Writing prompt: Stay at Home Alone

Student essay:
Everyone stay at home was unforgettable
my first stay at home was forgotten on that day they left my mother tells me to shut the door but I was so agitated. And i want to left them soonafter my dream was cometure they was went away on trip
i play computer games until mindnight without dinnr and i got up late and my i con not hint in homework
last my life was mess i was so said
know i realese stay at home along was not so perfect
Through this experience I understand we should learn to self management

Corrected essay:
Everyone staying at home was unforgettable.
My first stay at home was on that day they left. My mother told me to shut the door, but I was so agitated. And I wanted to leave them. Soon after, my dream came true—they went away on a trip.
I played computer games until midnight without dinner and I got up late. And I could not focus on my homework.
At last, my life was a mess and I was so sad.
Now I realize staying at home alone is not so perfect.
Through this experience, I understand we should learn self-management.