Writing prompt: My Spring Festival

Student essay:
Spring Festival is a traditional festival of China. It's on Jun.1st.
Peaple often celebrates Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers,eating dumplings and eating fish. Spring Festival is one of the most famous holidays of China, because it's the beginning of a new year. In China,fish means rich,so that people eat fish in the Spring Festival.
I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese,because it means you can get together with your family.

Corrected essay:
Spring Festival is a traditional festival of China. It's on Jan. 1st.
People often celebrate Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers, eating dumplings and eating fish. Spring Festival is one of the most famous holidays of China, because it's the beginning of a new year. In China, fish means being rich, so people eat fish in the Spring Festival.
I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese because it means you can get together with your family.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: It's on Jun.1st.

correct_sentence: It's on Jan. 1st.

error: Jun.1st
correction: Jan. 1st
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: The correct time for Spring Festival should be the first lunar month, not June, so 〈Jun.〉 is changed to 『Jan.』 to correctly express the time.; ② Space Error: A space should be kept between the date abbreviation 『Jan.』 and 〈1st〉, so 〈Jun.1st〉 is changed to 『Jan. 1st』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: Peaple often celebrates Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers,eating dumplings and eating fish.
correct_sentence: People often celebrate Spring Festival in many ways, such as setting off firecrackers, eating dumplings and eating fish.
error: Peaple often celebrates
correction: People often celebrate
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'people', so 〈Peaple〉 is a misspelling of 『People』, and needs to be changed to 『People』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『People』 is plural and should be paired with the base form of the verb 『celebrate』, so 〈celebrates〉 is changed to 『celebrate』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: In China,fish means rich,so that people eat fish in the Spring Festival.

correct_sentence: In China, fish means being rich, so people eat fish in the Spring Festival.

correction: being
error_type: Other Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Other Error: Considering the context, it is clear that the intention here is to express 'fish means being rich'. The structure 'mean doing sth.' is used here, so 『being』 is added after 〈means〉 to make the sentence grammatically complete.

error_sentence: In China,fish means rich,so that people eat fish in the Spring Festival.

correct_sentence: In China, fish means being rich, so people eat fish in the Spring Festival.

error: that
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈so that〉 is used to express a purpose adverbial clause, whereas here a causal relationship is needed, so 〈that〉 is deleted to correctly express the causal relationship.

error_sentence: I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese,because it means you can get together with your family.
correct_sentence: I think that Spring Festival is important for every Chinese because it means you can get together with your family.
error: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: When the adverbial clause of reason introduced by 〈because〉 is closely related to the main clause, no comma is needed for separation, so 〈,〉 is deleted to conform to English writing conventions.