Writing prompt: Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?

Student essay:
Book and film is very popular at once. It is a well known fact that most of the people prefer film which is interesting and the fastest way to understand a story . But I don't consider film is the best way to understand a story in dept. The original work has more details and sentences are very gracefully, you can imagine by yourself. On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.So I think reading is what I prefer.

Corrected essay:
Books and films are both very popular. It is a well-known fact that most people prefer films, which are interesting and the fastest way to understand a story. But I don't consider films the best way to understand a story in depth. The original work has more details, and the sentences are very graceful; you can imagine by yourself. On the other hand, you can read it everywhere and anytime you want. Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again. So I think reading is what I prefer.