Writing prompt: How to Remember English New Words?

Student essay:
Dear Wang Li
I am glad you can learn English.It is not difficult to learn English.I will tell you some advice about how to remember the new words.
First of all,you should listen to the new words in the morning.Then,you can try to speak the new words aloud every day as much as possible.Finally,you need to write down 4 or 5 times in the paper.
In a word,English is very interesting.I believe you will like it.I hope these suggestions can help you!

Corrected essay:
Dear Wang Li,
I am glad you can learn English. It is not difficult to learn English. I will tell you some advice about how to remember the new words.
First of all, you should listen to the new words in the morning. Then, you can try to speak the new words aloud every day as much as possible. Finally, you need to write them down 4 or 5 times on the paper.
In a word, English is very interesting. I believe you will like it. I hope these suggestions can help you!