Writing prompt: How to Learn English Words

Student essay:
I can give you a good way to remember English words.
I always read the words that I should memorize as well as review them once a day. Secondly, I always have enough sleep in order to memorize well. That is the best for memorizing English words I think. If you do these, you will memorize the words more easily and more quickly. As you can see, memorizing English not only needs good memory, but also needs some skills.

Corrected essay:
I can give you a good way to remember English words.
I always read the words that I should memorize as well as review them once a day. Secondly, I always have enough sleep in order to memorize well. That is the best for memorizing English words, I think. If you do these, you will memorize the words more easily and more quickly. As you can see, memorizing English not only needs good memory, but also needs some skills.