QUES: If the right protection is chosen there is a far greater chance that it will be used throughout the shift which is a prerequisite to obtain the desired protective effect

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: If the right protection is chosen there is a far greater chance that it will be used throughout the shift, which is a prerequisite to obtain the desired protective effect.

QUES: Red Roses with green in a vase with red bow

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Red Roses with green in a vase with red bow.

QUES: There are many activities in our local fellowships around the world with a wide variety of activities for children youth and adults

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
There are many activities in our local fellowships around the world, with a wide variety of activities for children, youth, and adults.