QUES: Thus the idea behind PERZA was that when given access to training and small loans rural residents would be able to start businesses and generate income which they would then be able to spend on energy

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CORRECTED: Thus the idea behind PERZA was that, when given access to training and small loans, rural residents would be able to start businesses and generate income, which they would then be able to spend on energy.

QUES: Description Bluecrowned Motmot is a common bird in Ecuador

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CORRECTED: Description: Blue-crowned Motmot is a common bird in Ecuador.

QUES: Patients with obstructive sleep apnea often dont report waking up during the night with each episode of apnea Frequently during the apnea the brain only awakens from a deep sleep stages 3 4 or REM to a shallow level of sleep

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Patients with obstructive sleep apnea often don't report waking up during the night with each episode of apnea. Frequently, during the apnea the brain only awakens from a deep sleep (stages 3, 4, or REM) to a shallow level of sleep.