Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Hello. My name is Mary. I have most classmeat. Amy is my best friend. She is very pretty. She wear pink shirt and white shoe. She has the beautiful eyrs. I like her.

Corrected essay:
Hello. My name is Mary. I have many classmates. Amy is my best friend. She is very pretty. She wears a pink shirt and white shoes. She has beautiful eyes. I like her.