Writing prompt: Picture Composition.
Writing hints: bedroom; picture; cabinet; bedside table.

Student essay:
There is Amy's bedroom. There is her bed is next to two cabinets. The picture is on the left cabinet. The lomp is on the right cabinet. The shelf is between the two windows. A lot of books on the shelf.

Corrected essay:
This is Amy's bedroom. Her bed is next to two cabinets. The picture is on the left cabinet. The lamp is on the right cabinet. The shelf is between the two windows. There are a lot of books on the shelf.