QUES: The type of incision that is normally used for forehead lifts should rather not be used on men since they expose more and more scalp for hormonal reasons in the course of their lives Here we usually reduce the forehead skin directly above the eyebrows along a small wrinkle

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CORRECTED: The type of incision that is normally used for forehead lifts should rather not be used on men, since they expose more and more scalp for hormonal reasons in the course of their lives. Here, we usually reduce the forehead skin directly above the eyebrows along a small wrinkle.

QUES: The basic commission rate for preferred partners is 8 To attain preferred status new partners must complete a minimum number of reservations at the nonpreferred commission rate 12 reservations 10 commission

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CORRECTED: The basic commission rate for preferred partners is 8%. To attain preferred status, new partners must complete a minimum number of reservations at the non-preferred commission rate: 12 reservations, 10% commission.

QUES: Concerning the windsurf industry we accept that the products are far from tested to the same degree before the products hit the consumers the windsurfers and we also accept that for manufacturingtechnical reasons it is most impossible to work in the feed back of the consumers in a running manufacturing process

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CORRECTED:
Concerning the windsurf industry, we accept, that the products are far from tested to the same degree, before the products hit the consumers (/the windsurfers) - and we also accept, that for manufacturing-technical reasons it is most impossible to work in the feed back of the consumers in a running manufacturing process.