Writing prompt: Learn English

Student essay:
In my opinion,it is necessary to learn English.Because you can learn adanced technology.It is good forinternational communication.It also make us more in depth understanding of western culture.It is abvious that we should strengthen the English practice.Although compared with English,I prefer to learning Chinese.Learning English need put more vim,but grade always low.Someone think learn English is of no use to them.And someone in order to deal with the test.So different thinking lead to different results.We must work hard instead of for the test.As a Chinese,we have difficulty in learning English.We must be determined to learn English

Corrected essay:
In my opinion, it is necessary to learn English because you can learn advanced technology. It is good for international communication. It also makes us have a more in-depth understanding of western culture. It is obvious that we should strengthen English practice. Although compared with English, I prefer learning Chinese. Learning English needs more effort, but grades are always low. Some people think learning English is of no use to them. And some people learn it in order to deal with the test. So different thinking leads to different results. We must work hard instead of just for the test. As Chinese people, we have difficulty in learning English. We must be determined to learn English.