Writing prompt: My Favorite Place at School

Student essay:
Everyone says"School is just like our home.'I think so. I love my school.Include the gate,the playground,the teaching building. But my favourite place at school is our classroom.
Our classroom is tidy,clean and bright,because we tidy up it every day. Made it just like our home. It witness my growth,and I also left a happy time. I always reading there,because it is quiet. It not only made me undisturbed,but also relax myself there.
Our classroom is the most beautiful place in my eyes.

Corrected essay:
Everyone says, "School is just like our home." I think so. I love my school, including the gate, the playground, and the teaching building. But my favourite place at school is our classroom.
Our classroom is tidy, clean and bright, because we tidy it up every day. We make it just like our home. It witnesses my growth, and I also leave happy memories there. I always read there, because it is quiet. It not only makes me undisturbed, but also helps me relax.
Our classroom is the most beautiful place in my eyes.