Writing prompt: Being a Good Listener

Student essay:
Nawadays, listening is very important for us in our life. We should look up to speakers when they talk about something who is going to listen to parents of children and understand and eliminate the generation gap. The teacher listens to the students and understands students and meets their needs. Students listen to each other can improve our friendship. They can teach and learn. So, listen to the comprehension, to establish a good interpersonal relationship.
If we do not learn to listen, then, we may be difficult to find in society. Only learn to listen, and others will listen to you, will respect you, used to make friends with you.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays, listening is very important for us in our life. We should look up to speakers when they talk about something, listen to parents or children and understand and eliminate the generation gap. The teacher listens to the students and understands students and meets their needs. Students listening to each other can improve their friendship. They can teach and learn from each other. So, listen with comprehension to establish good interpersonal relationships.
If we do not learn to listen, then, we may find it difficult in society. Only by learning to listen will others listen to you, respect you, and want to make friends with you.