Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Today is Monday, I saw my classmates at school. He in wearing a pure white shirt today and blue shoes today. He live clour blue. Moreover hes schoolbag is beautiful.

Corrected essay:
Today is Monday. I saw my classmate at school. He is wearing a pure white shirt and blue shoes today. He loves the colour blue. Moreover, his schoolbag is beautiful.