English: Well, I'm afraid that's an inadequate response. It's good to hear about the good work that is happening on the Welsh language within Government, but that should be in the strategy. In terms of asylum seekers and refugees, you should consider that as a matter of urgency. I'd like to turn now to the other weaknesses of the international strategy. It's a strange mix of overgeneralisation and being overly detailed, simultaneously. You focus on the three industries to promote internationally: as you've already mentioned, cyber security, the composite semiconductors and creative industries. Now, I don't doubt that these are important sectors for the economy, but should we place semiconductors at the heart of our strategy? Wouldn't it make more sense to promote an industry that corresponds with international responsibilities, such as renewable energy? So, why haven't you set an ambitious pathway, based on making Wales a carbon-zero nation by 2040 or sooner? Where are the plans to make the most of the Welsh diaspora and promoting the contribution of the diaspora from other nations living in Wales? Where is the strategic plan for making the most of Wales's overseas offices? Now, talking about publishing a remit in future when these have already been in place for many years simply isn't good enough. Where's the vision for promoting the excellent research done by our HE sector and the commitment to ensure that this can continue? Where are the targets that are so necessary in order to measure the success of the strategy? How can you justify the fact that there are only two meetings per annum that you intend to stage an order to measure progress, and where is the great vision for the future of our nation on the international stage? I would suggest that you start afresh, building a unique and ambitious strategy, a strategy that could only be made in Wales, promoting a welcoming, green Welsh nation that is ready to succeed and to take its proper place on the global stage, rather than this document, which reads, at times, as a PR exercise, I'm afraid.
Welsh: Wel, mae hynny'n ateb annigonol yn anffodus. Mae'n dda iawn i glywed am y gwaith da sy'n digwydd gan y Llywodraeth am yr iaith Gymraeg, ond dylai hynny fod yn y strategaeth. Ac am y ffoaduriaid, dylech chi ailystyried hynny fel mater o frys, byddwn i'n argymell. Hoffwn droi yn awr at wendidau eraill y strategaeth ryngwladol. Mae'n gymysgedd rhyfedd o orgyffredinoli a gorfanylder ar yr un pryd. Rydych chi'n canolbwyntio ar dri diwydiant i'w hyrwyddo yn rhyngwladol, sef, fel rydych chi wedi sôn amdano fe yn barod, seiberddiogelwch, lled-ddargludyddion cyfansawdd a'r diwydiannau creadigol. Nawr, dwi ddim yn gwadu o gwbl fod y rhain yn ddiwydiannau pwysig i'n heconomi, ond a ddylen ni roi lled-ddargludyddion cyfansawdd wrth ganol ein strategaeth? Oni fyddai'n gwneud mwy o synnwyr i hyrwyddo diwydiant sy'n cyd-fynd â'r nod o gyfrifoldeb rhyngwladol, er enghraifft ynni adnewyddol? Pam nad ydych wedi gosod llwybr uchelgeisiol, wedi ei seilio ar wneud Cymru yn wlad carbon sero erbyn 2040 neu gynt? Ble mae'r cynllun er mwyn gwneud y mwyaf o'r diaspora Cymraeg, a hyrwyddo cyfraniad diaspora o wledydd eraill sy'n byw yng Nghymru? Ble mae'r cynllun strategol ar gyfer gwneud y mwyaf o swyddfeydd tramor Cymru? Dyw sôn am gyhoeddi cylch gwaith yn y dyfodol, pan mae'r rhain wedi bodoli ers blynyddoedd, ddim yn ddigon da. Ble mae'r weledigaeth ar gyfer hyrwyddo'r gwaith ymchwil ardderchog sy'n cael ei wneud gan ein sector addysg uwch, a'r ymrwymiad i sicrhau bod hyn yn gallu parhau? Ble mae'r targedau sydd yn angenrheidiol er mwyn gallu mesur llwyddiant y strategaeth? Sut allwch chi gyfiawnhau'r ffaith mai dim ond dau gyfarfod y flwyddyn rydych yn bwriadu eu cynnal er mwyn mesur cynnydd? A ble mae'r weledigaeth fawr ar gyfer dyfodol ein cenedl rhyngwladol? Byddwn i'n argymell eich bod yn dechrau eto, gan adeiladu strategaeth unigryw ac uchelgeisiol, strategaeth all ond Cymru ei chael, o hyrwyddo cenedl groesawgar, werdd, Gymreig, sydd yn barod i lwyddo a chymryd ei phriod le ar lwyfan y byd, yn hytrach na'r ddogfen hon, sy'n darllen, ar adegau, fel ymarferiad PR, mae arna i ofn.