Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
Hi, Ted. There are four people in my family. We will go to BeiJing. There are many interesting places in it. Such as, Tian'an men Square and the Palace Museum , Beijing Roast Duck.

Corrected essay:
Hi, Ted. There are four people in my family. We will go to Beijing. There are many interesting things in it, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and Beijing Roast Duck.