Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
In the 7:40am I get up and wash my teeth from 8:30 to 9:45 I read English texts in the day time I do my homework in the afternoon I take exercise clean house and cook food after supper I watch TV or movies this is my winter hoilday What about you?

Corrected essay:
At 7:40 am, I get up and brush my teeth. From 8:30 a.m. to 9:45 a.m., I read English texts. In the daytime, I do my homework. In the afternoon, I take exercise, clean the house and cook food. After supper I watch TV or movies. This is my winter holiday. What about you?