Question: This is a single bed in a 4bed female dormitory
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Fixed: [This is a single bed in a 4-bed female dormitory.]

Question: In the end I just assumed the Linx would use around 10 of its charge per hour and ignored its estimated times
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [In the end, I just assumed the Linx would use around 10% of its charge per hour and ignored its estimated times.]

Question: Free Rider 2 Track Falling from the Sky Auto
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Fixed: [Free Rider 2 Track - Falling from the Sky Auto]

Question: Then lounge back on the deck chair perhaps under a blanket and enjoy the play of colour from the suns intense rays
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Fixed:
[Then lounge back on the deck chair perhaps under a blanket and enjoy the play of colour from the sun's intense rays.]