northern hemisphere hello there look at this sentence there is a useless triple enhancement nowr z is the traditional iranian new year holiday celebrated by iranian peoples having its roots in ancient iran it's great to make reference to the origin of a festival but this seemed a little overprotective i would keep the reference to the origin having its roots in anciant iran and change the sentence in the following way nowr z persian is a traditional new year holiday having its roots in ancient iran and being celebrated by various people in the northern hemisphere partly as the day marking the beginning of spring yours