Source: Make the text clearer: Jump up ^ Because Perot finished ahead of Clinton in Utah as a whole, all margins given are Bush minus Perot. Stated in the total for the county in question.

Target: Jump up ^ Because Perot finished ahead of Clinton in Utah as a whole, all margins given are Bush minus Perot unless stated in the total for the county in question.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Their visits are normally arranged ahead. Families can travel from adjacent properties for significant events such as baptisms.

Target: Their visits are normally arranged ahead so that families can travel from adjacent properties for significant events such as baptisms.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: After she controls the movements of Eddie with the vest, James takes a picture of her with Ross and the Eddie. Right after James takes the picture, Eddie comes alive and chases James backstage.

Target: After she controls the movements of Eddie with the vest, James takes a picture of her with Ross and the Eddie. However, right after James takes the picture, Eddie comes alive and chases James backstage.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The ground floor is designed. Visitors do not feel as if they are in a hospital-the space is airy.

Target: The ground floor is designed so that visitors do not feel as if they are in a hospital-the space is airy.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Jump up ^ University of Libya was the formal translation of Al Jame'a Al Libiya to English. University of Libya's more accurate to translate it The Libyan University Al Jame'a Al Libiya Libiya is an adjective for Al Jame'a.

Target: Jump up ^ University of Libya was the formal translation of Al Jame'a Al Libiya to English. However, its more accurate to translate it The Libyan University since Al Libiya is an adjective for Al Jame'a.


Source: Fix coherence errors: On 14th day, all five were defeated by Karna's son Vrishasena, but was saved by Bhima. All five of them were killed by Ashwathama on the night of the last day of the war.

Target: On 14th day, all five were defeated by Karna's son Vrishasena, but was saved by Bhima. However all five of them were killed by Ashwathama on the night of the last day of the war.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: During the battle over the Negev desert, Uri-On discovers that amongst the invaders is an Earth man, Idan, who willingly joined them during their first visit to Earth. Who became nearly immortal on Alianos.

Target: During the battle over the Negev desert, Uri-On discovers that amongst the invaders is an Earth man, Idan, who willingly joined them during their first visit to Earth, and who became nearly immortal on Alianos.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Nettles contain a lot of nitrogenous compounds, so are used as a compost activator or can be used to make a liquid fertilizer, which. Somewhat low in phosphate.

Target: Nettles contain a lot of nitrogenous compounds, so are used as a compost activator or can be used to make a liquid fertilizer, which although somewhat low in phosphate.


Source: Make the text clearer: Cooper and Leid co-founded The City Sun in 1984. The City Sun is a weekly newspaper that covered issues of interest to African Americans in New York City.

Target: Cooper and Leid co-founded The City Sun, a weekly newspaper that covered issues of interest to African Americans in New York City, in 1984.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He exhibited knowledge of the strike zone and an ability to make contact. He reduced his strikeout totals and produced a combined. 376 on-base percentage.

Target: Exhibiting knowledge of the strike zone and an ability to make contact, he reduced his strikeout totals and produced a combined. 376 on-base percentage.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He was Governor of Odisha (Orissa then) for a short period in 1951. After Patel's death in 1950, Menon himself retired from the newly formed Indian Administrative Service.

Target: He was Governor of Odisha (Orissa then) for a short period in 1951. Thus, after Patel's death in 1950, Menon himself retired from the newly formed Indian Administrative Service.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Veronica nivea a flowering plant species Veronica nivea is the milfoil speedwell or snow speedwell.

Target: Veronica nivea, the milfoil speedwell or snow speedwell, a flowering plant species


Source: Make the text more coherent: Which depending on how well the player is able to recall drink recipes and create drinks to the clientele's preferences, such conversations changes, as well as the overall plotline. Which is relative to the player's overall competence.

Target: Depending on how well the player is able to recall drink recipes and create drinks to the clientele's preferences, such conversations change, as well as the overall plotline, which is relative to the player's overall competence.


Source: Fix coherence: In addition to appearing on recordings of Giulio Cesare including: Giulio Cesare is the aria also features on several recital albums.

Target: In addition to appearing on recordings of Giulio Cesare, the aria also features on several recital albums, including :


Source: Fix sentence flow: Vadim Moshkovich controls Masshtab, one of the largest Russian development companies, focused on New Moscow (Novaya Moskva), an area which was absorbed by the City of Moscow in July 2012. The company has more than 2,580 hectares in City of Moscow.

Target: Vadim Moshkovich controls Masshtab, one of the largest Russian development companies, focused on New Moscow (Novaya Moskva), an area which was absorbed by the City of Moscow in July 2012. The company has more than 2,580 hectares in New Moscow.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Vakeeswarar is another name of Lord Shiva, a deity in the Hindu religion. deity sits on a lotus flower.

Target: Vakeeswarar is another name of Lord Shiva, a deity in the Hindu religion. Shiva sits on a lotus flower.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Valentine regarded the in-built special qualities of old buildings such as walauwas, temples, monasteries and colonial buildings through redeployment of some of their architectural components. Valentine disliked most traditional design concepts relating to the basic constituents of form.

Target: Regarding the in-built special qualities of old buildings such as walauwas, temples, monasteries and colonial buildings through redeployment of some of their architectural components, Valentine disliked most traditional design concepts relating to the basic constituents of form.


Source: Make the text more logical: Cowanshannock Creek flows through the southern part of the township. Cowanshannock Creek is a tributary of the Allegheny River.

Target: Cowanshannock Creek, a tributary of the Allegheny River, flows through the southern part of the township.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Players may also report players they suspect of cheating through their Steam Community profile. Players are not banned from these reports alone.

Target: Players may also report players they suspect of cheating through their Steam Community profile, although players are not banned from these reports alone.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: It is revealed that Lissa has a miraculous ability to heal others. When Lissa becomes depressed Lissa engages in self-mutilation.

Target: It is revealed that Lissa has a miraculous ability to heal others but when she becomes depressed she engages in self-mutilation.


Source: Fix coherence errors: They get together but live in separate houses. Problems continue to haunt them in the form of a vengeful Angayarkanni and Jyothi and Kadhir, a local don who has his vengeance against Saravanan.

Target: They get together but live in separate houses. However, problems continue to haunt them in the form of a vengeful Angayarkanni and Jyothi and Kadhir, a local don who has his vengeance against Saravanan.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Varangians engaged in trade, piracy, and mercenary activities. Varangians roamed the river systems and portages of Gardariki, as the areas north of the Black Sea were known in the Norse sagas.

Target: Engaging in trade, piracy, and mercenary activities, Varangians roamed the river systems and portages of Gardariki, as the areas north of the Black Sea were known in the Norse sagas.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Attracted by the riches of Constantinople and the Arab world, Varangians initiated a number of Rus '-Byzantine Wars, some of which resulted in advantageous trade treaties. Descendants of Rurik expanded the Rus state and unified the local tribes.

Target: Attracted by the riches of Constantinople and the Arab world, Varangians initiated a number of Rus'-Byzantine Wars, some of which resulted in advantageous trade treaties. Meanwhile, descendants of Rurik expanded the Rus 'state and unified the local tribes.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: After abdicating his social responsibilities Sir Vauncey concentrated on building up his enormous collection of stuffed birds, bird's eggs and Lepidoptera. Vauncey's collection birds birds shot by himself and also rare or abnormally coloured specimens bought from dealers and taxidermists.

Target: After abdicating his social responsibilities Sir Vauncey concentrated on building up his enormous collection of stuffed birds, bird's eggs and Lepidoptera. His collection included birds shot by himself and also rare or abnormally coloured specimens bought from dealers and taxidermists.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He was a member of this group for the five years of its existence, then was retained as the Cubs' bullpen coach when Leo Durocher was named manager for 1966. That year member discovered member was suffering from acute myeloid leukemia.

Target: He was a member of this group for the five years of its existence, then was retained as the Cubs' bullpen coach when Leo Durocher was named manager for 1966. However, that year Walker discovered he was suffering from acute myeloid leukemia.


Source: Make the text more logical: Influenced by important foundational artists such as King Tubby and Augustus Pablo. Rice has a dub style that is distinct from that of the genre's early pioneers.

Target: Although influenced by important foundational artists such as King Tubby and Augustus Pablo, Rice has a dub style that is distinct from that of the genre's early pioneers.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Clarke has been a close colleague of Mary Matalin since the Reagan administration. colleague often filled in for Mary Matalin on the show Equal Time during its run on CNBC in the 1990s.

Target: Clarke has been a close colleague of Mary Matalin since the Reagan administration. Clarke often filled in for Matalin on the show Equal Time during its run on CNBC in the 1990s.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Any person who comes to me will certainly partake of the light of this lamp. Those who flee as a result of delusion and distrust will be thrown into darkness.

Target: Any person who comes to me will certainly partake of the light of this lamp. But those who flee as a result of delusion and distrust will be thrown into darkness.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Females do not sing. They also learn to recognise the song, and choose males with the same song, thus perpetuating the link between each species of indigobird and firefinch.

Target: Although females do not sing, they also learn to recognise the song, and choose males with the same song, thus perpetuating the link between each species of indigobird and firefinch.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The building and part of Franklin Smith's art and antique collection were sold to Abraham Mussallem in 1913. Abraham Mussallem is a rug and antiquities merchant originally from Syria.

Target: The building and part of Franklin Smith's art and antique collection were sold to Abraham Mussallem, a rug and antiquities merchant originally from Syria, in 1913.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: According to banking regulations, the bank could lend not more than 10 times its capital. As lending increased every year, new shares had to be issued almost annually.

Target: According to banking regulations, the bank could lend not more than 10 times its capital. Therefore, as lending increased every year, new shares had to be issued almost annually.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Guaraldi utilized his Latin influences from his bossa nova days with Bola Sete. Guaraldi composed a number of pieces with waltz tempos and jazz standards and later recorded this performance in 1965.

Target: Utilizing his Latin influences from his bossa nova days with Bola Sete, Guaraldi composed a number of pieces with waltz tempos and jazz standards and later recorded this performance in 1965.


Source: Make the text more logical: That same night, while the girls are having dinner, Stacey confesses to Emma that the reason why their parents are having problems is. Emma found Emma's father with a student Emma she immediatly Emma's her mother.

Target: That same night, while the girls are having dinner, Stacey confesses to Emma that the reason why their parents are having problems is because she found her father with a student and she immediatly told her mother.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As Emma and Stacey attempt to escape, the local boy coughs blood on Stacey. Before he can infect Emma, Evan rushes in to save Emma, knocking the boy unconscious and finally escaping with the girls.

Target: As Emma and Stacey attempt to escape, the local boy coughs blood on Stacey but before he can infect Emma, Evan rushes in to save her, knocking the boy unconscious and finally escaping with the girls.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Many discographies show this as a 1984 release. Early LP pressings verify the 1983 release year.

Target: Many discographies show this as a 1984 release, but early LP pressings verify the 1983 release year.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The game was later ported to the Master System by Tec Toy and released only in Brazil. Brazil itself was a Brazil where the series was very popular.

Target: The game was later ported to the Master System by Tec Toy and released only in Brazil. Brazil itself was a market where the series was very popular.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Sessions were broadcast across a range of ability standards. Customers could have chosen the appropriate complexity and fitness demand that was relevant for them.

Target: Sessions were broadcast across a range of ability standards, so that customers could have chosen the appropriate complexity and fitness demand that was relevant for them.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The creation of these three programs allowed large-scale multiplayer to occur,. Previously only one controller could control a single player.

Target: The creation of these three programs allowed large-scale multiplayer to occur, whereas previously only one controller could control a single player.


Source: Make the text coherent: All servers are interconnected. Users can see each other on the network.

Target: All servers are interconnected so that users can see each other on the network.


Source: Make the text clearer: Advantages of episomal latency include the fact that the virus may not need to enter the nucleus, and. May avoid nuclear domain 10.

Target: Advantages of episomal latency include the fact that the virus may not need to enter the nucleus, and hence may avoid nuclear domain 10.


Source: Make the text more logical: All Norfolk Island immigration permits are no longer valid. Its non-citizen residents are accorded the following categories of visa depending on their previous status (except for New Zealand citizens who were automatically given the Special Category Visa) :

Target: All Norfolk Island immigration permits are no longer valid. Instead, its non-citizen residents are accorded the following categories of visa depending on their previous status (except for New Zealand citizens who were automatically given the Special Category Visa) :


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Similarly, reducing the expression of LRAT also decreased the ability of RBP-ROH complex to phosphorylate JAK2 and STAT5. Both CRBP-I and LRAT are necessary for the STRA6 signaling cascade upon the binding and transport of retinol.

Target: Similarly, reducing the expression of LRAT also decreased the ability of RBP-ROH complex to phosphorylate JAK2 and STAT5. Therefore, both CRBP-I and LRAT are necessary for the STRA6 signaling cascade upon the binding and transport of retinol.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Other disorders that result from STRA6 mutations include pulmonary dysgenesis, cardiac malformations, and mental retardation. Research has shown that homozygous mutations in human STRA6 gene can lead to Matthew-Wood syndrome, which is a combination of all the mentioned disorders.

Target: Other disorders that result from STRA6 mutations include pulmonary dysgenesis, cardiac malformations, and mental retardation. In fact, research has shown that homozygous mutations in human STRA6 gene can lead to Matthew-Wood syndrome, which is a combination of all the mentioned disorders.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Following the relegation of Vitkovice club he transferred to Trinec athletics club in the same year. Due to protracted injury he ended his career in 1976.

Target: Following the relegation of Vitkovice club he transferred to Trinec athletics club in the same year but due to protracted injury he ended his career in 1976.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In 2012 Voxofon developed Bridge Messaging technology, providing extensive chat features for smartphone to non-smartphone messaging. Voxofon also improved Voxofon's app-to-app messaging, which Voxofon Voxofon users to call and chat for free.

Target: In 2012 Voxofon developed Bridge Messaging technology, providing extensive chat features for smartphone to non-smartphone messaging. It also improved its app-to-app messaging, which allows Voxofon users to call and chat for free.


Source: Fix coherence errors: I narrated it. Nobody could make heads or tails of it.

Target: I narrated it, because nobody could make heads or tails of it.


Source: Fix coherence: Similarly, there is no single group leader ; everyone on the network is equal in what they can or can not do, including inviting other members into the group. Any can not member kick another from the group, members them from public chats, etc.

Target: Similarly, there is no single group leader ; everyone on the network is equal in what they can or can not do, including inviting other members into the group, nor can any member kick another from the group, exclude them from public chats, etc.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Every member of the network will have that member's public key. All that member needs to do to regain access is to connect to another member.

Target: Since every member of the network will have that member's public key, all that member needs to do to regain access is to connect to another member.


Source: Make the text clearer: It is possible that the network will drift from all the IP addresses used before. None are known.

Target: It is possible that the network will drift from all the IP addresses used before so that none are known.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Because WCHK was on the AM band with a daytime-only operation, it was required to sign-off by sunset, allowing clear-channel stations to take over the airwaves. On August 1, 1964.

Target: Because WCHK was on the AM band with a daytime-only operation, it was required to sign-off by sunset, allowing clear-channel stations to take over the airwaves. Therefore, on August 1, 1964.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: It put WFRV and WJMN on the market, but was unable to find a buyer. In 1992, the FCC relaxed WFRV's ownership restrictions, leading CBS to WFRV WFRV and move its programming there.

Target: It put WFRV and WJMN on the market, but was unable to find a buyer. However, in 1992, the FCC relaxed its ownership restrictions, leading CBS to keep WFRV and move its programming there.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The change of format. Ratings for WINZ have dropped from a 1.0 in the Spring of 2009 to a 0.3 in April, a 06 in May, and a 0.5 in June, behind the sports station WAXY and WQAM.

Target: Since the change of format, ratings for WINZ have dropped from a 1.0 in the Spring of 2009 to a 0.3 in April, a 06 in May, and a 0.5 in June, behind the sports station WAXY and WQAM.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In 1946, the fledgling American Broadcasting Company bought the King-Trendle stations. The Federal Communications Commission (FCC) forced American Broadcasting Company to sell WOOD since it had been an NBC affiliate since 1935.

Target: In 1946, the fledgling American Broadcasting Company bought the King-Trendle stations, but the Federal Communications Commission (FCC) forced ABC to sell WOOD since it had been an NBC affiliate since 1935.


Source: Fix sentence flow: WQML (FM) Puerto Rico WQML (FM) is a radio station (101.5 FM) licensed to serve Ceiba.

Target: WQML (FM), a radio station (101.5 FM) licensed to serve Ceiba, Puerto Rico


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: He was born in August 1939 at Igbajo southwestern Nigeria. Igbajo is a city in Osun State.

Target: He was born in August 1939 at Igbajo, a city in Osun State, southwestern Nigeria.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The College offered its first bachelor's degrees in 1970. Its first bachelor's degrees are a Bachelor of Accountancy and Bachelor of Business Administration.

Target: The College offered its first bachelor's degrees, a Bachelor of Accountancy and Bachelor of Business Administration, in 1970.


Source: Fix coherence: Gilbert returned to Harvard in 1985. Gilbert was an outspoken Gilbert of David Baltimore in the handling of the scientific fraud accusations against Thereza Imanishi-Kari.

Target: Gilbert returned to Harvard in 1985. Gilbert was an outspoken critic of David Baltimore in the handling of the scientific fraud accusations against Thereza Imanishi-Kari.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Young later worked as a firefighter. Young was a Young with the Verdun, Quebec fire department until Young's retirement in 1978.

Target: Young later worked as a firefighter. He was a captain with the Verdun, Quebec fire department until his retirement in 1978.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Due to bad winds, the journey across the sea took a long time. A coordinated attack by the Finns and Sigismund's Polish soldiers could not be undertaken.

Target: Due to bad winds, the journey across the sea took a long time. Hence, a coordinated attack by the Finns and Sigismund's Polish soldiers could not be undertaken.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: War hammers, especially when mounted on a pole, could damage without penetrating armor. War hammers transmitted War hammers' impact through even the thickest helmets and caused concussions.

Target: War hammers, especially when mounted on a pole, could damage without penetrating armor. In particular, they transmitted their impact through even the thickest helmets and caused concussions.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Austerlitz effectively brought the Third Coalition to an end. Later there was a small side campaign against Naples.

Target: Austerlitz effectively brought the Third Coalition to an end, although later there was a small side campaign against Naples.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Mack was deliberating about a course of action to pursue and the Austrian army remained inactive at Ulm until the 11th. Napoleon was operating under flawed assumptions: he believed the Austrian were moving to the east or southeast and that Ulm was lightly guarded.

Target: Mack was deliberating about a course of action to pursue and the Austrian army remained inactive at Ulm until the 11th. Meanwhile, Napoleon was operating under flawed assumptions: he believed the Austrians were moving to the east or southeast and that Ulm was lightly guarded.


Source: Make the text more logical: Joseph seemed unaware of the problems and the potential dangers of revolt. No extra provisions were sent to the south of Italy.

Target: Joseph seemed unaware of the problems and the potential dangers of revolt. Consequently, no extra provisions were sent to the south of Italy.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: By far the most successful of the Reprise acts who moved to Warner Bros. was Fleetwood Mac, whose massive success firmly established Warner Bros. in the front rank of major labels --. Few would have predicted Warner Bros. from the band's tumultuous history.

Target: By far the most successful of the Reprise acts who moved to Warner Bros. was Fleetwood Mac, whose massive success firmly established Warner Bros. in the front rank of major labels -- although few would have predicted it from the band's tumultuous history.


Source: Fix coherence: Wickham hanged out around Laurel Canyon. Wickham scouted for new talent and established a rapport with the young musicians WBR was seeking to sign.

Target: Hanging out around Laurel Canyon, Wickham scouted for new talent and established a rapport with the young musicians WBR was seeking to sign.


Source: Make the text more logical: The restructure also reversed the reporting arrangement put in place in 1960. From this point the Warner publishing arm reported to the record division under Maitland.

Target: The restructure also reversed the reporting arrangement put in place in 1960 and from this point the Warner publishing arm reported to the record division under Maitland.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Warren County is the primary area of tourism related to Lake George. Lake George is a 28,160-acre (114.0 km) Lake George located in the Adirondack Mountains.

Target: Warren County is the primary area of tourism related to Lake George. Lake George is a 28,160-acre (114.0 km) lake located in the Adirondack Mountains.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The statue is in Chinese style, with 18 arms. Though open-air located within an elaborate ubusot is on a platform-pavilion surrounded by the temple lake.

Target: The statue is in Chinese style, with 18 arms, and though open-air located within an elaborate ubusot is on a platform-pavilion surrounded by the temple lake.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It is not illegal to install a product such as water fittings in the UK without the WRAS mark. You may have to prove compliance in other ways.

Target: It is not illegal to install a product such as water fittings in the UK without the WRAS mark but you may have to prove compliance in other ways.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The negative publicity caused the Shakers to establish a rule that married persons would not be accepted into Shaker communities. Both partners agreed to enter.

Target: The negative publicity caused the Shakers to establish a rule that married persons would not be accepted into Shaker communities unless both partners agreed to enter.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: We Do reveals the stories of three LGBT couples 2015. Three LGBT couples are their journeys for legal recognition of their relationships and the impact that the pursuit of marriage equality has had on their lives before and after the Supreme Court ruling on June 26.

Target: We Do reveals the stories of three LGBT couples, their journeys for legal recognition of their relationships and the impact that the pursuit of marriage equality has had on their lives before and after the Supreme Court ruling on June 26, 2015.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The field, however, was better than a normal satellite field. Field was the last field of the year.

Target: The field, however, was better than a normal satellite field because it was the last tournament of the year.


Source: Make the text coherent: I resist the impulse to throw the wretched thing across the room. I read on.

Target: Resisting the impulse to throw the wretched thing across the room, I read on.


Source: Make the text clearer: The same day, White Fang spots Lilly's village. When Lilly sees White Fang, Lilly calls Lilly's uncle to show White Fang that it was the Lilly she'd seen by the river the Lilly she found Henry.

Target: The same day, White Fang spots Lilly's village, and when Lilly sees him, she calls her uncle to show him that it was the wolf she'd seen by the river the day she found Henry.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Under the terms of the order, the Council will be dissolved within two years. Council's establishment is affirmed by the president at that time.

Target: Under the terms of the order, the Council will be dissolved within two years unless its establishment is affirmed by the president at that time.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Further information is provided at Wikipedia: Your first article and Wikipedia: How to write a great article, and please consider taking a tour through the Wikipedia: Tutorial. You know how to properly format the article's content before creation.

Target: Further information is provided at Wikipedia: Your first article and Wikipedia: How to write a great article, and please consider taking a tour through the Wikipedia: Tutorial so that you know how to properly format the article's content before creation.


Source: Fix coherence: Nobody owns articles. If you see a problem that you can fix, do so.

Target: Nobody owns articles, so if you see a problem that you can fix, do so.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Wikipedia is an online encyclopedia and, as a means to that end, an online community of individuals interested in building and using a high-quality encyclopedia. There are certain things that encyclopedia is not and common mistakes that should be avoided.

Target: Wikipedia is an online encyclopedia and, as a means to that end, an online community of individuals interested in building and using a high-quality encyclopedia. Therefore, there are certain things that Wikipedia is not and common mistakes that should be avoided.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Unlike most WikiProjects, the scope for regional notice boards is very broad, covering a wide variety of regional topics. These boards are structured differently than WikiProjects.

Target: Unlike most WikiProjects, the scope for regional notice boards is very broad, covering a wide variety of regional topics. Additionally, these boards are structured differently than WikiProjects.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: There is no age limit. Riders must be at least 42 inches (110 cm) tall to ride Wildebeest when accompanied by an adult who is 18 years of age or older.

Target: Although there is no age limit, riders must be at least 42 inches (110 cm) tall to ride Wildebeest when accompanied by an adult who is 18 years of age or older.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Citizens are a key element in community preparedness. Citizens apply their knowledge and skills to help the community and thereby empower their neighbors to help out in the preparedness process.

Target: Citizens are a key element in community preparedness because citizens apply their knowledge and skills to help the community and thereby empower their neighbors to help out in the preparedness process.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Landowners are encouraged to photograph any trees marked for removal as proof of assessed damage. Trees lost due to wildfire can be written off on a federal income tax return as a casualty loss.

Target: Landowners are encouraged to photograph any trees marked for removal as proof of assessed damage because trees lost due to wildfire can be written off on a federal income tax return as a casualty loss.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Another version of this theme is that wildness produces things that are natural. Humans produce things that are artificial.

Target: Another version of this theme is that wildness produces things that are natural, while humans produce things that are artificial.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: I think he was much harder on the other artists. My stuff made him laugh.

Target: I think he was much harder on the other artists, because my stuff made him laugh.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Cochrane was elected to the Assembly in 1892. Cochrane was an Cochrane and a member of the school board of Delavan, Wisconsin.

Target: Cochrane was elected to the Assembly in 1892. Additionally, he was an alderman and a member of the school board of Delavan, Wisconsin.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He liked the area, in 1874. He purchased a land tract of around 80,000 acres (320 km2) along the St. Johns River north of Orlando, Florida in an area now called Lake County, Florida.

Target: Liking the area, in 1874, he purchased a land tract of around 80,000 acres (320 km2) along the St. Johns River north of Orlando, Florida in an area now called Lake County, Florida.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Officially Davison continued as principal secretary until Walsingham's death in April 1590. Walsingham the spymaster remained the more dominant personality, and is generally considered behind the scheme to execute the Queen of Scots.

Target: Officially Davison continued as principal secretary until Walsingham's death in April 1590. Yet, Walsingham the spymaster remained the more dominant personality, and is generally considered behind the scheme to execute the Queen of Scots.


Source: Make the text coherent: He planned to retire from politics at the expiration of his term in 1793. He bowed instead to the wishes of his neighbors and served yet another term in the state legislature.

Target: Planning to retire from politics at the expiration of his term in 1793, he bowed instead to the wishes of his neighbors and served yet another term in the state legislature.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Being elected to the House of Delegates. He has been the deputy minority whip (2003) and the assistant minority whip (2003 -- 05).

Target: Since being elected to the House of Delegates, he has been the deputy minority whip (2003) and the assistant minority whip (2003 -- 05).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Married three times. He had no children.

Target: Although married three times, he had no children.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Johnson held a solo exhibition at Alma Reed Galleries in 1941. Although Johnson enjoyed a degree of success as an artist during the 1940s and 1950s, Johnson was never able to achieve financial stability.

Target: Johnson held a solo exhibition at Alma Reed Galleries in 1941. However, although he enjoyed a degree of success as an artist during the 1940s and 1950s, he was never able to achieve financial stability.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He captured two small shallops. He demanded the release of his quartermaster in exchange for his prisoners, to which they agreed.

Target: Capturing two small shallops, he demanded the release of his quartermaster in exchange for his prisoners, to which they agreed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The manager, an old Quaker, declined saying that. On principle Quaker never attended entertainments.

Target: The manager, an old Quaker, declined saying that although on principle he never attended entertainments.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Tolbert abandoned Tubman's strong pro-West foreign policy. Tolbert adopted one which focused on promoting Liberia's political independence.

Target: Abandoning Tubman's strong pro-West foreign policy, Tolbert adopted one which focused on promoting Liberia's political independence.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Jump up ^ Fahlman, Betsy ; Galt, Alexander ; Art, Joseph and (1992). Spirit of the South: the sculpture of Galt, 1827-1863.

Target: Jump up ^ Fahlman, Betsy ; Galt, Alexander ; Art, Joseph and (1992). Spirit of the South: the sculpture of Alexander Galt, 1827-1863.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Hearst searched for an occupation, in 1887. Hearst took over management of a newspaper, the San Francisco Examiner, which his father received in 1880 as repayment for a gambling debt.

Target: Searching for an occupation, in 1887, Hearst took over management of a newspaper, the San Francisco Examiner, which his father received in 1880 as repayment for a gambling debt.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Hearst acquired more newspapers. Hearst created a chain that numbered nearly thirty papers in major American cities at its peak.

Target: Acquiring more newspapers, Hearst created a chain that numbered nearly thirty papers in major American cities at its peak.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: That is, war was declared by Congress. Public opinion was sickened by the bloodshed.

Target: That is, war was declared by Congress because public opinion was sickened by the bloodshed.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Shrubsole became organist of Spa Fields Chapel, London, and held the post till his death on 18 January 1806. Shrubsole was a successful Shrubsole in London, and among Shrubsole's pupils were William Russell and Benjamin Jacob.

Target: Shrubsole became organist of Spa Fields Chapel, London, and held the post till his death on 18 January 1806. He was a successful teacher in London, and among his pupils were William Russell and Benjamin Jacob.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Unfortunately the beds, in Emsworth where the oysters were sourced, had been contaminated with raw sewage. Many of the guests, including Stephens, contracted food poisoning.

Target: Unfortunately the beds, in Emsworth where the oysters were sourced, had been contaminated with raw sewage. Consequently, many of the guests, including Stephens, contracted food poisoning.


Source: Make the text more coherent: For some time he had given up medical practice. He regularly delivered courses of lectures until 1868, after which they were read by a deputy, P.W.

Target: Although for some time he had given up medical practice, he regularly delivered courses of lectures until 1868, after which they were read by a deputy, P.W.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Wilson had been a prize fighter and was associated with New York City Democratic political machine being a member of the so-called Mozart Hall Democracy faction headed by Fernando Wood. In 1856, prize fighter was elected as an alderman with the backing of the Democratic.

Target: Wilson had been a prize fighter and was associated with New York City Democratic political machine being a member of the so-called Mozart Hall Democracy faction headed by Fernando Wood. In 1856, Wilson was elected as an alderman with the backing of the Democratic Party.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Windows Driver Model was introduced largely. Developers would write drivers that were source compatible with future versions of Windows.

Target: Windows Driver Model was introduced largely so that developers would write drivers that were source compatible with future versions of Windows.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: It was intended to work as a rollback and recovery feature. If the installation of an application or a driver adversely affected the system.

Target: It was intended to work as a rollback and recovery feature so that if the installation of an application or a driver adversely affected the system.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Users can choose to download which update they want. High-priority updates must be downloaded and installed.

Target: Users can choose to download which update they want, although high-priority updates must be downloaded and installed.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Winnie Haatrecht was totally shocked by the disaster and his brother's death. Three days after the accident Winnie Haatrecht played with SC Heerenveen in the play-offs and a minute of silence was held.

Target: Winnie Haatrecht was totally shocked by the disaster and his brother's death. However three days after the accident he played with SC Heerenveen in the play-offs and a minute of silence was held.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Aisha breaks Tritannus' spell and turns Nereus and Tressa back to their normal selves. Back at Alfea, Faragonda gathers everybody into Aisha's office and tells everyone they need to prepare the Winx Club to fully master their Sirenix powers to defeat Tritannus.

Target: Aisha breaks Tritannus' spell and turns Nereus and Tressa back to their normal selves. Meanwhile, back at Alfea, Faragonda gathers everybody into her office and tells everyone they need to prepare the Winx Club to fully master their Sirenix powers to defeat Tritannus.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The Winx Club return to Alfea and discuss with Ms. Faragonda about their new threat, Tritannus. Ms. tells Winx Club Winx Club will need to acquire an ancient power called Sirenix to defeat Tritannus.

Target: The Winx Club return to Alfea and discuss with Ms. Faragonda about their new threat, Tritannus. Faragonda tells them they will need to acquire an ancient power called Sirenix to defeat Tritannus.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Did it steal into our lives. Did we seek it out and embrace it?

Target: Did it steal into our lives or did we seek it out and embrace it?


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Withernsea High School offers GCSEs and Cambridge Nationals as programmes of study for pupils. Students in the sixth form have the option to study from a range of A-levels and BTECs.

Target: Withernsea High School offers GCSEs and Cambridge Nationals as programmes of study for pupils, while students in the sixth form have the option to study from a range of A-levels and BTECs.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Gombrowicz wrote in Polish. Gombrowicz did not allow Gombrowicz's works to be published in Poland until the authorities lifted the ban on the unabridged version of Dziennik Gombrowicz's his diary, Gombrowicz which he described the Polish authorities' Gombrowicz on him.

Target: Gombrowicz wrote in Polish, but he did not allow his works to be published in Poland until the authorities lifted the ban on the unabridged version of Dziennik, his diary, in which he described the Polish authorities' attacks on him.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: While Matt (Josh Gad) cheers up Drex Cassie finds a clue about the mystery pill man. To use the new info Drex has to risk his new job.

Target: While Matt (Josh Gad) cheers up Drex Cassie finds a clue about the mystery pill man. However, to use the new info Drex has to risk his new job.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The results saw no party win a majority, with the Conservatives the largest party on 18 seats, the Liberal Democrats on 17 and 1 Independent. The Conservatives gained 1 seat in Mount Hermon East after Carl Thomson defeated Liberal Democrats councillor Norman Johns.

Target: The results saw no party win a majority, with the Conservatives the largest party on 18 seats, the Liberal Democrats on 17 and 1 Independent. The Conservatives gained 1 seat in Mount Hermon East after Carl Thomson defeated Liberal Democrat councillor Norman Johns.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Conservatives gained 1 seat in Mount Hermon East after Carl Thomson defeated Liberal Democrat councillor Norman Johns. The Liberal Democrat took another seat back after winning one of the two seats contested in Byfleet ward.

Target: The Conservatives gained 1 seat in Mount Hermon East after Carl Thomson defeated Liberal Democrat councillor Norman Johns. However, the Liberal Democrats took another seat back after winning one of the two seats contested in Byfleet ward.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 1974, the Commonwealth Court of Conciliation and Arbitration granted women the full adult wage. Resistance to women being employed in certain industries remained until well into the 1970s.

Target: In 1974, the Commonwealth Court of Conciliation and Arbitration granted women the full adult wage. However, resistance to women being employed in certain industries remained until well into the 1970s.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: John annexed the castle in 1214 and William sided with the rebels in 1216. John John responded by sending forces to attack the castle and successfully retook it.

Target: John annexed the castle in 1214 and William sided with the rebels in 1216. King John responded by sending forces to attack the castle and successfully retook it.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Most major English-language kennel clubs include a Working Group. Different kennel clubs may not include the same breeds in their Working Group.

Target: Most major English-language kennel clubs include a Working Group, although different kennel clubs may not include the same breeds in their Working Group.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The model is an all or nothing model. If the pages model needs to use increases.

Target: The model is an all or nothing model, meaning if the pages it needs to use increases.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Vandel prepares to fight them. Vandel hears Illidan psychically speak to him, telling him that he must be prepared.

Target: Preparing to fight them, Vandel hears Illidan psychically speak to him, telling him that he must be prepared.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Family relationships sometimes became problematic, Wu Zetian was the mother of four sons. Three of whom also carried the title of emperor, although one held that title only as a posthumous honor.

Target: Although family relationships sometimes became problematic, Wu Zetian was the mother of four sons, three of whom also carried the title of emperor, although one held that title only as a posthumous honor.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Scientifically credible forensic pathology information about the death of the child does not exist. Scholars lack real, concrete evidence about her death.

Target: Scientifically credible forensic pathology information about the death of the child does not exist, and scholars lack real, concrete evidence about her death.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Browser-based IRC scripts are not compatible with the DCC protocol. Users need to install a program such as mIRC on their computer.

Target: Since browser-based IRC scripts are not compatible with the DCC protocol, users need to install a program such as mIRC on their computer.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Xerocrassa nyeli is a species of air-breathing land snail the hairy snails and their allies. A species of air-breathing land snail is a pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Hygromiidae.

Target: Xerocrassa nyeli is a species of air-breathing land snail, a pulmonate gastropod mollusk in the family Hygromiidae, the hairy snails and their allies.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Most Xlib functions have a Display structure as an argument because they either operate on the channel or are relative to a specific channel. All Xlib functions that interact with the server need this structure for accessing the channel.

Target: Most Xlib functions have a Display structure as an argument because they either operate on the channel or are relative to a specific channel. In particular, all Xlib functions that interact with the server need this structure for accessing the channel.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: She learned of their deaths just as she went into labor with Amanda. Now she can not look at Amanda without feeling the guilt of her brothers' deaths.

Target: She learned of their deaths just as she went into labor with Amanda, and now she can not look at Amanda without feeling the guilt of her brothers' deaths.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: These powers allow him to fly, lift incredibly heavy objects, and change form (into a door, a table, a potato masher, etc.). Despite his powers, Yam Roll leads a mostly normal life.

Target: These powers allow him to fly, lift incredibly heavy objects, and change form (into a door, a table, a potato masher, etc.). But despite his powers, Yam Roll leads a mostly normal life.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Widely respected by all parts of New Orleans society as a southerner who never surrendered, Derringer is recruited by the Federal City Administrator, John Colton, to work as a secret agent at no pay ;. Only John Colton knows of Derringer's special role.

Target: Widely respected by all parts of New Orleans society as a southerner who never surrendered, Derringer is recruited by the Federal City Administrator, John Colton, to work as a secret agent at no pay ; and only Colton knows of his special role.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Yavneh started in 1942 in Paterson, New Jersey. Has roots going back at least seventeen years earlier.

Target: Yavneh started in 1942 in Paterson, New Jersey, but has roots going back at least seventeen years earlier.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The standard visualization for piano is a simplified version of sheet music. Users can also choose to display songs as traditional sheet music.

Target: The standard visualization for piano is a simplified version of sheet music, but users can also choose to display songs as traditional sheet music.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He leads them to a van where they are gassed in. While leaving, a shootout takes place between Tirusangu and JK, in which Judas dies after confessing.

Target: He leads them to a van where they are gassed in. But while leaving, a shootout takes place between Tirusangu and JK, in which Judas dies after confessing.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The movement was founded on 7 January 1930 in Belgrade, but was based in both Belgrade (in Serbia) and Zagreb (in Croatia). Mainly developed in Croatia.

Target: The movement was founded on 7 January 1930 in Belgrade, but was based in both Belgrade (in Serbia) and Zagreb (in Croatia), although mainly developed in Croatia.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In this state, Enishi's senses, speed, and reaction time dramatically improve, enabling him to immediately react to attacks before they are performed. Enishi's opponent is completely outmatched in every way offensively.

Target: In this state, Enishi's senses, speed, and reaction time dramatically improve, enabling him to immediately react to attacks before they are performed. Consequently, his opponent is completely outmatched in every way offensively.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The nearest rail head is New Delhi Railway Station, which is 18 kilometres (11 mi) by road. Within Mehrauli, finding Zafar Mahal in the labyrinth of narrow streets of the village needs direction and landmarks.

Target: The nearest rail head is New Delhi Railway Station, which is 18 kilometres (11 mi) by road. But within Mehrauli, finding Zafar Mahal in the labyrinth of narrow streets of the village needs direction and landmarks.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Cobbold grew up in the Middle East with Muslim nannies and learnt Arabic. Never called herself Muslim Cobbold believed Cobbold was Muslim.

Target: Cobbold grew up in the Middle East with Muslim nannies and learnt Arabic and although never called herself Muslim she believed she was Muslim.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Her parents are working abroad and. Do not appear in the Anime.

Target: Her parents are working abroad and hence do not appear in the Anime.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: From there the trail passes under Interstate 87, the Adirondack Northway, and brings you through the village of Round Lake. From Round Lake the trail crosses over U.S. Route 9 and through a portion of the towns of Clifton Park and Halfmoon.

Target: From there the trail passes under Interstate 87, the Adirondack Northway, and brings you through the village of Round Lake. From Round Lake Village the trail crosses over U.S. Route 9 and through a portion of the towns of Clifton Park and Halfmoon.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Zlydzens play their nasty tricks all together. Like many other small and harmful creatures Zlydzens are cowards and afraid to act individually.

Target: Zlydzens play their nasty tricks all together, because like many other small and harmful creatures they are cowards and afraid to act individually.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Twenty songs were recorded during the sessions. Ultimately 10 were chosen for the final track listing.

Target: Twenty songs were recorded during the sessions, but ultimately 10 were chosen for the final track listing.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Miles feeling leaves out as Taylor always spend her time with Meadow. Miles tricks her by overshadowing Meadow and telling her to color her hair by herself.

Target: Feeling left out as Taylor always spend her time with Meadow, Miles tricks her by overshadowing Meadow and telling her to color her hair by herself.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Taylor wants to give Meadow a surprise party, but it accidentally gets complicated when Miles throws a wrench into the plan. After a tragic sledding accident, Frankie breaks Taylor's wrist and is afraid to go to the hospital.

Target: Taylor wants to give Meadow a surprise party, but it accidentally gets complicated when Miles throws a wrench into the plan. Meanwhile, after a tragic sledding accident, Frankie breaks her wrist and is afraid to go to the hospital.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Having retreated to Weird World, he is confronted by the Nagas who pledge their alliegence to Argost. Argost on the Nagas's advise, orders his army to begin massacreing the humans.

Target: Having retreated to Weird World, he is confronted by the Nagas who pledge their alliegence to Argost. Argost then, on the Naga's advise, orders his army to begin massacreing the humans.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Now bitter and wanting revenge, the Saturdays have to keep Mizuki from killing the crimelord. After getting Fuzen put in jail, Saturdays give Mizuki the technology needed for him to continue his research.

Target: Now bitter and wanting revenge, the Saturdays have to keep Mizuki from killing the crimelord. In the end, after getting Fuzen put in jail, they give Mizuki the technology needed for him to continue his research.


Source: Make the text clearer: Back in the city, Doc and Drew discover that Sanctuary II is using a mother Lau as an energy source,. The constant attempts by mother's offspring to mother her.

Target: Back in the city, Doc and Drew discover that Sanctuary II is using a mother Lau as an energy source, hence the constant attempts by her offspring to free her.


Source: Make the text clearer: Pollyanna says that she's glad. Even though they were chased by the bear.

Target: Pollyanna says that she's glad, because even though they were chased by the bear.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Pollyanna questioning Pollyannas on whether she even knows anything about her aunt. Pollyanna tells them that all she knows is that her parents grew up in that town.

Target: Questioning Pollyanna on whether she even knows anything about her aunt, Pollyanna tells them that all she knows is that her parents grew up in that town.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Pollyanna wishes to play with her friend. Pollyanna changes into her favorite outfit and climbs out the window and onto the tree.

Target: Wishing to play with her friend, Pollyanna changes into her favorite outfit and climbs out the window and onto the tree.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Despite Janet's concerns, Jack is a complete gentleman. Things take a turn when gentleman, having been relocated to the couch rather than Jack's own bedroom, takes some medication before sleeping and winds up back in his own bed with Jenny.

Target: Despite Janet's concerns, Jack is a complete gentleman. However, things take a turn when Jack, having been relocated to the couch rather than his own bedroom, takes some medication before sleeping and winds up back in his own bed with Jenny.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jack burns with jealousy. Jack hides out in the kitchen and listens to Chrissy's boyfriend both praise and criticize his cooking, while also making advances to Chrissy.

Target: Burning with jealousy, Jack hides out in the kitchen and listens to Chrissy's boyfriend both praise and criticize his cooking, while also making advances to Chrissy.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Terri and Jack believe that Janet will have to make it with her dance instructor (Michael Bell) if she wants to make it as a dancer. Their inclinations turn out to be true and Jack consoles a devastated Janet.

Target: Terri and Jack believe that Janet will have to make it with her dance instructor (Michael Bell) if she wants to make it as a dancer. In the end, their inclinations turn out to be true and Jack consoles a devastated Janet.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Meanwhile, Mr. Furley has told off his brother. The same freeloader offered Furley Mr. a supposed manager's job in the same.

Target: Meanwhile, Mr. Furley has told off his brother because the same freeloader offered Mr. Furley a supposed manager's job in the same.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Sakura literally re -meets her childhood when Cherry slips her a pill that makes her childhood self appear, who wants to play. Everyone else thinks it's her illegitimate child.

Target: Sakura literally re -meets her childhood when Cherry slips her a pill that makes her childhood self appear, who wants to play. But everyone else thinks it's her illegitimate child.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Production spreads habit with intermediate vigour ; full flowering season is medium-late. Production is heavy, fruit is medium or medium-large, with smooth skin ; white lenticels, no russet, excellent taste characteristics.

Target: Spreading habit with intermediate vigour ; full flowering season is medium-late, production is heavy, fruit is medium or medium-large, with smooth skin ; white lenticels, no russet, excellent taste characteristics.


Source: Make the text clearer: Birds like the hummingbird came from the south. Birds like the jay came from the north.

Target: Birds like the hummingbird came from the south, while birds like the jay came from the north.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Both males and females like to feed at flowers. Males also like to puddle on damp ground.

Target: Both males and females like to feed at flowers, while males also like to puddle on damp ground.


Source: Make the text clearer: Some are purely vegetable based. Many use light meat or fish stocks.

Target: Some are purely vegetable based but many use light meat or fish stocks.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: However, this is an actual instrument, though quite rare. It is not completely fictional anymore.

Target: However, this is an actual instrument, though quite rare. Hence, it is not completely fictional anymore.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Vulcan Harp appears in the Star Trek universe, played by Mr. Spock. This is an actual Vulcan Harp, though quite rare.

Target: The Vulcan Harp appears in the Star Trek universe, played by Mr. Spock. However, this is an actual instrument, though quite rare.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Built in 1839 for Dr James Christie, first full-time government doctor in the area. James Christie was also government doctor, government doctor & director of Beaufort Bank.

Target: Built in 1839 for Dr James Christie, first full-time government doctor in the area. He was also town councillor, MP & director of Beaufort Bank.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Bohatch was killed after a collision with Perryopolis officer Richard Champion who was speeding on Route 51 with lights and sirens on. Officer officer died at the scene.

Target: Bohatch was killed after a collision with Perryopolis officer Richard Champion who was speeding on Route 51 with lights and sirens on. Officer Champion died at the scene.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This is a list of neighborhoods in the metropolitan city of Kathmandu. Kathmandu is the Kathmandu and the largest municipality of Nepal.

Target: This is a list of neighborhoods in the metropolitan city of Kathmandu. Kathmandu is the capital and the largest municipality of Nepal.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Mr. Bergstrom took over for Ms. Hoover after she believed she had got Lyme disease and Lisa immediately took to him because he was the kind of male role model she needed in her life. After Ms. Ms. returned, he had to leave Springfield.

Target: Mr. Bergstrom took over for Ms. Hoover after she believed she had got Lyme disease and Lisa immediately took to him because he was the kind of male role model she needed in her life. However, after Ms. Hoover returned, he had to leave Springfield.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The Senate shall choose their other Officers, and also a President pro tempore, in the absence of the Vice President. When Vice President shall exercise the Office of President of the United States.

Target: The Senate shall choose their other Officers, and also a President pro tempore, in the absence of the Vice President, or when he shall exercise the Office of President of the United States.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The crew of ten took to a raft. Five survived to be rescued by the Norwegian barque Esteraa ten days later.

Target: The crew of ten took to a raft and five survived to be rescued by the Norwegian barque Esteraa ten days later.


Source: Fix coherence: World War II: The cargo ship was bombed and damaged in the Mediterranean Sea off Tripoli, Libya by British aircraft and was beached on 30 May. She was refloated and scrapped in Barrow, British, from October 1948.

Target: World War II: The cargo ship was bombed and damaged in the Mediterranean Sea off Tripoli, Libya by British aircraft and was beached on 30 May. She was refloated and scrapped in Barrow, United Kingdom, from October 1948.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Later towed into Willemstad. She capsized during repairs.

Target: Although later towed into Willemstad, she capsized during repairs.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Work breakdown structure in project management is a deliverable oriented decomposition of a project into smaller components. Work breakdown structure is a work breakdown structure (WBS).

Target: work breakdown structure, A work breakdown structure (WBS), in project management is a deliverable oriented decomposition of a project into smaller components.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: These names were references to the abundance of wildflowers in the canyon and one of the best rattlesnake dens in the United States, respectively. Excessive collection of rattlesnakes greatly reduced the populations.

Target: These names were references to the abundance of wildflowers in the canyon and one of the best rattlesnake dens in the United States, respectively. However, excessive collection of rattlesnakes greatly reduced the populations.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Luckily all 530 pupils were evacuated. No casualties were reported but all three floors above the dining hall were destroyed.

Target: Luckily all 530 pupils were evacuated and no casualties were reported but all three floors above the dining hall were destroyed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In 1786 Wood's square dome was demolished. Plans were made by Wyatt for a new dome over the central courtyard.

Target: In 1786 Wood's square dome was demolished and plans were made by Wyatt for a new dome over the central courtyard.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In the spring of 1983, buildings in the expressway's path were demolished. Construction began on July 29, 1983.

Target: In the spring of 1983, buildings in the expressway's path were demolished, and construction began on July 29, 1983.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Moreover, the community as a whole does not actually save money. Consumers have to spend so much more on the more expensive local products.

Target: Moreover, the community as a whole does not actually save money because consumers have to spend so much more on the more expensive local products.


Source: Make the text more logical: The Locrians hardly viewed men and women as equals. Women held special religious rights, which men could gain access to only by marrying them.

Target: Although the Locrians hardly viewed men and women as equals, women held special religious rights, which men could gain access to only by marrying them.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Medicare pays only for medically necessary skilled nursing facility or home health care. Certain conditions must be met for Medicare to pay for even those types of care.

Target: Medicare pays only for medically necessary skilled nursing facility or home health care. However, certain conditions must be met for Medicare to pay for even those types of care.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: When the percentage of elderly individuals in the population rises to nearly 14 % in 2040 as predicted, a huge strain will be put on caregivers' finances as well as continuing care retirement facilities and nursing homes. Demand will increase dramatically.

Target: When the percentage of elderly individuals in the population rises to nearly 14 % in 2040 as predicted, a huge strain will be put on caregivers' finances as well as continuing care retirement facilities and nursing homes because demand will increase dramatically.


Source: Make the text clearer: It marked the second consecutive season in which the Ducks won the first-half title. Was Ducks' third-consecutive half-season division title.

Target: It marked the second consecutive season in which the Ducks won the first-half title and was their third-consecutive half-season division title.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It descends leisurely to NY 23. It leaves the Catskill Park but not the Catskills, as it immediately goes over several ranges of 3,000-foot (910 m) peaks to Huntersfield Mountain, where NYSDEC has cut some views near the summit.

Target: Descending leisurely to NY 23, it leaves the Catskill Park but not the Catskills, as it immediately goes over several ranges of 3,000-foot (910 m) peaks to Huntersfield Mountain, where NYSDEC has cut some views near the summit.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In sum, Loose Change is researched very shoddily, making numerous mistakes of fact and judgment. This has not prevented Loose Change from becoming extraordinarily popular.

Target: In sum, Loose Change is researched very shoddily, making numerous mistakes of fact and judgment. Nevertheless, this has not prevented it from becoming extraordinarily popular.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Lordship Lane North Yorkshire Lordship Lane is a street in Selby and Wistow.

Target: Lordship Lane, a street in Selby and Wistow, North Yorkshire


Source: Fix coherence: This was duly released on a single on Polydor. Legal problems prevented her from going any further with it.

Target: This was duly released on a single on Polydor, but legal problems prevented her from going any further with it.


Source: Make the text clearer: The farms used to be powered by the fast flowing tributaries of the river Cocker which runs through the whole length of the valley. Most of houses and cottages in Lorton started off as barns and mills.

Target: The farms used to be powered by the fast flowing tributaries of the river Cocker which runs through the whole length of the valley. Furthermore, most of houses and cottages in Lorton started off as barns and mills.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It is likely that each hamlet or native settlement demarcated its burial area. Hamlet is a decisive hamlet to define social stratification by hamlet's funerary trousseau and the spatial distribution of the site and the village.

Target: It is likely that each hamlet or native settlement demarcated its burial area, because it is a decisive element to define social stratification by its funerary trousseau and the spatial distribution of the site and the village.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The duo had attempted to clear Langstaff's version for sampling, but were unable to. They had Enn Reitel re-record the vocal snippet.

Target: The duo had attempted to clear Langstaff's version for sampling, but were unable to. In the end, they had Enn Reitel re-record the vocal snippet.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The band had initially intended to use a sample of Errol Flynn talking about his travels. Since band only included four destinations they compiled a list of 200 places and recorded Standing reading them.

Target: The band had initially intended to use a sample of Errol Flynn talking about his travels, but since it only included four destinations they compiled a list of 200 places and recorded Standing reading them.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Canal's mind functions as a computer, and she is very practical, analytical and logical. She sometimes shows her emotions when she teases Kain for his mistakes or has a quarrel with Millie.

Target: Canal's mind functions as a computer, and she is very practical, analytical and logical. On the other hand, she sometimes shows her emotions when she teases Kain for his mistakes or has a quarrel with Millie.


Source: Make the text clearer: Edith and Louis were both injured due to an accidental gas fire and the resulting fumes in 1915. Louis seemed to have suffered a stroke, lost Louis' ability to speak, and occasionally required a wheelchair for mobility.

Target: Edith and Louis were both injured due to an accidental gas fire and the resulting fumes in 1915. Davis seemed to have suffered a stroke, lost his ability to speak, and occasionally required a wheelchair for mobility.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Villaret set his flag on the 120-gun Montagne. Villaret reorganised and revitalised the Brest fleet.

Target: Setting his flag on the 120-gun Montagne, Villaret reorganised and revitalised the Brest fleet.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Suffering severe losses. He rallied his remaining ships and rescued several of his ships ; most importantly, the grain convoy reached Brest unmolested.

Target: Although suffering severe losses, he rallied his remaining ships and rescued several of his ships ; most importantly, the grain convoy reached Brest unmolested.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: During their absence, his grandmother, Blanche of Castile, acted as regent. When grandmother died in 1252, his parents were still crusading and the eight-year-old Louis was appointed regent.

Target: During their absence, his grandmother, Blanche of Castile, acted as regent. However, when she died in 1252, his parents were still crusading and the eight-year-old Louis was appointed regent.


Source: Make the text more coherent: She was the second of 12 children in a struggling family. Like many girls at that time left school at 13.

Target: She was the second of 12 children in a struggling family, and like many girls at that time left school at 13.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: She was survived by her son, Ernest Gillmore (or Gilmore), whose father she had married at an early age. At the time of son's mother's Ernest Gillmore son was serving aboard a US Navy torpedo boat.

Target: She was survived by her son, Ernest Gillmore (or Gilmore), whose father she had married at an early age. At the time of his mother's death Ernest was serving aboard a US Navy torpedo boat.


Source: Make the text more coherent: People living in mountainous areas were surviving on plants for more than fifty percent of their diets. People around water or in the marshes were hunting fish and other wetland wildlife.

Target: People living in mountainous areas were surviving on plants for more than fifty percent of their diets whereas people around water or in the marshes were hunting fish and other wetland wildlife.


Source: Make the text clearer: Turbo codes still seem to perform better than LDPCs at low code rates. At least the design of well performing low rate codes is easier for Turbo Codes.

Target: Turbo codes still seem to perform better than LDPCs at low code rates, or at least the design of well performing low rate codes is easier for Turbo Codes.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The angular velocity of any one of the poles is a function of its distance in front of the car, the speed of the car, and the distance between the roadway and the poles. Any particular angular velocity corresponds directly to a distance.

Target: The angular velocity of any one of the poles is a function of its distance in front of the car, the speed of the car, and the distance between the roadway and the poles. Thus, any particular angular velocity corresponds directly to a distance.


Source: Make the text more consistent: III an operational requirement. Apparently due to limited supplies, he limited its use to patrols over the Atlantic, as opposed to those taking place over the Bay of Biscay.

Target: III an operational requirement. However, apparently due to limited supplies, he limited its use to patrols over the Atlantic, as opposed to those taking place over the Bay of Biscay.


Source: Make the text more logical: He can be arrested by the Federal officers at any time they please. Yet he is suffered to go at large, and murder white men at his pleasure.

Target: He can be arrested by the Federal officers at any time they please, and yet he is suffered to go at large, and murder white men at his pleasure.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Besides, they have already stationed troops at critical positions and are poised to strike. We should remain composed and calm our men, after which we will have a change of plans and prepare to withdraw.

Target: Besides, they have already stationed troops at critical positions and are poised to strike. Hence, we should remain composed and calm our men, after which we will have a change of plans and prepare to withdraw.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Additionally, the school offered trips to relevant locations in conjunction with specific classes. Students in the Western Cultures class spent 15 days in western Europe at the close of the school year.

Target: Additionally, the school offered trips to relevant locations in conjunction with specific classes. For example, students in the Western Cultures class spent 15 days in western Europe at the close of the school year.


Source: Fix sentence flow: On September 26, Duda hit his first career grand slam in the Mets' 10-2 victory over the Cincinnati Reds. That victory clinched the NL East division title for the Mets.

Target: On September 26, Duda hit his first career grand slam in the Mets' 10-2 victory over the Cincinnati Reds. That victory clinched the NL East division title for the New York Mets.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He denied creation from nothing and the immortality of the soul. He saw God in Nature as its driving force and vital force, both eternal.

Target: Denying creation from nothing and the immortality of the soul, he saw God in Nature as its driving force and vital force, both eternal.


Source: Make the text coherent: Despite assurances, the return of Vanini and Genocchi was not entirely peaceful ; in January 1615 Genocchi was arrested by the Inquisitor of Genoa. Vanini fearing the same fate, ran away again to France and headed to Lyon.

Target: Despite assurances, the return of Vanini and Genocchi was not entirely peaceful ; in January 1615 Genocchi was arrested by the Inquisitor of Genoa. Vanini therefore, fearing the same fate, ran away again to France and headed to Lyon.


Source: Make the text more logical: By the age of eight, Ricksen's parents had divorced. Ricksen's mother reportedly began to Ricksen's her daughter's acting career in particular as a source of stability for the entire family.

Target: By the age of eight, Ricksen's parents had divorced, and her mother reportedly began to view her daughter's acting career in particular as a source of stability for the entire family.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Always described as a cowboy. Luke generally acts as a righter of wrongs or bodyguard of some sort, where he excels thanks to his resourcefulness and incredible gun prowess.

Target: Although always described as a cowboy, Luke generally acts as a righter of wrongs or bodyguard of some sort, where he excels thanks to his resourcefulness and incredible gun prowess.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Initially, a mapping between valid input characters and code-points must be created. Consider that the valid characters are the lower-case letters from a to f.

Target: Initially, a mapping between valid input characters and code-points must be created. For example, consider that the valid characters are the lower-case letters from a to f.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Dornemann retired from her positions with the DFD and the WIDF in 1953. Dornemann remained a member of the DFD national executive till 1989.

Target: Dornemann retired from her positions with the DFD and the WIDF in 1953. She nevertheless remained a member of the DFD national executive till 1989.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Lunfardo words are inserted in the normal flow of Rioplatense Spanish sentences, but grammar and pronunciation do not change. An average Rioplatense Spanish-speaking person reading tango lyrics will need, at most, the translation of a discrete set of words.

Target: Lunfardo words are inserted in the normal flow of Rioplatense Spanish sentences, but grammar and pronunciation do not change. Thus, an average Spanish-speaking person reading tango lyrics will need, at most, the translation of a discrete set of words.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Goubaux saw growth in industry, commerce, agriculture and applied sciences, and saw that parents wanted their children to be prepared for these occupations through special studies. Contemporary state education ignored these needs and was solely concerned with classical literary studies.

Target: Goubaux saw growth in industry, commerce, agriculture and applied sciences, and saw that parents wanted their children to be prepared for these occupations through special studies. However, contemporary state education ignored these needs and was solely concerned with classical literary studies.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Older cats tend to have gastrointestinal lymphoma without FeLV infection. Tests more sensitive to low level FeLV infections and replication-defective FeLV have found that many of these cats have been previously exposed.

Target: Older cats tend to have gastrointestinal lymphoma without FeLV infection, although tests more sensitive to low level FeLV infections and replication-defective FeLV have found that many of these cats have been previously exposed.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The National Theatre is located next to it. The National Theatre opened in 2002.

Target: The National Theatre, which opened in 2002, is located next to it.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: There can be a kind of upholding of ourselves, of making ourselves important. We compare ourselves with someone else.

Target: There can be a kind of upholding of ourselves, of making ourselves important, while we compare ourselves with someone else.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: It was launched in China on 1 November 2014 as a slightly smaller alternative of the MG 6,. Also called MG 5 in some markets e.g. Thailand.

Target: It was launched in China on 1 November 2014 as a slightly smaller alternative of the MG 6, hence also called MG 5 in some markets e.g. Thailand.


Source: Make the text coherent: Mercer received the Presidential Medal of Freedom in 1983. Freedom is america's highest civilian medal.

Target: Mercer received the Presidential Medal of Freedom, America's highest civilian medal, in 1983.


Source: Fix coherence errors: It was based on his short story by the same name, published February 3, 1940, in The Saturday Evening Post. Several of his novels were adapted for films by other writers.

Target: It was based on his short story by the same name, published February 3, 1940, in The Saturday Evening Post. Moreover, several of his novels were adapted for films by other writers.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Macedonians settled Romania after Ottoman pressure traditionally forced members of several Macedonians and other South Slavic communities to seek refuge in Wallachia -. Under Ottoman rule as well.

Target: Macedonians settled Romania after Ottoman pressure traditionally forced members of several Macedonians and other South Slavic communities to seek refuge in Wallachia-although under Ottoman rule as well.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: MacsBug is not installed by default with Mac OS. Every Macintosh since the Macintosh Plus includes a debugger in ROM known as MicroBug.

Target: MacsBug is not installed by default with Mac OS, although every Macintosh since the Macintosh Plus includes a debugger in ROM known as MicroBug.


Source: Make the text more coherent: When this arrangement was tried out, it was found that it provided lift from both arms of the U, eliminating the need for two rows of lift coils. By connecting the U's to a 3-phase power supply, thrust was created.

Target: When this arrangement was tried out, it was found that it provided lift from both arms of the U, eliminating the need for two rows of lift coils. Finally, by connecting the U's to a 3-phase power supply, thrust was created.


Source: Fix coherence errors: If date of its construction 1140 A.D. is accepted the lady becomes a contemporary of Shah Yousaf Gardezi who died in 1136 A.D. Construction of the building is a 13th century structure.

Target: If date of its construction 1140 A.D. is accepted the lady becomes a contemporary of Shah Yousaf Gardezi who died in 1136 A.D. However construction of the building is a 13th century structure.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She was crowned as Miss Philippines in 1967 and was admired by many Filipinos. As years passed, the Filipinos community was surprised at the work she brought forward regarding women's emancipation.

Target: She was crowned as Miss Philippines in 1967 and was admired by many Filipinos. Yet, as years passed, the Filipino community was surprised at the work she brought forward regarding women's emancipation.


Source: Fix coherence: Brown perceived that his standing in the community had been damaged by the trial. Brown resigned his seat in the Council in March.

Target: Perceiving that his standing in the community had been damaged by the trial, Brown resigned his seat in the Council in March.


Source: Make the text more logical: He spent an estimated $2.5 million. He chartered a Boeing 747, a DC-8 and a Concorde to fly in eight hundred of the world's rich and famous from New York and London.

Target: Spending an estimated $2.5 million, he chartered a Boeing 747, a DC-8 and a Concorde to fly in eight hundred of the world's rich and famous from New York and London.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He was previously the ninth President and Provost of University College London -- the head as well as principal academic and administrative officer of the university -- for over a decade from 2003 until 2013. President is the current President of the University of York.

Target: He was previously the ninth President and Provost of University College London -- the head as well as principal academic and administrative officer of the university -- for over a decade from 2003 until 2013. He is the current Chancellor of the University of York.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mamie Thurman was a popular woman in Logan County, West Virginia who was murdered on June 21, 1932. Mamie Thurman was the woman of Jack Thurman, a Logan city patrolman.

Target: Mamie Thurman was a popular woman in Logan County, West Virginia who was murdered on June 21, 1932. She was the wife of Jack Thurman, a Logan city patrolman.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The Yankees then replaced the Giants as the team's parent for 1948. The 1948 Yankees finished four games out of the playoffs and drew the third-smallest attendance in the league.

Target: The Yankees then replaced the Giants as the team's parent for 1948. However, the 1948 Manchester Yankees finished four games out of the playoffs and drew the third-smallest attendance in the league.


Source: Make the text more consistent: While he was on vacation that summer, they placed him on administrative leave. Had security remove items from his desk, ostensibly to sort Ortega's personal property from state property, and change the lock on his door.

Target: While he was on vacation that summer, they placed him on administrative leave and had security remove items from his desk, ostensibly to sort Ortega's personal property from state property, and change the lock on his door.


Source: Make the text more logical: The totality test also, in her opinion, fails. While it considers.

Target: The totality test also, in her opinion, fails because while it considers.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Well known for many years in the organ building industry. They achieved wider notability in 2004 with the refurbishment of the Royal Albert Hall's Father Willis Grand Organ.

Target: Although well known for many years in the organ building industry, they achieved wider notability in 2004 with the refurbishment of the Royal Albert Hall's Father Willis Grand Organ.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The mandibular canines usually have only one root. Sometimes the root may be bifurcated, or have two roots.

Target: The mandibular canines usually have only one root, but sometimes the root may be bifurcated, or have two roots.


Source: Make the text coherent: After releasing a couple of successful albums in Greece, Mando surprised everyone at the end of 2001, by doing something she had wanted for a long time. Which seemed impossible in the Greece music industry.

Target: After releasing a couple of successful albums in Greece, Mando surprised everyone at the end of 2001, by doing something she had wanted for a long time but which seemed impossible in the Greek music industry.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is helpful in cases where all symptoms of mange are present. No mites are observed with a microscope.

Target: It is helpful in cases where all symptoms of mange are present but no mites are observed with a microscope.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Called a creek, the watercourse is designated as a river, and its headwaters are impounded by the Mangrove Creek Dam. Which forms a major part of the water supply to the Central Coast.

Target: Although called a creek, the watercourse is designated as a river, and its headwaters are impounded by the Mangrove Creek Dam, which forms a major part of the water supply to the Central Coast.


Source: Fix sentence flow: As a singer he always retained the ability to deliver the core of the traditional art. He was not ashamed to commercialize flamenco to attract a mass popularity ; then he gained fame and fortune, as well as adding to a checkered reputation.

Target: Although as a singer he always retained the ability to deliver the core of the traditional art, he was not ashamed to commercialize flamenco to attract a mass popularity ; then he gained fame and fortune, as well as adding to a checkered reputation.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Possible relation to the Pixie-bob breed is unknown. The Pixie-bob breed also ranges from rumpy to fully tailed.

Target: Possible relation to the Pixie-bob breed, which also ranges from rumpy to fully tailed, is unknown.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Manikkam knows that Raja will not pass it with his mental health. During the oral examination, Manikkam does many cheap tricks to help Raja's friend Raja and Raja finally Raja's his doctorate diploma.

Target: Manikkam knows that Raja will not pass it with his mental health, so during the oral examination, Manikkam does many cheap tricks to help his friend Raja and Raja finally gets his doctorate diploma.


Source: Fix sentence transition: And it's sort of a condensed essence of Bruce. While it's satirical, it's also very powerful, emotionally, and insightful and funny.

Target: And it's sort of a condensed essence of Bruce. And while it's satirical, it's also very powerful, emotionally, and insightful and funny.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Local culture made it uncommon for people present during clinics to videotape the demonstrations. Only a limited number of amateur clips showing Clause have been discovered and made available online.

Target: Local culture made it uncommon for people present during clinics to videotape the demonstrations. Therefore only a limited number of amateur clips showing Clause have been discovered and made available online.


Source: Make the text clearer: By then the Belgian Judo Federation had split,. Why the promotion was authorized by Belgian Judo Federation's regional subfederation.

Target: By then the Belgian Judo Federation had split, hence why the promotion was authorized by its regional subfederation.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In a game against the Kansas City Brigade, he surpassed career milestones of 500 receptions and 6,000 receiving yards. In 2007, Nash rushed four times for five yards and three touchdowns.

Target: In a game against the Kansas City Brigade, he surpassed career milestones of 500 receptions and 6,000 receiving yards. Additionally in 2007, Nash rushed four times for five yards and three touchdowns.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He featured as a main cast member of the first series of the CBBC show Sorry, I've Got No Head, but was absent from the second. Some of his characters were recast.

Target: He featured as a main cast member of the first series of the CBBC show Sorry, I've Got No Head, but was absent from the second, meaning some of his characters were recast.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Her parents were Monroe Alpheus Majors and his second wife, Estelle C. Bonds. Estelle C. Bonds took the last name, Estelle C. Bonds, after Estelle C. Bonds parents parents divorced in 1917.

Target: Her parents were Monroe Alpheus Majors and his second wife, Estelle C. Bonds. Margaret took the last name, Bonds, after her parents divorced in 1917.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: She exited in the first round at Roland Garros, winning three games against Swede Johanna Larsson. Her ranking plunged 44 places down to 88th after failing to defend quarterfinal points.

Target: She exited in the first round at Roland Garros, winning three games against Swede Johanna Larsson. As a result, her ranking plunged 44 places down to 88th after failing to defend quarterfinal points.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Kirilenko is using the Yonex ezone AI 98 racket. Kirilenko wears the adidas by Stella McCartney barricade line of shoes and clothes which Kirilenko was once the Kirilenko of.

Target: Kirilenko is using the Yonex ezone AI 98 racket. She wears the adidas by Stella McCartney barricade line of shoes and clothes which she was once the ambassador of.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: In 1898, a newspaper reported that Tepe attempted to receive pension for her military service. No records indicate that Tepe received this pension.

Target: In 1898, a newspaper reported that Tepe attempted to receive pension for her military service, yet no records indicate that she received this pension.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: For the better part of 20 years Marietta soldiered on. Starting in the early to mid 1890s, the markets for borax and salt had expanded from the central and western area of Nevada to the growing markets in southern California.

Target: For the better part of 20 years Marietta soldiered on. However, starting in the early to mid 1890s, the markets for borax and salt had expanded from the central and western area of Nevada to the growing markets in southern California.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Her father Gennadiy Verenikin is of Russian descent. Her mother Irina is half Jewish (her family came from Belorussia in 1870s).

Target: Her father Gennadiy Verenikin is of Russian descent and her mother Irina is half Jewish (her family came from Belorussia in 1870s).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: She swam the anchor leg for Canada's third-place team in the women's 4x100-metre freestyle relay. She won an Olympic bronze medal, together with teammates Angela Coughlan, Marilyn Corson and Elaine Tanner.

Target: Swimming the anchor leg for Canada's third-place team in the women's 4x100-metre freestyle relay, she won an Olympic bronze medal, together with teammates Angela Coughlan, Marilyn Corson and Elaine Tanner.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Extremely on-and-off-again throughout the show's course-their relationship originated as a platonic friendship in the pilot episode. Which later escalated into romantic feelings.

Target: Although extremely on-and-off-again throughout the show's course-their relationship originated as a platonic friendship in the pilot episode, which later escalated into romantic feelings.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: If they answer from men, they would be in conflict with the people, who did believe in John. people refuse to answer and accordingly so does Jesus.

Target: If they answer from men, they would be in conflict with the people, who did believe in John. They therefore refuse to answer and accordingly so does Jesus.


Source: Make the text more logical: After Dukakis' defeat, Mr. Gearan returned to run the Massachusetts Office of Federal Relations until 1989. Mr. was Mr. of the Democratic Governors Association from 1989 to 1992.

Target: After Dukakis' defeat, Mr. Gearan returned to run the Massachusetts Office of Federal Relations until 1989. Gearan was Executive Director of the Democratic Governors Association from 1989 to 1992.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The school received a $35,520 grant from the state to put up a windmill. Despite the fact that the school was built close to a mountaintop, research showed in 2005 that there wasn't enough wind to actually make installation of the turbine worthwhile.

Target: The school received a $35,520 grant from the state to put up a windmill, but despite the fact that the school was built close to a mountaintop, research showed in 2005 that there wasn't enough wind to actually make installation of the turbine worthwhile.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Marsdenia rostrata Australia. Marsdenia rostrata is the Milk Vine is a common climbing plant found in eastern.

Target: Marsdenia rostrata, the Milk Vine is a common climbing plant found in eastern, Australia.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She has been a member of the English department since 1986 and joined the faculty at the School of Law in 2003. In addition, member was the member of the Society for Critical Exchange, a national organization devoted to collaborative interdisciplinary work in theory.

Target: She has been a member of the English department since 1986 and joined the faculty at the School of Law in 2003. In addition, she was the Director of the Society for Critical Exchange, a national organization devoted to collaborative interdisciplinary work in theory.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He is finally driven to mindless rage by an attempt of the cosmic powers to usurp his reign, and decides in one fateful, final moment to absorb the entirety of the multiverse back into himself. None might ever again threaten his reign.

Target: He is finally driven to mindless rage by an attempt of the cosmic powers to usurp his reign, and decides in one fateful, final moment to absorb the entirety of the multiverse back into himself, so that none might ever again threaten his reign.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Davis won a bidding war against the Sultan of Brunei, Hassanal Bolkiah. Davis bought the Beverly Hills Hotel for $135 million in 1986.

Target: Winning a bidding war against the Sultan of Brunei, Hassanal Bolkiah, Davis bought the Beverly Hills Hotel for $135 million in 1986.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Evershed was also greatly interested in poetry. While she loved Dante's work, she was worried about Evershed's cosmography.

Target: Evershed was also greatly interested in poetry, and while she loved Dante's work, she was worried about his cosmography.


Source: Make the text clearer: She had maintained her public activities for four decades. Being prone to recurring illness.

Target: She had maintained her public activities for four decades although being prone to recurring illness.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Despite the change of surroundings Blood's health further deteriorated when she became pregnant, and in 1785 Wollstonecraft left the school and followed Blood to nurse her, but to no avail. Wollstonecraft's abandonment of the school led to its failure.

Target: Despite the change of surroundings Blood's health further deteriorated when she became pregnant, and in 1785 Wollstonecraft left the school and followed Blood to nurse her, but to no avail. Moreover, her abandonment of the school led to its failure.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: She argues for rationality, pointing out that Burke's system would lead to the continuation of slavery, simply. System had been an ancestral system.

Target: She argues for rationality, pointing out that Burke's system would lead to the continuation of slavery, simply because it had been an ancestral tradition.