Writing prompt: Ten Years Later

Student essay:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I like learning English very much and I also love teaching children,so maybe I will be an English teacher.Maybe I will say goodbye to my single life and marry a girl,or still be single.Maybe I will still love Taylor Swift,a singer from America.Maybe I will love cooking and exercising.Perhaps I will move to Shanghai,or even Newyork or London.I think my life will be very wonderful and interesting.Hope that day will be good and hopeful.

Corrected essay:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I like learning English very much and I also love teaching children, so maybe I will be an English teacher. Maybe I will say goodbye to my single life and marry a girl, or still be single. Maybe I will still love Taylor Swift, a singer from America. Maybe I will love cooking and exercising. Perhaps I will move to Shanghai, or even New York or London. I think my life will be very wonderful and interesting. I hope that day will be good and hopeful.