ga review see here for what the criteria are and here for what they are not i've completed a thorough and comprehensive review and re review of your article and i find that it meets the criteria outlined for passage to good article status prior to its passage however i have shared below some comments and questions that should first be addressed it has been a privilege to review this article and i look forward to your feedback thanks talk it is reasonably well written a prose no copyvios spelling and grammar b mos for lead layout word choice fiction and lists it is factually accurate and verifiable a reference section b citations to reliable sources c or it is broad in its coverage a major aspects b focused it follows the neutral point of view policy fair representation without bias it is stable no edit wars etc it is illustrated by images and other media where possible and appropriate a images are tagged and non free content have fair use rationales b appropriate use with suitable captions overall pass fail lede the image of the play's book cover is appropriately tagged with a media data and non free use rationale and a book cover copyright license this is therefore acceptable for inclusion in this article the template is beautifully formatted and its contents are either cited in the template or in the article's prose per wikipedia manual of style lead section the lede is stands alone as a concise overview of the article the lead defines the play establishes context for the play explains why the play is notable and summarizes the most important points of the play blackrock should be bolded and italicized in its first mention in the lede paragraph as it is a formal title of a published work like a property of the clan the lede is otherwise well written consists of content that is adequately sourced and verifiable and i have no further comments or questions for this section plot this is a minor suggestion but eleven can be rendered here which would make it consistent with th birthday and year old the three boys are arrested for the sexual assault but not also for her murder if they are also arrested for her murder this should be stated here consider rephrasing as he grabbed a rock and struck her i'd consider adding a comma in the natural pause following in the play's last scene also consider rephrasing as asks his cousin cherie to throw or dispose of the vehicle's keys into ocean when she goes out surfing dump seems like a word to use when disposing of a larger item this section is otherwise well written and i have no further comments or questions for this section development newcastle should be wiki linked to newcastle new south wales here for those of us unfamiliar with nsw's second most populated area lee's family who had learned of the play would probably flow better freewheels is now italicized in the first paragraph of the reception of a property of the clan subsection since it is not italicized elsewhere i would suggest making it consistent throughout the prose high schools doesn'