QUES: The hail struck through control valves u Rudder of the Boeing u She was within 20 Minutes out of operation

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CORRECTED: The hail struck through control valves u . Rudder of the Boeing u . She was within 20 Minutes out of operation .

QUES: During this fashion week in Milan I taught Scott Schuman aka The Sartorialist to take the metro

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CORRECTED: During this fashion week in Milan, I taught Scott Schuman aka The Sartorialist to take the metro.

QUES: Registration 1 March 2005 1447

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CORRECTED:
Registration 1 March 2005 14:47