Writing prompt: Stay at Home Alone

Student essay:
Eveyone has an experience of staying at home alone when his parpents go out .
I also have such experience . well,me parents they had to go away on business for a few days.Now was my chance! I was very happy .
On the frist day when they went out I was very happy.I played games. I liked the games so much that I played until midnight.
The next morning I Woke up late.so I was late.The teacher asked me for myhomework,but I could mot hand it in.I felt tired and sleepy at shcool all day long.
When I got home, I tried to cook some rice,but I burnt it.When I was unhappy.
when my parents came home, they were happy to find that icould cook an tidy up now. I told them my home alone story,and we all laughed.
How do you feel about staying at home at home alone?
I am home alone feel very loneliness.

Corrected essay:
Everyone has an experience of staying at home alone when his parents go out.
I also have such experience. Well, my parents had to go away on business for a few days. Now was my chance! I was very happy.
On the first day when they went out, I was very happy. I played games. I liked the games so much that I played until midnight.
The next morning I woke up late, so I was late. The teacher asked me for my homework, but I could not hand it in. I felt tired and sleepy at school all day long.
When I got home, I tried to cook some rice, but I burnt it. I was unhappy.
When my parents came home, they were happy to find that I could cook and tidy up now. I told them my home-alone story, and we all laughed.
How do you feel about staying at home alone?
I am home alone and feel very lonely.