Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
This is my family. My name is Mr. boyThis is my dad. He is teacher. His name is Mr. Dad. This is my mum. She is nurse. Her name is Mir. mum. This is my brother. He is my brother. His name is Mr. brother. This is my sister. Her na; e is Mir. sister

Corrected essay:
This is my family. My name is Emily. This is my dad. He is a teacher. His name is Dad. This is my mum. She is a nurse. Her name is Mum. This is my brother. He is my brother. His name is Brother. This is my sister. Her name is Sister.