excessive detail etc first of all this article is bloated with needless descriptions of plotwhy they are needless i explained here for instance this is an article on a character and fluffing it with plot summary of things that have articles already is excessive it makes for a bad article wikipedia is not a fan site second i removed some all too lengthy quotes such quoting falls foul of the guidelines for fair use see wikipedia non free content esp wikipedia non free content text in fact the quotes that remain should be removed but the more general point is that this article contains way too much material that does not describe the character with the help of reliable secondary sources tags for in universe and fan site are actually quite appropriate thank you