Writing prompt: My Own Belongings

Student essay:
This is my pen. The pen is black.
This is your jacket. The jacket is brown.
This is his quilt. The quilt is yellow.
This is her cup. The cup is red.
This is my map. The map is blue.
This is his ruler. The ruler is purple.
This is her key. The key is yellow.
This is my eraser. The eraser is black.
This is his book. The book is green.
This is her bed. The bed is brown.
This is my desk. The desk is blue.
That is his teble. The teble is brown.
That is her chair. The chair is blue.
That is my dog. The dog is brown.
That is his cat. The cat is black and white.
That is her egg. The egg is yellow.
That is my short. The short is white.
That is his skirt. The skirt is pink.
That is her shoe. The shoe is blue.
That is my magazine. The magazine is black and withe.
That is his lamp. The lamp is orange.
That is her bike. The bike is red.
That is your umberlla. The umberlla is red.
That is his cup. The cup is purple.
That is her map. The map is green.
This is your book. The book is white.
This is his cat. The cat is withe and yellow.
This is her skirt. The skirt is pink.
This is a book. The book is yellow.
That is an orange. The orange is orange.
This is a cat. The cat is black.
That is a dog. The dog is brown.

Corrected essay:
This is my pen. The pen is black.
This is your jacket. The jacket is brown.
This is his quilt. The quilt is yellow.
This is her cup. The cup is red.
This is my map. The map is blue.
This is his ruler. The ruler is purple.
This is her key. The key is yellow.
This is my eraser. The eraser is black.
This is his book. The book is green.
This is her bed. The bed is brown.
This is my desk. The desk is blue.
That is his table. The table is brown.
That is her chair. The chair is blue.
That is my dog. The dog is brown.
That is his cat. The cat is black and white.
That is her egg. The egg is yellow.
That is my shirt. The shirt is white.
That is his skirt. The skirt is pink.
That is her shoe. The shoe is blue.
That is my magazine. The magazine is black and white.
That is his lamp. The lamp is orange.
That is her bike. The bike is red.
That is your umbrella. The umbrella is red.
That is his cup. The cup is purple.
That is her map. The map is green.
This is your book. The book is white.
This is his cat. The cat is white and yellow.
This is her skirt. The skirt is pink.
This is a book. The book is yellow.
That is an orange. The orange is orange.
This is a cat. The cat is black.
That is a dog. The dog is brown.