Problem: Add spaces: Thefriendsofthemilitarybecameboutiqueowners.

Spaces added: The friends of the military became boutique owners.

Problem: Add spaces: AtthecrowningofthekingitwasthereforethePrivyCouncillorswhosymbolicallytookpartintheplacementofthecrown.

Spaces added: At the crowning of the king it was therefore the Privy Councillors who symbolically took part in the placement of the crown.

Problem: Add spaces: Thus,discountsareavailableforthepoor,theyoung,theold,thesick,andlargefamilies.

Spaces added: Thus, discounts are available for the poor, the young, the old, the sick, and large families.

Problem: Add spaces: Inexchange,they'reexpectedtositinthemallandwriteeveryday,foranaudiencethatcantracktheirworkasitdevelopson-screen.

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In exchange, they're expected to sit in the mall and write every day, for an audience that can track their work as it develops on-screen.