Source: Fix coherence: The Swedes surrendered, and Lacy occupied both Helsingfors and the Finnish capital of Abo. By 1743, with Swedish defeat complete and fears of a coalition to defend Swedes growing, Elizabeth finally brought Swedes to the bargaining table.

Target: The Swedes surrendered, and Lacy occupied both Helsingfors and the Finnish capital of Abo. By 1743, with Swedish defeat complete and fears of a coalition to defend Sweden growing, Elizabeth finally brought Sweden to the bargaining table.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In late June, while preparing for the attack, Charles XII was shot in the foot. Once the charge was made on the morning of 8 July 1709 (N.S.), he was leading the battle off of a litter.

Target: In late June, while preparing for the attack, Charles XII was shot in the foot. Thus, once the charge was made on the morning of 8 July 1709 (N.S.), he was leading the battle off of a litter.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: To help quell these waves, Peter traveled to Paris in 1717. Although Peter's trip was inconclusive -- France only promised to avoid involvement -- once again, it Peter Peter an opportunity to study Western Europe.

Target: To help quell these waves, Peter traveled to Paris in 1717. Although his trip was inconclusive -- France only promised to avoid involvement -- once again, it gave Peter an opportunity to study Western Europe.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A broken Sweden sought allies against the Russian juggernaut. The search proved fruitless, and with Russian troops regularly crossing the Baltic and raiding Sweden Sweden, even reaching the suburbs of Stockholm, the Sweden finally admitted ultimate defeat.

Target: A broken Sweden sought allies against the Russian juggernaut, but the search proved fruitless, and with Russian troops regularly crossing the Baltic and raiding mainland Sweden, even reaching the suburbs of Stockholm, the Swedes finally admitted ultimate defeat.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Plans started in the 1920s. Plans began for damming the St. Lawrence to build a massive hydro-electric power plant and an artificial body of water that was navigable for ocean-going ships.

Target: Starting in the 1920s, plans began for damming the St. Lawrence to build a massive hydro-electric power plant and an artificial body of water that was navigable for ocean-going ships.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Local legend tells that after the village had moved to its current location, the church was going to be rebuilt in the centre. Each time stones were moved from the old site to the new place, St Augustine came down and put them back overnight.

Target: Local legend tells that after the village had moved to its current location, the church was going to be rebuilt in the centre. However each time stones were moved from the old site to the new place, St Augustine came down and put them back overnight.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Higher Malay is a continuation of previous Malay knowledge from primary school. Only students who took continuation as a PSLE subject are eligible for Malay.

Target: Higher Malay is a continuation of previous Malay knowledge from primary school, so only students who took Malay as a PSLE subject are eligible for Higher Malay.


Source: Fix coherence: Specifically, in the early versions, the meter had no switch to turn itself off. The owner had to fit meter's lens cap to meter it from draining batteries.

Target: Specifically, in the early versions, the meter had no switch to turn itself off, so the owner had to fit its lens cap to prevent it from draining batteries.


Source: Fix coherence errors: After 2011 Croatian census Serbs of Vukovar meet the required proportion of population for co-official introduction of Serbian language. Proportion led to Anti-Cyrillic protests in Croatian.

Target: After 2011 Croatian census Serbs of Vukovar meet the required proportion of population for co-official introduction of Serbian language but it led to Anti-Cyrillic protests in Croatia.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Mira (AK-84) was never commissioned and thus never bore the USS designation. The ship was transferred to become the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers Port Repair ship Robert M. Emery the day after acquisition by USS.

Target: Mira (AK-84) was never commissioned and thus never bore the USS designation. The ship was transferred to become the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers Port Repair ship Robert M. Emery the day after acquisition by Navy.


Source: Make the text more logical: In January, 1660, Shivaji arrived to personally command the three-month-long ongoing siege. News of attacks by Siddi Johar and Fazal Khan caused his return to Panhala.

Target: In January, 1660, Shivaji arrived to personally command the three-month-long ongoing siege. However, news of attacks by Siddi Johar and Fazal Khan caused his return to Panhala.


Source: Make the text more logical: For 67 years the light served to warn mariners about the shoals off the point. New techniques in offshore construction and the automation of lighthouse illumination made it possible to build a navigation aid on the shoal itself.

Target: For 67 years the light served to warn mariners about the shoals off the point. However, new techniques in offshore construction and the automation of lighthouse illumination made it possible to build a navigation aid on the shoal itself.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He supports the Prime Minister Narendra Modi's skill development goal. He joins hands with National Skill Development Corporation (NSDC) to motivate young people to come forward and acquire new skills.

Target: Supporting the Prime Minister Narendra Modi's skill development goal, he joins hands with National Skill Development Corporation (NSDC) to motivate young people to come forward and acquire new skills.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: I finished my university, was part of NSD and did full length plays on stage. At one point of time I wanted to get into FTII, but there were no acting courses then.

Target: I finished my university, was part of NSD and did full length plays on stage. In fact, at one point of time I wanted to get into FTII, but there were no acting courses then.


Source: Fix sentence flow: But the film still exudes the appeal of what the New Wave must have looked like when it first emerged as a trend, with its concentration on ordinary people and charmingly observed street scenes. Its this that makes the film endearing.

Target: But the film still exudes the appeal of what the New Wave must have looked like when it first emerged as a trend, with its concentration on ordinary people and charmingly observed street scenes. And its this that makes the film endearing.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Incumbent Governor of Montana Tim M. Babcock ran for re-election. Montana Tim M. Babcock became Governor upon the death of previous Governor Donald Grant Nutter.

Target: Incumbent Governor of Montana Tim M. Babcock, who became Governor upon the death of previous Governor Donald Grant Nutter, ran for re-election.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It expresses both poetical and philosophical ideas. It is not enough to understand these words.

Target: Expressing both poetical and philosophical ideas, it is not enough to understand these words.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The only artistic license were the characters' helmets, which were made like a goldfish bowl rather than an actual space helmet. Readers could identify the individual characters.

Target: The only artistic license were the characters' helmets, which were made like a goldfish bowl rather than an actual space helmet so that readers could identify the individual characters.


Source: Make the text more logical: For the standing start only, the start line is 143m closer to Hell Corner. Traffic does not go too far around Murray's Corner when the start grid is formed.

Target: For the standing start only, the start line is 143m closer to Hell Corner so that traffic does not go too far around Murray's Corner when the start grid is formed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The estate served as a neutral ground for both sides during the American Civil War. Fighting raged across the nearby countryside.

Target: The estate served as a neutral ground for both sides during the American Civil War, although fighting raged across the nearby countryside.


Source: Make the text coherent: These middens also suggests that Lake Eyasi had once reached to just outside the cave. After paying closer attention to the faunal remains, several archaeologists have been able to conclude that the Mumba's past inhabitants took advantage of the terrestrial environment as well.

Target: These middens also suggests that Lake Eyasi had once reached to just outside the cave. Additionally, after paying closer attention to the faunal remains, several archaeologists have been able to conclude that the Mumba's past inhabitants took advantage of the terrestrial environment as well.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The bed also includes decorated ostrich eggshell beads and pottery. Several human burials found at the site were discovered within this bed.

Target: The bed also includes decorated ostrich eggshell beads and pottery. Additionally several human burials found at the site were discovered within this bed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: There were also questions as to Ware's mental state, as he had been discharged from the British Army in 1943 after a diagnosis of manic depressive psychosis. Unlike Rowland, there was no forensic evidence found that tied Ware to the murder scene.

Target: There were also questions as to Ware's mental state, as he had been discharged from the British Army in 1943 after a diagnosis of manic depressive psychosis. Additionally, unlike Rowland, there was no forensic evidence found that tied Ware to the murder scene.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Smaller groups accepted either Abdullah al-Aftah or Muhammad, other sons of Ja'far al-Sadiq, as the Imam. Another group considered Ja'far al-Sadiq to be the last Imam.

Target: Smaller groups accepted either Abdullah al-Aftah or Muhammad, other sons of Ja'far al-Sadiq, as the Imam. Finally, another group considered Ja'far al-Sadiq to be the last Imam.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Therefore, the stronger partner has no right to punish the weak for a sin in which they are equal ;. Right issues from the servant and not from partner.

Target: Therefore, the stronger partner has no right to punish the weak for a sin in which they are equal ; or it issues from the servant and not from God.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Efficiency of digitization has been increasing as library storage space has been diminishing. More libraries are turning toward digitization not only to preserve materials in electronic formats, but also to save space.

Target: Efficiency of digitization has been increasing as library storage space has been diminishing, so more libraries are turning toward digitization not only to preserve materials in electronic formats, but also to save space.


Source: Make the text coherent: Mydas clavatus is a species of Mydas fly that is native to temperate, eastern North America. Mydas clavatus is named for Mydas clavatus' clubbed antennae, which is however a species feature of the Mydas flies.

Target: Mydas clavatus is a species of Mydas fly that is native to temperate, eastern North America. It is named for its clubbed antennae, which is however a general feature of the Mydas flies.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Lawrence attended Addison County Grammar School. In 1820, Lawrence graduated from Middlebury College where, from 1851 to 1852, Lawrence was a Lawrence.

Target: Lawrence attended Addison County Grammar School. In 1820, he graduated from Middlebury College where, from 1851 to 1852, he was a trustee.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This route doesn't have a very frequent local bus service. Recently, UPSRTC has launched the city bus services, making easier the public transportation from Naini to other nearby places, including heart of the city.

Target: This route doesn't have a very frequent local bus service, but recently, UPSRTC has launched the city bus services, making easier the public transportation from Naini to other nearby places, including heart of the city.


Source: Make the text coherent: With many automated functions. Trains are under driver control.

Target: Although with many automated functions, trains are under driver control.


Source: Make the text more consistent: All metro trains are Wi-Fi enabled (the first metro in India to have this feature). Passengers can use laptops, tablets as well as mobile internet.

Target: All metro trains are Wi-Fi enabled (the first metro in India to have this feature), so passengers can use laptops, tablets as well as mobile internet.


Source: Make the text more logical: Nardorex zorzini is a superficially mackerel-like animal whose overall anatomy places it within the order Aulopiformes. The details of Nardorex zorzini's osteology make its placement Aulopiformes Aulopiformes problematic.

Target: Nardorex zorzini is a superficially mackerel-like animal whose overall anatomy places it within the order Aulopiformes. However, the details of its osteology make its placement within Aulopiformes problematic.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She completed all coursework towards a gender certificate. Her work concentrated around gender studies.

Target: She completed all coursework towards a gender certificate, meaning her work concentrated around gender studies.


Source: Make the text coherent: He echoes white supremacy propaganda. He holds that Jewish people undermined German society, and thus deserved to be targeted by the Nazis.

Target: Echoing white supremacy propaganda, he holds that Jewish people undermined German society, and thus deserved to be targeted by the Nazis.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The many proofs show that the conclusion is stable. Together proofs can make a suitable impression on those who study them.

Target: The many proofs show that the conclusion is stable, and together they can make a suitable impression on those who study them.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It was created to provide support for the Eastern Sea Frontier Command. Records indicate that it was being used before it was commissioned, and was afterward a staging point for training of all kinds from NAS Quonset Point.

Target: Although it was created to provide support for the Eastern Sea Frontier Command, records indicate that it was being used before it was commissioned, and was afterward a staging point for training of all kinds from NAS Quonset Point.


Source: Fix coherence: Carol just lost her son in the street. Carol sends out son's picture, which is stored in Carol's mobile device, to passers-by to see if they son find him.

Target: Carol just lost her son in the street, so she sends out his picture, which is stored in her mobile device, to passers-by to see if they can find him.


Source: Make the text coherent: Nellie is portrayed by Catherine Tate, and is an original character. That Nellie has no counterpart in the original British version of the series.

Target: Nellie is portrayed by Catherine Tate, and is an original character, meaning that she has no counterpart in the original British version of the series.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Following the opening of the railway bridge, pedestrian cross was facilitated by the new structure. Boats and canoes still constituted the main crossing for pedestrian and vehicle transportation.

Target: Following the opening of the railway bridge, pedestrian cross was facilitated by the new structure, while boats and canoes still constituted the main crossing for pedestrian and vehicle transportation.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Love Forever was released in 2012. Love Forever is an album of songs which the late Ari Up and Adrian Sherwood had recorded together until the death of Ari Up.

Target: Love Forever, an album of songs which the late Ari Up and Adrian Sherwood had recorded together until the death of Ari Up, was released in 2012.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Sandford had the fifth fastest second run. Sandford's slower first run Sandford him in 10th place.

Target: Sandford had the fifth fastest second run, but his slower first run left him in 10th place.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: New Zealand pigeons are members of the pigeon genus Hemiphaga (Bonaparte, 1854), which is endemic to the New Zealand archipelago and Norfolk Island. Recently a Hemiphaga bone was found on Raoul Island.

Target: New Zealand pigeons are members of the pigeon genus Hemiphaga (Bonaparte, 1854), which is endemic to the New Zealand archipelago and Norfolk Island. However recently a Hemiphaga bone was found on Raoul Island.


Source: Make the text more logical: The company started with the construction of the canal in 1853 but stopped after sixteen months. Construction costs of the canal significantly exceeded estimates and the company went bankrupt.

Target: The company started with the construction of the canal in 1853 but stopped after sixteen months because construction costs of the canal significantly exceeded estimates and the company went bankrupt.


Source: Fix coherence: Night logistics were mostly limited to the carrying of torches, or navigation by what little light was provided by the stars or moon. Circumstances occasionally necessitated fighting at night.

Target: Night logistics were mostly limited to the carrying of torches, or navigation by what little light was provided by the stars or moon. However, circumstances occasionally necessitated fighting at night.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Niigata Airport currently has no direct rail access. Regional authorities have conducted studies aimed at potentially extending the Joetsu Shinkansen high-speed rail line or other nearby ordinary rail lines to the airport.

Target: Niigata Airport currently has no direct rail access, although regional authorities have conducted studies aimed at potentially extending the Joetsu Shinkansen high-speed rail line or other nearby ordinary rail lines to the airport.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Majority of the North Indians follow Shukla Yajurveda, so they do it on 4th day after Vivaham (marriage). Other kalpasutras mention Shukla Yajurveda just after Griha Pravesham, which occurs next day of marriage in many areas.

Target: Majority of the North Indians follow Shukla Yajurveda, so they do it on 4th day after Vivaham (marriage). Whereas other kalpasutras mention it just after Griha Pravesham, which occurs next day of marriage in many areas.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It sported a more mature side of pop music. It earned them their best reactions yet, drawing comparisons to Madonna's album Ray of Light (1998) as well as other female groups such as All Saints and the Sugababes.

Target: Sporting a more mature side of pop music, it earned them their best reactions yet, drawing comparisons to Madonna's album Ray of Light (1998) as well as other female groups such as All Saints and the Sugababes.


Source: Make the text clearer: Jump up ^ In particular, the speakers of Nobiin claim to be the only real Nubians of African descent,. The Dongolawi believe speakers are speakers of Arabian immigrants.

Target: Jump up ^ In particular, the speakers of Nobiin claim to be the only real Nubians of African descent, whereas the Dongolawi believe they are descendants of Arabian immigrants.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Track 1 normally serves eastbound trains towards Kristiansand and Oslo. Track 2 serves westbound trains towards Stavanger.

Target: Track 1 normally serves eastbound trains towards Kristiansand and Oslo, while track 2 serves westbound trains towards Stavanger.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Most Indians migrated to Malaysia as plantation labourers under British rule. They are a significant minority ethnic group, making up 8 % or 2,410,000 as 2017 of the Malaysia population.

Target: Most Indians migrated to Malaysia as plantation labourers under British rule. They are a significant minority ethnic group, making up 8 % or 2,410,000 as 2017 of the Malaysian population.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A month passes, and Ernie continues to pursue Ada. When gangster Jim Mordinoy (George Coulouris) informs Ernie that she's still Ernie's wife, Ernie doesn't Ada Ada when she says that's Ada lie and he cuts her off socially.

Target: A month passes, and Ernie continues to pursue Ada. However, when gangster Jim Mordinoy (George Coulouris) informs him that she's still his wife, Ernie doesn't believe Ada when she says that's a lie and he cuts her off socially.


Source: Fix sentence transition: At an altitude of 1154 metres, the maximum depth of the lake is reportedly 78 metres. Locals have claimed that the depth is unknown.

Target: At an altitude of 1154 metres, the maximum depth of the lake is reportedly 78 metres, although locals have claimed that the depth is unknown.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: His planes were low on fuel ; and, if they initiated a search, some aircraft might not make it back to the carriers. If the strike returned to Enterprise and missed the enemy carriers, Midway Island might fall.

Target: His planes were low on fuel ; and, if they initiated a search, some aircraft might not make it back to the carriers. On the other hand, if the strike returned to Enterprise and missed the enemy carriers, Midway Island might fall.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Different in leadership styles. All of Northampton's presidents have shared an entrepreneurial spirit and a fervent commitment to open access to education.

Target: Although different in leadership styles, all of Northampton's presidents have shared an entrepreneurial spirit and a fervent commitment to open access to education.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Flight 255's captain was 57-year-old John R. Maus, from Las Vegas, Nevada. John R. Maus was an experienced John R. Maus who had worked for the airline for 31 years.

Target: Flight 255's captain was 57-year-old John R. Maus, from Las Vegas, Nevada. Maus was an experienced pilot who had worked for the airline for 31 years.


Source: Fix coherence: Before 1 January 2010, it was known as Norwegian national road 774 (Riksvei 774). Control was transferred to the county so now it is a Norwegian county road (Fylkesvei).

Target: Before 1 January 2010, it was known as Norwegian national road 774 (Riksvei 774), but control was transferred to the county so now it is a Norwegian county road (Fylkesvei).


Source: Fix coherence errors: Reclusive billionaire Howard Hughes moved from Boston to Las Vegas, where he leased the top two floors of the Desert Inn. Never venturing downstairs, billionaire would buy the hotel in 1967 and live there for several years before moving onward.

Target: Reclusive billionaire Howard Hughes moved from Boston to Las Vegas, where he leased the top two floors of the Desert Inn. Never venturing downstairs, Hughes would buy the hotel in 1967 and live there for several years before moving onward.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Beroe population underwent an initial explosion, until the numbers of both ctenophores stabilized. Both Mnemiopsis leidyi and Beroe ovata remain today in the Black Sea.

Target: The Beroe population underwent an initial explosion, until the numbers of both ctenophores stabilized. Nevertheless, both Mnemiopsis leidyi and Beroe ovata remain today in the Black Sea.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The commercial single itself was released in video format only on VHS, echoing the television theme from their Zoo TV Tour. Limited copies of promotional vinyl and CDs do exist.

Target: The commercial single itself was released in video format only on VHS, echoing the television theme from their Zoo TV Tour although limited copies of promotional vinyl and CDs do exist.


Source: Make the text coherent: Benchmarks are used. Oil prices differ.

Target: Benchmarks are used because oil prices differ.


Source: Make the text coherent: As head of the WFA, Keitel appointed Max von Viebahn. After two months Keitel was removed from command.

Target: As head of the WFA, Keitel appointed Max von Viebahn although after two months he was removed from command.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Observers, e.g. birders, collect their own sightings and pictures made during field trips and holidays. Birders feed the data that enable them to share birders' sightings, pictures with other users and ngo's.

Target: Observers, e.g. birders, collect their own sightings and pictures made during field trips and holidays. Meanwhile, they feed the data that enable them to share their sightings, pictures with other users and ngo's.


Source: Make the text coherent: Cantor decided to cancel his lecture. The incident was called Occupy Cantor.

Target: Cantor decided to cancel his lecture. The incident was called Occupy Eric Cantor.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Dr. Bates rushes out to the ship's deck, grabs the harpoon and tags the whale, albeit missing the intended target area. Dr. Dr. is furious with Jason, and doesn't believe Bates' story about a girl appearing in the water.

Target: Dr. Bates rushes out to the ship's deck, grabs the harpoon and tags the whale, albeit missing the intended target area. Dr. Bates is furious with Jason, and doesn't believe his story about a girl appearing in the water.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: For her part Maria is unwilling to rekindle her relationship with her mother following an abusive past. Rosa holds other dark secrets and a surprise for part and Ben.

Target: For her part Maria is unwilling to rekindle her relationship with her mother following an abusive past. Rosa however holds other dark secrets and a surprise for Maria and Ben.


Source: Fix sentence transition: No manual transmission was ever contemplated. Performance was adequate with the automatic transmission and because virtually all U.S.-built luxury cars during this period came with automatic transmissions as standard equipment.

Target: No manual transmission was ever contemplated because performance was adequate with the automatic transmission and because virtually all U.S.-built luxury cars during this period came with automatic transmissions as standard equipment.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: And it's clear that it's closer to this than you get with Yes. Maybe it's a coincidence.

Target: And it's clear that it's closer to this than you get with Yes. But maybe it's a coincidence.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Previous Yes tours had seen him play passable support guitar and percussion onstage. Anderson drastically improved his musical skills for Olias, becoming a multi-instrumentalist for the album sessions.

Target: Although previous Yes tours had seen him play passable support guitar and percussion onstage, Anderson drastically improved his musical skills for Olias, becoming a multi-instrumentalist for the album sessions.


Source: Make the text clearer: So the question is, is this all really happening by design. Is question a self-fulfilled, man-made question that we are creating by accepting question in our collective consciousness?

Target: So the question is, is this all really happening by design or is it a self-fulfilled, man-made hysteria that we are creating by accepting it in our collective consciousness?


Source: Fix sentence transition: In particular, the proposal should not provide a legal basis for the exchange of information for purposes other than those mentioned therein. It should not restrict the principle of purpose limitation laid down in the General Data Protection Regulation.

Target: In particular, the proposal should not provide a legal basis for the exchange of information for purposes other than those mentioned therein. Furthermore it should not restrict the principle of purpose limitation laid down in the General Data Protection Regulation.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Additionally, the power brick can contain larger, dedicated electronics,. Any power processing on a phone has to use smaller and cooler equipment.

Target: Additionally, the power brick can contain larger, dedicated electronics, whereas any power processing on a phone has to use smaller and cooler equipment.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She presumes them to be lovers locked in an amorous embrace. She is satisfied with her discovery.

Target: Presuming them to be lovers locked in an amorous embrace, she is satisfied with her discovery.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Mainly centred on male roles. Powell encouraged Pressburger to create a number of significant female characters.

Target: Although mainly centred on male roles, Powell encouraged Pressburger to create a number of significant female characters.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Flashback: Alison persuades her husband to accept a polygamous lifestyle because she feels overwhelmed by the time constraints of the housework and raising their daughter, Farah. Another woman, Sahar, moves in, but Alison gets jealous.

Target: Flashback: Alison persuades her husband to accept a polygamous lifestyle because she feels overwhelmed by the time constraints of the housework and raising their daughter, Farah. Then, another woman, Sahar, moves in, but Alison gets jealous.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The disengagement was executed in 2005. Supporters continue to use the color as a symbol of general opposition to further withdrawals.

Target: Although the disengagement was executed in 2005, supporters continue to use the color as a symbol of general opposition to further withdrawals.


Source: Fix sentence transition: They are difficult to maintain in an aquarium. Provided with live corals.

Target: They are difficult to maintain in an aquarium unless provided with live corals.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Even before the site began operating, the company faced intense antitrust scrutiny. Five of the six major airlines were collaborating on the project.

Target: Even before the site began operating, the company faced intense antitrust scrutiny because five of the six major airlines were collaborating on the project.


Source: Fix coherence: The Order of Jamaica is the fifth order in precedence in Jamaica. Jamaica is awarded to any Jamaica citizen of outstanding distinction.

Target: The Order of Jamaica is the fifth order in precedence in Jamaica. It is awarded to any Jamaican citizen of outstanding distinction.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The canopy at the dais end of the Great Hall was destroyed --. Part of it can still be seen in the north wall.

Target: The canopy at the dais end of the Great Hall was destroyed -- although part of it can still be seen in the north wall.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Drysdale was on hand to congratulate Hershiser after the game. When Hershiser returned to the dugout, Drysdale was waiting with Hershiser's microphone for an interview.

Target: Drysdale was on hand to congratulate Hershiser after the game. In fact, when Hershiser returned to the dugout, Drysdale was waiting with his microphone for an interview.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Additionally, baseball fans were more concerned with pennant races. Four of the final five games in the streak were played in the Pacific Time Zone, limiting the games' visibility to the rest of the country.

Target: Additionally, baseball fans were more concerned with pennant races. Furthermore, four of the final five games in the streak were played in the Pacific Time Zone, limiting the games' visibility to the rest of the country.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Antonius Mathijsen, a Dutch military surgeon, invented the plaster of Paris cast in 1851. Up until the 1890s, orthopedics was still a study limited to the correction of deformity in children.

Target: Antonius Mathijsen, a Dutch military surgeon, invented the plaster of Paris cast in 1851. However, up until the 1890s, orthopedics was still a study limited to the correction of deformity in children.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Around this time it was suggested that 2,000-3,000 vehicles might be required. Throughout the program numbers would fluctuate.

Target: Around this time it was suggested that 2,000-3,000 vehicles might be required, although throughout the program numbers would fluctuate.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Osmunda claytoniana is found in humid zones, mostly in forests, but also in more open habitats and biomes. Rarely in bogs.

Target: Osmunda claytoniana is found in humid zones, mostly in forests, but also in more open habitats and biomes, although rarely in bogs.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: After World War II, public wells became less important, reducing the amount of decoration. Beginning in 1952, Dr. Kunstmann and his wife, of Nuremberg, worked to revive the tradition in Franconian Switzerland.

Target: After World War II, public wells became less important, reducing the amount of decoration. However, beginning in 1952, Dr. Kunstmann and his wife, of Nuremberg, worked to revive the tradition in Franconian Switzerland.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This bird seems just capable of crossing the Atlantic, as there have been a handful of records in Norway, Ireland and Great Britain. Half of the six finds were of dead birds.

Target: This bird seems just capable of crossing the Atlantic, as there have been a handful of records in Norway, Ireland and Great Britain. However, half of the six finds were of dead birds.


Source: Fix coherence: She boarded at Loreto Girls School in Normanhurst during World War I. Loreto Girls School in Normanhurst is a suburb of Sydney.

Target: She boarded at Loreto Girls School in Normanhurst, a suburb of Sydney, during World War I.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The proliferation of American culture in Pakistan stands in stark contrast to the growing resentment most Pakistanis feel toward the United States government. American companies have heavily invested in Pakistanis.

Target: The proliferation of American culture in Pakistan stands in stark contrast to the growing resentment most Pakistanis feel toward the United States government. As a result, US companies have heavily invested in Pakistan.


Source: Fix coherence errors: P. scudderi, unlike P. florissantia, was described from two specimens. Only holotype specimen MCZ number 2027 was noted as a type specimen.

Target: P. scudderi, unlike P. florissantia, was described from two specimens. However only holotype specimen MCZ number 2027 was noted as a type specimen.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Wide differences in proficiency existed between various guard units in training, leadership and equipment. For the most part units came to the border with only basic drilling as experience.

Target: Wide differences in proficiency existed between various guard units in training, leadership and equipment, so that for the most part units came to the border with only basic drilling as experience.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Marthanda Varma, the famed Venad ruler and establisher of Travancore kingdom (925 CE) was named for his annexation policies. On Marthanda Varma's conquests in Travancore, Pandalam was left independent and wasn't annexed to his domain.

Target: Marthanda Varma, the famed Venad ruler and establisher of Travancore kingdom (925 CE) was named for his annexation policies. But on his conquests in Central Travancore, Pandalam was left independent and wasn't annexed to his domain.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: This can be seen at any time of day. Visitors must arrange privately for a boat through the local co-op.

Target: This can be seen at any time of day, but visitors must arrange privately for a boat through the local co-op.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Paris quadrifolia, the herb-paris or true lover's knot, is a Eurasian species of flowering plant in the family Melanthiaceae. Authorities formerly regarded species as part of the Liliaceae family.

Target: Paris quadrifolia, the herb-paris or true lover's knot, is a Eurasian species of flowering plant in the family Melanthiaceae, although authorities formerly regarded it as part of the Liliaceae family.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: NSW Climate Impact Profile: the impacts of climate change on the biophysical environment of NSW. Department of Environment, Climate Change and Water, South Sydney, NSW.

Target: NSW Climate Impact Profile: the impacts of climate change on the biophysical environment of NSW. Department of Environment, Climate Change and Water, South Sydney, New South Wales.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Paso Internacional Los Libertadores, also called Cristo Redentor, is a mountain pass in the Andes between Argentina and Chile. Paso Internacional Los Libertadores is the main Cristo Redentor out of the Chile capital city Santiago into Mendoza city in Argentina and so carries quite heavy traffic.

Target: The Paso Internacional Los Libertadores, also called Cristo Redentor, is a mountain pass in the Andes between Argentina and Chile. It is the main transport route out of the Chilean capital city Santiago into Mendoza city in Argentina and so carries quite heavy traffic.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Particularly in mathematical and scientific fields, boys are presumed to have more keen spatial abilities than girls,. Girls are supposed to assume better linguistic skills.

Target: Particularly in mathematical and scientific fields, boys are presumed to have more keen spatial abilities than girls, whereas girls are supposed to assume better linguistic skills.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Preece persuaded Spencer to sign his house and financial affairs over to her. The painful intricacies of the three-way relationship became the subject in 1996 of a play, Spencer, by Pam Gems.

Target: Preece persuaded Spencer to sign his house and financial affairs over to her. The painful intricacies of the three-way relationship became the subject in 1996 of a play, Stanley, by Pam Gems.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: His main goals were to write educational stories that would better inform people about the place he loves. One of his books in particular Mark of the Bear was written to support a movement protecting north american bears.

Target: His main goals were to write educational stories that would better inform people about the place he loves. In fact, one of his books in particular Mark of the Bear was written to support a movement protecting north american bears.


Source: Make the text more coherent: One leg had been amputated. He entered aviation and has carried out numerous reconnaissances over long distances and has had 15 aerial combats.

Target: Although one leg had been amputated, he entered aviation and has carried out numerous reconnaissances over long distances and has had 15 aerial combats.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: UNAMSIL was eventually formed and deployed in 1999, authorised under a Chapter VII mandate, it was meant to enforce the Lome agreements. Violence would continue.

Target: UNAMSIL was eventually formed and deployed in 1999, authorised under a Chapter VII mandate, it was meant to enforce the Lome agreements. However, violence would continue.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Its leadership had expected the international community to cut and run, as it had done in Somalia and earlier when UNOMSIL fled Freetown. With British support, an aggressive campaign was waged against the RUF.

Target: Its leadership had expected the international community to cut and run, as it had done in Somalia and earlier when UNOMSIL fled Freetown. Instead, with British support, an aggressive campaign was waged against the RUF.


Source: Fix coherence errors: An invitation by the publisher Joan Gili to translate some poems by Josep Carner led to the publication of his first book in 1962. His first book is a collection of thirty of Carner's poems in Catalan and English.

Target: An invitation by the publisher Joan Gili to translate some poems by Josep Carner led to the publication of his first book, a collection of thirty of Carner's poems in Catalan and English, in 1962.


Source: Fix sentence flow: There were three children. Each surviving child receives one-third.

Target: There were three children, so each surviving child receives one-third.


Source: Fix sentence transition: It is difficult to analyze extinction and survival rates of land organisms in detail. Few terrestrial fossil beds span the Permian.

Target: It is difficult to analyze extinction and survival rates of land organisms in detail, because few terrestrial fossil beds span the Permian.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In addition, PVS patients often open their eyes in response to feeding, which has to be done by others ; they are capable of swallowing,. Patients in a coma subsist with patients' eyes closed.

Target: In addition, PVS patients often open their eyes in response to feeding, which has to be done by others ; they are capable of swallowing, whereas patients in a coma subsist with their eyes closed.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Targets of personality judgment who reveal personal information about themselves facilitate ease of accurate personality judgment for the traits of agreeableness, openness to experience, and extraversion. Individuals who disclose personal values to others may facilitate the ease of accurate judgment of neuroticism.

Target: Targets of personality judgment who reveal personal information about themselves facilitate ease of accurate personality judgment for the traits of agreeableness, openness to experience, and extraversion. Additionally, individuals who disclose personal values to others may facilitate the ease of accurate judgment of neuroticism.


Source: Fix coherence errors: According to constructivists, each judgment is equally correct. Rather than focusing on accuracy of judgments, these researchers focus on the different methods and perspectives through which people make personality judgments.

Target: According to constructivists, each judgment is equally correct. Thus, rather than focusing on accuracy of judgments, these researchers focus on the different methods and perspectives through which people make personality judgments.


Source: Make the text more logical: Generally, cooked and marinated foods should be avoided, as well as sauces and gravies, which may contain ingredients that. Well tolerated by humans.

Target: Generally, cooked and marinated foods should be avoided, as well as sauces and gravies, which may contain ingredients that, although well tolerated by humans.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He worried that the boy's cries would attract passing cars. He slashed his throat, covered the body with the boy's overcoat, and left him.

Target: Worrying that the boy's cries would attract passing cars, he slashed his throat, covered the body with the boy's overcoat, and left him.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Mike awakenings on a mortuary slab. Mike uses the tuning fork to immobilize Jody and the Tall Man as they attempt to saw his head open.

Target: Awakening on a mortuary slab, Mike uses the tuning fork to immobilize Jody and the Tall Man as they attempt to saw his head open.


Source: Make the text clearer: Harvard University Press will publish his fourteenth book in 2017. His fourteenth book is man's Better Angels: Romantic Reformers and the Coming of the Civil War.

Target: Harvard University Press will publish his fourteenth book, Man's Better Angels: Romantic Reformers and the Coming of the Civil War, in 2017.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The council soon found itself sharing authority with Philip, who lacked experience in politics and intrigue. Within a year of Philip's nephew's contested accession, Philip managed to persuade the King of Aragon to drop his pretensions, receiving the renunciation signed and sealed.

Target: The council soon found itself sharing authority with Philip, who lacked experience in politics and intrigue. Nevertheless, within a year of his nephew's contested accession, Philip managed to persuade the King of Aragon to drop his pretensions, receiving the renunciation signed and sealed.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Over the years, siltation and vegetation have reduced the capacity and surface area. Much of the reservoir is a shallow marsh with extensive stands of cattails and rushes.

Target: Over the years, siltation and vegetation have reduced the capacity and surface area, so that much of the reservoir is a shallow marsh with extensive stands of cattails and rushes.


Source: Make the text clearer: In the 1990s, he gave improvisation master classes on the organ at the Juilliard School of New York. Through his exceptional qualities as an improviser, he gave numerous organ recitals throughout Europe and the United States.

Target: In the 1990s, he gave improvisation master classes on the organ at the Juilliard School of New York. Thus, through his exceptional qualities as an improviser, he gave numerous organ recitals throughout Europe and the United States.


Source: Make the text coherent: They returned to Paris in the next year. His wife, Fanny Claus was suffering from illness.

Target: They returned to Paris in the next year. Yet, his wife, Fanny Claus was suffering from illness.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Wildcard Housemate -- An evicted housemate will have a chance to come back on the roster of housemates. Unlike in previous seasons, selected evicted housemates will participate challenges for the wild card spot.

Target: Wildcard Housemate -- An evicted housemate will have a chance to come back on the roster of housemates. However unlike in previous seasons, selected evicted housemates will participate challenges for the wild card spot.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: However, the phrase was first popularized in 1954 by Brooks Stevens, an American industrial designer. designer was due to give a talk at an advertising conference in Minneapolis in 1954.

Target: However, the phrase was first popularized in 1954 by Brooks Stevens, an American industrial designer. Stevens was due to give a talk at an advertising conference in Minneapolis in 1954.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In a competitive industry, this is a risky policy. Consumers may decide to buy from competitors instead if they notice the strategy.

Target: In a competitive industry, this is a risky policy, because consumers may decide to buy from competitors instead if they notice the strategy.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The first station building was a two-storey sandstone building. The first station building no longer exists.

Target: The first station building, which no longer exists, was a two-storey sandstone building.


Source: Fix sentence flow: One of the most important tasks of the new government was to unify the law inherited from the three partitioners' different legal systems. After the war there were five different legal systems in Poland.

Target: One of the most important tasks of the new government was to unify the law inherited from the three partitioners' different legal systems. Hence, after the war there were five different legal systems in Poland.


Source: Make the text more logical: In the dominance hierarchy, older individuals are higher in rank,. Younger individuals serve in the lower ranks.

Target: In the dominance hierarchy, older individuals are higher in rank, whereas younger individuals serve in the lower ranks.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Pomacea hollingsworthi is a South American species of freshwater snail with gills and an operculum the apple snails. An operculum is an aquatic gastropod mollusc in the family Ampullariidae.

Target: Pomacea hollingsworthi is a South American species of freshwater snail with gills and an operculum, an aquatic gastropod mollusc in the family Ampullariidae, the apple snails.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Muller held this position all through the Second Boer War. Muller's high-profiled performance as European representative for this Boer republic Muller him considerable fame and notoriety, which lasted Muller's his life.

Target: Muller held this position all through the Second Boer War and his high-profiled performance as European representative for this Boer republic won him considerable fame and notoriety, which lasted all his life.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 1966-Roshan Mahanama was born. Roshan Mahanama shared 576 with Sanath Jayasuriya to make the highest ever Test partnership.

Target: 1966-Roshan Mahanama, who shared 576 with Sanath Jayasuriya to make the highest ever Test partnership, was born.


Source: Fix coherence errors: When one built a new house, one had to make a parapet for the roof. On one should fall from it.

Target: When one built a new house, one had to make a parapet for the roof, so that on one should fall from it.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Mr. Crocker is dangerous to Timmy. According to Da Rules.

Target: Mr. Crocker is dangerous to Timmy because according to Da Rules.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Portland improved from 1-11. Portland finished the year at 11-5 and tied with the Blackhawks for the North Division lead.

Target: Improving from 1-11, Portland finished the year at 11-5 and tied with the Blackhawks for the North Division lead.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It depicts a dingo. It is the first depiction of an Australian animal in Western art, along with a painting of a kangaroo by Stubbs.

Target: Depicting a dingo, it is the first depiction of an Australian animal in Western art, along with a painting of a kangaroo by Stubbs.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Some websites choose specific subjects for their players to predict the future on. Certain websites will offer only questions on political events, while others may be based entirely on celebrities.

Target: Some websites choose specific subjects for their players to predict the future on. For example, certain websites will offer only questions on political events, while others may be based entirely on celebrities.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: On April 18, 2018, Commandant Paul F. Zukunft told the United States House Appropriations Subcommittee on Homeland Security that the United States Coast Guard would continue to allow transgender members to serve. Specific legislation is passed banning members.

Target: On April 18, 2018, Commandant Paul F. Zukunft told the United States House Appropriations Subcommittee on Homeland Security that the United States Coast Guard would continue to allow transgender members to serve unless specific legislation is passed banning them.


Source: Make the text more logical: C# generalising further, it can be sees that all primes are of the form c#k + i for i < c# where c and k are integers. C# represents c primorial, and i represents the numbers that are coprime to c#.

Target: Generalising further, it can be seen that all primes are of the form c#k + i for i < c# where c and k are integers, c# represents c primorial, and i represents the numbers that are coprime to c#.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There he had a bed, in which he invited every passer-by to spend the night. Where he set to work on them with his smith's hammer, to stretch them to fit.

Target: There he had a bed, in which he invited every passer-by to spend the night, and where he set to work on them with his smith's hammer, to stretch them to fit.


Source: Make the text clearer: The specific amino acid that precedes the prolyl peptide bond also can have an effect on which conformation the bond assumes. When an aromatic amino acid is bonded to a proline the bond is more favorable to the cis conformation.

Target: The specific amino acid that precedes the prolyl peptide bond also can have an effect on which conformation the bond assumes. For instance, when an aromatic amino acid is bonded to a proline the bond is more favorable to the cis conformation.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: A person with normal face processing abilities will score on average around 80 % on this test. Someone with impaired face processing or face memory.

Target: A person with normal face processing abilities will score on average around 80 % on this test, while someone with impaired face processing or face memory.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ptolemy X was killed in battle in 88 BC, and Ptolemy IX reigned once again until his death in 81 BC. Ptolemy IX may have reigned jointly with Ptolemy IX's daughter Berenice III, who was the widow of her Ptolemy X X.

Target: Ptolemy X was killed in battle in 88 BC, and Ptolemy IX reigned once again until his death in 81 BC. He may have reigned jointly with his daughter Berenice III, who was the widow of her uncle Ptolemy X.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Generally considered part of the process of puberty. Pubarche is distinct and independent of the process of maturation of the gonads that leads to sexual maturation and fertility.

Target: Although generally considered part of the process of puberty, pubarche is distinct and independent of the process of maturation of the gonads that leads to sexual maturation and fertility.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Public records are records of public business. They are not necessarily available without restriction, although Freedom of Information legislation (FOI) that has been gradually introduced in many jurisdictions since the 1960s has made access easier.

Target: Although public records are records of public business, they are not necessarily available without restriction, although Freedom of Information legislation (FOI) that has been gradually introduced in many jurisdictions since the 1960s has made access easier.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This is because political theology is more concerned with a just political system. Public theology is more concerned for a just society for everyone.

Target: This is because political theology is more concerned with a just political system whereas public theology is more concerned for a just society for everyone.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There is little to no dialogue in these Flash cartoons. Fans all over the world can enjoy them.

Target: There is little to no dialogue in these Flash cartoons so that fans all over the world can enjoy them.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Even if it has satisfactory education facilities until graduation, Purna falls short in providing higher education. There is a strong need to build some good post graduation, medical, and engineering colleges.

Target: Even if it has satisfactory education facilities until graduation, Purna falls short in providing higher education. Hence there is a strong need to build some good post graduation, medical, and engineering colleges.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: There is a vibrant history of Quakerism in Norway. Unlike in many other European countries Quakerism communities survived migration and persecution for over three hundred years.

Target: There is a vibrant history of Quakerism in Norway. Unlike in many other European countries Quaker communities survived migration and persecution for over three hundred years.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Quakers in Europe outside Britain and Ireland are not now very numerous. New groups have started in the former Soviet Union and satellite countries.

Target: Quakers in Europe outside Britain and Ireland are not now very numerous although new groups have started in the former Soviet Union and satellite countries.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: We allow ourselves to dwell in the existing inevitable indeterminacies. We are leading ourselves in the best way of the qualitative research practice.

Target: Allowing ourselves to dwell in the existing inevitable indeterminacies, we are leading ourselves in the best way of the qualitative research practice.


Source: Make the text coherent: He was taken into protective custody for a while. Police were concerned about possible violence following their arrest of Azhagiri.

Target: He was taken into protective custody for a while because police were concerned about possible violence following their arrest of Azhagiri.


Source: Make the text more logical: Seven undergraduae courses and two postgraduate courses are accredited by the National Board of Accreditation New Delhi. The National Board of Accreditation is a wing of AICTE.

Target: Seven undergraduae courses and two postgraduate courses are accredited by the National Board of Accreditation, a wing of AICTE, New Delhi.


Source: Make the text more coherent: She beared the family curse. She described herself as a werewolf.

Target: Bearing the family curse, she described herself as a werewolf.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Devon Valley Railway route closed on 15 June 1964. Goods services continued between Tillicoultry and Alloa until 25 June 1973.

Target: The Devon Valley Railway route closed on 15 June 1964, although goods services continued between Tillicoultry and Alloa until 25 June 1973.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Raincoat can easily be Aishwarya Rai's best performance, and as Neerja, the former beauty queen appears to have shed her inhibitions about looking unglamorous. Most of time, Aishwarya Rai looks quite plain.

Target: Raincoat can easily be Aishwarya Rai's best performance, and as Neerja, the former beauty queen appears to have shed her inhibitions about looking unglamorous. In fact, most of time, Rai looks quite plain.


Source: Make the text more logical: Traditional culture still strongly exists. They are very welcoming to visitors.

Target: Although traditional culture still strongly exists, they are very welcoming to visitors.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Jump up ^ Coop Himmelb (l) au's eclectic design for High School # 9 in Los Angeles is ambitious. Does it succeed?, Architectural Record, January 2010.

Target: Jump up ^ Coop Himmelb (l) au's eclectic design for High School # 9 in Los Angeles is ambitious. But does it succeed?, Architectural Record, January 2010.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Regardless of the format, singles tournaments use a random draw in the first round, and the Swiss pairing system in subsequent rounds. Players will be facing opponents with roughly similar win-loss records in each round.

Target: Regardless of the format, singles tournaments use a random draw in the first round, and the Swiss pairing system in subsequent rounds, so that players will be facing opponents with roughly similar win-loss records in each round.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Players who win a match by Pin receive 3 points. Players who win by Count-Out receive 2 points.

Target: Players who win a match by Pin receive 3 points, while players who win by Count-Out receive 2 points.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In this period, he was also the accompanist for singer Carmen McRae (1956 -- 57). accompanist was also a accompanist of trumpeter Dizzy Gillespie's small and big bands for four months in 1957.

Target: In this period, he was also the accompanist for singer Carmen McRae (1956 -- 57). Bryant was also a member of trumpeter Dizzy Gillespie's small and big bands for four months in 1957.


Source: Make the text coherent: Thank God I did, I loved him. Everybody under the age of 20 thought they were Elvis and dressed like him.

Target: Thank God I did, I loved him because everybody under the age of 20 thought they were Elvis and dressed like him.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: She then headlined at Serpentine Sessions 2009. Serpentine Sessions is a series of concerts at London's Hyde Park on June 29.

Target: She then headlined at Serpentine Sessions, a series of concerts at London's Hyde Park on June 29, 2009.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Most of the Rejang people are not associated with any specific branches of Islam. Just as other Islam communities in the Malay Archipelago, the Rejang people are people of the Shafi'i school in Islam.

Target: Most of the Rejang people are not associated with any specific branches of Islam. However, just as other Muslim communities in the Malay Archipelago, the Rejang people are adherents of the Shafi'i school in Sunni Islam.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Renault capitalised on the growing reputation and success of the Super Touring regulations introduced in the early 1990s. Renault made the decision to enter the British Touring Car Championship in 1993 with reigning champion Tim Harvey and Alain Menu signed as their drivers.

Target: Capitalising on the growing reputation and success of the Super Touring regulations introduced in the early 1990s, Renault made the decision to enter the British Touring Car Championship in 1993 with reigning champion Tim Harvey and Alain Menu signed as their drivers.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Youth are often denied equal access to reproductive health services. Health workers view adolescent sexual activity as unacceptable.

Target: Youth are often denied equal access to reproductive health services because health workers view adolescent sexual activity as unacceptable.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It also said that 12 of the fighters were killed. About 50 were captured, while the security forces suffered three dead and six were injured ; two civilians were also said to have died.

Target: It also said that 12 of the fighters were killed and about 50 were captured, while the security forces suffered three dead and six were injured ; two civilians were also said to have died.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Rescission is available in Equity's exclusive jurisdiction in a wide range of situations. Where there has been an innocent but material misrepresentation, a breach of fiduciary duty, unconscionable conduct, or equitable fraud.

Target: Rescission is available in Equity's exclusive jurisdiction in a wide range of situations. For example, where there has been an innocent but material misrepresentation, a breach of fiduciary duty, unconscionable conduct, or equitable fraud.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The actual resource is never being touched. Various representations of the said resource are being prepared, rendered, and shipped to the clients for consumption.

Target: The actual resource is never being touched. Instead, various representations of the said resource are being prepared, rendered, and shipped to the clients for consumption.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It required that any agreement between companies that restricted trading should be placed on a public register. Granted exemption by the Secretary of State.

Target: It required that any agreement between companies that restricted trading should be placed on a public register unless granted exemption by the Secretary of State.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ryan was the Oklahoma Sooners' defensive coordinator for a year in which the defense was ranked sixth in the nation. Head coach John Blake failed to achieve a winning record for a third straight year and subsequently, the entire staff was fired.

Target: Ryan was the Oklahoma Sooners' defensive coordinator for a year in which the defense was ranked sixth in the nation. However, head coach John Blake failed to achieve a winning record for a third straight year and subsequently, the entire staff was fired.


Source: Fix coherence: Large sections of Smith's economic theory were possibly directly influenced by Cantillon. In many respects Smith advanced well beyond the scope of Cantillon.

Target: Large sections of Smith's economic theory were possibly directly influenced by Cantillon, although in many respects Adam Smith advanced well beyond the scope of Cantillon.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The police suspected Coley was the murderer. Murderer had been Rhonda Wicht's murderer for two years and the couple had recently broken up.

Target: The police suspected Coley was the murderer because he had been Rhonda Wicht's boyfriend for two years and the couple had recently broken up.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Usually small in comparison to the fundamental benefits of safety interventions. It may result in a lower net benefit than expected.

Target: Although usually small in comparison to the fundamental benefits of safety interventions, it may result in a lower net benefit than expected.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Even extensive modification of the course of a river combined with an enlargement of its channel often produces only a limited reduction in flood damage. Such floodworks are only commensurate with the expenditure involved where significant assets (such as a town) are under threat.

Target: Even extensive modification of the course of a river combined with an enlargement of its channel often produces only a limited reduction in flood damage. Consequently, such floodworks are only commensurate with the expenditure involved where significant assets (such as a town) are under threat.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: They incorporate a raised retro-reflective element. They are typically more visible at night and in inclement weather than standard road marking lines.

Target: Incorporating a raised retro-reflective element, they are typically more visible at night and in inclement weather than standard road marking lines.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Continuity lines on the right mean that the lane will continue. Traffic may merge into it ahead.

Target: Continuity lines on the right mean that the lane will continue, but traffic may merge into it ahead.


Source: Make the text coherent: Macfarlane considered that the role Florey had played in the development of Penicillin had been overshadowed. When Macfarlane retired to Scotland in 1967 Macfarlane commenced Macfarlane's first authoritative Florey Florey, The Making of a Great Scientist which was published in 1979.

Target: Macfarlane considered that the role Florey had played in the development of Penicillin had been overshadowed, so when he retired to Scotland in 1967 he commenced his first authoritative biography Howard Florey, The Making of a Great Scientist which was published in 1979.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Neffson achieving his master's degree in Fine Arts for Painting in 1973, agained from Boston University. Neffson taught briefly at the DeCordova Museum in Lincoln, Massachusetts, and Fisher College in Boston.

Target: Achieving his master's degree in Fine Arts for Painting in 1973, again from Boston University, Neffson taught briefly at the DeCordova Museum in Lincoln, Massachusetts, and Fisher College in Boston.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: When I was a kid I used to hide behind the curtains at home at Christmas. Kid used to try and be Elvis.

Target: When I was a kid I used to hide behind the curtains at home at Christmas and I used to try and be Elvis.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Jump up ^ Fink, Larry. Fink: Attraction and Desire-50 Years of Photography.

Target: Jump up ^ Fink, Larry. Larry Fink: Attraction and Desire-50 Years of Photography.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The new name, Shenandoah County, used a Native American name. Long their political supporter in the British Parliament, the Marquess of Rockingham was a popular figure with the citizens of the new United States.

Target: The new name, Shenandoah County, used a Native American name. However, long their political supporter in the British Parliament, the Marquess of Rockingham was a popular figure with the citizens of the new United States.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The configurable registry option TaskbarGroupSize, which allowed fine-grained control over taskbar grouping under previous Windows versions is not supported. In Windows, users can only configure to either combine buttons, not combine or combine when the taskbar is full.

Target: The configurable registry option TaskbarGroupSize, which allowed fine-grained control over taskbar grouping under previous Windows versions is not supported. In Windows 7, users can only configure to either combine buttons, not combine or combine when the taskbar is full.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This nation is actually closer to a Micronation. Since on-off monarchies and republics with an only family control it.

Target: This nation is actually closer to a Micronation, because since on-off monarchies and republics with an only family control it.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Officers feared for their safety. Officers fired shots, striking Garcia.

Target: Fearing for their safety, officers fired shots, striking Garcia.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: An Anglican vicar of the 1860s said there were more Roman Catholics than Anglicans in the parish of Arundel. About 750 lived in the area in 1973.

Target: An Anglican vicar of the 1860s said there were more Roman Catholics than Anglicans in the parish of Arundel, and about 750 lived in the area in 1973.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: They look like them, and. Fish get beat with overpairs

Target: They look like them, and because fish get beat with overpairs


Source: Fix sentence transition: Players who could choose to play for a new country after the dissolution of their former country. Players from the former Soviet Union who have gone on to play for Russia, or from the former Yugoslavia who have gone on to play for Croatia.

Target: Players who could choose to play for a new country after the dissolution of their former country. For example, players from the former Soviet Union who have gone on to play for Russia, or from the former Yugoslavia who have gone on to play for Croatia.


Source: Fix coherence: He also directed two operas 1972. Two operas are ravel's L'Heure Espagnole (Boston Summer Opera Theatre) and Stravinsky's Mavra (New England Chamber Opera Group).

Target: He also directed two operas, Ravel's L'Heure Espagnole (Boston Summer Opera Theatre) and Stravinsky's Mavra (New England Chamber Opera Group), 1972.


Source: Make the text clearer: This formal transformation driven approach is often far more effort than traditional software development. In specific domains with appropriate formalisms and reusable templates the effort has proven viable for commercial products.

Target: This formal transformation driven approach is often far more effort than traditional software development. However, in specific domains with appropriate formalisms and reusable templates the approach has proven viable for commercial products.


Source: Make the text coherent: Based on those activities, Elodie increases her proficiency in various statistics. During the weekend Elodie has free run of the castle and can choose an activity that alters Elodie's mood.

Target: Based on those activities, Elodie increases her proficiency in various statistics. Additionally, during the weekend Elodie has free run of the castle and can choose an activity that alters her mood.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Its precise location is not known with certainty. Current scholarship locates it tentatively near Camporeale.

Target: Its precise location is not known with certainty, but current scholarship locates it tentatively near Camporeale.


Source: Make the text more logical: We consulted with Native American friends and Native American studies experts at the University of California. We realize now that we have offended people.

Target: Although we consulted with Native American friends and Native American studies experts at the University of California, we realize now that we have offended people.


Source: Make the text more coherent: His brother, Count Stanislas de Blacas d'Aulps, served the comte similarly. Contrary to his father and to his own son (who later served as mayor and deputy), Blacas did not directly take part in the political life of the Second Empire.

Target: His brother, Count Stanislas de Blacas d'Aulps, served the comte similarly. However, contrary to his father and to his own son (who later served as mayor and deputy), Blacas did not directly take part in the political life of the Second Empire.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The twins are in custody of their uncle, Seiji. Twins' father twins them after his wife suddenly died.

Target: The twins are in custody of their uncle, Seiji, because their father abandoned them after his wife suddenly died.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Lowell also wrote WolfCop, released June 2014 in Canadian Cineplex theatres. In an Interview with Bloody Disgusting in March 2015, Lowell revealed Lowell was writing the sequel to WolfCop, which would again star Leo Fafard in the lead.

Target: Lowell also wrote WolfCop, released June 2014 in Canadian Cineplex theatres. In an Interview with Bloody Disgusting in March 2015, Dean revealed he was writing the sequel to WolfCop, which would again star Leo Fafard in the lead.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Postcanine records show that L. lufengensis was more dimorphic than modern ape species such as the orangutan. At least dentally, there were large variations between males and females of the species.

Target: Postcanine records show that L. lufengensis was more dimorphic than modern ape species such as the orangutan. Therefore, at least dentally, there were large variations between males and females of the species.


Source: Make the text coherent: He then stated a messasge for the youngsters after almost giving up play football and say to them not think too much in the money. Money is not everything.

Target: He then stated a messasge for the youngsters after almost giving up play football and say to them not think too much in the money because money is not everything.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Rowena eventually faces different chaos in her life. Amidst all of these misfortunes, Rowena still holds on Rowena's faith in God and believes that the sun will shine again for her and her daughter Blanca.

Target: Rowena eventually faces different chaos in her life. However, amidst all of these misfortunes, she still holds on her faith in God and believes that the sun will shine again for her and her daughter Blanca.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Beautiful, socialite and free-spirited. Deep down, she is scheming and tries in lots of ways to hurt Rowena, Luis' girlfriend, and vows to do everything just to win the latter back in her life again.

Target: Beautiful, socialite and free-spirited. However, deep down, she is scheming and tries in lots of ways to hurt Rowena, Luis' girlfriend, and vows to do everything just to win the latter back in her life again.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This allowed Germany to use the railway lines, while at the same time denying them to France. Despite the Germany occupation, Luxembourg was allowed to maintain much of its independence and political mechanisms.

Target: This allowed Germany to use the railway lines, while at the same time denying them to France. Nevertheless, despite the German occupation, Luxembourg was allowed to maintain much of its independence and political mechanisms.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Luzhou, which borders Yunnan, Guizhou and Chongqing, is the only geographic junction of the four provinces, and was therefore the logical place for a port in ancient China. After the China was founded in 1949, junction became the capital of southern Sichuan province.

Target: Luzhou, which borders Yunnan, Guizhou and Chongqing, is the only geographic junction of the four provinces, and was therefore the logical place for a port in ancient China. After the PRC was founded in 1949, Luzhou became the capital of southern Sichuan province.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He was made a Chevalier in the order of Palmes Academiques in 1999. Palmes Academiques is an honour bestowed by the French government.

Target: He was made a Chevalier in the order of Palmes Academiques, an honour bestowed by the French government, in 1999.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The MPLA emerged victorious in Angola's 1992 general election. Eight opposition parties rejected the election as rigged.

Target: The MPLA emerged victorious in Angola's 1992 general election, but eight opposition parties rejected the election as rigged.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: These environments did not foster customer loyalty. They environments not help differentiate the Mac user-experience from Windows.

Target: These environments did not foster customer loyalty, nor did they help differentiate the Mac user-experience from Windows.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: To the east adjacent to the saddle is situated the Upper Polezhan Lake (2,706 m), the highest glacial lake in Pirin and the second one in Bulgaria. Some authors consider Upper Polezhan Lake's altitude being 2,710 m which would Upper Polezhan Lake it the highest in Bulgaria.

Target: To the east adjacent to the saddle is situated the Upper Polezhan Lake (2,706 m), the highest glacial lake in Pirin and the second one in Bulgaria, although some authors consider its altitude being 2,710 m which would make it the highest in Bulgaria.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Malcolm John Kerr JP (born 18 April 1950) was a Member of the New South Wales Legislative Assembly representing Cronulla for the Liberal Party between 1984 and 2011. Malcolm John Kerr JP (born 18 April 1950) is a former Australian politician.

Target: Malcolm John Kerr JP (born 18 April 1950), a former Australian politician, was a Member of the New South Wales Legislative Assembly representing Cronulla for the Liberal Party between 1984 and 2011.


Source: Fix coherence: Malcolm John Kerr JP (born 18 April 1950), a former Australian politician, was a Member of the New South Wales Legislative Assembly representing Cronulla for the Liberal Party between 1984 and 2011. Member is a Member and is unmarried.

Target: Malcolm John Kerr JP (born 18 April 1950), a former Australian politician, was a Member of the New South Wales Legislative Assembly representing Cronulla for the Liberal Party between 1984 and 2011. Kerr is a barrister and is unmarried.


Source: Make the text coherent: Thus, these women pose a huge risk to their infants. Infants drinking breast milk infected with the HIV virus may contract the virus as well.

Target: Thus, these women pose a huge risk to their infants because infants drinking breast milk infected with the HIV virus may contract the virus as well.


Source: Fix sentence flow: John Carney 4 April 2016. John Carney is the Wall Street Journal.

Target: John Carney, The Wall Street Journal, 4 April 2016.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Cuban government permitted some 125,000 Cubans to board a decrepit fleet of boats in Mariel Harbor. Estimates assert that this last wave of Cuban refugees included some 2,700 hardened criminals (fewer than 3 % of the total).

Target: The Cuban government permitted some 125,000 Cubans to board a decrepit fleet of boats in Mariel Harbor. However, estimates assert that this last wave of Cuban refugees included some 2,700 hardened criminals (fewer than 3 % of the total).


Source: Make the text more logical: Thereafter, smuggling became less attractive. Taxes on imported goods were reduced and free trade became easier.

Target: Thereafter, smuggling became less attractive because taxes on imported goods were reduced and free trade became easier.


Source: Make the text more logical: Most Burmese people find their own life partner. Sometimes people may have an arranged marriage conducted by people's parents or a middleman.

Target: Most Burmese people find their own life partner, but sometimes they may have an arranged marriage conducted by their parents or a middleman.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Oswald then approaches the teddy bear as the other guy runs away in embarrassment. Before Oswald could spend a long time with her, the badger returns in a wine barrel before kicking Oswald in the rear.

Target: Oswald then approaches the teddy bear as the other guy runs away in embarrassment. But before he could spend a long time with her, the badger returns in a wine barrel before kicking Oswald in the rear.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Tony Stark reappears during the first volume, reduced to a head, in an advisory role to the Mangaverse incarnation of the Avengers. Tony Stark also appears in the form of a number of large robots that resemble famous Super Robot anime mechas.

Target: Tony Stark reappears during the first volume, reduced to a head, in an advisory role to the Mangaverse incarnation of the Avengers. Iron Man also appears in the form of a number of large robots that resemble famous Super Robot anime mechas.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The X-Men are advised by Toad, who is a very wise and Yoda-like person. As a former close friend X-Men, Toad is determined to destroy the Hellfire Club and bring Charles back to the X-Men.

Target: The X-Men are advised by Toad, who is a very wise and Yoda-like person. As a former close friend Xavier, Toad is determined to destroy the Hellfire Club and bring Charles back to the X-Men.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The name Albania was given by Robert Guiscard and his followers. When followers invaded Albania in the eleventh century.

Target: The name Albania was given by Robert Guiscard and his followers because when they invaded Albania in the eleventh century.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Reviews shortly after publication were generally very favorable, and the game won the Origins Award for Best Fantasy or Science Fiction Computer Game of 1996. Reviewers' detailed comments on aspects of the game differed, especially in comparisons with its predecessor Master of Orion.

Target: Reviews shortly after publication were generally very favorable, and the game won the Origins Award for Best Fantasy or Science Fiction Computer Game of 1996. However, reviewers' detailed comments on aspects of the game differed, especially in comparisons with its predecessor Master of Orion.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Decreasing the rates of maternal mortality and morbidity in developing countries is important. Poor maternal health is both an indicator and a cause of extreme poverty.

Target: Decreasing the rates of maternal mortality and morbidity in developing countries is important because poor maternal health is both an indicator and a cause of extreme poverty.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Women who breastfeed experience better glucose levels, lipid metabolism, and blood pressure, and lose pregnancy weight faster than those who do not. Women who breastfeed experience lower rates of breast cancer, ovarian cancer, and type 2 diabetes.

Target: Women who breastfeed experience better glucose levels, lipid metabolism, and blood pressure, and lose pregnancy weight faster than those who do not. Additionally, women who breastfeed experience lower rates of breast cancer, ovarian cancer, and type 2 diabetes.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Gestational diabetes is directly linked with obesity in offspring through adolescence. Children whose mothers had diabetes are more likely to develop Type II diabetes.

Target: Gestational diabetes is directly linked with obesity in offspring through adolescence. Additionally, children whose mothers had diabetes are more likely to develop Type II diabetes.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It is a strong structure, built to withstand warfare. At the same time, it is majestic and solemn, reminiscent of the Momoyama style.

Target: It is a strong structure, built to withstand warfare, yet at the same time, it is majestic and solemn, reminiscent of the Momoyama style.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dry conditions, strong winds, and steep terrain hampered fighting efforts. Military helicopters were used.

Target: Dry conditions, strong winds, and steep terrain hampered fighting efforts, although military helicopters were used.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This is so significant in dedication ritual. Writing the name of a possessor to which the structure is dedicated gives permanence to that ownership.

Target: This is so significant in dedication ritual because writing the name of a possessor to which the structure is dedicated gives permanence to that ownership.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Appearing timid and innocent-looking. She is very strict and diligent when performing missions.

Target: Although appearing timid and innocent-looking, she is very strict and diligent when performing missions.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Metacritic reports the film with a score of 73 based on 16 reviews. Metacritic assigns a weighted average score out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics.

Target: Metacritic, which assigns a weighted average score out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics, reports the film with a score of 73 based on 16 reviews.


Source: Fix coherence: TVA and V broadcast in French and operate over-the-air in French-language markets (including Quebec and parts of Ontario and New Brunswick). Are also available across Canada via pay television.

Target: TVA and V broadcast in French and operate over-the-air in French-language markets (including Quebec and parts of Ontario and New Brunswick), although are also available across Canada via pay television.


Source: Make the text more coherent: For example, after the Black Death the archaeological record shows the abandonment of upwards of 25 % of all villages in Spain. Archaeological data are often difficult to interpret.

Target: For example, after the Black Death the archaeological record shows the abandonment of upwards of 25 % of all villages in Spain. However, archaeological data are often difficult to interpret.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: A total of 9.8 miles (15.8 km) of the creek are stocked with fish. Native trout are also present in the watershed, especially in the tributary Stony Brook.

Target: A total of 9.8 miles (15.8 km) of the creek are stocked with fish. However, native trout are also present in the watershed, especially in the tributary Stony Brook.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Also, unless customized by the user, anything posted on MiGente.com is public. Users can comment on any post, without needing to be friends with the poster.

Target: Also, unless customized by the user, anything posted on MiGente.com is public and users can comment on any post, without needing to be friends with the poster.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In 1984, the student newspaper declared Spanglish the official language of Miami Senior High. Like today, most students at the school spoke fluent Spanish and English.

Target: In 1984, the student newspaper declared Spanglish the official language of Miami Senior High. Then, like today, most students at the school spoke fluent Spanish and English.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: After the warden ended his education opportunities Santos shifted focus to develop programs and resources to help fellow inmates and their families. While incarcerated Santos authored seven books and had published a number of articles, including for The Huffington Post and Forbes.

Target: After the warden ended his education opportunities Santos shifted focus to develop programs and resources to help fellow inmates and their families. Additionally, while incarcerated Santos authored seven books and had published a number of articles, including for The Huffington Post and Forbes.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The next 73 films changed the character's name to Mighty Mouse. In Spanish, the name is still Mighty Mouse.

Target: The next 73 films changed the character's name to Mighty Mouse. However, in Spanish, the name is still Super Mouse.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It is a subset of reactions that very closely resembles the insertion reactions, and both are differentiated by the mechanism that leads to the resulting stereochemistry of the products. Often the two are used interchangeably because the mechanism is sometimes unknown.

Target: It is a subset of reactions that very closely resembles the insertion reactions, and both are differentiated by the mechanism that leads to the resulting stereochemistry of the products. However, often the two are used interchangeably because the mechanism is sometimes unknown.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: After a nine-month layoff due in large part to a four-month prison stint, Tyson met former WBA Cruiserweight champion Orlin Norris. The bout ended in a no-contest after Tyson injured champion with a punch that landed after the bell.

Target: After a nine-month layoff due in large part to a four-month prison stint, Tyson met former WBA Cruiserweight champion Orlin Norris, but the bout ended in a no-contest after Tyson injured Norris with a punch that landed after the bell.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The bridge carries Interstate 294 over the Des Plaines River, the Chicago Ship and Sanitary Canal, numerous railroad lines, and the United Parcel Service intermodal facility. A series of 51 piers carries Interstate 294 over the broad Des Plaines River valley.

Target: The bridge carries Interstate 294 over the Des Plaines River, the Chicago Ship and Sanitary Canal, numerous railroad lines, and the United Parcel Service intermodal facility. A series of 51 piers carries I-294 over the broad Des Plaines River valley.


Source: Make the text more logical: Previously, the second title. Sometimes winner of Miss Nicaragua declared as Miss World Nicaragua from 1960 to 2005.

Target: Previously, the second title or sometimes winner of Miss Nicaragua declared as Miss World Nicaragua from 1960 to 2005.


Source: Make the text more logical: Commonly referred to as an RJ45 in the context of Ethernet and category 5 cables. It is incorrect to refer to a generic 8P8C connector as an RJ45.

Target: Although commonly referred to as an RJ45 in the context of Ethernet and category 5 cables, it is incorrect to refer to a generic 8P8C connector as an RJ45.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Any symmetry operation in a molecule's point group acting on the molecule itself will leave it unchanged. For acting on a general entity, such as a vector or an orbital, this need not be the case.

Target: Any symmetry operation in a molecule's point group acting on the molecule itself will leave it unchanged. But, for acting on a general entity, such as a vector or an orbital, this need not be the case.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Free from the U.S. Constitutional limitation. Canada has recognized that considerations of judicial economy and comity with the legislative and executive branch may justify a decision to dismiss an allegedly moot case, as deciding hypothetical controversies is tantamount to legislating.

Target: Although free from the U.S. Constitutional limitation, Canada has recognized that considerations of judicial economy and comity with the legislative and executive branch may justify a decision to dismiss an allegedly moot case, as deciding hypothetical controversies is tantamount to legislating.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Roger Michell had a number of dinners with McAdams and persuaded her to join the cast. Roger Michell is the film's director.

Target: Roger Michell, the film's director, had a number of dinners with McAdams and persuaded her to join the cast.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Triassic individuals,. Smaller in size.

Target: Triassic individuals, although smaller in size.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: I'd recorded A Hard Day's Night, Day Tripper and And I Love Her before, but I didn't really get them. My producer Charles Stepney told me to think about doing a Beatles covers album.

Target: I'd recorded A Hard Day's Night, Day Tripper and And I Love Her before, but I didn't really get them. But my producer Charles Stepney told me to think about doing a Beatles covers album.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The 102D3 came later. 102D3 was a shortened 102D3 of the 102DL3.

Target: The 102D3 came later because it was a shortened version of the 102DL3.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: where the last term (the remainder) depends on the exact version of Taylor's formula. For the Cauchy formula (with integral remainder), one gets

Target: where the last term (the remainder) depends on the exact version of Taylor's formula. For instance, for the Cauchy formula (with integral remainder), one gets


Source: Make the text more consistent: However, the pallu in its modern form was not in common use until very recently. As late as the 1970s, some populations in Kerala still did not use the pallu as the upper garment.

Target: However, the pallu in its modern form was not in common use until very recently. In fact, as late as the 1970s, some populations in Kerala still did not use the pallu as the upper garment.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Byzantine strategos marched out to meet them. The Muslims withdrew to a mountainous and thickly forested area where the Byzantine could not pursue.

Target: The Byzantine strategos marched out to meet them, but the Muslims withdrew to a mountainous and thickly forested area where the Byzantines could not pursue.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She missed a couple of months of school each year to help on the farm. Much can be learned doing physical labor.

Target: She missed a couple of months of school each year to help on the farm. But much can be learned doing physical labor.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Built using the Soulblighter server. PlayMyth could also run both The Fallen Lords and The Wolf Age, which was developed by MumboJumbo using a network gameplay system designed to run on GameSpy rather than Bungie.net.

Target: Although built using the Soulblighter server, PlayMyth could also run both The Fallen Lords and The Wolf Age, which was developed by MumboJumbo using a network gameplay system designed to run on GameSpy rather than Bungie.net.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: A thousand years since their release, the Myrkridia have yet to be defeated in battle, and now their numbers appear to be growing. A Necromancer of great power has arisen, claiming to be none other than Moagim Reborn.

Target: A thousand years since their release, the Myrkridia have yet to be defeated in battle, and now their numbers appear to be growing. And a Necromancer of great power has arisen, claiming to be none other than Moagim Reborn.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Other parts of this plan involve merging portions of the two universes (via amfilocite), and creating genetically modified creatures to inhabit Jones' new universe. It is revealed William Bell was the mastermind and was presumably the true head of ZFT.

Target: Other parts of this plan involve merging portions of the two universes (via amfilocite), and creating genetically modified creatures to inhabit Jones' new universe. In the end, it is revealed William Bell was the mastermind and was presumably the true head of ZFT.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The project began in 1991 as a collaboration with Russia (Myasishchev had a similar project called the Duet). Financial trouble led the Russia to drop out early in the project.

Target: The project began in 1991 as a collaboration with Russia (Myasishchev had a similar project called the Duet), but financial trouble led the Russians to drop out early in the project.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: NUMT studies are not available in animals with linear mitochondrial genomes or those with intron-containing mitochondria. Despite all the available advanced technologies, NUMT remains to be determined whether NUMT transposition differences exist between circular and linear mtDNAs.

Target: NUMT studies are not available in animals with linear mitochondrial genomes or those with intron-containing mitochondria. Therefore, despite all the available advanced technologies, it remains to be determined whether NUMT transposition differences exist between circular and linear mtDNAs.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: On the last Rosh Hashana of his life, Rebbe Nachman stressed to his followers the importance of being with him for that holiday in particular. After the Rebbe's death, Reb Noson instituted an annual pilgrimage to the Rebbe's gravesite on Rosh Hashana.

Target: On the last Rosh Hashana of his life, Rebbe Nachman stressed to his followers the importance of being with him for that holiday in particular. Therefore, after the Rebbe's death, Reb Noson instituted an annual pilgrimage to the Rebbe's gravesite on Rosh Hashana.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In this materialistic society, it is common that the masses deem a stable economic condition a crucial factor of marriage. Young people gradually come to their own realization that sustaining their beliefs can also lead to a happy marital life.

Target: In this materialistic society, it is common that the masses deem a stable economic condition a crucial factor of marriage. However, young people gradually come to their own realization that sustaining their beliefs can also lead to a happy marital life.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Taken aback that he knows of the word. Gray sticks to her story.

Target: Although taken aback that he knows of the word, Gray sticks to her story.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Foreign visitors during the year are about 100. Large number of local people visit the peak almost daily in the dry season.

Target: Foreign visitors during the year are about 100 whereas large number of local people visit the peak almost daily in the dry season.