Writing prompt: Writing
Last Friday afternoon, your class participated in an interesting extracurricular activity. The activities included sports, various interest groups, and an English corner. These activities are beneficial for students' overall development. Please write an English narrative describing this interesting extracurricular activity.
Writing hints: out-class activity; be interested in; take part in; development; English corner

Student essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our class held an interesting out-class activity. We we're interested in it. It has P.E, English corner and so on. We took part in it and development.

Corrected essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our class held an interesting out-class activity. We were interested in it. It had P.E., English corner and so on. We took part in it and developed.