Writing prompt: My New Teachers

Student essay:
My new English teacher is a very kind person. She's gentle and beautiful. She always smile to us and never get angry with us. Her classes are so interesting and lively that I enjoy them very much. My homework always be correct carefully. She tried many ways to improve our English basic skills. For example, she allow us to memorize the lessons in 'New Concept English'. She also exercise our speaking in the class, tell us how to pronounce purely. Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct. If I have any problems in study, she will teach me patiently. Her attitude in teaching was arousing my interests in English. We all like her very much.

Corrected essay:
My new English teacher is a very kind person. She's gentle and beautiful. She always smiles to us and never gets angry with us. Her classes are so interesting and lively that I enjoy them very much. My homework is always corrected carefully. She tries many ways to improve our English basic skills. For example, she allows us to memorize the lessons in "New Concept English". She also exercises our speaking in the class and tells us how to pronounce purely. Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them. If I have any problems in study, she teaches me patiently. Her attitude in teaching is arousing my interest in English. We all like her very much.