thank you for the heads up earlier sent me a private mail requesting my help before this was moved to main space and i helped him to re write the introduction section i also pointed out to him in more detail what is missing in the article neutral point of view nonjudgmental language opposing views i spent several minutes to highlight these problems and how they can address it i decided not to fix it myself because i believe the best way editors can learn is to allow them to do things themselves and then we can help to fix minor problems doing this we make them a better wikipedian i advised olaniyan not to move this to main space until the issues are addressed but i'm perplexed and disappointed to see that he actually moved the article to mainspace without addressing the problems i expect olaniyan to fix these problems today per my earlier suggestions and they are free to also contact other editors for advice i will be glad to move the page back to their sandbox if they choose not to fix the problems today t lk to m