Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
My name is Tina. I 'm busy on Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock a.m.I have breakfast and go to school at 7 o' clock. I begin read and drow pictures at school. At 12 o' clock a.m. I have lunch in school. In the evening, I go back home and have dinner. This is my busy day.

Corrected essay:
My name is Tina. I'm busy on Monday. I get up at 6 a.m. I have breakfast and go to school at 7 o'clock. I begin to read and draw pictures at school. At 12 p.m., I have lunch at school. In the evening, I go back home and have dinner. This is my busy day.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I 'm busy on Monday.
correct_sentence: I'm busy on Monday.
error: 'm
correction: 'm
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there should be no space between the subject and 〈'm〉 in the contraction 〈I 'm〉; the correct form is 『I'm』. Therefore, there is a space error here. The extra space needs to be deleted to conform to English writing conventions.

error_sentence: I get up at 6 o'clock a.m.
correct_sentence: I get up at 6 a.m.
error: o'clock
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression conventions, in the time expression 〈6 o'clock a.m.〉, 『o'clock』 and 『a.m.』 redundantly express the concept of time. Therefore, there is word redundancy here. 『o'clock』 needs to be deleted to express 'get up at six in the morning' in accordance with English time expression conventions.

error_sentence: I have breakfast and go to school at 7 o' clock.
correct_sentence: I have breakfast and go to school at 7 o'clock.
error: o' clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English time expression writing conventions, the correct form for expressing time 'on the hour' should be the joined word 『o'clock』. Therefore, there is a spelling error here. The extra space needs to be deleted to change 〈o' clock〉 to 『o'clock』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: I begin read and drow pictures at school.
correct_sentence: I begin to read and draw pictures at school.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 'begin' should be followed by an infinitive to form the phrase 'begin to do something', meaning 'start doing something'. Therefore, there is a nonfinite verb form error here. 『to』 needs to be added after the verb 〈begin〉 to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: I begin read and drow pictures at school.
correct_sentence: I begin to read and draw pictures at school.
error: drow
correction: draw
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English word spelling conventions, the correct spelling for the verb 'to paint/draw' is 'draw'. Therefore, there is a spelling error here. The incorrect spelling 〈drow〉 needs to be changed to 『draw』 to conform to word spelling conventions.

error_sentence: At 12 o' clock a.m.
correct_sentence: At 12 p.m., I have lunch at school.
error: o' clock a.m.
correction: p.m.,
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression conventions, in the time expression 〈12 o'clock a.m.〉, 〈o'clock〉 and 〈a.m.〉 redundantly express the concept of time, so the redundant 『o'clock』 needs to be deleted; ② Determiner Error: According to English time expression conventions, 'twelve noon' should be expressed as '12 p.m.', not '12 a.m.', so 〈a.m.〉 needs to be changed to 『p.m.』 to conform to time expression conventions; ③ Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, when time expressions like 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' function as adverbials at the beginning of a sentence, they should be separated from the following clause by a comma. Therefore, a 『,』 needs to be added after 〈p.m.〉 to conform to English syntax rules.

error_sentence: I have lunch in school.
correct_sentence: At 12 p.m., I have lunch at school.
error: in
correction: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 'in' is used for larger spatial areas, while 'at' is used for specific locations. Therefore, the phrase 'have lunch at school' should use the preposition 'at'. There is a preposition error here. 〈in〉 needs to be replaced with 『at』 to conform to English grammar rules.