Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My friend is Zhang wan yu. She like is blue. She is a blue shirt wear, a white shoes. Sheis beautiful.

Corrected essay:
My friend is Zhang Wanyu. She likes blue. She is wearing a blue shirt and white shoes. She is beautiful.