Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
Its 3:00, Linda is at the shop hall, She sees a little gril is buying some food, she sees a young lady is looking at a pretty dress. Linda sees her mother is try the shoes, she sees her father is staying on the sofa, he's waiting for Linda's mother.

Corrected essay:
It's 3:00 pm. Linda is at the shopping mall. She sees a little girl buying some food, and she sees a young lady looking at a pretty dress. Linda sees her mother trying on the shoes. She sees her father staying on the sofa. He's waiting for Linda's mother.