Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hello, I'm Emily. As we all know, everyone have different family photos. Let me tell you something about my family photow. First, that tall boy is m father . He is kind. Second , that beautiful girl is my mother. She is a elegant an handsome. Third, the little is my big broyher. He is a lovely boy , Ilike he very much. Finally, the littly girl is me. Me is a pretty girl.

Corrected essay:
Hello, I'm Emily. As we all know, everyone has different family photos. Let me tell you something about my family photo. First, that tall man is my father. He is kind. Second, that beautiful woman is my mother. She is elegant and handsome. Third, the little one is my big brother. He is a lovely boy, and I like him very much. Finally, the little girl is me. I am a pretty girl.