IN: When he said it , Sanzo knew that that was right . Somehow , he was remembering something , something important , something vital . Hakkai blinked at him . " What do you mean ? "
What will happen after Sanzo asks " What do you mean " ?

OUT: Hakkai would recall the event and tell him what he remembers .

IN: Ozzie got into a major scuffle with a damn raccoon over who actually owned the recycling bin last night at 11 . We were too busy trying to get her leg to stop bleeding to notice that the damn scavenger had bit her in the ear , right along the edge , through the vein , and there was blood smeared all over the edge of the sofa bed . Now , $ 300 later , she is conked out on antibiotics on her gigantic new dog bed .
What may have happened before the fight ?

OUT: Ozzy was outside .

IN: Then , I told him that our plans had changed and that leaving was going to mean leaving in a couple of months rather than by year 's end or by next September . And then I said , " I ' ve already started looking for another job . " " Not at the company , " he asked .
What will the narrator be doing by year 's end ?

OUT:
They 'll be working at a new job .