QUES: As it turned out it was the state of Qin in the west that emerged victorious

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CORRECTED: As it turned out it was the state of Qin in the west that emerged victorious.

QUES: The pavement iasonos angle with the KOUMOUNDOUROU of the oven Nicolas Problems persist with PARKING machinery leading to park on the pavement as you can see in the photo I sent and I happen to be relatively empty compared to other days My suggestion is to create TWO parking right there in front because

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CORRECTED: The pavement iasonos angle with the KOUMOUNDOUROU of the oven Nicolas Problems persist with PARKING machinery leading to park on the pavement as you can see in the photo I sent and I happen to be relatively empty compared to other days! My suggestion is to create TWO parking right there in front because [...]

QUES: So when we set up customers it could be possible that the customer has different locations

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CORRECTED:
So when we set up customers, it could be possible that the customer has different locations.