Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
My room is small but it is beautiful.This is my bed and that is my bookcase.There is a hat on the bed.There are a clock and a photo on the table. There is a sofa and there is a desk.My schoolbag is near the sofa.There are a notebook and a pen on the desk.There are a tape and a tape player on the desk.There is a CD on the desk. There is a chair near the desk.My room is wonderful.

Corrected essay:
My room is small but it is beautiful. This is my bed and that is my bookcase. There is a hat on the bed. There is a clock and a photo on the table. There is a sofa and there is a desk. My schoolbag is near the sofa. There is a notebook and a pen on the desk. There is a tape and a tape player on the desk. There is a CD on the desk. There is a chair near the desk. My room is wonderful.