good work the article has progressed and we are very close to listing the areas that need attention are a building the lead to give an appropriately detailed summary of the article sufficient to provide the general reader with a satisfactory overview this is the priority b trimming some unnecessary detail c including some detail on the other men arrested this is minor and i wouldn't quibble if it wasn't done i think all this is quite achievable in a few days and i'm willing to help out on the work i would hope that the article can be listed before the end of next week ''' tea time'''