Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is be down. All kind of colour's coats have 30 yuan, shorts have 20 yuan, shirts have 25 yuan. Bag have 35 yuan, hanbags have 20 yuan. And have many beautiful shoes and dresses, welcome to shopping.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale. All kinds of colored sweaters are 30 yuan, shorts are 20 yuan, and shirts are 25 yuan. Bags are 35 yuan, and handbags are 20 yuan. And there are many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to shopping.