Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: An important number of Peruvian politicians opposed to the idea of the Confederation fled to Chile, where they received support and this led to the War of the Confederation.

Target: Many Peruvian politicians opposed to the idea of the Confederation fled to Chile, where they received support and this led to the War of the Confederation.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: When Agustn Gamarra took office as the new president of Peru on August 25, 1839, he officially declared the dissolution of the Confederation and of the merging of the Northern and Southern Peruvian Republics into a single state to be called again Peru and separate from Bolivia.

Target: When Agustn Gamarra took office as the new president of Peru on August 25, 1839, he officially declared the dissolution of the Confederation and of the merging of the Northern and Southern Peruvian Republics into a single state, again called Peru, and separate from Bolivia.


Source: Clarify this text: Traditional epistemology focuses on topics such as the analysis of the nature of knowledge, usually in terms of justified true beliefs, the sources of knowledge, like perception or testimony, the structure of a body of knowledge, for example in the form of foundationalismor coherentism, and the problem of philosophical skepticism or the question of whether knowledge is possible at all.

Target: Traditional epistemology focuses on topics such as the analysis of the nature of knowledge, usually in terms of justified true beliefs. They then seek to understand what counts as knowledge and how to evaluate one's beliefs (see foundationalism, coherentism, and the problem of philosophical skepticism or the question of whether knowledge is possible at all.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Relation to traditional epistemology Traditional epistemology and Bayesian epistemology are both forms of epistemology, but they differ in various respects, for example, concerning their methodology, the propositional attitudes they study, the role justification or confirmation plays in them and some of their research interests.

Target: Relation to traditional epistemology Traditional epistemology and Bayesian epistemology are both forms of epistemology, but they differ in various respects, for example, concerning their methodology, their interpretation of belief, the role justification or confirmation plays in them and some of their research interests.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Bayesian epistemology focuses on degrees of belief, also often called credences. On the other hand, Traditional epistemology focuses on knowledge, analyzed by Plato as being justified true beliefs.

Target: Bayesian epistemology focuses on topics such as the analysis of the nature of knowledge, usually in terms of justified true beliefs.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Foundation Carbon dating artefacts found at Muweilah puts the settlement's original date of establishment at between 850 and 800 BC and it enjoyed a brief heyday before being destroyed in a fire around 600BC.

Target: Foundation Carbon dated artefacts found at Muweilah puts the settlement's original date of establishment at between 850 and 800 BC and it enjoyed a brief heyday before being destroyed in a fire around 600BC.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Analysis of bioarchaeological remains has uncovered important information on subsistence strategies at Muweilah, largely linked to the role played by the domestication of the camel, with marine resources supplementing subsistence based on animal husbandry.

Target: Bio-archaeological analysis of remains has uncovered important information on subsistence strategies at Muweilah, largely linked to the role played by the domestication of the camel, with marine resources supplementing subsistence based on animal husbandry.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a strain of political thought that supports civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Clarify: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasizes the supremacy of individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over and against any kind of authority (such as a state, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Clarify the sentence: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation, social norms imposed through peer pressure and so on). Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not a complete ideology— rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a collection of views on the specific issues of civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.


Source: Make the text more understandable: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and the many civil rightslaws enacted since.

Target: In its purest form, Civil libertarianism is a political philosophy supporting civil liberties, or which emphasize individual rights and personal freedoms over authorities-such as governments, a corporation and/or social peer pressures. Civil libertarianism is not limited to an individual ideology, rather, it is a philosophy based on a strict interpretation of the Constitution's civil liberties and civil rights.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: In theory, the civil libertarian seeks to reduce the role of government to a minimum-preferring private businesses to fill the many social needs for most Americans. Under the control of elected officials, the government is only relied upon for regulation, without excessively interfering in the lives of its citizens.

Target: In theory, the civil libertarian seeks to restrict this relationship to an absolute minimum in which the state can function and provide basic services and securities without excessively interfering in the lives of its citizens.


Source: Clarify: In many cases Civil Libertarians oppose bans on hate speech and obscenity.

Target: Specifically, civil libertarians oppose bans on hate speech and obscenity.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: With the advent of personal computers, the Internet, email, cell phones and other information technology advances a subset of civil libertarianism has arisen that focuses on protecting individuals' digital rights and privacy. Just as acting Democrats and Republicans hold varying degrees of left and right-leaning beliefs; few Civil Libertarians, if any, hold all of the views defined by this philosophy.

Target: With the advent of personal computers, the Internet, email, cell phones and other information technology advances a subset of civil libertarianism has arisen that focuses on protecting individuals' digital rights and privacy..


Source: Clarification: upTrujillo in 1952 In May 1961, the ruler of the Dominican Republic, Rafael Trujillo was murdered with weapons supplied by the United States Central Intelligence Agency (CIA).

Target: upTrujillo in 1952 In May 1961, the ruler of the Dominican Republic, right-wing dictator Rafael Trujillo, was murdered with weapons supplied by the United States Central Intelligence Agency (CIA).


Source: Clarify this sentence: CIA "Family Jewels" Memo, 1973 (see page 434) Family Jewels (Central Intelligence Agency) Juan Bosch, an earlier recipient of CIA funding, was elected president of the Dominican Republic in 1962, and was deposed in 1963.

Target: CIA "Family Jewels" Memo, 1973 (see page 434) Family Jewels (Central Intelligence Agency) Socialist Juan Bosch, an earlier recipient of CIA funding, was elected president of the Dominican Republic in 1962, and was deposed in 1963.


Source: Use clearer wording: Canals are waterways channels, or artificial waterways, for water conveyance, or to service water transport vehicles.

Target: Canals are waterway channels, or artificial waterways, for water conveyance, or to service water transport vehicles.


Source: Clarify this text: Canals are waterways channels, or artificial waterways, for water conveyance, or to service water transport vehicles.

Target: Canals are waterways channels, or artificial waterways, for water conveyance, or for servicing water transport vehicles.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for readability: They may also help with irrigation. It can be thought of as an artificial version of a river. Canals carry free surface flow under atmospheric pressure.

Target: They carry free surface flow under atmospheric pressure.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: In most cases, the engineered works will have a series of dams and locks that create reservoirs of low speed current flow.

Target: In most cases, a canal has a series of dams and locks that create reservoirs of low speed current flow.


Source: Make this easier to read: A canal is also known as a navigation when it parallels a river and shares part of its waters and drainage basin, and leverages its resources by building dams and locks to increase and lengthen its stretches of slack water levels while staying in its valley.

Target: A canal can be called a navigation canal when it parallels a river and shares part of its waters and drainage basin, and leverages its resources by building dams and locks to increase and lengthen its stretches of slack water levels while staying in its valley.


Source: Make the sentence clear: In contrast, a canal cuts across a drainage divide atop a ridge, generally requiring an external water source above the highest elevation.

Target: A canal can cut across a drainage divide atop a ridge, generally requiring an external water source above the highest elevation.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Many canals have been built at elevations towering over valleys and other water ways crossing far below.

Target: Many canals have been built at elevations, above valleys and other water ways crossing far below.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Many canals have been built at elevations towering over valleys and other water ways crossing far below.

Target: Many canals have been built at elevations towering over valleys and other waterways.


Source: Make this easier to read: after the death of Kamal Sabri, instruments such as Swarmandal and Flexatone came to end in the ensemble. Later the same year, Sabri Brothers performed live at in DOM at On The Carpet Oriental Culture Festival on 17 November 2001 in Moscow which was later released in 2003 as album Live in Moscow Diwani Maqbool Ahmed Sabri along with Mehmood Ghaznavi Sabri toured India in 2004 and recorded an album titled Rabb E Akbar. which was his last official release.

Target: after the death of Kamal Sabri, instruments such as Swarmandal and Flexatone came to end in the ensemble. Later the same year, Sabri Brothers performed live at in DOM at On The Carpet Oriental Culture Festival on 17 November 2001 in Moscow which was later released in 2003 as album Live in Moscow Diwani


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: In 2006, Sabri Brothers performed at Ajmer Sharif and they performed in Pune, Maharashtra during the same year. the same year, he re created and re released his old hits like Khwaja Ki Deewani, Mera Koi Nahi Hai Tere Siwa, Mann Bole Mann, and Hum Panjatani Hai which proved to be a big hit. Maqbool Ahmed Sabri did various international and national tours till his death.

Target: In 2006, Sabri Brothers performed at Ajmer Sharif and they performed in Pune, Maharashtra. The same year, he re created and re released his old hits like Khwaja Ki Deewani, Mera Koi Nahi Hai Tere Siwa, Mann Bole Mann, and Hum Panjatani Hai which proved to be a big hit. Maqbool Ahmed Sabri did various international and national tours till his death.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: In 2006, Sabri Brothers performed at Ajmer Sharif and they performed in Pune, Maharashtra during the same year. the same year, he re created and re released his old hits like Khwaja Ki Deewani, Mera Koi Nahi Hai Tere Siwa, Mann Bole Mann, and Hum Panjatani Hai which proved to be a big hit. Maqbool Ahmed Sabri did various international and national tours till his death.

Target: In 2006, Sabri Brothers performed at Ajmer Sharif and they performed in Pune, Maharashtra during the same year. the same year, he re created and re released his old hits like Khwaja Ki Deewani, Mera Koi Nahi Hai Tere Siwa, Mann Bole Mann, and Hum Panjatani Hai which proved to be a big hit worldwide. Maqbool Ahmed Sabri did various international and national tours till his death.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: The Houlton Band of Maliseet Indians, based on the Meduxnekeag River in the Maine portion of their traditional homeland, are since 19 July 1776, the first foreign Treaty allies with the United States of America and a federally recognized tribe of Maliseet people by the United States.

Target: The Houlton Band of Maliseet Indians, based on the Meduxnekeag River in the Maine portion of their traditional homeland, are since 19 July 1776, the first foreign Treaty allies with the United States of America and a federally recognized tribe of Maliseet people.


Source: Make the text more understandable: Maliseets are forest, river and coastal people within their 20,000, 000 acre, 200 mile wide, and 600 mile long Saint John river watershed homeland. Name The people call themselves Wlastkwewiyik after the Wlastkw River at the heart of their expansive territory in what is now New Brunswick and Maine.

Target: Maliseets are forest, river and coastal people within their 20,000, 000 acre, 200 mile wide, and 600 mile long Saint John river watershed. Name The people call themselves Wlastkwewiyik after the Wlastkw River at the heart of their expansive territory in what is now New Brunswick and Maine.


Source: Make this easier to read: Their lands and resources are bounded on the east by the Mikmaq people, on the west by the Penobscot people, and on the south by the Passamaquoddy people, who also still speak related Algonquian languages.

Target: Their lands and resources are bounded on the east by the Mikmaq people, on the west by the Penobscot, and on the south by the Passamaquoddy people, who also still speak related Algonquian languages.


Source: Clarification: The Europeans met the Mikmaq people before the Wlastkwewiyik, and adopted Malesse'jik as Malcite in French for the people, not understanding that it was not their true name.

Target: The Europeans met the Mikmaq people before the Wlastkwewiyik, and transliterated Malesse'jik as Malcite in French for the people, not understanding that it was not their true name.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Rauf Lala (Urdu:) (born 1970 in Larkana, Sindh, Pakistan) is a popular Pakistani comedian, actor, writer, and producer.

Target: Rauf Lala (Urdu:) (born 1970 in Larkana, Sindh, Pakistan) is a Pakistani comedian, actor, writer, and producer.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: He has been working for over three decades in Pakistani media, And is well known for his comedic talent and stage work.

Target: Working in Pakistani media for over three decades in Pakistani media, And is well known for his comedic talent and stage work.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: He has been working for over three decades in Pakistani media, And is well known for his comedic talent and stage work.

Target: He has been working for over three decades, he is well known for his comedic talent and stage work.


Source: Make this sentence readable: Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.

Target: Lala has also worked in India, winning season two of The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.

Target: Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Rauf Lala began his stage career in 1985 as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.


Source: Use clearer wording: Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.

Target: Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge-Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 as a comedian in One Day Theater, Karachi, alongside his teacher, Razak Rajo.


Source: Make the sentence clear: His first commercial show was Susral Bara Janjaal in 1985 with Umer Sharif Javed Sheikh and others. He has worked with Umer Sharif and Moin Akhtar on many stage shows such as Bhudda Ghar Per Hai, and Bakra Qistoon Pay in 1989 which still is a popular and well-known Pakistani stage show internationally.

Target: His first commercial show was Susral Bara Janjaal in 1985, which featured Umer Sharif and Javed Sheikh. with Umer Sharif and Moin Akhtar on many stage shows such as Bhudda Ghar Per Hai, and Bakra Qistoon Pay in 1989 which still is a popular and well-known Pakistani stage show internationally.


Source: Change to clearer wording: He has worked with Umer Sharif and Moin Akhtar on many stage shows such as Bhudda Ghar Per Hai, and Bakra Qistoon Pay in 1989 which still is a popular and well-known Pakistani stage show internationally.

Target: He has worked with Umer Sharif and Moin Akhtar on many stage shows, including Bhudda Ghar Per Hai, and Bakra Qistoon Pay in 1989 which still is a popular and well-known Pakistani stage show internationally.


Source: Use clearer wording: Lala came on several comedy reality shows and gained popularity on television as well as movies in India.

Target: Lala has appeared on several comedy reality shows and gained popularity on television as well as movies in India.


Source: Clarify the sentence: Lala came on several comedy reality shows and gained popularity on television as well as movies in India.

Target: Lala came on several comedy reality shows and gained popularity on television as well as appearing in movies in Pakistan and India.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: Filmography Year Title Role Place 1983 Manila K Jaanbaz Supporting Role Lollywood 1990 Hum Toh Chale Susraal Guy From America Lollywood 1993 Duniya Dil Walo Ki Saud's Friend Lollywood 2009 Runway Tulip Joshi's Friend Bollywood 2010 Bhavnao Ko Samjho Film Director Bollywood Television Lala has worked in various serials, commercials, television filmsand shows for almost three decades including:

Target: Filmography Year Title Role Place 1983 Manila K Jaanbaz Supporting Role Lollywood 1990 Hum Toh Chale Susraal Guy From America Lollywood 1993 Duniya Dil Walo Ki Saud's Friend Lollywood 2009 Runway Tulip Joshi's Friend Bollywood 2010 Bhavnao Ko Samjho Film Director Bollywood Television Lala has worked in various serials, commercials and television films, including:


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Wissenschaft is the German language term for scholarship, research, higher education, and academia.

Target: Wissenschaft is a German language term for scholarship, research, higher education, and academia.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Wissenschaft is the German language term for scholarship, research, higher education, and academia.

Target: Wissenschaft is the German language term that embraces scholarship, research, higher education, and academia.


Source: Use clearer wording: History Before Immanuel Kant published his Critique of Judgment in 1790, the "schöne Wissenschaft" (roughly, "fine sciences") were highly regarded.

Target: History Before Immanuel Kant published his Critique of Judgment in 1790, "schöne Wissenschaft" (roughly, "fine sciences") were highly regarded.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: History Before Immanuel Kant published his Critique of Judgment in 1790, the "schöne Wissenschaft" (roughly, "fine sciences") were highly regarded.

Target: History Before Immanuel Kant published his Critique of Judgment in 1790, the "schöne Wissenschaft" was highly regarded.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The day is known to increase awareness of the factors and issues that affect older adults, such as age deterioration and the study of problems that affect their lives, elder abuse.

Target: The day is intended to increase awareness of the factors and issues that affect older adults, such as age deterioration and the study of problems that affect their lives, elder abuse.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: The day is known to increase awareness of the factors and issues that affect older adults, such as age deterioration and the study of problems that affect their lives, elder abuse.

Target: The day is known to increase awareness of the factors and issues that affect older adults, such as health deterioration and elder abuse.


Source: Make this easier to read: The day is also recognized for the well-being of the elderly to recognize and appreciate their accomplishments and their participation in society in order to promote through their skills and knowledge.

Target: The day is also recognized for the well-being of the elderly to recognize and appreciate their accomplishments and their participation in society in order to promote their skills and knowledge.


Source: Clarify this sentence: The annual military parade along the 11. novembra krastmala (November 11th Embankment) in Riga marked the centennial anniversary' s main events.

Target: The annual military parade along the 11. novembra krastmala (November 11th Embankment) in Riga marked one of the main events of the centennial anniversary' s main events.


Source: Change to clearer wording: The annual military parade along the 11. novembra krastmala (November 11th Embankment) in Riga marked the centennial anniversary' s main events.

Target: The annual military parade along the 11. novembra krastmala (November 11th Embankment) in Riga marked the centennial anniversary'.


Source: Make this sentence readable: It was the largest in history with around 1,700 soldiers from the Latvian National Armed Forces participating in the march past.

Target: It was the largest military parade in Latvian history with around 1,700 soldiers from the Latvian National Armed Forces participating in the march past.


Source: Make the sentence clear: Extensive evidence of Iron Age II settlement has been found throughout the UAE, particularly at Muwailah, Al Thuqeibah, Bidaa bint Saud, as well as Rumailah and Qattara in Al Ain.

Target: Extensive evidence of Iron Age II settlement has been found throughout the UAE, particularly at Muweilah, Thuqeibah, Bidaa bint Saud, as well as Rumailah and Qattara in Al Ain.


Source: Clarify this text: Later, he was awarded the coveted Military Cross for his great show of bravery.

Target: Later, he was awarded the coveted Military Cross for his bravery.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Poonch withstood a siege by the Pakistanis from November 1947 till relieved by an Indian offensive, Operation Easy on 20 November 1948.

Target: Poonch withstood a siege by the Pakistan Army from November 1947 till relieved by an Indian offensive, Operation Easy on 20 November 1948.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: The besieged garrison, commanded by Brig. Pritam Singh, was maintained by air supply.

Target: The besieged garrison Singh commanded was maintained by air supply.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: In 1951, he faced a court-martial.

Target: In 1951, Singh faced a court-martial.


Source: Clarify this text: Time perception is usually categorized under the following three distinct ranges, because different ranges of durations are processed in different parts of the brain.

Target: Time perception is typically categorized in three distinct ranges, because different ranges of durations are processed in different parts of the brain.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Time perception is usually categorized under the following three distinct ranges, because different ranges of durations are processed in different parts of the brain.

Target: Time perception is usually categorized under the following three distinct ranges, because different ranges of durations are processed in different areas of the brain.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: William J. Friedman (1993) contrasted two theories for a sense of time: Another theory involves the brain's subconscious tallying of "pulses" during a specific interval, forming a biological stopwatch.

Target: William J. Friedman (1993) contrasted two theories for a sense of time: Another hypothesis involves the brain's subconscious tallying of "pulses" during a specific interval, forming a biological stopwatch.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: This theory proposes that the brain can run multiple biological stopwatches at one time depending on the type of task one is involved in. The location of these pulses and what these pulses actually consist of is unclear.

Target: This theory proposes that the brain can run multiple biological stopwatches at one time depending on the type of tasks being tracked. The source and nature of the pulses is unclear.


Source: Clarify this text: This model is only a metaphor and does not stand up in terms of brain physiology or anatomy.

Target: They are as yet a metaphor whose correspondence to brain anatomy or physiology is unknown.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The imperial system would be constituted by the time of the establishment of the Qin, as well as the system of three lords and nine ministers, and the system of prefectures and counties.

Target: The imperial system would eventually be constituted by the time of the establishment of the Qin, as well as the system of three lords and nine ministers, and the system of prefectures and counties.


Source: Clarification: Weights, measures, currency, and writing were unified.

Target: Units of measurements, currency, and writing were unified.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Evolution of the system of selecting officials Imperial examination paper of Ming dynasty in 1598 AD The emperor receives a candidate during the Palace Examination.

Target: Evolution of Official Selection Imperial examination paper of Ming dynasty in 1598 AD The emperor receives a candidate during the Palace Examination.


Source: Clarify this text: The selection of official standards by family background gradually developed to the selection of talent, while the selection method by selection gradually developed to the form of public examination.

Target: The standard of Official Selection by familial history gradually developed to the selection of talent, while the selection method by selection gradually developed to the form of public examination.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: The selection of official standards by family background gradually developed to the selection of talent, while the selection method by selection gradually developed to the form of public examination. The selecting mechanism based on talent later became institutionalised and much more rigorous. + Examination and degree hierarchy Degree Ranks Exam Times held Child student (Tongsheng)

Target: The selection of official standards by family background gradually developed to emphasize talent instead. This method would eventually progress to form the standard of public examinations, to which this mechanism of cultivating talent would be institutionalized, making examinations a notoriously rigorous process to accomplish. + Examination and degree hierarchy Degree Ranks Exam Times held Child student (Tongsheng)


Source: Make the sentence clear: He is known for using his position as a marja for political use in the Persian Constitutional Revolution (19051911), where he was one of the main clerical supporters of the revolution.

Target: He is known for using his position as a marja for a poignant political leadership in the Persian Constitutional Revolution (19051911), where he was one of the main clerical supporters of the revolution.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Consisting of multiple layers of haze, its atmosphere is composed mainly of nitrogen (N2) with trace amount of methane (CH4) and carbon monoxide (CO).

Target: Containing multiple layers of haze, its atmosphere is composed mainly of nitrogen (N2) with trace amount of methane (CH4) and carbon monoxide (CO).


Source: Clarify: However, in the case of Pluto, the orbital eccentricity cycle and axial precession cycles have less influence in the climate cycles of the dwarf planet than the obliquity variation.

Target: However, in the case of Pluto, the orbital eccentricity and axial precession cycles have less influence in the climate cycles of the dwarf planet than the obliquity variation.


Source: Make this easier to read: The regions between 77 to 90 latitudes of each hemisphere are called the permanent range of the polar climate zone.

Target: The regions between 77 to 90 latitudes of each hemisphere are called the permanent polar climate zones.


Source: Make the text more understandable: However, the maximum extent of the polar zone can spans up to from 53N to 90N and from 53S to 90S with an area total of 20\% of the body.

Target: However, the maximum extent of the polar zones can span from 53N to 90N and from 53S to 90S with an area total of 20\% of the body.


Source: Clarify this sentence: In 2011, Mercado accepted an offer to complete a PhD on Criminology at the Philippine College of Criminology, with his brother Marlon Lim.

Target: In 2011, Mercado accepted an offer to complete a PhD on Criminology at the Philippine College of Criminology.


Source: Change to clearer wording: However, he still serves as a faculty member and professor in College of Science and teaches basic statistics, quantitative business analysis, management science statistics and other higher statistics subjects. He also manages several working groups and committees such as the Federasyon ng mga Alumni Associations sa PUP, Inc (FEDAAPI), Unyon ng mga guro sa PUP, etc.

Target: However, he still serves as an expert to the university, specializing in Applied Statistics.


Source: Clarify this text: Campaign against Armenia Till the summer of 34 BCE Antony waited in Alexandria till he made his attack in early September.

Target: Campaign Until the summer of 34 BCE Antony waited in Alexandria till he made his attack in early September.


Source: Clarify: Campaign against Armenia Till the summer of 34 BCE Antony waited in Alexandria till he made his attack in early September.

Target: Campaign against Armenia Till the summer of 34 BCE Antony waited in Alexandria, and he made his attack in early September.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: In 20 BCE Augustus negotiated a peace treaty between Rome and Parthia which led to Armenia becoming a buffer state between the two.

Target: In 20 BCE Augustus negotiated a peace treaty between Rome and Parthia which led to Armenia becoming a buffer state between them.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: It was a short coat with half sleeves and fur collars, opened in front similar to Jama.

Target: It was a coat with short sleeves and fur collars, opened in front similar to Jama.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Farzi was essentially fastened with a decorated piece of cloth, i.e., Katzeb around the waist area with loosely hanging ends.

Target: Farzi was a winter's garment. Mughal emperors and courtiers were wearing it over the Jama, fastened with a decorated piece of cloth, i.e., Katzeb around the waist area with loosely hanging ends.


Source: Clarify this sentence: As a crew member, it is to be noticed that a Wiper may undergo a condition known as burnout syndrome.

Target: A Wiper may undergo a condition known as burnout syndrome.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: As a crew member, it is to be noticed that a Wiper may undergo a condition known as burnout syndrome. This is where a seafarer may be overcome by increased anxiety and stress by means of poor leadership, long hours, and high-risk applications.

Target: As a crew member, it is to be noticed that a Wiper may undergo burnout syndrome and be overcome by increased anxiety and stress by means of poor leadership, long hours, and high-risk applications.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: This is where a seafarer may be overcome by increased anxiety and stress by means of poor leadership, long hours, and high-risk applications.

Target: This is where a seafarer may be overcome by increased anxiety and stress due to leadership, long hours, and high-risk applications.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The implications of work-related stress stemming from seafaring operations can be largely alleviated through clear communication of crew and leadership and occasionally moderation through a human resources department.

Target: Work-related stress stemming from seafaring operations can be largely alleviated through clear communication of crew and leadership and occasionally moderation through a human resources department.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: The implications of work-related stress stemming from seafaring operations can be largely alleviated through clear communication of crew and leadership and occasionally moderation through a human resources department.

Target: The implications of work-related stress stemming from seafaring operations can be largely alleviated through clear communication between crew and leadership and occasionally moderation through a human resources department.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: Moreover, the possibility that goryeoyang continued to influence the clothing of the Ming dynasty after the fall of the Yuan dynastyis also based on speculations and is a topic which needs to investigated further.

Target: Moreover, the possibility that goryeoyang continued to influence the Ming dynasty after the fall of the Yuan dynastyis also based on speculations and is a topic which needs to investigated further.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Moreover, the possibility that goryeoyang continued to influence the clothing of the Ming dynasty after the fall of the Yuan dynastyis also based on speculations and is a topic which needs to investigated further.

Target: Moreover, the possibility that goryeoyang continued to influence the clothing of the Ming dynasty replaced the Yuan dynasty, a topic to investigate further."


Source: Change to clearer wording: The Shanghai massacre of 12 April 1927, the April 12 Purge or the April 12 Incident as it is commonly known in China, was the violent suppression of Communist Party of China URLanizations in Shanghai by the military forces of Generalissimo Chiang Kai-shek and conservative factions in the Kuomintang (Nationalist Party, or KMT).

Target: The Shanghai massacre of 12 April 1927, the April 12 Purge or the April 12 Incident as it is commonly known in China, was the violent suppression of Communist Party of China URLanizations in Shanghai by forces supporting General Chiang Kai-shek and conservative factions in the Kuomintang (Nationalist Party, or KMT).


Source: Clarify: Following the incident, conservative KMT elements carried out a full-scale purge of Communists in all areas under their control, and even more violent suppression occurred in Guangzhou and Changsha.

Target: Following the incident, conservative KMT elements carried out a full-scale purge of Communists in all areas under their control, and violent suppression occurred in Guangzhou and Changsha.


Source: Make this sentence readable: By 15 July 1927, the Wuhan regime had also expelled the Communists in its ranks, effectively ending the KMT's four-year alliance with the Comintern and the Chinese Communist Party.

Target: By 15 July 1927, the Wuhan regime had also expelled the Communists in its ranks, effectively ending the First United Front, a working alliance of the KMT and the CPC under the tutelage of Comintern agents.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: For the remainder of 1927, the CPC launched several uprisings in an attempt to regain their previous power, marking the beginning of the Chinese Civil War.

Target: For the remainder of 1927, the CPC launched uprisings to regain power, marking the beginning of the Chinese Civil War.


Source: Make the text more understandable: With the failure of the Guangzhou Uprising however, the Communist Party was largely diminished in their influence, unable to launch another major urban offensive.

Target: With the failure of the Guangzhou Uprising however, the Communist power was largely diminished in their influence, unable to launch another major urban offensive.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: With the failure of the Guangzhou Uprising however, the Communist Party was largely diminished in their influence, unable to launch another major urban offensive.

Target: With the failure of the Guangzhou Uprising however, the Communist Party was largely diminished, unable to launch another major urban offensive.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: She was declared Servant of God by the Holy See in 2021.

Target: She was declared Servant of God in 2021.


Source: Make this sentence readable: She joined the Sisters of the Destitute movement in 1952 and took the oath of celibacy in 1956.

Target: She joined the Sisters of the Destitute in 1952 and took the oath of celibacy in 1956.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: She joined the Sisters of the Destitute movement in 1952 and took the oath of celibacy in 1956.

Target: She joined the Sisters of the Destitute movement in 1952 and took the perpetual vow of chastity in 1956.


Source: Rewrite this sentence clearly: Social career Returning to India in 1977, Thaliath joined the efforts of Varghese Payyappilly Palakkappilly, the founder of the Sisters of the Destitute movement, to found the Jivodya Hospital, which was built on a plot of land in Ashok Vihar in Delhi, bought with a gift of 1000 she had received for purchasing a car and served there in the Department of Gynecology.

Target: Social career Returning to India in 1977, she founded the Jivodya Hospital, which was built on a plot of land in Ashok Vihar in Delhi, bought with a gift of 1000 she had received for purchasing a car and served there in the Department of Gynecology.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: During her time in Delhi, she was involved in several social activities, focusing on helping the destitute people and founded two centres, one to house the destitute women in Vikaspuri and the other, a home for the handicapped children in Ghaziabad.

Target: During her time in Delhi, she was involved in several social activities, focusing on helping the destitute people and founded two centres, one to house the poor women in Vikaspuri and the other, a home for the handicapped children in Ghaziabad.


Source: Change to clearer wording: Canonization Thaliath, who was popularly known as Doctoramma (Mother Doctor), is reported to have performed several miracles which are being considered and verified by Roman Catholic Church and her social and religious contributions were considered by the Church while deciding upon initiation of her canonization process.

Target: Cause of Canonization Thaliath is reported to have performed several miracles which are being considered and verified by Roman Catholic Church and her social and religious contributions were considered by the Church while deciding upon initiation of her canonization process.


Source: Make the sentence clearer: URLe Lilanga (1934 27 June 2005) was a Tanzanian painter and sculptor, active from the late 1970s and until the early years of the 21st century.

Target: URLe Lilanga (1934 27 June 2005) was a Tanzanian painter and sculptor, active from the late 1970s and until the early 21st century.


Source: Make the text more understandable: The main gate of the Nyumba ya Sanaa cultural centre in Dar es Salaam has decorations by Lilanga URLe Lilanga (right) and fellow painter Patrick Francis Imanjama outside Nyumba ya Sanaa In 1970, Lilanga decided to move to Dar es Salaam, where there were greater opportunities for selling sculptures and practising contemporary art.

Target: The main gate of the Nyumba ya Sanaa cultural centre in Dar es Salaam with sculptures by Lilanga URLe Lilanga (right) and fellow painter Patrick Francis Imanjama outside Nyumba ya Sanaa In 1970, Lilanga decided to move to Dar es Salaam, where there were greater opportunities for selling sculptures and practising contemporary art.


Source: Make the text more understandable: He worked as a night guard at the House of Art (Nyumba ya Sanaa), a centre for the development of African art and craftsmanship in Dar es Salaam.

Target: He started as a night guard at the House of Art (Nyumba ya Sanaa), a centre for the development of African art and craftsmanship in Dar es Salaam.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Lilanga welcomed other artists like Robino Ntila, Augustino Malaba and Patrick Francis Imanjama to join Nyumba ya Sanaa.

Target: Lilanga welcomed other artists like Robino Ntila, Augustino Malaba and Patrick Francis Imanjama.


Source: Use clearer wording: In 1977, he made his first journey outside Africa, travelling to New York, where he had a show at the Maryknoll Sisters Ossining Center.

Target: In 1977, he made his first journey outside Africa, travelling to New York, where he had a show at the Maryknoll Sisters ' Ossining Center in New York State.


Source: Clarify: Artistic development & success Shortly after beginning grammar school, Lilanga had his first contact with sculpture (roots, softwood and, later, hard ebony), working in the Makonde tradition.

Target: Artistic development & success Shortly after beginning grammar school, Lilanga had his first contact with wooden sculpture, made from roots, softwood and, later, hard ebony), working in the Makonde tradition.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: A lot of URLe Lilanga's lifetime art works can be found in leading international collections like The Contemporary African Art Collection (CAAC) of Jean Pigozzi or the Hamburg Mawingu Collection HMC of German collector Peter-Andreas Kamphausen.

Target: A lot of URLe Lilanga's art works can be found in leading international collections like The Contemporary African Art Collection (CAAC) of Jean Pigozzi or the Hamburg Mawingu Collection HMC of German collector Peter-Andreas Kamphausen.


Source: Use clearer wording: Directly after the death of the artist, the HMC: URLe Lilanga Collection presented the first systematically and thematically complete catalogue of Lilanga's work.

Target: Shortly after the death of the artist, the HMC: URLe Lilanga Collection presented the first systematically and thematically complete catalogue of Lilanga's work.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: 19 October 1897 14 April 1994) was a URLanic chemist specialising in natural products, and a professor of the chemistry at the University of Karachi.

Target: 19 October 1897 14 April 1994) was a URLanic chemist specialising in natural products, and a professor of chemistry at the University of Karachi.


Source: Make this sentence readable: He later also co-founded Pakistan Academy of Sciences, and after retirement from the government, he founded the Hussain Ebrahim Jamal Research Institute of Chemistry.

Target: He later co-founded Pakistan Academy of Sciences, and after retirement from the government, he founded the Hussain Ebrahim Jamal Research Institute of Chemistry.


Source: Clarify: As the founder director of H.E.J. Research Institute of Chemistry, he revolutionised the research on pharmacology of various domestic plants found in South Asia to extract novel chemical substances of medicinal importance.

Target: As the founder director of H.E.J. Research Institute of Chemistry, he revolutionised research of the pharmacology of various domestic plants found in South Asia to extract novel chemical substances of medicinal importance.


Source: Make the text more understandable: In addition to his scientific talents, Siddiqui was also an avid painter, a poet, and a great connoisseur of Western music.

Target: In addition to his scientific talents, Siddiqui was also an avid painter, poet, and a great connoisseur of Western music.


Source: Clarify the sentence: In matrilineal succession (also known as Marumakathayam), practiced in Kerala by the Nair nobility and royal families, a man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his own children receive their inheritance from their own maternal uncles.

Target: Some cultures pass honours down through the female line. A man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his own children receive their inheritance from their own maternal uncles.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: In matrilineal succession (also known as Marumakathayam), practiced in Kerala by the Nair nobility and royal families, a man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his own children receive their inheritance from their own maternal uncles.

Target: In matrilineal succession (also known as Marumakathayam), practiced in Kerala by the Nair nobility and royal families, a man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his children receive their inheritance from their own maternal uncles.


Source: Make this sentence better readable: In matrilineal succession (also known as Marumakathayam), practiced in Kerala by the Nair nobility and royal families, a man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his own children receive their inheritance from their own maternal uncles.

Target: In matrilineal succession (also known as Marumakathayam), practiced in Kerala by the Nair nobility and royal families, a man's wealth and title is inherited by his sister's children, and his own children receive their inheritance from their maternal uncles.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: In practice, when no male heir is mature enough, a female heir is usually determined "pragmatically", by proximity to the last monarch, like Boariks of the Caucasian Huns or Tamiris of Massagetes in Middle Asia.

Target: In practice, when no male heir is mature enough, a female heir is usually determined "pragmatically", by proximity to the last monarch, like Boariks of the Caucasian Huns or Tamiris of Massagetes in Middle Asia were selected.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Ziwa, or Ziwa ruinsformerly Van Niekerk ruins after Major Pompey Van Niekerk who was second in command of the Afrikaner Corps is the remains of a vast late Iron Age agricultural settlement that has been dated to the 15th century.

Target: Ziwa, or Ziwa ruinsformerly Van Niekerk ruins after Major Pompey Van Niekerk who was second in command of the Afrikaner Corps is the remains of a vast late Iron Age agricultural settlement dated to the 15th century.


Source: Improve this sentence for readability: Archaeological investigations have also engendered important aspects of pottery and rock art.

Target: Archaeological investigations have also uncovered important aspects of pottery and rock art.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: A refined or complete Bouguer reduction removes the effects of terrain precisely.

Target: A refined or complete Bouguer reduction removes the effects of terrain more precisely.


Source: Clarify this sentence: The difference between the two, the differential gravitational effect of the unevenness of the terrain, is called the terrain effect. It is always negative.

Target: The difference between the two, the differential gravitational effect of the unevenness of the terrain; it is always negative.


Source: Clarify this sentence: Today, approximately 100 Jews who are refugees from Russia are said to reside in Malaysia.

Target: Today, approximately 100 Jewish refugees from Russia are said to reside in Malaysia.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Today, approximately 100 Jews who are refugees from Russia are said to reside in Malaysia.

Target: Today, approximately 100 Jews who are refugees from Russia were residing in Malaysia.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: Nautilus Minerals Inc. (Nautilus) is engaged in commercially exploring the ocean floor for copper, gold, silver and zinc seafloor massive sulphide (SMS) deposits, and mineral extraction from an SMS system.

Target: Nautilus Minerals Inc. (Nautilus) was engaged in commercially exploring the ocean floor for copper, gold, silver and zinc seafloor massive sulphide (SMS) deposits, and mineral extraction from an SMS system.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Nautilus' Solwara 1 Project located at 1600 metres water depth in the Bismarck Sea, Papua New Guinea, will be the world's first deep-sea mining project, with first production expected in 2017.

Target: Nautilus' Solwara 1 Project located at 1600 metres water depth in the Bismarck Sea, Papua New Guinea, was an attempt at the world's first deep-sea mining project, with first production expected in 2017.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: They are often compiled to commemorate war dead and others who have died on military operations, but may also commemorate those buried in a cemetery.(2019, April 3).

Target: They are often compiled to commemorate war dead and others who have died on military operations.(2019, April 3).


Source: Make this sentence readable: Needing to make up a 19-second gap on Gough in the 1500 metres, Jenner qualified for the Olympic team by finishing in firstplace 22 seconds ahead of the others.

Target: Needing to make up a 19-second gap on Gough in the 1500 metres, Jenner qualified for the Olympic team by finishing first, 22 seconds ahead of the others.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Following the Olympic Trials, Jenner finished in tenth place in the decathlon at the 1972 Summer Olympics in Munich.

Target: Following the trials, Jenner was tenth in the decathlon at the 1972 Summer Olympics in Munich.


Source: Clarify this paragraph: This number however does not include that black people are over represented in crimes, which means they have a higher chance of running into police, see Black vs white homicides

Target: This number however does not factor that black people are over represented in crimes, which means they have a higher chance of running into police, see Black vs white homicides


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: Further, "immigrant" is a word that can be paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly negative connotationto those projecting social cognition towards the other.

Target: Further, "immigrant" is sometimes paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly negative connotationto those projecting social cognition towards the other.


Source: Write a clarified version of the sentence: Further, "immigrant" is a word that can be paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly negative connotationto those projecting social cognition towards the other. The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way.

Target: Further, "immigrant" is a word that can be paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly derogatory connotation. Misuse of these terms-they are often used inaccurately-to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way. "Most of the time when we hear illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.

Target: The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: The idea is distinct from measured plant perception and chemical communication.

Target: Such paranormal claims are distinct from the ability of plants to sense and respond to the environment via chemical and related stimuli.


Source: Clarify this text: Education Malhi received his primary and secondary education at G.H. (Ghulam Haider) Muslim High School, named after his father, who was encouraged by Maulana Muhammad Ali to found this school in 1918, to educate aspiring students.

Target: Education Naseer Ahmad Malhi received his primary and secondary education at G.H. (Ghulam Haider) Muslim High School, named after his father, who was encouraged by Maulana Muhammad Ali to found this school in 1918, to educate aspiring students.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: In his efforts to elevate Pakistan's fledgling profile, Malhi hosted an historic dinner for Eleanor Roosevelt, President of the United Nations General Assembly and former First Lady of the United States.

Target: In his efforts to elevate Pakistan's image, Malhi hosted an historic dinner for Eleanor Roosevelt, President of the United Nations General Assembly and former First Lady of the United States.


Source: Write a clearer version for the sentence: Death and legacy Naseer Ahmad Malhi died on 12 July 1991.

Target: Death Naseer Ahmad Malhi died on 12 July 1991.


Source: Clarification: Practitioners of oil pulling claim it is capable of improving oral and whole-body health, including a benefit in conditions such as headaches, migraines, diabetes mellitus, asthma, and acne, as well as whitening teeth.

Target: Some practitioners of oil pulling claim it is capable of improving oral and whole-body health, including a benefit in conditions such as headaches, migraines, diabetes mellitus, asthma, and acne, as well as whitening teeth.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Its promoters claim it works by pulling out toxins, which are known as ama in Ayurveda, but there is no credible evidence to support some of these claims and only limited and inconclusive evidence to support other some of these claims, primarily having to do with oral health.

Target: Its promoters claim it works by pulling out toxins, which are known as ama in Ayurveda, but there is no credible evidence to support the claims about toxins. There is only limited and inconclusive evidence to support other some of these claims, primarily having to do with oral health.


Source: Write a readable version of the sentence: Some practitioners of oil pulling claim it is capable of improving oral and whole-body health, including a benefit in conditions such as headaches, migraines, diabetes mellitus, asthma, and acne, as well as whitening teeth.

Target: Practitioners of oil pulling claim it is capable of improving oral and whole-body health, including a benefit in conditions such as headaches, migraines, diabetes mellitus, asthma, and acne, as well as whitening teeth.


Source: Make the text more understandable: With the Habsburgs, Spain was one of the greatest political and military powers in Europe and the world for much of the sixteenth and seventeenth centuries.

Target: With the Habsburgs, Spain was the foremost political and military powers in Europe and the world for much of the sixteenth and seventeenth centuries.


Source: Rewrite this sentence for clarity: The Habsburgyears also ushered in the Spanish Golden Age of arts and literature. Some of the world's most outstanding writers and painters lived in this period, including Teresa of vila, Pedro Caldern de la Barca, Miguel de Cervantes, Francisco de Quevedo, Diego Velzquez, El Greco, Domingo de Soto, Francisco Surez and Francisco de Vitoria.

Target: During the Habsburg's period, Spain ushered in the Spanish Golden Age of arts and literature. Some of the world's most outstanding writers and painters lived in this period, including Teresa of vila, Pedro Caldern de la Barca, Miguel de Cervantes, Francisco de Quevedo, Diego Velzquez, El Greco, Domingo de Soto, Francisco Surez and Francisco de Vitoria.


Source: Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The Habsburgyears also ushered in the Spanish Golden Age of arts and literature. Some of the world's most outstanding writers and painters lived in this period, including Teresa of vila, Pedro Caldern de la Barca, Miguel de Cervantes, Francisco de Quevedo, Diego Velzquez, El Greco, Domingo de Soto, Francisco Surez and Francisco de Vitoria.

Target: The Habsburgyears also ushered in the Spanish Golden Age of arts and literature. Some of the world's most outstanding writers and painters and influential intellectuals, including Teresa of vila, Pedro Caldern de la Barca, Miguel de Cervantes, Francisco de Quevedo, Diego Velzquez, El Greco, Domingo de Soto, Francisco Surez and Francisco de Vitoria.


Source: Make this sentence more readable: In 2019, he was traded to the Astros in a blockbuster deal, becoming a notable third piece in their historic starting rotation on the way to their second World Series berth in three years.

Target: In 2019, he was traded to the Astros in a blockbuster deal, becoming a notable third piece in the team's historic starting rotation on the way to their second World Series berth in three years.


Source: Use clearer wording: In 2019, he was traded to the Astros in a blockbuster deal, becoming a notable third piece in their historic starting rotation on the way to their second World Series berth in three years.

Target: In 2019, he was traded to the Astros in a blockbuster deal, becoming a notable third piece in their historic starting rotation during their quest for a second World Series berth in three years.


Source: Write a better readable version of the sentence: He is a six-time All-Star, and six-time Gold Glove Award winner.

Target: He is a six-time All-Star, six-time Gold Glove Award winner.