Text: accommodation in a hotel at the red sea (4 or 5* upon your choice) with all inclusive board

Correct capitalization: Accommodation in a hotel at the Red Sea (4 or 5* upon your choice) with all inclusive board

Text: for tones, do not be overly concerned at first. you just repeat recordings trying to imitate the intonation.

Correct capitalization: For tones, do not be overly concerned at first. You just repeat recordings trying to imitate the intonation.

Text: and where does your music come from? "it comes from a special corner of the dark side of the mind..."

Correct capitalization: And where does your music come from? "It comes from a special corner of the dark side of the mind..."

Text: for more than 50 years, golder has been committed to ensuring excellence in client service and technical quality in everything we do. we call this "golder excellence".

Correct capitalization:
For more than 50 years, Golder has been committed to ensuring excellence in client service and technical quality in everything we do. We call this "Golder Excellence".