hi hi mel i am manas i don't think you would be tracking the names of people whose edits you remove or revert hence i would introduce myself here i was working on the article and more particularly i had written the latter was reverted by you with the comment that it was a personal essay i fully agree with you i am very new to wikipedia and i come from the blogging world where the writing style is more like personal essays my mistakes on wikipedia are more out of habit than intentional or with ulterior motives i would like to change these habits for sure can i expect some help from you a teacher i would like to be a rather long term serious contributor to wikipedia can i request you to tell me the kind of mistakes i made or some tips for better wikipedia contribution in terms of content and style i know you must be a busy person but just in case you happen to have the time thanks regards manas garg manasgarg gmail com