Writing prompt: Lucy's grandmother is telling her about life several years ago. The environment where she lived has changed significantly. Using the provided hints and sentence patterns, write a short English essay about these changes.
Writing hints: different; flats; fields; bushes; buildings.
Reference sentence patterns: There was/were... ; There wasn't/weren't any... ; There was/were no...

Student essay:
There were many differents between last life and moden life. There were many flats , but there was no fields and bushes.

Corrected essay:
There are many differences between the past life and modern life. There are many flats, but there are no fields and bushes.