i agree some of the speculations need to be trimmed down and attributed i'm removing the second section on moore's law as it seems especially speculative i've no idea where those numbers are from moore's law itself is too significant to cut out entirely but i'll try to ground it more in reality i'll look for some sources for the bits in the singularity technologies heading as for the article being uncritical i'm just not seeing it there's decent sized section of attributed criticisms nov utc