Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
How to make a banana milk shake? First, peel a banana, Second, cut up banana. Third, put banana into the blender.

Corrected essay:
How to make a banana milk shake? First, I peel a banana. Second, I cut up the banana. Third, I put the banana into the blender.