Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It is 3 o'clock. I am Linda. I am going to a shopping centre. The shopping centre is so busy. I see a little gril is buying some food on supermaket. I see a young lidy is looking the nice dress on the clothes shop. My mother is trying the shoes on the shoes shop. And my father is waiting my mother on the sofa.

Corrected essay:
It is 3 o'clock. I am Linda. I am at a shopping centre. The shopping centre is so busy. I see a little girl buying some food at the supermarket. I see a young lady looking at a nice dress in the clothes shop. My mother is trying on shoes in the shoe shop. And my father is waiting for my mother on the sofa.