IN: Because this system is so amazing , its going to make headlines . Incredibly ... you are first in line and in position to discover secrets only a handful of people on the Internet know about Craigslist . Secrets that up until now , have n't been shared with anyone ...
Why is the narrator so excited about Craigslist ?

OUT: The narrator sees great novelty in it .

IN: But anyway we have a big football game against are rivals the Illinois State Redbirds . This is the oldest rivalry in the state of Illinois , and for the past four years they have had the upper hand on us . Were a very much improved team and i think it will be a good game and whoever wants it more will come out on top , i have no doubt in my mind that our team wants it more . I also have just finished critiquing a few websites that i visit and found some of them to be poorly designed .
What may be the reason for them wanting the upper hand ?

OUT: They have n't had the upper hand in a long time .

IN: I went to Metamorphose 2008 . It was the second time for me to join this party . I was really looking for it and my expectation was not betrayed .
How many times have I been to the party .

OUT:
Once before