' improving the lot of the poor but firmly entrenching the aristocracy in power gave athens some stability firstly why is your hidden comment in the middle of a sentence what exactly'' are you objecting to secondly why so patronising you can just disagree with the statement there's no need to make pithy comments about 'grade school' which are also completely inappropriate since that was not written by someone who is in 'grade school' whatever that is thirdly if you disagree with it why not change it yourself if you know that this is a misrepresentation of the historical record then you obviously know how it could be re written so just do it instead of carping on about 'grade school' fourthly try to summarise the athenian land crisis and its resolution in four sentences in a way suitable for a summary style article you'll find that there really isn't space to revise it to a current level of understanding fifthly why not use the talk pages to discuss articles that's what they are there for