IN: He had asked me to tell you if anything ever happened to him and he could n't do it himself . When Dumbledore wrote to me about Sirius death , I began planning my search for you . If I were to have remained hidden any longer , I would be relinquishing my role as your godmother . And I could n't do that to Sirius , or Lily ... or you .
Who should she tell if something happened ?

OUT: Harry

IN: We feasted on great food , lots of laughs , and piled back into the Rolet for the ride home after dahk . Dave turned the ignition and said , " Uh - oh , I am not sure we have headlights . " Cheryl suggested looking for a flashlight and opened the glove box . To our amazement there was one that worked ! She rolled down the passenger side window and pointed the flashlight forward while Dave drove slowly down the road .
What may have happened to their truck ?

OUT: Their headlights had burned out .

IN: The apes told stories of me and passed them on to other communities . As the stories changed , so did I. To them I became so well known that I was revered . Soon after that I was like a God .
What may be the reason for them changing so much in the story ?

OUT:
Every time it was changed , something was changed to make it more exciting .