Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Family Hello, I'm Emily, I'm11 I'm thin and tall, I have a big family, have Mom Daddy and Sister, My mom is stirt, My daddy is tall and thin hi is strong, My sister is 8 she is smart and quite. This is my family, I love my family

Corrected essay:
Hello, I'm Emily. I'm 11. I'm thin and tall. I have a big family, and I have my mom, my daddy, and my sister. My mom is short. My daddy is tall and thin. He is strong. My sister is 8. She is smart and quiet. This is my family. I love my family.