Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
My next weekend Welcome to my weekend plan! So I'm happy that I'will fast show you. On Saturday, I will visit my grandparent with my mom and dad, then I will clean house for helping my grandparent. It's a busy but happy day! On Sunday, I will play computer game that can hepl me have a perfect rest. When it's afternoon, I will play football with my friend, it'e good for my healthy. What a good plan! How about your plan?

Corrected essay:
My next weekend
Welcome to look at my weekend plan! So I'm happy that I will show you soon. On Saturday, I will visit my grandparents with my mom and dad, and then I will clean the house to help my grandparents. It's a busy but happy day! On Sunday, I will play computer games that can help me have a perfect rest. When it's afternoon, I will play football with my friend. It's good for my health. What a good plan! How about your plan?