i guess you didn't understand what i meant in my last message i'll try to be more concise the article needs a major rewrite there is not one section posing a problem the entire article is not written in an encyclopedic manner in a neutral tone it presents one side as right and goes out of its way to prove it and then gives a small section of criticism in a way that makes it seem as if the criticism is coming from a small group of people and is unfounded