expanding sections hello i was wondering if there were some users out there that could maybe assist with the expansion of this kingdom hearts article i've been spending the past week trying to cite and expand sections as best i can but i've run into a few walls that i was hoping others might be able to help with the development section is missing information on any actual development of the game itself there's some info in the kingdom hearts series development section but it isn't cited if anyone can find some developer interviews about the game that could be sourced that would help expand that section the manga section is missing information on the japanese publication serialization there are a few statements that i tagged as citation needed that i wasn't able to find any sources for admittedly i wasn't specifically looking for those information but nothing came up in my general searches i'm currently trying to find the proper in game dialog to cite some of the information in the setting and story sections if any body would like to help it would be appreciated one last thing if anybody can get information from or has the kingdom hearts ultimania kingdom hearts ultimania revised edition and or kingdom hearts series ultimania introduction of kingdom hearts ii that could help expand and source the development and versions and merchandise sections i'll keep trying to find information as best i can but i'm having a hard time finding the appropriate information in english and my japanese is limited any help would of course be appreciated but if the list above can be addressed i think it would greatly help in getting this article to good article status and hopefully eventually featured article status gamefaqs has a script and journal text i can't help you much on the other stuff as most of the interviews i find are only relevant to the later games and aren't sourced very well i commend you for your efforts to make a good article thanks for the game script link that made getting the dialog much easier than trying to transcribe it from videos i tired to find appropriate citations and i feel that the general story is cited well enough but others may disagree and add as they see fit i found a little bit of info for some things and added a reference for one item needing citation but am still looking for the others after looking at the kingdom hearts setting section i think it may need a rewrite i think the people from the peer review will say that it is too much like game guide information instead of encyclopedic material i'll try to paraphrase the information there in a separate edit to make any reverts easier in case other editors are unhappy with the result great work overall on setting i wrote that section to emulate the style of final fantasy vii's section but i don't mind your complete rewrite thanks for the copy edit i wasn't too happy with the rewrite i did it looks better now i edited the reception section to create a table of the ratings so that way they weren't just listed one after another if others think that it takes away from the article feel free to revert it i'm thinking of doing a rewrite of the characters section the first two paragraphs read more like gameplay information there is also no mention of the villains i'll do it in a separate edit again in case it doesn't turn out well wow finally some work being done thanks guyinblack for initiating this i've had this article on my to fa list for some time but i never really got around to it anyway i think i'm going to give it a thorough copyedit before adding new stuff thanks please do because i keep finding grammar edits or weird sentences after some of the rewrites i've done i try to remember to fix them but they slip my mind if you're looking for new content to add there is obviously the list above but i also think the introduction could use some expanding if the article is to make further after you made your revisions to the article perhaps we should send it to the peer review to see what else can be done good plan i just reworked the lead into three paragraphs like most fas newli