Writing prompt: How to Improve Your Spoken English

Student essay:
First, communicating with friends in English anywhere in daily lives. You can find your English skills being improved quickly.
Besides, it is useful for you to listen to the English news and watch English programmers. Although you don't really understand what people in programmers say, you can know more usages about the American slang.
What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discuss different topics with others.
Fourth, travelling in a country which English is spoken. You must try your best to talk with local people.
Last but not least, you'd better recite the articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.

Corrected essay:
First, communicate with friends in English anywhere in daily life. You can find your English skills being improved quickly. Besides, it is useful for you to listen to English news and watch English programs. Although you don't really understand what people in programs say, you can know more usages about American slang.
What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show your ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discussing different topics with others.
Fourth, travel to a country where English is spoken. You must try your best to talk with local people.
Last but not least, you'd better recite articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: First, communicating with friends in English anywhere in daily lives.
correct_sentence: First, communicate with friends in English anywhere in daily life.
error: communicating
correction: communicate
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the imperative sentence structure requires the use of the base form of the verb to express a suggestion; the original sentence uses 〈communicating〉, a nonfinite verb form, which does not conform to the imperative structure and needs to be changed to the base form 『communicate』 to maintain sentence structural consistency.

error_sentence: First, communicating with friends in English anywhere in daily lives.
correct_sentence: First, communicate with friends in English anywhere in daily life.
error: lives
correction: life
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English expression habits, 〈daily life〉 is a fixed phrase and uses the singular form when referring to “everyday life”; in the original sentence, 〈lives〉 is in the plural form and needs to be changed to 『life』.

error_sentence: You can find your English skills being improved quickly.

correct_sentence: You can find your English skills being improved quickly. Besides, it is useful for you to listen to English news and watch English programs.
error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: According to English sentence writing conventions, improper use of line breaks between paragraphs causes sentence fragmentation; the extra line break should be deleted to maintain paragraph coherence.

error_sentence: Besides, it is useful for you to listen to the English news and watch English programmers.
correct_sentence: Besides, it is useful for you to listen to English news and watch English programs.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the definite article is not needed when referring to English news in a general sense; 〈the〉 in the original sentence is redundant and should be deleted to make the expression conform to English usage.

error_sentence: Besides, it is useful for you to listen to the English news and watch English programmers.
correct_sentence: Besides, it is useful for you to listen to English news and watch English programs.
error: programmers
correction: programs
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the sentence meaning, 〈programmers〉 means “programmers”, while the context here requires expressing “programs”; 〈programmers〉 should be changed to 『programs』 to avoid semantic confusion.

error_sentence: Although you don't really understand what people in programmers say, you can know more usages about the American slang.

correct_sentence: Although you don't really understand what people in programs say, you can know more usages about American slang.

error: programmers
correction: programs
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the sentence meaning, the noun 〈programmers〉 means “programmers”, but the context requires referring to “English programs”, i.e., 『programs』; therefore, 〈programmers〉 needs to be changed to 『programs』 to fit the meaning.

error_sentence: Although you don't really understand what people in programmers say, you can know more usages about the American slang.

correct_sentence: Although you don't really understand what people in programs say, you can know more usages about American slang.

error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, 〈American slang〉 is a general concept and does not require a definite article; 〈the〉 in the original sentence is redundant and should be deleted to make the expression more concise.

error_sentence: What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discuss different topics with others.

correct_sentence: What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show your ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discussing different topics with others.

correction: your
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈show ability〉 is missing a possessive pronoun; 『your』 should be added to clarify “show your ability”.

error_sentence: What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discuss different topics with others.

correct_sentence: What's more, joining the English corner is an excellent chance to show your ability and take part in different activities such as singing English songs and discussing different topics with others.

error: discuss
correction: discussing
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈such as〉 should be followed by a gerund to maintain parallel structure; in the original sentence, 〈discuss〉 is the base form of the verb and should be changed to the gerund form 『discussing』.

error_sentence: Fourth, travelling in a country which English is spoken.
correct_sentence: Fourth, travel to a country where English is spoken.
error: travelling in
correction: travel to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, imperative sentences require the base form of the verb; in the original sentence, 〈travelling〉 is a gerund form, which does not meet the imperative requirement and should be changed to the base form 〈travel〉; ② Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, 『to』 should be used to indicate going to a country; in the original sentence, 〈in〉 is used incorrectly and should be changed to 『to』 to clarify the destination of travel.

error_sentence: Fourth, travelling in a country which English is spoken.
correct_sentence: Fourth, travel to a country where English is spoken.
error: which
correction: where
error_type: Relative Word Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Relative Word Error: According to English grammar rules, in an adjective clause, when the antecedent indicates a place and serves as an adverbial of place in the clause, the relative adverb 〈where〉 should be used to refer to the place; in the original sentence, 〈which〉 is used to refer to things and is used incorrectly here; 〈which〉 should be changed to 『where』 to correctly express the place relationship.

error_sentence: Last but not least, you'd better recite the articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.
correct_sentence: Last but not least, you'd better recite articles in public because it can go beyond yourself.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, when 〈articles〉 refers to articles in a general sense, the definite article 〈the〉 is not needed; in the original sentence, 〈the〉 is redundant and should be deleted to make the expression more concise and natural.