Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hi! I'm Emily. This is my family. This is my parent. They works at school. And this is my little sister. She is so cult. I love my family.

Corrected essay:
Hi! I'm Emily. This is my family. These are my parents. They work at school. And this is my little sister. She is so cute. I love my family.