Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear a pink and lovely shirt, wear a pair of white shoes. They are beautiful, I like them.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a pink and lovely shirt and a pair of white shoes. They are beautiful, and I like them.