Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my school. I lots of classmater. Amy is my best friend. She wear a pink shirt and a blue socks. It is very beautiful. She wear a yellow shoes. I like she

Corrected essay:
This is my school. I have lots of classmates. Amy is my best friend. She wears a pink shirt and blue socks. They are very beautiful. She wears yellow shoes. I like her.