Question: The kitchen and bathroom are fully refurbished with quality materials and the latter disposes of a large shower for your comfort
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Fixed: [The kitchen and bathroom are fully refurbished with quality materials, and the latter disposes of a large shower for your comfort.]

Question: One can imagine how the nature of what is ordered under that arrangement would differ from what is ordered when each individual pays his or her own bill
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Fixed: [One can imagine how the nature of what is ordered under that arrangement would differ from what is ordered when each individual pays his or her own bill.]

Question: Remote firmware upgrade FOTA capability simplifies management of largescale installations with hundreds of devices
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Fixed: [Remote firmware upgrade (FOTA) capability simplifies management of large-scale installations with hundreds of devices.]

Question: There is immortality and eternity for all humanity upon death However those who die rejecting God by an act of their free will receive the punishment of total separation from God for all eternity never ending at the initial judgment at death No prayers can save those poor souls
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Fixed:
[There is immortality and eternity for all humanity upon death. However, those who die rejecting God by an act of their free will receive the punishment of total separation from God for all eternity (never ending) at the initial judgment at death. No prayers can save those poor souls!]