Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
First, he peel the bananas and cut up the bananas. Then, he put the bananas into the blender. After that, he pour the milk into the blender. Last but not least, he turn on the blender and drink the milk shake.

Corrected essay:
First, he peels the bananas and cuts them up. Then, he puts the bananas into the blender. After that, he pours the milk into the blender. At last, he turns on the blender and drinks the milk shake.