Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
I'm Lin Chen. I am very happy to be pen-friend with you. There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I. I love my parents very much, and they love me too. I plan to go go Beijing this summer holiday. First, I will take a visit to Tian'anmen Square. There I will watch the raising of the national flag. Next, I will visit the Palace Museum for one day because I like history very much. At last, I will go to eat Beijing Roast Duck. Yours Lin Chen

Corrected essay:
I'm Lin Chen. I am very happy to be pen friends with you. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and me. I love my parents very much, and they love me too. I plan to go to Beijing this summer holiday. First, I will take a visit to Tian'anmen Square. There I will watch the raising of the national flag. Next, I will visit the Palace Museum for one day because I like history very much. At last, I will go to eat Beijing Roast Duck.
Yours，
Lin Chen