Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a park. The weather was good in the morning. We could hear birds singing inthe trees. In the afternoon, It started to tain. I didn'tt bring an umbrella and got wet. atahe I felt cold and hada headache. After that, my frieds took me to a hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told have a good rest at home,

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a park. The weather was good in the morning. We could hear birds singing in the trees. In the afternoon, it started to rain. I didn't bring an umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. After that, my friends took me to a hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to have a good rest at home.