> 1) Perhaps you were watching it at low
resolution? It's at a bigger font than
Xcode's standard.

My screen is a razor sharp 14" monitor
with 1024 x 768 pixels. Resolution is not
the issue, just size. All the text on
the screen used for the demo is just
a total blur -- I can't make out even
a single character. I'm a long time,
full-time computer user, and that text
was by far the worst I ever saw
that was intended to be read.

2)-4). Your video doesn't have to be
"self contained". Instead, just say
in broad terms what you are talking about.

I've never heard of AudioKit before, nor
should I have. I have no idea at all
what the purpose of AudioKit is, nor should
I. I have no idea if there is a Web site
for AudioKit or if it has tutorial material,
nor should I. If all such things are true,
then make that clear.

E.g., could I get the orchestral
score to the R. Strauss
Einheldenleben and use AudioKit to
do a good synthetic orchestral
performance? The score to the
Bach Chaconne? The Bach
solo violin version? The Busoni
piano version? Say enough to make
answers to such questions clear.

3) Ohio. Ohio should be fine. My
mother was from Columbus, grew up
just south of the OSU campus.
I was a prof in the B-school there.
My father went to Ohio State,
BA and MA. My
wife was from not far away,
about 50 miles SW of Fort Wayne,
IN. It's not about Ohio.

Instead, just do what I said:
Don't drop your voice at certain
words or at the ends of sentences.
When you say a word, go ahead and
actually pronounce it. Your Ohio
version of English speaking is fine;
just use it. As it is, mostly I
couldn't understand what you were
saying, totally lost maybe 1/3rd of
your words and more of your content.

Since I couldn't read your screen
text and couldn't understand your
speech, I gave up, and I'm someone
really interested in music, really
interested.

You may have some good work. If so,
then good. In that case, speak up,
describe your work, show clear
screen images.

BTW, I have no idea, none at all, zip,
zilch, zero, nichts, nil, nada,
what the heck "Xcode" is. None.
I doubt that Xcode is in Webster's.
So, Xcode is undefined jargon. I
know quite a lot about both music
and computing, but I don't know what
Xcode is, and likely I should not.
Lesson: If you want to communicate,
don't use undefined jargon.

Computing: I've published peer-reviewed
original research in artificial intelligence
from the IBM Watson lab. I've taught
computing at both Georgetown U. and
Ohio State U. At Ohio State, I
was a leader in computing in the
B-school and more generally on campus.

I've programmed significant software
for decades. My Ph.D. dissertation
was heavily based on software that I wrote.

I recently finished
typing in software for a Web site
with 4 back-end servers, 80,000 lines
of typing, about 18,000
programming language statements,
for Windows with the Microsoft
software .NET, ASP.NET, and ADO.NET
and for the Microsoft calls for
TCP/IP, etc. Still I never heard
of Xcode. Fonts? I'm quite good
at D. Knuth's TeX, still have never
heard of Xcode.

I'm not attacking you. Instead
I'm giving you constructive
feedback so that you can
communicate better about your
possibly quite good work so
that many more people can
like your work.

Main lesson:
Just speak up.