If you are travelling with your family and small children the nearby beaches are always a perfect place to spend the day At the hotel you will find a small playground for children to have fun whilst you enjoy the afternoon by the pool or by having a drink at the hotels bar

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If you are travelling with your family and small children, the nearby beaches are always a perfect place to spend the day. At the hotel you will find a small playground for children to have fun, whilst you enjoy the afternoon by the pool or by having a drink at the hotel's bar.