introduction i've read and understand the manual of style as it stands the introduction does not provide an accessible overview does not have an acceptable degree of relative emphasis is overly redundant in multiple instances text is repeated verbatim later on please allow my edits to stand in your own talk page neelix you state that the first reason you spend more time editing wikipedia than contributing to academia is that you enjoy the collaborative nature of editing and the way in which articles have several authors however you are the creator and sole contributor to this article and you are reverting my edits without cause