Writing prompt: Report

Student essay:
Last Friday,The thing which is moving took place at school.
A student fainted suddenly during the break between classes,but other students were calm when they saw it.Some of them called"120" at once,others looked for the teachers at the same time.The teachers knew it and arrived there soon.They saw the weak student and then noticed that it 's serious.At the moment the car came,and the student helped her go into the car.And they sent her to the hospital.She was treated in time,and her life was safe.The teachers also call for her parents and told them good news.Her parents appreciated a lot.
From the thing,we know the students are calm,kind and helpful.They helped the people who are in trouble.I think their thing can be admired.

Corrected essay:
Last Friday, a thing which is moving took place at school.
A student fainted suddenly during the break between classes, but other students were calm when they saw it. Some of them called "120" at once. Others looked for the teachers at the same time. The teachers knew it and arrived there soon. They saw the weak student and then noticed that it was serious. At the moment the car came, and the students helped her get into the car. And they sent her to the hospital. She was treated in time, and her life was saved. The teachers also called her parents and told them the good news. Her parents appreciated it a lot. From this thing, we know the students are calm, kind and helpful. They helped the people who were in trouble. I think their actions can be admired.