IN: We called Sha - sha and your Henry ( grandma and grandpa - they came up with those names , do n't blame me ! ) to alert them , and then called Uncle Danny . At around 2 am , with the contractions about 2 minutes apart , we headed to the hospital . When we got there I was only 2 cm dilated , but my blood pressure was high so they admitted me .
Why is everyone rushing to the hospital ?

OUT: There is a child to be birthed .

IN: I took a step into the next room to see what was going on . My hand covering my mouth in shock I watched the smoke and flames from the building and wondered how such a terrible accident could have happened . I watched as they showed the plane flying low over the city , directly towards the already burning building , and crash into ... wait ... what ? The building is already burning , and how did they get footage of ... oh shit ... that 's a second plane ... what the ... I spent the next twelve hours doing probably the same thing as many of you .
Why is the narrator acting so shocked ?

OUT: The narrator just saw a disaster .

IN: About five minutes ago , the weather outside was in full thunderstorm mode . Trees in my backyard were nearly horizontal , fallen still - green leaves were swirling in the air , the sky had become this creepy charcoal color , rain was pouring in through open windows and thunder was shaking the foundation of my house- literally . ( There was no lightning , however , and that was a welcome relief . )
What is causing the narrator some stress ?

OUT:
There is a terrible thunder storm .