Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I am a student , I have a lots of classmate , Xiao YaoYao is my classmate . She wear a shirt is pink , her shoes are black and white . She is coat is red and beautiful , I like it very much .

Corrected essay:
I am a student. I have a lot of classmates. Xiao Yaoyao is my classmate. She wears a pink shirt. Her shoes are black and white. Her coat is red and beautiful. I like it very much.