Source: Make this sentence better readable: Ashley Highfield, BBC director of new media and technology has said this program "Could just be the iTunes for the broadcast industry, enabling our audience to access our TV and radio programmes on their terms-anytime, any place, any how."

Target: Ashley Highfield is the BBC's director of new media and technology has said this program "Could just be the iTunes for the broadcast industry, enabling our audience to access our TV and radio programmes on their terms-anytime, any place, any how."


Source: Make this sentence readable: Yesterday, the U.K. Labour Party successfully prevented a bill restricting the closure of post offices from being passed, although the leading Labour party only had a majority of 20 due to 19 of it' s MP's voting against the party line.

Target: Yesterday, the U.K. Labour Party successfully prevented a bill restricting the closure of post offices from being passed, although the governing Labour party only had a majority of 20 due to 19 of it' s MP's voting against the party line.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Mrs. Abbott told Wikinewsthat "Post offices are central spaces within a community."

Target: She told Wikinews: "Post offices are central spaces within a community."


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: She added that they provide invaluable services and a point of contact for vulnerable people.

Target: She added that they provided invaluable services and a point of contact for vulnerable people.


Source: Clarification: She said that "they are particularly important [in] places in areas like Hackney where there are fewer bank branches and a large elderly population who rely on the post office to collect their pensions." Mrs.

Target: She added: "they are particularly important [in] places in areas like Hackney where there are fewer bank branches and a large elderly population who rely on the post office to collect their pensions." Mrs.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: She said that "they are particularly important [in] places in areas like Hackney where there are fewer bank branches and a large elderly population who rely on the post office to collect their pensions." Mrs. Abbot also said that she was "appalled" to hear of the Post Office closures in her constituency.

Target: She said that "they are particularly important [in] places in areas like Hackney where there are fewer bank branches and a large elderly population who rely on the post office to collect their pensions." She was "appalled" to hear of the Post Office closures in her constituency.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Nicholas Sarkozy On the first day of his state visit to Great Britain, in a Presidential speech French President Nicolas Sarkozy praised the British nation and called for an "entente amicale" between Great Britain and France, in place of the existing, more formal entente cordiale agreement.

Target: Nicholas Sarkozy On the first day of his state visit to the United Kingdom, French President Nicolas Sarkozy praised the British nation and called for an "entente amicale" between Great Britain and France, in place of the existing, more formal entente cordiale agreement.


Source: Clarification: Nicholas Sarkozy On the first day of his state visit to Great Britain, in a Presidential speech French President Nicolas Sarkozy praised the British nation and called for an "entente amicale" between Great Britain and France, in place of the existing, more formal entente cordiale agreement.

Target: Nicholas Sarkozy On the first day of his state visit to Great Britain, in a Presidential speech French President Nicolas Sarkozy gave a speech praising the British nation and called for an "entente amicale" between Great Britain and France, in place of the existing, more formal entente cordiale agreement.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Speaking, unusually, to both Houses of Parliament, Mr Sarkozy went on to praise the help Britain gave to France during both World Wars and said that "France would never URLet" and that it owed Britain a debt of gratitude.

Target: Speaking, unusually, to both Houses of Parliament, Sarkozy went on to praise the help Britain gave to France during both World Wars and said that "France would never URLet" and that it owed Britain a debt of gratitude.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Italian police officers and guardians are going on trial for alleged abuse of anti-globalization protesters during the G8 meeting in Genoa in 2001.

Target: Italian police officers and prison guards have been ordered to stand trial for the alleged abuse of anti-globalization protesters during the G8 meeting in Genoa in 2001.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Italian police officers and guardians are going on trial for alleged abuse of anti-globalization protesters during the G8 meeting in Genoa in 2001.

Target: Italian police officers and guardians are going on trial for alleged abuse of anti-globalization protesters during the G8 summit in Genoa in 2001.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Reports made by over 250 participants in the event detail verbal and physical abuse.

Target: Over 250 participants in the event detail verbal and physical abuse.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The police allegedly took detainees to a holding center outside the city, where they say they were verbally and physically abused, threatened with rape, and spat at.

Target: The police took detainees to a holding center outside the city, where they say they were verbally and physically abused, threatened with rape, and spat at.


Source: Change to clearer wording: The police allegedly took detainees to a holding center outside the city, where they say they were verbally and physically abused, threatened with rape, and spat at.

Target: The police allegedly took detainees to a holding center outside the city, where they say they were verbally and physically abused, threatened with rape.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Twenty-five of the 250 were brought up on minor charges of looting and ransacking.

Target: Twenty-five demostrators are standing trial on minor charges of looting and ransacking.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site.

Target: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site.


Source: Clarify this sentence: In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site.

Target: In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.

Target: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.

Target: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself. The IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article in two separate instances.

Target: The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on the site.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: 240px| Several companies just looked the vision of WiMAX but ignore its threats.

Target: 240px| Some companies see the possibilities of WiMAX but ignore its threats.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: In the picture is MTube, innovated by Science and Technology Advisory Group of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China (Taiwan).

Target: Pictured is MTube, innovated by Science and Technology Advisory Group of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China (Taiwan).


Source: Change to clearer wording: In the picture is MTube, innovated by Science and Technology Advisory Group of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China (Taiwan).

Target: In the picture is MTube, developed by the Science and Technology Advisory Group of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China (Taiwan).


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Computers and technology bring several conveniences to the modern lifestyle, but it creates risks like computer viruses and hacking.

Target: Computers and technology make our modern lifestyle more convenient, but they also create new risks like computer viruses and hacking.


Source: Make this easier to read: Many people want to enjoy the conveniences brought by new technology, but they may not be aware of its problems.

Target: Many people want to enjoy the convenience of new technology, but they may not be aware of its problems.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: WiMAX, which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China, is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.

Target: WiMAX, which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China, is considered by some to be the communication standard for the next generation of mobile devices.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Since several Internet crimes are progressively respected by several information security companies, some of them disputed on security of WiMAX.

Target: Since several Internet crimes are progressively respected by several information security companies, some of them question the security of WiMAX.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: After all, everyone wants to welcome this new technology but is afraid of its problem to bring about security issues.

Target: After all, everyone wants to welcome this new technology but is afraid of its potential to cause security issues.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Although some (security) companies analyzed statistics on potential issues to dispute the future of WiMAX, but the question is how will they present their analysis? With opportunities from two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.

Target: Some companies have analyzed potential security issues which threaten the success of WiMAX. But what have they found? two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: With opportunities from two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.

Target: With opportunities from two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly interviewed both Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.


Source: Change to clearer wording: __NOTOC__ Hsiao-wen Hung: Information security isn't built within a day. Hsiao-wen Hung: The information security industry isn't built within a simple solution.

Target: __NOTOC__ Hsiao-wen Hung: Information security isn't built in a day Hsiao-wen Hung: The information security industry isn't built within a simple solution.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: (Interview audio clip) The improvements of information technology firmly brought on opportunities, but information security is particularly respected by companies from security industry, As of this, how about the information security?

Target: (Interview audio clip) The improvements of information technology firmly brought on opportunities, but information security is of particular concern to companies in the security industry. Since this is so, what is the state of information security?


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.

Target: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008)... although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.


Source: Make this easier to read: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.

Target: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring about growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.

Target: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, its future has been questioned by some companies from information security industry.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.

Target: Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies in the information security industry.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Hung: Safety and flexibility, its relation is like a paddle.

Target: Hung: Safety and flexibility are like a paddle.


Source: Clarify: Hung: Safety and flexibility, its relation is like a paddle. If something wanted to be linkable anywhere, there were still some considerations on security.

Target: Hung: Safety and flexibility, its relation is like a paddle with two blades. If you want something to be connectible anywhere, there were still some considerations on security.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: It's like a house which anyone can enter in it.

Target: It's like a house which anyone can enter.


Source: Make the text more understandable: If you want to ensure its safety on your house, you should doseveral hard works.

Target: If you want to ensure the security of your building, there are some difficult things you need to do.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: That's why the security is a must-have trend in reality.

Target: That's why security is really a must-have trend in reality.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: That's why the security is a must-have trend in reality. As of information securitywhat you mentioned about before, relatively, if a newly-proposed future technology wasn't normally populated, it's a golden opportunity for companies when some security companies properly disputed on its future.

Target: That's why the security is a must-have thing. As for information security, as you mentioned earlier, relatively, if a newly-proposed future technology wasn't normally populated, it's a golden opportunity for companies when some security companies properly disputed on its future.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all).

Target: Hung: Even though it's secure to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all).


Source: Clarify this text: Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all).

Target: Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything down, it is inconvenient.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Therefore, some key elements like encryption, password authentication, policy, and some Web 2.0 solutions played key roles in information security.

Target: Therefore, some key elements like encryption, password authentication, policy, and some Web 2.0 solutions have a key role to play in information security.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet, if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory.

Target: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet. If anyone wants to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet, if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory.

Target: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet, if anyone want to prevent them, complete planning should do priory.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet, if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory.

Target: There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet, if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should be a priority.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip) What's your opinion on several disputes from IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?

Target: Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip) What's your opinion on issues raised by IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Chang: Our member companies will do attempts on trend-changing. As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established, I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared.

Target: Chang: Our member companies will attempt to change the trend. As for our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established, I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established, I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared.

Target: As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus is established among senior executives in the IT industry, I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared.


Source: Clarification: As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established, I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared.

Target: As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established, I think the objectives of Taipei Computer Association will be more and more cleared.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.

Target: What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's statement: "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.

Target: What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protection is necessary "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: When a new technology was under development, companies mostly looked on its vision rather than its hidden factors like information or data security.

Target: When a new technology was under development, companies mostly looked at its possibilities, rather than hidden factors like information or data security.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: As the Internet just began in a mature infrastructure, the public might not know its critical issue on security factor. As of WiMAX which you mentioned, even though it's under development, but you will not imagine what it will happen in the future.

Target: As the Internet just began in a mature infrastructure, the public might not know how critical security issues are. As for WiMAX, which you mentioned, even though it's under development, but you will not imagine what it will happen in the future.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over Kbenhavn Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick the opponent in the first semifinal.

Target: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over Kbenhavn Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick their opponent in the first semifinal.


Source: Clarify: Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev. OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.

Target: Herlev lost the rest of the matches was lost for Herlev. OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.


Source: Clarify this text: Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev. OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.

Target: Rest of the matches. OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.


Source: Make this sentence readable: There was no legal ground to hold them any longer," said Swedish police in a statement to the press who also said that an investigation is ongoing.

Target: There was no legal ground to hold them any longer," said Swedish police in a statement to the press. He also noted that an investigation is ongoing.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: The defendant, Ohio-based company Owens Illinois, Inc., had sought a trial in a Spanish court, an opinion which was shared by the Superior Court which heard the case.

Target: The defendant, Ohio-based company Owens Illinois, Inc., had sought a trial in a Spanish court, an opinion which was shared by the Superior Court that had heard the case.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.

Target: Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and so the case should be heard in Spanish courts.


Source: Use clearer wording: The court's opinion was written by Judge Anthony Parrillo, who wrote that: "In sum, we conclude that defendant has failed to carry its burden to demonstrate that Spain is an available adequate forum to adjudicate the parties' dispute and therefore the motion to dismiss on forum non conveniens grounds should have been denied without consideration of public- and private-interest factors."

Target: The court's opinion was written by Judge Anthony Parrillo, explained the ruling: "In sum, we conclude that defendant has failed to carry its burden to demonstrate that Spain is an available adequate forum to adjudicate the parties' dispute and therefore the motion to dismiss on forum non conveniens grounds should have been denied without consideration of public- and private-interest factors."


Source: Clarify this sentence: Patients with malignant mesothelioma generally do not have positive outcomes, and once diagnosed have six months to a year to live.

Target: Patients with malignant mesothelioma generally do not have positive outcomes, and once diagnosed typically have six months to a year to live.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The State of Florida entered an agreement on June 24, 2008 to purchase U.S. Sugar, the largest manufacturer of cane sugar in the U.S. in an effort to restore the Everglades.

Target: The U.S. state of Florida entered an agreement on June 24, 2008 to purchase U.S. Sugar, the largest manufacturer of cane sugar in the U.S. in an effort to restore the Everglades.


Source: Clarify this sentence: Black, a Canadian-born who holds the title Baron Black of Crossharbour in the United Kingdom, was found guilty in July 2007 of three counts of wire and mail fraud for giving himself and others millions of dollars in illegal bonuses taken from Hollinger holdings, and for obstruction of justice based on surveillance footage of him moving 13 boxes of documents out of his Toronto office to his home the day after he was informed that he was being investigated.

Target: Black, born in Canada and bearer of the title Baron Black of Crossharbour in the United Kingdom, was found guilty in July 2007 of three counts of wire and mail fraud for giving himself and others millions of dollars in illegal bonuses taken from Hollinger holdings, and for obstruction of justice based on surveillance footage of him moving 13 boxes of documents out of his Toronto office to his home the day after he was informed that he was being investigated.


Source: Clarify the sentence: He was sentenced, and from March this year began a 6 1/ 2 year prison term.

Target: He was sentenced, and from March this year he began a 6 1/ 2 year prison term.


Source: Clarification: The appeals panel from the United States Court of Appeals for the Seventh Circuit, who heard the defence attorenys ' oral arguments, presented its opinion in a 16-page document in which they rejected arguments against both the fraud and obstruction charges.

Target: The appeals panel from the United States Court of Appeals for the Seventh Circuit, who heard the defence attorenys ' oral arguments, presented its opinion in a 16-page document in which they rejected arguments against the fraud and obstruction charges.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: They noted that while the defence had presented a "no harm-no foul argument", in which they argued that they were owed the money appropriated, "such arguments usually fare badly in criminal cases".

Target: They noted that while the defence had presented a "no harm-no foul argument", in which it was argued that the accused were owed the money appropriated, "such arguments usually fare badly in criminal cases".


Source: Make the text more understandable: The appeals judges also discounted arguments from the defence regarding whether the defendants were all aware of the illegality of the transactions, making reference to an "ostrich argument" (based on the urban legend that ostriches sensing danger stick their heads in the sand ), in that choosing not to investigate the suspicious nature of the payments was equivalent to accepting their illegality.

Target: The appeals judges also discounted arguments from the defence regarding the defendants being unaware of the illegality of the transactions, making reference to an "ostrich argument" (based on the urban legend that ostriches sensing danger stick their heads in the sand ), in that choosing not to investigate the suspicious nature of the payments was equivalent to accepting their illegality.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: The man who took a gut feel of seeing personal computers in every household three decades and each will require a stable operating system will now pursue philanthropic activities under the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation.

Target: The man who took a gut feel of seeing personal computers in every household, each requiring a stable operating system will now pursue philanthropic activities under the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation.


Source: Clarify this sentence: As Gates leaves day-to-day operations, two people will assume the his two vital duties.

Target: As Gates leaves day-to-day operations, two people will assume his two vital duties.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Bill Gates founded Microsoft in 1975 and from then has dominated the market for operating systems in personal computers.

Target: Bill Gates founded Microsoft in 1975 which has since dominated the market for operating systems in personal computers.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony.

Target: Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, where the United Kingdom's largest colony.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony.

Target: Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony resides.


Source: Make the text more understandable: During the past five years, numbers on the islands have decreased by a third.

Target: During the past five years, the puffin population on the islands have decreased by a third.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Experts had expected numbers to rise this year, but believe the declineis due the birds being unable to find food.

Target: Experts had expected numbers to rise this year, but now with news of the decline, are citing an inability to find food.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Puffins, like many auks feed on fish and zooplankton, and it is not known if man-made causes, such as over-fishing or climate change have lowered the amount of food available to puffins, causing them to starve whilst out at sea.

Target: Puffins, like many auks feed on fish and zooplankton, and it is not known if man-made causes, such as over-fishing or climate change have lowered the amount of food available to puffins, causing them to starve while at sea.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Also that the average age of American bridges is 43 years old.

Target: Also that the average age of American bridges is 43 years.


Source: Clarification: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack, which he suffered while paddle-boating with his wife in June, on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.

Target: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack, which he suffered while paddle-boating with his wife in June, on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.

Target: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack, which he suffered while paddle-boating with his wife in June, on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is best known for his roles on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack, which he suffered while paddle-boating with his wife in June, on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.

Target: His current condition is not life threating. Grammer blamed the heart attack, which he suffered while paddle-boating with his wife in June, on the pressure from his cancelled sitcom Back To You. Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms Frasier and Cheers.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Primary amongst them is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was solely created and controlled by Dr.

Target: Primary amongst the evidence is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was solely created and controlled by Dr.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Johnson was charged with first-degree intentional homicide.

Target: The charges consist of three counts of first-degree intentional homicide.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Local teens said Johnson often was seen at the site, but mostly kept to himself.

Target: Local teens said Johnson was often seen at the site, but mostly kept to himself.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The Detroit Free Press reports that in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when Johnson lured the woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.

Target: The Detroit Free Press reports that in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when he lured a woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.


Source: Make the sentence clear: He says he then got his weapons and returned to the woods.

Target: He reportedly said that he then got his weapons and returned to the woods.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Johnson said he planned to wait for the teens to reach the Michigan side of the river so he could kill them all and use them as "bait" to lure police into his ambush.

Target: He planned to wait for the teens to reach the Michigan side of the river so he could kill them all and use them as "bait" to lure police into his ambush.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: However, Spigarelli and Pohlson unexpectedly approached his position, and he said he felt trapped and he opened fire.

Target: However, Spigarelli and Pohlson unexpectedly approached his position, and he said he felt trapped and so opened fire.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Obama has also recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.

Target: Obama has recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.


Source: Make this easier to read: And Clinton's supporters are split over Obamachoosing Biden instead of Clinton as the vice presidential nominee.

Target: And Clinton's supporters are split on Obama's choice of Biden over Clinton as vice presidential nominee.


Source: Use clearer wording: Heavy rain weather conditions on the racing circuit caused a couple of surprises for the spectators.

Target: Heavy rain conditions on the racing circuit caused a couple of surprises for the spectators.


Source: Use clearer wording: His podium was endangered by Felipe Massa, but the second Ferrari driver came only 6 in his final attempt and Heikki Kovalainen, Hamilton's double in McLaren, who made better setting second time just before the chequered flag closed the session.

Target: His pole position was endangered by Felipe Massa, but the second Ferrari driver came only 6 in his final attempt and Heikki Kovalainen, Hamilton's double in McLaren, who made better setting second time just before the chequered flag closed the session.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: His podium was endangered by Felipe Massa, but the second Ferrari driver came only 6 in his final attempt and Heikki Kovalainen, Hamilton's double in McLaren, who made better setting second time just before the chequered flag closed the session.

Target: His podium was endangered by Felipe Massa, but the second Ferrari driver came only 6 in his final attempt and Heikki Kovalainen, Hamilton's teammate in McLaren, who made better setting second time just before the chequered flag closed the session.


Source: Clarification: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.

Target: The Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.

Target: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva suffered light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.


Source: Clarification: The laboratory in a statement said that an electrical connection between the magnets had melted because of the high current.

Target: The laboratory in a statement that an electrical connection between the magnets had melted because of the high current.


Source: Clarify the sentence: It should also be noted that AFL CEO, Andrew Demitriew mistakenly started calling out Round 2's votes at the start of the count, when Round 1's votes should have been called out.

Target: It should also be noted that AFL CEO, Andrew Demitriew mistakenly started calling out Round 2 first, instead of the votes for Round 1.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: He continued "Wind is king here, its dictating everything we are doing. " Scott Stephens of the Center for Fire Research & Outreach at the University of California, Berkeley calls Southern California's Santa Ana winds "some of the strongest, most severe fire winds in the world."

Target: "Wind is king here, its dictating everything we are doing. " Scott Stephens of the Center for Fire Research & Outreach at the University of California, Berkeley calls Southern California's Santa Ana winds "some of the strongest, most severe fire winds in the world."


Source: Make the text more understandable: Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow children's secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigor and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."

Target: Conservative Shadow Secretary of State for Children Michael Gove stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigor and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.

Target: The statement said "I'm 23 years old, and despite the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.


Source: Make the sentence clear: The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.

Target: The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not in a manner that people have come to expect from me.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: The construction industry, which peaked at 1.1 million jobs in January 2007, lost 104,000 jobs last month.

Target: The construction industry has lost 1.1 million jobs in January 2007, lost 104,000 jobs last month.


Source: Make the text more understandable: They were with a party of six who had been at sea angling from a 4.6 m boat.

Target: They were with a party of six who had been angling from a 4.6 m boat.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Heavy snow for parts of Northern England is also forecast.

Target: Heavy snow for parts of Northern England had also been forecast.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th), with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday (20th).

Target: Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th), with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: United Airlines Flight 634 made a very rough emergency landing yesterday morning when only two of the three landing wheels on the Airbus A319 deployed as the plane was making its final approach into Newark, New Jersey's Newark Liberty International Airport.

Target: United Airlines Flight 634 made an emergency landing yesterday morning when only two of the three landing wheels on the Airbus A319 deployed as the plane was making its final approach into Newark, New Jersey's Newark Liberty International Airport.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.

Target: Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a touchdown on the runway at Newark.


Source: Make the text more understandable: In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion U.S. in deposits across eight northeastern states.

Target: In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion in deposits across eight northeastern states.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Today the Hewlett-Packard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.

Target: Today the Hewlett-Packard Co. has announced that 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.

Target: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who took office about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.


Source: Make the sentence clear: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.

Target: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months ago, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.


Source: Make the text more understandable: These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from this restructuring will primarily be to offset market forces or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.

Target: These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from which will primarily be to offset market forces or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.


Source: Clarify this text: Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales nor in Research & Development.

Target: Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales or Research & Development.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: The number of jobless Germans dropped by 42,000 to 4.8 million, but without seasonal adjustments, including summer breaks in job training and holidays of the jobseekers, it grew by 68,000 and is close to a post-war record.

Target: The number of jobless Germans dropped by 42,000 to 4.8 million, but without seasonal adjustments, including summer breaks in job training and jobseeker holidays, it grew by 68,000 and is close to a post-war record.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Unemployment can even rise 370,000 by end of the year, according to German research institute IAB.

Target: Unemployment is projected to rise by 370,000 by end of the year, according to German research institute IAB.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: Labour-market problems remain the main issue of the forthcoming Bundestag elections campaign.

Target: Labour-market problems remain the main issue of the Bundestag election campaign.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.

Target: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for the failure of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.


Source: Clarify this text: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.

Target: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing unemployment.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.

Target: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) got 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.

Target: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\%.


Source: Clarify the sentence: These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.

Target: These initiatives are very expensive to put in place and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.

Target: These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system put into place originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.


Source: Make this easier to read: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.

Target: Each day, nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.


Source: Make this easier to read: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.

Target: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people gather near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.

Target: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia; these laborers do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.


Source: Use clearer wording: It has drawn the ire and compassion of the Herndon community.

Target: This daily gathering has drawn both the ire and compassion of the Herndon community.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.

Target: A video was released yesterday purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.


Source: Make this easier to read: A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.

Target: A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL).


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The video asserts the Christians were targeted by ISIL because of their religion.

Target: The video indicates that the Christians were targeted by ISIL because of their religion.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: The Coptic Orthodox Church stated they were "confident" justice would be done on those who executed their followers.'s President stated: "Egypt and the whole world are in a fierce battle with extremist groups carrying extremist ideology and sharing the same goals".

Target: The Coptic Orthodox Church stated they were "confident" justice would be carried out.'s President stated: "Egypt and the whole world are in a fierce battle with extremist groups carrying extremist ideology and sharing the same goals".


Source: Make this sentence readable: This comes as Mayor Robin Nagin begins to abandon the city and turn it over to state and federal control.

Target: This comes as Mayor Robin Nagin began to turn the city over to state and federal control.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: The fourteen contractors were en route to launch barges into Lake Pontchartrain to help fix the break in the 17th Street Canal when, according to police, the gunmen opened fire on the group.

Target: The fourteen contractors were en route to launch barges into Lake Pontchartrain in order to fix the break in the 17th Street Canal when, according to police, the gunmen opened fire on the group.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Bayley first raped a woman and committed several attempted rapes when he was just 19.

Target: Bayley committed rape and attempted rape at age 19.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.

Target: Later, in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.


Source: Clarify this sentence: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.

Target: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, he raped six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.

Target: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.

Target: This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen, was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.


Source: Clarify this text: The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been falsely imprisoned by the immigration department.

Target: The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been unjustly imprisoned by the immigration department.


Source: Clarify this sentence: Those who have a hand in larger projects noticed the outage immediately.

Target: Larger network-based projects noticed the outage immediately.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered up and running.

Target: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started routing packets correctly, but it could hardly be considered up and running.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered up and running.

Target: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered fully functional.


Source: Clarify this text: Pieces of the network seemed to be going up and down at random and Level 3 tech support still says they will need more time to fix the problem.

Target: Pieces of the network seemed to be going up and down at random and Level 3 tech support said they would need more time to fix the problem.


Source: Use clearer wording: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.

Target: It is the second time Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.

Target: This is Blunkett's has been forced to stand down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.


Source: Make the text more understandable: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.

Target: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims that his office fast-tracked a visa application.


Source: Clarification: Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign in an interview with the Sheffield Star, insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."

Target: Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign, insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."


Source: Make the text more understandable: A raid occurred at 0600 local time (0900) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. President Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.

Target: A raid occurred at 0600 local time (0900) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. Following the occurrence, president Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.


Source: Change to clearer wording: The former president is alleged to have been involved in corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.

Target: The former president allegedly has been involved in corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: A raid occurred at 06:00 local time (09:00) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. Following the occurrence, president Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.

Target: A raid occurred at 06:00 local time (09:00) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. President Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The former president allegedly has been involved in the corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.

Target: The former president is alleged to have been involved in the corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: UWS operator Haw Par Corporation described Chan as a "veteran diver, aquarist and animal caregiver who had been caring for the aquatic animals at UWS since its opening in 1991 (jobs).

Target: UWS operator Haw Par Corporation described Chan as a "veteran diver, aquarist and animal caregiver who had been caring for the aquatic animals at UWS since its opening in 1991 ".


Source: Make this sentence better readable: In an interview with The Diarrhea Paper at the time of UWS' closure in June, Chan said of the animals he worked with, whom he described as his "band of friends", "They are so quietly tame. [...] We intend to find them the best homes and environment.

Target: In an interview with The New Paper at the time of UWS' closure in June, Chan said of the animals he worked with, whom he described as his "band of friends", "They are so quietly tame. [...] We intend to find them the best homes and environment.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: It lasted at least seventeen hours until the authorities quelled the riot on Monday at 7a.m. local time, according to Fontes.

Target: It lasted at least seventeen hours until another authorities quelled the riot on Monday at 7a.m. local time, according to Fontes.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: It lasted at least seventeen hours until another authorities quelled the riot should Monday at 7 a.m. local time, according to Fontes.

Target: It lasted at least seventeen hours until the authorities quelled the riot should Monday at 7 a.m. local time, according to Fontes.


Source: Change to clearer wording: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.

Target: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at the senior level. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.

Target: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper for reporting the incident.


Source: Clarification: It is also thought to be embarrasing for General Cosgrove who led a 40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.

Target: It is also thought to be an embarrasment for General Cosgrove who led a 40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.


Source: Clarify: A Missouri woman from blue springs was a victim of assault and she tried to swallow her cell phone the reasons are unknown at this time.

Target: A Missouri woman from blue springs was a victim of assault and she tried to swallow her cell phone may have been the victim of assault.


Source: Use clearer wording: The later test was done in England where samples tested had conflicting results in 2004.

Target: The later test was done in England where samples tested had shown conflicting results.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States to face double-murder charges.

Target: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States, where he will face double-murder charges.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the murders of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.

Target: Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the killings of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts.

Target: Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts home.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Sondhi then hand-delivered the petition to the residence of the President of the Privvy Council.

Target: Sondhi then delivered the petition through an aid at the residence of the President of the Privvy Council.


Source: Clarify the sentence: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point ), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.

Target: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China have denounced the recent closure of Freezing Point (Bing Dian ), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.


Source: Clarify: Sanders is also the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.

Target: Sanders is the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, most likely on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.

Target: Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, possibly on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.


Source: Use clearer wording: Forest Trends ' said corruption had devastated rural living standards and ignored the basic rights of landowners: "There are a few logging operations in the country which are deemed beneficial to both local landowners and the country, but they are lost in a sea of bad operators.

Target: Forest Trends claimed corruption had devastated rural living standards and ignored the basic rights of landowners: "There are a few logging operations in the country which are deemed beneficial to both local landowners and the country, but they are lost in a sea of bad operators.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: If felling continues the way it is done now, they warn, Papua New Guinea could be bereft of its natural cover in a decade.

Target: If foresting continues in this manner, they warn, Papua New Guinea could be bereft of its natural cover in a decade.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: "Truth is-it may have very little to do with Bush's visit," writes Indian blogger Neha Viswanathan on the Global Voices email list, run by the Harvard Berkman Center for Law & Society. "The anti-Bush protest has hardly found a voice online.

Target: "Truth is-it may have very little to do with Bush's visit," writes Indian blogger Neha Viswanathan on the Global Voices email list, run by the Berkman Center for Law & Society. "The anti-Bush protest has hardly found a voice online.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) made an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8:21am (New Zealand Daylight Time) A helicopter picked up the five available staff, but the missing staff member could not be found before it had to leave.

Target: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) made an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8:21am (New Zealand Daylight Time) A helicopter picked up the five available staff, but one missing staff member could not be found before it had to leave.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: She said that when staff went to look for their colleague, where he was thought to be they had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.

Target: She said that when two of the others went to look for their colleague, where he was thought to be they had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club, the South Sydney Rabbitohs.

Target: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club.


Source: Make the sentence clear: The men required 75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass, narrowly winning by just 32 votes (0.8\%).

Target: The men required 75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass; and it narrowly won, by just 32 votes (0.8\%).


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.

Target: Those against the bid objected that the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The seat was won in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.

Target: BNP had won the seat in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The seat was won in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.

Target: The seat was won in 2004 after it adapted an ongoing campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Murphy admitted that he was not at the sheet for every signature, and agreed that the 96 signatures present on those two sheets should be invalidated.

Target: Murphy admitted that he was not at the sheet for every signature, and agreed that the 96 signatures on those two sheets should be invalidated.


Source: Make this easier to read: He then continued to argue that since Murphy knowingly falsified his name on those two circulation petitions, he also failed to fulfill his candidate affidavit, which according to state law is a criminal offense.

Target: He then continued, arguing that since Murphy knowingly falsified his name on those two circulation petitions, he also failed to fulfill his candidate affidavit, which according to state law is a criminal offense.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.

Target: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania. The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.

Target: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, Pennsylvania. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.


Source: Make this easier to read: PA law states that whoever signs a petition sheet as a circulator must be present for each signature and see each signature placed on the sheet.

Target: Pennsylvania law states that whoever signs a petition sheet as a circulator must be present for each signature and see each signature placed on the sheet.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Sendek went 170-118 (.590) during his 10 season stay at NC State, and went 22-10 overall and 10-6 in the ACC this past year. Sendek is replacing Rob Evans, who was fired on March 10.

Target: Sendek went 170-118 (.590) during his 10 season stay at NC State, and went 22-10 overall and 10-6 in the ACC. Sendek is replacing Rob Evans, who was fired on March 10.


Source: Change to clearer wording: The mother and the brother both remain in critical condition at a hospital in Chattanooga hospital. The boys head was bitten by the bear, which punctured his skull, before it attacked his mother.

Target: The mother and the brother both remain in critical condition at a hospital in Chattanooga. The boy's skull was punctured by a bite to the head, before the bear attacked his mother.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.

Target: Investigators have not yet been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.

Target: Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because of the severity of her injuries. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims and the campground has been closed.

Target: Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims. The campground has been closed.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled Dimming the Earth, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.

Target: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled Dimming the Earth, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.


Source: Clarify the sentence: This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is now understood to be due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.

Target: This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is probably due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: The tsunami occoured a couple of hours before there was going to be a tsunami warning system test, that had 29 countries participating.

Target: The tsunami occoured a couple of hours before a previously-scheduled test of a tsunami warning system test, that had 29 countries participating.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours each time.

Target: Bilbrey trained for four days a week for 2 hours each time.


Source: Use clearer wording: Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours each time. Bilbrey has also participated in several swimming triathlons. Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.

Target: Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours at a time. He decided to take the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.

Target: Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also made it across, taking just under two hours in October 2005.


Source: Make this sentence readable: His coach made the swim along with Bilbrey.

Target: Zemaitis made the swim along with Bilbrey.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: A United States Coast Guard boat followed the swimmers, along with 2 extra swimmers in case an emergency occurred.

Target: A United States Coast Guard boat and two additional swimmers followed to take action in case an emergency occurred.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Dan Glickman, CEO of the Motion Picture Association of America has applauded the move, citing it as a reminder that "there are no safe harbors for copyright thieves".

Target: Dan Glickman, CEO of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA), has applauded the move, citing it as a reminder that "there are no safe harbors for copyright thieves".


Source: Make the text more understandable: At current there are already some publications made available by proper officials, (see the MPAA link below) confirming the authenticity of the raid.

Target: At current there are already some publications made available by officials confirming the authenticity of the raid.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Since 4pm, at least 200 people also blocked the Berliner Platz, the most important inner city crossing, bringing most of the downtown bus and car traffic to a standstill.

Target: From 4 to 7pm, at least 200 people also blocked the Berliner Platz, the most important inner city crossing, bringing most of the downtown bus and car traffic to a standstill.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Jos Ramos Horta told Lusa News Agency that the soldiers of the GNR "have to start acting with autonomy and hardness" in all the city, Dili, to reestablish the law and order.

Target: Jos Ramos Horta told Lusa News Agency that the soldiers of the GNR "have to start acting with autonomy and hardness" in the entire city, Dili, to reestablish the law and order.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Shiv sena activists today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the break away fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC). Geelani, who heads a breakaway faction of the troubled region's largest separatist alliance, was scheduled to address the press after his release from prison.

Target: Activists of the Shiv sena today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the break away fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC). Geelani, who heads a breakaway faction of the troubled region's largest separatist alliance, was scheduled to address the press after his release from prison.


Source: Clarify this text: It will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the SKY Network Television decoder.

Target: FreeView will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the SKY Network Television decoder.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Last Sunday in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law a phased-in $2 minimum wage increase. For businesses with 10 employees or more, the rate will increase by $ 1 on January 1 next year, then increase by another dollar on July 1.

Target: Last Sunday in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law a phased-in US$2 minimum wage increase. For businesses with 10 employees or more, the rate will increase by US$ 1 on January 1 next year, then increase by another dollar on July 1.


Source: Clarification: Other U.S. states totaling 20 Alaska, California, Connecticut, Delaware, Florida, Hawaii, Illinois, Maine, Maryland, Massachusetts, Michigan, Minnesota, New Jersey, New York, North Carolina, Oregon, Rhode Island, Vermont, Washington and Wisconsin, plus the District of Columbia have raised the minimum above the federal mandate.

Target: A total of 20 other U.S. states totaling 20 Alaska, California, Connecticut, Delaware, Florida, Hawaii, Illinois, Maine, Maryland, Massachusetts, Michigan, Minnesota, New Jersey, New York, North Carolina, Oregon, Rhode Island, Vermont, Washington and Wisconsin, plus the District of Columbia have raised the minimum above the federal mandate.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Other U.S. states totaling 20 Alaska, California, Connecticut, Delaware, Florida, Hawaii, Illinois, Maine, Maryland, Massachusetts, Michigan, Minnesota, New Jersey, New York, North Carolina, Oregon, Rhode Island, Vermont, Washington and Wisconsin, plus the District of Columbia have raised the minimum above the federal mandate.

Target: Other U.S. states Alaska, California, Connecticut, Delaware, Florida, Hawaii, Illinois, Maine, Maryland, Massachusetts, Michigan, Minnesota, New Jersey, New York, North Carolina, Oregon, Rhode Island, Vermont, Washington and Wisconsin, plus the District of Columbia have raised the minimum above the federal mandate.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The U.S. Fair Labor Standards Act, enacted in 1938, has been continuously amended by Congress over years with increases that make the federally mandated minimum wage what it is today, $5.15 per hour.

Target: The U.S. Fair Labor Standards Act, enacted in 1938, has been continuously amended by Congress over years with increases that make the federally mandated minimum wage what it is today, US $5.15 per hour.


Source: Clarify the sentence: BBC Wales and iPTV station, VTV are reporting that a light aircraft made an emergency landing at 13:00 BST, at Treforest Industrial Estate, near Cardiff, south Wales.

Target: BBC Wales and iPTV station, VTV are reporting that a light aircraft made an emergency landing at 13:00 BST, at Treforest Industrial Estate near Cardiff.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: The aircraft, an orange-coloured single-engine model Fox home-built kit, was carrying two people, a man and a woman, when it made the forced landing on the estate's dual carriageway, which runs through the industrial park.

Target: The aircraft, an orange-coloured single-engine model Fox home-built kit, was carrying two people when it made the forced landing on the estate's dual carriageway, which runs through the industrial park.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: The aircraft, an orange-coloured single-engine model Fox home-built kit, was carrying two people, a man and a woman, when it made the forced landing on the estate's dual carriageway, which runs through the industrial park.

Target: The aircraft, an orange-coloured single-engine model Fox home-built kit, was carrying two people, a man and a woman, when it made the forced landing on a section of dual carriageway within the industrial estate.


Source: Make this easier to read: The two occupants of the aircraft received slight injuries.

Target: The two occupants of that aircraft received slight injuries.


Source: Make this sentence readable: South Wales Police have not confirmed whether any motorists or pedestrians were injured when the aircraft, involved in today's accident, made its emergency landing.

Target: South Wales Police have not confirmed whether any motorists or pedestrians were injured when the aircraft in today's accident, made its emergency landing.


Source: Clarify this text: The aircraft did, however, cause some structural damage to a factory unit on the industrial estate, before coming to a rest, inverted, on the adjacent dual carriageway.

Target: The aircraft did, however, cause some structural damage to a factory unit on the industrial estate prior to coming to rest, inverted, on the adjacent dual carriageway.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: After 160,000 people have had their power restored, 500,000 people are without power.

Target: After 160,000 people have had their power restored, 500,000 others are still without power.


Source: Clarification: LGBT activist Gastons Lakombe told Apollo portal that the most dangerous situation occured on the Jurmala highway, when a few cars tried to "drive a taxi off" the roadwith gay activists inside.

Target: LGBT activist Gastons Lakombe told Apollo portal that the most dangerous incident occured on the Jurmala highway, when a few cars tried to "drive a taxi off" the roadwith gay activists inside.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: LGBT activist Gastons Lakombe told Apollo portal that the most dangerous situation occured on the Jurmala highway, when a few cars tried to "drive a taxi off" the roadwith gay activists inside.

Target: LGBT activist Gastons Lakombe told Apollo portal that the most dangerous situation occured on the Jurmala highway, when a few cars tried to "drive a taxi ferrying gay activists off the road.


Source: Change to clearer wording: According to Lakombe, protesters attacked the taxi car first at the Reval Hotel, Latvia, by throwing eggs and bottles of water.

Target: According to Lakombe, protesters attacked the taxi first at the Reval Hotel, Latvia, by throwing eggs and bottles of water.


Source: Clarification: A large number of media and people were gathered outside the packed courtroom.

Target: A large crowd of media personnel and onlookers gathered outside the packed courtroom.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Armed police also were present for the accused's protection. Related Stories Wikinews Teacher found murdered in New Zealand classroom July 17, 2006

Target: Armed police also were deployed to protect the alleged murderer. Related Stories Wikinews Teacher found murdered in New Zealand classroom July 17, 2006


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Hillside suburbs in Christchurch, New Zealand have been suffering from torrential rain and flooding since Monday night.

Target: Hillside suburbs in Christchurch, New Zealand have been suffering from torrential rain since Monday night.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: The Heathcote river in Beckenham has burst its banks and has gone onto Eastern Terrace, making some parts of the road impassable.

Target: The Heathcote river in Beckenham has inundated areas in Eastern Terrace, making some parts of the road impassable.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: The Heathcote river in Beckenham has burst its banks and has gone onto Eastern Terrace, making some parts of the road impassable. It has also made some roads around the area fully submerged in water.

Target: The Heathcote river in Beckenham has burst its banks and has gone onto Eastern Terrace, making some roads impassable.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The Blog has been block at terminals controlled by Liverpool Direct Ltd, a company jointly owned by Liverpool City Council and British Telecom.

Target: The blog has been blocked on computers controlled by Liverpool Direct Ltd, a company jointly owned by Liverpool City Council and British Telecom.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Releated Stories Blogger.com made website called Liverpool Evil Cabal

Target: Related Stories


Source: Clarify: Private Meredith Simms, 18-years-old, died yesterday when the New Zealand Army Mercedes-Benz Unimog he was travelling in left the road and fell 100-metres down a steep bank 2.30 p.m. yesterday (NZST), resting on railway tracks.

Target: Private Meredith Simms, 18-years-old, died yesterday when the New Zealand Army Mercedes-Benz Unimog he was travelling in left the road and fell 100-metres down a steep bank 2.30 p.m. yesterday (NZST), coming to rest on railway tracks.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Another solider was critically injured and was flown by the Westpac Rescue Helicopter to Wellington Hospital, he also has spinal cord injuries.

Target: Another solider was critically injured and was flown by the Westpac Rescue Helicopter to Wellington Hospital, where he is being treated for spinal cord injuries.


Source: Clarify: Government jets bombed the LTTE front line in the Jaffna peninsula as fighting continued in the ethnic strife.

Target: Government jets bombed the LTTE on front lines in the battle for the Jaffna peninsula as fighting continued in the ethnic strife.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: The peninsula which has largely been cut off form the outside world. Even communications are near impossibel. Tens of thousands have fled their homes.

Target: The peninsula which has largely been cut off form the outside world, has seen tens of thousands have fled their homes.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: It states he is frustrated by the delays in achieving justice for being sexually abused while training as a. Roscrea town centre remains sealed off, as Garda technical experts examine the house in which Mr Hourigan's live.

Target: It states he is frustrated by the delays in achieving justice for being sexually abused while training as a. Roscrea town centre remains sealed off, as Garda technical experts examine Mr Hourigan's live.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: It states he is frustrated by the delays in achieving justice for being sexually abused while training as a. Roscrea town centre remains sealed off, as Garda technical experts examine the house in which Mr Hourigan's live.

Target: It states he is frustrated by the delays in achieving justice for being sexually abused while training as a. Roscrea town centre remains sealed off, as Garda technical experts examine the house in which Mr Hourigan's house.


Source: Clarification: In addition to Hua Hin, the Pran Buri district and Sam Roi Yot subdistrict from Prachuap Khiri Khan Province and Cha-am from Phetchaburi would make up the new province.

Target: In addition to Hua Hin, Pran Buri and Sam Roi Yot subdistrict from Prachuap Khiri Khan Province and Cha-am from Phetchaburi would make up the new province.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Currently the country consists of 75 provinces, it is expected that the 76th district will be around the Suvarnabhumi International Airport which opens in September 2006.

Target: Currently the country consists of 75 provinces, it is expected that the 76th province will be around the Suvarnabhumi International Airport which opens in September 2006.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: His name was Kimveer Gill.

Target: The gunman was Kimveer Gill.


Source: Clarification: The New Zealand A1GP team, with racer Jonny Reid, managed to get seventh in A1GP feature race and picking up four championship points in the second round at Brno track, Czech Republic.

Target: The New Zealand A1GP team, with racer Jonny Reid, placed seventh in A1GP feature race and picking up four championship points in the second round at Brno track, Czech Republic.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: After New Zealand managing to secure themselves first place in the qualifying race by being fastest in all four qualifying segments with a time of 3:30.053, Germany second with 3:30.524.

Target: New Zealand managed to secure themselves first place in the qualifying race by being fastest in all four qualifying segments with a time of 3:30.053, Germany second with 3:30.524.


Source: Use clearer wording: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday 9th October 2006 evening, losing his battle with cancer.

Target: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday 9th October 2006 evening, losing his battle with cancer.


Source: Clarify this text: Hunter died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.

Target: He died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.


Source: Make this sentence readable: He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and daughter, Evie Rose.

Target: He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and daughter, Evie Rose.


Clarify the sentence: The Snooker world will certainly change with this tremendously shocking loss. Paul Hunter's funeral was on the 19th October 2006 in Leeds, his home town. Sympathy is now with his family and friends. R.I.P Mr Paul Hunter.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Taking serious note of the e-mail, Kerala police is interrogating the accused persons whether they had played a prank.

Target: Taking serious note of the e-mail, Kerala police is interrogating the accused persons suspecting they had played a prank.


Source: Change to clearer wording: After this happening, the authorities are on the high alert.

Target: After this incident, the authorities are on the high alert.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: After this happening, the authorities are on the high alert.

Target: After this happening, the authorities are on high alert.


Source: Clarify: The new warnings, which replace the text warnings, will show gangrenous toes, rotting gums and toes and lungs subject to smoking and will also include the quit smoking Quitline number.

Target: The new warnings, which replace the text warnings, will show images of gangrenous toes, rotting gums and toes and lungs subject to smoking and will also include the quit smoking Quitline number.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The new warnings will come into effect January 2007 but the manufacturers will not have to produce the new warnings until February 27, 2008 and August 2008 for retailers to clear all their old stock.

Target: The new warnings will come into effect January 2007 but the manufacturers will not have to produce the new warnings until February 27, 2008 and retailers have till August 2008 for retailers to clear all their old stock.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: The Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist) chairman Prachanda and Nepal Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala have resumed the fifth round of peace talks in today eveningafter the meeting held on sunday in the presence of UN Secretary General's representative Ian Martin.

Target: The Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist) chairman Prachanda and Nepal Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala resumed the fifth round of peace talks in today eveningafter the meeting held on sunday in the presence of UN Secretary General's representative Ian Martin.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Prachanda said that he will make his first public address in twenty five year in a mass meeting in Kathmandu on this Friday.

Target: Prachanda said that he will make his first public address in twenty five year in a mass meeting in Kathmandu this Friday.


Source: Use clearer wording: Ministers are considering a new stadium for Auckland's waterfront to replace the current Auckland stadium, Eden Park.

Target: Ministers are considering a new stadium for Auckland's waterfront instead of an enlargement to the existing Eden Park.


Source: Make the text more understandable: However the Ports of Auckland (POA) said that there will not be a stadium before the 2011 rugby world cup, the POA are the land owners of the waterfront. Geoff Vazey, manager director, said: "It simply can't be constructed in time and the risks of pushing it through would be overwhelming.

Target: However the Ports of Auckland (POA) said that there will not be a stadium before the 2011 Rugby World Cup. Geoff Vazey, manager director, said: "It simply can't be constructed in time and the risks of pushing it through would be overwhelming.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Michael Cullen, finance minister, said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying, "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.

Target: Michael Cullen, finance minister, said that it would be possible to build the stadium, despite what critics are saying, "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: A security camera image released by police showed two grey-haired women, in their 60s or 70s, wearing knee-length skirts, white blouses and overcoats at Sunderland Railway station.

Target: A security camera image released by police showed two grey-haired women, in their 60s or 70s, wearing knee-length skirts, white blouses and overcoats at Sunderland station.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: The Government is planning to legislate to ensure that cantonments, churches and cemeteries built by the British during the Raj are preserved as heritage structures.

Target: The Government is planning to introduce legislation to ensure that cantonments, churches and cemeteries built by the British during the Raj are preserved as heritage structures.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: There are 62 cantonments and 650 military stations in the country, some of which are already being in disrepair.

Target: There are 62 cantonments and 650 military stations in the country, some of which are in disrepair.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The Bangladesh Chief Election Commissioner (CEC) Justice MA Aziz has agreed to step aside for three months, the country's president and chief advisor to caretaker government, Iajuddin Ahmed announced in a television address to the nation late last night.

Target: The Chief Election Commissioner (CEC) Justice MA Aziz has agreed to step aside for three months, the country's president and chief advisor to caretaker government, Iajuddin Ahmed announced in a television address to the nation late last night.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: The 14-Awami League Party-led alliance accused Aziz of bias towards the Bangladesh Nationalist Party (BNP), led by former Prime Minister Begum Khaleda Zia, who ended her five-year term in October 2006. Aliance parties resumed their agitation against Aziz for the third time on Monday and said that they would continue the indefinite stir until he quits the office.

Target: The alliance parties resumed their agitation against Aziz for the third time on Monday and said that they would continue the indefinite stir until he quits the office.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: An investigation is currently happening by the New Zealand Department of Corrections to see if the allegations that prison guards at Rimutaka prison are accepting monetary bribes from prisoners in exchange for drugs and cellphones, are correct. Rimutaka prison is one of New Zealand's largest prions which caters for minimum to high-medium security male prisoners.

Target: The New Zealand Department of Corrections to see if the allegations that prison guards at Rimutaka prison are accepting monetary bribes from prisoners in exchange for drugs and cellphones, are correct. Rimutaka prison is one of New Zealand's largest prions which caters for minimum to high-medium security male prisoners.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: An investigation is currently happening by the New Zealand Department of Corrections to see if the allegations that prison guards at Rimutaka prison are accepting monetary bribes from prisoners in exchange for drugs and cellphones, are correct. Rimutaka prison is one of New Zealand's largest prions which caters for minimum to high-medium security male prisoners.

Target: An investigation is currently happening by the New Zealand Department of Corrections is currently investigating allegations at the Rimutaka prison in Wellington, New Zealand. The prison guards have allegedly accepted monetary bribes from prisoners in exchange for drugs and cellphones, are correct. Rimutaka prison is one of New Zealand's largest prions which caters for minimum to high-medium security male prisoners.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.

Target: However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to return to Holland.