Please capitalize where necessary: before long, the immigration process was underway and within six months, we were all living together as a new family!
A: Before long, the immigration process was underway and within six months, we were all living together as a new family!

Please capitalize where necessary: bus stop: 150 metres. train: estacion norte valencia, 500 metres.
A: Bus stop: 150 metres. Train: Estacion Norte Valencia, 500 metres.

Please capitalize where necessary: weather in manchester, gb
A: Weather in Manchester, GB

Please capitalize where necessary: but she does need to know that somewhere preferably within the family peace, courtesy and civilisation can still be found, so that she can make her forays out into the world knowing that a place of shelter and serenity awaits her at home.
A:
But she does need to know that somewhere preferably within the family peace, courtesy and civilisation can still be found, so that she can make her forays out into the world knowing that a place of shelter and serenity awaits her at home.