Writing prompt: My Good Friend

Student essay:
This is my friend Bob. Thirteen biethday is today. Bob's favourite colour is green. Bob likes to play besketball after school. Bob's favourite season is spring. Because he likes flower and flying kites.

Corrected essay:
This is my friend Bob. His thirteenth birthday is today. Bob's favourite colour is green. Bob likes to play basketball after school. Bob's favourite season is spring, because he likes flowers and flying kites.