Writing prompt: Parrots Make the Best Pets

Student essay:
I think that parrots are a good choice to keep. It's happy for you to play with parrots.
The following is the reason why I prefer keeping the parrot than keeping other animals.
First, the parrots can live for up to 50 years. They can live with you for many years.
Besides, it's not difficult for you to get a response from parrots to your spirits. For example, they will make you happy when you are sad or angry. As a result, they will become the interesting part in your daily life.
What's more, the parrots are clever enough, so it's easy for them to speak.
Why don't you keep a parrot? Parrots make the best pets for you. You can live in a happy life with parrots.

Corrected essay:
I think that parrots are a good choice to keep. It's happy for you to play with parrots.
The following is the reason why I prefer keeping a parrot to keeping other animals.
First, the parrots can live for up to 50 years. They can live with you for many years.
Besides, it's not difficult for you to get a response from parrots to your spirits. For example, they will make you happy when you are sad or angry. As a result, they will become an interesting part of your daily life.
What's more, parrots are clever enough, so it's easy for them to speak.
Why don't you keep a parrot? Parrots make the best pets for you. You can live a happy life with parrots.