Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Amy is my favourite friend, she is a pretty girl. She wears a pure white shirt and a pail of blue shoes. She is beautiful! The pink schoolbag is lovely, she very likes it.

Corrected essay:
Amy is my favourite friend. She is a pretty girl. She wears a pure white shirt and a pair of blue shoes. She is beautiful! The pink schoolbag is lovely and she likes it very much.