QUES: Is it an expensive electronic item or some other material or tangible item Perhaps

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Is it an expensive electronic item, or some other material or tangible item? Perhaps.

QUES: A on P certainly falls into that category a little gem I made with Roger Glover in Montserrat and NYC Unfortunately Richard Griffiths who was in charge of the company Ten Records an offshoot of Virgin to which I was still contracted actually forgot to release the bloody thing to coincide with the radio promotion and hundreds of phoners Roger and I did from his house in Connecticut all to no avail

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: A on P certainly falls into that category; a little gem I made with Roger Glover in Montserrat and NYC. Unfortunately Richard Griffiths (who was in charge of the company Ten Records, an offshoot of Virgin to which I was still contracted) actually forgot to release the bloody thing to coincide with the radio promotion and hundreds of phoners Roger and I did from his house in Connecticut - all to no avail.

QUES: An en suite bathroom with premium toiletries bathrobes and slippers is also included

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
An en suite bathroom with premium toiletries, bathrobes and slippers is also included.