Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
Now is 3:00 p.m.Linda see a little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. And Linda's mother is trying the shoes. Her father is staying on the sofa and wait for her mother.

Corrected essay:
Now it is 3:00 p.m. Linda sees a little girl buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. And Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Her father is staying on the sofa and waiting for her mother.