Question: 39 Heshbon and its suburbs Jaazer and its suburbs four cities in all
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Fixed: [39 Heshbon and its suburbs, Jaazer and its suburbs: four cities in all.]

Question: To place your order go online register choose the option that best suits you and follows the simple steps on the website the product is shipped from the USA and UK the quality guarantee is provided and manufacture guarantee included
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Fixed: [To place your order, go online, register, choose the option that best suits you and follows the simple steps on the website: the product is shipped from the USA and UK, the quality guarantee is provided, and manufacture guarantee included.]

Question: Only the highest winning hand is paid
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Fixed: [Only the highest winning hand is paid.]

Question: At first glance the 32 GB iPad is a good compromise because you might not have time to complete them before a second generation of iPad
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Fixed:
[At first glance, the 32 GB iPad is a good compromise, because you might not have time to complete them before a second generation of iPad.]