Text: an extension is an option or else i could go to dili up in east-timor and get a new visa-on-arrival back in indonesia. but waiting, hanging around in kupang for a month waiting for a maybe-boat, naahh, i really don't have the patience for that. i just wanna go to australia, for christ sake!

Correct capitalization: An extension is an option or else I could go to Dili up in East-Timor and get a new visa-on-arrival back in Indonesia. But waiting, hanging around in Kupang for a month waiting for a maybe-boat, naahh, I really don't have the patience for that. I just wanna go to Australia, for Christ sake!

Text: a product that brightens the color and check for leaks. keeping light.

Correct capitalization: A product that brightens the color and check for leaks. Keeping light.

Text: so it was named babel, because there the lord took away the sense of all languages and from there the lord sent them away over all the face of the earth.

Correct capitalization: So it was named Babel, because there the Lord took away the sense of all languages and from there the Lord sent them away over all the face of the earth.

Text: 4.2 you do not own the software.

Correct capitalization:
4.2 You do not own the Software.