Writing prompt: Writing
Last Friday afternoon, your class participated in an interesting extracurricular activity. The activities included sports, various interest groups, and an English corner. These activities are beneficial for students' overall development. Please write an English narrative describing this interesting extracurricular activity.
Writing hints: out-class activity; be interested in; take part in; development; English corner

Student essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our classmates took part in an interesting activites. It includes sport activities, many kinds of groups and Einglish Coner. These activies are good for students develop.

Corrected essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our classmates took part in an interesting activity. It included sports activities, many kinds of group activities and an English corner. These activities are good for students' development.