question: people revealed themselves when the camera was aimed at them for such an extended period of time, before pressing the shutter button, that it became embarrassing.
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: People revealed themselves when the camera was aimed at them for such an extended period of time, before pressing the shutter button, that it became embarrassing.

question: it may sting a bit, but that passes soon.
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: It may sting a bit, but that passes soon.

question: the 5-star hotel d'inghilterra is in the heart of rome, 200 metres from the spanish steps and a few steps from via del corso shopping street.
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: The 5-star Hotel D'Inghilterra is in the heart of Rome, 200 metres from the Spanish Steps and a few steps from Via del Corso shopping street.