Writing prompt: My Favorite Sport

Student essay:
Doing sports is very important in our daily life. It can make us stay healthy and fit.
My favorite sport is running. I often run around my home in the morning. I run about half an hour and then go back home.
Running makes my brain clear so that I can do well at school. The most important reason I choose running as my favorite sport is to keep fit. Although I may feel a little bit tired after running,I still enjoy it a lot.
Running has helped me a lot and I will keep on doing it.

Corrected essay:
Doing sports is very important in our daily life. It can make us stay healthy and fit.
My favorite sport is running. I often run around my home in the morning. I run for about half an hour and then go back home.
Running makes my brain clear so that I can do well at school. The most important reason I choose running as my favorite sport is to keep fit. Although I may feel a little bit tired after running, I still enjoy it a lot.
Running has helped me a lot and I will keep on doing it.