Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
I am Emily. I have blond hair. My brother wear purple T-shirt. My mother wear green T-shirt . My father have brown short hair. They are small eyes and big mouth. We are family.

Corrected essay:
I am Emily. I have blond hair. My brother wears a purple T-shirt. My mother wears a green T-shirt. My father has short brown hair. They have small eyes and big mouths. We are family.