Writing prompt: Love around Me

Student essay:
lt's not surprising that there is much love around me.My parents always stand by my side when l am in trouble,and then encourage me to be more confident to solve these problems.When l get love from them,l feel happy and warm.Therefore,l will help them to do housework or respect them to return their love.l love my parents.

Corrected essay:
It's not surprising that there is much love around me. My parents always stand by my side when I am in trouble, and then encourage me to be more confident to solve these problems. When I get love from them, I feel happy and warm. Therefore, I will help them to do housework or respect them to return their love. I love my parents.