Writing prompt: My Favorite Place at School

Student essay:
There are many places in our school,for example:the playground,the experiment. But my favourite place at school is the classroom,classroom the place of study. We can learn a lot of knowledge,the classroom is the place where we are most often. So the classroom is my favourite place at school.

Corrected essay:
There are many places in our school, for example, the playground and the experiment room. But my favourite place at school is the classroom. The classroom is the place of study. We can learn a lot of knowledge. The classroom is the place where we are most often. So the classroom is my favourite place at school.