Writing prompt: Read More Books

Student essay:
Books can increase people's knowledge and expand the vision of people. Books can also improve the quality of people. Reading books is a good habit.
In my opinion, we should read more books and read good books. It can help es to know more knowledge and improve our quality. Books are good thing for us. Reading good books can make people feel relaxed. You can enjoy your happiness by reading books. I think everyone should have a good habit of reading. The world will be good in the future.

Corrected essay:
Books can increase people's knowledge and expand their vision. Books can also improve the quality of people. Reading books is a good habit.
In my opinion, we should read more books and read good books. It can help us to gain more knowledge and improve our quality. Books are a good thing for us. Reading good books can make people feel relaxed. You can enjoy your happiness by reading books. I think everyone should have a good habit of reading. The world will be good in the future.