before the paragraph in P161L38. CID 4012 CID Clause Page Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution 8.8.5.3 200 54 In order to facilitate faster TSF synchronization, the S1G Beacon Compatibility element shall be the first optional element in Short Probe Response frames if the "Request S1G Beacon Compatibility" field in the received Probe Request frame was set to 1. This will allow the receiving STA to extract the TSF completion field in a more predictable fashion. Add the following sentence to the end of the paragraph: If the S1G Beacon Compatibility element is included in the Short Probe Response frame, it shall be included as the first optional element. Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 Proposed Remedy: Instructions to TGah Editor: Add the following sentence at the end of Line 54 Page 203 in Subclause 8.8.5.3 8.8.5.3 Short Probe Response frame format …… Line 54 Page 203 The Optional Elements contains optional elements requested to be included in the Short Probe Response frame such as S1G Beacon Compatibility element. If the S1G Beacon Compatibility element is requested to be included, the Short Probe Response frame includes it as the first optional element. CIDs 3169, 3170, 3054, 3582, 3851, 4027, and 3171 CID Clause Page Line Comment Proposed Change Proposed Resolution 3169 318 18 is a lot of redundancy (e.g., the second paragraph is basically a duplicate of the first one and in addition the same behavior is described in 10.1.4.3) and what Keep one paragraph (it could simply be one sentence: "An S1G STA can transmit Short Probe Response frame as a response to a Probe Request frame that includes a Short Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. 1 2
is not a duplicate is nconsistencies. Probe Response element as described in 10.1.4.3.1"). Move some of the text that describes the contents of the Short Probe Response element content to 10.1.4.3.1. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3170 318 50 This paragraph has become too long. It is best to split and adapt it into multiple paragraphs to improve its readability. As in comment. Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3054 318 52 This is indended to be an introductory para, but .11ah adds lots of detailed rules about S1G probe operation. By all means add a sentence describing the existence of an S1G short probe, but move the detail to an existing detailed subclause, or (better) a new subclause specific to S1G. Also you might want to consider which of the criteria in 10.1.4.3.4 (REVmc D3) need to be changed for .11ah. Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3582 318 54 If an S1G STA and if it receives a Probe Request frame with Short Probe Response Option element, then Short Probe Response frame may be transmitted by the responding STA as a probe response. Not sure what this sentence is saying. Remove "and if it" or otherwise fix the grammar of the if/then phrasing Revised - The sentence has been removed because the sentence is redundant with other sentences (by the resolution to CID 3171). TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1
S1GM4.1 Generation of S1G Beacon 10.1.3.10.2 (Generation of S1G Beacon) (CF1 & CF32): M Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.1.1 S1G Beacon generation at TBTT (CF1 & CF32): M S1GM4.1.2 S1G Beacon generation at TSBTT (CF1 & CF32): O Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.1.3 S1G Beacon reception at TBTT (CF2 & CF32): M Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.1.4 S1G Beacon reception at TSBTT (CF2 & CF32): M Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.2 TSF timer accuracy with S1G Beacon 10.1.3.10.3 (TSF timer accuracy with S1G Beacon) CF32: M Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.3 TSF timer accuracy with TACK, STACK, BAT, Short Probe Response frames CF32: O Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.4 Signaling Probe Response Option element in Probe Request frame CF32: O Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.5 Active scanning using NDP Probe Request frame 10.1.4.3.3b (NDP Probing) CF32: O Yes  No  N/A  S1GM4.6 Sending Short Probe Response frame 10.1.4.3.4x (Active scanning using Short Probe Response), 10.1.4.3.4b (NDP Probing) (CF1 & CF32): O Yes  No  N/A  TGah Editor to insert as described in 10.1.4.3.4x Active Scanning using Short Probe Response at the first sentence in the third paragraph of subclause 10.1.4.3.4b NDP Probing.