Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hallo, everyone! I have a good classmate. Her name is Ann. She wear a shirt. It is red. It's her favourite color. And she take a piar of shoes. They are blue. Ann likes it very much. She look at very beautiful.

Corrected essay:
Hello, everyone! I have a good classmate. Her name is Ann. She wears a shirt. It is red. It's her favourite color. And she wears a pair of shoes. They are blue. Ann likes them very much. She looks very beautiful.