Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
GaoFeng is likes soccer, he has four soccers and many soccerstars photoes, but he never play soccer, he just playsoccerr test on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike is likes basketball, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he thinks it's boring. Dave is likes soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball, because he thinks it's difficult.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng likes soccer. He has four soccer balls and many soccer stars' photos, but he never plays soccer. He just watches soccer on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes basketball, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he thinks it's boring. Dave likes soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball, because he thinks it's difficult.