Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3:00, Linda is at the shop hall now, she sees a little girl is buying some food, she sees a young lady is looking at a pretty dress, Linda sees a woman is trying the shoes, but, who's that woman? Haha, that woman is Lin da 's mother. That is a man staying on the sofa, he is Linda's father, he's waiting for his wife.

Corrected essay:
It's 3:00 pm. Linda is at the shopping mall now. She sees a little girl buying some food. She sees a young lady looking at a pretty dress. Linda sees a woman trying on the shoes, but, who's that woman? Haha, that woman is Linda's mother. There is a man staying on the sofa. He is Linda's father, and he's waiting for his wife.