the email controversy is in the wrong section my bold edit was reverted by and i was directed to previous discussions in addition to what i believe were improvements to grammar and sentence structure i moved the email controversy sections to the bottom of the u s secretary of state section where it seems to belong see this version i'm puzzling over the reasoning for having an oddball miscellaneous section called clinton foundation e mails issue and other activities sort of like monkey grapefruits and things found on a chevrolet to my ears this was previously discussed here talk hillary clinton archive location and section header relative to emails controversy i'm pinging and who were involved in this previous discussion from a reader's perspective i find it jarring to read about this relatively major controversy outside of the context of the part of mrs clinton's career in which it happened mrx