Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
Swierland is an developed country which is located in the center of the Europe.Swierland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers.The population of Swierland is 7500000.The capital is Berne and it also has the city called Geneva which is famous aii over the world.
Swierland is situated next to Austriia,Fnance,Italy and Germany.Swizerland has a beautiful scenery.The sky is blue,the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river.So,people call Swizerland ''The Garden Of The World''.
Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.The economy is also well-developed.If you have the chance to Swierland,you will like it.

Corrected essay:
Switzerland is a developed country which is located in the center of Europe. Switzerland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers. The population of Switzerland is 7,500,000. The capital is Berne and it also has a city called Geneva which is famous all over the world.
Switzerland is situated next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany. Switzerland has beautiful scenery. The sky is blue, and the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river. So, people call Switzerland "The Garden of the World." Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food. The economy is also well-developed. If you have the chance to visit Switzerland, you will like it.