Writing prompt: My Hero

Student essay:
Liu Wei is my hero, who have no arms,but ca play the piano.
He has a very very special experience. He lost his arms when he was only ten years old. He wants to be a piano player. After so much hard work,he finally managed to use his feet play on the piano, he successfully in the stage of" China' Got Talent". "Music is like water and air to me,"he said."I can't live without it."
Whatever he does,he never gives up because he has an amazing strong will.If I can encourage just person, then my job is this life is done. I tell my friends to keep on getting up when they full and to always love themselves.I will try my best to realize my dream

Corrected essay:
Liu Wei is my hero, who has no arms but can play the piano.
He has a very very special experience. He lost his arms when he was only ten years old. He wants to be a piano player. After so much hard work, he finally managed to use his feet to play the piano, and he succeeded on the stage of "China's Got Talent." "Music is like water and air to me," he said, "I can't live without it." Whatever he does, he never gives up because he has an amazingly strong will. If I can encourage just one person, then my job in this life is done. I tell my friends to keep on getting up when they fall and to always love themselves. I will try my best to realize my dream.