Writing prompt: What Is a Good Teacher?

Student essay:
To be a good teacher,you should rich in knowledge to teach student clear and organised.If you want
to give students a good impression,you must be kind and patient with them.Most students like an
active class,so that teacher should be amusing and interesting.You should take care about the students
in case they have any situation or problem.
But,a good teacher also must pay attention to something about tesching.You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes,you should answer questions until everyone understands.Test is very
improtant,but you must'n give students too much pressure with it.

Corrected essay:
To be a good teacher, you should be rich in knowledge to teach students clearly and in an organized way. If you want
to give students a good impression, you must be kind and patient with them. Most students like an
active class, so the teacher should be amusing and interesting. You should take care of the students
in case they have any situation or problem.
But, a good teacher must also pay attention to something about teaching. You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes. You should answer questions until everyone understands. Tests are very important, but you mustn't give students too much pressure with them.