Writing prompt: Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?

Student essay:
Book and film is very popular at once. It is a well known fact that most of the people prefer film which is interesting and the fastest way to understand a story . But I don't consider film is the best way to understand a story in dept. The original work has more details and sentences are very gracefully, you can imagine by yourself. On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.So I think reading is what I prefer.

Corrected essay:
Books and films are both very popular. It is a well-known fact that most people prefer films, which are interesting and the fastest way to understand a story. But I don't consider films the best way to understand a story in depth. The original work has more details, and the sentences are very graceful; you can imagine by yourself. On the other hand, you can read it everywhere and anytime you want. Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again. So I think reading is what I prefer.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Book and film is very popular at once.
correct_sentence: Books and films are both very popular.
error: Book and film is
correction: Books and films are both
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: The subject 〈Book and film〉 is a plural concept and needs to be in plural form, therefore 〈Book and film〉 is changed to 『Books and films』 to correctly express the meaning; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『Books and films』 is plural, so the predicate needs to be in plural form, therefore 〈is〉 is changed to 『are』.

error_sentence: Book and film is very popular at once.
correct_sentence: Books and films are both very popular.
error: at once
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: The phrase 〈at once〉 means "immediately", which does not fit the contextual meaning, therefore 〈at once〉 is deleted to make the sentence more logical.

error_sentence: It is a well known fact that most of the people prefer film which is interesting and the fastest way to understand a story .
correct_sentence: It is a well-known fact that most people prefer films, which are interesting and the fastest way to understand a story.
correction: -
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English written expression norms, the compound adjective 〈well known〉 when used as an attributive before a noun needs to be connected with a hyphen as 『well-known』.

error_sentence: It is a well known fact that most of the people prefer film which is interesting and the fastest way to understand a story .
correct_sentence: It is a well-known fact that most people prefer films, which are interesting and the fastest way to understand a story.
error: of the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈most of the people〉 is incorrect because 『most people』 is sufficient to express "most people", therefore 〈of the〉 is deleted to make the expression more concise.

error_sentence: It is a well known fact that most of the people prefer film which is interesting and the fastest way to understand a story .
correct_sentence: It is a well-known fact that most people prefer films, which are interesting and the fastest way to understand a story.
error: film which is
correction: films, which are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: Here 〈film〉 is a plural concept, so 〈film〉 is changed to 『films』 to be consistent with the context; ② Punctuation Error: A comma is needed before a non-restrictive relative clause for separation, so 『,』 is added after 『films』 to conform to writing conventions; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『films』 is plural, so the predicate verb needs to be changed to the plural form, therefore 〈is〉 is changed to 『are』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: But I don't consider film is the best way to understand a story in dept.
correct_sentence: But I don't consider films the best way to understand a story in depth.
error: film is
correction: films
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: Here 〈film〉 is a plural concept, so 〈film〉 is changed to 『films』 to match the preceding plural logical subject; ② Word Redundancy Error: 〈consider〉 is a transitive verb, and in this structure, it is followed by a noun or noun phrase, and a linking verb is not needed afterwards, therefore 〈is〉 is deleted to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: But I don't consider film is the best way to understand a story in dept.
correct_sentence: But I don't consider films the best way to understand a story in depth.
error: dept
correction: depth
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "depth" is intended here, therefore 〈dept〉 is a misspelling of 『depth』, and 〈dept〉 needs to be changed to 『depth』 to make the sentence fluent.

error_sentence: The original work has more details and sentences are very gracefully, you can imagine by yourself.
correct_sentence: The original work has more details, and the sentences are very graceful; you can imagine by yourself.
error: and
correction: , and the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: 〈The original work〉 as the subject has already been clearly mentioned, so the following 〈sentences〉 naturally becomes a specific object, therefore 『the』 is added before 〈sentences〉 to conform to idiomatic expression.

error_sentence: The original work has more details and sentences are very gracefully, you can imagine by yourself.
correct_sentence: The original work has more details, and the sentences are very graceful; you can imagine by yourself.
error: gracefully,
correction: graceful;
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① PoS Confusion Error: 〈gracefully〉 is an adverb, but an adjective is needed here as a predicative, therefore 〈gracefully〉 is changed to 『graceful』 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Punctuation Error: A semicolon should be used here to connect two sentences with similar meanings, thereby effectively expressing the relationship between them, so 〈,〉 is changed to 『;』.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, you can read it everywhere and anytime you want.
error: word
correction: hand,
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: The phrase 〈On the other word〉 is incorrect; the correct expression is 『On the other hand』, meaning "on the other hand", therefore 〈word〉 is changed to 『hand』 to conform to idiomatic expression; ② Punctuation Error: A comma is needed after 『On the other hand』 to separate sentence components, so 『,』 is added after 『hand』.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, you can read it everywhere and anytime you want.
error: every time
correction: anytime
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Adverb Error: 〈every time〉 emphasizes each specific time; considering the context, the adverb 『anytime』, meaning "at any time", should be used here, therefore 〈every time〉 is changed to 『anytime』 to correctly express the meaning of the sentence.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, you can read it everywhere and anytime you want. Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: ,also
correction: . Also,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 〈On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want〉 and 〈also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can be independent sentences, therefore 〈,also〉 is changed to 『. Also』; ② Punctuation Error: A comma is needed after 『Also』 to separate sentence components, so 『,』 is added after 『Also』.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: again once
correction: it
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: The combination 〈again once〉 is grammatically and semantically incorrect; considering the context, 『it』 should be used here to refer to the content mentioned earlier, therefore 〈again once〉 is changed to 『it』 to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: not
correction: don't
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The auxiliary verb "do" is missing in this negative sentence, therefore 〈not〉 is changed to 『don't』 to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: arctic
correction: article, and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "article" is intended here, therefore 〈arctic〉 is a misspelling of 『article』, and 〈arctic〉 needs to be changed to 『article』 to make the sentence fluent; ② Conjunction Error: 〈also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic〉 and 〈then you will find you can lean many things after you read again〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can be independent sentences, therefore 『, and』 is added after 『article』.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: lean
correction: learn
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "learn" is intended here, therefore 〈lean〉 is a misspelling of 『learn』, and 〈lean〉 needs to be changed to 『learn』 to make the sentence fluent.

error_sentence: On the other word you can read it everywhere and every time you want,also you can read again once again if you not really understand the arctic then you will find you can lean many things after you read again.
correct_sentence: Also, you can read it again if you don't really understand the article, and then you will find you can learn many things after reading it again.
error: you read
correction: reading it
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The preposition 〈after〉 needs to be followed by a gerund, therefore 〈you read〉 is changed to 『reading』 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Preposition Error: 『it』 should be used here to refer to the "book" mentioned earlier, therefore 『it』 is added after 『reading』 to correctly express the meaning of the sentence.