article completely rewritten to place candid camera in context within the overall subject area social documentary photography in australia what was implicit for someone who read the article with some existing knowledge of the subject and checked the references is now explicit noted on a sentence by sentence basis linked whenever possible i ve tried to make sure that the other edits have been carried forward where that s appropriate but apologise if i haven t got them all can i suggest that anyone who has commented or voted on the afd page take another look