Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hello I'm Tinna. Today is Monday. I get up early, because I will go to school. I first have breakfast. I eat egg and milk. It is delicous. ! Then I go to school. I read book 30 mintunes. I think read is a interesting thing. So I like read. Then I draw a cat. It is cute.

Corrected essay:
Hello, I'm Tina. Today is Monday. I get up early, because I will go to school. First, I have breakfast. I eat an egg and drink milk. It is delicious! Then I go to school. I read a book for 30 minutes. I think reading is an interesting thing, so I like to read. Then I draw a cat. It is cute.