QUES: This primordial atom was incredibly dense and it is believed that this suddenly exploded heat at this explosion was so high that it raised the temperature of the universe to 3 degrees above absolute zero

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CORRECTED: This primordial atom was incredibly dense and it is believed that this suddenly exploded heat at this explosion was so high that it raised the temperature of the universe to 3 degrees above absolute zero.

QUES: Worked in the round on needle from waist down

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CORRECTED: Worked in the round on needle from waist down.

QUES: With Google Apps for Work youll receive a number of additional businessgrade services not included in the free consumer product including professional email at your domain additional storage across Gmail and Drive 247 phone and email support 999 guaranteed uptime interoperability with Microsoft Outlook enhanced security features and full administration of all user accounts

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CORRECTED:
With Google Apps for Work, you'll receive a number of additional business-grade services not included in the free consumer product, including: professional email at your domain, additional storage across Gmail and Drive, 24/7 phone and email support, 99.9% guaranteed uptime, inter-operability with Microsoft Outlook, enhanced security features and full administration of all user accounts.