Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gao feng is a soccer fans . He has got four soccers. He has some soccer start's photos. But he only watch soccer competiton at home . Mike and Dave is Gao feng friend. Mike like playing basketball. doesn't like ping-pong . he feel that is so boring. And Dave like soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball. The reason why he doesn't like it, that is he fell it difficult.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng is a soccer fan. He has got four footballs. He has some soccer stars' photos. But he only watches soccer competitions at home. Mike and Dave are Gao Feng's friends. Mike likes playing basketball but doesn't like ping-pong. He feels that it is so boring. And Dave likes soccer, too. He doesn't like baseball. The reason why he doesn't like it is that he finds it difficult.