Add punctuation: Although air pollution affects everyone it does not affect everyone to the same extent and in the same way
A: Although air pollution affects everyone, it does not affect everyone to the same extent and in the same way.

Add punctuation: Some will argue that its extremely narrowminded of God to provide only one way to heaven But frankly in light of mankinds rebellious rejection of God its extremely broadminded for Him to provide us with any way to heaven
A: Some will argue that it's extremely narrow-minded of God to provide only one way to heaven. But, frankly, in light of mankind's rebellious rejection of God, it's extremely broad-minded for Him to provide us with any way to heaven.

Add punctuation: Innovative applications from the packaging industry were also presented to trade visitors in the Customer Center
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Innovative applications from the packaging industry were also presented to trade visitors in the Customer Center.