Add punctuation: It was quite early she kissed her old grandmother who was still asleep put on her red shoes and went alone to the river
A: It was quite early; she kissed her old grandmother, who was still asleep, put on her red shoes, and went alone to the river.

Add punctuation: Place eight ramekins in two baking pans lined with kitchen towels or 8inch round cake pan
A: Place eight ramekins in two baking pans lined with kitchen towels or 8-inch round cake pan.

Add punctuation: Its the iceberg effect all the associated costs the penalties days off the road delayed deliveries or loss of business damage to reputation and so on
A:
It's the iceberg effect all the associated costs, the penalties, days off the road, delayed deliveries or loss of business, damage to reputation, and so on."