Source: Fix sentence transition: Benskins continued to trade as a separate business unit, Ind Coope Benskins Limited. Now existing only to manage the tied estate.

Target: Benskins continued to trade as a separate business unit, Ind Coope Benskins Limited, although now existing only to manage the tied estate.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The album was particularly aimed at the US market: the title is an American idiom rather than a British one. Title received positive reviews in the British

Target: The album was particularly aimed at the US market: the title is an American idiom rather than a British one, although it received positive reviews in the U.K.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In 1989, when the mine closed, this building was about to be torn down as it seemed too big for adaptive reuse. Its structure contains plenty of reusable valuable metals.

Target: In 1989, when the mine closed, this building was about to be torn down as it seemed too big for adaptive reuse. Furthermore, its structure contains plenty of reusable valuable metals.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Later in life, some commissions were allegedly rejected in part because of his left-leaning politics. Rather than abandon the political subtexts that informed his art, Zakheim advocated that artists should openly espouse their social and religious beliefs within their works.

Target: Later in life, some commissions were allegedly rejected in part because of his left-leaning politics. However, rather than abandon the political subtexts that informed his art, Zakheim advocated that artists should openly espouse their social and religious beliefs within their works.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: You are a prey to agnosticism. In prey's heart of hearts prey have been conspiring either to kill someone or to usurp the property of the other.

Target: You are a prey to agnosticism. In your heart of hearts you have been conspiring either to kill someone or to usurp the property of the other.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: You dance before your deity so as to please it, but your mind is ever full of wicked designs. All that you are doing is futile because you are by nature wicked, immoral and impious.

Target: You dance before your deity so as to please it, but your mind is ever full of wicked designs. Thus, all that you are doing is futile because you are by nature wicked, immoral and impious.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Police did not conclusively link both murders to the same perpetrator. They could not completely discount this theory.

Target: Although police did not conclusively link both murders to the same perpetrator, they could not completely discount this theory.


Source: Make the text coherent: DNA testing has been used to rule out previous suspects. Detectives believe obtaining a forensic link between Peter Tobin and any of the murder victims linked to Bible John is unlikely due to the deterioration of the physical samples via poor storage.

Target: Although DNA testing has been used to rule out previous suspects, detectives believe obtaining a forensic link between Peter Tobin and any of the murder victims linked to Bible John is unlikely due to the deterioration of the physical samples via poor storage.


Source: Make the text coherent: In addition, police were certain the perpetrator or perpetrators held a high degree of local geographical knowledge. May have been a stranger or strangers to the district as none of the individuals whom investigators conversed with directly knew the individual.

Target: In addition, police were certain the perpetrator or perpetrators held a high degree of local geographical knowledge, although may have been a stranger or strangers to the district as none of the individuals whom investigators conversed with directly knew the individual.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Females have also been known to choose a mate depending on their eyespots. On how large and bright the UV reflective pupils in their eyespots are.

Target: Females have also been known to choose a mate depending on their eyespots. In particular, on how large and bright the UV reflective pupils in their eyespots are.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Bicyclus safitza is a butterfly of the family Nymphalidae. Bicyclus safitza is the common bush brown or common savanna bush brown.

Target: Bicyclus safitza, the common bush brown or common savanna bush brown, is a butterfly of the family Nymphalidae.


Source: Fix coherence: Mikkayla, Sharon, and Jasmin received the most nomination points. Therefore nomination points also moved to the Halfway House.

Target: Mikkayla, Sharon, and Jasmin received the most nomination points, and therefore they also moved to the Halfway House.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Heidi and Tim both had 10 nomination points. Therefore it was up to the housemate with the most nomination points, Mikkayla, to decide which of them would move to the Halfway House and who would subsequently face eviction.

Target: Heidi and Tim both had 10 nomination points, and therefore it was up to the housemate with the most nomination points, Mikkayla, to decide which of them would move to the Halfway House and who would subsequently face eviction.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: ^ Note 7: There were no nominations in Week 9. All housemates were all automatically nominated for the eviction on Day 66.

Target: ^ Note 7: There were no nominations in Week 9. Instead, all housemates were all automatically nominated for the eviction on Day 66.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Barney flashes back to the present day at MacLaren's. Barney notices Ted doing the same thing as he sits grading papers.

Target: Flashing back to the present day at MacLaren's, Barney notices Ted doing the same thing as he sits grading papers.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Continuous video surveillance is provided by hundreds of cameras. Thousands of sensors monitor traffic speed and density, air quality, water levels, temperatures, equipment status, and other conditions inside the tunnel.

Target: Continuous video surveillance is provided by hundreds of cameras, and thousands of sensors monitor traffic speed and density, air quality, water levels, temperatures, equipment status, and other conditions inside the tunnel.


Source: Make the text more coherent: At the beginning of the highway design process, a temporary arts program was initiated, and over 50 proposals were selected. Development began on only a few projects before funding for the program was cut.

Target: At the beginning of the highway design process, a temporary arts program was initiated, and over 50 proposals were selected. However, development began on only a few projects before funding for the program was cut.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He was one of the seven signatories to the 1854 treaty, perhaps. One was the only Omaha one who was fluent in English.

Target: He was one of the seven signatories to the 1854 treaty, perhaps because he was the only Omaha speaker who was fluent in English.


Source: Make the text more logical: It features a more subtle and home-like feel with shades of red and white. It follows a completely different look from the previous year's house.

Target: Featuring a more subtle and home-like feel with shades of red and white, it follows a completely different look from the previous year's house.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 2008 periodic intermediate phases were also observed in square lattices. On square lattices disordered intermediate phases are more frequently observed and tend to dominate densities close to the transition region.

Target: In 2008 periodic intermediate phases were also observed in square lattices. Yet, on square lattices disordered intermediate phases are more frequently observed and tend to dominate densities close to the transition region.


Source: Fix coherence errors: As is common in Ukraine, Russian is the most common language spoken in public in the city. Public signs are in Ukraine.

Target: As is common in Ukraine, Russian is the most common language spoken in public in the city, although public signs are in Ukrainian.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: At the state Republican convention, party officials backed Steven Pierce over Weld. Initial polling had Steven Pierce ahead by 25 percentage points.

Target: At the state Republican convention, party officials backed Steven Pierce over Weld, and initial polling had Pierce ahead by 25 percentage points.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Both men had agreed before the fight that they would not report it to league officials. Word of the incident eventually reached the league president, Ban Johnson.

Target: Both men had agreed before the fight that they would not report it to league officials, but word of the incident eventually reached the league president, Ban Johnson.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The relevant difference between these sentences and the c-and d-sentences in the previous section is that the embedded clauses here are adjunct clauses,. Clauses are clauses above.

Target: The relevant difference between these sentences and the c-and d-sentences in the previous section is that the embedded clauses here are adjunct clauses, whereas they are argument clauses above.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bing allows webmasters to manage the web crawling status of their own websites through Bing Webmaster Center. Users may also submit contents to Bing via the Bing Local Listing Center, which allows businesses to add business listings onto Bing Maps and Bing Local.

Target: Bing allows webmasters to manage the web crawling status of their own websites through Bing Webmaster Center. Additionally, users may also submit contents to Bing via the Bing Local Listing Center, which allows businesses to add business listings onto Bing Maps and Bing Local.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Bioturbation is important in the deep sea. Deep-sea ecosystem functioning depends on the use and recycling of nutrients and organic inputs from the photic zone.

Target: Bioturbation is important in the deep sea because deep-sea ecosystem functioning depends on the use and recycling of nutrients and organic inputs from the photic zone.


Source: Make the text more logical: He wants to come back to this earth. To the speaker.

Target: He wants to come back to this earth, because to the speaker.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Hence, restaurants primarily catered to travellers and merchants,. Any region that saw more of these two classes of people nurtured more restaurants.

Target: Hence, restaurants primarily catered to travellers and merchants, hence any region that saw more of these two classes of people nurtured more restaurants.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Indian restaurateur Kris Dhillon believes that the dish originated in Persia, and was brought to India by the Mughals. Another theory claims that the dish was known in India before the first Mughals emperor Babur came to India.

Target: Indian restaurateur Kris Dhillon believes that the dish originated in Persia, and was brought to India by the Mughals. However, another theory claims that the dish was known in India before the first Mughal emperor Babur came to India.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The settled population of Bitez is 8155 as of 2011. During the summer months the population is much higher.

Target: The settled population of Bitez is 8155 as of 2011. But during the summer months the population is much higher.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It excavates a nest hole in a tree. Little else is known about its breeding habits.

Target: It excavates a nest hole in a tree but little else is known about its breeding habits.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: We lamented our misery. We feared to fly, yet we dared not remain.

Target: Lamenting our misery, we feared to fly, yet we dared not remain.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In order to be able to run in the peak hours at 30-minute intervals, the construction of a double-track section is provided at Ostelsheim. Trains can meet on the otherwise single-track route.

Target: In order to be able to run in the peak hours at 30-minute intervals, the construction of a double-track section is provided at Ostelsheim so that trains can meet on the otherwise single-track route.


Source: Fix coherence: Black metal songs often stray from conventional song structure and often lack clear verse-chorus sections. Many black metal songs contain lengthy and repetitive instrumental sections.

Target: Black metal songs often stray from conventional song structure and often lack clear verse-chorus sections. Instead, many black metal songs contain lengthy and repetitive instrumental sections.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The forests were once common in southeastern Virginia. Today are restricted, in Virginia, to a few small sites on the east side of the Blackwater River.

Target: The forests were once common in southeastern Virginia, but today are restricted, in Virginia, to a few small sites on the east side of the Blackwater River.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: I was on Barney Miller by that point. We'd film during the winter break when all other TV shows were on hiatus.

Target: I was on Barney Miller by that point, and we'd film during the winter break when all other TV shows were on hiatus.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Everyone in the band grew up with the Beatles. We had a certain degree of respect and admiration for them that's not uncommon.

Target: Everyone in the band grew up with the Beatles and we had a certain degree of respect and admiration for them that's not uncommon.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Rich drives off. Now distrustful of Megan, Rich checks the car and finds a bomb in it.

Target: Rich drives off. However, now distrustful of Megan, he checks the car and finds a bomb in it.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: They claim that China aspires to dominate the region through, for example, the creation of a blue-water navy. That such dominance would inevitably endanger US interests and threaten long-time allies Japan, South Korea, and Taiwan.

Target: They claim that China aspires to dominate the region through, for example, the creation of a blue-water navy, and that such dominance would inevitably endanger US interests and threaten long-time allies Japan, South Korea, and Taiwan.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: KP2 (ST2 in the R1 standard) was used for dialing internal Bell System telephone numbers. Actual frequency durations can vary depending on location, switch type, and the machine status.

Target: KP2 (ST2 in the R1 standard) was used for dialing internal Bell System telephone numbers. However, actual frequency durations can vary depending on location, switch type, and the machine status.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Now I realize others were not as pure, they were just trying to make money. Then I thought we were all pure.

Target: Now I realize others were not as pure, they were just trying to make money. But then I thought we were all pure.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Wylie received the NFL's Extra Effort Award in 2001 for his work with Chicago-area youth. Wylie is also the Wylie of the annual Offensive Line Clinic that takes place in Cincinnati and features some of the nation's top coaches.

Target: Wylie received the NFL's Extra Effort Award in 2001 for his work with Chicago-area youth. He is also the organizer of the annual Offensive Line Clinic that takes place in Cincinnati and features some of the nation's top coaches.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Latex can also be used to make scar effects or other more blatant mutilation. With latex prosthetics, movie makers can make an actor appear to have more or less limbs than he should.

Target: Latex can also be used to make scar effects or other more blatant mutilation. For example, with latex prosthetics, movie makers can make an actor appear to have more or less limbs than he should.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dawn of the Dead (1978) This film was very original. According to effects man Tom Savini, this film was largely improvised during its making.

Target: Dawn of the Dead (1978) This film was very original. In fact, according to effects man Tom Savini, this film was largely improvised during its making.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Bodo people have been increasingly the victims of alleged aggression at the hands of Muslim groups in the Indian state of Assam. Many Bodo nationalists support the establishment of Bodoland as a separate state of Indian and a homeland for the Bodo victims.

Target: The Bodo people have been increasingly the victims of alleged aggression at the hands of Muslim groups in the Indian state of Assam. Many Bodo nationalists support the establishment of Bodoland as a separate state of India and a homeland for the Bodo people.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Bombay Scottish School is a private, co-educational school located in Mumbai, India. Bombay Scottish School is an school of the Bombay Scottish School, Mahim.

Target: Bombay Scottish School is a private, co-educational school located in Mumbai, India. It is an affiliate of the Bombay Scottish School, Mahim.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The cuckoo bee only lays females identical to herself. These offspring are unable to complete worker bee tasks that social bumblebees undertake normally, such as producing wax cells and gathering pollen.

Target: The cuckoo bee only lays females identical to herself. Moreover, these offspring are unable to complete worker bee tasks that social bumblebees undertake normally, such as producing wax cells and gathering pollen.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Co debuting in 1996, the show was judged by Indian film actor and Television host Javed Jaffrey who was the permanent judge, while his brother Naved, also the director and producer of the show. Co hosted the show along with film actor Ravi Behl.

Target: Debuting in 1996, the show was judged by Indian film actor and Television host Javed Jaffrey who was the permanent judge, while his brother Naved, also the director and producer of the show, co hosted the show along with film actor Ravi Behl.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The main decisive evidence is the language of the text which is a mixture of different modern Slavic languages with erroneous and invented forms and no regular grammar. Different modern editions of the book have different versions of its text.

Target: The main decisive evidence is the language of the text which is a mixture of different modern Slavic languages with erroneous and invented forms and no regular grammar. Moreover, different modern editions of the book have different versions of its text.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: She started writing songs in 2014. She has won awards at songwriting competitions such as National Environment Agency's Eco Music Challenge and the national talent competition Impresario.

Target: Since she started writing songs in 2014, she has won awards at songwriting competitions such as National Environment Agency's Eco Music Challenge and the national talent competition Impresario.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: To unify the people of Bulgaria Christianity was declared the state religion in 865 AD and Bulgaria was baptized as a Christian state. In the Rhodopes, Christian has been spreading three centuries before the baptizing of Bulgaria.

Target: To unify the people of Bulgaria Christianity was declared the state religion in 865 AD and Bulgaria was baptized as a Christian state. However, in the Rhodopes, Christianity has been spreading three centuries before the baptizing of Bulgaria.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Young's character, an unwed mother who entertains wholesale buyers to secure contracts for her friend, had to be re-written and re-filmed. Mother's 's occupation is only hinted at.

Target: Young's character, an unwed mother who entertains wholesale buyers to secure contracts for her friend, had to be re-written and re-filmed, so that her occupation is only hinted at.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Companion 2 speakers had two connection ports. Two devices could share the speakers.

Target: The Companion 2 speakers had two connection ports so that two devices could share the speakers.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It is very timid. Men is removed, but the bitter and aggressive defending.

Target: It is very timid and men is removed, but the bitter and aggressive defending.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Regulation ended with the score tied at 2 -- 2. An overtime was required to decide a winner.

Target: Regulation ended with the score tied at 2 -- 2, so an overtime was required to decide a winner.


Source: Make the text clearer: It integrates the former collections of Weston Jesuit School of Theology and St. John's Seminary. It contains more than 2.44 million volumes.

Target: Integrating the former collections of Weston Jesuit School of Theology and St. John's Seminary, it contains more than 2.44 million volumes.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jump up ^ The interpretation and labeling is slightly incorrect, and refers to irreducible symmetric spaces. These are the more general reductive spaces.

Target: Jump up ^ The interpretation and labeling is slightly incorrect, and refers to irreducible symmetric spaces, while these are the more general reductive spaces.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Therefore, it is impossible to define a sharp point at which the boundary layer becomes the free stream. This layer has a well-defined characteristic thickness.

Target: Therefore, it is impossible to define a sharp point at which the boundary layer becomes the free stream, yet this layer has a well-defined characteristic thickness.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Thomas started the 2007 -- 08 season in the Crawley first team but suffered a broken fibula in a friendly versus a Tottenham Hotspur XI in late August 2007. Thomas missed a large chunk of the season.

Target: Thomas started the 2007 -- 08 season in the Crawley first team but suffered a broken fibula in a friendly versus a Tottenham Hotspur XI in late August 2007, meaning he missed a large chunk of the season.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A later reissue series called Rock On Brain saw many early Brain recordings reissued. Mostly with entirely different sleeves and even album titles.

Target: A later reissue series called Rock On Brain saw many early Brain recordings reissued, although mostly with entirely different sleeves and even album titles.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Brain was rapidly a success throughout West Germany and much of western Europe. Had little presence in the US.

Target: Brain was rapidly a success throughout West Germany and much of western Europe, although had little presence in the US.


Source: Make the text clearer: Sex-dependent brain asymmetries are also common. Human male brains are more asymmetrically lateralized than that of females.

Target: Sex-dependent brain asymmetries are also common. For example, human male brains are more asymmetrically lateralized than that of females.


Source: Make the text coherent: However, the modern park only covers 50 acres which served primarily as the Continental encampment the two days prior to the battle. The battle was a decisive battle for the British and cleared a path directly to the rebel capital of Philadelphia.

Target: However, the modern park only covers 50 acres which served primarily as the Continental encampment the two days prior to the battle. The battle was a decisive victory for the British and cleared a path directly to the rebel capital of Philadelphia.


Source: Make the text clearer: -- Standard German became restricted to formal contexts such as church,. All daily interactions happened either in dialect or in Portuguese.

Target: -- Standard German became restricted to formal contexts such as church, whereas all daily interactions happened either in dialect or in Portuguese.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Sony wanted to release an album that featured her US number one singles, void of any new material. Carey felt that a greatest hits album should reflect on her most personal and favorite songs, not her most commercial.

Target: Sony wanted to release an album that featured her US number one singles, void of any new material. Carey on the other hand, felt that a greatest hits album should reflect on her most personal and favorite songs, not her most commercial.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Nov 2011 saw the band supporting Devildriver and 36 Crazyfists in Europe. Another Europe tour followed in March 2012, and to support the release of 'The Evil Inside' Breed were the permanent support act for the co-headline Soil and Fozzy tour in March 2013.

Target: Nov 2011 saw the band supporting Devildriver and 36 Crazyfists in Europe. Another European tour followed in March 2012, and to support the release of 'The Evil Inside' Breed were the permanent support act for the co-headline Soil and Fozzy tour in March 2013.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: From the far end of the street it accelerated, slowed down right before the crowd and then slammed on the gas through the crowd sending bodies flying. Then it reversed back into the street dragging bodies and clothes.

Target: From the far end of the street it accelerated, slowed down right before the crowd and then slammed on the gas through the crowd sending bodies flying. And then it reversed back into the street dragging bodies and clothes.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He points out that even digital books have a physical home on a hard drive somewhere. He sees saving the physical artifacts of information storage as a way to hedge against the uncertainty of the future.

Target: Pointing out that even digital books have a physical home on a hard drive somewhere, he sees saving the physical artifacts of information storage as a way to hedge against the uncertainty of the future.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: McClair also played for Scotland in a 'B' international against East Germany in April 1990 shortly before the 1990 World Cup. Although Scotland qualified for the 1990 World Cup, McClair failed to make manager Andy Roxburgh's 22-man squad.

Target: McClair also played for Scotland in a 'B' international against East Germany in April 1990 shortly before the 1990 World Cup. However, although Scotland qualified for the World Cup, he failed to make manager Andy Roxburgh's 22-man squad.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Urlacher was born to Bradley and Lavoyda Urlacher in Pasco, Washington, and his parents raised him with his younger brother Casey. After Urlacher's parents separated, Lavoyda Urlacher Urlacher and his siblings in Lovington, New Mexico.

Target: Urlacher was born to Bradley and Lavoyda Urlacher in Pasco, Washington, and his parents raised him with his younger brother Casey. After his parents separated, Lavoyda raised Urlacher and his siblings in Lovington, New Mexico.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Urlacher is of Russian German descent. Urlacher's great-grandfather, Lucas Urlacher, was born into a Black German German family in an area that today belongs to Ukraine.

Target: Urlacher is of Russian German descent. His great-grandfather, Lucas Urlacher, was born into a Black Sea German family in an area that today belongs to Ukraine.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In April 2012, Urlacher began dating model and actress Jenny McCarthy. In August 2012, actress announced that Jenny McCarthy and Urlacher had ended their relationship.

Target: In April 2012, Urlacher began dating model and actress Jenny McCarthy. In August 2012, McCarthy announced that she and Urlacher had ended their relationship.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Brian suggests they go out for dinner. Brian leads Pearl out of her house, where she is immediately run over by a truck.

Target: Suggesting they go out for dinner, Brian leads Pearl out of her house, where she is immediately run over by a truck.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He is a bank and a boundary. These worlds may not be confounded.

Target: He is a bank and a boundary, so that these worlds may not be confounded.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: She resumed her voyage. She was at Mangalore on 5 October, Cannanore on 13 October, and Tellicherry on 28 November ; she arrived at Whampoa on 15 March 1801.

Target: Resuming her voyage, she was at Mangalore on 5 October, Cannanore on 13 October, and Tellicherry on 28 November ; she arrived at Whampoa on 15 March 1801.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Carlos wins first place. An infuriated Manolo pushes Carlos and creates a commotion to which Rafael tries to defend Carlos' grandson but Manolo Carlos him down on the sand and begins to have health complications.

Target: Carlos wins first place and an infuriated Manolo pushes him and creates a commotion to which Rafael tries to defend his grandson but Manolo pushes him down on the sand and begins to have health complications.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: John F Kennedy also resided here for a time. John F Kennedy is the President of the United States.

Target: John F Kennedy, the President of the United States, also resided here for a time.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: I think they really wanted Bruce, but I was such a puny specimen that they hardly felt I fitted the name of the Warrior King of Scotland. Then a day or two before specimen was to be christened, specimen's grandfather journeyed down to see me.

Target: I think they really wanted Bruce, but I was such a puny specimen that they hardly felt I fitted the name of the Warrior King of Scotland. Then a day or two before I was to be christened, my grandfather journeyed down to see me.


Source: Make the text coherent: Brunswick's first bank opened. Brunswick's first bank is a branch of the Merchants Bank of St. Louis.

Target: Brunswick's first bank, a branch of the Merchants Bank of St. Louis, opened.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He has served on the board of directors of InterActiveCorp since 2005. InterActiveCorp is an online media company headed by Barry Diller.

Target: He has served on the board of directors of InterActiveCorp, an online media company headed by Barry Diller, since 2005.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He was also appointed to the President's Committee on the Arts and Humanities in 2009 by President Barack Obama. Four years later, President President appointed Lourd to the John F. Kennedy Center for the Performing Arts.

Target: He was also appointed to the President's Committee on the Arts and Humanities in 2009 by President Barack Obama. Four years later, President Obama appointed Lourd to the John F. Kennedy Center for the Performing Arts.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The religious geniuses of all times have been distinguished by this cosmic religious sense, which recognizes neither dogmas nor God made in man's image. There can not be a church whose chief doctrines are based on the cosmic religious experience.

Target: The religious geniuses of all times have been distinguished by this cosmic religious sense, which recognizes neither dogmas nor God made in man's image. Consequently there can not be a church whose chief doctrines are based on the cosmic religious experience.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Buddhism is a varied tradition and aspects include fundamentalism, devotional traditions, supplication to local spirits, and various superstitions. Certain commonalities have been cited between scientific investigation and Buddhist thought.

Target: Buddhism is a varied tradition and aspects include fundamentalism, devotional traditions, supplication to local spirits, and various superstitions. Nevertheless, certain commonalities have been cited between scientific investigation and Buddhist thought.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Edward ordered the construction of the stone Builth Castle on the site of Braose's burnt fort. Construction was halted for lack of funds.

Target: Edward ordered the construction of the stone Builth Castle on the site of Braose's burnt fort, although construction was halted for lack of funds.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The museum moved to its current location in 1986. Its current location is a former Nobleza Piccardo tobacconist in the San Telmo neighborhood.

Target: The museum moved to its current location, a former Nobleza Piccardo tobacconist in the San Telmo neighborhood, in 1986.


Source: Make the text more logical: Linda figured that a place geographically right in the middle would be ideal. Linda found Bundanoon as the perfect place.

Target: Figuring that a place geographically right in the middle would be ideal, Linda found Bundanoon as the perfect place.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bugae Station is a subway station located in Bupyeong-gu South Korea. Bupyeong-gu is a district in Incheon.

Target: Bugae Station is a subway station located in Bupyeong-gu, a district in Incheon, South Korea.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Eric Taurai Matinenga: Renowned lawyer and well known Advocate: Was member of parliament for Buhera West, hails from Murambinda, Buhera. Eric Taurai Matinenga was the lawyer who made it possible to have the new constitution.

Target: Eric Taurai Matinenga: Renowned lawyer and well known Advocate: Was member of parliament for Buhera West, hails from Murambinda, Buhera. He was the Minister who made it possible to have the new constitution.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Unlike other geikiids and most other cryptodontian dicynodonts, there is no ridge behind the tusk. Mature Aulacephalodon also lack this ridge.

Target: Unlike other geikiids and most other cryptodontian dicynodonts, there is no ridge behind the tusk, although mature Aulacephalodon also lack this ridge.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Most of the postorbital bar is made up of the postorbital bones, which are very robust relative to other cryptodontians as in other geikiids. Compared to other geikiids, the postorbital bar of Bulbasaurus is relatively smooth and free of bosses.

Target: Most of the postorbital bar is made up of the postorbital bones, which are very robust relative to other cryptodontians as in other geikiids. However, compared to other geikiids, the postorbital bar of Bulbasaurus is relatively smooth and free of bosses.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This involved the creation of a shopping precinct in Leicester Street, which was the traditional heart of the village. Many of the chequered-pattern brick buildings were replaced by typical 1960s suburban houses.

Target: This involved the creation of a shopping precinct in Leicester Street, which was the traditional heart of the village. Additionally, many of the chequered-pattern brick buildings were replaced by typical 1960s suburban houses.


Source: Make the text more logical: At 3.45 am on 3 May 1917 the attack was launched. Thanks to their deep underground shelters many Germans escaped the bombardments.

Target: At 3.45 am on 3 May 1917 the attack was launched. However, thanks to their deep underground shelters many Germans escaped the bombardments.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: A contemporaneous pair of stone pagodas were built at the Baekje Mireuksa Temple and the Bunhwangsa Pagoda is often compared with them. Those stone pagodas more closely imitated wood architectural styles.

Target: A contemporaneous pair of stone pagodas were built at the Baekje Mireuksa Temple and the Bunhwangsa Pagoda is often compared with them although those stone pagodas more closely imitated wood architectural styles.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The narrator is Charles Schermerhorn Schuyler in New York City. Charles Schermerhorn Schuyler is an ambitious young man working as a law clerk in Aaron Burr's law firm.

Target: The narrator is Charles Schermerhorn Schuyler, an ambitious young man working as a law clerk in Aaron Burr's law firm, in New York City.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Both of the verbs in 1a and 1b are classified as intransitives, they take only one predicate. What led Burzio to claim that the class of intransitives should be further divided was the distribution of Ne (of-them).

Target: Both of the verbs in 1a and 1b are classified as intransitives, they take only one predicate. However, what led Burzio to claim that the class of intransitives should be further divided was the distribution of Ne (of-them).


Source: Make the text coherent: The upshot of this action was that eight more minority candidates passed the test ;. No nonminority candidates were taken off the list the scores of all minority candidates were increased.

Target: The upshot of this action was that eight more minority candidates passed the test ; although no nonminority candidates were taken off the list the scores of all minority candidates were increased.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Quite lethal with his bare hands alone. Butler is proficient with weapons of all description.

Target: Although quite lethal with his bare hands alone, Butler is proficient with weapons of all description.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Boyarski hided with his son. Boyarski described the events in a farewell letter to his relatives abroad.

Target: Hiding with his son, Boyarski described the events in a farewell letter to his relatives abroad.


Source: Fix coherence: The Butyrivibrio genus encompasses over 60 strains that were originally confined to the species Butyrivibrio fibrisolvens based on their phenotypic and metabolic characteristics. Phylogenetic analyses based on 16S ribosomal RNA (rRNA) gene sequences has divided the genus Butyrivibrio into six families.

Target: The Butyrivibrio genus encompasses over 60 strains that were originally confined to the species Butyrivibrio fibrisolvens based on their phenotypic and metabolic characteristics. However, phylogenetic analyses based on 16S ribosomal RNA (rRNA) gene sequences has divided the genus Butyrivibrio into six families.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bavasi neared age 70. Bavasi retired during the closing days of the 1984 season, when the Angels finished at the. 500 mark.

Target: Nearing age 70, Bavasi retired during the closing days of the 1984 season, when the Angels finished at the. 500 mark.


Source: Make the text clearer: It was originally a poetry festival. Poetry festival's scope has broadened to include other forms.

Target: It was originally a poetry festival but its scope has broadened to include other forms.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The C1 is named so. C1 was the first C1 in a series of components found to respond to visual stimuli when C1 was first discovered.

Target: The C1 is named so because it was the first component in a series of components found to respond to visual stimuli when it was first discovered.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: As president, Armas restricted voting rights on the illiterate and banned all political parties and labor unions. By executive order, he threw out the country's constitution and gave himself complete authority.

Target: As president, Armas restricted voting rights on the illiterate and banned all political parties and labor unions. Eventually, by executive order, he threw out the country's constitution and gave himself complete authority.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The anti-communist elements -- the Catholic hierarchy, landowners, business interests, the railway workers union, university students and the army were prepared to prevent socialism. Apart from the US elements had little outside support.

Target: The anti-communist elements -- the Catholic hierarchy, landowners, business interests, the railway workers union, university students and the army were prepared to prevent socialism, but apart from the US they had little outside support.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Thiess originated in Queensland in 1934. Thiess became a part of the Leighton Group in 1983.

Target: Originating in Queensland in 1934, Thiess became a part of the Leighton Group in 1983.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The CSIs then find four bodies in a hotel room. Who is responsible for CSIs' death?

Target: The CSIs then find four bodies in a hotel room, but who is responsible for their death?


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Some sections of the race are relatively flat. Others ascend mountains including Cape Smokey, North Mountain, and MacKenzie Mountain -- climbing as high as 460 meters.

Target: Although some sections of the race are relatively flat, others ascend mountains including Cape Smokey, North Mountain, and MacKenzie Mountain -- climbing as high as 460 meters.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In 2006, the Halloween in the Castro event had a shooting incident only yards away from Cafe Flore. Cafe Flore was then among the first businesses in the Castro to announce the closing down of services during the 2007 Halloween.

Target: In 2006, the Halloween in the Castro event had a shooting incident only yards away from Cafe Flore. Cafe Flore was then among the first businesses in the Castro District to announce the closing down of services during the 2007 Halloween.


Source: Fix coherence: Spanish traders made unintended visits with the Manila galleons on their return trips from the Philippines beginning in 1565. The first Asians to set foot on what would be the United States occurred in 1587, when Philippines sailors arrived in Spanish ships at Morro Bay.

Target: Spanish traders made unintended visits with the Manila galleons on their return trips from the Philippines beginning in 1565. The first Asians to set foot on what would be the United States occurred in 1587, when Filipino sailors arrived in Spanish ships at Morro Bay.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The CSU was originally intended to accept the top one-third of California high school students. Several of the schools have become much more selective.

Target: The CSU was originally intended to accept the top one-third of California high school students, but several of the schools have become much more selective.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: At the time, California had a blanket primary. All candidates of all parties were on the same ballot.

Target: At the time, California had a blanket primary, meaning all candidates of all parties were on the same ballot.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Callum John Styles (born 28 March 2000) is an English professional footballer who plays as a Midfielder for League Two club Bury. Callum John Styles is the first footballer born in the 21st century to sign a professional contract.

Target: Callum John Styles (born 28 March 2000) is an English professional footballer who plays as a Midfielder for League Two club Bury. He is the first player born in the 21st century to sign a professional contract.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He extended the work of Carothers at Du Pont. He investigated the condensation polymers polyester and polyamide.

Target: Extending the work of Carothers at Du Pont, he investigated the condensation polymers polyester and polyamide.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In 1925, with the introduction of bus service to Erie and Meadville, the decline of the trolleys expanded even further. Service was cut from Meadville Meadville in September 1927, service was ended to Linesville the same year.

Target: In 1925, with the introduction of bus service to Erie and Meadville, the decline of the trolleys expanded even further. Service was cut from downtown Meadville in September 1927, service was ended to Linesville the same year.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Under constant surveillance. He nonetheless wrote on several topics, mostly anti-clerical and anti-fascist articles.

Target: Although under constant surveillance, he nonetheless wrote on several topics, mostly anti-clerical and anti-fascist articles.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Brown, the owner of the camp, breaks the fight up and Tess frames Caitlyn for the incident. owner punishes Caitlyn by having her work in the kitchen and Mitchie, who is worried that Caitlyn will learn her secret, does not help her out.

Target: Brown, the owner of the camp, breaks the fight up and Tess frames Caitlyn for the incident. Brown punishes Caitlyn by having her work in the kitchen and Mitchie, who is worried that Caitlyn will learn her secret, does not help her out.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: AllMusic writer Matthew Chisling praised the new dance-rock approach the band took on their record. Was skeptical of band's ability to band's their own sound and just use the most popular genres instead.

Target: AllMusic writer Matthew Chisling praised the new dance-rock approach the band took on their record but was skeptical of their ability to find their own sound and just use the most popular genres instead.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Chanie proceeds through the challenge recklessly, without using her mirrors. While she completes it in the fastest time at just 16 minutes, she hits the blocks 46 times.

Target: Chanie proceeds through the challenge recklessly, without using her mirrors and while she completes it in the fastest time at just 16 minutes, she hits the blocks 46 times.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: After being reminded to adjust them, he gets to the end of the rails without major trouble. Like Andrew he drives too far ; unlike Andrew however, he's unable to rescue the situation and falls off the end, failing.

Target: After being reminded to adjust them, he gets to the end of the rails without major trouble, but like Andrew he drives too far ; unlike Andrew however, he's unable to rescue the situation and falls off the end, failing.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Jason is the final driver to take the challenge. Andrew reminds driver not to speed ; unfortunately, driver does so anyway and locks up the brakes, failing his first run.

Target: Jason is the final driver to take the challenge and Andrew reminds him not to speed ; unfortunately, Jason does so anyway and locks up the brakes, failing his first run.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The crisis would eventually be solved by diplomatic talks between Nikita Khrushchev and Kennedy. Nothing would loom larger over the Canadian state in the months following the crisis than the governing party's disarray on the question of nuclear arms.

Target: Although the crisis would eventually be solved by diplomatic talks between Nikita Khrushchev and Kennedy, nothing would loom larger over the Canadian state in the months following the crisis than the governing party's disarray on the question of nuclear arms.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Diefenbunkers were decommissioned. The Diefenbunkers are canada's military-operated fallout shelters designed to ensure continuity of government.

Target: The Diefenbunkers, Canada's military-operated fallout shelters designed to ensure continuity of government, were decommissioned.


Source: Make the text more logical: Cancilla meyeriana is a species of sea snail the miters or miter snails. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Mitridae.

Target: Cancilla meyeriana is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Mitridae, the miters or miter snails.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The uniform and isolated Canegrate finds do not show any trace of the preceding Polada culture. They finds not provide evidence for a gradual Canegrate insertion into the area.

Target: The uniform and isolated Canegrate finds do not show any trace of the preceding Polada culture, nor do they provide evidence for a gradual Canegrate insertion into the area.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Of the 116 ships ordered, 44 were cancelled. Six were commissioned directly into the Free French Forces.

Target: Of the 116 ships ordered, 44 were cancelled and six were commissioned directly into the Free French Forces.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Dr. Charles Caples and Lucinda McBride Caples emigrated across the Oregon Trail as children and married in Oregon in 1855. Dr. (1832 -- 1906) was the first Dr. in Columbia County and built Charles Caples' home in 1870 during the early years of Columbia City.

Target: Dr. Charles Caples and Lucinda McBride Caples emigrated across the Oregon Trail as children and married in Oregon in 1855. Charles (1832 -- 1906) was the first physician in Columbia County and built his home in 1870 during the early years of Columbia City.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Cappuccino developers never need to directly manipulate the DOM or design CSS documents. Those tasks are handled by Cappuccino, permitting the application developer to focus on the implementation of application features without being distracted by specifics of the rendering mechanism.

Target: Cappuccino developers never need to directly manipulate the DOM or design CSS documents. Instead, those tasks are handled by Cappuccino, permitting the application developer to focus on the implementation of application features without being distracted by specifics of the rendering mechanism.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In the comics it was a hell of a journey for Steve. We couldn't take Steve through those years because in our cinematic universe Steve was asleep.

Target: In the comics it was a hell of a journey for Steve. And we couldn't take him through those years because in our cinematic universe he was asleep.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Soaron activates his stealth camouflage. Soaron provides Lord Dread with the frequency of the Power Team's warp gate activation code.

Target: Activating his stealth camouflage, Soaron provides Lord Dread with the frequency of the Power Team's warp gate activation code.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Power attempts to find and activate a new Power Base, which had been created by his father somewhere within the Arctic Circle. First they raid a Dread installation for supplies and fuel.

Target: Power attempts to find and activate a new Power Base, which had been created by his father somewhere within the Arctic Circle. But first they raid a Dread installation for supplies and fuel.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Part of my life went into that scene, in the way it was constructed, and what was said. What was not said, what never had the chance to be said, and thus still burns.

Target: Part of my life went into that scene, in the way it was constructed, and what was said. And what was not said, what never had the chance to be said, and thus still burns.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: There is the interactivity which has been centered mainly in the battle sequences. We aren't in a position of having to write X amount of animation and interactivity into each episode.

Target: There is the interactivity which has been centered mainly in the battle sequences but we aren't in a position of having to write X amount of animation and interactivity into each episode.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Captiva Island United States Captiva Island is an island in Florida.

Target: Captiva Island, an island in Florida, United States


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Jump up ^ Maurice Wiesenthal 1981. Maurice Wiesenthal is the History and Geography of a Valley.

Target: Jump up ^ Maurice Wiesenthal, The History and Geography of a Valley, 1981.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Renewable Energy Credits (RECs) are also sometimes treated as carbon offsets, although the concepts are distinct. A carbon offset represents a reduction in greenhouse gas emissions, a REC represents a quantity of energy produced from renewable sources.

Target: Renewable Energy Credits (RECs) are also sometimes treated as carbon offsets, although the concepts are distinct. Whereas a carbon offset represents a reduction in greenhouse gas emissions, a REC represents a quantity of energy produced from renewable sources.


Source: Make the text clearer: Baseline and Measurement -- What emissions would occur in the absence of a proposed project? How are the emissions that occur after the project is performed going to be measured?

Target: Baseline and Measurement -- What emissions would occur in the absence of a proposed project? And how are the emissions that occur after the project is performed going to be measured?


Source: Make the text clearer: I think it is absolutely necessary to disappear for some time. Several people have approached me in a disagreeable manner.

Target: I think it is absolutely necessary to disappear for some time because several people have approached me in a disagreeable manner.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Lody was put on public trial -- the only one held for a German spy captured in the UK in either World War -- before a military court in London at the end of October. Lody did not attempt to deny that Lody was a German Lody.

Target: Lody was put on public trial -- the only one held for a German spy captured in the UK in either World War -- before a military court in London at the end of October. He did not attempt to deny that he was a German spy.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Rowan was a 1995 Pulitzer Prize finalist for his commentaries. Rowan is the only finalist in history to win the Sigma Delta Chi medallion for journalistic excellence in three successive years.

Target: Rowan was a 1995 Pulitzer Prize finalist for his commentaries. He is the only journalist in history to win the Sigma Delta Chi medallion for journalistic excellence in three successive years.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Carlaw Park was a multi-purpose stadium in Parnell New Zealand. Parnell is a central suburb of Auckland.

Target: Carlaw Park was a multi-purpose stadium in Parnell, a central suburb of Auckland, New Zealand.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Pope splits her time between Los Angeles and Vancouver. Pope is currently attending university when her filming schedule allows.

Target: Splitting her time between Los Angeles and Vancouver, Pope is currently attending university when her filming schedule allows.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: There was a brief period under Charles the Bald, when royal favour was once more bestowed on scholars. With the advent of the tenth century came other cares and occupations for the royal mind.

Target: There was a brief period under Charles the Bald, when royal favour was once more bestowed on scholars. But with the advent of the tenth century came other cares and occupations for the royal mind.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: All six of the succeeding chapters attempt to recover these voices, which --. One sense of my title.

Target: All six of the succeeding chapters attempt to recover these voices, which -- hence one sense of my title.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In this case, seven matched filters are needed. We can use only one set of matched filter hardware that handles different integer CFOs sequentially.

Target: In this case, seven matched filters are needed. However, we can use only one set of matched filter hardware that handles different integer CFOs sequentially.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Scientists as well as the general public should have the opportunity, to retrieve online information about Zweig, his work and his literature written in exile. Scientists should have the opportunity to contribute Scientists' own ideas.

Target: Scientists as well as the general public should have the opportunity, to retrieve online information about Zweig, his work and his literature written in exile. They should furthermore have the opportunity to contribute their own ideas.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Chief Cashier in bank is a key individual. Their signature is pri \\

Target: Chief Cashier in bank is a key individual. For example, their signature is pri \\


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Was sold to Banca Popolare di Lodi Pisa & Livorno in 2006 (along with fellow saving bank in Pisa). Was sold to Banca Popolare di Lodi was completed absorbed into the saving bank of Lucca.

Target: was sold to Banca Popolare di Lodi, which was completed absorbed into the saving bank of Lucca, Pisa & Livorno in 2006 (along with fellow saving bank in Pisa).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In her frightened, ego-less state, the Cassandra woman may blurt out what she sees, perhaps with the unconscious hope that others might be able to make some sense of it. To them Cassandra's words sound meaningless, disconnected and blown out of all proportion.

Target: In her frightened, ego-less state, the Cassandra woman may blurt out what she sees, perhaps with the unconscious hope that others might be able to make some sense of it. But to them her words sound meaningless, disconnected and blown out of all proportion.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He was once saved from a lawsuit de moribus by Augustus. He dwelled upon republican convictions.

Target: He was once saved from a lawsuit de moribus by Augustus. Yet, he dwelled upon republican convictions.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: These charges meant that the land could not always feed the entire population. Some of the population were compelled to emigrate.

Target: These charges meant that the land could not always feed the entire population, so that some of the population were compelled to emigrate.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The two Ukrainian soldiers who were killed are regularly included in the military death toll from the War in Donbass. On 10 August 2016, Russia accused the Special Forces of Ukrainian of conducting a raid near the Crimean town of Armyansk which killed two Russian servicemen.

Target: The two Ukrainian soldiers who were killed are regularly included in the military death toll from the War in Donbass. On 10 August 2016, Russia accused the Special Forces of Ukraine of conducting a raid near the Crimean town of Armyansk which killed two Russian servicemen.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Two Kyrgyz and one Georgian have also been killed fighting on the separatist side. At least 190 foreign-born Ukrainian citizens and 13 foreigners died on the Ukrainian side.

Target: Two Kyrgyz and one Georgian have also been killed fighting on the separatist side. Additionally, at least 190 foreign-born Ukrainian citizens and 13 foreigners died on the Ukrainian side.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Which eschewing the in-the-trenches police work for a little history, a great guest performance, and a twisty game of, yes, cat and mouse, the episode feels a little more cinematic than normal. Which is a good sign heading forward.

Target: Eschewing the in-the-trenches police work for a little history, a great guest performance, and a twisty game of, yes, cat and mouse, the episode felt a little more cinematic than normal, which is a good sign heading forward.


Source: Make the text coherent: Caramuru trusted in the mystic qualities of her dreams. Caramuru told the people to search everywhere around the shores.

Target: Trusting in the mystic qualities of her dreams, Caramuru told the people to search everywhere around the shores.


Source: Fix coherence errors: For where can any longer be the utility of baptism. This remain as its foundation.

Target: For where can any longer be the utility of baptism unless this remain as its foundation.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Man Shakespeare and Other Essays (1902) was published posthumously. The Man Shakespeare and Other Essays (1902) is a memorial collection of her written works.

Target: The Man Shakespeare and Other Essays (1902), a memorial collection of her written works, was published posthumously.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: There is an unsaid silence in society for girls to hide their sexuality and desires. Directly confronted about girls.

Target: There is an unsaid silence in society for girls to hide their sexuality and desires unless directly confronted about them.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Crier released her New York Times bestseller 2002. Her New York Times bestseller is the Case Against Lawyers in October.

Target: Crier released her New York Times bestseller, The Case Against Lawyers in October, 2002.


Source: Fix coherence: For example, some parts of the territory of the archdiocese of Seoul are located in North Korea. Since the political division of North Korea in 1945, Catholicism has had a different development in North and South.

Target: For example, some parts of the territory of the archdiocese of Seoul are located in North Korea. Nevertheless, since the political division of Korea in 1945, Catholicism has had a different development in North and South.


Source: Make the text more logical: It was the dominant force in all cabinets. Every prime minister during this time was a party member.

Target: It was the dominant force in all cabinets, and every prime minister during this time was a party member.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: These three have traditionally been attributed to John the Apostle, the son of Zebedee and one of the Twelve Apostles of Jesus. These letters have been labelled the Johannine epistles, despite the fact that none of the epistles mentions any author.

Target: These three have traditionally been attributed to John the Apostle, the son of Zebedee and one of the Twelve Apostles of Jesus. Consequently, these letters have been labelled the Johannine epistles, despite the fact that none of the epistles mentions any author.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is difficult to generalize or average out the weight of all cattle. Different kinds have different averages of weights.

Target: It is difficult to generalize or average out the weight of all cattle because different kinds have different averages of weights.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They are also able to distinguish between familiar and unfamiliar conspecifics. Conspecifics are able to categorize images as familiar and unfamiliar individuals.

Target: They are also able to distinguish between familiar and unfamiliar conspecifics. Furthermore, they are able to categorize images as familiar and unfamiliar individuals.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Often they are adult, castrated males of larger breeds. Females and bulls are also used in some areas.

Target: Often they are adult, castrated males of larger breeds, although females and bulls are also used in some areas.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Another concern is manure, which if not well-managed, can lead to adverse environmental consequences. Manure also is a valuable manure of nutrients and organic matter when used as a fertilizer.

Target: Another concern is manure, which if not well-managed, can lead to adverse environmental consequences. However, manure also is a valuable source of nutrients and organic matter when used as a fertilizer.


Source: Make the text clearer: The two were married. Afterwards the Campbells of Cawdor lived mainly on two's estates in Pembrokeshire.

Target: The two were married and afterwards the Campbells of Cawdor lived mainly on their estates in Pembrokeshire.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The representative of the Military Directorate admitted that the order in principle was no different from the Nazi book burnings. Unlike the burnings.

Target: The representative of the Military Directorate admitted that the order in principle was no different from the Nazi book burnings, although unlike the burnings.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: None of the five said they themselves actually raped the jogger. Each confessed to being an accomplice to the rape.

Target: None of the five said they themselves actually raped the jogger, but each confessed to being an accomplice to the rape.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In 2012, Central York School District achieved Adequate Yearly Progress (AYP) status. In 2011, Central York School District achieved AYP (AYP).

Target: In 2012, Central York School District achieved Adequate Yearly Progress (AYP) status. In 2011, Central York School District achieved Adequate Yearly Progress (AYP).


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The student population at Century High School has been steadily rising over the past several years. In the first year of its existence, only 9th and 10th graders attended the school.

Target: The student population at Century High School has been steadily rising over the past several years. Although, in the first year of its existence, only 9th and 10th graders attended the school.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The creation of the university gave an economic impulse to the town, basically (among other reasons). Students lodged in the town.

Target: The creation of the university gave an economic impulse to the town, basically (among other reasons) because students lodged in the town.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He served as an intermediary for Verdi and in his business dealings with Neapolitan theatres and other financial matters. Verdi was the Verdi of his son from his first marriage, the Verdi Giuseppe De Sanctis.

Target: He served as an intermediary for Verdi and in his business dealings with Neapolitan theatres and other financial matters. Verdi was the godfather of his son from his first marriage, the painter Giuseppe De Sanctis.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It was acquired by William-Noel Lucas-Shadwell in 1925. William-Noel Lucas-Shadwell is a British intelligent officer.

Target: It was acquired by William-Noel Lucas-Shadwell, a British intelligent officer, in 1925.


Source: Make the text coherent: He feigns merriment. He calls Okaru to come down and offers to buy out her contract.

Target: Feigning merriment, he calls Okaru to come down and offers to buy out her contract.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: However some names sounded similar. Those with knowledge knew what names were referring to in reality.

Target: However some names sounded similar and those with knowledge knew what they were referring to in reality.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Chairperson is the ex officio Special Secretary to the Government of India and also cadre controlling authority of the Indian Revenue Service. Special Secretary is also equivalent to Secretary to Government of India.

Target: The Chairperson is the ex officio Special Secretary to the Government of India and also cadre controlling authority of the Indian Revenue Service. Chairperson is also equivalent to Secretary to Government of India.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Modern Chamic languages have the Southeast Asian areal features of monosyllabicity, tonality, and glottalized consonants. They had reached the Southeast Asian mainland disyllabic and non-tonal.

Target: Modern Chamic languages have the Southeast Asian areal features of monosyllabicity, tonality, and glottalized consonants. However, they had reached the Southeast Asia mainland disyllabic and non-tonal.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They do not worship any family, clan or village deities. They believe in several nature spirits (water, sky, jungle etc. )

Target: They do not worship any family, clan or village deities. But, they believe in several nature spirits (water, sky, jungle etc. )


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There can only be two of the same card in each army,. Specified as otherwise.

Target: There can only be two of the same card in each army, unless specified as otherwise.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Elizabeth suffered from health issues. When Elizabeth was around 17, the family emigrated to the west coast of the United States, settling down in then-semi-rural Montecito near Santa Barbara, California.

Target: Elizabeth suffered from health issues, so when she was around 17, the family emigrated to the west coast of the United States, settling down in then-semi-rural Montecito near Santa Barbara, California.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Miner was an early investor in anthracite coal mining in Mauch Chunk, Pennsylvania and promoted the coal trade years before it became a major industry. Miner was also an avid investor who composed poems and moralistic essays.

Target: Miner was an early investor in anthracite coal mining in Mauch Chunk, Pennsylvania and promoted the coal trade years before it became a major industry. He was also an avid writer who composed poems and moralistic essays.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The French artillery at Dien Bien Phu comprised only 30 medium and heavy guns. Large stocks of shells were airlifted into the zone before the siege began.

Target: The French artillery at Dien Bien Phu comprised only 30 medium and heavy guns, although large stocks of shells were airlifted into the zone before the siege began.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Jennison was considered the most brutal and unscrupulous of the jayhawker. Some other prominent leaders of irregulars in the Bleeding Kansas border conflict shared these traits, Jennison was distinguished by Jennison's blatant plunder for personal gain.

Target: Jennison was considered the most brutal and unscrupulous of the jayhawker. Whereas some other prominent leaders of irregulars in the Bleeding Kansas border conflict shared these traits, Jennison was distinguished by his blatant plunder for personal gain.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Like his father, he served as a U.S. Representative in Congress from North Carolina. His father had joined the Republican Party after the American Civil War, the younger Charles Thomas was a Democrat.

Target: Like his father, he served as a U.S. Representative in Congress from North Carolina. Whereas his father had joined the Republican Party after the American Civil War, the younger Charles Thomas was a Democrat.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He also played Hoel in Dinorah opposite Patti,. A planned partnership with Hoel in L'Etoile du Nord did not occur.

Target: He also played Hoel in Dinorah opposite Patti, and although a planned partnership with her in L'Etoile du Nord did not occur.


Source: Make the text coherent: Feeling that his long-cherished project of an English lyric theatre could never be accomplished, he decided to turn his back on the stage altogether. In 1872-1873, he set out on a concert tour of in the United States and Canada.

Target: Feeling that his long-cherished project of an English lyric theatre could never be accomplished, he decided to turn his back on the stage altogether. Instead, in 1872-1873, he set out on a concert tour of in the United States and Canada.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In early 1870, as his departure from the theatre was approaching, Santley sang at concerts in London and at Exeter Hall. Under the management of George Wood, Santley made a six-week concert tour of the provinces.

Target: In early 1870, as his departure from the theatre was approaching, Santley sang at concerts in London and at Exeter Hall. Then, under the management of George Wood, he made a six-week concert tour of the provinces.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It took place in July 1870. Several other promised productions either did not occur (Macbeth, Cherubini's Les Deux Journees, Rossini's Tancredi) or the baritone role in them was given to another artist.

Target: It took place in July 1870. But several other promised productions either did not occur (Macbeth, Cherubini's Les Deux Journees, Rossini's Tancredi) or the baritone role in them was given to another artist.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: O'Hagan was born a godson of Princess Elizabeth, later Queen Elizabeth II. The grandson of Maurice Towneley-O'Hagan, 3rd O'Hagan, O'Hagan inherited the family title at the age of 16 on O'Hagan's grandfather's death in 1961, his father the Hon.

Target: O'Hagan was born a godson of Princess Elizabeth, later Queen Elizabeth II. The grandson of Maurice Towneley-O'Hagan, 3rd Baron O'Hagan, he inherited the family title at the age of 16 on his grandfather's death in 1961, his father the Hon.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The attack bogged down. At this critical moment Curtis personally led Blair's 9th Wisconsin Battery through a gulch which opened fire on the Confederate flank.

Target: The attack bogged down, but at this critical moment Curtis personally led Blair's 9th Wisconsin Battery through a gulch which opened fire on the Confederate flank.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They carried into politics the same high principles of virtue which regulated their private dealings. They principles not stoop to promote even the noblest and most salutary ends by means which honour and probity condemn.

Target: They carried into politics the same high principles of virtue which regulated their private dealings, nor would they stoop to promote even the noblest and most salutary ends by means which honour and probity condemn.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The expedition starts off poorly as the team is plagued by numerous technical problems and camera malfunctions. Due to the extreme physical nature of the expeditions, Balog's personal health suffers in the form of knee complications.

Target: The expedition starts off poorly as the team is plagued by numerous technical problems and camera malfunctions. Meanwhile, due to the extreme physical nature of the expeditions, Balog's personal health suffers in the form of knee complications.


Source: Fix coherence errors: India was part of the British Empire during the First World War. More than 800,000 India soldiers fought for the Allied Powers.

Target: India was part of the British Empire during the First World War, and more than 800,000 Indian soldiers fought for the Allied Powers.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: From 1922 to 1959 Checker's production vehicles were built almost exclusively for the commercial livery (taxi) business. Cars for personal use were available upon request.

Target: From 1922 to 1959 Checker's production vehicles were built almost exclusively for the commercial livery (taxi) business, although cars for personal use were available upon request.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Scientists were aware that the production of a continuous electric current was due to some property of the metals. Davy believed that a chemical reaction was taking place.

Target: Although scientists were aware that the production of a continuous electric current was due to some property of the metals, Davy believed that a chemical reaction was taking place.


Source: Fix coherence: By the 1970s the use of leaded petrol was ubiquitous worldwide. Research was emerging about the damage that it was doing to humans and the environment.

Target: By the 1970s the use of leaded petrol was ubiquitous worldwide, but research was emerging about the damage that it was doing to humans and the environment.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Today nearly all petrol is unleaded. Lead lives on in motor vehicles in their batteries.

Target: Today nearly all petrol is unleaded, although lead lives on in motor vehicles in their batteries.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Scientists are using one of the world's largest particle accelerators. Scientists working at the Heavy Ion Research facility in Darmstadt, Germany, have so far confirmed the existence of element 112, which they have named copernicium, after Polish astronomer Nicholas Copernicus.

Target: Using one of the world's largest particle accelerators, scientists working at the Heavy Ion Research facility in Darmstadt, Germany, have so far confirmed the existence of element 112, which they have named copernicium, after Polish astronomer Nicholas Copernicus.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Tsou married Li Lin (Anna Tsou) in 1948. Li Lin (Anna Tsou) is a fellow Chinese student at Cambridge.

Target: Tsou married Li Lin (Anna Tsou), a fellow Chinese student at Cambridge, in 1948.


Source: Fix coherence: It is largely speculated that Nathaniel and Cherry met and were married at Samuel Turner's plantation in the early 1820s. Historians still dispute who exactly Nat Turner's wife was.

Target: It is largely speculated that Nathaniel and Cherry met and were married at Samuel Turner's plantation in the early 1820s, although historians still dispute who exactly Nat Turner's wife was.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: There is some evidence towards a correlation between performance in chess and intelligence among beginning players. Performance in chess also relies substantially on one's experience playing the game, and the role of experience may overwhelm the role of intelligence.

Target: There is some evidence towards a correlation between performance in chess and intelligence among beginning players. However, performance in chess also relies substantially on one's experience playing the game, and the role of experience may overwhelm the role of intelligence.


Source: Make the text more logical: Thus, if two customers have both made the same banking errors in the past. One of them has maintained a number of positive banking relationships as well.

Target: Thus, if two customers have both made the same banking errors in the past, while one of them has maintained a number of positive banking relationships as well.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Slightly harder to circumvent. Users can use open proxies.

Target: Slightly harder to circumvent, although users can use open proxies.


Source: Make the text coherent: According to the U.S, for the purposes of the present Convention, a child means every human being below the age of eighteen years. Under the law applicable to the child.

Target: According to the U.S, for the purposes of the present Convention, a child means every human being below the age of eighteen years unless under the law applicable to the child.


Source: Fix coherence: In this village, the peacock is not just protected, but also revered-so much. This is one place where its numbers have steadily increased over the years.

Target: In this village, the peacock is not just protected, but also revered-so much so that this is one place where its numbers have steadily increased over the years.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The collection contains many masterpieces made by well-known calligraphers throughout Chinese art history. Because of calligraphy's high artistic value, calligraphy collecting was popular among several Chinese emperors in multiple dynasties.

Target: The collection contains many masterpieces made by well-known calligraphers throughout Chinese art history. Furthermore, because of calligraphy's high artistic value, calligraphy collecting was popular among several Chinese emperors in multiple dynasties.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A married woman's tablet is kept at the altar of her husband's family. Should a woman of eligible age pass away unmarried, woman's family is prohibited from placing her tablet on the altar of her natal home.

Target: A married woman's tablet is kept at the altar of her husband's family. However, should a woman of eligible age pass away unmarried, her family is prohibited from placing her tablet on the altar of her natal home.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The original immigrants to the Japanese isles probably came from the south. Around 2300 years ago, increasing numbers came from what is now China and Korea.

Target: The original immigrants to the Japanese isles probably came from the south, but around 2300 years ago, increasing numbers came from what is now China and Korea.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He now teaches Social Studies at Bishop Guertin High School New Hampshire. Bishop Guertin High School is a Catholic College Preparatory School in Nashua.

Target: He now teaches Social Studies at Bishop Guertin High School, a Catholic College Preparatory School in Nashua, New Hampshire.


Source: Fix coherence: The sugar molecule (sucrose) is one example. Natural chiral materials are incapable of producing a repulsive Casimir effect that is strong enough to be of practical use.

Target: The sugar molecule (sucrose) is one example. However, natural chiral materials are incapable of producing a repulsive Casimir effect that is strong enough to be of practical use.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He soon realizes that Luke (Nolan Gould) had left the old smoke detectors in the attic last year. Smoke detectors were the smoke detectors that were chirping.

Target: He soon realizes that Luke (Nolan Gould) had left the old smoke detectors in the attic last year, and they were the ones that were chirping.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It may explode, sometimes even without apparent provocation ; it is thus too sensitive to be used commercially. First diluted in solution.

Target: It may explode, sometimes even without apparent provocation ; it is thus too sensitive to be used commercially unless first diluted in solution.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The song was chosen. Song was a song in 1999.

Target: The song was chosen because it was a hit in 1999.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: A default is defined as a choice frame in which one selection is pre-selected. Individuals must take active steps to select another option.

Target: A default is defined as a choice frame in which one selection is pre-selected so that individuals must take active steps to select another option.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However research indicates that there are several ways to structure choice architecture to compensate for or reduce these biases. Researchers demonstrated improved decision-making by drawing attention to the future outcomes of decisions or by emphasizing second best options.

Target: However research indicates that there are several ways to structure choice architecture to compensate for or reduce these biases. For example, researchers demonstrated improved decision-making by drawing attention to the future outcomes of decisions or by emphasizing second best options.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Choices with outcomes that manifest in the future will be influenced by several biases. Individuals tend to be myopic, preferring positive outcomes in the present often at the expense of future outcomes.

Target: Choices with outcomes that manifest in the future will be influenced by several biases. For example, individuals tend to be myopic, preferring positive outcomes in the present often at the expense of future outcomes.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Christopher Oladipo Ogunbajo is a Nigerian corporate lawyer and philanthropist. Christopher Oladipo Ogunbajo was an early lawyer of domiciliary accounts in Nigerian which later came to existence through the promulgation of the Foreign Currency Decree 18 of 1985.

Target: Christopher Oladipo Ogunbajo is a Nigerian corporate lawyer and philanthropist. He was an early advocate of domiciliary accounts in Nigeria which later came to existence through the promulgation of the Foreign Currency Decree 18 of 1985.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The repertoire is mainly classical music. Occasionally you might hear some popular, folk, religious, or traditional music.

Target: The repertoire is mainly classical music, but occasionally you might hear some popular, folk, religious, or traditional music.


Source: Make the text coherent: It was condemned by the Jewish authorities as a heresy (see also Rejection of Jesus). The Roman authorities persecuted it because, like Jewish, its monotheistic teachings were fundamentally foreign to the polytheistic traditions of the ancient world and a challenge to the imperial cult.

Target: It was condemned by the Jewish authorities as a heresy (see also Rejection of Jesus). The Roman authorities persecuted it because, like Judaism, its monotheistic teachings were fundamentally foreign to the polytheistic traditions of the ancient world and a challenge to the imperial cult.


Source: Make the text more logical: Christina Maslach (born January 21, 1946) is an American social psychologist and professor emerita of psychology at the University of California, Berkeley, known for her research on occupational burnout. Christina Maslach is a psychologist of the Maslach Burnout Inventory and Areas of Worklife Survey.

Target: Christina Maslach (born January 21, 1946) is an American social psychologist and professor emerita of psychology at the University of California, Berkeley, known for her research on occupational burnout. She is a co-author of the Maslach Burnout Inventory and Areas of Worklife Survey.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It is said to contain similar material to Hutton's blocked 1950 draft. It has not been used as a source for this Article, but is described in the context of Hutton's difficulties, which may well have had a serious effect on Hutton's health.

Target: It is said to contain similar material to Hutton's blocked 1950 draft. Consequently it has not been used as a source for this Article, but is described in the context of Hutton's difficulties, which may well have had a serious effect on his health.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The escape knife, which they credit to Hutton -. The latter does not himself mention escape knife-was a robust multi-function escape knife that included a sawblade.

Target: The escape knife, which they credit to Hutton-although the latter does not himself mention it-was a robust multi-function tool that included a sawblade.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jump up ^ At home with Christopher Koch 30 September 2012. Christopher Koch is the Sydney Morning Herald.

Target: Jump up ^ At home with Christopher Koch, The Sydney Morning Herald, 30 September 2012.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: At the beginning I didn't know anything about the technique of working in front of a camera. During those 10 years, I did the one thing that's so vitally important today -- I watched, I listened and I learned.

Target: At the beginning I didn't know anything about the technique of working in front of a camera, but during those 10 years, I did the one thing that's so vitally important today -- I watched, I listened and I learned.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Unable to explain the situation before he is arrested. Chuck manages to secure the tooth as he is dragged away to be committed to a CIA psychiatric facility under Dreyfus's direction.

Target: Although unable to explain the situation before he is arrested, Chuck manages to secure the tooth as he is dragged away to be committed to a CIA psychiatric facility under Dreyfus's direction.


Source: Make the text more consistent: CineAction generally poses a theme for each issue. Such themes have included comedy, sexuality in cinema, the films of Martin Scorsese, Canadian film, teen films, Vietnam, interpretation, documentary, rethinking authorship, and questions of value.

Target: CineAction generally poses a theme for each issue, and such themes have included comedy, sexuality in cinema, the films of Martin Scorsese, Canadian film, teen films, Vietnam, interpretation, documentary, rethinking authorship, and questions of value.


Source: Fix sentence flow: But in the 16 mm. film taken by Kodak Ltd. in his own clinic the whole operation is photographed,. Now and then there may be a grimace or a hint of nervousness.

Target: But in the 16 mm. film taken by Kodak Ltd. in his own clinic the whole operation is photographed, and although now and then there may be a grimace or a hint of nervousness.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 1924 Michel formed a partnership with Joseph Sullivan. Together they started the Michel Electric Handsaw Company, with the sole purpose of manufacturing and marketing the saw invented by Michel.

Target: In 1924 Michel formed a partnership with Joseph Sullivan, and together they started the Michel Electric Handsaw Company, with the sole purpose of manufacturing and marketing the saw invented by Michel.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A citizens dividend based on resources according to Thomas Pogge is due to every citizen. Everyone owns an inalienable stake in all limited natural resources.

Target: A citizens dividend based on resources according to Thomas Pogge is due to every citizen because everyone owns an inalienable stake in all limited natural resources.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It was designed to replace the old Hayward city hall, now located at Alex Giulini Plaza. Hayward was the first Hayward in the planned City Center complex.

Target: It was designed to replace the old Hayward city hall, now located at Alex Giulini Plaza. It was the first building in the planned City Center complex.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Some software houses have attempted to provide design software catering for the variety of infrastructure design fields in an integrated manner. General-purpose software may be used in the same manner at a fraction of the cost of design software.

Target: Some software houses have attempted to provide design software catering for the variety of infrastructure design fields in an integrated manner. However, general-purpose software may be used in the same manner at a fraction of the cost of design software.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: On 27 April, Taylor headed back to Yokosuka for a brief stop -- from 3 to 6 May -- before returning to Hawaii. The destroyer reentered Pearl Harbor on the 13th and conducted local operations in Hawaii waters.

Target: On 27 April, Taylor headed back to Yokosuka for a brief stop -- from 3 to 6 May -- before returning to Hawaii. The destroyer reentered Pearl Harbor on the 13th and conducted local operations in Hawaiian waters.


Source: Fix coherence errors: That sea battle never materialized because the enemy activities upon which he predicated his actions were actually movements preparatory to a Japanese withdrawal. At the battle of Rennell Island, the enemy subjected TF 18 to a scathing air attack.

Target: That sea battle never materialized because the enemy activities upon which he predicated his actions were actually movements preparatory to a Japanese withdrawal. Instead, at the battle of Rennell Island, the enemy subjected TF 18 to a scathing air attack.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: She operated out of the New Guinea area. She worked as shuttle tanker and harbor feeder, anchoring at such places as Manus in the Admiralties, Humboldt Bay and Hollandia on the north coast of New Guinea, and at Biak in the Schouten Islands.

Target: Operating out of the New Guinea area, she worked as shuttle tanker and harbor feeder, anchoring at such places as Manus in the Admiralties, Humboldt Bay and Hollandia on the north coast of New Guinea, and at Biak in the Schouten Islands.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Union stopped briefly at Eniwetok on 24 July. Union proceeded to Guam where she arrived on 2 August 1945.

Target: Stopping briefly at Eniwetok on 24 July, Union proceeded to Guam where she arrived on 2 August 1945.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Meanwhile, Whitehurst circled, apparently out of control. When Vigilance caught up with the damaged ship and came alongside at 1530, the more serious fires on board the escort vessel had been controlled.

Target: Meanwhile, Whitehurst circled, apparently out of control. Yet, when Vigilance caught up with the damaged ship and came alongside at 1530, the more serious fires on board the escort vessel had been controlled.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Wickes reached Saipan on the 29th. Wickes departed that same day, bound for the Hawaiian Islands in company with Picking and Hall (DD-583).

Target: Reaching Saipan on the 29th, Wickes departed that same day, bound for the Hawaiian Islands in company with Picking and Hall (DD-583).


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: These spiders do not use an adhesive on their orb webs. Rather the very fine fibers on each strand of silk tend to ensnare prey.

Target: These spiders do not use an adhesive on their orb webs, but rather the very fine fibers on each strand of silk tend to ensnare prey.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Ulrik attended Christian's coronation in 1596, who elevated him to rank of equerry, however, Ulrik left Denmark again. In the following year, Ulrik followed Christian on Ulrik's trip to the Holy Roman Empire, then travelling to France and England.

Target: Ulrik attended Christian's coronation in 1596, who elevated him to rank of equerry, however, Ulrik left Denmark again. In the following year, he followed Christian IV on his trip to the Holy Roman Empire, then travelling to France and England.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Ulster University is Northern Ireland's regional university with four campuses situated in Northern Ireland in Belfast, Coleraine, Derry (Magee College) and Jordanstown. Two further branch campuses in both London and Birmingham in England deliver courses.

Target: Ulster University is Northern Ireland's regional university with four campuses situated in Northern Ireland in Belfast, Coleraine, Derry (Magee College) and Jordanstown. Additionally, two further branch campuses in both London and Birmingham in England deliver courses.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Beth teamed up with Musical Director and producer Mitch Kaplan. Beth refined the show, and began to mix a new crop of comedians with many of the performers who had constituted UnCabaret in its previous incarnations.

Target: Teaming up with Musical Director and producer Mitch Kaplan, Beth refined the show, and began to mix a new crop of comedians with many of the performers who had constituted UnCabaret in its previous incarnations.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They pretend they want to help her. They tell her to send Gene alone to meet them at the mine the following day to discuss a business opportunity.

Target: Pretending they want to help her, they tell her to send Gene alone to meet them at the mine the following day to discuss a business opportunity.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Shen Tai continues toward Xinan. As Shen Tai approaches the great metropolis Shen Tai is swept into palace intrigue.

Target: Shen Tai continues toward Xinan, and as he approaches the great metropolis he is swept into palace intrigue.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A similar idea is used by some input methods, such as Cangjie and Wubi. Attempts to do this for character encoding have stumbled over the fact that ideographs do not decompose as simply or as regularly as Hangul does.

Target: A similar idea is used by some input methods, such as Cangjie and Wubi. However, attempts to do this for character encoding have stumbled over the fact that ideographs do not decompose as simply or as regularly as Hangul does.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: HTML characters manifest either directly as bytes according to document's encoding, if the encoding supports them. Users may write characters as numeric character references based on the character's Unicode code point.

Target: HTML characters manifest either directly as bytes according to document's encoding, if the encoding supports them, or users may write them as numeric character references based on the character's Unicode code point.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Every Lipschitz continuous map between two metric spaces is uniformly continuous. Every function which is differentiable and has bounded derivative is uniformly continuous.

Target: Every Lipschitz continuous map between two metric spaces is uniformly continuous. In particular, every function which is differentiable and has bounded derivative is uniformly continuous.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Heine -- Cantor theorem asserts that every continuous function on a compact set is uniformly continuous. If a function is continuous on a closed bounded interval of the real line, it is uniformly continuous on that interval.

Target: The Heine -- Cantor theorem asserts that every continuous function on a compact set is uniformly continuous. In particular, if a function is continuous on a closed bounded interval of the real line, it is uniformly continuous on that interval.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Founded in 1939, the UEC is the heir of numerous students' associations. Some of them created at the end of the 19th century at the beginning of the Third Republic.

Target: Although founded in 1939, the UEC is the heir of numerous students' associations, some of them created at the end of the 19th century at the beginning of the Third Republic.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: On 20 December 2002, the Security Council, under Resolution 1452, changed the enforcement regime. Individual countries could administer their own exemptions to the financial sanctions.

Target: On 20 December 2002, the Security Council, under Resolution 1452, changed the enforcement regime so that individual countries could administer their own exemptions to the financial sanctions.


Source: Make the text coherent: Republican Wally Herger retired. Republican Wally Herger represented the 2nd district from 1987 to 2013.

Target: Republican Wally Herger, who represented the 2nd district from 1987 to 2013, retired.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Republican Darrell Issa won reelection here. Republican Darrell Issa has represented the 49th district since 2003 and the 48th district from 2001 to 2003.

Target: Republican Darrell Issa, who has represented the 49th district since 2003 and the 48th district from 2001 to 2003, won reelection here.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A self-described reform candidate, Yeakel distanced herself from the city's ward leaders. While Yeakel carried Philadelphia by a solid 122,000-vote margin, Yeakel significantly underperformed Bill Clinton's total there.

Target: A self-described reform candidate, Yeakel distanced herself from the city's ward leaders. As a result, while Yeakel carried Philadelphia by a solid 122,000-vote margin, she significantly underperformed Bill Clinton's total there.