Writing prompt: Make the World Better

Student essay:
WHAT CAN MAKE THE WORLD BETTER?
More people want to know this question:what can make our world better, how should we do?
I think love can make our world better:because love can make the light not seems so far away. Love can make the children will not alone any more.
Love belongs to anyone in this world. Love is a gift from the God. When we were born we have the love from our family.Maybe sometime you do not understand how much other love you.
But please look around this world. Someone sacrifice their live to save another. Their love can help many persons get warm.
We stay strong because of the love. We have been broken but because of love, araise again.
All this is because of love.
IF WE GIVE OUR LOVE TO SOMEONE, MABY THE LOVE WILL CHANGE TO HOPE FOR THIS WORLD.
Love is where heart is
SO OPEN YOUR HEART TO LOVE. USE YOUR LOVE TO MAKE THE WOLRD BETTER.

Corrected essay:
What can make the world better?
More people want to know this question: What can make our world better, and how should we do it?
I think love can make our world better, because love can make the light not seem so far away. Love can make the children not alone any more.
Love belongs to anyone in this world. Love is a gift from God. When we are born we have the love from our family. Maybe sometimes you do not understand how much others love you.
But please look around this world. Someone sacrifices their life to save another. Their love can help many people get warm.
We stay strong because of love. We have been broken but because of love, we arise again.
All this is because of love.
If we give our love to someone, maybe the love will change to hope for this world.
Love is where the heart is.
So open your heart to love. Use your love to make the world better.