 This version is the head of a science corporation called MechaBioCon , and captured the Scorpion when he came to her looking for a way to have his mechanical tail removed.
<fluency>  This version is the head of a science corporation called MechaBioCon , and captured the Scorpion when he came to her looking for a way to have his mechanical tail removed.
 This version is the head of a science corporation called MechaBioCon who captured Scorpion when he came to her looking for a way to have his mechanical tail removed.