QUES: A manufacturer of WW Warm White ledballlights at zhongshan karnar lighting electron factory

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: A manufacturer of WW Warm White led-ball-lights at zhongshan karnar lighting & electron factory.

QUES: The biggest investment has gone into delivering Microsoft Dynamics AX7 as a true PAAS solution with a HTLM5 based interface

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The biggest investment has gone into delivering Microsoft Dynamics AX7 as a true PAAS solution, with a HTLM5 based interface.

QUES: From passive loyalty to the Revolution the Cossacks have passed to an active political offensive against it

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
From passive loyalty to the Revolution the Cossacks have passed to an active political offensive (against it).