Writing prompt: My Teacher

Student essay:
I believe that everyone has an ideal,the ideal of my childhood is a teacher.
Many people will say that when teachers are very tired,but also less pay,but this is a sacred work,some people think that teaching children is a wate of time but it is meaningful,because it is in the training of talent.
Ifeel very happy with the child,because it makes peopie feel very young and full of vigor and vitality.
Teachers are essential to the society,only the existence of our society will progress.
In short,the teacher is profession is sacred,they let us get the knowledge.

Corrected essay:
I believe that everyone has an ideal, and my ideal from childhood is to be a teacher.
Many people will say that being a teacher is very tiring and has less pay, but it is a sacred job. Some people think that teaching children is a waste of time, but it is meaningful, because it involves training talent.
I feel very happy with children, because they make me feel very young and full of vigor and vitality.
Teachers are essential to society. Only with their existence will our society progress.
In short, the teaching profession is sacred, and teachers let us gain knowledge.