QUES: When you are applying your make up ready to go out for the evening it can be hard when the lighting in the room you are in is not the best

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: When you are applying your make up ready to go out for the evening, it can be hard when the lighting in the room you are in is not the best.

QUES: Every time the spiral makes a full turn it extends it self by Fibonacci ratio

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Every time the spiral makes a full turn it extends it self by Fibonacci ratio.

QUES: He chose me not because I loved him first but because he first loved me He adopted me as his child only because he loved me And that brings me to a wonderful conclusion

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
He chose me, not because I loved him first, but because he first loved me. He adopted me as his child only because he loved me. And that brings me to a wonderful conclusion: