QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Guests can check in their luggage any time after 0730
ANS: Guests can check in their luggage any time after 07:30.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some developments at Leading Campings serve as role models for other campsites even whole regions
ANS: Some developments at Leading Campings serve as role models for other campsites, even whole regions.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Everything became like a game he was abuzz with ideas and he moved his pieces around until they fell into place to make his statement These are the facts of the matter what do you want to do about it
ANS: Everything became like a game, he was abuzz with ideas, and he moved his pieces around until they fell into place to make his statement: These are the facts of the matter, what do you want to do about it?

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This has started since November 5 where players could receive a total of six tournament tokens to the game only for the price of three
ANS:
This has started since November 5 where players could receive a total of six tournament tokens to the game only for the price of three.