Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is a big sale, which is very favorable. ITowels of various colors are only sold in 30 yuan, shorts are only sold in 20 yuan and shirts are only sold in 25 yuan. IThe big package sells 35 yuan, and the small package sells 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale, which is very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are only sold for 30 yuan, shorts are only sold for 20 yuan and shirts are only sold for 25 yuan. The big package sells for 35 yuan, and the small package sells for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts. Welcome to buy.