[Q]: [5Whoisthiswhocomesupfromthewilderness,leaningonherbeloved?]
[A]: [5 Who is this who comes up from the wilderness, leaning on her beloved?]
[Q]: [Inrelationtothis,Idaresay,thatonlyamanwithafireinhisheartasThorHeyerdahlwouldventuretosailoutonanoceanwithaminimumofmodernequipmenttoverifyascientifictheory.Heonlybroughtwithhimasimpleradioandatypewriter.]
[A]: [In relation to this, I dare say, that only a man with a fire in his heart as Thor Heyerdahl would venture to sail out on an ocean with a minimum of modern equipment to verify a scientific theory. He only brought with him a simple radio and a typewriter.]
[Q]: [2.Usefewerwordsthataremoregeneric.]
[A]:
[2. Use fewer words that are more generic.]