Writing prompt: My Best Friend

Student essay:
Wang Lingling's best friend is Liu Lili.They are different.She is as tall as Liu Lili.They both have straight hair,nonetheless Wang Lingling has longer hair than Liu Lili.Liu Lili likes sports,nevertheless Wang Lingling enjoys reading.They are both outgoing and popular.So many kids like to make friends with them.Liu Lili likes laugh and makes jokes.She is funnier than Wang Lingling.At school,Wang Lingling is more hard-working than Liu Lili.But Liu Lili is smarter than Wang Lingling.

Corrected essay:
Wang Lingling's best friend is Liu Lili. They are different. She is as tall as Liu Lili. They both have straight hair, nonetheless, Wang Lingling has longer hair than Liu Lili. Liu Lili likes sports, nevertheless, Wang Lingling enjoys reading. They are both outgoing and popular. So many kids like to make friends with them. Liu Lili likes laughing and making jokes. She is funnier than Wang Lingling. At school, Wang Lingling is more hard-working than Liu Lili. But Liu Lili is smarter than Wang Lingling.