Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
The European country I most want to visit is Switzerland.So I will introduce Switzerland to you.
It is located in the middle of European .Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million.Berne is its capital city.And Geneva which is famous in the world is a city of Switzerland,too.
Swizerland has some famous neighbouring countries.They are Asutria,France,Italia and Germany.And it's one of reasons of its rich.
Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.
Swizerland is also known for its industry.As far as I know,the developed industry of watches,chemistry and food is really famous.
In a word,Swizerland is a very pretty and rich country.I really love it and I want to travel to there very much.

Corrected essay:
The European country I most want to visit is Switzerland. So I will introduce Switzerland to you.
It is located in the middle of Europe. Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million. Berne is its capital city. And Geneva, which is famous in the world, is a city in Switzerland, too.
Switzerland has some famous neighbouring countries. They are Austria, France, Italy, and Germany. And it's one of the reasons for its wealth.
Switzerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there. What is more, Switzerland is called "the garden of the world" because of its beautiful scenery.
Switzerland is also known for its industry. As far as I know, the developed industries of watches, chemistry, and food are really famous.
In a word, Switzerland is a very beautiful and rich country. I really love it and I want to travel there very much.