Writing prompt: Based on the given hints and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Last Sunday, I went for a picnic in the park with my friends. It started raining in the afternoon. I forgot my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and rest well.
Writing hints: picnic; rain; umbrella; get wet; hospital; fever; medicine.

Student essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park for a picnic. It began to rain in the afternoon. I forgot to bring my umbrella and go wet. I feelcold and have a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine angd told me to go home and have a good rest.

Corrected essay:
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the park for a picnic. It began to rain in the afternoon. I forgot to bring my umbrella and got wet. I felt cold and had a headache. My friends took me to the hospital. The doctor said I had a fever. He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and have a good rest.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I forgot to bring my umbrella and go wet.
correct_sentence: I forgot to bring my umbrella and got wet.
error: go
correction: got
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes an action that happened in the past. In the original sentence, 〈go〉 is in the present simple tense, which does not meet the tense consistency requirement. 〈go〉 should be changed to the past tense to maintain tense consistency with the context; ② Verb Choice Error: In English, the phrase “get wet” is commonly used to express “getting wet”. The original sentence uses 〈go wet〉, which is not idiomatic. “get wet” should be used; here, it is prioritized as a verb tense error, changing 〈go〉 to 『got』.

error_sentence: I feelcold and have a headache.
correct_sentence: I felt cold and had a headache.
error: feelcold and have
correction: felt cold and had
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the overall context of the sentence, it describes a past state. In the original sentence, 〈feel〉 and 〈have〉 are in the present simple tense, which does not meet the tense requirement. 〈feel〉 should be changed to the past tense 『felt』, and 〈have〉 should be changed to the past tense 『had』 to match the overall past tense narration; ② Space Error: The word 〈feelcold〉 is not correctly separated and lacks a necessary space. A space should be added between 〈feel〉 and 〈cold〉, changing 〈feelcold〉 to 『feel cold』 to make the word spelling conform to standards.

error_sentence: He gave me some medicine angd told me to go home and have a good rest.
correct_sentence: He gave me some medicine and told me to go home and have a good rest.
error: angd
correction: and
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “and”, but 〈angd〉 is misspelled. The correct spelling for the conjunction should be 『and』. 〈angd〉 needs to be changed to 『and』 to make the sentence spelling correct and conform to English expression norms.