Add punctuation: Planning organization procedures techniques potential problems and dangers connected with Night Diving
A: Planning, organization, procedures, techniques, potential problems and dangers connected with Night Diving.

Add punctuation: PIN Code Terminal 3068 for G2 systems
A: PIN Code Terminal 3068 (for G2 systems)

Add punctuation: But in this case needed the support of a strong Dark hands associated with the understanding of their own actions or have developed their own protective abilities
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But in this case needed the support of a strong "Dark hands", associated with the understanding of their own actions, or have developed their own "protective abilities".