Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hello, everyone. My name is Tommy. I'll tell you what I did last weekend. On Saturday, I got up at 7:00 and it was early. After breakfast, I played with my friends in the park. I was very happy. An hour later, we walked to the basketball playground and played basketball. On Sunday, I did my homework in the morning. And I cleaned the room with my parents after doing homework. In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to realxed myself. This is my life of the last weekend.

Corrected essay:
Hello, everyone. My name is Tommy. I'll tell you what I did last weekend. On Saturday, I got up at 7:00 and it was early. After breakfast, I played with my friends in the park. I was very happy. An hour later, we walked to the basketball court and played basketball. On Sunday, I did my homework in the morning. And I cleaned the room with my parents after doing homework. In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to relax. This is my life of last weekend.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: An hour later, we walked to the basketball playground and played basketball.
correct_sentence: An hour later, we walked to the basketball court and played basketball.
error: playground
correction: court
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to conventional English usage, the fixed expression for 'basketball court' is 'basketball court'. The original sentence uses 〈basketball playground〉, where 〈playground〉 usually refers to a children's playground or a schoolyard, not a dedicated basketball area. This noun choice is inappropriate, constituting a noun error. It is necessary to change 〈playground〉 to 『court』 to align with English conventions and accurately convey the meaning of 'basketball court'.

error_sentence: In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to realxed myself.
correct_sentence: In the evening, I was tired and I watched TV to relax.
error: realxed myself
correction: relax
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the infinitive structure 'to + base form of the verb' is used to express purpose. In the original sentence, 〈realxed〉 following 'to' is not the base form of the verb, violating grammatical rules; this is a nonfinite verb form error. 〈realxed〉 needs to be changed to the base form 『relax』; ② Spelling Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express 'relax'. 〈realxed〉 is a misspelling, so it is corrected to 『relax』; ③ Word Redundancy Error: In English expression, 『relax』 itself clearly indicates the subject of the action, meaning the actor and receiver are the same. In the original sentence, 〈myself〉 is redundant here, causing word redundancy. 〈myself〉 should be deleted to make the sentence concise.

error_sentence: This is my life of the last weekend.
correct_sentence: This is my life of last weekend.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈last weekend〉 is used as a time adverbial, no definite article is needed. In the original phrase 〈the last weekend〉, 〈the〉 is a redundant determiner; this is a determiner error. 〈the〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English expression habits.