Writing prompt: My Past Life

Student essay:
By Tom Smith
I was born in Tianjin,a big city on the east coast of China,in March 13th,2002.
I had lots of friends when I was a child.My first friend's name is Zhang Zhexuan.We studyed in Shang Haidao Primary School.Zhang zhexuan was a little difficult in class but I didn't,I was very good.After class we ofen played games together.For example,we played hide-and-seek.Our first English teacher is Nancy.She was kind and friendly to us,but sometimes she was strict in our lessons.
This is my past life and I'm looking to returning my primary school with my friends again.

Corrected essay:
By Tom Smith
I was born in Tianjin, a big city on the east coast of China, on March 13th, 2002.
I had lots of friends when I was a child. My first friend's name is Zhang Zhexuan. We studied in Shang Haidao Primary School. Zhang Zhexuan felt a little difficult about class but I didn't, and I was very good. After class we often played games together. For example, we played hide-and-seek. Our first English teacher was Nancy. She was kind and friendly to us, but sometimes she was strict in our lessons.
This is my past life and I'm looking forward to returning to my primary school with my friends again.