Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my classmater. She is very beautiful. Today she wear pink shirt with a rabbit on it. she wear a yellow shoes . I like she

Corrected essay:
This is my classmate. She is very beautiful. Today she wears a pink shirt with a rabbit on it. She wears yellow shoes. I like her.