Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have a my best friend is Mike. He likes wearing a white shirt and a pair of blue shoes. He looks like very beautiful. I like his wear.

Corrected essay:
I have a best friend. He is Mike. He likes wearing a white shirt and a pair of blue shoes. He looks very beautiful. I like his clothes.