thank you for being courteous and thorough in your response i also want to thank you for your suggestions on formatting both articles and talk entries admittedly you are more versed in wikipedia policy than i am i've worked hard on creating and editing this page so as not to make it sound like a fan praise page when you made your edits in addition to feeling annoyed which i honestly shouldn't have felt i also felt the page did not flow better it seemed choppy nonetheless i should've cooperated per the wikipedia policies you continued pointing out to me and i didn't i became obstinate in reality i've done the work i set out to do which was to inform people about the particulars of this release however they are phrased in the end i still don't agree with some of the edits you have made i e acoustic instruments as they seem intent on minimizing ms amos' strengths as a musician it's one thing being neutral about a subject and it's another thing minimizing the point of it being a subject to begin with ms amos was not approached by deutsche grammophon because she plays the piano but because she plays it with skill in the midst of my writing this i've decided that i will be undoing you edit once again