Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, it was rain. I hadn't got umbrella, so I got wet. I felt cold and had got a headache. My friends went to the hospital with me. The doctor sad I have got fever, and he give me medicine. I had a rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, I had a picnic with my friends in the park. In the afternoon, it was rainy. I hadn't got an umbrella, so I got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends went to the hospital with me. The doctor said I had got a fever, and he gave me some medicine. I had a rest.