Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
At 7:40 am, I get up on my bed. After, I brush my teeth. And, I have breakfast. Time go to. At 8:30 to 9:45, I read English text. At the day time, I do my homework. In afternoon, I take exercise, clean house and cook. After supper, I watch TV or movies with my family.

Corrected essay:
At 7:40 am, I get up from my bed. After that, I brush my teeth. And it's time to have breakfast. From 8:30 a.m. to 9:45 a.m., I read English texts. During the daytime, I do my homework. In the afternoon, I take exercise, clean the house and cook. After supper, I watch TV or movies with my family.