IN: That place is about an hour 's drive further south , about half an hour north of Fort St. John 's . It 's the Sheppard 's Inn we 'll be staying at for the rest of our little escape into the north , and the internet is actually inside ! I can sit in a cool , dimly lit place and send / receive emails ! And surf the weeb .
What may happen after we check into the Sheppard 's Inn hotel ?

OUT: Be glad that it has internet service throughout .

IN: here are some funny things that happened : the kids were doing this project where they had to draw their shoe really big and then put in a background and a middle ground . one kid had drawn his shoe smooshing a bunch of dead , bloody people . i asked him if he played video games and he said yes . so i asked if i liked call of duty and he said , " which one ? "
How would the narrator describe the kid doing the project ?

OUT: The kid is disturbed .

IN: They ' ve made a huge effort to welcome the athletes and the visitors . And you watched the opening ceremony , that 's spectacular . But what you may not have noticed , that they had launched large - scale civility campaigns to educate people . And they designated special days of the month for special movements .
Why would they have gone to such great lengths to welcome the athletes ?

OUT:
They want to present themselves in the best light possible .