Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
I'm Tina. This is my Monday. I get up at 6:30 , after l have breakfast at 7:30 p.m., after l go to school at 8:00. After school, l begin have first lesson. At noon , l have lunch at school. In the evening , Igo home at 5:30.

Corrected essay:
I'm Tina. This is my Monday. I get up at 6:30 a.m., and after that I have breakfast at 7:30 a.m. Then I go to school at 8:00 a.m. After arriving at school, I begin my first lesson. At noon, I have lunch at school. In the afternoon, I go home at 5:30 p.m.