Please capitalize where necessary: thursday 27 october, 2016 2904576 requests since thursday 01 september, 2005
A: Thursday 27 October, 2016 2904576 requests since Thursday 01 September, 2005

Please capitalize where necessary: the slime trail is their visiting card. so in my garden, i now leave them to do their job.
A: The slime trail is their visiting card. So in my garden, I now leave them to do their job.

Please capitalize where necessary: the common thread running through all the works of the exhibition is the crack, that gap title of the exhibition, "the cut is repeated throughout the exhibition as part of the rift between the language of photography and architecture".
A: The common thread running through all the works of the exhibition is the crack, that GAP title of the exhibition, "The cut is repeated throughout the exhibition as part of the rift between the language of photography and architecture".

Please capitalize where necessary: finally, in some cases they may follow various underground archeological (also geological or industrial) structures, which would otherwise without the contribution of electricity show either a significantly lower intensity, only minimal or not at all.
A:
Finally, in some cases they may follow various underground archeological (also geological or industrial) structures, which would otherwise without the contribution of electricity show either a significantly lower intensity, only minimal or not at all.