 The multiverse-traveling Monitor approaches Deegan, commends him on his "vision", and gives  the Book of Destiny to him, granting him reality rewriting power.
<fluency>  The multiverse-traveling Monitor approaches Deegan, commends him on his "vision", and gives  the Book of Destiny to him, granting him reality rewriting power.
 The multiverse-traveling Monitor approaches Deegan, commends him on his "vision", and gives him the Book of Destiny to him, granting him reality rewriting power.