input: This is the sphere of communication expression and sharing of ideas with others and it is here that you are most awkward and sensitive to criticism and rejection
fixed: This is the sphere of communication, expression and sharing of ideas with others, and it is here that you are most awkward and sensitive to criticism and rejection.

input: An important part of analyzing a trade is separating the important information from what is unnecessary
fixed: An important part of analyzing a trade is separating the important information from what is unnecessary.

input: And especially the very Stonehenges axis of winter solstice shows its major importance in the whole arrangement of the construction
fixed: And especially the very Stonehenge's axis of winter solstice shows its major importance in the whole arrangement of the construction.

input: As you recognize different artificial anabolic steroids are extremely potent and effective in providing you with quick muscular tissue gain and increased strength
fixed:
As you recognize, different artificial anabolic steroids are extremely potent and effective in providing you with quick muscular tissue gain and increased strength.