Writing prompt: How to Learn Chinese Well?

Student essay:
I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese,I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese,you can recommend to you.First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time.Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.
In the end,you can also make Chinese friends,they basically can give you to solve your difficulties.

Corrected essay:
I'm glad you asked me how to learn Chinese. Here are a few ways to learn Chinese well that I can recommend to you. First of all, you can take a class in Chinese. You can learn Chinese better and are also likely to encounter friends who are very familiar with Chinese. You can ask them for help when you have difficulties. Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home. This is helpful for your study. You can also learn to sing Chinese songs. This is good for your Chinese pronunciation.
In the end, you can also make Chinese friends. They basically can help you to solve your difficulties.