Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hello, my name is Emily. I am 13 years . The photo is my family. This is my father, He is a policeman, He is strong and tall. This is my mother, she is a teacher, she is beautiful. This is my brother , he is a student, he is hard-work. This is my sister. She is 5 years, she is cute. I like my family.

Corrected essay:
Hello, my name is Emily. I am 13 years old. The photo is of my family. This is my father. He is a policeman. He is strong and tall. This is my mother. She is a teacher. She is beautiful. This is my brother. He is a student. He is hard-working. This is my sister. She is 5 years old. She is cute. I like my family.