After practically 40 years in the business DR Big Band has played its way into the heavyweights of the Danish and International history of jazz

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After practically 40 years in the business, DR Big Band has played its way into the heavy-weights of the Danish and International history of jazz.
To make your stay more comfortable the apartment also has heating Elevator air conditioning and Wifi

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To make your stay more comfortable, the apartment also has heating, Elevator, air conditioning and Wifi.
Here where the exhibition begins and ends there is a pencil drawing on a sloping podium of a man with a painted death mask standing with his back to the viewer looking at us in a mirror

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Here, where the exhibition begins and ends, there is a pencil drawing on a sloping podium of a man with a painted death mask standing with his back to the viewer looking at us in a mirror.