QUES: The Holbein Dagger The protesting monk

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The Holbein Dagger: The protesting monk.

QUES: Neither of you will want to play second fiddle to the other

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Neither of you will want to play second fiddle to the other.

QUES: This living being constitutes an experiencing and creating eternal something which is the same as this living beings I

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
This living being constitutes an experiencing and creating "eternal something", which is the same as this living being's "I".