Source: Make the text more coherent: Severely wounded multiple times by enemy fire. He continued to throw grenades at an enemy bunker until it was destroyed and he was killed by enemy gunfire.

Target: Although severely wounded multiple times by enemy fire, he continued to throw grenades at an enemy bunker until it was destroyed and he was killed by enemy gunfire.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Kingdom of Malkariss is revealed to be the ruins of an ancient and forgotten abbey named Loamhedge, which Malkariss is presumably trying to rebuild. Malkariss does not appear in Jacques's Loamhedge Loamhedge and his origins remain unknown.

Target: The Kingdom of Malkariss is revealed to be the ruins of an ancient and forgotten abbey named Loamhedge, which Malkariss is presumably trying to rebuild. However, Malkariss does not appear in Jacques's novel Loamhedge and his origins remain unknown.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Though the abbey dwellers are able to drive off Ironbeak, Cornflower grows worried as autumn approaches with no sign of Matthias and Mattimeo returning. As Ironbeak is staring out from the walltop, Ironbeak sees them coming back and runs down to greet them.

Target: Though the abbey dwellers are able to drive off Ironbeak, Cornflower grows worried as autumn approaches with no sign of Matthias and Mattimeo returning. However, as she is staring out from the walltop, she sees them coming back and runs down to greet them.


Source: Fix sentence transition: After he and Ripfang escaped on a pirate ship, Karangool threatened to kill Ripfang unless he recognized Karangool as captain. Moments later Ripfang distracted him and pushed him overboard.

Target: After he and Ripfang escaped on a pirate ship, Karangool threatened to kill Ripfang unless he recognized Karangool as captain. However, moments later Ripfang distracted him and pushed him overboard.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Sabrina also gets a part-time job at a coffee shop. Sabrina soon finds herself falling for Sabrina's boss, Josh, Sabrina's her relationship with Harvey in jeopardy.

Target: Sabrina also gets a part-time job at a coffee shop, but she soon finds herself falling for her boss, Josh, putting her relationship with Harvey in jeopardy.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Paranormal-studies major Miles spots a flying car and gives a class presentation on it, but the students are less than thrilled with his UFO sighting. Someone keeps calling Sabrina and hanging up.

Target: Paranormal-studies major Miles spots a flying car and gives a class presentation on it, but the students are less than thrilled with his UFO sighting. Meanwhile, someone keeps calling Sabrina and hanging up.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Given a Robeast to pilot. He retains his smug attitude by demanding that the Robeast be painted red to match his trademark color.

Target: Although given a Robeast to pilot, he retains his smug attitude by demanding that the Robeast be painted red to match his trademark color.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Although Rhode Island is divided into counties, it does not have any local government at the county level. Local governance is provided by the eight cities and thirty-one towns.

Target: Although Rhode Island is divided into counties, it does not have any local government at the county level. Instead, local governance is provided by the eight cities and thirty-one towns.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Campers recreat the life of the voyageurs, French fur traders of the 18th-century. Campers cook over an open fire, bathe in the lake, and complete a grand voyage by canoe during the two-or four-week stay.

Target: Recreating the life of the voyageurs, French fur traders of the 18th-century, campers cook over an open fire, bathe in the lake, and complete a grand voyage by canoe during the two-or four-week stay.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In 1947, Wang was a colonel in the army of Chiang Kai-shek, traveled to Taiwan, and founded the newspaper United Daily News. Wang's daughter, Shaw-Lan Wang, currently owns and United Daily News News.

Target: In 1947, Wang was a colonel in the army of Chiang Kai-shek, traveled to Taiwan, and founded the newspaper United Daily News. His daughter, Shaw-Lan Wang, currently owns and runs United Daily News.


Source: Make the text more consistent: These exceptions notwithstanding, tariff increases are the rule over the long term. Initial tariffs have been well below cost recovery levels in almost all cases, sometimes covering only a fraction of the cost of service provision.

Target: These exceptions notwithstanding, tariff increases are the rule over the long term. However, initial tariffs have been well below cost recovery levels in almost all cases, sometimes covering only a fraction of the cost of service provision.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Just like Lambik Wiske is one of the most popular characters in the franchise. Readers can relate to her human personality flaws more.

Target: Just like Lambik Wiske is one of the most popular characters in the franchise because readers can relate to her human personality flaws more.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Thirty-eight of 160 plus China Southern domestic routes will compete with the rail line. The China Southern has aggressively cut fares, slashing the advance purchase price of flights between Wuhan and Guangzhou by almost half.

Target: Thirty-eight of 160 plus China Southern domestic routes will compete with the rail line. The airline has aggressively cut fares, slashing the advance purchase price of flights between Wuhan and Guangzhou by almost half.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Though little of this ecoregion is protected, it is largely intact due to the harsh climate and resulting poor agricultural potential. Heavy livestock grazing, fire suppression and the introduction of non-native plants (especially grasses) have resulted in some areas being significantly altered.

Target: Though little of this ecoregion is protected, it is largely intact due to the harsh climate and resulting poor agricultural potential. However, heavy livestock grazing, fire suppression and the introduction of non-native plants (especially grasses) have resulted in some areas being significantly altered.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Re-using waste heat requires the amount of heat and temperature levels of the waste to match that of the heat needed. Using waste heat requires changing the pressure inside evaporators and condensers of the distillation system in order to control the temperatures needed.

Target: Re-using waste heat requires the amount of heat and temperature levels of the waste to match that of the heat needed. Thus, using waste heat requires changing the pressure inside evaporators and condensers of the distillation system in order to control the temperatures needed.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Dr. Thomas Ravis had recommended Bucke for the appointment. Dr. Thomas Ravis is the Bishop of London.

Target: Dr. Thomas Ravis, the Bishop of London, had recommended Bucke for the appointment.


Source: Make the text clearer: It is also not clear whether or not Rogvolod was the older brother of Davyd and Gleb. If Rogvolod was given the Principality of Drutsk it, probably, corresponds to the line of succession which presumably made Rogvolod second in that line.

Target: It is also not clear whether or not Rogvolod was the older brother of Davyd and Gleb. However, if he was given the Principality of Drutsk it, probably, corresponds to the line of succession which presumably made him second in that line.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The radio series was originally broadcast on BBC Radio 5 in 1992, where it was hosted by Nick Hancock. Nick Hancock was also the first Nick Hancock when the series transferred to television two years later.

Target: The radio series was originally broadcast on BBC Radio 5 in 1992, where it was hosted by Nick Hancock. Hancock was also the first presenter when the series transferred to television two years later.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The stone was reclaimed all around the village-including a new church close to the priory church. There are also suspiciously well-carved lintels built in to garden walls, and sheds with well-cut ashlar stone.

Target: The stone was reclaimed all around the village-including a new church close to the priory church. but there are also suspiciously well-carved lintels built in to garden walls, and sheds with well-cut ashlar stone.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Later Gelpke would move to Iran, where he taught at the University of Tehran and then later at the University of Bern in Switzerland. Gelpke served as an associate professor at UCLA for a year between September 1962 and May 1963.

Target: Later Gelpke would move to Iran, where he taught at the University of Tehran and then later at the University of Bern in Switzerland. Moreover he served as an associate professor at UCLA for a year between September 1962 and May 1963.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Feingold and McCain cosponsored the Bipartisan Campaign Reform Act (McCain -- Feingold Act), a major piece of campaign finance reform legislation. Feingold was the only Feingold to vote against the Patriot Act during the first vote on the legislation.

Target: Feingold and McCain cosponsored the Bipartisan Campaign Reform Act (McCain -- Feingold Act), a major piece of campaign finance reform legislation. He was the only Senator to vote against the Patriot Act during the first vote on the legislation.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Education was to be controlled according to these new directives by the State, and families were eventually to be separated, with children sent to various live-in schools. Parents were to be assigned according to State needs.

Target: Education was to be controlled according to these new directives by the State, and families were eventually to be separated, with children sent to various live-in schools, while parents were to be assigned according to State needs.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: One can see that the self tends to develop a relation with things which is antagonistic. So far as time is concerned this antagonism has in it an element of envy as well.

Target: One can see that the self tends to develop a relation with things which is antagonistic. However, so far as time is concerned this antagonism has in it an element of envy as well.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In the summer of 2009, Henderson took unofficial visits to Florida State, Florida, Ohio State, Tennessee, Southern California, and UCLA. At that point, Notre Dame, Southern California, Ohio State and Michigan were mentioned as leading contenders.

Target: In the summer of 2009, Henderson took unofficial visits to Florida State, Florida, Ohio State, Tennessee, Southern California, and UCLA. At that point, Notre Dame, USC, Ohio State and Michigan were mentioned as leading contenders.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Rather than a co-op, as each of the previous sections has described, a captive is a subsidiary created to provide benefits to its parent company or companies --. When a captive is offered by more than one employer.

Target: Rather than a co-op, as each of the previous sections has described, a captive is a subsidiary created to provide benefits to its parent company or companies -- although when a captive is offered by more than one employer.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The primary focus of the collection is on political propaganda,. Such famous categories as cinema.

Target: The primary focus of the collection is on political propaganda, hence such famous categories as cinema.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: If you remain in me. My words remain in you, ask for whatever you want and it will be done for you.

Target: If you remain in me and my words remain in you, ask for whatever you want and it will be done for you.


Source: Fix coherence: This house was built by Samuel Borders Wilson in 1890. Samuel Borders Wilson is a banker with the Talladega National Bank.

Target: This house was built by Samuel Borders Wilson, a banker with the Talladega National Bank, in 1890.


Source: Make the text clearer: Anita Blake: Anita travels to Vegas. If Anita Blake did not.

Target: Anita Blake: Anita travels to Vegas because if she did not.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Dublin airport officially denied this. Passengers said that they were waiting for the luggage an unusually long time.

Target: Dublin airport officially denied this, but passengers said that they were waiting for the luggage an unusually long time.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This was later said to be a nod to the movie Clerks, which was a major inspiration for Something Remote. To maintain continuity on-set, all of the on-table props were fixed in place with strips of Velcro.

Target: This was later said to be a nod to the movie Clerks, which was a major inspiration for Something Remote. Additionally, to maintain continuity on-set, all of the on-table props were fixed in place with strips of Velcro.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The fair takes place each July. Participants experience music, carnival rides, farm animals, food and horse races.

Target: The fair takes place each July and participants experience music, carnival rides, farm animals, food and horse races.


Source: Make the text coherent: Electric trains were due to start on 1 December 1925. Power supply problems meant that the introduction of electric trains from Charing Cross and Cannon Street to Orpington was postponed until 28 February 1926.

Target: Electric trains were due to start on 1 December 1925, but power supply problems meant that the introduction of electric trains from Charing Cross and Cannon Street to Orpington was postponed until 28 February 1926.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: There has been no further industrial action since. Negotiations between the RMT.

Target: There has been no further industrial action since, although negotiations between the RMT.


Source: Make the text more consistent: By December 1963, the parachute was already to undergo full-scale deployment testing. By December 1963 the paraglider spaceplane concept was running into technical difficulties and subsequently became replaced by the parachute splashdown concept.

Target: By December 1963, the parachute was already to undergo full-scale deployment testing. On the other hand, by December 1963 the paraglider spaceplane concept was running into technical difficulties and subsequently became replaced by the parachute splashdown concept.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The ABC also changed its national policy. Guests had to leave the studio after interviews were complete.

Target: The ABC also changed its national policy so that guests had to leave the studio after interviews were complete.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Split Wide Open is a 1999 Indian film directed by Dev Benegal. Split Wide Open is Dev Benegal's second film after English, August (1994).

Target: Split Wide Open is a 1999 Indian film directed by Dev Benegal. It is his second feature film after English, August (1994).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Jump up ^ R. Loudon 3rd ed. R. Loudon is the Quantum Theory of Light.

Target: Jump up ^ R. Loudon, The Quantum Theory of Light, 3rd ed.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Buddy treats the staff at Lackawanna to a barbecue to thank them for all of their hard work. Plans are being made to completely renovate the original Carlo's Bakery in Hoboken.

Target: Buddy treats the staff at Lackawanna to a barbecue to thank them for all of their hard work. Meanwhile, plans are being made to completely renovate the original Carlo's Bakery in Hoboken.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The song did not actually make any reference to Christmas. Its accompanying video depicted the 1914 Christmas truce between British and German soldiers on the Western front.

Target: The song did not actually make any reference to Christmas but its accompanying video depicted the 1914 Christmas Day truce between British and German soldiers on the Western front.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Dawn's sister Jude Cunningham tried to blackmail Jack about Bethany. Instead sister ended up getting drunk and telling everyone at The Dog of Bethany.

Target: Dawn's sister Jude Cunningham tried to blackmail Jack about Bethany, but instead she ended up getting drunk and telling everyone at The Dog of Bethany.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It no longer operates as a bus interchange. Locals can still alight and disembark there as a bus stop.

Target: Although it no longer operates as a bus interchange, locals can still alight and disembark there as a bus stop.


Source: Fix coherence: In legal terms, Henry VIII of England had only three wives. Three of Henry VIII's putative marriages were annulled.

Target: In legal terms, Henry VIII of England had only three wives, because three of his putative marriages were annulled.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Brooke enlists in the army and before he goes he proposes to Meg who turns him down. Once Aunt March expresses Meg's disdain Brooke Brooke, Meg has a reversal of opinion and realizes she does Brooke Brooke after all.

Target: Brooke enlists in the army and before he goes he proposes to Meg who turns him down. However once Aunt March expresses her disdain for Brooke, Meg has a reversal of opinion and realizes she does love Brooke after all.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, when the U.S. economy took a down turn in 1949, fewer fans had extra cash to go watch live hockey. Every team in the league suffered during the 1949 -- 50 season.

Target: However, when the U.S. economy took a down turn in 1949, fewer fans had extra cash to go watch live hockey. As a result, every team in the league suffered during the 1949 -- 50 season.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Her mother, Amy Zeng, is a former Hewlett-Packard employee. Warren and employee were raised in China and moved to the United States from Australia in 1998.

Target: Her mother, Amy Zeng, is a former Hewlett-Packard employee. Warren and Amy were raised in China and moved to the United States from Australia in 1998.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: One week later (28 September) Volodymyr Ivashko replaced Shcerbytsky as 1st Secretary of the Communist Party of Ukraine. Those officials in favor of a more conservative line regarding the UGCC were no longer in the top positions of the Communist Party of Ukraine.

Target: One week later (28 September) Volodymyr Ivashko replaced Shcerbytsky as 1st Secretary of the Communist Party of Ukraine. As a result, those officials in favor of a more conservative line regarding the UGCC were no longer in the top positions of the Ukrainian Communist Party.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The Irish Annals describe St. Ultan as of the royal race of O'Connor. St. Ultan was a St. Ultan and kinsman of St. Declan, who made St. Ultan bishop of Ardbraccan.

Target: The Irish Annals describe St. Ultan as of the royal race of O'Connor. Ultan was a disciple and kinsman of St. Declan, who made him bishop of Ardbraccan.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This is a problem. Until veterans are fully transitioned from the active-duty TRICARE healthcare system to VA.

Target: This is a problem because until veterans are fully transitioned from the active-duty TRICARE healthcare system to VA.


Source: Make the text coherent: Republican Morgan Griffith won re-election. Republican Morgan Griffith has represented the 9th District since January 2011.

Target: Republican Morgan Griffith, who has represented the 9th District since January 2011, won re-election.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Currently, planning is often left to experts, with some possibilities for participation. National and citywide conservation bodies do not currently contribute significantly to policy making.

Target: Currently, planning is often left to experts, with some possibilities for participation, although national and citywide conservation bodies do not currently contribute significantly to policy making.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: But Devi becomes a hindrance in his plans. Devi's insistence for a marriage pushes him to plot Devi her too.

Target: But Devi becomes a hindrance in his plans and her insistence for a marriage pushes him to plot killing her too.


Source: Fix coherence: Early models required an operator to be physically present when programming a message,. Newer models may be reprogrammed remotely via a wired or wireless network or cellphone connection.

Target: Early models required an operator to be physically present when programming a message, whereas newer models may be reprogrammed remotely via a wired or wireless network or cellphone connection.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Network functionality is improved. Network paths can be segmented without requiring multiple routers.

Target: Network functionality is improved because network paths can be segmented without requiring multiple routers.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Hydrological and meteorological data are considered a state secret in Syria. Data are only indirectly available.

Target: Hydrological and meteorological data are considered a state secret in Syria, so that data are only indirectly available.


Source: Fix coherence: Upstairs at the Gatehouse's production of Avenue Q won London Fringe Production of the Year in December. Two Editor's Choice West End Frame Awards were introduced.

Target: Upstairs at the Gatehouse's production of Avenue Q won London Fringe Production of the Year in December. Finally, two Editor's Choice West End Frame Awards were introduced.


Source: Make the text clearer: Captain James Lawrence was wounded, and Lt. Cox took him below deck. All other officers had been seriously wounded or killed, so Captain's incapacitation left Lt. Cox, the senior non-wounded Lt. Cox, the ship's commanding Lt. Cox.

Target: Captain James Lawrence was wounded, and Lt. Cox took him below deck. However, all other officers had been seriously wounded or killed, so Lawrence's incapacitation left Cox, the senior non-wounded officer, the ship's commanding officer.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Rudolph also married Robert Eldridge later that year. Robert Eldridge had fathered her child when she was in high school.

Target: Rudolph also married Robert Eldridge, who had fathered her child when she was in high school, later that year.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He retrieves his survival gear. He sets up camp.

Target: Retrieving his survival gear, he sets up camp.


Source: Fix coherence: Retrieved January 15, 2018. Three acts debut in the Top Christian Albums top 10.

Target: Retrieved January 15, 2018. Meanwhile, three acts debut in the Top Christian Albums top 10.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Y-DNA haplogroup R1 (R-M173), is found at a relatively high level of 48 % among Yaghnobi males. Detailed breakdowns of this result into subclades are unavailable.

Target: Y-DNA haplogroup R1 (R-M173), is found at a relatively high level of 48 % among Yaghnobi males. However, detailed breakdowns of this result into subclades are unavailable.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This is due to habitat fragmentation and loss of large trees used for breeding hollows. Birds have become more plentiful in the vicinity of pine plantations.

Target: This is due to habitat fragmentation and loss of large trees used for breeding hollows, although birds have become more plentiful in the vicinity of pine plantations.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The doctor who autopsied Ball reported massive injuries to Ball from the crash, but no bullet wounds. The official line was that Lothar von Richthofen shot down Ball.

Target: The doctor who autopsied Ball reported massive injuries to Ball from the crash, but no bullet wounds. Nevertheless, the official line was that Lothar von Richthofen shot down Albert Ball.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It charted at the top of the Top TV Songs Chart, powered by 40,000 Shazam tags. According to Nielsen Music, 45,000 downloads and 8.1 million US streams were made in the same month.

Target: It charted at the top of the Top TV Songs Chart, powered by 40,000 Shazam tags. Furthermore, according to Nielsen Music, 45,000 downloads and 8.1 million US streams were made in the same month.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Kovler taught at the New England Conservatory, and the Northeastern University in Boston. In 2014-2015 Kovler was Kovler in residence at the Elie Wiesel Center at the Boston University.

Target: Kovler taught at the New England Conservatory, and the Northeastern University in Boston. In 2014-2015 he was composer in residence at the Elie Wiesel Center at the Boston University.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Greece, in essence, moved the goal posts further away. Our fear is that they will continue to move the goal posts again, and again, and again.

Target: Greece, in essence, moved the goal posts further away, and our fear is that they will continue to move the goal posts again, and again, and again.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The King may reserve once. If King serves 'foul' a second time, King is 'out'.

Target: The King may reserve once, but if he serves 'foul' a second time, he is 'out'.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Mortaza analysed Bangladesh's performance on the tour. Mortaza noted his concern about the effectiveness of the team's bowling.

Target: Analysing Bangladesh's performance on the tour, Mortaza noted his concern about the effectiveness of the team's bowling.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Eliot's converts often became literate missionaries, who in turn brought Christianity and literacy to others. Within twenty years after Eliot's first printed translations.

Target: Eliot's converts often became literate missionaries, who in turn brought Christianity and literacy to others so that within twenty years after Eliot's first printed translations.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She is the youngest daughter in the family. daughter was also the first daughter of Pattani.

Target: She is the youngest daughter in the family. She was also the first ruler of Pattani.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It is accepted that there is a greater cost involved in the initial setup. Thereafter the performance is in line with the standard loci method.

Target: It is accepted that there is a greater cost involved in the initial setup, but thereafter the performance is in line with the standard loci method.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Collins is tipped off by Detective Ned Broy that the British plan to arrest de Valera and his Cabinet. De Valera forbids anyone to go into hiding, stating that the ensuing public outcry will force their immediate release.

Target: Collins is tipped off by Detective Ned Broy that the British plan to arrest de Valera and his Cabinet. However, de Valera forbids anyone to go into hiding, stating that the ensuing public outcry will force their immediate release.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The film is based on the Nora Roberts novel of the same name. Is part of the Nora Roberts 2009 movie collection, which also includes ; Northern Lights, High Noon, and Tribute.

Target: The film is based on the Nora Roberts novel of the same name. And is part of the Nora Roberts 2009 movie collection, which also includes ; Northern Lights, High Noon, and Tribute.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: King's Brunch (26 Jun 2010) -- Apprentice as regular with Erina Masuda. Regular Mai Demizu was absent on duty

Target: King's Brunch (26 Jun 2010) -- Apprentice as regular with Erina Masuda because regular Mai Demizu was absent on duty


Source: Fix sentence transition: Thousands of miners die from mining accidents each year, especially from underground coal mining. Hard rock mining is not immune from accidents.

Target: Thousands of miners die from mining accidents each year, especially from underground coal mining, although hard rock mining is not immune from accidents.


Source: Make the text more logical: Exterior staircases leading up to second, third, or even fourth-storey apartments are common in many neighbourhoods, in part. Historically this reduced the size of buildings and therefore decreased the owner's property taxes.

Target: Exterior staircases leading up to second, third, or even fourth-storey apartments are common in many neighbourhoods, in part because historically this reduced the size of buildings and therefore decreased the owner's property taxes.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Despite the security restrictions Tamils in Sri Lanka hold small events on 18 May, which they call Mullivaikkal Remembrance Day, to commemorate their dead. Public commemorations are dealt harshly by the Sri Lanka security forces.

Target: Despite the security restrictions Tamils in Sri Lanka hold small events on 18 May, which they call Mullivaikkal Remembrance Day, to commemorate their dead. However, public commemorations are dealt harshly by the Sri Lankan security forces.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Mutt first encountered the half-pint Jeff in 1908. Jeff is an inmate of an insane asylum who shares his passion for horseracing.

Target: Mutt first encountered the half-pint Jeff, an inmate of an insane asylum who shares his passion for horseracing, in 1908.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: It grants credentials in more than 8 allied health specialties. It is an organizational member of the National Organization for Competency Assurance (NOCA).

Target: Granting credentials in more than 8 allied health specialties, it is an organizational member of the National Organization for Competency Assurance (NOCA).


Source: Make the text clearer: 1960 The Autokino Gravenbruch was opened. The Autokino Gravenbruch is europe's first drive-in cinema.

Target: 1960 The Autokino Gravenbruch, Europe's first drive-in cinema, was opened.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The city first suggested the new stadium should be built outside the city, near the local airport. Fans wanted the stadium built within the city.

Target: The city first suggested the new stadium should be built outside the city, near the local airport. However, fans wanted the stadium built within the city.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Several alleged healing miracles and other spiritual experiences took place in his revival meetings. Thousands of Finns converted into Pentecostalism.

Target: Several alleged healing miracles and other spiritual experiences took place in his revival meetings. As a result, thousands of Finns converted into Pentecostalism.


Source: Fix coherence: United States electrical regulations require a 240-volt charging station to be permanently wired. Proper interlock mechanisms are available to ensure the charging current can be safely turned on and off.

Target: United States electrical regulations require a 240-volt charging station to be permanently wired unless proper interlock mechanisms are available to ensure the charging current can be safely turned on and off.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: From this perspective, an object may not recognize the experience of other objects. Objects relate to one another using metaphors of selfhood.

Target: From this perspective, an object may not recognize the experience of other objects because objects relate to one another using metaphors of selfhood.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: How could N10bn be taken out of the national treasury for a project when you were the sitting President. That project was not President's idea?

Target: How could N10bn be taken out of the national treasury for a project when you were the sitting President, yet that project was not your idea?


Source: Make the text more consistent: OMC ensured its industry leadership by constant innovation and improvement to existing products. OMC allocated more than $7 million annually to research and development.

Target: Ensuring its industry leadership by constant innovation and improvement to existing products, OMC allocated more than $7 million annually to research and development.


Source: Fix sentence transition: During the period 1990 -- 2008, city dwellers made up 36.0 % of Pakistan's population, making it the most urbanised nation in South Asia. More than 50 % of Pakistan live in towns of 5,000 people or more.

Target: During the period 1990 -- 2008, city dwellers made up 36.0 % of Pakistan's population, making it the most urbanised nation in South Asia. Furthermore, more than 50 % of Pakistanis live in towns of 5,000 people or more.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The new polling date (exceeding the limit of 90 days following dissolution laid down by the Constitution of Pakistan) was set by the President on 20 July 1988. It was also announced that the elections would be held on a non-party basis.

Target: The new polling date (exceeding the limit of 90 days following dissolution laid down by the Constitution of Pakistan) was set by the President on 20 July 1988. Moreover it was also announced that the elections would be held on a non-party basis.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He lined up these structures in his mind. He was operating at the scale of a tent, but thinking at the scale of a city. '

Target: Lining up these structures in his mind, he was operating at the scale of a tent, but thinking at the scale of a city. '


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Oliver was the starter Friday night in Atlanta. After injuries last year to Harris and Harrington (broken leg in the fourth game), starter was rushed into the starting role.

Target: Oliver was the starter Friday night in Atlanta. After injuries last year to Harris and Harrington (broken leg in the fourth game), Oliver was rushed into the starting role.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Because of this reciprocity of harm, Coase argues that neither party bears sole responsibility for the social harm. Neither party should pay the full cost.

Target: Because of this reciprocity of harm, Coase argues that neither party bears sole responsibility for the social harm, so neither party should pay the full cost.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: More commonly, coarticulation involves secondary articulation of an approximantic nature. Both articulations can be similar such as labialized labial (mw) or palatalized velar (kj).

Target: More commonly, coarticulation involves secondary articulation of an approximantic nature. Then, both articulations can be similar such as labialized labial (mw) or palatalized velar (kj).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Most often, all the brothers are married to a woman. Sometimes the marriage to brothers happens at a later date.

Target: Most often, all the brothers are married to a woman and sometimes the marriage to brothers happens at a later date.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: 1919-Matsuisu Mako commits suicide. 1919-Matsuisu Mako is a Shingeki (western style drama) actress.

Target: 1919-Matsuisu Mako, a Shingeki (western style drama) actress, commits suicide.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is unknown exactly how long after a TBI a person is at higher risk for seizures than the rest of the population. Estimates have suggested lengths of 10 to over 15 years.

Target: It is unknown exactly how long after a TBI a person is at higher risk for seizures than the rest of the population, but estimates have suggested lengths of 10 to over 15 years.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Up until 1999 the bank was owned by the Government of Norway. Then bank was merged with Den norske Bank, now DNB.

Target: Up until 1999 the bank was owned by the Government of Norway, but then it was merged with Den norske Bank, now DNB.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It is mostly nocturnal. Males call during the day from shelters.

Target: It is mostly nocturnal, but males call during the day from shelters.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: There is no information about the secular witnesses of the coronation ; certainly many dignitaries from both Greater Poland and Pomerelia must have arrived. No sources point to the presence of other Piasts rulers in the ceremony.

Target: There is no information about the secular witnesses of the coronation ; certainly many dignitaries from both Greater Poland and Pomerelia must have arrived. Similarly, no sources point to the presence of other Piasts rulers in the ceremony.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It marks the rise of Parisian salons as cultural centres, as literary meeting places and nuclei of discreet liberal resistance to some official policies. In the Parisian salons aristocrats mingled more easily with the higher Bourgeoisie in a new atmosphere of relaxed decorum, comfort and intimacy.

Target: It marks the rise of Parisian salons as cultural centres, as literary meeting places and nuclei of discreet liberal resistance to some official policies. In the Paris salons aristocrats mingled more easily with the higher Bourgeoisie in a new atmosphere of relaxed decorum, comfort and intimacy.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The rainbow's centre is diametrically opposed to the sun's position in the sky. More of the circle comes into view as the sun approaches the horizon, meaning that the largest section of the circle normally seen is about 50 % during sunset or sunrise.

Target: Since the rainbow's centre is diametrically opposed to the sun's position in the sky, more of the circle comes into view as the sun approaches the horizon, meaning that the largest section of the circle normally seen is about 50 % during sunset or sunrise.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He left Benaras. Conditions back home were bad.

Target: He left Benaras because conditions back home were bad.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: However, Foster was not firm on his commitment. Other schools continued to recruit Foster.

Target: However, Foster was not firm on his commitment, so other schools continued to recruit him.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: After the restoration of the Monarchy, Anglicanism was reintroduced also. Many people had found puritan teachings more to their taste and it took many years to re-install an Anglicanism vicar to Whitechapel.

Target: After the restoration of the Monarchy, Anglicanism was reintroduced also. However, many people had found puritan teachings more to their taste and it took many years to re-install an Anglican vicar to Whitechapel.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Manuel now has to decide-will he let his best friend be happy with her Prince Charming. Will Manuel fight for the love that has kept Manuel alive for the last 16 years?

Target: Manuel now has to decide-will he let his best friend be happy with her Prince Charming, or will he fight for the love that has kept him alive for the last 16 years?


Source: Fix sentence transition: Floating logs or rafts of storm-struck vegetation likely would be suitable. Rather chancy and definitely seasonal.

Target: Floating logs or rafts of storm-struck vegetation likely would be suitable, although rather chancy and definitely seasonal.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He oversaw the comic's second and third years in print. He played a large role in nurturing the developing talents of Brian Bolland and Mike McMahon, among others.

Target: Overseeing the comic's second and third years in print, he played a large role in nurturing the developing talents of Brian Bolland and Mike McMahon, among others.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dynamical parallax, uses orbital parameters of visual binaries to measure the mass of the system, and. Use the mass -- luminosity relation to determine the luminosity

Target: Dynamical parallax, uses orbital parameters of visual binaries to measure the mass of the system, and hence use the mass -- luminosity relation to determine the luminosity


Source: Make the text more consistent: Cuba is the largest and most populated island in the Caribbean yet consistently experiences the lowest death tolls during hurricane season. According to United Nations, it's not because island are lucky but because Cuba're prepared.

Target: Cuba is the largest and most populated island in the Caribbean yet consistently experiences the lowest death tolls during hurricane season. According to United Nations, it's not because Cubans are lucky but because they're prepared.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Written information of a charter for the modern town was lost. Evidence suggested that this existed as one of the many properties owned by the Earls of Fife by 1294.

Target: Although written information of a charter for the modern town was lost, evidence suggested that this existed as one of the many properties owned by the Earls of Fife by 1294.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The phrasing of Gordon's movements is uninflected, fluid, tending to slide comfortably through the memory. What you want to pay attention to is the very manner in which these particular interesting figures do whatever it is they are doing.

Target: The phrasing of Gordon's movements is uninflected, fluid, tending to slide comfortably through the memory, so that what you want to pay attention to is the very manner in which these particular interesting figures do whatever it is they are doing.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The results showed that the two groups did not differ in pre-event or post event distress. Those who had undergone debriefing had significantly more disaster-related hyper arousal symptoms.

Target: The results showed that the two groups did not differ in pre-event or post event distress. Furthermore, those who had undergone debriefing had significantly more disaster-related hyper arousal symptoms.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This type of communication is very difficult in remote locations, mostly. Technology does not support rapid back and forth conversations or awareness and repair of ambiguity.

Target: This type of communication is very difficult in remote locations, mostly because technology does not support rapid back and forth conversations or awareness and repair of ambiguity.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Initiated as a nonviolent campaign which would not respond to white violence, in some locations, including Portsmouth Virginia and Chattanooga, Tennessee. Blacks forcefully defended themselves against assaults.

Target: Although initiated as a nonviolent campaign which would not respond to white violence, in some locations, including Portsmouth Virginia and Chattanooga, Tennessee, blacks forcefully defended themselves against assaults.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Once an industrial center. Dockton today is a primarily residential area, with many commuters taking the ferry to nearby Tacoma.

Target: Although once an industrial center, Dockton today is a primarily residential area, with many commuters taking the ferry to nearby Tacoma.


Source: Make the text coherent: He has been an outspoken critic of numerous environmental advocacy groups. From July 2005 to late 2008, critic was the critic of the Australian Environment Foundation, a group that has links to the politically conservative Institute of Public Affairs.

Target: He has been an outspoken critic of numerous environmental advocacy groups. From July 2005 to late 2008, Burke was the Chair of the Australian Environment Foundation, a group that has links to the politically conservative Institute of Public Affairs.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Like all districts of NSW Swimming, its own ACT Championships ;. Unlike many other districts in NSW these are open to teams and competitors from outside the district.

Target: Like all districts of NSW Swimming, its own ACT Championships ; but unlike many other districts in NSW these are open to teams and competitors from outside the district.


Source: Make the text clearer: This allows patients to self-monitor their health conditions and to not rely as much on health care professionals. Patients are more willing to stay on their treatment plans as they are more invested and included in the process, decision-making is shared.

Target: This allows patients to self-monitor their health conditions and to not rely as much on health care professionals. Furthermore, patients are more willing to stay on their treatment plans as they are more invested and included in the process, decision-making is shared.


Source: Fix coherence: Roosevelt increased profits and spending during this period. Roosevelt hoped, would help bring the country out of the Depression.

Target: Increasing profits and spending during this period, Roosevelt hoped, would help bring the country out of the Depression.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Failing to defeating CZW Tag Team Champions brother Russ and Charlie Haas at CZW Xspelled on March 18, 2000. They would however defeat V.D.

Target: Although failing to defeating CZW Tag Team Champions brother Russ and Charlie Haas at CZW Xspelled on March 18, 2000, they would however defeat V.D.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Despite its plethora of would-be shocking moments, the film provides little in the way of genuine scares. Director Zarantonello does provide a visually effective climax.

Target: Despite its plethora of would-be shocking moments, the film provides little in the way of genuine scares, although director Zarantonello does provide a visually effective climax.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Neal ends up drunk, and Harry convinces him to call Mary (Gretchen Mol), his teenaged ex-girlfriend. When Mary sneaks out of Mary's house, Gretchen Mol's mother calls the police, who Neal Neal just as he is about to leave.

Target: Neal ends up drunk, and Harry convinces him to call Mary (Gretchen Mol), his teenaged ex-girlfriend. When Mary sneaks out of her house, her mother calls the police, who arrest Neal just as he is about to leave.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She ponders the inscrutable drawing. She realizes that the black maid, whose name she has forgotten, and whose face she has trouble calling to mind, had hated her.

Target: Pondering the inscrutable drawing, she realizes that the black maid, whose name she has forgotten, and whose face she has trouble calling to mind, had hated her.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Crosland was a member of the Mechanics' Institute, and a patron of the Yorkshire Penny Bank. Crosland was also a member of Huddersfield College, and patron of the Naturalist Society.

Target: Crosland was a member of the Mechanics' Institute, and a patron of the Yorkshire Penny Bank. He was also a proprietor of Huddersfield College, and patron of the Naturalist Society.


Source: Make the text more logical: He eventually, focused more on the art of escapology. Does still perform magic today.

Target: He eventually, focused more on the art of escapology although does still perform magic today.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Tibet: Cry of the Snow Lion is a 2002 documentary film about the Chinese occupation of Tibet. Tibet is narrated by Martin Sheen and Tibet voiceovers are provided by Edward Edwards, Tim Robbins, Susan Sarandon and Shirley Winters.

Target: Tibet: Cry of the Snow Lion is a 2002 documentary film about the Chinese occupation of Tibet. It is narrated by Martin Sheen and Tibetan voiceovers are provided by Edward Edwards, Tim Robbins, Susan Sarandon and Shirley Winters.


Source: Make the text clearer: 16 December: Serious offensive by ISIS forces, with 300 fighters attacking several Kurdish positions north and east of Mosul. Reports on the number of ISIS casualties varied, from 42 dead to hundreds.

Target: 16 December: Serious offensive by ISIS forces, with 300 fighters attacking several Kurdish positions north and east of Mosul. Reports on the number of ISIL casualties varied, from 42 dead to hundreds.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is typically carried out by the girl's mother, with the aim of making the girl less sexually attractive to men and boys. Girl's virginity is preserved girl she can girl's her education.

Target: It is typically carried out by the girl's mother, with the aim of making the girl less sexually attractive to men and boys, so that her virginity is preserved and she can continue her education.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Consummation is defined as full sexual penetration even without any emission or conception. Because of the fact that transgender women do have the ability to have sex, the Court found this argument irrelevant to this case.

Target: Consummation is defined as full sexual penetration even without any emission or conception. And because of the fact that transgender women do have the ability to have sex, the Court found this argument irrelevant to this case.


Source: Make the text more consistent: She deemed her possessions in the east undefendable. She set up headquarters at Hennebont in western Brittany but was driven into Brest and besieged, the siege being broken by the arrival of an English army under the Earl of Northampton at the naval battle of Brest.

Target: Deeming her possessions in the east undefendable, she set up headquarters at Hennebont in western Brittany but was driven into Brest and besieged, the siege being broken by the arrival of an English army under the Earl of Northampton at the naval battle of Brest.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Obj files support higher-order surfaces using several different kinds of interpolation, such as Taylor and B-splines. Support for those features in third party file readers is far from universal.

Target: Obj files support higher-order surfaces using several different kinds of interpolation, such as Taylor and B-splines, although support for those features in third party file readers is far from universal.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This can come about. Future offspring will be equally related to the mother as the current infant.

Target: This can come about because future offspring will be equally related to the mother as the current infant.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: This loophole was exploited by Harold Osborn, among others. High jump equipment was changed to ensure that the bar could be dislodged both backwards and forwards.

Target: This loophole was exploited by Harold Osborn, among others. As a result, high jump equipment was changed to ensure that the bar could be dislodged both backwards and forwards.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: According to Victor Feske, there is too much readiness to accept Butterfield's classic formulation from 1931 as definitive. A study by Keith Sewell, Butterfield and the Interpretation of History, was published in 2005.

Target: According to Victor Feske, there is too much readiness to accept Butterfield's classic formulation from 1931 as definitive. A study by Keith Sewell, Herbert Butterfield and the Interpretation of History, was published in 2005.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Hawken estimated the total number of non-profit organizations around the world to be well over a million. Hawken launched Wiser.org, which stands for the World Index for Social and Environmental Responsibility, as an online directory to help map out the work done by these organizations.

Target: Estimating the total number of non-profit organizations around the world to be well over a million, Hawken launched Wiser.org, which stands for the World Index for Social and Environmental Responsibility, as an online directory to help map out the work done by these organizations.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Queen attendants take care of the queen by feeding and grooming her. Even more important is attendants' incidental role in spreading Queen Mandibular Pheromone (QMP) throughout the hive.

Target: Queen attendants take care of the queen by feeding and grooming her. Yet, even more important is their incidental role in spreading Queen Mandibular Pheromone (QMP) throughout the hive.


Source: Make the text coherent: Although this was an entirely German initiative -- Quisling himself was left unaware of it. Government assistance was provided.

Target: Although this was an entirely German initiative -- Quisling himself was left unaware of it, although government assistance was provided.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Sales of production version was planned in North America in 2008. It did not start until 2009.

Target: Although sales of production version was planned in North America in 2008, it did not start until 2009.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The beam pattern changes its direction continually. Vehicles in front are not being illuminated.

Target: The beam pattern changes its direction continually so that vehicles in front are not being illuminated.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The rear seats have wooden backs. When seats are folded down the trunk looks like the deck of a yacht.

Target: The rear seats have wooden backs, so when they are folded down the trunk looks like the deck of a yacht.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Ath the time the Danish king was involved in several wars, particularly against Sweden and Norwegians were conscripted. Norwegians were Danish Norwegians at the time.

Target: Ath the time the Danish king was involved in several wars, particularly against Sweden and Norwegians were conscripted because they were Danish citizens at the time.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Du Bois Clubs of America 1964. Du Bois Clubs of America are a Conference of Socialist Youth was held in San Francisco over the weekend of March 21 -- 22.

Target: Du Bois Clubs of America, a Conference of Socialist Youth was held in San Francisco over the weekend of March 21 -- 22, 1964.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She erected markers and monuments along old trails and at historic sites, in Waycross and Ware County. Local history would not be forgotten.

Target: She erected markers and monuments along old trails and at historic sites, in Waycross and Ware County so that local history would not be forgotten.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Overall, access to improved water supply in Jamaica stands at 93 %. Access to improved sanitation is currently at 80 %.

Target: Overall, access to improved water supply in Jamaica stands at 93 % and access to improved sanitation is currently at 80 %.


Source: Make the text clearer: While it is true that cats and dogs eat grass, it has nothing to do with the weather and is. Cats and dogs are not exclusively carnivorous.

Target: While it is true that cats and dogs eat grass, it has nothing to do with the weather and is because cats and dogs are not exclusively carnivorous.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This was the first homeopathic hospital for the insane established in New England ;. Such hospitals existed in New York, Michigan, and perhaps other states.

Target: This was the first homeopathic hospital for the insane established in New England ; but such hospitals existed in New York, Michigan, and perhaps other states.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Victoria was a colony in Australia when Western Province was created. From Federation in 1901, Victoria was a state in the Australia.

Target: Victoria was a colony in Australia when Western Province was created. From Federation in 1901, Victoria was a state in the Commonwealth of Australia.


Source: Make the text more logical: The K'iche' tended to place their newly installed ruling elite in a mountain-top fortress securing the population in the valleys below. Substantial portions of the original Mam population remained in place in the plateau area.

Target: The K'iche' tended to place their newly installed ruling elite in a mountain-top fortress securing the population in the valleys below. However, substantial portions of the original Mam population remained in place in the plateau area.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The foreigners dominated Indian Ocean,. As the Mappilas dominated the coastal trade and the trade to Pegu.

Target: The foreigners dominated Indian Ocean, whereas as the Mappilas dominated the coastal trade and the trade to Pegu.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: ^ The dark secrets of Queensland's lesbian vampire killer 11 November 2015. Queensland's lesbian vampire killer is the Courier-Mail.

Target: ^ The dark secrets of Queensland's lesbian vampire killer, The Courier-Mail, 11 November 2015.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Robin spies a bishop and his company. Robin fears being captured and hung.

Target: Spying a bishop and his company, Robin fears being captured and hung.


Source: Make the text coherent: The daughter accuses the beggar of being a nobleman, and when he assures her he is not, she turns him out. We find he is a lord with 24 knights.

Target: The daughter accuses the beggar of being a nobleman, and when he assures her he is not, she turns him out. In the end, we find he is a lord with 24 knights.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Lorraine Hansberry Theatre of San Francisco is named in her honor. San Francisco specializes in original stagings and revivals of African-American theatre.

Target: The Lorraine Hansberry Theatre of San Francisco, which specializes in original stagings and revivals of African-American theatre, is named in her honor.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Newcomer Matthew King offered financial advice and helped organise a mortgage-but wanted more than Louise's business. After pursuing Louise for weeks, Louise and Newcomer began a passionate affair.

Target: Newcomer Matthew King offered financial advice and helped organise a mortgage-but wanted more than Louise's business. After pursuing her for weeks, Louise and Matthew began a passionate affair.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Maine bordered the county of Anjou to the south and the Duchy of Normandy to the north. Maine became a bone of contention between the rulers of these more powerful principalities.

Target: Bordering the county of Anjou to the south and the Duchy of Normandy to the north, Maine became a bone of contention between the rulers of these more powerful principalities.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Females weigh from 295 to 600 g. Males can range from 320 to 715 g.

Target: Females weigh from 295 to 600 g, and males can range from 320 to 715 g.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He fuses Art Nouveau and elements of New Objectivity. He develops a style referred to as expressive realism in respective literature.

Target: Fusing Art Nouveau and elements of New Objectivity, he develops a style referred to as expressive realism in respective literature.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Tilly's big brother Jack has been away on tour with his water polo team. Now Jack is back and Tilly is cooking Jack's favourite food for a slap-up, welcome-home lunch.

Target: Tilly's big brother Jack has been away on tour with his water polo team, but now he is back and Tilly is cooking his favourite food for a slap-up, welcome-home lunch.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They were named by the Advisory Committee on Antarctic Names for John W. McDonough 1962. John W. McDonough is a United States Antarctic Research Program ionospheric physicist at the South Pole Station.

Target: They were named by the Advisory Committee on Antarctic Names for John W. McDonough, a United States Antarctic Research Program ionospheric physicist at the South Pole Station, 1962.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The steel bascule span was purchased by Disney. Is in Orlando at the Disney theme park.

Target: The steel bascule span was purchased by Disney and is in Orlando at the Walt Disney World theme park.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: If Aldridge joined the cast of a show, it invariably meant the injection of an extra dimension of dramatic interest, however modest his role in it. In everything Aldridge did, if never a big name, Aldridge was a Aldridge to Aldridge's fingertips.

Target: If Aldridge joined the cast of a show, it invariably meant the injection of an extra dimension of dramatic interest, however modest his role in it. In everything he did, if never a big name, he was a professional to his fingertips.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The previous coach for the Huskies was Krista Mikesch, who was a former player at Tech. Krista Mikesch was an outstanding player and was an All-American setter from 1993-1996.

Target: The previous coach for the Huskies was Krista Mikesch, who was a former player at Tech. She was an outstanding athlete and was an All-American setter from 1993-1996.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Bates signed professional forms in 1964. Bates made 187 appearances for Leeds scoring nine goals, including one against Juventus in the 2 -- 2 first leg of the Fairs Cup Final of 1971 away in Turin.

Target: Signing professional forms in 1964, Bates made 187 appearances for Leeds scoring nine goals, including one against Juventus in the 2 -- 2 first leg of the Fairs Cup Final of 1971 away in Turin.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The short distance is important because the capillary diffusion rate decreases when the diffusion distance increases. Because of its large number (10-14 million capillaries), there is an incredible amount of surface area for exchange.

Target: The short distance is important because the capillary diffusion rate decreases when the diffusion distance increases. Then, because of its large number (10-14 million capillaries), there is an incredible amount of surface area for exchange.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Benmergui left the show in May 1992 to become host of Friday Night! with Benmergui, and was succeeded by Kevin Newman in the fall.

Target: Benmergui left the show in May 1992 to become host of Friday Night! with Ralph Benmergui, and was succeeded by Kevin Newman in the fall.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On April 14, 2009, Farris released SHOUT! Live, as Farris, featuring the McCrary Sisters.

Target: On April 14, 2009, Farris released SHOUT! Live, as Mike Farris & the Roseland Rhythm Revue, featuring the McCrary Sisters.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Patriots proclaimed the short-lived Batavian Republic. Government was soon returned to stabler and more experienced hands.

Target: The Patriots proclaimed the short-lived Batavian Republic, but government was soon returned to stabler and more experienced hands.


Source: Make the text coherent: He contemplated a return to Romania as a soldier or a monk. He was on a continuous search for effective antidepressants, medicating himself with passion flower extract, and, eventually, with methamphetamine.

Target: Contemplating a return to Romania as a soldier or a monk, he was on a continuous search for effective antidepressants, medicating himself with passion flower extract, and, eventually, with methamphetamine.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Writing in the 12th century, Abraham ibn Ezra observed that there were over a thousand divine commandments in the Bible. Fewer than 300 applied to Abraham ibn Ezra's time.

Target: Writing in the 12th century, Abraham ibn Ezra observed that there were over a thousand divine commandments in the Bible, but fewer than 300 applied to his time.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: What is distinct from conventional single-mode chromatography is that the secondary interactions in MMC can not be too weak. Thus interactions also contribute to the retention of the solutes.

Target: What is distinct from conventional single-mode chromatography is that the secondary interactions in MMC can not be too weak, and thus they also contribute to the retention of the solutes.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: He subsequently proceeded to Baptist Academy for his high school education and left Baptist Academic in 1956 as the best graduating student,. Earning the honour of his name been listed on the school's DUX BOARD.

Target: He subsequently proceeded to Baptist Academy for his high school education and left Baptist Academic in 1956 as the best graduating student, hence earning the honour of his name been listed on the school's DUX BOARD.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The system can also process the data upon ingestion, if the data format requires it. Even very large file repositories can be efficiently analyzed, as only the required data is processed in the database.

Target: The system can also process the data upon ingestion, if the data format requires it. As a result, even very large file repositories can be efficiently analyzed, as only the required data is processed in the database.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In 2002, a law was passed that enabled Mongolian Army and police forces to conduct UN-backed and other international peacekeeping missions abroad. In August 2003, Mongolian contributed troops to the Iraq War as part of the Multi-National Force -- Iraq.

Target: In 2002, a law was passed that enabled Mongolian Army and police forces to conduct UN-backed and other international peacekeeping missions abroad. In August 2003, Mongolia contributed troops to the Iraq War as part of the Multi-National Force -- Iraq.


Source: Make the text more logical: I was not convinced to change my name. Finally, I have changed my name to M.G.

Target: I was not convinced to change my name but finally, I have changed my name to M.G.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Delighted Sergeant McGing (Alun Armstrong) has dreamed of a good murder for years. Someone's ahead of him.

Target: Delighted Sergeant McGing (Alun Armstrong) has dreamed of a good murder for years. But someone's ahead of him.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: She had keen interest in music and began singing for Radio Pakistan in the early 1950s. Insufficient money from the radio took her to the film director, Anwar Kamal Pasha in 1955.

Target: She had keen interest in music and began singing for Radio Pakistan in the early 1950s. However, insufficient money from the radio took her to the film director, Anwar Kamal Pasha in 1955.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: My childhood I have always preferred to be alone and independent. That is how I always lived.

Target: Since my childhood I have always preferred to be alone and independent, that is how I always lived.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The excess produce is sold to private buyers at usually lower prices as compared to FRA floor prices. Prices generally are determined by the market forces of supply and demand.

Target: The excess produce is sold to private buyers at usually lower prices as compared to FRA floor prices. However, prices generally are determined by the market forces of supply and demand.


Source: Make the text clearer: Taylor showcased the film-making talents he refined while working in post-production. Taylor started directing short works in 2003, including viral web videos, spec commercials, indie music videos, and a short film.

Target: Showcasing the film-making talents he refined while working in post-production, Taylor started directing short works in 2003, including viral web videos, spec commercials, indie music videos, and a short film.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The nonlinearity is due to convective acceleration, which is an acceleration associated with the change in velocity over position. Any convective flow, whether turbulent or not, will involve nonlinearity.

Target: The nonlinearity is due to convective acceleration, which is an acceleration associated with the change in velocity over position. Hence, any convective flow, whether turbulent or not, will involve nonlinearity.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It was also the first collaboration between Rundgren and Michele Gray, a singer and ex-model who helped organize the sessions. singer sang background vocals, both on the record and on subsequent tours, and the pair later married.

Target: It was also the first collaboration between Rundgren and Michele Gray, a singer and ex-model who helped organize the sessions. Gray sang background vocals, both on the record and on subsequent tours, and the pair later married.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Brown was not elevated to elective office post-war. His was an influential voice.

Target: Although Brown was not elevated to elective office post-war, his was an influential voice.


Source: Fix sentence flow: - He says he's losing business. Customers are afraid to come downtown.

Target: - He says he's losing business because customers are afraid to come downtown.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Another route is also available. Another route is a trail leading to the platform on the side of the ski jump.

Target: Another route, a trail leading to the platform on the side of the ski jump, is also available.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He served in this capacity as Speaker of the house 1983. Speaker of the house is a tenure that ended on October 5.

Target: He served in this capacity as Speaker of the house, a tenure that ended on October 5, 1983.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Starting with OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena as well. OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena is a port of Compiz called Ecomorph has been available for 3D effects.

Target: Starting with OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena, a port of Compiz called Ecomorph has been available for 3D effects, as well.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Ozhukarai is a legislative assembly constituency in the Union territory of Puducherry in India. assembly constituency assembly constituency was part of Puducherry (Lok Sabha Puducherry).

Target: Ozhukarai is a legislative assembly constituency in the Union territory of Puducherry in India. Ozhukarai assembly constituency was part of Puducherry (Lok Sabha constituency).


Source: Make the text more coherent: Suhrawardy was elected leader of the opposition in the second Constituent Assembly and in 1956 was appointed prime minister, a further loss for the Muslim League. Suhrawardy was the first Muslim League Suhrawardy to hold this position.

Target: Suhrawardy was elected leader of the opposition in the second Constituent Assembly and in 1956 was appointed prime minister, a further loss for the Muslim League because he was the first non-Muslim League politician to hold this position.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Palmerston Park was first opened in 1919, when Queen of the South were formed. Football had been played on the site since the 1870s.

Target: Palmerston Park was first opened in 1919, when Queen of the South were formed, although football had been played on the site since the 1870s.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In Bremen, candidates of the Social Democratic Party (Sozialdemokratische Partei Deutschlands, SPD) and The Left (Die Linke) launched a boycott against the project. Right-wing candidates had not been excluded.

Target: In Bremen, candidates of the Social Democratic Party (Sozialdemokratische Partei Deutschlands, SPD) and The Left (Die Linke) launched a boycott against the project because right-wing candidates had not been excluded.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The cast was announced on April 4, 2007. Filming started in May 2007.

Target: The cast was announced on April 4, 2007 and filming started in May 2007.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Their head capsules show great similarities to millipedes: both have three pairs of mouthparts and the genital openings occur in the anterior part of the body. Both groups have a pupoid phase at the end of the embryonic development.

Target: Their head capsules show great similarities to millipedes: both have three pairs of mouthparts and the genital openings occur in the anterior part of the body. Moreover, both groups have a pupoid phase at the end of the embryonic development.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In 1635, he applied for and got from the Viceroy of New Spain marquis de Cerralvo a license to explore California, a territory that. Located within the borders of the Spanish Empire was unknown whether it was an island or peninsula.

Target: In 1635, he applied for and got from the Viceroy of New Spain marquis de Cerralvo a license to explore California, a territory that although located within the borders of the Spanish Empire was unknown whether it was an island or peninsula.


Source: Make the text more logical: At least 1985, with the Compuserve Books & Writer's Forum. Writers have formed writing spaces online where they can discuss writing, share resources, and critique work.

Target: Since at least 1985, with the Compuserve Books & Writer's Forum, writers have formed writing spaces online where they can discuss writing, share resources, and critique work.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The islands were sparsely inhabited by fishermen for centuries. Tourism now accounts for most economic activity.

Target: The islands were sparsely inhabited by fishermen for centuries, although tourism now accounts for most economic activity.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: I like Joan of Arc best of all my books ;. Joan of Arc is the Joan of Arc ; I know Joan of Arc perfectly well.

Target: I like Joan of Arc best of all my books ; and it is the best ; I know it perfectly well.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In this way humans are able to feel as if they have control over situations that they can not control. Rather than treating the object as an object.

Target: In this way humans are able to feel as if they have control over situations that they can not control because rather than treating the object as an object.


Source: Make the text coherent: The locality's name is an Aboriginal word. Place of land and water where the tortoise goes.

Target: The locality's name is an Aboriginal word meaning place of land and water where the tortoise goes.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A mysterious stranger bequeaths to Calderon a magic lantern that transforms him into the dashing contender Calano. Questions about Calderon's identity put Calderon's possible victory and the love of the beautiful princess in jeopardy.

Target: A mysterious stranger bequeaths to Calderon a magic lantern that transforms him into the dashing contender Calano, but questions about his identity put Calderon's possible victory and the love of the beautiful princess in jeopardy.


Source: Make the text more logical: Dawson revisited the site on several occasions. Dawson found further fragments of the skull and took them to Arthur Smith Woodward, keeper of the geological department at the British Museum.

Target: Revisiting the site on several occasions, Dawson found further fragments of the skull and took them to Arthur Smith Woodward, keeper of the geological department at the British Museum.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The ratios for third gear and fourth gear were set. Third was used for most of the circuit.

Target: The ratios for third gear and fourth gear were set so that third was used for most of the circuit.


Source: Make the text more consistent: After the armistice, paratrooper units were officially disbanded. Training jumps were performed from time to time in North Africa.

Target: After the armistice, paratrooper units were officially disbanded, although training jumps were performed from time to time in North Africa.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Power Pill Fist (Ken Fec) is an Atari noise rock artist from Pittsburgh, PA. Power Pill Fist was the Ken Fec for the experimental band Black Moth Super Rainbow from its beginnings in 1999 to 2009.

Target: Power Pill Fist (Ken Fec) is an Atari noise rock artist from Pittsburgh, PA. He was the bassist for the experimental band Black Moth Super Rainbow from its beginnings in 1999 to 2009.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Whilst their advice is used in the decision making process by other government bodies, the majority do not actually have any executive power to make such decisions themselves. When they have more authority their value is seen to be higher.

Target: Whilst their advice is used in the decision making process by other government bodies, the majority do not actually have any executive power to make such decisions themselves. Hence, when they have more authority their value is seen to be higher.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The onset of the financial crisis in 2008. Estimates suggest that the number of PPP deals closed has fallen more than 40 percent.

Target: Since the onset of the financial crisis in 2008, estimates suggest that the number of PPP deals closed has fallen more than 40 percent.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In Boston, a court ruled the schedule and convenience of other passengers meant that efforts to minimize station dwell time were justified. Physically packing passengers on trains was not mentioned.

Target: In Boston, a court ruled the schedule and convenience of other passengers meant that efforts to minimize station dwell time were justified, although physically packing passengers on trains was not mentioned.


Source: Make the text more logical: Observation of cone bending is used to determine when a kiln has reached a desired state. Small cones or bars can be arranged to mechanically trigger kiln controls when the temperature rises enough for them to deform.

Target: Observation of cone bending is used to determine when a kiln has reached a desired state. Additionally, small cones or bars can be arranged to mechanically trigger kiln controls when the temperature rises enough for them to deform.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 1931 the Rigi -- Scheidegg Railway was closed. Scheidegg Railway had never been electrified.

Target: In 1931 the Rigi -- Scheidegg Railway, which had never been electrified, was closed.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In his early work on animal subjects, Sperry made many noteworthy discoveries. The results of these studies over the next thirty years later led to Sperry being awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 1981.

Target: In his early work on animal subjects, Sperry made many noteworthy discoveries. The results of these studies over the next thirty years later led to Roger Sperry being awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 1981.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Secondly even Kiesling's own players did not like him so asking the Eagles players to like him was too much to ask. Neale took advantage when Kiesling was delayed en route to camp, which was held at St. Joseph's College in Eagles.

Target: Secondly even Kiesling's own players did not like him so asking the Eagles players to like him was too much to ask. However Neale took advantage when Kiesling was delayed en route to camp, which was held at St. Joseph's College in Philadelphia.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The state of the terrain is classified as satisfactory. Parts of it are used for forestry

Target: The state of the terrain is classified as satisfactory, because parts of it are used for forestry


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: I'm world champion. World champion'm going to be the same person, world champion'll be playing in all the tournaments and hopefully world champion'll be a good role model as world champion.

Target: I'm world champion but I'm going to be the same person, I'll be playing in all the tournaments and hopefully I'll be a good role model as world champion.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Claims that Sweeney Todd was a historical person are strongly disputed by scholars. Possible legendary prototypes exist.

Target: Claims that Sweeney Todd was a historical person are strongly disputed by scholars, although possible legendary prototypes exist.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In two books, Peter Haining argued that Sweeney Todd was a historical figure who committed his crimes around 1800. Other researchers who have tried to verify Sweeney Todd's citations find nothing in these sources to Peter Haining Haining's claims.

Target: In two books, Peter Haining argued that Sweeney Todd was a historical figure who committed his crimes around 1800. Nevertheless, other researchers who have tried to verify his citations find nothing in these sources to back Haining's claims.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Water in natural pools has many desirable characteristics. Red eyes, dried-out skin and hair, and bleached bathing suits associated with overly chlorinated water are naturally absent in natural pools.

Target: Water in natural pools has many desirable characteristics. For example, red eyes, dried-out skin and hair, and bleached bathing suits associated with overly chlorinated water are naturally absent in natural pools.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: While still in Puerto Rico, his mother studied under Juan Boria, an acclaimed poet and performer who was inspired by Afro-Caribbean culture. This early exposure introduced him to the world of Puerto Rico poetry that he later infiltrated.

Target: While still in Puerto Rico, his mother studied under Juan Boria, an acclaimed poet and performer who was inspired by Afro-Caribbean culture. This early exposure introduced him to the world of Puerto Rican poetry that he later infiltrated.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Bill and Corky would love to know what the Strawberry Surprise is. First they have to pick the strawberries.

Target: Bill and Corky would love to know what the Strawberry Surprise is but first they have to pick the strawberries.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Romney's campaign later clarified that he would not sign. Language in the pledge made the assertion that African American children born into slavery in 1860 were better off than children raised today.

Target: Romney's campaign later clarified that he would not sign because language in the pledge made the assertion that African American children born into slavery in 1860 were better off than children raised today.


Source: Fix coherence: Chisholm soon returns to Scotland (in section five, The Return) and asks Bishop Anselm Mealey for an appointment in his home town. Bishop refuses it and assigns Chisholm to another town.

Target: Chisholm soon returns to Scotland (in section five, The Return) and asks Bishop Anselm Mealey for an appointment in his home town, but Bishop Mealey refuses it and assigns Father Chisholm to another town.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: At Metacritic The Sum of All Fears received a score of 45 based on 35 reviews. Metacritic assigns a weighted average out of 100 to critics' reviews.

Target: At Metacritic, which assigns a weighted average out of 100 to critics' reviews, The Sum of All Fears received a score of 45 based on 35 reviews.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Working-class people from both communities suffered from poor housing and unemployment. Catholics were significantly more likely to live in crowded and generally inadequate housing and to lack jobs.

Target: Although working-class people from both communities suffered from poor housing and unemployment, Catholics were significantly more likely to live in crowded and generally inadequate housing and to lack jobs.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As of 2007, providers are predominantly universities and their individual researchers. Federal laboratories and for-profit organizations are also encouraged to contribute.

Target: As of 2007, providers are predominantly universities and their individual researchers, although federal laboratories and for-profit organizations are also encouraged to contribute.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Arcadie is formed. Arcadie is the first homosexual group in France.

Target: Arcadie, the first homosexual group in France, is formed.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Because of its sheltered location, Todd Lake has distinct thermal stratification levels within its water column. Water below 15 feet (4.6 m) in depth remains extremely cold even during the summer.

Target: Because of its sheltered location, Todd Lake has distinct thermal stratification levels within its water column. As a result, water below 15 feet (4.6 m) in depth remains extremely cold even during the summer.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Kornheiser, Tony (2002). I'm Back for More Cash: A Kornheiser, Tony collection (Because You Can't Take Two Hundred Newspapers Into the Bathroom).

Target: Kornheiser, Tony (2002). I'm Back for More Cash: A Tony Kornheiser collection (Because You Can't Take Two Hundred Newspapers Into the Bathroom).


Source: Fix sentence transition: Experiments use this technique. Experiments have been able to demonstrate the creation, transport and statistics of the anyons.

Target: Using this technique, experiments have been able to demonstrate the creation, transport and statistics of the anyons.


Source: Fix coherence errors: These conditions give the model translational invariance, which is useful for analytic study. Experimental realization requires open boundary conditions, allowing the system to be embedded on a 2D surface.

Target: These conditions give the model translational invariance, which is useful for analytic study. However, experimental realization requires open boundary conditions, allowing the system to be embedded on a 2D surface.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Lyndon branched out on his own. Lyndon signed a 15 title deal with Capcom to bring numerous coin-op games to the Commodore 64 and new IBM PC platforms.

Target: Branching out on his own, Lyndon signed a 15 title deal with Capcom to bring numerous coin-op games to the Commodore 64 and new IBM PC platforms.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Initially under command of the Southern Expeditionary Army Group 1944. The Southern Expeditionary Army Group is the IJA 29th Army was transferred to the Japanese Seventh Area Army on March 27.

Target: Initially under command of the Southern Expeditionary Army Group, the IJA 29th Army was transferred to the Japanese Seventh Area Army on March 27, 1944.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Danylo moved his capital from Halych to Kholm. Danylo's son Lev capital it to Lviv.

Target: Danylo moved his capital from Halych to Kholm, and his son Lev moved it to Lviv.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The club was accepted into the Southern League Premier Division for the 2014 -- 15 season on 19 June 2014. Financial worries continue, including a winding-up petition started by Martin Foyle, who resigned as Manager in March 2014.

Target: The club was accepted into the Southern League Premier Division for the 2014 -- 15 season on 19 June 2014. However financial worries continue, including a winding-up petition started by Martin Foyle, who resigned as Manager in March 2014.


Source: Make the text clearer: Fleury was a peace-loving man who intended to keep France out of war. Circumstances presented themselves that made this impossible.

Target: Fleury was a peace-loving man who intended to keep France out of war, but circumstances presented themselves that made this impossible.


Source: Make the text more logical: Iceland is legally bound to implement into its own law all EU directives applicable to the free movement of goods, persons, services and capital. This is complemented by regular meetings between EU and Iceland officials, including a twice-yearly meeting of EEA foreign ministers.

Target: Iceland is legally bound to implement into its own law all EU directives applicable to the free movement of goods, persons, services and capital. This is complemented by regular meetings between EU and Icelandic officials, including a twice-yearly meeting of EEA foreign ministers.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It was a twin-engined, low-wing monoplane that first flew in 1935. monoplane was the monoplane of the Ilyushin Il-4 (originally designated DB-3F).

Target: It was a twin-engined, low-wing monoplane that first flew in 1935. It was the precursor of the Ilyushin Il-4 (originally designated DB-3F).


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Those universities now have their own clinical schools. Imperial accepts students who have completed the first three pre-clinical years at the University of Oxford or the University of Cambridge.

Target: Although those universities now have their own clinical schools, Imperial accepts students who have completed the first three pre-clinical years at the University of Oxford or the University of Cambridge.


Source: Fix coherence errors: IOCG deposits tend to accumulate within iron-rich rocks such as banded iron formations, iron schists, etcetera. Iron enrichment of siliciclastic rocks by metasomatism is also recognised within some areas.

Target: IOCG deposits tend to accumulate within iron-rich rocks such as banded iron formations, iron schists, etcetera, although iron enrichment of siliciclastic rocks by metasomatism is also recognised within some areas.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This historical intersection is significant. Al-Dawa was widely viewed as a terrorist group during the Iran.

Target: This historical intersection is significant because al-Dawa was widely viewed as a terrorist group during the Iran.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He was sent to a maximum-security prison run by the Political Security Office. Authorities argued with the United States over the substantial $5 million reward.

Target: He was sent to a maximum-security prison run by the Political Security Office, while authorities argued with the United States over the substantial $5 million reward.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: You were in high positions. You remained a humble brother to us all.

Target: You were in high positions, yet you remained a humble brother to us all.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Thought to be thrifty. He died penniless.

Target: Although thought to be thrifty, he died penniless.


Source: Make the text coherent: Jordan Graham (born 5 March 1995) is an English professional footballer who plays for Wolverhampton Wanderers as a winger. footballer has represented both England and the Republic of Ireland at youth level.

Target: Jordan Graham (born 5 March 1995) is an English professional footballer who plays for Wolverhampton Wanderers as a winger. Graham has represented both England and the Republic of Ireland at youth level.


Source: Make the text clearer: Later he attended two preparatory colleges (equivalent to today's high school) before going to Leland College where he graduated in 1901 with a bachelor's degree. Leland College is a historically black college.

Target: Later he attended two preparatory colleges (equivalent to today's high school) before going to Leland College, a historically black college, where he graduated in 1901 with a bachelor's degree.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: All published editions are accessible in the site archive. Almost every edition is available as a PDF-Download.

Target: All published editions are accessible in the site archive and almost every edition is available as a PDF-Download.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Kansas relays were founded by John H. Outland in 1923. John H. Outland is the head football coach at the University of Kansas.

Target: The Kansas relays were founded by John H. Outland, the head football coach at the University of Kansas, in 1923.


Source: Fix coherence: Far-fetched. This corresponds to announcements by the Russian Space Agency that according to a lunar mission study, using the Soyuz, a landing on the Moon could be achieved within the next decade.

Target: Although far-fetched, this corresponds to announcements by the Russian Space Agency that according to a lunar mission study, using the Soyuz, a landing on the Moon could be achieved within the next decade.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Like the contemporary murals in the funerary art of the Egyptians, certain conventions were utilized that also assisted prediction. Male figures are shown with darker or redder skin than female figures.

Target: Like the contemporary murals in the funerary art of the Egyptians, certain conventions were utilized that also assisted prediction. For example, male figures are shown with darker or redder skin than female figures.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Despite his popularity at the polls, Taylor often found himself mired in controversy. An exhaustive 1928 inquiry into allegations of corruption in the police department and city hall revealed that Taylor had associations with known vice operators in the city.

Target: Despite his popularity at the polls, Taylor often found himself mired in controversy. In particular, an exhaustive 1928 inquiry into allegations of corruption in the police department and city hall revealed that he had associations with known vice operators in the city.


Source: Fix sentence transition: With ideal components there is no need to use resistors in the design of lattice filters. Practical considerations of properties of real components leads to resistors being incorporated.

Target: With ideal components there is no need to use resistors in the design of lattice filters. However, practical considerations of properties of real components leads to resistors being incorporated.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He accumulates more than 40 caps in total. He is the most capped England youth player of all-time.

Target: Accumulating more than 40 caps in total, he is the most capped England youth player of all-time.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Chufan grieves, and unable to trust Irene. Chufan ends their relationship.

Target: Grieving, and unable to trust Irene, Chufan ends their relationship.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He is paired with Neil Manson was on a temporary transfer to MIT. Neil Manson at the time.

Target: He is paired with Neil Manson, who at the time, was on a temporary transfer to MIT.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In season five, Bonnie is resurrected --. Every supernatural who dies has to go through Bonnie to the afterlife, thus Bonnie feels the pain of their deaths.

Target: In season five, Bonnie is resurrected -- but every supernatural who dies has to go through her to the afterlife, thus she feels the pain of their deaths.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Coffee was first introduced to the Islands by Chief Boki in 1825. Chief Boki is the Governor of Oahu.

Target: Coffee was first introduced to the Islands by Chief Boki, the Governor of Oahu, in 1825.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Divine fallacy (argument from incredulity) -- arguing that. Something is so incredible or amazing.

Target: Divine fallacy (argument from incredulity) -- arguing that, because something is so incredible or amazing.


Source: Make the text more logical: Bruce John Dickinson went on to teach at, and manage, The Academy of Contemporary Music in Guildford, Surrey. John Dickinson is now the Bruce of the Brighton Institute of Modern Music which he set up with former Angels manager, Kevin Nixon.

Target: Bruce John Dickinson went on to teach at, and manage, The Academy of Contemporary Music in Guildford, Surrey. He is now the Managing Director of the Brighton Institute of Modern Music which he set up with former Angels manager, Kevin Nixon.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: CE Tauri is classified as a pulsating variable. Observations using the same equipment and wavelengths have not detected significant changes in the angular diameter over time.

Target: Although CE Tauri is classified as a pulsating variable, observations using the same equipment and wavelengths have not detected significant changes in the angular diameter over time.


Source: Make the text clearer: 125th Regiment of Foot created in 1794 and disbanded in 1796 125th Regiment of Foot is an infantry regiment of the British Army.

Target: 125th Regiment of Foot, an infantry regiment of the British Army, created in 1794 and disbanded in 1796


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Cardinals win the game 7 -- 5 and are the World Champions. The Boyer brothers, Ken for Cardinals and Clete for the Yankees, homer in Cardinals' last World Series appearance, a first in major league history.

Target: The Cardinals win the game 7 -- 5 and are the World Champions. The Boyer brothers, Ken for St. Louis and Clete for the Yankees, homer in their last World Series appearance, a first in major league history.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It affected all the major stock markets in the world, particularly the United Kingdom. It was one of the worst stock market downturns in modern history.

Target: Affecting all the major stock markets in the world, particularly the United Kingdom, it was one of the worst stock market downturns in modern history.


Source: Fix coherence errors: An FIA hearing into the matter took place on 26 July 2007. Did not result in any penalty for McLaren, however a second hearing took place on 13 September 2007, and by then in receipt of compelling evidence resulted in several penalties for the team.

Target: An FIA hearing into the matter took place on 26 July 2007 but did not result in any penalty for McLaren, however a second hearing took place on 13 September 2007, and by then in receipt of compelling evidence resulted in several penalties for the team.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Who befitting a largely defensive game, the MVP was Vandy punter Upson. Who averaged 42.6 yards on his nine punts.

Target: Befitting a largely defensive game, the MVP was Vandy punter Upson, who averaged 42.6 yards on his nine punts.


Source: Make the text coherent: No. 12 seed Wisconsin upset # 5 seed Florida St. 61 -- 59 in OT. Down 31 -- 19 at the half, the Wisconsin' Jason Bohannon made a three-point jumper to give Wisconsin the lead with 45 seconds left in regulation.

Target: No. 12 seed Wisconsin upset # 5 seed Florida St. 61 -- 59 in OT. Down 31 -- 19 at the half, the Badgers' Jason Bohannon made a three-point jumper to give Wisconsin the lead with 45 seconds left in regulation.