QUES: 1 Now in the twenty and fourth day of this month the children of Israel were assembled with fasting and with sackclothes and earth upon them

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 1 Now in the twenty and fourth day of this month the children of Israel were assembled with fasting, and with sackclothes, and earth upon them.

QUES: The living is decorated with bright white tones making it modern and fresh with elegant touches

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The living is decorated with bright, white tones making it modern and fresh with elegant touches.

QUES: xorriso for all optical media types also doable as nonroot user

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
xorriso for all optical media types (also doable as non-root user):