Writing prompt: Being a Good Listener

Student essay:
To build a good relationship with others in our life, we should be a good listener. On account of listening,we can know more about those who we love,and who love us .
Parents listen to their kid so that then can understand their kid well and remove generation gap. Parents can learn about their child's world by listening to their child , instead of objecting to their dreams.
Teachers listen to their students in order to meet students' requirement. Through listening, teachers can know about what makes their students puzzled to develop a wonderful relationship between teaching and learning.
Classmates listen to their classmates to improve their friendship . Being a good listener , they can help each other .
On my personal note, to be a good listener, what we need to do is show our respect for talkers. When listening , don't interrupt others. Then we should consider things on others' position, so we can understand their puzzlements well.
Be a good listener , you will find a more beautiful world.

Corrected essay:
To build a good relationship with others in our life, we should be a good listener. On account of listening, we can know more about those who we love, and who love us.
Parents listen to their kids so that they can understand their kids well and remove the generation gap. Parents can learn about their child's world by listening to their child, instead of objecting to their dreams.
Teachers listen to their students in order to meet students' requirements. Through listening, teachers can know about what makes their students puzzled to develop a wonderful relationship between teaching and learning. Classmates listen to their classmates to improve their friendship. Being a good listener, they can help each other. On my personal note, to be a good listener, what we need to do is show our respect for talkers. When listening, don't interrupt others. Then we should consider things from others' positions, so we can understand their puzzlements well.
Be a good listener, and you will find a more beautiful world.