Writing prompt: Our Plans in New Year

Student essay:
New Year's Day is coming.In my family, everyone has a New Year's plan.
My father decides to find a new job.To make more money for our family.
My mother will work hard.And look after our family well.
My brother and my sister will study hard and get good reaults,and go to a good university.
And i will woek hard on my study. Especially math, I need to improve in my Math.
I often get up late,and stay up late.I will break this habits.i will get earlier and goto bed earlier than before.
i decide to do more sprots to stay healthy.i plan to go swimming every weekends.and i will also eat healthy food to keep healthy.Such as rice , noodles,chicken suop,feef,fruit and vegetable.
This is our New Year's plan.i hope we will have a good tome.

Corrected essay:
New Year's Day is coming. In my family, everyone has a New Year's plan.
My father decides to find a new job to make more money for our family.
My mother will work hard and look after our family well.
My brother and my sister will study hard, get good results, and go to a good university.
And I will work hard on my studies, especially in math, I need to improve my math.
I often get up late, and stay up late. I will break these habits. I will get up earlier and go to bed earlier than before.
I decide to do more sports to stay healthy. I plan to go swimming every weekend. And I will also eat healthy food to keep healthy, such as rice, noodles, chicken soup, beef, fruit and vegetables.
This is our New Year's plan. I hope we will have a good time.