Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
My name is Lin Chen. There are three people in my family. My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher. This summer holiday, we are going to Beijing. We will visit Tian'anmen Square. We plan to visit the Palace Museum. W also will taste Beijing Roast Duck. It is delicious. China is a beautiful country. Welcome to china. Come and join to us.

Corrected essay:
My name is Lin Chen. There are three people in my family. My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher. This summer holiday, we are going to Beijing. We will visit Tian'anmen Square. We plan to visit the Palace Museum. We will also taste Beijing Roast Duck. It is delicious. China is a beautiful country. Welcome to China. Come and join us.