Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hello, everyone. My name is Tommy. I'll tell you what I did last weekend. On Saturday, I got up at 7:00 and it was early. After breakfast, I played with my friends in the park. I was very happy. An hour later, we walked to the basketball playground and played basketball. On Sunday, I did my homework in the morning. And I cleaned the room with my parents after doing homework. In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to realxed myself. This is my life of the last weekend.

Corrected essay:
Hello, everyone. My name is Tommy. I'll tell you what I did last weekend. On Saturday, I got up at 7:00 and it was early. After breakfast, I played with my friends in the park. I was very happy. An hour later, we walked to the basketball court and played basketball. On Sunday, I did my homework in the morning. And I cleaned the room with my parents after doing homework. In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to relax. This is my life of last weekend.