Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last weekend. I went to picnic in the park with my friends. That afternoon. Suddenly begin rain. I forgeted bring an umbrella. I was got wet. Then I went to the tospital. A doctor said: " You were fever! " He gived me some medicine.

Corrected essay:
Last weekend, I went to a picnic in the park with my friends. That afternoon, it suddenly began to rain. I forgot to bring an umbrella. I got wet. Then I went to the hospital. A doctor said, "You had a fever!" He gave me some medicine.