Writing prompt: Traditional Reading or Online Reading?

Student essay:
Traditional reading can make us feel real.It is the good way to get more kowledge and enrich our life.
But, you have not enough space to put the books if you have too much .
Online reading is very popular now,because it's so conveniency that we can resd a book any time or
place.We can read any book only use a mobile phone or a computer.However,if we read it for a long time,
it must be bad for our eyes.
In my opinion,traditional reading and online reading both the good way to resding.But,we should
choose an appropriate way to ourselves.

Corrected essay:
Traditional reading can make us feel real. It is a good way to get more knowledge and enrich our life.
But you may not have enough space to put the books if you have too many.
Online reading is very popular now, because it's so convenient that we can read a book anytime or anywhere. We can read any book using only a mobile phone or a computer. However, if we read it for a long time, it must be bad for our eyes.
In my opinion, traditional reading and online reading are both good ways to read. But we should choose an appropriate way for ourselves.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: It is the good way to get more kowledge and enrich our life.

correct_sentence: It is a good way to get more knowledge and enrich our life.

error: the
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈the〉 is a definite article used for specific, known things. This sentence mentions 'a good way' for the first time, indicating a general reference, so the indefinite article 『a』 should be used. Changing 〈the〉 to 『a』 meets the semantic requirement.

error_sentence: It is the good way to get more kowledge and enrich our life.

correct_sentence: It is a good way to get more knowledge and enrich our life.

error: kowledge
correction: knowledge
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'get more knowledge', 〈kowledge〉 is misspelled: judging from the context, it intends to express 'knowledge', 〈kowledge〉 is misspelled, so 〈kowledge〉 needs to be changed to 『knowledge』 to make the sentence conform to English word spelling norms.

error_sentence: But, you have not enough space to put the books if you have too much .

correct_sentence: But you may not have enough space to put the books if you have too many.

error: , you have not
correction: you may not have
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, when the conjunction 〈But〉 is followed by a single clause, no comma is needed. The comma in 〈But,〉 in the original sentence is redundant and should be deleted; ② Auxiliary Error: The original phrase 〈you have not〉 expresses a lack of possibility, while the context requires a speculative meaning. It should be changed to 『you may not have』 to conform to English expression habits and semantic needs.

error_sentence: But, you have not enough space to put the books if you have too much .

correct_sentence: But you may not have enough space to put the books if you have too many.

error: much
correction: many
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈much〉 is used to modify uncountable nouns, while 〈books〉 is a plural countable noun. Here, 『many』 should be used for modification. Changing 〈much〉 to 『many』 conforms to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Online reading is very popular now,because it's so conveniency that we can resd a book any time or
place.
correct_sentence: Online reading is very popular now, because it's so convenient that we can read a book anytime or anywhere.
error: conveniency
correction: convenient
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, in the 'so + adjective' structure here, an adjective is needed as a predicative. 〈conveniency〉 is a noun form and should be changed to the adjective 『convenient』 to make the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: Online reading is very popular now,because it's so conveniency that we can resd a book any time or
place.
correct_sentence: Online reading is very popular now, because it's so convenient that we can read a book anytime or anywhere.
error: resd
correction: read
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'read a book', 〈resd〉 is misspelled. Spelling Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'read', the correct spelling is 『read』, 〈resd〉 needs to be changed to 『read』 to make the sentence conform to English word spelling norms.

error_sentence: Online reading is very popular now,because it's so conveniency that we can resd a book any time or
place.
correct_sentence: Online reading is very popular now, because it's so convenient that we can read a book anytime or anywhere.
error: any time or
place
correction: anytime or anywhere
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈any time〉 and 〈place〉 are noun phrases and cannot directly modify the verb. Adverbs 『anytime』 and 『anywhere』 are needed here to modify the verb, expressing 'anytime, anywhere', making the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: We can read any book only use a mobile phone or a computer.
correct_sentence: We can read any book using only a mobile phone or a computer.
error: only use
correction: using only
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing 'only use', the adverb 'only' should be placed after the verb, so 〈only use〉 needs to be changed to 『using only』 to conform to the correct word order; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈only use〉 functions as an adverbial of manner, but its verb phrase form makes its logical subject unclear and the grammatical structure confusing. It needs to be changed to the present participle form 『using only』, acting as an accompanying adverbial, modifying 'read any book', to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear in meaning.

error_sentence: However,if we read it for a long time,
it must be bad for our eyes.

correct_sentence: However, if we read it for a long time, it must be bad for our eyes.

error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English written expression norms, a single letter space should be kept between a comma or period and the following word, so a space needs to be added and changed to 『, if』; ② Format Error: According to English writing norms, the newline character 〈〉 appearing in the original sentence disrupts the coherence and structural integrity of the sentence; this newline character is redundant and should be deleted.

error_sentence: In my opinion,traditional reading and online reading both the good way to resding.
correct_sentence: In my opinion, traditional reading and online reading are both good ways to read.
error: both the good way to resding
correction: are both good ways to read
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject is a plural concept, the predicate verb must agree with it. The original sentence 〈traditional reading and online reading both...〉 lacks a predicate verb; the linking verb 『are』 should be added; ② Determiner Error: According to English noun collocation principles, when using 'both' to modify a noun, the redundant determiner 'the' is not needed, so 〈the〉 in the original sentence should be deleted; ③ Noun Number Error: In English, when paired with a plural subject, countable nouns must be in their plural form. The subject in the original sentence is plural; according to grammar rules, 〈way〉 should be changed to the plural form 『ways』; ④ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'reading', so 〈resding〉 is a misspelling of 'reading'. Also, because the infinitive form of 'read' is needed here, 〈resding〉 needs to be changed to 『to read』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.

error_sentence: But,we should
choose an appropriate way to ourselves.
correct_sentence: But we should choose an appropriate way for ourselves.
error: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation rules, when the conjunction 〈But〉 is followed by a single clause, no comma is needed. The comma in 〈But,〉 is redundant and 〈,〉 should be changed to a single letter space to conform to norms.

error_sentence: But,we should
choose an appropriate way to ourselves.
correct_sentence: But we should choose an appropriate way for ourselves.
error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: According to English sentence writing norms, there should not be a newline character in the middle of a sentence. The newline character in the original sentence causes structural confusion and the newline character 〈
〉 needs to be deleted to ensure sentence coherence.

error_sentence: But,we should
choose an appropriate way to ourselves.
correct_sentence: But we should choose an appropriate way for ourselves.
error: to
correction: for
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, 'for sb.' is commonly used to mean 'for someone'. The original sentence intends to express 'choose an appropriate way for ourselves', so 〈to〉 should be changed to 『for』.