Writing prompt: My Weekend

Student essay:
Last week our English club asked students about their weekend activities.Our question was "How do you spend your weekend?"Here are the results.
We found that forty percent students always stay at home to study.It's a good way to learn well.I think all of students should be this.
Watching TV and listen to music are popular.The twenty-five percent of our students often watch TV or listen to music to relax on weekends.
We all know go online is the popular many students use the internet every day.
Twenty percent of us often talk on QQ or play the computer games.Most students use it just for fun and not for homework.But I think the best way for fun is through exercise.
For housework there are only ten percent of us help with parents.And joining the sports activities are few too only five percent.I feel very sad,I think exercise is good for the mind and body."Old habits die hard."So let's start changing it before it's too late!

Corrected essay:
Last week our English club asked students about their weekend activities. Our question was "How do you spend your weekend?" Here are the results.
We found that forty percent of students always stay at home to study. It's a good way to learn well. I think all students should do this.
Watching TV and listening to music are popular. Twenty-five percent of our students often watch TV or listen to music to relax on weekends.
We all know going online is popular. Many students use the Internet every day.
Twenty percent of us often chat on QQ or play computer games. Most students use it just for fun and not for homework. But I think the best way to have fun is through exercise.
For housework only ten percent of us help our parents. And only five percent of students join sports activities. I feel very sad. I think exercise is good for the mind and body. "Old habits die hard." So let's start changing it before it's too late!