QUES: As the brain is normally the seat of physical vital function this function is necessarily to a corresponding degree undermined by every fit of temper

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CORRECTED: As the brain is normally the seat of physical vital function, this function is necessarily to a corresponding degree undermined by every fit of temper.

QUES: After a break of three years he returned to MIT in the spring of 1946 but it was not clear at this stage in which area Kiefer wanted to make a career

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CORRECTED: After a break of three years he returned to MIT in the spring of 1946 but it was not clear at this stage in which area Kiefer wanted to make a career.

QUES: You need to have a network before you become professional Charlotte Giese and Morten Hartz Kaplers arranged for the Palestinians to participate in a program in Denmark which included meetings with The Danish Film School International Media Support and CPH DOX

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CORRECTED:
You need to have a network before you become professional". Charlotte Giese and Morten Hartz Kaplers arranged for the Palestinians to participate in a program in Denmark, which included meetings with The Danish Film School, International Media Support and CPH: DOX.