Writing prompt: Writing.
Assume you are Annie. You have recently moved to a new place and made many friends. Based on the hints in the picture below, write a short essay introducing your friends.
My friends
My name is Annie. Last month, I came here.________
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Student essay:
I have many friends. My first friend, she likes reading, so she has lot of books. My second friend, she likes wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses. My last friend, she likes listening music, so she has too many DVDs.

Corrected essay:
I have many friends. My first friend likes reading, so she has a lot of books. My second friend likes to wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses. My last friend likes listening to music, so she has too many DVDs.