Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
I am Tommy, I have a good time on my last weekend. On Saturday morning, I got up early. I played in the park for two hours. There were many children in the park. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my classmates. On Sunday, I did my homework at 9:00. After finishing my homework, I cleaned my room with my friends. At 17:00, I watched TV for an hour.

Corrected essay:
I am Tommy, I had a good time last weekend. On Saturday morning, I got up early. I played in the park for two hours. There were many children in the park. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my classmates. On Sunday, I did my homework at 9:00 a.m. After finishing my homework, I cleaned my room with my friends. At 17:00, I watched TV for an hour.