Writing prompt: Highlights of My High School

Student essay:
I'm proud of my class and I get on well with my classmates and I admire each teacher who teaches us. My classmates are friendly. They enjoy helping others and they love studying. The teachers in my class are responsible and they often help us with our study in their spare time. We are very grateful.
In the school, we take lessons in a relaxing way. During class we are given time to discuss questions with others. Our teacher believes that it's helpful for us to think independently, and it works well. After the class we have various activities, we usually run in the playground, and boys like to play basketball more.
I love my class and I will never forget the life there.

Corrected essay:
I'm proud of my class and I get on well with my classmates and I admire each teacher who teaches us. My classmates are friendly. They enjoy helping others and they love studying. The teachers in my class are responsible and they often help us with our study in their spare time. We are very grateful.
In the school, we take lessons in a relaxed way. During class we are given time to discuss questions with others. Our teacher believes that it's helpful for us to think independently, and it works well. After the class we have various activities. We usually run in the playground, and boys like to play basketball more.
I love my class and I will never forget the life there.