411 What happens for VHTz mode in other bands? Clarify Revised paragraph has been removed 493 GI=0.8us is incorrect change GI=0.8us to GI=1.6us everywhere Revised paragraph has been removed 415 This Figure 11-xx has a MinProcessingTime but this is not defined anywhere. Further, if the time to the next sounding sequence is more than this processing time, why can't the LMR be provided immediately after the first sounding sequence, as in the Figure 11-xx above? Clarify Revised Figure 11-xx now uses which is defined. The LMR can only be provided if the ISTA is available (could be off channel), the only way for the ISTA to signal availability is to initiate another measurement. 417 This Figure 11-xx refers to an "Empty LMR" but this is not defined anywhere. What does an Empty LMR consist of? Clarify Accepted Added clarification 414 There are 4 Figure 11-xxs in this subclause, but only one reference (to one of them) Refer to all the figures in the text Accepted Added reference to Figures in relevant places 177 This should be in other subcaluse Move the sentence to the general part of VHTz ranging description Accepted Moved paragraph as requested 49 Change "field in an initial Fine Timing Measurement frame has expired" As per comment: to "field in the most recent initial Fine Timing Measurement frame has elapsed".' Accepted Changed wording 50 Change "an initial Fine Timing Measurement frame with the MinToAReady field value equal to a nonzero" As per comment: to "the most recent transmitted initial Fine Timing Measurement frame with the MinToAReady field value equal to a nonzero" Revised Rewrote paragraph 178 The valid result may not be available, e.g. when the UL NDP is not received. Fix the issue mentioned in the comment. Revised Changed wording to reflect the case where no valid ToA available 422 Again "equal to a nonzero" "nonzero" Revised Rewrote paragraph 423 "may not" is ambiguous Change to "is not required to" Revised Rewrote paragraph 424 What is a "valid" measurement result? How is it distinguished from an invalid one? Or Clarify. Also at line 29 Revised Rewrote paragraph
does nothing get transmitted at all? 426 "is negotiated and agreed on during negotiation" -- are the same thing, in baseline conventions Delete "and agreed on during negotiation" throughout Accepted Changed wording accordingly 418 "The direction(s) of LMR feedback(s) is (are) negotiated at service establishment." -- so can be ISTA-to-RSTA only (unlike HEz)? Clarify Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 419 "In both directions, LMR feedback is neither acknowledged" -- this follows from it being in Action No Ack frames Delete, or change to a NOTE, referring to the use of Action No Ack frames Accepted Now refer to Acktion No Ack frame format 420 "LMR feedback is reported in the next sounding sequence. " but the Figures 11-xx indicate the LMR feedback is after the sounding sequence, not part of it As it says in the comment Accepted Replaced sounding sequence with measurement exchange 421 What is the "sounding sequence" for VHTz? Is it the NDPA NDP NDP from Figure 11-xx in 11.22.6.4.4.2? Clarify Accepted Added language that defines “Sounding sequence” 416 What is the point of having units "[ms]" if there are no numbers or other marks on the axis? Delete in all cases Revised Removed units 179 This is not IEEE language. Fix the mentioned in the comment. Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 430 Spurious full stop Delete one of them Accepted Fixed typo 428 "TOA and TOD format" -- what is this? Change "format" to "reporting". Ditto line 14 Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 431 Same comments re secured wording as for 11.22.6.4.3.4 See comments on that subclause Accepted Changed wording accordingly 432 Same comments re secured wording as for 11.22.6.4.3.4 See comments on that subclause Accepted Changed wording accordingly TGaz Editor: replace 11.22.6.4.4 with the following revised text, changes relative to draft 0.