Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I were had a picture in the park. We flew a kite. In the afternoon, the weather was rainy, but I didn't broing my umbrella, so I got cold and headache. My friends took me to hospital, the doctor told me I had a fever. And he gave me some medicine and told me to had a rest at home.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I had a picnic in the park. We flew a kite. In the afternoon, the weather was rainy, but I didn't bring my umbrella, so I got wet and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital, and the doctor told me I had a fever. And he gave me some medicine and told me to have a rest at home.