QUES: Then cast off 2 sts in each side until piece measures 535454555556 cm Cast off 3 sts at beg of the next 2 rows before loosely casting off all sts

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Then cast off 2 sts in each side until piece measures 53-54-54-55-55-56 cm. Cast off 3 sts at beg of the next 2 rows before loosely casting off all sts.

QUES: So Im sitting there with her arms around me

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: So I'm sitting there with her arms around me

QUES: When the bonding material is gold silver or silver palladium the separation will be in the adhesive joint

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
When the bonding material is gold, silver or silver palladium the separation will be in the adhesive joint.