Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is the tallest person in our family. He likes reading very much. Such as Journey to the West, Water Margin. My mother likes seeing movies. She likes Modern Times best. My sister likes muddy puddles best. I like play games with my dogs.

Corrected essay:
There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is the tallest person in our family. He likes reading very much, such as Journey to the West and Water Margin. My mother likes seeing movies. She likes Modern Times best. My sister likes muddy puddles best. I like to play games with my dogs.