Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
In the future,high technigue will be filled with our life.In the school,computer will take the place of book of paper making.The student will accomplish schoolwork in the computer.Then the computer software will take the place of teacher that getting homework over for the student.In our life,the car will be on the way out.The trolleybus will replace to the car.The resident got out to take the trolleybus.We rely on the solar energy to generate electricity.The environment will be more and more good.people will be more and more well.

Corrected essay:
In the future, high technology will be filled with our lives. In the school, computers will take the place of paper books. The students will accomplish schoolwork on the computer. Then the computer software will take the place of teachers, reviewing homework for the students. In our life, the car will be on the way out. The trolleybus will replace the car. The residents will go out taking the trolleybus. We will rely on solar energy to generate electricity. The environment will be better and better. People will be better and better as well.