i think the tall ships stuff in the article is getting off topic and should properly be in tall ship since it relates primarily to a discussion of tall ships and only secondarily to sail training and i hacked about with the first para for the reason that i was uncomfortable with the word unconventional when from the initial words sail training must once have been very conventional albeit presumably nelson would not have known it by that name i think also you may be being a bit didactic though i've never been sure about the meaning of that word first and foremost sail training is not intended to be like a vacation or with many options out there it can be a difficult choice i'm not sure what advice to give to change anything but it sails close to being a promotional piece albeit of the very highest quality for sail training rather than an encyclopedia article about sail training meanwhile i continue to salute your work in sail related articles and kinda hope that your interests w r t wikipedia broaden since you are clearly something of an asset talk