 First, female filmmakers  especially female screenplay writers  are instrumental for movies to have better women representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.
<fluency>  First, female filmmakers  especially female screenplay writers  are instrumental for movies to have better women representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.
 First, female filmmakers especially female screenplay writers are instrumental for movies to have better female representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.