IN: I am occasionally an awesome shot , but as always for me , not when I ' m really aiming . When I really aim , I can hit everything around them , but NOT the centre of my target . I DID manage not to get shot in the butt by a family member . Which was a real achievement .
Why did you almost get shot in the butt ?

OUT: My family member was n't paying attention to where they were shooting

IN: I taught my first math lesson on Tuesday , and it was a lot of fun . Teacher and I talked briefly on Monday about the possibility of teaching the math lesson for Tuesday , but nothing was set in stone . Tuesday morning he asks me if I ' m up for it and I jump at the chance . I think I 'll just copy what I wrote in my paper journal from Tuesday at school : My very first lesson !
What may happen before teaching my first math lesson ?

OUT: My teacher asks me if i would like to teach it .

IN: Today was the last day of camp . I ' m pretty content with how the day went , but I ' m still going to miss it . Right when I was about to leave , it started raining and I had to walk . That was kind of fun though . So I got there , and Ryan was wearing a gross hat and crocs . And I just wondered what happened to the totally awesome Ryan I knew and loved ? ?
What is the reason I wondered what happened to the totally awesome Ryan I knew and loved ? ?

OUT:
He wore uncool crocs and a gross hat .