QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It is also reduction that drives us to reduce the weight of the moving parts in our drive units because it gives better sound
ANS: It is also reduction that drives us to reduce the weight of the moving parts in our drive units, because it gives better sound.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The amount of work had become so massive that he had less and less time to spend with his family
ANS: The amount of work had become so massive that he had less and less time to spend with his family.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Along with strengthening the analog dry signal buffered bypass has the added benefit of enabling carryover so delay trails are not cut off unnaturally when turning the effect off or switching patches
ANS: Along with strengthening the analog dry signal, buffered bypass has the added benefit of enabling carryover, so delay trails are not cut off unnaturally when turning the effect off or switching patches.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Figure no 13 The birth pangs of the real human kingdom
ANS:
Figure no. 13: The birth pangs of the real human kingdom.