Add punctuation: Get to your destination hasslefree and at a great price with the guarantee of no more than 4 stops
A: Get to your destination hassle-free and at a great price, with the guarantee of no more than 4 stops.

Add punctuation: 3329 Then shall they know that I am Yahweh when I have made the land a desolation and an astonishment because of all their abominations which they have committed
A: 33:29 Then shall they know that I am Yahweh, when I have made the land a desolation and an astonishment, because of all their abominations which they have committed.

Add punctuation: Startled as she was Alice was more frightened for him than for herself at the moment and watched him with some anxiety as he mounted again
A:
Startled as she was, Alice was more frightened for him than for herself at the moment, and watched him with some anxiety as he mounted again.