Writing prompt: I Enjoy the Life in the Future

Student essay:
I always image what the future of the world is like. I think it will be an amazing world.
In the future, people's car maybe can go to the sea, or fly in the sky. The house will "Green and smart", for example, when you are tired, it will turn off the light and play music, make you go to sleep in a faster way. When you feel boring, it will give some choice to make happy. If you don't know how to do a thing, it will give you some reasons to you.
There maybe no telephone in the future. When you want to talk with others, you can just call his/her name then he/she can hear your voice.
The world in future will be wonderful. I will very enjoy the life in the future.

Corrected essay:
I always imagine what the future of the world will be like. I think it will be an amazing world.
In the future, people's cars maybe can go to the sea, or fly in the sky. The house will be "green and smart." For example, when you are tired, it will turn off the light and play music to help you fall asleep in a faster way. When you feel bored, it will give you some choices to make you happy. If you don't know how to do something, it will give you some suggestions.
There may be no telephones in the future. When you want to talk with others, you can just call his/her name. Then he/she can hear your voice.
The world in the future will be wonderful. I will really enjoy the life in the future.