Nevertheless, Brundage himself states in his book that those writers had not "paid much attention to these matters", and "paid only scant attention to masturbation and homosexual practices", without stating "unimportant".
Kenyataannya, Brundage sendiri menyatakan dalam bukunya bahwa para penulis itu tidak terlalu menaruh banyak perhatian pada hal-hal tersebut, serta "hanya menaruh sedikit perhatian pada praktik-praktik masturbasi dan homoseksual", tanpa menyatakan "tidak penting".