Writing prompt: An Introduction to Hainan

Student essay:
Hainan is in the south of China.It is the second largest island in China and it's very beautiful.Hainan is famous for its blue sky,fresh air and sea.It's warm in winter that many tours set come here in winter.There are many scenery in it,such as Wuzhi mountain,Wanquan river and so on.And Hainan is surrounded by the sea.So the Hainan's seafood is very famous.The fruits in Hainan almost tropicana fruits,example coconuts,bananas,pineapples.They are all very delicious.
If you come to Hainan you'll feel people in Hainan are in a very friendly way.Hainan is very beautiful so it's a great place to travel.

Corrected essay:
Hainan is in the south of China. It is the second largest island in China and it's very beautiful. Hainan is famous for its blue sky, fresh air and sea. It's so warm in winter that many tourists come here in winter. There are many sceneries in it, such as Wuzhi Mountain, Wanquan River and so on. And Hainan is surrounded by the sea. So Hainan's seafood is very famous. The fruits in Hainan are mostly tropical fruits, for example, coconuts, bananas and pineapples. They are all very delicious.
If you come to Hainan, you'll feel that people in Hainan are very friendly. Hainan is very beautiful so it's a great place to travel.