Writing prompt: Spring Festival

Student essay:
Chinese Spring Festival was hold in the end of the winter and the beginning of the spring.
During the Spring Festival, People usually have a long holiday.It about seven days.The whole families will have a big family get-together to eat dumplings on the eve of the Spring Festival for get good luck in the new year.Of course, fish, meat and other delicious food are also important. People also use red lantern decorate a house and put on new clothes.
What's more,The children are looking forward to red envelope money, and they play the fireworks,When the night falls,dragon and lion dance and some other activities in CCTV will held in Spring Festival gala.
This is Chinese Spring Festval-a traditional festval.

Corrected essay:
Chinese Spring Festival is held at the end of the winter and the beginning of the spring.
During the Spring Festival, people usually have a long holiday. It is about seven days. The whole family will have a big get-together to eat dumplings on the eve of the Spring Festival to get good luck in the new year. Of course, fish, meat and other delicious food are also important. People also use red lanterns to decorate their houses and put on new clothes.
What's more, the children look forward to red envelope money, and they set off the fireworks. When night falls, dragon and lion dances and some other activities will be held during the Spring Festival Gala on CCTV.
This is the Chinese Spring Festival—a traditional festival.