 Even though “ [M]ost democratic socialists recognize that strict equality of incomes is unworkable and also unjust ” ,(p211) extreme disparities seem to be “immoral.” Small entrepreneurs are OK but corporate salaries are “obscene.”
<fluency>  Even though “ [M]ost democratic socialists recognize that strict equality of incomes is unworkable and also unjust ” ,(p211) extreme disparities seem to be “immoral.” Small entrepreneurs are OK but corporate salaries are “obscene.”
 Even though " [M]ost democratic socialists recognize that strict equality of incomes is unworkable and also unjust ” ,(p211) extreme disparities seem to be “immoral.” Small entrepreneurs are OK but corporate salaries are “obscene.”