Question: On 23 December 2012
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [On 23. December 2012]

Question: And in order to thank all the uses support and also as a return DLL Suite introduced this Free Download Service to help millions of PC users suffering from DLL errors like pcwumdll
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [And in order to thank all the uses' support and also as a return, DLL Suite introduced this Free Download Service to help millions of PC users suffering from DLL errors like pcwum.dll.]

Question: Similar approximate approximative free liberal loose odd rough round
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Similar approximate, approximative, free, liberal, loose, odd, rough, round]

Question: You are personally responsible liable for any damage on the house and in occur on the property and all therein thereon objects on the property and its contents by its own negligence or fault of their own by you or a third party you attributable
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[You are personally responsible liable for any damage, on the house and in, occur on the property, and all therein / thereon objects on the property and its contents by its own negligence or fault of their own by you or a third party you attributable.]