Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
There are 4 people in my family, : both of them have different hobbies. My father is the tallest in our family. He likes reading best, he always reads different kinds of books in his free time. My mother likes to see the movies, she likes comdy best. My sister likes muddy puddles. I like to do some games with my dogs, my dog is very clever and all of us like it.

Corrected essay:
There are 4 people in my family. All of them have different hobbies. My father is the tallest in our family. He likes reading best, and he always reads different kinds of books in his free time. My mother likes to see movies, and she likes comedy best. My sister likes muddy puddles. I like to play games with my dogs. My dog is very clever and all of us like it.