QUES: As the native labor force decreased due to disease social upheaval and ill treatment African slave labor was imported

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CORRECTED: As the native labor force decreased due to disease, social upheaval and ill treatment African slave labor was imported.

QUES: Your vision of life may be more universal and you may be drawn to spiritual or esoteric subjects which previously you might have overlooked underrated or simply rejected because they seemed irrational

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CORRECTED: Your vision of life may be more universal, and you may be drawn to spiritual or esoteric subjects which previously you might have overlooked, underrated, or simply rejected because they seemed "irrational".

QUES: 9 And see if it goeth up by the way of his own coast to Bethshemesh then he hath done us this great evil but if not then we shall know that it is not his hand that smote us it was a chance that happened to us

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CORRECTED:
9 And see, if it goeth up by the way of his own coast to Bethshemesh, then he hath done us this great evil: but if not, then we shall know that it is not his hand that smote us: it was a chance that happened to us.