Writing prompt: My Teacher

Student essay:
Mrs Sun is my English teacher.She is twenty years old.She looks very nice.She quite tall,with big eyes and short hair,and she wears glasses.She always wears dress.She is always friendly to us.Her all students love she very much.She likes singing and dancing.I love she,because she teaches very well and she is very pretty.

Corrected essay:
Mrs. Sun is my English teacher. She is twenty years old. She looks very nice. She is quite tall, with big eyes and short hair, and she wears glasses. She always wears a dress. She is always friendly to us. All her students love her very much. She likes singing and dancing. I love her, because she teaches very well and she is very pretty.