Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3:00, Linda is in the shop hall now. She sees a little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress, Oh, who's that woman? She is Linda's mother, her mother is trying the shoes, Linda's father is staying on the sofa, he's waiting for Linda's mother.

Corrected essay:
It's 3:00 p.m.. Linda is in the shopping mall now. She sees a little girl buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Oh, who's that woman? She is Linda's mother. Her mother is trying on the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa. He's waiting for Linda's mother.