Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: B2, field of study: Sciences de la vie et de l'environnement)

Dear Sir,
   My name is Alex Dupont, I'm 23 years old and I'm in the 3rd year of a Bachelor in Biology at the University of Rennes. I'm writing to you to apply for a scolarship to study abroad at the University of Oxford in Paris in the field of research in diabetes diseases.
I would love to study abroad and especially in this prestigious university, it will be a big step for me professionally and personnally. It will allow me to acquire new skills and discover another culture and people for my network.
Futhermore, by continuing my studies internationally, I will be able to work in English with international people and practice my professional English.
I have carefully reviewed the trainig offer at Oxford University and I am confident that working with Ingenious Research Specializing in Health sciences and Diabetes will be the best for me because I'm always interested for the diabetes, it's a disease that tuch a lot of people and there are no lasting solutions for this disease.
However, as a student, I have some financial problems and I can't finance this training by myself, that's why i'm applying for this scolarship to help me to cover the cost of the accomodation and the live costs there, because the life in Paris is quite expensive.
I promise that I will use this money well and I will be assiduous in my studies.
Thank you for allowing me to make a dream come true.
Sincerely
Alex Dupont