IN: A second edition of this book appeared in 1985 with additional material.
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OUT: a second edition of this book appeared in 1985 with additional material.

IN: They argued that instead of the new OS being more accessible and easy to use, it had become more cumbersome and draining on our computer's architecture.
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OUT: they argued that instead of the new os being more accessible and easy to use, it had become more cumbersome and draining on our computer's architecture.

IN: Check rates and availability for Surf Ranch Hotel and Resort. Then proceed to booking.
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OUT: check rates and availability for surf ranch hotel and resort. then proceed to booking.

IN: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: Bad manners, unpolite, rude people,beggars....!
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if you want to know in advance what turns me off: bad manners, unpolite, rude people,beggars....!