Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
I go on a picnic today, but it's rainy. And I'm not umbrella. So I get wet. Then I'm fever.

Corrected essay:
I went on a picnic last Sunday, but it was rainy. And I didn't have an umbrella. So I got wet. Then I had a fever.