wikipedia has rules about presenting a neutral point of view details can be found at wikipedia neutral point of view the additions you made are not consistent with that policy because they present opinion and speculation as fact apart from that your additions phrases such as let's just say use you to address the reader and have weasel words such as everybody says this creates a tone that is completely inappropriate for an encyclopedia article also there are numerous spelling and grammar errors as well because of this i have restored the older better version of the article