Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my friend. Her name is Gao. Today she wears a pink shirt. A pair of purte white shoes . It's very beautiful. I very like it

Corrected essay:
This is my friend. Her name is Gao. Today she wears a pink shirt and a pair of pure white shoes. They are very beautiful. I like them very much.