Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gao Feng liles football. He has got 4 footballs. And he has got lots of football stars pictures. But he never play football. He only watch football matches. He has got two friends Mike and Dave. Mike like play basketball. But he doesn't like ping-pong. Dave likes soccer. He doesn't like baseball.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng likes football. He has got 4 footballs. And he has got lots of football stars' pictures. But he never plays football. He only watches football matches. He has got two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes to play basketball. But he doesn't like ping-pong. Dave likes soccer. He doesn't like baseball.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Gao Feng liles football.
correct_sentence: Gao Feng likes football.
error: liles
correction: likes
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'like', so the original word 〈liles〉 is a misspelling of 『likes』; it is a spelling error and needs to be changed to 『likes』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: And he has got lots of football stars pictures.
correct_sentence: And he has got lots of football stars' pictures.
correction: '
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules, to express 'photos of football stars', the noun 〈football stars〉 needs to be in the possessive form; the original phrase 〈football stars pictures〉 lacks the possessive marker and should be changed to 『football stars' pictures』 by adding 『’』 to indicate the ownership of the photos, making the expression grammatically correct.

error_sentence: But he never play football.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football.
error: play
correction: plays
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, in the simple present tense, the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb must agree with the subject. In the original sentence, 〈play〉 is the base form of the verb, which does not conform to the rule; it needs to be changed to 『plays』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: He only watch football matches.
correct_sentence: He only watches football matches.
error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb must agree with the subject. In the original sentence, 〈watch〉 is the base form of the verb, which does not conform to the rule and is a subject-verb agreement error; it needs to be changed to 『watches』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: He has got two friends Mike and Dave.
correct_sentence: He has got two friends, Mike and Dave.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, a comma 『,』 should be added before the appositive 〈Mike and Dave〉 to clarify the sentence structure, forming 〈two friends, Mike and Dave〉, which enhances the sentence's logicality and conformity to standards.

error_sentence: Mike like play basketball.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball.
error: like
correction: likes to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈Mike〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb must agree with the subject; in the original sentence, 〈like〉 is the base form of the verb, which does not conform to the rule and should be changed to 『likes』; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure when preceding another verb; the original sentence lacks the infinitive marker before 〈play〉, so 『to』 should be added to form 『to play』, making the sentence grammatically correct.