Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
I have a lovely bedroom. There is a big bed in my room. There is a brown desk in my room. There are some boxes under the bed. There are some pens on the desk. The bed is next to the desk. The desk is near the window. I have a big bookcase in my room. I like reading books very much. Do you like reading book? My bedroom is so nice. I love it

Corrected essay:
I have a lovely bedroom. There is a big bed in my room. There is a brown desk in my room. There are some boxes under the bed. There are some pens on the desk. The bed is next to the desk. The desk is near the window. I have a big bookcase in my room. I like reading books very much. Do you like reading books? My bedroom is so nice. I love it.