Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look! This is my clossmate. He wear a blue shirt and red shoes. I think they are beautiful. He is very like them

Corrected essay:
Look! This is my classmate. He wears a blue shirt and red shoes. I think they are beautiful. He likes them very much.