Writing prompt: My First Day at Yizhong

Student essay:
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new school and checked everything for the new term. I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I will become a student of a high school. I was worried because I did not know about the teachers and the students. I was afraid that I could not make friends with them.
When I got school, I found everyone was very friendly. Teachers were kind too. I suddenly forgot my nervousness. I felt that I was at home.
At the end of today, I felt very happy and I believe I will have lots of fan at the new school.

Corrected essay:
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new school and checked everything for the new term. I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I would become a student of a high school. I was worried because I did not know about the teachers and the students. I was afraid that I could not make friends with them. When I got to school, I found everyone was very friendly. The teachers were kind too. I suddenly forgot my nervousness. I felt that I was at home.
At the end of today, I felt very happy and I believe I will have lots of fun at the new school.