QUES: If the real Self must have been present and been witness to our peaceful enjoyment of deep slumberotherwise we would not have known that we had had such enjoymentso must it likewise have been present and been witness to our rambling imaginations in dreamfilled sleep and to our physical activities in waking

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CORRECTED: If the real Self must have been present and been witness to our peaceful enjoyment of deep slumber--otherwise we would not have known that we had had such enjoyment--so must it likewise have been present and been witness to our rambling imaginations in dream-filled sleep and to our physical activities in waking.

QUES: Flooded city hopeless longing

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CORRECTED: Flooded city hopeless longing,

QUES: Crystal JewelryCrystal Necklaceadmirably multi strand 24mm yellow manmade crystal necklace

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CORRECTED:
Crystal Jewelry--Crystal Necklace--admirably multi strand 2-4mm yellow manmade crystal necklace