Writing prompt: My English Teacher

Student essay:
People say that the first impressions are very important.My first impression of Mrs Yu was that she was full of experince and very patient. She is tall and thin and we all like her.
In English class ,we all listen to the teacher carefully .And after shool we do our homework carefully too .We hand in our homework on time .
Mrs Yu is very kind and patient.She explains English grammar so clarly that we can all remember the grammar clarly .She avoids making you fell so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class !
I like English very much .Ithink that with the help of Mrs Yu I can get great progress in English .

Corrected essay:
People say that first impressions are very important. My first impression of Mrs. Yu was that she was full of experience and very patient. She is tall and thin and we all like her.
In English class, we all listen to the teacher carefully. And after school we do our homework carefully too. We hand in our homework on time.
Mrs. Yu is very kind and patient. She explains English grammar so clearly that we can all remember the grammar clearly. She avoids making you feel so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class!
I like English very much. I think that with the help of Mrs. Yu I can make great progress in English.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: People say that the first impressions are very important.
correct_sentence: People say that first impressions are very important.
error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English grammar rules, “first impressions” here represents a general concept, not a specific one, and does not require the definite article 〈the〉; the redundant 〈the〉 should be deleted to make the expression concise and idiomatic in English.

error_sentence: My first impression of Mrs Yu was that she was full of experince and very patient.
correct_sentence: My first impression of Mrs. Yu was that she was full of experience and very patient.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The abbreviation “Mrs” requires a period after it to conform to English writing conventions; the original punctuation was incorrect, changing 〈Mrs〉 to 『Mrs.』 makes the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: My first impression of Mrs Yu was that she was full of experince and very patient.
correct_sentence: My first impression of Mrs. Yu was that she was full of experience and very patient.
error: experince
correction: experience
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express “experience,” thus 〈experince〉 is a misspelling of 『experience』; it needs to be changed from 〈experince〉 to 『experience』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: In English class ,we all listen to the teacher carefully .And after shool we do our homework carefully too .We
correct_sentence: In English class, we all listen to the teacher carefully. And after school we do our homework carefully too.
error: .And after shool
correction: . And after school
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is required after an English period; the original sentence lacked a space after the period, so 〈.And〉 should be changed to 『. And』 to ensure the punctuation conforms to standards.; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express “school,” thus 〈shool〉 is a misspelling of 『school』; it needs to be changed from 〈shool〉 to 『school』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: after shool we do our homework carefully too .We
correct_sentence: And after school we do our homework carefully too. We hand in our homework on time.

error: .We
correction: . We
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: A necessary space is missing between the period and the following word 〈We〉; according to English writing conventions, a space should be added between 〈.We〉, changing it to 『. We』, to make the sentence writing conform to standards.

error_sentence: Mrs Yu is very kind and patient.
correct_sentence: Mrs. Yu is very kind and patient.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the abbreviation “Mrs” requires a period after it; the original punctuation was incorrect, changing 〈Mrs〉 to 『Mrs.』 makes the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: She explains English grammar so clarly that we can all remember the grammar clarly .She
correct_sentence: She explains English grammar so clearly that we can all remember the grammar clearly.
error: clarly
correction: clearly
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express “clearly,” thus 〈clarly〉 is a misspelling of 『clearly』; it needs to be changed from 〈clarly〉 to 『clearly』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: She explains English grammar so clarly that we can all remember the grammar clarly .She
correct_sentence: She explains English grammar so clearly that we can all remember the grammar clearly. She avoids making you feel so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class!

error: clarly .She
correction: clearly. She
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express “clearly,” thus 〈clarly〉 is a misspelling of 『clearly』; it needs to be changed from 〈clarly〉 to 『clearly』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Space Error: A space is required after an English period; the original sentence lacked a space after the period following 〈clarly〉 and before 〈.She〉, so a space should be added between the period after 〈clarly〉 and 〈.She〉, changing 〈clarly.She〉 to 『clearly. She』 to ensure the punctuation conforms to standards.

error_sentence: avoids making you fell so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class !

correct_sentence: She avoids making you feel so stupid that we all feel comfortable in the English class!

error: fell
correction: feel
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, this describes a habitual action, requiring the present tense, whereas 〈fell〉 is the past tense of “fall,” which does not fit the context; 『feel』 should be used to maintain tense consistency.

error_sentence: I like English very much .Ithink that with the help of Mrs Yu I can get great progress in English .
correct_sentence: I like English very much. I think that with the help of Mrs. Yu I can make great progress in English.
error: .Ithink
correction: . I think
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a necessary space is missing between the period and the word 〈Ithink〉; a space should be added between 〈.Ithink〉 to make the sentence writing conform to standards.

error_sentence: I like English very much .Ithink that with the help of Mrs Yu I can get great progress in English .
correct_sentence: I think that with the help of Mrs. Yu I can make great progress in English.
error: Mrs
correction: Mrs.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the abbreviation “Mrs” requires a period after it; the original punctuation was incorrect, changing 〈Mrs〉 to 『Mrs.』 makes the sentence grammatically correct.

error_sentence: I like English very much .Ithink that with the help of Mrs Yu I can get great progress in English .
correct_sentence: I think that with the help of Mrs. Yu I can make great progress in English.
error: get
correction: make
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English idiomatic expression, “to make progress” is the fixed phrase 〈make progress〉; the use of 〈get〉 in the original sentence does not conform to idiomatic usage and should be replaced with 『make』 to align with English expression habits.