larry doby i've left some comments on that section on the talk page and feel free to ping me if you want me to take a look at anything else actually i was heading your way with a favour request too began to review the d'oliveria affair at ga but has been unable to finish it as real life is a bit busy and he says he is unlikely to get chance any time soon i was going to ask you if you could take over if not i'll ask at wt gan but gan can be a strange place at the moment and the quality of reviews seems to have slipped as i'm aiming this at fac i'd appreciate a good reviewer it is another cricket one obviously but there's not a huge amount of actual cricket in it and it is actually a huge race controversy connected to south africa in but if you have neither the time nor inclination i quite understand