Writing prompt: Should High School Students Get Online Frequently?

Student essay:
Some people think that do not help parents do housework but i think we should help parents do the housework ,parents work every day after a very hard to go home to cook,so we should try to help parents do more housework do not let parents involved.Parents will be very tired after work,so we help them to take some of the housework will make them feel very happy,to help parents work can also cultivate our ability. So i think teenagers should help parents do some housework.

Corrected essay:
Some people think that teenagers should not help parents do housework but I think we should help parents do the housework. Parents work hard every day and after a day go home to cook, so we should try to help parents do more housework and not let parents get involved. Parents will be very tired after work, so we help them to do some of the housework and this will make them feel very happy. To help parents with housework can also cultivate our abilities. So I think teenagers should help parents do some housework.