QUES: For her it was crucial to come to the point where she could live in harmony with God and with herself

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CORRECTED: For her, it was crucial to come to the point where she could live in harmony with God and with herself.

QUES: Battles in Fire Emblem Heroes are turn based

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CORRECTED: Battles in Fire Emblem Heroes are turn based.

QUES: For by one Spirit we were all baptized into one bodywhether Jews or Greeks whether slaves or freeand have all been made to drink into one Spirit 1 Cor 12413

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CORRECTED:
For by one Spirit we were all baptized into one bodywhether Jews or Greeks, whether slaves or freeand have all been made to drink into one Spirit." 1 Cor. 12:413.