Answers to proof reader's questions.

Page V (Dedication). Yes, capitalize the first word- "To."

vii. O.K. Use initial to begin the foreword, after the manner of the stories that follow.

Caps of the body type for Foreword heading, O.K.

6, 7, etc. Poem titles in caps of the body type, O.K.

No, under no circumstance do I want the title of the preceding story used as the running head for right hand poem pages. Perhaps it would be a good idea to omit heads on these pages altogether- that is, simply use the poem and its title. And, likewise, omit CANE as a running head for the left hand pages.

Author's suggestions.

vi. I do not like the idea of the acknowledgement page being directly opposite Waldo Frank's Foreword. Change this by all means. If you wish to retain vi as the page number for the acknowledgements, then let two blank pages come in between. The first page of the Foreword would thus be ix. Or, let page vi be blank, and shift the acknowledgements to xiii. In this case, a blank page would have to follow, and the Contents would be xv. Anyway you wish, but don't let the acknowledgements grate against Frank's Foreword.

Two more magazines are added to the ones already given:

R **Prairie**, and **SAN**.

xiv. A blank page should follow Contents. The page containing 🕥 should be a right hand page, and; under the present arrangement, its number would be xv.

xvi. Blank.

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Author's suggestions.

Page 1, 3. No question mark after, "O cant you see it."

67, 68, Blank.

69.

70. Blank.

71. Seventh Street.

79. Double space, as per note on margin.

96, 97. If possible, I should like to have John's dream set ixxzym smaller- that is, type the size of the poem type.

140. Double space, as per note on margin, if possible.

O.K.

201. Insertion O.K.

May 1, 1923.

Jean Toomer.