Writing prompt: Written Expression. Assume you are Lin Chen and have just made a new pen pal named Ted. Please write a letter to him describing your personal background, family situation, and your plan to visit Beijing over the summer. Writing hints: Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum, Beijing Roast Duck.
Dear Ted,
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Welcome to China. Have a good day!
Yours,
Lin Chen

Student essay:
Hello, dear Ted. I'm a girl. And I'm live in Xian. I have a brother. We are going to Beijing. I'm plan to Tian'anmen and the Place Museum. And I want to taste the Beijing Roats Duck.

Corrected essay:
Hello, Ted. I'm a girl. And I live in Xi'an. I have a brother. We are going to Beijing. I'm planning to go to Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. And I want to taste the Beijing Roast Duck.