Source: Make this sentence better readable: As the crisis escalated, was a high demand for contact tracers, and the CDC had earlier named librarians as key public health staff to support COVID-19 case investigation and contact tracing, so many librarians and library staff volunteered to help with contact tracing.

Target: As the crisis escalated, there was a high demand for contact tracers, and the CDC had earlier named librarians as key public health staff to support COVID-19 case investigation and contact tracing, so many librarians and library staff volunteered to help with contact tracing.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: "The librarian's Internet survival guide: strategies for the high-tech reference desk", Irene E. McDermott, Barbara E. Quint, p. 1-2, Information Today, Special library Special libraries can be described as libraries designed to perform some specific function to a particular set of people or URLanization i.e. some include news, law, medical, theological, prison, corporate, museum, or any other type of library owned and operated by URLanization.

Target: "The librarian's Internet survival guide: strategies for the high-tech reference desk", Irene E. McDermott, Barbara E. Quint, p. 1-2, Information Today, Special library Special libraries are libraries designed to perform some specific function to a particular set of people or URLanization i.e. some include news, law, medical, theological, prison, corporate, museum, or any other type of library owned and operated by URLanization.


Source: Make this sentence readable: "The librarian's Internet survival guide: strategies for the high-tech reference desk", Irene E. McDermott, Barbara E. Quint, p. 1-2, Information Today, Special library Special libraries can be described as libraries designed to perform some specific function to a particular set of people or URLanization i.e. some include news, law, medical, theological, prison, corporate, museum, or any other type of library owned and operated by URLanization.

Target: "The librarian's Internet survival guide: strategies for the high-tech reference desk", Irene E. McDermott, Barbara E. Quint, p. 1-2, Information Today, Special library Special libraries can be described as libraries designed to perform some specific function to a particular set of people or URLanization i.e. some include news, law, medical, theological, prison, corporate, or museum.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Epicurus, the founder of epicureanism, living in the 3rd and 4th century BC, came across various currents claiming to be Socratic.

Target: Epicurus, the founder of epicureanism, living in the 4th century BC, came across various currents claiming to be Socratic.


Source: Clarify this text: Epicurus, the founder of epicureanism, living in the 3rd and 4th century BC, came across various currents claiming to be Socratic.

Target: Epicurus, the founder of epicureanism, living in the 3rd and 4th and 3rd century BC, came across various currents claiming to be Socratic.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: They criticized Socrates for his character and various faults, and focused mostly on his irony, which was deemed inappropriate for a philosopher, anti-pedagogical.

Target: They criticized Socrates for his character and various faults, and focused mostly on his irony, which was deemed inappropriate for a philosopher and unsuitable for teaching.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Love Socrates and Alcibiades, by Christoffer Wilhelm Eckersberg There exist textual passages suggesting that Socrates had a love affair with Alcibiades and other young males while other texts suggest that Socrates' friendship with young boys sought to improve them and were not sexual.

Target: Love Socrates and Alcibiades, by Christoffer Wilhelm Eckersberg There exist textual passages suggesting that Socrates had a love affair with Alcibiades and other young males while other texts suggest that Socrates' friendship with young boys sought only to improve them and were not sexual.


Source: Clarify: However, the exact nature of the relation is not clear since Socrates was known for his self-restraint, while Alcibiades admits in the Symposium that he had tried to seduce Socrates but failed.

Target: However, the exact nature of his relationship with Alcibiades is not clear since Socrates was known for his self-restraint, while Alcibiades admits in the Symposium that he had tried to seduce Socrates but failed.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: The Socratic theory of love is mostly deduced from Lysis, where Socrates talks about love at a wrestling school with Lysis and his friends.

Target: The Socratic theory of love is mostly deduced from Lysis, where Socrates engages in a discussion about love at a wrestling school with Lysis and his friends.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The Socratic theory of love is mostly deduced from Lysis, where Socrates talks about love at a wrestling school with Lysis and his friends.

Target: The Socratic theory of love is mostly deduced from Lysis, where Socrates talks about love at a wrestling school in the company of Lysis and his friends.


Source: Make the text more understandable: They start their dialogue by investigating parental love and how it manifests with respect to the freedom and boundaries they set for their child.

Target: They start their dialogue by investigating parental love and how it manifests with respect to the freedom and boundaries which parents set for their child.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Adjuvant radiotherapy is necessary if breast cancer is treated by removing only the cancerous lump with a rim of surrounding normal tissue, as it reduces the chance of local recurrence significantly.

Target: Adjuvant radiotherapy is necessary if breast cancer is treated by removing only the cancerous lump with a rim of surrounding normal tissue, as it reduces the chance of local recurrence.


Source: Clarify this sentence: for example, the tumour bed where the boost dose should be applied can be missed ("geographical miss") due to the difficulties in localization of the complex wound cavity even when modern radiotherapy planning is used.

Target: for example, the tumour bed where the boost dose should be applied can be missed due to the difficulties in localization of the complex wound cavity even when modern radiotherapy planning is used.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Additionally, the usual delay ("temporal miss") between the surgical removal of the tumour and EBRT may allow a repopulation of the tumour cells.

Target: Additionally, the usual delay between the surgical removal of the tumour and EBRT may allow a repopulation of the tumour cells.


Source: Use clearer wording: These potentially harmful effects can be avoided by delivering the radiation more precisely to the targeted tissues leading to immediate sterilization of residual tumour cells.

Target: These potentially harmful effects may be avoided by delivering the radiation more precisely to the targeted tissues leading to immediate sterilization of residual tumour cells.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Furthermore, TARGIT inhibits the stimulating effects of wound fluid on cancer cells, suggesting for the first time, a beneficial effect of intraoperative radiotherapy (IORT) on tumour microenvironment. In these studies, women treated with TARGIT-IORT during lumpectomy for breast cancer combined with whole breast radiotherapy had a significantly low mortality from non-breast-cancer causes, such as cardiovascular and lung complications, as well as other cancers compared with those who received whole breast radiotherapy.

Target: The use in TARGIT of a small treatment device which can be positioned in close physical proximity to the treatment site aims to avoid some of these practical issues. TARGIT irradiation has also been shown to affect the properties of wound fluid, which may be linked to cancer cell proliferation and possibly local recurrence. TARGIT-IORT during lumpectomy for breast cancer combined with whole breast radiotherapy had a significantly low mortality from non-breast-cancer causes, such as cardiovascular and lung complications, as well as other cancers compared with those who received whole breast radiotherapy.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: Targeted intra-operative radiotherapy, also known as targeted IORT or TARGIT (TARGeted Intraoperative radioTherapy) is a technique of giving radiotherapy to the tissues surrounding a cancer after its surgical removal, a form of intraoperative radiation therapy.

Target: Targeted intra-operative radiotherapy, also known as targeted IORT is a technique of giving radiotherapy to the tissues surrounding a cancer after its surgical removal, a form of intraoperative radiation therapy.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Technique TARGeted Intraoperative radioTherapy (TARGIT) IORT for breast cancer The machine used for TARGIT is Intrabeam (Carl Zeiss, Germany).

Target: Technique The Intrabeam system, manufactured by Carl Zeiss AG, is used for TARGIT.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The radiation which is produced by mobile radiation systems has a limited range.

Target: Lower energy radiation such as this has a limited range.


Source: Clarify this sentence: For this reason, conventional walls are regarded sufficient to stop the radiation scatter produced in the operating room and no extra measures for radiation protection are necessary.

Target: For this reason, conventional walls are regarded sufficient to stop the radiation scatter produced in the operating room without extra measures for radiation protection are necessary.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Later the Apartheid government gave them a form of independence as the former "Ciskei" homeland.

Target: Later the, Apartheid government of South Africa gave them a form of independence as the former "Ciskei" homeland.


Source: Make this easier to read: The occupation by white settlers(Dutch and British) resulted in the century of Xhosa Wars (commonly known as the Frontier Wars) from 1779 to 1879 involving Xhosa tribes (including the Ngqika), Khoikhoi and San people.

Target: Encroachment by European settlers, beginning in the Dutch colonial period, resulted in the century of Xhosa Wars (commonly known as the Frontier Wars) from 1779 to 1879 involving Xhosa tribes (including the Ngqika), Khoikhoi and San people.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Examples of drought deciduous species Drought deciduous plants are very commonly found near the borders of desert or long the coastal areas in the Northern Americas.

Target: Examples of drought deciduous species Drought deciduous plants are very commonly found near the borders of deserts or along the coastal areas in the Northern Americas.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Encelia fairnosa (commonly known as brittlebush) is a very common broadleaf drought deciduous plant species near the desert around the Northern part of Mexico and along the West Coast of the United States.

Target: Encelia fairnosa (commonly known as brittlebush) is a very common broadleaf drought deciduous plant species found near the desert around the Northern part of Mexico and along the West Coast of the United States.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: Ambrosia Dumosa (commonly known as Burroweed) is a common microphylllous drought deciduous species which is found near the mentioned areas and live within similar ecosystems as the brittlebush.

Target: Ambrosia Dumosa (commonly known as Burroweed) is a common microphylllous drought deciduous species which is found near those same areas as it lives within similar ecosystems as the brittlebush.


Source: Clarify: These two examples although both possess the ability of undergoing abscission due to droughts or dry seasons, they are of different plant families.

Target: Although both these examples are able to undergo abscission in response to droughts or dry seasons, they are of different plant families.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: These two examples although both possess the ability of undergoing abscission due to droughts or dry seasons, they are of different plant families.

Target: These two examples although both possess the ability of undergoing abscission due to droughts or dry seasons, they are from different plant families.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: At noon the sun's change of altitude is very slow, so determining the exact time that the sun is at its zenith by direct observation is impossible, and therefore it is impossible to obtain an accurate longitude at the moment of Zenith.

Target: At noon the sun's change of altitude is very slow, so determining the exact time that the sun is at its highest by direct observation is impossible, and therefore it is impossible to obtain an accurate longitude at the moment of Zenith.


Source: Make this easier to read: At noon the sun's change of altitude is very slow, so determining the exact time that the sun is at its zenith by direct observation is impossible, and therefore it is impossible to obtain an accurate longitude at the moment of Zenith.

Target: At noon the sun's change of altitude is very slow, so determining the exact time that the sun is at its zenith by direct observation is impossible, and therefore it is impossible to obtain an accurate longitude at the moment of culmination.


Source: Make this easier to read: However, it is possible to determine the time of zenith for longitude with a useful accuracy by performing a mean time of observation when the sun is on its ascent and descent prior to and following its moment of Zenith.

Target: However, it is possible to determine the time of zenith for longitude with a useful accuracy by performing a mean time of observation when the sun is on its ascent and descent prior to and following its moment of culmination.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: By taking a sextant reading within 15 to 30 minutes prior to local noon (zenith) and noting the time, then leaving the sextant set to the same angle and subsequently observing the moment in time at which the sun passes through the sight tube on its descent from Zenith between a half-hour and hour later, the two times can be averaged to obtain a longitude sufficiently accurate for navigation (within 2nmi).

Target: By taking a sextant reading within 15 to 30 minutes prior to local noon (culmination) and noting the time, then leaving the sextant set to the same angle and subsequently observing the moment in time at which the sun passes through the sight tube on its descent from Zenith between a half-hour and hour later, the two times can be averaged to obtain a longitude sufficiently accurate for navigation (within 2nmi).


Source: Clarification: By taking a sextant reading within 15 to 30 minutes prior to local noon (zenith) and noting the time, then leaving the sextant set to the same angle and subsequently observing the moment in time at which the sun passes through the sight tube on its descent from Zenith between a half-hour and hour later, the two times can be averaged to obtain a longitude sufficiently accurate for navigation (within 2nmi).

Target: By taking a sextant reading within 15 to 30 minutes prior to local noon (zenith) and noting the time, then leaving the sextant set to the same angle and subsequently observing the moment in time at which the sun passes through the sight tube on its descent from its highest altitude between a half-hour and hour later, the two times can be averaged to obtain a longitude sufficiently accurate for navigation (within 2nmi).


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Once the figure for the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the sum or the difference is obtained between it and the declination of the object to obtain the latitude.

Target: Once the value of the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the sum or the difference is obtained between it and the declination of the object to obtain the latitude.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Once the figure for the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the sum or the difference is obtained between it and the declination of the object to obtain the latitude.

Target: Once the figure for the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the algebraic sum of it with the declination of the object to obtain the latitude.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Once the figure for the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the sum or the difference is obtained between it and the declination of the object to obtain the latitude. This is the latitude where the position line crosses the DR longitude.

Target: Once the figure for the Meridian Zenith Distance is obtained the sum or the difference is obtained between it and the declination of the object gives the latitude of a point where the position line crosses the DR longitude.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Ex- Meridian is an astronomical navigation method of calculating an observer’s position on earth.

Target: Ex-meridian is a celestial navigation method of calculating an observer’s position on earth.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: 270169507040DamagedNov. 1601712905900396Nov. 1601812925900395Nov. 1601912965850415Nov.1702012965950415Nov. 170211290NADamagedNov. 1802212635900400Nov. 1802312635850410Nov. 180249226650510Nov. 180258806400490Nov. 190269106650530Nov. 1902712705850400Nov. 190289607000590Nov. 190291270NADamagedNov. 190309606350480Nov. 1903112705650367Nov. 1903212705650370Nov. 190338806750550 There were several models of test projectiles fired or designed during Project HARP:

Target: 270169507040DamagedNov. 1601712905900396Nov. 1601812925900395Nov. 1601912965850415Nov.1702012965950415Nov. 170211290NADamagedNov. 1802212635900400Nov. 1802312635850410Nov. 180249226650510Nov. 180258806400490Nov. 190269106650530Nov. 1902712705850400Nov. 190289607000590Nov. 190291270NADamagedNov. 190309606350480Nov. 1903112705650367Nov. 1903212705650370Nov. 190338806750550 Several models of test projectiles fired or designed during Project HARP:


Source: Use clearer wording: 270169507040DamagedNov. 1601712905900396Nov. 1601812925900395Nov. 1601912965850415Nov.1702012965950415Nov. 170211290NADamagedNov. 1802212635900400Nov. 1802312635850410Nov. 180249226650510Nov. 180258806400490Nov. 190269106650530Nov. 1902712705850400Nov. 190289607000590Nov. 190291270NADamagedNov. 190309606350480Nov. 1903112705650367Nov. 1903212705650370Nov. 190338806750550 There were several models of test projectiles fired or designed during Project HARP:

Target: 270169507040DamagedNov. 1601712905900396Nov. 1601812925900395Nov. 1601912965850415Nov.1702012965950415Nov. 170211290NADamagedNov. 1802212635900400Nov. 1802312635850410Nov. 180249226650510Nov. 180258806400490Nov. 190269106650530Nov. 1902712705850400Nov. 190289607000590Nov. 190291270NADamagedNov. 190309606350480Nov. 1903112705650367Nov. 1903212705650370Nov. 190338806750550 There were several models of test projectiles were fired or designed during Project HARP:


Source: Make this sentence more readable: The slender design of the tube which contained the rocket's payload was very narrow and long, limiting what objects could be inserted into the tube.

Target: The tube's slender design, which contained the rocket's payload was very narrow and long, limiting what objects could be inserted into the tube.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: This limitation on size was extremely inconvenient when considering the future proposed payloads of Martlet rockets which included satellites and space probes.

Target: This limitation on size was extremely inconvenient when considering the future proposed payloads of Martlet rockets, including satellites and space probes.


Source: Use clearer wording: The follow-on 2G-2 proposal was to have had a second rocket motor in order to be able to place the second stage in orbit, though with little or no payload.

Target: The follow-on 2G-2 proposal was to have had a second rocket motor to place the second stage in orbit, though with little or no payload.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: They were built and tested for the HARP project but were ultimately not successful due to restrictions in funding and a severe lack of technical information regarding the behavior of large rocket grains under high acceleration loading.

Target: They were built and tested for the HARP project but were ultimately not successful due to restrictions in funding and a severe lack of technical information regarding large rocket grains under high acceleration loading.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: They were built and tested for the HARP project but were ultimately not successful due to restrictions in funding and a severe lack of technical information regarding the behavior of large rocket grains under high acceleration loading.

Target: They were built and tested for the HARP project but were ultimately not successful due to restrictions in funding and a severe lack of technical information regarding the behavior of large rocket grains ' behaviour under high acceleration loading.


Source: Clarify this sentence: When testing these projectiles, the danger of in-bore detonation was considered a very serious potential problem.

Target: When testing these projectiles, the danger of in-bore detonation was considered a severe potential problem.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Martlet 3A The Martlet 3A was an diameter, gun-fired rocket projectile that theoretically was able to reach 500km altitude.

Target: Martlet 3A The Martlet 3A was an diameter, gun-fired rocket projectile that theoretically could reach 500km altitude.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: A standard 6-inch rocket was bonded to an aluminum case, and the rocket nozzle was supported by a pusher plate, which would impart the acceleration thrust to the missile through the aluminum wall casing.

Target: A standard 6-inch rocket was bonded to an aluminum case, and the rocket nozzle was supported by a pusher plate, which would impart the missile's acceleration through the aluminum wall casing.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: This was solved for later rockets by filling the propellant cavity with liquid, but only after development of the 3B model had ended.

Target: This was solved for later rockets by filling the propellant cavity with liquid, but only after developing the 3B model had ended.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Martlet 3E The Martlet 3E was a suborbital solid rocket designed to be fired from a smaller, 7-inch (180mm) cannon used in the HARP project.

Target: Martlet 3E The Martlet 3E was a solid suborbital rocket designed to be fired from a smaller, 7-inch (180mm) cannon used in the HARP project.


Source: Make this sentence readable: The 3E model utilized a new technique of rocket grain construction that consisted of laminating sheet double-base propellant grain under hydraulic pressure.

Target: The 3E model utilized a new rocket grain construction that consisted of laminating sheet double-base propellant grain under hydraulic pressure.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: The 3E model utilized a new technique of rocket grain construction that consisted of laminating sheet double-base propellant grain under hydraulic pressure.

Target: The 3E model utilized a new technique of rocket grain construction technique that consisted of laminating sheet double-base propellant grain under hydraulic pressure.


Source: Clarification: Information for on-board sensors was to be processed by the logic module which provided commands to a cold gas thruster system which in turn adjusted the orientation of the vehicle.

Target: Information for on-board sensors was to be processed by the logic module which provided commands to a cold gas thruster system which in turn adjusted the vehicle's orientation.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Studies have also used goal orientation to predict sales performance, adaptive performanceStasielowicz, L. (2019).

Target: It has also been used to predict sales performance, adaptive performanceStasielowicz, L. (2019).


Source: Clarification: More recently, researchers have embraced the idea that individuals can adopt the two orientation styles simultaneously: persons can be independently high or low in learning and performance orientations.

Target: More recently, researchers have embraced the idea that individuals can adopt the two orientation styles simultaneously: individuals can be independently high or low in learning and performance orientations.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Ultimately, individuals can entertain multiple competing goal orientations at the same time, and strive to both outperform competitors and improve their performance.

Target: Ultimately, they can entertain multiple competing goal orientations at the same time, and strive to both outperform competitors and improve their performance.


Source: Clarify this text: State versus trait There has been great debate as to whether goal orientation should be operationalized as a state or as a trait.

Target: State versus trait There has been debate as to whether goal orientation should be operationalized as a state or as a trait.


Source: Make this easier to read: Journal of Applied Psychology, 90(6), 1096-1127. goal orientation has been conceptualized as a trait, quasi-trait, and state. They states that whether researchers conceptualize goal orientation as a trait or a state "depends on the breadth of the inference that the researcher is attempting to support".

Target: Journal of Applied Psychology, 90(6), 1096-1127. They assert that whether researchers conceptualize goal orientation as a trait or a state "depends on the breadth of the inference that the researcher is attempting to support".


Source: Make this sentence better readable: They found that when few situational cues are present, individuals will adopt their dispositional goal orientations.

Target: They found that when few situational cues are present, individuals adopt their dispositional goal orientations.


Source: Make this easier to read: Antecedents Throughout the goal orientation literature, many studies have examined relationships between goal orientation and various antecedents.

Target: Antecedents Many studies have examined relationships between goal orientation and various antecedents.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: In situations with more complex tasks, it appears that "do your best" goals may lead to higher performance than specific goals.

Target: In situations with more complex tasks, "do your best" goals may lead to higher performance than specific goals.


Source: Make this easier to read: Payne et al. found that individuals with high levels of trait and state LGO and low levels of trait APGO had better job performance, that PPGO was unrelated to performance, and that LGO predicted job performance above and beyond both cognitive ability and the Big Five personality characteristics.

Target: Payne et al. found that individuals with high levels of trait and state LGO and low levels of trait APGO had better job performance, PPGO was unrelated to performance, and that LGO predicted job performance above and beyond both cognitive ability and the Big Five personality characteristics.


Source: Clarify this text: Payne et al. found that individuals with high levels of trait and state LGO and low levels of trait APGO had better job performance, that PPGO was unrelated to performance, and that LGO predicted job performance above and beyond both cognitive ability and the Big Five personality characteristics.

Target: Payne et al. found that individuals with high levels of trait and state LGO and low levels of trait APGO had better job performance, that PPGO was unrelated to performance, and that LGO predicted job performance more accurately than both cognitive ability and the Big Five personality characteristics.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Psychological projection is a defense mechanism in which the ego defends itself against unconscious impulses or qualities (both positive and negative) by denying their existence in themselves by attributing them to others.

Target: Psychological projection is a defense mechanism in which the ego defends itself against unconscious impulses or qualities (both positive and negative) by denying their existence in themselves and attributing them to others.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: Instead, Newman, Duff, and Baumeister (1997) proposed a new model of defensive projection. In this view, repressors try to suppress thoughts of their undesirable traits, and these efforts make those trait categories highly accessibleso that they are then used all the more often when forming impressions of others.

Target: Instead, Newman, Duff, and Baumeister (1997) proposed a new model of defensive projection in which the repressors efforts to suppress thoughts of their undesirable traits, and these efforts make those trait categories highly accessibleso that they are then used all the more often when forming impressions of others.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: In this view, repressors try to suppress thoughts of their undesirable traits, and these efforts make those trait categories highly accessibleso that they are then used all the more often when forming impressions of others.

Target: In this view, repressors try to suppress thoughts of their undesirable traits make those trait categories highly accessibleso that they are then used all the more often when forming impressions of others.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The method of managed projection is a type of projective technique.

Target: The method of managed projection is a projective technique.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: The basic principle of the method is that a subject is presented with their own verbal portrait named by the name of another person, as well as with a portrait of their fictional opposition (V. V. Stolin, 1981).

Target: The basic principle of this method is that a subject is presented with their own verbal portrait named by the name of another person, as well as with a portrait of their fictional opposition (V. V. Stolin, 1981).


Source: Change to clearer wording: This applies to good traits as well as bad traitsand is not a defense mechanism for denying the existence of the trait within the self.

Target: This applies to both good and bad traits; it is not a defense mechanism for denying the existence of the trait within the self.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: President Michelle Bachelet with presidential sash and the O'Higgins Pioche, 11 March 2014 The O'Higgins Pioche In Chile, O'Higgins Pioche is a piece regarded as the true symbol of presidential power that is placed in the bottom of the presidential sash of office.

Target: President Michelle Bachelet with presidential sash and the O'Higgins Pioche, 11 March 2014 The O'Higgins Pioche In Chile, the O'Higgins Pioche is a piece regarded as the true symbol of presidential power that is placed in the bottom of the presidential sash of office.


Source: Make this sentence readable: President Michelle Bachelet with presidential sash and the O'Higgins Pioche, 11 March 2014 The O'Higgins Pioche In Chile, O'Higgins Pioche is a piece regarded as the true symbol of presidential power that is placed in the bottom of the presidential sash of office.

Target: President Michelle Bachelet with presidential sash and the O'Higgins Pioche, 11 March 2014 The O'Higgins Pioche In Chile, O'Higgins Pioche is a piece regarded as the true symbol of presidential power that is placed in the lower end of the presidential sash of office.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: This name was given a medal O'Higgins ordered to bring in the presidential sash.

Target: This was the name given to a medal that Bernardo O'Higgins ordered to bring in the presidential sash.


Source: Clarify this sentence: This relic was given by the hero Jos Gregorio Argomedo (17671830) after his abdication (1823).

Target: The relic was a gift by O'Higgins to Jos Gregorio Argomedo (17671830) after his abdication (1823).


Source: Use clearer wording: During the inauguration of the monument in the Alameda (1872), the descendants of Argomedo gave it to President Federico Errzuriz Zaartu, who put the presidential sash in inaugurating a tradition that continues.

Target: During the inauguration of the monument in the Alameda (1872), the descendants of Argomedo gave it to President Federico Errzuriz Zaartu, who put it on the presidential sash in inaugurating a tradition that continues.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: The "Pioche de O'Higgins" is the element in the transfer of power from one president to another symbolizes the transfer of power.Sabas Que?

Target: The "Pioche de O'Higgins" is the element that symbolizes the transfer of power from one president to another symbolizes the transfer of power.Sabas Que?


Source: Clarify this paragraph: The "Pioche de O'Higgins" is the element in the transfer of power from one president to another symbolizes the transfer of power.Sabas Que?

Target: The "Pioche de O'Higgins" is the element in the transfer of power from one president to the next one during the ceremony of change of command.Sabas Que?


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The philatelic business activities of the Tuvalu Philatelic Bureau are authorised by the Tuvalu Philatelic Bureau Ordinance (1982).

Target: The philatelic business activities are authorised by the Tuvalu Philatelic Bureau Ordinance (1982).


Source: Clarify: The Government of Tuvalu are proposing to merge the Tuvalu Philatelic Bureau with the Tuvalu Post Office.

Target: The Government of Tuvalu are proposing to merge the Bureau with the Tuvalu Post Office.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Exceptions are the extensive areas of wilderness in Alaska.

Target: Limited exceptions are the extensive areas of wilderness in Alaska.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Ambulatory passageways for circumambulation are present through which worshipers move in a clockwise direction, starting at the sanctuary doorway and moving inward toward the inner sanctum where the deity is enshrined.

Target: Passageways for circumambulation are present through which worshipers move in a clockwise direction, starting at the sanctuary doorway and moving inward toward the inner sanctum where the deity is enshrined.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Circumambulation is done in a clockwise direction and in an odd rather than even number of times.

Target: It is done in a clockwise direction and in an odd rather than even number of times.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: The circumambulatory pathway made of stone around the shrine is called the Pradakshina path.

Target: The ambulatory pathway made of stone around the shrine is called the Pradakshina path.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Also, at some Catholic shrines, it is a tradition to circumambulate around the cult object of the place, usually relics of a saint or an image of Jesus or the Virgin Mary.

Target: Also, at some Catholic shrines, it is a tradition to circle the cult object of the place, usually relics of a saint or an image of Jesus or the Virgin Mary.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: In Romania, there is an Easter custom to circumambulate the church three times by singing priests leading the people, just before finishing Easter Liturgy.

Target: In Romania, there is an Easter custom to process around the church three times by singing priests leading the people, just before finishing Easter Liturgy.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: In the Coptic tradition, during the liturgy, the priest circumambulates while an acolyte (altar boy) holds a cross high on the opposite side of the altar.

Target: In the Coptic tradition, during the liturgy, the priest circles the altar while an acolyte (altar boy) holds a cross high on the opposite side of the altar.


Source: Clarification: In the Coptic tradition, during the liturgy, the priest circumambulates while an acolyte (altar boy) holds a cross high on the opposite side of the altar.

Target: In the Coptic tradition, during the liturgy, the priest circumambulates while an acolyte (altar boy) holds a cross high on the opposite side.


Source: Make this easier to read: The priest along with altar servers process around the circumambulate around the interior of the church visiting each of the 14 stations.

Target: The priest along with altar servers process around the interior of the church visiting each of the 14 stations.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Pollen is transferred from anther of one plant to stigma of another as bee collects nectar Pollen tubes are unique to plants and their structures have evolved over the history of seed plants. Pollen tube formation is complex and the mechanism is not fully understood, but is of great interest to scientists. Pollen tube formation is important for sexual reproduction to occur in seed plants. Wind, water or pollinators transport pollen grains to the female gametophyte.

Target: Pollen is transferred from anther of one plant to stigma of another as bee collects nectar Pollen tubes are unique to plants and their structures have evolved over the history of seed plants. Pollen tube formation is complex and the mechanism is not fully understood, but is of great interest to scientists because pollen tubes transport the male gametes produced by pollen grains to the female gametophyte.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Once a pollen grain has implanted on a compatible stigma via self-incompatibility mechanisms, the germination process is initiated.

Target: Once a pollen grain has implanted on a compatible stigma, its germination is initiated.


Source: Change to clearer wording: During this process, the pollen grain undergoes a conformational change whereupon a given section begins to protrude outwards to form a tube-like structure, known as the pollen tube.

Target: During this process, the pollen grain begins to bulge outwards to form a tube-like structure, known as the pollen tube.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: This structure rapidly descends down the length of the style via tip-directed growth, reaching rates of 1cm/h, whilst carrying two non-motile sperm cells.

Target: The pollen tube structure rapidly descends down the length of the style via tip-directed growth, reaching rates of 1cm/h, whilst carrying two non-motile sperm cells.


Source: Use clearer wording: The Sullubawa are a Fulani clan in Northern Nigeria, the current ruling houses of Kano, Ringim and Katsina belong to the clan and another amongst the four ruling Houses of Zazzau Emirate.

Target: The Sullubawa are a Fulani clan in Northern Nigeria, the current ruling houses of the ancient Sahelian city-states of Kano and Katsina belong to the clan and another amongst the four ruling Houses of Zazzau Emirate.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The Sullubawa are a Fulani clan in Northern Nigeria, the current ruling houses of Kano, Ringim and Katsina belong to the clan and another amongst the four ruling Houses of Zazzau Emirate.

Target: The Sullubawa are a Fulani clan in Northern Nigeria, the current ruling houses of Kano, Ringim and Katsina belong to the clan and another amongst the four ruling Houses of Zazzau.


Source: Make this easier to read: They are said to have originated from Futa Toro, in what is now Senegal, and are associated with the Torodbe (Toronkawa)

Target: They are said to have originated from Futa Toro, in what is now Senegal, and are cousins with the Torodbe (Toronkawa)


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: , the Sullubawa originated from Sissilo the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio as such they are regarded as the cousins of Toronkawa, they initially belong to the Wangarawa stock, they had Mandigo element in their ancestry and they were related to the Mandika, mandika are the descendants of the Mali Empire, the Sullubawa spoke Wakore before they became absorbed into the Fulani group losing their original language and adopting the Fulani language.

Target: from Sissilo, the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio as such they are regarded as the cousins of Toronkawa, they initially belong to the Wangarawa stock, they had Mandigo element in their ancestry and they were related to the Mandika, mandika are the descendants of the Mali Empire, the Sullubawa spoke Wakore before they became absorbed into the Fulani group losing their original language and adopting the Fulani language.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: , the Sullubawa originated from Sissilo the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio as such they are regarded as the cousins of Toronkawa, they initially belong to the Wangarawa stock, they had Mandigo element in their ancestry and they were related to the Mandika, mandika are the descendants of the Mali Empire, the Sullubawa spoke Wakore before they became absorbed into the Fulani group losing their original language and adopting the Fulani language.

Target: , the Sullubawa originated from Sissilo the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio. The clan became culturally assimilated with the Fulani adopting the culture and language. The ancestral origin of the descendants of the Mali Empire, the Sullubawa spoke Wakore before they became absorbed into the Fulani group losing their original language and adopting the Fulani language.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: , the Sullubawa originated from Sissilo the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio as such they are regarded as the cousins of Toronkawa, they initially belong to the Wangarawa stock, they had Mandigo element in their ancestry and they were related to the Mandika, mandika are the descendants of the Mali Empire, the Sullubawa spoke Wakore before they became absorbed into the Fulani group losing their original language and adopting the Fulani language.

Target: , the Sullubawa originated from Sissilo the husband of Cippowo a sister of Uthman Toroddo ancestor of Usman dan Fodio as such they are regarded as the cousins of Toronkawa, they initially belong to the Wangarawa stock, they had Mandigo element in their ancestry and they were related to the Mandika, mandika are the descendants of the Mali Empire and the Wangarawa mercantile tribe which dominated the gold trade in the region.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Sullubawa clansmen later attained positions of power following the fall of the first republic ;

Target: Sullubawa clansmen later attained positions of power following independence ;


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Madrasas were built over the expanse of the kingdom, most notably the Mahmud Gawan Madrasa at Bidar, where Persian was taught.

Target: Madrasas were built over the expanse of the kingdom, such as the the Mahmud Gawan Madrasa at Bidar, where Persian was taught.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Richard Eaton writes that Persian was much less widely understood in the region than vernacular languages. During the turn of the 16th century, the Bahmani Sultanate splintered into the Deccan Sultanates, which were also Persianate in culture.

Target: Richard Eaton writes that Persian was much less widely understood in the Deccan region than vernacular languages. During the turn of the 16th century, the Bahmani Sultanate splintered into the Deccan Sultanates, which were also Persianate in culture.


Source: Make this easier to read: Though Arabic largely dominates the realm of Islamic liturgy and theology in the Indian subcontinent, Persian can also be seen in some religious spheres: the dhikr sessions of Sufism often employ Persian poetry in song, and the Sufi devotional music genre of qawwali also uses Persian in parallel with local languages.

Target: Though Arabic largely dominates the realm of Islamic liturgy and theology in the Indian subcontinent, Persian can be seen in some religious spheres: the dhikr sessions of Sufism often employ Persian poetry in song, and the Sufi devotional music genre of qawwali also uses Persian in parallel with local languages.


Source: Clarification: However, Time magazine cited a "western intelligence source" as saying that Mossad was behind the blast, and other reports, which were attributed to western intelligence services, also mentioned the involvement of Israel's intelligence services.

Target: However, Time magazine reported claims from a "western intelligence source" as saying that Mossad was behind the blast, and other reports, which were attributed to western intelligence services, also mentioned the involvement of Israel's intelligence services.


Source: Clarification: However, Time magazine cited a "western intelligence source" as saying that Mossad was behind the blast, and other reports, which were attributed to western intelligence services, also mentioned the involvement of Israel's intelligence services.

Target: However, Time magazine cited a "western intelligence source" that Israeli intelligence agency Mossad had orchestrated the explosion; other reports, which were attributed to western intelligence services, also mentioned the involvement of Israel's intelligence services.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Speaking to The Guardian on condition of anonymity, an official with close links to the Iranian Government in Iran said that he believed the Bid Kaneh explosion was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".

Target: An " official with close links to the Iranian Government in Iran said that he believed the Bid Kaneh explosion was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Speaking to The Guardian on condition of anonymity, an official with close links to the Iranian Government in Iran said that he believed the Bid Kaneh explosion was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".

Target: Speaking to The Guardian on condition of anonymity, an official with close links to the Iranian Government " spoke to The Guardian anonymously and claimed that the blast was "part of the covert war against Iran, led by Israel".


Source: Clarify: Resolution In the wake of attacks against the United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon (UNIFIL), the Security Council today extended its mandate for two years, until 31 August 2013, condemning all terrorist attacks against it in the strongest terms.

Target: Resolution In the wake of attacks against the United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon (UNIFIL), the Security Council extended its mandate for two years, until 31 August 2013, condemning all terrorist attacks against it in the strongest terms.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Unanimously adopting resolution 2004 (2011), the 15-member body strongly called upon all parties concerned to respect the cessation of hostilities, prevent any violation of the Blue Line and cooperate fully with UNIFIL.

Target: The resolution was unanimously adopted, and the Security Council urged all parties concerned to respect the cessation of hostilities, prevent any violation of the Blue Line and cooperate fully with UNIFIL.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: It called for the rapid finalization of Lebanons investigation into the 27 May and 26 July attacks on the Force so as to bring the perpetrators to justice, and urged all parties to abide scrupulously by their obligation to respect the safety of UNIFIL and other United Nations personnel.

Target: The resolution called for the rapid finalization of Lebanons investigation into the 27 May and 26 July attacks on the Force so as to bring the perpetrators to justice, and urged all parties to abide scrupulously by their obligation to respect the safety of UNIFIL and other United Nations personnel.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: As promised, the Sultan of Sulu received eastern Sabah as an honorary gift from the Sultan of Brunei, for the Tausugs' help during the civil war (an event which traced the roots of the North Borneo dispute between Malaysia and the Philippines in the present-day).

Target: As promised, the Sultan of Sulu claimed eastern Sabah as an honorary gift from the Sultan of Brunei, for the Tausugs' help during the civil war (an event which traced the roots of the North Borneo dispute between Malaysia and the Philippines in the present-day).


Source: Change to clearer wording: As promised, the Sultan of Sulu received eastern Sabah as an honorary gift from the Sultan of Brunei, for the Tausugs' help during the civil war (an event which traced the roots of the North Borneo dispute between Malaysia and the Philippines in the present-day).

Target: As promised, the Sultan of Sulu received eastern Sabah as a gift from the Sultan of Brunei, for the Tausugs' help during the civil war (an event which traced the roots of the North Borneo dispute between Malaysia and the Philippines in the present-day).


Source: Make the sentence clearer: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small scale preliminary study conducted in order to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.

Target: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small scale preliminary study conducted to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: A pilot study is often used to test the design of the full-scale experiment which then can be adjusted.

Target: A pilot study is used to formulate the design of the full-scale experiment which then can be adjusted.


Source: Clarify this text: Other applications In the health researchcontext, studies conducted in preparation for a future randomized controlled trial are known as pilot and feasibility studies, where pilot studies are a subset of feasibility studies.

Target: Applications In the health researchcontext, studies conducted in preparation for a future randomized controlled trial are known as pilot and feasibility studies, where pilot studies are a subset of feasibility studies.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Other applications In the health researchcontext, studies conducted in preparation for a future randomized controlled trial are known as pilot and feasibility studies, where pilot studies are a subset of feasibility studies.

Target: Other applications In clinical research, studies conducted in preparation for a future randomized controlled trial are known as pilot and feasibility studies, where pilot studies are a subset of feasibility studies.


Source: Clarification: A feasibility study asks whether something can be done, should we proceedwith it, and if so, how.

Target: A feasibility study asks whether the study should proceed, and if so, how.


Source: Clarify the sentence: A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study or part of a future study is conducted on a smaller scale. Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.

Target: A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study is conducted on a smaller scale. Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.


Source: Clarify: in addition to his native language of Hindko language and the Arabiclanguage from his graduate study, He was also fluent in English, Urdu, Pashto and Greek, and could read and understand Persian.

Target: in addition to his native language of Hindko and Arabic, he was also fluent in English, Urdu, Pashto and Greek, and could read and understand Persian.


Source: Make this easier to read: 170px|Textile doll (cotton, wool, wood) The Chancay were a pre-Columbian archeological civilization which developed between the valleys of Fortaleza, Pativilca, Supe, Huaura, Chancay, Chilln, Rimac and Lurn, on the central coast of Peru, from about CE 1000 to 1470.

Target: 170px|Textile doll (cotton, wool, wood) The Chancay were a pre-Columbian archeological civilization which developed between the valleys of Fortaleza, Pativilca, Supe, Huaura, Chancay, Chilln, Rimac and Lurn, on the central coast of Peru, from about CE 1000 to 1470 CE.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Parts of the southern Chancay area were conquered by the Chim in the early fifteenth century and in about 1450 A.D. the Incas were occupying both areas.

Target: Parts of the southern Chancay area were conquered by the Chim in the early 1400s, and by about 1450 A.D. the Incas were occupying both areas.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: It is believed that the Chancay had a centralized political structure, forming a small regional state.

Target: It is believed that the Chancay had a centralized political structure and formed a small regional state.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Thus the Chancay culture declined in the fifteenth centuryto make way for the territorial expansion of the Inca Empire.

Target: Thus the Chancay culture declined in the later 15th century, as the Inca Empire expanded into their lands.


Source: Clarify: It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility.

Target: According to one author, the rotation it provided between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility.


Source: Change to clearer wording: 19881993: Beginnings Aniston first worked in Off-Broadway productions such as For Dear Life and Dancing on Checker's Grave, and supported herself with part-time jobs which included working as a telemarketer, waitress, and bike messenger.

Target: 19881993: Beginnings Aniston first worked in Off-Broadway productions such as For Dear Life and Dancing on Checker's Grave, and supported herself with part-time jobs including work as a telemarketer, waitress, and bike messenger.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Aniston also appeared in two more failed television comedy series, The Edge and Muddling Through, and guest-starred in Quantum Leap, Herman's Head, and Burke's Law. 19942004: Friends and worldwide recognition Depressed over her four unsuccessful television shows, Aniston approached Warren Littlefield at a Los Angeles gas station asking for reassurance.

Target: Aniston also appeared in the two failed television comedy series, The Edge and Muddling Through, and guest-starred in Quantum Leap, Herman's Head, and Burke's Law. 19942004: Friends and worldwide recognition Depressed over her four unsuccessful television shows, Aniston approached Warren Littlefield at a Los Angeles gas station asking for reassurance.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The head of NBC entertainment encouraged her to continue acting, and a few months later helped cast her in Friends, a sitcom that was set to debut on NBC's 19941995 fall lineup.

Target: The head of NBC entertainment encouraged her to continue acting, and a few months later helped cast her in Friends, a sitcom set to debut on NBC's 19941995 fall lineup.


Source: Clarify this text: Her character was widely popularand is now regarded as one of the greatest female characters in American television history. Aniston received five Primetime Emmy Award nominations (two for Supporting Actress, three for Lead Actress), including a win for Lead Actress.

Target: Her character was especially popular. She received five Primetime Emmy Award nominations (two for Supporting Actress, three for Lead Actress), including a win for Lead Actress.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Aniston received five Primetime Emmy Award nominations (two for Supporting Actress, three for Lead Actress), including a win for Lead Actress.

Target: Aniston received five Primetime Emmy Award nominations (two for Supporting Actress, three for Lead Actress), and won for Lead Actress.


Source: Clarify this text: Film critic Roger Ebert declared it her breakthrough: Aniston's biggest commercial success in film has been the comedy Bruce Almighty (2003), in which she played the girlfriend of a television field reporter (Jim Carrey) offered the chance to be God for one week.

Target: Film critic Roger Ebert declared it her breakthrough: Aniston's biggest commercial success in film has been the comedy Bruce Almighty (2003), where she played the girlfriend of a television field reporter (Jim Carrey) offered the chance to be God for one week.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: With a worldwide box office gross of $484million, the film was the fifth-highest-grossing big screen production of the year. Aniston next starred as the old classmate of a tightly wound newly-wed in the romantic comedy Along Came Polly (2004), opposite Ben Stiller, which placed number one at the North American box office, earning $ 27.7million in its opening weekend;

Target: With a worldwide box office gross of $484million, it was the fifth-highest-grossing feature film of the year. Aniston next starred as the old classmate of a tightly wound newlywed in the romantic comedy Along Came Polly (2004) opposite Ben Stiller, which placed number one at the North American box office, earning $ 27.7million in its opening weekend;


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: After her arrest in 1901, she confessed to 31 murders, but only 12 were confirmed.

Target: After her arrest in 1901, she confessed to 31 murders, but only twelve were confirmed.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Toppan worked as a nurse from c. 1885 to 1902.

Target: Toppan worked as a nurse from around 1885 to 1902.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: In November 1862, less than two years after her father had left them, Honora Kelley was placed as an indentured servant in the home of Mrs.

Target: In November 1862, less than two years after being abandoned by her father, Honora Kelley was placed as an indentured servant in the home of Mrs.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the nations of Serbia and KosovoAs to the agreement not having been signed, see text of agreement.. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.

Target: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the governments of Serbia and KosovoAs to the agreement not having been signed, see text of agreement.. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Kosovo has become a member of several URLanizations, while according to Serbia and about half of the UN member states, Resolution 1244 remains legally binding on all parties. The EU-mediated dialogue between Kosovo and Serbia was launched in March 2011, three years after Kosovo declared URL Belgrade and Pristina were urged to continue talks in Brussels, but Serbia was not obliged to recognize Kosovo at any point in the URL Talks Until preset, ten rounds of talks have been held at the European External Action Service office in Brussels.

Target: The European Union-mediated dialogue between Kosovo and Serbia was launched in March 2011, three years after Kosovo declared URL Belgrade and Pristina were urged to continue talks in Brussels, but Serbia was not obliged to recognize Kosovo at any point in the URL Talks Until preset, ten rounds of talks have been held at the European External Action Service office in Brussels.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The National Assembly of Serbia has not treated the agreement as international and has not ratified it into a binding law, which is a procedure required for international agreements in Serbia.Zakon o zakljucivanju i izvrsenju medjunarodnih ugovora It has, however, merely accepted the government report about the "hitherto process of political and technical dialogue with the temporary institutions in Pristina with the mediation of EU, including the process of implementation of the achieved agreements".

Target: The National Assembly of Serbia has not treated the agreement as international and has not ratified it, which would be the procedure required in Serbia for approving an international agreement.Zakon o zakljucivanju i izvrsenju medjunarodnih ugovora It has, however, merely accepted the government report about the "hitherto process of political and technical dialogue with the temporary institutions in Pristina with the mediation of EU, including the process of implementation of the achieved agreements".


Source: Change to clearer wording: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer the question about constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised is a political question, and not a legal one.

Target: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer a question about the constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised is a political question, and not a legal one.


Source: Clarify this sentence: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the nations of Serbia and KosovoAs to the agreement not having been signed, see text of agreement.. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.

Target: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the governments of Serbia and KosovoAs to the agreement not having been signed, see text of agreement.. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.


Source: Make this easier to read: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the nations of Serbia and KosovoAs to the agreement not having been signed, see text of agreement.. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.

Target: The Brussels Agreement (/ Briselski sporazum, ), formally the First Agreement of Principles Governing the Normalisation of Relations, was a multilateral treaty proposed to normalize relations between the nations of Serbia and Kosovo. The agreement was negotiated and concluded in Brussels under the auspices of the European Union and signed on 19 April 2013.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: The new code was expected to go into effect in late 2015 but has again been delayed by Serbia until March 2016. The geographic phone code was implemented in December 2016.

Target: After some delays, the new geographic phone code was implemented in December 2016.


Source: Clarification: The National Assembly of Serbia has not treated the agreement as international and has not ratified it into a binding law, which is a procedure required for international agreements in Serbia.Zakon o zakljucivanju i izvrsenju medjunarodnih ugovora It has, however, merely accepted the government report about the "hitherto process of political and technical dialog with the temporary institutions in Pristina with the mediation of EU, including the process of implementation of the achieved agreements".

Target: The National Assembly of Serbia has not treated the agreement as international and has not ratified it, which would be the procedure required in Serbia for approving an international agreement.Zakon o zakljucivanju i izvrsenju medjunarodnih ugovora It has, however, merely accepted the government report about the "hitherto process of political and technical dialog with the temporary institutions in Pristina with the mediation of EU, including the process of implementation of the achieved agreements".


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer the question about constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised is a political question, and not a legal one.

Target: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer a question about the constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised is a political question, and not a legal one.


Source: Make this sentence readable: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer the question about constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised is a political question, and not a legal one.

Target: O PRIHVATANjU IZVEŠTAJA O DOSADAŠNjEM PROCESS POLITIČKOG I TEHNIČKOG DIJALOGA SA PRIVREMENIM INSTITUCIJAMA SAMOUPRAVE U PRIŠTINI UZ POSREDOVANjE EVROPSKE UNIJE, UKLjUČUJUĆI PROCES IMPLEMENTACIJE POSTIGNUTIH DOGOVORA The constitutional court in Belgrade did not answer the question about constitutionality of the agreement, stating in December 2014 that the issue raised was a political question, and not a legal one.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Storm drains are typically at shallower depths than combined sewers ;

Target: Storm drains are typically installed at shallower depths than combined sewers ;


Source: Make the sentence clear: because, while storm drains are designed to accept surface runoff from streets, combined sewers were designed to also accept sewage flows from buildings with basements.

Target: because, while storm drains are designed to accept surface runoff from streets, combined sewers were designed to accept sewage flows from buildings with basements.


Source: Change to clearer wording: It is often used to describe a stable mental state or mood in those affected with bipolar disorder that is neither manic nor depressive, yet is distinguishable from healthy controls.

Target: It is often used to describe a stable mental state or mood that is neither manic nor depressive, yet is distinguishable from healthy controls.


Source: Clarification: The word euthymia traces its roots to the Greek words eu, meaning well, and thymo, meaning soul or emotion.

Target: The word euthymia is derived from the Greek words eu, meaning well, and thymo, meaning soul or emotion.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: The word euthymia traces its roots to the Greek words eu, meaning well, and thymo, meaning soul or emotion.

Target: The word euthymia traces its roots to the Greek words eu, well, and thymo, meaning soul or emotion.


Source: Use clearer wording: The word euthymia traces its roots to the Greek words eu, meaning well, and thymo, meaning soul or emotion.

Target: The word euthymia traces its roots to the Greek words eu, meaning well, and thymo, soul or emotion.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The present day Goud Saraswat Brahmins who are Goud saraswat, Shenvis, Chitrapur saraswats, bhalvalikar, Rajapur Saraswats, and pednekars, have this event as part of their culture.

Target: The present day Saraswat Brahmins who are Goud saraswat, Shenvis, Chitrapur saraswats, bhalvalikar, Rajapur Saraswats, and pednekars, have this event as part of their culture.


Source: Clarify this text: Here it is mentioned that Angirasa-a great sage belonging to the Saraswata race-was born in the ashram of Dadhichi.

Target: Here it is mentioned that Angirasa-a great sage belonging to the Saraswata race.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Trusting to have escaped the hell, they get into their supposedly safe home into the clutches of the auxiliary Kinder der Landstrasse and victims of racial persecution in the name of so-called children's welfare:

Target: Trusting to have escaped the hell, they get into their supposedly safe home into the clutches of the auxiliary Kinder der Landstrasse activities as


Source: Make this sentence better readable: Most land trusts are URLanizations which owns and manages land, and sometimes waters.

Target: Land trusts are URLanizations which owns and manages land, and sometimes waters.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: There are three main types of land trust, distinguished from one another by the ways in which they are legally structured and by the purposes for which they URLanized and operated.

Target: There are three common types of land trust, distinguished from one another by the ways in which they are legally structured and by the purposes for which they URLanized and operated.


Source: Clarify: Aldrich, R. Wyerman, J. 2005 National Land Trust Census Report (2006), Land Trust Alliance A community land trust (CLT) is a private, nonprofit corporation that acquires, manages, and develops land for a variety of purposes, primarily for the production and stewardship of affordable housing, although many CLTs are also engaged in non-residential buildings and uses.

Target: Aldrich, R. A community land trust (CLT) is a private, nonprofit corporation that acquires, manages, and develops land for a variety of purposes, primarily for the production and stewardship of affordable housing, although many CLTs are also engaged in non-residential buildings and uses.


Source: Clarify: Another of landholding is sometimes referred to as a "trust" in the United States ;

Target: In the United States ;


Source: Make this sentence readable: Another of landholding is sometimes referred to as a "trust" in the United States; approximately of land are owned by the United States government and held in trust for Native American tribes and individuals.U.S. Department of the Interior.

Target: Another of landholding is sometimes referred to as a "trust" in the United States, the land owned by the United States government and held in trust for Native American tribes and individuals.U.S. Department of the Interior.


Source: Clarify the sentence: approximately of land are owned by the United States government and held in trust for Native American tribes and individuals.U.S. Department of the Interior. Office of the Special Trustee. History. In Australia, Aboriginal land trusts are a type of URLanisation that holds the freehold title to an area of land on behalf of a community of Aboriginal and/or Torres Strait Islander people.

Target: approximately of land are owned by the United States government and held in trust for Native American tribes and individuals is sometimes referred to as a land trust. In Australia, Aboriginal land trusts are a type of URLanisation that holds the freehold title to an area of land on behalf of a community of Aboriginal and/or Torres Strait Islander people.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: The winter of 214/215 he spent at Nicomedia.

Target: He spent the winter of 214/215 he spent at Nicomedia.


Source: Make this sentence readable: The winter of 214/215 he spent at Nicomedia. Before 4 April 214 he had left Nicomedia, and in the summer he was at Antioch on the Orontes.

Target: The winter of 214/215 in Nicomedia. By 4 April 214 he had left Nicomedia, and in the summer he was at Antioch on the Orontes.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: In spring 216 he arrived again at Antioch and before 27 May had set out for his Persian War.

Target: In spring 216 he returned to Antioch and before 27 May had set out for his Persian War.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: On 10 April 2017, India's Ministry of External Affairs stated that he had been "kidnapped last year from Iran and his subsequent presence in Pakistan has never been explained credibly".

Target: On 10 April 2017, Indian foreign ministry alleged he had been "kidnapped last year from Iran and his subsequent presence in Pakistan has never been explained credibly".


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The Pakistani government claimed that he was a commander in the Indian Navy who was involved in subversive activities inside Pakistan and was arrested on 3 March 2016 during a counter-intelligence operation in Balochistan.

Target: The Pakistani government stated that he was a commander in the Indian Navy who was involved in subversive activities inside Pakistan and was arrested on 3 March 2016 during a counter-intelligence operation in Balochistan.


Source: Make this sentence readable: The Indian government recognised Jadhav as a former naval officer but denied any current links with him and maintained that he took premature retirement and operated a business in Iranian city of Chabahar and was abducted from there.

Target: The Indian government recognised Jadhav as a former naval officer but denied any current links with him and maintained that he took premature retirement and was abducted from there.


Source: Clarify the sentence: The Indian government recognised Jadhav as a former naval officer but denied any current links with him and maintained that he took premature retirement and operated a business in Iranian city of Chabahar and was abducted from there.

Target: The Indian government recognised Jadhav as a former naval officer but denied any current links with him and maintained that he took premature retirement and operated a business in Iranian city of Chabahar and was abducted from Iran.


Source: Clarify this text: India and Pakistan both sent their legal teams to put forward their arguments, led by Harish Salve and Khawar Qureshi QC respectively.

Target: India and Pakistan both sent their legal teams to put forward their arguments, led by Harish Salve and Khawar Qureshi respectively.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: He also admitted to supporting and funding, on behalf of R AW, Baloch militants affiliated with the BLA and BRA, in addition to infiltrating and establishing "30 to 40 R AW operatives along the Makran Coast" for involvement in terrorist activities.

Target: He also admitted to supporting and funding, on behalf of AW, Baloch militants affiliated with the BLA and BRA, in addition to infiltrating and establishing "30 to 40 R AW operatives along the Makran Coast" for involvement in terrorist activities.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: He also admitted to supporting and funding, on behalf of R AW, Baloch militants affiliated with the BLA and BRA, in addition to infiltrating and establishing "30 to 40 R AW operatives along the Makran Coast" for involvement in terrorist activities.

Target: He also admitted to supporting and funding, on behalf of R AW, Baloch militants affiliated with the BLA and BRA, in addition to infiltrating and establishing "30 to 40 AW operatives along the Makran Coast" for involvement in terrorist activities.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Jadhav said that R AW's activities in Balochistan and Sindh were conducted under the direction of Anil Kumar Dhasmana.

Target: Jadhav said that AW's activities in Balochistan and Sindh were conducted under the direction of Anil Kumar Dhasmana.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Green hunting (eco-hunting, green bullet concept, green darting, darting safari) is the practice of hunting game animals with tranquilizer dart guns or bows and the subsequent release of the live animals. Green hunting would typically be performed when tranquilization of the animal is necessary for veterinary, monitoring, or translocation purposes.

Target: Green hunting (eco-hunting, green bullet concept, green darting, darting safari) is the practice of hunting game animals with non-lethal tranquilizer guns or bows and the subsequent release of the live animals. Green hunting would typically be performed when tranquilization of the animal is necessary for veterinary, monitoring, or translocation purposes.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Green hunting (eco-hunting, green bullet concept, green darting, darting safari) is the practice of hunting game animals with tranquilizer dart guns or bows and the subsequent release of the live animals. Green hunting would typically be performed when tranquilization of the animal is necessary for veterinary, monitoring, or translocation purposes.

Target: Green hunting (eco-hunting, green bullet concept, green darting, darting safari) is the practice of hunting game animals with tranquilizer dart guns or bows and subsequently releasing the captured animals alive. Green hunting would typically be performed when tranquilization of the animal is necessary for veterinary, monitoring, or translocation purposes.


Source: Clarification: The measurements and details of a tranquilized animal are accepted in URLanization's record books and fiberglass replicas can be made for the hunter.

Target: The measurements and details of a tranquilized animal are generally accepted by URLanization's record books and fiberglass replicas can be made for the hunter.


Source: Clarify this sentence: The measurements and details of a tranquilized animal are accepted in URLanization's record books and fiberglass replicas can be made for the hunter.

Target: The measurements and details of a tranquilized animal are accepted in URLanization's record books and fiberglass replicas can be made to accolade the hunter.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: The hunter may have the additional option to be kept regularly updated on the animal's future movements if the darting was part of a GPS collaring project.

Target: The hunter may have the additional option to be kept regularly updated on the animal's future movements if the darting was part of a GPS tracking project.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Though still costly (sometimes upwards of $25,000 USD), green hunting is more economical as fees are lower than trophy hunting (up to $ 60,000 USD).

Target: Though still costly (sometimes upwards of $25,000 USD), green hunting is more economical as fees are typically lower than trophy hunting (up to $ 60,000 USD).


Source: Clarify the sentence: Group darting safaris also exist, where a group witnesses the work, without participating in the procedures.

Target: Group darting safaris also exist, where a group of spectators witness the hunt without participating in the procedures.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: In 1936, on a homestead near Gardendale, Alabama, the United States Department of Agriculture constructed an experimental community of rammed-earth edifices with architect Thomas Hibben.

Target: In 1936, on a homestead near Gardendale, Alabama, the United States Department of Agriculture constructed an experimental rammed-earth edifices with architect Thomas Hibben.


Source: Clarify this text: The US Agency for International Development is working with undeveloped countries to improve the engineering of rammed-earth houses.

Target: The US Agency for International Development is working with developing countries to improve the engineering of rammed-earth houses.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Publicity and witness accounts Multiple news reports would have details of family, friends, and acquaintances calling him normal and without a propensity to hurt people, not believing the bombings were an " anti-government " message, as speculated by the magnitude of the attacks and Helder's manifesto.

Target: Publicity and witness accounts News reports detailed family, friends, and acquaintances calling him normal and without a propensity to hurt people, not believing the bombings were an " anti-government " message, as speculated by the magnitude of the attacks and Helder's manifesto.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: Publicity and witness accounts Multiple news reports would have details of family, friends, and acquaintances calling him normal and without a propensity to hurt people, not believing the bombings were an " anti-government " message, as speculated by the magnitude of the attacks and Helder's manifesto.

Target: Publicity and witness accounts Multiple news reports would have details of family, friends, and acquaintances calling him normal and without a propensity to hurt people, disbelieving the bombings were an " anti-government " message, as speculated by the magnitude of the attacks and Helder's manifesto.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Helder was notably a major fan of Kurt Cobain, even after Cobain committed suicide, having posters and merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, in his room when he was arrested.

Target: Helder was notably a fan of Kurt Cobain, even after Cobain committed suicide, having posters and merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, in his room when he was arrested.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Helder was notably a major fan of Kurt Cobain, even after Cobain committed suicide, having posters and merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, in his room when he was arrested.

Target: Helder was notably a major fan of Kurt Cobain; merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, in his room when he was arrested.


Source: Clarify this text: Helder was notably a major fan of Kurt Cobain, even after Cobain committed suicide, having posters and merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, in his room when he was arrested.

Target: Helder was notably a major fan of Kurt Cobain, even after Cobain committed suicide, having posters and merchandise of Cobain and his band, Nirvana, decorated his room when he was arrested.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: though in the same articles, his roommate noted he had become obsessed with death and astral projection, and had begun reciting extended monologues about his new spiritual beliefs to his friends. Helder was not at the top of his college class, but his teachers described him as a reasonably good, quiet and polite student, and at first there was confusion as to what the motivation for the bombings could be.

Target: though in the same articles, his roommate noted he had recently become obsessed with death and astral projection, and had begun reciting extended monologues about his new spiritual beliefs to his friends. Helder was not at the top of his college class, but his teachers described him as a reasonably good, quiet and polite student, and at first there was confusion as to what the motivation for the bombings could be.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: though in the same articles, his roommate noted he had become obsessed with death and astral projection, and had begun reciting extended monologues about his new spiritual beliefs to his friends. Helder was not at the top of his college class, but his teachers described him as a reasonably good, quiet and polite student, and at first there was confusion as to what the motivation for the bombings could be.

Target: though in the same articles, his roommate noted he had become obsessed with death and astral projection, and had begun reciting extended monologues about his new spiritual beliefs to his friends (which they had mostly "laughed off").


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: History In the late 19th century, Portugal's dominance of Mozambique was threatened by the expansionist colonial ambitions of Great Britain and Germany.

Target: History In the late 19th century, Portugal's dominance of Mozambique began to be challenged by the establishment of neighboring British and German colonies.


Source: Use clearer wording: In 1913-14, a German banking consortium bought a majority of the shares of the Niassa Company, aiming at a partition of Mozambique between Germany and Great Britain.

Target: In 1913-14, a German banking consortium bought a majority of the shares of the Niassa Company, aiming to bring about a partition of Mozambique between Germany and Great Britain.


Source: Make this sentence readable: In 1913-14, a German banking consortium bought a majority of the shares of the Niassa Company, aiming at a partition of Mozambique between Germany and Great Britain.

Target: In 1913-14, a German banking consortium bought a majority of the shares of the Niassa Company, aiming at a partition of Portuguese Mozambique between Germany and Great Britain.


Source: Make the sentence clear: With the outbreak of World War I, the British government confiscated German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which did much business in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.

Target: With the outbreak of the First World War, the British government confiscated German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which did much business in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: With the outbreak of World War I, the British government confiscated German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which did much business in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.

Target: With the outbreak of World War I, the British government confiscated the German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which did much business in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.


Source: Clarification: With the outbreak of World War I, the British government confiscated German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which did much business in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.

Target: With the outbreak of World War I, the British government confiscated German equities and handed them over to an English financial group led by Owen Philipps, chairman of the Union-Castle Line, which conducted several businesses in Portuguese East Africa, but which found the concession to be more of a liability.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: In addition, the company relied on a hut tax, modelled after the system in British East Africa.

Target: In addition, the company relied on a hut tax to fund its operations.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: To its south and east, Chile used military force and colonization to occupy Araucana, a still undefeated indigenous nation (1861-1883) and although Chile retained westernmost Patagonia and the Strait of Magellan with the treaty of 1881, it yielded to Argentina most of Patagonia and its access to the Atlantic to avoid the outbreak of war in multiple fronts during the War of the Pacific.

Target: To its south and east, Chile used military force and colonization to occupy Araucana (1861-1883) and although Chile retained westernmost Patagonia and the Strait of Magellan with the treaty of 1881, it yielded to Argentina most of Patagonia and its access to the Atlantic to avoid the outbreak of war in multiple fronts during the War of the Pacific.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: To its south and east, Chile used military force and colonization to occupy Araucana, a still undefeated indigenous nation (1861-1883) and although Chile retained westernmost Patagonia and the Strait of Magellan with the treaty of 1881, it yielded to Argentina most of Patagonia and its access to the Atlantic to avoid the outbreak of war in multiple fronts during the War of the Pacific.

Target: To its south and east, Chile used military force and colonization to occupy Araucana, a still undefeated indigenous nation (1861-1883) and although Chile retained westernmost Patagonia and the Strait of Magellan with the treaty of 1881, it yielded to Argentina most of Patagonia and its access to the Atlantic to avoid the outbreak of war only narrowly avoided in multiple occasions.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spain's discoveries in the Pacific had been stolen by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asia.

Target: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spanish discoveries in the Pacific had been stolen by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asia.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spain's discoveries in the Pacific had been stolen by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asia.

Target: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spain's discoveries in the Pacific had been taken by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asia.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spain's discoveries in the Pacific had been stolen by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asia.

Target: During this period, the Chilean intellectual and politician Benjamn Vicua Mackenna (who served as senator in the National Congress from 1876 to 1885) was an influential voice in favor of Chilean expansionism into the Pacifiche considered that Spain's discoveries in the Pacific had been stolen by the British, and envisioned that Chile's duty was to create an empire in the Pacific that would reach Asian shores.


Source: Clarify the sentence: He and many of his party were killed as they approached Benin City.

Target: He and his party was ambushed and slaughtered as they approached Benin City.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Although Phillips had acted without authority, after his death a British punitive force deposed the Benin monarchy, pillaged Benin City and took many riches including the Benin Bronzes back to Britain. Aftermath The British Admiralty responded swiftly to the Benin Massacre by authorizing the Benin Punitive Expedition of February 1897.

Target: Although Phillips had acted without authority, after his death a British punitive force deposed the Benin monarchy, pillaged Benin City and took many riches including the Benin Bronzes back to Britain. Aftermath The British Admiralty responded swiftly to the Benin Massacre by authorizing the punitive expedition which departed in February 1897.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The British Government revoked the Royal Niger Company's charter (granted in 1886) as a result of these events and ongoing complaints against the company from the Brass people of the Benin Rivers, the killings of Hausa princes during the Bida Battle (1897) and ongoing territorial rivalry with the French.

Target: The British Government revoked the Royal Niger Company's charter (granted in 1886) as a result of these events and ongoing complaints against the company from the Brass people of the Benin Rivers, the deaths of Hausa princes during the Bida Battle (1897) and ongoing territorial rivalry with the French.


Source: Use clearer wording: Though Philips had acted without consulting the Royal Niger Company authorities, after his death the British government dispatched an punitive force against the Benin monarchy, which the force defeated and deposed, leading to the kingdom's eventual absorption into colonial Nigeria.

Target: Though Philips had acted without consulting the Royal Niger Company authorities, after his death the British government dispatched an punitive expedition against the Benin monarchy, which the force defeated and deposed, leading to the kingdom's eventual absorption into colonial Nigeria.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The Benin massacre Boisragon and Locke, the two British men to survive the ambush Captain Phillips statue, Museum of Black Civilisations, Dakar On 17 December 1896, Phillips set off from Old Calabar in the yacht Ivy on the expedition to Benin.

Target: The Benin massacre Boisragon and Locke, the two British men to survive the ambush On 17 December 1896, Phillips set off from Old Calabar in the yacht Ivy on the expedition to Benin.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The government became paranoid of any independent black thinkers.

Target: The government became suspicious of any independent black thinkers.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: A second pilgrimage was cut short and loaded onto trains after crossing the Orange River at Aliwal North without passes 1930.

Target: A second pilgrimage was cut short and the marchers loaded back onto trains after crossing the Orange River at Aliwal North without passes 1930.


Source: Clarify this sentence: Comparison with American flag 205px|The Grand Union Flag, 1775 The flag of the East India Company may or may not have have inspired the 1775 Grand Union Flag, the first flag of the United States, as the two flags were of the same design.

Target: Comparison with American flag 205px|The Grand Union Flag, 1775 The flag of the East India Company is considered to have inspired the 1775 Grand Union Flag, the first flag of the United States, as the two flags were of the same design.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: The British East India Company ’s flag ranged from nine to thirteen red and white stripes and was usually only flown when it was sailing in the Indian Ocean. The Continental Army flew the flag until 1777.

Target: The British East India Company's activities and of their free administration of India under Company rule.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Fashion activism is the practice of the cultural capital of fashion as a medium for social and environmental change.

Target: Fashion activism is the practice of using fashion as a medium for social and environmental change.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Fashion activism is the practice of the cultural capital of fashion as a medium for social and environmental change. The term was coined by Cline Semaan, co-founder of the Slow Factory Foundation.

Target: Fashion activism is the practice of the cultural capital of fashion as a means of social change, sometimes through ethical consumerism, but often beyond the act of purchasing symbolic fashionable objects.


Source: Clarify the sentence: As with other forms of activism, the aim is to promote, impede, direct, or intervene into social arrangements of dress to lay claim to a certain political agenda as well as influence systemic change within the fashion industry.

Target: As with other forms of activism, the aim is to promote, impede, direct, or intervene into social arrangements of dress to lay claim to a certain political agenda.


Source: Make this easier to read: Slow factory Beyond the use amongst designers promoting sustainability and user engagement, the term has also more recently been coined by designer Cline Semaan in her work with the NYC-based fashion lab Slow Factory.

Target: Slow factory Beyond the use amongst designers promoting sustainability and user engagement, the term has also more recently been used by designer Cline Semaan in her work with the NYC-based fashion lab Slow Factory.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and URLanized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.

Target: He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and procedures for URLanizing tax collection, which allowed an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.


Source: Make this sentence readable: He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and URLanized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.

Target: He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and URLanized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues and reduced expenditures.