QUES: Our son Claus has been living in beautiful Vancouver together with his girlfriend Janet for about 4 years

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Our son Claus has been living in beautiful Vancouver together with his girlfriend Janet for about 4 years.

QUES: If your PC opens the DIME file but its the wrong application youll need to change your Windows registry file association settings In other words Windows is associating DIME file extensions with the wrong software program

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: If your PC opens the DIME file, but it's the wrong application, you'll need to change your Windows registry file association settings. In other words, Windows is associating DIME file extensions with the wrong software program.

QUES: The first two days were dry but during the following 8 days the weed received 34 mm rain

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
The first two days were dry but during the following 8 days the weed received 34 mm rain.