Writing prompt: What's in My Name?

Student essay:
Everyone name very crucial because only how to know you but also has special meaning.
The one word in ancient poetry Jing yan si zhi,the explanation of character is usually quiet and inchon is mean calm down and do not show off your gift.My parents want I will become not is only able who has the personal character in the future.
I like my name very much it is to contain for parents love and make me different from everybody.

Corrected essay:
Everyone's name is very crucial because it not only helps others know you but also has a special meaning.
The character "Jing" in my name comes from the ancient poetry "Jing Yan Si Zhi", which means calmness and not showing off your gift. My parents hope that I will become not only someone with personal character in the future but also capable.
I like my name very much. It contains my parents' love and makes me different from everybody.