NH Comment on Chapter II
Overall Report - 9/3/57

Page 2, End Para. 1

Is this where the designation of section "II" should go?

Page 2, Last para.

Question level of contrast between "baby boom" and "psychological dilemmas of an increasingly complex society".

Possible approach: "The causes of the explosive increase which has taken place since the end of World War II are not entirely clear and have confounded population experts. Some of its causes ... at the age of 22."

Page 3, Top of page

What does "these phenomena" refer to? Possible change:

"It seems evident that the rapid population growth is also in part a consequence of the nation's ..."

Page 3, Line 4

The discussion of people more for security than adventure -- performance vs. status really seems thrown in at this point.

(Consider putting whole "quality -quantity" thought in one section for strength, etc.)

Page 3, Line 12 and 17

Say the same thing re advancement of one grade.

Page 8, last two sentences continuing para.

Why bring farm solution in at this point? Make previous part of para. more positive would solve the negative problem.

Page 8, middle of middle para.

Cut "Those who immigrated here at the turn of the century are beginning to disappear."

Page 8, Last line

Cut "from farms to cities". Doesn't follow with rearrangement of paragraphs.