Writing prompt: Assume the table below shows Tom's daily schedule. Based on the content of the table, write a short English essay describing Tom's daily activities. Write about 50-60 words. You may add some details using your imagination.

Student essay:
Tom get up at 6:30and eat breakfast at 7:10. He go to school at 7:40. He have classes at 8:00. He have lunch at 12:00. he have classes at 2:00. he eat dinner at5:50. he go to bed at9:30

Corrected essay:
Tom gets up at 6:30 a.m. and eats breakfast at 7:10 a.m. He goes to school at 7:40 a.m. He has classes at 8:00 a.m. He has lunch at 12:00. He has classes at 2:00 p.m. He eats dinner at 5:50 p.m. He goes to bed at 9:30 p.m.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Tom get up at 6:30and eat breakfast at 7:10.
correct_sentence: Tom gets up at 6:30 a.m. and eats breakfast at 7:10 a.m.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Tom〉 is third-person singular, so the verb needs to be in the singular form. Therefore, 〈get〉 is changed to 『gets』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.

error_sentence: Tom get up at 6:30and eat breakfast at 7:10.
correct_sentence: Tom gets up at 6:30 a.m. and eats breakfast at 7:10 a.m.
error: 6:30and eat
correction: 6:30 a.m. and eats
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing rules, 〈6:30and〉 consists of two words and requires a space in between; ② Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『a.m.』 should be added after '6:30' to indicate 6:30 in the morning; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈Tom〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈eat〉 should be changed to 『eats』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: Tom get up at 6:30and eat breakfast at 7:10. He go to school at 7:40.
correct_sentence: Tom gets up at 6:30 a.m. and eats breakfast at 7:10 a.m. He goes to school at 7:40 a.m.
error: . He go
correction: a.m. He goes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『a.m.』 should be added after '7:10' to indicate 7:10 in the morning; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈go〉 should be changed to 『goes』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: He go to school at 7:40. He have classes at 8:00.
correct_sentence: He goes to school at 7:40 a.m. He has classes at 8:00 a.m.
error: . He have
correction: a.m. He has
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『a.m.』 should be added after '7:40' to indicate 7:40 in the morning; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈have〉 should be changed to 『has』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: He have classes at 8:00. He have lunch at 12:00.
correct_sentence: He has classes at 8:00 a.m. He has lunch at 12:00.
error: . He have
correction: a.m. He has
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『a.m.』 should be added after '8:00' to indicate 8:00 in the morning; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈have〉 should be changed to 『has』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: he have classes at 2:00.
correct_sentence: He has classes at 2:00 p.m.
error: he have
correction: He has
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence should be capitalized, so the initial 〈he〉 should be changed to 『He』; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈have〉 should be changed to 『has』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: he have classes at 2:00. he eat dinner at5:50. he go to bed at9:30
correct_sentence: He has classes at 2:00 p.m. He eats dinner at 5:50 p.m. He goes to bed at 9:30 p.m.
error: . he eat dinner at5:50. he go
correction: p.m. He eats dinner at 5:50 p.m. He goes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『p.m.』 should be added after '2:00' to indicate 2:00 in the afternoon; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence should be capitalized, so the initial 〈he〉 should be changed to 『He』; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈eat〉 should be changed to 『eats』 to agree with the subject; ④ Space Error: The time expression 〈at5:50〉 consists of two words and requires a space in between, written as 『at 5:50』; ⑤ Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『p.m.』 should be added after '5:50' to indicate 5:50 in the afternoon; ⑥ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence should be capitalized, so the initial 〈he〉 should be changed to 『He』; ⑦ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈go〉 should be changed to 『goes』 to agree with the subject.

error_sentence: he go to bed at9:30
correct_sentence: He goes to bed at 9:30 p.m.
error: at9:30
correction: at 9:30 p.m.
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing rules, 〈at9:30〉 consists of two words and requires a space in between, i.e., written as 『at 9:30』; ② Determiner Error: English time expressions require 'a.m.' or 'p.m.' after the time as a determiner to specify morning or afternoon; here, according to the context, 『p.m.』 should be added after '9:30' to indicate 9:30 in the evening.