Here is an email: As per our discussion, the first step was to identify the participants in the retention program. The next step is to build the business case for why these employees are critical and irreplaceable to your business unit. Please provided a brief rational for why these employees were selected. Additionally, if there is a unique situation or circumstance that makes your area more vulnerable, please included in an overall business summary. For example: if your unit has a limited number of people supporting a critical area necessary to maintaining or increasing the value of the estate or the liquidation of assets, include this in your business summary. Demonstrate why it would be difficult to train someone else to perform a similar function. You should also comment on why the employee was recommended for the Milestone Program. As you know this information is time sensitive, so please try and get it to me as soon as possible. I appreciate you taking time out of your busy schedule to meet with me on such short notice. Please call me (5x3662) if you have any questions. Regards,
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Here is an email: Kim, Attached is a draft of the LOU for Palo Alto. Please review. I am still reviewing and may have a few more changes. Since time is short please review this draft and we can make final changes in the morning and send out. I will attempt to have a draft of the MSA by Thursday.
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Here is an email: My dear friends (yes I want something): I have a proposal in front of Colin for the provision of services and wondered if you might get it back in the conversation at dinner in San Fran. Actually in all seriousness, Stephanie mentioned that you're meeting with him and I thought you might be interested in seeing what we'd proposed. Is someone in Producer Services also selling services to Calpine, or would it fall into your shop?
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Calpine - How'd you like to market services for me?