Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: B1, field of study: Sciences de l'education)

task 2
Hello,
Lets start at the origin. When i was a little girl , i had a cousin . I was 7 years older than her, but i realised that i love spending time with her and still now that i am 18. Moreover i like the positive energy and the joy that kids have for them problem don't exist, children are way more easier to deal with than adult.
Futhermore i really enjoy video games, painting, or society games, activities associated with "kids activities". To make sure that i want to work with children later i had a stage during my year of middle school, and i really like it . It was nice to see the activities they do, how they cummunicates between them and with adults . Besides, i had the opportunity to babysitt two children last year and also my cousin, it was the opportunity to take care of them and spend time without adult , like when i am going to be a teacher and i will to work with 20 children alone. And now i star my first year at the rennes 2 university to speak about the concept of education , and be more aware and a better teacher , about for examples the inequalities. Its something that i really want to work on, in my future class that every children can be equal and that if they need they can talk to me.
That why i want to be a teacher, and why i choose education science.