Text: instead of inscribing the content into a foreign context, connecting it to a product or brand, the work makes it freely accessible, i.e. without copyright protection and, one might say, includes the community on its own premises.

Correct capitalization: Instead of inscribing the content into a foreign context, connecting it to a product or brand, the work makes it freely accessible, i.e. without copyright protection and, one might say, includes the community on its own premises.

Text: of dan, azarel, the son of jeroham. these were the captains of the tribes of israel.

Correct capitalization: Of Dan, Azarel, the son of Jeroham. These were the captains of the tribes of Israel.

Text: the second man was jesus.

Correct capitalization: The second Man was Jesus.

Text: 9. in the same vein, the compact equipped with an integrated gps could begin to be seen over the next few months.

Correct capitalization:
9. In the same vein, the compact equipped with an integrated GPS could begin to be seen over the next few months.