Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
3 o'clock afternoon, Linda is seeing some people who are doing something. First, she see a little girl, the girl is buying some food, then, she see a young lady, the lady is looking at dress. Finally, Linda's mom are trying the shoes, Linda's father is waiting for them who stay on the sofa.

Corrected essay:
At 3 o'clock in the afternoon, Linda sees some people who are doing something. First, she sees a little girl. The girl is buying some food. Then, she sees a young lady. The lady is looking at a dress. Finally, Linda's mom is trying on the shoes, and Linda's father, who is staying on the sofa, is waiting for them.