IN: The famous or infamous Tower of London . I had a tour there last Sat . Heard and read so many stories about these British kings and queens . I got to visit another one of their homes .
Why does the narrator find their recent trip so interesting ?

OUT: They love the history .

IN: There were people who had laid tarp on the muddy ground close to the stage to watch the concert . But everyone had to keep stepping over these people and their tarp to get closer . It was a bad spot for these people to set up to sit down . My aunt and uncle crashed at my place for the weekend , since they were seeing the concert too .
Why was tarp placed on the ground ?

OUT: It had just rained and left the ground wet .

IN: It was for her , to meet her . There was another girl there , one of Celeste 's friends ( Marcella I think , although I never really saw her face ) . I hugged Celeste and asked her why she was back . She said it was for me , that she had come back for me .
Why did she want to be back home so badly ?

OUT:
She missed seeing me ,