Writing prompt: Actions Speak Louder than Words

Student essay:
As the saying goes, Actions speak louder than words.I consider it is true enough for us to trust.
It's known to us , term begins, our class teacher always let us write a composition which is about your expectation and your plan in new term. We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm at all.Such as :I would make every effort to do everything superior to before. However,almost nobody can observe.Moreover, if you just talk without your specific actions, you will become the boastful to people.
In conclusion, words is nothing but words. Actions is the only way to make people admire you. Do not talk much, just act,in that actions speak louder than words.

Corrected essay:
As the saying goes, actions speak louder than words. I consider it true enough for us to trust.
It's known to us that when a term begins, our class teacher always lets us write a composition which is about our expectations and our plans in the new term. We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm it at all, such as: I would make every effort to do everything better than before. However, almost nobody can observe this. Moreover, if you just talk without your specific actions, you will appear boastful to people.
In conclusion, words are nothing but words. Actions are the only way to make people admire you. Do not talk much, just act, in that actions speak louder than words.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: As the saying goes, Actions speak louder than words.
correct_sentence: As the saying goes, actions speak louder than words.
error: Actions
correction: actions
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: 〈Actions〉 is not a proper noun, nor is it at the beginning of a sentence; the first letter should be lowercase, so 〈Actions〉 is changed to 『actions』 to conform to standards.

error_sentence: I consider it is true enough for us to trust.

correct_sentence: I consider it true enough for us to trust.

error: is
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Word Redundancy: The verb 〈is〉 is unnecessary in this sentence because the sentence already has a complete predicate 〈consider〉, and 〈consider〉 does not require a linking verb when followed by an object complement; therefore, 〈is〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: It's known to us , term begins, our class teacher always let us write a composition which is about your expectation and your plan in new term.
correct_sentence: It's known to us that when a term begins, our class teacher always lets us write a composition which is about our expectations and our plans in the new term.
error: ,
correction: that when a
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence's meaning is unclear; considering the context, it is understood that the intended meaning is “we know that when a term begins, our class teacher always lets us write a composition,” so 〈,〉 is changed to 『that when a』 to make the meaning coherent and comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: It's known to us , term begins, our class teacher always let us write a composition which is about your expectation and your plan in new term.
correct_sentence: It's known to us that when a term begins, our class teacher always lets us write a composition which is about our expectations and our plans in the new term.
error: let
correction: lets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈our class teacher〉 is third-person singular and requires the third-person singular form of the verb; therefore, 〈let〉 is changed to 『lets』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: It's known to us , term begins, our class teacher always let us write a composition which is about your expectation and your plan in new term.
correct_sentence: It's known to us that when a term begins, our class teacher always lets us write a composition which is about our expectations and our plans in the new term.
error: your expectation and your plan in
correction: our expectations and our plans in the
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: The pronoun should be consistent with the subject 〈us〉, so 〈your〉 is changed to 『our』 to maintain person consistency; ② Noun Number Error: 〈expectation 〉 here is a plural concept and needs the plural form to represent multiple expectations, so 〈expectation 〉 is changed to 『expectations』 to clarify the meaning; ③ Pronoun Error: The pronoun should be consistent with the subject 〈us〉, so 〈your〉 is changed to 『our』 to maintain person consistency; ④ Noun Number Error: 〈plan〉 here is a plural concept and needs the plural form to represent multiple plans, so 〈plan〉 is changed to 『plans』 to clarify the meaning; ⑤ Determiner Error: 〈new term〉 here refers to the current term, i.e., the specific term discussed in the article or context, so 『the』 is added after 〈in〉 to make the sentence structure and logic more complete.

error_sentence: We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm at all.
correct_sentence: We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm it at all, such as: I would make every effort to do everything better than before.
correction: it
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: The verb 〈affirm〉 is a transitive verb, and the sentence lacks the pronoun 〈it〉 to refer to the content mentioned earlier; therefore, 『it』 is added after 〈affirm〉 to make the sentence more complete.

error_sentence: We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm at all. Such as :I would make every effort to do everything superior to before.
correct_sentence: We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm it at all, such as: I would make every effort to do everything better than before.
error: .Such
correction: , such
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: When giving examples, 〈such as〉 needs to be connected to the preceding clause with a comma, therefore change 〈,〉 to 『.』 to conform to standards; ② Space Error: The comma 『,』 here lacks a space after it before the following word; therefore, a space is added after 『,』 to conform to writing standards; ③ Case Error: The word after the comma does not need to be capitalized; therefore, 〈Such〉 is changed to 『such』 to conform to standards.

error_sentence: Such as :I would make every effort to do everything superior to before.
correct_sentence: We usually write something which is so stodgy that no one may affirm it at all, such as: I would make every effort to do everything better than before.
error: superior to
correction: better than
error_type: Other Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Other Error: The phrase 〈superior to〉 is not quite appropriate because 〈superior〉 is usually used to compare the merits of two things, typically to describe the quality, grade, etc., of things; here, 『better』 should be used to describe “do better,” so 〈superior to〉 is changed to 『better than』 to correctly express the meaning.

error_sentence: However,almost nobody can observe.
correct_sentence: However, almost nobody can observe this.
correction: this
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: The verb 〈observe〉 requires an object to refer to the preceding content; therefore, 『this』 is added after 〈observe〉 to make the sentence more complete.

error_sentence: Moreover, if you just talk without your specific actions, you will become the boastful to people.

correct_sentence: Moreover, if you just talk without your specific actions, you will appear boastful to people.

error: become the
correction: appear
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: The verb 〈become〉 does not fit the context; 『appear』 + adjective means “to seem,” while 〈become〉 + noun indicates a change in identity, so 〈become〉 is changed to 『appear』 to correctly express the meaning; ② Word Redundancy: Here, 『appear boastful』 should be used directly to mean “to look very conceited,” so 〈the〉 is deleted.

error_sentence: In conclusion, words is nothing but words.
correct_sentence: In conclusion, words are nothing but words.
error: is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈words〉 is plural, so the linking verb needs to be in the plural form; therefore, 〈is〉 is changed to 『are』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: Actions is the only way to make people admire you.
correct_sentence: Actions are the only way to make people admire you.
error: is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Actions〉 is plural, so the linking verb needs to be in the plural form; therefore, 〈is〉 is changed to 『are』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.