Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hello! I'm Emily. This is my family. My father is English. My mother is Chinese. So my sister and I are both have blonde. It's looks so beautiful. This is my father. He is strong. And this woman is my mother. She is elegant. Who 's that boy? It's me! I'm handsome. And that girl is my sister. She is very pretty. I'm happy. Because I have a good family!

Corrected essay:
Hello! I'm Emily. This is my family. My father is English. My mother is Chinese. So my sister and I both have blonde hair. It looks so beautiful. This is my father. He is strong. And this woman is my mother. She is elegant. Who's that boy? It's me! I'm handsome. And that girl is my sister. She is very pretty. I'm happy because I have a good family!