Question: The canoe trip is approximately 5 km long after which you will have a delightful wilderness dinner with some grilled salmon by the fire
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Fixed: [The canoe trip is approximately 5 km long, after which you will have a delightful wilderness dinner with some grilled salmon by the fire.]

Question: The less said about that the better
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Fixed: [The less said about that, the better...]

Question: Games like the real hobby is also on the top level
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Fixed: [Games like the real hobby is also on the top level.]

Question: On the opposite side they looked back and saw the Egyptians entering the seafloor path When the Egyptians were all within the seawall passage God allowed the waters to flow back drowning the Egyptian army
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Fixed:
[On the opposite side they looked back and saw the Egyptians entering the seafloor path. When the Egyptians were all within the seawall passage, God allowed the waters to flow back, drowning the Egyptian army.]