Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My friend like wear red shirt. Because he think very beautiful. And he likes wear pule white shoe. He think very pretty. I very like his shirt and shoe.

Corrected essay:
My friend likes to wear a red shirt. Because he thinks it is very beautiful. And he likes to wear purple and white shoes. He thinks they are very pretty. I like his shirt and shoes very much.