 First, female filmmakers  especially female screenplay writers  are instrumental for movies to have better women representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.
<fluency>  First, female filmmakers  especially female screenplay writers  are instrumental for movies to have better women representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.
 First, female filmmakers , especially female screenplay writers are instrumental for movies to have better women representation, but the percentage of female filmmakers has been very low.