Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
I'm Lin Chen; your pen friend. My family has three people; My parents and me. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. They both are busy. I have a plan to Beijing in the summer hoilday. Firstly, I want to go to Tian'anmen Square best. It's so famous. Next, I plan to visit the Palace Museum. Because I think it records the development of history. At last, I'll eat delicious food that is Beijing Roast Duck. I hear many people recommend it.

Corrected essay:
I'm Lin Chen, your pen friend. My family has three people. They are my parents and me. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. They are both busy. I have a plan for going to Beijing in the summer holiday. Firstly, I want to go to Tian'anmen Square the most. It's so famous. Next, I plan to visit the Palace Museum because I think it records the development of history. At last, I'll eat delicious food that is Beijing Roast Duck. I hear many people recommend it.