Source: Make the text coherent: By now, the War of the Spanish Succession had broken out. News of its declaration reached Benbow on 7 July.

Target: By now, the War of the Spanish Succession had broken out, and news of its declaration reached Benbow on 7 July.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: I will not farther now particularize this business, but time will show I have not been in the wrong,. Being too kind to an ungrateful man.

Target: I will not farther now particularize this business, but time will show I have not been in the wrong, unless being too kind to an ungrateful man.


Source: Make the text more coherent: A biography was published in 2005. A biography details his efforts to preserve wild lands in California and throughout the United States.

Target: A biography, which details his efforts to preserve wild lands in California and throughout the United States, was published in 2005.


Source: Make the text clearer: Himself of mixed mind on the issue. Kun signed on to the plan.

Target: Although himself of mixed mind on the issue, Kun signed on to the plan.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Some sources say that McCarl advised Harding on who should fill the position, and that Harding chose McCarl. Other sources say that Senator Norris or Senator Fess pushed McCarl for the position.

Target: Some sources say that McCarl advised Harding on who should fill the position, and that Harding chose McCarl. But other sources say that Senator Norris or Senator Fess pushed McCarl for the position.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Courage contrasted with conservative RLDS publishing. Courage ventured a fresh look at RLDS issues and historical problems, often diverging from traditional interpretations.

Target: Contrasting with conservative RLDS publishing, Courage ventured a fresh look at RLDS issues and historical problems, often diverging from traditional interpretations.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Greene was the alderman (councillor) of Wynnum and Mayor of Brisbane from 1931 to 1934, which was also his only term in Brisbane City Council. alderman was elected as an alderman to the Wynnum Ward defeating incumbent William Dart.

Target: Greene was the alderman (councillor) of Wynnum and Mayor of Brisbane from 1931 to 1934, which was also his only term in Brisbane City Council. Greene was elected as an alderman to the Wynnum Ward defeating incumbent William Dart.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He was clerk of the Peace for Cape Breton county from December 1875 until January 1880 when the county was incorporated. Then clerk was appointed Municipal clerk, which clerk held until January 1883 when clerk became solicitor of the municipality (Sydney).

Target: He was clerk of the Peace for Cape Breton county from December 1875 until January 1880 when the county was incorporated, and then he was appointed Municipal clerk, which he held until January 1883 when he became solicitor of the municipality (Sydney).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The associated album Sweet Distorted Holiday was released in 1999. Sweet Distorted Holiday peaked in the top 50 on the ARIA albums chart.

Target: The associated album Sweet Distorted Holiday, which peaked in the top 50 on the ARIA albums chart, was released in 1999.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: His relationship with Iosu broke down during that period. Among them were never held distances.

Target: His relationship with Iosu broke down during that period, although among them were never held distances.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The TARDIS does not translate their language. Language is the universal language.

Target: The TARDIS does not translate their language, because it is the universal law.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: His film Achanum Bappayum won the Nargis Dutt Award for Best Feature Film on National Integration in 1973. National Integration is a part of National Film Awards.

Target: His film Achanum Bappayum won the Nargis Dutt Award for Best Feature Film on National Integration, a part of National Film Awards, in 1973.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Originally there were no restrictions on which radio stations could make broadcasts intended for the general public. Effective December 1, 1921, a regulation was adopted limiting broadcasting to stations holding a Limited Commercial license.

Target: Originally there were no restrictions on which radio stations could make broadcasts intended for the general public. However, effective December 1, 1921, a regulation was adopted limiting broadcasting to stations holding a Limited Commercial license.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Antony surrounded himself with a bodyguard of over six thousand of Caesar's veterans. Antony presented himself as Caesar's true successor, largely ignoring Octavian.

Target: Surrounding himself with a bodyguard of over six thousand of Caesar's veterans, Antony presented himself as Caesar's true successor, largely ignoring Octavian.


Source: Make the text more logical: Ushioda's primary education was at Futaba, a very well known private school where the teachers were European nuns. Ushioda was already an accomplished Ushioda by the time Ushioda started high school at the Toho Gakuen School of Music.

Target: Ushioda's primary education was at Futaba, a very well known private school where the teachers were European nuns. She was already an accomplished violinist by the time she started high school at the Toho Gakuen School of Music.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Indianapolis 500 was run on Thursday rather than on Memorial Day. Rain had repeatedly postponed qualifying trials.

Target: The Indianapolis 500 was run on Thursday rather than on Memorial Day because rain had repeatedly postponed qualifying trials.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The mayor of Raleigh is the mayor of Raleigh in the United States. Raleigh is the state capital of North Carolina.

Target: The mayor of Raleigh is the mayor of Raleigh, the state capital of North Carolina, in the United States.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It passes the Issineru River mouth on the left bank, with the Amerindian village, Issineru, on the other bank. Over the lowlands of greenstones of Precambrian Guiana Shield, the Meamu River, Kurupung River and Eping River join the Mazaruni River.

Target: It passes the Issineru River mouth on the left bank, with the Amerindian village, Issineru, on the other bank. Then, over the lowlands of greenstones of Precambrian Guiana Shield, the Meamu River, Kurupung River and Eping River join the Mazaruni River.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They drag along his best friend Eduardo. They board a plane to New Zealand determined to find Julia and win her back.

Target: Dragging along his best friend Eduardo, they board a plane to New Zealand determined to find Julia and win her back.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The gameplay in Memories Off follows a linear plot line and focuses on the appeal of the six female main characters. A linear plot line offers pre-determined scenarios and courses of interaction.

Target: The gameplay in Memories Off follows a linear plot line, which offers pre-determined scenarios and courses of interaction, and focuses on the appeal of the six female main characters.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ornstein and Gordon also replied to Herrmann and Yoder's article saying that. People conducting research with children have an ethical responsibility there is much to be gained from memory implantation research and the benefits outweigh the potential risk for children involved.

Target: Ornstein and Gordon also replied to Herrmann and Yoder's article saying that although people conducting research with children have an ethical responsibility there is much to be gained from memory implantation research and the benefits outweigh the potential risk for children involved.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The roof was designed to be made of a clear, lightweight polymer material that can adjust its opacity to control light. Much of the exterior will be clear polymer or glass to allow views to the outside.

Target: The roof was designed to be made of a clear, lightweight polymer material that can adjust its opacity to control light, and much of the exterior will be clear polymer or glass to allow views to the outside.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Metopon is sometimes used in medicine. Longer acting than hydromorphone.

Target: Metopon is sometimes used in medicine, although longer acting than hydromorphone.


Source: Fix coherence errors: As mentioned above, changes in MITF can result in serious health conditions. Mutations of MITF have been implicated in both Waardenburg syndrome and Tietz syndrome.

Target: As mentioned above, changes in MITF can result in serious health conditions. For example, mutations of MITF have been implicated in both Waardenburg syndrome and Tietz syndrome.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The first and only Republican to qualify to face Curtis was a used car salesman from Rogersville, Packey Grisham. Months after qualifying ended, Packey Grisham dropped out of the race leaving only car salesman to seek the state House seat.

Target: The first and only Republican to qualify to face Curtis was a used car salesman from Rogersville, Packey Grisham. However, months after qualifying ended, Grisham dropped out of the race leaving only Curtis to seek the state House seat.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Indian Army made up the mainstay of the British ground forces. Two Indian divisions saw combat in Ethiopia.

Target: The Indian Army made up the mainstay of the British ground forces. In the end, two Indian divisions saw combat in Ethiopia.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This overtly hostile action could not be tolerated. After victory in Iraq, British forces invaded Syria and Lebanon to remove the Vichy officials from power there.

Target: This overtly hostile action could not be tolerated. Consequently, after victory in Iraq, British forces invaded Syria and Lebanon to remove the Vichy officials from power there.


Source: Make the text coherent: These are divided up into an upper and lower bowl. The seats in the lower bowl are a green fabric material, while the upper bowl are a brown bowl.

Target: These are divided up into an upper and lower bowl. The seats in the lower bowl are a green fabric material, while the upper bowl are a brown color.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Millette's children are Adam, William and Jennifer. Millette is also a Millette.

Target: Millette's children are Adam, William and Jennifer. She is also a grandmother.


Source: Make the text more logical: Frazier wasted no time after being appointed head coach. Frazier began to restructure the team's coaching staff, including letting go of offensive coordinator Darrell Bevell and hiring Mike Singletary as linebackers coach and Bill Musgrave as the new offensive coordinator.

Target: Wasting no time after being appointed head coach, Frazier began to restructure the team's coaching staff, including letting go of offensive coordinator Darrell Bevell and hiring Mike Singletary as linebackers coach and Bill Musgrave as the new offensive coordinator.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: So many collections included prose extracts alongside poetry, often from eighteenth-century novels such as Laurence Sterne's Tristram Shandy (1759). It is arguable they aided the popularisation of novels.

Target: Since so many collections included prose extracts alongside poetry, often from eighteenth-century novels such as Laurence Sterne's Tristram Shandy (1759), it is arguable they aided the popularisation of novels.


Source: Fix coherence errors: These literary miscellanies might be sold as unique collections, arising from the combinations of writers in a small literary circle ;. Miscellanies' function could attempt to be more national and historical, by representing the finest works of British poets to date.

Target: These literary miscellanies might be sold as unique collections, arising from the combinations of writers in a small literary circle ; or their function could attempt to be more national and historical, by representing the finest works of British poets to date.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Cars 1 to 7 ran between Tokyo and Kumamoto. Cars 8 to 13 ran between Tokyo and Oita.

Target: Cars 1 to 7 ran between Tokyo and Kumamoto, while cars 8 to 13 ran between Tokyo and Oita.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He is the author of a number of books including: The Neck Connection, Dr Ali's Women's Health Bible, and Dr Ali's Weight Loss Programme. Dr also wrote a column on integrated medicine for British Mail on Sunday for five years.

Target: He is the author of a number of books including: The Neck Connection, Dr Ali's Women's Health Bible, and Dr Ali's Weight Loss Programme. Ali also wrote a column on integrated medicine for British Mail on Sunday for five years.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He returns with a gun and she freezes time again before the bullet hits her, but it hits her teacher, Mrs. Cameron, instead. Several months later Mrs. Mrs., whose life has fallen apart as a result of the incident, attempts to commit suicide.

Target: He returns with a gun and she freezes time again before the bullet hits her, but it hits her teacher, Mrs. Cameron, instead. Several months later Mrs. Cameron, whose life has fallen apart as a result of the incident, attempts to commit suicide.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The new Pony will be powered either by a PCM (Peugeot-Citroen Moteurs) or FIAT (1360 cc) engine, while retains the lines of the old Pony, and. Is a new era car the interior will feature a USB hub.

Target: The new Pony will be powered either by a PCM (Peugeot-Citroen Moteurs) or FIAT (1360 cc) engine, while retains the lines of the old Pony, and because is a new era car the interior will feature a USB hub.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: PEO allows nanocarriers to travel through the leaky vasculature of a tumor, where they are unable to escape. The leaky vasculature of a tumor is the vasculature of blood vessels that form in a tumor, which contain many small pores.

Target: PEO allows nanocarriers to travel through the leaky vasculature of a tumor, where they are unable to escape. The leaky vasculature of a tumor is the network of blood vessels that form in a tumor, which contain many small pores.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: But I've been a vegetarian for 17 years. Vegetarian consider myself an environmentalist in as much as vegetarian can be, considering the job that vegetarian have.

Target: But I've been a vegetarian for 17 years, and I consider myself an environmentalist in as much as I can be, considering the job that I have.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There was no national policy regarding preservation until 1966. Efforts in the 19th century initiated the journey towards legislation.

Target: Although there was no national policy regarding preservation until 1966, efforts in the 19th century initiated the journey towards legislation.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: ^ Jump up to: Bellush 1975. Bellush is the Failure of the NRA.

Target: ^ Jump up to: Bellush, The Failure of the NRA, 1975.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: These signs are different from those given in the List of UTC time offsets. Ships must obtain GMT from zone time.

Target: These signs are different from those given in the List of UTC time offsets because ships must obtain GMT from zone time.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The engineers devised a plan to add new tunnels to this network. Troops could arrive at the battlefield in secrecy and in safety.

Target: The engineers devised a plan to add new tunnels to this network so that troops could arrive at the battlefield in secrecy and in safety.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Uttar Pradesh government has given farmers and firearm licence holders the right to cull the animals. Animal rights activists in various parts of India were unhappy with the decision.

Target: The Uttar Pradesh government has given farmers and firearm licence holders the right to cull the animals. However, animal rights activists in various parts of India were unhappy with the decision.


Source: Fix coherence: Antichrist Superstar 1996. Antichrist Superstar is a rock opera concept album was released on October 8.

Target: Antichrist Superstar, a rock opera concept album was released on October 8, 1996.


Source: Fix coherence: This film was successful. Film got remade in 7 languages ; which is the highest film for an Indian movie to be remade in other languages.

Target: This film was successful, and it got remade in 7 languages ; which is the highest number for an Indian movie to be remade in other languages.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Labor productivity may decrease, perhaps. Employers retain more workers than they need

Target: Labor productivity may decrease, perhaps because employers retain more workers than they need


Source: Make the text clearer: Customer's purchase intension based on rational expectations, and additionally impacts on emotional trust. Those expectations can be also establish on the product information and revision from others.

Target: Customer's purchase intension based on rational expectations, and additionally impacts on emotional trust. Moreover, those expectations can be also establish on the product information and revision from others.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In 2010, Oracle renamed the product from Sun Java System Web Server to Oracle iPlanet Web Server. Documentation and links are still in the process of being updated to reflect this.

Target: In 2010, Oracle renamed the product from Sun Java System Web Server to Oracle iPlanet Web Server, although documentation and links are still in the process of being updated to reflect this.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The most impoverished are frequently viewed as more reliable targets for transplant tourists. Transplant tourists are the transplant tourists in need of money.

Target: The most impoverished are frequently viewed as more reliable targets for transplant tourists because they are the most in need of money.


Source: Fix sentence flow: While men feature prominently in anecdotes on the organ trade, impoverished women are also frequent victims. Most data show that victims are rarely the victims of purchased organs.

Target: While men feature prominently in anecdotes on the organ trade, impoverished women are also frequent victims. However, most data show that women are rarely the recipients of purchased organs.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Scarcity only exists for some groups of people: those who are denied the organs, and those who can not afford them. What needs to be regulated, according to these authors, is organ procurement and distribution practices.

Target: Scarcity only exists for some groups of people: those who are denied the organs, and those who can not afford them. Thus, what needs to be regulated, according to these authors, is organ procurement and distribution practices.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: You can not run very fast with a flak jacket on. Sometimes you have to wear one.

Target: You can not run very fast with a flak jacket on but sometimes you have to wear one.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Individuals with mild symptoms generally do well and live long productive lives. Individuals with the more severe forms may have very serious disabilities.

Target: Individuals with mild symptoms generally do well and live long productive lives, while individuals with the more severe forms may have very serious disabilities.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Phuket (city) in the southeast of the island Phuket (city) is the capital of the province.

Target: Phuket (city), the capital of the province, in the southeast of the island


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: PicoSpan also permitted the linking of discussion threads into multiple conferences, at the same time. Multiple groups could participate.

Target: PicoSpan also permitted the linking of discussion threads into multiple conferences, at the same time, so that multiple groups could participate.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: If C has higher order singularities then these are counted as multiple double points according to an analysis of the nature of the singularity. An ordinary triple point is counted as 3 double points.

Target: If C has higher order singularities then these are counted as multiple double points according to an analysis of the nature of the singularity. For example an ordinary triple point is counted as 3 double points.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In 1907, each of the approach spans was divided into three plate-girder spans carried on new granite piers and abutments. Funding was insufficient to replace the swing span, so its length was merely increased to 284 feet (87 m).

Target: In 1907, each of the approach spans was divided into three plate-girder spans carried on new granite piers and abutments. However, funding was insufficient to replace the swing span, so its length was merely increased to 284 feet (87 m).


Source: Fix sentence flow: It is a technique with few serious practitioners today, and is notably seen in the works of Seurat, Signac and Cross. See also Andy Warhol's early works, and Pop Art.

Target: It is a technique with few serious practitioners today, and is notably seen in the works of Seurat, Signac and Cross. However, see also Andy Warhol's early works, and Pop Art.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He purchased a pistol. He went to the German Embassy in Paris on November 7.

Target: Purchasing a pistol, he went to the German Embassy in Paris on November 7.


Source: Make the text more logical: Eggs are laid on the plant Hibbertia spicata. Females touch each egg after oviposition with a tuft of hair on their abdomen, which attaches protective spines.

Target: Eggs are laid on the plant Hibbertia spicata, and females touch each egg after oviposition with a tuft of hair on their abdomen, which attaches protective spines.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The saddled bichir, Polypterus endlicheri endlicheri, is a prototypical species of the Polypterus genus. Most of species ''s features are held across the genus.

Target: The saddled bichir, Polypterus endlicheri endlicheri, is a prototypical species of the Polypterus genus, meaning most of its features are held across the genus.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Of this total, 1.8 million kulaks were deported in 1930 -- 31, 1.0 million peasants and ethnic minorities in 1932 -- 39,. About 3.5 million ethnic minorities were further resettled during 1940.

Target: Of this total, 1.8 million kulaks were deported in 1930 -- 31, 1.0 million peasants and ethnic minorities in 1932 -- 39, whereas about 3.5 million ethnic minorities were further resettled during 1940.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Typically, players in the gamelan will be familiar with dance moves and poetry. Dancers are able to play in the ensemble.

Target: Typically, players in the gamelan will be familiar with dance moves and poetry, while dancers are able to play in the ensemble.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Although Cromer High had far better facilities, it was inconveniently situated on the edge of the town. All passenger services were diverted into Cromer Beach (renamed Cromer) and the other stations closed.

Target: Although Cromer High had far better facilities, it was inconveniently situated on the edge of the town. Therefore all passenger services were diverted into Cromer Beach (renamed Cromer) and the other stations closed.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Passenger services ceased in 1964, during the Beeching Axe. Freight services continued to operate on the line until 1993.

Target: Passenger services ceased in 1964, during the Beeching Axe, but freight services continued to operate on the line until 1993.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Easton and Church Hope was revived with hopes of running powers over this line but. Construction was authorised in 1884 none was undertaken until 1888.

Target: The Easton and Church Hope was revived with hopes of running powers over this line but although construction was authorised in 1884 none was undertaken until 1888.


Source: Make the text more logical: They both played main roles during the campaign for the 1993 plebiscite in 1889. The 1993 plebiscite represented the hitherto only real opportunity for a return of the monarchy since the proclamation of the republic.

Target: They both played main roles during the campaign for the 1993 plebiscite, which represented the hitherto only real opportunity for a return of the monarchy since the proclamation of the republic, in 1889.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Protesters stopped at President Obama's campaign headquarters for the 2012 presidential election. Protesters likened Obama to many of his Republican predecessors in his policies on the war and economy.

Target: Stopping at President Obama's campaign headquarters for the 2012 presidential election, protesters likened Obama to many of his Republican predecessors in his policies on the war and economy.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Ptolemy ruled Egypt from 323 BC, nominally in the name of the joint kings Philip III and Alexander IV. As Alexander IV's empire disintegrated, Ptolemy soon established himself as ruler in Alexander IV's own right.

Target: Ptolemy ruled Egypt from 323 BC, nominally in the name of the joint kings Philip III and Alexander IV. However, as Alexander the Great's empire disintegrated, Ptolemy soon established himself as ruler in his own right.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Under Vietnamese law it has had the highest level of wildlife protection since 1992, all exploitation and use of the pygmy slow loris is illegal. Enforcement is poor while minor penalties have little deterring effect.

Target: Under Vietnamese law it has had the highest level of wildlife protection since 1992, all exploitation and use of the pygmy slow loris is illegal. However, enforcement is poor while minor penalties have little deterring effect.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Royal Air Force Halton. More simply Royal Air Force Halton is one of the largest Royal Air Force stations in the United Kingdom, located near the village of Royal Air Force Halton near Wendover, Buckinghamshire.

Target: Royal Air Force Halton or more simply RAF Halton is one of the largest Royal Air Force stations in the United Kingdom, located near the village of Halton near Wendover, Buckinghamshire.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Through Racialization if a woman of African descent immigrated to the U.S people will attribute those same stereotypes to her. Through a racial lens woman fits the African American woman category.

Target: Through Racialization if a woman of African descent immigrated to the U.S people will attribute those same stereotypes to her because through a racial lens she fits the African American woman category.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Through Racialization if a woman of African descent immigrated to the U.S people will attribute those same stereotypes to her because through a racial lens she fits the African American woman category. Those same stereotypes will be applied to woman as well.

Target: Through Racialization if a woman of African descent immigrated to the U.S people will attribute those same stereotypes to her because through a racial lens she fits the African American woman category. Therefore, those same stereotypes will be applied to her as well.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The thin coatings are fragile and can be damaged when exposed to air and moisture. Manufacturers typically use multiple pane windows.

Target: Since the thin coatings are fragile and can be damaged when exposed to air and moisture, manufacturers typically use multiple pane windows.


Source: Make the text more logical: The ZX Spectrum emulation retains the technical idiosyncrasies of the original hardware. Their graphics fluctuate in render speed depending on the number of items the computer has to process on-screen.

Target: The ZX Spectrum emulation retains the technical idiosyncrasies of the original hardware. For instance, their graphics fluctuate in render speed depending on the number of items the computer has to process on-screen.


Source: Fix coherence: Competitors depend on their preference and technique. Competitors are more successful with either more or less flexible shafts on the hammer.

Target: Depending on their preference and technique, competitors are more successful with either more or less flexible shafts on the hammer.


Source: Make the text more logical: Drell stood Hilda up at the altar, causing an infuriated Hilda to destroy the Acropolis. History later blamed the Turks.

Target: Drell stood Hilda up at the altar, causing an infuriated Hilda to destroy the Acropolis, although history later blamed the Turks.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The notions of White supremacy and Western superiority, strongly believed by the colonizers, were to be questioned based on Hindu spirituality. This kind of spiritual Hindu was later carried forward by Mahatma Gandhi and Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan.

Target: The notions of White supremacy and Western superiority, strongly believed by the colonizers, were to be questioned based on Hindu spirituality. This kind of spiritual Hinduism was later carried forward by Mahatma Gandhi and Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan.


Source: Fix sentence transition: This leads researchers to believe that HDAC10 may function more as a recruiter rather than a factor for deacetylation. Experiments conducted with HDAC10 did indeed show deacetylation activity.

Target: This leads researchers to believe that HDAC10 may function more as a recruiter rather than a factor for deacetylation. However, experiments conducted with HDAC10 did indeed show deacetylation activity.


Source: Make the text clearer: Given our current level of knowledge, neither seems to have developed or altered for nearly 2,000 years. Minor local variations in the ceramic ware can be observed.

Target: Given our current level of knowledge, neither seems to have developed or altered for nearly 2,000 years. However, minor local variations in the ceramic ware can be observed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: On August 21, 2007, Delta named Richard Anderson, former CEO of Northwest Airlines and executive at UnitedHealth Group, as a replacement for outgoing CEO Gerald Grinstein. CEO assumed the post on September 1.

Target: On August 21, 2007, Delta named Richard Anderson, former CEO of Northwest Airlines and executive at UnitedHealth Group, as a replacement for outgoing CEO Gerald Grinstein. Anderson assumed the post on September 1.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Keeping the commandment to honour father and mother brings both spiritual and temporal rewards of peace and prosperity. Failure to honor parents harms the individual as well as society.

Target: Keeping the commandment to honour father and mother brings both spiritual and temporal rewards of peace and prosperity, while failure to honor parents harms the individual as well as society.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: So it was really strong-willed of her to achieve all the success. After a struggling of many years, she took a test and got enrolled by Nanjing Normal University as she got the highest marks among the students who took the test.

Target: So it was really strong-willed of her to achieve all the success. And after a struggling of many years, she took a test and got enrolled by Nanjing Normal University as she got the highest marks among the students who took the test.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Whether he was strictly Roman Catholic has been a matter of dispute ; internal evidence in the music suggests that he may have had Protestant sympathies, and indeed may have been an Anabaptist. Legal documents show him to have been a Roman Catholic.

Target: Whether he was strictly Roman Catholic has been a matter of dispute ; internal evidence in the music suggests that he may have had Protestant sympathies, and indeed may have been an Anabaptist, although legal documents show him to have been a Catholic.


Source: Make the text more logical: And, to me, it turned out to be a country song, when we got our instrumentation on it and everything. Some people go, 'Well, why in the world would you do a pop song?'

Target: And, to me, it turned out to be a country song, when we got our instrumentation on it and everything. And some people go, 'Well, why in the world would you do a pop song?'


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Ken bleeds heavily. Ken drags himself back to the top of the tower and jumps into the square.

Target: Bleeding heavily, Ken drags himself back to the top of the tower and jumps into the square.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Maintaining this is sometimes difficult. Economic growth may give rise to negative externalities.

Target: Maintaining this is sometimes difficult because economic growth may give rise to negative externalities.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Scheduled Castes numbered 74,281 (43.75 %). Scheduled Castes numbered 3,143 (1.85 %).

Target: Scheduled Castes numbered 74,281 (43.75 %) and Scheduled Tribes numbered 3,143 (1.85 %).


Source: Make the text clearer: According to Thomas King, around half of status Indians are currently marrying non-status people. This legislation accomplishes complete legal assimilation in a matter of a few generations.

Target: According to Thomas King, around half of status Indians are currently marrying non-status people, meaning this legislation accomplishes complete legal assimilation in a matter of a few generations.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Whether the Etruscans shared the Ixion figure with Hellenes from early times. Whether Ixion figured among those Greek myths that were adapted at later dates to fit the Etruscans world-view is unknown.

Target: Whether the Etruscans shared the Ixion figure with Hellenes from early times or whether Ixion figured among those Greek myths that were adapted at later dates to fit the Etruscan world-view is unknown.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Isherwood also introduced Gruber to his landlady, Evelyn Hooker. Evelyn Hooker, a Evelyn Hooker, pioneered research into sexual orientation that contributed to the removal of homosexuality as a mental illness from the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders.

Target: Isherwood also introduced Gruber to his landlady, Evelyn Hooker. Hooker, a psychologist, pioneered research into sexual orientation that contributed to the removal of homosexuality as a mental illness from the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: During his first couple of years. Membership of the union fell in Scotland, he managed to recruit large numbers of new members in the Humber ports, and was regarded as a successful figure.

Target: Although during his first couple of years, membership of the union fell in Scotland, he managed to recruit large numbers of new members in the Humber ports, and was regarded as a successful figure.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Knox attending Catholic schooled in Perth. Knox applied to the Archdiocese to study for the priesthood, but there was rejected because it was cheaper to recruit and educate priests in Ireland.

Target: Attending Catholic schools in Perth, Knox applied to the Archdiocese to study for the priesthood, but there was rejected because it was cheaper to recruit and educate priests in Ireland.


Source: Fix coherence errors: When secession was declared, Alcorn. Born in what became in 1818 the free.

Target: When secession was declared, Alcorn although born in what became in 1818 the free.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: She is married to Dr. Hubert Kammerer and has two children. Dr. Hubert Kammerer is a physician at the Boyle McCauley Health Centre.

Target: She is married to Dr. Hubert Kammerer, a physician at the Boyle McCauley Health Centre, and has two children.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Atkinson's work in the Roundabout Theatre Company's 1999 production of The Rainmaker earned her a Tony Award nomination. Atkinson's performance in the 2003 play Enchanted April Atkinson her an Outer Critics Circle Award, another Tony Award nomination and a Drama Desk nomination.

Target: Atkinson's work in the Roundabout Theatre Company's 1999 production of The Rainmaker earned her a Tony Award nomination, and her performance in the 2003 play Enchanted April earned her an Outer Critics Circle Award, another Tony Award nomination and a Drama Desk nomination.


Source: Make the text coherent: Some cast doubts over the prospects of Jimmy Choux in the Derby. Jimmy Choux's pedigree suggested that 2400m should be well Jimmy Choux's his capabilities.

Target: Some cast doubts over the prospects of Jimmy Choux in the Derby because his pedigree suggested that 2400m should be well beyond his capabilities.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Editor Beverley Baxter promised to increase his wages, but forgot, and Gordon resigned. Owner Lord Beaverbrook was keen to retain Gordon, and appointed Gordon editor of the Sunday Express in 1928.

Target: Editor Beverley Baxter promised to increase his wages, but forgot, and Gordon resigned. However, owner Lord Beaverbrook was keen to retain Gordon, and appointed him editor of the Sunday Express in 1928.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: McCain was written about extensively in his son John's 1999 memoir Faith of My Fathers. John was portrayed by actor Scott Glenn in the 2005 television movie adaptation.

Target: McCain was written about extensively in his son John's 1999 memoir Faith of My Fathers. McCain was portrayed by actor Scott Glenn in the 2005 television movie adaptation.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He bid anonymously in a 1980 auction. He paid $935,000 for one of the rarest stamps in the world, the British Guiana 1856 1c black on magenta.

Target: Bidding anonymously in a 1980 auction, he paid $935,000 for one of the rarest stamps in the world, the British Guiana 1856 1c black on magenta.


Source: Make the text clearer: ( See below for Key Participants and Key Steps to an Effective JAD). This process will result in a new information system that is feasible and appealing to both the designers and end users.

Target: ( See below for Key Participants and Key Steps to an Effective JAD). In the end, this process will result in a new information system that is feasible and appealing to both the designers and end users.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He was born in New South Wales to convicts Joseph Harpur and Sarah Chidley. Joseph Harpur was a public Joseph Harpur and clerk, and active in radical and temperance movements.

Target: He was born in New South Wales to convicts Joseph Harpur and Sarah Chidley. He was a public servant and clerk, and active in radical and temperance movements.


Source: Make the text more logical: His grandfather Jack O. Gross founded KFMB-TV Channel 8 in 1949. KFMB-TV Channel 8 is the first television station in San Diego.

Target: His grandfather Jack O. Gross founded KFMB-TV Channel 8, the first television station in San Diego, in 1949.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The juane is one of the main dishes of the cuisine of the Peruvian jungle and is widely consumed on June 24 hence the name. June 24 is the feast of St. John the Baptist (San Juan).

Target: The juane is one of the main dishes of the cuisine of the Peruvian jungle and is widely consumed on June 24, the feast of St. John the Baptist (San Juan), hence the name.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: When not taking on a storyline mission, players can free-roam. Doing so can attract unwanted and potentially fatal attention from the authorities.

Target: When not taking on a storyline mission, players can free-roam. However, doing so can attract unwanted and potentially fatal attention from the authorities.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The work was done while the station was on-air. Construction volunteers were forced to suspend work whenever microphones were open.

Target: The work was done while the station was on-air, so construction volunteers were forced to suspend work whenever microphones were open.


Source: Fix coherence: As a kid, Alexander was very shy and only got into acting. Acting was a mandatory acting in high school.

Target: As a kid, Alexander was very shy and only got into acting because it was a mandatory course in high school.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Shoaib Mansoor developed the idea after the misconceptions about Pakistan in Pakistani diaspora and India. Shoaib Mansoor is the director of the film.

Target: Shoaib Mansoor, the director of the film, developed the idea after the misconceptions about Pakistan in Pakistani diaspora and India.


Source: Fix coherence: While the estate itself is largely closed to the public, the new development is required to be without gates. Development was a development of restoration of the old church that reasonable public access to this also be available.

Target: While the estate itself is largely closed to the public, the new development is required to be without gates, and it was a condition of restoration of the old church that reasonable public access to this also be available.


Source: Fix sentence transition: List of Australia's fastest growing businesses noting a 123 % growth rate since 2011. List of Australia's fastest growing businesses is this time ranking at No. 14.

Target: list of Australia's fastest growing businesses, this time ranking at No. 14, noting a 123 % growth rate since 2011.


Source: Make the text clearer: He was awarded the title of International Arbiter by FIDE in 1982. FIDE is the World Chess Federation.

Target: He was awarded the title of International Arbiter by FIDE, the World Chess Federation, in 1982.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Its goals are stimulating mathematical activity in Latvia while consolidating the former achievements. It has the responsibility of representing the Latvia mathematicians at the international level.

Target: Its goals are stimulating mathematical activity in Latvia while consolidating the former achievements, and it has the responsibility of representing the Latvian mathematicians at the international level.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The canals were very successful for Bradford ;. From the 1830s, railways began to be built around the country, and again a group of Bradford businessmen were eager to benefit from this development.

Target: The canals were very successful for Bradford ; but from the 1830s, railways began to be built around the country, and again a group of Bradford businessmen were eager to benefit from this development.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This rationale, Sharpe argued, could undermine the balance of abortion restrictions. State regulations on abortion access also could be seen as an intrusion into doctor.

Target: This rationale, Sharpe argued, could undermine the balance of abortion restrictions because state regulations on abortion access also could be seen as an intrusion into doctor.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They particularly disliked the commentators. In commentators' attempt to apply law in practice.

Target: They particularly disliked the commentators because in their attempt to apply law in practice.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: According to the records of the Pennsylvania Department of State 1974. The Pennsylvania Department of State is the Lehigh Valley Transit Company survived as a Pennsylvania corporation with its bus system until its dissolution on March 19.

Target: According to the records of the Pennsylvania Department of State, the Lehigh Valley Transit Company survived as a Pennsylvania corporation with its bus system until its dissolution on March 19, 1974.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Over the years the British comic magazine The Dandy has had many different strips ranging from humour strips to adventure strips to prose stories. Eventually the The Dandy changed from having all these different types of strips to having only humour strips.

Target: Over the years the British comic magazine The Dandy has had many different strips ranging from humour strips to adventure strips to prose stories. However eventually the Dandy changed from having all these different types of strips to having only humour strips.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Captain Andy Hillstrand patches him up and Mike goes back on deck. Fishing stops again when greenhorn Eddie Uwekoolani, Jr. reveals to the Hillstrand brothers that he has been fishing with an abscessed tooth.

Target: Captain Andy Hillstrand patches him up and Mike goes back on deck. However, fishing stops again when greenhorn Eddie Uwekoolani, Jr. reveals to the Hillstrand brothers that he has been fishing with an abscessed tooth.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: One notable event from the segment was from an Eat Bulaga! episode in December 16, 2006 where a little girl wished to see the SexBomb Girls perform on Eat Bulaga.

Target: One notable event from the segment was from an Eat Bulaga! episode in December 16, 2006 where a little girl wished to see the SexBomb Girls perform on Eat Bulaga!.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Rob's new friend, Victor Torres, a former member of the gang who had quit after his brother became permanently disabled after a gang war, appears to be the prime suspect. Rob is determined to prove that someone is out to frame member.

Target: Rob's new friend, Victor Torres, a former member of the gang who had quit after his brother became permanently disabled after a gang war, appears to be the prime suspect, but Rob is determined to prove that someone is out to frame Victor.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The first Nepali-language movie made in Nepal was Aama, which was released in 1964 produced by the Nepalese government. The first Nepal-language movie made by the Nepalese private sector was Maitighar, which starred Mala Sinha and was released in 1966.

Target: The first Nepali-language movie made in Nepal was Aama, which was released in 1964 produced by the Nepalese government. However, the first Nepali-language movie made by the Nepalese private sector was Maitighar, which starred Mala Sinha and was released in 1966.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Sheriff Harry S. Truman investigates Palmer's murder in conjunction with Dale Cooper, an eccentric FBI agent. As agent settles into Dale Cooper's life in Twin Peaks, he meets the town's residents, who each prove bizarre and quirky in their respective ways.

Target: Sheriff Harry S. Truman investigates Palmer's murder in conjunction with Dale Cooper, an eccentric FBI agent. As Cooper settles into his life in Twin Peaks, he meets the town's residents, who each prove bizarre and quirky in their respective ways.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Who assisting the U.S. Weather Bureau in research, the USAAS Balloons and Airship School scheduled fifteen balloon flights from Scott Field, Illinois, for Dr. C. LeRoy Meisinger. Who had gained experience with balloons and meteorology as an Air Service officer during the war.

Target: Assisting the U.S. Weather Bureau in research, the USAAS Balloons and Airship School schedules fifteen balloon flights from Scott Field, Illinois, for Dr. C. LeRoy Meisinger, who had gained experience with balloons and meteorology as an Air Service officer during the war.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Andrei Pervozvanny was launched in October 1906. Subsequent alterations delayed completion until 1911.

Target: Andrei Pervozvanny was launched in October 1906 but subsequent alterations delayed completion until 1911.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: is a null geodesic that is incomplete. Every null geodesic on M (\\ displaystyle M) or T (\\ displaystyle T) is incomplete.

Target: is a null geodesic that is incomplete. In fact, every null geodesic on M (\\ displaystyle M) or T (\\ displaystyle T) is incomplete.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: On such a diagram, every possible future location of the object lies within the cone. Every space location has a future time, implying that an object may stay at any location in space indefinitely.

Target: On such a diagram, every possible future location of the object lies within the cone. Additionally, every space location has a future time, implying that an object may stay at any location in space indefinitely.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Engaging in a hobby can lead to acquiring substantial skill, knowledge, and experience. Personal fulfillment is the aim.

Target: Engaging in a hobby can lead to acquiring substantial skill, knowledge, and experience. However, personal fulfillment is the aim.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the summer, it is permissible to leave them outdoors in partial shade. If the temperature is too high, they will not bloom.

Target: In the summer, it is permissible to leave them outdoors in partial shade. But, if the temperature is too high, they will not bloom.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He concluded that a leader's knowledge can only contribute to performance if it is efficiently communicated,. Requiring a directive leader and also a compliant group that is willing to undertake the commands of the leader.

Target: He concluded that a leader's knowledge can only contribute to performance if it is efficiently communicated, hence requiring a directive leader and also a compliant group that is willing to undertake the commands of the leader.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In this case, the truth-conditions of the claim expressed by the antecedent in the sentence are not being denied by the proposition expressed after the clause. What is being denied is the way that the antecedent is framed.

Target: In this case, the truth-conditions of the claim expressed by the antecedent in the sentence are not being denied by the proposition expressed after the clause. Instead, what is being denied is the way that the antecedent is framed.


Source: Fix coherence errors: A semantic role is understood to be description of a category. Values are the instances that make up the category.

Target: A semantic role is understood to be description of a category, while values are the instances that make up the category.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Colorado Springs Business Journal (accessed via HighBeam Research). Colorado Springs Business Journal.

Target: Colorado Springs Business Journal (accessed via HighBeam Research). Colorado Springs Business Journal Inc.


Source: Make the text more logical: In August 1986, the signalling was altered. Drivers of northbound trains taking the Stoke line would see flashing yellow signals on approach.

Target: In August 1986, the signalling was altered so that drivers of northbound trains taking the Stoke line would see flashing yellow signals on approach.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Outside the walls, Sasha (Sonequa Martin-Green) buries a group of walkers she had killed. Still emotionally unstable, Sasha goes into the grave and lies among the pile of corpses.

Target: Outside the walls, Sasha (Sonequa Martin-Green) buries a group of walkers she had killed. However, still emotionally unstable, she goes into the grave and lies among the pile of corpses.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Finally, my experience in game design is primarily with personal computers. My suggestions are not completely applicable to arcade game designers or home video game designers.

Target: Finally, my experience in game design is primarily with personal computers, so my suggestions are not completely applicable to arcade game designers or home video game designers.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The main difference is that there is no right to reject digital content. Rather the remedies include the right to repair or replacement, the right to a price reduction and the right to a refund.

Target: The main difference is that there is no right to reject digital content but rather the remedies include the right to repair or replacement, the right to a price reduction and the right to a refund.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: John K. McKee, president of Continental, was asked to become a senior officer at Chemical, with all other officers and employees invited to join Chemical Bank as well. The board of Chemical, Continental was disclosed, would increase from 22 to 25.

Target: John K. McKee, president of Continental, was asked to become a senior officer at Chemical, with all other officers and employees invited to join Chemical Bank as well. The board of Chemical Bank, it was disclosed, would increase from 22 to 25.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The school was dedicated in honor of John Corcoran (1853-1904) in 1918. John Corcoran (1853-1904) is a school committee chairman.

Target: The school was dedicated in honor of John Corcoran (1853-1904), a school committee chairman, in 1918.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lawes is a product of Northampton Old Scouts amongst others. Northampton Old Scouts are the same club that produced his former teammate Rob Milligan as well as Ben Cohen and Steve Thompson.

Target: Lawes is a product of Northampton Old Scouts, the same club that produced his former teammate Rob Milligan as well as Ben Cohen and Steve Thompson, amongst others.


Source: Make the text coherent: All aspects of construction and development were managed in-house. Specific tasks were contracted out.

Target: All aspects of construction and development were managed in-house, although specific tasks were contracted out.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Roscoe, Will, The Zuni Man-Woman, University of New Mexico Press, 1991. ISBN The Zuni Man-Woman.

Target: Roscoe, Will, The Zuni Man-Woman, University of New Mexico Press, 1991. ISBN 0-8263-1253-5.


Source: Make the text coherent: Gyros is popular in Chicago. While some restaurants still make their own gyros cones, Chicago is the Chicago of mass-produced gyros.

Target: Gyros is popular in Chicago. While some restaurants still make their own gyros cones, Chicago is the hometown of mass-produced gyros.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Many have said the development of Silhouette was to be the next stage in Cybertown's development. In this Many have confused the promised NEXUS version of Cybertown, a Cybertown developed by Cybertown technicians but never completed, with IVN's Silhouette technology.

Target: Many have said the development of Silhouette was to be the next stage in Cybertown's development. But in this they have confused the promised NEXUS version of Cybertown, a program developed by Cybertown technicians but never completed, with IVN's Silhouette technology.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Born in Colwyn Bay, Conwy, North Wales, Sidlow played for Llandudno, Colwyn Bay and Wolverhampton Wanderers. Signed by Wolverhampton Wanderers in 1937 by the great Major Frank Buckley Sidlow was the first choice Wolverhampton Wanderers keeper both before the war.

Target: Born in Colwyn Bay, Conwy, North Wales, Sidlow played for Llandudno, Colwyn Bay and Wolverhampton Wanderers. Signed by Wolves in 1937 by the great Major Frank Buckley Sidlow was the first choice Wolves keeper both before the war.


Source: Fix coherence: Of all the new states established in central Europe after 1918, only Czechoslovakia preserved a democratic government until the war broke out. Despite regional disparities, Czechoslovakia's level of development was much higher than that of neighboring states.

Target: Of all the new states established in central Europe after 1918, only Czechoslovakia preserved a democratic government until the war broke out. Thus, despite regional disparities, its level of development was much higher than that of neighboring states.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It peaks at number 111 on the Billboard 200 in the US. It is their highest charting record to date.

Target: Peaking at number 111 on the Billboard 200 in the US, it is their highest charting record to date.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Ricardo experimented in his home studio. Ricardo recorded all the violins on this album.

Target: Experimenting in his home studio, Ricardo recorded all the violins on this album.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: During his tenure, bilateral trade between Rwanda and Uganda grew from US $50 million annually to US $200 every year. Also, in 2006, only 200 Rwanda students were enrolled in Uganda schools, compared to over 1,500 in 2016.

Target: During his tenure, bilateral trade between Rwanda and Uganda grew from US $50 million annually to US $200 every year. Also, in 2006, only 200 Rwandan students were enrolled in Ugandan schools, compared to over 1,500 in 2016.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Richmond (also known as Marshall House) is a historic mansion in Natchez, Mississippi. Richmond was the nineteenth century private mansion of a leading businessman and agricultural landowner in Natchez.

Target: Richmond (also known as Marshall House) is a historic mansion in Natchez, Mississippi. It was the nineteenth century private residence of a leading businessman and agricultural landowner in Natchez.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: High-quality evidence is still lacking. Rifaximin appears to be as effective as or more effective than other available treatments for hepatic encephalopathy (such as lactulose), is better tolerated, and may work faster.

Target: Although high-quality evidence is still lacking, rifaximin appears to be as effective as or more effective than other available treatments for hepatic encephalopathy (such as lactulose), is better tolerated, and may work faster.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: All mammalian fossils from Madagascar come from recent times. Little is known about the evolution of the ring-tailed lemur, let alone the rest of the lemur clade, which comprises the entire endemic primate population of the island.

Target: All mammalian fossils from Madagascar come from recent times. Thus, little is known about the evolution of the ring-tailed lemur, let alone the rest of the lemur clade, which comprises the entire endemic primate population of the island.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: M-53 (Christopher Columbus Freeway from Sterling Heights to Washington), more commonly known as the Van Dyke Expressway or Van Dyke Freeway. Continues as Van Dyke Road or Van Dyke Freeway north to Port Austin and south through Warren to Gratiot Avenue in Detroit.

Target: M-53 (Christopher Columbus Freeway from Sterling Heights to Washington), more commonly known as the Van Dyke Expressway or Van Dyke Freeway. Continues as Van Dyke Road or Van Dyke Avenue north to Port Austin and south through Warren to Gratiot Avenue in Detroit.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Ochs has served on the Board of Directors of MassEquality since 2004. MassEquality is massachusetts's statewide equality organization.

Target: Ochs has served on the Board of Directors of MassEquality, Massachusetts's statewide equality organization, since 2004.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: There is some dispute about his origins but Jonathan Meades claimed that there was much 'disinformation' by the authorities to discredit him. There were allegations that he was a Belgian collaborator with the SS during World War II.

Target: There is some dispute about his origins but Jonathan Meades claimed that there was much 'disinformation' by the authorities to discredit him. For example there were allegations that he was a Belgian collaborator with the SS during World War II.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: As proof they had submitted a marriage invitation which gave the date of marriage as 4 February 2014. While applying for classes they stated themselves as unmarried.

Target: As proof they had submitted a marriage invitation which gave the date of marriage as 4 February 2014. But, while applying for classes they stated themselves as unmarried.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Traditionally, courts are reluctant to step into the shoes of the technical experts and re-open the decisions made in the agency's detailed analysis. Courts do review whether a rulemaking meets the standards for the rulemaking process.

Target: Traditionally, courts are reluctant to step into the shoes of the technical experts and re-open the decisions made in the agency's detailed analysis. However, courts do review whether a rulemaking meets the standards for the rulemaking process.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Objects from the 1st and 2nd centuries demonstrate the time of construction of the dun. Objects from the 6th and 9th to 12th century or from later times show that the central square also remained an important focus.

Target: Objects from the 1st and 2nd centuries demonstrate the time of construction of the dun, while objects from the 6th and 9th to 12th century or from later times show that the central square also remained an important focus.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In 1871, the college added a two-story annex. Enrollment dropped sharply because of the Panic of 1873.

Target: In 1871, the college added a two-story annex. However, enrollment dropped sharply because of the Panic of 1873.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: On July 29, 2015, he signed with Keravnos of the Cyprus Basketball Division 1. Two months later, on September 28, 2015, he parted ways with Keravnos before appearing in a game for them.

Target: On July 29, 2015, he signed with Keravnos of the Cyprus Basketball Division 1. However two months later, on September 28, 2015, he parted ways with Keravnos before appearing in a game for them.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Jayaraman headed the expansion effort and became the co-founder and director of Restaurant Opportunities Center United in 2007. Restaurant Opportunities Center United, still headed by Jayaraman and Mamdouh, currently has over 18,000 members across 15 states.

Target: Jayaraman headed the expansion effort and became the co-founder and director of Restaurant Opportunities Center United in 2007. ROC United, still headed by Jayaraman and Mamdouh, currently has over 18,000 members across 15 states.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Jump up ^ Samuel Williams 2 vols. Samuel Williams is the Natural and Civil History of Vermont.

Target: Jump up ^ Samuel Williams, The Natural and Civil History of Vermont, 2 vols.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: For many years security officers were poorly chosen and poorly trained (if at all), partly. Security companies who contracted with clients in private industry were paid very little for security officers' security services.

Target: For many years security officers were poorly chosen and poorly trained (if at all), partly because security companies who contracted with clients in private industry were paid very little for their security services.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: CTW's early studies with the distractor found that children learned more when they watched the program carefully. When children participated by singing or talking along.

Target: CTW's early studies with the distractor found that children learned more when they watched the program carefully, or when they participated by singing or talking along.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He is a military commander who plans and executes naval battles with the Spanish Armada. military commander is a military commander who knows how to maneuver in courtly circles.

Target: He is a military commander who plans and executes naval battles with the Spanish Armada. He is a diplomat who knows how to maneuver in courtly circles.


Source: Fix coherence errors: There are distinct types of shaman who perform more specialized functions. Among the Nani people, a distinct kind of shaman acts as a psychopomp.

Target: There are distinct types of shaman who perform more specialized functions. For example, among the Nani people, a distinct kind of shaman acts as a psychopomp.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The southern part is made up of loess. North of Ashkelon consists of clay.

Target: The southern part is made up of loess, while north of Ashkelon consists of clay.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Sharks entertained the girls to game called donkey derby. Over on Tiger Island the six lads play football.

Target: The Sharks entertained the girls to game called donkey derby. Meanwhile, over on Tiger Island the six lads play football.


Source: Make the text coherent: By 1991 the two countries officially proclaimed normalization of Sino-Vietnamese relation,. Ending the border conflicts.

Target: By 1991 the two countries officially proclaimed normalization of Sino-Vietnamese relation, hence ending the border conflicts.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Dual citizenship is generally permitted in Slovenia, except for certain persons seeking to become Slovenian citizens by naturalisation. Slovenia citizens who have another nationality may be deprived of Slovenia citizenship in certain circumstances.

Target: Dual citizenship is generally permitted in Slovenia, except for certain persons seeking to become Slovenian citizens by naturalisation. However Slovenian citizens who have another nationality may be deprived of Slovenian citizenship in certain circumstances.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Also, it takes special skills (or special instruments) to find it and locate richer lodes. Early peoples learned about tin, they understood how to use it to make bronze by 2000 BC.

Target: Also, it takes special skills (or special instruments) to find it and locate richer lodes. However early peoples learned about tin, they understood how to use it to make bronze by 2000 BC.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Though asocial learning may result in the acquisition of reliable information, it is often costly for the individual to obtain. Individuals that are able to capitalize on other individuals' self-acquired information may experience a fitness benefit.

Target: Though asocial learning may result in the acquisition of reliable information, it is often costly for the individual to obtain. Therefore, individuals that are able to capitalize on other individuals' self-acquired information may experience a fitness benefit.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Historically, computer programs were not effectively protected by copyrights. Computer programs were not viewed as a fixed.

Target: Historically, computer programs were not effectively protected by copyrights because computer programs were not viewed as a fixed.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Wade spurned the baseball contract. Wade decided to attend Virginia Tech on a full football scholarship after graduating in 1965.

Target: Spurning the baseball contract, Wade decided to attend Virginia Tech on a full football scholarship after graduating in 1965.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The original Southern League was formed on February 11, 1885, in Atlanta. Southern League was the first professional Southern League to operate in the South.

Target: The original Southern League was formed on February 11, 1885, in Atlanta. It was the first professional league to operate in the South.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Receiving a broadcast of CIA agent Daniels being interrogated by the 33rd, the team chooses to interfere. Tracing the signal's origin, they find agent already dead and the broadcast was a trap set for fellow CIA agent, Gould.

Target: Receiving a broadcast of CIA agent Daniels being interrogated by the 33rd, the team chooses to interfere. Tracing the signal's origin, they find Daniels already dead and the broadcast was a trap set for fellow CIA agent, Gould.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The irises of Miguel's eyes became red. When Miguel uses Miguel's enhanced sight to zoom-in on an object that is far away.

Target: The irises of Miguel's eyes became red, although when he uses his enhanced sight to zoom-in on an object that is far away.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The polyclinic was inaugurated by Swami Vireshwarananda 1970. Swami Vireshwarananda is the President of the Math and Mission in June.

Target: The polyclinic was inaugurated by Swami Vireshwarananda, the President of the Math and Mission in June, 1970.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Thus the church is no longer a parish church. Religious services continue to take place in it.

Target: Thus the church is no longer a parish church, although religious services continue to take place in it.


Source: Fix coherence: When the house of Robert Belton became too small for the number attending, Mass was celebrated in the old brewery, near the Lower Landing at Pine Street. Later at the Hibbasus' hall on Market Street near Jay Street.

Target: When the house of Robert Belton became too small for the number attending, Mass was celebrated in the old brewery, near the Lower Landing at Pine Street. And later at the Hibbasus' hall on Market Street near Jay Street.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Perhaps the winters really were more severe in days gone past. Ice did form and games went ahead.

Target: Perhaps the winters really were more severe in days gone past because ice did form and games went ahead.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In these, some form of stationary engine (steam-powered for earlier installations) is used to drive one or more pumps. Electric motors are more conventionally used nowadays.

Target: In these, some form of stationary engine (steam-powered for earlier installations) is used to drive one or more pumps, although electric motors are more conventionally used nowadays.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: On March 27, 2009, The Hollywood Reporter announced that Paul Wesley had joined the cast of The Vampire Diaries as Stefan. Stefan was the last main Stefan whose casting was announced.

Target: On March 27, 2009, The Hollywood Reporter announced that Paul Wesley had joined the cast of The Vampire Diaries as Stefan. He was the last main cast member whose casting was announced.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Reinhardt's mother divorced his father and married movie director Gottfried Reinhardt, the son of director Max Reinhardt. Reinhardt was married to Ramona Ripston, who was Executive Director of the ACLU of Southern California until her February 2011 retirement.

Target: Reinhardt's mother divorced his father and married movie director Gottfried Reinhardt, the son of director Max Reinhardt. Stephen Reinhardt was married to Ramona Ripston, who was Executive Director of the ACLU of Southern California until her February 2011 retirement.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Steven R. Rothman (born October 14, 1952) is a former Democratic elected official from the state of New Jersey. Steven R. Rothman was a U.S. official for New Jersey's 9th Congressional District, serving from January 3, 1997, to January 3, 2013.

Target: Steven R. Rothman (born October 14, 1952) is a former Democratic elected official from the state of New Jersey. He was a U.S. Representative for New Jersey's 9th Congressional District, serving from January 3, 1997, to January 3, 2013.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Thus, removing stones from the soil also ensures a more consistent yield. Using stone pickers is particularly useful for crops forming tubers (such as potatoes) in the ground.

Target: Thus, removing stones from the soil also ensures a more consistent yield. Additionally, using stone pickers is particularly useful for crops forming tubers (such as potatoes) in the ground.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Today, Malcolm Fraser's daughter, Jane Fraser, is president of the Foundation. In 2007, president was named the Nonprofit Executive of the Year by The NonProfit Times.

Target: Today, Malcolm Fraser's daughter, Jane Fraser, is president of the Foundation. In 2007, Fraser was named the Nonprofit Executive of the Year by The NonProfit Times.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Chiefs were forced to deviate from their game plan, and that hurt them. The Chiefs offense totaled only 12 yards in the third quarter, and Dawson was held to five of 12 second-half pass completions for 59 yards.

Target: The Chiefs were forced to deviate from their game plan, and that hurt them. The Kansas City offense totaled only 12 yards in the third quarter, and Dawson was held to five of 12 second-half pass completions for 59 yards.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: These four are highly interconnected in their functions in surfactant. Though the mechanism is not yet understood, SP-B functions in the post-translational modification of SP-C, and mature SP-C is not formed without SP-B.

Target: These four are highly interconnected in their functions in surfactant. For example, though the mechanism is not yet understood, SP-B functions in the post-translational modification of SP-C, and mature SP-C is not formed without SP-B.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Susan Northway Olasky (born August 30, 1954) is a senior writer for World magazine and the author of eight historical novels for children. Susan Northway Olasky is also an writer of public policy at Patrick Henry College.

Target: Susan Northway Olasky (born August 30, 1954) is a senior writer for World magazine and the author of eight historical novels for children. She is also an assistant professor of public policy at Patrick Henry College.


Source: Make the text more logical: Characters can be customized through in-game character creation, with gender, height, figure, weapons, and physical appearance changeable. Over 300 non-player characters appear in the game, with all of them being recruitable to join the player's party.

Target: Characters can be customized through in-game character creation, with gender, height, figure, weapons, and physical appearance changeable. Additionally, over 300 non-player characters appear in the game, with all of them being recruitable to join the player's party.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In Australia, policy-makers have been mainly concerned with the potential interference of teenage motherhood with teenage mothers' school education. Lower education has been indicated to be associated with adverse labour market outcomes and hence higher welfare dependency.

Target: In Australia, policy-makers have been mainly concerned with the potential interference of teenage motherhood with teenage mothers' school education, because lower education has been indicated to be associated with adverse labour market outcomes and hence higher welfare dependency.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: One of the Irish girls who worked for the family was also known as Mary. Mary was referred to as Mary, soon shortened to simply Mary.

Target: One of the Irish girls who worked for the family was also known as Mary, so Grandin was referred to as Mary Temple, soon shortened to simply Temple.


Source: Make the text more consistent: General commerce and tourism together only employ about 32 percent of the population. Businesses catering to tourists has developed haphazardly.

Target: General commerce and tourism together only employ about 32 percent of the population. However, businesses catering to tourists has developed haphazardly.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The suicide bombers had attempted to take over the building and conduct a hostage-type attack. Were unsuccessful when security forces managed to contain suicide bombers in a firefight.

Target: The suicide bombers had attempted to take over the building and conduct a hostage-type attack although were unsuccessful when security forces managed to contain them in a firefight.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In countries such as the United Kingdom, demand for private tuition has increased significantly in recent years. Test takers may rely upon past copies of a test from previous years or semesters to study for a future test.

Target: In countries such as the United Kingdom, demand for private tuition has increased significantly in recent years. Finally, test takers may rely upon past copies of a test from previous years or semesters to study for a future test.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The band completed Mare Vitalis in late 1999. Tensions were developing between the band and Wickersheim.

Target: The band completed Mare Vitalis in late 1999, but tensions were developing between the band and Wickersheim.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They masquerade as interstellar entertainers. They infiltrate the facility and rescue the kidnap victims, including Doc and Chewbacca.

Target: Masquerading as interstellar entertainers, they infiltrate the facility and rescue the kidnap victims, including Doc and Chewbacca.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Currently releasing on their own label and having previously been signed to! K7 Records. They were one of the best-known acts from the Ninja Tune independent record label.

Target: Although currently releasing on their own label and having previously been signed to! K7 Records, they were one of the best-known acts from the Ninja Tune independent record label.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: For a time, it was thought that the French film had been lost completely. Copies of it re-appeared in the 1950s and its classic status was re-established.

Target: For a time, it was thought that the French film had been lost completely, but copies of it re-appeared in the 1950s and its classic status was re-established.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The color white is alien to the island's inhabitants and unnerves them. Nothing of that color exists there.

Target: The color white is alien to the island's inhabitants and unnerves them, because nothing of that color exists there.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: A bribe reveals the confidential details of a correspondent who is the link to a vital hidden document. Young John Mellamphy is growing up in the remote countryside with his mother Mary, ignorant of the name of Huffam.

Target: A bribe reveals the confidential details of a correspondent who is the link to a vital hidden document. Meanwhile, young John Mellamphy is growing up in the remote countryside with his mother Mary, ignorant of the name of Huffam.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Lastly, Dr Saeid persuaded to leave the city with his family. At their last day in Haifa, Israeli forces invade the city and Saeid saeid and Dr's 's wife were killed.

Target: Lastly, Dr Saeid persuaded to leave the city with his family, but at their last day in Haifa, Israeli forces invade the city and Dr saeid and his wife were killed.


Source: Make the text coherent: Clayton supported the change. It became very controversial, and Clayton's support of it Clayton him to lose the nomination of the Federalist Party to Louis McLane, beginning a long rivalry between the two men.

Target: Clayton supported the change, but it became very controversial, and his support of it caused him to lose the nomination of the Federalist Party to Louis McLane, beginning a long rivalry between the two men.


Source: Fix sentence flow: There is no access from westbound Highway 401 to the parkway nor from westbound on the parkway to eastbound Highway 401. Immediately east of the split, both highways interchange with the sole remaining portion of Highway 2 under provincial jurisdiction.

Target: There is no access from westbound Highway 401 to the parkway nor from westbound on the parkway to eastbound Highway 401. However, immediately east of the split, both highways interchange with the sole remaining portion of Highway 2 under provincial jurisdiction.


Source: Make the text more logical: Reviews of serological studies have estimated that 30 -- 50 % of the global population has been exposed to and may be chronically infected with latent toxoplasmosis. Infection rates differ significantly from country to country.

Target: Reviews of serological studies have estimated that 30 -- 50 % of the global population has been exposed to and may be chronically infected with latent toxoplasmosis, although infection rates differ significantly from country to country.


Source: Make the text more logical: Acute toxoplasmosis is often asymptomatic in healthy adults. Symptoms may manifest and are often influenza-like: swollen lymph nodes, headaches, fever, and fatigue, or muscle aches and pains that last for a month or more.

Target: Acute toxoplasmosis is often asymptomatic in healthy adults. However, symptoms may manifest and are often influenza-like: swollen lymph nodes, headaches, fever, and fatigue, or muscle aches and pains that last for a month or more.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: His body is the forecourt, open to all. Men may see his works and manner of life.

Target: His body is the forecourt, open to all, so that men may see his works and manner of life.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Which starting in June 2006, petroleum refiners were requires by the EPA to begin producing ultra-low sulfur diesel (ULSD) fuel. Which has 97 % less sulfur than the previous low sulfur diesel fuel.

Target: Starting in June 2006, petroleum refiners were required by the EPA to begin producing ultra-low sulfur diesel (ULSD) fuel, which has 97 % less sulfur than the previous low sulfur diesel fuel.


Source: Make the text coherent: Businesses use this strategy. Businesses gain the ability to reduce the costs associated with excess inventory and larger warehousing facilities by requiring more frequent deliveries.

Target: Using this strategy, businesses gain the ability to reduce the costs associated with excess inventory and larger warehousing facilities by requiring more frequent deliveries.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This was anomalous. Within the deep ocean it had historically been assumed that there was no mechanism by which tractional flow could carry and deposit coarse-grained sediments into the abyssal depths.

Target: This was anomalous because within the deep ocean it had historically been assumed that there was no mechanism by which tractional flow could carry and deposit coarse-grained sediments into the abyssal depths.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He has served on the board of directors of the Blue Roof Franchisee Association since 2012. The Blue Roof Franchisee Association is a member association representing IHOP franchisees.

Target: He has served on the board of directors of the Blue Roof Franchisee Association, a member association representing IHOP franchisees, since 2012.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Named after the dale or valley of the River Lune. Which runs through the city of Lancaster, for centuries it covered most of the northwestern part of Lancashire around Morecambe Bay, including the detached part around Furness.

Target: Although named after the dale or valley of the River Lune, which runs through the city of Lancaster, for centuries it covered most of the northwestern part of Lancashire around Morecambe Bay, including the detached part around Furness.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A post office operated at Lucia from 1900 to 1933, moving in 1906, and from 1936 to 1938. The name honors Lucia, its first Lucia.

Target: A post office operated at Lucia from 1900 to 1933, moving in 1906, and from 1936 to 1938. The name honors Lucia Dani, its first postmaster.


Source: Make the text more logical: In January 2008 Vercollone signed for the Richmond Kickers of the USL Second Division, and was part of the Kickers team which won the 2009 USL Second Division championship. On January 14, 2010 Kickers announced the re-signing of Vercollone for the 2010 season.

Target: In January 2008 Vercollone signed for the Richmond Kickers of the USL Second Division, and was part of the Kickers team which won the 2009 USL Second Division championship. On January 14, 2010 Richmond announced the re-signing of Vercollone for the 2010 season.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Forced to remain in New Zealand for some time. He eventually returned to active competition in early-2003 as one half of the Samoan Island Tribe with Samu.

Target: Although forced to remain in New Zealand for some time, he eventually returned to active competition in early-2003 as one half of the Samoan Island Tribe with Samu.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Manda's mother Divyanka died when Manda was little. Divyanka sacrificed mother's life fighting an Asura serpent trying to save Manda Manda.

Target: Manda's mother Divyanka died when Manda was little. Divyanka sacrificed her life fighting an Asura serpent trying to save baby Manda.


Source: Make the text clearer: However, the market mechanism often can not optimize for public goods, owing to problems such as the tragedy of the commons. Modern highways have been good for economic development, but it has taken government planning and allocation to bring them into existence.

Target: However, the market mechanism often can not optimize for public goods, owing to problems such as the tragedy of the commons. For example, modern highways have been good for economic development, but it has taken government planning and allocation to bring them into existence.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Geology and the Mineral Resources of the Lehighton and Palmerton Quardrangles, Carbon and Northampton Counties, Pennsylvania. The Pennsylvania Geologic Survey, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania.

Target: Geology and the Mineral Resources of the Lehighton and Palmerton Quardrangles, Carbon and Northampton Counties, Pennsylvania. The Pennsylvania Geologic Survey, Harrisburg, PA.


Source: Fix coherence: He exposed himself to the enemy. He knocked out two Panzer tanks, and the company moved forward and routed the enemy.

Target: Exposing himself to the enemy, he knocked out two Panzer tanks, and the company moved forward and routed the enemy.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They grow to a maximum length of 80 cm. Fish of 16-42cm are commonest.

Target: They grow to a maximum length of 80 cm, although fish of 16-42cm are commonest.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Mallin planned to occupy the Shelbourne Hotel, located on the north-east side of the park. Insufficient manpower prevented Mallin from doing so.

Target: Mallin planned to occupy the Shelbourne Hotel, located on the north-east side of the park, but insufficient manpower prevented him from doing so.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: In the attic, Violet finds out that she used to have another brother named Will. Brother died so Violet's parents tried to brother him with this Will.

Target: In the attic, Violet finds out that she used to have another brother named Will but he died so her parents tried to replace him with this Will.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He goes from Africa to L.A. in just one dissolve. Then when he escapes he goes from Hollywood Boulevard, to the L.A. river, to the Pacific Palisades in seconds.

Target: He goes from Africa to L.A. in just one dissolve. Then when he escapes he goes from Hollywood Boulevard, to the Los Angeles river, to the Pacific Palisades in seconds.


Source: Make the text clearer: In Antokoletz 'book Twentieth Century Music (Prentice Hall), Chapter 7 is devoted to music in the United States and specifically Charles Ives is analyzed for 10 pages. Antokoletz uses Charles Ives' The Cage as a key departure point.

Target: In Antokoletz 'book Twentieth Century Music (Prentice Hall), Chapter 7 is devoted to music in the United States and specifically Charles Ives is analyzed for 10 pages. Elliott Antokoletz uses Ives' The Cage as a key departure point.


Source: Fix coherence: Studying model organisms can be informative. Care must be taken when extrapolating from one organism to another.

Target: Studying model organisms can be informative, but care must be taken when extrapolating from one organism to another.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: After the 2011 Egyptian revolution Abou El-Ghar founded with some Egyptian political activists, including Amr Hamzawy, and Daoud Abdel Sayed, the left liberal Egyptian Social Democratic Party. Abou El-Ghar is a Abou El-Ghar of the National Association for Change close to Mohamed ElBaradei.

Target: After the 2011 Egyptian revolution Abou El-Ghar founded with some Egyptian political activists, including Amr Hamzawy, and Daoud Abdel Sayed, the left liberal Egyptian Social Democratic Party. Moreover, he is a spokesman of the National Association for Change close to Mohamed ElBaradei.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Nelson's love interest is Destiny (Canis selfabsorbedb * tchicus), an Afghan hound. Hound has no interest in hound.

Target: Nelson's love interest is Destiny (Canis selfabsorbedb * tchicus), an Afghan hound. However, Destiny has no interest in Nelson.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: While Nastasi had returned to record Now, he no longer toured with the band as he was performing with Dog Eat Dog at the same time Mucky Pup was touring. New guitarist Splatter became the band's live guitarist.

Target: While Nastasi had returned to record Now, he no longer toured with the band as he was performing with Dog Eat Dog at the same time Mucky Pup was touring. As a result, new guitarist Splatter became the band's live guitarist.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Instead, alien space ships have been scouting the planet, reported by the locals as apparitions, demons, and signs in the skies. When locals invade only the player character understands what locals are and how to stop locals.

Target: Instead, alien space ships have been scouting the planet, reported by the locals as apparitions, demons, and signs in the skies, and when they invade only the player character understands what they are and how to stop them.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Farming remains the main occupation of Murthalites. Recently with growing population.

Target: Farming remains the main occupation of Murthalites, although recently with growing population.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Tariq disembarked from Ceuta aboard ships provided by Julian. Tariq plunged into the Iberian Peninsula, defeated Roderic, and went on to besiege the Visigothic capital of Toledo.

Target: Disembarking from Ceuta aboard ships provided by Julian, Tariq plunged into the Iberian Peninsula, defeated Roderic, and went on to besiege the Visigothic capital of Toledo.


Source: Make the text more logical: Red Team and OSP head to El Centro, California to stop a terrorist hitman, only to discover that the terrorist is the target of the real killer. Everyone suspects a possible romance between Callen and the Red Team leader, Paris Summerskill.

Target: Red Team and OSP head to El Centro, California to stop a terrorist hitman, only to discover that the terrorist is the target of the real killer. Meanwhile, everyone suspects a possible romance between Callen and the Red Team leader, Paris Summerskill.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Most Breslover Hasidim do not use Na Nach Nachma (some groups actually oppose it). Not everyone believes Na Nach Nachma is an authentic Na Nach Nachma from Rebbe Nachman.

Target: Most Breslover Hasidim do not use Na Nach Nachma (some groups actually oppose it) and not everyone believes it is an authentic writing from Rebbe Nachman.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The library has a depository of UN collections. A separate section houses all the proceedings of the organs of the UN.

Target: The library has a depository of UN collections. A separate section houses all the proceedings of the organs of the United Nations.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The upper pitchers are even shorter than their terrestrial counterparts, growing to only 4.5 cm in height by 3.7 cm in width. pitchers narrow markedly just below the pitcher orifice, giving pitchers pitchers' distinctive inflated appearance.

Target: The upper pitchers are even shorter than their terrestrial counterparts, growing to only 4.5 cm in height by 3.7 cm in width. They narrow markedly just below the pitcher orifice, giving them their distinctive inflated appearance.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Which relieving the Royal Naval Brigade, on Walkers Ridge, brigade headquarters was set up on the highest point of the ridge. Which became known as Russell's Top.

Target: Relieving the Royal Naval Brigade, on Walkers Ridge, brigade headquarters was set up on the highest point of the ridge, which became known as Russell's Top.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The single was not a commercial success and did not chart. Would later become one of Jones' signature songs.

Target: The single was not a commercial success and did not chart, although would later become one of Jones' signature songs.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: By state law, the board can not have less than 5 members. It board not have more than 11 members.

Target: By state law, the board can not have less than 5 members, nor can it have more than 11 members.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The concept was to build an aircraft with an airframe that deflected or absorbed radar signals. Little was reflected back to the radar unit.

Target: The concept was to build an aircraft with an airframe that deflected or absorbed radar signals so that little was reflected back to the radar unit.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Due to the dry area wich is on wildfire alert during the summer it is strictly forbidden to have any kind open fire. No Art is set on fire.

Target: Due to the dry area wich is on wildfire alert during the summer it is strictly forbidden to have any kind open fire. Therefore no Art is set on fire.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Details of Sloane's activities in the intervening years are sparse. Information retrieved places Sloane's working with a touring stage company in New Zealand in 1927.

Target: Details of Sloane's activities in the intervening years are sparse, but information retrieved places her working with a touring stage company in New Zealand in 1927.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Ondangwa Airport (IATA: OND, ICAO: FYOA) is an airport serving Ondangwa, a town in the Oshana Region of Namibia. The FYOA is about 5 km (3 mi) northwest of the center of town.

Target: Ondangwa Airport (IATA: OND, ICAO: FYOA) is an airport serving Ondangwa, a town in the Oshana Region of Namibia. The airport is about 5 km (3 mi) northwest of the center of Ondangwa.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Things got quiet after Jerusalem's Lot was consumed by a brush fire (set by the protagonists of' Salem's Lot, although they are never mentioned). Some of the town's vampires have survived and begun spreading their influence again.

Target: Although things got quiet after Jerusalem's Lot was consumed by a brush fire (set by the protagonists of' Salem's Lot, although they are never mentioned), some of the town's vampires have survived and begun spreading their influence again.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Also milk quantity and quality of these animals are not negatively affected by O. viciifolia intake. Various studies showed that the voluntary intake of sainfoin was comparable or even higher than the intake of alfalfa or clover species.

Target: Also milk quantity and quality of these animals are not negatively affected by O. viciifolia intake. Furthermore, various studies showed that the voluntary intake of sainfoin was comparable or even higher than the intake of alfalfa or clover species.


Source: Fix sentence transition: But it turns out that Boynton is buying it for himself and his mother, whose loneliness is causing her to have psychosomatic illnesses. Everything turns out all right once Mrs. Boynton realizes how this is going to impact her son's relationship with Miss Brooks.

Target: But it turns out that Boynton is buying it for himself and his mother, whose loneliness is causing her to have psychosomatic illnesses. But everything turns out all right once Mrs. Boynton realizes how this is going to impact her son's relationship with Miss Brooks.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2015, Pachara has moved from GTH to Channel 3. Pachara is currently a Pachara in the first season of The Face Men Thailand.

Target: In 2015, Pachara has moved from GTH to Channel 3. He is currently a mentor in the first season of The Face Men Thailand.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The airport can handle aircraft with a single-wheel weight of up to 20,000 pounds (9,071 kg). Local regulations restrict aircraft to 12,500 pounds.

Target: The airport can handle aircraft with a single-wheel weight of up to 20,000 pounds (9,071 kg) although local regulations restrict aircraft to 12,500 pounds.


Source: Fix coherence errors: When returning with pollen or nectar, bees will bring back small amounts of that resources for the others bees within the nest. Along the way back to the nest they will fly in an irregular zigzag patterns in all directions.

Target: When returning with pollen or nectar, bees will bring back small amounts of that resources for the others bees within the nest. But along the way back to the nest they will fly in an irregular zigzag patterns in all directions.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Inside is a map of the whole globe. Nobody knows how it got there as the only place people can visit is the World-Within-The-Wall.

Target: Inside is a map of the whole globe but nobody knows how it got there as the only place people can visit is the World-Within-The-Wall.