Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale now. It has a great price. It's only 30 yuan for sweathers in any color. It's only 20 for shorts. It's only 25 yuan for shirts. Big handbags are 35 yuan whille 20 yuan for small ones. There are many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to our store.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale now. They have great prices. It's only 30 yuan for sweaters in any color. It's only 20 yuan for shorts. It's only 25 yuan for shirts. Big handbags sell for 35 yuan while 20 yuan for small ones. There are many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to our store.