Writing prompt: How to Improve Your Spoken English

Student essay:
First, communicating with friends in English anywhere in daily lives. You can find your English skills being improved quickly.
Besides, it is useful for you to listen to the English news and watch English programmers. Although you don't really understand what people in programmers say, you can know more usages about the American slang.
What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discuss different topics with others.
Fourth, travelling in a country which English is spoken. You must try your best to talk with local people.
Last but not least, you'd better recite the articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.

Corrected essay:
First, communicate with friends in English anywhere in daily life. You can find your English skills being improved quickly. Besides, it is useful for you to listen to English news and watch English programs. Although you don't really understand what people in programs say, you can know more usages about American slang.
What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show your ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discussing different topics with others.
Fourth, travel to a country where English is spoken. You must try your best to talk with local people.
Last but not least, you'd better recite articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.