Writing prompt: School Day

Student essay:
I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After a quick breakfast, I go to school on foot. It takes us more than 10 minutes to get there. We have four hours classes in the morning. I have luch at school with my classmates the food is really delicious . After five classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our classroom. I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I do my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can watch TV for half an hour. I go to bed at half past nine or ten.

Corrected essay:
I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After a quick breakfast, I go to school on foot. It takes me more than 10 minutes to get there. We have four hours of classes in the morning. I have lunch at school with my classmates. The food is really delicious. After five classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our classroom. I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I do my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can watch TV for half an hour. I go to bed at half past nine or ten.