Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Gurney believed that the position of the scriptures had been lowered too much among Friends ;. Gurney did not totally discount the influence or necessity of the Holy Spirit.

Target: Gurney believed that the position of the scriptures had been lowered too much among Friends ; although he did not totally discount the influence or necessity of the Holy Spirit.


Source: Make the text clearer: In 2007, the Conservatory began offering classes in Music Therapy and Music Business. No students enrolled in these courses.

Target: In 2007, the Conservatory began offering classes in Music Therapy and Music Business. However no students enrolled in these courses.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Many factions refused to attend as they could not set the terms of reconciliation. Factions' backer, Ethiopia, was against the TNG.

Target: Many factions refused to attend as they could not set the terms of reconciliation, and their backer, Ethiopia, was against the TNG.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Li Jue wanted to make Consort Tang his concubine. Consort Tang refused and never told Li Jue that Consort Tang was a former Consort Tang of an emperor.

Target: Li Jue wanted to make Consort Tang his concubine but she refused and never told him that she was a former concubine of an emperor.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Its members are primarily institutions. Individuals can also become members.

Target: Its members are primarily institutions, although individuals can also become members.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Amongst his most talented students there was John Constance Parnis. Vella was a kind of master with a school of disciples who not only followed his intellectual endeavours but also continued to teach his doctrines after his death.

Target: Amongst his most talented students there was John Constance Parnis. In fact, Vella was a kind of master with a school of disciples who not only followed his intellectual endeavours but also continued to teach his doctrines after his death.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The reason being that his works have never been transliterated from their original manuscript form, and neither have they been translated, in whole or in part, into any modern language. As yet they remain unread and unstudied by contemporary scholars.

Target: The reason being that his works have never been transliterated from their original manuscript form, and neither have they been translated, in whole or in part, into any modern language. Thus, as yet they remain unread and unstudied by contemporary scholars.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Constantine v Imperial Hotels Ltd (1944) KB 693 is an English tort law and contract case, concerning the implied duty of an innkeeper to offer accommodation to a guest. For just cause.

Target: Constantine v Imperial Hotels Ltd (1944) KB 693 is an English tort law and contract case, concerning the implied duty of an innkeeper to offer accommodation to a guest unless for just cause.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The constitution of 1928 was never submitted for approval to the nation. The government started working on a new constitution, approved by the newly assembled Seimas in 1938 (opposition was not allowed to stand for election).

Target: The constitution of 1928 was never submitted for approval to the nation. Instead, the government started working on a new constitution, approved by the newly assembled Seimas in 1938 (opposition was not allowed to stand for election).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As head of state and commander in chief of the armed forces, the president made all nominations for civilian and military posts and for members of the government. President could dismiss an appointee at any time.

Target: As head of state and commander in chief of the armed forces, the president made all nominations for civilian and military posts and for members of the government. Similarly, he could dismiss an appointee at any time.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In 1987 approximately one-third of the fifteen cabinet ministers were also members of the CMSN. That ratio changed with every cabinet reshuffle.

Target: In 1987 approximately one-third of the fifteen cabinet ministers were also members of the CMSN, although that ratio changed with every cabinet reshuffle.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: If the proposed amendment received only a simple majority, the president could submit it as a referendum. The latter process was never necessary.

Target: If the proposed amendment received only a simple majority, the president could submit it as a referendum. In fact, the latter process was never necessary.


Source: Make the text clearer: They issued a decree recognising Polish autonomy, more as a symbolic gesture in light of the German occupation of this territory. This tendency was limited as most of the ministers feared a break up of the empire.

Target: They issued a decree recognising Polish autonomy, more as a symbolic gesture in light of the German occupation of this territory. However this tendency was limited as most of the ministers feared a break up of the empire.


Source: Make the text coherent: The frequency of CDGP may be underestimated. Individuals with milder delays and those who are not psychologically stressed may not be seen by subspecialists.

Target: The frequency of CDGP may be underestimated because individuals with milder delays and those who are not psychologically stressed may not be seen by subspecialists.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: CDGP is not associated with increased mortality. CDGP is a CDGP of normal growth rather than a disease.

Target: CDGP is not associated with increased mortality because it is a variant of normal growth rather than a disease.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: CDGP is a variant of normal growth rather than a disorder. Delays in growth and sexual development may contribute to psychological difficulties, warranting treatment for some individuals.

Target: Although CDGP is a variant of normal growth rather than a disorder, delays in growth and sexual development may contribute to psychological difficulties, warranting treatment for some individuals.


Source: Make the text more logical: Social construct, something that people believe to exist purely. Their society has decided that it exists

Target: Social construct, something that people believe to exist purely because their society has decided that it exists


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The U.S. Consulate General in Munich represents the interests of the United States government in Bavaria, Germany. The Consulate provides services to United States in Bavaria and focuses on strengthening and broadening the full range of Bavaria-United States relations.

Target: The U.S. Consulate General in Munich represents the interests of the United States government in Bavaria, Germany. The Consulate provides services to Americans in Bavaria and focuses on strengthening and broadening the full range of Bavarian-American relations.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Judge Cornelia Pillard, writing for the majority, found that the Take Care Clause does not forbid independent agencies. Each of the circuit judges from the earlier panel wrote separate dissents.

Target: Judge Cornelia Pillard, writing for the majority, found that the Take Care Clause does not forbid independent agencies, while each of the circuit judges from the earlier panel wrote separate dissents.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The perfect lens effect is only effective for certain conditions, but allows a resolution roughly equal to the layer thickness. A sub-10 nm resolution appears feasible with this approach as well.

Target: The perfect lens effect is only effective for certain conditions, but allows a resolution roughly equal to the layer thickness. Hence a sub-10 nm resolution appears feasible with this approach as well.


Source: Make the text more logical: Contact printing has no such resolution limit. Is sensitive to the presence of defects on the mask or on the substrate.

Target: Contact printing has no such resolution limit but is sensitive to the presence of defects on the mask or on the substrate.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The 1956 Thunderbird had its spare tire mounted outside. Adding weight behind the rear wheels was said to adversely affect steering and handling.

Target: The 1956 Thunderbird had its spare tire mounted outside. However, adding weight behind the rear wheels was said to adversely affect steering and handling.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: California's 1852 state Census gives 31,266 Indian residents ;. This is an under-count since there was little incentive and much difficulty in getting California more correct.

Target: California's 1852 state Census gives 31,266 Indian residents ; but this is an under-count since there was little incentive and much difficulty in getting it more correct.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The inland portions of the Concord Naval Weapons Station have been declared surplus by the Federal government. This area is expected to provide what is likely the last opportunity to plan and build city-sized development within the central county.

Target: The inland portions of the Concord Naval Weapons Station have been declared surplus by the Federal government and this area is expected to provide what is likely the last opportunity to plan and build city-sized development within the central county.


Source: Make the text coherent: Jump up ^ Marin, Solano, Sonoma and Contra Costa Counties' borders come to a common point c. 6 miles into San Francisco Bay (coming from the north). Sonoma is an adjacent Sonoma.

Target: Jump up ^ Marin, Solano, Sonoma and Contra Costa Counties' borders come to a common point c. 6 miles into San Francisco Bay (coming from the north). Thus, Sonoma County is an adjacent county.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Unlike the nomadic Native American of the Great Plains it appears that these tribes did not incorporate warfare into their culture. Were instead generally cooperative.

Target: Unlike the nomadic Native American of the Great Plains it appears that these tribes did not incorporate warfare into their culture but were instead generally cooperative.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Contraband in coal mines means items which not allowed to be taken underground in a coal mine. If there is firedamp about they may start a fire or explosion.

Target: Contraband in coal mines means items which not allowed to be taken underground in a coal mine because if there is firedamp about they may start a fire or explosion.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In practice, many cities are hybrids of both. They may directly operate parks programs, but contract with the county for police and fire services.

Target: In practice, many cities are hybrids of both. For instance, they may directly operate parks programs, but contract with the county for police and fire services.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Although the incidence of these types of discussions may be due to traders' psychology where it is hard to internalise a losing trade. Instead they try to find external source to blame.

Target: Although the incidence of these types of discussions may be due to traders' psychology where it is hard to internalise a losing trade and instead they try to find external source to blame.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Despite the fact that the airplane was officially retired and had not flown since 1957, at least one F2Y was still in storage as of 1962. F2Y was redesignated F2Y under the 1962 United States Tri-Service aircraft designation system.

Target: Despite the fact that the airplane was officially retired and had not flown since 1957, at least one F2Y was still in storage as of 1962. As a result, it was redesignated YF-7A under the 1962 United States Tri-Service aircraft designation system.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Lockheed proposed adding cesium to the jet fuel to create a cloud of ions that would help mask this effect. Since the entire idea relied on problems in the radar display systems, upgrades to these systems could render the entire concept moot.

Target: Lockheed proposed adding cesium to the jet fuel to create a cloud of ions that would help mask this effect. Additionally, since the entire idea relied on problems in the radar display systems, upgrades to these systems could render the entire concept moot.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A provisional defense can be made if the property converted has no value. It is well established that it is not necessary for property to have a commercial value in order to maintain an action in conversion.

Target: A provisional defense can be made if the property converted has no value. Nevertheless, it is well established that it is not necessary for property to have a commercial value in order to maintain an action in conversion.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In general, relief through an action in conversion can proceed, even if other potential remedies have not been exhausted. Once the action in conversion is commenced, the plaintiff may be precluded from seeking concurrent remedies.

Target: In general, relief through an action in conversion can proceed, even if other potential remedies have not been exhausted. However, once the action in conversion is commenced, the plaintiff may be precluded from seeking concurrent remedies.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The theory of trespass was that the plaintiff remained the owner of the chattel, with his possession only interrupted or interfered with. When it was tendered back to the plaintiff.

Target: The theory of trespass was that the plaintiff remained the owner of the chattel, with his possession only interrupted or interfered with, so that when it was tendered back to the plaintiff.


Source: Make the text clearer: The fact that personal property is annexed to realty after its conversion usually does not prevent the maintenance of an action for the conversion. Opinion on this subject remains mixed.

Target: The fact that personal property is annexed to realty after its conversion usually does not prevent the maintenance of an action for the conversion, although opinion on this subject remains mixed.


Source: Make the text more logical: The county borough was formed on 1 April 1996 by merging the districts of Aberconwy and Colwyn when it was originally named Aberconwy and Colwyn. Its council renamed the district a day later, on 2 April 1996 to Conwy.

Target: The county borough was formed on 1 April 1996 by merging the districts of Aberconwy and Colwyn when it was originally named Aberconwy and Colwyn. However, its council renamed the district a day later, on 2 April 1996 to Conwy.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It contains the major settlements of Llandudno, Llandudno Junction, Llanrwst, Betws-y-Coed, Conwy, Colwyn Bay, Abergele, Penmaenmawr and Llanfairfechan. It has a total population of 115,000, and borders the counties of Gwynedd and Denbighshire.

Target: Containing the major settlements of Llandudno, Llandudno Junction, Llanrwst, Betws-y-Coed, Conwy, Colwyn Bay, Abergele, Penmaenmawr and Llanfairfechan, it has a total population of 115,000, and borders the counties of Gwynedd and Denbighshire.


Source: Make the text more logical: The name 'Superman S' comes from a belief that it was a symbol for Superman but that shape is quite different. Superman's costume features a stylised S in a diamond shape.

Target: The name 'Superman S' comes from a belief that it was a symbol for Superman, whose costume features a stylised S in a diamond shape, but that shape is quite different.


Source: Make the text more logical: Cooper's is a bakery chain in Bangladesh. It was founded in 1984 by Cooper, a Dhaka-based British expat and World War II veteran, and Cooper's wife Sufia Cooper.

Target: Cooper's is a bakery chain in Bangladesh. It was founded in 1984 by Douglas Cooper, a Dhaka-based British expat and World War II veteran, and his wife Sufia Cooper.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Little remains of the original rim. Remains' form can still be traced across the surface.

Target: Little remains of the original rim, although its form can still be traced across the surface.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Males plumage is green with more darker colors going down such as copper orange and grey. Females are brown with a green tinge.

Target: Males plumage is green with more darker colors going down such as copper orange and grey whereas females are brown with a green tinge.


Source: Make the text more logical: After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not return to her grandmother's home. After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not go back to her mother, but rented a room for herself in Covent Garden.

Target: After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not return to her grandmother's home, nor go back to her mother, but rented a room for herself in Covent Garden.


Source: Make the text more logical: After six years, she despaired of ever freeing herself from his all-encompassing influence. Fate stepped in, the procurer died of a heart attack, liberating Emma.

Target: After six years, she despaired of ever freeing herself from his all-encompassing influence. However, fate stepped in, the procurer died of a heart attack, liberating Emma.


Source: Make the text clearer: Crouch escaped his creditors. Crouch was able to make his way to America in 1849.

Target: Escaping his creditors, Crouch was able to make his way to America in 1849.


Source: Make the text clearer: Initially near death, he eventually recovered. The consequences of what had occurred proved disastrous for Cora Pearl's reputation.

Target: Initially near death, he eventually recovered. Nevertheless, the consequences of what had occurred proved disastrous for Cora Pearl's reputation.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Core Knowledge UK curriculum facilitates pupils' sequenced learning from grade to grade. Teachers know what knowledge and skills their pupils bring to the class at the beginning of the year.

Target: The Core Knowledge UK curriculum facilitates pupils' sequenced learning from grade to grade so that teachers know what knowledge and skills their pupils bring to the class at the beginning of the year.


Source: Fix coherence: One hypothesis explains such rapid reaction by the need to stem the possible infection from spreading into the cornea. Due to the limitations of ocular immune system the immune cells take up to several hours to arrive at the site of injury.

Target: One hypothesis explains such rapid reaction by the need to stem the possible infection from spreading into the cornea, because due to the limitations of ocular immune system the immune cells take up to several hours to arrive at the site of injury.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: From 1964, he worked for CAN DO, an anti-poverty organization that trained teenage boys to do construction. He formed Poverty Organization of Rehabilitation (POOR) and Grass Rooters Interested in Poverty Elimination (GRIPE).

Target: From 1964, he worked for CAN DO, an anti-poverty organization that trained teenage boys to do construction. Then, he formed Poverty Organization of Rehabilitation (POOR) and Grass Rooters Interested in Poverty Elimination (GRIPE).


Source: Make the text coherent: On August 6, 2008, Ingram seriously injured knee ligaments during fall practice. Ingram missed Ingram's entire senior season.

Target: On August 6, 2008, Ingram seriously injured knee ligaments during fall practice. As a result, he missed his entire senior season.


Source: Fix sentence transition: These do in a humbler way. Perhaps as effectually.

Target: These do in a humbler way, although perhaps as effectually.


Source: Fix coherence: Most of the CVR was sold to adjacent landowners. Portions of the roadbed remain as informal hiking and snowmobile trails.

Target: Most of the CVR was sold to adjacent landowners, although portions of the roadbed remain as informal hiking and snowmobile trails.


Source: Make the text more consistent: C. violaceorubens has a dark purple-brown cap. That of C. boreicyanites is more bluish.

Target: C. violaceorubens has a dark purple-brown cap, while that of C. boreicyanites is more bluish.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Idol judge, Ian Dickson, claimed that she would have won. Following medical advice, she withdrew from the competition and underwent speech therapy allowing fellow contestant Shannon Noll to join Guy Sebastian in the series grand final.

Target: Idol judge, Ian Dickson, claimed that she would have won. However, following medical advice, she withdrew from the competition and underwent speech therapy allowing fellow contestant Shannon Noll to join Guy Sebastian in the series grand final.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It was produced by male and female DJ duo 'Tho $ e Deejayz'. On 1 December 2012 Cosima released a version of O Holy Night.

Target: It was produced by male and female DJ duo 'Tho $ e Deejayz'. Additionally, on 1 December 2012 Cosima released a version of O Holy Night.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Early 2005 De Vito had been in the studio working on her second studio album. This Is Now.

Target: Since early 2005 De Vito had been in the studio working on her second studio album, This Is Now.


Source: Fix sentence flow: If two random variables exhibit positive coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme positive deviations at the same time. If two random variables exhibit negative coskewness variables will tend to undergo extreme negative deviations at the same time.

Target: If two random variables exhibit positive coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme positive deviations at the same time. Similarly, if two random variables exhibit negative coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme negative deviations at the same time.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The condition is treatable. There is an alarmingly high rate of suicide within BDD sufferers.

Target: The condition is treatable although there is an alarmingly high rate of suicide within BDD sufferers.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Many of these treatments. Not life-threatening are seen to some as enhancing the animals quality of life.

Target: Many of these treatments although not life-threatening are seen to some as enhancing the animals quality of life.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This condition is not painful. Some suggest there are mental side effects of the condition.

Target: This condition is not painful although some suggest there are mental side effects of the condition.


Source: Fix sentence flow: They praised the album's composition and sound, and also highlighted several songs from the album. Some noted that the material and commercial appeal of the songs were repetitive and predictable since their last albums.

Target: They praised the album's composition and sound, and also highlighted several songs from the album. However, some noted that the material and commercial appeal of the songs were repetitive and predictable since their last albums.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In winter the nearby Abri Simond Hut is left unlocked. This has no cooking facilities.

Target: In winter the nearby Abri Simond Hut is left unlocked, although this has no cooking facilities.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Costoanachis scutulata is a species of sea snail the dove snails. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Columbellidae.

Target: Costoanachis scutulata is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Columbellidae, the dove snails.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Thereafter, the list has continuously expanded. During the 1992-98 period.

Target: Thereafter, the list has continuously expanded so that during the 1992-98 period.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The earliest warehouses were built around King Street. By 1850 warehouses had spread to Portland Street and later to Whitworth Street.

Target: The earliest warehouses were built around King Street although by 1850 warehouses had spread to Portland Street and later to Whitworth Street.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Counter-Strike: Condition Zero was released in 2004. Condition Zero is a game using Counter-Strike's GoldSrc engine.

Target: Counter-Strike: Condition Zero, a game using Counter-Strike's GoldSrc engine, was released in 2004.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This can help with detecting some cheaters. Most paid for cheats are designed to bypass these alternative server-based anticheats.

Target: This can help with detecting some cheaters, but most paid for cheats are designed to bypass these alternative server-based anticheats.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The finances made available for transport was criticised by the associations as inadequate. No provision was made for the training of drivers in infantry battalions until 1910 when, after pressure from the associations, the War Office made funds available for this purpose.

Target: The finances made available for transport was criticised by the associations as inadequate. In particular, no provision was made for the training of drivers in infantry battalions until 1910 when, after pressure from the associations, the War Office made funds available for this purpose.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Niemiec was signed by the Portland Thorns on April 9, 2014 as a free agent. On June 24, 2015, the Portland Thorns waived Niemiec Niemiec.

Target: Niemiec was signed by the Portland Thorns on April 9, 2014 as a free agent. On June 24, 2015, the Portland Thorns FC waived defender Courtney Niemiec.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: There are situations whereby a single Lewis structure is insufficient to explain the electron configuration in a molecule,. A superposition of structures are needed.

Target: There are situations whereby a single Lewis structure is insufficient to explain the electron configuration in a molecule, hence a superposition of structures are needed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2007, Crowe made his debut for Berkshire in the 2007 Minor Counties Championship against Wales Minor Counties. From 2007 to present, Crowe has represented the county in 19 Minor Counties Championship matches.

Target: In 2007, Crowe made his debut for Berkshire in the 2007 Minor Counties Championship against Wales Minor Counties. From 2007 to present, he has represented the county in 19 Minor Counties Championships matches.


Source: Make the text coherent: Kelly graduated in 1992. Kelly played a minor speaking role in Titanic as Assistant Wireless Operator, Harold Bride and also as Russell Muir in the film When Saturday Comes.

Target: Graduating in 1992, Kelly played a minor speaking role in Titanic as Assistant Wireless Operator, Harold Bride and also as Russell Muir in the film When Saturday Comes.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Sell-In (2000) documents the rise of the Australia's alternative music scene. How that success attracted the interest of the music industry's major labels.

Target: The Sell-In (2000) documents the rise of the Australia's alternative music scene and how that success attracted the interest of the music industry's major labels.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Morgan released his third album in 2004. His third album is my Kind of Livin '.

Target: Morgan released his third album, My Kind of Livin ', in 2004.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Vetter wanted to run a team. Vetter procured the services of English-born AMA Superbike Championship winner Reg Pridmore for the 1978 season to ride a team Vetter Kawasaki Z1000 prepared by (the late) Pierre Des Roches.

Target: Wanting to run a team, Vetter procured the services of English-born AMA Superbike Championship winner Reg Pridmore for the 1978 season to ride a team Vetter Kawasaki Z1000 prepared by (the late) Pierre Des Roches.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Originally Cranbrook and Kingswood schools were affiliated with the Episcopal Church, but they have since secularized. Special occasions are still celebrated at Christ Church Cranbrook.

Target: Originally Cranbrook and Kingswood schools were affiliated with the Episcopal Church, but they have since secularized. However, special occasions are still celebrated at Christ Church Cranbrook.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Sites in the Western Isles do not satisfy this criterion. Sites' inhabitants shared the common habit of living on water.

Target: Sites in the Western Isles do not satisfy this criterion, although their inhabitants shared the common habit of living on water.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Since E 1 (\\ displaystyle E_ (1) ) and E 2 (\\ displaystyle E_ (2) ) are mutually exclusive, the craps principle applies. If the original roll was a 4, then the probability of winning is

Target: Since E 1 (\\ displaystyle E_ (1) ) and E 2 (\\ displaystyle E_ (2) ) are mutually exclusive, the craps principle applies. For example, if the original roll was a 4, then the probability of winning is


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Deceased accident victims could not be employed. Any data that might be collected from such experimental subjects would be compromised by the cadaver's previous injuries.

Target: Deceased accident victims could not be employed because any data that might be collected from such experimental subjects would be compromised by the cadaver's previous injuries.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In addition, child cadavers were not only difficult to obtain, but both legal and public opinion made them effectively unusable. As crash testing became more routine, suitable cadavers became increasingly scarce.

Target: In addition, child cadavers were not only difficult to obtain, but both legal and public opinion made them effectively unusable. Moreover, as crash testing became more routine, suitable cadavers became increasingly scarce.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: No two cadavers are the same, and since any specific part of a cadaver could only be used once. It was extremely difficult to achieve reliable comparison data.

Target: Since no two cadavers are the same, and since any specific part of a cadaver could only be used once, it was extremely difficult to achieve reliable comparison data.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: General Motors, who had taken over the impetus in developing a reliable and durable dummy, found neither Sierra model satisfied its needs. General Motors engineers decided to combine the best features of the VIP series and Sierra Stan, and so in 1971 Hybrid I was born.

Target: General Motors, who had taken over the impetus in developing a reliable and durable dummy, found neither Sierra model satisfied its needs. GM engineers decided to combine the best features of the VIP series and Sierra Stan, and so in 1971 Hybrid I was born.


Source: Fix coherence: In the late 1930s there was no reliable data on how the human body responds to the sudden, violent forces acting on it in an automobile accident. No effective tools existed to measure such responses.

Target: In the late 1930s there was no reliable data on how the human body responds to the sudden, violent forces acting on it in an automobile accident. Furthermore, no effective tools existed to measure such responses.


Source: Make the text coherent: This seems to lessen ethical dilemmas in contrast to animal testing. There is no sufficient way to get consent to use an animal.

Target: This seems to lessen ethical dilemmas in contrast to animal testing, because there is no sufficient way to get consent to use an animal.


Source: Fix sentence transition: It is,., difficult to use cadavers instead of animals because of human rights.

Target: It is, although, difficult to use cadavers instead of animals because of human rights.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The child models are very recent additions to the crash test dummy family ;. So little hard data are available on the effects of accidents on children and such data are very difficult to obtain.

Target: The child models are very recent additions to the crash test dummy family ; because so little hard data are available on the effects of accidents on children and such data are very difficult to obtain.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The mushroom is usually almost black, and it is hard to find. Mushroom's dark colour easily blends in with the leaf litter on the forest floor.

Target: The mushroom is usually almost black, and it is hard to find because its dark colour easily blends in with the leaf litter on the forest floor.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Between 1915 and 1952, Kent appeared in 208 films. Frequently without screen credit.

Target: Between 1915 and 1952, Kent appeared in 208 films, although frequently without screen credit.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Suddenly they spot a yacht sitting in the middle of the ocean and they go to investigate and to find shelter. In fact the yacht was a secret laboratory studying mutated fish results of radioactive plankton.

Target: Suddenly they spot a yacht sitting in the middle of the ocean and they go to investigate and to find shelter. But in fact the yacht was a secret laboratory studying mutated fish results of radioactive plankton.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Dark rum is preferred. Since most of the alcohol is burned away.

Target: Dark rum is preferred, although since most of the alcohol is burned away.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Patients treated with high-dose intravenous crenuzumab showed non-significant reductions in both cognitive decline and global function decline. Patients who received subcutaneous crenezumab did not improve on either measure.

Target: Patients treated with high-dose intravenous crenuzumab showed non-significant reductions in both cognitive decline and global function decline, while patients who received subcutaneous crenezumab did not improve on either measure.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It is a full member of the International Cricket Council and African Cricket Association, and operates the Zimbabwean cricket team, organising Test tours and One Day Internationals with other nations. Zimbabwean also organises domestic cricket in Zimbabwean.

Target: It is a full member of the International Cricket Council and African Cricket Association, and operates the Zimbabwean cricket team, organising Test tours and One Day Internationals with other nations. It also organises domestic cricket in Zimbabwe.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: As official cricket clubs began to form, some black players were given the opportunity to play for white-majority clubs. Many cricket clubs remained exclusively white, forcing black players to establish their own clubs that would only allow other blacks to join.

Target: As official cricket clubs began to form, some black players were given the opportunity to play for white-majority clubs. However, many cricket clubs remained exclusively white, forcing black players to establish their own clubs that would only allow other blacks to join.


Source: Make the text more logical: Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester and never sat for Cricklade Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester he chose to represent.

Target: Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester, which he chose to represent, and never sat for Cricklade


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The two lines joined south-east of Crieff and shared a station on the south side of the town. They each had their own engine shed.

Target: The two lines joined south-east of Crieff and shared a station on the south side of the town. However they each had their own engine shed.


Source: Fix coherence: Although the hoped for tourist trade developed somewhat, changing social patterns limited the extent to which either of the Comrie lines benefitted. The connectional arrangements at Lochearnhead were never made convenient.

Target: Although the hoped for tourist trade developed somewhat, changing social patterns limited the extent to which either of the Comrie lines benefitted. Moreover, the connectional arrangements at Lochearnhead were never made convenient.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Accordingly, recorded crime statistics need to be treated with great caution and have sometimes been shown to show opposite trends to victim surveys or to violence as measured by hospital intake. Police figures are usually the only available way to gauge local crime.

Target: Accordingly, recorded crime statistics need to be treated with great caution and have sometimes been shown to show opposite trends to victim surveys or to violence as measured by hospital intake. However, police figures are usually the only available way to gauge local crime.


Source: Make the text more logical: Further, using annual statistics for 2017, New York has a significantly higher homicide rate than London, with New York recording 3.4 homicides per 100,000 people. London recorded 1.2.

Target: Further, using annual statistics for 2017, New York has a significantly higher homicide rate than London, with New York recording 3.4 homicides per 100,000 people whereas London recorded 1.2.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The CID was created by Michael Collins and many of its personnel were former Irish Republican Army fighters whom he had commanded during the Irish War of Independence. A number came from the Squad, a Dublin-based Irish Republican Army assassination unit.

Target: The CID was created by Michael Collins and many of its personnel were former Irish Republican Army fighters whom he had commanded during the Irish War of Independence. In particular, a number came from the Squad, a Dublin-based IRA assassination unit.


Source: Make the text more logical: With Chicago under my control, the Industrial States will rally under the might of Die Spinne! I lead the great tide of fascism west to the People's Collective, and east to overrun the Empire State!

Target: With Chicago under my control, the Industrial States will rally under the might of Die Spinne! Then, I lead the great tide of fascism west to the People's Collective, and east to overrun the Empire State!


Source: Make the text clearer: They repel the threat. They find that the attackers have still succeeded in killing the Doc.

Target: Although they repel the threat, they find that the attackers have still succeeded in killing the Doc.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Nathan remembers how the whole ordeal started. Nathan declines, saying that he is going to stay away from the gambling tables for a while.

Target: Remembering how the whole ordeal started, Nathan declines, saying that he is going to stay away from the gambling tables for a while.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Nonetheless, there are significant differences between the gameplay of High Road to Revenge and that of the original PC title. While the Xbox game has a more open-ended mission structure, it offers less plane customization than the PC game.

Target: Nonetheless, there are significant differences between the gameplay of High Road to Revenge and that of the original PC title. For example, while the Xbox game has a more open-ended mission structure, it offers less plane customization than the PC game.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Doc suspects that Von Essen had been behind the break-in. Doc entrusts Nathan with the schematics for the turbine.

Target: Suspecting that Von Essen had been behind the break-in, Doc entrusts Nathan with the schematics for the turbine.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The game was originally announced in March 2002 for a release that fall. Developers postponed the release date to give them time to retool the game.

Target: The game was originally announced in March 2002 for a release that fall. However, developers postponed the release date to give them time to retool the game.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Meanwhile, Jimmy, a new handicapped boy, comes to town and also joins Mountain Scouts. boy is a stand-up comedian and immediately becomes very popular.

Target: Meanwhile, Jimmy, a new handicapped boy, comes to town and also joins Mountain Scouts. Jimmy is a stand-up comedian and immediately becomes very popular.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Hunter declares his intent for revenge. Hunter engages and loses to Squad 1.

Target: Declaring his intent for revenge, Hunter engages and loses to Squad 1.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cristal is produced by Embotelladora Azuaya S.A. and has been offered for 45 years. The tradition of making and bottling aguardiente in the valleys of the province of Azuay goes back much further.

Target: Cristal is produced by Embotelladora Azuaya S.A. and has been offered for 45 years. however the tradition of making and bottling aguardiente in the valleys of the province of Azuay goes back much further.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: There was no Spain for Margaret that autumn ;. To the last Margaret hoped that some fortunate occasion would call Frederick to Paris.

Target: There was no Spain for Margaret that autumn ; although to the last she hoped that some fortunate occasion would call Frederick to Paris.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Flanagan and Elkin both lodged their appeals to the findings in early 2014. Both were dismissed and their suspensions stood.

Target: Flanagan and Elkin both lodged their appeals to the findings in early 2014, but both were dismissed and their suspensions stood.


Source: Make the text clearer: It was charted in 1930 by Discovery Investigations personnel on the Discovery II, and so named. Numerous crosscutting dikes have withstood weathering and produced this irregular formation.

Target: It was charted in 1930 by Discovery Investigations personnel on the Discovery II, and so named because numerous crosscutting dikes have withstood weathering and produced this irregular formation.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: That box also previously controlled the now-closed line that connected the line from Hindley & Wigan northwards to the Bolton-Chorley & Preston main line south of Blackrod. That was formerly used by Wigan to Blackburn trains until January 1960.

Target: That box also previously controlled the now-closed line that connected the line from Hindley & Wigan northwards to the Bolton-Chorley & Preston main line south of Blackrod and that was formerly used by Wigan to Blackburn trains until January 1960.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The British also became wary of Australian intention to control military administration of Sarawak. The British government would like to take control of Sarawak before the Australian did.

Target: The British also became wary of Australian intention to control military administration of Sarawak. Thus, the British government would like to take control of Sarawak before the Australians did.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She was a menacing student with black and white plaits, and was expelled for drinking ink. Student appears to be on friendlier terms with Mrs. Dearly when they encounter each other at the beginning of the novel, before student steals Dearly's puppies.

Target: She was a menacing student with black and white plaits, and was expelled for drinking ink. However, she appears to be on friendlier terms with Mrs. Dearly when they encounter each other at the beginning of the novel, before Cruella steals Dearly's puppies.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She realizes at the last second that the puppies are the Dalmatians in disguise. She pursues the van in her car as it leaves town.

Target: Realizing at the last second that the puppies are the Dalmatians in disguise, she pursues the van in her car as it leaves town.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: However, as the days go by, the police still suspect her. She goes into hiding at her old mansion, Hell Hall at Suffolk, where Jasper and Horace and the puppies reside, proving that she was the mastermind behind the theft.

Target: However, as the days go by, the police still suspect her, so she goes into hiding at her old mansion, Hell Hall at Suffolk, where Jasper and Horace and the puppies reside, proving that she was the mastermind behind the theft.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Cruella mistook David for James. Cruella made a move on him, then informed him of the hostility James held toward his brother.

Target: Mistaking David for James, Cruella made a move on him, then informed him of the hostility James held toward his brother.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The diameter and area of the thallus exponentially increase, provided that organic substances are distributed uniformly in all parts of the lichens. As the thallus increases in size, the circumference also increases, which corresponds to a larger increase in volume.

Target: The diameter and area of the thallus exponentially increase, provided that organic substances are distributed uniformly in all parts of the lichens. However, as the thallus increases in size, the circumference also increases, which corresponds to a larger increase in volume.


Source: Make the text more logical: Nick then cries with Juliette on his arms. Outside the house, cars begin to appear and agents begin to surround the house.

Target: Nick then cries with Juliette on his arms. Meanwhile, outside the house, cars begin to appear and agents begin to surround the house.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This protein is a good candidate for use as a molecular vaccine. Previous studies have shown that a monoclonal antibody to protein confers passive immunity to mice.

Target: This protein is a good candidate for use as a molecular vaccine because previous studies have shown that a monoclonal antibody to CP15 confers passive immunity to mice.


Source: Make the text clearer: In order to prevent online leaking of the record, Last Gang did not issue any previews of it. An article published in Now in February 2008 reported of a fake version of the LP published around several file-sharing sites and garnering numerous downloads.

Target: In order to prevent online leaking of the record, Last Gang did not issue any previews of it. However, an article published in Now in February 2008 reported of a fake version of the LP published around several file-sharing sites and garnering numerous downloads.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He was a favorite spot to James Irvine II. He allowed his friends and family as well as employees to build cottages on the area that we now refer to as Crystal Cove.

Target: Being a favorite spot to James Irvine II, he allowed his friends and family as well as employees to build cottages on the area that we now refer to as Crystal Cove.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: None are accessible by car, only by hike. Are for up to 4 people per site.

Target: None are accessible by car, only by hike, and are for up to 4 people per site.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The bands found common ground. Bands '2015 shows would typically end with Teri Gender Bender joining the Melvins onstage to perform covers of Pop-O-Pies' Fascists Eat Donuts and Bikini Kill's Rebel Girl.

Target: The bands found common ground and their 2015 shows would typically end with Teri Gender Bender joining the Melvins onstage to perform covers of Pop-O-Pies' Fascists Eat Donuts and Bikini Kill's Rebel Girl.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In algebraic topology, cubical complexes are often useful for concrete calculations. There is a definition of homology for cubical complexes that coincides with the singular homology, but is computable.

Target: In algebraic topology, cubical complexes are often useful for concrete calculations. In particular, there is a definition of homology for cubical complexes that coincides with the singular homology, but is computable.


Source: Make the text more logical: During the Corsican independence before the French annexation, Pasquale Paoli tried to enrich the diet of his countrymen encouraging the cultivation of the potato. Pasquale Paoli's political opponents Pasquale Paoli him, Pasquale Paoli him Il Generale delle patate.

Target: During the Corsican independence before the French annexation, Pasquale Paoli tried to enrich the diet of his countrymen encouraging the cultivation of the potato, so his political opponents ridiculed him, calling him Il Generale delle patate.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A few during summer went to reap the corn in the malaria plain of Aleria. Often after that few lost few's health or life.

Target: A few during summer went to reap the corn in the malaria plain of Aleria, but often after that they lost their health or life.


Source: Make the text more logical: These are additionally fed with chestnut flour. Their meat acquires a characteristic taste.

Target: These are additionally fed with chestnut flour, so that their meat acquires a characteristic taste.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Turner particularly added stones that were not there in reality. Those that were, were incorrect in their dimensions.

Target: Turner particularly added stones that were not there in reality, and those that were, were incorrect in their dimensions.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Missoula's fourth brewery, Draught Works, was opened in October 2011. Also in 2011, Tamarack Brewing and Flathead Lake Brewing Company from nearby Lake County opened pub houses at Missoula locations.

Target: Missoula's fourth brewery, Draught Works, was opened in October 2011. Also in 2011, Tamarack Brewing and Flathead Lake Brewing Company from nearby Lake County opened pub houses at Downtown Missoula locations.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He also states that descriptive adequacy could technically be achieved by a set of structural descriptions (like a computer program) that cover all linguistic data in an ad hoc manner. For Chomsky this still gives us little insight into the nature of linguistic structure.

Target: He also states that descriptive adequacy could technically be achieved by a set of structural descriptions (like a computer program) that cover all linguistic data in an ad hoc manner. But for Chomsky this still gives us little insight into the nature of linguistic structure.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Stryker exploits Brooke's vulnerability. Stryker seduces the frightened actress.

Target: Exploiting Brooke's vulnerability, Stryker seduces the frightened actress.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Tara has sex with Matthew in a jacuzzi as Stryker seduces Christie. A mysterious figure enters the tool shed, grabs a sickle and sharpens it.

Target: Tara has sex with Matthew in a jacuzzi as Stryker seduces Christie. Then, a mysterious figure enters the tool shed, grabs a sickle and sharpens it.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Work owed to its low priority. Work progressed slowly and in the autumn of 1944 the XP-62 was scrapped.

Target: Owing to its low priority, work progressed slowly and in the autumn of 1944 the XP-62 was scrapped.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Tho' the paper itself never reached me --. It paper not ever likely to considering the nature of the messenger paper's its contents have.

Target: Tho' the paper itself never reached me -- nor was it ever likely to considering the nature of the messenger -- its contents have.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Terra wants Shaw as pilot. Shaw's father.

Target: Terra wants Shaw as pilot because his father.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: From one of his experiments emerged the Cyber Series -- artificial humanoids possessing superhuman strength and agility. Something was amiss: The 5000 original Cybers, engineered to be the perfect servants, mimicked human emotions too closely, displaying free will of their own.

Target: From one of his experiments emerged the Cyber Series -- artificial humanoids possessing superhuman strength and agility. But something was amiss: The 5000 original Cybers, engineered to be the perfect servants, mimicked human emotions too closely, displaying free will of their own.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The entire production of this period were hand-crafted, made to measure steel frames and forks. There was no serial production.

Target: The entire production of this period were hand-crafted, made to measure steel frames and forks. Consequently, there was no serial production.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Previously, she was a founding member of The Frontier, another pro-democracy political group. Since 2006, member has been a founding member of the World Future Council.

Target: Previously, she was a founding member of The Frontier, another pro-democracy political group. Since 2006, she has been a founding councillor of the World Future Council.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cyllene desnoyersi is a fossil species of sea snail the Nassa mud snails or dog whelks. A fossil species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Nassariidae.

Target: Cyllene desnoyersi is a fossil species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Nassariidae, the Nassa mud snails or dog whelks.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The drug is available widely throughout the world. Is notably not approved for use in the United States.

Target: The drug is available widely throughout the world, but is notably not approved for use in the United States.


Source: Fix sentence flow: CPA blocks the effects of androgens like testosterone in the body, which it does by preventing them from interacting with their biological target, the androgen receptor (AR), and by reducing their production by the gonads and. Effects' concentrations in the body.

Target: CPA blocks the effects of androgens like testosterone in the body, which it does by preventing them from interacting with their biological target, the androgen receptor (AR), and by reducing their production by the gonads and hence their concentrations in the body.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: A portion of ingested CPA is metabolized by hydrolysis into cyproterone and acetic acid. Unlike many other steroid esters, CPA is not extensively hydrolyzed, and much of the pharmacological activity of the drug is attributable to CPA itself in CPA's unchanged form.

Target: A portion of ingested CPA is metabolized by hydrolysis into cyproterone and acetic acid. However, unlike many other steroid esters, CPA is not extensively hydrolyzed, and much of the pharmacological activity of the drug is attributable to CPA itself in its unchanged form.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Czech imports from Indonesia consisted of textiles and garments, footwear, rubber and rubber products. Czech exports to Indonesia consisted mainly of machinery, chemicals, electrical and power generation and telecommunications equipment, textile and machinery.

Target: Czech imports from Indonesia consisted of textiles and garments, footwear, rubber and rubber products. On the other hand, Czech exports to Indonesia consisted mainly of machinery, chemicals, electrical and power generation and telecommunications equipment, textile and machinery.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He received Captaincy and Company command in July 1915. He served with his battalion along the Loos salient in France under Irish Major General William Hickie.

Target: Receiving Captaincy and Company command in July 1915, he served with his battalion along the Loos salient in France under Irish Major General William Hickie.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Sheehan led up to the 29 September 1930, Dublin County Council and Borough elections and the August nomination of eight official Labour candidates. Sheehan held town hall meetings from Bray to Balbriggan, emphasising :

Target: Leading up to the 29 September 1930, Dublin County Council and Borough elections and the August nomination of eight official Labour candidates, Sheehan held town hall meetings from Bray to Balbriggan, emphasising :


Source: Make the text coherent: Singh is a retired officer of the Indian Army. Singh is a Kargil War officer and is known as the India's first blade runner.

Target: Singh is a retired officer of the Indian Army. He is a Kargil War veteran and is known as the India's first blade runner.


Source: Fix coherence: He returned to Ceylon in 1912. He took oaths as an Advocate of the Supreme Court of Ceylon and started his practice at Hulftsdorp.

Target: Returning to Ceylon in 1912, he took oaths as an Advocate of the Supreme Court of Ceylon and started his practice at Hulftsdorp.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It is the first enzyme in the shikimate pathway. It controls the amount of carbon entering the pathway.

Target: Since it is the first enzyme in the shikimate pathway, it controls the amount of carbon entering the pathway.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: At the most DAVIC had 222 companies from more than 25 countries as members. Over its life 295 organisations were members at some stage.

Target: At the most DAVIC had 222 companies from more than 25 countries as members, although over its life 295 organisations were members at some stage.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Roland equipment uses 24 pulses per quarter note (PPQN for short), known as Sync24. A Roland compatible device playing sixteenth notes would have to advance to the next note every time it receives 6 pulses.

Target: Roland equipment uses 24 pulses per quarter note (PPQN for short), known as Sync24. Therefore, a Roland compatible device playing sixteenth notes would have to advance to the next note every time it receives 6 pulses.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: DTIME satisfies the time hierarchy theorem. That asymptotically larger amounts of time always create strictly larger sets of problems.

Target: DTIME satisfies the time hierarchy theorem, meaning that asymptotically larger amounts of time always create strictly larger sets of problems.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This speeds up the transition as the layer changes. Although the laser does have to refocus on layer 1.

Target: This speeds up the transition as the layer changes because although the laser does have to refocus on layer 1.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Such discs are a form of DVD-ROM. Data can only be read and not written or erased.

Target: Such discs are a form of DVD-ROM because data can only be read and not written or erased.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He started playing the drums at the age of 2, his aunt bought him a drum set for Christmas. That was the drum set of his love for music.

Target: He started playing the drums at the age of 2, his aunt bought him a drum set for Christmas and that was the beginning of his love for music.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The party aligned itself with the Comintern. A moderate wing broke out in 1921 to form the Social Democratic Labour Party.

Target: The party aligned itself with the Comintern. As a result, a moderate wing broke out in 1921 to form the Social Democratic Labour Party.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Four different categories are listed for the nature of the deployment-Rapid, Armoured, Artillery, and Signal and Engineering. At the time the fax was sent, only the first, Rapid, is confirmed, while the rest were not confirmed.

Target: Four different categories are listed for the nature of the deployment-Rapid, Armoured, Artillery, and Signal and Engineering. However, at the time the fax was sent, only the first, Rapid, is confirmed, while the rest were not confirmed.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The victim was made to walk on top of the slowly heating cylinder. Victim was forced to shift victim's feet to avoid the burning.

Target: The victim was made to walk on top of the slowly heating cylinder and he was forced to shift his feet to avoid the burning.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He averaged 8.3 points in six games. He returned to South Jersey after hurting his hip and reinjuring his knee in Poland.

Target: Averaging 8.3 points in six games, he returned to South Jersey after hurting his hip and reinjuring his knee in Poland.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Until May 2016 this station used to have 2 broad gauge and 1 meter gauge platform. After gauge conversion process started on 15 May 2016, the meter gauge services were stopped and meter gauge tracks were removed.

Target: Until May 2016 this station used to have 2 broad gauge and 1 meter gauge platform. But after gauge conversion process started on 15 May 2016, the meter gauge services were stopped and meter gauge tracks were removed.


Source: Fix coherence: The retainment of viability despite a dam gene knockout is also seen in Salmonella and Aggregatibacter actinomycetemcomitans. In organisms like Vibrio cholerae and Yersinia pseudotuberculosis, the dam gene is essential for viability.

Target: The retainment of viability despite a dam gene knockout is also seen in Salmonella and Aggregatibacter actinomycetemcomitans. However in organisms like Vibrio cholerae and Yersinia pseudotuberculosis, the dam gene is essential for viability.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Grant Emerson version of Damage first appeared in a comic book of the same name during the Zero Hour crisis. Grant Emerson is the Grant Emerson of the original Atom, Al Pratt.

Target: The Grant Emerson version of Damage first appeared in a comic book of the same name during the Zero Hour crisis. He is the son of the original Atom, Al Pratt.


Source: Make the text more logical: Arsenal managed to erase Grant's criminal records. Grant was no longer a Grant, and Grant joins the team.

Target: Arsenal managed to erase Grant's criminal records, so he was no longer a fugitive, and Grant joins the team.


Source: Fix coherence: In retaliation, Damage unleashes a full-power blast against Gog, with little effect. Gog is destroyed and the split in the Society is healed.

Target: In retaliation, Damage unleashes a full-power blast against Gog, with little effect. Eventually, Gog is destroyed and the split in the Society is healed.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: I'm happy to have walked away with my life after the situation I was thrown into. I mean, what do you do?

Target: I'm happy to have walked away with my life after the situation I was thrown into. But, I mean, what do you do?


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: I'm a musician. musician'm going to make music.

Target: I'm a musician. I'm going to make music.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Adkins won a Rising Star nomination after collecting 19 disposals and kicking 2 goals in his third game 2000. His third game is a match against Carlton in round 3.

Target: Adkins won a Rising Star nomination after collecting 19 disposals and kicking 2 goals in his third game, a match against Carlton in round 3, 2000.


Source: Make the text more logical: Ahdoot moved to New York City. Ahdoot helped found an improv comedy troupe, wrote freelance for Crank Yankers, and opened for such headlining comedians as Lewis Black, Jay Mohr, and Dave Chappelle.

Target: Moving to New York City, Ahdoot helped found an improv comedy troupe, wrote freelance for Crank Yankers, and opened for such headlining comedians as Lewis Black, Jay Mohr, and Dave Chappelle.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Leno accepted the role at short notice, with no opportunity to learn the script. Leno's improvised comedy helped to extend the life of the show.

Target: Leno accepted the role at short notice, with no opportunity to learn the script. But his improvised comedy helped to extend the life of the show.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Princess of Wales was just going to shake hands with me, when she looked at my face, and couldn't do it for some time. She laughed so much.

Target: The Princess of Wales was just going to shake hands with me, when she looked at my face, and couldn't do it for some time, because she laughed so much.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Oxford Dictionary National Biography, on the other hand, states that he died of tertiary syphilis. His biographer Gyles Brandreth claimed that Leno had succumbed to a brain tumour, which Brandreth thought would help explain his erratic behaviour.

Target: The Oxford Dictionary National Biography, on the other hand, states that he died of tertiary syphilis. Finally, his biographer Gyles Brandreth claimed that Leno had succumbed to a brain tumour, which Brandreth thought would help explain his erratic behaviour.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1883, Leno met Sarah Lydia Reynolds (1866 -- 1942), a young dancer and comedy singer from Birmingham. Both were appearing at King Ohmy's Circus of Varieties.

Target: In 1883, Leno met Sarah Lydia Reynolds (1866 -- 1942), a young dancer and comedy singer from Birmingham, while both were appearing at King Ohmy's Circus of Varieties.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Reviews were mixed: one newspaper reported that the house roared its approval. Another complained that Leno's English humour was out of date.

Target: Reviews were mixed: one newspaper reported that the house roared its approval, while another complained that Leno's English humour was out of date.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: After playing 22 games for the Brewers in 1977, Thomas was demoted on May 20 to the Spokane Indians, the Brewers 'Triple-A Pacific Coast League farm team in Spokane, Washington. Thomas' batting average Brewers Milwaukee was a respectable.

Target: After playing 22 games for the Brewers in 1977, Thomas was demoted on May 20 to the Spokane Indians, the Brewers' Triple-A Pacific Coast League farm team in Spokane, Washington, although his batting average with Milwaukee was a respectable.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Her recital debut at the age of sixteen (1969) in Athens, Greece. She has given performances worldwide in major venues in European cities, in Latin America, throughout Russia and the former Soviet Republics.

Target: Since her recital debut at the age of sixteen (1969) in Athens, Greece, she has given performances worldwide in major venues in European cities, in Latin America, throughout Russia and the former Soviet Republics.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Louis van Amstel wrote on his blog that he would not compete this season. All of the female celebrities were taller than Louis van Amstel.

Target: Louis van Amstel wrote on his blog that he would not compete this season because all of the female celebrities were taller than him.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A detailed survey was conducted in 2006. Much of the site remains unexcavated.

Target: A detailed survey was conducted in 2006 although much of the site remains unexcavated.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Some members of the crew do not believe they are at war and help the captain take back control of the ship. A second American submarine is sent to hunt down and destroy the Lansing before it can start a real war.

Target: Some members of the crew do not believe they are at war and help the captain take back control of the ship. Meanwhile, a second American submarine is sent to hunt down and destroy the Lansing before it can start a real war.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Scott's uncle, a CIA agent, arrives to provide extraction. Morgan opts to save the uranium rod first.

Target: Scott's uncle, a CIA agent, arrives to provide extraction. However Morgan opts to save the uranium rod first.


Source: Fix coherence errors: His move from Ajax in 2002, until the expiration of his final contract with the club in 2011. Cruz established himself as one of the most prolific players in Germinal Beerschot club history.

Target: Since his move from Ajax in 2002, until the expiration of his final contract with the club in 2011, Cruz established himself as one of the most prolific players in Germinal Beerschot club history.


Source: Make the text more coherent: She competed in three Summer Olympics. She won a silver medal in the K1 event at the 1992 Summer Olympics in Barcelona.

Target: Competing in three Summer Olympics, she won a silver medal in the K1 event at the 1992 Summer Olympics in Barcelona.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Zangrando grew up in Santos. Zangrando took up judo at the age of 5 following her brother to the dojo of sensei Paulo Duarte.

Target: Growing up in Santos, Zangrando took up judo at the age of 5 following her brother to the dojo of sensei Paulo Duarte.


Source: Make the text clearer: Zangrando came out of temporary halt. Zangrando paved her stretch to qualify for her second Brazilian judo squad, as a 25-year-old, in the women's lightweight class (57 kg) at the 2004 Summer Olympics in Athens.

Target: Coming out of temporary halt, Zangrando paved her stretch to qualify for her second Brazilian judo squad, as a 25-year-old, in the women's lightweight class (57 kg) at the 2004 Summer Olympics in Athens.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He signed for SK Tirana in the 2007 summer break. Was soon back in NK Varteks as a free player.

Target: He signed for SK Tirana in the 2007 summer break but was soon back in NK Varteks as a free player.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Perez did not press charges. She said that was not the first time he was violent with her.

Target: Perez did not press charges although she said that was not the first time he was violent with her.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It looks at their history. It is just amazing.

Target: Looking at their history, it is just amazing.


Source: Fix coherence: He had distinguished himself in a combat of champions in a war against the Cadusii and was serving at the time as a royal courier. Prior to being appointed as a royal courier, he had served as a satrap of Armenia.

Target: He had distinguished himself in a combat of champions in a war against the Cadusii and was serving at the time as a royal courier. However, prior to being appointed as a royal courier, he had served as a satrap of Armenia.


Source: Make the text more coherent: On Hapes, Jaina's dead brother, Anakin, is given a proper funeral by cremation. Former Hapan Queen Mother Ta'a Chume sees how weak are the current Queen Mother and her daughter-in-law, Tenenial Djo.

Target: On Hapes, Jaina's dead brother, Anakin, is given a proper funeral by cremation. Meanwhile, former Hapan Queen Mother Ta'a Chume sees how weak are the current Queen Mother and her daughter-in-law, Tenenial Djo.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Kawamata-A mercenary, always ready for battle. When the Cold War ended, Kawamata had to wait until it was time for combat once more.

Target: Kawamata-A mercenary, always ready for battle, but when the Cold War ended, he had to wait until it was time for combat once more.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The series was unique as it didn't follow any type of manga, anime, or tokusatsu archetype. It served as an antithesis for those motifs.

Target: The series was unique as it didn't follow any type of manga, anime, or tokusatsu archetype. Instead, it served as an antithesis for those motifs.


Source: Make the text coherent: The most common ancestries in Darling Point were English (24.1 %), Australian (15.1 %), Irish (9.7 %), Scottish 7.4 % and Chinese 3.3 %. 54.2 % of residents were born in Australian.

Target: The most common ancestries in Darling Point were English (24.1 %), Australian (15.1 %), Irish (9.7 %), Scottish 7.4 % and Chinese 3.3 %. 54.2 % of residents were born in Australia.


Source: Make the text clearer: While in Africa, Kagan maintained a daily blog on CNN.com of her reports and experiences. She reported live, from the red carpet, of several Academy Award ceremonies and from the Monterey Jazz Festival.

Target: While in Africa, Kagan maintained a daily blog on CNN.com of her reports and experiences. Additionally, she reported live, from the red carpet, of several Academy Award ceremonies and from the Monterey Jazz Festival.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: By late 1852. Little music had yet been written.

Target: By late 1852, although little music had yet been written.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Many owners have resorted to force feeding their Dasypeltis because the animal seems not to be eating. Evidence has shown that, like large constrictors, these snakes may go for very long periods (months) without eating after a large meal.

Target: Many owners have resorted to force feeding their Dasypeltis because the animal seems not to be eating. However, evidence has shown that, like large constrictors, these snakes may go for very long periods (months) without eating after a large meal.


Source: Fix coherence: This is mainly. Business databases aren't restricted by the same privacy laws as consumer databases.

Target: This is mainly because business databases aren't restricted by the same privacy laws as consumer databases.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: As a consequence, database marketers also tend to be heavy users of data warehouses. Having a greater amount of data about customers increases the likelihood that a more accurate model can be built.

Target: As a consequence, database marketers also tend to be heavy users of data warehouses, because having a greater amount of data about customers increases the likelihood that a more accurate model can be built.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Determining which contact to communicate with through direct marketing may be difficult. It is the database for business-to-business marketers which often includes data on the business activity about the respective client.

Target: Determining which contact to communicate with through direct marketing may be difficult. On the other hand, it is the database for business-to-business marketers which often includes data on the business activity about the respective client.


Source: Make the text more logical: Often the criteria that define a date of establishment or founding are ill-defined -- or more specifically, are ill-defined in general. Each institution tends to adopt a rather rigid definition of its own date of establishment.

Target: Often the criteria that define a date of establishment or founding are ill-defined -- or more specifically, are ill-defined in general, although each institution tends to adopt a rather rigid definition of its own date of establishment.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He quit his daytime job. He travelled around Europe earning money by busking, sometimes with harmonica player Pete Judd.

Target: Quitting his daytime job, he travelled around Europe earning money by busking, sometimes with harmonica player Pete Judd.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It covers more than 4700 syndicated strips and panels. It is the largest single listing of comic strips ever compiled.

Target: Covering more than 4700 syndicated strips and panels, it is the largest single listing of comic strips ever compiled.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He therefore declared that his claim to the throne had priority over David's descendants. No explanation or firm evidence for the supposed renunciation could be provided.

Target: He therefore declared that his claim to the throne had priority over David's descendants. However, no explanation or firm evidence for the supposed renunciation could be provided.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Another similarity is the Earl of Huntingdon question. A historian names Robin Hood as a possible Earl of that area.

Target: Another similarity is the Earl of Huntingdon question, because a historian names Robin Hood as a possible Earl of that area.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Bedford studied music at the Royal Academy of Music under Lennox Berkeley, and later in Venice under Luigi Nono. Bedford's studies and early influences included the work Luigi Nono Nono, Paul Hindemith, Arnold Schoenberg and Anton Webern.

Target: Bedford studied music at the Royal Academy of Music under Lennox Berkeley, and later in Venice under Luigi Nono. His studies and early influences included the work of Nono, Paul Hindemith, Arnold Schoenberg and Anton Webern.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: She converted to Judaism and changed her given name to Sarah. In November 2013, David and Sarah divorced.

Target: She converted to Judaism and changed her given name to Sarah. In November 2013, David and Sarah Brooks divorced.


Source: Make the text coherent: He was surprisingly small (5 feet 5 inches in height) in an era of big centre forwards. He was a prolific goalscorer.

Target: He was surprisingly small (5 feet 5 inches in height) in an era of big centre forwards, yet he was a prolific goalscorer.


Source: Make the text clearer: He also participates in the preparation of rebroadcasts of events like the Olympic Games, or the 24 Hours of Le Mans, on premium cable television. He appears occasionally in commercials.

Target: He also participates in the preparation of rebroadcasts of events like the Olympic Games, or the 24 Hours of Le Mans, on premium cable television. Moreover, he appears occasionally in commercials.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He rose again to the top of the national standings in 1989. He captured the European bronze medal in Athens, again as a junior.

Target: Rising again to the top of the national standings in 1989, he captured the European bronze medal in Athens, again as a junior.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He loved playing football and did not answer any of the questions in the Eleven plus exam for entry into a grammar school. He could ensure he attended Shipman County Secondary School where he knew they played the game.

Target: He loved playing football and did not answer any of the questions in the Eleven plus exam for entry into a grammar school, so that he could ensure he attended Shipman County Secondary School where he knew they played the game.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He remained at St. Andrews until his death on 3 February 1903. He is buried in the north-east corner of the Eastern Cemetery in St. Andrews beneath a large black granite cross.

Target: He remained at St. Andrews until his death on 3 February 1903. He is buried in the north-east corner of the Eastern Cemetery in St Andrews beneath a large black granite cross.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He had six older siblings. Three died in infancy.

Target: He had six older siblings, although three died in infancy.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He specialized in investigations. He worked on the Bettencourt, Karachi and Cahuzac (fr) affairs.

Target: Specializing in investigations, he worked on the Bettencourt, Karachi and Cahuzac (fr) affairs.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Henderson was elected as a Democrat to the Eighty-seventh and to the seven succeeding Congresses (January 3, 1961 -- January 3, 1977). Henderson served as chair of the Committee on Post Office and Civil Service (Ninety-fourth Congresses).

Target: Henderson was elected as a Democrat to the Eighty-seventh and to the seven succeeding Congresses (January 3, 1961 -- January 3, 1977). He served as chair of the Committee on Post Office and Civil Service (Ninety-fourth Congress).


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Price seemed very emotionally involved in the bout. As such grew frustrated and weary as the fight wore on.

Target: Price seemed very emotionally involved in the bout and as such grew frustrated and weary as the fight wore on.


Source: Make the text more logical: Olson learned to be literate. Olson argued, was to learn to think about the properties of language that remain largely implicit in ordinary oral or natural language.

Target: Learning to be literate, Olson argued, was to learn to think about the properties of language that remain largely implicit in ordinary oral or natural language.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Raikuna plays predominantly as a winger. Has the ability to cover centre and fullback.

Target: Raikuna plays predominantly as a winger, although has the ability to cover centre and fullback.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Having personal life experiences as his subject matter, Rankin's paintings contemplate these things. Rankin's Jerusalem series followed a trip to Jerusalem in 1988, which then led to his Golgotha works.

Target: Having personal life experiences as his subject matter, Rankin's paintings contemplate these things. For example, his Jerusalem series followed a trip to Jerusalem in 1988, which then led to his Golgotha works.


Source: Make the text coherent: David Savage was among the Methodists who were uncomfortable with the somewhat sensational methods used in recruitment by The Salvation Army. Were also uncomfortable with the fact that the The Salvation Army was being successful in making converts where the Methodists had failed.

Target: David Savage was among the Methodists who were uncomfortable with the somewhat sensational methods used in recruitment by The Salvation Army, but were also uncomfortable with the fact that the Army was being successful in making converts where the Methodists had failed.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Shakarian spearheaded the development of Bonita Bay, a 2,400-acre residential facility in Bonita Springs, Florida, for $1.1 billion. By the time of Shakarian's death, the project was only expected to be completed two decades later.

Target: Shakarian spearheaded the development of Bonita Bay, a 2,400-acre residential facility in Bonita Springs, Florida, for $1.1 billion. However, by the time of his death, the project was only expected to be completed two decades later.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He claimed to have been an 'Adjunct Professor' at RMIT, and had a graduate diploma in marketing from Monash University, despite being a few units short. Both universities stated that Southwick never obtained these qualifications.

Target: He claimed to have been an 'Adjunct Professor' at RMIT, and had a graduate diploma in marketing from Monash University, despite being a few units short. However, both universities stated that Southwick never obtained these qualifications.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: From 1958 to 1964, he was a classics master at Southgate County School, the a state grammar school in the London Borough of Enfield. From 1964 to 1966, classics master was Head of Religious Education at Southgate.

Target: From 1958 to 1964, he was a classics master at Southgate County School, the a state grammar school in the London Borough of Enfield. Then, from 1964 to 1966, he was Head of Religious Education at Southgate.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He answered questions from the audience. He indicated that he and other backbenchers had little influence or input on the budget legislation.

Target: Answering questions from the audience, he indicated that he and other backbenchers had little influence or input on the budget legislation.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Zoppetti writes exclusively in Japanese. Zoppetti is thus an exophonic writer, considered part of the J-Literature movement.

Target: Writing exclusively in Japanese, Zoppetti is thus an exophonic writer, considered part of the J-Literature movement.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In that same game, future president Walter Lingle (class of 1892) was knocked unconscious. These rivalries transformed into an uncontrollable desire of the student body to begin an intercollegiate football program (Gillespie 22).

Target: In that same game, future president Walter Lingle (class of 1892) was knocked unconscious. Eventually, these rivalries transformed into an uncontrollable desire of the student body to begin an intercollegiate football program (Gillespie 22).


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1892 the main shaft was 501 feet deep. Production was reported to be 334,552 tons of pyrite.

Target: In 1892 the main shaft was 501 feet deep, and production was reported to be 334,552 tons of pyrite.


Source: Make the text clearer: Drewiske contributed with 14 points in 73 games. Drewiske ended his 8-year professional career as the Phantoms missed the post-season.

Target: Contributing with 14 points in 73 games, Drewiske ended his 8-year professional career as the Phantoms missed the post-season.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is open to artists based in Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland working in traditional and non-digital media. In addition Republic of Ireland artists based outside Ireland are also eligible to apply.

Target: It is open to artists based in Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland working in traditional and non-digital media. In addition Irish artists based outside Ireland are also eligible to apply.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Only 15 % of households received any form of compensation for lost land, and many families were coerced or tricked into relocation. Only 27 % of surveyed residents ever received consultation meetings, and said meetings were oftentimes one-way and non-negotiable.

Target: Only 15 % of households received any form of compensation for lost land, and many families were coerced or tricked into relocation. Additionally, only 27 % of surveyed residents ever received consultation meetings, and said meetings were oftentimes one-way and non-negotiable.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Maho makes a bet with Michiru. Maho confronts Haruki with hopes he would remember her only to become enraged when she finds out he had completely forgotten all about her.

Target: Making a bet with Michiru, Maho confronts Haruki with hopes he would remember her only to become enraged when she finds out he had completely forgotten all about her.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In March, 2000, this bubble burst. A large number of less-experienced day traders began to lose money as fast, or faster, than they had made during the buying frenzy.

Target: In March, 2000, this bubble burst, and a large number of less-experienced day traders began to lose money as fast, or faster, than they had made during the buying frenzy.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This activity was identical to modern day trading, but for the longer duration of the settlement period. Today, to reduce market risk, the settlement period is typically two working days.

Target: This activity was identical to modern day trading, but for the longer duration of the settlement period. But today, to reduce market risk, the settlement period is typically two working days.


Source: Make the text coherent: The NASDAQ crashed from 5000 back to 1200 ; many of the less-experienced traders went broke. Obviously it was possible to have made a fortune during that time by shorting or playing on volatility.

Target: The NASDAQ crashed from 5000 back to 1200 ; many of the less-experienced traders went broke, although obviously it was possible to have made a fortune during that time by shorting or playing on volatility.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Many day traders are bank or investment firm employees working as specialists in equity investment and fund management. With the advent of electronic trading and margin trading, day trading is available to private individuals.

Target: Many day traders are bank or investment firm employees working as specialists in equity investment and fund management. However, with the advent of electronic trading and margin trading, day trading is available to private individuals.


Source: Fix coherence errors: A 'cut' piece is sent back to home. While in one of the safe zones (marked by an X), a piece can not be cut.

Target: A 'cut' piece is sent back to home. However, while in one of the safe zones (marked by an X), a piece can not be cut.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Beams added to this recognition. Beams finished the season winning the E.W.

Target: Adding to this recognition, Beams finished the season winning the E.W.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Chase likes doing judo. After he exited the wrong building for judo class in April 2014, was attacked by a man wanting his cell phone.

Target: Chase likes doing judo and after he exited the wrong building for judo class in April 2014, was attacked by a man wanting his cell phone.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Thomas Jack DiMera is the son of Chad DiMera and Abigail Deveraux. Chad DiMera is also the Chad DiMera of JJ Deveraux, and the grandson of Stefano DiMera, Madeline Peterson Woods, Jennifer Horton, and Jack Deveraux.

Target: Thomas Jack DiMera is the son of Chad DiMera and Abigail Deveraux. He is also the nephew of JJ Deveraux, and the grandson of Stefano DiMera, Madeline Peterson Woods, Jennifer Horton, and Jack Deveraux.


Source: Fix coherence: Clyde got a good vantage point. Clyde waited for Orpheus to make their demands known before he attempted to shoot Aiden Jennings, but shoots Abe Carver instead and fled before the Salem Police could retaliate.

Target: Getting a good vantage point, Clyde waited for Orpheus to make their demands known before he attempted to shoot Aiden Jennings, but shoots Abe Carver instead and fled before the Salem Police could retaliate.


Source: Make the text more logical: San Martin previously played Javier Rodriguez 2010. Javier Rodriguez is a patient of Nathan Horton (Mark Hapka) for one episode on November 16.

Target: San Martin previously played Javier Rodriguez, a patient of Nathan Horton (Mark Hapka) for one episode on November 16, 2010.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Charlotte, the girl Casper has a crush on, visits and he tries impressing her with a free purchase for loyal patronage to the Occult Barn. More of their friends arrive and make the situation worse.

Target: Charlotte, the girl Casper has a crush on, visits and he tries impressing her with a free purchase for loyal patronage to the Occult Barn. However, more of their friends arrive and make the situation worse.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He sets off a grenade, ready to die. Instead time rewinds to the moment right before the urn broke ; everyone retains memory of what happened, ensuring they don't cause another curse.

Target: He sets off a grenade, ready to die, but instead time rewinds to the moment right before the urn broke ; everyone retains memory of what happened, ensuring they don't cause another curse.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Both rapped during their high school years, Hines with the group's future producer Derek Lynch's brother Tony. Producer was Hines' producer first and wouldn't begin producing until later.

Target: Both rapped during their high school years, Hines with the group's future producer Derek Lynch's brother Tony. However, Lynch was Hines' DJ first and wouldn't begin producing until later.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As adults they are amazing aerial assassins, but they lead a double life. He takes a look at the kestrel, the world champion in hovering.

Target: As adults they are amazing aerial assassins, but they lead a double life. Finally, he takes a look at the kestrel, the world champion in hovering.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Considered a one-hit wonder in the US. He has had multiple singles chart in other territories and continues to write, record and tour.

Target: Although considered a one-hit wonder in the US, he has had multiple singles chart in other territories and continues to write, record and tour.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Some public defender services were available in Guam beginning in 1968. Pregerson joined the first class of public defenders in the modern Guam Public Defender Service Corporation.

Target: Although some public defender services were available in Guam beginning in 1968, Pregerson joined the first class of public defenders in the modern Guam Public Defender Service Corporation.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Haunsperger was an assistant professor of mathematics at St. Olaf College from 1991 to 1994. Since 1994, Haunsperger has been a assistant professor in the mathematics department at Carleton College.

Target: Haunsperger was an assistant professor of mathematics at St. Olaf College from 1991 to 1994. Since 1994, she has been a faculty member in the mathematics department at Carleton College.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Perhaps this new found serenity is rooted in Klimt's own awareness of aging and closeness to death. Before the moment came when Klimt chose to depict nothing more than moments of intense pleasure or miraculous beauty and youth.

Target: Perhaps this new found serenity is rooted in Klimt's own awareness of aging and closeness to death. But before the moment came when he chose to depict nothing more than moments of intense pleasure or miraculous beauty and youth.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Pilgrim related that there was no further crew conversation with Earnhardt. That Earnhardt did cheer on teammates Michael (Waltrip) and (Earnhardt) Earnhardt over the radio, up to the end of the race.

Target: Pilgrim related that there was no further crew conversation with Earnhardt, but that he did cheer on teammates Michael (Waltrip) and (Dale Earnhardt) Junior over the radio, up to the end of the race.


Source: Make the text clearer: Initially, the Childress team wore blank uniforms out of respect. As Harvick's performance improved, the regular GM Goodwrench Service Plus uniforms returned with the team scoring a Top 10 finish by the next race in Las Vegas, and winning the next week in Atlanta.

Target: Initially, the Childress team wore blank uniforms out of respect but as Harvick's performance improved, the regular GM Goodwrench Service Plus uniforms returned with the team scoring a Top 10 finish by the next race in Las Vegas, and winning the next week in Atlanta.


Source: Fix coherence: The autopsy report and its conclusions have also been questioned. It does not say what the results of the rape kit and fingernail kit were, or even if they were processed.

Target: The autopsy report and its conclusions have also been questioned. For instance, it does not say what the results of the rape kit and fingernail kit were, or even if they were processed.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: According to her family, who supposedly kept her history of mental illness a secret, she had no history of suicidal ideations or attempts. One report claimed she had previously gone missing for a brief period.

Target: According to her family, who supposedly kept her history of mental illness a secret, she had no history of suicidal ideations or attempts, although one report claimed she had previously gone missing for a brief period.


Source: Make the text clearer: Toxicology tests -- incomplete. Not enough of her blood was preserved.

Target: Toxicology tests -- incomplete because not enough of her blood was preserved.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He knew a lot of Indians in London. He started to record Indian musicians on a Baird tape recorder.

Target: Knowing a lot of Indians in London, he started to record Indian musicians on a Baird tape recorder.


Source: Fix coherence errors: She recognised the commercial imperatives of running a stately home. She took a very active role and was known to man the Chatsworth House ticket office herself.

Target: Recognising the commercial imperatives of running a stately home, she took a very active role and was known to man the Chatsworth House ticket office herself.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Today the Decker Brothers pianos do not sell for as much as their more famous counterparts. Pianos still command more than double the price of an average piano manufacturer of that era.

Target: Today the Decker Brothers pianos do not sell for as much as their more famous counterparts, yet they still command more than double the price of an average piano manufacturer of that era.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: An additive model would be used when the variations around the trend does not vary with the level of the time series. A multiplicative model would be appropriate if the trend is proportional to the level of the time series.

Target: An additive model would be used when the variations around the trend does not vary with the level of the time series whereas a multiplicative model would be appropriate if the trend is proportional to the level of the time series.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Moreover, variables such as 'Barack Obama' or 'president' can be quantified over. Take 'Barack Obama' as variable 'x'.

Target: Moreover, variables such as 'Barack Obama' or 'president' can be quantified over. For example, take 'Barack Obama' as variable 'x'.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Prior to Felt's revelation and Woodward's confirmation, part of the reason historians and other scholars had so much difficulty in identifying the real Deep Throat is. No single person seemed to truly fit the character described in All the President's Men.

Target: Prior to Felt's revelation and Woodward's confirmation, part of the reason historians and other scholars had so much difficulty in identifying the real Deep Throat is because no single person seemed to truly fit the character described in All the President's Men.


Source: Make the text clearer: It is common for the families who camp at Deer Valley to have deep roots there. Some have as much as four generations of family camping tradition.

Target: It is common for the families who camp at Deer Valley to have deep roots there and some have as much as four generations of family camping tradition.