IN: He needed them to practice , but more than that , he needed them not to revolt . " Fine . I 'll see all of you here tomorrow . Get a good night 's sleep .
What may after to them after they leave ?

OUT: They will show up to practice the next day .

IN: My entire life is full of irony , while i was trying to convince one friend to live , another was dying . I feel like butter spred over too much bread . Now all of us are mourning this loss and at the same time they all look to me to be the strong one of the group .
What is probably true of my friends ?

OUT: They have mental illnesses

IN: Same with Overcoming Circumstance . Funnily enough , I ' ve gotten more feedback for my 5 Yrs Gone full length fiction but I do n't feel as if it 's most - loved ? It 's more like it 's got its moments ... and then the rest leaves people just skimming .
Why is the narrator a bit more encouraged ?

OUT:
They have gotten reviews back .