QUES: Moving to the cloud often means lower absolute margins on licensing but increases the importance of partner services eg consultation data migration and change management

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CORRECTED: Moving to the cloud often means lower absolute margins on licensing, but increases the importance of partner services, e.g. consultation, data migration and change management.

QUES: Before you can open a PCLXL file youll need to figure out what kind of file the PCLXL file extension refers to

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CORRECTED: Before you can open a PCLXL file, you'll need to figure out what kind of file the PCLXL file extension refers to.

QUES: In due time he applied to the Pakistan Military Academy and passed the examinations both intellectual and physical

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CORRECTED:
In due time he applied to the Pakistan Military Academy and passed the examinations, both intellectual and physical.