IN: Its not needed , but I felt a sense of accomplishment falling out of the boat and still having mine to finish the rest of the river ride . We traversed a few more rapids and got back onto the bus . Overall ... more exciting than the lazy river ride we did in Helen , Georgia with the kids . But then again it was suppose to be " lazy " .
Why did the narrator have so much fun ?

OUT: They were at an aquatic ride .

IN: I ' ve noticed he 's up more during the day lately , and getting quieter at night . Not so much 11 pm now . More like 10 and midnight and then he 's good til about 2:30 - 3 am . We ' ve bought the paint for his nursery and I ca n't wait to get everything all set up !
Who is the narrator discussing ?

OUT: an infant

IN: He would pat them awkwardly on the shoulder and wait for Angelina or one of the other girls to notice his distress and offer the upset student a sympathetic ear and the occasional glass of pumpkin juice . He marveled at how easily they did it . Comfort , like schoolwork , was another thing he had to work at . He recalled how Ginny looked at the ill - fated Quidditch practice earlier that morning .
Why is the subject so patient with the likes of Ginny and others ?

OUT:
The subject is a learned educator .