QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The heavily loaded format urges the beholder to devotedness
ANS: The heavily loaded format urges the beholder to devotedness.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The religious side of Boyle is one which we have not mentioned in this biography yet it was an important force in his life
ANS: The religious side of Boyle is one which we have not mentioned in this biography, yet it was an important force in his life.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Always there for you experts from our headquarters subsidiaries and representative offices
ANS: Always there for you: experts from our headquarters, subsidiaries and representative offices

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Anything worth doing is worth overdoing
ANS:
Anything worth doing is worth overdoing.