IN: Gbk and we made our way to West Mall 's Swensens , where her brothers were already waiting!While waiting for the birthday girl ... who was being distracted by her mother downstairs . She did n't see us initially .
Why is the narrator trying to be so sneaky ?

OUT: Their friend is having a surprise party .

IN: She watched as they stopped walking , and she heard the man mutter that he had to piss , and he left the girl standing in the middle of the path as he sauntered into the woods to find a tree . She quickly went to the girl , but before she could pounce , her cell phone went off . She yelped in surprise , and the girl she 'd been meaning to kill screamed and ran into the woods to find her date . She grabbed her phone and flipped it open , " What do you want ? " she growled into it . There were only two people who had her number ; her maker , and some mortal .
Why is the female subject so upset ?

OUT: Her target ran away .

IN: Rei jumped slightly as she felt the brunette 's hand upon her shoulder , she had been in such deep through that she had n't notice the simple gesture by her friend . Mentally , she replayed the conversation back and nodded at Makoto 's words before offering a apologetic smile toward the two cats . She had n't meant to take her own frustrations out on them ... they could only tell them what they knew and as the thunder senshi pointed out ... they did n't know either .
Why did she react the way she did to what touched her shoulder ?

OUT:
It surprised her .