Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
As we all know,reading can make great effects on our growth.But in my opinion,it's not the reading play the major part of makeing a man behave better,it's the practice.
Firstly,although reading makes a man have a wilder ranger of knowledge,it's just to change one's mind,not the behaviour.The only way to behave better as well as successfully is the practice.
Secondly,without the practice,no matter how much knowedge you acquire,undoubtedly,it's 'empty talk'.
Finally,so-called,practice makes perfect.Problems can be solved only through actions not the number of the books we read.
So in my opinion,studying through practice is of great importance,and we should read more books as well.

Corrected essay:
As we all know, reading can have great effects on our growth. But in my opinion, it's not the reading that plays the major part in making a man behave better. It's the practice.
Firstly, although reading makes a man have a wider range of knowledge, it just changes one's mind, not the behaviour. The only way to behave better as well as successfully is through practice.
Secondly, without practice, no matter how much knowledge you acquire, undoubtedly, it's 'empty talk.'
Finally, so-called practice makes perfect. Problems can be solved only through actions, not the number of books we read.
So in my opinion, studying through practice is of great importance, and we should read more books as well.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: As we all know,reading can make great effects on our growth.
correct_sentence: As we all know, reading can have great effects on our growth.
error: make
correction: have
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: The verb 〈make〉 is inappropriately paired with the noun 〈effects〉; the correct collocation is 『have effects』, meaning 'to produce an impact', so 〈make〉 is changed to 『have』 to correctly convey the meaning.

error_sentence: But in my opinion,it's not the reading play the major part of makeing a man behave better,it's the practice.

correct_sentence: But in my opinion, it's not the reading that plays the major part in making a man behave better.
error: play
correction: that plays
error_type: Relative Word Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Relative Word Error: The emphatic sentence structure here is missing the relative pronoun 『that』 to connect the clause; therefore, 『that』 is added before 〈play〉 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈reading〉 is singular and requires the third-person singular form of the verb; thus, 〈play〉 is changed to 『plays』 to align with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: But in my opinion,it's not the reading play the major part of makeing a man behave better,it's the practice.

correct_sentence: But in my opinion, it's not the reading that plays the major part in making a man behave better.
error: of makeing
correction: in making
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Preposition Error: The phrase “play a part in doing” should be used here to mean “to play a role in doing something”; therefore, 〈of〉 is changed to 『in』 to conform to idiomatic expression; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express “making”; thus, 〈makeing〉 is a misspelling of 『making』 and needs to be corrected to 『making』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: But in my opinion,it's not the reading play the major part of makeing a man behave better,it's the practice.

correct_sentence: But in my opinion, it's not the reading that plays the major part in making a man behave better. It's the practice.

error: ,it
correction: . It
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 〈But in my opinion,it's not the reading play the major part of makeing a man behave better〉 and 〈it's the practice〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can be separate sentences; therefore, 〈,〉 is changed to 『.』 and 〈it〉 is changed to 『It』; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, punctuation at the end of a sentence should be followed by a space before the first word of the next sentence; thus, 〈,it〉 is changed to 『. It』 to conform to the norm.

error_sentence: Firstly,although reading makes a man have a wilder ranger of knowledge,it's just to change one's mind,not the behaviour.
correct_sentence: Firstly, although reading makes a man have a wider range of knowledge, it just changes one's mind, not the behaviour.
error: wilder ranger
correction: wider range
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express “a wider range”; thus, 〈wilder ranger〉 is a misspelling of 『wider range』 and needs to be corrected to 『wider range』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: Firstly,although reading makes a man have a wilder ranger of knowledge,it's just to change one's mind,not the behaviour.
correct_sentence: Firstly, although reading makes a man have a wider range of knowledge, it just changes one's mind, not the behaviour.
error: 's just to change
correction: just changes
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence has unclear meaning and incorrect structure; considering the context, the intended meaning is “it just changes one's mind”; therefore, 〈's just to change〉 is modified to 『just changes』 to ensure semantic coherence and conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: The only way to behave better as well as successfully is the practice.

correct_sentence: The only way to behave better as well as successfully is through practice.

error: the
correction: through
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: 『through』 should be used here to describe “achieving by some means”; therefore, 〈the〉 is changed to 『through』 to indicate “through practice”.

error_sentence: Secondly,without the practice,no matter how much knowedge you acquire,undoubtedly,it's 'empty talk'.

correct_sentence: Secondly, without practice, no matter how much knowledge you acquire, undoubtedly, it's 'empty talk.
error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈practice〉 as an abstract concept does not require a definite article; therefore, 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Secondly,without the practice,no matter how much knowedge you acquire,undoubtedly,it's 'empty talk'.

correct_sentence: Secondly, without practice, no matter how much knowledge you acquire, undoubtedly, it's 'empty talk.
error: knowedge
correction: knowledge
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express “knowledge”; thus, 〈knowedge〉 is a misspelling of 『knowledge』 and needs to be corrected to 『knowledge』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: Secondly,without the practice,no matter how much knowedge you acquire,undoubtedly,it's 'empty talk'.

correct_sentence: Secondly, without practice, no matter how much knowledge you acquire, undoubtedly, it's 'empty talk. '

error: '.
correction: .'
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The order of the quotation mark 〈'〉 and the period 〈.〉 is incorrect; therefore, 〈'.〉 is changed to 『.'』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Finally,so-called,practice makes perfect.
correct_sentence: Finally, so-called practice makes perfect.
error: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: 〈so-called〉 is an adjective directly modifying 〈practice〉 and does not need to be separated by a comma; therefore, 〈,〉 is deleted to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Problems can be solved only through actions not the number of the books we read.

correct_sentence: Problems can be solved only through actions, not the number of books we read.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: A comma is needed between 〈actions〉 and 〈not〉 to express a contrastive relationship; therefore, 『,』 is added after 〈actions〉 to standardize the sentence structure.

error_sentence: Problems can be solved only through actions not the number of the books we read.

correct_sentence: Problems can be solved only through actions, not the number of books we read.

error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈books〉 here is used as a generic noun and does not require a definite article; therefore, 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to grammatical rules.