Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It's 3:00 in the afternoon. the market is very noisy. Alittle girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at the dress. Linda's mother is try the shoes. Linda's father is lying on the sofa and waiting fir mother.

Corrected essay:
It's 3:00 in the afternoon. The market is very noisy. A little girl is buying some food. A young lady is looking at a dress. Linda's mother is trying on the shoes. Linda's father is lying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: the market is very noisy.
correct_sentence: The market is very noisy.
error: the
correction: The
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the sentence-initial word 〈the〉 needs to be capitalized; therefore, it is changed to 『The』 to comply with the capitalization rule for sentence beginnings.

error_sentence: Alittle girl is buying some food.
correct_sentence: A little girl is buying some food.
error: Alittle
correction: A little
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈Alittle〉 consists of two separate words, 〈A〉 and 〈little〉; a space needs to be added between the article 〈A〉 and the adjective 〈little〉, changing it to 『A little』 to conform to word writing standards.

error_sentence: A young lady is looking at the dress.
correct_sentence: A young lady is looking at a dress.
error: the
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, it describes a young lady looking at a dress in general, not a specific dress; therefore, the definite article 〈the〉 needs to be changed to the indefinite article 『a』, modifying 〈the dress〉 to 『a dress』.

error_sentence: Linda's mother is try the shoes.
correct_sentence: Linda's mother is trying on the shoes.
error: try
correction: trying on
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: Based on the sentence's meaning, it is in the present continuous tense, so the verb 〈try〉 following the linking verb needs to be in the present participle form 『trying』 to comply with the present continuous tense grammar rule; ② Preposition Error: According to English fixed expressions and the prompt requirements, the verb 〈try〉 needs to be paired with the preposition 『on』 to form the complete phrasal verb 『trying on』, meaning to try clothes on; therefore, 〈try〉 is changed to 『trying on』.

error_sentence: Linda's father is lying on the sofa and waiting fir mother.
correct_sentence: Linda's father is lying on the sofa and waiting for Linda's mother.
error: fir
correction: for Linda's
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence's meaning, it intends to express the object of the action, and 'wait' requires a preposition when followed by an object; thus, 〈fir〉 is a misspelling of 『for』 and needs to be corrected to 『for』 for the sentence to make sense; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules, since 〈mother〉 in the sentence refers to Linda's mother, to ensure clarity, 『Linda's』 needs to be added before the noun 〈mother〉 to form the possessive case.