Writing prompt: Lihua's Worried

Student essay:
Recently,Lihua is good at Maths and Chinese. However,he is poor in physics and English because he finds that it's difficult to learn well. And everyday he is too tired to learn well.
Lihua thinks his parents don't understand him. They think that he should be the best student on each subject. In order to know what Lihua thinks,they even read Lihua 's diary when Lihua was not here.
When Lihua wants to relax at the weekend,but his parents don't approve of him watching TV. So Lihua can do nothing except study. Now Lihua has no interested in studying and he cannot learn as well as before.
In my opinion,I think his parents are too hard on him. They should give their child more private space and time. And it's not good for him to study so tired.I think they can also take Lihua to relax,for example,they can take him to do some sports or watch a movie. In this way,Lihua will do better in his studies and have interested in learning again,

Corrected essay:
Recently, Li Hua is good at math and Chinese. However, he is poor in physics and English because he finds that they are difficult to learn well. And every day he is too tired to learn well.
Li Hua thinks that his parents don't understand him. They think that he should be the best student in each subject. In order to know what Li Hua thinks, they even read Li Hua's diary when Li Hua was not there.
When Li Hua wants to relax at the weekend, his parents don't approve of him watching TV. So Li Hua can do nothing except study. Now Li Hua has no interest in studying and cannot learn as well as before.
In my opinion, I think his parents are too hard on him. They should give their child more private space and time. And it's not good for him to study when he's so tired. I think they can also take Li Hua to relax. For example, they can take him to do some sports or watch a movie. In this way, Li Hua will do better in his studies and have an interest in learning again.