Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I with my friends w3nt to park . Afternoon was rainy, I did't have umbrella, I geted wet. I was cool and headache. My friends with me went to hospital. Doctor said me is fever. And he give medicine.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park. In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella, so I got wet. I was cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever, and he gave me medicine.