Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
My dreaming destination in Europe is Switerland which belongs to central European area.It covers a area of forty-one square metres.On the other hand,it has a tiny population of 7,500 thousand people.Berne is the capital city of the country.What's more,Geneva is also a famous city.
Switerland is a so tiny a country that there are many other countries are next to it.For example,Austria,France,Italy and Germany are its neighbouring countries.Otherwise, they have wonderful soccer teams in common.
If you can take a visit to Switerland,I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery.It's known as "Worldwide Garden".Its chemistrcal,watch and food indusry is developed of the world,too.

Corrected essay:
My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland which belongs to the central European area. It covers an area of forty-one square metres. On the other hand, it has a tiny population of 7,500 thousand people. Berne is the capital city of the country. What's more, Geneva is also a famous city.
Switzerland is such a tiny country that many other countries are next to it. For example, Austria, France, Italy and Germany are its neighbouring countries. Otherwise, they have wonderful soccer teams in common.
If you can take a visit to Switzerland, I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery. It's known as the "Worldwide Garden." Its chemical, watch and food industry is developed in the world, too.