Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday. I with my friend to go to the park. To have pinpic. At the afternoon. The weather is beging to rain. I forget to take umbrella. The rain wet my body. I feel very heaache. My friends send me go to hospital. The doctor say me is have a fever. He give me some medicine. And tell me have a rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I went to the park with my friends to have a picnic. In the afternoon, it began to rain. I forgot to take an umbrella, and the rain wet my body. I had a headache. My friends sent me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine. And he told me to have a rest.