Writing prompt: Will E-book Be Necessary in the Future?

Student essay:
Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and wildly used in everyday life.Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books.
Compared with the traditional book,the e-books seem to have lots of advantages.First of all,e-books are very easy to travel with.Secondly,e-books with large capacity is very suitable for modern life.The last but not least,e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books.What's more,some e-books are free.
However,we can't deny that the e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed.What is more,although the technology is invented recently,there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology.In addition,reading e-books for long time can affect people's vision seriously.
In my opinion,I prefer to read traditional books. I enjoy the feeling that carry a book and smell the sweet smell of the ink.This romantic feelings cannot be provided by e-books.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and widely used in everyday life. Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books. Compared with traditional books, e-books seem to have lots of advantages. First of all, e-books are very easy to travel with. Secondly, e-books with large capacity are very suitable for modern life. Last but not least, e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books. What's more, some e-books are free.
However, we can't deny that e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed. What is more, although the technology was invented recently, there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology. In addition, reading e-books for a long time can affect people's vision seriously.
In my opinion, I prefer to read traditional books. I enjoy the feeling of carrying a book and smelling the sweet smell of the ink. This romantic feeling cannot be provided by e-books.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and wildly used in everyday life.
correct_sentence: Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, an increasing number of digital products are commonly and widely used in everyday life.
error: wildly
correction: widely
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Adverb Error: Based on the sentence meaning, it intends to express "wide scope"; the adverb 〈wildly〉 has an incorrect meaning and does not match the scope of use 〈commonly〉 described in the sentence, so it is changed to 『widely』 to express the semantics of wide use.

error_sentence: Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books.

correct_sentence: Many people choose to read e-books instead of print books. Compared with traditional books, e-books seem to have lots of advantages.
error: 


error_sentence: Compared with the traditional book,the e-books seem to have lots of advantages.
correct_sentence: Compared with traditional books, e-books seem to have lots of advantages.
error: the traditional book,the
correction: traditional books,
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈traditional books〉 as a generic concept does not require the article 〈the〉; ② Noun Number Error: Based on the context, the object of comparison should be in the plural form 『books』 to correspond to the subsequent 〈e-books〉; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈e-books〉 as a generic concept does not require the article 〈the〉.

error_sentence: Secondly,e-books with large capacity is very suitable for modern life.
correct_sentence: Secondly, e-books with large capacity are very suitable for modern life.
error: is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈e-books with large capacity〉 is plural; based on the principle of subject-verb agreement, the predicate verb also needs to use the plural form 『are』.

error_sentence: The last but not least,e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books.
correct_sentence: Last but not least, e-books are usually cheaper than traditional books.
error: The last
correction: Last
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the fixed phrase 〈Last but not least〉 does not require an article; the redundant determiner 〈The〉 is deleted to conform to idiomatic expression.

error_sentence: However,we can't deny that the e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed.
correct_sentence: However, we can't deny that e-books cannot work without electricity and the electronic data is easy to be hacked and changed.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈e-books〉 as a generic concept does not require the article 〈the〉.

error_sentence: What is more,although the technology is invented recently,there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology.
correct_sentence: What is more, although the technology was invented recently, there are still large parts of the e-books not supported by this technology.
error: is
correction: was
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the tense of the verb 〈is〉 does not match the past time 〈recently〉 described in the sentence, so it is changed to 『was』 to conform to the past tense.

error_sentence: In addition,reading e-books for long time can affect people's vision seriously.

correct_sentence: In addition, reading e-books for a long time can affect people's vision seriously.

correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the fixed phrase 〈for long time〉 needs the indefinite article 『a』; omitting the article will undermine the integrity of the noun phrase.

error_sentence: I enjoy the feeling that carry a book and smell the sweet smell of the ink.
correct_sentence: I enjoy the feeling of carrying a book and smelling the sweet smell of the ink.
error: that carry
correction: of carrying
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The phrase 〈that carry〉 cannot correctly function as a modifier; 〈feeling〉 should be followed by the prepositional phrase 『of carrying』 instead of a relative clause. In English, abstract nouns are often modified by the structure 〈of + gerund〉.

error_sentence: I enjoy the feeling that carry a book and smell the sweet smell of the ink.
correct_sentence: I enjoy the feeling of carrying a book and smelling the sweet smell of the ink.
error: smell
correction: smelling
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: Parallel structures need to maintain grammatical symmetry; the verb 〈smell〉 should be changed to the present participle 『smelling』 to be consistent with the phrase structure 〈the feeling of carrying〉.

error_sentence: This romantic feelings cannot be provided by e-books.
correct_sentence: This romantic feeling cannot be provided by e-books.
error: feelings
correction: feeling
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: The demonstrative pronoun 〈This〉 is singular, so the following noun also needs to be singular; 〈feelings〉 is changed to 『feeling』 to maintain number agreement.