Writing prompt: My Spring Festival

Student essay:
Spring Festival is a traditional festival of China. It's on Jun.1st.
Peaple often celebrates Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers,eating dumplings and eating fish. Spring Festival is one of the most famous holidays of China, because it's the beginning of a new year. In China,fish means rich,so that people eat fish in the Spring Festival.
I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese,because it means you can get together with your family.

Corrected essay:
Spring Festival is a traditional festival of China. It's on Jan. 1st.
People often celebrate Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers, eating dumplings and eating fish. Spring Festival is one of the most famous holidays of China, because it's the beginning of a new year. In China, fish means being rich, so people eat fish in the Spring Festival.
I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese because it means you can get together with your family.