QUES: First of the locomotives the Union Pacifics M 10001 had a 12cylinders twostroke engine before it entered revenue service

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: First of the locomotives, the "Union Pacific's ", M 10001 had a 12-cylinders two-stroke engine before it entered revenue service.

QUES: The security situation in LTS improved with 27 packages awaiting a security update with the list of open vulnerabilites in Squeeze showing 58 in total The backlog is slowly being reduced and solutions are being sought for the SSLv3 POODLE issue

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The security situation in LTS improved with 27 packages awaiting a security update, with the list of open vulnerabilites in Squeeze showing 58 in total. The backlog is slowly being reduced and solutions are being sought for the SSLv3 POODLE issue.

QUES: The most visible sign that you were making a fortune from the African slave trade was to acquire a page boy to wait on you hand and foot

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
The most visible sign that you were making a fortune from the African slave trade was to acquire a page boy to wait on you hand and foot.