Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Writing hints: summer vacation, village, river, go fishing, tree house...; Reference sentence patterns: There was... There were...
Assume you are Jimmy; based on the picture and hints, describe what you saw and did at your aunt's house last summer vacation.

Student essay:
Hi, I'm Jimmy. Last summer vacation I went to my aunt's home. She lives in a big village and there is a river near here. I always went to the river to fishing. That is the funniest thing for me. There also have a tree house. We like went to here and do everything that made us happy. How a interesting summer vacation!

Corrected essay:
Hi, I'm Jimmy. Last summer vacation I went to my aunt's home. She lives in a big village and there is a river near there. I always went to the river to fish. That was the funniest thing for me. There was also a tree house. We liked to go there and do everything that made us happy. What an interesting summer vacation!