Writing prompt: The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars

Student essay:
in the latest years, as the. developement of science and technology. there are more and more people buy cars.cars' disadvangtages and advantages aperce.
Every years,my familise and I would go to travel by cars to have a good time. evary week,my father would take car go home.with cars,peoplewill have convinent life and havemore timeand chances to have fun. in the all,cars pay a important. role in our life.
but on the other hand,cars also have disadvangtages. for example, in many large cities,there are too crowded to go to work for people in the morning. we have to say heavy transportation is a large problem. air pollution and greenhouse arecaused by cars.
carsjustis a tool.how touse it is dependonus.

Corrected essay:
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, more and more people have bought cars. Cars' disadvantages and advantages appear.
Every year, my family and I would travel by car to have a good time. Every week, my father would take the car to go home. With cars, people will have a convenient life and have more time and chances to have fun. All in all, cars play an important role in our lives.
But on the other hand, cars also have disadvantages. For example, in many large cities, it is too crowded for people to go to work in the morning. We have to say heavy traffic is a large problem. Air pollution and greenhouse effects are caused by cars.
Cars are just a tool. How to use them depends on us.