to 'Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only' 229 79 8.4.2.170b The size of Slot Duration subfield in RAW Slot Definition subfield is TBD. Define the size of Slot Duration. E.g., 1 byte Accepted 231 79 8.4.2.170b In RAW N Assignment field the Options subfield is used for normal RAW. Therefore, it is not proper that the bit to indicate Sounding RAW is in Options field because the Sounding RAW similar to AP PM RAW indicates the specific duration by using RAW Start Time and RAW Duration. Move the Sounding RAW Indication from Options field to other parts. Accepted 373 80 8.4.2.170b The objective of "otherwise" is not clear. Change this to two sentences, explain exactly what the "otherwise" is. Accepted 468 80 8.4.2.170b The following sentence "The Slot Duration sub-subfield indicates the duration of time slots of equal duration within the RAW." does Define the length of the Slot Duration subfield to be 7 bits and use TU as the unit of the field. This allows the maximum slot duration to be 128mS. Accepted
not define the length of the field and the unit of the field. Considering the maximum PPDU time of 28mS, 7 bits allows more than 4 max PPDU times, which should be enough. 469 78 8.4.2.170b The RAW Start Time field is one octet, which can only cover 0-255mS. However, the Beacon Interval field is 2-octet and be as long as (2^16-1) mS = 65S. This means that for a large BI, e.g. 500mS, a RAW cannot be after 255mS. Therefore, the length of the RAW Start Time has to be increased to match the Beacon Interval field. Change the length of the RAW Start Time from one octet to two octets and also reflect this change in Figure 8-401cl, and Accepted 470 78 8.4.2.170b The length of the RAW Duration field is not defined. Define the length of the RAW Duration field. Since the Beacon Interval field is 2-octet in TU unit, to cover the entire beacon interval, the RAW Duration also has to be Define the length of the RAW Duration field to be 2-octet unsigned integer in TU. Accepted
as large as the maximum beacon interval. 472 77 8.4.2.170b "The PRAW Indicator subfield ..." does not match the subfield name in the figures: Figure 8-401cl, cm, cn and in other paragraphs (e.g. P77/L11). Change "PRAW Indicator" in P77/L59, P77L64, P77/L65, and P79/L17 to "PRAW Indication". Accepted 474 78 8.4.2.170b The following sentence "The Same Group Indication bit is defined similarly for PRAW." is ambiguous. What does it mean by similarly? Rephrase the sentence as follows: "The Same Group Indication bit is set to 0 for PRAW." Accepted 477 79 8.4.2.170b The Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only subfield in the Figure does not match the definitions described in P79/L14 and P79/L42, where the subfield name "Paged STAs' Access" is used. For consistency, change the subfield "Access Restricted to STAs Only" in Figure 8-401cp to "Paged STAs' Access". Accepted 480 80 8.4.2.170b The length of the PRAW Periodicity subfield is TBD. Define TBD. As suggested in the comment. Accepted 481 80 8.4.2.170b The length of the PRAW As suggested in the comment Accepted
is the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame that contains the RPS element. Definition subfield. under CID 366 heading 467 80 8.4.2.170b The Slot Assignment subfield is redundent since Noffset is the two least significant bytes of the FCS field of the Beacon frame that contains the RPS element. Change the following sentence "The RAW Slot Definition subfield contains Slot Duration, Slot Assignments, and Cross Slot Boundary subsubfields." to "The RAW Slot Definition subfield contains Slot Duration and Cross Slot Boundary subsubfields." Revised – Refer to changes in doc.: IEEE under CID 366 heading Discussion CIDs 230, 465, 466, and 467 are related to resolutions for CID 366 in doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0. Propose: Please refer to doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0 for the revised text under CID 366 Instruction to the Editor Please refer to doc.: IEEE 802.11-13/0784r0 for the revised text under CID 366. CID Page Clause Comment Proposed Change Decision 473 78 8.4.2.170b In the following sentence "The Same Group Indication bit shall be set to 0 in the first RAW As suggested in the comment. Accepted