Writing prompt: The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars

Student essay:
As the standard of living is getting higher, more and more people are buying cars.As we all know,cars have been playing an important role in our daily life.But everything has its two sides and it is not an expection.It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages
First of all,it's undeniable that the cars provide a convenient way of transport for people.The time is reduced, we can do more things and go a farther place.On the contrary,other people have different views.They render the following opinions.As the growing of private cars,the air pollution index is increasing.Beyond the shadow of a doubt,it's the most threatening thing.
Personally,I believe the technology which is able to solve this problem will be appeared in the future.What we can do is that reducing the times as much as possible we go out by car. To protect the enviroment is to love ourselves.

Corrected essay:
As the standard of living is getting higher, more and more people are buying cars. As we all know, cars have been playing an important role in our daily life. But everything has its two sides and it is not an exception. It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages.
First of all, it's undeniable that cars provide a convenient way of transport for people. The time is reduced. We can do more things and go to a farther place. On the contrary, other people have different views. They render the following opinions. As the number of private cars grows, the air pollution index is increasing. Beyond the shadow of a doubt, it's the most threatening thing.
Personally, I believe the technology which is able to solve this problem will appear in the future. What we can do is reduce the number of times we go out by car as much as possible. To protect the environment is to love ourselves.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: But everything has its two sides and it is not an expection.
correct_sentence: But everything has its two sides and it is not an exception.
error: expection
correction: exception
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'exception'. The correct English spelling for '例外' is 'exception'. There is a spelling error here; the incorrect spelling 〈expection〉 needs to be changed to 『exception』 to conform to spelling rules and the original meaning.

error_sentence: It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages
First of all,it's undeniable that the cars provide a convenient way of transport for people.
correct_sentence: It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages.

correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English syntactic rules, the clauses 〈It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages〉 and 〈First of all〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and belong to two different idea groups, thus they need to be separate sentences, separated by a period. A period 『.』 should be added after 〈disadvantages〉 to comply with syntactic rules.

error_sentence: It has a good many advantages and some disadvantages
First of all,it's undeniable that the cars provide a convenient way of transport for people.
correct_sentence: First of all, it's undeniable that cars provide a convenient way of transport for people.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, plural countable nouns usually indicate a general reference. Based on the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'cars provide a convenient way of transport', which is a general usage. Therefore, the definite article 〈the〉 needs to be deleted to comply with grammar rules and the original meaning.

error_sentence: The time is reduced, we can do more things and go a farther place.
correct_sentence: The time is reduced. We can do more things and go to a farther place.
error: , we
correction: . We
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English syntactic rules, the clauses 〈The time is reduced〉 and 〈we can do more things...〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and belong to two different idea groups, thus they need to be separate sentences, separated by a period. It is necessary to change 〈, we〉 to 『. We』 to comply with syntactic rules.

error_sentence: The time is reduced, we can do more things and go a farther place.
correct_sentence: We can do more things and go to a farther place.
correction: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, when the verb 'go' is followed by a place noun, the preposition 'to' needs to be added. Therefore, there is a preposition error here; 『to』 needs to be added after 〈go〉 to comply with grammar rules and the original meaning.

error_sentence: As the growing of private cars,the air pollution index is increasing.
correct_sentence: As the number of private cars grows, the air pollution index is increasing.
error: growing
correction: number
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'the number of private cars'. The English word corresponding to the headword '数量' is 'number'. Therefore, 〈growing〉 needs to be changed to 『number』 to match the original meaning.

error_sentence: As the growing of private cars,the air pollution index is increasing.
correct_sentence: As the number of private cars grows, the air pollution index is increasing.
correction: grows
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to the original sentence's meaning and previous corrections, a predicate verb meaning 'grows' is missing here. Since the subject is 〈number〉, the third-person singular form of the verb 『grows』 should be added after 〈cars〉 to match the original meaning and the principle of subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Personally,I believe the technology which is able to solve this problem will be appeared in the future.
correct_sentence: Personally, I believe the technology which is able to solve this problem will appear in the future.
error: be appeared
correction: appear
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Voice Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 'appear' is an intransitive verb and does not have a passive voice. Therefore, there is a verb voice error here. 〈be appeared〉 needs to be changed to the base form of the verb 『appear』 to comply with grammar rules and the original meaning.

error_sentence: What we can do is that reducing the times as much as possible we go out by car.
correct_sentence: What we can do is reduce the number of times we go out by car as much as possible.
error: that reducing the times as much as possible
correction: reduce the number of times
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: According to English syntactic rules, the conjunction 'that' in a subject clause can be omitted, and a verb acting as the subject in the main clause after a 'be' verb can use its base form. Therefore, 〈that reducing〉 needs to be changed to 『reduce』 to comply with English syntactic rules; according to the original context, it intends to express 'reduce the number of times going out by car as much as possible', and the adverb 'as much as possible' should be placed at the end of the sentence, so the redundant adverbial phrase 〈as much as possible〉 needs to be deleted here; ② Noun Error: According to the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'number of times'. Therefore, the headword phrase 『number of』 needs to be added before 〈times〉 to match the original meaning.

error_sentence: What we can do is that reducing the times as much as possible we go out by car.
correct_sentence: What we can do is reduce the number of times we go out by car as much as possible.
correction: as much as possible
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to the original context, it intends to express 'reduce the number of times going out by car as much as possible'. The adverbial phrase 'as much as possible' needs to be placed at the end of the sentence. Therefore, the adverbial phrase 『as much as possible』, meaning 'as much as possible', needs to be added after 〈by car〉 to comply with the original context and syntactic rules.

error_sentence: To protect the enviroment is to love ourselves.
correct_sentence: To protect the environment is to love ourselves.
error: enviroment
correction: environment
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'protect the environment'. The correct spelling for the word '环境' is 'environment'. Therefore, there is a word spelling error here. The incorrect spelling 〈enviroment〉 needs to be changed to 『environment』 to conform to word spelling rules.