This story is , as stated in the title , CRAP . I just need some critting , cause in order for me to get any better , i 'll be needing ALOT . Read on , fellow writers .

Question: What may happen after the poster gets some critting ?
Answer: They 'll ask their fellow writers to help them with their critting .They 'll remember that critting is crap and stop doing it .They 'll forget about critting and go on to dabbing .They need quite a bit of critting so they 'll continue doing it .