Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
GaoFen is a soccer fan. He has four soccers and many soccer stars pictures. But he never play soccer. He has two friends Mike and Dave. Dave like play soccer too, but he can't play basketball. Mike like basketball, but he can't play ping-pong.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng is a soccer fan. He has four soccer balls and many soccer stars' pictures. But he never plays soccer. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Dave likes to play soccer too, but he can't play basketball. Mike likes basketball, but he can't play ping-pong.