of course they are i can see i didn't word that very well and i'm sure josette didn't mean it should be poked down at the tail of the article or whatever of course ownership is important as are a lot of other points but they can't all be put in the first three sentences and don't deserve to be the problem is a suggested rewrite showing the suggested structure of the whole article would be a waste of effort instantly hacked and attacked by povers what would you say to the first three sentences i suggested then followed by other information in order of logical descending relevance much like a good article would be constructed