Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My student wear red shirt and blue shoes, Her shirt is beautiful, I like she shoes, Because she shoes is lovely.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a red shirt and blue shoes. Her shirt is beautiful, and I like her shoes because they are lovely.