Writing prompt: School Day

Student essay:
Hi Chris
Let me show you something about my school life.I usually get up at sixo'clock.I have brackfast at home.I usually go to school by bus.The journey takes about thirty minutes.
At school, half past seven I have my first lesson.Before the class,we have tohand in our homework on time.after first lesson,we have to do some excreise.I dont like physics,because it is diffcult to me.but I like English very much.we have lunch at eleven o'clock and we have a teast after the lunch.The class is over at five o'clock pm.
Iusually do my homework and I like my school very much.What about you.

Corrected essay:
Hi Chris,
Let me show you something about my school life. I usually get up at six o'clock. I have breakfast at home. I usually go to school by bus. The journey takes about thirty minutes.
At school, at half past seven I have my first lesson. Before the class, we have to hand in our homework on time. After the first lesson, we have to do some exercise. I don't like physics, because it is difficult for me, but I like English very much. We have lunch at eleven o'clock and we have a test after lunch. The class is over at five pm.
I usually do my homework and I like my school very much. What about you?