QUES: Yet when this sin is indulged it is capable of leading to every other sin listed here I am not trying to be dramatic

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Yet when this sin is indulged, it is capable of leading to every other sin listed here. I am not trying to be dramatic.

QUES: A coincidence or what Could there really be as high an age

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: - A coincidence or what? Could there really be as high an age?

QUES: MY FIX neutralizing liquid fixative

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
MY FIX - neutralizing liquid fixative