systemic risk i have a couple of suggestions for the third paragraph of debates and controversies' systemic risk aiming to improve the accuracy a bit the paragraph currently reads with the problem areas highlighted however as all investors in the herd would lose funds in such a situation i'd like to tweak the wording a bit to clarify this also the last sentence is simply a restatement of risks already cited in greater detail above i would suggest cutting to make the section more concise my proposed revisions are below thoughts from others cheers talk