Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
The store is having a big discount, very favorable. Bags of various colors are only available for sale 30 yuan, shorts for 20 yuan, and shirts for 25 yuan. Big bags are solf for 20 yuan. There are sold for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to choose.

Corrected essay:
The store is having a big discount, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are available only for 30 yuan, shorts for 20 yuan, and shirts for 25 yuan. Big bags are sold for 35 yuan. Small bags are sold for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts. Welcome to choose.