Add punctuation: Palau 1997 Peleliu There are still a lot of old rusty war junk from 2 world war spread out on many pacific islands also here on Peleliu one of the islands where a Japanese soldier slow in the uptake suddenly appeared from the jungle 2030 years after the war has ended I visited three islands in Palau independent since 1994
A: Palau 1997: Peleliu. There are still a lot of old rusty war junk from 2. world war spread out on many pacific islands, also here on Peleliu (one of the islands where a Japanese soldier - slow in the uptake - suddenly appeared from the jungle 20-30 years after the war has ended! I visited three islands in Palau (independent since 1994).

Add punctuation: Mother of pearl is sometimes also dyed and a metal eye may be glued on instead of drilled holes
A: Mother of pearl is sometimes also dyed, and a metal eye may be glued on instead of drilled holes.

Add punctuation: During our many years as advisors for entrepreneurs and small and mediumsized companies we have assisted in more than 100 transactions from very small to very large transactions
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During our many years as advisors for entrepreneurs and small and medium-sized companies we have assisted in more than 100 transactions, from very small to very large transactions.