Writing prompt: My Best Friend

Student essay:
As we know nobody can go without friends .A good friends is someone who make us happy or impressive.Friendship helps us understand who we are. why we need each other or what wo can do for each other.For example , I often cannot finish my homework , and
then myfiend help me finish it. so I think need friends. Friendship is warm and give me hope and wishes . Everyone should have a good friends. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade;

Corrected essay:
As we know nobody can go without friends. A good friend is someone who makes us happy or impressed. Friendship helps us understand who we are, why we need each other or what we can do for each other. For example, I often cannot finish my homework, and then my friend helps me finish it. So I think we need friends. Friendship is warm and gives me hope and wishes. Everyone should have a good friend. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade.