Writing prompt: Things About Me

Student essay:
hello!everyone,my name is Peter.I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!

Corrected essay:
Hello! Everyone! My name is Peter. I study in T International School. I like sports very much, and I can run very fast. My favorite sport is running. I am in Class Two, Grade Eight. I like math very much, because my math is very good. I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too. I like eating pizza very much. The pizza is so good and delicious. I eat pizza every month. This is me. Let's make friends!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: hello!everyone,my name is Peter.
correct_sentence: Hello! Everyone! My name is Peter.
error: hello!everyone,my
correction: Hello! Everyone! My
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing norms, the independent sentence components 〈hello〉 and 〈everyone〉 in the original sentence lack punctuation separation; an exclamation mark “!” should be added, and there should be a space between the exclamation mark and the subsequent word, i.e., it should be changed to 『Hello! Everyone!』 to make the sentence structure conform to norms; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, the first letters of 〈hello〉, 〈everyone〉, and 〈my〉 are not capitalized and should be changed to capitalized 『Hello』, 『Everyone』, and 『My』 respectively.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I study in T International School. I like sports very much, and I can run very fast.
error: internatition school,i like sport
correction: International School. I like sports
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express "international", thus 〈internatition〉 is a misspelling of 『International』; 〈internatition〉 needs to be changed to 『International』 to make the sentence meaning clear; ② Case Error: "International School" is a proper noun, so the first letter of "School" should be capitalized; the original sentence does not capitalize it, which does not conform to English writing norms, so 〈school〉 should be changed to 『School』; ③ Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈I study in T International School〉 and 〈I like sports very much〉 contain independent predicate structures and can be independent sentences, so a 『.』 needs to be added after 〈school〉; ④ Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈sport〉 refers to general categories of sports, the plural form 『sports』 should be used.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I like sports very much, and I can run very fast.
error: i
correction: and I
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in a compound sentence, “i can run very fast” and the preceding sentence need to be connected by a conjunction; the original sentence lacks a conjunction, so 『and』 should be added after 〈fast〉 to connect the two clauses and complete the sentence structure; ② Case Error: After adding the conjunction, the new subject 〈I〉 is at the beginning of the sentence; according to English writing norms, the first letter of the first word of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈i〉 is not capitalized and should be changed to capitalized 『I』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I like sports very much, and I can run very fast. My favorite sport is running.
error: ,my
correction: . My
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, "i can run very fast" and "my favorite sport is run" in the original sentence are two independent main clauses and cannot be joined by a comma; they need to be separated by a period to make the sentence structure correct; ② Case Error: After changing the punctuation to a period, "my" is at the beginning of the new sentence; according to English writing norms, the first letter of the first word of a sentence needs to be capitalized, so 〈my〉 should be changed to capitalized 『My』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: My favorite sport is running. I am in Class Two, Grade Eight.
error: run.i
correction: running. I
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, in “my favorite sport is run”, the verb serving as the predicative needs to be in the gerund form; in the original sentence, 〈run〉 is the base form of the verb and should be changed to the gerund form 『running』 to meet the sentence structure requirements; ② Case Error: After changing “run” to “running” and correctly punctuating the sentence, the first letter of the next sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈i〉 is not capitalized and should be changed to capitalized 『I』 to conform to English writing norms.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I am in Class Two, Grade Eight. I like math very much, because my math is very good.
error: two Grade eight,i
correction: Two, Grade Eight. I
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma is needed to separate class and grade expressions; in the original sentence, 〈Class two Grade eight〉 should be changed to 『Class two, Grade eight』; ② Case Error: According to English writing norms, in proper nouns expressing class and grade, the first letter of ordinal numbers needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈two〉 and 〈eight〉 should be changed to capitalized 『Two』 and 『Eight』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I like math very much, because my math is very good.
error: ,my maths
correction: my math
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: According to American English grammar conventions, the subject name “math” is generally used in the singular form; in the original sentence, 〈maths〉 should be changed to 『math』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the comma in 〈because,〉 in the original sentence is redundant and should be deleted to make the sentence structure smoother.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I like math very much, because my math is very good. I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too.
error: ,i
correction: . I
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent main clauses in the original sentence cannot be joined by a comma; they need to be separated by a period, and the first letter of the subsequent sentence needs to be capitalized; 〈,i〉 should be changed to 『. I』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too.
error: english
correction: English
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing norms, the first letter of a language name needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈english〉 should be changed to capitalized 『English』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too.
error: i think english
correction: I think English
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing norms, the pronoun at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈i〉 should be changed to capitalized 『I』; according to English writing norms, the first letter of a language name needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈english〉 should be changed to capitalized 『English』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too.
error: enlish
correction: the English
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when specifically referring to a subject teacher, the definite article “the” needs to be added; in the original sentence, 『the』 should be added before 〈English〉; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express “English”; in the original sentence, 〈enlish〉 is misspelled and should be changed to 『English』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I don't like English, because I think English is very boring, and the English teacher is very boring too. I like eating pizza very much.
error: too.i like eatting
correction: too. I like eating
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing norms, the first letter of the first word of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈i〉 should be changed to capitalized 『I』; ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, 〈eatting〉 is misspelled; the intention here is to express “eating”, so it should be 『eating』.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I like eating pizza very much. The pizza is so good and delicious.
correction: . The
error_type: Other Error

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: The pizza is so good and delicious.
error: soo
correction: so
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the intention here is to express “so”; in the original sentence, 〈soo〉 is a misspelling and should be changed to 『so』 to conform to the correct spelling form.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: The pizza is so good and delicious. I eat pizza every month.
error: ,i
correction: . I
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, independent main clauses in the original sentence are incorrectly joined by a comma; “delicious” and the subsequent content are two independent parts and need to be separated by a period; 〈,〉 should be replaced with 『.』; ② Case Error: According to English writing norms, the subsequent word 〈i〉 is at the beginning of the sentence, and its first letter needs to be capitalized; 〈,i〉 should be changed to 『. I』 to conform to norms.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: I eat pizza every month. This is me.
error: moths,this
correction: month. This
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, sentences need to be separated by a period; in the original sentence, 〈moths,this〉 is not correctly separated and should be changed to 『month. This』; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express “month”, thus 〈moths〉 is a misspelling of 『month』; 〈moths〉 needs to be changed to 『month』 to make the sentence meaning clear.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: This is me. Let's make friends!
error: ,let
correction: . Let
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, independent sentences need to be separated by a period; in the original sentence, the comma in 〈,let〉 is used incorrectly and 〈,〉 should be replaced with 『.』; ② Case Error: According to English writing norms, the subsequent word 〈let〉 is at the beginning of the sentence, and its first letter needs to be capitalized; it should be changed to 『Let』 to conform to sentence structure and writing norms.

error_sentence: I study in T internatition school,i like sport very much,i can run very fast,my favorite sport is run.i am in Class two Grade eight,i like math very much,because,my maths is very good,i don't like english,because i think english is very boring,and enlish teacher is very boring too.i like eatting pizza very much pizza is soo good and delicious,i eat pizza every moths,this is me,let's make friends with me!
correct_sentence: Let's make friends!
error: with me
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy: “let’s make friends” already clearly expresses the meaning; in the sentence, 〈with me〉 is a redundant component, as 〈with me〉 is semantically repetitive with the subject; 〈with me〉 should be deleted to make the sentence meaning more concise and fluent.