in the end, tolkien described how horrible it can be to be without water for a parched land with a heavy burden. i also think tolkien wanted to tell you how hard some people can master his will and resist the temptation of power. that's the message i believe is just how much can happen in a big war and that it can affect innocent if you do not help each other.

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In the end, Tolkien described how horrible it can be to be without water for a parched land with a heavy burden. I also think Tolkien wanted to tell you how hard some people can master his will and resist the temptation of power. That's the message I believe is just how much can happen in a big war and that it can affect innocent if you do not help each other.