Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hi, ereyone. I'm Tina. The day is Monday, let me tell you about my day. In the morning. I get up early, and then, my mother make breakfast for me. At 7 : 30. I go to school. I read books and draw picters with my classmate. Then, I eat lunch in dinging hall. Finaly, I go home. That's my day. It's busy but happy day

Corrected essay:
Hi, everyone. I'm Tina. Today is Monday, and let me tell you about my day. In the morning, I get up early, and then my mother makes breakfast for me. At 7:30, I go to school. I read books and draw pictures with my classmates. Then, I eat lunch in the dining hall. Finally, I go home. That's my day. It's a busy but happy day.