Writing prompt: My Past Life

Student essay:
It's been two years,two years ago,I was a junior high school student.It happened a lot of things,but all of it are little things.I can barely remember those.I just remember one thing in junior high school.In 2013,We had PE lesson,In that PE,we had many sport to do,running,rope skiing,Jumping...I was so tired that I fell in a faint.Two of us came to help me.They knew I can't walk anymore,so they put my arms to their shoulder and sent me infirmary.I won't fotget it because I really appreciate them.

Corrected essay:
It's been two years. Two years ago, I was a junior high school student. A lot of things happened, but all of them were little things. I can barely remember those. I just remember one thing in junior high school. In 2013, we had a PE lesson. In that PE lesson, we had many sports to do. Running, rope skipping, jumping... I was so tired that I fell in a faint. Two of my classmates came to help me. They knew I couldn't walk anymore, so they put my arms on their shoulders and sent me to the infirmary. I won't forget it because I really appreciate them.