first off cool thanks for making that that's helpful but you see it illustrates my point bullet points are allowed to be jumpy and totally change topics every sentence but paragraphs can't they come of sound a tad schizoid changing topics with each sentence what you need to make paragraphs flow are topic sentences concluding sentences explainatory sentences i could be done it's just not as easy as taking the text and deleteling the bullet points that said there is a prose form that would sound okay and would convey the same content that we could make if people really don't like the bullet points i'll do some askin'