IN: They really were stunningly similar , with a spattering of freckles and a puff of pale hair on their heads . If it was n't for the cut and the expressions on their faces , she would n't have been able to tell them apart . She stood back up .
What will she do after standing back up ?

OUT: She will ask them their names

IN: He sold it to me because he already had four bikes and wanted to buy a BMW . I bought this bike from him with just under 2000 miles . I had to replace the battery after I bought it because he hardly ever rode it . I rode this bike as a sport tourer all last year .
What may be a fact about this person ?

OUT: They bought a motorcycle off of someone else .

IN: He was a part of me in a way I would never know while living . And here , in the distorted heaven projected around me , I finally could . And damn if the words did n't make tears sting in my eyes . I would have been embarrassed , but I think I was past all that .
Why was I past all that ?

OUT:
Crying in public is really nothing to be ashamed of .