Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I went to picnic with my friends. But in the afternoon, the weather were rain. And I forgot bring umbrella, so we were get wet. I felt cold and headache. Then I went to hospital with my friends. The doctor saw I was have a fever. Finaly, he gave me smoe medicine.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I went to a picnic with my friends. But in the afternoon, the weather was rainy. And I forgot to bring an umbrella, so we got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. Then I went to the hospital with my friends. The doctor said I had a fever. Finally, he gave me some medicine.