Writing prompt: You have a beautiful pencil case with some stationery inside. On Monday, when you went to school, you couldn't find your crayons in your pencil case. Your friend Amy gave you some to use for drawing.
Based on this information, write a short English essay.
Writing hints: pencil case; crayons; draw.

Student essay:
I have a beautiful pencil case. There are two pen and a ruler, I also have some crayons. On Monday. I go to school by bus. When I have art lesson, I don't find my crayons. I, m very sad! But Amy give me some crayons to draw.

Corrected essay:
I have a beautiful pencil case. There are two pens and a ruler. I also have some crayons. On Monday, I went to school by bus. When I had an art lesson, I couldn't find my crayons. I was very sad! But Amy gave me some crayons to draw with.