Question: 7 And they warred against the Midianites as the LORD commanded Moses and they slew all the males
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [7 And they warred against the Midianites, as the LORD commanded Moses ; and they slew all the males.]

Question: Although this video already has almost a couple of months for many readers will be new
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Although this video already has almost a couple of months, for many readers will be new.]

Question: The pressure which these apparently powerful men have to endure in this the Jewish century seems to have some effect which shows in a careworn physiognomy
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [The "pressure" which these apparently powerful men have to endure in this, "the Jewish century," seems to have some effect which shows in a careworn physiognomy.]

Question: dpkg Dont lose metadata if readdir returns newly added files
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[dpkg Don't lose metadata if readdir() returns newly added files]