Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
My name is Tommy. My last weekend was very fun. I had a busy but enjoyable time. On Saturday morning I got up early. . I played in the park with my good friends. In the afternoon, I played basketball. On Sunday I started my day doing my homework. My familes cleaned the house together. In the evening i watched TV.

Corrected essay:
My name is Tommy. My last weekend was very fun. I had a busy but enjoyable time. On Saturday morning, I got up early. I played in the park with my good friends. In the afternoon, I played basketball. On Sunday, I started my day by doing my homework. My family cleaned the house together. In the evening, I watched TV.