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NEBOSH Diploma in Regulatory
Occupational Health and Safety
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Student number: | 00123456 |  | Assignment type | Safety Technology
[NAME]'s name: | [NAME] |  | Date marked: | 2023-10-04 00:00:00
Date submitted: | 2023-09-04 00:00:00 |  | Pass* |  | Mark (%)
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Part 1: Aims and objectives, description of organisation, reasons for selecting incident and planning and preparation |  |  |  | 10
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Aims and objectives:   [NAME] ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. [NAME] porttitor [NAME]. Fusce posuere, magna sed pulvinar ultricies, purus [NAME] libero, sit amet commodo magna eros quis urna. Nunc [NAME]. |  |  |  |  | 6
Description of organisation:  [NAME] ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. [NAME] porttitor [NAME]. Fusce posuere, magna sed pulvinar ultricies, purus [NAME] libero, sit amet commodo magna eros quis urna. Nunc [NAME]. |  |  |  |  | 4
Reasons for selecting incident:  [NAME] ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. [NAME] porttitor [NAME]. Fusce posuere, magna sed pulvinar ultricies, purus [NAME] libero, sit amet commodo magna eros quis urna. Nunc [NAME]. |  |  |  |  | 5
Planning and preparation:  [NAME] ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. [NAME] porttitor [NAME]. Fusce posuere, magna sed pulvinar ultricies, purus [NAME] libero, sit amet commodo magna eros quis urna. Nunc [NAME]. |  |  |  |  | 9
Part 2: Incident Description |  |  |  | 10
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Incident description: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmddddddddddddddddiiiiiiiiiiiiireoooooooooooooooogggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwddddddddddddddddpppppppppppppppereeeeeeeeeeeee |  |  |  |  | 7
Safety hazards: |  |  |  |  | 5
Consequences/potential consequences: |  |  |  |  | 6
Part 3a: Causes |  |  |  | 20
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Immediate: |  |  |  |  | 13
Underlying: |  |  |  |  | 14
Root causes: |  |  |  |  | 16
Part 3b: Analysis of Control Measures |  |  |  | 20
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Existing control measures: |  |  |  |  | 11
Critical comparison with appropriate standards: |  |  |  |  | 12
Part 4: Organisational Action |  |  |  | 25
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Relate weaknesses to safety management: |  |  |  |  | 15
Management action identified and explained: |  |  |  |  | 17
Part 5: Inspector Action |  |  |  | 15 | 9
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