When he emailed me from Marseilles where he was selected to attend this year he went into a coma he just could not photograph Everything he pointed the camera at was boring he would so like to show Antoine dAgata he was good and get something out of the tenday workshop but he was empty and now asked for help

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When he emailed me from Marseilles, where he was selected to attend this year, he went into a coma, he just could not photograph. Everything he pointed the camera at was boring, he would so like to show Antoine d'Agata, he was good and get something out of the ten-day workshop, but he was empty and now asked for help.