Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Today is Monday, I get up early in the morning. Afer I bursh my teeth I eat my breakfast. I go to school when I finish my breakfast. In school I have an art class ad play tennis

Corrected essay:
Today is Monday, and I get up early in the morning. After I brush my teeth, I eat my breakfast. I go to school after I finish my breakfast. In school I have an art class and play tennis.