Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. At 7:40, Sarah gets up. At 8:40-9:45, she reads English texts. In the day time, she does her homework. In the afternoon, she takes exercise, cleans house, and cooks. After supper, she watches TV or movies.

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I had a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. At 7:40, Sarah gets up. From 8:40 to 9:45, she reads English texts. In the daytime, she does her homework. In the afternoon, she takes exercise, cleans the house, and cooks. After supper, she watches TV or movies.