Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
I am Tina. I get up at 6:30 every day. At 6:40, I often bresh my tooth. Then, I often have breakfast at 6:45. I often eat bread, eggs and a bottle of milk for breakfast. At 7:00, I usually go to school by bus. At 8:00, Frist class is began. In the morning, I have reading class and drawing class. At 12:00, I have lunch. I often eat rice and fish for lunch. In the afternoon, I have a PE class, I often play volleyball with my friends. At 5:30, I go home with my friend. After dinner, I usually play doll with my cat. At 9:00, I often go to the bed.

Corrected essay:
I am Tina. I get up at 6:30 every day. At 6:40, I often brush my teeth. Then, I often have breakfast at 6:45. I often eat bread, eggs, and a bottle of milk for breakfast. At 7:00, I usually go to school by bus. At 8:00, the first class begins. In the morning, I have a reading class and a drawing class. At 12:00, I have lunch. I often eat rice and fish for lunch. In the afternoon, I have a PE class, and I often play volleyball with my friends. At 5:30, I go home with my friend. After dinner, I usually play with dolls and my cat. At 9:00, I often go to bed.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: At 6:40, I often bresh my tooth.
correct_sentence: At 6:40, I often brush my teeth.
error: bresh my tooth
correction: brush my teeth
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to spelling rules, the original sentence means "brush teeth", thus the English word for "刷" 〈bresh〉 is a spelling error; the correct spelling is 『brush』; ② Noun Number Error: According to the English phrase for "brush teeth", the English word for "牙" should be the plural noun 『teeth』, not the singular 〈tooth〉.

error_sentence: I often eat bread, eggs and a bottle of milk for breakfast.
correct_sentence: I often eat bread, eggs, and a bottle of milk for breakfast.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: In English expression, when listing multiple items, a comma 『,』 needs to be added between the last nouns 〈eggs〉 and 〈a bottle of milk〉 to conform to English writing conventions.

error_sentence: At 8:00, Frist class is began.
correct_sentence: At 8:00, the first class begins.
error: Frist class is began
correction: the first class begins
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: Based on the sentence, the intended meaning is "the first class", which requires the ordinal number 『first』; thus, 〈Frist〉 is a spelling error and should be changed to the correct 『first』; ② Case Error: According to the sentence, 〈Frist class〉 is not at the beginning of the sentence nor a proper noun, so it should be lowercase, changed to 『first class』; ③ Determiner Error: According to the rule that a definite article is needed before an ordinal number, 『the』 should be added before 『first class』 to mean "the first class"; ③ Verb Voice Error: Based on the sentence meaning, the passive voice 〈is began〉 should be changed to the active voice 『begins』.

error_sentence: In the morning, I have reading class and drawing class.
correct_sentence: In the morning, I have a reading class and a drawing class.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English morphological principles, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before the countable noun 〈reading class〉 to express the singular concept and complete the sentence structure.

error_sentence: In the morning, I have reading class and drawing class.
correct_sentence: In the morning, I have a reading class and a drawing class.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English morphological principles, the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added before the singular countable noun 〈drawing class〉 to express the singular concept and complete the sentence structure.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, I have a PE class, I often play volleyball with my friends.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I have a PE class, and I often play volleyball with my friends.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to the original sentence, the two main clauses 〈I have a PE class〉 and 〈I often play volleyball with my friends〉 in the compound sentence cannot be simply connected by a 〈,〉; the conjunction 『and』 is missing, so 『and』 should be added before 〈I often play volleyball〉 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: After dinner, I usually play doll with my cat.
correct_sentence: After dinner, I usually play with dolls and my cat.
error: doll with
correction: with dolls and
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: According to the text's meaning, the noun 〈doll〉 should be in the plural form 〈dolls〉 to match the context implying multiple dolls; ② Word Order Error: According to English morphological principles, when 〈play〉 means to amuse oneself, it is an intransitive verb and needs the preposition "with" followed by the object, so 〈play dolls with〉 needs to be changed to 『play with dolls』; ③ Conjunction Error: The conjunction 〈and〉 is missing between the parallel objects 〈dolls〉 and 〈my cat〉; 『and』 should be added to maintain coherence.

error_sentence: At 9:00, I often go to the bed.
correct_sentence: At 9:00, I often go to bed.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to the original sentence, the intended meaning is "go to bed"; the fixed phrase 〈go to bed〉 does not require an article, so the redundant 〈the〉 should be deleted to conform to idiomatic English expression.