Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, Iand my friends go to park in picnic, In the afternoon, the weather is ranning, l don't umbrella, and I get wet. I feel like cold and headache. My friends go to hospital with me. The dacthor says I fever, he give me some medicine and go back home, rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park for a picnic. In the afternoon, the weather was rainy. I didn't have an umbrella, and I got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go back home and rest.