IN: It 's just a fucking dream . Yet as he thought it , he was not all that sure it was true . Whatever what happening in the recurring night - trip had to be unsettling or upsetting or something of the like to some degree , otherwise something so stupid would not be effecting him so strongly .
Why is this person so shaken ?

OUT: This person is disturbed and upset by a nightmare .

IN: I could n't fit in through the broken pane , but I could reach in through the broken window and reach the swiss army knife on my dresser , and I used that to unscrew the window . By the time I got in , my bedroom looked like a murder scene with all of the broken glass and bloody everything , and I had lost so much blood that I felt violently ill and dizzy . As I mentioned earlier , I ' m not a just a total pussy , so I glued my finger back together and drank a soda in an attempt to boost my blood sugar and cancel out the loss of blood . Two days later , so far so good .
What may happen after they bandage their injuries ?

OUT: They will continue to monitor their injuries .

IN: I am sitting here in my house in PJ 's sick as a dog . I had so many plans . I was going to swing by Nessa 's party before going over to Rob 's party where I would have met up with my husband .
What would have happened had the narrator not gotten sick ?

OUT:
They would have met up with their husband