Writing prompt: To Chris

Student essay:
I'm sure that you're welcome to join us as an exchange student. But the life in Tianjin is different from that in America. These tips may help you. Above all, it's colder than America in order that you'd better to put on some warm clothes. It's sometimes foggy,so remember to keep an eye on the weather forecast. What's more ,Tianjin's food is so delicious. Come and have a taste!.
Now,let me introduce something about our class. There are fifty enthusiastic youth looking forward to getting on well with you. Teachers will do their best if you turn to them for help.Classroom is also equiped with a computer which brings us a lot interest in learning.
Well, I'd like you to tell us how do you feel after you spend some days here. It's good for us to help you adapt your life in Tianjin. And would you like to introduce us something about American life ? I think it's a chance to improve friendship between the Chinese and the American students.
I would appreciate it if you could reply me soon.

Corrected essay:
I'm sure that you're welcome to join us as an exchange student. But life in Tianjin is different from that in America. These tips may help you. Above all, it's colder here than in America, so that you'd better put on some warm clothes. It's sometimes foggy, so you should remember to keep an eye on the weather forecast. What's more, Tianjin's food is so delicious. Come and have a taste!
Now, let me introduce something about our class. There are fifty enthusiastic youths looking forward to getting on well with you. Teachers will do their best if you turn to them for help. The classroom is also equipped with a computer, which brings us a lot of interest in learning.
Well, I'd like you to tell us how you feel after you spend some days here. It's good for us to help you adapt to your life in Tianjin. And would you like to introduce something about American life to us? I think it's a chance to improve the friendship between the Chinese and American students.
I would appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.