Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
I'm Tina. It's 3:00 pm. I am going shopping with my parents. Look, there is a little girl; she is buying some food she likes. A young lady is looking at a dress. My mother is trying the shoes. And my father is waiting for my mother on the sofa.

Corrected essay:
I'm Tina. It's 3:00 p.m. I am going shopping with my parents. Look, there is a little girl. She is buying some food she likes. A young lady is looking at a dress. My mother is trying on the shoes. And my father is waiting for my mother on the sofa.