Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my school. I have a lot of classmates. Andy is my best friend. She wears a pink shirt and a white coat. Her hair is black. She wears a pair of black. She wears a pair of shoes. They are black too. Robert is very tall. He has a red hat. His trousers are black. There is a girl on the playground. Her name is Ann. Shd wears a beautiful blue dress. I don't like the blue dress. I like the yellow skirt.

Corrected essay:
This is my school. I have a lot of classmates. Andy is my best friend. She wears a pink shirt and a white coat. Her hair is black. She wears a pair of black shoes. Robert is very tall. He has a red hat. His trousers are black. There is a girl on the playground. Her name is Ann. She wears a beautiful blue dress. I don't like the blue dress. I like yellow skirts.