Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hello, my name's Wang Dan. I am in Class 11 Grade 9. My classmate are friendly. Our monitor is a beautiful girl, she like wear white shirt and small white shoes. My favourite friend is a cute girl, she like wear pink dress, pinka and white shoes.

Corrected essay:
Hello, my name's Wang Dan. I am in Class 11, Grade 9. My classmates are friendly. Our monitor is a beautiful girl. She likes to wear a white shirt and small white shoes. My favourite friend is a cute girl. She likes to wear a pink dress and white shoes.