Question: Having the 597 Business Letters Library is like having an experienced adviser at your side telling you exactly what say to produce the response you desire
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Fixed: [Having the 597 Business Letters Library is like having an experienced adviser at your side, telling you exactly what say to produce the response you desire.]

Question: 17 Fear and the pit and the snare are upon thee O inhabitant of the earth
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Fixed: [17 Fear, and the pit, and the snare, are upon thee, O inhabitant of the earth.]

Question: Christian Horner has admitted the rocky relationship between Red Bull and Renault is due to a loss of patience
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Fixed: [Christian Horner has admitted the rocky relationship between Red Bull and Renault is due to a loss of "patience".]

Question: With over 5000 signatories the UN Global Compact claims to be the worlds largest voluntary corporate citizenship initiative
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[With over 5,000 signatories, the UN Global Compact claims to be the "world's largest voluntary corporate citizenship initiative".]