Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
I am Lin Chen. I like playing basketball. And I like traving too. My family have four people, my dad, my mom, my sister and me. In summer, I went to Beijing. First I vistered Tian'anmen Square, It was very big. After I went to the Palace Museum. I vistered many valuable things. I ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was very delicerce.

Corrected essay:
I am Lin Chen. I like playing basketball. And I like traveling too. My family has four people: my dad, my mom, my sister and me. In summer, I went to Beijing. First, I visited Tian'anmen Square. It was very big. After that, I went to the Palace Museum. I saw many valuable things. I ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was very delicious.