Writing prompt: Assume you are organizing an international festival, and your friends will come to help. Please describe how you and your friends will organize the festival. Write a short essay of about 60 words on this topic.
Writing hints: Frank will help carry boxes; John will buy some drinks; Dale will send emails; Jack will play the violin.

Student essay:
There will be an international festival. Many people are busying in prepare it. Frank will help carry boxes, that's why he is strong. John will buy some drinks for all of people. Dale will send emails for competitions all around the world. What about Jack? He will play the violin. He i good at it.

Corrected essay:
There will be an international festival. Many people are busy preparing for it. Frank will help carry boxes. That's why he is strong. John will buy some drinks for all of them. Dale will send emails for competitions all around the world. What about Jack? He will play the violin. He is good at it.