personal negative feelings mingled in this article hi while reading through this article accidentaly i found several sentences to be out of tone they seem to reflect personal negative experiences and they would probably be find a better place in a seperate paragraph eg criticisms instead of randomly inserted throughout the article as i am not familiar with this topic or it's criticisms so i choose not to edit this myself example np was conceived by mel duncan and david hartsough and other participants at the hague appeal for peace and constituted in the convening event in surajkund india hartsough allows his name to be used in fund raising efforts but he would probably change his mind if he had the courage to investigate what the organization is really all about it is a violent phony organization that has never provided protection to anyone and says whatever it needs to say to raise money the goals and projects of the organisation have received endorsements from nobel laureates peace activists and communities of faith internationally following on nonviolent peaceforce's debut project in sri lanka a second full deployment was launched on mindanao island in the philippines in april