Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
I'm Tina and I am very busy on Monday. I get up aat 6:00a. m and I have bath. I have breakfast at 6:30a.m.And then I go to school with my friends. I begin have lessons at 7:30a.m.I am drawing pictures and reading books. I have lunch at 12:00 o'clock. In the afternoon, I play balls and toys. And then I go back home at 5:00p.m.And I go to sleep at 9:00p.m.

Corrected essay:
I'm Tina and I am very busy on Monday. I get up at 6:00 a.m. and I have a bath. I have breakfast at 6:30 a.m. And then I go to school with my friends. I begin to have lessons at 7:30 a.m. I draw pictures and read books. I have lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon, I play with balls and toys. And then I go back home at 5:00 p.m. And I go to sleep at 9:00 p.m.