Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Saturday, my friends and I was had a picnic. It was rain in the afternoon. I get wet so I feel cold and have a headache. I go to the hospital. The doctor tell me I had a fever. So the doctor give me some medicine .

Corrected essay:
Last Saturday, my friends and I had a picnic. It was raining in the afternoon. I got wet so I felt cold and had a headache. I went to the hospital. The doctor told me I had a fever. So the doctor gave me some medicine.