Question: The models used was to some degree my own kids and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6year old girl as a real Christmas in December
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Fixed: [The models used was to some degree my own kids, and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6-year old girl as a real Christmas in December.]

Question: Yet he justifies it all As I think of him now I recall Isaiahs warning Woe unto them that call evil good and good evil that put darkness for light and light for darkness that put bitter for sweet and sweet for bitter Isaiah 520
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Fixed: [Yet he justifies it all! As I think of him now, I recall Isaiah's warning: "Woe unto them that call evil good, and good evil; that put darkness for light, and light for darkness; that put bitter for sweet, and sweet for bitter!" (Isaiah 5:20).]

Question: Due to instability Supermarine had to make extensive changes to the model before it was accepted by RAF Mk 21 was faster and climbed better that the Mk XIV but its flight characteristics were not as pleasant as the Mk XIVs
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Fixed: [Due to instability Supermarine had to make extensive changes to the model before it was accepted by RAF. Mk. 21 was faster and climbed better that the Mk. XIV, but its flight characteristics were not as pleasant as the Mk. XIV's.]

Question: NASA found in highdefinition movies of the Moon Landing
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[NASA, found in high-definition movies of the Moon Landing]