Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hi, I'm Emily. I'm ten-year-old. That hand some man is my father John. He is 45 year old. This beautiful woman is my mother Anna. She is an English teacher in my school and that boy is my brother paul. He like play football very much. Who is that girl? It is me

Corrected essay:
Hi, I'm Emily. I'm ten years old. That handsome man is my father John. He is 45 years old. This beautiful woman is my mother Anna. She is an English teacher in my school and that boy is my brother Paul. He likes to play football very much. Who is that girl? It is me.