Writing prompt: School Day

Student essay:
Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....every activities are exciting .i go to bed at ten o clock after i finish my homework .This is my school day.

Corrected essay:
Everyone has a school day. Now, let me tell you something about my school day. In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six. We usually have Chinese class, math class, English class, physics class, and chemistry class to learn. And my favourite subject is chemistry because I think it is very interesting and we can know many exciting things. I do not like history class, because it has too many things to bear. I go home by bus and do my homework at half past seven. After school, we have many activities, such as tennis, basketball, and volleyball. Every activity is exciting. I go to bed at ten o'clock after I finish my homework. This is my school day.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.
correct_sentence: Everyone has a school day.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, an indefinite article 『a』 is needed before a general singular countable noun 〈school day〉, therefore 〈school day〉 is modified to 『a school day』 to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.
correct_sentence: Everyone has a school day. Now, let me tell you something about my school day.
error: .now
correction: . Now
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; the original sentence 〈.now〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈.now〉 needs to be modified to 『. Now』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.
correct_sentence: Now, let me tell you something about my school day.
error: us
correction: me
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'let me tell you'; in the original sentence, 〈us〉 is an incorrect form, therefore 〈us〉 is modified to 『me』 to indicate the correct personal reference and fit the context.

error_sentence: Everyone has school day .now,let us tell you solmething about my school day.
correct_sentence: Now, let me tell you something about my school day.
error: solmething
correction: something
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that it intends to express 'some things'; therefore 〈solmething〉 is a misspelling of 『something』, and 〈solmething〉 needs to be modified to 『something』 to make the sentence meaning coherent.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six.
error: ata
correction: at
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that it intends to express 'at'; therefore 〈ata〉 is a misspelling of 『at』, and 〈ata〉 needs to be modified to 『at』 to make the sentence meaning coherent.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six.
error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, no article is needed before the time expression 〈half past six〉, therefore the redundant 〈a〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English habits.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: In my school day, I always get up at half past five in the morning and I go to school at half past six. We usually have Chinese class, math class, English class, physics class, and chemistry class to learn.
error: six.we usual have chinese
correction: six. We usually have Chinese
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; the original sentence 〈six.we〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈six.we〉 needs to be modified to 『six. We』 to conform to writing conventions; ② PoS Confusion Error: According to the context, 〈usual〉 is an adjective, while an adverb is needed here to describe the degree, it should be changed to the adverb 『usually』, therefore 〈usual〉 needs to be modified to 『usually』 to fit the context; ③ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of proper nouns needs to be capitalized, 〈chinese〉 is a proper noun meaning 'Chinese', therefore 〈chinese〉 needs to be modified to 『Chinese』 to conform to conventions.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: We usually have Chinese class, math class, English class, physics class, and chemistry class to learn.
error: english
correction: English
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of proper nouns needs to be capitalized, 〈english〉 is a proper noun meaning 'English', therefore 〈english〉 needs to be modified to 『English』 to conform to conventions.

error_sentence: In my school day,i always get up ata half past five in the morning and i go to school at a half past six.we usual have chinese class ,math class,english class ,physics class ,chemistry class to learn.
correct_sentence: We usually have Chinese class, math class, English class, physics class, and chemistry class to learn.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈physics class〉 and 〈chemistry class〉 are the last two items in a parallel structure, and 『and』 needs to be added to connect them, therefore the original sentence needs to add 『and』 to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemistry because I think it is very interesting and we can know many exciting things.
error: chemisry because i
correction: chemistry because I
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that it intends to express 'chemistry'; therefore 〈chemisry〉 is a misspelling of 『chemistry』, and 〈chemisry〉 needs to be modified to 『chemistry』 to make the sentence meaning coherent; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemistry because I think it is very interesting and we can know many exciting things.
correction: is
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English grammar rules, the construction of a sentence requires a predicate; the original sentence 〈it very interesting〉 lacks a verb, therefore 『is』 needs to be added to connect the subject and noun, forming the complete 『it is very interesting』 to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemistry because I think it is very interesting and we can know many exciting things. I do not like history class, because it has too many things to bear.
error: .i
correction: . I
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; the original sentence 〈.i〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈.i〉 needs to be modified to 『. I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: I do not like history class, because it has too many things to bear.
error: have to
correction: has too
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈it〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate verb 〈have〉 is in the third-person plural form, therefore the verb 〈have〉 needs to be modified to the third-person singular form 『has』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Adverb Error: According to the context, it intends to express 'too many', therefore 〈to〉 should be changed to 『too』 to indicate excessive degree, to fit the semantics.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: I do not like history class, because it has too many things to bear. I go home by bus and do my homework at half past seven.
error: ,i
correction: . I
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid run-on sentences; in the original sentence, 〈 it have to many things to bear〉 and 〈i go home by bus〉 are two main clauses, therefore 〈,i〉 is modified to 『. I』 to conform to grammar.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: I go home by bus and do my homework at half past seven.
error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, no article is needed before the time expression 〈half past seven〉, therefore the redundant 『a』 needs to be deleted to conform to habits.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: I go home by bus and do my homework at half past seven. After school, we have many activities, such as tennis, basketball, and volleyball.
error: .After
correction: . After
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; the original sentence 〈.After〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈.After〉 needs to be modified to 『. After』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball....
correct_sentence: After school, we have many activities, such as tennis, basketball, and volleyball.
error: activties
correction: activities
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that it intends to express 'activities'; therefore 〈activties〉 is a misspelling of 『activities』, and 〈activties〉 needs to be modified to 『activities』 to make the sentence meaning coherent.

error_sentence: And my favourite subject is chemisry because i think it very interesting and we can know many exciting things .i do not like history class ,because it have to many things to bear,i go home by bus and do my homework at a half past seven .After school ,we have many activties ,such as tennis ,basketball,volleyball.... every activities are exciting .i
correct_sentence: After school, we have many activities, such as tennis, basketball, and volleyball. Every activity is exciting. I go to bed at ten o'clock after I finish my homework.
error: volleyball....every activities are exciting .i
correction: and volleyball. Every activity is exciting. I
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English expression habits, the last two items in a series need to be connected with 『and』, therefore 〈....〉 is deleted and 『and』 is added to conform to expression habits; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈every〉 is at the beginning of the sentence and needs to be capitalized, therefore 〈every〉 needs to be modified to 『Every』 to conform to conventions; ③ Noun Number Error: According to the context, a singular form is needed here, therefore 〈activities〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『activity』 to be consistent with the modifier 〈every〉; ④ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: go to bed at ten o clock after i finish my homework
correct_sentence: I go to bed at ten o'clock after I finish my homework.
error: o clock after i
correction: o'clock after I
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that it intends to express 'o'clock'; therefore 〈o clock〉 is a misspelling of 『o'clock』, and 〈o clock〉 needs to be modified to 『o'clock』 to make the sentence meaning coherent; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: .This is my school day.
correct_sentence: I go to bed at ten o'clock after I finish my homework. This is my school day.
error: .This
correction: . This
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; the original sentence 〈.This〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈.This〉 needs to be modified to 『. This』 to conform to writing conventions.