Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
Just as the saying goes,by reading we enrich the mind.In my opinion,reading play an important part in our life.
There are a diversity of books for us to choose from,like history,science and literature.From those about history,we can learn about history from the past and permit not to make the same mistakes nowadays.We can also learn various cuultures from reading books about different coutries' literature.I love the books about literature most.Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as it contains such a lot of information.To be honest,everyone can benefit from books,which can bring peace to our mind.
If we don't read, our mind will become dull.Although we can take part in some activities,we still cannot receive such useful information.Therefore,let's keep reading books now and then.

Corrected essay:
Just as the saying goes, by reading we enrich the mind. In my opinion, reading plays an important part in our life.
There is a diversity of books for us to choose from, like history, science, and literature. From those about history, we can learn about history from the past and avoid making the same mistakes nowadays. We can also learn various cultures from reading books about different countries' literature. I love the books about literature most. Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as they contain such a lot of information. To be honest, everyone can benefit from books, which can bring peace to our minds.
If we don't read, our minds will become dull. Although we can take part in some activities, we still cannot receive such useful information. Therefore, let's keep reading books now and then.