Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3 p.m.based on information from Linda below. A little girl buying some food now, and a young lady looking at a dress now too. Her mother trying the shoes now, ang her father staying on the sofa now , too.

Corrected essay:
It's 3 p.m. Based on the information from Linda below, a little girl is buying some food now, and a young lady is looking at a dress now. Her mother is trying on the shoes now, and her father is staying on the sofa now.