Add punctuation: 1968 Quick change of accessories with a click
A: 1968 - Quick change of accessories with a "click"

Add punctuation: Various women dont like to affirm that they may have problems in their sexual life
A: Various women don't like to affirm that they may have problems in their sexual life.

Add punctuation: I write for all who share these pleasures in Danish because it is my mother tongue in English to make it accessible for more people my husband included
A:
I write for all, who share these pleasures, in Danish, because it is my mother tongue, in English to make it accessible for more people, my husband included.