Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are priced at 30 yuan. Shorts are priced at 20 yuan. Shirt are priced at 25 yuan. Big bag are priced at 35 yuan. Small bag are priced at 20 yuan. And many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are priced at 30 yuan. Shorts are priced at 20 yuan. Shirts are priced at 25 yuan. Big bags are priced at 35 yuan. Small bags are priced at 20 yuan. And there are many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.