QUES: I thank Him for the opportunities He sends my way and I pray to be filled with His Spirit and wisdom so that I can conquer the ugliness that lies within me

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CORRECTED: I thank Him for the opportunities He sends my way, and I pray to be filled with His Spirit and wisdom so that I can conquer the ugliness that lies within me.

QUES: In the same decade central factories were established on plantations at Richmond Bethlehem Lower Love and La Grange

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CORRECTED: In the same decade, central factories were established on plantations at Richmond, Bethlehem, Lower Love and La Grange.

QUES: The workers live in dark and dirty hovels

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CORRECTED:
The workers live in dark and dirty hovels.)