british army yes it's a hard one to tackle and i think you've done a fantastic job given the difficulties involved i don't think it's far from a class but i think if you ever want to take it to fac it'll need some overhauling in particular you'll have to find some sections to tighten up and once you've done that i think there are some that could use further expansion personally i think that the section on equipment should be significantly tightened leaving some room elsewhere but i don't really know also i was about to add it to the acr but this is just as good you're missing one of the conflicts in the immediate aftermath of the war and as a matter of fact an area where troops were deployed in east africa during the war somaliland see conflict between british forces and somaliland dervishes and hastings ismay somaliland which gives a good account of the conflict though just from the perspective of one soldier i don't think you need to do any more than mention the conflict but a good source is if you want it