second opinion by ericleb i'm following up on cannibaloki's review i completed an entire copy edit of the article but i'm going to have to fail this mainly because it doesn't cover enough material the bostaph's departure section does not belong in this article as while it does mention the dvd his leave from the band has nothing to do with it with that gone i would recommend you look at other example concert video gas such as number ones video and celebration the video collection as well as wp album article body for some ideas also use a bit less quotations as it disrupts the flow when reading this is really close to passing in my book however so don't give this up ericleb talk