Writing prompt: An Upset Night

Student essay:
I live in a flat,so I have many neighbor. One of them vert like singing,even in the late at night.I was very angry about that
One night,I was reading a book.Suddenly,he became singing.I was very angry,but I could do nothing.So next day,I went to his home and ask him."Why did you sing yesterday evening?""Oh,sorry"he said,"I was just like singing,I don't want to disturb you in the evening.""You're welcome.Why don't you turn down the voice?""It's a good idea!Thank you so much!"
We all had a good day

Corrected essay:
I live in a flat, so I have many neighbors. One of them very much likes singing, even late at night. I was very angry about that.
One night, I was reading a book. Suddenly, he started singing. I was very angry, but I could do nothing. So next day, I went to his home and asked him, "Why did you sing yesterday evening?" "Oh, sorry," he said, "I just like singing. I don't want to disturb you in the evening." "You're welcome. Why don't you turn down the volume?" "It's a good idea! Thank you so much!"
We all had a good day.