Source: Make the text more consistent: Everett Hughes first introduced the notion of master status in the 1940s. Notion was the key notion of Everett Hughes' address as the 53rd president of the American Sociological Association.

Target: Everett Hughes first introduced the notion of master status in the 1940s, and it was the key subject of his address as the 53rd president of the American Sociological Association.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Music and lyrics by Widi Puradi redja. Other wise stated.

Target: Music and lyrics by Widi Puradi redja unless other wise stated.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Matiwane expected an attack on his homeland. Matiwane moved some of his cattle herds westward.

Target: Expecting an attack on his homeland, Matiwane moved some of his cattle herds westward.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Matthew's grandfather Tingley was a Revolutionary soldier. Matthew's uncle also was Matthew, who also emigrated from Ireland to America in 1793.

Target: Matthew's grandfather Tingley was a Revolutionary soldier. Matthew's uncle also was Matthew Simpson, who also emigrated from Ireland to America in 1793.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Wylie competes as a parasport athlete competing as a S9 classification swimmer competing mainly in freestyle events. Wylie has cerebral palsy.

Target: Wylie, who has cerebral palsy, competes as a parasport athlete competing as a S9 classification swimmer competing mainly in freestyle events.


Source: Fix coherence: The show began in late July 1986. While show was considered a tabloid infotainment show that often focused on celebrity gossip, show also made time for compelling human-interest stories.

Target: The show began in late July 1986, and while it was considered a tabloid infotainment show that often focused on celebrity gossip, it also made time for compelling human-interest stories.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Pammo gets married to Mahinder Pal 'MP' Singh (Herry Tangri), Harry's friend from London. Following day after hearing the news of Babri Masjid's Demolition, Aayat and her family flee to Mumbai.

Target: Pammo gets married to Mahinder Pal 'MP' Singh (Herry Tangri), Harry's friend from London. However following day after hearing the news of Babri Masjid's Demolition, Aayat and her family flee to Mumbai.


Source: Make the text coherent: He goes in search of her and realizes that she is in New York. While travelling in a train in Switzerland, Harry spots Aayat with Akram and his son.

Target: He goes in search of her and realizes that she is in New York. However while travelling in a train in Switzerland, Harry spots Aayat with Akram and his son.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Maya is a bee born in a bee hive during internal unrest: the hive is dividing itself into two new colonies. bee is raised by Maya's teacher, Mrs. Cassandra.

Target: Maya is a bee born in a bee hive during internal unrest: the hive is dividing itself into two new colonies. Maya is raised by her teacher, Mrs. Cassandra.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Other crops such as sorghum, oats and wheat also became important. Construction of a dam and the resulting Eufaula Lake inundated much of the best cropland, causing a large-scale decline in agriculture.

Target: Other crops such as sorghum, oats and wheat also became important. However, construction of a dam and the resulting Eufaula Lake inundated much of the best cropland, causing a large-scale decline in agriculture.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It was also performed by Spears at Britney Spears: In the Zone 2003. The Zone is a concert special that aired in ABC on November 17.

Target: It was also performed by Spears at Britney Spears: In the Zone, a concert special that aired in ABC on November 17, 2003.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The band's manager Kit Lambert attempted to have the track order changed but failed. Too many copies had already been pressed.

Target: The band's manager Kit Lambert attempted to have the track order changed but failed because too many copies had already been pressed.


Source: Make the text more coherent: For direct resonance, the response frequency always matches the excitation frequency. Regardless of which order of parametric resonance is activated, the response frequency of parametric resonance is always in the vicinity of the natural frequency.

Target: For direct resonance, the response frequency always matches the excitation frequency. However, regardless of which order of parametric resonance is activated, the response frequency of parametric resonance is always in the vicinity of the natural frequency.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This is generally not the case with most devices described as mechanical amplifiers ; all the energy is provided by the original signal and there is no power amplification. A lever can amplify the displacement of a signal, but the force is proportionately reduced.

Target: This is generally not the case with most devices described as mechanical amplifiers ; all the energy is provided by the original signal and there is no power amplification. For instance a lever can amplify the displacement of a signal, but the force is proportionately reduced.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Apparently, the tobacco leaves were considered high quality for cigar materials. Deli's name rose as a producer of the best cigar wrappers for Europeans.

Target: Apparently, the tobacco leaves were considered high quality for cigar materials. Hence Deli's name rose as a producer of the best cigar wrappers for Europeans.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The film was a disaster at the box office. The song O Butterfly was popular and helped the disaster get attention.

Target: The film was a disaster at the box office. The song O Butterfly was popular and helped the film get attention.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The instrumental of the original version opened and closed broadcasts of Met games on WFAN radio and is used for lineup rundowns during home games on SportsNet New York. Part of the 1984 update opened and closed WFAN's Mets Extra pre-and post-game shows.

Target: The instrumental of the original version opened and closed broadcasts of Met games on WFAN radio and is used for lineup rundowns during home games on SportsNet New York, while part of the 1984 update opened and closed WFAN's Mets Extra pre-and post-game shows.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As far as can be ascertained, he had no ancestry in earlier Carinthian ducal families,. He was a distant descendant of some early Meranian lords of Istria and Carniola.

Target: As far as can be ascertained, he had no ancestry in earlier Carinthian ducal families, whereas he was a distant descendant of some early Meranian lords of Istria and Carniola.


Source: Make the text more logical: Eckhart denied competence and authority to the inquisitors and the archbishop, and appealed to the Pope against the verdict. Eckhart in the spring of 1327, set off for Avignon.

Target: Eckhart denied competence and authority to the inquisitors and the archbishop, and appealed to the Pope against the verdict. He then, in the spring of 1327, set off for Avignon.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Eckhart himself translated the text into German. Eckhart's audience.

Target: Eckhart himself translated the text into German, so that his audience.


Source: Make the text coherent: In late 1303 Eckhart returned to Erfurt, and was made Provincial for Saxony, a province which reached at that time from the Netherlands to Livonia. Eckhart had responsibility for forty-seven convents in this region.

Target: In late 1303 Eckhart returned to Erfurt, and was made Provincial for Saxony, a province which reached at that time from the Netherlands to Livonia. He therefore had responsibility for forty-seven convents in this region.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Just as humans have the ability to alter the habitat and even to extinguish other species, we can also protect and restore biodiversity. We have a responsibility to act as custodians for nature.

Target: Just as humans have the ability to alter the habitat and even to extinguish other species, we can also protect and restore biodiversity. Therefore, we have a responsibility to act as custodians for nature.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Victory finished in fourth spot. Victory made the finals but succumbed to a strong Sydney FC team 5 -- 1.

Target: Finishing in fourth spot, Victory made the finals but succumbed to a strong Sydney FC team 5 -- 1.


Source: Make the text more logical: It adjusted to a new system and new teammates. It was a slow start with the team having to wait until Round 4 to claim its first win of the season before finishing the regular season off with a five-match undefeated run.

Target: Adjusting to a new system and new teammates, it was a slow start with the team having to wait until Round 4 to claim its first win of the season before finishing the regular season off with a five-match undefeated run.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Modern jug bands still play many Memphis Jug Band songs. Generally the only songs recognizable to a wider audience are those that were covered by rock groups in the 1960s.

Target: Modern jug bands still play many Memphis Jug Band songs, but generally the only songs recognizable to a wider audience are those that were covered by rock groups in the 1960s.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Whose weakness does not amount to imbecility. Who require care, supervision, or control, for their protection or for the protection of others, or, in the case of children, are incapable of receiving benefit from the instruction in ordinary schools.

Target: Whose weakness does not amount to imbecility, yet who require care, supervision, or control, for their protection or for the protection of others, or, in the case of children, are incapable of receiving benefit from the instruction in ordinary schools.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Stephenson moved to Toronto to become host of a weekly public affairs television program. Stephenson later moved to Ottawa where Stephenson is parliamentary Stephenson for CTV News Channel and host of the political affairs program Power Play.

Target: Stephenson moved to Toronto to become host of a weekly public affairs television program. She later moved to Ottawa where she is parliamentary reporter for CTV News Channel and host of the political affairs program Power Play.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: His grandson Robert Harvey -- son of Jeff -- was one of the leading Australian rules footballers of the 1990s and the early 21st century. one made his Australian Football League debut for St Kilda Football Club in 1988 and played 21 seasons.

Target: His grandson Robert Harvey -- son of Jeff -- was one of the leading Australian rules footballers of the 1990s and the early 21st century. Robert made his Australian Football League debut for St Kilda Football Club in 1988 and played 21 seasons.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: These parents reprimand their children for any type of emotional expression, even if the child's actions are appropriate. These children start to view their emotions as inappropriate and invalid, and have a difficult time with emotion regulation.

Target: These parents reprimand their children for any type of emotional expression, even if the child's actions are appropriate. As a result, these children start to view their emotions as inappropriate and invalid, and have a difficult time with emotion regulation.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Metalo (now named George Grant) had a new suit of armor and had also taken a serum to increase his strength to superhuman levels. Metalo exposed Superman to a ray that reduced Metalo's power significantly Metalo Metalo superior strength in their first battle.

Target: Metalo (now named George Grant) had a new suit of armor and had also taken a serum to increase his strength to superhuman levels. He exposed Superman to a ray that reduced his power significantly giving Metalo superior strength in their first battle.


Source: Make the text clearer: Those days, Metlakatla. B.C., has remained among the smallest of the Tsimshian communities.

Target: Since those days, Metlakatla, B.C., has remained among the smallest of the Tsimshian communities.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Cherrington broke down the numbers. Cherrington said 58 percent of riders use transit to get to work, 20 percent use it for shopping or personal business, and about 10 percent of riders use a bus or train to get to school.

Target: Breaking down the numbers, Cherrington said 58 percent of riders use transit to get to work, 20 percent use it for shopping or personal business, and about 10 percent of riders use a bus or train to get to school.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The programs promote critical and analytical thinking. Participants are capable of achieving a better future based in reasoned and conscientious decisions.

Target: The programs promote critical and analytical thinking so that participants are capable of achieving a better future based in reasoned and conscientious decisions.


Source: Fix coherence: Former Professor in English and Related Literature at the University of York, Michael is now Professor of Theatre for the University's purpose built Theatre, Film and Television department. Michael is the former general Michael of Oxford English Drama for Oxford University Press.

Target: Former Professor in English and Related Literature at the University of York, Michael is now Professor of Theatre for the University's purpose built Theatre, Film and Television department. He is the former general editor of Oxford English Drama for Oxford University Press.


Source: Make the text coherent: The Hovertrain incident came to be regarded as the worst example of lying to the House of Commons since the Profumo Affair a decade earlier, and Heseltine survived. Full details only emerged during the Parliamentary summer recess.

Target: The Hovertrain incident came to be regarded as the worst example of lying to the House of Commons since the Profumo Affair a decade earlier, and Heseltine survived because full details only emerged during the Parliamentary summer recess.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Heseltine was quite ruthless about moving civil servants with whom he was dissatisfied. Nonetheless staff thought Heseltine had mellowed somewhat since the early 1970s, and was more relaxed and fun to work with.

Target: Heseltine was quite ruthless about moving civil servants with whom he was dissatisfied, but nonetheless staff thought he had mellowed somewhat since the early 1970s, and was more relaxed and fun to work with.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In 1993, Jackson changed his name to Dyson. Jackson's legal last name was Dyson Dyson, Jackson was partial to Jackson Jackson.

Target: In 1993, Jackson changed his name to Dyson. Although, his legal last name was always Dyson, he was partial to using Jackson.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: On January 2, 2015 it was announced that. Doctors expect the condition to heal with rest and medication.

Target: On January 2, 2015 it was announced that, although doctors expect the condition to heal with rest and medication.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Mickey's Piano Lesson-When Minnie signs herself and Mickey up to perform in a piano recital, Mickey decides the music is too easy for him to practice. When Mickey begins the performance, Mickey realizes that without practice things never go as planned.

Target: Mickey's Piano Lesson-When Minnie signs herself and Mickey up to perform in a piano recital, Mickey decides the music is too easy for him to practice. But when he begins the performance, he realizes that without practice things never go as planned.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: They are believed by many to be around 1500 years old. Various people date many from as wide a time period as 500 AD to 1445 AD.

Target: They are believed by many to be around 1500 years old, although various people date them from as wide a time period as 500 AD to 1445 AD.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Shire Reckoning is the calendar used in the Red Book of Westmarch, and. In The Lord of the Rings.

Target: The Shire Reckoning is the calendar used in the Red Book of Westmarch, and hence in The Lord of the Rings.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1907, Lautner married Vida Cathleen Gallagher, the daughter of Irish immigrants and one of his students at Northern. The couple had two children: Lautner (later an influential architect), born in 1911, and Kathleen Lautner, born in 1915.

Target: In 1907, Lautner married Vida Cathleen Gallagher, the daughter of Irish immigrants and one of his students at Northern. The couple had two children: John Lautner Jr (later an influential architect), born in 1911, and Kathleen Lautner, born in 1915.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The core of this text developed in the mid-3rd century as a critique and commentary of the Mishnah. Subsequent additions and editing went on for some time afterwards.

Target: The core of this text developed in the mid-3rd century as a critique and commentary of the Mishnah, although subsequent additions and editing went on for some time afterwards.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Girls jumped over it. Boys watched the spectacle.

Target: Girls jumped over it, while boys watched the spectacle.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Coming to the art with a background in high school wrestling. Fowler did not begin formal grappling training until after high school in 2001, moving to Maryland to enter into Lloyd Irvin's advanced grappling program.

Target: Although coming to the art with a background in high school wrestling, Fowler did not begin formal grappling training until after high school in 2001, moving to Maryland to enter into Lloyd Irvin's advanced grappling program.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: From the mouth of Frontenac Lake (Milieu River) according to the following segments: Frontenac Lake (Milieu River) is the Milieu River flows over 17.8 kilometres (11.1 mi) through marsh areas.

Target: From the mouth of Frontenac Lake (Milieu River), the Milieu River flows over 17.8 kilometres (11.1 mi) through marsh areas, according to the following segments :


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: They allied themselves with Shams. They besieged Ray and eventually imprisoned Majd in the hilltop fortress of Tabarak, adjoining the city.

Target: Allying themselves with Shams, they besieged Ray and eventually imprisoned Majd in the hilltop fortress of Tabarak, adjoining the city.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: During that time, grade 7 was moved to Raymond E. Shaw Elementary School. Grades 8 through 12 remained at the high school.

Target: During that time, grade 7 was moved to Raymond E. Shaw Elementary School, while grades 8 through 12 remained at the high school.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Duris then ran for mayor in 1972, defeating Kenneth Stuart in the November election and taking office on January 2, 1973. During this time Duris owned Duris's Sweet Shop from 1971 to 1974, and left Tektronix in 1977.

Target: Duris then ran for mayor in 1972, defeating Kenneth Stuart in the November election and taking office on January 2, 1973. During this time he owned Miller's Sweet Shop from 1971 to 1974, and left Tektronix in 1977.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Millerosaurus is an extinct genus of millerettid parareptile from the Late Permian (Changhsingian stage) of South Africa. Millerosaurus was a small genus which reached a length of 30 cm.

Target: Millerosaurus is an extinct genus of millerettid parareptile from the Late Permian (Changhsingian stage) of South Africa. It was a small animal which reached a length of 30 cm.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It turns west, crossing Perrineville Road and Applegarth Road. It receives many small tributaries.

Target: It turns west, crossing Perrineville Road and Applegarth Road. Meanwhile, it receives many small tributaries.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Ezrati retired from Lord Abbett in 2015. Ezrati Ezrati is a frequent Ezrati in the media on financial markets and economics.

Target: Ezrati retired from Lord Abbett in 2015. Additionally, Mr. Ezrati is a frequent commentator in the media on financial markets and economics.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Grafman pended the establishment of their own church facility. Grafman offered his congregation's synagogue for the newly formed church worship services.

Target: Pending the establishment of their own church facility, Grafman offered his congregation's synagogue for the newly formed church worship services.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: We notice that the infimum is taken over compact sets and. Can be replaced by a minimum.

Target: We notice that the infimum is taken over compact sets and hence can be replaced by a minimum.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Descartes clearly identified the mind with consciousness and self-awareness and distinguished this from the brain as the seat of intelligence. He was the first to formulate the mind -- body problem in the form in which it exists today.

Target: Descartes clearly identified the mind with consciousness and self-awareness and distinguished this from the brain as the seat of intelligence. Hence, he was the first to formulate the mind -- body problem in the form in which it exists today.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Chalmers states that one probably could not build a living p-zombie. Living things seem to require a level of consciousness.

Target: Chalmers states that one probably could not build a living p-zombie because living things seem to require a level of consciousness.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: According to Immanuel Kant's philosophy, there is a distinction between actions done by desire and the ones performed by liberty (categorical imperative). Not all physical actions are caused by either matter or freedom.

Target: According to Immanuel Kant's philosophy, there is a distinction between actions done by desire and the ones performed by liberty (categorical imperative). Thus, not all physical actions are caused by either matter or freedom.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She reasons that the killer would not be able to resist setting the clock to the correct time. She grabs a black light to scan Gabe's hands and reveal him as the killer.

Target: Reasoning that the killer would not be able to resist setting the clock to the correct time, she grabs a black light to scan Gabe's hands and reveal him as the killer.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The simplest weighting function in common usage is based upon the inverse of the distance of the sample from the point to be estimated, usually raised to the second power. Higher or lower powers may be useful.

Target: The simplest weighting function in common usage is based upon the inverse of the distance of the sample from the point to be estimated, usually raised to the second power, although higher or lower powers may be useful.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Like scholar-officials, military generals were ranked in a hierarchic grading system and were given merit evaluations every five years (as opposed to three years for officials). Military officers had less prestige than officials.

Target: Like scholar-officials, military generals were ranked in a hierarchic grading system and were given merit evaluations every five years (as opposed to three years for officials). However, military officers had less prestige than officials.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Yet his ideas penetrated mainstream Chinese thought and spurred new interest in Taoism and Buddhism. People began to question the validity of the social hierarchy and the idea that the scholar should be above the farmer.

Target: Yet his ideas penetrated mainstream Chinese thought and spurred new interest in Taoism and Buddhism. Furthermore, people began to question the validity of the social hierarchy and the idea that the scholar should be above the farmer.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: About 25,000 years ago, the Mississippi River ran between the Ozark Mountains and a terrace called Crowley's Ridge. Around 18,000 years ago, the river shifted, slicing its way through Crowley's Ridge to join the Ohio River further north.

Target: About 25,000 years ago, the Mississippi River ran between the Ozark Mountains and a terrace called Crowley's Ridge. Then, around 18,000 years ago, the river shifted, slicing its way through Crowley's Ridge to join the Ohio River further north.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This character,. Usually in blackface.

Target: This character, although usually in blackface.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Trends in Internet memes also carry the phenomenon. The Ugandan knuckles meme that we could find all over the Internet in late 2017 would mock the Uganda people and culture.

Target: Trends in Internet memes also carry the phenomenon. The Ugandan knuckles meme for instance, that we could find all over the Internet in late 2017 would mock the Uganda people and culture.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Non-black stereotypes played a significant role in minstrelsy,. Still performed in blackface.

Target: Non-black stereotypes played a significant role in minstrelsy, and although still performed in blackface.


Source: Make the text clearer: Upper-class houses at first limited the number of such acts they would show. Beginning in 1841, blackface performers frequently took to the stage at even the classy Park Theatre, much to the dismay of some patrons.

Target: Upper-class houses at first limited the number of such acts they would show, but beginning in 1841, blackface performers frequently took to the stage at even the classy Park Theatre, much to the dismay of some patrons.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Self-recognition may be a case of convergent evolution, where similar evolutionary pressures result in similar behaviours or traits. Species arrive at them via different routes.

Target: Self-recognition may be a case of convergent evolution, where similar evolutionary pressures result in similar behaviours or traits, although species arrive at them via different routes.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: There is some debate as to the interpretation of the results of the mirror test. Researchers in one study have identified some potential problems with the test as a means of gauging self-awareness in young children and animals.

Target: There is some debate as to the interpretation of the results of the mirror test, and researchers in one study have identified some potential problems with the test as a means of gauging self-awareness in young children and animals.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It stretches from Lake Balaton to north of Budapest, marked by the Danube Bend. It separates the Little and Great Hungarian Plain.

Target: Stretching from Lake Balaton to north of Budapest, marked by the Danube Bend, it separates the Little and Great Hungarian Plain.


Source: Make the text coherent: He sent thousands of pounds of heroin to Japan via London. He came under investigation by authorities after customs officials became suspicious of an unusually large order of dolls shipped from Hamburg, Germany to his firm.

Target: Sending thousands of pounds of heroin to Japan via London, he came under investigation by authorities after customs officials became suspicious of an unusually large order of dolls shipped from Hamburg, Germany to his firm.


Source: Fix coherence: Agents examined each by hand. Agents discovered thousands of dollars' worth of cocaine had been smuggled inside nearly a dozen dolls.

Target: Examining each by hand, agents discovered thousands of dollars' worth of cocaine had been smuggled inside nearly a dozen dolls.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In summer many people swam with Moko at Mahia. Residents believed that during the winter, when there were fewer people, the dolphin got lonely and bored.

Target: In summer many people swam with Moko at Mahia, but residents believed that during the winter, when there were fewer people, the dolphin got lonely and bored.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In 1492 the Catholic Monarchs conquered the Kingdom of Granada in southern Spain, the last Muslim territory in the Iberian peninsula. This date marks the unification of territory.

Target: In 1492 the Catholic Monarchs conquered the Kingdom of Granada in southern Spain, the last Muslim territory in the Iberian peninsula. This date marks the unification of Spain.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The royal household coordinates with the Foreign Ministry to ensure successful diplomatic engagements. Other members of the royal family, most notably the Prince of Asturias, may represent the Spanish State internationally.

Target: The royal household coordinates with the Foreign Ministry to ensure successful diplomatic engagements. Additionally, other members of the royal family, most notably the Prince of Asturias, may represent the Spanish State internationally.


Source: Fix sentence flow: I do not feel a stranger in your company. My functions are not limited to being your king and to holding the Supreme Command of the Armed Forces.

Target: I do not feel a stranger in your company, and my functions are not limited to being your king and to holding the Supreme Command of the Armed Forces.


Source: Make the text coherent: The president may call for earlier elections, but no sooner than a year after the prior General Election. If the Government loses the confidence of the Cortes, then it must resign.

Target: The president may call for earlier elections, but no sooner than a year after the prior General Election. Additionally, if the Government loses the confidence of the Cortes, then it must resign.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Originally, Mong Pan was one of the many smaller states that made up the Shan region of Myanmar. Later Mong Pan became part of Shan State.

Target: Originally, Mong Pan was one of the many smaller states that made up the Shan region of Myanmar, but later it became part of Shan State.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The term originally referred to the wild dogs of India. Now refers to dogs belonging to or descended from a population of wild or feral dogs.

Target: The term originally referred to the wild dogs of India, but now refers to dogs belonging to or descended from a population of wild or feral dogs.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In 1876, the Moonta Mining Company became the first mining company in Australia to pay out one million pounds in dividends. Living conditions were poor and many lives were lost to disease during this time.

Target: In 1876, the Moonta Mining Company became the first mining company in Australia to pay out one million pounds in dividends. However, living conditions were poor and many lives were lost to disease during this time.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Early Mortal Kombat games were known for their extensive use of palette swap, a practice of re-coloring certain sprites to appear as different characters which was used for the ninja characters. Many of the most popular characters have originated as simple palette swaps.

Target: Early Mortal Kombat games were known for their extensive use of palette swap, a practice of re-coloring certain sprites to appear as different characters which was used for the ninja characters. In fact, many of the most popular characters have originated as simple palette swaps.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In monarchic Judah the Yahweh-alone party were a permanent minority ;. Sometimes able to win over a king like Josiah to party's cause.

Target: In monarchic Judah the Yahweh-alone party were a permanent minority ; although sometimes able to win over a king like Josiah to their cause.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The files of the FBI are loaded with instances of gangsters who have hidden out in unregulated tourist camps. Officers combed the country for gangsters.

Target: The files of the FBI are loaded with instances of gangsters who have hidden out in unregulated tourist camps, while officers combed the country for them.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Hanshin station is the western terminus of the Main Line. Service continues west on the Kobe Rapid Railway.

Target: The Hanshin station is the western terminus of the Main Line, although service continues west on the Kobe Rapid Railway.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Audiences for the Xfinity and Camping World Truck series are considerably smaller, and. Lower station clearance.

Target: Audiences for the Xfinity and Camping World Truck series are considerably smaller, and hence lower station clearance.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Which dug at these mounds. Which were seemingly related to Mound Hill, produced artifacts such as pottery and a pipe, as well as numerous stone box graves.

Target: Digging at these mounds, which were seemingly related to Mound Hill, produced artifacts such as pottery and a pipe, as well as numerous stone box graves.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: There is no verifiable evidence of its earliest volcanic activity. Geologists estimate that Mount Elgon is at least 24 million years old, making it the oldest extinct volcano in East Africa.

Target: Although there is no verifiable evidence of its earliest volcanic activity, geologists estimate that Mount Elgon is at least 24 million years old, making it the oldest extinct volcano in East Africa.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The name was applied to this highest mountain on Elephant Island by the United Kingdom Antarctic Place-Names Committee (UK-APC) in 1971 and acknowledges Prince Charles as royal patron of the Joint Services Expedition. Prince Charles is the Prince of Wales.

Target: The name was applied to this highest mountain on Elephant Island by the United Kingdom Antarctic Place-Names Committee (UK-APC) in 1971 and acknowledges Prince Charles, the Prince of Wales, as royal patron of the Joint Services Expedition.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Sugu performs in Swahili. Sugu addresses social issues that plague both urban and rural peoples in the African Great Lakes region.

Target: Performing in Swahili, Sugu addresses social issues that plague both urban and rural peoples in the African Great Lakes region.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The NFL draft was cut to its current seven-round format in 1994. Players presented with this dubious honor have more often succeeded in making the team that drafted them, with some making significant contributions on the field.

Target: Since the NFL draft was cut to its current seven-round format in 1994, players presented with this dubious honor have more often succeeded in making the team that drafted them, with some making significant contributions on the field.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Back at the house of Brainsick, Mrs. Brainsick is meeting with Mr. Woodall in secret. There is a knock at the door and Tricksy enters while Mrs. Mrs. hides under the bed.

Target: Back at the house of Brainsick, Mrs. Brainsick is meeting with Mr. Woodall in secret. Then, there is a knock at the door and Tricksy enters while Mrs. Brainsick hides under the bed.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He stressed on the need to spread the message far and wide. He wished that message from the leaders could be carried to the villages through dramas and plays.

Target: Stressing on the need to spread the message far and wide, he wished that message from the leaders could be carried to the villages through dramas and plays.


Source: Make the text more logical: The sonic characteristics of these different amplifier configurations are extremely different. For a lot of guitar players it is important to have the tonal palette of all three.

Target: The sonic characteristics of these different amplifier configurations are extremely different and for a lot of guitar players it is important to have the tonal palette of all three.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: About 2009, the Berlin Mumblecore movement has had its own manifesto. Sehr gutes Manifest.

Target: Since about 2009, the Berlin Mumblecore movement has had its own manifesto, Sehr gutes Manifest.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The reports came as a surprise to the Hussains who believed the motive was robbery. During the Hussains' first trial, John Price QC, prosecuting, noted :

Target: The reports came as a surprise to the Hussains who believed the motive was robbery. However during the Hussains' first trial, John Price QC, prosecuting, noted :


Source: Make the text coherent: One witness recorded the vehicle's license plate number. Police were alerted to another murder, of businessman Michael Fuoss at a gravel business he owned.

Target: One witness recorded the vehicle's license plate number. Meanwhile, police were alerted to another murder, of businessman Michael Fuoss at a gravel business he owned.


Source: Make the text clearer: Murex forskoehlii is a species of large predatory sea snail the rock snails or murex snails. A species of large predatory sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Muricidae.

Target: Murex forskoehlii is a species of large predatory sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Muricidae, the rock snails or murex snails.


Source: Fix coherence: Pluripotency, namely pluripotent marker expression, triploblastic differentiation and self-renewability, are recognized in Muse cells directly collected from BM aspirates, indicating that their characteristics are not newly acquired by in vitro manipulation. They Muse not modified under culture conditions.

Target: Pluripotency, namely pluripotent marker expression, triploblastic differentiation and self-renewability, are recognized in Muse cells directly collected from BM aspirates, indicating that their characteristics are not newly acquired by in vitro manipulation nor are they modified under culture conditions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Furthermore, Muse cell-derived melanocytes showed melanin production. When Muse cell-derived melanocytes was transplanted onto the back skin of severe combined immunodeficient mice, Muse integrated to the basal layer of the epidermis producing melanin in vivo.

Target: Furthermore, Muse cell-derived melanocytes showed melanin production. Moreover, when Muse cell-derived melanocytes was transplanted onto the back skin of severe combined immunodeficient mice, they integrated to the basal layer of the epidermis producing melanin in vivo.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A recording artist can record a song and sell it to another band or company. That particular company will own the recording, but not the song.

Target: A recording artist can record a song and sell it to another band or company. As a result, that particular company will own the recording, but not the song.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: As the influence of the missionaries diminished in the 20th century the siva dance tradition from Samoa became popular. This dance focuses on the individual dancers who have space in which to perform the steps and arm, hand and body movements of the Samoa siva dance tradition.

Target: As the influence of the missionaries diminished in the 20th century the siva dance tradition from Samoa became popular. This dance focuses on the individual dancers who have space in which to perform the steps and arm, hand and body movements of the Samoan siva dance tradition.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Muslim Brotherhood played a major role in dissent against the secular Ba'ath Party during the period 1976-1982. Membership in the Muslim Brotherhood in Syria became a capital offence in 1980.

Target: The Muslim Brotherhood played a major role in dissent against the secular Ba'ath Party during the period 1976-1982, and membership in the Brotherhood in Syria became a capital offence in 1980.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Created by Rob Liefeld, Externals are immortal mutants whose powers have allowed them to exist for centuries. Most of the mutants are killed by Selene.

Target: Created by Rob Liefeld, Externals are immortal mutants whose powers have allowed them to exist for centuries. Eventually, most of the Externals are killed by Selene.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Mutual liberty pervades all sectors of society, from the homeless man on the street to the premier of the state. liberty is the liberty through which a general sense of morality gets exerted on the widest range of people in any given communal setting.

Target: Mutual liberty pervades all sectors of society, from the homeless man on the street to the premier of the state. It is the process through which a general sense of morality gets exerted on the widest range of people in any given communal setting.


Source: Fix coherence: Schneider writes numerous publications on safety, proliferation and economic trends of the nuclear industry. Schneider is Schneider of the 2009 book International Perspectives on Energy Policy and the Role of Nuclear Power.

Target: Schneider writes numerous publications on safety, proliferation and economic trends of the nuclear industry. He is co-editor of the 2009 book International Perspectives on Energy Policy and the Role of Nuclear Power.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Padma Bhushan in 2016. The Padma Bhushan is india's third highest civilian honour by the Government of India for his outstanding contribution in the field of Sanskrit.

Target: The Padma Bhushan, India's third highest civilian honour by the Government of India for his outstanding contribution in the field of Sanskrit, in 2016.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The NACAC Mountain Running Championships is an annual Mountain running competition organized by NACAC for athletes representing the countries of its member associations. Until 2012, only the participation of athletes from Canada, Mexico, and the United States was reported.

Target: The NACAC Mountain Running Championships is an annual Mountain running competition organized by NACAC for athletes representing the countries of its member associations. However, until 2012, only the participation of athletes from Canada, Mexico, and the United States was reported.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: These promotions are part of a push for NBC to create and distribute future reality TV shows. Late night programming was removed from Teledgy's portfolio, which also included annual specials.

Target: These promotions are part of a push for NBC to create and distribute future reality TV shows. However, late night programming was removed from Teledgy's portfolio, which also included annual specials.


Source: Make the text coherent: New Lantao Bus Hong Kong New Lantao Bus is a bus service operator on Lantau Island.

Target: New Lantao Bus, a bus service operator on Lantau Island, Hong Kong


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Diodorus relates how the Nabataeans survive in a waterless desert. How Nabataeans managed to defeat any enemies by hiding in the desert until the latter would surrender for lack of water.

Target: Diodorus relates how the Nabataeans survive in a waterless desert and how they managed to defeat any enemies by hiding in the desert until the latter would surrender for lack of water.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Faadhippolu Atoll Hospital is the only Medical facility in Naifaru. Naifaru is the state level Naifaru of Faadhippolhu and so people from Naifaru, people from neighbor islands, and people from neighboring atolls visit Naifaru for medical procedures.

Target: Faadhippolu Atoll Hospital is the only Medical facility in Naifaru. It is the state level Hospital of Faadhippolhu and so people from Naifaru, people from neighbor islands, and people from neighboring atolls visit it for medical procedures.


Source: Make the text clearer: Fishing is still a major income generator for the island. Working in resort islands has gained popularity among the youth in the last few years.

Target: Fishing is still a major income generator for the island, although working in resort islands has gained popularity among the youth in the last few years.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Work remains to be done to win clinical approval for the technology. Results from Sengupta's lab indicate that the nanocells are more effective and less toxic than traditional chemotherapy.

Target: Work remains to be done to win clinical approval for the technology, but results from Sengupta's lab indicate that the nanocells are more effective and less toxic than traditional chemotherapy.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Nanotechnology offers a way to deliver chemotherapeutic drugs and anti-angiogenic drugs in the same vehicle. As the blood supply is shut off.

Target: Nanotechnology offers a way to deliver chemotherapeutic drugs and anti-angiogenic drugs in the same vehicle so that as the blood supply is shut off.


Source: Fix sentence flow: SWCD supervisors do not receive monetary compensation, and, for the most part, conduct their activities on their own time. Supervisors are supervisors of a five-person board for the district, to which they can either be elected or appointed.

Target: SWCD supervisors do not receive monetary compensation, and, for the most part, conduct their activities on their own time. Supervisors are members of a five-person board for the district, to which they can either be elected or appointed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Galen was being terrorized by ex-husband Carter Jones, newly released from prison after serving a sentence for spousal abuse. Trevor was determined to catch ex-husband in the act.

Target: Galen was being terrorized by ex-husband Carter Jones, newly released from prison after serving a sentence for spousal abuse. Trevor was determined to catch Carter in the act.


Source: Make the text clearer: Two days prior to the program's approval Davis told Henry Kissinger that he believed maintaining the secrecy of IA Feature would be impossible. Henry Kissinger is the Secretary of State.

Target: Two days prior to the program's approval Davis told Henry Kissinger, the Secretary of State, that he believed maintaining the secrecy of IA Feature would be impossible.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: PCT based itself on the MNR charter from 1966. Unlike MNR, PCT was a vanguard PCT.

Target: PCT based itself on the MNR charter from 1966, but unlike MNR, PCT was a vanguard party.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mongolia is also within the ROC's official borders. Since 2002, the government has extended recognition to the Mongolia government and permitted citizens of Mongolia to use their passports to enter ROC in lieu of an entry permit.

Target: Mongolia is also within the ROC's official borders, but since 2002, the government has extended recognition to the Mongolian government and permitted citizens of Mongolia to use their passports to enter Taiwan in lieu of an entry permit.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: For instance, overseas Chinese passport holders are required to apply for a visa to enter the Schengen area,. No visa is required for the regular passport holders.

Target: For instance, overseas Chinese passport holders are required to apply for a visa to enter the Schengen area, whereas no visa is required for the regular passport holders.


Source: Fix coherence: No duty exists where the relationship is one of master and servant, or where the individual holds office at the pleasure of the authority. A duty to act fairly exists where the individual can not be removed from office except for cause.

Target: No duty exists where the relationship is one of master and servant, or where the individual holds office at the pleasure of the authority. On the other hand, a duty to act fairly exists where the individual can not be removed from office except for cause.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: This may occur when the submissions were accidentally omitted. Were so unconvincing that it was not necessary to explicitly state the adjudicator's findings.

Target: This may occur when the submissions were accidentally omitted, or were so unconvincing that it was not necessary to explicitly state the adjudicator's findings.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: One example of a strategy for designing a NUI not based in RBI is the strict limiting of functionality and customization. Users have very little to learn in the operation of a device.

Target: One example of a strategy for designing a NUI not based in RBI is the strict limiting of functionality and customization, so that users have very little to learn in the operation of a device.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The music was composed by Kanu Ghosh. Lyrics was written by Sreekumaran Thampi.

Target: The music was composed by Kanu Ghosh and lyrics was written by Sreekumaran Thampi.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Millions of Soviet soldiers and civilians disappeared into German detention camps and slave labor factories. Millions more suffered permanent physical and mental damage.

Target: Millions of Soviet soldiers and civilians disappeared into German detention camps and slave labor factories, while millions more suffered permanent physical and mental damage.


Source: Fix coherence: At the time, the Soviets had little of interest to foreign buyers in general. Another factor that slowed economic relations was the Soviets foreign trade monopoly of combining all transactions into a single government buyer.

Target: At the time, the Soviets had little of interest to foreign buyers in general. Another factor that slowed economic relations was the Soviet foreign trade monopoly of combining all transactions into a single government buyer.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It lacked the criteria discriminating fossil species of the genus Homo with those of Homo sapiens. Many colleagues referred to the Bible (Genesis 1), suggesting finds from such a high age could not be determined.

Target: It lacked the criteria discriminating fossil species of the genus Homo with those of Homo sapiens. Moreover, many colleagues referred to the Bible (Genesis 1), suggesting finds from such a high age could not be determined.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It has been speculated that people who more carefully analyse their world feel a greater sense of mastery, and. Greater self-esteem.

Target: It has been speculated that people who more carefully analyse their world feel a greater sense of mastery, and hence greater self-esteem.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: We were all Nellie Bright's children. Nellie Bright expected great things from children.

Target: We were all Nellie Bright's children and she expected great things from us.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Other members of the band said they would use other people's equipment. With time running out, Wonder agreed.

Target: Other members of the band said they would use other people's equipment. Finally, with time running out, Wonder agreed.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The estimated audience for the Mandela 70th Birthday Tribute of 600 million in 67 countries was arguably an underestimate in that several broadcasters in Africa were given a free licence. The apartheid government did not allow the event to be broadcast in Africa.

Target: The estimated audience for the Mandela 70th Birthday Tribute of 600 million in 67 countries was arguably an underestimate in that several broadcasters in Africa were given a free licence. However, the apartheid government did not allow the event to be broadcast in South Africa.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In its Bulgarian section the cable system crosses directly between the cities of Russe and Svilengrad, using the shortest possible route. It connects three borders of Bulgarian-Romania to the north and Turkey and Greece to the south.

Target: In its Bulgarian section the cable system crosses directly between the cities of Russe and Svilengrad, using the shortest possible route. It connects three borders of Bulgaria-Romania to the north and Turkey and Greece to the south.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Virtually no part of the New International Economic Order was implemented. From the 1980s onward, the Bretton Woods framework would be replaced with the Washington Consensus and economic globalization on terms often described as neoliberal.

Target: Virtually no part of the New International Economic Order was implemented. Instead, from the 1980s onward, the Bretton Woods framework would be replaced with the Washington Consensus and economic globalization on terms often described as neoliberal.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Marcellus Leonard, a merchant from nearby Saranac Lake, originally proposed the highway in the late 19th century. Serious plans for the highway did not develop until the 1920s.

Target: Marcellus Leonard, a merchant from nearby Saranac Lake, originally proposed the highway in the late 19th century. However, serious plans for the highway did not develop until the 1920s.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Bigger prey such as fish and freshwater crayfish are sometimes eaten too. Their bill, being short and pointed, is adapted to their mainly invertebrate diet.

Target: Bigger prey such as fish and freshwater crayfish are sometimes eaten too. Thus, their bill, being short and pointed, is adapted to their mainly invertebrate diet.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1994, the IUCN classified the New Zealand grebe as Endangered. Due to conservation actions including habitat management, IUCN's population has recently increased to around 1,900-2,000 birds and was reclassified as Near Threatened in 2016.

Target: In 1994, the IUCN classified the New Zealand grebe as Endangered, but due to conservation actions including habitat management, its population has recently increased to around 1,900-2,000 birds and was reclassified as Near Threatened in 2016.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Hatched chicks are precocial. Being flightless for the first few weeks they can swim and dive.

Target: Hatched chicks are precocial, although being flightless for the first few weeks they can swim and dive.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Newbridge-on-Wye proved to be an ideal location for drovers to stop and rest. It afforded a safe crossing-point on the Newbridge-on-Wye Newbridge-on-Wye.

Target: Newbridge-on-Wye proved to be an ideal location for drovers to stop and rest because it afforded a safe crossing-point on the river Wye.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Ingram uses Commissions of Sewers records of 1576 -- 1578 to deduce that the actor Jerome Savage lived adjacent to the sewer. Thus the playhouse was in the northern part of the plot.

Target: Ingram uses Commissions of Sewers records of 1576 -- 1578 to deduce that the actor Jerome Savage lived adjacent to the sewer and thus the playhouse was in the northern part of the plot.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He was a lecturer in the Oslo and Tanum school systems from 1935-38. lecturer was editorial lecturer of Fritt Ord from 1936-37.

Target: He was a lecturer in the Oslo and Tanum school systems from 1935-38. He was editorial secretary of Fritt Ord from 1936-37.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He also wrote a popular book, Have a Nice Doomsday, on Christian fundamentalist belief in the Rapture. How Doomsday is changing American foreign policy towards Israel.

Target: He also wrote a popular book, Have a Nice Doomsday, on Christian fundamentalist belief in the Rapture and how it is changing American foreign policy towards Israel.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: At the outbreak of the Irish Rebellion of 1641, Plunkett attempted to remain neutral. In mid-1642 government troops looted and torched Plunkett's home in Balrath, County Meath Plunkett Plunkett unsurprisingly thereafter gave support to the leaders of the Irish Insurgents.

Target: At the outbreak of the Irish Rebellion of 1641, Plunkett attempted to remain neutral. However, in mid-1642 government troops looted and torched his home in Balrath, County Meath: Plunkett unsurprisingly thereafter gave support to the leaders of the Irish Insurgents.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Pereira tested the pro ranks in the fall of 1988. Pereira registered wins in South Africa against respected top 25 ranked pros Brad Gilbert and Amos Mansdorf.

Target: Testing the pro ranks in the fall of 1988, Pereira registered wins in South Africa against respected top 25 ranked pros Brad Gilbert and Amos Mansdorf.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The company collected information on which stations radios were tuned to in one thousand homes. This survey data was sold to manufacturers who were interested in the popularity of programs and demographic information about listeners for advertising purposes.

Target: The company collected information on which stations radios were tuned to in one thousand homes. Then, this survey data was sold to manufacturers who were interested in the popularity of programs and demographic information about listeners for advertising purposes.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Under an arrangement with Dutch authorities, the tax break was to expire in 2014. Another reorganization transferred the intellectual property from the Bermudan company to a Dutch commanditaire vennootschap or limited partnership, Nike Innovate CV.

Target: Under an arrangement with Dutch authorities, the tax break was to expire in 2014, so another reorganization transferred the intellectual property from the Bermudan company to a Dutch commanditaire vennootschap or limited partnership, Nike Innovate CV.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Arson, as with the rest of The Hives, is known for his onstage antics. His beady eye stares, spitting, blowing on his finger tips, flicking his guitar picks into the crowd and wild animation in playing the guitar.

Target: Arson, as with the rest of The Hives, is known for his onstage antics. In particular, his beady eye stares, spitting, blowing on his finger tips, flicking his guitar picks into the crowd and wild animation in playing the guitar.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Of ethnic Georgian descent (his real name was Baratashvili). He was also an ataman of the Terek Cossacks.

Target: Although of ethnic Georgian descent (his real name was Baratashvili), he was also an ataman of the Terek Cossacks.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Nikolai Buchatskii is a human rights activist and opposition politician in Transnistria. Along with former presidential candidate Alexander Radchenko Nikolai Buchatskii is the human rights activist of Man and His Rights (Chelovek i Ego Prava), the only human rights newspaper in the region.

Target: Nikolai Buchatskii is a human rights activist and opposition politician in Transnistria. Along with former presidential candidate Alexander Radchenko he is the co-founder of Man and His Rights (Chelovek i Ego Prava), the only human rights newspaper in the region.


Source: Make the text coherent: Progress up the river was slow. Often the boats had to be pulled through rapids by rope from shore.

Target: Progress up the river was slow and often the boats had to be pulled through rapids by rope from shore.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Throughout the life of the Almera, many 'special editions' models were available. Most of them didn't feature anything above other models.

Target: Throughout the life of the Almera, many 'special editions' models were available but most of them didn't feature anything above other models.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The first generation was available in Canada until it was replaced by the Rogue, however, both the Rogue and the X-Trail are sold in Mexico. The Rogue shares the same platform as the second X-Trail X-Trail and is very similar to the Qashqai.

Target: The first generation was available in Canada until it was replaced by the Rogue, however, both the Rogue and the X-Trail are sold in Mexico. The Rogue shares the same platform as the second generation X-Trail and is very similar to the Qashqai.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1900 he was removed from the general staff for his anti-Dreyfusard attitude. He became deputy to Joseph Joffre 1911 to 1914.

Target: In 1900 he was removed from the general staff for his anti-Dreyfusard attitude. Nevertheless he became deputy to Joseph Joffre 1911 to 1914.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The convoy was strongly defended by Japanese fighters,. All nine Hudsons returned to Singapore.

Target: The convoy was strongly defended by Japanese fighters, and although all nine Hudsons returned to Singapore.


Source: Fix coherence errors: No. 356 Squadron had many Canadian members from the Royal Canadian Air Force. The only British Commonwealth Air Training Plan Liberator Conversion Unit was in Canadian at Boundary Bay.

Target: No. 356 Squadron had many Canadian members from the Royal Canadian Air Force because the only British Commonwealth Air Training Plan Liberator Conversion Unit was in Canada at Boundary Bay.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Unlike the associative case, elements with a (two-sided) multiplicative inverse might also be a zero divisor. All non-zero elements of the sedenions have a two-sided inverse, but some of them are also zero divisors.

Target: Unlike the associative case, elements with a (two-sided) multiplicative inverse might also be a zero divisor. For example, all non-zero elements of the sedenions have a two-sided inverse, but some of them are also zero divisors.


Source: Make the text more coherent: However, the usual skewness is not generally a good measure of asymmetry for this distribution. If the degrees of freedom is not larger than 3.

Target: However, the usual skewness is not generally a good measure of asymmetry for this distribution, because if the degrees of freedom is not larger than 3.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He is the developer of a customer satisfaction model (now known as the Kano model) whose simple ranking scheme distinguishes between essential and differentiating attributes related to concepts of customer quality. Kano is a Kano of the Tokyo University of Science.

Target: He is the developer of a customer satisfaction model (now known as the Kano model) whose simple ranking scheme distinguishes between essential and differentiating attributes related to concepts of customer quality. He is a professor emeritus of the Tokyo University of Science.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 1984, routine maintenance discovered several loose rivets on the spar. Further examination showed that the skin was starting to separate from the spar.

Target: In 1984, routine maintenance discovered several loose rivets on the spar and further examination showed that the skin was starting to separate from the spar.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It was proposed to transfer Ballycastle and the Glens, including Rathlin Island, in Moyle to East Antrim and rename that seat Antrim Coast & Glens. That proposal raised many questions, with some arguing that the Glens have no natural ties to Jordanstown.

Target: It was proposed to transfer Ballycastle and the Glens, including Rathlin Island, in Moyle to East Antrim and rename that seat Antrim Coast & Glens. However that proposal raised many questions, with some arguing that the Glens have no natural ties to Jordanstown.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Most other plans called for 710 ft (220 m) or 725 ft (221 m). Six had lengths between 660 ft.

Target: Most other plans called for 710 ft (220 m) or 725 ft (221 m), although six had lengths between 660 ft.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Structural damage beneath the first turret rendered her unable to fire. In absolute need.

Target: Structural damage beneath the first turret rendered her unable to fire unless in absolute need.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Lastly, there would be an issue with the propellers ; the Iowa class' were 19 ft (5.8 m) wide, while the North Carolinas were 17 ft (5.2 m). No conversions were undertaken.

Target: Lastly, there would be an issue with the propellers ; the Iowa class' were 19 ft (5.8 m) wide, while the North Carolinas were 17 ft (5.2 m). In the end, no conversions were undertaken.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Barrel life -- the approximate number of rounds a gun could fire before needing to be relined or replaced -- was 395 shells when using AP. If only practice shells were used this figure was significantly higher.

Target: Barrel life -- the approximate number of rounds a gun could fire before needing to be relined or replaced -- was 395 shells when using AP, although if only practice shells were used this figure was significantly higher.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Norwegian heraldry belongs historically and basically to German-Nordic heraldic tradition. Foreign impressions have found their way into modern heraldry.

Target: Norwegian heraldry belongs historically and basically to German-Nordic heraldic tradition. However, foreign impressions have found their way into modern heraldry.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The common local term for the town is Gorica (i.e., 'Gorizia'). Residents tend to refer to the neighboring Italian town as Gorizia' old Gorizia.

Target: The common local term for the town is Gorica (i.e., 'Gorizia'), while residents tend to refer to the neighboring Italian town as Stara Gorica' old Gorizia.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the national elections, conservative parties (especially the Slovenian Democratic Party) tend to receive better results than in local elections. Remaining behind the left wing forces.

Target: In the national elections, conservative parties (especially the Slovenian Democratic Party) tend to receive better results than in local elections, although remaining behind the left wing forces.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In the UK it was given a scheduled release in the same month by CBS with the catalog number S CBS 82137. Some test pressings were made.

Target: In the UK it was given a scheduled release in the same month by CBS with the catalog number S CBS 82137 and although some test pressings were made.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Imports included: luxury tableware or products from the Mediterranean, such as amphorae of wine, oil, or fish sauce. Very little is known about exports from the Colonia.

Target: Imports included: luxury tableware or products from the Mediterranean, such as amphorae of wine, oil, or fish sauce. However very little is known about exports from the Colonia.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Since the square of every real number is a positive real number, negative numbers do not have real square roots. Every negative number has two imaginary square roots.

Target: Since the square of every real number is a positive real number, negative numbers do not have real square roots. However, every negative number has two imaginary square roots.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: They identify themselves as the International Federation of Armed Revolutionary Groups. They demand the release of all terrorists currently held in NATO countries, or they will deliver the F-14s and nuclear weapons to the Soviet Union.

Target: Identifying themselves as the International Federation of Armed Revolutionary Groups, they demand the release of all terrorists currently held in NATO countries, or they will deliver the F-14s and nuclear weapons to the Soviet Union.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Closure of the canal was considered. Instead Closure was shut in September and October 1871 for the work to be done, and afterwards traffic improved briefly.

Target: Closure of the canal was considered, but instead it was shut in September and October 1871 for the work to be done, and afterwards traffic improved briefly.


Source: Fix coherence errors: BIOS and driver updates to both nForce and GeForce hardware can also be done through System Tools. BIOS supports hardware which is certified under the Enthusiast System Architecture and connects to the motherboard via USB.

Target: BIOS and driver updates to both nForce and GeForce hardware can also be done through System Tools. It additionally supports hardware which is certified under the Enthusiast System Architecture and connects to the motherboard via USB.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A post office was established at Nyhart in 1886, and remained in operation until 1908. The community has the name of Nyhart, an early Nyhart.

Target: A post office was established at Nyhart in 1886, and remained in operation until 1908. The community has the name of Noah Nyhart, an early settler.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Australia ceased to be a member of the OFC on 1 January 2006, having elected to join the Asian Football Confederation (AFC), and. No longer participate in the tournament.

Target: Australia ceased to be a member of the OFC on 1 January 2006, having elected to join the Asian Football Confederation (AFC), and hence no longer participate in the tournament.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In addition, the company stated that it would no longer offer any repair or service support. Third party warranties remain in effect.

Target: In addition, the company stated that it would no longer offer any repair or service support, although third party warranties remain in effect.


Source: Fix sentence flow: We and all other oppressed peoples would welcome spectacle of proof before the world of your title by genocide. We seek peace.

Target: We and all other oppressed peoples would welcome spectacle of proof before the world of your title by genocide. Nevertheless, we seek peace.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On 5 September, fighting primarily raged in the village of Shirokino. Clashes once again took place at Bezimenne.

Target: On 5 September, fighting primarily raged in the village of Shirokino, while clashes once again took place at Bezimenne.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Who retiring in 1972, baseball's Coach Wren gave way to Jerry France. Who coached future World Series skipper Bob Brenly of the Arizona Diamondbacks.

Target: Retiring in 1972, baseball's Coach Wren gave way to Jerry France, who coached future World Series skipper Bob Brenly of the Arizona Diamondbacks.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Kwame runs his own record label One Mic Entertainment and also Firm Bridges Communications, co-founded with his wife. Kwame is Kwame in the shoe manufacturing company Horseman Shoes.

Target: Kwame runs his own record label One Mic Entertainment and also Firm Bridges Communications, co-founded with his wife, and he is partner in the shoe manufacturing company Horseman Shoes.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Very few early McDonald's restaurants remain, largely. McDonald's required McDonald's 'franchisees to restaurants' their buildings.

Target: Very few early McDonald's restaurants remain, largely because McDonald's Corporation required its franchisees to update their buildings.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It went out of business and was demolished in 1972. Part of the sign remains.

Target: It went out of business and was demolished in 1972, although part of the sign remains.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He quickly ignores this and wants her to marry Darren. Before this can happen Celina divulges that Darren is her secret Darren and she was simply using Dhariwal for his money.

Target: He quickly ignores this and wants her to marry Darren. However, before this can happen Celina divulges that Darren is her secret lover and she was simply using Dhariwal for his money.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He immigrated to Canada. He played with Montreal, Quebec's Dawson College Blues.

Target: Immigrating to Canada, he played with Montreal, Quebec's Dawson College Blues.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The company came out with its Initial Public Offering in 2007. Its Initial Public Offering got over-subscribed by 70 times.

Target: The company came out with its Initial Public Offering, which got over-subscribed by 70 times, in 2007.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: On My Face is a 2012 musical comedy album by actress and singer Taryn Southern. Released on October 12, it is actress's debut studio album.

Target: On My Face is a 2012 musical comedy album by actress and singer Taryn Southern. Released on October 12, it is Southern's debut studio album.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In this season participated nine contestants from the past seasons. One extra conestant (also from the past seasons) was in each new release.

Target: In this season participated nine contestants from the past seasons. Moreover, one extra conestant (also from the past seasons) was in each new release.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: By 1700, the Iroquois had seceded from Ontario. The Mississaugas of the Ojibwa had settled the north shore of Ontario.

Target: By 1700, the Iroquois had seceded from Ontario and the Mississaugas of the Ojibwa had settled the north shore of Lake Ontario.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Once the dominant industry, agriculture occupies a small percentage of the population. Much of the land in southern Ontario is given over to agriculture.

Target: Once the dominant industry, agriculture occupies a small percentage of the population. However, much of the land in southern Ontario is given over to agriculture.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In 1998 the American company Procter & Gamble (P&G) was able to introduce its popular Pampers brand to China ; competitors soon followed. Chinese parents at first saw no reason to abandon kaidangku for diapers, and the P&G struggled to gain market share.

Target: In 1998 the American company Procter & Gamble (P&G) was able to introduce its popular Pampers brand to China ; competitors soon followed. However, Chinese parents at first saw no reason to abandon kaidangku for diapers, and the company struggled to gain market share.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Open systems are susceptible to evaporation which can greatly affect readouts when fluid volumes are on the microscale. Due to the nature of open systems, they are more susceptible to contamination than closed systems.

Target: Open systems are susceptible to evaporation which can greatly affect readouts when fluid volumes are on the microscale. Additionally, due to the nature of open systems, they are more susceptible to contamination than closed systems.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Jews working in government jobs were dismissed. Hundreds were arrested for Zionist or Communist activity, both real and imagined, tried in military courts, and were given harsh prison sentences or heavily fined.

Target: Jews working in government jobs were dismissed, and hundreds were arrested for Zionist or Communist activity, both real and imagined, tried in military courts, and were given harsh prison sentences or heavily fined.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Despite this effort, separating the real from the fictional in Operation Shylock is not wholly impossible. Several minor characters from the novel are actual people including John Demjanjuk, Claire Bloom, and Israeli writer and Roth friend Aharon Appelfeld.

Target: Despite this effort, separating the real from the fictional in Operation Shylock is not wholly impossible. For example, several minor characters from the novel are actual people including John Demjanjuk, Claire Bloom, and Israeli writer and Roth friend Aharon Appelfeld.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Peace negotiations with the Taliban were announced by Pakistani Prime Minister Nawaz Sharif after his election. Previous attempts to engage TTP in dialogue had failed.

Target: Peace negotiations with the Taliban were announced by Pakistani Prime Minister Nawaz Sharif after his election, although previous attempts to engage TTP in dialogue had failed.


Source: Fix sentence transition: However, the classic 741 op-amp has a 0.5 V per microsecond slew rate specification. Op-amp's output can rise to no more than 5 V in the sawtooth's 10 microsecond period.

Target: However, the classic 741 op-amp has a 0.5 V per microsecond slew rate specification, so that its output can rise to no more than 5 V in the sawtooth's 10 microsecond period.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Tempo SR has now been replaced in the UK market by longer variants of the Optare MetroCity. Production of the Tempo SR continues for the Australian market.

Target: The Tempo SR has now been replaced in the UK market by longer variants of the Optare MetroCity, although production of the Tempo SR continues for the Australian market.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Even small vibrations or strain in the table on which the elements are set up might lead to complete failure of an experiment. One requires an extremely rigid table which neither moves nor flexes, even under changing loads or vibrations.

Target: Even small vibrations or strain in the table on which the elements are set up might lead to complete failure of an experiment. Hence, one requires an extremely rigid table which neither moves nor flexes, even under changing loads or vibrations.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It had a slower burning powder train and. Could be time set for ranges up to 5800 yards.

Target: It had a slower burning powder train and hence could be time set for ranges up to 5800 yards.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The ILO,. Having the same Members as the League and subjected to the budget control of the Assembly.

Target: The ILO, although having the same Members as the League and subjected to the budget control of the Assembly.


Source: Make the text more logical: Gawain sets off to avenge the fallen knight. Matters are complicated when Guiromelant reveals his love for Gawain's sister.

Target: Gawain sets off to avenge the fallen knight, but matters are complicated when Guiromelant reveals his love for Gawain's sister.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The resulting recordings were invaluable not only for their quality but also. This was the first quality that Spanish stage music had been welcomed without major inhibitions.

Target: The resulting recordings were invaluable not only for their quality but also because this was the first time that Spanish stage music had been welcomed without major inhibitions.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The normal prepatent period for O. ostertagi is 21 days. Under certain circumstances, ingested L3 larvae can suspend their maturation and become dormant as inhibited L4 larvae inside the gastric glands.

Target: The normal prepatent period for O. ostertagi is 21 days. However, under certain circumstances, ingested L3 larvae can suspend their maturation and become dormant as inhibited L4 larvae inside the gastric glands.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He dropped out of Columbia University as a math major to become an actuary. He became the youngest person ever to pass four examinations of the Society of Actuaries at the age of 21.

Target: Dropping out of Columbia University as a math major to become an actuary, he became the youngest person ever to pass four examinations of the Society of Actuaries at the age of 21.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The commune has a notable abundance of fish and the town has a high rate of fish production. Common drought, flooding, and over-exploitation of fish stocks have seen catches fall sharply in quantity and quality in recent years.

Target: The commune has a notable abundance of fish and the town has a high rate of fish production. However, common drought, flooding, and over-exploitation of fish stocks have seen catches fall sharply in quantity and quality in recent years.


Source: Make the text more consistent: After the introduction of Oude Mannenhuizen, the hofjes were designed almost exclusively for women. Women could organize themselves more efficiently.

Target: After the introduction of Oude Mannenhuizen, the hofjes were designed almost exclusively for women, because women could organize themselves more efficiently.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Although the session appears to be successful, Father Tom later explains to Alice and Lina that Doris did not contact Gloria. For every question Tom asked, Doris read Tom's thoughts and repeated the answers he was thinking in his mind.

Target: Although the session appears to be successful, Father Tom later explains to Alice and Lina that Doris did not contact Gloria. Instead, for every question he asked, she read his thoughts and repeated the answers he was thinking in his mind.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Moorwen bursts out, kills several people, then escapes. An offspring of the Moorwen sneaks into the hall where the women and children are hiding.

Target: The Moorwen bursts out, kills several people, then escapes. Meanwhile, an offspring of the Moorwen sneaks into the hall where the women and children are hiding.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: McTaggart argues that time is unreal. Our descriptions of time are either contradictory.

Target: McTaggart argues that time is unreal because our descriptions of time are either contradictory.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He grew up playing soccer in Nigeria. By the time he reached junior high in the David Douglas School District, he was more into track & field and basketball.

Target: He grew up playing soccer in Nigeria, and by the time he reached junior high in the David Douglas School District, he was more into track & field and basketball.


Source: Make the text coherent: Dated 1911 and built for Lord Davies of Llandinam who bought two cottages on the site in 1909. Probably designed by Frank Shayler, architect of Shrewsbury who undertook other similar work for Lord Lord.

Target: Dated 1911 and built for Lord Davies of Llandinam who bought two cottages on the site in 1909. Probably designed by Frank Shayler, architect of Shrewsbury who undertook other similar work for Lord Davies.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Neither the Spanish nor the Hebrew surname corresponds to one single lineage. Both correspond to many unrelated lineages.

Target: Neither the Spanish nor the Hebrew surname corresponds to one single lineage. Instead, both correspond to many unrelated lineages.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In Bangkok, ASP Suresh Kumar was said to have called Balasubramaniam from Kuala Lumpur. Police officers from Malaysia can not catch Balasubramaniam.

Target: In Bangkok, ASP Suresh Kumar was said to have called Balasubramaniam from Kuala Lumpur so that police officers from Malaysia can not catch him.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Paradisaea rubra a bird species Paradisaea rubra is the red bird-of-paradise or Cendrawasih Merah.

Target: Paradisaea rubra, the red bird-of-paradise or Cendrawasih Merah, a bird species


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Pacific National Exhibition British Columbia Pacific National Exhibition is an exhibition in Vancouver.

Target: Pacific National Exhibition, an exhibition in Vancouver, British Columbia


Source: Fix sentence flow: The age of the cluster has been estimated to be about 12.2 billion years. This is the age estimate for the birth of the planet, and two stars.

Target: The age of the cluster has been estimated to be about 12.2 billion years. Hence this is the age estimate for the birth of the planet, and two stars.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In early January, Barrera came back from his injury and in his very first game back he scored a goal against Necaxa. Barrera was a Barrera until manager Ricardo Ferreti put Barrera on the bench.

Target: In early January, Barrera came back from his injury and in his very first game back he scored a goal against Necaxa. He was a starter until manager Ricardo Ferreti put him on the bench.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: There were no religious affiliation requirements for entry and the students came from many different Protestant denominations. True to its origins, chapel services for the students were held every Wednesday at the local Free Methodist church (Hermon Community Church) located close by.

Target: There were no religious affiliation requirements for entry and the students came from many different Protestant denominations. However, true to its origins, chapel services for the students were held every Wednesday at the local Free Methodist church (Hermon Community Church) located close by.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: You continue the ascent, now through a covered patio. You get to the first floor, where the main rooms of the house are.

Target: Continuing the ascent, now through a covered patio, you get to the first floor, where the main rooms of the house are.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The books were saved from being burned during the Civil War. Someone bricked the entrance to the library and thus avoided its devastation.

Target: The books were saved from being burned during the Civil War because someone bricked the entrance to the library and thus avoided its devastation.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Of these some 54 were completed. Ten of them were begun for the French Navy in shipyards within the French-occupied Netherlands or Italy.

Target: Of these some 54 were completed, although ten of them were begun for the French Navy in shipyards within the French-occupied Netherlands or Italy.


Source: Make the text coherent: Hiremath is most famous as a Poet. Poet is a strong Poet of division of Indian society on the basis of language.

Target: Hiremath is most famous as a Poet. He is a strong opponent of division of Indian society on the basis of language.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The PSU became officially operational on July 1, 1979 but the College in Infanta had no budgetary allocation. Funds from the PSU Main were set aside to prepare for PSU's opening in June 1981.

Target: The PSU became officially operational on July 1, 1979 but the College in Infanta had no budgetary allocation. However, funds from the PSU Main were set aside to prepare for its opening in June 1981.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Pangu offered Esser another vulnerability of their own as compensation but received no response. Since version 1.1. 0 of the release, Esser's Infoleak was replaced with another vulnerability found by Pangu.

Target: Pangu offered Esser another vulnerability of their own as compensation but received no response. Thus, since version 1.1. 0 of the release, Esser's Infoleak was replaced with another vulnerability found by Pangu.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In addition, there are many schools offering courses and guides who lead groups of more experienced pilots exploring an area. There are the manufacturers and the associated repair and after-sales services.

Target: In addition, there are many schools offering courses and guides who lead groups of more experienced pilots exploring an area. Finally, there are the manufacturers and the associated repair and after-sales services.


Source: Fix coherence: All configuration is controlled by a configuration file specified on the command line. All servers managing a given file system use the same configuration file.

Target: All configuration is controlled by a configuration file specified on the command line, and all servers managing a given file system use the same configuration file.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Jobs are non-blocking. Once a job is issued the state machine's execution is deferred so that another state machine can run servicing another request.

Target: Jobs are non-blocking, so that once a job is issued the state machine's execution is deferred so that another state machine can run servicing another request.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Later on, Kristi has a tea party with Toby. When Katie walks in and calls Kristi a baby for having imaginary friends, and goes in the closet to look for Toby, the door slams shut on its own.

Target: Later on, Kristi has a tea party with Toby. But, when Katie walks in and calls Kristi a baby for having imaginary friends, and goes in the closet to look for Toby, the door slams shut on its own.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It brought its total to $52.6 million. It set a new record for the franchise, a horror film (Paranormal Activity 2, $40.6 million).

Target: Bringing its total to $52.6 million, it set a new record for the franchise, a horror film (Paranormal Activity 2, $40.6 million).


Source: Make the text coherent: Dennis approaches Katie from behind. When Dennis places Dennis 'hand on Katie's shoulder, Katie turns around and unleashes a demonic scream Dennis throws him to the other side of the room Dennis' injuring his leg.

Target: Dennis approaches Katie from behind, but when he places his hand on her shoulder, Katie turns around and unleashes a demonic scream that throws him to the other side of the room, injuring his leg.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Serrano cases did not specifically address the legality of K-12 public education parcel taxes. Such taxes did not exist at that time.

Target: The Serrano cases did not specifically address the legality of K-12 public education parcel taxes because such taxes did not exist at that time.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Currently, all recognized members of genus Ambidensovirus, Brevidensovirus and Iterodensovirus infect insects, while the hepan-and penstyldensoviruses infect decapod shrimp. Recently two viruses have been isolated that segregate phylogenetically with members of genus Ambidensovirus but infect non-insect hosts.

Target: Currently, all recognized members of genus Ambidensovirus, Brevidensovirus and Iterodensovirus infect insects, while the hepan-and penstyldensoviruses infect decapod shrimp. However, recently two viruses have been isolated that segregate phylogenetically with members of genus Ambidensovirus but infect non-insect hosts.


Source: Fix coherence: Because MVH delivers energy evenly and deeply into the whole body of a flowing product, it allows for gentler and shorter heating. Almost all heat-sensitive substances in the milk are preserved.

Target: Because MVH delivers energy evenly and deeply into the whole body of a flowing product, it allows for gentler and shorter heating, so that almost all heat-sensitive substances in the milk are preserved.


Source: Make the text clearer: Davis had been a longtime supporter of Dylan's. Dylan had been the Dylan of a corporate coup.

Target: Davis had been a longtime supporter of Dylan's, but he had been the victim of a corporate coup.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She battled these elements. She learned many farm skills including killing and cutting up their own meat with Pat even learning to drive a Caterpillar type tractor to build a dam for part of their emergency water supplies.

Target: Battling these elements, she learned many farm skills including killing and cutting up their own meat with Pat even learning to drive a Caterpillar type tractor to build a dam for part of their emergency water supplies.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They married Jim Clift from Breeza, NSW in 1948. They moved in late 1954 to a river front property near Condamine in the western Darling Downs in Queensland, which they developed with almost 30 years of hard but rewarding work.

Target: Marrying Jim Clift from Breeza, NSW in 1948, they moved in late 1954 to a river front property near Condamine in the western Darling Downs in Queensland, which they developed with almost 30 years of hard but rewarding work.


Source: Fix coherence: As a national monument, the site will be conserved and maintained by government funds. Ordered otherwise by the courts.

Target: As a national monument, the site will be conserved and maintained by government funds unless ordered otherwise by the courts.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: His third book, The Observable, also edited by Babette Babich came out in 2016. Written almost a half a century before.

Target: His third book, The Observable, also edited by Babette Babich came out in 2016 although written almost a half a century before.


Source: Make the text more coherent: None of the other suspects were missing a finger. They believed it was Cooney's.

Target: Since none of the other suspects were missing a finger, they believed it was Cooney's.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Not surprisingly, these individuals tend to be supporters of the president. At the state and local levels, governors and mayors retain appointments powers.

Target: Not surprisingly, these individuals tend to be supporters of the president. Similarly, at the state and local levels, governors and mayors retain appointments powers.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Hester's girlfriend at the time of his death was New Zealand based singer Kashan Vincent. In July 2006, singer sued Kashan Vincent's estate, claiming a third of his net worth.

Target: Hester's girlfriend at the time of his death was New Zealand based singer Kashan Vincent. In July 2006, Vincent sued his estate, claiming a third of his net worth.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Nearly the very beginning of his religious life. He was under house arrest, unable to carry out his duties to the nearly 100 parishes under his jurisdiction.

Target: Since nearly the very beginning of his religious life, he was under house arrest, unable to carry out his duties to the nearly 100 parishes under his jurisdiction.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Lambert won numerous honours as a player. Lambert played as a midfielder.

Target: Lambert, who played as a midfielder, won numerous honours as a player.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Prisoners filing legal actions often use a pauper's oath. Persons in prison are often completely without money or any means of acquiring any.

Target: Prisoners filing legal actions often use a pauper's oath because persons in prison are often completely without money or any means of acquiring any.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: ODW released The Croods in 2013. ODW became the first company in 20 -- 30 years that got a license to import Western films.

Target: Releasing The Croods in 2013, ODW became the first company in 20 -- 30 years that got a license to import Western films.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Most of the recordings on the Pebbles Box were released at some point on one of the individual Pebbles albums. Several of the songs have not appeared elsewhere in the Pebbles series.

Target: Although most of the recordings on the Pebbles Box were released at some point on one of the individual Pebbles albums, several of the songs have not appeared elsewhere in the Pebbles series.


Source: Fix coherence errors: A chapel was built in stone. Soon people began to build their houses nearby.

Target: A chapel was built in stone and soon people began to build their houses nearby.


Source: Fix coherence: This could be following a hostile raid on the fort or. Lack of resources lead to its abandonment.

Target: This could be following a hostile raid on the fort or because lack of resources lead to its abandonment.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This could be following a hostile raid on the fort or because lack of resources lead to its abandonment. Sometime later the defences of the southern fort were rebuilt this time to a different layout.

Target: This could be following a hostile raid on the fort or because lack of resources lead to its abandonment. However, sometime later the defences of the southern fort were rebuilt this time to a different layout.


Source: Fix sentence transition: There is a police station. Police station is the police station of highway police.

Target: There is a police station, and it is the headquarters of highway police.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Laurence was called to the Bar by Lincoln's Inn on 18 November 1878. The effects of tuberculosis curtailed Laurence's English practice of the law and Laurence him instead to the Cape Colony for the beneficial effect of the drier climate.

Target: Laurence was called to the Bar by Lincoln's Inn on 18 November 1878 but the effects of tuberculosis curtailed his English practice of the law and took him instead to the Cape Colony for the beneficial effect of the drier climate.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Performing arts of Slovenia are shaped by a number of Slovenian actors and actresses, dancers, theatre directors, and theatre managers. Several professional and a number of amateur community theatres operate on the repertory system in Slovenian.

Target: Performing arts of Slovenia are shaped by a number of Slovenian actors and actresses, dancers, theatre directors, and theatre managers. Several professional and a number of amateur community theatres operate on the repertory system in Slovenia.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Redesign work was completed in 1924. Construction would wait a further six years.

Target: Redesign work was completed in 1924, but construction would wait a further six years.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: They did not feature the flexible covers usually associated with paperback books. As the name implies, the first Permabooks were designed in a more durable format with board covers.

Target: They did not feature the flexible covers usually associated with paperback books. Instead, as the name implies, the first Permabooks were designed in a more durable format with board covers.