Writing prompt: Daming's Holiday Plan

Student essay:
He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest.He write homework until 10:30.And then ,he eat delicious lunch at noon.From 13:00 to 15:00,he has computer class or English class.After that he reads many kinds of books.It will take 2 hours.At 18:30 he eats a little dinner.And have 30 minutes'rest.He searches for imformation on the internet or watches like programmes.He put things away from 20:30 to 21:00.At 21:30 he gose bed to sleep.
I think he get up late.And in attion to this everything is well.

Corrected essay:
He gets up at 8:30 a.m. And he has breakfast at 8:45 a.m. After a 15 minutes' rest, he does homework until 10:30 a.m. And then, he eats a delicious lunch at noon. From 13:00 to 15:00, he has a computer class or an English class. After that he reads many kinds of books. It takes 2 hours. At 18:30 he eats a little dinner and has a 30 minutes' rest. He searches for information on the internet or watches live programmes. He puts things away from 20:30 to 21:00. At 21:30 he goes to bed to sleep.
I think he gets up late. And in addition to this, everything is well.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest.
correct_sentence: He gets up at 8:30 a.m.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject is the third person singular 〈He〉, the verb in the simple present tense needs to be in the third person singular form; in the original sentence, the verb 〈get〉 is not in the third person singular form, which does not conform to the principle of subject-verb agreement, so 〈get〉 should be changed to 『gets』 to make the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest.
correct_sentence: He gets up at 8:30 a.m. And he has breakfast at 8:45 a.m.
error: 8:30.And
correction: 8:30 a.m. And
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: In the original sentence, the time expression “8:30” does not specify whether it is morning time; in English, “a.m.” needs to be added to indicate morning time, so 『 a.m.』 should be added after 〈8:30〉 to make the time expression complete and accurate.

error_sentence: He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest.
correct_sentence: And he has breakfast at 8:45 a.m. After a 15 minutes' rest, he does homework until 10:30 a.m.
error: 8:45.After
correction: 8:45 a.m. After
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: In the original sentence, “8:45” does not specify whether it is morning time; in English, “a.m.” needs to be added to indicate morning time, so 『a.m.』 should be added after 〈8:45〉 to make the time expression complete and accurate.

error_sentence: He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest.
correct_sentence: After a 15 minutes' rest, he does homework until 10:30 a.m.
error: miuntes
correction: minutes
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it can be known that the intention here is to express “minutes”, so the word 〈miuntes〉 is a misspelling of 『minutes』; 〈miuntes〉 needs to be changed to 『minutes』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.

error_sentence: He get up at 8:30.And he has breakfast at 8:45.After a 15 miuntes' rest. He write homework until 10:30.And then ,he eat delicious lunch at noon.
correct_sentence: After a 15 minutes' rest, he does homework until 10:30 a.m.
error: .He write
correction: , he does
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In the original sentence, independent clauses are only separated by a period, which does not conform to English grammar; independent clauses need to be connected by conjunctions or punctuation such as commas, so the 〈.〉 in the sentence should be changed to 『,』 to make the sentence structure coherent; ② Case Error: According to English grammar rules and expression habits, in the middle of a sentence (not at the beginning), the personal pronoun “he” does not need to be capitalized. In the original sentence, “He” is capitalized in the middle of the sentence, which does not conform to English writing specifications, so 〈He〉 should be changed to the lowercase form 『he』 to make the writing conform to standards; ③ Verb Choice Error: The common English expression for “写作业” (do homework) is “do homework”; the original phrase 〈write homework〉 is not idiomatic and should be changed to 『does homework』.

error_sentence: He write homework until 10:30.And then ,he eat delicious lunch at noon.
correct_sentence: After a 15 minutes' rest, he does homework until 10:30 a.m. And then, he eats a delicious lunch at noon.
error: 10:30.And
correction: 10:30 a.m. And
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: In the original sentence, 〈10:30〉 does not specify whether it is morning time; in English, “a.m.” needs to be added to indicate morning time, so 『a.m.』 should be added after 〈10:30〉 to make the time expression complete and accurate.

error_sentence: He write homework until 10:30.And then ,he eat delicious lunch at noon.
correct_sentence: And then, he eats a delicious lunch at noon.
error: eat
correction: eats a
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject 〈he〉 is third person singular, the verb in the simple present tense needs to be in the third person singular form; in the original sentence, the verb 〈eat〉 is not in the third person singular form, which does not conform to the principle of subject-verb agreement, so 〈eat〉 should be changed to 『eats』; ② Determiner Error: In English, a singular countable noun usually needs to be modified by a determiner; in the original sentence, 〈delicious lunch〉 is a singular countable noun and lacks a determiner, so the indefinite article 『a』 should be added to make the expression conform to grammatical norms.

error_sentence: From 13:00 to 15:00,he has computer class or English class.
correct_sentence: From 13:00 to 15:00, he has a computer class or an English class.
error: 15:00,he has
correction: 15:00, he has a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈computer class〉 usually needs to be modified by an article; the original sentence lacks an article, so the indefinite article 『a』 should be added; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space should be added after a comma; in the original sentence, there is no space between 〈15:00,he〉, so a space needs to be added after 〈15:00〉 to make the writing conform to standards.

error_sentence: From 13:00 to 15:00,he has computer class or English class.
correct_sentence: From 13:00 to 15:00, he has a computer class or an English class.
correction: an
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈English class〉 needs to be modified by an article; since 〈English〉 begins with a vowel sound, the indefinite article 『an』 should be added to make the sentence conform to grammatical norms.

error_sentence: It will take 2 hours.
correct_sentence: It takes 2 hours.
error: will take
correction: takes
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, when describing general facts of a daily, regular, or habitual nature, the simple present tense should be used; the original sentence uses the future tense 〈will take〉, which is inconsistent with the context, and should be changed to the simple present tense third person singular form 『takes』 to make the sentence tense consistent with the meaning and conform to grammatical norms.

error_sentence: At 18:30 he eats a little dinner. And have 30 minutes'rest.
correct_sentence: At 18:30 he eats a little dinner and has a 30 minutes' rest.
error: .And have 30 minutes'rest
correction: and has a 30 minutes' rest
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In the original sentence, 〈At 18:30 he eats a little dinner.〉 and 〈And have 30 minutes'rest.〉 are two independent clauses with independent predicate structures; according to English punctuation rules, they cannot be directly connected and need to be separated by a period, so the original punctuation is incorrect; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the conjunction “and” located in the middle of a sentence does not need to be capitalized; in the original sentence 〈And have 30 minutes'rest.〉, 〈And〉 is capitalized, which is not standard, so 〈And〉 should be changed to the lowercase form 『and』; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject is the third person singular “he”; in the original sentence, 〈have〉 is not in the third person singular form; according to English grammar rules, the verb needs to agree with the subject in person and number, so 〈have〉 should be changed to 『has』; ④ Determiner Error: “rest” here is a singular countable noun; according to English grammar rules, a singular countable noun usually needs to be modified by a determiner; the original sentence lacks a determiner, so the indefinite article 『a』 should be added.

error_sentence: He searches for imformation on the internet or watches like programmes.
correct_sentence: He searches for information on the internet or watches live programmes.
error: imformation
correction: information
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the intention here is to express “information”; the word 〈imformation〉 is misspelled and should be 『information』, so 〈imformation〉 needs to be changed to 『information』 to make the spelling correct.

error_sentence: He searches for imformation on the internet or watches like programmes.
correct_sentence: He searches for information on the internet or watches live programmes.
error: like
correction: live
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules and expression habits, 〈like〉 in the original sentence, as a preposition or verb, cannot be used to modify the noun 〈programmes〉; an adjective is needed here to modify 〈programmes〉 to mean “live programmes”, so the adjective 『live』 should be used, changing 〈like〉 to 『live』 to meet grammatical and semantic requirements.

error_sentence: He put things away from 20:30 to 21:00.At 21:30 he gose bed to sleep.

correct_sentence: He puts things away from 20:30 to 21:00.
error: put
correction: puts
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject 〈He〉 is third person singular, the verb in the simple present tense needs to be in the third person singular form; in the original sentence, the verb 〈put〉 is not in the third person singular form, which does not conform to the principle of subject-verb agreement, so 〈put〉 should be changed to 『puts』 to make the subject and verb agree.

error_sentence: He put things away from 20:30 to 21:00.At 21:30 he gose bed to sleep.

correct_sentence: He puts things away from 20:30 to 21:00. At 21:30 he goes to bed to sleep.

error: 21:00.At
correction: 21:00. At
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing standards, a space should be added after a period; in the original sentence, there is no space between 〈21:00.At〉, so a space needs to be added after the period following 〈21:00〉 to make the writing conform to conventions.

error_sentence: He put things away from 20:30 to 21:00.At 21:30 he gose bed to sleep.

correct_sentence: At 21:30 he goes to bed to sleep.

error: gose
correction: goes to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it can be known that the intention here is to express “go (to sleep)”, so 〈gose〉 is a misspelling of 『goes』; 〈gose〉 needs to be changed to 『goes』 to make the sentence meaning smooth; ② Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the intention here is to express “go to bed”; “go to bed” is a fixed phrase, and the original sentence is missing the preposition “to”, so the preposition 『to』 needs to be added to make the expression conform to idiomatic usage.

error_sentence: I think he get up late.
correct_sentence: I think he gets up late.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, when the subject 〈he〉 is third person singular, the verb in the simple present tense needs to be in the third person singular form; in the original sentence, the verb 〈get〉 is not in the third person singular form, which does not conform to the principle of subject-verb agreement, so 〈get〉 should be changed to 『gets』 to make the subject and verb agree.

error_sentence: And in attion to this everything is well.
correct_sentence: And in addition to this, everything is well.
error: attion
correction: addition
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it can be known that the intention here is to express “in addition to”, so 〈attion〉 is a misspelling of 『addition』; 〈attion〉 needs to be changed to 『addition』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.

error_sentence: And in attion to this everything is well.
correct_sentence: And in addition to this, everything is well.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation rules, 〈in addition to this〉 is a prepositional phrase; when connecting sentences, a comma needs to be added after it to separate the main clause; the original sentence does not have a comma, so the punctuation is incorrect, and a comma 『,』 should be added after 〈in addition to this〉 to make the sentence punctuation conform to grammatical norms.