IN: We stopped at the mall , started out with $ 100 dollars ( which Brad said before I left , " Do n't go spending it all now " I said , " I wo n't . " ) left the mall with $ 36 . Then we went to Perkins ( which was really good , I had never been there before . ) Then went to the concert with $ 23 .
What did the narrator do while they were at Perkins ?

OUT: The narrator at food that was good at Perkins .

IN: Well not FIRST time but like first time on my own accord , without parents . Eventually got to the mall , we all had practically no idea what we were doing so it took about 10 minutes . But we made it , had fun on the elevators , sat on the ground eating because we could n't find seats and then saw movie . We saw wanted .
Why were they at the mall alone ?

OUT: They were finally old enough to be there without parents

IN: And to pay so much for a reception location when there are so few guests , even when the dinners are such a reasonable price . The per head cost for so few guests is so ridiculous that I ' m not even going to mention it here . Why ca n't they just for once try to find a solution , and look for a way to make this work ? Why are they trying to change the venue when we ' ve already put down a very large percentage of our now budget as a deposit ?
What will you do after this happened ?

OUT:
I will complain about the change