Writing prompt: Picture Composition.
Writing hints: bedroom; picture; cabinet; bedside table.

Student essay:
There is my bedroom. There is a big bed between the two bedside tables. There is a big cabinet next to the bed. There are two bookshelf on the bed. There is my room.

Corrected essay:
This is my bedroom. There is a big bed between the two bedside tables. There is a big cabinet next to the bed. There are two bookshelves above the bed. This is my room.