Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This my school. I have a lot of classmates. Andy is my best friend. She wear a pink shirt and a white coat. Her hair is black. There is a girl on the playgrond. Her name is Ann. She wears a beautiful blue dress. I don't like the blue dress. I like the yellow skirt.

Corrected essay:
This is my school. I have a lot of classmates. Andy is my best friend. She wears a pink shirt and a white coat. Her hair is black. There is a girl on the playground. Her name is Ann. She wears a beautiful blue dress. I don't like the blue dress. I like the yellow skirt.