Question: As you proceed further the next window displays all the volumes partitions that are present in the selected hard drive before reinstallation
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Fixed: [As you proceed further, the next window displays all the volumes / partitions that are present in the selected hard drive before re-installation]

Question: Recent developments in the discussions that are taking place in Brussels where national ministry officials meet and hash out details of the planned future directive add more cause for concern
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Fixed: [Recent developments in the discussions that are taking place in Brussels, where national ministry officials meet and hash out details of the planned future directive, add more cause for concern.]

Question: In later editions up to 1952 it increased this prewar estimate without explanation by a million to 16643120
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Fixed: [In later editions up to 1952 it increased this prewar estimate (without explanation) by a million, to 16,643,120.]

Question: Latest visit 18 August 2004 1440
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Fixed:
[Latest visit 18 August 2004 14:40]