ideology of the ss ga review finally began stay tuned click here to collect your price ss article i suggest curbing the history section altogether i believe it was called overview a few weeks ago and to me seems like a sort of second lede now that i've told you this it's pretty hard to read and not consider it a second lede which seems rather pointless what's your thoughts click here to collect your price yeah go ahead will copy edit the rest tonight click here to collect your price been very inactive recently mainly because i'm the process of filming a short film you know how it is i plan to make a very large cut in copyediting process tonight as in actually doing it this time peace click here to collect your price sounds good how do you feel about splitting ideology and culture into two sections seems like both subjects have enough historical coverage to have their own section click here to collect your price do what you think best on second thought i've refrained from splitting up the section in two on another note i'm done copyediting all that's in my ss sandbox except for the lede i assume we're gonna re write that once we're finished with the whole article no click here to collect your price the lede may need tweaking later but not right now you can start on the other sections not in your sand box when you wish don't forget about this one cheers i'll have time to continue this weekend and will probably have copyedited the entire article some time by november or perhaps in october click here to collect your price okay it has become apparent to me i will not have the time to work on more than one or two sections tonight but i'll start nevertheless click here to collect your price a barnstar for you the tireless contributor barnstar for copyediting the entire body text of leni riefenstahl and helping me bring the article to ga status i award you the tireless contributor barnstar thanks a million click here to collect your price thanks and congrats on that major undertaking monroe thank you very much for the barnstar as for the dyer reference dyer's short essay charisma was published in but the anthology in which it was included stardom industry of desire was published in trueheartsusie you're welcome as you earned it i have also fixed the cite from your info above cheers