QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Financial markets particularly some sovereignbond segments remain fragile and damaging negative feedback loops cannot be totally excluded
ANS: Financial markets, particularly some sovereign-bond segments, remain fragile, and damaging negative feedback loops cannot be totally excluded.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The truth is if you havent truly trusted in Christ God is not your friend in times of trouble
ANS: The truth is, if you haven't truly trusted in Christ, God is not your friend in times of trouble.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Where it still has only imperfect faculties it is still poor
ANS: Where it still has only imperfect faculties, it is still "poor".

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: In particular she was elected a Fellow of the Institute of Mathematical Statistics a Fellow of the American Statistical Association in 1954 and a Member of the International Statistical Institute
ANS:
In particular she was elected a Fellow of the Institute of Mathematical Statistics, a Fellow of the American Statistical Association in 1954, and a Member of the International Statistical Institute.