Writing prompt: Wisdom Is the Most Important

Student essay:
Among wisdom, money, truth, right and beauty, I believe that wisdom is the most important one.
There must be something that can't be bought with money, but I can earn it by my wisdom. With my wisdom, I can acquire how the truth comes from. If I'm stupid, I may even don't know how to use my right. And beauty, it's really not useful. People will become old and their looking will fade, but wisdom will not decrease. Sometimes, the older the person is, the wiser he is.
Someone may say:"The most innocent one is the happiest." I don't think so. I know why the world has day and night, why there are seasons, and how human became the most intelligent creature. I'm happy because of my wisdom.
All in all, it is wisdom that will be with us for whole life.

Corrected essay:
Among wisdom, money, truth, right and beauty, I believe that wisdom is the most important one.
There must be something that can't be bought with money, but I can earn it with my wisdom. With my wisdom, I can understand where the truth comes from. If I'm stupid, I may not even know how to use my rights. And beauty is really not useful. People will become old and their looks will fade, but wisdom will not decrease. Sometimes, the older a person is, the wiser they are.
Someone may say, "The most innocent one is the happiest." I don't think so. I know why the world has day and night, why there are seasons, and how humans became the most intelligent creatures. I'm happy because of my wisdom.
All in all, it is wisdom that will be with us for our whole life.