Take My Breath Away (poem) by Bernice Angoh Lakota on AuthorsDen
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by Bernice Angoh Lakota Wednesday, April 16, 2008
 SEASONS OF LOVE You Make the Roses Beautiful Let Us Remember (A wedding song for vanessa) Defiance TEMPTATION
(Excerpt from my book "Lemonade Street") Photo by : http://villanitadesign.deviantart.com/art/Take-My-Breath-Away-79708799
(I loved him much more than anything ought to be loved)
I have worshiped at someone’s feet
Cared until my heart bled
I am cursed bound under a spell that cannot be broken
I love him more than I love life itself
(I have loved a man so much that it took my breath away)
Copyright © 2007 by Bernice Angoh Lemonade Street
exellent writing... Love, yes I continue to feel this way.
A beautiful poem filleD with passion and desire. Yes , I have felt that way and still do........M
I have...and do...
which is a difficult thing to do when all around the world tells you not to believe and trust in another so completely...
Very nice, wish you endless love!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
What passion in this write...but I often wonder...why would any woman love a man this much...unless..it's returned?!
Oh, my goodness, YES!!! Such a strong emotion your writing evokes in me.
Good choice of potograph as it speaks volumes for itself! Astounding piece....
Do you ever come up for AIR? Your love & poetry are unexhaustible (so it seems) Great life to you and your loved ones...
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, That Dress & Intensity Of Your Poetic Emotions...Ahhhhh, SiGHHHHhhhhhhhhh BUT....that love needs to be on both sides I have learned the hard way.
yes I did love like that before in an Unhealthy Fashion Though & I am glad to have my head screwed back on. It took me 2 years to get over him.....
This Love Would Tottally Ruel If It Is A 2-way street! WOW!! Can You Imagine? I want some of that!!
Your The Poetess Of Love!!! Can You Hear That Dude With The Deep Voice?
I agree with Deborah's comments. Love like that if it's ever betrayed one may never overcome the shock.
I hope he gave it back....
Magnificent photo and write, Bernice; very well penned/illustrated! BRAVA!
Yes I have and it almost killed me! ha
I have found sometimes when we elevate a man so much he takes the place of worship only meant for God. How is it that we women fall so easily into the trap of worshiping love so much that men trample us? Well said and written! Deborah
Some can love that deeply, most should but don't know how. Beautiful pen.
Deep expression of love - breathtaking excellence!