Question: It was a bit nerverackingthrilling entering a bay via a canal and I had no idea what it looked like before arriving here But as mentioned theres ait is full moon so I was able to see something And I had themy echo sounder turned on and would immediately go out and park it on open water should any doubts arise But luckily that wasnt necessary
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Fixed: [It was a bit "nerve-racking"(/"thrilling") entering a bay via a canal and I had no idea what it looked like before arriving here. But as mentioned there's a(/it is) full moon so I was able to see something. And I had the(/my) echo sounder turned on and would immediately go out and park it on open water, should any doubts arise. But luckily that wasn't necessary.]

Question: 1621 and desiring to be filled with the crumbs which fell from the table of the rich man but the dogs also coming licked his sores
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Fixed: [16:21 and desiring to be filled with the crumbs which fell from the table of the rich man; but the dogs also coming licked his sores.]

Question: Named after the city of her birth Nightingale was born at the Villa Colombia in Florence Italy on 12 May 1820
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Fixed: [Named after the city of her birth, Nightingale was born at the Villa Colombia in Florence, Italy, on 12 May 1820.]

Question: It tends to lower bars of resistance and increases the temptation to carry intimacies to the limit
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Fixed:
[It tends to lower bars of resistance, and increases the temptation to carry intimacies to the limit.]