Writing prompt: Ten Years Later

Student essay:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
I still will be bachelordom.I will enjoy the freedom.I will filial piety and take care of my nephew,when ten years later he will become a teenager.
I should find a interesting job,but if I can't find it,i will do anything whatever I can.
When I was a child,I want to go around the world,such as Paris London the Dutch town,those is all my love places.Before I not old,I want to walk around.
I think ten years later I will have a good life

Corrected essay:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
I will still be bachelordom. I will enjoy the freedom. I will practice filial piety and take care of my nephew, when ten years later he becomes a teenager.
I should find an interesting job, but if I can't find it, I will do whatever I can.
When I was a child, I wanted to go around the world, such as Paris, London and the Dutch towns. Those are all my favorite places. Before I grow old, I want to walk around.
I think ten years later I will have a good life.