Writing prompt: The Way to Keep Healthy

Student essay:
Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life. As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.For eaxmple,we can paly basketball,vollyball or table tennis.Then wo shuid a healthy life style.We need to get into the habit of get up early.And reasonable meals and sleep on time.It will make us keep a good mental state.Finally,Good attitude will make us become healthier.
Do you think of you have a healthy life.If not.Please follow my steps.We will be better.

Corrected essay:
Nowadays people pay more and more attention to their own health in daily life. As students, we should know more about how to keep fit.
At first, we should try to eat less food that has fat and sugar, and try to eat more vegetables and fruit. We should have a balanced diet. We also need some exercise to keep our bodies healthy. For example, we can play basketball, volleyball or table tennis. Then we should have a healthy lifestyle. We need to get into the habit of getting up early, having reasonable meals, and sleeping on time. It will help us keep a good mental state. Finally, a good attitude will make us healthier.
Do you think you have a healthy life? If not, please follow my steps. We will be better.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit.

correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to writing conventions, a complete sentence requires a period. The original sentence 〈we should know more about how to keep fit〉 is structurally complete but lacks a period at the end; therefore, it is changed to 『we should know more about how to keep fit.』 to comply with English punctuation usage rules.

error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: At first, we should try to eat less food that has fat and sugar, and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.
error: have
correction: has
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 〈food〉 is singular, and the verb 〈have〉 in the original sentence is in the plural form; therefore, the verb 〈have〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『has』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: At first, we should try to eat less food that has fat and sugar, and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.
error: suger
correction: sugar
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'sugar'; therefore, 〈suger〉 is a misspelling of 『sugar』. It needs to be changed from 〈suger〉 to 『sugar』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: At first, we should try to eat less food that has fat and sugar, and try to eat more vegetables and fruit. We should have a balanced diet.
error: fruit.we shuid
correction: fruit. We should have
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word. The original phrase 〈fruit.we〉 lacks a space; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『fruit. We』 to comply with writing conventions.; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈we〉 is at the beginning of the sentence; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『We』 to comply with conventions.; ③ Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'should'; therefore, 〈shuid〉 is a misspelling of 『should』. It needs to be changed from 〈shuid〉 to 『should』 to make the sentence coherent.; ④ Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'to have'. The original sentence lacks this predicate verb, which does not fit the meaning; therefore, 『have』 is added to fit the context.

error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: We should have a balanced diet. We also need some exercise to keep our bodies healthy.
error: diet.we
correction: diet. We
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word. The original phrase 〈diet.we〉 lacks a space; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『diet. We』 to comply with writing conventions.; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈we〉 is at the beginning of the sentence; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『We』 to comply with conventions.

error_sentence: As students, we should know more about how to keep fit
At first,we should try to eat less food that have fat and suger,and try to eat more vegetables and fruit.we shuid a balanced diet.we also need some exercise to keep our good body.
correct_sentence: We also need some exercise to keep our bodies healthy.
error: good body
correction: bodies healthy
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Adjective Error: According to the context, the intention here is to express 'healthy'. In the original sentence, 〈good〉 is too general and does not fit the context; it needs to be changed to 『healthy』 to describe the state of health, to fit the context.; ② Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈body〉 in the original sentence should be in the plural form 『bodies』 to be consistent with the preceding 〈our〉; therefore, 〈body〉 should be changed to 『bodies』 to comply with English grammar rules.; ③ Word Order Error: According to English verb-object phrase collocations, the structure here should be 'keep + noun + adjective'. Therefore, there is a word order error in the original sentence; the adjective and noun need to be swapped, i.e., changed to 『bodies healthy』.

error_sentence: For eaxmple,we can paly basketball,vollyball or table tennis.
correct_sentence: For example, we can play basketball, volleyball or table tennis.
error: eaxmple
correction: example
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'example'; therefore, 〈eaxmple〉 is a misspelling of 『example』. It needs to be changed from 〈eaxmple〉 to 『example』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: For eaxmple,we can paly basketball,vollyball or table tennis.
correct_sentence: For example, we can play basketball, volleyball or table tennis.
error: paly
correction: play
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'play'; therefore, 〈paly〉 is a misspelling of 『play』. It needs to be changed from 〈paly〉 to 『play』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: For eaxmple,we can paly basketball,vollyball or table tennis.
correct_sentence: For example, we can play basketball, volleyball or table tennis.
error: vollyball
correction: volleyball
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'volleyball'; therefore, 〈vollyball〉 is a misspelling of 『volleyball』. It needs to be changed from 〈vollyball〉 to 『volleyball』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Then wo shuid a healthy life style.
correct_sentence: Then we should have a healthy lifestyle.
error: wo shuid
correction: we should have
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'we should'; therefore, 〈wo shuid〉 is a misspelling of 『we should』. It needs to be changed from 〈wo shuid〉 to 『we should』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'to have'. The original sentence lacks this predicate verb, which does not fit the meaning; therefore, 『have』 is added to fit the context.

error_sentence: Then wo shuid a healthy life style.
correct_sentence: Then we should have a healthy lifestyle.
error: life style
correction: lifestyle
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the intention here is to express 'lifestyle'. Therefore, 〈life style〉 in the original text is a spelling error and should be combined into 『lifestyle』 to mean 'lifestyle'.

error_sentence: We need to get into the habit of get up early.
correct_sentence: We need to get into the habit of getting up early, having reasonable meals, and sleeping on time.
error: get
correction: getting
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈of〉 should be followed by a gerund form to indicate the sequence of actions; therefore, in the original sentence, 〈get〉 needs to be changed to 『getting』 to comply with grammar rules.

error_sentence: We need to get into the habit of get up early. And reasonable meals and sleep on time.
correct_sentence: We need to get into the habit of getting up early, having reasonable meals, and sleeping on time.
error: .And
correction: , having
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma is needed to connect incomplete sentence components. A comma can be used between the independent clause 〈We need to...〉 and the incomplete clause 〈And reasonable meals...〉; therefore, the original 〈.〉 needs to be changed to 『,』 to comply with grammar rules.; ② Space Error: According to English written expression conventions, a space of one letter should be maintained between a punctuation mark (comma or period) and the following word; therefore, a space needs to be added and changed to 『, having』.; ③ Word Redundancy Error: According to English sentence structure, in the same main clause with three parallel components, 'and' is only needed before the last item; therefore, the 〈and〉 before the second parallel component can be deleted, changing 〈. And〉 to 『,』.; ④ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the context, this indicates a parallel structure. The original sentence lacks the corresponding nonfinite form of the predicate verb; therefore, the verb 'have' is added and changed to its present participle form, making 『having』 a parallel structure to 『getting』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: And reasonable meals and sleep on time.
correct_sentence: We need to get into the habit of getting up early, having reasonable meals, and sleeping on time.
error: and sleep
correction: , and sleeping
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, when listing three or more parallel components, the structure 『, and』 should be used between the last two components; therefore, the original phrase 〈reasonable meals and sleep on time〉 should be changed to 『reasonable meals, and sleeping on time』 to comply with English grammar.; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the context, this indicates a parallel structure. In the original sentence, 〈sleep〉 needs to be changed to the present participle form; therefore, 〈sleep〉 is changed to 『sleeping』 as a parallel structure to fit the context.

error_sentence: It will make us keep a good mental state.
correct_sentence: It will help us keep a good mental state.
error: make
correction: help
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'to help'. In the original sentence, 〈make〉 means 'to produce; to cause', which does not fit the meaning 'help us maintain a good mental state'; therefore, 〈make〉 needs to be changed to 『help』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: Finally,Good attitude will make us become healthier.

correct_sentence: Finally, a good attitude will make us healthier.

error: Good
correction: a good
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, an indefinite article must be added before a singular countable noun. The original phrase 〈Good attitude〉 lacks the necessary determiner 『a』; therefore, the sentence is modified to 『a good attitude』 to comply with English grammar rules.; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word not at the beginning of a sentence does not need to be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈Good〉 is not at the beginning of the sentence; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『a good』 to comply with conventions.

error_sentence: Finally,Good attitude will make us become healthier.

correct_sentence: Finally, a good attitude will make us healthier.

error: become
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, the original sentence intends to express 'make us healthier'. Based on the 'make + noun + adjective' structure, 〈become〉 here is semantically redundant with 〈make us healthier〉, causing word redundancy; therefore, 〈become〉 needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise.

error_sentence: Do you think of you have a healthy life.
correct_sentence: Do you think you have a healthy life?
error: of
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, when the verb 〈think〉 is directly followed by an object clause, no preposition is needed; therefore, the preposition 〈of〉 is redundant and can be directly deleted to conform to expression habits.

error_sentence: Do you think of you have a healthy life.
correct_sentence: Do you think you have a healthy life?
error: .
correction: ?
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing rules, a question mark is needed at the end of an interrogative sentence. The original sentence 〈Do you think of you have a healthy life〉 is a yes-no question; therefore, 〈.〉 needs to be changed to 『?』 to indicate the interrogative tone.

error_sentence: If not. Please follow my steps.
correct_sentence: If not, please follow my steps.
error: .Please
correction: , please
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma is needed to connect a conditional adverbial clause starting with 〈If〉 and the main clause; therefore, in the original sentence, 〈.Please〉 needs to be changed to 『, please』 to comply with grammar.; ② Space Error: According to English written expression conventions, a space of one letter should be maintained between a punctuation mark (comma or period) and the following word; therefore, a space needs to be added and changed to 『, please』.; ③ Case Error: According to English written expression conventions, the first letter of words not at the beginning of a sentence and non-proper nouns appearing in a sentence do not need to be capitalized; that is, 〈.Please〉 needs to be changed to 『, please』.