the sense i indicated has been understood ergo my edits are in fact a sensible statement the correct conclusion either way was to delete the sentence as it was irrelevant the separate comment about psycholgical literature whether contradictory or oxymoronic renders again the same sense and conclusion the wider issue on whether psycholgical literature is contradictory or oxymoronic the same thing is also met whether understood by the editor or not serendipitous for that person i suppose or good intuition at least