QUES: Soon the series grew by lanterns and bollards and especially the lanterns have shown great potential in street lighting

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CORRECTED: Soon the series grew by lanterns and bollards, and especially the lanterns have shown great potential in street lighting.

QUES: He advocated for a separate Jewish state in Palestine he was a Zionist Thus he was hated by the Nazis

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CORRECTED: He advocated for a separate Jewish state in Palestine, he was a Zionist. Thus, he was hated by the Nazis.

QUES: To reduce the amount of storage required by your Debian CD mirror you can exclude certain files from being mirrored

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CORRECTED:
To reduce the amount of storage required by your Debian CD mirror, you can exclude certain files from being mirrored.