Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
She is my the best friend. Today, she wears a pink shirt and the pure white shoes. Look very beautiful. l like she wear.

Corrected essay:
She is my best friend. Today, she wears a pink shirt and pure white shoes. They look very beautiful. I like what she wears.