Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
At 3:00 p.m,Lina is in a shopping mall. A little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying a pair of shoes. Linda'a father is staying on the sofa ad waiting for Linda's mother.

Corrected essay:
At 3:00 p.m., Linda is in a shopping mall. A little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on a pair of shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.