Ques: With a significant increase in capacity this was a year when Fjord Line experienced further growth in the number of travellers
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Ans: With a significant increase in capacity, this was a year when Fjord Line experienced further growth in the number of travellers.
Ques: According to the head authors a group of researchers undertook an extensive survey taking a large step forward in spreading light into the darkness
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Ans: According to the head authors, a group of researchers undertook an extensive survey, taking "a large step forward" in spreading light into the darkness.
Ques: But a business feasibility report or plan is much more detailed
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Ans: But a business feasibility report or plan is much more detailed.