Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
I 'm Lin Chen. This Summer I will going to Bei Jing with my family. First, we will going to Tian'anmen Square. We can see the flag. Second, we will going to the Palace Museum. We can see many many beautiful building. Last we will going to eat some Beijing Roast Duck.

Corrected essay:
I'm Lin Chen. This summer I will go to Beijing with my family. First, we will go to Tian'anmen Square. We can see the flag. Second, we will go to the Palace Museum. We can see many beautiful buildings. Lastly, we will go to eat some Beijing Roast Duck.