Writing prompt: Movie Report: The Movie Unbroken

Student essay:
After i have watched the film,i wrote this report.
The film is talk about the World War 2.The main chereter named Louie Zamperini.He was an American soler and in one task his plane crash into the sea.He was caught by the Japanese and lead a hard.But in the end he get freedom!
When i saw this film i cried.I aslo thinked why Louie can save himself?I and he are the same just live on the Earth.He can endure the pain and stick to principles.He loved his country .he had many advantages.
I should lean them in my life.
this film let me benifit a lot!

Corrected essay:
After I watched the film, I wrote this report.
The film talks about the World War 2. The main character is named Louie Zamperini. He was an American soldier and in one task his plane crashed into the sea. He was caught by the Japanese and led a hard life. But in the end he got freedom!
When I saw this film I cried. I also thought about why Louie could save himself. He and I are the same, just living on the Earth. He could endure the pain and stick to principles. He loved his country. He had many advantages.
I should learn them in my life.
This film benefited me a lot!