229 79 8.4.2.170b The size of Slot Duration subfield in RAW Slot Definition subfield is TBD. Define the size of Slot Duration. E.g., 1 byte Revised 480 80 8.4.2.170b The length of the PRAW Periodicity subfield is TBD. Define TBD. As suggested in the comment. Revised 481 80 8.4.2.170b The length of the PRAW Start Offset subfield is TBD. Define TBD. As suggested in the comment Revised 789 77 8.4.2.170b TBD in figure 8-401cn should include a mechanism to forecast future change of PRAW several DTIM intervals in advance. PRAW start time, PRAW duration, PRAW periodicity and PRAW start offset can be used as count down style PRAW change announcement, hence it has to be clarified. Revised 790 77 8.4.2.170b TBD in figure 8-401cn should include a mechanism to change the PRAW assignment gradually by "Trickle style". PRAW start time, PRAW duration, PRAW periodicity and PRAW start offset can be used as "Trickle style" change of assignment by RPS announcement, hence it has to be clarified. Revised 468 80 8.4.2.170b The following sentence "The Slot Duration sub-subfield indicates the duration of Define the length of the Slot Duration subfield to be 7 bits and use TU as the unit of the This Revised
time slots of equal duration within the RAW." does not define the length of the field and the unit of the field. allows the maximum slot duration to be 128mS. Considering the maximum PPDU time of 28mS, 7 bits allows more than 4 max PPDU times, which should be enough. 469 78 8.4.2.170b The RAW Start Time field is one octet, which can only cover 0-255mS. However, the Beacon Interval field is 2-octet and be as long as (2^16-1) mS = 65S. This means that for a large BI, e.g. 500mS, a RAW cannot be after 255mS. Therefore, the length of the RAW Start Time has to be increased to match the Beacon Interval field. Change the length of the RAW Start Time from one octet to two octets and also reflect this change in Figure 8-401cl, and Revised 470 78 8.4.2.170b The length of the RAW Duration field is not defined. Define the length of the RAW Duration field. Since the Beacon Interval field is 2-octet in TU unit, to cover the entire Define the length of the RAW Duration field to be 2-octet unsigned integer in TU. Revised
to 'Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only' 472 77 8.4.2.170b "The PRAW Indicator subfield ..." does not match the subfield name in the figures: Figure 8-401cl, cm, cn and in other paragraphs (e.g. P77/L11). Change "PRAW Indicator" in P77/L59, P77L64, P77/L65, and P79/L17 to "PRAW Indication". Revised 474 78 8.4.2.170b The following sentence "The Same Group Indication bit is defined similarly for PRAW." is ambiguous. What does it mean by similarly? Rephrase the sentence as follows: "The Same Group Indication bit is set to 0 for PRAW." Revised 477 79 8.4.2.170b The Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only subfield in the Figure does not match the definitions described in P79/L14 and P79/L42, where the subfield name "Paged STAs' Access" is used. For consistency, change the subfield "Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only" in Figure 8-401cp to "Paged STAs' Access". Revised Discussion CID 472 indicates typos in mentioning “PRAW Indication” between figure and its reference in text. CID 474 accepted the comment but modified the statement moving it to the PRAW description. Also, we modified the text based on the suggestions made in the comment. Also, CIDs 157 and 477 suggest changing “Paged STAs Only’ Access” to “Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only.” Propose: We revised the comments.
significant bytes of the FCS of the Beacon frame is used for the Noffset. Delete the Slot Assignment subfield in Options subfield of RPS element. 465 80 8.4.2.170b The Slot Assignment subfield is redundent since Noffset is the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame that contains the RPS element. Delete the following sentence "The Slot Assignment sub-subfield indicates the assignment of slots to STAs based on their location in the TIM element. Noffset is indicated in the Slot Assignment sub-subfield and the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame is used for the Noffset. The procedure of slot assignment is discussed in 9.19.4a.3 (Slot assignment procedure in RAW)." Revised – Refer to changes in doc.: IEEE under CID 366 heading 466 79 8.4.2.170b The Slot Assignment subfield is redundent since Noffset is the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame that Delete the Slot Assignment subfield from Figure 8-401cq - RAW Slot Definition subfield. Revised – to changes in doc.: IEEE under CID 366 heading
contains the RPS element. 467 80 8.4.2.170b The Slot Assignment subfield is redundent since Noffset is the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame that contains the RPS element. Change the following sentence "The RAW Slot Definition subfield contains Slot Duration, Slot Assignments, and Cross Slot Boundary subsubfields." to "The RAW Slot Definition subfield contains Slot Duration and Cross Slot Boundary subsubfields." Revised – Refer to changes in doc.: IEEE under CID 366 heading Discussion CIDs 230, 465, 466, and 467 are related to resolutions for CID 366 in doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0. Propose: Please refer to doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0 for the revised text under CID 366 Instruction to the Editor Please refer to doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0 for the revised text under CID 366. CID Page Clause Comment Proposed Change Decision 473 78 8.4.2.170b In the following sentence "The Same Group Indication bit shall be set to 0 in the first RAW Assignment." the word "shall be" should be replaced with "is" since clause 8 does As suggested in the comment. Accepted