Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: A1, field of study: Sciences de l'education)

Why choose the licence Science de l'ducation ?
I have a baccalaureate in art, and postulate in school of architecture, but I've been refused. To continued in dynamique active I'm engaged in service civique in school. It's a wonderful year, where I learn most. The children, teacher was most nice with me. For the end, that why I choose this licence Science de l'ducation.
Thank You
Alex Dupont
Licence science de l'ducation. TD1