Writing prompt: School Day

Student essay:
Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....every activities are exciting .i go to bed at ten o clock after i finish my homework .This is my school day.

Corrected essay:
Everyone has a school day. Now, let me tell you something about my school day. In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six. We usually have Chinese class, math class, English class, physics class, and chemistry class to learn. And my favourite subject is chemistry because I think it is very interesting and we can know many exciting things. I do not like history class, because it has too many things to bear. I go home by bus and do my homework at half past seven. After school, we have many activities, such as tennis, basketball, and volleyball. Every activity is exciting. I go to bed at ten o'clock after I finish my homework. This is my school day.