Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. I got up at seven fourty. I read English texts from half past eight to nine fourty-five. The doy time, I did my homework. In the afternoon, I took exercise, cleaned house and cooked. After supper, I watched TV or movies with my family. What about you?

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. I got up at seven forty. I read English texts from half past eight to nine forty-five. In the daytime, I did my homework. In the afternoon, I took exercise, cleaned my house and cooked. After supper, I watched TV or movies with my family. What about you?

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I got up at seven fourty.
correct_sentence: I got up at seven forty.
error: fourty
correction: forty
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intended word here is 'forty', so 〈fourty〉 is a misspelling of 『forty』; it needs to be changed to 『forty』 for the sentence to make sense.

error_sentence: I read English texts from half past eight to nine fourty-five.
correct_sentence: I read English texts from half past eight to nine forty-five.
error: fourty
correction: forty
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intended word here is 'forty', so 〈fourty〉 is a misspelling of 『forty』; it should be changed to 『forty』.

error_sentence: The doy time, I did my homework.
correct_sentence: In the daytime, I did my homework.
error: The doy time
correction: In the daytime
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, words must be spelled correctly; in the original sentence, 〈doy time〉 is a misspelling of 『daytime』, so 〈doy time〉 needs to be changed to 『daytime』; ② Preposition Error: According to English expression conventions, time periods should use the structure 『In the daytime』; the original phrase 〈The day time〉 does not conform to idiomatic expression and lacks the preposition 『In』, so it needs to be changed to 『In the daytime』 to comply with English expression habits.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, I took exercise, cleaned house and cooked.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I took exercise, cleaned my house and cooked.
correction: my
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the countable noun 〈house〉 lacks a necessary determiner; adding 『my』 can indicate possession, conforming to the English grammatical structure 'verb + determiner + noun', therefore 『my』 is added to 〈cleaned house〉 to indicate possession.