the status quo version is plenty good enough for anyone who doesn't have an axe to grind time on their hands and loves a fight more than creating a great encyclopedia wikipedia is about making a great encyclopedia and anyone whose efforts clearly hinder or handicap that goal can find themselves dealt with accordingly rex can and will pursue his goals whatever they may be and i can't claim to know them but rest assured everyone else will also pursue their goals expect no less i could go into arguements about what exact phrase is better and which is worse but wikipedia is subject to constant editing and no version is ever final thus anyone arguing ad nauseum for some perfect or trivially better version is just wasting everyone's time