explanation of my recent edits removing bolding and external links within article per wp mos only first word of section titles should be capitalized and ncnm should not be placed on section headings each section is about the subject of the article removal of peacock terms and redundant phrasing extensive unique geared to in its course offerings more universal opens numerous in which students are immersed designed for students with a special affinity wanting a more streamlined graduate experience fully if actually extensive needs a rs that describes it that way likewise with unique or a description of how its unique geared to unless we are talking about gears this is marketing in its course offerings is redundant more universal with an explanation this is unnecessary however universality is a pretty large if vague claim students are immersed describe how program is immersive provide a rs that says it is notable for that designed for students with a special affinity designed for students is a given for a school and special affinity sounds like peacock for interest in wanting a more streamlined graduate experience is marketing peacock speak for shorter smaller course of study fully accredited is assumed if only partially accredited that would be spelled out removed wikilink on word school to article medical school ncnm is not a medical school as described in target article adding ref improve tag the entire academic programs section has only the two refs supporting accreditation the ncnm clinic section is completely unsourced as is the accreditations and associations section and the ncnm history section i placed citation needed tags on some statements that definitely need references these are very specific in addition to the article in general needing improved references additional proposed edits i think expertise in with an expertise in natural medicine should be removed if it can't be supported with a reference expertise is substantial claim for education and training only i am not sure what a holistic chinese medicine education in western medical sciences means since its founding ncnm has sought to preserve and convey the classical modalities of naturopathy and honor the principles that guide naturopathic care could be rephrased to preserve and convey the classical modalities and honor the guiding principles of naturopathy if that preserves the meaning the college is alma mater to over alumni is redundant if your an alumni it's your alma mater