IN: What happens next?

How to correct run on sentences
Familiarize yourself with the concept of a comma splice.
One of the most common run-on sentences is a comma splice. A comma splice is two independent clauses that are only separated by a comma, such as in the following example :
" ice cream is very tasty, i like it.

OPTIONS:
- " " would you like ice cream? " in this example, the comma translates into " ice cream. " Use pauses or a semicolon.
- " " oh, that's what you're after. " " unable to believe that ice cream contains half a quarter of a million calories.
- " " my friends (or mom) will be amazed. " " they want me to go to the movies everyday.
- " Correct the comma splice with a period or exclamation mark. You will also need to capitalize the letter following the added punctuation.

OUT: " Correct the comma splice with a period or exclamation mark. You will also need to capitalize the letter following the added punctuation.

IN: What happens next?

People practice ballet in a studio alone and in couples. then

OPTIONS:
- , a man begins dancing and top dancing standing on the ground.
- , a boy and a girl dance ballet, then a man enter and dance with the girl.
- , the band performs ballet in the studio and in the open gathered.
- , people dances and dances together, dancing.

OUT: , a boy and a girl dance ballet, then a man enter and dance with the girl.

IN: What happens next?

How to write white papers
Determine your audience.
Typically, you won't know your audience personally. However, you should identify as many factors as possible, such as professional needs, educational backgrounds, and job title (s).

OPTIONS:
- These aspects will determine how to form your argument. Mold your proposal to be relatable to your audience based on these factors.
- It would be difficult to write all this information at once, because word of mouth may reveal hidden weaknesses. Most white papers are too short to include a solid opinion.
- You can almost instantly become familiar with your audience once you've gathered their tips. Go to a book store, look up reviews online, or ask a librarian for tips.
- For example, you might focus on gender equality and economics. The audience might use professionals' success as a motivator.

OUT:
These aspects will determine how to form your argument. Mold your proposal to be relatable to your audience based on these factors.