Text: when jessica was 20 weeks pregnant she found out that her unborn baby had a rare chromosomal disorder that was incompatible with life.

Correct capitalization: When Jessica was 20 weeks pregnant she found out that her unborn baby had a rare chromosomal disorder that was incompatible with life.

Text: simon t and pta hooked up with the group right before their show at Arhus' musik cafeen as part of the bomb hip-hop tour. the conversation started out kinda sketchy, but after a detour concerning prozack's uncle and mark stretch's terror threats we got down to business.

Correct capitalization: Simon T and PTA hooked up with the group right before their show at Arhus' Musik Cafeen as part of the Bomb Hip-Hop Tour. The conversation started out kinda sketchy, but after a detour concerning Prozack's uncle and Mark Stretch's terror threats we got down to business.

Text: if one analogy is bad, so is the other.

Correct capitalization: If one analogy is bad, so is the other.

Text: let's understand! right here is the point of difficulty.

Correct capitalization:
Let's UNDERSTAND! Right here is the point of difficulty.