Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
I went for a picnic with my friends in the park last Sunday. But on Sunday afternoon, it's rained. I forreted to take an umbrella. I was got wet. I feel very cold. And i have a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor talked me i have a fever and take me some medicines. What's more, lot me had a good test at home.

Corrected essay:
I went for a picnic with my friends in the park last Sunday. But on Sunday afternoon, it rained. I forgot to take an umbrella. I got wet. I felt very cold. And I had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor told me I had a fever and gave me some medicine. What's more, he let me have a good rest at home.