Text: they cannot lead a life of enjoyment but must show their desire to live and be free.

Correct capitalization: They cannot lead a life of enjoyment but must show their desire to live and be free.

Text: if your school is already involved in a comenius school partnership or an etwinning project, you can:

Correct capitalization: If your school is already involved in a Comenius School Partnership or an eTwinning project, you can:

Text: i really saw my own flesh at the conference.

Correct capitalization: I really saw my own flesh at the conference.

Text: products and services means all information that results from the transformation or processing of data in the form of assessments, web services, pictures, charts, text, or data files embodying substantial know-how.

Correct capitalization:
Products and services means all information that results from the transformation or processing of data in the form of assessments, web services, pictures, charts, text, or data files embodying substantial know-how.