Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is a big sale going on. It's very favorable. Sweaters in all colors are only sold for 30 yuan. Shorts are only sold for 20 yuan. Shirts are only sold for 25 yuan. Thare are also many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to buy.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale. It's very favorable. Sweaters in all colors are only sold for 30 yuan. Shorts are only sold for 20 yuan. Shirts are only sold for 25 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and dresses. Welcome to buy.