Question: Regarding the Industrial Revolution I have put weight point on new inventions and how farmers are moving from the country to the city
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Fixed: [Regarding the Industrial Revolution, I have put weight point on new inventions and how farmers are moving from the country to the city.]

Question: In a statement Apple announced that it has sold over 1 million iPhone 3G after three days of launch
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Fixed: [In a statement Apple announced that it has sold over 1 million iPhone 3G after three days of launch.]

Question: Use the dropdown to select the Detail view to see how the hand played out
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Fixed: [Use the drop-down to select the Detail view to see how the hand played out.]

Question: Immediately initiated trials to tow the boats of the coast by S 30 failed
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Fixed:
[Immediately initiated trials to tow the boats of the coast by "S 30" failed.]