QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Once the product has been received and inspected by ourselves or the manufacturer and authorized you will then receive a refund for the total amount including any shipping costs or receive a brand new replacement
ANS: Once the product has been received and inspected by ourselves or the manufacturer and authorized, you will then receive a refund for the total amount including any shipping costs or receive a brand new replacement.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The software will display all the physical drives that are present
ANS: The software will display all the physical drives that are present.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Helle is a biologist and works with fishing control in Greenland and she got a tattoo that is inspired by the pearlembroidered jewellery of East Greenland It was don by sewing like the Inuit did in the old days
ANS: Helle is a biologist and works with fishing control in Greenland, and she got a tattoo that is inspired by the pearl-embroidered jewellery of East Greenland. It was don by sewing like the Inuit did in the 'old days'.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: We have planned that Sarantoya is going to have kittens before too long but yet the young lady hasnt been on heat If she takes after her mother she will not be on heat before next summer so we have to be patient
ANS:
We have planned that Sarantoya is going to have kittens before too long, but yet the young lady hasn't been on heat. If she takes after her mother she will not be on heat before next summer, so we have to be patient.