Writing prompt: A Review of Frankenstein

Student essay:
Frankenstein was a film that was directed by Kenneth Branagh. The two main characters are Robert De Niro, played by monster, and Kenneth Branagh, played by monster.
Frankenstein is a young scientist from Geneva, in Switzerland, and his father is the most famous doctor in Geneva. He discovered the secret that how to created life. He trying to create life in his own house. At a night, he created life, but that man looks like a monster, it is so ugly that nobody wants to be his friends, so the monster was revenged on Frankenstein. He killed Frankenstein's brother and wife. At last, Frankenstein and the monster are disappeared from the ice and snow to end his own life.
Frankenstein is a science fiction movie. In my point of view, the monster is a nice person, but nobody wants to make friends with him, so he was very angry.

Corrected essay:
Frankenstein is a film that was directed by Kenneth Branagh. The two main characters are Robert De Niro, who played the monster, and Kenneth Branagh, who played Frankenstein.
Frankenstein is a young scientist from Geneva, Switzerland, and his father is the most famous doctor in Geneva. He discovered the secret of how to create life. He tried to create life in his own house. One night, he created a life, but that man looked like a monster. It was so ugly that nobody wanted to be its friend, so the monster revenged itself on Frankenstein. He killed Frankenstein's brother and wife. At last, Frankenstein and the monster disappeared from the ice and snow to end their own lives.
Frankenstein is a science fiction movie. In my point of view, the monster is a nice person, but nobody wants to make friends with him, so he is very angry.