Writing prompt: Students' Cheating in Exams

Student essay:
I am Wangtao who is a senior student.I want to show my opinions about the problem whether we should own the phone.
I think that the phone has its advantages.For example ,it's convenient for us to connect with our parents .What's more ,it also can increase our fun of the lives.
But everything has the two parts.So we should recognize that what are bad.The first of all,it will make the bad affection to our study. The wrong behaviours will period between the teenagers.Taste the time and money to chat or send the message.Another ,playing games even the cheating and the other questions will be also into the sights of ours.
So how can we have the attitude about the phone ?I support "Three beliefs ".The first one is that we don't use the phone during the studying.Next ,don't use it to play games.Of course ,don't cheat too .The last suggestion is that the phones so expensive that we should protect them safely.
In a word ,please display its best effects with your best.And avoid the weakness.

Corrected essay:
I am Wang Tao who is a senior student. I want to show my opinions about the problem of whether we should own a phone.
I think that the phone has its advantages. For example, it's convenient for us to connect with our parents. What's more, it can also increase the fun in our lives.
But everything has two sides. So we should recognize what is bad about it. First of all, it will have a bad effect on our study. The wrong behaviors will spread among teenagers, wasting time and money on chatting or sending messages. Another thing is that playing games, even cheating and other issues will also come into our sight.
So what should our attitude be towards the phone? I support "Three Beliefs". The first one is that we shouldn't use the phone while studying. Next, don't use it to play games. Of course, don't cheat either. The last suggestion is that phones are so expensive that we should protect them safely.
In a word, please display its best effects with your best effort and avoid its weaknesses.