Writing prompt: British History

Student essay:
Called the British the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, is made up of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland .\nIn 1535, become a part of the kingdom of England,Wales Scotland and England in 1707 formally merged into the kingdom of Great Britain,Great Britain and Ireland in 1800 merged independence in 1922,Northern Ireland is still stay in the United Kingdom .\nBritain is the most powerful period in the 19th century.Beat after the industrial revolution,many with rob colonial countries such as Spain,the Netherlands,France,The 18th and 19th century century as the period of the British national strength is the most powerful, has the world's largest colony when there will be the sun in its colonies, so called the day not fall empire

Corrected essay:
Called the British, the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is made up of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland.
In 1535, Wales became a part of the Kingdom of England. Scotland and England in 1707 formally merged into the Kingdom of Great Britain. Great Britain and Ireland merged in 1800, but Ireland gained independence in 1922. Northern Ireland still stays in the United Kingdom.
Britain was most powerful during the 19th century. After the Industrial Revolution, it beat many who robbed colonial countries such as Spain, the Netherlands and France. The 18th and 19th centuries were the periods when the British national strength was the most powerful. The British have the world's largest colonies where there will always be the sun in its colonies. It was so called the "empire on which the sun never sets."