Simplify the following text for a Grade 11 native English-speaking person.
Original: While the Kashmir valley , often known as paradise on Earth , is famous for its beautiful mountainous landscape , Jammu 's numerous holy shrines attracts tens of thousands of Hindu and Muslim pilgrims every year .
Simplified: While the Kashmir valley is famous for its beautiful mountainous landscape , Jammu 's numerous shrines attract tens of thousands of Hindu pilgrims every year .