Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit,Switzerland to you.
Switzerland is a developed country located in Central Europe.The area of Switzerland is 41000 square kilometres.The population of Switerland is 7.5million.The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.
Switzerland is a beautiful country and visited by lots of people every year.The scenry of the country is so besutiful that people it the garden of the world.
Switzerland is famous for its watch, the chemical and food industry.
In a word,Switzerland is worth to visit.

Corrected essay:
Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit, Switzerland, to you.
Switzerland is a developed country located in Central Europe. The area of Switzerland is 41,000 square kilometres. The population of Switzerland is 7.5 million. The capital of the country is Berne and Geneva, the city which is famous in the world, is also in Switzerland.
Switzerland is next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
Switzerland is a beautiful country and visited by lots of people every year. The scenery of the country is so beautiful that people call it the garden of the world.
Switzerland is famous for its watches, the chemical industry and the food industry.
In a word, Switzerland is worth visiting.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit,Switzerland to you.

correct_sentence: Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit, Switzerland, to you.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, an appositive, which provides additional information about the preceding noun, is usually set off by commas to clarify sentence structure. In the original sentence, 〈Switzerland〉, as an appositive to “the country that I want to visit”, is missing a comma after it. Adding a comma 『,』 after 〈Switzerland〉, forming “Today I'll introduce the country that I want to visit, Switzerland, to you.”, makes the sentence structure clear and conforms to English punctuation norms.

error_sentence: The area of Switzerland is 41000 square kilometres.
correct_sentence: The area of Switzerland is 41,000 square kilometres.
error: 41000
correction: 41,000
error_type: Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Number Error: In English writing conventions, to enhance the clarity and readability of numbers, a thousand separator is usually added when a number reaches the thousands or more. The number 〈41000〉 in the original sentence does not follow this convention. Changing it to 『41,000』 conforms to English numeral writing habits, making the expression more standard and easier to read.

error_sentence: The population of Switerland is 7.5million.
correct_sentence: The population of Switzerland is 7.5 million.
error: Switerland is 7.5million
correction: Switzerland is 7.5 million
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “Switzerland”; 〈Switerland〉 has a spelling error. The correct spelling should be 『Switzerland』; modifying 〈Switerland〉 to 『Switzerland』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms; ② Space Error: In English writing, a space is usually required between a number and its unit. The original sentence's 〈7.5million〉 does not follow this rule. Changing it to 『7.5 million』 conforms to English writing rules, making the expression more standard.

error_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.

correct_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Geneva, the city which is famous in the world, is also in Switzerland.

error: Genva
correction: Geneva
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “Geneva”; 〈Genva〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『Geneva』; modifying 〈Genva〉 to 『Geneva』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms and accurately represents the city of Geneva.

error_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.

correct_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Geneva, the city which is famous in the world, is also in Switzerland.

error: famoue
correction: is famous
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: The adjective clause “which famou in the world” in the original sentence lacks a predicate verb. The adjective “famous” cannot serve as a predicate alone; the be-verb 『is』 needs to be added to form “which is famous”, making the adjective clause structure complete and conforming to grammatical rules; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “famous”; 〈famoue〉 is a misspelling of 『famous』. 〈famoue〉 should be modified to 『famous』 to make the word spelling conform to English norms.

error_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.

correct_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Geneva, the city which is famous in the world, is also in Switzerland.

error: Switerland
correction: Switzerland.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “Switzerland”; 〈Switerland〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『Switzerland』; modifying 〈Switerland〉 to 『Switzerland』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms; ② Punctuation Error: In English writing, a period is needed at the end of a sentence to indicate its completion. The original sentence is missing a period at the end; after correcting the spelling error, a period 『.』 should be added at the end of the sentence to make it conform to English writing rules.

error_sentence: The capital of the country is Berne and Genva ,the city which famoue in the world ,is also in Switerland
Switzerland is next to Austra,France,Italy and Germany.

correct_sentence: Switzerland is next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.

error: Austra
correction: Austria
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “Austria”; 〈Austra〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『Austria』; modifying 〈Austra〉 to 『Austria』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms and accurately represents the country's name.

error_sentence: The scenry of the country is so besutiful that people it the garden of the world.

correct_sentence: The scenery of the country is so beautiful that people call it the garden of the world.

error: scenry
correction: scenery
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “scenery”; 〈scenry〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『scenery』; modifying 〈scenry〉 to 『scenery』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms and accurately conveys the meaning of “scenery”.

error_sentence: The scenry of the country is so besutiful that people it the garden of the world.

correct_sentence: The scenery of the country is so beautiful that people call it the garden of the world.

error: besutiful
correction: beautiful
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “beautiful”; 〈besutiful〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『beautiful』; modifying 〈besutiful〉 to 『beautiful』 makes the sentence conform to English spelling norms and accurately conveys the meaning of “beautiful”.

error_sentence: The scenry of the country is so besutiful that people it the garden of the world.

correct_sentence: The scenery of the country is so beautiful that people call it the garden of the world.

correction: call
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: In the original sentence “people it the garden of the world”, a predicate verb is missing, making it unable to form a complete subject-verb-object structure to accurately convey meaning. Adding the verb 『call』 to form “people call it the garden of the world” makes the sentence structure complete, conforms to grammatical rules, and can accurately express the meaning “people call it the garden of the world”.

error_sentence: Switzerland is famous for its watch, the chemical and food industry.

correct_sentence: Switzerland is famous for its watches, the chemical industry and the food industry.

error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈watch〉 as “wristwatch” is a countable noun. This sentence aims to express the overall concept of Switzerland's famous watch industry, not a single watch, so the plural form is needed. Changing 〈watch〉 to 『watches』 conforms to grammatical rules and accurately conveys the meaning.

error_sentence: Switzerland is famous for its watch, the chemical and food industry.

correct_sentence: Switzerland is famous for its watches, the chemical industry and the food industry.

error: and
correction: industry and the
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Error: In the parallel structure “the chemical and food industry”, “the chemical” is missing a head noun. To maintain consistency with 〈the food industry〉, 『industry』 needs to be added, forming the complete expression “the chemical industry”, which accurately expresses “chemical industry”; ② Determiner Error: In “the chemical and food industry”, to clearly and accurately express the two parallel concepts of chemical industry and food industry, the determiner 『the』 should be added before “chemical industry” to align with the structure of “the food industry”. Adding 『the』 clearly distinguishes the two industries, avoids semantic confusion, and makes the sentence expression more standard and rigorous.

error_sentence: In a word,Switzerland is worth to visit.
correct_sentence: In a word, Switzerland is worth visiting.
error: to visit
correction: visiting
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, “be worth” is a fixed phrase that should be followed by a gerund form as its object. “to visit” in the original sentence does not conform to this grammatical rule. Changing 〈to visit〉 to 『visiting』 makes the sentence conform to the “be worth doing sth.” structure, correctly expressing the meaning “worth doing something”.