QUES: Fill in the amount of your bid in the lot data and confirm by selecting Place this bid

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CORRECTED: Fill in the amount of your bid in the lot data and confirm by selecting 'Place this bid'.

QUES: At the commencement of the draw a deep Zen inbreath is taken creating a natural feeling of gaining strength

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: At the commencement of the draw a deep Zen in-breath is taken, creating a natural feeling of gaining strength.

QUES: It is this condition of fate we must term macrocosmic fate

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CORRECTED:
It is this condition of fate we must term "macrocosmic fate".