Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
If you ask me which country do I most want to go,I will say "Switzerland".
Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.It owns a good geographical position that is next to Austria,France,Italy and German.People call it "the garden of world" beacause beautiful scenaries are everywhere in Switzerland.As we all kown,Switzerland is well-kown for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.Besides,the chemistry and food are both good.
It is such a country that I must go to visit one day!

Corrected essay:
If you ask me which country I most want to go to, I will say "Switzerland".
Now let me tell you why I like it best. Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe and has a population of 7,500,000. The capital of Switzerland is Berne. Sure, I think you know the famous city named Geneva. It has a good geographical position, being next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany. People call it "the garden of the world" because the beautiful scenery is everywhere in Switzerland. As we all know, Switzerland is well-known for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity. Besides, the chemistry and food are both good.
It is such a country that I must go to visit one day!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: If you ask me which country do I most want to go,I will say "Switzerland".

correct_sentence: If you ask me which country I most want to go to, I will say "Switzerland".

error: do
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to the context, 『which country I most want to go』 directly expresses 'the country I most want to go to'; in the original sentence, 〈do〉 is a redundant component, so it needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise and semantically clear.

error_sentence: If you ask me which country do I most want to go,I will say "Switzerland".

correct_sentence: If you ask me which country I most want to go to, I will say "Switzerland".

correction: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the preposition 『to』 indicates a destination; the original sentence lacks the preposition 『to』, so the original phrase 〈want to go〉 needs to be changed to 『want to go to』 to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.
correct_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best. Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe and has a population of 7,500,000.
error: .Switzerland
correction: . Switzerland
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and a word; the original phrase 〈.Switzerland〉 lacks a space, so 〈.Switzerland〉 needs to be changed to 『. Switzerland』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe and has a population of 7,500,000.
error: which
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈which〉 is not suitable for connecting two coordinate clauses; therefore, 〈which〉 needs to be changed to the coordinating conjunction 『and』 to connect two independent clauses to conform to grammar.

error_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe and has a population of 7,500,000. The capital of Switzerland is Berne.
error: 7,500,000.The
correction: 7,500,000. The
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and a word; the original phrase 〈7,500,000.The〉 lacks a space, so 〈7,500,000.The〉 needs to be changed to 『7,500,000. The』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.
correct_sentence: The capital of Switzerland is Berne. Sure, I think you know the famous city named Geneva.
error: ,sure
correction: . Sure
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent main clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈The capital of Switzerland is Berne〉 and 〈sure,I think...〉 are two main clauses, so 〈,sure〉 is changed to 『. Sure』 to conform to grammar.

error_sentence: Now let me tell you why I like it best .Switzerland is situated in the middle of Europe which has a population of 7,500,000.The capital of Switzerland is Berne,sure,I think you kown the famous city named Geneva.
correct_sentence: Sure, I think you know the famous city named Geneva.
error: kown
correction: know
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'know'; therefore, 〈kown〉 is a misspelling of 『know』, and 〈kown〉 needs to be changed to 『know』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.

error_sentence: It owns a good geographical position that is next to Austria,France,Italy and German.
correct_sentence: It has a good geographical position, being next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: owns
correction: has
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'possess', expressing a national characteristic; in the original sentence, 〈has〉 expresses an objective attribute and does not fit the sentence meaning, therefore 〈has〉 needs to be changed to 『owns』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: It owns a good geographical position that is next to Austria,France,Italy and German.
correct_sentence: It has a good geographical position, being next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: that is
correction: , being
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the context, what is required here is the present participle form indicating an accompanying state; in the original sentence, 〈that is〉 does not conform to the semantic logic of an accompanying action, so it is changed to the present participle 『, being』 as an adverbial of accompanying circumstance to fit the context.

error_sentence: It owns a good geographical position that is next to Austria,France,Italy and German.
correct_sentence: It has a good geographical position, being next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: German
correction: Germany
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'Germany'; in the original sentence, 〈German〉 means 'German language or German person', which is a noun error, therefore 〈German〉 needs to be changed to 『Germany』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: People call it "the garden of world" beacause beautiful scenaries are everywhere in Switzerland.
correct_sentence: People call it "the garden of the world" because the beautiful scenery is everywhere in Switzerland.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 『the』 indicates specific reference; in the original sentence, 〈garden of the world〉 specifically refers to 'the world's garden', therefore 〈garden of world〉 needs to be changed to 『the garden of world』 to clarify the meaning.

error_sentence: People call it "the garden of world" beacause beautiful scenaries are everywhere in Switzerland.
correct_sentence: People call it "the garden of the world" because the beautiful scenery is everywhere in Switzerland.
error: beacause beautiful scenaries are
correction: because the beautiful scenery is
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'because'; therefore, 〈beacause〉 is a misspelling of 『because』, and 〈beacause〉 needs to be changed to 『because』 to make the sentence flow smoothly; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 『the』 indicates specific reference; the original phrase 〈beautiful scenaries〉 lacks the necessary definite article 『the』 to specify the object, therefore 〈beautiful scenaries〉 needs to be changed to 『the beautiful scenery』 to clarify the meaning; ③ Noun Number Error: According to English expression habits, 『scenery』 is an uncountable noun meaning landscape/scenery; in the original sentence, 〈scenaries〉 incorrectly uses the plural form, so it needs to be changed to 『scenery』 to conform to semantic and expression habits.

error_sentence: As we all kown,Switzerland is well-kown for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.
correct_sentence: As we all know, Switzerland is well-known for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.
error: kown
correction: know
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'know'; therefore, 〈kown〉 is a misspelling of 『know』, and 〈kown〉 needs to be changed to 『know』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.

error_sentence: As we all kown,Switzerland is well-kown for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.
correct_sentence: As we all know, Switzerland is well-known for its gorgeous watches which stand for wealth and identity.
error: kown
correction: known
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'famous' or 'well-known'; therefore, 〈kown〉 is a misspelling of 『known』, and 〈kown〉 needs to be changed to 『known』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.