Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
At p.m 3:00, I'm walk in the shopping and see some interesting things. First, I'm seeing a little girl is buying some food. Second, I'm looking a young lady is looking at a dress. What's more, Linda's mother is trying the shoes was looked by my own eyes. Finally, I see Lina' fther is staying on the sofa and seem to wait some bady. The day is really interesting so I want to share with you.

Corrected essay:
At 3:00 p.m., I walked into the shopping mall and saw some interesting things. First, I saw a little girl buying some food. Second, I saw a young lady looking at a dress. What's more, Linda's mother was trying on the shoes, which I saw myself. Finally, I saw Linda's father staying on the sofa and seeming to be waiting for somebody. The day is really interesting so I want to share it with you.