QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The German revolution has now hit upon the path illuminated by this star
ANS: The German revolution has now hit upon the path illuminated by this star.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: They will therefore in coming lives abolish all war and establish real lasting world peace on Earth
ANS: They will therefore, in coming lives, abolish all war and establish real lasting world peace on Earth.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 20 of 23 people 87 found this review helpful
ANS: 20 of 23 people (87%) found this review helpful

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some of his oil painting works have been collected by the China Art Museum Hong Kong University Museum Shanghai Art Museum Beijing International Art Garden Museum Taiwan Soka Art Center Beijing Today Art Museum Nanjing Qinghe Contemporary Art Museum
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Some of his oil painting works have been collected by the China Art Museum, Hong Kong University Museum, Shanghai Art Museum, Beijing International Art Garden Museum, Taiwan Soka Art Center, Beijing Today Art Museum, Nanjing Qinghe Contemporary Art Museum.