Writing prompt: My House

Student essay:
My house is in the city. It is on the eighth flat. My house has got three bedrooms. This is a big badroom and two small badrooms. My house is in a small badroom. My house has got two bookcases. Because is my book are very much. My house is very beautiful.

Corrected essay:
My house is in the city. It is on the eighth floor. My house has three bedrooms. They are one big bedroom and two small bedrooms. My room is the small bedroom. My house has two bookcases. Because I have too many books. My house is very beautiful.