Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Writing hints: summer vacation, village, river, go fishing, tree house...; Reference sentence patterns: There was... There were...
Assume you are Jimmy; based on the picture and hints, describe what you saw and did at your aunt's house last summer vacation.

Student essay:
I am Jimmy. Last summer vacation, I had a fun time in my aunt' s home. There was a beautiful village and river. My sister and I sat on the bank of river to going fishing. There were many kids played with each other in tree house. We were happ to stay here.

Corrected essay:
I am Jimmy. Last summer vacation, I had a fun time in my aunt's home. There was a beautiful village and a river. My sister and I sat on the bank of the river to go fishing. There were many kids playing with each other in the tree house. We were happy to stay there.