QUES: When the populace cant understand what is going on they rely on political and financial analysts to make sense of it and those experts unwittingly are adding to the confusion because they dont know either why things are happening as they are

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CORRECTED: When the populace can't understand what is going on, they rely on political and financial analysts to make sense of it, and those "experts" unwittingly are adding to the confusion because they don't know either why things are happening as they are.

QUES: Here one can see a dance of death with pope emperor bishop king queen and citizen

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CORRECTED: Here one can see a dance of death with pope, emperor, bishop, king, queen and citizen.

QUES: After describing these contributions Araki also notes other work of Connes such as his applications of operator algebras to differential geometry and his work on noncommutative integration theory which he published in 1979

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CORRECTED:
After describing these contributions, Araki also notes other work of Connes such as his applications of operator algebras to differential geometry and his work on non-commutative integration theory which he published in 1979.