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Professor Epstein has a son Paul Epstein who was two years older than Karl and the two boys became good friends

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Professor Epstein has a son, Paul Epstein , who was two years older than Karl and the two boys became good friends.
The fact that electricity takes part is emphasized by mythologys story on Elektras brother was killed by a lightning

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The fact that electricity takes part is emphasized by mythology's story on Elektra's brother was killed by a lightning.