Writing prompt: A Brief Introduction to the UK

Student essay:
The UK is called The United Kingdom or British. London is the capital of the British. British is made up of four countries such as England,Wales,Scotland and Northern Ireland. So it has four languages English,Welsh,Scottish Gaelic and Irish Gaelic. In the thirteenth century,Wales was linked to England. Then England and Wales joined Scotland in the seventeenth century and named Great Britain. Finally the English government formed the United Kingdom by getting Ireland peacefully. But,the southern part of Ireland was unwilling and broke away to form its own government. So the United Kingdom contained Northern Ireland,England,Wales and Scotland. If you want to have a trip on historical architecture,the small towns built by Romans it's a good places to travel. There you will find out more about British history history and culture.

Corrected essay:
The UK is called the United Kingdom or Britain. London is the capital of Britain. Britain is made up of four countries: England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. So it has four languages: English, Welsh, Scottish Gaelic and Irish Gaelic. In the thirteenth century, Wales was linked to England. Then England and Wales joined Scotland in the seventeenth century and were named Great Britain. Finally, the English government formed the United Kingdom by uniting with Ireland peacefully. But the southern part of Ireland was unwilling and broke away to form its own government. So the United Kingdom contains Northern Ireland, England, Wales and Scotland. If you want to have a trip to see historical architecture, the small towns built by Romans are good places to travel. There you will find out more about British history and culture.