Writing prompt: The Person I Like Best at School

Student essay:
Nancy is my favourite at school. She is my English teacher. She is very fair and helpful so everyone like her so much. She is an excellent lady,king-hearted,charitable,pious. She often helps me improve my English level etc. Once I failed in exam. She did not criticize me,but to help me. This is a memorable thing.
She is the best teacher that I met.

Corrected essay:
Nancy is my favourite at school. She is my English teacher. She is very fair and helpful so everyone likes her so much. She is an excellent lady, kind-hearted, charitable and pious. She often helps me improve my English level. Once I failed in an exam. She did not criticize me but helped me. This is a memorable thing.
She is the best teacher that I have met.