Spreadsheet: 77830d1278330941-trying-to-select-a-random-string-from-a-range-trial-comment-bank-10sc4-july-2010
Sheet: names with comments

name | Participation | Motivation | Organisation | Concentration | Understanding | Overall | Target for improvement | Mark from B1a | Grade from B1a | Mark from B1b | Grade from B1b | Current grade from 4 modules | Target grade | Aspirational grade
[NAME] | You need to involve yourself far more fully with lessons to make progress over the coming months. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | In terms of concentration, this is a real issue You have to rule out all distractions and keep your attention focused on the job. | Remembering information in Science is hard and this requires you to actually put in some effort. That means not just slavishly copying from the board; you have to use the revision guide and make an effort yourself. | Clearly, you have got to put in far more effort than you are doing at present. This exam is hard and it will get the better of you unless you take direct action to do the required learning. | You do need to concentrate more in lessons to ensure you reach your target grade. | 22 | D | 0 | u | E | D | C
[NAME] | You have a tendency to hang back, not involve yourself in discussions and I feel this is starting to work against you after three terms of Science. | Your enthusiasm for Science is reserved but your keen motivation and interest have not gone unnoticed. | Without doubt, you would see an improvement in your learning if you spent more effort with your organisation - sadly, it doesn't come naturally to all of us and so you need a concerted effort to stay organised. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | You've got to start putting in far more work than the mere 60 mins of a lesson. The module test require you to actually do some revision at home. | Overall, you haven't quite yet appreciated the step up in academic demand that GCSE requires. You have got to put in the work in your own time to achieve your minimum target grade. | You are working well in class but in quite a passive manner - you need to actively search through and work at the material you have to learn rather than me doing everything for you. | 23 | D | 23 | D | D | C | B
Eliza | You are a quieter member of the class who could benefit by becoming more involved in answering questions and taking part more in class discussions but it doesn't seem to be hindering your progress. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | You are quite well organised, making much of the learning easier for you. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | If you have trouble understanding some of the concepts, let me know. You have to use all of the resources we provide as well as questioning me until a topic is crystal clear. | Overall, you haven't quite yet appreciated the step up in academic demand that GCSE requires. You have got to put in the work in your own time to achieve your minimum target grade. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 16 | E | 16 | E | E | C | C
Jemma | You are a quieter member of the class but seemingly comfortable with this position. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | You have a good understanding of the major concepts in Science but you need to work on the detail, especially for the C/D borderline. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 19 | E | 21 | D | D | D | C
Chun | You are a quieter member of the class but seemingly comfortable with this position. | Your enthusiasm for Science is reserved but your keen motivation and interest have not gone unnoticed. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | During lessons, you always remain focused on the work and can concentrate for long periods of time. Clearly, this is something that happens during your private study as well, a strength that you apply to all areas of your work. | You have a good understanding of the major concepts in Science but you need to work on the detail, especially for the C/D borderline. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 12 | F | 20 | D | E | C | B
[NAME] | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | During lessons, you always remain focused on the work and can concentrate for long periods of time. Clearly, this is something that happens during your private study as well, a strength that you apply to all areas of your work. | With regards to your understanding, you have got to grips with most of the scientific concepts and have proved this with your good module results. | Overall, you have all the bits of the jigsaw in place to do well. I have been impressed with your attitude, well done. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 23 | D | 24 | C | D | C | C
[NAME] | You are a quieter member of the class but seemingly comfortable with this position. | Your enthusiasm for Science is reserved but your keen motivation and interest have not gone unnoticed. | You are quite well organised, making much of the learning easier for you. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | If you have trouble understanding some of the concepts, let me know. You have to use all of the resources we provide as well as questioning me until a topic is crystal clear. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 19 | E | 23 | D | D | C | B
[NAME] | You are a quieter member of the class who could benefit by becoming more involved in answering questions and taking part more in class discussions but it doesn't seem to be hindering your progress. | Your enthusiasm for the subject is not coming across. If you put more motivation in Science and work harder at it, you'll increase your self-confidence and get more out of it. | You are quite well organised, making much of the learning easier for you. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | If you have trouble understanding some of the concepts, let me know. You have to use all of the resources we provide as well as questioning me until a topic is crystal clear. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You are working well in class but in quite a passive manner - you need to actively search through and work at the material you have to learn rather than me doing everything for you. | 17 | E | 16 | E | E | D | C
Shannon | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | During lessons, you always remain focused on the work and can concentrate for long periods of time. Clearly, this is something that happens during your private study as well, a strength that you apply to all areas of your work. | With regards to your understanding, you have got to grips with most of the scientific concepts and have proved this with your good module results. | Overall, you have all the bits of the jigsaw in place to do well. I have been impressed with your attitude, well done. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 24 | C | 21 | D | D | C | C
Louis | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | You come across as quite enthusiastic about Science but this is not always translated into the necessary hard work to learn, memorise and understand the information. | Without doubt, you would see an improvement in your learning if you spent more effort with your organisation - sadly, it doesn't come naturally to all of us and so you need a concerted effort to stay organised. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | You've got to start putting in far more work than the mere 60 mins of a lesson. The module test require you to actually do some revision at home. | Overall, you haven't quite made the transition to the level of study required at GCSE. Use the revision guide and practise the past papers before the exams. Above all, take all these points on board and treat every lesson as an absolutely essential part of the entire course. | You need more organisation and you need to remember the correct equipment for the lesson. | 19 | E | 18 | E | E | C | C
[NAME] | You need to involve yourself far more fully with lessons to make progress over the coming months. | You come across as quite enthusiastic about Science but this is not always translated into the necessary hard work to learn, memorise and understand the information. | You are quite well organised, making much of the learning easier for you. | You have got to start concentrating for longer periods without being distracted or distracting others. | Remembering information in Science is hard and this requires you to actually put in some effort. That means not just slavishly copying from the board; you have to use the revision guide and make an effort yourself. | Overall, you haven't quite made the transition to the level of study required at GCSE. Use the revision guide and practise the past papers before the exams. Above all, take all these points on board and treat every lesson as an absolutely essential part of the entire course. | You do need to concentrate more in lessons to ensure you reach your target grade. | 8 | G | 16 | E | F | E | D
[NAME] | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | You come across as quite enthusiastic about Science but this is not always translated into the necessary hard work to learn, memorise and understand the information. | Organisation is something you need to work on in all areas of your work. High grade GCSE and organisation are synonymous so you must address this skill. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | Remembering information in Science is hard and this requires you to actually put in some effort. That means not just slavishly copying from the board; you have to use the revision guide and make an effort yourself. | Overall, you haven't quite yet appreciated the step up in academic demand that GCSE requires. You have got to put in the work in your own time to achieve your minimum target grade. | You are working well in class but in quite a passive manner - you need to actively search through and work at the material you have to learn rather than me doing everything for you. | 18 | E | 18 | E | F | D | C
[NAME] | You are a quieter member of the class who could benefit by becoming more involved in answering questions and taking part more in class discussions but it doesn't seem to be hindering your progress. | Your enthusiasm for the subject is not coming across. If you put more motivation in Science and work harder at it, you'll increase your self-confidence and get more out of it. | Organisation is something you need to work on in all areas of your work. High grade GCSE and organisation are synonymous so you must address this skill. | You sometimes have trouble concentrating in lessons and this is getting in the way of your learning. | Remembering information in Science is hard and this requires you to actually put in some effort. That means not just slavishly copying from the board; you have to use the revision guide and make an effort yourself. | Clearly, you have got to put in far more effort than you are doing at present. This exam is hard and it will get the better of you unless you take direct action to do the required learning. | You do need to concentrate more in lessons to ensure you reach your target grade. | 12 | F | 16 | E | F | C | C
Jessica | You are a quieter member of the class but seemingly comfortable with this position. | Your enthusiasm for Science is reserved but your keen motivation and interest have not gone unnoticed. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | With regards to your understanding, you have got to grips with most of the scientific concepts and have proved this with your good module results. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 28 | B | 26 | C | C | C | C
[NAME] | You are a quieter member of the class who could benefit by becoming more involved in answering questions and taking part more in class discussions but it doesn't seem to be hindering your progress. | Involving yourself far more in the work will stimulate your enthusiasm in Science and improve the quality of your work. | You are quite well organised, making much of the learning easier for you. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | If you have trouble understanding some of the concepts, let me know. You have to use all of the resources we provide as well as questioning me until a topic is crystal clear. | Overall, you haven't quite yet appreciated the step up in academic demand that GCSE requires. You have got to put in the work in your own time to achieve your minimum target grade. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 23 | D | 20 | D | E | D | C
Kiddie | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | During lessons, you always remain focused on the work and can concentrate for long periods of time. Clearly, this is something that happens during your private study as well, a strength that you apply to all areas of your work. | You have a good understanding of the major concepts in Science but you need to work on the detail, especially for the C/D borderline. | Overall, you have all the bits of the jigsaw in place to do well. I have been impressed with your attitude, well done. | You have a generally good work ethic so keep that going. | 20 | D | 21 | D | D | C | C
Toni | You are a quieter member of the class who could benefit by becoming more involved in answering questions and taking part more in class discussions but it doesn't seem to be hindering your progress. | Your enthusiasm for Science is reserved but your keen motivation and interest have not gone unnoticed. | I see organisation as one of your key strengths and this is reflected in all aspects of your work. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | You have a good understanding of the major concepts in Science but you need to work on the detail, especially for the C/D borderline. | Overall, you have all the bits of the jigsaw in place to do well. I have been impressed with your attitude, well done. | You are working well in class but in quite a passive manner - you need to actively search through and work at the material you have to learn rather than me doing everything for you. | 20 | D | 18 | E | E | D | C
[NAME] | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | I've seen lots of enthusiasm from you this year, well done. | You might be organised in your head but it also needs a solid foundation in your written work so this is an area you need to concentrate on. | In lessons, you are generally well-focused and you concentrate well. | You've got to start putting in far more work than the mere 60 mins of a lesson. The module test require you to actually do some revision at home. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You need more organisation and you need to remember the correct equipment for the lesson. | 20 | D | 16 | E | E | D | C
Grant | You are a quieter member of the class but seemingly comfortable with this position. | Involving yourself far more in the work will stimulate your enthusiasm in Science and improve the quality of your work. | You might be organised in your head but it also needs a solid foundation in your written work so this is an area you need to concentrate on. | You sometimes have trouble concentrating in lessons and this is getting in the way of your learning. | If you have trouble understanding some of the concepts, let me know. You have to use all of the resources we provide as well as questioning me until a topic is crystal clear. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You do need to concentrate more in lessons to ensure you reach your target grade. | 26 | C | 28 | B | C | E | D
[NAME] | You have a tendency to hang back, not involve yourself in discussions and I feel this is starting to work against you after three terms of Science. | Your enthusiasm for the subject is not coming across. If you put more motivation in Science and work harder at it, you'll increase your self-confidence and get more out of it. | Organisation is something you need to work on in all areas of your work. High grade GCSE and organisation are synonymous so you must address this skill. | You sometimes have trouble concentrating in lessons and this is getting in the way of your learning. | You've got to start putting in far more work than the mere 60 mins of a lesson. The module test require you to actually do some revision at home. | Clearly, you have got to put in far more effort than you are doing at present. This exam is hard and it will get the better of you unless you take direct action to do the required learning. | You need more organisation and you need to remember the correct equipment for the lesson. | 19 | E | 0 | u | F | E | D
Jasmine | You always have something to say (in a positive way) and make a good contribution to class discussions. | You come across as quite enthusiastic about Science but this is not always translated into the necessary hard work to learn, memorise and understand the information. | You might be organised in your head but it also needs a solid foundation in your written work so this is an area you need to concentrate on. | You have got to start concentrating for longer periods without being distracted or distracting others. | You have a good understanding of the major concepts in Science but you need to work on the detail, especially for the C/D borderline. | Overall, you have coped well with the demands of GCSE Science this year. | You do need to concentrate more in lessons to ensure you reach your target grade. | 23 | D | 27 | C | D | C | C