crown of ptolemy hi there methychroma i just went and briefly looked over your draft of the crown of ptolemy article wp pjtf has been working towards and since there's such a large backlog on articles for review i wanted to give you some advice so it passes quickly and easily on the first try you might want to remove the second references section if you can find any other references and double check that all your references meet wikipedia's citation guidelines that would be really great citing the short story itself could also be good easy bib could help if you don't actually own a copy the category short stories does not exist it could be an idea to remove that category from the draft very minor though also make sure the page is categorized somehow under rick riordan check out category rick riordan to see how similar articles have been done see if you can get the plot section shortened at all and made more general so outsiders who do not know the series can understand it more easily put more wikilinks in the plot section and make sure the page is well linked to pages like the kane chronicles main characters and applicable percy jackson pages see if you can get a picture of the cover uploaded and put into the article there may also be a rick riordan interview or some such that could provide you with info to make a section about the story's production or some online reviews for reception try kirkus common sense media and here this is actually the most important suggestion i have because the notability that comes from a novel's real world reception is most important for an article under review i'm sure you've already done most of these things but i just wanted to help you catch anything you did miss good luck and in case i forgot to say it looks really great