Writing prompt: My Hero

Student essay:
My name is X and my hero is my father. In my heart he is omnipotent kind and helpful.
Although he is not famous but he loves his work and family. For the most part he is very busy with his work,but he can help me with my homework. He is strict with my habit, but I believe that he loves me. Over the weekends he not only communicates with me, but also plays with me. When I am sad he always cheers me up and takes a joke made me laugh.
Dad is very common but in my heart he is great so I love him very much.

Corrected essay:
My name is X, and my hero is my father. In my heart, he is omnipotent, kind and helpful.
Although he is not famous, he loves his work and family. For the most part, he is very busy with his work, but he can help me with my homework. He is strict with my habit, but I believe that he loves me. Over the weekends he not only communicates with me, but also plays with me. When I am sad, he always cheers me up and tells a joke to make me laugh.
Dad is very common, but in my heart he is great, so I love him very much.