Add punctuation: The models used was to some degree my own kids and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6year old girl as a real Christmas in December
A: The models used was to some degree my own kids, and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6-year old girl as a real Christmas in December.
QUESTION: Fix punctuation: When skin cell replacement decreases skin becomes thinner and more fragile
ANS: When skin cell replacement decreases, skin becomes thinner and more fragile.
QUES: If you are the kind of person who likes to spend time in a gardenand maybe you dont have the land to have a regular gardenthen an intensive green roof could be a good investment for you

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: If you are the kind of person who likes to spend time in a gardenand maybe you don't have the land to have a regular gardenthen an intensive green roof could be a good investment for you.
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The police arrive on the scene and question him as to what took place

Can you repeat this sentence, but add in punctuation?
The police arrive on the scene and question him as to what took place.
QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Right in the vicinity of the fishermens village Vang we find the water mill Vandmlle which is protected as a historical monument
ANS:
Right in the vicinity of the fishermen's village Vang we find the water mill (Vandmlle) which is protected as a historical monument.