老样子，校对，转自discord
是的我又来了( I saw them, corpses. 我亲眼目睹了那惨烈景状，残躯与褴肢 那墨般浓重而可憎的深褐 the same heinous sepia tint ? 这个非常明显是在瞎翻 慢慢玷污着他们的躯体 这句话是不存在的 就这样，他们悄无声息地融入了周遭。我蹒跚踱步，撞见一位同事的遗体，而他失踪至今，仅仅不至一周。想必过不了多久，我就能找到其余失踪的人了。 They simply blended into the scenery until I stumbled face first into one of my colleagues who had disappeared not even a week before. It surely wouldn't be long until I found the others. 原文没有：就这样、悄无声息地、我蹒跚踱步、同事的“尸体” 我左臂的状况与之如出一辙，冰冷而僵硬，那污浊不堪之色犹如泼洒开来的一片颜料，正沿着手臂缓缓蔓延。想必，我很快也会步他们的后尘。 My left arm matches them, cold and petrified, the foul color creeping along like a swath of paint. I fear I shall soon join them. 原文没有：泼洒开来、沿着手臂 最后一句完全是错误的。 这空无的世界宛若世外桃源，恒处于初始态，未受岁月的丝毫侵蚀。 This empty world remains in pristine condition, cloistered away from the ravages of time. 没有“宛若世外桃源”，且“未受岁月丝毫侵蚀”也是翻译错误的 …仿若身处一幅静止的画卷内 …as if one is standing within a still image. image是图像，而画卷，顾名思义是“卷轴形的画” 空气干燥而凝滞，河流干涸、流淌不再，大地寂静无声、丝纹不动。 The air is dry and stagnant, rivers do not flow, the land is unmoving and quiet. 原文没有河流“干涸” 此层级不存在任何生命迹象，任何活物均不见踪迹。 There are no signs of life here, as neither flora nor fauna are present. 后句全数错误 此层级自上而下分为三层：地表、地下廊道以及矿井通道。 Three layers exist in this place: the surface, the hallways beneath the city, and the mineshafts at the bottom. 原文没有“自上而下”，beneath the city没有翻译 此层级的地表为一片绵延数英里的砼漠。城市中遍布着空荡无物的的街道、闲置的建筑，与早已被岁月尘封的店面摊位。与其他城市无异，此层级内各型各类的建筑内部均含有大量各异的物件与家具，但其均带有层级特有的属性。室内区域并无人工光源，然而其各处光照均匀。 The surface layer is, as one would imagine, a concrete desert stretching on for many miles. The city brims with empty avenues and vacant buildings as well storefronts and street vendor stalls long since abandoned to time. As with any city, various buildings contain a plethora of differing items and furniture, all of which share the familiar properties of the level itself. Indoor areas have no artificial light source, yet the lighting is uniform everywhere. as one would imagine没翻 被岁月“尘封”(你的翻译)跟被岁月“抛弃”(原文中的abandomed)意思还是不一样的 all of which share the familiar properties of the level itself. familiar没翻，原文没有“特有” 我在Level 11路过几家废弃店铺时，作为摄影师的我，被那些脱落油漆和陈旧店面所展现出的美学韵味所吸引。乡景如潮水般再次涌上心头。 As I found myself passing several derelict shops on Level 11, the photographer in me focused on the aesthetics of peeling paint and aging storefronts. Scenes from my hometown on Earth flooded my memory again. the photographer in me，in me错翻成“作为…的我” 原文没有“所展现出的美学韵味” Scenes from my hometown on Earth，on Earth没有翻 我的知觉渐渐恢复，四周，空气变得死寂、干燥，毫无流动之感。 最后一句不存在 在Level 11的景象彻底消失后，我发现自己正身处另一片城市，然而，其单一无色、了无生机，宛若被抽离了灵魂。我在街道上行进，拼命搜寻生命的迹象。然而，环顾四周，仅有深褐无机的尸体，堆积成山。这单调之颜色与死般之寂静，比我在Level 0的经历更令人胆寒。不知过了多久，我发现了一个楼梯，通向依旧了无生机的地下走廊。 As the image of Level 11 completely disappeared, I found myself in a sepia cityscape, lifeless and drained of its very soul. I floundered as I roamed the streets, desperately seeking signs of life. Sepia corpses were plentiful enough. The mono-sepia and dead silence were more unnerving than my experience with Level 0. After what felt like hours, I found a staircase leading down to sterile hallways underground. as翻成之后不妥 I found myself in a sepia cityscape翻成我发现自己正身处另一片城市也不对 原文没有单一无色 也没有“宛若”被抽离了灵魂 desperately不是“拼命” Sepia corpses were plentiful enough不是“然而，环顾四周，仅有深褐无机的尸体，堆积成山” 一路校对到这边，真的很怀疑ThHeavenlyDance、ThEndlessRain到底是怎么翻的 即使机翻也不会翻出不存在的东西(