QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Dress up Camilla ParkerBowles and other famous celebrities on Stardoll
ANS: Dress up Camilla Parker-Bowles and other famous celebrities on Stardoll.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Any changes in these Terms take effect upon posting and will only apply to use of the Web site Content or Services after that date
ANS: Any changes in these Terms take effect upon posting and will only apply to use of the Web site, Content, or Services after that date.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 5202 5206 Gold cutlery with Frederik IIIs monogram in enamel Spoon with fluted bowl from the 1650s fork and spoon with lobed stems from the 1660s
ANS: 5202. 5206. Gold cutlery with Frederik III's monogram in enamel: Spoon with fluted bowl from the 1650's, fork and spoon with lobed stems from the 1660's.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Thanks to the dedication comrade Zotov we received a wonderful gift to the NG New Year if someone does not understand
ANS:
Thanks to the dedication comrade Zotov we received a wonderful gift to the NG (New Year, if someone does not understand :).