Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
I went dink milk shake. I peel a banana. Befor, cut up banana. Put banana into the blender. Pout milk into, turn on. Can dink it

Corrected essay:
I want to drink a milk shake. Firstly, I peel a banana. Secondly, I cut up the banana and put the banana into the blender. Then, I pour milk into it, and turn it on. Finally, I can drink it.