Writing prompt: A Book Review of The Lost World

Student essay:
One of my favourite great books is The Lost World, by Arthur Conan Doyle. The story was set in London and Amazon, in the Great Britain and South America, in the nineteenth century. It tells an exciting story between a reporter, two professors and an explorer in Amazon.
Malone, the hero of the book, is a junior reporter who wanted to report a scoop of the century. When he heard that Professor Challenger had found prehistoric creatures still survive in Amazon, he joined the group to the Amonzon, include professor Challenger, the thin professor Summerlee and the expert explorer Lord John. They go deep in the Amazon and found the creatures true exist. Then they went up to the plateau by making a bridge with a tree, but the two villagers pushed the tree into the chasm, s they do some explorers. One night, malone went in the forest alone, but when he came back, he found that their camp was smash and the others were all gone. Then he met Lord John and found out that they were caught by ape-man. At last, they went back to London and showed the egg to the people, but it flew away.
My favorite part of the book is on the first night, they found the creatures. Summerlee apologised to Professor Challenger that all this time he doubted Professor Challenger's word, and Challenger is telling the truth. Then Challenger accept his apology. The professors fight for the truth all the time, but when they found they are wrong, they apologised. The lost world is a great book. It is more than an adventure story. It describes an amazing lost world. It is written in everyday English. And the dialogues sound especially real. Today, it is still read and loved by people allover the world.

Corrected essay:
One of my favourite great books is The Lost World by Arthur Conan Doyle. The story is set in London and the Amazon, in Great Britain and South America, in the nineteenth century. It tells an exciting story about a reporter, two professors and an explorer in the Amazon.
Malone, the hero of the book, is a junior reporter who wanted to report a scoop of the century. When he heard that Professor Challenger had found prehistoric creatures still surviving in the Amazon, he joined the group to the Amazon, including Professor Challenger, the thin Professor Summerlee and the expert explorer Lord John. They went deep into the Amazon and found the creatures truly existed. Then they went up to the plateau by making a bridge with a tree, but the two villagers pushed the tree into the chasm, as they did to some explorers. One night, Malone went into the forest alone, but when he came back, he found that their camp was smashed and others were all gone. Then he met Lord John and found out that they were caught by ape-men. At last, they went back to London and showed the egg to the people, but it flew away.
My favorite part of the book is the first night when they found the creatures. Summerlee apologised to Professor Challenger because all this time he had doubted Professor Challenger's word, and Challenger was telling the truth. Then Challenger accepted his apology. The professors fight for the truth all the time, but when they find they are wrong, they apologise. The Lost World is a great book. It is more than an adventure story. It describes an amazing lost world. It is written in everyday English. And the dialogues sound especially real. Today, it is still read and loved by people all over the world.