Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My name is Peng si han, she is my friend, her name is chen ye jia, she is wear a white shirt and wear a pair of red shoes, she looks very beautiful today. I also really like her shoes.

Corrected essay:
My name is Peng Sihan. This is my friend, and her name is Chen Yejia. She is wearing a white shirt and a pair of red shoes. She looks very beautiful today. I also really like her shoes.