Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate Amy like pink best. She often wears a pink shirt and pink shoes. She like wearing every day. She looks in pink is very beautiful.

Corrected essay:
My classmate Amy likes pink best. She often wears a pink shirt and pink shoes. She likes wearing them every day. She looks very beautiful in pink.