Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is downing. All kind of colour's coat have 30 yuan, shorts have 20 yuan, skirts have 25 yuan. Big bags have 35 yuan, small bags have20 yuan. And have many bueatiful shoes and dresses in it, wellcome in it shopping.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a sale. All kinds of colored sweaters sell for 30 yuan. Shorts sell for 20 yuan, and shirts sell for 25 yuan. Big bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags sell for 20 yuan. And there are many beautiful shoes and dresses in it. Welcome to shop in it.