Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
At3:00p.m.I am looking alittle girl isbuying some food. Look! A young lady is looking at the dress. My mother is trying shoes now. Oh! Myfather is staying at sofe wait foy us

Corrected essay:
At 3:00 p.m., I see a little girl buying some food. Look! A young lady is looking at the dress. My mother is trying on shoes now. Oh! My father is staying on the sofa and waiting for us.