Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday. My friends and I are has a pincnic. Afternoon has little rain. I forgot take my umbrella. I get wet. I feel very cold and has a headache. My friends take me go to the hospital. Doctor say: "I am fever. "Doctor give me some medicine and go home let me have a good rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I had a picnic. In the afternoon, it rained a little. I had forgotten to take my umbrella, so I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said, "You have a fever." The doctor gave me some medicine and let me go home and have a good rest.