Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It is 3 p.m. now, i see a little girl is buying some food. And i see a young lady is looking at a dress. The dress is very beauiful. My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, and waiting for my mother.

Corrected essay:
It is 3 p.m. now, I see a little girl buying some food. And I see a young lady looking at a dress. The dress is very beautiful. My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, waiting for my mother.