Writing prompt: Survey Report about Healthy Eating

Student essay:
Hi, everyone, my name is lisa. I have a good healthy eating. Here are some suggetions about healthy eating.
Do you know an saying"an apple a day keep the doctor away"Eat a lot of vegetables and fruits are healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy. At twelve, I usually eat lots of fruit and vegetables for lunch . I always eat ice cream after dinner, I think eat it is not good, so I don't eat it now.
Meals is not good for us, so you'd don't eat it. Also eat hamburgers and snacks are not good for us.
Have a good habits for us are very important.

Corrected essay:
Hi, everyone, my name is Lisa. I have a good healthy eating habit. Here are some suggestions about healthy eating.
Do you know the saying "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"? Eating a lot of vegetables and fruits is healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy. At twelve, I usually eat lots of fruit and vegetables for lunch. I always eat ice cream after dinner, but I think eating it is not good, so I don't eat it now.
Skipping meals is not good for us, so you shouldn't do it. Also, eating hamburgers and snacks is not good for us.
Having good habits is very important for us.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Hi, everyone, my name is lisa.
correct_sentence: Hi, everyone, my name is Lisa.
error: lisa
correction: Lisa
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of proper nouns needs to be capitalized; 〈lisa〉 is a proper noun representing a name, therefore it needs to be changed from 〈lisa〉 to 『Lisa』 to conform to the convention.

error_sentence: I have a good healthy eating.
correct_sentence: I have a good healthy eating habit.
correction: habit
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: The phrase 〈healthy eating〉 needs to be supplemented with the noun 『habit』 as the headword to clearly express the complete meaning of “healthy eating habits”; therefore, 『habit』 is added after 〈eating〉 to fully express the semantics.

error_sentence: Here are some suggetions about healthy eating.

correct_sentence: Here are some suggestions about healthy eating.

error: suggetions
correction: suggestions
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, the intention here is to express “suggestions”; therefore, 〈suggetions〉 is a misspelling of 『suggestions』, and it needs to be changed from 〈suggetions〉 to 『suggestions』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Do you know an saying"an apple a day keep the doctor away"Eat a lot of vegetables and fruits are healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
correct_sentence: Do you know the saying "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"?
error: an saying"an
correction: the saying "an
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: The definite article 『the』 should be used here to modify 〈saying〉 to indicate a specific proverb, so 〈an 〉 is changed to 『the』 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Space Error: A space needs to be added before the quotation mark here, so 〈saying"an〉 is changed to 『saying "an』 to conform to the convention.

error_sentence: Do you know an saying"an apple a day keep the doctor away"Eat a lot of vegetables and fruits are healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
correct_sentence: Do you know the saying "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"?
error: keep
correction: keeps
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈an apple〉 is third-person singular and requires the third-person singular form of the verb; therefore, 〈keep〉 is changed to 『keeps』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: Do you know an saying"an apple a day keep the doctor away"Eat a lot of vegetables and fruits are healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
correct_sentence: Do you know the saying "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"? Eating a lot of vegetables and fruits is healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
error: away"Eat
correction: away"? Eating
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 『Do you know the saying "an apple a day keeps the doctor away"』 is an interrogative sentence; a question mark 『?』 needs to be added after the direct quotation, and a new sentence should begin, so 〈away"〉 is changed to 『away"?』 to comply with punctuation rules; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, words must be separated by spaces; in this sentence, 〈away〉 and 〈Eat〉 are two separate words and need to be separated by a space, so a space is added after 『away"?』 to conform to the convention; ③ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject of a sentence is an action or behavior, the subject needs to be in the gerund form, so 〈Eat〉 is changed to the gerund 『Eating』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Do you know an saying"an apple a day keep the doctor away"Eat a lot of vegetables and fruits are healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
correct_sentence: Eating a lot of vegetables and fruits is healthy for us, but junk food and snacks are not healthy.
error: are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Eating a lot of vegetables and fruits〉 is a gerund phrase, treated as a single concept, so the predicate verb needs to be in the singular form; therefore, 〈are〉 is changed to 『is』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: I always eat ice cream after dinner, I think eat it is not good, so I don't eat it now.

correct_sentence: I always eat ice cream after dinner, but I think eating it is not good, so I don't eat it now.

correction: but
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: The two parts of the sentence 〈I always eat ice cream after dinner〉 and 〈I think eat it is not good〉 express a contrasting relationship; therefore, the conjunction 『but』 needs to be added between 〈dinner,〉 and 〈I〉 to connect the preceding and succeeding logical relationship and maintain coherence.

error_sentence: I always eat ice cream after dinner, I think eat it is not good, so I don't eat it now.

correct_sentence: I always eat ice cream after dinner, but I think eating it is not good, so I don't eat it now.

error: eat
correction: eating
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject of a sentence is an action or behavior, the subject needs to be in the gerund form; therefore, 〈eat〉 is changed to the gerund 『eating』 to serve as the content of the object clause for the subject 〈I think〉, complying with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Meals is not good for us, so you'd don't eat it.
correct_sentence: Skipping meals is not good for us, so you shouldn't do it.
error: Meals
correction: Skipping meals
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence 〈Meals is not good〉 lacks a clear action subject, making the meaning ambiguous; here, the gerund phrase 『Skipping meals』 should be used as the subject to represent the act of “not eating meals,” so 〈Meals〉 is changed to 『Skipping meals』 to express the complete meaning.

error_sentence: Meals is not good for us, so you'd don't eat it.
correct_sentence: Skipping meals is not good for us, so you shouldn't do it.
error: 'd don't eat
correction: shouldn't do
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Auxiliary Error: 〈you'd don't〉 is an incorrect contraction combination and does not conform to grammatical rules, so 〈you'd don't〉 is changed to the modal verb 『shouldn't』 to express negative advice; ② Verb Choice Error: The verb 『do』 should be used here to match the abstract action of "Skipping meals" from the preceding text, so 〈eat〉 is changed to 『do』 to correctly express the sentence meaning.

error_sentence: Also eat hamburgers and snacks are not good for us.

correct_sentence: Also, eating hamburgers and snacks is not good for us.

error: eat
correction: , eating
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: A comma needs to be added after the adverb 〈Also〉 to separate the sentence meaning, so 『,』 is added after 〈Also〉 to make the sentence structure clear; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject of a sentence is an action or behavior, the subject needs to be in the gerund form, so 〈eat〉 is changed to the gerund 『eating』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Also eat hamburgers and snacks are not good for us.

correct_sentence: Also, eating hamburgers and snacks is not good for us.

error: are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈eating hamburgers and snacks〉 is a gerund phrase, treated as a single concept, so the predicate verb needs to be in the singular form; therefore, 〈are〉 is changed to 『is』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Have a good habits for us are very important.
correct_sentence: Having good habits is very important for us.
error: Have a
correction: Having
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject of a sentence is an action or behavior, the subject needs to be in the gerund form, so 〈Have〉 is changed to the gerund 『Having』 to comply with grammatical rules; ② Determiner Error: 〈good habits〉 is plural and does not require the article 〈a〉 for modification, so 〈a〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Have a good habits for us are very important.
correct_sentence: Having good habits is very important for us.
error: for us are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Having good habits〉 is a gerund phrase, treated as a single concept, so the predicate verb needs to be in the singular form; therefore, 〈for us are〉 is changed to 『is』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Have a good habits for us are very important.
correct_sentence: Having good habits is very important for us.
correction: for us
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Order Error: The prepositional phrase 『for us』 should be placed at the end of the sentence as an adverbial; the correct word order is 『is very important for us』, so 『for us』 is added after 〈important〉 to conform to English expression habits.