Writing prompt: Merry Christmas

Student essay:
Christmas day falls on twenty-fifth of December, it is a wonderful day for all boys and girls. In former years, I could get an apple and some candy on Christmas eve from my friends. But in this year, I had a different Christms day , this christms eve was on wednesday, so I had to spend time with my classmates. In that day we weak up very eary, when I get to class I found an apple on my table, I was very surprised, Next day it was christams day, we had a christmas party in the morning. After lunch we went to Happy Valley Amusement . I really had a great time with my classmates. Then we have dinner together. What a wonderful day!

Corrected essay:
Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a wonderful day for all boys and girls. In former years, I could get an apple and some candy on Christmas Eve from my friends. But this year, I had a different Christmas Day. This Christmas Eve was on Wednesday, so I had to spend time with my classmates. On that day we woke up very early. When I got to class I found an apple on my table. I was very surprised. The next day was Christmas Day. We had a Christmas party in the morning. After lunch we went to Happy Valley Amusement. I really had a great time with my classmates. Then we had dinner together. What a wonderful day!