Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
This my photo. Thay was my father, mother, bother and I. My father was strong and heath. I want to be a goodman like he.

Corrected essay:
This is my photo. They are my father, mother, brother, and me. My father is strong and healthy. I want to be a good man like him.