gee telling editors who have worked on the article this article has totally gone to crap in four years is hardly the way to begin a discussion about the changes you want to make how about you stop with the superior attitude which looking at older versions of the article i don't think is merited in any case and start over again with a more collegial point of view i for one won't be considering your substantive suggestions until it's clear that you are interested in building a wp consensus and not in bludgeoning other editors