Question: For this reason this should never be done from root
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [For this reason, this should never be done from root.]

Question: The standard requires that those who need some documentdata shall have access to it Changes to documents and data shall be controlled
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [The standard requires that those who need some document/data shall have access to it. Changes to documents and data shall be controlled.]

Question: For three and a half years He had been constantly with them on ALL days of the week His meeting with them of itself could not establish any day as a Sabbath
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [For three and a half years He had been constantly with them, on ALL days of the week. His meeting with them, of itself, could not establish any day as a Sabbath.]

Question: Latest visit 2 June 2014 1930
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[Latest visit 2 June 2014 19:30]