Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
My name is Lin Chen. My father is a teacher, and my mother is nurse. Now, this is my plan for the summer holiday. In summer holiday, I am going to the beijing with my family. Beijing is a perfect place. There are many famous, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum. And the there are much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck.

Corrected essay:
My name is Lin Chen. My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse. Now, this is my plan for the summer holiday. In the summer holiday, I am going to Beijing with my family. Beijing is a perfect place. There are many famous places, such as Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. And there is much yummy food, for example, Beijing Roast Duck.