Writing prompt: Parrots Make the Best Pets

Student essay:
I think that parrots make the best pets. Parrots is beautiful and colorful.
First, parrots can live for up to 50 years. It is easy for us to keep the parrots. Parrots is fed by us 2 times a day.
Second, it is easy for parrots to respond our feelings. For example, they usually make us happy when we look sad.
Third, parrots are also clever, as a result, they can speak for us if we change them. They can speak a short sentence, such as, "hello", "thanks"and so on. Sometimes they sing a song too.
In my opinion, parrots are not only our pets, but also our good friends. What's more, we should take good care of parrots until they die.
What wonderful pets parrots are!

Corrected essay:
I think that parrots make the best pets. Parrots are beautiful and colorful.
First, parrots can live for up to 50 years. It is easy for us to keep the parrots. Parrots are fed by us 2 times a day. Second, it is easy for parrots to respond to our feelings. For example, they usually make us happy when we look sad.
Third, parrots are also clever. As a result, they can speak for us if we train them. They can speak short sentences, such as "hello," "thanks" and so on. Sometimes they sing a song too.
In my opinion, parrots are not only our pets, but also our good friends. What's more, we should take good care of parrots until they die.
What wonderful pets parrots are!