Add punctuation: Room facilities Air conditioning Bath or Shower Bathroom Carpeted Desk Dining area Fan Flatscreen TV Free toiletries Heating Ironing Facilities Refrigerator Satellite Channels Seating Area TileMarble floor Toilet Wakeup service WardrobeCloset
A: Room facilities: Air conditioning, Bath or Shower, Bathroom, Carpeted, Desk, Dining area, Fan, Flat-screen TV, Free toiletries, Heating, Ironing Facilities, Refrigerator, Satellite Channels, Seating Area, Tile/Marble floor, Toilet, Wake-up service, Wardrobe/Closet

Add punctuation: Relationships with a large number of customers spread throughout the world can be a significant sales marketing and operational challenge Zwicks Sales Marketing department was already using a CRM solution in the form of Microsoft Dynamics CRM 2011 which had been deployed by its partner AlfaPeople to oversee marketing campaigns and activities
A: Relationships with a large number of customers spread throughout the world can be a significant sales, marketing and operational challenge. Zwick's Sales & Marketing department was already using a CRM solution in the form of Microsoft Dynamics CRM 2011, which had been deployed by its partner, AlfaPeople, to oversee marketing campaigns and activities.

Add punctuation: Artist Mao Yan is a geek in contemporary Chinese oil painting circle who had attracted much attention from worldwide for his extreme sensitive and delicate portrait oil paintings
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Artist Mao Yan is a geek in contemporary Chinese oil painting circle, who had attracted much attention from worldwide for his extreme sensitive and delicate portrait oil paintings.