QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Lightning also caused all the observed irregularities in the crop growth manifested in the picture as places with irregularly lodged damaged weakened crop or places where there the crop is just like brushed or inclined aside
ANS: Lightning also caused all the observed irregularities in the crop growth, manifested in the picture as places with irregularly lodged (damaged, weakened) crop, or places where there the crop is just like "brushed" or inclined aside.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: E O Wilson is the creator of the project Encyclopedia of Life a freely accessible research based database of all the known species on earth
ANS: E. O. Wilson is the creator of the project Encyclopedia of Life, a freely accessible research based database of all the known species on earth.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Each lady would adore the Coach Poppy Square Bag Pink items Owing Coach Poppy Square Bag Pink could be a outstanding honour
ANS: Each lady would adore the Coach Poppy Square Bag Pink items. Owing Coach Poppy Square Bag Pink could be a outstanding honour.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 15 And the men that have been expressed by name rose up and took the captives and with the spoil clothed all that were naked among them and arrayed them and shod them and gave them to eat and to drink and anointed them and carried all the feeble of them on asses and brought them to Jericho the city of palmtrees to their brethren
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15 And the men that have been expressed by name rose up, and took the captives, and with the spoil clothed all that were naked among them, and arrayed them, and shod them, and gave them to eat and to drink, and anointed them, and carried all the feeble of them on asses, and brought them to Jericho the city of palm-trees, to their brethren.