Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
Hi! I'm Milly. My father likes reading and he is tallest in our home. My mother likes to see the movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. And I likes to do some games with dogs.

Corrected essay:
Hi! I'm Milly. My father likes reading and he is the tallest in our home. My mother likes to see movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. And I like to play some games with my dogs.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My father likes reading and he is tallest in our home.
correct_sentence: My father likes reading and he is the tallest in our home.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 〈the〉 is required before a superlative adjective when used within a specific scope of comparison. In the original sentence 〈he is tallest〉, the superlative adjective 〈tallest〉 lacks the definite article 〈the〉, which is a determiner error. Therefore, 〈he is tallest〉 needs to be changed to 『he is the tallest』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: My mother likes to see the movies.
correct_sentence: My mother likes to see movies.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 〈the〉 is not needed when referring to a general concept. In the original phrase 〈see the movies〉, 〈the〉 is a redundant determiner because 〈movies〉 here refers to the general activity of watching movies, not specific movies. Therefore, the original phrase 〈see the movies〉 contains a determiner error, and 〈the〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English expression habits, making the sentence more concise and accurate.

error_sentence: And I likes to do some games with dogs.
correct_sentence: And I like to play some games with my dogs.
error: likes to do
correction: like to play
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the principle of subject-verb agreement, the subject 〈I〉 is first-person singular, and the verb should be in the base form 〈like〉; the original word 〈likes〉 does not conform to the rule, which is a subject-verb agreement error, so 〈likes〉 needs to be changed to 『like』; ② Verb Choice Error: According to English collocation habits, 'play games' should be used to express 'playing games'; 〈do games〉 does not conform to the habit, which is a verb choice error, so 〈do〉 needs to be changed to 『play』.

error_sentence: And I likes to do some games with dogs.
correct_sentence: And I like to play some games with my dogs.
correction: my
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, a possessive pronoun should be used to clarify ownership when a noun indicates a possessive relationship. The original phrase 〈with dogs〉 lacks a possessive pronoun, implying 'playing with any dogs', which is a pronoun error; 〈my〉 should be added to eliminate ambiguity and indicate 'playing with my dogs'.