Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
My dreaming destination in Europe is Switzerland.Switzerland is located in central of Europe,where it is bordered by Germany to the north,Fance to the west ,Italy to the south,and Austria to the east.It covering an are of 41,000 square kilometers.The population of Switzerland is about 750,000,000.It is one of the most developed coutries in the world.The forest covers an area of 30 precent,so it is call'World Garden'.
Berne,the capital of Switzerland,and Geneva are also attract me.It is known for watch,chemistry and food industry.
I am looking for a chance to traveling to Switzerlang.If that day realling comes,I will be crazy.

Corrected essay:
My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland. Switzerland is located in the center of Europe, where it is bordered by Germany to the north, France to the west, Italy to the south, and Austria to the east. It covers an area of 41,000 square kilometers. The population of Switzerland is about 7,500,000. It is one of the most developed countries in the world. The forest covers an area of 30 percent, so it is called the 'World Garden.'
Berne, the capital of Switzerland, and Geneva also attract me. It is known for watches, chemistry and the food industry.
I am looking for a chance to travel to Switzerland. If that day really comes, I will be crazy.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My dreaming destination in Europe is Switzerland.
correct_sentence: My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland.
error: dreaming
correction: dream
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion: According to English idiomatic expression, 〈dreaming〉 is the present participle form of a verb, whereas a noun is needed here as an attributive to modify 〈destination〉. Therefore, the adjectival use 『dream』 replaces the original participle form, conforming to the fixed expression 『dream destination』.

error_sentence: Switzerland is located in central of Europe,where it is bordered by Germany to the north,Fance to the west ,Italy to the south,and Austria to the east.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is located in the center of Europe, where it is bordered by Germany to the north, France to the west, Italy to the south, and Austria to the east.
error: central
correction: the center
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: 〈central〉 means 'central', which is an adjective; a noun is needed here as the object of the preposition 〈in〉, so it is replaced with the noun 『center』, meaning 'center'; ② Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, a definite article 〈the〉 should be added before a noun of locality to form the fixed phrase “in the center of”, meaning 'in the center of'.

error_sentence: Switzerland is located in central of Europe,where it is bordered by Germany to the north,Fance to the west ,Italy to the south,and Austria to the east.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is located in the center of Europe, where it is bordered by Germany to the north, France to the west, Italy to the south, and Austria to the east.
error: Fance
correction: France
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the country name 〈Fance〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『France』, meaning 'France'.

error_sentence: It covering an are of 41,000 square kilometers.
correct_sentence: It covers an area of 41,000 square kilometers.
error: covering an are
correction: covers an area
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, the main clause describing an objective fact should use the simple present tense, so the present participle 〈covering〉 is changed to 『covers』, meaning 'covers...'; ② Spelling Error: The intention here is to express 'area', which is a unit noun; the correct spelling is 『area』, not 〈are〉.

error_sentence: The population of Switzerland is about 750,000,000.It is one of the most developed coutries in the world.
correct_sentence: The population of Switzerland is about 7,500,000. It is one of the most developed countries in the world.
error: 750,000,000.It
correction: 7,500,000. It
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Number Error: According to the actual situation, the actual population of Switzerland is about 8.7 million; the original value 〈750,000,000〉 seriously deviates from the fact and is corrected to a reasonable value 『7,500,000』; ② Punctuation Error: “The population of Switzerland is about 7,500,000.” and “It is one of the most developed countries in the world.” are two independent sentences; a space is missing between the sentences, so a space needs to be added after the period which follows the number.

error_sentence: The population of Switzerland is about 750,000,000.It is one of the most developed coutries in the world.
correct_sentence: It is one of the most developed countries in the world.
error: coutries
correction: countries
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the correct spelling of the word 'countries' should be 『countries』; therefore, 〈coutries〉 is changed to 『countries』.

error_sentence: The forest covers an area of 30 precent,so it is call'World Garden'.

correct_sentence: The forest covers an area of 30 percent, so it is called the 'World Garden.'
Berne, the capital of Switzerland, and Geneva also attract me.
error: precent
correction: percent
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the word 〈precent〉 is a misspelling; the correct spelling is 『percent』, meaning 'percent'.

error_sentence: The forest covers an area of 30 precent,so it is call'World Garden'.

correct_sentence: The forest covers an area of 30 percent, so it is called the 'World Garden.'
Berne, the capital of Switzerland, and Geneva also attract me.
error: call'World Garden'.
correction: called the 'World Garden.'
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Voice Error: The intention here is to express 'is called the World Garden'; the passive voice requires the past participle 〈called〉 instead of the base form 〈call〉; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, a proper noun title requires the definite article 〈the〉 to form 『the 'World Garden'』.

error_sentence: Berne,the capital of Switzerland,and Geneva are also attract me.
correct_sentence: The forest covers an area of 30 percent, so it is called the 'World Garden.'
Berne, the capital of Switzerland, and Geneva also attract me.
error: are
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English grammar rules, a sentence can only contain one main verb; 〈attract〉 itself is a transitive verb meaning 'to attract', and does not require the linking verb 〈are〉 to form a passive voice, so 『are』 is deleted to maintain the active voice structure.

error_sentence: It is known for watch,chemistry and food industry.

correct_sentence: It is known for watches, chemistry and the food industry.

error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to the context, 〈watch〉 refers to a single watch, whereas Switzerland is famous for its watchmaking industry; the plural form 『watches』 is needed to denote a general category.

error_sentence: It is known for watch,chemistry and food industry.

correct_sentence: It is known for watches, chemistry and the food industry.

correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, 〈food industry〉 specifically refers to Switzerland's food industry; the definite article 『the』 needs to be added to clearly specify the particular industry.

error_sentence: I am looking for a chance to traveling to Switzerlang.
correct_sentence: I am looking for a chance to travel to Switzerland.
error: traveling to Switzerlang
correction: travel to Switzerland
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈to〉 should be followed by the base form of the verb, acting as a post-modifier for “a chance”, so the gerund 〈traveling〉 is changed to 『travel』; ② Spelling Error: The ending of 〈Switzerlang〉 is incorrect; the correct spelling is 『Switzerland』, meaning 'Switzerland'.

error_sentence: If that day realling comes,I will be crazy.
correct_sentence: If that day really comes, I will be crazy.
error: realling
correction: really
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈realling〉 is a misspelling; the correct adverb form is 『really』, meaning 'really'.