In addition when You interact with the Services Our servers keep an activity log unique to You that collects certain administrative and traffic information including source IP address time of access date of access web pages visited language use software crash reports and type of browser used

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In addition, when You interact with the Services, Our servers keep an activity log unique to You that collects certain administrative and traffic information including: source IP address, time of access, date of access, web page(s) visited, language use, software crash reports and type of browser used.