input: As we already know from our previous analyses the Earth has evolved so far that regarded as an individual or living being it is undergoing the great birth
fixed: As we already know from our previous analyses, the Earth has evolved so far that, regarded as an individual or living being, it is undergoing the great birth.

input: Ive been working since I was a boy and have never had time for hobbies
fixed: "I've been working since I was a boy and have never had time for hobbies.

input: Low price facilities with extra low price up to 1600 personovernight stay during the main season
fixed: Low price - facilities with extra low price (up to 16,00 person/overnight stay during the main season).

input: Later Zhang Cang Marquis of Peiping and Geng Shouchang VicePresident of the Ministry of Agriculture both became famous through their talent for calculation
fixed:
Later, Zhang Cang, Marquis of Peiping and Geng Shouchang, Vice-President of the Ministry of Agriculture, both became famous through their talent for calculation.