Writing prompt: My Teacher

Student essay:
My spoken English teacher from Canada named Mr.Smith. Now let 'me tell you something about him. He has a pair of glasses on his face. He is medium build and very young. We all think he is Handsome. He is an outgoing man. His teaching method is well known to us. His class is lively and interesting because of his humor. As a teacher,he is rich in knowledge. At the same time,he is also strict with us in our study. He makes a great contribution to the improvement of our English speaking ability. As a friend,his colour is different from us,but I don't feel like he was a stranger. He is considered as an enthusiastic man in the class. He often helps others. We get along very well. We all like him because of his enthusiasm and responsibility for the work. I wish he can live a happier life in China.

Corrected essay:
My spoken English teacher from Canada is named Mr. Smith. Now let me tell you something about him. He has a pair of glasses on his face. He is of medium build and very young. We all think he is handsome. He is an outgoing man. His teaching method is well known to us. His class is lively and interesting because of his humor. As a teacher, he is rich in knowledge. At the same time, he is also strict with us in our study. He makes a great contribution to the improvement of our English speaking ability. As a friend, his colour is different from ours, but I don't feel like he is a stranger. He is considered as an enthusiastic man in the class. He often helps others. We get along very well. We all like him because of his enthusiasm and responsibility for the work. I wish he could live a happier life in China.