Writing prompt: Lucy's grandmother is telling her about life several years ago. The environment where she lived has changed significantly. Using the provided hints and sentence patterns, write a short English essay about these changes.
Writing hints: different; flats; fields; bushes; buildings.
Reference sentence patterns: There was/were... ; There wasn't/weren't any... ; There was/were no...

Student essay:
Lucy's grandmother took Lucy to her life is change. Last some years ago, her grandmother's life is different. There weren't many buildings. There were many fields and bushes. But now, there are many flats

Corrected essay:
Lucy's grandmother told Lucy about how her life has changed. Some years ago, her grandmother's life was different. There weren't many buildings. There were many fields and bushes. But now, there are many flats.