hi onel i am referring to the draft article suresh prasad sarbadhikari which has been rejected i understand that i need to make it formal avoid peacock terms which corresponds to words of praise avoid superlatives keep just facts backed by evidence i am years old writing this on my maternal grandfather i am learning and will work on the text as directed however i need help from you on one aspect please identify for me the citation reference numbers that are unacceptable thanks very much goborgunk