Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have a classmate , her coat is beautiful . I like it very match . She is wears two shoes , the shoes are black and white . I like her .

Corrected essay:
I have a classmate, and her coat is beautiful. I like it very much. She is wearing shoes, and the shoes are black and white. I like her.