Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
I am Linda. Now is 3:00 in the afternoon. My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom. In the shop, a litter girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress.

Corrected essay:
I am Linda. It is now 3:00 in the afternoon. My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa to wait for my mom. In the shop, a little girl is buying some food, and a young lady is looking at a dress.