Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look, the boy is very handsome, he is my friend. He wears a pure whire shirt and a pair of shoes, they is beautiful. He likes blue, but I don't like.

Corrected essay:
Look, the boy is very handsome. He is my friend. He wears a pure white shirt and a pair of shoes, and they are beautiful. He likes blue, but I don't like it.