Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
If you ask me which country do I most want to go,I will say "Switzerland".
Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.It owns a good geographical position that is next to Austria,France,Italy and German.People call it "the garden of world" beacause beautiful scenaries are everywhere in Switzerland.As we all kown,Switzerland is well-kown for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.Besides,the chemistry and food are both good.
It is such a country that I must go to visit one day!

Corrected essay:
If you ask me which country I most want to go to, I will say "Switzerland".
Now let me tell you why I like it best. Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe and has a population of 7,500,000. The capital of Switzerland is Berne. Sure, I think you know the famous city named Geneva. It has a good geographical position, being next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany. People call it "the garden of the world" because the beautiful scenery is everywhere in Switzerland. As we all know, Switzerland is well-known for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity. Besides, the chemistry and food are both good.
It is such a country that I must go to visit one day!