Writing prompt: My New Teachers

Student essay:
After three weeks of school,I have more feeling about my teachers.Now let me intrduse them for you.
Mrs Wang is our Chinese teacher. My first impression of her is strict.But to my surised,she is very kind and energtic.She usually wave her hands when she feel excited.I don't think I will be bored in her class!But sometimes,she feeels angry with our homework.,because our always make some stupid mistakes.
The teacher is my first know is Mrs Bai.She is our math teacher, but also is our classleader.She is very kind and panitent.But when she serious,nobody dare to say a word unless she asks us to.Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well organised and clear.We all like her very much.I think I 'll do well in the exam with Mrs Bai teaching me.

Corrected essay:
After three weeks of school, I have more feelings about my teachers. Now let me introduce them to you.
Mrs. Wang is our Chinese teacher. My first impression of her is strictness. But to my surprise, she is very kind and energetic. She usually waves her hands when she feels excited. I don't think I will be bored in her class! But sometimes, she feels angry with our homework, because we always make some stupid mistakes.
The teacher I first get to know is Mrs. Bai. She is our math teacher, but also our class leader. She is very kind and patient. But when she is serious, nobody dares to say a word unless she asks us to. Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well-organised and clear. We all like her very much. I think I'll do well in the exam with Mrs. Bai teaching me.