input: Cooperate with the other schools to make a final proposal and go to the local government to present itinvite them to come see it
fixed: Cooperate with the other schools to make a final proposal, and go to the local government to present it/invite them to come see it.

input: After meiosis 1 formed two diploid cells with a combination of mothers and fathers chromosomes
fixed: After meiosis 1 formed two diploid cells with a combination of mother's and father's chromosomes.

input: Improved handling of foreign method of carriage
fixed: - Improved handling of foreign method of carriage

input: The recently dead epidemiologist Edward HopeSimpson discovered that when the elderly get shingles it is caused by the same virus which causes chickenpox as a child
fixed:
The recently dead epidemiologist, Edward Hope-Simpson discovered that when the elderly get shingles, it is caused by the same virus which causes chickenpox as a child.