Writing prompt: My Summer Vacation

Student essay:
My summer vacation was so exciting. I finished my homework. Then I go to swimming every day. But in the summer vacation,my classmate invited me to went to play in the park. I went to park on the morning. The air feeled clear. So I feel very comfortable. We played in the park and running in laugh. We hadn't met for a long time,so I feel wonderful. In the afternoon,we had a great meal. It's a really good day!

Corrected essay:
My summer vacation was so exciting. I finished my homework. Then I went swimming every day. But in the summer vacation, my classmate invited me to go to play in the park. I went to the park in the morning. The air felt clear. So I felt very comfortable. We played in the park and ran with laughter. We hadn't met for a long time, so I felt wonderful. In the afternoon, we had a great meal. It was a really good day!