Writing prompt: Housework

Student essay:
Every family is all the same.They will do lots of home work in the daily life.It's very boring.Our parents always do that,so we don't need to think about it.But if you ever care about your mother.You should help her to do some housework.Her heart will feel warm,and you will be proud of yourself.
At the first we should learn to do some housework.It's the most diffcult part.Because you maybe will spend a lot of time to learn it.But if you know well.You will like help your mother to do some housework.Beacuse you can feel that,your mother will not geeting tired,she need some times to have a rest.And you give her this time.Your and your mother will getting cloest.
That's all,I hope you can remember what I said.It is very uself in our daily life.

Corrected essay:
Every family is the same. They do lots of housework in daily life. It's very boring. Our parents always do it, so we don't need to think about it. But if you care about your mother, you should help her to do some housework. Her heart will feel warm, and you will be proud of yourself.
At first, we should learn to do some housework. It's the most difficult part because you may spend a lot of time learning it. But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired. She needs some time to have a rest. And you give her this time. You and your mother will get closer.
That's all. I hope you can remember what I said. It is very useful in our daily life.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Every family is all the same.
correct_sentence: Every family is the same.
error: all
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English grammar rules, 〈every〉 itself already expresses the concept of entirety, so 〈all〉 in the sentence is a redundant component, and deleting it will not affect the completeness or meaning of the sentence. Therefore, 〈is all the same〉 is modified to 『is the same』 to make the sentence more concise and fluent.

error_sentence: They will do lots of home work in the daily life.
correct_sentence: They do lots of housework in daily life.
error: will
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, the simple present tense should be used to describe daily habits, not the future tense. In the sentence, 〈will〉 indicates the future tense, but here it describes a daily habit, so it needs to be changed to the simple present tense by deleting 〈will〉 to fit the context, retaining 『do』 to make the tense correct.

error_sentence: They will do lots of home work in the daily life.
correct_sentence: They do lots of housework in daily life.
error: home work in the
correction: housework in
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to English expression habits, the correct expression for 'housework' is "housework"; the original writing does not conform to the standard noun form, so 〈home work〉 should be changed to 『housework』 to accurately express 'housework'; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 〈the〉 in 〈in the daily life〉 is redundant in this context; deleting 『the』 makes it more consistent with the idiomatic expression 'in daily life'.

error_sentence: Our parents always do that,so we don't need to think about it.
correct_sentence: Our parents always do it, so we don't need to think about it.
error: that
correction: it
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the context, the pronoun 〈that〉 here refers to the previously mentioned content unclearly and appears redundant, while 『it』 can refer back more clearly and concisely, conforming to pronoun reference rules. Therefore, 〈that〉 should be changed to 『it』.

error_sentence: But if you ever care about your mother.
correct_sentence: But if you care about your mother, you should help her to do some housework.
error: ever
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English expression habits, 〈ever〉 in the conditional clause 〈if you ever care〉 is a redundant component; removing it will not affect the meaning of the sentence, so 『ever』 is deleted to make the sentence more concise and clear.

error_sentence: But if you ever care about your mother. You should help her to do some housework.
correct_sentence: But if you care about your mother, you should help her to do some housework.
error: .You
correction: , you
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the conditional clause 'But if you ever care about your mother' and the main clause 'You should help her to do some housework' need to be connected by a comma, not a period. The punctuation in the original sentence 〈.You〉 is incorrect; it should be changed to 『, you』 to ensure the sentence structure is correct and the meaning is coherent.

error_sentence: At the first we should learn to do some housework.
correct_sentence: At first, we should learn to do some housework.
error: the first
correction: first,
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the fixed phrase 'at first' means 'firstly' and does not require the definite article 〈the〉. The 〈the〉 in 〈the first〉 in the original sentence is a redundant determiner and should be deleted; ② Punctuation Error: The adverbial phrase 〈at first〉 is at the beginning of the sentence, and a comma is needed after 〈first〉 to separate it from the main clause; therefore, it is changed to 『first,』 to conform to idiomatic expression and grammatical rules.

error_sentence: It's the most diffcult part. Because you maybe will spend a lot of time to learn it.
correct_sentence: It's the most difficult part because you may spend a lot of time learning it.
error: diffcult part.Because you maybe will
correction: difficult part because you may
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it intends to express 'difficult', so 〈diffcult〉 is a misspelling of 『difficult』 and needs to be changed to 『difficult』; ② Punctuation Error: In 'It's the most difficult part. Because...', 〈because〉 introduces an adverbial clause of reason and connects to the previous sentence; the period before 〈Because〉 should be deleted and changed to lowercase 『because』 to maintain sentence coherence; ③ Word Redundancy: According to English expression habits, 〈maybe will〉 is semantically redundant; 'maybe' is a modal adverb and 'will' is an auxiliary verb, and they cannot be used together. 『may』 itself can express possibility and is more concise and precise, so 〈maybe will〉 is changed to 『may』 to avoid redundancy and make the expression more concise and fluent.

error_sentence: Because you maybe will spend a lot of time to learn it.
correct_sentence: It's the most difficult part because you may spend a lot of time learning it.
error: to learn
correction: learning
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈spend time〉 should be followed by the gerund 『learning』, forming the structure 'spend time doing', not the infinitive 〈to learn〉. Therefore, 〈to learn〉 needs to be changed to 『learning』 to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: But if you know well. You will like help your mother to do some housework.
correct_sentence: But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired.
error: well.You
correction: it well, you
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the transitive verb 〈know〉 lacks an object, making it unable to clearly refer to content; adding 『it』 can clearly refer to housework, making the sentence meaning clear; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the conditional clause 'But if you know it well' and the main clause 'you will like helping your mother to do some housework' need to be connected by a comma, not a period; 〈well.You〉 is changed to 『well, you』 to maintain sentence coherence.

error_sentence: You will like help your mother to do some housework.
correct_sentence: But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired.
error: help
correction: helping
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be followed by the gerund form; in the original sentence, 〈help〉 is a base verb and does not meet the 'like doing' structural requirement. Therefore, 〈help〉 needs to be changed to 『helping』 to ensure the grammatical structure is correct.

error_sentence: You will like help your mother to do some housework. Beacuse you can feel that,your mother will not geeting tired,she need some times to have a rest.
correct_sentence: But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired.
error: .Beacuse
correction: because
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it intends to express 'because', so 〈Beacuse〉 is a misspelling of 『because』 and needs to be changed to 『because』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a clause and a main clause should be connected by a comma; the period in 〈.Beacuse〉 in the original sentence is incorrect and should be deleted, changing 〈.Beacuse〉 to 『because』 to maintain sentence coherence.

error_sentence: Beacuse you can feel that,your mother will not geeting tired,she need some times to have a rest.
correct_sentence: But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired.
error: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The sentence 'you can feel that...' is followed by an object clause; the comma after 'that' needs to be deleted to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Beacuse you can feel that,your mother will not geeting tired,she need some times to have a rest.
correct_sentence: But if you know it well, you will like helping your mother to do some housework because you can feel that your mother will not get tired. She needs some time to have a rest.
error: geeting tired,she need some times
correction: get tired. She needs some time
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it intends to express 'get tired', so 〈geeting〉 is a misspelling of 『get』 and needs to be changed to 『get』; ② Punctuation Error: 'because you can feel that your mother will not get tired' and 'she needs some time to have a rest' are two independent sentences; according to English punctuation rules, two independent sentences should be separated by a period. The comma in the original 〈tired,she〉 is incorrect and should be changed to 『tired. She』 to make the sentence structure clear and conform to punctuation norms; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈she〉 is third-person singular, so the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, 〈need〉 should be changed to 『needs』; ④ Noun Number Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, 'time' here refers to time, which is an uncountable noun; therefore, 〈times〉 should be changed to 『time』.

error_sentence: Your and your mother will getting cloest.

correct_sentence: You and your mother will get closer.

error: Your
correction: You
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈Your〉 is a possessive pronoun; here, as a subject, a nominative pronoun is needed. Therefore, 〈Your〉 in the original sentence is a pronoun error and needs to be changed to 『You』.

error_sentence: Your and your mother will getting cloest.

correct_sentence: You and your mother will get closer.

error: getting cloest
correction: get closer
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 should be followed by the base form of the verb; the form 〈getting〉 in 〈will getting〉 in the original sentence is incorrect and needs to be changed to 『will get』; ② Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it intends to express 'closer', so 〈cloest〉 is a misspelling of 『closer』 and needs to be changed to 『closer』.

error_sentence: That's all,I hope you can remember what I said.
correct_sentence: That's all.
error: ,
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, in 'That's all,I hope...', the 〈,〉 connects two independent sentences, which is structurally incorrect. 〈That's all〉 and 〈I hope you can remember what I said〉 are two independent and complete sentences and need to be separated by a period; therefore, 〈,〉 is changed to 『.』 to conform to grammatical norms.

error_sentence: It is very uself in our daily life.
correct_sentence: It is very useful in our daily life.
error: uself
correction: useful
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it intends to express 'useful', so 〈uself〉 is a misspelling of 『useful』 and needs to be changed to 『useful』 to make the sentence meaning coherent.