Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I have a picnic with my friends on the park. When it was rain in afternoon, but I haven't umbrella. So I get wet. I felt cold and have a headache. My friends get me to the hospital, the doctor said I was fever. He gave me some medicines andtold me go home to have a good rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in the park. It was rainy in the afternoon, but I didn't have an umbrella. So I got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital, and the doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home to have a good rest.