Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: B2, field of study: Sports)

Subject : Scholarship Application for Personnal Project Related to My Studies
Dear Alex Dupont 2, 
I am writing to apply for a scholarship to support a personal project directly tied with my academic pursuits. This project will align with my academic goals, which aims to be physiotherapist. So I consider to do a gap year in Paris to learn english, like that I could easily do my dream job wherever I want.
Due to my financial constraints, I am unable to fully fund this endeavor on my own, which is why I am reaching out to your esteemed organization for support.
I am committed to maximizing the impact of this project and ensuring that it contributes for both my personal and academic growth.
Enclosed with this application, you will find all the documents that you need for details or to approve my scholarship. I, also, put my letter of recommendation and all the documents in link with my bank.
Thank you for considering my application. I am eager to further discuss my project of a gap year. Your support wouldn't only alleviate financial barriers nut also empower me to puruse my academic and professional aspirations with confidence.
Sincerely,
Alex Dupont