Question: He applied himself to his studies assiduously and even renounced the usual periods of recreation
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Fixed: [He applied himself to his studies assiduously and even renounced the usual periods of recreation.]

Question: In contrast many will discover that their online behavior is monitored if they are exposed to an advertise saying Travel to London on the 15th May at 730 am for only 79 which is curiously enough similar to the search they made the day before
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Fixed: [In contrast, many will discover that their online behavior is monitored if they are exposed to an advertise saying "Travel to London on the 15th May at 7.30 am for only 79" which is curiously enough similar to the search they made the day before.]

Question: The energies seem to flow in the direction you want presenting you with opportunities for taking control in some way However you should be motivated by something more than your own personal ambition even though that will be favored along with any ambition in your life now
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Fixed: [The energies seem to flow in the direction you want, presenting you with opportunities for taking control in some way. However, you should be motivated by something more than your own personal ambition, even though that will be favored along with any ambition in your life now.]

Question: We later contacted the Indian Consulate in New York and alerted Devi Prasad Misra consul for trade and customs
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Fixed:
[We later contacted the Indian Consulate in New York and alerted Devi Prasad Misra, consul for trade and customs.]