Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Last weekend I had a good time. On Saturday morning , I got up early at 7:00 a.m.Then I had breakfast at 8:00 a.m. After breakfast I did my homework. In the afternoon I played in the park with my friend then palyed basketball . On Sunday morning, I did my homework. At 10:00a.m., I cleaned my room. In the evening I was wacth TV

Corrected essay:
Last weekend I had a good time. On Saturday morning, I got up early at 7:00 a.m. Then I had breakfast at 8:00 a.m. After breakfast I did my homework. In the afternoon I played in the park with my friends and then played basketball. On Sunday morning, I did my homework. At 10:00 a.m., I cleaned my room. In the evening, I watched TV.