hi nivose i made my first edits to the article today but i think there is still a great deal of work left to do i feel like there are several parts of the narrative which i simply do not understand and much of the rest seems to require significant changes more substantive citations are needed in many sections some important points need to be stated more clearly and prominently some sections need to be pruned for extraneous info and there are several instances of reflection and interpretation which stray from standard encyclopedic tone i don't think this can be fixed quickly but i will try to help and please feel free to wave me off if you would rather do it your own way