hi rpau i appreciate your comments and i agreed with most of them i realized after you mentioned it that i needed to change the wording of one of the sentences under the career heading i think it works a bit better now creating hyperlinks for some key words was beneficial too however in regards to creating a hyperlink for alex krizhevsky and ilya sutskever they are graduate students working with geoffrey hinton and do not have wikipedia pages written on them so i can't make any links for them as for the picture of the hinton wikipedia seemed to give me a hard time for trying to upload a photo unless i had explicit consent from the owner of the photo i had contacted hinton previously to get some information from him personally but i got the sense that i was annoying him slightly as he said he was really busy and was terse in his responses so i decided not to pursue him for the picture thanks for your comments and criticisms though they were helpful angelamarti thanks for your input it was quite useful