Writing prompt: About Examinations

Student essay:
Recently we have made an investigation on whether the test paper for Senior Three students should be difficult or not.
Some students think the test should be difficult. Because they like the test which has some chanllenge. So it is best which is too difficult. If the test will be difficult, you can know where is your weak link.
The other students think the test should be easy. Because if the best will be too difficult, you may be lose heart, and it is possible to fear the test. If the test will be easy, you can make a good grade, and it can increase your confidence.
I think the test should be difficult, because if that, you can know the distance for people or people.

Corrected essay:
Recently, we have made an investigation on whether the test paper for Senior Three students should be difficult or not.
Some students think the test should be difficult. Because they like the test which has some challenges. So it is best if it is difficult. If the test is difficult, you can know where your weak link is.
The other students think the test should be easy. Because if the test is too difficult, you may lose heart, and it is possible to fear the test. If the test is easy, you can make a good grade, and it can increase your confidence. I think the test should be difficult, because in that way, you can know the distance between yourself and others.