Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.
I'm going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university. Because I hope that I 'll bring health and happiness to my family and my friends, and I'll be happy. In my spare time, I'll stay with my family and travel around everywhere in the world, and do lots of sports. I'll also read many books that can improve myself, and never give up studying.
I'm sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.

Corrected essay:
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.
I'm going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university because I hope that I'll bring health and happiness to my family and my friends, and I'll be happy. In my spare time, I'll stay with my family, travel around the world, and do lots of sports. I'll also read many books that can improve myself, and never give up studying.
I'm sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in the future will get better and better.