Writing prompt: My Good Friend

Student essay:
Liu Qing lei is my good friend,he's 12 years old,he's form China,he'Chinese.His class is Class5 Grade1.His friend is Betty,Betty is form Endland,Betty is 13 yeas old.his in Class 2.His teacher is Mrs Green,Mrs Green is formAmerica.

Corrected essay:
Liu Qing Lei is my good friend. He's 12 years old. He's from China. He's Chinese. His class is Class 5, Grade 1. His friend is Betty. Betty is from England. Betty is 13 years old. She is in Class 2. His teacher is Mrs. Green. Mrs. Green is from America.