Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look! This is Amy. She wear pure white is shirt. She wear white is socks. She wear shoes. Amy is very beautiful at today.

Corrected essay:
Look! This is Amy. She wears a pure white shirt. She wears white socks. She wears shoes. Amy is very beautiful today.