thank you your suggestions are good ones as i said we'll see what drove thinks i didn't know it got noticed someplace this and hush were my first articles of any real note i just write to improve the prose where i can correct grammar do housekeeping i don't originate articles at least not so far i've actually spent what feels like lifetimes shortening and tightening up plot sections all over this place but it's a losing battle for most films as fans will just not leave them alone i understand the impulse'this bit is so important to me it just has to be in there' explaining why it can't be gets very old very quickly but i do still try glad to see someone else fighting the good fight tehodson