premise: The first time I went on a boat was with a family vacation.
initial: We were all excited because it was my first time.
counterfactual: I was so seasick I stayed in the hold the entire trip and never saw the ocean.
original_ending: Unfortunately I fell over the side railing and almost drowned. My cousin jumped in to save me and dragged me out. I've been afraid of the water ever since.
edited_ending: I don't want to fell over the side railing and get drowned.I have no one to save me and dragged me out.I've been afraid of the water since I was little.<SEP>I finally came out to get off the boat at the dock.I fell off the boat, but my cousin jumped in and saved me.I've been afraid of the water ever since.<SEP>It was pretty disappointing.I decided that I didn't want to go on a boat ever again.We'll have to choose a different family vacation next time.