Writing prompt: A Speech on Good Eating Habits

Student essay:
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it is important for us to form healthy eating habits.
In my side, someone don't eat breakfast, someone love to eat snacks, someone particular, and someone overeating. I think these are all bad eating habits.
I think have a good eating diet is very important. It's helpful for our health. Here are some suggestions for you to improve your habit and get healthier.
•Have a variety of food.
•Have your breakfast every day.
•Eating regularly.
•Don't eat too much or too little.
•Eat less snaka.

Corrected essay:
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it is important for us to form healthy eating habits.
In my opinion, some people don't eat breakfast, some love to eat snacks, some are particular, and some overeat. I think these are all bad eating habits.
I think having a good eating diet is very important. It's helpful for our health. Here are some suggestions for you to improve your habits and get healthier.
• Have a variety of food.
• Have your breakfast every day.
• Eat regularly.
• Don't eat too much or too little.
• Eat fewer snacks.