Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday I have a picnic with my friends in the park in the afternoon it is began to rain I forget take umbrella I get wet I think very cold and headache my friends take me to hospital thee doctor said me have a fever he gave me medicine and told me have a good rest at home

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday I had a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, it began to rain. I forgot to take an umbrella, so I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me medicine and told me to have a good rest at home.