i just wanted to comment that these other people are not me at any rate i think we should just all calmly try to work this out perhaps if we go through section by section and discuss what main points we want to touch on that way we can come to some sort of an agreement as to what should stay or leave i saw about mention about how to cite things such as vocal abilities and what not i think we can have important info such as that kept in with citation needed at least that way we'll have noted stuff that needs to be eventually sourced out i hope that this helps