i would appreciate it if everyone would show the courtesy of not changing the text of a carefully negotiated paragraph until everyone has had a chance to respond i do have a life you know and would like to have input into changes made in a text i have countless hours invested in would it hurt to simply revert to the agreed version and politely point people to the subpage to talk about it could we wait oh say at least eight hours there has anyone considered that none of this is relevant do you all want to go back and look at all the works we've cited to see what the majority says huh so i'm putting it back i'll revert it two times in the morning if needed to keep it that way it is not right to wade in and undo careful work please discuss at talk jesus nd paragraph debate avery would you do the honors of moving all new comments here to the subpage