Writing prompt: Job Offers

Student essay:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a sales staff.
Usually,I like reading books and browsing imformations from Internet.I have a lively and cheerful character.
I can care about people and other things around me.And I can get along with friends and relatives.Especially,I can understand and respect other people.I have full confudince foe life.I was able to overcome the difficults and positive in my work.I love the work.I think sales staff is a right choose.I believe I can do it well.
I am look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely.
Han Yu

Corrected essay:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to respond to your advertisement for a temporary position as a sales staff.
Usually, I like reading books and browsing information on the Internet. I have a lively and cheerful character.
I care about people and other things around me. And I can get along with friends and relatives. Especially, I can understand and respect other people. I have full confidence in life. I am able to overcome difficulties and stay positive in my work. I love the work. I think sales staff is the right choice. I believe I can do it well.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Han Yu