Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes shop there is a big sale, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are only sold in 30 yuan , shorts are only sold in 20 yuan, Shirts are compact in 25 yuan, with big bags selling for five yuan and small bags selling for 20 yuan. There are many beautiful shoes and skirts, and you are welcome to come and buy them.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes shop is having a big sale, which is very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are only sold for 30 yuan, shorts are only sold for 20 yuan, and shirts are priced at 25 yuan, with big bags selling for 35 yuan and small bags selling for 20 yuan. There are many beautiful shoes and skirts, and you are welcome to come and buy them.