Writing prompt: A Touching Thing

Student essay:
Now,there is always someone fainting in the street but most of the people will only see but doing nothing.And last February,our school happened a touching thing which let us see the warmth of the world.
During a break of February a student fainted.As soon as some other students saw this,they called for help and sent her to the hospital at the first time so she got treatment just on time.After hearing about this,her parents hurried to the hospital to see her and show their appreciation to the students who sent their child to the hospital.
This could not only let us but also other people learn the importance of helping others,the people who always help others could also be helped when they are in trouble.Please remember this whenever you see other people that need help,helping others is helping yourself.

Corrected essay:
Now, there is always someone fainting in the street but most people will only see and do nothing. And last February, a touching thing happened at our school which let us see the warmth of the world.
During a break in February a student fainted. As soon as some other students saw this, they called for help and sent her to the hospital immediately so she got treatment just in time. After hearing about this, her parents hurried to the hospital to see her and showed their appreciation to the students who sent their child to the hospital.
This could not only teach us but also others the importance of helping others. People who always help others can also be helped when they are in trouble. Please remember this: whenever you see other people who need help, helping others is helping yourself.