Writing prompt: Spring Festival

Student essay:
Spring Festival is very important for the Chinese.
A few days before Spring Festival. I clean the house and than we go to the supermarket to buy food for the Spring Festival. Sometimes I made big red lanterns.
On the day of the Spring Festival evening we eat the family reunion dinner. We usually watch the Spring Festival gala. I always get a hongbao. It means lucky money.
I like Spring Festival.

Corrected essay:
Spring Festival is very important for the Chinese.
A few days before Spring Festival, I clean the house and then we go to the supermarket to buy food for the Spring Festival. Sometimes I make big red lanterns.
On the day of Spring Festival in the evening we eat the family reunion dinner. We usually watch the Spring Festival gala. I always get a hongbao. It means lucky money.
I like Spring Festival.