Writing prompt: My Spring Festival

Student essay:
I'm L, a sophomore in high school, and I am honored to be in the English speech contest organized by the school.
In the west, there are a lot of festivals, such as father's day, mother's day, Halloween, Christmas, Carnival and Thanksgiving. In the holiday, my favorite is mother's day. The reason is that when the children get a little bit of success, my mother very happy, telling anyone speak, relish, because this is her pride; their children encounter wrong, mother will silently swallowing psychology that sad and regret, guidance and earnest instructions. Mother never because of poverty and disease, and to abandon their children some ugly. When the child suffers from suffering and pain, is the mother of the day and night, anxiety, anxiety, hate can not for her pain, for him.
I am looking forward to the Chinese people to have their own mother's day, and set a statutory holiday.

Corrected essay:
I'm L, a sophomore in high school, and I am honored to be in the English speech contest organized by the school.
In the west, there are a lot of festivals, such as Father's Day, Mother's Day, Halloween, Christmas, Carnival and Thanksgiving. Among these holidays, my favorite is Mother's Day. The reason is that when I get a little bit of success, my mother is very happy, tells anyone she speaks to and relishes it, because this is her pride. When her children encounter mistakes, my mother will silently swallow that sadness and regret, offering guidance and earnest instructions. Mothers never because of poverty, disease or ugliness abandon their children. When the child suffers from suffering and pain, it is the mother who is anxious day and night, and hates can not take the pain, for him.
I am looking forward to the Chinese people having their own Mother's Day, and setting it as a statutory holiday.