Writing prompt: My Room

Student essay:
My bedroom is small but it is tidy.My books and dictionaries are in my bookcase.My schoolbag is on the chair.My ping pong bats are on the desk.My football is under the bed.My pencil box and notebook are in my schoolbag.A clock is on the wall.I love my room.

Corrected essay:
My bedroom is small but it is tidy. My books and dictionaries are in my bookcase. My schoolbag is on the chair. My ping pong bats are on the desk. My football is under the bed. My pencil box and notebook are in my schoolbag. A clock is on the wall. I love my room.