re well when i first read this article i thought that of it was neutral in tone and informative so if you wrote most of it you did a good job it was only a couple of things i thought were problems thank you for the compliment i did write most of this entry with helpful edits by pisceandreams involving punctuation if you check the history of this page you'll see how many times i've edited myself so as not to make this page sound like a fan page it took a lot of work and merciless self editing i'll agree to cooperate with you in discussing further conflicting edits on this page also again i apologize for obstinance some of it has to do with what we've discussed and some of it has to do with my own personal matters