Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
I live in China.To the northwest of my hometown.There is a beautiful and developed country---Switzerland.It is situated in the middle part of the Europe.It is a big country with a population of 7500000 people and a area of 41000 square kilometers.I have ever visited its capital Beme and famous city Geneva.Both of their scenery are very beautiful.I think that this country is more attractive than its neighbor countrys---Austria,France,Italy and Germany.It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland"the garden of the world".But I don't think so.I think it is the heaven of the world.Before I left Switzerland.I bought many watches and food there as gifts to my friends.Because the watch and food industry of Switzerland is as famous as its chemical industry.Through my description,do you want to visit this country.If you ant,don't wait,just go.

Corrected essay:
I live in China. To the northwest of my hometown, there is a beautiful and developed country—Switzerland. It is situated in the middle part of Europe. It is a big country with a population of 7,500,000 and an area of 41,000 square kilometers. I have ever visited its capital Bern and the famous city Geneva. The scene in both cities is very beautiful. I think that this country is more attractive than its neighboring countries—Austria, France, Italy and Germany. It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland "the garden of the world". But I don't think so. I think it is the heaven of the world. Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry. Through my description, do you want to visit this country? If you want, don't wait and just go.