Input (grade 13): However, Austen's novels did not conform to certain strong Romantic and Victorian British preferences, which required that "powerful emotion (be) authenticated by an egregious display of sound and color in the writing".
Output (grade 11): However, Austen's works were not exactly what her Romantic and Victorian British audience liked. They wished for "powerful emotion (be) authenticated by an egregious display of sound and color in the writing".