Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
On the Monday. I go to school look my best friend. My friend he wear bridge red shirt. Beasece he like red and he think red is very beautiful. He wear plua white shoes. l very like too.

Corrected essay:
On Monday, I go to school to see my best friend. My friend wears a bright red shirt, because he likes red and he thinks it is very beautiful. He wears plain white shoes. I like them too.