QUESTION: Fix punctuation: And Joseph made it a law over the land of Egypt to this day that the fifth should be for Pharaoh except the land of the priests theirs alone did not become Pharaohs
ANS: And Joseph made it a law over the land of Egypt to this day, [that] the fifth should be for Pharaoh, except the land of the priests: theirs alone did not become Pharaoh's.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The Pharisees heard the multitude murmuring these things concerning him and the chief priests and the Pharisees sent officers to take him
ANS: The Pharisees heard the multitude murmuring these things concerning him, and the chief priests and the Pharisees sent officers to take him.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: in the past to subjugate the people the powerful used force laws and religion now they also have football and television
ANS: in the past, to subjugate the people, the powerful used force, laws and religion; now, they also have football and television

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This parable then was spoken to make clear to us that the Kingdom of God is a literal GOVERNMENT to be set up AT CHRISTS SECOND COMING and not before The CHURCH then cannot be the Kingdom of God
ANS:
This parable, then, was spoken to make clear to us that the Kingdom of God is a literal GOVERNMENT, to be set up AT CHRIST'S SECOND COMING and not before! The CHURCH, then, cannot be the Kingdom of God.