Editing instructions formatted like this are intended to be copied into the TGax Draft (i.e. they are instructions to the 802.11 editor on how to merge the text with the baseline documents). TGax Editor: Editing instructions preceded by “TGax Editor” are instructions to the TGax editor to modify existing material in the TGax draft. As a result of adopting the changes, the TGax editor will execute the instructions rather than copy them to the TGax Draft. CIDs 11508 Chunyu Hu "As with the VHT sounding protocol," doesn't provide much technical vlaue here. Clarify otherwise remove it. as in the comment Revised- in principle. TGax editor makes changes as shown in 11-18/053r0 that are marked with CID 11508 Transfer to sounding owner 13910 Yongho Seok "A STA may send bandwidth query reports (BQRs) when the peer STA has indicated support by setting the BQR Support field in the HE Capabilities element it transmits to 1; otherwise the STA shall not send BQRs to the peer STA." Because this sentence is not applied to an AP STA, change "A STA" to "A non-AP STA". Or, remove the cited paragraph because it is covered by 6th paragraph. Change as the following: "An HE STA may send bandwidth query reports (BQRs) when its associated AP STA has indicated support by setting the BQR Support field in the HE Capabilities element it transmits to 1; otherwise the HE STA shall not send BQRs to its associated AP STA." Or remove the cited paragraph. - The first paragraph describes the generable capability requirement so that in the following paragraphs don’t have to repeat the same capability requirement. TGax editor makes no changes on CID 13910.
13827 Yasuhiko Inoue "A STA may send BQRs to an AP to assist DL MU and UL MU resource allocation in an efficient way." This text is ambiguous compared to the other sentence in this subclause. Improve the text, e.g., "A non-AP HE STA may send BQRs to the AP with which it is associated to assist DL MU and UL MU resource allocation in an efficient way." Revised- in principle TGax editor makes changes as shown in 11-18/053r0 that are marked with CID 13827 12494 Liwen Chu BQR can't be in any frame. Change to in QoS Data, QoS Null, Management frame. Revised- in principle TGax editor makes changes as shown in 11-18/053r0 that are marked with CID 12494 12495 Liwen Chu Duplicate with L14. Remove one of them As in comment Revised- in principle TGax editor makes changes as shown in 11-18/053r0 that are marked with CID 12495 12496 Liwen Chu Add the following text at the end of the sentence: and the STA wants to report the channel available information As in comment Revised- Agree in principle TGax editor changes as shown in 11-18/053r0 that are marked with CID 12496 Patrice Nezou "The STA that receives a BQRP Trigger frame shall follow the rules defined in 27.5.3.3 (STA behavior for UL MU operation) to generate the HE TB PPDU when the Trigger frame contains the STA's AID in any of the Per User Info fields; otherwise the STA shall follow the rules defined in 27.5.5 (UL OFDMA-based random access (UORA)) to gain access to a random access RU and It is not possible to to set a RU with AID other than an associated STAs' AID or AID = 0. For instance, a RU with AID= 2045 must be forbidden in a BQRP Trigger frame. Please add a note to precise this condition. Rejected- is no reason to forbid a unassociated STA to report BQR. TGax editor makes no changes on CID 13093.