Writing prompt: What Is a Good Teacher?

Student essay:
A good teacher are very important to children.I think a good teacher should king and patient.She avoids making you feel stupid!And making mistakes she just smiles.Teaching is so well organised and clear.And students liking her.A good teacher can take care of students and students will grow up healthily and happily.Students going to make gropress with her.

Corrected essay:
A good teacher is very important to children. I think a good teacher should be kind and patient. She avoids making you feel stupid! And when you make mistakes, she just smiles. Her teaching is so well-organised and clear. And students like her. A good teacher can take care of students and students will grow up healthily and happily. Students are going to make progress with her.