NOTES ON ZORA'S FILMS

I. (Children's Games)

Cut circling at beginning.

Two spots with hand shadows on part of screen.

Dance spot is good.

II. (Kossula)

Too much talking at the woodpile.

After woodpile film is spoiled--only first half is good.

III. (Games and Man with Ax)

Games are good. Should be combined with I.

Titles held by kids do not show.

Ax man light blurred.

IV. (Logging Camp)

Good.

Train too fast at first.

Light blurred at end.

V. (Games)

Again titles held by children do not show.

Hand right in middle again darkening film.

Close up at end not clear.

VI. (Seems to be Kossula)

Very good.

Close ups of story-teller excellent.