pure gold jewellers i have moved your article to your userspace so you may work on it at your own pace before resubmitting it to afc it is located here as far as the article itself is concerned here are some problems which should be corrected before continuing sources your sources are sometimes trivial and do not contribute to the overall article trivial mention of pgj more focused on gold and the industry in general trivial mention of the company focuses again more on industry and economy more of a press release trivial mention of award trivial does nothing more than provide source for what i've mentioned to be puffery about owner not company trivial pr trivial pr quality of article again things like best customer service awards are usually considered puffery and are not suited to encyclopaedic articles put simply this article needs to be more than just a list of company awards that alone cannot sustain an article talk contrib