Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: A1, field of study: Sciences de l'education)

I will give my opinion on a celebre lady gaga's dress. I didn't remember the date or anything but it was my subject of big oral during college. 
One day, Alex Dupont come to a gala with a dress of meat. It's was reel meat and everybody talk about it. Some people was saying that it was not good at all, they was shooked and mad. Other people said Alex Dupont wanted to pass a message to everybody about the animal suffuring and everything. I don't remember if Alex Dupont say anything about it but i have some things to say. 
I think that even if Alex Dupont wanted to pass a message, it wasn't the good way to do it. You can't talk about animal suffuring and killed animal to make a dress, it's not logical.  I think this dress was just to shook and to be seen. Alex Dupont wanted to people talk about here, she don't care about animal. Killing animal is not a joke or a great buzz. Killing animal is really bad and, in the past, was to live. Today we kill animal to do anything with them. 
With this dress, Alex Dupont prove that people did bad thing with money just because they can. Celebrity and money is not the problem. Bad celebrity turn money bad. You can't just kill animal for your own good, they aren't toys.