Writing prompt: Beijing

Student essay:
Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.Beking university is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment,you will have the best life of studying.In addition,if you live here,you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly.in my view,it is a good place for you to live alone and study.I think you can make many friends and won't be alone.During this time ,if you have any problems, i am glad to help you settle them.

Corrected essay:
Peking University is one of the most famous universities in China. I'm proud of you who can study here. Peking University is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment. You will have the best life of studying. In addition, if you live here, you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly. In my view, it is a good place for you to live alone and study. I think you can make many friends and won't be alone. During this time, if you have any problems, I am glad to help you settle them.