QUES: Soren is as much as home in Borneo with steep walls dropoffs and strong currents as when he has his nose almost buried in Balis black sand in search of little critters as he is when he is teaching his PADI Open Water students new skills in the pool or the beautiful teaching friendly dive sites around Koh Tao and Similan Islands

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CORRECTED: Soren is as much as home in Borneo with steep walls, drop-offs and strong currents as when he has his nose almost buried in Bali's black sand in search of little critters, as he is when he is teaching his PADI Open Water students new skills in the pool or the beautiful teaching friendly dive sites around Koh Tao and Similan Islands.

QUES: But even so it is worth it in terms of a calmer house and a healthy baby

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CORRECTED: But even so, it is worth it in terms of a calmer house and a healthy baby.

QUES: Almost everyone who uses int

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CORRECTED:
Almost everyone who uses int ...