Please capitalize where necessary: so soon they became careless, walking around with open visors on their armored helmets and chatting with the people. and the people from over there, who were hiding everything edible from the army's confiscation commandos, shared what little food they had with individual soldiers or traded fresh lettuce or homemade cake for canned food. the soldiers had plenty of canned food and they were frankly sick and tired of it.
So soon they became careless, walking around with open visors on their armored helmets and chatting with the people. And the people from Over There, who were hiding everything edible from the army's confiscation commandos, shared what little food they had with individual soldiers or traded fresh lettuce or homemade cake for canned food. The soldiers had plenty of canned food and they were frankly sick and tired of it.