Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have a classmate is very beautiful. She is wear white shirt, shoe and coat. I like her shoe

Corrected essay:
I have a classmate who is very beautiful. She is wearing a white shirt, shoes and a coat. I like her shoes.