Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The 3 substrates of this enzyme are RH (reduced substrate), reduced flavoprotein, and O,. RH's 3 products are ROH.

Target: The 3 substrates of this enzyme are RH (reduced substrate), reduced flavoprotein, and O, whereas its 3 products are ROH.


Source: Fix coherence: He must leave the game area. They are no school personnel around to supervise.

Target: He must leave the game area unless they are no school personnel around to supervise.


Source: Make the text coherent: The study found that heterozygous mice performed similar to normal mice when the task was started. As the task continued or became more complex they were more likely to fail.

Target: The study found that heterozygous mice performed similar to normal mice when the task was started, but as the task continued or became more complex they were more likely to fail.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In most cases, a misdiagnosis is not detrimental to the patient. Many of the same medications are used to treat both ULD and whatever type of epilepsy the patient has been misdiagnosed with.

Target: In most cases, a misdiagnosis is not detrimental to the patient, because many of the same medications are used to treat both ULD and whatever type of epilepsy the patient has been misdiagnosed with.


Source: Make the text coherent: In humans it is generally known that. A patient has both recessive CSTB genes.

Target: In humans it is generally known that unless a patient has both recessive CSTB genes.


Source: Make the text more logical: This research has been performed on mice with the gene for producing cystatin B removed, to provide a similar set of symptoms to individuals with ULD. The ULD currently supported by research is very similar to another theory of epilepsy progression known as kindling.

Target: This research has been performed on mice with the gene for producing cystatin B removed, to provide a similar set of symptoms to individuals with ULD. The mechanism currently supported by research is very similar to another theory of epilepsy progression known as kindling.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The reason for the different names was partly regional but also because the prognosis of the disease was different for individuals with each due to the way that it was treated in that region. Both were realized to be the same disease, ULD.

Target: The reason for the different names was partly regional but also because the prognosis of the disease was different for individuals with each due to the way that it was treated in that region. Eventually, both were realized to be the same disease, ULD.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The researchers chose to investigate dopamine receptors. Researchers are known to be a factor in myoclonus.

Target: The researchers chose to investigate dopamine receptors because they are known to be a factor in myoclonus.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The disease is autosomal recessive, so both parents of an individual must be carriers of the recessive CSTB gene for the individual to inherit it. For an individual to show symptoms of ULD, they must have both recessive CSTB genes.

Target: The disease is autosomal recessive, so both parents of an individual must be carriers of the recessive CSTB gene for the individual to inherit it, and for an individual to show symptoms of ULD, they must have both recessive CSTB genes.


Source: Fix sentence flow: If this gene is present in an individual suspected of having the disease, it can be confirmed. Genetic tests of this type are prohibitively expensive to perform, especially due to the rarity of ULD.

Target: If this gene is present in an individual suspected of having the disease, it can be confirmed. However, genetic tests of this type are prohibitively expensive to perform, especially due to the rarity of ULD.


Source: Make the text clearer: She is going to climb the Scratchy Mountains. She can find her mother.

Target: She is going to climb the Scratchy Mountains so that she can find her mother.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Lucy and her sister never say anything about their mother. Their father gets sad.

Target: Lucy and her sister never say anything about their mother, because their father gets sad.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Before Balzic can investigate, Sitko has firefighters out collecting money for the victim. The more Balzic looks into the incident, the less Balzic likes it.

Target: Before Balzic can investigate, Sitko has firefighters out collecting money for the victim. But the more Balzic looks into the incident, the less he likes it.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Tank argues that Johnny trusted him to deliver the message. B.G. says that Johnny was the Johnny who told them to get rid of Tank.

Target: Tank argues that Johnny trusted him to deliver the message, and B.G. says that Johnny was the one who told them to get rid of Tank.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It is later revealed that Tank lost his longtime job at the steel mill when he attacked a white co-worker who harassed the black mill workers. Tank was sent to prison and since being released, has been unable to find work.

Target: It is later revealed that Tank lost his longtime job at the steel mill when he attacked a white co-worker who harassed the black mill workers. As a result, Tank was sent to prison and since being released, has been unable to find work.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Uranus and Gaia then prophesied that Cronus in turn was destined to be overthrown by his own son. So the Titan attempted to avoid this fate by devouring his young.

Target: Uranus and Gaia then prophesied that Cronus in turn was destined to be overthrown by his own son, and so the Titan attempted to avoid this fate by devouring his young.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Also, according to the Theogony, Cronus threw the severed genitals into the sea, around which foam developed and transformed into the goddess Aphrodite. According to Homer.

Target: Also, according to the Theogony, Cronus threw the severed genitals into the sea, around which foam developed and transformed into the goddess Aphrodite, although according to Homer.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Reasons for the enhancement are not well understood, and this study appears to be the only one as of 2010 that found such effects. Another study found a significant downside to the practice.

Target: Reasons for the enhancement are not well understood, and this study appears to be the only one as of 2010 that found such effects. However, another study found a significant downside to the practice.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Beginning in 1967, studies raised concerns that LSD might produce genetic damage or developmental abnormalities in fetuses. These initial reports were based on in vitro studies or were poorly controlled and have not been substantiated.

Target: Beginning in 1967, studies raised concerns that LSD might produce genetic damage or developmental abnormalities in fetuses. However, these initial reports were based on in vitro studies or were poorly controlled and have not been substantiated.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It was also reported in Joliet, Illinois and McHenry, Illinois in October 2013. No laboratory tests have confirmed that desomorphine was present in the blood, urine or tissues of hospitalized krokodil patients.

Target: It was also reported in Joliet, Illinois and McHenry, Illinois in October 2013, but no laboratory tests have confirmed that desomorphine was present in the blood, urine or tissues of hospitalized krokodil patients.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Studies beginned in 1967. Studies raised concerns that LSD might produce genetic damage or developmental abnormalities in fetuses.

Target: Beginning in 1967, studies raised concerns that LSD might produce genetic damage or developmental abnormalities in fetuses.


Source: Make the text coherent: In the United States, this substance was banned in 1985, and other countries followed suit as well. Among United States youth, MDMA was most popular in the 1990s and early 2000s, peaking in 2001 and declining thereafter.

Target: In the United States, this substance was banned in 1985, and other countries followed suit as well. Among American youth, MDMA was most popular in the 1990s and early 2000s, peaking in 2001 and declining thereafter.


Source: Make the text coherent: Like MDMA, MPPP is a designer drug. MDMA's effects are more akin to morphine or other opiates.

Target: Like MDMA, MPPP is a designer drug, but its effects are more akin to morphine or other opiates.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There are studies that show no actual increased risk of cancer from smoking marijuana, even when duration of use is expanded over several years. Some studies indicate THC to have anticancer properties, with studies showing tumor reduction in mice.

Target: There are studies that show no actual increased risk of cancer from smoking marijuana, even when duration of use is expanded over several years. In fact, some studies indicate THC to have anticancer properties, with studies showing tumor reduction in mice.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This myth is based primarily on anecdotal evidence and the known fact that urine drug tests remain positive for at least several days after using, and longer for regular users. The tests measure non-psychoactive metabolites, not active THC.

Target: This myth is based primarily on anecdotal evidence and the known fact that urine drug tests remain positive for at least several days after using, and longer for regular users. The tests however measure non-psychoactive metabolites, not active THC.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: LSD is not addictive, and it is unlikely to be abused by an unwitting user. There is no plausible motivation for a drug dealer to distribute LSD in this manner.

Target: LSD is not addictive, and it is unlikely to be abused by an unwitting user. Therefore, there is no plausible motivation for a drug dealer to distribute LSD in this manner.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It is widely believed that there is no way to distinguish between poppy seeds and any other kind of opiate. A study published by the University of Connecticut's Department of Chemistry, proposed that Thebaine could be used as a marker of poppy seed consumption.

Target: It is widely believed that there is no way to distinguish between poppy seeds and any other kind of opiate. However a study published by the University of Connecticut's Department of Chemistry, proposed that Thebaine could be used as a marker of poppy seed consumption.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: His mission is to arrest a drug dealer Marco. This time is he going too far?

Target: His mission is to arrest a drug dealer Marco. But this time is he going too far?


Source: Make the text more consistent: A former delinquent, Petter (HP) becomes a policeman. delinquent is so involved when delinquent is infiltrated that delinquent sometimes forgets that delinquent is a delinquent.

Target: A former delinquent, Petter (HP) becomes a policeman. He is so involved when he is infiltrated that he sometimes forgets that he is a cop.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In some cases, the affected patients become hypertensive and progress to end-stage renal disease. Others become uremic.

Target: In some cases, the affected patients become hypertensive and progress to end-stage renal disease, while others become uremic.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In some cases, the affected patients become hypertensive and progress to end-stage renal disease, while others become uremic. Most patients suffer from constipation.

Target: In some cases, the affected patients become hypertensive and progress to end-stage renal disease, while others become uremic. Additionally, most patients suffer from constipation.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: French culture has long had a strong influence in Uruguay, with its secondary education and University tailored to the French model. This is a reason why many Uruguayans have found French attractive as a country to pursue higher studies ; many of them decided to stay.

Target: French culture has long had a strong influence in Uruguay, with its secondary education and University tailored to the French model. This is a reason why many Uruguayans have found France attractive as a country to pursue higher studies ; many of them decided to stay.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Conversely, macOS in North America claims 16.82 % (17.52 % in the US). In Asia it is only 4.4 %.

Target: Conversely, macOS in North America claims 16.82 % (17.52 % in the US) whereas in Asia it is only 4.4 %.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In units sold Apple is declining. They are almost the only vendor making any profit in the smartphone sector from hardware sales alone.

Target: Although in units sold Apple is declining, they are almost the only vendor making any profit in the smartphone sector from hardware sales alone.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: However, once as Sakai was idly doodling, he drew rabbit ears tied in a topknot on his proposed hero. Was pleased by the distinctive image.

Target: However, once as Sakai was idly doodling, he drew rabbit ears tied in a topknot on his proposed hero and was pleased by the distinctive image.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Such measures may be banned by certain other provisions of the Charter. It does not seem possible to justify such a wide non-military interpretation of 2 (4) in the light of subsequent state practice.

Target: Although such measures may be banned by certain other provisions of the Charter, it does not seem possible to justify such a wide non-military interpretation of 2 (4) in the light of subsequent state practice.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: If it permits self-defence only when an armed attack has occurred, then there can be no right to pre-emptive self-defence. Few observers really think that a state must wait for an armed attack to actually begin before taking action.

Target: If it permits self-defence only when an armed attack has occurred, then there can be no right to pre-emptive self-defence. However, few observers really think that a state must wait for an armed attack to actually begin before taking action.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is often claimed alongside other rights and reasons for using force. The USA intervention in Grenada was widely considered to be in response to the rise to power of a socialist government.

Target: It is often claimed alongside other rights and reasons for using force. For example, the USA intervention in Grenada was widely considered to be in response to the rise to power of a socialist government.


Source: Fix sentence transition: There was no female singer to perform. Madhusudan suggested eight-year-old Usha's name to Kalyanji Anandji.

Target: Since there was no female singer to perform, Madhusudan suggested eight-year-old Usha's name to Kalyanji Anandji.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The tomb of Tutankhamun had a large number of ushabtis. They were of varying sizes, and most were ornate, with hieroglyph statements.

Target: The tomb of Tutankhamun had a large number of ushabtis. However, they were of varying sizes, and most were ornate, with hieroglyph statements.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: She is the daughter of Communist Party of India leader Shyamal Chakraborty. In an interview of June 2011 daughter felt daughter's father's political identity is a disadvantage for her in the film industry.

Target: She is the daughter of Communist Party of India leader Shyamal Chakraborty. In an interview of June 2011 she felt her father's political identity is a disadvantage for her in the film industry.


Source: Make the text more logical: He also received Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak in 1972. Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak is the highest award in Gujarati literature.

Target: He also received Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak, the highest award in Gujarati literature, in 1972.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: William Marshal was the next Marcher Lord to strengthen Usk castle. William Marshal's conflict with King Henry III of England brought the Normans new headaches.

Target: William Marshal was the next Marcher Lord to strengthen Usk castle. However, his conflict with King Henry III of England brought the Normans new headaches.


Source: Make the text more consistent: About the same distance to the west is Mammoth Lakes. There is no direct road leading there.

Target: About the same distance to the west is Mammoth Lakes, although there is no direct road leading there.


Source: Make the text more consistent: That southerly section of trackbed was purchased by GO Transit to prevent abandonment and disposal. Metrolinx has long term plans to expand service on the Stouffville line to Uxbridge.

Target: That southerly section of trackbed was purchased by GO Transit to prevent abandonment and disposal, because Metrolinx has long term plans to expand service on the Stouffville line to Uxbridge.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: At the ending of this interesting game, there will be declared the winner team. This game is strongly considered as a most-played and enjoyable game among the teenagers nowadays.

Target: At the ending of this interesting game, there will be declared the winner team. Thus, this game is strongly considered as a most-played and enjoyable game among the teenagers nowadays.


Source: Fix coherence: Many young and old men play this game to get the expensive gift which is sometimes a sheep or a horse or a car. Men try to win among many participants to go to home with wonderful prize for their family.

Target: Many young and old men play this game to get the expensive gift which is sometimes a sheep or a horse or a car. Thus, they try to win among many participants to go to home with wonderful prize for their family.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: If he can not cut the complex connected links by hands, that person should stand and add to opposite side. The numbers of team-members will be increased by the time.

Target: If he can not cut the complex connected links by hands, that person should stand and add to opposite side. As a result, the numbers of team-members will be increased by the time.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Old country wedding performances, folk games with the holidays are more beautiful and in high spirits. The most popular national games, Kid-Kari, and has become a struggle for weddings and celebrations as a favorite show.

Target: Old country wedding performances, folk games with the holidays are more beautiful and in high spirits. In particular, the most popular national games, Kid-Kari, and has become a struggle for weddings and celebrations as a favorite show.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Kohtanen and Maxwell later became roommates at Stanborough College. Roommates remained friends throughout their lives.

Target: Kohtanen and Maxwell later became roommates at Stanborough College and they remained friends throughout their lives.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: One bucket must end at the data point for 8. We must decide where to put the other bucket boundary.

Target: Since one bucket must end at the data point for 8, we must decide where to put the other bucket boundary.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Some compared Trivadi's humor, nonsensical verse, limericks and poems to Ogden Nash. Others compared Trivadi to P.G.

Target: Some compared Trivadi's humor, nonsensical verse, limericks and poems to Ogden Nash, while others compared him to P.G.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Nandini is now in love with Abhi. Is in a dilemma as Nandini's wedding is in a few days.

Target: Nandini is now in love with Abhi and is in a dilemma as her wedding is in a few days.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: While searching for it, he spots a rabbit, which he names Devadas and brings along with him. He finds the watch.

Target: While searching for it, he spots a rabbit, which he names Devadas and brings along with him. Eventually, he finds the watch.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Fifita played largely as a loose forward. Fifita featured in 8 of Wellington's 11 matches during the year and contributed 2 tries.

Target: Playing largely as a loose forward, Fifita featured in 8 of Wellington's 11 matches during the year and contributed 2 tries.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: RSA has been observed in human from early stages of life as well as in adults. RSA is a mechanism which can be consistently found in several different species.

Target: RSA has been observed in human from early stages of life as well as in adults. Moreover, RSA is a mechanism which can be consistently found in several different species.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Since 2004, Trakys has played in Russia, Lithuania, Azerbaijan and Greece. Trakys was top Trakys in the Lithuania A Lyga in the 2009 season.

Target: Since 2004, Trakys has played in Russia, Lithuania, Azerbaijan and Greece. He was top scorer in the Lithuanian A Lyga in the 2009 season.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: They acknowledged their important efforts. They began to grow their operation for the restoration of wetlands on a broader scale, such as, the borderland regions between the United States and Mexico.

Target: Acknowledging their important efforts, they began to grow their operation for the restoration of wetlands on a broader scale, such as, the borderland regions between the United States and Mexico.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Livy notes that in all three cases the law was enacted by the Valerius family. Livy notes that, should a magistrate disregard the Valerian law, his only reproof was that his act be deemed unlawful and wicked.

Target: Livy notes that in all three cases the law was enacted by the Valerius family. Furthermore, Livy notes that, should a magistrate disregard the Valerian law, his only reproof was that his act be deemed unlawful and wicked.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: An option may be to excavate the site and conserve the remains with soil or a special covering afterwards. The construction can occur on top of it.

Target: An option may be to excavate the site and conserve the remains with soil or a special covering afterwards, so that the construction can occur on top of it.


Source: Fix coherence: That same year, the railway spent $115,000 ($3,100,000 in 2017 dollars) strengthening all the bridges along its route, and even rebuilding some older ones. It could haul heavier loads and use new.

Target: That same year, the railway spent $115,000 ($3,100,000 in 2017 dollars) strengthening all the bridges along its route, and even rebuilding some older ones, so that it could haul heavier loads and use new.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The CT&V, however, argued that the 1825 changes to the river rendered the Old Ship Channel and the New Ship Channel man-made waterways and. Not subject to federal jurisdiction.

Target: The CT&V, however, argued that the 1825 changes to the river rendered the Old Ship Channel and the New Ship Channel man-made waterways and hence not subject to federal jurisdiction.


Source: Make the text more logical: The railway also passes through. Is adjacent to a number of other sites listed on the National Register.

Target: The railway also passes through or is adjacent to a number of other sites listed on the National Register.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It took into account its piers, abutments, and approaches. It was the largest rolling lift bridge in the world.

Target: Taking into account its piers, abutments, and approaches, it was the largest rolling lift bridge in the world.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Some fortifications were built on the island. While neighbouring Suomenlinna became the main sea fort for Helsinki, Vallisaari was a supply point where cattle was grazing and firewood was collected.

Target: Some fortifications were built on the island, but while neighbouring Suomenlinna became the main sea fort for Helsinki, Vallisaari was a supply point where cattle was grazing and firewood was collected.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He wrote that the various incidents at the mansion have simple physical causes. Are the result of misperception and suggestion.

Target: He wrote that the various incidents at the mansion have simple physical causes or are the result of misperception and suggestion.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In terms of numerator, we begin with all two-digit numbers from 10 to 99, but in backwards order of digits. We will get the numerators grouped by the end digit.

Target: In terms of numerator, we begin with all two-digit numbers from 10 to 99, but in backwards order of digits. Consequently, we will get the numerators grouped by the end digit.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Other regions have noted a similar distribution, but with increased incidence of VRE. A 2006 study of nosocomial VRE revealed a rapid spread of resistance among enterococci along with an emerging shift in VRE distribution in the Middle East region, such as Iran.

Target: Other regions have noted a similar distribution, but with increased incidence of VRE. For example, a 2006 study of nosocomial VRE revealed a rapid spread of resistance among enterococci along with an emerging shift in VRE distribution in the Middle East region, such as Iran.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The architect is not known. It is likely that architect hired McKim, Mead & White, which had designed not only architect's mansion but a nearby house architect's his secretary, for the job.

Target: The architect is not known but it is likely that he hired McKim, Mead & White, which had designed not only his mansion but a nearby house for his secretary, for the job.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: All the lots are developed. The area retains a pastoral quality, since the houses and buildings are small-scale frame, stone and brick constructions in the Federal or Shingle architectural styles.

Target: All the lots are developed. The area nevertheless retains a pastoral quality, since the houses and buildings are small-scale frame, stone and brick constructions in the Federal or Shingle architectural styles.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bjerkelund seized this option. Bjerkelund left for Rosyth that same day on the patrol boat Nordhav II.

Target: Seizing this option, Bjerkelund left for Rosyth that same day on the patrol boat Nordhav II.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Finnmark coast was originally important as a source of furs from the trade with the Karelians. This trade dropped off as the Hanseatic League increased the fur trade through their Novgorod centre.

Target: The Finnmark coast was originally important as a source of furs from the trade with the Karelians, but this trade dropped off as the Hanseatic League increased the fur trade through their Novgorod centre.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: That motor has a single cam per bank. It is dual-equal variable cam timing.

Target: That motor has a single cam per bank, so it is dual-equal variable cam timing.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The critical score should restore the original orchestrations. It is unknown if score will also include the subsequent reorchestration by William Schoenfeld to provide context to historical recordings of the work.

Target: The critical score should restore the original orchestrations, but it is unknown if it will also include the subsequent reorchestration by William Schoenfeld to provide context to historical recordings of the work.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Shulgin was born in Kiev. Shulgin's father was a Professor of history, monarchist and editor of a monarchist newspaper.

Target: Shulgin was born in Kiev. His father was a Professor of history, monarchist and editor of a monarchist newspaper.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: His sentence was changed to life imprisonment first in Schlisselburg fortress, then in Ivangorod in 1737. Finally he was exiled for life to the Solovetsky Monastery in 1739.

Target: His sentence was changed to life imprisonment first in Schlisselburg fortress, then in Ivangorod in 1737, and finally he was exiled for life to the Solovetsky Monastery in 1739.


Source: Make the text clearer: He served in the Preobrazhensky regiment. He took part in Russian Northern Wars and distinguished himself during the siege of Mitava in 1705.

Target: Serving in the Preobrazhensky regiment, he took part in Russian Northern Wars and distinguished himself during the siege of Mitava in 1705.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The collection's track listing varied by region. None of the releases had any songs from the band's 1980 debut album.

Target: The collection's track listing varied by region, although none of the releases had any songs from the band's 1980 debut album.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This would allow a user with malicious intents to hide its own malware under the DLL of another application. A computer must have already been compromised through another method for the injection to take place.

Target: This would allow a user with malicious intents to hide its own malware under the DLL of another application. However, a computer must have already been compromised through another method for the injection to take place.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The request is then logged on the server, giving the intelligence agency information about who is opening it and where it is being opened. If a watermarked document is opened in an alternative word processor the image may be visible to the viewer.

Target: The request is then logged on the server, giving the intelligence agency information about who is opening it and where it is being opened. However, if a watermarked document is opened in an alternative word processor the image may be visible to the viewer.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It dates to between 1550 BC and 300 BC. It consists of two rows of wooden posts, which it is believed would originally have carried a deck of some kind.

Target: Dating to between 1550 BC and 300 BC, it consists of two rows of wooden posts, which it is believed would originally have carried a deck of some kind.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In addition to people visiting the Gardens themselves, Vauxhall Gardens were used as a launch point for hot air balloon flights. Large crowds would gather on the bridge and surrounding streets to watch the flights.

Target: In addition to people visiting the Gardens themselves, Vauxhall Gardens were used as a launch point for hot air balloon flights, and large crowds would gather on the bridge and surrounding streets to watch the flights.


Source: Make the text coherent: By this time the bridge was in very poor condition. In 1895 the London County Council (LCC), which had taken over from the MBW in 1889, sought and gained Parliamentary approval to replace the bridge.

Target: By this time the bridge was in very poor condition, and in 1895 the London County Council (LCC), which had taken over from the MBW in 1889, sought and gained Parliamentary approval to replace the bridge.


Source: Make the text clearer: Dodd submitted a scheme for a bridge at Vauxhall of 13 arches. Soon after the 1809 Act was passed, Dodd was dismissed by the Vauxhall Bridge Company and Dodd's design was abandoned.

Target: Dodd submitted a scheme for a bridge at Vauxhall of 13 arches. However, soon after the 1809 Act was passed, he was dismissed by the Vauxhall Bridge Company and his design was abandoned.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Joseph recounted how for two years there had been famine in the land, but there would be five more years without harvests. God had sent Joseph before them to save them alive for a great deliverance.

Target: Joseph recounted how for two years there had been famine in the land, but there would be five more years without harvests. But God had sent him before them to save them alive for a great deliverance.


Source: Make the text coherent: Similarly, a Midrash taught that Serah (mentioned in Genesis 46: 17) conveyed to the Israelites a secret password handed down from Jacob. Israelites would recognize Israelites' deliverer.

Target: Similarly, a Midrash taught that Serah (mentioned in Genesis 46: 17) conveyed to the Israelites a secret password handed down from Jacob so that they would recognize their deliverer.


Source: Fix sentence transition: No longer would they defile themselves with idols or transgressions, but God would save them and cleanse them. They would be God's people.

Target: No longer would they defile themselves with idols or transgressions, but God would save them and cleanse them, so that they would be God's people.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Rabbi Elazar interpreted Joseph's reference to Benjamin in Genesis 45: 12 to mean that just as Joseph bore no malice against his brother Benjamin (who had no part in selling Joseph to Egypt). Joseph had no malice against Joseph's 's's other brothers.

Target: Rabbi Elazar interpreted Joseph's reference to Benjamin in Genesis 45: 12 to mean that just as Joseph bore no malice against his brother Benjamin (who had no part in selling Joseph to Egypt), so Joseph had no malice against his other brothers.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Rabbi Johanan said that the reason was. A person owes more honor to a parent than to a grandparent.

Target: Rabbi Johanan said that the reason was because a person owes more honor to a parent than to a grandparent.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Midrash explained that Joseph took these five brothers, because he reasoned that if he presented the strongest to Pharaoh, then Pharaoh would on make them his warriors. Joseph presented these five, who were not mighty men.

Target: The Midrash explained that Joseph took these five brothers, because he reasoned that if he presented the strongest to Pharaoh, then Pharaoh would on make them his warriors. Therefore, Joseph presented these five, who were not mighty men.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Hereby you shall be proved, as Pharaoh lives, you shall not go there,. Your youngest brother comes here.

Target: Hereby you shall be proved, as Pharaoh lives, you shall not go there, unless your youngest brother comes here.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Geographically, the city of Ujjain is considered the Greenwich of India due to the fact that the first meridian of longitude in the Indian tradition passes through it. It sits on the tropic of cancer.

Target: Geographically, the city of Ujjain is considered the Greenwich of India due to the fact that the first meridian of longitude in the Indian tradition passes through it. Moreover, it sits on the tropic of cancer.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: And shortly after, another velodrome space was enabled as a municipal vehicle depot. The track was abandoned and in a state of progressive degradation.

Target: And shortly after, another velodrome space was enabled as a municipal vehicle depot. Meanwhile, the track was abandoned and in a state of progressive degradation.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The judicial appeals filed by the affected owners and the delay in their resolution meant that the expropriation of the velodrome was not completed until July 2015. New resources did not make it final until 2017.

Target: The judicial appeals filed by the affected owners and the delay in their resolution meant that the expropriation of the velodrome was not completed until July 2015, although new resources did not make it final until 2017.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They don't start to get projects for a month. Due to word of mouth, the get offer from Mr. Prakash (Saravana Subbiah), a greedy businessman who wants to build a theme park in a marshy land.

Target: They don't start to get projects for a month. But due to word of mouth, the get offer from Mr. Prakash (Saravana Subbiah), a greedy businessman who wants to build a theme park in a marshy land.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The city of Perth has lost many vennels with the gradual transformation of its medieval centre. Some have survived and are still used: Guard Vennel, Cow Vennel, Baxters Vennel, Fleshers Vennel, Water Vennel and Cutlog Vennel.

Target: The city of Perth has lost many vennels with the gradual transformation of its medieval centre, but some have survived and are still used: Guard Vennel, Cow Vennel, Baxters Vennel, Fleshers Vennel, Water Vennel and Cutlog Vennel.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Extensive research on platypuses shows that their toxin was initially formed from gene duplication. Data provides evidence that the further evolution of platypus venom does not rely as much on gene duplication as once was thought.

Target: Extensive research on platypuses shows that their toxin was initially formed from gene duplication, but data provides evidence that the further evolution of platypus venom does not rely as much on gene duplication as once was thought.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Technically it is a live album, as all the tracks were performed live. It is different from a standard live album in that, instead of live versions of the band's popular songs, it is composed of all new songs.

Target: Although technically it is a live album, as all the tracks were performed live, it is different from a standard live album in that, instead of live versions of the band's popular songs, it is composed of all new songs.


Source: Make the text coherent: The rest was built as mobile units and sold to other parts of the country. The media accommodation was built as a mix of permanent and temporary housing, with the latter being sold as cottages after the Games were completed.

Target: The rest was built as mobile units and sold to other parts of the country. Similarly, the media accommodation was built as a mix of permanent and temporary housing, with the latter being sold as cottages after the Games were completed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The head was discovered so early that its context could not be studied thoroughly. Scholars agree that the Venus of Brassempouy belonged to an Upper Palaeolithic material culture, the Gravettian (29,000 -- 22,000 BP).

Target: Although the head was discovered so early that its context could not be studied thoroughly, scholars agree that the Venus of Brassempouy belonged to an Upper Palaeolithic material culture, the Gravettian (29,000 -- 22,000 BP).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Vercingetorix left the town to its fate. Vercingetorix camped well outside of Avaricum and focused on conducting harassing engagements of the advancing Roman units led by Caesar and his chief lieutenant Titus Labienus.

Target: Leaving the town to its fate, Vercingetorix camped well outside of Avaricum and focused on conducting harassing engagements of the advancing Roman units led by Caesar and his chief lieutenant Titus Labienus.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The Vermont Supreme Court, however, reversed, holding that Brillon's conviction must be vacated, and the charges against him dismissed. The State did not accord Brillon a speedy trial.

Target: The Vermont Supreme Court, however, reversed, holding that Brillon's conviction must be vacated, and the charges against him dismissed, because the State did not accord him a speedy trial.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Its contents are arranged according to the civil calendar, but the three quires containing the period 1 January -- 14 April are lost. There is no information in the earliest Roman liturgical book concerning the Easter Vigil.

Target: Its contents are arranged according to the civil calendar, but the three quires containing the period 1 January -- 14 April are lost. Thus, there is no information in the earliest Roman liturgical book concerning the Easter Vigil.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Every Euclidean vector a in a n-dimensional Euclidean space (R) can be represented as a linear combination of the n versors of the corresponding Cartesian coordinate system. In a three-dimensional space (R), there are three versors :

Target: Every Euclidean vector a in a n-dimensional Euclidean space (R) can be represented as a linear combination of the n versors of the corresponding Cartesian coordinate system. For instance, in a three-dimensional space (R), there are three versors :


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: There is no bar to such a configuration in Federal Aviation Administration (US) regulations. According to Transport Canada (the agency responsible for aviation safety in Canada), vertical seats do not conform to Canadian seating requirements.

Target: There is no bar to such a configuration in Federal Aviation Administration (US) regulations. However, according to Transport Canada (the agency responsible for aviation safety in Canada), vertical seats do not conform to Canadian seating requirements.


Source: Make the text clearer: Anand eventually reached Sofia on 20 April, after a 40-hour road journey. The first game was delayed by one day.

Target: Anand eventually reached Sofia on 20 April, after a 40-hour road journey. Consequently, the first game was delayed by one day.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He added and deleted whole sections. The content of the last edition differs substantially from that of the first.

Target: He added and deleted whole sections so that the content of the last edition differs substantially from that of the first.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Charles Lyell had thoroughly criticized Lamarck's ideas in the second edition of his monumental work Principles of Geology. It was naturally tempting for some critics to simply dismiss Vestiges as Lamarckian.

Target: Charles Lyell had thoroughly criticized Lamarck's ideas in the second edition of his monumental work Principles of Geology. Thus, it was naturally tempting for some critics to simply dismiss Vestiges as Lamarckian.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It is probable that Darwin read Chambers's comments. Chambers removed the offending passage from the 3rd edition of the Origin.

Target: It is probable that Darwin read Chambers's comments, because he removed the offending passage from the 3rd edition of the Origin.


Source: Fix coherence: There was a Byzantine -- Frankish conflict in the period of 789 -- 810 over Dalmatia. Nothing is known from contemporary sources about the Slavs in the hinterland.

Target: There was a Byzantine -- Frankish conflict in the period of 789 -- 810 over Dalmatia, although nothing is known from contemporary sources about the Slavs in the hinterland.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He settled in London, Ontario. He was a Professor of Applied Mathematics at the University of Western Ontario.

Target: Settling in London, Ontario, he was a Professor of Applied Mathematics at the University of Western Ontario.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Reeves built on these money-making schemes. Reeves began charging for his own artistic services such as customising and painting his school friend's Haversack bags and elaborately embroidering clothing.

Target: Building on these money-making schemes, Reeves began charging for his own artistic services such as customising and painting his school friend's Haversack bags and elaborately embroidering clothing.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Still primarily known as a comedian. Reeves is gaining a reputation as an artist.

Target: Although still primarily known as a comedian, Reeves is gaining a reputation as an artist.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Reeves had surplus copies of the discs. Reeves passed them on to Darlington-based band Dan who then included a copy of the disc with their album Kicking Ass at T.J.'s.

Target: Having surplus copies of the discs, Reeves passed them on to Darlington-based band Dan who then included a copy of the disc with their album Kicking Ass at T.J.'s.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, only a handful of these courts actually allowed for jury trials and appeals to Congress. The American Constitution formed in 1789 vested Admiralty jurisdiction in federal district courts.

Target: However, only a handful of these courts actually allowed for jury trials and appeals to Congress. Eventually, the American Constitution formed in 1789 vested Admiralty jurisdiction in federal district courts.


Source: Make the text more logical: Typically the courts were presided over by a judge,. Courts was deemed more suitable to be presided over by a jury.

Target: Typically the courts were presided over by a judge, unless it was deemed more suitable to be presided over by a jury.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Further criticisms was that the owner of the ship or maritime goods seized had to post a large bond before allowing to defend himself. Even if owner's trial ended in acquittal, owner would still be required to pay costs.

Target: Further criticisms was that the owner of the ship or maritime goods seized had to post a large bond before allowing to defend himself. Additionally, even if his trial ended in acquittal, he would still be required to pay costs.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Filisola agreed to depart. Filisola was responsible for organizing the withdrawal of the remaining 4,000 Mexican soldiers from Texas.

Target: Agreeing to depart, Filisola was responsible for organizing the withdrawal of the remaining 4,000 Mexican soldiers from Texas.


Source: Fix sentence transition: They fear that someone has been hurt. They investigate and find a hunter, who is decapitated in front of them by Crowley.

Target: Fearing that someone has been hurt, they investigate and find a hunter, who is decapitated in front of them by Crowley.


Source: Fix coherence: In 1964, Del House (Jonah Ray) proposes to his girlfriend Sue (Kelly Vrooman) in Honey Island Swamp. The couple hears Victor Crowley's (Kane Hodder) ghostly moans.

Target: In 1964, Del House (Jonah Ray) proposes to his girlfriend Sue (Kelly Vrooman) in Honey Island Swamp. However the couple hears Victor Crowley's (Kane Hodder) ghostly moans.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He played four more tournaments from September through December. He did not earn any additional points and finished the year ranked No. 1231.

Target: Although he played four more tournaments from September through December, he did not earn any additional points and finished the year ranked No. 1231.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Commander Ross invited Prather to go first, but he declined. Commander stepped into the hook contrary to proper procedure and slipped partially out it, but Prather was able to recover without falling completely into the water.

Target: Commander Ross invited Prather to go first, but he declined. Ross stepped into the hook contrary to proper procedure and slipped partially out it, but he was able to recover without falling completely into the water.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This had been rehearsed. Without orders to do so, the crew in a hovering helicopter lowered a hook.

Target: This had been rehearsed. However, without orders to do so, the crew in a hovering helicopter lowered a hook.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Shortly after Prather's death, President John F. Kennedy phoned Prather's widow, Virginia Merritt. Virginia Merritt arrived at the White House with Virginia Merritt's 's children, Marla Lee Prather and Prather.

Target: Shortly after Prather's death, President John F. Kennedy phoned Prather's widow, Virginia Merritt, and she arrived at the White House with her children, Marla Lee Prather and Victor A. Prather III.


Source: Fix coherence: I will give the above reward for his confinement in jail. I can get him.

Target: I will give the above reward for his confinement in jail, so that I can get him.


Source: Make the text coherent: Clarice combined an interest in education and socialism from an early stage. Inspired by Keir Hardie's published views on religious education, Clarice was a Clarice of the Glasgow Socialist Sunday School in the 1890s.

Target: Clarice combined an interest in education and socialism from an early stage. Inspired by Keir Hardie's published views on religious education, she was a founder member of the Glasgow Socialist Sunday School in the 1890s.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: When international tensions began to develop in the 1930s, Clarice initially held to her pacifist principles. Clarice appeared at peace assemblies and in 1935 was one of the key speakers at a women's peace conference in the Keir Hardie Institute.

Target: When international tensions began to develop in the 1930s, Clarice initially held to her pacifist principles. She appeared at peace assemblies and in 1935 was one of the key speakers at a women's peace conference in the Keir Hardie Institute.


Source: Make the text clearer: This meaning is compatible with the idiom clarion call. An irresistible summons.

Target: This meaning is compatible with the idiom clarion call, meaning an irresistible summons.


Source: Make the text more coherent: When fighting, the horse will collect. In collection he can produce lightning speed reactions for kicking.

Target: When fighting, the horse will collect because in collection he can produce lightning speed reactions for kicking.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She later admitted that she studied law only. She was pressured into it due to her father's profession and never really enjoyed it during her college years despite her excellent grades.

Target: She later admitted that she studied law only because she was pressured into it due to her father's profession and never really enjoyed it during her college years despite her excellent grades.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It is managed by West Midlands Trains. Most of the services from the station are operated by Chiltern Railways.

Target: It is managed by West Midlands Trains, although most of the services from the station are operated by Chiltern Railways.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Harvison loved the adrenaline rush. Harvison took up Muay Thai and Jiu-Jitsu full-time in hopes of becoming a professional mixed martial artist.

Target: Loving the adrenaline rush, Harvison took up Muay Thai and Jiu-Jitsu full-time in hopes of becoming a professional mixed martial artist.


Source: Fix coherence: He entered his fourth year at Texas -- Arlingtoned. He set a new 60 m best of 6.55 seconds in February 2014.

Target: Entering his fourth year at Texas -- Arlington, he set a new 60 m best of 6.55 seconds in February 2014.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Mutations in ARID1A commonly contain phosphatase and tensin homolog (PTEN) that are hypothesized to contribute to clear cell tumorigenesis. Research also shows that inactivation of ARID1A alone does not lead to tumor initiation.

Target: Mutations in ARID1A commonly contain phosphatase and tensin homolog (PTEN) that are hypothesized to contribute to clear cell tumorigenesis. However, research also shows that inactivation of ARID1A alone does not lead to tumor initiation.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: ( Class-D stations have night power between zero and 250 watts, and frequently operate on clear channels.) Any existing station could voluntarily relinquish nighttime authority, thereby becoming a class-D, and several have done so since the rule change.

Target: ( Class-D stations have night power between zero and 250 watts, and frequently operate on clear channels.) However, any existing station could voluntarily relinquish nighttime authority, thereby becoming a class-D, and several have done so since the rule change.


Source: Make the text more consistent: There exist exceptions, where a former Class B station was elevated to Class A. Class B station maintained Class B station's previous antenna system, or made only minor changes thereto.

Target: There exist exceptions, where a former Class B station was elevated to Class A, yet it maintained its previous antenna system, or made only minor changes thereto.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: This system was continued in the 1941 NARBA system. Almost all stations shifted broadcast frequencies.

Target: This system was continued in the 1941 NARBA system, although almost all stations shifted broadcast frequencies.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He reacted to critics who accused him of corruption. He said that he planned to take legal action against them.

Target: Reacting to critics who accused him of corruption, he said that he planned to take legal action against them.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: She dabbles in print journalism. She has contributed travel articles to publications such as The Daily Telegraph.

Target: Dabbling in print journalism, she has contributed travel articles to publications such as The Daily Telegraph.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They reconcile before he perishes. With the gates breached, Cleopatra kills herself with a poisonous snake and is found sitting on her throne, dead.

Target: They reconcile before he perishes. Then, with the gates breached, Cleopatra kills herself with a poisonous snake and is found sitting on her throne, dead.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Caesar ignores the forebodings of Calpurnia, Cleopatra, and a soothsayer (Harry Beresford) who warns him about the Ides of March. Caesar goes to announce his intentions to the Senate.

Target: Ignoring the forebodings of Calpurnia, Cleopatra, and a soothsayer (Harry Beresford) who warns him about the Ides of March, Caesar goes to announce his intentions to the Senate.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Without his knowledge, Cleopatra opens the gate and offers to cede Egypt in return for Antony's life in exile, but Octavian turns her down. Antony believes that Cleopatra has deserted Antony for Antony's rival and stabs himself.

Target: Without his knowledge, Cleopatra opens the gate and offers to cede Egypt in return for Antony's life in exile, but Octavian turns her down. Meanwhile, Antony believes that she has deserted him for his rival and stabs himself.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The plot revolves around the circumstances which force him to become corrupt. He repents and becomes honest again -- while also saving his nation from anti-nationals.

Target: The plot revolves around the circumstances which force him to become corrupt. In the end, he repents and becomes honest again -- while also saving his nation from anti-nationals.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He stated that he had lost around $1 million. He folded the team and sold it to a group in Syracuse, New York, thus ending the franchise's long and illustrious history.

Target: Stating that he had lost around $1 million, he folded the team and sold it to a group in Syracuse, New York, thus ending the franchise's long and illustrious history.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The deluxe version of the album features a series of live recordings at Berkeley 2016. Berkeley is california's legendary record store Rasputin Music in celebration of Record Store Day on April 16.

Target: The deluxe version of the album features a series of live recordings at Berkeley, California's legendary record store Rasputin Music in celebration of Record Store Day on April 16, 2016.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Cliff Woodbury (July 8, 1894 in Chicago, Illinois -- November 13, 1984 in Alton, Illinois) was an American racecar driver. racecar driver raced all over the American during one of the most dangerous times in motorsports.

Target: Cliff Woodbury (July 8, 1894 in Chicago, Illinois -- November 13, 1984 in Alton, Illinois) was an American racecar driver. Cliff raced all over the US during one of the most dangerous times in motorsports.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: It was taken over in about 1900 by the British Portland Cement Company. After the Great War Portland Cement Company began to decline, and was phased out in 1920 -- 1921.

Target: It was taken over in about 1900 by the British Portland Cement Company, but after the Great War it began to decline, and was phased out in 1920 -- 1921.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Alpha site, however, became exhausted by 1950. Further digging led to extensive flooding, as quarrying exceeded the depth of the water table.

Target: The Alpha site, however, became exhausted by 1950, and further digging led to extensive flooding, as quarrying exceeded the depth of the water table.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Possum's father was Tjatjiti Tjungurrayai. Father's mother was Long Rose Nangala.

Target: Possum's father was Tjatjiti Tjungurrayai and his mother was Long Rose Nangala.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Global policy-making has not yet recognized the overarching principles (climate equity, inclusive participation, and human rights) of the movement. Most of those key principles are beginning to emerge in the activity on non-governmental organizations.

Target: Global policy-making has not yet recognized the overarching principles (climate equity, inclusive participation, and human rights) of the movement. Instead, most of those key principles are beginning to emerge in the activity on non-governmental organizations.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It has been challenged in the courts by the automakers. Support for the law is growing as other states have adopted similar legislation.

Target: Although it has been challenged in the courts by the automakers, support for the law is growing as other states have adopted similar legislation.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The United States. A signatory to the Kyoto Protocol.

Target: The United States, although a signatory to the Kyoto Protocol.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: 1The total ice volume is different from the sum of the component parts. Individual figures have been rounded.

Target: 1The total ice volume is different from the sum of the component parts because individual figures have been rounded.


Source: Make the text coherent: Hurricanes can move into the area from the Gulf of Mexico, bringing heavy rains and high winds. Most years see little or no significant hurricane activity.

Target: Hurricanes can move into the area from the Gulf of Mexico, bringing heavy rains and high winds. However, most years see little or no significant hurricane activity.


Source: Fix coherence: This might flood certain low-lying intersections, but doesn't generally affect citizens or the business of the city. Occasionally very heavy thunderstorms dump so much water on the city that widespread congestion and even property damage in low-lying areas result.

Target: This might flood certain low-lying intersections, but doesn't generally affect citizens or the business of the city. However, occasionally very heavy thunderstorms dump so much water on the city that widespread congestion and even property damage in low-lying areas result.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Only a category 2 storm (out of 5). Ike brought moderate rain but high winds for an unusually long duration (upwards of nine hours).

Target: Although only a category 2 storm (out of 5), Ike brought moderate rain but high winds for an unusually long duration (upwards of nine hours).


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: With a team of about 30 people, it was their first game to utilize a 3D graphics engine. Team veterans preferred to have used 2D graphics instead.

Target: With a team of about 30 people, it was their first game to utilize a 3D graphics engine, although team veterans preferred to have used 2D graphics instead.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: As the drug can be fatal in high doses, prescribing clomethiazole outside a controlled environment, like a hospital, is not recommended, especially. There are much less toxic alternatives.

Target: As the drug can be fatal in high doses, prescribing clomethiazole outside a controlled environment, like a hospital, is not recommended, especially because there are much less toxic alternatives.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It was released to widespread critical acclaim. Was a commercial failure, reaching number 77 on the UK Album Chart.

Target: It was released to widespread critical acclaim, but was a commercial failure, reaching number 77 on the UK Album Chart.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A closed immersion is finite and radicial (universally injective). A closed immersion is universally closed.

Target: A closed immersion is finite and radicial (universally injective). In particular, a closed immersion is universally closed.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: For example, replacing a column with entries (a, a, b) with another column (x, x, y) might lead to a different solution string, but can not affect solvability. Both columns express the same structure.

Target: For example, replacing a column with entries (a, a, b) with another column (x, x, y) might lead to a different solution string, but can not affect solvability, because both columns express the same structure.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Act I is set in British colonial Africa in the Victorian era, and Act II is set in a London park in 1979. Between the acts only twenty-five years pass for the characters.

Target: Act I is set in British colonial Africa in the Victorian era, and Act II is set in a London park in 1979. However, between the acts only twenty-five years pass for the characters.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Security is always important, but when you are dealing with multi-tenancy, it becomes much more important. You're dealing with segregating multiple customers.

Target: Security is always important, but when you are dealing with multi-tenancy, it becomes much more important because you're dealing with segregating multiple customers.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It is popular destination for visitors. Is part of a National Nature Reserve and Area of Special Scientific Interest.

Target: It is popular destination for visitors, and is part of a National Nature Reserve and Area of Special Scientific Interest.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Both teams are founded in 2010. Crusaders had a little more experience, most from head-coach Rafael Ruiz and that was seen in the game.

Target: Although both teams are founded in 2010, Crusaders had a little more experience, most from head-coach Rafael Ruiz and that was seen in the game.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Cluj overcame their chances. Cluj won 20-7 and with a combined score of 36-33, Cluj Crusaders became the first RoBowl winners outside Bucharest area.

Target: Overcoming their chances, Cluj won 20-7 and with a combined score of 36-33, Cluj Crusaders became the first RoBowl winners outside Bucharest area.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Little has changed inside or outside the house in the century since its construction:. It has ceased to be used as a residence.

Target: Little has changed inside or outside the house in the century since its construction: although it has ceased to be used as a residence.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The CPA similarity measure builds upon the co-citation document similarity approach with the distinctive addition of proximity analysis. The CPA approach allows for the calculation of a more granular resolution of overall document similarity.

Target: The CPA similarity measure builds upon the co-citation document similarity approach with the distinctive addition of proximity analysis. Therefore, the CPA approach allows for the calculation of a more granular resolution of overall document similarity.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A 1939 fire, thought to originate in the basement, caused considerable damage to the building. No casualties occurred.

Target: A 1939 fire, thought to originate in the basement, caused considerable damage to the building, although no casualties occurred.


Source: Fix coherence errors: ( Some consider worker cooperative others view this as part of the producer category.) Worker cooperative are owned and run exclusively by their worker owners as a third class.

Target: ( Some consider worker cooperative, which are owned and run exclusively by their worker owners as a third class, others view this as part of the producer category. )


Source: Fix sentence transition: Coach coincided with its 75th anniversary in 2016. Coach opened Coach House, a 20,000-square-foot Midtown Manhattan retail space.

Target: Coinciding with its 75th anniversary in 2016, Coach opened Coach House, a 20,000-square-foot Midtown Manhattan retail space.


Source: Make the text coherent: Cahn attempted to mimic this process. Cahn made a way of processing the leather to make it stronger, softer, and more flexible.

Target: Attempting to mimic this process, Cahn made a way of processing the leather to make it stronger, softer, and more flexible.


Source: Make the text more logical: Around 1997, Goldenvoice was struggling to book concerts against larger companies. Goldenvoice were unable to offer guarantees as high as Goldenvoice's competitors, such as SFX Entertainment.

Target: Around 1997, Goldenvoice was struggling to book concerts against larger companies, and they were unable to offer guarantees as high as their competitors, such as SFX Entertainment.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Barapukuria coal mine is run by the Barapukuria Coal Mining Company Limited. Barapukuria Coal Mining Company Limited is a Barapukuria Coal Mining Company Limited of the state owned Petrobangla.

Target: Barapukuria coal mine is run by the Barapukuria Coal Mining Company Limited. Barapukuria Coal Mining Company Limited is a subsidiary of the state owned Petrobangla.


Source: Make the text more coherent: One turns all arrows around. One obtains the axioms of coalgebras.

Target: Turning all arrows around, one obtains the axioms of coalgebras.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Bayard Rustin claimed that the CPTU was redundant. Black trade unionists had already assumed leadership roles in their own unions and communities.

Target: Bayard Rustin claimed that the CPTU was redundant because black trade unionists had already assumed leadership roles in their own unions and communities.


Source: Make the text more logical: Coalmine Records was established in 2005. Coalmine Records' founder and C.E.O. is Matt Diamond.

Target: Coalmine Records was established in 2005. Its founder and C.E.O. is Matt Diamond.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: There are several naturally occurring forces that adversely affect the wetland regions of Louisiana. Many believe it is human intervention that has caused the majority of the decline.

Target: Although there are several naturally occurring forces that adversely affect the wetland regions of Louisiana, many believe it is human intervention that has caused the majority of the decline.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Mangrove seeds have been tried. When grown Mangrove seeds have the benefit of reducing marsh water salinity.

Target: Mangrove seeds have been tried because when grown they have the benefit of reducing marsh water salinity.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Also a signal station during World War II. Never a lighthouse.

Target: Also a signal station during World War II, although never a lighthouse.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: These coastal artillery fortifications or land batteries were to be based on British designs. Heavy artillery pieces and ammunition was ordered from British.

Target: These coastal artillery fortifications or land batteries were to be based on British designs. Heavy artillery pieces and ammunition was ordered from Britain.


Source: Fix coherence: However, most residents in Cobb and other counties are customers of Georgia Power. Those within the city limits of Marietta.

Target: However, most residents in Cobb and other counties are customers of Georgia Power, while those within the city limits of Marietta.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Beza was the first to examine it. Beza included notes of some of its readings in Beza's editions of the New Testament.

Target: Beza was the first to examine it, and he included notes of some of its readings in his editions of the New Testament.


Source: Make the text clearer: Minerals and metallic ions that organisms uptake through their diet provide prime examples of inorganic cofactors. Zn is needed to assist the enzyme carbonic anhydrase as it converts carbon dioxide and water to bicarbonate and protons.

Target: Minerals and metallic ions that organisms uptake through their diet provide prime examples of inorganic cofactors. For instance Zn is needed to assist the enzyme carbonic anhydrase as it converts carbon dioxide and water to bicarbonate and protons.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Light intensity was chosen as a treatment. This specifically relates to anxiety-induction.

Target: Light intensity was chosen as a treatment because this specifically relates to anxiety-induction.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It uses the cognitive bias approach. It has been found that rats which are subjected to either handling or playful, experimenter-administered manual stimulation (tickling) showed different responses to the intermediate stimulus: rats exposed to tickling were more optimistic.

Target: Using the cognitive bias approach, it has been found that rats which are subjected to either handling or playful, experimenter-administered manual stimulation (tickling) showed different responses to the intermediate stimulus: rats exposed to tickling were more optimistic.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The event must be reported immediately when it is identified. Event is the event of the FDA that all adverse events be documented and investigated.

Target: The event must be reported immediately when it is identified and it is the expectation of the FDA that all adverse events be documented and investigated.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Inspired by bands like U2 and R.E.M., Coldplay decided that they would operate as a democracy. The band determined Coldplay would fire anyone who used hard drugs.

Target: Inspired by bands like U2 and R.E.M., Coldplay decided that they would operate as a democracy. Additionally, the band determined they would fire anyone who used hard drugs.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It grosses over $523 million. It is the third highest-grossing concert tour in history.

Target: Grossing over $523 million, it is the third highest-grossing concert tour in history.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Of historical note is the toll house on the Scottish side of the bridge, which became infamous for the runaway marriages that took place there, as at Gretna Green,. Bridge's name.

Target: Of historical note is the toll house on the Scottish side of the bridge, which became infamous for the runaway marriages that took place there, as at Gretna Green, hence its name.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It was once a famous horse farm owned by Hal Price McGrath and had strong ties to thoroughbred horse racing. In 1875, a horse named Aristides was raised on this site.

Target: It was once a famous horse farm owned by Hal Price McGrath and had strong ties to thoroughbred horse racing. In fact, in 1875, a horse named Aristides was raised on this site.


Source: Make the text coherent: I feel good most of the time. There will be bad days too.

Target: I feel good most of the time. But there will be bad days too.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Nish scored a hat-trick in the first half of that match. Hibernian only managed a 6 -- 6 draw, in the highest scoring SPL match in league history.

Target: Nish scored a hat-trick in the first half of that match, yet Hibernian only managed a 6 -- 6 draw, in the highest scoring SPL match in league history.


Source: Fix coherence: Common donor restrictions include requiring that an object always be exhibited, or that a collection stays together. Such restrictions can prevent museums from changing their exhibits as scholarship evolves and may introduce conservation issues for delicate objects not suited to continued display.

Target: Common donor restrictions include requiring that an object always be exhibited, or that a collection stays together. However, such restrictions can prevent museums from changing their exhibits as scholarship evolves and may introduce conservation issues for delicate objects not suited to continued display.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Elimination match: multiple participants are tested in a game of survival, as they have to avoid being the contestant with the least amount of accumulated points after a round of questions is asked. Participants are eliminated (and there are eliminations every round).

Target: Elimination match: multiple participants are tested in a game of survival, as they have to avoid being the contestant with the least amount of accumulated points after a round of questions is asked, or they are eliminated (and there are eliminations every round).


Source: Fix sentence flow: Both survived well into recent years. Both eventually succumbed to heavy weather.

Target: Both survived well into recent years, although both eventually succumbed to heavy weather.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Shortly after, same scenarios surged in Santiago de Cali, Socorro and Pamplona. Bogota, the central cathedra of the Viceroyalty rebelled on July 20.

Target: Shortly after, same scenarios surged in Santiago de Cali, Socorro and Pamplona. Finally, Bogota, the central cathedra of the Viceroyalty rebelled on July 20.


Source: Fix coherence: Many of these breeds come from different foundation bloodstock from horses in North America. Some have haplotypes not found in North America.

Target: Many of these breeds come from different foundation bloodstock from horses in North America, and some have haplotypes not found in North America.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Smaller than the gold rushes of Victoria and New South Wales. Queensland had its own series of gold rushes in the later half of the nineteenth century.

Target: Although smaller than the gold rushes of Victoria and New South Wales, Queensland had its own series of gold rushes in the later half of the nineteenth century.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Production of the Open Top started in 1872 and stopped in 1873 when the Single Action Army model started to be delivered to the US Army. The Open Top was already a completely new Open Top.

Target: Production of the Open Top started in 1872 and stopped in 1873 when the Single Action Army model started to be delivered to the US Army. However, the Open Top was already a completely new design.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Ford made his off-Broadway debut in 2011 playing a role in the musical theatre Little House on the Ferry New York. The Ferry is a modern gay love story set in the legendary summer resort of Fire Island.

Target: Ford made his off-Broadway debut in 2011 playing a role in the musical theatre Little House on the Ferry, a modern gay love story set in the legendary summer resort of Fire Island, New York.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: These subjects come under the headings of Authority (A), Authority Registered (AR), Subject Area Specifications (S). Are purely TAFE Based (T).

Target: These subjects come under the headings of Authority (A), Authority Registered (AR), Subject Area Specifications (S), or are purely TAFE Based (T).


Source: Fix sentence transition: Goethite forms only in the presence of water. Goethite's discovery is the first direct evidence of past water in the Columbia Hills's rocks.

Target: Goethite forms only in the presence of water, so its discovery is the first direct evidence of past water in the Columbia Hills's rocks.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Its foundation up until July 15, 1919. Comalapa belonged to the district of Chalatenango, and since then to the new district of Dulce Nombre de Maria.

Target: Since its foundation up until July 15, 1919, Comalapa belonged to the district of Chalatenango, and since then to the new district of Dulce Nombre de Maria.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Participated in Operation Iraqi Freedom, Iraq, March -- June 2003 providing logistic support to the 1st Marine Division on its march to Baghdad. The Battalion redeployed to Iraq from August 2004 -- February 2005 in Support of Operation Iraqi Freedom.

Target: Participated in Operation Iraqi Freedom, Iraq, March -- June 2003 providing logistic support to the 1st Marine Division on its march to Baghdad. The Battalion redeployed to Iraq from August 2004 -- February 2005 in Support of Operation Iraqi Freedom II.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The program was split into six segments as described below. In some episodes some segments may replace others.

Target: The program was split into six segments as described below, although in some episodes some segments may replace others.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They also have the Nanoswarm Hive, a machine that generates a nanoparticle shield, similar to an Iron Curtain. Which is stationary and prevents anything coming in or out.

Target: They also have the Nanoswarm Hive, a machine that generates a nanoparticle shield, similar to an Iron Curtain, but which is stationary and prevents anything coming in or out.


Source: Fix coherence: These originated in the first Red Alert as a functionally identical equivalent to Tiberium. What were ostensibly strip mines had ore growing out of the ground.

Target: These originated in the first Red Alert as a functionally identical equivalent to Tiberium, and what were ostensibly strip mines had ore growing out of the ground.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: He has also stated that uninstalling the game will not return the used installation back to the user. After several patches released by EA, in the released game, uninstalls do return the installation back to the user.

Target: He has also stated that uninstalling the game will not return the used installation back to the user. However, after several patches released by EA, in the released game, uninstalls do return the installation back to the user.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: On January 8, 2009, the game became available via the Steam platform with SecuROM. On February 19, 2009 a patch was released removing SecuROM from the game ; SecuROM remains protected by the Steam DRM.

Target: On January 8, 2009, the game became available via the Steam platform with SecuROM. However, on February 19, 2009 a patch was released removing SecuROM from the game ; it remains protected by the Steam DRM.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It refers to encouraging people to do the necessary good in life even when they have forgotten to do so. When they have forgotten salat.

Target: It refers to encouraging people to do the necessary good in life even when they have forgotten to do so. For example, when they have forgotten salat.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The protesters shouted against neo-liberalism, capitalism and the memorandum. Some of protesters wore masks with the faces of various European leaders.

Target: The protesters shouted against neo-liberalism, capitalism and the memorandum, while some of them wore masks with the faces of various European leaders.


Source: Fix coherence: However, CCIR 601 uses 4: 2: 2 color sampling, which subsamples the Cb and Cr components only horizontally. H. 261 used vertical color subsampling, resulting in what is known as 4: 2: 0.

Target: However, CCIR 601 uses 4: 2: 2 color sampling, which subsamples the Cb and Cr components only horizontally. H. 261 additionally used vertical color subsampling, resulting in what is known as 4: 2: 0.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Sympathetic to the non-aligned movement. CW was critical of its inclusion of dictatorships from various part of the political spectrum.

Target: Although sympathetic to the non-aligned movement, CW was critical of its inclusion of dictatorships from various part of the political spectrum.


Source: Make the text coherent: In decolonizing archaeology, archaeologists are trying to give communities more control over every stage in the archaeological process. Some programs have begun attempting to bring Indigenous leaders together globally to discuss shared methods for decolonization through archaeological collaboration.

Target: In decolonizing archaeology, archaeologists are trying to give communities more control over every stage in the archaeological process. For example, some programs have begun attempting to bring Indigenous leaders together globally to discuss shared methods for decolonization through archaeological collaboration.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Community archaeology in the United Kingdom has existed for many years. Only recently has Community archaeology come to be known by that name.

Target: Community archaeology in the United Kingdom has existed for many years, although only recently has it come to be known by that name.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Internet-based volunteer networks of blogs and groups have been formed in the internet social-networking field as well. The Alabama Charity Network provides another place for people to connect to fundraisers and charity information using internet-based social networking.

Target: Internet-based volunteer networks of blogs and groups have been formed in the internet social-networking field as well. The Alabama Charity Network for example provides another place for people to connect to fundraisers and charity information using internet-based social networking.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Much of the oil was discovered on land given to Afrikaans settlers. They could not benefit directly from the discovery due to Argentinian law which decrees that all mineral deposits belong to the state.

Target: Although much of the oil was discovered on land given to Afrikaans settlers, they could not benefit directly from the discovery due to Argentinian law which decrees that all mineral deposits belong to the state.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Commodore Rivadavia became the first Argentine marine to anchor his corvette in Rada Tilly in March 1891. Marine was reconnoiteirng the area to control the displacement of the Chilean Army in the Argentine south.

Target: Commodore Rivadavia became the first Argentine marine to anchor his corvette in Rada Tilly in March 1891, while he was reconnoiteirng the area to control the displacement of the Chilean Army in the Argentine south.


Source: Make the text clearer: Jump up ^ Can run a guest OS without modifying it, and. Is generally able to run any OS that could run on a physical machine the VM simulates.

Target: Jump up ^ Can run a guest OS without modifying it, and hence is generally able to run any OS that could run on a physical machine the VM simulates.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: During interference competition, organisms interact directly by fighting for scarce resources. Large aphids defend feeding sites on cottonwood leaves by ejecting smaller aphids from better sites.

Target: During interference competition, organisms interact directly by fighting for scarce resources. For example, large aphids defend feeding sites on cottonwood leaves by ejecting smaller aphids from better sites.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: According to evolutionary theory, this competition within and between species for resources is important in natural selection. Competition may play less of a role than expansion among larger clades ; this is termed the 'Room to Roam' hypothesis.

Target: According to evolutionary theory, this competition within and between species for resources is important in natural selection. However, competition may play less of a role than expansion among larger clades ; this is termed the 'Room to Roam' hypothesis.


Source: Fix sentence flow: These individuals have less reproduction and survival than individuals with traits that differ from their competitors. Individuals will not contribute many offspring to future generations.

Target: These individuals have less reproduction and survival than individuals with traits that differ from their competitors. Consequently, they will not contribute many offspring to future generations.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Exploitation competition occurs indirectly through a common limiting resource which acts as an intermediate. Use of resources depletes the amount available to others, or they compete for space.

Target: Exploitation competition occurs indirectly through a common limiting resource which acts as an intermediate. For example, use of resources depletes the amount available to others, or they compete for space.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Political integration is required. For an economic union to be most effective it is necessary for all provinces to be at the same stage of the economic cycle.

Target: Political integration is required because for an economic union to be most effective it is necessary for all provinces to be at the same stage of the economic cycle.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Does not claim that he does. Does not implies that there must be at least some indication that he does, or the question would not need to be asked.

Target: does not claim that he does, but implies that there must be at least some indication that he does, or the question would not need to be asked.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ward appears to have changed his mind. In April 1909 Ward announced that the government intended to introduce compulsory military training for youths up to 21 years old.

Target: Ward appears to have changed his mind, because in April 1909 he announced that the government intended to introduce compulsory military training for youths up to 21 years old.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It is a common misconception that the RANS equations do not apply to flows with a time-varying mean flow. These equations are.

Target: It is a common misconception that the RANS equations do not apply to flows with a time-varying mean flow because these equations are.


Source: Fix coherence: Blood properties like Non-Newtonian behavior and realistic boundary conditions (e.g. systemic pressure) have to be taken into consideration. Making it possible to analyze and optimize the flow in the cardiovascular system for different applications.

Target: Blood properties like Non-Newtonian behavior and realistic boundary conditions (e.g. systemic pressure) have to be taken into consideration. Therefore, making it possible to analyze and optimize the flow in the cardiovascular system for different applications.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Their method itself was simplified, in that it did not include lifting flows and. Was mainly applied to ship hulls and aircraft fuselages.

Target: Their method itself was simplified, in that it did not include lifting flows and hence was mainly applied to ship hulls and aircraft fuselages.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This means introduction of several transport equations for all the Reynolds stresses and. This approach is much more costly in CPU effort.

Target: This means introduction of several transport equations for all the Reynolds stresses and hence this approach is much more costly in CPU effort.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Further simplification, by removing terms describing vorticity yields the full potential equations. For small perturbations in subsonic and supersonic flows (not transonic or hypersonic) these equations can be linearized to yield the linearized potential equations.

Target: Further simplification, by removing terms describing vorticity yields the full potential equations. Finally, for small perturbations in subsonic and supersonic flows (not transonic or hypersonic) these equations can be linearized to yield the linearized potential equations.


Source: Make the text more logical: It works with the CAATs. It is essential for the accountant or the auditor to select the right data, the selection process is very much tricky, and you need to be professional for it.

Target: Working with the CAATs, it is essential for the accountant or the auditor to select the right data, the selection process is very much tricky, and you need to be professional for it.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Another advantage of CAATTs is that it allows auditors to test for specific risks. An insurance company may want to ensure that it doesn't pay any claims after a policy is terminated.

Target: Another advantage of CAATTs is that it allows auditors to test for specific risks. For example, an insurance company may want to ensure that it doesn't pay any claims after a policy is terminated.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: CAATs normally includes using basic office productivity software such as spreadsheet, word processors and text editing programs and more advanced software packages involving use statistical analysis and business intelligence tools. Also more dedicated specialized software are available (see below).

Target: CAATs normally includes using basic office productivity software such as spreadsheet, word processors and text editing programs and more advanced software packages involving use statistical analysis and business intelligence tools. But also more dedicated specialized software are available (see below).


Source: Make the text more logical: Omar Syed hopes that. Traditional artificial intelligence techniques are only moderately effective for Arimaa.

Target: Omar Syed hopes that, because traditional artificial intelligence techniques are only moderately effective for Arimaa.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Chess programs examine many, many possible moves, but they are not good (compared to humans) at determining who is winning at the end of a series of moves. One side has more pieces than the other.

Target: Chess programs examine many, many possible moves, but they are not good (compared to humans) at determining who is winning at the end of a series of moves unless one side has more pieces than the other.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The same is true for Arimaa programs. Same's results are not as good in practice.

Target: The same is true for Arimaa programs, but their results are not as good in practice.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Conan joins with the warrior woman Elashi and the beautiful truant zombie Tuanne. Conan tracks the murderer back to the sorcerer.

Target: Joining with the warrior woman Elashi and the beautiful truant zombie Tuanne, Conan tracks the murderer back to the sorcerer.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: A simple concatenation scheme was implemented already for the 1971 Mariner Mars orbiter mission, concatenated codes were starting to be regularly used for deep space communication with the Voyager program. Which launched two space probes in 1977.

Target: Although a simple concatenation scheme was implemented already for the 1971 Mariner Mars orbiter mission, concatenated codes were starting to be regularly used for deep space communication with the Voyager program, which launched two space probes in 1977.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: It uses erasure information from the inner code to improve performance of the outer code. Was the first example of an algorithm using soft-decision decoding.

Target: It uses erasure information from the inner code to improve performance of the outer code, and was the first example of an algorithm using soft-decision decoding.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Nonetheless, Eicke's role as the chief of the CCI placed him within the framework of Heydrich's secret state police ;. Eicke's command of the Death's Head units.

Target: Nonetheless, Eicke's role as the chief of the CCI placed him within the framework of Heydrich's secret state police ; whereas his command of the Death's Head units.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Prisoners were often beaten without any violations procedure. Prisoners were killed by the punishment itself.

Target: Prisoners were often beaten without any violations procedure or they were killed by the punishment itself.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He succeeded, in part. While camp commandants handled the discipline of SS members under them.

Target: He succeeded, in part, because while camp commandants handled the discipline of SS members under them.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: She recalled to have often disobeyed her parents as a child. She showed a special love for the Holy Eucharist from an early age.

Target: Although she recalled to have often disobeyed her parents as a child, she showed a special love for the Holy Eucharist from an early age.


Source: Make the text more logical: Another example of a case requiring conditional baptism is when an emergency baptism has been performed using impure water. The validity of the baptism is in question.

Target: Another example of a case requiring conditional baptism is when an emergency baptism has been performed using impure water. Then, the validity of the baptism is in question.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Confidence-Based Learning begins the learning process by asking the learner a set of questions and then filling knowledge gaps with critical content,. Most traditional online learning approaches deliver content first and then test to validate each learner's understanding of the content.

Target: Confidence-Based Learning begins the learning process by asking the learner a set of questions and then filling knowledge gaps with critical content, whereas most traditional online learning approaches deliver content first and then test to validate each learner's understanding of the content.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Bosko finds his gun useless. Bosko tries to flee.

Target: Finding his gun useless, Bosko tries to flee.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Bosko acts nonchalant. Bosko offers the ape some chewing gum.

Target: Acting nonchalant, Bosko offers the ape some chewing gum.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Until 1968 the Pope himself presided over the Congregation. From 1564 the daily administration of the affairs of the Congregation was entrusted to the Cardinal Secretary.

Target: Until 1968 the Pope himself presided over the Congregation. However, from 1564 the daily administration of the affairs of the Congregation was entrusted to the Cardinal Secretary.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Innis initially led the organization to strongly support Black Nationalism. Subsequent political developments within the organization led it to support conservative political positions.

Target: Innis initially led the organization to strongly support Black Nationalism. However, subsequent political developments within the organization led it to support conservative political positions.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In another measure to alleviate overcrowding at some schools, the Board sanctioned the construction of mobile classroom units. A significant proportion of students dropped out before finishing high school.

Target: In another measure to alleviate overcrowding at some schools, the Board sanctioned the construction of mobile classroom units. Moreover, a significant proportion of students dropped out before finishing high school.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: CORE drew much of its membership from college campuses. CORE kept up civil disobedience campaigns in the North as well as the South.

Target: Drawing much of its membership from college campuses, CORE kept up civil disobedience campaigns in the North as well as the South.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The conk is all but extinct as a hairstyle among African-American men today. More mildly relaxed hairstyles such as the Jheri curl and the S-curl were popular during the 1980s and 1990s.

Target: The conk is all but extinct as a hairstyle among African-American men today, although more mildly relaxed hairstyles such as the Jheri curl and the S-curl were popular during the 1980s and 1990s.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Conks were often styled as large pompadours. Other men chose to simply slick their straightened hair back.

Target: Conks were often styled as large pompadours although other men chose to simply slick their straightened hair back.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Glass arrived in Australia in July 2016. Glass played 6 games for the Box Hill development squad that included the squad's victorious grand final team.

Target: Arriving in Australia in July 2016, Glass played 6 games for the Box Hill development squad that included the squad's victorious grand final team.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It is concerned with both its impact on a human's inner and outer world as well as animal and environmental well-being. A conscious business considers both short-term and long-term effects of its actions or inactions.

Target: It is concerned with both its impact on a human's inner and outer world as well as animal and environmental well-being. Furthermore, a conscious business considers both short-term and long-term effects of its actions or inactions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: An overwhelming amount of conscious businesses can be found in the health food industry as well as the LOHAS (lifestyles of health and sustainability) market. Today conscious businesses can be found emerging in almost all aspects of the business world.

Target: An overwhelming amount of conscious businesses can be found in the health food industry as well as the LOHAS (lifestyles of health and sustainability) market. However, today conscious businesses can be found emerging in almost all aspects of the business world.