Writing prompt: My English Teacher

Student essay:
People say that the first impressions are very important.My first impression of Mrs Yu was that she was full of experince and very patient. She is tall and thin and we all like her.
In English class ,we all listen to the teacher carefully .And after shool we do our homework carefully too .We hand in our homework on time .
Mrs Yu is very kind and patient.She explains English grammar so clarly that we can all remember the grammar clarly .She avoids making you fell so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class !
I like English very much .Ithink that with the help of Mrs Yu I can get great progress in English .

Corrected essay:
People say that first impressions are very important. My first impression of Mrs. Yu was that she was full of experience and very patient. She is tall and thin and we all like her.
In English class, we all listen to the teacher carefully. And after school we do our homework carefully too. We hand in our homework on time.
Mrs. Yu is very kind and patient. She explains English grammar so clearly that we can all remember the grammar clearly. She avoids making you feel so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class!
I like English very much. I think that with the help of Mrs. Yu I can make great progress in English.