Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
First peel the banana. Then cut put the banana. put the banana into the blender, pour the milk into blender, then turn on the blender, fineily drink.

Corrected essay:
First, I peel the banana. Then, I cut the banana. Next, I put the banana into the blender and pour the milk into the blender. Then, I turn on the blender and finally drink.