Writing prompt: Healthy Eating Survey

Student essay:
A lot of hamburgers and ice cream are unhealthy food.Noodles,meat,rice,vegetables and fruit are healthy food but too much meat is not good for children.Cola is a unhealthy drink.Water,milk,juice,tea are healthy drink.Is your food and drink healthy?
What about you?

Corrected essay:
A lot of hamburgers and ice cream are unhealthy food. Noodles, meat, rice, vegetables and fruit are healthy food, but too much meat is not good for children. Cola is an unhealthy drink. Water, milk, juice and tea are healthy drinks. Are your food and drink healthy?
What about you?