Add punctuation: They hopefully already now contain good data from todays three detonated shots But with just a little luck with the weather we should be able to get a lot more data if we succeed to detonate the last eight shots and the receivers not are running out of battery
A: They hopefully already now contain good data from today's three detonated shots. But with just a little luck with the weather, we should be able to get a lot more data, if we succeed to detonate the last eight shots, and the receivers not are running out of battery.

Add punctuation: The Action Center displays notifications to the user including new Windows Store apps that were installed on the system information about new emails and messages that you have received notifications about updates and Calendar events to name a few
A: The Action Center displays notifications to the user including new Windows Store apps that were installed on the system, information about new emails and messages that you have received, notifications about updates and Calendar events to name a few.

Add punctuation: If you know the name of wrong DLL like Angel2sys choose Free downloadsaving money
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If you know the name of wrong DLL like Angel2.sys, choose Free download--saving money.