Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
My name is Tina. I am busy on Monday. I got up and had breakfast at 7 o 'clock. I went to school and begin to have lessons at 8:30 o 'clock. At 12 o 'clock I had lunch in school. In the aftnoon, I drow a picture and played tennis at school. After school at 6:30 p.m.I went back home and hadd dinner at home .

Corrected essay:
My name is Tina. I am busy on Monday. I got up and had breakfast at 7 o'clock. I went to school and began to have lessons at 8:30. At 12 o'clock I had lunch at school. In the afternoon, I drew a picture and played tennis at school. After school at 6:30 p.m., I went back home and had dinner at home.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I got up and had breakfast at 7 o 'clock.
correct_sentence: I got up and had breakfast at 7 o'clock.
error: o 'clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, the time expression 〈o 'clock〉 is incorrectly formatted; remove the extra space to change 〈o 'clock〉 to 『o'clock』.

error_sentence: I went to school and begin to have lessons at 8:30 o 'clock.
correct_sentence: I went to school and began to have lessons at 8:30.
error: begin
correction: began
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the main clause is in the past tense, so the subsequent parallel verb needs to maintain tense consistency; 〈begin〉 should be changed to the past tense 『began』.

error_sentence: I went to school and begin to have lessons at 8:30 o 'clock.
correct_sentence: I went to school and began to have lessons at 8:30.
error: o 'clock
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: In English, 〈8:30〉 is a specific time point and does not require the addition of 〈o'clock〉 (used only for exact hours); delete the redundant expression to make the meaning smooth.

error_sentence: At 12 o 'clock I had lunch in school.
correct_sentence: At 12 o'clock I had lunch at school.
error: o 'clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Space Error: According to the context, the extra space in the middle of the word 〈o 'clock〉 leads to non-standard spelling; 〈o 'clock〉 needs to be changed to 『o'clock』 to conform to standard spelling.

error_sentence: At 12 o 'clock I had lunch in school.
correct_sentence: At 12 o'clock I had lunch at school.
error: in
correction: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar, when expressing the location 'at school', the fixed phrase is 〈at school〉, not 〈in school〉; 〈in〉 needs to be changed to 『at』.

error_sentence: In the aftnoon, I drow a picture and played tennis at school.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I drew a picture and played tennis at school.
error: aftnoon
correction: afternoon
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the context, 〈aftnoon〉 is a misspelling; 〈aftnoon〉 needs to be changed to 『afternoon』 to conform to correct spelling.

error_sentence: In the aftnoon, I drow a picture and played tennis at school.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I drew a picture and played tennis at school.
error: drow
correction: drew
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the context, the past tense form of the verb 'draw' is needed here; 〈drow〉 is an incorrect spelling and needs to be changed to 『drew』 to conform to correct writing conventions.

error_sentence: After school at 6:30 p.m.I went back home and hadd dinner at home .
correct_sentence: After school at 6:30 p.m., I went back home and had dinner at home.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when 〈After school at 6:30 p.m〉 serves as an adverbial of time at the beginning of a sentence, it needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma; therefore, a 『,』 needs to be added after 〈6:30 p.m.〉 to comply with punctuation rules and separate sentence components.

error_sentence: After school at 6:30 p.m.I went back home and hadd dinner at home .
correct_sentence: After school at 6:30 p.m., I went back home and had dinner at home.
error: hadd
correction: had
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the word 〈hadd〉 is misspelled; 〈hadd〉 needs to be changed to 『had』 to conform to correct spelling.