Writing prompt: My Favorite Teacher

Student essay:
Dear Henry,
I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your maths teacher,Mr Green.Now I'd like to tell you about my favourite teacher.His name is Yang Zhe.Mr Yang is a physics teacher.I like his teaching methods.When he talks to others,he always has a smile on his face. He is not only quite friendly,nut also humorous.In his class,you will never feel bored.He always gives us some advices about how to learn physics well.
One day,I failed an exam.After that,he helped me improve my physics and we dealed with difficult problems together.Finally,I got very good grades.
He helped me a lot.I will never forget him.He is my favourite teacher.

Corrected essay:
Dear Henry,
I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your maths teacher, Mr. Green. Now I'd like to tell you about my favourite teacher. His name is Yang Zhe. Mr. Yang is a physics teacher. I like his teaching methods. When he talks to others, he always has a smile on his face. He is not only quite friendly, but also humorous. In his class, you will never feel bored. He always gives us some advice about how to learn physics well.
One day, I failed an exam. After that, he helped me improve my physics and we dealt with difficult problems together. Finally, I got very good grades.
He helped me a lot. I will never forget him. He is my favourite teacher.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Dear Henry,
I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your maths teacher,Mr Green.
correct_sentence: Dear Henry,
I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your maths teacher, Mr. Green.
error: Mr
correction: Mr.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when 〈Mr〉 is used as an abbreviation for 'Mister', a period is required. The original sentence lacks a period after 〈Mr〉, which does not conform to punctuation usage rules; 〈Mr〉 should be changed to 『Mr.』 to meet standard writing rules.

error_sentence: Mr Yang is a physics teacher.
correct_sentence: Mr. Yang is a physics teacher.
error: Mr
correction: Mr.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, in date expressions, a space is needed between the month abbreviation and the day number. The original sentence 〈Nov.25〉 lacks a space, which does not conform to conventions; 〈Nov.25〉 should be changed to 『Nov. 25』.; ② Space Error: Similarly, based on English date writing requirements, the necessary space between the month abbreviation and the day number is missing, leading to incorrect formatting; 〈Nov.25〉 needs to be changed to 『Nov. 25』 to conform to standard writing format.

error_sentence: He is not only quite friendly,nut also humorous.
correct_sentence: He is not only quite friendly, but also humorous.
error: nut
correction: but
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English fixed collocation rules, 'not only... but also...' is a common correlative conjunction used to connect parallel elements, meaning 'not only... but also...'. In the original sentence, the conjunction following 'not only' is 〈nut〉; 〈nut〉 should be changed to 『but』 to make the sentence conform to the grammatical requirements of this fixed phrase and ensure clear and accurate logical expression.

error_sentence: He always gives us some advices about how to learn physics well.

correct_sentence: He always gives us some advice about how to learn physics well.

error: advices
correction: advice
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈advice〉 is an uncountable noun and cannot be made plural by adding 〈-s〉. The use of 〈advices〉 in the original sentence is a misuse of noun number; it should be changed to the singular form 『advice』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: After that,he helped me improve my physics and we dealed with difficult problems together.
correct_sentence: After that, he helped me improve my physics and we dealt with difficult problems together.
error: dealed
correction: dealt
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, the past tense of the verb 〈deal〉 is an irregular change, and the correct form is 〈dealt〉. The original sentence uses the non-standard past tense form 〈dealed〉, which does not conform to English verb tense rules and standard expression; 〈dealed〉 should be changed to 『dealt』 to ensure correct tense expression in the sentence.