Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Tihs is my friend. Her names is Gao ya ting. Today she wears pink coat It's very very beautiful. And she also weas pretty pink shoes. And her favourite color is pink.

Corrected essay:
This is my friend. Her name is Gao Yating. Today she wears a pink coat. It's very beautiful. And she also wears pretty pink shoes. And her favourite color is pink.