Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
Every morning, Sarah gets up at 7:40. At 8:30 to 9:45, she reads English texts. On the day time, she does her homework. In the afternoon, she takes exerccise and cleans house, then she cooks dinner. After supper, she watches TV and watches movies. What a busy holiday!

Corrected essay:
Every morning, Sarah gets up at 7:40. From 8:30 to 9:45, she reads English texts. During the daytime, she does her homework. In the afternoon, she takes exercise and cleans the house, and then she cooks dinner. After supper, she watches TV and watches movies. What a busy holiday!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: At 8:30 to 9:45, she reads English texts.
correct_sentence: From 8:30 to 9:45, she reads English texts.
error: At
correction: From
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: To express a time range, English uses the structure 『From...to...』 rather than 〈At...to...〉; therefore, there is a preposition error here, and the preposition 〈At〉 needs to be changed to 『From』 to correctly express the start of the time period.

error_sentence: On the day time, she does her homework.
correct_sentence: During the daytime, she does her homework.
error: On the day time
correction: During the daytime
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Preposition Error: The preposition 〈On〉 is typically used for specific dates or days, while the sentence describes a period of time 〈day time〉, which has duration. 『During』 should be used to indicate 'a continuous period of time', so 〈On〉 should be changed to 『During』; ② Noun Error: According to the meaning, the intention is to express 'during the day'. English uses the uncountable compound noun 『daytime』 to mean 'daytime, during the day'. Therefore, 〈day time〉 should be combined into the compound noun 『daytime』 to conform to English word spelling conventions.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exerccise and cleans house, then she cooks dinner.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exercise and cleans the house, and then she cooks dinner.
error: exerccise
correction: exercise
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning, the intention is to express 'exercise'. When 'exercise' means 'physical activity', it is an uncountable noun, correctly spelled as 『exercise』. Therefore, there is a spelling error here; the repeated letter c needs to be deleted to conform to word spelling conventions.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exerccise and cleans house, then she cooks dinner.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exercise and cleans the house, and then she cooks dinner.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: Here, 'cleans house' implies a specific house, so the countable noun 〈house〉 should be in its singular form and preceded by the definite article 『the』 for specification. Therefore, a determiner is missing here; 〈cleans house〉 should be changed to 『cleans the house』 to comply with English grammar rules.

error_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exerccise and cleans house, then she cooks dinner.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon, she takes exercise and cleans the house, and then she cooks dinner.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: The two actions 〈cleans the house〉 and 〈she cooks dinner〉 are in two separate clauses. A conjunction 『and』 is needed between the two clauses to maintain sentence coherence. Therefore, a conjunction is missing here; 『and』 should be added before 〈then〉 to comply with English syntactic rules.