Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My friend Amy wear a blue shirt and white skirt . she thinks white colours match any colour. She also wear a pair yellow shoes . She also like yellow colours She is very beautiful. I like her wear

Corrected essay:
My friend Amy wears a blue shirt and a white skirt. She thinks white matches any colour. She also wears a pair of yellow shoes. She also likes yellow. She is very beautiful. I like her wear.