Writing prompt: Parrots Make the Best Pets

Student essay:
Have you ever heard of a kind of animal called parrots? They make good pets because of lots of reasons.
First, parrots can live for a long time, they can live for about 50 years.
Second, parrots can think about your thought easily, for example, they can make you happy by saying some interesting words.
Third, parrots are very clever, they can speak, and they can bring you lots of happiness by talking with you.
I think parrots make the best pets is because they are smart and they are easy to take care of. Why not keep a parrot as a pet now? I am sure they can bing you lots of happiness.

Corrected essay:
Have you ever heard of a kind of animal called parrots? They make good pets because of lots of reasons.
First, parrots can live for a long time. They can live for about 50 years.
Second, parrots can think about your thought easily. For example, they can make you happy by saying some interesting words.
Third, parrots are very clever. They can speak, and they can bring you lots of happiness by talking with you.
I think parrots make the best pets because they are smart and they are easy to take care of. Why not keep a parrot as a pet now? I am sure they can bring you lots of happiness.