Writing prompt: My Free Time

Student essay:
My free time
Hello,i am james.I am 14 years old.I like playing basketball,reading books,watching TV and so on.In my free time,I like donging housework and playing games.I usually go hiking with my parents.We always have a good time. Sometiames,i play the piano and go fishing with my brothers. In my school free time.I often play games with my good friends.This is my free time.What about you?Can you tell me,please?

Corrected essay:
My free time
Hello, I am James. I am 14 years old. I like playing basketball, reading books, watching TV and so on. In my free time, I like doing housework and playing games. I usually go hiking with my parents. We always have a good time. Sometimes, I play the piano and go fishing with my brothers. In my school free time, I often play games with my good friends. This is my free time. What about yours? Can you tell me, please?