Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
In the next week. I and friends go to the picnic in park. The aftertoon start rain. I forget take umbrella, get wet. I feel very cold and headache. Friends save my to the hospital. Doctor say my fever. He give me medicine and go home shy.

Corrected essay:
Last week, my friends and I went for a picnic in the park. In the afternoon, it started to rain. I forgot to take an umbrella, so I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me medicine and I went home and rested.