Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
First , peel banana , second , cut up banana, whenput banana into the blender. Pour milk into the banana, ture on the switch. Ok, Let's drink some . Wow it's so yum.

Corrected essay:
First, I peel the banana. Second, I cut up the banana and then put the banana into the blender. I pour milk into the blender and turn on the switch. Ok, let's drink some. Wow, it's so yummy.