Text: mitsui had to petition for a reduction in the amount the shogunate was demanding.

Correct capitalization: Mitsui had to petition for a reduction in the amount the Shogunate was demanding.

Text: each slide provides a clear explanation of a particular aspect of cornish grammar.

Correct capitalization: Each slide provides a clear explanation of a particular aspect of Cornish grammar.

Text: campylobacter is frequently found in bathing water, where as campylobacter is only sporadic found in drinking water in denmark.

Correct capitalization: Campylobacter is frequently found in bathing water, where as Campylobacter is only sporadic found in drinking water in Denmark.

Text: it sure looks like the next big thing for android will be mids. inbrics just announced that they'll be showing one off at ces in january and hope to deliver it to the us in 2010.

Correct capitalization:
It sure looks like the next big thing for Android will be MIDs. Inbrics just announced that they'll be showing one off at CES in January and hope to deliver it to the US in 2010.