Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: A1, field of study: Sciences de l'education)

We are learning the concepts of screens. The screens is bad or good of children.
The screens is platform, an activity of occupate children.
The screens is good of children because this (permet) to do learning children the concepts, watching video on learning, listenning on english, etc... Morever, the screens is bad also because this (peut affecter) the memory, the body, (se sentir) excluded, not socialization. But, screens is a (outil) to development of child because this (permet) to development creativity, reflexion, etc...
The screens are given very (tt) of certain children because the screens is a (manire) of parents to "debarassing" child to be liberty.
To conclude, for me, the screens of child is a aged to 9 years. We should a control parental (afin de limiter) the screen time.