Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Berlenbach Jr. became involved in designing Roman Catholic churches, specializing in the Romanesque style. Also created designs influenced by Italian Renaissance later on.

Target: Berlenbach Jr. became involved in designing Roman Catholic churches, specializing in the Romanesque style although also created designs influenced by Italian Renaissance later on.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Byzantines were able to overcome the Muslim ships with Greek fire, while Hugh's troops entered the town. In 941 Hugh allowed the Muslim of Fraxinetum to harass the Alpine passes for Hugh's own political ends in his struggle with Berengar of Ivrea.

Target: The Byzantines were able to overcome the Muslim ships with Greek fire, while Hugh's troops entered the town. However, in 941 Hugh allowed the Muslims of Fraxinetum to harass the Alpine passes for his own political ends in his struggle with Berengar of Ivrea.


Source: Fix coherence: Though he was unsuccessful at stopping them, he did manage however to collect relief funds for the deportees. He also received assurances that the Catholic and Protestant Armenians would not be deported, as written by Alice Shepard Riggs :

Target: Though he was unsuccessful at stopping them, he did manage however to collect relief funds for the deportees. Meanwhile, he also received assurances that the Catholic and Protestant Armenians would not be deported, as written by Alice Shepard Riggs :


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: I thank you again for your prayers and favors. I remain, as ever,

Target: Thanking you again for your prayers and favors, I remain, as ever,


Source: Make the text more logical: During his term, the Florida Highway Patrol was created,. Cone opposed new taxes.

Target: During his term, the Florida Highway Patrol was created, and although Cone opposed new taxes.


Source: Fix coherence: He also designed Day Hall in 1947. Day Hall is cornell's main administrative building.

Target: He also designed Day Hall, Cornell's main administrative building, in 1947.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Palevsky felt Nicholas could resolve the myriad of issues pertaining to MOCA. Nicholas was an Nicholas and a real estate developer with broad experience in design and construction.

Target: Palevsky felt Nicholas could resolve the myriad of issues pertaining to MOCA because Nicholas was an attorney and a real estate developer with broad experience in design and construction.


Source: Make the text more coherent: He completed his studies in 1938. He emigrated to Melbourne that same year, and became a registered architect in 1940.

Target: Completing his studies in 1938, he emigrated to Melbourne that same year, and became a registered architect in 1940.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: He prepared an annual report to the legislature from this department for the first time. He improved the conditions of the citizen soldiers and increased their numbers to 12,000 effective men.

Target: He prepared an annual report to the legislature from this department for the first time. Additionally he improved the conditions of the citizen soldiers and increased their numbers to 12,000 effective men.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Virtualization is valuable to service providers wishing to offer their users the ability to have custom configurations and yet keep the overall system easy to maintain. Two different customers could need different versions of the same software.

Target: Virtualization is valuable to service providers wishing to offer their users the ability to have custom configurations and yet keep the overall system easy to maintain. For example, two different customers could need different versions of the same software.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: A presentation is useful for computation. Since tensoring is right-exact, tensoring the above presentation with a module, say, N gives :

Target: A presentation is useful for computation. For example, since tensoring is right-exact, tensoring the above presentation with a module, say, N gives :


Source: Fix sentence flow: This separate registration generally proceeded smoothly. One mosque in Darkhan-Uul aimag was told that the aimag legislature had approved its application, but it did not receive documentation, leaving it unable to register with the Ministry of Justice and Home Affairs.

Target: This separate registration generally proceeded smoothly. However, one mosque in Darkhan-Uul aimag was told that the aimag legislature had approved its application, but it did not receive documentation, leaving it unable to register with the Ministry of Justice and Home Affairs.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: This applies the Establishment Clause to the states as well as the federal government. Several state constitutions make the protection of persons from religious discrimination conditional on their acknowledgment of the existence of a deity, making freedom of religion in those states inapplicable to atheists.

Target: This applies the Establishment Clause to the states as well as the federal government. However, several state constitutions make the protection of persons from religious discrimination conditional on their acknowledgment of the existence of a deity, making freedom of religion in those states inapplicable to atheists.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Civil rights cases are typically brought in federal courts. Such state provisions are mainly of symbolic importance.

Target: Civil rights cases are typically brought in federal courts, so such state provisions are mainly of symbolic importance.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: On the one hand it means to wear another person's personality. On the other it has an erotic notion to it.

Target: On the one hand it means to wear another person's personality, and on the other it has an erotic notion to it.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: By the summer of 1793, most French departments in one way. Another opposed the central Paris government.

Target: By the summer of 1793, most French departments in one way or another opposed the central Paris government.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The Jacobin Society began as a broad, general organisation for political debate. As Jacobin Society grew in members, various factions developed with widely differing views.

Target: The Jacobin Society began as a broad, general organisation for political debate, but as it grew in members, various factions developed with widely differing views.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In 1799, when the French armies abroad experienced some setbacks, the newly chosen director Sieyes considered a new overhaul necessary for the Directory's form of government. In Sieyes ''s opinion French needed a stronger executive.

Target: In 1799, when the French armies abroad experienced some setbacks, the newly chosen director Sieyes considered a new overhaul necessary for the Directory's form of government because in his opinion it needed a stronger executive.


Source: Fix coherence: They pushed the allies to the east bank of the Rhine, allowing France, by the beginning of 1795, to conquer the Dutch Republic itself. The House of Orange was expelled and replaced by the Batavian Republic, a France satellite state.

Target: They pushed the allies to the east bank of the Rhine, allowing France, by the beginning of 1795, to conquer the Dutch Republic itself. The House of Orange was expelled and replaced by the Batavian Republic, a French satellite state.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The electoral law allowed candidates to run in more than one seat at a time. Several candidates were elected in more than one seat, with Adolphe Thiers elected in 86 constituencies.

Target: The electoral law allowed candidates to run in more than one seat at a time. As a result, several candidates were elected in more than one seat, with Adolphe Thiers elected in 86 constituencies.


Source: Make the text more logical: He promoted devotion to the Sacred Heart. He prepared a proper Office and a Mass for the solemnity and octave of the divine Heart of Jesus.

Target: Promoting devotion to the Sacred Heart, he prepared a proper Office and a Mass for the solemnity and octave of the divine Heart of Jesus.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Frenet -- Serret formulas mean that this coordinate system is constantly rotating as an observer moves along the curve. This coordinate system is always non-inertial.

Target: The Frenet -- Serret formulas mean that this coordinate system is constantly rotating as an observer moves along the curve. Hence, this coordinate system is always non-inertial.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The album was originally released in 1981. The album is a album of piano interludes from the first four Fresh Aire albums.

Target: The album was originally released in 1981. The album is a compilation of piano interludes from the first four Fresh Aire albums.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In particular, every body must have an apparent mass determined by the inner radiation. Which is therefore above all dependent on the temperature.

Target: In particular, every body must have an apparent mass determined by the inner radiation, and which is therefore above all dependent on the temperature.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He was working during a transition period and did not create the new theory necessary to allow him to solve the problem correctly and completely. His basic conclusion remained valid and for that he should be given credit.

Target: He was working during a transition period and did not create the new theory necessary to allow him to solve the problem correctly and completely. Nevertheless, his basic conclusion remained valid and for that he should be given credit.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Thriive reflects this objective of the Arthur B. Schultz Foundation. Thriive offers a unique sort of microfinance that not only economically assists small businesses, but also encourages social responsibility.

Target: Reflecting this objective of the Arthur B. Schultz Foundation, Thriive offers a unique sort of microfinance that not only economically assists small businesses, but also encourages social responsibility.


Source: Fix coherence: Front Mission video games venture into multiple genres. Each of them contain core elements that are universal to the entire series.

Target: Although Front Mission video games venture into multiple genres, each of them contain core elements that are universal to the entire series.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Evergreen plants, such as pine trees, withstand frost. All or most growth stops.

Target: Evergreen plants, such as pine trees, withstand frost although all or most growth stops.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: In most temperate countries such temperatures usually are the result of heat loss by radiation at night. Those types of frost sometimes are called radiation frost.

Target: In most temperate countries such temperatures usually are the result of heat loss by radiation at night, so those types of frost sometimes are called radiation frost.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Bahia called adult males from Santa Teresinha. Bahia had an average snout -- vent length of 27.8 and 36.8 mm (1.09 and 1.45 in) in 2008 and 2009, respectively.

Target: Calling adult males from Santa Teresinha, Bahia had an average snout -- vent length of 27.8 and 36.8 mm (1.09 and 1.45 in) in 2008 and 2009, respectively.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Usually duck, pork or goose. You can use other meats.

Target: Usually duck, pork or goose, although you can use other meats.


Source: Make the text coherent: Although originally intended to be eaten soon after production, modern chutneys are often made to be sold. Although originally intended to be eaten soon after production, modern chutneys are often require preservatives -- often sugar and vinegar -- to ensure they have a suitable shelf life.

Target: Although originally intended to be eaten soon after production, modern chutneys are often made to be sold, so require preservatives -- often sugar and vinegar -- to ensure they have a suitable shelf life.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The establishment of orchards turned out to be abortive when only one crop of fruit was ever exported,. There was ample summer irrigation water available.

Target: The establishment of orchards turned out to be abortive when only one crop of fruit was ever exported, and although there was ample summer irrigation water available.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Canseliet had known Fulcanelli as an old man in his 80s. Now the Master had grown younger and had physically changed in appearance: Fulcanelli was now an androgynous creature, a being Fulcanelli called The Divine Androgyne.

Target: Canseliet had known Fulcanelli as an old man in his 80s but now the Master had grown younger and had physically changed in appearance: he was now an androgynous creature, a being Fulcanelli called The Divine Androgyne.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 1993, Johnston, gaining popularity, was offered a contract under Elektra Records ;. A beneficial agreement for Johnston.

Target: In 1993, Johnston, gaining popularity, was offered a contract under Elektra Records ; although a beneficial agreement for Johnston.


Source: Make the text more logical: FND does not show up on blood tests or structural brain imaging such as MRI or CT scanning. This is also the FND for many other neurological conditions so negative investigations should not be used alone to make the diagnosis.

Target: FND does not show up on blood tests or structural brain imaging such as MRI or CT scanning. However, this is also the case for many other neurological conditions so negative investigations should not be used alone to make the diagnosis.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: These sorts of functional definitions in terms of causal roles are claimed to be analytic and a priori truths about the submental states and the (largely fictitious) propositional attitudes they describe. Its proponents are known as analytic or conceptual functionalists.

Target: These sorts of functional definitions in terms of causal roles are claimed to be analytic and a priori truths about the submental states and the (largely fictitious) propositional attitudes they describe. Hence, its proponents are known as analytic or conceptual functionalists.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A subject with inverted qualia from birth would have nothing to notice or adjust to. An unconscious functional simulacrum of ourselves (a zombie) would have no experiential changes to notice or adjust to.

Target: A subject with inverted qualia from birth would have nothing to notice or adjust to. Similarly, an unconscious functional simulacrum of ourselves (a zombie) would have no experiential changes to notice or adjust to.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Moreover, most functionalists who are physicalists require that the properties that are quantified over in functional definitions be physical properties. Functionalists are physicalists, even though the general thesis of functionalism itself does not commit functionalists to being so.

Target: Moreover, most functionalists who are physicalists require that the properties that are quantified over in functional definitions be physical properties. Hence, they are physicalists, even though the general thesis of functionalism itself does not commit them to being so.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: However, the content of your mental state of believing that water is wet differs from your duplicate's. Your belief is of H2O.

Target: However, the content of your mental state of believing that water is wet differs from your duplicate's because your belief is of H2O.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Therefore, so the argument goes, since two people can be functionally identical. Therefore, so the argument have different mental states, functionalism can not sufficiently account for all mental states.

Target: Therefore, so the argument goes, since two people can be functionally identical, yet have different mental states, functionalism can not sufficiently account for all mental states.


Source: Fix sentence flow: If it is in state three and reads a B, it prints a 1 and remains in state three. If it is in state three and reads a 1, then it will stay in state three.

Target: If it is in state three and reads a B, it prints a 1 and remains in state three. Finally, if it is in state three and reads a 1, then it will stay in state three.


Source: Fix sentence transition: On the other hand, if it turns out that there are states which theoretical cognitive psychology posits as necessary for explanation of human behavior. Which are not foreseen by ordinary folk psychological language, then these entities or states exist.

Target: On the other hand, if it turns out that there are states which theoretical cognitive psychology posits as necessary for explanation of human behavior but which are not foreseen by ordinary folk psychological language, then these entities or states exist.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: A metric defines the curves which are geodesics ;. A connection also defines the geodesics (see also parallel transport).

Target: A metric defines the curves which are geodesics ; but a connection also defines the geodesics (see also parallel transport).


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: One reportedly poked Craig Charles in the eye. Another launched an unsuspecting attack on Chris Barrie's groin.

Target: One reportedly poked Craig Charles in the eye, and another launched an unsuspecting attack on Chris Barrie's groin.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: He declines the fact that he said the Oxygen Wellness will be opened for teaching purposes. Students can use fact in the first district of Budapest.

Target: He declines the fact that he said the Oxygen Wellness will be opened for teaching purposes and students can use it in the first district of Budapest.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: However, the attempt at peace lost credibility as the interview was scheduled a day before Blood in My Eye was released. Most fans, along with 50 Cent, dismissed the interview as a blatant publicity stunt.

Target: However, the attempt at peace lost credibility as the interview was scheduled a day before Blood in My Eye was released. As a result, most fans, along with 50 Cent, dismissed the interview as a blatant publicity stunt.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Along with Young Buck, reggae singer Mavado appears on the album. Production came from Swizz Beatz.

Target: Along with Young Buck, reggae singer Mavado appears on the album, while production came from Swizz Beatz.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In early 2005, a feud between The Game and G-Unit began. Even before The Game's first album, The Documentary, was released and G-Unit's feud became public, there was tension The Game Game and 50 Cent.

Target: In early 2005, a feud between The Game and G-Unit began. Even before The Game's first album, The Documentary, was released and their feud became public, there was tension between The Game and 50 Cent.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Missing its initial target of 10,000. G4S announced the sending of 7,000 personnel each day to Olympic venues, in a way they felt would allow them to fully secure each venue.

Target: Although missing its initial target of 10,000, G4S announced the sending of 7,000 personnel each day to Olympic venues, in a way they felt would allow them to fully secure each venue.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: gNewSense takes a relatively strict stance against proprietary software. Any documentation that gives instructions on installing proprietary software is excluded.

Target: gNewSense takes a relatively strict stance against proprietary software. For example, any documentation that gives instructions on installing proprietary software is excluded.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Several of the launch titles included games that were newly compatible with Linux. Most of the games already supported downloads made for the operating system on other distribution platforms.

Target: Several of the launch titles included games that were newly compatible with Linux, while most of the games already supported downloads made for the operating system on other distribution platforms.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: GIP is a DECT profile. A set of protocols that runs over the base DECT system.

Target: GIP is a DECT profile, meaning a set of protocols that runs over the base DECT system.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: However, with the newfound help and alliance of the Periko, they managed to escape and proceed to battle Daragit. Like everyone else at Avila, Gabriel succumbs to Daragit's brainwashing spell after pushing Tak out of the magic fog's way.

Target: However, with the newfound help and alliance of the Periko, they managed to escape and proceed to battle Daragit. However, like everyone else at Avila, Gabriel succumbs to Daragit's brainwashing spell after pushing Tak out of the magic fog's way.


Source: Make the text coherent: Following Albert Balink's Pareh (Rice) in 1936, The realized the potential of native audiences and began directing works with more modern stories which suited their interests. Characters remained Chinese.

Target: Following Albert Balink's Pareh (Rice) in 1936, The realized the potential of native audiences and began directing works with more modern stories which suited their interests, although characters remained Chinese.


Source: Make the text clearer: Rejnman explained that he killed Gagarin because he had been exposed to oppression and had lost his rank. According to Gagarin's contemporaries' testimonies, Gagarin had been a humane employer.

Target: Rejnman explained that he killed Gagarin because he had been exposed to oppression and had lost his rank. However, according to his contemporaries' testimonies, Prince Gagarin had been a humane employer.


Source: Make the text more logical: The constant ocean salinity was a long-standing mystery. No process counterbalancing the salt influx from rivers was known.

Target: The constant ocean salinity was a long-standing mystery, because no process counterbalancing the salt influx from rivers was known.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Ovakimian possessed prodigious talent in mathematics as well as in chemistry. Ovakimian was responsible for the rapid development of the Soviet chemical arsenal in the 1950s as well as the application of agricultural chemistry for civilian purposes.

Target: Possessing prodigious talent in mathematics as well as in chemistry, Ovakimian was responsible for the rapid development of the Soviet chemical arsenal in the 1950s as well as the application of agricultural chemistry for civilian purposes.


Source: Fix coherence: One died at the age of three in Germania Superior while Victorinus was governor of that province. The other two are Marcus Aufidius Fronto (consul ordinarius 199) and Victorinus (Victorinus ordinarius 200).

Target: One died at the age of three in Germania Superior while Victorinus was governor of that province. The other two are Marcus Aufidius Fronto (consul ordinarius 199) and Gaius Aufidius Victorinus (consul ordinarius 200).


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Apple's Macintosh Central European encoding does not include the entire Gaj's Latin alphabet. A separate codepage, called MacCroatian encoding, is used.

Target: Apple's Macintosh Central European encoding does not include the entire Gaj's Latin alphabet. Instead, a separate codepage, called MacCroatian encoding, is used.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Versions of the Hungarian alphabet were most commonly used. Others were too, in an often confused, inconsistent fashion.

Target: Versions of the Hungarian alphabet were most commonly used, but others were too, in an often confused, inconsistent fashion.


Source: Make the text more logical: An entry permit issued to mainland Chinese passport holders who apply in overseas or Hong Kong but not in mainland China. In mainland Chinese, Chinese citizens must obtain a Two-way Permit with the endorsement for entering Macau.

Target: An entry permit issued to mainland Chinese passport holders who apply in overseas or Hong Kong but not in mainland China. In mainland China, Chinese citizens must obtain a Two-way Permit with the endorsement for entering Macau.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jump up ^ Liechtenstein follows the same entry rules as Switzerland and a passport stamp is not normally required. For a nominal fee one is available at the Tourist Center.

Target: Jump up ^ Liechtenstein follows the same entry rules as Switzerland and a passport stamp is not normally required. However for a nominal fee one is available at the Tourist Center.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jump up ^ Due to its landlocked condition, Andorra does not issue a separate passport stamp. One is available upon request at the border.

Target: Jump up ^ Due to its landlocked condition, Andorra does not issue a separate passport stamp. However one is available upon request at the border.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Matthias, now promoted to Cardinal, tries to negotiate with them. Talks break down and war is declared against the Time Lords.

Target: Matthias, now promoted to Cardinal, tries to negotiate with them, but talks break down and war is declared against the Time Lords.


Source: Make the text clearer: Knowing the X-Men will arrive in moments, the Marauders depart with the baby. Not before Gambit ponders what could make Bishop turn on the X-Men.

Target: Knowing the X-Men will arrive in moments, the Marauders depart with the baby, but not before Gambit ponders what could make Bishop turn on the X-Men.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Gambit then began to realize what he was saying, questioning his romantic love for Rogue. Soon after began to suffer from hallucinations that he was fighting Mister Sinister.

Target: Gambit then began to realize what he was saying, questioning his romantic love for Rogue, but soon after began to suffer from hallucinations that he was fighting Mister Sinister.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Remy's bio-kinetic charging abilities manifested early in his teens. Remy kept Remy's powers secret Remy's his family and friends.

Target: Remy's bio-kinetic charging abilities manifested early in his teens, although he kept his powers secret from his family and friends.


Source: Make the text more logical: They fearing it are Rogue's doing. They go in and find various parts of Rogue's past being projected around them, including her fight against Nimrod and being captured and beaten at Genosha.

Target: Fearing it is Rogue's doing, they go in and find various parts of Rogue's past being projected around them, including her fight against Nimrod and being captured and beaten at Genosha.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Photographic film has a much greater ability to record fine differences in shade than can be reproduced on photographic paper. Most video screens are not capable of displaying the range of brightnesses (dynamic range) that can be captured by typical electronic cameras.

Target: Photographic film has a much greater ability to record fine differences in shade than can be reproduced on photographic paper. Similarly, most video screens are not capable of displaying the range of brightnesses (dynamic range) that can be captured by typical electronic cameras.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Gamma encoding was developed originally to compensate for the input -- output characteristic of cathode ray tube (CRT) displays. That is not its main purpose or advantage in modern systems.

Target: Although gamma encoding was developed originally to compensate for the input -- output characteristic of cathode ray tube (CRT) displays, that is not its main purpose or advantage in modern systems.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In MCA, Ping Sieu was elected party Vice-President in 2010, where he served until 2013. Ping Sieu's currently the Ping Sieu of the party's Syariah law and Policy Implementation Taskforce.

Target: In MCA, Ping Sieu was elected party Vice-President in 2010, where he served until 2013. He's currently the Chairman of the party's Syariah law and Policy Implementation Taskforce.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The first generation of post-independence Indian politicians were almost universally members of the freedom struggle. Gandhi's death in 1948 gave an emotional importance to the Gandhi cap, which was regularly worn by Indian leaders like Jawaharlal Nehru, Indian's first Prime Minister.

Target: The first generation of post-independence Indian politicians were almost universally members of the freedom struggle. Gandhi's death in 1948 gave an emotional importance to the Gandhi cap, which was regularly worn by Indian leaders like Jawaharlal Nehru, India's first Prime Minister.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The region did not attract much interest. Region's lands were rugged.

Target: The region did not attract much interest, because its lands were rugged.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He attended the University of Missouri on both academic and an athletic scholarships. He graduated with a bachelor's degree in Psychology with minors in Political Science and Spanish in 2004.

Target: Attending the University of Missouri on both academic and an athletic scholarships, he graduated with a bachelor's degree in Psychology with minors in Political Science and Spanish in 2004.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Financing for the project was placed in jeopardy by House of Representatives in July 2011 which voted to divert the funding to unrelated projects., but was later obligated. Work on the project could begin in 2012.

Target: Financing for the project was placed in jeopardy by House of Representatives in July 2011 which voted to divert the funding to unrelated projects., but was later obligated so that work on the project could begin in 2012.


Source: Make the text more coherent: In July 2011, a bill passed by the House of Representatives threatened funding for the project. Others announced at the same time, but the money was released the following month.

Target: In July 2011, a bill passed by the House of Representatives threatened funding for the project and others announced at the same time, but the money was released the following month.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Floyd was expected to be handed the spot vacated by Garcia. Since Floyd pitched poorly during spring training, Floyd lost the spot and was optioned to Triple-A Charlotte.

Target: Floyd was expected to be handed the spot vacated by Garcia. However, since he pitched poorly during spring training, Floyd lost the spot and was optioned to Triple-A Charlotte.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The cost was $1 as of 2000. Persons unable to find their name on the wall of bicycle license plates could climb up without charge.

Target: The cost was $1 as of 2000. However, persons unable to find their name on the wall of bicycle license plates could climb up without charge.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Polar orbit-A satellite that passes above or nearly above both poles of the planet on each revolution. It has an inclination of (or very close to) 90 degrees.

Target: Polar orbit-A satellite that passes above or nearly above both poles of the planet on each revolution. Therefore it has an inclination of (or very close to) 90 degrees.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Even owner-wired situations are costly. More of certain materials are required for dome construction.

Target: Even owner-wired situations are costly, because more of certain materials are required for dome construction.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Also, these seams may be stressed. Ordinary solar heat flexes the entire structure each day as the sun moves across the sky.

Target: Also, these seams may be stressed because ordinary solar heat flexes the entire structure each day as the sun moves across the sky.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The world's first geoduck fishery was created in 1970. Demand for the half-forgotten clam was low at first due to its texture.

Target: The world's first geoduck fishery was created in 1970, but demand for the half-forgotten clam was low at first due to its texture.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In Japan, geoduck is prepared as raw sashimi, dipped in soy sauce and wasabi. On Japan menus in cheaper sushi restaurants, geoduck is sometimes substituted for Tresus keenae, a species of horse clam, and labeled mirugai or mirukuigai.

Target: In Japan, geoduck is prepared as raw sashimi, dipped in soy sauce and wasabi. On Japanese menus in cheaper sushi restaurants, geoduck is sometimes substituted for Tresus keenae, a species of horse clam, and labeled mirugai or mirukuigai.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The oldest recorded specimen was 168 years old. Individuals usually live up to 140 years.

Target: The oldest recorded specimen was 168 years old, but individuals usually live up to 140 years.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: In these three volumes, which appeared at long intervals, the author's theories are not always in complete harmony. They theories not always presented in a very luminous or coherent manner, theories they are marked by originality and vigour.

Target: In these three volumes, which appeared at long intervals, the author's theories are not always in complete harmony, nor are they always presented in a very luminous or coherent manner, but they are marked by originality and vigour.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Most people in Somaliland get their drinking water from aquifers. Poor quality water often means that boreholes go abandoned.

Target: Most people in Somaliland get their drinking water from aquifers, although poor quality water often means that boreholes go abandoned.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Fourteen water utilities serve towns in Somaliland and neighboring Puntland. At least 750,000 people on the outskirts of Hargeisa lack piped water.

Target: Fourteen water utilities serve towns in Somaliland and neighboring Puntland, although at least 750,000 people on the outskirts of Hargeisa lack piped water.


Source: Fix sentence transition: George Davidson was a geographer and scientist noted for his work with the U.S. government exploring and charting the western United States and Alaska. geographer was a geographer for the U.S. Coast and Geodetic Survey, working heavily in the Pacific waters.

Target: George Davidson was a geographer and scientist noted for his work with the U.S. government exploring and charting the western United States and Alaska. Davidson was a geodist for the U.S. Coast and Geodetic Survey, working heavily in the Pacific waters.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He met limited success. He altered style to deliver off spin in addition to his pace bowling.

Target: Meeting limited success, he altered style to deliver off spin in addition to his pace bowling.


Source: Make the text coherent: Macaulay bowled a mixture of medium pace and his new style of off spin. Macaulay played 27 matches in 1921.

Target: Bowling a mixture of medium pace and his new style of off spin, Macaulay played 27 matches in 1921.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Macaulay helped Yorkshire to win the first of four County Championships in a row. Macaulay finished second to Rhodes in the team's bowling averages.

Target: Helping Yorkshire to win the first of four County Championships in a row, Macaulay finished second to Rhodes in the team's bowling averages.


Source: Make the text coherent: This business also was unsuccessful ; Macaulay blamed a lack of money and competition from other businesses. Macaulay filed for bankruptcy in 1937.

Target: This business also was unsuccessful ; Macaulay blamed a lack of money and competition from other businesses. Consequently, he filed for bankruptcy in 1937.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: In the second innings, South Africa were comfortably placed with a score of 157 for one. Four wickets fell to Macaulay while 13 runs were scored.

Target: In the second innings, South Africa were comfortably placed with a score of 157 for one, but four wickets fell to Macaulay while 13 runs were scored.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Selected for another Test trial. Macaulay did not play in the series against the touring South African team until the third Test at Leeds, where he took one wicket in each South African innings, but was omitted from the final two Tests.

Target: Although selected for another Test trial, Macaulay did not play in the series against the touring South African team until the third Test at Leeds, where he took one wicket in each South African innings, but was omitted from the final two Tests.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In addition, outdoor regulatory agencies from Ondo, Kano, Ogun, Edo, Cross River and Kwara states took part. LASAA's counterparts from Cameroon and Kenya were in attendance.

Target: In addition, outdoor regulatory agencies from Ondo, Kano, Ogun, Edo, Cross River and Kwara states took part. Similarly, LASAA's counterparts from Cameroon and Kenya were in attendance.


Source: Fix coherence: When Parros made his NHL debut with the Kings on October 5, 2005, he became the seventh Princeton Tiger to play in the NHL. Parros scored Parros' NHL NHL goal October 20 at the American Airlines Center in Dallas, Texas against the Dallas Stars.

Target: When Parros made his NHL debut with the Kings on October 5, 2005, he became the seventh Princeton Tiger to play in the NHL. He scored his first NHL goal October 20 at the American Airlines Center in Dallas, Texas against the Dallas Stars.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He displayed wonderful courage and tenacity at the critical times. He was the only officer of his battalion who advanced beyond the town, and by clearing machinegun and sniping posts contributed largely to the aid of his battalion in holding their objective.

Target: Displaying wonderful courage and tenacity at the critical times, he was the only officer of his battalion who advanced beyond the town, and by clearing machinegun and sniping posts contributed largely to the aid of his battalion in holding their objective.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She sued for annulment in the eccleciastical courts. Very shortly afterwards, she eloped with another man.

Target: She sued for annulment in the eccleciastical courts, but very shortly afterwards, she eloped with another man.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Tryon felt it important that men from the reserve should wear the same uniform as regular sailors. No sense of inferiority might attach to men.

Target: Tryon felt it important that men from the reserve should wear the same uniform as regular sailors, so that no sense of inferiority might attach to them.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Chairman of P&O, Sir Thomas Sutherland, wrote arguing that a scheme ought to be considered and prepared in peace time, but no legislation should be passed or anything else done. An actual war situation arose.

Target: The Chairman of P&O, Sir Thomas Sutherland, wrote arguing that a scheme ought to be considered and prepared in peace time, but no legislation should be passed or anything else done unless an actual war situation arose.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Officially posted to that ship. He prevailed upon Lieutenant Cochran (son of Lord Dundonald) to arrange that he would remain on loan to Wellesley.

Target: Although officially posted to that ship, he prevailed upon Lieutenant Cochran (son of Lord Dundonald) to arrange that he would remain on loan to Wellesley.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In the' 89 exercise the enemy fleet started at a 25 % disadvantage, but steady attrition during raiding reduced it to 43 % the size of the British fleet. Any chance of a decisive victory steadily diminished.

Target: In the' 89 exercise the enemy fleet started at a 25 % disadvantage, but steady attrition during raiding reduced it to 43 % the size of the British fleet, so that any chance of a decisive victory steadily diminished.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Tryon proposed that a system of indemnity should be introduced. Anyone whose property was destroyed resisting an attack would be compensated by the colonies as a whole.

Target: Tryon proposed that a system of indemnity should be introduced, so that anyone whose property was destroyed resisting an attack would be compensated by the colonies as a whole.


Source: Fix coherence errors: He sent his deputy Admiral Rowley to guard Liverpool. Himself proceeding to coal at Portland.

Target: He sent his deputy Admiral Rowley to guard Liverpool, while himself proceeding to coal at Portland.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Alexandra was much impressed by the station-keeping of the much larger warship, so much. Alexandra's signal to the ship.

Target: Alexandra was much impressed by the station-keeping of the much larger warship, so much so that her signal to the ship.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Most keyboards do not have a key for the geresh. An apostrophe (', Unicode U + 0027) is often substituted for it.

Target: Most keyboards do not have a key for the geresh. As a result, an apostrophe (', Unicode U + 0027) is often substituted for it.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Professor Andersson is one of the most influential researchers in the world on Internet-based psychological treatments. Andersson's contributions in the field of tinnitus have enriched the research field widely.

Target: Professor Andersson is one of the most influential researchers in the world on Internet-based psychological treatments. Moreover, his contributions in the field of tinnitus have enriched the research field widely.


Source: Make the text clearer: In the 15th century, many towns in the Grand Duchy of Lithuania were chartered with the Neumarkt town law used in much of Poland. This was done through the duplication of Poland administrative methods instead of German colonization.

Target: In the 15th century, many towns in the Grand Duchy of Lithuania were chartered with the Neumarkt town law used in much of Poland, although this was done through the duplication of Polish administrative methods instead of German colonization.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: He envisioned a career in professional football. He accepted a scholarship offer from the University of Maryland.

Target: Envisioning a career in professional football, he accepted a scholarship offer from the University of Maryland.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It sits between the two first toes. Having the thong of rectangular geta anywhere but the middle would result in the inner back corners of the geta colliding when walking.

Target: It sits between the two first toes because having the thong of rectangular geta anywhere but the middle would result in the inner back corners of the geta colliding when walking.


Source: Fix sentence flow: A horrendously smelly, unidentified old woman is brought in and does the rounds of all the other wards. Nobody else will take her in.

Target: A horrendously smelly, unidentified old woman is brought in and does the rounds of all the other wards because nobody else will take her in.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Their new home, twin-bayed K2, is modern and clean-all appears well. Behind the glossy facade lie the same old patients and problems, and beyond that comes a long list of new worries.

Target: Their new home, twin-bayed K2, is modern and clean-all appears well. But behind the glossy facade lie the same old patients and problems, and beyond that comes a long list of new worries.


Source: Make the text more logical: She is transferred to the psychiatric ward but Hilary is traumatised by events. He agrees to a date with Den with whom he is starting to bond.

Target: She is transferred to the psychiatric ward but Hilary is traumatised by events. However he agrees to a date with Den with whom he is starting to bond.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The latter got married with the son of the concierge. Her family did not accept latter.

Target: The latter got married with the son of the concierge although her family did not accept it.


Source: Make the text more logical: In the Ghostbusters fiction, ghosts can not simply be destroyed. They become temporarily destabilized.

Target: In the Ghostbusters fiction, ghosts can not simply be destroyed. Instead, they become temporarily destabilized.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The following match against Sassuolo, he scored a goal. Later in the match he received a second yellow card and was sent off.

Target: The following match against Sassuolo, he scored a goal and later in the match he received a second yellow card and was sent off.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Each resident contributed to its construction, from the concept and design, to the materials and labor. These lanterns became a symbol of unity for the barrios.

Target: Each resident contributed to its construction, from the concept and design, to the materials and labor. In the end, these lanterns became a symbol of unity for the barrios.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Giant Lantern Festival (Kapampangan: Ligligan Parul) is an annual festival held in December (Saturday before Christmas Eve) in the City of San Fernando in the Philippines. The Ligligan Parul features a competition of giant lanterns.

Target: The Giant Lantern Festival (Kapampangan: Ligligan Parul) is an annual festival held in December (Saturday before Christmas Eve) in the City of San Fernando in the Philippines. The festival features a competition of giant lanterns.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In the early 1990's, there were several lines of evidence that suggested the existence of a GA receptor in oat seeds that was located at the plasma membrane. Despite intensive research, to date, no membrane-bound GA receptor has been isolated.

Target: In the early 1990's, there were several lines of evidence that suggested the existence of a GA receptor in oat seeds that was located at the plasma membrane. However despite intensive research, to date, no membrane-bound GA receptor has been isolated.


Source: Make the text more consistent: PFDs function in the cytosol. When DELLAs bind to PFDs, cytosol restricts them to the nucleus.

Target: PFDs function in the cytosol but when DELLAs bind to PFDs, it restricts them to the nucleus.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: It was apparent that Rule was training missionaries. This was the Rule of the end of his Methodist academies.

Target: It was apparent that Rule was training missionaries and this was the start of the end of his Methodist academies.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Alington was unable to join up during World War II due to ill health. Alington helped Arthur Goodhart as coordinator of the wartime Short Leave Courses at Balliol College, Oxford.

Target: Alington was unable to join up during World War II due to ill health. Instead, he helped Arthur Goodhart as coordinator of the wartime Short Leave Courses at Balliol College, Oxford.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They may be waist-to knee-length and are typically straight-sided rather than fitted. Historically, they were fitted and embroidered.

Target: They may be waist-to knee-length and are typically straight-sided rather than fitted. However, historically, they were fitted and embroidered.


Source: Fix coherence: Gillenfeld's mayor is Heike Hermes. Mayor's three deputies are Paul-Rainer Busch, Dr. Karl-Otto Wirth and Peter Roden.

Target: Gillenfeld's mayor is Heike Hermes, and her three deputies are Paul-Rainer Busch, Dr. Karl-Otto Wirth and Peter Roden.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Years later, Gillian tried to contact her father Hugh ; but she was never to see him again. Gillian did establish a relationship with Gillian's half-Gillian Pollock.

Target: Years later, Gillian tried to contact her father Hugh ; but she was never to see him again, although she did establish a relationship with her half-sister Pollock.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: This region was subdivided into baronies, the easternmost of which became the Barony of Gilsland, apparently named after an individual. Sporadic speculation by historians has failed to conclusively identitify individual.

Target: This region was subdivided into baronies, the easternmost of which became the Barony of Gilsland, apparently named after an individual, although sporadic speculation by historians has failed to conclusively identitify him.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ginevra did not produce any notable offspring. Two of her daughters had some success as broodmares.

Target: Ginevra did not produce any notable offspring, although two of her daughters had some success as broodmares.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He at first was opposed. He relented after a short time.

Target: He at first was opposed but he relented after a short time.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Colombo sat on the Conciliar preparatory commissions for seminaries and universities. Colombo attended the Second Vatican Council (1962 -- 1965), during the course of which he was named by Pope Paul VI to succeed him as Archbishop of Milan on 10 August 1963.

Target: Sitting on the Conciliar preparatory commissions for seminaries and universities, Colombo attended the Second Vatican Council (1962 -- 1965), during the course of which he was named by Pope Paul VI to succeed him as Archbishop of Milan on 10 August 1963.


Source: Make the text clearer: Japanese corporations fire or lay off their employees at one of the lowest rates of any industrialized nation, and employees reciprocate this loyalty through their personal habits. In the West engineers from different companies might be friends, this is far more rare in Japan.

Target: Japanese corporations fire or lay off their employees at one of the lowest rates of any industrialized nation, and employees reciprocate this loyalty through their personal habits. Whereas in the West engineers from different companies might be friends, this is far more rare in Japan.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Diana's first amateur match is scheduled against another girl. When Diana's opponent pulls Diana she ends up fighting a man, Ray Cortez.

Target: Diana's first amateur match is scheduled against another girl, but when her opponent pulls out she ends up fighting a man, Ray Cortez.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Diana has accepted Adrian's apology. Tensions rise between them again when they learn that they both have advanced to the finals in their division to fight each other.

Target: Although Diana has accepted Adrian's apology, tensions rise between them again when they learn that they both have advanced to the finals in their division to fight each other.


Source: Fix sentence transition: If I talk about my sorrows and joys that is. What friends do: tell everything

Target: If I talk about my sorrows and joys that is because what friends do: tell everything


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She is the director of women's magazines Gisela and Amarige. She runs her own television production company called GV Productions.

Target: She is the director of women's magazines Gisela and Amarige. Moreover, she runs her own television production company called GV Productions.


Source: Make the text coherent: Gislebertus' name is the first ever found on stone work from the Romanesque period, as the sculptors before him believed themselves to be working for God, instead of themselves being creative individuals. As Grivot and Zarnecki state :

Target: Gislebertus' name is the first ever found on stone work from the Romanesque period, as the sculptors before him believed themselves to be working for God, instead of themselves being creative individuals. On the other hand, as Grivot and Zarnecki state :


Source: Make the text more logical: It celebrated the glory of the Republic of Venice. It was at the same time written in support of Galileo Galilei and his controversial scientific theories.

Target: Celebrating the glory of the Republic of Venice, it was at the same time written in support of Galileo Galilei and his controversial scientific theories.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Francesco's brother, Agostino Marino Mannoia, was present at Greco's murder. Only as a witness.

Target: Francesco's brother, Agostino Marino Mannoia, was present at Greco's murder although only as a witness.


Source: Make the text coherent: Four experimental 4-wheel cars were built in 1939-40 (nos. 1001 to 1004). More would likely have followed had it not been for the Second World War, which prevented large scale fleet renewal.

Target: Four experimental 4-wheel cars were built in 1939-40 (nos. 1001 to 1004) and more would likely have followed had it not been for the Second World War, which prevented large scale fleet renewal.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Johnson and Whitney acquired a large collection over 40 years. Much was sold to support the trust after Johnson's death.

Target: Johnson and Whitney acquired a large collection over 40 years, but much was sold to support the trust after Johnson's death.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Glenda Hall (born 5 May 1964 in Brisbane, Queensland) is an Australian former cricket player. cricket player played two tests and two one day internationals for the Australian national women's cricket team.

Target: Glenda Hall (born 5 May 1964 in Brisbane, Queensland) is an Australian former cricket player. Hall played two tests and two one day internationals for the Australia national women's cricket team.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Curtiss traveled to Rochester to contest a lawsuit brought by former business partner August Herring. Curtiss suffered an attack of appendicitis in court.

Target: Traveling to Rochester to contest a lawsuit brought by former business partner August Herring, Curtiss suffered an attack of appendicitis in court.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Foley was the Jets' starting quarterback to open the 1998 season. Injuries resulted in Vinny Testaverde taking the starting job.

Target: Foley was the Jets' starting quarterback to open the 1998 season, but injuries resulted in Vinny Testaverde taking the starting job.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Northgate, Southgate, Eastgate and Westgate Streets all follow the line of their original Roman counterparts. Westgate Streets has moved slightly north and Southgate now extends through the site of the Roman basilica.

Target: Northgate, Southgate, Eastgate and Westgate Streets all follow the line of their original Roman counterparts, although Westgate Street has moved slightly north and Southgate Street now extends through the site of the Roman basilica.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Whether or not this refers to a genuine tradition concerning Glewlwyd's exploits. Is merely an invention on the author's part, is unknown.

Target: Whether or not this refers to a genuine tradition concerning Glewlwyd's exploits, or is merely an invention on the author's part, is unknown.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The current bridge, the fourth on the site, was completed in 1907. Major reconstruction was necessary after it was damaged during World War II.

Target: The current bridge, the fourth on the site, was completed in 1907, although major reconstruction was necessary after it was damaged during World War II.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: By 1798, the majority of the interior was finished. With the Fitzgeralds about to become bankrupt, the craftsmen downed tools and left the castle.

Target: By 1798, the majority of the interior was finished but with the Fitzgeralds about to become bankrupt, the craftsmen downed tools and left the castle.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Glinze is a river of Brandenburg, Germany. Glinze is a Glinze of the Dosse, which Glinze joins in Wittstock.

Target: Glinze is a river of Brandenburg, Germany. It is a tributary of the Dosse, which it joins in Wittstock.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Mexico was the first country to be included in the list of countries for Global Entry. In November 2011 the Ambassador of USA in country Anthony Wayne announced with Secretary Guevara the requirements, procedure and new option for country to facilitate travel to the United States.

Target: Mexico was the first country to be included in the list of countries for Global Entry. In November 2011 the Ambassador of USA in Mexico Anthony Wayne announced with Secretary Guevara the requirements, procedure and new option for Mexicans to facilitate travel to the United States.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They deprive her of water and leave her to die. After some time, Maud releases her while the rest of the family is at the park.

Target: They deprive her of water and leave her to die. But, after some time, Maud releases her while the rest of the family is at the park.


Source: Make the text clearer: Severe oropharyngeal muscle weakness can limit the usefulness of GPB. Researchers have cited Duchenne muscular dystrophy ventilator users who were very successful using it.

Target: Although severe oropharyngeal muscle weakness can limit the usefulness of GPB, researchers have cited Duchenne muscular dystrophy ventilator users who were very successful using it.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Monofocal intraocular lenses which are commonly available give clear point of focus in the distance or closer. You can choose only one focal point.

Target: Monofocal intraocular lenses which are commonly available give clear point of focus in the distance or closer, but you can choose only one focal point.


Source: Make the text clearer: Nevertheless, he forbade his journal from taking a position during the American Civil War. During the war, the magazine made no acknowledgment of it whatsoever and readers looked elsewhere for war-related information.

Target: Nevertheless, he forbade his journal from taking a position during the American Civil War. In fact, during the war, the magazine made no acknowledgment of it whatsoever and readers looked elsewhere for war-related information.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Some criticize the genre as misogynistic. Most of the talking heads celebrate the films: as long as there are teenagers, there will be slasher films.

Target: Although some criticize the genre as misogynistic, most of the talking heads celebrate the films: as long as there are teenagers, there will be slasher films.


Source: Fix sentence transition: After Vatican Council 11, the Catholic Council church's thrust on evangelization was focused on developing the local church. There was great need to promote lay participation in the life of the church.

Target: After Vatican Council 11, the Catholic Council church's thrust on evangelization was focused on developing the local church. Hence, there was great need to promote lay participation in the life of the church.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Repeat counts also apply to keypad editing commands. If such a command itself requires the Gold key, the Gold key must be pressed again before the command key.

Target: Repeat counts also apply to keypad editing commands, but if such a command itself requires the Gold key, the Gold key must be pressed again before the command key.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Other countries' currencies appreciated. Gold convertibility did not resume.

Target: Other countries' currencies appreciated. However, gold convertibility did not resume.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Exchange rates changed less, even though European inflations were more severe than America's. This meant that the costs of America goods decreased relative to those in European.

Target: Exchange rates changed less, even though European inflations were more severe than America's. This meant that the costs of American goods decreased relative to those in Europe.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: During the early and high Middle Ages, the Byzantine gold solidus, commonly known as the bezant, was used widely throughout Europe and the Mediterranean. As the Byzantine's economic influence declined, so too did the use of the bezant.

Target: During the early and high Middle Ages, the Byzantine gold solidus, commonly known as the bezant, was used widely throughout Europe and the Mediterranean. However, as the Byzantine Empire's economic influence declined, so too did the use of the bezant.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Most countries defined their currencies in terms of dollars, but some countries imposed trading restrictions to protect reserves and exchange rates. Most countries' currencies were still basically inconvertible.

Target: Most countries defined their currencies in terms of dollars, but some countries imposed trading restrictions to protect reserves and exchange rates. Therefore, most countries' currencies were still basically inconvertible.


Source: Make the text coherent: Most nations abandoned the gold standard as the basis of their monetary systems at some point in the 20th century. Many hold substantial gold reserves.

Target: Most nations abandoned the gold standard as the basis of their monetary systems at some point in the 20th century, although many hold substantial gold reserves.


Source: Make the text more logical: As bank runs grew, a reverse multiplier effect caused a contraction in the money supply. The New York Fed had loaned over $150 million in gold (over 240 tons) to European Central Banks.

Target: As bank runs grew, a reverse multiplier effect caused a contraction in the money supply. Additionally the New York Fed had loaned over $150 million in gold (over 240 tons) to European Central Banks.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: It is not a register of the 'best' American books --. Many of them fit that description.

Target: It is not a register of the 'best' American books -- although many of them fit that description.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Bonnie wears her blue velvet riding habit with a red feather in her black hat. Bonnie pleads with her father to raise the bar to one and a half feet.

Target: Wearing her blue velvet riding habit with a red feather in her black hat, Bonnie pleads with her father to raise the bar to one and a half feet.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Micki McElya, in her book Clinging to Mammy, suggests the myth of the faithful slave, in the figure of Mammy, lingered. White Americans wished to live in a world in which African Americans were not angry over the injustice of slavery.

Target: Micki McElya, in her book Clinging to Mammy, suggests the myth of the faithful slave, in the figure of Mammy, lingered because white Americans wished to live in a world in which African Americans were not angry over the injustice of slavery.


Source: Make the text coherent: The whole group of people before Xiangniang's eyes is diverse like a mini United Nations. There is harmony and laughter in the air.

Target: The whole group of people before Xiangniang's eyes is diverse like a mini United Nations. Nevertheless, there is harmony and laughter in the air.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Shihui is subsequently awakened to the fact that the marriage is unstable and holding on to it tightly will only hurt both parties. Shihui decides to part with Liu Xuan.

Target: Shihui is subsequently awakened to the fact that the marriage is unstable and holding on to it tightly will only hurt both parties. In the end, she decides to part with Liu Xuan.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: They are family. Everyone fights over money matters every day.

Target: Although they are family, everyone fights over money matters every day.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The original house, as built in 1704, was a two-storey building. Significant alterations were made around 1790 when a 3rd floor was added with plinth, plat band and cornice to the hipped roof with stacks to left and to right.

Target: The original house, as built in 1704, was a two-storey building. However, significant alterations were made around 1790 when a 3rd floor was added with plinth, plat band and cornice to the hipped roof with stacks to left and to right.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He chose to attend the University of Washington. He studied there from 1955 to 1960.

Target: Choosing to attend the University of Washington, he studied there from 1955 to 1960.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Styles began his career in 1993 at Styles Rapid Prototyping, later known as Styles Rapid Product Development Limited (Styles RPD). STYLES RPD was voted Teesside Small Business of the Year 1996 as well as Styles being awarded Teesside Business Executive of the Year 1996.

Target: Styles began his career in 1993 at Styles Rapid Prototyping, later known as Styles Rapid Product Development Limited (Styles RPD). STYLES RPD was voted Teesside Small Business of the Year 1996 as well as Gordon Styles being awarded Teesside Business Executive of the Year 1996.


Source: Make the text more consistent: It starred Joel de la Fuente. It was on the Fall schedule to run from October 21 to November 18, 2012.

Target: Starring Joel de la Fuente, it was on the Fall schedule to run from October 21 to November 18, 2012.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: This dinos is the most well-known work attributed to The Gorgon Painter. It is not the only work.

Target: Although this dinos is the most well-known work attributed to The Gorgon Painter, it is not the only work.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Gorgon Painter is considered as a very productive successor of the Nessos Painter. In accordance with other Geometric style artists, Gorgon Painter arranged Gorgon Painter's subjects in symmetric patterns.

Target: The Gorgon Painter is considered as a very productive successor of the Nessos Painter. Additionally, in accordance with other Geometric style artists, he arranged his subjects in symmetric patterns.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Gotjawal forest falls into the Ramsar wetland type of Zk (b) karst and other subterranean hydrological systems. To date, Gotjawal Forest has not been declared a Ramsar site.

Target: Gotjawal forest falls into the Ramsar wetland type of Zk (b) karst and other subterranean hydrological systems. However to date, Gotjawal Forest has not been declared a Ramsar site.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: There are few rivers on the forested west or east of the island. Almost all the rainwater is drawn directly into the groundwater.

Target: There are few rivers on the forested west or east of the island because almost all the rainwater is drawn directly into the groundwater.


Source: Make the text clearer: Owen blackmails Carver into giving him an exclusive. He will publicly reveal Carver's health problems.

Target: Owen blackmails Carver into giving him an exclusive or he will publicly reveal Carver's health problems.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Their break-up. Grade have reunited several times, beginning with a 2006 show in Toronto.

Target: Since their break-up, Grade have reunited several times, beginning with a 2006 show in Toronto.


Source: Make the text clearer: It also overlooks those who self-funded, and. Are being effectively taxed twice.

Target: It also overlooks those who self-funded, and hence are being effectively taxed twice.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Graham Preston Bruce is a former Canadian politician. After serving as Mayor of North Cowichan, politician was elected as a Social Credit Member of the Legislative Assembly of British Columbia from 1986 to 1991 in the electoral district of Cowichan-Malahat.

Target: Graham Preston Bruce is a former Canadian politician. After serving as Mayor of North Cowichan, Bruce was elected as a Social Credit Member of the Legislative Assembly of British Columbia from 1986 to 1991 in the electoral district of Cowichan-Malahat.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: One of them, the Capitol, is located in a beautiful Art Deco building. Recent changes in building rules have allowed the reform of the theatres into more lucrative shopping centres.

Target: One of them, the Capitol, is located in a beautiful Art Deco building. However, recent changes in building rules have allowed the reform of the theatres into more lucrative shopping centres.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Carter Elliott is the most successful coach in the history of the program, leading the Indians to 5 regional finals berths. Carter Elliott was the coach from 1978 to 1991 and from 1997 to 2000.

Target: Carter Elliott is the most successful coach in the history of the program, leading the Indians to 5 regional finals berths. He was the head coach from 1978 to 1991 and from 1997 to 2000.


Source: Make the text more logical: Winters are cold and snowy. Summers are mild.

Target: Winters are cold and snowy, while summers are mild.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: This arrangement was made as an alternative to the state acquiring the entire mountain. Some of the traditional activities at Grandfather Mountain conflict with state park management policies.

Target: This arrangement was made as an alternative to the state acquiring the entire mountain, because some of the traditional activities at Grandfather Mountain conflict with state park management policies.


Source: Make the text coherent: He qualified in 1929. He worked as a solicitor.

Target: Qualifying in 1929, he worked as a solicitor.


Source: Fix sentence transition: These valence electrons are free to move. Are able to conduct electricity.

Target: These valence electrons are free to move, so are able to conduct electricity.


Source: Fix sentence flow: First, it turns the rocket slightly. Its flight path is no longer vertical.

Target: First, it turns the rocket slightly so that its flight path is no longer vertical.


Source: Fix coherence: All solid additives can not be used in bearings. Due to tight tolerances only plain grease or oil are allowed.

Target: All solid additives can not be used in bearings because due to tight tolerances only plain grease or oil are allowed.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Throughout the 1870s and 1880s, the popularity of the Allentown Fair continued to grow. Increased attendance led to dissatisfaction regarding the fairground's size, facilities, short race track and small grandstand.

Target: Throughout the 1870s and 1880s, the popularity of the Allentown Fair continued to grow. However, increased attendance led to dissatisfaction regarding the fairground's size, facilities, short race track and small grandstand.


Source: Make the text clearer: Chicago compounded this problem. Chicago received only 1 inch (2.5 cm) of rain from July 4 to October 9, causing severe drought conditions before the fire, while strong southwest winds helped to carry flying embers toward the heart of the city.

Target: Compounding this problem, Chicago received only 1 inch (2.5 cm) of rain from July 4 to October 9, causing severe drought conditions before the fire, while strong southwest winds helped to carry flying embers toward the heart of the city.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Early on October 11, the hurricane turned north-northwest about 90 kilometres (56 mi) east of Saint Lucia. Later that night hurricane neared the island of Martinique.

Target: Early on October 11, the hurricane turned north-northwest about 90 kilometres (56 mi) east of Saint Lucia, and later that night it neared the island of Martinique.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The size of the patch is unknown, as is the precise distribution of debris. Large items readily visible from a boat deck are uncommon.

Target: The size of the patch is unknown, as is the precise distribution of debris, because large items readily visible from a boat deck are uncommon.


Source: Make the text clearer: This way bycatch would be avoided. Even the smallest particles would be extracted.

Target: This way bycatch would be avoided, although even the smallest particles would be extracted.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: She had two funnels. One was a dummy and this was removed in 1928.

Target: She had two funnels but one was a dummy and this was removed in 1928.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Registered by the Fishguard and Rosslare Company. She also saw service from Weymouth, where one of her lifeboats was used as a harbour launch for some years after her sinking.

Target: Although registered by the Fishguard and Rosslare Company, she also saw service from Weymouth, where one of her lifeboats was used as a harbour launch for some years after her sinking.


Source: Make the text more logical: Greater Pittsburgh is home to several museums, galleries, and organizations which promote appreciation for the visual arts. The largest art museum in the region is the Carnegie Museum of Art, founded in 1895 by industrialist Andrew Carnegie and located in home's Oakland neighborhood.

Target: Greater Pittsburgh is home to several museums, galleries, and organizations which promote appreciation for the visual arts. The largest art museum in the region is the Carnegie Museum of Art, founded in 1895 by industrialist Andrew Carnegie and located in Pittsburgh's Oakland neighborhood.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Luxembourg and the Saarland both have a net in-flow of cross-border commuters. That of Luxembourg is constantly high, while that of the Saarland is continuously diminishing.

Target: Luxembourg and the Saarland both have a net in-flow of cross-border commuters. However, that of Luxembourg is constantly high, while that of the Saarland is continuously diminishing.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The plan of the Greeks was to cut Anatolia in two, as the above towns were on the main rail-lines connecting the hinterland with the coast. After breaking the stiff Turkish defences, they occupied these strategically important centres.

Target: The plan of the Greeks was to cut Anatolia in two, as the above towns were on the main rail-lines connecting the hinterland with the coast. Eventually, after breaking the stiff Turkish defences, they occupied these strategically important centres.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: According to Turkish sources 20,826 Greek prisoners were taken. Of those about 740 officers and 13,000 soldiers arrived in Greek during the prisoner exchange in 1923.

Target: According to Turkish sources 20,826 Greek prisoners were taken. Of those about 740 officers and 13,000 soldiers arrived in Greece during the prisoner exchange in 1923.


Source: Fix sentence transition: On 29 April, the Soviet authorities supplied the Turkish consul critical quantities of arms and ammunition, sufficient for three Turkish divisions. On 3 May, the Soviet government handed over 33,500,000 gold rubles to Turkish -- the balance of the credit of 10,000,000 gold rubles.

Target: On 29 April, the Soviet authorities supplied the Turkish consul critical quantities of arms and ammunition, sufficient for three Turkish divisions. On 3 May, the Soviet government handed over 33,500,000 gold rubles to Turkey -- the balance of the credit of 10,000,000 gold rubles.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The dome was first painted green in 1837, and. Became known as the Green Dome.

Target: The dome was first painted green in 1837, and hence became known as the Green Dome.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The first firing is without the glaze, with the pieces emerging in their natural color and can be used in this form. Very few pieces of this type will sell, and they sell at a low price.

Target: The first firing is without the glaze, with the pieces emerging in their natural color and can be used in this form. However, very few pieces of this type will sell, and they sell at a low price.


Source: Fix coherence errors: After Crewe Alexandras attempts to sign him failed, Leigh went on trial at Bradford City. Following a successful trial with the club, Leigh signed a one-year deal for Bradford City on 6 August 2015.

Target: After Crewe Alexandras attempts to sign him failed, Leigh went on trial at Bradford City. But following a successful trial with the club, Leigh signed a one-year deal for Bradford City on 6 August 2015.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Raised in a non-practicing home. Puciato attended a Catholic private school.

Target: Although raised in a non-practicing home, Puciato attended a Catholic private school.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Snow usually falls from late September until late June. During cool spells.

Target: Snow usually falls from late September until late June, although during cool spells.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the 1970s major conservation jobs were made in the castle. Today the castle ruins are in a quite good condition.

Target: In the 1970s major conservation jobs were made in the castle, so today the castle ruins are in a quite good condition.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The group also had few successes in the local elections. Its comparative success in the local elections was diluted by the government's appointment of the balance of the District Board membership.

Target: The group also had few successes in the local elections. However its comparative success in the local elections was diluted by the government's appointment of the balance of the District Board membership.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Knight is given the location of several pieces of legendary armor. Upon retrieval, Knight is told that Knight is the legendary Knight, and Knight faces off against Darwin the ancient legendary hero.

Target: Knight is given the location of several pieces of legendary armor. Upon retrieval, Knight is told that he is the legendary hero, and he faces off against Darwin the ancient legendary hero.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: To prevent the rudder from rising out of the gudgeons there is often some preventer such as rudder weight. A locking device slid across the path of the pintle's removal from the upper gudgeon (also referred to as a Rudder Stop).

Target: To prevent the rudder from rising out of the gudgeons there is often some preventer such as rudder weight or a locking device slid across the path of the pintle's removal from the upper gudgeon (also referred to as a Rudder Stop).


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: These are necessary for most optimization problems which use search algorithms. Those algorithms are mainly deterministic and iterative.

Target: These are necessary for most optimization problems which use search algorithms, because those algorithms are mainly deterministic and iterative.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: They are currently members of the National League North and play at Nethermoor Park. The National League North is the sixth tier of English football.

Target: They are currently members of the National League North, the sixth tier of English football, and play at Nethermoor Park.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Unlike most other towns located along the Canadian Pacific Railway main line, Gull Lake was not planned and established by the railroad. There was some animosity from the railroad towards this town that bucked their plan.

Target: Unlike most other towns located along the Canadian Pacific Railway main line, Gull Lake was not planned and established by the railroad. In fact, there was some animosity from the railroad towards this town that bucked their plan.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In the 1990s, she became deputy head of the Swedish Art Grants Committee and head of the Swedish Visual Arts Foundation. She was effective in developing a more international approach to the work of these bodies, improving Sweden's worldwide image.

Target: In the 1990s, she became deputy head of the Swedish Art Grants Committee and head of the Swedish Visual Arts Foundation. In particular, she was effective in developing a more international approach to the work of these bodies, improving Sweden's worldwide image.


Source: Fix coherence: He faced the soldiers together with the other students. He saw himself on both sides of the divide, both as a student and as the soldier.

Target: Facing the soldiers together with the other students, he saw himself on both sides of the divide, both as a student and as the soldier.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Dutt wired home to say he had got the job of a telephone operator at a Lever Brothers factory in Calcutta. Soon Dutt got disenchanted by the job and left it.

Target: Dutt wired home to say he had got the job of a telephone operator at a Lever Brothers factory in Calcutta. But soon he got disenchanted by the job and left it.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Even less is known of how the occasion was first commemorated by the general public. Records indicate that in the Protestant stronghold of Dorchester a sermon was read.

Target: Even less is known of how the occasion was first commemorated by the general public, although records indicate that in the Protestant stronghold of Dorchester a sermon was read.


Source: Make the text clearer: Who gathering wood for the bonfire increasingly became the province of working-class children. Who solicited combustible materials, money, food and drink from wealthier neighbours, often with the aid of songs.

Target: Gathering wood for the bonfire increasingly became the province of working-class children, who solicited combustible materials, money, food and drink from wealthier neighbours, often with the aid of songs.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Claims that Guy Fawkes Night was a Protestant replacement for older customs like Samhain are disputed. Another old celebration.

Target: Claims that Guy Fawkes Night was a Protestant replacement for older customs like Samhain are disputed, although another old celebration.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He spent a year with the club. Made no appearances during the 2008.

Target: He spent a year with the club, although made no appearances during the 2008.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Worth pursuing, would not you say? Perhaps, after all, not to be spoken about too much.

Target: Worth pursuing, would not you say? But perhaps, after all, not to be spoken about too much.


Source: Make the text coherent: These forms and others. These forms are these assemblages and groupings and jostlings and juxtapositions sometimes have a power to move me.

Target: These forms, these assemblages and groupings and jostlings and juxtapositions sometimes have a power to move me, and others.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Gynaecological Cancer Fund was formed in 2014 in the United Kingdom. Gynaecological Cancer Fund was aimed at raising the awareness of Gynaecological cancer, with a number of notable United Kingdom celebrities on Gynaecological Cancer Fund's board.

Target: The Gynaecological Cancer Fund was formed in 2014 in the United Kingdom. It was aimed at raising the awareness of Gynaecological cancer, with a number of notable British celebrities on its board.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Bosna was far most successful handball team in after war Bosnia and Herzegovina. That year brought financial breakdown, Bosnia and Herzegovina lost most of Bosna's players and club staff, which resulted in total result crisis which lasted to 2005.

Target: Bosna was far most successful handball team in after war Bosnia and Herzegovina. But that year brought financial breakdown, Bosna lost most of its players and club staff, which resulted in total result crisis which lasted to 2005.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Forty-three cases of the disease were confirmed in 2007 and are now under treatment, according to the Ministry of Health. Limited surveillance capabilities and inadequate testing could mean that more people are infected.

Target: Forty-three cases of the disease were confirmed in 2007 and are now under treatment, according to the Ministry of Health. However, limited surveillance capabilities and inadequate testing could mean that more people are infected.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She remained with that unit until May 1944 when the minesweeper was transferred to Halifax Force Nova Scotia. Halifax Force is a local escort force based out of Halifax.

Target: She remained with that unit until May 1944 when the minesweeper was transferred to Halifax Force, a local escort force based out of Halifax, Nova Scotia.


Source: Make the text coherent: Levant returned to engage Constitution. Once she saw that Cyane had been defeated she turned and attempted escape.

Target: Levant returned to engage Constitution, but once she saw that Cyane had been defeated she turned and attempted escape.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: She sailed through dense fog. She overshot Blyth and ran aground on rocks below cliffs near Howick, some 30 mi (48 km) to the north.

Target: Sailing through dense fog, she overshot Blyth and ran aground on rocks below cliffs near Howick, some 30 mi (48 km) to the north.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: On 20 May, the squadron fought the Battle of Menorca where several British ships were seriously damaged. None was lost on either side.

Target: On 20 May, the squadron fought the Battle of Menorca where several British ships were seriously damaged but none was lost on either side.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Initially Forden Shieold would not surrender. After a few shots from Ringdove had killed one man and wounded two others Forden Shieold struck.

Target: Initially Forden Shieold would not surrender but after a few shots from Ringdove had killed one man and wounded two others she struck.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Initially she served as an influence minesweeper to combat the threat of magnetic mines. Such was the need for escorts that she was rearmed in 1941 to take part in the Battle of the Atlantic.

Target: Initially she served as an influence minesweeper to combat the threat of magnetic mines, but such was the need for escorts that she was rearmed in 1941 to take part in the Battle of the Atlantic.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Diehl BGT was expected to reach production readiness in 2010. Neither the weapon nor the integration has been ordered so far.

Target: Diehl BGT was expected to reach production readiness in 2010, although neither the weapon nor the integration has been ordered so far.


Source: Make the text more coherent: For this service the ship carried the marketing name The Lynx. Her official name remained as Condor 10.

Target: For this service the ship carried the marketing name The Lynx but her official name remained as Condor 10.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: A twelve-pulse bridge is effectively two six-pulse bridges connected in series on the DC side and arranged with a phase displacement between their respective AC supplies. Some of the harmonic voltages and currents are cancelled.

Target: A twelve-pulse bridge is effectively two six-pulse bridges connected in series on the DC side and arranged with a phase displacement between their respective AC supplies so that some of the harmonic voltages and currents are cancelled.


Source: Make the text more logical: From the foregoing equation, it is clear that as the firing angle increases, the mean DC output voltage decreases. With a line-commutated converter, the firing angle represents the only fast way of controlling the converter.

Target: From the foregoing equation, it is clear that as the firing angle increases, the mean DC output voltage decreases. In fact, with a line-commutated converter, the firing angle represents the only fast way of controlling the converter.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Functionally it is exactly equivalent to the conventional half-bridge MMC in every respect except for the harmonic performance, which is slightly inferior --. Still claimed to be good enough to avoid the need for filtering in most instances.

Target: Functionally it is exactly equivalent to the conventional half-bridge MMC in every respect except for the harmonic performance, which is slightly inferior -- although still claimed to be good enough to avoid the need for filtering in most instances.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The very long anode columns needed for high voltage applications limited the current which could safely be carried by each anode. Most mercury-arc valves for HVDC used several (most often, four) anode columns in parallel per valve.

Target: The very long anode columns needed for high voltage applications limited the current which could safely be carried by each anode, so most mercury-arc valves for HVDC used several (most often, four) anode columns in parallel per valve.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Hackney is an inner-eastern suburb of Adelaide, South Australia, in the City of Norwood Payneham St Peters. It is adjacent to the Adelaide Park Lands, the Adelaide city centre and Adelaide.

Target: Hackney is an inner-eastern suburb of Adelaide, South Australia, in the City of Norwood Payneham St Peters. It is adjacent to the Adelaide Park Lands, the Adelaide city centre and North Adelaide.


Source: Fix sentence transition: The city was at the plant of the East Jutland stretch of railway line, which was officially inaugurated on 3 September 1862. This date is seen as the city's founding.

Target: The city was at the plant of the East Jutland stretch of railway line, which was officially inaugurated on 3 September 1862. Therefore, this date is seen as the city's founding.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Haipai Culture targeted more at the need of the market and the common people, which brought great impact on the elite culture. After 1919, some new literary schools such as Love Birds and Butterfly School, New Sensation School emerged in Shanghai.

Target: Haipai Culture targeted more at the need of the market and the common people, which brought great impact on the elite culture. For example, after 1919, some new literary schools such as Love Birds and Butterfly School, New Sensation School emerged in Shanghai.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Shanghai is a typical commercial city in China. All cultural industries such as painting, singing, dancing, performing are also organized as commercial activities.

Target: Shanghai is a typical commercial city in China. Therefore, all cultural industries such as painting, singing, dancing, performing are also organized as commercial activities.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Many foreign-born Haitians have set up their own businesses, initially to serve their communities. Many established barbershops, bodegas, and restaurants (predominately of Haitian cuisine).

Target: Many foreign-born Haitians have set up their own businesses, initially to serve their communities. Thus, many established barbershops, bodegas, and restaurants (predominately of Haitian cuisine).


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Many suffer from less education. Many have had difficulty flourishing in the United States.

Target: Suffering from less education, many have had difficulty flourishing in the United States.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Nelson hailed from Teebius. Nelson decided his time would be better spent as Hal-Con's mascot because the world on our side of the galaxy intrigued him more than his own.

Target: Hailing from Teebius, Nelson decided his time would be better spent as Hal-Con's mascot because the world on our side of the galaxy intrigued him more than his own.


Source: Make the text coherent: Two of the dishes are fixed. Two are moveable and share the One-Mile's rail track.

Target: Two of the dishes are fixed, while two are moveable and share the One-Mile's rail track.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: A conversion to Christianity on Halfdan's part is not recorded. A is not gift of land or a fief, Halfdan's his son Hemming did convert and was probably ruling Frisia in 837.

Target: A conversion to Christianity on Halfdan's part is not recorded, nor is a gift of land or a fief, but his son Hemming did convert and was probably ruling Frisia in 837.


Source: Fix coherence: People are out of work and they're hurting. People're all wondering what People're going to do to make a comeback.

Target: People are out of work and they're hurting. And they're all wondering what they're going to do to make a comeback.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: O'Connor spoke about Cortana's fate in Halo 4. O'Connor stated that Halo 4's story was focused on the effect that Cortana's sacrifice and loss would have on the Master Chief.

Target: Speaking about Cortana's fate in Halo 4, O'Connor stated that Halo 4's story was focused on the effect that Cortana's sacrifice and loss would have on the Master Chief.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Spartans may also throw grenades and use their weapons for pistol-whipping. Some of the vehicles and their mounted weapons are available for use.

Target: Spartans may also throw grenades and use their weapons for pistol-whipping. Finally, some of the vehicles and their mounted weapons are available for use.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: They are context-dependent and can be used for attack, defense and evasion. All Halo 5 firearms can be aimed by looking down their iron sights, a capability restricted to specific weapons in previous games.

Target: They are context-dependent and can be used for attack, defense and evasion. Additionally, all Halo 5 firearms can be aimed by looking down their iron sights, a capability restricted to specific weapons in previous games.


Source: Make the text clearer: The development team wanted to launch a beta as early as possible. Players could test and give feedback on new gameplay elements.

Target: The development team wanted to launch a beta as early as possible so that players could test and give feedback on new gameplay elements.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Halos are customarily operated with the plane of the loop oriented horizontally, parallel to the ground,. Small-loop antennas often are oriented vertically.

Target: Halos are customarily operated with the plane of the loop oriented horizontally, parallel to the ground, whereas small-loop antennas often are oriented vertically.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Halo antennas' radiation pattern, like their size, falls inbetween large and small loops. Somewhat closer to small-loops.

Target: Halo antennas' radiation pattern, like their size, falls inbetween large and small loops, although somewhat closer to small-loops.


Source: Fix coherence: The little bittern was present from 2009, bred in 2010, and has been present every year since. Breeding by this reclusive bird is difficult to prove in such a large expanse of reed bed.

Target: The little bittern was present from 2009, bred in 2010, and has been present every year since, although breeding by this reclusive bird is difficult to prove in such a large expanse of reed bed.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: This invention is such a person can wear mini graters on his ten fingers and 'massage' the cheese, thus grating all of it. Nothing goes to waste.

Target: This invention is such a person can wear mini graters on his ten fingers and 'massage' the cheese, thus grating all of it so that nothing goes to waste.


Source: Make the text clearer: Polaroid Bundled with Car TV Kit. Can be purchased by itself for under $20 USD

Target: Polaroid Bundled with Car TV Kit although can be purchased by itself for under $20 USD


Source: Make the text coherent: A lack of directional stability caused by the increased forward side area was partly cured by adding a fixed fin. To find the cause of the tail oscillation, the Admiralty called in Frederick Lanchester from the National Physics Laboratory.

Target: A lack of directional stability caused by the increased forward side area was partly cured by adding a fixed fin but to find the cause of the tail oscillation, the Admiralty called in Frederick Lanchester from the National Physics Laboratory.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Hanover Finance was a New Zealand non-bank finance company that focused on lending for high-risk property development that failed in 2010 under the leadership of Mark Hotchin. At the time of Hanover Finance's failure Hanover Finance was the non-bank finance company company New Zealand Zealand.

Target: Hanover Finance was a New Zealand non-bank finance company that focused on lending for high-risk property development that failed in 2010 under the leadership of Mark Hotchin. At the time of its failure it was the largest finance company in New Zealand.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: He also conducted phytophysiological research of chemotaxis and nastic movements, as well as ecophysiological investigations involving photosynthesis and respiration of marine plants. He did extensive studies on the cytology and genetics of fungi, especially Basidiomycetes.

Target: He also conducted phytophysiological research of chemotaxis and nastic movements, as well as ecophysiological investigations involving photosynthesis and respiration of marine plants. Furthermore, he did extensive studies on the cytology and genetics of fungi, especially Basidiomycetes.