Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
Some people believe that reading is a critical part of learning and growth.However,others believe we learn by doing and learn best for concern experience. ..In my opinion,I think reading is the best way to learn.Reading a lot of books can open our eyes and help us understand the world more.What is more,reading is a way of increasing our vocabulary.The most important of all,everything becomes possible through reading. ..But in the other way,learning by doing is also a good way to explore our environment of people,things,places and events.However,compared with reading,it takes more time and have more bad efforts than reading.So why not spend some of your spare time reading books.You will find yourself different by reading.

Corrected essay:
Some people believe that reading is a critical part of learning and growth. However, others believe we learn by doing and learn best from concrete experience. In my opinion, I think reading is the best way to learn. Reading a lot of books can open our eyes and help us understand the world more. What is more, reading is a way of increasing our vocabulary. Most important of all, everything becomes possible through reading. But in the other way, learning by doing is also a good way to explore our environment of people, things, places and events. However, compared with reading, it takes more time and has more bad effects than reading. So why not spend some of your spare time reading books? You will find yourself different by reading.