Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
I always imagine what my life will be like in the future.
Ten years later, maybe I will get married to a girl or maybe I will still live with my family.but I think I can live happily whoever I will stay with. As for my work, it would be very fantastic if I could be an engineer. I would get on well with my companies, and I would design a lot of works. which can stay a long time. I like to travel, so I wonder lf I can travel to different countries with my parents in the holidays.
To achieve my dream, I would work hard from now then.

Corrected essay:
I always imagine what my life will be like in the future.
Ten years later, maybe I will get married to a girl or maybe I will still live with my family. But I think I can live happily, whoever I stay with. As for my work, it would be very fantastic if I could be an engineer. I would get on well with my colleagues, and I would design a lot of works which can stay a long time. I like to travel, so I wonder if I can travel to different countries with my parents during the holidays.
To achieve my dream, I will work hard from now on.