Writing prompt: Beijing

Student essay:
Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.Beking university is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment,you will have the best life of studying.In addition,if you live here,you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly.in my view,it is a good place for you to live alone and study.I think you can make many friends and won't be alone.During this time ,if you have any problems, i am glad to help you settle them.

Corrected essay:
Peking University is one of the most famous universities in China. I'm proud of you who can study here. Peking University is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment. You will have the best life of studying. In addition, if you live here, you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly. In my view, it is a good place for you to live alone and study. I think you can make many friends and won't be alone. During this time, if you have any problems, I am glad to help you settle them.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.
correct_sentence: Peking University is one of the most famous universities in China.
error: Beking university
correction: Peking University
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to international spelling, the intention here is to express "Beijing", therefore 〈Beking〉 is a misspelling of 『Peking』, and needs to be changed to 『Peking』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of proper nouns needs to be capitalized; 〈Beking university〉 is a proper noun representing "Peking University", therefore 〈Beking university〉 needs to be changed to 『Peking University』 to conform to the convention.

error_sentence: Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.
correct_sentence: Peking University is one of the most famous universities in China.
error: university
correction: universities
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈one of the most famous〉 needs to be followed by a plural noun; in the original sentence, 〈university〉 should be in plural form, therefore 〈university〉 should be changed to 『universities』 to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.
correct_sentence: Peking University is one of the most famous universities in China. I'm proud of you who can study here.
error: ,i'm
correction: . I'm
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈Beking university is one of the most famous university in China〉 and 〈i'm proud of you〉 are two main clauses, therefore 〈,〉 is changed to 『.』 to conform to grammar; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is changed to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Beking university is one of the most famous university in China,i'm proud of you who can study in here.
correct_sentence: I'm proud of you who can study here.
error: in
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, before the adverb 〈here〉, there is no need to add the preposition 〈in〉, therefore 〈study in here〉 needs to be changed to 『study here』 to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: Beking university is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment,you will have the best life of studying.
correct_sentence: Peking University is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment.
error: Beking university
correction: Peking University
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to international spelling, the intention here is to express "Beijing", therefore 〈Beking〉 is a misspelling of 『Peking』, and needs to be changed to 『Peking』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of proper nouns needs to be capitalized; 〈Beking university〉 is a proper noun representing "Peking University", therefore 〈Beking university〉 needs to be changed to 『Peking University』 to conform to the convention.

error_sentence: Beking university is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment,you will have the best life of studying.
correct_sentence: Peking University is not only known for its education but also its beautiful scenery and quiet environment. You will have the best life of studying.
error: ,you
correction: . You
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈Beking university is not only〉 and 〈you will have〉 are two main clauses, therefore 〈,you〉 is changed to 『. You』 to conform to grammar.

error_sentence: In addition,if you live here,you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly.in my view,it is a good place for you to live alone and study.
correct_sentence: In addition, if you live here, you will find that life is convenient and neighbourhoods are friendly. In my view, it is a good place for you to live alone and study.
error: friendly.in
correction: friendly. In
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words; in the original sentence, 〈friendly.in,I〉 lacks a space, therefore 〈friendly.in〉 needs to be changed to 『friendly. In』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: During this time ,if you have any problems, i am glad to help you settle them.
correct_sentence: During this time, if you have any problems, I am glad to help you settle them.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is changed to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.