IN: Manifesto , which illustrates what she believes the feminists must do to , in delicate terms , gain control . In one of my classes this past week , we were asked to read the introduction to this " Manifesto " , and I must say , I was utterly appalled by what I saw . May this be a clear message of what happens when someone goes too far with his or her beliefs .
What topic is " Manifesto " about ?

OUT: It is about women 's rights .

IN: Just graduated high schooll ! ! and finally have the summer off for the first time . No summer job and no summer school . I just lay around the house and hang out with my friends .
Why was John spending his summer with his friends instead of working or going to summer school ?

OUT: John just graduated , and it was more important to hang out with his friends than anything else .

IN: Outfit Details : Red top - Katies ( pinched from mum ) , Black lace ruffled top - Entrace , Skirt - by me , Black wedge shoes - somewhere for $ 20 , I ca n't quite remember . So here it is , the spring skirt that is spawning the matching outfits ( as seen yesterday ) . It started off as another skirt entirely , but it was so so hideous , that I cut it up , made my own pattern and started again . It was almost still too cold for a skirt today , but the sun said otherwise so I braved it and headed out .
Why is the narrator spending so much time on the skirt ?

OUT:
They are making it for warmer weather seasons .