Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Xiao ming is wear the red shirt. Xiao hong is wear the beautiful shoes. And Xiao dong is wear the blue shirt. He is like this shirt.

Corrected essay:
Xiao Ming wears a red shirt. Xiao Hong wears the beautiful shoes. And Xiao Dong wears a blue shirt. He likes this shirt.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Xiao ming is wear the red shirt.
correct_sentence: Xiao Ming wears a red shirt.
error: ming is wear the
correction: Ming wears a
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions for Chinese names, the pinyin for the surname and given name should be separated, and the first letter of each should be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈ming〉 needs its first letter capitalized, so it is changed to 『Ming』 to conform to English name writing standards; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt's requirement to "use colors to describe your classmate's attire," the simple present tense should be used. The original phrase 〈is wear〉 is an incorrect structure; therefore, it needs to be changed to the simple present tense, third-person singular form 『wears』 to fit the context; ③ Determiner Error: According to English expression conventions, when mentioning "shirt" for the first time, the indefinite article 『a』 should be used instead of the definite article 〈the〉. Therefore, 〈the〉 is changed to 『a』 to conform to English usage.

error_sentence: Xiao hong is wear the beautiful shoes.
correct_sentence: Xiao Hong wears the beautiful shoes.
error: hong is wear
correction: Hong wears
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions for Chinese names, the pinyin for the surname and given name should be separated, and the first letter of each should be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈hong〉 needs its first letter capitalized, so it is changed to 『Hong』 to conform to English name writing standards; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt's requirement to "use colors to describe your classmate's attire," the simple present tense should be used. The original phrase 〈is wear〉 is an incorrect structure; therefore, it needs to be changed to the simple present tense, third-person singular form 『wears』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: And Xiao dong is wear the blue shirt.
correct_sentence: And Xiao Dong wears a blue shirt.
error: dong is wear the
correction: Dong wears a
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions for Chinese names, the pinyin for the surname and given name should be separated, and the first letter of each should be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈dong〉 needs its first letter capitalized, so it is changed to 『Dong』 to conform to English name writing standards; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt's requirement to "use colors to describe your classmate's attire," the simple present tense should be used. The original phrase 〈is wear〉 is an incorrect structure; therefore, it needs to be changed to the simple present tense, third-person singular form 『wears』 to fit the context; ③ Determiner Error: According to English expression conventions, when mentioning 〈blue shirt〉 for the first time, the indefinite article 『a』 should be used instead of the definite article 〈the〉. Therefore, 〈the〉 is changed to 『a』 to conform to English usage.

error_sentence: He is like this shirt.
correct_sentence: He likes this shirt.
error: is like
correction: likes
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt's requirement to "use colors to describe your classmate's attire," the simple present tense should be used. The original phrase 〈is like〉 is an incorrect structure; therefore, it needs to be changed to the simple present tense, third-person singular form 『likes』 to fit the context.