Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
My mother is very excited . She very like goes shopping. She buy many things , she buy a bag, a dress, a shouse. . . . . . She is very happy.

Corrected essay:
My mother is very excited. She likes going shopping very much. She buys many things. She buys a bag, a dress, a pair of shoes... She is very happy.