Text: this may work for a few but it is a very dangerous path to tread.

Correct capitalization: This may work for a few but it is a very dangerous path to tread.

Text: high blood pressure, meanwhile, may cause sudden blindness.

Correct capitalization: High blood pressure, meanwhile, may cause sudden blindness.

Text: the redemption in the bible points to the washing away of sins through faith in the baptism of jesus and his blood.

Correct capitalization: The redemption in the Bible points to the washing away of sins through faith in the baptism of Jesus and His blood.

Text: for tones, do not be overly concerned at first. you just repeat recordings trying to imitate the intonation.

Correct capitalization:
For tones, do not be overly concerned at first. You just repeat recordings trying to imitate the intonation.