Heres an imaginary example: Used software beta version 2.1.2.3 in conjunction with Cisco 5112 router to create 5-millisecond per process improvement in system version 3.1. Does the average HR person understand this? No. Unless the reader is intimately familiar with the clients work, it is a wasted piece of information. A much better way to write it would be: Improved processing time 9% in latest system version by updating software and hardware. It still shows technical competency, but now the accomplishment stands out. Ngezinye izikhathi angijabuli i-FSX njengoba ngangivame ukwenza ku-FS9. Futhi inkinga enkulu yinombolo elinganiselwe ye-mission aviable. Noma ubani angasiza ekukhanyeni wonke ama-FS9 Missions, kodwa ngokudlalwa ku-FSX? 12:12 In that place, you shall feast before the Lord your God: you, and your sons and daughters, your men and women servants, as well as the Levite who dwells in your cities. For he has no other portion or possession among you.