Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my hoilday schedule. In moring. I get up on 7'o clock. I brush the teeth after get up. I eat brackfast on 8'o clock. On PM 9'o clock, I read book. Sometimes I help my mother do the housework. I really like clean my bedroom and my mother's room. At night I always watch TV with my parents.

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. In the morning, I get up at 7 o'clock. I brush my teeth after getting up. I eat breakfast at 8 o'clock. At 9 PM, I read books. Sometimes I help my mother do the housework. I really like cleaning my bedroom and my mother's room. At night I always watch TV with my parents.