Writing prompt: Housework

Student essay:
Every family is all the same.They will do lots of home work in the daily life.It's very boring.Our parents always do that,so we don't need to think about it.But if you ever care about your mother.You should help her to do some housework.Her heart will feel warm,and you will be proud of yourself.
At the first we should learn to do some housework.It's the most diffcult part.Because you maybe will spend a lot of time to learn it.But if you know well.You will like help your mother to do some housework.Beacuse you can feel that,your mother will not geeting tired,she need some times to have a rest.And you give her this time.Your and your mother will getting cloest.
That's all,I hope you can remember what I said.It is very uself in our daily life.

Corrected essay:
Every family is the same. They do lots of housework in daily life. It's very boring. Our parents always do it, so we don't need to think about it. But if you care about your mother, you should help her to do some housework. Her heart will feel warm, and you will be proud of yourself.
At first, we should learn to do some housework. It's the most difficult part because you may spend a lot of time learning it. But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired. She needs some time to have a rest. And you give her this time. You and your mother will get closer.
That's all. I hope you can remember what I said. It is very useful in our daily life.