input: Guarini was aware of the transformative implications of geometrical processes especially through light optics and projection so rhetorically advanced by Bettini
fixed: Guarini was aware of the transformative implications of geometrical processes, especially through light, optics and projection so rhetorically advanced by Bettini.

input: We are very pleased with this opportunity to present the candidature
fixed: We are very pleased with this opportunity to present the candidature.

input: The problem is that the suggestions can be overcoming to a shy networker
fixed: The problem is that the suggestions can be overcoming to a shy networker.

input: Gods creation of MAN was perfect as a physical creation yet incomplete
fixed:
God's creation of MAN was perfect as a physical creation, yet incomplete!