Question: While wind and solar will play a role in this transition so will biofuels and liquefied natural gas LNG
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Fixed: [While wind and solar will play a role in this transition, so will biofuels and liquefied natural gas (LNG).]

Question: After completing her tack Red had all the rights of rule 11 ie Red has the right to luff unless her luff is so hard that Blue is not able to keep clear rule 16
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Fixed: [After completing her tack, Red had all the rights of rule 11, i.e. Red has the right to luff, unless her luff is so hard, that Blue is not able to keep clear (rule 16).]

Question: Before you can open a O8O file youll need to figure out what kind of file the O8O file extension refers to
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Fixed: [Before you can open a O8O file, you'll need to figure out what kind of file the O8O file extension refers to.]

Question: If the problem still persists then format the disk using Disk Utility tool and restore your files from recent updated backup If the backup of the lost data is not available or updatedthen use a Mac Data Recovery application to retrieve your lost data after the corruption of journal file
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[If the problem still persists, then format the disk using "Disk Utility" tool and restore your files from recent updated backup. If the backup of the lost data is not available or updated,then use a Mac Data Recovery application to retrieve your lost data after the corruption of journal file.]