Writing prompt: Traditional Reading or Online Reading?

Student essay:
I think that traditional reading and online reading are all important.They are different ways of reading.They both have advantages and disadvantages.
Online reading is more interesting than traditional reading.It have lots of the latest articles and reports.Everybody can read them at home.It's very easy.
Traditional reading is more real and safer.Because everyone can write their idea on the Internet,there are some wrong and false information.We must look at the computer for a long time.It will make our eyes bad.Traditional reading is not like this.The books that have come out are writing by well-known people or teams.We can read it more safely.We shouldn't only read on the Internet.Because traditional reading and online reading are all very useful to us.

Corrected essay:
I think that traditional reading and online reading are both important. They are different ways of reading. They both have advantages and disadvantages.
Online reading is more interesting than traditional reading. It has lots of the latest articles and reports. Everybody can read them at home. It's very easy.
Traditional reading is more real and safer. Because everyone can write their idea on the Internet, there is some wrong and false information. We must look at the computer for a long time. It will make our eyes bad. Traditional reading is not like this. The books that have come out are written by well-known people or teams. We can read them more safely. We shouldn't only read on the Internet because traditional reading and online reading are both very useful to us.