Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
At 3:00p.m.linda is in a shopping mall. A little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at the shoe store! Linda's mother is trying ba pair of shoes.

Corrected essay:
At 3:00 p.m., Linda is in a shopping mall. A little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a shoe store. Linda's mother is trying on a pair of shoes.