Source: Fix sentence flow: The conglomerate was not gold-bearing. Gold was late discovered and.

Target: The conglomerate was not gold-bearing, although gold was late discovered and.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The procession to the bride's house looks rather regal as there is absolutely no dancing on the streets by the baraatis. All members, including the groom who rides an elephant or a female horse, carry swords.

Target: The procession to the bride's house looks rather regal as there is absolutely no dancing on the streets by the baraatis. In fact, all members, including the groom who rides an elephant or a female horse, carry swords.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The item rule was later changed. Teams have to buy three items.

Target: The item rule was later changed so that teams have to buy three items.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In this year, the club's legal owner organization declined to continue sponsoring the club. Two volunteer businessmen called Shekari and Abehesht took responsibility for the football team and brought about the darkest year in the club's history ever.

Target: In this year, the club's legal owner organization declined to continue sponsoring the club. Consequently, two volunteer businessmen called Shekari and Abehesht took responsibility for the football team and brought about the darkest year in the club's history ever.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Evans is best known for WaterFire Rhode Island. WaterFire is a sculpture that he installed on the three rivers of downtown Providence.

Target: Evans is best known for WaterFire, a sculpture that he installed on the three rivers of downtown Providence, Rhode Island.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Voting for the Parliament was on the basis of universal suffrage registered in the Basque Country and in full enjoyment of their political rights. Universal suffrage comprised all nationals over eighteen.

Target: Voting for the Parliament was on the basis of universal suffrage, which comprised all nationals over eighteen, registered in the Basque Country and in full enjoyment of their political rights.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The bones found in their forelimbs are reduced to achieve a light body weight required for flight. Their ulna is reduced in width and fused to the other zeugopod element, the radius.

Target: The bones found in their forelimbs are reduced to achieve a light body weight required for flight. In particular, their ulna is reduced in width and fused to the other zeugopod element, the radius.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Recycling and collection targets are called for. Fewer batteries end up in landfills.

Target: Recycling and collection targets are called for so that fewer batteries end up in landfills.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: By the evening, vanguards from the 19th Division, between Floriffoux and Jemeppe-sur-Sambre, had pushed back German assaults. Reports from prisoners indicated that there was a strong German presence.

Target: By the evening, vanguards from the 19th Division, between Floriffoux and Jemeppe-sur-Sambre, had pushed back German assaults. However, reports from prisoners indicated that there was a strong German presence.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The crossing site remained under German fire. Engineers still had no hope of putting in a bridge.

Target: Since the crossing site remained under German fire, engineers still had no hope of putting in a bridge.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Three of the 100th Division's battalions eventually crossed into the little bridgehead north of the city to push south into a melange of factories on the northern outskirts. The going always was slow.

Target: Although three of the 100th Division's battalions eventually crossed into the little bridgehead north of the city to push south into a melange of factories on the northern outskirts, the going always was slow.


Source: Make the text clearer: Without close fire support, the infantrymen depended upon artillery on the west bank of the Neckar. Fire was difficult to adjust in the confined factory district.

Target: Without close fire support, the infantrymen depended upon artillery on the west bank of the Neckar, but fire was difficult to adjust in the confined factory district.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Kimpo airfield was in excellent shape ; the North Koreans had not had time to do any major demolition. Several North Koreans planes were still on the field.

Target: Kimpo airfield was in excellent shape ; the North Koreans had not had time to do any major demolition. In fact, several North Korean planes were still on the field.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: 21 mustered on the beach, 47 (RM) Commando had about 300 men left, having lost 28 killed or drowned. 21 wounded and 27 missing.

Target: Mustering on the beach, 47 (RM) Commando had about 300 men left, having lost 28 killed or drowned, 21 wounded and 27 missing.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Spartan navarch Cnemus was placed in command of the campaign. Cnemus set out against Acarnania with 1,000 hoplites from Spartan, crossing over the Corinthian Gulf unnoticed by the Athenian fleet under Phormio.

Target: The Spartan navarch Cnemus was placed in command of the campaign. He set out against Acarnania with 1,000 hoplites from Sparta, crossing over the Corinthian Gulf unnoticed by the Athenian fleet under Phormio.


Source: Fix sentence transition: To offset these costs, he suggested establishing military farms. At least the horses could be fed on local feed.

Target: To offset these costs, he suggested establishing military farms so that at least the horses could be fed on local feed.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The court estimated that it was possible to pull together maybe 260,000. None of the requested troops came to fruition, and money and supplies were sent instead.

Target: The court estimated that it was possible to pull together maybe 260,000. However none of the requested troops came to fruition, and money and supplies were sent instead.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: At 00: 45 a Chinese platoon probed the US Marines on Hill 111, yet after an hour and twenty minutes it was also checked. Despite the clashes nearby on Hill 111 the Australians suffered no more casualties.

Target: At 00: 45 a Chinese platoon probed the US Marines on Hill 111, yet after an hour and twenty minutes it was also checked. Meanwhile, despite the clashes nearby on Hill 111 the Australians suffered no more casualties.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Indirect fire support was provided by the 11th Marine Artillery Regiment. By May 1953 the Chinese 1st, 46th, 63rd, 64th and 65th Armies of the 19th Army Group were operating against the US I Corps under the overall command of Huang Yongsheng.

Target: Indirect fire support was provided by the 11th Marine Artillery Regiment. Meanwhile, by May 1953 the Chinese 1st, 46th, 63rd, 64th and 65th Armies of the 19th Army Group were operating against the US I Corps under the overall command of Huang Yongsheng.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Americans were reinforced and counter-attacked over the following days. Again without success.

Target: The Americans were reinforced and counter-attacked over the following days, although again without success.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: By 05: 30 Hill 119 was secured by the US Marines. Scattered groups of Chinese remained on the forward slopes.

Target: By 05: 30 Hill 119 was secured by the US Marines, although scattered groups of Chinese remained on the forward slopes.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The following day some soldiers from both sides moved forward into no man's land to exchange greetings. Relatively few Australians did so and the Marines were under orders not to fraternise or communicate with the Chinese.

Target: The following day some soldiers from both sides moved forward into no man's land to exchange greetings, although relatively few Australians did so and the Marines were under orders not to fraternise or communicate with the Chinese.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The following day the Chinese launched a series of company and battalion-sized assaults, but were repulsed. With the Americans unprepared to accept further casualties for limited tactical gain, Chinese evacuated Porkchop Hill on 11 July.

Target: The following day the Chinese launched a series of company and battalion-sized assaults, but were repulsed. Yet, with the Americans unprepared to accept further casualties for limited tactical gain, they evacuated Porkchop Hill on 11 July.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Americans and South Koreans subsequently responded with a series of counter-attacks to regain the ground lost. These met with only limited success.

Target: The Americans and South Koreans subsequently responded with a series of counter-attacks to regain the ground lost, yet these met with only limited success.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He also appropriated property from Berchtesgaden for the new monastery. Around 1116 Berengar let Eberwin return to Berchtesgaden to lead Berchtesgaden again as an independent monastery.

Target: He also appropriated property from Berchtesgaden for the new monastery. However, around 1116 Berengar let Eberwin return to Berchtesgaden to lead it again as an independent monastery.


Source: Make the text clearer: Possible town sites were identified and among them was Barangay Maygatasan. Part of the National Highway (now the Narra Avenue) passed through the sitio of Bayugan instead of Barangay Maygatasan.

Target: Possible town sites were identified and among them was Barangay Maygatasan. However, part of the National Highway (now the Narra Avenue) passed through the sitio of Bayugan instead of Barangay Maygatasan.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Girls started on September 6, 1952. Girls brought on the show were given a Roxanne doll that was produced at the time.

Target: Starting on September 6, 1952, girls brought on the show were given a Roxanne doll that was produced at the time.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Pucks had to remain on the table to count. If a puck failed to reach the first stripe it was taken off the board and discarded.

Target: Pucks had to remain on the table to count, and if a puck failed to reach the first stripe it was taken off the board and discarded.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The group's music has been published in Sweden, Germany, Poland, Ukraine, France, Italy, United Kingdom, South Africa and Australia among other countries. So far the duo has not achieved a true international breakthrough.

Target: The group's music has been published in Sweden, Germany, Poland, Ukraine, France, Italy, United Kingdom, South Africa and Australia among other countries, but so far the duo has not achieved a true international breakthrough.


Source: Fix coherence: A plan that had supposedly in the works in the early 1740s to build a church near the present St. Stephen's location was abandoned. One was built in 1761 at what is now North Castle Corners.

Target: A plan that had supposedly in the works in the early 1740s to build a church near the present St. Stephen's location was abandoned. Instead, one was built in 1761 at what is now North Castle Corners.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He discovers right from his childhood that it is the safest place to hide. If one more name could be added to the cast of the film, you could safely add an almirah for the role it plays in the movie.

Target: He discovers right from his childhood that it is the safest place to hide. And if one more name could be added to the cast of the film, you could safely add an almirah for the role it plays in the movie.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The organism responds in the presence of the stimulus. Past responses in the presence of that stimulus have produced reinforcement.

Target: The organism responds in the presence of the stimulus because past responses in the presence of that stimulus have produced reinforcement.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Various guides have claimed that the tower was built in the middle of the Tagus, and now sits near the shore after the 1755 earthquake redirected the river. They are incorrect.

Target: Although various guides have claimed that the tower was built in the middle of the Tagus, and now sits near the shore after the 1755 earthquake redirected the river, they are incorrect.


Source: Fix coherence errors: There is no promotion or relegation depending on the season's final table. Only the reserve teams of current Premier League members are admitted for each season.

Target: There is no promotion or relegation depending on the season's final table. Instead, only the reserve teams of current Premier League members are admitted for each season.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: After the war, Belemedik continued to be a stop on the railroad. Because of the lack of agricultural land and landslips in 1969, the population decreased sharply.

Target: After the war, Belemedik continued to be a stop on the railroad. But because of the lack of agricultural land and landslips in 1969, the population decreased sharply.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Crusaders replaced the team in the league. Fans were left without an explanation.

Target: The Crusaders replaced the team in the league, but fans were left without an explanation.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Summers are warm, spring and fall are mild, with low humidity. Winter is cool.

Target: Summers are warm, spring and fall are mild, with low humidity, while winter is cool.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He received the MTV Movie Awards 'MTV Generation Award in 2009. The MTV Movie Awards' MTV Generation Award is the ceremony's top honor.

Target: He received the MTV Movie Awards' MTV Generation Award, the ceremony's top honor, in 2009.


Source: Make the text more logical: According to one of his biographies, he considered himself to be an average student ; his grade was not in the line of 90s. It grade not fall into the 70s.

Target: According to one of his biographies, he considered himself to be an average student ; his grade was not in the line of 90s nor did it fall into the 70s.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He is a member of the Knesset for Likud. Is the son of former member of Israel member.

Target: He is a member of the Knesset for Likud, and is the son of former Prime Minister of Israel Menachem Begin.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Boll was already 71 and suffering form old age and illness. Boll's term of office was an unsuccessful one.

Target: Boll was already 71 and suffering form old age and illness, meaning his term of office was an unsuccessful one.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Gruner + Jahr was taken over completely by Bertelsmann in 2014. Under the leadership of Thomas Rabe, Bertelsmann increasingly invested in the education sector: In 2014, for example, Relias Learning was acquired.

Target: Gruner + Jahr was taken over completely by Bertelsmann in 2014. Furthermore, under the leadership of Thomas Rabe, Bertelsmann increasingly invested in the education sector: In 2014, for example, Relias Learning was acquired.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Alleged death threats against her speaking on abortion led to the cancellation of two events. Subsequently one of the host institutions.

Target: Alleged death threats against her speaking on abortion led to the cancellation of two events, although subsequently one of the host institutions.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Beverley Beck was first mentioned in 1296, when the Archbishop of York sought to have fish-weirs removed from the River Hull. Boats could reach Beverley.

Target: Beverley Beck was first mentioned in 1296, when the Archbishop of York sought to have fish-weirs removed from the River Hull, so that boats could reach Beverley.


Source: Make the text more logical: Its previous appearance on the Market. Traffic has increased many fold, access roads have been blocked off or pedestrianised and the public houses surrounding the area are able to open longer hours.

Target: Since its previous appearance on the Market, traffic has increased many fold, access roads have been blocked off or pedestrianised and the public houses surrounding the area are able to open longer hours.


Source: Make the text more logical: Details about his birth or achievements are vaguely known as there are no actual records containing them. Being a Sangdaedeung, could have meant that he was part of the royal nobles or a Jinggol.

Target: Details about his birth or achievements are vaguely known as there are no actual records containing them. However, being a Sangdaedeung, could have meant that he was part of the royal nobles or a Jinggol.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The beginning of the nineties of the twentieth century. Tourism has replaced the traditional economy of the town.

Target: Since the beginning of the nineties of the twentieth century, tourism has replaced the traditional economy of the town.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Charlie goes to the boardwalk and then meets Young Police Officer (Adam Caryle Taylor) who is helping him get through the pass. Then Charlie lets Young in and then Charlie leaves.

Target: Charlie goes to the boardwalk and then meets Young Police Officer (Adam Caryle Taylor) who is helping him get through the pass and then he lets him in and then he leaves.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The average temperature of the universe would asymptotically approach absolute zero -- a Big Freeze. If the proton were unstable, then baryonic matter would disappear, leaving only radiation and black holes.

Target: The average temperature of the universe would asymptotically approach absolute zero -- a Big Freeze. Moreover, if the proton were unstable, then baryonic matter would disappear, leaving only radiation and black holes.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: We know that the distance between galaxies increases today. It must mean that in the past galaxies were closer together.

Target: Since we know that the distance between galaxies increases today, it must mean that in the past galaxies were closer together.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It is generally assumed that when the universe was young and very hot it was in statistical equilibrium and contained equal numbers of baryons and antibaryons. Observations suggest that the universe, including its most distant parts, is made almost entirely of matter.

Target: It is generally assumed that when the universe was young and very hot it was in statistical equilibrium and contained equal numbers of baryons and antibaryons. However, observations suggest that the universe, including its most distant parts, is made almost entirely of matter.


Source: Fix coherence: Most ordinary numeral systems, such as the common decimal system, are not bijective. More than one string of digits can represent the same positive integer.

Target: Most ordinary numeral systems, such as the common decimal system, are not bijective because more than one string of digits can represent the same positive integer.


Source: Make the text coherent: In Ms. Butterbean's class, everybody begins to notice that spiders are appearing everywhere. Students keep disappearing, being attacked by giant spiders while in the halls.

Target: In Ms. Butterbean's class, everybody begins to notice that spiders are appearing everywhere, and students keep disappearing, being attacked by giant spiders while in the halls.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He changes his last name to Bathgate, after a local street. He goes to work for Schultz's organization, serving mostly as a gopher for Schultz.

Target: Changing his last name to Bathgate, after a local street, he goes to work for Schultz's organization, serving mostly as a gopher for Schultz.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Billy kills him in self-defense and is traumatized. Upon returning to Shroom, Billy discovers Shroom has bled to death.

Target: Billy kills him in self-defense and is traumatized. Then, upon returning to Shroom, he discovers Shroom has bled to death.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This snail is a medically important pest. An intermediate host for the parasite Schistosoma mansoni and a vector of schistosomiasis.

Target: This snail is a medically important pest, because an intermediate host for the parasite Schistosoma mansoni and a vector of schistosomiasis.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Palace revealed to be a precious place for Odonata. Water areas are not so large.

Target: The Palace revealed to be a precious place for Odonata, although water areas are not so large.


Source: Fix coherence errors: DNA studies revealed that small Japanese moles in the Palace and those of neighboring Tokyo area of Hino city are the same in species. Same have become extinct inside central Palace except the Tokyo.

Target: DNA studies revealed that small Japanese moles in the Palace and those of neighboring Tokyo area of Hino city are the same in species, although they have become extinct inside central Tokyo except the Palace.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Outgoing messages do not contain the explicit address of the recipient of the message. Every network participant attempts decryption of every message passing through the network even if the message was not originally intended for that network participant.

Target: Outgoing messages do not contain the explicit address of the recipient of the message. Therefore, every network participant attempts decryption of every message passing through the network even if the message was not originally intended for that network participant.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The movie also does not feature any Somali actors. No Somali consultants were hired for accuracy, according to writer Bowden.

Target: The movie also does not feature any Somali actors. Additionally, no Somali consultants were hired for accuracy, according to writer Bowden.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A black star with a radius slightly greater than the predicted event horizon for an equivalent-mass black hole will appear very dark. Almost all light produced will be drawn back to the star.

Target: A black star with a radius slightly greater than the predicted event horizon for an equivalent-mass black hole will appear very dark, because almost all light produced will be drawn back to the star.


Source: Make the text more consistent: She was unable to bring a claim against the OHA. The Ontario Human Rights Code contained a provision that allowed male-only sports teams and since the OHA was a private OHA the Charter did not apply to OHA.

Target: She was unable to bring a claim against the OHA because the Ontario Human Rights Code contained a provision that allowed male-only sports teams and since the OHA was a private organization the Charter did not apply to it.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Maika attempts to practice being a sadist, and decides to try smiling while serving the customers. Maika's smile just comes across sadistic anyway.

Target: Maika attempts to practice being a sadist, and decides to try smiling while serving the customers. However her smile just comes across sadistic anyway.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He works at Stile to gain fans ; giving proof to his parents that he is talented. Else he has to inherit his family's farm.

Target: He works at Stile to gain fans ; giving proof to his parents that he is talented, or else he has to inherit his family's farm.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Another possible reason is. Men can easily undo blouses as.

Target: Another possible reason is so that men can easily undo blouses as.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The terrain following radar is also upgraded to incorporated fire control capability, though this practice is not recommended by the developer. Doing so would reveal the aircraft thus providing the enemy with longer reaction times.

Target: The terrain following radar is also upgraded to incorporated fire control capability, though this practice is not recommended by the developer because doing so would reveal the aircraft thus providing the enemy with longer reaction times.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Males often move from troop to troop to gain higher rank with the resulting benefits. Males remaining in a single troop have been observed to rise to become dominant male of that troop.

Target: Males often move from troop to troop to gain higher rank with the resulting benefits. However, males remaining in a single troop have been observed to rise to become dominant male of that troop.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The harvest had been a new record. Large amounts of grain were stored in overflow bins.

Target: The harvest had been a new record so that large amounts of grain were stored in overflow bins.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The bulky costume with four-inch platform boots made it an arduous role but the costume and extensive makeup produced the classic image. The costume was a costume in itself for Karloff with the shoes weighing 11 pounds (5.0 kg) each.

Target: The bulky costume with four-inch platform boots made it an arduous role but the costume and extensive makeup produced the classic image. The costume was a job in itself for Karloff with the shoes weighing 11 pounds (5.0 kg) each.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Borough has a larger proportion of the population in the younger age groups ; 22.3 % are aged under 16 compared with 18.9 % in England. Just 11.1 % of the Borough population are aged over 65 compared with 16.3 % in England.

Target: The Borough has a larger proportion of the population in the younger age groups ; 22.3 % are aged under 16 compared with 18.9 % in England. Meanwhile, just 11.1 % of the Milton Keynes population are aged over 65 compared with 16.3 % in England.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Seeing an opportunity, Ho deceives Tsui Sum of her family business and all her family's money in order to get closer to the Ko family. Old ties, secrets, and memories of a childhood sweetheart come back to haunt him.

Target: Seeing an opportunity, Ho deceives Tsui Sum of her family business and all her family's money in order to get closer to the Ko family. However, old ties, secrets, and memories of a childhood sweetheart come back to haunt him.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The hotel was built in 1906 by Purl Bowman (1862 -- 1939), part of a prominent pioneer family in Pendleton. The family lived near lower Birch Creek, Oregon ; Purl Bowman was a successful farmer and wool Purl Bowman.

Target: The hotel was built in 1906 by Purl Bowman (1862 -- 1939), part of a prominent pioneer family in Pendleton. The family lived near lower Birch Creek, Oregon ; Bowman was a successful farmer and wool producer.


Source: Make the text coherent: Popular at the box office. Boy disappointed some critics, who faulted its perceived humanism as a backward step from previous efforts like Death By Hanging and Violence at Noon that engaged with psychoanalysis and Brechtian effects.

Target: Although popular at the box office, Boy disappointed some critics, who faulted its perceived humanism as a backward step from previous efforts like Death By Hanging and Violence at Noon that engaged with psychoanalysis and Brechtian effects.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Leithauser was born in 1953 in Detroit, Michigan. Leithauser is an Leithauser of the Cranbrook School in Bloomfield Hills, Michigan and a graduate of Harvard College and Harvard Law School.

Target: Leithauser was born in 1953 in Detroit, Michigan. He is an alumnus of the Cranbrook School in Bloomfield Hills, Michigan and a graduate of Harvard College and Harvard Law School.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In February 2009, the two companies employed 1,117 people. Significant layoffs have taken place since then.

Target: In February 2009, the two companies employed 1,117 people, but significant layoffs have taken place since then.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Track 1 generally serves westbound trains and Track 2 generally serves eastbound trains. Trains traveling in either direction can use either track.

Target: Track 1 generally serves westbound trains and Track 2 generally serves eastbound trains. However, trains traveling in either direction can use either track.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Breton Plotter was invented by Captain Yvonnick Gueret, a Breton seaman who developed the plotter during his experiences teaching navigation. Yvonnick Gueret was a seaman in merchant vessels, served on small fishing boats, delivered private yachts and taught navigation.

Target: The Breton Plotter was invented by Captain Yvonnick Gueret, a Breton seaman who developed the plotter during his experiences teaching navigation. He was a commander in merchant vessels, served on small fishing boats, delivered private yachts and taught navigation.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He crawled from the burning wreckage and surviving in hostile territory with extensive wounds for more than a day. He was able to find a secure location to camouflage and hide himself.

Target: Crawling from the burning wreckage and surviving in hostile territory with extensive wounds for more than a day, he was able to find a secure location to camouflage and hide himself.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He survived the initial impact of the crash. He suffered severe burns in the ensuing fireball.

Target: Surviving the initial impact of the crash, he suffered severe burns in the ensuing fireball.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: One miracle received approval from Pope John Paul II in order for her to be beatified. Another must be found for her to be sanctified.

Target: One miracle received approval from Pope John Paul II in order for her to be beatified and another must be found for her to be sanctified.


Source: Fix coherence: Only six of 22 licences applied for were granted. Even those did not lead to routes as the Department of Trade would not start discussions with the European authorities as which they believed would be blocked due to the countries domestic concerns.

Target: Only six of 22 licences applied for were granted but even those did not lead to routes as the Department of Trade would not start discussions with the European authorities as which they believed would be blocked due to the countries domestic concerns.


Source: Make the text more logical: Anglicanism first arrived in Brazil in the early 19th century, as the Portuguese royal family fled to the country. The Royal Navy escorted the Portuguese vessels that fled from Lisbon on 27 November 1807 after Napoleon invaded Portuguese.

Target: Anglicanism first arrived in Brazil in the early 19th century, as the Portuguese royal family fled to the country. The Royal Navy escorted the Portuguese vessels that fled from Lisbon on 27 November 1807 after Napoleon invaded Portugal.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This article is about residents and citizens of Nigerian descent living in Britain. Many Nigerian and Nigerian Britain British-born descendants Britain Britain live in South London.

Target: This article is about residents and citizens of Nigerian descent living in Britain. Many Nigerians and their British-born descendants in Britain live in South London.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: What was to have been their final working was cancelled. Their final working is a charter train on 29 December 2007.

Target: What was to have been their final working, a charter train on 29 December 2007, was cancelled.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In recent years, unit numbers have also been tied in with the numbers of the carriages within a unit (e.g. 150201 is formed of carriages 52201 and 57201). Very few multiple unit classes commence from xxx001.

Target: In recent years, unit numbers have also been tied in with the numbers of the carriages within a unit (e.g. 150201 is formed of carriages 52201 and 57201). As a result, very few multiple unit classes commence from xxx001.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The mine was re-opened in 2001. Currently without the use of railway transport.

Target: The mine was re-opened in 2001 although currently without the use of railway transport.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Obrecht steals Ben when the truth is revealed, and tries to help Britt leave town with him. Britt turns Britt's mother into the police, and Ben Ben back to Dante and Lulu.

Target: Obrecht steals Ben when the truth is revealed, and tries to help Britt leave town with him. Instead, Britt turns her mother into the police, and gives Ben back to Dante and Lulu.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Most BHOs are loaded once by each new instance of Internet Explorer. In the case of Internet Explorer, a new Internet Explorer is launched for each window.

Target: Most BHOs are loaded once by each new instance of Internet Explorer. However, in the case of Windows Explorer, a new instance is launched for each window.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The novel was adapted for presentation on The Ford Theatre Hour in 1950. The Ford Theatre Hour is an American TV show.

Target: The novel was adapted for presentation on The Ford Theatre Hour, an American TV show, in 1950.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Two years is an incredibly short span to draw two 40-page albums and so. Officially the series was owned by Victor Hubinon and Jean-Michel Charlier.

Target: Two years is an incredibly short span to draw two 40-page albums and so, although officially the series was owned by Victor Hubinon and Jean-Michel Charlier.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The 'Demobilized' story arc featured more flying. Readers were still unsatisfied with the story and demanded more aircraft and less scheming villains.

Target: Although the 'Demobilized' story arc featured more flying, readers were still unsatisfied with the story and demanded more aircraft and less scheming villains.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It created a new hybrid sound. It peaked at number 38 on the Heatseekers Billboard chart and number 94 on the R&B Albums chart.

Target: Creating a new hybrid sound, It peaked at number 38 on the Heatseekers Billboard chart and number 94 on the R&B Albums chart.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Furthermore, pilgrims might want to dedicate the good karma of the trip to their ill or deceased relatives. Often the pilgrimage is simply done to enjoy the nature or cultural settings, to escape city life, or out of nostalgia for the past.

Target: Furthermore, pilgrims might want to dedicate the good karma of the trip to their ill or deceased relatives. But often the pilgrimage is simply done to enjoy the nature or cultural settings, to escape city life, or out of nostalgia for the past.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Almost all devotional practices can be done in one's own home. It is custom to meet in the local temple on festivals and days of observance.

Target: Although almost all devotional practices can be done in one's own home, it is custom to meet in the local temple on festivals and days of observance.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: When the buffers overflow, the canary value is changed. To effectively attack the program, an attacker must leave definite indication of his attack.

Target: When the buffers overflow, the canary value is changed. Thus, to effectively attack the program, an attacker must leave definite indication of his attack.


Source: Make the text clearer: Overfilling a buffer allocated on the stack is more likely to influence program execution than overfilling a buffer on the heap because the stack contains the return addresses for all active function calls. Similar implementation-specific protections also exist against heap-based overflows.

Target: Overfilling a buffer allocated on the stack is more likely to influence program execution than overfilling a buffer on the heap because the stack contains the return addresses for all active function calls. However, similar implementation-specific protections also exist against heap-based overflows.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Buildings from Bath's pre-Norman period either no longer exist. Buildings' remains are below street level.

Target: Buildings from Bath's pre-Norman period either no longer exist, or their remains are below street level.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Summers are completely dry,. Winters see some wetter spells.

Target: Summers are completely dry, whereas winters see some wetter spells.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Jump up ^ Symmetry might have carried guns. Other references indicate that she fired during the Battle of Bunker Hill.

Target: Jump up ^ Symmetry might have carried guns, because other references indicate that she fired during the Battle of Bunker Hill.


Source: Make the text clearer: When the Spaniards arrived, they renamed Busuanga to Buruanga. Perhaps the change was purely a clerical error.

Target: When the Spaniards arrived, they renamed Busuanga to Buruanga, or perhaps the change was purely a clerical error.


Source: Fix sentence flow: This approach does not make any extraordinary demands on the artistic and dramatic talents of the teacher. Most professors are capable of supervising the application of this method.

Target: This approach does not make any extraordinary demands on the artistic and dramatic talents of the teacher. Consequently, most professors are capable of supervising the application of this method.


Source: Make the text more consistent: BSM touches on all the lifecycle processes within the Information Technology Infrastructure Library. BSM is a way to bring together many disparate processes and tools, and creating quantifiable improvement in efficiency and the ability to view technology as it is germane to business process.

Target: Touching on all the lifecycle processes within the Information Technology Infrastructure Library, BSM is a way to bring together many disparate processes and tools, and creating quantifiable improvement in efficiency and the ability to view technology as it is germane to business process.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In their siege of Constantinople, they constructed walls of circumvallation to prevent easy counterattack and used mantelets or wooden frames covered with animal hides to protect against defending archers. Like many nomads, they gathered other warriors such as Gepids and Slavs to assist them.

Target: In their siege of Constantinople, they constructed walls of circumvallation to prevent easy counterattack and used mantelets or wooden frames covered with animal hides to protect against defending archers. Furthermore, like many nomads, they gathered other warriors such as Gepids and Slavs to assist them.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Persian archives were lost so there are no contemporary Persian sources of this war. Al-Tabari's History of the Prophets and Kings uses now lost sources and contains a history of the Sassanid dynasty.

Target: The Persian archives were lost so there are no contemporary Persian sources of this war. However, al-Tabari's History of the Prophets and Kings uses now lost sources and contains a history of the Sassanid dynasty.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He suggests that the separation of biomedical, psychosocial, and spiritual approaches interferes with the development of well-being,. Their integration has been shown to reduce drop-out.

Target: He suggests that the separation of biomedical, psychosocial, and spiritual approaches interferes with the development of well-being, whereas their integration has been shown to reduce drop-out.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: IKEA occupies 4 storeys and with a retail space of 90,000 square feet. IKEA is the key tenant of the mall.

Target: Occupying 4 storeys and with a retail space of 90,000 square feet, IKEA is the key tenant of the mall.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Intermeddling from Laurinaitis caused Punk to lose to Ziggler throughout January, which ultimately led to Punk attacking Laurinaitis in retaliation. At the Royal Rumble on January 29, 2012, Punk successfully defended Punk's title Ziggler Ziggler Laurinaitis Laurinaitis acting as the outside enforcer.

Target: Intermeddling from Laurinaitis caused Punk to lose to Ziggler throughout January, which ultimately led to Punk attacking Laurinaitis in retaliation. At the Royal Rumble on January 29, 2012, Punk successfully defended his title against Ziggler despite Laurinaitis acting as the outside enforcer.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Further electrification of the Hamilton circle, and to Lanark, followed and the main line southwards was being progressively wired. By the end of 1973 electric locomotives could be exchanged between Carlisle and Shields Depot.

Target: Further electrification of the Hamilton circle, and to Lanark, followed and the main line southwards was being progressively wired, so that by the end of 1973 electric locomotives could be exchanged between Carlisle and Shields Depot.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Robert Christgau ranked it 10th in his own year-end list. Robert Christgau is the poll's creator.

Target: Robert Christgau, the poll's creator, ranked it 10th in his own year-end list.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The song was released as 2Pac's comeback single after his release from prison in 1995. Was 2Pac's first single as the newest artist of Death Row Records.

Target: The song was released as 2Pac's comeback single after his release from prison in 1995 and was his first single as the newest artist of Death Row Records.


Source: Make the text more coherent: At first, the nursery was a wholesaler providing grape vines and fruit trees to California's growing agricultural industry. Early on nursery also supplied plants for the Palo Alto estate of California tycoon Leland Stanford.

Target: At first, the nursery was a wholesaler providing grape vines and fruit trees to California's growing agricultural industry, although early on it also supplied plants for the Palo Alto estate of California tycoon Leland Stanford.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Camarines Sur occupies the central section of the Bicol Peninsula. With a land area of 5,266.8 square kilometres (2,034 sq mi), Camarines Sur is the largest Camarines Sur in the Bicol Region.

Target: Camarines Sur occupies the central section of the Bicol Peninsula. With a land area of 5,266.8 square kilometres (2,034 sq mi), it is the largest province in the Bicol Region.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is known that the only way singularities can occur in solutions is in the form of breaking waves. From the knowledge of a smooth initial profile it is possible to predict (via a necessary and sufficient condition) whether wave breaking occurs or not.

Target: It is known that the only way singularities can occur in solutions is in the form of breaking waves. Moreover, from the knowledge of a smooth initial profile it is possible to predict (via a necessary and sufficient condition) whether wave breaking occurs or not.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Cambodia also hosted the GANEFO Games in the 1960s. The GANEFO Games are the alternative to the Olympics.

Target: Cambodia also hosted the GANEFO Games, the alternative to the Olympics, in the 1960s.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In addition to the more common 14 ft version, 18 ft Caper Cats with extended storage capacity were also built. Few of these boats exist.

Target: In addition to the more common 14 ft version, 18 ft Caper Cats with extended storage capacity were also built, although few of these boats exist.


Source: Make the text coherent: Matthew Flinders Drive is named in his honour. Matthew Flinders Drive is a scenic cliffside road that winds through Cooee Bay and up over the top of Wreck Point.

Target: Matthew Flinders Drive, a scenic cliffside road that winds through Cooee Bay and up over the top of Wreck Point, is named in his honour.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Christian school and religious home-educated graduates are notably more likely to feel obligated to care for the environment. Again only the independent non-religious school graduates are significantly more environmentally active than their government school peers.

Target: Christian school and religious home-educated graduates are notably more likely to feel obligated to care for the environment, but again only the independent non-religious school graduates are significantly more environmentally active than their government school peers.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: With the process complete he was able to synthesize large amounts of ammonia, which was available for the industrial and agricultural fields. This production has increased the agricultural yields throughout the world.

Target: With the process complete he was able to synthesize large amounts of ammonia, which was available for the industrial and agricultural fields. In fact, this production has increased the agricultural yields throughout the world.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Asa flees a kidnapping charge for having ex-wife Blair Cramer abducted and thrown into a mental institution. Asa tracks down Carlo in Argentina in 2005.

Target: Fleeing a kidnapping charge for having ex-wife Blair Cramer abducted and thrown into a mental institution, Asa tracks down Carlo in Argentina in 2005.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: At Night of Champions, Carlito challenged for the United States Championship in a Six-Pack Challenge, which also involved Primo. Neither of them were able to win the title.

Target: At Night of Champions, Carlito challenged for the United States Championship in a Six-Pack Challenge, which also involved Primo, but neither of them were able to win the title.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Both squadrons were based at Naval Air Station Lemoore, California. Both squadrons were part of Carrier Air Wing Seventeen embarked aboard Carl Vinson.

Target: Both squadrons were based at Naval Air Station Lemoore, California, and both squadrons were part of Carrier Air Wing Seventeen embarked aboard Carl Vinson.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: These were primarily Scotch-Irish pioneers, who were used to high mountain altitudes. Early settlement was slow, mostly due to the poor agricultural soil of the area.

Target: These were primarily Scotch-Irish pioneers, who were used to high mountain altitudes. However, early settlement was slow, mostly due to the poor agricultural soil of the area.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, the orientation of the axes relative to each other should always comply with the right-hand rule,. Specifically stated otherwise.

Target: However, the orientation of the axes relative to each other should always comply with the right-hand rule, unless specifically stated otherwise.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Here, ecoregions are often drawn as a series of contiguous watersheds with similar character and context. Where other factors predominate -- such as landforms, tectonic suites, regional rivers, vegetative breaks, or major cultural boundaries -- then watershed lines may be crossed.

Target: Here, ecoregions are often drawn as a series of contiguous watersheds with similar character and context. However, where other factors predominate -- such as landforms, tectonic suites, regional rivers, vegetative breaks, or major cultural boundaries -- then watershed lines may be crossed.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The village of Cassopolis was platted in 1831 and intended as the county seat. Village was the geographical village of the county.

Target: The village of Cassopolis was platted in 1831 and intended as the county seat, because it was the geographical center of the county.


Source: Fix sentence transition: On still other occasions, causation is irrelevant to legal liability altogether. Under a contract of indemnity insurance, the insurer agrees to indemnify the victim for harm not caused by the insurer, but by other parties.

Target: On still other occasions, causation is irrelevant to legal liability altogether. For example, under a contract of indemnity insurance, the insurer agrees to indemnify the victim for harm not caused by the insurer, but by other parties.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They received governmental support such as tools, supplies, and seeds. Everything had to be reimbursed to the federal government.

Target: Although they received governmental support such as tools, supplies, and seeds, everything had to be reimbursed to the federal government.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Small molecules can enter the nucleus without regulation. Macromolecules such as RNA and proteins require association karyopherins called importins to enter the nucleus and exportins to exit.

Target: Although small molecules can enter the nucleus without regulation, macromolecules such as RNA and proteins require association karyopherins called importins to enter the nucleus and exportins to exit.


Source: Make the text coherent: In 2014 a Fifth Judicial Reform package was passed, which among others reduced the maximum period pretrial detention from 10 to 5 years. Several journalists were released from jail, pending trial.

Target: In 2014 a Fifth Judicial Reform package was passed, which among others reduced the maximum period pretrial detention from 10 to 5 years. Consequently, several journalists were released from jail, pending trial.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The steeple was weakened and damaged in the Portland Gale, and so a new steeple, restored in 2007, was reduced to be 100 feet off the ground. According to the Provincetown Banner, the local newspaper :

Target: The steeple was weakened and damaged in the Portland Gale, and so a new steeple, restored in 2007, was reduced to be 100 feet off the ground. Yet, according to the Provincetown Banner, the local newspaper :


Source: Fix sentence transition: Ceren Nurlu began football career at Hatay Sanayispor 2005. Hatay Sanayispor is a club in her hometwon Hatay Province after she obtained her license on October 6.

Target: Ceren Nurlu began football career at Hatay Sanayispor, a club in her hometwon Hatay Province after she obtained her license on October 6, 2005.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This was unexpected. Large bodies in the asteroid belt typically do not emit vapor.

Target: This was unexpected because large bodies in the asteroid belt typically do not emit vapor.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Cerithiopsis atalaya is a species of sea snail which is known from European oceans. A species of sea snail is a gastropod in the family Cerithiopsidae.

Target: Cerithiopsis atalaya is a species of sea snail, a gastropod in the family Cerithiopsidae, which is known from European oceans.


Source: Fix coherence: Villarrica and Llaima together have more than 80 reported episodes of volcanism since 1558. At least 40 South Volcanic Zone volcanoes have had Holocene-age eruptions.

Target: Villarrica and Llaima together have more than 80 reported episodes of volcanism since 1558, and at least 40 South Volcanic Zone volcanoes have had Holocene-age eruptions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Chandrika Lakmalee (born 27 October 1978) is a Sri Lankan former cricketer. Chandrika Lakmalee played ten Women's One Day International matches for Sri Lankan women's national cricket team.

Target: Chandrika Lakmalee (born 27 October 1978) is a Sri Lankan former cricketer. She played ten Women's One Day International matches for Sri Lanka women's national cricket team.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It is widely believed that wheeled transport was invented in Mesopotamia. Recent archaeological evidence seems to indicate otherwise, pointing to Neolithic Europe.

Target: It is widely believed that wheeled transport was invented in Mesopotamia. Nevertheless, recent archaeological evidence seems to indicate otherwise, pointing to Neolithic Europe.


Source: Make the text more consistent: If we do not draw close to 28,000 spectators, it will be. Something has gone wrong.

Target: If we do not draw close to 28,000 spectators, it will be because something has gone wrong.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He flew with Lieutenant Frederick Wilton. He accounted for two more Fokker Dr. I's on 16 July, and a Pfalz D. III on 18 July, for a total of five.

Target: Flying with Lieutenant Frederick Wilton, he accounted for two more Fokker Dr. I's on 16 July, and a Pfalz D. III on 18 July, for a total of five.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Flint's essay would not only win the prize. Years later this paper would be responsible for Flint's career as the Secretary of the Board of Agriculture.

Target: Flint's essay would not only win the prize, but years later this paper would be responsible for his career as the Secretary of the Board of Agriculture.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In January 1828 he was once again appointed Ambassador to France and was raised to the peerage Baron Stuart de Rothesay, of the Isle of Bute, at the same time. He continued as Baron Stuart de Rothesay to France until November 1830.

Target: In January 1828 he was once again appointed Ambassador to France and was raised to the peerage Baron Stuart de Rothesay, of the Isle of Bute, at the same time. He continued as Ambassador to France until November 1830.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Sumner argued before the Massachusetts Supreme Court. Sumner noted that schools for blacks were physically inferior and that segregation bred harmful psychological and sociological effects -- arguments that would be made in Brown v. Board of Education over a century later.

Target: Arguing before the Massachusetts Supreme Court, Sumner noted that schools for blacks were physically inferior and that segregation bred harmful psychological and sociological effects -- arguments that would be made in Brown v. Board of Education over a century later.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Academic research produced about Chavism shows a considerable consensus when acknowledging its early shift to the left and its strong populist component. Besides these two points there is significant disagreement in the literature.

Target: Academic research produced about Chavism shows a considerable consensus when acknowledging its early shift to the left and its strong populist component. However, besides these two points there is significant disagreement in the literature.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Shortly thereafter, Officer Phillips (Samantha Phillips) appears unexpectedly and forbids anyone to leave. After Murdock and Adams each find an eye in their coffee, Murdock storms off to talk to Officer, leaving Adams alone in the cabin.

Target: Shortly thereafter, Officer Phillips (Samantha Phillips) appears unexpectedly and forbids anyone to leave. After Murdock and Adams each find an eye in their coffee, Murdock storms off to talk to Phillips, leaving Adams alone in the cabin.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Rhode Island, Saint Louis, and Charlotte each finished with 17 -- 7 conference records. In the opening round of the A-10 Tournament, the Rhode Island defeated La Salle, 5 -- 2, behind a complete game by Mike Bradstreet.

Target: Rhode Island, Saint Louis, and Charlotte each finished with 17 -- 7 conference records. In the opening round of the A-10 Tournament, the Rams defeated La Salle, 5 -- 2, behind a complete game by Mike Bradstreet.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Malesian species are found in all subsections. Species from other areas appear only in Euvvireya.

Target: Malesian species are found in all subsections, while species from other areas appear only in Euvvireya.


Source: Make the text clearer: Much of it was fanciful and failed when tested by the facts of embryology, which Owen systematically ignored, throughout his work. Though an imperfect and distorted view of certain great truths, it possessed a distinct value at the time of its conception.

Target: Much of it was fanciful and failed when tested by the facts of embryology, which Owen systematically ignored, throughout his work. However, though an imperfect and distorted view of certain great truths, it possessed a distinct value at the time of its conception.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It ended up in the library of Trinity College, Dublin. In 1891, an edited edition of Pococke's 1752 tour was published by George Thomas Stokes.

Target: It ended up in the library of Trinity College, Dublin. Eventually, in 1891, an edited edition of Pococke's 1752 tour was published by George Thomas Stokes.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: She begged Reva to help him die. She pulled the plug on his life support.

Target: Begging Reva to help him die, she pulled the plug on his life support.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Best known for his mathematical work. Mises also contributed to the philosophy of science as a neo-positivist, following the line of Ernst Mach.

Target: Although best known for his mathematical work, Mises also contributed to the philosophy of science as a neo-positivist, following the line of Ernst Mach.


Source: Make the text coherent: Ricky Kej performed at the United Nations General Assembly for a second time on a personal invitation by Peter Thomson 2017. Peter Thomson is the then president of the UN General Assembly on May 17.

Target: Ricky Kej performed at the United Nations General Assembly for a second time on a personal invitation by Peter Thomson, the then president of the UN General Assembly on May 17, 2017.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: She was named a People's Artist of Russia in 1994,. Her younger brother Leonid Markov was named a People's Artist of the USSR in 1985.

Target: She was named a People's Artist of Russia in 1994, whereas her younger brother Leonid Markov was named a People's Artist of the USSR in 1985.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Stover Canal heads to Teigngrace (with the River Teign also supplying the header pond) ; it was built to serve ball clay operations. Later River Teign was the River Teign of the Haytor Granite Tramway, carrying granite.

Target: The Stover Canal heads to Teigngrace (with the River Teign also supplying the header pond) ; it was built to serve ball clay operations, but later it was the terminus of the Haytor Granite Tramway, carrying granite.


Source: Make the text more logical: Roane County Schools (West Virginia) West Virginia Roane County Schools (West Virginia) are a school district in Roane County.

Target: Roane County Schools (West Virginia), a school district in Roane County, West Virginia


Source: Make the text more coherent: He came second in his group and thereby made the final of the tournament. Injury forced him to retire after the second event and he placed tenth.

Target: He came second in his group and thereby made the final of the tournament. However, injury forced him to retire after the second event and he placed tenth.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: When the mill burned in 1920, there were an estimated 2500 residents in the town. It rivaled Fullerton.

Target: When the mill burned in 1920, there were an estimated 2500 residents in the town meaning it rivaled Fullerton.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The police have ruled his death a suicide, and a suicide letter was found, written in block letters as evidence of suicide. Witnesses that were at the scene of the crime noted that he had stab wounds on his head.

Target: The police have ruled his death a suicide, and a suicide letter was found, written in block letters as evidence of suicide. However, witnesses that were at the scene of the crime noted that he had stab wounds on his head.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jeffrey G. Cumber was recognized as the 2010 Teacher of the Year, and Lee won the School of the Year title. Jeffrey G. Cumber and Lee respectively received $500 checks from the affiliated Florida Engineering Foundation (FEF).

Target: Jeffrey G. Cumber was recognized as the 2010 Teacher of the Year, and Lee won the School of the Year title. Cumber and Lee High School respectively received $500 checks from the affiliated Florida Engineering Foundation (FEF).


Source: Fix coherence errors: Ellis inherited substantial Irish estates when his father died. Ellis contemplated entering Parliament as a Whig under Sir William Napier's patronage.

Target: Inheriting substantial Irish estates when his father died, Ellis contemplated entering Parliament as a Whig under Sir William Napier's patronage.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She borrowed a musket from one of the defenders. She shot him dead.

Target: Borrowing a musket from one of the defenders, she shot him dead.


Source: Make the text coherent: Smith's early death was to prevent the establishment of his reputation beyond the borders of the British Isles. Several summer alpine seasons saw Smith achieve a number of notable ascents.

Target: Smith's early death was to prevent the establishment of his reputation beyond the borders of the British Isles. However several summer alpine seasons saw him achieve a number of notable ascents.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This article is about the BASIC dialect created at HP, but now transferred to Keysight. For other BASIC dialects created at both HP and DEC, see BASIC (BASIC).

Target: This article is about the BASIC dialect created at HP, but now transferred to Keysight. For other BASIC dialects created at both HP and DEC, see HP BASIC (disambiguation).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Rod Aldoff (born January 30, 1971) is a Canadian former professional hockey player. Rod Aldoff was most recently the hockey player of the Pensacola Ice Flyers of the Southern Professional Hockey League.

Target: Rod Aldoff (born January 30, 1971) is a Canadian former professional hockey player. He was most recently the head coach of the Pensacola Ice Flyers of the Southern Professional Hockey League.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Laver is the only player to have twice won all four Grand Slam singles tournaments during the same calendar year. Three of the four Grand Slam were played on grass at the time.

Target: Laver is the only player to have twice won all four Grand Slam singles tournaments during the same calendar year although three of the four Grand Slams were played on grass at the time.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: To Perry, Bradman is without spot or stain. Much of Perry's writing.

Target: To Perry, Bradman is without spot or stain so that much of his writing.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He finished in 43rd place. This was the second best place by a South American after Brazil's Osmiro Silva.

Target: He finished in 43rd place, although this was the second best performance by a South American after Brazil's Osmiro Silva.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Women's rights have evolved greatly in the past forty years. Women share most of the same rights as men.

Target: Women's rights have evolved greatly in the past forty years and women share most of the same rights as men.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Jams last two minutes. Called off prematurely.

Target: Jams last two minutes unless called off prematurely.


Source: Make the text more coherent: John Lennon, Paul McCartney, and George Harrison are also represented as solo artists. John Lennon is the only John Lennon to appear twice in the top 10, as a member of the Beatles and as a solo artist.

Target: John Lennon, Paul McCartney, and George Harrison are also represented as solo artists. However, Lennon is the only artist to appear twice in the top 10, as a member of the Beatles and as a solo artist.


Source: Make the text more coherent: His 91-yard touchdown return on a missed field goal in 1962 remains a Patriot record. He compiled 1,009 combined yards in rushing and receiving in 1962, and provided strong depth at running back for the Patriot from 1960 through 1965.

Target: His 91-yard touchdown return on a missed field goal in 1962 remains a Patriot record. He compiled 1,009 combined yards in rushing and receiving in 1962, and provided strong depth at running back for the Patriots from 1960 through 1965.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Ron Hardy played a lot of the same tracks his DJ peers in Chicago played. Ron Hardy's combative DJ style, loud volume, experimentation with new music and the general atmosphere of The Muzik Box makes him to be considered a pioneer in the house music genre.

Target: Ron Hardy played a lot of the same tracks his DJ peers in Chicago played. However his combative DJ style, loud volume, experimentation with new music and the general atmosphere of The Muzik Box makes him to be considered a pioneer in the house music genre.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: During his campaign, Puusemp did not mention disincorporation. How disincorporation related to art, though Puusemp had already decided two months before the election that the only solution to the village's problems was disincorporation.

Target: During his campaign, Puusemp did not mention disincorporation or how it related to art, though he had already decided two months before the election that the only solution to the village's problems was disincorporation.


Source: Fix sentence transition: MRI can reliably detect most full-thickness tears. Very small pinpoint tears may be missed.

Target: MRI can reliably detect most full-thickness tears although very small pinpoint tears may be missed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Arthroscopic surgery also allows for shorter recovery time. Significant differences in postoperative pain or pain medication use apparently are not seen between arthroscopic-and open-surgical patients.

Target: Arthroscopic surgery also allows for shorter recovery time although significant differences in postoperative pain or pain medication use apparently are not seen between arthroscopic-and open-surgical patients.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A study of rats suggested that it improved the strength of surgical repairs. Research on rabbits produced contrary evidence.

Target: A study of rats suggested that it improved the strength of surgical repairs, while research on rabbits produced contrary evidence.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Neither would have met so soon -- if at all --. For Fripp's concern to limit unnecessary suffering, and for his ten years' friendship with the new King, Edward VII.

Target: Neither would have met so soon -- if at all -- but for Fripp's concern to limit unnecessary suffering, and for his ten years' friendship with the new King, Edward VII.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Article 99 restricts parliamentary debate on the conduct of a Supreme Court judge. On a substantive motion supported by at least a quarter of all MPs.

Target: Article 99 restricts parliamentary debate on the conduct of a Supreme Court judge unless on a substantive motion supported by at least a quarter of all MPs.


Source: Make the text more logical: A legal system complying with the thin rule of law also requires that laws are fairly, equally and effectively applied. When a thick conception of the rule of law is taken, a greater emphasis is placed on elements of substantive justice.

Target: A legal system complying with the thin rule of law also requires that laws are fairly, equally and effectively applied. On the other hand, when a thick conception of the rule of law is taken, a greater emphasis is placed on elements of substantive justice.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It would be futile for people to approach the courts for adjudication of their disputes if the courts do not apply the law independently. People can only be guided by the law if judges apply it correctly.

Target: It would be futile for people to approach the courts for adjudication of their disputes if the courts do not apply the law independently. Moreover, people can only be guided by the law if judges apply it correctly.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: As officers of the Singapore Legal Service, it is said that there is a risk of executive interference. Judges may be removed from their judicial positions or transferred to lower-ranking positions elsewhere within the Singapore Legal Service by the Legal Service Commission.

Target: As officers of the Singapore Legal Service, it is said that there is a risk of executive interference because judges may be removed from their judicial positions or transferred to lower-ranking positions elsewhere within the Legal Service by the Legal Service Commission.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The government of Bulgaria decided to grant concession of some of its international airports, but the first procedure in late 2007 wasn't successful. There was interest from the Swiss investor Ferdinand Prisi and the Bulgaria company Prista Oil.

Target: The government of Bulgaria decided to grant concession of some of its international airports, but the first procedure in late 2007 wasn't successful, although there was interest from the Swiss investor Ferdinand Prisi and the Bulgarian company Prista Oil.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Officials claimed the AS-28 crew had food and water for five days. They were actually desperately short of water.

Target: Although officials claimed the AS-28 crew had food and water for five days, they were actually desperately short of water.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This attempt proved futile. To conserve energy and oxygen, the crew of the AS-28 shut down the submarine's non-essential systems (including the heater), donned thermal suits, and rested.

Target: This attempt proved futile. Meanwhile, to conserve energy and oxygen, the crew of the AS-28 shut down the submarine's non-essential systems (including the heater), donned thermal suits, and rested.


Source: Fix coherence errors: As a child, he was given a traditional education by an old teacher named Veerappa Master. Like the other leaders of the Indian Freedom Movement, he also had a unique blend of both traditional and modern education.

Target: As a child, he was given a traditional education by an old teacher named Veerappa Master. Thus, like the other leaders of the Indian Freedom Movement, he also had a unique blend of both traditional and modern education.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Sinapis arvensis a plant species Sinapis arvensis is the wild mustard or charlock.

Target: Sinapis arvensis, the wild mustard or charlock, a plant species


Source: Make the text more consistent: The three statement types are not mutually exclusive. Both authentication statements and attribute statements may be included in a single assertion (as shown above).

Target: The three statement types are not mutually exclusive. For example, both authentication statements and attribute statements may be included in a single assertion (as shown above).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In 2013, SL Jones announced a new EP, Trapper's Delight, produced by M16. The Trapper's Delight included seven songs and earned strong marks from outlets like Complex, XXL, and others.

Target: In 2013, SL Jones announced a new EP, Trapper's Delight, produced by M16. The EP included seven songs and earned strong marks from outlets like Complex, XXL, and others.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Two tugs were sent from Dover. It was impossible to pull Mahratta free.

Target: Although two tugs were sent from Dover, it was impossible to pull Mahratta free.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: One can think of a STR multiplex system as a collection of specific STRs which are positionally conserved on a target genome. These can be used as markers.

Target: One can think of a STR multiplex system as a collection of specific STRs which are positionally conserved on a target genome. Hence these can be used as markers.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: However, a number of irrelevant candidates are found as well ; they contain a k (\\ displaystyle k)-dimensional subspace that does not contain a cluster. These candidates are removed in a second step :

Target: However, a number of irrelevant candidates are found as well ; they contain a k (\\ displaystyle k)-dimensional subspace that does not contain a cluster. Hence, these candidates are removed in a second step :


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In turn, Sa'd came to rely increasingly on Byzantine assistance. He continued to fluctuate in his allegiance between Byzantine.

Target: In turn, Sa'd came to rely increasingly on Byzantine assistance, although he continued to fluctuate in his allegiance between Byzantium.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He concerns the supposed attribution of the book to the patriarch Abraham. He allows that the ideas it contains might be ancient.

Target: Concerning the supposed attribution of the book to the patriarch Abraham, he allows that the ideas it contains might be ancient.


Source: Make the text coherent: In 1511, there was a widespread pro-Shia and pro-Safavid uprising directed against the Ottoman Empire from within the empire. By the early 1510s Ismail's expansionistic policies had pushed the pro-Safavid borders in Asia Minor even more westwards.

Target: In 1511, there was a widespread pro-Shia and pro-Safavid uprising directed against the Ottoman Empire from within the empire. Furthermore, by the early 1510s Ismail's expansionistic policies had pushed the Safavid borders in Asia Minor even more westwards.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: All of her endearing personal qualities, however, were a sharp contrast to Shivaji's second wife, Soyarabai, who was an intriguing lady. There is no record of any friction or mutual differences between Saibai and Shivaji's other wives.

Target: All of her endearing personal qualities, however, were a sharp contrast to Shivaji's second wife, Soyarabai, who was an intriguing lady. Yet, there is no record of any friction or mutual differences between Saibai and Shivaji's other wives.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The iconostasis was painted by Petar Mitov in 1874. Petar Mitov is an artist from Samokov.

Target: The iconostasis was painted by Petar Mitov, an artist from Samokov, in 1874.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Initially, NEPC Airlines operated flights on the Chennai -- Salem -- Coimbatore -- Chennai sector using Fokker F-27 aircraft. The airline withdrew the service after three months citing 'non-viability' as it's the main reason.

Target: Initially, NEPC Airlines operated flights on the Chennai -- Salem -- Coimbatore -- Chennai sector using Fokker F-27 aircraft. however, the airline withdrew the service after three months citing 'non-viability' as it's the main reason.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He was a Massachusetts delegate to the 1839 Whig national party convention. delegate was an delegate on the laws pertaining to waterways, canals and maritime commerce.

Target: He was a Massachusetts delegate to the 1839 Whig national party convention. Hoar was an expert on the laws pertaining to waterways, canals and maritime commerce.


Source: Make the text coherent: Sri Jayabupati in Carita Parahyangan is mentioned as Prabu Detya Maharaja. Sri Jayabupati is the 20th Sri Jayabupati of Sunda after Tarusbawa.

Target: Sri Jayabupati in Carita Parahyangan is mentioned as Prabu Detya Maharaja. He is the 20th king of Sunda after Tarusbawa.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bayar was born in Ulan Bator in 1956. Ulan Bator is the capital of Mongolia.

Target: Bayar was born in Ulan Bator, the capital of Mongolia, in 1956.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Indian Government has stated that it may provide temporary direct or indirect liquidity support to the company. Whether employment will continue at pre-crisis levels, particularly for new recruits, is questionable.

Target: The Indian Government has stated that it may provide temporary direct or indirect liquidity support to the company. However, whether employment will continue at pre-crisis levels, particularly for new recruits, is questionable.


Source: Make the text more logical: Permission to build the harbour was granted by Parliament in 1829 to the Saundersfoot Railway and Harbour Company for the export of anthracite coal from the many mines in the area. Coal was exported from the beach for centuries before this.

Target: Permission to build the harbour was granted by Parliament in 1829 to the Saundersfoot Railway and Harbour Company for the export of anthracite coal from the many mines in the area, although coal was exported from the beach for centuries before this.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He stole into the stronghold. He was finally able to confirm the identity of its lord.

Target: Stealing into the stronghold, he was finally able to confirm the identity of its lord.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Scale insects feed on a wide variety of plants, though particular species commonly are specific to particular host plants or plant groups. Various kinds of cochineal are restricted to cactus hosts.

Target: Scale insects feed on a wide variety of plants, though particular species commonly are specific to particular host plants or plant groups. For example, various kinds of cochineal are restricted to cactus hosts.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In Catwoman: When in Rome, Scarecrow supplies the Riddler with fear gas to manipulate Catwoman, and later aids Riddler when he fights Catwoman in Rome. Scarecrow accidentally attacks Cheetah with Scarecrow's scythe Catwoman Catwoman knocks him out.

Target: In Catwoman: When in Rome, Scarecrow supplies the Riddler with fear gas to manipulate Catwoman, and later aids Riddler when he fights Catwoman in Rome. Scarecrow accidentally attacks Cheetah with his scythe before Catwoman knocks him out.


Source: Fix coherence: The character gets revamped from his earlier appearances. Producer Bruce Timm felt the character never actually looked scary.

Target: The character gets revamped from his earlier appearances because producer Bruce Timm felt the character never actually looked scary.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Batman defeats the militia there. Batman confronts Scarecrow in the central mixing chamber, where the villain informs Batman that Barbara Gordon has been captured, before locking the hero inside the imploding facility.

Target: Defeating the militia there, Batman confronts Scarecrow in the central mixing chamber, where the villain informs Batman that Barbara Gordon has been captured, before locking the hero inside the imploding facility.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Scarecrow then betrays the Commissioner by pushing Barbara off the building. Though Gordon shot Batman, Scarecrow did so in a reinforced area of Scarecrow's suit, which allowed him to Barbara Barbara.

Target: Scarecrow then betrays the Commissioner by pushing Barbara off the building. Though Gordon shot Batman, he did so in a reinforced area of his suit, which allowed him to save Barbara.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Though Gordon shot Batman, he did so in a reinforced area of his suit, which allowed him to save Barbara. In the mayhem, Scarecrow and his militia forces escape, now holding Gordon Gordon hostage.

Target: Though Gordon shot Batman, he did so in a reinforced area of his suit, which allowed him to save Barbara. In the mayhem, Scarecrow and his militia forces escape, now holding Commissioner Gordon hostage.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Schlenkern is a German verb. To swing or to dangle.

Target: Schlenkern is a German verb meaning to swing or to dangle.


Source: Make the text more logical: The rabbit population reached eight to ten thousand individuals before the arrival of myxomatosis in 1954 killed all but 12 animals. Numbers increased afterwards.

Target: The rabbit population reached eight to ten thousand individuals before the arrival of myxomatosis in 1954 killed all but 12 animals, although numbers increased afterwards.


Source: Make the text clearer: At least 2006. Cullen has hosted a comedy show entitled The Sean Schau!

Target: Since at least 2006, Cullen has hosted a comedy show entitled The Sean Schau!


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Born in England. Murray qualifies to play for the Republic of Ireland through his Irish grandparents.

Target: Although born in England, Murray qualifies to play for the Republic of Ireland through his Irish grandparents.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He starred in Devil's Carnival 2012. Devil's Carnival is a short film which was screened on tour beginning in April.

Target: He starred in Devil's Carnival, a short film which was screened on tour beginning in April, 2012.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: A contract for the construction was awarded to Howard Ashton Holden, signed on 8 January 1864. Progress was extremely slow, and in April 1865 the Company wrote to Howard Ashton Holden threatening suspension of the contract.

Target: A contract for the construction was awarded to Howard Ashton Holden, signed on 8 January 1864, but progress was extremely slow, and in April 1865 the Company wrote to Holden threatening suspension of the contract.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Those residents who had not fled the fighting reported amicable relations with the rebel units occupying the town. Relations between local Sunni rebels and the remaining Christian civilians in the town broke down catastrophically over the following months.

Target: Those residents who had not fled the fighting reported amicable relations with the rebel units occupying the town. However, relations between local Sunni rebels and the remaining Christian civilians in the town broke down catastrophically over the following months.


Source: Make the text more consistent: During World War II many Jews from Sedan were sent to the concentration camps. In 1962, at the end of the Algerian War, repatriation to France helped enlarge the Jews community of Sedan.

Target: During World War II many Jews from Sedan were sent to the concentration camps. In 1962, at the end of the Algerian War, repatriation to France helped enlarge the Jewish community of Sedan.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Some, but not all, of these gases may be flammable. Carbon dioxide is a common, gaseous decomposition product for diacyl peroxides and peresters that is not flammable.

Target: Some, but not all, of these gases may be flammable. For example, carbon dioxide is a common, gaseous decomposition product for diacyl peroxides and peresters that is not flammable.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Eliza decides to take on a club. Eliza decides to join in on Eliza's book club, Eliza she is quickly found out as not having read the book.

Target: Eliza decides to take on a club, so she decides to join in on her book club, though she is quickly found out as not having read the book.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Burke's interest in sculpture was encouraged by her maternal grandmother, a painter. Burke's mother Burke she should pursue a more financially stable career.

Target: Burke's interest in sculpture was encouraged by her maternal grandmother, a painter, although her mother thought she should pursue a more financially stable career.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The region has highly diverse plant communities. Over 300 orchid species have been identified, 60 % of all orchid genera in Mexico.

Target: The region has highly diverse plant communities. For example, over 300 orchid species have been identified, 60 % of all orchid genera in Mexico.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This is a surprise to Kate, but her father didn't intend to see her there. Both clearly uncomfortable, Kate tells father Kate'll say a few words at father's retirement party his friends are throwing at The Blue Bar in a few days.

Target: This is a surprise to Kate, but her father didn't intend to see her there. Both clearly uncomfortable, she tells him she'll say a few words at his retirement party his friends are throwing at The Blue Bar in a few days.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 1886, Ontario clarified its law. Such establishment could only occur after an application had been made by at least five Black families in the community.

Target: In 1886, Ontario clarified its law, so that such establishment could only occur after an application had been made by at least five Black families in the community.


Source: Make the text coherent: The Shag Harbour UFO incident was the reported impact of an unknown large object into waters near Shag Harbour 1967. Shag Harbour is a tiny fishing village in the Canadian province of Nova Scotia on October 4.

Target: The Shag Harbour UFO incident was the reported impact of an unknown large object into waters near Shag Harbour, a tiny fishing village in the Canadian province of Nova Scotia on October 4, 1967.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Barakars in this area are about 3100 km Four coal seams have been recorded from the lower Barakars. A few thin seams are reported from Barakars.

Target: The Barakars in this area are about 3100 km Four coal seams have been recorded from the lower Barakars whereas a few thin seams are reported from Upper Barakars.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Shakespeare funerary monument is a memorial to William Shakespeare located inside Holy Trinity Church at Stratford-upon-Avon, the church in which Shakespeare was baptised. Where Shakespeare was buried in the chancel two days after Shakespeare's 's's death.

Target: The Shakespeare funerary monument is a memorial to William Shakespeare located inside Holy Trinity Church at Stratford-upon-Avon, the church in which Shakespeare was baptised and where he was buried in the chancel two days after his death.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: 2011 estimates by the US Department of Energy in 2011 pegged out Polish shale reserves as the largest in Europe. The authors of the report calculated that Polish had reserves of about 22.45 trillion cubic meters of shale gas, of which 5.30 trillion cubic meters was recoverable.

Target: 2011 estimates by the US Department of Energy in 2011 pegged out Polish shale reserves as the largest in Europe. The authors of the report calculated that Poland had reserves of about 22.45 trillion cubic meters of shale gas, of which 5.30 trillion cubic meters was recoverable.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In Kalimantan Island, the proven reserves are in Barito, Kutei, Tarakan, Melawi, and Ketungau. In Sulawesi Island, there is only one proven reserve, which is Sengkang.

Target: In Kalimantan Island, the proven reserves are in Barito, Kutei, Tarakan, Melawi, and Ketungau. Whereas, in Sulawesi Island, there is only one proven reserve, which is Sengkang.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Lowry elected to turn professional the week after his Irish Open triumph. That Lowry would miss out on the opportunity to play in the Walker Cup in September.

Target: Lowry elected to turn professional the week after his Irish Open triumph, meaning that he would miss out on the opportunity to play in the Walker Cup in September.


Source: Make the text clearer: Adelaide later returns to the U.S. and Liam is prepared to meet her upon her arrival to the airport from France. As Liam prepares to walk up to give her some flowers, Liam sees Adelaide kissing a Caucasian man as they part.

Target: Adelaide later returns to the U.S. and Liam is prepared to meet her upon her arrival to the airport from France. However, as he prepares to walk up to give her some flowers, he sees Adelaide kissing a Caucasian man as they part.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Sharath benefited from the high-performance training. Sharath clocked personal best timings in all four events at London 2012.

Target: Benefiting from the high-performance training, Sharath clocked personal best timings in all four events at London 2012.


Source: Make the text more logical: This was necessary. From the flagship.

Target: This was necessary because from the flagship.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He sang and composing music for songs of love, tragedy, devotion (bhajan) and patriotism. He pioneered many of the genres of modern Nepali music.

Target: Singing and composing music for songs of love, tragedy, devotion (bhajan) and patriotism, he pioneered many of the genres of modern Nepali music.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The remaining provinces (Manitoba, Ontario, Quebec, New Brunswick, Prince Edward Island and Newfoundland and Labrador) require stores to close on most major holidays. Three provinces have further restrictions on Sunday openings.

Target: The remaining provinces (Manitoba, Ontario, Quebec, New Brunswick, Prince Edward Island and Newfoundland and Labrador) require stores to close on most major holidays. Furthermore, three provinces have further restrictions on Sunday openings.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Another early example is the Brent Cross Centre which was opened in March 1976. The Brent Cross Centre is britain's first out-of-town shopping mall and located on the northern outskirts of London.

Target: Another early example is the Brent Cross Centre, Britain's first out-of-town shopping mall and located on the northern outskirts of London, which was opened in March 1976.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Among Uthman's works are several volumes of short stories including Silence and the Walls and Circles in the Book of Time. Uthman's short Silence Silence and Walls Walls appeared in English translation in a 1988 anthology of Arabian literature edited by Salma Khadra Jayyusi.

Target: Among Uthman's works are several volumes of short stories including Silence and the Walls and Circles in the Book of Time. His short story Silence and the Walls appeared in English translation in a 1988 anthology of Arabian literature edited by Salma Khadra Jayyusi.


Source: Make the text clearer: But the failure of the escape of Louis XVI to Varenne lead to the arrest and indictment of the king of France. On Aug. 4, 1792, the Archbishop of Mainz joined the Austro-Prussian coalition.

Target: But the failure of the escape of Louis XVI to Varenne lead to the arrest and indictment of the king of France. Thus, on Aug. 4, 1792, the Archbishop of Mainz joined the Austro-Prussian coalition.


Source: Make the text more coherent: With the apparent loss of the Eye, Mollari believes his career to be finished. Morden shows up and delivers Eye to Mollari and then leaves.

Target: With the apparent loss of the Eye, Mollari believes his career to be finished. However, Morden shows up and delivers The Eye to him and then leaves.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Of the 253 inhabited buildings in the municipality, in 2000, about 34.8 % were single family homes and 36.0 % were multiple family buildings. About 32.0 % of the buildings were built before 1919, while 7.5 % were built between 1991 and 2000.

Target: Of the 253 inhabited buildings in the municipality, in 2000, about 34.8 % were single family homes and 36.0 % were multiple family buildings. Additionally, about 32.0 % of the buildings were built before 1919, while 7.5 % were built between 1991 and 2000.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: However, Romanian coaches were unable to decide between the two. Both were part of the Romanian Olympic delegation in Rome.

Target: However, Romanian coaches were unable to decide between the two, so both were part of the Romanian Olympic delegation in Rome.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Intratracheal instillation tests revealed that SWNHs rarely damaged rat lung tissue for a 90-day test period. Black pigmentation due to accumulated nanohorns was observed.

Target: Intratracheal instillation tests revealed that SWNHs rarely damaged rat lung tissue for a 90-day test period, although black pigmentation due to accumulated nanohorns was observed.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He was the son of Connor O'Brien and his wife Maire Rua McMahon. In 1692, son entered the Irish House of Commons, sitting for Clare until 1714.

Target: He was the son of Connor O'Brien and his wife Maire Rua McMahon. In 1692, O'Brien entered the Irish House of Commons, sitting for Clare until 1714.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the first book, Brian had broken up with her. Brian keeps on showing up whenever she is in trouble.

Target: In the first book, Brian had broken up with her yet he keeps on showing up whenever she is in trouble.


Source: Fix sentence flow: On the search of her siblings, she has lost her love, Venkat. For the love and desperate to meet her siblings, she goes on with her life.

Target: On the search of her siblings, she has lost her love, Venkat. Yet, for the love and desperate to meet her siblings, she goes on with her life.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The governor ordered to have all government buildings closed. Public employees could attend a welcoming ceremony.

Target: The governor ordered to have all government buildings closed so that public employees could attend a welcoming ceremony.


Source: Fix coherence errors: I don't know where she is. Whatever it takes, wherever I have to go, I'm gonna find my daughter.

Target: I don't know where she is. But whatever it takes, wherever I have to go, I'm gonna find my daughter.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Real-Time Passenger Information Displays are available at selected bus stops along SmartBus routes, especially at major road intersections and bus interchanges. Real-time information is not available at all stops.

Target: Real-Time Passenger Information Displays are available at selected bus stops along SmartBus routes, especially at major road intersections and bus interchanges, although real-time information is not available at all stops.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: SmartBus was originally a policy initiative of the Kennett State Government in the late 1990s, but was slowly implemented under the Bracks and Brumby governments. Plans from the late 1980s included a number of cross-town routes, which were to be called MetLink.

Target: SmartBus was originally a policy initiative of the Kennett State Government in the late 1990s, but was slowly implemented under the Bracks and Brumby governments. However, plans from the late 1980s included a number of cross-town routes, which were to be called MetLink.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Once firmly established, a norm becomes a part of the group's operational structure and. More difficult to change.

Target: Once firmly established, a norm becomes a part of the group's operational structure and hence more difficult to change.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Psychologists believe that simple contact or social interaction with others is not enough to fulfill this need. People have a strong motivational drive to form and maintain caring interpersonal relationships.

Target: Psychologists believe that simple contact or social interaction with others is not enough to fulfill this need. Instead, people have a strong motivational drive to form and maintain caring interpersonal relationships.


Source: Fix coherence: A threat to these needs produces psychological distress and pain. People are motivated to remove this pain with behaviours aimed at reducing the likelihood of others ostracising them any further and increasing their inclusionary status.

Target: A threat to these needs produces psychological distress and pain. Thus, people are motivated to remove this pain with behaviours aimed at reducing the likelihood of others ostracising them any further and increasing their inclusionary status.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: One reason for this is that peer groups establish reputational biases that act as stereotypes and influence subsequent social interaction. Even when rejected and popular children show similar behavior and accomplishments, popular children are treated much more favorably.

Target: One reason for this is that peer groups establish reputational biases that act as stereotypes and influence subsequent social interaction. Thus, even when rejected and popular children show similar behavior and accomplishments, popular children are treated much more favorably.


Source: Fix coherence: The agriculture industry uses 1 million pounds per year as a fertilizer. Its use has been suggested for treatment of whiptail in broccoli and cauliflower in molybdenum-deficient soils.

Target: The agriculture industry uses 1 million pounds per year as a fertilizer. In particular, its use has been suggested for treatment of whiptail in broccoli and cauliflower in molybdenum-deficient soils.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It is true that at midday, all streets have shadows ;. Because of streets' diagonal orientation, more sunlight enters than if they ran due east-west.

Target: It is true that at midday, all streets have shadows ; but because of their diagonal orientation, more sunlight enters than if they ran due east-west.


Source: Make the text coherent: SoldierSanta relies on contributions and gift donations. SoldierSanta sends gifts such as an iPod or DVD to American troops in an effort to make the holiday season special.

Target: Relying on contributions and gift donations, SoldierSanta sends gifts such as an iPod or DVD to American troops in an effort to make the holiday season special.