QUESTION: Fix punctuation: On the other hand we the grassroots all over the world have managed to put human rights on the agenda ahead of the Olympics where most of the articles have had a focus critical to China
ANS: On the other hand, we, the grassroots all over the world have managed to put human rights on the agenda ahead of the Olympics, where most of the articles have had a focus critical to China.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Appartementen in Split Kroati Direct contact
ANS: Appartementen in Split, Kroatie - Direct contact

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 25 And in the fifth year shall ye eat of the fruit thereof that it may yield unto you the increase thereof I am the LORD your God
ANS: 25 And in the fifth year shall ye eat of the fruit thereof, that it may yield unto you the increase thereof: I am the LORD your God.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The apartment also features a newly renovated bathroom with shower and perfect finishing
ANS:
The apartment also features a newly renovated bathroom with shower and perfect finishing.