Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
I plan to go to Beijing on holiday. First, I'm going to Tian'anmen Square. I think there will be many people in here. Next, I want to have some delicious special. Like Beijing Roast Duck. Finally, I will go to the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. They are both big. I want to here early. I will have fun on holiday. Do you come with me?

Corrected essay:
I plan to go to Beijing on holiday. First, I'm going to Tian'anmen Square. I think there will be many people there. Next, I want to have some delicious specials, like Beijing Roast Duck. Finally, I will go to the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. They are both famous. I want to be there early. I will have fun on holiday. Do you come with me?