Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3:00, Linda is in a shop hall, she sees a little girl is buying some food, she sees a young lady is looking at a pretty dress. Look at the shoes shop! Who's that woman? Haha, she is Linda's mother. She's trying the shoes. Linda's father is staying the sofa, he is waiting for Linda's mother.

Corrected essay:
It's 3:00 p.m., Linda is in a shopping hall, and she sees a little girl buying some food. She sees a young lady looking at a pretty dress. Look at the shoe shop! Who's that woman? Haha, she is Linda's mother. She's trying on the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa. He is waiting for Linda's mother.