QUES: If you havent already registered your channel with ChanServ you should first do that read question 18 How do I register my channel of the Services FAQ before continuing with this

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CORRECTED: If you haven't already registered your channel with ChanServ, you should first do that - read question 1.8 "How do I register my channel?" of the Services FAQ before continuing with this.

QUES: You will also eliminate another background service that runs all the time on your PC

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CORRECTED: You will also eliminate another background service that runs all the time on your PC.

QUES: srhelperdll device cant workNo sound Actually in most cases device problem is because of sys files

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srhelper.dll device can't work/No sound: Actually, in most cases device problem is because of .sys files.