Writing prompt: My Spring Festival

Student essay:
Chinese Spring Festival has gone. My family were very pleased.
On the morning of the festival, we got up very early. We prepared many special things to get ready for spending the important day. We swept away the floor, cleaned the house and prepared for the dinner.
In the evening, I had a big meal together with my parents and my grandparents. After dinner, we chatted happily and played Poker. Then we watched TV for Spring Festival Gala. We stayed up very late that day to celebrate the new lunar year.
At twelve o'clock, we ate the dumplings which contained different filling and said many blessed words to relations.
What a busy and happy Spring Festival!

Corrected essay:
Chinese Spring Festival has passed. My family were very pleased.
On the morning of the festival, we got up very early. We prepared many special things to get ready for spending the important day. We swept the floor, cleaned the house and prepared for dinner.
In the evening, I had a big meal together with my parents and my grandparents. After dinner, we chatted happily and played Poker. Then we watched TV for the Spring Festival Gala. We stayed up very late that day to celebrate the new lunar year.
At twelve o'clock, we ate the dumplings which contained different fillings and said many blessed words to relatives. What a busy and happy Spring Festival!