Prompt: i really did hard for making this kind of structure for my essay. Any how sorry to say but 14th of december is my test for Ielts I have confirmed the date. Could you give me Bands score for this essay? Does Advertising Force People to Buy Things They Don't Need?

Nowadays, many famous things have been selling out just because of the advertisement, even there are such kind of things included which is not necessary for the society, this writing will examine the both side of the issue, Ċ I can endorse my proposition with the help of the following reasons that, well known equipment sales have been went up recent years with the help of the advertisement. There is no doubt advertisers mostly attack on the children and then children put pressure on parents to buy them things. For example, burger, biscuit and chocolates have reached at the high stage of the selling, behind of this phenomenon there is a hand of the expert advertisers as well as they make some attractive adds and then show it on the television. Ċ On the other hand, some unwanted and vulnerable things are also part of the famous sales in the market. Fore example, there are some local or international companies in the market those are investing million dollars for advertise their clothes, laptops,mobile phones and more other things by posting on the roads and using the internet websites. Ċ Furthermore, such as companies use the well known and successful people to make the add. For example, they use actors, actresses for the advertisement. Ċ So eventually, in the light of the above stated fact we reach to a concrete and conclusive paragraph by saying that, there is a big hand of the advertisement behind of the unnecessary things, and in my opinion I advertiser can use this tool but not for faq or incredible things.