about the critique the following sandbox version of what i intend to be either a new segment of the friedmann equations fe or of the flrw metric has the working title critique of the universe since it is a critical review of the fe flrw standard model of cosmology it may be able to stand alone with a title like the flrw metric friedmann equations hubble acceleration and dark energy a critique anyway after it has had a few rounds of editing by interested wiki editors it will certainly look a lot different this is only an initial position but the general outline and the tone will survive the title may change however