Writing prompt: How to Learn Chinese Well?

Student essay:
Hi peter I am lihua.
There are some advices. The can help you learn to chinese well .
First you can attend chinese class. You should watch chinese books and magazines and watch tv in english .
You have to make friend in china this is most important thing .
Yes you should sing chinese songs everday . Tt's help you learn chinese well
I hope you make great progress in the study chinese
Wating for you letter.

Corrected essay:
Hi Peter,
I am Li Hua.
There are some advices. They can help you learn Chinese well.
First, you can attend a Chinese class. You should watch Chinese books and magazines and watch TV in Chinese.
You have to make friends in China and this is the most important thing.
Yes, you should sing Chinese songs everyday. It helps you learn Chinese well.
I hope you make great progress in studying Chinese.
Waiting for your letter.