Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
?There is a developing country in Europe where I dream to visit.This destination is Switzerland.
?Situated in the middle of Europe,Switzerland takes an area of fourty one thousand square kilometers.There are seven point five billion people live inSwitzerland.With many famous cities,such as Berne,the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva,one of the most famous cities in the world,Switzerland attacks me a lot.Austria,France,Italy and Germany lie around Switzerland.They have different cultures while they are same in terms of architectures and economy.
Switzerland is a fascinating country with many beautiful places.What's more, it is known as the World Garden.That is why I dream of visiting there.Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with comfortable lifestyle.I really expect a travel to this wonderful destination.

Corrected essay:
There is a developing country in Europe where I dream to visit. This destination is Switzerland.
Situated in the middle of Europe, Switzerland covers an area of forty-one thousand square kilometers. There are seven point five million people living in Switzerland. With many famous cities, such as Berne, the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva, one of the most famous cities in the world, Switzerland attracts me a lot. Austria, France, Italy and Germany lie around Switzerland. They have different cultures while they are the same in terms of architecture and economy.
Switzerland is a fascinating country with many beautiful places. What's more, it is known as the World Garden. That is why I dream of visiting there. Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.
I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with a comfortable lifestyle. I really expect a travel to this wonderful destination.