Writing prompt: Being a Good Listener

Student essay:
Ladies and gentlemen, my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.
Nowadays, listening has become a problem we have to face. It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement for our listening ability it is a common belief that we will be sociable. Nevertheless parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap. It must be made clear that the student should observe discipline. Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their score. There is no doubt that the students can respect others. Nevertheless we can be patient for our classmates and cherish them. Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a listener.
At length I sincerely believe that we can do better in future. Thank for your listening!

Corrected essay:
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today, I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.
Nowadays, listening has become a problem we have to face. It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement of our listening ability. It is a common belief that we will be more sociable. Nevertheless, parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap. It must be clear that students should observe discipline. Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their scores. There is no doubt that students can respect others. Nevertheless, we can be patient with our classmates and cherish them. Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a good listener.
At length, I sincerely believe that we can do better in the future. Thank you for your listening!