Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look, the boy is handsome, he is my friend. He wears a pure white shirtand a pair of blue shoes, they are beautiful, He very likes blue, but I can't like.

Corrected essay:
Look, the boy is handsome. He is my friend. He wears a pure white shirt and a pair of blue shoes. They are beautiful. He likes blue very much, but I don't.