Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
I'm Gina. I'm tidy. My hat and quilt are on the bad. My schoolbag is on the left of the sofa. My keys and radio are on the desk. My pencil box is in my schoolbag. My notebook is under the tape player. I have a clock. It's on the table. My books are in the bookcase. My ruler is on the book. I like my room.

Corrected essay:
I'm Gina. I'm tidy. My hat and quilt are on the bed. My schoolbag is on the left of the sofa. My keys and radio are on the desk. My pencil box is in my schoolbag. My notebook is under the tape player. I have a clock. It's on the table. My books are in the bookcase. My ruler is on the book. I like my room.