hello ratnakar kulkarni thanks for the swift reply what about this he became a celebrated hero in britain among most of the people connected to the british raj but unpopular with most members of parliament my reason for suggesting this is that mps voted to forcibly retire dyer from duty with only mps voting to keep him later a dyer supporter carson attempted to pass a motion of mild approval of dyer but was defeated mps against approval mps pro mild approval this suggests that a majority of mps was against dyer all this is covered in the reference please let me know what you think i think adding what i suggest above would balance the introduction yet keep it short