Writing prompt: My Favorite Place at School

Student essay:
At the school,my favourite place is reading room.
I like reading room because I think it is bright,enough quiet and very large.
First of all, in the reading room,I can read more and more useful books. What's more,as a student,reading books are very important for our students. Reading books can let me know many interesting things,and learned more and more important things. Least but not lest,reading many books can improve your writing skills It can also learn many new skills too.
I like reading room. It's my favourite place at the school.

Corrected essay:
At the school, my favourite place is the reading room.
I like the reading room because I think it is bright, quiet enough and very large.
First of all, in the reading room, I can read more and more useful books. What's more, as a student, reading books is very important for us. Reading books can let me know many interesting things, and learn more and more important things. Last but not least, reading many books can improve your writing skills. It can also help you learn many new skills too.
I like the reading room. It's my favourite place at the school.