ga review of kitti's hog nosed bat thank you for your time reviewing the article so far i was hoping you could give your quick input on the following two things i tried expanding the lead a bit but now the problem i'm running into is that it's hard to summarize each section of the article without simply repeating information that appears later i suppose this is a consequence of the article being short to begin with any advice concerning your comment about drifting between singular and plural language i'm not sure how to avoid this more than i already have i tried to use singular kitti's hog nosed bat the bat or it wherever possible but in some cases i felt it was necessary to instead use plural for nouns like colonies and populations again thanks for your help talk