Writing prompt: My New Teachers

Student essay:
After three weeks of school,I have more feeling about my teachers.Now let me intrduse them for you.
Mrs Wang is our Chinese teacher. My first impression of her is strict.But to my surised,she is very kind and energtic.She usually wave her hands when she feel excited.I don't think I will be bored in her class!But sometimes,she feeels angry with our homework.,because our always make some stupid mistakes.
The teacher is my first know is Mrs Bai.She is our math teacher, but also is our classleader.She is very kind and panitent.But when she serious,nobody dare to say a word unless she asks us to.Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well organised and clear.We all like her very much.I think I 'll do well in the exam with Mrs Bai teaching me.

Corrected essay:
After three weeks of school, I have more feelings about my teachers. Now let me introduce them to you.
Mrs. Wang is our Chinese teacher. My first impression of her is strictness. But to my surprise, she is very kind and energetic. She usually waves her hands when she feels excited. I don't think I will be bored in her class! But sometimes, she feels angry with our homework, because we always make some stupid mistakes.
The teacher I first get to know is Mrs. Bai. She is our math teacher, but also our class leader. She is very kind and patient. But when she is serious, nobody dares to say a word unless she asks us to. Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well-organised and clear. We all like her very much. I think I'll do well in the exam with Mrs. Bai teaching me.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: After three weeks of school,I have more feeling about my teachers.
correct_sentence: After three weeks of school, I have more feelings about my teachers.
error: feeling
correction: feelings
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈feeling〉 is used as a countable noun to express specific sensations, it needs to be in the plural form to match the preceding 〈more〉 (indicating multiple sensations), therefore it is changed to 『feelings』.

error_sentence: Now let me intrduse them for you.

correct_sentence: Now let me introduce them to you.

error: intrduse them for
correction: introduce them to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English word spelling conventions, the correct spelling of 〈intrduse〉 should be 『introduce』; this word is composed of the prefix 〈intro-〉 and the root 〈duce〉, meaning 'to introduce'; ② Preposition Error: According to English fixed collocations, the phrase “introduce sb. to sth.” means “to introduce someone to something,” therefore 〈for〉 needs to be changed to 『to』 to conform to correct usage.

error_sentence: Mrs Wang is our Chinese teacher.
correct_sentence: Mrs. Wang is our Chinese teacher.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Contraction Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, honorific abbreviations require a period before the surname, therefore 〈Mrs〉 is changed to 『Mrs.』 to conform to standard format.

error_sentence: My first impression of her is strict.
correct_sentence: My first impression of her is strictness.
error: strict
correction: her strictness
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, the linking verb 〈is〉 needs to be followed by a nominal component as a predicative, whereas 〈strict〉 is an adjective, therefore it needs to be changed to the noun form 『strictness』 to maintain correct sentence structure.

error_sentence: But to my surised,she is very kind and energtic.
correct_sentence: But to my surprise, she is very kind and energetic.
error: surised
correction: surprise
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English word spelling conventions, the correct spelling of 〈surised〉 should be 『surprise』; this word originates from the French 〈surprendre〉, meaning 'surprise'.

error_sentence: But to my surised,she is very kind and energtic.
correct_sentence: But to my surprise, she is very kind and energetic.
error: energtic
correction: energetic
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English word spelling conventions, the correct spelling of 〈energtic〉 should be 『energetic』; this word is composed of the root 〈energ-〉 (energy) and the adjective suffix 〈-etic〉, expressing the meaning 'full of energy'.

error_sentence: She usually wave her hands when she feel excited.
correct_sentence: She usually waves her hands when she feels excited.
error: wave
correction: waves
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈She〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb, therefore 〈wave〉 is changed to 『waves』 to maintain number agreement.

error_sentence: She usually wave her hands when she feel excited.
correct_sentence: She usually waves her hands when she feels excited.
error: feel
correction: feels
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈she〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb, therefore 〈feel〉 is changed to 『feels』 to maintain number agreement.

error_sentence: I don't think I will be bored in her class!But sometimes,she feeels angry with our homework.
correct_sentence: I don't think I will be bored in her class! But sometimes, she feels angry with our homework, because we always make some stupid mistakes.

error: class!But
correction: class! But
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English punctuation conventions, an exclamation mark 〈class!But〉 needs to be followed by a space to connect to a new sentence, therefore it is changed to 『! But』 to ensure correct writing format.

error_sentence: I don't think I will be bored in her class!But sometimes,she feeels angry with our homework.
correct_sentence: But sometimes, she feels angry with our homework, because we always make some stupid mistakes.

error: feeels
correction: feels
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English word spelling conventions, 〈feeels〉 is a repeated letter error; the correct spelling should be 『feels』 (third-person singular verb form), meaning '(someone) feels'.

error_sentence: I don't think I will be bored in her class!But sometimes,she feeels angry with our homework. ,because our always make some stupid mistakes.

correct_sentence: But sometimes, she feels angry with our homework, because we always make some stupid mistakes.

error: .,because our
correction: , because we
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English clause connection rules, a comma 〈,〉 is needed to separate the main clause and subordinate clause, not a period, therefore the redundant period is deleted to ensure sentence coherence; ② Space Error: According to English punctuation usage conventions, a comma should immediately follow the preceding word and be separated from the following word by a space, therefore 〈with our homework. ,because〉 is adjusted to 『with our homework, because』; ③ Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject of a clause should be the performer of the action, therefore the possessive 〈our〉 is changed to the nominative pronoun 『we』 to make the sentence logic clearer.

error_sentence: The teacher is my first know is Mrs Bai.
correct_sentence: The teacher I first get to know is Mrs. Bai.
error: is my first
correction: I first get to
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence 〈The teacher is my first know is Mrs Bai.〉 has a double predicate (is + is), which does not conform to basic English sentence pattern rules. By adding the relative clause 『I first get to know』, it is corrected to a complex sentence structure 『The teacher I first get to know is Mrs Bai.』 to adjust the sentence structure and clarify the meaning.

error_sentence: The teacher is my first know is Mrs Bai.
correct_sentence: The teacher I first get to know is Mrs. Bai.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Contraction Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, honorific abbreviations require a period before the surname, therefore 〈Mrs〉 is changed to 『Mrs.』 to conform to standard format.

error_sentence: She is our math teacher, but also is our classleader.
correct_sentence: She is our math teacher, but also our class leader.
error: is our classleader
correction: our class leader
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to the parallel structure requirement of the English correlative conjunction 〈not only...but also...〉, the redundant verb 〈is〉 needs to be deleted so that 『class leader』 as an object is symmetrical with the first half of the sentence; ② Space Error: According to English compound noun writing conventions, 〈classleader〉 should be written separately as 『class leader』 (class leader), with a space separating the two independent words.

error_sentence: She is very kind and panitent.
correct_sentence: She is very kind and patient.
error: panitent
correction: patient
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English vocabulary spelling rules, 〈panitent〉 is a letter order error; the correct spelling should be 『patient』 (adjective, meaning 'patient'), which originates from the Latin word patiens (to endure).

error_sentence: But when she serious,nobody dare to say a word unless she asks us to.
correct_sentence: But when she is serious, nobody dares to say a word unless she asks us to.
correction: is
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to basic English sentence structure, when the adjective 〈serious〉 acts as a predicative, it needs to be paired with a linking verb to form a 'subject-linking verb-predicative' structure, therefore 『is』 is added to make the sentence 『He is serious』 conform to grammatical norms.

error_sentence: But when she serious,nobody dare to say a word unless she asks us to.
correct_sentence: But when she is serious, nobody dares to say a word unless she asks us to.
error: dare
correction: dares
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the indefinite pronoun 〈nobody〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the singular form, therefore 〈dare〉 is changed to 『dares』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well organised and clear.
correct_sentence: Most of our class really appreciate her because her teaching is so well-organised and clear.
correction: -
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English compound adjective formation rules, when an adverb modifies a participle, a hyphen is needed to connect them, therefore 〈well organised〉 is changed to 『well-organised』 to conform to adjective writing conventions.

error_sentence: I think I 'll do well in the exam with Mrs Bai teaching me.
correct_sentence: I think I'll do well in the exam with Mrs. Bai teaching me.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Contraction Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, honorific abbreviations require a period before the surname, therefore 〈Mrs〉 is changed to 『Mrs.』 to conform to standard format.