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With Google Apps for Work youll receive a number of additional businessgrade services not included in the free consumer product including professional email at your domain additional storage across Gmail and Drive 247 phone and email support 999 guaranteed uptime interoperability with Microsoft Outlook enhanced security features and full administration of all user accounts
With Google Apps for Work, you'll receive a number of additional business-grade services not included in the free consumer product, including: professional email at your domain, additional storage across Gmail and Drive, 24/7 phone and email support, 99.9% guaranteed uptime, inter-operability with Microsoft Outlook, enhanced security features and full administration of all user accounts.