ok i at least understand your argument now all of the information is well referenced i have no major problems with shortening the section overall instead of having so many sub sections we could put it all in one paragraph i e nestle have been criticised for buying milk from illegally seized farms reference deforestation reference misleading avertising etc though slightly more detailed than that the marketing of formula was so huge it actually has it's own page and i feel it should not be shortened here at all its how i came to hear of the nestle boycott one of my university lectureers cited it as a case of henous explotation of human rights in the third world i think a reasonalbe amount of people are aware of this scandal do you have any suggestions on shortening the section or shall i go ahead and make changes when i get the time