Text: works on android phones and tablets, and on ios devices including iphone, ipad, ipad mini, and ipod touch.

Correct capitalization: Works on Android phones and tablets, and on iOS Devices including iPhone, iPad, iPad Mini, and iPod Touch.

Text: 9 months ago 06:30 xhamster pakistani, indonesian

Correct capitalization: 9 months ago 06:30 xHamster Pakistani, Indonesian

Text: 43:18 and he said unto me, son of man, thus saith the lord god; these are the ordinances of the altar in the day when they shall make it, to offer burnt offerings thereon, and to sprinkle blood thereon.

Correct capitalization: 43:18 And he said unto me, Son of man, thus saith the Lord GOD; These are the ordinances of the altar in the day when they shall make it, to offer burnt offerings thereon, and to sprinkle blood thereon.

Text: what happened was this: eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.

Correct capitalization:
What happened was this: Eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.