IN: Dare I say - " overworked " ? - the Word for my first semester of Grad School . 8/9/08 I put colored pencil over some , and paint washes over others .
Why is the narrator making a few innocent mistakes at a higher rate ?

OUT: The narrator is feeling tired .

IN: Actually ... it 's just the bad and the ugly . We ' ve all snickered at the hoser on the beach with a tribal armband tattoo , and his idiotic choice of self - expression . But most of the people in this particular photo gallery took bad ideas to a whole new level .
What may be the reason to of gotten that tattoo ?

OUT: Wanted to show individualism but made a bad choice .

IN: She 's big on magic wands and transformation right now . Em felt she was running a little late , so she said , " We 'll walk quickly . " She did . I had to stretch my legs a bit to keep her pace , and she was shorter than me by a foot and was wearing a pack .
Why is it interesting to know Em 's height ?

OUT:
Shorter people typically have shorter legs and do not walk as fast .