Writing prompt: My Happiness

Student essay:
Everybody is to much happiness.I have many happiness to my life.I play sport with my good friend and do housework make me very happiness.My mother give my life I was very heel happiness.Hereon I thank to my mother give my life.

Corrected essay:
Everybody has so much happiness. I have much happiness in my life. Playing sports with my good friend and doing housework make me very happy. My mother gave me life. I am very happy. Here, I thank my mother for giving me life.