Writing prompt: Traditional Reading or Online Reading?

Student essay:
Traditional reading can make us feel real.It is the good way to get more kowledge and enrich our life.
But, you have not enough space to put the books if you have too much .
Online reading is very popular now,because it's so conveniency that we can resd a book any time or
place.We can read any book only use a mobile phone or a computer.However,if we read it for a long time,
it must be bad for our eyes.
In my opinion,traditional reading and online reading both the good way to resding.But,we should
choose an appropriate way to ourselves.

Corrected essay:
Traditional reading can make us feel real. It is a good way to get more knowledge and enrich our life.
But you may not have enough space to put the books if you have too many.
Online reading is very popular now, because it's so convenient that we can read a book anytime or anywhere. We can read any book using only a mobile phone or a computer. However, if we read it for a long time, it must be bad for our eyes.
In my opinion, traditional reading and online reading are both good ways to read. But we should choose an appropriate way for ourselves.