Question: Then scripture says they two went on same verse
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Answer: Then, scripture says, "...they two went on" (same verse).

Question: As explained mast cells are part of every single persons immune system
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Answer: As explained, mast cells are part of every single person's immune system.

Question: It stirs your heart to hear how they have been awakened to follow Jesus and how this trip to Israel has affected and will continue to affect their lives
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Answer: It stirs your heart to hear how they have been awakened to follow Jesus, and how this trip to Israel has affected, and will continue to affect their lives.

Question: Come there too on a Saturday afternoon see exactly the same thing happen there in the tiny marketplace
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Answer:
Come there, too, on a Saturday afternoon, see exactly the same thing happen there in the tiny market-place.