Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
now is 3:00 at afternoon i am in the shoproom i see a girl buy some food. a young lady is looking for the clothes i am taking the shoes my father is waiting for me.

Corrected essay:
Now it is 3:00 in the afternoon, and I am in the shop room. I see a girl buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. My mother is trying on the shoes. My father is waiting for me.