Writing prompt: The Trip of the Great Wall

Student essay:
My name is C who lives in New York. Last week, I had a trip in Beijing. I felt very happy and excited.
I took a plane to Beijing and I arrived there at four o'clock in the afternoon on November the third. It was very far.
I stayed in Beijing for four days and visited a lot of the places of interest. I also ate many Chinese food, they were delicious , I like them a lot. And then, I went back to America. I thought I had a good time in China.

Corrected essay:
My name is C who lives in New York. Last week, I had a trip to Beijing. I felt very happy and excited.
I took a plane to Beijing and I arrived there at four o'clock in the afternoon on November the third. It was very far.
I stayed in Beijing for four days and visited a lot of places of interest. I also ate many Chinese foods. They were delicious. I liked them a lot. And then, I went back to America. I thought I had a good time in China.