This Old Van by vaggabondd Writers Romance
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This Old Van	by vaggabondd ()
Writers  Romance  posted on Nov 11, 2006	vaggabondd's Gallery
This old van has seen a lot
Surf boards tied to the top
Tinnie Winnie yellow poke a dot Bikinis Occasionally No bikinis
If this vans a rockin
Don�t bother knocking
I sure wish that was my old van
vaggabondd () posted at 1:25AM Sat, 11 November 2006	not a whole lot of depth to this one but I kind of like it. I hope everyone else does to
Sekadhar () posted at 1:47PM Sat, 11 November 2006	Ha, ha...as I understand someone will knock! Super!*****!
Valerie-Ducom () posted at 9:53PM Sat, 11 November 2006	very original theme and excellent words for this old van !!! good day ;)
Merrylee () posted at 12:32AM Sun, 12 November 2006	Nice Poem. Needs just a little bit more to it.
kutiepiee () posted at 12:37AM Sun, 12 November 2006	You sly dog. The way you write I bet that was your van... LOL.. Very funny poem..
A2J2001 () posted at 2:45PM Sun, 12 November 2006	I agree with Marrylee, it needs a little more. But, it's a nice poem.
NothingNess () posted at 10:03PM Sun, 19 November 2006	Every van needs a bumper sticker that says "when this van is a rockin, don't come a knockin" I like what you've written. It's short and to the point.