i've made most of the changes you suggested to improve the prose and the flow of the article the second paragraph of the history section is now focused on the effects of the new station after its opening i moved the park and ride and signage info to facilities and took out the death as it is somewhat newsy i also made some changes to the lead and i rewrote the section on the bus routes as i realized that listing the exact routes of six bus routes was probably trivial the one thing i didn't change yet was the nd paragraph of the facilites section as i'm trying to decide on the best place to put the location info for this article and my other cta related ga nom pulaski cta orange line i tried to put that info where it seemed to be in the other train station gas which are remarkably inconsistent as to this and as to formatting in general for that matter i initially used the format in storo station which lists location info under facilities other formats i've seen make location info its own paragraph jordanhill railway station combine all service facilities and location info sturtevant amtrak station or don't even include location info embankment tube station i'm thinking of making location a new section though i'm not sure where exactly in the article it should go otherwise it should probably stay where it is any thoughts reaction creation