Writing prompt: Asking My Roommate to Be Quieter

Student essay:
The text is comming.But there are something unhappy.
My roomate is a football fan.He likes watching football games.That day,he was watching football games on the Internet.He was very excited and cheered players of his favourite team when he was watching the game.I was going over my lessons that night.But his sound and the sound of the game was too big.I couldn't look my book carefully so I was very ungry.I told him that turned down the sound.He was very sorry.He turned it down and said sorry to me.So I could go over my lessons and he could enjoy himself.Both of us were happy.
We spent a good night. To make a step backward can actually live better,I thing.

Corrected essay:
The test is coming. But there was something unhappy.
My roommate is a football fan. He likes watching football games. That day, he was watching football games on the Internet. He was very excited and cheered for the players of his favourite team when he was watching the game. I was going over my lessons that night. But his sound and the sound of the game were too loud. I couldn't focus on my book carefully so I was very angry. I told him to turn down the sound. He was very sorry. He turned it down and said sorry to me. So I could go over my lessons, and he could enjoy himself. Both of us were happy.
We had a good night. To take a step backward can actually make life better, I think.