Writing prompt: Things About Me

Student essay:
hello!everyone,my name is Peter.I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!

Corrected essay:
Hello! Everyone! My name is Peter. I study in T International School. I like sports very much, and I can run very fast. My favorite sport is running. I am in Class Two, Grade Eight. I like math very much, because my math is very good. I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too. I like eating pizza very much. The pizza is so good and delicious. I eat pizza every month. This is me. Let's make friends!