QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Forst see hardly them and when you do that use the next few minutes for a determining concept
ANS: Forst see hardly them, and when you do that, use the next few minutes for a determining concept.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Weaknesses Aside from the aforementioned seasickness fear of heights and lack of offensive capabilities while in carrier mode Broadside also suffers severe corrosion when exposed to salt water for extended periods
ANS: Weaknesses: Aside from the aforementioned seasickness, fear of heights, and lack of offensive capabilities while in carrier mode, Broadside also suffers severe corrosion when exposed to salt water for extended periods.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: After education the adventure begins try to survive
ANS: After education the adventure begins, try to survive!

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: On Monday Egmonts Chinese joint venture partner celebrated the 25 years with Mickey Mouse magazines in China The celebration took place in Bologna where international publishers and licensors of childrens book and magazines are gathered for Bologna Childrens Book Fair
ANS:
On Monday Egmont's Chinese joint venture partner celebrated the 25 years with Mickey Mouse magazines in China. The celebration took place in Bologna where international publishers and licensors of children's book and magazines are gathered for Bologna Children's Book Fair.