bismay dash thanks for your response i just want to say that the things that i believe should be changed in the article cyrus the great is that that he was the king of ry varta his influence reached till indus river if you go through the histories and historic maps properly then you will find that king cyrus has never indus and as far as ry varta is concerned then it starts from indus and spreads over gangetic plains in history it can be clearly seen that there was no influence of king cyrus on these areas in fact king cyrus' kingdom extended till today's baluchistan province in pakistan but have never reached till indus river even the maps this article contains proves the same thing i have tried to correct this error twice but each time you have reverted those edits so i would expect this time you to correct those errors