Question: And moving on from there to the mountain on the east of Bethel he put up his tent having Bethel on the west and Ai on the east and there he made an altar and gave worship to the name of the Lord
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Fixed: [And moving on from there to the mountain on the east of Beth-el, he put up his tent, having Beth-el on the west and Ai on the east: and there he made an altar and gave worship to the name of the Lord.]

Question: The primary result was that the more vitamin C that the men had in their blood serum the lower their CRP
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Fixed: [The primary result was that the more vitamin C that the men had in their blood (serum), the lower their CRP.]

Question: If you havent already registered your channel with ChanServ you should first do that read question 18 How do I register my channel of the Services FAQ before continuing with this
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Fixed: [If you haven't already registered your channel with ChanServ, you should first do that - read question 1.8 "How do I register my channel?" of the Services FAQ before continuing with this.]

Question: Check qualified agencies and organisations for au pair placements see below
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Fixed:
[Check qualified agencies and organisations for au pair placements (see below).]