Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I went to a picnic in the park with my friends. In the morning, the weather was sunny. But in the afternoon the weather became rain. I forgot umbrella, I got wet. I felt cold and headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said, "You have a fever. "He gave me the medicine. He all said, "have a good rest at home. "

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I went to a picnic in the park with my friends. In the morning, the weather was sunny. But in the afternoon, the weather became rainy. I forgot to bring my umbrella, so I got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said, "You have a fever." He gave me some medicine. He also said, "Have a good rest at home."