Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
At 7:40, Sarah get up. Sarah read English texts at 8:30. The day time, Sarah do her homework. In the afternoon, Sarah take exerxise, clean house and cook. After supper, Sarah watch TV or movies.

Corrected essay:
At 7:40 a.m., Sarah gets up. Sarah reads English texts at 8:30 a.m. In the daytime, Sarah does her homework. In the afternoon, Sarah takes exercise, cleans the house and cooks. After supper, Sarah watches TV or movies.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: At 7:40, Sarah get up.
correct_sentence: At 7:40 a.m., Sarah gets up.
correction: a.m.
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Error: Although the time expression 〈At 7:40〉 does not affect understanding, to clearly express the meaning and avoid ambiguity, 『a.m.』 should be added afterwards to specify the time as morning.

error_sentence: At 7:40, Sarah get up.
correct_sentence: At 7:40 a.m., Sarah gets up.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈get〉 also needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it is changed to 『gets』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Sarah read English texts at 8:30.
correct_sentence: Sarah reads English texts at 8:30 a.m.
error: read
correction: reads
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈read〉 also needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it is changed to 『reads』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Sarah read English texts at 8:30. The day time, Sarah do her homework.
correct_sentence: Sarah reads English texts at 8:30 a.m. In the daytime, Sarah does her homework.
error: . The day time
correction: a.m. In the daytime
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Error: The time expression 〈8:30〉 needs 『a.m.』 added to specify the morning period, conforming to English time format standards and ensuring clarity; ② Preposition Error: The noun “daytime" represents a period of time, so the preposition 『in』 should be added to correctly indicate the time period, changing 〈The day time〉 to 『In the daytime』; ③ Spelling Error: According to the context, the intended meaning is 'daytime', so 〈day time〉 is changed to 『daytime』 to maintain clarity.

error_sentence: The day time, Sarah do her homework.
correct_sentence: In the daytime, Sarah does her homework.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈do〉 also needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it is changed to 『does』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, Sarah take exerxise, clean house and cook.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, Sarah takes exercise, cleans the house and cooks.
error: take exerxise, clean
correction: takes exercise, cleans the
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, so the verbs 〈take〉 and 〈clean〉 both need to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, 〈take〉 is changed to 『takes』 and 〈clean〉 is changed to 『cleans』; ② Spelling Error: According to the context, the intended meaning is 'exercise', so the word 〈exerxise〉 needs to be changed to 『exercise』; ③ Determiner Error: The noun 〈house〉 is missing a determiner; the definite article 『the』 needs to be added to specify the object.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, Sarah take exerxise, clean house and cook.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, Sarah takes exercise, cleans the house and cooks.
error: cook
correction: cooks
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, while the verb 〈cook〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it is changed to 『cooks』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: After supper, Sarah watch TV or movies.
correct_sentence: After supper, Sarah watches TV or movies.
error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Sarah〉 is third-person singular, while the verb 〈watch〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it is changed to 『watches』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.