there's also a lot of use of weasel words etc to produce effect usually negative here many people severely criticized amlo for instance for x y z i've toned down the phrasing but it's still vague it would be better to be specific and clear however the cardenas section is clearly meant to delegitimize however it's not very careful it was reported that cardenas wanted the presidency for his son for instance and rumours were that back room deals were in play