Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
Now is three o'clock in the afternoon. Linda's mother is trying the shoes in the shoe shop. She's father is waiting for staying on the sofa reading a mageiche. She after see a little girl buying some food, she see a young lady looking at a dress.

Corrected essay:
Now it is three o'clock in the afternoon. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes in the shoe shop. Her father is waiting while staying on the sofa, reading a magazine. She sees a little girl buying some food, and she sees a young lady looking at a dress.