Writing prompt: The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.
Writing hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time

Student essay:
Tomorrow is Sunday. I want to clean my room on Sunday. Visit my grandparents. Fly kites with friends. Listen to the weather forecast. I will have a good weekend. Have fun.

Corrected essay:
Tomorrow is Sunday. I want to clean my room on Sunday, visit my grandparents, fly kites with friends and listen to the weather forecast. I will have a good weekend and have fun.