Writing prompt: The Mothers' Day

Student essay:
After I finished my breakfast, I went to buy the flowers for my mum. I sent them to my mum and I did the housework. My mum was so happy because she could take a rest today. She also likes the flowers I bought for her. In the afternoon, I went to market to buy groceries. I prepared the food for the big meal in the evening. I cooked a delicious meal in the night. I watched TV with my mum and went shopping with her. She was happy for today. I am happy because of my mum's happiness. I love my mum forever.

Corrected essay:
After I finished my breakfast, I went to buy flowers for my mum. I sent them to my mum and did the housework. My mum was so happy because she could take a rest today. She also liked the flowers I bought for her. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy groceries. I prepared the food for the big meal in the evening. I cooked a delicious meal at night. I watched TV with my mum and went shopping with her. She was happy today. I was happy because of my mum's happiness. I love my mum forever.