Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
What will the life of the future look like?No one knows forsure.
I will have my own family.When I become a twenty-six yearsold.I will have a work for my family.I need to care for it,
I enjoying my work,and I will do good work.After work,I like reading some book.Because I think read books is make me
feel relaxing and quiet.Another,I am also like play ping-pong.I think it can make me get health .
In the future,my life and work will be much more colorful.

Corrected essay:
What will the life of the future look like? No one knows for sure.
I will have my own family when I become twenty-six years old. I will work for my family. I need to care for it.
I enjoy my work, and I will do good work. After work, I like reading some books because I think reading books makes me feel relaxed and quiet. I also like playing ping-pong. I think it can make me healthy.
In the future, my life and work will be much more colorful.