Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
Swierland is an developed country which is located in the center of the Europe.Swierland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers.The population of Swierland is 7500000.The capital is Berne and it also has the city called Geneva which is famous aii over the world.
Swierland is situated next to Austriia,Fnance,Italy and Germany.Swizerland has a beautiful scenery.The sky is blue,the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river.So,people call Swizerland ''The Garden Of The World''.
Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.The economy is also well-developed.If you have the chance to Swierland,you will like it.

Corrected essay:
Switzerland is a developed country which is located in the center of Europe. Switzerland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers. The population of Switzerland is 7,500,000. The capital is Berne and it also has a city called Geneva which is famous all over the world.
Switzerland is situated next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany. Switzerland has beautiful scenery. The sky is blue, and the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river. So, people call Switzerland "The Garden of the World." Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food. The economy is also well-developed. If you have the chance to visit Switzerland, you will like it.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Swierland is an developed country which is located in the center of the Europe.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is a developed country which is located in the center of Europe.
error: Swierland is an
correction: Switzerland is a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swierland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swierland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, words starting with a vowel sound require the indefinite article 〈an〉 for modification, in the original sentence 〈developed〉 does not start with a vowel sound, therefore the article 〈an〉 should be changed to 『a』 to conform to grammar.

error_sentence: Swierland is an developed country which is located in the center of the Europe.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is a developed country which is located in the center of Europe.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, continent names do not require an article, in the original sentence 〈the Europe〉 is an incorrect expression, therefore it is necessary to delete the redundant 〈the〉 to conform to idiomatic expression.

error_sentence: Swierland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers.
correct_sentence: Switzerland covers an area of 41 thousand square kilometers.
error: Swierland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swierland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swierland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: The population of Swierland is 7500000.The capital is Berne and it also has the city called Geneva which is famous aii over the world.

correct_sentence: The population of Switzerland is 7,500,000. The capital is Berne and it also has a city called Geneva which is famous all over the world.

error: Swierland is 7500000.The
correction: Switzerland is 7,500,000. The
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swierland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swierland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the number 〈7500000〉 should use a thousand separator 『,』, therefore it is necessary to change 〈7500000〉 to 『7,500,000』 to conform to conventions.; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words, the original sentence 〈7500000.The〉 lacks a space, therefore it is necessary to change 〈7500000.The〉 to 『7,500,000. The』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: The population of Swierland is 7500000.The capital is Berne and it also has the city called Geneva which is famous aii over the world.

correct_sentence: The capital is Berne and it also has a city called Geneva which is famous all over the world.

error: the
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, when mentioning a city for the first time, the indefinite article 『a』 should be used instead of the definite article 〈the〉, therefore 〈the〉 is changed to 『a』 to conform to English habits.

error_sentence: The population of Swierland is 7500000.The capital is Berne and it also has the city called Geneva which is famous aii over the world.

correct_sentence: The capital is Berne and it also has a city called Geneva which is famous all over the world.

error: aii
correction: all
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "all", thus 〈aii〉 is a misspelling of 『all』, requiring modification of 〈aii〉 to 『all』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Swierland is situated next to Austriia,Fnance,Italy and Germany.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is situated next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: Swierland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swierland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swierland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Swierland is situated next to Austriia,Fnance,Italy and Germany.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is situated next to Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: Austriia,Fnance
correction: Austria, France
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Austria", thus 〈Austriia〉 is a misspelling of 『Austria』, requiring modification of 〈Austriia〉 to 『Austria』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words, the original sentence 〈Austriia,Fnance〉 lacks a space, therefore it is necessary to change 〈Austriia,Fnance〉 to 『Austria, France』 to conform to writing conventions.; ③ Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "France", thus 〈Fnance〉 is a misspelling of 『France』, requiring modification of 〈Fnance〉 to 『France』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Swizerland has a beautiful scenery.
correct_sentence: Switzerland has beautiful scenery.
error: Swizerland has a
correction: Switzerland has
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swizerland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, uncountable nouns do not require an article, in the original sentence 〈scenery〉 is an uncountable noun, delete the redundant article 〈a〉 to conform to English grammar.

error_sentence: The sky is blue,the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river.
correct_sentence: The sky is blue, and the water is so clear that we can see the fish swim in the river.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence 〈The sky is blue〉 and 〈the water is so clear〉 as parallel structures require the addition of 『and』 for connection, therefore the original sentence needs to add 『and』 to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: So,people call Swizerland ''The Garden Of The World''.

correct_sentence: So, people call Switzerland "The Garden of the World."
error: Swizerland ''
correction: Switzerland "
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swizerland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the original sentence should use English double quotes 『"』, therefore it is necessary to change the Chinese quotes 〈''〉 to English double quotes 『"』 to conform to conventions.

error_sentence: So,people call Swizerland ''The Garden Of The World''.
 Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.
correct_sentence: So, people call Switzerland "The Garden of the World." Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food.
error: Of The World''.
Swizerland
correction: of the World." Switzerland
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions, content words in titles need to be capitalized, therefore 〈Of The World〉 needs to be changed to 『of the World』 for standardization.; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the original sentence should use English double quotes 『"』, therefore it is necessary to change the Chinese quotes 〈''.〉 to English double quotes 『."』 to conform to conventions.; ③ Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swizerland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.
correct_sentence: Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food.
error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, uncountable nouns do not require an article, in the original sentence 〈scenery〉 is an uncountable noun, delete the redundant article 〈a〉 to conform to English grammar.

error_sentence: Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.
correct_sentence: Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food.
error: -
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression habits, when the adverb 〈very〉 modifies the adjective 〈developed〉, a hyphen is not needed, therefore it is necessary to change 〈very-developed〉 to 『very developed』 to conform to idiomatic expression.

error_sentence: Swizerland not only has a beautiful scenery,but its industry is also very-developed,especially the watches,chemietry and the food.
correct_sentence: Switzerland not only has beautiful scenery, but its industry is also very developed, especially the watches, chemistry and food.
error: chemietry and the
correction: chemistry and
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "chemistry", thus 〈chemietry〉 is a misspelling of 『chemistry』, requiring modification of 〈chemietry〉 to 『chemistry』 to make the sentence coherent.; ② Determiner Error: According to the context, it intends to express the food industry, the industry name 〈food〉 does not require the definite article 〈the〉 before it, therefore it is necessary to delete 〈the〉 to conform to idiomatic expression.

error_sentence: If you have the chance to Swierland,you will like it.
correct_sentence: If you have the chance to visit Switzerland, you will like it.
error: Swierland
correction: visit Switzerland
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: According to the context, it intends to express "visit Switzerland", the phrase 〈have the chance to Swierland〉 lacks a verb, 『visit』 should be added to express the complete action.; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express "Switzerland", thus 〈Swierland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』, requiring modification of 〈Swierland〉 to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.