Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
I have a big and nice room. I am tidy. There is a table in my room. The table is near the window. There are some books on the table. And there are some pictures on the wall. They are very beautiful,. And there is a bad near the wall. There is a computer near the table. The armchair is near table. I love my room. What about your room.

Corrected essay:
I have a big and nice room. It is tidy. There is a table in my room. The table is near the window. There are some books on the table. And there are some pictures on the wall. They are very beautiful. And there is a bed near the wall. There is a computer near the table. The armchair is near the table. I love my room. What about your room?