Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hello, I am ben. I have a good friend, his name Lilei. He likes different clothes and colors. He has a white shirt and a pair of black shoes. He also have three pairs of ieans. He favorite dress is blue sportwear.

Corrected essay:
Hello, I am Ben. I have a good friend, and his name is Li Lei. He likes different clothes and colors. He has a white shirt and a pair of black shoes. He also has three pairs of jeans. His favorite outfit is blue sportswear.