Writing prompt: The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars

Student essay:
Nowadays with the development of science and technology.Cars become increasingly popular.The cars are so convenient that they improve our efficiency. We can go to the place far away from home to have a travel. Besides we can go on business more fast.But cars are also have many shortcoming.
The waste-gas from cars not only pollutes the air but also speedster up the climate change. Too many cars cause more and more crowded. The crowded traffic has a bad influence on our trip.
As far as Im concerned,the invention of cars is good for the progress of human. They plays an important part in our daily life.I do hope that people can take advantage of cars.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays with the development of science and technology, cars have become increasingly popular. Cars are so convenient that they improve our efficiency. We can go to the place far away from home to have a travel. Besides we can go on business faster. But cars also have many shortcomings.
The waste-gas from cars not only pollutes the air but also speeds up the climate change. Too many cars cause more and more crowding. The crowded traffic has a bad influence on our trips.
As far as I'm concerned, the invention of cars is good for the progress of humanity. They play an important part in our daily life. I do hope that people can take advantage of cars.