Please capitalize where necessary: this journey is said to have been one of the worst, when living domestic animals have been brought to mykines.
A: This journey is said to have been one of the worst, when living domestic animals have been brought to Mykines.

Please capitalize where necessary: players : 6 average : 399 points.
A: Players : 6 Average : 399 points.

Please capitalize where necessary: this construction allows effective mixing and incorporation of harvest residues, since the soil is mixed several times in the same pass.
A: This construction allows effective mixing and incorporation of harvest residues, since the soil is mixed several times in the same pass.

Please capitalize where necessary: take 3-phase measurements in 1/3 the time of previous methods.
A:
Take 3-phase measurements in 1/3 the time of previous methods.