Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, My friends and I were going to park for a picnic. It's rain. We don't bring umberlla. We got wet. We going to the hospital. The doctor said"you are have a fever. "He gave me some medicine.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park for a picnic. It's rainy. We didn't bring umbrellas. We got wet. We went to the hospital. The doctor said, "You have a fever." He gave me some medicine.