Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My calssmate wears her new shirt. It's pink. She like it. She wears her shoes . They are white . It's beautiful. She like it.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears her new shirt. It's pink. She likes it. She wears her shoes. They are white. They're beautiful. She likes them.