Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Linda; this is a picture of your room. Please use the 'There be' sentence structure and the information provided below to describe your room. Writing hints: a bed; a bedside table; a wardrobe; some books on the shelf; lamp; on the wall.

Student essay:
This is my bedroom. It's not big but very nice. There is one bed in the room. There is a long desk between the beds. There are some books on the desk. There is a new computer on the desk, too. There is a photo on the wall. It's my sister and me. we look happy. There is a map of China on the wall, too. The bedroom is big and nice.

Corrected essay:
This is my bedroom. It's not big but very nice. There is one bed in the room. There is a long desk near the bed. There are some books on the desk. There is a new computer on the desk, too. There is a photo on the wall. It's a photo of my sister and me. We look happy. There is a map of China on the wall, too. The bedroom is big and nice.