Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Look, this is our family photo. This is my father. He is very tall. He is also very young. He is 37 years old this year. Is a teacher. He likes green. This is my mom. She is not tall. My mother is a nurse. Mom is 38 years old. She likes the red one. Look, This is my brother. He likes skateboarding. He is very sunny. He is 13 years old this year. He is a student. My name is Emily. I am seven years old this year. I am a pupil. This is a picture of our family. I love my home. What about you?

Corrected essay:
Look, this is our family photo. This is my father. He is very tall. He is also very young. He is 37 years old this year. He is a teacher. He likes green. This is my mom. She is not tall. My mother is a nurse. Mom is 38 years old. She likes red. Look, this is my brother. He likes skateboarding. He is very sunny. He is 13 years old this year. He is a student. My name is Emily. I am seven years old this year. I am a pupil. This is a picture of our family. I love my family. What about you?