regarding mr john richards the rector of datchet do we need the honorific mr source said mr but that was a quote from an older more respectful time removal of honorific more appropriate for talk in quickly became unsafe should the ellipsis be replaced with a colon yes and the other instance another of my tics talk the flow here seems rather breathless and may benefit from additional punctuation the building of two new road bridges victoria bridge slightly upstream and albert bridge slightly downstream which both opened in talk added a couple of commas and a full stop talk it is factually accurate and verifiable a references b citations to reliable sources c or the oxforddnb com reference requires a journal subscription according to wp access to sources this does not ruin the reference but i am wondering is there a free source or a peek preview available online the article fact is sufficiently supported by the brief quote in the footnote it is broad in its coverage a major aspects b focused it follows the neutral point of view policy fair representation without bias it is stable no edit wars etc it is illustrated by images where possible and appropriate a images are tagged and non free images have fair use rationales b appropriate use with suitable captions extra credit given for having the featured article requirement of alt text overall pass fail when there was a cantilevered section extending out to but not quite touching the buckinghamshire pier how large was the gap an inch a handspan i wish i knew i'm pretty sure i've found every mention in the reference works at both windsor and maidenhead libraries but i'm going down tomorrow to check the quotes so i'll have another search then talk how can the bridge be a back door to windsor castle when the castle is some distance away from the crossing i can see how it would have been a convenient back door to the grounds the estate home park back door is i think direct from a source makes sense for me as i understand the context in relation to the distance to london but i can see why a reader not familiar with the topography might think the castle was hard by the ferry it's actually about half a mile away i've changed to back way talk okay that's my review i will watch this space for comments and the article for improvements nice article superb images too bad there isn't one of the divided bridge which shows its idiosyncrasies in greater detail got the note please take your time and forget the seven days of the template's boilerplate