Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. I get up at twenty to eight. I read English texts start at half past eight. But end at a quarter to ten. I do my homework at the day time. I take execise, clean house and cook dinner in the afternoon. I watch TV or movies in after supper. I go to bed at half past nine.

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. I get up at twenty to eight. I read English texts from half past eight, and end at a quarter to ten. I do my homework in the daytime. I take exercise, clean the house and cook dinner in the afternoon. I watch TV or movies after supper. I go to bed at half past nine.