QUES: So now if you want me to do so I will pray for you and ask God to heal you of this blood poisoning

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: "So now, if you want me to do so, I will pray for you and ask God to heal you of this blood poisoning.

QUES: It is a fictitious personal name in fact Shyloch is the Hebrew and Arabic name for the main star in the constellation Lyra in the sky the upper pole of the Worldaxis

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: It is a fictitious personal name - in fact, 'Shyloch' is the Hebrew and Arabic name for the main star in the constellation Lyra in the sky, the upper pole of the World-axis.

QUES: Revolutionary TNT resistance system almost silent because it is based upon compressed nitrogen

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Revolutionary TNT resistance system: almost silent, because it is based upon compressed nitrogen