QUES: A pedestrian in the network by Antonio Mnaco 20142018

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: A pedestrian in the network by Antonio Monaco - 2014-2018

QUES: 7 And some fell among thorns and the thorns grew up and choked it and it yielded no fruit

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 7 And some fell among thorns, and the thorns grew up, and choked it, and it yielded no fruit.

QUES: So you want to recover your stolen mind Ive enlisted the help of Master Detective to help guide us on our search

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
So, you want to recover your stolen mind? I've enlisted the help of Master Detective to help guide us on our search.