Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Li Sa's wear black shirt. Li Yiyang's shoes are pink and blue. He's shoes are beautiful I like it

Corrected essay:
Li Sa is wearing a black shirt. Li Yiyang's shoes are pink and blue. His shoes are beautiful. I like them.