Writing prompt: When I Have a Different Opinion

Student essay:
Each one leaves, there are lines of its own. Each person has the motto of his own. We should face in a calm mood, when we face the problem that other people's opinion is different from yours. If you don't use appropriate methods to solve the problem, it will be more and more serious.
In my opinion, we should respect the opinion that the most people decided. This doesn't mean that we don't voice own opinion all the time. I consider that the minority is subordinate to the majority is the rule when our opinions are different in all ages. But we have the right to comment. The other people can refer to the opinion.
I consider that if we do like this, we will get along with other.

Corrected essay:
Each one leaves, and there are lines of their own. Each person has the motto of his own. We should face differences in opinion with a calm mood when we encounter problems where other people's opinions differ from ours. If you don't use appropriate methods to solve the problem, it will be more and more serious.
In my opinion, we should respect the opinion that most people decide on. This doesn't mean that we don't voice our own opinion all the time. I consider that the minority being subordinate to the majority is the rule when our opinions differ throughout all ages. But we have the right to comment, and other people can refer to our opinion.
I consider that if we do like this, we will get along with others.