Writing prompt: Sharing

Student essay:
I still remember that time I share one of my mistakes with my mother. I copied one of my classmates' homework that made me feel very nervous. My mother listened to me carefully. Then she said she was angry with me, but she can help me solve this problem. She told me to do my homework by myself Ipromised. Then I did the homework again by myself. After that I was not nervous at all. This experience make me feel very happy, because it helped me solve the problem.

Corrected essay:
I still remember that time I shared one of my mistakes with my mother. I copied one of my classmates' homework, which made me feel very nervous. My mother listened to me carefully. Then she said she was angry with me, but she could help me solve this problem. She told me to do my homework by myself, and I promised. Then I did the homework again by myself. After that, I was not nervous at all. This experience made me feel very happy, because it helped me solve the problem.