Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Amy is my classmate. She is a beautiful girl. Today she waer a pink drees, wear white shoes. She say : " Is I beautiful ? " We say : "Yes, you is very beautiful! "

Corrected essay:
Amy is my classmate. She is a beautiful girl. Today she wears a pink dress and white shoes. She says,"Am I beautiful?" We say, "Yes, you are very beautiful!"