Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hello, I'm Tom. I'm a beautiful girl. Today I wear a pure white shirt, it's pretty. I wear shoes are pink, it's lovely. I like myshirt and shoes.

Corrected essay:
Hello, I'm Tom. I'm a beautiful girl. Today I wear a pure white shirt. It's pretty. I wear shoes that are pink. They're lovely. I like my shirt and shoes.