Writing prompt: Will E-book Be Necessary in the Future?

Student essay:
Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and wildly used in everyday life.Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books.
Compared with the traditional book,the e-books seem to have lots of advantages.First of all,e-books are very easy to travel with.Secondly,e-books with large capacity is very suitable for modern life.The last but not least,e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books.What's more,some e-books are free.
However,we can't deny that the e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed.What is more,although the technology is invented recently,there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology.In addition,reading e-books for long time can affect people's vision seriously.
In my opinion,I prefer to read traditional books. I enjoy the feeling that carry a book and smell the sweet smell of the ink.This romantic feelings cannot be provided by e-books.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and widely used in everyday life. Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books. Compared with traditional books, e-books seem to have lots of advantages. First of all, e-books are very easy to travel with. Secondly, e-books with large capacity are very suitable for modern life. Last but not least, e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books. What's more, some e-books are free.
However, we can't deny that e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed. What is more, although the technology was invented recently, there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology. In addition, reading e-books for a long time can affect people's vision seriously.
In my opinion, I prefer to read traditional books. I enjoy the feeling of carrying a book and smelling the sweet smell of the ink. This romantic feeling cannot be provided by e-books.