Writing prompt: Honesty is the Best Policy

Student essay:
As we can see in the picture,a butcher has sold some meat to a woman who has paid a false 100-yuan.But the woman do not know the meat is watering.
In fact, if we are honest to others,they will be honest to us in return.In turn,they will lie to us.Also,if you are dishonest,it is impossible for you to gain other people's trust.Nobody will want to be friend or do business with you.As a result, you will have no chance to succeed and will die alone.
On the other hand,people will trust you and think highly of you.If you are honest, people will be willing to get alone with you and they will show more respect to you.And you will feel your life becomes easier and happier.
So,in any case,we should remember that honest is the Best Policy.

Corrected essay:
As we can see in the picture, a butcher has sold some meat to a woman who has paid with a false 100-yuan note. But the woman does not know the meat is watered.
In fact, if we are honest with others, they will be honest with us in return. In turn, they will not lie to us. Also, if you are dishonest, it is impossible for you to gain other people's trust. Nobody will want to be your friend or do business with you. As a result, you will have no chance to succeed and will die alone.
On the other hand, people will trust you and think highly of you. If you are honest, people will be willing to get along with you and they will show more respect to you. And you will feel your life becomes easier and happier.
So, in any case, we should remember that honesty is the Best Policy.