Text: but the prince of the kingdom of persia withstood me twenty-one days; but, behold, michael, one of the chief princes, came to help me: and i remained there with the kings of persia.

Correct capitalization: But the prince of the kingdom of Persia withstood me twenty-one days; but, behold, Michael, one of the chief princes, came to help me: and I remained there with the kings of Persia.

Text: the restaurant is open from beginning of march until the end of october.

Correct capitalization: The restaurant is open from beginning of March until the end of October.

Text: libby1886 , 26 years old, mccall, united states

Correct capitalization: Libby1886 , 26 years old, Mccall, United States

Text: this experience occurred on the sun 22 aug 2010 00:00

Correct capitalization:
This experience occurred on the Sun 22 Aug 2010 00:00