Writing prompt: Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?

Student essay:
Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.In my opinion,i l rather see a movie than read a book.
As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.Firstly, its waste time that we read a book in one day ,especially in the holiday.Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.
At the last ,it is important that to make a book adapt to a film. We can stay at home reading quietly a situation in my holiday.

Corrected essay:
Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book. In my opinion, I would rather see a movie than read a book.
As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book. Firstly, it wastes time to read a book in one day, especially during the holidays. Secondly, seeing a movie is more interesting than reading a book. Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.
Lastly, it is important to adapt a book into a film. I can stay at home and read quietly during my holiday.