Add punctuation: The wave of focusing on money shots photos that sell like the ones of the models street style stars and the new Gucci shoes which the photo editors of the magazines ask for and that sell well from the photo agencies
A: The wave of focusing on "money shots" photos that sell, like the ones of the models, street style stars and the new Gucci shoes, which the photo editors of the magazines ask for and that sell well from the photo agencies.

Add punctuation: eye cream Because the skin around the eyes is very thin you need
A: ...eye cream. Because the skin around the eyes is very thin, you need...

Add punctuation: Owns or manages this property
A:
Owns or manages this property?