Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear her new shirt . She like that. She wear her shoes, it is white. It's so beautiful. She like it .

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears her new shirt. She likes that. She wears her shoes. They are white. They're so beautiful. She likes them.