Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hello, everyone. His is my firend, he wear white T-sher blue shoess. He is beautiful . I like it

Corrected essay:
Hello, everyone. He is my friend. He wears a white T-shirt and blue shoes. He is beautiful. I like him.