Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He claims that I have written of a conspiracy of the super-rich who are pro-Communist and wish to take over the world and that I'm a member of this group. Member never called it a conspiracy and don't regard it as such.

Target: He claims that I have written of a conspiracy of the super-rich who are pro-Communist and wish to take over the world and that I'm a member of this group. But I never called it a conspiracy and don't regard it as such.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: As Valentine's Day approaches, Cathy, ever the romantic, becomes passionately consumed with thoughts of hearts, flowers and candle-lit dinners. Cathy's boyfriend Irving seeks to maintain his independence.

Target: As Valentine's Day approaches, Cathy, ever the romantic, becomes passionately consumed with thoughts of hearts, flowers and candle-lit dinners. On the other hand, her boyfriend Irving seeks to maintain his independence.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Cattley obtained a specimen of then unnamed Cattleya labiata from William Swainson who had discovered the new plant in Pernambuco, Brazil, in 1817. The plant successfully bloomed under the care of Cattley and plant became the type specimen from which Lindley described Cattleya labiata.

Target: Cattley obtained a specimen of then unnamed Cattleya labiata from William Swainson who had discovered the new plant in Pernambuco, Brazil, in 1817. The plant successfully bloomed under the care of Cattley and it became the type specimen from which Lindley described C. labiata.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: As a strict nature reserve, the Caucasus Reserve is mostly closed to the general public. Scientists and those with.

Target: As a strict nature reserve, the Caucasus Reserve is mostly closed to the general public, although scientists and those with.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Difficulty in handling the bouncing pumpkin's movement was a common complaint. Reviewers felt the overall package was of good value.

Target: Difficulty in handling the bouncing pumpkin's movement was a common complaint, although reviewers felt the overall package was of good value.


Source: Make the text clearer: Brown envisioned a graphical effect for the game's narration, showing a book whose pages turned as the story is read. Technical limitations at the time prohibited the implementation of such a visual effect.

Target: Brown envisioned a graphical effect for the game's narration, showing a book whose pages turned as the story is read. However, technical limitations at the time prohibited the implementation of such a visual effect.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: They reduced the difficulty level. More players could complete the game.

Target: They reduced the difficulty level so that more players could complete the game.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Portugal broke the blockade imposed on British trade and, as a result, was invaded by France. The Royal Family and the bulk of the kingdom's administration fled to colonial Brazil, in a move to preserve Portugal sovereignty.

Target: Portugal broke the blockade imposed on British trade and, as a result, was invaded by France. However, the Royal Family and the bulk of the kingdom's administration fled to colonial Brazil, in a move to preserve Portuguese sovereignty.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It is known that the first church is the Cathedral now. By 1598 there were two churches besides it in Cebu.

Target: It is known that the first church is the Cathedral now because by 1598 there were two churches besides it in Cebu.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The school predominantly serves students from partner elementary districts Alhambra, Creighton, Madison, Osborn, and Phoenix Elementary. Students from across the district come to Central for its Phoenix Union Magnet Program in International Studies.

Target: The school predominantly serves students from partner elementary districts Alhambra, Creighton, Madison, Osborn, and Phoenix Elementary. However, students from across the district come to Central for its Phoenix Union Magnet Program in International Studies.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cerevisterol inhibits the eukaryotic enzyme DNA polymerase alpha. DNA polymerase alpha is also a potent DNA polymerase alpha of NF-kappa B activation.

Target: Cerevisterol inhibits the eukaryotic enzyme DNA polymerase alpha, and it is also a potent inhibitor of NF-kappa B activation.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Chaminade has a large and diverse selection of co-curricular and extra-curricular activities, with more than 90 % of the students participating in at least one activity. More than half of students participate on at least one interscholastic athletic team.

Target: Chaminade has a large and diverse selection of co-curricular and extra-curricular activities, with more than 90 % of the students participating in at least one activity. Additionally, more than half of students participate on at least one interscholastic athletic team.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It might take as long as 10 years to appoint a new Chancellor when the previous one died. Other officers of the 1st class were Active privy councillors, 1st class.

Target: It might take as long as 10 years to appoint a new Chancellor when the previous one died. Therefore, other officers of the 1st class were Active privy councillors, 1st class.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Hindi version, distributed by The Screens (a company in Bombay, now Mumbai), was released on 24 December 1948. With over 600 prints Hindi was a commercial Hindi, setting box-office records.

Target: The Hindi version, distributed by The Screens (a company in Bombay, now Mumbai), was released on 24 December 1948. With over 600 prints it was a commercial success, setting box-office records.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Offerings were made to the stove god. Stove god was his stove god to make annual reports to heaven on the good deeds or sins committed by the family in question.

Target: Offerings were made to the stove god because it was his responsibility to make annual reports to heaven on the good deeds or sins committed by the family in question.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The following television stations formerly broadcast on channel 2 in Canada: The following television stations are no longer licensed.

Target: The following television stations, which are no longer licensed, formerly broadcast on channel 2 in Canada :


Source: Make the text more consistent: In a bid to reunite the couple, Jane told Charlene that she would steal Scott away from her. Charlene did something about it.

Target: In a bid to reunite the couple, Jane told Charlene that she would steal Scott away from her unless she did something about it.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Canadian-born basketball coach Hennssy Auriantal, who runs the Yes II Success organization that brings international players to American private schools helped bring Bassey to the United States. On March 31, 2017, basketball coach and Bassey's wife were granted conservatorship Bassey Bassey.

Target: Canadian-born basketball coach Hennssy Auriantal, who runs the Yes II Success organization that brings international players to American private schools helped bring Bassey to the United States. On March 31, 2017, Auriantal and his wife were granted conservatorship over Bassey.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Much of the advertising in the Country Gentleman magazine was bought out by the agriculture market. Parlin began researching agriculture in general.

Target: Since much of the advertising in the Country Gentleman magazine was bought out by the agriculture market, Parlin began researching agriculture in general.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Note: Because Ives often made several different versions of the same piece, and. Ives 'work was generally ignored Ives' his life.

Target: Note: Because Ives often made several different versions of the same piece, and because his work was generally ignored during his life.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Poussin graph is named after him. The Poussin graph is the graph he used for this counterexample.

Target: The Poussin graph, the graph he used for this counterexample, is named after him.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Vincent Hanley was not at the mews that night. Another RTE set designer, Bertram 'Bertie' Tyrer was staying in Hanleys 'room as heavy snow prevented Vincent Hanley from returning to Vincent Hanley's Wicklow cottage.

Target: Vincent Hanley was not at the mews that night, but another RTE set designer, Bertram 'Bertie' Tyrer was staying in Hanleys 'room as heavy snow prevented him from returning to his Wicklow cottage.


Source: Make the text coherent: By nature intelligent. He has never succeeded in ruling by himself ; he has always been governed by his ministers or by his father-confessor or (for a time) by the (E) lectress (his wife).

Target: Although by nature intelligent, he has never succeeded in ruling by himself ; he has always been governed by his ministers or by his father-confessor or (for a time) by the (E) lectress (his wife).


Source: Fix sentence transition: Gochanour spent two years editing and remixing the 60's material, adding a story line and synching music to Rolling Stones concert footage that had originally been filmed without sound. The result was Charlie Is My Darling -- 1965 directed by Peter Whitehead and Gochanour.

Target: Gochanour spent two years editing and remixing the 60's material, adding a story line and synching music to Rolling Stones concert footage that had originally been filmed without sound. The result was Charlie Is My Darling -- 1965 directed by Peter Whitehead and Michael Gochanour.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: His stint was a ratings success. Viewers disapproved of his antics which included bringing his pet python to the judging table during the audition and a human skull to the live shows.

Target: Although his stint was a ratings success, viewers disapproved of his antics which included bringing his pet python to the judging table during the audition and a human skull to the live shows.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Palczynski was raised in Chase, and being an outdoorsman was very familiar with the wooded areas surrounding the community. From March 7 to March 17 Palczynski sent the entire area into lock-down by hiding in the woods, evading police.

Target: Palczynski was raised in Chase, and being an outdoorsman was very familiar with the wooded areas surrounding the community. Thus, from March 7 to March 17 he sent the entire area into lock-down by hiding in the woods, evading police.


Source: Make the text coherent: In addition, the Medway had begun to silt up, making navigation more difficult. Following a visit by the Admiralty Board in 1773, the decision was taken to invest further in Chatham, which developed into a building yard rather than a refitting base.

Target: In addition, the Medway had begun to silt up, making navigation more difficult. Nevertheless, following a visit by the Admiralty Board in 1773, the decision was taken to invest further in Chatham, which developed into a building yard rather than a refitting base.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Referee Mike Jones thought that Yoan Gouffran (who had been in an offside position) had blocked Hart's line of vision. Replays showed that this was not the case.

Target: Referee Mike Jones thought that Yoan Gouffran (who had been in an offside position) had blocked Hart's line of vision, although replays showed that this was not the case.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Later that month, Cabaye left the club to join Paris Saint-Germain, thus disrupting the successful partnership between the two men. His form suffered, with replacement Dan Gosling not up to the preferred standard.

Target: Later that month, Cabaye left the club to join Paris Saint-Germain, thus disrupting the successful partnership between the two men. As a result, his form suffered, with replacement Dan Gosling not up to the preferred standard.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: EPA testers found a dioxin concentration of 3.4 parts per billion. Their toxological assessment unit 'raised concerns about dioxins and furans in Long Lake sediments and the fish population.'

Target: EPA testers found a dioxin concentration of 3.4 parts per billion. As a result, their toxological assessment unit 'raised concerns about dioxins and furans in Long Lake sediments and the fish population.'


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: A chess opening. Simply an opening refers to the initial moves of a chess game.

Target: A chess opening or simply an opening refers to the initial moves of a chess game.


Source: Fix coherence errors: These categories are still individually very large. It is common to divide each of them further.

Target: Since these categories are still individually very large, it is common to divide each of them further.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Typically ghee, traditional clarified butter, is used as the frying medium. Chefs frequently substitute this with vegetable oil.

Target: Although typically ghee, traditional clarified butter, is used as the frying medium, chefs frequently substitute this with vegetable oil.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Activists called for protests and boycotts. Supporters of the restaurant chain and opponents of same-sex marriage ate there in support of the restaurant.

Target: Activists called for protests and boycotts, while supporters of the restaurant chain and opponents of same-sex marriage ate there in support of the restaurant.


Source: Make the text clearer: The two told interrogators that they had been acting as couriers for terrorists. Security forces suspect they planned to get close to the soldiers and then detonate the charges.

Target: The two told interrogators that they had been acting as couriers for terrorists, but security forces suspect they planned to get close to the soldiers and then detonate the charges.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Winston Churchill had been opposed to the scheme, so the government announced the cancellation of the CORB program. Private evacuation efforts continued into late 1941.

Target: Winston Churchill had been opposed to the scheme, so the government announced the cancellation of the CORB program. However, private evacuation efforts continued into late 1941.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Ali returns home where Zahra is waiting for him. Before Ali can reveal to Ali's sister his disappointment in his placement in the race, she is called away by their mother.

Target: Ali returns home where Zahra is waiting for him. However, before he can reveal to his sister his disappointment in his placement in the race, she is called away by their mother.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The social status of the performers has also improved. While far away from their golden days, chindon'ya hold a small niche in the advertising business in Japan.

Target: The social status of the performers has also improved. Thus, while far away from their golden days, chindon'ya hold a small niche in the advertising business in Japan.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As in previous editions of the Summer Paralympics, the flag of the Republic of China was not displayed. The Chinese Taipei Paralympic flag was used when Republic of China athletes won medals.

Target: As in previous editions of the Summer Paralympics, the flag of the Republic of China was not displayed. Instead, the Chinese Taipei Paralympic flag was used when Taiwanese athletes won medals.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Charu sees a changed personality in Thiru and decides to marry him with her father's (Raviprakash) consent. Her hopes shatter after seeing Thiru clumped away in a police van from a brothel.

Target: Charu sees a changed personality in Thiru and decides to marry him with her father's (Raviprakash) consent. But her hopes shatter after seeing Thiru clumped away in a police van from a brothel.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Criollo represents only 5 % of all cocoa beans grown As of 2008. Criollo is the rarest and most expensive cocoa on the market, and is native to Central America, the Caribbean islands and the northern tier of South American states.

Target: Representing only 5 % of all cocoa beans grown As of 2008, criollo is the rarest and most expensive cocoa on the market, and is native to Central America, the Caribbean islands and the northern tier of South American states.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Chocolate bunnies come in many different figures,. There is a wide variety of recipes for different kinds of chocolate bunnies.

Target: Chocolate bunnies come in many different figures, hence there is a wide variety of recipes for different kinds of chocolate bunnies.


Source: Make the text coherent: Now our, resolution was known for a long time as the Lahore resolution popularly known as Pakistan. How long are we to have this long phrase?

Target: Now our, resolution was known for a long time as the Lahore resolution popularly known as Pakistan. But how long are we to have this long phrase?


Source: Fix coherence in this text: By 1980 Grimes had been dropped from the starting fifteen. Grimes was a non-playing Grimes as Limerick won the Munster final by 2 -- 14 to 2 -- 10 that year and denied Cork a record-breaking sixth successive title.

Target: By 1980 Grimes had been dropped from the starting fifteen. He was a non-playing substitute as Limerick won the Munster final by 2 -- 14 to 2 -- 10 that year and denied Cork a record-breaking sixth successive title.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Before May -- The Second Barons 'War begins. Before May -- The Second Barons' War is a civil war in England.

Target: Before May -- The Second Barons' War, a civil war in England, begins.


Source: Make the text more coherent: As Marines are hit around Carrie, she phones Col. Aasar Khan (Raza Jaffrey), asking him to send the Pakistani military. Tasneem (Nimrat Kaur) reveals that the ISI is helping the Taliban, to Col.'s disapproval.

Target: As Marines are hit around Carrie, she phones Col. Aasar Khan (Raza Jaffrey), asking him to send the Pakistani military. However, Tasneem (Nimrat Kaur) reveals that the ISI is helping the Taliban, to Khan's disapproval.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: More precise printing eliminated the need for dark outlines on printed designs. New green dyes appeared in patterns of grasses, ferns, and unusual florals.

Target: More precise printing eliminated the need for dark outlines on printed designs, and new green dyes appeared in patterns of grasses, ferns, and unusual florals.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Many buildings were unroofed. Rainfall and winds subsequently caused further damage to the interiors.

Target: Many buildings were unroofed, while rainfall and winds subsequently caused further damage to the interiors.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Up to 50 % of the cotton crop was destroyed. Overall structural damage was minor, though ships were grounded near Apalachicola.

Target: Up to 50 % of the cotton crop was destroyed, but overall structural damage was minor, though ships were grounded near Apalachicola.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: During the 1917 -- 18 season Hibernian finished sixteenth out of 18 clubs in the Scottish First Division. Hibernian is a football club based in Edinburgh.

Target: During the 1917 -- 18 season Hibernian, a football club based in Edinburgh, finished sixteenth out of 18 clubs in the Scottish First Division.


Source: Fix sentence flow: October 26 -- The Chicago Theatre opens. The Chicago Theatre will be the oldest surviving French-style Baroque Revival grand movie palace.

Target: October 26 -- The Chicago Theatre, which will be the oldest surviving French-style Baroque Revival grand movie palace, opens.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The match was high scoring. Contemporary reports suggest that many opportunities were missed by both teams.

Target: The match was high scoring, but contemporary reports suggest that many opportunities were missed by both teams.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The second game of the final was then scheduled for May 28. Rain forced its cancellation as well.

Target: The second game of the final was then scheduled for May 28, but rain forced its cancellation as well.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Bloc called off the strike on 6 March after the release of its arrested leaders. Later that year, a delegation from the Bloc travelled to Paris and signed the Franco-Syrian Treaty of Independence.

Target: The Bloc called off the strike on 6 March after the release of its arrested leaders. Later that year, a delegation from the National Bloc travelled to Paris and signed the Franco-Syrian Treaty of Independence.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Barlow approached the half-hour mark. Barlow scored Portsmouth's first goal from within the area.

Target: Approaching the half-hour mark, Barlow scored Portsmouth's first goal from within the area.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Damage was especially heavy to brick buildings in Bakersfield,. Only a few buildings collapsed outright.

Target: Damage was especially heavy to brick buildings in Bakersfield, and although only a few buildings collapsed outright.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Rainfall from Helene peaked at 8.29 in (211 mm) in Wilmington International Airport. Rainfall spread as far north as New England.

Target: Rainfall from Helene peaked at 8.29 in (211 mm) in Wilmington International Airport, although rainfall spread as far north as New England.


Source: Make the text coherent: Hurricane Daisy in August was a major hurricane that paralleled the eastern coast of the United States. Due to Hurricane Daisy's small size Hurricane Daisy did not cause much damage.

Target: Hurricane Daisy in August was a major hurricane that paralleled the eastern coast of the United States, although due to its small size it did not cause much damage.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Revolutionary Council dissolved the university councils of the country's two large universities in Rangoon and Mandalay. Previously it was run by a council of professors, scholars and government officials the university councils were now put directly under the control of the government.

Target: The Revolutionary Council dissolved the university councils of the country's two large universities in Rangoon and Mandalay. Whereas previously it was run by a council of professors, scholars and government officials the university councils were now put directly under the control of the government.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 4 August -- Cymdeithas yr Iaith Gymraeg is founded. Cymdeithas yr Iaith Gymraeg is the Welsh Language Society.

Target: 4 August -- Cymdeithas yr Iaith Gymraeg, the Welsh Language Society, is founded.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In the fourth hour, Gregory brought the NART Ferrari into the pits misfiring. After changing the distributor, losing 30 minutes, the car was ready again.

Target: In the fourth hour, Gregory brought the NART Ferrari into the pits misfiring. However after changing the distributor, losing 30 minutes, the car was ready again.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The White Star Diner was depicted by artist Casey Ruble in 2015. The White Star Diner still stands today.

Target: The White Star Diner, which still stands today, was depicted by artist Casey Ruble in 2015.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Fish populations seemed to be unaffected in the long term. Data from 1969 showed a drop in counts of several species.

Target: Fish populations seemed to be unaffected in the long term, although data from 1969 showed a drop in counts of several species.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Jacky Ickx driving for Ferrari finished the season strongly, but a 4th-place finish in the penultimate round ensured that Rindt's title lead would stand. All of Rindt's points came from Rindt's five wins.

Target: Jacky Ickx driving for Ferrari finished the season strongly, but a 4th-place finish in the penultimate round ensured that Rindt's title lead would stand. In the end, all of Rindt's points came from his five wins.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It had originally been scheduled to be run at the very long and notoriously dangerous Nurburgring Nordschleife, but the drivers refused to race at the' Ring in the condition it was in --. Major safety changes were made to condition.

Target: It had originally been scheduled to be run at the very long and notoriously dangerous Nurburgring Nordschleife, but the drivers refused to race at the' Ring in the condition it was in -- unless major safety changes were made to it.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Respect civilian property ; do not attack it. Absolutely necessary to protect friendly forces.

Target: Respect civilian property ; do not attack it unless absolutely necessary to protect friendly forces.


Source: Fix sentence transition: On October 1, Walid Jumblatt announced a separate governmental administration for the Shuf and called for the mass defection of all Druze elements from the LAF. On 14 October the leaders of Lebanon's key factions agreed to conduct reconciliation talks in Geneva, Switzerland.

Target: On October 1, Walid Jumblatt announced a separate governmental administration for the Shuf and called for the mass defection of all Druze elements from the LAF. Nevertheless, on 14 October the leaders of Lebanon's key factions agreed to conduct reconciliation talks in Geneva, Switzerland.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In addition, a hard hit by UCLA defensive back Don Rogers separated Michigan QB Steve Smith's shoulder and knocked him out of the game. Backup David Hall got the Michigan on the board in the 3rd quarter, making the score 10 -- 7.

Target: In addition, a hard hit by UCLA defensive back Don Rogers separated Michigan QB Steve Smith's shoulder and knocked him out of the game. But backup David Hall got the Wolverines on the board in the 3rd quarter, making the score 10 -- 7.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Slick roads caused three tractor-trailers to jackknife along a 2-mile (3 km) portion of the Capital Beltway. Four people required rescue assistance after being trapped in swollen creeks.

Target: Slick roads caused three tractor-trailers to jackknife along a 2-mile (3 km) portion of the Capital Beltway. Additionally, four people required rescue assistance after being trapped in swollen creeks.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The season officially began on June 1, 1987, and lasted until November 30, 1987. Activity began on May 24 when a tropical depression developed 400 mi.

Target: The season officially began on June 1, 1987, and lasted until November 30, 1987, although activity began on May 24 when a tropical depression developed 400 mi.


Source: Make the text more coherent: 16 August -- A MORI poll shows that Labour now has a 15-point lead over the Conservatives with 50 % of the vote. Support to the Liberal Democrats has doubled to 10 % over the last seven months.

Target: 16 August -- A MORI poll shows that Labour now has a 15-point lead over the Conservatives with 50 % of the vote, while support to the Liberal Democrats has doubled to 10 % over the last seven months.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The winners of the 1992 -- 93 Coppa Italia are listed below. The 1992 -- 93 Coppa Italia is the major domestic tournament in Italian football.

Target: The winners of the 1992 -- 93 Coppa Italia, the major domestic tournament in Italian football, are listed below.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He assuming the footsteps had was the woman's. He shot her in the head before packing 67 firearms and more than 700 rounds of ammunition that were in the building.

Target: Assuming the footsteps had been the woman's, he shot her in the head before packing 67 firearms and more than 700 rounds of ammunition that were in the building.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Norma weakened to a tropical depression at 00 UTC on October 5. Norma drifted towards the northwest as a swirl of low clouds, and dissipated during the afternoon hours of October 6, without any fatalities, damage, or effects to land.

Target: Weakening to a tropical depression at 00 UTC on October 5, Norma drifted towards the northwest as a swirl of low clouds, and dissipated during the afternoon hours of October 6, without any fatalities, damage, or effects to land.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, the Red Wings were fighting to stay alive and tied the game on Sergei Fedorov's goal just 55 seconds later. Coffey scored a shorthanded goal at 13: 01 to give Red Wings a 2 -- 1 lead.

Target: However, the Red Wings were fighting to stay alive and tied the game on Sergei Fedorov's goal just 55 seconds later. Coffey scored a shorthanded goal at 13: 01 to give Detroit a 2 -- 1 lead.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Eagles then reached the San Francisco 8-yard line. Quarterback Ty Detmer threw an interception to defensive back Marquez Pope.

Target: The Eagles then reached the San Francisco 8-yard line, but quarterback Ty Detmer threw an interception to defensive back Marquez Pope.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The 49ers were forced to punt on their next drive, and Philadelphia advanced to the San Francisco 5-yard line. 49ers defensive end Roy Barker intercepted Detmer with 43 seconds left in the half, and the Philadelphia would never seriously threaten again.

Target: The 49ers were forced to punt on their next drive, and Philadelphia advanced to the San Francisco 5-yard line. However, 49ers defensive end Roy Barker intercepted Detmer with 43 seconds left in the half, and the Eagles would never seriously threaten again.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Thomas Nisbet Gallagher Scottish Office. Thomas Nisbet Gallagher is her Majesty's Senior Chief Inspector of Schools.

Target: Thomas Nisbet Gallagher, Her Majesty's Senior Chief Inspector of Schools, Scottish Office.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 24210836 Lance Corporal David Edward Metcalf Territorial Army. 24210836 Lance Corporal David Edward Metcalf is the Royal Logistic Corps.

Target: 24210836 Lance Corporal David Edward Metcalf, The Royal Logistic Corps, Territorial Army.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the Sweet Sixteen, No. 13-seeded Oklahoma pushed the Spartans and MSU struggled offensively. Andre Hutson's 13 points led the MSU to hard-fought 54 -- 46 win, Spartans' 21st straight win.

Target: In the Sweet Sixteen, No. 13-seeded Oklahoma pushed the Spartans and MSU struggled offensively. However, Andre Hutson's 13 points led the Spartans to hard-fought 54 -- 46 win, their 21st straight win.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Spartans finished the season 33 -- 5, 15 -- 1 to win the Big Ten regular season championship. Spartans defeated Northwestern, Wisconsin, and Illinois to win the Big Ten Tournament and receive the conference's automatic bid to the NCAA Tournament.

Target: The Spartans finished the season 33 -- 5, 15 -- 1 to win the Big Ten regular season championship. MSU defeated Northwestern, Wisconsin, and Illinois to win the Big Ten Tournament and receive the conference's automatic bid to the NCAA Tournament.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The following week, Neuheisel led UW against his former team, the Colorado Buffaloes, at Folsom Field in Boulder. The UW celebrated UW's coach's homecoming with a 17 -- 14 victory.

Target: The following week, Neuheisel led UW against his former team, the Colorado Buffaloes, at Folsom Field in Boulder. The Huskies celebrated their coach's homecoming with a 17 -- 14 victory.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The 2001 Estonian Junior Figure Skating Championships were the Estonian National Championships for the Junior level for the 2001 season. Junior Figure Skating Championships took place in the Tallinn, Estonian from January 13 through 14, 2001.

Target: The 2001 Estonian Junior Figure Skating Championships were the Estonian National Championships for the Junior level for the 2001 season. They took place in the Tallinn, Estonia from January 13 through 14, 2001.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It was the tenth official edition of the men's event while the women competed for the ninth time. The men's event started in 1993.

Target: It was the tenth official edition of the men's event, which started in 1993, while the women competed for the ninth time.


Source: Fix coherence: Campbell hit the ball with his left foot. Campbell lifted the ball over Day and into the net.

Target: Hitting the ball with his left foot, Campbell lifted the ball over Day and into the net.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Race 4 and 5 only one additional point awarded to the fastest qualifier. Only one session was held for each race.

Target: Race 4 and 5 only one additional point awarded to the fastest qualifier, because only one session was held for each race.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Hurricanes took a 3 -- 2 win in Game 3, but the Devils won 5 -- 1 in Game 4. Game 5 shifted back to Raleigh and Hurricanes beat Devils 4 -- 1, winning the series 4 -- 1.

Target: The Hurricanes took a 3 -- 2 win in Game 3, but the Devils won 5 -- 1 in Game 4. Game 5 shifted back to Raleigh and Carolina beat New Jersey 4 -- 1, winning the series 4 -- 1.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The scandal apparently took place in a match with Vietnam placed against Myanmar, with Vietnam winning 1-0. The results are disputed after allegations rose on state television result that some Vietnam players appeared to slow down their play.

Target: The scandal apparently took place in a match with Vietnam placed against Myanmar, with Vietnam winning 1-0. However, the results are disputed after allegations rose on state television result that some Vietnamese players appeared to slow down their play.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Vietnamese team, however, defended that. Male runners departure was just only 10 minutes after the females.

Target: The Vietnamese team, however, defended that because male runners departure was just only 10 minutes after the females.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In Table Tennis, the Singaporean delegation. Widely expected to retain their titles.

Target: In Table Tennis, the Singaporean delegation, although widely expected to retain their titles.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Bills did experience varying degrees of success with their first three draft picks in the 2007 Draft. Running back Marshawn Lynch made the AFC's Pro Bowl squad in 2008 ; his career in Bills, however, was often marred by off-field issues.

Target: The Bills did experience varying degrees of success with their first three draft picks in the 2007 Draft. Running back Marshawn Lynch made the AFC's Pro Bowl squad in 2008 ; his career in Buffalo, however, was often marred by off-field issues.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Meanwhile, the South African newspaper Business Day reported that the two sides had already reached agreement on most of the issues. Details remained to be decided.

Target: Meanwhile, the South African newspaper Business Day reported that the two sides had already reached agreement on most of the issues, although details remained to be decided.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: However, Mbeki went to Harare on 9 August, and Mugabe's spokesman George Charamba said that Mugabe would meet with Tsvangirai on 10 August. Reports suggested the signing of an agreement was imminent.

Target: However, Mbeki went to Harare on 9 August, and Mugabe's spokesman George Charamba said that Mugabe would meet with Tsvangirai on 10 August, while reports suggested the signing of an agreement was imminent.


Source: Make the text more consistent: On all 17 nights, NBC had more viewers than ABC, CBS, and FOX combined. Ratings on the final Friday and Saturday of the Games were the lowest for primetime coverage since 1988.

Target: On all 17 nights, NBC had more viewers than ABC, CBS, and FOX combined. However, ratings on the final Friday and Saturday of the Games were the lowest for primetime coverage since 1988.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Top seed Maryland survived a challenge from fourth seeded Vanderbilt. The Vanderbilt started strong with an opening 12-2, which Vanderbilt extended to a 33-15 margin with six minutes left in the first half.

Target: Top seed Maryland survived a challenge from fourth seeded Vanderbilt. The Commodores started strong with an opening 12-2, which they extended to a 33-15 margin with six minutes left in the first half.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The 2010 -- 11 season was not very successful for the Robert Morris Colonials women's ice hockey team, as they won 5 matches in the College Hockey America (CHA) league and lost 19. New recruit Thea Imbrogno won multiple CHA awards.

Target: The 2010 -- 11 season was not very successful for the Robert Morris Colonials women's ice hockey team, as they won 5 matches in the College Hockey America (CHA) league and lost 19. Nevertheless, new recruit Thea Imbrogno won multiple CHA awards.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Who entering April, Arkansas is leads at the plate by Zack Cox. Who is hitting at a. 414 clip.

Target: Entering April, Arkansas is led at the plate by Zack Cox, who is hitting at a. 414 clip.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dallas played in Los Angeles against the Galaxy for the Western Conference Championship. Dallas shutout Los Angeles 3 -- 0, becoming the final original MLS club to make it to the MLS Cup.

Target: Dallas played in Los Angeles against the Galaxy for the Western Conference Championship. Dallas shutout LA 3 -- 0, becoming the final original MLS club to make it to the MLS Cup.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In stage 1, the first road race stage after the prologue time trial, several crashes took place in the final few kilometers. Only five riders were at the front of the race to contest the sprint finish.

Target: In stage 1, the first road race stage after the prologue time trial, several crashes took place in the final few kilometers, meaning only five riders were at the front of the race to contest the sprint finish.


Source: Fix coherence: On Day 1, each team in Pool A and Pool B will play cross-conference games against the three teams in the other pool. Each team in Pool C and Pool D will play cross-conference games against the three teams in the other pool.

Target: On Day 1, each team in Pool A and Pool B will play cross-conference games against the three teams in the other pool. Similarly, each team in Pool C and Pool D will play cross-conference games against the three teams in the other pool.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: On the LSU possession that ensued, the Alabama defense held the Tigers to a three-and-out. Cyrus Jones fumbled the Brad Wing punt that was recovered by Tigers at the Alabama 36-yard line.

Target: On the LSU possession that ensued, the Alabama defense held the Tigers to a three-and-out. However, Cyrus Jones fumbled the Brad Wing punt that was recovered by LSU at the Crimson Tide 36-yard line.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Starting quarterback AJ McCarron was ranked first nationally in pass efficiency. Several players were recognized for their individual accomplishments on the field.

Target: Starting quarterback AJ McCarron was ranked first nationally in pass efficiency. Additionally, several players were recognized for their individual accomplishments on the field.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Central Arkansas heads to Cowboy Stadium in 2012. The Cowboys are 3-3 against the Arkansas.

Target: Central Arkansas heads to Cowboy Stadium in 2012. The Cowboys are 3-3 against the Bears.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Henne completed a pass to Shipley to the Patriots 40. Time expired. After receiving the opening kick-off, the Patriots drove to the Jaguars 20 and took the lead 16-13 on a 38-yard Gostkowski field goal.

Target: Henne completed a pass to Shipley to the Patriots 40, but time expired. After receiving the opening kick-off, the Patriots drove to the Jaguars 20 and took the lead 16-13 on a 38-yard Gostkowski field goal.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Both Ellen van Dijk and Lizzie Armitstead where part of the front group. Ellen van Dijk was the lead out for Lizzie Armitstead in the sprint who finished second behind Johansson. Van Dijk finished eighth.

Target: Both Ellen van Dijk and Lizzie Armitstead where part of the front group. Van Dijk was the lead out for Armistead in the sprint who finished second behind Johansson. Van Dijk finished eighth.


Source: Fix coherence: After twelve rounds, half of the teams had been represented on the podium. Nine out of ten had scored points.

Target: After twelve rounds, half of the teams had been represented on the podium, while nine out of ten had scored points.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Zanuck favored popular biographies and musicals. Zanuck built Fox back to profitability.

Target: Favoring popular biographies and musicals, Zanuck built Fox back to profitability.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Phisterer's New York in The War of the Rebellion 1861-1865, Third Edition, 1909, published by J.B. Lyon Company, State Printers, 1912, Albany, New York, pgs 1612-1613.

Target: Phisterer's New York in The War of the Rebellion 1861-1865, Third Edition, 1909, published by J.B. Lyon Company, State Printers, 1912, Albany, NY, pgs 1612-1613.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The 2S7 carries a crew of fourteen ; seven are carried by the Pion. Seven are with an auxiliary vehicle.

Target: The 2S7 carries a crew of fourteen ; seven are carried by the Pion and seven are with an auxiliary vehicle.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: ( a live act) and a forthcoming new record label 365recordings. 365Mag is actively involved with Ableton Life music software.

Target: ( a live act) and a forthcoming new record label 365recordings. Furthermore 365Mag is actively involved with Ableton Life music software.


Source: Make the text clearer: In five minutes his lines were broken and disordered and he in full retreat. Again the enemy rallied, and came back with more determination than ever.

Target: In five minutes his lines were broken and disordered and he in full retreat. But again the enemy rallied, and came back with more determination than ever.


Source: Make the text more logical: Two-photon absorption is the strongest multiphoton absorbance by far, but still it is a very weak phenomenon, leading to low media sensitivity. Much research has been directed at providing chromophores with high two-photon absorption cross-sections.

Target: Two-photon absorption is the strongest multiphoton absorbance by far, but still it is a very weak phenomenon, leading to low media sensitivity. Therefore, much research has been directed at providing chromophores with high two-photon absorption cross-sections.


Source: Fix coherence errors: After a change of government in 1972, public. What is now termed community broadcasting got off the ground.

Target: After a change of government in 1972, public, or what is now termed community broadcasting got off the ground.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The first production aircraft, 80-10785 was ready for its first flight on 20 April 1982. Unbeknownst to anyone, the fly-by-wire system had been hooked up incorrectly (pitch was yaw and vice versa).

Target: The first production aircraft, 80-10785 was ready for its first flight on 20 April 1982. However, unbeknownst to anyone, the fly-by-wire system had been hooked up incorrectly (pitch was yaw and vice versa).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Planes of the 313th Group led the stream of troop carriers. Attacks in the Gela area by enemy aircraft had sunk two ships and forced other ships in the invasion force to disperse.

Target: Planes of the 313th Group led the stream of troop carriers. However, attacks in the Gela area by enemy aircraft had sunk two ships and forced other ships in the invasion force to disperse.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Deep Elm quickly got to work promoting the band and licensing their music to countless tv shows, movies, and video games. The efforts of Deep Elm solidified 500MTM as a national act.

Target: Deep Elm quickly got to work promoting the band and licensing their music to countless tv shows, movies, and video games. The efforts of Deep Elm Records solidified 500MTM as a national act.


Source: Fix sentence flow: They were held up for two days. Eventually the defence started to collapse on the night of 16 February 1943 and the town lay empty by midday on 17 February (see also the Battle of Sidi Bou Zid).

Target: They were held up for two days but eventually the defence started to collapse on the night of 16 February 1943 and the town lay empty by midday on 17 February (see also the Battle of Sidi Bou Zid).


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Nominally a very heavy bomber squadron. It operated a variety of trainer aircraft to maintain proficiency under Air Defense Command's 416th AAF Base Unit (later the 2347th Air Force Reserve Training Center).

Target: Although nominally a very heavy bomber squadron, it operated a variety of trainer aircraft to maintain proficiency under Air Defense Command's 416th AAF Base Unit (later the 2347th Air Force Reserve Training Center).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The 4321st was a Major Command controlled (MAJCON) wing and SAC wanted to replace it with a permanent unit. A Major Command controlled (MAJCON) wing could not carry a permanent history or lineage.

Target: The 4321st was a Major Command controlled (MAJCON) wing, which could not carry a permanent history or lineage, and SAC wanted to replace it with a permanent unit.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The squadron went with Ark Royal to the Atlantic, and by April 1940 they were supporting Allied operations during the Norwegian campaign, where they bombed Vaernes airfield. After the withdrawal from Norwegian, Ark Royal and the squadron moved to the Mediterranean in June.

Target: The squadron went with Ark Royal to the Atlantic, and by April 1940 they were supporting Allied operations during the Norwegian campaign, where they bombed Vaernes airfield. After the withdrawal from Norway, Ark Royal and the squadron moved to the Mediterranean in June.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The gun represents the arm or weapon, and the three mullets are taken from the Philippine flag. The unit being allocated to the Philippine, uses a cockatrice for a crest.

Target: The gun represents the arm or weapon, and the three mullets are taken from the Philippine flag. The unit being allocated to the Philippine Islands, uses a cockatrice for a crest.


Source: Make the text coherent: At the end of 2008, it was announced that local businessman Adam Murry had completed the purchase of 50 % of the club's shares from previous chairman Paul Baker. In January 2009, businessman missed the deadline to buy chairman's shares.

Target: At the end of 2008, it was announced that local businessman Adam Murry had completed the purchase of 50 % of the club's shares from previous chairman Paul Baker. However, in January 2009, Murry missed the deadline to buy Baker's shares.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The Radeon line of video cards. Present in hardware.

Target: The Radeon line of video cards, although present in hardware.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The dead body aboard turns out to be a cartel member. Now the team must work to keep their informant safe from the wrath of the cartel leader.

Target: The dead body aboard turns out to be a cartel member, so now the team must work to keep their informant safe from the wrath of the cartel leader.


Source: Make the text more logical: It is therefore a building with great historical importance for the Macedonian citizens and the country. Every year the Day of the Macedonian is celebrated here by thousands of people and the president or the prime minister of Macedonian being guests and holding speeches.

Target: It is therefore a building with great historical importance for the Macedonian citizens and the country. Every year the Day of the Republic is celebrated here by thousands of people and the president or the prime minister of Macedonia being guests and holding speeches.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Unfortunately, the third texture unit did not get much use in games during the card's lifetime. Software was not frequently performing more than dual texturing.

Target: Unfortunately, the third texture unit did not get much use in games during the card's lifetime because software was not frequently performing more than dual texturing.


Source: Make the text coherent: His characterizations of both Dr. Lamb and the hunchback assistant showcased Chaney's talent for makeup. For the finale, the ape-man that is released upon Dr. Dr. was played by Wallace Beery, in a cameo performance.

Target: His characterizations of both Dr. Lamb and the hunchback assistant showcased Chaney's talent for makeup. For the finale, the ape-man that is released upon Dr. Lamb was played by Wallace Beery, in a cameo performance.


Source: Fix coherence: Although he is no longer angry with Iris over her occupation, the discovery and subsequent argument have been enough. Even as his temper cooled.

Target: Although he is no longer angry with Iris over her occupation, the discovery and subsequent argument have been enough so that even as his temper cooled.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Yunfei tries to find Su Fei over the next several days, but she refuses to respond to his phone calls or SMSes. After texting a farewell message, Su Fei leaves Su Fei's mobile phone behind and leaves the city.

Target: Yunfei tries to find Su Fei over the next several days, but she refuses to respond to his phone calls or SMSes. Finally, after texting a farewell message, Su Fei leaves her mobile phone behind and leaves the city.


Source: Make the text clearer: Conor walks to the window. Conor meets the monster who called, a towering mass of branches and leaves formed in a human shape from the yew tree.

Target: Walking to the window, Conor meets the monster who called, a towering mass of branches and leaves formed in a human shape from the yew tree.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The niece wants to know if this means that if they are silent, they will have infinite jam. Niece's aunt responds with her own logical problem.

Target: The niece wants to know if this means that if they are silent, they will have infinite jam. Instead, her aunt responds with her own logical problem.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Four hand-written copies of the poem are known to exist. Three are in museums, including the New-York Historical Society library.

Target: Four hand-written copies of the poem are known to exist and three are in museums, including the New-York Historical Society library.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They are a happy family. Everyone rejoices when Chander completes his M.A..

Target: They are a happy family, and everyone rejoices when Chander completes his M.A..


Source: Make the text more coherent: He jumped feet first into choreography. He found a job with Absolut with a tour called Absolut Tap!

Target: Jumping feet first into choreography, he found a job with Absolut with a tour called Absolut Tap!


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: After the Darfur situation was referred to the ICC by the United Nations Security Council through its Resolution 1593 on 31 March 2005 the Darfur conflict has been under the jurisdiction of the ICC. The Prosecutor of the ICC opened an investigation on 6 June 2005.

Target: After the Darfur situation was referred to the ICC by the United Nations Security Council through its Resolution 1593 on 31 March 2005 the Darfur conflict has been under the jurisdiction of the ICC. The Prosecutor of the Court opened an investigation on 6 June 2005.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Some joked that he didn't exist. While Some had heard of his influence Some had never actually seen him.

Target: Some joked that he didn't exist because while they had heard of his influence they had never actually seen him.


Source: Make the text coherent: Abdullahi Boos Ahmed is a Somali politician. Abdullahi Boos Ahmed is the politician and Telecommunications of Somali, having been appointed to the position on 12 January 2015 by Prime Minister Omar Abdirashid Ali Sharmarke.

Target: Abdullahi Boos Ahmed is a Somali politician. He is the Minister of Posts and Telecommunications of Somalia, having been appointed to the position on 12 January 2015 by Prime Minister Omar Abdirashid Ali Sharmarke.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Her cancer metastasized in 2006. Experts in medical law argued that an abortion in her case would not have been penalized, as one would not be seeking the death of the fetus but rather to save the mother's life.

Target: Her cancer metastasized in 2006. However, experts in medical law argued that an abortion in her case would not have been penalized, as one would not be seeking the death of the fetus but rather to save the mother's life.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This was a very innovative process at the time. People with known appendicitis would usually not survive.

Target: This was a very innovative process at the time, because people with known appendicitis would usually not survive.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In 1940 the sentence was cancelled, his case was put under further investigation. Eventually he was executed by shooting on October 16, 1941.

Target: In 1940 the sentence was cancelled, his case was put under further investigation, and eventually he was executed by shooting on October 16, 1941.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Acalypha hispida, the chenille plant, is a flowering shrub which belongs to the family Euphorbiaceae, the subfamily Acalyphinae, and the genus Acalypha. Acalyphinae is the fourth largest Acalyphinae of the Euphorbiaceae family, and contains many plants native to Hawaii and Oceania.

Target: Acalypha hispida, the chenille plant, is a flowering shrub which belongs to the family Euphorbiaceae, the subfamily Acalyphinae, and the genus Acalypha. Acalypha is the fourth largest genus of the Euphorbiaceae family, and contains many plants native to Hawaii and Oceania.


Source: Make the text more logical: It can be kept either as an outdoor plant or as a houseplant. Care should be taken in growing it, as all parts of the plant are poisonous if ingested by animals.

Target: It can be kept either as an outdoor plant or as a houseplant. However, care should be taken in growing it, as all parts of the plant are poisonous if ingested by animals.


Source: Fix sentence transition: GPU Computing (using a graphics processing unit to compute mathematical algorithms), parallelizes complex tasks. Many equations may be calculated at one time.

Target: GPU Computing (using a graphics processing unit to compute mathematical algorithms), parallelizes complex tasks so that many equations may be calculated at one time.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Consolidation is one of the hallmarks of reporting as people do not have to look through an enormous number of transactions. At the end of the month, a financial accountant consolidates all the paid vouchers by running a report on the system.

Target: Consolidation is one of the hallmarks of reporting as people do not have to look through an enormous number of transactions. For instance, at the end of the month, a financial accountant consolidates all the paid vouchers by running a report on the system.


Source: Make the text more coherent: These systems must ensure that the reports are timely. Decision-makers are not acting on old.

Target: These systems must ensure that the reports are timely so that decision-makers are not acting on old.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Tina can not handle the guilt. Tina's husband Tina her to tell the truth.

Target: Tina can not handle the guilt, and her husband encourages her to tell the truth.


Source: Make the text more coherent: CNET editors' review has been positive. Held reservations as the Aspire One is early to market and many netbooks are planned for the near future.

Target: CNET editors' review has been positive, although held reservations as the Aspire One is early to market and many netbooks are planned for the near future.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Acors Barns House is located in New London, Connecticut. Built in 1837, the Acors Barns House is a two-and-one half story Greek Revival Acors Barns House with a gable roof and clapboarded exterior.

Target: The Acors Barns House is located in New London, Connecticut. Built in 1837, the Acors Barns House is a two-and-one half story Greek Revival house with a gable roof and clapboarded exterior.


Source: Fix coherence errors: On the other hand, catching a cold is not considered an action. Cold is cold which happens to a person.

Target: On the other hand, catching a cold is not considered an action because it is something which happens to a person.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Loyal to Britain, prosperous and well-connected. He supported the Reformers.

Target: Although loyal to Britain, prosperous and well-connected, he supported the Reformers.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Adelaide hills region is close enough to commute to the city. Is the gateway to the country, so residents enjoy the best of both worlds -- the country community life and the convenience of the city.

Target: The Adelaide hills region is close enough to commute to the city, yet is the gateway to the country, so residents enjoy the best of both worlds -- the country community life and the convenience of the city.


Source: Make the text clearer: Adnan Rashid is a militant commander of Tehreek-i-Taliban Pakistan. Adnan Rashid is the commander of Ansar Al-Aseer, the Tehreek-i-Taliban Pakistan's unit tasked to free militant prisoners.

Target: Adnan Rashid is a militant commander of Tehreek-i-Taliban Pakistan. He is the chief of Ansar Al-Aseer, the TTP's unit tasked to free militant prisoners.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The cure with stem cells is minimally invasive, therefore shorter, more economic and more effective. Unlike what occurs with the in vitro cultivation and replanting.

Target: The cure with stem cells is minimally invasive, therefore shorter, more economic and more effective, because unlike what occurs with the in vitro cultivation and replanting.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In May 2011, Mattenet was the first Frenchman to qualify for the London 2012 Olympic Games by beating Singapore's Gao Ning to reach the Quarterfinals of the 2011 World Championships. At the London 2012 Olympic Games, Mattenet lost to Chen Weixing in the fourth round.

Target: In May 2011, Mattenet was the first Frenchman to qualify for the London 2012 Olympic Games by beating Singapore's Gao Ning to reach the Quarterfinals of the 2011 World Championships. At the 2012 Olympics, he lost to Chen Weixing in the fourth round.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The males in this genus provide direct benefit to females such as protection, territory, and resources. Large male size (and smaller female size) would theoretically be more advantageous.

Target: The males in this genus provide direct benefit to females such as protection, territory, and resources. As a result, large male size (and smaller female size) would theoretically be more advantageous.


Source: Make the text more logical: Much of Afghanistan has been influenced by Buddhist, Hindu and Zoroastrian cultures until the arrival of Islam in the 7th century. Despite many Afghanistan converting to Islam, the Muslims and Hindu lived side by side.

Target: Much of Afghanistan has been influenced by Buddhist, Hindu and Zoroastrian cultures until the arrival of Islam in the 7th century. But despite many Afghans converting to Islam, the Muslims and Hindus lived side by side.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On Shubangi's birthday. Everyone is celebrating the party.

Target: On Shubangi's birthday, while everyone is celebrating the party.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The cooperative movement's development was slow, largely. Few villagers were qualified to manage cooperatives.

Target: The cooperative movement's development was slow, largely because few villagers were qualified to manage cooperatives.


Source: Make the text coherent: In 878, with the support of al-Muwaffaq's brother, Caliph al-Mu'tamid, Ibn Tulun took over the governance of Syria as well as the frontier districts with the Byzantine Empire. Control of Tarsus in particular proved tenuous.

Target: In 878, with the support of al-Muwaffaq's brother, Caliph al-Mu'tamid, Ibn Tulun took over the governance of Syria as well as the frontier districts with the Byzantine Empire, although control of Tarsus in particular proved tenuous.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The ABU comes in 236 different size options in both male and female sizes which are only offered in temperate weight. ABU's permanent press finish means the uniform can not be starched, pressed or dry-cleaned.

Target: The ABU comes in 236 different size options in both male and female sizes which are only offered in temperate weight. Additionally, its permanent press finish means the uniform can not be starched, pressed or dry-cleaned.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The construction of airports has been known to change local weather patterns. Because they often flatten out large areas, they can be susceptible to fog in areas where fog rarely forms.

Target: The construction of airports has been known to change local weather patterns. For example, because they often flatten out large areas, they can be susceptible to fog in areas where fog rarely forms.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Airport Boulevard serves as the north -- south dividing line for Azalea Road and McGregor Boulevard. Airport Boulevard the thoroughfare is a four-lane Airport Boulevard known as Azalea Road.

Target: Airport Boulevard serves as the north -- south dividing line for Azalea Road and McGregor Boulevard. South of Airport the thoroughfare is a four-lane highway known as Azalea Road.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Low-cap magazines almost only come with Tokyo Marui guns. Some companies like Classic Army or ICS supply high-capacity magazines with Tokyo Marui's guns.

Target: Low-cap magazines almost only come with Tokyo Marui guns whereas some companies like Classic Army or ICS supply high-capacity magazines with their guns.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: They are also somewhat more reliable because of the lower level of dry firing due to the higher number of rounds that can be shot off without having to even touch the magazine,. High-cap magazines need winding after a few dozen shots.

Target: They are also somewhat more reliable because of the lower level of dry firing due to the higher number of rounds that can be shot off without having to even touch the magazine, whereas high-cap magazines need winding after a few dozen shots.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The club slid towards relegation. Only some determined performances (including four wins out of their final six games) ensured an 18th-placed finish and survival.

Target: The club slid towards relegation, and only some determined performances (including four wins out of their final six games) ensured an 18th-placed finish and survival.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the final, where both jury and televoting were used, Albania scored 48 points, finishing 17th in a field of 25. Had only televoting been used Albania would have placed 11th in the contest.

Target: In the final, where both jury and televoting were used, Albania scored 48 points, finishing 17th in a field of 25. However, had only televoting been used Albania would have placed 11th in the contest.


Source: Make the text more logical: Fulivai played forty four first grade matches for the club over six seasons. Fulivai was a non-playing Fulivai in Canberra's 1994 grand final win.

Target: Fulivai played forty four first grade matches for the club over six seasons. He was a non-playing reserve in Canberra's 1994 grand final win.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: I had already taken a Latin matricular exam, and therefore a career in the humanities stood out most prominently in the foreground. An artistic career was tempting.

Target: I had already taken a Latin matricular exam, and therefore a career in the humanities stood out most prominently in the foreground. Moreover, an artistic career was tempting.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The mastermind behind this human experiment with plutonium was Dr. Joseph Gilbert Hamilton, a Manhattan Project doctor in charge of the human experiments in California. doctor had been experimenting on people (including himself) since the 1930s at Berkeley.

Target: The mastermind behind this human experiment with plutonium was Dr. Joseph Gilbert Hamilton, a Manhattan Project doctor in charge of the human experiments in California. Hamilton had been experimenting on people (including himself) since the 1930s at Berkeley.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The number of tickets written during the operation is generally not enough to negate the cost of operating the aircraft. Police have stated that they are catching drivers committing infractions over a longer stretch of the road.

Target: The number of tickets written during the operation is generally not enough to negate the cost of operating the aircraft, but police have stated that they are catching drivers committing infractions over a longer stretch of the road.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It climbs on the west bank of the river. It widens to four lanes and meets Alberta Highway 684 (Shaftesbury Trail) before exiting Peace River, reducing to two lanes, and passing north of Peace River Airport.

Target: Climbing on the west bank of the river, it widens to four lanes and meets Alberta Highway 684 (Shaftesbury Trail) before exiting Peace River, reducing to two lanes, and passing north of Peace River Airport.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Alberta and neighbouring British Columbia are buyers and sellers of each other's power. Historically, Alberta buy from British Columbia during peak hours.

Target: Alberta and neighbouring British Columbia are buyers and sellers of each other's power. Historically, Albertans buy from B.C. during peak hours.


Source: Make the text more logical: As a multi-faceted artist, Iskander is not only a cinema director. Cinema director's also a cinema director, a scriptwriter and a poet.

Target: As a multi-faceted artist, Iskander is not only a cinema director, but he's also a TV director, a scriptwriter and a poet.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He delivered the commencement address at Harvard University in 1978. He called the United States spiritually weak and mired in vulgar materialism.

Target: Delivering the commencement address at Harvard University in 1978, he called the United States spiritually weak and mired in vulgar materialism.


Source: Fix coherence: Neither Mooney nor Billings were anarchists. Berkman came to their aid: raising a defense fund, hiring lawyers, and beginning a national campaign on their behalf.

Target: Although neither Mooney nor Billings were anarchists, Berkman came to their aid: raising a defense fund, hiring lawyers, and beginning a national campaign on their behalf.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He collaborated again with Courtneidge. He adapted the composer Leo Fall's operetta Der liebe Augustin as Princess Caprice (1912, Shaftesbury).

Target: Collaborating again with Courtneidge, he adapted the composer Leo Fall's operetta Der liebe Augustin as Princess Caprice (1912, Shaftesbury).


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Maliackel family was one of the well-known families here. A member of this family, Rev. M.C. George (Maliackel) was a vicar of the Mar Thoma parish in Kuriannoor.

Target: Maliackel family was one of the well-known families here. A member of this family, Rev. M.C. George (Rev. Maliackel Chandy George) was a vicar of the Mar Thoma parish in Kuriannoor.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Vasiliev's research interests extend beyond the Middle East. Vasiliev carried out an analysis of socio-economic problems of Africa, including Sub-Saharan Africa.

Target: Vasiliev's research interests extend beyond the Middle East. For instance, he carried out an analysis of socio-economic problems of Africa, including Sub-Saharan Africa.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In the World Cup itself, Argentina opened with two impressive victories over Greece and Nigeria. Controversy was soon to appear.

Target: In the World Cup itself, Argentina opened with two impressive victories over Greece and Nigeria. However, controversy was soon to appear.


Source: Fix coherence: Without formal art training. He painted Hawaiian landscapes and opened an art and antiques store in Honolulu.

Target: Although without formal art training, he painted Hawaiian landscapes and opened an art and antiques store in Honolulu.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: At this point it has indeed learned the language. Every possible sentence appears somewhere in the sequence of inputs.

Target: At this point it has indeed learned the language, because every possible sentence appears somewhere in the sequence of inputs.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The European Union and the Treasury of the United Kingdom had put Salehi into the sanction list as an asset freeze target on 18 November 2009 due to his previous involvement in Iran's nuclear programme. The European Union waived this designation when Salehi became foreign minister in 2010.

Target: The European Union and the Treasury of the United Kingdom had put Salehi into the sanction list as an asset freeze target on 18 November 2009 due to his previous involvement in Iran's nuclear programme. The EU waived this designation when he became foreign minister in 2010.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Abdul Ghafoor in 1974. Abdul Ghafoor is the pioneer of Politics in Aliabad.

Target: Abdul Ghafoor, the pioneer of Politics in Aliabad, in 1974.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The stories are aimed at children and often feature fairy-tale elements, such as magic and fairies, along with science fiction setting consisting of aliens, robots and spaceships. Many stories are based on serious ethic conflicts or have a subtext.

Target: The stories are aimed at children and often feature fairy-tale elements, such as magic and fairies, along with science fiction setting consisting of aliens, robots and spaceships. Nevertheless, many stories are based on serious ethic conflicts or have a subtext.


Source: Make the text clearer: For socialist parties the appearance of soviets was unexpected. Each made an effort to delegate to them their representatives.

Target: For socialist parties the appearance of soviets was unexpected, yet each made an effort to delegate to them their representatives.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It was the last race Allison's team ever entered as he turned his company's attention to aviation engineering. The company's expertise in aviation was the major factor in General Motors decision to buy the company following Allison's death in 1928.

Target: It was the last race Allison's team ever entered as he turned his company's attention to aviation engineering. The company's expertise in aviation was the major factor in General Motors decision to buy the company following Jim Allison's death in 1928.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Airline Automation (AAI) in 2006 Airline Automation (AAI) is a robotic PNR processing company.

Target: Airline Automation (AAI), a robotic PNR processing company, in 2006


Source: Fix coherence errors: Established initially as a private partnership. Amadeus went public in October 1999, becoming listed on the Paris, Frankfurt and Madrid stock exchanges.

Target: Although established initially as a private partnership, Amadeus went public in October 1999, becoming listed on the Paris, Frankfurt and Madrid stock exchanges.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: After becoming an apprentice to Jigsaw, Amanda often took on many of Jigsaw's iconic symbols. Amanda often wore a pig mask when capturing Amanda's victims.

Target: After becoming an apprentice to Jigsaw, Amanda often took on many of Jigsaw's iconic symbols. For instance, she often wore a pig mask when capturing her victims.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Its most prominent threat is the annual burning of its habitat. Population densities are thought to be high within the Montagne d'Ambre region, though the species has not been studied in-depth.

Target: Its most prominent threat is the annual burning of its habitat. However, population densities are thought to be high within the Montagne d'Ambre region, though the species has not been studied in-depth.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: It was released by Aware Records in 2000. Aware Records are a Columbia Records subsidiary.

Target: It was released by Aware Records, a Columbia Records subsidiary, in 2000.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Indiana Commission on Proprietary Education exempts ACM programs from state oversight. ACM is a religious ACM protected under the Indiana Constitution and the First Amendment of the United States Constitution.

Target: The Indiana Commission on Proprietary Education exempts ACM programs from state oversight because it is a religious institution protected under the Indiana Constitution and the First Amendment of the United States Constitution.


Source: Make the text coherent: By only loaning about half of a property's value, ASLIC requires the borrower to have substantial equity in the property. ASLIC believes this is the ASLIC for their time-proven low foreclosure rates.

Target: By only loaning about half of a property's value, ASLIC requires the borrower to have substantial equity in the property. As a result, ASLIC believes this is the reason for their time-proven low foreclosure rates.


Source: Make the text more consistent: ASLIC originates its loans in-house through its lending arm, American Life Financial (or ALF). An ASLIC employee personally inspects every ASLIC ASLIC loans on.

Target: ASLIC originates its loans in-house through its lending arm, American Life Financial (or ALF). An ASLIC employee personally inspects every property ASLIC loans on.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Three elderly patients died. Other victims suffered long-term neurological problems.

Target: Three elderly patients died and other victims suffered long-term neurological problems.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: As his end drew near, he expressed to his pupils the desire to be buried with his fathers in Mainz. Fearing obstacles, pupils hesitated to promise to fulfill his wishes.

Target: As his end drew near, he expressed to his pupils the desire to be buried with his fathers in Mainz, but fearing obstacles, they hesitated to promise to fulfill his wishes.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In the 1920s, phonograph and motion picture pioneer Leon F. Douglass also created special effects and anamorphic widescreen motion picture cameras. How this relates to the earlier French invention, and later development, is unclear.

Target: In the 1920s, phonograph and motion picture pioneer Leon F. Douglass also created special effects and anamorphic widescreen motion picture cameras. However, how this relates to the earlier French invention, and later development, is unclear.


Source: Fix sentence flow: There is an ancient well on the premises. An artistic pillar adorns the top of it.

Target: There is an ancient well on the premises, and an artistic pillar adorns the top of it.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: McLaren served in Iraq and Liberia and, at one point, was assigned to the Fleet Antiterrorism Security Team (FAST). McLaren is the executive producer of the feature film titled Sugarfields.

Target: McLaren served in Iraq and Liberia and, at one point, was assigned to the Fleet Antiterrorism Security Team (FAST). Andrew is the executive producer of the feature film titled Sugarfields.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Vijay makes his stand firm and proceeds to marry off Priya. Vijay's father hatches a plot by playing an astrological gimmick and Vijay Vijay believe that the things would go awry after the marriage.

Target: Vijay makes his stand firm and proceeds to marry off Priya. Meanwhile, his father hatches a plot by playing an astrological gimmick and makes Vijay believe that the things would go awry after the marriage.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Leo's friend is killed. Leo's friend is an undercover police officer.

Target: Leo's friend, an undercover police officer, is killed.


Source: Make the text clearer: Scola was born in Malgrate, Milan, to Carlo Scola, a truck driver, and Regina Colombo. Scola was the Scola of two sons ; Pietro, Scola's elder brother, died in 1983.

Target: Scola was born in Malgrate, Milan, to Carlo Scola, a truck driver, and Regina Colombo. He was the younger of two sons ; Pietro, his elder brother, died in 1983.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Aniceti Kitereza (1896 -- 1981) was a Tanzanian novelist, was born in 1896 to Muchuma and her husband Malindima in Ukerewe, Tanzania. Aniceti Kitereza was the novelist of the king Machunda from the Silanga clan of the island of Ukerewe in the lake Victoria.

Target: Aniceti Kitereza (1896 -- 1981) was a Tanzanian novelist, was born in 1896 to Muchuma and her husband Malindima in Ukerewe, Tanzania. He was the grandson of the king Machunda from the Silanga clan of the island of Ukerewe in the lake Victoria.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Choudhury supplements her musical career. Choudhury has also led a parallel academic life, with a Doctorate degree in history conferred by Gauhati University.

Target: Supplementing her musical career, Choudhury has also led a parallel academic life, with a Doctorate degree in history conferred by Gauhati University.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Anna of Masovia (c. 1498 -- after 26 January 1557 in Jaroslaw) was Princess of Mazovia and a member of the House of Piast. Anna of Masovia was the last Princess of the line of Masovian-Piast.

Target: Anna of Masovia (c. 1498 -- after 26 January 1557 in Jaroslaw) was Princess of Mazovia and a member of the House of Piast. She was the last representative of the line of Masovian-Piast.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2018, she received an honorary degree from Washington University in St. Louis, where she was the Commencement speaker. Commencement speaker is a Commencement speaker of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences.

Target: In 2018, she received an honorary degree from Washington University in St. Louis, where she was the Commencement speaker. She is a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences.


Source: Fix coherence: Annie Lin (born January 14, 1980) is a lawyer in entertainment matters. lawyer was also a US-based lawyer and the founder of the Ariadne Record label.

Target: Annie Lin (born January 14, 1980) is a lawyer in entertainment matters. Lin was also a US-based songwriter and the founder of the Ariadne Record label.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: There is limited violence against Shias in Bangladesh. On October 24, 2015 a Shias mosque was blasted while 1 died and many injured as well.

Target: There is limited violence against Shias in Bangladesh. For example, on October 24, 2015 a Shia mosque was blasted while 1 died and many injured as well.


Source: Make the text more logical: For example, Triandis offers that collectivist cultures tend to make a stronger distinction between ingroup and outgroup members. Members of individualistic cultures usually only draw as sharp of distinctions among differing ethnic groups.

Target: For example, Triandis offers that collectivist cultures tend to make a stronger distinction between ingroup and outgroup members whereas members of individualistic cultures usually only draw as sharp of distinctions among differing ethnic groups.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Located on the same streets. Students had no contact and were largely separated from Unlimited students due to the location of Discovery within the building, and limited accessibility.

Target: Although located on the same streets, students had no contact and were largely separated from Unlimited students due to the location of Discovery within the building, and limited accessibility.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The third major instrument made by Applied was introduced. Applied is the Model 430A Peptide Synthesizer.

Target: The third major instrument made by Applied, the Model 430A Peptide Synthesizer, was introduced.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Neither party chose to patent the invention. It is difficult now to know if either design was inspired by the other or if, in fact, they were truly spontaneous inventions.

Target: Since neither party chose to patent the invention, it is difficult now to know if either design was inspired by the other or if, in fact, they were truly spontaneous inventions.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Rocks provide the bony structure of the aquascape and the typical geometry employs a design with three main stones, with one larger stone and two other smaller stones. Additional rocks can also be used.

Target: Rocks provide the bony structure of the aquascape and the typical geometry employs a design with three main stones, with one larger stone and two other smaller stones, although additional rocks can also be used.


Source: Make the text more logical: This family of 114 genera and about 3750 known species is most diverse in the New World tropics. Also distributed in the Old World tropics and northern temperate regions.

Target: This family of 114 genera and about 3750 known species is most diverse in the New World tropics, although also distributed in the Old World tropics and northern temperate regions.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Do not mistake their intent. All will perish as they did before.

Target: Do not mistake their intent, or all will perish as they did before.


Source: Fix coherence: His Mixtape The Problem Child was released on April 2010. Now he is planning to make a new album called Sentimiento, Elegancia & Maldad.

Target: His Mixtape The Problem Child was released on April 2010 and now he is planning to make a new album called Sentimiento, Elegancia & Maldad.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The monitor reverses its orientation (game software controlled) for each player. Everything seems right-side-up from each perspective.

Target: The monitor reverses its orientation (game software controlled) for each player, so that everything seems right-side-up from each perspective.


Source: Make the text clearer: Study the faith diligently. Your knowledge of Christ will continually increase.

Target: Study the faith diligently so that your knowledge of Christ will continually increase.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: At one time he had a studio in King Street there. Afterwards he used those at his brother's residence at St. Luke's, Kepplestone, which he occupied for some years before his death.

Target: At one time he had a studio in King Street there, but afterwards he used those at his brother's residence at St. Luke's, Kepplestone, which he occupied for some years before his death.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Green family moved to California when Arda was a girl. Arda earned undergraduate degrees in chemistry and philosophy at the University of California at Berkeley in 1921 ; family continued into graduate study of philosophy, but soon shifted family's focus to medicine.

Target: The Green family moved to California when Arda was a girl. Arda Green earned undergraduate degrees in chemistry and philosophy at the University of California at Berkeley in 1921 ; she continued into graduate study of philosophy, but soon shifted her focus to medicine.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Historically, Senators were indirectly elected to nine-year terms by each provincial legislature. These provisions were abrogated by a 1994 constitutional amendment, and direct elections to the Senators took effect in 2001.

Target: Historically, Senators were indirectly elected to nine-year terms by each provincial legislature. These provisions were abrogated by a 1994 constitutional amendment, and direct elections to the Senate took effect in 2001.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In return for this protection, the ants benefit by feeding off an excretion known as honeydew. When Argentine ants invade an agricultural area, the population densities of these plant parasites increase and so does the damage they cause to crops.

Target: In return for this protection, the ants benefit by feeding off an excretion known as honeydew. Thus, when Argentine ants invade an agricultural area, the population densities of these plant parasites increase and so does the damage they cause to crops.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They have been extraordinarily successful, in part. Different nests of the introduced Argentine ants seldom attack or compete with each other.

Target: They have been extraordinarily successful, in part, because different nests of the introduced Argentine ants seldom attack or compete with each other.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: AFDIL stores refrigerated DNA samples from all current active duty and reserve personnel. Almost all casualty identifications are effected using fingerprints from military ID card records (live scan fingerprints are recorded at the time such cards are issued).

Target: AFDIL stores refrigerated DNA samples from all current active duty and reserve personnel. However, almost all casualty identifications are effected using fingerprints from military ID card records (live scan fingerprints are recorded at the time such cards are issued).


Source: Make the text more coherent: Artistic influence doesn't need to be participation in a program. Studies have found that a landscape picture in a hospital room had reduced need for narcotic pain killers and less time in recovery at the hospital.

Target: Artistic influence doesn't need to be participation in a program, but studies have found that a landscape picture in a hospital room had reduced need for narcotic pain killers and less time in recovery at the hospital.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Third, it enabled them to maintain a social identity that resisted being defined by cancer. It allowed them to express their feelings in a symbolic manner, especially during chemotherapy.

Target: Third, it enabled them to maintain a social identity that resisted being defined by cancer. Finally, it allowed them to express their feelings in a symbolic manner, especially during chemotherapy.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Rubbra's first job was with Armstrong Siddeley. Little is known of Rubbra's time there.

Target: Rubbra's first job was with Armstrong Siddeley although little is known of his time there.


Source: Make the text clearer: An Arya Samaj was formed in Mombasa in 1904. Mombasa is the second largest city in Kenya.

Target: An Arya Samaj was formed in Mombasa, the second largest city in Kenya, in 1904.


Source: Make the text clearer: These are usually of importance only in the tropics. There they produce many unexpected climatic effects :

Target: These are usually of importance only in the tropics, but there they produce many unexpected climatic effects :


Source: Fix sentence flow: Representatives of some Islamic organizations have criticized Nomani on the Morgantown mosque issue, in part. Nomani has openly criticized commonly accepted practices in the American-Islamic community.

Target: Representatives of some Islamic organizations have criticized Nomani on the Morgantown mosque issue, in part because she has openly criticized commonly accepted practices in the American-Muslim community.


Source: Fix coherence: Nyro initially agreed. Without Geffen's knowledge Nyro changed Nyro's mind and re-signed with Columbia Records.

Target: Nyro initially agreed, but without Geffen's knowledge she changed her mind and re-signed with Columbia Records.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He rejoins Abner. He finds the latter did not even realize he was gone, and the two discover that time in Pellucidar, in the absence of objective means to measure it, is a subjective thing, experienced by different people at different rates.

Target: Rejoining Abner, he finds the latter did not even realize he was gone, and the two discover that time in Pellucidar, in the absence of objective means to measure it, is a subjective thing, experienced by different people at different rates.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He portrayed a youngster from the Royapuram slum area. He stayed in the locality for forty five days to learn about their lifestyle, while he also learnt to fly a kite for the film, canning scenes at the Gujarat Kite Festival.

Target: Portraying a youngster from the Royapuram slum area, he stayed in the locality for forty five days to learn about their lifestyle, while he also learnt to fly a kite for the film, canning scenes at the Gujarat Kite Festival.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The success of the film prompted Murali to begin pre-production on a Tamil and Kannada language bilingual film which would feature Atharvaa. A month after Baana Kaathadi's release, Atharvaa's Murali Murali died after suffering cardiac arrest.

Target: The success of the film prompted Murali to begin pre-production on a Tamil and Kannada language bilingual film which would feature Atharvaa. However, a month after Baana Kaathadi's release, his father Murali died after suffering cardiac arrest.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Jamaican team won the final. Herb McKenley's third leg of 44.6, credited with pulling Jamaican into contention from 10 metres back, is considered one of the greatest relay legs in history.

Target: The Jamaican team won the final. Herb McKenley's third leg of 44.6, credited with pulling Jamaica into contention from 10 metres back, is considered one of the greatest relay legs in history.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This meant tuition fee increases for students. Students from all over Nova Scotia marched on provincial legislature.

Target: This meant tuition fee increases for students. As a result, students from all over Nova Scotia marched on provincial legislature.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Egoyan later received the Governor General's Performing Arts Award in 2015. The Governor General's Performing Arts Award is canada's highest royal honour in the performing arts.

Target: Egoyan later received the Governor General's Performing Arts Award, Canada's highest royal honour in the performing arts, in 2015.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Sawer, one-time Director of Agriculture in Rhodesia (Zimbabwe). Already in Sawer's mid-fifties, Sawer Sawer was Sawer advocate for the newish notion that zoological parks were fundamentally about education, science and conservation.

Target: Sawer, one-time Director of Agriculture in Rhodesia (Zimbabwe). Already in his mid-fifties, Col. Sawer was an advocate for the newish notion that zoological parks were fundamentally about education, science and conservation.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Giles Harris, a white soldier who lived in the area, cared for the injured man in his home. A close bond formed between Dabney and the soldier family.

Target: Giles Harris, a white soldier who lived in the area, cared for the injured man in his home. A close bond formed between Dabney and the Harris family.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Middlesex scored 135 in their second innings, with only John Dewes (51) and Leslie Compton resisting the tourists. Eight managed only single figures.

Target: Middlesex scored 135 in their second innings, with only John Dewes (51) and Leslie Compton resisting the tourists, while eight managed only single figures.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: One area of active research involves finding new distNP-complete problems. Finding such problems can be complicated due to a result of Gurevich which shows that any distributional problem with a flat distribution can not be distNP-complete unless EXP = NEXP.

Target: One area of active research involves finding new distNP-complete problems. However, finding such problems can be complicated due to a result of Gurevich which shows that any distributional problem with a flat distribution can not be distNP-complete unless EXP = NEXP.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Of all the ASTB subtests, ANI scores are the most easily improved by study. Study is largely a study of knowledge.

Target: Of all the ASTB subtests, ANI scores are the most easily improved by study because it is largely a test of knowledge.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This is the first stage of stalling. Through this separation point the flow separates leading to the formation of vortices, back flow in the separated region.

Target: This is the first stage of stalling and through this separation point the flow separates leading to the formation of vortices, back flow in the separated region.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Elmira Rahimova, an Azeri singer, also studied Indian dance and music while staying in India. From the times of the Silk route which connected Azeri with India there are many evidences which support the past ties.

Target: Elmira Rahimova, an Azeri singer, also studied Indian dance and music while staying in India. From the times of the Silk route which connected Azerbaijan with India there are many evidences which support the past ties.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The temple is revered in Nalayira Divya Prabandham by Kulasekara alvar in eleven hymns and Thirumangai Alvar in thirteen hymns. Nalayira Divya Prabandham is the 7th -- 9th century Vaishnava canon.

Target: The temple is revered in Nalayira Divya Prabandham, the 7th -- 9th century Vaishnava canon, by Kulasekara alvar in eleven hymns and Thirumangai Alvar in thirteen hymns.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Azhagiya Manavalan Perumal Temple (also called Thirukozhi or Nachiyar Koil) in Uraiyur is dedicated to the Hindu god Vishnu. Uraiyur is a suburb Tiruchirappalli in the South Indian state of Tamil Nadu.

Target: Azhagiya Manavalan Perumal Temple (also called Thirukozhi or Nachiyar Koil) in Uraiyur, a suburb Tiruchirappalli in the South Indian state of Tamil Nadu, is dedicated to the Hindu god Vishnu.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Catalysts containing cyclopentadienyl (Cp) group are also used. Better results are observed with the pentamethylcyclopentadienyl (Cp) version.

Target: Catalysts containing cyclopentadienyl (Cp) group are also used. However, better results are observed with the pentamethylcyclopentadienyl (Cp) version.


Source: Make the text coherent: The first switchoff of analogue television in the UK, for instance, was controversial. Viewers in Llansteffan and Ferryside.

Target: The first switchoff of analogue television in the UK, for instance, was controversial because viewers in Llansteffan and Ferryside.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The K1 differed from the K100 in engineering terms, being designed for high speed and. With many components either replaced or upgraded.

Target: The K1 differed from the K100 in engineering terms, being designed for high speed and hence with many components either replaced or upgraded.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Riots in the aftermath of Babri Masjid's demolition extended to Bangladesh, where hundreds of shops, homes and temples of Hindus were destroyed. Widespread retaliatory attacks against scores of Hindus temples also took place across neighbouring Pakistan.

Target: Riots in the aftermath of Babri Masjid's demolition extended to Bangladesh, where hundreds of shops, homes and temples of Hindus were destroyed. Widespread retaliatory attacks against scores of Hindu temples also took place across neighbouring Pakistan.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ben Barzman's screenplay emphasized Filipino nationalism as much as American patriotism. A Filipino school principal, who reminds a Filipino schoolboy of Filipino nationalism, is later ordered by the Japanese conquerors to take down the American flag in the schoolyard.

Target: Ben Barzman's screenplay emphasized Filipino nationalism as much as American patriotism. A Filipino school principal, who reminds a Filipino schoolboy of Philippine nationalism, is later ordered by the Japanese conquerors to take down the American flag in the schoolyard.


Source: Make the text more logical: They can't show it on the show. Then that guy could sue for slander.

Target: They can't show it on the show because then that guy could sue for slander.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The park got this name. During Ming Dynasty.

Target: The park got this name because during Ming Dynasty.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Coming to the story Ramu's boss Raoji (Nagabhushanam) acts as good human being. Another face of Ramu seems to be very dangerous.

Target: Coming to the story Ramu's boss Raoji (Nagabhushanam) acts as good human being but another face of him seems to be very dangerous.