Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale, and it is very preferential. There are all kinds of sweater here, and it costs only thirty dollars. The shorts are only 20 yuan. Beautiful shirts are only 25 yuan. Big bags are 30 yuan and small bags are 20 yuan. And there are lots of beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to Choose and Buy.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale, and it is very preferential. There are all kinds of sweaters here, and they cost only thirty yuan. The shorts are only 20 yuan. Beautiful shirts are only 25 yuan. Big bags are 30 yuan and small bags are 20 yuan. And there are lots of beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to choose and buy.