take a look at hhe current cabalcase focus on the paragraphs i mentionn i hope you undestand i am a bit disapointed in my fellow editors in my opinion edits should be based on facts peter mansfield is not the dominant advocate of the bates method according to the information you will find on the internet reviews amazon com and the thorougnness of his books explaining bates work great you started editing the bm article speak to you soon or not