Writing prompt: Pictures and Words in the News

Student essay:
There is something worth thinking about that happened in society today.Some olds faint on the road but nobody would like to give a helping hand so that many olds are wounded even death.the reason why these take place is we do not believe in others.Last Friday,our school happened a thing which make me very moving!
Between the lessons in the afternoon,a student fainted,as soon as they classmate saw this,they called on teachers to ask for help and sent him to the hospital immediately so that he got treatment on time.When he parents heared about this,they hurried to hospital and appraciate them very much who help their child at risk.
Those who bring sunshine into their lives of others,can not keep it from others.remember this,our world must be better.

Corrected essay:
There is something worth thinking about that happened in society today. Some old people faint on the road but nobody would like to give a helping hand so that many old people are wounded or even die. The reason why these things take place is we do not believe in others. Last Friday, something happened in our school which made me deeply moved!
Between the lessons in the afternoon, a student fainted. As soon as their classmates saw this, they called on teachers to ask for help and sent him to the hospital immediately so that he got treatment on time. When his parents heard about this, they hurried to the hospital and appreciated them very much who helped their child at risk.
Those who bring sunshine into the lives of others cannot keep it from others. By remembering this, our world must be better.