Writing prompt: Reflections on Watching Paddington Bear

Student essay:
PADDINGTOM is a film. It revolves around a young bear, the cubs at London's Paddington station get lost, and then adopted by a good family.
First, in the film Paddingtom says"In London, everyone is different, but that means anyone can fit in. "is my most moving. Everyone is different. So we must do the best we can be. Will do our best and never give up. I will never be the same as others.
Second, the film also tells me a truth that personal and animals can live in peace. Paddingtom can be moved by Mr Brown to get rid of it.
Last but not least, we should care for animals, protect animals. It is the sacred duty of our human beings to cherish the life of animals and to treat the animals in friendship. The more animals we have, the more friends we have. As long as we live in this beautiful earth, the earth will become more colorful, full of vigor and vitality. As long as people and animals are friendly, our world is perfect and happy.

Corrected essay:
PADDINGTON is a film. It revolves around a young bear who gets lost at London's Paddington station, and is then adopted by a good family.
First, in the film Paddington says, "In London, everyone is different, but that means anyone can fit in." This is my most moving moment. Everyone is different. So we must do the best we can. We will do our best and never give up. I will never be the same as others.
Second, the film also tells me a truth that people and animals can live in peace. Paddington can be moved by Mr Brown to get rid of it.
Last but not least, we should care for animals and protect animals. It is the sacred duty of human beings to cherish the lives of animals and to treat the animals with friendship. The more animals we have, the more friends we have. As long as we live on this beautiful earth, the earth will become more colorful, and full of vigor and vitality. As long as people and animals are friendly, our world will be perfect and happy.