Writing prompt: Writing.
Assume you are Annie. You have recently moved to a new place and made many friends. Based on the hints in the picture below, write a short essay introducing your friends.
My friends
My name is Annie. Last month, I came here.________
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Student essay:
There are many good friends. I often read books with my good friends. So I have lots of books. I have a friend. She names is Li Sa. She has a lot of dresses. I also have a friend, he names is Ti Yi ming. He has too many DVDs.

Corrected essay:
There are many good friends. I often read books with my good friends. So I have lots of books. I have a friend. Her name is Li Sa. She has a lot of dresses. I also have another friend. His name is Ti Yiming. He has too many DVDs.