Writing prompt: Survey Report about Healthy Eating

Student essay:
Survey report about healthy eating
in our class, most students eating healthy food. But a lot of students don't eat healthy snacks or drinks. However most students have some water every day but a lot of students take more than two drinks with sugar. Our snack is not healthy. Most students eating junk food but a lot of students have some fruits every day. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Do you remember the saying" An apple a day keep the doctor away " We should also eat less meat every day. I love fruits and vegetable, so I eat healthy food. I am trying to eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Although I like junk food. But I try to eat ti once a week. I knowing it is bad for body. And I never eating hamburger or cheese, although they are delicious.

Corrected essay:
Survey report about healthy eating
In our class, most students eat healthy food. But a lot of students don't eat healthy snacks or drinks. However, most students have some water every day but a lot of students take more than two drinks with sugar. Our snacks are not healthy. Most students eat junk food, but a lot of students have some fruits every day. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Do you remember the saying "An apple a day keeps the doctor away"? We should also eat less meat every day. I love fruits and vegetables, so I eat healthy food. I am trying to eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. Although I like junk food, I try to eat it once a week. I know it is bad for the body, and I never eat hamburgers or cheese, although they are delicious.