Writing prompt: Merry Christmas

Student essay:
In Christmas Day,kids will stay with family.They will change gifts and write new year wishes.Also,they will make a family meal.They will make gingerbread house,candy,ham for Christmas Day.They will make a Christmas tree and put wish for the New Year cards on the tree.And putting the gifts under the tree.
In different country,they eat different supper for Christmas Day. In the United State,fanmily always eat roasted suckling pig,turkey,baked corn porridge and so on. In the United Kingdom,they like eating turkey,roasted suckling pig, fruit pie and etc.
After supper,they will change gifts and read thier own wish for the New Year to each other.And they will say "Merry Christmas" loudly.Maybe,they will take a famliy photo in this day.

Corrected essay:
On Christmas Day, kids will stay with their family. They will exchange gifts and write New Year wishes. Also, they will make a family meal. They will make gingerbread house, candy, and ham for Christmas Day. They will decorate a Christmas tree and put New Year wish cards on the tree, as well as put gifts under the tree.
In different countries, they eat different suppers for Christmas Day. In the United States, families always eat roasted suckling pig, turkey, baked corn porridge, and so on. In the United Kingdom, they like eating turkey, roasted suckling pig, fruit pie, etc.
After supper, they will exchange gifts and read their own wishes for the New Year to each other. And they will say "Merry Christmas" loudly. Maybe they will take a family photo on this day.