QUESTION: Fix punctuation: for making the effort for doing the research for putting yourself out there
ANS: for making the effort, for doing the research, for putting yourself out there

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: And secondly you dont have to read the book from start to finish to make it work for you You can just dive into any chapter that attracts you and start there
ANS: And secondly, you don't have to read the book from start to finish to make it work for you. You can just dive into any chapter that attracts you and start there.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Yves Younan and Richard Johnson discovered that malformed Groupwise messages could crash Pidgin
ANS: Yves Younan and Richard Johnson discovered that malformed Groupwise messages could crash Pidgin.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Room facilities Air conditioning Alarm clock Balcony Bath Bathrobe Bathroom Bluray player CD Player Cable Channels Carpeted City view Desk Fax Flatscreen TV Free toiletries Hairdryer Heating Hypoallergenic Interconnected rooms available Iron Ironing Facilities Laptop safe Minibar Payperview Channels Radio Safety Deposit Box Seating Area Shower Slippers Sofa Soundproofing Telephone TileMarble floor Toilet Wakeup service WardrobeCloset iPod dock
ANS:
Room facilities: Air conditioning, Alarm clock, Balcony, Bath, Bathrobe, Bathroom, Blu-ray player, CD Player, Cable Channels, Carpeted, City view, Desk, Fax, Flat-screen TV, Free toiletries, Hairdryer, Heating, Hypoallergenic, Interconnected room(s) available, Iron, Ironing Facilities, Laptop safe, Minibar, Pay-per-view Channels, Radio, Safety Deposit Box, Seating Area, Shower, Slippers, Sofa, Soundproofing, Telephone, Tile/Marble floor, Toilet, Wake-up service, Wardrobe/Closet, iPod dock