Writing prompt: Being a Good Listener

Student essay:
Ladies and gentlemen, my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.
Nowadays, listening has become a problem we have to face. It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement for our listening ability it is a common belief that we will be sociable. Nevertheless parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap. It must be made clear that the student should observe discipline. Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their score. There is no doubt that the students can respect others. Nevertheless we can be patient for our classmates and cherish them. Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a listener.
At length I sincerely believe that we can do better in future. Thank for your listening!

Corrected essay:
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today, I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.
Nowadays, listening has become a problem we have to face. It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement of our listening ability. It is a common belief that we will be more sociable. Nevertheless, parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap. It must be clear that students should observe discipline. Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their scores. There is no doubt that students can respect others. Nevertheless, we can be patient with our classmates and cherish them. Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a good listener.
At length, I sincerely believe that we can do better in the future. Thank you for your listening!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Ladies and gentlemen, my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you.
correct_sentence: Ladies and gentlemen, it is my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you.
correction: it is
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to the structural requirements of the English fixed expression 〈It is one's honor to do〉, the original sentence lacks the necessary subject and linking verb. Therefore, 『it is』 should be added before 〈my honor〉 to form a complete subject-linking verb-predicative structure, modified to 『it is my honor』 to conform to standard English expression norms.

error_sentence: Then today I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.

correct_sentence: Then today, I'd like to talk something about how to be a good listener.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English adverbial separation rules, when the time adverbial 〈Then today〉 serves as a sentence-initial modifying component, it needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma. Therefore, a 『,』 is added after 〈today〉 to form the correct punctuation format 『Then today,』.

error_sentence: It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement for our listening ability it is a common belief that we will be sociable.
correct_sentence: It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement of our listening ability.
error: for
correction: of
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to the fixed collocation requirements of the noun 〈improvement〉, when expressing 'the progress of something,' the preposition 〈of〉 should be used instead of 〈for〉 to form a possessive relationship. Therefore, 〈for〉 is corrected to 『of』 to ensure the grammatical accuracy of the phrase 『improvement of ability』.

error_sentence: It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement for our listening ability it is a common belief that we will be sociable.
correct_sentence: It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement of our listening ability. It is a common belief that we will be more sociable.
error: it
correction: . It
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English sentence structure rules, a period must be used to clearly separate the two independent clauses ending with 〈ability〉 and starting with 〈it is〉. By adding 『. It』, the run-on sentence is corrected to a compliant independent sentence structure.

error_sentence: It is time to take the advice of others and to put special emphasis on the improvement for our listening ability it is a common belief that we will be sociable.
correct_sentence: It is a common belief that we will be more sociable.
correction: more
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Adjective Error: In a comparative context, the adjective 〈sociable〉 requires a comparative form to express a change in degree. According to adjective comparative formation rules, the adverb of degree 『more』 is added after 〈will be〉 to form the reasonable comparative structure 『will be more sociable』.

error_sentence: Nevertheless parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap.
correct_sentence: Nevertheless, parents can comprehend children, and they will eliminate the generation gap.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: Following English conjunction usage norms, when 〈Nevertheless〉 serves as a sentence-initial concessive adverb, it must be separated from the main clause by a comma. Therefore, a 『,』 is added after 〈Nevertheless〉 to form the standard punctuation format 『Nevertheless,』.

error_sentence: It must be made clear that the student should observe discipline.
correct_sentence: It must be clear that students should observe discipline.
error: made
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the principle of conciseness in English expression, the past participle 『made』 in the passive structure 〈It must be made clear that〉 is redundant. Deleting it and retaining 〈be clear〉 both maintains the original sentence meaning and makes the expression more concise and efficient, finally modified to 『It must be clear that』.

error_sentence: It must be made clear that the student should observe discipline.
correct_sentence: It must be clear that students should observe discipline.
error: the student
correction: students
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to definite article usage rules, a plural noun representing a general group is not modified by a definite article, so the redundant definite article 〈the〉 in the sentence is removed; ② Noun Number Error: When referring to the student group in general, the plural form should be used according to English grammar rules. Therefore, the singular noun 〈the student〉 is corrected to the unarticled plural form 『students』, which both meets the logical subject requirement and eliminates the specific reference meaning.

error_sentence: Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their score.
correct_sentence: Teachers are concerned about students and help them to improve their scores.
error: score
correction: scores
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to the principle of pronoun agreement, when the possessive pronoun 〈their〉 clearly refers to a plural concept, the noun it modifies, 〈score〉, must be changed to the plural form 『scores』 to ensure that 『their scores』 maintains number agreement.

error_sentence: There is no doubt that the students can respect others.
correct_sentence: There is no doubt that students can respect others.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English article usage norms, the definite article 〈the〉 creates an unnecessary limitation when referring to a group in general. Deleting 〈the〉 makes 〈students〉 an unrestricted plural noun, more accurately expressing the generic meaning.

error_sentence: Nevertheless we can be patient for our classmates and cherish them.
correct_sentence: Nevertheless, we can be patient with our classmates and cherish them.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: Following English conjunction usage norms, when 〈Nevertheless〉 serves as a sentence-initial concessive adverb, it must be separated from the main clause by a comma. Therefore, a 『,』 is added after 〈Nevertheless〉 to form the standard punctuation format 『Nevertheless,』.

error_sentence: Nevertheless we can be patient for our classmates and cherish them.
correct_sentence: Nevertheless, we can be patient with our classmates and cherish them.
error: for
correction: with
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: When the adjective 〈patient〉 expresses 'being patient with someone,' it must be paired with the preposition 〈with〉 to form a fixed collocation. Therefore, the incorrect preposition 〈for〉 is corrected to 『with』, forming the grammatically correct structure 『be patient with students』 to accurately convey the meaning of being patient with classmates.

error_sentence: Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a listener.

correct_sentence: Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that we should be a good listener.

correction: good
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Adjective Error: The noun 〈listener〉 requires an adjective modifier to fully express the meaning of 'a good listener.' Adding 『good』 forms the phrase 『a good listener』, which both completes the sentence structure and aligns with the thematic requirements of the educational context, to clearly express the meaning of becoming an excellent listener.

error_sentence: At length I sincerely believe that we can do better in future.
correct_sentence: At length, I sincerely believe that we can do better in the future.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English adverbial separation rules, when the sentence-initial adverbial 〈At length〉 serves as a modifying component, it must be separated from the main clause by a comma. Therefore, a 『,』 is added after 〈At length〉, forming the compliant structure 『At length,』 to enhance the logic and readability of the sentence.

error_sentence: At length I sincerely believe that we can do better in future.
correct_sentence: At length, I sincerely believe that we can do better in the future.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English fixed phrase collocation requirements, the time expression 〈in the future〉 must include the definite article 〈the〉. Therefore, the missing 『the』 is added before 〈future〉, forming the standard expression 『in the future』 to clearly express a specific future time, making the sentence more consistent with English expression habits.

error_sentence: Thank for your listening!
correct_sentence: Thank you for your listening!
correction: you
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: When the verb 〈Thank〉 is used as a transitive verb, it requires an object. According to English conventions for expressing gratitude, 『you』 should be added to form a complete structure. Corrected to 『Thank you for...』, it both completes the sentence components and conforms to everyday communication norms.