Writing prompt: My New Teachers

Student essay:
Ms Bai is our incumbent math teacher. She leave an impression on me during these days of starting school.She is carefully with her work ,she finds the mistakes of our homework and teaches our unclear knowledge one by one. My mathematics isn't very goodat first,and I made much progress with her helps. Her teaching methods is nothing like that of the teachers at my Junior High school.She makes difficult questions and give us instructions. We worked by ourselves. So we can understand better.But we didn't review the notes again.So we forget the knowledge somedays later. But she taughts again. She is patient with every students.We all love her!

Corrected essay:
Ms. Bai is our incumbent math teacher. She leaves an impression on me during these days of starting school. She is careful with her work. She finds the mistakes in our homework and teaches our unclear knowledge one by one. My mathematics wasn't very good at first, and I made much progress with her help. Her teaching methods are nothing like those of the teachers at my junior high school. She makes difficult questions and gives us instructions. We work by ourselves, so we can understand better. But we don't review the notes again, so we forget the knowledge some days later. But she teaches it again. She is patient with every student. We all love her!