Writing prompt: Beijing

Student essay:
Hongxing Farm provides major supplies of fruits and vegetables to our school's restaurant.Hongxin Farm, located in the place of about 50 km from my school, covers an area of 130 acres.It is not far from our school.So, it can be more convenient for us to fetch the food from Hongxing to our school.In this way, we can taste fresher food.It produces many kinds of organic vegetables as well as organic fruits.Such as cucumbers, Chinese cabbages, carrots, pears and watermelons.Especially, apples are provided all through the year.It tastes extra sweet.
Some of you may ask why they are so good.It is using organic farming, technology and no fertilizer that makes it possible to produce better products.
Thanks to the supply of Hongxing Farm, we enjoy the food and grow healthy.Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Corrected essay:
Hongxing Farm provides major supplies of fruits and vegetables to our school's restaurant. Hongxing Farm, located about 50 km from my school, covers an area of 130 acres. It is not far from our school. So, it can be more convenient for us to fetch the food from Hongxing to our school. In this way, we can taste fresher food. It produces many kinds of organic vegetables as well as organic fruits, such as cucumbers, Chinese cabbages, carrots, pears and watermelons. Especially, apples are provided all through the year. They taste extra sweet.
Some of you may ask why they are so good. Its use of organic farming technology and no fertilizer makes it possible to produce better products.
Thanks to the supply of Hongxing Farm, we enjoy the food and grow healthy. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.