At this time Lvov was in Galicia the part of partitioned Poland which was under Austrian control

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At this time Lvov was in Galicia, the part of partitioned Poland which was under Austrian control.
The pharmaceutical industry makes great demands when it applies aseptic product handling

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The pharmaceutical industry makes great demands when it applies aseptic product handling.
Another impressionI had immediately was that it reminded me of a world warII marine mine and this was because of the shape and dark color of it and because the red lights were so bright that they reminded me of the things that stick out from all around a marine mineI would estimate its height at about 10001500 feet give or take

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Another impressionI had immediately was that it reminded me of a world warII marine mine - and this was because of the shape and dark color of it, and because the red lights were so bright that they reminded me of the things that stick out from all around a marine mine.I would estimate its height at about 1000-1500 feet give or take.