Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
This store is having a big sale. Very favorable, sweaters of various colors are only sold in 30 yuan, shorts are only sold in 20 yuan, and shirts are only sold in 25 yuan. Big bag 35, small bag 20, and many shoes, welcome to buy.

Corrected essay:
This store is having a big sale, and it is very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are only sold for 30 yuan, shorts are only sold for 20 yuan, and shirts are only sold for 25 yuan. Big bags are 35 yuan, small bags are 20 yuan, and there are many shoes. You are welcome to buy.