Please capitalize where necessary: some of the upgrades included increased insulation, a new heating system and replacing the windows. read her story.
A: Some of the upgrades included increased insulation, a new heating system and replacing the windows. Read her story.

Q: and when the news came to jabesh-gilead of what the philistines had done to saul,

A: And when the news came to Jabesh-gilead of what the Philistines had done to Saul,

Q: three go-home meetings, a seminar, and at least 10 presentations at international conferences.
A: Three go-home meetings, a seminar, and at least 10 presentations at international conferences.

Problem: 10:25 and they brought every man his present, vessels of silver, and vessels of gold, and garments, and armor, and spices, horses, and mules, a rate year by year.
Can you repeat this sentence, but capitalize it?
Answer: 10:25 And they brought every man his present, vessels of silver, and vessels of gold, and garments, and armor, and spices, horses, and mules, a rate year by year.

Text: he lectured there in mathematics and submitted a dissertation for his doctorate under lomnicki's supervision.

Correct capitalization: He lectured there in mathematics and submitted a dissertation for his doctorate under Lomnicki's supervision.

Text: this degree, equivalent to today's british d.sc., is at a higher level than a doctorate.

Correct capitalization:
This degree, equivalent to today's British D.Sc., is at a higher level than a doctorate.