Question: Thus one can hope for at flere lrere og elever begynder at dele deres appletter online
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Fixed: [Thus one can hope for, at flere lrere og elever begynder at dele deres appletter online.]

Question: The models used was to some degree my own kids and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6year old girl as a real Christmas in December
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Fixed: [The models used was to some degree my own kids, and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6-year old girl as a real Christmas in December.]

Question: I have shoulder length clown hair hair and other eyes
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Fixed: [I have shoulder length clown hair hair and other... eyes.]

Question: The superb facilities superior service and excellent location of the 4star Pestana Dom Joo II Villas Beach Resort make this hotel a fantastic holiday destination
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Fixed:
[The superb facilities, superior service and excellent location of the 4-star Pestana Dom Joao II Villas & Beach Resort make this hotel a fantastic holiday destination.]