QUES: 4 How long does it take to receive the money transferred into my account

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CORRECTED: 4. How long does it take to receive the money transferred into my account?

QUES: So the question is reduced to the simple advice to study Capital

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CORRECTED: So the question is reduced to the simple advice to study Capital.

QUES: On Saturday evening we hope to see all the participants and their familiesfriends at the dinner party at the beautiful four stars Hotel Bygholm Park Schttesvej 6 8700 in Horsens where it will also be possible to spend the night dogs are welcome

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CORRECTED:
On Saturday evening we hope to see all the participants and their families/friends at the dinner party, at the beautiful four stars Hotel Bygholm Park, Schuttesvej 6, 8700 in Horsens, where it will also be possible to spend the night (dogs are welcome!).