QUES: In fact Bienaym supported Laplace in general since it was Laplace s Thorie analytique des probabilits 1812 that was the biggest influence on Bienayms scientific thinking throughout his life

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CORRECTED: In fact Bienayme supported Laplace in general since it was Laplace 's Theorie analytique des probabilites (1812) that was the biggest influence on Bienayme's scientific thinking throughout his life.

QUES: How much energy diving water fights and moments of pure fun in this natural pool ideal for children

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CORRECTED: How much energy, diving, water fights and moments of pure fun in this natural pool ideal for children!

QUES: He had more time for research and some outstanding research students

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CORRECTED:
He had more time for research and some outstanding research students.