Please capitalize where necessary: but when those caretakers feel like extended family themselves, it's a win-win for everyone.
A: But when those caretakers feel like extended family themselves, it's a win-win for everyone.

Please capitalize where necessary: 8:12 but the children of the kingdom shall be cast out into outer darkness: there shall be weeping and gnashing of teeth.
A: 8:12 But the children of the kingdom shall be cast out into outer darkness: there shall be weeping and gnashing of teeth.

Please capitalize where necessary: [july 24th - 30th] debian conference, banja luka, bosnia and herzegovina
A: [July 24th - 30th] Debian Conference, Banja Luka, Bosnia and Herzegovina

Please capitalize where necessary: paying some nominal amount for entry without a tour escort, we went into the yard. 2 years ago it was worth a few hryvnia (3-5, can not remember exactly).
A:
Paying some nominal amount for entry without a tour escort, we went into the yard. 2 years ago it was worth a few hryvnia (3-5, can not remember exactly).