Writing prompt: My Favorite Place at School

Student essay:
I spent half of my childhood in my school,so I love my school rather than my home.
I love lab building best. Actually, I like everything in school,except the classroom. In my mind, lab building is the most beautiful place,there were two trees in front of the door so we can enjoy ourselves under the tree.
On the first floor,there is a lab which can do chemistry experiment. I like chemistry just because of the experiment.when we burnt Mg,the view we see is amazing:it just like firework. On the other hand, we also mix the different things in a small bottle. It is so dangerous that we must be careful in every minute.
On the other floors,there are many interesting places as well.
I love lab building because it is beautiful,amazing,quiet. I will remember it fo ever

Corrected essay:
I spent half of my childhood in my school, so I love my school rather than my home.
I love the lab building best. Actually, I like everything in school, except the classroom. In my mind, the lab building is the most beautiful place. There are two trees in front of the door so we can enjoy ourselves under the tree.
On the first floor, there is a lab where we can do chemistry experiments. I like chemistry just because of the experiments. When we burn Mg, the view we see is amazing: it is just like fireworks. On the other hand, we also mix different things in a small bottle. It is so dangerous that we must be careful in every minute.
On the other floors, there are many interesting places as well.
I love the lab building because it is beautiful, amazing, and quiet. I will remember it forever.