Text: - two external magnetic pockets and nine internal compartments including a large zipped pocket for valuables

Correct capitalization: - Two external magnetic pockets and nine internal compartments including a large zipped pocket for valuables

Text: evaluation ****. nice and characteristic

Correct capitalization: Evaluation ****. Nice and characteristic

Text: he would not necessarily rule over all the house of israel, or the jews but at least some of them, and enough to form a nation.

Correct capitalization: He would not necessarily rule over all the house of Israel, or the Jews but at least some of them, and enough to form a nation.

Text: the size of the tumor and how it may be impeding the functionality of the organ will also have a lot of influence on how ill your pet feels, and whether or not it will be fatal.

Correct capitalization:
The size of the tumor and how it may be impeding the functionality of the organ will also have a lot of influence on how ill your pet feels, and whether or not it will be fatal.