Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It is three in the afternoon. linda and her parents are in the shop. Look, a litter girl is buying some food . A young lady is looking at a dress. Her mother is trying the shoes . Her father is staying on th e soft . He is waiting for her mother .

Corrected essay:
It is three o'clock in the afternoon. Linda and her parents are in the shop. Look, a little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa. He is waiting for Linda's mother.