Writing prompt: Mr. Smith

Student essay:
Mr.Smith is our new spoken English teacher.He comes from Canada.He is a enthusiastic man with glasses and is of medium height.He makes a deep impression on me.
We all like him because he is humorous and outgoing.When we have difficulty in speaking English.He will help us to solve them.He is strict with us though he is a easygoing man.
I believe I can make progress in speaking English.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Smith is our new spoken English teacher. He comes from Canada. He is an enthusiastic man with glasses and is of medium height. He makes a deep impression on me.
We all like him because he is humorous and outgoing. When we have difficulty in speaking English, he will help us to solve them. He is strict with us though he is an easygoing man.
I believe I can make progress in speaking English.