Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my school. My school is a big and old. I have mang classmates. Amy is my best friend. she wear is a pink shirt. it is very beautiful. She shoes is yellow. I like she.

Corrected essay:
This is my school. My school is big and old. I have many classmates. Amy is my best friend. She wears a pink shirt. It is very beautiful. Her shoes are yellow. I like her.