QUESTION: Fix punctuation: You can also refer to the Quick Start Book for some general hints and tips this can be downloaded from the download area on the website
ANS: You can also refer to the Quick Start Book for some general hints and tips, this can be downloaded from the download area on the website.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: pictures photos facts and information on Saint Paul Church Behind Auvergne Bridge on Ill River Strasbourg
ANS: pictures, photos, facts and information on Saint Paul Church Behind Auvergne Bridge on Ill River (Strasbourg)

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Only when a person inserts coins cash or a barcoded paper ticket into a designated machine sous on the machine can he start playing
ANS: Only when a person inserts coins, cash, or a bar-coded paper ticket into a designated machine a sous on the machine can he start playing.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Financial markets particularly some sovereignbond segments remain fragile and damaging negative feedback loops cannot be totally excluded
ANS:
Financial markets, particularly some sovereign-bond segments, remain fragile, and damaging negative feedback loops cannot be totally excluded.