QUES: The garlic will bloom in late summer and the flowers are tightly packed in packs

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The garlic will bloom in late summer and the flowers are tightly packed in packs.

QUES: In the Freeway Systems robots palletise the goods in a stable pattern which the robotic stretch wrappers secure in turn providing very stable pallets

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: In the Freeway Systems, robots palletise the goods in a stable pattern which the robotic stretch wrappers secure, in turn providing very stable pallets.

QUES: As to the Mathematical Society of which I was a member when only 18 years of age having been contrary to the rules elected under the age of 21

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
As to the Mathematical Society, of which I was a member when only 18 years of age, having been, contrary to the rules, elected under the age of 21.