Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last sunday I went to picnic in the park with my friends. In the afternoon it was rain. I forgot bring umbrella, so I got wet. I feeled cold and headacth. Friend bringed me to hospital, doctor thinked I had a fever. He gave some medicine and let me went home to had a good sheep.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday I went on a picnic in the park with my friends. In the afternoon it was rainy. I forgot to bring an umbrella, so I got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friend brought me to the hospital, and the doctor thought I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and let me go home to have a good sleep.