Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. cools Clothes Store has a sale. It's very cheap. All kinds of sweathers only sells 30 yuan. Pants only sells 20 yuan. Shirts only sells 25 yuan. Large handbag only sells 35 yuan. Small bag only sells 20 yuan. And there are lots of shoes and skirts. Welcome to buy it. !

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store has a sale. It's very cheap. All kinds of sweaters only sell for 30 yuan. Pants only sell for 20 yuan. Shirts only sell for 25 yuan. Large handbags only sell for 35 yuan. Small bags only sell for 20 yuan. And there are lots of shoes and skirts. Welcome to buy them!