Question: This was about twice the troop strength of the Red Army but the Red Army had the advantage of familiarity with the territory and fighting at least in part from defensive positions
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Fixed: [This was about twice the troop strength of the Red Army, but the Red Army had the advantage of familiarity with the territory and fighting, at least in part, from defensive positions.]

Question: MS Stavangerfjord and MS Bergensfjord represent a new era for ferry traffic between Norway and the EUEach ship is 170 meters long with a hull perfectly designed to give our passengers a smooth and stable sea voyage
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Fixed: [MS Stavangerfjord and MS Bergensfjord represent a new era for ferry traffic between Norway and the EU.Each ship is 170 meters long, with a hull perfectly designed to give our passengers a smooth and stable sea voyage.]

Question: We have excellent contacts to the manufacturers of painting technologies and we visit training courses to be always uptodate with latest technologies
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Fixed: ["We have excellent contacts to the manufacturers of painting technologies and we visit training courses to be always up-to-date with latest technologies.]

Question: When I plugged in a wired network cable the connection came right up so that was good news I was very pleasantly surprised though when I plugged the standard Raspberry Pi USB wifi dongle in and it also came right up
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Fixed:
[When I plugged in a wired network cable, the connection came right up, so that was good news. I was very pleasantly surprised, though, when I plugged the standard Raspberry Pi USB wi-fi dongle in and it also came right up!]