Writing prompt: My Birthday

Student essay:
I am 14 years old now.In the 14 years,I received many gifts.But I received the best friend is a book named if gave me three days to light.I were pleased to receieve this gift.It tells a very strong and brave woman the study of career and be deaf and mute life. Then it tells us to cherish life to learn to persevere.Because of it, l learned more.This book taught me a lot.It made me learn to persevere.This is the best l have ever received a gift. So l like it much too.

Corrected essay:
I am 14 years old now. In these 14 years, I have received many gifts. But the best gift I received is a book named If I Were Given Three Days of Light. I was pleased to receive this gift. It tells the story of a very strong and brave woman, her study career and her life being deaf and mute. Then it tells us to cherish life and learn to persevere. Because of it, I learned more. This book taught me a lot. It made me learn to persevere. This is the best gift I have ever received. So I like it very much.