death section it looked really shoddy i tightened up the prose condensed it into summary style there was also a paragraph of other material all of which was to be found elsewhere and didn't belong in the death section at all finally i moved the eulogies into their own section as that really wasn't actually anything to do with his death persay actually i think those eulogies reek of npov but pov seems to be a touchy subject around here would anyone mind if i deleted them entirely storm rider in particular i'd like your opinion on this one