Writing prompt: The Plan of the Summer Holiday

Student essay:
After half a month,the summer vacation will come.According to my past experience,the summer vacation should lead us have a long time to forget the tired in learning.Nevertheless, in this holiday I will strive to study.With the time flying,I am going to be a student who will Participate in the college entrance examination next year.For this reason,l had to spend more time in studying.
To improve my study,l will take actions in quite a different way.In my plan,l try to do a lot of practice.As the saying goes:From small increments comes abundance.I believe that the more time I spent on learning, more progress I will make.
On the other hand, I will go to cram school so that I can go over my knowledge.By the end of this term do I make a perfect plan.
However,the amusement is also essential for my vacation.Two to three weeks I will spend in traveling.It is good for us to combine learning to entertainment.
To sum up,I'm looking forward to a pleasant holiday,and hope to make progress in learning.

Corrected essay:
After half a month, the summer vacation will come. According to my past experience, the summer vacation should give us a long time to forget the tiredness of learning. Nevertheless, in this holiday I will strive to study. With the time flying, I am going to be a student who will participate in the college entrance examination next year. For this reason, I have to spend more time in studying.
To improve my study, I will take action in quite a different way. In my plan, I will try to do a lot of practice. As the saying goes: From small increments comes abundance. I believe that the more time I spend on learning, the more progress I will make.
On the other hand, I will go to cram school so that I can go over my knowledge. By the end of this term I will make a perfect plan.
However, amusement is also essential for my vacation. I will spend two to three weeks in traveling. It is good for us to combine learning with entertainment.
To sum up, I'm looking forward to a pleasant holiday, and hope to make progress in learning.