Writing prompt: The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.
Writing hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time

Student essay:
Weekend will coming, First I am going to do my homework in the morning, in the afternoon, I am going to do clean with my mother , two days, We are going to visit my grandpa and grandma, we are going to park to play , it will be a good time.

Corrected essay:
The weekend is coming. First, I am going to do my homework in the morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do cleaning with my mother. After two days, we are going to visit my grandpa and grandma, and we are going to the park to play. It will be a good time.