Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
After ten years,I will be 27 years old.I will be a teacher in a senior high school.My students are quite clever and active.I lead a busy and meaningful life. What is more,I will have a family with two children and a husband. On workdays, l am too busy to do houswork.
Instead, in the holidays ,l like to wear more casually.l will do a great deal of exercise to keep fit.As far as l am concerned, l will have a colorful life.
Inll a word,after ten years, l will lead a much richer and more wonderful life.l cannot wait to grow up quickly.

Corrected essay:
After ten years, I will be 27 years old. I will be a teacher in a senior high school. My students will be quite clever and active. I will lead a busy and meaningful life. What is more, I will have a family with two children and a husband. On workdays, I will be too busy to do housework.
Instead, on the holidays, I will like to dress more casually. I will do a great deal of exercise to keep fit. As far as I am concerned, I will have a colorful life.
In a word, after ten years, I will lead a much richer and more wonderful life. I cannot wait to grow up quickly.