Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear beautiful shirt and pink shoes. Her shirt is white. She like her shirt and shoes are very much.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a beautiful shirt and pink shoes. Her shirt is white. She likes her shirt and shoes very much.