Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Hello! l'm Gao Fong, I like football. I have two good friends. One name is Mike and one name is Dave. Mike likes basketball, he doesn't like ping-pong. Dave likes soccer, he doesn't baseball. I have two good friends.

Corrected essay:
Hello! I'm Gao Feng, and I like football. I have two good friends. One's name is Mike and the other's name is Dave. Mike likes basketball. He doesn't like ping-pong. Dave likes soccer. He doesn't like baseball. I have two good friends.