 Several unanswered objections mark the story as a possible hoax: Clewer enters and exits his car several times in the story - if he opened the car by touching its presumably metal lock, he would surely release some electricity into the car through his hand;
<fluency>  Several unanswered objections mark the story as a possible hoax: Clewer enters and exits his car several times in the story - if he opened the car by touching its presumably metal lock, he would surely release some electricity into the car through his hand;
 Several unanswered objections mark the story as a possible hoax: Clewer enters and exits his car several times in the story — if he opened the car by touching its presumably metal lock, he would surely release some electricity into the car through his hand;