Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Look at the picture. That my famliy. My family has father, mother, sister and me. My father is a postman. He is handsome. My mother is beauitful. My sister is cute. I am smart. This is my family!

Corrected essay:
Look at the picture. That's my family. My family is my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is a postman. He is handsome. My mother is beautiful. My sister is cute. I am smart. This is my family!