Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
My dreaming destination in Europe is Switerland which belongs to central European area.It covers a area of forty-one square metres.On the other hand,it has a tiny population of 7,500 thousand people.Berne is the capital city of the country.What's more,Geneva is also a famous city.
Switerland is a so tiny a country that there are many other countries are next to it.For example,Austria,France,Italy and Germany are its neighbouring countries.Otherwise, they have wonderful soccer teams in common.
If you can take a visit to Switerland,I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery.It's known as "Worldwide Garden".Its chemistrcal,watch and food indusry is developed of the world,too.

Corrected essay:
My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland which belongs to the central European area. It covers an area of forty-one square metres. On the other hand, it has a tiny population of 7,500 thousand people. Berne is the capital city of the country. What's more, Geneva is also a famous city.
Switzerland is such a tiny country that many other countries are next to it. For example, Austria, France, Italy and Germany are its neighbouring countries. Otherwise, they have wonderful soccer teams in common.
If you can take a visit to Switzerland, I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery. It's known as the "Worldwide Garden." Its chemical, watch and food industry is developed in the world, too.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My dreaming destination in Europe is Switerland which belongs to central European area.
correct_sentence: My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland which belongs to the central European area.
error: dreaming
correction: dream
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, an adjective is needed here to modify the noun 〈destination〉, but 〈dreaming〉 is the present participle form of a verb; it should be changed to the adjective 『dream』 (as an attributive) to correctly express the meaning of 'dream destination' 『dream destination』.

error_sentence: My dreaming destination in Europe is Switerland which belongs to central European area.
correct_sentence: My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland which belongs to the central European area.
error: Switerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English country name spelling conventions, 〈Switerland〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling should be 『Switzerland』 (add the letter 〈z〉) to conform to the country's standard English name.

error_sentence: My dreaming destination in Europe is Switerland which belongs to central European area.
correct_sentence: My dream destination in Europe is Switzerland which belongs to the central European area.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈central European area〉 refers to a specific geographical region and requires the definite article 『the』 to become 『the central European area』 to indicate specificity, conforming to English definite article usage.

error_sentence: It covers a area of forty-one square metres.
correct_sentence: It covers an area of forty-one square metres.
error: a
correction: an
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English article rules, when 〈a〉 is followed by a word 〈area〉 beginning with a vowel sound (/eɪ/), it should be changed to 『an』 (an area) to ensure smooth pronunciation and grammatical correctness.

error_sentence: Switerland is a so tiny a country that there are many other countries are next to it.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is such a tiny country that many other countries are next to it.
error: Switerland is a so tiny a
correction: Switzerland is such a tiny
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English country name spelling conventions, 〈Switerland〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling should be 『Switzerland』 (add the letter 〈z〉) to conform to the country's standard English name; ② Conjunction Error: According to English fixed phrase rules, 〈so...that〉 is used to modify adjectives or adverbs, whereas here 『such...that』 is needed to modify a noun phrase to correctly introduce a result clause; ③ Preposition Error: In the structure 『such a tiny a country』, the second 〈a〉 is redundant and should be deleted, changing it to 『such a tiny country』, to comply with English noun phrase determiner rules.

error_sentence: Switerland is a so tiny a country that there are many other countries are next to it.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is such a tiny country that many other countries are next to it.
error: there are
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a structural conflict; 〈there are〉 is redundant with the main clause verb 〈is〉 and should be deleted, making 『many other countries are next to it』 a complete clause, maintaining clear sentence logic.

error_sentence: If you can take a visit to Switerland,I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery.
correct_sentence: If you can take a visit to Switzerland, I'm sure that you'll be attracted by the fantastic scenery.
error: Switerland,I'm
correction: Switzerland, I'm
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English country name spelling conventions, 〈Switerland〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling should be 『Switzerland』 (add the letter 〈z〉) to conform to the country's standard English name; ② Space Error: According to English punctuation norms, a space is required after a comma; 〈Switzerland,I'm〉 should be changed to 『Switzerland, I'm』 to conform to standard writing format.

error_sentence: It's known as "Worldwide Garden".
correct_sentence: It's known as the "Worldwide Garden."
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when the proper noun alias 〈Worldwide Garden〉 is used as a specific title, the definite article 『the』 needs to be added to form 『the Worldwide Garden』, to indicate the specificity of this unique designation.

error_sentence: It's known as "Worldwide Garden". Its chemistrcal,watch and food indusry is developed of the world,too.
correct_sentence: It's known as the "Worldwide Garden." Its chemical, watch and food industry is developed in the world, too.
error: Garden".Its chemistrcal
correction: Garden." Its chemical
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to American English punctuation norms, the period at the end of a sentence should be placed inside the quotation marks; 〈Garden".Its〉 should be changed to 『Garden." Its』 (move the period inside the quotation marks) to comply with standard punctuation usage rules; ② Space Error: According to English written expression norms, a space of one letter should be maintained between a quotation mark and the following word, so a space needs to be added; ③ Spelling Error: According to English morphology, the letter order in 〈chemetrcal〉 is incorrect; the correct spelling should be 『chemical』 (adjust letter order to c-h-e-m-i-c-a-l) to accurately express the meaning 'chemical'.

error_sentence: Its chemistrcal,watch and food indusry is developed of the world,too.
correct_sentence: Its chemical, watch and food industry is developed in the world, too.
error: indusry
correction: industry
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English word spelling rules, the letter 〈t〉 is missing in 〈indusry〉; the correct spelling should be 『industry』 (add the letter t after s) to correctly express the concept of 'industry'.

error_sentence: Its chemistrcal,watch and food indusry is developed of the world,too.
correct_sentence: Its chemical, watch and food industry is developed in the world, too.
error: of
correction: in
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English fixed collocations, 〈of〉 in 〈developed of the world〉 is used incorrectly; it should be changed to 『in』 to form 『developed in the world』, to accurately express the meaning 'developed in the world'.