QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It was not a question of a running time in a race but of a long tough haul where you are 100 dependent on what you have learned and on yourself as a person
ANS: It was not a question of a running time in a race, but of a long, tough haul where you are 100% dependent on what you have learned and on yourself as a person.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If youre like many people youd probably say that there is some room for improvement
ANS: If you're like many people, you'd probably say that there is some room for improvement.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Beloved souls you are not just waiting
ANS: Beloved souls, you are not just waiting!

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Alpine Sound is a small family run hotel in the care of the hosts personally
ANS:
Alpine Sound is a small family run hotel in the care of the hosts personally.