Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is very cheap. Many different colours sweaters need 30 yuan. Short need 20 yuan. Shirt need 25 yuan. Big bag need 35 yuan. small bag need 20 yuan. And there are lots of beautiful dresses and shoes.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store's clothes are very cheap. Many different coloured sweaters sell for 30 yuan. The shorts sell for 20 yuan. The shirts sell for 25 yuan. The big bags sell for 35 yuan. The small bags sell for 20 yuan. And there are lots of beautiful dresses and shoes.