Writing prompt: My Favorite Sport

Student essay:
It is quite important for us to do some exercise. And now, person take part in a lot of sports. Such as running jumping and swimming. My favourite sport is playing tennis.
I often play tennis on sundays when I am free. Sometimes I play with my friends after school. Sometimes we play in the tennis club. When I play tennis, I feel happy and relax. It also makes me healthier and taller. I hope some of you can play with me!

Corrected essay:
It is quite important for us to do some exercise. And now, people take part in a lot of sports, such as running, jumping and swimming. My favourite sport is playing tennis.
I often play tennis on Sundays when I am free. Sometimes I play with my friends after school. Sometimes we play in the tennis club. When I play tennis, I feel happy and relaxed. It also makes me healthier and taller. I hope some of you can play with me!