Writing prompt: Meet an Alien

Student essay:
One day, I was eating lunch in the canteen. When I gone, I meet an alien. He looked very cute. He had small eyes, small nose and small mouth. We talked with each other and we were friends. But when I was talking. He did not understand what I said. I felt very embarrassed. At night, he had dinner in my house and I knew something . He ate food with tongue. It made me feet horrible.
Next morning. When I got up. I did not see him any more. It likes nothing had happened to me before.

Corrected essay:
One day, I was eating lunch in the canteen. When I left, I met an alien. He looked very cute. He had small eyes, a small nose and a small mouth. We talked with each other and became friends. But when I was talking, he did not understand what I said. I felt very embarrassed. At night, he had dinner at my house and I learned something. He ate food with his tongue. It made me feel horrible.
The next morning, when I got up, I did not see him anymore. It felt like nothing had happened to me before.