Writing prompt: A Book Review of The Lost World

Student essay:
One of my favourite books is The Lost World, by the famous writer Arthur Conan Doyle.The story happens in London at first, but the characters start their real adventure the Amazon Rain forest, where full of mystery and danger.
It tells some breathtaking stories about a reporter named Malone, and his companions Summerlee and Challenger, the two professors.Also including a professional explorer named Lord. Four of them have different characters and different reasons for their journey. Malone is a junior reporter for the London Daily Gazette. He is so hot-head that he intends to do something crazier than giving report.Luckily, he gets a chance to do an interview on a scientific meeting, which is giving by Professor Challenger, who insists there is a lost world on the Earth.At last, Challenger decides to let Summerlee see the lost world by himself.That's how Malone gets another big chance to be famous.Lord also takes part in the group as an explorer.From then on, they are on the way to the lost world and begin the exploration.
My favourite part of the book is when the four of them stuck at the foot of the plateau.However, they need to climb up.So they have to discuss a way.Challenger finds that they can cut down a tree which grows at the edge of the cliff.Finally when they attain the top of the plateau, two villagers push the tree down and do not follow them anymore.
The Lost World is a great book.I read it for the first time when I was ten.It is not only an adventure story but also a philosophy book.Conan Doyle describes the types of dinosaurs and the unknown creatures.It shows people how they think about the magic nature world.It is full of professional knowledge of creature and science.It is even been act as an exciting and full of imagination of the adventures of exploring new things.It is still read by people all over the world and it is thought to be one of the greatest American stories.

Corrected essay:
One of my favourite books is The Lost World, by the famous writer Arthur Conan Doyle. The story happens in London at first, but the characters start their real adventure in the Amazon Rainforest, which is full of mystery and danger.
It tells some breathtaking stories about a reporter named Malone, and his companions Summerlee and Challenger, the two professors. Also, it includes a professional explorer named Lord. The four of them have different characters and different reasons for their journey. Malone is a junior reporter for the London Daily Gazette. He is so hot-headed that he intends to do something crazier than giving reports. Luckily, he gets a chance to do an interview at a scientific meeting, which is given by Professor Challenger, who insists there is a lost world on the Earth. At last, Challenger decides to let Summerlee see the lost world by himself. That's how Malone gets another big chance to be famous. Lord also takes part in the group as an explorer. From then on, they are on the way to the lost world and begin the exploration.
My favourite part of the book is when the four of them are stuck at the foot of the plateau. However, they need to climb up. So they have to discuss a way. Challenger finds that they can cut down a tree that grows at the edge of the cliff. Finally, when they attain the top of the plateau, two villagers push the tree down and do not follow them anymore.
The Lost World is a great book. I read it for the first time when I was ten. It is not only an adventure story but also a philosophy book. Conan Doyle describes the types of dinosaurs and the unknown creatures. It shows people how they think about the magical natural world. It is full of professional knowledge of creatures and science. It is even seen as an exciting and imaginative adventure of exploring new things. It is still read by people all over the world and it is thought to be one of the greatest American stories.