Writing prompt: Honesty is the Best Policy

Student essay:
As we can see in the picture,a butcher has sold meat to a woman. Both of them felt happy,because the man sold out the meat with lots of water,while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.
It is vividly shown that dishonest people never get a good result. Trick other people to create some good things for oneself are selfish and can not forgive. People who are dishonest always think about self. Noboby wants to become friend with him.Lies never can change the truth. Finaily dishonest people will be punished after the lies.
In my life, I learn to know that honest is the best way to solve the problems. Once lies began, the more lies will follow. SO,it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy'.

Corrected essay:
As we can see in the picture, a butcher has sold meat to a woman. Both of them felt happy, because the man sold the meat with lots of water, while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.
It is vividly shown that dishonest people never get a good result. Tricking other people to create some good things for oneself is selfish and can not be forgiven. People who are dishonest always think about themselves. Nobody wants to become friends with them. Lies can never change the truth. Finally dishonest people will be punished for their lies.
In my life, I learn that honesty is the best way to solve problems. Once lies begin, more lies will follow. So, it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy.'