Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
My name is Tina. I busy on Monday. At 6 o' clock I get up and have breakfast. At 7 o' clock I go to school by bus. I begin read books and drow pictures at school. At 12 o'clock I have lunch at school. In the evening I go back home.

Corrected essay:
My name is Tina. I am busy on Monday. At 6 o'clock I get up and have breakfast. At 7 o'clock I go to school by bus. I begin to read books and draw pictures at school. At 12 o'clock I have lunch at school. In the evening I go back home.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I busy on Monday.
correct_sentence: I am busy on Monday.
correction: am
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to English grammar rules and expression habits, one of the simple sentence structures is 'Subject + Linking Verb + Predicative'. Here, expressing someone is busy follows the structure 'Subject + Linking Verb (be) + Predicative (busy)'. The original phrase 〈I busy〉 does not conform to the grammatical structure; therefore, 〈I busy〉 needs to be changed to 『I am busy』 to comply with grammatical rules and context.

error_sentence: At 6 o' clock I get up and have breakfast.
correct_sentence: At 6 o'clock I get up and have breakfast.
error: o' clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Space Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'o'clock'. The original phrase 〈o' clock〉 contains a space, making it a misspelling of 『o'clock』. Therefore, 〈o' clock〉 needs to be corrected to 『o'clock』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: At 7 o' clock I go to school by bus.
correct_sentence: At 7 o'clock I go to school by bus.
error: o' clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Space Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'o'clock'. The original phrase 〈o' clock〉 contains a space, making it a misspelling of 『o'clock』. Therefore, 〈o' clock〉 needs to be corrected to 『o'clock』 for the sentence to be coherent.

error_sentence: I begin read books and drow pictures at school.
correct_sentence: I begin to read books and draw pictures at school.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈begin〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure. Therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈begin〉 in the original sentence to form 『begin to read』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: I begin read books and drow pictures at school.
correct_sentence: I begin to read books and draw pictures at school.
error: drow
correction: draw
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'draw'. 〈drow〉 is a misspelling of 『draw』. Therefore, 〈drow〉 needs to be corrected to 『draw』 for the sentence to be coherent.