IN: Then again , Alex asked me out in person , but he did n't even give me eye contact . Go figure . Hahahahaha . I do n't know Nick very well , but judging by the fact that he 's friend 's with Jessie ( this girl who works with Kathy ) , I ' m going to say that he 's a little on the immature side . I ca n't be too sure , though since I ' ve only been around him once .
Why would Alex refuse to look at the narrator when talking to them ?

OUT: Alex as bashful .

IN: Superheroes are the lifeblood of modern comic books , and without supervillains , there 's nothing for all those guys in capes to do . There are some villains who electrify a book when they show up , while others only elicit laughter . Ron , Josh , and Conor explore some of the best , scariest villains out there , and what makes them work so well in the stories we love .
What may be a fact about Ron , Josh , and Conor ?

OUT: They analyze super - villains from comic books .

IN: If you want a foot up , say so . " Rin raised her gaze to him , hoping her eyes would speak for her . Could n't he tell she needed a little kindness right now ? She did n't mean to embarrass him again ; all she longed for was a token of his comfort . An arm around the shoulders , a quiet word or a brotherly ruffle of the hair .
What may be the reason she needed a little kindless ?

OUT:
She had a miserable past few days and was tired .