and now for something completely different i know you watch at least the manson girls' articles and i've dabbled a very little bit on them tonight more so on tex watson i revised some of the language as it pertains to conversion to christianity it seems like on criminal biographies whenever this is mentioned it has been worded as claimed to be a born again christian but on non criminal articles it isn't couched in skepticism i considered this and i'm thinking that the claimed wording adds a level of pov judgment to the statement that wording of reported wrote published etc does not i tried to reword it to lend a more neutral tone does this ring true to you