no this is a group effort wikipedia is a collaborative community and there are no school essays here the article needs to be more professional and adopt a better title besides the references this is all that needs to be done so get off your high horse and accomplish what you want to see done if you have these goals then put yourself to the test of solving this problem that's what i do whenever something perturbs me you're just looking for a fight about something you admittedly care nothing about how about i come by your house and criticise your gardens why you say because they are too fucking ugly and i don't like the way they don't blend in with the neighbours' yards so tacky but i'm only passing by and i've never been down this road before feb utc