o'brien argentina hi i have rescued your article which was in danger of being deleted as a hoax the first bit was fine and could be backed up by sources which i have added but it was a mistake to put in the facetious bits about pork scratchings and his frustratingly sober mind because a that jokey tone isn't right for a serious encyclopedia and b you made them up in wp terms that's original research and not verifiable it was those that made it look like a hoax don't be discouraged have a look at the guide to writing wp yfa your first article regards