timeboyto/FEANEL huggingface dataset:
Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
I am visit my grandparents at my next weekend

Corrected essay:
I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I am visit my grandparents at my next weekend
correct_sentence: I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend.
correction: going to
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, the fixed phrase “be going to do something” means “plan to do something.” Based on the original sentence's meaning, it intends to express “I plan to visit my grandparents next weekend”; there is an auxiliary error here. 『going to』 needs to be added before 〈visit〉 to conform to the context and grammatical rules.

error_sentence: I am visit my grandparents at my next weekend
correct_sentence: I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend.
error: at my
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English syntax rules, the structure “next + specific time” can function as a time adverbial at the end of a sentence to indicate future time without needing prepositions or other determiners. Therefore, there is a word redundancy error here. The redundant 〈at my〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English syntax rules and the original sentence's meaning.

error_sentence: I am visit my grandparents at my next weekend
correct_sentence: I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend.
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, the end of an independent sentence needs to be marked with an appropriate punctuation mark to indicate the sentence's conclusion; the original sentence is missing a period at the end, thus there is a punctuation error here. A 『.』 needs to be added after 〈weekend〉 to mark the end of the sentence to conform to English syntax rules.
Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
________
________
________
________

Student essay:
Gao Feng like play foot ball. He has four foot ball, but he never play football. He has two friends, Mike and Dave.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng likes playing football. He has four footballs, but he never plays football. He has two friends, Mike and Dave.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Gao Feng like play foot ball.
correct_sentence: Gao Feng likes playing football.
error: like play foot ball
correction: likes playing football
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈Gao Feng〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈like〉 is in the third-person plural form, so the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 requires a gerund form as its object to maintain grammatical correctness, so 〈play〉 needs to be changed to 『playing』 to ensure grammatical correctness; ③ Space Error: According to writing conventions, there should be no space between the words 〈foot〉 and 〈ball〉, so 〈foot ball〉 is changed to 『football』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: He has four foot ball, but he never play football.
correct_sentence: He has four footballs, but he never plays football.
error: foot ball
correction: footballs
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, the correct spelling of "football" is "football", so the space between 〈foot〉 and 〈ball〉 is removed to conform to writing conventions; ② Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, "football" should be in the plural form 『footballs』 to agree with the numeral 〈four〉, so "football" should be changed to 『footballs』 to comply with English grammar rules.

error_sentence: He has four foot ball, but he never play football.
correct_sentence: He has four footballs, but he never plays football.
error: play
correction: plays
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈play〉 is in the third-person plural form, so the verb 〈play〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『plays』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hello, everybody. My name is Tommy. I'm 12 years old. Last Saturday, I am geted up early. I and my friend played in the park. I like play baskeball, so I am played basketball.

Corrected essay:
Hello, everybody. My name is Tommy. I'm 12 years old. Last Saturday, I got up early. My friend and I played in the park. I like to play basketball, so I played basketball.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Last Saturday, I am geted up early.
correct_sentence: Last Saturday, I got up early.
error: am geted
correction: got
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt, "Last weekend" describes a past event, requiring the simple past tense; 〈am〉 indicates the present tense, inconsistent with the past time adverbial 〈Last Saturday〉, and needs to be changed to the past tense; ② Spelling Error: 〈geted〉 is the incorrect past tense form of the verb 〈get〉; the correct form is 『got』. Therefore, 〈am geted〉 is modified to 『got』 to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: I and my friend played in the park.
correct_sentence: My friend and I played in the park.
error: I and my friend
correction: My friend and I
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Order Error: According to English expression conventions, the personal pronoun 〈I〉 is usually placed after other subjects in a sentence; therefore, 〈I and my friend〉 needs to be adjusted to 『My friend and I』 to conform to standard English usage.

error_sentence: I like play baskeball, so I am played basketball.
correct_sentence: I like to play basketball, so I played basketball.
error: play baskeball
correction: to play basketball
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈like〉 in the original sentence to form 『like to play』 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intended word is "basketball"; thus, 〈baskeball〉 is a misspelling of 『basketball』 and needs to be corrected to 『basketball』 for the sentence to make sense.

error_sentence: I like play baskeball, so I am played basketball.
correct_sentence: I like to play basketball, so I played basketball.
error: am
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt, "Last weekend" describes a past event, requiring the simple past tense; the original sentence incorrectly adds the present tense auxiliary verb 〈am〉; the past tense form 『played』 should be used directly to maintain tense consistency. Therefore, 〈am played〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『played』 to fit the context.
Writing prompt: Writing
Last Friday afternoon, your class participated in an interesting extracurricular activity. The activities included sports, various interest groups, and an English corner. These activities are beneficial for students' overall development. Please write an English narrative describing this interesting extracurricular activity.
Writing hints: out-class activity; be interested in; take part in; development; English corner

Student essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our class held an interesting out-class activity. We we're interested in it. It has P.E, English corner and so on. We took part in it and development.

Corrected essay:
Last Friday afternoon, our class held an interesting out-class activity. We were interested in it. It had P.E., English corner and so on. We took part in it and developed.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: We we're interested in it.
correct_sentence: We were interested in it.
error: We we're
correction: We were
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, this should be the past tense of 'to be', therefore 〈we're〉 is a misspelling of 『were』, and needs to be changed to 『were』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: It has P.E, English corner and so on.
correct_sentence: It had P.E., English corner and so on.
error: has P.E
correction: had P.E.
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt, 'last Friday' describes an event that happened in the past and should use the simple past tense, whereas 〈has〉 in the original sentence is in the simple present tense, so 〈has〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『had』 to fit the context; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the abbreviation for the subject 『P.E.』 needs to retain the period, so the original 〈P.E〉 needs to be changed to 『P.E.』 to conform to writing standards.

error_sentence: We took part in it and development.
correct_sentence: We took part in it and developed.
error: development
correction: developed
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈development〉 is a noun, whereas a verb is needed here to form a parallel structure with 〈took part〉, therefore 〈development〉 in the original sentence needs to be changed to the past tense verb 『developed』 to conform to grammatical rules.
Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3 o'clock. Linda is in the mall. She is seeing a little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.

Corrected essay:
It's 3 o'clock. Linda is in the mall. She sees a little girl buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: She is seeing a little girl is buying some food.
correct_sentence: She sees a little girl buying some food.
error: is seeing
correction: sees
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English expression habits, the sensory verb 〈see〉, when expressing perception, is usually used in the simple present tense. In the original sentence, 〈is seeing〉 is in the present continuous tense, which does not conform to the usage rules of 〈see〉. 〈is seeing〉 should be changed to the simple present tense 『sees』 to accurately express the perceptual state of “seeing”.

error_sentence: She is seeing a little girl is buying some food.
correct_sentence: She sees a little girl buying some food.
error: is
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, when the sensory verb 〈see〉 is followed by an object, if it indicates an ongoing action of the object, the subsequent verb should be in the present participle form. In the original sentence, the structure “a little girl is buying some food” is incorrect, with a redundant 〈is〉. 〈is〉 should be deleted, and 〈is buying〉 should be changed to 『buying』.

error_sentence: Linda's mother is trying the shoes.
correct_sentence: Linda's mother is trying on the shoes.
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English fixed collocation rules, “try on” is a fixed phrase expressing “to try on”. In the original sentence “Linda's mother is trying the shoes”, the preposition “on” is missing, leading to incomplete semantics. “on” should be added after 〈trying〉, changing 〈trying the shoes〉 to 『trying on the shoes』, to clearly express the action of “trying on shoes” and make the sentence conform to English expression habits.
Writing prompt: The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.
Writing hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time

Student essay:
Hi, I am Jack. Tomorrow is Saturday . Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework . I am going to do clean with my mother . And I am going to visit my grandparents . I have a happy Saturday .

Corrected essay:
Hi, I am Jack. Tomorrow is Saturday. On Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework. I am going to clean with my mother. And I am going to visit my grandparents. I am going to have a happy Saturday.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Tomorrow is Saturday . Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework .
correct_sentence: On Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework.
correction: On
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there should be no space between the last word of a sentence and the period. The original phrase 〈Saturday .〉 has an extra space, so it needs to be changed to 『Saturday.』 to conform to writing standards; ② Preposition Error: According to English usage, the preposition 『On』 is used before specific dates. The time adverbial 〈Saturday morning〉 requires the preposition 『On』 before it to form a complete temporal expression.

error_sentence: I am going to do clean with my mother .
correct_sentence: I am going to clean with my mother.
error: do
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the prompt, the phrase 『do cleaning』 should be used. However, the original sentence uses 〈clean〉 directly as a verb. It should be changed to the gerund phrase form to express the cleaning activity more accurately. Therefore, 〈clean〉 needs to be modified to 『do cleaning』 to meet the prompt's requirement. This was not modified according to the prompt, constituting over-correction.

error_sentence: I have a happy Saturday .
correct_sentence: I am going to have a happy Saturday.
correction: am going to
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Based on the context and prompts, the sentence describes planned future activities and should use the future tense. The original sentence uses 〈have〉 in the simple present tense, which is a tense error. Therefore, 〈have〉 needs to be changed to 『am going to have』 to express a planned future action, fitting the context.
Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Based on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:
Writing hints:
On Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon
On Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00

Student essay:
Tom has a plan for next weekend. On Saturday, he is going to do his homeworkat 9:30 in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00. In the afternoon, he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room at 10:00 a.m.At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early. He is going tohave a busy weekend. What about you?

Corrected essay:
Tom has a plan for next weekend. On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 a.m. in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00 a.m. In the afternoon, he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early. He is going to have a busy weekend. What about you?

Error analysis:
error_sentence: On Saturday, he is going to do his homeworkat 9:30 in the morning.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 a.m. in the morning.
error: homeworkat 9:30
correction: homework at 9:30 a.m.
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between words; the original sentence lacks the necessary space in 〈homeworkat〉, so the joined 〈homeworkat〉 is corrected to 『homework at』 to conform to English writing standards; ② Determiner Error: According to English expression conventions, "a.m." or "p.m." is usually added after the time to indicate morning or afternoon; here, 『a.m.』 needs to be added after the time expression 〈9:30〉 to clearly indicate 9:30 in the morning.

error_sentence: He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00.
correct_sentence: He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00 a.m.
error: .
correction: a.m.
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression conventions, "a.m." or "p.m." is usually added after the time to indicate morning or afternoon; here, 『a.m.』 needs to be added after the time expression 〈11:00〉 to clearly indicate 11:00 in the morning.

error_sentence: He is going tohave a busy weekend.
correct_sentence: He is going to have a busy weekend.
error: tohave
correction: to have
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between words; the original sentence lacks the necessary space in 〈tohave〉, so the joined 〈tohave〉 is corrected to 『to have』 to conform to English writing standards.
Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hi, I'm Tommy. On the last Saturday, at 7:00am, I get up early.

Corrected essay:
Hi, I'm Tommy. Last Saturday, at 7:00 am, I got up early.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: On the last Saturday, at 7:00am, I get up early.
correct_sentence: Last Saturday, at 7:00 am, I got up early.
error: On the last
correction: Last
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈On the〉 is redundant when used with 〈last Saturday〉 in time expressions; English directly uses the time adverbial 『Last Saturday』 to mean “last weekend”, so 〈On the last〉 is changed to 『Last』 to conform to English idiomatic usage rules.

error_sentence: On the last Saturday, at 7:00am, I get up early.
correct_sentence: Last Saturday, at 7:00 am, I got up early.
error: 7:00am
correction: 7:00 am
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, the abbreviation 〈am〉 in time expressions needs to be separated from the number by a space, so 〈7:00am〉 is changed to 『7:00 am』 to conform to writing conventions.

error_sentence: On the last Saturday, at 7:00am, I get up early.
correct_sentence: Last Saturday, at 7:00 am, I got up early.
error: get
correction: got
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The time adverbial 〈last Saturday〉 in the original sentence indicates a past time “last Saturday”, so the predicate verb needs to be in the past tense; therefore, 〈get〉 is changed to 『got』 to meet grammatical rules and contextual requirements.
Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are priced at 30 yuan. Shorts are priced at 20 yuan. Shirt are priced at 25 yuan. Big bag are priced at 35 yuan. Small bag are priced at 20 yuan. And many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is on sale, very favorable. Sweaters of various colors are priced at 30 yuan. Shorts are priced at 20 yuan. Shirts are priced at 25 yuan. Big bags are priced at 35 yuan. Small bags are priced at 20 yuan. And there are many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Shirt are priced at 25 yuan.
correct_sentence: Shirts are priced at 25 yuan.
error: Shirt
correction: Shirts
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: The noun 〈Shirt〉 does not agree in number with the plural verb 〈are〉. In a store promotion context, the plural form should be used to indicate product categories, so 〈Shirt〉 is changed to its plural form 『Shirts』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Big bag are priced at 35 yuan.
correct_sentence: Big bags are priced at 35 yuan.
error: bag
correction: bags
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: The noun 〈bag〉 does not agree in number with the plural verb 〈are〉; in the context of store promotions, the plural form is needed to indicate the quantity of goods, so 〈bag〉 is changed to its plural form 『bags』 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: Small bag are priced at 20 yuan.
correct_sentence: Small bags are priced at 20 yuan.
error: bag
correction: bags
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: The noun 〈bag〉 does not agree in number with the plural verb 〈are〉; according to the logic of the product list in the context, 〈bag〉 should be changed to its plural form 『bags』 here to comply with grammatical rules and contextual meaning.

error_sentence: And many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.
correct_sentence: And there are many beautiful shoes and skirts, welcome to buy.
correction: there are
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The sentence lacks a subject and predicate verb, resulting in an incomplete structure; therefore, 『there are』 is added after 〈And〉 to form an existential sentence structure and make the expression clear.
Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate wear a pink and lovely shirt, wear a pair of white shoes. They are beautiful, I like them.

Corrected essay:
My classmate wears a pink and lovely shirt and a pair of white shoes. They are beautiful, and I like them.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My classmate wear a pink and lovely shirt, wear a pair of white shoes.
correct_sentence: My classmate wears a pink and lovely shirt and a pair of white shoes.
error: wear
correction: wears
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject and predicate verb must agree; the subject 〈My classmate〉 is third-person singular, so the predicate verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: My classmate wear a pink and lovely shirt, wear a pair of white shoes.
correct_sentence: My classmate wears a pink and lovely shirt and a pair of white shoes.
error: , wear
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: In the parallel structure, the two noun phrases 〈a pink and lovely shirt〉 and 〈a pair of white shoes〉 both serve as objects of the verb “wear”; they need to be connected by a conjunction, therefore 〈, wear〉 is modified to 『and』 to make the sentence structure conform to the rules for connecting parallel elements in English.

error_sentence: They are beautiful, I like them.
correct_sentence: They are beautiful, and I like them.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: 〈They are beautiful〉 and 〈I like them〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can stand as independent clauses; they need to be connected by the conjunction “and”, therefore 『and』 needs to be added before 〈I〉 to maintain sentence fluency and structural integrity.
Writing prompt: Writing.
Assume you are Annie. You have recently moved to a new place and made many friends. Based on the hints in the picture below, write a short essay introducing your friends.
My friends
My name is Annie. Last month, I came here.________
________
________
________
________

Student essay:
I have many friends. My first friend, she likes reading, so she has lot of books. My second friend, she likes wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses. My last friend, she likes listening music, so she has too many DVDs.

Corrected essay:
I have many friends. My first friend likes reading, so she has a lot of books. My second friend likes to wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses. My last friend likes listening to music, so she has too many DVDs.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My first friend, she likes reading, so she has lot of books.
correct_sentence: My first friend likes reading, so she has a lot of books.
error: , she
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The subject 〈My first friend〉 and the redundant subject 〈she〉 create a redundant structure; therefore, 〈, she〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: My first friend, she likes reading, so she has lot of books.
correct_sentence: My first friend likes reading, so she has a lot of books.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: 『a lot of』 is a fixed phrase meaning 'many, a large amount of'; therefore, 『a』 is added before 〈lot〉 to correctly express the quantity.

error_sentence: My second friend, she likes wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses.
correct_sentence: My second friend likes to wear dresses, so she has a lot of dresses.
error: , she likes
correction: likes to
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: The subject 〈My second friend〉 and the redundant subject 〈she〉 create a redundant structure; therefore, 〈, she〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The verb 〈likes〉 should be followed by a gerund or an infinitive; therefore, 『to』 is added before 〈wear〉 to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: My last friend, she likes listening music, so she has too many DVDs.
correct_sentence: My last friend likes listening to music, so she has too many DVDs.
error: , she
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The subject 〈My last friend〉 and the redundant subject 〈she〉 create a redundant structure; therefore, 〈, she〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules.

error_sentence: My last friend, she likes listening music, so she has too many DVDs.
correct_sentence: My last friend likes listening to music, so she has too many DVDs.
correction: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: The verb 'listen' must be paired with the preposition 『to』 to form a fixed phrase; therefore, 『to』 is added after 〈listening〉 to form the correct expression 『listening to music』.
Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is currently 7 PM. Based on the information provided by Linda below, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda and her family are doing. Writing hints: Linda: help mother do housework; grandparents: watch TV; brother: play computer games; mother: cook; sister: listen to the radio.

Student essay:
At 7:00p.m. Linda and her family are all at home. Linda's mother is cooking and Linda is helping her mother do housework. Her sister is listening to the radio and her brother is playing computer games. What are her grandparents? They are watching TV in the living room. They have a good time.

Corrected essay:
At 7:00 p.m. Linda and her family are all at home. Linda's mother is cooking and Linda is helping her mother do housework. Her sister is listening to the radio and her brother is playing computer games. What are her grandparents doing? They are watching TV in the living room. They are having a good time.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: At 7:00p.m.
correct_sentence: At 7:00 p.m. Linda and her family are all at home.
error: 7:00p.m.
correction: 7:00 p.m.
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is required between the time unit and the abbreviation; the original sentence 〈7:00p.m.〉 lacks the necessary space, so the conjoined 〈7:00p.m.〉 is changed to 『7:00 p.m.』 to conform to English writing conventions.

error_sentence: What are her grandparents?
correct_sentence: What are her grandparents doing?
correction: doing
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English grammar rules, the structure of the present continuous tense is 'be doing'; the original sentence 〈What are her grandparents〉 lacks the main verb, so 『doing』 needs to be added to conform to grammar rules.

error_sentence: They have a good time.
correct_sentence: They are having a good time.
error: have
correction: are having
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the prompt's requirement to use the present continuous tense for description, the verb 〈have〉 in the original sentence is in the simple present tense; therefore, 〈have〉 needs to be changed to the present continuous tense 『are having』 to fit the context.
Writing prompt: Twins Lucy and Lily are celebrating their birthday today, and their parents bought them some gifts. Write a short English essay describing these gifts.
Writing hints: presents; storybooks; dolls; stationery

Student essay:
Today is Lucy and Lily's birthday. Their parents buy some presents for them. some interesting storybooks, some cute dolls and a lot of stationeries. Lucy and Lily really like them. they are very happy.

Corrected essay:
Today is Lucy and Lily's birthday. Their parents buy some presents for them, such as some interesting storybooks, some cute dolls and a lot of stationery. Lucy and Lily really like them. They are very happy.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Their parents buy some presents for them.
correct_sentence: Their parents buy some presents for them, such as some interesting storybooks, some cute dolls and a lot of stationery.
error: .
correction: , such as
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to the context, the original sentence 〈Their parents buy some presents〉 and the following text need to be combined into one sentence, so the period 〈.〉 at the end of the sentence is replaced with a comma 『,』 to introduce specific examples; ② Conjunction Error: According to the context, the meaning here is "such as"; the original sentence lacks this conjunction, so 『such as』 is added as an enumerative conjunction to introduce the list of gifts, to fit the context.

error_sentence: some interesting storybooks, some cute dolls and a lot of stationeries.
correct_sentence: Their parents buy some presents for them, such as some interesting storybooks, some cute dolls and a lot of stationery.
error: stationeries
correction: stationery
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English usage, 『stationery』 is an uncountable noun, referring to writing materials in general; the original sentence 〈stationeries〉 mistakenly uses the plural form, so it needs to be changed to 『stationery』 to conform to semantics and usage.

error_sentence: they are very happy.
correct_sentence: They are very happy.
error: they
correction: They
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈they〉 is at the beginning of the sentence, so 〈they〉 needs to be changed to 『They』 to conform to the convention.
Writing prompt: Assume you are Emily. Below is your family photo. Please introduce your family members based on the picture. Requirement: Write at least 6 sentences.

Student essay:
Hello! I'm Emily. This is my family. My father is English. My mother is Chinese. So my sister and I are both have blonde. It's looks so beautiful. This is my father. He is strong. And this woman is my mother. She is elegant. Who 's that boy? It's me! I'm handsome. And that girl is my sister. She is very pretty. I'm happy. Because I have a good family!

Corrected essay:
Hello! I'm Emily. This is my family. My father is English. My mother is Chinese. So my sister and I both have blonde hair. It looks so beautiful. This is my father. He is strong. And this woman is my mother. She is elegant. Who's that boy? It's me! I'm handsome. And that girl is my sister. She is very pretty. I'm happy because I have a good family!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: So my sister and I are both have blonde.
correct_sentence: So my sister and I both have blonde hair.
error: are
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The verb 〈are〉 appears simultaneously with 〈have〉, creating a redundant verb structure; in English, when using the main verb 〈have〉 to express 'possession', an auxiliary verb is not needed, therefore 〈are〉 is deleted to ensure the sentence structure is correct.

error_sentence: So my sister and I are both have blonde.
correct_sentence: So my sister and I both have blonde hair.
correction: hair
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: The adjective 〈blonde〉 needs to modify a specific noun; the original sentence lacks the modified noun 『hair』 to clearly describe the hair color, therefore 『hair』 is added after 〈blonde〉 to make the sentence semantically complete and conform to English expression habits.

error_sentence: It's looks so beautiful.
correct_sentence: It looks so beautiful.
error: 's
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: The subject 〈It〉 is singular and requires the singular verb 〈looks〉; therefore, 〈's〉 is deleted to retain the single verb 〈looks〉, making the sentence structure correct and clear.

error_sentence: I'm happy. Because I have a good family!
correct_sentence: I'm happy because I have a good family!
error: . Because
correction: because
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The subordinate clause introduced by the conjunction 〈Because〉 cannot stand as an independent sentence; the original sentence uses a period, causing a sentence fragment error, therefore 〈. Because〉 is changed to 『because』 to connect the main and subordinate clauses, forming a complex sentence structure.
Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
A little girl is buying some food. There a young lady looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying the shoes. Linda's father is stayig on the sofa and waiting for Linda' mother.

Corrected essay:
A little girl is buying some food. There is a young lady looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: There a young lady looking at a dress.
correct_sentence: There is a young lady looking at a dress.
correction: is
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to English grammar rules, a sentence requires a predicate; the original sentence 〈There a young lady〉 lacks a verb, so 『is』 needs to be added to connect the subject and noun, forming the complete 『There is a young lady』 to comply with English grammar rules.

error_sentence: Linda's mother is trying the shoes.
correct_sentence: Linda's mother is trying on the shoes.
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression conventions, the verb 〈trying〉 in the original sentence could be misunderstood as “attempting”, which contradicts the intended meaning; the phrasal verb “try on” means “to put on clothing to see if it fits”, which is a fixed phrase. Missing the preposition 『on』 makes the meaning incomplete, so 『on』 needs to be added after 〈trying〉 to conform to English expression habits and the prompt's requirements.

error_sentence: Linda's father is stayig on the sofa and waiting for Linda' mother.
correct_sentence: Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.
error: stayig
correction: staying
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: Based on the sentence meaning and the hints, the intention here is to express the present continuous tense, so 〈stayig〉 is a misspelling of 『staying』; it needs to be corrected to 『staying』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: Linda's father is stayig on the sofa and waiting for Linda' mother.
correct_sentence: Linda's father is staying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.
error: '
correction: 's
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt's requirements, the intended meaning here is “Linda's mother”; the phrase 〈Linda' mother〉 in the original sentence needs to be in the possessive form to indicate ownership, so 〈Linda' mother〉 is corrected to 『 Linda's mother』 to fit the context.
Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look, the boy is very handsome, he is my friend. He wears a pure whire shirt and a pair of shoes, they is beautiful. He likes blue, but I don't like.

Corrected essay:
Look, the boy is very handsome. He is my friend. He wears a pure white shirt and a pair of shoes, and they are beautiful. He likes blue, but I don't like it.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Look, the boy is very handsome, he is my friend.
correct_sentence: Look, the boy is very handsome. He is my friend.
error: , he
correction: . He
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: 〈Look, the boy is very handsome〉 and 〈he is my friend〉 contain independent predicate structures and can be independent sentences, so 〈, he〉 is changed to 『. He』.

error_sentence: He wears a pure whire shirt and a pair of shoes, they is beautiful.
correct_sentence: He wears a pure white shirt and a pair of shoes, and they are beautiful.
error: whire
correction: white
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express “white” here, so 〈whire〉 is a misspelling of 『white』; 〈whire〉 needs to be changed to 『white』 to make the sentence coherent.

error_sentence: He wears a pure whire shirt and a pair of shoes, they is beautiful.
correct_sentence: He wears a pure white shirt and a pair of shoes, and they are beautiful.
error: they is
correction: and they are
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: 〈He wears a pure whire shirt and a pair of shoes〉 and 〈they is beautiful〉 contain independent subject-predicate structures and can be independent sentences, so 『and』 needs to be added before 〈they〉; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈they〉 is plural, so the verb 〈is〉 needs to be changed to 『are』 to conform to subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: He likes blue, but I don't like.
correct_sentence: He likes blue, but I don't like it.
correction: it
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: The sentence 〈I don't like〉 lacks an object to clearly express what is disliked; the pronoun 『it』 needs to be added to refer to 〈blue〉 mentioned earlier, so 『it』 is added after 〈like〉 to complete the sentence meaning.
Writing prompt: Using the information provided in Chinese and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Mr. Cool's Clothes Store is having a big sale with great discounts. Sweaters in various colors are only 30 yuan, shorts are only 20 yuan, and shirts are only 25 yuan. Large bags sell for 35 yuan, and small bags for 20 yuan. There are also many beautiful shoes and skirts available. Welcome to shop.

Student essay:
Mr. Cool Clothes Store's clothes is very check now. All colour of sweaters are only 30 yuan. The shorts are only 20 yuan and the shirts are only 25 yuan. The big handbag are 35 yuan, but the small handbag are only 20 yuan. Welcome to go shopping here.

Corrected essay:
Mr. Cool Clothes Store's clothes are very cheap now. All colors of sweaters are only 30 yuan. The shorts are only 20 yuan and the shirts are only 25 yuan. The big handbags are 35 yuan, but the small handbags are only 20 yuan. Welcome to go shopping here.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Mr. Cool Clothes Store's clothes is very check now.
correct_sentence: Mr. Cool Clothes Store's clothes are very cheap now.
error: is very check
correction: are very cheap
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈clothes〉 is plural and requires the plural verb 『are』, so 〈is〉 is changed to 『are』 to conform to grammatical rules; ② Adjective Error: 〈check〉 means to examine; the adjective 『cheap』 indicating price should be used here, so 〈check〉 is changed to 『cheap』 to convey the correct meaning.

error_sentence: All colour of sweaters are only 30 yuan.
correct_sentence: All colors of sweaters are only 30 yuan.
error: colour
correction: colors
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: Based on 〈All〉, multiple colors are indicated here, requiring the noun to be in plural form, so the singular 〈colour〉 is changed to the plural 『colors』 to meet semantic requirements.

error_sentence: The big handbag are 35 yuan, but the small handbag are only 20 yuan.
correct_sentence: The big handbags are 35 yuan, but the small handbags are only 20 yuan.
error: handbag
correction: handbags
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: The verb 〈are〉 indicates that the subject needs to be plural, so the singular noun 〈handbag〉 is changed to 『handbags』 to conform to grammatical rules.

error_sentence: The big handbag are 35 yuan, but the small handbag are only 20 yuan.
correct_sentence: The big handbags are 35 yuan, but the small handbags are only 20 yuan.
error: handbag
correction: handbags
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: The verb 〈are〉 indicates that the subject needs to be plural, so the singular noun 〈handbag〉 is changed to 『handbags』 to conform to grammatical rules.
Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
Look! This is Amy. She wear pure white is shirt. She wear white is socks. She wear shoes. Amy is very beautiful at today.

Corrected essay:
Look! This is Amy. She wears a pure white shirt. She wears white socks. She wears shoes. Amy is very beautiful today.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: She wear pure white is shirt.
correct_sentence: She wears a pure white shirt.
error: wear
correction: wears a
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 to conform to subject-verb agreement rules; ② Determiner Error: The singular countable noun 〈shirt〉 requires an article 『a』 before it to conform to English expression habits, so 『a』 is added after 『wears』.

error_sentence: She wear pure white is shirt.
correct_sentence: She wears a pure white shirt.
error: is
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈is〉 is meaningless here and interferes with the sentence structure; the correct structure is 『a pure white shirt』, so 〈is〉 is deleted to make the sentence clear and fluent.

error_sentence: She wear white is socks.
correct_sentence: She wears white socks.
error: wear white is
correction: wears white
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 to conform to subject-verb agreement rules; ② Word Redundancy Error: 〈is〉 is meaningless here and interferes with the sentence structure; the correct structure is 『white socks』, so 〈is〉 is deleted to make the sentence clear and fluent.

error_sentence: She wear shoes.
correct_sentence: She wears shoes.
error: wear
correction: wears
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 to conform to subject-verb agreement rules.

error_sentence: Amy is very beautiful at today.
correct_sentence: Amy is very beautiful today.
error: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the time adverbial 〈today〉 does not require a preposition before it, so the redundant 〈at〉 is deleted to conform to idiomatic expression.