Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I have a friend. he wear a blue shirt and the white beautiful shoes. He like hjs shoes very much.

Corrected essay:
I have a friend. He wears a blue shirt and beautiful white shoes. He likes his shoes very much.