Add punctuation: I should note that if you are using the much superior imo
A: I should note that if you are using (the much superior i.m.o.)

Add punctuation: When you understand why certain tasks matter youre in a better position to set prioritieswhich in turn will help prepare you to transition into management
A: When you understand why certain tasks matter, you're in a better position to set prioritieswhich in turn will help prepare you to transition into management.

Add punctuation: It is of course a mistake to judge the beings real or absolute identity by its organism particularly because it is temporal and will perish
A:
It is of course a mistake to judge the being's real or absolute identity by its organism, particularly because it is temporal and will perish.