Question: for making the effort for doing the research for putting yourself out there
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [for making the effort, for doing the research, for putting yourself out there]

Question: The Torah was but the start heaped on it were all the interpretations and commentaries and rabbinical rulings the elders like pious silkworms span the thread ever further in the effort to catch up in it every conceivable act of man generations of lawyers had laboured to reach the conclusion that an egg must not be eaten on the Sabbath day if the greater part of it had been laid before a second star was visible in the sky
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [The Torah was but the start; heaped on it were all the interpretations and commentaries and rabbinical rulings; the elders, like pious silkworms, span the thread ever further in the effort to catch up in it every conceivable act of man; generations of lawyers had laboured to reach the conclusion that an egg must not be eaten on the Sabbath day if the greater part of it had been laid before a second star was visible in the sky.]

Question: Dive time alarm Maximum depth 45
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Dive time alarm. Maximum depth... 45%]

Question: Unfortunately having a dump is no longer as convenient as it once was
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[Unfortunately having a dump is no longer as convenient as it once was.]