comments on ts's suggestions for the record i think the writing of ts on the subject of homosexuality has balance and is well informed i think his emendations to the material that is in place now should be used in the article what he writes really fits the facts as i remember them considering the article again i feel the section on aesthetic realism and poetry is not clear perhaps it's been cut too much we don't know why a way of seeing the world based on poetry does what aesthetic realism says it does i can make some suggestions to clarify it