IN: I have finished knitting the pouch and fused it to the sweater . I have continued to knit the body and I am now an inch and a half away from adding the sleeves . That leaves me with less than a third of the sweater to go ! I should hopefully have this project completed with in my target goal which leaves me three weeks .
Why is the narrator working so hard on the project ?

OUT: They have a deadline approaching .

IN: When I started blogging , I just wanted an online diary where I could share with the world . Having a blog and making it pretty has been my hobby since I started this blog , and I really do enjoy writing and sharing stuffs . Later on , I discovered ' make money through your blog ' .
What am I trying to do now ?

OUT: I am trying to make money blogging

IN: Aariana came in for her 12 month portraits today . She was Miss . Independent running the show and running circles around us ! She is so adorable and so mobile !
How old is Aariana ?

OUT:
She has turned one .