Writing prompt: Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

Student essay:
Amy Chau,the professor of the Yale University, who had written a famous book named "Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother", holding an American nation but a Chinese. The book introduced a tale including the writer and her two daughters , the writer educated her daughters with the strict Chinese traditional ways of education.A large amout of English words covered the book in many ways, which has positive meaning to improve the ability of students' reading.However, the approachings of the writer has caused violent argument in publics. Though her seventeen-year-old daughter has got the permission by Yale and Harvard University, most Chinese mother was still opposed to what writer had done.

Corrected essay:
Amy Chua, a professor of Yale University, who has written a famous book named "Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother," holds American nationality but is Chinese by heritage. The book introduces a tale including the writer and her two daughters. The writer educated her daughters with the strict Chinese traditional ways of education. A large number of English words cover the book in many ways, which has a positive meaning to improve students' reading ability. However, the approaches of the writer have caused violent arguments in public. Though her seventeen-year-old daughter has been accepted by Yale and Harvard University, most Chinese mothers are still opposed to what the writer has done.