Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear a blue shirt, and pure white shoes. She is beautiful! I like with hers play.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a blue shirt and pure white shoes. She is beautiful! I like to play with her.