Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
My name is Li Hua. I will have a good weekend life. Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparent with my parents. We plan to buy some fruits and presents for them. And then, I am going to clean my room, because it haven't cleaned for a long time. Second, I am going to play computer games to take a relax. After that, I am going to play soccer with my friends. So, I will have a good time for my next week.

Corrected essay:
My name is Li Hua. I will have a good weekend. Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. We plan to buy some fruit and presents for them. And then, I am going to clean my room, because it hasn't been cleaned for a long time. Second, I am going to play computer games to relax. After that, I am going to play soccer with my friends. So, I will have a good time for my next weekend.