Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The physical act might take place, but the transaction could not count as a gift. One might say S while focusing on a sensation, but no act of naming has occurred.

Target: The physical act might take place, but the transaction could not count as a gift. Similarly, one might say S while focusing on a sensation, but no act of naming has occurred.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: I think we started to hint at it at the end of Age of Ultron, that the team will be evolving. One of the things we love in the comics is that the roster is always changing.

Target: I think we started to hint at it at the end of Age of Ultron, that the team will be evolving. And one of the things we love in the comics is that the roster is always changing.


Source: Fix sentence transition: It involves travel. It is a variant on a potluck dinner and is sometimes known as a round-robin.

Target: Involving travel, it is a variant on a potluck dinner and is sometimes known as a round-robin.


Source: Make the text more logical: It occurs in women of all ages. It is more common as women age, particularly in those who have delivered large babies or had exceedingly long pushing phases of labor.

Target: Occurring in women of all ages, it is more common as women age, particularly in those who have delivered large babies or had exceedingly long pushing phases of labor.


Source: Fix coherence: Which announcing the move, Prosecco DOC director Giancarlo Vettorello says that the IGT zone. Which lies in the plains between Friuli and Veneto, will be upgraded to DOC status.

Target: Announcing the move, Prosecco DOC director Giancarlo Vettorello said that the IGT zone, which lies in the plains between Friuli and Veneto, will be upgraded to DOC status.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The toponyms or place names Puliran is Pulilan, Bulacan and Pulilan is in Laguna de Bay. Mr. Postma is convinced in his studies that Pulilan in the LCI is the Pulilan along the Angat River, in the Bulacan, north of Manila.

Target: The toponyms or place names Puliran is Pulilan, Bulacan and Pulilan is in Laguna de Bay. However, Mr. Postma is convinced in his studies that Pulilan in the LCI is the Pulilan along the Angat River, in the Province of Bulacan, north of Manila.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The private schools in Pulilan are members of Bulacan Private Schools Association (BULPRISA). All primary and secondary schools in the municipality are under the supervision of Department of Education (DepEd) Schools Division of Bulacan.

Target: The private schools in Pulilan are members of Bulacan Private Schools Association (BULPRISA). On the other hand, all primary and secondary schools in the municipality are under the supervision of Department of Education (DepEd) Schools Division of Bulacan.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: By installing Cleonymus on the throne, the Epiriote would secure Sparta as an ally. By invading the Peloponnese, Pyrrhus would be able to subdue any cities which had remained loyal to Antigonus.

Target: By installing Cleonymus on the throne, the Epiriote would secure Sparta as an ally. Additionally, by invading the Peloponnese, Pyrrhus would be able to subdue any cities which had remained loyal to Antigonus.


Source: Make the text more logical: During the 2008 -- 2009 season the Maroons ended the bottom of the First Division and. Were relegated to the Second Division.

Target: During the 2008 -- 2009 season the Maroons ended the bottom of the First Division and hence were relegated to the Second Division.


Source: Make the text more coherent: While now classified as a municipal road, the James Bay Road was part of provincial Route 109 until 2002. Some maps may still identify it as such.

Target: While now classified as a municipal road, the James Bay Road was part of provincial Route 109 until 2002. Consequently, some maps may still identify it as such.


Source: Fix coherence: Transport Scotland received 39 expressions of interest. Concerns over the risks associated with the fixed-price contract resulted in only two consortia of large construction companies bidding.

Target: Although Transport Scotland received 39 expressions of interest, concerns over the risks associated with the fixed-price contract resulted in only two consortia of large construction companies bidding.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The addition of the fluorine atom at C-6 distinguishes the successive-generation fluoroquinolones from the first-generation quinolones. Examples are known that omit the atom while retaining antibacterial activity.

Target: The addition of the fluorine atom at C-6 distinguishes the successive-generation fluoroquinolones from the first-generation quinolones, although examples are known that omit the atom while retaining antibacterial activity.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Safety concerns exist for fluoroquinolone use during pregnancy, so they are contraindicated. No other safe alternative antibiotic exists.

Target: Safety concerns exist for fluoroquinolone use during pregnancy, so they are contraindicated unless no other safe alternative antibiotic exists.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Estadio Quisqueya Dominican Republic Estadio Quisqueya is a baseball stadium in Santo Domingo.

Target: Estadio Quisqueya, a baseball stadium in Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic


Source: Fix coherence: The government legislation that defines the R320 provides the following official description: The government legislation that defines the R320 is the Roads Act 1993 (Classification of Regional Roads) Order 2012 (Statutory Instrument 54 of 2012).

Target: The government legislation that defines the R320, the Roads Act 1993 (Classification of Regional Roads) Order 2012 (Statutory Instrument 54 of 2012), provides the following official description :


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This information is provided. Companies that wish to use the RC-5 protocol can use it properly.

Target: This information is provided so that companies that wish to use the RC-5 protocol can use it properly.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Eberling was later found guilty in the death of Ethel M. Durkin in 1954. Ethel M. Durkin is a Cleveland area widow ; he also linked himself to the Marilyn Sheppard murder in Bay Village.

Target: Eberling was later found guilty in the death of Ethel M. Durkin, a Cleveland area widow ; he also linked himself to the Marilyn Sheppard murder in Bay Village, in 1954.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: By the 1990s. Until he was elected as a Member of Parliament, he taught at Camosun College, in criminal justice, political science, and Pacific Rim studies.

Target: By the 1990s, and until he was elected as a Member of Parliament, he taught at Camosun College, in criminal justice, political science, and Pacific Rim studies.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Randy soon joined Peter's circle of college friends. Randy was rarely drawn into Peter's activities at E.S.U. and elsewhere in New York City.

Target: Randy soon joined Peter's circle of college friends, although he was rarely drawn into Spider-Man's activities at E.S.U. and elsewhere in New York City.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: When Mandy received a job offer in California, the younger Robertson couple relocated to the West Coast. Various factors strained their marriage, and Randy returned to New York alone following their divorce.

Target: When Mandy received a job offer in California, the younger Robertson couple relocated to the West Coast, but various factors strained their marriage, and Randy returned to New York alone following their divorce.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The Sussex rapes each had a headquarters in the developed south where the lord's hall, court, demesne lands, principal church and peasant holdings were located,. To the north there were smaller dependent settlements in the marsh.

Target: The Sussex rapes each had a headquarters in the developed south where the lord's hall, court, demesne lands, principal church and peasant holdings were located, whereas to the north there were smaller dependent settlements in the marsh.


Source: Make the text more logical: The implementation of RapidRide on the corridor. Ridership has grown 30 percent and the B Line served an average of 6,600 riders on weekdays in spring 2015.

Target: Since the implementation of RapidRide on the corridor, ridership has grown 30 percent and the B Line served an average of 6,600 riders on weekdays in spring 2015.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Thai and foreign chronicles state that Ratsadathirat and Chairachathirat were relatives. None of these documents gives enough information that makes clear the relationship between the two.

Target: Thai and foreign chronicles state that Ratsadathirat and Chairachathirat were relatives. But none of these documents gives enough information that makes clear the relationship between the two.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Rave music is usually presented in a DJ mix set. Live performances are not uncommon.

Target: Rave music is usually presented in a DJ mix set, although live performances are not uncommon.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: On December 1, 2014, Priore became head coach of Penn after 28 seasons as an assistant in the program. Prior to the announcement, Priore had spent 16 years as defensive coordinator for the Penn.

Target: On December 1, 2014, Priore became head coach of Penn after 28 seasons as an assistant in the program. Prior to the announcement, Priore had spent 16 years as defensive coordinator for the Quakers.


Source: Make the text more coherent: This was later supported by hundreds of independent measurements. Looking at the composition of individual species of phytoplankton grown under nitrogen or phosphorus limitation shows that this nitrogen to phosphorus ratio can vary anywhere from 6: 1 to 60: 1.

Target: This was later supported by hundreds of independent measurements. However, looking at the composition of individual species of phytoplankton grown under nitrogen or phosphorus limitation shows that this nitrogen to phosphorus ratio can vary anywhere from 6: 1 to 60: 1.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It made revolutionary changes in its evangelistic campaigns, educational programs, moral stances, and theological image. Membership declined sharply as the United Church affirmed a commitment to gay rights including marriage and ordination, and to the ordination of women.

Target: It made revolutionary changes in its evangelistic campaigns, educational programs, moral stances, and theological image. However, membership declined sharply as the United Church affirmed a commitment to gay rights including marriage and ordination, and to the ordination of women.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Burke linked morality and religion. Burke believed that the former could not exist without the latter.

Target: Linking morality and religion, Burke believed that the former could not exist without the latter.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Saracens initially planned to return home matches to Greater London at the Barnet Copthall complex in 2012. Delays meant that the move was put off until February 2013.

Target: Saracens initially planned to return home matches to Greater London at the Barnet Copthall complex in 2012, but delays meant that the move was put off until February 2013.


Source: Make the text more consistent: This introduced Protestantism into the House of Rohan. A family who would fight on Protestantism side in the Huguenot rebellions.

Target: This introduced Protestantism into the House of Rohan. A family who would fight on Protestant side in the Huguenot rebellions.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: They take a train to Mumbai, where they plan to become big gangsters. Fate has other plans: they land at Renigunta, where they come across Bunker (Bunker), who acts as mediator between contract killers and clients.

Target: They take a train to Mumbai, where they plan to become big gangsters. But fate has other plans: they land at Renigunta, where they come across Bunker (Bunker), who acts as mediator between contract killers and clients.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Memory can be treated as a resource, but memory management is usually considered separately, primarily. Memory allocation and deallocation is significantly more frequent than acquisition and release of other resources.

Target: Memory can be treated as a resource, but memory management is usually considered separately, primarily because memory allocation and deallocation is significantly more frequent than acquisition and release of other resources.


Source: Make the text clearer: It has a lower grade of metamorphism than the Saxothuringian Zone to the south. Its rocks have generally been at smaller depths and under lower temperatures.

Target: It has a lower grade of metamorphism than the Saxothuringian Zone to the south, meaning its rocks have generally been at smaller depths and under lower temperatures.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Some implementations will also not display any text inside drawing objects. When a document with drawing objects is saved as RTF in an application that does not support RTF drawing objects, these are not preserved in the RTF file.

Target: Some implementations will also not display any text inside drawing objects. Similarly, when a document with drawing objects is saved as RTF in an application that does not support RTF drawing objects, these are not preserved in the RTF file.


Source: Make the text clearer: It is easy to see why. Close listening reveals both a vacuum -- that absolute digital silence -- and an answering fullness.

Target: It is easy to see why. However, close listening reveals both a vacuum -- that absolute digital silence -- and an answering fullness.


Source: Make the text more coherent: His mother Ruth Cordray, from Dayton, Ohio, died in 1980. mother was a social Ruth Cordray, teacher and founder of Ohio's first foster grandparent program for individuals with developmental disabilities.

Target: His mother Ruth Cordray, from Dayton, Ohio, died in 1980. She was a social worker, teacher and founder of Ohio's first foster grandparent program for individuals with developmental disabilities.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Vautrollier died in 1587. In 1588, Field collaborated with Vautrollier, Vautrollier's widow and a printer in Vautrollier's own right, on The copie of a letter sent out of England to Don Bernardin Mendoza declaring the state of England.

Target: Vautrollier died in 1587. In 1588, Field collaborated with Jacqueline Vautrollier, Thomas Vautrollier's widow and a printer in her own right, on The copie of a letter sent out of England to Don Bernardin Mendoza declaring the state of England.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Richard Henry Cardwell (August 1, 1845 -- March 19, 1931) was an American politician and jurist. Richard Henry Cardwell was politician of the Virginia House of Delegates 1887 -- 1895, and a justice of the state Supreme Court of Appeals 1895 -- 1916.

Target: Richard Henry Cardwell (August 1, 1845 -- March 19, 1931) was an American politician and jurist. He was Speaker of the Virginia House of Delegates 1887 -- 1895, and a justice of the state Supreme Court of Appeals 1895 -- 1916.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Richard Alexander Waddell (born 4 February 1981 in Falkirk) is a Scottish former footballer who played for several teams. Richard Alexander Waddell is currently a footballer at Rangers FC.

Target: Richard Alexander Waddell (born 4 February 1981 in Falkirk) is a Scottish former footballer who played for several teams. He is currently a coach at Rangers FC.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Travelers started as early as the 1830s. Travelers used the place where this road forded the creek as a campground, and the community grew from there.

Target: Starting as early as the 1830s, travelers used the place where this road forded the creek as a campground, and the community grew from there.


Source: Make the text more logical: A rikishi's rank is determined solely by his number of wins during an official tournament. In many other Eastern martial arts, competitors can display their skill by performing standard routines, called kata or forms, to receive recognition.

Target: A rikishi's rank is determined solely by his number of wins during an official tournament. On the other hand, in many other Eastern martial arts, competitors can display their skill by performing standard routines, called kata or forms, to receive recognition.


Source: Make the text clearer: Polymerzation is possible only when (M) > (M). At or above the so-called ceiling temperature (T), at which (M) = (M), formation of the high polymer does not occur.

Target: Polymerzation is possible only when (M) > (M). Eventually, at or above the so-called ceiling temperature (T), at which (M) = (M), formation of the high polymer does not occur.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ring lasers are sometimes modified to allow only one direction of propagation by placing a device into the ring which leads to different losses for different propagation directions. This could be a Faraday rotator combined with a polarizing element.

Target: Ring lasers are sometimes modified to allow only one direction of propagation by placing a device into the ring which leads to different losses for different propagation directions. For instance, this could be a Faraday rotator combined with a polarizing element.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Unlike Final Fight, there are no weapons to pick up along the way. Players will only pick up items for points.

Target: Unlike Final Fight, there are no weapons to pick up along the way, but players will only pick up items for points.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Breach-the breaching party is liable for any uninsured loss even though breach is unrelated to the problem. If the breach is the time of delivery, and the goods show up broken, then the breaching rule applies risk of loss on the seller.

Target: Breach-the breaching party is liable for any uninsured loss even though breach is unrelated to the problem. Hence, if the breach is the time of delivery, and the goods show up broken, then the breaching rule applies risk of loss on the seller.


Source: Fix coherence: Although garrulous and self-important, he is an upright and respectable burgher of that city. burgher becomes involved with burgher's arrangements with Rob Roy and accompanies burgher to visit Rob in the Highlands.

Target: Although garrulous and self-important, he is an upright and respectable burgher of that city. He becomes involved with Frank's arrangements with Rob Roy and accompanies Frank to visit Rob in the Highlands.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: He floated some of his unburned buildings to Wedderburn from Ellensburg. He added a new hatchery, offices, a new home, many other buildings, and a horse-racing track.

Target: Floating some of his unburned buildings to Wedderburn from Ellensburg, he added a new hatchery, offices, a new home, many other buildings, and a horse-racing track.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Able to go on an archaeological tour of Anglia in September 1695. Plot was greatly suffering from urinary calculi, and succumbed to his illness on 30 April 1696.

Target: Although able to go on an archaeological tour of Anglia in September 1695, Plot was greatly suffering from urinary calculi, and succumbed to his illness on 30 April 1696.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: And Domesday Book shows that Robert's grandfather, Roger de Beaumont had owned three manors in Hasler Hundred, Creech, Steeple and Church Knowle. This is quite strong circumstantial Domesday Book of a relationship.

Target: And Domesday Book shows that Robert's grandfather, Roger de Beaumont had owned three manors in Hasler Hundred, Creech, Steeple and Church Knowle. This is quite strong circumstantial evidence of a relationship.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The recital was very successful in a city which. Traditionally is rich in culture.

Target: The recital was very successful in a city which, although traditionally is rich in culture.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Margolese foresaw that cellular wireless technology would be used for more than simply voice calls. Margolese proposed a plan to obtain a license for Canada's cellular phone rights.

Target: Foreseeing that cellular wireless technology would be used for more than simply voice calls, Margolese proposed a plan to obtain a license for Canada's cellular phone rights.


Source: Fix coherence: Bond proves his worth. Bond becomes involved in a plot to destabilise the Soviet Union and the United States, by forcing them to rid the world of their nuclear weapons.

Target: Proving his worth, Bond becomes involved in a plot to destabilise the Soviet Union and the United States, by forcing them to rid the world of their nuclear weapons.


Source: Fix coherence: Galiene soon regrets the deal, as she is unable to find a willing candidate among her men. Galiene sends Galiene's attendant, Arondele, to request a knight from Arthur at Carlisle.

Target: Galiene soon regrets the deal, as she is unable to find a willing candidate among her men. She therefore sends her attendant, Arondele, to request a knight from Arthur at Carlisle.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This was Romania's second appearance at a Winter Paralympic Games. The Romania delegation consisted of one alpine skier, Laura Valeanu, who finished fifth in the slalom and seventh in the giant slalom.

Target: This was Romania's second appearance at a Winter Paralympic Games. The Romanian delegation consisted of one alpine skier, Laura Valeanu, who finished fifth in the slalom and seventh in the giant slalom.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The region flourished under Antonius Pius who had the roads repaired. An inscription written in Greek from the village of Scraptopara evidences that the locals were complaining of the heavy taxation and the irksome duty of accommodating the Roman soldiers.

Target: The region flourished under Antonius Pius who had the roads repaired. On the other hand, an inscription written in Greek from the village of Scraptopara evidences that the locals were complaining of the heavy taxation and the irksome duty of accommodating the Roman soldiers.


Source: Make the text clearer: Hosking calls this Floating Rook Cat Variation. The rook can attack the pawn after it has been pushed forward and the bishop diagonal is already open forcing their opponent to respond to protect that pawn.

Target: Hosking calls this Floating Rook Cat Variation. Or, the rook can attack the pawn after it has been pushed forward and the bishop diagonal is already open forcing their opponent to respond to protect that pawn.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They set out for Melbourne. Further engine oil problems led to a forced landing at Bourke, New South Wales, where they made minor repairs.

Target: They set out for Melbourne, but further engine oil problems led to a forced landing at Bourke, New South Wales, where they made minor repairs.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: As of February 2011, new community features have been added and others removed. Users can no longer sort films by Fresh Ratings from Rotten Ratings, and vice versa.

Target: As of February 2011, new community features have been added and others removed. For example, users can no longer sort films by Fresh Ratings from Rotten Ratings, and vice versa.


Source: Fix sentence flow: He conceded that unification was necessary. He argued that the only way it could occur was by members of the other Society changing sides.

Target: Conceding that unification was necessary, he argued that the only way it could occur was by members of the other Society changing sides.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It had replaced a hospital ship in 1905. A hospital ship is the former HMS Hamadryad.

Target: It had replaced a hospital ship, the former HMS Hamadryad, in 1905.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It engages a range of professional and aspiring cooks that audition per region in Kenya. Royco, a spice popular in Kenya households is the mandatory ingredient for every weekly challenge.

Target: It engages a range of professional and aspiring cooks that audition per region in Kenya. Royco, a spice popular in Kenyan households is the mandatory ingredient for every weekly challenge.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Wave functions of high Rydberg states are very diffused and span diameters that approach infinity. Any isolated neutral molecule behaves like hydrogen-like atoms at the Rydberg limit.

Target: Wave functions of high Rydberg states are very diffused and span diameters that approach infinity. As a result, any isolated neutral molecule behaves like hydrogen-like atoms at the Rydberg limit.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: By 1992, men had completely replaced women in their leadership roles. Women were placed in subordinate roles: maintaining the hearth, child rearing, etc.

Target: By 1992, men had completely replaced women in their leadership roles, and women were placed in subordinate roles: maintaining the hearth, child rearing, etc.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Men may display some of these abilities and often assist in rituals. Women are the primary interlocutors between humans and spirits or gods in the Ryukyuan religion, therefore are highly respected.

Target: Although men may display some of these abilities and often assist in rituals, women are the primary interlocutors between humans and spirits or gods in the Ryukyuan religion, therefore are highly respected.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The drive unit for the X2 is designated as a multiple unit. Since the drive unit does not carry any passengers it should be considered as a locomotive.

Target: The drive unit for the X2 is designated as a multiple unit although since the drive unit does not carry any passengers it should be considered as a locomotive.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: In a European study it was found that the 2 original variations were not found in any of the 222 trios that were studied. Tests were also done on SNPs in the groups and 3 were found to have variations.

Target: In a European study it was found that the 2 original variations were not found in any of the 222 trios that were studied. However, tests were also done on SNPs in the groups and 3 were found to have variations.


Source: Fix coherence: Reverend Father Klijin, a Mill Hill Missionary Priest, started the first Form 1 Class with some 17 students in a room under his residence at the present site of the school. Father Klijin was the 1st Reverend for SJS.

Target: Reverend Father Klijin, a Mill Hill Missionary Priest, started the first Form 1 Class with some 17 students in a room under his residence at the present site of the school. He was the 1st Principal for SJS.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It urged SWANU guerrillas to join the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN) instead. The People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN) is SWAPO's armed wing.

Target: It urged SWANU guerrillas to join the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN), SWAPO's armed wing, instead.


Source: Fix coherence: Sabbath first appears as the unnamed character who brings Anji Kapoor out of a fugue state in The Slow Empire. From Sabbath's perspective Sabbath hasn't character him yet.

Target: Sabbath first appears as the unnamed character who brings Anji Kapoor out of a fugue state in The Slow Empire, although from her perspective she hasn't met him yet.


Source: Make the text coherent: The climate is dominated by marine air flow. Temperatures are milder in the winter and summer on these mountains.

Target: Since the climate is dominated by marine air flow, temperatures are milder in the winter and summer on these mountains.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In the 1850s San Francisco Bay lapped against the eastern sandstone cliff flank of San Bruno Mountain,. Today the entire shoreline is bay fill.

Target: In the 1850s San Francisco Bay lapped against the eastern sandstone cliff flank of San Bruno Mountain, whereas today the entire shoreline is bay fill.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Capwell, a man who once stole her son,. Capwell's mother Rosa Capwell her to leave him.

Target: Capwell, a man who once stole her son, and although her mother Rosa warned her to leave him.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Girls often marry by age 15,. Boys are more often in their twenties when they take their first wife.

Target: Girls often marry by age 15, whereas boys are more often in their twenties when they take their first wife.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Many women live primarily in their husband's village. Men never spend more than a few days at a time in the matrilineal (home) village of a wife.

Target: Although many women live primarily in their husband's village, men never spend more than a few days at a time in the matrilineal (home) village of a wife.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He owned And eating It-When Josh tried to grind a thirteen-stair banister. He destroyed his kneecap.

Target: Owning And Eating It-When Josh tried to grind a thirteen-stair banister, he destroyed his kneecap.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Close to 50 men deserted from the 115th battalion in the winter 1942-43. Dozens of the members of 118th battalion joined the UPA in Volhynia.

Target: Close to 50 men deserted from the 115th battalion in the winter 1942-43, while dozens of the members of 118th battalion joined the UPA in Volhynia.


Source: Make the text coherent: Charles Oman derived it from Gaelic Scuit. Someone cut-off.

Target: Charles Oman derived it from Gaelic Scuit, meaning someone cut-off.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Randall also took two tours of the South in 1884 after the election. Randall claimed the trips to be of a personal nature, they generated speculation that Randall was gathering support for another run at the Speakership in 1885.

Target: Randall also took two tours of the South in 1884 after the election. Although, he claimed the trips to be of a personal nature, they generated speculation that Randall was gathering support for another run at the Speakership in 1885.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Retrieved 12 January 2016. All these ancient customs pertaining to headhunting are no longer observed in these modern days.

Target: Retrieved 12 January 2016. Nevertheless, all these ancient customs pertaining to headhunting are no longer observed in these modern days.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Formally based in Washington, DC. Staff extend to both coast of the United States as well as advisors and fellows in Europe.

Target: Although formally based in Washington, DC, staff extend to both coast of the United States as well as advisors and fellows in Europe.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Kaira succeeds in bringing Vihaan back home. Everyone got confused seeing two Vihaans and the mothers and Vihaan's children thought of testing the two and find out who the real one was.

Target: Kaira succeeds in bringing Vihaan back home but everyone got confused seeing two Vihaans and the mothers and his children thought of testing the two and find out who the real one was.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Saxon released Unleash the Beast in 1997. The Beast was produced by Kalle Trapp and Saxon.

Target: Saxon released Unleash the Beast, which was produced by Kalle Trapp and Saxon, in 1997.


Source: Fix coherence: These throat swabs however are not indicated. Up to 25 % of properly treated individuals can continue to carry the streptococcal infection while asymptomatic.

Target: These throat swabs however are not indicated because up to 25 % of properly treated individuals can continue to carry the streptococcal infection while asymptomatic.


Source: Make the text clearer: Scutiger muliensis resembles Scutiger mammatus. Males have black spiny warts on the chest glands that are large, few and scattered, webbing between toes is poorly developed, and there are small warts around the vent and on the ventral side of the thighs and soles.

Target: Scutiger muliensis resembles Scutiger mammatus but males have black spiny warts on the chest glands that are large, few and scattered, webbing between toes is poorly developed, and there are small warts around the vent and on the ventral side of the thighs and soles.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Some regions show a sea-level rise substantially more than the global average (in many cases of more than twice the average), and others a sea level fall. Models disagree as to the likely pattern of sea level change.

Target: Some regions show a sea-level rise substantially more than the global average (in many cases of more than twice the average), and others a sea level fall. However, models disagree as to the likely pattern of sea level change.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Patients using light therapy can experience improvement during the first week. Increased results are evident when continued throughout several weeks.

Target: Patients using light therapy can experience improvement during the first week, but increased results are evident when continued throughout several weeks.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Each individual case is different, in contrast to winter SAD. People who experience spring and summer depression may be more likely to show symptoms such as insomnia, decreased appetite and weight loss, and agitation or anxiety.

Target: Although each individual case is different, in contrast to winter SAD, people who experience spring and summer depression may be more likely to show symptoms such as insomnia, decreased appetite and weight loss, and agitation or anxiety.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Suhrawardi has its terminology for the argument. He used word the lights of light in place of God or necessary being.

Target: Suhrawardi has its terminology for the argument. For instance he used word the lights of light in place of God or necessary being.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In Compression zone, the settled solids are compressed by gravity (the weight of solids), as the settled solids are compressed under the weight of overlying solids. Water is squeezed out while the space gets smaller.

Target: In Compression zone, the settled solids are compressed by gravity (the weight of solids), as the settled solids are compressed under the weight of overlying solids, and water is squeezed out while the space gets smaller.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The phenomena of the JAO stands both in the context of the Zionist idea of Jewish Statehood and the history of the Jews in the Soviet Union,. Under consideration of the changing governmental policies on the matter and on the question of national policies in general.

Target: The phenomena of the JAO stands both in the context of the Zionist idea of Jewish Statehood and the history of the Jews in the Soviet Union, hence under consideration of the changing governmental policies on the matter and on the question of national policies in general.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The local church, dedicated to the Holy Family. Technically in Barislovci.

Target: The local church, dedicated to the Holy Family, although technically in Barislovci.


Source: Fix coherence: A session also is the basic step to transmit in connectionless communication modes. Any unidirectional transmission does not define a session.

Target: A session also is the basic step to transmit in connectionless communication modes. However any unidirectional transmission does not define a session.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Longtime Took friend Mick Wayne happened to be in the studios at the time and was roped into the session on guitar. Afterwards, friend, Sanderson and Hunter formed a new Pink Fairies lineup which recorded the single Well Well Well.

Target: Longtime Took friend Mick Wayne happened to be in the studios at the time and was roped into the session on guitar. Afterwards, Wayne, Sanderson and Hunter formed a new Pink Fairies lineup which recorded the single Well Well Well.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Troy grabbed the chance. Troy stabbed Sarah in the back and felt enraged.

Target: Grabbing the chance, Troy stabbed Sarah in the back and felt enraged.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Sephardic Jews do not hold a Shalom Zachar. Jews' custom is to conduct a gathering called a Brit Yitzchak on the evening preceding the newborn boy's brit milah.

Target: Sephardic Jews do not hold a Shalom Zachar. Instead, their custom is to conduct a gathering called a Brit Yitzchak on the evening preceding the newborn boy's brit milah.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Knopfler spent seven months away from the guitar in physiotherapy. Eventually Knopfler recovered and was able to return to the studio and the stage in 2004 for Knopfler's fourth album and supporting tour.

Target: Knopfler spent seven months away from the guitar in physiotherapy, but eventually he recovered and was able to return to the studio and the stage in 2004 for his fourth album and supporting tour.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: However, some doubt that. Traditional among as food for Jewish New Year in the Diaspora.

Target: However, some doubt that, although traditional among as food for Jewish New Year in the Diaspora.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Hindu students of the college also celebrate Saraswati puja every year. Saraswati is the Saraswati of knowledge, music, arts, wisdom and learning.

Target: The Hindu students of the college also celebrate Saraswati puja every year. Devi Saraswati is the goddess of knowledge, music, arts, wisdom and learning.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In Q4 2017, it also reported a gross merchandise value (GMV) of US $1.6 billion, up 206 per cent from a year earlier. Losses in the parent group, Sea are also widening.

Target: In Q4 2017, it also reported a gross merchandise value (GMV) of US $1.6 billion, up 206 per cent from a year earlier. However, losses in the parent group, Sea are also widening.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The Shoreham Congregational Church is situated prominenty in the village center of Shoreham, at the southwest corner of School and Main Streets. Shoreham Congregational Church is a single-story Shoreham Congregational Church, with a gabled roof and stone foundation.

Target: The Shoreham Congregational Church is situated prominenty in the village center of Shoreham, at the southwest corner of School and Main Streets. It is a single-story brick building, with a gabled roof and stone foundation.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This is a marble stone sunk below the pavement. Visitors must bow their heads to read the inscription on it.

Target: This is a marble stone sunk below the pavement, so that visitors must bow their heads to read the inscription on it.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Silver Circle (law firms) United Kingdom Silver Circle (law firms) is a group of corporate law firms headquartered in London.

Target: Silver Circle (law firms), a group of corporate law firms headquartered in London, United Kingdom


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Laurie then married Lucy Struthers in 1901. Lucy Struthers is the daughter of Sir John Struthers.

Target: Laurie then married Lucy Struthers, the daughter of Sir John Struthers, in 1901.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This allows a highly realistic GA cockpit to be put together in a matter of minutes. An enthusiast is likely to extend well beyond the functional cockpit a trainee would require, adding in items to enhance the suspension of disbelief.

Target: This allows a highly realistic GA cockpit to be put together in a matter of minutes. However an enthusiast is likely to extend well beyond the functional cockpit a trainee would require, adding in items to enhance the suspension of disbelief.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: However while research will often locate a lot of information, sometimes it is a minor detail that is needed. How wide the center pedestal is, or how large it should be.

Target: However while research will often locate a lot of information, sometimes it is a minor detail that is needed. For example, how wide the center pedestal is, or how large it should be.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Females and juveniles are greyish-brown all year round. Females often have a crescent-shaped red patch on each side just behind the forelimbs.

Target: Females and juveniles are greyish-brown all year round, but females often have a crescent-shaped red patch on each side just behind the forelimbs.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Jump up ^ Singam 3 begins with song composition -- Times of India. Times of India (18 December 2015).

Target: Jump up ^ Singam 3 begins with song composition -- Times of India. Timesofindia.indiatimes.com (18 December 2015).


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Pre-race rides were organized via the SSWC06 website and HappyMTB forums. Local riders would have the chance to show guests the wide variety of trails available.

Target: Pre-race rides were organized via the SSWC06 website and HappyMTB forums, so that local riders would have the chance to show guests the wide variety of trails available.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He causes another giant to die by his own carving knife. Having befriended King Arthur's son, Jack returns to court with him and is made a knight of the Round Table.

Target: He causes another giant to die by his own carving knife. Then, having befriended King Arthur's son, Jack returns to court with him and is made a knight of the Round Table.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: There are two versions of this romance. Neither is directly related to the other, which suggests the former existence of a lost, perhaps 14th-century manuscript version.

Target: There are two versions of this romance and neither is directly related to the other, which suggests the former existence of a lost, perhaps 14th-century manuscript version.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Eight schools in Kansas will be playing six-man in 2016, all of which played eight-man until recently. Six-man is not sanctioned by the Kansas State High School Activities Association.

Target: Eight schools in Kansas will be playing six-man in 2016, all of which played eight-man until recently. However, six-man is not sanctioned by the Kansas State High School Activities Association.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Diplopia is typically experienced by adults with VI nerve palsies. Children with the condition may not experience diplopia due to suppression.

Target: Diplopia is typically experienced by adults with VI nerve palsies, but children with the condition may not experience diplopia due to suppression.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Crosby and environmental inspector Gordon Perry try to find the origin of the waste. Certain people try to prevent them for doing so due to Drake's evil deeds, which involves some hitmen.

Target: Crosby and environmental inspector Gordon Perry try to find the origin of the waste, but certain people try to prevent them for doing so due to Drake's evil deeds, which involves some hitmen.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Alex is upset. Alex's grandmother Alex him to dance with her and Alex, Liv Alex's his grandmother dance.

Target: Alex is upset, but his grandmother convinces him to dance with her and Alex, Liv and his grandmother dance.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Sexes are similar. Young birds are duller and browner with a yellowish chin.

Target: Sexes are similar, but young birds are duller and browner with a yellowish chin.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Following its appearance in Withnail and I, North West Water had planned to renovate the Hall and convert it into a holiday cottage and workshop. Planning permission was refused on the grounds that it would alter the character of the valley.

Target: Following its appearance in Withnail and I, North West Water had planned to renovate the Hall and convert it into a holiday cottage and workshop. However, planning permission was refused on the grounds that it would alter the character of the valley.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Slim Williams was a strong proponent of the Alaska Highway before WWII. Officials decided that there was no need for a highway at that time.

Target: Slim Williams was a strong proponent of the Alaska Highway before WWII. However, officials decided that there was no need for a highway at that time.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The beetle is most often found in weak or failing hives and rarely affects strong hives. Differences in the housecleaning traits of the bees found in South Africa and the U.S. may mean very different responses to the beetles.

Target: The beetle is most often found in weak or failing hives and rarely affects strong hives. However, differences in the housecleaning traits of the bees found in South Africa and the U.S. may mean very different responses to the beetles.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Its skull was extremely large, up to 155 cm long. Estimates for the overall length vary from 7 to 12 metres.

Target: Its skull was extremely large, up to 155 cm long, although estimates for the overall length vary from 7 to 12 metres.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Some studies seem to suggest that Smilosuchus is congeneric with Leptosuchus, as the enlarged crest could have been independently developed in Leptosuchus. Newer studies support the idea that Smilosuchus is distinct from the type species of Leptosuchus, Leptosuchus.

Target: Some studies seem to suggest that Smilosuchus is congeneric with Leptosuchus, as the enlarged crest could have been independently developed in Leptosuchus. However, newer studies support the idea that Smilosuchus is distinct from the type species of Leptosuchus, Leptosuchus crosbiensis.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Health care professionals have tended to avoid the term because of its pejorative nature. If Health care professionals use it, Health care professionals do not include publicly funded private medical schemes such as Medicaid.

Target: Health care professionals have tended to avoid the term because of its pejorative nature, but if they use it, they do not include publicly funded private medical schemes such as Medicaid.


Source: Fix coherence: As his father taught at their home, Soeman began learning to read the Quran at a young age. From the traders who visited Wahid, Soeman also heard stories of the crimes committed in major cities such as Singapore.

Target: As his father taught at their home, Soeman began learning to read the Quran at a young age. Meanwhile, from the traders who visited Wahid, he also heard stories of the crimes committed in major cities such as Singapore.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Ikeda admitted that the organization had been intolerant and overly sensitive in the past. Ikeda called for moderating conversion activities, openness to other religious practices, and a democratization of the organization.

Target: Admitting that the organization had been intolerant and overly sensitive in the past, Ikeda called for moderating conversion activities, openness to other religious practices, and a democratization of the organization.


Source: Fix coherence errors: 2011, with the 30 % federal tax credit. Prices have decreased to the point that they provide an attractive return on investment.

Target: Since 2011, with the 30 % federal tax credit, prices have decreased to the point that they provide an attractive return on investment.


Source: Make the text more consistent: She seems to be unaware of the other humans she meets. She simply chooses to ignore humans.

Target: She seems to be unaware of the other humans she meets, or she simply chooses to ignore them.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: As a truce, in March 2009, Somalia's coalition government announced that it would re-implement shari'a as the nation's official judicial system. Conflict continued in the southern and central parts of the country.

Target: As a truce, in March 2009, Somalia's coalition government announced that it would re-implement shari'a as the nation's official judicial system. However, conflict continued in the southern and central parts of the country.


Source: Make the text more logical: Andy reveals himself as the killer. Andy explains that he had hoped for a bright future with Cassidy, but because she was involved with Megan's death, he feared that she would be found out, so he decided to kill everyone who knew about it.

Target: Revealing himself as the killer, Andy explains that he had hoped for a bright future with Cassidy, but because she was involved with Megan's death, he feared that she would be found out, so he decided to kill everyone who knew about it.


Source: Make the text more logical: Set in Anytown, USA. Producers of the film wanted to take advantage of Pennsylvania state tax credits (much like the 2009 remake of My Bloody Valentine) and the strength of local film crews.

Target: Although set in Anytown, USA, producers of the film wanted to take advantage of Pennsylvania state tax credits (much like the 2009 remake of My Bloody Valentine) and the strength of local film crews.


Source: Fix coherence errors: As of circa 1990 there were higher proportions of Gujaratis and Punjabis. Numbers of Maharashtrians were fewer.

Target: As of circa 1990 there were higher proportions of Gujaratis and Punjabis, while numbers of Maharashtrians were fewer.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Initially, Tillman privately supported Ellerbe. Tillman was a Tillman.

Target: Initially, Tillman privately supported Ellerbe because he was a farmer.


Source: Make the text more logical: Turnout increased for this election over the previous election. Turnout was a contested Turnout.

Target: Turnout increased for this election over the previous election because it was a contested election.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The female and her young will live in family groups. Males are usually solitary.

Target: Although the female and her young will live in family groups, males are usually solitary.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: As of October 2012, the McGregor facility consisted of seven test stands operated 18 hours a day, six days a week, and was building more test stands. Production was ramping up and the company had a large manifest in the next several years.

Target: As of October 2012, the McGregor facility consisted of seven test stands operated 18 hours a day, six days a week, and was building more test stands because production was ramping up and the company had a large manifest in the next several years.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Jump up ^ Goodall and Gasow 1984. Goodall and Gasow is the New Complete English Springer Spaniel.

Target: Jump up ^ Goodall and Gasow, The New Complete English Springer Spaniel, 1984.


Source: Fix coherence: Jump up ^ Hancock 1990. Hancock is the Heritage of the Dog.

Target: Jump up ^ Hancock, The Heritage of the Dog, 1990.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: They felt sure that these men would be ready to help Koxinga when he came. Everything was made ready for another attack upon the Chinese in Luzon.

Target: They felt sure that these men would be ready to help Koxinga when he came, so everything was made ready for another attack upon the Chinese in Luzon.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The second wave began and the flu quickly spread around the world again. During modern pandemics health officials pay attention when the virus reaches places with social upheaval (looking for deadlier strains of the virus).

Target: The second wave began and the flu quickly spread around the world again. Consequently, during modern pandemics health officials pay attention when the virus reaches places with social upheaval (looking for deadlier strains of the virus).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Section 10706 (a) of the California Election Code says: The California Election Code governs special elections.

Target: Section 10706 (a) of the California Election Code, which governs special elections, says :


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Speechwriters must also be able to accept anonymity. With few exceptions.

Target: Speechwriters must also be able to accept anonymity, because with few exceptions.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Captain Spencer's bravery and the heroics of his men were lauded by General Harrison. Spencer is the Spencer of counties in Indiana and Kentucky as well as the town of Spencer, Indiana, the seat of Owen County.

Target: Captain Spencer's bravery and the heroics of his men were lauded by General Harrison. He is the namesake of counties in Indiana and Kentucky as well as the town of Spencer, Indiana, the seat of Owen County.


Source: Make the text clearer: It arises near Anns Butte. It flows generally northeast into the Deschutes at Sunriver, about 190 miles (310 km) from the larger stream's confluence with the Columbia River.

Target: Arising near Anns Butte, it flows generally northeast into the Deschutes at Sunriver, about 190 miles (310 km) from the larger stream's confluence with the Columbia River.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: St. Patrick's House, named after Saint Patrick, is on the ground floor of the same building that houses St. Steven's. Saint Patrick was a 5th-century Romano-British Christian Saint Patrick and bishop in Ireland.

Target: St. Patrick's House, named after Saint Patrick, is on the ground floor of the same building that houses St. Steven's. Saint Patrick was a 5th-century Romano-British Christian missionary and bishop in Ireland.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On top of that the team qualified for the BUSA Trophy for the first time. The BUSA Trophy is a British University knock-out competition.

Target: On top of that the team qualified for the BUSA Trophy, a British University knock-out competition, for the first time.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The divisions are directly linked to the UK and national headquarters. Members can transfer to another division or county as they would be able to do at home.

Target: The divisions are directly linked to the UK and national headquarters so that members can transfer to another division or county as they would be able to do at home.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In the north aisle is a monument to Sir Henry Kervil who died in 1624. It consists of an alabaster tomb chest on which lie the recumbent effigies of Sir Sir and Henry Kervil's wife.

Target: In the north aisle is a monument to Sir Henry Kervil who died in 1624. It consists of an alabaster tomb chest on which lie the recumbent effigies of Sir Henry and his wife.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Since the attacker needs to determine where executable code that can be used resides, either an executable payload is provided (with an executable stack). One is constructed using code reuse such as in ret2libc or return-oriented programming (ROP).

Target: Since the attacker needs to determine where executable code that can be used resides, either an executable payload is provided (with an executable stack) or one is constructed using code reuse such as in ret2libc or return-oriented programming (ROP).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: For example, there is widespread poverty in rural areas of India, where medical care tends to be very basic or unavailable. Cities boast of world class medical establishments.

Target: For example, there is widespread poverty in rural areas of India, where medical care tends to be very basic or unavailable, while cities boast of world class medical establishments.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The central axle was a complicated forging as a four-throw internal crank axle. Following traditional Stephenson practice.

Target: The central axle was a complicated forging as a four-throw internal crank axle, although following traditional Stephenson practice.


Source: Make the text more logical: Hader, on late-night TV interviews, said that this happens with such frequency. Changes are often made to the script up until the live show.

Target: Hader, on late-night TV interviews, said that this happens with such frequency because changes are often made to the script up until the live show.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Whether Davies is open to foreign investment remains unclear. Sources close to the club suggest he has favoured home-based bids such as the current front-runner.

Target: Whether Davies is open to foreign investment remains unclear, although sources close to the club suggest he has favoured home-based bids such as the current front-runner.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Two days later they had an intense row ; she left him. They did not meet again till a week later in London.

Target: two days later they had an intense row ; she left him and they did not meet again till a week later in London.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: By training, Topal is a road engineer. Topal was an road engineer of the Communist Party of Moldova.

Target: By training, Topal is a road engineer. He was an activist of the Communist Party of Moldova.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Crane concentrated on his writing. Crane began to experiment with tone and style while trying out different subjects.

Target: Concentrating on his writing, Crane began to experiment with tone and style while trying out different subjects.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Amy Leslie, a reporter from Chicago and a former lover, sued him for $550. The New York Times reported that reporter gave him $800 in November 1896 but that he'd repaid only a quarter of the sum.

Target: Amy Leslie, a reporter from Chicago and a former lover, sued him for $550. The New York Times reported that Leslie gave him $800 in November 1896 but that he'd repaid only a quarter of the sum.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Most stories about his life tended toward the romantic. Rumors about his alleged drug use and alcoholism persisted long after his death.

Target: Although most stories about his life tended toward the romantic, rumors about his alleged drug use and alcoholism persisted long after his death.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Following the Anglo-Irish Treaty the barracks was handed over to the forces of the Irish Free State in 1922 and renamed after James Stephens in 1969. James Stephens is the Irish Republican leader.

Target: Following the Anglo-Irish Treaty the barracks was handed over to the forces of the Irish Free State in 1922 and renamed after James Stephens, the Irish Republican leader, in 1969.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Bee Gees are standing under and walking around the road bridges by the city at night while two lovers a woman and a man find their way to love each other. There is the sunrise in the end of this video.

Target: The Bee Gees are standing under and walking around the road bridges by the city at night while two lovers a woman and a man find their way to love each other. And there is the sunrise in the end of this video.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It had been thought that the Randolphfield standing stones were more than 3000 years old. Recent radiocarbon dating suggests they may date from the time of Bruce.

Target: It had been thought that the Randolphfield standing stones were more than 3000 years old but recent radiocarbon dating suggests they may date from the time of Bruce.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ostensibly retired from racing since 1962. Moss did make a number of one-off appearances in professional motorsport events in the following two decades.

Target: Although ostensibly retired from racing since 1962, Moss did make a number of one-off appearances in professional motorsport events in the following two decades.


Source: Fix coherence: Known for many things. King still preferred to be recognized as a columnist for The Spokesman-Review.

Target: Although known for many things, King still preferred to be recognized as a columnist for The Spokesman-Review.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Humans appear to have free will. Personal actions participate in the determined chain of events independently of external conditions.

Target: Humans appear to have free will because personal actions participate in the determined chain of events independently of external conditions.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: They attack his base. They find that the Tickler is holding VonFockingcock, and planning to use the Orgazmarator to cure his sexual dysfunction and plunge the city into climax and chaos.

Target: Attacking his base, they find that the Tickler is holding VonFockingcock, and planning to use the Orgazmarator to cure his sexual dysfunction and plunge the city into climax and chaos.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The Strathaird Estate was bought by musician Ian Anderson in 1978. Musician Ian Anderson is the frontman for Jethro Tull.

Target: The Strathaird Estate was bought by musician Ian Anderson, the frontman for Jethro Tull, in 1978.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It connects the neighborhood south of Lake Union with the transit core of downtown Seattle. It operates every 15 minutes and is served by three low-floor streetcars of the same type as some of those in Portland.

Target: Connecting the neighborhood south of Lake Union with the transit core of downtown Seattle, it operates every 15 minutes and is served by three low-floor streetcars of the same type as some of those in Portland.


Source: Make the text clearer: It sells exclusive airfare deals for verified members from its airline partners ; such airfares are not guaranteed to be cheaper than the retail airfares (what is generally available in the market). Students can save up to 40 % off published fares.

Target: It sells exclusive airfare deals for verified members from its airline partners ; such airfares are not guaranteed to be cheaper than the retail airfares (what is generally available in the market) but students can save up to 40 % off published fares.


Source: Make the text clearer: White's part of the raid is led by Commander Peter Morris, a family friend. After dropping off family friend's unit first, one of the Tiger Shark's engines begins overheating, endangering the timing of the second landing.

Target: White's part of the raid is led by Commander Peter Morris, a family friend. However, after dropping off Morris's unit first, one of the Tiger Shark's engines begins overheating, endangering the timing of the second landing.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: She has indicated that she is overwhelmed looking after them, and has been critical of her daughter in her public statements in 2009. She said that her daughter does not contribute toward housing or food costs.

Target: She has indicated that she is overwhelmed looking after them, and has been critical of her daughter in her public statements in 2009. For example, she said that her daughter does not contribute toward housing or food costs.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: After the AFC Championship Game, ESPN reported an NFL investigation discovered 11 of 12 footballs the Patriots had used during it were under-inflated. None of the balls used by the Colts had been.

Target: After the AFC Championship Game, ESPN reported an NFL investigation discovered 11 of 12 footballs the Patriots had used during it were under-inflated, while none of the balls used by the Colts had been.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Pairs may nest in a loose colonial system of as many as 6 pairs. Females are in the neighborhood at this time.

Target: Pairs may nest in a loose colonial system of as many as 6 pairs, so females are in the neighborhood at this time.


Source: Make the text coherent: The condensate wave function allows designing and measuring macroscopic quantum effects. Only a discrete number of magnetic flux quanta penetrates a superconducting loop, similarly to the discrete atomic energy levels in the Bohr model.

Target: The condensate wave function allows designing and measuring macroscopic quantum effects. For example, only a discrete number of magnetic flux quanta penetrates a superconducting loop, similarly to the discrete atomic energy levels in the Bohr model.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It received mixed reviews. To keep the audience from thinking it largely got bad reviews, Mermaid Records decided to cite all reviews, good and bad.

Target: It received mixed reviews, but to keep the audience from thinking it largely got bad reviews, Mermaid Records decided to cite all reviews, good and bad.


Source: Make the text clearer: Like many prototypes of mass-production designs, the first Type 300 had to be largely hand-built. Its general structure followed that of the proposed production design.

Target: Like many prototypes of mass-production designs, the first Type 300 had to be largely hand-built and although its general structure followed that of the proposed production design.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Rich tracked Alex down. Seeing her misery, Alex turned Henry and sent him to be her boyfriend to make her happy and then kill her new family of Jody and Claire.

Target: Rich tracked Alex down, but seeing her misery, he turned Henry and sent him to be her boyfriend to make her happy and then kill her new family of Jody and Claire.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Crowley confronts Jenna. Crowley realizes that she is now soulless, Amara having consumed her soul.

Target: Confronting Jenna, Crowley realizes that she is now soulless, Amara having consumed her soul.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Turpin complimented the section on hire-purchase agreements. Noting some flaws in draftsmanship.

Target: Turpin complimented the section on hire-purchase agreements, although noting some flaws in draftsmanship.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Meanwhile, Tambaqui enjoyed a breakfast of manioc flour and set out on a fishing expedition, only to rained on by a heavy rainstorm. With their faulty shelter, Jaburu struggled to maintain their fire in the rainstorm.

Target: Meanwhile, Tambaqui enjoyed a breakfast of manioc flour and set out on a fishing expedition, only to rained on by a heavy rainstorm. Meanwhile, with their faulty shelter, Jaburu struggled to maintain their fire in the rainstorm.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Survivor: The Amazon is the sixth season of the American CBS competitive reality television series Survivor. The season was filmed from November 11, 2002 through December 15, 2002 in the season and premiered on February 13, 2003.

Target: Survivor: The Amazon is the sixth season of the American CBS competitive reality television series Survivor. The season was filmed from November 11, 2002 through December 15, 2002 in the Amazon and premiered on February 13, 2003.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: She taught in the Philadelphia public schools beginning when she was 17 years of age. She did not enjoy being an educator, she led classrooms into the 1860s.

Target: She taught in the Philadelphia public schools beginning when she was 17 years of age. Although, she did not enjoy being an educator, she led classrooms into the 1860s.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Sustainable Wildlife Enterprise system enables farmers to realise the financial value of native wildlife such as the kangaroo and encourages them to manage their land that supports the source of the income without lowering total farm profitability --. Contributing to habitat and biodiversity conservation.

Target: The Sustainable Wildlife Enterprise system enables farmers to realise the financial value of native wildlife such as the kangaroo and encourages them to manage their land that supports the source of the income without lowering total farm profitability -- hence contributing to habitat and biodiversity conservation.


Source: Make the text more coherent: While attending classes at the University of California-Berkeley extension program, Cvetko met film professor Larry Clark. film professor became Cvetko's mentor and gave Cvetko's access to her first production set.

Target: While attending classes at the University of California-Berkeley extension program, Cvetko met film professor Larry Clark. Clark became Cvetko's mentor and gave her access to her first production set.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Again, thanks to Hasbro's lack of characterization, it is not known how this upgrade has affected Swerve. Even why he became an Alternator in the storyline.

Target: Again, thanks to Hasbro's lack of characterization, it is not known how this upgrade has affected Swerve or even why he became an Alternator in the storyline.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Brower making used of his Bell license. Brower offered lease of the instruments for US $40 per year, plus another US $3 for magnetos.

Target: Making use of his Bell license, Brower offered lease of the instruments for US $40 per year, plus another US $3 for magnetos.


Source: Make the text more coherent: These criteria exist primarily for the purpose of more objectively classifying critically ill patients. Future clinical studies may be more rigorous and more easily reproducible.

Target: These criteria exist primarily for the purpose of more objectively classifying critically ill patients so that future clinical studies may be more rigorous and more easily reproducible.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Esme realizes that Tabitha is a witch. As Tabitha prepares to leave, Vincent Crane and Viki try to poison everyone in town.

Target: Esme realizes that Tabitha is a witch. Eventually, as Tabitha prepares to leave, Vincent Crane and Viki try to poison everyone in town.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Frequently referred to as a NATO manual. This is incorrect.

Target: Although frequently referred to as a NATO manual, this is incorrect.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They are descended from John Sevier and his wife. John Sevier is a soldier in the American Revolution.

Target: They are descended from John Sevier, a soldier in the American Revolution, and his wife.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A one-year truce had been negotiated in 574, interrupting the ongoing war (since 572) between Persia and the East Roman (Byzantine) Empire. Negotiations were taking place to conclude an even longer truce.

Target: A one-year truce had been negotiated in 574, interrupting the ongoing war (since 572) between Persia and the East Roman (Byzantine) Empire, while negotiations were taking place to conclude an even longer truce.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This means that their chances of dying increase the longer they are exposed to the extreme environments,. True extremophiles thrive in a physically or geochemically extreme environment that would harm most other organisms.

Target: This means that their chances of dying increase the longer they are exposed to the extreme environments, whereas true extremophiles thrive in a physically or geochemically extreme environment that would harm most other organisms.


Source: Make the text more coherent: As Jordan's most popular cafe and casual dining chain, Tche Tche is the first Jordanian cafe to successfully expand regionally. Today Tche Tche has branches in Dubai, Abu Dhabi, Kuwait, Egypt and Oman, in addition to the thirteen existing outlets in Jordanian.

Target: As Jordan's most popular cafe and casual dining chain, Tche Tche is the first Jordanian cafe to successfully expand regionally. Today Tche Tche has branches in Dubai, Abu Dhabi, Kuwait, Egypt and Oman, in addition to the thirteen existing outlets in Jordan.


Source: Make the text more logical: In December 2007 another carrier named Eventis entered the market. Three previous carriers have already saturated carrier so much that on February 5, 2010 Eventis declared bankruptcy and shut down Eventis' network.

Target: In December 2007 another carrier named Eventis entered the market but three previous carriers have already saturated it so much that on February 5, 2010 Eventis declared bankruptcy and shut down its network.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: BBC One will join BBC News in a multichannel simulcast and BBC Two shows a continuous loop of forthcoming programme previews and trailers. Prior to the completion of Digital switchover BBC Two had filled BBC Two's overnight downtime with Pages from Ceefax.

Target: BBC One will join BBC News in a multichannel simulcast and BBC Two shows a continuous loop of forthcoming programme previews and trailers, although prior to the completion of Digital switchover BBC Two had filled its overnight downtime with Pages from Ceefax.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: It named the horse Telly's Pop. It won several races in 1975 including the Norfolk Stakes and Del Mar Futurity.

Target: Naming the horse Telly's Pop, it won several races in 1975 including the Norfolk Stakes and Del Mar Futurity.


Source: Make the text coherent: State Route 20 (SR 20) is a 143.04-mile (230.20 km) long west -- east primary state route beginning in Dyersburg and ending near Summertown. State Route 20 is unsigned and overlapped with US 412, except a short section between Hohenwald and Summertown.

Target: State Route 20 (SR 20) is a 143.04-mile (230.20 km) long west -- east primary state route beginning in Dyersburg and ending near Summertown. SR 20 is unsigned and overlapped with US 412, except a short section between Hohenwald and Summertown.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: For one THz, that means duration in the range of one picosecond (ps). One can use THz fields to monitor and control ultrafast processes in semiconductors or to produce ultrafast switching in semiconductor components.

Target: For one THz, that means duration in the range of one picosecond (ps). Consequently, one can use THz fields to monitor and control ultrafast processes in semiconductors or to produce ultrafast switching in semiconductor components.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Pizarro de Angulo was a member of Cartagena's Lions Club chapter. Pizarro de Angulo's participation in that club helped her gain popularity Cartagena Cartagena's residents.

Target: Pizarro de Angulo was a member of Cartagena's Lions Club chapter. Her participation in that club helped her gain popularity among Cartagena's residents.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: What they do not realize is that the monsters have to return in 24 hours. Three replacements are sent.

Target: What they do not realize is that the monsters have to return in 24 hours unless three replacements are sent.


Source: Fix coherence errors: William Penn was commemorated with a 3-cent stamp issued October 24, 1932 on the 250th anniversary of Penn's 1682 landing in the New World. William Penn founded of the colony of Penn.

Target: William Penn was commemorated with a 3-cent stamp issued October 24, 1932 on the 250th anniversary of Penn's 1682 landing in the New World. He founded of the colony of Pennsylvania.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It should be noted that this understanding has been determined in several studies. Results of these studies are contradictory.

Target: It should be noted that this understanding has been determined in several studies, although results of these studies are contradictory.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He placed a favourable interpretation upon the words of the pope. He set out on the return journey, when he was seized with fever and died at Piacenza on 8 August 869.

Target: Placing a favourable interpretation upon the words of the pope, he set out on the return journey, when he was seized with fever and died at Piacenza on 8 August 869.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Flambeau guesses the substance his wife used. Flambeau gives Brown clues as to the antidote, Prussian Blue.

Target: Guessing the substance his wife used, Flambeau gives Brown clues as to the antidote, Prussian Blue.


Source: Make the text clearer: Some relative, or perhaps friend finds her dead,. At the beginning of the video where friend is found and someone is looming over friend's seeming to be friend's her death.

Target: Some relative, or perhaps friend finds her dead, hence at the beginning of the video where she is found and someone is looming over her seeming to be mourning her death.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Sir John intervenes and is about to attack Tom when Tom reveals that he is seeking revenge against the Galliard family. John believes Galliard killed John's wife by John him to unknowingly transmit a sexual disease to her.

Target: Sir John intervenes and is about to attack Tom when Tom reveals that he is seeking revenge against the Galliard family because he believes Lady Galliard killed his wife by causing him to unknowingly transmit a sexual disease to her.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Kacie B.'s father doesn't like wines and he is a probation officer. Later, her father asked probation officer about probation officer's intention with his daughter but didn't seem to approve of the relationship because they don't believe in living together before marriage.

Target: Kacie B.'s father doesn't like wines and he is a probation officer. Later, her father asked Ben about his intention with his daughter but didn't seem to approve of the relationship because they don't believe in living together before marriage.


Source: Fix coherence: 10 years later, Emmeline and Michael become tanned, athletic and nubile young adults. Their relationship, more along the lines of brother and sister in their youth, blossoms into love and then passion.

Target: 10 years later, Emmeline and Michael become tanned, athletic and nubile young adults. Eventually, their relationship, more along the lines of brother and sister in their youth, blossoms into love and then passion.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: She lifts a floorboard. She finds missing items, including furniture from James' dead mother's dollhouse.

Target: Lifting a floorboard, she finds missing items, including furniture from James' dead mother's dollhouse.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Previously known as a novelist. Foote is most famous for this non-fictional narrative history.

Target: Although previously known as a novelist, Foote is most famous for this non-fictional narrative history.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Kate wants to dance. Kate's mother doesn't Kate's her daughter to embarrass herself.

Target: Kate wants to dance, but her mother doesn't want her daughter to embarrass herself.


Source: Fix coherence: Sessions for what would become their second album Wait Long By The River and the Bodies of Your Enemies Will Float By were undertaken during 2004. Once the album was completed, the band had legal problems that stalled the release for over a year.

Target: Sessions for what would become their second album Wait Long By The River and the Bodies of Your Enemies Will Float By were undertaken during 2004. But once the album was completed, the band had legal problems that stalled the release for over a year.


Source: Fix coherence: It also contains advertisements. Local authorities place notices in the Gazette about matters of local interest, such as road closures.

Target: It also contains advertisements. For example, local authorities place notices in the Gazette about matters of local interest, such as road closures.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Leaphorn praises Chee for the new facts, which open up the investigation. Leaphorn thinks the Demotts are the most likely candidates for the past death, if Chee was Chee, and for the present shootings of Nez and Maryboy.

Target: Leaphorn praises Chee for the new facts, which open up the investigation. Leaphorn thinks the Demotts are the most likely candidates for the past death, if it was murder, and for the present shootings of Nez and Maryboy.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He especially acts hostile towards Brian, who decides to take control and kick him out. After Brian attempts to leave with a bag of Brian's cannabis, they discover a shared enjoyment of the drug and the two smoke up and bond.

Target: He especially acts hostile towards Brian, who decides to take control and kick him out. However, after he attempts to leave with a bag of Brian's cannabis, they discover a shared enjoyment of the drug and the two smoke up and bond.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Following the incident, Wolff refused to speak to Kinski. Required to by the script.

Target: Following the incident, Wolff refused to speak to Kinski unless required to by the script.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Though thought to have been effective, the apparatus was not widely adopted. As a more efficient appartatus, the Coffey Still was patented by another Irish distiller, Aeneas Coffey, in 1830.

Target: Though thought to have been effective, the apparatus was not widely adopted. In particular, as a more efficient appartatus, the Coffey Still was patented by another Irish distiller, Aeneas Coffey, in 1830.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Bauer writes that this can be attributed to the Roma's distrust and suspicion, and to their humiliation. Some of the taboos in Roma culture regarding hygiene and sex were violated at Auschwitz.

Target: Bauer writes that this can be attributed to the Roma's distrust and suspicion, and to their humiliation because some of the taboos in Romani culture regarding hygiene and sex were violated at Auschwitz.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Although Hungary expelled Jews who were not citizens from its newly annexed lands in 1941, it did not deport most of its Jews until the German invasion of Hungary in March 1944. Between 15 May and 9 July 1944, 440,000 Hungary Jews were deported to Auschwitz.

Target: Although Hungary expelled Jews who were not citizens from its newly annexed lands in 1941, it did not deport most of its Jews until the German invasion of Hungary in March 1944. Between 15 May and 9 July 1944, 440,000 Hungarian Jews were deported to Auschwitz.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Dietrich manages to pass along his microfilmed credentials to the FBI ; they are altered. Instead of being forbidden to contact most of the agents.

Target: Dietrich manages to pass along his microfilmed credentials to the FBI ; they are altered so that instead of being forbidden to contact most of the agents.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The show has been exclusive to Sirius XM Radio since 2006. Sirius XM Radio is a subscription-based satellite radio service.

Target: The show has been exclusive to Sirius XM Radio, a subscription-based satellite radio service, since 2006.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Ravenna boasts a new suite of powers thanks to the Mirror. Ravenna usurps Freya's rule by coordinating Freya's huntsmen and army to reclaim the kingdoms Snow White liberated.

Target: Boasting a new suite of powers thanks to the Mirror, Ravenna usurps Freya's rule by coordinating Freya's huntsmen and army to reclaim the kingdoms Snow White liberated.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Freya rules as the Ice Queen. Freya orders children to be abducted so they can be trained to avoid the pain of love (as she suffered), and to be an army of fearsome huntsmen to conquer for her.

Target: Ruling as the Ice Queen, Freya orders children to be abducted so they can be trained to avoid the pain of love (as she suffered), and to be an army of fearsome huntsmen to conquer for her.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Gwent detects the open frequency. Gwent insists the Alphans deliver his supplies.

Target: Detecting the open frequency, Gwent insists the Alphans deliver his supplies.


Source: Make the text more logical: This aired on Mother's Day. This was the first episode of the Hour to air in a new Sunday night timeslot.

Target: Airing on Mother's Day, this was the first episode of the Hour to air in a new Sunday night timeslot.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Max was Charlie's best friend. Charlie was a very cheerful Charlie and they spent much time together, all the way up until Charlie's fall into the mill pool.

Target: Max was Charlie's best friend. He was a very cheerful boy and they spent much time together, all the way up until his fall into the mill pool.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Collins regrets his earlier actions. Collins attempts to help mother and child escape, but is shot dead by Cole, who rescues them.

Target: Regretting his earlier actions, Collins attempts to help mother and child escape, but is shot dead by Cole, who rescues them.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: They were planted at different times. Different stages of growth could be shown in film scenes.

Target: They were planted at different times so that different stages of growth could be shown in film scenes.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Some documents are more complicated than others. Those that are badly defaced, torn, undated, misdated, or unsigned require additional research in order to accurately present them to readers.

Target: Some documents are more complicated than others. For example, those that are badly defaced, torn, undated, misdated, or unsigned require additional research in order to accurately present them to readers.


Source: Fix coherence: The series also discusses fungi. As series is pointed out.

Target: The series also discusses fungi, although as it is pointed out.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Susan realizes that Webb intends to kill Dr. James to preserve their secret. Susan warns the James who then escapes with the newborn.

Target: Susan realizes that Webb intends to kill Dr. James to preserve their secret, so she warns the doctor who then escapes with the newborn.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Or a Palestinian doctor shows a wing of the hospital that is supposed to have been destroyed by Tsahal. Despite the tense atmosphere and the constant danger, Tsahal soldiers assist Palestinian civilians.

Target: Or a Palestinian doctor shows a wing of the hospital that is supposed to have been destroyed by Tsahal. Despite the tense atmosphere and the constant danger, Tsahal soldiers assist Palestinians civilians.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: These characters are a part of the feminine and decorative images Laurencin creates but in a new and elevated style. This unique style Laurencin developed after Laurencin's time in Spain is short-lived.

Target: These characters are a part of the feminine and decorative images Laurencin creates but in a new and elevated style. Yet, this unique style Laurencin developed after her time in Spain is short-lived.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Eventually, other politicians who thought the reforms did not go far enough had to agree with Gandhi simply. Gandhi's popularity and influence had become so great that the Congress could accomplish little Gandhi him.

Target: Eventually, other politicians who thought the reforms did not go far enough had to agree with Gandhi simply because his popularity and influence had become so great that the Congress could accomplish little without him.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The next morning, Count Antonio arrives at the palace with a man named Bruno and his hunting dogs, Kookoo and Cocoa. Uberta sees Count Count, and she falls stupidly in love with him which makes Lord Rodgers jealous.

Target: The next morning, Count Antonio arrives at the palace with a man named Bruno and his hunting dogs, Kookoo and Cocoa. Uberta sees Count Antonio, and she falls stupidly in love with him which makes Lord Rodgers jealous.


Source: Make the text more logical: In December 1989 the Victims material was issued as a compilation album on Timberyard Records. A compilation album is all Loud on the Western Front.

Target: In December 1989 the Victims material was issued as a compilation album, All Loud on the Western Front, on Timberyard Records.


Source: Make the text clearer: It depicts two figures locked in an amorous embrace as they dance a waltz. Two figures are a man and a woman.

Target: It depicts two figures, a man and a woman, locked in an amorous embrace as they dance a waltz.


Source: Make the text more consistent: We're the most dominant nation on Earth. Too often the face of our economic superiority is a corporate imperialism or technological dominance shown by smart bombs and Predator drones.

Target: We're the most dominant nation on Earth, but too often the face of our economic superiority is a corporate imperialism or technological dominance shown by smart bombs and Predator drones.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: McCoy notes that, despite most of his heart shutting down, Kirk still persevered. Part of Kirk's heart belongs to another special lady.

Target: McCoy notes that, despite most of his heart shutting down, Kirk still persevered because part of his heart belongs to another special lady.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He retreated back to Philadelphia. He remained there until his remaining territories were overrun by Theodore Laskaris of Nicaea in 1205.

Target: Retreating back to Philadelphia, he remained there until his remaining territories were overrun by Theodore Laskaris of Nicaea in 1205.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Before she married Thomas Adolphus Trollope, she published several works. Her skills developed at a very young age.

Target: Before she married Thomas Adolphus Trollope, she published several works. Furthermore, her skills developed at a very young age.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Daniel reminiscings about his childhood. Daniel becomes suspicious to the truth of Henry's story and one night holds him at gunpoint.

Target: Reminiscing about his childhood, Daniel becomes suspicious to the truth of Henry's story and one night holds him at gunpoint.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: At the time, the mention of homosexuality on stage was illegal in New York State. Authorities chose to overlook mention's subject matter when the Broadway production was acclaimed by the critics.

Target: At the time, the mention of homosexuality on stage was illegal in New York State, but authorities chose to overlook its subject matter when the Broadway production was acclaimed by the critics.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Today, icipe stands as a centre of scientific excellence and training in Africa. As Prof. Odhiambo had hoped, it is indeed staffed mainly by indigenous Africa scientists.

Target: Today, icipe stands as a centre of scientific excellence and training in Africa. And as Prof. Odhiambo had hoped, it is indeed staffed mainly by indigenous African scientists.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Joe Woods (Sam Levene), producing a new show starring the singer Emilio Rossi (George Givot), is delighted to find a new investor. Female lead Penny Weston (Jane Powell) is worried that the boys are in over their heads.

Target: Joe Woods (Sam Levene), producing a new show starring the singer Emilio Rossi (George Givot), is delighted to find a new investor, but female lead Penny Weston (Jane Powell) is worried that the boys are in over their heads.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: For comparison, the normal range for a mortar crew firing at enemy infantry or vehicles is 8 hexes. Such a crew can not target adjacent hexes, so there's also a minimum range for lobbing a mortar shell.

Target: For comparison, the normal range for a mortar crew firing at enemy infantry or vehicles is 8 hexes. But such a crew can not target adjacent hexes, so there's also a minimum range for lobbing a mortar shell.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He tracked the tigers to a ravine. He found the predators eating the dead cow.

Target: Tracking the tigers to a ravine, he found the predators eating the dead cow.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: His feast day is celebrated on August 13, Julian calendar (August 26, Gregorian Calendar). Another feast day, the Uncovering of the Relics of Saint Tikhon of Zadonsk was instituted to be celebrated annually on May 14.

Target: His feast day is celebrated on August 13, Julian calendar (August 26, Gregorian Calendar). As a result, another feast day, the Uncovering of the Relics of Saint Tikhon of Zadonsk was instituted to be celebrated annually on May 14.


Source: Fix coherence: The eventual winner was United Methodist minister Doug Moseley 1973. United Methodist minister Doug Moseley is a native of Bowling Green who then ran unopposed in the general election held on November 6.

Target: The eventual winner was United Methodist minister Doug Moseley, a native of Bowling Green who then ran unopposed in the general election held on November 6, 1973.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: 2004: Taipei 101 was completed. Taipei 101 is the tallest building in the world until 2011.

Target: 2004: Taipei 101, the tallest building in the world until 2011, was completed.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: After getting off the bus or Light Rail, its a five-minute walk to Tin Sau Bazaar. Not many Tin Shui Wai residents are willing to go there and purchase items.

Target: After getting off the bus or Light Rail, its a five-minute walk to Tin Sau Bazaar. Therefore, not many Tin Shui Wai residents are willing to go there and purchase items.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Tlalpujahua's history is tied to mining, with the peak period for this activity spanning the very late 19th century to the 1930s. Mining had been done in this area since pre-Hispanic times.

Target: Tlalpujahua's history is tied to mining, with the peak period for this activity spanning the very late 19th century to the 1930s, although mining had been done in this area since pre-Hispanic times.


Source: Fix coherence: The material was actually mining debris from deep inside the earth. When material settled, material formed into a kind of concrete.

Target: The material was actually mining debris from deep inside the earth, so when it settled, it formed into a kind of concrete.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There was a disturbance in the 19th round as Molineaux and Cribb were locked in a wrestler's hold (legal under the rules of the time). Neither could hit the other nor escape.

Target: There was a disturbance in the 19th round as Molineaux and Cribb were locked in a wrestler's hold (legal under the rules of the time) so that neither could hit the other nor escape.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The only surviving footage of The Beatles on the programme, for instance, comes from its re-use in episode one of 1965 Doctor Who serial The Chase. A number of recordings are believed to exist in private collections.

Target: The only surviving footage of The Beatles on the programme, for instance, comes from its re-use in episode one of 1965 Doctor Who serial The Chase. Additionally a number of recordings are believed to exist in private collections.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Editions of the programme from the 1970s (and now 1980s) are being repeated on most Thursdays and Fridays on BBC Four. Episodes featuring disgraced presenters and artists such as Jimmy Savile.

Target: Editions of the programme from the 1970s (and now 1980s) are being repeated on most Thursdays and Fridays on BBC Four, although episodes featuring disgraced presenters and artists such as Jimmy Savile.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This is a viewer competition where every week, handprints are made from the cast and crew in very hard clay. Every week, the cast or crew member who made the handprint, sets a question referring to the next episode of Doctor Who.

Target: This is a viewer competition where every week, handprints are made from the cast and crew in very hard clay. Then, every week, the cast or crew member who made the handprint, sets a question referring to the next episode of Doctor Who.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He defies their decision not to help her. He takes her to the healing pool and cures her.

Target: Defying their decision not to help her, he takes her to the healing pool and cures her.


Source: Fix coherence: The United States Virgin Islands (USVI) is the only place under United States jurisdiction where the rule of the road is to drive on the left. Virtually all passenger vehicles are left hand drive due to imports of United States vehicles.

Target: The United States Virgin Islands (USVI) is the only place under United States jurisdiction where the rule of the road is to drive on the left. However, virtually all passenger vehicles are left hand drive due to imports of U.S. vehicles.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The name treachery was chosen. Name treachery is a name treachery for treason.

Target: The name treachery was chosen because it is a synonym for treason.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Public Primary and Secondary education is free for all. Private and religious schooling is available for a fee.

Target: Public Primary and Secondary education is free for all, although private and religious schooling is available for a fee.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In 1974, the Special Tribunal called for joint negotiations through a joint negotiations committee. Again the PSA refused to join in the process.

Target: In 1974, the Special Tribunal called for joint negotiations through a joint negotiations committee but again the PSA refused to join in the process.