Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
Today,I will introduce Switzerland,which is my dreaming destination in Europe.
Switzerland is in the middle of Europe,next to Austria,France,Italy and Germany.
The capital of Switzerland is Berne.Geneva,the famous city in the world,is in Switzerland,too.
Switzerland is famous for its scene and it is called the garden of the world.The flowers are everywhere and the air is clean.Millions of people visit Switzerland every year.The watches of Switzerland are nice,too.They are very expensive but popular among the rich.Switzerland's chemistry is developed and food is delicious.It's also the reason why I like it.

Corrected essay:
Today, I will introduce Switzerland, which is my dreaming destination in Europe.
Switzerland is in the middle of Europe, next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
The capital of Switzerland is Berne. Geneva, the famous city in the world, is in Switzerland, too.
Switzerland is famous for its scenery and it is called the garden of the world. The flowers are everywhere and the air is clean. Millions of people visit Switzerland every year. The watches of Switzerland are nice, too. They are very expensive but popular among the rich. Switzerland's chemistry is developed and its food is delicious. It's also the reason why I like it.