Original: It will help all our children and young people to have a good quality of life and achieve good outcomes including appropriate paid employment, independent living and community participation.
Simplified: It will help all our children and young people to have a good quality of life and achieve good success including appropriate paid employment, independent living and community participation.
Simplified: It will help all our children and young people to have a good lives and achieve well, for example, getting appropriate paid jobs, living independently and taking part in the community.
Simplified: It will help all our children and young people to have a good quality of life and achieve good outcomes: including appropriate paid employment, independent living and community participation.