Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hello, my name is Tina. I get up at seven in the morning. Wash your face and brush your teeth at seven ten. I have breakfast at seven thirty. After breakfast, I began to read. It's twelve o'clock now, and I'm going to have lunch. After lunch, I began to draw. It's three o'clock, and I want to play badminton. After playing badminton, I began to eat dinner. Oh, it's already 8: 30. I'm going to bed. Bye！

Corrected essay:
Hello, my name is Tina. I get up at seven in the morning. I wash my face and brush my teeth at seven ten. I have breakfast at seven thirty. After breakfast, I begin to read. It's twelve o'clock now, and I'm going to have lunch. After lunch, I begin to draw. It's three o'clock, and I want to play badminton. After playing badminton, I begin to eat dinner. Oh, it's already 8:30 p.m. I'm going to bed. Bye!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Wash your face and brush your teeth at seven ten.
correct_sentence: I wash my face and brush my teeth at seven ten.
error: Wash your
correction: I wash my
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence lacks a subject; 『I』 needs to be added to form a complete subject-verb structure; ② Pronoun Error: The pronoun 〈your〉 associated with the subsequent action does not match the sentence subject 〈I〉; it needs to be changed to 『my』 to align with the subject's person.

error_sentence: Wash your face and brush your teeth at seven ten.
correct_sentence: I wash my face and brush my teeth at seven ten.
error: your
correction: my
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: The pronoun 〈your〉 associated with the subsequent action does not match the sentence subject 〈I〉; 〈your〉 needs to be changed to 『my』 to align with the subject's person.

error_sentence: After breakfast, I began to read.
correct_sentence: After breakfast, I begin to read.
error: began
correction: begin
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The entire text uses the simple present tense to describe daily routines, but 〈began〉 is in the past tense; it needs to be changed to 『begin』 to maintain tense consistency.

error_sentence: After lunch, I began to draw.
correct_sentence: After lunch, I begin to draw.
error: began
correction: begin
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The entire text uses the simple present tense to describe daily routines, but 〈began〉 is in the past tense; it needs to be changed to 『begin』 to maintain tense consistency.

error_sentence: After playing badminton, I began to eat dinner.
correct_sentence: After playing badminton, I begin to eat dinner.
error: began
correction: begin
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The entire text uses the simple present tense to describe daily routines, but 〈began〉 is in the past tense; it needs to be changed to 『begin』 to maintain tense consistency.

error_sentence: Oh, it's already 8: 30.
correct_sentence: Oh, it's already 8:30 p.m.
error: 8: 30.
correction: 8:30 p.m.
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Space Error: In English time expressions, there should be no space after the colon, so 〈8: 30〉 needs to be changed to 『8:30』; ② Determiner Error: According to English expression norms, the time expression 〈8:30〉 lacks the necessary time qualifier “p.m.” to specify the time period; therefore, 『p.m.』 is added to make the expression more precise.

error_sentence: Bye！
correct_sentence: Bye!
error: ！
correction: !
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: The Chinese exclamation mark 〈！〉 does not conform to English punctuation standards; it needs to be changed to the English exclamation mark 『!』.