Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Following the sequence of pictures below, write a passage titled 'How to make a banana milk shake?'.
How to make a banana milk shake?
Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you.

Student essay:
How to make a banana milk shake ? Do you like a banana milk shake . And do you know how to make it ? If you don't know , let me tell you . First , peel the banana . Second , cut the banana into pieces . And then , put the banana into the blender , and pour some milk into the blender . After that , turn on the blender . Last , pour the banana milk shake into a cup and enjoy it !

Corrected essay:
How to make a banana milk shake? Do you like a banana milk shake? And do you know how to make it? If you don't know, let me tell you. First, I peel the banana. Second, I cut the banana into pieces. And then, I put the banana into the blender, and pour some milk into the blender. After that, I turn on the blender. Last, I pour the banana milk shake into a cup and enjoy it!