Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My friend is very beautiful. Her names is Gao ya ting. On monday she wears a pure white. And her shoes is pretty. I like Her coat is very lovely.

Corrected essay:
My friend is very beautiful. Her name is Gao Yating. On Monday she wears a pure white shirt. And her shoes are pretty. I like her coat. It is very lovely.