Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hi! I am Tommy! I got up early because I played with friends in the park. After that, I play basketball with my father. I was a winner. On Sunday, my mother helped me to finished my homework. When I finished my homework, I cleaned my room . After dinner, I watched TV with my family. As for me, They were busy but fun days!

Corrected essay:
Hi! I am Tommy! I got up early to play with friends in the park. After that, I played basketball with my father. I was the winner. On Sunday, my mother helped me to finish my homework. When I finished my homework, I cleaned my room. After dinner, I watched TV with my family. As for me, they were busy but fun days!