Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
I'm Emily. I'm ten year old. This is my family photo. This is my father, Bob. He is a teacher. This is my mother, Mary. She is a nurse. The boy is my borther, Paul. Last, the girl is me.

Corrected essay:
I'm Emily. I'm ten years old. This is my family photo. This is my father, Bob. He is a teacher. This is my mother, Mary. She is a nurse. The boy is my brother, Paul. Lastly, the girl is me.