Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
I often think what my life in the future is like. I think my life will be wonderful.
I will have a happy family, making me laugher. All my families will love me very much. So, I will be a fortunate person.
Ten years from now, I'll have a costly job that I want. Being an English teacher is my dream, because teachers are of importance. I'll get on well with my students. So they will like asking me some questions for English programs. I'll give right solutions to their problems in no time. What's more, with my patience, they will get good grades. With my dream to come true, I will become very pleased every day.
I hope my future will be as good as I think.

Corrected essay:
I often think about what my life in the future will be like. I think my life will be wonderful.
I will have a happy family, making me laugh. All my family members will love me very much. So, I will be a fortunate person.
Ten years from now, I'll have a job that I want. Being an English teacher is my dream, because teachers are of importance. I'll get on well with my students. So they will like asking me questions about English programs. I'll give the right solutions to their problems in no time. What's more, with my patience, they will get good grades. With my dream coming true, I will become very pleased every day.
I hope my future will be as good as I think.