Writing prompt: My Hero

Student essay:
My hero is Curry. Curry is a famous basketball player in NBA. He is tall and strong. When he laughs, we see his even teeth I watching basketball in TV since 2008. I have known Curry He worked so hard that he was hurt. Alough he was hurt but he never gives up. In 2014-2015 sports competition seasons he led the team winning leave competition very easy. Then he led the team win the a great variety of competition since 2015. When he stopped playing basketball he wanted to do charity. This is the reason why I like it.
So I think he was hero. Because whatever he does,he never gives up. He has an amazing strong will.

Corrected essay:
My hero is Curry. Curry is a famous basketball player in the NBA. He is tall and strong. When he laughs, we see his even teeth. I have been watching basketball on TV since 2008. I have known Curry. He worked so hard that he was hurt. Although he was hurt, he never gave up. In the 2014-2015 sports competition season he led the team to win the league competition very easily. Then he led the team to win a great variety of competitions since 2015. When he stopped playing basketball he wanted to do charity. This is the reason why I like him.
So I think he is a hero because whatever he does, he never gives up. He has an amazingly strong will.