was limited to making monetary collections. Canales' job Canales her constantly traveling from San Juan to Ponce.

Target: During the 1940s, Canales' active political participation was limited to making monetary collections because her job kept her constantly traveling from San Juan to Ponce.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Some of the details did tally. Her descriptions of the Antrim coastline were very accurate.

Target: Some of the details did tally. For instance, her descriptions of the Antrim coastline were very accurate.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In South Africa, she was a founding member of the Women's Development Foundation and became the Foundation's President in 1998. member has been a member of the Matla Trust as well as the South African Broadcasting Corporation.

Target: In South Africa, she was a founding member of the Women's Development Foundation and became the Foundation's President in 1998. She has been a board member of the Matla Trust as well as the South African Broadcasting Corporation.


Source: Make the text clearer: For a brief period in 2001, CKDX-FM also played dance music. Poor ratings led CKDX-FM to switch to an oldies format.

Target: For a brief period in 2001, CKDX-FM also played dance music but poor ratings led it to switch to an oldies format.


Source: Fix sentence flow: 19 June 2017. Parents of otherwise stateless children can apply for naturalization on the sole ground of being stateless without fulfilling any of the requirements for citizenship.

Target: Since 19 June 2017, parents of otherwise stateless children can apply for naturalization on the sole ground of being stateless without fulfilling any of the requirements for citizenship.


Source: Fix coherence: Carryforward of realized losses is allowed for five years. Capital gains from the sale of residential homes is tax-free after two years of residence, with certain limitations.

Target: Carryforward of realized losses is allowed for five years. However, capital gains from the sale of residential homes is tax-free after two years of residence, with certain limitations.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: One varies the parameters. One finds that there is now a curve (blue) of points in (a, b) space where stability is lost, where the stable solution will suddenly jump to an alternate outcome.

Target: Varying the parameters, one finds that there is now a curve (blue) of points in (a, b) space where stability is lost, where the stable solution will suddenly jump to an alternate outcome.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The religious center of the Albanian state also moved here. King Vache of Albanian, a relative of Yazdegerd II, was forced to convert to Zoroastrianism, but soon thereafter converted back to Christianity.

Target: The religious center of the Albanian state also moved here. However, King Vache of Albania, a relative of Yazdegerd II, was forced to convert to Zoroastrianism, but soon thereafter converted back to Christianity.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Shamil agreed, and The Caucasian Imamate was no more. Fighting did not immediately cease.

Target: Shamil agreed, and The Caucasian Imamate was no more. However, fighting did not immediately cease.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The 178th Reconnaissance Squadron includes operations of the MQ-1 Predator. The MQ-1 Predator is a medium-altitude, long-endurance, remotely piloted MQ-1 Predator.

Target: The 178th Reconnaissance Squadron includes operations of the MQ-1 Predator. The MQ-1 Predator is a medium-altitude, long-endurance, remotely piloted aircraft.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Oklahoma still kept the Cornhuskers off the board. The defeat still provided a ray of hope that as the players learned coach Clark's ways, the fortunes of Cornhuskers could be reversed.

Target: Oklahoma still kept the Cornhuskers off the board, but the defeat still provided a ray of hope that as the players learned coach Clark's ways, the fortunes of Nebraska could be reversed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: 23 March -- Pope Paul VI and Michael Ramsey meet in Rome. Pope Paul VI and Michael Ramsey is the Archbishop of Canterbury.

Target: 23 March -- Pope Paul VI and Michael Ramsey, the Archbishop of Canterbury, meet in Rome.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Beatles release their Abbey Road album which is an enormous commercial success and. Receiving mixed reviews at this time.

Target: The Beatles release their Abbey Road album which is an enormous commercial success and, although receiving mixed reviews at this time.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Andhra -- Karnataka link involves Raziuddin Nasir, a Hyderabad resident, and his aide Hafiz Khan Adnan from Bangalore, were arrested near Hubli in Karnataka this year. Another clear link between the terror elements in both blasts is the explosive material used.

Target: The Andhra -- Karnataka link involves Raziuddin Nasir, a Hyderabad resident, and his aide Hafiz Khan Adnan from Bangalore, were arrested near Hubli in Karnataka this year. Furthermore, another clear link between the terror elements in both blasts is the explosive material used.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Clearly, lawbreakers ought to be punished. No matter how horrific their deeds, as the targeting of Israeli civilians indeed is, lawbreakers should be punished according to the law.

Target: Clearly, lawbreakers ought to be punished. Yet, no matter how horrific their deeds, as the targeting of Israeli civilians indeed is, they should be punished according to the law.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, to locals, especially non-Chinese, the new word Zhujiao was both hard to read and pronounce and bore no resemblance to Tekka. The complex was officially renamed Tekka in 2000 as Tekka better reflected the history of the place.

Target: However, to locals, especially non-Chinese, the new word Zhujiao was both hard to read and pronounce and bore no resemblance to Tekka. Eventually, the complex was officially renamed Tekka Centre in 2000 as it better reflected the history of the place.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In Press It, teams had to drive to Camping Bela Vista to process raw sugar cane and distill its juice. Teams had to make 500 milliliters of ethanol to fuel their cars as an alternative fuel source.

Target: In Press It, teams had to drive to Camping Bela Vista to process raw sugar cane and distill its juice. Then, teams had to make 500 milliliters of ethanol to fuel their cars as an alternative fuel source.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Which, of course, is impossible. Rock stars as cool as this are damn hard to imitate.

Target: Which, of course, is impossible because rock stars as cool as this are damn hard to imitate.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: A SWAT team appears and fires at the Green Hornet and Kato killing him. Kato use the remains of their nearly demolished Black Beauty to run Scanlon out the 10th-floor window.

Target: A SWAT team appears and fires at the Green Hornet and Kato, who use the remains of their nearly demolished Black Beauty to run Scanlon out the 10th-floor window, killing him.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Nancy becomes Vinnie's girlfriend. Because of his aunt having a pool party, Arthur learns how to swim, but the teacher is Polly.

Target: Nancy becomes Vinnie's girlfriend. Meanwhile, because of his aunt having a pool party, Arthur learns how to swim, but the teacher is Polly.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It tricks her into shooting out her window. It climbs in.

Target: Tricking her into shooting out her window, it climbs in.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Peter was a man whom Phyllis Summers began dating during her separation from her ex-husband, Danny Romalotti. Phyllis Summers dated man, who was also a man of Phyllis Summers' therapist, in hopes of making Danny Romalotti jealous.

Target: Peter was a man whom Phyllis Summers began dating during her separation from her ex-husband, Danny Romalotti. Phyllis dated Peter, who was also a patient of Phyllis' therapist, in hopes of making Danny jealous.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Seriously wounded early in the attack. He refused to be evacuated and continued to fight in the close-range battle until running out of ammunition.

Target: Although seriously wounded early in the attack, he refused to be evacuated and continued to fight in the close-range battle until running out of ammunition.


Source: Fix sentence transition: To this work Hyde appended the Latin version which accompanies it in the Polyglott. This work archbishop Ussher had thought well-nigh impossible even for a native of Persia.

Target: To this work, which Archbishop Ussher had thought well-nigh impossible even for a native of Persia, Hyde appended the Latin version which accompanies it in the Polyglott.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Often students from the Mine Warfare Training Facility came on board for instruction tours. Members of Terror's crew, when not attending classes ashore, participated in drills, training, and exercises in gunnery, mine warfare, and damage control.

Target: Often students from the Mine Warfare Training Facility came on board for instruction tours. Meanwhile, members of Terror's crew, when not attending classes ashore, participated in drills, training, and exercises in gunnery, mine warfare, and damage control.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Freshmen have no leadership responsibilities, but have a host of duties to perform as they learn how to follow orders and operate in an environment of rigid rank structure. Seniors have significant leadership responsibilities and significantly more privileges that correspond to their rank.

Target: Freshmen have no leadership responsibilities, but have a host of duties to perform as they learn how to follow orders and operate in an environment of rigid rank structure, while seniors have significant leadership responsibilities and significantly more privileges that correspond to their rank.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Would you care to -- are you still holding to that statement. Do you wish to recant or explain yourself?

Target: Would you care to -- are you still holding to that statement, or do you wish to recant or explain yourself?


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Flashbacks reveal that Duncan dumped Veronica. His mother told him that Veronica was his Veronica.

Target: Flashbacks reveal that Duncan dumped Veronica because his mother told him that Veronica was his half-sister.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Rika finds Pike's virtual reality headset in her quarters. When Rika wears it, Rika finds herself in Pike's favorite simulation: a tactical military command of the Civil War era.

Target: Rika finds Pike's virtual reality headset in her quarters, and when she wears it, she finds herself in Pike's favorite simulation: a tactical military command of the Civil War era.


Source: Make the text clearer: Over the years, he will win two national titles with youth. At the same time, it is also the activity of talent scouts.

Target: Over the years, he will win two national titles with youth. Moreover, at the same time, it is also the activity of talent scouts.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The site founder Cheryl Demas sometimes goes undercover. Then Cheryl Demas reports the scams that Cheryl Demas has discovered in this way.

Target: The site founder Cheryl Demas sometimes goes undercover and then she reports the scams that she has discovered in this way.


Source: Make the text more coherent: At this point, it appears that the old counselors of Charlemagne, including Adalard and Wala reconciled with the emperor. In 822, Wala followed Wala's Adalard Adalard the Younger to the court who sought to meet with his father's old advisors.

Target: At this point, it appears that the old counselors of Charlemagne, including Adalard and Wala reconciled with the emperor. Thus, in 822, Wala followed his brother Adalard the Younger to the court who sought to meet with his father's old advisors.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Fritsch told Ulrich von Hassell -- when the latter tried to involve him in an anti-Nazi plot -- that Hitler was Germany's destiny. Nothing could be done to change that fact.

Target: Fritsch told Ulrich von Hassell -- when the latter tried to involve him in an anti-Nazi plot -- that Hitler was Germany's destiny, and nothing could be done to change that fact.


Source: Fix coherence: The last sentence of chapter 22.3 was removed. 22.3 forbade the refusing of a proper oath when imposed by lawful authority.

Target: The last sentence of chapter 22.3, which forbade the refusing of a proper oath when imposed by lawful authority, was removed.


Source: Fix sentence flow: At first, two poles or two rocks served as goals, and an official would watch to see if a puck passed through the goal. Disputes arose over goals and biased officiating.

Target: At first, two poles or two rocks served as goals, and an official would watch to see if a puck passed through the goal. However, disputes arose over goals and biased officiating.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Nests with less young are brooded more, presumably. Smaller broods lose heat faster.

Target: Nests with less young are brooded more, presumably because smaller broods lose heat faster.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The visitor center at Canyon Village incorporates a more traditional design as well. Canyon Village opened in 2006.

Target: The visitor center at Canyon Village, which opened in 2006, incorporates a more traditional design as well.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Jump up ^ Aos, S. (2002) The Juvenile Justice System in Washington State: recommendations to improve Cost-Effectiveness. Olympia, Washington State: Washington State Institute for Public Policy.

Target: Jump up ^ Aos, S. (2002) The Juvenile Justice System in Washington State: recommendations to improve Cost-Effectiveness. Olympia, WA: Washington State Institute for Public Policy.


Source: Make the text more logical: It isn't until Betty that he finds someone he truly loves for the first time. Things at Mode are not going well.

Target: It isn't until Betty that he finds someone he truly loves for the first time. Meanwhile, things at Mode are not going well.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Census records can be misleading. Population can fluctuate during the year because it is common for Ulithians to leave for work or school abroad and to return.

Target: Census records can be misleading because population can fluctuate during the year because it is common for Ulithians to leave for work or school abroad and to return.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As of 2001, the state's Energy Plan stated that. Wind and hydroelectric power are abundant.

Target: As of 2001, the state's Energy Plan stated that, although wind and hydroelectric power are abundant.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Herman consequently feared that if he supported Thurmond for president, Truman loyalists would challenge him for governor in the concurrent general election. Neither the Herman nor the Herman faction wished to be accused of bolting during the summer's Democratic gubernatorial primary.

Target: Herman consequently feared that if he supported Thurmond for president, Truman loyalists would challenge him for governor in the concurrent general election. Moreover, neither the Talmadge nor the anti-Talmadge faction wished to be accused of bolting during the summer's Democratic gubernatorial primary.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Use-wear uses an approach of low magnification study while micro-wear employs high magnification ; this raises contentions as to which approach is more useful. Use-wear studies regularly employ magnification up to 50x, while magnification beyond 50x is relegated to microwear analysis.

Target: Use-wear uses an approach of low magnification study while micro-wear employs high magnification ; this raises contentions as to which approach is more useful. Therefore, use-wear studies regularly employ magnification up to 50x, while magnification beyond 50x is relegated to microwear analysis.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The winter months are harsh. Food is in short supply.

Target: The winter months are harsh, and food is in short supply.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He taught himself everything and lived among the cranes in the forests for 7 years living on pine needles. His nickname: Sole Crane of the Pine Forest.

Target: He taught himself everything and lived among the cranes in the forests for 7 years living on pine needles. Hence his nickname: Sole Crane of the Pine Forest.


Source: Fix coherence: Inspired in part by the German magazine Berliner Illustrirte Zeitung. VU featured a constructivist aesthetic and was innovative in its layouts, especially in its double-page spreads.

Target: Although inspired in part by the German magazine Berliner Illustrirte Zeitung, VU featured a constructivist aesthetic and was innovative in its layouts, especially in its double-page spreads.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Loads on the diagonals alternate between compression and tension (approaching the centre), with no vertical elements. Elements near the centre must support both tension and compression in response to live loads.

Target: Loads on the diagonals alternate between compression and tension (approaching the centre), with no vertical elements, while elements near the centre must support both tension and compression in response to live loads.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: White noise draws its name from white light. Light that appears white generally does not have a flat power spectral density over the visible band.

Target: White noise draws its name from white light, although light that appears white generally does not have a flat power spectral density over the visible band.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Men cited not having to worry about false accusations of being a groper. Passengers complained about further overcrowding in mixed cars, and feared that women who ride mixed cars would be putting themselves at more risk than before.

Target: Men cited not having to worry about false accusations of being a groper. However, passengers complained about further overcrowding in mixed cars, and feared that women who ride mixed cars would be putting themselves at more risk than before.


Source: Fix coherence: Owing to his prominence as an posek, Rabbi Abadi is asked the most difficult questions, in which he issues a number of innovative and controversial decisions. Rabbi Abadi's ruling that permits writing a sefer torah through a silk screen process.

Target: Owing to his prominence as an posek, Rabbi Abadi is asked the most difficult questions, in which he issues a number of innovative and controversial decisions. For instance, his ruling that permits writing a sefer torah through a silk screen process.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: A review of school based curriculum for adolescent smoking revealed these curricula as being highly ineffective in reducing cigarette smoking initiation. When these curricula are combined with some other anti-smoking method, specifically media or smoke-free policies, then these curricula demonstrate slight efficacy.

Target: A review of school based curriculum for adolescent smoking revealed these curricula as being highly ineffective in reducing cigarette smoking initiation. Although, when these curricula are combined with some other anti-smoking method, specifically media or smoke-free policies, then these curricula demonstrate slight efficacy.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The following season Watanabe did not perform as well on the Pro Tour, with a 35th-place finish at the World Championship being his best finish. Off Tour Watanabe did have some stand-out finishes.

Target: The following season Watanabe did not perform as well on the Pro Tour, with a 35th-place finish at the World Championship being his best finish. However, off Tour he did have some stand-out finishes.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Shembe's Nazarite church was to become the largest Zionist congregation until eclipsed by the Zion Christian Church in the 1950s. Shembe's church was distinct from most other Zionist sects in that Shembe insisted that Shembe was a Shembe sent directly from God to the Zulu nation.

Target: Shembe's Nazarite church was to become the largest Zionist congregation until eclipsed by the Zion Christian Church in the 1950s. Shembe's church was distinct from most other Zionist sects in that he insisted that he was a prophet sent directly from God to the Zulu nation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: About 2,000 men came to Zortman in 1884, when Pike Landusky and Dutch Louie discovered gold. By 1893, Zortman and a partner owned the Alabama Mine.

Target: About 2,000 men came to Zortman in 1884, when Pike Landusky and Dutch Louie discovered gold. By 1893, Pete Zortman and a partner owned the Alabama Mine.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Enemy frontline troops, taken by surprise, initially gave ground. Resistance stiffened after an Allied penetration of some three miles.

Target: Enemy frontline troops, taken by surprise, initially gave ground, although resistance stiffened after an Allied penetration of some three miles.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Most growth generally occurs when waters become warmer in spring and summer. Reduced growth continues in winter.

Target: Most growth generally occurs when waters become warmer in spring and summer, although reduced growth continues in winter.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Judge Elmer Scipio Dundy of Nebraska declared that Indians were people within the meaning of the laws, and they had the rights associated with a writ of habeas corpus. Judge Dundy left unsettled the question as to whether people were guaranteed US citizenship.

Target: Judge Elmer Scipio Dundy of Nebraska declared that Indians were people within the meaning of the laws, and they had the rights associated with a writ of habeas corpus. However, Judge Dundy left unsettled the question as to whether Native Americans were guaranteed US citizenship.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: They attempt to meet Fidel Castro to discuss Cuba -- United States relations, but Castro never shows up. Much of the film consists of discussions between progressive Smallwood and free-marketer Stirling about the effects of the Castro regime.

Target: They attempt to meet Fidel Castro to discuss Cuba -- United States relations, but Castro never shows up. Instead, much of the film consists of discussions between progressive Smallwood and free-marketer Stirling about the effects of the Castro regime.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: At Metacritic the album has received an average score of 76 based on 23 reviews. Metacritic assigns a normalized rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics.

Target: At Metacritic, which assigns a normalized rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics, the album has received an average score of 76 based on 23 reviews.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Previously, Campbell was executive vice president, CBS Entertainment. Before joining CBS Entertainment, vice president served as senior vice president, drama development at Warner Bros. Television.

Target: Previously, Campbell was executive vice president, CBS Entertainment. Before joining CBS, Campbell served as senior vice president, drama development at Warner Bros. Television.


Source: Fix sentence transition: As a catch-all for dog breeds whose original purpose was to perform tasks that do not fit into a more specific category of work. Until 1983 herding dogs were part of the Working Group.

Target: As a catch-all for dog breeds whose original purpose was to perform tasks that do not fit into a more specific category of work. For example, until 1983 herding dogs were part of the Working Group.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: If temperatures continue to increase, the survival of the species will be further threatened. Currently 50 % of wet seasons are warm enough to be considered to be unfavorable for the species.

Target: If temperatures continue to increase, the survival of the species will be further threatened and currently 50 % of wet seasons are warm enough to be considered to be unfavorable for the species.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The problem thus centres on Marx's transition from philosophy to economics, which has been considered by orthodox Marxism as a progressive change towards scientific socialism. This positivist reading has been challenged by Marxism theorists as well as members of the New Left.

Target: The problem thus centres on Marx's transition from philosophy to economics, which has been considered by orthodox Marxism as a progressive change towards scientific socialism. However, this positivist reading has been challenged by Marxist theorists as well as members of the New Left.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Temascals (saunas), songs, and games were the rule. Fighting and thievery the exception.

Target: Temascals (saunas), songs, and games were the rule, while fighting and thievery the exception.


Source: Fix sentence flow: This agreement never extended beyond the Sefton Park R&D facility. Few customers were even aware of it or ever saw benefits from it ; neither did their own support engineers.

Target: This agreement never extended beyond the Sefton Park R&D facility and few customers were even aware of it or ever saw benefits from it ; neither did their own support engineers.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In 2008 and 2009 Tisseyre began focusing on long distance triathlon and competing in various Ironman 70.3 distance races. At the end of 2009 Tisseyre took third place at the Ironman 70.3 in Clearwater, Florida.

Target: In 2008 and 2009 Tisseyre began focusing on long distance triathlon and competing in various Ironman 70.3 distance races. At the end of 2009 she took third place at the Ironman 70.3 World Championship in Clearwater, Florida.


Source: Make the text more logical: Mark C. Brickell is a trader in the derivatives industry. (1). Mark C. Brickell was a trader at J.P. Morgan and served as chairman of the International Swaps and Derivatives Association from 1988 to 1992.

Target: Mark C. Brickell is a trader in the derivatives industry. (1). He was a managing director at J.P. Morgan and served as chairman of the International Swaps and Derivatives Association from 1988 to 1992.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Mrs Gammon was killed instantly. Mrs Gammon is a mother of two.

Target: Mrs Gammon, a mother of two, was killed instantly.


Source: Fix coherence: He was a democrat, an executive member of the Samoset Democratic Club. Like most civic roles in the city at the time, democrat worked through the confines of Tammany Hall.

Target: He was a democrat, an executive member of the Samoset Democratic Club. And like most civic roles in the city at the time, he worked through the confines of Tammany Hall.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: There is also foot access to the start via the Dore Pass Route (10.5 km one way). This is an advanced access and not recommended for most walkers.

Target: There is also foot access to the start via the Dore Pass Route (10.5 km one way) although this is an advanced track and not recommended for most walkers.


Source: Make the text coherent: De Lattre urged caution. Concerned over the dispersion of his forces and the shortage of fuel for his tanks and trucks, Monsabert's infantry plunged into the heart of Marseille in the early hours of 23 August.

Target: Although de Lattre urged caution, concerned over the dispersion of his forces and the shortage of fuel for his tanks and trucks, Monsabert's infantry plunged into the heart of Marseille in the early hours of 23 August.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The request was granted, officially ending the CFL's American experiment. Talks had been so far advanced that at least one Baltimore outlet reported that the Stallions were moving to Montreal in January.

Target: The request was granted, officially ending the CFL's American experiment. However, talks had been so far advanced that at least one Baltimore outlet reported that the Stallions were moving to Montreal in January.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The WHO has proposed a criterion for diagnosis and classification of MDS that may apply to most cases. Occasional cases are difficult to classify into defined categories because of one or more unusual features :

Target: The WHO has proposed a criterion for diagnosis and classification of MDS that may apply to most cases. However, occasional cases are difficult to classify into defined categories because of one or more unusual features :


Source: Make the text more coherent: The game received positive reviews upon release, with critics mainly praising the graphics, presentation and challenging gameplay. Criticism was directed at the ZX Spectrum port, which received disapproval over its monochrome graphics.

Target: The game received positive reviews upon release, with critics mainly praising the graphics, presentation and challenging gameplay. However, criticism was directed at the ZX Spectrum port, which received disapproval over its monochrome graphics.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The stem often scrambles through vegetation but may also grow prostrate along the ground. The stem may be branched.

Target: The stem, which may be branched, often scrambles through vegetation but may also grow prostrate along the ground.


Source: Make the text more logical: Hercules was designed from the start to operate from Ajax bases. As Hercules protected a much greater area, not as many sites were needed to provide coverage of potential targets.

Target: Hercules was designed from the start to operate from Ajax bases. However, as it protected a much greater area, not as many sites were needed to provide coverage of potential targets.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This episode also teases with the idea of Wonder Woman and Batman having a relationship. At the end Warhawk, an older Static, and the new Batman make a short appearance.

Target: This episode also teases with the idea of Wonder Woman and Batman having a relationship. And at the end Warhawk, an older Static, and the new Batman make a short appearance.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Rachel and Judith learn that they are no longer part of Deanna and the Poops. New members join the cheer squad.

Target: Rachel and Judith learn that they are no longer part of Deanna and the Poops. Meanwhile, new members join the cheer squad.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: As more research is gathered from studies of distribution, behaviour, and DNA, the order and number of families and species may change. Different approaches to ornithological nomenclature have led to concurrent systems of classification (see Sibley-Ahlquist taxonomy).

Target: As more research is gathered from studies of distribution, behaviour, and DNA, the order and number of families and species may change. Furthermore, different approaches to ornithological nomenclature have led to concurrent systems of classification (see Sibley-Ahlquist taxonomy).


Source: Make the text more consistent: Tromelin attained the rank of rear admiral. Tromelin returned to the Pacific in 1846 as commander of the French navy in the Pacific.

Target: Attaining the rank of rear admiral, Tromelin returned to the Pacific in 1846 as commander of the French navy in the Pacific.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Pilots flie out of Sky Harbor Airport until the Luke runways were ready. Pilots received 10 weeks of instruction and the first class graduated 15 August 1941.

Target: Flying out of Sky Harbor Airport until the Luke runways were ready, pilots received 10 weeks of instruction and the first class graduated 15 August 1941.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Acting swiftly on this revelation, Windu and three other Jedi Masters attempt to arrest him. Palpatine mercilessly kills Windu's companions and fights the Jedi Masters.

Target: Acting swiftly on this revelation, Windu and three other Jedi Masters attempt to arrest him, but Palpatine mercilessly kills Windu's companions and fights the Jedi Master.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The economy of the island was based on the production of sugar cane and vinegar, as well as commercial fishing. Difficulties with agriculture due to pests, and due to foreign completion caused many islanders to abandon the island from the late 1960s.

Target: The economy of the island was based on the production of sugar cane and vinegar, as well as commercial fishing. However, difficulties with agriculture due to pests, and due to foreign completion caused many islanders to abandon the island from the late 1960s.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Educated in Rome, in his Meditations. Marcus would write his inmost thoughts in Greek.

Target: Although educated in Rome, in his Meditations, Marcus would write his inmost thoughts in Greek.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The station manager, Robert Jansen, described the waters as handy, probably. There would be more water available to stock.

Target: The station manager, Robert Jansen, described the waters as handy, probably meaning there would be more water available to stock.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The number of men killed has been estimated at 800. Due to incomplete reports of the crimes, a precise account is impossible.

Target: The number of men killed has been estimated at 800. In fact, due to incomplete reports of the crimes, a precise account is impossible.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Almost nothing or very little is known about its ecology, the larva of one species was described by Strenze (1950) as terrestrial. Adults can be collected using emergence traps set over rivulets.

Target: Almost nothing or very little is known about its ecology, the larva of one species was described by Strenze (1950) as terrestrial, but adults can be collected using emergence traps set over rivulets.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: On April 16, 2014 all remaining employees were laid off. Plans were for the school to remain open and staffed with volunteers until after graduation.

Target: On April 16, 2014 all remaining employees were laid off although plans were for the school to remain open and staffed with volunteers until after graduation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He reminds Shuji of this incident. He offers to show her this patch.

Target: Reminding Shuji of this incident, he offers to show her this patch.


Source: Make the text clearer: Lone Star Executive Airport is located in Conroe. Lone Star Executive Airport is a general aviation airport.

Target: Lone Star Executive Airport, a general aviation airport, is located in Conroe.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: By 8 October, 20 civilians were killed. Thousands forced to flee their homes after Pakistani and Indian security forces started heavy shelling, both sides blamed the other for the shooting.

Target: By 8 October, 20 civilians were killed and thousands forced to flee their homes after Pakistani and Indian security forces started heavy shelling, both sides blamed the other for the shooting.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In it, she claimed that the role of Peggy Fair in the television series Mannix was offered to her during the final season of Star Trek. Producer Gene Roddenberry refused to release her from her contract.

Target: In it, she claimed that the role of Peggy Fair in the television series Mannix was offered to her during the final season of Star Trek, but producer Gene Roddenberry refused to release her from her contract.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Advani started his career by assisting Saeed and Aziz Mirza in directing Naya Nukkad. Advani was an Advani, and assisted Karan Johar in Advani's first two directorial projects, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai (1998) and Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham.

Target: Advani started his career by assisting Saeed and Aziz Mirza in directing Naya Nukkad. Then, he was an assistant director, and assisted Karan Johar in his first two directorial projects, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai (1998) and Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Lewis anticipated that the US would have to go to war with the Osage, because of their raids on eastern Natives and European-American settlements. The US lacked sufficient military strength to coerce Osage bands into ceasing their raids.

Target: Lewis anticipated that the US would have to go to war with the Osage, because of their raids on eastern Natives and European-American settlements. However, the U.S. lacked sufficient military strength to coerce Osage bands into ceasing their raids.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The success rate of either surgery depends greatly on the skill and the familiarity with the procedure of the surgeon. Comparisons have shown stapedotomy to yield results at least as good as stapedectomy, with fewer complications, and thus stapedotomy is preferred under normal circumstances.

Target: The success rate of either surgery depends greatly on the skill and the familiarity with the procedure of the surgeon. However, comparisons have shown stapedotomy to yield results at least as good as stapedectomy, with fewer complications, and thus stapedotomy is preferred under normal circumstances.


Source: Fix coherence errors: After preservation in the refrigerator for two weeks, the dinoflagellates had all died. What had remained were the round bodies.

Target: After preservation in the refrigerator for two weeks, the dinoflagellates had all died but what had remained were the round bodies.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Baltes argues that a dynamic interaction of these factors is what influences an individual's development. Certain factors may have a more powerful effect on a particular domain than another factor.

Target: Baltes argues that a dynamic interaction of these factors is what influences an individual's development. As a result, certain factors may have a more powerful effect on a particular domain than another factor.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Kings were rather competitive in the league. Success has not come until recently.

Target: Although the Kings were rather competitive in the league, success has not come until recently.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: People from the Brazilian community use the tools and materials around them to create a form of play. People use mud balls or cashews to play marbles, a game many communities play with small marbles.

Target: People from the Brazilian community use the tools and materials around them to create a form of play. For instance they use mud balls or cashews to play marbles, a game many communities play with small marbles.


Source: Fix sentence flow: According to sociologist Neil Gross, the study was significant. Study was the first study to poll university faculty specifically about their political views.

Target: According to sociologist Neil Gross, the study was significant because it was the first effort to poll university faculty specifically about their political views.


Source: Make the text clearer: Metonymies provide interesting evidence of a phonological feminine. Although most adults would probably say that autobus is masculine if they were given time to think, specific bus routes defined by their number are always feminine.

Target: Metonymies provide interesting evidence of a phonological feminine. For instance, although most adults would probably say that autobus is masculine if they were given time to think, specific bus routes defined by their number are always feminine.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The local tourism agency in Wushan has placed poles in some of these holes. Tourists can see how they were used in ancient times.

Target: The local tourism agency in Wushan has placed poles in some of these holes so that tourists can see how they were used in ancient times.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Chapman Pincher in his book Inside Story published in 1978 quotes Manningham-Buller as jokingly saying he could have sued Tom Denning for breach of copyright. Significant portions of Manningham-Buller's report appeared in Tom Denning's report virtually unchanged.

Target: Chapman Pincher in his book Inside Story published in 1978 quotes Manningham-Buller as jokingly saying he could have sued Tom Denning for breach of copyright because significant portions of Manningham-Buller's report appeared in Denning's report virtually unchanged.


Source: Make the text coherent: He warns that she can be killed by a master. He attempts to persuade her to turn a new leaf and leave the life of an assassin.

Target: Warning that she can be killed by a master, he attempts to persuade her to turn a new leaf and leave the life of an assassin.


Source: Make the text more coherent: After the race Leslie Reynolds announced that Pauls Fun has tweaked a muscle. Muscle would be a muscle against time to be fit for the semi-finals to be held just two days later.

Target: After the race Leslie Reynolds announced that Pauls Fun has tweaked a muscle and it would be a race against time to be fit for the semi-finals to be held just two days later.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Puckett then grounded to Henneman, who attempted to initiate a double play. First baseman Darrell Evans misplayed the ball for his second error of the series, allowing Gladden to score and make it a 6 -- 3 Minnesota lead.

Target: Puckett then grounded to Henneman, who attempted to initiate a double play. However, first baseman Darrell Evans misplayed the ball for his second error of the series, allowing Gladden to score and make it a 6 -- 3 Minnesota lead.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Second was the Gibson Motorsport Holden VP Commodore of Mark Skaife and Jim Richards. Third was the Perkins Engineering Commodore of Larry Perkins and Gregg Hansford.

Target: Second was the Gibson Motorsport Holden VP Commodore of Mark Skaife and Jim Richards, while third was the Perkins Engineering Commodore of Larry Perkins and Gregg Hansford.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: There is strong skepticism in several quarters regarding whether any of these plots could have gone ahead without arousing suspicion, or were even superficially viable. No terrorist bombmakers have succeeded in using commercial gas cylinders to collapse a building.

Target: There is strong skepticism in several quarters regarding whether any of these plots could have gone ahead without arousing suspicion, or were even superficially viable. For instance, no terrorist bombmakers have succeeded in using commercial gas cylinders to collapse a building.


Source: Make the text clearer: Two human polls comprise the 2006 -- 07 NCAA Division I women's basketball rankings in addition to various publications' preseason polls. The 2006 -- 07 NCAA Division I women's basketball rankings are the AP Poll and the Coaches Poll.

Target: Two human polls comprise the 2006 -- 07 NCAA Division I women's basketball rankings, the AP Poll and the Coaches Poll, in addition to various publications' preseason polls.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Protesters continued to occupy university campuses around the nation. Organizations such as the Communist Party of Greece announced plans for protests later that day.

Target: Protesters continued to occupy university campuses around the nation, while organizations such as the Communist Party of Greece announced plans for protests later that day.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The 2016 -- 17 Azerbaijan Premier League was the 25th season of the Azerbaijan Premier League since its establishment in 1992. The Azerbaijan Premier League is the Azerbaijani professional league for association football clubs.

Target: The 2016 -- 17 Azerbaijan Premier League was the 25th season of the Azerbaijan Premier League, the Azerbaijani professional league for association football clubs, since its establishment in 1992.


Source: Make the text clearer: Black scans the area. Black notices another parking garage opposite an office block, and attempts to have the building evacuated.

Target: Scanning the area, Black notices another parking garage opposite an office block, and attempts to have the building evacuated.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Corman had made no previous attempt at the genre. Past and future Corman productions in other genres incorporated comedic elements.

Target: Corman had made no previous attempt at the genre, although past and future Corman productions in other genres incorporated comedic elements.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This depends both on how strongly someone disapproves of academic dishonesty and what types of justifications the student uses to escape a sense of guilt. Students who personally do not have a moral problem with academic misconduct can cheat guilt-free.

Target: This depends both on how strongly someone disapproves of academic dishonesty and what types of justifications the student uses to escape a sense of guilt. For instance, students who personally do not have a moral problem with academic misconduct can cheat guilt-free.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cliff imagines he is back on a sinking ship during the war. Cliff leaves his room and drowns himself in the nursing home's indoor swimming pool.

Target: Imagining he is back on a sinking ship during the war, Cliff leaves his room and drowns himself in the nursing home's indoor swimming pool.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mutations changing Arg219 to a carboxylate result in a quinonoid intermediate being detected. None was detected with arginine.

Target: Mutations changing Arg219 to a carboxylate result in a quinonoid intermediate being detected whereas none was detected with arginine.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Engelsen was part of the Norwegian team free system event. The Norwegian team won the gold medal in the gymnastics men's team.

Target: Engelsen was part of the Norwegian team, which won the gold medal in the gymnastics men's team, free system event.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She argued that there should not be a constant period of electoral disqualification under Article 62 (1) (f) of the Constitution. Courts should decide the question according to the conduct of individuals.

Target: She argued that there should not be a constant period of electoral disqualification under Article 62 (1) (f) of the Constitution, but courts should decide the question according to the conduct of individuals.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Due to the efficiency of ADMM in solving regularized problems, it has a good potential for stochastic optimization in high dimensions. Conventional stochastic ADMM methods suffer from curse of dimensionality.

Target: Due to the efficiency of ADMM in solving regularized problems, it has a good potential for stochastic optimization in high dimensions. However, conventional stochastic ADMM methods suffer from curse of dimensionality.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In this case, the algorithm needs pointers from children to all parents. Changes can be propagated.

Target: In this case, the algorithm needs pointers from children to all parents so that changes can be propagated.


Source: Make the text clearer: The ATX and BTX standards were both proposed by Intel. Future development of BTX retail products by Intel was canceled in September 2006 following Intel's decision to refocus on low-power CPUs after suffering scaling and thermal issues with the Pentium 4.

Target: The ATX and BTX standards were both proposed by Intel. However, future development of BTX retail products by Intel was canceled in September 2006 following Intel's decision to refocus on low-power CPUs after suffering scaling and thermal issues with the Pentium 4.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The number of universally maintained genes is small and inadequate for independent cellular growth and replication. Small genome species must achieve such feats by means of varying genes.

Target: The number of universally maintained genes is small and inadequate for independent cellular growth and replication, so that small genome species must achieve such feats by means of varying genes.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The newspaper compared her with other deaf musicians, such as Phil Collins, Ozzy Osbourne, Fatboy Slim and Pete Townshend. Noted that newspaper's deafness developed due newspaper's their careers.

Target: The newspaper compared her with other deaf musicians, such as Phil Collins, Ozzy Osbourne, Fatboy Slim and Pete Townshend, although noted that their deafness developed due to their careers.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Bhabani also worked in the R&D Centers of Samsung ElectroMechanics Co. Ltd in Bangalore and South Korea as Sr. Software Engineer. Samsung ElectroMechanics Co. Ltd is a Samsung ElectroMechanics Co. Ltd that produces high-tech integrated components of electronics and mechanical devices for all electrical devices.

Target: Bhabani also worked in the R&D Centers of Samsung ElectroMechanics Co. Ltd in Bangalore and South Korea as Sr. Software Engineer. Samsung Electro-Mechanics is a corporation that produces high-tech integrated components of electronics and mechanical devices for all electrical devices.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He was not allowed to enter the House. Invited by Big Brother.

Target: He was not allowed to enter the House unless invited by Big Brother.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Little is known about their reproduction. Juveniles have been observed in December and January.

Target: Little is known about their reproduction, although juveniles have been observed in December and January.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He spent the majority of his Oiler career in the American Hockey League. He did play one game for Oiler in 2002.

Target: He spent the majority of his Oiler career in the American Hockey League, although he did play one game for Edmonton in 2002.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Taxes were collected and arrears in cattle extracted when taxation was not available. One thousand Druze were conscripted into the Ottoman army and scattered throughout the empire.

Target: Taxes were collected and arrears in cattle extracted when taxation was not available. Furthermore, one thousand Druze were conscripted into the Ottoman army and scattered throughout the empire.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He disobeyed his ban from combat flying. He flew his last mission of the war on 9 April 1945.

Target: Disobeying his ban from combat flying, he flew his last mission of the war on 9 April 1945.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Kaoru reveals his presence to them as a distraction to allow Luna, Sharla and Adam to escape. Though they all get away, Brindo sees the children leaving the forest, and figures out presence's secret.

Target: Kaoru reveals his presence to them as a distraction to allow Luna, Sharla and Adam to escape, but though they all get away, Brindo sees the children leaving the forest, and figures out its secret.


Source: Make the text more consistent: His signature move is the Bakudan Punch and even Zetton states that he wouldn't fancy facing up with Tsutomu. Was defeated by both Guriko and Hana when he challenged them.

Target: His signature move is the Bakudan Punch and even Zetton states that he wouldn't fancy facing up with Tsutomu. However, was defeated by both Guriko and Hana when he challenged them.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It has been seen they live in Africa in the late Cretaceous, 95 million years ago, where no Deinonychus has been found. At one point the Primeval site did state that the raptors were based on Utahraptor.

Target: It has been seen they live in Africa in the late Cretaceous, 95 million years ago, where no Deinonychus has been found. Although, at one point the Primeval site did state that the raptors were based on Utahraptor.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The following is a list of fictional television characters who were described as Democrats. Who are associated with the Democrats.

Target: The following is a list of fictional television characters who were described as Democrats or who are associated with the Democratic Party.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Sir Edward P. Bates 1st Baronet Sir Edward P. Bates is the son of former Plymouth MP Sir Edward Bates.

Target: Sir Edward P. Bates, the son of former Plymouth MP Sir Edward Bates, 1st Baronet


Source: Fix sentence transition: Five years his senior. Blake was a niece of actor Milburn Stone, who filled the role of Doc Adams on CBS's Gunsmoke Western series.

Target: Although five years his senior, Blake was a niece of actor Milburn Stone, who filled the role of Doc Adams on CBS's Gunsmoke Western series.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This is band member Anastasia Karpova's first full-length studio album. Studio album's the other two members' studio album.

Target: This is band member Anastasia Karpova's first full-length studio album, while it's the other two members' second.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In 2005 Marzia Caravelli made her debut for the Italian national team. Marzia Caravelli was a late Marzia Caravelli in sporting terms and begun to get good results at international level in 2010 at the age of 29.

Target: In 2005 Marzia Caravelli made her debut for the Italian national team, but she was a late developer in sporting terms and begun to get good results at international level in 2010 at the age of 29.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Compared to an empty gas cylinder, a MOF-filled gas cylinder can store more hydrogen at a given pressure. Hydrogen molecules adsorb to the surface of MOFs.

Target: Compared to an empty gas cylinder, a MOF-filled gas cylinder can store more hydrogen at a given pressure because hydrogen molecules adsorb to the surface of MOFs.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Monica design process encountered a number of difficulties, leading to many failed tests and the early cancellation of the program in 1962. Elements of its design were later incorporated into more successful ONERA test vehicles.

Target: The Monica design process encountered a number of difficulties, leading to many failed tests and the early cancellation of the program in 1962. However, elements of its design were later incorporated into more successful ONERA test vehicles.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The decision was made to modify their application. Either the Kane Area School District or the PA Charter Appeals Board could approve them.

Target: The decision was made to modify their application, so that either the Kane Area School District or the PA Charter Appeals Board could approve them.


Source: Fix sentence transition: On 15 July 1957 the Tunisian army replaced the Beylical Guard around the palace. Thereafter the Bey effectively lost his freedom of movement.

Target: On 15 July 1957 the Tunisian army replaced the Beylical Guard around the palace, and thereafter the Bey effectively lost his freedom of movement.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Modern music institutions in Bahrain include the Bahrain Music Institute, the Bahrain Orchestra and the Classical Institute of Music. The Bahrain male-only pearl diving tradition is known for the songs called fidjeri.

Target: Modern music institutions in Bahrain include the Bahrain Music Institute, the Bahrain Orchestra and the Classical Institute of Music. The Bahraini male-only pearl diving tradition is known for the songs called fidjeri.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Naruto leaps into action. Naruto forms a Rasenshuriken which after some manipulation, finally lands an attack on the Raikage which proves to be just as futile.

Target: Leaping into action, Naruto forms a Rasenshuriken which after some manipulation, finally lands an attack on the Raikage which proves to be just as futile.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Late at night, Dr. Benson drives through the countryside and stumbles upon a car crash where he finds a wounded young woman named Susan. Dr. Dr. gets Susan in Benson's car and seeks shelter for the two in a nearby castle.

Target: Late at night, Dr. Benson drives through the countryside and stumbles upon a car crash where he finds a wounded young woman named Susan. Dr. Benson gets Susan in his car and seeks shelter for the two in a nearby castle.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Politically Orji is autonomous. It still shares cultural and traditional bonds with the Uratta clan, their ancestral lineage.

Target: Although politically Orji is autonomous, it still shares cultural and traditional bonds with the Uratta clan, their ancestral lineage.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Advantages of this method include the ability to generalize findings better. Families were treated in natural settings.

Target: Advantages of this method include the ability to generalize findings better because families were treated in natural settings.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Paul Lasike (born 17 June 1990) is a New Zealand born professional rugby union player for the Utah Warriors in Major League Rugby. In American football, Paul Lasike is a Paul Lasike who is currently a Paul Lasike.

Target: Paul Lasike (born 17 June 1990) is a New Zealand born professional rugby union player for the Utah Warriors in Major League Rugby. In American football, he is a fullback who is currently a free agent.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: More than US $25 million has also been invested into developing the Penglai Pavilion and other sites. The Penglai Pavilion is a large Penglai Pavilion of ancient buildings, palaces and temples, that have been restored and rebuilt.

Target: More than US $25 million has also been invested into developing the Penglai Pavilion and other sites. The Penglai Pavilion is a large park of ancient buildings, palaces and temples, that have been restored and rebuilt.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Scales are usually ctenoid. Sometimes Scales are cycloid or otherwise modified.

Target: Scales are usually ctenoid, although sometimes they are cycloid or otherwise modified.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Proper wiring polarity must be retained during coil replacement. This diode will act as a dead short, immediately destroying electronic switches.

Target: Proper wiring polarity must be retained during coil replacement or this diode will act as a dead short, immediately destroying electronic switches.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Nora has a second chance. This time Roberto takes Nora's defense, with the necessary evidence he manages to Nora's her innocence and the Nora leaves her at freedom, but without punishing Alan for his mistake.

Target: Nora has a second chance and this time Roberto takes her defense, with the necessary evidence he manages to prove her innocence and the judge leaves her at freedom, but without punishing Alan for his mistake.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Acrobats correspond to the tone of Picasso. Acrobats represent both mystery and enchantment in the poems of Guillaume Apollinaire written in the same period.

Target: Corresponding to the tone of Picasso, acrobats represent both mystery and enchantment in the poems of Guillaume Apollinaire written in the same period.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Some psychological assessments have been validated for use when administered via computer or the Internet. Caution must be applied to these test results, as it is possible to fake in electronically mediated assessment.

Target: Some psychological assessments have been validated for use when administered via computer or the Internet. However, caution must be applied to these test results, as it is possible to fake in electronically mediated assessment.


Source: Fix coherence: When suddenly, a few men appear and plan to attack Sundeep. men were the men of the man on whom Sundeep attacked with acid.

Target: When suddenly, a few men appear and plan to attack Sundeep. They were the friends of the man on whom Sundeep attacked with acid.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Students of Maine Township attend a wide variety of private schools in Chicago and the surrounding suburbs. These are the main private schools located within the township.

Target: Although students of Maine Township attend a wide variety of private schools in Chicago and the surrounding suburbs, these are the main private schools located within the township.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: One passenger was killed. Ten others wounded, including Hasan, who later died of his wounds.

Target: One passenger was killed and ten others wounded, including Hasan, who later died of his wounds.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Arroyo left Tampa Bay in January 2015 and joined the Oklahoma State University football coaching staff in February 2015 as the running back coach. Arroyo was Co Arroyo with Mario Cristobal for the Oregon Ducks in 2017.

Target: Arroyo left Tampa Bay in January 2015 and joined the Oklahoma State University football coaching staff in February 2015 as the running back coach. Marcus was Co offensive coordinator with Mario Cristobal for the Oregon Ducks in 2017.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mariam remained with her beleaguered husband until the king eventually escaped to the Ottoman territory in September 1810. Mariam Mariam, on the other hand, fled to Mingrelia under protection of its ruler, Princess Nino.

Target: Mariam remained with her beleaguered husband until the king eventually escaped to the Ottoman territory in September 1810. Queen Mariam, on the other hand, fled to Mingrelia under protection of its ruler, Princess Nino.


Source: Fix coherence: Dennis Mark Bristow (born 7 January 1959) is a South African businessman. Dennis Mark Bristow is the businessman (businessman) of Randgold Resources, a British multinational gold mining company.

Target: Dennis Mark Bristow (born 7 January 1959) is a South African businessman. He is the chief executive officer (CEO) of Randgold Resources, a British multinational gold mining company.


Source: Fix coherence errors: She was the first female chief executive of North Carolina State University in Raleigh, North Carolina. In April 2004, chief executive was named Chancellor of the University of California San Diego.

Target: She was the first female chief executive of North Carolina State University in Raleigh, North Carolina. In April 2004, Fox was named Chancellor of the University of California San Diego.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The name Melaleuca leucadendron is sometimes given, but it is an orthographical variant. That variant is a variant.

Target: The name Melaleuca leucadendron is sometimes given, but it is an orthographical variant meaning that it is a spelling mistake.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As a result of this, the IMF approved a 4 billion loan (in USD) to the Mexican government. Conditions applied that worked to reform the Mexican economy.

Target: As a result of this, the IMF approved a 4 billion loan (in USD) to the Mexican government. However, conditions applied that worked to reform the Mexican economy.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Reportedly, the trophy was sent to Minnesota's locker room. Coach George Hauser refused Minnesota, suggesting such traditions be held off until after World War II.

Target: Reportedly, the trophy was sent to Minnesota's locker room, but coach George Hauser refused it, suggesting such traditions be held off until after World War II.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: L For public peoples only can access K.S.R.T.C buses. Private buses have limited kilometers to pass through the MC Road.

Target: L For public peoples only can access K.S.R.T.C buses because private buses have limited kilometers to pass through the MC Road.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Below is the list of directly promoted and relegated teams by every single season. Relegated were last-placed teams in First League, while directly promoted teams were the teams of Montenegrin Second League.

Target: Below is the list of directly promoted and relegated teams by every single season. Relegated were last-placed teams in First League, while directly promoted teams were the champions of Montenegrin Second League.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Released in September 2016 in India exclusively via Flipkart, the E3 Power sold a record 100,000 units on its first day of sale. (The E3 Power E3 Power, on the other hand, was never launched in India ; E3 Power was launched elsewhere. )

Target: Released in September 2016 in India exclusively via Flipkart, the E3 Power sold a record 100,000 units on its first day of sale. (The base E3, on the other hand, was never launched in India ; it was launched elsewhere. )


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Such names fell out of favour. Passengers could sometimes confuse the name of the locomotive with the destination of the train.

Target: Such names fell out of favour because passengers could sometimes confuse the name of the locomotive with the destination of the train.


Source: Fix sentence transition: By the early 1990s solid state transmitters were being widely used in radio broadcasting. Sales of vacuum tube transmitters began to decline.

Target: By the early 1990s solid state transmitters were being widely used in radio broadcasting, while sales of vacuum tube transmitters began to decline.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The wide range of natural colors makes it easy to have a variety of colors without the need for dyeing. Natural vegetable dyes are sometimes used to produce deeper colors and wider selection.

Target: The wide range of natural colors makes it easy to have a variety of colors without the need for dyeing, although natural vegetable dyes are sometimes used to produce deeper colors and wider selection.


Source: Fix coherence: It documented over 45,000 farm names and related information in 1886. It became the inspiration for similar studies in Sweden and Denmark.

Target: Documenting over 45,000 farm names and related information in 1886, it became the inspiration for similar studies in Sweden and Denmark.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: African Americans were joining the church in great numbers, and many held significant leadership positions. The African Americans pastor G.T.

Target: African Americans were joining the church in great numbers, and many held significant leadership positions. In particular, the African-American pastor G.T.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The first private Afaan Oromoo newspaper in Ethiopia, Jimma Times, also known as Yeroo, was recently established. Ethiopia has faced a lot of harassment and persecution from the Ethiopia government since Ethiopia's beginning.

Target: The first private Afaan Oromoo newspaper in Ethiopia, Jimma Times, also known as Yeroo, was recently established, but it has faced a lot of harassment and persecution from the Ethiopian government since its beginning.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Children with intellectual disability would benefit differently than other children. They would be able to develop levels of self-care.

Target: Although children with intellectual disability would benefit differently than other children, they would be able to develop levels of self-care.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The plan fell through. In 2005 the Government of South Australia announced a 600 m tunnel for South Road below Port Road and the railway line.

Target: The plan fell through, yet in 2005 the Government of South Australia announced a 600 m tunnel for South Road below Port Road and the railway line.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Quinolones inhibit the bacterial DNA gyrase or the topoisomerase IV enzyme, thereby inhibiting DNA replication and transcription. For many gram-negative bacteria, DNA gyrase is the DNA gyrase, whereas topoisomerase IV is the target for many gram-positive bacteria.

Target: Quinolones inhibit the bacterial DNA gyrase or the topoisomerase IV enzyme, thereby inhibiting DNA replication and transcription. For many gram-negative bacteria, DNA gyrase is the target, whereas topoisomerase IV is the target for many gram-positive bacteria.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This is the default option. If subscriber doesn't take any action within one year of his PPF account maturity this option activates automatically.

Target: This is the default option meaning if subscriber doesn't take any action within one year of his PPF account maturity this option activates automatically.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In the Japanese state religion of Shintoism the Japanese Emperor was worshiped as a living god, worshiping at the Shinto shrine in the Salt Tax Palace also meant worshiping the Showa Emperor as a god. Which starkly underlined Puyi's subordination to the Showa Emperor.

Target: Since in the Japanese state religion of Shintoism the Japanese Emperor was worshiped as a living god, worshiping at the Shinto shrine in the Salt Tax Palace also meant worshiping the Showa Emperor as a god, which starkly underlined Puyi's subordination to the Showa Emperor.


Source: Fix sentence flow: This is likely. Blue whales were driven north by expanding ice.

Target: This is likely because blue whales were driven north by expanding ice.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: European immigration for example threatened the elites. Immigrants brought socialism and radicalism.

Target: European immigration for example threatened the elites because immigrants brought socialism and radicalism.


Source: Make the text more logical: A relief of Prince Sethiherkhepeshef II, one of Ramesses III's many sons from the latter's temple at Medinet Habu. one later briefly ascended the throne as Ramesses III Ramesses III.

Target: A relief of Prince Sethiherkhepeshef II, one of Ramesses III's many sons from the latter's temple at Medinet Habu. Sethiherkhepeshef II later briefly ascended the throne as king Ramesses VIII.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Different GHGs have different social costs. Due to their greater physical capacity to trap infrared radiation, HFCs have a considerably higher social cost per tonne of emission than carbon dioxide.

Target: Different GHGs have different social costs. For example, due to their greater physical capacity to trap infrared radiation, HFCs have a considerably higher social cost per tonne of emission than carbon dioxide.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The University of Virginia was founded by President Thomas Jefferson. The University of Virginia is a World Heritage Site.

Target: The University of Virginia, a World Heritage Site, was founded by President Thomas Jefferson.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Virginia had among the lowest tax rates in the nation. Local school boards often scrimped on school construction.

Target: Virginia had among the lowest tax rates in the nation, so local school boards often scrimped on school construction.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: She disbelieves him. She returns him home to Regina in Storybrooke, who becomes worried that Emma wants to be in Henry's life.

Target: Disbelieving him, she returns him home to Regina in Storybrooke, who becomes worried that Emma wants to be in Henry's life.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: However it was only on 17 May 1876 that the connection was made. Trains could run through to Plymouth.

Target: However it was only on 17 May 1876 that the connection was made and trains could run through to Plymouth.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This would cross over the Fehmarn Belt in the Baltic Sea -- 18 km (11 mi) wide --. Providing a direct link by railway and highway between northern Germany and Lolland.

Target: This would cross over the Fehmarn Belt in the Baltic Sea -- 18 km (11 mi) wide -- hence providing a direct link by railway and highway between northern Germany and Lolland.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Venetian publisher and bookseller Ferdinando Ongania (1842-1911) is best known for publishing the monumental edition Basilica San Marco. bookseller published more than 170 books, mainly about Venetian.

Target: The Venetian publisher and bookseller Ferdinando Ongania (1842-1911) is best known for publishing the monumental edition Basilica San Marco. Ongania published more than 170 books, mainly about Venice.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Reviewing the PlayStation 3 version, Destructoid's Dale North generally praised the upgrade. Stated that the fixed camera had not aged well and some of the smaller.

Target: Reviewing the PlayStation 3 version, Destructoid's Dale North generally praised the upgrade, although stated that the fixed camera had not aged well and some of the smaller.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Raising ornamental coldwater fish (goldfish or koi). Theoretically much more profitable due to the higher income per weight of fish produced.

Target: Raising ornamental coldwater fish (goldfish or koi), although theoretically much more profitable due to the higher income per weight of fish produced.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Major French exploration of North America began under the rule of Francis I, King of France. In 1524, King sent Italian-born Giovanni da Verrazzano to explore the region between Florida and Newfoundland for a route to the Pacific Ocean.

Target: Major French exploration of North America began under the rule of Francis I, King of France. In 1524, Francis sent Italian-born Giovanni da Verrazzano to explore the region between Florida and Newfoundland for a route to the Pacific Ocean.


Source: Fix coherence: AC embraces the use of the giantess in popular culture. AC has made it a frequently recurring theme in their products.

Target: Embracing the use of the giantess in popular culture, AC has made it a frequently recurring theme in their products.


Source: Make the text coherent: Five Mile House railway station on the Lincolnshire Loop Line. Close to Fiskerton.

Target: Five Mile House railway station on the Lincolnshire Loop Line, although close to Fiskerton.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Head and pronotum are black. Elytra is bright red.

Target: Head and pronotum are black, while elytra is bright red.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Chuck is portrayed as a sincerely well-meaning underachiever. When Chuck is caught up in a larger struggle, Chuck has to draw on Chuck's potential and become something new to meet the threat, while trying to Chuck's his good nature.

Target: Chuck is portrayed as a sincerely well-meaning underachiever, so when he is caught up in a larger struggle, he has to draw on his potential and become something new to meet the threat, while trying to maintain his good nature.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: When Chuck saw Casey sneak up to the controls. Fully aware of what would happen to the Fulcrum agents who were in the test room.

Target: When Chuck saw Casey sneak up to the controls, although fully aware of what would happen to the Fulcrum agents who were in the test room.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Clifton was not connected to U.S. 30 by road until 1937. To leave town people either boated across the Columbia to Cathlamet, Washington, or took the train to Astoria or Portland.

Target: Clifton was not connected to U.S. 30 by road until 1937. Instead, to leave town people either boated across the Columbia to Cathlamet, Washington, or took the train to Astoria or Portland.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The court held that the sections of a California statute which levied excises on sales of liquor in Yosemite National Park were enforceable in the Park. Sections of the same statute providing regulation of the Yosemite National Park liquor traffic through licenses were unenforceable.

Target: The court held that the sections of a California statute which levied excises on sales of liquor in Yosemite National Park were enforceable in the Park, while sections of the same statute providing regulation of the Park liquor traffic through licenses were unenforceable.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In July 2012, a forest fire for five days devastated 20,000 hectares of forest in the Valencian village of Andilla. Amid the charred landscape, a group of 946 cypress trees about 22 years old was virtually unharmed, and only 12 cypress were burned.

Target: In July 2012, a forest fire for five days devastated 20,000 hectares of forest in the Valencian village of Andilla. However, amid the charred landscape, a group of 946 cypress trees about 22 years old was virtually unharmed, and only 12 cypress were burned.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Cutcliffe next led Duke to its first ACC victory since 2004, with a 31 -- 3 rout of Virginia. This was a complete turnaround from the team's 2006 game against UVA, in which the Duke were shut out 37 -- 0 in Wallace Wade.

Target: Cutcliffe next led Duke to its first ACC victory since 2004, with a 31 -- 3 rout of Virginia. This was a complete turnaround from the team's 2006 game against UVA, in which the Blue Devils were shut out 37 -- 0 in Wallace Wade.