Writing prompt: Housework

Student essay:
Now lots of parents don't want their children to do housework,because they think that doing housework is not better than doing homework. But I don't think so,I think as a student we should do some housework for our parents. Let us talk about the advantages about doing housework.
First though doing homework can make us clever doing housework can make our body fit and healthy it is also very necessary for us isn't it? Besides,expect learning how to study well it's also sensible to know how to make our life better how to make ours feel happy. What is more. Doing housework can improve our independent ability. If parents leave you alone you will take care of yourself very well and your parents shouldn't worry about you too.It can ease the burden on your parents.
Put off your pencil and enjoy the happiness form housework now.You will love it.

Corrected essay:
Now lots of parents don't want their children to do housework, because they think that doing housework is not better than doing homework. But I don't think so. I think as a student we should do some housework for our parents. Let us talk about the advantages of doing housework.
First doing homework can make us clever, and doing housework can make our body fit and healthy. It is also very necessary for us, isn't it? Besides, in addition to learning how to study well, it's also sensible to know how to make our life better and how to make ourselves feel happy. What is more, doing housework can improve our independence ability. If your parents leave you alone, you will take good care of yourself and your parents won't worry about you too. It can ease the burden on your parents.
Put down your pencil and enjoy the happiness from housework now. You will love it.