Please capitalize where necessary: article 9 - entry into force
A: Article 9 - Entry into force

Please capitalize where necessary: so, who better to look at to learn how we should respond to temptation?
A: So, who better to look at to learn how we should respond to temptation?

Please capitalize where necessary: this completely eliminates the waiting times for downloading websites, music, or videos and makes it possible to take part in anything that requires a high speed internet connection.
A: This completely eliminates the waiting times for downloading websites, music, or videos and makes it possible to take part in anything that requires a high speed Internet connection.

Please capitalize where necessary: it is also great to become involved with the debian collective, whose friendliness and spirit recalls the early days of the internet and its sense of openness and global cooperation.
A:
It is also great to become involved with the Debian collective, whose friendliness and spirit recalls the early days of the Internet and its sense of openness and global cooperation.