no such thing as false and true in here only positions i agree that the first sentence isen't neutral the weakening control of the ottoman government over its empire in the following years led many armenians to believe that they could gain independence from them too is not neutral but that section could be neutralise at least with words such as 'according to' citing the author davison here could be cited as he covers the armenian situation irronically davison has been placed in the list of 'denialist' by deepblue and their aspiration in his work covering the armenian crises prior to the war this work is really a must read btw the rest of what you write is pov and at this point irrelevent ix