Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
My name is Gang Feng. I like football. My friends name is Mike and Dave. My firsi friend name is Mike. He like basketball. But he don't like ping-pong. My second friend name is Dave. He like soccer. But he don't like baseball.

Corrected essay:
My name is Gang Feng. I like football. My friends' names are Mike and Dave. My first friend's name is Mike. He likes basketball. But he doesn't like ping-pong. My second friend's name is Dave. He likes soccer. But he doesn't like baseball.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My friends name is Mike and Dave.
correct_sentence: My friends' names are Mike and Dave.
error: name is
correction: ' names are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, 'friends' names' is plural; the plural possessive should be used. The original 〈My friends〉 lacks the possessive apostrophe '’', so it needs to be changed to the possessive form 『My friends'』 to fit grammar and context; ② Noun Number Error: There is more than one friend's name, so the noun 'name' must be plural; therefore, 〈name〉 is changed to 『names』; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 『My friends' names』 is plural, but the original verb 〈is〉 is in the third-person singular form. Therefore, the verb 〈is〉 needs to be changed to the third-person plural form 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: My firsi friend name is Mike.
correct_sentence: My first friend's name is Mike.
error: firsi friend
correction: first friend's
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: Based on the sentence meaning, the intention is to express 'first', so 〈firsi〉 is a misspelling of 『first』; it needs to be corrected to 『first』 for the sentence to make sense; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, the meaning here is 'friend's name'. The original phrase 〈My firsi friend〉 needs to be in the possessive form to indicate possession; therefore, 〈My firsi friend〉 is changed to 『My first friend's』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: He like basketball.
correct_sentence: He likes basketball.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, but the original verb 〈like〉 is in the third-person plural form. Therefore, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: But he don't like ping-pong.
correct_sentence: But he doesn't like ping-pong.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, but the original verb 〈do〉 is in the third-person plural form. Therefore, the verb 〈do〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『does』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: My second friend name is Dave.
correct_sentence: My second friend's name is Dave.
correction: 's
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, the meaning here is 'friend's name'. The original phrase 〈My second friend〉 needs to be in the possessive form to indicate possession; therefore, 〈My second friend〉 is changed to 『My second friend's』 to fit the context.

error_sentence: He like soccer.
correct_sentence: He likes soccer.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, but the original verb 〈like〉 is in the third-person plural form. Therefore, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: But he don't like baseball.
correct_sentence: But he doesn't like baseball.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error. The subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, but the original verb 〈do〉 is in the third-person plural form. Therefore, the verb 〈do〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『does』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.