IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Proposed resolution to 11ad related CIDs Date: 2014-02-10 Author(s): Name Company Address Phone Carlos Cordeiro Intel 2084 1321.48 9.36.6.2 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) "The RSS is a TXSS" - might be misread to indicate equivalence between these terms. Reword: "The RSS comprises a responder TXSS" Proposed resolution: Accepted 2097 1301.23 9.36.1 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) Neither SSW not DMG Beacon frames are labelled in Label the frames corresponding to SSW and DMG Beacon in figure 9-52.
responder) requests a MID subphase with MID and BC subphases" - recursive! Discussion: to follow the same write up as in the next paragraph and next-to-next paragraph, propose to simplify the text and only refer to MID and BC subphases. Proposed resolution: Revised Change the noted paragraph as follows A DMG STA (either initiator or responder) requests MID and BC subphases (see 9.36.6.3.2 (MIDC subphase with MID and BC subphases)) by setting both the MID-REQ and BC-REQ subfields to 1 in the BRP Request field of an SSW-Feedback, SSW-Ack or BRP frame. It shall also set the L-RX subfield in the BRP Request field to the number of RX AWV settings it needs in each BRP-RX packet during the MID subphase. The peer DMG STA grants the request by setting the MID-Grant and BC-Grant subfields to 1 in the BRP Request field within the next SSW-Ack or BRP frame transmitted to the requesting DMG STA. If either the MID or BC were not granted by the peer STA, the MID and BC subphases shall not occur. 2082 1314.61 9.36.3.2 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) Figure 9-60 is labeled as "Example of BRP setup subphase procedure", but it shows a case where the BRP setup subphase is explicitly skipped. Change title to: "Example of skipping the BRP setup subphase." Discussion: The figure number should be 9-59 at P1314L61. Also, for some reason Figure 9-59 is shown before Figure 9-58. Proposed resolution: Revised Change the of Figure 9-59 to “Example of skipping the BRP setup subphase (SLS in DTI)” 2104 1315.27 9.36.3.2 (From Editor Panel Replace "= SIFS & = BRPIFS"
Review of D1.1) Figure 9-58 contains some errors, typos and the terms and by ">= SIFS & =< BRPIFS" and either replacing by "Initiator TXSS" and R-TXSS by "Responder TXSS" throughout or define the acronym properly elsewhere. Discussion: Could not find “= SIFS & = BRPIFS” in this or similar figures. Since the terms “I-TXSS” and “R-TXSS” are used elsewhere in the draft, propose to define such acronyms. Note that the acronym TXSS is already defined in section 3.3. Proposed resolution: Revised In Figure 9-57, change "= SIFS = BRPIFS" to ">= SIFS & =< BRPIFS" Insert the following two acronyms in section 3.3: I-TXSS: Initiator TXSS R-TXSS: Responder TXSS 2180 2194.62 21.5.3.2.4 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) " the indices P(k), in the range of NCBPS/2 to as defined in 21.5.3.2.6 (OFDM modulation)" - wrong reference Change reference to 21.5.3.2.4.6 Proposed resolution: Accepted 2181 2195.25 21.5.3.2.4 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) Change reference to 21.5.3.2.4.6
“First Period” by “first period” throughout the draft “Second Period” by “second period” throughout the draft “Transmit Buffer Control” by “transmit buffer control” throughout the draft except in Figures 9-31 and 9-78 “Scoreboard Context Control” by “scoreboard context control” throughout the draft except in Figures 9-31 and 9-78 “Increase or Decrease Transmit” by “increase or decrease transmit” throughout the draft “Explicit PCP Handover” by “explicit PCP handover” throughout the draft “Implicit PCP Handover” by “implicit PCP handover” throughout the draft “Next PCPs” by “next PCPs” throughout the draft “NextPCP” by “Next PCP” throughout the draft “PCP Factor” by “PCP factor” throughout the draft “Implicit candidate” by “implicit candidate” throughout the draft “Time-Overlapped” by “time-overlapped” throughout the draft “Transparent” by “transparent” in P1619L39 “Nontransparent” by “nontransparent” in P1619L42 “BPSK Mapping” by “BPSK mapping” “QPSK Mapping” by “QPSK mapping” Mapping” by “16QAM mapping” Note: Beware that some of these occurrences could be in the beginning of a sentence. In Figure X-1, delete “DBand” 2108 1323.11 9.36.6.3.1 Figure claims to show the MIDC subphase, but fails to identify it. Label the extent of the MIDC subphase. Ditto in Figure Figure 9-64, Figure Proposed resolution: The MID and BC subphases are already in Figures 9-64 and 9-65. And since MIDC is a combination of both MID and BC (P1311L19), these figures already capture MIDC. Proposed resolution: Revised Replace Figure 9-62 with the following Replace Figure 9-63 with the following