Add punctuation: The newest member of Microsofts Surface family is technically an incremental upgrade
A: The newest member of Microsoft's Surface family is, technically, an incremental upgrade.

Add punctuation: 12 And Zerubbabel the son of Shealtiel and Jesus the son of Jehozadak the high priest and all the remnant of the people heeded the voice of the Lord their God and the words of Haggai the prophet just as the Lord their God sent him to them And the people were fearful before the face of the Lord
A: 12 And Zerubbabel the son of Shealtiel, and Jesus the son of Jehozadak, the high priest, and all the remnant of the people heeded the voice of the Lord their God, and the words of Haggai the prophet, just as the Lord their God sent him to them. And the people were fearful before the face of the Lord.

Add punctuation: Even with the larger rotors the crop pick up is therefore assured without negatively affecting the tedding and the rotary action
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Even with the larger rotors, the crop pick up is therefore assured, without negatively affecting the tedding and the rotary action.