Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hi, my name isTina. I get up at 7o'clock. I eat breakfast at 7:30o'clock. I go to school at 8o'clock. For lunch, I eat rice soup egg and beef. It is vevry much.

Corrected essay:
Hi, my name is Tina. I get up at 7 o'clock. I eat breakfast at 7:30. I go to school at 8 o'clock. For lunch, I eat rice, soup, eggs and beef. It is too much.