Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My name is peng si han . this is my friend chen ye gia. she is very happy on today, she is wear a bright red shirt, she is very like this color, and she is wear a pair of black shoes. It is very beautiful . I also very lovely.

Corrected essay:
My name is Peng Sihan. This is my friend Chen Yegia. She is very happy today. She wears a bright red shirt, and she likes this color very much, and she wears a pair of black shoes. It is very beautiful. I am also very lovely.