It is a well-kown fact that, in our modern world, many companies have been producing various type of cars, such as ; hybird, electric, solar powered cars. Although it looks as if, there are benefits, there are also many drowbacks, in that case, which kind of vehicles would you prefer to drive? (Body pragraph 1) The first and the most important advantages of driving hybrids cars is that you can save money and protect enviroment. The reason is that, hibrid cars are run with fossil-fuels. As a result, these cars relese minimum corbondioxide. Moreover they go approximattely 20 or 25 of percent more millage than ohters. In addition, hybrid cars have dual engines, so they have better performance. As for disadvantages, due to their installed dual engines, they are qiute expensive. Furthermore, when accident happen, they carry high risks, because of high voltage in batteries (Body pragraph2) The second type of vehicles are electric cars run with electric battery. Frist of all these cars do not need gasoline. Consequently, they are eviroment-friendly, manufacturer claim that "these cars release at about zero percent corbondioxide. Although they cheap to buy, you are charged with heavy taxes by goverments. Finally, if you drive electric cars, you have limeted speed. (Body pragraph 3) The final type of vehicle is solar-powered cars. Firstly, the biggest posstive side of solar cars is that they run with renewable energy which use from the sun, so this systemcan protect resource. On the ohter hand, manufactures do not invest much money on these cars. For this reason, they are not mass-produced. As they habe limeted charge capacity, they can only a few miles. To sum up, today, there are many choices for you if you wan to drive diffrent kinds of cars, you had better prefer to driver hybird cars, as there are few disadvantages. byanigli

Evet "they can go only a few miles " olmalıydı, cheap to buy bir phs. verb gibi düşünebilirsin, bizdede sudan ucuz gibi bir laf. Carry bir çok metaforik anlamı vardır, buda onlardan bir tanesi Teşekkürler.

Grammar hatalarınız gözüme çarptı. Örneğin; '' they can only a few miles. '' Yüklemi, yargısı yok. ''The first and the most important ADVANTAGES of driving hybrids cars IS that... '' Gördüğünüz gibi tekil değil, 'are' olmalı yüklem. ''Although they cheap to buy...'' Yüklemsiz cümle. Bir de ilk paragrafta geçen, carry risk kavramı beni düşündürdü. Yani ingilizcede risk taşımak olarak, ''having risk'' ve ''be risky'' kavramlarını kullanıyoruz genellikle. Bunun biraz Türkçe mantıkla yazıldığını düşünüyorum; risk taşımak: to carry risk, bilemedim Böyle bir kullanım gramatik olarak doğruysa bana da bildirmenizi isterim. Anlam açısından iyi bir essay standartında olduğunu düşünüyorum. Başarılar.