Writing prompt: Animals

Student essay:
Welcome to Beijing Zoo.The zoo has many kinds of animals,such as tigers,kangaroos,giraffes
pandas,elephants and camels.They come from different countries and they eat different food.
The tiger lives in Asia.It usually lives alone.It is strong and catches many kings of animals for food.The kangaroo is an Australian animal. It eats grass and leaves,but it doesn't eat meat.The giraffe
ilives Africa and eats leaves.The pandas come from China.Their favourite food is bamboo.The elephant
lives in Africa and in Asia.It eats plants ang a little fruit.The camel lives in the deserts of Africa ang Asia
and eats grass.

Corrected essay:
Welcome to Beijing Zoo. The zoo has many kinds of animals, such as tigers, kangaroos, giraffes, pandas, elephants and camels. They come from different countries and they eat different food.
The tiger lives in Asia. It usually lives alone. It is strong and catches many kinds of animals for food. The kangaroo is an Australian animal. It eats grass and leaves, but it doesn't eat meat. The giraffe lives in Africa and eats leaves. The pandas come from China. Their favourite food is bamboo. The elephant lives in Africa and in Asia. It eats plants and a little fruit. The camel lives in the deserts of Africa and Asia and eats grass.