Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
As is known to all,reading is a very important way in our studies.For example,whenever we study English,we pay more attention to this.
There are many advantages in extensive reading.To begin with,reading give us new horizons.We can travel around the world by reading.Moreover,it can help us improve oral language abilities.Reading more, we will know more.
On the other hand,the first-hand is important,too.However,it has many differences compared with reading.That is to say,by our own actions,explore the things,people,scenery and so on.
In conclusion,both read and action are essential.It's necessary to combine reading with action.We will learn better.

Corrected essay:
As is known to all, reading is a very important way in our studies. For example, whenever we study English, we pay more attention to this.
There are many advantages in extensive reading. To begin with, reading gives us new horizons. We can travel around the world by reading. Moreover, it can help us improve oral language abilities. By reading more, we will know more.
On the other hand, first-hand experience is important, too. However, it has many differences compared with reading. That is to say, by our own actions, we explore things, people, scenery and so on.
In conclusion, both reading and action are essential. It's necessary to combine reading with action. We will learn better.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: To begin with,reading give us new horizons.
correct_sentence: To begin with, reading gives us new horizons.
error: give
correction: gives
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈reading〉 is in the third-person singular form, and the predicate verb needs to maintain subject-verb agreement, so the base form verb 〈give〉 is changed to the third-person singular form 『gives』 to comply with grammatical norms.

error_sentence: Reading more, we will know more.

correct_sentence: By reading more, we will know more.

error: Reading
correction: By reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English syntactic structure, an absolute construction requires a clear logical connection, so the preposition 『By』 is added to make 『reading more』 a clear adverbial of manner, changing it to 『By reading more』 to enhance sentence logic; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈Reading〉 in the sentence is a gerund and should not be capitalized, so it is changed to the lowercase form 『reading』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: On the other hand,the first-hand is important,too.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, first-hand experience is important, too.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English article usage rules, the definite article 〈the〉 is used for specific known or clear objects, while 〈first-hand〉 here modifies an implied noun; the redundant 〈the〉 needs to be deleted to keep the structure concise.

error_sentence: On the other hand,the first-hand is important,too.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, first-hand experience is important, too.
correction: experience
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Error: According to English adjective modification rules, the adjective 〈first-hand〉 must be paired with a core noun to form a complete meaning, so 『experience』 is added as the modified object to make the sentence semantically complete.

error_sentence: That is to say,by our own actions,explore the things,people,scenery and so on.

correct_sentence: That is to say, by our own actions, we explore things, people, scenery and so on.

error: explore the
correction: we explore
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: According to English basic sentence pattern rules, an adverbial structure must be followed by a complete subject-verb structure; the original sentence lacks a subject, so the nominative pronoun 『we』 is added to ensure sentence structural integrity; ② Determiner Error: According to English article usage norms, the definite article 〈the〉 in 〈the things〉 is redundant in a generic sense, so 〈the〉 is deleted to make the expression more consistent with a generic context.

error_sentence: In conclusion,both read and action are essential.
correct_sentence: In conclusion, both reading and action are essential.
error: read
correction: reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English parallel structure rules, the noun 〈action〉 needs to be parallel with another noun, while 〈read〉 is a base form verb, so it is changed to the gerund form 『reading』 to maintain structural consistency.