The sync dialog displays all there is to know about the process including the elapsed time progress bars the speed of the process and how many files and folders were created and deleted so far and how many are left

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The sync dialog displays all there is to know about the process including the elapsed time, progress bars, the speed of the process and how many files and folders were created and deleted so far and how many are left.
input: When it came time for the representative of the prosecution at that point the American assistant prosecutor Col Harlan Amen to question Hoess he seemed to be reading from the affidavit signed by the latter but in fact he was reading excerpts from the remake
fixed: When it came time for the representative of the prosecution (at that point the American assistant prosecutor, Col. Harlan Amen) to question Hoess, he seemed to be reading from the affidavit signed by the latter but, in fact, he was reading excerpts from the "remake."
input ---- Later on we go to Altays girlfriends place where a group of people are gathered to watch dias from a trip to Paris Luxenborg and Barcelona about a month ago
output ---- Later on we go to Altay's girlfriend's place where a group of people are gathered to watch dias from a trip to Paris, Luxenborg and Barcelona about a month ago.
Add punctuation: Euromillions lottery numbers Friday 12 August 2016 Lotteries
A: Euromillions lottery numbers - Friday 12 August 2016 - Lotteries
QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The pictures were taken by individuals and companies and Governments for the online Museum Airport Riemde provided Use outside this project can be granted only the rights holder and does not have the Munich riem project
ANS: The pictures were taken by individuals and companies, and Governments for the online Museum "Airport Riem.de" provided. Use outside this project can be granted only the rights holder and does not have the Munich riem project!
input ---- Significantly longer battery life GPS
output ----
Significantly longer battery life - GPS