Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and l went to the park for a picnic. It began to rain in the afternoon. I forgot to bring my umbrella and got wet. I feel cold and have a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctorsaid I had a fever. He gave me medicine and told me to go home and have a good rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park for a picnic. It began to rain in the afternoon. I forgot to bring my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me medicine and told me to go home and have a good rest.