Question: The Locking System Management LSM software application from SimonsVoss makes this extremely easy It enabled Fredrik Stolpe and his two colleagues to create a comprehensible new locking plan on a PC and now allows them to manage all access control for the school quickly and easily
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Fixed: [The Locking System Management (LSM) software application from SimonsVoss makes this extremely easy. It enabled Fredrik Stolpe and his two colleagues to create a comprehensible, new locking plan on a PC and now allows them to manage all access control for the school quickly and easily.]

Question: Select your best monster truck and start race through the galactic obstacle
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Fixed: [Select your best monster truck and start race through the galactic obstacle....]

Question: If you are willing to stay near this mount you may choose one of numerous hotels campgrounds and guesthouses which are located around 35 kilometers from the mountain
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Fixed: [If you are willing to stay near this mount, you may choose one of numerous hotels, campgrounds and guesthouses, which are located around 3-5 kilometers from the mountain.]

Question: Correction COLLARContinue until collar measures 141415161617 cm and cast off
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Fixed:
[Correction: COLLAR:...Continue until collar measures 14-14-15-16-16-17 cm and cast off...]