initial comments at first pass this looks quite good it's comprehensive well sourced and well written and seems generally ripe for promotion i've made a few tweaks as i went feel free to revert any with which you disagree here are a few quibbles that i couldn't immediately resolve myself i'd suggest splitting the lead into two paragraphs for readabilityperhaps at increased expenses and decreasing ridership with two railroad stations in operation one on the c o line and the union station just west of the c o station at the junction between the c o and southern railroads i found this part of the sentence hard to follow at first glance maybe break this off as a second sentence two railroad stations in operation one was on the c o line and the second the union station was just west am i understanding the meaning correctly in this rewrite development of the streetcar system i'd suggest breaking this long paragraph into at least two for readability perhaps at this continued until route description split large paragraph for readability two statements here that it would be better to fix in time per wp realtime for clarity in the long term to address these issues the city has begun planning and analyzing various methods of public transportation for implementation within charlottesville one of which includes the development of a streetcar system in the early s the city began though no concrete plans have been developed or implemented as of the track gauge given in the infobox needs a source