Question: If you want to know in advance what turns me off hmmmrudeness
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [If you want to know in advance what turns me off: hmmm...rudeness]

Question: We tried to inseminate Mitra Aasa with Padishah one single time but once again all the odds was against us That particularly heat ended up being very unstabile and the whole period progress on the hospital was not great at all
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [We tried to inseminate Mitra Aasa with Padishah one single time, but once again all the odds was against us. That particularly heat ended up being very un-stabile and the whole period (progress) on the hospital was not great at all.]

Question: Other patients notice speech problems
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Other patients notice speech problems.]

Question: If you want to know in advance what turns me off These things turn me off arrogance
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[If you want to know in advance what turns me off: These things turn me off: arrogance.]