Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate are so good. This is my friend Amy she is so perrty. She wear a white shirt and black skirt. This is my news friend. He name is jack. He is perrty to. He like wear blue shoes. We are so happy.

Corrected essay:
My classmates are so good. This is my friend Amy. She is so pretty. She wears a white shirt and a black skirt. This is my new friend. His name is Jack. He is pretty too. He likes to wear blue shoes. We are so happy.