Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
First , we can peel the banana and we cut up it. Then we put banana into the blender, pour milk into. Turn on. We can drink.

Corrected essay:
First, we can peel the banana and cut it up. Then we put the banana into the blender and pour milk into it. I turn it on. We can drink.