Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The complex mental coordination involved with dancing activates both sensory and motor circuits. When one dances, one's brain is both stimulated by the sound of the music and by the dance movements themselves.

Target: The complex mental coordination involved with dancing activates both sensory and motor circuits. Therefore, when one dances, one's brain is both stimulated by the sound of the music and by the dance movements themselves.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Benefits of Cultural dance Physical activity has many physical and mental health outcomes. Physical inactivity continues to be common.

Target: Benefits of Cultural dance Physical activity has many physical and mental health outcomes. However, physical inactivity continues to be common.


Source: Make the text clearer: Indonesian folk dances are often relatively free from strict rules nor disciplines. Certain style of gestures.

Target: Indonesian folk dances are often relatively free from strict rules nor disciplines, although certain style of gestures.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Danforth Avenue, named. Danforth Avenue was created to connect Toronto to Danforth Avenue.

Target: Danforth Avenue, named because it was created to connect Toronto to Danforth Road.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Scarlet volunteers to represent the organisation. Scarlet leaves in a Spectrum Jet.

Target: Volunteering to represent the organisation, Scarlet leaves in a Spectrum Jet.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: At started the last event in Monza as second overall. An accident caused by his team-mate Castellacci at the first corner forced him to retire after a few hundred meters.

Target: At started the last event in Monza as second overall but an accident caused by his team-mate Castellacci at the first corner forced him to retire after a few hundred meters.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: McCullers weighed in at 352 lb (160 kg). McCullers was the heaviest player at an NFL Combine since Terrence Cody in 2010.

Target: Weighing in at 352 lb (160 kg), McCullers was the heaviest player at an NFL Combine since Terrence Cody in 2010.


Source: Fix coherence errors: McCullers lacked the grades to enroll at a Division I school. McCullers played his freshman and sophomore seasons at Georgia Military College.

Target: Lacking the grades to enroll at a Division I school, McCullers played his freshman and sophomore seasons at Georgia Military College.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Mudd holds a B.A. degree in American history from the University of Virginia and an M.P.A. from the John F. Kennedy School of Government at Harvard University. Mudd was an Mudd in the United States Marine Corps and was decorated for Mudd's combat service in Beirut.

Target: Mudd holds a B.A. degree in American history from the University of Virginia and an M.P.A. from the John F. Kennedy School of Government at Harvard University. Mudd was an Officer in the United States Marine Corps and was decorated for his combat service in Beirut.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: A fast and smart runner, from 1900 to 1904 he averaged 30.2 stolen bases in each season, with a career-high 35 in 1902. Before the 1906 season he suffered a throwing arm injury and was outrighted to the American Association.

Target: A fast and smart runner, from 1900 to 1904 he averaged 30.2 stolen bases in each season, with a career-high 35 in 1902. Then, before the 1906 season he suffered a throwing arm injury and was outrighted to the American Association.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He was also a member of the Bismarck Blaze, Iowa Barnstormers, Bismarck Roughriders, Utah Warriors and Billings Outlaws. member is member of Exclusive Insurance Brokerage, a life insurance general agency located in Thousand Oaks, California.

Target: He was also a member of the Bismarck Blaze, Iowa Barnstormers, Bismarck Roughriders, Utah Warriors and Billings Outlaws. He is president of Exclusive Insurance Brokerage, a life insurance general agency located in Thousand Oaks, California.


Source: Make the text coherent: He spent several days with the Flames, but was returned to Abbotsford without seeing action. He was again recalled to Flames on February 16, replacing Leland Irving as the backup goaltender to Joey MacDonald.

Target: He spent several days with the Flames, but was returned to Abbotsford without seeing action. However, he was again recalled to Calgary on February 16, replacing Leland Irving as the backup goaltender to Joey MacDonald.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This is called Weaving. If he isn't looking for a particular effect or if he wishes to draw on an aspect he is not as familiar with, he may Unleash -- call upon the pure possibility of the Mists.

Target: This is called Weaving. Or, if he isn't looking for a particular effect or if he wishes to draw on an aspect he is not as familiar with, he may Unleash -- call upon the pure possibility of the Mists.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Although both dark matter and ordinary matter are matter, they do not behave in the same way. In the early universe, ordinary matter was ionized and interacted strongly with radiation via Thomson scattering.

Target: Although both dark matter and ordinary matter are matter, they do not behave in the same way. In particular, in the early universe, ordinary matter was ionized and interacted strongly with radiation via Thomson scattering.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: From the X-ray energy spectrum and flux, the gas temperature and density can be estimated,. Giving the pressure.

Target: From the X-ray energy spectrum and flux, the gas temperature and density can be estimated, hence giving the pressure.


Source: Make the text coherent: Its presence is implied in a variety of astrophysical observations, including gravitational effects that can not be explained. More matter is present than can be seen.

Target: Its presence is implied in a variety of astrophysical observations, including gravitational effects that can not be explained unless more matter is present than can be seen.


Source: Make the text coherent: Dark matter provides a solution to this problem because it is unaffected by radiation. Its density perturbations can grow first.

Target: Dark matter provides a solution to this problem because it is unaffected by radiation. Therefore, its density perturbations can grow first.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Ordinary matter is affected by radiation, which is the dominant element of the universe at very early times. Matter's density perturbations are washed out and unable to condense into structure.

Target: Ordinary matter is affected by radiation, which is the dominant element of the universe at very early times. As a result, its density perturbations are washed out and unable to condense into structure.


Source: Fix coherence: The Energetic Gamma Ray Experiment Telescope observed more gamma rays in 2008 than expected from the Milky Way. Scientists concluded that this was most likely due to incorrect estimation of the telescope's sensitivity.

Target: The Energetic Gamma Ray Experiment Telescope observed more gamma rays in 2008 than expected from the Milky Way, but scientists concluded that this was most likely due to incorrect estimation of the telescope's sensitivity.


Source: Make the text clearer: The sides are protected. All of the diffusion occurs parallel to the length of the rod.

Target: The sides are protected, so that all of the diffusion occurs parallel to the length of the rod.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Hannah addressed the book primarily to Anglicans. Hannah attempted to demonstrate that Freemasonry was incompatible with Christianity in general and avoided discussion of Masonic conspiracies.

Target: Addressing the book primarily to Anglicans, Hannah attempted to demonstrate that Freemasonry was incompatible with Christianity in general and avoided discussion of Masonic conspiracies.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The earthenware objects obtained in the first floor are simple. Some flint blades and carved stones have been discovered there as well.

Target: The earthenware objects obtained in the first floor are simple. Moreover, some flint blades and carved stones have been discovered there as well.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Sambell worked with Farnham into the 1970s where the artist branched out into TV series and stage musicals. Sambell was Farnham's best Sambell at Sambell's wedding to Jillian Billman, a former musical theatre dancer, in April 1973.

Target: Sambell worked with Farnham into the 1970s where the artist branched out into TV series and stage musicals. Sambell was Farnham's best man at his wedding to Jillian Billman, a former musical theatre dancer, in April 1973.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Dauntesey was himself from West Lavington, the son of John Dauntesey. When Dauntesey died in April 1542, Dauntesey left money in Dauntesey's will dated 10 March 1542 for the founding of the School.

Target: Dauntesey was himself from West Lavington, the son of John Dauntesey, and when he died in April 1542, he left money in his will dated 10 March 1542 for the founding of the School.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Matthews and Reynolds met in Charlottesville, Virginia, while Matthews was a bartender at Miller's. Reynolds encouraged bartender' musical growth.

Target: Matthews and Reynolds met in Charlottesville, Virginia, while Matthews was a bartender at Miller's. Reynolds encouraged Matthews' musical growth.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: A new beginning seemed on the horizon when Campbell was signed on a non-contract basis by Kenny Swain for Wigan Athletic in August 1994. With Kenny Swain dismissed with just a month of the season gone, Campbell found himself released in October after just seven games.

Target: A new beginning seemed on the horizon when Campbell was signed on a non-contract basis by Kenny Swain for Wigan Athletic in August 1994, but with Swain dismissed with just a month of the season gone, Campbell found himself released in October after just seven games.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Salazar adhered to his belief that first time offenders should not be thrown together with hard-core violators. Salazar ordered Assistant Warden Horacia Herrera to transfer a 19 year old boy named Lovelady, to the intermediate correctional unit at Los Lunas.

Target: Adhering to his belief that first time offenders should not be thrown together with hard-core violators, Salazar ordered Assistant Warden Horacia Herrera to transfer a 19 year old boy named Lovelady, to the intermediate correctional unit at Los Lunas.


Source: Make the text clearer: Shortly after Dubinsky was elected to the International Executive Board Benjamin Schlesinger resigned. The International Executive Board Benjamin Schlesinger is the International's President.

Target: Shortly after Dubinsky was elected to the International Executive Board Benjamin Schlesinger, the International's President, resigned.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Some of his work may be described as dark humour. Much of it is simply experimental.

Target: Some of his work may be described as dark humour, while much of it is simply experimental.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: They commanded a troop of tanks in an attack on the ridge, an important target in the push toward Rimini. They came under heave machine-gun and anti-tank fire, holding their advance up and causing heavy casualties.

Target: Commanding a troop of tanks in an attack on the ridge, an important target in the push toward Rimini, they came under heave machine-gun and anti-tank fire, holding their advance up and causing heavy casualties.


Source: Fix coherence: He was born in Rhymney, Glamorgan. His nickname was Roxy the media got it wrong and he would often be referred to as Rocky or David Rocky Jones.

Target: He was born in Rhymney, Glamorgan and although his nickname was Roxy the media got it wrong and he would often be referred to as Rocky or David Rocky Jones.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Supporters pointed out they were centred on long-term development goals. Detractors criticized the pace of change.

Target: Supporters pointed out they were centred on long-term development goals, while detractors criticized the pace of change.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: To put pressure on the Harper government to come up with its one-third share of the cost, Miller and Premier Dalton McGuinty made an announcement in Thunder Bay to fund the new streetcars. Federal Transport Minister John Baird rejected the request outright.

Target: To put pressure on the Harper government to come up with its one-third share of the cost, Miller and Premier Dalton McGuinty made an announcement in Thunder Bay to fund the new streetcars. However, federal Transport Minister John Baird rejected the request outright.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: After the outbreak of the Second World War Murray-Lyon returned to India and was given command of the Zhob Brigade in 1940. The Zhob Brigade is a regionally based command.

Target: After the outbreak of the Second World War Murray-Lyon returned to India and was given command of the Zhob Brigade, a regionally based command, in 1940.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Following his undergraduate education, he attended New York University to study Medieval music with Gustave Reese. After receiving an MA in musicology at New York University, he attended Yale University, where he received an MMA and a DMA in composition.

Target: Following his undergraduate education, he attended New York University to study Medieval music with Gustave Reese. After receiving an MA in musicology at NYU, he attended Yale University, where he received an MMA and a DMA in composition.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Not primarily a medical researcher. He has published in the medical literature.

Target: Although not primarily a medical researcher, he has published in the medical literature.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Rainey followed Winick's encouragement to the audience to get involved in fighting the AIDS epidemic, and his statement that Zamora's recent death made his decision to attend the reunion difficult. Rainey claimed that he too used his time to help AIDS patients.

Target: Following Winick's encouragement to the audience to get involved in fighting the AIDS epidemic, and his statement that Zamora's recent death made his decision to attend the reunion difficult, Rainey claimed that he too used his time to help AIDS patients.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He listened to the recorded song of a hermit thrush. He heard structure that reminded him of a Miles Davis solo.

Target: Listening to the recorded song of a hermit thrush, he heard structure that reminded him of a Miles Davis solo.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In 2000, the Israeli Consulate in New York City honored Ushery for his dedicated reporting. In 2010, Ushery was honored as a recipient of McDonald's Faces of Black History Award.

Target: In 2000, the Israeli Consulate in New York City honored Ushery for his dedicated reporting. And in 2010, Ushery was honored as a recipient of McDonald's Faces of Black History Award.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: David was a son of Nicholas de la Haye. David succeeded to David's grandfather Gilbert de la Hay's titles son David's father died at the battle of Dupplin Moor on 10 -- 11 August 1332.

Target: David was a son of Nicholas de la Haye. He succeeded to his grandfather Gilbert de la Hay's titles after David's father died at the battle of Dupplin Moor on 10 -- 11 August 1332.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Note: Author says it happened before the Second pledge at al-Aqabah which happened in 622. This event happened in 621

Target: Note: Author says it happened before the Second pledge at al-Aqabah which happened in 622. Therefore this event happened in 621


Source: Make the text more logical: Isma'ilis, in many ways, can be seen as the pioneers of the organized Muslim missionary activities: their highly institutionalized and sophisticated da'wa structure has hardly been repeated until today. For the Isma'ilis, da'wa was a state priority.

Target: Isma'ilis, in many ways, can be seen as the pioneers of the organized Muslim missionary activities: their highly institutionalized and sophisticated da'wa structure has hardly been repeated until today. Moreover, for the Isma'ilis, da'wa was a state priority.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Mus ` ab ibn ` Umair was the first Muslim envoy in September 621. Mus ` ab ibn ` Umair was sent to Yathrib (now Medina) to teach the people the doctrines of Muslim and give them guidance.

Target: Mus ` ab ibn ` Umair was the first Muslim envoy in September 621. He was sent to Yathrib (now Medina) to teach the people the doctrines of Islam and give them guidance.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Never shown on-screen. Victor returned to Salem in 2007 with his parents and brothers.

Target: Although never shown on-screen, Victor returned to Salem in 2007 with his parents and brothers.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It wasn't Susan, however. Actually Kristen posing as Susan without anyone else knowing.

Target: It wasn't Susan, however, but actually Kristen posing as Susan without anyone else knowing.


Source: Make the text coherent: It is where the famous Dazu Rock Carvings is located. The famous Dazu Rock Carvings are a UNESCO World Heritage Site.

Target: It is where the famous Dazu Rock Carvings, a UNESCO World Heritage Site, is located.


Source: Fix coherence: God sent punishments in this state also, but not so many as in the first state. God sent in this state in order to help the mankind Bernard of Clairvaux, Francis of Assisi and Dominic of Guzman.

Target: God sent punishments in this state also, but not so many as in the first state. Moreover God sent in this state in order to help the mankind Bernard of Clairvaux, Francis of Assisi and Dominic of Guzman.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: When their area is enturbulated. We want to locate a suppressive, we can always consult our DEAD FILE for possible candidates and then investigate and issue an order.

Target: When their area is enturbulated or we want to locate a suppressive, we can always consult our DEAD FILE for possible candidates and then investigate and issue an order.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Chan later meets the love of his life, Ho-yau (Jiang Yiyan), and spent his sweetest times with her. Good times do not as long as Chan was being hunted down for drug trafficking.

Target: Chan later meets the love of his life, Ho-yau (Jiang Yiyan), and spent his sweetest times with her. However, good times do not as long as Chan was being hunted down for drug trafficking.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Death Eaters, as a group, first appeared in the novel Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Individual members of the group.

Target: The Death Eaters, as a group, first appeared in the novel Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, although individual members of the group.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This value is in the denominator of the decay correcting fraction. Value is the value as multiplying the numerator by value's inverse (1 0.3546 (\\ displaystyle (1 \\ over 0.3546) )), which is 2.82.

Target: This value is in the denominator of the decay correcting fraction, so it is the same as multiplying the numerator by its inverse (1 0.3546 (\\ displaystyle (1 \\ over 0.3546) )), which is 2.82.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: By 1960 there were more whites living in the city's suburbs than the city itself. There were very few African-Americans in the suburbs.

Target: By 1960 there were more whites living in the city's suburbs than the city itself. On the other hand, there were very few African-Americans in the suburbs.


Source: Make the text clearer: DPI allows the operators to oversell their available bandwidth while ensuring equitable bandwidth distribution to all users by preventing network congestion. A higher priority can be allocated to a VoIP or video conferencing call which requires low latency versus web browsing which does not.

Target: DPI allows the operators to oversell their available bandwidth while ensuring equitable bandwidth distribution to all users by preventing network congestion. Additionally, a higher priority can be allocated to a VoIP or video conferencing call which requires low latency versus web browsing which does not.


Source: Fix coherence: The primary responsibility of the nose tackle in this scheme is to absorb multiple blockers. Other players in the defensive front can attack ball carriers and rush the quarterback.

Target: The primary responsibility of the nose tackle in this scheme is to absorb multiple blockers so that other players in the defensive front can attack ball carriers and rush the quarterback.


Source: Make the text coherent: Mia believes that her junior year will begin on a positive note when she is scouted by a top model agency and befriends a new student. Trouble is in paradise when Mia learns the dark side of the modeling world.

Target: Mia believes that her junior year will begin on a positive note when she is scouted by a top model agency and befriends a new student. But trouble is in paradise when Mia learns the dark side of the modeling world.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Boulevard after civil rights leader Martin Luther King Jr. Local merchants opposed the renaming.

Target: Boulevard after civil rights leader Martin Luther King Jr. However, local merchants opposed the renaming.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Members beginned in 1922. Members went camping with children from the Martha Stichting children's home in Alphen aan den Rijn and later with other groups like refugee children from East Germany.

Target: Beginning in 1922, members went camping with children from the Martha Stichting children's home in Alphen aan den Rijn and later with other groups like refugee children from East Germany.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Eggs Benedict were also said to have originated at Delmonico's. Others claim that dish as well.

Target: Eggs Benedict were also said to have originated at Delmonico's, although others claim that dish as well.


Source: Make the text more logical: By the 1940s Tucci was able to purchase the entire building. Delmonico's in the Tucci era was open through 1986 with its final closure of the Greenwich, Connecticut, location after the death of Tucci's son Mario Tucci.

Target: By the 1940s Tucci was able to purchase the entire building. Delmonico's in the Tucci era was open through 1986 with its final closure of the Greenwich, Connecticut, location after the death of Oscar Tucci's son Mario Tucci.


Source: Make the text more logical: The enzyme from the marine microalga Thalassiosira pseudonana desaturates palmitic acid 16: 0 to 16: 1Delta11,. That from the leafroller moth Choristoneura rosaceana desaturates myristic acid 14.

Target: The enzyme from the marine microalga Thalassiosira pseudonana desaturates palmitic acid 16: 0 to 16: 1Delta11, whereas that from the leafroller moth Choristoneura rosaceana desaturates myristic acid 14.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The existence of a delta neutral portfolio was shown as part of the original proof of the Black -- Scholes model, the first comprehensive model to produce correct prices for some classes of options. See Black -- Scholes: Derivation.

Target: The existence of a delta neutral portfolio was shown as part of the original proof of the Black -- Scholes model, the first comprehensive model to produce correct prices for some classes of options. See Black-Scholes: Derivation.


Source: Make the text more coherent: And to show whether or not this is a monopolist market. The opponents of the amendments stated that the bill attacks Delyan Peesvki's rivals because it requires disclosure of all sources of financing of media organizations other than the proceeds from advertising and bank loans.

Target: And to show whether or not this is a monopolist market. Yet, the opponents of the amendments stated that the bill attacks Delyan Peesvki's rivals because it requires disclosure of all sources of financing of media organizations other than the proceeds from advertising and bank loans.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The FDPC responded by abducting 26 people from both countries, including a Polish priest, in an effort to pressure Cameroon's government to release Miskine. In November 2014, the FDPC released FDPC's hostages Cameroon Cameroon Miskine Miskine.

Target: The FDPC responded by abducting 26 people from both countries, including a Polish priest, in an effort to pressure Cameroon's government to release Miskine. In November 2014, the FDPC released its hostages and Cameroon released Miskine.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Subsequent waves of immigration followed the Six-Day War, when some Moroccan and Tunisian Jews settled in France. By 1968, North African Jews were about 500,000 and the majority in France.

Target: Subsequent waves of immigration followed the Six-Day War, when some Moroccan and Tunisian Jews settled in France. Hence, by 1968, North African Jews were about 500,000 and the majority in France.


Source: Make the text coherent: Nor would his son, NBA center Joakim Noah. His mother was Miss Sweden.

Target: Nor would his son, NBA center Joakim Noah, because his mother was Miss Sweden.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: After World War II, the French fertility rate rebounded considerably, as noted above. Economic growth in French was so high that new immigrants had to be brought into the country.

Target: After World War II, the French fertility rate rebounded considerably, as noted above, but economic growth in France was so high that new immigrants had to be brought into the country.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Half-African tennis player Yannick Noah would not be tested because his mother was white. Half-African tennis player Yannick Noah won the French Open in 1983.

Target: half-African tennis player Yannick Noah, who won the French Open in 1983, would not be tested because his mother was white.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Although Nicaragua has no official religion it is nominally Roman Catholic. Practicing Roman Catholic are no longer the majority and are declining while evangelical Protestant groups and Mormons are growing rapidly have been growing since the 1990s.

Target: Although Nicaragua has no official religion it is nominally Roman Catholic. Practicing Roman Catholics are no longer the majority and are declining while evangelical Protestant groups and Mormons are growing rapidly have been growing since the 1990s.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Mestizos (who are a mix of Native American and white) make up about 69 % of the population. Whites make up 17 %.

Target: Mestizos (who are a mix of Native American and white) make up about 69 % of the population, while whites make up 17 %.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Outnumbered and poorly equipped. Soldiers in several parts of the country offered resistance ; most notably the Royal Guard in Copenhagen and units in South Jutland.

Target: Although outnumbered and poorly equipped, soldiers in several parts of the country offered resistance ; most notably the Royal Guard in Copenhagen and units in South Jutland.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They continually refused to enter a customs and currency union with Germany. Danes were concerned both about the negative economic effects of the Germany proposals, as well as the political ones.

Target: They continually refused to enter a customs and currency union with Germany. Danes were concerned both about the negative economic effects of the German proposals, as well as the political ones.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As steel cools, excess oxygen can cause blowholes or precipitate FeO. Several strategies have been developed for deoxidation.

Target: As steel cools, excess oxygen can cause blowholes or precipitate FeO. Therefore, several strategies have been developed for deoxidation.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Killed steel is steel that has been completely deoxidized by the addition of an agent before casting. There is practically no evolution of gas during solidification.

Target: Killed steel is steel that has been completely deoxidized by the addition of an agent before casting, so that there is practically no evolution of gas during solidification.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Deacon's interest in photography started at a very early age. Instead of pursuing photography Deacon decided to attend university and study politics, a field that Deacon's mother had been very interested and active within, with her involved with the United Council of Aboriginal Women.

Target: Deacon's interest in photography started at a very early age. However instead of pursuing photography Deacon decided to attend university and study politics, a field that her mother had been very interested and active within, with her involved with the United Council of Aboriginal Women.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Foreigners can become members for an annual fee. Members are of different categories such as life members, general members, honorary members, special members, and officers of the defense forces.

Target: Foreigners can become members for an annual fee. However, members are of different categories such as life members, general members, honorary members, special members, and officers of the defense forces.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Dialysis can be used to either introduce or remove small molecules from a sample. Small molecules move freely across the membrane in both directions.

Target: Dialysis can be used to either introduce or remove small molecules from a sample, because small molecules move freely across the membrane in both directions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She calls me Aberdeen. 'Carmel Snow said,' You're going to work with her.

Target: She calls me Aberdeen. 'And Carmel Snow said,' You're going to work with her.


Source: Make the text clearer: However, after the destruction of the second Intersect this order was rescinded. Because Operation Bartowski was the only effective weapon against CIA splinter group Fulcrum, Beckman decided that Chuck was far too important and valuable a resource to be released.

Target: However, after the destruction of the second Intersect this order was rescinded. Additionally, because Operation Bartowski was the only effective weapon against CIA splinter group Fulcrum, Beckman decided that Chuck was far too important and valuable a resource to be released.


Source: Fix coherence: In their reactions with metal complexes, diazonium cations behave similarly to NO. Low-valent metal complexes add with diazonium salts.

Target: In their reactions with metal complexes, diazonium cations behave similarly to NO. For example, low-valent metal complexes add with diazonium salts.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This problem occurs. Patients do not have the red cone cells in the retina.

Target: This problem occurs because patients do not have the red cone cells in the retina.


Source: Make the text more logical: He replaced the injured Arthur Wolstenholme for the FA Cup match against Manchester City. He opened the scoring with a header, but City won 3 -- 1.

Target: Replacing the injured Arthur Wolstenholme for the FA Cup match against Manchester City, he opened the scoring with a header, but City won 3 -- 1.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Reported doubtful for the replay. He did appear, pressuring goalkeeper Arnold Birch into conceding a corner from which Darlington took the lead -- the goal variously attributed to George Stevens or to Healey himself.

Target: Although reported doubtful for the replay, he did appear, pressuring goalkeeper Arnold Birch into conceding a corner from which Darlington took the lead -- the goal variously attributed to George Stevens or to Healey himself.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He was the unsuccessful Republican gubernatorial nominee in the nationally Democratic year of 1974. A conservative, nominee was allied with the Ronald W. Reagan political faction in Wyoming.

Target: He was the unsuccessful Republican gubernatorial nominee in the nationally Democratic year of 1974. A conservative, Jones was allied with the Ronald W. Reagan political faction in Wyoming.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In 1949 Kasack was awarded the Fontane Prize of the city of Berlin for this work. Kasack was the first Kasack of this prize.

Target: In 1949 Kasack was awarded the Fontane Prize of the city of Berlin for this work. He was the first recipient of this prize.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Arria became aware of the expropriation threat. Arria took photos of the farm and the cattle and posted them on the Internet, including the one used here.

Target: Becoming aware of the expropriation threat, Arria took photos of the farm and the cattle and posted them on the Internet, including the one used here.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: After a string of victories on home soil, Chaves fought obtained the WBO Latino light middleweight after defeating Brazilian fighter Uilian Santana Barauna. Chaves made only one defense of this title before winning the vacant WBO Latino welterweight title against another boxer from Brazilian, Daniel Saboia.

Target: After a string of victories on home soil, Chaves fought obtained the WBO Latino light middleweight after defeating Brazilian fighter Uilian Santana Barauna. Chaves made only one defense of this title before winning the vacant WBO Latino welterweight title against another boxer from Brazil, Daniel Saboia.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Saitou is the first Tamer that Tsurugi battles in the Terminal. Tsurugi's Digimon Partner is a Greymon larger Tsurugi Tsurugi's.

Target: Saitou is the first Tamer that Tsurugi battles in the Terminal. His Digimon Partner is a Greymon larger than Tsurugi's.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The digital economy refers to an economy that is based on digital technologies. We increasingly perceive this as conducting business through markets based on the internet and the World Wide Web.

Target: The digital economy refers to an economy that is based on digital technologies, although we increasingly perceive this as conducting business through markets based on the internet and the World Wide Web.


Source: Fix sentence transition: When information is embodied in atoms, there is a need for all sorts of industrial-age means and huge corporations for delivery. Suddenly, when the focus shifts to bits, the traditional big guys are no longer needed.

Target: When information is embodied in atoms, there is a need for all sorts of industrial-age means and huge corporations for delivery. But suddenly, when the focus shifts to bits, the traditional big guys are no longer needed.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Most yields harvested in the fall were lower in protein, but application of nitrogen 3 weeks before grazing increased digestible crude protein and consumption rates. Though D. eriantha can be stored quite easily, it loses crude protein over time.

Target: Most yields harvested in the fall were lower in protein, but application of nitrogen 3 weeks before grazing increased digestible crude protein and consumption rates. Therefore, though D. eriantha can be stored quite easily, it loses crude protein over time.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: They consist of practices that human beings should not be subjected to, regardless of whether subjective humiliation is involved, such as selling oneself to slavery. When a state authority deliberately puts prisoners in inhuman living conditions.

Target: They consist of practices that human beings should not be subjected to, regardless of whether subjective humiliation is involved, such as selling oneself to slavery, or when a state authority deliberately puts prisoners in inhuman living conditions.


Source: Fix coherence: Involuntary poverty is unusual among violations of human dignity. Poverty is usually the poverty of acts of omission rather than acts of commission.

Target: Involuntary poverty is unusual among violations of human dignity because it is usually the result of acts of omission rather than acts of commission.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Rohan holds auditions to select the best players, but when Veera goes to audition, she is not allowed to enter. Players have to be male.

Target: Rohan holds auditions to select the best players, but when Veera goes to audition, she is not allowed to enter because players have to be male.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Diminuendo was released in 1987 in Scotland on Nightshift Records, an independent music record label. Diminuendo was Lowlife's second Diminuendo.

Target: Diminuendo was released in 1987 in Scotland on Nightshift Records, an independent music record label. It was Lowlife's second album.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: That dingoes showed aggressive behaviour towards humans seemed to be similarly likely during different times of the year. Adult dingoes might be more dangerous during the breeding season, and female dingoes especially when they raise their pups.

Target: That dingoes showed aggressive behaviour towards humans seemed to be similarly likely during different times of the year. However, adult dingoes might be more dangerous during the breeding season, and female dingoes especially when they raise their pups.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Furthermore, some humans do not realise how adaptive and quick dingoes are. Humans do not remain attentive enough.

Target: Furthermore, some humans do not realise how adaptive and quick dingoes are. Therefore, humans do not remain attentive enough.


Source: Make the text coherent: Charles preceded his release from Blackpool. Charles joined Conference North side AFC Fylde on a one-year deal.

Target: Preceding his release from Blackpool, Charles joined Conference North side AFC Fylde on a one-year deal.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The ability to suppress is to be found particularly in childhood when the brain is still developing. Those with childhood strabismus almost never complain of diplopia while adults who develop strabismus almost always do.

Target: The ability to suppress is to be found particularly in childhood when the brain is still developing. Thus, those with childhood strabismus almost never complain of diplopia while adults who develop strabismus almost always do.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Though Dipu does not complain this to anybody, instead he contemplates to punish Tarique himself. One day a small adventure atop a high water tank changes his feelings towards Tarique.

Target: Though Dipu does not complain this to anybody, instead he contemplates to punish Tarique himself. But one day a small adventure atop a high water tank changes his feelings towards Tarique.


Source: Fix coherence: The original version of Direct2D was tied to DirectX 11 (In hardware, up to Direct3D 10.1 is used.),. This version of Direct2D integrates with DirectX 11.1.

Target: The original version of Direct2D was tied to DirectX 11 (In hardware, up to Direct3D 10.1 is used.), whereas this version of Direct2D integrates with DirectX 11.1.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The direct image functor is left exact, but usually not right exact. One can consider the right derived functors of the direct image.

Target: The direct image functor is left exact, but usually not right exact. Hence one can consider the right derived functors of the direct image.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Note also that in the standard LDA model, the words are completely observed, and. We never need to resample them.

Target: Note also that in the standard LDA model, the words are completely observed, and hence we never need to resample them.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Note, critically, however, that the definition above specifies only the unnormalized conditional probability of the words, while the topic conditional probability requires the actual (i.e. normalized) probability. We have to normalize by summing over all word symbols :

Target: Note, critically, however, that the definition above specifies only the unnormalized conditional probability of the words, while the topic conditional probability requires the actual (i.e. normalized) probability. Hence we have to normalize by summing over all word symbols :


Source: Make the text clearer: Marilyn's mood lifted somewhat when they went to the party. Then, Gauthier continued, after talking to a friend of Marilyn Marilyn suddenly became anxious, as if that conversation had revived an unpleasant memory, and Marilyn asked to go home.

Target: Marilyn's mood lifted somewhat when they went to the party, but then, Gauthier continued, after talking to a friend of hers Marilyn suddenly became anxious, as if that conversation had revived an unpleasant memory, and she asked to go home.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Also, his description is in great contrast with Paris, where he had spent many years previous to writing this discourse, and which he had left bitterly. His description of Geneva is in part a statement against Paris.

Target: Also, his description is in great contrast with Paris, where he had spent many years previous to writing this discourse, and which he had left bitterly. Thus, his description of Geneva is in part a statement against Paris.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Human being lacks reason. This is not a discursive reasoning, but more akin to the neurological account of mirror neurons.

Target: Since human being lacks reason, this is not a discursive reasoning, but more akin to the neurological account of mirror neurons.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He does acknowledge, however that while under some circumstances constructivist-based approaches may be beneficial, pure discovery learning lacks structure in nature and. Will not be beneficial for the learner.

Target: He does acknowledge, however that while under some circumstances constructivist-based approaches may be beneficial, pure discovery learning lacks structure in nature and hence will not be beneficial for the learner.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: You can live in a bubble, and you're probably not going to get a disease. You can play in the mud and the dirt, and you're probably not going to get a disease either, because you get immune to it.

Target: You can live in a bubble, and you're probably not going to get a disease. But you can play in the mud and the dirt, and you're probably not going to get a disease either, because you get immune to it.


Source: Fix coherence: But you can play in the mud and the dirt, and you're probably not going to get a disease either. You get immune to it.

Target: But you can play in the mud and the dirt, and you're probably not going to get a disease either, because you get immune to it.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: However, there are many interesting special cases that are decidable. It is possible to reason about the behaviour of a network of finite-state machines.

Target: However, there are many interesting special cases that are decidable. In particular, it is possible to reason about the behaviour of a network of finite-state machines.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Again, the graph G is encoded as a string. Multiple computers can access the same string in parallel.

Target: Again, the graph G is encoded as a string. However, multiple computers can access the same string in parallel.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The series had Divine perform at Toronto's Rex Hotel. The series featured 20 Toronto artists.

Target: The series, which featured 20 Toronto artists, had Divine perform at Toronto's Rex Hotel.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: As previously noted, divinities are closely related to the transcendent force (s) or power (s) credited to them, so much. In some cases the powers or forces may themselves be invoked independently.

Target: As previously noted, divinities are closely related to the transcendent force (s) or power (s) credited to them, so much so that in some cases the powers or forces may themselves be invoked independently.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Soviet Union developed the concept of the specialized artillery division during the Eastern Front of the Second World War in 1942. Plans were in place since the later stages of the Russian Civil War.

Target: The Soviet Union developed the concept of the specialized artillery division during the Eastern Front of the Second World War in 1942, although plans were in place since the later stages of the Russian Civil War.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He rounded first base. He pulled his hamstring.

Target: Rounding first base, he pulled his hamstring.


Source: Make the text more logical: Medvedev responded to this. Medvedev met with the Chairman of the Central Election Commission of Russia, Vladimir Churov, and called for moderation in the use of administrative resources.

Target: Responding to this, Medvedev met with the Chairman of the Central Election Commission of Russia, Vladimir Churov, and called for moderation in the use of administrative resources.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: However, after the correction for the alleged falsification factor, Medvedev still came out as the winner. With 63 % of the vote instead of 70 %.

Target: However, after the correction for the alleged falsification factor, Medvedev still came out as the winner although with 63 % of the vote instead of 70 %.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Russian constitution clearly apportions the majority of power to the President. Speculation arose over the question of whether it was Medvedev or Prime Minister Vladimir Putin who actually wielded the most power.

Target: Although the Russian constitution clearly apportions the majority of power to the President, speculation arose over the question of whether it was Medvedev or Prime Minister Vladimir Putin who actually wielded the most power.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In June 1996, Medvedev's colleague Vladimir Putin was brought into the Russian presidential administration. Three years later, on 16 August 1999, Medvedev became Prime Minister of Russian.

Target: In June 1996, Medvedev's colleague Vladimir Putin was brought into the Russian presidential administration. Three years later, on 16 August 1999, he became Prime Minister of Russia.


Source: Make the text coherent: The program covers a whole range of home improvement projects where each step is outlined. Viewers can carry out the task themselves around their own home.

Target: The program covers a whole range of home improvement projects where each step is outlined so that viewers can carry out the task themselves around their own home.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Do It All Night (album) or the title song All Night (album) is a 1978 album by Curtis Mayfield.

Target: Do It All Night (album), a 1978 album by Curtis Mayfield, or the title song


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The song is an ode to sex, and Prince exclaims that he wants to do it all night. The ode opens with a simple keyboard hook before a prominent bass guitar kicks in, along with rhythm guitar and live drums.

Target: The song is an ode to sex, and Prince exclaims that he wants to do it all night. The song opens with a simple keyboard hook before a prominent bass guitar kicks in, along with rhythm guitar and live drums.


Source: Make the text coherent: DocBook provides schema files for popular XML schema languages. Any XML editor that can provide content completion based on a schema can do so for DocBook.

Target: DocBook provides schema files for popular XML schema languages, so any XML editor that can provide content completion based on a schema can do so for DocBook.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It also used the Dumgoyne Peak and Loch Lomond as supposedly local backdrops. These are not close to Auchtermuchty.

Target: It also used the Dumgoyne Peak and Loch Lomond as supposedly local backdrops although these are not close to Auchtermuchty.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Dodge kept the end of production onto consideration. Dodge announced several special edition Vipers for the 2010 model year :

Target: Keeping the end of production onto consideration, Dodge announced several special edition Vipers for the 2010 model year :


Source: Make the text more coherent: There is little protection afforded from elements moving from aft to fore. Since the boat is usually moving forward or anchored by the bow and therefore facing into the wind this is seldom a problem.

Target: There is little protection afforded from elements moving from aft to fore, but since the boat is usually moving forward or anchored by the bow and therefore facing into the wind this is seldom a problem.


Source: Make the text more logical: She explains that The Queen is in trouble. At the next ball The Queen is expected to wear a diamond necklace presented to the Duke of Buckingham.

Target: She explains that The Queen is in trouble, because at the next ball she is expected to wear a diamond necklace presented to the Duke of Buckingham.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He gets his friends involved, who help rescue her. Not before Doiby serves time as a court jester.

Target: He gets his friends involved, who help rescue her but not before Doiby serves time as a court jester.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Dolichols are found in eukaryotes and in archaea. Similar polyprenols molecules are found in bacteria.

Target: Dolichols are found in eukaryotes and in archaea, although similar polyprenols molecules are found in bacteria.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Dolichol phosphate was discovered at the University of Liverpool in the 1960s. Researchers did not know Dolichol phosphate's function at the time of discovery.

Target: Dolichol phosphate was discovered at the University of Liverpool in the 1960s, although researchers did not know its function at the time of discovery.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He was a monk at the Hilandar Monastery and a contemporary of Saint Sava. Monk accompanied Saint Sava when the latter visited the Holy Land.

Target: He was a monk at the Hilandar Monastery and a contemporary of Saint Sava. In fact, he accompanied St. Sava when the latter visited the Holy Land.


Source: Make the text clearer: 20th century music either consciously used functional harmony. Was entirely free of V chords while jazz and popular musics continued to use functional harmony including V chords.

Target: 20th century music either consciously used functional harmony or was entirely free of V chords while jazz and popular musics continued to use functional harmony including V chords.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He studied law and arts at the University of Adelaide. He became very active in political organisations, joining the University Socialist Club, Fabian Society, the Student Representative Council and the Theatre Group.

Target: Studying law and arts at the University of Adelaide, he became very active in political organisations, joining the University Socialist Club, Fabian Society, the Student Representative Council and the Theatre Group.


Source: Make the text coherent: Dunstan's father was a shop manager for the Morris Hedstrom chain in Fiji. From an early age Dunstan was educated in Australia, and grew up as part of the Adelaide establishment.

Target: Dunstan's father was a shop manager for the Morris Hedstrom chain in Fiji. However, from an early age Don was educated in Australia, and grew up as part of the Adelaide establishment.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The three of them had an Open the Triangle Gate title run. Upon losing the belts, K-ness stepped back into a lower card role in the promotion while Fujii and Mochi have been focusing on representing Dragon Gate in other promotions.

Target: The three of them had an Open the Triangle Gate title run, but upon losing the belts, K-ness stepped back into a lower card role in the promotion while Fujii and Mochi have been focusing on representing Dragon Gate in other promotions.


Source: Make the text more logical: Evidently he feels that. Children can't protect or defend themselves.

Target: Evidently he feels that, while children can't protect or defend themselves.


Source: Make the text coherent: Lamb: (sarcastically) Is there anyone in particular you'd like me to arrest. Should I just round up the sons of the most important families in town?

Target: Lamb: (sarcastically) Is there anyone in particular you'd like me to arrest, or should I just round up the sons of the most important families in town?


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Richardsons were considering leaving the area. To keep them there, the Sawi people in the embattled villages came together and decided that they would make peace with their hated enemies.

Target: The Richardsons were considering leaving the area, so to keep them there, the Sawi people in the embattled villages came together and decided that they would make peace with their hated enemies.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Sharp followed it with a spy spoof for Towers starring Tony Randall. Towers is our Man in Marrakesh (1966).

Target: Sharp followed it with a spy spoof for Towers, Our Man in Marrakesh (1966), starring Tony Randall.


Source: Fix coherence: Campbell applied the BVSR principle to the evolution of knowledge. Campbell founded the domain of evolutionary epistemology.

Target: Applying the BVSR principle to the evolution of knowledge, Campbell founded the domain of evolutionary epistemology.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Very rarely was Chinese culture integrated into the education of the girls in the home. There was a strict curriculum of English, Christianity and western housekeeping skills.

Target: Very rarely was Chinese culture integrated into the education of the girls in the home. Instead, there was a strict curriculum of English, Christianity and western housekeeping skills.


Source: Make the text clearer: Singer Brad Dunnells is the only American to ever win the award. Singer Brad Dunnells wrote the song.

Target: Singer Brad Dunnells, who wrote the song, is the only American to ever win the award.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Finally, on their college graduation night, Donna and David had sex and decided to move in together, causing a rift with her mother over this decision. When David forged a check using Donna's name, Donna broke up with David once again.

Target: Finally, on their college graduation night, Donna and David had sex and decided to move in together, causing a rift with her mother over this decision. But when David forged a check using Donna's name, Donna broke up with him once again.


Source: Fix coherence errors: David cheated on Donna the next summer, but he apologized. At the senior prom, Donna agreed to have sex with David, but was then caught drinking and Donna's punishment disrupted their plans.

Target: David cheated on Donna the next summer, but he apologized. Finally, at the senior prom, Donna agreed to have sex with David, but was then caught drinking and her punishment disrupted their plans.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The novel was developed into a movie of the same name released in 1928. Which starred Florence Vidor and Gary Cooper.

Target: The novel was developed into a movie of the same name released in 1928 and which starred Florence Vidor and Gary Cooper.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Boccolacci scored three wins across both series. Boccolacci finished runner-up in the Eurocup standings and third overall in NEC.

Target: Scoring three wins across both series, Boccolacci finished runner-up in the Eurocup standings and third overall in NEC.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: After completing the game, she reported the news to the press. She received a couple of letters from him in August from a hospital in Italy, explaining that he had not been identified for that time and was presumed dead.

Target: After completing the game, she reported the news to the press. Then, she received a couple of letters from him in August from a hospital in Italy, explaining that he had not been identified for that time and was presumed dead.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In contrast to the combination of the coxed pair, in which the distribution of the riggers means the forces are staggered alternately along the boat, the symmetrical forces in sculling make the boat more efficient. So the double scull is faster than the coxless pair.

Target: In contrast to the combination of the coxed pair, in which the distribution of the riggers means the forces are staggered alternately along the boat, the symmetrical forces in sculling make the boat more efficient and so the double scull is faster than the coxless pair.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The baseball team won the last ever Central Region championship in 2013. As a result advanced to the state tournament.

Target: The baseball team won the last ever Central Region championship in 2013, and as a result advanced to the state tournament.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: It is high in the Chiltern Hills, overlooking the town of High Wycombe. Today it is almost indistinguishable from the urban spread of the latter town.

Target: It is high in the Chiltern Hills, overlooking the town of High Wycombe, although today it is almost indistinguishable from the urban spread of the latter town.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Downunder Hostel Fire was a lethal fire on 17 September 1989, set shortly before 5: 00 am in a backpackers hostel on Darlinghurst Road in the Kings Cross area of Sydney, Australia. Kings Cross is a very popular Kings Cross with international backpackers visiting Australia.

Target: The Downunder Hostel Fire was a lethal fire on 17 September 1989, set shortly before 5: 00 am in a backpackers hostel on Darlinghurst Road in the Kings Cross area of Sydney, Australia. Kings Cross is a very popular destination with international backpackers visiting Australia.


Source: Make the text more logical: This set is quite sought after by the Dragon Ball fans who missed out on owning the individual albums in the Hit Song Collection series. Many fans have bought this set despite already owning all of the Hit Song Collection albums.

Target: This set is quite sought after by the Dragon Ball fans who missed out on owning the individual albums in the Hit Song Collection series. However many fans have bought this set despite already owning all of the Hit Song Collection albums.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As established in movie four, Piccolo is sensitive to the sound whistling due to his adept hearing. For most of the song he complains and begs for the whistler to stop until he gives up and rockets away.

Target: As established in movie four, Piccolo is sensitive to the sound whistling due to his adept hearing. As a result, for most of the song he complains and begs for the whistler to stop until he gives up and rockets away.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Around 1991, the Russians developed a slight variant of the OTs-03, the OTs-03A (SVU-A). The SVU-A is semi-automatic, the SVU-A (the A stands for automatic) is a fully automatic SVU-A.

Target: Around 1991, the Russians developed a slight variant of the OTs-03, the OTs-03A (SVU-A). Whereas the SVU is semi-automatic, the SVU-A (the A stands for automatic) is a fully automatic rifle.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Dream Well's ancestors through his great grand dam Mia Pola can be traced back to U.S. Triple Crown champion War Admiral. Also his pedigree carries a double cross of world-renowned sire Northern Dancer, through his dam and sire.

Target: Dream Well's ancestors through his great grand dam Mia Pola can be traced back to U.S. Triple Crown champion War Admiral, and also his pedigree carries a double cross of world-renowned sire Northern Dancer, through his dam and sire.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In Denmark, the B licence is valid until the driver reaches 70 years of age. Further driving tests combined with medical examinations allows the driver to retake his licence every two years after the age of 70.

Target: In Denmark, the B licence is valid until the driver reaches 70 years of age, although further driving tests combined with medical examinations allows the driver to retake his licence every two years after the age of 70.


Source: Fix sentence flow: This latest take-over. Sales have gone up considerably and Droste has become one of the largest consumers of cocoa in the Netherlands.

Target: Since this latest take-over, sales have gone up considerably and Droste has become one of the largest consumers of cocoa in the Netherlands.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Although spontaneous combustion has been said to occur with rags soaked in paint thinners, this is not true unless a drying oil is used as a thinner. Classical paint thinners do not include drying oils.

Target: Although spontaneous combustion has been said to occur with rags soaked in paint thinners, this is not true unless a drying oil is used as a thinner. However, classical paint thinners do not include drying oils.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The process of excavating dry, compacted sediments will often loosen or unconsolidate them. As long as the material is sufficiently dry, these gravels can be processed with a drywasher in a relatively efficient manner.

Target: The process of excavating dry, compacted sediments will often loosen or unconsolidate them. Then, as long as the material is sufficiently dry, these gravels can be processed with a drywasher in a relatively efficient manner.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Dudley specified that the topic of the lectures should rotate among four themes. Students would hear each one before graduation.

Target: Dudley specified that the topic of the lectures should rotate among four themes, so that students would hear each one before graduation.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Dugan sold all of his real estate holdings in Grand Mound to Julius Detlef in 1919. Julius Detlef is a local hardware merchant.

Target: Dugan sold all of his real estate holdings in Grand Mound to Julius Detlef, a local hardware merchant, in 1919.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She describes a puppet which appeared to take a somewhat cynical view of the world, only to have its string cut. She sings, her listeners should remember to grasp life with both hands, like the dancing puppets.

Target: She describes a puppet which appeared to take a somewhat cynical view of the world, only to have its string cut. Thus, she sings, her listeners should remember to grasp life with both hands, like the dancing puppets.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Farmers here normally use conventional ways of cultivation. Modern technologies such as use of tractors and other farming tools have taken place of conventional farming system.

Target: Farmers here normally use conventional ways of cultivation. However, modern technologies such as use of tractors and other farming tools have taken place of conventional farming system.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: This practice was already being conducted by the University of Chile. Especially the State Technical University, which immersed in the era of university reform university classrooms opened to workers and low-income students who could study technical courses at universities despite economic shortcomings.

Target: This practice was already being conducted by the University of Chile and especially the State Technical University, which immersed in the era of university reform university classrooms opened to workers and low-income students who could study technical courses at universities despite economic shortcomings.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There was a healthy artistic climate in Dutch cities during the seventeenth century. Between 1605 and 1635 over 100,000 paintings were produced in Haarlem.

Target: There was a healthy artistic climate in Dutch cities during the seventeenth century. For example, between 1605 and 1635 over 100,000 paintings were produced in Haarlem.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Coats of arms in the Netherlands were not controlled by an official heraldic system like the two in the United Kingdom. They Coats not used solely by noble families.

Target: Coats of arms in the Netherlands were not controlled by an official heraldic system like the two in the United Kingdom, nor were they used solely by noble families.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The option procedure is a simpler and quicker way of acquiring Dutch citizenship compared to naturalisation. In effect, option procedure is a way of simplified naturalisation.

Target: The option procedure is a simpler and quicker way of acquiring Dutch citizenship compared to naturalisation. In effect, it is a form of simplified naturalisation.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In the case of Dutch subjects who possessed dual nationality on 1 April 2003. Who were then resident outside the Kingdom of the Netherlands and the European Union, the ten years started on 1 April 2003.

Target: In the case of Dutch subjects who possessed dual nationality on 1 April 2003 and who were then resident outside the Kingdom of the Netherlands and the European Union, the ten years started on 1 April 2003.


Source: Fix coherence: From 1 April 2003, loss of Dutch citizenship upon naturalisation in another country is still automatic. At least one of the following exemptions applies.

Target: From 1 April 2003, loss of Dutch citizenship upon naturalisation in another country is still automatic unless at least one of the following exemptions applies.


Source: Make the text coherent: The ED of a species is the sum of the ED of the segments connecting it to the root. A long branch which produces few species will have a high ED, as the corresponding species are relatively distinctive, with few close relatives.

Target: The ED of a species is the sum of the ED of the segments connecting it to the root. Thus, a long branch which produces few species will have a high ED, as the corresponding species are relatively distinctive, with few close relatives.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The GA8 demonstrator also attracted considerable attention from several US railroads. Ultimately none would ever purchase the locomotive for domestic use.

Target: The GA8 demonstrator also attracted considerable attention from several US railroads, although ultimately none would ever purchase the locomotive for domestic use.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 2001 the EMMS split into two organizations: the EMMS International and the Nazareth Trust. The EMMS continued to support the Nazareth Trust through EMMS International's bike rides until 2009.

Target: In 2001 the EMMS split into two organizations: the EMMS International and the Nazareth Trust. However, the EMMS International continued to support the Nazareth Trust through its bike rides until 2009.


Source: Fix coherence errors: A trustee can spend a maximum of nine consecutive years as a trustee before he. Trustee must take a gap of a year before going through the election process again.

Target: A trustee can spend a maximum of nine consecutive years as a trustee before he or she must take a gap of a year before going through the election process again.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Its inception, the program has led to immunizations increasing by 43 %, youth HIV decreasing by 6 %. Attendance at HIV treatment clinics increasing 340 %, and HIV testing increasing by 360 %.

Target: Since its inception, the program has led to immunizations increasing by 43 %, youth HIV decreasing by 6 %, attendance at HIV treatment clinics increasing 340 %, and HIV testing increasing by 360 %.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Only eventual sends are allowed when communicating with remote objects. Deadlocks can not happen.

Target: Since only eventual sends are allowed when communicating with remote objects, deadlocks can not happen.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Rev. William Taylor, (later Missionary Bishop of Africa) visited Athens during Earl's college years. Rev. held revival services, in which many students, including Earl, were converted to Christ.

Target: The Rev. William Taylor, (later Missionary Bishop of Africa) visited Athens during Earl's college years. Taylor held revival services, in which many students, including Earl, were converted to Christ.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Throughout the Yuan (1271 -- 1368) and Ming (1368 -- 1644) dynasties, Chinese cartography did not experience any significant developments. Traditional cartography skills became more refined, and different types of maps starting appearing.

Target: Throughout the Yuan (1271 -- 1368) and Ming (1368 -- 1644) dynasties, Chinese cartography did not experience any significant developments. However, traditional cartography skills became more refined, and different types of maps starting appearing.


Source: Make the text more logical: Most of the major roads in the state, such as the Garden State Parkway and the New Jersey Turnpike had their speed limits reduced because of the snowfall. Residents were advised across the state to stay inside.

Target: Most of the major roads in the state, such as the Garden State Parkway and the New Jersey Turnpike had their speed limits reduced because of the snowfall, although residents were advised across the state to stay inside.


Source: Make the text clearer: In addition, monthly benefits are increased to replace those taken by the earnings test. On average the earnings test has little or no effect on the worker's total lifetime benefits.

Target: In addition, monthly benefits are increased to replace those taken by the earnings test. As a result, on average the earnings test has little or no effect on the worker's total lifetime benefits.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Earthly Possessions is a 1999 made-for-cable movie starring Susan Sarandon and Stephen Dorff. Earthly Possessions is an Earthly Possessions of Anne Tyler's novel of the same name about a housewife who thinks her life is going nowhere.

Target: Earthly Possessions is a 1999 made-for-cable movie starring Susan Sarandon and Stephen Dorff. It is an adaptation of Anne Tyler's novel of the same name about a housewife who thinks her life is going nowhere.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Earthtrust focuses mostly on marine conservation. Earthtrust is responsible for the largest-biomass conservation victory in history due to its critical role in ending large-scale high seas driftnetting.

Target: Focusing mostly on marine conservation, Earthtrust is responsible for the largest-biomass conservation victory in history due to its critical role in ending large-scale high seas driftnetting.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The fairly limited scope of the Soviet offensive. Still eventually targeted on Rostov.

Target: The fairly limited scope of the Soviet offensive, although still eventually targeted on Rostov.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Under shellfire and pursued by Soviet tanks, the surrounded German troops, among whom were the 5th SS Panzer Division Wiking, fought their way across the river to safety. At the cost of half troops 'number and troops' their equipment.

Target: Under shellfire and pursued by Soviet tanks, the surrounded German troops, among whom were the 5th SS Panzer Division Wiking, fought their way across the river to safety, although at the cost of half their number and all their equipment.


Source: Make the text coherent: The Germans, on the other hand, could rely on a large slave workforce from the conquered countries and Soviet POWs. American exports and technical expertise also enabled the Soviet to produce goods that Germans wouldn't have been able to on Germans' own.

Target: The Germans, on the other hand, could rely on a large slave workforce from the conquered countries and Soviet POWs. American exports and technical expertise also enabled the Soviets to produce goods that they wouldn't have been able to on their own.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: From 1941 -- 1945, the USSR produced 505,000 tons of explosives and received 105,000 tons of Lend-Lease imports. Germany outproduced the USSR 3.16 to 1 in explosives tonnage.

Target: From 1941 -- 1945, the USSR produced 505,000 tons of explosives and received 105,000 tons of Lend-Lease imports. Germany outproduced the Soviet Union 3.16 to 1 in explosives tonnage.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Jeong fled to the nearby Juk Island without destroying his letters or books and performed suicide. There is an opposing theory, suggested by the Easterners ever since the purge, that the Westerners killed Jeong and disguised Jeong's murder suicide suicide.

Target: Jeong fled to the nearby Juk Island without destroying his letters or books and performed suicide. However, there is an opposing theory, suggested by the Easterners ever since the purge, that the Westerners killed Jeong and disguised his murder as suicide.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Also, episcopal polity is not usually a simple chain of command. Some authority may be held, not only by synods and colleges of bishops, but by lay and clerical councils.

Target: Also, episcopal polity is not usually a simple chain of command. Instead, some authority may be held, not only by synods and colleges of bishops, but by lay and clerical councils.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The main interest of this network is that. Interest's behaviour is non-linear.

Target: The main interest of this network is that although its behaviour is non-linear.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: John Hawkins is often considered to be the pioneer of the British slave trade. John Hawkins was the John Hawkins to run the Triangular trade.

Target: John Hawkins is often considered to be the pioneer of the British slave trade, because he was the first to run the Triangular trade.


Source: Make the text coherent: In 2009, Gauteng's total imports amounted to R316 billion. Exports amounted to R337.

Target: In 2009, Gauteng's total imports amounted to R316 billion, while exports amounted to R337.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Lithuanian economy is highly open and International trade is crucial. The ratio of foreign trade to GDP for Lithuanian has often exceeded 100 %.

Target: Lithuanian economy is highly open and International trade is crucial. As a result, the ratio of foreign trade to GDP for Lithuania has often exceeded 100 %.


Source: Fix coherence: Rather, most unemployment benefits are given to men. To receive unemployment benefits.

Target: Rather, most unemployment benefits are given to men because to receive unemployment benefits.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In order to be eligible for in-work benefit applicants must first have children under the age of 23. From that point, benefits vary depending on marital status and workers per family.

Target: In order to be eligible for in-work benefit applicants must first have children under the age of 23, and from that point, benefits vary depending on marital status and workers per family.


Source: Fix coherence: Beef was not particularly popular in the United States. Soon Texas entrepreneurs pioneered the beef industry and demand steadily increased.

Target: Beef was not particularly popular in the United States. However soon Texas entrepreneurs pioneered the beef industry and demand steadily increased.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Beatin started 54 games in 1890 and threw 53 complete games, ranking fourth in the National League in both categories. He also led the league in hits (518) and earned runs (202) allowed.

Target: Beatin started 54 games in 1890 and threw 53 complete games, ranking fourth in the National League in both categories. On the other hand, he also led the league in hits (518) and earned runs (202) allowed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The line has since been abandoned. Similar tickets are still in use in the tourist-oriented Pingsi Line.

Target: The line has since been abandoned, but similar tickets are still in use in the tourist-oriented Pingsi Line.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He enlisted Edmund MacRichard's help. He captured Waterford and along with it, the son of the Earl of Desmond.

Target: Enlisting Edmund MacRichard's help, he captured Waterford and along with it, the son of the Earl of Desmond.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: A free trial is available for 30 days, however it is not possible to directly save Edraw files to a computer. If the full version was purchased.

Target: A free trial is available for 30 days, however it is not possible to directly save Edraw files to a computer unless if the full version was purchased.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Unsustainable patterns of economic production and consumption contribute to global warming, environmental degradation and an upsurge in natural disasters. While international human rights frameworks have been strengthened over the past several decades, the implementation and protection of these norms remain a challenge.

Target: Unsustainable patterns of economic production and consumption contribute to global warming, environmental degradation and an upsurge in natural disasters. Moreover, while international human rights frameworks have been strengthened over the past several decades, the implementation and protection of these norms remain a challenge.


Source: Make the text coherent: It also requires participatory teaching and learning methods that motivate and empower learners to change their behaviours and take action for sustainable development. ESD promotes competencies like critical thinking, imagining future scenarios and making decisions in a collaborative way.

Target: It also requires participatory teaching and learning methods that motivate and empower learners to change their behaviours and take action for sustainable development. ESD consequently promotes competencies like critical thinking, imagining future scenarios and making decisions in a collaborative way.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Moreover, the fact that the only public university was in Montevideo severely limited the ability of those in the interior to attend university. University's families were relatively well off financially.

Target: Moreover, the fact that the only public university was in Montevideo severely limited the ability of those in the interior to attend university unless their families were relatively well off financially.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Finally, the INET saw its status and budget upgraded. Overall spending on education fell from 12.2 percent of the central government budget in 1974 to 7.3 percent in 1982.

Target: Finally, the INET saw its status and budget upgraded. However, overall spending on education fell from 12.2 percent of the central government budget in 1974 to 7.3 percent in 1982.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: However, the public high schools were much larger. In 1987 high schools actually contained 145,083 of the country's 175,710 secondary school students enrolled in both day classes and night classes.

Target: However, the public high schools were much larger, so that in 1987 they actually contained 145,083 of the country's 175,710 secondary school students enrolled in both day classes and night classes.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Surrealists rejected the bourgeois' dominating rationality. Surrealists escaped into a world of fantasy and irrationality.

Target: Rejecting the bourgeois' dominating rationality, surrealists escaped into a world of fantasy and irrationality.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Jenner noted the common observation that milkmaids were generally immune to smallpox. Jenner postulated that the pus in the blisters that milkmaids received from cowpox (a disease similar to smallpox, but much less virulent) protected them from smallpox.

Target: Noting the common observation that milkmaids were generally immune to smallpox, Jenner postulated that the pus in the blisters that milkmaids received from cowpox (a disease similar to smallpox, but much less virulent) protected them from smallpox.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Spragge felt so humiliated by this course of events -- also. Spragge was publicly denounced as a coward for Spragge's conduct Spragge's his enemy Robert Holmes.

Target: Spragge felt so humiliated by this course of events -- also because he was publicly denounced as a coward for his conduct by his enemy Robert Holmes.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Attorneys in Edwards Wildman's Private Client Group examined trends in charitable giving. Whether it would be preferable to make a substantial gift in 2012 or wait until 2013 with potential tax law changes around the corner.

Target: Attorneys in Edwards Wildman's Private Client Group examined trends in charitable giving and whether it would be preferable to make a substantial gift in 2012 or wait until 2013 with potential tax law changes around the corner.


Source: Fix coherence errors: With Hazel striking Canada directly at Toronto (it was in fact directly over downtown Toronto at one point), the Greater Toronto Area suffered the heaviest damages and vast majority of the fatalities were concentrated there. Other communities were also affected by Hazel.

Target: With Hazel striking Canada directly at Toronto (it was in fact directly over downtown Toronto at one point), the Greater Toronto Area suffered the heaviest damages and vast majority of the fatalities were concentrated there. However, other communities were also affected by Hazel.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Crawford rescued people from their porches, second-floor windows, or roofs. Crawford described that he and Jones bounced around like a cork, and dodged debris, houses and telephone poles.

Target: Rescuing people from their porches, second-floor windows, or roofs, Crawford described that he and Jones bounced around like a cork, and dodged debris, houses and telephone poles.


Source: Make the text more consistent: For example, between Dundas Street and Lake Ontario, the Humber River is parkland. What was Raymore Drive at the time of the storm was turned into Raymore Park.

Target: For example, between Dundas Street and Lake Ontario, the Humber River is parkland, while what was Raymore Drive at the time of the storm was turned into Raymore Park.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: If the degree is odd, then by the intermediate value theorem at least one of the roots is real. Any real matrix with odd order has at least one real eigenvalue, whereas a real matrix with even order may not have any real eigenvalues.

Target: If the degree is odd, then by the intermediate value theorem at least one of the roots is real. Therefore, any real matrix with odd order has at least one real eigenvalue, whereas a real matrix with even order may not have any real eigenvalues.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Most numeric methods that compute the eigenvalues of a matrix also determine a set of corresponding eigenvectors as a by-product of the computation. Sometimes the implementors choose to discard the eigenvector information as soon as it is not needed anymore.

Target: Most numeric methods that compute the eigenvalues of a matrix also determine a set of corresponding eigenvectors as a by-product of the computation, although sometimes the implementors choose to discard the eigenvector information as soon as it is not needed anymore.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It compares this equation to Equation (1). It follows immediately that a left eigenvector of A is the same as the transpose of a right eigenvector of A, with the same eigenvalue.

Target: Comparing this equation to Equation (1), it follows immediately that a left eigenvector of A is the same as the transpose of a right eigenvector of A, with the same eigenvalue.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Then, for a long time in combination with Seiji Hirao. Kutsuki made his place as right centre immovable, earning in total 30 caps.

Target: Since then, for a long time in combination with Seiji Hirao, Kutsuki made his place as right centre immovable, earning in total 30 caps.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Society of Jesus was persecuted by Bismarck's Jesuits Law (1872). Mohr had left Germany when he wrote text and melody of the hymn, possibly in 1875.

Target: The Society of Jesus was persecuted by Bismarck's Jesuits Law (1872). Therefore Mohr had left Germany when he wrote text and melody of the hymn, possibly in 1875.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The design and certification of the Boeing-747 pylon was found to be inadequate to provide the required level of safety. The system to ensure structural integrity by inspection failed.

Target: The design and certification of the Boeing-747 pylon was found to be inadequate to provide the required level of safety. Furthermore the system to ensure structural integrity by inspection failed.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: One boater, a police officer, said he initially thought the two falling objects were parachutists. As parachutists fell closer police officer could see parachutists were both plane engines.

Target: One boater, a police officer, said he initially thought the two falling objects were parachutists, but as they fell closer he could see they were both plane engines.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: As the name depicts, Elackad (In Malayalam it means 'forest of leaves') is a forest kind of village. Has road facility, school facilities and library.

Target: As the name depicts, Elackad (In Malayalam it means 'forest of leaves') is a forest kind of village. But has road facility, school facilities and library.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They worked odd jobs, including washing dishes and cleaning hotel rooms. Her father found stable work as an accountant.

Target: They worked odd jobs, including washing dishes and cleaning hotel rooms. Eventually, her father found stable work as an accountant.


Source: Fix sentence transition: At the 1982 World Championships, she landed six triple jumps to win the title. Four of them were triple toe loops.

Target: At the 1982 World Championships, she landed six triple jumps to win the title, although four of them were triple toe loops.


Source: Fix coherence: Eleanor was also mentioned in the New York Evangelist as an upcoming writer as she weighed in on the idea of training schools in Philadelphia. Little else is known about Eleanor's career in writing.

Target: Eleanor was also mentioned in the New York Evangelist as an upcoming writer as she weighed in on the idea of training schools in Philadelphia, but little else is known about her career in writing.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Generally big parties place their most important (national level) politicians only on the party-lists. These people want to deal only with national level issues.

Target: Generally big parties place their most important (national level) politicians only on the party-lists, because these people want to deal only with national level issues.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Since the first valid round is taken into account, votes are still counted for a candidate who is eliminated in the first round. Who steps down after a valid first round to endorse another, more viable candidate.

Target: Since the first valid round is taken into account, votes are still counted for a candidate who is eliminated in the first round, or who steps down after a valid first round to endorse another, more viable candidate.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This may cause ballots to be counted as invalid if the wrong system is used. If a voter puts a first-past-the-post cross in a numbered single transferable vote ballot paper, it is invalidated.

Target: This may cause ballots to be counted as invalid if the wrong system is used. For instance, if a voter puts a first-past-the-post cross in a numbered single transferable vote ballot paper, it is invalidated.


Source: Fix coherence: A disadvantage is that it makes other prevention and detection efforts more difficult to implement. Members of society generally have more trust and less of a sense for fraudulent methods.

Target: A disadvantage is that it makes other prevention and detection efforts more difficult to implement because members of society generally have more trust and less of a sense for fraudulent methods.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Many citizens view these brokers as positive pillars in their lives and have the utmost respect for the help they distribute. Others view citizens as hands of corruption.

Target: Many citizens view these brokers as positive pillars in their lives and have the utmost respect for the help they distribute. However, others view them as hands of corruption.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Additionally, Kramon notes that citizens of Kenya tend to value candidates who provide rewards. Candidates 'ability to do so points to how candidates' their abilities will candidates once they are in office.

Target: Additionally, Kramon notes that citizens of Kenya tend to value candidates who provide rewards because their ability to do so points to how great their abilities will be once they are in office.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: All votes sent over the internet violate the chain of custody and. Should be avoided by driving or flying memory cards in locked metal containers from county count centres to the state count centre.

Target: All votes sent over the internet violate the chain of custody and hence should be avoided by driving or flying memory cards in locked metal containers from county count centres to the state count centre.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In 1944, the Elefants served on the Italian front. Were rather ineffective as Elefants' weight of nearly 70 tonnes did not Elefants them to use most Italian roads and bridges.

Target: In 1944, the Elefants served on the Italian front, but were rather ineffective as their weight of nearly 70 tonnes did not allow them to use most Italian roads and bridges.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She then voices her intention to free Avalor from Shuriki. Upon leaving the temple, Avalor tells the group of Avalor's plan: She is going to Shuriki Shuriki's wand against her.

Target: She then voices her intention to free Avalor from Shuriki. Upon leaving the temple, Elena tells the group of her plan: She is going to use Shuriki's wand against her.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Nataraja shown in the west shrine is similar in style to one inside the main mandapa. States Collins, Nataraja's depth of carving appears inferior and it seems more eroded being more open to rains and water damage.

Target: The Nataraja shown in the west shrine is similar in style to one inside the main mandapa. However, states Collins, its depth of carving appears inferior and it seems more eroded being more open to rains and water damage.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Cave 6 is historically significant. Though a Hindu temple.

Target: Cave 6 is historically significant because though a Hindu temple.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In honor of receiving the award, Bishop Taban sat down for an interview with David Brody of the Christian Broadcasting Network. After the ceremony, the Bishop sat down with Secretary Clinton for an interview.

Target: In honor of receiving the award, Bishop Taban sat down for an interview with David Brody of the Christian Broadcasting Network. Then, after the ceremony, the Bishop sat down with Secretary Clinton for an interview.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Washburne became active in politics as a Whig, and served as a delegate to the Whig National Conventions of 1844 and 1852. In 1848 Washburne was an unsuccessful Washburne for Congress.

Target: Washburne became active in politics as a Whig, and served as a delegate to the Whig National Conventions of 1844 and 1852. In 1848 he was an unsuccessful candidate for Congress.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: At the beginning of the Overland Campaign of 1864, Maj John A. Tompkins took command of the brigade. Consequently Taft resumed command of his battery.

Target: At the beginning of the Overland Campaign of 1864, Maj John A. Tompkins took command of the brigade, and consequently Taft resumed command of his battery.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Elinor Ochs is an American linguistic anthropologist, and Distinguished Professor of Anthropology at University of California, Los Angeles. anthropologist has conducted fieldwork in Madagascar, Italy, Samoa and the American on communication and interaction.

Target: Elinor Ochs is an American linguistic anthropologist, and Distinguished Professor of Anthropology at University of California, Los Angeles. Ochs has conducted fieldwork in Madagascar, Italy, Samoa and the United States of America on communication and interaction.


Source: Make the text clearer: She grew up in Bergen, but after her father died when Elisabeth was thirteen, she moved in with Michael and Maren Sars. They first lived in Manger where Michael was a Michael, but in 1854 the family moved to Christiania where Michael had become professor.

Target: She grew up in Bergen, but after her father died when Elisabeth was thirteen, she moved in with Michael and Maren Sars. They first lived in Manger where Michael was a vicar, but in 1854 the family moved to Christiania where Michael had become professor.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Shaw had written the role for her,. Many considered her too old for the role she triumphed.

Target: Shaw had written the role for her, and although many considered her too old for the role she triumphed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He ordered Elizabeth to kill the children. When Elizabeth refused he trampled children to death.

Target: He ordered Elizabeth to kill the children and when she refused he trampled them to death.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is aimed at the same audience as The Divide, and is an exciting story about a girl who steals a flightless riding bird, similar to phorusrhacus, and runs away. Girl's aunt is trying to girl her off to get rid girl her.

Target: It is aimed at the same audience as The Divide, and is an exciting story about a girl who steals a flightless riding bird, similar to phorusrhacus, and runs away because her aunt is trying to marry her off to get rid of her.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: I am called the camel girl. My knees turn backward.

Target: I am called the camel girl because my knees turn backward.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The north-south rail line is still in operation today as a freight line, operated by Delmarva Central Railroad and known as the Indian River Subdivision. Passenger operations have ceased.

Target: The north-south rail line is still in operation today as a freight line, operated by Delmarva Central Railroad and known as the Indian River Subdivision, although passenger operations have ceased.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: They also had a very social Sunday team. Every Sunday saw a huge picnic atmosphere at the Ave with cricket being the secondary fixture.

Target: They also had a very social Sunday team and every Sunday saw a huge picnic atmosphere at the Ave with cricket being the secondary fixture.


Source: Make the text coherent: Ellis Park Arena (formerly Standard Bank Arena) South Africa Ellis Park Arena (formerly Standard Bank Arena) is an indoor stadium in Johannesburg.

Target: Ellis Park Arena (formerly Standard Bank Arena), an indoor stadium in Johannesburg, South Africa


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Grey's health again failed during the early years of his partnership with Hunt, and he took a long trip to the South Sea Islands. It was during Grey partnership partnership Hunt Hunt Grey Grey produced some of his finest work.

Target: Grey's health again failed during the early years of his partnership with Hunt, and he took a long trip to the South Sea Islands. Yet, it was during his partnership with Hunt that Grey produced some of his finest work.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He developed his drawing skills through the Federal School cartoon correspondence course. He got a job at the Toledo Blade as cartoonist, commercial artist and eventually art editor.

Target: Developing his drawing skills through the Federal School cartoon correspondence course, he got a job at the Toledo Blade as cartoonist, commercial artist and eventually art editor.


Source: Fix coherence errors: She is a member of member of the Royal Academy of Engineering Diversity and Inclusion panel. member is a member for the Royal Academy of Engineering Launchpad competition for budding entrepreneurs.

Target: She is a member of member of the Royal Academy of Engineering Diversity and Inclusion panel. She is a judge for the Royal Academy of Engineering Launchpad competition for budding entrepreneurs.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Buchanan was a patient of Miles Davis's father, who told him of his son's interest in music. Although Miles Davis, at thirteen, was then too young to attend patient's school, patient began giving Miles Davis private lessons.

Target: Buchanan was a patient of Miles Davis's father, who told him of his son's interest in music. Although Davis, at thirteen, was then too young to attend Buchanan's school, Buchanan began giving him private lessons.