Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit,Switzerland to you.
Switzerland is a developed country located in Central Europe.The area of Switzerland is 41000 square kilometres.The population of Switerland is 7.5million.The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.
Switzerland is a beautiful country and visited by lots of people every year.The scenry of the country is so besutiful that people it the garden of the world.
Switzerland is famous for its watch, the chemical and food industry.
In a word,Switzerland is worth to visit.

Corrected essay:
Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit, Switzerland, to you.
Switzerland is a developed country located in Central Europe. The area of Switzerland is 41,000 square kilometres. The population of Switzerland is 7.5 million. The capital of the country is Berne and Geneva, the city which is famous in the world, is also in Switzerland.
Switzerland is next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
Switzerland is a beautiful country and visited by lots of people every year. The scenery of the country is so beautiful that people call it the garden of the world.
Switzerland is famous for its watches, the chemical industry and the food industry.
In a word, Switzerland is worth visiting.