Add punctuation: When analyzing the market traders may misinterpret the asset price movement and incur losses
A: When analyzing the market, traders may misinterpret the asset price movement and incur losses.

Add punctuation: On average the charge is around US 50 per day and another US 12 for the drivers license
A: On average, the charge is around US $50 per day and another US $12 for the driver's license.

Add punctuation: This was a bakery with a guy who knew his stuff deeply and wasnt afraid to share what he knew
A:
This was a bakery, with a guy who knew his stuff deeply and wasn't afraid to share what he knew.