QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It would be altogether unfair to ask him to surrender this valuable privilege for anything less than what it might bring him in case he should be allowed to keep it
ANS: It would be altogether unfair to ask him to surrender this valuable privilege for anything less than what it might bring him in case he should be allowed to keep it.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: When Thomas chugs along the track the various stops all come alive
ANS: When Thomas chugs along the track , the various stops all come alive .

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 20 language tools such as Speech Trainer Speed Memorization dictionary translator writing assistants situation cards etc
ANS: 20 language tools, such as Speech Trainer, Speed Memorization, dictionary, translator, writing assistants, situation cards, etc.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Please note Guests under the age of 18 can only check in with a parent or official guardian
ANS:
Please note: Guests under the age of 18 can only check in with a parent or official guardian.