Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Look at this picter. This is my father, he is high. This is my mom, she is very clever. This is my brother, he is very cute. This is me. We are happy famliy

Corrected essay:
Look at this picture. This is my father, and he is tall. This is my mom, and she is very clever. This is my brother, and he is very cute. This is me. We are a happy family.