Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gao Fen is a soccer fans. He has four soccers and he has so many soccer star's picture. He never play soccer. He only watch match on TV. He has two friends Mike and Dave

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng is a soccer fan. He has four soccer balls and he has so many soccer stars' pictures. He never plays soccer. He only watches matches on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave.