Writing prompt: A Review of Frankenstein

Student essay:
Last week, our class saw a movie called Frankenstein. It is very interesting.
It's an American movie directed by Steph Lady. The movie starred Helena Bonham Carter, Kenneth Branagh and Aidan Quinn.The film tells the story about a young chemist created a large and ugly monster, because it's very ugly, the monster isn't accepted by people.Then,the monster started to get Frankenstein,and killed all his families and loved ones.
Frankenstein very popular.It has brought millions of dollars,although the film crew had died,the monster is still active on the screen.
In general, this is a very interesting movie to watch.

Corrected essay:
Last week, our class saw a movie called Frankenstein. It is very interesting.
It's an American movie directed by Steph Lady. The movie starred Helena Bonham Carter, Kenneth Branagh and Aidan Quinn. The film tells the story of a young chemist who created a large and ugly monster. Because it was very ugly, the monster wasn't accepted by people. Then, the monster started to get revenge on Frankenstein, and killed all his family and loved ones.
Frankenstein was very popular. It brought in millions of dollars. Although the film crew has died, the monster is still active on the screen.
In general, this is a very interesting movie to watch.