Question: Some collectors like the thrill of owning an illegal item
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Fixed: [Some collectors like the "thrill" of owning an illegal item.]

Question: In the evening the young turner reached the inn where his brothers had been cheated
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Fixed: [In the evening the young turner reached the inn where his brothers had been cheated.]

Question: Dogs may exhibit lethargy intolerance for exercise and weakness
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Fixed: [Dogs may exhibit lethargy, intolerance for exercise and weakness.]

Question: The type of incision that is normally used for forehead lifts should rather not be used on men since they expose more and more scalp for hormonal reasons in the course of their lives Here we usually reduce the forehead skin directly above the eyebrows along a small wrinkle
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[The type of incision that is normally used for forehead lifts should rather not be used on men, since they expose more and more scalp for hormonal reasons in the course of their lives. Here, we usually reduce the forehead skin directly above the eyebrows along a small wrinkle.]