Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
?There is a developing country in Europe where I dream to visit.This destination is Switzerland.
?Situated in the middle of Europe,Switzerland takes an area of fourty one thousand square kilometers.There are seven point five billion people live inSwitzerland.With many famous cities,such as Berne,the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva,one of the most famous cities in the world,Switzerland attacks me a lot.Austria,France,Italy and Germany lie around Switzerland.They have different cultures while they are same in terms of architectures and economy.
Switzerland is a fascinating country with many beautiful places.What's more, it is known as the World Garden.That is why I dream of visiting there.Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with comfortable lifestyle.I really expect a travel to this wonderful destination.

Corrected essay:
There is a developing country in Europe where I dream to visit. This destination is Switzerland.
Situated in the middle of Europe, Switzerland covers an area of forty-one thousand square kilometers. There are seven point five million people living in Switzerland. With many famous cities, such as Berne, the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva, one of the most famous cities in the world, Switzerland attracts me a lot. Austria, France, Italy and Germany lie around Switzerland. They have different cultures while they are the same in terms of architecture and economy.
Switzerland is a fascinating country with many beautiful places. What's more, it is known as the World Garden. That is why I dream of visiting there. Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.
I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with a comfortable lifestyle. I really expect a travel to this wonderful destination.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: ?
correct_sentence: There is a developing country in Europe where I dream to visit.
error: ?
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: The 〈?〉 at the beginning of the sentence is a superfluous punctuation mark. Delete 『?』 to conform to standard written expression.

error_sentence: This destination is Switzerland.
?
correct_sentence: This destination is Switzerland.
Situated in the middle of Europe, Switzerland covers an area of forty-one thousand square kilometers.
error: ?
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: The superfluous 〈?〉 in the paragraph is a meaningless punctuation mark. Delete 『?』 to ensure the writing norms of the paragraph.

error_sentence: Situated in the middle of Europe,Switzerland takes an area of fourty one thousand square kilometers.
correct_sentence: This destination is Switzerland.
Situated in the middle of Europe, Switzerland covers an area of forty-one thousand square kilometers.
error: takes
correction: covers
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: Judging from the sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'covers an area'; the verb 〈takes〉 is semantically unsuitable and should be replaced with 『covers』 to accurately convey the meaning of 『Switzerland covers an area』.

error_sentence: Situated in the middle of Europe,Switzerland takes an area of fourty one thousand square kilometers.
correct_sentence: This destination is Switzerland.
Situated in the middle of Europe, Switzerland covers an area of forty-one thousand square kilometers.
error: fourty
correction: forty-
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'forty'; therefore, 〈fourty〉 is a misspelling of 『forty』 and needs to be corrected to 『forty』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: There are seven point five billion people live inSwitzerland.
correct_sentence: There are seven point five million people living in Switzerland.
error: billion people live inSwitzerland
correction: million people living in Switzerland
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Number Error: Judging from the sentence's meaning, 〈billion〉 (one billion) does not match the actual population figure and should be changed to 『million』 (one million); ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈live〉 here functions as a post-nominal modifier for people and needs to be changed to the participle form 『living』; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, two separate words should be separated by a space; 〈inSwitzerland〉 needs to be separated into 『in Switzerland』.

error_sentence: With many famous cities,such as Berne,the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva,one of the most famous cities in the world,Switzerland attacks me a lot.
correct_sentence: With many famous cities, such as Berne, the capital city of Switzerland and Geneva, one of the most famous cities in the world, Switzerland attracts me a lot.
error: attacks
correction: attracts
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: Judging from the sentence's meaning, it intends to express 'attracts'; 〈attacks〉 (to attack) contradicts the contextual meaning and should be changed to 『attracts』 (to attract), reflecting Switzerland's appeal.

error_sentence: They have different cultures while they are same in terms of architectures and economy.

correct_sentence: They have different cultures while they are the same in terms of architecture and economy.

correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the adjective 〈same〉 requires the definite article 『the』 before it to form the fixed phrase 『the same』, meaning 'identical'.

error_sentence: They have different cultures while they are same in terms of architectures and economy.

correct_sentence: They have different cultures while they are the same in terms of architecture and economy.

error: architectures
correction: architecture
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈architecture〉 is an uncountable noun and has no plural form; therefore, 〈architectures〉 should be changed to 『architecture』.

error_sentence: Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?
correct_sentence: Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.

error: Switzerlandis
correction: Switzerland is
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, two separate words need to be separated by a space; 〈Switzerlandis〉 should be changed to 『Switzerland is』.

error_sentence: Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?
correct_sentence: Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.

error: sceneries
correction: scenery
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈scenery〉 is an uncountable noun and has no plural form; therefore, 〈sceneries〉 should be changed to 『scenery』.

error_sentence: Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?
correct_sentence: Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.

error: industrial of watch making
correction: industries of watchmaking
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① PoS Confusion Error: Judging from the sentence's meaning, a noun form should be used here; the original sentence mistakenly used an adjective form. 〈industrial〉 needs to be changed to the plural noun form 『industries』 to indicate multiple industrial sectors; ② Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈watch making〉 needs to be combined into the compound noun 『watchmaking』.

error_sentence: Switzerlandis not only famous for beautiful natural sceneries,but also famous for the powerful industrial of watch making,chemistry and delicious food.
?
correct_sentence: Switzerland is not only famous for beautiful natural scenery, but also famous for the powerful industries of watchmaking, chemistry and delicious food.
 I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with a comfortable lifestyle.
error: ?
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: The 〈?〉 at the end of the paragraph is a superfluous punctuation mark. Delete 〈?〉 to conform to standard written expression.

error_sentence: I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with comfortable lifestyle.
correct_sentence: I think Switzerland is a wonderful country with a comfortable lifestyle.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈lifestyle〉 is a countable noun in its singular form and requires the indefinite article 『a』 to form 『a comfortable lifestyle』.