Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: A2, field of study: Sciences de l'education)

First of all, my dream isn't teacher in National Education, my parcourus whises it was become doctor in a nurse or maternity.
When you are doctor in maternity you are in front of the development of little kids, it's an amazing and beautiful job taking care to kids it's was fulfilling I think. You are almost the first person that kids see, it's was a big responsibility and very important first of all for the kid but also for you.
But my favorite choice that was doctor in a nurse on parcoursup were not accepted, but I'm very happy to discover an another possibility to discover an another way of seeing a profession that deals with childrens : the licence Sciences of the education.
Because it's also a domain where we speak of the development and education of kids. It's very interesting to see how the history of education has an impact on the education now. I love the
contact
with kids and taking time with them, because 
I
think the most important thing is give to kids every keys for is flourishing.
I 
thing
the profession doctor in a nurse or 
maternity
was better for me and my future because it's my dream job and 
I
think that 
I
would have been more interested in these studies but maybe 
I
will also like this degree.