Writing prompt: The Way to Keep Healthy

Student essay:
Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life. As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.For eaxmple,we can paly basketball,vollyball or table tennis.Then wo shuid a healthy life style.We need to get into the habit of get up early.And reasonable meals and sleep on time.It will make us keep a good mental state.Finally,Good attitude will make us become healthier.
Do you think of you have a healthy life.If not.Please follow my steps.We will be better.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life. As students, we should know more about how to keep fit.
At first, we should try to eat less food that has fat and sugar, and try to eat more vegetables and fruit. We should have a balanced diet. We also need some exercise to keep our bodies healthy. For example, we can play basketball, volleyball or table tennis. Then we should have a healthy lifestyle. We need to get into the habit of getting up early, having reasonable meals, and sleeping on time. It will help us keep a good mental state. Finally, a good attitude will make us healthier.
Do you think you have a healthy life? If not, please follow my steps. We will be better.