i edited before registering the apollo computer page it's slightly less bad now but it's still bad as i didn't want to wholesale dump someone else's work i had trouble with a just correcting the errors as i think the second section could use a different approach it's full of unsupported assertions and opinion and reading it i wonder how familiar the author really is with apollo the source of this page is confusing was it scraped from somewhere but someone put in a lot of citation needed i'm reluctant to just wholesale rewrite it if the original author is about it fix it it's not like my edits so far are anything great either i just did something quick and i need to check some facts w friends so what's the polite right thing to do here