Question: This apartment has a lounge room with a sofa and TV It offers a kitchenette with microwave fridge kettle and toaster
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Fixed: [This apartment has a lounge room with a sofa and TV. It offers a kitchenette with microwave, fridge, kettle and toaster.]

Question: When the 2728 June opens the doors to our 7
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Fixed: [When the 27.-28. June opens the doors to our 7.]

Question: In 1852 Peirce introduced methods into the theory of errors applied to observations which would allow faulty observations to be discarded
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Fixed: [In 1852, Peirce introduced methods into the theory of errors applied to observations which would allow faulty observations to be discarded.]

Question: His paper On Faradays lines of force was read to the Cambridge Philosophical Society in two parts 1855 and 1856 Maxwell showed that a few relatively simple mathematical equations could express the behaviour of electric and magnetic fields and their interrelation
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[His paper On Faraday's lines of force was read to the Cambridge Philosophical Society in two parts, 1855 and 1856. Maxwell showed that a few relatively simple mathematical equations could express the behaviour of electric and magnetic fields and their interrelation.]