QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The improvement in the situation in London in particular the troops who had been stationed in Gresham College having left allowed the scientists to begin meeting again in the College
ANS: The improvement in the situation in London, in particular the troops who had been stationed in Gresham College having left, allowed the scientists to begin meeting again in the College.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Ea Energy Analyses and Lokalenergi were commissioned by United Nations Industrial Development Organisation UNIDO to assist Egypt in developing a policy framework and a 10year roadmap for improving industrial energy efficiency in Egypt
ANS: Ea Energy Analyses and Lokalenergi were commissioned by United Nations Industrial Development Organisation (UNIDO) to assist Egypt in developing a policy framework and a 10-year roadmap for improving industrial energy efficiency in Egypt.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Acts 102 tells us that Cornelius prayed to God regularly
ANS: Acts 10:2 tells us that Cornelius "prayed to God regularly."

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Forgotten stuff is brought on board and shore leave is given to those who must do a drawing of Kronborg and gather information about the town
ANS:
Forgotten stuff is brought on board, and shore leave is given to those who must do a drawing of Kronborg and gather information about the town.