ilandi my comments were made are on the afd listing but yes i should have made a more detailed comment my only excuse is that i've been on candidates for speedy for the last three hours now and i'm pretty worn out the creator of this article appears sincere about attempting to conform i don't think this will save him but it does earn him a few days grace i am a fairly ruthless deleter deletor sp in general but i try to give people the benefit of the doubt when they argue their case