Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic with my friehds in park. Afternoon, the sky began raining, but I forgot to take an umbrella and I got wet. I felt very cold and headache. My friends took me to a hospital and the doctor told me I had a fever. He took some medicine to me and let me go home to had a rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, it began to rain, but I forgot to take an umbrella and I got wet. I felt very cold and had a headache. My friends took me to a hospital and the doctor told me I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and let me go home to have a rest.