Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
My name is Lin Chen. I am a 12 years old girl. There are three people in m family. My father is a bank manager. My mother is a doctor. We are going to Beijing in ths summer holiday. We are going to Tianian men Squre and the Palace Museum. I want to eat Beijing Roast Duck. Come to Beijing an join us.

Corrected essay:
My name is Lin Chen. I am a 12-year-old girl. There are three people in my family. My father is a bank manager. My mother is a doctor. We are going to Beijing this summer holiday. We are going to Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. I want to eat Beijing Roast Duck. Come to Beijing and join us.