Text: and the same goes for emissions of climate-impacting carbon dioxide and other substances.

Correct capitalization: And the same goes for emissions of climate-impacting carbon dioxide and other substances.

Text: needless to say, pan dehai is a heavyweight in chinese contemporary art circle.

Correct capitalization: Needless to say, Pan Dehai is a heavyweight in Chinese contemporary art circle.

Text: page 10 is the front page (see the picture to the right).

Correct capitalization: Page 10 is the front page (see the picture to the right).

Text: it is important to remember that sand particle size distribution ranges from a diameter of 0.05 mm to 2.00 mm, a 40-fold increase.

Correct capitalization:
It is important to remember that sand particle size distribution ranges from a diameter of 0.05 mm to 2.00 mm, a 40-fold increase.