Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
Reading is a important way for everone to gain knowledge and experience.From reading books,we will reduce times we make mistakes and improve our quality.We will try to treat people in a better way,enjoying a more comfortable life.Because of reading,we think deeply and solve problems in a different way.
Finding the right book at the right time can light an emotional spark ,so let us read more books and enjoy the process.I believe we can find a more interesting world by this way.

Corrected essay:
Reading is an important way for everyone to gain knowledge and experience. From reading books, we will reduce the times we make mistakes and improve our quality. We will try to treat people in a better way, enjoying a more comfortable life. Because of reading, we think deeply and solve problems in a different way.
Finding the right book at the right time can light an emotional spark, so let us read more books and enjoy the process. I believe we can find a more interesting world in this way.