Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
At three o'clock in the afternoon. Linda in the shop whit her mother and father. In the shop Limda after seeing a little girl is buying some food, a young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying the shoes. She's father is staying on the sofa reading a book, and waiting for her mom.

Corrected essay:
At three o'clock in the afternoon, Linda is in the shop with her mother and father. In the shop, Linda sees a little girl buying some food and a young lady looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Her father is staying on the sofa, reading a book, and waiting for her mom.