Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
I had a busy weekend last week. On Saturday morning I got up early. Then I rode a bike to park and I had fun plying in the park. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends. On Sundaymorning. I did my homework at home the I cleaned my room. In the evening, I watched TV. What a busy weekend!

Corrected essay:
I had a busy weekend last week. On Saturday morning, I got up early. Then I rode a bike to the park and I had fun when playing in the park. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends. On Sunday morning, I did my homework at home and then I cleaned my room. In the evening, I watched TV. What a busy weekend!