Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
I dream of I am a designer when I was a young.
Today my dream is come ture,I working in a company.I be good at work and get along with my workmates ,we having fun every day.I also having a beautiful house and big family,I having a car and I draving some place where is a peasful that I want to go .I will be study English and Franch,because l want to say mang langguges,and I want to travel around the world with my family.
I believe where there is a will ,there is a way.I hope this day coming early.

Corrected essay:
I dreamed of being a designer when I was young.
Today I am still working toward making my dream come true. I will work in a company. I will be good at my work and get along with my workmates. We will have fun every day. I will also have a beautiful house and a big family. I will have a car and I will drive to some peaceful places that I want to go. I will study English and French, because I want to speak many languages, and I want to travel around the world with my family.
I believe where there is a will, there is a way. I hope this day will come soon.