premise: May was visiting the beach in Fredonia.
initial: She loved the clear, warm blue water.
counterfactual: It was the middle of winter and freezing!
original_ending: The lake was so inviting! May jumped in and swam for a few hours. She was tired afterwards.
edited_ending: The lake didn't look inviting.May had hope to jump in and swim for a few hours.She was disappointed.<SEP>But, the lake was so inviting!May jumped in and swam for a few minutes.She was tired afterwards.<SEP>The lake was so inviting for ice fishing.May dropped a line in and fished for a few hours.She was tired afterwards.