Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
My name is Tina. I 'm busy on Monday. At 6 o'clock I get up and have breakfast. At 7 o' clock I go to school. I begin read books and drow pictrues at class. At 12 o' clock I have lunch at school. I play tennis in the evening. I go home and have dinner at night. Finally I play with my toy and go to sleep.

Corrected essay:
My name is Tina. I'm busy on Monday. At 6 o'clock I get up and have breakfast. At 7 o'clock I go to school. I begin to read books and draw pictures at class. At 12 o'clock I have lunch at school. I play tennis in the evening. I go home and have dinner at night. Finally, I play with my toys and go to sleep.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I 'm busy on Monday.
correct_sentence: I'm busy on Monday.
error: 'm
correction: 'm
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English contraction rules, there should be no space between the apostrophe and the following letter 〈m〉 in 〈I 'm〉. The structure needs to be compact, so the extra space is removed, correcting the form 〈I 'm〉 to the standard contraction 『I'm』 to comply with English grammatical norms.

error_sentence: At 7 o' clock I go to school.
correct_sentence: At 7 o'clock I go to school.
error: o' clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English time expression norms, the space between the apostrophe and the word 〈clock〉 in 〈o' clock〉 is redundant. This fixed expression should be written as a continuous whole, so the extra space is removed, correcting the form 〈o' clock〉 to the standard time expression 『o'clock』 to comply with English idiomatic rules.

error_sentence: I begin read books and drow pictrues at class.
correct_sentence: I begin to read books and draw pictures at class.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English infinitive usage rules, when the verb 〈begin〉 is used as a transitive verb, the following action 〈read〉 needs to be expressed using an infinitive structure. The original sentence lacks the necessary infinitive marker 『to』, resulting in a grammatically incorrect structure. Therefore, the infinitive marker 『to』 is added, correcting the incorrect combination 〈begin read〉 to the grammatically correct infinitive structure 『begin to read』.

error_sentence: I begin read books and drow pictrues at class.
correct_sentence: I begin to read books and draw pictures at class.
error: drow pictrues
correction: draw pictures
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English verb spelling rules, 〈drow〉 does not conform to the correct spelling of the verb 'to draw'; the incorrect spelling 〈drow〉 should be corrected to the base form 『draw』 to comply with English vocabulary norms; ② Spelling Error: According to English noun pluralization rules, 〈pictrues〉 has an incorrect syllable order; the correct plural form should be 『pictures』, meaning 'drawings', which conforms to English noun plural inflection rules after correction.

error_sentence: At 12 o' clock I have lunch at school.
correct_sentence: At 12 o'clock I have lunch at school.
error: o' clock
correction: o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English time expression norms, the space between the apostrophe and the word 〈clock〉 in 〈o' clock〉 is redundant. This fixed expression should be written as a continuous whole, so the extra space is removed, correcting the form 〈o' clock〉 to the standard time expression 『o'clock』 to comply with English idiomatic rules.

error_sentence: Finally I play with my toy and go to sleep.
correct_sentence: Finally, I play with my toys and go to sleep.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing norms, when the sentence-initial adverb 〈Finally〉 acts as a transition word introducing the sentence, it must be separated from the main clause by a comma. This structure requires clear demarcation of the adverbial phrase boundary, so a comma 『,』 is added after 〈Finally〉, correcting the structure 〈Finally we...〉 to the grammatically compliant 『Finally, we...』 to reflect correct punctuation usage rules.

error_sentence: Finally I play with my toy and go to sleep.
correct_sentence: Finally, I play with my toys and go to sleep.
error: toy
correction: toys
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English countable noun usage rules, in the fixed phrase 〈play with my toy〉, the noun 〈toy〉 used alone as a countable noun presents a number inconsistency issue. Considering the common usage context of this phrase (usually referring to the general act of playing with multiple toys), the singular form 〈toy〉 should be changed to the plural form 『toys』, ultimately correcting it to 『play with my toys』 to ensure accurate meaning.