Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. At 7:40a. m, I'm getting up. At 8:30 to 9:45, I am reading English texts. The day time, I'm doing my homework. In the afternoon, I'm taking exercise, cleaning house and cooking. after supper, I'm watching TV or movies.

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. At 7:40 a.m., I get up. From 8:30 to 9:45, I read English texts. In the daytime, I do my homework. In the afternoon, I take exercise, clean the house and cook. After supper, I watch TV or movies.