QUES: Other of vegetable origin

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CORRECTED: Other, of vegetable origin

QUES: Karin is a nurse by profession and Tommy runs an advertisement agency and when time allows it practices art that covers the walls of the building

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CORRECTED: Karin is a nurse by profession and Tommy runs an advertisement agency and, when time allows it, practices art that covers the walls of the building.

QUES: How could man by eating of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil possibly come to know the difference between good and evil if by means of the remission of sins he were released from the consequences of eating of this very tree

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CORRECTED:
How could man, by eating of the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, possibly come to know the difference between good and evil, if, by means of the "remission of sins" he were released from the consequences of eating of this very tree?