items of work on the making the case section the discussion immediately above regarding how to incorporate obama's presidential re election statements regarding the jobs bill and how we do it the paragraph needs a sentence at the beginning something benign innocuous like president obama took his case to the american public and toured universities and public speaking events across various states then it rolls into the next sentence he has appeared before constituents of eric cantor's congressional district to press the congress to pass his bill immediately making the case president obama appeared before constituents of eric cantor's congressional district to press the congress to pass his bill immediately on september he gave a speech in the white house rose garden in front of a group of teachers police officers construction workers and small business owners in which he stated that if congress does not act just about every family in america will pay more taxes next year that would be a self inflicted wound that our economy just cannot afford right now in speaker boehner's home state of ohio obama gave a speech described as fiery in a columbus high school that led to the audience chanting pass this bill in a campaign style rally at north carolina state university obama told college students every single one of you can help make this bill a reality the time for hand wringing is over the time for moping around is over we've got to kick off our bedroom slippers and put on our marching shoes at a black tie dinner for the congressional hispanic caucus institute obama pitched his jobs plan to latinos in anticipation of criticism that the legislation was motivated by the upcoming election the president noted that the election is fourteen months away and that americans do not have the luxury of waiting fourteen months for jobs to be created re item i propose we tack it onto the very end of the paragraph with a sentence like some of the criticism refers to obama's own remarks including past statements that he will blank blank blank i won't complete the sentence but just letting you overlook my generalized proposal we could even take off the final sentence that is there now and i could incorporate via some other measure i'm a very good writer and don't want to over invest before i get more feedback at this point as an aside i plan to do some work tuesday to help explain the backstory to the related bill section because it fails to tell the reader the funny story i e that a witty republican thought he could steal the antecedent referred to by obama's pronoun because obama was saying to pass a bill which had not yet been trademarked so that witty republican guy trademarked the patent before obama's people could register the name that will require a better source than just newser and the daily caller that will be tuesday's work so i just wanted to tip my hat off on what's next on wednesday thursday i'd like to create the yuan article then by friday we can incorporate this week's major updates to this article which c