Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
I am Tommy. Last week, I had a good time! On Saturday morning, I got up early. I wen to the park to play with friends. I saw many children in the park, for example, two boys were playing soccer and a little boy was riding bike. In the afternoon, I played basketball with classmates. It is a good way to keep healthy. On Sunday morning, I did my homework at 8:00. After finishing my homework, I began to clean my room. At 18:00, I watched TV at home.

Corrected essay:
I am Tommy. Last week, I had a good time! On Saturday morning, I got up early. I went to the park to play with friends. I saw many children in the park. For example, two boys were playing soccer and a little boy was riding a bike. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my classmates. It is a good way to keep healthy. On Sunday morning, I did my homework at 8:00 a.m. After finishing my homework, I began to clean my room. At 18:00, I watched TV at home.