Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have a school. My have a lot classmate. Linda is my friend. She like black shoes, black shirt and blue trousers. She look is very beautiful

Corrected essay:
I am at school. I have a lot of classmates. Linda is my friend. She likes black shoes, black shirts and blue trousers. She looks very beautiful.