Writing prompt: A Book Review of The Lost World

Student essay:
The Lost World is one of the greatest books I ever read, by Arthur Conan Doyle. The famous English writer who has created "Sherlock Homes". The story is set in the eighteen century England.
It tells an exciting and dangerous adventure in an unknown world. The hero of the book, Malone, a young reporter for the London Daily Gazette. He wants to be famous and wants to get the scoop of the century. Professor Challenger, Professor Summerlee who are the enemies, and Lord John who is an experienced explorer. Four men go on the journey for different reasons. After through a lot of problems, they get to "The Lost World". Actually, they are stranded in the mysterious place.
My favorite part of the book is when Malone finally does something nice for the team, he wants to prove himself once again. So, he goes to the center of the land and checks it out, all alone. He has through a really exciting time, with the strange creatures and weird things, in the mid-night.
The lost World is a great book. The characters are very real, their personalities, their background, especially their feelings and ideas. Today, it is still read and loved by many people. There are even some TV dramas, movies base on the book.

Corrected essay:
The Lost World is one of the greatest books I ever read, by Arthur Conan Doyle, the famous English writer who has created "Sherlock Holmes". The story is set in the eighteenth century England.
It tells an exciting and dangerous adventure in an unknown world. The hero of the book, Malone, is a young reporter for the London Daily Gazette. He wants to be famous and wants to get the scoop of the century. Professor Challenger and Professor Summerlee are the enemies, and Lord John is an experienced explorer. These four men go on the journey for different reasons. After going through a lot of problems, they get to "The Lost World". Actually, they are stranded in the mysterious place.
My favorite part of the book is when Malone finally does something nice for the team, because he wants to prove himself once again. So, he goes to the center of the land and checks it out, all alone. He has gone through a really exciting period of time, with the strange creatures and weird things in the mid-night.
The Lost World is a great book. The characters are very real—their personalities, their background, especially their feelings and ideas. Today, it is still read and loved by many people. There are even some TV dramas and movies based on the book.