Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's clothes Store is a big sale, very cheap. sweaters colors for only 30 yuan. Shorts only 20 yuan. shirts only 25 yuan. big bags only 35 yuan, small bags only 20 yuan. There are many

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale, and the clothes are very cheap. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan. Shorts are only 20 yuan. Shirts are only 25 yuan. Big bags are only 35 yuan, and small bags are only 20 yuan. There are many beautiful shoes and dresses.