sorry in re reading my edit summary i can see why you are confused i worded it poorly what i meant to say was that i agreed with the ip user's deletion because that paragraph is unsourced appeared to be a personal account thus violating coi policy and in any case represented an anecdote of no general interest so my edit summary was meant to be a comment on the passage that had been deleted not your restoration of it should i do something to clarify i would not agree with restoring that deletion without some justification