Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hello! My name is Emily. This is my family's pohoto. This my father Bai Yuhao, he is tall and fat. This is my mother Xu Linxuan, she is tall and thin, she is very beautiful. This is my brother Si Chuxuan. He is smart and thin.

Corrected essay:
Hello! My name is Emily. This is my family's photo. This is my father Bai Yuhao. He is tall and fat. This is my mother Xu Linxuan. She is tall and thin, and she is very beautiful. This is my brother Si Chuxuan. He is smart and thin.