Writing prompt: My History Teacher in Senior High School

Student essay:
The teacher who leave a deeply impression on me in my Senior High school is my history teacher .
On her class you will never fall asleep in.She explains very clearly that what has happened in the past ,and she organized exactly why it happened ,how it happened,and what was its influence to people at that time.Her lessons often begin with some stories or some questions which we need to think of and have a discussion.She awalys leaves us much more time on thinking than just reading the history books.
l lose myself during her class ,l can't help imgaining that I was the one who lived in those years long long before.The sights which were disappear in the history appear once more with the sound of my history teacher.
In a word,my history teacher is really a good teacher,and here,let me show my respect with her.

Corrected essay:
The teacher who leaves a deep impression on me in my Senior High school is my history teacher.
In her class you will never fall asleep. She explains very clearly what has happened in the past, and she organizes exactly why it happened, how it happened, and what its influence was on people at that time. Her lessons often begin with some stories or some questions which we need to think of and have a discussion. She always leaves us much more time for thinking than just reading the history books.
I lose myself during her class. I can't help imagining that I was the one who lived in those years long long before. The sights which disappeared in history appear once more with the sound of my history teacher.
In a word, my history teacher is really a good teacher, and here, let me show my respect for her.