Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, the key was rain. But I forgot take my umbrella, so I was wet. I felt cold and I had a headache. My friends were take me to the hospital. The doctor asked I have a fever and gave me some medicine.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, the weather was rainy. But I forgot to take my umbrella, so I was wet. I felt cold and I had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever and gave me some medicine.