Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
Just as the saying goes,by reading we enrich the mind.In my opinion,reading play an important part in our life.
There are a diversity of books for us to choose from,like history,science and literature.From those about history,we can learn about history from the past and permit not to make the same mistakes nowadays.We can also learn various cuultures from reading books about different coutries' literature.I love the books about literature most.Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as it contains such a lot of information.To be honest,everyone can benefit from books,which can bring peace to our mind.
If we don't read, our mind will become dull.Although we can take part in some activities,we still cannot receive such useful information.Therefore,let's keep reading books now and then.

Corrected essay:
Just as the saying goes, by reading we enrich the mind. In my opinion, reading plays an important part in our life.
There is a diversity of books for us to choose from, like history, science, and literature. From those about history, we can learn about history from the past and avoid making the same mistakes nowadays. We can also learn various cultures from reading books about different countries' literature. I love the books about literature most. Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as they contain such a lot of information. To be honest, everyone can benefit from books, which can bring peace to our minds.
If we don't read, our minds will become dull. Although we can take part in some activities, we still cannot receive such useful information. Therefore, let's keep reading books now and then.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: In my opinion,reading play an important part in our life.

correct_sentence: In my opinion, reading plays an important part in our life.

error: play
correction: plays
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈reading〉 is a gerund in singular form; according to English grammar rules, the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form, so the original predicate verb 〈play〉 is changed to 『plays』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: There are a diversity of books for us to choose from,like history,science and literature.
correct_sentence: There is a diversity of books for us to choose from, like history, science, and literature.
error: are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈a diversity〉 is a singular noun phrase with the structure “a + abstract noun”; according to the principle of subject-verb agreement, the predicate verb needs to use the singular form, so the plural verb 〈are〉 is changed to the singular form 『is』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: There are a diversity of books for us to choose from,like history,science and literature.
correct_sentence: There is a diversity of books for us to choose from, like history, science, and literature.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The parallel listed items 〈history, science and literature〉 need to follow the Oxford comma rule, which means adding a comma between the last two items to avoid ambiguity. Therefore, it is changed to 『history, science, and literature』 to ensure clear structure.

error_sentence: From those about history,we can learn about history from the past and permit not to make the same mistakes nowadays.
correct_sentence: From those about history, we can learn about history from the past and avoid making the same mistakes nowadays.
error: permit not to make
correction: avoid making
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: 〈permit〉 (to allow) does not fit the sentence's logic; according to the context, it should express the meaning of “avoid,” so it is replaced with the more accurate verb 『avoid』. ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The verb 『avoid』 should be followed by a gerund (V-ing) as its object, so the infinitive 〈to make〉 is changed to 『making』, forming the correct collocation 『avoid making』 to more accurately express the meaning of avoiding making mistakes.

error_sentence: We can also learn various cuultures from reading books about different coutries' literature.
correct_sentence: We can also learn various cultures from reading books about different countries' literature.
error: cuultures
correction: cultures
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The word 〈cuultures〉 is misspelled; according to English vocabulary norms, it should be corrected to the proper spelling 『cultures』, meaning “culture”.

error_sentence: We can also learn various cuultures from reading books about different coutries' literature.
correct_sentence: We can also learn various cultures from reading books about different countries' literature.
error: coutries
correction: countries
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The word 〈coutries〉 is misspelled; according to English vocabulary norms, it should be corrected to the proper spelling 『countries』, meaning “country”.

error_sentence: Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as it contains such a lot of information.
correct_sentence: Reading those books can broaden my knowledge and also teaches me some useful skills as they contain such a lot of information.
error: it contains
correction: they contain
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: The pronoun 〈it〉 refers to the preceding plural noun 〈books〉; according to the principle of pronoun-antecedent number agreement, the singular pronoun 〈it〉 needs to be changed to the plural form 『they』 to maintain consistency. ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the principle of subject-verb agreement, after the noun is changed to the plural form 『they』, the predicate verb should also be changed to 『contain』 to match the plural subject.

error_sentence: To be honest,everyone can benefit from books,which can bring peace to our mind.

correct_sentence: To be honest, everyone can benefit from books, which can bring peace to our minds.

error: mind
correction: minds
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: The pronoun 〈our〉 is plural, so its corresponding noun 〈mind〉 (thought) also needs to be adjusted to the plural form 『minds』 to maintain logical consistency.

error_sentence: If we don't read, our mind will become dull.
correct_sentence: If we don't read, our minds will become dull.
error: mind
correction: minds
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: The subject 〈our〉 represents a plural concept, so its corresponding noun 〈mind〉 (thought) needs to be changed to the plural form 『minds』 to ensure consistency with the plural meaning indicated by the subject 〈our〉.