Text: and it does become sort of a sport to see if it is one or the other type of sunday.

Correct capitalization: And it does become sort of a sport to see if it is one or the other type of Sunday.

Text: you have balconies in the rooms; they are very well lit.

Correct capitalization: You have balconies in the rooms; they are very well lit.

Text: there is eternal life.

Correct capitalization: There is eternal life.

Text: a new, but somewhat different star has been born!

Correct capitalization:
A new, but somewhat different star has been born!