Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
I have a gond room.It's very big.I'm tidy.My keys in my schoolbag ahd my schoolbag under the bed.My computer on the desk.I have a big bed.I have a clock.it's on the desk.I love it.

Corrected essay:
I have a good room. It's very big. I'm tidy. My keys are in my schoolbag and my schoolbag is under the bed. My computer is on the desk. I have a big bed. I have a clock. It's on the desk. I love it.