Writing prompt: My Friend and I

Student essay:
I have two best friends:Peng Rei and Bai Junhao.
Peng Rei and I have many similars. So we are both tall,and both outgoing. We are like both play
sports,because it's very interesting. But we are both like plays computer games,too.
But Bai Junhao and I have different hobbies. I'm taller than him. I'm more hard-working than him. But he's smarter than him.
Although they are the same with me and different from me, it's not necessary. Because of we can help each other.

Corrected essay:
I have two best friends: Peng Rei and Bai Junhao.
Peng Rei and I have many similarities. So we are both tall and both outgoing. We both like to play sports, because it's very interesting. We also both like to play computer games, too.
But Bai Junhao and I have different hobbies. I'm taller than him. I'm more hard-working than him. But he's smarter than me.
Although they are the same as me and different from me, it's not necessary. Because we can help each other.