Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
This is my classroom , I have a lot of classmates . Xiao YaoYao is my best classmate . She wears a pink shirt and a red coat , is so beautiful . I like her shoes . The shoes are blue and white .

Corrected essay:
This is my classroom. I have a lot of classmates. Xiao Yaoyao is my best classmate. She wears a pink shirt and a red coat. She is so beautiful. I like her shoes. The shoes are blue and white.