Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear a white shirt and a pair of black shoes. She look likes very beautiful. She with long hair and big eyes. I know she likes black and pink

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a white shirt and a pair of black shoes. She looks very beautiful. She has long hair and big eyes. I know she likes black and pink.