Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
Hi! I'm Milly. My father likes reading and he is tallest in our home. My mother likes to see the movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. And I likes to do some games with dogs.

Corrected essay:
Hi! I'm Milly. My father likes reading and he is the tallest in our home. My mother likes to see movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. And I like to play some games with my dogs.