Writing prompt: What's in My Name?

Student essay:
Everyone name very crucial because only how to know you but also has special meaning.
The one word in ancient poetry Jing yan si zhi,the explanation of character is usually quiet and inchon is mean calm down and do not show off your gift.My parents want I will become not is only able who has the personal character in the future.
I like my name very much it is to contain for parents love and make me different from everybody.

Corrected essay:
Everyone's name is very crucial because it not only helps others know you but also has a special meaning.
The character "Jing" in my name comes from the ancient poetry "Jing Yan Si Zhi", which means calmness and not showing off your gift. My parents hope that I will become not only someone with personal character in the future but also capable.
I like my name very much. It contains my parents' love and makes me different from everybody.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Everyone name very crucial because only how to know you but also has special meaning.

correct_sentence: Everyone's name is very crucial because it not only helps others know you but also has a special meaning.

error: name
correction: 's name is
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, this means "everyone's name"; the original sentence 〈Everyone name〉 needs to use the possessive form to indicate its belonging, so 〈Everyone name〉 is changed to 『Everyone's name』 to fit the context; ② Verb Choice Error: According to English grammar rules, a sentence requires a predicate; the original sentence 〈Everyone name very crucial〉 lacks a verb to describe 〈name〉, so 『is』 needs to be added to connect the subject and the adjective, changing it to 『Everyone's name is』, to comply with English grammar rules.

error_sentence: Everyone name very crucial because only how to know you but also has special meaning.

correct_sentence: Everyone's name is very crucial because it not only helps others know you but also has a special meaning.

error: only how to
correction: it not only helps others
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: 〈only how to know〉 does not conform to English expression habits and needs to be reconstructed into a complete clause. According to the following "but also", this sentence intends to express "not only...but also..."; the original sentence lacks the logical subject 『it』 and a verb to connect the "not only...but also" structure; according to the meaning of the sentence, the logical subject 『it』 and the verb-object structure 『helps others』 need to be added.

error_sentence: Everyone name very crucial because only how to know you but also has special meaning.

correct_sentence: Everyone's name is very crucial because it not only helps others know you but also has a special meaning.

correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the indefinite article 『a』 is needed before a general singular countable noun 〈meaning〉, so 〈special meaning〉 is changed to 『a special meaning』 to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: The one word in ancient poetry Jing yan
correct_sentence: The character "Jing" in my name comes from the ancient poetry "Jing Yan Si Zhi", which means calmness and not showing off your gift.
error: one word in
correction: character "Jing" in my name comes from the
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to the context, 〈one word〉 cannot accurately refer to the Chinese character in the name and needs to be specified as 『character “Jing”』; ② Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, this means "my name comes from the Book of Songs"; the original sentence is missing information, so 『my name comes from the』 needs to be added after 〈in〉 to maintain semantic clarity.

error_sentence: The one word in ancient poetry Jing yan si zhi,the explanation of character is usually quiet and inchon is mean calm down and do not show off your gift.
correct_sentence: The character "Jing" in my name comes from the ancient poetry "Jing Yan Si Zhi", which means calmness and not showing off your gift.
error: Jing yan si zhi,the explanation of character is usually quiet and inchon is mean calm down and do not show
correction: "Jing Yan Si Zhi", which means calmness and not showing
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, ancient poem titles need to be marked with quotation marks and capitalized, so 〈Jing yan si zhi〉 needs to be changed to 『“Jing Yan Si Zhi”』 to conform to writing conventions; ② Relative Word Error: According to English grammar rules, a non-restrictive relative clause requires 『which』; the original sentence 〈the explanation〉 lacks a relative word, so 〈the explanation〉 needs to be changed to 『which means』 to comply with English grammar; ③ Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, this expresses "calmness", so the redundant explanation 〈inchon is mean calm down〉 needs to be deleted, and 『calmness』 should be used directly to simplify the meaning; ④ Sentence Structure Error: According to grammar rules and the contextual meaning, 〈do not show〉 here does not fit the contextual structure, so 〈do not show〉 needs to be changed to 『not showing』 to fit the structural pattern.

error_sentence: My parents want I will become not is only able who has the personal character in the future.

correct_sentence: My parents hope that I will become not only someone with personal character in the future but also capable.

error: want
correction: hope that
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means "hope"; in the original sentence, 〈want〉 means "to desire", which does not fit the meaning, so 〈want〉 needs to be changed to 『hope that』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: My parents want I will become not is only able who has the personal character in the future.

correct_sentence: My parents hope that I will become not only someone with personal character in the future but also capable.

error: is only able who has the
correction: only someone with
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, this means "hope I can maintain my personality"; the original phrase 〈is only able who has the〉 does not conform to English clause structure and needs to be reconstructed as 『only someone with』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: My parents want I will become not is only able who has the personal character in the future.

correct_sentence: My parents hope that I will become not only someone with personal character in the future but also capable.

correction: but also capable
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to the context, this intends to express "not only...but also", requiring "not only...but also" to connect two parallel descriptions, so 『but also』 needs to be added to complete the contrastive logic; ② Adjective Error: According to the context, this means "not only has personality, but also is capable", so the original sentence needs to be supplemented with "capable" to express the complete meaning, thus adding 『but also capable』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: I like my name very much it is to contain for parents love and make me different from everybody.
correct_sentence: I like my name very much. It contains my parents' love and makes me different from everybody.
error: it is to contain for parents
correction: . It contains my parents'
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent main clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈I like my name very much〉 and “it is to contain...” are two main clauses, so 〈much it〉 needs to be changed to 『much. It』 to comply with grammar; ② Verb Choice Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 'be' appearing alone means "is/exists"; in the original sentence, 〈is〉 does not fit the context, so 〈is to contain for〉 needs to be replaced with 『contains』 to comply with English grammar and semantics; ③ Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the context, this means "parents' love"; in the original sentence, 〈parents love〉 needs to use the possessive form to indicate its belonging, so 〈parents love〉 is changed to 『parents' love』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: I like my name very much it is to contain for parents love and make me different from everybody.
correct_sentence: It contains my parents' love and makes me different from everybody.
error: make
correction: makes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈It〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈make〉 is in the third-person plural form, so the verb 〈make〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『makes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.