instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

Every essay she's written and which I've read is on that pile.

response: unacceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

Amanda drove the package to Pamela.

response: acceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

I went to the movies to not pick the shirts up.

response: unacceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

I heard John's criticism of himself.

response:
acceptable