Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in a park. In the morning, the weather was very sunny, we can hear the brids singing in the trees. But in the afternoon, the weather became rainy, I didn't bring umbrella and I got wet felt very headache. Then my friends sent me to hospital, the doctor said I was fever. He was gave me some medicines and told me to have a good rest at home.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in a park. In the morning, the weather was very sunny, and we could hear the birds singing in the trees. But in the afternoon, the weather became rainy. I didn't bring an umbrella and I got wet. I had a headache. Then my friends sent me to the hospital, and the doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to have a good rest at home.