Please capitalize where necessary: this collection is a very mixed bag.
A: This collection is a very mixed bag.

Please capitalize where necessary: located 6.4 km from dockweiler beach state park, this modern hotel provides free 24-hour dedicated shuttle service to los angeles international airport just 1.6 km away.
A: Located 6.4 km from Dockweiler Beach State Park, this modern hotel provides free 24-hour dedicated shuttle service to Los Angeles International Airport just 1.6 km away.

Please capitalize where necessary: would you like a proof of the embroidery?
A: Would you like a proof of the embroidery?

Please capitalize where necessary: but, once we receive the holy spirit, it does not remain bottled up; it does not stagnate; it is not static it flows in outgoing concern (love) to fellow man, and in worship, reverence, obedience to god.
A:
But, once we receive the Holy Spirit, it does not remain bottled up; it does not stagnate; it is not static it FLOWS in outgoing concern (LOVE) to fellow man, and in worship, reverence, obedience to GOD.