ethnic taiwanese imperial japan serviceman i noticed you were working on the above new article and i tried to make some edits to improve in my opinion the grammar and other things but since you are still making changes yourself there were edit conflicts so i have decided to wait if after you're happy with the article you would like me to look over it and perform a copy edit please reply on my talk page and i'll be happy to do so this isn't meant as a criticism of your spelling or grammar just one or two issues of style that i feel i could help with talkstalk