Writing prompt: Reading Is as Important as Doing

Student essay:
In my opinion,it is really useful for us to learn by reading books.So I always do some reading in my spare time.Let me tell you the reasons.
When I read a interesting story book, I can feel more calm and relaxed.All kinds of books have different styles,but whenever you often benefit from them easily.Reading can not only open our minds but also make many friends by joining clubs.On the other hand,if we only practise without reading,that is not fun. Above all,the best way of learning is reading books and doing a lot of practice.
I would like to suggest that everyone should keep reading and practising more in order to study better.

Corrected essay:
In my opinion, it is really useful for us to learn by reading books. So I always do some reading in my spare time. Let me tell you the reasons.
When I read an interesting storybook, I can feel more calm and relaxed. All kinds of books have different styles, but you often benefit from them easily. Reading can not only open our minds but also help us make many friends by joining clubs. On the other hand, if we only practise without reading, that is not fun. Above all, the best way of learning is reading books and doing a lot of practice.
I would like to suggest that everyone should keep reading and practising more in order to study better.