Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Assume you are Tommy; please describe your life last weekend based on the picture and the hints.

Student essay:
Hi, my name is Tommy. I have agood list of week. On Saturday I get up early becasue I went to play in the park with my bother. At afternoon I with my friends played basketball. On Sunady morning I did my homework and cleaned my room, OAt afternoon I watch TV the TV show was funny, I had a good week.

Corrected essay:
Hi, my name is Tommy. I had a good time last weekend. On Saturday I got up early because I went to play in the park with my brother. In the afternoon I played basketball with my friends. On Sunday morning I did my homework and cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I watched TV and the TV show was funny. I had a good weekend.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I have agood list of week.
correct_sentence: I had a good time last weekend.
error: have agood list of week
correction: had a good time last weekend
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the original text, 〈last week〉 indicates past tense, so 〈have〉 should be changed to 『had』 to match the time adverbial for last weekend; ② Space Error: In English, a space is needed between two words for separation, so a space should be added between 〈a〉 and 〈good〉 to comply with grammatical standards; ③ Noun Error: 〈agood list of week〉 has a semantic logic error; it needs to be changed to 『a good time last weekend』 to accurately express the sentence's meaning.

error_sentence: On Saturday I get up early becasue I went to play in the park with my bother.
correct_sentence: On Saturday I got up early because I went to play in the park with my brother.
error: get
correction: got
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the original text, this describes an action last Saturday morning, so 〈get〉 should use the past tense 『got』 to maintain tense consistency throughout the text.

error_sentence: On Saturday I get up early becasue I went to play in the park with my bother.
correct_sentence: On Saturday I got up early because I went to play in the park with my brother.
error: becasue
correction: because
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The conjunction expressing causality in English is correctly spelled as 『because』, so 〈becasue〉 is changed to 『because』.

error_sentence: On Saturday I get up early becasue I went to play in the park with my bother. At afternoon I with my friends played basketball.
correct_sentence: On Saturday I got up early because I went to play in the park with my brother. In the afternoon I played basketball with my friends.
error: bother. At
correction: brother. In the
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: Based on the context, 〈bother〉 should be changed to 『brother』 for correct spelling; ② Preposition Error: In English, the preposition 『In』 should be used to indicate 'in the afternoon', so 〈At〉 should be changed to 『In』 to correctly express the time period; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 'the' needs to be added before the time noun 'afternoon'. 『In the afternoon』 is a fixed time expression.

error_sentence: At afternoon I with my friends played basketball.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon I played basketball with my friends.
correction: played basketball
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Order Error: According to the original text, 〈I with my friends played basketball〉 has a word order error; the action should come first, followed by the adverbial phrase, so the predicate and object 〈 played basketball〉 need to be moved forward to conform to English expression habits.

error_sentence: At afternoon I with my friends played basketball.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon I played basketball with my friends.
error: played basketball
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Order Error: According to the original text, 〈I with my friends played basketball〉 has a word order error; the action should come first, followed by the adverbial phrase, so the predicate and object 〈 played basketball〉 need to be moved forward to conform to English expression habits, and the 〈 played basketball〉 at the end of the sentence should be removed.

error_sentence: On Sunady morning I did my homework and cleaned my room, OAt afternoon I watch TV the TV show was funny, I had a good week.
correct_sentence: On Sunday morning I did my homework and cleaned my room.
error: Sunady
correction: Sunday
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The correct spelling for 'Sunday' in English is 『Sunday』, so 〈Sunady〉 in the original sentence needs to be changed to 『Sunday』 to comply with correct spelling rules.

error_sentence: On Sunady morning I did my homework and cleaned my room, OAt afternoon I watch TV the TV show was funny, I had a good week.
correct_sentence: On Sunday morning I did my homework and cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I watched TV and the TV show was funny.
error: , OAt afternoon I watch TV
correction: . In the afternoon, I watched TV and
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: The original sentence 〈I did my homework and cleaned my room〉 and the following 'OAt afternoon I watch TV' are independent clauses with their own predicate structures; they cannot be joined by a comma and need to be separated by a period; ② Preposition Error: In English, the preposition 『In』 should be used to indicate 'in the afternoon', so 〈OAt〉 should be changed to 『In』 to correctly express the time period; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 'the' needs to be added before the time noun 'afternoon'. 『In the afternoon』 is a fixed time expression; ④ Punctuation Error: As a time adverbial at the beginning of the sentence, 〈 In the afternoon〉 needs to be followed by a comma to separate it from the main clause, so a comma should be added after it; ⑤ Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, this sentence should use the past tense, so 〈watch〉 should be changed to the past tense 『watched』 to comply with grammatical standards; ⑥ Conjunction Error: 『and』 needs to be added between 〈I watched TV 〉 and 〈the TV show was funny〉 to connect the two independent clauses.

error_sentence: On Sunady morning I did my homework and cleaned my room, OAt afternoon I watch TV the TV show was funny, I had a good week.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, I watched TV and the TV show was funny.
error: ,
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The two independent clauses 〈I watched TV〉 and 〈the TV show was funny〉 each contain independent predicate structures and need to be separated by a period, so the comma 〈,〉 needs to be changed to a period 『.』.

error_sentence: On Sunady morning I did my homework and cleaned my room, OAt afternoon I watch TV the TV show was funny, I had a good week.
correct_sentence: I had a good weekend.
error: week
correction: weekend
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the writing prompt, this describes 'weekend' life, so the concluding sentence 〈 I had a good week.〉 should be changed to 『I had a good weekend.』 to meet the writing requirements.