Add punctuation: The June version of the Trading Centre was the bestattended June Trading Centre to date
A: The June version of the Trading Centre was the best-attended June Trading Centre to date.

Add punctuation: Expansion in the USA and China cultural training provides a strong foundation
A: Expansion in the USA and China cultural training provides a strong foundation

Add punctuation: Very soon there will also be a facility for making a donation and buying merchandise online We hope that you will be able to make a contribution towards the cost of this project to enable us to continue investigating and exposing the fur trade
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Very soon there will also be a facility for making a donation and buying merchandise on-line. We hope that you will be able to make a contribution towards the cost of this project to enable us to continue investigating and exposing the fur trade.