Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
My Next Weekend I am really looking forward to my next weekend as I have planned a lot of interesting activities. On Saturday morning, I'm going to visite my grandparents. In The afternoon, I'm going to clean my room. On Sunday, I'm going to play computer games with my classmates. In The afternoon, L plan to play football.

Corrected essay:
My Next Weekend
I am really looking forward to my next weekend as I have planned a lot of interesting activities. On Saturday morning, I'm going to visit my grandparents. In the afternoon, I'm going to clean my room. On Sunday, I'm going to play computer games with my classmates. In the afternoon, I plan to play football.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My Next Weekend I am really looking forward to my next weekend as I have planned a lot of interesting activities.
correct_sentence: My Next Weekend
I am really looking forward to my next weekend as I have planned a lot of interesting activities.
correction: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Format Error: According to English writing format standards, a blank line should separate the title and the main text. Add a newline character 『\n』 after the title 〈My Next Weekend〉 to create paragraph spacing and achieve standardized formatting.

error_sentence: On Saturday morning, I'm going to visite my grandparents.
correct_sentence: On Saturday morning, I'm going to visit my grandparents.
error: visite
correction: visit
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English verb conjugation rules, 〈visite〉 is an incorrect spelling. Verbs with French roots need to drop the final -e to become regular English verbs, so 〈visite〉 is corrected to the base form 『visit』, maintaining the meaning 'to pay a visit' while conforming to English verb spelling conventions.

error_sentence: In The afternoon, I'm going to clean my room.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I'm going to clean my room.
error: The
correction: the
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English capitalization rules for time adverbials, the article 〈The〉 in the prepositional phrase 〈In The afternoon〉 is a function word and should not be capitalized. Change the incorrectly capitalized 〈The〉 to lowercase 『the』 to form the correct expression 『In the afternoon』, conforming to the writing convention for English 'preposition + article + time noun' phrases.

error_sentence: In The afternoon, L plan to play football.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I plan to play football.
error: The
correction: the
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English capitalization rules for time adverbials, the article 〈The〉 in the prepositional phrase 〈In The afternoon〉 is a function word and should not be capitalized. Change the incorrectly capitalized 〈The〉 to lowercase 『the』 to form the correct expression 『In the afternoon』, conforming to the writing convention for English 'preposition + article + time noun' phrases.

error_sentence: In The afternoon, L plan to play football.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I plan to play football.
error: L
correction: I
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the English personal pronoun system, 〈L〉 is neither a standard abbreviation nor a valid pronoun form. Replace the incorrect 〈L〉 with the nominative first-person singular pronoun 『I』 to ensure the sentence subject conforms to English pronoun case usage rules. The correction forms the complete subject-verb structure 『I plan to play football.』, accurately expressing the speaker's own action.