i'm afraid you did not do enough there was still way too much direct copying and simply paraphrasing word for word is just as bad an encyclopedia article is not the place to copy a detailed timeline from the official webpage or a place to copy press releases please try to summarize and be concise and use your own words it also may help if you try to seek sources that are completely independent from the organization this helps establish what is notable as opposed to simply restating everything that is said on the official website hope this helps talk