jon martin hi while it's great that you want to contribute to wikipedia there is a whole host of problems with your article which you might want to consider first you have eliminated the redirect to another page but haven't put in a hatnote or anything that will indicate to the reader where that page is but the main problem is that there are no reliable source references that either establish the subject's notability or support any of the text that is written the official website blog twitter etc none of those count there have to be independent third party sources about the guy otherwise the whole thing will get deleted i suggest you get onto that as soon as you can let me know at my talk page if you have any questions cheers