Writing prompt: Animals

Student essay:
Welcome to Beijing Zoo.The zoo has many kinds of animals,such as tigers,kangaroos,giraffes
pandas,elephants and camels.They come from different countries and they eat different food.
The tiger lives in Asia.It usually lives alone.It is strong and catches many kings of animals for food.The kangaroo is an Australian animal. It eats grass and leaves,but it doesn't eat meat.The giraffe
ilives Africa and eats leaves.The pandas come from China.Their favourite food is bamboo.The elephant
lives in Africa and in Asia.It eats plants ang a little fruit.The camel lives in the deserts of Africa ang Asia
and eats grass.

Corrected essay:
Welcome to Beijing Zoo. The zoo has many kinds of animals, such as tigers, kangaroos, giraffes, pandas, elephants and camels. They come from different countries and they eat different food.
The tiger lives in Asia. It usually lives alone. It is strong and catches many kinds of animals for food. The kangaroo is an Australian animal. It eats grass and leaves, but it doesn't eat meat. The giraffe lives in Africa and eats leaves. The pandas come from China. Their favourite food is bamboo. The elephant lives in Africa and in Asia. It eats plants and a little fruit. The camel lives in the deserts of Africa and Asia and eats grass.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: The zoo has many kinds of animals,such as tigers,kangaroos,giraffes
pandas,elephants and camels.
correct_sentence: The zoo has many kinds of animals, such as tigers, kangaroos, giraffes, pandas, elephants and camels.
error: 

correction: ,
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Format Error: According to English punctuation rules for parallel structures, a comma is needed between the parallel nouns 〈giraffes〉 and 〈pandas〉; the newline character 〈/n〉 should be changed to 『,』 to form the standard parallel structure 『giraffes, pandas』.

error_sentence: It is strong and catches many kings of animals for food.
correct_sentence: It is strong and catches many kinds of animals for food.
error: kings
correction: kinds
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the semantic requirement, 〈kings〉 (king) is a misspelling of a visually similar word to 『kinds』 (types); it should be corrected to the noun 『kinds』 to accurately express animal categories.

error_sentence: The giraffe
ilives Africa and eats leaves.
correct_sentence: The giraffe lives in Africa and eats leaves.
error: 
ilives
correction: lives in
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Format Error: According to English writing conventions, the use of the 〈
〉 symbol within the sentence does not conform to standard punctuation rules and should be completely removed to maintain sentence coherence; ② Spelling Error: 〈ilives〉 is an incorrect spelling combination; according to verb phrase collocation rules, it should be 『lives』, translated as “life”, to form a correct verb phrase structure; ③ Preposition Error: According to the rules for expressing adverbials of place, the preposition 〈in〉 must be used when indicating a location of residence, therefore 〈ilives Africa〉 needs to be changed to the complete prepositional phrase 『lives in Africa』.

error_sentence: The elephant
lives in Africa and in Asia.
correct_sentence: The elephant lives in Africa and in Asia.
error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Format Error: According to basic English syntactic structure, there should not be a newline character 〈
〉 between the subject 〈The elephant〉 and the predicate 〈lives〉; it needs to be deleted to maintain the close connection of the subject-verb structure.

error_sentence: It eats plants ang a little fruit.
correct_sentence: It eats plants and a little fruit.
error: ang
correction: and
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: 〈ang〉 is a misspelling of a phonetically similar word to 『and』; it should be changed to the correct spelling of the conjunction 『and』 to accurately express the parallel relationship.

error_sentence: The camel lives in the deserts of Africa ang Asia
and eats grass.
correct_sentence: The camel lives in the deserts of Africa and Asia and eats grass.
error: ang Asia

correction: and Asia
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: 〈ang〉 is a misspelling of a phonetically similar word to 『and』; it should be changed to the correct spelling of the conjunction 『and』 to accurately express the parallel relationship; ② Format Error: According to basic English syntactic structure, there should not be a newline character 〈
〉 between the parallel structure 〈Asia〉 and 〈and eats〉; it needs to be deleted to maintain the close connection of the subject-verb structure.