Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
Hi, soI'm happy to write a letter that show you my plan and my family, even me. I'm in the middol school and be a student, I like visit difficute place or country, it's about my plan. My family have my mom and my dad, that all my family, they are very love me, and they make me become glamorous kid. Then, I will go to Beijing, it's my first plan, second, I will go to Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum, it's a glamorous place. At last but not least, I will go to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I am happy to show you this.

Corrected essay:
Hi, I'm so happy to write a letter to show you my plan, my family, and myself. I'm in middle school and am a student. I like to visit different places or countries, and it is related to my plan. My family has my mom and dad, and that is all my family. They love me very much, and they make me become a glamorous kid. Then, I will go to Beijing, and it's my first plan. Second, I will go to Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum, and these are glamorous places. Last but not least, I will go to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I am happy to show you this.