Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Undefeated in the Big Ten after decades as a doormat, the Wildcats went on to face USC in the Rose Bowl. The Wildcats lost to the USC in what was a see-saw game until USC pulled away in the fourth quarter.

Target: Undefeated in the Big Ten after decades as a doormat, the Wildcats went on to face USC in the Rose Bowl. However, the Wildcats lost to the Trojans in what was a see-saw game until USC pulled away in the fourth quarter.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Melbourne lost its first game of the season. Every team had won and lost at least 1 game.

Target: Melbourne lost its first game of the season, meaning every team had won and lost at least 1 game.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Persian rule in Egypt is finally restored by Megabyzus, satrap of Syria, after a prolonged struggle which has included dealing with a military intervention by Athens. The leader of the revolt, Inaros, is crucified by the Persian.

Target: Persian rule in Egypt is finally restored by Megabyzus, satrap of Syria, after a prolonged struggle which has included dealing with a military intervention by Athens. The leader of the revolt, Inaros, is crucified by the Persians.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Nour associated with his former adversary, Krushevan. Nour became the editorial secretary, and even joined up with the SRN.

Target: Associating with his former adversary, Krushevan, Nour became the editorial secretary, and even joined up with the SRN.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Stieglitz attended Charlier Institute in 1871. Charlier Institute is a Christian school and the best private school in New York.

Target: Stieglitz attended Charlier Institute, a Christian school and the best private school in New York, in 1871.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Amboherpia is a genus of cavibelonian solenogaster worm-like mollusk. Cavibelonian solenogaster is a kind of shell-less.

Target: Amboherpia is a genus of cavibelonian solenogaster, a kind of shell-less, worm-like mollusk.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Senegal has expressed an interest in investing in the promising sectors of Bangladesh. Bangladesh has identified ceramics, pharmaceuticals, ready made garments, jute and leather goods as exports with potential in the Senegal market.

Target: Senegal has expressed an interest in investing in the promising sectors of Bangladesh. Bangladesh has identified ceramics, pharmaceuticals, ready made garments, jute and leather goods as exports with potential in the Senegalese market.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Liebenzeller sightung the enemy approaching. Liebenzeller sent messengers to Strasbourg to call for help.

Target: Sighting the enemy approaching, Liebenzeller sent messengers to Strasbourg to call for help.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Braniff flights at Dallas-Fort Worth International Airport that morning were suddenly grounded. Passengers were forced to disembark, being told that Braniff no longer existed.

Target: Braniff flights at Dallas-Fort Worth International Airport that morning were suddenly grounded, and passengers were forced to disembark, being told that Braniff no longer existed.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The team has been sold to Los Angeles investor Mark Attanasio. Questions remain regarding Selig's past involvement.

Target: Although the team has been sold to Los Angeles investor Mark Attanasio, questions remain regarding Selig's past involvement.


Source: Make the text more logical: A DVD documenting the tour titled Off the Map was released in 2001. The Map was made up of footage from different shows.

Target: A DVD documenting the tour titled Off the Map, which was made up of footage from different shows, was released in 2001.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Many early Crookes tubes undoubtedly generated X-rays. Early researchers such as Ivan Pulyui had noticed that they could make foggy marks on nearby unexposed photographic plates.

Target: Many early Crookes tubes undoubtedly generated X-rays, because early researchers such as Ivan Pulyui had noticed that they could make foggy marks on nearby unexposed photographic plates.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Rotations are ordered. Later ones do not cause zero entries to become non-zero again.

Target: Rotations are ordered so that later ones do not cause zero entries to become non-zero again.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: By this time, Hamdi Bey had a tolerant view towards the local Armenian population. Fearing that he might lose his post as governor due to his tolerance, he ordered the arrest of many Armenian he believed would cause disturbances.

Target: By this time, Hamdi Bey had a tolerant view towards the local Armenian population. However, fearing that he might lose his post as governor due to his tolerance, he ordered the arrest of many Armenians he believed would cause disturbances.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: One single copy gene was found to be duplicated in its genome. Data on absence of large genome segment duplications (single paints of most Octodon degu probes) and repetitive DNA hybridization evidence rules against tetraploidy.

Target: Although one single copy gene was found to be duplicated in its genome, data on absence of large genome segment duplications (single paints of most Octodon degu probes) and repetitive DNA hybridization evidence rules against tetraploidy.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The series ended first-run episodes on December 6, 1991. Reruns aired weekly until March 13, 1993.

Target: Although the series ended first-run episodes on December 6, 1991, reruns aired weekly until March 13, 1993.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The main ingredient for the vast majority of soups and stews are tomatoes-canned or fresh tomatoes can be used. Nearly all Ghanaian soups and stews are red or orange in appearance.

Target: The main ingredient for the vast majority of soups and stews are tomatoes-canned or fresh tomatoes can be used. As a result, nearly all Ghanaian soups and stews are red or orange in appearance.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In the nineties was begun to maintain and also restore the historical settlement. Only one third of the old land development remained.

Target: In the nineties was begun to maintain and also restore the historical settlement. Nevertheless, only one third of the old land development remained.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As a river crossing, Gordon's Ferry sat empty for many years. Oil was discovered in the Kern River Oil Field in 1899 (the first oil discovery in Kern County).

Target: As a river crossing, Gordon's Ferry sat empty for many years. However, oil was discovered in the Kern River Oil Field in 1899 (the first oil discovery in Kern County).


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2003, it was reported that the fungal disease Phytophthora palmivora had been detected in plant nurseries in Sicily, leading to root rot and death of potted Grevillea cultivars. Plants of 'Mt Tamboritha' appeared resistant.

Target: In 2003, it was reported that the fungal disease Phytophthora palmivora had been detected in plant nurseries in Sicily, leading to root rot and death of potted Grevillea cultivars. However, plants of 'Mt Tamboritha' appeared resistant.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: When people lost trust in a bank they rushed to redeem its notes, and. Banks issued more notes than people's specie reserves.

Target: When people lost trust in a bank they rushed to redeem its notes, and because banks issued more notes than their specie reserves.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It is usually a large bush or a small tree. Rare specimens are most impressive ; being 2 m wide at the base, and 25 m tall.

Target: It is usually a large bush or a small tree. However, rare specimens are most impressive ; being 2 m wide at the base, and 25 m tall.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: She filmed as a one-woman crew. She lived in a van for a year while traveling across the Deep South to shoot stories of gay and lesbian southerners.

Target: Filming as a one-woman crew, she lived in a van for a year while traveling across the Deep South to shoot stories of gay and lesbian southerners.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Making a science fiction movie. Wimmer intentionally avoided using futuristic technology that could become obsolete, and he also decided to set his story in an indeterminate future.

Target: Although making a science fiction movie, Wimmer intentionally avoided using futuristic technology that could become obsolete, and he also decided to set his story in an indeterminate future.


Source: Make the text more logical: It is mentioned by the Narrator the first time he states the rules. It is not mentioned by Narrator when Narrator states them.

Target: It is mentioned by the Narrator the first time he states the rules, but it is not mentioned by Tyler when he states them.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Bangladesh straddles the Tropic of Cancer. Bangladesh has a tropical monsoon climate characterised by heavy seasonal rainfall, high temperatures, and high humidity.

Target: Straddling the Tropic of Cancer, Bangladesh has a tropical monsoon climate characterised by heavy seasonal rainfall, high temperatures, and high humidity.


Source: Make the text more logical: The most skilled recruits became Eggbreakers among other things. Eggbreakers is harada's elite enforcers charged with containing renegade Harbingers.

Target: The most skilled recruits became Eggbreakers, Harada's elite enforcers charged with containing renegade Harbingers, among other things.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Menelaus persuaded him to stay. Menelaus rose to manage Fothergill's Aberdare Ironworks at Llwydcoed.

Target: Persuading him to stay, Menelaus rose to manage Fothergill's Aberdare Ironworks at Llwydcoed.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Scalia was unanimously confirmed by the Senate and became a part of the court's conservative bloc, often supporting originalist and textualist positions. On February 13, 2016, Scalia Scalia was found dead at the Cibolo Creek Ranch in Shafter, Texas.

Target: Scalia was unanimously confirmed by the Senate and became a part of the court's conservative bloc, often supporting originalist and textualist positions. On February 13, 2016, Justice Scalia was found dead at the Cibolo Creek Ranch in Shafter, Texas.


Source: Fix coherence errors: This tradition has created Minang communities in many Indonesian cities and towns, which nevertheless are still tied closely to their homeland ; a state in Malaysia named Negeri Sembilan is heavily influenced by Minang culture. Negeri Sembilan was originally Minangkabau's Negeri Sembilan.

Target: This tradition has created Minang communities in many Indonesian cities and towns, which nevertheless are still tied closely to their homeland ; a state in Malaysia named Negeri Sembilan is heavily influenced by Minang culture because Negeri Sembilan was originally Minangkabau's colony.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Between March 1961 and the Clay fight, Liston had fought three times and won each bout with first-round knockouts --. That Liston had fought a total of just over six minutes during a 35-month stretch.

Target: Between March 1961 and the Clay fight, Liston had fought three times and won each bout with first-round knockouts -- meaning that he had fought a total of just over six minutes during a 35-month stretch.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Her social and academic excellence won her a scholarship in Columbia University's Leadership Program, but she was unable to take up the offer. Around this time she was diagnosed with cancer.

Target: Her social and academic excellence won her a scholarship in Columbia University's Leadership Program, but she was unable to take up the offer because around this time she was diagnosed with cancer.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The men were never told that they had syphilis. They men not provided treatment when penicillin became available as an effective cure in 1947.

Target: The men were never told that they had syphilis nor were they provided treatment when penicillin became available as an effective cure in 1947.


Source: Fix coherence errors: In fact, it had made no such proposal. Media reports to the contrary caused then British opposition leader David Cameron to suggest Hartwich should leave the UK.

Target: In fact, it had made no such proposal. However, media reports to the contrary caused then British opposition leader David Cameron to suggest Hartwich should leave the UK.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The concept became known as the High Current Power Supply or HCPS and was popular. Improvements to the sound quality were gained by moving to a larger power supply.

Target: The concept became known as the High Current Power Supply or HCPS and was popular because improvements to the sound quality were gained by moving to a larger power supply.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The pier is the largest structure in Hudson River Park at over 14 acres in size. Is the home to the Hudson River Park's offices.

Target: The pier is the largest structure in Hudson River Park at over 14 acres in size, and is the home to the Hudson River Park Trust's offices.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In the PstI system, the genes are encoded on opposite strands and. Must be transcribed divergently from separate promoters.

Target: In the PstI system, the genes are encoded on opposite strands and hence must be transcribed divergently from separate promoters.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Welz evolved out of early prototype stories in Funnybook and Bakersfield Kountry Komics. Welz created Cherry Poptart in the early 1980s.

Target: Evolving out of early prototype stories in Funnybook and Bakersfield Kountry Komics, Welz created Cherry Poptart in the early 1980s.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In the early 1950s, it was part of an exhibition in Dallas, Texas. Beginning in 1952, it was exhibited for several years at the United Methodist Church in Washington Crossing, Pennsylvania, not far from the scene of the painting.

Target: In the early 1950s, it was part of an exhibition in Dallas, Texas. Then, beginning in 1952, it was exhibited for several years at the United Methodist Church in Washington Crossing, Pennsylvania, not far from the scene of the painting.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Water quality is usually sampled and analyzed at laboratories, nowadays. Citizens demand real-time information about the water they are drinking.

Target: Although water quality is usually sampled and analyzed at laboratories, nowadays, citizens demand real-time information about the water they are drinking.


Source: Make the text more consistent: They are about to board when Waddles appears. Waddles is mabel's pet pig.

Target: They are about to board when Waddles, Mabel's pet pig, appears.


Source: Fix sentence flow: 12 % of pupils speak Welsh at home. School data indicates that 31 % of pupils are considered to be fluent in Welsh.

Target: 12 % of pupils speak Welsh at home. However, school data indicates that 31 % of pupils are considered to be fluent in Welsh.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Hill subsequently retired from driving and the T370 made no further appearances at Grands Prix. T370 was an unused spare T370 on a few occasions throughout the rest of the season.

Target: Hill subsequently retired from driving and the T370 made no further appearances at Grands Prix, although it was an unused spare car on a few occasions throughout the rest of the season.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Each stage of planning, from building partnership to evaluation, builds upon the previous. Because the plan must be updated, the process is also cyclical.

Target: Each stage of planning, from building partnership to evaluation, builds upon the previous. Yet, because the plan must be updated, the process is also cyclical.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Nethermost Pike is also counted as a Wainwright. Nethermost Pike was given a chapter in Wainwright's Pictorial Guide to the Lakeland Fells.

Target: Nethermost Pike is also counted as a Wainwright because it was given a chapter in Alfred Wainwright's Pictorial Guide to the Lakeland Fells.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Post Office opened on 8 April 1908. Known as Nicholl's Point until around 1949.

Target: The Post Office opened on 8 April 1908 although known as Nicholl's Point until around 1949.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Meanwhile, Noah is told by Pastor Kingsman that he should do what is to be done. Noah is God's Noah.

Target: Meanwhile, Noah is told by Pastor Kingsman that he should do what is to be done because it is God's will.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Pawnee Agency and Pawnee Boarding School were established after the Pawnee tribe came to this area in 1875. The Pawnee Boarding School was designated as a post office on May 4, 1876.

Target: The Pawnee Agency and Pawnee Boarding School were established after the Pawnee tribe came to this area in 1875. The Pawnee Agency was designated as a post office on May 4, 1876.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The cannons are used to engage targets out to a range of 2,500 meters and at altitudes of up to 2,000 meters. Two QW-2 infra-red homing missiles can be mounted above the cannons on each side.

Target: The cannons are used to engage targets out to a range of 2,500 meters and at altitudes of up to 2,000 meters. Additionally two QW-2 infra-red homing missiles can be mounted above the cannons on each side.


Source: Make the text coherent: The roads M0 (that forms a half ring around the city of Budapest), M2 and M15. Are divided multilane roads.

Target: The roads M0 (that forms a half ring around the city of Budapest), M2 and M15 although are divided multilane roads.


Source: Make the text clearer: Described as a link between oryzomyine and akodontine rodents and placed in its own genus, Microakodontomys. Weksler and coworkers dismissed it as an aberrant Oligoryzomys.

Target: Although described as a link between oryzomyine and akodontine rodents and placed in its own genus, Microakodontomys, Weksler and coworkers dismissed it as an aberrant Oligoryzomys.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: He gets into the car to try to free Claire. Police surround the vehicle and threaten to open fire.

Target: He gets into the car to try to free Claire but police surround the vehicle and threaten to open fire.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Dearborn is among a small number of municipalities that own property in other cities. Dearborn owns the 626-acre (2.53 km) Dearborn in Milford, Michigan, which is located 35 miles (56 km) from Dearborn.

Target: Dearborn is among a small number of municipalities that own property in other cities. It owns the 626-acre (2.53 km) Camp Dearborn in Milford, Michigan, which is located 35 miles (56 km) from Dearborn.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The EZ Rock stations are generally programmed independently. Special Canadian content versions of shows such as Delilah and the John Tesh Radio Show are heard across the network.

Target: The EZ Rock stations are generally programmed independently, although special Canadian content versions of shows such as Delilah and the John Tesh Radio Show are heard across the network.


Source: Make the text coherent: Diazepam and clonazepam have been found to have long-lasting, but not permanent, immunotoxic effects in the fetus of pregnant rats. Single very high doses of diazepam have been found to cause lifelong immunosuppression in neonatal rats.

Target: Diazepam and clonazepam have been found to have long-lasting, but not permanent, immunotoxic effects in the fetus of pregnant rats. However, single very high doses of diazepam have been found to cause lifelong immunosuppression in neonatal rats.


Source: Make the text more coherent: At that time, his mother brought him back to the San Francisco Bay Area. Thereafter Chin grew up in Oakland Chinatown.

Target: At that time, his mother brought him back to the San Francisco Bay Area and thereafter Chin grew up in Oakland Chinatown.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Franklin is the county seat of Heard County. The city is named after Franklin.

Target: Franklin is the county seat of Heard County. The city is named after Benjamin Franklin.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In addition, education often prolongs marriage, and. Marriage almost always means the end of education for a women.

Target: In addition, education often prolongs marriage, and because marriage almost always means the end of education for a women.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Ian has been a regular columnist for the LGBT news magazine The Advocate and contributed to Performing Songwriter magazine from 1995 -- 2003. On July 24, 2008, columnist released her positively-received autobiography Society's Child (published by Penguin Tarcher).

Target: Ian has been a regular columnist for the LGBT news magazine The Advocate and contributed to Performing Songwriter magazine from 1995 -- 2003. On July 24, 2008, Ian released her positively-received autobiography Society's Child (published by Penguin Tarcher).


Source: Make the text more coherent: Then a limited guitarist. Berry added vocals and showmanship to the group.

Target: Although then a limited guitarist, Berry added vocals and showmanship to the group.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: He protested against the conditions of his exile, in June 1923. He attempted self-immolation, but survived, although seriously burnt.

Target: Protesting against the conditions of his exile, in June 1923, he attempted self-immolation, but survived, although seriously burnt.


Source: Make the text more logical: This method allows the quick calculation of binomial coefficients without the need for fractions or multiplications. By looking at row number 5 of the triangle, one can quickly read off that

Target: This method allows the quick calculation of binomial coefficients without the need for fractions or multiplications. For instance, by looking at row number 5 of the triangle, one can quickly read off that


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Trade with the mainland virtually ceased with the coming of the 1966 Cultural Revolution. Jardines still managed to sell six Vickers Viscount passenger aircraft to the Chinese Government during this period.

Target: Although trade with the mainland virtually ceased with the coming of the 1966 Cultural Revolution, Jardines still managed to sell six Vickers Viscount passenger aircraft to the Chinese Government during this period.


Source: Fix coherence: some progress on observance of international human rights law. Implementation of some ECtHR judgments requiring legislative amendments has been outstanding for several years.

Target: some progress on observance of international human rights law. However, implementation of some ECtHR judgments requiring legislative amendments has been outstanding for several years.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Subjects change during the course of the experiment or even between measurements. Young children might mature and their ability to concentrate may change as they grow up.

Target: Subjects change during the course of the experiment or even between measurements. For example, young children might mature and their ability to concentrate may change as they grow up.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: He was educated at Beacon Community College East Sussex. Beacon Community College is a state comprehensive in the town of Crowborough.

Target: He was educated at Beacon Community College, a state comprehensive in the town of Crowborough, East Sussex.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: An expanded edition was published in 2011. An expanded edition is an update of his overview of post-1968 genre cinema.

Target: An expanded edition, an update of his overview of post-1968 genre cinema, was published in 2011.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Lee Roy Atalifo, (born 10 May 1988) is a Fiji professional Rugby union footballer. Lee Roy Atalifo was part of the Fiji squad at the 2015 Rugby World Cup.

Target: Lee Roy Atalifo, (born 10 May 1988) is a Fiji professional Rugby union footballer. He was part of the Fijian squad at the 2015 Rugby World Cup.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: They trapped them in a ravine. They proved stronger than she had anticipated, and she sent word to the city for re-enforcements.

Target: Trapping them in a ravine, they proved stronger than she had anticipated, and she sent word to the city for re-enforcements.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Together, they are conceiving projects, whereas Gaudriault curates exhibition and is in charge of the editorial outlines. Gaudriault gives form to Gaudriault's texts by integrating them into a calligraphy installation.

Target: Together, they are conceiving projects, whereas Gaudriault curates exhibition and is in charge of the editorial outlines. Furthermore she gives form to her texts by integrating them into a calligraphy installation.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The Lusitanians are categorised by some as Celts, or at least Celticised, but there remain inscriptions in an apparently non-Celtic Lusitanian language. The language had clear affinities with the Gallaecian Celts language.

Target: The Lusitanians are categorised by some as Celts, or at least Celticised, but there remain inscriptions in an apparently non-Celtic Lusitanian language. However, the language had clear affinities with the Gallaecian Celtic language.


Source: Fix coherence errors: All former participating countries had previously signed association agreements with the EU. In fact CEFTA has served as a preparation for full EU membership.

Target: All former participating countries had previously signed association agreements with the EU, so in fact CEFTA has served as a preparation for full European Union membership.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Most effort of the toy companies where concentrated on the Middle Eastern region. Successful attempt examples such as Fulla.

Target: Most effort of the toy companies where concentrated on the Middle Eastern region, although successful attempt examples such as Fulla.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: U.S. Air Force and U.S. intelligence officials have stated their belief that China likely has the resources, data and technology required to build a 5th generation fighter. Doubts remain in areas such as systems engineering.

Target: U.S. Air Force and U.S. intelligence officials have stated their belief that China likely has the resources, data and technology required to build a 5th generation fighter, although doubts remain in areas such as systems engineering.


Source: Fix coherence: You need to have tension in your vocal chords and your back, let alone a guitar. Tension can be destructive.

Target: You need to have tension in your vocal chords and your back, let alone a guitar. However, tension can be destructive.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: 2004 Sam P. Braswell has died. Sam P. Braswell spent much of his life working in the newspaper business and co -- owned and operated the Kerrville Daily Times from 1948 to 1955.

Target: 2004 Sam P. Braswell, who spent much of his life working in the newspaper business and co -- owned and operated the Kerrville Daily Times from 1948 to 1955, has died.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Such schools discouraged and even prohibited use of Native American languages and taught students that a tribal identity was inferior. Students were forced to speak and think in English.

Target: Such schools discouraged and even prohibited use of Native American languages and taught students that a tribal identity was inferior. Instead, students were forced to speak and think in English.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: The following year he was a premiership player with Carlton in 1938. premiership player broke premiership player's leg in a match against Richmond and the break caused him to retire in 1941 aged just 28.

Target: The following year he was a premiership player with Carlton in 1938. Hale broke his leg in a match against Richmond and the break caused him to retire in 1941 aged just 28.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Singapore also embraced its ethnic and cultural diversity, combining the British tradition of stability and openness, while taking advantage of the Chinese entrepreneurial urge and skill. The government strived to create an attractive environment for businessmen, developing a city with cleanliness and greenery.

Target: Singapore also embraced its ethnic and cultural diversity, combining the British tradition of stability and openness, while taking advantage of the Chinese entrepreneurial urge and skill. The government moreover strived to create an attractive environment for businessmen, developing a city with cleanliness and greenery.


Source: Make the text more logical: Stapleton Road became one of Bristol's busiest station. Service levels reduced significantly in the 1960s when reversing trains at Bristol Temple Meads became common.

Target: Stapleton Road became one of Bristol's busiest station, but service levels reduced significantly in the 1960s when reversing trains at Bristol Temple Meads became common.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: For I am the least of the apostles, that am not meet to be called an apostle. Apostle persecuted the church of God.

Target: For I am the least of the apostles, that am not meet to be called an apostle, because I persecuted the church of God.


Source: Make the text more logical: The advent of agriculture resulted in lifestyle changes from nomadic lifestyles to ones lived in homes, with domesticated animals. Land farmed using more varied and sophisticated tools.

Target: The advent of agriculture resulted in lifestyle changes from nomadic lifestyles to ones lived in homes, with domesticated animals, and land farmed using more varied and sophisticated tools.


Source: Make the text coherent: It was erected in the 12th Century and in 1851 became the Diocese of Capaccio and Vallo. Since 1945 it has been the Diocese of Capaccio and Vallo.

Target: It was erected in the 12th Century and in 1851 became the Diocese of Capaccio and Vallo. Since 1945 it has been the Roman Catholic Diocese of Vallo della Lucania.


Source: Make the text more consistent: In social systems, unique cultures may be lost due to climate change. Humans living on atoll islands face risks due to sea-level rise, sea-surface warming, and increased frequency and intensity of extreme weather events.

Target: In social systems, unique cultures may be lost due to climate change. For example, humans living on atoll islands face risks due to sea-level rise, sea-surface warming, and increased frequency and intensity of extreme weather events.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Economic liberalisation saw the popularity of netball decline during the 1990s. Recent attempts to raise netball's popularity have been slow as sport is culturally more acceptable for men.

Target: Economic liberalisation saw the popularity of netball decline during the 1990s, and recent attempts to raise netball's popularity have been slow as sport is culturally more acceptable for men.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Records do not indicate which architect was responsible for individual portions of the building. Consensus among scholars usually credits the exterior design to James Gallier and Charles Dakin, with the interior credited to the Dakin brothers.

Target: Although records do not indicate which architect was responsible for individual portions of the building, consensus among scholars usually credits the exterior design to James Gallier and Charles Dakin, with the interior credited to the Dakin brothers.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Unlike normal Spanish road and rail traffic, which use right hand drive, Madrid Metro trains use left-hand running on all lines. Traffic in Madrid drove on the left until 1924.

Target: Unlike normal Spanish road and rail traffic, which use right hand drive, Madrid Metro trains use left-hand running on all lines because traffic in Madrid drove on the left until 1924.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Jennifer Erin Gutman (born 1989) is a finalist in the 2002 Discovery Channel Young Scientist Challenge (DCYSC) for her physical science project. Discovery Channel Young Scientist Challenge (DCYSC) is a middle school science competition.

Target: Jennifer Erin Gutman (born 1989) is a finalist in the 2002 Discovery Channel Young Scientist Challenge (DCYSC), a middle school science competition, for her physical science project.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Martha N. Alexander a middle school science competition. Martha N. Alexander is a mentor of a finalist in the 2001 Discovery Young Scientist Challenge (DYSC).

Target: Martha N. Alexander, a mentor of a finalist in the 2001 Discovery Young Scientist Challenge (DYSC), a middle school science competition.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The digital collection and library is accessible to the general public. Researchers may access paper copies of the newspapers and magazines.

Target: The digital collection and library is accessible to the general public, while researchers may access paper copies of the newspapers and magazines.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Historically, the 12th and its predecessors had been a swing district. Redistricting following the United States Census, 2000 gave the district a somewhat bluer hue than its predecessor.

Target: Historically, the 12th and its predecessors had been a swing district. However, redistricting following the United States Census, 2000 gave the district a somewhat bluer hue than its predecessor.


Source: Make the text coherent: He aligned himself with Kentucky's Debt Relief Party. He returned to the Kentucky House in 1817 but resigned his seat in 1821 to accept Governor John Adair's appointment to the post of Attorney General of Kentucky.

Target: Aligning himself with Kentucky's Debt Relief Party, he returned to the Kentucky House in 1817 but resigned his seat in 1821 to accept Governor John Adair's appointment to the post of Attorney General of Kentucky.


Source: Make the text more coherent: UCLA's Arron Afflalo led all scorers with 24 points while Brandon Rush of Kansas led the Jayhawks with 18. UCLA and Jayhawks combined for 35 steals, breaking the previous tournament record of 28.

Target: UCLA's Arron Afflalo led all scorers with 24 points while Brandon Rush of Kansas led the Jayhawks with 18. UCLA and Kansas combined for 35 steals, breaking the previous tournament record of 28.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Originally, the hosts Namibia were invited to Europe by the International Rugby Board to play part in the 2012 International Rugby Series. Namibia turned the offer down to create their own tournament so they could bring more international rugby to the Namibia fans at home.

Target: Originally, the hosts Namibia were invited to Europe by the International Rugby Board to play part in the 2012 International Rugby Series. However, Namibia turned the offer down to create their own tournament so they could bring more international rugby to the Namibian fans at home.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: It is separated from the larger Missolonghi Lagoon (a bay of the Gulf of Patras) to the south by the island of Aitoliko. Together they form the Missolonghi -- Aitoliko Lagoons complex.

Target: It is separated from the larger Missolonghi Lagoon (a bay of the Gulf of Patras) to the south by the island of Aitoliko, but together they form the Missolonghi -- Aitoliko Lagoons complex.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: He devised his own way of working which dispensed with the traditional sculptor's armature. He began working with random clay elements, constructed of coarse clay with uniform thickness, so that sculpture could develop, be turned and incorporate subconscious impulses in building the work.

Target: Devising his own way of working which dispensed with the traditional sculptor's armature, he began working with random clay elements, constructed of coarse clay with uniform thickness, so that sculpture could develop, be turned and incorporate subconscious impulses in building the work.


Source: Make the text clearer: Van Gerbig married Victoria Susan Fairbanks, daughter of Douglas Fairbanks, Jr in 1965. They had two children, Van Gerbig and Elizabeth (born 1966 and 1968, respectively).

Target: Van Gerbig married Victoria Susan Fairbanks, daughter of Douglas Fairbanks, Jr in 1965. They had two children, Barry and Elizabeth (born 1966 and 1968, respectively).


Source: Make the text more coherent: Heavy air raids began in October and thousands of people took shelter there, often remaining overnight. Usage of the shelter dwindled in 1941 as the air forces of Germany and Italy were redirected away from the United Kingdom and against the Soviet Union.

Target: Heavy air raids began in October and thousands of people took shelter there, often remaining overnight. However, usage of the shelter dwindled in 1941 as the air forces of Germany and Italy were redirected away from the United Kingdom and against the Soviet Union.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: And with an oil-based drilling fluid it can be masked in the early stages of controlling a kick. Gas influx may dissolve into the oil under pressure at depth.

Target: And with an oil-based drilling fluid it can be masked in the early stages of controlling a kick because gas influx may dissolve into the oil under pressure at depth.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Minturn married Sarah Susannah Shaw (1839 -- 1926) in 1861. Sarah Susannah Shaw (1839 -- 1926) is the sister of Robert Gould Shaw.

Target: Minturn married Sarah Susannah Shaw (1839 -- 1926), the sister of Robert Gould Shaw, in 1861.


Source: Fix sentence transition: For a while, we had no luck. Recently, our satellites noticed some activity at four locations in Green Hill Zone and Central City.

Target: For a while, we had no luck. But recently, our satellites noticed some activity at four locations in Green Hill Zone and Central City.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: South Side Park was the name used for three different baseball parks that formerly stood in Chicago, Illinois, at different times. Whose sites were all just a few blocks away from each other.

Target: South Side Park was the name used for three different baseball parks that formerly stood in Chicago, Illinois, at different times, and whose sites were all just a few blocks away from each other.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: He identified Thirunavukkarasar to contest the Aranthangi assembly constituency. Thirunavukkarasar is a lawyer by profession.

Target: He identified Thirunavukkarasar, a lawyer by profession, to contest the Aranthangi assembly constituency.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Taiwo Odubiyi is the Senior Associate Pastor of The Still Waters Church International, located in the City of Ikorodu, Nigeria. She attends the headquarters branch with her Senior Associate Pastor, Senior Associate Pastor Senior Associate Pastor, who is the senior Senior Associate Pastor and general overseer.

Target: Taiwo Odubiyi is the Senior Associate Pastor of The Still Waters Church International, located in the City of Ikorodu, Nigeria. She attends the headquarters branch with her husband, Reverend Sola Odubiyi, who is the senior pastor and general overseer.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This law was not enforced, despite the existence of a levy to finance the work. That the new tax revenue was never used for the construction of the theater.

Target: This law was not enforced, despite the existence of a levy to finance the work. Thus, that the new tax revenue was never used for the construction of the theater.


Source: Make the text more coherent: There is risk with trail braking. Excessive use of the front brake can result in a loss of grip as the tire's adhesion is split between braking and cornering forces.

Target: There is risk with trail braking because excessive use of the front brake can result in a loss of grip as the tire's adhesion is split between braking and cornering forces.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: An all-pole filter is used. Filter is a good filter of the human vocal tract and because it is easy to compute.

Target: An all-pole filter is used because it is a good representation of the human vocal tract and because it is easy to compute.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: There is little data available on the health status of Iraqi refugees. Limited reports indicate that Iraqi suffer worse health than that of Iraqi's host populations.

Target: There is little data available on the health status of Iraqi refugees, but limited reports indicate that they suffer worse health than that of their host populations.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Its rarity is probably. Old stocks of Southern Rhodesian revenues continued to be used instead of it.

Target: Its rarity is probably because old stocks of Southern Rhodesian revenues continued to be used instead of it.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: 1996: Light Camera Action! First concerts (edit )

Target: 1996: Light Camera Action! and first concerts (edit )


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Conflict began due to Sophia's jealousy of her cousin and sister-in-law Alice. A heated argument between the two young women erupted after sister-in-law sent, without requesting permission from Sophia, nurses dependent on the Crown Princess to Thessaloniki.

Target: Conflict began due to Sophia's jealousy of her cousin and sister-in-law Alice. In fact, a heated argument between the two young women erupted after Alice sent, without requesting permission from Sophia, nurses dependent on the Crown Princess to Thessaloniki.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: St David's Marist is a Roman Catholic preparatory and high school located in Inanda, a suburb of Johannesburg, South Africa. The school was established in 1941 by the Marist.

Target: St David's Marist is a Roman Catholic preparatory and high school located in Inanda, a suburb of Johannesburg, South Africa. The school was established in 1941 by the Marist Brothers.


Source: Fix coherence: The city of Rafah was strategically important to Israel. Control of that city would sever the Gaza Strip from the Sinai and provide a way to the main centres of the northern Sinai.

Target: The city of Rafah was strategically important to Israel because control of that city would sever the Gaza Strip from the Sinai and provide a way to the main centres of the northern Sinai.


Source: Fix sentence transition: If the dislocation is recognized and treated properly, prognosis is typically good. Injury to the common peroneal nerve may occur.

Target: If the dislocation is recognized and treated properly, prognosis is typically good, although injury to the common peroneal nerve may occur.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Traditionally social work practice is located within office or agency settings. Community practice may also utilize alternative spaces.

Target: Traditionally social work practice is located within office or agency settings. However, community practice may also utilize alternative spaces.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: In December 2006, the ESPN lawsuit was settled. Details were not released to the public.

Target: In December 2006, the ESPN lawsuit was settled, but details were not released to the public.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: The film shows the Castle just prior to its being looted and the decrepitude of the postwar period. Although the castle was sacked after the war, it was not completely destroyed.

Target: The film shows the Castle just prior to its being looted and the decrepitude of the postwar period. However although the castle was sacked after the war, it was not completely destroyed.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Essential X-Men is a 76-page comic book published by Panini Comics UK, as part of their Collectors' Edition range. Beginning in 1995, the title reprints Marvel US's range of comic book comics ; three per issue.

Target: Essential X-Men is a 76-page comic book published by Panini Comics UK, as part of their Collectors' Edition range. Beginning in 1995, the title reprints Marvel US's range of X-Men comics ; three per issue.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Gajim runs on Linux, BSD and Microsoft Windows. Released under the GNU General Public License, Gajim is free Gajim.

Target: Gajim runs on Linux, BSD and Microsoft Windows. Released under the GNU General Public License, Gajim is free software.


Source: Make the text clearer: EP LITATO was released in 2011. EP LITATO is the more light-hearted follow-up.

Target: EP LITATO, the more light-hearted follow-up, was released in 2011.


Source: Make the text more consistent: The team played only four games in the AFPA, posting a 1 -- 3 record. Prior to joining the league, the Celts flourished in the Ohio League.

Target: The team played only four games in the AFPA, posting a 1 -- 3 record. However prior to joining the league, the Celts flourished in the Ohio League.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: NDI can run on 32-bit or 64-bit CPU architectures. Performance is increased when using 64-bit.

Target: NDI can run on 32-bit or 64-bit CPU architectures, although performance is increased when using 64-bit.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Jean, the woman Seneca believed was her sister, is revealed to be her mother. sister believes Jean spots Seneca in a stadium parking lot, but Seneca doesn't remember Jean.

Target: Jean, the woman Seneca believed was her sister, is revealed to be her mother. Jean believes she spots Seneca in a stadium parking lot, but Seneca doesn't remember her.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Not a year earlier, Denver voters had rejected a tax to fund a major light-rail expansion. Business leaders were determined to try again.

Target: Not a year earlier, Denver voters had rejected a tax to fund a major light-rail expansion, but business leaders were determined to try again.


Source: Fix sentence transition: In a time of growing municipal powers, the old contracting leases of the Tramways Act of 1870 were expiring. Local authorities in the UK looked to buy out old lines from the tramway companies, to develop services of their own.

Target: In a time of growing municipal powers, the old contracting leases of the Tramways Act of 1870 were expiring and local authorities in the UK looked to buy out old lines from the tramway companies, to develop services of their own.


Source: Make the text more logical: Limited in capacity. It served after the war as the backbone long distance network that linked Whitehorse with the south, and provided ringdown magneto phones to highway establishments.

Target: Although limited in capacity, it served after the war as the backbone long distance network that linked Whitehorse with the south, and provided ringdown magneto phones to highway establishments.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In retirement from playing Collins became involved in team management and coaching. Collins was a Collins with six All-Ireland-winning Cork teams between 1941 and 1954.

Target: In retirement from playing Collins became involved in team management and coaching. He was a selector with six All-Ireland-winning Cork teams between 1941 and 1954.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Which setting those two objections aside, Philippine folk literature would be considers a subset of the folklore of peninsular Southeast Asia. Which includes the folklore of Malaysia, Indonesia, and Brunei.

Target: Setting those two objections aside, Philippine folk literature would be considered a subset of the folklore of peninsular Southeast Asia, which includes the folklore of Malaysia, Indonesia, and Brunei.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Coliseum has more than 10.5 million cubic feet (300,000 m) of space. The Coliseum opened in 1970.

Target: The Coliseum, which opened in 1970, has more than 10.5 million cubic feet (300,000 m) of space.


Source: Make the text clearer: Despite a four-year battle, American Blind settled with Google soon after this decision,. Leaving much of this legal territory unexplored.

Target: Despite a four-year battle, American Blind settled with Google soon after this decision, hence leaving much of this legal territory unexplored.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Jump up ^ Some historians consider Shajar al-Durr as the first of the Mamluk Sultans. To them Qutuz was the fourth Mamluk Sultans and not the third.

Target: Jump up ^ Some historians consider Shajar al-Durr as the first of the Mamluk Sultans. Thus, to them Qutuz was the fourth Mamluk Sultan and not the third.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: No details of it have survived. Power was provided by two Pelton wheels on floor 9 from 1899, which were supplied with water from the abandoned adit on floor 4.

Target: No details of it have survived, and power was provided by two Pelton wheels on floor 9 from 1899, which were supplied with water from the abandoned adit on floor 4.


Source: Make the text coherent: Baybars likely preserved Safed. Baybars viewed Safed's fortress to be of high strategic value due Safed's its location on a high Safed's and its isolation from other Crusader fortresses.

Target: Baybars likely preserved Safed because he viewed its fortress to be of high strategic value due to its location on a high mountain and its isolation from other Crusader fortresses.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In most developed countries, educators modify teaching methods and environments so that the maximum number of students are served in general education environments. Special education in developed countries is often regarded as a service rather than a place.

Target: In most developed countries, educators modify teaching methods and environments so that the maximum number of students are served in general education environments. Therefore, special education in developed countries is often regarded as a service rather than a place.


Source: Make the text more logical: This allows customers the ability to increase their amount of free time. Customers no longer need to take the time to travel to a physical store to make their purchases.

Target: This allows customers the ability to increase their amount of free time, because customers no longer need to take the time to travel to a physical store to make their purchases.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The win came against in-state rival North Carolina State, and was tough, as the Tar Heels needed overtime to pull out the win. Tar Heels faced the same opponent for Hatchell's 700th victory, on January 16, 2006.

Target: The win came against in-state rival North Carolina State, and was tough, as the Tar Heels needed overtime to pull out the win. UNC faced the same opponent for Hatchell's 700th victory, on January 16, 2006.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: By early 1978 the new system was working. Management was still not making any move to commercialize it.

Target: By early 1978 the new system was working, but management was still not making any move to commercialize it.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: In 2009, mobile phone penetration reached 137 percent. Many people of Singapore have access to more than one phone.

Target: In 2009, mobile phone penetration reached 137 percent, meaning many people of Singapore have access to more than one phone.


Source: Make the text more coherent: The three following movements deplore the sufferings in the world,. Three more movements depict the joyful hope for a better life in the Kingdom of God.

Target: The three following movements deplore the sufferings in the world, whereas three more movements depict the joyful hope for a better life in the Kingdom of God.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Daepyeong was an important settlement in the Mumun economic system, but as with many simple chiefdoms, it began to decline and then collapsed. The area was likely depopulated at the end of the Late Mumun, circa 550-500 BC.

Target: Daepyeong was an important settlement in the Mumun economic system, but as with many simple chiefdoms, it began to decline and then collapsed. The area was likely depopulated at the end of the Late Middle Mumun, circa 550-500 BC.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It is also important to note that. Directed by a doctor.

Target: It is also important to note that unless directed by a doctor.


Source: Make the text more logical: In contrast to estrogen-only therapy, combined estrogen and progestogen treatment. Dependent on the progestogen used.

Target: In contrast to estrogen-only therapy, combined estrogen and progestogen treatment, although dependent on the progestogen used.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The category of senior NCOs now included only one rank -- that of sergeant --. Before category had included both staff sergeants and sergeants.

Target: The category of senior NCOs now included only one rank -- that of sergeant -- whereas before it had included both staff sergeants and sergeants.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: SS Nick Stoner was a Liberty ship built in the United States during World War II. She was named after Nick Stoner, a Nick Stoner and trapper that served in the Continental Army during the American Revolution and later the United States Army during the War of 1812.

Target: SS Nick Stoner was a Liberty ship built in the United States during World War II. She was named after Nick Stoner, a hunter and trapper that served in the Continental Army during the American Revolution and later the United States Army during the War of 1812.


Source: Fix coherence: Although Qatari gender separation is less strict than that found in Saudi Arabia, plans to offer co-ed lectures were put aside after threats to boycott Qatar's segregated public university. There have been reports of local discontent with the sale of alcohol in Qatari.

Target: Although Qatari gender separation is less strict than that found in Saudi Arabia, plans to offer co-ed lectures were put aside after threats to boycott Qatar's segregated public university. Meanwhile, there have been reports of local discontent with the sale of alcohol in Qatar.


Source: Fix coherence errors: There is no question, however, that the two temples of Seth and Nephthys in Sepermeru were under separate administration, each with its own holdings and prophets. Another moderately sized temple of Seth is noted for the nearby town of Pi-Wayna.

Target: There is no question, however, that the two temples of Seth and Nephthys in Sepermeru were under separate administration, each with its own holdings and prophets. Moreover, another moderately sized temple of Seth is noted for the nearby town of Pi-Wayna.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Every June the Theatre of European regions takes place. The Theatre of European regions is an international theatre festival.

Target: Every June the Theatre of European regions, an international theatre festival, takes place.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Management philosophy and values influence its action on matters concerning employees. Without a clear, broad philosophy and set values, it would be difficult for employees to understand management.

Target: Management philosophy and values influence its action on matters concerning employees. Therefore, without a clear, broad philosophy and set values, it would be difficult for employees to understand management.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Many intelligence officials are convinced that at least some of the information Pollard sold to Israel eventually wound up in the Soviet Union. Officials interviewed by investigative journalist Seymour Hersh acknowledged that they had no hard evidence.

Target: Many intelligence officials are convinced that at least some of the information Pollard sold to Israel eventually wound up in the Soviet Union, although officials interviewed by investigative journalist Seymour Hersh acknowledged that they had no hard evidence.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: John then blackmails Abhinaya for the fifty lakh rupees. Else Abhinaya will expose the truth and bring shame upon her family.

Target: John then blackmails Abhinaya for the fifty lakh rupees, or else he will expose the truth and bring shame upon her family.


Source: Fix coherence: If the fishes are big enough, they are kept in the salt pond over one week. Usually, they are kept in the salt pond for 5 to 7 days.

Target: If the fishes are big enough, they are kept in the salt pond over one week. But usually, they are kept in the salt pond for 5 to 7 days.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Her intense feelings of hatred towards the Man of Steel matched those of the Blackrock, and she proved particularly adept in using it. Her skills were not enough to defeat Man of Steel, and the Blackrock withdrew into itself.

Target: Her intense feelings of hatred towards the Man of Steel matched those of the Blackrock, and she proved particularly adept in using it. However, her skills were not enough to defeat Superman, and the Blackrock withdrew into itself.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: At Metacritic the album received an average score of 68 based on 10 reviews. Metacritic assigns a weighted average rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics.

Target: At Metacritic, which assigns a weighted average rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream critics, the album received an average score of 68 based on 10 reviews.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Kat is upset when Alfie changes the licensee name from Kat to Roxy on the plaque above the Queen Victoria doors. Alfie helps Kat when Kat is questioned over stolen goods, but to prove Alfie's love Roxy Roxy, Alfie decides he wants to Kat Kat.

Target: Kat is upset when Alfie changes the licensee name from Kat to Roxy on the plaque above the Queen Victoria doors. Alfie helps Kat when she is questioned over stolen goods, but to prove his love to Roxy, he decides he wants to divorce Kat.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She has been chief executive of the New Zealand Food & Grocery Council since 2009. The New Zealand Food & Grocery Council is an industry lobby group.

Target: She has been chief executive of the New Zealand Food & Grocery Council, an industry lobby group, since 2009.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: While Njord was with the Vanaland people he had taken his own sister in marriage, for that was allowed by their law ; and their children were Frey and Freya. Among the Asaland people it was forbidden to intermarry with such near relations.

Target: While Njord was with the Vanaland people he had taken his own sister in marriage, for that was allowed by their law ; and their children were Frey and Freya. But among the Asaland people it was forbidden to intermarry with such near relations.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Harrison graduated a veterinarian Iowa State University in 1967. Harrison was a Harrison of the Omega Tau Sigma fraternity.

Target: Harrison graduated a veterinarian Iowa State University in 1967. He was a charter member of the Omega Tau Sigma fraternity.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: The description of the requirements of a tour with the aid of climbing grade scales is therefore problematic. Such scales attempt to take into account to a greater extent as the severity of a route or its fitness requirements.

Target: The description of the requirements of a tour with the aid of climbing grade scales is therefore problematic. As a result, such scales attempt to take into account to a greater extent as the severity of a route or its fitness requirements.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The Cambridge History of Latin America has its first two volumes devoted to the colonial period generally. Volume 3 is devoted to the transition from independence to individual sovereign nations and the subsequent political chaos.

Target: The Cambridge History of Latin America has its first two volumes devoted to the colonial period generally, while volume 3 is devoted to the transition from independence to individual sovereign nations and the subsequent political chaos.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The village of Kabarasso is 83 km north-northwest of Sikasso. Kabarasso is the chef-lieu of the commune.

Target: The village of Kabarasso, the chef-lieu of the commune, is 83 km north-northwest of Sikasso.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Ghalhwar is a combination of Dani and Sauz. This is a combination of fast and classical music played at the starting of a polo match.

Target: Ghalhwar is a combination of Dani and Sauz. This is a mixture of fast and classical music played at the starting of a polo match.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: As the Azes era is usually considered identical to the Vikrama era starting in 58 BCE, the Yona era would correspond to 186 BCE, which falls in the reign of Demetrius I. Dates ranging from 186 to 150 BCE are still debated.

Target: As the Azes era is usually considered identical to the Vikrama era starting in 58 BCE, the Yona era would correspond to 186 BCE, which falls in the reign of Demetrius I, although dates ranging from 186 to 150 BCE are still debated.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Senators serve terms of six years each ; the terms are staggered. Approximately one-third of the seats are up for election every two years.

Target: Senators serve terms of six years each ; the terms are staggered so that approximately one-third of the seats are up for election every two years.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Woodville's primary land use is agricultural. Housing and small-acre rural residential lots are increasingly significant.

Target: Woodville's primary land use is agricultural, although housing and small-acre rural residential lots are increasingly significant.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Mistress has gotten me. My waist is only fifteen inches.

Target: Mistress has gotten me so that my waist is only fifteen inches.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Slightly weaker than Rubin's conjecture. It has the advantage that it can presently be shown to remain true under raising the base field or lowering the top field of the extension.

Target: Although slightly weaker than Rubin's conjecture, it has the advantage that it can presently be shown to remain true under raising the base field or lowering the top field of the extension.


Source: Make the text clearer: He became fictionalized Sonny Corinthos a manac depressive mobster King pin 1993. A manac depressive mobster King pin is his first air date on GH was August 13.

Target: He became fictionalized Sonny Corinthos a manac depressive mobster King pin, his first air date on GH was August 13, 1993.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Mrs. Ferguson's infamously generous granting of pardons was her way of relieving the overcrowded conditions in Texas prisons. During two non-consecutive terms in office, Mrs. Mrs. issued almost 4,000 pardons, many of them to free those convicted of violating prohibition laws.

Target: Mrs. Ferguson's infamously generous granting of pardons was her way of relieving the overcrowded conditions in Texas prisons. During two non-consecutive terms in office, Mrs. Ferguson issued almost 4,000 pardons, many of them to free those convicted of violating prohibition laws.


Source: Fix sentence transition: With this assumption the model shows government policy is fully effective since. Workers rationally expect the outcome of a change in policy.

Target: With this assumption the model shows government policy is fully effective since, although workers rationally expect the outcome of a change in policy.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Slavery was not legal under Article 6 of the Northwest Ordinance. Harrison recognized the existing customs of slavery and indenture in the territory, Both men's slavery positions were resisted by the territory's population.

Target: Although slavery was not legal under Article 6 of the Northwest Ordinance, Harrison recognized the existing customs of slavery and indenture in the territory, Both men's slavery positions were resisted by the territory's population.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: In his debut appearance, he was a fan of All That and a good friend of Christy Knowings. When fan is asked if fan wanted to join the cast, fan said that fan would if Christy Knowings also joins.

Target: In his debut appearance, he was a fan of All That and a good friend of Christy Knowings. When Danny is asked if he wanted to join the cast, he said that he would if Christy also joins.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The novelist Isobel English was sent to La Retraite in 1920. La Retraite is a Burnham-on-Sea convent school.

Target: The novelist Isobel English was sent to La Retraite, a Burnham-on-Sea convent school, in 1920.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Scheduled air transport is the larger operation in terms of passenger numbers. GA is larger in the number of flights (and flight hours, in the U.S. )

Target: Although scheduled air transport is the larger operation in terms of passenger numbers, GA is larger in the number of flights (and flight hours, in the U.S. )


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: They traditionally lived in the Mahale Mountains on the east shore of the lake opposite Kalemie. They were expelled from this area after 1979 to make way for the Mahale Mountains created in 1985.

Target: They traditionally lived in the Mahale Mountains on the east shore of the lake opposite Kalemie. However they were expelled from this area after 1979 to make way for the Mahale Mountains National Park created in 1985.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Road routes in the Australian Capital Territory assist drivers navigating roads. Many major roads in the Australian Capital Territory are not assigned a route number.

Target: Road routes in the Australian Capital Territory assist drivers navigating roads. Many major roads in the ACT are not assigned a route number.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Some of the names of gods and goddesses found in the Rigveda are found amongst other belief systems based on Proto-Indo-European religion. Words used share common roots with words from other Proto-Indo-European languages.

Target: Some of the names of gods and goddesses found in the Rigveda are found amongst other belief systems based on Proto-Indo-European religion, while words used share common roots with words from other Indo-European languages.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Sam Nazarian (born 1975) is an Iranian-American businessman, investor and philanthropist. Sam Nazarian is the businessman, Chairman and CEO of SBE Entertainment Group.

Target: Sam Nazarian (born 1975) is an Iranian-American businessman, investor and philanthropist. He is the Founder, Chairman and CEO of SBE Entertainment Group.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The surficial geology alongside Tinker Hollow in its lower and middle reaches mainly consists of alluvium. In Tinker Hollow's upper reaches, Tinker Hollow mostly consists of a till known as Wisconsinan Till.

Target: The surficial geology alongside Tinker Hollow in its lower and middle reaches mainly consists of alluvium. However, in its upper reaches, it mostly consists of a till known as Wisconsinan Till.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Williams was ordained (consecrated) to the episcopate on 25 March 2009 by Rowan Williams, Archbishop of Canterbury, at St Paul's Cathedral, London. From 2009 to 2015, Williams was the Bishop of Kensington, an area bishop in the London.

Target: Williams was ordained (consecrated) to the episcopate on 25 March 2009 by Rowan Williams, Archbishop of Canterbury, at St Paul's Cathedral, London. From 2009 to 2015, he was the Bishop of Kensington, an area bishop in the Diocese of London.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Major units of the Royal Navy moved to the safety of Scapa Flow. Devonport was an important base for escort vessels and repairs.

Target: Although major units of the Royal Navy moved to the safety of Scapa Flow, Devonport was an important base for escort vessels and repairs.


Source: Fix coherence errors: The 2015 -- 16 TT Pro League season (known as the Digicel Pro League for sponsorship reasons) is the seventeenth season of the TT Pro League since its establishment in 1999. The TT Pro League is the Trinidad and Tobago professional league for association football clubs.

Target: The 2015 -- 16 TT Pro League season (known as the Digicel Pro League for sponsorship reasons) is the seventeenth season of the TT Pro League, the Trinidad and Tobago professional league for association football clubs, since its establishment in 1999.


Source: Make the text clearer: Manxman took a torpedo in her engine room but survived. Repairs took two years.

Target: Manxman took a torpedo in her engine room but survived, although repairs took two years.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The area north of Bear Road is sometimes described as East Preston. Bear Road was the easternmost Bear Road of East Preston parish.

Target: The area north of Bear Road is sometimes described as East Preston, because it was the easternmost section of Preston parish.


Source: Fix sentence transition: When Gen. Westmorland inquired why he was leaving, Mittemeyer pointed out that he was not in the regular army since he was not a citizen. Westmoreland arranged Mittemeyer's citizenship so that he could become part of the army army.

Target: When Gen. Westmorland inquired why he was leaving, Mittemeyer pointed out that he was not in the regular army since he was not a citizen. Westmoreland arranged his citizenship so that he could become part of the regular army.


Source: Make the text more consistent: Brown eventually formed a new band, Day of Fire, and they began working on their first album. Brown is the lead singer, Joe Pangallo plays guitar, with brother Chris Pangallo on bass and Zach Simms on drums.

Target: Brown eventually formed a new band, Day of Fire, and they began working on their first album. Josh Brown is the lead singer, Joe Pangallo plays guitar, with brother Chris Pangallo on bass and Zach Simms on drums.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Farm to Market Road 3052 (FM 3052) is a 3.330-mile (5.359 km) farm to market road in north-central Cherokee County, Texas. Farm to Market Road 3052 begins at FM 177 in Mixon, the only town on the route.

Target: Farm to Market Road 3052 (FM 3052) is a 3.330-mile (5.359 km) farm to market road in north-central Cherokee County, Texas. FM 3052 begins at FM 177 in Mixon, the only town on the route.


Source: Fix coherence errors: But my body is saying something differently. I feel this is a good body.

Target: But my body is saying something differently, so I feel this is a good decision.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The installation of half-height platform screen doors started on 5 October 2010. Operations started on 16 December 2010.

Target: The installation of half-height platform screen doors started on 5 October 2010 and operations started on 16 December 2010.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: All Australian states require that firearms must be locked in steel cabinets or safes. Wooden safes' deemed not easily penetrable.

Target: All Australian states require that firearms must be locked in steel cabinets or safes, although wooden safes' deemed not easily penetrable.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: Funpals come in the traditional briefs format only. Modern boxer briefs for children have been inspired by both the more recent Underoos designs.

Target: Funpals come in the traditional briefs format only although modern boxer briefs for children have been inspired by both the more recent Underoos designs.


Source: Fix sentence flow: It hindered growth and weakened the vitality of entire stands of trees. Early on resin collecting was restricted to stands that were not easily felled and transported i.e. those that were a long way from rivers.

Target: It hindered growth and weakened the vitality of entire stands of trees. As a result, early on resin collecting was restricted to stands that were not easily felled and transported i.e. those that were a long way from rivers.


Source: Fix coherence: Cora Folsom married Charles P. Salisbury in 1888. Charles P. Salisbury is a newspaper editor and theatrical manager.

Target: Cora Folsom married Charles P. Salisbury, a newspaper editor and theatrical manager, in 1888.


Source: Fix sentence flow: The opponent in the final was Tottenham Hotspur. Tottenham Hotspur took a 2 -- 1 lead in the first leg at White Hart Lane, but Theo de Jong equalised after 85 minutes and the match ended in a 2 -- 2 draw.

Target: The opponent in the final was Tottenham Hotspur. Spurs took a 2 -- 1 lead in the first leg at White Hart Lane, but Theo de Jong equalised after 85 minutes and the match ended in a 2 -- 2 draw.


Source: Make the text more coherent: It is difficult to grow from seed but relatively easy to grow from cuttings. Generally short-lived in the garden.

Target: It is difficult to grow from seed but relatively easy to grow from cuttings although generally short-lived in the garden.


Source: Make the text more logical: They have also found their way to a considerable number of private railways in both countries. Ten have been sold to the Korean State Railway of North Korea.

Target: They have also found their way to a considerable number of private railways in both countries, and ten have been sold to the Korean State Railway of North Korea.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: The team is led by third-year head coach Ben Jacobson. The team plays in the Missouri Valley Conference (MVC).

Target: The team, which plays in the Missouri Valley Conference (MVC), is led by third-year head coach Ben Jacobson.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Polba Mahavidyalaya was established at Polba in 2005. Polba Mahavidyalaya is a general degree college.

Target: Polba Mahavidyalaya, a general degree college, was established at Polba in 2005.


Source: Make the text clearer: These individual rate reductions are scheduled to sunset on January 1, 2011 along with the Economic Growth and Tax Relief Reconciliation Act of 2001. Further legislation is enacted to extend or make permanent its changes.

Target: These individual rate reductions are scheduled to sunset on January 1, 2011 along with the Economic Growth and Tax Relief Reconciliation Act of 2001 unless further legislation is enacted to extend or make permanent its changes.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: After transection of the brain stem just above the pons, the threshold is lowered and less bladder filling is required to trigger it,. After transection at the top of the midbrain.

Target: After transection of the brain stem just above the pons, the threshold is lowered and less bladder filling is required to trigger it, whereas after transection at the top of the midbrain.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: Representative Litesa Wallace (D-Rockford). Representative endorsed Biss June 28, 2017 and became Litesa Wallace's running mate September 8, 2017.

Target: Representative Litesa Wallace (D-Rockford). Wallace endorsed Biss June 28, 2017 and became his running mate September 8, 2017.


Source: Make the text more logical: Ethnic Ukrainians, Belarusians and Lithuanians. Themselves subjected to brutal occupation.

Target: Ethnic Ukrainians, Belarusians and Lithuanians, while themselves subjected to brutal occupation.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: After the first few weeks as an internet-only show, calendar listings were no longer read on the air but were instead posted on the show's website --. Even this practice petered out in early 2002.

Target: After the first few weeks as an internet-only show, calendar listings were no longer read on the air but were instead posted on the show's website -- although even this practice petered out in early 2002.


Source: Make the text more cohesive: The Belcher kids have been invited to Rudy's birthday party in the park. Once kids get there, kids find out that there was a mix-up and Rudy doesn't have a bounce house.

Target: The Belcher kids have been invited to Rudy's birthday party in the park. However, once they get there, they find out that there was a mix-up and Rudy doesn't have a bounce house.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: The majority of Iu Mien was among the Lao communists enemy due to the involvement with the U.S. CIA operation during the war in Laos. Iu Mien began fleeing the Lao communist regime in mid-1975 into Thailand.

Target: The majority of Iu Mien was among the Lao communists enemy due to the involvement with the U.S. CIA operation during the war in Laos. Iu Mien began fleeing the Laos communist regime in mid-1975 into Thailand.


Source: Make the text clearer: Jump up ^ Scott, Drew ; Scott, Jonathan (27 November 2015). Scott, Jonathan and Scott, Jonathan welcome guests to Sailing With the Scotts-Day 1 (YouTube video).

Target: Jump up ^ Scott, Drew ; Scott, Jonathan (27 November 2015). Jonathan and Drew welcome guests to Sailing With the Scotts-Day 1 (YouTube video).


Source: Make the text more logical: Unfortunately, his stay in NJPW didn't last long. Later that July.

Target: Unfortunately, his stay in NJPW didn't last long, because later that July.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Ordunio was installed as the new FM Programmer 1986. The new FM Programmer is a job he continued until Dec. 31.

Target: Ordunio was installed as the new FM Programmer, a job he continued until Dec. 31, 1986.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: Other potential sources of the sounds normally associated with tinnitus should be ruled out. Two recognized sources of high-pitched sounds might be electromagnetic fields common in modern wiring and various sound signal transmissions.

Target: Other potential sources of the sounds normally associated with tinnitus should be ruled out. For instance, two recognized sources of high-pitched sounds might be electromagnetic fields common in modern wiring and various sound signal transmissions.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: He interrogates Zoe's friend. He learns someone used her phone to text Zoe to lure her out of the school-possibly the kidnapper.

Target: Interrogating Zoe's friend, he learns someone used her phone to text Zoe to lure her out of the school-possibly the kidnapper.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: This made Justin turn to drugs and Darlene was angry that Liz couldn't control him. Darlene faced the shock of Darlene's life on her 18th birthday when out of Justin Justin ended up Darlene Darlene through a glass window.

Target: This made Justin turn to drugs and Darlene was angry that Liz couldn't control him. However, Darlene faced the shock of her life on her 18th birthday when out of control Justin ended up pushing Darlene through a glass window.


Source: Make the text more coherent: One particular incident involved a mentally-disturbed prisoner who had been denied a wash or change of clothes for weeks. Staff thought he was faking his illness.

Target: One particular incident involved a mentally-disturbed prisoner who had been denied a wash or change of clothes for weeks because staff thought he was faking his illness.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: Laura breaks off with Don Carlo. Laura holds on to the documents that entitle Laura to Don Carlo's land, a Don Carlo he foolishly Laura her.

Target: Laura breaks off with Don Carlo, but she holds on to the documents that entitle her to his land, a gift he foolishly gave her.


Source: Make the text more logical: This was organised by the Southern Rugby Union in England. The Southern Rugby Union was administered by the rugby union at Twickenham.

Target: This was organised by the Southern Rugby Union, which was administered by the rugby union at Twickenham, in England.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Abigail Arcane is missing. Abigail Arcane is the Avatar of the Rot and Swamp Thing's lover.

Target: Abigail Arcane, the Avatar of the Rot and Swamp Thing's lover, is missing.


Source: Fix coherence in the text: The Labour Code (Article 14) prohibits discrimination in the sphere of labour relations. Sexual orientation is left out of the list of social characteristics on whose basis discrimination is legally prohibited.

Target: The Labour Code (Article 14) prohibits discrimination in the sphere of labour relations. However, sexual orientation is left out of the list of social characteristics on whose basis discrimination is legally prohibited.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Tin argues that negative connotations were associated with male and female relationships prior to this, and that this was. Sexual relations were considered to interfere with spiritual obligations.

Target: Tin argues that negative connotations were associated with male and female relationships prior to this, and that this was because sexual relations were considered to interfere with spiritual obligations.


Source: Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: No statewide vaping ban. Vaping is prohibited only in public educational facilities and on grounds thereof.

Target: No statewide vaping ban. Instead, vaping is prohibited only in public educational facilities and on grounds thereof.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Warrior-ascetics could be found in Hinduism from at least the 1500s and as late as the 1700s. Tradition attributes their creation to Sankaracharya

Target: Warrior-ascetics could be found in Hinduism from at least the 1500s and as late as the 1700s, although tradition attributes their creation to Sankaracharya


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: The Soviet military was used to seize a few public buildings. Violence was largely contained until January 1991.

Target: The Soviet military was used to seize a few public buildings, but violence was largely contained until January 1991.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Some aspects of vacuum structure in light-front quantization can be analyzed by studying properties of massive states. By studying the appearance of degeneracies among the lowest massive states, one can determine the critical coupling strength associated with spontaneous symmetry breaking.

Target: Some aspects of vacuum structure in light-front quantization can be analyzed by studying properties of massive states. In particular, by studying the appearance of degeneracies among the lowest massive states, one can determine the critical coupling strength associated with spontaneous symmetry breaking.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: These kinds of systems typically show an inherent stability. Extra damping is sometimes required.

Target: These kinds of systems typically show an inherent stability, although extra damping is sometimes required.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Early medical animations were limited to basic wire-frame models because of low processor speed. Rapid evolution in microprocessor design and computer memory has led to animations that are significantly more intricate.

Target: Early medical animations were limited to basic wire-frame models because of low processor speed. However, rapid evolution in microprocessor design and computer memory has led to animations that are significantly more intricate.


Source: Fix coherence of the sentence: Metro is an Icelandic fast food restaurant chain. Metro replaced McDonald's after McDonald's left Icelandic in October 2009.

Target: Metro is an Icelandic fast food restaurant chain. It replaced McDonald's after McDonald's left Iceland in October 2009.


Source: Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: However, the lift height will be in microns. Energy will be drained and pressure will be diminished after each impact with the lifting material.

Target: However, the lift height will be in microns because energy will be drained and pressure will be diminished after each impact with the lifting material.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: As the government was now headed by Courtenay's old ally it is likely that it was now that the earl decided to reject his alliance with York and give his support to the crown. Courtenay's old ally is the Duke of York.

Target: As the government was now headed by Courtenay's old ally, the Duke of York, it is likely that it was now that the earl decided to reject his alliance with York and give his support to the crown.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: A selection of these trams operate each Sunday afternoon. Operations are curtailed in the event of wet weather.

Target: A selection of these trams operate each Sunday afternoon, although operations are curtailed in the event of wet weather.


Source: Fix coherence in this sentence: While these systems resembled the DOS architecture, applications were not binary compatible due to the incompatible instruction sets of these non-x86-CPUs. Applications written in high-level languages could be ported easily.

Target: While these systems resembled the DOS architecture, applications were not binary compatible due to the incompatible instruction sets of these non-x86-CPUs. However, applications written in high-level languages could be ported easily.


Source: Make the text more coherent: Melinda from the television series doesn't appear in the internet series as it takes place entirely in the spirit world. Characters from the webisodes have appeared in the television series.

Target: Melinda from the television series doesn't appear in the internet series as it takes place entirely in the spirit world. However, characters from the webisodes have appeared in the television series.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A site on Chester Avenue near the Kern River was selected. The Kern River the county already owned.

Target: A site on Chester Avenue near the Kern River, which the county already owned, was selected.


Source: Make the text clearer: Stewart drove to his garage in the middle of the session and had his radiator changed. Debris went through it.

Target: Stewart drove to his garage in the middle of the session and had his radiator changed because debris went through it.


Source: Make the text more logical: There was no real effect to the democratic process because of these long, drawn out elections. Communication between ridings and provinces was very slow.

Target: There was no real effect to the democratic process because of these long, drawn out elections because communication between ridings and provinces was very slow.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Among these were that the rape kit results did not indicate sexual assault. Despite saying she been held captive outdoors for days, Brawley was not suffering from hypothermia, was well-nourished, and appeared to have brushed her teeth recently.

Target: Among these were that the rape kit results did not indicate sexual assault. Additionally, despite saying she been held captive outdoors for days, Brawley was not suffering from hypothermia, was well-nourished, and appeared to have brushed her teeth recently.


Source: Fix sentence flow: In November 2006, the site was re-used and it houses Commonwealth Secondary School since then. For Pandan Primary School, it existed from 1981 to 2008 before being merged with Fuhua Primary School in 2009.

Target: In November 2006, the site was re-used and it houses Commonwealth Secondary School since then. Meanwhile, for Pandan Primary School, it existed from 1981 to 2008 before being merged with Fuhua Primary School in 2009.


Source: Improve the consistency of the text: In the late 1980s, shows would be stopped. Kids were getting too violent.

Target: In the late 1980s, shows would be stopped because kids were getting too violent.


Source: Fix sentence transition: Recruited from Pascoe Vale. Greenshields had also played football in Coburg prior to arriving at Carlton.

Target: Although recruited from Pascoe Vale, Greenshields had also played football in Coburg prior to arriving at Carlton.


Source: Make the text more logical: Mining was difficult and dangerous, the wages were good. Which is what drew the indigenous labor.

Target: Although mining was difficult and dangerous, the wages were good, which is what drew the indigenous labor.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Bom is played by Olvido Gara, then a teenage punk singer, who inspired the character she plays. Olvido Gara went on to take the artistic name of Olvido Gara.

Target: Bom is played by Olvido Gara, then a teenage punk singer, who inspired the character she plays. Gara went on to take the artistic name of Alaska.


Source: Make the text clearer: Apart from these customary concepts, East Timorese women also confront domestic violence. Rape cases and sexual slavery were allegedly committed by East Timorese pro-integration militias during the September 1999 crisis in East Timorese.

Target: Apart from these customary concepts, East Timorese women also confront domestic violence. Rape cases and sexual slavery were allegedly committed by East Timorese pro-integration militias during the September 1999 crisis in East Timor.


Source: Fix sentence transition: A smaller wing area was optimal for achieving high speed. Low-speed flight would suffer, as the smaller wing would require more airflow to generate enough lift to maintain flight.

Target: A smaller wing area was optimal for achieving high speed, but low-speed flight would suffer, as the smaller wing would require more airflow to generate enough lift to maintain flight.


Source: Fix sentence flow: Memorable is the dispute between the poor Jew Aaron Piperno and the Marquis for the payment of a salary. Jew is amazed when Onofrio refuses to pay with the argument that his creditor being a Jew is a murderer of Jesus.

Target: Memorable is the dispute between the poor Jew Aaron Piperno and the Marquis for the payment of a salary. Aaron is amazed when Onofrio refuses to pay with the argument that his creditor being a Jew is a murderer of Jesus.


Source: Make the text more coherent: With the exception of the Tramvia Blau 1971. The Tramvia Blau is the last two tramway lines operated on March 18.

Target: With the exception of the Tramvia Blau, the last two tramway lines operated on March 18, 1971.


Source: Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Usually, the namesake is given a different middle name and so would not need a suffix for differentiation. Once the woman marries, she would most commonly take the surname of her husband and thus do away with the generational suffix.

Target: Usually, the namesake is given a different middle name and so would not need a suffix for differentiation. Furthermore, once the woman marries, she would most commonly take the surname of her husband and thus do away with the generational suffix.


Source: Make the text more logical: Leonard is a nerd who loves video games, comic books, and Dungeons & Dragons. nerd is the straight nerd of the series, in which Leonard shares an apartment in Pasadena, CA, with Sheldon.

Target: Leonard is a nerd who loves video games, comic books, and Dungeons & Dragons. Leonard is the straight man of the series, in which he shares an apartment in Pasadena, CA, with Sheldon.


Source: Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The demand for 60 frames per second over more detailed graphics was made to ensure the game performed well online. To save production time and budget, Oda allowed for three characters to obscure their faces so they would not require facial animations.

Target: The demand for 60 frames per second over more detailed graphics was made to ensure the game performed well online. Nevertheless, to save production time and budget, Oda allowed for three characters to obscure their faces so they would not require facial animations.


Source: Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: A novel idea by someone may not be included if it does not fit seamlessly with the overall system design. To ensure a user-friendly system, a system may deliberately provide fewer features than it is capable of.

Target: A novel idea by someone may not be included if it does not fit seamlessly with the overall system design. In fact, to ensure a user-friendly system, a system may deliberately provide fewer features than it is capable of.


Source: Make the text more logical: Yousef claimed he was fleeing Saddam Hussein and needed asylum, that he had been recently beaten by Iraqi soldiers in Kuwait. Soldiers thought Yousef was a Yousef of a Kuwait guerilla organization.

Target: Yousef claimed he was fleeing Saddam Hussein and needed asylum, that he had been recently beaten by Iraqi soldiers in Kuwait because they thought he was a member of a Kuwaiti guerilla organization.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: Since 1986, The workshop has exported their blades on their own to the United States. Recently it has been more problematic with tightening rules for weapons both in Mexico and the U.S. Apolinar has requested state and municipal authorities to support traditional metalwork but without success.

Target: Since 1986, The workshop has exported their blades on their own to the United States although recently it has been more problematic with tightening rules for weapons both in Mexico and the U.S. Apolinar has requested state and municipal authorities to support traditional metalwork but without success.


Source: Make the text clearer: At the 1963 IOC session in Baden-Baden (moved there from Nairobi when Kenyan officials refused to issue visas to South African representatives), the IOC voted to suspend South Africa from the Olympics. Olympics' NOC and government adopted non-discrimination policies Olympics Olympic selection.

Target: At the 1963 IOC session in Baden-Baden (moved there from Nairobi when Kenyan officials refused to issue visas to South African representatives), the IOC voted to suspend South Africa from the Olympics unless its NOC and government adopted non-discrimination policies regarding Olympic selection.


Source: Fix coherence in this text: She did, in common with the Inzikhistn, employ free verse much of the time ;. Like them she believed any subject matter was appropriate for Yiddish poetry, not only specifically Jewish ones.

Target: She did, in common with the Inzikhistn, employ free verse much of the time ; and like them she believed any subject matter was appropriate for Yiddish poetry, not only specifically Jewish ones.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Archie W. McLean served as the president and chief executive of Planters from 1950 until 1971, when he became chairman. When Archie W. McLean retired in 1974, Planters was the state's tenth largest Planters.

Target: Archie W. McLean served as the president and chief executive of Planters from 1950 until 1971, when he became chairman. When he retired in 1974, Planters was the state's tenth largest bank.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Which bursting into the house, the pair are ambush by a gang of gunmen. Which succeed in wounding Falls Down but are all killed by the ruthless Dashiell.

Target: Bursting into the house, the pair are ambushed by a gang of gunmen, which succeed in wounding Falls Down but are all killed by the ruthless Dashiell.


Source: Fix coherence: With the launch of the Volvo S80 the IC airbag was added. The IC airbag is a curtain style airbag deploying from the headlining to protect the head.

Target: With the launch of the Volvo S80 the IC airbag, a curtain style airbag deploying from the headlining to protect the head, was added.


Source: Make the text clearer: The 2003 opening of the Los Angeles County Metro's Gold Line reopened Pasadena for rail rapid transit for the first time since 1951. High-density condominiums began to pop up in the major business districts, leading to a major population increase.

Target: The 2003 opening of the Los Angeles County Metro's Gold Line reopened Pasadena for rail rapid transit for the first time since 1951, and high-density condominiums began to pop up in the major business districts, leading to a major population increase.


Source: Make the text clearer: Hot Shot is displeased that he has to fuss over such a misfit, of course. He does his best to train Sideswipe though Hot Shot is a very difficult Hot Shot.

Target: Hot Shot is displeased that he has to fuss over such a misfit, of course. But he does his best to train Sideswipe though it is a very difficult task.


Source: Improve the coherence of the text: Because of the slow early growth weeding is necessary in the first year. Afterwards the canopy closes and weed is no longer problematic.

Target: Because of the slow early growth weeding is necessary in the first year but afterwards the canopy closes and weed is no longer problematic.


Source: Fix coherence errors: Diek parodies the Pied Piper. Diek charms the rats with his flute and leads them to a nearby jetty and drowns them all.

Target: Parodying the Pied Piper, Diek charms the rats with his flute and leads them to a nearby jetty and drowns them all.


Source: Fix coherence in the sentence: Landscapes combining both their physical origins and the cultural overlay of human presence, often create over millennia. Landscapes reflect a living synthesis of people and place that is vital to local and national identity.

Target: Combining both their physical origins and the cultural overlay of human presence, often created over millennia, landscapes reflect a living synthesis of people and place that is vital to local and national identity.