Student essay written in en (native language: French, CEFR level: A1, field of study: Information Communication)

Dear Alex Dupont,
Actually in M1 "communication and digital innovation" at university of Rennes 2, I would like next year go to Paris for one year in Erasmus.
This year of ceasur will be beneficial for me.
Firstly for above my English : speaking, listening and writing with people who are English native could really helping me.
To go further, one year at Paris can bring me a lot of benefits, for example discovery a new culture, food, had an international experience.
But this year can't be possible if I don't received some money from this "bourse". Since the begin of my studies (four years) I'm working like waitress in restaurant for pay my appartement, my food, my charges, etc. In the same time I always validate at every semester. Strong about this experience I would like see something else and have one other experience for being concurrentiel when I will search a job after my M2.
Have this "bourse" is the only condition for going to Paris, I already make the different paper administrators, find a logement, etc. I know, I'm ready for this incredible years, all my destiny is in your hand.
Thank you for your attention !