Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very cheap. The Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very crowed and loudly. What kind of do you want? Oh, I don't know. The blouses are 25 yuan. The big handbags are 35 yuan. The small handbags are 20 yuan. The jackets are 30 yuan. And very beautiful shoes and shirt in the Mr. Col's Clothes Store. Let my store buy some!

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store's clothes are very cheap. Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very crowded and loud. What kind of clothes do you want? Oh, I don't know. The blouses are 25 yuan. The big handbags are 35 yuan. The small handbags are 20 yuan. The jackets are 30 yuan. And there are very beautiful shoes and skirts in Mr. Cool's Clothes Store. Let my store buy some!