dopamine hi i'm trying to work cooperatively but when you place an incorrect statement into the article and then add a cn tag after it it's hard to see how i can do anything except revert it also let me point out that your edit borked the paragraph structure of the lead in most cases the first sentence of a paragraph should function as a topic sentence telling the reader the goal that the paragraph is intended to accomplish when you moved that sentence you gave the second paragraph a first sentence that is unrelated to the rest of its contents thereby violating the most basic principle of paragraph construction regards