Add punctuation: ZERO is a permanent oxidation hair dye without ammonia
A: ZERO is a permanent oxidation hair dye without ammonia.

Add punctuation: We will publish an initial general outline when we announce the Foundations technical leadership which we intend to do very soon
A: We will publish an initial general outline when we announce the Foundation's technical leadership, which we intend to do very soon.

Add punctuation: Two years ago the Centre for Nursing Excellence at LPCH began investigating alternative training methods for teaching CPR skills to families at discharge in an effort to better serve patient and hospital needs
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Two years ago, the Centre for Nursing Excellence at LPCH began investigating alternative training methods for teaching CPR skills to families at discharge in an effort to better serve patient and hospital needs.