Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have many classmants. They wear whirt shirt and black shoes today. Because we go to the museum. I think we outfit is very beautiful, and I like we outfit.

Corrected essay:
I have many classmates. They wear white shirts and black shoes today, because we go to the museum. I think our outfit is very beautiful, and I like our outfit.