Writing prompt: Giving Advice

Student essay:
I'm very glad to talk with you.I know the problem about you and I can give you some advise.
First,you can try to do your best to read and spell the new words loudly.It's a good way to remember
the new words and you never forget it.The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.If you use the new words a lot of times and you well never forget it.
these is all the suggests for you.I hope I can help you a lot.

Corrected essay:
I'm very glad to talk with you. I know the problem about you and I can give you some advice.
First, you can try to do your best to read and spell the new words loudly. It's a good way to remember the new words and you will never forget them. Second is writing. You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words. Third is speaking the new words as much as possible. If you use the new words a lot of times, you will never forget them.
These are all the suggestions for you. I hope I can help you a lot.