Writing prompt: A Swimmer Luo Xuejuan

Student essay:
Luo xuejuan Nickname is lolo, 23 years old.Luo xuejuan was born in 1984 in hangzhou city, zhejiang province, is China's national swimming athlete. She is very like the swimming, swimming training since she was young.Since 2000, has won many national games and the Asian games champion luo xuejuan, broken national breaststroke records and Asian record for many times, and won a good ranking in the world.In 2003 to win three gold MEDALS in the world championships in Barcelona, In 2004 by 1 minute, 6 seconds in Athens 64 Olympic record on the women's 100 m breaststroke achievements, won the first. Because of body reason, now retired, will be to study at a university in Beijing.

Corrected essay:
Luo Xuejuan's nickname is Lolo, and she was 23 years old. Luo Xuejuan was born in 1984 in Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province. She is China's national swimming athlete. She liked swimming very much and started swimming training when she was young. Since 2000, she has won many national games and the Asian Games championships, broken national breaststroke records and Asian records many times, and achieved good rankings in the world. In 2003, she won three gold medals in the World Championships in Barcelona. In 2004, with a time of 1 minute and 6 seconds, she set an Olympic record in the women's 100m breaststroke in Athens and won first place. Due to health reasons, she is now retired and plans to study at a university in Beijing.