Simplify the following text for a Grade 11 native English-speaking person.
Original: DOTMusic , on the other hand , was less disparaging , saying that , `` where ` Holy Wood ' does come together and threaten to transcend its at times cliched parts is in its clarity of vision .
Simplified: DOTMusic commented `` Where ` Holy Wood ' does come together and threaten to transcend its at times cliched parts is in its clarity of vision .