Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
last weekend, I and my friends go to a park for a picnic. Afternoo is rain, I don't have an umbrella, I get wet.

Corrected essay:
Last weekend, my friends and I went to a park for a picnic. In the afternoon, it was rainy, but I didn't have an umbrella. I got wet.