Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
In winter hoilday. Sarah is usually gets up at 7:40. She is often reads English texts at 8:30 to 9:45. She is do her homework at the day time. She is usually takes exercise and cleans house and cooks in the afternoon. After supper, She is watchs TV or movies.

Corrected essay:
During the winter holiday, Sarah usually gets up at 7:40. She often reads English texts from 8:30 a.m. to 9:45 a.m. She does her homework during the daytime. She usually takes exercise, cleans the house and cooks in the afternoon. After supper, she watches TV or movies.