Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hello, I'm is Tina. Today is Monday. I'm get up at 6 o'clock. Why is get up before? Because I got have very much thing. First, I have breakfast in my home. Then, I go to school at 8 o'clock. I begin got have story lesson and draw lesson. I have lunch in school. Today is happly day. In the afternoon, my mom together me go home.

Corrected essay:
Hello, I'm Tina. Today is Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock. Why do I get up early? Because I have many things to do. First, I have breakfast at home. Then, I go to school at 8 o'clock. I begin with a story lesson and a drawing lesson. I have lunch in school. Today is a happy day. In the afternoon, my mom and I go home together.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Hello, I'm is Tina.
correct_sentence: Hello, I'm Tina.
error: is
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈I'm〉 already contains the contraction of the subject and the be-verb; the subsequent be-verb 〈is〉 is redundant. The redundant be-verb 〈is〉 needs to be deleted to maintain the accuracy of the subject-verb-complement structure and conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: I'm get up at 6 o'clock.
correct_sentence: I get up at 6 o'clock.
error: 'm
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, describing an action in the simple present tense does not require a continuous tense structure. Therefore, there is an auxiliary error here. The superfluous auxiliary verb needs to be deleted, changing 〈I'm get up〉 to 『I get up』 to conform to the context's tense and English grammar rules.

error_sentence: Why is get up before?
correct_sentence: Why do I get up early?
error: is
correction: do I
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, special questions in the simple present tense require the auxiliary verb do/does, not the auxiliary verb used in the present continuous tense. Based on the context, the subject of the sentence is the first person 'I', so the auxiliary verb 〈is〉 needs to be changed to 『do』 to conform to English grammar rules; ② Pronoun Error: According to the context, the subject 'I' is missing after the auxiliary verb 〈do〉, making the sentence structure incomplete. The pronoun 『I』 needs to be added after the auxiliary verb 〈do〉 to make the sentence structure complete.

error_sentence: Why is get up before?
correct_sentence: Why do I get up early?
error: before
correction: early
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Adverb Error: According to the context, the temporal preposition 〈before〉 cannot accurately express the original meaning of 'getting up early'. Therefore, there is an adverb error here. 〈before〉 needs to be changed to the more contextually appropriate adverb 『early』 to form the fixed English phrase 〈get up early〉, meaning 'to get up early', to fit the context.

error_sentence: Because I got have very much thing.
correct_sentence: Because I have many things to do.
error: got have very much thing
correction: have many things to do
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express 'I have many things to do'. The simultaneous appearance of the verbs 〈got〉 and 〈have〉 constitutes word redundancy. The redundant past tense verb 〈got〉 should be deleted, retaining 『have』 to mean 'have' in line with the sentence meaning and context tense; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the determiner 〈very much〉 only modifies uncountable nouns. However, based on the original sentence meaning, it needs to quantify 'many things'. 『many』 should be used to modify plural countable nouns to conform to English grammar rules; ③ Noun Number Error: According to the original sentence meaning, it expresses 'many things'. The singular countable noun 〈thing〉 needs to be changed to the plural form 『things』 to fit the meaning; ④ Sentence Structure Error: According to English grammar rules, when expressing 'I have many things to do', a 'to do' infinitive is needed at the end of the sentence to indicate purpose. Therefore, 『to do』 should be added at the end as an adverbial of purpose to make the sentence structure complete and conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: First, I have breakfast in my home.
correct_sentence: First, I have breakfast at home.
error: in my
correction: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Preposition Error: The fixed English phrase 〈at home〉 means 'at home'. Here, the incorrect preposition 〈in〉 needs to be changed to 『at』 to conform to the fixed English phrase; ② Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing the meaning 'at home', no determiner is needed before 'home'. Therefore, the redundant 〈my〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English expression habits.

error_sentence: I begin got have story lesson and draw lesson.
correct_sentence: I begin with a story lesson and a drawing lesson.
error: got have
correction: with a
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: According to English expression habits, to express 'begin something', the phrasal verb 'begin with something' can be used directly. Here, 'story lesson' is equivalent to 'something'. Therefore, the incorrect verb combination 〈got have〉 can be changed to the preposition 『with』 to form the 'begin with' structure, conforming to English expression habits; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈lesson〉 requires an indefinite article for modification. Therefore, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before the singular form 〈story lesson〉 to refer specifically to 'a story lesson'.

error_sentence: I begin got have story lesson and draw lesson.
correct_sentence: I begin with a story lesson and a drawing lesson.
error: draw
correction: a drawing
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the singular countable noun 〈lesson〉 requires an indefinite article for modification. Therefore, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before the singular form 〈lesson〉 to refer specifically to 'a lesson'; ② PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈draw〉 cannot directly modify the noun 〈lesson〉. It needs to be changed to the gerund form 『drawing』 acting as a pre-modifier to mean 'drawing lesson' to conform to English grammar rules.

error_sentence: Today is happly day.
correct_sentence: Today is a happy day.
error: happly
correction: a happy
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject is the singular noun 〈Today〉, meaning 'this day'. Therefore, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added after the be-verb to indicate singularity and conform to English grammar rules; ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling conventions, the correct spelling for the adjective '快乐的' (happy) is 'happy'. Therefore, 〈happly〉 needs to be changed to 『happy』.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, my mom together me go home.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, my mom and I go home together.
error: together me
correction: and I
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to the original sentence meaning, the subject of the sentence is 'my mom and I'. The coordinating conjunction 'and' is needed, not the adverb 'together'. Therefore, the adverb 〈together〉 needs to be changed to the conjunction 『and』 to connect the parallel subjects, conforming to the original sentence meaning and English grammar rules; ② Pronoun Error: According to English syntax rules, a pronoun used as the subject of a sentence should be in the subjective case. Therefore, the objective pronoun 〈me〉 needs to be changed to the subjective pronoun 『I』 to conform to English syntax rules.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, my mom together me go home.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, my mom and I go home together.
correction: together
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, the adverb 〈together〉, meaning '一起、一同' (together, jointly), should be placed at the end of the sentence to modify the verb phrase. Therefore, there is a word order error here. The adverb 『together』 from the original sentence needs to be placed after the verb phrase 『go home』 to express the meaning 'go home together', conforming to the original sentence meaning and English expression habits.