Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Oh No! Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friend. Suddenly, there was rain and I doesn't bring an umbrella. So, I got wet. I felt very cold and headache. My bring me to hospital. The doctor said: “You are fever. " He gived me some medicines and let me have a good rest.

Corrected essay:
Oh No! Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friend. Suddenly, there was rain and I didn't bring an umbrella. So, I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache. My friends brought me to the hospital. The doctor said, "You have a fever." He gave me some medicine and let me have a good rest.