Writing prompt: My Weekend

Student essay:
I had a very interesting weekend. When I got up at 8:00,my mother was doing chores. I helped my mother to sweep the floor and clean the living room. I was very tired. Then,I was doing the dishes and washing the clothes while I was listening to the music. I cooked at kitchen. I was very happy. At the afternoon,I folded the clothes and watered the flowers. I was very happy and tired. In the evening,I cooked for my family. They were very happy. This was my weekend.

Corrected essay:
I had a very interesting weekend. When I got up at 8:00, my mother was doing chores. I helped my mother to sweep the floor and clean the living room. I was very tired. Then, I did the dishes and washed the clothes while I was listening to music. I cooked in the kitchen. I was very happy. In the afternoon, I folded the clothes and watered the flowers. I was very happy and tired. In the evening, I cooked for my family. They were very happy. This was my weekend.