barbequed cat patrick i removed the paragraph you'd added to hudson river mid air collision regarding the content of the controller's phone conversation i don't doubt that you considered it relevant i am not accusing you of vandalism but i do feel that the prior remaining paragraph covers the fact that there was an improper conversation and that it appeared to not be a causal factor in the crash the information you added imo put a pov tilt on the article i hope you understand my perspective on this