Writing prompt: Merry Christmas

Student essay:
Christmas Eve day before christmas day in 24 December. A long sock which children leave out when they go to bed on Christmas Eve. So that it can be filled with present. Christmas needs Christmas Trees. Of course, An EVERGREEN tree, or an artificial tree that looks similar, that people cover with decorations and coloured lights and in their homes or outside at Christmas. People put up the decorations and the tree and started to feel Christmassy at last. Christmas pudding, a hot PUDDING like fruit cakes, traditionally eaten in Britain at Christmas. Christmas cake, fruit cake covered with MARZIPAN and ICING, traditionally eaten in British at christmas. I think you will be given Christmas Box

Corrected essay:
Christmas Eve is the day before Christmas Day, on 24 December. A long sock is left out by children when they go to bed on Christmas Eve so that it can be filled with presents. Christmas needs Christmas trees. Of course, an evergreen tree and an artificial tree look similar and people cover them with decorations and coloured lights in their homes or outside at Christmas. People put up the decorations and the tree and start to feel Christmassy at last. Christmas pudding, a hot pudding-like fruit cake, is traditionally eaten in Britain at Christmas. Christmas cake, a fruit cake covered with marzipan and icing, is traditionally eaten in Britain at Christmas. I think you will be given a Christmas box.