Writing prompt: After-School Activities

Student essay:
Nowadays,after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
As we all know,our school after-school activities are really interesting and fit for high school students.I take part in many activities.In the club activities I do some sports;such as playing football and playing basketball.What'more,I can not only play with my friends,but also watch English movies. By this way we will make progress in English quickly.
To choose after-school activities,interests are the most important things.If you want to gain knowledge or some skills,you should choose the activities which you really show an interest in.In a word,the community activities actively involved,there is strong team spirit of cooperation.Please enjoy it.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
As we all know, our school's after-school activities are really interesting and fit for high school students. I take part in many activities. In the club activities, I do some sports, such as playing football and playing basketball. What's more, I can not only play with my friends but also watch English movies. In this way, we will make progress in English quickly.
To choose after-school activities, interests are the most important thing. If you want to gain knowledge or some skills, you should choose the activities in which you really show an interest. In a word, by actively participating in community activities, there is a strong team spirit of cooperation. Please enjoy it.