Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Tim is my classmate. he wears a red cap and a beautiful blue shirt . her shoes is white. he likes color is purple.

Corrected essay:
Tim is my classmate. He wears a red cap and a beautiful blue shirt. His shoes are white. He likes the color purple.