8/10 topic is boring and some words and terms are out of place like 'training'. 'fullfilling process' 'medium' I immediately smell a tryhard and they don't smell nice

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Topic-the internet is more important than teachers For -Some students learn on the internet& -Teachers do not have enough time for each student, so teachers don't maintain a fulfilling process for education against -Teachers are very qualified. Teachers Education is an important medium to improve one's life. It represents an opportunity to lead a better life at an early age. Teachers and students are part of this system. So it is widely believed that teachers are very qualified. Most people would agree that teachers are essential in all places than other means due to teachers is the basis of every field. Some people admit that students can reach all of the necessities of materials to study on the internet, so they don't need a teacher in the technological age. Furthermore, Teachers have overcrowded classes where make it hard for them to pay attention to students in the classes. So the internet is more important than teachers. In the first place, we are living in the modern world. Many people can train themselves in their fields using the internet network. A lot of material can be found on the internet. Moreover, Teachers are responsible for many numbers of students in some learning classes in state buildings. Thus few teachers are not able to provide attention to all students in the classroom. In this regard, unfortunate students can't access the required information. To overcome it, Some devices ensure these students opportunity to learn on the internet. So, Students don't need a teacher every time. Secondly, it is commonly believed that teachers are very qualified in all subjects according to stereotypes. Teachers have to give a lecture on all subjects according to the curriculum in schools. While some teachers have a remarkable ability to tutor students, many teachers are unable to go beyond these capabilities. Therefore, Pupils tend to lose interest in the sphere that they want. As much of knowledge have availability on the internet, Learning is rapid to obtain information rather than teachers. In conclusion, the internet has a great role in training. The contributions of teachers and the internet to students are precious. Otherwise, The need for teachers is decreasing, and the internet enters many people's houses. Besides that, some teachers have to cope with issues in the crowded classes. Numerous sources of information are existent for students on the internet. Therefore, people should take into account the importance of the internet rather than teachers. ilk essayde baya hata bulmuştunuz ayrıca essay teknigi yönünden eksikti. biraz daha özenip bunu yazdım umarım cok az hatası vardır :)

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medium bence konuyla alakali hocam. bi makalede gormustum environment anlami veriyor digerlerinden emin degilim. boring evet ama daha baslangictayim ilerde ifadeler ile beraber ileri seviye yazmayi dusunuyorum. tesekkutler

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