Writing prompt: How to Learn Chinese Well?

Student essay:
I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese,I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese,you can recommend to you.First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time.Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.
In the end,you can also make Chinese friends,they basically can give you to solve your difficulties.

Corrected essay:
I'm glad you asked me how to learn Chinese. Here are a few ways to learn Chinese well that I can recommend to you. First of all, you can take a class in Chinese. You can learn Chinese better and are also likely to encounter friends who are very familiar with Chinese. You can ask them for help when you have difficulties. Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home. This is helpful for your study. You can also learn to sing Chinese songs. This is good for your Chinese pronunciation.
In the end, you can also make Chinese friends. They basically can help you to solve your difficulties.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese,I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese,you can recommend to you.
correct_sentence: I'm glad you asked me how to learn Chinese.
error: ask
correction: asked
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules and sentence context, the action “you asked me how to learn Chinese” occurred in the past and is a completed action, so the predicate verb should be in the past tense; in the original sentence, 〈ask〉 is in the simple present tense, which does not fit the context, so 〈ask〉 should be changed to the past tense 『asked』 to make the sentence tense correct and logically coherent.

error_sentence: I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese,I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese,you can recommend to you.
correct_sentence: I'm glad you asked me how to learn Chinese. Here are a few ways to learn Chinese well that I can recommend to you.
error: ,I here
correction: . Here
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese〉 and 〈I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese〉 are two independent main clauses and cannot be connected by a comma; a period should be used for separation, changing 〈, I here〉 to 『. Here』 to make the sentence structure complete; ② Case Error: The first letter of the sentence should be capitalized; in the original sentence, the first letter of 〈here〉 is lowercase, which does not conform to the standard, so 〈here〉 should be changed to the capitalized form 『Here』.

error_sentence: I'm glad you ask me how to learn Chinese,I here are a few ways to learn good Chinese,you can recommend to you.
correct_sentence: Here are a few ways to learn Chinese well that I can recommend to you.
error: good Chinese,you
correction: Chinese well that I
error_type: Relative Word Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Adverb Error: According to English grammar, verbs should be modified by adverbs; in the original sentence, 〈learn〉 is a verb, and modifying it with the adjective 〈good〉 does not conform to grammatical rules, so 〈good〉 should be changed to the adverb 『well』 to correctly modify 〈learn〉; ② Relative Word Error: “I can recommend to you” is an attributive clause modifying “ways” and requires a relative word to introduce it; the original sentence lacks a relative word, leading to an incomplete sentence structure and semantic break, so the relative word 『that』 should be added to correctly connect the clause with the antecedent; ③ Pronoun Error: Semantically, the subject recommending methods for learning Chinese is “I”; using 〈you〉 in the original sentence causes unclear reference, so 〈you〉 should be changed to 『I』 to clarify the identity of the recommender.

error_sentence: First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time.
correct_sentence: First of all, you can take a class in Chinese. You can learn Chinese better and are also likely to encounter friends who are very familiar with Chinese.
error: ,you can better learning Chinese,is
correction: . You can learn Chinese better and are
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, multiple independent main clauses like 〈you can take a class in Chinese〉〈you can better learning Chinese〉 are incorrectly connected only by commas; these commas should be changed to periods, for example, changing 〈,you can better learning Chinese,〉 to 『. You can learn Chinese better』, to make the sentence structure clear; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the word at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized; in the original sentence, words like 〈first of all〉 at the beginning of the sentence are not capitalized and should be changed to their capitalized forms, such as 『First of all』; ③ Word Order Error: The word order in 〈you can better learning Chinese〉 in the original sentence is incorrect; the correct expression should be 『You can learn Chinese better』, requiring adjustment of word order to conform to English grammar rules and expression habits; ④ Verb Choice Error: The modal verb 〈can〉 should be followed by the base form of the verb; in the original sentence, 〈learning〉 in 〈you can better learning Chinese〉 does not meet this requirement and should be changed to the base form 『learn』; ⑤ Conjunction Error: The logical relationship between sentences in the original sentence is unclear, lacking appropriate conjunctions. For example, when expressing parallel or sequential relationships, conjunctions like 〈and〉 should be used appropriately to make sentence transitions natural and logically coherent; ⑥ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: In 〈is also likely to encounter...〉, the subject and verb do not match in number; considering the context, 〈is〉 should be changed to 『are』 to ensure subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time.
correct_sentence: You can learn Chinese better and are also likely to encounter friends who are very familiar with Chinese.
correction: friends who are
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: In the original sentence, 〈very familiar with Chinese friends〉 acts as a modifying component but lacks a relative word to introduce an attributive clause, resulting in an incomplete sentence structure. It is necessary to add 『who are』 to clarify the modifying relationship and complete the sentence structure, i.e., changing 〈very familiar with Chinese friends〉 to 『who are very familiar with Chinese friends』.

error_sentence: First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time.
correct_sentence: You can learn Chinese better and are also likely to encounter friends who are very familiar with Chinese. You can ask them for help when you have difficulties.
error: friends,you
correction: . You
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, at 〈friends,you〉, independent main clauses cannot be connected by a comma; the comma should be changed to a period, i.e., from 〈friends,you〉 to 『. You』, to make the sentence structure correct; ② Pronoun Error: The pronoun used here in the original sentence does not conform to the consistency of the subject in the subsequent sentence; to make the meaning coherent and grammatically correct, the pronoun should be changed to 『You』 to maintain consistency with the subject of the subsequent sentence.

error_sentence: First of all,you can take a class in Chinese,you can better learning Chinese,is also likely to encounter very familiar with Chinese friends,you can ask them to have a difficult time. Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: You can ask them for help when you have difficulties. Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home.
error: to have a difficult time.Sencond
correction: for help when you have difficulties. Second
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: In the original sentence, 〈ask them to have a difficult time〉 is semantically contradictory; the structure “ask sb. to do sth.” is not reasonably expressive here; according to the context, it should be changed to 『ask them for help』, meaning to seek help from them; ② Sentence Structure Error: In the original sentence, 〈to have a difficult time〉 is unclear in meaning and the sentence structure is incomplete; replacing it with 『for help when you have difficulties』 can clearly express the way to seek help when encountering difficulties; ③ Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that “second” is intended here, so 〈Sencond〉 is a misspelling of 『Second』; 〈Sencond〉 needs to be corrected to 『Second』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.

error_sentence: Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home.
error: see
correction: read
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: In the original sentence, 〈see books〉 is an improper collocation; in English, the expression “read books” cannot use 〈see〉; 〈see〉 mainly emphasizes visually “seeing”, while the action of reading should use 『read』; 〈see〉 should be changed to 『read』 to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home.
correction: watch
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing the action of “watching television,” 〈see〉 cannot be used; 〈see〉 focuses on the result of “seeing,” while the correct verb is 『watch』; in the original sentence, 〈see television〉 is an improper collocation, and 〈see〉 should be changed to 『watch』.

error_sentence: Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: Second, you can also read more Chinese books and watch Chinese television at home. This is helpful for your study.
error: in the home,this
correction: at home. This
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, at 〈in the home,this〉, independent main clauses cannot be connected by a comma; the comma should be changed to a period, i.e., from 〈in the home,this〉 to 『at home. This』, to make the sentence structure correct; ② Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the correct fixed collocation for “at home” is 〈at home〉; in the original sentence, 〈in the home〉 is incorrect; 〈in〉 should be changed to 『at』, and 〈the〉 should be removed to conform to English expression habits.

error_sentence: Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: This is helpful for your study. You can also learn to sing Chinese songs.
error: ,you
correction: . You
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In English grammar, independent sentences cannot be connected merely by a comma. In the original sentence, parts like 〈you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study〉 and 〈you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation〉 have multiple independent sentences separated only by commas, resulting in a confusing structure. Relevant commas should be changed to periods, for example, changing 〈,you〉 to 『. You』, to make the sentence structure clear and reasonable; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the word at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈you〉 is at the beginning of a sentence and should be changed to the capitalized 『You』.

error_sentence: Sencond,you can also see more Chinese books and Chinese television in the home,this is helpful for your study,you can also learn to sing Chinese songs,this is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

correct_sentence: You can also learn to sing Chinese songs. This is good for your Chinese pronunciation.

error: ,this
correction: . This
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation rules, independent sentences cannot be connected merely by a comma. The original sentences 〈you can also learn to sing Chinese songs〉 and 〈this is good for your Chinese pronunciation〉 are two independent sentences; connecting them only with a comma does not conform to grammatical rules; the comma should be changed to a period, i.e., changing 〈,this〉 to 『. This』, to make the sentence structure clear; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the word at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈this〉 is at the beginning of a sentence and should be changed to the capitalized 『This』.

error_sentence: In the end,you can also make Chinese friends,they basically can give you to solve your difficulties.
correct_sentence: In the end, you can also make Chinese friends. They basically can help you to solve your difficulties.
error: ,they
correction: . They
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, at 〈,they〉, 〈you can also make Chinese friends〉 and 〈they basically can give you to solve your difficulties〉 are two independent main clauses and cannot be connected merely by a comma; the comma should be changed to a period, i.e., from 〈,they〉 to 『. They』, to make the sentence structure correct; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the word at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈they〉 is at the beginning of the sentence and should be changed to the capitalized 『They』.

error_sentence: In the end,you can also make Chinese friends,they basically can give you to solve your difficulties.
correct_sentence: They basically can help you to solve your difficulties.
error: give
correction: help
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English expression habits, the collocation 〈give you to solve〉 in the original sentence is incorrect; the verb “give” cannot accurately express the meaning of “helping to solve problems” here. To express helping to solve difficulties, the verb 『help』 should be used, i.e., 『help you to solve』, so 〈give〉 needs to be changed to 『help』.