Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
I am Emily. Look at this family photo. The one with black hair is my mother. Besude my mother is my handsome father. Theone on thefar left of the picture is my elder brother. Hefavourite sport is skateboarding.

Corrected essay:
I am Emily. Look at this family photo. The one with black hair is my mother. Beside my mother is my handsome father. The one on the far left of the picture is my elder brother. His favourite sport is skateboarding.