Source: Make the text more logical: Kleck asserts errors in his critics' statements that his survey's estimates of defensive gun uses linked with specific crime types. That involved a wounding of the offender, are implausibly large compared to estimates of the total numbers of such crimes.

Target: Kleck asserts errors in his critics' statements that his survey's estimates of defensive gun uses linked with specific crime types, or that involved a wounding of the offender, are implausibly large compared to estimates of the total numbers of such crimes.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Average literacy rate of Dehradun city is 89.32 percent,. Male literacy and female literacy rates are 92.65 and 85.66 percent.

Target: Average literacy rate of Dehradun city is 89.32 percent, whereas male literacy and female literacy rates are 92.65 and 85.66 percent.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The temperature in Dehradun can reach below freezing during severe cold snaps. This is not common.

Target: Although the temperature in Dehradun can reach below freezing during severe cold snaps, this is not common.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The way dhotis are worn represents backgrounds and castes: short dhotis represent low status. Long dhotis represent high.

Target: The way dhotis are worn represents backgrounds and castes: short dhotis represent low status whereas long dhotis represent high.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Winter worried that a project like this one could possibly be too controversial for the USPG to fund. She decided to found a new society to provide funds for what was to become the Delhi Female Medical Mission.

Target: Winter worried that a project like this one could possibly be too controversial for the USPG to fund. Instead, she decided to found a new society to provide funds for what was to become the Delhi Female Medical Mission.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 1881 Priscilla Winter died. In the same year, the Mission hired an experienced nurse from Germany, Deaconess Jacoba Zeyen.

Target: In 1881 Priscilla Winter died. Yet, in the same year, the Mission hired an experienced nurse from Germany, Deaconess Jacoba Zeyen.


Source: Fix coherence: The new goal of the mission was to a build a hospital, yet one that was appropriately sized to both the means and realities of life in Delhi. As Reverend Winter noticed.

Target: The new goal of the mission was to a build a hospital, yet one that was appropriately sized to both the means and realities of life in Delhi because as Reverend Winter noticed.


Source: Make the text more logical: She references early bourgeois painting genres. She paints herself and friends enacting their own fantasies of being part of the leisure class, with props from snacks and beverages to million-dollar artworks functioning as important accessories in the assumption of privilege.

Target: Referencing early bourgeois painting genres, she paints herself and friends enacting their own fantasies of being part of the leisure class, with props from snacks and beverages to million-dollar artworks functioning as important accessories in the assumption of privilege.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: We didn't have a specific reference, like a band or an album or anything, but sometimes that would happen as we were going. That was one of those moments as an engineer where I really was happy.

Target: We didn't have a specific reference, like a band or an album or anything, but sometimes that would happen as we were going. And that was one of those moments as an engineer where I really was happy.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Many of these economic immigrants have dual citizenship of both the Czech Republic and Bulgaria. Most of the recent immigrants still only have Bulgarian citizenship.

Target: Many of these economic immigrants have dual citizenship of both the Czech Republic and Bulgaria. However most of the recent immigrants still only have Bulgarian citizenship.


Source: Make the text more coherent: They were partly leftists, communists and guerillas with their relatives,. The willingness of Czechoslovak government to allow the immigration.

Target: They were partly leftists, communists and guerillas with their relatives, hence the willingness of Czechoslovak government to allow the immigration.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It has been rumored that a pistol exists. None of these companies ever made a pistol version.

Target: Although it has been rumored that a pistol exists, none of these companies ever made a pistol version.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It has no boundary. With all the facets of life anything could be used as a boundary.

Target: It has no boundary because with all the facets of life anything could be used as a boundary.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Those internet bloggers don't talk sense. We will not be talking sense back to internet bloggers.

Target: Those internet bloggers don't talk sense, so we will not be talking sense back to them.


Source: Fix coherence: She pursued this goal. She spent her summers working with architects, and from 1948 to 1952, studied in South Africa at the University of the Witwatersrand.

Target: Pursuing this goal, she spent her summers working with architects, and from 1948 to 1952, studied in South Africa at the University of the Witwatersrand.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: She stated that any source related to any type of criminal case the FBI handles should not be considered confidential simply. Information was given for a criminal case.

Target: She stated that any source related to any type of criminal case the FBI handles should not be considered confidential simply because information was given for a criminal case.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Konrad, a poor miller's son, wants to marry Marie, a rich miller's daughter. Daughter's 's widowed father is malicious and avaricious, and tricks the lovers in a despicable way.

Target: Konrad, a poor miller's son, wants to marry Marie, a rich miller's daughter, but her widowed father is malicious and avaricious, and tricks the lovers in a despicable way.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Klopstock's work shows he learned much from Milton. Instead of strong contrasts, going from darkness to light, from misery to bliss, Klopstock attempts to portray a mental state of continuous, dazzling brilliancy.

Target: Klopstock's work shows he learned much from Milton. However, instead of strong contrasts, going from darkness to light, from misery to bliss, Klopstock attempts to portray a mental state of continuous, dazzling brilliancy.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: These criticisms were later confirmed by Lessing, although in a milder and more dignified spirit. The school of Bodmer applauded.

Target: These criticisms were later confirmed by Lessing, although in a milder and more dignified spirit. On the other hand, the school of Bodmer applauded.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Some SRAM shifters are made to be 2: 1 Shimano-compatible. These clearly will not work with SRAM's 1: 1 derailleurs.

Target: Some SRAM shifters are made to be 2: 1 Shimano-compatible, but these clearly will not work with SRAM's 1: 1 derailleurs.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In road racing the swiftest gear changes are required on the sprints to the finish line,. High-normal types.

Target: In road racing the swiftest gear changes are required on the sprints to the finish line, hence high-normal types.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The family names of these standards are reversed by some in actuation ratio notation as opposed to that of the more common shift ratio. In Shimano systems a unit of cable shifted causes about twice as much movement of the derailleur.

Target: The family names of these standards are reversed by some in actuation ratio notation as opposed to that of the more common shift ratio. Thus, in Shimano systems a unit of cable shifted causes about twice as much movement of the derailleur.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Ashong surprised the interviewer who expected a short soundbite (perhaps based on Ashong's casual appearance). Ashong gave a measured and protracted analysis of Obama's campaign.

Target: Surprising the interviewer who expected a short soundbite (perhaps based on Ashong's casual appearance), Ashong gave a measured and protracted analysis of Obama's campaign.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The group leaders were invited to play in the League semi-finals. Heavy snow had disrupted the competition.

Target: The group leaders were invited to play in the League semi-finals because heavy snow had disrupted the competition.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: For starters, each of them is armed with energy weapons and they refer to each other as individuals. These Borg appear to be fighting more like guerrilla warriors.

Target: For starters, each of them is armed with energy weapons and they refer to each other as individuals. In fact, these Borg appear to be fighting more like guerrilla warriors.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Between camera setups, Hawking was placed in a closet-sized room at his request. Such solitude allowed Hawking to think without distractions.

Target: Between camera setups, Hawking was placed in a closet-sized room at his request, because such solitude allowed him to think without distractions.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He stayed in Ireland. He met with some people who feel a spiritual connection to the country, tries using dowsing rods and then met a group of Roman Catholic priests who believe in connecting to their Celtic pagan roots.

Target: Staying in Ireland, he met with some people who feel a spiritual connection to the country, tries using dowsing rods and then met a group of Roman Catholic priests who believe in connecting to their Celtic pagan roots.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Pete McCarthy starts the series with a visit to Stonehenge on the Summer Solstice. There Pete McCarthy observes a group of worshippers.

Target: Pete McCarthy starts the series with a visit to Stonehenge on the Summer Solstice, and there he observes a group of worshippers.


Source: Make the text clearer: The second co-leader was not announced. Then-MP for The Kiwi Party Gordon Copeland announced that he was the other co-leader of the party.

Target: The second co-leader was not announced. However, then-MP for The Kiwi Party Gordon Copeland announced that he was the other co-leader of the party.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lois poses as a factory worker. Lois overhears the foreman telling two of the workers that Mr. Jones, one of the supervisors, wants them in his office upstairs at 12.

Target: Posing as a factory worker, Lois overhears the foreman telling two of the workers that Mr. Jones, one of the supervisors, wants them in his office upstairs at 12.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Dibakar Banerjee expressed his desire to make a film on Byomkesh Bakshi. India will get its own detective.

Target: Dibakar Banerjee expressed his desire to make a film on Byomkesh Bakshi so that India will get its own detective.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In 1832, a hot wire detonator was produced by American chemist Robert Hare. Attempts along similar lines had earlier been attempted by the Italians Volta and Cavallo.

Target: In 1832, a hot wire detonator was produced by American chemist Robert Hare, although attempts along similar lines had earlier been attempted by the Italians Volta and Cavallo.


Source: Make the text clearer: However, the team lacked quality pitching, despite Bill Gullickson's 20 wins in 1991. Team's core of key players began to age, setting the franchise up for decline.

Target: However, the team lacked quality pitching, despite Bill Gullickson's 20 wins in 1991, and its core of key players began to age, setting the franchise up for decline.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Also, team owner Walter Briggs, Sr. died in 1952. His son Walter Briggs, Sr. inherited the team, but he was forced to sell it in 1956 to broadcast media owners John Fetzer and Fred Knorr.

Target: Also, team owner Walter Briggs, Sr. died in 1952. His son Walter Briggs, Jr. inherited the team, but he was forced to sell it in 1956 to broadcast media owners John Fetzer and Fred Knorr.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The Detroit Tigers are an American professional baseball team based in Detroit, Michigan. The Detroit compete in Major League Baseball (MLB) as a member of the American League (AL) Central division.

Target: The Detroit Tigers are an American professional baseball team based in Detroit, Michigan. The Tigers compete in Major League Baseball (MLB) as a member of the American League (AL) Central division.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Because the size of each service is small, it allows the architecture of an individual service to emerge through continuous refactoring,. Reducing the need for a big upfront design and allows for releasing the software early and continuously.

Target: Because the size of each service is small, it allows the architecture of an individual service to emerge through continuous refactoring, hence reducing the need for a big upfront design and allows for releasing the software early and continuously.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In December 2010, Indian romantic Bengali film Shedin Dekha Hoyechilo starring Dev and Srabanti Chatterjee was released, directed by Sujit Mondol and produced by Shree Venkatesh Films. This is the second film between Dev and Sujit Mondol.

Target: In December 2010, Indian romantic Bengali film Shedin Dekha Hoyechilo starring Dev and Srabanti Chatterjee was released, directed by Sujit Mondol and produced by Shree Venkatesh Films. This is the second collaboration between Dev and Sujit Mondol.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Weaving the loom is usually done by men. Women dye the yarn and spin the thread and children assist in looming etc.

Target: Weaving the loom is usually done by men whereas women dye the yarn and spin the thread and children assist in looming etc.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Devecser is also the name of the town where the district seat is found. The Devecser is located in the Central Transdanubia Statistical Region.

Target: Devecser is also the name of the town where the district seat is found. The district is located in the Central Transdanubia Statistical Region.


Source: Make the text more logical: He gave a working definition for it. He noted that policy sciences are concerned with knowledge of and in the decision processes of the public and civic order.

Target: Giving a working definition for it, he noted that policy sciences are concerned with knowledge of and in the decision processes of the public and civic order.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Reluctantly and sceptically he took friend's advice and the whole family and household set out on 8 March 1849 for Malvern. He could try Dr James Gully's Water Cure Establishment for a two-month cold water treatment.

Target: Reluctantly and sceptically he took friend's advice and the whole family and household set out on 8 March 1849 for Malvern so that he could try Dr James Gully's Water Cure Establishment for a two-month cold water treatment.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Roddenberry sought to get a different star. Roddenberry offered the role to Martin Landau, but he did not want to play the same character on a weekly basis and found the character's lack of emotions limiting.

Target: Seeking to get a different star, Roddenberry offered the role to Martin Landau, but he did not want to play the same character on a weekly basis and found the character's lack of emotions limiting.


Source: Make the text clearer: Horrified that they would lose Spock and the marketing potential for the character, they demanded that Solow and Roddenberry negotiate. It was agreed that Nimoy's salary would increase to $2,500, plus $100 for expenses, improvements to billing and greater input on scripts.

Target: Horrified that they would lose Spock and the marketing potential for the character, they demanded that Solow and Roddenberry negotiate. Eventually, it was agreed that Nimoy's salary would increase to $2,500, plus $100 for expenses, improvements to billing and greater input on scripts.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: But Shatner, using his influence with the writers and producers, demanded that since he was the star of the show and that this would be a historic moment, that it should be re-written. Star's 's character was featured instead of Spock.

Target: But Shatner, using his influence with the writers and producers, demanded that since he was the star of the show and that this would be a historic moment, that it should be re-written so that his character was featured instead of Spock.


Source: Fix sentence flow: I hadn't been asked to be involved with Star Trek for something like 17 or 18 years. This felt like somebody said, 'There's a value to you, that we'd like to take advantage of and do something with.'

Target: I hadn't been asked to be involved with Star Trek for something like 17 or 18 years. And this felt like somebody said, 'There's a value to you, that we'd like to take advantage of and do something with.'


Source: Fix coherence: He was the pre-race favorite for the May 5 Kentucky Derby. On May 1, trainer Woody Stephens announced that Devil's Bag would not run in the Derby but that he might start in the Preakness Stakes. (2 )

Target: He was the pre-race favorite for the May 5 Kentucky Derby. Then, on May 1, trainer Woody Stephens announced that Devil's Bag would not run in the Derby but that he might start in the Preakness Stakes. (2 )


Source: Fix sentence flow: The George Borrow Hotel is nearby. The George Borrow Hotel is a 17th-century inn where he reputedly stayed.

Target: The George Borrow Hotel, a 17th-century inn where he reputedly stayed, is nearby.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The station has two platforms. One has been disused for many years.

Target: The station has two platforms although one has been disused for many years.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The last sentence of that departure sequence is the incomplete one that conceivably loops back to the beginning of the book. Earlier in the novel the notebook falls to the ground and Kid reads the last page.

Target: The last sentence of that departure sequence is the incomplete one that conceivably loops back to the beginning of the book. However, earlier in the novel the notebook falls to the ground and Kid reads the last page.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Dhanga's boasts about successes in the south (Andhra, Kanchi, Kuntala and Simhala) appear to be poetic exaggerations. He might have raided some territories to the south of the Vindhyas.

Target: Dhanga's boasts about successes in the south (Andhra, Kanchi, Kuntala and Simhala) appear to be poetic exaggerations. But, he might have raided some territories to the south of the Vindhyas.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Dhankot is 6.842 km distance from its mandal main town Gurgaon. distance is 8.327 km distance from Dhankot's district main Gurgaon Gurgaon.

Target: Dhankot is 6.842 km distance from its mandal main town Gurgaon. Dhankot is 8.327 km distance from its district main city Gurgaon.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The national park status has meant that there are now much greater restrictions on activities such as coal mining within the protected area. In 2012 BHP Billiton was reported as continuing mining exploration in Darkes Forest.

Target: The national park status has meant that there are now much greater restrictions on activities such as coal mining within the protected area although in 2012 BHP Billiton was reported as continuing mining exploration in Darkes Forest.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Dhondo Keshav Karve was born at Sheravali ; his ancestral home. Dhondo Keshav Karve spent most of Dhondo Keshav Karve's childhood at place called Murud, in the district of Dapoli.

Target: Dhondo Keshav Karve was born at Sheravali ; his ancestral home. But he spent most of his childhood at place called Murud, in the district of Dapoli.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He loved Murud with all his heart and. He did a lot of work for this place through.

Target: He loved Murud with all his heart and hence he did a lot of work for this place through.


Source: Fix coherence: Set in Mumbai, the film starts with Raj (Paresh Rawal), a good-for-nothing movie director who has released certain films. None of them ever do well at the box office.

Target: Set in Mumbai, the film starts with Raj (Paresh Rawal), a good-for-nothing movie director who has released certain films, but none of them ever do well at the box office.


Source: Make the text clearer: Consequently, refined foods have seemingly replaced healthy alternatives, as communities are denied access to fresh and healthy foods due to limited available resources. Many Aboriginals are said to live in poverty, with community's dependant on welfare and most being plagued by unemployment.

Target: Consequently, refined foods have seemingly replaced healthy alternatives, as communities are denied access to fresh and healthy foods due to limited available resources. Similarly, many Aboriginals are said to live in poverty, with community's dependant on welfare and most being plagued by unemployment.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Sugar and refined foods were used at this time as a means of detaching Aboriginals from the land and assimilating them into white society. Aboriginal Australians have likened certain traditions and memories to the use of sugar.

Target: Sugar and refined foods were used at this time as a means of detaching Aboriginals from the land and assimilating them into white society. Consequently, Aboriginal Australians have likened certain traditions and memories to the use of sugar.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Aboriginals have since viewed sugar as an important cultural food, bringing with it, family identities and reinforcing connections. Aboriginals have since become highly vulnerable to suffering from conditions such as diabetes.

Target: Aboriginals have since viewed sugar as an important cultural food, bringing with it, family identities and reinforcing connections. Hence, Aboriginals have since become highly vulnerable to suffering from conditions such as diabetes.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Hence, there is a direct correlation between the disparity of wealth, obesity and subsequent morbidity. This is a main contributor to Aboriginals and Torres Strait Islanders being 2-4 more times likely to suffer from this condition.

Target: Hence, there is a direct correlation between the disparity of wealth, obesity and subsequent morbidity. Consequently, this is a main contributor to Aboriginals and Torres Strait Islanders being 2-4 more times likely to suffer from this condition.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Dialogic can also be used in contrast to 'monologic', which is the idea that there is only one true perspective and. Everything has one final correct meaning or truth.

Target: Dialogic can also be used in contrast to 'monologic', which is the idea that there is only one true perspective and so that everything has one final correct meaning or truth.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: There is some debate over whether the Socratic method should be understood as dialectic rather than as dialogic. Method is interpreted, Socrate's approach as described by Plato has been influential in informing modern day conceptions of dialogue, particularly in Western culture.

Target: There is some debate over whether the Socratic method should be understood as dialectic rather than as dialogic. However it is interpreted, Socrate's approach as described by Plato has been influential in informing modern day conceptions of dialogue, particularly in Western culture.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: One heads up the brook from the Passaic River. One encounters the boroughs of Fair Lawn and Glen Rock, as well as the village of Ridgewood.

Target: Heading up the brook from the Passaic River, one encounters the boroughs of Fair Lawn and Glen Rock, as well as the village of Ridgewood.


Source: Make the text clearer: The museum was established to promote and inspire creativity and innovation and celebrate and study the life of Walt Disney. The museum opened in 2009.

Target: The museum, which opened in 2009, was established to promote and inspire creativity and innovation and celebrate and study the life of Walt Disney.


Source: Make the text coherent: Sunnucks does not make clear if only one die. Both dice were thrown, and, if the latter, whether the player could choose which of the specified pieces to move.

Target: Sunnucks does not make clear if only one die or both dice were thrown, and, if the latter, whether the player could choose which of the specified pieces to move.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: His brother, Lindsay, also lived on Mornington Island with his family ; he too was an artist, regularly sending pieces to Percy Trezise for him to sell. artist and Lindsay apparently had a troubled relationship.

Target: His brother, Lindsay, also lived on Mornington Island with his family ; he too was an artist, regularly sending pieces to Percy Trezise for him to sell. Dick and Lindsay apparently had a troubled relationship.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The filmmakers considered shooting the film on-location in Chicago, Illinois. Production designer Richard Sylbert believed Dick Tracy would work better using sound stages and backlots at Universal Studios in Universal City, California.

Target: The filmmakers considered shooting the film on-location in Chicago, Illinois, but production designer Richard Sylbert believed Dick Tracy would work better using sound stages and backlots at Universal Studios in Universal City, California.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Jump up ^ Indicates number of rental units, not the number of buildings. One building could have 25 rental units.

Target: Jump up ^ Indicates number of rental units, not the number of buildings. For example, one building could have 25 rental units.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It starts late in fetal life and is terminated shortly before ovulation by the LH surge. Although the majority of oocytes are produced in female fetuses before birth, these pre-eggs remain arrested in the dictyate stage until puberty commences and the cells complete ootidogenesis.

Target: It starts late in fetal life and is terminated shortly before ovulation by the LH surge. Thus, although the majority of oocytes are produced in female fetuses before birth, these pre-eggs remain arrested in the dictyate stage until puberty commences and the cells complete ootidogenesis.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: O'Dell cited personal reasons. O'Dell resigned in December 2005 after several consecutive quarters of poor performance, with his role taken by Tom Swidarski.

Target: Citing personal reasons, O'Dell resigned in December 2005 after several consecutive quarters of poor performance, with his role taken by Tom Swidarski.


Source: Make the text coherent: Extracting fresh water from a lens for human consumption requires careful calculation of the sustainable yield of the lens by season. Each lens is susceptible to corruption by saltwater intrusion caused by overuse or drought.

Target: Extracting fresh water from a lens for human consumption requires careful calculation of the sustainable yield of the lens by season because each lens is susceptible to corruption by saltwater intrusion caused by overuse or drought.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: According to Southern Maldivian oral tradition, traders and fishermen were occasionally lost at sea and got stranded on one of the islands of the Chagos. Traders were rescued and brought back home.

Target: According to Southern Maldivian oral tradition, traders and fishermen were occasionally lost at sea and got stranded on one of the islands of the Chagos. Eventually, they were rescued and brought back home.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Note that exceptions to these rules include pregnant women and young children. Those who have little exposure to sunlight may need to take vitamin D supplementation.

Target: Note that exceptions to these rules include pregnant women and young children. Additionally, those who have little exposure to sunlight may need to take vitamin D supplementation.


Source: Make the text clearer: As a passionate traveller, he realised that the best experience a young artist can have is travelling and encountering new people and situations. The Dieter Roth Academy lives there where its members live and work -- on several continents.

Target: As a passionate traveller, he realised that the best experience a young artist can have is travelling and encountering new people and situations. Consequently the Dieter Roth Academy lives there where its members live and work -- on several continents.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It was the club of the untalented who made a verbal virtue of their lack of talent. Nobody could say they had no talent.

Target: It was the club of the untalented who made a verbal virtue of their lack of talent so that nobody could say they had no talent.


Source: Make the text clearer: He attended the War College and was attached to the German General Staff in 1882. In 1889, he was made aide de camp to Kaiser Wilhelm II

Target: He attended the War College and was attached to the German General Staff in 1882. Then, in 1889, he was made aide de camp to Kaiser Wilhelm II


Source: Make the text more logical: Technology developments that support the current Digital Earth technological framework can be traced to U.S. computing advances derived from the Cold War competition, the space race, and commercial innovations. Many innovations can be tracked to corporations working for the Department of Defense or NASA.

Target: Technology developments that support the current Digital Earth technological framework can be traced to U.S. computing advances derived from the Cold War competition, the space race, and commercial innovations. Therefore, many innovations can be tracked to corporations working for the Department of Defense or NASA.


Source: Make the text coherent: Surveys have shown that, while not all subscribers prefer a digital edition, some do because of the environmental benefit, also. Digital magazines are searchable and may easily be passed along or linked to.

Target: Surveys have shown that, while not all subscribers prefer a digital edition, some do because of the environmental benefit, also because digital magazines are searchable and may easily be passed along or linked to.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The company can try to ask them. Then company will have an incentive to report lower valuations in order to decrease the price.

Target: The company can try to ask them, but then they will have an incentive to report lower valuations in order to decrease the price.


Source: Make the text coherent: Electronic documents can become clutter if a user does not delete extraneous files. If the files are poorly organized (e.g. inconsistent folder structure, empty folders).

Target: Electronic documents can become clutter if a user does not delete extraneous files, or if the files are poorly organized (e.g. inconsistent folder structure, empty folders).


Source: Make the text coherent: The DSLAM acts like a network switch since its functionality is at Layer 2 of the OSI model. DSLAM can not re-route traffic between multiple IP networks, only between ISP devices and end-user connection points.

Target: The DSLAM acts like a network switch since its functionality is at Layer 2 of the OSI model. Therefore, it can not re-route traffic between multiple IP networks, only between ISP devices and end-user connection points.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Most U.S. stations were not permitted to shut down their analog transmissions prior to 16 February 2009. Doing so was required in order to complete work on a station's permanent digital facilities.

Target: Most U.S. stations were not permitted to shut down their analog transmissions prior to 16 February 2009 unless doing so was required in order to complete work on a station's permanent digital facilities.


Source: Make the text clearer: All platforms experienced many starter problems, in particular the British and Spanish platforms which failed financially (mainly due to their encryption being compromised). Boxer, the Swedish pay platform which started in October 1999, proved to be very successful.

Target: All platforms experienced many starter problems, in particular the British and Spanish platforms which failed financially (mainly due to their encryption being compromised). Nevertheless, Boxer, the Swedish pay platform which started in October 1999, proved to be very successful.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Digital therapeutics can also be used as a treatment option for existing conditions. A patient with type II diabetes can use digital therapeutics to manage the disease more effectively.

Target: Digital therapeutics can also be used as a treatment option for existing conditions. For instance, a patient with type II diabetes can use digital therapeutics to manage the disease more effectively.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Digital therapeutics can also be used to treat patients with psychological and neurological disorders. Patients with disorders like ADHD, depression, and anxiety can receive cognitive behavioral therapy via their mobile devices.

Target: Digital therapeutics can also be used to treat patients with psychological and neurological disorders. For example, patients with disorders like ADHD, depression, and anxiety can receive cognitive behavioral therapy via their mobile devices.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: His parents are shocked to see them. A devastated Rabiya goes to apologize to her brother and sister-in-law. Parents say her that it is not her fault as Shavez always wanted to marry Asma.

Target: His parents are shocked to see them. A devastated Rabiya goes to apologize to her brother and sister-in-law. But they say her that it is not her fault as Shavez always wanted to marry Asma.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On being asked about her character on this project. Why she chose to play it, Zhalay shared,

Target: On being asked about her character on this project and why she chose to play it, Zhalay shared,


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: She received wider recognition for her acting in 1951 as the game warden's wife in a film about African wildlife, Where No Vultures Fly. The film was notable for being largely shot on location in African.

Target: She received wider recognition for her acting in 1951 as the game warden's wife in a film about African wildlife, Where No Vultures Fly. The film was notable for being largely shot on location in Africa.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Diodora dorsata is a species of sea snail the keyhole limpets. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Fissurellidae.

Target: Diodora dorsata is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Fissurellidae, the keyhole limpets.


Source: Fix sentence transition: He is depicted as being happy, but there is a glint of something more in his eyes. He is also depicted as a rotund Hearthom made of granite.

Target: He is depicted as being happy, but there is a glint of something more in his eyes. Additionally, he is also depicted as a rotund Hearthom made of granite.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The parents were persuaded to agree,. The contract was revoked before it was ever put into effect.

Target: The parents were persuaded to agree, and although the contract was revoked before it was ever put into effect.


Source: Make the text more consistent: He anticipated the birth of string theory by almost a decade. He was the first to introduce what is now called a type of Nambu -- Goto action for membranes.

Target: Anticipating the birth of string theory by almost a decade, he was the first to introduce what is now called a type of Nambu -- Goto action for membranes.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Dirac Proc. Roy. Dirac is an Extensible Model of the Electron.

Target: Dirac, An Extensible Model of the Electron, Proc. Roy.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: This is very different from using the browser address line to navigate to a premium domain name like hotels.com. The inclusion of bookmarked traffic is not included in the domainer's version of the direct navigation market.

Target: This is very different from using the browser address line to navigate to a premium domain name like hotels.com. Hence the inclusion of bookmarked traffic is not included in the domainer's version of the direct navigation market.


Source: Make the text coherent: Their target was German soldiers fleeing by the village, many of whom were killed,. There were no casualties among the inhabitants.

Target: Their target was German soldiers fleeing by the village, many of whom were killed, whereas there were no casualties among the inhabitants.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: For administration the bishop availed himself of the members of the local nobility who already lived in Dirmstein. Who went to live there.

Target: For administration the bishop availed himself of the members of the local nobility who already lived in Dirmstein or who went to live there.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The movement asserts that. These obstacles are rectified.

Target: The movement asserts that unless these obstacles are rectified.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: An absolute discharge is an unconditional discharge where the Court finds that a crime has technically been committed. That any punishment of the defendant would be inappropriate, and the case is closed.

Target: An absolute discharge is an unconditional discharge where the Court finds that a crime has technically been committed, but that any punishment of the defendant would be inappropriate, and the case is closed.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The concept of absolute or conditional discharge does not exist, as such, in United States law. Different jurisdictions within the United States have a variety of analogues.

Target: The concept of absolute or conditional discharge does not exist, as such, in United States law. However, different jurisdictions within the United States have a variety of analogues.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Similar to continuous-variable dynamic systems (CVDS). DEDS consists solely of discrete state spaces and event-driven state transition mechanisms.

Target: Although similar to continuous-variable dynamic systems (CVDS), DEDS consists solely of discrete state spaces and event-driven state transition mechanisms.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Nothing new that was not prophesied was going on there. There is not any indication of the equality found in the church which is Christ's body in which Jew and Gentile are joint-heirs.

Target: Nothing new that was not prophesied was going on there nor is there any indication of the equality found in the church which is Christ's body in which Jew and Gentile are joint-heirs.


Source: Fix coherence: Most dispensationalists cite seven dispensations. This is not a critical or foundational factor to the theology.

Target: Most dispensationalists cite seven dispensations although this is not a critical or foundational factor to the theology.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Then each of these primes divides all but one of the numerator terms and. Does not divide the numerator itself.

Target: Then each of these primes divides all but one of the numerator terms and hence does not divide the numerator itself.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Treatment for this toxicity requires hydration to increase urine flow and alkalinization of urine by sodium bicarbonate. This poisoning can be prevented when consuming djenkol beans by boiling them beforehand, since djenkolic acid is removed from the beans.

Target: Treatment for this toxicity requires hydration to increase urine flow and alkalinization of urine by sodium bicarbonate. Furthermore, this poisoning can be prevented when consuming djenkol beans by boiling them beforehand, since djenkolic acid is removed from the beans.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The country has a women's national team but has no youth teams. No U17 or U20 teams.

Target: The country has a women's national team but has no youth teams, meaning no U17 or U20 teams.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Amtrak inter-city rail trains travel on the Hudson Line tracks. Trains do not stop in the village.

Target: Amtrak inter-city rail trains travel on the Hudson Line tracks, but trains do not stop in the village.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Although she is a devoted mother, she is initially upset when Dobry begins to show more interest in art than taking over the fields. Mother comes around, and gives Dobry the money needed to attend an art school.

Target: Although she is a devoted mother, she is initially upset when Dobry begins to show more interest in art than taking over the fields. Eventually, she comes around, and gives Dobry the money needed to attend an art school.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Other village men have been known to show interest in her. She insists that she will never remarry.

Target: Although other village men have been known to show interest in her, she insists that she will never remarry.


Source: Make the text clearer: However, the Doctor had already bought the architect that dinner. When the Master pulls the lever the trap door opens beneath him instead.

Target: However, the Doctor had already bought the architect that dinner, so when the Master pulls the lever the trap door opens beneath him instead.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Dodsworth passes up advancement in his recently sold company. Dodsworth leaves for Europe with Fran, but her motivations to get to Europe become quickly known.

Target: Passing up advancement in his recently sold company, Dodsworth leaves for Europe with Fran, but her motivations to get to Europe become quickly known.


Source: Fix coherence errors: And nearly half (45 %) of New Jersey voters favored the bill. Four in every ten.

Target: And nearly half (45 %) of New Jersey voters favored the bill, while four in every ten.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: We will probably never know how large the biggest trees in West Virginia were. Most cuttings were not documented.

Target: We will probably never know how large the biggest trees in West Virginia were because most cuttings were not documented.


Source: Make the text more consistent: US and other governments applied heavy diplomatic pressure on Israel to refrain from action. The attack was later on noted as one of the reasons cited by the Israel government for building the Israeli West Bank barrier.

Target: US and other governments applied heavy diplomatic pressure on Israel to refrain from action. Nevertheless, the attack was later on noted as one of the reasons cited by the Israeli government for building the Israeli West Bank barrier.


Source: Fix sentence flow: After the attack many in the Israeli public demanded a harsh military retaliation ; nevertheless, Prime Minister Ariel Sharon decided to not take any immediate retaliatory actions. US and other governments applied heavy diplomatic pressure on Israeli to refrain from action.

Target: After the attack many in the Israeli public demanded a harsh military retaliation ; nevertheless, Prime Minister Ariel Sharon decided to not take any immediate retaliatory actions. US and other governments applied heavy diplomatic pressure on Israel to refrain from action.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Players were encouraged to share their ideas for game improvement. Were often the impetus for changes and additions to the game.

Target: Players were encouraged to share their ideas for game improvement and were often the impetus for changes and additions to the game.


Source: Fix coherence: According to the Ministry of Justice. Many of the DEAMs fell far short of standards and lacked strategies to protect victims after the reports were filed.

Target: According to the Ministry of Justice, while many of the DEAMs fell far short of standards and lacked strategies to protect victims after the reports were filed.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Na-ri has had a crush on Hwa-shin three years ago. Things change when she meets the perfect man Go Jung-won (Go Kyung-pyo), a chaebol heir and close friend of Hwa-shin.

Target: Na-ri has had a crush on Hwa-shin three years ago but things change when she meets the perfect man Go Jung-won (Go Kyung-pyo), a chaebol heir and close friend of Hwa-shin.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He and Prendergast published their second book in 2010. Their second book is the Enough Moment: Fighting to End Africa's Worst Human Rights Crimes.

Target: He and Prendergast published their second book, The Enough Moment: Fighting to End Africa's Worst Human Rights Crimes, in 2010.


Source: Make the text more coherent: His character was supposed to be 16 years old. Cheadle was 23 at the time.

Target: Although his character was supposed to be 16 years old, Cheadle was 23 at the time.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He married Barbara Bennett in 1975. Barbara Bennett is a former banker turned landscape designer.

Target: He married Barbara Bennett, a former banker turned landscape designer, in 1975.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Designed by George A. Page Jr.. Berlin oversaw the design of the Curtiss C-46 Commando, the company's foray into civil and military transport markets.

Target: Although designed by George A. Page Jr., Berlin oversaw the design of the Curtiss C-46 Commando, the company's foray into civil and military transport markets.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This was done in an alternating routine. One pair of pages.

Target: This was done in an alternating routine so that one pair of pages.


Source: Fix sentence transition: To confuse the police, he adopted a different modus operandi every few weeks. He would steal a radio from each house and abandon it nearby ; when that pattern of behaviour was established, he would drop it and do something else.

Target: To confuse the police, he adopted a different modus operandi every few weeks. For example, he would steal a radio from each house and abandon it nearby ; when that pattern of behaviour was established, he would drop it and do something else.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He spotted a young woman travelling alone. He followed her to the toilet, unlocked the door with a skeleton key, shot her in the head and stole her train ticket.

Target: Spotting a young woman travelling alone, he followed her to the toilet, unlocked the door with a skeleton key, shot her in the head and stole her train ticket.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Cranky Kong: I knew you'd do it, Diddy m'boy. How could you fail having learned all you knew from old Cranky here?

Target: Cranky Kong: I knew you'd do it, Diddy m'boy, but how could you fail having learned all you knew from old Cranky here?


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: I'm available to teach courses in how to play this game. You can just pop in when you want and save your little old game.

Target: I'm available to teach courses in how to play this game, or you can just pop in when you want and save your little old game.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He refused to permit a complete withdrawal. He dashed fearlessly through heavy machine-gun and mortar fire to the imperiled position and ordered an immediate attack which repulsed the Japanese and regained fifty yards of lost terrain.

Target: Refusing to permit a complete withdrawal, he dashed fearlessly through heavy machine-gun and mortar fire to the imperiled position and ordered an immediate attack which repulsed the Japanese and regained fifty yards of lost terrain.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Her mother never insisted she follow the same career path, at age 21. Barton listened to an agent who said she should try being a jockey.

Target: Although her mother never insisted she follow the same career path, at age 21, Barton listened to an agent who said she should try being a jockey.


Source: Fix coherence: However, a year later he and his wife Margaret resigned the Mormaerdom over to their eldest son Donnchadh, and. Donnchadh became ruler.

Target: However, a year later he and his wife Margaret resigned the Mormaerdom over to their eldest son Donnchadh, and hence Donnchadh became ruler.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Donnelly was originally called Douglas, and under the latter name was laid out in 1872. The present name is in honor of Donnelly, a U.S. Donnelly from Minnesota.

Target: Donnelly was originally called Douglas, and under the latter name was laid out in 1872. The present name is in honor of Ignatius L. Donnelly, a U.S. Congressman from Minnesota.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Due to the film's advertising featuring a crashing plane and the September 11 attacks that transpired a month before, the film was scarcely advertised. Donnie Darko grossed just over $7.5 million worldwide on a budget of $4.5 million.

Target: Due to the film's advertising featuring a crashing plane and the September 11 attacks that transpired a month before, the film was scarcely advertised. In the end, Donnie Darko grossed just over $7.5 million worldwide on a budget of $4.5 million.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Even we liked to do such a story. We never did a romantic story of that kind after Anandam.

Target: Even we liked to do such a story because we never did a romantic story of that kind after Anandam.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Shankar too comes to know about Ajay's drama. Is happy for the affection Ajay's son showed Ajay him.

Target: Shankar too comes to know about Ajay's drama and is happy for the affection his son showed on him.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As with its predecessor, Doom II's levels can be completed in a straightforward fashion. Because the levels are non-linear players can wander off the beaten path, and those that do are often rewarded with bonuses, like health pickups and more powerful weapons.

Target: As with its predecessor, Doom II's levels can be completed in a straightforward fashion. However, because the levels are non-linear players can wander off the beaten path, and those that do are often rewarded with bonuses, like health pickups and more powerful weapons.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Dora mirrore many aspects of other arcade games. Dora save the Crystal Kingdom is a colourful delight that will captivate the younger gamer while they explore a variety of worlds and meet familiar faces from the Dora the Explorer Universe.

Target: Mirroring many aspects of other arcade games, Dora save the Crystal Kingdom is a colourful delight that will captivate the younger gamer while they explore a variety of worlds and meet familiar faces from the Dora the Explorer Universe.


Source: Fix sentence transition: According to one tradition, Dorus settled once in the country subsequently known as Doris ;. Other traditions represent them as more widely spread in earlier times.

Target: According to one tradition, Dorus settled once in the country subsequently known as Doris ; but other traditions represent them as more widely spread in earlier times.


Source: Make the text coherent: In the late 1940s, Bolden refused a request from her boss, a white woman, to stay late and wash the dishes. boss' boss alerted local police, who responded by taking her to a county jail for a psychiatric evaluation.

Target: In the late 1940s, Bolden refused a request from her boss, a white woman, to stay late and wash the dishes. Her boss alerted local police, who responded by taking her to a county jail for a psychiatric evaluation.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Discussions had taken place between Wedderburn and Holloway's then principal, Dr Lionel Butler. Before anything was finalised, Dr died suddenly on 26 November 1981.

Target: Discussions had taken place between Wedderburn and Holloway's then principal, Dr Lionel Butler. Before anything was finalised, Butler died suddenly on 26 November 1981.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Also, the settlers' resistance to innovation brought many of them to impoverishment. In the late 1920s, some began migrating southwards into South-West Africa, while some returned to their original places of origin.

Target: Also, the settlers' resistance to innovation brought many of them to impoverishment. As a result, in the late 1920s, some began migrating southwards into South-West Africa, while some returned to their original places of origin.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The beginning of the 1990s. Trains have been permitted to operate in this section over its remaining level crossings at more than 160 km.

Target: Since the beginning of the 1990s, trains have been permitted to operate in this section over its remaining level crossings at more than 160 km.


Source: Make the text more logical: Since the beginning of the 1990s, trains have been permitted to operate in this section over its remaining level crossings at more than 160 km. Some of the crossings have been replaced by over or underpasses.

Target: Since the beginning of the 1990s, trains have been permitted to operate in this section over its remaining level crossings at more than 160 km. Meanwhile, some of the crossings have been replaced by over or underpasses.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The building was originally designed for livestock shows, not for concerts. While there are unobstructed views of the stage, the sound tends to bounce off the glass.

Target: The building was originally designed for livestock shows, not for concerts, so while there are unobstructed views of the stage, the sound tends to bounce off the glass.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Dot creates a translator app. Everyone can understand Scratch.

Target: Dot creates a translator app so that everyone can understand Scratch.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: As with double-barrelled shotguns, modern double rifles are all made with either sidelock or boxlock actions. Occasionally old hammer rifles can be found.

Target: As with double-barrelled shotguns, modern double rifles are all made with either sidelock or boxlock actions, although occasionally old hammer rifles can be found.


Source: Fix coherence errors: During the infancy of the band's career. They were playing as the Detours.

Target: During the infancy of the band's career, while they were playing as the Detours.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Dummett failed to adapt to city life in Tallahassee. Dummett returned to his home on the lagoon.

Target: Failing to adapt to city life in Tallahassee, Dummett returned to his home on the lagoon.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Ousterhout received MD and DDS degrees from the University of Michigan Ann Arbor. Ousterhout is a voluntary clinical Ousterhout of surgery in the School of Medicine and an adjunct professor of dentistry in the Dental School at University of California, San Francisco.

Target: Ousterhout received MD and DDS degrees from the University of Michigan Ann Arbor. He is a voluntary clinical professor of surgery in the School of Medicine and an adjunct professor of dentistry in the Dental School at University of California, San Francisco.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Dodo: A dodo whom Douwe met at the North Pole, searching for a dodo egg. They find a dodo egg on a desert island, so the dodo can reproduce himself.

Target: Dodo: A dodo whom Douwe met at the North Pole, searching for a dodo egg. Finally, they find a dodo egg on a desert island, so the dodo can reproduce himself.


Source: Fix coherence: With the start of air raids, the service was cut back. All trams were in the depot by 10pm.

Target: With the start of air raids, the service was cut back so that all trams were in the depot by 10pm.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In the autumn of 1926, it was announced by the General Manager that. Six new motors had been bought.

Target: In the autumn of 1926, it was announced by the General Manager that although six new motors had been bought.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He stands at 6 ft 3 in (1.91 m). He plays at the Point guard position.

Target: Standing at 6 ft 3 in (1.91 m), he plays at the Point guard position.


Source: Make the text more coherent: As confirmed by The Mirror NXT also appeared at this years event. Where Progress Wrestling was after the bands in the campsite.

Target: As confirmed by The Mirror NXT also appeared at this years event, although where Progress Wrestling was after the bands in the campsite.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: It further follows that the reasoner will never have the false belief that S (\\ displaystyle S) is false. So the reasoner must remain forever undecided as to whether the statement S (\\ displaystyle S) is true or false.

Target: It further follows that the reasoner will never have the false belief that S (\\ displaystyle S) is false. And so the reasoner must remain forever undecided as to whether the statement S (\\ displaystyle S) is true or false.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Therefore, since the reasoner is accurate, he or she will never believe S. (\\ displaystyle S.) Hence the statement was true. That is exactly what statement claimed.

Target: Therefore, since the reasoner is accurate, he or she will never believe S. (\\ displaystyle S.) Hence the statement was true, because that is exactly what it claimed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: If the reasoner ever believes the statement S, (\\ displaystyle S,) it becomes falsified by that fact, making S (\\ displaystyle S) an untrue belief and. Making the reasoner inaccurate in believing S.

Target: If the reasoner ever believes the statement S, (\\ displaystyle S,) it becomes falsified by that fact, making S (\\ displaystyle S) an untrue belief and hence making the reasoner inaccurate in believing S.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It was his last pure funk album until 1994's Television. Like his voodoo and traditional New Orleans R&B influences.

Target: It was his last pure funk album until 1994's Television, although like his voodoo and traditional New Orleans R&B influences.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: This two front war could not last long, particularly when British support favored TITO. MIHAILOVIC showed pro-German leanings.

Target: This two front war could not last long, particularly when British support favored TITO. Consequently MIHAILOVIC showed pro-German leanings.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: General Mihailovich and his forces. Lacking adequate supplies.

Target: General Mihailovich and his forces, although lacking adequate supplies.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The magical gate has been sealed. Many expect it to open again at any time.

Target: The magical gate has been sealed, but many expect it to open again at any time.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The first betting round is then played, followed by a draw in which each player replaces cards from his hand with an equal number. Each player still has only four cards in hand.

Target: The first betting round is then played, followed by a draw in which each player replaces cards from his hand with an equal number, so that each player still has only four cards in hand.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: On the first betting round, no player is allowed to open the betting. Player's hand already contains a pair of jacks or a better hand.

Target: On the first betting round, no player is allowed to open the betting unless his hand already contains a pair of jacks or a better hand.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: At this point, checking is allowed. Each player draws as in normal draw poker, followed by a fourth betting round and showdown.

Target: At this point, checking is allowed. Finally, each player draws as in normal draw poker, followed by a fourth betting round and showdown.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Supervising the MOT scheme. Over 20,000 authorised garages carry out MOT tests to the correct standards

Target: Supervising the MOT scheme so that over 20,000 authorised garages carry out MOT tests to the correct standards


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The arch of the gate is broken. The guards rooms are in good condition.

Target: The arch of the gate is broken, yet the guards rooms are in good condition.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Note that this definition uses rainfall only. Long-term records are widely available across most of Australia.

Target: Note that this definition uses rainfall only because long-term records are widely available across most of Australia.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: These began easing for western Queensland in early 2014. Drought began to develop further east, along the coastal fringe and into the ranges of southeast Queensland and northeast New South Wales.

Target: Although these began easing for western Queensland in early 2014, drought began to develop further east, along the coastal fringe and into the ranges of southeast Queensland and northeast New South Wales.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: At first, the Thermidorians left Carrier in peace. Members of the Revolutionary Committee of Nantes soon covered Carrier with insults and accusations.

Target: At first, the Thermidorians left Carrier in peace, but members of the Revolutionary Committee of Nantes soon covered him with insults and accusations.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Australia's categorisations system takes into account the birth defects, the effects around the birth. When the mother gives birth, and problems that will arise later in the child's life caused from the drug taken.

Target: Australia's categorisations system takes into account the birth defects, the effects around the birth or when the mother gives birth, and problems that will arise later in the child's life caused from the drug taken.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Drusilla received a Roman education and became Romanized. Little is known of the life of Drusilla.

Target: Drusilla received a Roman education and became Romanized. However, little is known of the life of Drusilla.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: A law code does not describe how things actually functioned. Only how things ought to have functioned.

Target: A law code does not describe how things actually functioned but only how they ought to have functioned.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Dublin Airport is one of only two airports in Europe with United States border preclearance services for US-bound passengers (the other being Shannon Airport). Dublin Airport allows passengers to have their paperwork dealt with before departure saving time upon arrival in the US.

Target: Dublin Airport is one of only two airports in Europe with United States border preclearance services for US-bound passengers (the other being Shannon Airport). It allows passengers to have their paperwork dealt with before departure saving time upon arrival in the United States.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Ian rode in the 620 series, having entered a one-off race the year before on a 583 machine at Oulton Park. Ian secured the title with one round still to go taking 9 races and 12 podiums.

Target: Riding in the 620 series, having entered a one-off race the year before on a 583 machine at Oulton Park, Ian secured the title with one round still to go taking 9 races and 12 podiums.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Eitel reportedly began divorce proceedings against Sophia Charlotte on 15 March 1919, citing infidelities before the war. A verdict given out by the court merely stated that Eitel was the guilty party.

Target: Eitel reportedly began divorce proceedings against Sophia Charlotte on 15 March 1919, citing infidelities before the war. In the end, a verdict given out by the court merely stated that Eitel was the guilty party.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The case was heavily suppressed in German newspapers. Most reports were published in foreign newspapers.

Target: The case was heavily suppressed in German newspapers, so that most reports were published in foreign newspapers.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Frank offers his brother Louis a position with the port advisory board. brother refuses, noting the position is open because Frank made contributions and insisting that everything he has comes straight.

Target: Frank offers his brother Louis a position with the port advisory board. Louis refuses, noting the position is open because Frank made contributions and insisting that everything he has comes straight.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Vancouver Park Board staff removed the sign. Local resident Dustin Bromley launched an online petition to save the sign.

Target: Vancouver Park Board staff removed the sign, but local resident Dustin Bromley launched an online petition to save the sign.


Source: Make the text clearer: Darling feels sympathy for Dudley. Darling decides to put him through a very harsh training regimen to make him a more formidable opponent and take back Semi-Valley from Snidely.

Target: Feeling sympathy for Dudley, Darling decides to put him through a very harsh training regimen to make him a more formidable opponent and take back Semi-Valley from Snidely.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: They were fast and economical. With a limited range.

Target: They were fast and economical, although with a limited range.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The ships were lightly armored with barely splinter-proof gun shields. Extensive watertight subdivision included sixteen transverse bulkheads, with a double hull around the engineering spaces.

Target: The ships were lightly armored with barely splinter-proof gun shields, but extensive watertight subdivision included sixteen transverse bulkheads, with a double hull around the engineering spaces.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The ritual is mainly practiced by married women and women preparing for marriage in northern Sudanese provinces.. Men also conduct it occasionally to treat rheumatic pain.

Target: The ritual is mainly practiced by married women and women preparing for marriage in northern Sudanese provinces., although men also conduct it occasionally to treat rheumatic pain.


Source: Make the text clearer: The Angel of Pergamom was Pope Sylvester I. His church was the clerical order ;

Target: The Angel of Pergamom was Pope Sylvester I, and his church was the clerical order ;


Source: Make the text more logical: He was a Non Executive board member of Horizon Nuclear Power based in UK. In March 2016, it was announced that Non Executive board member would take up the post of Non Executive board member as of the 1 May 2016.

Target: He was a Non Executive board member of Horizon Nuclear Power based in UK. However in March 2016, it was announced that Duncan would take up the post of CEO as of the 1 May 2016.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He came third in the contest. Was unable to perform his Bolero performance.

Target: He came third in the contest, although was unable to perform his Bolero performance.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The following year, 52 Inuit were relocated from Cape Dorset to Dundas Harbour. They returned to the mainland 13 years later.

Target: The following year, 52 Inuit were relocated from Cape Dorset to Dundas Harbour but they returned to the mainland 13 years later.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The Refuge is internationally significant. Many of the birds that stop here breed as far north as Alaska and migrate as far south as South America.

Target: The Refuge is internationally significant because many of the birds that stop here breed as far north as Alaska and migrate as far south as South America.


Source: Make the text clearer: In Scotland surnames taken from lands became more common after the Davidian Revolution. There are early uses of the name by John de Dundemor (1) and Henry de Dundemor.

Target: In Scotland surnames taken from lands became more common after the Davidian Revolution. For example, there are early uses of the name by John de Dundemor (1) and Henry de Dundemor.


Source: Make the text more consistent: One does the arithmetic properly in duodecimal. One gets the result :

Target: Doing the arithmetic properly in duodecimal, one gets the result :


Source: Make the text more consistent: Black researched Milk's life for three years. Black met with Milk's former aides Cleve Jones and Anne Kronenberg, as well as former San Francisco Mayor Art Agnos, and began to write a feature film screenplay encompassing the events of Milk's life.

Target: Researching Milk's life for three years, Black met with Milk's former aides Cleve Jones and Anne Kronenberg, as well as former San Francisco Mayor Art Agnos, and began to write a feature film screenplay encompassing the events of Milk's life.


Source: Fix coherence: The architect incorporated up to seven additional floors in the design, but the original building was never expanded. When additional space was required, an annex was added in 1914, nearly doubling the usable courthouse space.

Target: The architect incorporated up to seven additional floors in the design, but the original building was never expanded. Instead, when additional space was required, an annex was added in 1914, nearly doubling the usable courthouse space.


Source: Make the text more consistent: A ball at the Tuileries. How fans came back into fashion (edit )

Target: A ball at the Tuileries, or how fans came back into fashion (edit )


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The relation S n (\\ displaystyle S_ (n) ) is reflexive. An empty sequence of proper swaps takes u.

Target: The relation S n (\\ displaystyle S_ (n) ) is reflexive because an empty sequence of proper swaps takes u.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The village had a golf club during the early to mid-1900s. The village is village to The Boys Brigade West Midland District Camping Centre.

Target: The village had a golf club during the early to mid-1900s. The village is home to The Boys Brigade West Midland District Camping Centre.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Each designer was given $250 to purchase products. All products were 50 % off, allowing designers to purchase $500 worth of product from the store.

Target: Each designer was given $250 to purchase products, but all products were 50 % off, allowing designers to purchase $500 worth of product from the store.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Dynasty Wars kicks off with a promising start: a good intro tune and static portraits of the heroes. From there on boredom is just around the corner.

Target: Dynasty Wars kicks off with a promising start: a good intro tune and static portraits of the heroes. But from there on boredom is just around the corner.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This album, played with the backing band The Scumfucs, marks the era where his singing voice had not yet began to deteriorate from a high-pitched sneer into a husky growl. His lyrics began to include extreme sociopathic themes and shock value.

Target: This album, played with the backing band The Scumfucs, marks the era where his singing voice had not yet began to deteriorate from a high-pitched sneer into a husky growl, yet his lyrics began to include extreme sociopathic themes and shock value.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: None of the members of The Scumfucs are individually identified on the album cover. The are not Jabbers mentioned in the credits in conjunction with the live tracks.

Target: None of the members of The Scumfucs are individually identified on the album cover, nor are the Jabbers mentioned in the credits in conjunction with the live tracks.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The W term represents a constant energy for cleavage of a dimeric acid or base. The enthalpy of cleavage the (Rh (CO) Cl) by base B involves two steps.

Target: The W term represents a constant energy for cleavage of a dimeric acid or base. For example the enthalpy of cleavage the (Rh (CO) Cl) by base B involves two steps.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The siege ended in October 2013. Another event struck the city with worst flash flood of siege's history.

Target: The siege ended in October 2013, yet another event struck the city with worst flash flood of its history.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The club counted double Olympic champion Kelly Holmes among its members. Champion has several club records to champion's' name.

Target: The club counted double Olympic champion Kelly Holmes among its members and she has several club records to her name.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He also remains third in all-time Indians hits and doubles, and fourth in all-time Indians home runs and walks. During his time in Indians, the team never finished higher than third.

Target: He also remains third in all-time Indians hits and doubles, and fourth in all-time Indians home runs and walks. During his time in Cleveland, the team never finished higher than third.


Source: Fix sentence transition: During 1960, a condensed audio version of Think and Grow Rich was narrated by Nightingale. It was titled, Think and Grow Rich: The Essence Of The Immortal Book By Napoleon Hill, Narrated by Nightingale, and produced by Success Motivation Institute.

Target: During 1960, a condensed audio version of Think and Grow Rich was narrated by Nightingale. It was titled, Think and Grow Rich: The Essence Of The Immortal Book By Napoleon Hill, Narrated by Earl Nightingale, and produced by Success Motivation Institute.


Source: Make the text more logical: Charles VIII marched into Italy with a core force consisting of noble horsemen and non-noble foot soldiers, but in time the role of the latter grew stronger. By the middle of the 16th century.

Target: Charles VIII marched into Italy with a core force consisting of noble horsemen and non-noble foot soldiers, but in time the role of the latter grew stronger so that by the middle of the 16th century.


Source: Fix coherence: These demographic changes also led to a massive increase in urban populations. On the whole France remained a profoundly rural country.

Target: These demographic changes also led to a massive increase in urban populations, although on the whole France remained a profoundly rural country.


Source: Make the text clearer: Different social classes in France each had their own unique set of privileges. No one class could completely dominate the others.

Target: Different social classes in France each had their own unique set of privileges so that no one class could completely dominate the others.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: A study was initiated which suggested that the EPCA-2 protein serum assay exhibits favorable performance characteristics which are potentially superior to serum PSA. More studies are necessary to see if this test will retain its sensitivity when used in a screening population.

Target: A study was initiated which suggested that the EPCA-2 protein serum assay exhibits favorable performance characteristics which are potentially superior to serum PSA. However more studies are necessary to see if this test will retain its sensitivity when used in a screening population.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: East Asian cinema is cinema produced in East Asia or by people from this region. It is part of East Asia cinema, which in turn is part of world cinema.

Target: East Asian cinema is cinema produced in East Asia or by people from this region. It is part of Asian cinema, which in turn is part of world cinema.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Eastcote House was one of three largest in Eastcote, together with Highgrove House and Haydon Hall. All came to be owned by the RNUDC, but only Highgrove House remains in Highgrove House's original form Haydon Hall Hall was demolished in 1967 by the RNUDC's successor.

Target: Eastcote House was one of three largest in Eastcote, together with Highgrove House and Haydon Hall. All came to be owned by the RNUDC, but only Highgrove House remains in its original form ; Haydon Hall was demolished in 1967 by the RNUDC's successor.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The road part of the tunnel is branded as Eastern Harbour Tunnel. The government refers to the tunnel itself as Eastern Harbour Tunnel.

Target: The road part of the tunnel is branded as Eastern Harbour Tunnel, although the government refers to the tunnel itself as Eastern Harbour Crossing.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Some of the styles have become associated with the particular traditions of one specific autocephalous Orthodox patriarchate,. Others are more widely used within the Eastern Orthodox Church.

Target: Some of the styles have become associated with the particular traditions of one specific autocephalous Orthodox patriarchate, whereas others are more widely used within the Eastern Orthodox Church.


Source: Make the text clearer: Subsequently, fieldwork conducted at Hong Kong in southern China found that. Both the eastern spot-billed duck and the Indian spot-billed duck.

Target: Subsequently, fieldwork conducted at Hong Kong in southern China found that although both the eastern spot-billed duck and the Indian spot-billed duck.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The marines under his command also opened fire. After the shooting stopped three people had been killed.

Target: The marines under his command also opened fire, and after the shooting stopped three people had been killed.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Throughout their life they pay no interest, as it accrues as principal instead. ETRs that mature in 10 years might cost $600 today for one bond that will be valued at $1,000 (par) in 10 years.

Target: Throughout their life they pay no interest, as it accrues as principal instead. For example ETRs that mature in 10 years might cost $600 today for one bond that will be valued at $1,000 (par) in 10 years.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It is implied that Bolt is his clone. He is a clone from clone.

Target: It is implied that Bolt is his clone, or he is a clone from Bolt.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Mikaboshi sensed Keishicho's unsatiated thirst for vengeance. Mikaboshi offered to allow him to return to the mortal realm to exact revenge upon the man responsible for his death.

Target: Sensing Keishicho's unsatiated thirst for vengeance, Mikaboshi offered to allow him to return to the mortal realm to exact revenge upon the man responsible for his death.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Keishicho heard that his target was affiliated with Big Hero 6. Keishicho infiltrated the team's Tokyo headquarters, only to learn that the Silver Samurai had since parted ways with the team and was presumed deceased.

Target: Hearing that his target was affiliated with Big Hero 6, Keishicho infiltrated the team's Tokyo headquarters, only to learn that the Silver Samurai had since parted ways with the team and was presumed deceased.


Source: Make the text more logical: Keishicho struggled to maintain a semblance of humanity and resist the shinma demon's corrupting influence. Keishicho began to investigate the whereabouts of the Silver Samurai, hoping to dispatch him as soon as possible so his soul could finally be at peace.

Target: Struggling to maintain a semblance of humanity and resist the shinma demon's corrupting influence, Keishicho began to investigate the whereabouts of the Silver Samurai, hoping to dispatch him as soon as possible so his soul could finally be at peace.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Hefti and his trumpeter colleague, Pete Candoli, were both great fans of Stravinsky's music. After Hefti returned to the band after six months spent in California working in the film industry, Pete Candoli wanted to know if Hefti had met the great man.

Target: Hefti and his trumpeter colleague, Pete Candoli, were both great fans of Stravinsky's music, so after Hefti returned to the band after six months spent in California working in the film industry, Candoli wanted to know if he had met the great man.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Echinolittorina penicillata is a species of sea snail the winkles or periwinkles. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Littorinidae.

Target: Echinolittorina penicillata is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Littorinidae, the winkles or periwinkles.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Melbourne Racing Club moved the race predominantly to Sandown in 1994. At times the race has been rescheduled and held at Caulfield as was the case in 2013 when Sandown was under construction.

Target: The Melbourne Racing Club moved the race predominantly to Sandown in 1994. However at times the race has been rescheduled and held at Caulfield as was the case in 2013 when Sandown Racecourse was under construction.


Source: Make the text clearer: Diverse ecosystems are typically more productive than non-diverse ones. Any set of species can never fully exploit all potential niches.

Target: Diverse ecosystems are typically more productive than non-diverse ones, because any set of species can never fully exploit all potential niches.


Source: Make the text clearer: Algeria receives only about 200,000 tourists and visitors annually. Ethnic Algeria French citizens represent the largest group of tourists, followed by Tunisians.

Target: Algeria receives only about 200,000 tourists and visitors annually. Ethnic Algerian French citizens represent the largest group of tourists, followed by Tunisians.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Over a 12-year period, the association agreement is expected to enable Algeria to export goods to the EU tariff-free. Algeria gradually lifts tariffs on imports from the EU.

Target: Over a 12-year period, the association agreement is expected to enable Algeria to export goods to the EU tariff-free, while it gradually lifts tariffs on imports from the EU.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Reflecting strong oil export revenues, external debt is on a downward trajectory. These revenues facilitated early repayments of US $900 million in loans from the African Development Bank and Saudi Arabia.

Target: Reflecting strong oil export revenues, external debt is on a downward trajectory. For example, these revenues facilitated early repayments of US $900 million in loans from the African Development Bank and Saudi Arabia.


Source: Make the text more logical: The non-bank sector remains less developed. Recent reforms in the field of regulation and supervision have laid the foundations for leasing.

Target: The non-bank sector remains less developed, although recent reforms in the field of regulation and supervision have laid the foundations for leasing.


Source: Make the text clearer: Algeria's agricultural sector, which contributes about 8 percent of gross domestic product (GDP) but employs 14 percent of the workforce, is unable to meet the food needs of the country's population. Some 45 percent of food is imported.

Target: Algeria's agricultural sector, which contributes about 8 percent of gross domestic product (GDP) but employs 14 percent of the workforce, is unable to meet the food needs of the country's population. As a result, some 45 percent of food is imported.


Source: Make the text more consistent: No reliable estimates are available. Unemployment is reportedly acute: over 50 % of the population under the age of 20.

Target: Although no reliable estimates are available, unemployment is reportedly acute: over 50 % of the population under the age of 20.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The Ringgit continued to strengthen to 3.18 to the dollar by March 2008 and appreciated as low as 2.94 to the dollar in May 2011. Many aspects of capital control have been slowly relaxed by Bank Negara Malaysia.

Target: The Ringgit continued to strengthen to 3.18 to the dollar by March 2008 and appreciated as low as 2.94 to the dollar in May 2011. Meanwhile, many aspects of capital control have been slowly relaxed by Bank Negara Malaysia.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The Malaysian economy is highly robust and diversified with the export value of high-tech products in 2015 standing at US $57.258 billion, the second highest after Singapore in ASEAN. Malaysian exports the second largest volume and value of palm oil products globally after Indonesia.

Target: The Malaysian economy is highly robust and diversified with the export value of high-tech products in 2015 standing at US $57.258 billion, the second highest after Singapore in ASEAN. Malaysia exports the second largest volume and value of palm oil products globally after Indonesia.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The telecommunication network. Strong in urban areas.

Target: The telecommunication network, although strong in urban areas.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Scottish participation in the British Empire also allowed Scotland to export its output throughout much of the world. Heavy industry declined in the late 20th century, leading to a shift in the economy of Scottish towards technology and the service sector.

Target: Scottish participation in the British Empire also allowed Scotland to export its output throughout much of the world. However heavy industry declined in the late 20th century, leading to a shift in the economy of Scotland towards technology and the service sector.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: By the late of the 1590s, approximately eighteen Dutch ships had gained access to Brazil. These ships would bring back mostly sugar, but also Brazil wood, cotton, and ginger.

Target: By the late of the 1590s, approximately eighteen Dutch ships had gained access to Brazil. These ships would bring back mostly sugar, but also Brazilian wood, cotton, and ginger.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: As a concept of natural resource management, ecosystem management remains both ambiguous and controversial, in part. Some of ecosystem management's formulations rest on policy and scientific assertions that are contested.

Target: As a concept of natural resource management, ecosystem management remains both ambiguous and controversial, in part because some of its formulations rest on policy and scientific assertions that are contested.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Exceedingly rare, this tumor develops in a wide age range. Often in young patients without a sex predilection.

Target: Exceedingly rare, this tumor develops in a wide age range, although often in young patients without a sex predilection.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Primarily a studio session and touring drummer. Hoh exhibited a degree of originality and showmanship that set him apart and several of his contributions have been singled out for acknowledgment by music critics.

Target: Although primarily a studio session and touring drummer, Hoh exhibited a degree of originality and showmanship that set him apart and several of his contributions have been singled out for acknowledgment by music critics.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Along with Seeda, she's implied to have other separate forms with their own personality. Yorn's mother is implied to be one of these forms at the end of the manga.

Target: Along with Seeda, she's implied to have other separate forms with their own personality. In particular, Yorn's mother is implied to be one of these forms at the end of the manga.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: That she and Yorn love each other is quite ironic, as Elisiss is actually a God herself. Elisiss flew down from heaven just to meet Yorn.

Target: That she and Yorn love each other is quite ironic, as Elisiss is actually a God herself. In fact, she flew down from heaven just to meet him.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Also, each department has a resource center near the specific classrooms. Students can work in close proximity to their teachers when necessary.

Target: Also, each department has a resource center near the specific classrooms so that students can work in close proximity to their teachers when necessary.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Edge of Tomorrow ranked first in Indonesia and Taiwan, grossing $2 million and $1.9 million, respectively. Edge of Tomorrow's opening weekend in 286 screens Indonesia Indonesia was Tom Cruise's biggest opening, to date, in the country.

Target: Edge of Tomorrow ranked first in Indonesia and Taiwan, grossing $2 million and $1.9 million, respectively. Its opening weekend in 286 screens in Indonesia was Tom Cruise's biggest opening, to date, in the country.


Source: Make the text more logical: tagline than the actual title of the film. Some digital retailers listed the film under the title Live Die Repeat: Edge of Tomorrow.

Target: tagline than the actual title of the film. Similarly, some digital retailers listed the film under the title Live Die Repeat: Edge of Tomorrow.


Source: Make the text more logical: Djarum Central Java where his pair in mixed doubles Gloria Emanuelle Widjaja also joined. Djarum is a badminton club in Kudus.

Target: Djarum, a badminton club in Kudus, Central Java where his pair in mixed doubles Gloria Emanuelle Widjaja also joined.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The company sold its entertainment division to Namco Cybertainment in 1996. Namco Cybertainment is a division of Japan's Namco.

Target: The company sold its entertainment division to Namco Cybertainment, a division of Japan's Namco, in 1996.


Source: Make the text coherent: Freilich won the top two KO events on the ACBL calendar in 1963. The ACBL calendar is the Vanderbilt and Spingold.

Target: Freilich won the top two KO events on the ACBL calendar, the Vanderbilt and Spingold, in 1963.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Peasants rarely moved beyond their villages, and journeys and pilgrimages required a permit, but young people occasionally sought seasonal employment outside of their village. People were highly suspicious of outsiders.

Target: Peasants rarely moved beyond their villages, and journeys and pilgrimages required a permit, but young people occasionally sought seasonal employment outside of their village. As a result, people were highly suspicious of outsiders.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Many scholars, activists, and NGOs agree with targeting specific populations. They contest the motives of the World Bank based on their measurements of success.

Target: Although many scholars, activists, and NGOs agree with targeting specific populations, they contest the motives of the World Bank based on their measurements of success.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 2007, more than half of the population of Afghanistan was under the age of 18. UNICEF estimates that close to a quarter of Afghanistan children between the ages of seven and fourteen were working.

Target: In 2007, more than half of the population of Afghanistan was under the age of 18. UNICEF estimates that close to a quarter of Afghan children between the ages of seven and fourteen were working.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Aristotle believed dialectical relationships among students performing research could impede the pursuit of truth. Much of the school's focus was on research done empirically.

Target: Aristotle believed dialectical relationships among students performing research could impede the pursuit of truth. Thus, much of the school's focus was on research done empirically.


Source: Make the text more consistent: To be more efficient and effective during maneuvers, students were also trained in dancing and music. This would enhance students' ability to move gracefully as a unit.

Target: To be more efficient and effective during maneuvers, students were also trained in dancing and music, because this would enhance their ability to move gracefully as a unit.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: There is no evidence that, at the time, he convinced anyone ;. His position is worth considering as contrast to the prevailing judgment.

Target: There is no evidence that, at the time, he convinced anyone ; but his position is worth considering as contrast to the prevailing judgment.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Bernays argued that the covert use of third parties was morally legitimate. Those parties were morally autonomous actors.

Target: Bernays argued that the covert use of third parties was morally legitimate because those parties were morally autonomous actors.


Source: Make the text clearer: The first campaign succeeded ; women smoked more cigarettes ; American Tobacco Company brought in more revenue ; and Lucky Strike led the market in growth. A taboo remained on women smoking in public.

Target: The first campaign succeeded ; women smoked more cigarettes ; American Tobacco Company brought in more revenue ; and Lucky Strike led the market in growth. But a taboo remained on women smoking in public.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Edward Enfield (born 1929 in Hampstead, London) is an English television and radio presenter and newspaper journalist. Edward Enfield is also the radio presenter of comedian Harry Enfield and radio presenter radio presenter, and husband of Deirdre.

Target: Edward Enfield (born 1929 in Hampstead, London) is an English television and radio presenter and newspaper journalist. He is also the father of comedian Harry Enfield and novelist Lizzie Enfield, and husband of Deirdre.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Roeder realised the value of the work, despite the lack of interest at that time. Roeder deposited Faragher's full manuscript in the library of the Manx Museum for safekeeping, where it still remains today.

Target: Realising the value of the work, despite the lack of interest at that time, Roeder deposited Faragher's full manuscript in the library of the Manx Museum for safekeeping, where it still remains today.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In response to Faragher's struggle to earn enough to live on, Roeder tried to create an interest in him as a literary and cultural figure. A public fund might be raised to support Faragher.

Target: In response to Faragher's struggle to earn enough to live on, Roeder tried to create an interest in him as a literary and cultural figure, so that a public fund might be raised to support him.


Source: Fix coherence: The counsel for the prosecution in the case confirmed in a letter to The Times that the case was dropped. Three prosecution witnesses had refused to testify.

Target: The counsel for the prosecution in the case confirmed in a letter to The Times that the case was dropped because three prosecution witnesses had refused to testify.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: From 1952 until his death, Edward became a fervent supporter of the apartheid government. Edward's successors have maintained Edward he was not sincere and was merely strategizing a way forward out of a difficult situation.

Target: From 1952 until his death, Edward became a fervent supporter of the apartheid government, although his successors have maintained that he was not sincere and was merely strategizing a way forward out of a difficult situation.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: During his tenure as Bishop, the ZCC emerged as South Africa's largest independent church. Lekganyane became arguably the wealthiest and most powerful South Africa in apartheid-era South Africa.

Target: During his tenure as Bishop, the ZCC emerged as South Africa's largest independent church, while Lekganyane became arguably the wealthiest and most powerful African in apartheid-era South Africa.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A new habit had to be established. It took the market a while to get going.

Target: Since a new habit had to be established, it took the market a while to get going.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Wright was a keen traveller spending most vacations on the continent of Europe collecting natural history specimens. In 1867 Wright spent six months in the Seychelles making large collections of the fauna and flora.

Target: Wright was a keen traveller spending most vacations on the continent of Europe collecting natural history specimens and in 1867 he spent six months in the Seychelles making large collections of the fauna and flora.


Source: Fix sentence transition: According to the United States Census Bureau all land. The United States Census Bureau is the town of Edwards has a total area of 1.7 square miles (4.3 km).

Target: According to the United States Census Bureau, the town of Edwards has a total area of 1.7 square miles (4.3 km), all land.


Source: Make the text more logical: Keeble briefly taught architecture at the University of Pennsylvania. When Keeble moved to Nashville, Keeble had a desire to raise the entire profile of architecture there.

Target: Keeble briefly taught architecture at the University of Pennsylvania but when he moved to Nashville, he had a desire to raise the entire profile of architecture there.