new copyedit arre i did a revision checking for sources related to each paragraph i also tried to get the style more academic i added the article is structured as per wikipidia manual of style created section titles there's now an intro a history and conditions sections gave context to the article by linking the prison to the political life in the history section gave a better explanation of the existance of the prison by linking it to the failed coup d' tat also added info about mon ami le roi book without a history section the article reader would find no context to follow i added to the saharawi inmates added years of lead as a see also as both subjects are related i removed capacity for only inmates not true the reference given talks about getting detainees for the first time summary executions occurred in the reference we had there is no such claim the article puts it as a possibility the al ahram weekly reference is about the book of tahar ben jelloun and i put if on further readings and kept the link scorpions and snakes i removed snakes as al jazeera link only reports scorpions feracious is an adjective and by nature we avoid using adjectives in wikipedia in order to avoid pov issues cold winter is enough surviving inmates have described the experience as being buried alive is not well sourced they may describe it in all possible words but weather someone said explicitly and exactly being buried alive or not nobody is sure i also removed a death camp rather than a prison for the same reason while i believe that someone would have said it but again no sure in case of statements declared by people we have to be very carefull approximately half of those imprisoned in tazmamart eventually succumbed to diseases torture or simply the winter cold is removed because it is tackled in the same section duplidation please check and compare the two versions if the articl's lost any encyclopedic content cheers wiki me up ok